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Title: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATED!! 13/02/10
Post by: TakaminaBG on June 05, 2012, 01:26:40 PM
                                                       Your present is….ME
Atsuko’s POV
It’s been 3 months since we started dating, but we haven’t really gotten the chance to be alone. We’ve been out on a several dates. We’ve hold hands, kissed, but that’s all. I want more. But I don’t want to scare her out. I won’t know until I’ve tried. Tonight she is going to stay over and tonight I want to take our relationship to the second level. And it’s her birthday so….
Minami do you want me like I want you. Would you push me away if I did something more than kissing? I can’t wait any more. It’s been 3 months of waiting. I’m tired. Be mine, Minami.
“Ne, Minami”
“Hm, what is it Atsuko?”
“It’s your birthday today. What do you want for a present?”
“I don’t know. I would be happy with whatever you give me.” She said as she stroked my hair.
“Okay, I’ll pick the perfect present for you.” I said seductively.
“Okay”. She said laughing.
“Well, I’ll see you tonight.” I said as I kissed her on the cheek.
“Un..”. she said blushing.
I don’t think she really understands what I mean. She is just so dense when it comes to love. That’s why I’m so scared that she is going to push me away.
It’s 5:30. She said she will come at 6:00 o’clock. 30 minutes left and I’m getting so nervous, excited and… scared. I hope tonight will be great.
I got caught up in my thoughts and suddenly I heard someone knocking on my door. It’s 5:50. She is early.
“H - Hey, Minami.”
“Hi, Atsuko.”
I grabbed her hand. “Let’s go up to my room”. Thank God I’m living alone. No one will interrupt us. “Oh, okay, but aren’t we going to eat?” she asked me curiously. “First, I want to give you your present.” “Okay”.
We are climbing the stairs and I’m right behind her. She looks so sexy. She opens the door and gets into the room. I grabbed her and pushed her against the door.
“Atsuko, what’s wrong?”
“Nothing, Minami. I just want to kiss you. Dame?”
“Hm, okay..”
I wrapped my hands around her waist and leaned down to kiss her. I pressed my lips against her lips. She responds the kiss and I’m getting caught up in the moment. I tilt my head and lick her upper lip and sucked her lower lip. I open my mouth and my tongues is asking for access. She gives me access and our tongues met and start to battle for domination. I slowly pushed her on the bed with me on top of her as we are still kissing. I slowly leaned down to kiss her chin then moved down to the neck, kissing it, biting it, licking it. “Oi, Atsuko…” she said between moans. I didn’t listen. I unzipped her leather jacket.” Atsuko..”. I stopped and looked her in the eyes and I was ready.. Ready to be pushed away. “Minami..”. “I’m still waiting for my present..” . “Your present is…..ME.” I said as I looked at her seriously.
She wrapped her arms around my neck and pulled me closer to her and whispered in my ear. “Well… I love my present.” Then I felt a tear rolling down my cheek. She wiped the tears away with her warm hand. “Why are you crying?”
“I was so scared…”
“Scared, scared of what?”
“I was scared that you would push me away..” I said between sobs.
“Are you crazy?”
“You want this, Minami?”
“Yes, of course I want this. I’ve wanted this for a long time..”
She hugged me tightly. That hug made my tears stop and my worries go away.
“Minami..”
“Hm, what is it, Atsuko?”
“I love you.”
“I love you too.” She said as she gave her purest smile.
I leaned down and kissed passionately with all the love I had. Our tongues met again, not to battle for domination, but just to feel each other. To show how much we love each other. Tonight will be the best night in my life, because I’m with the person  I love and I won’t let her go.
“Minami.” I said as I grabbed her hand.
“What is it, Atsuko?”
“Don’t let me go..”
“Even if my body turns to ash I won’t ever let that hand go!” she said as she squeezed my hand tightly.
“I love you. Don’t ever forget that.”
“I love you to, Minami. I’ll love you, until my heart stops beating.”
END 

I just couldn't help but write. How can I stop writing AtsuMina fics when they called themselves AtsuMina. It's unfair. :D Well here you go another crappy fic from me. Hope you like it and sorry for my bad english.
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's AtsuMina One Shots
Post by: Sydney W on June 05, 2012, 04:29:19 PM
Nice try. Love it very much. Please continue writing more about Atsumina. ^^
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's AtsuMina One Shots
Post by: Minami-chan on June 05, 2012, 06:08:57 PM

ooooooh so cute!!

 :wub:
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's AtsuMina One Shots
Post by: Kiiz on June 05, 2012, 07:02:31 PM
yay~ more atsumina xD

thx for update :twothumbs
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's AtsuMina One Shots
Post by: Haruko on June 06, 2012, 05:54:15 AM
of course.. your fics are so awesomeIm like it..

but i think that minami gonna be more.. minamia like when atsuko says "Im your present", maybe takamina gonna answer sometime diferent like "Your always are my present acchan".. some clueless answer.. and then atsuko have to make her move...
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's AtsuMina One Shots
Post by: kahem on June 06, 2012, 12:29:45 PM
This the first fic I read this morning and it mares me smile thx ^^
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's AtsuMina One Shots
Post by: moekare on June 07, 2012, 10:15:10 AM
I am drooling here  :on GJ:
Please write more AtsuMina and make me bleeding  :mon inluv: Thank you for your update.
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's AtsuMina One Shots
Post by: ichikawa on June 07, 2012, 01:10:18 PM
 :drool:  ahahahahaaha... thanks for the story  :thumbsup
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's AtsuMina One Shots
Post by: Nakamii on June 08, 2012, 01:15:30 PM
I know I'm a bit late to Comment. But, Since I still able to catch up, I decide to comment. :P2 LOL. This is really Sweet and Cute. And, I like the Plot.
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's AtsuMina One Shots
Post by: miayaka on June 13, 2012, 09:00:43 PM
atsumina moment  :inlove: kyaaaa
thank you for this fic!
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's AtsuMina One Shots
Post by: Keisthename on June 18, 2012, 06:31:39 AM
HNNNGG Short yet full of loooovee  :heart:

Heee... great work on this!  :thumbsup
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's AtsuMina One Shots
Post by: TakaminaBG on June 22, 2012, 09:59:59 PM
                                                               Why are you avoiding me?
It’s been 7 years since we both joined AKB48. We became friends and trough out the years we became even closer. And 3 years ago, I started feeling strange every time I was around you. I started to see you not as a friend but as a woman. A beautiful and mature woman. Every time I am with you I feel like I am in heaven and the time has stopped. You listen to what I have to say carefully. When I feel bad you are always there for me. Everybody tells you how beautiful you are, but you don’t trust them. You don’t have self-confidence. For me you are the most beautiful person in the world. And I want to tell you that you are, but I don’t want to ruin our relationship, so I’m going to keep this feeling for myself. And because I don’t you to know about the feelings I have for you I have to avoid you. There is no other way. I don’t want to lose you. I want to keep you safe from….. me. No. That’s not it. I’m just a coward, a hypocrite. But I’m sure of one thing I have to keep this feeling a secret from you even if that means losing you as forever.
 I went to rehearsal and I see you there talking with other members. I see how happy you are. I look at that smile and blush. You looked at me and you smiled with your brightest smile. You look like an angel that came from heaven. You are so beautiful with that short black hair. And that sexy, thin body. Then you started walking to me and I quickly remembered that you must not know the feelings I keep buried inside my heart. I have to be bad to you. I have to avoid you, because I don’t know what else to do.
“Minami, hi.”
“Hi, Atsuko.” I said with cold voice, looking away from you.
“Eh? What’s wrong, Minami?” you said as you grabbed my hand.
“Nothing, I have to get changed.”
“I know something is wrong. I know you, Minami.” Said Atsuko as she tightened her grip.
“I said nothing is wrong! And you don’t know the first thing about me. Who do you think you are?” I said shouting at her.
“Minami?” I saw her eyes filling with tears as one of them rolled down her cheek. And her voice saying my name was trembling.
“Let me go!” I continue shouting at her. I felt I was about to cry and I had to get out of there. I felt her loosen up her grip and I immediately ran out of the room.
“Acchan, what happened to Takamina. Why was she shouting at you?”
“I don’t know,Miichan….”
I could clearly hear her crying. My heart hurts so much. I hate myself for doing this to her. But I have to keep my distance from her. A least until I stop loving her..
Until the end of the day I kept avoiding her. She wanted to talk to me and I told her that there was nothing to talk about and I told her to stop being friendly to me. She was shocked but didn’t had the chance to protest because I ran away… again. But even from the distance I could hear her saying my name.
I quickly got home and threw myself on the bed and cried while hugging my pillow. How can I stop this feeling? Can please, someone tell me? Please… I felt my tears stop as my hands loosen up the grip on the pillow. My eyes were slowly shutting themselves. My body and mind feel asleep. I started dreaming or so I thought. I was with, Atsuko. We were at the forest, holding hands, smiling happily. Just like a couple.  Then we stopped and stared into each others eyes. I could hear her saying “I love you.” Then she kissed me. It felt so…….. real. I could hear someone whispering my name. “Minami?”.
I woke up as if lightning has struck me. I turned around and saw a person stunned and calling my name.
“Minami? Was it a nightmare?” she said holding my hands and sounding worriedly.
“Atsuko…. What are you doing here?” I sad as I pulled my hands away from hers.
“Minami, tell  me what did I do? Did I do something bad to you?” she sounded so lonely. I felt pain in my heart.
“No, so please just go.”
“No, I won’t go until you tell me” she said as she grabbed my hands again. I tried to pull my hands, but this time the grip was too strong.
“I told you to go! Don’t you understand, I don’t want you here!” I said shouting at her.
“Even if you don’t want me here, I’m going to stay because I want to be here, by your side!” 
Now both of us are shouting at each other. Her words are filled with so much emotion. We looked each other in the eyes. Both of us started to cry. I couldn’t keep it inside anymore. This feeling. It’s too painful. I can’t bare her hating me, but I can’t bare this feelings. It hurts so much.
“Nee, Minami?”
“What?” I said still sounding cold, but still holding her hands.
“Why are you doing this to me?”
“What?”
“You’ve been avoiding me all day. Why?”
“Because….”
“Because, what, Minami?”
“Because, you are just so damn beautiful and I just can’t resist you.” Finally I’ve said it. Now I’m ready to… lose her.
“Eh?” her eyes widened, her cheeks pink and full with questions.
“What do you mean, Minami?” said with a curious voice yet somehow happy.
“I… Ehm. Like I said I can’t resist you. But just forget it I don’t want to lose you as a friend.”
“Minami, tell me. What do you feel towards me?”
“Like I said just forget it.”
“Minami, please tell me.” It’s like  she is begging me to tell her, but I don’t understand why.
“Please don’t laugh, okay?”
“I won’t.”
“I love you. I love you more than a friend. I want to kiss you every time I see you. My heart beats so fast that I feel it’s going to explode anytime I am around you. I love your smile. And I love how you get wrinkles on your nose every time you smile. You are so beautiful and I can’t resist your touch. I love you, Atsuko. I love everything about you.” I said blushing like crazy. My heart is beating so fast and I’m sure she can hear it beat.
“I’m happy, I’m so happy that I could die this second.”
“Eh?!”
“I’m happy, Takahashi Minami” she said moving closer to me and closing her eyes. I’m surprised by her actions. Our lips touched and the time just stopped. I closed my eyes and replied the kiss that I wanted for so long. Her lips so soft and her lipstick so sweet. I really love this girl.
“At – tsuko. Why did you…..”
“I’m happy that you love me too, Minami”
“Too? Do you mean you…..”
“Yes, Minami. I love you. I can’t live without you. I love your kindness, your boyish and looking like yankee style. I love everything about you.” She said as she leaned for another kiss. I blushed and made it a passionate one. A tear rolled down my cheek.
“Eh, why are you crying?”
“I was so scared, so scared of losing you forever.” I said between sobs.
“You will never lose me, Minami. I love you.”
“I love you, too, Atsuko. I will love you forever.” We kissed again, feeling each others lips, making it hot. I could smell her perfume, so sweet.
“You know just now I had a dream.”
“A nightmare?”
“The most beautiful dream I have ever dreamed. We were in the forest holding hands then we kissed. And I swear the kiss felt so real and you were calling my name. I don’t know. It was so real.”
“Well, it was real. I saw you sleeping and kissed you. I wanted to kiss you for so long that I just…”
“I don’t really remember it, so could you remind me.”
“I don’t mind.” She said leaning to kiss me. Our lips touched. I wrapped my arms around her neck pulling her closer so I could make it more passionate one. I rolled her over and I’m on top of her. I tilt my head. I sucked her upper lips licked her lower lip. She slowly opened her mouth and I took that chance to slip my tongue in. She moaned as our tongues met to battle, to feel each other. I got so caught up in the moment and slowly slipped my hands underneath her shirt. My hands touched her stomach. She moaned in a loud voice as she wrapped her arms around my neck pulling me closer and making the kiss even hotter if that was possible. I slowly leaned down to kiss her neck. Biting it licking it then kissing it again. My hands start to go up as I start to unbutton her shirt. It’s time for us to break the kiss to catch some air. As we broke the kiss I looked at her and realized that I had unbuttoned her shirt and I saw her bra. It was pink. My favorite color. I smirked as she blushed.
I leaned down to kiss her collarbone and my hand went up and touched her breast slowly squeezing it. Then she suddenly stopped me.
“Minami, wait. I’m not ready..” she said blushing like there is no tomorrow.
“You are right. I want to wait. Let’s not rush things.” I said as I smiled and leaned down for a short sweet kiss.
 “I love you, so I’m going to wait, Atsuko.”
“I love you too, Minami.”
END
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's AtsuMina One Shots UPDATE! 12/06/22
Post by: kahem on June 23, 2012, 01:49:37 AM
Great!!!!! Hehe ^^
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's AtsuMina One Shots UPDATE! 12/06/22
Post by: Haruko on June 23, 2012, 06:29:01 AM
Oh minami on top that`s new :D
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's AtsuMina One Shots UPDATE! 12/06/22
Post by: yukofan on June 23, 2012, 07:25:55 AM
owww, it's so sweet <3
nice fic d^^b
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's AtsuMina One Shots UPDATE! 12/06/22
Post by: SakuraKyoto on June 23, 2012, 09:16:38 AM
AtsuMina always be sweet pair..   :cathappy:

