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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: CheesyBits on September 18, 2012, 06:07:04 PM
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This is my first fanfic here so please be kind to me! :deco:
This is a SaeYuki fic! I hope you like it! :cow:
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PROLOGUE
It was the beginning of the season of the hot summer when everything changed two person's life. In the busy streets a short brown haired girl that looks like a boy and dresses like a boy has been walking around the streets as she forgot to bring her house key along with her and she has to stay outdoors until her best friend, Sayaka, who lives with her, finishes her part-time job in the cake shop. The boyish girl stopped walking when she saw a box that has a puppy inside it in a distant. The boyish girl walked to the box but as she walked to the box, she saw a beautiful raven-haired girl walking to the box too.
Once both of the girls reached the box, they looked at each other then to the puppy. The puppy was brown in colour and its breed is a golden retriever and it is leashed.
"Do you want to take it?" the girls said at the same time and giggled at each other.
"Im fine if you take it." the boyish girl said.
"No thanks.. My mom don't allow me to bring pets home. I just wanted to look at it." replied the beautiful raven-haired girl and blushed.
"I guess I'll take it then.." the boyish girl replied.
*arienai.. aoi bara mitai na itsuka no yoru kiseki nara ichido dake yo Blue rose* The boyish girl's phone rang.
"Excuse me for a while" the boyish girl told the raven-haired girl and the raven-haired girl replied with a nod.
The boyish girl looked at her phone to check who the caller was.. It was Sayaka.
"Moshi Moshi? Sayaka?"
"Sae-chan, Im already at home.. You can go home now." Sayaka said through the phone.
"Arigatou Sayaka! By the way, Im bringing a pet dog home too!" the boyish girl told the caller.
"Alright! As long as you take care of it and it will be fine inside the house!" the caller said and hang up.
"Ano.. I have to go now.. see you again someday if we meet again!" the boyish girl told the raven-haired girl while putting her handphone to her pocket and take the leash of the puppy then walked home. The raven-haired girl only smiled and waved to the boyish girl and walked home too.
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The raven-haired girl's POV:
"Ikemen.. Is he a she or he? He sounds like a girl but he made my heart beat fast.." she thought while she puts her right hand to her chest and feel her heart beating fast.
The raven-haired girl put her hand down and reached to her pocket to take her handphone while she still has her mind on the ikemen she just saw. Once she unlocked her handphone, she looked at the time.. It says 4:45pm..
"Kyaa! It's already 4:45pm! Okasan will kill me if I don't go home by 5pm! I better run!"
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The boyish girl's POV:
"That girl.. She's beautiful.. Why didn't I ask her name!? ARGGHH! Stupid me! Wait! Why am I thinking like this? I'm a girl and she is a girl too!" she thought and remembered the raven-haired's face which made her blush and walk aimlessly on the way home with the puppy.
She finally gathered up some thoughts and found an answer.
"I want to meet her again soon if we meet again by chance. By then, I will ask her name."
She finally stopped walking aimlessly and guide the puppy to her house.. Hoping to meet the raven-haired girl again..
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Both girl's reached home exactly at 5pm.. Little did they know that their destiny begins there.
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So how is the prologue, minna? I did my best! :D
Chapter 1 might be posted tomorrow or so.. since I have school and my exams is in this week! So please give me time to write chapter 1. :bow:
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Cute first meeting~
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this sounds interesting! even if iM NOT a SaeYuki fan.
but can I make a request...? can you put the puppys name Mayu..? please? preatty please?
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I want more SaeYuki !!!! Banzaii!!! SaeYuki on the go
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@kahem: Thank you! :deco:
@yuukimoko: Sorry! I'll make the dog anonymous as Mayuyu will be in this fanfic soon! :cow:
@saeyukilover: Thank you! :deco:
I will upload chapter 1 soon! Please standby~ :bow:
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thanx I love it can't wait for the next chapter :twothumbs :cow:
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its cute! ill wait for the next chapter!
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@ILOVESAEYUKI-WMATSUI: Thank you! Here's the next chapter :deco:
@lovelypeace: Thank you! :deco:
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Chapter 1
The raven-haired's POV:
"Tadaima!" the raven-haired said as she stepped inside the house.
"Okaeri, Yukirin-neechan~!" Her sister, Mayuyu who was sitting on the sofa and watching an anime on the television in the living room greeted her.
"Nee.. Mayuyu! Today I saw an Ikemen!" Yukirin said in an excited tone with a smile that you rarely get to see, as she stills remembers the Ikemen that adopted the puppy on the street.
"Hontoni? Sugoi! What does he look like?" A sudden smile came her sister as she is the type of person who always goes out with Ikemens. Sometimes her sister will confess to them but gets rejected or after being a couple for days, they will eventually break up. Sometimes Yukirin wonders why such a person like Mayuyu gets rejected..
"He has short hair and is totally an ikemen, I tell you! He is also a gentleman! He picked up an abandoned puppy that was abandoned in the streets! I wanted to adopt it but I know okasan will not allow since she hates animals.." Yukirin's eyes brightened and her smile widened when she described the ikemen.
"Demo.. He sounds like a girl.." Yukirin's voice dropped into a disappointed tone when she recalled the ikemen's voice..
Her sister kept quiet and Yukirin thought that Mayuyu lost interest to the topic already but as soon as the anime ended..
"Daijoubu.. nee-chan! Sometimes guys have a girl's voice too, ya know?" Mayuyu comforted her sister as she gets up from the sofa , switched off the television and went to her room..
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The boyish girl's POV:
*Knock Knock Knock* "Sayaka!?" The boyish girl shouted as she knocked on the door of her house.
A woman in just her panties and bra opened the door.. "Okaeri, Sae-chan" Sayaka greeted her..
"Tadaima!" Sae entered the house with the puppy.. "Welcome to your new home pup!" Sae smiled and pet the puppy.. Sae unleashed the puppy and let it venture in the house. Then she turned to Sayaka.
Seeing Sayaka in just her panties and bra did not surprise her as she is used to see her best friend like that.. "Looking at your body again aren't you? Sayaka?" Sae asked..
"I just hate it.. Because of my abs, I can't go to onsens or open baths.. Sometimes my friends call "Gorilla" because of my body" Sayaka frowned as she complained about her body..
"I think you're amazing just the way you are.." Sae comforted her best friend..
"Oh whatever! You always say that but you keep on teasing me!" Sayaka says jokingly to Sae and giggled..
But Sae ignored her as she suddenly remembered the raven-haired girl she met on the street.. "Nee.. Sayaka. Today I saw a beautiful woman on the street.. Thanks to that puppy." Sae told Sayaka..
"Beautiful!? OMG SAE! Are you inlove!? It's the first time I heard you say that word to describe someone!" Sayaka couldn't believe that Sae said that but she was happy for her best friend..
"I guess so.. When I see her again someday, I will ask her for her name and her handphone number!" Sae said with a bright smile on her face with her fist pumped up.
"You go boy!" Sayaka teased and went to the kitchen to prepare dinner.
Sae was about to tackle Sayaka for calling her a boy but then.. "Ruff! Ruff! Ruff!" The puppy barked at Sae after venturing the house.. Sae played with the puppy and was happy that because of this puppy, she met someone that she finally like for the first time.
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The next day..
As Sae has no work today, she leashed the puppy and went out for a walk with the puppy..
"Yosh! I will go back to where I found this cute little puppy as I might see that beautiful girl again!" she thought as she led the puppy to the street where she found it.
*Skip*
When she reached the street, she saw a girl who seems to be emotionless and was sitting in the bench near where Sae found the puppy. Sae realised who it was.
"Mayuyu!!" Sae called the familiar girl and sat beside the emotionless girl.
"Ahh~! Sae-chan" Mayuyu suddenly brightened up and hugged Sae and Sae hugged back.
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Profile:
Yukirin: A raven-haired girl with pale like snow skin. She has not been inlove before nor did she have a boyfriend/girlfriend. She has a younger sister called Mayuyu.
Mayuyu: An emotionless girl who only smiles when she is with her sister and other ikemen. Her elder sister is Yukirin.
Sayaka: A muscly girl. She is often called "Gorilla". She does not like going to onsens and open baths. She often stares at her body. She lives with Sae and likes to tease Sae.
Sae: A boyish girl. She has not been inlove before nor did she have a boyfriend/girlfriend. She recently adopted a puppy (as said in the story). She lives with Sayaka.
Mayuki-mama: Hates animals.
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Ok.. The chapter ends here.. Try to guess what relationship Sae and Mayuyu have here. Hehes~
I hope you like the story.
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eh?! they know each other :O.. yeah saeyuki!!!! :D
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SAEYUKI ! :ptam-glow:
sayaka hates going to osens because her friends call her gorira because of her abs ? :shock:
i will be happy if i saw one of my friends abs :wahaha:
mayu and sae are ..... friends ? :mon star: or lovers ? :mon lovelaff:
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LOL! Sayaka in underwear and Sae is ok with that ^^ I can't stop lauching
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Nice fics really like it,
Is this SaeMayuKi? because i love triangle between them lol :D
Update soon,thank you
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eto..... so Mayu is Yuki's sister....
I was hoping she is the dog since I alredy know that Mayu will get hurt..... I dont want her to be hurt......
thanks for the update...
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More SaeYuki moments... :)
Thank you!!!
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:luvluv1: Sae x Yuki
:kekeke: Sayaka x Mayu???? Why not... :hehehe:
please continue.... :on woohoo:
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@flunicsnaz: I already have plans for Sayaka and Mayu. Gomen. Thank you for reading though! :deco:
@saeyukilover: SaeYuki moments coming up soon! :D
@yuukimoko: Gomenne.. I wanted to make it more dramatic but don't worry :) I have good plans for Mayuyu. :deco:
@zeebulb: You'll know once you read chapter 2 :deco:
@Rukaeru: Thank you for reading my fic Rukaeru-san! :deco:
@kahem: Thank you! :cow:
@ElleOranjii: Thank you! :cow: I would also love it when I see a friend with abs. I wrote it for the sake of comedy XD
@Haruko: Thank you! :cow:
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Chapter 2
"Sae-chan~ It's been a long time!" Mayuyu says while she is hugging Sae tightly.
"Mayuyu! ..*cough*..*cough*.. I can't breathe! You're hugging me too tight!" Sae choked while she is hugging Mayuyu gently.
"Ahh! Gomen!" Mayuyu lets go of Sae.
Mayuyu noticed that Sae was holding a leash and saw a puppy sitting down on the floor. "Nani kore? Inu?" Mayuyu asked.
"Nope.. That's a cat." Sae replied sarcasticly and chuckled.
"Mou!! Sae-chan!" Mayuyu pouts. Which made Sae spazz at how cute Mayuyu was. It was like last time.
Mayuyu looks at Sae from head to toe then to her eyes. Sae was still chuckling then and keep spazzing on how cute Mayuyu was. Before Mayuyu knew it, she was gazing deep into Sae's dark eyes and was smiling and blushing like a lovesick woman. Sae noticed this.
