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-- LOVE DESTINY --
Prologue (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31159.msg1071377#msg1071377)
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-- HEROES --
Chapter One -- Part One (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31159.msg971343#msg971343) Part Two (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31159.msg971630#msg971630)
Chapter Two (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31159.msg972019#msg972019)
Chapter Three -- Part One (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31159.msg972383#msg972383) Part Two (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31159.msg972426#msg972426)
Chapter Four (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31159.msg972507#msg972507)
Chapter Five (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31159.msg973305#msg973305)
Chapter Six -- Part One (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31159.msg974581#msg974581) Part Two (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31159.msg974598#msg974598)
Chapter Seven (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31159.msg974915#msg974915)
Chapter Eight -- Part One (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31159.msg975556#msg975556) Part Two (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31159.msg977749#msg977749) Part Three (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31159.msg979491#msg979491) Part Four (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31159.msg981091#msg981091)
Chapter Nine -- Part One (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31159.msg982828#msg982828) Part Two (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31159.msg998068#msg998068)
Chapter Ten -- Part One (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31159.msg1003647#msg1003647) Part Two (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31159.msg1003901#msg1003901) Part Three (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31159.msg1006528#msg1006528) Part Four (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31159.msg1047080#msg1047080)
Chapter Eleven (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31159.msg1048575#msg1048575) Part Two (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31159.msg1049304#msg1049304) Part Three (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31159.msg1055024#msg1055024)
Chapter Twelve - Final (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31159.msg1067528#msg1067528)
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Heroes
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Akihabara was once a peaceful land who ruled by King Akimoto. After he passed away, the land split into three kingdoms who ruled by his three sons. In fact, all of them were adopted by King Akimoto, but he always treated them as his real son. Each of them was granted with a powerful magic crystal which is called “crilyst”. Legends said that each crilyst has its own power and for who own all those magic crystal shall be the ruler of the world.
Not long after King Akimoto passed away, one amongst the siblings suddenly been acting weird… his action and words became cruel and immoral. Soon after, he came to the plan on taken down two others kingdom and took the crilyst to become the ruler of the world.
The time has come…
People were screaming breaks the silence of the night. Fire everywhere burned down the kingdom, somewhere in the palace was in chaotic situation.
“Just leave us here! Hurry!” Said a man in bloody form, holding sword and beside him stood a woman with her clothes stained by blood. “Please take good care of her, Kojima-san” said the woman beside that man.
“I will. My King and My Queen. I’ll protect Princess Takahashi and the crilyst till the last breath.” Said the great general of Takahashi Kingdom.
“Sorry to trouble you and your family, Kojima-san.” King Takahashi apologized to his great general. “And if you could, please find Maeda’s heir. I believe they have sent their son away to a safe place.”
“This is my honor to serve you, My King. I’ll do my very best.” She bowed and left with teary eyes with a three years old girl whose sleep soundly in her arms.
“I wonder how is the situation on Maeda Kingdom…” said King Takahashi hold his wife tightly before facing the armies.
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Shadow of a man sat on the throne watching those people who won’t change loyalty for him get slaughtered. That man smiled to himself, “Now now, Takahashi kingdom already mine and I just have to take down Maeda kingdom next, and I, Matsui Jurenai will be the ruler of the world! Huahahahaha….”
Soon after, a messenger came in to deliver the situation of the other kingdom, “My King, the other side was reported they have taken down the palace. All royal families were slaughtered.”
Kurosuke walk down from the throne and shed crocodile tears. He put his arm on the shoulder of the messenger and said, “You know, I’m sad that I have to lose my two brothers. My father devoted them.” Suddenly he laugh and grinning crazily, “But I don’t know why.. my head said that I should be happy, VERY HAPPY” and the voice of his laugh filled the night.
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“Brother, please take care of him.” Said King Maeda to his best friend.
“Of course I will. For the name of Oshima Family, I’ll raise him up to be a great knight just like you.” Said the man showing his dimples by grinning confidently.
“I just hoping he won’t grow up as pervert man like you.” King Maeda said jokingly to Oshima. They both laugh loudly until the face of Maeda frown. “I believe Takahashi have sent his daughter away too. Please find her and protect her behalf me, behalf Maeda family.” Said King Maeda while put his hand on Oshima’s shoulder. Then he turn to face his son. “Atsuko, you’re three years old now. You should understand the situation and go with uncle Oshima, okay?”
The raven hair good-looking boy wore a sleeveless white suit with long coat outside. He tried to hold back his tears and tighten his grip as he nodded. King Maeda smile and hug him “That’s my boy… and.. please keep this crystal safely. Do not lose it.” He gave the magic crystal to his son and slightly push him away to Oshima.
“Let’s go, Prince!” said Oshima hurry drag the young prince and running down to the secret passage.
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Wow. :ding: Sounds very interesting.
Please keep going. :kneelbow:
hope you update soon. :hee:
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Oh! It's sounds quite interesting!!! XD
:w00t: This time Takamina is the princess and Acchan is the prince??!!!
Sounds interesting!!!! XD
Please continue :bow:
I want to know more about what will happen to Takamina and Acchan 8)
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Maeda as a boy whilst takahashi as a girl.... let see how the story flow... please update soon... thank you...
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Takagirl. Atsuboy. Rolling on my bed. Getting excited all over. Very interesting. Need to know what happen next. Update soon.
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sounds really interesting :ding:
hey! Takamina is the girl? and Atsuko the boy?? :dunno: :dunno:
kind of weird
but please continue the story and update soon
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（*´ｖ`*） thanks for the comment.
:heart: here's chapter one. Hope you'll like it （*´ｖ`*）
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Chapter 1
Fugitive
“Dear… Their descendants still alive… You must not let any of them live. Their descendants will just bring misfortune for you to rule the world… they’re jinx.. their stars completely against yours… you must destroy them…and get those crilyst.. ”
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The sound of horse tapping clearly heard in the middle of highway. Two people were quarrel along the way. “This is the only way. We have to separate or else we might be captured by the armies!” said general Kojima to her assistant.
“No! I said No! We should be fine.” Minegishi scold back.
“Think it! Two adults with three children. Can we really protect them while fighting with those outnumbered armies? Please consider your son’s safety.”
“Then what about your son? What about you? What about princess? Can you guarantee their safety?”
Kojima silent for a while, hard to face her son. She looked at princess’ angelic face then turn to face Minegishi. “That’s why I trusted my son to you.”
“What?” Minegishi was surprised to hear that.
A pair of small hands grabs Kojima’s sleeve. “Mom, do I really have to be separated from you?” asked a six years old young boy with teary eyes.
“Be brave, Haruna. It’s just for a while. I’ll be reunited with you soon. Just go with your aunt okay?” The tears flowing all over his charming face.
“Promise?” he raised his pinky finger to her mom. Kojima made a pinky promise to her son then Haruna hug her mother tightly, “I’ll miss you, mom.”
General Kojima kiss his son’s forehead and wave him goodbye. “I count on you Minegishi. See you later” and with that, general Kojima disappeared with princess Takahashi into the woods while Minegishi continue her way by cart.
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Meanwhile at Oshima resident.
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“There.. there.. this is our new home! Home Sweet Home!” said old Oshima happily while get in into their new house.
The house was simple build from woods with completely four bedrooms, kitchen, living room, and a large backyard. The house was in east wings of a small village called Harmonia. People there were mostly polite and warm to each others. This village was the place where old Oshima grown up, since his grandpa’s house still in there he decide to bring up a peaceful life there to raised up both prince Maeda and his daughter, Oshima Yuko, who is currently six years old.
Years after years, Oshima diligently teach them martial arts and power of "Nen" everyday. "Nen" is an internal strength that flowing inside human body which can be use to strengthen physical being and doing something like lift up a huge stone with one finger, flying, create flame, etc. Besides, he also taught them about calligraphy, weapon, alchemist, herbs and war strategy. While Yuko always complain as she does usually, Atsuko learn all of it seriously. He takes everything seriously and is such a fast-learner.
“You’re son is a capable man, dude” said old Oshima to himself and smile gently. “Well.. I’m gonna do some shopping. Don’t talk to any stranger okay?”
“Okay” answered Atsuko.
“Do Not bring any women back home! Do Not drink! Do Not go to the PUB!” warned Yuko pointing her father while dried some herbs and tea leaves.
“Ha….haha….” Oshima turn back and laugh sheepishly.
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Oshima mumbling to herself while going to the market.
Ten years have past, Maeda.. I really regret for leaving you too early. I should stay longer and beg for more… Damn! Your son has such big appetite! The money you gave me is running out now! Ugghhh…. I think I have to find some job.. or else we all gonna starve to death..
*Iieeeekkk* (eagle sound) suddenly an eagle thrust against Oshima’s direction.
“Waaaa… What a big eagle! Is it aiming my food? Uh.. no way..”
*Iieeekkk* (eagle sound) The eagle flying around Oshima’s head and drop a letter then flied away.
Wait, that eagle seems familiar. Is that Kojima’s eagle?
Oshima hurriedly pick up the letter and read it.
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To my little pervert werewolf,
How have you been? I’ve found out that you go back to “FIRSTCAMP”. The great Lion told me to find his sweet Cheetah’s doggy. Here I already have his kitty but I was attacked by wild Bear in the middle of my way to your place. I know you have the doggy, how bout we make a deal tomorrow’s night. I’ll wait for you in RIVER, please be there after midnight.
From your little tiger.
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Finished reading the letter, Oshima recalled some old days where he and his friends went camping in the forest.
Such an old nicknames, huh? I wonder how long it was since that time? Thirty years ago?
We’ve always been together all the time since the first meeting, Maeda, Takahashi, Kojima, Minegishi, Matsui, and me. What is exactly happen to that Matsui, he’s like… he’s completely a different person.
Doggy that Kojima mentioned must be prince Atsuko and that kitty is possibly princess Minami, then he’s being pursed by… Matsui’s armies!
What are you thinking, Matsui? Why you have to kill all their descendant.
Oshima hurriedly went back to his house and prepare things to meet Kojima.
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(´･_･`) sorry if it's bored...
But I'm waiting your comment for my improvement （*´ｖ`*）please advise me and thank you..
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Oh! :w00t: Update!!
XD I think Takamina will meet Atsuko soon :D
At first I was confused with the nicknames :? But then I read it again and I understood it 8)
I can't wait to read what will happen next ;)
Thanks for the Update :thumbsup :peace:
And Please Update Soon :bow:
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nice2!! :twothumbs not boring at all!!! :smhid
need to know more detailed.. I got confused with the code name... LOL... :lol:
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Oh Acchan is boy, interesting!
Lol I like the coded language ^^
Oh the nen like hunterXhunter?
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>///< sorry for confusing you with the code..
Pervert werewolf = Oshima (Yuko's father)
Firstcamp = Oshima's grandpa house in Harmonia village
Great lion = Takahashi (Minami's father)
Sweet cheetah = Maeda (Atsuko's father)
Wild bear = Matsui Jurenai who take down Takahashi and Maeda Kingdom
Little tiger = Kojima (Haruna's mother)
@kahem : ^^yes.. the Nen is like hunterXhunter but is more like Rune power in RPG :D
This fic based on adventure storyline :cool1:
Thank you for the comment :love:
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I'm a little confuse in this chapter :dunno: :dunno:
Can you please this chapter a little more precise :kneelbow:
but please continue the storie don't let this stop you
update soon(maybe I'll understand the next chapter)
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Thank you for the comment :)
I'll try my best to improve my writing >//<
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Chapter 1
Fugitive part 2
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Somewhere in the forest near Harmonia village.
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“Kojima-san, are you alright?” asked a little girl who sat beside wounded general Kojima. Her outfit was filthy and boyish. Her hair were messy and disordered. Dust and soil cover her face makes her looks like a poor lost wanderer.
Kojima’s wound was fatal. She already lost a lot of blood and she knew that she won’t hold anymore longer. She is now rest under a hundred years big tree. The tree has an unusual shape. It’s circling like a rainbow and its leaves cover from above like a shelter.
“Minami, please open your mouth.”
Little Minami nodded and open her mouth obediently. Kojima took out a shining crystal which slightly burning like a flame. She put it in princess’ mouth then used her power of “Nen” and force the crystal inside the princess’ body.
“Wha.. what is that thing, Kojima-san? Why you put it in my body?” asked the confused princess.
“That’s the crylist… belonging of your father.. you must not lose it.. so I think it’s the best way to hide it inside your body… cough…” Kojima coughing hard.
“Minami.. I am afraid that I couldn’t protect you anymore..”
Tears starting to fill in the little princess’ eyes as Kojima continued, “From now on, you have to protect yourself... I’m sorry I can’t keep my promise to your father…ugh…cough” Kojima starting to cough blood.
“Please.. don’t say too much. You need rest, Kojima-san. I’ll go find some herbs to heal your wound.” Said the princess worriedly. Before she go, Kojima grab her wrist.
“I know my body well. My time is up… please… listen to my last will… will you?”
Minami can’t help the tears flowing. She nodded and walk near Kojima’s side, listen carefully to what Kojima said. “My princess, do you still remember my son, Haruna?” Minami nodded.
“Then take this..” Kojima handed over a well-crafted necklace to her. “If you ever meet my son, tell him I am sorry that I can’t keep my promise and… I love him… I’ll be watch over him.. always..” and with that, Kojima gave out her last breath.
“Kojma-san… Kojima-san! Wake up please! Don’t leave me alone.. please…” Minami burst out tears and cried loudly. She cried until she fell asleep beside Kojima’s cold body.
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At the midnight in the forest
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Whoooooo (wolf sound)
Little Minami wakes up after hearing the wolf cries. She panickly grab Kojima arms and tried to drag her away.
With this little body, it is impossible for Minami to do it. “Kojima-san, wake up please! There’re wolves coming here. Please.. wake up…” Tears filled her beautiful face.
Whoooooo (wolf sound) the sound is getting closer and closer
Still not give up, Minami trying to drag Kojima to hide in the bush.
“Kwakkkkk” suddenly there’re plenty of crows appeared nowhere and attack Minami. She’s waving both of her hands to make the crows go away.
But the crows continuously getting closer to her and make her to edge back. She didn’t know that behind her was a hill. Minami step back and step back and finally, her feet touch nothing.
“Ahhhhhhhhh….!!!!!!!!!!” Minami screamed as she fell into the merciless strong stream below.
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Oshima POV
“River….river… as long as I remember it’s a nickname for a big strange tree around here."
As I walking near to the tree, I saw something. “Is that you Kojima?” I called, but no answer.
Hmm.. I shouldn’t be careless to just walk in there. That might not be Kojima. Should I use our little signal to call out each other?
I decided to use wolf’s sound to test if that person is Kojima. “Whoooo… whhoooo”
I can see someone is moving but not clear because it’s so dark here in the forest. I walk closer slowly and still giving my sign ‘Whooo… whhhoooooo”
Suddenly plenty of crows appear from nowhere. Not long after, I heard a girl screaming. I hurriedly dash to the source of the sound to save the girl but it’s too late.
That little figure fell from the hill to the stream below before my eyes. “Damn it!” I punch the tree beside me, when I turn around and my foot hit something. Looking down to my foot, I found Kojima’s body.
“No way… could it be that little figure is princess Takahashi…?” If that is princess Takahashi then I’ve done something unforgivable.
I have to make sure if that girl is really the princess or not. “Kojima! Kojima! Toothless tiger! Wake up!” I tried to wake her up but I can only felt her body is cold, I can’t sense her pulse. Her heart has stopped beating...
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Man!!! I cried when Kojima died!!! :fainted: and I like your writing style... :on lol:
But what happen to princess Minami!!!! :mon scare: dareka!!! save her!!!! :mon pray2:
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AAAAHH~~~ what's the next? what happened???(http://i1110.photobucket.com/albums/h456/kiniki902/pig/cutepig69.gif)
panic panic panic(http://i1110.photobucket.com/albums/h456/kiniki902/pig/cutepig78.gif)
Thank for your fic :kneelbow: I like it :nya:
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Aww Kojima died...and minami trying to drag his dead body, trying to get run away from the wolfs... ;_______;
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Mama kojima is dead T_T
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Thanks for the comment :love:
I feel very happy to see you like my fic :yossi:
Let's continue for the next chapter :yossi:
Chapter 2
The meeting
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Somewhere in the Harmonia village
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Atsuko POV
“Uncle Oshima! Uncle Oshima!”
Uncle.. where have you been? I searched for you entirely five days. Did you get caught hang out with major’s wife and then got kick out from this village? Or you’re in the prison now? Or the worse… they’ve executed you…???!!!
“Acchan! Have you found him?” Yuko nee-chan run toward me with a very very very angry face.
“No.. not yet.”
“He’ll be dead man if I found him! I’m going to PUB and CLUB to find him. You go home now.” Yuko said as she run down the street. People around her were laughing and told her that they will inform her if they met uncle.
“Uncle Oshima, you’re really in big trouble now. Hmm.. Maybe I should walk around a bit before go home.” I sigh and keep looking around hope I can find him before Yuko nee-chan. Then suddenly something flashes pass by me. I shut my eyes for a while to adjust that sudden light. When I open my eyes, I found something unbelievable.
“Is…is that..a phoenix…?... PHOENIX ???!!!”
People around me was surprised by my sudden loudly voice. They approach me and laugh while saying things “Hahaha… you’re still underage to go to that place. Just let Yuko handle it.”
Well.. Phoenix inn is a well-named brothel in this village, from what I heard uncle Oshima often go there. But that’s not what I mean.. there’s really a phoenix stood there.. just a few steps in front of me. It’s a beautiful phoenix with calm red flame surround it. That thing stand there gorgeously watching me. It slowly gets closer and closer to me and I feel like it is trying to tell me something. But why no one see it except me? Is this only my imagination?
Now it stands just a few inches before me and bowing lightly to me. Don’t know why, my heart is telling me to follow it and I do so. This phoenix guide me out of the village to somewhere near the river. Suddenly the phoenix fly so fast and disappear, I run as fast as I can.. hope that I’ll catch up to it. After walk out from the woods there’s a single body near the river bank. I get closer to examine it and.. it was a wounded girl laid there. Wounds all over her legs and arms, although her face was dirty from the mud and soil but it still cute, her hair was in a messy, her shirt was torn and her hand holds something tightly, I think it’s a necklace or something like that.
“Hey, are you okay? Wake up.. are you okay?” I gently shake her body and poke her cute face.
She slowly opened her eyes and murmuring something before she fell unconscious again.
“Hey, wake up!” Panickly, I hurry lift her up with bridal style and run her to my home with all my might. Although Yuko nee-chan is only 16 years old, she is well-known as a physician. I believe bringing her to Yuko nee-chan is the right decision.
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Minami POV
Hey… you.. okay…are you okay?
Such a gentle voice… who is it?
I slowly open my eyes.. the light was to bright.. I can’t clearly see the face before me but he gave me a warm feeling.. and his voice.. I like his voice.. maybe I’m in heaven now… and this person is my angel who came to greet my arrival.. how lucky I am. I wonder if Kojima-san also at somewhere here? Have you seen Kojima-san, “…Angel..san..” before I can ask, my vision went black again.
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The next morning at Oshima resident
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“How is she, Yuko nee-chan?”
“She’ll be fine. With these medicine and my Nen power, she’ll wake up soon.” Yuko explained, “With this condition, looks like she fell from somewhere very high. Lucky, she just only got scratch… but.. weird.”
Minami still lying on the bed. Yuko and Atsuko was mixing some potion for her. After a moment, Yuko was short of some chrysantum leaves and decide to get it from the storage. When Yuko get out from the room Minami begin to wake up.
“Ughhh… where am I… am I in heaven?” murmured Minami.
“You’re still in earth, my little princess.” Answered Atsuko jokingly.
That voice… my Angel-san…Minami quickly looked at where the voice come of. She then saw the charming angel approach her. (well.. that’s what Minami think now).
“How you feel? Anywhere hurt, my princess?” asked Atsuko caringly.
Shocked to hear Atsuko said Princess, Minami reflects to grab the table lamp beside her and ready in attack position. “How did you know I am princess! Who are you? Did you here to snatch my father’s belonging? Get away from me!” Minami scared and continuously waving her table lamp at Atsuko.
Atsuko easily grab her wrist to stop her. “Hey.. easy. I don’t understand what you mean. Besides, am I look like a bad guys?” he shows off his charming smile which often melts girls heart.
“Bad guys never write “Bad guys” on their forehead!”
Minami trying to push Atsuko away and accidentally hit his right legs. Atsuko lost his balance because of the kick and ended up on top of Minami with his hands grab both Minami’s wrist. They both are now breath heavily because of the fight. Without realize, their face become closer and closer and…
“Atsuko!! What are you doing?!”’ Yuko shout loudly as she walk into the room.
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>//< ehehhehe.....
End of chapter 2..
Hope you like it :)
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They both are now breath heavily because of the fight. Without realize, their face become closer and closer and…
“Atsuko!! What are you doing?!”’ Yuko shout loudly as she walk into the room.
gah!!! almost!!! :on lol: and LOL Yuko nee-chan spoiled the moment~~ nyahaha... :wahaha: but its a good thing... :mon determined:
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(´・ω・`) hope you're not bored with my fic...
Thank you for reading my fic ^^
Here's chapter 3
Douzo...
Chapter 3
New Life
Part 1
Atsuko snapped out and distance himself from Minami, “nee-chan… it’s not what you think.. I’m just.. just.. slipped..”
“Hyaaa!” Minami attacked Atsuko again, but her body is still weak. Before she can hit him, her legs limp and she almost fell to the ground.
Atsuko went to support her and hug her tightly to prevent Minami attacked him again. Minami keep struggling against him.
“nee-chan.. she has lost her mind. She attacked me all of the sudden.”
Yuko went to the chair and smirk at them, “from my view point, it’s you who want to take advantage of her and she’s just defend herself.”
“Yuko nee-chan! I’m not uncle Oshima. I won’t do that. Can you help me to calm her down?”
“Just keep hugging her tightly like that. I know you like it.” Yuko smirk went wider.
“Oshima Yuko!” said Atsuko with serious tone.
“Hai” Yuko stand up sturdily from the chair.
“I order you to calm her down immediately!” ordered Atsuko.
“Nah.. don’t use your status to order me. I don’t like it.”
Yuko went closer to Minami and kneel down, “We’re not your enemy, princess Takahashi. We’re your friends. And this person next to you is Prince Atsuko from Maeda Kingdom.”
“What? You’re the lost princess from Takahashi family?” Atsuko release his hug and bow to her, “I’m sorry for my bad attitude.”
Minami not sure if she can trust them, or they’re just enemy in disguise?
“You can trust me, princess” said Atsuko to assured her.
Eh?! He can read my mind? Minami was surprised by Atsuko sudden answer.
Yuko get up and explain everything. She said that after her father left, she found a letter on his desk. It was for her. Inside the letter is the explanation of what will happen in the future. For you to know, Oshima is a well-known fortune-teller, this ability granted him “Great Minister” position in Maeda Kingdom. The letter wrote that a week after he left, Atsuko will bring back a wounded girl and this girl is the lost princess of Takahashi Kingdom. Atsuko and Yuko should protect her from Matsui’s armies. The real princess has a birthmark at her back, the pattern is somehow like a flaming wings. He also wrote about Atsuko destiny to take back the throne to stop Matsui from his insane brutality and saving people from this misfortune. But Yuko didn’t tell them about Atsuko’s destiny. She thought that it’s just too early for him to know. She will wait until Atsuko is mature enough to hold his own destiny.
“I’ve seen the birthmark at your back so I can confirm you are the princess.” Said Yuko.
Yes, I did have that birthmark.. but it sounds too coincidentally… should I trust her? How can I prove that they’re from Maeda Kingdom? Minami still deeply in her though.
“And the letter said the next question you want to ask is how can we prove that we’re from Maeda Kingdom.”
Eh? They are mind reader? Hmm.. let’s see what will you do..
“Acchan, would you mind to show her your crilyst?” asked Yuko.
Atsuko took out his necklace, inside the necklace is a glowing stone. Atsuko get it out and it glows in beautiful light blue colour. Minami’s eyes open widely, “I do have the same thing as it. But mine is glowing like flame.. yours is more like the water..”
“Okay! Things SETTLED” said Yuko happily, she grab each Atsuko and Minami right hands and make them shake hand, “Now now.. let’s introduce ourselves. My name is Oshima Yuko, 16 years old, daughter of Great Minister Oshima. My current status is the most beautiful and sexy physician in this village and my second job is Atsuko babysitter. You can call me Yuko.” said Yuko proudly.
“Geez.. Yuko nee-chan. I’m old enough to take care myself. Ehemm.. my name is Maeda Atsuko, 13 years old. Currently is just an ordinary boy live in this village. Everyone call me Acchan. You can call me that too.”
“My.. my name is Takahashi Minami, 13 years old...” she paused for a while before continue, “.. I have no where to go.. I’m just a traveler…that..” before she can finish her words, Yuko greet her with a warm hug.
“You can live with us here! Me and Acchan will take care of you as little sister, right Acchan?”
“Hai! Welcome home, princess” Atsuko show her his famous smile.
Tears of happiness pour down her face.. she never felt this warm feeling for these years. She’ll be living with a new status now as an ordinary girl who live happily with Yuko nee-chan and Acchan as a family in Harmonia village. Far far away from the cruel reality out there.
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Five years have past…
Atsuko has joined Harmonia army to protect the village. Tonight they were going to slaughter a fiercefull tiger which have killed 48 people in this month. They were now hide in the woods, waiting for the tiger. The night was so quiet enough for you to hear your own heartbeat and breath.
SRAAKKK
The tiger appear. It walk slowly and seems like the tiger notice that itself got surround by the army. The tiger walk slowly to the center. Thanks for the moonlight, now they can see clearly that tiger’s appearance. For their surprise, the tiger was much more bigger and taller than normal tiger (about 10 feet). It fangs were white, sharp, long and big. It stood there for a while and without warning began to attack them. They were too weak against this tiger. Their attack didn’t hurt it.
Atsuko move from his position, he runs and jump and launch his fist aiming tiger’s head with Nen power. The tiger got hurt and laid down on the floor. But soon, the tiger get up and run away. Atsuko excitedly run after that tiger. “I won’t let you get away”
“Don’t! Atsuko! Let it!” the leader scream him back but Atsuko already went deep into the forest.
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Dou? (´・ω・`)
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I'm liking your fic~~ :on lol: so, Atsuko have power?? so does Minami?? :hehehe: I bet Minami grown up to be the most beautiful girl in the village~~~ :luvluv2:
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Thank you flean for always giving your comment about my fic :kneelbow:
I am very happy :hee:
I plan to make five or seven crilyst to fight Matsui...