Thanks for your update..   :thumbsup

Waiting for another fic..   :cow:
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's AtsuMina One Shots UPDATE! 12/06/22
Post by: Nakamii on June 24, 2012, 02:46:30 AM
You Update! LOL. Takamina really did it this time. She's just always Clueless. That's really a Lame Excuse, Takaboy. :smhid
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's AtsuMina One Shots UPDATE! 12/06/22
Post by: Kiiz on June 24, 2012, 11:42:32 AM
 :luvluv2:

thx for update :lol:
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's AtsuMina One Shots UPDATE! 12/06/22
Post by: TakaminaBG on July 01, 2012, 02:03:14 PM
Here is a prologue to my new fic. Hope you like it. And sorry for my awful english. :D

                                                     Love From First Sight
                                                              Prologue
The day is here. It’s finally here. I’m starting to live alone. Just me. No one to disturb me. I’m going to love this live. From now on my parents won’t be here to tell me to come home before 10 of to yell at me when I didn’t cleaned out the house. Alone. And I’m going to like it.

I open the door to my new apartment and my eyes went wide.

“What’s going on?”  I asked

“I’m sorry. There was a problem and we had to paint the apartment again.”

“Where am I going to live now. My luggage is here.”

“We talked with your neighbor and she said that you can live with her until we are finished here.”

I slowly rang the doorbell as I watched her open the door and say “Coming” with her angelic voice. The moment she opened the door my eyes went wide. She was so beautiful and even the sun couldn’t compare with her beauty. That was the moment I fell in love with her.

My first love……

From first sight…….

TBC
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's AtsuMina One Shots UPDATE! 12/07/01
Post by: miayaka on July 01, 2012, 06:06:16 PM
Quote
You are right. I want to wait. Let’s not rush things

i want them to rush hahaha  :twisted: im so evil
@TakaminaBG bump bump bump  :twothumbs can't wait for the next chap! :*
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's AtsuMina One Shots UPDATE! 12/07/01
Post by: Haruko on July 01, 2012, 06:50:28 PM
its atsumina of course!!
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's AtsuMina One Shots UPDATE! 12/07/01
Post by: acchaniu on July 03, 2012, 11:28:14 PM
WotWot
Another `ATSUMINA?` fic
wers da UPDATE?????? :prayers:
 :wigglypanda:
thank you
btw we do love your fic
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's AtsuMina One Shots UPDATE! 12/07/01
Post by: TakaminaBG on July 04, 2012, 10:22:36 AM
Well here it is. Almost all of my readers left me, but..... I thank to those who are still reading my crappy fics. I think I'm getting better. LOL :D
                                                                   Love from first sight

My eyes widened, my heart stopped for mere seconds. I can’t breathe. Can’t talk and can’t move. Is that it? Is that what love makes you feel like? Is this love? And from first sight.

As she opened the door we just stood there staring at each other. She is so beautiful with her black shoulder length hair. Tall, thin body. She has a voice of an angel. As I stood there I snapped out from daydreaming and got back to reality.

“Ah. I’m sorry to disturb you. I’m your new neighbor and I was supposed to move in today but there was a little mistake and the architects told me that you’ve agreed to let me live with you until the renovation is done.”

There was a silence. Is she backing down now? What am I going to do? I’ve no place to go. And I’m most surely I’m not going back to live with my parents….

But there is something wrong. She keeps staring at me. She is not answering me. She stares in my brown eyes…

“Ano…..”

She smiled to me. That made everything even worse. When she smiles wrinkles appear on her face. So beautiful!  She slowly moved away from the door and told me to come in.

“Yes. Come in. Make yourself at home.”

“Thank you.” I said as I smiled.

I slowly walked in. I took off my shoes and put my bags down. The rest of the luggage is already there. We walked down the hall and we reached the living room. I realized that I haven’t introduced myself.

“I’m sorry. I haven’t introduced myself. My name is Takahashi Minami. Thank you for agreeing to live with a total stranger.” I laughed nervously.

“Haha. No problem. You are welcome here. My name is Maeda Atsuko. It’s nice to meet you, Minami.” She said as she smiled while my head felt dizzy. After I heard her saying my first name my heart stopped for the second time today.

“Ah.. I’m sorry. Can I call you that?”

“Yeah, sure.” I said blushing like crazy and I mean crazy.

“Then you call me, Atsuko.”

“O – okay. At – tsuko – san.” I’m stuttering. Great…

“Just, Atsuko. Come on, Minami. You can do it.” She said as she laughed.

“A – tsuko.”

“That’s better.”

“Ne, Minami. Are you hungry?”

“No but I’m tired.”

“Okay, let’s go to sleep.” She said as she grabbed my hand. I slowly stopped and looked at her.

“What’s wrong?”

“Ano, where am I going to sleep?” I asked nervously.

“In my bedroom of course.”

“Eh?! Not on one bed, right. I laughed trying to hide my red face.

“Of course we will sleep on my bed. I’m not going to let you sleep on the floor……”

“Then I can sleep on the co…..”

“or on the couch!”

“But.”

“No, buts, Minami. Let’s go.”

“Okay”

I get the feeling this is going to be a long night. We took a shower. Not together of course. I took a shower after her. When I got back in her room she was laying down on the bed. My eyes went wide almost jumped out from there place. She was wearing just a T-shirt which was hardly covering her lower part of her body.

“Atsuko, d – don’t y – you have a pajama?” I asked while my cheeks were getting redder.

“Well, this is my pajama, Minami. You don’t like it?” She asked seductively.

“NO I do like it!” I said shouting. Great now she thinks I’m weird.

“I’m happy you like it. Come to bed.” She said as she smiled and she tapped on the spot next to her.

I slowly laid down next to her and turn off the lights.

After a couple of minutes my eyes started to shut themselves and my heart and mind were falling asleep. Until…….

“Ne, Minami?”

“Hmm”

She wrapped her arms around my waist and she whispered in my ear….

“I love you.” She said as she kissed my neck and played with my earlobe with her tongue. Her wet tongue. Which made me shut down. Mind and body. I blinked a few times while trying to proceed the information.

“Eh?” that was the only thing I could say. No other words were getting out of my mouth.

“I love you, Minami. I feel in love with you the moment I saw you standing at my front door. I feel in love with you from first sight.”

“I……”

I couldn’t say anything. My eyes went wide as my mouth was sealed. I slowly realized what was going on. She was kissing me. Her lips so soft and so delicious! Probably because of her lipstick. I began to respond the kiss as she smiled. She star to pull away but was stopped by me as I wrapped my arms around her neck and pulled her for another round of kissing. This time with passion! A hot kiss. I went rough on her ah I licked her lower lip, sucked her upper lip and I forced her to open her mouth. She let out a small moan as she was surprised by what I did. She opened her mouth letting my tongue get in. Out tongues met wrapping around each other. She followed my lead. I smirked as I realized that. As we broke that deep, deep kiss we looked in each other’s eyes. We breathe heavily from that passionate kiss which left us breathless. I could see she really does love. And my that kiss I saw that I love her too. So much……

“I love you too, Atsuko. From the moment I saw you no, from the moment I heard your voice. A voice off an angel. And  when you opened that door I felt like I was in heaven. I love you hair, your voice, your smile and y – your b – body. You are so beautiful.” I said as I pulled her for a small soft kiss.

“Pervert.” She said as she laughed brightly.

She started kissing me roughly and this time I was following her lead. She licked out the little mess we made from the hot kiss as she started to kiss my neck. She bite it then she started making butterfly kisses around the neck and the collarbone. Her hands began their journey as they started traveling inside the top of my pajama. I shivered as I felt her cold hands on my stomach which were going up and up. She touched my breast slowly squeezing it. I let out a loud moan. As my hands moved from the back of her neck down until they were between her thighs slowly rubbing the tip of her clit.

Last night we made love to each other. Without any more questions like why or how or we can’t because we are girls. That didn’t matter then and it doesn’t really matter now. I made love to her like I never did to anyone else. I have never done it with a woman before. But I did it last night and I enjoyed every moment of it. I was her first. And I’m never going to make her regret that. I want to be with her forever.

A week later…………
“Hello, Takahashi  - san. Your apartment is ready. You can move in now.”

“Rent it to someone else. I already have a place to live.”

 “I love you, Minami.”

“I love you too, Atsuko. Always. Now let’s got make love again.”

“Eh?!?! Again? We did it 3 times last night. You are going to kill me from exaction.” She said as we both laughed.

“Get used to it, my princess.”

“Okay, my prince.”

END
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's AtsuMina One Shots UPDATE! 12/07/04
Post by: Keisthename on July 04, 2012, 02:51:52 PM
wahahah OMG!! Takamina you're so aggressive.. 3 rounds last night?? ohohohoh what a scene!!!  :mon bleed2:

Thanks for this HOT update.. kyaaaa..  :mon XD:
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's AtsuMina One Shots UPDATE! 12/07/04
Post by: ichikawa on July 04, 2012, 05:55:05 PM
Takamina...  :shocked you're so aggressive here... hohohohoho...   :twothumbs
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's AtsuMina One Shots UPDATE! 12/07/04
Post by: Haruko on July 05, 2012, 07:07:39 AM
Yeah!! takaboy make your wifey happy :D
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's AtsuMina One Shots UPDATE! 12/07/04
Post by: TakaminaBG on July 16, 2012, 06:22:23 PM
                                                                                  It’s You That I love, No Her

                                                                                              Prologue

I decided to go to my favorite place and watch the stars alone. It sounds strange, but I like being alone, even though every time I’m alone I get lonely and I start to think about her. I know I shouldn’t think about her….

She is gone and she is not coming back.

Why? Why is life so cruel? I loved her and she loved me but God toke her away from me.

“I miss you, Minami…..”

I start walking towards my place, the most beautiful mountain. You can see the whole town from it.

In the distance I see a figure, a small figure which reminded me of her. She was just that small too.

I closed the distance between us and stood right next to her. She is sleeping.

I widened my eyes as I see the figure up close. Small body, long hair and a ribbon…

She is just like her, same style, same face.