"Mayuyu? Daijoubu? Are you sick?" Sae walked towards Mayuyu and touched her forehead to feel Mayuyu's temperature. "Hmm.. You don't seem sick."
Mayuyu regained her conciousness back and blushed deeply and face away from Sae when Sae touched her forehead. "Eto.. Ano.. Sae-chan.. Want to go to my house today?" Mayuyu unconciously said it. She bit her lips when she realised what she said but somehow she is hoping that Sae goes to her house for the first time.
"Sure.. Why not? But is it okay? Won't your parents be bothered?" Sae asked.
"It's okay.. My parent's aren't at home around this hour because of work, only Yukirin-neechan is at home. You should leave the puppy in a cage, which is only for guests who has pets, outside my house since my mom hates animals. Let's go!" Mayuyu replied back.
They stood up from the bench and went to Mayuyu's home with the puppy. Mayuyu is clinging on Sae's arms and was asking about the puppy and spazzing on how cute it is all the time while Sae was leading the puppy.
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*Flashback*
Mayuyu was in an all girls school when she met Sae for the first time. Mayuyu was going to a school trip with her batch when all of this happened.
"Mayu-chan~! Grab your bags and let's go! Our teachers and classmates are waiting! Plus, im totally excited for this school trip!" Jurina said in an excited tone and pulled Mayuyu along with her once Mayuyu grabbed her bag and headed to the bus where their classmates and teachers were waiting.
"Jurina-san.. Why are you so excited? Yesterday you were crying about why you didn't want to go to the school trip and how you'll miss YOUR Rena-chan." Mayuyu complained as both of the girls went inside the bus and sat on their sits. Everyone is now waiting for the tour leaders that will lead them in their school trip.
"Rena-chan told me that I won't be able to kiss, touch or cuddle with her if I don't go to the school trip. She also told me that I can call or sms her anytime in the school trip! She even kissed me on the lips last night to calm me down and then she put her tongue inside my-" Jurina explained to Mayuyu in a very excited and happy tone.
"I don't need to know that!" Mayuyu shouted and blushed in embarrassment.
"Well you asked me!" Jurina said. "Did not!!" Mayuyu rejected.
*skip*
As they continued arguing, the all four of the tour leaders came.. One by one they stepped inside the bus.. "Kyaa!! Ikemen!" All the girls squealed in excitement including Mayuyu when a boyish short haired girl entered the bus except for Jurina.
"I look better than her! I bet she's single.. Unlike me, I have Rena-chan!" Jurina said in a proud way causing glares from the students around her sit.
"Ohayo gozaimasu! We are going to be your tour leaders for your school trip for four days and three nights!" They greeted at the same time.
"We are now introducing ourselves. I am Akimoto Sayaka. You can call me Sayaka and I am going to be the head leader for the school trip." Sayaka introduced herself and bowed.
"Umeda Ayaka desu. You can call me Umechan." Umechan bowed as she greeted them.
"Masuda Yuka desu! You can call me Yuka. Yoroshiku Onegaishimasu!" Yuka bowed as she greeted the students too.
"Miyazawa Sae desu! You can call me Sae-chan! I will be the vice leader for the tour leaders for the school trip. Yoroshiku onegaishimasu!" Sae greeted them in an energetic way and bowed.
The students squealed when Sae greeted herself. "Kyaaa!! Ikemen!! Sae-chan, can I have your number!?" Of all the squeals of excitement, Mayuyu's voice was the loudest and was heard by Sae..
"Sure.. At the end of this day, those who want my number can have it. But, only if you behave, okay?" Sae said in a very ikemen and genking style. Earning facepalms from the other tour leaders and another squeal from the students except for Jurina who was totally against it and just rolled her eyes at her classmates, even Mayuyu.
The bus was now moving to the place where their school trip will be.
"Okay~! Quiet down now~! Or you won't be able to get Sae's number." Sayaka quieten the students and gave an excuse which actually worked.
"Now I will group all of you in 4 groups. Team D, Team I, Team V, Team A. I will be leading Team D, while Sae leads Team I, Umechan leads Team V and Yuka leads the last group, Team A." Sayaka announced
Everyone in the bus was hoping to get into Team I, and of course, except for Jurina who was fine on whatever team she gets into.
Sayaka announced who will go to what team and which student will be the leader and vice leader since 1 tour leader wasn't enough to guide them. Fortunately for Mayuyu, she was in Team I and was the leader with Jurina as the vice leader.
*Skiip* ( for the school trip, I'll write it in a more detailed way in the next chapter since it is gonna be long, sorry!)
Mayuyu eventually fell for Sae in the school trip that she went to even though Sae was 4 years older than her.
*End of Flashback*
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Once Mayuyu and Sae got to Mayuyu's house it was already noon, both of the girls were already starving.
Sae tied the puppy to the cage which was fortunately, too big enough for the puppy to walk about.
"Gomenne.. You'll be staying there until it's time to go home ok? be a good puppy." Sae pets the puppy as she closed the gate of the cage.
"Let's go~! Sae-chan~!" Mayuyu said in a childish way as they headed to the front door.
"Tadaima, Yukirin-neechan~! We have guests today~!" Mayuyu greeted as she stepped inside the house with Sae.
"Sorry for disturbing~!" Sae said in a friendly, yet polite way.
"Okaeri! Mayuyu! Oh, we have guests? Come in, come in.. You're just in the right time. Lunch is ready to be served!" Yukirin shouted as she was in the kitchen.. She did not know who the guest was but she still greeted the guest in a polite yet friendly way too.
Mayuyu gave Sae a pair of slippers as she was taught by her parents that guests must be given a pair of slippers so that they will feel comfortable to walk around the house.
Sae wore the shoes and Mayuyu guide her to the living room and let her sit in the sofa.
"Please, feel at home." Mayuyu said to Sae and had a thanks as a reply.
Mayuyu and Sae chatted about what happened during the school trip and how Mayuyu enjoyed having Sae as her tour leader and how Sae was glad that Mayuyu was chosen as the leader along with Jurina.
Both of the women chatted for a minute or so until it was broken by Yukirin.
"Lunch is ready! You can come to the dining room now!" Yukirin called Mayu and her guest and prepared the dishes and drinks.
Mayu clung onto Sae and led her to the dining room. Once all the three of them were there, Yukirin was still preparing the dishes and Mayu and Sae was sitted in the dining table. Sae did not see Yukirin's face yet nor did Yukirin as they were both busy.
Once Yukirin was done, she sat on the dining table and looked at the guest.
"Have I seen her before? She looks familiar." Yukirin tought..
Sae had a feeling that someone was looking at her then she looked at Mayu's sister.
Both of the girl's eyes widened but Yukirin's eyes were wider and Sae's mouth formed an "o" shape when they recognised each other.
"YOU!?" Both of the girl's said at the same time leaving Mayuyu confused.
End of Chapter 2
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Profile:
Yukirin: A raven-haired girl with pale like snow skin. She has not been inlove before nor did she have a boyfriend/girlfriend. She has a younger sister called Mayuyu.
Mayuyu: An emotionless girl who only smiles when she is with her sister and other ikemen. Her elder sister is Yukirin.
Sayaka: A muscly girl. She is often called "Gorilla". She does not like going to onsens and open baths. She often stares at her body. She lives with Sae and likes to tease Sae.
Sae: A boyish girl. She has not been inlove before nor did she have a boyfriend/girlfriend. She recently adopted a puppy (as said in the story). She lives with Sayaka.
Mayuki-mama: Hates animals.
Matsui Jurina: Mayuyu's friend. Boyish person and has a lot of pride.
Matsui Rena: Jurina's girlfriend.
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Sorry for the quite long update everyone! I will write about what happened in the school trip in the next chapter! and yes, WMatsui will be included :)
My exams has already started so the next chapter might take quite long to be updated. Sorry :bow:
I hope you like Chapter 2! :cow:
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Poor Puppy left outside it must be cold out there :cry:
Don't tell me...... SaeYu !! :luvluv1:
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glad you made mayuyu as yukirin sister :) so? sae chan is the main character eh? yeaaayy~!! please update soon~ i'm saeyuki shipper x) but please don't hurt mayu~ <3 thanks
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Hmmmm... and i thought i've seen your username somewhere...
Turned out you're the same author of the fic i've been reading on tumblr XD
Nice story! Please update it soon \o/ ♥
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@Rukaeru: Thank you for reading, Rukaeru-san :deco:
@ElleOranjii: Im sorry for being mean to the puppy :bow: :)
@Vicchan02: Thank you for reading, Vicchan02-san :deco:
@fuu_kun: I will update soon. No worries. :cow:
@ScarletWings: I will update soon :) Thanks for following me on Tumblr, ScarletWings-san :deco:
My exams just ended today :onioncheer: I am now writing chapter 3 on a note pad. I will post it as soon as I finished it :on study: So please standby :kneelbow:
About Chapter 3A:
Chapter 3A will be about Mayuyu's days in her school trip and there will be some Wmatsui :heart: There might be some SaeYaka too for the SaeYaka fans! :on gay:
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yeaaay~~!! finally! *jump like crazy*
eh? b-but? sae and sayaka ? e-eh?! they are bestfriend right? </3
i'll standby here~ ganbatte (^o^)/ waiting waiting waiting
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update soon :bow: :kneelbow:
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saeyuki!!!!!!!! where are you? u need to update before sae leave for shaghai :err:
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@fuu_kun: It's just a slight SaeYaka since it was before SaeYuki met :) Don't worry :deco:
@anzai48: Finally someone noticed DIVA.. I was waiting for someone to realise it hahas :cow:
@saeyukilover: Coming right up! :)
Im sorry for the super long update. I know this is a lame excuse but I got lost of what I wanted to write and I find it hard to manage my time with my games and writing.. Hontoni gomenasai! :bow:
I hope you don't get bored of the story because Im not really confident about this but I did my best! :bow:
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Profiles:
Matsui Rena: Matsui Jurina's girlfriend.
Matsui Jurina: Mayuyu's friend. Has a lot of pride and boyish. Boyfriend of Matsui Rena.
Mayu: An emotionless girl who only smiles when she is with her sister and other ikemen. Her elder sister is Yukirin.
Akimoto Sayaka: A muscly girl. She is often called "Gorilla". She does not like going to onsens and open baths. She often stares at her body. She lives with Sae and likes to tease Sae. Tour leader of Team D.
Miyazawa Sae: A boyish girl. Best friends with Sayaka. Treats Sayaka as her sister. Tour leader of Team I.
Umeda Ayaka: Tour leader of Team V.
Masuda Yuka: Tour leader of Team A.
Kitahara Rie(Kitarie): Mayuyu's friend. Has feeling for Yuihan.
Yokoyama Yui(Yuihan): Mayuyu's friend. Close to Kitarie. Hates being harassed by Kitarie but has feelings for her.