Each of them has different power.
Minami has flame...
Atsuko has water...
I'm still planning for the other^^
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ee?? what will happen to atsuko?? :panic:
like your story, really.. :twothumbs
RPG48 ftw...! :mon yeah:
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Thank you flean, haru9210, d_ruffi, s34l, Yagami.Rai, kiniki, kahem, Megumi, Divine Vengeance, cocos_milos and everyone who read my fic~
My energy boost up to write the part 2 :mon study:
Hope you like it >///<
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Chapter 3
New Life
Part 2
The tiger was so fast but Atsuko is faster. He is now in front of it in standby pose gathering Nen power in his sword to readily launch it at the tiger. Their distance gets closer… 20meters… 10m… 5m.. and Atsuko swing his sword against it.
KLANG !!!
Something else hit his sword. A figure appeared in front of him and protect the tiger in defend position with both arms open widely each side. “Don’t hurt him! It’s not his fault. He’s being controlled by bad guys. He doesn’t want to kill those people, but he can’t help it.” Said that mysterious figure.
“That’s nonsense.. it’s a tiger. Don’t say like it got feelings like human.” Atsuko sway his sword aside.
“Animals have feelings too. I am a Tamer. I understand them.”
Tamer is someone who can understand animals’ language and often be paid to train animals in circus either to train military animals. The tamers usually travelling around the world and live in the forest, far and deep in the forest.
“You said that he’s being controlled by someone, how can you prove it?” asked Atsuko.
Jurina step aside and pat tiger’s head while pull out something blinking from its neck. He whisper at the tiger to calm it down then turn to Atsuko and throw that blinking thing to him. “That’s called MC-46, a kind of material which used by military to control animals. Looks like you’re village gonna be in trouble.”
Atsuko look at the thing at his hand and crash it.
“I’m going to take him away. You better go back to your village.” The mysterious figure turned back and start walking.
“I am Atsuko.. may I know your name?” asked Atsuko politely.
That person turn his head a bit and say, “Jurina.” And with that, Jurina disappear with the tiger.
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Atsuko POV
I feel uncomfortable after hearing that kid’s words. “You better go back to your village.” I hurriedly run back only found a burnt village. Corpses everywhere on the floor, burnt… houses are now as black as coal. Once beautiful scenery has become sea of fire. Why is this happen. Suddenly someone grab my foot. He is the leader of Harmonia army. I kneel beside him and hold his hands.
“Atsuko.. please… guide the others… save them…”
“Leader! what’s going on?!” I move closer to hear what he said.
“………………..”
“Leader! Leader!” His heart stopped beating.
“Minami! Yuko! Where are you?” I go through the fire searching them.
“Acchan!” I saw Minami run towards me. She grabbed my hand and guide me to the others.
“Minami, what’s going on?” I asked.
Minami stopped running and began to sob, “When you all go for hunting the tiger, we’re being attacked.. by… Matsui’s army. They went in and killed all the villagers! Burnt houses.. they even lay their hands on a baby! They lift the baby up high and throw to the floor just like throwing a stone!! They’re MONSTER!!”
I got a little shocked. I’ve never seen Minami angry like that. I wrap my arms around her, trying to calm her. She’s crying on my shoulder. Seeing her like this makes my heart ache. I gently caressing her soft cheek and wipe her tears. We’re looking at each others eyes passionately.
“Acchan! Minami! Come here! Hurry!” Yuko shout at us and gestured us to follow her.
I feel my face was hot… I can see Minami was blushing too. I hold her hand and followed where Yuko nee-chan guide us. But… Nee-chan.. why you always ruined the moment…
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Dou ?? （*´ｖ`*）
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hayai! :w00t:
sasuga, yuko.. always ruined the best moment.. lol XD
so jurina is the kind person one from matsui's kingdom? i wonder why... :hehehe:
waiting for your next update~ :cow:
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Nee-chan.. why you always ruined the moment…
LOL... :lol: Yuko nee-chan keeps ruining their moments... :nervous I'm curious about Jurina... is she from Matsui's kingdom?? :?
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Thanks d_ruffi, s34l, Flean, haru9210...
About Jurina... he is no related to Matsui Kingdom (now) and maybe will...^^
I just can tell you that he's an orphan raised by tigers in the forest...
Hehehehe >///< in the few chapters next I will add more characters...
And maybe I won't update as thi fast anymore >///< gomen...
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woh!! I wonder if Jurina has power too... :w00t:
And maybe I won't update as thi fast anymore >///< gomen...
when i read this I was like.. WHAT!!!!! WHY!!!! :bleed eyes:
then I read it it again,
And maybe I won't update as thi fast anymore >///< gomen...
and I was like.. phewww~~ :nervous I missed the 'fast'... LOL... :lol: I thought you won't be updating again... what's wrong with me.. :banghead: :banghead:
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Hhahaha...
Kawai no flean :shy2:
Don't worry Ill continue till the last chapter :mon study:
Thanks for all who read my fic
Here's the chapter 4
Hop you like it
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Chapter 4
“My sword still thirsty, my sword need more blood! Find the rest of the villagers and bring them all to me!”
this person has a long black hair tied to one side. She sat on a black horse licking her bloody sword and laugh crazily. One word to describe her… Insanse…
“Ye..yes! Princess Rena.” Those soldiers left to find the villagers.
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Somewhere at the same time
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Atsuko guide the rest of the villagers get out of this village from a secret tunnel below Oshima house. The tunnel heads directly to the centre of the woods. Atsuko demand to let old people, kids, woman and injured soldiers go first, young man left behind to protect them. They almost done, but Matsui armies barging in Oshima house. Atsuko told them to move faster, one by one get in the tunnel.. and the last one is Atsuko himself. Matsui’s armies finally found the tunnel and chasing them.
“Hurry!” Atsuko shout at them while took out something from his bag. It was dynamite. Atsuko light up the fire one by one at those dynamites. Lucky, they all got out from the tunnel before Matsui’s armies catch up. Atsuko hurriedly throw all those dynamites into the tunnel and … BBBBOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMM…
The tunnel has been sealed. All the villagers safely arrived in the woods. Unfortunately the Matsui’s armies had surrounded that place. They all are surrounded. Atsuko lead the others soldiers in defend formation to protect the village.
“Hahahaha… you think you can escaped from us?” said one of the Matsui’s armies.
Suddenly there’s something huge knock down that Matsui army from his horse with fast speed.
“TI…TIGER!” Matsui’s armies step back and forming attack formation. The villagers went panic as they saw this tiger. It was the tiger who attacked the villagers before. The only thing that unusual is there’s someone sat at tigers’ back. Atsuko stand front to calm down the villagers.
“Calm down, friends! He won’t hurt us. He came to help us” said Atsuko to assured the villagers.
“I’m not coming to help you. I’m just playing with my new pet.” Jurina jump down from tiger’s back. “My Tora don’t like crowd while having fun. Could you excuse yourself?” said Jurina to Atsuko.
Atsuko nod and whispered “Thank you” then he guide the villagers out to somewhere else.
“Stop right there!” Matsui’s armies manage to chase them.
“GRROOOWWWLLLLLLL” Tora (Jurina’s tiger) won’t let them. He growl at them and blocked their way.
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Near the exit of Harmonia forest
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“Chase them!!” once again, they were chased by Matsui’s armies.
“I guess we have to separate here. Yuko nee-chan, you guide them all to the right path. Three hours later you will find a town. You’ll be save there.”
“What about you?” asked Minami.
“I’ll take the left path.”
“No! left path is heads for cliff. I won’t agree.” Minami complained.
“Yes.. we won’t agree if you take that path” said all the villagers in unison.
“I am the vice leader. I order you to take the right path!” commanded Atsuko.
“NO! WE’RE NOT. We will follow you.” Said the soldiers in unison.
“THIS IS AN ORDER” said Atsuko coldly.
With a heavy heart they followed Atsuko order. But Yuko resisted, “I won’t”
“You must obey me”
“No! whatever with your status, I said I WONT”
“Grab her! take her with you!” Atsuko ordered the soldiers and they obey. They dragged Yuko away and went to the right path.
“I’m sorry Yuko nee-chan… Minami…”
Sounds of horse tapping and soldiers shouting became closer and clearer. Atsuko hurriedly take the left path and pretending he is guiding the villagers, “Here! Hurry! They’re closer!” He keeps running to the end of road.
“S**T!! We’re tricked!” leader of the armies mad at him and ordered five soldiers to kill him.
Atsuko managed to block their attacks and killed them.
“You think you can beat us all? Maji de?” said the leader of the army.
“Nothing is impossible if I am SERIOUS”
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Town of GREID
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After three hours running and walking, they finally reach the town. Yuko was unconscious because she was noisy along the way and one of the soldiers knock her down or else they’ll be found by Matsui army. In the middle of chaos, no one knows that Minami has left the group.
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Minami POV
No, I won’t let him fighting alone. Since he found me, we’re always together. He taught me martial arts, calligraphy, and many other things. We always have fun together, get scold together, sneak out together, fight together… I gotta help him… wait for me.. Acchan…
Thanks to Yuko nee-chan annoying noise, I can sneak out easily without notice. I keep running to where Acchan was, hoping that he will be fine. I won’t let you left me.. I still have something to tell you... I love you...
Before I reach the highway, I saw many Matsui armies stand there and attack you rapidly. Then I saw someone trying to stab you from your back. You’re too busy to handle attacks that you don’t notice that spear behind you. I dash in to your side to grab that guy’s arms and throw him aside. That man hit the rock wall heavily and faint. The armies surrounding us in a circle and we stick at each others back as we need time to charge our Nen into our weapons.
“Minami, why are you here? Didn’t I tell you not to come?” I can feel his angry towards me.
“I can’t help it. I already miss you so much even we just separated for minutes.” I said jokingly to him.
“Minami, this is not time to play,,,”
“Cover my back, will you?” I won’t let him finish his words and launch to attack the enemies.
He sways his sword powerfully and gorgeously while I go with various movements with my rod.
“21 down! ...”
“48..” replied Atsuko.
“What? Already that much?” Atsuko is really good at fighting isn’t he? Somehow I feel proud about it. He really looks cool when he’s fighting. Out of my sight, a lance coming towards me and I can’t avoid it. It scratched my left arm. “Ugghh…”
“Minami!” Atsuko come to my side and take down five men with a single slay. He then gathered her Nen power into her sword. I can see the stone inside his necklace glows brighter… He then hold his sword up high.. the water from below of the cliff gathered right behind us about 8 feet above our heads. All the soldiers got scared and step back.
“What are you doing?! Go get them!” the leader scolds his soldiers.
With two hands grabbing his sword, “God of water… grant me your strength… let it wash those body… those sin… those ugly hearts… into vanishing…” Atsuko sways it hardly down towards them “Mizu no ryuusei!!!” the water flows down pouring the soldiers. They all drowned and flows with the water from the highway to downward. That was an amazing move.. I fall in love again!!! My mind screaming crazily.
Atsuko grabs my hand and said “Let’s run”
“Where? I don’t think we can burst in the armies downward.”
He smirks and points his back with his thumb.
“Oh… No…” I shake my head disagree with him.
“Hold your breath now” he lift me up with bridal style and run towards the cliff and JUMP.
BBAAAAAASSSSSHHHHH
We jump into the waterfall below. The armies don’t have guts to jump like us. They just keep shooting arrows from above. I know we can’t get up to the surface or else we’ll get shoot by the arrows. But the matter now is I AM SHORT OF OXYGEN! I’m struggling to the surface but Atsuko grab my shoulder and shake his head. Somehow I can tell his eyes are telling me, just a bit more, they’ll leave.. but I can’t hold it anymore I was run out of oxygen now, waving my hands randomly to get loose his grab.
He keeps pull me down then I can feel something soft attach to my lips. He transfer some oxygen to me by MOUTH… My head going to explode… before I can enjoy this moment, he parted away and gesture me “we can get on the surface now”.
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Today I have post four times... >///<
Got tired :mon ghost:
Don't mind to comment me^^
Waiting for my improvement^^
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Kawai no flean :shy2:
Don't worry Ill continue till the last chapter :mon study:
arigatou~~ :shy1: Ganbare!!! :onioncheer:
the last part~~ even logically I don't know how Atsuko transfered her oxygen to Minami, I was.. :on bleed: imagining it... This is too~~ :mon lovelaff: kyaaa!!!
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Wow so many update!!! It's great continue!!! Acchan is so cool!!!
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That was an amazing move.. I fall in love again!!! My mind screaming crazily.
gah!! me too...!! :mon lovelaff: :luvluv1: :mon inluv:
somehow i imagine acchan attacked those enemies like in flying get's PV XD
i'm curious what was like their costume.. :roll:
keep update~ :twothumbs
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somehow i imagine acchan attacked those enemies like in flying get's PV XD
i'm curious what was like their costume.. :roll:
me too~~ now I'm totally imagining them in Flying Get's setting... nyahaha... :on lol:
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My siggie come truuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuueeeeeeeeeee :cow: :cow: :cow: :cow:
thank youuuuuuu~ :grin: :grin: :grin: :grin:
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:w00t: OMG!! Acchan transfering oxygen to Minami by mouth!!! :wub: :inlove:
Thank you so much for your hard work and for updating!!! :twothumbs
Hope you Update Soon :thumbsup
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Thank you for reading *:.。☆(´∀｀人)
I got inspired from flying get's PV to start this fic. You can imagine Atsuko in her costume in flying get^^ Actually I have edited each of their face into the costume I want, but I'm afraid I might offend rights or people. So I don't post the photos. >///<
Due to error in my login.. I have to create new id... :gyaaah:
From now ichikawa has became zansh... yoroshiku :kneelbow:
Hope you won't get bored in this chapter.
Thanks for reading *:.。☆(´∀｀人)
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Chapter 5
Hosh hosh
Atsuko and Minami follow the waterfall stream and they’re now at the lakeside. About 10 meter from the lake, there’s a cave between trees. They decide to go into the cave for shelter. Minami pick up some stick branch and put it at the centre of cave. She then pointed her right hand at the branch and murmur, “Burn” and fire light up from the branch. She sat near the fire to get some warm.
Atsuko take off his shirt, showing his perfect abs. He shakes his head and messing his hair to dry it up.
Kakkoi…stupid heartbeat! Slow down will you… Minami blushed hardly to see the scene and remember the kiss before. She quickly bent down her head to hide her face behind her knees.
Of course that’s not a kiss. He just want to help me because I lack of oxygen... don’t think about it again.. ughhhh… so awkward here… Minami try to control her mind.
“Take off your clothes too” said Atsuko.
“EH?!!” Minami jump up surprised by his words. Her face became red as tomato.
“I mean... you should take off your clothes to dry it or else you’ll get cold... I’ll be sleeping outside, you own this whole cave” Atsuko scratch his back head and walk to the exit.
“Umm… you can stay in here…. It’s cold outside there.”
“Eh? But I think it’s inappropriate for me…”
“It’s okay. As long as you keep facing the exit and don’t you dare to turn your face at me.”
“Umm… I’m okay.. I’ll be at outside…”
“Just sit there about 5meters from me. And DO NOT EVER look this way.” ordered Minami.
Atsuko did as what Minami said. Minami took off her shirt and hang near the wall beside the fire. The moment was quiet, and actually Minami was unintentionally staring at Atsuko’s back. She think Atsuko back is so strong and warm. Minami always feels warm and safe wherever she’s near Atsuko.
“Minami? are you asleep yet?” Atsuko broke the silence.
“No… not yet”
“Minami… I’ve decided to take my revenge. I’ll go beat up that Matsui for breaking my family apart, destroying my homeland, and destroy my lovely village. I’ll fight for the people… for those who have suffered under his brutality… and… I’ll also take on revenge behalf you. You also force to break apart from your family because of him, right?”
“…….” Minami smiled at how serious Atsuko is now.
“Maybe I’ll have to separated with you for years… you can wait for me somewhere with Yuko nee-chan… and if I can’t make it back…” before Atsuko can continue his words, Minami cut it.
“I’ll go wherever you go… no matter how hard you chase me away, I’ll stick with you like glue.”
Hearing Minami serious tone, Atsuko smiled widely, “Ne… Minami. If we ever beat that Matsui and bring back peace to this land… let’s get married! Let’s back to Harmonia village and get married and have dozen of kids. Hahahaha….”
Minami was now flustered and didn’t know how to answer him.
“Minami? you hear me?” feeling curious, Atsuko turn his head to see Minami.
“Didn’t I said DO NOT EVER LOOK THIS WAY!!!” Minami throw a fireball and hit Atsuko’s face.
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Town of GREID (where Yuko and villagers live now)
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Yuko was in the market buying some medicine for the villagers. She’s too busy to count her groceries and didn’t notice a huge man and his companies come her way.
“Crysanthum, loyliex, yurishi… Agghhh!!” Yuko bump into that huge man and fell to the ground.
“Hey! Where’re your eyes!!” shout that huge man.
“Sorry... I was too busy, I didn’t notice you.” Yuko apologized.
“You have to pay my mental fee. Guys, take her to my home!”
“Hey! What are you doing! Let me go! Help!” Yuko keep struggling.
Although there were many people there in the market, but no one come to help. That huge man is very well-known as the most powerful fighter in this town. His well-built muscle tall body was the main advantage against other. His face is full of moustache. He always picks up some girls on street and bring them back to his home to be his slave.
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At the same time and the same place
The market is sure crowd. There are two handsome boys entered the market. One is taller than the other. His hair was stylishly short dark brown. From the look, you can tell he is a truly gentleman. His move is so elegance and his smile is very kindly. He is wearing brown shirt, dark purple jeans, brown boots and green coat. He carries a sword at his left waist.
The other is slightly shorter, his hair is brighter than the taller and a bit longer. He has a cute and easy-going appearance. He is wearing red shirt and dark green coat. He is concentrate at his called detector machine.
“Kuu, are you sure this town has the item you want?” asked the taller man.
“Haruna, trust me. My detector won’t go wrong. The material I need the most must be in this town” said Kuu
After walking for some times, Kuu went into a shop. Haruna was waiting at the enterance. Suddenly a cat doll fall down from the above. A kid from the second floor of the shop shout to her mom that her doll fell down. Haruna was about to return the doll to the kid, suddenly someone asking for help.
“Hey! What are you doing! Let me go! Help!” Yuko asking for help.
Without thinking too much, Haruna went to save Yuko. One by one down in Haruna single kick. That huge man angry and slash his axe toward Haruna. Haruna unsheathe his sword and launch it hardly at the axe, making the axe fly high to the sky. Not satisfy, Haruna swaying his sword rapidly at that huge man, cleaning all hair in his face. That huge man face is now clean and smooth…
All people at the market applause for Haruna and laugh at that huge man. Feeling embarrassed, that huge man cry all the way home, “MAMAAA……”
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Yuko POV
“Are you alright?” My saviour walk to me and giving me a hand to hold.
This man is so cool… what a gentleman he is…but, why is he holding a cat doll? Weird… but I like it.
“Thanks for saving me.” I bowed at him.
“No problem. Helping people is my duty as a swordsman.”
Aww… his smile melts my heart… should I pretend to faint and he’ll take care of me… and I can know him more… and then I can take advantage of him… then force him to marry me? Hahaha… evil Yuko. Way to go Yuko…
“Haruna! Where are you?” I hear somebody shout not far from us.
“Sorry, I got to go, miss. My friend is calling me. Bye” he’s waving and run to his friend.
“Hey, wait… I haven’t ask your name. wait!”
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“Kuu. I’m here. How did it go? Did you find the material you want?” Haruna running towards Kuu.
“Nah… they are all fake. I’m hungry now, let’s get something eat” Kuu touch his stomach up and down.
“Good idea. I’m hungry too. Let’s go”
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Somewhere in the town of GREID
“Geez… Acchan. Where are you?”
Atsuko and Minami entered the town and asking citizen about Yuko and villagers whereabouts. Not noticing of the crowd they got separated. But Minami keep asking about Yuko and villagers hoping that maybe Atsuko is already there and he is waiting for her.
“Excuse me, sir. Have you seen some villagers coming around?” asked Minami politely.
Minami can see that man surprised expression when he turns to face Minami. “You... you are…”
Minami’s eyes also widen as she saw that man, “You…are….”
“Minami-chan!” / “Haru-kun!” said both in unison.
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Atsuko POV
Minami… where are you?
Geez… I should have hold her hand tight, and now I wouldn’t lose her. Where did you go Minami… I wonder why this town is so crowd. I prefer my village. People shouting here shouting there to promote their goods. Some are fighting here fighting there for unknown reason. I hope my clumsy Minami didn’t get herself in trouble.
“Haru-kun!”
“Minami?” I think I hear her sound. I keep looking for her in this crowd.
I saw her with a guy. I can see her eyes widen as the guys walk near to her. That guy get near and hug Minami tight. “What are you doing, bastard?! How dare you touch my Minami!!!”
End of POV
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Atsuko dash in it and grab Haruna shoulder. He throw away Haruna hardly from Minami. Haruna surprised by sudden attack, but he manage to land down perfectly without hurt. He saw Atsuko’s hand put around Minami shoulder.
“Get off your filthy hand of her.” Haruna went to attack Atsuko.
Atsuko slightly push Minami away and went to greet Haruna attack. They launch their fists and kicks rapidly. Their movement is so fast they seems to have equal skill. Atsuko manage to hit Haruna face and kick his stomach. Haruna is thrown 3 meters away and crush the pillar behind him. Haruna still get up and dash into Atsuko.
Minami get in between to stop them. “Stop. Don’t fight here.”
“He is the one who start this fight.” Said Haruna angrily.
“That’s what you received from touching my girl.” Atsuko put his arm around Minami shoulder again.
“Get off your hands from her. You’re not even worthy to stand beside her.”
“I said STOP!” Minami shouted.
Actually Minami is happy to see two guys fight for her but she don’t like if either of them gut hurt. Minami clinging each of her arms to Atsuko and Haruna and guide them into the bar
“You two should be friends from now on. Let’s talk inside. It’s not good to create trouble here, I don’t want we got any attention from the citizen… it’s dangerous for us.”
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Dou ? (´・ω・`)
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cool! :mon thumb:
so... is it okay to imagine them in flying get's costume...? :mon innocent: ...yosh, already decided..! :mon squee: :on lol:
wanna more update~ :mon yeah:
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Aww… his smile melts my heart… should I pretend to faint and he’ll take care of me… and I can know him more… and then I can take advantage of him… then force him to marry me? Hahaha… evil Yuko. Way to go Yuko…
LOL... Yuko... such a brilliant idea... :mon lmao:
and this what happen when Atsuko spend so much time with Yuko...
“Minami? you hear me?” feeling curious, Atsuko turn his head to see Minami.
“Didn’t I said DO NOT EVER LOOK THIS WAY!!!” Minami throw a fireball and hit Atsuko’s face.
hahahaha... way to go Minami!! throw a fire ball!!! hahaha... :hiakhiakhiak:
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aww Haruna saving Yuko awwwwww <333 next chapter please~
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Due to error in my login.. I have to create new id...
From now ichikawa has became zansh... yoroshiku
:O Poor you...
Minami’s eyes also widen as she saw that man, “You…are….”
“Minami-chan!” / “Haru-kun!” said both in unison.
Yeeeeeeeeeeeeei! Kojima didn't die! :panic: I'm so happy!
Thank you for your update! :bow:
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Yay!!! A fight for Takamina!!!
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Awesome chapter! Two guys fighting over Minami, Yay!
Thank you. I'll be waiting for your next update.
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@ d_ruffi : of course you can^^ feel free to go with your imagination o(｀▽ ´o)
@ haruhi16 : will try to add more kojiyuu for you （*´ｖ`*）
@ Megumi : I'm sorry for making you confuse. Haruna = Haruna and Kojima = Haruna mother (the one who dead). o(_ _o) forgive me.
@ Flean, kahem, Sok : >///< thanks for comment and like my fic ♥ ⊂(´∀｀*⊂
Thanks to all for reading my fics ♥ ⊂(´∀｀*⊂
(´・ω・`) I think this chapter is somehow boring... but please read and give me your opnion. Thanks.
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Chapter 6
Part1
“Eh?! You are… prince Ma-…” before Haruna finished, her mouth was pressed by Minami hands.
“Shhhhhhhhhhhh!!!”
“Now, I am more worthy to be with her… more than you” Atsuko said to Haruna with proud.
Minami took them inside the bar and began the story. She told Atsuko that Haruna is her childhood friend and his mom is the one who protect her from armies for years. She also told Haruna how she met Atsuko and now is living as an ordinary village girl. Haruna sat there quietly after knowing his mother’s dead, his eyes are teary. Minami hand over the necklace she promised with Kojima to Haruna. He took it from Minami and wore it.
“It’s okay if you want to cry” Minami hand her handkerchief to Haruna.
“I won’t cry… I promised mom, I will never shed a tear…anymore…”
Haruna words made Atsuko remember his past when he has to leave his father. He decided to give them a little private time for the reunion and moved from his place. “I’m going to find Yuko nee-chan and the villagers’ whereabouts. See you, Minami”
“Wait… I think I know where the villagers you mentioned. Wanna go with me?” Haruna said.
“Really? You’re so helpful Haru-kun.” Minami said as she hold Haruna hand closely. Haruna just smiled and put the other hand on it.
Can’t bear to see it, Atsuko went between to break them apart. He hide Minami behind him and stare at Haruna with a fake smile on his face, “Show me the way, please”.
Haruna smirk at him and walk away, “Before we get there, let’s visit your lovely Kuu, Minami-chan”
YOUR LOVELY KUU?! WHO IS THAT AGAIN….?!
I’m going crazy Minami… your relationship is so complicated…
Atsuko turn to face Minami with confuse face. Minami feels so happy to see Atsuko going all jealous over her. She shows her famous smirk and went to where Haruna was. Atsuko as always… try to walk between them and prevent Minami talking to Haruna.
Without knowing there is someone watching them from the shadow. A hooded girl smile slyly behind the wall. “Intresting…”
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Back hill outside the town
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Kuu was checking the engine of his beloved airplane which named “Persona”.
“Okay! You’re as healthy as always. I’ll find the material for you soon… after that you can run as far as you want, fly as high as you want, dive as deep as you want… and we can go hunting all treasures together” Kuu placed his cheek to his beloved airplane.
An airplane is used as air transport and its main function is flying. Kuu want to renovate it to become a multifunction plane which not only can fly but also can drive like car, can dive like submarine.
“Kuu! Look, who is here” Haruna called from afar.
Kuu narrowed his eyes to see clearly those three figures from afar, “Is that…. MINAMI-CHAN~ !!!”
Kuu run down the slide so fast that he fell down rolling… rolling… rolling… and stop right before Minami. He stands up and lift up Minami with bear hug, “My little midget! I miss you! Said how many years we got separate?”
