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Title: Come closer please - chapter 9 (Kai x Acchan) 23/06/2016
Post by: sadrilim on March 14, 2015, 05:09:45 AM
Here is another fanfic. Enjoy and sorry for bad English.

My name is Takahashi Kai. I am the second child in Takahashi Family. I have an older sister, Takahashi Minami. Well actually she just 5 minutes older than me. Yup! We are twins.

My life is boring. I just an average high school student. Normal live every day.  Love life?...
"Well, I really hope one day somebody will love you the way you love her and you two will be happy forever after. " Sound cheesy right?

But that what my sister say almost everyday to me.  To tell the truth, her word looks like poison to me. Why not?! Somehow those words just keep spinning inside my head.

I do admit since she got herself a boyfriend, I really hate her. Wait!! Hate would be too much for my annoying sister.  Why I said so?

It is because she always tell her story and that Itano boy!! Sigh...

Well, who doesn't want to fall in love? Feeling those butterflies in your stomach, happy that someone will tell you how much she love you..

But, every time I try to fall in love I just can't. I don't feel right. 

"YOOOO!!! KAI STOP DAYDREAMING IN THE MORNING WILL YA?!"

Kai : "Uggh!!! Why are you yelling at me? I am not."

"Yes! You are!"

"No! I am not"

"Yes!"

"No!"

"Yes!"

"No!"

"No!"

"Yes!"

Kai : "Huh?! Something went wrong. "

"Haha!! Bakamina. I wonder why you are so different with Takamina. "

Kai : "Stop talking about this. We are twin but that doesn't mean we will be the same in everything. Btw, how your holiday, Yuu?"

The so called boys grinned.
Yuu : "It was fantastic.  It was the best idea ever to go to the beach in the summer.  Those boobs, smooth skin, wonderful thighs, bloody heaven~♥♥."

Oshima Yuu
A happy go lucky boy. Who always positive and confident. But unfortunately he is a pervert. 

PLAK!!

Yuu : "Ouch!!"

Takamina : "That for being pervert and stop talking so loud!! Many people can hear you guys. "

Takahashi Minami
Kai twins, smart, beautiful, and cheerful.  A class representative. Have boyfriend name Itano Tomo.

Yuu : "Kai, please handle you twin will ya?!"

Takamina : "Well I won't stop hitting you until your mind is clean and clear from that pervert mind. One hit a day keep Oshima Yuu head clean and clear."

Yuu : "Huh! Sadist."

Takamina : "What did you say?!"

Yuu : "Glup..No.. nothing.. hahaha."

Ahh!! I almost forget. Kai will you accompany me to Akibahara  after school? I need to buy present. For my  cousin  who will life with my family.

Kai : "Ah, sure no problem.  I am free anyway."

After school at Akibahara
Kai : "Hey Yuu, what are we gonna buy?"

Yuu : "Hm.. cakes.  She used to love cakes.  Maybe cakes will make her cheerful. "

Kai : "Her? You cousin is a girl?!"

Yuu : "Yup! I never mention?she is the same age like us. Well, let's buy the cakes first I will introduce you with her."

After that, they went straight back to Yuu house. But before they come in, they hear a  voice.

Oshima ma : "Acchan.. Acchan.. Where are you?! This is bad."

Yuu : "Oka san, what happened?"

Oshima ma : "Oh... Yuu can you please find Acchan? I just left to buy some dinner ingredients.  But when I come back, Acchan nowhere to be found. What I gonna do?!"

Yuu : "This is bad. Kai, let's go. Don't worry ma, I think she just stroll around. "

Kai : "Yuu, what wrong? Why your mother freak out. May be she is walking around or have some walk."

Yuu : "The problem is, Acchan can't see. She is blind..."




Title: Re: Come closer please (Kai x Acchan)
Post by: The Ray on March 14, 2015, 06:29:22 AM
Kai and takamina is twin ??  :?
And achhan blind ??
hhmmm interesting :cathappy:

Please update sadrilim-san  :bow:
Title: Re: Come closer please (Kai x Acchan)
Post by: Zhen on March 14, 2015, 08:59:40 AM
Wow. Nice plot. Loving it. :) I'm looking forward to thisssss.
Atsuko is blind uh......
Interestinggggg. :3
Title: Re: Come closer please (Kai x Acchan)
Post by: black_maa on March 14, 2015, 09:44:22 AM
Oh my! Acchan is blind..  :shocked  why~!?
I hope they found her soon.... and then Kai would fall in love with her.. hehe.. :D


Waiting update!  :)
Title: Re: Come closer please (Kai x Acchan)
Post by: mgxx on March 14, 2015, 10:05:46 AM
OMG mygirl atsuko is blind?

i think this is a interesting story.. cant wait for the next chapter  :bow:
Title: Re: Come closer please (Kai x Acchan)
Post by: sadrilim on March 14, 2015, 02:52:59 PM
Chapter 1 : Find you!!

Yuu : "Help me find Atsuko, Kai. You this way I this way."

Kai : "Wh... wait!! Yuu!!!"

Yuu directly go, he didn't let Kai finish his word.

Kai : "I don't know her. I even never see her. Sigh. .."

Kai Pov
Here I am, looking for a girl. Well, I wonder if she is a beauty.  Or maybe she is a ugly one. Is she a far girl or skinny one.

Well maybe it is not really hard to find a blind girl.

I walk and walk till I arrived at a park. Me and Yuu used to play in this park before.  Before I go to the park I found some laughing. 

There is a bunch of kid. From their behavior looks like a naughty ones. Hm.. It remain me the old days. Haha...
One of them holding a stick and used is as a sword.

Wait?! It is a stick for blind people. And yes it is. So I approached them. And ask one of them.

"Say, lil boy. From where you got this stick?  I believed it belong to a girl right?"

"Umn.. I don't know. "The boy looks scared. He then see his other friend
 The one who take the stick. Looks like he is their leader.

"It not your bussiness, weekk!!!" The boys leader said.

"Ok. My patient is on its limits.  Tell me or not?" I pretend to ready to hit them

"No!! " He then throw the stick to me and run. His friends also follow him.

"Tsk.. kid this day.. "
I take the stick and look around.  The  I found somebody sitting  in the ground near the sakura tree. She looks like looking for something. Then I realised she looks.. blind. So I came closer

"Beautifull". Accidentally I said it.
What in front of me is a girl with shoulder length hair, her face is cute and have a brunette eyes. But her brunette eyes looks bad, almost like want to cry.

She then feels like there is somebody in there.
"Anoo.. somebody there? Can you help me? Umnn.. if you see my stick can you hand it for me. Please.. I.. can't see."

Her voice is beautiful.  Like a song to me.  But then I realised she is talking to me.
"Umn.. Maeda san? Your name is Maeda Atsuko right?"

"Yes.. that is my name. You are...?"