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Chapter 3A (Mayuyu's School Trip: Love at First Sight)
Day 1
Today is the start of Mayuyu’s school trip. Fortunately, she was chosen as the team leader for Team I by the tour leader of Team I, Miyazawa Sae, which Mayuyu admires as she thinks that Sae is very ikemen.. Her best friend, Matsui Jurina who dislikes Sae a lot because she thinks that she is cooler than Sae and because Sae gets more attention than her, unfortunately became the vice leader for Team I. Being the team leader and vice leader of a team means that person will get more attention from the others as the teacher's asked the tour leaders to teach them something that will help them in life. (CheesyBits: re-read chapter 2 flashback if you forgot)
They were still inside the bus as the way to the location of the school trip was long. The bus was quite noisy as Mayuyu’s classmates were discussing about the trip. Mayu was staring at Sae ever since Sae came inside the bus.. The older girl did not notice as she was sleeping with her head on the shoulders of Sayaka, the tour leader of Team D, who was asleep too.
*Beep! Beep!* a phone vibrated in the hands of a girl. Jurina, who is sitting beside Mayuyu, just got a text message from her girlfriend, Matsui Rena. She switched on her phone to read the message and replied.
[Rena-chan: Jurina-chan, don’t run away from your school trip or I won’t let you kiss or cuddle me anymore! You can still text me during your break.. Take care~ I love you~!]
[Jurina-chan: I won’t! I promise! Just please let me kiss and cuddle you when I come back home~! I love you more~! P.S. Aren’t you supposed to be in class right now? It’s rare to get a message from you during school hours, did you go to school today? Im worried.]
[Rena-chan: Yes, Im in class right now. Im using my bag to cover my phone to text you so that it won’t get confiscated. Im only doing this because I won’t be able to see you in 2 nights]
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Jurina kept texting Rena and Mayuyu stared at Sae until they reached the hotel that they are going to stay at..
“Everyone, We are already reached the hotel, please get ready to go down the bus. Once you go down the bus please make group that consists of 4 people each to sleep with.” Sayaka announced.
Mayuyu and Jurina were the last one to get down of the bus with their luggage. Suddenly, someone hugged Mayuyu from behind and is trying to harass her.
“Nee! Mayuyu, is it okay if Lovetan and I be your sleepmates?” The person who hugged Mayuyu from behind asked.
“Kitarie~! Stop harassing me! I will let the two of you be my sleepmates if you stop harassing me!” Mayuyu complained as she blush.
“Mayuyu! Don’t forget me~!” Jurina said as she wants to be in Mayuyu’s group too.
Once every made their group, they went to their rooms. Mayuyu and group’s room was just beside the tour leader’s room. The room was small and has 4 pink sleeping futons on the floor, a storage room and a small window. Mayuyu and group put their luggage in the storage room of their room and once their done, Sasshi looked outside the window.
“Huwaa~!! Look there’s a beach nearby! The water is so crystal blue!!” Kitarie told the others.
“Luckily I brought my swimming suit with me.” Yuihan said.
“Me too!” said the 3 other girls
While the 4 girls were talking, someone knocked on their door. Jurina walked to the door and opened it. The person outside was Sae.
“Hey girls, today is a free day as we are going to the beach nearby to relax so please bring your swimsuits along! Oh, and don’t forget to be back here by dawn!” Sae-chan told the girls and winked at Jurina which made Jurina annoyed because of her dislike with Sae-chan.
The girls took out their luggage to take their swimsuits from the storage room and wore their swimsuits in the nearby toilet. Kitarie, Yuihan and Jurina were on their bikinis except for Mayuyu.
“We’re going to the beach first! See you later, Mayuyu!” Jurina said and ditched Mayuyu with the other 2 girls.
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Once Mayuyu was done, she headed to the beach and searched for the 3 girls.
While searching for the 3 girls, someone hugged Mayuyu from behind. Mayuyu blushed as she felt a soft chest press onto her.
“K-Ki-Kitarie! Let go off me! I can fe-fe-feel your ch-ch-chest!” Mayuyu stuttered.
As soon as Kitarie let go of Mayuyu, Mayuyu turned around to face her. Jurina and Yuihan are tagging along with Kitarie.
Jurina was holding a volleyball ball and dropped it when she saw Mayuyu’s chest the other 2 girls stared at it with their jaws dropped. Kitarie took the volleyball ball and threw it at Mayuyu’s face lightly and playfully and said “That’s what you get for having a humongous chest!”
All the 4 girls broke into laughter.
They stopped laughing once Jurina ran towards to ball and picked it up. “Hey girls, wanna play beach volleyball?” she asked while bouncing the ball in the air with her hands.
The 4 girls were playing beach volleyball. It was Mayuyu and Jurina against Kitarie and Yuihan. While the girls were playing, Mayuyu and Jurina saw the tour leaders, Sae, Sayaka, Umechan and Yuka, walking towards them. Sae is wearing a boyish attire, Sayaka is wearing a normal and plain t-shirt with jeans while Umechan and Yuka is wearing bikinis. Seeing Sae in boyish attire made Sashihara, Lovetan and Mayuyu squeal in excitement.
“Hey ladies, can we join you?” Sae asked the girls who were playing volleyball.
“Sure! Why not?” said the 3 girls who were still squealing in excitement.
Sae and Yuka joined Mayuyu and Jurina’s team while Umechan and Sayaka joined Kitarie and Yuihan’s team in beach volleyball.
Since Sae was in Jurina's team, Jurina is in competitive mode even if Sae is in her team. She wants to score more than Sae in the game.
While playing beach volleyball, the competitive Jurina accidentally knocked on Mayuyu which caused her to trip and was about to hit a rock. Mayuyu had her eyes closed as she was scared of the upcoming pain. Luckily, someone caught her but the saviour hit the rock instead. The tour leaders and Mayuyu's friend ran to them and asked "Are the two of you okay?"
Mayuyu opened her eyes and saw that Sae saved her. Sae looked like she was in pain but she is enduring it. "Yes, im okay." Sae replied. Mayuyu was speechless and felt guilty that she fell as she didn't want Sae hurt. Sayaka went to Sae and squat beside her and tried to peek at Sae's back by taking off Sae's clothes but Sae stopped her. Fortunately, Sayaka got a peek at Sae's back saw a bruise because of the fall.
"Not much of a damage there.. But do you want it to be treated, Sae?" Sayaka asked in a serious yet worried tone. "No thanks. Im fine. I really am." Sae replied and smiled. This made the other 2 tour leaders and Kitarie and Yuihan sigh in relief. Jurina remained emotionless.
Mayuyu stood up and offered a hand to Sae to help her stand up. Fortunately, Sae took her hand and stood up.
*Omg! Her hands are soft! I don't wanna let go!* Mayuyu thought while tightening her grip. Mayuyu can feel blood gushing up to her cheeks when she looked at Sae and at the fact that she was holding hands with Sae.
"Umm.. Mayu-san? Are you okay? Are you having a fever?" Sae asked and cupped Mayuyu's cheeks with her free hand to check her temperature. This action made Mayuyu's ears pinkish and face red.
"I-Im fi-fine.. Thank you.." Mayuyu said and took Sae's hand off her face gently as she thinks that she might have a nosebleed if this continues further.
"Ghuuu!! Im sooo jealousss!!" Kitarie and Yuihan said the same time.
"Thanks for the time girls, but we have to go to the hotel right now. Please be back by dawn." Sayaka told the girls. The tour leaders went to the hotel and left the girls in the beach.
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Jurina's POV
Jurina was imagining a mini version of her in devil which was on her right and angel in her left.
*Hah! Serves Sae right for taking away your popularity! Good job!* says the Devil.
*Don't listen to that devil. You should apologize. That's how your mom taught you right?* says the Angel.
*You live your own life! This angel is lame! Being lame will lose your popularity more!* the Devil laughed.
*If Rena-chan was here, she will tell you to apologize to Sae. You love Rena-chan right? So go and do it! Even if she's not here, just do the right thing!* the Angel reassured her.
*But Rena-chan isn't here! Muahahaha!* the Devil laughed more.
*Jurina, if you don't apologize, you will lose the trust of your friend. Im quite sure that you won't like that..* the Angel told her. This sentence made the Devil vanish.
*Yosh!! I will apologize to Sae later! I will also apologize for underestimating her too!* Jurina thought and pumped her fist in the air causing her 3 friends to look at her in a weird way. As Jurina looked at Mayuyu, Jurina remembered that Mayuyu was the one she knocked which caused the accident to happen.
"Mayuyu.. Im sorry for knocking you. I didn't mean to..." Jurina apologized. "Forgiven but say sorry to Sae later if not I'll take my forgiveness back." Mayuyu replied and Kitarie and Yuihan nodded.
"Don't worry.. I will.. Let's go swimming, shall we? We have been in the sun for too long - might as well cool down." Jurina told her friends. The four of them swam in the sea until dawn and gave the ball to a classmate nearby as they asked for it.
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It was dawn. Everyone was gathered in the cafeteria. The cafeteria was big and there were 4 tables that were long and fits all the members of each teams. Everyone sat at the tables were their team was.
Sae was at the end of the table. She looks like the boss that is in a meeting because of where she sat. Sae was also at the center of Mayuyu and Jurina. Mayuyu on her left and Jurina on her right.
Sayaka stood up and asked "Did all of you had fun just now?" .. "HAI~" everyone replied to her. "Alright! At the count of 3, I want everyone to say "itadakimasu"!"
"3...! 2...! 1..!" .. "ITADAKIMASU~~!" everyone said at the same time including the tour leaders. Everyone started to eat their dinner and a lot of people made a noise as they were talking about how the food is delicious.
"Sae-san.. Sorry for the accident just now.. If I wasn't being competitive with you, I wouldn't have knocked down Mayuyu and you didn't have to save her.. Im also sorry for judging you just now in the bus.." Jurina apologised to Sae while they were eating. Mayuyu heard it and smiled secretively.
"Apology accepted. I hope you learn a lot because of that. Thank you for being honest too." Sae forgave Jurina and winked at her. This time, Jurina just smiled cooly and continued to eat.
End of Jurina's POV
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After dinner, Sae's fans got Sae's number as promised including Mayuyu and now, everyone is back to their rooms. The four girls wore their pajamas and is already preparing to sleep.
Jurina is beside Mayuyu while Kitarie and Yuihan was beside each other. Jurina was texting her girlfriend while Mayuyu was thinking about the incident just now where she and Sae were holding hands.
*skip*
Jurina, Kitarie and Yuihan were already asleep except for Mayuyu. Mayuyu is planning to take a peek in the tour leader's room since their room is just beside their room. Mayuyu stood up from her futon and looked at her friends. Jurina is asleep with her hands tucked under her head which makes her look like an ikemen and Kitarie and Yuihan was cuddling. Yuihan is on top of Kitarie and Kitarie is hugging Yuihan in the waist.
*Since when did they become a couple? Did they do some "hot stuff" while I was thinking about me and Sae?* Mayuyu was having odd thoughts about Kitarie and Yuihan.. Mayuyu just shrugged her thoughts off when she remembered about peeking inside the tour leader's room.
Mayuyu went out of her room and look at the tour leader's room door. "kyaaa!" she screamed lightly as she saw a bright scary figure beside the door.
"Chillax! It's just me. Beside, why are you still awake? Do you need to go to the toilet?" The scary figured shown her flashlight somewhere else, revealing Sae.