“I miss you too, Kuu. But you have to put me down first, umm… someone is gonna explode…” said Minami pointing Atsuko.
Kuu put Minami down and look at Atsuko, “hm? Who is he?”
“Oh.. he is Atsuko, Maeda Atsuko. We are companions. Atsuko, this is Kuu, Minegishi Kuu, my childhood friend” Explained Minami.
“Eh! You’re Maeda heir? How did you meet him Minami-chan?”
“It’s a long story, Kuu. I’ll tell you later.”
“Nice to meet you, prince.” Kuu approach Atsuko and lift him up with bear hug just like what he did to Minami and put him down. Atsuko has reached his temper’s limit because of Minami. He just keeps quiet and emotionless.
Kuu felt Atsuko dangerous aura, he step back and whisper to Minami. “Is he always cold like this?”
“Nope… before he met us” Haruna said jokingly.
“Aha… I got it! He’s jealous because Minami surrounds by two ikemen”
“Ahaha… ha… umm… it’s getting dark now. Back to the topic, Haru-kun can you show us where’s the villagers is?” Minami try to break that awkward scene, feelings Atsuko dark aura getting stronger. She decided to apologize to Atsuko later after they found the villagers.
“The villagers from Harmonia? They are in the camp area near here. I can take you there with my Persona.” Kuu guide them in to his beloved airplane.
Inside of the airplane is wide and complete with daily needs. It contains pilot chamber, gathering chamber, bedrooms, meeting room, dining rooms, and Kuu’s private mechanic chamber.
“Wow! Your plane is amazing. You made this?” Minami got excited inside the plane.
“This is my mom masterpiece. I just renovate it.” Kuu open the pilot chamber’s door and invite them in.
“I see… by the way, where is Aunt Minegishi? I haven’t seen her since we got here” asked Minami
“My mom is missing… about five years” Kuu sat down and start the engine.
“I’m sorry…”
“Nope... it’s okay. Sit tight! We’re gonna fly!” Kuu push up the lever.
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Next part will be post soon
(´・ω・`) dou ?
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Ahahah I like jealous Acchan and Kuu ^^
I just hope that Minegishi mama is not dead
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Without knowing there is someone watching them from the shadow. A hooded girl smile slyly behind the wall. “Intresting…”
Don't know why but Mayu n Rena comes to my mind.. XD
This chapter should be entitle : the jealous Atsuko... :lol:
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Thanks for replying kahem & Flean （*´ｖ`*）
@ Flean : wow, you're great. hooded girl is one of them^^ and she will be with Jurina~ guess who?^^
Here's part 2 （*´ｖ`*）
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Chapter 6
Part 2
Ten minutes past and they reached the camp area. They got down from the plane and Kuu hide it with his Nen power. He makes the air cover his plane and with a blink an eye, his plane disappeared.
“Sugoi! It disappear?!” Minami rob her eyes several times.
“Hehe… it still there, it just become transparent. I can control air and wind, I just make the air around it combine with my Nen and make my plane transparent” explained Kuu.
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Yuko POV
Acchan… Minami… how you doing now? I miss you…
I want to go find you, but I can’t leave. Those villagers need my help, I have to take care their wounds… That jerk mayor won’t let us live inside his town just because we don’t have enough money to rent a land. Lucky, I found this old camp area. Even this area is dirty and sloppy, it can still managed to live.
“Atsuko, Minami, you are back”
“Welcome home”
“I’m so happy to see you again”
I saw people gathering at the entrance and I saw you. I saw you two walk in and greet the villagers. I drop my mixing tools and running over you. Unable to hold myself, I jump and tackle you down to the ground.
“Acchan! Minami-chan! I miss you so so so much!” still hugging and rubbing my check against yours.
“Yuko-neechan! I can’t breathe…” complained Atsuko.
Hate it, but I have to get up from them. As I help they two stand up, I notice two stranger stand in front me. One of them wave his hand and say “Hi” to me, and the other is MY SAVIOR. Unable to control myself, my body automatically jump to him and put my arms around his neck.
“Nyan… Nyan…” I snuggle my head at his neck smelling his scent.
“Hey, let go of me!” he simply complained but didn’t push me away.
“You are my savior. You saved me from bad guys in the market, remember?”
“Oh.. you are that girl. But why did you call me Nyan Nyan?” asked him.
“Because you held a cat doll while saving me. Since I don’t know what’s your name… I’ve just call you nyan nyan” said Yuko showing her dimple deeply.
“Umm.. can you let go of me. It’s not proper for me to be like this in front of princess Minami.” He grab my hands and push me away.
Princess Minami? Did he knows Minami? What is his relationship with Minami?
I notice Atsuko walked away and followed by Minami, Oh no… love triangle… Acchan, Minami-chan, and this person…hmm… I won’t let you go in between them. You owe me this, Acchan.
End of POV
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Atsuko quietly go away and Minami followe him. Haruna saw Minami followed where Atsuko going, he want to follow her but Yuko hug him, prevent him get near those two lover. Then Yuko drag Haruna to the other side of camp area to help her bringing medicine to another patient. Kuu is the only one left behind, cold wind blowing over him.
“Lonely~ I'm so lonely~ I guess it’s better for me to go back and take care my plane.”
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At the corner of camp area
Atsuko quietly separate himself from the group and went to corner of the area. He sat there relax himself enjoying the night wind. Minami went to bring some water to Atsuko. She slowly approach him and sat right beside him. Atsuko move a bit to distance himself from Minami. he’s still mad at her for making him jealous.
“Are you mad at me?” asked Minami as she offers the water. Atsuko stay quiet and look away.
“I know you are mad at me. I’m sorry, okay? Haruna and Kuu is just my childhood friend, no more” Minami pleaded. She sat closer to Atsuko and touch his hand. Atsuko still don’t answer.
“Please don’t ignore me. I’ll do whatever you want, but please don’t ignore me.”
“Anything?” asked Atsuko.
“Yes, anything.” Minami smiled.
“I think a kiss will do.” Atsuko move closer to Minami.
“Eh?!” Minami step back few steps.
“You said anything, right?” Atsuko smile mischievously.
“That’s not fair” Minami pouted.
“I give you five seconds. Kiss or not… Forgive or not... depend on you"
Atsuko start to count "5… 4… 3… 2… 1…”
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TBC...
Hehhehe...
I'm going to sleep now （◎´〇｀◎）oyasumi~~
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Even as a guy Acchan is so machiavelious ^^
Poor Kuu, he hasn't a partner
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AHA!
Now I get it LoL
@ Megumi : I'm sorry for making you confuse. Haruna = Haruna and Kojima = Haruna mother (the one who dead). o(_ _o) forgive me.
“That’s not fair” Minami pouted.
“I give you five seconds. Kiss or not… Forgive or not... depend on you"
Atsuko start to count "5… 4… 3… 2… 1…”
Atsuko is such a tsundere :lol:
But Yei thank you for your update! :bow:
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male or female like always acchan teasing takamina is funny :D...
you gonna sleep but we can`t!! T_T what happen .. takagirl.. kiss your lover like a boss :D
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Yay! Acchan teasing Taka.
Thank you for updating.
Poor kuu got no one.
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Seriously Atsuko?? Gah!! such a teaser... XD Minami, you should throw him a fire ball first then kiss him to make it up~~ :lol:
I feel sorry for Kuu.. but I'll think his partner will come later... :grin:
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Thanks Flean, Sok, Haruko, Megumi, kahem *:.。☆(´∀｀人)
I want to post image for Kuu's airplane but I don't know how (￣□￣;)!!
For your information, Kuu's airplane is like Highwind (in FF7 / Advent children) （*´ｖ`*）
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Chapter 7
I give you five seconds… kiss me or not… forgive or not… depend on you”
“5… 4… 3… 2… 1…”
BOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMM
A loud explosion can be heard from afar. Trees around the camp area were burn out… they are now trapped inside the fire ring. Many figures out there fire the canon toward them. Yuko guide the villagers to hide under the shelter which Haruna build with his Nen power. Haruna’s Nen prevent those fireball strike directly to them.
“Damn! They’re Matsui armies” Atsuko have incredible eyesight which allows him to see in the dark. He can clearly see the outfit and recognize them as Matsui armies. Minami cast her power to fight against them but Atsuko stop her.
“Minami, you’re element is fire. Fire against fire is useless. Mine is water… water always win against fire, let me handle this. You take them to out of here.” Atsuko commands.
“Please be careful” Minami followed Atsuko’s order and went to where Yuko and Haruna were.
Atsuko hurry went the centre of the area and call out some water to dim the fire. “God of water… grant me strength… grant me your power… SHIVA!” A huge rain pour down and extinguishes the fire.
A figure from afar laugh, “Hahaha… I think I underestimate you. But your rain has no effect on my canon. They have water resistance. The engine still works even you pour a ton of water into it… Hahaha… KEEP FIRE”
“Nee-chan! Take them away from this place. I’ll buy you some time” Atsuko charged into the armies and attack them one by one. His sword is gleaming in light blue under the moonlight. He stabs, thrusts and slays continuously at the enemy. No one can stop him coming closer to the commander who stands behind inside the shadow. Suddenly some tiny glowing things flying toward Atsuko and aim his left arm.
“Minami-chan, you take them to Kuu’s plane. I’m going to help that brat.” Said Haruna.
Minami did what Haruna told, she commands the villagers to follow her. Haruna take back his Nen power and was about to go help Atsuko but Yuko pulled his arm and kiss him on the cheek. “Come back soon, I’ll be waiting at the plane” she gave a wink to Haruna then go to where Minami was.
Haruna blush and slightly touch his cheek where Yuko kiss him.
“Agghhh!” Atsuko left arm feels weak after being shot by those tiny things. He is hard to hold up his sword now, his left hand is trembling, he can only dodge the attacks from armies. Ten armies surround him in a circle and about to thrust those sharp spear toward him.
SLASHHHH
An attack comes from Haruna make the armies stand back, he help Atsuko to stand up, “Don’t die here. I still have a fight with you.. over Minami”
“Don’t worry, I won’t die here” Atsuko stand up again and cast his power.
“FIRE” a canon fire to Haruna from his back. Atsuko saw it and went to shield him.
“Don’t!” Haruna push Atsuko away and casting his Nen to blow it, but it’s too late. The fire ball aimed directly to Haruna’s chest. They are being thrown away a few metres. Smokes everywhere cover that place like fogs.
A light shining through the fogs. Haruna figures slowly walks out from it, lightning lines glinting all over his body and his sword. With just one slay, the canon broke in two. “HYAAA” Haruna run in lightning speed and take down forty eight soldiers in one shot.
“Damn!” the commander secretly disappear from the scene.
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In Persona (Kuu’s airplane)
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“Sorry to trouble you.” Minami apologize to Kuu.
“Nah... don’t say that. You are the princess. I’ll do whatever you told me to.” Kuu bowed with a gentleman gesture.
“I have settled them into the gathering chamber” Yuko report to Kuu.
“Osu! Now, let’s go snatch Haruna and that prince” Kuu throw his fist up ( just like how he does in mendol)
Kuu go to the pilot chamber followed by Minami and Yuko. The pilot chamber is broadly enough for ten people. Two seats at the very front for the pilot, sofa and table are in the middle. The glass are wide so that they can see their surrounding clearly.
Just a few minutes, they’ve reach where Haruna and Atsuko fighting place. Kuu communicate with Haruna through the headphone he told Haruna to wear. He told Haruna that he’s gonna drop down a ladder and they must hurry grab it and get inside.
Kuu launch the gun machine each side at its wings attacks the armies. Haruna and Atsuko takes this chance to flee and grab the ladder. Kuu drive the plane high up to the sky and flee away.
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Back into the plane
“Acchan! You’re hurt!” Minami told Atsuko to sit down and take care of his wounds.
Yuko want to take care of Haruna too... She grab Haruna arms but ended up getting shock of the lightning power that still left around Haruna. “Ouchh.. Haruna. Are you okay? Your body is full of electrics….”
“Wow! Since when you can control lightning. You never show me before” Kuu leave his plane in auto pilot mode and come join the others.
Atsuko gesture Minami to follow him. He took out his necklace and went closer to Haruna. When Atsuko get closer, Haruna’s necklace also shinning along with Atsuko’s.
“Inside my necklace is the magic crystal – crilyst. Your mother’s necklace response to mine, it means inside it has a crilyst too” Atsuko explained.
“Crilyst… I though there’s only three crilyst in the world” Haruna was surprised.
“Yes, it should be only three left in this world. Each of them was hold by Maeda, Takahashi, and Matsui. But those are common sense. My father told me that actually there are five or more crilyst in this world. It’s just sealed in somewhere and waiting for its holder.” Yuko explained.
“The five elements I know are water, fire, earth, wind, lightning. But there was to be said that there is a dark crilyst which grant great power of darkness and an unknown elements was sealed deep in forbidden city.” Added Atsuko.
“Minami-chan has fire, prince Atsuko has water, and now Haru has lightning… somehow it seems like it’s destiny who bring us here and we are fated to beat down that Jerk Matsui! Yay!” Kuu jump and dance happily about his own calculation.
“Yeah… you make sense… and that’s why they keep pursuing us” Yuko agreed.
“Kuu, didn’t you said that you can control wind and air? You have a crilyst too?” asked Minami.
“Eh?!” Kuu slipped down and his face hit the floor. He sat up and rub his nose, “sorry.. I don’t have any. As you know, I can control wind since I was kid. Still remember how I fly you up into your chamber?”
“Yeah… it seems so. You are a natural user of wind.” Minami put his finger under her chin and deeply in thought.
“Let’s make a team then!” Yuko said in loud voice stunt everyone there. “We have three crilyst here… we just need to gathered the others or finding another crilyst, we’ll definitely surpass that Matsui’s power.”
“You’re right. But nee-chan, besides power we need forces too. We can’t depend only at our power, we need armies too” Atsuko add in.
“About army forces, I can help you. My mother was a great general in Takahashi Kingdom before and I can help you to create new forces with my mother’s relationships and fame” said Haruna.
“For the next, you will need a place to gathering and live! I have traveling for years and if you need a castle, I know there’s a dull old castle northwest from here near Akihabara Sea” said Kuu.
“Let’s talk about it tomorrow, I believe they need rest after the fights” Minami suggested.
“Now you mention it. I’m sleepy… hoooaaaammmm” Kuu walk in to the pilot room.
Since the plane is full for the villagers, five of them decide to sleep inside the pilot room. One by one get in to the pilot room. First is Kuu, followed by Yuko clinging at Haruna, next is Minami, and the last is Atsuko. Before Minami step into the room, Atsuko pulled her and give her a quick kiss on lips.
“I forgive you now. Sleep tight and please dream about me” Atsuko smiled proudly and went in while Minami stare down at floor to hide her blush and went beside Yuko.
As the sun rise up next morning… a new journey will begin…
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Hihihi Atsuko didn't give up on the kiss ^^
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jajaj atsuko you can`t resist minami`s charm right.. you need to kiss her :D and gain some points over haruna :D..
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Thanks kahem & Haruko （*´ｖ`*）
Here's the chapter 8...
Hope you it won't boring you.. (´・ω・`)
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Chapter 8
Part1
It’s a full moon tonight…
In the middle of the forest, there’s a man with baggy short hair in no sleeves blue outfit sleeping on the branch of a big tree. He slept with the bag under his head and a hand holding a rod.
Ruka…
Ruka…
There’s a girl calling me. A girl in one piece white dress…
Her long black hair flowing gorgeously along with the rhythm of the wind…
Her eyes… make me feel like I’m being hypnotized all the time…
Her appearance brighter than the stars…
She’s so beautiful…
Ruka….
She’s calling my name again…
She gets closer to me and touches my cheeks with her hands.
Her hands are so cold… she seems so lonely…
Where have you been, Ruka… I’ve been waiting for you all this time… for 250 years…
I reach my hand to touch her, but the light coming from her back is so bright and making my eyes in pain… I shut my eyes and…
DUUUUAAAAAAARRRRR
That man jumped up and fell to the ground with his butt bumped first, “Ouch… What the hell is that! How dare you ruin my dream!” He runs to the place where that loud sound coming from only saw a plane on fire and people shouting.
“Is that… persona… the coolest multifunction plane in rumor…?” He amazed by the size and designed of the plane in front him. He then smirk as something come up in his mind.
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At the same time
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In Pilot Chamber
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“We’re almost there!” said Kuu excitedly. He drives the plane to the dull old castle he said before.
“Yay! Team Rapappa! Go! Go!” said Yuko.
“Nee-chan, Rapappa is weird. Why don’t we use dragon… Team Dragon! It’s cooler than Rapappa” Atsuko complains.
“Nah… dragon is old-fashioned. Rapappa is more cooler, unique, and great name!” said Yuko.
“Yeah… yeah… I agree with Yuko. I prefer Rapappa than dragon.” add Kuu.
“Minami, said a word. You agree with me, right?” Atsuko asked Minami.
“Ummm….”
SRREEET (door open)
Haruna walk in with a supper set on his hands. “Minami-chan. I make you supper. Come and eat”
The supper contain special ramen with a heart-shaped fried egg and a glass of green tea.
“Where’s mine?” Yuko run towards Haruna and give him puppy eyes.
“Umm…. I just make one for Minami-chan.”
“NOT FAIR!” Yuko complained.
“Yeah.. not fair! I want too~” Kuu joined.
“I’m not hungry yet. You can have it, Yuko nee-chan.” Said Minami.
“Hooray! Supper handmade by Nyan Nyan… thank you.” Yuko kiss Haruna on cheek and take the supper. Haruna stunted for a while.
“I’m hungry too. Yuko, let’s share it.” Kuu join Yuko.
“No! I want to share it only with Nyan Nyan. Let’s eat.” Yuko drag Haruna to the coffee table and feed him. “Say ahh…”
“I should be sharing this with Minami… not with this person…” murmured Haruna.
“Did you say something?” asked Yuko.
“No.. ermm… you can have it yourself. I’m not hungry.” Haruna get up and about to walk, Yuko grab him and put him down to sit.
“Come on, my hands are getting tired. Nyan Nyan, say ahh…” Yuko still don’t give up want to feed her nyan nyan.
Kuu get between them and eat the ramen. “Hmpphh… blueekkk… this is awful…”
“That can’t be!” Haruna offend.
“Hey! I’m not feeding you. It should be for nyan nyan. Get back here!” Yuko want to hit Kuu but he run away. Yuko chase him around in the pilot chamber. Atsuko and Minami laugh at the scene.
Suddenly the plane is shaking and the alert device active. Bip bip bip bip bip…
Kuu hurriedly turn on the monitor and saw some aircrafts attack them. The aircraft have Matsui’s logo printed on its left wings. Kuu push some buttons to release machine gun to attack those aircrafts. About 20 minutes those aircrafts finally gone but persona’s left wings got crushed with one of the aircrafts and persona lost its balance. Persona is unable to maintain its balance and falling into the forest. Kuu managed to land down without getting crash but still, they have to dim out the fire on the left wings or else the plane will explode. Atsuko ordered one of the soldier to calm down the other people in the plane while they go to dim out the fire.
Kuu brought out his maintenance tools while Haruna and Yuko use their Nen power to make a barrier to prevent the fires spreading to another plants. Minami try to control the fire from growing. However, Minami can control fire and create fire but she can’t vanish it. Atsuko in other hand, focused in his Nen hoping he can bring some water from other place to here. After minutes, finally the fire dimmed out.
“Fiuuuhh… my persona.” Kuu cleaning the burnt area with rags while having tears all over his cute face. “I’m sorry… persona… I’ll fix you soon.”
KRAAKK (sounds of someone stepped on branches)
Atsuko see through the dark area across them and dash into it. He takes down that person and brings him to the others. He kicked that man’s legs to make him kneel down. “Who are you? What are you doing here?”
They can’t let their guard down after what happened just minutes ago. This person might be spy from Matsui. The atmosphere becomes tense. That man in blue outfit keeps struggling against Atsuko.
“Let me go! I’m just a hunter here.”
“Then, what are you doing here. It’s suspicious for you to be here in this late of night.”
“What the hell is going on you guys, I’m tired after travelling for days and sleeping here on the branch of that big tree. All of a sudden, you guys appear with that loud explosion and making me fall from the tree. My butt’s hurt you know! Look! Look!” That man shows his bruise and scratch on arms as the evidence he fell down from sleep.
“Well… I’m sorry” Atsuko apologize.
“Apologize accept.” Said that man with a bright smile. “Umm.. is that persona – the multifunction airplane rumored in the folks’ story?” he walks to touch the plane.
Kuu revive from his broken heart and put his arms around that man’s shoulder. “You have a good eyes, dude and yes… this is persona in the rumors.”
“So, it really can fly as plane, drive as car, and dive as submarine?” asked that man excitedly.
“Currently… no” Kuu answered with a smile face.
“EH?! So. It’s a lie?”
“Nope. It’s true. It just, I’m still missing one material to make it functioning.” Explained Kuu.
“Looks like you know well about persona. Where do you come from?” asked Haruna.
“Haha... sorry. I’m too excited to see this masterpiece. My name is Miyazawa Sae, a treasure hunter from Northsun village. Nice to meet you” Sae introduce himself.
“You are a treasure hunter? Me too! I am Minegishi Kuu. Just call me Kuu.”
“Ne, Kuu. Where did you get this persona?” asked Sae curiously.
“Well, this is my mother’s masterpiece. She passed it to me after she’s gone. Let’s get inside, it’s cool outside here.” Kuu invited Sae into the plane. The others follow them.
// Heheheheh…. It’s so easy to earn their trust. Wait till I stole this plane and sold it. Hahahahah… I’ll be rich for a life time…// said Sae in his mind. // But this man called Acchan seems hard to gain his trust… I have to distract him watching over me.//
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Hope this is not boring you (´・ω・`)
Thanks for reading （*´ｖ`*）
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So... haruna like Minami too~~ XD Interesting... nyahaha~~ and LOL... Ruka~~ Sae want to steal the plane... :lol:
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Oh now Sae is in da place! And I'm sure he can control an element too ^^
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jajaja sae yeah!! but its a bad person? aww..
jajaj i love kojiyuuu.. so tsundere nyanyan.. but we know you cant resist for so long about yuko`s charming
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XD Acchan getting jealous :peace:
Then stealing a kiss from Minami :wub: :inlove:
Haruna in love with Minami??!!! :w00t:
Thanks for the Update :thumbup :thumbup
Please Update Soon :bow: :bow:
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Yay! Update! Thank you.
Whoa. Haruna in love with Minami?
Sae wanting to steal Persona?
Can't wait fo the next chapter.
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Thanks all :heart: for reading~
Hope this chapter won't disappoint you :)
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Chapter 8
Meeting the vampire
Part 2
“Ne… where are you guys going?” asked Sae.
“We’re going to that old dull castle northwest from here” answered Kuu.
“EH?! You’re going to that old castle?”
“Any problem?” asked Atsuko.
“Don’t you know the folks’ story about that castle?” All of them shake their head and looking curiously at Sae. They are now gathering in pilot room.
“It was said that castle has been there for centuries and… cursed. Once you go inside, there’s no way back” said Sae with spooky voice. “It is said long ago there’s a prince come from nowhere land and build that castle in order to find her ‘eternal’ partner. He met a princess from this kingdom and fall in love but the king and the queen objected them. The princess agreed to elope with the prince… at the night they was about to leave this land, the king sent armies to kill the prince and get his daughter back. But something unknown happened. With just one night, those 4.800.000 armies died… within prince’s own hands…”
Yuko start clinging to Haruna and looking at him with glowing eyes, “aww… romance~”
Sae continued, “Unfortunately, someone stabbed the prince from behind and gave him a sudden dead. The princess’ eyes went red and she lost her mind. A powerful energy came out from nowhere and a huge tsunami wave hit this land for thousands mile. Many people were dead from that incident. All houses, plants, and building crashed and vanish from tsunami, and strange things happened. The castle is stand still there, no scratch, no damage, its backyard also in its wonderful condition. There was said that the princess still live in hate and is cursed there. Whoever dare to step their foot into her territory will only received dead” Sae gave out a breath and took a sip of drink.
“Touched story…” Yuko looking at Haruna with teary eyes.
Haruna gave Yuko his handkerchief, “It’s just a story, folks stories are always excessive.” Yuko stare at him and punch his chest repeatedly, “You’re not romantic at all”
“Haha… such a lovely couple” Sae commented
“Of course~” Yuko began to hug Haruna again.
“NO WAY!” Haruna keep pushing Yuko away from him. “Behave yourself in front of princ- umm… in front of…Mi…Minami?!” Haruna and Yuko paused when she saw Minami. All of them turn to see Minami who is sobbing hard, her tears can’t stop flowing from her eyes while Atsuko sat quietly beside her and keep wiping her tears with handkerchief and squeeze the tears into the bucket.
“Minami already crying like this from the start” Atsuko sigh.
“So…sorry. *Sob* … The story is sad” Minami apologize.
“Wow! Incredible! The bucket almost full with your tears” Kuu gave an amazed expression and put both his thumbs up.
“Mi..Minami-chan. Will you stop crying? Don’t waste your tears into some story like this. Your tears is too precious to be waste for this nonsense story.” Haruna try to comfort her.
“I don’t know how to stop it... It just flows.” Minami sob.
“Don’t worry. Acchan always have ideas to make her stop crying” said Yuko.
Atsuko smirk, he cupped Minami soft cheek and pressed their lips together… softly…in a quick kiss. Incredibly, Minami’s tears stop flowing anymore. “Good girl” Atsuko patted Minami’s head. Her face is now as red as tomato and somehow they can see some steam visible above her head.
“How can you…? That’s highly inappropriate! How could you kiss her in front of me!” Haruna about to sway his sword towards Atsuko but a fireball flashed with high speed and hit Atsuko on the face made him thrown a few meter away.
“Who said you can kiss me in public!” Minami pouted and pointed her finger to Atsuko, scolding him.
Atsuko sat reluctantly and gave her a bright smile, “did you mean… we can kiss in private?”
“Yes… umm…NO!... definitely No! Acchan no BAKA…” Minami blushed madly and launch a fireball to Atsuko again, then run hurriedly to the exit.
“Hahahaha…. You guys are funny” Sae laugh hardly. “ehem… what make you want to go there? Is it some rare treasure hidden there?” asked Sae.
“Nope. We just need a castle. That’s all.” Answered Kuu.
“Even we just met today, I still suggest you not to go.” Sae suggested.
“It’s just a story. Don’t take that too seriously.” Haruna disagreed with Sae.
“Yeah… I’m still going” Kuu jump onto the table and asked “Who’s with me?”
