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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 7) update 8-14
« Reply #80 on: August 14, 2011, 06:18:50 AM »
i really love the direction the fanfic is going in
the suspense is killing me... what's going to happen to atsumina  :cry:, can't wait for the next chappie.
if it's not to much to ask could you please pm the continuation :)

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 7) update 8-14
« Reply #81 on: August 14, 2011, 07:05:00 AM »
Please update the next chapter the best you can.. I wonder if Acchan will see the scar on Minami ???!!   Thank you...

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 7) update 8-14
« Reply #82 on: August 14, 2011, 07:38:23 AM »
Great chapter...
 :cathappy: they are together
so happy for the AtsuMina & MariMii couples :inlove:
Don't separete Mariko&Mii-chan cause
I think she wanna do something to save the Forbidden Couple AtsuMina in a near future
The flashback....it's fate that they meet again after What happend in the past...
I fear that God&the Devil lord will try to separete Takamina&Atsuko and punish them as Yuko or Tomo

I want to know what happen that night
CAN I have the missing part please :wub:
Like I didn't hear it, like I couldn't hear it.... I shouldn't have heard your love in the first place
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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 7) update 8-14
« Reply #83 on: August 14, 2011, 10:59:15 AM »
 :farofflook:

yatta the special chapter!!!  afufu this is going to be hot

i can feel the finale is on its way   :imdead:
Still shipping them early pairs. 1st generation ftw!

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 7) update 8-14
« Reply #84 on: August 14, 2011, 11:08:10 AM »
GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!   :farofflook: :farofflook:
That is so hot! Hahaha  :thumbup :deco:

*cough* That scene, please pm me... I need the full version *cough*  :luvluv1: :luvluv2:
Aha, actually I forget about MariMii, because it's too many parts of the angel and devil   :shy2:
but glad that MariMii are together now  :grin: :cow:

I need your next update  :on woohoo:

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 7) update 8-14
« Reply #85 on: August 14, 2011, 12:32:29 PM »
whoooaaaaaaaa... thanks lot for reading my story guuuys.... i'm glad u like it...  :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: :grin: :grin: :grin:

and coz your support i finnaly manage to finish chapter 8...  :farofflook: :farofflook: :farofflook:

i dont know it good or not but i hope u like. please read....  :yep: :yep:


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chapter 8
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That night, both the angel and the devil let out all their passion and their love. They breathe in the same breath and move in synchronize. They are one now and no one could separated them.

Minami and acchan breath heavily and really sweaty that night. And finally in one move they let out all they pleasure and lust. Minami now laying on the top of acchan.

Still breathing heavily acchan hold minami and bury his face in her chest

"Minami...."

"Atsuko...."

They look at each other as breathe heavily. Minami give acchan a smooth kiss on her lips and acchan kiss him back with passion and love. As they break the kiss minami smirk to acchan

"U are such a wild cat acchan." Minami said and it make acchan pinch his cheek.

"Ittatatatatataiiii yooo~"

And then she pinch his nose

"Heeeee...ats...atsuko....I can't breathe."

Acchan let go her pinch and minami smirk to her

"U could kill me and I don't wanna my baby can't see their dad."

"Eh?! Why u really sure you will be a dad?"

"Uhm...well coz what we have done tonight and u already mine, I  even get hurt at me shoulder." Minami look at acchan.

Acchan see minami shoulder is bleeding.

"I'm sorry."

"Naaah, its okay. U are a wild kitty."

"But u like it don't u?"

Minami kiss acchan "yeah?!"

"Now let's get to sleep."

Minami roll over to acchan side and grab the blanket to cover their body.

Acchan hurry move closer to minami and snuggle to him.

"Ne, minami."

"Uhm..?"

"We will always together right."

"Yeah! I will and u?will u always be my side?"

"Un, I will. No matter who u are and what u are. I'll be beside u."

"I won't regret what happen tonight atsuko. Even if I'll get punish."

"Un, me too."

Soon they feel asleep but before they fall into a sleep acchan say something.

"Ne minami..."

"Uhm?"

"Do u remember our bet?"

"Yeah. Why?"

"Wanna cancel it?"

"No need to cancel it."

"Why?"

"Coz u already mine and I'm yours." Minami said as give a short kiss to acchan.

"I love u minami."

"I love u more atsuko."

And then they both fell in the deep sleep.


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next morning
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Minami wake up and feel the sun shine above him. He try to open his eyes and find his cute devil still sleeping. He bring his hand to the devil cheek and cherish it.

"U aren't a devil acchan. U are an angel. My precious and beloved angel. No matter what happen I'll be always protect you. Believe me."

Minami then move closer and capture the little devil lips. He kiss slowly in order not to wake up his lover. But suddenly his lover make a move.

As minami gonna break the kiss his week little devil hand grab his head and prevent him break the kiss. They then continue kissing each other passionately. Hungry to taste each other lips. Minami position him self on top of acchan in order to kiss her easily. Their hand twirl each other and minami press his body to her.