"Umm.. No.. I just wanted to take a fresh air.." Mayuyu replied to Sae's question..
Sae patted Mayuyu's head and said "All right.. but since it's already late, I will give you 30 seconds to take a fresh air."
-After 30 seconds of silence-
"Times up! Go to sleep alright? Tomorrow will be one heck of a day." Sae said as she checks her watch. Mayuyu went to her room and lay down on her sleeping futon. She giggled until she fell asleep.
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Day 2
In the morning, they went to a temple to learn more about the temple's history. Right now, they were facing a cow statue and Sae is giving them information about the cow. "This cow is known to give you more knowledge. They said that if you touch it, you will gain more knowledge and do well for your exams.. Yada yada yada yada."
After giving the information, Kitarie, Yuihan and Jurina rushed to the cow statue and rubbed it like as if they were competing on who is the fastest to polish it(CheesyBits: Idk how to explain it so I used this reference. I hope you get it). The other girls from Team I who were Jurina's fans took a picture of them rubbing the cow statue.
Mayuyu walked to the cow statue and pet it's head and prayed *I hope you'll help me in my exams..*.
"Okay girls.. Stop rubbing it like there's no tomorrow. You all look childish right now." Mayuyu told her friends.
"But we want to get more knowledge~!" Yuihan said.
"Yea~ I don't want to fail in my exams too!" Kitarie said.
"Im also tired of getting A's in my exams! I want A+s!!" Jurina said.
"Baka~ You don't have to rub it like that." Mayuyu teased.
Sae, who was watching the scene since the beginning was chuckling on how the girls were cute specially at Mayuyu as she finds a serious Mayuyu very cute. Sae was beside a store which sells cards to write your wishes in it.
"Hey girls, come here!" Sae called the girls. Everyone in Team I went to Sae. "So this part of the temple is where you asks for your wish. Whether it's about health, love or wealth. Anything, just anything. Everything's fine as long as you don't write it in a bad way. Ohh.. and after writing down your wishes, don't forget to tie it to this tree!" Sae pointed a tree were lots of cards was hanged in it.
Everyone bought a card from the store and wrote down their wishes.
Mayuyu wrote down: [I wish to get that person to be my boyfriend]. "that person" refers to Sae. Mayuyu tied it to the tree and Sae saw her tie it.
Sae, also bought a card and wrote down: [I wish to remember and meet the person who gave the creamy white scarf to me in my childhood days.]. After that, Sae tied it to the tree. Sae looked at Mayuyu's card and read it. *that person, huh? I hope she gets him.* Sae smiled at the thought.
After that, Kitarie, Jurina and Yuihan tied their cards to the tree. Sae read their cards since she was curious about the girls in her team.
Jurina's card read out: [I want a healthy and good future with Rena-chan.] *Rena-chan? Must be her sister..* Sae thought.
Kitarie's card read out: [I want to harass and cuddle her more like last night.] *harass!? Didn't I tell them to write it properly? Sigh..* Sae facepalmed.
Yuihan's card read out: [I wish she stops pimping and cuddle me more like last night.] *She!? Pimping!? Cuddle.. like last night!? Wait.. Kitarie's card says the same thing about cuddling and they are in the same room.. Could it be!? I have one heck of a team indeed!* Sae thought and blushed.
After that, girls from Team I started to tie their card to the tree. Sae read it out and she finds most of the cards weird as they were mostly about girl relationships but she didn't judge them as her mom used to tell her that she fell inlove with a childhood friend which is a girl once but Sae can't remember who that girl is.
*skip*
After having a tour in the temple and had their lunch in a restaurant in the city, they are now shopping in a famous shopping mall. Sae told her team that they could all roam around the shopping mall and separate. Mayuyu and her friends, Jurina, Kitarie and Yuihan stayed with Sae. To be honest, Sae was just following them as Mayuyu and her gang kept dragging her inside the stores.
Mayuyu will buy the same thing as Sae and kept getting Sae's attention. Jurina is buying souvenirs for Rena-chan and her family while Yuihan and Kitarie were holding hands and were choosing what to buy for themselves. Mayuyu and Sae also took a picture while shopping including the 3 girls too.
The day ended fast as the girls were enjoying their shopping spree.
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Day 3 (Last Day of Mayuyu's School Trip)
*Last door..* Sae thought as she faces Mayuyu and friend's door. Sae opened the door and saw Kitarie and Yuihan cuddling, Jurina hugging her messed up blanket and Mayuyu is asleep with a camera with her hands.
*As I thought.. Those 2 are really a couple...* Sae thought when she looked at Kitarie and Yuihan.
"Wake up, girls! Get ready to go home. Im sure you miss your family." Sae wakes them up by shaking them gently which worked as they slowly woke up.
"Aughhh.. frwgfdsjafeuiewaf#^!$#*#.." Those were the noises that were made when Kitarie and Jurina tried to stand up. Since Jurina is a heavy sleeper, Jurina fell mid-way and fell asleep again. This movements from the girls made Sae giggle.
"Come on, Matsui-san. Wake up. Im sure you want to see Rena-chan." Sae said as she remembered the name in the card. Hearing Rena-chan's name, Jurina became awake fully.
"Dress up everyone.. Meet us in the cafeteria for breakfast. After that, we will leave. Oh.. and pack your bags and bring it down too." Sae announced. "Hai~" the 4 girls responded.
The four girls packed their bags first and bought their bags to the toilet to dress up. After that, they went to the cafeteria.
Their sitting arrangement are the same as Day 1. Mayuyu on Sae's left and Jurina on Sae's right.
"Okay.. Everyone, did everyone have fun in this two days!?" Sayaka asked the students as she stood up. "HAI~" The students responded and some of the students said it with their fist pumped up in the air.
"This is the last time we are going to say this so let's say it energeticly! On the count of 3! 3..! 2..! 1..!" "ITADAKIMASU~~~!!" The students cheered and starts to eat.
"Sae-chan.. Is it okay if I text you?" Mayuyu asked Sae. "Sure. Why not? We can also meet up if you want." Sae said.
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They were now far away from the hotel as they were now in school. They were already dismissed. The tour leaders were already gone.
"I have to go now.. Cya guys tomorrow! Rena-chan is waiting for me at her house." Jurina said as she rushed to her girlfriend's house. The 3 other girls waved her goodbye until she was out of their sight.
"I guess we have to go now too." Yuihan told Mayuyu.
"But I thought your house goes to the direction of where my house is?" Mayuyu asked.
"I promised to walk Kitarie home.. So ya.. Hehe.. Cya tomorrow!" Yuihan said and Kitarie waved to Mayuyu. Once Kitarie and Yuihan turned to the other direction, Mayuyu walked home.
*skip*
"Tadaima!!" Mayuyu said as she opened the door of her house. "Okaeeriii~" someone said in a ghostly tone. Right now, a zombie was infront of Mayuyu which made her scream.
"Chillax! It's just me.. Your Father." Her father took off her mask. "Shinoda Maritroll Success!" cheered her father. "Mouu! Otousan! That wasn't funny!" Mayuyu pouted.
"Ignore him, Mayuyu." Her sister, Yukirin said.
"Geez! The two of you are like your mothers.. Yukirin like Nyaro and Mayuyu like Miichan." Shinoda Mario said happily as he is happy about his daughters.
End of Chapter 3A
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Who is the girl who Sae fell inlove with and gave her the creamy white scarf??
What happened to Yukirin and Mayuyu's mothers and what were their relationship like with their father, Shinoda Mario??
Standby for the next Chapter 3B!
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Im sorry if it's too boring. I did my best. :bow:
I will post chapter 3B soon. I would also want to hear your opinions as it might give me ideas for the next chapter. :cow:
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jurina sleeping like an ikemen. Lol i want to see it :cathappy:
eh? Mayu and yuki have a different mother?
It's not boring, it's really great chapter. Thank you for update :thumbsup
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yayyy finaly you update ^-^ thankyou :bow:
i think jurina is cool ikement too XD wonder to see her in danso :grin:
saemayu moment are soooo sweeet :3
mayu?? why don't you write "her" not "him" let sae know :3
girl who gift whitescarf huh? i wonder it's yuki :3 but i hope no~~ how about that girl is kasai? or yuka? XD XD will be more interesting~
so mayu and yuki is sister with different mother? XD i'm shock xo maritroll such a playboyy xd
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It's not MariHaru or MariMii but Mario marry both of them??!! (http://www.laymark.com/l/m/m063.gif) (http://www.laymark.com)
And it will be 3-angle Love SaeMaYuki (http://www.laymark.com/l/m/m019.gif) (http://www.laymark.com)(http://www.laymark.com/l/m/m019.gif) (http://www.laymark.com)
Please update soon (http://www.laymark.com/l/m/m087.gif) (http://www.laymark.com)
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Thank you for the update and the chapter.
I read this chapter from your tumblr but i don't have tumblr so i'll give comment from here lol.
Soo Mario have 2 wifes?
Please don't tell me you are going to make Sae marry Yuki and Mayu,because that would be...awesome lol jkjk
Nice updates btw,update soon :D
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LOL Sae is so nosy, reading everybody's wishes!
Can I ship Saemayuki! Ok fine, if polygamy not allowed ><, SAEMAYU then! I don't want to see cute mayuyu's heart broken :heart: :heart:!
Thanks for this sweet story! I prefer this over to making one of the love-triangle characters trivial or evil. I'll be waiting!!
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whoaa where's the author? :? can't wait for the next~ please continue :bow:
sorry for demanding ^-^
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@fuu_kun: I'm here.. It's just that I lost the paper that has chapter 3b in it.. Truly sorry for the long update :bow: :bow: :bow: :deco:
@saeyu: Thanks for waiting~! :deco: Sorry for the long update :bow: :bow: :bow:
@zeelbulb:: Thx for reading it on tumblr and taking your time to comment here :deco: wahahaha XD I had a great laugh there.. Too bad Mayu is for someone else~ sorry for the long update :bow: :bow: :bow:
@fael_c00l: You'll know about their relationship soon ^_^ :deco:
@matsuri: Oh heck.. Even I want to see Jurina sleeping like an ikemen xD
Some ppl want me to dump this fic but heck.. I won't.. even if my SaeYuki heart is fading away because of Sae going to SNH48.. SaeYuki fics r now the only way to make my SaeYuki heart stong so ima continue this :D
P.S Please prepare some tissues. I apologise if I make you cry in this chapter. You can hate me too. Hontoni gomenasai! :bow:
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Chapter 3B: Second Meeting
"YOU!??" Sae and Yukirin said at the same time.
“You’re the person who took the puppy right?” “You’re the person who were looking at the puppy right?” Sae and Yuki said at the same time. Both of the girls giggled at the same time too.
“The two of you kn-“ Mayuyu said but was interrupted.
“YO~! Say OKAERI to your otousan! TADAIMA! YO! YO! YO!” Mario, the father of Yukirin and Mayuyu, is imitating a rapper after entering the house all of a sudden.
“Shut up otousan! We have guest!” Mayuyu shouted to the living room despite Sae presence.