What is this?  Miracle?  Dream?

If it’s a dream, I don’t want to wake up.

I slowly lay down and caressed her cheek.

I whisper her name….. “Minami…..”

I was shocked as I saw that she was awake.

“Yes, un… Do I know you? She said as she sat up.

TBC???



Whether I continue or not it depends on you. Hope you like it. Comment, please. :)
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's AtsuMina One Shots UPDATE! 12/07/16
Post by: axel0048 on July 16, 2012, 06:33:09 PM
Please continue!!!! :bow:
i'll be waiting!! :yep:
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's AtsuMina One Shots UPDATE! 12/07/16
Post by: kahem on July 16, 2012, 06:53:23 PM
WOW love at first sight! Hot!
Continue please!
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's AtsuMina One Shots UPDATE! 12/07/16
Post by: Keisthename on July 17, 2012, 10:06:57 AM
whoaaah this is interesting I wanted to know more!!  :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
Woot, does it mean Acchan will chase after Minami? hmmmmm :prayers:
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's AtsuMina One Shots UPDATE! 12/07/16
Post by: Megumi on July 17, 2012, 03:26:20 PM
 :mon huh:  :mon freeze: :mon cweepy:

I need more! :mon inluv:

waiting waiting

:kneelbow:
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's AtsuMina One Shots UPDATE! 12/07/16
Post by: Flean on July 18, 2012, 01:18:15 AM
I need an update for this!!! you leave me hanging!! :frustrated:  Who is that sleeping girl??  :stoned:

please update soon..  :depressed:
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's AtsuMina One Shots UPDATE! 12/07/16
Post by: Trickster on July 19, 2012, 03:07:54 PM
please continue!! :thumbup
can't get enough of your fanfics XD
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's AtsuMina One Shots UPDATE! 12/07/16
Post by: TakaminaBG on July 25, 2012, 08:34:14 PM
@ Trickster - san: Thank you for enjoying my crappy fics.

@Flean - san: I'm happy you still read my fics. I thought you forgot about me. :D Kidding. It's okay, if you don't like them. Can't blame you.

@Megumi - san: Hope you like it!

@Keisthename - san: It's a little complicated. Hope you like it!

@haru9210 - san: Enjoy!!! :)

@kahem - san: Thank you for reading!!

@axel0048 - san: Here you go. Hope you like it.


Thank you all for reading!!! Don't forget to leave your comments!!!
Oh. Almost forgot. A little change of title.. Sorry about that. And sorry for my awful english.

                                                                              It's not only her that I love, It's both of you

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~````PAST````~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
                                                 
Why do bad things happen to good people? I didn’t do anything to deserve this.

I’m surely not perfect, but I’m not a bad person, so I ask why?

God? Are you there? Do you exist? If you do, why are you punishing me like this? Do you hate me? Did I do something to you?

My name is Maeda Atsuko. I’m 21 years old. I’m not special. I don’t have any talents. I’m just an ordinary girl.

I always fail in everything I do. I never get what I want. I always work so hard, but yet nothing goes right.

I really thought I’m useful. Why was I even born? To suffer? If that’s so, are you happy, God?

I wanted to end it all. I didn’t want to live in this world anymore. I didn’t want to suffer. I don’t deserve this, I’m a good person, but I’m sick of this.

Mom, Dad…. I’m sorry I’m such a failure as a daughter, as a person. I’m sorry. Don’t cry for me. I hope you can forgive me someday.

I stand up from the bench and I start to walk. I can’t see anything. I can’t hear anything, only  the sound of the train that is coming. I walk step by step, slowly.

The train is almost here. I extend my right foot, ready, ready to jump and get it over with. My pathetic life.

I could see clearly the train coming. I see flashbacks from the past. My past. I see how pathetic I truly look. I smile as I see that scenes. Finally… Everything is over. I can die now.

I close my eyes hoping it won’t hurt. Hoping it would be fast. Then I suddenly feel an arm grabbing mine and pulling me away.

I start screaming “Let me go. I want to die!!!!”. I was left shocked as I felt the figure embrace me. I start sobbing. I see my tears falling on her
shoulders. She caresses my hair with her hand and whispers in my ear. “It’s okay, I’m going to be here, by your side, so let it out. Let it all out.”

I embrace the small, yet strong girl back. I don’t know why, but I feel so comfortable in her hands, in her embrace. I feel like I can be with her forever.
 
I breathe in her scent. So nice…

I cried for ten minutes. We just stood there the whole time hugging each other, not letting go.  We didn’t mind the people staring at us, talking about us. We didn’t care. We just held each other.

Suddenly the desire to kill myself vanished in the air. I want to know more about her, but I’m afraid that if I fall in love with her, God will take her away from me. Like he always does! With everything!

When she felt that I stopped crying she pulled away from the hug and looked straight into my brown eyes.

“I don’t know what happened and I won’t ask you. But killing yourself is not right. You are just running away from your problems. And think about your parents. Think about your mother, what she went through to give birth to you. She worked very hard, so you have to work hard for her. Okay?”

I listened to her carefully, watching her. She is a good person. And she is very beautiful. There is only truth in her words. She is right. What am I thinking? My mom went through so much trouble to give birth to me. And what am I doing? Killing myself! I’m so stupid.

“I’m sorry.” That was the only thing I could say. She is right.

“It’s okay. But don’t try this again!”

“I won’t!”

“Promise me!”

“I promise!! I’m sorry, you must think I am pathetic, right?”

“No, no really. I’m just doing the thing someone did for me when I wanted to kill myself. “ she said as she smiled. I can see her dumples, so cute. I want to know more about her. I can’t believe she tried to kill herself.

“And, I’m sorry I suddenly hugged you. You think I am weird, right? I acted on my instincts. Sorry again.” She said as she bowed down.

I pulled her up and smiled. “It’s okay, thank you….Eto….”

“Takahashi Minami. My friends call me Takamina. And you are?”

 “Maeda Astuko desu. Yoroshiku onegai shimasu, Takahashi – san.”

“Call me Takamina. How  do your friends call you?”

I look down at the floor. That’s the thing I don’t have any friends. Now she would think I am weird.

“I don’t have any..”

“You are kidding, right?”

“No, I‘m not.”

“Can I be your friend?”

 “Y – Yes.” She is my first friend. But do I really want to be her friend. I think I want more…..

“Then I am your first friend. I’m so happy, Acchan.” She smiled so brightly. I could only do the same.

“Acchan?”

“Yes. That is your new nickname. Beautiful just like you.” She said blushing. Me on the other hand blushed even more and looked away.

“Let’s go” she said as she grabbed my hand and intertwined our fingers. I blushed even more if that was even possible.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Three months later~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

My life changed drastically since I met her. We are always together. We hugged and sometimes she would kiss my cheek and after that she would laugh at my blushing face. 

My feelings for her are growing slowly day by day.  I don’t want to lose her. Never!

“Ne, Atsuko.”

“Hmm”

As I sat on the bed she hugged me from behind. I feel so happy right know. I can feel her warmth and her breathe on my neck that is giving me shivers.

“Do you like me?” she asked suddenly and I was caught off guard. I can’t tell he yes, right??!?!

“EH???  What are you saying, Minami.. Haha” I laughed nervously.

I slowly try to get up and change the subject. “Are you hungry? I will go downstairs to get us something to eat.

“No need.” She said as she grabbed me by my waist and I fell on top off her while she hugged me tightly.

“Minami?”

That was all I could say. I couldn’t think properly. Our faces were only inches away. Her warm body! Her sweet scent! Her soft lips! I want to kiss them.

“I do”. Before I could even realize what she was saying I felt her lips pressing mine. I widened my eyes in surprise but not long after that I close my eyes, feeling the sensation spread through my body.

We pulled away from the kiss, breathed heavily.

“I love you, Atsuko.” She said as she brought her right hand and cupped my cheek softly.

“I love you too.”

We shared another and then another kiss as we became one. I’m never going to forget this night.

I slowly start to believe in God again. Maybe he does exist and he heard my prayers. God, please watch over both off us.

Today is our first date. I’m so excited. I’m early and of course knowing, Minami, she will come early too. And here she is…..

“Hi”

“Hi. Looks like we are both early!“ I said as I laughed.
 
“Atsuko, you look beautiful. “ she said as she blushed cutely and looked away. My face… Well my face was as red as a tomato. Yeah imagine the picture.

“Thank you, but not as much as you are, my prince. Handsome.” I laughed at her expression which was *fail*.

“Let’s go.” I said happily as I intertwined our fingers.

My first date! I’m never going to forget this day. I’m never going to forget her. I love her and I won’t let her go.

“Ne, Atsuko?”

“Hm?”

“Let’s live together!” she said with a serious expression.

I smile brightly and hug her tight. “Yes!!!”

We are both so happy. We start to skip happily! We skip and skip until….

Minami suddenly stopped. My hand slipped from hers. I couldn’t stop, I slowly turn around and all I could hear is her screaming.

“ATSUKO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”

I stopped and saw the car while she ran to me and roughly pushed my body away. I fell on the ground.

I hit my head hard and lost consciousness.

When I woke up, I didn’t know where I was. My body hurts. It seems I was asleep. But for how long?

I try to move my body but I scream in pain. I see a figure rushing to me.

“Doctor!! She is awake!!!”

Doctor.  I’m in a hospital. I remembered what happened.  We were skipping and… and a car was going to hit me, but….. Minami….she saved me. Did she got hit by that car? Minami!?!?!!?!?!

I forgot about the pain. I had to see her. I want to see her.

“Minami?!?!!? Where are you, Minami??!”

“Calm down, Maeda – san!!! Calm down!!"

I scream and cry at the same time while another two nurses came as the doctor and the other nurse were trying to calm me down. They tied me up to the bed and gave me sleeping pills and I slowly felt my body drifting away.

I slowly open my eyes again. I want to scream but I can’t. The medicine is too strong. But I can still talk and listen.

“Where is she?”

“Are you talking about the person you were with before the accident? “The doctor asked me. I can see pain in his eyes. Minami, I’m scared!. Where are you? I love you. Come back to me!

“My condolences, Maeda – san. Her wounds were too much for her body to bare. She had lost too much blood and died from her wounds.” The doctor said as he bowed down.

“You are lying! You liar!!!!! She is not dead. She can’t be dead.” I start sobbing. Why is this happening? I’m alone….. again.

“She was a brave girl. Witnesses said that the car was about to hit you but she protected you. She pushed you out of the way and the car hit her instead. Again I’m sorry for your lost. You have to rest you were in coma for three months.

 I stay silent. I don’t want to speak. I’m too weak to even open my eyes. I drove to sleep hoping that this was just a dream. I slowly fell asleep.

Suddenly I’m at the place I wanted to kill myself. I look around. No one is here. It’s completely empty. I’m scared.

I hear a voice calling my name from behind. I turn around and see her. My beloved one.

“Minami” I rush to her and hug her tight. “Minami” I start sobbing.

“Atsuko.. I can – n’t  b – breathe…”

“Ah! I’m sorry, are you okay. I had a nightmare. We were in an accident and you… you…” I embrace her again feeling her warmth.

Her hand went up and down my back. We stood there embracing each other, just like the first time we met.

“Atsuko, deep down you know this was not a dream. It’s real. I’m dead.”

I pulled away from the hug, crying and screaming. “No!! You are not!! You can’t be!”

“I am. I can’t be by your side anymore. But I want you to keep your promise. Live. Live for me too.”

“I can’t. I can’t live without you. I don’t want to.”

“You can and you have too, because you promised me, remember?”

“Come back to me, please, Minami, I love you.” I said as I hugged her again. I don’t want to let her go. Like she said, deep inside my heart, I know she is gone. I can’t live without her. God! Why? Why are you taking her away from me? Take me instead, please!!!!!!!!! 

“I can’t, but I will watch over you. I’m not dead yet, I’m still alive inside of your heart. Until you forget me.”

“I’m never going to forget you, Minami!” I said as I leaned down and kissed her softly and slowly. I feel her returning the kiss as she starts moving her lips. We turned the kiss into a passionate one.

We broke the kiss. I saw she was crying too.

“I love you, Atsuko! Now I don’t have much time. Promise me. Promise you will live!!”

