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well... that's my first attempt to write something in english so, don't expect a lot.. I wasn't sure about posting because i'm sure i have a really bad gammar but people who read it already told me that they like it so.. here it is. Thanks a lot for the people who read my blog for encourage me ^_^
**added index***
Index of Chapters
1 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=133208&postcount=1) 11 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=142458&postcount=24) 21 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=155698&postcount=67) 31 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=169803&postcount=156) 41 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=195248&postcount=290) 51 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=232394&postcount=384)
2 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=133209&postcount=2) 12 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=146695&postcount=26) 22 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=157060&postcount=74) 32 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=171067&postcount=170) 42 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=197786&postcount=303) 52 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=234578&postcount=392)
3 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=133211&postcount=3) 13 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=147625&postcount=29) 23 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=159760&postcount=81) 33 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=172359&postcount=190) 43 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=202201&postcount=318) 53 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=236405&postcount=403)
4 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=133213&postcount=4) 14 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=148418&postcount=34) 24 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=160748&postcount=89) 34 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=177473&postcount=207) 44 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=203750&postcount=325) 54 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=246308&postcount=411)
5 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=134233&postcount=8) 15 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=149434&postcount=40) 25 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=161539&postcount=99) 35 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=178613&postcount=216) 45 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=207281&postcount=334) 55 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=248593&postcount=415)
6 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=134235&postcount=9) 16 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=151321&postcount=47) 26 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=162403&postcount=109) 36 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=181951&postcount=230) 46 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=212578&postcount=343) 56 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=253462&postcount=420)
7 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=135403&postcount=13) 17 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=151667&postcount=53) 27 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=164436&postcount=115) 37 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=188698&postcount=239) 47 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=219427&postcount=352) 57 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=259469&postcount=431)
8 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=135696&postcount=14) 18 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=152069&postcount=1) 28 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=165223&postcount=121) 38 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=189904&postcount=249) 48 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=225419&postcount=361) 58 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=262383&postcount=440)
9 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=137491&postcount=16) 19 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=152877&postcount=59) 29 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=165993&postcount=137) 39 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=191369&postcount=256) 49 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=227144&postcount=367) 59 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=264319&postcount=445)
10 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=139565&postcount=18) 20 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=153888&postcount=8) 30 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=167394&postcount=141) 40 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=193984&postcount=271) 50 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=229652&postcount=376) 60 (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=266106&postcount=454)
Epilogue (http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=271471&postcount=467)
***01***
“You’ve done this before, right?”
Yossi just nod to answer the question.
“Ishikawa?” asked the girl next to her.
“Maki. And you? Aya?”
“Maki”
The girls looked at each other and laughed at the whole situation.
“I’m sure Gottsan has made it with a half of the Project already” said Miki still with a smile on her lips.
“Maybe, we should do a club…”
“The Official Goto’s Ex-lovers Club… Sounds nice, don’t you think?”
“Yeah. It can be a really big club, we’ll need a chairwoman to deal with all the members..” joke Yossi.
“Mmh… she should be Maki’s first. I wonder who was it” Fujimoto rolled in the bed and leaned her head on Hitomi’s chest.
“I know iiit, but I’m not going to tell youuu” said Yossi with a smirk on her face.
“You know it?!” asked a surprised Miki who raised her head “..and do you dare to hide this to me?!” Then, Mikitty seated upon the other girl’s stomach and look at her eyes “You won’t be able to keep that secret anymore, you know that, right?”
Yossi smiled with mischief and attracted the girl towards her “Are you threatening me?”
“Mmm.. maybe...” said Miki leaning to kiss Hitomi briefly in the lips “It works?”
“Maybe…” Yossi’s reply was followed by another kiss and another…
And while the kisses became deeper and the sensations began to blur her mind again, Miki could feel like, after a long time, something inside her was changing.
***
It’s difficult to say how they ended this way. It’s something that Yoshizawa didn’t expect when she found Miki crying on the door. Yossi didn’t ask. She just let the other girl step inside the apartment and closed the door behind her.
Miki, still sobbing and without saying a word, ran towards her friend and hugged her. Yossi tried to imagine what could have happened. Surely it was something related to Aya. She was the only reason why Fujimoto could cry and it had to be something really big to make her cry this way. Hitomi just could hold her and try to comfort the little and helpless girl in her arms.
“I can’t hold it anymore…” said Miki while the tears still running down her face. “I’m not strong enough, Yocchan.”
“What’s wrong?”
“Aya…” reply with a tiny voice “…she was with that man and I... I couldn’t help it… I was so jealous… She… she don’t even know how I really feel…”
Yossi began to understand what happened and hold Miki even harder against herself. Memories came back to her mind and she remembered how it feels to love someone who you can’t have.
“It’s ok now” Hitomi said while forcing the other girl to look at her eyes “You won’t be alone anymore.”
Then, without a reason, Miki put her arms around Yossi’s neck and attracted the other girl towards her. They lips where just a few inches away. Yossi could feel Miki’s breath caressing her skin and she skip a heartbeat when the other girl whispered something.
“Please.., make me forget”
***
And then, there they were, both naked and exhausted. The bed was a mess of sheets and their clothes were spread all over the floor. It was like if the room was devastated by a typhoon. A typhoon named Miki Fujimoto.
“You are… amazing” said Yossi with her eyes closed and still breathless.
Miki didn’t reply. She was playing with the other girl’s hair between her fingers while her mind was filled with a single thought.
“Is Miki still with me?” asked Yossi a little worried.
“Eh?” Fujimoto seemed to go back to reality.
“You were far from here” she caressed Mikitty’s cheek sweetly. “What’s on your mind?”
“It’s just… I was thinking about what just happened” Miki took Yossi’s hand on her own. “What we should do now?”
“I don’t know.”
For what seemed an eternity, they just look each other in silence.
“Yocchan?” said Miki finally.
“Yeah?”
“Thanks”
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wow! post 100.. good start XD
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***02***
It was day of Hello! Morning recording and some of the girls were already in the set waiting for the rest of the crew. Miki was one of them. She was seated in one of the chairs of the set talking with Sayumi and Ai-chan about that they always have to do with this kind of games. It was the first time they were going to play this world’s games for kids and they were pretty sure that Rika was going to enjoy seeing the girls lose.
Then, Miki caught someone smiling at her from the other corner of the set and smiled back and went back to the talk with the girls.
“Nice”
Yossi turned her head to see the girl at her side.
“What are you doing here, Gottsan? You don’t have to tape anything until next week, don’t you?”
“Yeah” answered Maki “But I was bored and I though it would be interesting to see what you guys were doing. For what I’ve just seen, I wasn’t wrong. How long?”
“How long, what?” asked Yossi confused.
“Come on, Yocchan… Don’t be so innocent with me”
“I don’t know wha…”
“The Miki thing” cut Maki
Yossi jumped surprised and check that nobody in the set have heard Maki.
“How do you..?”
“Know about it?” said her friend. Yoshizawa nod and waited for the answer. “I know you better than yourself, Yossi. There’s only one thing that makes you smile this way to someone and it’s called ‘wild sex’.”
Yossi’s face became deep red before she could speak.
“That’s not true” she replied.
“Yes, it is” laughed Maki “You’re talking with me, remember? Some time ago I was the one who you smile for.”
While they were talking about past times, Hitomi seemed to relax a little and Maki saw the opportunity to go back to the main item.
“So.., are you in love with Miki?”
“I don’t think I can love anyone right now. Not yet” Yossi’s voice was now filled with sadness.
“Dear Good… How long do you need to forget her?” Maki was now angry. It was the same argument again and again. She began to be tired of that. “She’ll never love you the same way you love her. Please, you have to get her out of your mind.
“I’ll try it, I promise”
Maki smiled again and look at Miki, who was still talking with the other girls.
“Now, she can help you” said to Yossi again.
“I don’t think so… “
“Why? She’s a good girl and, God, one of the hottest chicks here…”
“She loves Aya” this time it was her who cut Maki’s phrase. But Gottsan wasn’t going to give up.
“Well.., I’m sure you can win her heart. You won mine once, remember?”
Yossi looked at her friend who turned and went out of the set without saying anything more. Then, she looked back to Miki.
Maybe Maki was right. Maybe she could forget…
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***03***
“Miki!”
Aya Matsuura was running through the studio’s corridors chasing her friend, who seemed to be avoiding her. Every time she though she was going to catch her, Miki disappeared again. This time, when she saw her friend’s silhouette at the end of the corridor, she shouted to her.
“Fujimoto, stop!”
Miki heard and stopped dead, but she didn’t turn. She was avoiding eye contact even when her friend was in front of her.
“What’s wrong with you? I’m looking for you all day!”
Finally, Miki looked at her friend with a forced smile in her lips, trying to hide her true feelings.
“I didn’t know that you was looking for me, sorry. What do you want?” asked Fujimoto with a weird tone in her voice, but still smiling.
“What do I want? Just see you!” Matsuura was still breathless from her previous run. “We… we didn’t talk since you ran away from my apartment the other night. I was worried.”
“You don’t have to worry about me, Aya. See? I’m ok.”
Fujimoto was feeling really, really uncomfortable. She remembered the night when she founded Aya with a man in her doorway while she was waiting for her friend to come back home. She felt like a fool thinking that she was the only one in Aya’s heart. Then, Miki ran as quick as she could, trying to fight her feelings.
“Miki.., there’s something I should know?” asked Matsuura
“No” answered Fujimoto, coldly. “I’ve just been busy. That’s all.”
Aya wasn’t sure about her friend’s reply but she knew that the worst thing she could do was to force Miki to tell her the truth. Everybody knew that Mikitty wasn’t a girl who speak easily about herself.
“Ok. So..., wanna go out to dinner tonight? We can talk about the free days we’ll have next week and make plans.”
Miki was fighting against herself. She wanted to go, she really wanted to be with Aya, but she didn’t want to hurt herself again. Inside her, she was praying for someone to come and save her.
And there she was, like if she could hear her heart crying for help…, her guardian angel.
“Here you are! Where have you been? We’re gonna be late!”
“Eh?” Miki wasn’t sure about what Yossi was talking about.
“The restaurant. You’ve promised to show me that great Korean restaurant at Ginza” Yoshizawa take Miki’s hand and winked at her. “Come on, I’m hungry.”
“It’s true. I almost forgot about it. Wait a second, ok?” Fujimoto finally understood what Yossi was trying to do and turned to Aya, who was still waiting in front of her “I’m sorry, Aya. I’ve promised to Yocchan before. We can talk tomorrow if you don’t mind, ok?”
“Yeah…Tomorrow…” said Aya while the other two girls left her standing alone in the corridor again.
After a few seconds, Aya shouted with rage.
“What the hell is wrong with her?!”
“With who?” Asked someone behind her.
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***04***
The two girls left the studio some minutes ago and they were walking down the street still holding hands. It was something that makes Miki feel better.
“Lately, I’m always saying thanks to you” said Fujimoto a little ashamed.
“It’s nothing” Yossi caressed Miki’s hand slightly “I’ve seen that you were in trouble and I had to do something. Besides, I’m really hungry and I don’t like to eat alone.”
“Anyway.., thank you”
“Invite me to dinner and we’ll be fine” said Yossi smiling.
“Ok. But…” answered Miki. Then she stopped and attract Hitomi to herself “at my apartment.”
“Are you sure? We haven’t talked about…”
Fujimoto step closer and sealed Yossi’s lips with hers. “I’m sure.”
***
“That can’t be true…”
“Well…, now you know what’s up with her”
“That can’t be…”
A perplexed Aya Matsuura was watching how her best friend was kissing the other girl without shame in the middle of the street with the protection of the night’s darkness.
“Seems like Hitomi-chan have conquered another heart” said Ishikawa, who was also watching the scene curious.
“But Miki don’t…”
“Maybe you don’t know your friend as well as you thought”.
Ayaya was still in shock. Miki and Yossi together? Miki.., her Miki, with another girl? It had to be a mistake. Mikitty would tell her about something like this, right? She trusted her…
“You’ll talk with her?” asked Ishikawa. Aya returned to the real world.
“I wouldn’t know how to do it. What I could say? ‘The other night I saw you kissing Yossi. You have something to tell me?’ I.., I can’t do that…”
“Then I’ll talk with Yocchan” said Ishikawa with a serious tone in her voice “I want to know what’s happening here…”
Matsuura wasn’t sure about Rika’s intentions but it was the only way to know the truth without asking Miki directly. Besides, Ishikawa seemed to be as interested as her if there was something between Miki and Yossi.
***
“I’m really impressed”
“Do you like it?” asked Miki with a big smile on her face.
“Yeah. A lot. I didn’t know that you was so good.”
“Usually, I don’t cook for anyone, but you’re special”
“I’m really touched” said Yossi while taking Miki’s hand. “I could get used to your homemade food”
“And you haven’t tasted the dessert yet…”
Fujimoto said the lasts words with a deep and sexy voice while she was going to the kitchen.
Yossi went to the sofa and seated there. She was really enjoying the night and what she just said to Miki it was true. She could get used to be like this, eating a homemade dinner with a nice girl wearing just a thin black nightdress…
She stared at the girl in front of her and a big smile grew in her face.
“Tell me that THAT’s the dessert and you’ll make my day”
Fujimoto didn’t say anything. She just approached Yossi while opening a bottle of cream and putting some in her index finger. Then, she licked slowly with her tongue and smile with mischief.
“You want some?”
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This was really good, I really want to read more of it
Good Job :wink: :D
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YES! YOU CAME! IM SO HAPPY! GOD I LOVE THIS STORY!
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I just wanted to let you know I been keeping track of this story every since you started it. I'm also glad you are posting it here also. Keep up the good work.
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***05***
Rika went to Yossi’s apartment but nobody answered at the door. There was no problem, closed doors never have never stopped Ishikawa. She opened her bag and take out the keys of Yoshizawa’s apartment that she still had.
A few months have passed since her last visit but everything was exactly like she remembered. Except one thing. Looking at the photos, she realized that some were missing. There were the ones with Gottsan, with Mako-chan, even one with the 4th generation some months after they entered the group, but the pics of Yossi and her weren’t at its place.
“Trying to erase the past, Yocchan?” said to herself while she took one of the pictures with Maki and Hitomi smiling in the backstage after a concert. “I don’t let that happen”
Ishikawa put the photo at her place again and took her cell-phone.
***
The clothes of both girls were spread all over the floor and near was the bottle of cream now empty.
Miki’s tongue travelled across Yossi’s body cleaning the remains of the dessert. Exhausted, both girls were savouring each other skin, enjoying every second they were sharing without worry about anything more than that moment.
And then, the phone ringed.
Yossi moved away a little and reached her cell-phone just to see who was able to call in the middle of the night. When she saw who was, she turned off the phone without doubt.
“Who was?” asked Miki hugging Hitomi from behind.
“Nobody”
Yoshizawa turned to face Miki and kissed her with passion. She didn’t want to worry about the call. The last thing she wanted to think it was Ishikawa. She just needed one thing at that moment and it was Miki’s body melting with her’s.
***
Rika couldn’t believe that Yoshizawa didn’t pick up the phone. It was something that never happened before. It had to be a mistake. She tried again, but she just could hear the sound of the answering machine as a reply.
“You’re with her, right?”
She threw away her cell-phone with rage.
“I’ll have to teach Fujimoto to not play with the things of the others…”
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***06***
“How was your dinner?”
“Great” answered Miki with a piece of meat inside her mouth.
Aya was looking at her friend with a mix of curiosity and jealousy that she never had felt before. She knew that Mikitty had spent the night with Yossi, it was something that she could see just looking at the other girl’s face since they met in the studio some hours ago. Miki was shining and greeted her friend wearing the most beautiful smile on her lips.
Then, it was the first time Ayaya saw the woman, not just the friend.
“Mikittan…” began Aya with doubt in her voice.
“Hmm?”
“Are you…”
“What?” asked Fujimoto.
“…dating Yossi?” finalized Aya with a tiny voice almost inaudible.
The question took Miki totally off of guard and she choked with her food. When she recovered her breath, Aya was still waiting for the answer. How could explain to Aya what she had with Yocchan if not even her knew it? Besides… how could she tell anything without confessing her true feelings?
“You know you can tell me anything” said Aya trying to get an answer.
“I could say the same for you” answer Miki, who saw the way to avoid the previous question.
“What do you mean?” asked a confused Matsuura.
“You want to know what’s going on between Yocchan and me but I still don’t know who was the man you were with the other night.”
“Wha…?”
“It’s not a big deal” said Miki giving back her attention to her yakiniku “I understand that, sometimes, we need to keep some of our secrets. Isn’t like if we’re not gonna be friends anymore because of that.
“But I… you don’t… I want to tell you what…” Ayaya was babbling. She was too confused with Miki’s reaction to be able to say something coherent.
“It’s ok, Aya-chan. I don’t need to know it.”
I don’t want to know it…
***
“I can’t believe that you hanged up the phone”
“It was late, Ishikawa. People need to sleep, you know?”
After the rehearsals, Yoshizawa went to one of the little rooms to have some rest before going to lunch with some of the girls, but she didn’t notice that Rika was followed her until she was in.
“What do you want?”
“Your forgiveness” answered Ishikawa while she was putting her arms around Yossi’s neck. “I miss you”
Yossi almost fell on her knees. She knew Ishikawa was playing with her again but she couldn’t help it. Her body still missed the other girl’s touch…
“Hitomi-chan… “whispered Rika “Can we try it again?”
After a long time, Yossi felt Ishikawa’s lips against her’s again. Her kisses hadn’t change since the last time. They still taste like black chocolate, bitter and addictive and filled with lies and betrayals. It was something that she didn’t want to feel again. Then, another kisses came to Hitomi’s mind. Kisses without pain, sweet kisses with the taste of strawberries and the freshness of a summer breeze…
“What’s wrong?” asked Rika when she felt Yossi’s body moving away from her.
“I can’t”
“Yes, you can” said Ishikawa trying to attract her again.
But Yossi’s strong arms stopped her.
“You don’t understand? You killed what we had before” said Yoshizawa trying to remain cold “You can’t pretend that everything will be ok with just a kiss”
“I’m planning to do more than just kisses…”
“It’s over” cut Yossi. But before she could reach the door to leave, Rika-chan spoke again.
“Is because of Miki, right?”
Hearing that, Yossi couldn’t help but the rage take control of her acts. She pushed Ishikawa against the wall with all her strength and didn’t’ let her make any move.
“Stay away from her, Ishikawa.”
“Or what…?” said Rika with a smirk in her face.
“I’m serious. Don’t dare to touch her.”
Ishikawa approached her lips to Hitomi’s ear and talked with the coldest voice ever.
“I don’t let her win. You’re mine, Yocchan, even if you want to deny it, you’ll always be mine.”
Without knowing how, Rika free herself from Yossi’s arms and went out of the room. After that, Hitomi lost all her strength and fell to the ground with desperate tears in her eyes.
“Enough crying, Yossi” said to herself, fighting against her feelings. “She don’t deserve it…”
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YEAAHHH YOMIKI ALL THE WAY!!! \o/
I love when i read yomiki fanfics...*nosebleed*
Please keep writing...i'm addicted already:heart:
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I read only 01.
you are relly good at this!
Keep writing I'm cheering you.
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thanks a lot guys.
I'm glad you like it!
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***07***
The ball hit the goal’s web with rage like a cannon bullet shot directly towards Nono, who ran away.
“You want to kill me, Yocchan?!”
Yossi made a move with her head to apologize and went to sit in one of the corners of the gym. She needs to throw away Ishikawa from her head, but it was difficult if she had to see her every day with the team. Besides, she was avoiding Miki since her fight with Rika afraid of what she could do if she saw they together.
Trying to forget her problems, she covered her head with the towel, fixed her eyes on the floor and took a deep breath.
“Something’s wrong?” Yossi saw Nono’s head appear under the towel, looking at her worried. “Today seems like if everyone here was your worst enemy”
Hitomi raised her head and looked at the girl in front of her. She still could see the kid that she met six years before through the eyes of an already beautiful woman.
“It’s Rika-chan , right? You two fought again…”
“What do you know about that?” asked a surprised Yossi.
“Nothing. Just things that I saw. Some time ago, Rika-chan and you were the best friends and now you barely talk with each other. Something has to be happened.”
“It’s too complicated”
Nono seat at Yossi’s right and scratch her head while looking at the other girls training.
“You know…, I’m not as smart as the others but maybe I can help you... If you trust me”
“Of course I trust you, but it’s not so easy.”
“It’s because you like her?” asked Tsuji like if her question wasn’t anything important.
“What?!”
“I’m not a kid anymore, Yocchan” continued the younger girl “You can talk with me about things like that, you know.., relationships, sex, relationships and sex with girls…”
“Wait, wait, wait!” Yossi’s face turned deep red. Who was that girl? She wasn’t Nozomi, that’s for sure. Her Nono was an innocent and a pure girl who didn’t know anything about.., about.., those things…
“So.., Rika-chan and you’ve slept together?”
“Nono!” shouted Yossi jumping from her seat.
Immediately, the rest of the girls looked at her and she blushed even more.
“Yoshizawa! Tsuji!” shouted the coach “Go back to work!”
“Yes!” said the girls at the same time.
While they walked into the field again, Tsuji took Yossi’s hand.
“Hey, we can talk later but now, can you do me a favour?”
“Sure”
“Don’t take your anger out through the ball, ok? It will be safer for all of us”
And then, they split and went to their positions. Yossi looked one more time to the goal and smiled.
“What an amazing girl…”
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***08***
After the morning training the girls went to the shower and return to home one by one. Just Miki stayed a bit longer waiting for Yossi. She and Nono decided to practice a little more without the others around. So, there she was. Full dressed already and waiting seated in one of the shower’s bench.
Ten minutes have passed when she heard a noise behind her. Thinking that it was finally Yocchan, she turned just to found that it wasn’t who she expected.
“I’d like to know what she saw on you” said Ishikawa, who was just a few inches away from Miki.
“What are you talking about?”
“Don’t play dumb with me, Fujimoto. You know what I mean”
“No, I’m not. And what’s up with you, Rika-chan?” asked Miki confused about her friend’s behaviour “You’re already scaring me”
Ishikawa walk even closer until she had Miki against the lockers.
“I’ll make it easy… Stay away from Yossi”
Fujimoto didn’t know why Rika was so out of her mind but she wasn’t going to allow that anyone spoke to her that way. Anybody had the right to tell her how she had to live her life and with who.
“Why the hell I’d have to do that?” she replied with a defiant voice.
“Nothing personal Mikitty. It’s just that I don’t like that anybody touch my things.”
Suddenly, Ishikawa felt like two strong arms took her away from Miki and threw her to the ground.
“I’m not yours” said Yoshizawa coldly.
“That hurts, Yossi!” shouted Rika standing up from the ground.
“I warned you”
“And you dumb though that I was going to let you move away so easily?” said with her usual sweet voice.
Rika-chan tried to touch Yossi’s hand but the other girl took a step back.
“I’m beginning to think that Maki was right. You’re sick”
“Well.., Gottsan will never forgive me for took her first love away from her…”
“Uoh uoh uoh…” they heard at the door “Very bad timing.., sorry”
The three girls looked at the younger in shock.
“Nono, that wa… that wasn’t what…” tried to say Ishikawa.
“It’s ok, I’ll just…” said while opened her locker” I’ll take my bag and you can continue talking about.., well about what you were talking”
In a few seconds she disappeared through the door.
“Nono, wait!” shouted Rika following her.
Just two girls left there.
Yossi was still looking at the door when she felt Miki’s warm hand taking her own. She didn’t know what to say. Fujimoto should be angry and she didn’t want to get things worse making any wrong move. But, when she turned to face her, there was nothing more than a pair of curious eyes looking at her.
“You’re going to explain me what was that about?”
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This is a joy to read and re-read
Sorry short comment. Bottom line - I love it. It's one of my top fics :D
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Don't worry Mikan, i love all the comments even if they're just a word XD
and here's 9
***09***
Ishikawa slammed Aya’s door behind her and left her bag in the floor.
“Hey! Calm down!” shouted Matsuura “Why are you so angry?”
“Ask Miki…”
“She’s in her practice now… well, your practice too…” said Aya a little confused when she saw the sports bag “You left early?”
“It was just morning practice today”
“But Mikitty said that she was going to be busy all day…”
“Oh yeah.., I’m sure she is busy…” Rika give her back to Aya and walked towards one of the living room’s window. “… With Yossi.”
Ayaya follow the other girl. Seeing Rika-chan so angry was a new experience for her and she didn’t know what she could or couldn’t say without make her angrier.
“So...” began Aya “They are…”
“What do you feel for Miki?” said Ishikawa still looking the scenery outside through the window.
“Eh? Well, you know…, she’s my best friend” Aya replied innocently.
Hearing that, Rika can’t help but laugh. She then looked down and caressed her hair. She had to think for a moment how she could express what she really wanted to say. Everybody knew that the soloist could be a little slow sometimes.
'I hope that’s not gonna be a waste of time…'
***
“Anybody knows what’s going on with Yoshizawa-san lately?”
Makoto asked to the rest of the girls in the table. The gokkies without Kon-kon met Nono after her practice and went to the restaurant. They were going to talk about Konno’s birthday but the conversation took another direction because Mako-chan was too worried.
“She’s your friend. You should know it better than us, don’t you?” said Gaki-san.
“Yeah but, she’s not herself these days. We don’t even talk.”
“Maybe you’re the problem…”
“Ai-chan!” the other girls looked at her at the same time.
“Just joking, just joking…” said Takahashi to calm down her friends “But Mako could be right. Mikitty and Rika-chan are acting weird too. Maybe something happened…”
“That’s called love, my kids.”
The gokkies turned to see Nono, who was eating unconcerned about the bomb she just released. Then, she noticed the persistent looks upon her and realized what she had said.
“You mean they are…” began to say Risa.
“I don’t mean nothing!”
“Come ooon, Non-chan~”
“I can’t! I’ve promised Yocchan that I’d keep the secret.”
With that seemed like the gokkies gave up but nothing can’t stop Mako when she want to know something about her beloved Yoshizawa-san.
“So… Nono” said Mako “You want some cake?”
***
“So…?”
“I don’t know, Rika-chan!” answered Aya a quite nervous. “I’ve never though about Miki this way…”
“But you felt something when you saw her kissing Yossi…”
“Yeah…, maybe… I .., I don’t know what I felt, ok?”
Ayaya was so surprised with Rika’s questions that she even couldn’t talk properly. How did she felt when Miki kissed Yoshizawa? Until that night she was just her best friend, one of the most important persons in her life, but a friend, nothing more. She’s a girl, what more she could be? But then, she saw the kiss and something inside her wanted to run towards Miki and took her away from Hitomi.
“Aya, you have to win her back” said Ishikawa with an anxious tone in her voice.
“I don’t know how. If she’s happy with Yocchan…”
“No! I need you to win her back “insisted Rika “Don’t be so conformist. Let’s see… She told you something about being with Yossi or something?”
“Nno.. she’s very reserved with this kind of things… She’ve never spoke about relationships or feelings for someone…”
She was trying to remember all her talks with Miki about love but she just could remember herself talking about the last boy she met and Mikitty just listening. Even, one day, Aya asked her friend if she didn’t want to find someone to share the rest of her life but Miki answered as always…
'I don’t need anyone as long as I can be with you.'
And then, it was the first time she realized what Miki was trying to say.
“Oh my God…”
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Its so early in the morning here! 2am but I couldnt sleep. I wanted to know about the latest posts. Im so happy I stayed up for this one. Its beautiful!!! My heart seems to ache when you write about Miki/Aya
Good work :P
Goodnight(or morning:D)
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***10***
When Love Hurts 10
The little room wasn’t the best place to do what they were doing because, in any moment, anybody could come in, but they hadn’t other choice with Ishikawa around all day.
Since they talked after what happened in the showers the two girls became even closer. Yossi told Miki about her previous relationship with Rika and the way they end up killing each other feelings, but Miki could sense there was something hide in Yoshizawa’s words. It wasn’t something Miki wanted to worry about, they had a lot of time to learn to trust each other and maybe, in a near future, Yossi would be self-confident enough to tell her all. In that moment, there was something more important to worry about.
“Lately, Mako-chan looks at me with an evil glare…” said Miki almost breathless. Yossi’s lips making her way down her neck was driving her crazy “Maybe… mph… they know… something…”
“It’s just Mako. She looks that way even at the ball with which I practice.”
Miki couldn’t help but laugh a little. She was loosing all her senses as Yossi’s hands were travelling inside her thigh and needed all her willpower to continue talking.
“I’m serious, Yocchan” said between kisses “I’d don’t like to know that they’re speaking behind us…”
“I always though that you didn’t care about what others say…”
“I don’t care when it’s just about me, but now it’s different”
“¿Aya?” Yossi rested her hands on Miki’s waist, waiting for an answer but the other girl seemed to loose all her strength at listening her friends name, so Hitomi made the next move, not without hesitation in her voice “You want to broke up? I mean.., whatever we have.., you want to leave it?”
Miki was shocked at Yossi’s question but she was sure about her answer.
“No” said without doubt and kissed Yocchan again “You’re the best that I have in my life right now”
“What about Aya?” Hitomi’s hand caressed Miki’s cheek slightly.
Miki looked at the ground for a moment, thinking how she could say it, and then at Yossi’s eyes again.
“I’m not sure about her anymore” suddenly she seemed ashamed “Yocchan.., I think I’m…”
Miki’s words were stopped by the sound of the door opening and the head of a shinning Yuko Nakazawa appearing from behind.
“Ah! Here you are, Fujimoto. Tsunku wants to see you”
The two girls stand still frozen while Yuko disappeared. But, when they were to recover the breath, Nakazawa’s head showed again.
“Oh.., and girls.., I suggest you 4th floor, service room. It’s always empty and nobody will bother you there.”
“Eh… thanks” said Miki. Yossi was too shocked to speak.
The door closed behind her and the girls were alone again.
They looked at each other for a moment without knowing what to say and then, they burst in laugh.
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I finally got around to reading this whole thing, and, basically, I have just one main thing to say ... I love this!!!! :heart:
I'm not a Miki/Yossi shipper, but this story simply makes me like the idea of them together!
Also, will you reveal the mysterious identity of Gocchin's first lover? I'm curious ^_^
And Yuuchan ... always a good advise ... wonder how she knows about the room? :P
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Yuko certainly spent some time with Kei there, that's why she knows :D
Len you really got me, I don't know whether I should support YoMiki or rather be an AyaMiki shipper. :confused:
Besides, like I've already told you, badass Rika rockz! :twisted:
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Also, will you reveal the mysterious identity of Gocchin's first lover? I'm curious ^_^
mm... I've already said it.. just read carefully, but yeah.. I have to write about that...
