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Author Topic: [AiNana] It Start With A Goodbye - Part IV (END) - Itterashai (09/05/12)  (Read 16349 times)

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Re: [AiNana] It Start With A Goodbye - Part IV (END) - Itterashai (09/05/12)
« Reply #20 on: September 05, 2012, 08:48:36 PM »
So that's what 'It Start With A Goodbye' means...     hmm, naruhodo. :yep:
I've been wondering the title's relation to the contents of the fic for like.. weeks? :lol:

It's so unexpected of Nana's father to be an abusive drunkard, since there weren't any signs of that in the starting chapters. You hid it so well. :P
However, it's answering my confusion of Sayaka's cold tone to the dad in the previous chapter. Sou ka...

It's a relief that Ainyan and Sayaka could settle their issues, and AiNana returned glued together again :love: Wish you both a happily ever after in Osaka! :heart:

Thank u for making this fic ;u;
Second that.. :twothumbs

And failed? Nah.. :smhid Okay, I gotta admit there are some things lacking in the whole run of this series, but overall the fic isn't a failure. :D
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Re: [AiNana] It Start With A Goodbye - Part IV (END) - Boku wa Matteru (09/05/12)
« Reply #21 on: September 06, 2012, 08:32:42 AM »
Aiyaaaaa~

Happy end ;u;

Thank u for making this fic ;u;

Thank you for reading  :bow:..
This is actually my 1st experiment to make a happy ending  :sweatdrop:



So that's what 'It Start With A Goodbye' means...     hmm, naruhodo. :yep:
I've been wondering the title's relation to the contents of the fic for like.. weeks? :lol:

It's so unexpected of Nana's father to be an abusive drunkard, since there weren't any signs of that in the starting chapters. You hid it so well. :P
However, it's answering my confusion of Sayaka's cold tone to the dad in the previous chapter. Sou ka...

It's a relief that Ainyan and Sayaka could settle their issues, and AiNana returned glued together again :love: Wish you both a happily ever after in Osaka! :heart:

Thank u for making this fic ;u;
Second that.. :twothumbs

And failed? Nah.. :smhid Okay, I gotta admit there are some things lacking in the whole run of this series, but overall the fic isn't a failure. :D

Once more..really a sharp reader you are  :D

Thank you... it really means alot for me..
I've lost my confidence and still learning to change my crap into something readable  :kneelbow:

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Re: [AiNana] It Start With A Goodbye - Part IV (END) - Boku wa Matteru (09/05/12)
« Reply #22 on: September 06, 2012, 03:09:41 PM »
Happy end :bow:
And Saya-nee is with them, too? It's like an NTR plot for me, really :rofl:
But I don't dislike the ending, so I'm waiting for your next fanfics!

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Re: [AiNana] It Start With A Goodbye - Part IV (END) - Itterashai (09/05/12)
« Reply #23 on: September 07, 2012, 04:25:46 AM »
oh, so the "goodbye" is toward nana's father. at first, i thought it would be the separation of the main characters (ainyan-nana).

glad that nana-ainyan-sayanee has solved the problems. lucky nana..she has 2 knights besides her..

thankyou for the happy ending..
and i'm curious about which akb song that you mean XD


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Re: [AiNana] It Start With A Goodbye - Part IV (END) - Boku wa Matteru (09/05/12)
« Reply #24 on: September 07, 2012, 09:26:55 AM »
Happy end :bow:
And Saya-nee is with them, too? It's like an NTR plot for me, really :rofl:
But I don't dislike the ending, so I'm waiting for your next fanfics!

Thank you for reading.. :bow:
One of my friend said, "don't tell me it's gonna be harem ending???"  :lol:
I just love the three of them, I can't let anyone go.. that's why I'm kinda "pushy" and make an ending like that  :banghead:


oh, so the "goodbye" is toward nana's father. at first, i thought it would be the separation of the main characters (ainyan-nana).

glad that nana-ainyan-sayanee has solved the problems. lucky nana..she has 2 knights besides her..

thankyou for the happy ending..
and i'm curious about which akb song that you mean XD
Thank you for reading, yukofan-san  :bow:
It's started when I'm listening AKB's song "Itterashai", and the story just blow up like that..
But I'm still lacking in character development and continuity of every part..
I hope I can do better next time  :banghead:

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