"My name is Takahashi Kai, I am Oshima Yuu friend. Nice to meet you."  I then help her, I lift her and hold her waist. I notice her feet is bleeding.  "You are hurt. Let me help you." I then lift her with bridal style.

At first, she looks surprise when I lift her. She then touch my face. Looks like she is scanning my face with her hand. Her hand is smooth and gentle.  I like those feeling when she touch my face.

"Don't worry Maeda san, I will bring you home. You can trust me."

"... un.. thank you Takahashi san."

Title: Re: Come closer please (Kai x Acchan)
Post by: Zhen on March 14, 2015, 04:11:01 PM
Your plot really catch my attention.... Good job. :3
I'm loving it a lot. <3 good job, can't wait for more.
Hehhehehe.
Title: Re: Come closer please (Kai x Acchan)
Post by: arawche079 on March 14, 2015, 05:25:49 PM
Wow nice fic!!!!

Can you add kojiyuu....

I like Yuu and kai's friendship in your fanfic..

Next chapter
Title: Re: Come closer please (Kai x Acchan) chapter 2
Post by: sadrilim on March 14, 2015, 06:44:08 PM
I am a silent reader and silent writer, so sorry if I didn't reply to some or many comments.
But here is the next chapter.  Hope you like it and enjoy.

chapter 2 : Meeting you


Atsuko pov
My name is Maeda Atsuko.  I used to see everything.  But because of that accident I lost everything. My parents, my boyfriend, I wish.. I wish I died. 

But, dying will be unfair.  Especially for my mother.

Flashback
It happend in my birthday. When I and my parents went to eat dinner together.  And when after we eat, that accident happen. One car hit us from behind. That night, there is nobody.  It hit our car really hard. Next I opened my eyes, there is my father and mother in front of me. They are stuck in the passage car. There is iron that pitching them, they can't move. My father can't move at all, my mother get pinch in her left leg.

I myself is not in a good shape either. I try to help my parents.  I try to lift the iron but it is no use.  I try to scream, ask for help. But no body come. My vision get blurry.  And I pass out.

....

When I awake,  everything when dark. I can't see anything.  No light and it really make me  afraid.  I stand up but then I bumped into something and fall.

"Acchan?! Oh my god!" I hear somebody voice. That voice is aunt Oshima, my mother sister.  She then help me to the bed again.

"Aunty, what happened? Why i can't see everything ? Why you turn off the light?!
Where is otou san and oka san?"

Aunt oshima just crying, hear me refer otou san and oka san. And I started to be panicked.

Oshima ma : "Acchan calm down, and listen carefully.  She then hug me and it really tight.  Your parents died in the accident.  There is a explosion after the car crash. And they died in there. Your mother is still alive but because of that explosion, you hurt your body especially your heart. So your mother... she give her heart to you knowing the rate to alive is smaller. As your father, the doctor said he is died when he arrived in the hospital. Your eyes have a problem and we will find some donors. Don't worry Acchan.  We are here with you."

"Nooo!!!"

And after that I passed out.

I cry and cry evertime I woke up. I can't live like this. Why after my parents leave me, my boyfriend also cheat on me. He said he love another girl and can't have a blind girlfriend.

Yes, I am blind. After that accident my eyes become worsen. And my vision become more blurry till the end I become blind.  Doctor said I may not crying, but I can't stop crying.  I lost my loved one. And that become one of the factor why I become completely blind.

End of flashback

Soon after that, I move with Oshima family. I used to come here when I was young  there is a nice park near Yuu house and I still remember the way to go there. Aunty went to the market. So I decided to go there.  I leave a note and go there.

Nothing really changed.  I managed to go to park and find myself sitting in the bench near Sakura tree. But then some boys start to bully me. Such a irony, but that is what happened.  A high school girl bullied by bunch of little boys. One of the boy manage to take my stick. And then throw it. After that they run away. I search and search but it looks impossible. I also hurt my leg when I searching it. I hate my situation.

After a while, I hear a foot step.  There is somebody, come here. So I try to ask his help.

"Anoo.. somebody there? Can you help me? Umnn.. if you see my stick can you hand it for me. Please.. I.. can't see."

"Umn.. Maeda san? Your name is Maeda Atsuko right?"
What a gentle yet deep voice, from his voice I know he is a man.

"Yes.. that is my name. You are...?"

"My name is Takahashi Kai, I am Oshima Yuu friend. Nice to meet you."  after saying that he then lift me to stand up. But due to my feet hurt I can't stand properly.

To my supprise, he lift me with a bridal style. It make me blush, even my ex boyfriend never lift me like this.  I then touch his face try to see his face by using my hand. From his face I can tell he is quite handsome.

End of pov.


 :)2
Title: Re: Come closer please (Kai x Acchan)
Post by: sadrilim on March 14, 2015, 07:04:02 PM
arawche079 san
If you want to see kojiyuu OS. I have made one. It mix with Atsumina and Wmatsui OS. You can see it on Atsumina ( kai Acchan) the transfer students is my girlfriend OS. So sorry I don't understand how to link it because I am still new to this. Please see it on my post.
Title: Re: Come closer please (Kai x Acchan)
Post by: mgxx on March 15, 2015, 05:11:53 PM
wowww cant wait for the next chapter author-san :D
Title: Re: Come closer please (Kai x Acchan)
Post by: sadrilim on March 16, 2015, 04:11:08 AM
chapter 3 : you are different

At Yuu house.
Oshima ma waiting in the front door anxiously.  She really worried about Acchan. Yuu come  back without Acchan.

It make Oshima ma more anxious.  She nearly want to call police but Yuu stop her because he see Kai with Acchan.

Oshima ma : "Acchan where have you been? You really make us worried sick. "

Acchan : "I am sorry aunty, I didn't mean to. I have leave some note to you in the table. "

Appearently the note acchan left was under Oshima ma groceries.

Yuu : "Mouu!! Kaa chan,  don't blame Acchan.  She must be bored, so she went to the park. You must be talking to the neighbourhood so long that you forget about her."

Oshima ma feeling guilty, so she promised that she will go home faster.

Kai : "Well sorry to interrupt but can we clean Acchan wound first?" Kai gently put Acchan in the sofa.  And Yuu quickly take a first aid.

Kai then started to bandage the wound. He do it as gently as he can.

Yuu : "Wow! Kai you are so skilled.  No wonder you are you dad son. Haha..."
Kai and Takamina father is a doctor.  So sometime on his free times, he will teach them the general knowledge of medical term.

Atsuko : "Thank you, Takahashi san." Atsuko flashed me a smile.

Kai : "Just call me Kai."

Atsuko : "Un.. you can call me Acchan or Atsuko."

Takahshi Kai pov
This is bad. I mean, when she give me that smile. My heart beat went faster.  What is this feeling?

After I finished bandage her wound, I lift her bridal style and went to her room. Put her on her bed. She looks surprise again when I lift her like that. I wonder if every girl like this except Takamina? When I lift my sister like that she looks normal. Ahh.. women are complicated.  I sigh.