“I …. I … I promise!”

“One day we will meet again, okay?” I just nodded as she started to disappear. I open my eyes and tears started rolling down my cheeks. I quickly wipe them away. “I’m going to live, Minami! For you!”

I know I have to be strong. For her! If I cry she is going to be angry with me.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~````Present````~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`

“Yes, un… Do I know you? She said as she sat up.

“Eh?!” Tear start to gather in my eyes. I quickly stop them. I pulled myself together and gathered the courage to answer her, without crying.

“No. My name is Maeda Atsuko, my friends call me…. Acchan.” I smile. I’m waiting for her answer. I want to talk to her. She is just like her. I’m falling in love with her all over again.

“My name is Takahashi Minami. Nice to meet you, Maeda – san.” She smiled. That smile. So captivating!

“It’s nice to meet you too and call me Acchan. We are friends now.”

“Okay, A – Acchan.” She just stuttered. They are the same on the outside but totally different on the inside. She is like the opposite of, Minami.

“Good. How do your friends call you?”

She looks down at the ground. It’s the same reaction I had when, Minami asked me the same question. Reversed roles! God! You ************

“No, I don’t have friends. They think I’m weird.”

“Weird? Why?”

“Because I’m 21 years old and I’m 148 cm tall…” I see so much sadness in her eyes. She is so lonely… just like me.

“They are idiots, from now on… Your nickname will be…. Takamina!” I said happily while she was surprised. Thinking, why am I so nice to her?

“Takamina??”

“Yes, Takamina. Let’s go get something to eat my new friend.” She blushed and looked away I took this opportunity to grab her hand and intertwined our fingers.

“O – Okay.” She said shyly.

We quickly grew closer. Like I said she is the exact opposite of, Minami.

Everything is happening exactly the same way. Is this some kind of a second chance for me? If it is… This time I am not letting her go.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~````Three Months Later````~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

 Today I invited her to my house. We are watching a movie and I’m hugging her from behind just like the past, only reversed.

“Ne, Minami.”

“Hm?”

“Do you like me?”

“EH?!? What are you talking about? I’m not into girls. I’ll go get something to drink. It’s hot and I’m sweating!”

I grabbed her hand and pushed her on the bed with me on top. “I do”

I leaned down and kissed her. I closed my eyes so I can’t see if her eyes are open, but knowing her they probably are. I tilt my head and kiss her full on. She wrapped her hands around my neck, pulling me closer. She moaned in excitement and opened her mouth, of course I took the opportunity to slip my tongue in. They fought for dominance in our mouths. The kiss turned into a very wild moves from me.
I start unbuttoning her jacket. Without breaking the kiss, I pull her up. I took her jacket off, then I took her loosen T – Shirt off. I break the kiss and look at the beautiful, small breasts in front of me. I smile at her I attack her neck. Sucking it, licking it, marking it. At the same time I push her on the bed again as my other hand start to go down and down between her legs…..

Last night we became one. I felt like I was doing it with her all over again. I fell in love with her all over again and I don’t regret it.

“Ne, Minami?”

“Hm?”

“Let’s go on a date!”

“Eh? Really? Where are you going to take me?”

“Nowhere. We are going to stay here and eat dinner and then do what we did last night.” I said seductively. I see her blushing. Sooooo cute.

“ Mou…. Atsuko!!”

“Are you okay with just staying here?”

“Sure. As long as I am with you.”

“I love you, Minami!”

“I love you too, Atsuko!”
 
"Oh. Almost forgot. After the date. I want you to move in with me. After the date!!"

"Eh? I think you should ask me first. Not order me!" She laughed like an idiot. Well she is.....

"But, okay. My princess."

"It's going to be fun, my prince."

"Prince" *FAIL*
 
END
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's AtsuMina One Shots UPDATE! 12/07/25
Post by: miayaka on July 25, 2012, 09:33:13 PM
I called it destiny  :shy2:
my atsumina past and present sure is lovely  :shy1:
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's AtsuMina One Shots UPDATE! 12/07/25
Post by: Keisthename on July 26, 2012, 02:59:20 AM
Aw, no matter what happen they will always end up together..  :heart: :heart: even if they were reborn a hundred times.. they will still end up loving each other! aaaahhh so sweet.. strong love and bond...  :wub:
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's AtsuMina One Shots UPDATE! 12/07/25
Post by: Haruko on July 26, 2012, 05:53:26 AM
aww atsumina so cute.. i prefer a tsundere atsuko :D
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's AtsuMina One Shots UPDATE! 12/07/25
Post by: Trickster on July 26, 2012, 08:05:13 AM
now I get the meaning of the new title, and it really does suit the story XD

thanks for the great story and the great ending :heart::thumbup
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's AtsuMina One Shots UPDATE! 12/07/25
Post by: Megumi on July 26, 2012, 09:34:12 PM
 :(  :cry: That was sad...

And the reversed role  hahhha but still the fail expression is ther  :rofl:

Thank you for your update!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's AtsuMina One Shots UPDATE! 12/07/25
Post by: fausto on August 06, 2012, 08:04:02 PM
love to see Minami on the top hehehe  :twisted:
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's AtsuMina One Shots UPDATE! 12/07/25
Post by: okotteru on August 06, 2012, 10:09:45 PM
i love your fics :shy2:

i was reading them while i was in class this morning lol 
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's AtsuMina One Shots UPDATE! 12/07/25
Post by: TakaminaBG on August 10, 2012, 04:10:47 PM
Hi guys.... Uhmmmm, this actually are lyrics to a song I wrote... just now. I'm not sure if I'll make a fic out of this. BUT........ The main protagonist will be a secret.
 
The question is: Who do you think broke her heart???

Somebody help me, I'm loosing my mind.

I've gone completely crazy..... Because of her.....

I loved you, even after all the things you did to me, I still love you blindly...

I can't erase all the memories we made together, I can't stop loving you.

You broke my heart in a million pieces.

Wherever I go, whatever I do, I always end up thinking about you.

I gave you my all.

Heart, mind and body. And you threw it away.

I can't bring myself to hate you.

I still remember your kisses, your touch. It made my body to shut down completely.

And now, because of you, my heart has a big door in front of it.

That door is locked. No one can reach my heart ....... No one can hurt me anymore......

But there is someone out there who has the key.

I just have to find that person....

But maybe I'll die alone....

I feel dead inside. You made me who I am today. Cold - hearted person.

Am I still able to love someone like I love you.

Can that person make me forget about you?

?????FIC????????
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATE! 12/08/10
Post by: miayaka on August 10, 2012, 05:16:42 PM
ho me gad!

Quote
I feel dead inside. You made me who I am today. Cold - hearted person.

made me  :frustrated:
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATE! 12/08/10
Post by: kahem on August 10, 2012, 05:38:19 PM
Even if don't know if the both Takamina are the same, I'm glad Acchan found her ^^
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATE! 12/08/10 + POLL
Post by: TakaminaBG on August 10, 2012, 10:06:41 PM
I'm looking FORWARD to your votes. This is going to be hilarious!!!!!
MAYBE a NEW couple will be born??? :D
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATE! 12/08/10 + POLL
Post by: TakaminaBG on August 12, 2012, 05:05:40 PM
The voting is over!!!
The winner is...................... RAY?!?!?!!
AND.................... I'm NOT writing this fic!!! Because the main protagonist was Maeda Atsuko!!!!!!
If you want I can write it with Takahashi Minami but not with RAY, unless you want to see... MAEDAxRAY?!?!
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATE! 12/08/10
Post by: Sydney W on August 12, 2012, 05:26:52 PM
Write it with Minami x Atsuko !!! ^^
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATE! 12/08/10
Post by: Haruko on August 13, 2012, 04:00:56 AM
If opoue takaboy cure the heart broken maeda.. then yes.. you can make rayxatsuko couple :D..or minamixray but atsuko gonna rescue minami´s heart :D
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATE! 12/08/10
Post by: TakaminaBG on August 15, 2012, 01:57:40 PM
Hey guys. This is part 1 for the song lyrics in the upper comments. Hope you like it. Enjoy!!!

                                                                        I Can Make You Forget
                                                                                     Part 1

You can see a girl walking alone in the dark. It’s raining and it’s cold. She is dressed in a pink dress. She has brown hair and brown eyes. She has a pink ribbon in her hair to match her dress. Her body is small, just like a kid. She can’t walk straight forward. You can see tears floating from her eyes. People pass her and talk about her. They think she is either drunk or she is just a weirdo. But no one knows….. no one cares, that just now she had her heart broken. Broken into million pieces.

You can see blood traces on the ground. They are from her legs. Something bad happened to her. Five minutes ago she was the happiest person in the world. Now…. Her heart is dying slowly. Her legs had become numb, but she continues to walk. It’s like she is somewhere else and that’s only her body with no one inside.

There are couples walking hand in hand happily. She just looks at them with no emotion. She could’ve been one of them right now. The worst thing is that today is Valentine’s day.

She felt her mind dozing off, her body became weak. Finally her legs gave up and she fell hardly on the ground. Before she passed out there was a certain name with sadness.

“Ray”……

In the last moment a figure run out of nowhere and cached her body before it felt down on the ground.

“Are you okay?” asked the figure. She saw that there was no response and she decided to take her to her place. She was a complete stranger to her, but she couldn’t just leave her there.

She lived near the place she picked up the girl from. And luckily the girl was small so there was no problem in carrying her.

She pulled out her keys and opened the door with her free hand while the other was holding the  girl’s body.  She passed out the living room and took the girl to her bedroom. She saw her legs were bleeding, so she went to the bathroom and then came back with a wet rag. She washed her wounds and bandaged her legs carefully.

She saw that the girl was wet from the rain. She decided to change her clothes. So she went to her wardrobe and took out her pajamas. She went to the girl and slowly pulled her up, took her clothes trying not to look.

After she was finished changing her clothes she slowly laid down the girls body. She looked at her face for the first time. Her heart immediately skipped a beat as she saw how stunning she looked.

‘What a beautiful girl’ she thought. She reached out and removed the bangs covering her face. She stared at the girls face for some seconds, then she saw a tear rolling down the girls face. She wiped the tear and heard the girl whispering something. She slowly leaned down and heard the name: “Ray” .
She felt pain in her heart. Somehow she knew that this was her lover’s name. She  couldn’t help but think what had happened to this girl. For the look of her dress she was probably going out for a romantic dinner, but now she is like that…..

In the morning the girl walk up. She shocked as she saw she was in a place she didn’t knew. She turned around and saw girl lying next to her. She looked up under the bed and saw that her clothes were changed.

“Where am I?” Suddenly she remembered last night. The night she was supposed to be the happiest night of her life. Tear started gathering but she stopped them. She decided not to cry anymore.

She looked at the girl lying next to her. ‘She is so beautiful’ she thought. She started at her. Her eyes her nose…… then her lips. They looked so soft. She couldn’t help but blush. The figure she was staring started moving and she looked away.

The figure rubbed her eyes and slowly opened them.

TBC????
 
 
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATE! 12/08/15
Post by: Trickster on August 15, 2012, 03:02:34 PM
so the main protagonist is Takamina and the one who broke her heart is Ray?
I hope the other girl is Acchan :wub:
waiting for the next part :thumbsup
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATE! 12/08/15
Post by: arrow27 on August 15, 2012, 03:12:36 PM
Please continue! :D
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATE! 12/08/15
Post by: Wmatsui22 on August 16, 2012, 12:02:19 PM
I LIKE YOUR ONE-SHOTS FAN FICTION OF ATSUMINA :D

PLEASE MAKE MORE MORE ATSUMINA FAN FICTION

THANK YOU

I WILL WAIT

I AM YOUR FAN NOW :D

Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATE! 12/08/15
Post by: TakaminaBG on October 02, 2012, 01:27:49 PM
                                                                                      I Can Make You Forget                                                                                  
                                                                                                Part 2

The figure opened her eyes lazily. She looked up and smiled at the girl in front of her.

“Hi” she said getting up. She sat next to the girl who looked at her shyly.

“How are you?” she asked waiting for an answer but she already knew that the girl was not okay.

“Fine, thanks to you…..” she answered with sadness in her eyes.