Yuko certainly spent some time with Kei there, that's why she knows
that's it! XDXD
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'I don’t need anyone as long as I can be with you.'
Ah i love that line from miki...great job len.chan :D
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Hmm...Who to support! hmm...Agh, well because you write Miki and Yossui together so passionately I really like it. :D
Yay!
After a bad day finding you have updated really lifted my spirits
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yeah! I'm winning more YoMiki fans? :yay:
That's an incentive to work more and more in the next chapters ^^
***11***
“What?!”
In her way to Tsunku’s office Miki became a little bit nervous. Her first though was that Tsunku knew about her and Yossi and she almost went into panic. But then, her mind told her that if it was that, Tsunku’d wanted to see Yoshizawa too. After a few moments in front of the office’s door, she calmed down, took a deep breath and came in.
What she wasn’t expected was to see Aya there.
“It’s a great idea, isn’t it?” Ayaya was excited and took her friend’s hand while Tsunku was explaining the whole thing to Miki. Every time she looked at her friend, Aya was smiling like a kid with a new toy as if the news made her the happiest girl in the world. Too bad she couldn’t feel the same.
“So.., a duo” said Miki like if she was thinking out loud “Aya and I…”
“Yes. It was something that I had in mind some time ago and with the movie coming up soon it’s a great opportunity. When Matsuura-san came to see me yesterday I though it was time to do it.”
That could be a dream come true for Miki some time ago, but now, with all that was happening, it was more like a nightmare. A duo with Aya meant to be with her at least two months sharing with her every hour of the day and that was going to kill her. Besides, something inside her mind told her that Yossi would be upset with the idea.
“Mikittan? You aren’t happy about it?” Ayaya seemed worried about her friend’s reaction.
“Yes, yes. Of course I am” answered Fujimoto with a fake smile “It’s just, you know, a surprise”
Hearing that, Ayaya smiled again and made Mikitty feel like the worst person in the earth.
Why now…
***
While walking through the hallway, Maki saw Ishikawa in one of the sofas smiling at her cellphone’s screen and she became curious.
“Why are you so happy? What have you done already?”
Rika-chan raised her head and closed her phone to look at Gocchin who was standing in front of her with her arms crossed.
“I’ve just helped a friend” said with a smirk on her face.
“Really?” asked Maki not sure about the other girl answer “And what do you won in return?”
“To see a friend become happy?”
“Yeah.., and Tsunku is straight. Come on Rika-chan, we know each other too well…” She step closer and asked again “What do you really want?”
Ishikawa gave her a defiant look.
“The same as you, Gottsan. The difference is that I’m fighting to have it” with those words she gave her back to Maki and started to walk away.
“She won’t come back to you”
Rika stopped and just turned her head a little to reply her.
“Wanna bet something?”
“You can’t play with other’s life so easily” said Maki angry taking Ishikawa’s arm to stop her “That’s not a game”
“Yes, it is” answered with the coldest voice ever and made her arm free from Maki’s hand “And I’ll win no matter what”
Gottsan looked as the other girl walk away worried about what she could do to have what she wanted. It wasn’t the first time she saw that look in Rika’s eyes…
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Yeah.., and Tsunku is straight.
LMAO :D
And you are not only winning new YoMiki fans, 'cause your story makes me wanna ship AyaMiki as well.
I still can't decide.
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well.. after a few days, here's the new chapter.
I hope you enjoy it :)
***12***
It was evident to everybody in the studio that Fujimoto was trying to avoid Yossi for all morning. They didn’t exchange a word even, and that wasn’t normal knowing how close they were lately.
Miki turned her head briefly where Yoshizawa was and found the girl looking at her already with a worried look in her face. Yossi made a signal with her head asking if they could talk but Fujimoto refused and walked away.
Before she could reach the door, someone stopped her.
“Can we talk?”
“Eh.., sure”
“Not here” said Maki looking at where Ishikawa was standing. “Go outside”
Without asking why, Mikitty followed her wondering why she was so mysterious. Then, she looked at Rika too and saw her smiling victorious.
Someday I’ll punch that ‘perfect’ face of yours and we’ll see if you can still smile this way…
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I wonder where they’re going…
Yossi watched the two girls leaving the set. She tried to talk with Miki for hours but it seemed like the girl was avoiding her in a deliberate way.
Besides, now she was paranoic too, thinking that everyone was looking at her because they knew about her and Miki. Yossi knew there was a possibility that her secret wasn’t a secret anymore. First, it was Nakazawa-san, but she didn’t worry Yossi. Even Hitomi herself had caught Yuko a few times doing the same so, she was sure about her keeping the secret. The real problem was Nono. Even with the promised she made to Hitomi, it was against her nature to keep something like this.
“What are you thinking about?” asked a sweet voice behind her while arms surrounded her waist.
“What are you doing? We’re not alone”
“You’d let me do it if we were alone?”
“No” answered Yossi angrily “Let me go, Ishikawa. Everybody is looking at us” Hitomi could see the rokkies watching the scene with her eyes wide open and Makoto talking suspiciously with Gaki-san and Takahashi.
“You are too tense, Yocchan” whispered Rika letting her breath caress Yossi’s neck “I can help you to relax…”
“Let me go!” shouted Yoshizawa pushing Ishikawa away.
The people in the set stopped what they were doing and put their attention toward the girls. Ishikawa just smiled to the staff and explained that Yossi was a little nervous lately, but Hitomi seized her by the arm and took her out of the set, not without turning before to the rest of the girls and shouting to them with rage.
“What are you looking at?!”
The door slammed behind her. Everybody was too confused to say nothing.
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Yay! you're writers block is cured. Nice to see new chapters. :D
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yeah! finally something's working in my head again XD
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and another one..
***13***
Gottsan didn’t say a word while they were walking. Once the girls arrive to the room, she closed the door and looked at Miki who was standing in front of her waiting for what she had to say.
“I know that what I’m going to ask you it’s none of my business but it’s important, ok?”
“Ok. Ask” said Fujimoto.
“Are you serious about Yossi?”
What?! So I was right… now eeeverybody knows…
“She didn’t tell me anything” Goto hurried to explain seeing Miki’s surprised face “It’s something I can feel when I look at you, and I need to know if you want to be with her for real or you’re just playing”
“I’m not playing” answered Miki with her cold voice, obviously hurt by the question.
“That’s good, ‘cause Yossi needs someone strong to fight for her.”
“What are you talking about, Gocchin?”
“I’m talking about Rika-chan. You have to be aware of her.”
Miki took some steps thinking about what Maki told her and then she turned towards the other girl to make her some questions.
“There’s something I want to know or… I need to know”
“What?”
“Why Ishikawa’s so possessive with Yocchan? It’s almost sickly…”
Gocchin seated near the window and scratched her head. It was going to be difficult to explain the whole situation in a few minutes.
“The relationship of those two it’s complicated”
“No, really? “ said Miki sarcastically.
“Yeah” Maki laugh at Fujimoto’s expression “But it wasn’t this way at first. I’d never let Yocchan go if Rika didn’t love her.”
***
“I’d like to know why you’re doing this”
“I’ve told you, ‘cause I still love you” Ishikawa hugged her from behind “Even with the lies, the betrayals, the pain… You’re still the one in my heart”
Yossi didn’t know what to think. What Rika was talking? The sweet girl that she met six years ago, the Rika-chan with who she fell in love or the liar, the one she used her feelings to treat her like a dirty cloth.
“Even if you’re saying the truth, I can’t go back and start over again. It was too painful, Rika-chan” Yoshizawa took Rika’s hands that were resting in her waist “Not just because of what you did, but what I did too”
“You know I’ve never blamed you for that…”
Ishikawa rested her head in Yossi’s back and she could feel something humid through the fabric of her shirt.
She’s crying?
“Miki’s with you just because she can’t be with Aya…”
“I know that” said Yossi with sadness in her voice.
“And you still wanna be with her?” Rika’s voice began to crack and Hitomi didn’t know if it was because of pain or rage.
“Yes” answered her “I think I’m…”
“Don’t say it” Ishikawa went back to the cold herself while cleaning the remains of the tears with her hands “Don’t say it ‘cause I’m not gonna let that happen.”
She moved away from Yossi and left the room where the other girl was still standing confused.
“Rika-chan…”
***
“So.., they never…”
“Never. At least it was what Yossi told me.”
“And that’s why they broke up?”
“Maybe. But the problems began when Biyuden was formed. Rika-chan was too busy and they hadn’t enough time to see each other. Then, she became jealous thinking that Yossi would search in other girls what she wasn’t ready to give her.”
“And then it was when she became a…”
“Bitch?” cut Maki.
“I was thinking in ‘a maniac-obsessive’ but yeah, bitch fits well too”
Both girls burst in laugh. They’ve spent almost an hour talking already and now Miki knew everything that Maki knew and most of her worries had disappeared.
“How it ended finally?”
“I don’t know. A few months ago I found Yossi crying in my doorway but she didn’t tell me what happened and I didn’t ask either. All that I know is that since that day, Ishikawa’s aware of every girl that come near to Yocchan and make all that she can to keep they away.”
“And now I’m in the game”
Miki remembered how Rika had threatened her in the shower room after their practice. It was a face of Ishikawa that she didn’t want to see again.
“Watch every step you take ‘cause if you make a mistake, she’ll use it”
“I’ll be aware, I promise”
“And Miki…” continue Maki “Don’t let her put the things you love against you”
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Wanna say it here as well:
Hooray for updating so fast. :thumbsup
First time Rika shows feelings, but who knows what she's gonna do next...
I wanna see Rika threatening Miki a bit more. XD :P
I'm curious who will be the one that beats the crap out of Rika in the end.
:hits with chair:
I can imagine Aya laying her hands on Rika after finding out what kinda games Charmy's playing. *ugly cat fight* :drool:
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Im so happy this next piece is up. Wonderful. Superb. I like it.
especially the -
“And then it was when she became a…”
“Bitch?” cut Maki.
“I was thinking in ‘a maniac-obsessive’ but yeah, bitch fits well too”
I laughed out loud. Welcome back from your block. Its good to have you home!
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thank you bluekinoko! it's good to be back ^_^
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I like the story and where it's going, :x even if you did villify sweet, not-so-innocent Rika-chan.:x I wanna see her get a :fire: smack down:hammer: now though. Good work. :thumbsup
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ah~ it's so nice to can write a new chapter everyday...
but don't get used to that 'cause i don't know how long it's going to last
***14***
“It’s a great opportunity”
“But I’ll have to be with her all the time…”
“You’ll have to deal with that soon or later”
“I don’t think I’m ready for this.”
“Of course you are” Yossi took Miki’s hand with her own “Just think ‘I’m the badass Miki Fujimoto, no one can hurt me’”
Mikitty smiled and rest her head on Hitomi’s chest.
“Besides, we couldn’t see each other like now…”
“Don’t worry about that. I’ll be near every time you need me”
Stupid Yossi! Stupid, stupid stupid!
Why does she have to be so understanding? Why she can’t be just like a normal girlfriend being jealous of the time that I’m going to spend with Aya and not with her? Oh.., that’s right. We’re not girlfriends, we’re not even dating…But…, but, she could show some jealousy, couldn’t she? Just a little…
And why the hell it’s all pink?! I’m gonna kill Tsunku for that…
“¿Mikittan?”
If he likes pink so much she should be here wearing that stupid dress, taking that stupid photos and singing that stupid song…
“Miki?”
That’s it… I’m gonna kick his ass out of the office and…
“Earth to Miki. Can you hear me?” said Aya while she was shaking her hand up and down in front of her friend.
“Eh?”
“You were absent again”
“Oh, sorry” replied Miki coming back from her own world.
“Don’t worry. We’ve finished for today” Aya smiled at her “Let’s go to change”
Ayaya took her hand as they left the set and went to the changing room. Miki felt uncomfortable again. Holding hands it was something normal between them since they met each other years ago, but this time it was different. Matsuura grabbed her hand every chance she could, even during the photo shoot. And every time she did it the most beautiful smile grow in her lips.
What’s going on with her?
Once they changed their clothes Miki was ready to leave, but Aya’s hand stopped her again.
“You’re not gonna wait for me?”
“I’m in a hurry”
“But we need to talk…”
“About this?” said Miki pointing with her head at their hands linked.
“What?”
“This” replied Fujimoto raising the hands and shaking it in front of Aya’s eyes “Why you’ve been doing this all day?”
“I’m just…, I’m happy to have you back, working together, and I feel that I can’t let your hand go ‘cause if I let it go, you’ll leave me again” Aya said that almost without breathing between words.
Ayaya wait for her friend to say something like ‘I’m not going anywhere’ or ‘I’m not gonna leave you’ but Miki just looked at the ground without saying a word so, she spoke again.
“I know why you were so upset that night” she said while raising her free hand to caress Miki’s cheek slightly “And now I feel like a fool ‘cause I haven’t realized before and I almost lose you because of that”
For the first time since Ayaya started to speak, Fujimoto raised her head to look at her. Surprise wasn’t enough to describe how she felt and before she could react and process Ayaya’s words something shocked her again.
Without warning, Miki felt Aya’s lips against hers. It was short and shy, just a caress, but enough to shake Mikitty’s world.
“I love you too” said Aya staying just a few inches away from Miki and leaning to kiss her again.
But before their lips touched again, Miki moved away from Aya, grabbed her bag and without even looking at her, she ran out off the room leaving the other girl speechless.
“What…?”
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Oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh SHIT this is getting good! :pimp:
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Oh snap! I'm at a lost for words. Aya is a little too late ain't she?
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Run Miki Run!!
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ooooh the drama.....
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I agree with Mikan. Run girl! Run back to Yossui!
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nothing to say.. i'm too sleepy right now :pen_sleep:
***15***
“What happened?”
“She kissed Miki and that silly ran away” answered Rika while hanging up the phone.
“Who’s the silly? Aya or Miki?”
“Miki. She’s so childish… Why can she just accept Aya and let Yossi alone?”
A hand took the cell-phone from Rika and put it on the table near the bed.
“You’re still doing this ‘cause you wanna hurt Yoshizawa, don’t you? Not because you’re jealous…”
Ishikawa didn’t answer directly. She just nodded and extended her arm to switch off the lights.
“You haven’t forgotten what she did to you, right?” asked the person next to her while a hand began to travel inside Rika’s thigh.
“No…” said within a moan “But…”
“Then don’t let your feelings dominate you. She don’t deserve to live happily ever after”
Rika-chan couldn’t say anything more. She began to breathe heavily as she felt the fingers moving inside her. As the first time, her body was completely helpless in front of the touch of those hands that made her skin bristle. But in her mind there was always the same though.
Yocchan…
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Yossi took the video’s remote control and turned on the movie. Maki seated in the sofa next to her with a popcorn bowl in her hands but wasn’t interested in the screen.
“Why aren’t you with Miki tonight?”
“She wasn’t in the mood or something” said Hitomi getting some popcorn with her free hand “Besides.., we don’t have to be together all the time.”
“Of course~…, the ‘we’re not girlfriends’ thing” said Maki with a mocking tone in her voice “Come on. When are you going to tell her?”
“Tell her what?”
“That you’re maaadly in love with her”
“I’m not!”
Hitomi’s cheeks turned deep red and she tried to hide it looking at the TV again while Gottsan smiled at herself triumphant.
“Well…, maybe not madly, but you’ve already fell for her, don’t you?”
“And what if it’s true?” Yossi looked at her with sadness in her eyes and the mood change completely “She’s not meant to be mine and I don’t wanna be hurt again”
Maki made an angry face and punched Yossi’s shoulder.
“OUCH!”
“I don’t want to hear that again, ok?!” said Gottsan standing if front of her with her arms crossed “You’re gonna fight to be happy or you’ll discover a side of Maki Goto that you’ve never seen before”
“Ok, ok” answered Yossi touching her hurt shoulder “But, what can I do? I don’t know how to handle those things…” said shyly.
A smile appeared on Maki’s face again. That’s her Yossi…
“Do something special. Something to show her how much she means to you”
Yossi looked at her friend and remembered how much she loved her before. Maki was the one who could read her mind, the one who understands her better than herself, the only person who had been loyal to her within the years. That’s called friendship. That’s the true love.
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UWAAAA~
*kisses the ground that len.chan walks on*
I love you so much! This is awesome. My mind is racing with all the possiblilties of who is sleeping with Rika :P
You always have a line that grabs my heart -
This chapter it is - That’s called friendship. That’s the true love
Beauuuuutiful!
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I really like this! I wanna know what happens next:D
I :heart: YoMiki! And I love Yossi+Miki+Rika actionXD
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Who's sleeping with Rika! I must know!!! *stares at the screen, waiting for an update*
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YOMIKI !!!~
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Who's sleeping with Rika! I must know!!! *stares at the screen, waiting for an update*
you'll have to wait for that.. rika's lover it's a seeecret for now :P
and for chapter 16.. maybe tonight. It's written already but i won't be home 'till evening today.
UWAAAA~
*kisses the ground that len.chan walks on*
I love you so much! This is awesome. My mind is racing with all the possiblilties of who is sleeping with Rika
You always have a line that grabs my heart -
This chapter it is - That’s called friendship. That’s the true love
Beauuuuutiful!
aah~ thanks Mikan. always glad that you like it^^
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Damn you len.chan!!!
*sets alarm clock* ....I'll be here for it ^^
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hey, how I've promised, here's part 16.
don't kill me for ending the chapter this way :P
***16***
Aya Matsuura wasn’t exactly the best example of a calm person. She hadn’t sleep in all night and she had spent all day running from side to side of her apartment cleaning, tidying up, and making anything else that could help to forget how stupid she was feeling.
The doorbell rang and she prayed for the person who was there could help her.
“You look horrible” it was the first that Aya heard.
“Thanks Rika-chan, that helps a lot…”
“Sorry. What happened?”
“I kissed her, told her ‘I love you’ and she ran away” Aya sat in the sofa and hold her legs hiding her head behind “I knew I was going to screw up things”
Ishikawa went next to her thinking what she could say to calm down the other girl. The last thing she needed it was an Ayaya out of her mind.
“I’m sure she just freaked out. It’s not easy for her to find out that the one she loved for some many time love her in return.”
“It’s not easy for me either, ok?!” Aya jump of her seat and began to make circles, shacking her arms and talking hysterically “That’s new for me! I just…, I’ve just realized about this… feelings for her and…, and I don’t know how to deal with that! You think it was easy to go and kiss her? My knees were shaking and my heart was going so fast that I almost felt dying. You understand what I’m saying?! It was the first time I touched her that way and she ran away from me!”
“Aya, it’s just a kiss” said Rika taking her hand “And you’re acting like if she’d dumped you after sleeping with you”
Then, Ishikawa felt the hand in her own to turn like ice. Aya’s body had frozen after hearing the ‘sleeping with you’ line. She never, and never is NEVER, though about the possibility of Mikittan and her making… things. And now her mind was filled with the image of Miki’s nude and sweaty body brushing her skin while calling her name.
Aya blushed even more.
“Oh God… Guess we’ll have to work on this, too.”
“What?” said Matsuura who had returned from her shock as she felt Rika’s hands in her waist.
“If you’re afraid of become close to Miki, she’ll be afraid too.”
“And what are you going to do?”
Ishikawa’s body get closer to her.
“Just imagine that I’m Miki, ok?”
“I… I don’t think that’s a… good idea, Rika-chan”
“Shut up and close your eyes”
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“What?”
“Close your eyes”
“Yocchan, I’m not in the mood for games, ok? I just wanna go home and sleep a whole week.”
“Pleeease” beg Yossi.
Miki couldn’t resist the younger girl’s puppy face. She was adorable acting like this.
“Fine…” said finally closing her eyes.
Hitomi shook her hand in front of Fujimotoi’s eyes to make sure that she wasn’t cheating. Then, placing her hands on Miki’s waist from behind, took her to a near room.
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ahh the suspense! wats rika thinking ...poor aya is all i can say >.<
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Ah, I can't get enough of this.
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*Shock* Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
Hey len.chan...do you like cookies? *drags to the perv forum*
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*Shock* Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
Hey len.chan...do you like cookies? *drags to the perv forum*
OMG! Cookies! Cookies for len.chan!
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*Shock* Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
Hey len.chan...do you like cookies? *drags to the perv forum*
XDXD don't know... I was thinking about it but, i'm not good at writing something like this... give me some time ok? :P
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***17***
“Where are we?”
“It’s a surprise” answered Yossi while she seated Miki, still with her eyes closed, in a bench next to her “I know you’re upset those days for the whole thing with Aya and I feel like I should do something to help you”
Miki can’t help but think about the kiss Aya-chan gave her and felt guilty towards the girl sitting next to her. Yossi was doing everything to make her feel better and the kiss it felt like a betrayal.
“You don’t have to do nothing, Yocchan. Having you by my side is enough for me.”
“I want to do it” said Hitomi placing a kiss on Miki’s cheek “That’s something that helps me when I’m feeling down and I want to share it with you”
“Yocchan…”
“Just stay there and don’t look at me, ok?”
Fujimoto could hear Yossi breathing deeply. She was nervous?
“Why I can’t look at you?” ask with a funny smile.
“Because it’s the first time I’m going to do that for someone and I’m not good at all…Oh, and that’s a secret! Don’t tell anybody.”
“Ok, ok. I’ll keep the secret”
There was a silence after Miki’s words and she heard Hitomi take another deep breath to calm down. Then, there was a sound. A piano’s note out of tone and Yossi’ cursing something in an incomprehensible language.
No way…
She wasn’t going to do what she was thinking right? Miki extended her hand to touch what was in front of her. There was no doubt. That was a piano. But Yossi didn’t know how to play it…, right?
Her question was answered in a few seconds when she heard the first notes of a song and Yossi’s voice flowing with them.
Hitoribocchi de sukoshi
taikutsu na yoru
watashi dake ga samishii no?
Ah~ Uh~
Miki’s heart began to beat faster. She didn’t expect something like this from Hitomi. The way she was singing it seemed something important to her, something intimate, difficult to share, and Yossi was doing it for her. And what an amazing voice. She never heard her singing that way. Her voice sounded more mature, confident and sweet and made Miki’s heart melt hearing it.
One by one, all her doubts were disappearing. With every word, with every note, her feelings were clearer. When Yossi reached the end of the song, she was already sure.
demo egao wa taisetsu ni shitai
aisuru hito no tame ni...
When the piano fell silent, Hitomi felt a hand on her cheek and Miki looking at her with a tear rolling down her face.
“I know I play the piano like a shit but it’s not like crying…”
Fujimoto didn’t say anything at first. She just leaned to kiss Yossi’s lips and it was after that, with Miki’s breath caressing her skin, when the other girl could hear a whisper.
“I want to be with you…”
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*melts*
I have a soft spot in my heart for piano players :D
Nice choice of song too :D
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awww yossie is such a sweetheart......:inlove:
how could Miki not fall for someone like that :heart:
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This is so... Aaaaa~! I love this!:inlove: I wanna read more:D
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ok~ people wants it, people have it XD
I've done what i've could 'cause it was my first time writing stuff like this so don't expect much.. :P
go and read it XDXD
http://forum.jphip.com/showthread.php?p=152069#post152069
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MO-Ehhhhhhhhhhhh!
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remember, the previous chapter is in the perv! XD
***19***
Maki was in her way to home when someone called her.
“Goto-san, wait!”
She turned to see who was calling her and saw that almost all Morning Musume was running towards her. Just Koharu, Sayumi and Reina were missing.
“Wha..at?!” asked Maki surprised.
Makoto, who seemed to be leading the other girls, approached her and made the big question without hesitation.
“There’s something going on between Yoshizawa-san and Ishikawa-san?”
“Wait, wait… Why are you asking me that?” Maki tried to avoid the question.
“You’re her friend. You should know something” insisted Makoto.
“Mai and Ayaka are her best friends. Why you don’t ask them?” Gottsan tried to hide that she was feeling uncomfortable. How the hell the girls knew about all that? She was sure that Rika did something already…
“We’ve asked them already and they were as surprised as us” answered Risa “But you’re not surprised at all. You seem to be hiding something…”
Maki felt trapped but she still managed to act coldly.
“And why do you want to know it? If she’s doing something it’s her problem.”
“No. It’s our problem too” said Konno “If she’s doing something that can damage the group we should know it”
Well…, that’s fair.
“So, you know something?” demanded Ogawa again.
Seeing how worried the girls were, Maki didn’t know what she should do and she just prayed for something to save her.
“Goto-san, can we talk a moment please?”
“Of course”
Thank you, thank you, thank you!
“But…” Makoto complained.
“Girls, you shouldn’t go home already?”
“Yes, Tsunku-san”
The Morning Musume members left Maki alone with her boss.
“It’s something important?” asked her.
“Hmm.., not really. You weren’t at the music room some minutes ago, didn’t you?”
“No. Why do you ask?
“’Cause I’ve heard an amazing version of I Wish while I was walking near there” said Tsunku fascinated “I’ve never imagine that she could do something like that. But you knew it already, right?
“Yeah” answered Maki with a smile.
Gottsan remembered how she and Yossi learnt that song together in the piano. It was the only song Yocchan could play ‘cause she wasn’t confident to learn another. She just wanted to play that over and over until make it perfect. And looking at Tsunku’s reaction, she did it.
So, that’s the special thing, huh? If you’ve shown that part of you she should be really important.
Maki couldn’t help but feel sad deep in her heart. She wanted Yossi to be happy, even if it was with another girl, but the pain would always be there.
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Ah, I understand how Maki feels.
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*sighs* Oh romance.... Wow wonderful.... :heart:
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I know you guys are waiting for this so... to commemorate chapter 20 here it is... enjoy!
***20***
“I want to be with you…”
Miki’s words came back to Yossi’s mind time and time again.
After leaving the studio they went to dinner and then they walked holding hands through a dessert park in the night. Hitomi couldn’t help but think that it was a date, their first real date. The sensation intensified when they reached Miki’s place.
lalala....
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and now go to the perv! XDXD
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lalala....
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and now go to the perv! XDXD
You tease. XD
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lalala....
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and now go to the perv!
Halfway there! *ClickClick*
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*gasps*
Oh my god..this is goooooood~
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wahh !!~ intensefied eh...>.<
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***21***
Another day, another rehearsal. It could have been boring if it wasn’t for the last events. The gokkies and rokkies were alert about any suspect movement that Yossi could do towards Ishikawa. She herself was looking at the taller girl too, but for another reason. Even someone who shouldn’t be there was looking at Yoshizawa. Everybody was paying to much attention to her and not to the work. Well…, not everybody. There was a certain girl who was more interested in Miki and she wasn’t happy looking how her best friend was smiling at Yossi.
The two in question were in their own world. It was like a game to hide her feelings from the others. Sometimes a smile, sometimes a slightly caress, sometimes a look full of desire telling the other girl to run away to be alone…
“You’re shining today” said Maki trying to force a smile to greet her friend.
“I’d almost forget how happiness it feels” answered Yossi looking again at her girlfriend.
“So, she enjoyed your gift, didn’t she?”
“I think so. But, how do you know about it?”
“Ah.., I was near the music room yesterday” lied Maki “By the way; you never did that to me…”
“We always play the piano together”
“Yeah…” a bit of sadness filled Goto’s voice “But you’ve never sang to me, not the way you did to Miki”
Hitomi looked at her friend and finally realized something.
“Maki, you still lo…”
“It doesn’t matter, ok?” cut Gottsan “Just take care of Miki and tell her that she’s a lucky girl for having you”
“But…”
“I’ll be ok” said Maki placing a kiss on Yossi’s cheek “Be happy, Yocchan”
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The kiss did attract the attention of everyone in the studio, but mostly of three girls. One of them was distracted thinking the reason of that until someone touched her arm.
“Mikitan, can we talk a moment?” Aya asked with a worried look in her face “…please?”
Miki turned her head to look at her friend. They hadn’t talked since the kiss and it was going to be difficult to act as if nothing had happened. But maybe it was a good idea to have a talk. They need to be honest with each one and it’s time to say the for so long hidden. Even if that meant to loose Aya, she needed to release her heart from such a heavy load if she want to be happy.
“Ok, let’s talk"
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aww maki so nice
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im filled with over poering joy everytime u update :D
Aww,,,poor maki..
but i am looking forward to the talk between Miki and Aya
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I hate when you stops the fic this way len.chan! :P
“I’ll be ok” said Maki placing a kiss on Yossi’s cheek “Be happy, Yocchan” <--- T_T poor Maki!.
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Yeah~ update! though a short one, nevertheless it temporary cures my addiction. :P
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it was 6.30am when i've began to write this and it was 7.20 when i've finished.. normally it takes me like 3 hours to write something XDXD i know it's short but i wanted to give you guys something to read :P
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“Ah.., I was near the music room yesterday” lied Maki “By the way; you never did that to me…”
“We always play the piano together”
“Yeah…” a bit of sadness filled Goto’s voice “But you’ve never sang to me, not the way you did to Miki”
Hitomi looked at her friend and finally realized something.
:shocked:
OMGASS! It's like a soap-opera, only with H!P instead of lame/bad actors, so it's okay for me to like it. :D
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no comments today.. i'm late to work XD
***22***
They were alone, completely in silence. None of them dared to speak first. It was an awkward situation that they’d never experienced before. Best friends should can tell anything, but now they have a lot to loose; a friend, a heart… A single wrong word would ruin all.
“Aya-chan…” began to say Miki
“I’m sorry…” cut the other girl. Her eyes were fixed in the ground trying to get the strength necessary to continue “I’m sorry if I scared you…”
“Sorry for running away…” replied Miki almost immediately.
Matsuura raised her head hoping to find a smile in the face of her friend that could make her feel better, but she just saw a cold expression.
“Aya, I didn’t run away because I was afraid of you…” Miki walked through the room and sat in a chair with her hands covering her face “I was…, confused”
The younger went near her friend and kneeled in front of Miki taking her hands.
“Mikitan, I love you. There’s no reason to be confused”
Fujimoto finally looked at her. A tear was rolling down her face.
“You don’t understand, don’t you? You’re late”
“You never told me. How I could know it?” demanded Aya who was beginning to cry too.
“I told you thousands of times” answered Miki with a sad smile while caressing Ayaya’s cheek “But you never heard me. You never wanted to hear me.”
“Miki…”
“You have any idea of how painful it was?!” Fujimoto stand up again trying to fight the tears “And now that I’ve found someone who understands me, now that I’ve began to forget, you come and say ‘I love you’ as if it was so easy…”
“But it’s true”
Aya hold her trying to be as near as possible from Miki and buried her face in her friend’s chest.