“Dear diary, today is the 1,069,039 times my daughters told me to shut up.” Mario said while writing in an imaginary diary.
“Like I said, we have guests!” Mayuyu shouted to Mario again.
“Oh we have guests? HOHOHO~!” Mario mimicked Santa Clause’s laugh. Mario went to the kitchen to look at the guest. Mario found Yuki and Sae staring at each other. Mario went beside Yukirin and stared at Sae.
“HOHOHOHO~! You must be Yukirin’s boyfriend! I heard so much about you~! HOHOHO!” Mario said to Sae. Sae and Yuki blushed while Mayuyu got jealoused.
“Otou-san!” Yukirin slapped Mario’s back while blushing.
“Onee-chan , otou-san.. This is Miyazawa Sae. She is the person who took care of me in my previous school trip.” Mayuyu said.
*He’s a She??!! You’ve got to be kidding me~! Just when I thought I found the father of my future babies!* Yukirin thought and cried a little mentally.
“Miyazawa Sae desu!” Sae introduced herself and bowed.
“Konnichiwa… Kojima Yuki desu.. If you’re wondering why Mayuyu’s last name is Minegishi Mayu that’s because we have different mother and we took our last name from our mother.” Yukirin blushed and bowed.
“Shinoda Mario desu! Please take care of us more~.” Mario said and reached a hand to Sae to shake hands with her. Sae agreed to shake hands with him but…
*BZZZ!* Sae was electric shocked.
“HOHOHO~! You fell for it!” Shinoda Mario grinned. Yukirin and Mayuyu facepalmed themselves.
“Awesome! What was that!?” Sae asked.
“Secret~!” Mario said and put his a finger in his lips like how an idol does.
“Jaa~ I guess we should eat now..” Yukirin said as she breaks the playful tension. The four of them get to their sits. Sae in between of Mayuyu and Yukirin , and Mario, beside Yukirin.
"Ja.. ITADAKIMASU!" Mario and the 3 girls said.
"Umm.. Sae and onee-chan, the two of you know each other?" Mayuyu asked jealously.
"We just happened to meet each other yesterday by coincidence.. But.. we just knew each other's names today." Sae said while munching on her food.
*Things really changed a lot, huh?* Mario thought.
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Shinoda Mario Flashback [CheesyBits: This was before Mayuyu was born.]
That day was the day the Shinoda family and Miyazawa family were going for a holiday together. The Shinoda and Miyazawa family are close as they went to the same high school and they were best friend since then.
"Otousan~! Okasan~! Let's go to Sae-chan's house now! We're going to be late!" chibi Yuki said excitedly while tugging her mother's one piece's skirt. Even though it is hot as it is summer, chibi Yuki is wearing a creamy white scarf in her neck.
"Please be patient Yuki-chan.. Papa has to help the butlers put the luggage in the car." Kojima Haruna, Yukirin's mom said. Mario and the butler were putting the luggages inside the limousine car.
"Alright! We're done! We can go now my lovely babies~!" Mario called the both of them.
"Yayyy~!! I'm coming Sae-chan!" chibi Yuki squealed in excitement! Chibi Yuki, Haruna and Mario sat inside the car. The driver drove away from their house and the maids closed the mansion's main gate. They are now going to the Miyazawa Mansion.
Once they reached the Miyazawa Mansion, they were greeted by the Miyazawa butlers and maids. They even saw the Miyazawa's limousine car parked in the garage. They were supposed to use that car but they decided it on Janken instead and Mario lost so they are now using their own limousine to go to their holiday location. The driver stopped driving then went out of the car to open the door beside Mario to let them go out. Mario and family got out of the car and saw the Miyazawa family, the king of the family, Miyazawa Kai, his queen, Miyazawa Atsuko, and their boyish daughter who were jumping around childishly, Miyazawa Sae, beside their own luggages.
"Osu! Mario and family! Good to see your limousine with you." Kai greeted them.
"Osu! Midget and family! Bad to see your limousine parked in your garage." Mario joked.
"Don't call me Midget!!" Kai half-shouted irritably. After that, Mario and Kai were chasing each other around while the butlers put their luggages inside Mario's limousine. [CheesyBits: WTF? How big is their limousine!?]
Haruna and chibi Yuki walked to Atsuko and chibi Sae. Haruna and Atsuko were having a chat while chibi Yuki and Sae went inside the house. [Cheesybits: What happened to Yuki and Sae inside the house is unknown since this just what Mario saw and heard.]
"Acchan~! It's been a long time! It's good to see you again." Haruna said.
"Ohh yes indeed! Ohh just look at our kids! They seems so close! If Sae was a boy, I'm pretty sure she and Yuki-chan will be a great couple." Acchan said while looking at the kids.
"Tell me about it. Hahaha~" Haruna giggled.
"You know.. Sae is really boyish. If she's still boyish in the future and falls inlove with Yuki-chan, are you fine with that? Because I would totally be fine with that." Acchan pointed out.
"Oh~ I would totally be fine with that. Just look at them. They look like a couple already. Hahaha~" Haruna giggled again.
*skip*
The adults were chatting with each other and the kids got out of the house. Chibi Sae is carrying a light brown puppy soft toy and is playing with it with chibi Yuki.
"Goshujinsama, all the luggages are inside the limousine already." a Miyazawa butler told Kai.
"Yosh! Ladies and gentleman! We're ready to go!" Kai announced. The kids rushed to the limousine and sat behind the driver's sit as they wanted to have a view of what's outside the front window. Kai and Acchan sat behind the kids while Mario and Haruna sat behind them. The Shinoda butler were already inside the car and drove off safely.
"Put on your seatbelt kids!" Kai told the kids.
"It's already on!" chibi Sae and Yuki said the same time then snickered to each other as they actually didn't put it on.
-In the middle of the road-
"Here Sae! I'm giving this to you. It's my favourite so keep it safely!" chibi Yuki said. Chibi Yuki took off her creamy white scarf and put it on Sae then kissed her in the cheek.
"Awww~ How sweet!" Mario, Haruna, Kai and Acchan said at the same time.
"I'll treasure it! Here Yukirin! You can take my puppy! This is my favourite too!" chibi Sae said and gave it to Yukirin then chibi Sae cupped Yukirin's face and gave her a peck in the lips. Yuki blushed and giggled then hugged the puppy tightly.
"Wow those moves! She's just like you Kai!" Haruna joked to Kai while Mario laughed at Kai to tease him. "HOHOHOHO~!"
Kai and Mario were teasing each other while the two mothers were chatting with each other. The kids were still playing until...
*SCREECHHH!!!* a truck is speeding towards them.
Acchan and Kai jumped to protect chibi Yuki and Sae. Haruna and Mario tried to protect all of them too but it was too late. The truck hit directly where the children were.
Mario blacked out.
-In the Hospital-
"Arghh..." Mario squeaked in pain as he tried to stand up from lying down in a bed. He kept still but realised that his inside a hostpital right now because of the hospital smell. Suddenly, Mario remembered the incident.
"OH SHIT!" Mario shouted and got out the bed fast ignoring the pain. Haruna's bed was beside his bed. Haruna is already awake and is crying.
"HARUNA! ARE YOU OKAY?! WHERE'S YUKI-CHAN? AND KAI, ACCHAN AND SAE!?" Mario half-shouted in worry.
"Yuki-chan and Sae-chan is in a coma. Acchan and Kai are dead!" Haruna exclaimed and cried more. Mario sat onto Haruna's bed and hugged her.
"No way.... Where's the kids?" Mario asked and shed tears.
"Their having an operation now...." Haruna cried then hugged Mario back. Mario hugged her more tightly.
Suddenly, a doctor went to their room.
"How's the kids?" Mario asked the doctor.
"Bad news first.. Both of the kids suffered a brain damage and there's a possibility that they might have amnesia. Good news is, they're not dead." The doctor said.
The doctor took a chair and put it beside Haruna's bed and sat on the chair.
"Kai and Acchan are dead too... Kai was like a brother to me and Acchan was like a sister to me.." the doctor said and shed a tear.
"I know how you feel Sayuu.." Mario greived. The doctor also went to the same high school as the Miyazawa and Shinoda family. He is in the Akimoto family.
"Oh.. By the way.. the kids will be awake in a week. I'll take my leave now." Sayuu said and left the room, leaving Mario to comfort Haruna.
-After a week-
Mario and Haruna were already discharged from the hospital as their injuries were not that bad. Now, they are still at the hospital, outside Sae and Yuki's room. They are looking at the window to see what's going on inside.
"Auuughhh.. My head it hurts." chibi Sae groaned in pain. She saw girl lying down in a bed while hugging a puppy soft toy that looks similar to hers and doctor Sayuu talking to each other.
"You're finally awake huh?" Sayuu said.
"Where am I? Where's Papa and Mama?" chibi Sae asked.
"They died in a car crash. Im sorry." Sayuu told Sae as tears came out of his eyes. Sae cried loudly. The girl who is hugging a soft toy cried too.
"Im sorry to hear that.." the girl cried.
Sae looked at the girl and calmed down a little as she felt very safe when she saw the girl. "I have that kind of puppy soft toy too and it's my favourite." Sae sniffed and pointed at the puppy.
"I have that kind of scarf too and it's my favourite too." the girl sniffed and smiled a little bit at Sae to calm her down.
Mario and Haruna are now crying and hugging each other. "I wonder if Yuki-chan and Sae-chan still remembers us." Mario cried.
"My name is Miyazawa Sae! What's yours?" Sae asked and smiled too to show that she has calmed down a little bit.
"My name is Kojima Yuki. Nice to meet you." Yukirin introduced herself.
Sayuu went out of the room to talk to Mario and Haruna.
"Looks like they still remembers their names but they don't remember each other. You can come in now if you want to." Sayuu told them. Sayuu, Mario and Haruna went inside the room. Sae was giving them a sad and confused look while Yukirin smiled and called them. "Otousan! Okasan!"
Mario and Haruna smiled a Yuki and went to her and hug her. While Sae became sad again as she wants her parents to hug her too.
"Your parents..?" Sae asked. After hearing this. Sayuu, Mario and Haruna's smile became a frown again even Yukirin frowned out of sympathy.
"Yes.." Yuki said.
"You're lucky.." Sae said and smiled a little.
"Yuki-chan, I will talk to your parents outside for awhile." Sayuu told chibi Yuki. Sayuu, Mario and Haruna went out of the room.
"I'll keep Sae.. It will be bad for both of them if you raise Yuki with Sae." Sayuu told Mario and Haruna.
"Wait.. But what will happen to Kai and Acchan's money?" Haruna asked.
"It will go to Sae and Sae only." Sayuu told them.
"That's good.." Mario and Haruna exclaimed.
"Sayaka is older than Sae. She's quite close to Sae but not as close as Sae is close to Yuki." Sayuu told them.
"Ja.. I'll leave Sae's health to you but let's meet up every month since I want to see how Sae's health is improving and I want her to remember Yuki again." Mario told Sayuu.
"That's a deal." Sayuu agreed.
