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Offline 48matama

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Unite Because of Music [Chapter 1]
« on: May 22, 2014, 02:33:01 PM »
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Sister

Unite Because of Music
Chapter 1


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THIS IS MY FIRST FANFIC ;A; :panic:

I hope you love it ;A;

Since it very short ._.

I think this is a drabble -3-

Anyway, you know who talk with Jurina right?

Sorry for my bad english .__.


SISTER

-At hospital where Gekikara stabbed-
-After Gekikara conscious-
“Am i allowed to visit?” said the brown cardigan girl.“I think she’s be happy” the black cardigan girl reply “She just woke up” she continued.“What do i talk about?” she asked again.“Whatever you thinking” she said again, still in cold way.“I’m not thinking of anything” she said more in cold way.“Then how about the weather?” the black cardigan girl trying to smile.“Who cares about the weather?” the brown cardigan girl started to mad.“You’re an odd one” she said “Since you’ve gone through it before” the brown cardigan girl look at she.“Why don’t you talk about when you can gey your stitches out after being stabbed?” she continued with smile and go away.
“H-how did she know? (╯°□°)╯”
-Gekikara’s room-
“Rena-chan...”
“I’m Gekikara”
“You’re still rena-chan!’ said the younger girl with pout.
“Whatever you want...” said the older one.
“Why must she do it to you?” the younger girl pout again.
“I’m still alive, Center...” the girl who now Amakuchi said.
“Don’t call me Center~ It just we, right?” Center said jokingly.
“Why must i call you Jurina?” said Gekikara.
“Because....
Your my sister~” Center said before peek Gekikara’s cheek.
“Center! Stop it!” Gekikara blushed.
“Rena-chaann~”

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So.... how it is?  :banghead:

Please comment  :bow:

Anyway... it very short isn't it?._.
« Last Edit: July 01, 2014, 07:24:02 AM by 48matama »

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Re: Sister [Wmatsui]
« Reply #1 on: May 22, 2014, 02:44:48 PM »
CUTE~ :D WELCOME TO THE WORLD OF WRITER~  :welcome HAHAHA!
U should write it longer~  :cathappy:
MA~ I'll look forward to ur story~  :D

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Re: Sister [Wmatsui]
« Reply #2 on: May 22, 2014, 04:17:24 PM »
Oh My God! Cuteness overlooooaaad~  XD
But it's too shoooort!! Hahahah
But I like it :D
But I want moree.. lol *ignore this XD*

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Re: Sister [Wmatsui]
« Reply #3 on: May 22, 2014, 05:30:27 PM »
This is so cute!
I really loved this.  :mon inluv:
I wish it was longer but it's good for your first try!  :mon firecrack:
You will get better as time goes on.
Still it is very cute and I love it.
Keep up the good work! :mon thumb:

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Re: Sister [Wmatsui]
« Reply #4 on: May 23, 2014, 12:36:04 AM »
OMG THATS SOO KAWAII!!! :heart: :heart: :heart:
Aww Jurina chan is such a cute sister here and Rena chan hahah so cold towards her  :deco: :deco:
AWESOME Wmatsui fanfic  :heart: :heart: :heart:
Please make more Wmatsui in the future!!!  :cathappy: :cathappy:
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Re: Sister [Wmatsui]
« Reply #5 on: May 23, 2014, 06:32:56 AM »
oh majisuka gakuen  AU

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Re: Sister [Wmatsui]
« Reply #6 on: June 11, 2014, 09:27:52 PM »
Please update

It so cute

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Re: Sister [Wmatsui]
« Reply #7 on: June 11, 2014, 10:29:45 PM »
Wah~ So cute!!! :nya: :luvluv1: :luvluv2: :wriggly:
I want more~  :on study:
This is really nice! :on GJ:
Keep up the good work! :onioncheer: :byebye:


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Re: Sister [Wmatsui]
« Reply #8 on: June 12, 2014, 11:02:15 AM »
@Zhen Thanks for your comment ><  i will write more longer~ i will! for now, this is just my idea ><
again, thanks for your comment ><  :deco:

@White Hawk : is this cute? >< this is too short ;A; i have no idea >< i will write more long fics ><)/ anyway, thanks for your comment  :cow:

@Ambenya : sorry, it was short ><)/ i have no idea >< anyway, Thanks for your comment ><)

@akbfangirl24 : Yes, she is cute~ kk I will make more wmatsui~ Anyway, thanks for your comment ><

@Haruko : yes, it is~ anyway, thanks for your comment~

Kirozoro : update? Kk i don't know~
Maybe i will post a new fanfics~
An idea just popped to my head

@River1721 : Really? I don't think its cute  :sweatdrop:
Don't worry~ an idea just popped to my head ><

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Re: Sister [Wmatsui]
« Reply #9 on: June 13, 2014, 06:30:20 PM »
umm majijo fic, right? so, it's geki & center... and they're sister?
aaah cute! kawaiii!
interesting, a nice start 48matama :) :thumbsup
btw, me want more, i'm curious with this fic hehehe :grin:
i'll wait your update, so update soon! :D
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Re: Sister [Wmatsui]
« Reply #10 on: June 30, 2014, 04:35:49 PM »
I come with new fanfic!

This fanfic has Friendship genre i guess

And the writer is not me, but my friend

I just help she to get an idea~

Happy reading!

Warning : This is really OOC ><



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UNITE BECAUSE OF MUSIC

Chapter 1: Shonichi

It was a simple day... Well, not too simple or ordinary, it was the opening ceremony of the new years in "Tokyo Gakuen" this is no ordinary school, it consist talents and grades to get in here. It was a female only school. A lot of pretty girls walked in as they smile and enter the school.

"Move..." said a girl to the students that were blocking her way coldly
. Her uniform is a little bit different from the others. [Just like yankee]
She walks like a boy and enter the school. She looked at the big board.

1-A

That was her class, a name was written in there "Suda Akari". That was the girl's name. Entering the classroom and layed her head on the table and started to sleep.
"I'm tired~"
A teacher came and bowed her head. Akarin immediately pull up her head.
"I'm Umeda, and you can call me Umeda sensei. I'll be your homeroom teacher this year."
Suddenly the door got knocked.
"come in!" said the teacher. And a small little girl, who's really shy came in.
"s-sumima-sen... I'm sorry i'm late, i'm new in Tokyo, s-so... I'm very sorry" said the little girl.
"That is fine, just go to your seat now, and we'll begin the introduction."
"My name is Shimazaki Haruka, but everyone calls me Paruru."
"I'm Yamamoto Sayaka."
"I'm Watanabe Miyuki, and it sounds just like Milky, that's why i like milk" said the cheerful girl.
"Suda Akari desu..." she said in front of the class and got back to her seat.
"Tashima Meru... Desu... I'm fron Osaka. Yoroshiku..." she said shyly.
Class gone as usual and it's break time, which everyone is waiting for.

