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Offline XxRoByNxX78

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A/N: Was listening to Scandal's playboy and well I got a fic idea lol hope you enjoy it and comment so I know if it should
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Playgirls
By XxRoByNxX78

Name: Watanabe Mayu

Playgirl
emotineless
hates people other than her bestfriends
hates skinship
Yuko's oshiri sister
Best friends: Oshima Yuko, Itano Tomomi
very smart
17
Her parents died when she was 6
grown up in a orphanage
otaku

Name: Oshima Yuko

Playgirl
perverted
Mayu's oshiri sister
18
grown up in a orphanage
Best friends: Itano Tomomi, Watannabe Mayu
Protective over those she loves

Name: Itano Tomomi

playgirl
18
grown up in a oprhanage
Bestfriends: Watannabe Mayu, Oshima Yuko
Cold
Sarcastic
fashion queen
Only shows her warm side to the people she cares about

Name: kashiwagi Yuki

Sweet girl
reaction queen
popular
hates playgirls
kind
sweet
18
Bestfriends: Maeda Atsuko, Kasai Tomomi

Name: Maeda Atsuko

18
Bestfriends: Kasai Tomomi, Kaswhaghi Yuki
kind
sweet
hates playgirls
secret perv
stubborn
smart
popular

Name: Kasai Tomomi

18
Hates playgirls
sweet
says Chiyuu at the end of sentences
popular
loves fashion
thick skulled
« Last Edit: September 02, 2015, 05:59:40 PM by XxRoByNxX78 »

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Re: Playgirls 24/3/13 Character description (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu)
« Reply #1 on: March 24, 2013, 08:45:02 PM »
*nod nod nod* I like the idea very much! Please continue!
“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

I'm glad I'm not popular.I'm already a bitch, no need to make my ego bigger.

You were always my favorite, no one loved me as much as you did.-Alison DiLaurentis.

Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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Re: Playgirls 24/3/13 Character description (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu)
« Reply #2 on: March 24, 2013, 08:50:01 PM »
Lol it seems good i hope you  continue the characters sound funny

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Re: Playgirls 24/3/13 Character description (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu)
« Reply #3 on: March 24, 2013, 09:14:57 PM »
please continue the story

and I love your pairings so I am interested in your story

please update soon
Love AKB
             ~TakaYuu~
                           ~AtsuMina~
                                          ~KojiYuu~
                                                      ~TomoTomo~
                                           ~MariMii~
                           ~Wmatsui~
             ~MaYuki~

Love this Pairing
                                And more ^^

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Re: Playgirls 24/3/13 Character description (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu)
« Reply #4 on: March 24, 2013, 10:10:03 PM »
i like the idea and the pairings
this fic seems promising to me
please continue

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Re: Playgirls 24/3/13 Character description (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu)
« Reply #5 on: March 24, 2013, 11:09:45 PM »
I can't wait to see and read this fic  :cathappy: :deco:

Mayuki&WMatsui
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Re: Playgirls 24/3/13 Character description (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu)
« Reply #6 on: March 25, 2013, 12:22:45 AM »
i like atsuyuu :D
You have to continue the story :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

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Re: Playgirls 24/3/13 Character description (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu)
« Reply #7 on: March 25, 2013, 02:54:40 AM »
It's looks like it'll be a romantic comedy fic with a little crack here and there... Me like... Continue please *nod nod* :D

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Re: Playgirls 24/3/13 Character description (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu)
« Reply #8 on: March 25, 2013, 06:42:57 AM »
i like the idea!! and that song is so freaking awesome!! i will be waiting for your chapters :3

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Re: Playgirls 24/3/13 Character description (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu)
« Reply #9 on: March 25, 2013, 12:05:47 PM »
 :twothumbs i'm waiting for your update. don't make it long kay. hahaha

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Re: Playgirls 24/3/13 Character description (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu)
« Reply #10 on: March 25, 2013, 02:14:26 PM »
Atsuyuu it's a rare couple
But I like the idea, can't wait for the chapter!  :twothumbs

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Re: Playgirls 24/3/13 Character description (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu)
« Reply #11 on: March 26, 2013, 04:23:03 PM »
Playgirls
By XxRoByNxX78

Prologue

"Mayu we are leaving now!" Shouted a handsome man fixing his tie. "Wait wait wait!" A little girl screamed running down the stairs jumping off the last step into her fathers arms. "I want to give you and mama a good bye kiss." The girl cutely admitted looking down at the floor shyly as she hooked her arms around her fathers neck. "Okay but after that you go straight to bed." The man said tapping his daughters nose playfully earning a pout from the latter. "No complaining." He ordered softly. The girl just nodded and put her head into the crook of her fathers neck. "I wish I had my camera this image is just so cute." Said a women walking towards the man and women. "Mama how long will you be gone for?" Asked the girl lifting her head up to face her mother.