End of Mario's Flashback
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Mario continued eating while thinking of ways to let Sae and Yuki remember each other's past again. Mayuyu, Sae and Yukirin were having a conversation.
"So.. was it the puppy outside that you picked up yesterday?" Mayuyu asked Sae. "Yup!"
"EEHHH!!?? The puppy is outside!? I want to see it! Can I look at it after we eat?" Yukirin asked with a shocked yet excited look at her face.
"Suree." Sae said.
The three girls hurriedly ate their lunch successfully without choking but Mario finished eating first. After that, the three girls went outside to take a look at the puppy while Mario do the dishes.
"Huwaa~!! Kawaiii~!" Yukirin said then pet the puppy. Mayuyu also pet the puppy.
"FLUFFEH~!" Mayuyu said and snuggled the puppy.
"Hahaha.." Sae laughed awkwardly.
The two girls were still petting the dog. Sae looked at her watch to check the time. It is already late in the afternoon.
"Anoo.. It's already late in the afternoon so I should go now." Sae said. The two girls stopped petting the puppy.
"AHH! GOMEN! Sorry for keeping you late!" Yukirin apologised.
"Gomen Sae-chan." Mayuyu apologised then bowed.
"Etoo.. Ano.. Can I have your phone number?" Yukirin asked Sae. Mayuyu shot a jealous glare at Yukirin.
"Sure.. Why not? It's xxxxxxx" Sae said.
"Arigato~" Yukirin thanked Sae.
Mayuyu just watched the scene jealously then went to Sae and hold her hand. This scene made Yukirin jealous too. Sae noticed the tension.
"Ahahaha.. Calm down. The two of you look like you want to eat each other up. I guess I should take my leave then." Sae said.
"Ahh~ Thank you for coming Sae-chan!" Mayuyu said then kissed Sae in the cheeks. Yukirin wanted to do it but she is not that close to Sae so she refrained herself to. After that, Sae put the leash on the puppy and walked towards the gate.
"Thanks for the lunch, Yukirin-san and Mayuyu-san!" Sae thanked them then walked off while Yukirin and Mayuyu waved her goodbye. Once Sae was out of their sight, the two girls went inside the house without talking to each other.
Since Mario is already done with the dishes, he's already in the living room. He noticed a tension between Mayuyu and Yukirin when they entered the house.
"Wooow! Chillax there! Have some kitkat!" Mario said. Mayuyu and Yukirin went to their room.
Mario went to Yukirin's room to talk to her. He found Yukirin hugging the puppy that chibi Sae gave her.
"Nee.. Don't you think think the puppy outside and that puppy look alike?" Mario said.
"Must be pure coincidence, Otousan." Yukirin said.
"You won't know. Maybe it's because of destiny." Mario said and winked at Yukirin then left the room to watch some Dora the Explorer.
Yukirin looked at the puppy that she was hugging.
"Destiny..?" she thought.
End of Chapter 3B
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Profile:
Kojima Yuki: A raven-haired girl with pale like snow skin. She has not been inlove before nor did she have a boyfriend/girlfriend. She has a younger sister called Mayuyu but she took her mother's last name. Sae's childhood friend but does not remember her due to amnesia.
Minegishi Mayuyu: An emotionless girl who only smiles when she is with her sister and other ikemen. Her elder sister is Yukirin but she took her mother's last name. Likes Sae.
Sayaka: A muscly girl. She is often called "Gorilla". She does not like going to onsens and open baths. She often stares at her body. She lives with Sae and likes to tease Sae. Akimoto Sayuu's daughter.
Miyazawa Sae: A boyish girl. She has not been inlove before nor did she have a boyfriend/girlfriend. She recently adopted a puppy (as said in the story). She lives with Sayaka. Both parents are dead. Yukirin's childhood friend but does not remember her due to amnesia.
Mayuki-mama: Hates animals.
Matsui Jurina: Mayuyu's friend. Boyish person and has a lot of pride.
Matsui Rena: Jurina's girlfriend.
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Sorry if I made anyone cry~ :bow: :bow:
I myself cried to. :cry:
I put the Dora the Explorer there to release the tension and also because of those cheesy trolls [x
It's now 3am something in my area so if there's any mistake then im really really sorry :bow:
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hohohooo yes you updateeee >o<)/
mario troll is success agaiin to make me laugh hard XD XD
and the flashback :cry: :cry: kai and acchan dead T^T
and whats with the dora the explorer?? XD i tear in joy XD
battle between yuki and mayu will be bad for themself XD
in reply to @zeelbulb you said than mayu is for someone else?? who is it????? i'm curious xd
thankyou for the update :bow:
update soon :grin:
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what the f*ck!
Of all people you will kill why its kai and acchan!my god cheesy!haha
Wait?where's haruna from the story?is she dead now thas why mario meet mayu's mom (miichan)
My god so maaannnnyyyy mystery!
Pls update soon cheesy!
I really love ur fic!haha
I want more!!
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Wow! This is funny! But you kill kaixacchan(chichay is on rage :lol: ). That's so sad! :cry:
Yuki watched Dora huh! :rofl: I hope her favorite character is the map. :rofl:
This is the only chapter i read. Gomene~ Promise i will read everything~ :deco:
I guess it's safe for me to read, since you don't make Mayu as a 3rd wheel right?! :twisted:
Please update soon~ :bow:
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yah of all character why kai and acchan!
Why not rhin_rhin or kuchi!
Or just u cheesy but not my otp!
My god cheesy u know i love u right but now my love for die to like kaixacchan!
haha
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Dafuq,, Kai Acchan is dead?? Yeah so the story focus SaeMaYuki only,, (http://www.laymark.com/l/o/07.gif) (http://www.laymark.com) good job for killing KaiAcchan (http://www.laymark.com/l/o/101.gif) (http://www.laymark.com) (Maybe after this KaiAcchan fans will kill me)
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@Chichay: Chi~ Hontoni gomensasai~! :bow: :bow: :bow:
@rhin_rhin: Si Mario yun XD I guess you'll kill me too :bleed eyes:
@fael_c00l: They will appear in some chapters though :P
@fuu_kun: Ohh you better be curious :lol: You'll know soon :P
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thank u for the saemayuyuki fanfics its really interesting and im curious about sae and yuki's past :) :? but im very worried what will happen to mayu if sae and yuki like each other i dont want mayu to be alone please :cry:
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to everyone that doesn't want Mayu to be sad and stuff: Mayu will have a happy ending ^_^ No worries!
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yeah.. i'm superrr curious here.. xd
you better not losing your paper and update soon then xp hohohooo (~"-")~
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Oi oi! Don't be lazy! Please update fast!!! :mon whine:
Please update for your fans' sake!! :mon blowhorn:
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^ chessy are being in vacation right now~~ :) hope she'll continue it soon
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I really love this fic! And I absolutely need an update! ^^
saeYuki is so sweet! ;)) x
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Chessy~ I hope you didnt forget bout this fic
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Sorry for the super duper supy dupy long update ><
@fuu_kun: I haven't forgotten about it :P
@michiyo48: Sorry for the long update :bow: :bow:
@correnereyes: I'm not lazy. I'm fabulous XD LOLJK Sorry for the long update :bow: :bow:
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Chapter 4
Shinoda Mario is in his room. He took out his cellphone from his pocket to call someone.
*RINGG!! RINGG!!*
[nyanyanyanyanyan Hello? Akimoto Sayuu desu. nyanyanyanyan] Akimoto Sayuu picked up the call with the NyanCat song plays on his background.
"Turn off that Nyancat song, Sayuu! It's gonna get stuck in my head again!" Mario ordered Sayuu.
[*click* Ok done.. So? Why'd you call? Did the plan work?]
"Yes. The plan worked. Luckily Mayuyu is so called willing to help by accident."
[Ok.. Then?]
"Sae went to our house yesterday. Both Yukirin and Sae doesn't seem to remember each other yet considering how they introduced themselves to each other. But.. Sigh.."
[Don't worry, Mario.. Thing will worked out just fine the future..... I hope..]
"Hope so too. Ja ne, Sayuu~." Mario said then hanged up. He sat on his bed then laid down with his left arm resting on his forehead.
"Sighh..."
-flashback- (In Miyazawa Mansion's Garden)
Mario and Kai are staring at the children, chibi Yukirin and chibi Sae, playing.
"Nee.. Mario. Sae has been crying a lot last night.." Kai informed Mario.
"Hmm..? What happened??" Mario asked.
"She has been crying because of Yukirin." Kai said.
"Because of Yukirin?! What did my angel do?" Mario asked shocked.
"Sae missed Yukirin a lot that she cried because of it.." Kai said.
"Woow. Yukirin has been in a bad mood last night too because she wanted to see Sae.." Mario replied.
"Maybe they're meant for each other." Kai said.
"Hahaha~ They're both girls though." Mario joked.
"Even so.." Kai said..
"Nee.. Let's make a deal, Mario."
"Huwaahh! Hold on, Midget. You're seriousness is creeping me out. Anyways, what's the deal?" Mario said.
"I want Sae and Yukirin to be together, as friends or anything. Anything as long as near each other. Even when I'm gone.." Kai said.
"Deal..." Mario agreed.
-End of flashback-
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"Otou-san!! I'm going out!" Mayuyu shouted from her room to Mario's room.
"What!? I can't hear you!!" a shout came from Mario's room.
"I'M GOING OUT!!!!!!!!!!"
"WAHHHHHH!!???"
"MAYUYU SAID SHE'S GOING OUT!! OH MY GOD! THE TWO OF YOU ARE SOO NOISY!" Yukirin shouted so loud that Mayuyu and Mario can hear it.
"OHHHHH~~ OK!!" Mario shouted back.
Someone opened the door of Mayuyu's room. It was Yukirin.
"Seriously, when you're going out at least go to otousan's room and ask for permission instead of shouting it. Geez... I was sleeping you know?" Yukirin complained then sat on Mayuyu's bed.
"Gomenne~ Yukirin-neechan~" Mayuyu apologized.
"It's ok.. Where are you going anyway?" Yukirin asked.
"Just going to walk around.. Anywhere- where my feet will take me." Mayuyu replied.
"Want me to go with you? I mean- I want to take some fresh air.." Yukirin asked.
"Sure.. Why not?" Mayuyu agreed.
"Wait. I'm going to change." Yukirin went to her room to change.
*skip*
Mayuyu and Yukirin were about to go down the stairs and go out but was interrupted by Mario who was well-dressed in his business suit.
"Where are the two of you going?" Mario asked them.
"Just going out for a walk.." Mayuyu told Mario.
"Can I come?" Mario asked.
"Sure." Mayuyu agreed.
The three of them went down the stairs, to the living room and to the main door. Mario opened the door when..
"WOAHH!! MIICHAN! YOU SCARED ME!" Mario screamed when he saw Miichan, taking out something from her bag, outside the house .
"HA! Unintentionally revenged you! You MARITROLL!" Miichan teased Mario and sticked her tongue out.
"Hmmm? Where are all of you going? Going for a family walk? Mouu! Don't leave me behind!!" Miichan pouted.