Again she touch my face..

End of pov

Atsuko : "something troubled you? I am sorry. ."

Kai : " what?! No. Why you said sorry?"

Atsuko : " because you frowned"

Kai : ... it's because I am feeling confused.

Atsuko : confused?

Kai : yeah.. you are different.  not like other girls.
Title: Re: Come closer please (Kai x Acchan)
Post by: black_maa on March 16, 2015, 02:04:10 PM
Looks like Kai is already in love with her..  :D  .. or it will be soon..
But the reason why she is blind - is so sad...  :(


Waiting next update!  :)
Title: Re: Come closer please (Kai x Acchan)
Post by: sadrilim on March 17, 2015, 11:14:45 AM
chapter 4 : can't wait for tomorrow

Atsuko : what do you mean by different? It is because I am blind?

Kai : what?! No.. no. What I mean is you are different from the girl in my class. And well my sister not in negative way. In fact I like it.

Kai can't help but blushing, luckily Acchan can't see his face. If not, he will be very embarrass by what he said.

Yuu : Kai! Your phone is ringging. It is from Takamina.

Appearently Kai left his phone in the living room together with his bag. So he quickly go down and pick his phone.

On phone
Kai : moshi moshi

Takamina : kai! Go back now! Did you forget we will have a family gathering.  father will be coming in any time.

Kai : oh?! I almost forgot.  I will be back.

With that Kai leave Oshima house.

At Takahashi house.
They having a dinner together with their father.

Takahashi Kaito (kai and Takamina father) very dependable, a great father but short tempered. No body will mess with him if he is angry.  He now have work in US for research so it make him very busy. But he always try to go home once in a month.

Kaito : say, Kai how is your study? Have you improve yet? I see your report card, and you still have a lot to learn especially the biology part and math.  why don't you follow your sister. She is smart and looks how she will be a great doctor.

Kai just stay silent as he know his father behaviour.  Whatever his answer will not pleased his father.

Kaito : I hope you can be more focus to this Kai. It is for your future.  I know you can do it. Let's Minami help with your study. And don't make me disappointed again.

Kai : ... yes father.  Now please excuse me, I am very tired and need some rest.

He then directly go upstairs.  Because he doesn't want to hear his father lecture.  Actually his grade is not bad still average. But compare to his sister's grade it is bad. Everybody know Takamina is smart one and she is a top student.

At first Kai didn't really care about it. but as he grew older and his father always compare him to his twin and want him to became a doctor just like him, it really make him hate it. He began to hate the biology and math subject, the main subject you need to pass to be a doctor. Actually he doesn't hate to be a doctor.  But he feel he want to have some choice, to pick what he really like and be free as himself no one compared them.


Knock! knock!
Takamina : kai, can I come in?

Kai : yeah..

Takamina go inside Kai room.
Takamina : uhm.. Kai do you have time after school start from tomorrow?

Kai : what's wrong? I do have free time.

Takamina : well,.. father ask me to help you in your study and ..

Before Takamina finished her word. Kai answer back.

Kai : you know it won't work. We try this already.  Your way of study didn't match mine and it didn't help much.  Forget about this. I just remembered I need to accompany Yuu to buy something.  Now if you don't mind please go out. I am tired.

Takamina : I.. I am sorry.

Takamina quickly go out before her tear burst out. She cry silently, she know Kai didn't like to be compared but she can't help because her father ordered her to do so. And she can't help but to follow her father order. 

Kai just sigh.. he hate it when Takamina said sorry.  He know it is not her fault but him. And he hate it, his anger and disappoint towards himself make lash it out to his twin.

Kai : I will apologies tommorow. And I need to so something with my studies.

at Oshima Yuu house
Yuu : yeahh!!! It is great Acchan?! You finally can go to school.

Appearently Oshima pa request for Acchan, so she can attend Yuu school.  Their school are a normal school, but Oshima pa is a great friend with the school owner so, he allowed Acchan to go to school and try it.

Acchan : un.. thank you uncle.  I really appreciated it. I...
 Acchan started to crying.  She is really grateful, because in her old school, she been bullied and the last thing she know the school didn't allowed her to go to study for whatever the reason it is. She loves to study and in fact she was one of top student in her old school.

Oshima ma : don't cry Acchan. Remember how hard it is we are here for you. We will support you.

Oshima pa : yeah! Acchan whatever you want to do as long as uncle can help, just tell. Uncle will definitely help.

Yuu : hey, don't forget me. Don't worry Acchan. Tomorrow will be so much fun nee. Wait till Kai heard about this.

When Acchan hear Kai name, she can't help it but smile. She somehow very happy can meet Kai again.

Acchan : sure. It will be fun.


Title: Re: Come closer please (Kai x Acchan)
Post by: black_maa on March 17, 2015, 10:07:42 PM
Oh.. Acchan will go to school..  :huhuh
It would be interesting  :roll:


Waiting next update!  :)
Title: Re: Come closer please (Kai x Acchan) chapter 5
Post by: sadrilim on March 27, 2015, 05:29:54 AM
chapter 5 : jealousy


Morning come and Takahashi Kai is not in the good mood.  Why not? It because he is late and he got lecture by the 'gate' sensei. It was a name everybody in school give to this sensei, because he always punish and wait at the gate for students who are late.

After what happened yesterday, and now late in the morning is sure not his day.  When he want to go inside the class, he heard a voice.

"... Nice to meet you all. I hope we can be friend."

Kai : "A new student?!" 

With that Kai go inside the class. To his surprise he see Atsuko standing in front with Shinoda sensei.

Shinoda Mariko
Sensei for class Kai class. A good teacher who a little sadistic. Beautifull and tall like model.

Kai : "Atsuko?"

Acchan : "kai? Is that you?".  Acchan give a angelic smile to Kai, it make Kai a bit flushed and it didn't miss Mariko eyes.

Mariko : "I see.. so you know each other.  And Takahashi, to think you dare to be late to my class again. You know I will give punishment right?"

Kai : "sorry sensei! Please spare me. I will not do this again."

Mariko : "well, let me think.  The answer is No!"

Kai : "cih! Sadist."

Mariko : "what did you say?!"

Kai : "no.. nothing."

Mariko : "well, for today punishment you need to clean this class alone and... you must take care of Maeda san, she need some help and I am sure you will help right?"

Mariko give a glare don't you dare to say anything bad or you will see.

Kai : "glup... yes sensei."

Kai then guide Acchan to their chair. He take her hand and the other hand take her bag. After they sit in their seat they have a short chat.

Kai : "well, if you need something just tell me. Don't be shy."

Acchan : "un.. thanks Kai."  Acchan give her angelic smile to Kai. She doesn't know that her smile make Takaboy blush.

Mariko : "Takahashi, if you don't listen to my lesson I suppose you want a new punishment? "

Kai : "no, I am sorry sensei."