"Not long Mayu we promise." Replied her mother stroking Mayu's hair gently. "We must be leaving now." Said Mayu's father kissing his daughters cheek. "Bye bye Mayu we love you." Said her mother kissing Mayu's forehead then pointed to her cheek silently asking for a kiss in which Mayu quickly said yes to jumping up slightly from her fathers arm to kiss her mother. "Where is my kiss Mayu...." Whined her father childishly. Mayu smiled and kissed her fathers cheek turning his frown upside down. "Jake come take Mayu to bed please!" Her father shouted and a average height man with short black hair came scurrying towards them. "Yes sir come on Mayu time to sleep." Jake took Mayu from her fathers arms and started climbing up the steps to take little Mayu to her room.

1 hour later

"Mayu wake up wake up." Said Jake shaking Mayu side to side. Mayu opened her eyes to be mat with the teary eyed face of Jake. "Mayu sit up okay I have some important to tell you." Mayu pushed herself up to lean against her bed frame. "Your parents they .... they.....th...they were in a car crash and they ...... did'nt make it I'm sorry Mayu." Mayu looked blankly at the man in front of her. So many emotions crashed into her tiny body and mind however she wouldnt let them show she wanted to be strong.
Jake pulled the small girl into her arms and whispered to her to cry but she refused to.

"Mama papa why did you leave me?"

Weeks later

"I am not having that thing live with me!"

"Neither am I ever since her parents have died she has been nothing but trouble!"

"I dont want a rat like that living in my house dont think the two of you can pawn her off to me!"

"Please my ladies Mayu is a amazing little girl she needs you in her life she needs someone to look after her."

"Then why dont you?"

"Because since her parents died I cant even look after myself infact I have to move back to England soon."

"Well then dont get involved you idiot."

"Bu-"

"No buts the child will not stay with any of us she can live in a orphanage let them take care of the rat who stains our family name."

Mayu who was sitting on the stairs had heard everything. Tears threatened to escape from her brown eyes. "Mama papa why couldnt you have took me with you?"

1 week later

"Mayu I want you to be a good girl okay do not do anything bad okay?" Asked jake as he kneeled down to Mayu's height fixing the small girls scarf to keep her warm in the cold weather. "Okay Jake." Answered Mayu showing her now usual emotionless face. "I'm gonna miss you Mayu I love you." Said jake kissing Mayu's cheek standing up and knocking on the orphanage door and ran away into the night. Mayu's eyes wondered after Jake hope in them wishing he would he would come back but he didn't.

Then suddenly there was a creaking noise coming from behind Mayu. Mayu turned around to faced with a pair of legs. Mayu looked up. A old wrinkly face looked down at her. The old women smiled and held her hand out for Mayu to take but Mayu ignored it. The old women sighed and took Mayu's hand in her own and pulled her inside.

Children were running around and shouting some even climbing on book cases and tables. "Yuko Tomomi get down from there now!" Screamed the old women letting go of Mayus hand and running towards the mischievous pair who just smiled at the older women sweetly. The old women quickly and carefully lifted the two girls down from the big fir wooden book case. "How many times have I told you not to do that you will get yourself hurt." Scolded the old women. Yuko and Tomomi however didnt take that much interest. "Yer yer we have heard it all before dont climb on the book cases dont eat that Tomomi dont touch someone there Yuko and the rest of that blah blah blah." Said Yuko and Tomomi together earning a glare from the old women.

"Whatever just dont do it again meet the new girl." Said the old women pointing towards Mayu. "she is pretty .... whats her name?" Asked Tomomi a little dazed from Mayu's beauty. "I am not sure she was just left of the door step before I could ask her name you two little devils were climbing on the book case." Replied the old women. "Don't worry we will find out." Said Yuko hitting her chest like a monkey making Tomomi laugh showing her fang. The pair ran to Mayu and introduced themselves.