“I really want to go with you, Kuu. But, I’ll stay here with Minami” said Haruna. Atsuko glaring at him disagree with his statement, “I can accompany her, you just go with them”.
Feeling the heat, Kuu stood between them and wrap his arms on their shoulders, “boys go, girls left here. Fair enough?” Atsuko and Haruna nod as agreement. Yuko raised her hand, “I’ll tag along with you guys. You’ll need me to heal you if there’s unwanted things happened”
“Okay. Then, Sae. Can you stay here accompany Minami tonight? I’m trusting you with my plane” asked Kuu.
Sae winked and thumb up, “Leave it to me” only earned deathly stare from Atsuko and Haruna. “Don’t worry, she’s not my type” he said to ensure them. // My only interest is this plane //
“Ja! Let’s go!” Kuu drag them out from the plane and went to the castle.
Minami come back from the washroom found no one left in the chamber but Sae, “Eh? Where are they?” she asked.
“They went to the castle.” answered Sae.
“EH?! How dare they left me behind!” Minami complained.
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That night Atsuko, Haruna, Yuko and Kuu set out to the castle leaving Minami and Sae inside the plane. Fortunately the plane fell near to the castle, they just need an hour walk to reach it. After an hour they reached the castle gate.
“Spooky…” Yuko grab Haruna’s sleeve as they start to walk inside.
Only silent fill the castle, even they can hear the sound of theirs breathing and heartbeat. It was very dark there, the only source of light they have is moonlight. Bones and spider web scattered almost everywhere along the hallway they pass through. Four of them stayed silent and keep walking to explore the castle until Yuko decide to break the silent, “why do we have to explore it at night. Let’s go back… we better come again tomorrow morning. I don’t feel well inside here.”
“Me too. I got goose bumps from the start.” Atsuko agreed with Yuko. Haruna observe surround them and agreed with Yuko “I agree with Yuko. If we take a look in circumstance we’re in now, it will only disadvantage for us in a fight if something really happened.”
Kuu sighed, “three against one… I lose… okay, let’s come again tomorrow morning.”
When they reached the main door, suddenly the door closed. All of them went to pushed the door but it won’t move. A female voice rang from nowhere, “Ruka… Ruka… is that you?” A chill spread all over their body remembering the story which Sae told them. They freeze there and afraid to make a sound.
“Ruka…? Is that you…?” the voice rang again from nowhere.
“Is it ghost?” Yuko hug Haruna’s arm tightly. Haruna place his hand on Yuko’s in attempt to make her relieve a bit.
“Who’s there! Not Ruka… YOU’RE NOT RUKA! GIVE ME BACK MY RUKA!” suddenly the castle is shaking powerfully like having an earthquake.
“ARGGHHH!!!!!!!!” Atsuko, Haruna, Kuu, and Yuko yell in pain… an extreme pain. Their body being held up to the air by unknown power and they can’t breath like someone choking their neck, their body feels like in ice, freezing in pain.
“AAARRRRRGGGGGGHHHHHHHH”
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Dou ? ♪( ´▽｀)
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eeeeeeeehhhh??? what...what happened to them?? :panic:
“NO WAY!” Haruna keep pushing Yuko away from him. “Behave yourself in front of princ- umm… in front of…Mi…Minami?!” Haruna and Yuko paused when she saw Minami. All of them turn to see Minami who is sobbing hard, her tears can’t stop flowing from her eyes while Atsuko sat quietly beside her and keep wiping her tears with handkerchief and squeeze the tears into the bucket.
“Minami already crying like this from the start” Atsuko sigh.
I lol at this part :mon lmao: seriously.. Minami, how could you already crying when the story just started?? :mon lmao:
and Prince Atsuko always know how to make the princess to stop crying.. :on lol:
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Yay! update. :on woohoo:
Thank you. :kneelbow:
Wooo. Interesting.
Now I wanna know if this prince Ruka is Sae in a past life. But who maybe the princess?
Plaes update whenever you can. Thank you.
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Kyaaaaaaa! :panic:
I hope it's "her" that is looking for Ruka/Sae in past life maybe?
The story of the Prince and the Princess was so :cry: like Minami cried before the story even start LoL!
Thank you for your update! :bow:
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I don't know but the part that our heroes need a castle and a vampire in it seems like Suikoden II for me.
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lol. Aachan is a boy. very rare.
Nice fic by the way! :) :twothumbs
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hahaha atsuko kiss his wifey like a boss..
come on yuuchan fight for you men!!
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Eh!!! Ruka? The girl is Yuki?
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I need an update!!! and please don't make Yuko suffer from Haruna's tsundere!! lol xD
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Thanks d_ruffi, Megumi, Sok, haru9210, kahem, RenaChii, virgo_shaka, cielly, Haruko, haruhi16 and all for reading :heart:
@ Sok, Megumi, kahem : please keep reading and you'll know :) thank you :heart:
@ virgo_shaka : now you mention it (￣□￣;) it really feels like suikoden (ノД`) Gomenasai! O(_ _O)
@ haruhi16 : maybe in next chapter? :)
Please enjoy this chapter O(_ _O) thank you :heart:
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Chapter 8
Part 3
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At the same time in persona
Sae grab some sleeping powder inside his bag and blow it right at Minami face.
“What-” with that Minami faint asleep on the ground in seconds.
Sae smirk as he went near to the pilot chamber, sat on Kuu’s pilot chair analyzing the buttons function and the monitor. “Ja! Let’s see… hmm…. Maybe this is the engine starter.” He pressed one of the buttons, the engine started and light shown up in the monitor. “YESSSSS!!! I got persona! Persona!” He yelled in happiness managed to get the ship.
Preparation completed, Thief net launch… 3…2…1… (sounds come out from machine).
“What?” Sae puzzled with those words. Suddenly a set of nets shown up from his right side, left, above, front, and back side and trapped him inside it. “Ya da~!” He was now trapped in the net like a fish struggling against it.
There were two villagers doing patrolling in the corridor, they heard the alert sound coming from pilot chamber and went in, there they found Sae struggling in the net with his head upside down on the chair. “THIEF?!” shouted the villager.
They saw Minami laid on the ground “Minami-sama!” one of them is shaking Minami body to wake her up. “What are you doing to her?” he asked madly to Sae.
“Hello, hehe… I unintentionally pressed some buttons and got trap here. Can you help me out?” Sae asked. Villager1 grabbed Sae’s collar and put a knife on his neck, threatening him, “What are you doing to her?”
Sae put both his hands up “Hey… calm down, clam down. I didn’t do anything to her. she’s just asleep.” Villager1 still won’t let go of him and slightly slice Sae’s neck, there’s a bit of blood come out, “I won’t hesitate to CUT off your head…”
“Ouch…! I’m not lying. She’s really just sleeping! Left side on my bag has a small blue bottle, that’s the antidote, let her smell it and she will wake up. Just stop slicing your knife on my neck, please” Sae begged the villager. Villager1 pull his knife away and search for the antidote inside Sae’s bag. He threw the antidote to Villager2.
Villager2 pulled the bottle cap and place it around Minami’s nose. Not long after, Minami wakes up. “Ugghhh…” Minami shakes her head a bit.
“Minami-sama, I’m glad you’re awake. There’s a thief trying to steal this plane” said Villager2. Minami stood up and saw Sae upside down in the net. “What should we do with this thief?” asked Villager1 who still stand next to Sae.
“Minami-chan~ You are the most beautiful person I ever met in my life. I know you are a very good-heart person in this world. Why don’t you tell them to free me and let me go? We’re still friends right?”
Suddenly Minami feel her heart hurts, her whole body feels like burning inside. “Ughh..” Minami grab her shirt, kneel down hold out her pain. // the crilyst is reacting inside me…Is it Acchan and the others are in trouble? //
“What’s going on with her?” villager1 put his knife against Sae’s neck. Sae waving her hands and shakes head, “I’m not doing anything. I don’t know what happen to her this time. I swear! I swear!”
“Stop! Don’t hurt him” Minami ordered. “Relase him” Sae let out a breath, feel relieve.
“But…” villager1 disagree. Minami stood up with a serious face, “I need him take me to where Acchan and the others are now.” Villager1 nod and slice the net unwillingly.
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Back to the castle
As they arrive at the castle gate, Sae stop, “I’m done here. I don’t wanna go anymore further…It’s-”
AAARGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHH
They heard Atsuko and the others screaming, the sound was creepy enough to make you goosebump. Sae steps back and gulp, “I told you… I told you not to come here. I gotta go now. See ya!” he turn around and run away.
“Acchan!!!” Minami run towards the main door and pushed it with all her might, but it still didn’t move a bit. Those two villagers also keep pushing the door with Minami.
“Acchan!!! Acchan!!!” Minami steps back and launch several fireballs at the door. She cries even more as she heard their screaming inside the castle. Those two villagers also keep hitting the door with their Nen power. The door still won’t move.
“Step back” Minami ordered those two villager, they followed. Minami gathered her power, flames appeared on both her hands, the flames are getting more and more surrounds her body, “God of True Fire, grant me strength… RAGING WAVE!” like sea of fire, the flames hit the door powerfully. Things around them starts shaking, the door is slightly open up a bit. But her strength still not enough to hold it. // I won’t give up… Acchan… hang on there…// A sudden light beam passed through her and hit the door, help her pushing the door more wider.
“SAE?!” Happiness started to form on Minami face.
“I just can’t bear seeing a cute girl exhausted like this” Sae winked at her.
HIIYYAAAAA Minami and Sae increase their Nen power.
A light burst out and the door finally opened. They run inside the castle, “ACCHAN?! YUKO-NEE?!, HARU-KUN?! KUU?!” Minami called but no one answer. Inside it was so dark, Minami casted the fires on each torch in the castle makes it lighten up a bit. In front of them is a hall with stairs on the both left side and right.
“Minami-sama! Look at there!” Villager2 shouted. They saw something between those stairs. Their eyes widen to what they saw. Atsuko, Haruna, Kuu, and Yuko were hanged up in the air in cross position (like Christ) between the stairs at each side, blood over their face and body. “Acchan!” Minami called.
Atsuko opened his eyes heavily and whisper, “Run… hurry…”
BUMP
But it’s too late, the door closed again. The villagers run next to Minami in order to protect her. A girl in white night dress appeared on middle of the stairs.
“Who’s there!” shouted Villager1.
That girl disappeared into the dark, “Sinner… pray for your own blood…in this perfect moonlight…” she appeared below where Atsuko and the others were hanged up and disappeared again to nowhere.
A sound of flashes heard beside them but they see nothing. Within seconds, those two villagers around Minami fell down and dead, theirs body blow up and crush into pieces. Blood splash on Minami face…She was freeze, shocked… her brain can’t process what just happened.
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Sae POV
God! What have I gotten into? Is she the cursed princess in rumor?
I saw that girl appeared again beside Minami, “Move away!” I dash to her and bump into that mysterious girl, keep pushing that girl until she hit the wall. I lifted up my head to see her face.
she looks familiar… where have I seen her…? Her red eyes are emotionless… but somehow I feel like its fill with so many words she want me to know…
A pair of cold hands cupped my face, I saw her shed a tear, “Ruka…?” she said to me with tenderness. “Ruka… I miss you …” She’s looking at with those eyes again, I feel like I’m melting by those eyes.
No, Sae… wake up! don’t fool by her trick. Yes, this is a trick… or maybe not? I saw her looking at my neck, slice wound from before. “You are bleeding...” she snuggle against my neck and lick the wound. Is she... is she going to suck my blood?! she look into my eyes again with tenderness which make my heart melt... My body was freeze now, it's like I get hypnotized by her gaze... without warning she leaned in and pressed her lips with mine.
What the-? I was shock at first, but being kissed by a beautiful girl like her makes me hard to pull away. No… this is wrong. I shouldn’t do this…Damn body! Move! I try hard to push her away.
Ruka…
Ruka…
That voice echoed in my mind again, it’s sounds so familiar. It’s the voice in my dream. My Dream?! She is the girl in my dream?! Suddenly my head hurt, it hurt so much that I can’t move from where I am now.
“Sae! Move back!” Minami throw flaming wave to her and hit her directly, break me apart from her. I saw her cold eyes come back again, she raised her hand pointing where Minami was. “Argghhh!” Minami was lift up in the air and looks in pain. I gathered Nen in my fist and punch her face and launch my rolling kicks towards her. She was thrown away and hit the wall, stuck in it. Minami and the others released from her control and fell down to the ground.
They all lay on the ground weakly, “Blood…she controls blood in your body…” Kuu said weakly before he fell unconscious. Haruna and Yuko were laid there unmovable, Minami run to where Atsuko was and examined his wound.
CRRAAKKK
She is moving again. I saw her crying… her tears are red as blood… her gaze was completely empty “Why… Ruka…? No… You’re not Ruka!!!” she stood there and launched a spell towards me. “Raise of the Blue Moon… within the shadow… pray me with your sin… with your blood… TSUKI NO KAASU!”
Feeling the pressure of her Nen, I began to recite my spell as well, “Descendant of the Sun… grants me your might… lighten up all the darkness through its soul… ZEROSUM TAIYOU!”
Dark blue light fight against bright yellow light dazzling over the hall, I can feel increasing of gravity around me, pulling me down to the ground. My power near its limit, my body began limping, I shut my eyes and soon… my world filled by white light.
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Hope this chapter won't boring you... :(
Feel free to comment :)
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It's not boring at all. It's very interesting.
Thank you for the update.
Can't wait for the next.
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Ehh!!! She can control blood ??? What does Sae control
More and more interesting ^^
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I want more Sae X mysterious girl (or Yuki?)~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/shy1.gif)
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of course is yuki!! right ¬_¬
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OMG!! I wonder who is the cursed Princess :w00t:
I can't wait to read what happen next!!! :panic:
Thanks for the update :thumbup :thumbup
Please update soon :mon cute:
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owh.. forgot to comment before... :P Please update soon... :bow: I need to know what happen next... :bow:
the cursed princess!!! :panic:
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(´・ω・`) recently feels like my story is going far from the main storyline....
Sorry if my story was a bit mess up... (。┰ω┰。)
Please enjoy this chapter o(_ _o)
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Chapter 8
Part 4
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Sae POV
When I opened my eyes, I found myself in a white world. Everything here is all white, bright, empty and seems endless. Is this where they called heaven? Then where’s the angels? I keep walking and hoping that I could meet someone.
“Anybody here?”
After walking for so long, I found a door hidden within this white wall. Just as I opened the door, a huge typhoon blows me to nowhere. “WAHHHH!” and now I was in a garden, flowers here have nice scent, the sunlight shimmering through the glasses roof. There’s a couple laughing and playing with their little son, my heart feels so warm…
Suddenly, all my surroundings fade away… not long after, I was back in another scene, another place in bloody scene… two bodies lay lifeless in front of me… a woman in all black dress lick her fingers which covered by blood. I am trembling hard looking at her green eyes… I can’t move… I lost my strength to move because of her aura. She turn at me and launch attack on me. I shut my eyes and my surroundings fade away again.
I saw a teenage boy visit a grave, his parents’ grave in middle of grassland This place is so calm and warm, winds brushes gently at my skin. The tombstone clearly showed pictures of a couple. That’s the couple I saw before… I wonder if this boy is the same kid as before. After cleaning the tombstone, he turns back and walks towards my direction. I was shock from what I see. That face… this boy has the same face as mine?!! Our face, height, body structure are all the same, except his hair… he has silver hair.
The scene fade away again… my head is now fill with many pictures of someone… this girl is the girl I fight before. Many scenes of her calling me with the name of ‘Ruka’, I love her smiles, I feel like I’m being hypnotized everytime if I look at her eyes, her gaze freeze me.
Suddenly my surroundings going dark, examining around I realize that I was back in the castle. Same castle with different situation… this castle is in fire and filled with lifeless bodies scattered on the ground. I’m surprise to see my reflection in the mirror… I was in all white royal uniform… my hair is silver… I looked exactly the same with that silver haired boy from before.
I saw that girl is being captured by a woman, the black dressed woman I saw from the scene before.. Suddenly someone stab my back, his sword go through my heart, pierce it. I swing my right hand to lift them up high on air and crash their bodies into nothing. I pulled this damn sword out of my body and throw it towards the black dressed woman, she easily dodge it.
“RUKA! RUKA! Don’t die!” She’s calling my name over and over again.
“Hahahahaha… now is your turn, princess” that black dressed woman straighten her long fingers aiming that girl’s heart. I dash in and fight back but I am too weak that I got thrown away and my body crashed the wall.
“KKYAAAA!”
I saw her going berserk, that girl’s eyes become red. As a newbie vampire, she can’t control herself, she continue attack blindly and caused many people die. The black dressed woman lose against this girl’s strength and step back disappear nowhere.
“I have to stop her now…” I get up and hug her to calm her down. “Yuki! Calm down!” She finally stop struggling, I apart from her and cupped her face. She’s smirking at me, somehow I feel that her smirk is frighten. I feel some wet liquid run down in my body, I look down and find her hand is inside my chest. She smirk again and pulled out my heart. I saw my heart pumping in her hands… she smirk again and crushed it. The blood splashes on her face make her gain her sense, her eyes turn back to black.
“I’m glad you’re back to your senses… Yuki… I love you…” I gave out my last breath and close my eyes.
Once again, I’m back into all white room. A voice greeted me from behind, “Are you enough with those memories?”
This couple seems familiar… They are the boy’s parents!!
“What with ‘The boy parents?!’we are your parents!” said the man.
“My parents?”
“I know you are confuse” the woman hold my hands and explain, “You are our son, Ruka. After you die, you reincarnate as a human named Miyazawa Sae”
“So… that is all my memories?” I asked.
“Yes. We’re sorry have to leave you since you’re kid. All we can do now is to bring back your memories, our kingdom really in a mess because of that bitch. We are really happy if you can take over the crown” said the man.
Tears form in my eyes, “Father! Mother!” I hug them.
“Reunion time over. Now, hurry go back to where you are” mother said as she break apart from me.
“Look there!” father pointing the direction behind me. I turn to see what he’s talking about, ended up receive a kick on my butt and I fall down like sky-diving. “AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!”
“Live well my son! Don’t come here again!”
That was the last words I heard from him.
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At the same time in the castle
It’s been ten days since the incident, Atsuko, Haruna and Kuu are laying on the bed while Minami and Yuko taking care of their wounds. Haruna is still can’t move from his bed, his wounds are heavier than others because he uses his body as a shield for Yuko whenever she was about to be hit by the spell. After applying herb balm on his body and replace new bandages (Haruna is half-naked), Yuko feed him foods.
“I can eat by myself.” Haruna complained.
“Look! Your hands are trembling like this. You can’t even hold a spoon. Just let me serve you.” Yuko motioned him to open his mouth. Haruna just obediently open his mouth and let Yuko feed him. Looking at the wounds on Haruna body, Yuko felt guilty and she looked down for a moment, “Don’t do this ever again… don’t shield me with your body again… my heart hurts a lot…” tears started to form in Yuko eyes.
Haruna wipe her tears gently, “I won’t… I won’t let you get into a fight anymore so that I don’t have to shield you. You’re really a burden to me” Haruna said jokingly but that makes Yuko cry even more and unable to control herself to hug Haruna. “Ouchh… hurts”
“Sorry…” Yuko leaned away, wiping her tears. She picked up the bowl and continued feeding her beloved nyan nyan. “Say ah…”
// Aw… so cute… I think it’s worth protecting her. Wait?! What am I thinking? Since when this annoyed pervert girl become CUTE? No... no... no… I serve only to Minami-chan.// Haruna fight against himself in his own mind. But seeing Minami feeding Atsuko the potion as usual lovey-dovey moment, demoralize him. // Maybe I should start accept her? //
Poor Kuu have to do self-service and enviously looking at them. “I can’t accept this anymore!” Kuu growl and exit the room. “Why am I the only one who got no partner…hiks” he even make a fake sob. He walked to another room to visit where Sae and that creepy girl were.
After the fight, they found both Sae and that girl laid on the ground side by side with mysterious visible blue glowing light surround them like womb. The light still visible until now, they don’t know how to separate those two from that womb. So, they just place them in a room and analyze the process.
“Couple here… couple there… I guess a little shopping is perfectly suit me now” Kuu sighs and went to the city.
The villagers move to the castle as well after the incident. They were all warm-hearted and diligently rebuilt the castle. They were very happy to find this new home rather than living in a plane and having airsick. The castle was now fresh with new air and green hayfield with beautiful flowers bloom in the garden. Minami and Kuu often take a walk into the neighborhood town and village to help miserable people and invite them to live in the castle.
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TBC
Next chapter will add a new mafia companion !!(★▼▼)o┳*-----------------●));´ﾛ`))
@ kahem : Yuki have blue moon to control blood, Sae has the element of Sun which control light and solar...
Feel free to comment for my improvement
（●´∀｀）ノ ARIGATOU GOZAIMASHITA
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Very interesting chapter. :ding: Thank you for updating. :kneelbow:
Poor Kuu still got no partner. :gmon fry: I wonder who the woman in the black dress was. :mon dunno: Please update soon.
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Ah moon and sun, I see.
Poor Miichan, always alone. Will he find his partner during shopping?
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YEEEEYYYY~!! It's getting more interesting~!! SAEYUKI~! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/luvluv1.gif)
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Blue Moon Rune and Sun Rune. Two of 27 True Runes. I wanna play Suikoden again. :thumbsup :thumbsup :thumbsup
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Thanks d_ruffi, Megumi, kahem, RenaChii, Sok, virgo_shaka
@ virgo_shaka : Hehe.. because I don't know what to name for their elements, so I borrowed blue moon and sun rune from suikoden^^ suikoden is my favorite besides FF♪( ´▽｀)
@ kahem, Sok : hmm... I'm still thinking who will be partner with Kuu.. XD
Please read o(_ _o)
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Chapter 9
Friends and Foes
Part 1
// So, this is Majijo Castle where they live? It looks poor and ugly…//
“Help! Help!” said a hooded girl running towards the castle.
She’s being chased by two well-built men who wear like a robber. One of them swaying his knife while the other launching the hemp-rope towards her. The robber throw the knife on her and cute her forearms, while the other succeeded to twined her legs making her falling to the ground. The girl won’t give up and keep running towards the castle gate.
“Help! Help!” the girl cried.
Fortunately, Sae and Yuki were taking a walk near there. The hooded girl run into Sae and hug him.
“Help me! They’re robbers!” the girl cried.
Sae raise his hand up high borrowing the solar energy of the sun and launch it to the two robbers. Their eyes were in pain because of the brightness and the hot they received.
“AHhh…! Run!”
The two robbers run away. The hooded girl still hugging Sae and crying on his shoulder.
“Thanks… thanks for saving my life.”
“Nah… it’s okay.” Sae sratches his hair and give a wink to that girl.
The hooded girl tip toe and give Sae a kiss on his cheek, “Thank you…”
This acts raised Yuki’s anger, she went beside Sae and trampled his foot very hardly… giving him an annoyed face and walk away. Sae squatted down and rubs his toe in pain.
“Are you okay?” asked the hooded girl.
“It’s okay… by the way, what is your name? Why are they chasing you?” asked Sae.
The girl began crying, “My name is Mayu, Watanabe Mayu… I am with my parents having a trip to the city of Iimiram. Those guys appeared in the middle of way and attacked us… my parents…sob… killed by them…”
“Poor girl… I’m sorry to hear that.”
“No… I’m grateful that you helped me. By the way, is she your girlfriend? I guess she’s really mad when I kissed your cheek…”
“Umm… you can say that she is my… Wife??” Sae answered doubtly.
“Oh… I guess I have to go for an apologize then.” Mayu went after Yuki.
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Back Garden of the Castle
Yuki sat on the bench and frowning her face, mad at Sae about why he let that girl to kiss his cheek. Someone walks slowly approach her and put a flower crown on her head.
“I’m sorry for what I did before… I don’t know you are his wife. I’m just want to say thanks for saving my life.” Mayu said.
Yuki took the flower crown and smiling, “This is beautiful… thank you.” Yuki smiled at her. “You don’t have to apologize, I was mad at him not you.”
Mayu clap her hands together and act cute, “Yokatta…”
“Come, sit here”
Yuki and Mayu get along very well. They’ve met just now, but they already chats like sisters. Mayu told Yuki about her miserable incident, Yuki cheering her… and now they’re chatting and laughing together…
Sae is peeking at them behind one of those pillars in the corridor. “She was so mad at me … and now she’s laughing and having chit chat with the girl who kissed me…?” Sae put his hand under his chin and thought, “I should observe more about my past-life wife’s behaviours…”
// Phase 1 complete... They are nothing just a fool. So easy to be deceived. I guess this mission will last no more than 2 weeks //
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City of IIMIRAM
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Kuu POV
Wow! This is the cleanest and neatest city I ever walk through. Workshop here and there, alchemist shop, weapon shop, potion shop, inn, theater, fashion shop, antique shop, food streets, and brothel. Hmm… should I try the brothel? Haha… I’m going to test all the foods in this town first…
I wandering inside the city testing the foods and exploring the antique shop hoping can found the material I want for my dearest plane – Persona. There’s a small bridge across me, I walk there to take a rest and having my meal. As I walk through into the small gang before going there, I heard people shouting “Stop right there!”
Soon after, someone bump into me. This person is taller than me, wearing a black wool cabby hat with short brown hair, white shirt inside and a black long coat. I saw something drop from his pocket but this person ran downward the bridge and out of my sight before I can call him.
Curiously, I picked up the box and opened it… and guess what? Inside it is the material I’ve been searching for!! “Snow Violet Crystal Shard!!!” I quickly closed it again and pressed my mouth with hand, turn my head to the right, to the left, and finally hide it in my pocket smiling cunningly.
There’re more people run through here, they were all wearing black coat. I heard them shouting and cursing someone for stealing their trading goods. Maybe this is the stolen goods, but that’s not my business, just ignore it. I am very happily walked back to the castle. I finally can repair my Persona and renovate it into multifunction plane.
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Somewhere in the city
“Chief Mario, we must find the material soon for the ship. Otherwise, we can’t get out from this city” said one of his followers.
“Damn! Must be dropped somewhere when I’m running” Mario walk around in circle in front his desk and recall the place he ran through, “Must be that boy… find all the boy between 16~20 years old and bring him to me!! NOW!”
“Yes Sir!” the men disband themselves to follow the order.
Mario sat at his chair, looking at the photo at his necklace. “I won’t let you down, father. I won’t denigrate your name in mafia family. I’ll lead those brothers to better live”
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At the city gate
Kuu was so happy walking to the exit of this city. Suddenly his vision became black. There’s two men in black covered him with black sack and kidnapped him into underground black market café. Outside the café, there can be seen so many boys in tied and blind folded, black sacks thrown aside. They went inside the café and take the lift to upper floor. They arrived at third floor of an old building in the middle of the city.