With that they continue their study. Kai help a a lot to make sure Acchan get what sensei write in the white broad.

After lesson. Rest time...
Many students come to Acchan desk. They want to know Acchan more. They are curious about Acchan eyes, some of the boy waving at her face and want to touch her face,  it make Kai angry. He yell at the boy who are waving.  That boy name is Sato Takeru.

Sato Takeru, a spoiled brat who love to bully and make trouble.  He is a player and love to playing with girl heart. What he want he will get it. He hate Kai the most because he always come to his way of prank.

Kai : "hey!! Stop it. Don't do that."

Takeru : "what? ? Midget?! Don't yell at me. And beside who you are to tell me not to? You like the blind girl? To think your taste for woman is blunt?! Ha ha ha"

Kai : "un.. I.."

Takamina : "stop it sato san, Shinoda sensei has ask Kai to take care of Maeda san. So my brother have a right to stop you. "

Kai : "yeah! Right! I need to take care of her or I will be punished."

Hearing that make Acchan feeling sad. She is aware that there is somebody want to play a prank on her. Since she is blind, she get bullied, so it is obvious in the new school they will try to bully her. But what make her sad is Kai word. She think kai feel burdened by her.

Kai pov
Urghh.. so embrassing.  I lost a word and need my sister to defend me in front of Acchan. Sigh... I can't answer no because I am not sure. But..

I fall in love with Atsuko?!  It can't be right? Ha ha ha... must be because I don't like him from the start. He always bully the weak or new student.

Well from what I always  think girls are crybaby always want this and that and if you answer her when she ask they will get angry with the reality I say. Well, I do have interest in girl but their behavior make me sick.  Girls are complicated. 

End of pov

Yuu : "YEAHH!!! Stay back from my cousin.  I won't let you hurt her. Let's go Acchan." 

Yuu then take Acchan go from the class and followed by Kai and Takamina. But Takeru and his gang stopped them. Everybody in the class just see because they are afraid of Takeru.

Takeru : "not so fast. What I want I will get it."

"You better not mess with them"

Turn out it was Itano Tomo. He come to Takamina class to check his girlfriend after hearing some ruckus.

Itano Tomo
A handsome boy who have a good taste of fashion, he also good at fighting and a bit rebellious .  Only Takamina can calm him down.

Takeru : "I.. this is not over  yet." 

After that Takeru and his gang run away.

Tomo : "Minami, are you all right? Nothing hurt right?"

Takamina : "un. Thanks Tomo."

Tomo then see Atsuko.
Tomo : "I never see her. A new student?"

Yuu : "yeah! This is my cousin, Maeda Atsuko. Acchan, this is Itano Tomo, takamina boyfriend. Takamina is Kai twin."

Itano : "nice to meet you, you can call me Tomo."

Takamina : "nice to meet you, I am Takahashi Minami, kai twin sister. "

Atsuko : "nice to meet you too, you can call me Acchan."

Yuu : "well I bet you all hungry.  Let go to canteen."

With that they go to canteen. Takamina talked a lot with Acchan.  Actually she is really surprise to see her twin talked to girl and more than that they are chatting.  She want to know more about Acchan.

Takamina : "say, Acchan do you have a boyfriend?"

It make kai chocked.  He hardy to breathe.  He quickly drink a water  and glare at his sister.

Acchan : "no. I used to have a boyfriend, but I broke up with him. He cheated on me."

Yuu : "yeahh!! That jerk, he broke up with Acchan just because of she is blind.  Thinking of that make me want to punch thay boy again."

Acchan : "its ok Yuu. I.. I know I am not a normal people anymore. I.. just a problem"

kai :  "enough! Don't say that.  You are not a problem.  I don't think so. It's ok to depend of people." 

Takamina : "We are friend, you can depend on us."

Tomo : "yeah.  If you have problems just say to us. We will help."

Acchan : "un.. thank you." 

Atsuko is very happy, she  never know that she will have a good friend in here. Back in their old school, ever since she is blind everyone seem to change.  Everybody started to bully her, even her ex boyfriend bullied her. Till the point she want to end her life.  At her home town, she live with her aunty from father side, aunt noro. But aunt noro is very busy and she can't always watch over Atsuko. So she ask for Oshima ma to take care of Atsuko. And Oshima ma agree in no time.

After that they decided to go back to class. Kai and acchan have a little chat before class started again. But they didn't notice there a pair of jealous eyes looking at them.

Ray : "why Kai?! You ever say every woman is annoying so you don't want to be friend with them. But why that Maeda girl?! I won't admit it. You are mine Kai.."
Title: Re: Come closer please (Kai x Acchan)
Post by: Dianalrs on March 27, 2015, 07:35:20 AM
Awww so sweet Kai and Acchan  :heart:
But I'm scare for what going to do Takeru and Ray  :(
Title: Re: Come closer please (Kai x Acchan) chapter 6
Post by: sadrilim on April 01, 2015, 08:42:38 AM
chapter 6 : don't cry


Kai pov
What take her so long?! Even after I finish to clean the class she hasn't come back yet. Did something happened?! Atsuko where are you... it is my fault.  I should have accompany her.

End of pov

Kai is cleaning the classroom as the punishment from Mariko sensei. As Acchan is waiting him. Kai told her to wait for him as he want to show Acchan the school, the other have a club activity so they can't accompany Kai.  As he cleaning the class, Acchan have a sudden urged to use the bathroom, so she excuss herself.  Kai want to accompany her, but she doesn't want to be accompanied because she already remember the way to go to the restroom.  she insisted Kai to stay and will be angry if he followed her.Takamina has told her the way and she remember it. She manage to find the rest room and finish her business. But in the way to go back to her class, someone has taken her by force. And atsuko try to resist.  She manage to touch the culprit face before her hand get yanked, that make atsuko whinne in pain. And she know that the culprit is a girl from the touch of her face.

They close her mouth and tied her hand with rope,  locked her in a room. She doesn't know where it is. As she try to scream, they just laughing.

" just scream as much as you want, no one will hear you"

After that they leave Atsuko alone.

Kai is really worried.  He doesn't want to make his friend worried but, he has search around and can't find Atsuko. So he decided to ask help from Tomo. Tomo used to be a bad boy until he date Takamina. He change and stop to be a bad boy, but that didn't stop his underlings to follow him.  They still feel Tomo as their leader. Kai then phone Tomo.

Tomo : "yeah? What up Kai?"

Kai : " Tomo, I need your help. I can't find Atsuko at school, please help me. it is my fault. "

Sensing the worried tone from Kai, Tomo decided to help.  He then order his underlings to find Atsuko. They search anywhere at school.

Kai alone decided to search around the class one more time. Until he hear some girls talking.

Noro : "He he he, Ray sama you are genius.  In there, whatever she want to scream, no body will find her."

Noro is Ray bestfriend.  She always support Ray and help her when she need a help.