"You can come with us, okasan~" Mayuyu said.
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The Shinoda family has been walking around everywhere. Miichan, Yukirin and Mario were following Mayuyu all the way.
"Nee.. Is it just me or are you going to the mansion, Mayuyu?" Miichan, who is clinging to Mario, asked.
"Yea.. Are you going to the mansion, Mayuyu?" Mario asked Mayuyu too.
"Maybe.. Maybe not too." Mayuyu told them. Yukirin suddenly felt excited going back to the mansion.
"Neee! Let's go to the mansion!" Yukirin told them.
"Suree~" they replied back.
"Let's stay overnight there too!" Yukirin said.
"Suree~~" Mario and Mayuyu said.
"I should have stayed there instead! Mouu~~ I spent the whole night there you know~" Miichan teased.
"Gomenne okasan~" Yukirin apologised.
"Daijoubu~" Miichan replied.
The Shinoda family walked to their mansion just to find a couple with someone who is wearing a creamy white scarf even though its summer is staring at their mansion's gate.
"Oshima Yuu!!!" Mario called. The Yuu and Haruna turned around to see the Shinoda family while the one who is wearing a creamy white scarf kept on staring at the mansion's gate.
"AHH~~ Mario~~~!!!!!!!!!!" Yuu ran to Mario while Haruna went to Miichan, Mayuyu and Yukirin to have a chitchat with them.
"Huwaa~ Its good to see you here! Who's that?" Mario asked while looking at the one who is staring at the gate.
"Sae.." Yuu whispered sadly.
"Wahh? Sae recovered her memories already?" Mario asked while whispering.
"Not yet.. But she always come here to stare at your mansion's gate." Yuu whispered.
"Wait.. How did she know the two of you?" Mario asked.
"Sayuu introduced us again to Sae a few months after the accident, you know.. Sigh.. I miss that Midget and Acchan.." Yuu whispered.
"I see.. Well, let's go inside shall we?" Mario told everyone. Sae stopped looking at the gate then looked at them.
"You too, Sae!" Mario and Yuu said the same time.
"SAE-CHAN~~~~~~~" Mayuyu went to Sae and clung to her. Behind them, Yukirin looked at Sae and felt very happy until Mayuyu clung to Sae.
"Ahh~ Mayuyu! It's good to see you here~" Sae told Mayuyu.
"I live here you know~?" Mayuyu said.
"Ehh?" said the confused Sae.
"We have two houses~" Mayuyu told Sae.
"O-Ohh.." Sae said disappointedly.
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Everyone is inside the mansion's living room. Mayuyu and Sae were sitting with each other in one of the sofas while the others were sitting on another sofa which is not that far from them and were chitchatting. Yukirin kept staring at Sae. Sometimes, their eyes will meet but both of them will turn back after a seconds of eye contact. Fortunately, Mayuyu didn't notice.
"Nee.. Yukirin, Is it just me or you kept staring at Sae? Do you fancy her?" Haruna asked. The other adults stopped talking.
"W-Wah? She's a she, Harumama.. And.. She seems to have the same scarf- my favourite scarf that I lost when I was young.." Yukirin replied. The adults frowned and looked to the ground. Mario and Yuu bit their lips.
"Well, maybe its your scarf.." Haruna told Yukirin. The other adults looked at her in a shocked manner as they didn't expect that.
"Yea.. Maybe its your scarf. You should ask Sa- I mean her.." Miichan said.
"That can't be.." Yukirin said.
"Nee~ Miyazawa~ Where'd you get that scarf? It looks good." Mario asked Sae.
"I don't remember. But I know that someone precious gave it to me.." Sae replied. Mayuyu frowned because of Sae's reply. While Yukirin felt happy. "Why do I feel happy?" Yukirin thought.
The adults smiled at Sae's reply.
"Nee.. Sae~ last question.. Why were you staring at our gate?" Mario asked.
"My feet always bring me here.. I don't know why, sir.. I feel like there's something or someone in here but i don't know what it is or who it is.. But maybe I got the wrong house too." Sae replied back.
"Ohh~ Don't call me sir.. Just call me Mario-ojisan~" Mario told Sae.
"Ha-Hai.. Si- Mario-ojisan.." Sae said then turned back to Mayuyu to talk to her.
"Maybe Sa- Miyazawa-san is your long lost childhood lover, Yukirin.." Miichan told Yukirin.
"But she's a she, okasan.. I'm straight.. But.. She's ikemen-looking too and asfdfjkdgfsafdkeula" Yukirin mumbled at the end.
"Nee.. Want to stay overnight here?" Miichan asked Haruna and Yuu.
"Sure.. What about Sae?" Haruna asked.
"Of course she can." Mario said and it made Yukirin blush.
"I'm going to invite the other families too." Mario said then took off his phone and started texting the other families. Yuu looked at Mario's phone while Mario is texting.
[(To: Noobs)Come and stay overnight tonight at my mansion tonight. Quick. Bring your kids too. I want to discuss something. IMPORTANT]
"Good idea Mario! But take off the 'Noobs'. You're noober." Yuu teased then slapped the back of Mario's head playfully. The two started to run and chase each other inside the mansion.
"Geez.. Boys will be boys.." Miichan said.
"Sae~ We're going to stay overnight here~ You too, okay?" Haruna told Sae.
"Hai~!" Sae said. Mayuyu started to hug tightly on Sae.
"Nee.. Harumama, how'd you know Miyazawa-san?" Yukirin asked.
"You'll know soon, Yukirin~" Miichan and Haruna said the same time. They both looked at each other and high-fived for saying the same thing at the same time.
"AHHH!! A REPLY!!" Mario shouted excitedly then raised the phone high to make a triumph pose.
"Let me see! Let me see!!" Yuu said while jumping as he was trying to snatch the phone from Mario but Mario is too tall.
"Every family agreed to stay overnight here~~" Mario told everyone.
"YAYYYYY~~!!" Yuu said excitedly then texted his butler to bring his clothes to the mansion.
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The other families came to the mansion with their kids and butlers. They were all now in the living room. Luckily, The Shinoda's Mansion's living is too big for them that there were still a lot of space. Yukirin is still staring at Sae and all of the families noticed but they let it go.
"Yo Sae and Mayuyu!" Sayaka waved to them then sit beside them.
"Sayaka? Why are you here?" Sae asked.
"We were invited. Every family that is close to the Shinoda family was invited you know?" Sayaka said.
"Ehh..?" Sae said. Sae is confused to what is happening right now that she stood up. "I'm going to the garden."
Sae walked off. Haruna pushed Yukirin slightly. "Follow her." Haruna told Yukirin then Yukirin went to follow Sae silently.
End of Chapter 4
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Profiles:
Kojima Yuki: A raven-haired girl with pale like snow skin. She does not have a boyfriend/girlfriend. She has a younger sister called Mayuyu but she took her mother's last name. Sae's childhood friend but does not remember her due to amnesia.
Minegishi Mayuyu: An emotionless girl who only smiles when she is with her sister and other ikemen. Her elder sister is Yukirin but she took her mother's last name. Likes Sae.
Akimoto Sayaka: A muscly girl. She is often called "Gorilla". She does not like going to onsens and open baths. She often stares at her body. She lives with Sae and likes to tease Sae. Akimoto Sayuu's daughter.
Miyazawa Sae: A boyish girl. She does not have a boyfriend/girlfriend. She recently adopted a puppy (as said in the story). She lives with Sayaka. Both parents are dead. Yukirin's childhood friend but does not remember her due to amnesia.
Minegishi Minami: Hates Animals.
Oshima Haruna: Yukirin's biological mother. Divored with Mario and married Yuu.
Oshima Yuu: The naughtiest of all the families. Takes care of Sae.
Shinoda Mario: Father of Yukirin and Mayuyu. Divored with Haruna and married Miichan.
Akimoto Sayuu: Father of Sayaka. Takes care of Sae.
Matsui Jurina: Mayuyu's friend. Boyish person and has a lot of pride.
Matsui Rena: Jurina's girlfriend.
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What will happen in the garden?
What are the adults of all families are planning?
Stay tuned to Chapter 5! :D
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Yeah! Me wait chapter 5! Aghh, mayu has one sided love ._. Well, i know now saeyuki fic is so rare >< and not fished so many people.. But please keep this fic up cheesy! Okey dokey? X'D Ganbacheesy!
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I finally caught up with this one
I like the fact that you have character explanations right at the end of the chapter, which is cool and a constant reminder of all characters within the story
Although Mayuyu is a going to develop into a very interesting character :thumbsup
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Chessy!! You finally updated!! Yay! :)))
Aw! Poor Mayu... She has one sided love D:
I feel so sorry for MaYuki fans xD
Please continue to update!!
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Finally you updated it..
I hope they will get their memories back, both Sae and Yukirin..
Please update chapter 5 soon! Fighting and good luck! ;) x
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OOOHHH CHEEESSSSYYYYY~~~ Where is the update you promised? you said it was suppose to be updated Yesterday March 15...
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@fuu_kun: of course I'll continue this fic~ :deco:
@kurosawa87: Thank you for reading! :D
@correnereyes: LOL Mayu likes Sae here not Yukirin :P Sorry if the fic is confusing :bow:
@michiyo48: I wanna put their memories back soon too. but I guess I'll add more drama in the fic :P
@mayuyuXlyukirinlover13: 15th march: was in a bad mood... 16th march: well, I guess you know what happened :nervous
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Chapter 5
-in the garden-
Sae is just strolling in the garden, which is full of well cut grass and colourful flowers grown on it, of the Shinoda family mansion. She's confused of what happened inside the mansion. Her feet automatically brought her to the garden like she's been there before- well, she actually did but she don't remember.
"How did I know that there's a garden here? Why does this place seems so familiar.. It's like.. I've been here before.." Sae thought.
Sae kept walking around and admiring the flowers that were grown properly and neatly. Tulips, roses, sunflowers, pansies and many more. Pansies attracted Sae's attention the most but she continued walking and found a nice and comfortable empty place. Sae decided to sit on the grass then lied down to make herself feel more comfortable.
"Oi Miyazawa!" A manly voice that Sae can't recognise called her. Sae sit up and looked at the person who called her. The person is a man wearing a rather fashionable classy suit and is with a woman clinging onto him.
"Mouu~ Don't talk to rough on her. Chyuu~" the woman said in a strawberry-like voice.
"I'm not talking rough on her. Don't worry.." the man said and tapped the woman's nose gently. Sae just looked at them with a confused look.
"Miyazawa!" the man called her family name again and walked to her with the woman still clinging on him.
"We met before, but I bet you don't remember. But meh. I'm Itano Tomo, the next successor of the Itano company, and this is my wife, Itano Tomomi." the man said and his wife, Tomomi, winked at him. "Chyuu~" Tomomi said.
"Nice to meet you, Itano-san.. And yes, I don't remember where or when we met.. Though, I'm Miyazawa Sae." Sae replied.
"I know that.." Tomo said then looked up at the direction behind Sae. "Oh, and.. STOP HIDING YUKIRIN! I KNOW YOU'RE THERE!" Tomo shouted.