“Chief, is this the person you want?” the men took Kuu out from the sack.
“He-” Kuu surprised when he saw the person right in front of him.
Chief Mario came closer to examine Kuu. He narrowed his eyes, “Garb him tight!” he ordered.
“Hey! What are you going to do with me?! I have no money!” Kuu struggling.
Chief Mario searched his body and found the small box of violet crystal shard. “This is it”
“No! that’s mine! Give me back!” Kuu shouted.
Chief Mario kicked Kuu stomach and punch his face, “This is MINE! I know you picked it up on the street before” he gave Kuu a devilish smirk.
“Give me back!” Kuu use his Nen and throw away two men who grabbed him. He dash into Mario, making the box slipped away from Mario hand and flying in the air. They launch kicks and puched rapidly in very fast movement. While the box is still in the air, they both jumped to catch the box and Mario hand is closer to the box because he is taller than Kuu. Knowing this disadvantage within the height, Kuu use his Nen by controlling the air and make the box flying to his side.
“Height has no use against me” Kuu run away and break the window, jumped downward.
“CHASE HIM!” Mario ordered his henchmen. He punch his hand at wall, breaking it. “Don’t let me see you again, otherwise don’t blame me to be cruel on you”
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Back at the castle
Kuu happily go back to the castle to inform the others that he found the material for his ship. Just as he opened the door, he saw Yuki and Sae having tea together with the others.
// Sae… vampire girl… laughing… chatting with others…? //
Kuu hastily took out his gun and pointed at where Yuki was, “Vampire girl! What did you do to them? Are you hypnotized them? Controlling them? Or… you turned them into vampire too?!!!”
“Kuu… let me explain…” Sae approach him.
“No! don’t come anymore closer!” Kuu was about to pull the trigger. Sae gain his Nen and use the solar power to melt Kuu’s gun.
“Ouchh… hot~ hot! Hot!” Kuu throw away the gun. He steps back and bump into somebody.
“Ouch…” a girl fell on the floor and spilled the tea she brought.
“Sorry, are you okay?” Kuu offered his hand to help the girl stand up.
“I’m fine. Thank you’ the girl smiled cutely to him.
// Wow… such cute girl… // Kuu was gaze at her for seconds.
“Umm… could you let go of my hand?” asked the girl.
“Oh… haha… sorry…” Kuu apologize. ”I am Kuu. Minegishi Kuu. What’s yours?”
“My name is Watanabe Mayu, nice to meet you” Mayu gave him her cute smile again.
“Umm… I’m sorry to make your clothes dirty… how about we go to have some shopping this afternoon. I’ll pay for your clothes” Kuu offered a date to Mayu.
“It’s okay. I’ll just get some change in my room. Please excuse me” Mayu smiled and get out from the room. Kuu followed her from behind but stopped by Sae who grab his shirt collar.
“Easy…easy, you’ll scare her” Sae said teasingly.
“Eehem… looks like somebody fall in love~” Atsuko said teasingly. Minami and Yuko gave him a whisle.
Kuu finally snapped out from Mayu charm and going panic again, “VAMPIRE!! I am now in vampire nest! Oh no!”
Sae shut his mouth with hand, “Shut up! Hear me first! Let me tell you the story”
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After some minutes, Kuu began to understand the situation.
Sae explained all the things about his past and this vampire girl named Yuki also introduce herself, and also explained about how Mayu came and stay in this castle.
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Somewhere in the castle
// Damn! If that bastard didn’t show up. They already drunk my poison tea.//
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TBC.....
Thanks for reading ( ´▽｀)
Hope this chapter didn't confuse you
Q : did you notice the name of the city?
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so mayu is the woman in all black dress and she's the one who made the poison tea :?
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Mayu's trying to kill them? :mon chilly: Why? I wanna know. :mon gamer: Kuu's interested in Mayu. :mon woo:
Thank you for the update.
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Oh~ Nezumi is here and is kuu partner
What is special with the name of the city?
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Yup, Suikoden is really fantastic game along with Final Fantasy and Chrono Series. And you made the Blue Moon and Sun Rune bearer here the same character with Suikoden. Yuki as Blue Moon Rune's bearer share the same charasteristic with Sierra from Suikoden II as a vampire and Sae as Sun Rune's bearer characteristic is the same with Prince Freyjador from Suikoden V for being a woman-killer. :)
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Why you jealous Yukirin~? That's your daughter~ LOL (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_lol.gif)
Please update soon~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_inluv.GIF)
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Thanks Sok, Yagami.Rai, d_ruffi, kahem, RenaChii, virgo_shaka, Megumi, qyyzz101
It's been weeks since the last update due to my personal matters... :kneelbow:
Anyway, hope you like it..
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Heroes
Chapter 9
Friends and Foes
Part 2
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City of IIMIRAM
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Somewhere in the tavern
“Let me go!”
“Jurina, just obey what father said.”
“Rena nee-chan! Please wake up! Don’t you know what are you doing? He is not our father anymore! He is MONSTER!” Jurina struggles against his sister – Rena. His hands are being cuffed by Rena.
“Such a rebellious kid” a man in black royal robe walks into the room.
“You’re not my father! You are the shame of Akimoto Kingdom, shame of Matsui fami-”
PLAAKKK
Before Jurina can continue his words, he slapped by his father. “Lock him in this room until he realized what is his status and duty!”
“Yes, father” Rena tied Jurina’s hands with rope and hanged him at the ceiling.
The room filled with silent. After King Matsui and all his guard went out the room, Rena whisper something to Jurina, “I know killing is wrong, but I have to do it… I have to find the reason why father become so cruel… and who is the master behind this.”
Without giving chance for Jurina to speak, she exited the room and locked the door.
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Somewhere in the city
“Kuu, why are you wearing a mask?” asked Minami.
Kuu rub the phantom mask on his face, “This is cool isn’t it?” he sighed, “There’re people here want to catch me just because I picked up something”
“Then, just return it”
“No! that’s the material I’ve been searching for!” Kuu sighed, “Besides, I already use that for my Persona. They will definitely kill me”
“By the way, where does your uncle live?” Kuu asked Mayu.
“Umm… if I am not wrong, he lives in that tavern” Mayu pointing a luxurious tavern not far from them.
Flashback
This person named Kuu seems to have interest on me. He is stupid too, maybe I can use him as a bait…
“Anyone here want to join me?” Kuu barged into the gathering room, “I want to escort Mayu to where her uncle lives…”
“I wish I can meet my uncle and tell him about my parent’s death…” Mayu pretend to be frightened, “But I’m afraid of beasts and robbers on the way to there…”
“Don’t worry, we’re all good fighters. Aren’t we?” Kuu puts his arms around Minami’s shoulder, only gets smack from Haruna and Atsuko.
“Don’t touch Minami” Haruna and Atsuko said at once.
“Mou, Harunyaan~ I’m jealous here” Yuko starts clinging on Haruna again, as usual Haruna will push Yuko away from him and Yuko just sticks like glue.
“Acchan, let’s escort her” Minami asked for Atsuko’s decision.
“Hmm…” after thinking for a while Atsuko agree with Minami, “Okay, let’s escort her. But not all of us, some must stay here in the castle”
“We’ll stay here” said Sae and Yuki.
“Me and Harunyaan too~!” Yuko is still clinging against Haruna.
“No! I have to protect Minami!” Haruna complained.
“What? You are hungry? Let’s find something to eat then~” Yuko tried to drag Haruna away but he is too heavy for Yuko’s small size body. “Sae~ Yuki~ Help me~” she asked.
“Hai~” Sae and Yuki gladly help Yuko to drag Haruna away.
“No!!!”
Flashback End
“Here you are, we gotta go back to the castle now” Atsuko said.
“Wait!” Mayu grabbed Atsuko’s sleeve, “Ermm… thanks for escorting me. Please come inside and have a tea first, I have to treat you as my thanks.”
“Yeah… yeah… no need to rush~” Kuu huddle at Atsuko and bring him inside the tavern, following by Minami behind them.
“I’ll go to get my uncle here. Please have some tea” Mayu
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Upstairs in the tavern
Knock Knock
“Mother, I have brought them here” Mayu reported to her mother.
A tall woman in black dress gown gets up from her bed, “Good job, Mayu. I’m not wrong in adopting you as my daughter”
“I might have starved to death if I didn’t meet you. It’s you who saved me, I serve my life for you, mother” Mayu help her mother get down from the bed and guide her to sit on the sofa beside it.
Knock Knock
“My Queen, preparation’s complete. Princess Rena is ready to launch attack” a guard reported to Mayu’s mother.
“Good… Seal all the way out from this city. Until we get the crylist” Queen commanded.
“As you wish, my Queen”
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Back to downstairs of the tavern
“Hey, you there. Hurry and get out from this city!” Jurina approaches where Atsuko and the others were.
“Jurina! How have you been?” Atsuko give him a hug.
“We’ll talk later. Gotta get out of here first” Jurina motioned them to follow him.
Suddenly needles flying towards them. Jurina uses his boomerang to knock down all the needles. There is this hooded girl disappear into the shadow. Not long after they were surrounded by the guards.
“What’s going on here?” Kuu asked.
“They must be aiming the crilyst” Atsuko stands in front of Minami in standby mode and scans the area to find the way out. “Follow me!”
Atsuko burst into the guards to open the way for the others. The guards are just too weak against Atsuko and been thrown away easily. Once they arrive at the backdoor, Atsuko crushes the wall to seal the way out. As they walked out from the tavern, the streets already been surrounded by Matsui’s armies. All gates of the city being sealed and no one could get out from the city. They quickly sneak into a small street between buildings.
“Damn!” Jurina growls.
"Wait a minute..." Kuu seems to realize something missing, “Wait! Mayu is still inside!”
“She’ll be fine. We gotta get out of here first” Jurina said firmly.
“How can she be fine? She is just a weak girl. I gotta find her” Kuu parted from them to search for Mayu but is held by Minami.
“Kuu, calm down!”
“How can I calm d-” before he continues, Jurina smack him.
“One life against four, which is major?!” he yelled. “Wake up… she’s not weak as you think she is. She’ll be fine” His words make Kuu silence and feels down.
“We should find a safe place to clear our head first” Atsuko and the others sneaking all the way in the city to find
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To be continue~
Thanks for reading ( ´▽｀)
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Thanks for te update
So Jurina and rena are siblings..
I wonder who is the queen??..
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Who is that 'mother'? Is her who made Jurina's father like that?
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Wow~ Thnkas for the update! :on GJ:
What? Junria and rena related?
Kuu still thinking Mayu's innocent and weak. :on yellcard:
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Yei!
Thank you for your update!
Arígatou! :kneelbow:
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Un . . . maybe it's that 'mother' the one behind this (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_suspect.gif)
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Thanks for reading minna~
Thanks kahem, Sok, d_ruffi, Megumi, RenaChii, msst28
And yes, the mother is behind all of this... who is that mother? (still thinking the suitable character :P )
I make the summary of the characters showed up until chap. 9 and the explanation of their current status, will update Chapter 10 sooon...
Nen >>> spiritual power which forms from inside body to strengthen physical power
Crilyst >>> kinds of mysterious crystal stone which grants power to its owner.
Numbers of crilyst shown up until now are:
Water crilyst by Maeda Atsuko
Fire crilyst by Takahashi Minami
Wind crilyst by King Matsui
Lightning crilyst by Kojima Haruna
Blue moon by Kashiwagi Yuki
Sun rune by Miyazawa Sae
Beast rune by Matsui Rena
Characters:
From Takahashi Kingdom:
King & Queen Takahashi >>> Status is unknown since the destruction of Takahashi Kingdom
Great General, Kojima >>> Died while protecting Princess Minami
Great Alchemist Minegishi >>> Cousin of General Kojima, expert in mechanic and weapons, currently is missing
Takahashi Minami >>> The only heir of Takahashi Kingdom, the holder of Fire crilyst
Kojima Haruna >>> Son of the Great General, Kojima and the holder of lightning crilyst. He is also Minami’s childhood friend
Minegishi Kuu >>> Son of the Alchemist Minegishi, expert in mechanic and he has the ability to control air. Grown up together with Minami and Haruna
From Maeda Kingdom:
King & Queen Maeda >>> Status is unknown since the destruction of Maeda Kingdom
Great physician Oshima >>> Best friend of King Maeda and is Yuko’s father. Currently is missing when Atsuko is 11
Maeda Atsuko >>> The only heir of Maeda Kingdom, the holder of Water crilyst
Oshima Yuko >>> Daughter of great physician Oshima, she inherits her father’s skill in medic.
From Matsui Kingdom:
King Matsui >>> The one who destroy Maeda Kingdom & Takahashi Kingdom in order to get the crilyst
Princess Matsui Rena >>> Daughter of King Matsui who posses the power of beast. She always become insane and berserk like a blood thirst monster whenever she uses her power of the beast rune
Prince Matsui Jurina >>> Son of King Matsui and the only one who doesn’t get controlled in his family. He helps Atsuko and the other against his father. He feels that his father sudden change and become cruel is caused by someone
Mayu >>> A cute girl who is adopted as daughter by black dressed woman
Black dressed woman >>> Known as the Queen Matsui, the stepmother of Rena and Jurina. Still unsure with her identity (maybe related with the black dressed woman in Sae’s past life…?)
From the journey:
Miyazawa Sae >>> A thief from Sun village. He is reincarnation of a prince from Vampire land.
Kashiwagi Yuki >>> A gorgeous vampire who is Sae’s lover (250 years ago)
Shinoda Mario >>> (real name still unrevealed) She cross dressed as a man to protect her father’s family business in mafia world. Unfortunately, her treasure is stoled picked by Kuu and used for his multifunction airplane, Persona. Her mafia members been killed by Matsui armies in the city.
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This is the image of the multifunction airplane - PERSONA~
(http://images.wikia.com/finalfantasy/images/a/a0/Highwind_5.jpg)
And this is the chamber where they always gathering at~
(http://images.wikia.com/finalfantasy/images/f/f4/Highwind_bridge.png)
[Image above is adopt from Highwind in FFVII]
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I don't know why Haruna keeps pushing Yuko away from him~ -____-
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Chapter 10
Declare of the War
Part 1
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City of IIMIRAM
Hosh hosh hosh
// Damn! I got separated from them… //
“Stay right there!” Guards appeared at the end of the road and chasing Kuu.
Kuu keeps running and running since he has no strength to fight against them. He runs to the centre of the city and found familiar building, the black market cafe where he was kidnapped before. // Maybe I can distract them in that building // Kuu smirks and run inside the café. Different from what he thinks, the café was in mess as he went inside. It seems like there’re been fights not long ago. Tables and chairs crushed with unmoving bodies lay on the ground.
“Sorry… sorry… “ Kuu steps on those bodies to across the hall.
Drap drap drap
Not far from him, a figure is running fast toward him. Before he can move his body, the figure knocked him down and dragged him to hide behind barrels. Kuu raise his head to find out that the figure is mafia chief who kidnapped him, “YOU… hmmpphh !!!!!”
“Sshhh…”Mario pressed his hands on Kuu’s mouth to prevent him shouting.
“Hmmpppphhhh!!!” Kuu waves his hands to tell Mario that he can’t breathes and plead Mario to release his hands.
“Puuuahhhh… are you trying to kill me?” Kuu whispers.
“………………..” Mario’s eyes keep scanning the area and ignore Kuu.
Kuu lock his eyes on Mario, waiting for him to response. Mario’s hair is so messy and there’re bruises over his smooth face. Somehow Mario looks hot, Kuu travels his eyes to his sweaty neck and went down to his worn, unbutton white shirt. His chest is… similar to woman…
// WOMAN…?!!! // Kuu gasped and pressed his hands on his own mouth.
Mario turn to face Kuu and found him locking his eyes on her chest… or precisely, on her breast. Mario’s eyes widen and she gave him a hard slap, make Kuu thrown backward and rolling on the floor.
The sounds of Kuu rolling and hits on the wall attract the guards, “There they are!!!”
“RUN!!!” Kuu yelled and ran to upstairs. After stepping up few stairs, he turn to look at Mario who is still sit on the floor, “What are you doin-”
Kuu noticed Mario’s leg is swollen and bleeding. He took off his coat and went down again to where Mario was. After putting his coat on Mario, he lifted her up in bridal style and ran upstairs once more.
“What are you doing? Let me down!” Mario hits Kuu on chest.
”Hmm?” Kuu leaned in very close to her face, makes Mario gasp and stay silent. “If you open your mouth again, I’ll kiss you~” said Kuu with his famous wink.
“STOP RIGHT THERE!!!” The guards shout.
“Hold on tight~” Kuu whisper softly in Mario ears, makes her blushing. He’s speeding up his pace towards the windows, “Here we go~”
Mario snapped out and understands what will Kuu do, “Are you trying to jump from here? Crazy!! This is 15th floo— WAAAAAAAAAA” Mario closed her eyes and hug Kuu tightly.
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At the same time
Jurina is trapped inside a dark building… only him and a hooded girl. The girl is using needles as weapon and Jurina keep dodging all the attacks without effort to fight back.
“Why don’t you fight back?” asked the hooded girl.
“I won’t fight you” said Jurina. “Please, leave them. Don’t hurt them”
“Why? They’re here to kill your father. Why you keep defending them?”
“Mayu, they are the one who can stop my father from his insane. They are the one who can save this kingdom from destruction. Do you know that your mother is going to–” Before Jurina finished his words, Mayu launched a fist on his face, makes him fall to the ground.
“I know nothing” Mayu walked passed by Jurina, “You should just sit at your throne and watch the war, my Prince… Matsui Jurina” Mayu went out and locked the door to prevent Jurina going to where Atsuko is.
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At the same time at the center of City Iimiram Atsuko and Minami were surrounded by the guard. No matter how many times they banished those troops, it always appears like limitless. They already run out of strength to fight. In the middle of the troops, a tall, well-built man in royal black robe walks toward them. Beside him shows a girl in dark blue robe.
“Are they the descendants from Maeda and Takahashi?” asked the man.
“Yes, father. He is the only heir from Maeda Kingdom and the girl is the heir of Takahashi Kingdom” answered the girl.
“Good job, Rena” King Matsui throw his fist on the air and signaling the troops to move back. He approached Atsuko and Minami, “Hand me your crilyst and I will spare your live”
“HYAAAA!” Atsuko launch an attack against him but failed. King Matsui grabbed his left arm and cut it off with the sword.
“ARRRGGGHHHHH”
He threw Atsuko’s left arm far away then he launched his strong fist right on Atsuko’s chest. Blood spilt out from Atsuko’s mouth. His body feels limb and falls to the ground with blood flowing from his left shoulder. His crilyst dropped out from his clothes and rolled to King Matsui’s foot. He picked up the crilyst and smile evilly.
“Atsuko!!!” Minami cried and run to Atsuko. King Matsui smirked and holds his sword readily to slay Minami when she approached.
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To be continue...
Thanks for reading ( ´▽｀)
sorry for the bad english and hope this chapter didn't confuse you...
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Ok.. understand more about the characters..
:shock: Persona really big.. I imaging a small plane
:OMG: Atsuko lost his hand..
how there you cut atsuko hand... :angry1:
Well hope you update next chapter
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MariKuu! Kiss her Kuu! KISS HER!!! <333333333333333
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MariKuu! Kiss her Kuu! KISS HER!!! <333333333333333
jaja i thought the same thing..
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“HYAAAA!” Atsuko launch an attack against him but failed. King Matsui grabbed his left arm and cut it off with the sword.
“ARRRGGGHHHHH”
He threw Atsuko’s left arm far away then he launched his strong fist right on Atsuko’s chest. Blood spilt out from Atsuko’s mouth. His body feels limb and falls to the ground with blood flowing from his left shoulder. His crilyst dropped out from his clothes and rolled to King Matsui’s foot. He picked up the crilyst and smile evilly.
“Atsuko!!!” Minami cried and run to Atsuko. King Matsui smirked and holds his sword readily to slay Minami when she approached.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! :on blackhole: :on blackhole: :on blackhole: What's Happen to my AtsuMina?! :pleeease: Btw, Please Update soon! I'm really Curious about the continuation! :mon XD:
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Marikuu part is so cute~
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Thanks d_ruffi, RenaChii, kahem, Nakamii, msst28, haruhi16, Haruko
@ msst28, Nakamii : I'm sorry for making Atsuko lost his left arm :mon lurk:
@ haruhi16, Haruko, kahem : thanks for liking MariKuu part :D
More characters is showing, hope I won't confuse you :(
Please enjoy this chapter~
HEROES
Chapter 10
Declare of the War
Part 2
“Atsuko!!!” Minami is running toward the unmoving body of Atsuko.
King Matsui swayed his sword toward Minami, “DIE!”
“Minami!” Atsuko gets up and uses his body as shield for Minami. The sword slaying deep at his back, Atsuko can’t hold his weight and fell to the ground. His white clothes stained by blood which nonstop flowing from his body.
“NO!! Atsuko! Wake up! Wake up!” Minami held Atsuko’s body tightly and crying hard, no wanting to leave him.
King Matsui gathered his Nen on the sword and launch attack again toward them. Minami closed her eyes and held Atsuko tightly in her arms. In that moment, her crilyst inside her body has reaction. Red flame aura surrounds them for seconds then disappeared. Waiting for seconds, she feels nothing, she opened her eyes to take a peek and found out King Matsui stopped his sword just an inch above her head. His expression is different from before, his cold expression and dark aura seems gone.
“Run! Take him out of this city!” King Matsui told her. He looks in pain to hold his sword. Minami still sit on her spot, confused by his words. “Hurry! I can’t hold this anymore… My mind and body is being controlled by someone… before I lose my mind again, hurry run from this place!!!” he shouted.
Minami is too weak to hold Atsuko’s body. Before she could move from her place, King Matsui is back to dark form. His eyes become dark again and his body is surrounded by dark aura, his Nen power is much stronger than before, “Don’t think you can run from me!” He swings the sword at them.
“WIND BLADE!!”
“Nature of the wind, lend me strength and become shield for us, SHIELD!”
Kuu dived down from the sky and stopped in front of Minami. His right hand forms a transparent shield to protect them from the blow of King Matsui while his left hand holds Mario. His strength is not enough to fight against King Matsui’s crilyst. They are thrown far backward on the ground.
The wind controller… match with my crilyst…
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Meanwhile In the Castle
“How are you, Yuko?”
“DADDY??!!!” Yuko jumps on her father like a koala and greeting him with big bear hug.
“You have grown up sooo much~” Oshima take a peek at Yuko’s breast.
“Still pervert as ever…” Yuko automatically tweak his father’s ear, “Where did you go? I search you for years!”
“Hurt… hurt…” Oshima bend down to reduce the pain at his ear which tweaked by Yuko. “You must go to the city of Iimiram right away, Atsuko and Minami is in danger”
“What did you mean by that?” Haruna barged into the room.
“Ah… you are Kojima’s son, right? You’re so gorgeous just like your mother” Oshima greet him with a hug. “Is he your boyfriend?” he asked Yuko.
“Yes!” Yuko answered.
“Eh? No, I’m not” Haruna corrected.
Yuko approached Haruna and clinging her arms at his right arm, “Mou~ I’m already yours” she lied.
“Is that true?” Oshima put his arm around Haruna’s neck and pulling him down, “How does she taste? Her body is WOW, right?” He smirks at Haruna imagine her passed wife, “She inherited her mother’s perfect body…”
“I… I… didn–” Haruna is trapped between Oshima and Yuko, hearing the fights between father and daughter. After minutes of badmouthing on each other, Haruna remembered the main topic. “Umm… uncle Oshima, what did you mean that Atsuko and Minami are in danger?”
“GOSH! I forgot it!” he become serious and explained the condition to them, “The city is surrounded by Matsui armies, they are aiming for the crilyst. I doubt that they can survive from Matsui”
Haruna’s face becomes pale, “From here to the city need three days… we can’t get in time…”
“We have persona, don’t we? Persona will take us there in no time” Yuko said.
“But… I don’t know how to operate it”
“……………..” The room becomes incredibly silent at that moment.
“You can count on me!” a woman step inside the room.
Haruna jaw dropped at the person before him, “Aunt Minegishi!!!”
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Flashback
Back to where Haruna’s mother death…
“Kojima! Kojima!” the great physician Oshima uses his crilyst to cure general Kojima’s wound. His power forms a silk womb and surrounds them.
“Oshima… princess… princess Minami…” Kojima try her best to talk, blood is coming out from her mouth.
“Don’t talk anymore. Let me cure your wounds first”
“I know my condition… I won’t survive more than this…cough… cough… Please find the others. Human world in danger… Matsui, he is controlled by… by…” Kojima couldn’t finish her last word and stop breathing.
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Persona
“I immediately leave to search for Minegishi” Oshima told them his journey, “And we got information that King Maeda and Takakashi is still alive, Matsui didn’t kill them”
“Legend said, ‘if all the crilyst are gathered together, it grants the holder ultimate power which can destroy all the living things in the world. Bbrrrrr” Minegishi is having goosebumps imagine that power.
“How many crilyst are in this world?” asked Haruna.
“Water, fire, wind, lightning, light and dark…” Oshima answered.
“I have lightning crilyst from mom” Haruna said, “Atsuko has water, Minami has fire… we have three on our side. But where’s the other?”
“I have the light crilyst” said Oshima, “Power of the light is an ability to heal, very match with my tittle, The great Physician Oshima!” he smiled widely.
“You forget to add the ‘Pervert’ in your tittle” Minegishi mocked. “The wind crilyst is owned by King Matsui and the dark crilyst is still nowhere to be found. Rumor said it is hidden in the forbidden land where live the nonhuman-being resident”
“Look!! The city is burning!!!” Yuko pointed the city.
Haruna walks closer to the window and see a burst of powerful wind in the center of the city, “That’s... Aunt Minegishi, over there!! Minami is in the center of the city!!!”
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Atsuko is in critical state, could they survive?
Will someone die?
To be continue...
Thanks for reading...
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Atsuko no!!!!!!
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I'm still waiting for the day that Haruna will finally accept Yuko, make haruna jealous to death!! lol i'm such a sadist XD
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Atsuko.. :pleeease:pls be alive
well waiting for more kuuXmario/mariko moment
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“Atsuko!!!” Minami is running toward the unmoving body of Atsuko.
King Matsui swayed his sword toward Minami, “DIE!”
“Minami!” Atsuko gets up and uses his body as shield for Minami. The sword slaying deep at his back, Atsuko can’t hold his weight and fell to the ground. His white clothes stained by blood which nonstop flowing from his body.