They then break the kiss coz in need of air. Minami look at his cute angel and smile.

"Ohayou princess!"

"Ohayou my prince!"

"Well, guess its time for us to get up minami." As acchan wanna get up minami grab her hand and pull her and hug her.

"Let's just skip school for today acchan." Minami said as bring acchan to his embrace. Acchan just chuckle and snuggle closer.

"Okay."


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-meanwhile in the other place-

"Ne tomochin~"

"Nani yuko?"

"Why I feel something gonna happen?"

"What do u mean?"

"I feel something gonna happen with takamina."

"Well, yeah me too. What should we do?"

"Uhm..... I'll find away" yuko said as smile to tomochin.


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a couple months later

"Mi....na....mi...." Acchan called as hugging him from behind.

"Nani...?" Minami said as looking at acchan.

"Maaa...maaa...look how in a lovely dovely now?!" Miichan try to teased them.

"Mii...miichan...??" Minami start to blush.

"Well, I'm happy for you guys. Omedetou..."

"Yeah...thank you miichan." They both smile to miichan.

"Anyway miichan, we want ro tell you something." Minami then call her.

"No need minami, I already known everything." Miichan smile.

"So u know that I'm a...."

"Yeah, thanks for protecting me, and don't worry acchan I won't mad at u since I look that u are a good devil." Miichan said as hug acchan.

"Miichan...thank u."

"No need to worry. In fact I already free from my curse. Thanks to u too guys. Okay, I gotta go. Mari chan already wait." Miichan said as waving her hand.

"Ne minami, can I ask u something?" Acchan asked him still hugging him

"Yeah, what is it?"

"Uhm....about the scar in your back?"

"Owgh, that's a long story."

"Are u trying saving a little girl that's why u got it?" Acchan tighten her hug now.

"Eh? How u know?" Minami ask surprise

"Because....."

"Are....are u???" Acchan nod and minami hurry hug acchan tighly.

"All I can remember is there is a boy that try to help me. But I don't remember any memory except that." Acchan said almost crying

"I won't do the same mistake acchan. I'll protect u. I'll be your shield."

"Minami...."


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-at devil kingdom-
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"Call tomomi now." The lord

Tomomi come and bow to the devil lord "yes, my lord."

"Seems that acchan has failed. She even fall for that angel. Now GO GET HER AND KILL THAT ANGEL!!!"

Tomomi frown and just stunned there "now hurry doing your task."

"Ye...ye....yes my lord." Tomomi hurry go out the palace in worry.

"what should I do now?!"

"Atsuko...."



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"-back at the aparto-"

Minami and acchan are having a dinner now. They look happy together and enjoy the food. After that they sit in the living room. Acchan resting her head in minami shoulder and they start talking.

"Ne acchan."

"Uhm?"

"I….I …I wanna talk to u about something."

Acchan look confuse at minami “well, you I love u so much right?”

Acchan now looking at minami seriously “And….and…. u know I wanna be your side forever right?”

Acchan nod and hold minami hand. Minami get up and then pul out something from his pocket. It’s a beautiful red box. Minami then lower his body holding acchan hand.

“atsuko…. Will u….will u…”

“what is it minami??”

“will u marry me??”

Acchan surprise as hearing minami propose her and show her an engagement ring. Acchan nod and minami slide the ring to her finger. They then hugging each other.

“Yes…. Yes… YES!!! Of course I want. Minami this is so sweet.”

As the keep embracing each other suddenly there is a voice

“Sorry for disturbing Atsuko, but I gotta take u to the devil lord.”

Minami hurry cover acchan with his body “To…to…tomomi???”

“Atsuko, come I don’t wanna to hurt you. The devil lord searching for u.” tomomi come with the evil troops to take acchan.

“NO!!! NO one could bring atsuko to that evil lord.” Minami glare at tomomi.

Acchan then hug minami from behind and said something to tomomi “Tomomi, I cant, I know the lord will punis me. but I love minami. I cant go with you.”

“Ah. Seems my friend have done the same mistake as I am. So, then I don’t have any choice.”

Tomomi then swing her swords , try to attack minami and acchan but something happen. A white light shine in that room and they heard a voice.


“Takamina and acchan not make a mistake tomomi.” Suddenly all the troops vanish and there only tomomi

“They not make a mistake tomomi, we are make a mistake.”

“eeeh??? Tomochin. U know her?” minami surprise

“of course I know takamina. She is the one.” Minami frown.


Tomochin come approach tomomi and hug her “I miss you tomomi. You have gone through the same situation as them right? We have gone through it. Now lets fixed it. Please.” Tomochin still hugging tomomi.

Tomomi then cry in tomochin embrace and hug her back “I miss u too tomochin. I’m sorry…. I’m sorry… u got punished because of me.”

“There…there…. Now, please don’t cry. Lets help them now.” Tomomi nod and apologize to acchan

“I’m sorry atsuko.”

“Its ok tomomi.”


As the situation calm they have a serious talk.

