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Offline blueangel65

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 9 part 2) update 9-04
« Reply #120 on: September 04, 2011, 06:23:13 PM »
 KOJIMA? means.. YUKO?  :?
haHaha!  :lol: YUKO is the first person that I think..
So I think It's gonna be a Yes!  :twothumbs 'coz maybe Next is KojiYuu, haHa! and I love this Chapter..
actuaLLy aLL!  :twothumbs I'm happy too, that the AngeL Lord, finaLLy found his onLy chiLd,
and It's Atsuko, and the Little Prince is Minami, they are reaLLy Destin for each other..  :inlove: :D

I hope the person that Destiny to me wiLL come soon too.. haHa!  :P

Update Soon, haHa Thanks!  :twothumbs

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 9 part 2) update 9-04
« Reply #121 on: September 04, 2011, 10:42:43 PM »
YAY family reunion!!! SO happy the lord approves of Atsumina and TomoTomo!!!

Ohhhh Kojipa is going to appear soon =D that means we get YUKO!!!! BWAHAHAHA

THen Acchan with her new powers will help the Angels defeat the Devil lord and be one happy family
with everyone !!!! YAY

THanks for the update Sora =D, please update soon.

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 9 part 2) update 9-04
« Reply #122 on: September 14, 2011, 04:53:29 AM »
That's so great
please update soon
Please!!!!
I'm Waiting!Waiting!!!

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 9 part 2) update 9-04
« Reply #123 on: October 09, 2011, 12:39:01 PM »
Please update... waiting & waiting your update... thanks

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 9 part 2) update 9-04
« Reply #124 on: October 09, 2011, 02:58:02 PM »
Waiting for the KojiYuu moment <3333

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 9 part 2) update 9-04
« Reply #125 on: October 23, 2011, 08:07:00 PM »
Ah~~~ :inlove: I've just read this today and its soooooo gud!!!! I'm in love with it~  :wub: :inlove:
And.. please.. also pm me the continuation of.. u know.. the passion night of Acchan and Takaboy~~~  :heart:
Thank You~  :thumbsup :cow:

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 9 part 2) update 9-04
« Reply #126 on: November 12, 2011, 11:46:56 PM »
 :panic: Waah! Ths fic is SUGOI! :tama-yeeaah:  waiting for your next update   :tama-bye: thank you!
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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 9 part 2) update 9-04
« Reply #127 on: November 13, 2011, 03:56:06 AM »
whoooaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa... thanks for reading guuuuys....  :on gay:

and sorry for soooooo long to update this....  :panic: :panic: :panic:


i have to do my final project to graduate. sooooo sumimaseeen neee~  :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop:


here the next chapter~  :grin:

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~Chapter 10 part 1~
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Somewhere in the angel kingdom there is one place that tight secure. A place where an angel must repay for what they have done. A place where magic can't be used there and the place where no one would visit. its an angel prison.

Each room in there already cast a spell so no one could break it. The room is dark and only light with a moon light every night.

in one of the room there , staying a beautiful figure. The one that was the most powerful angel, the one that the greatest of all. But now she only an ordinary angel. An angel that in her punishment time for what she has done in the past. A crime that she has commit. A crime the for actually full of sweetness but deathly....

"LOVE...."


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"So, my lord should we get her now?" Tomochin ask to the angel lord.

"Hmm... Better we visit her tomorrow. U guys just have a rest first. I'm sure u all guys tired. Sashi n rie would guide u to your room." The lord said as leaving the hall.

"Hi everyone I'm sashi n this is rie. Let us guide u to your room."

They then follow sashi n rie to their room. TomoTomo in one room and also minami n atsuko whether miichan alone.

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Minami POV
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I got into my room and atsuko to take some rest. I help her to lay in bed there. The I headed to the window.

"Where are you going?" Atsuko said to prevent me from leaving her

"Nope, no where I just gonna open the window." I smile to her.

As the windows open I could feel the wind breeze. Aaah~ Its so peaceful. But I don't know until when this is could happen. Suddenly I feel a hand wrap to mine and a weigh in my shoulder.

"What are u thinking?" Atsuko ask me as rested her head in my shoulder.

"No, nothing acchan." I said as squeeze her hand.

"Minami.... I'm afraid." She suddenly said to me

"Ssshhh... Everything will be alright acchan. Now let's have a rest now."