“NO!! Atsuko! Wake up! Wake up!” Minami held Atsuko’s body tightly and crying hard, no wanting to leave him.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! :on blackhole: OMG! I'm Depressed! :frustrated: Atsuko!!!!!!!!!! :OMG:
“How are you, Yuko?”
“DADDY??!!!” Yuko jumps on her father like a koala and greeting him with big bear hug.
“You have grown up sooo much~” Oshima take a peek at Yuko’s breast.
“Still pervert as ever…” Yuko automatically tweak his father’s ear, “Where did you go? I search you for years!”
“Hurt… hurt…” Oshima bend down to reduce the pain at his ear which tweaked by Yuko. “You must go to the city of Iimiram right away, Atsuko and Minami is in danger”
LOL! Yuko's Dad Also a Pervert! Just Like 'Her Daughter - Yuko'! :on lol:
Atsuko is in critical state, could they survive?
Will someone die?
Pwease, Let AtsuMina safe! I don't want any Death scenes/moments!
~Btw, Update Soon! :bow:
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Thanks kahem, okiedokie, Megumi, Nakamii, RenaChii, haruhi16, msst28
@ kahem : What will happen to Atsuko? please keep reading~ Thanks :heart:
@ haruhi16 :HaruYuko moment will be postpone to next chapter :roll:
@ msst28 : Hmm... there's a little MariKuu moment for you :roll:
@ Nakamii : Someone or many will probably die in this fight... but who? thanks for reading :heart:
Hope this is not boring neither confusing :nervous
Please enjoy~
HEROES
Chapter 10
Declare of the War
Part 3
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Back to the city
Kill them! (a voice echoing inside Matsui’s brain)
“HYAAAAAAAAA!” King Matsui launched another attack toward them.
PLAAANNNNGGGG
“The great physician Oshima and the royal alchemist Minegishi come to rescue” both of them stand before Matsui and make a pose (like power rangers).
“M….Mom?!” Kuu gasp at what he saw just now.
“How have you been, Kuu?” Minegishi make another pose and flicked her finger, winking at her son.
“Watch out, Mom!!”
King Matsui attacks her from behind, she slides to the right and slides behind him, locking his arms with hers. King Matsui tackled her down in judo style, he grab her legs and spinning, throwing her away. While in there, Oshima kneels beside Atsuko and heal his wounds, “Goddess of the light, show me your leniency from above, let me heal the wounds of this misfortune”
Mario’s wound healed by Oshima in just few seconds, she gets up and joined the fight with the others – Minegishi, Haruna, Kuu and Minami attack King Matsui while Oshima healing Atsuko’s wounds. Blood still flowing nonstop from Atsuko’s body, his heartbeat is getting weaker and weaker. // This is bad, His wounds won’t heal just by using power. He needs the herbal potion to stopping his blood comes out more //
“Light, water, fire, lightning, and wind… perfect, all the crilyst are gathering here” The black dressed woman stand on top of the tower and watches them fighting. She began to recite death spell to call the undead under the ground. One by one undead burst out from the ground, the dead bodies of citizen and guards also become undead.
“VENGEANCE WIND!!” King Matsui launched the ultimate skill toward them.
“MAD PHOENIX!”
“THOUSAND BOLT!”
“HAZARD BLADE!”
Oshima dragged Minegishi and Mario back from the area, “Step back, you don’t have powers” Oshima joined Minami, Haruna, and Kuu to fight Matsui’s power.
“JUDGEMENT LIGHT!”
The whole area become dazzled… full of dazzling light everywhere. After minutes the light becomes dimmer and dimmer and gone. The whole area is damaged, half of the undead vanished. They can’t win against the fatigue, losing so much strength to fight Matsui. Oshima, Minami, Haruna, and Kuu fall down and sit on the ground. King Matsui still stands there with his sword hold on tight in his hand. He smiled and slowly approaches them.
“Thank you…” King Matsui showed his regards to Oshima and Minegishi. Because of the interaction between crilyst, Matsui regained his sense. “I have gained my consciousness” He reaches his hand to Kuu, “Not bad for you too… can handle my attack without power from crilyst” he is waiting for Kuu to hold his hand.
Kuu confused and look at his mom. Minegishi just nodded and smiled at him. King Matsui hold Kuu’s hand and put something shiny on it. It is crilyst… the wind crilyst, and Atsuko’s water crilyst.
“Please protect it for me”
SSRRRUUUTTT
A black fabric snatched the crilyst from Kuu’s hand, “Hahahha… give me yours too!” the fabric snatched Haruna’s necklace. Knowing that all of the holders of crilyst become weak from the fight, the black dressed woman ordered the left undead to attack.
“Hahahahaha… I got your crilyst!!!” the woman’s voice echoing in whole city.
STAB
“Hahahaha…. Hihiihi… ne, okotte iru?” A rapier stabbed through the woman’s stomach, Princess Rena is grinning behind the woman. She licked the blood stained on her face, “blekk… your blood is so bitter”
Rena holds the woman tightly in her arms and recites the spell to awake her beast power. “Power of the beast, obey me… listen to my command… I, Matsui Rena sacrifice this person blood in your honorable sword. Awake from your sleep, time to have your meal… with this very soul… VENGEFUL WOLVES!”
The black dressed woman’s blood floating in the air and formed three wolves head behind Rena. Rena grinning insanely and whispered beside the woman’s ear, “Let’s finish this…”
The wolves screaming are echoing loud in the whole city. Minami and the others pressed their ears hard, even the undead were hurt from the sound. The wolves covered Rena and the woman like a womb… red laser light is coming from inside.
BAAAAMMMMM
A loud explosion coming from that womb… buildings around them is damaged into dust.
“Hahaha… hahhahaha…”
The woman smirked ominously and turned to face Rena and kicked her. “Is this the power of crilyst?”
Rena’s beast rune can’t win against the crilyst and disappeared within dust. She pulled her sword from her body and stabbed it back to Rena’s stomach, “DIE!” She releases her powers toward Rena, makes her flying backward and crushed into the building.
“Rena!!!” King Matsui screamed.
The undead began to attack them. Hundreds of undead crowded the street. Just as when the woman want to flee away, two strong figures came out and kick her to the ground.
Seeing the figure of those two men, Oshima shouted at them, “You are so late! Maeda! Your son is dying!!!”
King Maeda appeared with King Takahashi. Maeda shocked at Atsuko’s condition, left arm lost, his white clothes all red… and laying there unmoving.
“How dare you hurt my son!!!” King Maeda thrust toward her.
“Actually is me who cut his left arm…” King Matsui whispered silently at himself, felt guilt about Atsuko.
“How dare you hurt my future son-in-law!!!” King Takahashi joined the fight with Maeda.
King Matsui doesn’t want to be left out and joined the fight too, “How dare you controlled my mind!!!”
“Let’s try this power…” the black dressed woman used the power of three crilyst together. Those three crilyst are shinning and its aura surrounds her body. “HYAAAA!!”
“PHOENIX DANCE!”
“DRAGON MIST!”
“HARPOON STORM!”
Those three Kings’ strength is not match for the power of three crilyst. They are flying backward and crushed into the building behind them. The woman turned to face the others and grinning madly, “So… this is the power of crilyst… I want more… I WANT MORE…”
“No good, let’s retreat!” Minegishi called, “Atsuko’s life is more important. Let’s retreat!!”
“Mom! The undead block the way toward persona!” Kuu called his mother. Minegishi push a button on her watch, then the persona is in auto pilot mode. It’s floating about 7 feet from the ground.
Oshima approach Yuko and gave her his light crilyst, “Yuko, please keep this crilyst safe. You can use it to save Atsuko, I’m counting on you. Kuu! Use your ability to send Atsuko and Minami into persona first”
Oshima and Minegishi take care of the hundreds undead while the three Kings fight against black dressed woman.
Kuu gathered his Nen to fly Atsuko’s body to the main deck of plane, next is Minami, then Yuko, and the last is Haruna. He looks around to see who will be the next. He spotted Mario and concentrate to send her to persona but he is too exhausted now that Mario falls back to the ground. She hit the ground very hard and got surrounded by undead. Kuu runs into her and banishes those undead.
“Are you okay?” asked Kuu.
“How can you be okay if you fall down from the middle of the air?” Mariko pissed.
“That’s because you’re so heavy, you should try some diet” Kuu joked. Mario gets up to hit Kuu, she give him right punch. Kuu grabbed her right hand and pulled her closer, turns her around in circle, and holds her up in bridal style.
“Lend me your legs for a while” He spins in circle and get rid those undead by Mario’s long legs then he flies up to the air toward persona but Kuu has reached his limits. When they almost there to persona, Kuu falls downward. He throws Mario to the main deck and falling down.
“Brat!” Mario is calling Kuu from the persona.
With a smiling face, Kuu screams, “Please pray for my safety!” and disappear within night clouds.
“You better live” Mario wiped her tears.
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To be continue....
Dou ? :?
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Atsuko and Rena no!!!!!!
The parents are so cool and funny lol
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:OMG: Rena!!!!! oh and Atsuko also! :OMG:
LoL the parents :rofl:
The evil witch is having the upper hand... :on blackhole:
Can't wait for the next update!
Arígatou! :kneelbow:
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ahhhhhhh,...
I LOVE YOUR FIC!!!!
PLSSSSSSSSSSSS.........UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!
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Aww MariKuu <3333333
I want moreeeeeeeeeeee~
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Thanks kahem, RenaChii, pen-pen-chii, okiedokie, Megumi, d_ruffi, xxx220
@ kahem : Thanks for reading this story and sorry about Atsuko and Rena :cry:
@ Megumi : yeah... the evil witch is having upper hand. sorry about Atsuko and Rena too :cry:
@ Chikane Himemiya : good to know that you like my fic :heart: :heart: But currently I'll stop writing and won't have time to update this fic. Feel so sorry for thousand times :kneelbow:
@ haruhi16 : I Feel so sorry for thousand times :kneelbow: will update if I finish my busy activities. Currently I am stop writing fics anymore :cry: :cry:
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Your Fanfic is Full of Magic :luvluv1:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON~ :kneelbow:
THANK YOU FOR GIVING ME SUCH A GREAT STORY ....GOOD LUCK
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:mon scare: oh noh!!!! is trying to ruin everything !!!!
:bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: i love your fanfic by the........
:panic: :panic: this is wierd am i that addicted to akb fanfic that i'm even reading this while i'm :onionshower: hahah!!! well you know :heart:
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This is my very first story I wrote, and I feel want to continue it to the end :)
Is there anyone still want to continue reading this story???
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Summary for Chapter 10 :
Mayu tricked Atsuko, Minami, and Kuu to go into the city while King Matsui and Queen set a plot to kill them. Fortunately, Jurina was there to get them out of the city but it was too late. All of the people in there were killed, Jurina was prisoned by Mayu and the others began to fight the armies for survive. In the fight, King Matsui cut off Atsuko's left arm and took away his water crilyst. All of the sudden, their missing parents all come out to rescue them. A great fight between parents and King Matsui happened there and found out that actually King Matsui is being controlled by the black queen. Rena (daughter of King Matsui) went to fight the queen and got killed. Haruna's lightning crilyst and King Matsui's wind crilyst are stolen by the queen. They have to run away in order to save Atsuko's life. Just when Kuu almost get up to the plane, he lost his strength and fell down from the sky.
If you confuse with the characters, you can klik here (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31159.msg1003562#msg1003562) for the summary^^
This is the last part for Chapter 10 - Declare of the War
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Back to the city
Rena crushed into one of the building, coincidentally it is where Jurina jailed in.
CRASSSHHH
Jurina surprised by the sudden explosion from the wall. He looked into the dust and found Rena laying there with wounds and blood over there.
“Rena!” Jurina went to hold her sister.
Rena cupped his little brother’s face “cough… cough… run… leave this place…”
Jurina shakes his head in disagree, tears coming down from his eyes. Rena hold Jurina’s right hand and transferred the beast rune to him. “I believe you can handle my beast rune… please be safe…” with that, Rena gave out her last breath.
“No, Rena… No…WAKE UP!” Jurina holds her in his arms and crying hard.
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Meanwhile
“WAAAAAAHHHHH” Kuu is falling down back to the city. He crushed the roof and land inside a house. “Wind!!!!” he forces himself to float himself an inch above the floor, then he land on it slowly.
“Fiuuuhhhh… That was close” Kuu wiped his sweat.
“Kuu?” Jurina saw Kuu coming down from the roof.
“Jurin-” his eyes attracted by the person in his embrace, Rena. “Is she…”
“…………..” Jurina nodded and wiped his tears.
“Let’s get out of here, your father is fighting against the black dressed woman” Kuu said.
Jurina takes the rope on the floor and wrap Rena on his back, carrying her body.
“You’re not gonna take her with you right?” Kuu asked.
“She is my sister, I won’t leave her in here”
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Inside Persona
Everyone is busy with Atsuko’s wounds. Yuko uses the crilyst’s power to heal Atsuko but it’s not enough, his vital organ has damaged. Haruna is busy in composing the doses which Yuko tells him with Minami’s help. Mario is helping them bringing things they need. Sae uses his sun rune to make the herbal plants grow up quickly because they don’t have enough doses and Yuki use her blue moon rune to stop Atsuko from bleeding.
“How is Atsuko?” Kuu barged into the Yuko’s room. Jurina walked inside and put down Rena’s body at the corner of the room.
“Keep your voice down, it’ll mess Yuko’s concentration” Mario scold him.
“Mari…o?” Kuu is surprised when he saw Mario wearing girl’s outfit. Body fit white shirt and brown shorts, showing her body line and her long legs perfectly.
“Call me Mariko” Mariko walked away.
“Still not yet?” Yuko asked Haruna about the medicine they’re mixing.
“Yuko, is it okay if we’re missing one of the herbal?” asked Haruna.
“What is it?”
“Snow lotus…” Haruna answered.
Yuko’s face becomes pale like a white paper. “That’s the main item for the potion…”
“WHAT?!!” all of them shouts in unison.
All of them lose their concentration on Atsuko, he keeps bleeding again and his face looks in pain. He keeps spilt out blood and his body is trembling. Yuko can’t stand of this and depressed, her legs becomes weak that she falls down and sat on the floor, crying.
“Atsuko!!! No!!” Minami grabbed Yuko’s collar and lifted her up, “Why you stop healing him?”
“No use! It’s not enough with only the power from crilyst! Without the snow lotus, everything is zero!!” Yuko crying hard and shout back at Minami.
“His heart stopped beating” Yuki said with blank expression.
“No, it can’t be… It can’t be…” Minami went to Atsuko and gives him CPR. “Wake up Atsuko!! Wake up!! Don’t leave me… Wake up!!!”
“…………………” all of them stayed in silent.
“I have the lotus” Mayu appeared all of the sudden and walked inside the room. She took out the snow lotus from her bag.
Minami went to take it but stop by Haruna, “Don’t take it… I can’t trust her. She is the one who guide them into the city and she is the one come back without hurt. Isn’t she suspicious?”
“This snow lotus only appears every 48 years. I only have one, if you don’t want it then I’ll eat it now~” Mayu said with her wicked expression.
“I’ll take it!” Minami snatch the snow lotus from Mayu and gives it to Yuko, “Is this the lotus you mentioned? Let’s continue the doses” Minami begged.
Yuko scared to take the lotus, “I’m sorry, I don’t trust her…”
“I trust her” Jurina said.
“Me too” Kuu agreed.
“She’s not lying. She is sincerely” Yuki said, “I can hear her heartbeat”
“Use it or not, that’s up to you~” Mayu walked outside.
“This is the only way…” Yuko takes the lotus and continue healing Atsuko.
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In the corridor
Jurina followed Mayu outside the room.
“Are you not tired following me?” Mayu stop in the middle of the stairs.
“Don’t you try to hurt them” Jurina stopped right behind her, one step upper.
“How would I?”
“I know you. Where did you get that lotus? Is it from the queen?”
“I stole it…” Mayu turned to face Jurina, “I know you’re not willing to see them in suffer. I stole it from queen and ran here”
“Tell me the truth, Mayu” Jurina pushed her to the wall and trapped her between his hands.
Mayu smirks at him, “It’s just the beginning of the war”
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To be continue...???
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oh YES!!!pls continue this!!! :twothumbs :twothumbs
im so happy right now..hehe..
im waiting for ur next update :bow: :bow:
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PLEASE CONTINUED !!!
AWESOME!!!!
NOOOOOO!!!! RENAAAAA
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RENAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!~ :OMG: :OMG:
Ichikawa-san~ Why did you kill Rena?!?!? :frustrated: :angry1:
Ichikawa-san~ I just want to make a reminder~ if you'll also kill the others~ please get ready~ :shifty: oh. don't worry i'm not going to do something bad to you~ I think?~ :kekeke:
I'm looking forward to chapter 11~ :hee:
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Firstly thanks for update... Pls continue this story
but
:OMG: :OMG: :ptam-hbk: :ptam-hbk: RENAAAA!! :fainted: :fainted:
Ichikawa-san whyy??? 1st Atsuko then Rena
Well it's you story.. waiting for the next chapter
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Renaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!
A definitely continue!!!!!!
I tough you gave up on not updating...
So please continue it until the end
Thank you for your update!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
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Finally! Update~ I've been waitin' for this. This one seems so Depressing. Rena died and Atsuko soon to be like Rena, maybe? But, you should continue this, anyway.
~ Why this page is a Topper, anyway?
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i love this fic! thank you for updating :on lol:
acchan lost her arm :pleeease: bring it back :pleeease:
atsumina moments :shy1:
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:mon angel: I'm glad to know you are waiting for the update, minna~ :mon cute:
Thank you Chichay12, xxx220, pen-pen-chii, msst28, Megumi, Nakamii, miayaka, d_ruffi, ILOVESAEYUKI-WMATSUI
First, I'd like to say sorry for Atsuko (lost an arm) and Rena (lost her life) :mon ouch:
:mon whimper: Please don't kill me :mon cry:
Finally I finish chapter 11
Please forgive for my bad english. Hope you enjoy ~
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HEROES
Chapter 11
Searching for the Power
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Persona (Atsuko’s room)
“Ugghh…” Atsuko slowly opened his eyes.
“Acchan!!” Minami hug him and rubs her face on him.
“Ah… Minami, hurt… my ribs, my wounds…” Atsuko complained.
“Sorry” She sticks out her tongue, “How do you feel? Something weird or pain?”
“I feel great~” Atsuko fake a smile. How can he feel great when he lost an arm. “By the way, how did we get out from that city?”
“It’s our parents… They came to save us” Minami said with sad expression.
“Really? Just like what I thought, they are alive. Where are they? I want to see my father.” Atsuko gets up from the bed vigorously and looking at Minami with shining eyes.
“They… They die…” Minami can’t face him. “Just when we all get back in persona, the city explode… and become sea of fire…”
Atusko freeze on his spot, can’t move. He wants to cry but he holds back the tears. His heart feels like breaking apart and it’s hurt so much. He clenches his fist so tightly that his palm starts bleeding. Minami went to comfort him, trying to loosen his fist.
“Acchan, don’t be like this” Minami hugs him and put his head on her shoulder. “Just cry, you’ll feel better”
“I can’t, Minami. I promised father… I won’t cry…” Atsuko distanced himself away from Minami, “I am useless… I lose in the fight, I lose an arm, I lose my father… and you are hurt” Atsuko gently touched Minami’s head which is still in bandage. “I can’t protect the crilyst, I can’t protect you… I am useless”
“Don’t say that, you did your best. If you didn’t shield me that time, maybe I am the one that dying. You are not useless, you’re always the best in my heart” Minami leaned in and attached their forehead together.
PLANK!
A half-human bird suddenly bumped from the window, rolling on the floor. Sae comes in from the window and took the bird out through the window and disappeared. Once again Sae appeared at the outside of the window and apologize to them.
“Sorry about the window, I’ll fix it later. Please continue to your heart content. See ya later~”
“What is he doin-”
BAAAAMMMMMMM (persona is bumped by something in the air)
“They’re attacking again?” Minami went to the window and saw unknown bird-like creatures are attacking their airplane. Yuki was flying in the air to tackle down those monsters. Sae and Haruna were on the deck to fight the monster.
“What are those?” Atsuko asked.
“You’ve been unconscious for two weeks, since the day we escape from the city” Minami sighed, “monsters are coming out and attack people. We’re travelling from one to another place to banish those monsters but it seems limitless”
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Command deck of Persona
Finally, those half-bird runs away. They’re all gathering in pilot room.
“How is it going?” Minami and Atsuko walked inside the pilot room.
“Acchan! How do you feel? Anywhere still hurt?” Yuko approached him to examine his body. Haruna looks like getting a bit jealous and pouted at Yuko. When she saw how Haruna reacting, she shows more touches and get more closer to Atsuko.
“Ehem...cough cough” Haruna is walking toward Yuko and hold her arm, “Happy to see you awake, Atsuko. I’m gonna borrow Yuko for a while to take care of my wounds” then he took Yuko away.
“Eh? You’re wounded? Where?” Yuko asked while Haruna keeps quiet.
Yuko smirks, “Is it your lips hurt?”
“No” Haruna answered shortly.
“Then why are you pouting at? Don’t tell me, you’re jealous?” Yuko put her index finger on his lips, “Wanna try my special treatment?” she pouted her lips and moved forward to Haruna.
“No, thanks” Haruna instantly pushed Yuko face far from him.
“Are they going out?” Atsuko asked Minami and she nodded rapidly. He laughs at Yuko’s behavior, “Since when she becomes a pervert like uncle Oshima?”
“Pervert is the trademark in their bloodline~” Minami said jokingly.
“Hey, Atsuko! You’re awake” Kuu greeted.
“What are those creatures?” asked Atsuko.
“They are harpies, half-bird monster. They should have vanished 250 years ago” said Yuki.
“Yes, they shouldn’t appear again in this land… in human lands” Sae continue to tell them the story.
In ancient times, there are two dimensions of world… Human and nonhuman. Nonhuman creatures are forbid to get in human world. Legend said it’s because those creatures are violent against human and often killed human just for fun. Some heroes appear and get rid of those creatures, then it comes to a deal between the heroes and the Queen of underworld. It didn’t say what deal they have made, but the Queen promise to forbid any other nonhuman beings to step on human lands.
“I see…” Kuu said, “So, that black dressed woman is Queen of underworld?”
“Absolutely” Jurina added. “I saw her changes her skin, she can change her appearance and she has tails!! I believe she is the one who controlled my father and told him to collect crilyst, so I ran from home and joined you. Even so…” Jurina remember his father death, “I’ll get my revenge on her”
Mayu leaned her back at the wall and said, “The only way to stop her is to find the dark crilyst. She has wind, water and lightning. We have Fire and light, is not enough to fight her”
She continued, “Wind defeated by fire. Fire defeated by water. Water and lightning lose against light. The only way to defeat her is get the dark crilyst”
“After examined all the treasure maps I have, we decided that the dark crilyst might have been hidden in this forbidden forest” Mariko shows the map and the location of forbidden forest.
BIP BIP BIP BIP (sudden alert sound)
“Oh, NO! Persona left wing is broken” Kuu panicked and lost the control of the plane.
The plane began rolling in the air, and all of them are rolling inside the plane. Mariko managed to get on the seat and tried to maintain balance of persona. The plane becomes more stable then before.
“That was a good job, Mariko” Jurina praised.
“Useless brat” Mariko mocked at Kuu.
“What did you call me?!” Kuu pushed Mariko away from his seat and take the control of the plane, without knowing there’s a mountain right before them, Kuu speed up the pace of the plane. “Let me show you my skill”
“LOOK OUT!” Sae screams in horror.
“WWWAAAAAAAAAA” everyone scream in horror.
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The plane is crashed, fortunately they managed to get out from the plane before it crushed. Haruna, Yuko, Minami and Atsuko were thrown out by the powerful collision. Jurina managed to hold Mayu in his arms and jumped out through the window. Sae was thrown up by a blast and Yuki went to chase after him. Kuu insists to take the control of the plane till the last seconds with Mariko.
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“SAE!” Yuki thrusts down to reach for Sae.
“Ah~ Yuki~ hurry, save me. I don’t want to die now” Sae said with teary eyes. The distance is getting more and more nearer to the land.
“Got you” Yuki put her arms around Sae’s waist and pulled him closer, floating in the air.
“YUKI! I LOVE YOU~” Sae said as he hugs Yuki tightly and kisses her cheek repeatedly.
Yuki blushed and accidentally throwing Sae away without hold back her strength. Sae fell down into the forest, sliding on the ground and ended up into a cave.
Chiyuu~?
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“Mariko, where are you?” Kuu searched for Mariko within bunches of broken parts of the plane. The plane crushed into the forest near a dark valley, above them is covered by the leaves from the big trees surround them and is too dark to see. Kuu have to depend on his audibility to find Mariko.
“I’m here” Mariko answered.
“Where?”
“Here!”
“It’s too dark here, I can’t see you. Can you make some sounds?”
Mariko thinks for a while, then she took out her gun and knocking at the metal thing. Her legs are trapped under the broken parts of the plane that she can’t move.
“Brilliant, keep knocking. I’ll find you soon”
Kuu walks and walks and his foot kick something hard. He bends down to rub his foot then his head knock something.
“Ouch!!” both of them yelled.
“Ah, you’re here” Kuu reached out his hands and groping in the dark to search Mariko.
“Gasp” Mariko is shocked by something that moving on her chest.
// Hmm…? What is this, so soft… // Kuu moved his hands upward after groping Mariko’s chest. His hands travelled to her neck, her jaw, and ended up to touch her lips.
“What - are – you - doing!!” Mariko growled.
“Eh? Don’t tell me that soft thing is your c––AAAHHHHH” Kuu’s hand got bitten by Mariko. “I’m sorry, I’m sorry!! I don’t know it is your c––AAAHHHHH” Mariko strengthens her bite.
Finally, Mariko let go Kuu’s hand and command him to pull her out, “My legs are stuck, I can’t move. Hurry pulls me out”
“hiks… Okay” Kuu started to pull Mariko out from the broken parts of plane. “HYAAAAA”
Just a little more, Mariko’s legs are going to move out from the steel. At the last pull, Kuu accidentally ripped off Mariko’s shirt. Kuu immediately step backward and ready to run but Mariko is faster, when her legs are free from the metal thing, she grabbed Kuu’s collar instantly and ready to give him a punch.
“I’m sorry, I didn’t mean to…”
Kuu keeps struggling over Mariko and tripped over something which makes him to fall. Both of them begin rolling on the sloppy ground and fall into a hole.
“WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA” They are sliding inside the big hole and ended up inside a cave.
Chiyuuu~~
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Mayu and Jurina land into the forest. The rain began pouring down hard.