"I'm Itano Tomomi."

"I'm Oshima Yuko what about you?"


"Watanabe Mayu."


TBC.....

A/N: I'm not sure if this was good or not but I hope you all enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and I hope this is up to you standard next chapter will be Yuko's and Tomomi's story of how they got to the orphanage. Also it was my birthday yesterday and the day before that was PARK BOMS!! And of course today is Mayu's!!!!

HAPPY BIRTHDAY MAYU!!

@Yuukimoko: Thanks for commenting I hope you liked it.

@Adam: Hope you liked it thanks for commenting.

@ELo: No pairings yet lol hope you liked it thanks for commenting.

@Kojiyuu44: I hope that you enjoyed it thanks for commenting.

@Mo-chan: Hope you liked it thanks for commenting.

@Kazan: I have never written atsuyuu before so I hope you can give me some pointers lol anyway thanks for commenting.

@Stv_wong: It is just as you say lol thanks for commenting.

@Rochilu: The song is awesome isnt it lol thanks for commenting and I hope you liked it.

@Hitomi Hagiwara: The wait wasnt long lol so I hope you enjoyed this thanks for commenting.

@Irgheto: Thanks for the comment and I havnt read Atsuyuu before tho I like the idea of them as a couple lol
« Last Edit: March 26, 2013, 07:21:07 PM by XxRoByNxX78 »

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Re: Playgirls 26/3/13 Prologue (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu)
« Reply #12 on: March 26, 2013, 04:34:05 PM »
Aww that's so sad that her parents died but at least she will be looked after an she will make friends and lol your really unlucky on were your birthday falls, a day before or after then you would have someone with the same birthday as you any good chapter update soon

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Re: Playgirls 26/3/13 Prologue (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu)
« Reply #13 on: March 26, 2013, 04:34:22 PM »
hm hm *nod*


the prologue looks promising


thanks for the update :thumbsup


P.S. My name is Yuukimoko,  XD not Yuukimoto. But you can call me Yuuki ! :)
« Last Edit: March 26, 2013, 04:43:57 PM by yuukimoko »
“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

I'm glad I'm not popular.I'm already a bitch, no need to make my ego bigger.

You were always my favorite, no one loved me as much as you did.-Alison DiLaurentis.

Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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Re: Playgirls 26/3/13 Prologue (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu)
« Reply #14 on: March 26, 2013, 06:07:13 PM »
It seems that it will be really interesting! I want to know more XD

Thank you!
Mayuki = Cutest couple



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Re: Playgirls 26/3/13 Prologue (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu)
« Reply #15 on: March 26, 2013, 11:25:39 PM »
yes yes it was good! i like how are yuko and tomochin xD
i hope mayu can smile again ^^

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Re: Playgirls 26/3/13 Prologue (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu)
« Reply #16 on: March 27, 2013, 03:20:18 AM »
LOL Yuko and Tomochin are funny  :lol:
But poor Mayu her parents died at early age plus her relatives don't like her  :cry:
Speaking of relatives ugghh!!! I hate them for calling Mayu a rat that will stain the family!!!  :x
Oh! and belated happy birthday!!  :)


Can't wait for the next chapter!!!  8)
Random question: Do you also by any chance like Scandal?  :? :roll:

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Re: Playgirls 26/3/13 Prologue (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu)
« Reply #17 on: March 27, 2013, 03:21:44 AM »
LOL at the mischievous duo. It's kinda fit to them.

Awww... poor Mayu... but, she has her oshiri sister now. XD

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Re: Playgirls 26/3/13 Prologue (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu)
« Reply #18 on: March 27, 2013, 04:57:19 AM »
Ugghhh poor Mayu I hate her relatives  :tama-mad:
But still good thing she met her future bestfriends YIEE
Btw YAY love the pairings  :cow: :cow:
Specially Atsuyuu  :twothumbs
I really love atsuyuu   :deco:

Thank you ^O^
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Atsuyuu ♥ Takayuu ♥ Atsumina ♥ Mayuki

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Re: Playgirls 26/3/13 Prologue (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu)
« Reply #19 on: March 27, 2013, 02:35:42 PM »
 :D i feel honored
But just write what is your idea, i've been happy with their character have you describe. Thanks for update :thumbup
Im looking forward for the next

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