“It’s true Miki…, I love you…” Ayaya raised her eyes to meet Miki’s and seeing that there wasn’t reply she just could do one more thing “I want to be yours”
Mikitty found her lips against Aya’s once more but this time it was different from the first. It was deep, desperate… Her tongue slid into Miki’s mouth without permission and tried to make Miki’s to play along. It was difficult to resist Aya Matsuura and, for a few seconds, Miki couldn’t help but kiss her in return. She couldn’t believe what was going on. The girl of her dreams was kissing her as if the world was gonna end and she just could think about Yossi.
That was the signal. That and to feel Aya’s hands already in her butt.
“Wait…” said Miki breaking the kiss.
“What’s wrong?” asked Aya breathing a few inches away from the lips of her friend.
“Aya...., I’m with someone…”
“I know about Yossi, but it doesn’t matter now” said her leaning to kiss Miki again.
“I’m in love with her…”
That words made Aya loose all her strength and she fell to the ground. Miki knelt in front of her. It was painful to see someone that you love so much crying desperately.
“Aya-chan, I’m gonna tell you that just one time and I’ll never repeat it again…” Miki placed a hand in Aya’s cheek trying to dry the tears “I think…, no, I know that I’ll never be able to love someone as much as I loved you but now, all that I want is to be with her”
Miki was going to leave, but before she could stand up, Matsuura hands stopped her.
“She’ll never love you” said the younger sobbing “She loves Rika-chan”
“How do you know about that?” asked a surprised Fujimoto.
“Rika told me. She… she was helping me ‘cause I didn’t know what to do with all that I was feeling and she told me that you’re going to get hurt if you stayed with Yossi…”
Miki’s face was indescribable as the rage began to overflow her senses.
Don’t let her put the things you love against you
The last Ayaya could hear it was Miki slamming the door behind her.
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Go to Yossi, Miki! Don't believe AyayaXD
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I only have 3 words drama, drama and drama! XD
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o0oh is miki gonna confront rika??
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I love you... :heart:
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ah~ now next it's gonna be difficult... XDXD
i haven't began to write yet and today i'll have a busy day... i have a lot of work and i'm tired:pen_sleep:
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take your time len.chan :)
I'll be waiting for the next update 'patiently' XD
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***23***
“Ishikawa-san… There’s something that Erika and I wanna ask you about”
“What do you want to know?” asked Rika without much interest.
Yui went closer to her and lowered her voice as if what she was going to say was the biggest secret ever.
“There’s a rumour… The girls are talking about Yoshizawa-san and you…”
“They say that you’re dating Yossi” said Erika more openly.
Rika-chan looked at the girls and smiled to reassure them.
“Look, there’s the same rumour since Yocchan and I joined the group and never happened anything. Don’t worry about that, ok?”
“But they…”
Yui’s words were silenced by some noise coming from the hallway. All happened so fast that they hadn’t time to react until it was too late.
“YOU BITCH!”
Ishikawa hardly had time to see the punch coming. Suddenly, she found herself in the ground with her nose bleeding and trying to run away from a crazy Miki that was getting ready to attack again.
Luckily, someone hold her back tightly before she could do anything more.
“Hey! Calm down, Fujimoto”
“Let me go, Maki!” said Miki fighting the grip from Goto’s arms “I’m going to finish her game once and for all!”
“I understand you, but you can’t punch people because of that. Listen to me!”
Yui and Erika helped Rika-chan to stand up.
“Yeah, listen to Gocchin” said with a devilish smile “She knows what’s talking about, ne Maki-chan?”
“Don’t pay attention to her, Miki. She just wants to hurt you”
“But that bitch is using Aya!”
Then, Matsuura arrived where the other girls were and saw the whole scene. Rika’s nose broken, Miki out of her mind and Maki trying to hold her. When she heard her name she knew that thing was going to be worst.
“I’m not using her” replied Ishikawa “I’ve only helped her to be more open about her feelings, that’s all”
“Rika-chan, don’t…” begged Matsuura who knew what Ishikawa was going to say.
“You know…, she was very shy at first” she cleaned the blood of her nose with her sleeve “…but touching the right buttons she becomes wild”
Everybody looked at Rika with eyes wide open and Maki felt Fujimoto’s muscles tensing.
“I still remember her screams of pleasure asking for more…”
“Ok, all yours”.
Gottsan let go Miki and everybody jumped back waiting for a new attack, but Fujimoto didn’t move. She just looked at Aya with the saddest eyes she ever saw and then walk away in silence. Ayaya wanted to follow her friend but Maki stopped her.
“I have to go with her…” said Aya crying “She has to know why…”
“If you follow her now, she’ll slap you and she’ll never talk to you again… And you…” Gochin turned to see Rika “…don’t smile so happily ‘cause you haven’t won the war yet”
Maki took Aya in her arms and left v-u-den alone again.
“I still don’t know what was all that about…” said Yui confused.
Erika looked at her and then turned to her leader.
“Come on, Rika-chan. We need to clean that mess…”
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omg! rika such a b*iotch ! >=( haha but the part wen Maki was lyk 'Ok,All yours' made me laugh =D ...aww miki n her sad eyes ='(
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Funny thing is, after seeing the Sukeban Deka clips where Rika's doing the psycho evil character, picturing her doing all of the shit she's done in this fic ain't hard at all! :lol:
“I still remember her screams of pleasure asking for more…”
“Ok, all yours”.
Gottsan let go of Miki...
Best...part...evah! XD
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WOWx4!!
"Ok, all yours"
SOOOO FUNNY! I gave a loud "HA!". That was so cool. I like seeing a bitchy Rika. In real life I think she a little bit of a bitch..when she says "MURI!" Its so scary and I can totally imagine that as her real character :D
My heart hurts a little for Goto-san. She is caught in the middle of this. Lol.
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What else can I do but agree with everyone??? Loved this chapter!!! And ...
“I still remember her screams of pleasure asking for more…”
“Ok, all yours”.
Yeah ... best part ever :D
I feel so bad for Ayaya all of a sudden ...
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yea goto's “Ok, all yours” was i think the best part haha..
i was watching tokuba this morning, the one where morning grads were the guest.. evil rika saying "muri!" to kagaku-kun (did i spell his name rite?) that just stright way reminded me of this fic!
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The funny thing is that JFC's right. When I saw the Sukeban Deka clips instantly I thought "Hey! That's my Rika!" XDXD
In Tokuban, when she said "MURI!" to that guy she's more like pissed of than evil...
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Amazing. I gave a laugh when Maki let go of Miki. And I feel so bad for Aya too. Ah! Its just so muddled up right now! Damn you Rika! But I still heart her, even if she is an evil bitch...
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another one :P
***24***
When Love Hurts 24
Yossi was worried. She had a bad feeling when she saw Aya and Miki leaving the room almost two hours ago and they hadn’t return yet. Ishikawa was missing too, and that made her worry even more.
She stopped a staff guy who was walking to the studio.
“You’ve seen Fujimoto?”
“Mmh.., yeah” said the guy surprised by sudden request “She was at 4th floor some minutes ago”
4th floor? What is she doing there? Oh… oh!
“Thank you!” exclaimed Hitomi while running towards the elevator.
Now Yoshizawa was sure that something had happened. As Yuko said, that was the best place if you don’t want to be bothered and there wasn’t another reason for Miki being alone there.
When she arrived at the service room the door was closed, but not locked.
“Miki?” she said switching on the lights.
There she was. Seated on the ground, with her head buried in her knees and a bag with ice upon her right hand.
“What happened?” asked Yossi kneeling in front of the girl “How did you hurt your hand?”
“It crashed against Ishikawa’s face” said Fujimoto without looking at her.
“You’ve punched her?!
“Sort of…” she raised her head a little to look at her girlfriend “Well.., I’ve broken her nose, actually”
Hitomi didn’t have to ask why ‘cause the other girl answer before.
“She slept with Aya” said Miki looking at her with her eyes red from crying.
“Oh…”
Yossi didn’t know what more she could say. Even now that they were together, she knew that Miki will always love Aya and she couldn’t do anything to change that. The only she could do was to seat next to Miki and comfort her.
“Come here” she said passing an arm behind Fujimoto’s back and attracting her.
Miki leaned towards her girlfriend and rest her head on Yossi’s shoulder.
“Why it hurts so much?” asked beginning to cry again “Even now that I’m with you, now that I can love someone else, she continue hurting me. I’m such a bad person to deserve that?”
“Of course not” replied Hitomi holding her closer “Don’t dare to think that again”
After a few minutes in silence Miki seemed to calm down and fell asleep. She was too tired. Yossi caressed her cheek and cleaned the remains of the tears trying to fight the guilty that was growing inside her.
That’s all my fault and I can’t do anything to make you feel better. I’m sorry, Miki.
“I love you” she said leaning to kiss the girl in her arms.
She could hear a whisper coming from the sleepy as an answer.
“I love you too”
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Aww!~ i love this chappiee!!~
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The end of this chapter *tear* made me feel so sad and happy at the same time...oh gosh...
Hey, where did Aya go?
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That was beautiful...
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latest chapter put a smile on my face... awesomely written
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Hey, where did Aya go?
You'll see in the next. I'm writing it already :P
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_Hitomi_ seats on the floor with a coke in her hand, and waits patiently for the next chapter
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Mikan sits next to _Hitomi_ and drinks from her coke using a long novelty straw
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YoukaiChica plops down next to Mikan, who is next to _Hitomi_, and munches on some kettle corn, quietly waiting for more.
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* starts selling chocolates and candies to everyone *
len.chan, your fic is simply a success. Write a book and spread the YoMiki love worldwide! The next Harry Potter is sooo gonna get Miki'd...:heart: :heart: :D
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a book?! that's too much for a person who just can write a page in english each time XDXDXD And i'm sure there's a lot of fics better than mine to spread the YoMiki love around the world :P
***25***
“How did she dare to hit me?!”
“Calm down”
“I can’t! Look at what she did!” shouted Ishikawa jumping in rage from the chair.
“It’s not so bad” said Erika forcing her leader to sit down again “At least it’s not broken”
Okada was standing near them looking worried and nervous.
“We shouldn’t go to the hospital or something?”
“Don’t be so dramatic, Yui. It’s just some blood” replied Erika “Anyway, can you go to bring some more bandages?”
“Uh.., yeah”
When Yui left the room, Erika stopped cleaning the blood and just stared at the other girl.
“What were you thinking to say that to Fujimoto? It could be worst”
“She can’t do anything worst than that” said Rika pointing at her swollen nose “She’s just an animal”
“But a hurt animal is the most dangerous, Rika-chan. You should know that already”
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Maki was standing in front of Aya waiting for the younger to stop crying since they left the hallway, almost an hour ago.
“You’re better?”
Matsuura just nodded slightly.
“Ok, then, now that you’ve calmed down.., can you explain me why the hell you had to sleep with Rika?!”
“Do… don’t shout… at me” begged Aya scared.
Maki took a deep breath.
“Sorry. Can you explain me what happened, please?”
The other girl tried to recompose herself before she could begin to speak. All what happened was too much for her and her friend’s roughness wasn’t helping.
“She wa… she was… Miki” answered shyly.
“What?”
“I didn’t sleep with Rika-chan. She was Miki”
“Then…, why Ishikawa said all those things? She was lying?” asked Gottsan a little confused.
“No…”
“Ok, ok, ok… Maybe I’m too slow to catch you but…” said Maki scratching her head, searching for a way to join all the pieces together “…can you repeat the whole thing? ‘Cause I’m really lost”
Aya began to desperate again and the tears came back to her eyes.
“I was afraid to be closer to Miki and Rika-chan told that I had to imagine that she was Miki and then she began to kiss me and I lost myself ‘causeIreallywannabewithherandnow…”
“Aya, breathe” said Maki cutting her.
Suddenly, Gottsan was caught by surprise by a desperate and sobbing Aya Matuura who hugged her. She couldn’t do anything more than comfort her the best way she knew.
“I know it hurts…” said Maki moving away from the younger a little “…but you can’t let Rika to use that against the one you love…”
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*Re-reads len.chans fic with wide eyes. Using her other hands she steals some Kettle corn from YoukaiChica*
OMFG...ahuh..ahuh...then what happened?
Just let it flow maaaaan~ Its not quantity - its quality! and this is HIGH quality!
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*Buying candy from Hitsu. And eating it very quietly in order not to disturb anyone*
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ummm I think that Aya it's not an angel. She isn't inocent. I feel bad for her in this fic because Rika is a b..! but is her fault too.
What does Miki and Yossi thinks about this? ^_^ I want to know.
(_Hitomi_ goes to the market to buy some beers. "I think we are going to need them! ;)")
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:w00t: there is a party happening here!
*MIKIisLOVE reflexively invites herself to the party :bounce:
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*erink tired from kana writting takes a sip of _Hitomi_'s beer and tosses herself down in the corner. must read update*
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ok.. here's a party and nobody gives the writer some chocolate¿? that's unfair:baa60776:
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*gives all the chocolates that he's selling to len.chan* xD
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i wish that finally yomiki triumph!!!!!
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*Buying candy from Hitsu. And eating it very quietly in order not to disturb anyone*
:popcorn:
And I don't really like popcorn. :P
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thanks for the chocolates Hitsu :P
***26***
“Then, everybody agree with the plan?”
“I’m not sure, Mako-chan” answered Eri “What if they catch us?”
“That’s a risk but we have to know what’s happening” said Makoto serious “We have to keep the group safe”
All the girls looked at her but just Reina dared to say what everybody was thinking.
“Oh, come on. You’re not doing this for our safety” said her with a derogatory tone “You just want to know why your beloved Yoshizawa-san forgot your existence”
Makoto was going to say something but Tanaka continued.
“If you want to keep the group safe we should talk about them, too” she said pointing at Ai-chan and Gaki-san.
Everybody turned to look at the girls.
“Why… why are you saying that?” asked Risa.
“’Cause I couldn’t sleep two nights ago because of your little party”
“I don’t know what you’re talking about” said Ai-chan trying to seem indifferent.
“No?” Reina began to speak with her mocking voice “Maybe the words ‘oh, yes!’, ‘harder!’, ‘don’t stop, Risa!” refresh your memory?”
The two girls looked at each other and her faces turned deep red
“I told you to be quiet!” complained Gaki-san.
“Hey, it’s something I can’t control, ok?”
“Then next time I’ll gag you!”
“Really?” asked Takahashi in a playful voice.
Makoto shook her head and decided to return to the main theme.
“Well, eh…” she cleaned her throat before speak again “We’ll see later what we do with those two. Right now, Yoshizawa-san is the priority”
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From the other side of the studio, three silhouettes were looking at the younger girls with curiosity.
“What are they talking about so seriously?”
“Something about discover Yoshizawa’s dark side” joked Yuko.
“Yossi has a dark side?” asked Abe surprised.
Nakazawa crossed her arms and smiled.
“Nah, they’re just curious about Yossi’s private life. She’s been playing with fire lately and they’re worried”
“You know what’s going on, don’t you?” said Kei.
“She’s in love, and that’s dangerous”
“Rika-chan again?”
“Miki”
Natsumi was turning her head from Kei to Yuko trying to follow the conversation but she was already lost.
“Wait, who’s in love with whom?”
“Yossi and Miki” answered Nakazawa “But I’m sure that something happened with Rika-chan and that’s why I’m so worried”
“Anybody saw her since she left the rehearsal three days ago” said Kei, who was beginning to worry too “Maybe we should call her”
“I don’t want to interfere. Not yet”
Yuko was more worried than she wanted to say. She could feel that there was something big behind Rika’s behaviour.
“I hope that Yossi’s able to handle this…”
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Oh man! The drama and intensity is building up! I need more!! Jeez, I feel like an addict or something....
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Every morning I come to check this place and become veeeery happy 'cos len.chan has written more:heart: So really big thanks to you!:)
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*Pulls fresh batch of cookies from protable over*
These are for len.chan when she is ready :P
I totally laughed at loud with -
“I told you to be quiet!” complained Gaki-san.
“Hey, it’s something I can’t control, ok?”
“Then next time I’ll gag you!”
“Really?” asked Takahashi in a playful voice.
HA! OMGosh!
We really have started a party in here :P
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*takes a cookie*
thanks Mikan :D
well, no update today... yesterday I couldn't write a single word...
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*hops in the same boat as len.chan*
Dont worry I know exactly how you feel. When it's ready it will come.
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well, the problem was that I needed like a bridge chapter to be able to write what I have in mind and I didn't know how to do it exactly, but hey! here it is XDXD
***27***
It didn’t matter how many times she looked at the mirror. It was still there. A big bruise around her nose which didn’t disappear, not even with all the make up she was using.
Rika Ishikawa was cursing the day she met Miki. She had to do something, and she had to do it soon. The question was what… What more she could do that won’t end with Yossi and Miki even closer?
Then, the answer knocked at her door.
“What are you doing here?”
“You didn’t pick up the phone”
“You shouldn’t be angry at me or something?”
The answer was a slap in Rika’s face.
“Hey! It still hurts, you know?!”
“You deserve it” said Aya with an inexpressive face “She doesn’t wanna talk with me. Why are you doing that to us?!”
“That’s not about Miki and you. She was just in the wrong place”
“You want Yossi…”
Rika-chan looked at her and smiled as if what the other girl said it was the funniest thing she ever heard.
“And who don’t?” she replied “She’s so kind, lovely and charming that everybody falls in love with her. The problem is that she knows that and she uses it.”
In some way, the way Ishikawa was talking seemed like she was really hurt or, at least, it was what Aya thought.
“That’s why I’m here” said Matsuura.
“What?”
“I don’t wanna see Miki getting hurt so I’ll help you”
Ishikawa couldn’t believe what she was hearing. The innocent and pure Aya Matsuura wanted to be involved in her plans?
“Maybe you’ll have to lie to her…” she said to be sure about Aya’s intentions.
“I know”
“And you don’t care?”
“She’s the only thing that matters to me”
Love sure is a bad thing if can change someone’s mind that way. She lied to Aya, she used her in a deliberated way and even knowing that, the younger wanted to be her ally. That’s why is so dangerous to be in love. It makes you act desperately just to have the one you want. But that was good for Rika. Now she had someone like her.
“Just one more thing” said Aya.
“Tell me…”
“If we’re going to do this together you have to be honest with me”
“It’s fair” answered Rika.
“Show me the real Ishikawa” Matsuura went closer to the older girl “Tell me why you’re doing this. Why do you feel so bitter?”
“That’s a long story that you don’t need to know…”
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But I, and I'm sure everyone of us, need to knowXD
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I definitely need to know!!
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Drama, tension, bitching.... you could be a scriptwriter!!! I bet this series will have ratings that shoot through the roof!
I can totally imagine Rika as the b****. That image of her in the Sukeban movie just flashed through my mind XD
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:popcorn: :popcorn: :popcorn: :popcorn: :popcorn: :popcorn: :popcorn:
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I need to know her story too XD
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mm.. I was going to write something about Rika's history but it ended being just Maki's part XDXD
I know that Maki's chapters are always sad but it's the way that i fell it has to be her role. I have to find her a love or something XD
***28***
The door of the apartment was closed behind her slowly. She left the bags on the floor and went to the room without even turning on the lights. She wasn’t tired but lately to sleep it seemed the only way to release her mind from the memories. Although she never forgot, it was less painful, but because of all what was happening the feeling of loneliness came back again and stronger than before.
Why are you always alone?
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“Eh?”
Maki was staring at the girl in front of her with a surprised expression on her face.
“So… sorry I… it’s none of my business, sorry” she said babbling.
“No… it’s just, nobody asked me that before”
She was Hitomi Yoshizawa, one of the new members. They’d never talked before alone and it was a little weird that their first words were that question. Now she was ashamed. Maki could say it because of the red on the other girl’s cheeks. She was only a few months older than Gocchin but this way it seemed just a little scared kid.
“I like to be alone” she answered finally. She was sure that if she didn’t say anything Hitomi would run away and would never dare to talk with her again.
“I like it, too” she said sitting next to Maki.
For a long time, they stayed next to each other in silence.
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When did she become so beautiful?
It was the only thought in Maki’s mind for all night. Yossi had invited her to stay over at her home, like many times before, but now, with all that weird things floating in her mind, to stay the night there it seemed a very bad idea.
“What?” asked Hitomi when she realized that her friend was staring at her.
Maki’s lips acted on her own and reached Yossi’s kissing her for the first time. It was just a few seconds before she realized what she was doing.
“Sorry!”
She tried to move away but Yossi put an arm around her waist and leaned to kiss her again, this time more passionate. Suddenly, the old shy Hitomi Yoshizawa appeared again.
“I’d never done that before” her breath caressed Maki’s lips.
“It’s my first, too”
Gocchin kissed her again, this time without hesitation, and let the sensations take the control of her mind.
That night passed without any other word said.
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“I’m sorry…”
“At least, she loves you?”
Yossi just nodded to answer.
“Then it’s ok” said Maki caressing Hitomi’s cheek with her hand “As long as you’re happy”
A tear began to roll down the taller girl.
“I don’t want to loose you” she said.
“You’re not gonna loose me. I’ll always be here for you”
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I’ll always be here for you
Gocchin rolled on the bed and buried her face in the pillow. Soon she couldn’t fight the tears.
“Always…”
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:cry: yes, please find someone for Maki so she can move on
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You're killing me len.chan! First Rika and Aya, now Maki. And the gokkies and rokkies! Whatever shall happen next!
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>_< I'm confused about this fic right now!. I don't know what I like more: YoshiGoto, MikiYoshi, GAM... >_<
The YoshiGoto moment it's so cuteeeeee!
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Len, you are a GENIUS! :bow:
Although YoMiki is beyond cute, I'm currently in the mood for supporting YoshiGoto and AyaMiki. :heart:
I'll keep my fingers crossed for them.
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this gets sadder and sadder...poor maki
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wahhh dont know which couple to go for now >.<"
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sad chapter :cry:, but really good, found someone for Maki, I dont want her to be alone
and like everybody says it's alot of couples now
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So sad:cry: Now I love this story more than before:heart: (if that's even possible:) )
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yeah.. there's a lot of couples now, but is funnier that way, don't you think? XD
first was a love triangle with Yossi, Miki and Rika, then Aya joined, we have a square, and now with maki I don't know what is it anymore XDXD
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yeah.. there's a lot of couples now, but is funnier that way, don't you think? XD
first was a love triangle with Yossi, Miki and Rika, then Aya joined, we have a square, and now with maki I don't know what is it anymore XDXD
A pentagon! hehehe
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All because of Yossi!!! XD
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The more the merrier right?
That thing with Maki is sweet, I love it. Of course I love it. I have this secret thing for Maki but its total secret (shhhhhh!!!)
*kisses len.chan*
who loves you baby?
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Why did Maki and Yossi break up?? when? how? why? why? why? (bet it's must be for some sad reason again...*sob*)
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main reason? Rika XDXD
wow, that chapter is getting a lot of comments.. i wonder how it would be when i'll post Rika's part of the history :p
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I'm so freaking sad now!! Poor Maki!! Yes, yes, she needs someone! len.chan, you're a genius, make it happen!
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well... that's to compensate the previous sad chapter...:P
***29***
Ai Takahashi was running towards the video room as if the devil went after her. When she opened the door the other girls were waiting already.
“You have it?”
“Yeah…” she said recovering her breath and giving Makoto what she had brought.
Mako just took the tapes and went to the video.
“Hey! At least I deserve a thanks or something!” Ai-chan complained “That security guy was… ew…”
“Come here” said Risa placing her arms around Takahashi’s neck and giving her a sweet kiss “I’ll be your reward”
“That’s disgusting” said Reina, interrupting the girls who looked at her friend with a hurt expression “Not you” she explained “Them”
Then, Tanaka pointed to the screen where the rest of the girls were looking at already.
“That’s Nakazawa-san?” asked Eri confused “What are they doi..., oh…”
“There’s a lot of girls here… it had to be with HER?” said Mako
“Well… maybe Yasuda-san has, you know…, something special…” Konkon’s comment was shy and nobody really paid attention.
“Can’t you just skip that?!”
Ogawa obeyed Reina’s request and changed the tape to the next.
“That’s us!” exclaimed Risa.
“Uhm…, Mako-chan, can you make a copy of that?” asked Ai-chan looking interested at the screen.
“Honey, you’re weird”
“I bet that security guy really loves her job…” joked Eri.
This time was Reina who changed the video searching for what they really wanted to see.
“There!” said freezing the image.
All the girls turned her attention to the screen to see the exactly moment when Miki got mad and punched Rika days ago.
“HA! Finally someone hit her!” shouted Reina happily.
“But why Miki-chan did that?” asked Makoto searching for some signal that could give them some answers.
“Look, there’s Matsuura-san too” said Eri pointing at Aya’s silhouette in the corner.
“Well, she’s been acting weird lately, too” commented Ai-chan.
“Yeah but… how that can be related to Yoshizawa-san?”
Makoto made that question more to herself than to the others. It wasn’t just about Yossi anymore. She could feel that there was something really big happening between her elders and she needed to know what it was.
“Well… maybe it’s because Miki-chan and Yoshizawa-san are so close lately…” said Sayumi shyly.
Everyone turned to look at her because nobody noticed her presence before.
“You know something?” asked Makoto to the younger.
“I’ve seen them this morning… They were really, really close”
“How close, Sayu?”
“They… were… kissing…” answered Sayumi with a tiny voice.
“And why the hell you didn’t tell us before?!” shouted Ogawa almost jumping over Michishige who scared, ran away and hid herself behind Eri.
Risa took Mako from the shoulders and made her to calm down.
“Maybe you didn’t give her the opportunity to say anything ‘cause you’re too obsessed with that…”
Makoto apologized to the younger and then everybody stayed in silence a few seconds. Then Konno began to speak.
“That means Miki and Yossi are dating, right?” the rest of the girls nodded “So… maybe…, Miki-chan was jealous of Ishikawa-san and that’s why she hit her…”
“Well…” said Mako “That’s a start…”
The girls then looked again at the screen. There was a lot to watch yet…
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huhuhuhuhuhuhuh!!!
Im sorry its too early for a more entertaining comment
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Suspense! Argh, I can't hold out!
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I wanna watch the videos too *whines* :lol:
“HA! Finally someone hit her!” shouted Reina happily <--- this was really funny, like really really.
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for popular request... enjoy! XDDD
***30***
Why do you feel so bitter?
“That’s not how I feel…”
Aya’s question was still floating in her mind in spite of she refused to answer it. It wasn’t about feeling bitter or not. What led her to do all what she was doing it wasn’t hate anymore, just pure need. The need to be with the person she loved, the one she’d ever loved. Rancour? Maybe at first, but who wouldn’t feel that way when someone hurts you so bad?
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“You shouldn’t cry this way… It’s just a practice”
“But…”
“A smile suits you better” said Yossi cleaning the tears with her thumb “It makes you shine”
She didn’t know why but Hitomi’s touch made Rika’s heart begin to beat faster. It wasn’t the first time the younger touched her this way and she knew perfectly that Yossi was always kind with all the girls, that she wasn’t special. But Rika-chan couldn’t help that a new feeling began to grow inside her.
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“Yocchan, can we talk a moment?”
“Sure”
They were alone for a few minutes already and Ishikawa thought that it was the best opportunity to tell about what she was hiding for so long.
“You know.., you’re very important to me, don’t you?” Rika-chan was looking at the ground trying to not sound nervous.
“Yeah. You’re very important to me, too”
“What I really mean is that.., latetly, you’re more important to me than anybody else”
The taller girl was looking at her with confused. It couldn’t be possible that Ishikawa was telling her what she thought so she asked to clear up any doubts.
“What are you trying to say, Rika-chan?”
Ishikawa didn’t want to say something stupid or mushy ‘cause she knew Yocchan hated sentimental moments, reason why she thought it was time to do something else. Actions speak louder than words.
As she was kissing Yossi, her body told her that she wasn’t wrong, that she was truly in love with that girl. But, when Hitomi broke the kiss, she knew that she was late.
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The days seemed to not end.
Every time she saw Yossi, Rika-chan wanted to disappear and hide herself under the first rock she finds. How she didn’t realize before about those two? Now it was evident that Maki was more than just a friend to Yossi. The way the looked at each other, how they touched…
Suddenly she felt bad because of what she did and she ran away from Hitomi every time they met, trying to avoid being alone with her. Until one day.
Yossi saw Rika-chan in the hallway and ran after her until cornering her against the wall. Her faces were just a few inches away when the taller spoke.
“I can’t get you out of my mind…”
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“How many times I have to tell you, Ishikawa?!” shouted Yossi like mad “You’re the one! I don’t wanna be with anybody else!”
“Then why you have to go after other girls?!”
“I’m not going after other girls! For God sake!
Rika-chan was crying. It wasn’t the first time they had a fight because of that, but she couldn’t help but feel jealous when she saw her girlfriend near another girl. It was stronger than her. She was insecure ‘cause she knew that Yossi needed something that she couldn’t give to her yet. Maybe she was overreacting but, how someone told her, why she got so mad if she wasn’t hiding anything?
“I’m tired of this, Ishikawa” said Yossi walking to the exit.
“Where are you going?” asked her desperately.
“Just out of here…”
And the door slammed behind her.
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“See? I haven’t lied to you” said the person next to Rika.
Ishikawa was looking at Maki’s door where Yossi was just a few minutes before.
“She’s just playing with you while she’s fucking that bitch”
“No…”
The tears began to roll down her face.
“No…”
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“I’m… I’m sorry, Rika-chan. I didn’t want to…”
Ishikawa was too shocked to say anything. She just could look at Yossi and cry asking her why.
“I’m sorry…” repeated Hitomi who began to cry too.
“Get out…” said Rika finally with and almost inaudible voice “Please…”
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That night is still in her heart like engraved with fire. She didn’t want to forget, even if it hurts so much ‘cause, in some way, it was like having Yocchan with her every time she closed the eyes.
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Niiiiiiiiiiiiiice flashbacks. :yep: Can't help but wonder who that "other person" was that was with Rika.
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Oh. my. goodness!! That was one of the best things I've ever read! The suspense is killing me! I need to know who was with Rika, why Yossi went to Maki's room and what Yossi did! Ahh! I need to know so much! Update soon please!
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Wow, that's twisted but I really get where Evil Bitch Rika is coming from now.
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I went through and re-read a few chapters. With so much going on around this forum is hard to keep track of certain story lines.