“Mayu, are you alright?” Jurina asked.
“Baka, you shield me with your body. How can I get hurt” Mayu gets up and walks away. She paused there, just realized that her leg got ankle when they land. To prevent Jurina hit the land badly, Mayu support him by her legs.
“Your leg got ankle” Jurina said.
“None of your busines–” before Mayu ended it, Jurina stopped in front of her and giving her a piggy back. “What are you doing? Put me down”
“You always ask me for a piggyback when we’re kids, remember?” Jurina smiled as he recalled his childhood memories.
“I forgot” Mayu lied.
“Ah, that’s pity” Jurina sighed.
“Put me down” Mayu asked.
“No way~”
“I know you are hurt too. Your legs are bleeding. Just put me down” Mayu complained.
“I will put you down when we found a shelter. Your leg will hurt if you walk in this rain”
“Why… you always being good to me…”
“Well…” Jurina thinks for a while, “… because I like you”
// Stop being like this to me, Jurina. You’ll only get hurt. I’m sorry, but I have to... //
“CAVE!” Jurina yelled. “There’s a cave, let’s go there for a shelter~”
Chiyuuuu!!
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“WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA”
Haruna and Yuko fell from the sky onto the forest. Fortunately, they land on soft grassland, filled with many flowers.
“Argh… Yuko, are you alright?” Haruna asked without realizing that his hands are on Yuko’s chest.
“Harunyan~” Yuko said with husky voice and seductive eyes while her face is burned red.
“Why is your face so re–WAAAAAAAAA” He then realized what his hands are doing. He immediately put his hands up and step backward.
“I don’t know, you’re so pervert~” Yuko is crawling toward Haruna, “Harunyaan~”
“Yu-Yuko. Hold yourself”
Yuko jumped on top of Haruna just like a koala, hugging him. Suddenly, the grassland below them collapse and they fall into a black hole, sliding around like roller coaster, and ended up inside a cave.
Chiyuuuuuu~!!!
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Me and Atsuko fell into the sea. Because Atsuko’s health hasn’t full recovered, he fainted. I am holding Atsuko safely in my arm and struggling toward the wave. I heard thunders from the sky, lightning appears from above and it begins to rain. A sudden maelstrom appeared right in front of us and it’s dragging us closer. I swim faster but it’s useless. The power of the maelstrom absorbs us into it. I feel dizzy and lost my strength. Everything becomes blur in my eyes.
Don’t worry, I won’t let you go. I’ll hold you tight, Acchan
Before I close my eyes, I saw a shining thing approach us. It was blur and kinda like a human form. A golden short hair man with shining armor. He is giving me something, he is whispering at me something, but I can’t hear it clearly. I almost give up… I am tired… the only thing in my mind is…
Acchan…
When I was about to give up, a light come trough us. We’re come out from a hole on the wall. I opened my eyes and saw someone is flying toward us. In the end, we bumped together and falling to the ground, hardly…
End of Minami POV
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At the same time
Sae was sliding into the cave, not long after he saw Mariko and Kuu fell down from one of the hole inside the cave, then he saw Jurina carried Mayu in. When he gets up and cleans his face from the mud, a loud screaming voices came from above him. It was Haruna and Yuko fell down and bumped landed on him.
“Hey! Get off! You two are sure heavy!!” Sae complained.
“Eh? What a coincidence?!” Jurina came in and greeted the others.
“Mariko, what happened to your shirt?” Yuko saw Mariko’s shirt is worn and showing a bit of her sexy black underwear. A pervert mind comes inside Yuko’s head, “Don’t tell me that Kuu is–”
“NO! It just an accident! I’m not doing anything to her!” Kuu defended himself.
“I didn’t though you were that kind of man” Haruna sighed.
“No, it’s not that. How will I interested with this fierce woman?” Kuu accidentally blurt out what on his mind.
“What did you say? Fierce woman?!” Mariko grabs Kuu’s shirt, “Let me show you what is F-I-E-R-C-E!” Mariko lifts Kuu and throws him.
ZAASSSSSSSHHHHHH
There’s a loud of voice echoing in the cave. Not long after, there’s many water flow inside through a hole above the cave. After the water, Minami and Atsuko came in and bumped with Kuu, falling to the ground. They are all wet inside the cave, thanks to Minami.
Chiyuuuuuuuuu?!
“Minami! Atsuko!” the others gathering around them.
“Eh? What a coincidence here” Minami asked.
“Yeah, we’re surprised too. Is Atsuko alright?” Haruna asked.
“He fainted. I’m sure he’ll be okay” Yuko said as she checked Atsuko’s condition.
Everyone concentrate their vision on Atsuko and neglected Kuu who is left behind. There’s a sudden thing appeared before him capture his eyes. A girl which is wet because of the water before. She is wearing a pink robe, and the pink robe somehow becomes a bit transparent that shows her bodyline. Her wet hair makes her more sexy and her pouted lips makes her more attractive.
“Chiyuu??” she looked confusedly at Kuu.
Kuu is drooling at her, “Sexy….” He is floating in the air, his body floats horizontally and fly toward the girl, “chuuuu~”
BUMP!
Before Kuu reached the girl, Mariko hit him hardly on his back, makes him fall to the ground once again.
“Chiyu??”
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To be continue…
Thanks for reading, minna~
Hope it didn't confuse you^^
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Haha this update is so LoLOLOL
Yuki blushed and threw Sae :rofl:
MarikoxKuu: She's like a animal biting him
YukoxHaruna: Flower field? what a romantic place to land on..
JurinaxMayu: Aww piggy ride how cute
AtsukoxMinami... ah they ended up in a cave *puh!
At first I tough what's with chiyuu~ did they kiss or what?
Ahahhaha so it seems that a new person will be introduced... and that culprit saw everything hahaa
Chiyuu!
Thank you for your update totally hilarious ah it was a great switch after
the sad incident at the town :(
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
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Ur update is the best they are going to meet tomotomo now ~ :)
chiyuu~~~~ :)
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Yay! Atsuko's awake. and, Wow. He's unconscious for to weeks. That's long. LOL. What's up with 'Chiyuu', anyway? I'm glad they're Alright. Thanks for the Update.
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@ Megumi : Yes, another culprit will be introduce~ :D
@ saeyukilover : just like what you said~ it is in this chapter :yep:
@ Nakamii : Chiyu is ... chiyu~ :P the answer is in this chapter~ thanks for reading^^
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Chapter 11
Searching for the Power
Part 2
“Who are you?” Mariko asked.
“Chiyu~” said that pink robe with her hands under her chin and tilt her head a bit to the right.
“Do you live here?” asked Haruna.
“Chiyuu~” she said with a smile.
“Kawai…” Haruna dazzled by her cuteness.
“What did you say?” Yuko is staring at him.
“Umm…. K-kowai!” Haruna laughs sheepishly and rub his neck, avoiding Yuko’s eyes.
That chiyu girl closed her eyes and recites a strange spell. The entrance of the cave suddenly closed by a dark cloud. The whole cave become dark, then slowly and slowly the cave is glowing. Many little spot appears on the wall inside the cave and glowing like stars. There’s a huge shining star appears above of Atsuko and suddenly dropped down on him. His body become bright that makes the other to step back and closed their eyes. When the light is gone, they reopen their eyes. Atsuko regain his conscious and now is floating in the air.
“Acchan?” Minami asked worriedly.
“Minami” Atsuko replied with a smile.
“Chiyu~” That chiyu girl flying toward where Atsuko was and dancing around him.
“Who is she?” Atsuko asked.
“We don’t know. We met her just now” Minami answered.
“Chiyuuu~~”
That girl flying above of them and start dancing again. Minami and the others feel light, their body become light as feather. They are now floating in the air just like Atsuko. That girl invites them to dance with her. Kuu voluntary himself to dance with her, he flies to where the girl is.
“Chiyuu~”
“CHUU” Kuu pouted his lips as he flies to where the girl is. But he is stopped by Mariko. She pinched Kuu’s ear hardly, “I..itai! Itai!” Kuu screamed. The others laugh non-stop looking at that couple.
“Chiyu, who are they?” a figure appeared in the darkness. He has long straight golden hair which is the same color with that chiyu girl.
That chiyu girl flying toward the other figure and put her arms around his neck, hugs him from behind and landed a kiss on his cheek, “Chiyuuu”
Suddenly the dark cave becomes bright. Their surroundings become different. The cave is now becomes a chamber. A chamber with table and chair in it, also the others supplies, accessories and furniture. Atsuko and the others paused in the air then fall down to the ground.
BUUUUUK!!!
“Ouch!” they all growled in pain.
“So, your plane crashed and you all gathering in this place together?” asked the figure.
“Who are you? How do you know about us? What is this place?” asked Atsuko while he helps Minami to get up.
The figure took a sit on the chair and mentioned the other to sit as well. “My name is Tomo and she is my partner, Chiyu”
“Chiyu~” Chiyu bowed at them.
“Welcome to forbidden forest, heroes” Tomo said.
“EEHHHHHHHHH?!!!” all of them yelled as they don’t believe that they actually has been in forbidden forest.
“This is forbidden forest?!” Haruna asked once again to make sure.
“Yes, this is forbidden forest” Tomo gets up and click his finger. A white board appeared from nowhere and shows a map. He took out a thin rod and pointed at some places. “This is forbidden forest. You all fell down and landed separately on each place in this forest. Lastly, all of you gathered in one place… this cave”
Chiyu comes back with tea on her hands. She served each of them a cup of tea. Tomo finished explaining the map and claps his hands, the white board disappeared, “I know you come here for the dark crilyst…”
“Who you exactly are?” asked Sae.
“Don’t you remember me, Sae? I am the keeper of this crilyst”
“Did I know you?” Sae confused.
“Chiyu chiyuuu chiyuu” Chiyu explained something to Tomo.
“I see. You’re reincarnated and lost some memories” He said as he gestured them to sit down again. “Let me tell you a story…”
A long time ago, there’s chaos in this world caused by queen of the underworld. Monsters everywhere attacking human and destroying anything they see. Then heroes appear to banish those monsters. Time after time flows by… some of them died, some of them wounded, and some of them still fighting for the living. One day, we met the queen, we fight, and sadly and surprisingly… the queen fell in love with one of the heroes…
“What?!!! I am reincarnation from one of the heroes? Is that the queen fall in love with me?” Sae said jokingly but Yuki take this joke as true and she is releasing her dark aura beside Sae. He immediately calms down Yuki, “Kidding, that was just a joke”
“Your narcissism is always same” Tomo said and all the others laugh at Sae. “Ehemm…”
She fell in love with our leader, a one sided love. To stop her from attacking this world we live on… our leader agreed to a contract she made. That is… to go with her to the underworld. She handed out her dark crilyst and wait for our leader at the gate. Sadly, before our leader reached the gate, he passed away. Without dark crilyst, she can’t use her true power. So we can seal her, prevent her to get on this land…
“Hiks… this story is sooo sad” Yuko leaned on Riku’s shoulder and sneezes on his sleeve.
“To tell you the truth, that queen snatched our water, wind, and lightning crilyst. To win the fight, we need dark crilyst. Can you lend it to us?” Minami asked.
“I can’t” Tomo replied shortly.
“We really need this crilyst to defeat the queen. Please lend us. We promise to hand you back once we defeat that monster” Jurina begged.
“That’s not something I can decide.” Tomo whispered something to chiyu then he continue, “You can’t choose the crilyst, we can’t choose the crilyst… the crilyst will choose you” he explained.
“I don’t understand” Jurina confused.
“If the crilyst don’t choose you and you decide to use it, it will only hurt you, damage you, control you, overtaking you and you will lose yourself. It’s the same as when you use a rune. If it doesn’t suit you, you’ll lose control on yourself”
Listened to his explain, Jurina remembered how her sister is. When Rena using the power of beast rune, she lost control and thirst for blood.
“How can we know if the crilyst choose us?” asked Yuko.
“Chiyuuuuuu~~~” Chiyu dancing around then eight holes appeared behind where Tomo sat.
“Just go in there, you’ll know” Tomo said.
Without saying another word, Jurina ran into the hole. Not long after, the hole disappeared. Atsuko becomes worried and went grabs Tomo’s shirt but Tomo disappeared and appeared behind him, explaining, “The hole can be chosen only once. Each of them holds different kind of way to the power”
“Yoshh!” Kuu followed Jurina and ran into the other hole.
“I want to go the same hole with Haruna” Yuko said as she clinging on Haruna’s arm.
“I want to take the second hole from the left, do you want to take the third?” asked Haruna gentlemanly to Yuko.
“Okay~ I follow what you say” with that they went into the hole.
“Which one you want to go, Acchan?” Minami asked.
“Whatever you choose for me~” Atsuko said sweetly to Minami.
“You have to decide on your own” Minami poked Atsuko’s cheek.
“You go first, I follow up” Atsuko gave his best smile to ensure Minami. As she went inside the hole, Atsuko turned to face Tomo, “Can I skip this?”
“Can I skip it too?” asked Mariko.
“Why? Why didn’t you go in?” asked Tomo.
“Maybe it’s a trap” Mayu is staring at Tomo.
“I’m not interested” Mariko answered shortly. “I rather sat here and enjoys the tea”
Chiyu walked near Mariko and threw a gun in front of her. Mariko surprised as she saw the gun. That’s her father’s gun, “Where did you get that?”
“Chiyuuu~” Chiyu is pointing to the hole. Without a doubt, Mariko runs immediately into one of the hole.
“Don’t you want power?” asked Tomo once again.
“I don’t need power” Atsuko said with a sad expression. “I have lost an arm… I will only be a burden to them”
“Maybe you will find an arm in there? Maybe you will found new power in there… and maybe, you will die in there too…” Tomo smirks at them, Atsuko and Mayu.
“What did you mean?” asked Atsuko.
“AAAAARGH!!” Jurina’s voice in pain.
“What happened in there?!” Mayu asked angrily at Tomo.
“Who knows… why don’t you go inside and see?” Tomo sat at the chair and took a sip on his tea with Chiyu messaging his shoulder. Atsuko and Mayu prepared to attack him.
“AAAAAAARGH!!!”
Minami is screaming in pain, Kuu, Haruna, Yuko, Mariko also.
“Let me tell you one thing” Tomo paused to take a sip of tea then she continue, “The hole is linked”
Mayu and Atsuko immediately run into the hole. They can’t stand the voice of their beloved. They can’t think anything besides saving their beloved…
“Chiyu chiyuuu?” (translate: so, there’re two person were chosen by the dark crilyst?)
“Yes, which one would you like to chose, Chiyu?” asked Tomo.
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To be continue…….
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what's in my mind is different from urs , I really thought tomochin will be the owner of dark crilyst :smhid tsk tsk~~
But still ilove ur update :wub: tomotomo r so cute together :)
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:shocked *running in circles Can't wait fr the next update!
“Chiyuu~” she said with a smile.
“Kawai…” Haruna dazzled by her cuteness.
“What did you say?” Yuko is staring at him.
“Umm…. K-kowai!” Haruna laughs sheepishly and rub his neck, avoiding Yuko’s eyes.
Hahahahaha! :rofl: Kowai!
“Chiyuu~”
“CHUU” Kuu pouted his lips as he flies to where the girl is. But he is stopped by Mariko. She pinched Kuu’s ear hardly, “I..itai! Itai!” Kuu screamed. The others laugh non-stop looking at that couple.
Kuu is such a player!
“What?!!! I am reincarnation from one of the heroes? Is that the queen fall in love with me?” Sae said jokingly but Yuki take this joke as true and she is releasing her dark aura beside Sae. He immediately calms down Yuki, “Kidding, that was just a joke”
“Your narcissism is always same” Tomo said and all the others laugh at Sae. “Ehemm…”
Yuki is still scary hahaha!
I wonder who those 2 are...maybe Atsuko and Mayu.
And what's with Marikos fathers gun?
Thank you for your update!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
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yay thank you for the update :onioncheer:
“Do you live here?” asked Haruna.
“Chiyuu~” she said with a smile.
“Kawai…” Haruna dazzled by her cuteness.
“What did you say?” Yuko is staring at him.
“Umm…. K-kowai!” Haruna laughs sheepishly and rub his neck, avoiding Yuko’s eyes.
nice reflex haruna...from kawai to kowai :on lol:
so TomoTomo are the manifestation from dark crilyst or just Chiyuu :dunno:
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omg! please bring atsuko's arm back!! :cry: :cry: :cry:
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somehow in this story I like tomotomo couple the most.. :ptam-shy: :luvluv1:
wondering what happen to all of them
hope you can update soon
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@ saeyukilover : hehe.. because i'm a bit lazy to write more characters to fight the queen, so tomotomo will just appear in this chapter :sweatdrop:
@ Megumi : :doh: sorry to confuse you about mariko... hmm... there's a summary about her below :sweatdrop:
@ bunny_rabbit : yes :yep: tomotomo are soul from the late heroes who keep the crilyst.
@ miayaka : since you want me to bring back atsuko's arm :cry: I'll make a poll for it, okay?
@ msst28 : thank you for reading :heart: :heart:
Summary about Mariko:
Mariko is daughter of the famous pirate. One day, her father disappeared all of the sudden. When her father is gone, she used to disguise herself as guy to inherit her father’s position as a captain in order to protect her father’s ship and the crew members. She leads the ship and sailing over the sea to find her father but got attacked in City of Iimiram, then she met Kuu and the others and joined them for the journey. Seeing the gun of her father appeared right before her, she thinks that maybe her father is trapped in this forest and when to search for him.
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Minna-san, at first I make Atsuko lose an arm. :cry: :cry: (don't hate me)
Since miayaka want Atsuko's arm back, i am confused to continue the story. Should I bring Atsuko's arm back?
So I add a poll to decide about Atsuko's arm. Please feel free to vote about it. Thank you :kneelbow:
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oh please please bring her arm back.. we don't like an armless atsuko, she can't hug minami fully.. :cry: :cry: :cry:
i trust your imagination..you can bring her arm back!! ganbatte ne! :fap
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I want Mariko to be all lovey dovey to Kuu <33
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bring back atsuko arm!!
How can atsuko hug minami properly if she have one arm!!pls,bring back her arm!!
By the way!
nice update!! :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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one armed atsuko sounds cool to me... keep on fighting with just one arm, showing how though he is :cool1:
but if you decided to bring atsuko's arm back, i hope it will become his ultimate weapon :kekeke:
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Yay the Tomotomo appeared!!!!!!
Marimii is so funny^^
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@ Megumi : :doh: sorry to confuse you about mariko... hmm... there's a summary about her below :sweatdrop:
Summary about Mariko:
Mariko is daughter of the famous pirate. One day, her father disappeared all of the sudden. When her father is gone, she used to disguise herself as guy to inherit her father’s position as a captain in order to protect her father’s ship and the crew members. She leads the ship and sailing over the sea to find her father but got attacked in City of Iimiram, then she met Kuu and the others and joined them for the journey. Seeing the gun of her father appeared right before her, she thinks that maybe her father is trapped in this forest and when to search for him.
Ahh now I get it thank you! :kneelbow:
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Minna~ the poll decided to bring Atsuko's arm back!!! :D :D
ATSUKO WILL HAVE HIS ARM BACK~ :D :D
aside for haruhi16 request :
I want Mariko to be all lovey dovey to Kuu <33
Hmm... I make some scenes for those two~ hope you'll take it as lovey dovey :nervous
Here's the last part of chapter 11
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HEROES
Chapter 11
Searching for the Power
Part 3
“Chiyuuu!! Chiyuu yuuu!!”
(They can’t hold any longer. They’re not ready for this. If we don’t release them, they will die)
Tomo takes a sip of tea, “They won’t get new power if they can’t past the test. I believe in them, let’s wait more longer”
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Inside the hole is another dimension that reflects something deep in their heart and something they fear the most either something they treasure the most…
Mayu POV
This place is completely hell. Everything is dark and seems limitless. Jurina, where are you?
“JURINA!”
I scream his name over and over again but there’s no answer. Suddenly, I heard a cry… I saw a kid crying there. She has two long black ponytails. In front of her, two figures appear lying there lifeless. This scene seems so familiar to me. I approached that girl to comfort her, just when I reached my hand to her, my hand become transparent and went through her body.
“Come here, don’t be afraid. I’ll take care of you” a black figure appeared.
Don’t tell me that little girl is…
I saw the figure walk closer… I saw her face… she is the black queen. She approached that little girl and held that girl in her arms. That girl turned to see her parents for the last time. I saw that girl’s face… that girl is… me… I remember how the queen adopted me and raises me to become a killer, a spy and it feels like I have become her puppet.
All the things become blurred and spinning, another scene appears around me. I saw my other self is killing and torturing rabbits. I saw her smiling wickedly as she examine the blood which comes out from the rabbit’s body. I can’t believe it. This is not me… that is not me… my head hurts, hurts so much.
“Don’t lie to yourself. That is you, the same as you here” the queen appeared behind me.
“Mother… I…”
The queen brings me some rabbit, white rabbit and a squirrel, “Can you show me how to give this little thing a small surgery? Let’s take the rabbit’s head and put on squirrel’s body?”
“Mother, I… I can’t”
My body stars trembling. I am afraid… I am fear when I stand close to her. I can feel her cold, strong hand grabs my arm. She grabs on me so tight that I can feel my bone will broken. I don’t want to do it, I don’t want to kill but I can’t refuse her. She adopted me and raised me… I must repay her… I must do anything she told me to…
“DO IT!” she commands me to do killing again.
I am forcefully holding the rabbit in my left hand and a dagger is ready in right hand…
“DO IT!!”
“Don’t!! Mayu, don’t kill them!”
I heard Jurina’s voice. I saw 7 years old Jurina is approaching me to stop me from killing the animals. The black queen stops him to come near me. She grabs his neck and lifts him up from the ground.
“Mother, don’t! Don’t kill him. I beg you”
“Do it!” she commands.
“No, Mayu-chan… don’t…”
I saw Jurina painful face then I look at the rabbit in my hand. “I’m sorry…”
Mayu POV End
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“Chiyuuu!!!” Chiyu is worried about Mayu.
(She will die if she kills the rabbit!!)
Tomo just sits on his chair, tighten his hold on the cup.
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At the other side
Atsuko POV
“Minami!!”
I saw Minami is fighting with King Matsui. I run and run toward them, but the distance between us seems further and further. Minami becomes weaken and now falling on the ground. King Matsui holds his sword up high and ready to slay Minami. Somehow, this scene is familiar with the incident in City of Iimiram. I remember how my left arm was cut off… my legs stop running, I can’t move my body… I am trembling to see the sword, the blood, and the dark aura surrounds the king. If I use my right arm to shield Minami, I will lose two arms…
“Useless…” I heard my father’s voice echoing inside my head.
“Useless…” my mother’s voice too.
Useless… useless… useless… That word keeps repeating inside my head, it feels like my head gonna broke apart.
“Acchan…”
I heard Minami is calling my name. I saw her weak body lay on the ground, she is looking at me for help. I can’t stand to see her being hurt. Even if I will lose my life, I will protect her till the end. Without thinking too much again, I run toward her to prevent the sword getting her.
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“CHIYUUUU!!! Chiyuu chiyu yuuu!” Chiyu is jumping beside Tomo.
(NO! if he use himself to shield the sword, he will die inside!)
Tomo’s cup is broken in his hand because he holds the cup so tightly.
“Chiyuuuu! Chiyuu chiyuuuu yuuyu chiyuu yuu!”
(Haruna, Yuko, Minami, Kuu, Mariko, Jurina… all in danger!)
Suddenly a hole opened up on the wall, Sae and Yuki comes out from it hand in hand.
“How did you get out together?” Tomo seems a bit surprised at them.
“I am a vampire, those illusions have no effect on me” Yuki smirks at them. She then look at Sae and rub his cheek with another hand. “I saw Sae is crying inside there like a child, so I get him out”
Sae pouted at Yuki, “Mou, didn’t I told you to keep it as a secret!”
“It’s okay, You look really cute when you’re crying like that” Yuki gives a playful wink at him.
“Those illusions are true or just a random illusion?” asked Sae.
“Those illusions come out from your own memories. Half of it were true, it just want to give you a test… that’s all” Tomo explained. He saw Sae gave out a sigh of relief, he continue, “But, if you fall in the test… you will die for sure inside it”
“Seriously?!” Sae was shocked.
“Itai… itai… I-T-A-I-I !!!” they heard Kuu’s screaming.
It was Kuu and Mariko comes out from the same hole. Mariko is pinching Kuu’s ear hardly, almost break it apart. Kuu struggling against her and finally escape from the devil’s hand then he runs behind Sae for help.
“What happened again with you two?” Sae is pissed.
Mariko’s Flashback
I was running into that black hole and searching for my father. I saw my father at the edge of a ship and jumped off. Following my father’s step, I run to the top of the ship and was about to jump. Then I heard some annoying voices, that’s Kuu annoying voices. I turn back to see what happened and guess what? He is drinking and playing with some babes. Hot and sexy babes.
Seeing him like that makes me fire. Inside my head full of fire burning through my vein. I went to where Kuu is and pushed all the girls away from him. Suddenly all the girls and the ship disappeared, then a tiny light showed up. I pinched his ear and dragged him walk along the path and get out here.
Flashback End
“Want me tell them that you are flirting with hot babes inside there?” Mariko mocked at him.
“What?! You’re having fun with girls in there?!” Sae shouted.
Yuki went behind Kuu and pushed him to Mariko, “I don’t like him”
Mariko pinched Kuu’s ear again without hold back her strength.
“Chiyuuuu chiyuyu yuchiiyuuuu chiyuu yuu chi chi cyuu yuuyu-”
“Stop! I don’t understand!!” Sae complained.
“He is lucky that Mariko saw him. If he steps into those girls’ trap and doing something nasty, he’ll turn into dust within seconds” Tomo translates, “Mariko is also lucky to meet Kuu. If you jumped down from the ship to chase your father, you’ll be dead instantly inside it”
“See, it’s me who saved your life. Get off your hands on me!” Kuu complained.
“If I don’t push those girls away from you, you already die inside!” Mariko shouted back.
“What’s up with you? You always being mad suddenly when I’m talking to other girls”
“…………………” Mariko became quiet and let go her hands.
“Hey, answer me!” Kuu stepped in front of Mariko to prevent her avoiding him.
Mariko grabbed Kuu’s shirt and pulled him close… close enough to lock their lips together. After a quick lips lock moment, Mariko pushed Kuu away, “This is my answer”
“Chiiiiiiyuuuuuuuuuuu~” Chiyu is cheering at them and Sae imitate what Chiyu said.
“Hey, what did you do to me?! This is not fair!” Kuu pouted and pulled Mariko for a kiss. She pushed Kuu away but Kuu holds her tight in his arms.