Ray : " yeah, that her punishment because she is a bicth!"

Paru : "Un.. but do you think we are a bit overdue? I mean, she is blind. What if something happened?"

Ray : " paru! How could you worried about her?! Whose friend is you?! Who do you think you are? Don't dare to talked back to me! You are just my servant child!"

Paru aka Shimazaki Haruka. A salty girl. She is one of Ray 'friend'. But unlike Ray, she is a good girl and don't like when Ray plan something evil toward the other.

Ray then want to slap the so called Paru. But Kai stop her. Ray is so shocked. She is so afraid of Kai. Because from Kai eyes all people can see he is very angry.

Kai : "I should know that it was you ! Ray!! Where is Atsuko?! Tell me now!!"

Ray : "I.. I don't know., hiks.. Kai do you need to be so rude?"

With that Ray run away. Followed by her other friend.  Kai want to chase her but he was stopped by Paru.

Paru : "Takahashi san, follow me. I will show you the way. I am sorry. Please don't hate Ray. She mean no harm."

Kai : "... just show me the way."

Paru : "... okay."

Paru then show him the place. Atsuko is being locked behind the school building. There is an old gym building and it is not being used. 

Atsuko pov
I scream for help. But it is no used. I think I being locked for one hour already and there is no body.  I don't hear any people voice. I try to find a way, but in the end I hurt my leg and hand. I tripped over,  and i think i touch a broken glass,   there are a lot of thing in here. I started to feel afraid. It is no good to move around.  I decided to sit down and wait for help.

Will somebody help me?! What if they forget about me. Why they do this to me? Did I do something wrong? Kai.. help me.

"Ac.. Acchan!"

Kai?! I hear Kai voice. Kai you really come to save me. I can't help but crying. 

End of pov

Not long after that, Kai come arrived and opened the door. He see Acchan sit down in the corner of the building. she want to stand up but then fall down. She is crying and Kai felt really quilty.   He then hug Atsuko and kiss her forehead. 

Kai : "Acchan I am sorry.  I.."

Acchan : Kai.. I am hiks.. afraid. Hiks... hiks

Kai really at lost. Acchan doesn't stop crying, he  then decided to bring her to the infirmary.  Paru followed them from behind. 

In other place and In the same time
Ray : "where is Paru?!"

Noro : umn.. I think we left her behind.

Ray : "I don't care. She is so slow. And because of her, Kai now hate me. Wait until I go home. I will punish her!!!"
Title: Re: Come closer please (Kai x Acchan)
Post by: sadri on April 04, 2015, 04:10:03 PM
Update soon. Don't make me wait author san. Lols :cow:
Title: Re: Come closer please (Kai x Acchan)
Post by: black_maa on April 04, 2015, 05:01:46 PM
Ah.!! Those bad girls.. I hope they will get punished ?!!  >:(

Poor Acchan.. At least she have a friends and Kai for her.

Waiting next update!  :)
Title: Re: Come closer please (Kai x Acchan) chapter 6
Post by: sastio13 on April 12, 2015, 01:15:27 PM
oh no ray, don't punish paru...  :(
Title: Re: Come closer please (Kai x Acchan)
Post by: Saint0angel on July 21, 2015, 12:29:46 PM
I like your fic  :), update soon  :bow:
Title: Re: Come closer please (Kai x Acchan)
Post by: sadrilim on July 22, 2015, 10:32:47 AM
To all reader.

I am sorry if I take a long time to finish my fanfic or to update it. Due to the other long fanfic I have written.
hope you will wait patiently. 

I won't abandon my fanfic unless you know, died maybe.. lols


Title: Re: Come closer please (Kai x Acchan)
Post by: Dianalrs on July 25, 2015, 06:58:41 AM
Is good to know you didn't foget the story  :twothumbs
Hope update soon  :bow:  :)
Title: Come closer please (Kai x Acchan) chapter 7
Post by: sadrilim on August 20, 2015, 04:24:35 PM
To all my reader, enjoy the next chapter. and thank you because you all still want to read my fanfic.

enjoy and sorry for the bad english


Chapter  7 : I think I love you

Atsuko POV

I am really scared. My body can’t stopped trembling even though I know that I am safe already. I am inside my room. And looks like there isn’t any different between my old school and new school. Why they love to bully me. what did I do wrong?! It is because I am close to Kai?!

And now I even can’t walk properly. I hurt my feet when they forcefully push me to go inside the room. I really are a problem. thinking about that, make my eyes teary again. I know that deep inside my heart I don’t want to become a burden. But I really need to face the harsh reality. I am a burden. I can’t see, so I will always live on people pity, and now I can’t walk properly. What will I become.

Sometimes, I really hoped that after I sleep, I will sleep forever. Don’t need to get up and face the harsh reality. I.. I hate myself.

End of POV

Kai is still at Yuu house, he refuse to go home first. Because he has something to discuss with Yuu, regarding Ray.

Yuu : how dare she hurt my cousin. I will really kill her.

Kai : calm down. I already give her warning. And hopefully she won’t make any problem.

Yuu : yeah.. easy for you to talk, you know the best that You and Ray still haven’t finish yet. She refuse to give up on you. what a scary woman.

Kai : sigh.. I know, but I really don’t feel like I love her anymore. More like I am too disgust of her. she really make my heart hurt.

Yuu : Kai…

Kai : and please promise me Yuu, don’t tell anything about me and Ray.

Yuu : well, what can I say Kai? Say to Acchan that You and Ray used to be a couple before she betray you and then she dumb you? I don’t think I will say that. That is your own story to tell. Don’t worry pal.

Kai : thanks Yuu. Let’s check on Atsuko. I hope she is okay.

When they want to go to Atsukon room, Oshima ma is standing in front of her door.  Her face looks very sad, and there is a stain of tears in her eyes.

Yuu : Oka san..?

Oshima ma : ah! Yuu chan, you want to look at Acchan? Looks like she is sleeping right now. why don’t you see her tomorrow. I am sure she need some rest. And Kai kun, I think you need to go home now. it is very late already.

Kai : but…

Yuu know that Kai is very worried, as he can see that Kai is starting to fall in love again. Yuu know that because of that incident, Kai didn’t trust anybody especially girl. He think that all girl is cunning, and will always try to take some advantage for him. So looking Kai action towards Acchan really make Yuu wonder if his friend really started to fall in love again.

Yuu : well, tomorrow is Sunday, why don’t you stay at my house, Kai? I still have your spare clothes and your toothbrush in here. and oka san is everything alright?

Oshima ma :  I am alright, don’t mind me Yuu chan. Great idea, it been a while since you sleepover Kai.

Yuu know the best, that his mom is sad because of Acchan condition.  He know that his mom really care about Acchan. So when she found out that Acchan and her parent got accident. And worst, Acchan got blind, it really make her mom condition become worse. She lost some of her weight. And sometimes been crying secretly. So when Acchan come to their house, Oshima ma really happy, because she think she can at least take care of Acchan. Seeing Acchan like this must be hurt her heart so much.