To recap my thoughts on the last chapter -
Wow, a flashback? I like it. It was short and sweet. We'll more so sad. I now have a bit of an idea why she is being so evil. The gap between 'sweet, Im in love Ishikawa' and 'Im a hardcore bitch that'll walk over anyone to get Yossui Ishikawa' is rather big but I just filled in the hole with my imagination. She must be a really sensitive girl and really REALLY want Yossui still.
Did Yossui for real 'sleep over' with Maki? Thats the kind of thing we dont see much of around here :D some good ol' fashion Yossui/ Maki actions!!
Yet again supurbly written
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OOOOH~ This was good chapter:heart: (Like the others too:) ) Want to know what happened between Yossi and Maki!XD
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I don't like what Yossi did...
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I don't like what Yossi did...
and what do you think Yossi did? 'cause I still didn't say exactly what happened :P (wait.. don't say anything 'cause maybe what you thought is what i'm going to write and i want it to be a surprise XD) But, definitly, Yossi's not an angel either...
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and what do you think Yossi did? 'cause I still didn't say exactly what happened :P (wait.. don't say anything 'cause maybe what you thought is what i'm going to write and i want it to be a surprise XD) But, definitly, Yossi's not an angel either...
I think that I know it because after 30 chapters I'm begining to understand the way you write. It's like when you see a horror movie and knows that the killer with the knife it's behind the door.
Have I told you that I love this fic? ^_^
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oh god.. i'm so predictable as an horror movie? :doh:
well, when i'll finish the fic you'll have to tell me if it was how you've imagined XD
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your fic is not THAT predictable... like you said yossie is not an angel either, wasn't expecting that. i for one thought rika from the begining ploted some kinda evil plan to pull yossie away from gocchin from the start but i guess i was wrong about that...
yea your fic is awesome!
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oh god.. i'm so predictable as an horror movie? :doh:
well, when i'll finish the fic you'll have to tell me if it was how you've imagined XD
>_< no!! Sorry, I don't want to say that!.
It's not that you're predictable. It's that in a horror movie the killer is going to make bad actions for sure, because it's a horror movie, not a romantic comedi.
I'm thinking bad of Hitomi's actions, because you can write really bad characters doing bad things. In other fics the girls are angels with problems.
(I hate when I can't say in english what I really want to say >_<. I hope you're not mad about it)
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ok ok, no problem ;)
well.. what can I say... I've always thought that everybody have a dark side XD
oh god... people are going to kill me :pen_wave:
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no, not really. I've always loved Yossi's dark side :heart:
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Me too...although her light side is good too
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I hate that transition chapters... they're the most difficult to write :evil:
***31***
Maki’s head hurt when a discordant note went through her ears.
“You’re not concentrated today”
“Aah~” sighed Yossi letting her hands drop upon the piano’s keyboard careless.
The younger looked at her friend and smiled with tenderness. She knew perfectly why Yossi’s was so distracted but she asked anyway.
“What’s on your mind?”
“Miki…”
“That’s not new…”
“…and Rika…, and Aya…”
“Now you’re in love with Aya, too?” joked Maki.
Yossi gave a killer look to her friend and then return her eyes to the piano trying to remember the notes.
“Baka…” she whispered.
“Sorry~ “ apologized Gocchin fixing her eyes in the keyboard too “I know what you mean… After what happened the other day…”
“They had to meet today for some GAM thing again and Miki seemed worried”
Yossi began to play and a sweet melody filled the room again. Maki was going to follow her friend when she realized something.
“What’s that?” she asked suprised
“What?” Hitomi stopped again.
“That wasn’t ‘I whish’”
Both girls looked at each other confused and then at the piano again…
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“Good Job, girls. We’ve finished for today”
The staff members began to pick up the set while the two girls were standing next to each other without saying anything. They didn’t exchange a single word for all morning, just a formal greeting at first and then silence. Even the staff noticed that something wasn’t right between them.
“You’re going to avoid me the rest of your life?” asked Aya finally encouraged.
Miki not even was bothered to look at her and she began to walk away until a hand stopped her.
“I didn’t know that I was hurting you so much…”
“That’s why you slept with her?” this time Fujimoto replied but with a furious look in her eyes.
“I was depressed because you dumped me after the first kiss and she used it. I don’t know how…, she managed to make me feel alone and helpless…”
“That’s a lame excuse, Aya”
“I don’t want to excuse me. I just don’t wanna loose my best friend”
In some way, it seems as if Matsuura’s words reached Miki’s cold heart ‘cause her expression change and she wasn’t on the defensive anymore.
“You know that’s all I can offer to you right know, don’t you? A friendship…” she said taking Aya’s hand.
“I know”
“Then…, let’s forget what happened and stay as until now”
As an answer, Aya just could hug her friend tightly.
“It’s ok…” said Miki almost without breath “Let’s go to change”
“Go you first, I’ve forgot something”
Fujimoto nodded and disappear behind one of the doors. Then Aya took her cell-phone, search a number and pressed the call button.
She hadn’t to wait long until the person at the other side of the line answered.
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... 0_0 Aya! What's gonna happen next!?
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OH no! Evil plotting, evil plotting!
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i sense something evil going on
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:o Evil Aya! Looooove this story, last night I didn't want to stop reading it until it was about 4 AM and I read the same line over and over about 6 times. :D
-sits down next to everyone with bag of popcorn- :popcorn:
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:o Evil Aya! Looooove this story, last night I didn't want to stop reading it until it was about 4 AM and I read the same line over and over about 6 times. :D
hey, get some sleep too, the fic isn't going anywhere XDXD
now i'm curious.. what line do you read 6 times? :P
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hey, get some sleep too, the fic isn't going anywhere XDXD
now i'm curious.. what line do you read 6 times? :P
“It doesn’t matter, ok?” cut Gottsan “Just take care of Miki and tell her that she’s a lucky girl for having you”
XD I thought it was sweet (and still do ^^)...But I think I was so tired it actually took me the first 4 tries to actually comprehend it. :sweatdrop: I ended up reading the whole fic over this morning. There are a lot of things that I didn't remember, so thank gahh I did so. XD
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I need more to read! I'm so sleepy right now but I couldn't go to bed before I had read this. It's the same every day:I can't go to sleep before I have checked your ficXD
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then, the day that i don't post anything you go early to bed? XDXD
don't worry, tomorrow you'll have another chapter to make you stay awake until late :P
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then, the day that i don't post anything you go early to bed? XDXD
don't worry, tomorrow you'll have another chapter to make you stay awake until late :P
Staying up late reading it, or staying up because of what was read? :panda_shifty:
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well, i meant reading it but i can't predict the side effects that every chapter will have in the readers:twisted:
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:panda_love: Yay! I can't wait. I'm horribly impatient about things, but I will TRY to wait. XD
I bet it's fun reading the reactions of everyone, huh?
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Ohohohoho! Was a lurker, but now as a member, proud to say YOU ROCK! My heeerooo! Rika was such a bitch here, but driven from love by hate, very nice touch to the antagonist :] I loved all the Ai x Risa moments, sho vury fooneh :]. I look forward to the future chapters!
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I bet it's fun reading the reactions of everyone, huh?
well, more than fun.., to read peoples comments and how you're enjoying the fic it cheers me up to write more and more ^^
Ohohohoho! Was a lurker, but now as a member, proud to say YOU ROCK! My heeerooo! Rika was such a bitch here, but driven from love by hate, very nice touch to the antagonist :] I loved all the Ai x Risa moments, sho vury fooneh :]. I look forward to the future chapters!
wellcome to the active life in the forum! I was a lurker for long time too XDXD
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I know.. a little short this time :P
***32***
Yossi was heading to the dance room to meet with the other girls when, suddenly, someone unexpected jumped in her way. Hitomi didn’t try to avoid the assault. She just looked at the person in front of her and remained as cold as she could.
“Happy to see me?”
“Not really” answered Yossi.
“That hurts, Yocchan” said Rika while she began to move closer to the younger “At least you should ask how I’m feeling after you’re girlfriend’s attack…”
“You look fine” Hitomi’s reply was colder than ice “I guess you’ll live”
The answer hit Ishikawa like a direct kick in her stomach but she wasn’t going to give up so easily.
“Why you’re acting so cold hearted today?” she said putting her arms around Yossi’s neck. Hitomi didn’t move a muscle.
“I don’t have time to play with you today, Ishikawa”
Another kick. Yoshizawa’s attitude began to serve her nerves on edge.
Finally, tired of staying there with someone she couldn’t stand, Yossi released herself from Rika’s grip and tried to keep on her way to the dance room.
Then, Rika-chan decided to use her last weapon to catch her attention.
“I was wondering…” she said with a playing tone “You’ve tell Miki about our little secret already?”
Yossi stopped dead. She wasn’t expecting that move.
“I mean… She should know how her girlfriend really is, doesn’t she?”
Rika took advantage of Yossi’s surprise and hold her again. Goosebumps travelled around the taller’s skin when she felt Ishikawa’s body pressing against her back. She couldn’t believe that Rika could dare to use something like that to keep her.
“That’s something between us…” she managed to say finally.
“Yeah…” whispered Ishikawa “And that’s why you’ll always be mine…”
***
Fujimoto didn’t know if she should be happy or worried about her friend’s attitude. Since they’d talked in the morning Aya was smiling happily…, too much happily for someone who was just rejected. It was as if Ishikawa’s incident never happened. They had lunch, talked about silly things and now they were walking together hand in hand as the best friends. It was too weird…
Maybe she wasn’t in love… Maybe she was just jealous because I didn’t pay attention to her…
She keep wondering what was happening with Aya when she heard a voice coming from somewhere near.
“…You’ve tell Miki about our little secret already?”
Aya stopped next to her friend and enjoyed the look at Miki’s face, who seemed taken aback by Rika’s words.
“That’s something between us…”
What the hell…?
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Oh no she didn't! Bad Rika! God, I'm really starting to dislike her, that's not good for my fic...
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whoa! evil tacit coming from the Rika and Aya duo. :cry: I feel sorry for Yomiki.
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Oh Gahh! O_O -punts Rika and Aya-
:].
So suspensful ; ; But I love it!
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OMG ahhh !!! the suspense is killing meee >.<
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What secret can it be that can make Yossi yield to Rika... Argh.. it's getting suspenseful...
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Oh man! This is bad. Don't listen Miki!!! DON'T LISTEN!!!!!
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Ou my... And like YoukaiChica said: DON'T LISTEN MIKI! You and Yossi belong together!
I guess I can't sleep untill I have read what will happen nextXD
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O_O OH MY GAHH!!
That's so...arg! I dunno the words for it! XD Leaving us in suspence might just kill me one of these days.
BAD RIKA AND AYA! -smacks them both-
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I don't think Rika is really really bad :S
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The secret had better not be that Yossi was a D-Girl before.
*shudders violently and then :puke:'s at the thought.
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The secret had better not be that Yossi was a D-Girl before.
*shudders violently and then :puke:'s at the thought.
of course not XD
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The secret is that Yossi and Rika have a child!!
Miki: What the hell…?:kickass:
XD ( :sweatdrop: )
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that one's great! it made me laugh a lot XDXD
but nope :P
*mental note*
i have to write something in my notebook that it have just came to my mind for some posible future chapter... in case that i'd forgot..
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^ Oh shit what have I done...
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damn you JFC!!!XD XD XD
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damn you JFC!!!XD XD XD
-nods- Yes! Damn you! XD
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Yep, my first thought was D-girl.
Now Im curious what else it could be. that is the only conclusion I have reached
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whats D-girl?
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^ dick-girl
and no... I'll never, NEVER, write about that. It was difficult enough the perv with normal girls.. XDXD
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***33***
“Then, it’s all OK with Aya?”
“Sort of…”
“How?” asked Yossi confused “You patched things up, don’t you?”
Miki turned off the lights and laid in the bed next to her girlfriend.
“Yeah but… I don’t know. It’s too weird” she said resting her head on Yossi’s chest and an arm around the younger’s waist “I was the one who told her to forget everything and be friends but, with all that happened, I don’t feel like trusting her as before. You know…, if there’s something I really hate is the people I love lying or having secrets to me…”
She didn’t know why, but Hitomi could feel that Miki wasn’t talking just about Aya and remembered her talk with Ishikawa just a few hours ago. She considered telling Miki everything but, as she said before, it was something between her and Rika, something that she couldn’t forget. As hard as she tried it was going to be always with her.
Fujimoto noticed the change of mood in the other girl and raised her hand to caress Yossi’s cheek while looking at her. She remembered Rika’s words but she fight the urge to ask about it.
“Something’s wrong?”
Hitomi took Miki’s hand and placed a sweet kiss on it. Aya had to be wrong. Someone so careful couldn’t hurt anyone.
“I want you to promise me something” said Yossi seriously.
“What?”
“If someday I do anything that could hurt you, slap me with all your strength, ok?”
The older laughed at Yossi’s request but nodded and accepted the promise.
“You’re the one acting weird now, you know?” said Miki still smiling and leaning to kiss her lover’s lips.
“I’m acting weird?
“Yeah. If there’s something bothering you, you could tell me…” Miki saw Hitomi frown and decide to change the topic to something that could relax the other girl “…or you just can forget about it and make love to me…”
Yossi raised and eyebrow at Miki’s suggestion. With all that was in her mind she shouldn’t be in the mood to do anything more than sleep, but there was something in the other girl that she couldn’t resist.
When Miki was going to give up and go to sleep, Yocchan rolled on the bed and placed herself on top of her girlfriend.
“How do you do it?”
“How do I do what?” asked Miki with a playing tone in her voice seeing the desperate look in her girl’s eyes.
“How can you turn me on so badly with just a few words?”
***
“Miki heard us?” asked Rika to the person at the other side of the line.
Yeah, and the look in her face was precious.
“That’s unexpected, but good for our plans” she said smiling to herself “She told you something?”
No. She didn’t want to talk about it but Miki seemed pretty shocked about that secret thing.
There was a pause.
You’re not going to tell me the secret, don’t you?
“Of course not”
Well, as you want. But we should do something soon…
“Let me thing about it. I’m sure we can use that in some way…”
Rika hanged up the phone and let her head rest in the pillow. Something told her that it was going to be difficult to sleep that night.
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What is the secret? I must know! *runs around in circles*
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>_< !!!
*runs around in circles after rndmnwierd*
(lol)
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*joins to the circle*
:heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
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*cant be bothered with the running so watches the circle and laughs at the various collisions* :P
:heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
but yeah, love this fic! so dramatic! GJ~
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The bed scene is SWEET!!!! *melts....*
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-chooses to join the circle but ended up tripping and falling down- I must know the secret! >.<
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Arghhhh!!!!!!!! I want to know the secreeeet!!!!!!! :evil:
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I wanna know toooo! -tripped over Saikami running in the circle-
Gahh dam-- -implodes-
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*jumps in*
God... the fanfic's fantastic! I'm totally indulged into it...
*keeps on reading* (argh... wanna know the secret between Rika n Yossi...)
Yomiki love saikou!!!
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seems like people is too excited about the secret XD don't kill me if it's not what you're expecting (besides, you're still have to wait to know it :P )
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impatient for updates!!! XD
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I'm s0o0o0o0o impatient for this, I just wanna know what it is. I don't care if it's not what I expected, because yea... I dunno what to expect. XD
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Yossi went for LIPosuction?
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No update:cry:
Damn you! Must I go to bed without anything new to read?:o :)
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sorry, i didn't sleep at home yesterday and i couldn't finish the next chapter :P but there'll be update today, don't worry
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*be happy, and start to wait update*:) XD
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and as I promised, new update :P
***34***
“We shouldn’t do that here…”
“You wanna stop?” asked a playful Ai-chan.
“No…” Risa’s answer was followed by a kiss “…but the cameras…”
“It’s funnier this way”
Gaki-san complaints were silenced by another kiss, this time deeper, and a hand travelling down her body.
“Don’t tell me you’re not enjoying it…”
A mischievous smile appeared on Gaki’s face.
“You’re really a weird girl, Takahashi”
“Yeah, but that’s why you love me”
Ai-chan was leaning to kiss her again when they heard steps going towards the room. Quickly, Risa lifted up and took her girlfriend to the closet that was in the room, which luckily it was big enough to hide both girls inside. Gaki-san closed the door just in time to see two girls coming into the room.
“Hmm… we’d never done that before…” said Takahashi playing with Risa’s hair between her fingers.
“Sshhh… I wanna hear them”
‘So, how’s everything?’
‘Fine’
‘Really? It seems like you’re avoiding me these days’
‘I have more things to do than just think about you…’
“Isn’t that Rika-chan?” asked Takahashi who was already interested in the conversation too.
“I think so… But I can’t hear them clearly…”
“Let me see…”
Ai-chan opened slightly the door looking through a little gap.
‘Your plans aren’t going how you want, right? That’s why you’re so upset’
‘I have all under control’
‘Then why I’ve seen Yoshizawa and Fujimoto so lovely with each other today? They don’t even seem to be hiding their relationship…’
Ishikawa looked hurt. It was like if the other girl enjoyed seeing her this way.
‘You wanna help me or just make fun of me?’
‘Help you, of course’ said the other girl taking Rika-chan from the waist and attracting her ‘You know I’m the only one who has been at your side since all that started’ she tried to kiss Rika but Ishikawa moved away before.
‘Not now, Erika. I have to go…’
“What’s happening?” asked Risa trying to reach the door too “I want to watch too”
“You’re not going to believe it…”
“What?”
Then, they heard Rika-chan leaving the room.
‘That stupid girl…After all I’ve done and she still loves Yoshizawa. I can’t let her to give up or she’s going to ruin all the fun…’
“Why the hell she’s talking alone?” asked Risa.
“And you said that I’m weird…”
Erika leaved the room too and the gokies were alone again.
“Come on…” said Gaki opening the closet’s door “We have to tell Makochi about this”
But before she could go out, Ai-chan’s hand took her by the arm and pulled her into the closet again.
“Wait…” she whispered into her lover’s ear “We still have to finish something…”
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erika??... but she wasn't around during the yoshigoto period.. hmm kinda confusing
anyways... i loved the taka-gaki moments lol
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chapter 13, remember when i said that the problems between Yossi and Rika began? XD
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ahhh okok.... went back to read chapter 13 now everything fits... sorry abt that
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So that's the mystery person? I KNEW IT! Best part was it was mostly TakaGaki <3~! -jumps for joy-
Can't wait til next chapter!
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Erika?! O_O I didn't see that coming. XD But now everything makes sense! Yay! Also, YAY for TakaGaki moment! -joins in with the jumping for joy-
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Wow that was a shocker. I thought it was gonna be Aya for some reason...then it was Erika. Then again Erika does have like...an evil look in her eyes sometimes. Maybe its just me...anyway...nice story ^_^ *3 cheers for TakaGaki*
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Yei! Can't say anything elseXD
Hmmm... I guess I'll read chapter 13 again:D
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Sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet. :twisted:
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***35***
As she was leaving the studio, something told her that it wasn’t going to be so easy to go home. Her fears were confirmed when she saw the two girls in front of her.
“Miki-chan! Let’s go to drink something!” Yuko didn’t bother to ask, she just took Fujimoto and pulled her into the car in spit of the younger’s complaints.
“We shouldn’t wait Yocchan?” asked Kei laughing “She’ll be angry if we kidnap her girlfriend this way”
“Naah, I want to talk with Miki-chan alone”
Fujimoto looked at her elder with fear in her eyes and asked something knowing perfectly the answer.
“You’re already drunk, don’t you?”
***
“Where the hell is she?”
Yossi pressed the call button in her cell-phone again. It was the fourth time she was trying to speak with Miki and she didn’t pick up the phone. Yoshizawa didn’t know if she should be angry or worried. It became a habit to wait for each other at the end of the day even if they weren’t going anywhere, just to enjoy each other company for a little longer. But that day it seemed that Miki forgot about it.
When Hitomi was going to do the fifth attempt, someone appeared at her side.
“You’ve lost your princess?”
The cold tone in Aya’s voice made Yossi shiver. It was a sign that told her that this conversation wasn’t going to be a friendly one.
“She probably went home already” answered Yoshizawa trying to avoid Aya’s eyes.
“You know…., you don’t deserve her”
“And who deserve her? Someone who has been ignoring her feeling for years?” fight back Yossi.
Hitomi knew that Matsuura wasn’t the type of girl who likes verbal fighting but this time it seemed that the other girl didn’t want to give up so easily.
“I know how you are, Yoshizawa. You like to play the knight in shinning armor saving helpless girls and then…”
“You don’t know anything about me” cut Yossi tired of Aya’s words “It was Miki’s choice to be with me. You had your opportunity and you lost it. Deal with it”
Yossi put the phone in the jacket’s pocket and began to walk away leaving Matsuura behind who didn’t dare to say anything to reply.
***
“So… it’s official now?”
“Well, just some people now about us” answered Miki “I don’t know if you can call that to be official”
Yuko had been making silly questions all night but it seemed that, as much as she drunk, more serious she was.
“You know… I love Yocchan…, we love Yocchan” corrected herself holding Kei closer to her “And we’re not going to let anyone hurt her. She’s our favourite girl”
“I know” said Fujimoto a little scared with Yuko’s look.
The older released the grip on her girlfriend and move closer to Miki who tried to avoid the contact.
“Then, if you’re serious about that relationship, you should tell Tsunku before he knows it through another person”
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Damn, I sort of lost track of this story ... I'm gonna go re-read it again and then leave a comment :D
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O_O Erika? O_O My Erika? O_O I just... That can't... Ah... O_O My brain...O_O How could you villify my sweet Erika? O_O I can't believe I like it O_O
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Oh, it was short. But I don't care:) It's enough to me.
I have a bad feeling about Tsunku. Or not Tsunku, but I guess someone will tell him about Yossi and Miki. It's hard to explain what I mean, so just ignore meXD
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haha wonder who was planning to tell tsunku anyway lol, wonder will Miki tell him..hmmm..cant wait for the next part!!
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Have you seen J-Drama Mudokono?. I don't think that Tsunku is so understanding about his idol's relationships in real life :P
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I wonder who is planning to tell Tsunku. I have a feeling Miki might end up telling and then Yossie getting mad about it. o_o I'm not sure tho'. Haha, Yuko when drunk always amuses me.
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yuko is already scary when she is sober, she must be terrifling when she is drunk! hahaXD
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Poor Miki, I'm curious where this is heading...
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poor pooor Miki. Kidnapped by Kei and Yuko (actually now that I think about it...I wouldnt really mind..). I hope Yossie and Miki tell Tsunku together and hes like "wutever thats fine"...but thats only wishful thinking
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O_O Erika? O_O My Erika? O_O I just... That can't... Ah... O_O My brain...O_O How could you villify my sweet Erika? O_O I can't believe I like it O_O
hey.. someone has to be the villain. Remember sweet Charmy-->bitchy Rika? XDXD
well.. who knows what Tsunku will do to the girls if he finds out...
For now, next chapter is in progress :P
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evil is awaiting... I can sense it...
AWW HELL, I can't sense anything, except for another post. :panda_haha:
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hey.. someone has to be the villain. Remember sweet Charmy-->bitchy Rika? XDXD
well.. who knows what Tsunku will do to the girls if he finds out...
For now, next chapter is in progress :P
Erika and Rika always get bad reps. Erika's always plotting to/stealing Rika from Yossui and Rika's either dumb as a rock or just jealously evil. And I mean dumb in more ways than one...
Oh, well, I guess you can't please everyone, but the story's still good and I'm waiting eagerly to see what happens next.
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I like an evil Erika. I like an evil gropey Erika even better <33
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sorry for the delay :P
***36***
“That woman’s crazy!”
“You should know that already”
Yossi can’t stop laughing while her girlfriend was explaining her odyssey with the two elders the past night.
“It’s not funny” said Fujimoto serious.
“Yeah, yeah. You’re right” answered Hitomi wiping the tears in her face “At least they could have called me. I was worried…”
“I’m talking about Tsunku!”
“Oh”
If Yoshizawa didn’t know her girl she could say that Miki was loosing her temper.
“Don’t say ‘Oh’ and stay there with that stupid face! What we should do?!”
“Ok. First, relax” said Yossi taking Fujimoto by her shoulders and shaking her a little “And second…, you’re overreacting”
“I’m not ovemmph…”
The taller sealed Miki’s words with an unexpected kiss which seemed to erase all her worries.
“Better?” asked Yocchan after a few seconds.
“Mmm… Maybe if you do that again…” said Miki still with her eyes closed.
Hitomi acceded to her girlfriend’s request and leaned to kiss her again. It was short, too short. She liked to tease Miki and knew that the older hadn’t enough with that and that she soon would be complaining. That was the best way to make Fujimoto forget about everything that could worry her, to play with her lust until made anything else disappear from her mind.
But this time it didn’t work…
“Yocchan… what we should do?”
Yossi stopped and looked at her.
“We’ll tell him” she answered seriously.
“You’re su…”
“But not now” continued Hitomi “We need time to resolve all the problems before we could tell him anything”
Miki moved away a little feeling uncomfortable with the idea of telling her boss about their relationship.
“You don’t think he could do something to us…” she asked worried.
“The only thing I can tell you if that we’re not the first couple here, and you know perfectly who I’m talking about…”
“You mean that he knows about them?”
“Nakazawa-san told him a few years ago” answered Yossi.
“He didn’t do anything?”
“Well, I just know what Yuuchan told me. It seems that he just scolded them a little, remembering that they shouldn’t date with anyone, inside or outside the group and blah blah blah, you know, the same as ever. But finally he gave her blessings to them, as long as their relationship was a secret”
With that, Miki seemed to relax a little and hold her girlfriend again.
“But for now…” said Hitomi caressing Miki’s hair “…you don’t have to worry about that, ok?”
“Ok”
“And now, let’s talk about how fun was your night” said sticking her tongue out and running away from Miki before she could kill her.
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ooo yuko told tsunku O_O, hmm..hope he does the same to miki and yossi! :D
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I hope Tsunku understand how much Yossi and Miki love each other, but somehow I don't think it's so... But I don't want to expect anything, I want to read what will happen:P
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I have a feeling that this isn't going to go over well with Tsunku. o_O I hope it does tho', does that count? ^^; I want moooore. :O
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Tsunku may be a little strict, but he's usually lenient at times XD Hopefully, he will allow YoMiki <3
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I think we're all expecting the worst, but it would really be a twist if Tsunku said okay. XD
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YO YO YO YOMIKI YOMIKI YO YO YO!
Matsuura is one cold scary girl...
The Erika and Rika thing was a bit of a surprise, lol.
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Waiting for uptades! the secret will be revealed...
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I am waiting tooo!!!!!!!^^ i like this story so much!!!!!!!!!^^
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hooooooooonto sumimasen for the delay again... I've been busy all week.. :pen_sorry:
***37***
The cafeteria was desert. It wasn’t lunch time yet, but Nono always liked to be there before the others so she could enjoy her meal without any distraction. Some chicken, a salad, a bowl of rice and a big piece of cake that the waitress always reserved specially for her.
But this time, when she was ready to attack the dessert, a bunch of girls came into the room running directly towards her.
“We have to a… ask you… a favour” said Risa breathless because of the running.
“Huh?”
“Yesterday we discovered something about Rika-chan and we need you to ask her about it” said Ai-chan.
Nono seemed too distracted with her cake and didn’t pay attention at first.
“Non-chan? You’ve heard us?” asked Makoto a little pissed off.
This time Nozomi raised her head and looked at her friends with killer eyes.
“I’m bfuzy, azk Sfhibyachfan” said finally pointing to the components of Melon Kinenbi who had just arrived.
The girls were still looking at her without having any idea of what she said. There were just a few privileged persons who could understand Nono when she had her mouth full, and there wasn’t anyone of them around. She tucked away the remains of the cake and sighted with satisfaction before repeat again what she said.
“Shiba-chan. She’s Rika’s best friend, remember? If there’s someone who…”
“Eri!” exclaimed Makoto cutting Nozomi’s words and turning to the younger “Go and bring Shiba-chan here”
“Why me…?”
“Now!”
Kamei obeyed, not without complaint a little more before, and went to the side of the cafeteria where the four girls were. Nono saw how the younger whispered something in Shibata’s ear. Ayumi smiled, made a gesture to her friends and then followed Eri.
“Kamei-chan told me that you need to ask me something” she said sitting next to Nozomi “What’s it?”
Owaga turned the chair and sat in front of Shibata as if she was going to begin an interrogation. But before she could say a word, Nono ask Risa to made Mako-chan shut up before she could say something too direct.
“It’s about Rika-chan. The girls discovered something and wanna ask you about it”
“Well…” said Shibata interested “I don’t know if I’ll be able to help you, but ask”
Makoto tried to speak again but this time was Ai-chan who overtook her.
“Yesterday we saw Rika-chan and…”
Suddenly, Takahashi went silent when a little tremor shook the room. All the girls looked at each other a little freaked out but seeing that it wasn’t a big thing they relaxed again.
“It’s ok, it was just a short one” said Shiba-chan “So, what were you sa…”
Then, the ‘big brother’ came.
***
“You have plans with Yossi today?”
“No. She’s going to dinner with her family tonight”
“So, you’re free?” asked Aya happily.
“Yeah, but I was planning to spend the night at home. I’m really tired lately”
Miki could see the deception in the eyes of her friend. Maybe she should try to spend more time with her, bring things to normal again. It couldn’t be so difficult…
“You could make me company, if you want”
“Sure! I’ll bring some dvds and tha…”
Both girls felt the ground tremble a little and, quickly, Miki took Aya’s hand.
“Don’t worry, Tan” she said knowing how much Miki hated earthquakes “It was just a li…”
The next that Aya could remember it was Mikitan holding her tightly.
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ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh~~~~~~~^^
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That was a good chapter! Now I can't wait for the next one! Will everyone be alright? Will H!P be destroyed??? Proabably not....
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^^^yeah^^ i like the story
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What's going on? Need to know!XD
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Oh boy! Earthquakes!
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Earthquakes. x.x Woa, I wonder what's gunna happen to everyone. :O Good chapter! I want more. :3
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Whew, just finished all 37 chapters in one sitting.
Your fic has really gotten me into it so far, even though I'm not a YoMiki fan. The plot and stuff's just too interesting to not read. I think it's an extremely well-written fic, especially if it's your first in English.
Regarding the latest chapter, I think earthquakes were the last thing I was expecting x_X. Keep up the good work, hope there's another chapter soon :D.
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Haha! Cuuuute :] Carry on!
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aww that's cute how miki jst had to hold on to something fast cuz of her fear of earthquakes ^^
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the earthquake thing is funny how it came to my mind. I was so blocked than I began to play DDR a little and then it was like 'PUFF' and the idea appeared XDXD
thanks again for all your comments
***38***
“Is everybody ok?” asked a staff member.