“Ah, I’m sorry. My name is Maeda Atsuko.”

“I’m sorry I caused you troubles, Maeda – san.” She said looking down. I can see exactly how hurt she is. It pains me to see her like this. I don’t know her and I shouldn’t feel this way, but I don’t want to see a person be this sad.

“Call me, Acchan.” I said as I smile to her. “What is your name?”

“Takahashi Minami desu.” She answered shyly. “But you can call me, Takamina.”

There was an awkward silence filling the room. She kept looking down, keeping her tears from falling.

“I don’t know what happened, but don’t hide it. I’ll be here for you.” I said as I held her hand. She looked at me and nodded.

She started crying really hard. She put her hands on her face and covered her eyes with them. She probably didn’t want to show them to me.
I slowly got closer to her and embrace her. She was shocked at first but didn’t push me away.

She put her hands down form her face and wrapped them around my waist, pulling me closer. I smiled and gently run my hands up and down her back, comforting her.

She was hugging me really tightly while sobbing around for hours. I can’t help but to hate the person who did this to her. “Ray” she managed to say between sobs. This name was like a knife stabbing directly through my heart numerous times.

“Shh..” I whisper in her ear which made her whole body shiver. Then she nuzzled closer to my neck. I can feel her breath which is giving me a strange sensation. “Thank you.” She said between sobs. I tightened my grip around her and held her close.

When I felt she stopped crying I released my hug and looked at her eyes. She was looking so sad.

“Do you want to tell me what happened?” I asked her as she nodded and began her heart - breaking story.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~FLASHBACK~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
You can see a girl lying on a bench in the park. She was smiling as she was looking at the sky. This girl really loved it.

Then there was a girl who approached her and interrupted her “Ano?” she started hesitantly. The girl turned her head to the other girl’s direction and was stunned by that girl’s beauty. “Can I help you?”

“Can I sit on this bench? This is the only free one.” She asked as she smiled awkwardly.

As she keeps staring at the girl in front of her she gets up and sits on the bench.

The girl smiled at her as she smiled back. “Thank you.” said the girl as she sat down. “No problem and I’m sorry I was occupying the whole bench.”
The girl chuckled. “I thought you were some homeless guy.” “Guy?” laughed the small girl. “Well from afar you do look like a boy, because of the whole yankee style.” She said as I looked down embarrassed.

“But looking you up close, you are a very cute girl.” She smiled as the other girl blushed and continued to look down at the ground.

“I can’t compare to your beauty.” She said as she smiled now the other girl blushed.

For some minutes they chatted. They laughed together they look at the sky together. Slowly the small girl started to fall for this complete strange. This girl caught her heart.

“I’m sorry I didn’t catch your name.” the girl chuckled as the other girl smiled “Takahashi Minami desu.” Said the small girl. “I’m Ray.” Said the other girl.

Minami’s POV

“Eh? Just, Ray?“ she asked curiously as the other girl nodded.

“Well, Ray – san, you can call me Minami.” I said smiling. “Just call me, Ray.”

“Okay, Ray.” I said as I blushed so did she.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~END OF FLASHBACK~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

ATSUKO’S POV

“That’s how I met her.” She said sadly. I can see it’s painful for her. I honestly want her to stop but I know it’s better if she tells someone rather than keeping it inside. Hearing her story is breaking my heart.

“Days past, months past and then after a year I confessed to her.” She said as I held her hand tightly.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~FLASHBACK~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I’m sitting on the same bench we met each other waiting for her. This is the day. I’m going to confess to her. It’s now or never. I hope she accepts me. I know she might probably be shocked or discussed but I have to tell her how much I love her.

Then here she is. I look her from afar and wait her to come. She is looking gorgeous with her long black hair and her white dress. “An angel” is what I thought.

“Hi.” She smiled as I smiled back. “Hi, Ray.”

“Thank you for coming today.” I start nervously. “Of course. If it’s Minami, I would go anywhere!” she said as she held my hand. I looked at our hands and blushed.

“What’s wrong?” she asked.

“I want to tell you something that I’ve been hiding from you..” I started and she kept listening to me without interrupting me.

“A year past since we first met. And there is a feeling inside me that grew each day we were together. I don’t know if you could ever accept me, but I…. I… I love you, Ray.” I said while looking straightly in the eyes. She looks surprised.

Then she suddenly smiled and hugged me. I’m a bit shocked at first but then I hugged her back.

“Finally!” she said happily. “Eh?” I looked at her confused as she broke the hug.

“I was waiting for you to say it and finally you did!! I’m so happy!” I am just staring at her emotionless. I don’t know what to say. I didn’t really expect her to be….. happy.

“Eh? I don’t understand…”

“I knew that you loved me and I was waiting for you to say it first. You know the man should say it first.” She said teasingly.

“Ray!!!” I said embarrassed while looking down with a fail expression on my face.

Suddenly she moved closer and whispered “I love you too, Minami.” Finally our lips touched and time stopped. Right know I’m the happiest person in the world.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~END OF FLASHBACK~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
“I really believed that I was the happiest person in the world. I.. I really believed that we were going to be together forever….” She said as she started to cry again. My heart broke over and over again.

“Were you going to meet her last night?” I asked hesitantly. I received a nod from her then she answered. “Last night was our second anniversary. I wanted to with her for the rest of my life, so I…. I…I was going  to…… propose to her and then I.. I  saw her with… him.” She started sobbing really hard and I hugged her again. “Shhh..” I whisper softly. “They… They.. In front of me…”

“It’s okay. Everything is going to be okay.” I assured her running my hand up and down her tiny back.

I want to help her.


TBC

Here you go, part 2. Hope you like it. I feel like I have two different styles of writing....  :depressed: ope you like it!!!  :fainted:
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATE! 12/10/02
Post by: nao707 on October 02, 2012, 02:32:20 PM
I WANT PART 3 ~  :cool1:

ME TOO! TakaminaBG-san please update soon! :bow: :thumbup
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATE! 12/10/02
Post by: Haruko on October 03, 2012, 05:20:29 AM
ohh I want to help her too
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATE! 12/10/02
Post by: Wmatsui22 on October 03, 2012, 05:56:36 AM
wOw !!!!

Nice Chapter  :twothumbs

I hope you update often if your not busy :D

Thank You...

Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATE! 12/10/02
Post by: thebotole on October 03, 2012, 08:23:18 AM
i like the story.. :twothumbs
i want part 3 also.. :wub:

update please..  :bow:
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATE! 12/10/02
Post by: ichikawa on October 03, 2012, 04:20:00 PM
I WANT PART 3 ~  :cool1:

I tripple that!!  :D
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATE! 12/10/02
Post by: fausto on October 03, 2012, 10:49:00 PM
I want to know more!!!!Update please!!! :panic:
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATE! 12/10/02
Post by: TakaminaBG on October 07, 2012, 10:51:26 PM
                                                                                        Part 1

I open my eyes lazily but closed them immediately caused by the warm rays from the sun, drilling through the window glass, illuminating my whole face. I sign irritated as I slowly get up from the bed and close the curtains quietly trying not to wake up the beauty that was sleeping next to me.

I walk towards the bed and sit next to her. I watch her silently as I bring by hand and slowly remove the bangs covering her face. “Minami” she whispered in her sleep. Hearing that, I smiled.  She is so beautiful. I can just sit here and watch her sleep the whole day.

As I watch her whole face my vision stops at her lips. They look so soft and I bet they are sweet too. I really want to kiss her.

I smile and without realizing it I start to move closer to her. I know I’m a coward but I really want to kiss her. Is it wrong wanting to kiss your best friend? Am I wrong for…. loving her?

I move closer and closer. And finally I closed the distance that was remaining between us. I lost my self completely. Like I thought her lips really are sweet.

I quickly broke the kiss not wanting to wake her up. It’s a good thing she didn’t because if she had woken up it would’ve been really awkward.
What would she say If she knew I kissed her just now?

I get up from the bed and go downstairs to prepare a breakfast. Knowing Atsuko she would be hungry when she wakes up. That girl, despite her sexy, thin body can eat. Give her a truck of food and she will eat it, all of it!

Atsuko’s POV
My alarm starts ringing and I quickly get up from the bed startled. I turn it off and look around  and see that Minami is not here. “She is probably in the kitchen.” As I get from the bed and head towards the kitchen my phone interrupts me.

I extend my hand and took the phone. I open it and as I read the name I smiled brightly.

 From Aoi
Atsuko, how are things going?
I haven’t been doing much…..
Actually, I just got up now.
What are you up to today?


His name is Nakamura Aoi. I’ve had a crush on him since junior school. Wait? Is he asking me on a date? Finally!! I have to go and tell Minami!

End of Atsuko’s POV

Minami’s POV

As I’m almost done with preparing the breakfast I felt hands wrapping around my body, hugging me from behind. I smile softly, but that didn’t last long. “He asked me on a date!!” she said happily.

I slowly turn around and make a fake smile not bothering to ask who it was, because I already know..

Nakamura Aoi….

“Finally.” I said as I put the dishes on the table. I want to get out of here.

I quickly gather my things and head to the door.

“Minami, where are you going?” she asked as she grabbed my hand. “Home“ I said coldly trying to stop my tears not wanting to worry her.

“Aren’t you going to congratulate me?” she asked sadly. She is breaking my heart and now she wants me to congratulate her.. I’m her best friend, so I have to, right?

“Congratulations!” I said trying to make a happy expression for her. I take her hand of off me and run away.

“Minami?” she called me but I didn’t even bother to turn around.

At The Train Station

After the date with him when she starts telling me how good it went, I won’t be able to stand it!

I began to cry and put my hand to cover my eyes. “I’m being stupid” I thought.

I have to stop being like this…

I should let Atsuko be with whoever she likes…

But, how? I ask myself.

Suddenly I heard a familiar voice calling me. “Takahashi – san? Are you waiting for someone?” he asked.

I turn around and see a familiar boy. “We talked the other day.” He said smiling.

“The other day?” I asked.

“Ah, I saw you when I was looking out the train window.” He said. “So I got off at Nakao – Kachimachi and rode back over here.” Then he asked again.

”Are you waiting for someone?”

I looked down at the ground and answered. “No – Nobody.”

We just stand there for some minutes waiting for the train to come.

“So…” he starts hesitantly.

Then he starts messing his hair and I look at him confused a little. “What is he doing?” I asked myself.

“So… Um.. What are you doing? He asks.

“Th – There something else as well…. The reason I took the train back… When I saw you standing there…. I really wanted to talk to you!!!” he suddenly blurted out leaving me totally shocked and speechless.

 “Ta – Takahashi – san, is there anyone you are going out with?”

“If there isn’t…. I…. Won’t you please go out with me?” he asked blushing.

“We never talked in middle school, but…. In elementary school you… Ah, a mail!” he continued talking while sweating.

I closed my fist and said. “Okay”. He was a bit shocked. “Eh?”

“Okay, I will go out with you.”

 I know, I know why I’m doing this. But I want to stop this feeling. I want to stop loving her. I want to…. Forget her.

The Next Day

At The School

Atsuko’s POV

“Ah! Atsuko, you finally showed up!!” said Yuko.

“Ah, Yuko. I’m late because my hair was a mess when I got up this morning. You understand, right?” I said nervously.

“I know what you mean. You were so shocked, you couldn’t sleep, right?” she said awkwardly.

“Huh?” I asked not really knowing what she is talking about.

“Me too. Never in a million years would I have thought that, Takamina, would beat me…”

“Huh, Takamina?” I asked still not knowing what she is talking about.

What about Takamina. Has something happened to her? I can’t help but worry, she is my best friend. Yesterday she was strange. Is she sick?

“You’ve met him, right? What kind of person is he? She asked me curiously.

“Eh? Met who?” I haven’t met anyone I told myself.

“Isn’t obvious? I’m talking about, Takamina’s boyfriend. What, boyfriend? Since when?

I can’t believe she has a boyfriend. We are best friends, but she never told me she had someone she liked.

I should be happy, right?