“So tomochin, why are u here?”

“well, our lord want me to bring u and acchan to him.”

“what??? What the lord wants?” minami ask

“well he already know about u and acchan. He just said that he wanna meet acchan.”

“what for??”

“I don’t know. What do u think?” tomochin ask

“uhm…. Well…..” minami look at acchan and as acchan wanna speak suddenly she feel something


“ugh…ugh…ughmp…uhuk… uhoek…” acchan cover her mouth prevent to throw up. She hurry go to the bathroom and she feel she wanna vomit.

Tomochin, minami and tomomi follow her. minami worried

“acchan….are you okay?” minami ask

“I don’t know, I feel I just wanna vomit.”

Suddenly tomomi whispered something to her

“do you……” acchan nod and tomomi look at minami and tomochin

“what happen to her tomomi?” minami ask as approaching acchan

Tomomi stand beside tomochin and look at her

“well….. u know what that mean when a woman vomit like that minami.”

Minami look at acchan surprise.

“acchan… are you…. Are you…”

Acchan bring minami hand and put it in her stomach and smile.



“say hello to the new family minami..”



TBC~

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so hoooow is it guuuuy????  :huhuh :huhuh :huhuh :huhuh :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: hope u like it and anyway.... who havent i send the full version of chapter 7???  :huhuh :huhuh :huhuh
« Last Edit: August 14, 2011, 01:53:58 PM by sorakamiya »

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 8) update 8-14
« Reply #86 on: August 14, 2011, 12:55:59 PM »
Gah!!! Minami propose~~ and Acchan pregnant??  :shock:

BUT I LOVE IT!!!  :wriggly: 

but Acchan sure are fast~~ I guess because they're not human.. hahaha...  :mon thumb:

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 8) update 8-14
« Reply #87 on: August 14, 2011, 01:17:50 PM »
Ahahahaha, LoL its already a week more dad of course can. :))))) LoL

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 8) update 8-14
« Reply #88 on: August 14, 2011, 01:32:37 PM »
matte!!! that was fast hahahah she's already pregnant    :shock:


oh well I wonder why the lord is calling them both   :mon scratch:

nice 1 :D!! :mon thumb:
Still shipping them early pairs. 1st generation ftw!

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 8) update 8-14
« Reply #89 on: August 14, 2011, 01:33:07 PM »
I thought it usually on the second months of the first trimester..  :lol:

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 8) update 8-14
« Reply #90 on: August 14, 2011, 01:43:12 PM »
^ really??? Woakakakaka, I think I'm gonna edit it a bit to make it a bit based in reality. :)))))

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 8) update 8-14
« Reply #91 on: August 14, 2011, 01:53:38 PM »
WOW!!!

you already updated two chapters.....that's fast!!!!
I already sent you a pm for chapter 7 full version

Say when did Mariko-sama and Miichan get together??????? Anyways I'm happy for them!!!

Now Acchan preggy!!!!!!! WOW!!!!! OMEDETTO!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD XD XD XD XD
Takamina is gonna be a dad now :P
So Acchan was actually an angel??? Wow

Now I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
I wanna know whats gonna happen to them!!!!
Update as soon as you can

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 8) update 8-14
« Reply #92 on: August 14, 2011, 01:54:27 PM »
wow... so romantic... takamina propose to acchan and acchan is pregrant... what a good news.. But, good news wont last long as the devil lord is searching for them, right??!! Oh goshh... please update the next chapter ya.. thanks

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 8) update 8-14
« Reply #93 on: August 14, 2011, 02:01:23 PM »
omg that moment is just too sweet  :inlove: :inlove:

And Acchan is pregnant!! Yey yey!  :cow: :yossi: :otomerika: :thumbup :thumbup

 :bow: :bow: hurry update  :deco: :deco:

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 8) update 8-14
« Reply #94 on: August 14, 2011, 02:34:56 PM »
sorry for the late comment but could you also pm me the full version? xD thanks!!

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 8) update 8-14
« Reply #95 on: August 14, 2011, 02:53:47 PM »
you can pm me the full version?
thank  :wub:

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 8) update 8-14
« Reply #96 on: August 14, 2011, 03:02:07 PM »
okay i have PM all the full version of chap 7 but anyway Sydney W i cant send the full version to u it said that my PM is blocked  :huhuh :huhuh

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 8) update 8-14
« Reply #97 on: August 14, 2011, 04:15:34 PM »
wow takaboy is going to become a dad
and acchan is pregnant + their getting engaged  :roll:
this is by far the best chapter yet
can't wait for the next update!!!!

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 8) update 8-14
« Reply #98 on: August 14, 2011, 05:23:45 PM »
sorakamiya : i received your full pv.. thanks   :thumbsup

Waiting for you next update... awesome... keep up the good job

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 8) update 8-14
« Reply #99 on: August 15, 2011, 09:13:17 AM »
Hey, can you PM me the full version? thanks.
been reading your fics all this while, great job!   :)

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