Rika was trying to stand up. She was still a little stunned after the earthquake and her legs were shaking. Ishikawa didn’t remember clearly what happened, just the tremor and everything around her falling. Then, someone pushing her.
She looked around and saw the big painting of the hall on the floor.
“You’re ok, Yoshizawa-san?”
Yossi? She was here?
“Yeah, I’m fine”
“Really?” asked the guy worried “You’re lucky. That thing could have hit you really hard”
Ishikawa turned her head to look at the younger who was standing against the wall, holding her right arm and pretending to be all right. But she knew Yossi for so many years already to know perfectly when she’s hiding something.
“Let’s go” she said taking Yossi by the hand and leaving the hall.
“Hey! Wait!” complained the taller “What do you think you’re doing?”
“I’m bringing you to the sickbay”
“I’m not going anywhere with you” answered Hitomi angry “I have to find Miki”
“Fujimoto can wait. You need to see a doctor”
“No, I don’t” said Yossi releasing her hand from Rika’s “I’m ok and I’m going to search for Miki”
Seeing that Yoshizawa wasn’t going to hear her, she didn’t have more alternatives than hit her where she knew that Yossi was hurt.
The pain made Hitomi scream.
“See? You’re not ok” said Rika taking again the other girl’s hand “Come on”
This time, Yossi just followed her in silence trying to hold the tears caused by the pain in her shoulder.
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Miki didn’t want to open her eyes. She was too scared that she’d even forgotten who was holding her until the other girl spoke.
“It’s over, Miki”
“You’re sure?” she asked with a tiny, cracked voice.
“Yeah”
She slowly opened her eyes and looked around. She was safe, the world was still there and she was in Aya’s arms…
Wait…
Suddenly, Fujimoto realized what she was doing and tried to move away from her friend, but Aya didn’t let her go.
“Aya, I’m bet… I’m better now” she said avoiding Matsuura’s eyes.
“I’d like to be like this forever…” Ayaya hold her tightly again and rested her head on Miki’s shoulder.
“This isn’t the best moment to talk about that, you know?”
“Yeah… sorry” said Aya finally letting Miki go “We… we should find if everybody is ok, right?”
Miki nodded. She was glad that things weren’t worst, and she wasn’t thinking just about the earthquake. If Aya had insisted or tried to kiss her, Miki was sure that she couldn’t fight against it. That’s why she hated so much the earthquakes… There were just two things that made her vulnerable, that and the girl in front of her.
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Ah i can't wait to see the next one!!^^
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i kinda hope yossie and rika will work things out between them...
not saying they sld be tgt but just you know...
no more evil rika?
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Good thing Aya didn't try to kiss her. :O Gahh knows what that would lead to, and then Yossie would find out and x.x But yea, good chapter! :3 I like.
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Yossi pushed Rika to safety~ AH~~~ that's so S-W-E-E-T
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.... Love it!!!°°
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Already waiting the next chapter XD
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***39***
“You should rest and tomorrow go to the hospital” said the doctor “It’s just a dislocated shoulder but it would be better if you take some tests. Just to be sure”
“Ok”
The girls left the room after the doctor gave Hitomi some pills against the pain. She was lucky that it was just a dislocation. Now the shoulder was at her place again and she just would feel a little aching for some days.
“I’m glad that it wasn’t worst”
“Why are you still here?” asked Yossi turning to look at the other girl “I’m not gonna die so you don’t have to pretend anymore”
“I’m not pretending” said Ishikawa really serious “I was worried. If something happen to you…”
There was a silence. Both girls looked at each other without knowing what to say. Then, Rika took the first step and went closer.
“Why have you done it?” she asked placing her hand carefully upon the hurt shoulder and letting it to slip down on Yossi’s arm.
“I’d have done the same for anyone. Don’t think that you’re special”
“But…”
“That I can’t stand you it doesn’t mean that I want to see you being hurt” continued Yossi.
“Well, that’s better than nothing…”
Hitomi was tired and made a new attempt to leave but there was Ishikawa’s hand again to hold her.
“Let me go” demanded Yoshizawa.
But Rika-chan didn’t obeyed and made quite the contrary. She went closer to Yossi and surrounded the taller’s waist with her arms.
“Thank you” she whispered burying her face in Hitomi’s chest.
Yossi thought that maybe, for once, she could forget everything and just hold her. The earthquake was a shock for everyone and she had to be still scared. A friendly hold it wasn’t going to hurt anyone… At least, as long as Rika could keep it friendly and she didn’t try anything else…
“It feels so good to be in your arms like this again…”
In her mind, Yoshizawa agreed with Rika’s words. It feels good, really good, even too much if she despised the girl who was in her arms. That couldn’t be right.
“Don’t mix things, Ishikawa…” she said trying to move away.
Rika took advantage of Hitomi’s injury and made her stay close. Then, she saw a pair of silhouettes that she knew perfectly and took it as a perfect opportunity for her plans. Without warning, she raised her head and captured Yossi’s lips with hers.
The taller wasn’t expecting that move and caught her totally unaware. That’s why she couldn’t react for a few seconds. When Yossi finally realized, she pushed Ishikawa away with her good arm.
“What do you think you’re doing?” she demanded remembering her angry against the girl in front of her.
“I could ask you exactly the same” said a cold voice behind her.
Yoshizawa didn’t need to turn her head to know who the owner of the voice was. She knew it, and she was going to regret the moment of weakness that she had before with Rika.
“The girls said me that you were injured but you shouldn’t be so bad, don’t you?”
“Don’t talk like this Miki” said Yossi “You know things aren’t how it looks like”
Fujimoto didn’t reply. She just took her girlfriend’s hand and looked at her eyes.
“Come on, I’ll take you home”
After the girls left, Matsuura looked at Rika who was smiling with pleasure after what happened.
“If I didn’t know that’s impossible I’d tell that you’ve done all that on purpose”
“You think I’d hurt Yossi just to make my plans work?” she answered offended.
“No, of course not. But I don’t know how you manage to be always in the right place at the right time”
“I’m a lucky girl?”
Rika-chan smiled devilish and turned her back to Aya leaving the younger alone with her thoughts.
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WOW~~~~~
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woo... intense... what'll hapen next?!?!
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OMG! I will cry if Miki doesn't understand that what happened wasn't Yossi's fault :cry: Don't write YoMiki to break up... :cry: :P
But now: more pleaseXD
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Yossui and Miki have to work things out!
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Oh god! You're making me root for Yomiki! The world is ending!
*runs around screaming* I'm not a shipper! I'm not a shipper!
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damn rika soo evilll !!~
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Miki feels good with Aya and Yossi with Rika :D
Erika is the bad of the film, I think she made Rika break with Yossi, telling Rika bad things about Yossi because she wants Rika ù.ú (XD)
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Oh Gahh! O____O; -wears a hardhat to prepare for another smack of the storyline-
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Welcome back after the block
and look!!! you brough wonderful chapters!! excellent!!
The earthquake caused a lot of action. I like :D
Geez, Ishikawa is persistant!!
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Wow Yossie saving Rika like that...very intense *wipes sweat* Had me gripping the edge of my seat.
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O________O Butbutbut! It wasn't Yossie's fault andandand...I dunno >.< Don't be mad Miki!
I need more!
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NEWS FLASH
HELL has FROZEN OVER!!
RNDMN IS NOW A YOMIKI SHIPPER!! YAY!!
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I'm not a shipper! OMG, did you know there's a place called Hell in the Caymans? I haven't been though.
Damn if I'm not gonna have to write a Yomiki fic sometime in the future. Maybe when I lighten my fic load...
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rndmn is a shipper~~ rndmn is a shipper~~ XDXD
*next chapter coming in..mm.. maybe 10 minutes... :P*
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Yay!!!^^ (^_^)v
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well, first, replies to some comments..
OMG! I will cry if Miki doesn't understand that what happened wasn't Yossi's fault Don't write YoMiki to break up...
hey, I haven't done that :P
Miki feels good with Aya and Yossi with Rika
Erika is the bad of the film, I think she made Rika break with Yossi, telling Rika bad things about Yossi because she wants Rika ù.ú
well.. about Erika.. you really think that she's doing all that just because she wants Rika? XDXD
Oh Gahh! O____O; -wears a hardhat to prepare for another smack of the storyline
just read the chapter! :P
And that's for the rest of you guys, here it is, chapter 40!
I have to say that this part was a little difficult (and a little longer too XD) You know I always like to do something special every ten chapters.. ch 10th was the first Yossi&Miki action, ch 20th was THE CHAPTER, in the 30th I revealed Rika's lover... what I could do to surprise you with this part???
READ AND YOU'LL KNOW IT!!
***40***
21:07h
Almost four hours since Miki left.
“You don’t have to explain anything. I know how she is”
“You’re not mad?”
No, she wasn’t mad, it was worst. Fujimoto was deceived. It was something that Yossi could read clearly in her girlfriend’s face. She didn’t blame Miki for feeling that way. Hitomi herself felt the same. She was deceived ‘cause she hadn’t enough willpower to fight against Ishikawa’s attacks.
“You’re leaving?”
“Yeah. I still have things to do and you must rest”
The door closed behind her. There was no kiss, no caring words…
Yossi looked at the watch again. 21:11h
She got up from the bed, took her jacket and left the apartment. It was time to do something.
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Rika place a little box on the table and seated on the couch looking at it. It seemed that an eternity had passed since the last time she opened that box. She leant to the table again and removed the lid slowly.
There were so many memories there. Almost three years of relationship gathered with pics, silly gifts, letters… and a piece of fabric. She took it in her hands and caressed it. It was the last thing she put inside the box as a keepsake of how hurt she was, to remember the humiliation that she felt.
Suddenly, someone knocked at the door. Ishikawa hid the box quickly under the table and went to see who was there. She thought that it could be Shibata. She called before to ask Rika if she want to go out to dinner but Ishikawa denied and maybe she was there to insist.
But she had a big surprise when she opened the door and saw someone totally unexpected.
“Can I come in?”
Ishikawa just nodded and let her come inside the apartment, wondering why she was there, and most important, why she seemed so cordial.
“I was thinking…” she began to say before Rika could ask anything “…why I’ve risked my life to save someone that I despise…”
“Yossi…”
“Maybe because I don’t hate you as much as I thought?” she continued
Rika didn’t know what to think. Yocchan should be angry at her. Miki saw them kissing each other and they probably had fought. Then, why she wasn’t shouting and breaking things around her?
“I know what you’re thinking, Rika-chan” said Yossi going near her and smiling “She wasn’t mad. She knew that it was you who kissed me”
“Then, what are you doing here?”
Hitomi stepped even closer and raised a hand to stroke Ishikawa’s hair before to speak again.
“I’m here ‘cause I’ve realized that I don’t care if she’s mad or not” she said while her hand slip down to Rika’s face “Because the only thing that matters to me right now is that you’re not injured”
The younger’s touch made Ishikawa shiver. How long it was since Yossi had touched her that way? Even her body seemed to have forgotten how it felts…
“Yocchan…” she said leaning to find Hitomi’s lips “…I love you…”
“Now tell me…” whispered Yossi “Can you feel it?”
The kiss never arrived and Rika-chan suddenly felt Yoshizawa’s body moving away from her.
“What…?” asked her confused.
“The pain, Ishikawa…”
Then, the truth slapped her right in the face.
“It hurts right?” asked Yossi with a cold voice “…when you realized that someone was playing with your feelings…”
“Why?” demanded Rika fighting the tears that began to form in her eyes.
“Because I’m tired of your little game. I want my life back”
“Then, you must have thought it better before doing what you did to me that night!”
Rika’s words were desperate and she knew it, but it was the only way she could make Yossi stay with her. And for a moment it seemed to work ‘cause the younger hold Ishikawa by the arms and attracted the girl towards her again.
But this time, the touch wasn’t loving. Yoshizawa’s fingers were digging in her skin with anger almost breaking it. They’re faces where inches away, their lips a breath from touching, and they’re breathing began to be rough.
“That’s the way you want me?”
“Yes” answered Rika with a tone more defiant than scared “If that’s the only way I can have you…”
“You’re sick”
“You’re the one who forced me” said Ishikawa caressing Yossi’s lips with her words “Who’s sicker?”
Hitomi had enough of that conversation and throw Rika-chan on the couch careless.
“You’re always saying that I’ll be always yours because of what happened…, wanna know something?” she said leaning over the older “That night is the main reason why I can’t be with you. Every time you touch me I remember how weak I was… It makes me feel dirty”
That was the last that she said before stand up and went to the door.
Rika couldn’t say a single word. She just stayed there, in silence, while Yossi was leaving the apartment. It was the first time that she felt totally defeated.
And then, there was again…, the loneliness.
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O_o Sugoi!~ great great great^^
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Omg, a confrontation!! and how steamed it was!!
You had me worried their. No kiss for Miki and then suddenly a late night visit to Ishikawa? I thought the worst as most people probably did. I must say - WELL DONE YOSSUI! What I well planned thing to do. The dialouge was powerful
“Now tell me…” whispered Yossi “Can you feel it?”
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“What…?” asked her confused.
“The pain, Ishikawa…”
Beautifully said. I totally imagine Yossui in this role. Im happy I came back to check if anything new had popped up
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I'm glad you like it... it was difficult to write it the right way to make people thing that Yossi really wanted to be with Rika again.
what i wonder is.... you've realized that i told the big secret already? you haven't commented anything about it :P
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omg... I don't know what to say
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Great chapter len.chan!!!!!
O_o So Yossi raped Rika?
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Great chapter len.chan!!!!!
O_o So Yossi raped Rika?
I don't think so.
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no matter how evil rika is.. i still have to say poor rika-chan.... and i'm also very anxious to know what happened between the both of them!
very well written len, i love your fic!
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Yossie in that chapter simply stunned me. YOU ARE GOD/DESS! -bows-
I REALLY look forward to your future chapters!
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Great chapter len.chan!!!!!
O_o So Yossi raped Rika?
O_o Where the hell did you get THAT idea from?
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from here? XD
“You’re the one who forced me” said Ishikawa caressing Yossi’s lips with her words “Who’s sicker?”
that's why I said that Yossi wasn't an angel either... Just _Hitomi_ caught it?
I've disimulated it a little 'cause using the word 'rape' sounded a little too much for me, but yeah, that's it, and at the end of the fic you'll know why she did it :P
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That's why they broke? or They have never been together?
Will you do a flashback about their relationship?
(i think i'm losing ^^U, sorry!!!)
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ok... to recap the situation..
Yossi fell in love with rika, she dumped Maki and started a relationship with charmy. after a long relationship without sex 'cause she wasn't ready, Ishikawa became jealous of every girl that came near Yossi 'cause she's insecure. then she thought that Yossi was sleeping with Maki (with a little help of Erika). Something happened (yes, there'll be a flashback) and Yossi forced Rika (remember it was her FIRST time together). At this point, Rika thinks that Yossi has to be with her because of what happened and Yossi can't be with Rika because she feels bad.
You remember when Miki asks maki about Yossi&Rika relationship? Maki tells her that one night she found Yossi crying in her doorway but she never told her what happened. Ok then, it was THAT night. That's why maki told Miki that Yossi&Rika had never slept together. She didn't know the truth.
Soo, that's it. I hope you'll understand better now :P
And now.. i have to began to write the next part XDXD
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UOOOO ok ok thank you!!!! (K)(K)
I will wait for the next part :P
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So Yossui did rape Rika? °__° I must have missed that part....
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yay!^^ i can wait:D :D
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WOW! Don't know what to say...
You are such a good writer! Wanna be as good as youXD Altought I have never written anything:D
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So Yossui did rape Rika? °__° I must have missed that part....
You haven't missed anything. I haven't wrote it (and i'm not going to do it... at least not in a perv mode...) i've just made a mention of it inside Rika and Yossi last conversation XDXD
You are such a good writer! Wanna be as good as you Altought I have never written anything
and what are you waiting to start? :P
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WOA O_O I was scared for a moment when Yossie was in Rika's house and stuff, I was biting my nails and was on the edge of my seat, then BAM! Yossie got back at Rika. WOA I can't stop saying woa. Heh, I love it. AMAZING! You have a great way with words, I love it. And just for the record...WOA.
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***41***
“You don’ have to be here if you don’t want it”
It seemed that Aya was reading her mind all night. It wasn’t exactly that she didn’t want to be with her best friend but, somehow, she felt bad leaving Yossi alone the way she did it. Her girlfriend must be thinking that she was angry.
“You argued with Yossi?”
“No…” answered Miki coming back from her inner thoughts.
“Then, why aren’t you taking care of your injured knight?”
This time, Aya’s question sounded more like if she was making fun of what happened.
“Don’t start again with that” said Miki.
“What? I’ve just made a question”
“The mocking tone in your voice is annoying, you know?
Aya crossed her arms and looked at her friend trying to seem serious.
“Well, is ironic how your girlfriend was hurt saving the woman who’s trying to break your relationship. Oh! And don’t forget the kiss… It was so romantic…”
“Aya, stop it”
“Don’t tell me that you didn’t feel your guts burning when you saw it…”
“Shut up!”
The shout made Matsuura take a step back. For a moment, she thought that Miki was going to hit her.
“I… I’m… sorry” Fujimoto apologized when she saw her friend scared “It just… of course it made my blood boils but… How can I reproach anything to Yocchan when I’m in the same situation with you?”
“Hey! Don’t dare to compare me with I’m-Charmy-the-Bitch ok?” Ayaya took an offended pose and give her back to her friend “I’m much better”
Miki couldn’t help but laugh. Seeing Aya with her hands in her waist, eyes closed and jaw raised, acting as if what she said was the most offensive thing it was definitely a good way to loosen the atmosphere between them.
“What’s so funny?” asked Ayaya looking at her out the corner of her eyes but without turning completely.
“Sorry…” said Miki controlling her laugh “I just was thinking… Thanks God you’re not like her. The last we need is another maniac-obsessive around”
Matsuura seated on the couch and took Miki’s hand to make her sit next to her. Then, Fujimoto placed her head on Aya’s shoulder and closed her eyes.
“I would never hurt you, Mikitan”
“I know”
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“Sorry if I’ve woke you up”
“No, it’s ok. I’ve just came back and I was going to take a bath”
Maki let her friend come inside the apartment and closed the door behind. Yossi seemed worried and that she went to visit her at late night it could only mean one thing and it’s name was Ishikawa.
“You shouldn’t be at home resting? I’ve heard that you got injured with the earthquake”
“I’m better now”
“You want to stay here tonight?”
Yossi nodded and Maki didn’t need anything more. She wasn’t going to ask what happened or why she wasn’t with Miki. She was just going to do what she always did. Comfort the one she loved without worrying about anything else.
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Yossi nodded and Maki didn’t need anything more. She wasn’t going to ask what happened or why she wasn’t with Miki. She was just going to do what she always did. Comfort the one she loved without worrying about anything else.
Aw. Poor Maki. And Yossi. And Miki. Damn! Poor all of them....
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You are much better at angst than I am. Everything I write always seems to have a happy ending, whereas here, I'm on the edge of my seat. Keep going!
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I always say the same things...:cry: But again, I loooove this:heart:
and what are you waiting to start?
I have thinked to write something someday. Don't know when, but let's seeXD
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we can never guess what'll happen next when it comes to your fic!!
its so unpredictable... which is exactly why its sooo awesome
poor maki!! yossie only goes to her when she's feeling down... aww mann
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Like everyone said, poor everyone ;____;... Write more or Yuuyami KEEL -has whip...and a hardhat XD-
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Like everyone said, poor everyone ;____;... Write more or Yuuyami KEEL -has whip...and a hardhat XD-
-nods- Like my cousin said, write more or Yuuyami (and now Saikami) KEEL -pulls out fluffy pillow- Wait...Wrong thing. -.- -pulls out harisen- There we go. :twisted:
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hey, don't put pressure on me... just wait a bit more
i don't wanna rush things XD
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I just read through #1-#8 and I totally love your fic, len.chan.
The characters are so vividly outlined.
Gotta keep on reading~!
EDIT : OMG I finished #41 and I'm dying for the next chapters!!!
I'm usually on AyaMiki side but now I guess I have to reconsider.
Keep up the great work!
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hey, don't put pressure on me... just wait a bit more
i don't wanna rush things XD
XD Ok, ok. No pressure, it was just a way to...erm...encourage you. :D
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Yes, to encourage you ^^- o-o -gives you a hardhat too- In case there's others who dare punt you in their impatience XD
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ok ok, then hold your impatience a bit more XD
i have the chapter almost ready but now I have to go to work and i can't post it :P
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gambare~ len.chan!
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let's see some comments..
You are much better at angst than I am. Everything I write always seems to have a happy ending, whereas here, I'm on the edge of my seat. Keep going!
maybe i'm good at angst... but i'm completly nule with the funny stuff... It's good that things have a happy ending ^^
poor maki!! yossie only goes to her when she's feeling down... aww mann
yeah.. i know.. but it's the way that it has to be :P
I just read through #1-#8 and I totally love your fic, len.chan.
The characters are so vividly outlined.
Gotta keep on reading~!
EDIT : OMG I finished #41 and I'm dying for the next chapters!!!
I'm usually on AyaMiki side but now I guess I have to reconsider.
Keep up the great work!
thank you! I was reading the fic from the start the other day and i thought 'How i've ended writing this?' 'cause it's completly diferent from what i was thinking when i started XDXD
and for that impatient people *puts hardhat from Yuuyami* here's 42! :P
***42***
Hitomi looked at the girl lying next to her who was sleeping peacefully. It looked so different from the woman that she was on the stage. When she fell asleep it was like if she could go back to the Maki that Yossi met years ago, when both were young and innocent.
She couldn’t remember how many times they ended like this, talking until late night in the bed, sharing their worries, their deepest thoughts or just laughing at some funny that happened during the day. Sometimes, they stayed awake until morning; sometimes they were too tired and fell asleep after a few minutes. But, not matter if it was for a second or for hours, Yossi always felt relieved if she could share those moments with Maki.
But now, she wasn’t even sleepy. After what happened with Rika hours ago, the memories was so vivid that, if she tried to close here eyes, she could feel the pain as she felt it the first time she placed her hands on Ishikawa’s body that night.
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“She doesn’t need you anymore…”
That wasn’t exactly what Yossi was expecting when she called her girlfriend. It wasn’t even Rika-chan who picked up the phone.
After her last fight with Ishikawa, Yossi went to talk with Gocchin looking for some friend’s advice after what happened. The first thing she did after leaving Maki’s apartment was to call Rika ‘cause she wanted to apologize for the way she left and try to talk with her in a civilized way before things went worst.
What she wasn’t expecting it was to hear Erika’s voice at the other side of the line.
And there she was, waiting in Rika’s doorway, with a lot of questions in her mind.
“You’re late, you know? She doesn’t want to see you”
Erika again. She was who opened the door, and the fact that she was half naked it wasn’t something that helped Yossi to relax.
“Let me in” demanded Yossi”
“Give up already, Yoshizawa. She not the innocent Rika-chan anymore”
She’s not… innocent anymore?
What was trying Erika to say? And then, putting two and two together, she realized the truth. She’d lost Rika completely.
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“What’s going on with you today?” asked Makoto “I know Koharu can be annoying but she’s doing her best to like you”
“I’m tired of babysitting…”
The cold answer left Mako-chan even more worried. From three days ago, Yossi had began to act like a dictator, shouting around and scolding the girls for every little mistake they did, specially Koharu, who seemed to have all her attention. She was sure there was something really big bugging her leader.
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“What are you doing here?”
Rika-chan was scared, really scared. She’d never had seen that look on her girlfriend’s face. It was anger, sadness, desperation… But why was Hitomi that way? She was the one hurt. Yossi didn’t have the right to be upset.
“I haven’t seen you in almost one week. I’ve missed you” Yoshizawa’s voice was cold.
The situation turned more awkward when Rika felt Yossi’s arms around her waist, holding her in a suffocating grip.
“You’re drunk?” asked Ishikawa when Yossi’s breathe caressed her lips.
The anticipation of what’s going to happen travelled around Rika’s body in the form of goosebumps. But she was too afraid to do anything.
“Yossi…, don’t…”
She tried to say something when she felt one of her girlfriend’s hands leaving her waist and going under the shorts of the pyjama, but Hitomi sealed her lips with a brutal kiss. There was no love in it, just rage.
“Stop it… please…”
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A tear began to roll down Yossi’s face. There wasn’t a single day that she didn’t regret what happened…
“I’m… I’m sorry, Rika-chan. I didn’t want to…”
Ishikawa was too shocked to say anything. She just could look at Yossi and cry asking her why.
“I’m sorry…” repeated Hitomi who began to cry too.
“Get out…” said Rika finally with and almost inaudible voice “Please…”
The sunrise illuminated the room and Hitomi turned to look at her friend who was still sleeping.
“Thank you” she whispered removing carefully a lock of hair from Maki’s face “I don’t know what I’d had done without you…”
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O_O Woa, yet another great chapter! I don't even know what to think. I mean...Feel bad for Yossie, who is being played with? Or Rika, after what Yossie did. Or even Maki, who is just trying to be a good friend but has nobody...Ouch, it's hurting my brain.
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First post on this fanfic. All I can say is that it's unbelievable. Looks like now we're going back to the past. This is great storytelling!
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love the chapter!^^
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Awww! This is great! Now my mind's being screwed with XD Who is the true villain... Rika, or Erika? My abstract mind tells me that it was Erika pulling the strings way at the start :] !
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everything will be revealed at the right time :P
*puts hardhat again*
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I don't understand why Rika wants to be with Yossi again after that...
and why Yossi "hates" Rika; it was Yossi's fault not Rika's, isn't it?...
[size=-12]perdona si no m entero :s[/size]
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And the truth comes out. :shocked:
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and why Yossi "hates" Rika; it was Yossi's fault not Rika's, isn't it?...
I think Yossi hates herself, not Rika... And being with Rika makes her remember that all what happened...
But it's just my opinion...
This was good start to my day!:heart: Thanks:D
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I think, erika made yossie think that rika cheated on her, so yossie got angry got drunk then raped rika. then went over to maki's for comfort, then erika showed rika that yossie went to maki's to make her think yossie is cheating on her....?
am I right?
I really admire the way you write your story len... I don't think I can every write as brilliantly as you do...
great job!!
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you almost have it XD
the real order is: Rika and Yossi have a fight, yossi goes to Maki, Erika shows that to Rika and she thinks that yossi's cheating on her, then Yossi goes to Rika but Erika is there and she thinks you know what.., and blah blah blah... that's what happened.
so... the question is... it was Erika just lying or did really Rika slept with her to release her frustration?
:PXDXD
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Instead of spoiling your beloved readers, why not bless them with a chapter with that? :]
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yeah yeah... i've been busy with something else until now and i've couldn't write anything, sorry :P
Maybe tomorrow there'll be another chapter
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I love this story!!
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42 was a little confusing in the way it was ordered, but your explanation took care of some things.
:o The angst is amazing. Rage!Yossui and Sneaky Bitch!Erika, then that cute ending scene. Ah.
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This time it wasn't my fault, I swear.
I have a lil' problem with the PC some days ago and I've couldn't write anything until today. Sorry for the wait.
***43***
Fujimoto was running through the corridors towards the set where they were recording the next Hello! Morning. She was late and almost breathless. And it was all fault of the taxi driver. Days like that made Miki wish to have her own drive license.
“Sorry” she excused herself when she came inside the set “I’ve had a problem coming… ¿Where’s everybody?”
She looked around. Just some of the girls were there with two or three staff guys.
“We have the day free” answered Eri “It seems that part of the set and some cameras were damaged with yesterday earthquake”
“And nobody could inform us? It’s a waste of time to come here for nothing” said Fujimoto a little pissed of.
“Yeah. Almost all the girls went home and Sayu and I were leaving already”
The younger was going to leave but Miki still had another question.
“Eh…, Eri, you’ve seen Yossi?”
Kamei denied with her head.
“I thought she was going to stay at home today because of her injury”
“Yeah, I think so…”
“Why don’t you call her?” sugested Eri “And tell her to recover soon. I can’t stand seeing Sayu crying in the corners all day because her prince is hurt”
“I’ll do it” replied Miki smiling.
After Kamei left, she took her phone. But, instead of calling Yossi, she just checked the mailbox for some message. She didn’t tell Eri but, actually, Miki was trying to talk with her girlfriend since she woke up. After all her attempts, nobody answered at her home and she seemed to have her cell-phone turned off. There was no signal of Yocchan.
Miki began to walk still with the cell-phone in her hand. She could go to her girlfriend’s apartment. Maybe Yossi was still sleeping and she didn’t hear the phone at all.
“Fujimoto!”
A voice behind her made Miki shiver.
“Could you please tell me what have you done to your girlfriend? She looks like a zombie”
“I haven’t done any… Wait, you’ve seen Yossi? She’s here?”
Nakazawa seemed surprised by Miki’s question.
“Yeah… She’s here since early morning. She shut herself up on the music room and hasn’t talked with anyone. I thought that you…”
She couldn’t finish the sentence ‘cause Miki had already disappeared.
“That kid… She even hadn’t said thank you….”
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“You left early this morning”
Maki placed a hand on her friend’s shoulder who was too concentrated on what she was doing to notice the other girl’s presence.
“Eh?”
“You didn’t sleep last night, don’t you?
“I have such an awful face today?” asked Yossi leaving the piece of paper that she had upon the piano.
“Oh yeah” said Gocchin. Then, she took the paper and a smile appeared in her face “Well, whatever that’s bothering you it seems to wake up your creative side. That’s…”
“That’s nothing” cut Yoshizawa taking the paper from the hands of her friend and crumpling it “Just rubbish”
Maki was going to say something to protest but then Fujimoto rushed into the room and there was a big silence.
“Mm… maybe I should leave you alone” said Maki going to the door and closing it behind her.
By the look on her girlfriend’s face Yossi could see that she was worried, or maybe she was still feeling awkward because of what happened the day before.
“I’m sorry” said Fujimoto going next to Hitomi “I’d shouldn’t left you alone yesterday…”
“Don’t worry” Yossi took the other girl’s hands on hers “I understand”
“You know I trust you, right?”
“I know”
“Then, let’s forget about yesterday”
Miki sit next to Yossi in the piano’s bench and her girlfriend looked at her confused.
“What are you doing?” asked Hitomi when she saw Miki pressing some keys without any order.
“I want to play the piano with you. So…” A big smile appeared on Miki’s face “…teach me, pleeease~”
Gottsan took the last look through the glass of the door and then at her right hand, where she had something that she’d taken from the room before Yossi noticed about it. Then, she smiled, put it away in her pocket and left with an idea in her mind.