Kai : I will call Minami first. Saying that I will sleepover.

Yuu : oka san, why don’t you take some rest? I will take care of the rest.

Kai : un, aunty  please rest. I will help Yuu.

Oshima ma : thank you, Yuu chan, Kai Kun.

…………………………………………

Atsuko wake up and find no one in the house. she called for everyone, but there is no answer. As she try to move her body, she fall down. she doesn’t know what have she bummed. Everything seems different. This is not her usually room. This is not Oshima household. As she try to move again, there is somebody who pinned her down. Atsuko try to resist, but there is no used. 

From his laugh, Atsuko know somebody that pinned her down is a man. And she become more afraid because she feel that man started to undress her. she try to resist again but there is no used. She began to cry asking for help.

Atsuko : hiks.. stop.. please.. hiks.. help me, papa.. mama..Kai…

Ray : that is what will you get, if you stay near Takahashi Kai again. Mark my word. He is mine. And don’t ever try to steal him away from me.

Atsuko : noo!!!

……………………….

Atsuko wake up from her dream, her body is sweating so much, and there is some tears in her eyes. she checking her surround, as she make sure that she is still at Oshima house, she began to calm down a bit. She wonder, what make her have this night mare.  As she feel thirsty, she went outside to have a drink. Oshima ma always put the water container on the right of dining table. As she know that sometimes Acchan will wake up in the middle and want to drink some water.  Actually Oshima ma has put a glass of water near her table. But seems like Atsuko forget about it.

As she still hurt her feet, she walking slowly, and depend on her stick. She opened the door and went straight to the dining table. She search for a glass of water and fill it with water. As she drink the water, her heart is calm down a bit. As she startled by some voice. The voice that she love to hear, but also make her heart aches.

Kai : At.. Atsuko? You awake?

Atsuko : Kai?! is that you?

Kai : un.. I have sleepover in Yuu place. and I can’t sleep. and when I go outside the room, I see you in the dining room.

Atsuko : souka.. I am thirsty, so I went to get some water.

Kai : Atsuko, how is your feet? Did it still hurt? Let me check it.

Kai then directly touch Atsuko feet, without even waiting for Atsuko to anwer him. his action, make Atsuko yelp, and lost her balance, as Kai touch her joint that still hurt. Kai quickly held her in his embrace.

Kai : I am sorry. Let’s go back to your room first.

With that he lift her bridal style again and put Acchan in her bed.  this little action really make Acchan heart skip a beat.

Atsuko pov

I don’t know why, but everytime he is near me, I can’t help but feel my heart beat increase. And the way he take care of me, really make me feel like a princess, rather than a burden. He is really gentle and kind. Kai kun, I think I like you….

End of pov

They went to silent, as Kai checking Atsuko’s feet. Because of his father, he know how to cure at least a simple wound or a swollen leg like this. deep in Kai heart, he is happy that he can used what his father has taught him.  Atsuko then touch his face again, as she trace his face from head to eyes and then to his dimples and mouth. Kai let her touch his face.The way Atsuko touch him, really make his heart beat faster. He like her smooth skin make a contact on his face.

Atsuko : why are you smiling, Kai?

Kai : hm..? what do you mean?

Atsuko : I know you just smiling Kai, from your face I can tell that you are happy.

Kai : souka.. well, I am happy that I can treat your wound. At least, I can help you to ease the hurt you fell. By doing this. (massaging Atsuko leg)

Atsuko : you don’t need to be this kind to me Kai. (blushing)

Kai : why..? you don’t like it? should I become a bad guy instead? (teasing her)

Atsuko : no.. it is not like that, but… I don’t want people started to misunderstand us.

Kai : … no

Atsuko : eh?

Kai : I don’t want to. I can’t promise you that.  You are hurt because of me. so.. it is my responsibility to take care of you.

Atsuko : … I am okay, Kai. I can take care of myself. And I think I want to sleep already. Thank you Kai.

Kai pov

I hate it, when she tell me to stay away from her. she is hurt because of my issue. I will deal it with Ray later. I have enough of her nonsense. But, why she looks so upset? Did she hate me? she want me to stay away from her and now her face looks upset. I guess I can’t really force her to be my friend.

End of Pov

Kai : Atsuko, did you hate me? I mean… being my friend?

Atsuko : ..no, I don’t hate you Kai. And I .. loved to be your friend. It is just, there are some people who didn’t like us to be a friend.

Kai : I don’t care about people. All I want to know that you want to be my friend. It is enough. well, I won’t distrube you anymore. Sleep well, Atsuko.

Kai then stand up and take Atsuko blanket and cover her body with blanket. Before he leave, he looked at her again. As he look at Atsuko, his eyes met with her eyes. Even though, she is blind somehow when she look at  him, he can feel his heart beat is increasing.  He really can’t resist her eyes. It is such a pity, that those brunette eyes, such a beautiful eyes can’t see anything. As he walk to the door, he look at her again. This time, Atsuko already close her eyes.

Kai : good night, Atsuko… i won't let anyone to hurt you again. I promise.
Title: Re: Come closer please (Kai x Acchan) chapter 7. Update!!
Post by: kazuko on August 21, 2015, 04:55:34 PM
Kai has to make Acchan believe that there's no one and nothing can disturb their relationship.
Title: Re: Come closer please (Kai x Acchan) chapter 7. Update!!
Post by: AI712 on August 22, 2015, 04:31:30 AM
Thanks for the story .....
Update soon :D
Title: Re: Come closer please (Kai x Acchan) chapter 7. Update!!
Post by: minami_24 on November 29, 2015, 12:46:04 PM
author-san please update soon  :D
i'm curious about relationship between kai and atsuko  XD
Title: Re: Come closer please (Kai x Acchan) chapter 7. Update!!
Post by: sadrilim on December 01, 2015, 02:52:07 AM
@minami24 : please be patient, I just updated one of my fanfic. So I think I will be update next week.  If can I will update the next chapter this sunday. I am happy somebody still want to read my fanfic.  :)

@Al712 : sure, but not so fast. This week or next week will do.

@kazuko : ha ha, but in my story this Kai is a bit stupid for relationship matter. It will be a long way for them.
Title: Re: Come closer please (Kai x Acchan) chapter 7. Update!!
Post by: sadrilim on December 05, 2015, 10:29:37 AM
Hi all,

This is the next chapter, enjoy and sorry for the bad english :)

Chapter 8 : Closer Bond

It been a while since the incident. And Kai has been visited Acchan every day. He always come bring the note, study material and sometimes some snacks. He make sure Acchan didn’t miss her lesson when she is absent. And sometimes he try to make a joke. It is a fail joke, everybody who hear it won’t laugh at his jokes. But different with Acchan, she always smile or laugh at Kai’s joke.