TBC

This fic is dedicated to Ichikawa - san!! a little bit late, but Happy birthday from me too!! :) A little bit crappy but hope you like it!!
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATE! 12/10/07 Dedicated to ICHIKAWA - SAN!!
Post by: ichikawa on October 13, 2012, 04:56:35 PM
WOAAAHHH!!!!  :panic: WHY I DIDN'T SEE THIS COMING?!!!  :bleed eyes:

I am busy with life these past weeks and didn't see this fic.
Thank you soo muchhh TakaminaBG-san, really thank you  :twothumbs

Demo...  :bleed eyes: why are you making Atsumina aparted  :bleed eyes:
Atsumina ... :bleed eyes:

Hope you continue :thumbup
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATE! 12/10/07 Dedicated to ICHIKAWA - SAN!!
Post by: Wmatsui22 on October 14, 2012, 04:36:45 AM
Please Update Soon...

Your Part II and you fanfic (Can I make you forget)

thank you
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATE! 12/10/07 Dedicated to ICHIKAWA - SAN!!
Post by: miayaka on October 14, 2012, 05:33:48 PM
So many fics for ichikawa-san's bday!
me like it because its my otp too nyahahahaha
 :on GJ:
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATE! 12/10/07 Dedicated to ICHIKAWA - SAN!!
Post by: TakaminaBG on October 20, 2012, 03:39:36 PM
Well here is part 2 for Ichikawa- san. And I forgot to say, Ichikawa - san. This fic is dedicated to you, so I leave the title to you. :) Hope you like it!

                                                                                            Part 2
At School

“Wow, so you gave him chocolates back when you were in elementary school?” asked Yuko.

“It’s the fulfillment of first love. How romantic.” Said Yuko smiling.

“Uh.. Y – Yeah.” I said thinking ‘Even though I didn’t remember that until he told me’.

When I was in sixth grade, me and some other girls gave chocolate to a boy…

“You are so lucky that you live close to each other. It takes an hour for me to get to Haruna’s house..” started Yuko. “We can’t meet on the way back from school either. Since she works….” We were startled as we heard a loud noise next to us.

“A – Atsuko.” I said looking at her. Suddenly my heart started to beat faster. “Good Morning .” I greeted her.

“You are late, Atsuko.” Said Yuko.

“Yeah my hair was a mess. Ah, since it’s the humid season.” She said nervously.

Meanwhile, Mii – chan, came and joined us. “Ah! Did you heard?? Takamina..”

“I heard! I heard!! You got a boyfriend, right?? Congratulations, Takamina!” she said happily. That makes me sad. But, what do I expect?

“T – Thanks.”

“But why did you keep it a secret? You should’ve told me!” said Mii – chan pouting. “ Eh? You didn’t know either?” she continued.

“No, not at all. When did it happen?” asked Atsuko.

“He confessed to her on Monday.” Said, Yuko.

“Really?” asked, Atsuko.  I kept it a secret, because I thought she’d be mad. But I guess not..

As far as Atsuko is concerned… This isn’t really something important, I thought closing my fist.

While thinking my phone rang. I open it and I see there is a mail form him..

“Is it mail from your boyfriend?” asked Mii – chan.

“Is it really? You two are so lovey - dovey.” Said Yuko drooling.

“Sorry, I’ll be back in a minute.” I hurried and excused myself. “Lucky.” Said Mii – chan.

Atsuko’s POV

“Come to think of it. Didn’t, Atsuko used to be the only one who would mail, Takamina, in the morning.” Said Yuko.

“That’s right!! I wonder if, Atsuko, would get jealous now that, Takamina, has a boufriend?” said Mii – chan turning to look at me. “Let’s do our best, Atsuko!”

“…hmph…” I said and looked to the other side.

After School

Me and Atsuko decided to walk home together. We chatted about different stuff.

“So.. Have you gone on a date yet?” she asked.

“Eh? That’s.. Oh! But we rode the train together this morning!”

“Really? You met on the station? That’s great!”

“Yeah, also the day after tomorrow… Sunday.. We are going to go see a movie.”

“On Sunday? Your first date!” What time to you have to be there?” she asked suddenly grabbing both of my hands.

“Ah… I have to be at Shibuya, be noon..” I said nervously ‘W – Why’ I thought.

“In that case, before you go, come to my place!”

“Eh??” It’s a little embarrassing.

“I told you before that I’d tech you how to use make up.” Right I thought. “I’ll give you some make up and make you pretty before your date!”

“It’s okay, you don’t have to..”

“It’s my best friend’s first date!” she said excited.

Best friend. Before, these words would’ve made me so happy.. But now they make me feel a little bit sad.

Sunday, before my date at Atsuko’s house

 “Takamia! Welcome!”

“Come in! Come in!” she walked in and I followed her.” Thank you for having me” I said while closing the door.

We sat in her bedroom and she started putting the make up on me.

“This is a special lotion. It doesn’t if it gets in your eyes the way sunscreen does.”

“It smells good..” “Doesn’t it?” she asked while rubbing it on my cheeks with her both of her hands.

It feels so nice. Her fingers are so soft and cool. Her voice is so close to my ears.

“It’s okay to open your eyes now. Your skin is pretty so there is no need for foundation."

But when I feel the heat from her body… When I feel her breath on my cheek…

“I’ll just put on a little bit of mascara. Keep your eyes open a bit.” She said.

It hurts so much, I start to cry…

“Minami? I’m sorry, did it get in your eyes?” she asked worried. “To finish off I’ll put on some transparent lip gloss.” She said while putting it on my lips.

I look in the mirror. She really is great at this. I look so beautiful..

“I… Maybe I shouldn’t go today.”

“Eh??” she asked surprised.

“With the rain, maybe it’s not a good idea to go out.”  I lied. The truth is I don’t want to go out with him. I don’t even like him…

“But you are going to the movie theater, so the rain shouldn’t really be a problem.”

“Geez, you are not the kind of girl who cancels things the last minute. Right?” she said frowning.

“For now, how about you send him a mail. What’s his name anyway?”

“Takeuchi – kun.”

“What is his first name?” she asked. “Eh? Ah….”

“What? Minami, you don’t even know your boyfriends first name?”

“That’s kind of weird, Minami.”
 “Minami, do you really like him?” she asked witch totally startled me. “Or are you just taking pity in him? And going out with him, even though you don’t like him. Don’t you think it’s unfair to do that, after he goes to the trouble of confessing to you.”

I stay silent. I don’t know what to say. She is right, after all. I’m an awful person, aren’t I? I wanted to forget her, so I used him…

“What if you had a person you liked? How would you feel if they went out with you out of pity? You’d feel bad, right?”

Out of pity… The person I like..

“Happy…” I said starting to cry while closing my firsts.

“Eh?” she asked surprised. “I would be happy. If it were because of pity.. Because of ANYTHING… But no matter what, it’s impossible…”

“Minami?”

“My love there is no way it will ever be fulfilled..” I shouted.

“Minami, there is someone you like?!?!” “What kind of guy is he?”

“Don’t worry. Your love will definitely going to be fulfilled!” she said while I stopped crying for a moment and looked at her. “Minami is cute and a kind hearted person. If I were a guy I would fall for you the minute I see you! Just like always…”

That’s enough. I don’t want to hear any more of this. I push her slowly and pin both of her arms to the ground.

“Atsuko, you are so cruel.”

“Eh? Minami?” she said while I leaned closer to her.” Minami…” finally I locked her lips. There is no resistance form her so I put my right hand on her cheek.

I slowly broke the kiss and looked at her with tears on my face. “See, it will never be fulfilled!” I said as I walked out room and out of her apartment…     

TBC

 :fainted: I'll update the other fics too..... Why are they so many, btw??? Ah... tired...

Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATE! 12/10/20 Part 2
Post by: Pdpond on October 20, 2012, 06:49:34 PM
Oh god! painfull's love.
pls update soon! :bow:
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATE! 12/10/20 Part 2
Post by: ichikawa on October 20, 2012, 06:55:58 PM
Part 3!! I want part 3!!! Ichikawa is persistent now~ XD

Kataomoi Finally! I want their one-side love ended here and they're going to confess to each other! in next part~  XD

Please dun break apart my Atsumina  :bow: :bow: :bow:

Thank you very much for this story TakaminaBG-san  :heart: :heart:
Absolutely waiting for the next part~~ 3
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATE! 12/10/20 Part 2
Post by: Haruko on October 20, 2012, 07:02:04 PM
poor minami T_T.. its a difficult situation...
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATE! 12/10/20 Part 2
Post by: Takamina_Captain on October 21, 2012, 10:56:19 AM
wuaaa... so heartbreaking...
atsuko, please don't break minami's heart...
Please continue... i'll be waiting...  :fap
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATE! 12/10/20 Part 2
Post by: nao707 on October 21, 2012, 01:52:28 PM
 :pleeease: :pleeease: Minamiiiii~~~....

so sad...   :gyaaah:

please update soon  :kneelbow:
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATE! 12/10/20 Part 2
Post by: TakaminaBG on December 19, 2012, 02:27:38 PM
                                                                                    The Painful Truth

Atsuko and Minami are currently sharing an apartment together. They’ve been dating for 2 months now. Her relationship with her girlfriend is going great. Minami is kind towards her, showering her with flowers every day. She is always there. She can rely on her. She is happy. She couldn’t ask for more.

“Tadaima~~” Minami said as she walked into their shared apartment. She took of her shoes and kicked them aside frustrated.

“Ah, Minami. Okaeri!” said Atsuko as she stood up and went to her girlfriend. She saw the midget kicking her shoes with frustration and asked what’s wrong, but the midget only shook her head and smiled.

“I’m going to take a shower.” Said the midget as she walked away from her girlfriend and went straight into the bathroom.

“I wonder what happened?” Atsuko asked herself.

Atsuko waited patiently for Minami to get out from the bathroom. She wanted to ask her what has happened. She wanted to help her girlfriend. But she was worried, not because something bad might’ve happened, but because she felt like, Minami couldn’t trust her.

After a while the knob of the bathroom door clicked and soon the door opened revealing Minami’s body already wrapped up in her clothes.

Atsuko looked at her with a worried expression.

She slowly walked to the midget and asked again “What happened?”

“I told you it’s nothing.” Said Minami a little coldly which made Atsuko think what is she to her girlfriend.

“You can trust me, Minami. I’m here for you.” Atsuko said softly but that made the midget angry.

“I said it’s nothing. Drop it!” shouted the said midget.

Atsuko was shocked and surprised. Minami has never been like this with her. This is the first time, Minami has ever shouted at her.

“What am I to you, Minami? Nothing?” said Atsuko with tears filling up in the corner of her eyes threatening to fall anytime now.
 
Minami stayed quiet with almost no emotion in her eyes. Suddenly it was heard a loud noise and Minami was pushed a few steps backwards and she put her hand on her left cheek.

Atsuko was already crying. The midget really hurt her. She was expecting an answer like “You are my everything” or at least “You are my girlfriend.” But nothing came out of Minami’s mouth.

After a few seconds Minami lifted her head to look at Atsuko while removing her hand from her cheek revealing how red it actually is. But now you can see emotion her eyes. It’s not nothing, it’s sadness.

“I can’t do this anymore.” Suddenly blurted out Minami, leaving Atsuko completely stunned.

“What do you mean?” she asked this question to which she already knew the answer to.

“Let’s break up.” And this was her answer. She stood in front of the midget shocked with tears still falling from her eyes.

Finally after a few minutes of just standing there, Atsuko grabbed her things and walked to the front door but stopped.

She walked back to her now ex – girlfriend and gave her another slap which was even stronger than the previous one and because of that the midget fell on the ground.

Finally Atsuko screamed “I hate you!!” and stormed out of their apartment. Minami whipped the blood on the corner of her mouth and smiled.

“It’s better for you to hate me, Atsuko.”

( Др. )

Haruna and Yuko were preparing to get to bed when they heard the door bell ringing. They looked at each other and wondered who could it be in this late hour.
Slowly Yuko got of the bed and went downstairs. She finally reached the door and looked through the peephole and saw her best friend soaking wet probably from the rain that was raining heavily.

She opened the door and Atsuko ran out to her and hugged tightly and they both fell down on the cold ground. Atsuko started to sob loudly making Yuko really worried.

“What’s wrong?” she asked tapping lightly the head of her crying friend. But Atsuko didn’t answer and cried even louder.