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first poster here! looks like we're oing to get a reprise of the piano scene from long ago. Also, what was that letter Gocchin had?
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Yet another amazing chapter. :D And the wait is fine, we all have PC issues one day or another. :] Anyway, is that paper that Maki took what Yossie crumpled? Most likely a song, I'm guessing. :D
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Awww~! Piano is love :] ~! I bet it's a composition Yossie tried to write!
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Yay Yomiki! <_< >_> <_< Dammit...
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I have been waiting for this so long. But it doesn't matter, 'cos it's worth to wait :heart:
Hope your PC is ok now...XD
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yeahhhh!~^^ very very good ^_^
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Yay Yomiki! <_< >_> <_< Dammit...
I love when you contradict yourself that way XDXD
***44***
Ishikawa was looking the crowd walking outside through the glass of the cafeteria. The cup of coffee in her hands was almost cold, but she wasn’t paying attention to it, not even to her best friend, who was seated in front of her trying to hold a conversation with her without luck.
“Where are you, Rika-chan?”
“What do you mean?” asked Ishikawa turning her head to look at Shibata “I’m right here”
“No, you’re not. Where’s my friend?” asked the girl worried “What happened to the cheerful Rika-chan that I knew?”
“I can’t be happy all the time”
Ayumi lent back in the chair and crossed her arms.
“You used to be, ‘till Erika step into your life”
“You don’t know anything about that” replied Rika with the coldest voice ever.
“Then maybe it’s time for you to tell me?”
“It’s none of your business”
“You’re my best friend, of course it is!”
Shibata raised too much her voice and all the people in the cafeteria looked at her. She was ashamed, but seeing that Ishikawa was going to leave, she stood up from the chair and took her friend’s hand.
“Rika-chan, please” she said making her friend to sit again “I’m not the only one worried”
Ishikawa’s face turned from angry to surprise. There were more people who knew about Erika?
“Some girls came to me ‘cause they saw you with her and wanna know what’s happening. They think that she’s using you”
“That’s silly. Why would want Erika to use me?”
“I don’t know. The only thing I’m sure about is that, since the day she joined, you’ve changed. And I’m not talking just about your attitude towards me… What happened with Yoshizawa? One day you tell me you’re madly in love with her and the next…”
“Stop it”
Ishikawa didn’t let her friend to finish the sentence. She turned again her head towards the glass and looked at the people outside. She needed to think the words carefully before saying anything.
“I’m not going to tell you what happened with Yossi ‘cause that’s something between us and nobody else. And about Erika…, maybe I’m the one who’s using her”
“What do you mean?”
“She was just in the right place at the right time”
The way that her friend was talking began to desperate Shibata. Rika-chan wasn’t answering her questions and was making things even more confused. But she needed to know more. It wasn’t only to reassure the other girls.
“So… she helped you with something about Yossi?” tried to ask again.
Rika-chan didn’t answer and looked at her watch.
“It’s late. I have to go”
Ayumi couldn’t do anything to hold her friend. She just stayed in her chair looking at Ishikawa leaving the cafeteria.
Maybe she didn’t get any answer to her worries, but there was something that she was sure about. Something really big happened with Yoshizawa and Erika had something to do in it. She just needed to know what.
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muhahaha love it!^^
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Yay~! About time Ayumi's getting herself involved! Wonder how she'll find out :]
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Shiba-chan is cool! No one ever writes about her.
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well, i felt like i needed to have Shiba-chan in the history. She's Rika's best friend and, as it seems, a cool and kind girl. She can give to the fic some good vibrations... Not everything has to be lies and betrayals XDXD
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well, i felt like i needed to have Shiba-chan in the history. She's Rika's best friend and, as it seems, a cool and kind girl. She can give to the fic some good vibrations... Not everything has to be lies and betrayals XDXD
That's a good plot device but not good to base your story on. Shibata rulez!
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hooray~! new chapters XD
Go! go! Shiba-chan! Hope she can help sort things out for everyone.
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nice story keep it up
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Emotional fic you've got here. I finally got a chance to sit down and read through the entire fic and I've gotta say I'm loving it! I also like how you portrayed Maki as someone who's always there for Yossie and supporting her. She needs someone to love her back! Hehe. Also love how you show that people can have their dark sides... Anyway, good work, keep it up and looking forward to reading more!
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uaah.. finally... I didn't want to go to bed until this wasn't finnished XD
first, as always, thanks for the comments. And wellcome goosefish.. I know it takes some time to read all the chapters ^^
About Maki... I think that people will be happy with this chapter XDXD
***45***
The music coming from the stereo stopped suddenly and Maki could see clearly who was there through the mirror in front of her. Of course it wasn’t one of the dancers, they left almost an hour ago, but she wasn’t expecting a visit from that person either.
She leant to take her towel and the bottle of water from the floor and walked towards the person standing in the wall while she wiped out the sweat of her face and neck.
“So… what’s a pretty girl like you doing here so late?” asked Gocchin before drink some water.
“I’ve discovered something about Rika and I wanna know if you knew about it”
“If I would knew something I’d told you, that’s what we agreed”
“Yeah… but, the last time we talked was…” the voice of the girl sound a bit nervous “…you know… weird?”
Maki couldn’t help but laugh while she was going to the corner to take her sports bag. Then, she returned where the other girl was and looked at the older who seemed to be really uncomfortable.
“Shiba-chan…, it was just one night” said Maki leaning to the other girl’s face dangerously “You thought that I was going to feel awkward to talk to you because of that?”
“Well… I’m feeling that way right now”
The younger caught the hint in Ayumi’s words and realized how close she was actually. She didn’t do it on purpose. It was just that her body acted without thinking, like a defence mechanism against the loneliness. The maxim: if you are cold, find somebody to warm you up.
“Ok… ehm… If you’re going to feel better, we can go to some other place to talk, you know, with more people”
“What do you suggest?” asked Shibata a bit more comfortable
“You had dinner already? Because I’m starving…”
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There was nothing interesting on TV. Miki was on the couch pressing buttons randomly, trying to find something to watch while her girlfriend was in the kitchen making some dinner. Finally, she found a documental channel and left the control on the table.
“What are you watching?” asked Yossi passing a plate with sandwiches to Miki.
“Lions” answered her, taking a sandwich and giving a bite.
“Oh”
When Hitomi sat on the couch next to her, Miki left the sandwich on the plate again and rested her head on her girlfriend’s shoulder, while one of her hands was playing on the edge of Yossi’s shirt.
“You know… TV’s boring and I’m not really hungry…”
Another hand skipped under the fabric and caressed the skin. But before she could go further, Yossi took away the hands of her girlfriend from there.
“Miki.., not tonight”
“What’s wrong?” asked Fujimoto worried “It still hurts?”
“Yeah… a little…” answered the younger trying to avoid Miki’s eyes.
Fujimoto knew that something wasn’t right. Yocchan spent the whole day avoiding touching her, sometimes even to look at her. But maybe it was just her imagination.., maybe she didn’t sleep well the last night and was tired.., maybe… maybe she was trying to find something to forget how guilty she was feeling for spent the last night with Aya and not with her girlfriend…
“Yocchan… sorry again for leaving you alone yesterday”
“Forget it. It’s in the past already and the past is something you don’t have to worry about”
“Ok”
Miki surrounded Yossi’s waist with her arms and buried her face on her girlfriend’s chest.
You’ve already forgotten your past, Yocchan?
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“Can you tell me why the hell our conversations have to end always in your bed?!”
“Mmh… ‘cause I’m irresistible?”
Gocchin’s answer seemed to piss of Shibata even more, who shot her a murderous look through the sheets where she was hiding her naked body.
“Ok… sorry” apologized Maki sitting in the bed near the other girl “But it wasn’t my fault that the restaurant was closed. It was late already and you didn’t refuse my treat to dinner at home”
“I know…”
“Then don’t look at me as if I was the devil or something…”
Ayumi didn’t know what to think. Even knowing how Maki was she let her to take the control over her body, exactly as the first time. She hated to loose control on herself that way but there was something in the eyes of the younger that she couldn’t resist.
“Shiba-chan? You’re ok?”
Looking at the hand of the other girl shaking in front of her Shibata realized that she was staring at Maki lost in her thoughts.
“Yeah… Ehm… What we should do about Rika-chan?” she said trying to forget that she was still naked in the bed.
“Well… I know that she and Yocchan are hiding something big, but I still don’t know what” Maki scratched her head and drop herself again in the bed “And now with what you’ve told me about Erika… things are even more complicated”
“I have a doubt…”
“Yeah?”
“How do you know so much about what’s happening between Rika and Yoshizawa?”
“I have my sources…”
“And your not going to tell me?” asked Shiba-chan leaning closer to Maki, forgetting to take the sheets with her.
Maki smiled with mischief at the view and then answered with a sexy and playful tone.
“Let me think about it…”
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wow!. Thanks for the update!. I'm going to read it right now!. Good night!
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Yay! Random Ayumi x Maki! This is getting interesting <3 Maki playing the role of someone clueless to Ayu, Jee, I wonder where this is going :]!
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Good god! Maki's a pimp!
Go Maki!!
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“Can you tell me why the hell our conversations have to end always in your bed?!”
“Mmh… ‘cause I’m irresistible?”
Wow. That was the best damn quote out of the whole chapter. It was amazing!! Good job! I've been waiting for this update.
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WHUU! I have been waiting:D Thanks!
Hah, Maki. What are you doing?XD
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GJ!!!
Gocchin x Shiba-chan is ...LOVE!
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Let's see...Maki and Shiba...mmmmm...
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GoShiba? ShiMaki? Shicchin?
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Maki and Shiba completely threw me off! But still, good for Maki! :P
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I'm not going to left this fic to go to the second page so, here's 46th XD
About the Maki&Shiba-chan thing... I don't know why but I feel really well writing about them together... it's weird 'cause I'd never thought about it before :roll:
***46***
To see Ishikawa’s face in front of her so early in the morning it was like a signal to Miki that this was going to be one of these days that better you didn’t wake up from the bed. Of course, there was only one thing that Rika-chan would want to talk about with her.
“How’s Yocchan?”
“She’s… fine” answered Miki who instantly remembered how that girl was kissing her girlfriend just two days ago.
“Aah… I’m glad to hear that ‘cause she was looking pretty bad when I saw her”
“When did you see her exactly?”
Fujimoto knew that it was that what Rika-chan wanted, for her to play along with the game.
“Yossi came to my home the night after the earthquake ‘cause she wanted to check if I was ok” seeing the reaction on Miki’s face Ishikawa couldn’t help but smile deviously “Oh, she didn’t tell you?”
The younger didn’t answered and just look at the ground, something that Rika-chan took as an opportunity to dig more into the wound.
“Well, it was a big surprise to see her at my door. I thought that she was with you. After all, Yossi’s your girlfriend and you should be taking care of her, right?”
Miki had enough of that conversation and left Ishikawa behind without saying a single word. Fujimoto knew that she shouldn’t trust whatever Rika could say but she couldn’t help but think about it. How she should feel? Guilty because she left alone Yocchan that night or angry ‘cause her girlfriend went to see the enemy without telling anything?
It was time to have a serious talk with Hitomi about some things.
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“You’re sure I have to do that?”
“Yes”
“But… It must have another way…” said Gocchin almost begging.
Shibata look at the younger with a funny smile in her face. It wasn’t usual to see Maki complaining about something like a little kid.
“Come on, don’t tell me now that the great Maki Goto is scared of that girl…”
“I’m not scared! It just…”
“What?”
“She’s not my type”
Ayumi couldn’t belive that Maki was talking seriously.
“You’re not doing that for pleasure, remember?”
“I know, but it would help” Gocchin looked at her and crossed her arms “If it’s so easy why don’t you do it?”
She didn’t expect that question and for a few seconds her mind was blank.
“Because I… ‘cause… I’m… I’m not into that, ok?!” she said finally blushing a bit “Besides, aren’t you the irresistible one here?”
Maki seemed to react at Shibata’s words and began to recover her confidence.
“Ok, I’ll do it, but with one condition”
“What do you want?” asked Shibata fearing the answer.
“You”
“What? Why?!” said the older blushing like never before.
Maki smile with mischief and leant to meet the other girl’s eyes, staying just a breath away from her.
“Because even if you’re not into that, you’re pretty good at it”
Ayumi didn’t know what to think anymore but there was something she was sure about. Gocchin always got what she wanted.
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This is geting more interesting with every new chapter!!! Thanks Len.chan!
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YoMiki fight in the future? o-o -wears hardhat-
Though, Maki x Ayu is cuuuuute <3~!
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Bitch!Rika to the non-rescue!
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YAY! New chapter!
Ou god. I really think that there will be some kind of fight between Yossi and Miki..
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Shibata and Gocchin have a plan :o Man, the story's getting real good now with all the stuff going on, can't wait till the next chapter as always :D
We do need a pairing name for Shibata/Gocchin XD
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OMFG!! How can I keep missing this story!! It never shows up as new! Goddamn it. I almost forgot how much I lvoe reading this.
A bitchy Rika is so well done. Ah, she makes my blood boil. I love the scenes with Miki and Rika in them. The tensions always thick :D
Ahhhh!! Yossui and Miki confrontation????? *runs and hides* this is gonna be ugly.
Irresistable Gottsuan? Yeah, I can believe that. Ah, she is a cutey :D Recently she has stolen my heart.
A pairing with Shibata? Hmm...ok. Thats new ^^ the first name that came to my ehad was also Shicchin..well done, you have given birth to a new pairing
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Shicchin! Shicchin! Rhymes with kitchen!
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Yay, read your story in one loooooong late night session and the last three chapters during lunchbreak, I just couldn't stop reading, it's a amazing piece of creativity.
I dunno really what to say that hasn't been said before so I just say: I love your fic and wait patiently for the next chapter.
Oh, and I wonder what Erikas role and motivation is. Is she only after Rika, or has she a bigger more evil plan that she's playing out in the background... ;)
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hahaha I love Shicchin as a name to Maki & Shiba-chan pairing XDXD
***47***
“Yocchan, wait!”
Hitomi turned to see Ayaka running towards her breathless so, she stopped and waited for her friend to arrive next to her.
“Hey” greeted Yossi with her usual smile.
“H-hey”
“Why the rush?”
“I wanted to catch you before you disappear again” said Ayaka recovering finally her breath “What’s up with you?
The younger looked at her friend as if she didn’t know what was talking about.
“Mai and I haven’t seen you for weeks. Where have you been?”
“Here…”
“Anyway… You think it’s normal that your best friends have to know thanks to other people that you’re dating someone?”
Ayaka was going to continue with her questions when Yossi saw her girlfriend appear at the end of the corridor. At the moment she saw the look on Miki’s face she knew that something wasn’t right.
“Can we talk in another moment? I… have to go” asked Yocchan leaving her friend behind and going to meet Miki.
The older couldn’t do anything more than nod and let her friend go.
“You’re busy?” asked Fujimoto to her girlfriend.
Yossi turned her head a moment just to look how Ayaka was leaving resigned and then looked again and Miki.
“For you, I’m always free” she said smiling.
“Perfect, ‘cause we have to talk”
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“They’ve been together all day” said Ayumi feeling defeated “There’s no way for you to go closer Erika without Rika-chan suspecting about it…”
“Then, distract her”
“I have to remember to you that I asked for your help ‘because she doesn’t hear me anymore?”
Maki sighed resigned and took her cell-phone from her bag.
“All right, then…”
“What are you doing?” asked Shibata.
“Plan B”
“And plan B is…?”
“Stop asking and watch what those two are doing”
Gocchin turned her back to Ayumi and moved away some meters to have some privacy for her call while Shiba-chan kept asking herself what that plan B was about and with who was Maki was talking.
“Hi? It’s Maki”
Hey. Something happened?
“Not yet” answer Gocchin “But I need you to do something”
Ok, tell me.
After a few minutes, Maki hanged up the phone and returned with Shibata.
“And now what?” asked the older.
“Just wait and see”
Then, they could hear a ring coming from where the two Biyuden members were and saw Ishikawa taking her cell-phone. After a quick talk, she said something to Erika and left her finally alone.
“How…?” asked a surprised Shiba-chan.
“I told you, don’t ask” answered Maki who began to walk towards Erika “Now it’s my turn”
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NEW CHAPTER!!! :w00t:
Ooooooooooo...looks like Rika's not the only one who can scheme. :twisted:
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Oh gahh, now look at what you made me do XD
Now in love with Shicchin pairing ~!
So now you better write about them too~!
Wonder what Maki schemed :]~!
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Erika! XP Shicchin!
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LOVE Shicchin!!! (So it's settled for Maki x Shibachan Pairing, Shicchin?)
Wonder what Maki is up to...hope she'll sort things out with Erika for everyone's sake.
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YAY!
Go Maki, go XD
Who is the mysterious person...:D
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For bluekinko Im printing all the stories off and making special folders for them for her birthday/graduation present. I was wondering if you had a full front cover I could use?
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^ I don't have any cover.. but I can do something if you want. When do you need it?
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Uh Later december mid January :D ITs a while away so you have plenty of time I suppose
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sorry for the delay :pen_sorry:
with the end nearer with every chapter is getting more and more difficult to continue...
***48***
Hitomi wasn’t sure about what Miki wanted to talk but she couldn’t stop repeating in her mind that something was wrong. Her girlfriend had stayed in silence while they were looking for a quiet place to talk alone, without any interruption. Finally, they ended at the same place as always, the 4th floor.
When they reached the room, Yossi closed the door and went to hug Miki from behind; trying to release a bit of the awkwardness that she was feeling.
“I have something to ask you and I want the truth” said Miki with a firm tone in her voice.
“Ok”
The older turned to be face to face with her girlfriend, but kept herself inside Yossi’s embrace.
“You went to see Rika-chan the other night?”
Hitomi’s answer was too direct and too sincere. A simple ‘yes’ hit Miki like a hard kick in her guts. But she wouldn’t begin to worry until hear the answer to the next question.
“Why?
This time, the younger moved away from her and took a deep breath before answering.
“I had to finish all this, to make her understand once and for all that it’s over…”
“Well…, I think it didn’t work”
An awkward silence filled the room and Miki cursed herself for starting that conversation. What she should do now? Yossi admitted that she went to see Ishikawa without remorse and the older didn’t know if she should feel relieved or more worried. There was still another question in her mind but she was about the answer.
“Hitomi…”
Hitomi?
Yossi couldn’t remember if Miki had called her by her name before. It sounded so strange…, so serious…
“… I know that you’re hiding something…” continued Fujimoto “…Something big about Rika-chan…”
“There’s nothing about her…” tried to say Yocchan.
Before she could finish the sentence, a slap on her left cheek surprised her.
“I hate people lying to me, Yocchan” said Fujimoto with a cold voice and before Yossi could complain, she continued “I heard you two some days ago talking about a secret…”
The younger caressed her cheek still feeling the contact with Miki’s hand. She felt so stupid… That’s why her girlfriend was acting so weird those days, sometimes distant and thoughtful. First she found about the secret and then the kiss after the earthquake… Miki must felt betrayed and think that she still have something going on with Ishikawa. After what happened with Aya, that’s the last thing she needed.
Now, still feeling the pain in her face, Hitomi understood how much she could hurt the other girl if she kept that secret from her.
Then, she lowered her head a little to find Miki’s eyes and looked at her trying to find some courage.
“I’ll tell you…” she began to say with a voice as much firm as she could “…but then, it will be in your hands to decide if you still wanna be with me”
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* thunders roar
the big secret will be revealed ! !
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What is Miki going to do when she knows what Yossi did...
:ONpleeease: Pleaseeeeee. Give us another chapter soon.
>_< this one is great!. Gracias :D
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-wears hardhat to prepare-
Go on Yossie! At least she's waiting for an explanation!
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The shortness kills! XP
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Need next chapter!!!!!!! Wanna know what will Miki do! But then again.... Hoping it's not anything bad...
Oh yes, this will end one day... :ONgyaaah:
Love this:panda_love:
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yeah.. I know it's short... but that's the way I like it :P XD
Maybe next will be longer.. you know, chapter 50th and all that.. maybe something special?.... I'll have to think about it...
***49***
Come on… It can’t be so difficult…
As she approached her prey, Maki was looking for the best way to begin a conversation without causing the other girl suspect about her intentions. It couldn’t be so difficult. To flirt with the girls it was something that she did continuously, as entertainment or as a way to forget, that didn’t matter, but at least, she did it because she wanted and with whom she wanted. Now it was different. The girl in front of her wasn’t one of her preferences, not even someone she would like to talk with. It was like if the aura around that girl had something able to annoy her just being around.
But she had to do it…
“Miyo-chan?”
“Y-yeah?”
The older turned to see who called her and she seemed surprised to find Gocchin there.
Good start…
“Goto-san?”
“Are you alone?”
Great question Maki… Of course she’s alone… That’s why you’re here…
“I was with Ishikawa-san a minute ago but she left after someone called her” answerd Erika.
“So…, I have you all for me?”
The expression on the older’s face changed from surprise to a playful look that made Gocchin wonder if she was suspecting something already.
“That depends on what you want…”
The girl knows how to play, huh?
Maki hide the mischievous smile that appeared in her lips. Maybe it was going to be funnier than she expected…
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Miki stayed completely in silence. It had passed more than five minutes since Yossi ended the whole story and since then, none of them had said anything. The younger had narrated the events with so much calm and strength that it seemed almost surrealist.
Yossi’s last words resounded once and again in her head.
Now it’s your turn. You’ll be able to love someone like me?
Could she?
And what about Rika-chan? Miki still wasn’t sure if she was the real victim of what happened. Yes, Yossi raped her…, but it was Ishikawa who played with the younger’s feelings first.
No, there’s no excuse for something like that…
There was so much mess on Fujimoto’s mind that she didn’t realize that her girlfriend was nearer.
“Miki…” said Yocchan raising her hand to caress her.
As a reflex, the older jumped back avoiding the contact. Immediately after, she saw the look on Yossi’s eyes and realized what she had done. But it was too late…
“I… I’m sorry…”
“It’s ok…” Yoshizawa’s voice seemed that it was going to crack at any moment “I understand it”
Before she could say anything more, Yossi had already left and walked away through the corridor. Miki wanted to scream, to run after the other girl and ask her to not leave… But she couldn’t. She only had the strength enough to close the door again and then fell on her knees, crying.
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And the confrontation ends with a slight misunderstanding~! >< -but was okay, had a hardhat on-
Now Miki, will you seek Yossie again? Or shall the finale end with your final farewell? D:~!
//end narration.
Nonetheless, I hope to see Shicchin's plans working o-o;...
Actually, I nearly spat out my green tea when I saw the update, care to explain your absenses?
Keep writing! I'm rooting for you~! -hugs and gives a free hardhat to you to protect from brain farts-
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thanks for the hug and the hardhat :ONshy2:
my absenses... well... it's due to a mix between work, stress, less time and not being in a mood to write lately:ONdozing:
But don't worry, my loyal readers are always in my mind and I'm not going to give up XD
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O_O
Great chapter!!!! >_<
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Nooooo! Run Miki, run to Yossi!
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Argh, I can't wait for the next update! This one was so suspensful!
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i stayed up all night to read this fic from chapter 1 till here.....and the only thing i can say is......OMG WTF dare? nani? demo.....oya oya??
but the best thing was that I finally know wat yossi did....and btw, i'm a Ayamiki fan...huhu :-p
and my Ayaya, first a victim....now an antagonist....God, your good!
p/s: My Ayaya, my hime-ci......don't worry, i'll always be there for you...leave miki for me......anata wa zutto suki dessu....I'll wait for you.....
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uuh~ an Ayaya fan.. XDXD mm... I don't know if I should say this... but there's still another surprise related to Aya :ONwahaha: (don't worry.. I'm not going to kill her or something like that hahaha)
It's good to know that there's more people reading the fic ^^
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That laughing cat icon is freaky as mate,
LOVE THE STORY!
LOVE IT TO BITS!!
I WANNA HOLD IT AND MUSH IT INTO MY HEART!!
It just keeps getting more and more angsty with eahc chapter
Ah, Im proud of you. So very proud. I understand the effort you must put in each time to write this.
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well, finally nothing special came to my mind to commemorate the 50th chapter, but I've made it a little longer :P So enjoy the reading
***50***
“Tan?”
Ishikawa has done something…
That was the first that Ayaya thought when she saw her best friend at the doorway, shaking and with her eyes red from crying. Rika-chan didn’t call her so there’s no way that Aya could know if she had done something already. She just could wait for her friend to explain what had happened but it wasn’t going to be easy ‘cause the only thing that Miki could do at that moment it was cry.
It wasn’t until hours later that the younger stop crying and calmed down. The girls where lying down in the bed, Miki with her eyes closed and breathing roughly trying to recover some strength while Aya was caressing her hair to make her friend to know that she was there, no matter what.
“Miki… “said Matsuura “What happened?”
The older didn’t reply.
“Miki, please… I need to know it…”
Silence again. Then Ayaya leant closer and her suspicions were right.
Ah… she fell asleep…
Aya stayed there, inches away from Miki, and let her hand slip down to her friend’s face, caressing slightly the skin under her fingers as if it was the first time she was doing it.
“How I could be so blind?” said in a whisper “I wonder how many nights you stayed awake like this, watching me while I was sleeping…”
“Lots”
Miki’s voice was just a sigh but enough to make the younger’s heart to skip a bit because of the surprise. Wasn’t she asleep a moment ago? Or was Miki just pretending to avoid the questions? Still with her hand on her friend’s cheek, Aya didn’t know what she should say after that. The other girl had her eyes still closed, maybe waiting for her to do or say something more but there was so many things in her mind that nothing was clear enough to have sense. Just one of those thought was more persistent than the others and it was getting stronger within every second. They were so close…
Maybe…
Her fingers make her path along Miki’s jaw and her thumb rested on the soft and exquisite lips before leaning to kiss her.
Maybe she won’t run away this time…
Aya placed her lips slightly on Miki’s and, unexpectedly, the older didn’t reject her. She didn’t return the kiss either but there wasn’t any complain about it, not even when Ayaya’s hand went under her friend’s shirt and caressed the smooth skin.
A shiver was the only reaction that she got from Miki…
What have they done to you?
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“What are you doing here? She won’t want to see you”
Yossi was in front of her girlfriend’s door, with her index finger just inches away from the bell, thinking if she should press it. What would happen then? What she could say to Miki after what happened? How could she make the older forgive her if she hadn’t forgiven herself yet?
But I need you so much…
Finally, taking a deep breath, she pushed the button and wait… Until she couldn’t keep the air in her lungs and had to breath again. Nobody opened the door, not even when she ringed again.
A few minutes passed and Yocchan was still standing in the doorway thinking what to do next. She took the cell-phone and pressed Miki’s number, but nobody picked up the call.
“Miki….”
Giving up her idea to see Fujimoto, Yocchan began to walk through the dark roads still with the phone in her hand. It was late and she shouldn’t call, but the need to hear a friendly voice it was bigger.
Again, at the other side of the line she just could hear the operator.
“Not even you?” Yossi sighed and kept the phone in her pocket again “That’s what I deserve, huh?”
***
Inside Maki’s bag, the cell-phone was ringing repeatedly, but her owner wasn’t paying attention at all. She was busy with something else.
“I tho..ught… that you were go-oing to… spend the night with her…”
“I’ve had enough Erika for a day” answered Maki making her path along the other girl’s neck.
Shibata found herself again under Maki’s control. When she realized, she took the younger’s hands and stop what Gocchin was doing. What’s going on with her? She can’t appear in her doorway in the middle of the night and expect to spend the night together so easily.
What’s going on with me?
“I though that you were enjoying it…” she said as a reply to what Maki had said before.
What Shiba-chan didn’t realize was the tone in her voice when she said it, not until she saw Maki’s reaction. The younger looked at her and smiled.
“Jealous?”
Before Ayumi could reply, Gocchin sealed her lips with a deep kiss and her hands went back to work before the older could complain about it.
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Aya!!!!! Don't touch Miki!! :ONangry1:
Poor Yossi... She should come here, so I could make her feel better XD
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Poor Yossie~! -punts Ayaya-
The Shicchin is refreshing :3
Write more~!
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I'm gonna play Devil's Advocate and say that Yossui does deserve it. After all, rape is seriously wrong, no matter who it's done to.
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poor yossie... then again yea rape is not an easy thing to forgive.. but miki going to aya thats just well i guess predictable drama-like move to make but I hope they'r not gonna go further than kissing!! that'll probably jeopardize the whole yomiki thing!
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len.chan......the suspense is killing me.....what are you going to do to my ayaya??? wuu.....i swear to God, if u make her die of sum kind of heart disease......i'll.......
"Henshin!"
Change Kick Hopper
I hope you get the picture.....:hits with chair:
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let's see...
how stefy said, the fact that Miki went to see Aya searching for comfort it can seem a predictable drama-like move... but you know me guys... I'm full of surprises :ONglasses:
len.chan......the suspense is killing me.....what are you going to do to my ayaya??? wuu.....i swear to God, if u make her die of sum kind of heart disease......i'll.......
"Henshin!"
Change Kick Hopper
I hope you get the picture.....
I told you, don't worry XD
Is true that I dislike Aya a little (she won a little place in my heart with the GAM thing..) but I'm not such a bad person to kill her in the fic, Miki doesn't deserve such a pain...
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wait a minute.... i don't get it which part of the fic hinted that aya will die?
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wait a minute.... i don't get it which part of the fic hinted that aya will die?
there isn't any hint about that. I don't know why kazitakato thought that I was going to do something bad to Aya XDXD
***51***
Walking through the corridors, Miki was thinking about the past few days. She had’n talked with Yocchan since the other girl confessed her secret, just the necessary as leader and subleader. The situation was killing her slowly. The more she thought about it the more she wanted to run to Yossi and tell her that it was all right, that she didn’t care about what happened with Ishikawa. But she can’t, she can’t even try it, because every time they were alone Yossi ran away with a lame excuse.
Just like now.
There she was, walking towards her, with her eyes fixed in the ground, maybe afraid to look at the older.
“Yocchan…”
But Yossi, with a simple ‘hi’, kept walking and soon she disappeared from her sight.
***
“Have you seen that?”
“What?”
“Miki and Yoshizawa-san, they don’t even talk to each other”
Gaki-san raised her eyes from the magazine she was reading and looked towards Miki that was still standing a few meters from them. After a quick glance, she returned to her fashion news.
“Maybe they argued” said Risa reading at the same time “With all that GAM thing it’s easy for Yoshizawa-san to feel jealous”
“What GAM thing?” asked Ai-chan.
Risa turned surprised to her girlfriend who was looking at her with a clueless face.