Kai and Acchan is study together. While Yuu is still at school. He has a club activity while Kai is belong to go home club. He help Acchan by spell the notes for Acchan, and help her with her material. Shinoda Sensei has made a special material for Acchan, so that she can keep up with her lesson.  And after study for a quiet a while, Kai feel tired.

Kai : Acchan, let’s take a break. I am tired already.

Acchan : okay, but let me finish this page first.

Kai : I don’t know that you love to study that much. you looks like my sister.

Acchan : well, you need a hard work to be able to achive something right? if I didn’t work hard with this situation,  how I can keep up with the lesson. I don’t want people to look down on me because of that.

Kai : if there are people like that, I will sure to kill them. No body can look down on you because of your blindness. No body can guarantee what will happened next day, maybe they will be the one who are blind, and Acchan, may be you will get your eyesight again.

Acchan : thank you Kai, I wish I can. That will be a greatest gift for me. But the chance is very small. I need a donor.

Kai : can’t surgery fix your eyes?

Acchan : the doctor said there are possibility, but it is very low. at first, I desperately deny my situation. I try to walk without stick, or refuse to learn braille. I even refuse to eat or go out from the house. until, Aunt Oshima come and advise me. so little by little I try to learn the fact that I am blind.

Kai : …

Acchan : gommene, to talk about this thing. don’t worry, I am over it. I am okay now.

Acchan try to smile to Kai, but Kai know that Acchan is still sad about the fact. There are silent after that, as suddenly Kai hug Acchan. At first Acchan is surprise by his embrace, but then she hug him back. As Acchan hug him back, Kai hug her tighter.

Kai : don’t say I am okay. I know you are not, please don’t give me that fake smile. I hate that. 

Acchan : Kai… thank you..

Acchan then break the hug, her hand reach Kai’s face and when she touch his cheek, slowly she move closer.  She want to know about his reaction. Will he pull him out, or  will Kai stay and let her kiss him.

Kai pov

I am a bit disappointed when she break the hug.  deep inside my heart I know that I still want to feel her warm in me.  When Acchan touch me, I heart feel very nervous, it skip really hard. I can feel her sweet scent when she come closer. It is very nice, those sweet fragrance that I can make me feel calm and nervous in the same time.  Will she kiss me?!  This close distance, and those alluring lip which asked to be kissed.

This is too much for me. as she move slowly toward me, I stand it anymore. It is a dream? I then closed my eyes, and feel a softness.  But to my surprise, those softness didn’t happened in my lip. But in my cheek. Acchan kissed me on my cheek.

What is this feeling, why I feel disappointed. What did me expect.

Ha ha, I must be stupid. We are still friend. it is not possible for us to kiss each other like a couple, right?

End of Pov

Acchan then move and kiss him on the cheek. Then she flashed him, her angelic smile.

Kai : Acc..

Acchan : that is my thanks, Thank you Kai, for helping me study, for cheer me up, and for being my friend.

Kai : I .. you are welcome.

As Acchan want to move back and get up, she stepped on Kai’s water bottle, as she want to fall down. Kai quickly pull her toward him and this action make him lost balance and fall down. Now Acchan is on his top.

Yuu : Kai,  Acchan. I bring some snack..



Yuu : I am sorry to distrub your time. I will be back later.

Both Kai and Acchan then moved away, as Kai and Acchan position is still very closed. They keep quiet until Acchan broke the silent with her giggle.

Acchan : I think he misunderstand something here.

Kai : ye.. yeah. I will go out and talk to him.

….///…

At Night in Takahashi Household

Tonight Kai make up his mind to go to his father room and talked to his father. Kai rarely talk to his father because his father is a strict man. He always want the best one from Kai and Minami. He hope one day they can be a great doctor.

Knock ! Knock!

Kaito : come in

Kai : Father, do you have a moment?

Kaito is supprise that Kai has something to talk about. Usually, it is him who ask Kai something. But he hide his shocked expression very well. He then tell Kai to sit in the chair beside him.

Kaito : what do you want to ask, Kai?

Kai : father, I wonder if it is possible for a blind people to be able to see again without any donor?

Kaito : it is depend on. What cause of his/her blindness. What’s wrong?

Kai : well, if it because of incident. Is there any surgery that can help?

Kaito : hm… I won’t say there isn’t any chance. We need to see his / her eyes first. with nowdays technology that I have researched, I think it is possible if it is cause by brain damage.

Kai : really?

Kaito : yeah, right now it is still on progress. But soon, I think I will find a method to retrieve the damaged retina. What wrong? You seem to interested in what I have been done. Usually when I talked about those things with Minami, you just stay silent or just look at your phone.

Kai : well, actually. I have a friend that is blind because of accident. I wonder if she really doesn’t have any chance to be able to see.

Kaito : if you want, I can look at her. bring her medical result to me, I will see if there is any possibility for it. So.. it is a girl, huh? Do you interest in her?

Kai : huh?! wh.. what did you said, father? We just.. friend.

Kaito : friend, huh? I wonder if these day you go home late because of visiting that you called friend? ha ha ha

Kai : we.. just study together, nothing else. Now, please excuse me, father.

Kaito : hai! Hai! Good night my son

Kai : good night, father.

Kaito is very happy. He never really have a chat with Kai, since his wife is died. He really in lost back then, a busy doctor who need to raise his two small child. And because of a lot of stress and busy schedule, slowly he become a complete stranger to his children, especially Kai.  Back then, Kai is a cry baby. And he always want attention from his father. But, Kaito never really give Kai, his attention since he is busy, and because Kai is not good with the study and always fighting with his friend back then. Kaito always punish him.

Now, slowly Kaito realize that his relationship with his son is like a stranger and he want to change it. but, his pride really didn’t give any help to mend his relationship with his son. Now that he has something to talk to Kai, may be little by little he will have a chance to repair his relationship with Kai.
Title: Re: Come closer please (Kai x Acchan) chapter 8 Update!!
Post by: black_maa on December 06, 2015, 07:23:58 PM
Ah... it was sooo close.. but no worries Kai.. there will come more chances to get kisses from Atsuko..  :D
...just don't do something what could hurt her.. be hers knight!!  8)
Title: Re: Come closer please (Kai x Acchan) chapter 8 Update!!
Post by: Jsheep on June 04, 2016, 09:16:51 AM
Where r u author san?
Title: Re: Come closer please (Kai x Acchan) chapter 8 Update!!
Post by: sadrilim on June 05, 2016, 08:55:00 AM
I am sorry if I looks like neglecting my fanfic.  :sweatdrop:

It been too much things to do. And with a lot of member graduated I been in too much trouble to continue. I try to make fanfic, but the result are not good.  There isn't any 'soul' in it.

I will try to continue it. 