Cafeteria sells a lot of delicious japanese food.
"Uwaaa, i could eat everything in here!" said Akarin and she choose a plate of curry for her lunch. When she finished, she went to her table without looking who was infront of her so she bumped into Meru and...
"MY UNIFORM!" it was filled with curry. "Hey Osaka! Don't you have eyes? Look what you've done to my shirt?" she said angrily.
"I-i'm very sorry, i didn't see you, please forgive me."
"Forgive you??" she said while pulling Meru's collar.
"Hey! She didn't do it on purpose!" said a pretty girl who clenched her fist looking at Akarin.
"Dare? Wait... I know, we're from the same class right? Saya... Saya... What was your name again?" said Akarin mocking her.
"Sayaka... Now, leave her alone!"
"Why don't you make me?" those sentences made Sayanee angry and pull Akarin's hand and ready to punch her.
"Hey! Don't fight here!" said Paruru who just came into the cafeteria.
"URUSEYOO" said both of them and pushed Paruru until she fell.
"HEY!" she got a little bit mad. And between the fight, someone tapped Akarin's shoulder. Akarin turned her head and see a cute girl with a smile.
"Matte..." said the cheerful girl, and she drank her melon juice and spit it to Akarin, but she was fast to duck and it got to someone else... Umeda Sensei...
"FIVE OF YOU! DETENTION!" she screamed.
The first day of school and they already got detention. The detention was at an unused room. The five of them sat and be quiet for a long time until Umeda sensei went to the toilet.
"This is all your fault!" said Akarin pointing at Meru.
"I'm sorry..."
"You don't have to say sorry Meru, she was the one who faught first." said Sayanee which make Akarin hit sayanee's table which is behind her.
"Can you guys be quiet?? I don't wanna get into another trouble!" said Paruru. While Meru was panicing, Milky who was super calm, she was drawing manga, stopped her pencils and stood up which attract the five's attention.
"BE QUIET! JUST FOR ONCE!" and that made the whole class quiet. "Thank you" and she went back to her seat. Sayanee was bored so she stood up and walk around the unused room. She saw a guitar and picked it up, she got back to her seat and played a little song. Paruru and Meru on the other hand notice what song she was playing.

Yume wa ase no naka ni
Sukoshi zutsu saite yuku hana
Sono doryoku kesshite uragiranai
Yume wa ase no naka ni
Me wo dashite zutto matte iru
Itsuka kitto negai kanau made

Meru started singing and Paruru helped the 'alto' voice. It was a really beautifull melody mad by Sayanee, and Akarin tapped her fingers which made some beat through the song. Milky on the other hand only clapped along until Sayanee stopped.
"Milky, you can play piano right?"
"Unn, i played since little."
"Hey you, your beat is nice." said Sayanee
"I played drun once." said Akarin.
"And both of your voice unites."
"Thanks!" said both Paruru and Meru.
"So we all like music, how nice?" said Sayanee. The teacher came back from the toilet.
"Okay, your detention is done, you can go back, and sayanee please bring that guitar back."
"Uh, right, sorry sensei." said Sayanee.

They went out from that room together.
"What if we made a band?" asked Milky.
"Band?" asked Akarin.
"Come on it'll be fun!" said Milky again.
"It sounds nice Milky!" said Sayanee.
"Uhm, if it doesn't itterupt my schedule than i'm in!" said Paruru.
"How about you Meru?" asked Sayanee.
"Uhm..."
"Now, that i think about it... It's been a while since i played drum. I'm in!" Akarin cut.
"I don't think i can. Sorry." said Meru and then leave.

'We need to get her in here.' said Sayanee in her heart.

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So.... could she continue this?
« Last Edit: June 30, 2014, 04:44:46 PM by 48matama »

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Re: Unite Because of Music [Chapter 1]
« Reply #11 on: July 05, 2014, 08:18:08 PM »
She's already continue this :v
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Re: Unite Because of Music [Chapter 1]
« Reply #12 on: July 05, 2014, 08:48:50 PM »
YES PLEASE!!!

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Re: Unite Because of Music [Chapter 1]
« Reply #13 on: July 06, 2014, 06:08:39 AM »
ohh~ nice plot :)

you should continue this :twothumbs
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Re: Unite Because of Music [Chapter 1]
« Reply #14 on: July 07, 2014, 08:59:34 PM »
Do  continue ~  :twothumbs

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Re: Sister [Wmatsui]
« Reply #15 on: July 09, 2014, 10:23:37 AM »
yes, you can continue.
continue it please! :D
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Re: Unite Because of Music [Chapter 1]
« Reply #16 on: July 27, 2014, 05:53:14 AM »
Next chapter please... beb :****
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