“Do you really live on Earth?” asked the younger “EVERYBODY knows about the kiss!”
“Wait… they’ve kissed? When?”
The younger sighed and closed the magazine.
“Sometimes I wonder if you really pay attention to the world around you”
“I’m paying attention to you now so, tell me”
“It’s easy. They had to kiss in the last shot of her new PV. I don’t think that it’s a big thing but people began to talk again about Mikitty and Matsuura-san together.”
Hearing that, Takahashi searched quickly in her pocket and took her cell-phone.
“See? You’re not paying attention…” sighed Risa.
“It’s not that” answered Ai-chan leaning to her girlfriend and giving her a quick kiss on the lips “I have to tell Mako-chan about this”
Resigned, Gaki-san returned to her magazine. She knew that it would be useless to try to make Ai-chan understand that it could be worst if she told Makoto. That girl could be able to take the first flight to Tokyo just to kick Miki’s ass, or at least, to try it. The last that Yoshizawa-san needed was a catfight for her. But again, her girlfriend was too stubborn to understand that.
“Aah~” she sighed “These things were easier with Kon-Kon around…”
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Yossi keep walking without going anywhere. She had been doing that for the last few days during the rehearsal’s breaks as a way to avoid the girls, especially one of them. She wasn’t strong enough to face Miki after what happened.
The girl that was in front of her right now it wasn’t easy to face either.
“What have you done to her?”
Aya Matsuura, the lovely Ayaya, had transformed herself in an aggressive girl able to kill anyone who could hurt her best friend. Her face was serious enough to make Yossi understand that she couldn’t run away so easily from that confrontation.
“If you love her so much why do you make her cry?!”
Why I keep hurting the people I love?
“You know what?” said the younger in a defiant way “Now it’s my chance to do something. Miki won’t need you anymore”
“She doesn’t need you anymore…”
Yossi remained in silence while watching Aya leaving. When she was completely alone again she dropped to the floor and buried her face in her kneels.
“The same again, huh?” she said to herself “Yoshizawa…, you’re such a looser…”
Her thoughts were suddenly interrupted by the sound of her cell-phone. It was a message, a really short one:
She loves you
Fight oh!
That was enough to make her smile for the first time in days.
“You always so timely, Mako-chan…”
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Go Mako-chan! Fight oh Yossui!
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Oh yes! Fight Yossi! You can do it XD
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Yossie, you can do it! BELIEVE~! -gives her a hardhat-
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there isn't any hint about that. I don't know why kazitakato thought that I was going to do something bad to Aya XDXD
:pen_sorry: sori...i just thought u might kill her off coz she's getting in the way of YoMiki and that u actually said b4 this that u don't like her that much (but i luv her...lots) so it's be no problem for u to kill her....
so, gomme...if i scared u...i'll just watch over Ayaya......for now...
p/s: but i still have my eyes on u.....:pen_eat: when u eat....:pen_sleep:when u sleep.....just in case u harm my Ayaya..... :ONcool1: *just joking*
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Go yossie go!!!^^
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Haven't commented for some time, because everytime after I finish reading I forget to comment :evil: anyways, this time I remembered.
The way this story is going is pretty interesting, I'll be keeping an eye on this thread closely to see what happens next :ONding: I don't even really like YoMiki but I hope they end up together, or at least end up happy even without each other.
Until the next chapter :ONbyebye: I just wanted to use this emoticon <_<
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mokoto got over obsessing over yossie huh, the message from her was sweeet.. hope it gives yossie enuf strength to carry on!! yocchan fight oh fight oh fighttt!!
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well, no Yossi fighting here... but you're going to discover something interesting :ONhee:
***52***
I can’t do it, I can’t do it! Definitely not! What the hell I was thinking when I accepted this? What the hell was Shiba-chan thinking when she proposed it?! This must be some kind of punishment for flirting with her so much lately. I should learn to stop playing with the wrong girls…
Well, there’s no turning back. If I want this to work, Erika can’t feel any bit of doubt from me or she’s gonna suspect about my real intentions… This is for Yocchan’s sake, don’t ruin it now Maki…
“I always wanted to know how it feels…”
“What?” asked Maki without stopping what she was doing.
“To be with Gottsan, to taste your kisses…”
That’s… good? As long as she keeps talking, maybe I’ll be able to make her speak about what I want to know…
Shibata’s plan was simple. To make Erika to loose her mind, take advantage of this and make her speak. It should be easy for someone like Maki. Of course, the younger wasn’t so sure about it when all this started. But now, hearing Miyoshi’s words, she began to believe in Shiba-chan. Maybe, there was an opportunity.
“I didn’t know that you were interested on me…” said Gocchin kissing the other girl’s neck “I’ve always thought that you’re with Rika-chan”
“Don’t act like a fool with me” answered Erika “You knew that she was with Yoshizawa-san.
Maki’s hands began to explore under Erika’s shirt. Things were going good… Maybe it was time to try something that she was talking with Shibata a few days ago. The older suspected that it couldn’t be a coincidence that the problems between Yossi and Rika began exactly when Biyuuden was formed…
“Yeah, but they broke up almost a year ago…” began to say Gocchin, hoping that the next step wasn’t to go too further “…and something tells me that I have to thank you for that…”
Erika seemed a bit surprised by Maki’s words but, far from deny any accusation, she laughed and kissed Gottsan deeply.
“I knew it…” she said recovering her breath.
Gocchin heart skipped a bit. She felt already caught.
“I knew that you would be happy with it…”
What?!
“Yoshizawa-san never deserved you…” continued the older “Leaving you the way she did it was unforgivable”
Wait… Wait! Is she saying what I think she’s saying? It’s all about me? Think straight Maki…She wasn’t even here when all that happened…
“How do you know about that?” asked Gocchin trying to make things clear.
“You talk too much, Gottsan”
Maki didn’t complaint. She knew that it would be too risky to keep talking, at least for a few minutes…
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“I thought that everybody had forgotten about that already…”
Nono took a piece of her cake and proceed to enjoy it.
“…since Makochan was the most interested in all this and she’s already gone”
“Yeah, but I’ve became more worried lately” said Shibata “This isn’t just about Rika-chan and Yossi anymore. There are a lot of people involved already”
The younger left the fork in the table, leant her back in the chair and crossed her arms.
“I understand” she said adopting a serious pose “There’s something I can do?”
“Don’t worry, we’re working in something already”
“We?”
“Yeah, Ma…”
The conversation was suddenly interrupted by Ayumi’s cell-phone. She took it and looked at the mail sender’s id.
Speaking of the devil…
“Mission accomplished. Now I need some of your love to clean any remain of her touch, pleeease~”
“Someone important?” asked a curious Nono.
“No… Just work” lied Shibata.
“You must really love your work to smile like this…”
I was… smiling?
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OOOOH What now :]
Shicchin loooove <3 <3 <3
Now that Ayumi Goto alias from the Hello!Project mini-musical makes me think she's married her by now, haha XD!
-still has hardhat for confrontation-
-is looking forward to more Shicchin-
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Somebody is falling in love:ONhee:
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Ou mai gaaaaah!!! I was going to go to bed, but somehow I knew that I had to check this before that XD
I'm sooooo happy for Maki right now. She has someone to love:panda_love:
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“Someone important?” asked a curious Nono.
“No… Just work” lied Shibata.
“You must really love your work to smile like this…”
I was… smiling?
This line is 1 of the best lines ever written in this forum. :bow:
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There's so many twists in this fic, it's a joy to read them. :thumbsup :kgreat:
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man that was good.......oh, and it's allbcoz of Gocchan??? Now i've lost count. 1st there was YoMiki, but earlier it was YoRika, then AyaRika.....i've lost count.....help me :ONomg:
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“Someone important?” asked a curious Nono.
Was that intentional? It made me giggle.
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Was that intentional? It made me giggle.
Ha!! I saw that too and I giggled as well. But its about time for Maki to get some lovin! And the last little dialogue was so cute. Good job with this. I really really enjoy this story.
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^ well.. the 'curious Nono' thing wasn't intentional at first... I just realized after writing it XDXD
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Right now I'm really rooting for Shicchin (haha I love this word, it's so cute - just like them XD)
Great chapter!
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well.. from next sunday I'll be out for a whole week so maybe this will be the last chapter until I come back
***53***
Even after spending all night awake, her body didn’t reflex any sign of being tired. Maybe it was because of the decision she had took that she was walking with so much strength. It was her last opportunity and she wasn’t going to give up. She’d already left once the desperation take control of her and she just got to make things worst. It couldn’t happen again.
She saw her objective some meters away, talking with Nono, Risa and Aya in the hall. It wasn’t exactly the best moment but she didn’t care about it.
Without warning, she took Miki by the arm and, without giving her any time to react; she kissed her, of course, with the other three girls as audience.
“I love you and I’m not going to give up so easily”
Yossi had ready a whole speech to convince Miki why they should be together even if it wasn’t going to be easy, but the older didn’t let her even start to speak. She surrounded Yocchan’s neck with her arms and hugged her strongly.
“That means that you forgive me?” asked a surprised Yossi.
“Baka… I don’t care about what happened. I reacted that way ‘cause I wasn’t ready to hear something like that, not because I didn’t want to be with you” Fujimoto’s voice was almost cracking, as if she was going to start crying at any moment “I tried to tell you but you keep running away from me…”
The younger moved away a little and looked at the girl in her arms. There was still one more thing to do.
“Come with me”
Suddenly, Miki felt Yossi’s hand taking her own and the younger started to run.
The three girls remaining in the hall looked at each other. They had been feeling invisible until then.
“Anybody knows what happened right now?”
“They… patch up things? Dunno…You know something?” asked Gaki-san turning to Aya.
But, when they realized, the soloist wasn’t there anymore.
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“I still can’t believe it”
“You can’t believe it? Imagine how I was feeling when she told me that she was doing all that because of me!” Gocchin raised her voice.
“Sshhhh, someone can hear you” said Ayumi taking her to the couch “So…, she’s taking some kind of revenge on Yossi because she thinks that you hate her for leaving you for Rika-chan?”
“Sort of...”
“See? To be irresistible sometimes isn’t so good” joked the older.
As a reply, Maki punched her in the shoulder. It wasn’t a right comment to do at that moment.
“What are you going to do now?” asked Shibata more seriously.
“Of course I’ll tell Yocchan and Ishikawa. The have the right to know everything. Even if it’s hard to accept, Rika wasn’t guilt of anything and isn’t fair that things end like that”
“But you don’t seem happy to know the truth”
“It was better to thing about Rika-chan as the villain of the movie. It was easier to hate her”
Shibata looked at the younger, who had leant back into the couch and had her eyes closed. Then she understood something. Maki wasn’t the playgirl that she’d always thought, she just don’t wanna be hurt again.
“Shiba-chan, don’t fall in love, never. Love sucks”
What if it’s too late for that?
Then, after some seconds of silence, they heard voices approaching quickly and Maki opened her eyes.
“Yocchan, wait!” complaint Miki trying to keep Yossi’s rhythm “Why the hell are you running?!”
Gocchin and Shibata saw how the two Morning Musume members passed running in front of them. After that, they looked at each other.
“I have a bad feeling” said Maki.
Ayumi was going to say something too, but she was interrupted by an unexpected and fast soloist running after the other two girls.
Imagining that there was something really big going on, Gottsan took Ayumi by the hand and, without saying anything, began to run too.
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It's a marathon~! With Gatas (and ex-gatas :]) members~! O___O;
RUN LIKE HELL YOMIKI~! RUN LIKE THE WIIIND O-O
Though, Shicchin basically had no point in running, other than to prevent the future confrontation? D:...
If that is the case... -gives Yomiki hardhats, and Shicchin hardhats- Good luck facing Aya o_o;
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So we have to wait a week to know what does Yossi wants to tell Miki??? T_T
XDDD
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Sasupensu~ And I never thought I'd ever say this, but, damn Erika!
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Do we really have to wait a whole week? O_o
Any way:kgreat:
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I wonder what Aya's going to do when she catches up with them? I hope it ends something like this= :masa:
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O_O! Because of Gocchin!?
Shicchin (XD) is looking good here, if they don't seriously get together then :ONangry1:
Urgh, and you had to leave it at a spot like this too :ONfrustrated:
Aya's not gonna like, beat Yossi up, right? :\ I doubt she can anyway :P I hope everyone can end up happy (except for the evil ppl) >_<.
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:ONomg::ONomg::ONomg::ONomg::ONomg::ONomg::ONomg:
ohcrap!ohcrap!ohcrap!ohcrap!ohcrap!ohcrap!ohcrap!ohcrap!ohcrap!ohcrap!
Don't hurt my Ayaya....i'm begging you, Yossi.....NOOOOOOO :ONpleeease:
must....save.....love....Henshin!
/me runs after Ayaya in Kickhopper Rider form just in case.....
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aah~ finally I'm back...
I's should been posted this two days ago but I had to go back to work earlier than expected and I couldn't finish the chapter before.
***54***
Ishikawa was restless and she didn’t know why. She should be happy, she should be enjoying her victory. Rika found the day before that Yossi and Miki didn’t talk to each other. That could just mean one thing, a big fight, probably a break up. Then, why was she feeling so defeated? What she was expecting? She thought that Yocchan would run to her as if nothing happened? What a silly dream…
Besides, in addition to her worries, her fellow Biyuuden members were acting weird lately, like out of character. Yui, usually happy, always with a smile in her face and something to talk about was now serious and silent. And Erika.., well, they hadn’t been ‘alone’ in a few days but Rika could see clearly that something was going on with the girl. She was happy, too happy for someone like her…
She’d liked to ask her about the reason of that happiness, but suddenly, her train of thoughts was interrupted by the hurricane Hitomi.
Miki was there too, holding the younger’s hand and trying to recover her breath.
“Rika-chan?” said Yossi with a soft and suspicious tone in her voice.
“Yes?”
The older was a little offended by the way that Yossi said her name. She didn’t use to call her by her first name since their break up, at least, not usually, and the way she did it now was like another way to hurt her. But she hadn’t time to process that, when Yossi turned to the girl holding her hand and kissed her in front of the astonished Biyuuden members. The smile on Erika’s face disappeared; Yui’s eyes went wide opened and Ishikawa was too surprised to think straight.
But they weren’t the only ones wondering what was going on. While she was trying to breathe normally again, Yossi’s lips reached hers without warning. At first, she tried to find out what was on her Yocchan’s mind but after a few seconds she didn’t care anymore.
That was what Aya, Maki and Shibata found when they reached the place.
“Eh…by any chance… do you know what’s going on here?” whispered Gocchin to Aya.
“I don’t have idea”
The soloist wasn’t so surprised with that situation ‘cause it happened the same some minutes ago before their run, but that doesn’t mean that she wanted to see it again. The fact of see Miki’s arms around Yossi’s neck, attracting her closer and kissing her deeper within every second.., it made Aya feel sick. Then she turned to Maki, who was looking at the couple with a sad expression on her face and she wondered if that’s how Gocchin always felt, if that’s how she was going to feel from now on.
“That’s enough” said an already pissed off Ishikawa.
“I don’t think so” Miki replied with a satisfied smile before kissing again her girl.
But Yocchan should think otherwise because she left Miki’s lips and, holding her hand again, turned to Ishikawa.
“That was to make you understand once and for all that there’s nothing you can do. I love her and any of your twisted plans are going to work anymore”
“If that’s true, maybe it’s time for…”
“She knows” Yossi cut Ishikawa’s sentence before she could say anything more. Then she turned to her girlfriend and looked at her tenderly caressing her cheek “She knows and understand it. Game over, Rika-chan”
That was something that Rika wasn’t expecting. How dared Yocchan to tell something so personal? It was their secret, something just between the two of them, the only thing that kept them together…
“Why are you so hurt?” asked Yossi with a serious tone “Maybe because I’ve told her before you could use it to hurt her?”
“Ok, maybe you’ve win this time” she said turning to Miki “Enjoy your happiness while you can”
“What do you mean with that?” asked Fujimoto.
Rika-chan didn’t answer at first. She raised her hand to caress Yossi’s cheek, something that made the taller jump back to avoid the contact.
“Soon you’ll find that our little girl isn’t the loyal kind”
“You know that’s not true” said Yoshizawa obviously offended.
“No? Ask Gocchin, then”
“Eh? What’s up with me?” asked a surprised Maki from the corner.
“Oh, come on, I know you two were sleeping together…”
Then everybody turned to look at Maki who was, obviously, the more surprised there. Looking at her face it was evident that she didn’t know what Ishikawa was talking about.
“I’m going to repeat it one last time” said Yossi “I never, ever, touched another girl while I was with you”
“That’s true, Rika” assured Maki.
“And you think I’m so stupid to believe you?”
“Believe what you want” answered the soloist “But you know I hate you, why I should lie to you with that then?”
Ishikawa didn’t say anything. Her mind was too busy trying to analyze all the new information that came so suddenly.
“The funny thing is…” continued Yossi “…that you were the one who betrayed me, and yet you’re trying to act as the victim”
“What?”
“You played the innocent girl, the one who wasn’t ready, when actually Erika and you were making fun of me”
At that point, Shibata looked at Maki. Both knew the truth about that and it was the right time to tell everything. She made a gesture to the younger and Gocchin replied with a nod. She knew what she had to do.
“Yocchan, that’s…”
“That’s not true!” shouted Rika suddenly interrupting Maki “I wanted to be with you! I wanted to give you everything! But you…” tears began to overflow from her eyes “…you had to ruin it all…”
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Welcome back!!^^
And greaaatooooo chapter^^:pen_clap:
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WELCOME BACK!
And thank you so much~!!!! Great chapter again:kgreat:
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“That’s enough” said an already pissed off Ishikawa.
“I don’t think so” Miki replied with a satisfied smile before kissing again her girl.
:P :P :P
That's so typical of Rika vs Miki
:heart: :heart: Love it ! :heart: :heart:
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Sorry, it's short, but I promise that the next part will be up soon. It's just that I don't have time to finish it now.. Besides... you know I like to tease XDXD
***55***
Two girls where sitting in silence in one of the hall couches, still shocked.
“You know…, that’s…”
“Weird” said Nono ending Risa’s sentence.
“Yeah…”
Both sighed and crossed her arms at the same time. Then Gaki-san closed her eyes and laid her head back in the couch.
“But…” began to say the younger again “In some way.., I envy them. To be loved by someone with so much passion… It has to be great”
Nozomi turned to her friend. She could feel a bit of sadness in the voice of the other girl.
“Aren’t you with Ai-chan?”
“Yeah, but you know how she is” answered Risa returning to a more comfortable position “She lives in her own world and, sometimes, it makes me feel lonely. It’s like if she doesn’t care about if I’m there or not”
Then Gaki-san realized that she was saying her thoughts out loud to someone that maybe wasn’t interested on hearing it.
“Uhm, sorry. I’m bothering you with my silly thoughts…”
“No, it’s ok” answered an understanding Nozomi “But don’t you think that it’s Ai-chan who actually should hear this?”
“What I should hear?” said someone behind them.
Both turned to look at the owner of the voice and Risa suddenly began to feel really awkward. She didn’t want to tell her girlfriend about her worries.
“We were talking about what happened right now” said Nono rescuing her friend. She had seen the restless in the younger when Takahashi appeared and understood that Gaki couldn’t be open with her girl about what they were talking, at least, not at that moment “Yocchan and Miki have made things up just in front of Aya”
“It seems that I’ve missed the fun, uh? Doesn’t matter…” she said smiling and leaning to her girlfriend to kiss her briefly on the lips “I know better ways to have fun, right?”
Risa smiled and nodded as if nothing happened but Nono knew that it was all fake, and then realized how many times she’d seen that same smile, how always Gaki reply Ai-chan with a simple nod, without words, without complaints. A single thought crossed her mind... If Takahashi wasn’t nuts about that girl then life wasn’t fair.
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“That’s not true!” shouted Rika suddenly interrupting Maki “I wanted to be with you! I wanted to give you everything! But you…” tears began to overflow from her eyes “…you had to ruin it all…”
“That’s something that’s gonna be always with me” answered Yossi “But I’m not going to let that single error to rule my life. The times when I believed you have passed, Ishikawa, long time ago”
Just another girl there aside Rika and Yossi knew about what the girls where talking and the feelings inside her began to be very confusing. She felt proud, very proud of Yocchan for being able to face up the situation with so much determination, but at the same time, she felt sorry for Rika. All that seemed a very big misunderstanding where she didn’t have any blame.
Yoshizawa suddenly felt a hand on her shoulder and turned to see Maki with a worried expression on her face.
“Yocchan, before saying anything more, there’s something you should know”
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great chapter!!!
I wonder what miki wants to say xDDD:pen_shocked:
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Cliffhanger! *dies*
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God, I love this! :ONluvluv1:
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I can't wait!!!!!!!!!!!!
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well, here it is. This chapter was harder than I expected and I'm not fully satisfied with it... but well, judge yourself
***56***
After Maki’s words everybody kept silence. After the verbal confrontation between Rika and Yossi, nobody was expecting that Gocchin could take part in the battle. Everybody there knew that she was a huge part of the problem, but interfere in the fight it was something that not even Miki would dare to do.
“She never betrayed you, Yocchan”
Gocchin then turned to Miyoshi and saw that the girl was looking at her with a death glare more typical from Mikitty than from her. Obviously, the girl had tie up everything and now understood the suddenly interest of the younger.
“It was all schemed by Erika” continued Maki “She did it the way that you hurt each other without even know it…”
“Why?” asked Ishikawa looking at her fellow Biyuuden member and fighting the tears that had began to flow from her eyes.
Erika smiled evilly. Even if Gottsan had tricked her to reveal all her plans, she was enjoying the situation.
“Because it was funny to see how you destroyed each other”
“But…, I trusted you…”
“And that’s why it was so easy. You felt so insecure of yourself that you trust me more than your love. It was so easy to use you…”
“How can you be so cold blooded?”
Miki had kept silence until then but with every single word that Erika said her blood boils more and more. But, someway, she managed to control her rage and made that question instead of using her fists as usually.
“They deserve it” answer Erika coldly “They had to feel the same pain that Goto-san was feeling because of them… But then, you had to appear and make things difficult. It took me off guard. You’d supposed to be busy with Ayaya but it seems that our little princess didn’t know how to keep you at her side”
“That’s none of your business!” shouted Aya.
“Yes, it is! It’s your fault that those two ended together. And you are so stupid that didn’t even know how to take advantage of every opportunity that Rika gave to you. Someone smarter had brought Fujimoto to bed at the first chance…”
This time, Miki made honour to her reputation and let her fist crash against Erika’s jaw. Nobody there was surprised. No one can mess with Ayaya without facing Fujimoto’s rage after. But, even with a tiny thread of blood running from her lower lip, Erika didn’t lose her smile.
“There’s no way you can hurt me” she said looking at Miki with a defiant glare and cleaning the mess with her sleeve “This? This will be just a remain of my victory”
Miki was ready to attack again when a strong hand took her by the wrist and stopped her.
“That’s enough, Miki-chan” said a calm voice behind her. Recognizing the voice, Fujimoto relaxed her arm and let the older woman to lower it “I’ll take charge of her”
Nakazawa’s presence was the only thing that made Miyoshi’s smile drop from her face.
“You” said Yuko firmly “Come with me”
If there was something scarier than an angry Yuko Nakazawa it was a calmly angry Yuko Nakazawa. Nobody knew how she could react and that’s why any of the girls said nothing when Erika and she disappeared.
It wasn’t until after a few minutes of silence that Maki dared to look at her friend. Ishikawa had collapsed in the ground crying, but Yossi was there, standing in the same place where she had been from the start with the look lost in the nothing. Gocchin didn’t need to see tears to know how the truth had devastated Hitomi’s soul at the extreme that she didn’t even have strength to cry.
Then she saw Fujimoto, who had begun to walk towards Yossi, and stopped her.
“Not now, Miki” said Maki leaving a hand on the older’s shoulder “They need to be alone”
Miki looked at Yossi and then turned again to Gocchin and nodded. She understood, as the rest of the girls, that they couldn’t do anything to help, just wait.
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hi! i1m new here! ^^
but i know this fic from len's blog!!
(but i didn't comment cause i'm not sure about my english! XO)
and..... yeah! this fic is great!!! i love it!!
congratulations!! and GAMBAREEE!!
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God damn that was powerful!!! And then Yuko came out... man!
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Damn, I haven't been keeping up as much as I would have liked, and ended up missing out a lot. I read everything I missed just now, everything to do with Maki getting close to Erika and all that. Just... wow at Yuko making such a strong appearance at the end. I would definately have to agree that she'd be more scare as 'calm angry'. Good work, and keep it up! I'm looking forward to what Yossi and Rika might have to say to eachother after this. :?
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Ishiyoshi's return!!!!
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Evil Miyo makes me cry.... T_T
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uoh! this is amazing.. and to commemorate the 10.000 visits I've made a little gift to all that people who made it possible.
(http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a371/len_chan/th_portadaintwlh.jpg) (http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a371/len_chan/portadaintwlh.jpg)
you can put this after the cover (which is comming soon, I promise). I hope you like it.
hi! i1m new here! ^^
but i know this fic from len's blog!!
(but i didn't comment cause i'm not sure about my english! XO)
and..... yeah! this fic is great!!! i love it!!
congratulations!! and GAMBAREEE!!
hi! wellcome! I'm happy that your first post was here ^_^
and don't be afraid to post because of your english, mine isn't so good XDXD
I'm looking forward to what Yossi and Rika might have to say to eachother after this.
aah... this one is going to be difficult...
Evil Miyo makes me cry.... T_T
I know I know.. but It had to be that way..
weeell... I hope you don't have to wait long for the next part.. see you!
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I hope Yossi and Rika can be friends after what ever will happen XD
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Now that the truth be told... Will Yossie be torn upon returning to Rika? Or shall Rika be forgiving and allow her happiness? Because Rika's bound to at least lose the bitchy personality after a confrontation like that. I'm looking forward to the Shicchin plot advancement, and I also hope that like Maki, (that is, if Rika chooses to allow Yossie her freedom) Rika will be able to move on and find someone else to love :]
-glomps-
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But has Maki really moved on. That's a kind of feeling that stays with you for a long time. If Rika does stop being psyco and manipulative and stays out of the way, she would still feel some pain seeing someone else with Yossie.
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O_O
OK, now it's oficial: this is my favourite fanfic!!!! >_< I love it!
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gomeeen neeee. :ONkneelbow:
I'm really sorry... I would like to post this befoe but I caught a cold and I've been a bit disconected this week. But, to compensate, this chapter is a little longer XDXD
***57***
“You’re kidding me…”
Eri crossed her arms and refused to believe what Gaki-san just said.
“I’m serious” answered Risa “People say that that’s why Nakazawa-san organized that reunion”
“And what happened with Miyo-chan?”
“Let fly your imagination, Sayu”
The three girls turned her heads slowly to look at the woman standing at the center of the room. She really looks serious, not angry but menacing, with her eyes fixed in the crow around her and paying attention to every conversation in the room. Conversations that were beginning to get her pissed of.
“Silence!”
The shout made all the murmurs disappear. Most of the girls held her breaths fearing to make any noise that could bother the eldest member.
“That’s better” said Yuko relaxing a little her face expression “Now that everybody’s here…”
“Leader isn’t here!” shouted Reina.
“Miyo-chan and the kids are missing too” pointed Eri who immediately regret what she had said and glued her eyes to the ground.
“They’re not coming” answered Nakazawa trying to remain calm “Yocchan and Miyoshi have some… things to attend. And for the kids.., they are out of the problem, at least for now”
Yuko waited a minute for any question that could interrupt her but seeing that nobody dared to open her mouth she smiled and began to talk again.
“Most of you must know about the little incident with Erika. This reunion is to prevent that something like that happens again. We are a big family, a family where everybody have to respect each other if we want to stay together and if, anybody, someway, dare to hurt that unity, I’ll take charge personally” Yuko made a pause and look at the girls around her and some of them looked away to avoid eye-contact “But…” she continued “There’s something that can destroy a family more than anything…” this time Yuko’s eyes where fixed in a single girl, the one with a pink sweater and the sad expression in her face “…a secret”
At that word, Ishikawa raised her head and her eyes met with Yuko’s.
“A secret is the most dangerous weapon in a war, and the last thing we need is a battle between members. So, here and now, I want to know everything. Who’s gonna start?”
The girls in the room looked at each other in silence, waiting for someone to be the first to say something but, as expected, nobody wanted to begin. The generalized though was like ‘that woman went totally crazy requesting something like that’. Of course, no one dare to say it out loud.
Seeing that nobody was going to start, Yuko sighed.
“Ok then. If it’s going to be easier.., I’ll make the questions and everybody’ll answer at the same time. This way nobody will feel embarrassed for being the first”
“Hey, obaachan had a nice idea!” joked Yasuda next to her.
“Honey.., shut up. Well, first question”
Nakazawa took some seconds to look at each girl and analyze their faces before speak again.
“How many of you had sex with another Hello! Project member?”
Everybody looked at everybody in shock. What kind of question was that? Even Kei, that knew her girlfriend very well, didn’t expect something so direct to start.
“Raise your fucking hands!” shouted Yuko impatiently.
“Ok, ok…” they heard a voice coming from one of the corners of the room. Then a sigh and a raised hand “Everybody knows me so, there’s no reason to hide it”
Seeing Maki raising her hand answering Nakazawa’s request, one by one, the rest of the girls raised their hands too. Yuko wasn’t surprised of many of them, but others were as shocking for her as for everybody.
“I don’t know… I feel like if I was left out of the party” said Nono, who was standing in a corner with another few girls that hadn’t raised their hands.
“I understand you” nodded Mari “You know there’s something going on but.., so many? I mean… Even Kaorin! She never told me!”
“Hey, at least you don’t have one of your best friends involved in a plot against another member…” sighed Yui looking down at the floor.
“Yeah, your right, that’s worst”
Yuko smiled satisfied, but she knew that the next step was going to be more difficult.
“Ok. That was easy. Now I need the same sincerity with the next question” she moved her eyes upon every girl’s face trying to read some of their thoughts before asking “How many of you are in love with another member?”
This time just a few hands remained raised and a lot of jaws dropped to the floor with the answer. Just a few people expected to see Gocchin’s hand raised, Miki’s and Rika’s answers weren’t a surprise at all, and for Ai-chan and Risa.., Gaki-san was the most surprised seeing the hand of her girlfriend raised.
“That’s… true?” she asked feeling how some tears were beginning to form in her eyes.
“Yeah. Why are you crying?
“Yo… you never told me…”
“Really?”