Minami then guide acchan to their bed. He helps acchan to lay there as position him self next to acchan.

"sleep tight acchan. I love u."

"Un... U too minami. Love u."

After that we both soon fell asleep as hugging each other.

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~back in the devil world~

"My lord we have a new news."

"What is it?tell me!"

"The angel lord already found out about atsuko and now he wanna release her angel aura."

The devil lord frowned and shout "WHAT?! HOW HE FOUND OUT ABOUT IT??!!!!"

"So...so...sorry my lord we don't know." The guard begin to tremble in horror.

"tsk... Damn! If he finally release her angel aura we could be doom. Uhm... But for that he need some charm." The angel lord begin smirking

"Hahaha, but the charm is not in there. I still got a chance. Fufufufu~ GUARD!!! Call wolveri. Tell him to get rid of them."

"Yes my lord."

Hehe, after that I'll attack your kingdom ren.

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~next day in angel world~

Minami has wake up early and prepare go to meet yuko with tomochin and miichan whether acchan still sleeping in the bed. Suddenly acchan  try to open her eyes and got up, approaching her angel.

"Uhnm... Minami... Why u didn't wake me up." She said that as hugging minami from back. Still half sleeping.

"Ah, u awake? Sorry, I don't wanna wake u up since seems u really sleepy. Today just stay in here okay. Let me, tomochin and miichan do this." Minani said as look at her pretty devil.

"Moooou, I wanna come too. Let me coming with u." Acchan pout.

"Dameee~ u need a lot of rest. Think about our child okay. Don't worry I'll be quick. Tomo will accompany u." Minami said as give his wife a quick kiss and hug.

"Un.... I believe u and promise me u'll hurry come back okay." Acchan said as hugging and stroking minami hair.

"I will." He then kiss her again then kiss her stomach before he leave "be good child. Daddy go first." Acchan just chuckle looking the scene in front of her. Minami leaves acchan as tomochin arrive in their room with miichan n tomo.

"Yooo ohayou minami, acchan." They greet them.

"Please take care of her tomo."

"Sure minami don't worry." Tomo said as smile to minami.
After that minami , tomochin and miichan headed to the angel prison.

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Yuko POV
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~in angel prison~


I sit in this dark room, alone. Every day I only think about one person. Its her. Its been 3 years since that incident. I wonder how is she now. I got stuck into this room coz one thing, I fell for human. I got a task to be her angel protector. But it turn out that I love her. Our feeling is mutual. I could sense it. Then one day when I go out with her in my human form the angel guard come and take me from her. I can't do anything since they used spell to catch me. I could see she is crying and shouting to them to let me go but in the end she still can't do anything. I was take to the previous angel lord. He found out about our relationship and punished me.

Each they I spend my day just worrying about her. What happen to her after that happen? How is she now? Is she still remember me? All I can do is just wait. Wait for something that could make me bring to her. Only this dolphin necklace that reminds me of her. We got the same pair. Today, as usual I just stand looking outside from my cell then....

"Yuko, u have been released." The guard said to me and I surprise.

"What?"

"U have been released now come with me."

OMG is this real?! I'm free. I follow the guard to the outside the prison and there 3 people already waiting for me.

"Yuko?!"

"Takamina? Waaaaaa~ how are u?" We then hugging each other.

"Takamina, what are u doing here?and who that girl?" I pointed to the one of the girl that look like gachapin.

"Owgh, she is miichan."

"Ah, I'm yuko yoroshiku. So what is it about takamina? Why I suddenly get released?"

"I'll tell u on the way back to the palace. I also wanna introduce u with someone." takamina grab me and we headed to the angel palace.

Along the way to the palace takamina tell me all and I know this is my chance to meet her again. As we arrive there are 2 girls approach us.

"Minamiiiiii~" the girl with a short hair run towards minami and hug him.

"Ah, ac..acchan..."

"I miss you." The girl snuggle to him.

"Fufufufu, my....my.....takamina what a lovely dovely wifu u have there." I smirk to him and he blush.

"Yu...yuko...?!" Minami stare at me

"Uhm? Minami? Kanojo wa dare?"

"Owgh, yeah this is yuko my sister u could say."