Once more I am sorry, please be patient with me. :)
Title: Re: Come closer please (Kai x Acchan) chapter 8 Update!!
Post by: rightsaver143 on June 15, 2016, 04:25:48 AM
kojiyu!!!!!!! :mon beam:
give yuu her haruna so that he can have his skinship :mon crazyinlove:
where is kojiyuu!!!!! :pleeease:

come on author-san!!!! :tantrum: :scolding:

kai already have acchan
so why does yuu still do not have haruna :ptam-cry: :angry1: :badluck:

update it please :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :on hypto: :mon cry:
Title: Re: Come closer please (Kai x Acchan) chapter 9 Update!!
Post by: sadrilim on June 23, 2016, 06:06:37 PM

Hi, all. I am back with my long OS. I hope I still didnt lose my 'touch' here  :nervous. Anyway enjoy and sorry for bad english.

@black_maa : Yes, Kai will protect her no matter what  XD

@Jsheep : I am back!! but I am sorry if I make this chapter shorter.  :bow:

@rightsaver143 : no promise, but I will try to make it  :cow:

Chapter 9 : Jealousy


Kai : Stay away from her this is my last warning for you Ray.

Ray : why Kai? I am so happy when you said you want to talk to me, please Kai, I am sorry for what I have done to you. I know that I am wrong, can’t we start over again?

Kai : I am sorry Ray, but we are done. 

Ray : it is because of her right?! You never talk coldly like this with me, even after that incident. Please Kai.. don’t leave me alone. I love you.

Kai : Ray, I forgive you, long after you cheat on me, even after you ashamed me in the class, I have long forgive you, but please don’t force me to love you again. because I know it is not possible. Atsuko didn’t have anything to do with it. If I know that you lay on a hand on her again, I will never forgive you.

With that Kai leave Ray alone in the roof top, Kai has called her today to meet alone, and after finish talking about what he want to say, Kai then leaving the angry Ray behind, she is desperate, angry, and sad.  She know that she have break Kai heart, and she also have cheat on him, toying him, but after breaking with Kai, she finally realize that she love him. And she is such a fool for taking Kai for granted. Now that everything is too late for her to win Kai heart.

Ray : I won’t give up on you Kai. If I can’t have you, then no other girl can have you, especially that blind girl!!! She doesn’t love you Kai. she just used your kindness.

………………

Kai then joined his gang to eat, they always eat at back school near the old tree if the weather is nice.

Yuu : yo, Kai, where are you going?

Kai : ah, I just to toilet just now and I went to buy some food, but I think I am a little late. They are sold out.

Minami : where is your bento? I thought I have made it for you before I leave for a morning practice.

Kai : I wake up late, so… I forget about my bento.

Minami : sigh… I should have known. Here, eat my share.

Atsuko : you should eat my share too, Kai.

Atsuko then signaling him to take her food. And Kai does. When he eat her food. His eyes beam of happiness.

Kai : Atsuko, this is so delicious. Did Aunty take a different recipes? This is different from what she made, and it is really delicious.

Atsuko : thank you, actually I made the bento this morning, with the help of Aunty. (blushing)

Minami : I think you will be a great wife, Acchan. Kai is really love to eat, so if you have win his stomach, I am sure you will win his heart.

Kai : shu.. shut up (blush hard)

Yuu : aww.. Kai is blushing really hard right now.

Kai : Yuu!!

As everybody laugh and chatting, accidentally, Atsuko dropped a juice and it spilled at her uniform. Minami then accompany Atsuko to the restroom. And they have a small chat, together.

Minami : Acchan, thank you.

Atsuko : eh?

Minami : thank you for bringing back the old Kai. after you came here, he began to open himself more. he smile more, and because of you, he began to talk to father again.  Father also happy because he take an interest to become a doctor.

Atsuko : I didn’t do much. I think I am the one who should thank him. He help me a lot, and he save me when I am in danger. I am really glad to have him as a friend.

Minami smile at what Atsuko mention. Atsuko face seems a little bit sad when she refer him as a friend. it is oblivious for her that both of them are fall in love with each other, but her twin is just too stupid to realize that, or to say too scared.

Minami : say, Acchan. You love Kai right?

Atsuko : eh? why.. so sudden (blushing)

Minami : it is between me and you, come one, tell me.

Atsuko still blushing, as lately when she thinking of Kai, her heart started to beat faster and faster. She know that her face is very red right now as she close her face with her hand and give a nod to Minami question.

Minami : I know it! I know it!  don’t worry, I won’t Kai about this. I am with you and I think it is about the time for Kai to forget about past and fall in love again.

Atsuko : fall in love again? Takamina, what do you mean by that?

Minami : ah… I am sorry but I may be not a right person to tell you about this, and I don’t think Kai want you to hear it from another person other than him.

Atsuko : please tell me, Takamina! I actually curious, if it has anything to do with Ray?

Minami : sigh.. actually I don’t really know the detail since he didn’t want to tell me. But, I will tell you from what I know. To answer your question, yes. Kai and Ray used to dating each other back then. But, Ray cheat on him, and the worst she tell him that she just toying him and did that because it is interesting to dating a nerd guy like Kai.

Atsuko : nerd?

Minami : believe me, Kai used to be a nerd, but that  long time ago, before he change his appearance, with Tomo help. Well, Tomo is handsome and fashion leader anyway. Even I amaze that he can change the stubborn Kai.  well, Kai change his appearance to prove Ray that he is not just a nerd, it is part of his small revenge I think. But ever since that I feel like I have lost my brother. He easily get angry and didn’t talk much at home.

Atsuko : souka…

Looking at Atsuko who is a bit sad, make Takamina curse herself. She know that this topic will hurt both of them, especially Atsuko.
As she try to cheer Atsuko up.

Minami : but you really change him back. it is because of you, and I think he has move on already.

Atsuko : I don’t really do anything.

Minami : (giggle), well if you think so. Come on, let’s go back before Kai looking for us.

With that, they left the rest room, not known by them there is somebody that have been hiding a long the way in the rest room.

Noro : I must tell, Ray about this. That bitch is really fall in love with Kai.

end of chapter 9
Title: Re: Come closer please (Kai x Acchan) chapter 9 Update!!
Post by: AI712 on June 25, 2016, 12:12:17 AM
finally an update :D
Im waiting for 'an old story to tell' too, hehe
good job , author-san
but I hate Ray :|
haha
Title: Re: Come closer please (Kai x Acchan) chapter 9 Update!!
Post by: black_maa on June 25, 2016, 03:22:55 PM
Welcome back.. :)
Everything was good until... there was two unnecessary ears..  :huhuh
New troubles already are behind the corner.. uh.. :wth .. I think.... maybe.  :D
Title: Re: Come closer please (Kai x Acchan) chapter 9 Update!!
Post by: sadrilim on June 27, 2016, 05:35:46 PM
@black ma :  yes,  may be a lot of drama.   XD

@AI712 : I plan to finish this first,  after that I will finish my instant girlfriend and last one is an old story to tell.  Glad there is somebody who want to read "an old story to tell".  Thank you  :)