“Go get a room, you two!” Tomo closed his eyes with both hands and walked away.
“Chiyu~~” Chiyu moves her index finger then a wall appeared surrounds Kuu and Mariko, blocking those scenes.
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“WAAAAAAAA!” Haruna screams as he sliding out from the hole, falling down with his head dropped first on the ground.
“Welcome back, Haruna” Kuu greeted him with a big hug. “How are you doing there?”
Haruna gulp and shows a desperate expression, “It was scary inside…” he paused to take a breath then continue, “There’re many Yuko chasing me! Harassing me! They almost catch me! I keep running and saw a hole, I jumped into it and manage to get out. Look, my sleeves are worn out”
Hahahahaha…. They all laughing at Haruna.
BUUKKK
Yuko fell on the ground with badly wounded. Haruna saw this and immediately went to her side, “Yuko, what happened inside?”
“Minami… she is fighting… danger…” Yuko passed out after saying that.
Haruna begin to feel worry, “Who hasn’t get out from there?”
“Jurina, Mayu, Atsuko, and Minami…” Sae answered.
“Let’s see who will be chosen by the dark crilyst~” Tomo gave them a smirk.
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Mayu POV
“I’m sorry… mother…”
I threw the dagger in my hand toward the queen and stabbed it directly on her chest. She let go of Jurina and growled. Many dark clouds flowing out from her body, those clouds are now surrounding us. I immediately carried little Jurina in my arms and run away from her. But it’s too late… the dark clouds wrapped me. I can’t see, I can’t breath, I can’t feel anything…
Mayu POV End
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Atsuko POV
“Minami!” I stopped in front of her and stretch my only arm to shield the sword.
Don’t!! Atsuko, don’t! A voice whispered in my head.
A sudden push from behind makes me move forward and my hand launches a powerful blow of Nen toward King Matsui. I turned back to see a man glowing in bright with short golden hair floating in the air. Beside him, I saw my father…
“Father?” I can’t hold my tears and let them wet my face.
“A man doesn’t cry” he reached his hands and wipes my tears. He puts his hand on my shoulder and touches my sleeve. “Poor kid…”
“I’m sorry father, I’m useless”
“No, you are brave, my son”
“Your time is limit” the golden haired man said to my father.
“Okay, I’ll settle it in no time”
Atsuko POV End
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“Arghh…” Minami comes out from the hole.
“Minami!” Yuko went to give her a big hug, “I’m so worried about you, anywhere hurt?”
“I’m fine, Yuko nee-chan. I met a golden haired man inside there, he helped me to wash out all the monster”
“Golden haired man?” Tomo surprised to hear what Minami said.
“Ugghh…” Mayu appeared next to Minami. “I finally get out of that place” her face scratched a bit but still bleeding.
“Chiyu~” Chiyu went to hold Mayu and guide her to the chair while Yuko helps Minami.
BUUKK (another person fell down from the hole)
“Acchan!” Minami runs toward him and give him a big bear hug, but she feels something different. She steps back and saw something glowing behind the cape. Atsuko got a new cape and it is covered from half of his left side. Minami brave herself to open the cape and found water like thing forms an arm, a blue glowing arm.
Atsuko rubs his neck with right arm, “I know I’m weird now”
“Chiyuuu~” Chiyu flies next to Atsuko and lands a kiss on his glowing arm. His arm slowly and slowly began to metaphor into man’s arm.
“Wow!” Atsuko surprised, “Thank you, Chiyu” he smiled and can’t hold himself to give Chiyu a hug and a kiss on her cheek.
Chiyu blushed and floating in the air, flying around Atsuko. Tomo got jealous and went to drag her away from Atsuko. Meanwhile, Minami is staring at him with deadly glare. She stepped on Atsuko’s foot hardly which makes him growled in pain. He holds his feet and jumping in front of Minami, then he gives Minami a wicked grin. With a flash movement, he pulled Minami into his arms and holds her tightly, “Minami~ I can hold you properly now~”
Minami is struggling to free from his embrace, but she can’t win against him, “A-Acchan, let me go. This is embarrassing” Minami said shyly.
“It’s okay, just pretending that they are nothing but air” Atsuko said naughtily.
“Chiyuu??”
“She said, do you want me to give you a private room just like Mariko and Kuu?” Tomo translated.
“Okay!” Atsuko nods rapidly.
“NO!” Minami shakes her head rapidly.
“Jurina…” Mayu interrupted. “Where is Jurina?” she becomes worry because she didn’t see Jurina here. The others becomes to feel worry too. It’s been a while since they go into the hole. Jurina is the first person to get in there but now he hasn’t come back yet.
// Jurina… // Mayu feels pain inside her heart, remembering the scenes where the queen almost killed him. She can’t imagine how will she live without Jurina.
GGGRROOOOOOOAAARRRR
“Yahoooooooo~” Jurina comes out from the hole riding a dragon. “Look, what I got! A dragon!!” he yelled happily and flying around.
“He becomes a dragonite, huh?” Tomo smiled.
Jurina commanded the dragon to land on the surface then he jumped off and approached Mayu, “Mayu, that is cool. Wanna have a ride?” Jurina offers his hands to Mayu.
Mayu slapped Jurina’s hands away, “I’m not interested”
That sure gives Jurina a broken heart.
Suddenly, the bright room becomes dark. A purple crilyst appears floating in the air, floating in the center of them. Tomo steps forward and standing below the crilyst, Chiyu is following him. “The first condition to hold the dark crilyst is having dark aura”
“That will be Yuki, since she is a vampire” Sae guessed.
“Yes, it will be easier to defeat the queen if Yuki becomes the holder” Kuu added.
“The holder must have the same dark aura from queen of underworld, she has to be somehow related with her power…” Tomo continued.
The dark crilyst glowing brightly and moves to where Mayu is. Mayu stretches her hand to touch the crilyst and it fall on Mayu’s hand gently. A dark magic circle appeared under her feet. Mayu growled as she feels the power of the crilyst runs inside her body.
“Congrats to you… please use it well” Tomo is disappearing into the dark.
“Chiyuuuuuuu~~~” (sayonara) Chiyu is also disappearing into the dark.
Let me give you a ride, you can use that glowing circle to teleport into your human land…
The room becomes wild grassland. They’re on top of a mountain and their plane, persona is also landed there, crashed. There’s a glowing circle floating in the air, just a few feet in front of them.
“We made it?” Kuu said unbelief.
“We got the crilyst…” Haruna added.
“Let’s fight the queen!” Atsuko said vigorously.
“YEAH!” all of them said in unison.
“Let’s get going to that circle one by one~” Yuko said.
They stand in line and jump into the circle on by one. First is Atsuko following by Minami, then Yuko, Haruna, Kuu, Sae, and Yuki. The next is Mayu and the last is Jurina with his dragon. Before Mayu went into the circle, she stabbed a needle on Jurina’s neck.
“Mayu…? Why–” Jurina fell unconscious on the ground.
“I’m sorry Jurina. I won’t let you die… I don’t want you to die there, everything will be okay when you awake…” Mayu landed a kiss on Jurina’s forehead then jumped into the circle.
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What is Mayu doing?! Is she a friend or foe?
That golden haired man appeared twice to save Minami and Atsuko, who is he?
To be continue…….
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ichikawa san!!!! you did it!!
thank you for bringing acchan's arm back XD
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Hahhah that part: Chiyuu is so funny getting "room" for Kuu&Mariko :rofl:
Mayu...base of what she did down in the hole I think that she will definitely help them defeat the Queen...if the author will not troll us :D
Thank you for your update!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
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I also new here, yoroshiku, Ichikawa-san :yep:
I just read some chapters in your fanfic~ ^___^
Kinda likes it,,, but.. You know........ Atsuko and Haruna is not boy's name.. XD
So it's kinda weird when I read it..
About Haruna's name... I guess it will be good if you change his name into "Haru" it's just like my uncle's name :D
I know its too late.. xD
Its okay if you don't change their names.. :)
I dunno what name I have to give to Prince Atsu :sweatdrop:
Nanka henn.. :nervous
But its good, I love it :rofl: :thumbsup
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The blond man is Kai lol it's the only thing I can think about lol
Tomotomo!!!!
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@ miayaka : Yeah, I bring back Atsuko's arm for the battle :D
@ Megumi : About what will Mayu do in the battle, please read this final chapter. hope you enjoy this chapter :)
@ Ricchan_Sawa : Welcome Ricchan_Sawa-san, thanks for reading my fic :D and welcome to this forum :welcome :jphip: sorry about the name :nervous since it was my first fic, I decide not to change their names. This will be the final chapter, so it's kinda late to change the name :nervous hope you enjoy this chapter.
@ kahem : thanks for reading~ :D about the blond man, please keep reading.
It's been a while since my last update to this fic, and I want to end it here. So, this will be the final chapter^^
Hope I don't disappoint you. Please enjoy reading^^
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HEROES
Chapter 12
The Final Battle
“Where is Jurina?” Atsuko asked.
“He is getting problem riding his dragon. He told us to go without him, he’ll follow us later” Mayu explained. Atsuko feels suspicious for her words at first, but he decides to trust her.
“Where is this?” Sae and Kuu began to examine their surroundings.
Mayu walks around and check the craft on wall, “This is King Matsui’s castle. We are now in King’s room chamber”
“How did you know?” Atsuko asked. Mayu avoids looking at Atsuko’s eyes and puts on her hood.
“I am Jurina’s childhood friend. I used to sneak in here and play with him” she explained. “Let’s get going if we don’t want to get caught”
Since they don’t familiar with the castle, they followed where Mayu lead them. Sneaking around inside the castle which like maze for an hour, they finally arrive at the entrance toward main hall. They successfully arrived there smoothly without having to fight the guards. Mayu was in the front followed by Kuu, Haruna, Sae, Yuki, Yuko, Minami, and the last, Acchan.
“Something is wrong” Atsuko whispered to Minami.
“What is it, Acchan?” asked Minami.
“I think we’re getting too easily to reach the hall. Besides, aren’t the guards here seemed too little?”
“Hey, you two. Hurry up!” Yuko pushed Atsuko and Minami from behind, told them to move faster.
Mayu stood in front of the big door. “This is the main hall. I think the Queen must be inside”
“Yosh, let’s move in!” Kuu gripped his fist.
“I’m ready” Haruna added.
“What are you waiting for? Let’s get in” Sae moved Mayu aside and opened the door.
They went into the chamber, it was all dark. When all of them step inside the room, the metal door behind them suddenly shut off. The light brightened and they were surrounded by hundreds of guards including some monsters. Atsuko and the others stick together to form a circle, ready in their fighting form.
“How did she know we’re here?” Yuko said.
“Good job, Mayu” the queen showed up behind the curtain. “Did you get the dark crilyst?”
“Yes, mother. I have it” Mayu leave the group and went to where the queen is.
“Mayu?! You betrayed us!” Kuu shouted at her with angered eyes.
“I’m sorry, I have to do it” Mayu answered them before handed the crilyst to the queen.
The queen laughing loudly as she received the dark crilyst, “Human can’t be trust! Human are all selfish thing, they will lie and betrayed anyone to keep living. Human are useless living thing in this world”
The queen put her arm on Mayu’s shoulder and handed her a sword, rainbow sword which belong to Akimoto Kingdom royal sword. “Hold this sword, raise it high and command them to attack those intruders”
“Mother…”
“Hurry, Mayu” the queen whispered gently at her. “Vanish them”
Mayu raised the sword up high. She closed her eyes and let out her voice, “VANISH THEM!!!”
The sounds of the guards and monsters charging echoing around the hall like earthquake. Atsuko and the other forced to break apart to fight those enemies. Each of them fights the enemies from different direction. Without the crilyst, their power dropped half from the usual power they use.
Thanks fully, Haruna’s skilled in swordmanship could take down half of the soldiers. Kuu’s power to fly in the air takes care of the flying monsters. Yuki controlled one of the biggest monsters and use it to attack the other. Sae uses his sun rune against dark monster, and Yuko stayed in safe range to use her healing ability. Atsuko recovered arm and his sword skills help a lot to protect his allies while Minami is gathering her Nen to take a powerful blast toward the other wave of enemies.
“Minami, are you ready?” asked Atsuko.
“Now” Minami answered.
Minami jumped and landed on Atsuko’s sword, he swings his sword and sent Minami upward. Kuu flies to catch Minami and sent her higher in the air. With her powerful Nen and the power of the crilyst gathered in her sword, she makes a powerful blow toward the enemies. Her sword is glowing in flame as she recites the spell.
“God of True Fire, grant me strength, let your beautiful flame dancing around with brave and justice… PHOENIX DANCE!”
Like the sea of fire, the bright wave of flame sweep the hall and vanished half of the enemies. Dead bodies of soldiers placed all over the bloody ground while the monster began to disappear. Minami landed on the ground exhaustedly, leaning on Atsuko’s shoulder.
“No good, still not enough to banish them all” Minami said while she tried to gather her Nen.
Some black clothes appeared from nowhere and took Minami to the center of the hall, facing the black queen, “Ara, ara, I forgot that you still have the crilyst”
“Minami!” Atsuko dashed into the group of monster to reach where Minami was but the monsters were in the way.
Talented she got from her father was running inside her bloodline, Minami can’t bear to see the mess of this fight and told them to stay in formation, “Minna, don’t lose your formation. Keep trying to stay in circle. Sae, you go south, Yuki head north, Haruna at west and Kuu at east. Yuko, you stay in the middle and try not to cross the line. You have to be safe in order to heal the others”
“Hai” all of them replied in unison.
“Minami” Atsuko finally break the path and reached Minami’s side. Both of them are now in the middle of the hall, facing the black queen.
“Let’s see how strong your crilyst fights against mine” the queen uses all of the crilyst she got, lighting, wind, water, and dark crilyst. Minami force the power of fire crilyst to simulate inside her body while Atsuko’s left arm turned into blue glowing thing with a symbol on it.
Atsuko and Minami fight the queen while the others tried to protect them from other monster. No matter how strong they are, they have limit. The monsters were outnumbered and finally they were exhausted from the fight. Sae got slammed and stuck in the wall, Yuki were laying on the ground with her mouth full of blood, Kuu were thrust to the ground hardly because of gang attacks from the flying monster, Haruna got sliced while protecting Yuko. The fight was hard, they are now desperate and give up the fight. All of them were laying on the ground and wait for the final blow that will take their lives.
“Did you guys give up the fight?” Jurina's voice came out from nowhere.
Suddenly, the wall in east wing collapsed and Jurina fly into the hall, riding his new friend, the dragon. Mariko was sitting behind him, “I brought reinforcement for you” she said proudly.
Mayu was startled as she saw Jurina comes here.
“Tora!” Jurina called his old tiger friend and it broke the door to come inside the hall. Jurina jumped off from his dragon and sat on tiger’s back. Once the door broken, many soldiers come in and line up in formation neatly.
“Rappapa armies!” Yuko shouted gladly.
“Let’s give our best to fight these monsters!” one of the soldiers shouted.
“CHARGE!!!” all of them shouted in unison.
“The war is just begins! Charge!” Mariko jumped off from the dragon and joined the fight.
“I nearly forgot you, where have you been?” asked Yuko as she approached Mariko.
“I was trapped in the light while Tomo transported us. When I got out, I saw Mayu knocked down Jurina. He told me that Mayu is planning something then we go back to the castle and lead our armies here” Mariko explained.
Jurina is riding her bestfriend, Tora – the tiger and charge forward to where the queen is. “I ‘ll take my revenge!”
“Fool” the queen swing her arm and Tora was thrown aside and hit the wall. Jurina managed to jump off before Tora got hit. He rolled aside and shot an arrow toward the queen. With a single sway of her hand, the arrow reverse to where he is and pierced Jurina’s chest.
“JURINA!” Mariko pulled the trigger, aiming the queen with her gun but it can’t manage to wound the queen. She uses the wind crilyst and blew Mariko a mile away.
Sae sneaked behind the queen and stabbed the dagger at her back. To his surprise the queen didn’t hurt a bit. She turned around and grabbed Sae’s neck, lifting him up in the air then threw him down hard which makes Sae’s body bounce form the ground. She kicks right at Sae rib and sent him far away. Before Sae hit the wall, Yuki moved to behind him and hold him tight. Both Yuki and Sae bumped at the wall and fell on the ground unconsciously.
Atsuko, Minami, Haruna, Kuu, and Yuko line up in straight line and launching their Nen power toward the queen. A beam of light in five colors attacks the queen’s black beam. The black beam of queen becomes big and bigger while theirs got smaller.
“Everybody, hold on!” Atsuko yelled. He put more Nen into the beam and the symbol from his left arm begins to shine brighter.
“There’s no way you can win against me” the queen is laughing as she put more powers into her black beam, Atsuko and the others can’t hold on another blast of the beam and almost lose their balance. “DIE!”
The black beam went bigger, followed by the light beam from Atsuko’s side. Minami increased her crilyst power and Atsuko’s left arm glowing brighter. The hall filled with bright lights for a minute followed by loud crash before it dimmed out. As the dust disappear, Yuko, Haruna, and Kuu were on the ground, cough in blood. They tried to get up but the wounds won’t let them. Atsuko and Minami still managed to stand up and block the queen’s attack. The queen seems to exhausted a bit while Minami cough out blood and Atsuko’s left arm is bleeding.
STAB
All of the sudden, something pierced the queen’s body. It’s rainbow sword which went through her body. She turned her head and saw Mayu.
“I know only rainbow sword can pierced your body, so I use all ways to get your trust on me” Mayu smirked at the queen and stabbed the sword deeper.
“Mayu…” all of the rest surprised by Mayu’s action. They thought Mayu was betraying them.
“Mayu...” Jurina gets up from the ground, “As I thought, you won’t betrayed us”
The queen growled and grabbed Mayu’s neck, lifting her up in the sky. “Human are all traitors!” she slammed Mayu to the wall a few feet from her then she launched Nen power toward her. Mayu closed her eyes as she knows this attack will take her lives.
“MAYU!” Jurina ran in front of her to shield the attack. Hearing Jurina’s voice calling out her name, Mayu opened her eyes, only to see Jurina’s smiling at her before he collapsed into her embrace.
“I’m glad you’re on our side...” Jurina gave out her last breath.
“NOOOO!!!” Mayu cried and hugged Jurina tightly.
“ALL DIE!!” The queen went berserk and ran toward Mayu.
Minami and Atsuko raced against her to stop her but they can only block the attack fro the queen because already exhausted from the fight earlier and has no strength to fight back, retreat was the only way the can think. Unfortunately, Minami was tripled and this gives the queen a chance to kill her. She sharpened her nails and aiming Minami’s heart. Atsuko saw it and stand in front of her. The queen grabbed Atsuko’s left arm madly and cut it off.
“ARGGGGGGHHHH!!!” Atsuko growled in pain.
When the queen is about to launch another attack on them, Atsuko’s left arm glowing in bright blue light and filled the hall. The dark bloody hall suddenly covered in wide blue light. All the dead bodies disappeared, left only two figures in it.
“Ray…” a voice called as the golden short haired man shown up.
“K-Kai…” the queen surprised to see the man before her.
“Enough, Ray. Please go back to underworld” Kai said.
“No! Not until I kill all the humans!” the queen complained.
“I’m sorry, it was my fault” Kai went to hug the queen, “I’m sorry, I can’t keep my promise”
The queen began to cry, “Why, why didn’t you show up on that day. You promise to go with me, but you didn’t come. They took my crilyst, they left me being caged in the gate for hundreds years, I have waiting for you for hundreds years”
“I’m here now. Let’s leave this world, together”
Strangely, Atsuko and Minami were inside the light, separate with the others. Kai and the queen saw them, they approached them and bowed at them.
“You… you are the man who saved us in that forbidden forest?” asked Minami.
“You… you are the man who gave me my left arm?” asked Atsuko.
Kai simply smiled at them, “I’m sorry to trouble you. All of this because I can’t keep my promise to her”
“So, the story of Heroes was true. That one of the heroes promised her to go with her in order to stop her from destroying human world, but he died on the way and she was being trapped inside underworld waiting for you” said Minami.
“But now, the history is changed. The new Heroes who saved human world is you and your allies.” Kai then put his hand on Atsuko’s left shoulder, “I’m sorry that I can’t give you another new arm”
Atsuko shakes his head, “It’s okay as long as I’m not losing Minami” he looked at Minami and smile.
“Please take good care of my great great granddaughter” Kai said to Atsuko.
“Eh?!” both Atsuko and Minami were confused.
“I am her ancestor, Takahashi Kai”
Another bright light blast in front of them as Kai and Ray began to disappear, both Atsuko and Minami were forced to shut their because of the light. When they opened their eyes, the surrounding went back to the bloody hall.
“I guess it’s over” Minami said as she placed her head on Atsuko’s shoulder.
“Yeah”
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Harmonia Village
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“That’s the end of the story” an one arm man is telling the story to his children.
“That was cool!” a five years old boy with short black hair was amazed by his father’s story.
“I want to hear more amazing story” a five years old young girl with a ribbon on her head looking at her father with glittering eyes.
“What happened to the heroes after that?” three years old boy asked to his father.
“Minao, Atsuna, Katsuo, dinner is ready” Minami called.
“Let’s eat first” Atsuko said as he leaded his children to dining room.
Suddenly persona appeared above Atsuko’s house, Kuu jumped down from his plane and greeted them, “How have you been?”
“Uncle Kuu~” the kids were running to him.
“What brings you here?” Minami asked.
“Well, Yuko is giving birth to her 11th child. I’m on my way to her place. Do you want to come with me?” Kuu said as he hugged Minami’s children and one is on his back.
Minami and Atsuko smiled and nodded. Kuu uses his Nen power and fly back to the plane, Atsuko carried Minami with one arm and followed Kuu. As they reach the plane, the kids were surprised and began to suspicious toward their father.
“Don’t you think all the names of the heroes are similar with father, mother, and uncles, and our aunts?” Minao asked his two siblings.
“Just now, are they flying?” asked Atsuna.
“This plane is similar with the story father told us” Katsuo added.
Atsuko overheard what his children were talking about and approached them, “Don’t you want to know what happened to the other heroes? We’re going to their place now”
The kids were jawdropped when they heard what Atsuko said. Minami stopped behind them and whispered to her kids, “Ssstt, this is our family secret. Don’t tell anyone, okay?”
“Okay!” Katsuo nodded. But his brother and sister disagree.
“No, not until you teach me how to fly~” both of them said playfully to their parent.
“That’s a deal” Atsuko promised them.
“YEAY~!”
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After the final battle with the queen, Atsuko and Minami give up the throne to Jurina. They decided to go back to Harmonia village and live an ordinary life.
Jurina becomes the King and takes Mayu as the queen. They lead Akimoto Kingdom peacefully.
Haruna continue his mother’s duty to serve as Great General of Akimoto Kingdom and takes Yuko, the Great Physician as his wife. Amazingly, they had 11 children in five years.
Mariko went back to her life as a pirate and going for another adventure to find others treasures around the world with her partner, Kuu.
Sae becomes vampire because he was in terrible state when he got attacked from the queen, Yuki bite him and turn him into vampire in order to keep his life. They both went back to Sae’s hometown and took back his throne to rule a harmonies kingdom.
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THE END
Finally, it ended.
Thanks for reading Minna~ :D
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:thumbup Man thankyou for writing this fic i hope u can make more.... :panic:
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wow yuko have 11 kids.. haha
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kojiyuu couple had 11 children in five years??? :grr: thaw was awesome
and atsuko' arm didn't come back? i mean it returns to be one arm again :pleeease:
Epilogue please!! :prayers: if its ok with you :on gay:
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What a great ending! :farofflook:
Please tell me you're going to make an epilouge. :wriggly:
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Very nice ending.. :twothumbs
But..... Ehh It's over already? Sumannaii~~
Kojiyuu have 11 child in 5 years?! Σ( ° △ °|||)︴
But how? XDD
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oh no...my little sister yuko have 11 kids :stoned:
is she planning to make a football team from her kids... :sweat:
add one more kid and we have akb's version of cheaper by the dozen /lol
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:farofflook: Sugee! What an awesome ending to an awesome story! :thumbsup
At first I was like Mayu noooo and the YEI!
Jurina survived Phew! I've sweat-dropped for a little while there.
Thank you for your update!
Hopefully I'm looking forward if you're making new fics.
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
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Minna~ thanks for the comments and thanks (●´∀｀●)♡♡
Gomen about the epilogue... I have no idea to write the epilogue :banghead: :banghead: :banghead: :cry: :cry:
But...
o(｀ω´*)o Here's another adventure story of mine~
This story will not be only a love story, but also an ADVENTURE~ 〜(^∇^〜）
Time travel~ space travel~ adventure~ ┏(＾0＾)┛
Please tell me if you're interested with this story （*＾ω＾）人（＾ω＾*）
LOVE DESTINY
Prologue
What was the start of all this?
When did the cogs of fate begin to turn?
Perhaps it is impossible to grasp the answer now
From deep within the flow of time…
But, for a certainty, back then…
We loved so many, yet hated so much,
We hurt others and were hurt ourselves
Yet even then, we ran like wind,
Whilst our laughter echoed,
Under sacred skies…
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“ACCHAN!”
There’s a short figure running toward the girl who was on the edge of rooftop, on top of the highest building in this beautiful city. The girl was wearing white dress with shoulder length black hair. Closing her eyes, she stretched her hands like wings and feels the breeze of night wind. She took a breath and jumped down from the building. A loud crash can be heard from the top of the building. The short figure was late to reach the girl. She is now crying as she saw the body of white dresses girl placed on the ground far below... deadly.
“ACCHAN! WHY! WHY!”
The short girl felt weak on her knees, can't hold the desperate feelings inside her, can't hold the pain of heartache inside her, can't hold the weight of her heavy yet empty soul. She kneeled down and keeps punching her fist on the ground, tears filled her face. She keeps shouting the girl’s name and asking why, why did she taking suicide. This is the tragedy of triangle love between them, haunting those three girls… How will she finds the answer? The answer of her best friend's suicide...
What was the start of all this?
We loved so many, yet hated so much,
We hurt others and were hurt ourselves
Dou~? ＼(;´□｀)/
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I am doing the same as Takamina. WHY WHY ACCHAN! :gyaaah:
This prolouge is so great! :farofflook:
Please update soon! :pleeease:
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OMG You killed Acchan!!?!? :stoned: :OMG:
NOOOOOOO!!!! :on voodoo: :on shady:
LOL
Ugh.. I wanna know what happen.. geez this fic will be so saaad I can already feel it.. :on cloudeye:
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Great end for heroes! OMG!!!! Kojiyuu couple got 11 children!!!!!
The new story seems pretty dark lol