Soon Haruna quickly came down after she heard the loud thud, which was caused by no other then Atsuko. Haruna looked at Yuko with worried expression, completely ignoring the position Atsuko and Yuko are in right now. Yuko only shook her head.

After a while Atsuko finally calmed down and told them everything. They were as shocked as her, but they were angrier than she was.

( Др.)

Minami was sitting on the couch staring at the ground lifeless. She had no choice. “This is for the best” she thought.

Soon after that she heard a loud knock on the door.  She knew who that person was and she didn’t want to open the door, but she knew she had no choice because that person would probably knock on the door until she opens it.

She stood up lazily and finally reached the door and slowly opened it revealing one figure. Soon after the door opened fully, Minami received yet another slap earned from her best friend – Haruna.

“What is wrong with you?” screamed Haruna. The midget looked at the ground not saying a word. She really doesn’t know how to face her friend. She doesn’t want to tell anyone what the reason is.

“Damn it, Takamina!!! Answer me!” Haruna screamed again pushing and pulling Minami’s body forward and backwards. But again she stood there silent.

That only earned her yet another slap, making them four in total. Finally she looked at Haruna with tears falling form her eyes, which she was withholding.

“I’m dying!” screamed out Minami leaving Haruna shocked with tears falling from her eyes.


END

I'M BACK!!!!! I finally unblocked myself! Well ENJOY! :)
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATE! 12/12/19 Part 2
Post by: arrow27 on December 19, 2012, 02:36:42 PM
Wow, really loved this. Minami is dying :( Nice twist though, poor her prob just didnt want others to worry for her but in tht end she broke down. & ouch, 4 slaps :P Thanks for the update!! Looking forward to an update for this :D Thanks again!
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATE! 12/12/19 The Painful Truth
Post by: bimbo on December 19, 2012, 03:35:04 PM
I pity Acchan for the sudden break up but I pity Takamina more. 4 slaps in one night is too much  :on cloudeye:
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATE! 12/12/19 The Painful Truth
Post by: miayaka on December 19, 2012, 09:45:10 PM
Legendary 4 Slaps!
and Taka is dying  :OMG:
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATE! 12/12/19 The Painful Truth
Post by: Tanchan on December 20, 2012, 04:38:51 AM
Omigod, why didn't you let  Yuko come and give her another 2 slaps to make it 6, lol I'm so evil :panic:
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATE! 12/12/19 The Painful Truth
Post by: chichay12 on December 20, 2012, 05:58:01 AM
ouch..
4 slaps..XD

poor minami..
she's dying and she get a slap.. :doh:
ahhhh.. pls.. part 2...
i want more!
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATE! 12/12/19 The Painful Truth
Post by: TakaminaBG on December 20, 2012, 10:44:08 AM
Well I didn't plan on writing another part for this and I don't think I will.. Sorry guys!  :kneelbow:
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATE! 12/12/19 The Painful Truth
Post by: giakb48ff on December 20, 2012, 10:59:18 AM
Oh so sad! T^T   :catglare: but like it  :deco:
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATE! 12/12/19 The Painful Truth
Post by: TakaminaBG on January 01, 2013, 01:32:49 AM
I'll re - write it and post it again. I'm really sorry for the confusion!  :kneelbow:
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATE! 12/12/31 New Year's SP
Post by: Tanchan on January 01, 2013, 03:25:43 AM
At first I thought it was Atsumina and then suddenly it became Takayuu XD. How would that explain Takamina's anger earlier on when reading the magazine then :nervous? Or her anger was because Yuko was involved?
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATE! 12/12/31 New Year's SP
Post by: Wmatsui22 on January 01, 2013, 06:43:19 AM
-Hello.

-TakaminaBG-san

-Nice chapter!

-But I thought it's AtsuMina :(

-Thank you for update :)

-Ganbatte

-WMatsui_22-
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATE! 12/12/31 New Year's SP
Post by: cisda83 on January 01, 2013, 10:22:35 AM
Eh... Minami is dying so she broke up with Atsuko.... and got 4 slaps.... so sad for Minami.... it has a nice twist...

Please make the continue of the above story... it can be a bit longer....

The yesterday story... eh... it's MinamixYuko... I thought it's Atsumina...

A bit... confusing... why did Minami was angry with Atsuko's scandal. Her reaction was angry, hurt and sad... I thought that were the reactions that people made when they were jealous or broken heart?!!! Really confuse...

Well thank you for the updates....

Hope to see another one...

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATE! 12/12/31 New Year's SP
Post by: TakaminaBG on January 01, 2013, 11:48:08 AM
Well last night when I wrote this I was kind of... drunk.
I read again just now and it really is confusing...
Should I delete the fic?
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots
Post by: Haruko on January 01, 2013, 08:26:50 PM
fisrt time that i read a takayuu T_T... not my kojiyuu heart... and atsumina too
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots
Post by: cisda83 on January 04, 2013, 11:39:10 PM
TakaminaBG...

I don't think you need to delete the story... may be you can revise... and change the story if you want... if you want to make a 'make sense' story.

so that the story is actually... flew.

The idea is great... if it is atsumina... it's probably easier to make it... but to make TakaYuu... even I don't know how the story's going to flow.

Well everything is up to you... I enjoy your story... even the latest one.

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots
Post by: FlameHazeKatsu on January 06, 2013, 05:22:05 AM
ooohhh~~~~ XD lol oh yeah during the scene “Nothing, Minami. I just want to kiss you. Dame?” when she said "dame" somehow I really imagined her  looking at Takamina with a CUTE face!!!!  :mon squee:
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots
Post by: stepk on January 06, 2013, 07:05:11 AM
is really great the history
you history are one shot but really cute and sweet

part 2 and don't deleted.  XD
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATED!! 13/02/10
Post by: TakaminaBG on February 10, 2013, 03:43:18 PM
So this is the new version of the fic I posted on New years eve. So, yeah, hope you like it! Douzo!
                                                                                             
                                                                                                 Untitled

The night was peaceful. Takahashi Minami came home late again tonight. She was busy before but now even busier ever since she became the General Manager. And she still couldn’t figure out what exactly that meant. 

Today was her day off and she was sleeping quietly cuddled up in the warm embrace of her blankets. It was still early in the morning. The sun had just started to rise up and the warm rays were tickling her cheeks. She slowly opened her eyes, lazily bringing up her right arm to rub them. The sun was up and that was indicating it was 7 o’clock in the morning.

She looked at the clock and sighed as she rose up from the bed looking at the blue sky. She thought that this day would be a good, uneventful day. The little she knows. Today is most certainly not going to be a good and uneventful day.

She turn to her right as both of her legs touched the cold ground. She made her way to the bathroom to take a bath and freshen herself up. It took her less than 30 minutes. As soon she was ready to get out she made her way to the kitchen. Her leg was about to cross the ledge of the door but was stopped by the sound that her phone made. It was indicating that she got a mail.

She went back to the bed and took the phone from the table. She unlocked it and frowned when she saw the ID. She wished they could just leave her alone today. It’s her day off. She sighed again at opened the message.

From Akimoto Yasushi

Takahashi – kun, I’m sorry but we have a problem and I need you to come to my office immediately.

END

She released yet another sigh. She quickly went to her wardrobe and picked up some random clothes. She was pissed off. She hadn’t had a day off since like forever. And she wanted to spend it at home watching TV.  She was tired from all the responsibilities. People were always saying that she is carrying AKB on her back and that is putting quit the pressure on her although she never shows it.

She got herself ready in no time. She took a cab and in ten minutes time she was in front of the office of Akimoto Yasushi. She raised her hand and softly knocked on the door. Soon after a soft “Come in.” was followed.

She turned the door knob and opened the door slightly.

“Ah, Takahashi – kun. Come in, come in.” Said the founder of AKB48. She respects him very much but there are times when she just couldn’t figure out what he was thinking.

“Excuse me.” Minami said as she walked in and closed the door behind her.

“It seems we have quit the problem to solve.” He said as he sighed. She wondered what happened and what does it have to do with her?

He opened a magazine on a certain page and gave it to her. She looked at him confused as he just gave her a weak smile.

The moment she laid her eyes on the article her heart stopped as millions of arrows went right through it. All she could feel now is pain. It hurts her and without even noticing it a tear rolled down her cheek. Thousands of questions are going through her mind right now. Questions like: Why? When? What happened?

“I know this may be hard for you. But I want you to deal with this.” He said leaving her totally breathless. How am I going to deal with this? She thought.

“Eh? Why me?” She asked.

“Dealing with this kind of problems is YOUR job.” He said with a serious tone and she knew she couldn’t go against him.

“I understand” She said weakly.

“You can go now.” She nodded and took the magazine with her.

As soon as she reached her home, her knees finally gave up on her and she collapsed on the cold, wooden floor. She burst into tears and her loud sobs could be heard by the neighbors.

After an hour of crying she decided to move herself and sat on the couch. She brought her knees up and hugged them tightly. She fell asleep with swollen red eyes.

A few hours went by and now it’s noon. Before she fell asleep she was sad and hurt but now she is full with anger. She looked at the magazine lying on the ground. It was open and she could clearly see the title.

Maeda Atsuko carried in a man’s arms like a princess!!

She walked to it, looked at the pictures once again. A drilling pain went through her heart again. She grabbed the magazine and threw it wherever she could.

She fixed herself quickly and dashed out of the door with dark aura surrounding her. The moment she reached the front door of the apartment her friend was living in, she took out her key that the said friend had given her, stormed in the room. Minami reached, Atsuko’s bedroom door and opened it furiously.

It was Atsuko’s day off too and she was currently sleeping. She had no idea this article came out. She was sleeping peacefully but soon was woken up.

“WAKE UP!!” Screamed Minami with all her might.

“Eh? Minami? What are you doing here?” Atsuko asked cutely but that was completely ignored by the General Manager.

“What the heck are you doing?” Minami asked in a loud voice.

“Can you stop screaming? It’s still early.” Atsuko said rubbing her eyes. That only made Minami more pissed off.

“Oh! You haven’t seen it yet, have you?”

“Seen what?” Minami immediately threw the magazine to Atsuko, practically hitting her with it.

Atsuko opened the said magazine and widened her eyes as she saw the article. She put a hand on her mouth and soon after that tear’s started to fall down her cheeks. She looked up at Minami and shook her head furiously. Minami only looked away with tears falling form her eyes as well.

“I – I – I’m s- sorry..” Atsuko said between sobs.

“It’s still early for you to date. You graduated yesterday. Are you kidding me?!?!” Minami said in a rather cold tone which made Atsuko very sad. She thought she had betrayed her friend.

“I’m sorry… “ Atsuko apologized again and again.

Atsuko pulled Takamina’s shirt and sobbed loudly. Takamina clenched her fist and sobbed as well but quietly.

“Or what? You just wanted to be in the embrace of a man?” Minami said without thinking but she wasn’t sorry.

“What?”

“Couldn’t you at least pick a man who can actually carry you? Maeda Atsuko carried in a MAN’S arms like a PRINCESS? You have to be kidding me? Like a princess?” Minami laughed. “More like a sack of potatoes! And you call that a man?” Minami said sarcastically.

Atsuko was really shocked from Minami’s statement. She knew she was wrong for everything, but this is too much.

Soon a slap was heard. Minami rubbed her right cheek and looked away. She knew she was wrong for saying these things but she couldn’t help it. She was pissed off.

“I’m so disappointed, Atsuko.” Said Minami as she walked away, leaving Atsuko sobbing alone.

( Др. )

The next day came pretty quickly. The article came out and a bunch of mails were sent to Takamina. She didn’t even look at most of them.

Soon after she made herself breakfast, her phone beeped again. She peeked at the ID and saw that the mail was from Oshima Yuko. She decided to read it.

From Oshima Yuko

Hey! Uhn, are you okay? Of course you are not.
Well tonight it’s New Year, so we will be parting.
I know you are probably not in the mood for a party, but please come. For me!


END

The General Manager indeed was not in a parting mood but she knew that this could take her mind of off everything.

And she knew she had to talk to Yuko, because she was there and she can tell her what exactly happened.

