CHAPTER 1“You should be thankful. The Mistress has a liking towards you. She would never be this gentle. Not even to Aya.”
Gee, I wonder who the mistress is?
This woman has such power that the girls are afraid to rebel. You’re either with her or you’re dead. I flinch as the last chain is tightly wrapped around my wrist.
Hmmmm...I'm thinking some type of fantasy-type of setting.
The bonds on my wrist and ankles loosen just an inch and I sigh in relief. I smile at Koharu as my thank you. She smiles back faintly.
...
I can only do so much, but she understands. She knows that there’s only so much you can do. She pushes a piece of black hair from her face. I know she must feel so guilty for having to tie me down, but I forgive her. Everything she does is against her will. So I don’t blame her for anything.
Okay, so the person being chained up may not necessarily be an enemy, per se, seeing as how despite being the one chaining her up, Koharu isn't giving off an aura like she dislikes/despises her. Rather, it's just the whole "with me or against me" thing that "the mistress" has.
* JFC ponders thoughtfully.
I let my body drop and the chains carry my weight as I try to relax. They press into my sore wrists as I slump down. I’m so tired from all this work. This is the only time I get to rest. I’ve been up all night. Sleeping like this is uncomfortable, but it’s better than how I see the others get treated. I’m being treated like a princess believe it or not.
Eep...if this treatment isn't that bad, I'd hate to see what the others have to go through.
I watch Koharu exit out the cell door, but Sayumi still stays. Her angelic eyes stare intensely at me.
The fact that she's referring to them by their first names...she must be around them enough to know them personally, right? She must be a bit of a fixture at...wherever it is that they're at. Could it be that...she was "one of them" at one point, but now may have fallen out of favour with the mistress (possibly over some act of defiance)?
*SAYU DESCRIBED*
It's like she's one of the Sirens from Greek mythology or something.
No one’s ever touched me, except for the person who owns me. It’s because no one is allowed to touch me and she’s going against that rules.
Owns? Shit, she's a slavegirl?
Oh I won’t hurt you. That’s forbidden and the last thing I want is to be stripped of my powers.
OSHIT! Sayu's got powers!?!? O_O
I’m not quiet sure if you’re aware of this, but you are quite valuable. Killing you would only bring misfortune to us.
Really now? O_o
The hairs on my neck are on edge. I think she might do more than just talk to me. Then I feel something soft and moist touch my cheek and I yelp. She kissed me. I’m just thankful her lips didn’t touch mine or I would be in trouble. I would be dead to be precise. My left cheek where her lips once were tingles and so does the rest of the left side of my body. I can’t feel my toes. I’ve lost feeling on my entire left side.
SAYU'S GOT LETHAL LIPS!!!
Well duh, but in this case, THEY'RE REALLY LETHAL!!!
I hear her feet tap and it goes down as she gets farther away. I open my eyes when the tapping stops and I let out a mouthful of air. I was so scared I forgot to breath. I pant heavily to collect the air I missed and my heart slowly starts to calm down. This won’t be the last of her I know it. I close my eyes to try and sleep even if it’s near impossible. I have another long day ahead of me.
WHO IS SHE!?!?!
I'm thinking Eri, Reina, or maybe even Rika.CHAPTER 2***SAYUMI’S POV***
“You called me?”
Ai turns around from her desk and smiles at me. I stomp over to her, furious. I hate when she calls me for business when I was doing something quite interesting. She knows it too because she’s grinning.
For a sec I thought you were gonna pull a fast one and make Aichan the mistress.
But that's not the case, right? Aichan's more along the lines of Sayu in terms of rank/status in the hierarchy?
The thing about our kind is that the powers that would easily enchant humans have no effect on us.
Okay, so what EXACTLY are their kind?
So we can kiss or look into each other’s eyes with no problem.
Pervvy thoughts...rising.
“You know she’s off limits. If Miki finds out you’ve touched her in some way she’ll…”
MIKI-SAMA!
“I didn’t do anything to her if you must know.” I correct
“I’m just letting you know. I see the way you look at her, Sayu. Just remember, you can look, but never touch. At least not until she has first.”
Hmmm...so the mystery prisoner has NOT yet been "Miki'd"? Wonder why? Perhaps it has something to do with what Sayu had said earlier about her being special.
“I hate sloppy seconds.” I sneer
Ummm...better than going first and risking Miki-sama's wrath?
“Aya came to me an hour ago. The way she says it, Miki’s in some serous trouble.”
I’m immediately worried. Our coven can’t work without a mistress. Chaos will break out if word gets out we’re no longer in order. We have to fix the problem and keep this down low.
Really now? Now I'm curious. I want details.
Covens (as far as I know) are usually associated with witches/witchcraft. Is that what we have here? A bunch of practicing witches (each of which has a particular speciality) with Miki-sama as "Hecate"?
“All I can put together is that it has something to do with that new girl. Tell me when you were with her did you pick up something from her? Something dangerous?”
I think back trying to recall any strange emotion I had come through me from being around her. There was nothing odd about her if I remember clearly. I focus back to Ai and shake my head.
“There’s nothing. She reeks of innocence, but that’s what all the new girls smell like when they first come here.”
Wait, the prisoner girl is new? That's going to make explaining how she knows them (or at least, Koharu and Sayu) already rather interesting.
A thousand years this coven has been standing strong. It’s become a home for us all and a place to stay hidden from our enemies and the humans from outside these walls. Miki’s been in charge for much longer. She’s kept us steady. She’s kept our traditions strict and attended to every time. How could she be in trouble? Is anyone out to get her? Is she going to die? Our kind lives on forever. That is…until someone pierces a sword or any weapon into our hearts, mortally wounding us.
* JFC mentally hears...Princes of The Universe by Queen.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Princes_of_the_Universe