“I thought that you just… you know… wanted just…”
“Oh” usually Ai-chan had needed a clearer answer to understand what was happening but this time she realized immediately what the problem was and then her face changed from surprised to and affeccionate expression “You thought I was with you just because of the sex?” she smiled “You know there’s Goto-san for that, right?”
“That’s true!” shouted Maki from the other side of the room, getting with that a death glare from someone that was at her side with her hand still raised.
“Then, say it” continue Risa looking at her girlfriend “I need to hear it from you”
Ai-chan moved her head from one side to another looking at all the girls around, expecting an answer. Then she fixed her eyes on the younger, put her hands on Risa’s cheeks and wiping away the tears she made sure that every single word was clearly heard for everyone.
“I-love-you”
A lot of ‘aaaw’ and ‘how cute!’ filled the room. The two girls where staring at each other giggling and whispering words that just them could hear, and wasn’t paying attention at the people around.
“Nakazawa-san, can we skip to the next question?”
Yuko looked at the girl who had made the request and suddenly realized something.
“Shiba-chan…” said the older smiling “why do you have your hand raised?”
Obviously, nobody else in the room had seen that until Nakazawa said it. Then, all the girls turned to her and she felt the heat on her cheeks rising.
“Oi! You never told me!” exclaimed Maki standing at her side “Who is it?”
“Baaaka!”
“What have I done now?”
“You are so… so… stupid!”
Gocchin jumped back at Ayumi’s shout. The peaceful Shibata, the one that always remains calmed no matter what, had shouted and called Maki Goto stupid. Of course, no one understood why she had done that. Nobody could even imagine the truth.
Why is she so blinded?
To be continued in the next chapter...
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Wow! Sugoi!
The part with Risa and Ai was really cute^^
Come on MakI!! open your eyes!!^^
Great I'm exited for the next chapter aaand
Get well soon len!:ONwhistle:
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Have to agree with Gomaki :MKlove2:
Hope you feel better now, len.chan :ONhee:
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Hey~ Len get well soon ya.
Nice update. Somehow I find Yuuko quite a busybody. :D
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Lol, Maki the sex machine.
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Man, this keeps getting better and better! :pen_clap: I hope you're feeling better len.chan. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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It's nice to know that Ai and Gaki are serious about their relationship. And I'm REALLY happy about Kaori having sex with another member. Who was it?
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Lol, Maki the sex machine.
I was thinking the same thing. Funny thing is how she's smart and intuitive about some things here in this story, and yet completely clueless in regards to other things in this story. :lol:
Rest up and get well soon len.chan!
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~Love is in the air~ lalalala
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thank you guys. I'm feeling better now ^^
It's nice to know that Ai and Gaki are serious about their relationship. And I'm REALLY happy about Kaori having sex with another member. Who was it?
whoever you want XD I haven't thought about anyone in particular.
Lol, Maki the sex machine.
I was thinking the same thing. Funny thing is how she's smart and intuitive about some things here in this story, and yet completely clueless in regards to other things in this story.
hell yeah! XDXD well.. she didn't make it with all the raised hands, you know? but yeah... she likes action XD
the fact that she's clueless about Shiba-chan feelings she usually have to deal just with her own feelings and that's enough for her XD
now...
***58***
When Love Hurts 58
Seeing how upset was Ayumi getting, Megumi took her friend from the shoulders and try to calm her down. But it was too late to do something. Shibata yelled something at her fellow Melon member and return her attention to Maki.
“I shouldn’t have let you step into my life; I shouldn’t have let you touch me. You are the biggest mistake of my life and even so, I can’t stop thinking about you!”
“Shiba-chan… I…” tried to say Maki a bit disconcerted.
“Wanna know what makes me angrier? Your undying love for Yoshizawa. She left you years ago but you keep your heart closed and your eyes blinded for anybody who try to reach you” at that point, Ayummi’s eyes began to overflow “Can’t you see that you’re hurting people being like this? That you’re hurting me?”
Silence. Shibata wasn’t expecting an answer but at least some reaction, but all that she got was a stunned face looking at her, totally clueless.
“Don’t worry” she said more relaxed “It’s my fault for letting you do this to me. I knew how you were and I kept playing with fire…” Then she turned to Yuko totally defeated “Nakazawa-san, If you don’t mind, I’d like to leave now”
Yuko just nodded at let the girl leave the room. She wondered if all that questioning about their feelings it wasn’t too much. Shiba-chan looked really bad and she left Gocchin in shock. The others…, probably were too surprised to feel anything.
“Well.., maybe we should end this conversation here…”
“I’d like to say something” said Aya interrupting Yuko.
“Ok, go ahead”
Matsuura cleared her throat and made some steps towards Rika before speak.
“Rika-chan… I lied to you. I never wanted to help you with your plans”
“Then… why…?”
“Gocchin thought it could be a good way to discover that big secret that Yossi and you were hiding. If you trusted me, maybe there would be a way to protect Miki from you and, someway, a felt as if I was getting a little revenge for what you did to me too…”
Ishikawa wasn’t surprised at all. After what happened, Tsunku could fire her and she’d still feel nothing. There wasn’t a way that a few words could hurt and already devastated heart.
“Gocchin, you don’t have anything to say about this?” asked Yuko.
Maki looked at her elder, then at Rika and then at Yuko again.
“Yes” she said resolutely with a new glittering in her eyes “I have to go”
She just finished the sentence and ran out of the room. Nobody dared to ask, nobody dare to hold her back. She had always been a free spirit running wild against the wind and it could hurt to step between her and whatever she wanted.
“I guess this is the end of the meeting. Everybody can leave now”
While the girls were leaving the room, Miki took her cell-phone and pressed Yocchan’s number. She waited for an answer but nobody picked up the phone at the other side.
“Probably she’s still with Tsunku” she heard Yuko saying.
“With… Tsunku?”
Nakazawa could feel the worried tone on Miki’s voice. A meeting with her boss it was very usual being a leader of Morning Musume but, with the later incidents, she couldn’t blame Fujimoto for being worried. The fact is that she knew why Yossi went to talk with him. She had talked with her and asked for some advice before doing anything but Yuko wondered if it was a good idea to tell Miki about it.
“Yocchan.., she’s in trouble because of what happened?” asked suddenly another voice behind Yuko.
Two girls in love and worried were more than that Yuko could handle in a single day.
“Ok… We talked this morning” said Nakazawa finally “She’s tired and needs some time. That’s why she went to see Tsunku. She wanted to leave before anyone could notice it…”
But anybody was hearing her anymore. The two girls had left the room as if their life were in it leaving Nakazawa with the words in the mouth.
“These girls… They’ll never learn…”
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Oh ho... Yuko's last statement, is she speaking from experience? D:
God I hope Yossie doesn't do anything emo like try to quit H!P or something, but if it does turn out like that, I hope Miki will be the one to prevent her from doing so. Also with Maki and Ayumi, it seems that a confrontation concerning this will transpire inevitably. I look forward to that :]
Keep writing~! <3
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Go Shichin! Go!
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Why is Yossi talking with Tsunku...? Now I'm worried :cry:
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Why is Yossi talking with Tsunku...? Now I'm worried :cry:
She’s tired and needs some time. That’s why she went to see Tsunku
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aah.. next will be the last chapter...
so, enjoy it!
***59***
I’d used to like to be alone. Then she came and made me hate my loneliness. I was nothing without her… How I could forget?
She didn’t know exactly what direction she should follow but, as if it was a miracle, the silhouette of the other girl appeared in front of her at the end of the corridor. As she did for the past ten minutes, Maki ran to catch her.
“Wait!” she shouted taking Shiba-chan from her wrist and making her to stop.
Ayumi stared at her, unable to believe that Gocchin had followed her after all that she said.
Then why I’m doing this? Why I’m keeping you by my side? I can’t give you what you want and yet…
“I can’t do this, not now, but…” Maki was doubtful, her eyes fixed to the ground until she began to raise her head to look at the other girl “…but.., stay with me, please”
For once, I’ll be selfish. For once, I’ll try to forget.
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Tsunku almost jump in his chair with the office’s door suddenly opened and two girls rushed in. Sweaty from the running, almost breathless and desperate, Rika and Miki were moving their heads frantically looking for someone who should be in the room.
“She’s not here” said Tsunku returning her attention to the papers on the table.
Hearing that, Ishikawa smashed the table and demanded an answer.
“When?”
“Around thirty minutes ago” was Tsunku’s reply. He don’t even bother to raise his look “You’re not going to catch her”
“You shouldn’t let her go!”
Seeing that Ishikawa was loosing control, Miki take her by her shoulders and try to make her understand that she wasn’t going to get anything shouting at her boss. Fujimoto too, wanted to shout, cry and complain but she knew that Yossi wasn’t going to come back because of that.
“I haven’t let her go” answered their boss, this time leaving the papers and looking straight to the girls “I haven’t another option. Yoshizawa told me about all what happened. She understands that a leader has to have her mind clear and she was too much troubled lately to make the group work”
“But it wasn’t her fault” complaint again Rika-chan.
“I know. And you should be happy that Biyuuden is still alive”
“I don’t want Biyuuden if it means to lose her!”
This time the shout lost all its strength ‘cause the words chocked in her throat when she couldn’t restrain the tears. But Tsunku didn’t care about that and go back to his papers.
“You should leave now”
Miki didn’t say a word and tried to calm Ishikawa guiding her to the door. It’s true that she didn’t fight against Tsunku’s decision but, what she could do? If Yocchan has gone, Miki’s priority was to try to find her no matter what, and then she could worry about their boss and the group. Her heart was first.
“Fujimoto-san, could you stay a moment, please?”
Tsunku’s request took her by surprise. The last thing she wanted it was to be there talking while her girlfriend was who knows where. But, as much as she want to run, Miki obeyed and seated in the chair in front of her boss, letting Rika to leave the office alone.
“If it’s about the leader duties you don’t have to worry. I’ll take charge of all” she tried to go straight to the main point to finish as soon as possible.
“I know. But it’s not that what I wanna talk about” he said “Yoshizawa-san also told me about you”
“You mean… About us?”
“Yes and honestly, I can’t say that I’m happy about it” he sighed as if he had a great load upon her shoulders “God knows how many headaches Nakazawa and Yasuda gave me and your situation is even worst. But.., she sounded serious…”
Then he took something out of the drawer and gave it to Miki. It was a plain brown envelope with her name wrote it in. She wasn’t sure about what to do. If the content inside it was going to be a goodbye letter… then it was better to not open it. But, maybe, it was a message, a hint about where to find her…
She didn’t want to think too much about it and, breathing deeply, Miki took the envelope from Tsunku’s hand and opened it.
There wasn’t a letter, not even a sentence.
Just a single word.
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Evilness! *dies*
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Suspense ><
-chases you with fan-
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Next one is the last one??? T_T I don'r want it to end. I love this fic!!!!
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Len you are evil I say! I hope it isn't the word I am thinking it is.
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There wasn’t a letter, not even a sentence.
Just a single word.
:haihao: ......... DOKIRI !!!............ :haihao:
lol how i wished it was that simple :D
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If that word was "Goodbye", then all I can think of is suicide!
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If that word was "Goodbye", then all I can think of is suicide!
same here
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^Same here...
Next one will be the last:cry:
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just one thing before you begin to read..
there's a song that has inspired me for this last chapter so, I suggest to listen it while reading. It's Ayu's "Rainy day".
and now...
***60***
“Nono! Leave those sandwiches on the table again, now!”
The younger dropped the plate and ran to hide at the kitchen after hearing Gocchin’s shout, but even so, she manage to keep one of the sandwiches. Maki saw it and ran after her.
“You better call your friend, Aya” said Shiba-chan to the soloist and laughing at the view of Maki and Nono’s war for the food “If she’s not here soon Non-chan won’t leave anything to her”
“She should be here already. She doesn’t live so far away…” answered Matsuura taking her cell-phone.
Before she could press Miki’s number the door bell ringed.
“Go” said Shibata pointing to the door “I’ll try to make peace between those two or this will end being a bloody party”
Aya nodded and went to open the door. That party was supposed to be something to cheer up Miki after two weeks enclosed at home and in her work. She had refused a few times but, being Christmas and seeing the effort that Maki was doing, even offering her apartment for the party, she finally couldn’t say no. Of course, she wouldn’t be Miki if she wasn’t late.
“Well… come”
Everybody turned to look at the door where Aya was standing frozen. Even Nono, who had jumped victorious upon Gocchin’s back, drop the sandwich.
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“You’re sure you don’t wanna come with us?”
“Thanks, Mama” answered Rika-chan with a charming smile “But I’m going to meet with Ayumi later. Enjoy the party, ok?”
“Ok. Good night my dear”
Ishikawa’s mom left her daughter’s room, closing the door behind her. Rika hated to lie to her mother but the last she wanted it was a party with unknown people. It’s true that Shiba-chan told her to go to the party at Maki’s home but how could she dare to go after all the troubles she caused? She didn’t even deserve Shibata’s friendship…
She went near the window and stared at the sky. It was cloudy. Maybe would rain.
I can’t be with you.
Even if it was all a lie, we hurt each other too much.
I loved you, Rika-chan, you can’t imagine how much, but without trust there’s no hope.
Maybe, someday, we’ll be able to forget.
“Forget…”
Suddenly, someone knocked at the door and made her return to reality. Her mother should have forgotten to say something.
“Sorry” said the girl standing in the doorway “Your mom told me to come upstairs”
“Yui?” it was the last person Ishikawa was expecting to see that night “What are you doing here?”
“I wanted to give you something”
The younger extended her arm and show a little box in her hand.
“It’s not a great thing, just a pair of earrings that I saw a few days ago. It’s just to make you know that you’re not alone and that everything will be ok” Yui smiled and took Rika’s hands on hers “People shouldn’t be alone on Christmas Eve”
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“Where are you?”
“At the park. I’ll be there in ten minutes” answered Miki at her friend on the phone.
“Ok. Don’t worry. Take your time and enjoy the walk, we’ll be waiting”
Miki hanged up the phone and keep it in her bag again.
“Enjoy the walk?” she repeated with confusion “She’s already drunk or what?
She didn’t have intention of taking the way through the park to reach Maki’s place, but someway she ended there. It was darker and more peaceful than the road outside. There was just a few couples walking hand in hand, looking at each other with love.
The hand in her pocket touched a folded paper that was always with her. She took it and, even in the dark, she could see the worn-out edges. But as many times as she read it, there was always the same word in it.
“Wait…”
But for how long Yocchan?
Two weeks. Fourteen days. An eternity. The hours didn’t seem to pass when you’re waiting for the phone to ring or a knock at the door. When you can’t sleep and spend the nights talking with a dog that answer your questions with a damp lick.
You’ll come back, right? You can’t make me love you so much and then leave me alone again.
Suddenly a shiver travelled all around her body. It was getting colder and the sky it was very cloudy. She should hurry up to arrive to the party if she wasn’t to get wet
Then a little, white, spot fell on her shoulder and, after analysing it carefully, Fujimoto raised her head and look at the clouds.
It’s snowing?
She stayed there, unable to move, looking at the white rain falling slowly from the sky. A snowflake fell right under her left eye and the water running down her cheek make her shiver again. But she didn’t care. She closed her eyes and captured the sensation.
That’s how I feel since you’re not around. Frozen, as if nothing could warm my heart ‘till the day you’ll touch me again. At least, if I close my eyes, I still can feel your hands caressing my skin, like right now, as if you were wiping these cold tears. I even can smell the fragrance of your hair coming together with the wind and filling all my senses...
“Make a wish”
The voice it was so real that, for a moment, Miki thought that she had fallen asleep but even so, still with her eyes closed, she answered.
“To have you here”
This time, the hand caressing her cheek felt more real and it wasn’t cold anymore. And then, coming with a warming wave, there was a kiss. A kiss and a sweet smile that made the world shine again.
“Wish granted”
I know it now, Yocchan. I know the meaning of what people call great love. It’s not a fairy tail; it’s not about princes riding white horses or bewitched princesses waiting for a kiss to be free… Great love is that one that shakes your soul, the one that makes you smile even if you wanna cry, that changes the world around you…
That’s why, even if it hurts sometimes, I wanna love and be loved in return.
The... end?
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ok ok.. I'm not teasing or anything else.. this is the last chapter, THE END, but if I had enough time I'd like to write an epilogue. I'm still not sure...
Now, I'd like to request something.
This has been really difficut for me and my only goal it was always to make you feel good reading. You know I'd never asked for people to make comments about the chapters but, now that it's over, I'd like to know your thoughts about the whole fic. So, if you really liked it and have some time, post some review, even if it's short.
that's all.
thank you for reading and supporting this fic all this time and...
MERRY CHRISTMAS!
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I have the pleasure to be the first one to post a comment.
Thanks for write this great fanfic. Is my favourite one as I have told before.
I don't like when something that I like ends. But it's inevitable.
I love the " "make a wish" "To have you here" " part. It's really touching.
Now I haven't got time, but I'll write another comment about the whole fic another day ^_^
Please write another fic as good as this one soon ;) (I would like another Yochan story :P)
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Awwww~! I love it~! Love the ending mucho!
Very cute ending to top all of the drama off, WOO~!
And I love the song too XD
This is one of my favorite stories of all H!P fandom. For once I was brought into it, I was definitely lulled into the drama, each chapter bringing more questions and answers than the last. Even I, who usually has great accuracy in predicting story events, had trouble trying to guess what happens next in this epic :]. You swept me through a hella lotta emotions with Yossie and Miki and all the crap they had to endure because of Rika, sign of a kickass authoress XD And then all the sweet moments are so sweet, it gave me diabetes (Not IRL o_O) <3
Nonetheless, I look forward to your next masterpiece~!
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Len.chan, that was a truly awesome fic!! I was totally captivated from the start, and stalked your blog for updates! The ending was so beautiful, it almost brought a tear to my eye. (I don't cry, so that's saying a lot.) I really do hope you decide to write an epilogue for this. The ending is great and leaves nothing hanging, but more of a good thing is always better! Please continue to write!!! :baa60776:
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You know, I already said it in your blog but since it's your request....
I LOVED this fic.
just from the begginig to the end.:panda_love:
the problems, the love, the pervs, the "I-skiped-a-heartbeat" moments... :ONfarofflook:
It was the first H!P fic I red and certaibly was the biggest motive I'm (trying) to make a fic of my own now....
Just awesome!:tfr9a7wg:
The ending was perfect.
Concluded everything in such a beautifull way...
I really don't think an epiloguye is necesary here. Great stories have a begining, a midle and an end. This is a fantastic end. And it sure is a great story. Nothing more is needed.:ONcool2:
What we need now is another masterpiece fic made by Len-sama!:baa60776:
Thanks for everything!:panda_love:
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i love this!!! my favorite fic!! XD
thank you for this great story!!
like everyone said before this was (is) a awesome, fantastic, beautiful grand fic!!
oh! and i have to admit that if i'm a yossie, miki and gocchin fan now.... it's just because your fic! hehehe
congratulations!!! merry christmas for everyone.... and
now i have to go.... today's hello morning day!! XD yay!
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Sweet ending.
The only thing I'm pissed about is Erika, if you were gonna make her evil you should have made her punishment harsher, lol. :D
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I agree that Erika should have had a harsher punnishment. And I like how you have everyone with someone on christmas. If feels bad to be alone on the holidays.
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I love this fic!:inlove: And ending was great. It's Christmas Eve now, so reading this was my best present.
I just want to say THANKS len.chan. I will be missing the feeling when I saw a new chapter here.
And Merry Christmas to you and everyone else too!
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thank you guys, for all the love and support you've shown.
so, people don't want an epilogue? ok.. less work hahah XD
but I'm going to say something... after holidays I'm thinking to start a new fic and something like an spin off from WLH we'll see if I can make both at the same time XD
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Yeee! We'll wait anxiously! ^^
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I've read the chapters and the ending got me. I was confused over. You might want to go ahead and put a short epilogue spanning a couple of months later to see if anybody would still be together
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so, people don't want an epilogue? ok.. less work hahah XD
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! :kcrazy: :ON@_@:
EPILOGUE!!! EPIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIILOGUE!!!!! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEPILOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOGUE!!!
:ONfrustrated: :ONpleeease: :ONcry: :ONtantrum: :MKwhine:
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well, seeing JFC desperate post XD I've made a short epilogue. don't expect too much 'cause is just a little, conclusive chapter showing something a like two months after the end.
please, enjoy it and HAPPY NEW YEAR!! ^^
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When Love Hurts
A new start
Yoshizawa was trying to breathe normally but her heart beat faster within every second. She was used to the big stage, the shouts from the crowd, the crazy fans.., but now the butterflies in her stomach were beginning to be more like elephants. Why she was so nervous this time?
She looked first at her right, then at her left and finally stuck her eyes in the ground and released a deep sigh.
I’m gonna kill Gocchin for this…
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“Yocchan? Are you all right?
Fujimoto saw the shock on her girlfriend’s face after hearing Tsunku’s news and went towards her to check if she was ok, but when she arrive near Yossi, the taller made her to move back.
“You’re crazy!” shouted Momusu’s leader.
“Hey, I think it’s a great idea”
Gocchin’s comment made Yoshizawa turn to the soloist and send her a glare, but Maki remained calm, leant against Tsunku’s desk, with a smile that irritated Yossi.
“You expect me to be in a group with my girlfriend, my too ex-girlfriends and someone who probably hates me for stealing the love of her life…” she said turning to her boss again and with a more relaxed tone in her voice “There’s no way this works…”
“To be honest, it wasn’t going to be like this…” the man leant against his chair and look at the five girls in front of him “I wanted a solo, after all is your song, but Nakazawa-san suggested the unit as a way to rebuild the bonds of the family. I’m still not sure what she was talking about, though”
At this point, Hitomi banged the desk in rage again and scared the other girls.
“That’s another question” she said with her eyes glued to the wooden table trying to not exceed the limits with her boss “How the hell that song arrived to you?”
“I guess that’s my fault” answered Maki raising her hand before Tsunku could tell anything “You said it was trash so I took it, gave it to some people to make the arrangements and, someway, it ended upon Tsunku-san’s desk. Come on, that song deserves to be singed and you deserve to sing it”
Yossi seemed to give up finally and dropped on the chair behind her, defeated.
“Hey, let’s do it” said Miki sweetly and kneeling next to her girlfriend and taking her hand “I want to sing that song with you”
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If it wasn’t for you I wouldn’t have the strength enough…
Yoshizawa felt a hand taking hers and, as a miracle, the insecurity disappeared. She looked at the smaller girl at her side and smiled.
It happened so much since that night, since you opened your heart to me and saved my life…
“These two are so cute~” commented Maki watching the scene.
“Look who’s talking. How’s Shiba-chan doing?” strike back Miki.
“That’s none of your business…”
“You know…” whispered Rika-chan “Ayumi told me…”
“Shut up!”
Maki’s shout made everybody laugh and the pressure for the performance seemed to evaporate. Even with their differences, the problems, the loves and hates, they still could have fun together.
“Girls” said Yocchan with solemnity as the leader that she was and taking all hands together “Let’s enjoy today, let’s make it a new start”
The end
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I love it!
I hope this unit will exist some day
Thanks once again len.chan
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well, seeing JFC desperate post XD I've made a short epilogue. don't expect too much 'cause is just a little, conclusive chapter showing something a like two months after the end.
:D :D :D
“Look who’s talking. How’s Shiba-chan doing?” strike back Miki.
“That’s none of your business…”
“You know…” whispered Rika-chan “Ayumi told me…”
“Shut up!”
Gold right there. :lol:
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Ok so I went through and read it beginnign to end.
Len.chan, it was so sweet it really moved me.
I started to review my position in life with all those who I loved. You tale is inspirational. I would like to make a classics thread or something where the story is placed so people can read it uninterrupted by comments, from beginnging to end. That would be nice I think.
I really enjoyed the final chapter with Miki making the wish and the snow and ah...SWEETNESS!! my heart finally ached at that last moment. I tried so hard to keep it all together but that final moment there really hit me :)
My favourite moment apart from that would be the massive intervention with all the girls and Yuko screams at them "Raise your fucking hands"
It just really suits her and imagining that moment gives me stitches.
Maki is a real player in this story but I like that she found some sort of content love in the end.
Wow, Rika is a real psycho but not as much as Erika.
Miki is Miki. Hot headed and just generally hot. Im glad that she threw a few well deserved punches because I couldnt think of her going through all this and not kicking someone's ass.
Yossui seems rather reserved and I think by saying that I'll get a lot of disagreement from other readers. Thats just what I picked up. She internalises things and apparently this is what she is like in real life.
About aya...hmm...well I liked her role. I like the position she took. How she, dispite the pain it caused her, let Miki go. I suppose she had the most realistic story. You know, when someone loves you but you ignore it. But once that love goes, you feel empty and do anything to have it back. I must admit I found myself secretly chanting "kiss her, dammit Miki!! She's better than Yossui"
But then I slapped myself and reverted back to my YoMiki shipping.
Love you Len.Chan.
Lets see that cover, ok?
I cant believe the story is over ( -_-)
Im glad you wrote it ^^
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It's going to take more talent than I have to fix the damage you've done to Erika's reputation. Damn you, lol. Overall, loved the whole story, I'll have to go back and read the thing in one sitting to get the full effect, or just to relive the happy/sadness.
Love love loved! the epilogue, I'm glad things could begin to work out for them all. Except Erika.... Damn you....
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i've read the whole story, and it's really great,,,! veru touching, love the epilogue too,,,
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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!! EPILOGUE!!!!!:ONluvluv1:
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it feels weird to post the cover when the story it's finished but, anyway, 'cause Mikan requested it, here it is XD
*aaah~ Yocchan.. doshite??! :ONcry: *
(http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/4552/portadawlhcd9.th.jpg) (http://img182.imageshack.us/my.php?image=portadawlhcd9.jpg)
It's plain and simple, but I like things that way :P
aah.. one more thing..
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!! EPILOGUE!!!!! :ONluvluv1:
I love that kind of comments XDXD
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My eyes hurt :lol:
I just read this whole fic AND all the comments and no joke it took me about 7 hours coz i read the chapters real slow so I could absorb everything
This is just wonderful and I am sure by now you have written more (do point me to them :P) but this being the 1st and such a great first makes it so special.
I'm kinda speechless just running through everything that happened in my head, and *gasp* you made me feel sorry for Rika which trust me, is hard to do ;)
Now I am so tired, its almost 1am and I have to work in 7 hours but my final point can anyone show me if there was been any Shicchin written coz I am now so :wub: :inlove: :heart: over them (they made my heart skip a beat many times)
Oh oh oh and I forgot, the last line in chapter 20 "Great love is that one that shakes your soul, the one that makes you smile even if you wanna cry, that changes the world around you…
That’s why, even if it hurts sometimes, I wanna love and be loved in return." means a lot for me right now is probably one of my favourite quotes I have ever heard anyway! :heart:
Thanks for this amazing story.
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My eyes hurt :lol:
I just read this whole fic AND all the comments
ME TOO lol
congratulations on the creativity, man, really. I think I'll not read another fic for sometime, I still have to recover from this one. (oh, and the links for the perv chapters are broken, if len still reads this thread, you should fiz it, I went crazy looking for it :P)
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My eyes hurt :lol:
I just read this whole fic AND all the comments
ME TOO lol
congratulations on the creativity, man, really. I think I'll not read another fic for sometime, I still have to recover from this one. (oh, and the links for the perv chapters are broken, if len still reads this thread, you should fiz it, I went crazy looking for it :P)
You could go to Len.chan's Blog, There you can find all his fics, including this
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You could go to Len.chan's Blog, There you can find all his fics, including this
Her fics. Our great Len is a lady :)
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You could go to Len.chan's Blog, There you can find all his fics, including this
Her fics. Our great Len is a lady :)
Opss...sorry :oops:
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thanks for all your comments ^^
I'm really glad that there's still people reading this.
Sorry about the links. They went down when the forum changed and I forgot to update it. Now I can't do it 'cause I'm just able to connect at work and I don't have enough time.
As Kreuz_ said you can go to my blog. There's everything. lensficblog.blogspot.com (http://lensficblog.blogspot.com)
PS: I want my connection baaack
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“Make a wish”
The voice it was so real that, for a moment, Miki thought that she had fallen asleep but even so, still with her eyes closed, she answered.
“To have you here”
This time, the hand caressing her cheek felt more real and it wasn’t cold anymore. And then, coming with a warming wave, there was a kiss. A kiss and a sweet smile that made the world shine again.
“Wish granted”
:cry: :cry: :cry:
Great story!! I love it so much!! :)
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OH! MY! GAAAHH!!!!!!
WAS AMAZING!!!
I LOVE IT ._. and I love you for made it xD
Hope you could write more =)
PS: Siquiera tu si entenderas cuando digo, que en verdad me encanto tu Historia, mas x que soy una Yomiki fan xD
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OH! MY! GAAAHH!!!!!!
WAS AMAZING!!!
I LOVE IT ._. and I love you for made it xD
Hope you could write more =)
PS: Siquiera tu si entenderas cuando digo, que en verdad me encanto tu Historia, mas x que soy una Yomiki fan xD
it's an amazing story, i love yomiki too. I have read it about 3 times *friki*
PS: uuh hablas español XD es muy buena, por eso tiene tantas vistas :cow:
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OH! MY! GAAAHH!!!!!!
WAS AMAZING!!!
I LOVE IT ._. and I love you for made it xD
Hope you could write more =)
PS: Siquiera tu si entenderas cuando digo, que en verdad me encanto tu Historia, mas x que soy una Yomiki fan xD
it's an amazing story, i love yomiki too. I have read it about 3 times *friki*
PS: uuh hablas español XD es muy buena, por eso tiene tantas vistas :cow:
Yeah YOMIKI <3 ForEver xD~
I read all in her blog too xD
PS: Si hablo Español, y adoro esta historia xD voy a buscar mas Yomiki =D
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really?? i read it in her blog too :D
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really?? i read it in her blog too :D
We have the same stalking pastimes xD
Hope she update some day the Traveler =D
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I really loved this fanfic...especially the ending. It was really sweet and im sooo glad you did it on my fave pairing. 本当にありがとう！ I liked badass rika but the ending when theyre all friends again makes me happy. Too bad Yocchan and Miki didnt form a group under UPA together...i wanna complain to Tsunku bout making the elder club graduate...And Dream Momusu only has one single and from what i remember so far, one concert only...Anyways, this is the best yomiki fanfic ive ever read.Im so glad you decided to write this. I guess my comment is just rly late...coz im slow at realising stuff. But im glad i didnt hv to wait for the next chapter :P. I rly look up to you. Keep writing! がんばれ！ Len-chan you can do it! :D