( Др. )

Minami reached Yuko’s place. She could hear the loud music.  She sighed before knocking on the door. Soon after that Yuko opened the door and welcomed Takamina with opened arms.

Yuko hugged her best friend and it was returned. She patted softly the back of Minami and asked her if she was okay. Takamina nodded and broke the hug.

“Can we talk?” Asked Takamina as Yuko nodded. They went into Yuko’s bedroom. Yuko was nervous. She had no idea how this conversation would end.

“You were there, weren’t you?

“Yes.”

“You are her friend, aren’t you?” Suddenly, Minami raised her voice. That took Yuko back.

“Uhn..” She answered nervously.

“THEN WHY THE HECK DID YOU LET HER GO HOME WITH HIM!!” Shouted Takamina with all her might.

“I – I’m sorry.” Yuko stuttered.

“Right, you are sorry and that makes it okay?” Takamina frowned.

“Why are you so angry?” Yuko raised her voice too.

“You let her go home with a GUY alone and God knows what might’ve happen!”

“Are you angry I left her alone or the fact that she was with a GUY?”

Takamina didn’t say a word. She was quite shocked by Yuko’s statement. But she knows she is wrong. Minami is just worried about Atsuko. Because she is her friend, yeah just a… friend.

“What are you implying?” Asked Takamina as she raised an eyebrow.

“Do you like her?”

“What the heck are you talking about?”

“Come on, Takamina. You know exactly what I’m talking about!“ Said Yuko looking straightly into Takamina’s eyes.

“N – No I don’t.” Takamina denied it with a hintch of a doubt in her voice.

“Yes you do!” Screamed Yuko.

“I said I don’t!” Shouted Takamina back.

“You do! Why can’t you admit it?” Yuko is getting quite irritated by Takamina and her denial.

Takamina stayed silent. She was asked a question she didn’t know the answer too either. She looked down and thought, why can’t she admit that she likes, Atsuko. Maybe because she didn’t know that she did either.

“Go to her, Takamina. Go and figure out your feelings.” Yuko paused for a second and continued in a low pitch. “Don’t let her wait any longer.”

But actually, Takamina heard her, clearly. She looked down for a second then she looked at Yuko who just smiled at her.

Takamina smiled back and stormed out of the room. She ran so quickly that even she was surprised how fast she is. Her heart was beating like a drum.

She has been running for 20 minutes but she is not even tired.  After 20 more minutes she finally reached Atsuko’s apartment building. She stopped for a second to catch her breath.

She took the stairs, not wanting to wait for the elevator to come. She was so quick that within seconds she reached the apartment of Atsuko. She looked at the number and smiled brightly. She really loves AKB, she thought looking at the number “48”.

She raised her arm and stopped for a second, thinking what exactly is she going to say to Atsuko. After thinking through what she is going to say, she raised her arm again and softly knocked twice on the door.

A minute passed and she heard footsteps coming closer and closer. With each step her heart was beating faster and faster.

And finally the door opened and revealed Atsuko’s body. Atsuko was actually surprised to see the midget standing in front of her. The midget smiled as Atsuko smiled back at her.

Atsuko moved away from the door and let Minami in. They sat on the couch in the living room. They stayed silent for a while, not knowing what they should say. Atsuko was the first one to break the said silence.

“I’m sorry.” She apologized looking down at her feet.

“No. I should be the one apologizing, Atsuko. I got angry and overreacted. What I said was awful. I’m sorry. I’m so sorry, Atsuko.” Takamina said holding her hands tightly. Atsuko shacked her head from left to right.

“I’m sorry too. I was drunk and I wasn’t thinking clearly.” Atsuko said with tears flowing down her cheeks. The general manager smiled brightly at her and hugged her tightly.

“Anyone can make a mistake. No one is perfect, Atsuko.” Whispered Minami. Her warm breath tickling Atsuko’s neck was sending her shivers.

“You are.” Said Atsuko.

“Eh?” Questioned Minami as she broke the hug.

“For me you are perfect. You beautiful and so mature. You are the leader of AKB, you have so many responsibilities and you never complained about it. You are the heart of AKB and you brought us where we are today. I look up to you. In tough times, you are giving me strength to go on. You are my light in the dark tunnel.” Said Atsuko with so much sincerity. Minami was left dumbfounded. She was surprised to hear Atsuko say such beautiful things about her. Hearing them made her heart skip a beat. She was moved by her words.

“No, believe me, I’m not. I couldn’t even admit what I was feeling….. For you.”

“Eh?” Atsuko was surprised. Her heart was beating fast.

“When I saw the article I was so angry and I didn’t even know why. If it wasn’t for Yuko, I would’ve lost you.. forever.” Minami paused as she looked at Atsuko, who was anticipating for what Minami is going to say next.

Minami continued “ I was angry but at the same time I was jealous. Jealous of him. I thought that something happened when he…..”

“Nothing happened, Minami. You have to believe me.” Atsuko said as Minami smiled and nodded. “I know.”

 “I don’t want to see you with another guy. I want you to be mine. I love you, Atsuko!” Confessed Minami looking straightly into Atsuko’s eyes which Atsuko widened in surprise. She was left speechless.

There was a silence. Minami looked down at the ground, ready for the rejection to come. But then she felt a soft hand caressing her left cheek. She turned to look at Atsuko who just smiled and said “ You made me wait for so long, baka!” Said Atsuko with a tear falling down her cheek.

Minami made a guilty face “I’m sorry.” Atsuko only shook her head. “It was so tough, being around you and not being able to tell you my feelings…” She paused as Minami looked back at the ground again feeling so sorry. “But it all disappeared just now.” Atsuko used her hand to lift Minami’s head and look at her. “I love you, too!” 

 They both looked straightly into each other’s eyes. A smile formed on each other’s lips. Slowly their face’s moved closer and closer. A second past and finally their lips touched softly as both of them closed their eyes feeling the soft and warm kiss.

A minute passed as they broke the kiss, breathing heavily. They looked at each other’s eyes again as they kissed for the second time. Minami brought her hands up and wrapped them around Atsuko’s waist as Atsuko wrapped her arms around Minami’s neck. They pulled each other closer and closer, deepening the kiss. Minami bit Atsuko’s lower lip. Atsuko gasped inn surprise as she opened her mouth. Minami took that opportunity to slip her tongue in. They collided and twisted against each other, making the kiss full with passion.

The broke the kiss desperately in need for air. Minami brought her hand up and touched Atsuko’s face. First her eyes, then her nose, then her lips and finally in stopped to rest on her neck. She leaned up and kissed Atsuko again, full on.

Minami pushed her slowly until Atsuko’s body was laying down on the couch. She broke the kiss and started to nibble the neck of Atsuko who let out a soft moan. Then Minami slowly licked Atsuko’s ear. Atsuko shut her eyes as she let out, this time a loud moan. “You like that, don’t you?” whispered Minami in Atsuko’s ear as she softly bit it.   Atsuko let a moan yet again as she playfully hit her now girlfriend’s arm. Minami just smiled and kissed Atsuko again.

After a few minutes of intense kissing, Minami brought her lips to nibble Atsuko’s neck and collarbone. Atsuko shivered from the touch of the warm lips of Minami on her skin. Minami again licked Atsuko’s ear and  bit her earlobe. Atsuko moaned in her throat.

Minami was getting really excited and aggressive. She went back to Atsuko’s lips and kissed them again with passion as her hand went under Atsuko’s T – Shirt. Atsuko gasped from Minami’s cold touch as she moned.

“M – Minami…” said Atsuko between kisses.

Minami moved her hand up and up until it reached underneath Atsuko’s bra, but at that moment Atsuko put her hand on Minami’s.

“Mi – Minami….” Breathed Atsuko.

“What?”

“It’s… too soon….for… this.” Blushed Atsuko fuiously.

“Are you kidding?” Laughed Minami. “We’ve done “this” a numerous times in all the “AtsuMina” fics on the internet.” Joked Minami.

Atsuko blushed again as she playfully hit her lover’s arm. “Baka! You’ve read them, haven’t you?” Atsuko smirked. This time the one blushing was Minami.

“O – Of c – course n – not!” stuttered Minami. Atsuko laughed at the embarrassed face of her lover.

“Hey! You now, we can film “this” and post it on the internet.” Suggested Atsuko.

“Are you crazy? Aki – P will kick me out of AKB!” They both laughed.

“Right! Well, we can at least take a picture together and post it in the “AtsuMina” tag in Tumblr as a present for all of the AtsuMina fans around the world!!” Suggested Atsuko again.

“That we can!!” Agreed Minami.

(Др.)

*Yuko sitting in front of her laptop*

*Logging in Tumblr*

*Clicking on the AtsuMina tag*

*See a new picture of them* *eyes sparkle*

“I bet they had sex!” Grinned Yuko.

She didn’t notice a figure standing behind her with an angry face.

Suddenly she felt a cold breeze. She turned around and saw a rather angry Nyan – Nyan.

“Perv!” Screamed Haruna as she hit the top of Yuko’s head.

“Itai, Nyan – Nyan!!” Pleaded Yuko.

“Go to sleep, you pervert squirrel!” Ordered Haruna.

“Eh? Can’t we do “that” too?” Yuko suggested.

“We did “THAT” 20 minutes ago!”

“So what?”

“You are right!” Said Haruna as she dragged Yuko all the way to the bed.

END 
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATED!! 13/02/10
Post by: Hii_chan on February 10, 2013, 05:36:21 PM
the new version is great :on GJ:
especialy the last part you make my perv mode on :on bleed:
...but ..I like the Takayuu more
Anyway thanks for great update :wriggly: :kneelbow:
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATED!! 13/02/10
Post by: Keisthename on February 10, 2013, 06:01:14 PM
haha this is really nice and funny to find out that they know about us writers.. I know it's a fic but it's interesting to read.. haha good job on this !!!  :heart: :heart: :heart:
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATED!! 13/02/10
Post by: Minami-chan on February 10, 2013, 07:44:29 PM
 :wub: :wub: Atsuminaaaaa I miss them! T.T
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATED!! 13/02/10
Post by: Haruko on February 10, 2013, 08:26:12 PM
Yeah! Atsumina... and a little kojiyuu :B jeje love it!
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATED!! 13/02/10
Post by: miayaka on February 10, 2013, 09:27:18 PM
the last part so cute! it made me giggle!
atsu atsu atsumina!
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATED!! 13/02/10
Post by: fausto on February 10, 2013, 10:20:07 PM
Thank you for making great moments like this :thumbup ;)
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATED!! 13/02/10
Post by: Tanchan on February 11, 2013, 04:20:06 AM
Now that makes more sense. I hope that one day they will post a photo of them on tumblr so we fans can squeal about it XD
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATED!! 13/02/10
Post by: kuro808 on February 11, 2013, 04:34:21 AM
The KojiYuu at the end :lol:

But the incident during the start was fairly interesting to bring AtsuMina together
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATED!! 13/02/10
Post by: cisda83 on February 11, 2013, 10:31:32 AM
Great story....

Yeah this one is better and more making sense than the previous one

Thank you for not giving up on the story....

Nice recovery....

Atsumina and Kojiyuu interactions are great

Can't wait to see more OS from you

 :wub: :inlove: :love: :heart:
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATED!! 13/02/10
Post by: hikari_043083 on February 11, 2013, 12:11:47 PM
We so need that photo right now! I like this version better, thanks for altering it.
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATED!! 13/02/10
Post by: FlameHazeKatsu on February 11, 2013, 09:57:24 PM
woooooooooooo!!!!!  :mon XD: *murmurs*: "if only it could happen..."   :mon thumb: *cough* *cough* i mean the picture  :mon evillaff: or am i really talking about the picture but hell i would want the picture too hahahaha...and the ending was funneh xD  :mon lmao:  as expected from Yuko...  :mon thumb:
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATED!! 13/02/10
Post by: Archer1992 on April 18, 2013, 05:57:33 AM
I hope you can upload soon

Thank you very much for your effort
Title: Re: TakaminaBG's One Shots UPDATED!! 13/02/10
Post by: Dianalrs on April 02, 2015, 06:53:59 AM
Great Atsumina storys
Sad some of them is not finish
But I really enjoy them  :twothumbs