"Ahaha, hello there. U must be atsuko right? Takamina tell me a lot about u. And waaaa I will soon to be aunt. Omedetou neeee~" I said as give atsuko a hug.

"Aaaah, thank you. Nice to meet u yuko."

We keep hugging until takamina pretend to cough "*cough....cough... Ahem..."

"Ahahaha, it seems takamina is jealous." I try to tease him "and u are actually a guy takamina. I'm amaze."

"Heey, its because of that bracelet. And plus... I can't get changed."

"Hmm... I wonder if acchan like u as a guy / a girl takamina." Now tomochin try to tease him.

Acchan just chuckle and kiss takamina cheek "I don't care will he is girl / guy. I still love him." She said as cling to takamina's hand.

"Ahaha, I envy u guys." Looking at them I feel a bit envy. I miss my nyan2.

"Yuko." A voice call me

"My lord?!"

"Welcome back. Sorry I could let u go now."

"Its okay my lord."

"U already know what u should do right?" The angel lord ask me.

"Yes my lord."

"Good!! Well, now u guys go take a rest.Tomorrow is the big day."

"Yes my lord." We all say as go headed to our room.

Wait for me nyan nyan. I'll be back?!


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~In Human World~

A long haired girl lay in her bed. She looks fine but inside of her mind she cant forget the incident that happen in her life. Something that make her lost her smile and soul.

“I’m sorry.” The girl said every night.

“Please come back….” Something she hopes everyday.

“I promise I wont mad at you anymore…” the promise that she always says.

“Please… I miss you…” the tears that never stop to flow from her eyes….

Waiting for her lover to come



“Yuuchan…”




TBC

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dou???  :huhuh and sorry it so short.... i'll post the flash back in next chapter okay~  :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop:

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 10 part 1) update 11-13
« Reply #128 on: November 13, 2011, 04:17:16 AM »
kojiyuuu.. awww haruna you miss your squirrel right?

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 10 part 1) update 11-13
« Reply #129 on: November 13, 2011, 04:19:19 AM »
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG KOJIYUU  :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:

please update soon!!!  :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic:

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 10 part 1) update 11-13
« Reply #130 on: November 13, 2011, 04:42:29 AM »
douzo ~ please update the next. Thankkksss

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 10 part 1) update 11-13
« Reply #131 on: November 13, 2011, 04:54:33 AM »
Please update soon  :bow:
 :thumbsup I love it! XD

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 10 part 1) update 11-13
« Reply #132 on: November 13, 2011, 04:57:57 AM »
Aww~~ Acchan and Takamina  :inlove:
Hopefully Yuko and Haruna can meet again soon  XD
 :bow: Please update soon  :bow:

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 10 part 1) update 11-13
« Reply #133 on: November 13, 2011, 05:31:27 AM »
please continue update soon soon soon
Finally Yuko have chance meet her Nyan Nyan again. Glad for them.
If release Atsuko's angel aura devils could be doom?! Woww I'm waiting that

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 10 part 1) update 11-13
« Reply #134 on: November 15, 2011, 11:51:09 PM »
Waaa!  :panic:

Yuuchan& NyanNyan will see each other soon!
Can't wait!

Thank you & Waiting for your update.  :on gay:
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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 10 part 1) update 11-13
« Reply #135 on: November 16, 2011, 09:07:57 AM »
Yuko go to your Nyan Nyan!!!!

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 10 part 1) update 11-13
« Reply #136 on: March 16, 2012, 06:14:19 AM »
Waaa!   
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Yuuchan& NyanNyan will see each other soon!
Can't wait!  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Thank you & Waiting for your  :heart: :heart: :heart:update.   :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
UPDATEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 10 part 1) update 11-13
« Reply #137 on: March 24, 2012, 09:17:05 AM »
very good story!!!
im excited on the kojiyuu couple!!!
plssss update soon !!!!

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 10 part 1) update 11-13
« Reply #138 on: June 09, 2012, 04:43:56 AM »
sorokamiya-san
plss update this!!!
im dying here!!! :fainted:
i want to know what will happen to them!!!
pls update this soon!!! :kneelbow:

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 10 part 1) update 11-13
« Reply #139 on: June 12, 2012, 03:30:49 PM »
im inlove with your fic kyaaaaaaaaaa another atsumina baby!   XD XD XD XD XD
update soon plss

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