Sae looked behind and saw Yukirin slowly revealing herself behind a patch of sunflowers.
"I wasn't hiding, Uncle Tomo.." Yukirin said softly but loud enough for them to hear. Yukirin just stood on where she is.
"Sure, you weren't.. Hiding there and looking at Sae all the way~" Tomo said sarcastically. "Well, we'll leave the two of you alone now."
"Let's go, Chyuu." the man said and walked away. "Chyuu~"
Sae looked at Yukirin with a confused look while Yukirin is giving her a rather awkward and shy smile. The atmosphere became super awkward for Sae that she decided to break it.
"Hey!" Sae said and smiled energetically.
"Hey!" Yukirin blushed and smiled then swept her hair to the back of her right ear.
"Ka-Kawaii.." Sae thought.
"Come here.. Sit beside me. Standing for so long is quite uncomfortable you know.." Sae told Yukirin. Yukirin walked slowly to Sae in a rather, sexy manner in Sae's eyes. Yukirin sat beside Sae.
"Your scarf.." Yukirin said.
"Hmm? What about it?" Sae said then looked at the white creamy scarf she's wearing.
"Isn't it too hot to wear a scarf?" Yukirin asked.
"It is but I can't help but to wear it. Its too precious, that's why." Sae replied.
"Umm.. I used to have the same scarf as you.." Yukirin said.
"Ohh nice~ You know, someone just gave this scarf to me.. But, sadly, I don't remember who.." Sae said.
"I know that feeling.. When you have something that someone gave you but you don't remember who gave it to you. Sigh.." Yukirin complained and sighed.
"What did that person give you?" Sae asked.
"A plushie-A puppy plushy.." Yukirin replied.
"Ehhh~! I love puppy plushy! Can you show me a picture of it?" Sae asked excitedly. Yukirin took out her phone from her pocket and switched it on. She showed Sae her wallpaper which is Yukirin hugging the puppy plushy.
"Huwaa! I used to have that kind of plushy when I was young but I lost it." Sae continued.
"Looks like we have a lot of common.." Yukirin blushed.
"Achooo!" Yukirin sneezed. "Sorry, its getting cold.." Yukirin apologized and rubbed her arms to keep her warm.
"Here, take my scarf.." Sae said then took off her scarf and put it on Yukirin. Yukirin blushed deeply on Sae's actions.
"Th-Thank you.." Yukirin stuttered as she blushed more.
"No problem.. Let's go inside now, shall we? Oh, and lead me there since.. It's my first time here, I guess?" Sae said and tilted her head a little. Sae stood up and Yukirin tried to stand up too but her legs were numb for sitting still for so long.
"Gomen.. My legs are feeling numb.." Yukirin said.
"Woahh~ What a wrong timing to get a numb in the leg." Yukirin thought.
Sae squat down in front of Yukirin. "Here.. cling onto me.. I'll carry you." Sae said.
"Th-thank you again.." Yukirin said and clung onto Sae. Sae piggybacked her and Yukirin gave her directions to go back inside the mansion.
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Sae and Yukirin finally got inside the mansion. The elders, who were sitting comfortable in the sofas, were talking about having a holiday trip while the youngsters were in the kitchen, doing god knows what. Sae and Yukirin decided to join the youngsters instead.
"So? Where do you think we should go for a holiday?" Sayuu asked. Yuu and Mario looked at the ceiling and whistled.
"Great.. No plans? Very grateful of the two of you." Haruna said sarcastically. Yuu looked at Tomo all of a sudden then smirked.
"Don't worry, love. I think Tomo has plans!" Yuu said then pointed at Tomo.
"I have no plans." Tomo said in monotone.
"I think he meant that we use the new island. Chyuu~" Tomomi said. Tomo facepalmed himself.
"HOHOHOHO! See! Now we have somewhere to go!" Mariko laughed.
"Island? You have a new private island?" Miichan asked Tomo and Tomomi.
"Tomo just bought it. Chyuu~" Tomomi said. "We went there on our anniversary. Chyuu~" she continued.
"Is it fine with you, Tomo?" Sayuu asked.
"N-" Tomo was cut off by Tomomi. "Yes. Chyuu~"
"I guess I can't argue with that now.." Tomo said.
"Now we have somewhere new to sleep at!" Sashihara Ryou said excitedly.
"Keep quiet!" Sashihara Aika hissed at Ryou and slapped him gently.
"Aww~ Rabutan is soo tsun~" Sasshi pouted.
"Anyways, is your place big enough to let us all stay, Tomo?" Mario asked.
"More than enough.." Tomo replied. "I know what all of you are plannin, Mario."
"Hmm?" Sayuu raised his eyebrow.
"All of you are planning to let Sae and Yukirin remember each other, right?" Tomo asked.
"Yep. Good that you know because we don't plan to hide it." Yuu suddenly said seriously.
"Well, I'm up to it too. Since I owe Acchan a lot- Oh and Kai too." Tomo said. "Anyways, the air tickets are not free. Pay it your-"
Tomo was cut out by a crying sound. Sayaka came out of the kitchen carrying a chibi Sashihara Aoi who is crying and Matsui Jurina who was making weird faces to stop Aoitan from crying.
"Huwaa!!" Aoitan cried.
"What happened?" Ryou and Rabutan rushed to Sayaka. Sayaka passed chibi Aoitan to Rabutan then Rabutan comforted Aoitan in with her motherly instincts.
"Anna said that I am a crybaby." chibi Aoitan cried.
"Well, you are a crybaby.." Ryou told chibi Aoitan which made her cry harder. Jurina made more funny faces to chibi Aoitan. The other elders facepalmed because of what Ryou said.
"Ryou!! You made it worser!!" Rabutan hissed to Ryou.
"Huwaa!!!!" Another crying sound came out. Itano Haruka(Paruru) came out of the kitchen with chibi Sashihara Anna.
"What now?" Ryou sighed.
"I'm sleepy!! Huwaa!" Anna cried.
"It's getting late." Matsui Akane(Churi) said after she checked her watch. "We should all go to sleep." Churi continued and looked at Matsui Airi(Airin), her husband, sleeping on her left shoulder.
"She's right." Sayuu said after checking his watch too and looked at the Yamamoto family who were already asleep at the sofa. Sayuu walked up to them and woke them up.
The Shinoda family went to their own rooms while the other families borrowed a room.
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Rena and Jurina stayed in the same room. They were now lying down in a queen sized bed.
"Rena-chan~~~" Jurina tried to hug Rena but Rena pushed her away.
Rena took a bolster and put it in between her and Jurina.
"You see this bolster? That's a barrier and you're not allowed to pass it." Rena said coldly.
"I have super powers!! I can break it easily!" Jurina sat up and punched the bolster lightly to imitate a superhero then she put it gently on the other side of her, where it won't block her from Rena. Jurina then hugged Rena tightly. Rena tried to break free but Jurina is too strong.
"Mouu!! You're cheating!" Rena blushed and said irritatedly.
"Rena tsundere~" Jurina whispered on Rena's ears seductively.
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End of Chapter 5
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Profiles:
Kojima Yuki: A raven-haired girl with pale like snow skin. She does not have a boyfriend/girlfriend. She has a younger sister called Mayuyu but she took her mother's last name. Sae's childhood friend but does not remember her due to amnesia.
Minegishi Mayuyu: An emotionless girl who only smiles when she is with her sister and other ikemen. Her elder sister is Yukirin but she took her mother's last name. Likes Sae.
Akimoto Sayaka: A muscly girl. She is often called "Gorilla". She does not like going to onsens and open baths. She often stares at her body. She lives with Sae and likes to tease Sae. Akimoto Sayuu's daughter.
Miyazawa Sae: A boyish girl. She does not have a boyfriend/girlfriend. She recently adopted a puppy (as said in the story). She lives with Sayaka. Both parents are dead. Yukirin's childhood friend but does not remember her due to amnesia.
Minegishi Minami: Hates Animals.
Oshima Haruna: Yukirin's biological mother. Divored with Mario and married Yuu.
Oshima Yuu: The naughtiest of all the families. Takes care of Sae.
Shinoda Mario: Father of Yukirin and Mayuyu. Divored with Haruna and married Miichan.
Akimoto Sayuu: Father of Sayaka. Takes care of Sae.
Matsui Jurina: Mayuyu's friend. Boyish person and has a lot of pride.
Matsui Rena: Jurina's girlfriend.
Yamamoto Sayou: Husband of Yamamoto Miyuki(Milky).
Yamamoto Miyuki(Milky): Wife of Yamamoto Sayou.
Itano Tomomi: Wife of Itano Tomo.
Itano Tomo: Husband of Itano Tomomi. Owns Itano company.
Sashihara Ryou: Husband of Sashihara Aika(Rabutan). Father of Aoitan and Anna. Very mischievous and loud.
Sashihara Aika: Wife of Sashihara Ryou. Mother of Aoitan and Anna.
Sashihara Aoi: 7 years old. Child of Sashihara Ryou and Aika. A crybaby; cries easily.
Sashihara Anna: 8 years old. Child of Sashihara Ryou and Aika. A bully and very mischievous like her father.
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Are there more families to come?
What does Itano Tomo owe Kai and Acchan?
What will they do to Sae and Yukirin in the holiday?
Find out more in Chapter 6! :D
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So many new characters introduced in this chapter.... :)
Development of the main characters will be tested with the new ones
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Woooo! An update!! :ding:
I will edit now and post maybe at the evening... :on study:
Update soon! Please! :mon pray2:
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Wohohoho... I love the long chappy! XD greats chapter cheesy!!
They all are planning to make sae and yuki remember each other.. :3 but how about mayu? I didnt see her in this chappy :3
I'm super curios now.. > w <
Thankyou for the updatee :bow: and enjoy your holiday =D
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At last, I can comment because I have an account right now, but still, can I be the silent reader? :wub: And I hope you don't mind about it, I will comment from time to time, by the way, the chapter is very nice, more character was introduced. Kojiyuu, MariiMii, Tomo Tomo, this is so nice! :P
Wmatsui is so romantic! And I really love it!! :inlove:
So what will happen to Sae and Yuki? Now I'm curious about it, I'll be waiting for your update! :twothumbs:
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Thank you!! Thank youthankyouthankyouthankyou~!! You don't Know HOW LONG I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS :w00t:
I ♥ you(?) so much for doing this (Happy I edited this? )
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I like the couples but something confuses me. Sasshi and Rabutan were Mayuyu's friends right?
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Uh oh.. thx for informing.. guess I'll have to edit that.
I've edited the school trip part. I changed Sasshi and Lovetan to Kitarie and Yuihan ^_^
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How sweet Sae and Yukirin hehe
Well, thats okay if you want to put some dramas as long as Sae and Yukirin will always be together lol ;)
Cant wait for the next update! And thank you! :)
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I have Loved this fic for a while :twothumbs
I cant wait for the next part but it's been a while right... :?
Have you got writers block for this fic? :?
anyway...Its Still great...Looking forward to Chapter 6 :panic:
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:( Update please...... I miss this story
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Update please :bow: :bow: :bow: