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The Hello! Project Fanfics => H!P Fanfics => Library => Topic started by: inDeceit on August 12, 2007, 03:14:36 PM
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An A/U Fiction. This is the first time in my life writing a fic apart from school essays and actually showing it. So.. God I'm a nervous-wreck right now >_< Never was good at english.
Hmm, don't really feel like revealing the pairings yet until I start on Chapter 1. If I start on chapter 1..that is. I think I've dropped a couple of remote hints on who's the main characters.. if it's considered hints. Coincidentally, it started raining while I worked on the story o.o
Well, here goes nothing.
Prologue
Drenched and covered in a blood-stained shirt, a young lady not even in her twenties yet ran frantically through a construction site as torrents of rain fell violently. Gunshots could be heard from a distance accompanied by a dozen or more men yelling. Every shot that echoed through the site made the girl’s heart jolt, but there wasn’t time to stop and thank the Gods for their horrible aiming. Running straight into an alley with a dead end, and a little less than 5 seconds to make her next move, she noticed a large dumpster by the corner.
“Can’t believe I’m doing this!” She cursed and instantly dove into the sea of damp thrash after taking in a deep breath. Finding her way to the bottom of the container, she prayed that her pursuers weren’t smart enough to search the dumpster thoroughly.
“I’m going to skin that scrawny brat alive when I get my hands on her!” A man from around the corner growled as he and his lackeys hurried towards the alleyway.
Meanwhile, in a friendly neighborhood not far from the dumpster…
BANG!
“Was that a gunshot?” A woman, this time looking less like a convict stopped in her tracks. She tilted her transparent umbrella slightly and looked up at the gloomy skies. “Nah, probably just thunder..”
Shaking off the droplets of water from her umbrella, she made her way up to her small apartment. She hung her umbrella by the door handle and proceeded into the main room. She reached for the remote and turned on the television.
<i>“And now for the weather.”</i>
“Rain, rain and more rain.” The woman lowered the volume and spoke for the caster instead. As mentioned, it had been raining for a total of three days, making today the third. The streets were often flooded in the mornings lately until the skies decided to clear in the afternoon only to start darkening again an hour later.
“Working seems like a chore these days.” She groaned and prepared to take a shower. Baths never did worked for her as she tends to space out and faint in the bathtub until someone in the household finds her. However, drowning to death in one’s own bathroom wasn’t a wise choice now that she’s moved out and began living all by her lonesome.
After washing away her fatigue in the shower, she prepared for bed and dreaded another morning of waddling through the flooded streets.
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Yoohoo Yuki~ <3 Came to support you here. ;)
Interesting prologue. I'm guessing the below-20, so-called "scrawny brat" might be Reina. XD But that's just a random guess. I can't figure out who's the second one because I'm not too certain who is lazy (Miki or Yossi?!), dislikes rain, and can space out in the bath tub all at once. XD
Interesting, looking forward to more. ;)
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Yay! Thanks!
Hehe, none of them actually.. o.o But I'll eventually add the rest of the girls when I think of a role for them though. Hopefully.
Think of brat as a nickname XD I just added scrawny due to the circumstances of the story.
As for spacing out.. I got that idea from a flets video awhile back. Then again, I can't remember if it was spacing out or something else.
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Hah, I knew it, it HAD to be Takagaki. Brat eh? Gaki-san! And spacing out? Who else but Aichan, second only to Kaorin for the spaceyness! XDDD
...plus it's your favorite pairing. >_> XDDD
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:lol: Damn right it is.
Plus i just had a scene in my head that seriously needed Gaki-san's reactions and someone spacing out :3 Who else but Ai-chan to fit that role XDD
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Hoho, sounds good to me. I <3 Takagaki anyway. Do write faster, I'm impatient. XD
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=O I'm a slow writer though XD But I think I'll complete chapter 1 before bed..
screw work! :tama-mad: :-X
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Good to see a new face trying out here, although the fan-boy in me is disappointed that it isn't Reina I'm sure you'll think of a good roloe for her right? Right?! Just kidding, but yeah please continue I'd like to see how this pans out.
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I'll try! I like Reina too. But I haven't detailed the roles of the others yet because I typed it on impulse while mentally chanting TakaGaki >_>
I was actually thinking of putting her as one of the badass antagonist (in a good way), but again, I'm not sure yet.
Chapter 1
The men separated into two groups. The first continued combing the rest of the site and the second searched the current alleyway. It was too dark to see clearly but the men weren’t about to give their prey any chance of escaping. Eyeing the dumpster suspiciously, a buffed man motioned for his lackey to inspect the container. A lanky young man nodded his head and tightened his grip on a metal rod he picked up from the ground. Quietly opening the container, he started penetrating the pile of thrash with the rod.
At the bottom of the dumpster, said prey was a nervous wreck. She tried to remain as still as possible, but the lack of air was killing her.. Literally. Any moment now, she’d probably start twitching. A sudden hard stab by the man nearly went through her as well but was an inch off target, cutting her paled face instead. <i>Ouch! F’king bastards..</i> She was about to start off a string of curses mentally but was cut short by some yelling and footsteps seemingly getting softer.
“She went that way!” Another gunshot went off. “Damn! You need to work on your aiming!” And all went silent within seconds. Even the rain weakened into a mere drizzle.
She waited another 10minutes before scrambling out of the dumpster. The coast was clear and she quickly slumped down against the wall. She winced at the impact against her weakened body. Her face was scarred, her body sore and a bullet grazed the side of the stomach during the chase earlier. Taking a much needed breather, she knew that she was safe.. For now. She was cold, tired and her wounds were likely to be infected in the morning but her eyelids grew heavy, her mind in a whirl. Gradually, her body gave up the fight to stay conscious and went limp as she blacks out.
The next morning!
Within a rather crappy apartment building, sunlight crept through a small opening between the curtains, arousing a beautiful young woman with bed hair from her slumber. To add, an alarm clock went off right after. Irritated, she pawed at the alarm only to knock it off the nightstand but it did the trick of shutting it off so it’s all good. She crawled out of her bed reluctantly, slightly dazed for a while before dragging herself into the bathroom for her daily ritual.
It was already 8.10AM when she came out casually dressed. 5 minutes left to being late, she took her belongings and an umbrella and hurried out of the building. To her surprise, the streets were dry save for a few puddles here and there despite last night’s torrents. Shrugging this sudden ‘miracle’ off, she couldn’t help but feel a little suspicious about the change in weather. But no matter, at least she didn’t have to get her jeans and shoes wet today.
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“TAKAHASHI!” came a shrilled yell. It was the first greeting she got the instant she set foot into the café. Meeting eye to eye with a middle aged lady, the young woman currently addressed as Takahashi quickly ducked into the locker room before her manager could start lecturing her about punctuality. Well, she can’t hide forever. She’ll have to use the separate washroom outside eventually, and either that or her manager would personally haul her out. There’s no knowing what her Yakuza incarnate of an employer can and would do to her when she’s pissed off. Finally emerging from the changing room, her manager ordered her to clear the thrash from last night. Obeying orders like a good employee, she carried the load into the back alley.
“Thrash my ass. These are heavier than gold bars!” She approached the dumpster but stopped abruptly at the sight before her. The bag she once held escaped her grip and nearly landed on her foot. There was a slight delay before she started panicking. Right before her lay a battered body of a girl propped up against the wall. The unconscious body had flakes of dried blood trailing down her cheek and even managed to stain the collar of her shirt. The lower half of the shirt was completely stained brown and there were light bruises on her arms. Instinctively, Takahashi neared the girl with the hope of finding her alive. The girl definitely smelled a little funky, but that wasn’t important now. She stared at the other’s facial features for a few seconds, figuring that she would have been really pretty without the dirt and scars on her face and the slight pout she had while unconscious was quite adorable. She had a calm and tranquil expression too.
<i>Well, at least she died peacefully…</i> Mental kick. She shakes the negative thought out of her head and pondered over how she should check whether the other’s still alive. Try to listen for her heartbeat? No, that’s difficult with the crowd outside. Feel for a pulse? Nope, don’t know where the pulses are. Feel for her heartbeat? Takahashi blushed at the thought of where her hand would have to be and slapped herself lightly. The most logical method would be to see if she was still breathing then. Immediately, she raised her hand and attempted to feel for any air being exhaled from the other’s nostrils. Yet before she could even stretch her arm far enough to reach the other, an icy cold hand shot out and grabbed her wrist. On contra to what one would normally hear in a horror movie whenever the antagonist strikes, a low and rather manly scream emitted from the alley.
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Back in the café.
“Did a large animal just die?” The manager wondered out loud. The rest of the staff just shrugged at the ridiculous statement and returned to their chores. A customer who was equally curious about the noise stopped what he was doing for a moment and thought for a while, “But the nearest zoo’s miles away..”
“Probably just some accident by the construction site, forget about it.” Another customer chipped in, and that started a whole debate regarding the scream's origin.
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Takahashi’s scream was cut short when another hand slapped weakly against her opened mouth. The injured girl gave her a weak but threatening glare as a way of saying ‘Shut Up’. Getting the message, Takahashi quickly closed her mouth. She could see that the younger was beat red in the face, frowning and panting. Allowing her motherly instincts to take over, she realized these were symptoms of having a fever. She placed her forehead against the other only to feel an immense wave of heat. “Oh my god!” She exclaimed, “You’re heating up really bad!” She continued, even if the feverish girl weren’t listening at all. The young waitress panicked again, not knowing what exactly to do anymore.
“I can’t possible leave her out here to combust! Call the hospital? Though usually in movies someone in this state normally would rather die than be hospitalized...” She thought quickly, reasoning with herself using similar scenarios seen on film. “I should at least bring her some place safer. But where?" She thought long and hard until the most obvious answer hit her like a brick wall. "Of course! Now...should I be a good Samaritan and nurse her back to health myself, or face that shrewd manager for the rest of the day?” Without further thinking, Takahashi quickly stood up and ran back into the café. She grabbed the nearest colleague she saw and pulled him to the side.
“Hey, tell the manager I’ve to take the rest of the day off. Urgent stuff. Please?” She pleaded, but only to be pushed into giving a detailed reason for her absence. “What do you mean ‘what sort of stuff’? Alright, fine. My grandma’s trapped in the washroom and can’t get out. She might develope claustrophobia or even die from prolonged confinement.” She answered without flinching. Brutally giving herself a mental kick for such an absurd excuse and indirectly cursing her own grandmother, Takahashi hurried back to the alley again before her colleague said anything else. Outside, she found the girl unconscious again.
Unable to carry the girl by herself, she ‘borrowed’ a wheelbarrow from the construction site and with some difficulty, managed to have the other lying decently in it. Ignoring the looks from passersby, Takahashi pushed the wheelbarrow and body back to her apartment.
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Almost4AM and I'm finally done.
This chapter sorta disappoints me, but then again.. that's just me never being satisfied with myself >_> Hope you guys like it though..
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I'm always disappointed whenever I start writing new stuff as I think it's pretty hard to get into at first. Keep at it though and you should start to enjoy it a little more I reckon. I enjoyed reading anyways, the highlight definately being Ai's manly screams, comedy gold.
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Sounds interesting so far.
Yet before she could even stretch her arm far enough to reach the other, an icy cold hand shot out and grabbed her wrist. On contra to what one would normally hear in a horror movie whenever the antagonist strikes, a low and rather manly scream emitted from the alley.
:lol:
Unable to carry the girl by herself, she ‘borrowed’ a wheelbarrow from the construction site and with some difficulty, managed to have the other lying decently in it. Ignoring the looks from passersby, Takahashi pushed the wheelbarrow and body back to her apartment.
Aichan pushing a sleeping Risa in a wheelbarrow? KAWAII! :wriggly:
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^I agree with JFC. That was adorable. XD
I LOLed at the part with the manly scream. -snickers- Yay for contradicting images. ;)
So, Risa gets beat up by a bunch of scary men who are obviously not shy about trying to cause grievous bodily harm. That's not good, what was she involved in? o_o;
And Aichan, the waitress? XDD With a horrible boss. >_> XD Fun times. Wonder what Ai and Risa will say to each other when Risa wakes up. XDD
Looking forward to the next~ no pressure, this time you can take your time. :P
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Glad you all liked that part :) I'm experimenting my sense of humour in this fic. Never did humour before in a story :bleed eyes:
This chapter was HARD! I hope Risa's encounter before passing out made at least some sense..
Chapter 2
The duo finally made it back to the apartment in one piece, Takahashi panting like she’d just completed a marathon.
On the way home, they had stopped by a Family Mart with Takahashi conveniently (and absent-mindedly) parking her wheelbarrow beside the entrance and went in to pick up some first aid materials and lunch. Having no clue whatsoever regarding first aid, she wasted 20 minutes standing in front of the rack until a staff member suggested she pick up a first aid kit instead of individual contents. Satisfied with her purchases, she went outside and discovered a crowd by the side of the entrance. Apparently, the unconscious girl in a cart had become a street attraction within the last few minutes without her knowledge. Flustered by the attention, Takahashi threw the kit on top of the other girl and fled the scene as quickly as her short legs could carry her, surprisingly the crowd.
Well, now that they’re finally inside the sad excuse of an apartment, Takahashi laid the younger girl on her bed before entering the bathroom to retrieve two wet towel and a pail. One she soaked in water and had it neatly folded before resting it on the girl’s forehead. The other was intended for cleaning. Apologizing to the sleeping body, she took a pair of scissors and started snipping at the other’s shirt due to the fact that it had stubbornly attached itself to the girl like a second skin. She then peeled the ruined shirt off and carefully began wiping off the dirt and blood from the nearly bare torso. Finally done cleaning up, a flushed Takahashi released a deep breath she had been holding in unconsciously all these while.
<i>What do I do now?</i> She sat down by the pail and glanced at the carrier by the doorway with the first aid kit inside then back at her guest. She eventually got up to fetch the kit. Browsing through the contents, she took the cotton gauze and read the instructions. <i>Is this even in Japanese? Better call grandma least I kill the poor girl.</i> With that, she pulled out her cell phone and dialed a familiar number.
In the meantime, someone was dreaming.
<i>Half past ten at a random rich man’s residence. The lights were dimmed but it wasn’t difficult to catch a glimpse of a sudden passing shadow. On the other side of the mansion, someone else was also being sneaky. The guards patrolling the courtyard had left to swap their shift as scheduled. Taking this chance, a feminine figure leaped down from the top of the wall that surrounded the mansion but lost her footing and landed on a rose bush.
“Ou-!“ She quickly covered her mouth, eyes larger than golf balls as she looked around cautiously. Thankfully, no one heard her. The girl dusted away the grass and thorns that got stuck to her jeans and put her boys cap back on. If her eyes could get any wider, it would after she had taken a good look at the building. “No way!” She exclaimed in a whisper. The mansion was similar to those in Europe centuries ago, grand yet intimidating all at once. Smirking to herself, she carefully crept towards the building in search of an entrance.
After a long stealthy search, she had managed to find her way into a bedroom within the mansion furnished with antiques. Jackpot! An expensive looking gold watch lying innocently on a dresser caught her attention almost immediately with its glimmer. Yet before she had the chance to even touch it let alone pocket the watch, an alarm went off throughout the premises. Shocked out of her life, she abandoned the watch and ran for it. All this time assuming that she’s been discovered until yells of ‘Assassin! The head’s been murdered! Find the culprit!’ echoed down the corridors.
“Murder?! Shit, I’ve done nothing!” An ultimate expression of shock flashed across her face while she kept running, adrenaline and fear rushing through her body.
Fleeing for her dear life, the young thief hasn’t been watching where she was going and knocked into a man coming from the opposite direction. She would’ve gotten up instantly and continued running towards an exit if it wasn’t for the man’s incredible height and disturbingly disfigured facial features that stunned her. But before she knew it, the man smirked and had pushed her hard towards the direction that his pursuers were coming from, escaping with his blood stained weapon in the girl’s possession.
What remained were a desperate struggle, gunshots and a long chase in the rain before everything turned dark for what seemed like an eternity. A low-pitched laughter began filling the void then, followed by an unexpected sharp pain...</i>
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“So I apply pressure to a wound to stop it from bleeding?” Takahashi questioned into the receiver while her other hand unconsciously pressed against the comatosed girl’s stomach wound as if to make a point. “But she’s not even bleeding anymore!” She cried out, applying even more pressure to the word out of frustration before raising her hand in defeat when her grandmother retorted.
Just moments ago, the young woman had been having a first aid crash course from her grandmother over the phone. Most of which were useless for the current situation she had to handle. After some senseless arguments over the phone and flipping of instruction booklets, she was finally given a suitable method. She then took out the required materials from the kit and thanked her grandmother.
“Oh! By the way, did anything happened earlier?” She asked, unable to resist being a little superstitious.
“None in particular.. Though I did get trapped in the washroom before you called. That was a little unexpected. Why dear?” Replied the old lady on the other line.
“Uhmm.. It’s nothing important! Take care! I’ll see you soon.” She spoke quickly and hung up. Coughing away the guilt and embarrassment into her fist, Takahashi turned back to the materials laid out on the table and repeated the directions to using them in her mind.
Completely focused on her task, she did not notice the shuffling of bed sheets behind her.
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I've been thinking of making this a TakaGaki-centric fic instead of including other MM girls prominently. It's sorta easier on me since I may not be able to handle multiple characters and end up screwing the rest of the fic, being new to writing and all. I will do seperate fics for the rest eventually though, but not now >_> Sorry!
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Hey carry on with the way it's going if it suits you better. I'll be honest and say that I would prefer to see other Momosu girls featuring in this but if it's harder to incorporate then there's no need to force the issue. Everything's going fine as it is so keep up the good work.
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So, Risa's a petty thief that's been mistaken for a murderer. Gee. XD
Anyway, funny how Aichan is like so....blur. XD It amuses me, it does. XD
It's alright if you don't feel up to including more characters. Just keep working on them and include people only if necessary and if you think you can handle it. No sense pushing yourself too far for your first fanfic. ^_^ Good luck and keep going!
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On the way home, they had stopped by a Family Mart with Takahashi conveniently (and absent-mindedly) parking her wheelbarrow beside the entrance and went in to pick up some first aid materials and lunch. Having no clue whatsoever regarding first aid, she wasted 20 minutes standing in front of the rack until a staff member suggested she pick up a first aid kit instead of individual contents. Satisfied with her purchases, she went outside and discovered a crowd by the side of the entrance. Apparently, the unconscious girl in a cart had become a street attraction within the last few minutes without her knowledge. Flustered by the attention, Takahashi threw the kit on top of the other girl and fled the scene as quickly as her short legs could carry her, surprisingly the crowd.
Woudln't be surprised if Aichan said "Oh shit!" when she came out and saw that crowd around Risa. :lol:
So Risa's a cat-burgler? Or was that just in her dream? :?
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Flash back in a dream actually. I feel like I need to revise the chapters.. again.
Anyway, Chapter 3! Been playing too much of phoenix wright and the nonsense got longer than I expected.
Probably messed up even if the chapter was kinda fun to write.
Chapter 3
<i>Am I dead?</i> She looked up at the white ceiling.
<i>Can dead people feel? It’s kind of hot in here..</i> She tried to move.
<i>…</i>
“Oh my god, am I topless?!” She suddenly shot up from the bed screaming, staring down at her bare body. “Oh shit! I AM!” At least she still had her bra on. But that wasn’t the point. Panicking, she began feeling around her torso hoping that she was just hallucinating being topless.
Shocked by the outcry, Takahashi involuntarily threw the bandages up in the air and screamed as well. She grabbed at her chest and spun around, panting hard. “Y-you’re awake!”
The half naked girl responded by hurling the nearest object she could lay her hands on at the other – in this case, a large pink penguin plushie. However, her aim was horrible. “PERVERT! What did you do to me?!” She backed up against the wall and pulled a blanket up to her chin.
“P-Pervert?” The accused stuttered, more dumbfounded than offended. Then, she got flustered again. “I din’ do n’thin! Who ya callin’ a pervert? Ya was lyin’ in ‘e dumps unconscious an’ I-“
“Stop.. STOP!” The girl had her eyes shut tight as she yelled. She fell back on the bed and buried her forehead against the pillow. “I can’t understand a word you’re saying!”
“Excuse me?” Takahashi stared at the girl in agony.
“I said, speak standard Japanese woman!” She snapped, staring back at the older.
“But I was!” came an offended reply.
“No you weren’t.”
“Yes I was.”
“No.”
“Yes.”
This went on for.. quite a while.
“Admit it! You have an accent!” The younger girl now sat upright on the bed, completely forgetting about her missing shirt.
“You have no proof!” Takahashi argued.
“Hold it! Proof?! I am the proof! I heard it!”
“OBJECTION! You have no alibi!” The accused pointed at her guest.
The girl gasped, then slammed her hands against the mattress. “Objection overruled! There’s no one else here but us!”
Neither really knew what the other was saying anymore, but they did secretly enjoy the courtroom drama.
Not wanting to admit defeat, Takahashi let out a ‘humph!’ and turned her back on the other. “Brat..” she muttered while picking up the bandages she dropped earlier. Meanwhile, the other girl laid back on the bed. Her fever had yet to subside but she just couldn’t resist proving her point. Now her head felt like they were buried under a ton of bricks. Holding the damp cloth to her forehead for comfort, she turned to her new caretaker.
“Who are you anyway?” She questioned warily, not wanting to start another argument until her fever breaks. Takahashi glanced back for a split second and released another humph.
“I’d tell you only if you would stop accusing me..”
The girl pondered over the condition seriously and nodded. “Fair enough.”
“Takahashi Ai.” The older answered almost immediately. “You?”
“…” She was hesitant to give an answer, but Ai seemed harmless enough. “Risa.”
“Just.. Risa?” Ai finally turned to look at her, raising an eyebrow.
“Don’t push it.” She frowned.
Remembering that she’s yet to patch up Risa’s injuries, Ai got up with her first aid kit and moved to settle on the bed. Instinctively, Risa shifted away from the older girl.
“I’m not going to violate you, if that’s what you’re thinking.” Ai spoke while busily applying antiseptic onto cotton, not noticing the exposed look on the other.
“But I’m sure there’ll be lots of- PAIN!” Risa’s scream could’ve raised the dead even in broad daylight. Blinking away her tears, Risa gritted her teeth and glared at Ai whom had a piece of soaked cotton wool pressed against her bullet wound.
“What?” She looked down at the tearing girl innocently. <i>That’s payback, you brat.</i>
Ai continued trying to aid her. “Would you just stay still and let me bandage your wounds?!”
“But it huuuurts!” the injured girl whined.
“So you’d rather let your stomach and face rot away, eh?” Horrified by the visuals of her body decaying, Risa puffed up her cheeks and turned away. Ai smirked and took it as a sign to go ahead.
An hour or two passed and Risa finally had her wounds disinfected, now covered in sloppily tied bandages. She was also given a nice clean shirt to cover her assets with. The clock ticked by painfully slow as Ai and Risa sat on the bed in silence. All they’ve been doing ever since the latter woke up was bicker. Neither was willing to give in and would make a come back with every chance they got. Eventually, they did grow tired and settled to just giving each other dirty looks and hard glares.
Being the first to finally surrender to this ‘childish game’ for the sake of her sanity, Ai sighed. “Uhm.. How’re you feeling now?” She asked quietly- a little reluctant even.
Risa turned around, surprised by her sudden mild attitude. No point being spiteful anymore though. “Better, I guess. Headache’s terrible though.”
“Must have been caused by the fever. I wonder if it’s gone..” Without saying another word, Ai closed the gap between them and held a firm grip on the other’s shoulder before touching their foreheads together. It was a little hard to tell the temperature with the cold sweat that suddenly broke out on the younger girl though.
“H-hey! Don’t you have a thermometer or something?” Risa cried, trying to look everywhere but at the face directly in front of her.. at such a close proximity. She decided to shut her eyes in the end. <i>But it’s kinda tempting to look… I think I saw a beauty mark? I wonder how it’ll feel- Oh My GOD! What am I thinking?! Shut up brain! Go do something brainy and leave me alone! Uhh, I’m feeling faint already..”</i> Just as she was about to come close to blacking out once more, Ai moved away in time.
“Yeah, an anal thermometer. I’m pretty sure you wouldn’t want that though.” Ai answered with a straight face, and she was right. Risa gulped the moment she heard ‘anal’. It was definitely worse than her mind having a mind of its’ own, if that made any sense at all.
“Anyway, you’re still kind of hot.”
“Why, thank you.” Risa managed a grin, earning herself a glare from Ai.
“You know what I mean. Take these and get some rest.” Ai continued, tossing a packet of painkillers at the younger girl and a bottle of water from her mini fridge.
“Why are you being so nice to me? I’m not going to pay you for the services, just so you know.” Risa asked while examining the contents in the packet. She then took out two pills and swallowed it as instructed.
“No idea.” She replied simply and shrugged. Frankly, she wasn't sure why she decided to help this stranger anymore. She didn't really know why she brought her home instead of a hospital when it clearly didn't concern her. Nor did she know why she still felt concerned after having to put up with the girl’s childishness. She could’ve just stormed off and leave the brat to fend for herself. Perhaps she just wanted to get out of work, or she was being a Good Samaritan after all. Perhaps she felt sorry for the girl, or it was out of impulse. Could’ve been all of the above. Maybe there’s something more to it even. Now that she considered the situation with a sense of rationality, she realized that she didn’t have a straight answer for her new acquaintance.
“Oh! I forgot to mention. The pills tend to… … Cause drowsiness.” When Ai turned back, Risa had already fallen asleep again with a light frown on her face. She couldn’t help but let out a smile, finding the girl’s sleeping face to be anything but bratty. Angelic even, if she didn't frown so much. Unconsciously, she brushed a finger against the sleeping girl's eyebrow and the frown faded away immediately.
“Somehow.. I get the feeling that.. she’s not really like that. I wonder..”
:bleed eyes:
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The whole bit with Risa waking up and the consequent spaz session between her and Aichan is all sorts of funny and winz. Especially:
“OBJECTION! You have no alibi!” The accused pointed at her guest.
The girl gasped, then slammed her hands against the mattress. “Objection overruled! There’s no one else here but us!”
:on lol:
Ai continued trying to aid her. “Would you just stay still and let me bandage your wounds?!”
“But it huuuurts!” the injured girl whined.
Awwwwwwwwww...:lol: So cute...:love:
“H-hey! Don’t you have a thermometer or something?” Risa cried, trying to look everywhere but at the face directly in front of her.. at such a close proximity. She decided to shut her eyes in the end. But it’s kinda tempting to look… I think I saw a beauty mark? I wonder how it’ll feel- Oh My GOD! What am I thinking?! Shut up brain! Go do something brainy and leave me alone! Uhh, I’m feeling faint already..” Just as she was about to come close to blacking out once more, Ai moved away in time.
Risa's brain going a mile a minute. :twisted:
“Yeah, an anal thermometer. I’m pretty sure you wouldn’t want that though.” Ai answered with a straight face, and she was right. Risa gulped the moment she heard ‘anal’. It was definitely worse than her mind having a mind of its’ own, if that made any sense at all.
“Anyway, you’re still kind of hot.”
“Why, thank you.” Risa managed a grin, earning herself a glare from Ai.
:kekeke:
“Oh! I forgot to mention. The pills tend to… … Cause drowsiness.” When Ai turned back, Risa had already fallen asleep again with a light frown on her face. She couldn’t help but let out a smile, finding the girl’s sleeping face to be anything but bratty. Angelic even, if she didn't frown so much. Unconsciously, she brushed a finger against the sleeping girl's eyebrow and the frown faded away immediately.
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Awww! This is so adorable :B Ai and Risa are in my top five favorite relationships <3
Anywho, I wonder what someone like Risa was doing with gangs, huh? o_o' I expect weird involvement now xD Also, I'm intrigued with Ai's inevitable involvement with Risa too... I was a slightly surprised when Risa already began to feel the hots for Ai, since I pictured Ai as the more perverted of the two rather than Risa xD. Anywho, looking forward to your future chapters, love!
Now for the ceremonial gift!
-gives you a hard hat to protect yourself from writer's blocks-
<3
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You're good! :mon thumb: Didn't know Takahashi can be this funny.
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I have to agree with Aichan being perverted sometimes, but I couldn't for the life of me figure out how to go about writing that so I gave her a more rational/quiet(okay.. maybe not that quiet) role. I was conflicted in the beginning but what the hell, I've already started xD
Hmm, all I can say is.. those two are gonna be facing lots of trouble when I've squeeze all the humor out of me.
*goes back to typing chapter 4*
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I have to agree with Aichan being perverted sometimes
o.o when?
Interesting beginning for the fic, I like TakaGaki and there's not much of it on the net so I'm looking for some fluff there xD
Btw, I read the title as "Spacegoat" instead of "Scapegoat" at first and I was like wtf?! XD
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Oops, I think I phrased it wrong.. :banghead:
I meant, I agree that Ai does seem like it, not that she is.. or something like that. I can't think straight when I haven't slept all night (It's almost 9am ;_;)
Btw, I read the title as "Spacegoat" instead of "Scapegoat" at first and I was like wtf?! XD
LOL.
There really isn't much of takagaki centric fics, so I finally snapped and did one. :D
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Chapter 4
“You finally took revenge eh?”
“He deserved it, after all that he has done to me. An eye for an eye, so they say.”
“Are you not afraid of his men hunting you down? They’re probably on the search right now.”
“Impossible. I had a scapegoat. It’s likely they got rid of that kid on the spot and closed the case then. After all, killing is child’s play to them.”
“That’s not what I heard on the streets though.”
“What are you implying?”
“They’re still searching for the killer.”
“That doesn’t concern me. I’m not a suspect anymore.”
“Yes, but the kid might rat you out. Ever thought of that?”
“… She did see my face..”
“You’re such an amateur, Marukuma.”
“What do you suggest I do then, ‘Oh great one’?”
“Oh my, trying to make me an accomplice?”
“It’s not your first anyway.”
“True.”
“So?”
“I say, eliminate all evidences. But remember, you did not hear this from me.”
“As always.”
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Nightfall finally came when Risa awoke from a long and dreamless slumber. Her headache was gone too, thanks to the painkillers. However, she was still a little sleepy from the pills’ side effects. She sat on the bed lethargically but it wasn’t long until a question began nagging at her. <i>Where’s that Takahashi woman?</i>
Taking a good look around the dimmed room thanks to some light seaming in from the outside, Risa couldn’t even see her own hand clearly let alone figure out if her caretaker was still in the room. Swinging her legs over the edge of the bed, she was about to stand up when she felt something fuzzy touch her feet. It couldn’t have been the tatami mats that carpeted the floor. Curiosity getting the better of her, she gently prodded the material with her toes. Whatever it was on the ground stirred slightly and all but caused Risa to shriek out of surprise until she mentally slapped herself. “There’s no such thing as the boogey man!” She muttered as softly as she could.
Taking a good look at the figure on the floor, Risa heaved a sigh of relief. Once again thanking the outside for shedding some light on what’s really down by the bed, literally. It was only Ai fast asleep with a thin blanket wrapped around her. She was curled up, trying to make the best out of the sad excuse of a blanket.
“She really should splurge a little on necessities..” Risa murmured and bent down to wake the sleeping girl. “Oi. Wake up.” She shook the other’s shoulder gently until finally some response was given.
“Huh?”
“Get on the bed.” Risa ordered.
“Wha?” Ai wasn’t sure if she heard her right.
“You took care of me all day, and I’m not that heartless to have you freeze to death on the ground. So take the bed already.” She then bent down and pulled the older girl up by her arm.
“What the- Ouch! All right, all right. You’re gonna rip my arm off if you keep pulling like that.” Ai retracted her arm and climbed onto the bed as ordered. “But.. What about you? You’re injured.”
You didn’t really expect our little thief to be that generous, did you?
“Right here of course.” Risa pats the spot beside Ai and promptly shifted to lie down.
The ticking of the clock could be heard loud and clear as both girls lied back to back on the single bed. It was too awkward for both of them to go back to sleep again. For Ai, she had never shared a bed with anyone before or even been unnecessarily close to someone physically. So naturally, it was slightly unsettling regardless of whether the warmth next to her was indeed comforting.
Risa one the other hand, she was having another headache. She did not believe that she just spontaneously invited someone to share a bed with her, nor did was she convinced that she went soft on the other girl not long ago. She was bothered by the kindness experienced throughout the day as well. No one in their right mind would actually be willing to help anyone suspicious looking let alone a thief, so why did Ai do it? The older girl was nice to her despite the occasional petty verbal exchange, even better than her own mother ever was. Frankly, Risa was touched by the act of kindness. It was a first, that’s for certain.
Preoccupied with their thoughts and speculations, the two girls were caught unaware by the Sandman and gradually succumbed to sleep.
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Just moments after the crack of dawn, Risa was served with a rude wakening. She was being crushed by the weight of another person and also held in a death grip. Those were in no way healthy for her wounds and bruises. While attempting to free herself, the alarm clock went off.
As usual, Ai would strike at the clock in order to turn it off. However, there was a certain somebody’s face in the way and took the blow instead. Rubbing her nose, Risa took the liberty to turn off the alarm on the other’s behalf. It was a routine for Ai to wake up once the alarm was silenced. She slowly opened her eyes and saw a blurred figure right in front of her. She blinked once. Twice. The third time was unnecessary when she practically flew up from the bed screaming and scrambling against the wall.
“An’ a Good Morning to you too.” Risa greeted sarcastically at the panting girl who had just woken up in frenzy.
“G-good Morning.” She greeted back cautiously. She then asked, “Did I uh.. Do anything? You know.. before I woke up?”
“Other than attempting murder on me with your assets, no.”
“Oh Good. I mean! I’m sorry about that.” Ai apologized sheepishly. Looking at the clock, she quickly shuffled out of bed and into the washroom leaving a bewildered Risa still sitting on the bed.
After 10 minutes of stoning, Ai finally returned to the room changed and about to go out. “I really have to be heading out now so.. You can lock up for me whenever you decide to leave, okay?”
“Where are you going?” Risa asked, slightly bothered with having to be alone.
“The cafe. I’ve to go to work.” Ai answered while putting on her shoes.
“Wait! I’m coming with.” Came an instant reply.
“What for?”
“I.. uh.. I’m hungry. Yeah, that’s it.” Risa’s stomach conveniently started to growl.
“Oh right, you haven’t eaten since God knows when.” Ai lowered her head to think for a minute. “Go wash up and I’ll wait for you downstairs then.”
Risa nodded and hurried into the washroom as if her injuries were never there to begin with.
Shortly after, the two girls left the apartments for the café. The rest of the journey was quiet. There weren’t any small talk along the way, not even the smallest of arguments, a lame comeback or two or any conversation at all other than a “Look out!” from Risa when Ai started daydreaming and nearly crossed the street at a red light. Seems like there really weren't anything for them to talk about unless they were in a situation.
They arrived at the café safely in the end. The tension between them however, kept Risa from being aware of her surroundings and caused her to bump into a tall man when she tried to enter the building after Ai. Risa looked up at the man who had his face shadowed by a hat and apologized. The man simply looked down at her as if searching for something before he turned away and left. Although taken aback by the man’s creepy behavior, Risa shrugged it off and went into the café.
Opposite the café, the same man stopped and took off his hat. He stared intensely at the girls inside through the glass windows, a sly grin building on his face.
“What luck. It’s her.”
:imdead:
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“You finally took revenge eh?”
“He deserved it, after all that he has done to me. An eye for an eye, so they say.”
“Are you not afraid of his men hunting you down? They’re probably on the search right now.”
So this murder was an act of vengeance? Against who, and for what reason? Who are "they" and who did they kill that this person felt the need to have revenge?
“Impossible. I had a scapegoat. It’s likely they got rid of that kid on the spot and closed the case then. After all, killing is child’s play to them.”
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“Yes, but the kid might rat you out. Ever thought of that?”
“… She did see my face..”
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“I say, eliminate all evidences. But remember, you did not hear this from me.”
Well, with this type of thinking, these guys must be gangsters. By the sound of it, they're used to having the authorities on their case a lot.
Risa murmured and bent down to wake the sleeping girl. “Oi. Wake up.” She shook the other’s shoulder gently until finally some response was given.
“Huh?”
“Get on the bed.” Risa ordered.
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“But.. What about you? You’re injured.”
You didn’t really expect our little thief to be that generous, did you?
“Right here of course.” Risa pats the spot beside Ai and promptly shifted to lie down.
Oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. ;D
Just moments after the crack of dawn, Risa was served with a rude wakening. She was being crushed by the weight of another person and also held in a death grip.
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww... Aichan was holding Risa while they were sleeping! :wub:
While attempting to free herself, the alarm clock went off.
As usual, Ai would strike at the clock in order to turn it off. However, there was a certain somebody’s face in the way and took the blow instead. Rubbing her nose, Risa took the liberty to turn off the alarm on the other’s behalf.
:lol: Oops.
It was a routine for Ai to wake up once the alarm was silenced. She slowly opened her eyes and saw a blurred figure right in front of her. She blinked once. Twice. The third time was unnecessary when she practically flew up from the bed screaming and scrambling against the wall.
“An’ a Good Morning to you too.” Risa greeted sarcastically at the panting girl who had just woken up in frenzy.
Guess Aichan must have forgotten that Risa was there. :P
Knowing Aichan it was probably a low, manly scream too. XD
“Did I uh.. Do anything? You know.. before I woke up?”
“Other than attempting murder on me with your assets, no.”
Her "assets"? Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice. :twisted:
They arrived at the café safely in the end. The tension between them however, kept Risa from being aware of her surroundings and caused her to bump into a tall man when she tried to enter the building after Ai. Risa looked up at the man who had his face shadowed by a hat and apologized. The man simply looked down at her as if searching for something before he turned away and left.
The fact that he was concealing his face with his hat should probably be suspicious enough, since it's a sign that he probably doesn't want to bee seen/noticed. The way he looked up and down at her is even more suspicious, if for no other reason than the fact that it makes him look like a perv.
Opposite the café, the same man stopped and took off his hat. He stared intensely at the girls inside through the glass windows, a sly grin building on his face.
“What luck. It’s her.”
Shit, he's looking for Risa. What's worse, he saw that she arrived with Aichan, which means he'll be out to get rid of her as well. :scared:
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Someone will be 'gotten rid' of for sure, but there's nothing to worry about that. Much.
Aichan however.. I'm afraid of what I'm gonna do to her >_>
Facing a writer's block now :cry:
Meanwhile, I'm writing a sci-fi fic until I get ideas for chapter 5 @__@
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Horrible chapter :angry:
Chapter 5
Half a day had gone by since the duo entered the café. Risa sat in a booth with a cup of water while Ai spent her time busy serving customers without a break.
“I’m glad I never took a job..” Risa remarked and took a sip from her straw. The day seemed to be passing by rather poorly for her however. There’s no argument between them that she came to enjoy, there’s no teasing of the older girl, there’s nothing at all. Risa was bored. She raised her hand and called for Ai.
“I’m hungry.”
Ai’s eyebrow twitched slightly. “What would you like?”
“Something cheap.” She replied after looking through her wallet.
Looking down at the girl for a few seconds, Ai spun on her heels and headed for the kitchen. When she returned, she placed a plate of spaghettis in front of Risa.
“Hey! This is not cheap!” She stared at the inviting meal.
“On the house.”
“Huh?” When Risa looked up, Ai had already left to serve another customer. <i>What was that about?</i>
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5pm came relatively quick. One had finished her shift and the other was done clearing her plate. The two left the café shortly, with Risa tagging along again. Ai decided to take a shortcut through the park.
“You look well enough.” She spoke, trying to start a conversation to ease the painful tension.
“Hmm.. Yeah..” Risa replied, slightly distracted.
“So why are you still following me?” She stopped under a tree and turned to the younger girl.
“I can’t follow you?” Came a reply, avoiding the main question.
“No.. But don’t you have other things to do? Like.. Go home?”
“I.. I have no home.” Risa answered, looking away from the older girl.
“What do you mean ‘no home’? You ran away or something?” Ai pressed further.
“No. I mean, I’m an orphan. Nobody wants me, I have no home to go back to, I sleep on the streets. Get the point?” Risa rambled on, then she stopped and sat on the ground, leaning against the tree they stopped by. She frowned at having to mention her life.
Ai’s heart sank a little at the thought of the girl sleeping under bridges, all cold and alone. She wondered how it’s like being an orphan. “I’m sorry. Then.. those wounds..”
“I suppose you’d want to know about that. Must’ve been bugging you all night and day, huh? That’s why you were so quiet before?” Ai nodded shyly.
“No harm telling you, I guess.”
Eager to know the story behind Risa’s predicament, Ai quickly moved to sit down beside her.
“Can you keep a secret?” Ai nodded again, this time with a determined frown on her face.
“I hope so. Just so you know beforehand, I’m a thief.” That confession made Ai gasp loudly.
“You’re a WHAT?!” She suddenly yelled.
Knowing that it was a bad idea to have revealed her identity, Risa freaked at the outburst and hurried to clamp her hands over Ai’s mouth. “Shhh!!! You’re going to get me arrested like that!”
“But you’re a thief!” The older girl all but shouted, prying the hands off her face.
“Yes, and I’m a thief that doesn’t want to go to jail!” She retorted, a look of worry and irritation crossing her face. “Do you want me to go to jail?”
“N-NO!” The other hung her head, feeling slightly ashamed. “..Of course not.. I have no reason to want you imprisoned.”
“I’ll trust you.. For now.” Risa said with pseudo suspicion in her voice.
“Trust? Does that mean we’re friends?” Ai looked up, a little hopeful.
“Whatever” The thief responded, not taking the other seriously. Friendship was overrated. “So, as I was saying…”
Ai spent the next half an hour listening to Risa’s story from 2 days ago. The younger girl recalled everything from how grand the mansion looked, the smell of tobacco within the rooms, the bastard that made her have to run like crazy and finally how she managed to save herself from the ‘mafia’, so she calls them.
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Meanwhile, only a few feet away from the two girls, said ‘bastard’ had been quietly listening in on them from behind a tree. He had been following them ever since they left the café.
“Shit, this isn’t good! Someone else knows.”
The man grumbled, lowering the weapon he held in his hands. He knew he was unable to strike at the point of time. Clenching his fist, he retreated from the park for a change of plans.
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There were lots of gasping and yelping from Ai throughout the account, as if she was watching an action film.
“So, that man.. he framed you?” She asked, incredibly intrigued by the story.
“Yeah, pretty much.” Risa sighed.
“Do you think they’re still searching for you?” the other asked, feeling thrilled and afraid all at once.
"Probably.” Risa answered, trying to hide the worry in her voice.
“That means you could be in danger right now!” Ai concluded, becoming more aware of her surroundings.
“Relax.. I doubt they’ll show up here. A group of men walking around with weapons isn’t exactly subtle.” Risa assured the other, patting her on the shoulder.
”But but but.. they could.. shoot you from afar or just run in and carry you off.. like in movies!”
Risa’s jaws dropped. She sighed and grabbed Ai by the shoulders, looking sternly into her eyes. “This is reality, my dear. That’s not going to happen.”
Ai was about to go on with her ‘but’s again when Risa hardened her glare. She lowered her eyes and turned away. “I’m just worried.”
“There is no need to. You hardly know me, remember? Don’t get yourself involved.”
Ai shot up after hearing what the other had said. Apparently, she’s not really that clueless about everything, “Actually, I’ve been involved the moment I picked you up from the dumps. And… you’re my friend now. Right? I can't abandon a friend in trouble.”
“Friend?” Risa had many feelings and thoughts going through her right now. She was shocked, confused, touched even. Someone wanted to befriend a petty thief, that’s a first. She looked at Ai with uncertainty. “You were serious?”
“Of course I was serious.”
“But why? I’m a thief! And I’m sure you should at least hate me after yesterday. I’m not exactly the most grateful person on earth.”
“Sure, I hate how you irritated me with your backtalk.. but no! I don’t hate you!”
“I was irritating.. That’s nice to know.” Risa mused quietly.
“I know you’re a nice person! So, can we at least try? At least you’ll have someone to watch your back.” Ai pleaded. She was sincere about trying to befriend Risa. There was something about the girl that called out for companionship, and it was this familiar calling that made her feel the need to comply.
“You’re going to regret this. I know you will.” It was Risa's way of accepting this friendship. She felt herself fall back slightly when Ai lunged at her with a friendly hug.
“Can I know your last name?” Her arms were wrapped loosely around her new friend, eyes focused on the ground.
“No.” came the other girl’s reply, but Ai just chuckled for she already expected that answer.
For a long time in many years, Niigaki Risa smiled from the bottom of her heart.
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In the main hall of a familiar mansion, a meeting was taking place.
“We couldn’t find the girl, young master.”
“You incompetent idiots!”
“We’re terribly sorry.”
“Get out! Get out!”
”But-“
“Don’t you dare come back until you’ve found her unless you have a death wish!”
“Y-yes Sir.”
A group of men in suits hurried out of the main hall, leaving the ‘young master’ alone in his seat.
“She won’t get away for killing my father.”
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Oh noes, the world is out to get Risa @___@
Ai has made Risa's problem her own as well.. :o
They are doomed.
And I screwed up this chapter.
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Risa sat in a booth with a cup of water while Ai spent her time busy serving customers without a break.
“I’m glad I never took a job..” Risa remarked and took a sip from her straw. The day seemed to be passing by rather poorly for her however. There’s no argument between them that she came to enjoy, there’s no teasing of the older girl, there’s nothing at all.
Awwwwwwww...already Risa misses having Aichan's attention. :wriggly:
.“I’m hungry.”
Ai’s eyebrow twitched slightly. “What would you like?”
“Something cheap.” She replied after looking through her wallet.
Looking down at the girl for a few seconds, Ai spun on her heels and headed for the kitchen. When she returned, she placed a plate of spaghettis in front of Risa.
“Hey! This is not cheap!” She stared at the inviting meal.
“On the house.”
“Huh?” When Risa looked up, Ai had already left to serve another customer. What was that about?
Awwwwwwwwww...Aichan buying Risa spaghetti! :wriggly:
5pm came relatively quick. One had finished her shift and the other was done clearing her plate. The two left the café shortly, with Risa tagging along again. Ai decided to take a shortcut through the park.
Through the park? Uh-oh. :O
“So why are you still following me?” She stopped under a tree and turned to the younger girl.
“I can’t follow you?” Came a reply, avoiding the main question.
“No.. But don’t you have other things to do? Like.. Go home?”
“I.. I have no home.” Risa answered, looking away from the older girl.
“What do you mean ‘no home’? You ran away or something?” Ai pressed further.
“No. I mean, I’m an orphan. Nobody wants me, I have no home to go back to, I sleep on the streets. Get the point?”
:cry: :k-sad:
“Can you keep a secret?” Ai nodded again, this time with a determined frown on her face.
“I hope so. Just so you know beforehand, I’m a thief.” That confession made Ai gasp loudly.
“You’re a WHAT?!” She suddenly yelled.
Knowing that it was a bad idea to have revealed her identity, Risa freaked at the outburst and hurried to clamp her hands over Ai’s mouth. “Shhh!!! You’re going to get me arrested like that!”
Strange, and Risa's supposed to be the "freak-out" queen of H!P. :lol:
Meanwhile, only a few feet away from the two girls, said ‘bastard’ had been quietly listening in on them from behind a tree. He had been following them ever since they left the café.
“Shit, this isn’t good! Someone else knows.”
The man grumbled, lowering the weapon he held in his hands. He knew he was unable to strike at the point of time. Clenching his fist, he retreated from the park for a change of plans.
Shit, now he's going to want to get Aichan too. The death of some orphan thief probably wouldn't draw much suspicion, but 2 girls at the same time? Not good if you're trying to be discreet.
“That means you could be in danger right now!” Ai concluded, becoming more aware of her surroundings.
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You hardly know me, remember? Don’t get yourself involved.”
Ai shot up after hearing what the other had said. Apparently, she’s not really that clueless about everything, “Actually, I’ve been involved the moment I picked you up from the dumps. And… you’re my friend now. Right? I can't abandon a friend in trouble.”
“Friend?” Risa had many feelings and thoughts going through her right now. She was shocked, confused, touched even. Someone wanted to befriend a petty thief, that’s a first.
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! :wub:
“She won’t get away for killing my father.”
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...so the person that was killed was the head of a family and/or gang. No wonder the other guy framed Risa for it. If they knew that HE was the one who did it, it'd be an all out gang war.
And I screwed up this chapter.
Seemed ok to me. :)
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I like how you're writting TakaGaki moments, it's cute yet not too rushed. And yeah, the chapter was fine, I don't normally read sci-fi fics and I'm reading this so I think you're doing a pretty good job ;)
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First of all..... THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!!!!! For writing a TakaGaki :heart: story. I've been wanting to read a fic starring them for ages. Can you tell they are one of my top 2 pairings yet? :wub:
So far, I'm loving all the action, suspense and occasional sappy moments. Bring them on I say :lol:
“I know you’re a nice person! So, can we at least try? At least you’ll have someone to watch your back.” Ai pleaded. She was sincere about trying to befriend Risa. There was something about the girl that called out for companionship, and it was this familiar calling that made her feel the need to comply.
I'm wondering if the familiar feeling is due to the girls knowing each other from before, or am I reading too much into things again XD Anyhoo, keep up the good work. This is one story that I check for updates everyday :)
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^Your comment makes me happy ^___^
Or maybe it's a feeling Aichan herself had once o.o or something
I typed this at work :lol: -gets shot by my boss-
It's short.. :o
Chapter 6
It’s been a week since Takahashi Ai made a new friend, and the bond they had grew tight quickly. Life went by peacefully for them, but there were always some exceptions. For example, the consequences of daydreaming in the bath.
2 days ago.
”Ai-chan?” Risa called out from behind the bathroom door, but there weren’t any response. Assuming that her friend had not heard her, Risa knocked again.
“Ai-chan? It’s over an hour, you’re going wrinkle up!” She scolded, hoping the older girl would at least say something. Still, there’s no response.
Risa started to worry and she was not about to wait and find out that her friend might have drowned in the bath. Taking in a deep breath, she held a tight grip at the doorknob.
“I’m coming in!” She was ready for anything, but her heart said otherwise. Risa’s hand fell from the knob and she stared dumbfounded at the image before her once the mist cleared. Whether her heart was pounding a few thousand beats per minute due to shock or something else, it was hard to tell.
There her friend was, lying in the tub with half her face in the water and breathing out bubbles on the surface. Not to mention, very.. very exposed underneath. Ai was flushed from her neck up, any longer in the bath and she would’ve been cooked.
“Ohmygod.. didn’t anyone ever tell her never to soak in the bath for too long?!”
What would anyone do in such a situation? Hurry and get the poor girl out of the tub of course! But Risa wasn’t just anyone.
She started panicking, throwing her hands up in the air trying to think of something since the obvious solution refused to register in her head. She was close to ripping her hair out when common sense finally hit her. She hurried towards the edge of the tub and pulled the plug. The bathwater slowly drained away, revealing the rest of the unconscious girl.
“HOLY-.. She’s naked!” She screamed, blushing madly and instantly turning around to face the wall.
Apparently, she’d forgotten about the fact that a person had to be nude when they soak in the tub. Once again, the thief was in a dilemma. She really did not want to touch or see her friend’s naked body (A/N: or does she? xD) since she felt like she was taking advantage of her.
“Maybe if I slapped her, she’d wake up and get out herself!” Risa considered, and was convinced that her plan might actually work and she could avoid body contact with Ai. Still with her head turned, Risa started patting Ai on the cheeks, hoping that she’d wake up. Obviously that did not work. Risa was afraid of hurting her friend therefore, her pats could hardly kill a fly let alone wake someone.
There was no choice but to carry her out after all.
“I’m trying to save her, so there’s nothing wrong this... Right?” She kept telling herself that while searching for a towel to cover Ai’s body. She finally found one and tossed it over the unconscious girl.
“Besides, it’s not like I don’t have what she has..” Risa’s eye twitched a little when she lifted Ai out of the tub. She came face to face with something she doesn’t even want to mention and turned away again. “Okay.. maybe she has a little more of what I have…”
Risa forced her blush to go away and concentrated hard on getting them back into the main room. The rest of the day was spent waiting for Ai to wake up so she could tell Risa where the hell she kept the clothes.
Unfortunately for Ai, she’s not always so lucky to have someone rescue her whenever she passes out.
Ai had been out buying dinner for the night and managed to grab the last two bentos left in the Family Mart. Although not satisfied with her purchase, she had to make do. Risa on the other hand, was definitely going to make a fuss about her meal.
It was nearly 7 in the evening when she left the store, and the crowd on the streets was beginning to disperse slowly. Soon enough, the path home that Ai took daily became deserted. Uncomfortably deserted.
Unlike the usual nights that she would take this path, tonight felt a little unusual. She had the feeling that someone had been watching her ever since she left the main street, and her intuition was right.
Just as she turned a corner and only a few steps left to the apartment building, a man in a trench coat and baseball cap jumped her from behind and covered her face with a piece of cloth. There was a strange smell to it that Ai couldn’t figure out but before she couldn’t think further, everything blanked out.
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Back in the apartment room, Risa had been silently watching the neighborhood from the balcony. She thought of food, how much she liked her eyebrows, more food, and a certain some--
“Huh?”
Her thoughts were cut short when she heard some shuffling going on from downstairs. She bent over the balcony railings and could see a man dragging something away from the apartments. At first Risa thought that it was just thrash that the man was handling, but her perfect eyesight proved otherwise.
“Ai!”
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First to comment! See, I said I check for updates everyday :)
TakaGaki in the bath was so adorable :wub: Aw....don't be so shy Risa. It will only be a matter of time before you get to "see" more XD
And I like your eyebrows too :heart:
Oh no! The baddie man caught Ai :cry: Quick, save her Risa!!
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Risa "rescuing" Aichan from the tub = :wriggly:
But :OMG: the guy has grabbed Aichan!!!
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:mon scare:
Chapter 7
“Damnit!!”
Risa scolded the air as she sped out the front door and hurried down the stairs. She was almost a second too late when she arrived at the entrance, but was lucky enough to catch the shadow of the man turning a corner. Risa started giving chase. The man shifted to carrying Ai over his shoulders and broke into a run as well.
The pursuit did not last long when the man ran straight into an abandoned warehouse by the river. Risa caught up soon after and rushed in without a second thought. The warehouse was small and crowded with construction materials. It was dark too, with the exception of a dimmed ceiling lamp. Strangely, there was no one in sight when Risa stepped in.
*BAM*
Risa spun around immediately at the loud noise only to find that the warehouse’s door had been slammed shut. Standing in front of the only escape was the same large man who had captured Ai. He was tapping a revolver against his palm and smirking.
“I’ve finally got you.” He spoke up in a sinister voice.
“Who are you?! And where’s Ai-chan?!” Risa demanded. Her only priority now was to get Ai safely away from this place.
“Me? I’m just like you. A criminal. No need to worry for your friend though, she’ll be joining you soon enough.” The man grinned wider and cocked the gun’s hammer. He then pointed it straight at Risa, whose expression changed from anger to fear at the sight of the gun.
“Wha-? What are you doing?!” She backed up a few. Her lips went dry as she faces the man and her legs were on the verge of collapsing.
“Isn’t it obvious?” The man replied calmly and the first shot went off.
Risa fell back into a pile of cement bags from shock and was surprised to find herself unharmed. Apparently the man had aimed at the roof instead.
“Scared, eh? And that was only a test shot. Shame, I thought you would be braver. ” He lowered his arm and faced the gun barrel at Risa.
“Doesn’t matter anyway. It’ll be over soon.”
She had to think quickly, or both she and Ai would die and Risa wasn’t about to let someone she cares for get hurt. Not even once. Reaching for the bricks just beside where she fell, she picked one up and tossed it at the man with all her strength. Unfortunately she only managed to hit his stomach, but that was enough to catch him by surprise. The man bent over and screamed in pain.
With the man distracted, Risa took this chance and charged at him, knocking him down to the floor and causing him to drop the gun as well as his disguised. She stood over him, realization dawning over her when she saw the man’s face. It was badly burnt and at least ¾ of his face was no longer skin. It reminded her of…
“You!”
The man groaned from the impact, but managed to let out a smile. “So, you do remember me?”
“What have I ever done to you?!” Risa yelled, anger rising in her as she remembers the man from that faithful night in the mansion.
“Nothing, of course. But I can’t risk letting anyone who knows about that night to live.” The man swiped Risa by her ankles with his leg and got up quickly to fetch his revolver.
Unfazed by the attack, Risa leaped forward and wrapped her arms around the man’s leg. His movement was hindered. Growling at the girl by his feet, he raised his free leg in attempt to kick Risa away but she caught on and grabbed the other ankle with her free hand. The man lost his balance and fell forward, hitting face first on the ground.
<i>I have to get to that gun first!</i>
Seeing the man lying motionless on the floor, Risa jumped to her feet and ran towards the gun but she least expected him to be up again so quickly. He grabbed her wrist and stopped her in her tracks. Risa turned around to face him and was pulled up by the collar.
“Hah! You’re just a weakling. You may have escaped that night, but not this time.” He laughed loudly and held Risa by her throat, tightening his grip with every kick she tried to lay on the man.
On the other side of the room hidden by shadows, Ai laid unconscious against the wall. The chemical she inhaled earlier was weak and only managed to keep her in a coma for so long before the yelling and gunshots disturbed her enough to wake her up. Her eyes were reluctant to open at first, but the moment she caught sight of Risa struggling in mid-air, her eyes shot open.
<i>RISA!</i>
Her senses were tripled and she looked around the room anxiously for anything offensive. The first object she noticed was the same brick Risa used and after some difficulty, she managed to stand up. Picking the heavy brick up, she ran towards the man and attacked him directly at his head. He screamed and dropped Risa, stumbling back against a shelf that held various tools.
“Risa! Risa!” Ai cried, letting go of the brick and rushing to her friend’s aid. Risa could only cough and gasp for air, however Ai was glad that her friend was at least still alive.
“Bitch..” The collision to his head was hardly effective at knocking him out. The man ignored the pain and picked up a wrench that had fallen on the ground when he knocked against the shelf and advanced towards the pair. It was too late when both girls were aware of the danger approaching them. The man had already dealt a heavy blow to the side of Ai’s head, sending her to the ground with a pool of blood gathering.
Risa nearly went berserk at what had just taken place within seconds. Gritting her teeth and trying to hold back her tears, she remembered the revolver that had fallen earlier and turned back to search for it. The instant she found it, Risa turned around and shot at the man without hesitating. The bullet lodged itself directly in his shoulder and sent him into a fit. Risa did not hold back on her second attempt but the gun refused to go off. She had forgotten to cock the gun again! Taking his opportunity while Risa stops to ready the next shot, the man fled the warehouse leaving a trail of blood behind.
“Stupid!” Risa growled and tossed the gun aside. She did not care if the man had escape, her friend was more important. She ran towards Ai, the worry on her face gradually became tears.
“Ai-chan!” Risa cried, praying for her friend to at least open her eyes. It was useless.
“It-.. It’ll be all right! You’ll be fine! So hang in there Ai-chan, please!” She assured the unconscious girl, hoping that she could hear her. Risa lifted Ai up and carried her bridal style out of the warehouse, running as best as she could to find the nearest clinic or hospital.
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Two chapters in a day?! :banghead:
thisisbad ;_;
Chapter 8
It took several hours of surgery for Ai to finally be out of danger. Luckily the blow did not warrant death, but Risa couldn’t help but remain worried.
<i>The doctor stepped out into the hallway once the operation was complete, yet his expression was grim. Risa bolted towards the doctor from where she sat, pulling at his coat.
“How’s Aichan?! Is she going to be alright?!” She all but shouted, alarming the doctor a little.
“Your friend is out of danger for now, but I can’t say when she would wake up nor what would happen after. There are chances of blindness considering how she received a such a fatal blow next to her eyes…”
“I..I see..” Risa was too upset to say anything else. “Can I.. go in and see her?”
“Of course. Just don’t agitate her condition.” The doctor warned and walked off, leaving Risa to gather her thoughts in the hallway.</i>
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She was now seated by Ai’s bed, holding on to her cold hands. Around them were IV tubes, wires and a heart-rate monitor that had been beeping steadily since Ai came out of the operation room.
“Hey…” Risa greeted, despite knowing that the older girl was incapable of replying. She felt her hidden feelings surface at the sight of her friend. Feelings that have developed surprisingly fast, but are nonetheless there although she had refused to recognize it up till now. Perhaps because this may be her last chance? She hoped not. If it was fate that had set up this meeting between them, it will be too cruel to ruin it so soon.
<i>Aichan...</i>
“I’ve told you, haven’t I? You’d regret befriending me, but you insisted on it..” She looked at her friend who had her face blocked by an oxygen mask and her head wrapped in bandages.
<i>It’s all my fault that you’re in this mess…</i>
“And look at what happens? How can you ‘watch my back’ when you’re in this state? Some friend you are..” Risa tried to joke, but she ended up with tears threatening to fall from her eyes.
<i>I shouldn’t have dragged you into this…</i>
“Yeah.. some friend. You made me feel something I haven’t felt in a long time, and before I could even confirm if it was real, you pull this stunt on me?” She frowned, forcing out a bitter laugh.
<i>You made me feel wanted for once, do you know that? </i>
“You can’t just leave me hanging with doubts... not now…” Risa muttered, mock anger in her voice.
<i>I… You… I don’t want to lose you… </i>
“So I’m begging you, please wake up soon.” Risa pleaded, lowering her head so that her forehead touched Ai’s hand. No sooner, her tears began to fall freely.
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Risa had fallen asleep by the hospital bed without knowing it until she felt a tap on her shoulder. She swatted the hand away, not wanting to wake up from a dream where Ai was perfectly unharmed and they were back on regular doses of petty arguments.
She felt the tapping again. Irritated, she turned around violently and stared at whoever it was that had been disturbing her. Her fierce glare weakened at the sight of two men in black suits, both looking intimidating.
“Who-“
“Niigaki-san?”
“How did you-”
“We need you to come with us.”
“Why?“
“You’ll know soon enough.”
“But Aichan! I have to-“
“Your friend will be fine if you cooperate with us. Or else…”
Risa looked at the two men suspiciously. She did not need to deal with any more problems than she already had been burdened with right now. For the sake of Ai, she gave in to the men’s request.
“Alright. But if she loses even a strand of hair, you’re going to be in for a lot of pain.”
“…” The men exchanged glares then led Risa out of the hospital and into a black Mercedes saloon parked behind the building.
She was pushed into the back seats and came face to face with a man in a suit, likely to be only 5 years older than she was. He appeared very stern and had an air of professionalism to him.
“So, you’re the one who stabbed my father?” The man was oddly calm.
“Who?” Risa replied, confused by the man’s questioning.
“That night, at the mansion. A murder.”
“So it was your father he killed…” Risa was enlightened by the new discovery.
“He?”
“The real murderer!”
“Oh?”
“Yeah, he tried to kill me last night!”
“That, I do not care.”
“But-“
“You will tell me who this ‘real murderer’ is!” He snapped suddenly, sending Risa jumping from her seat.
“I.. I don’t know who he is.”
“Then I can’t believe you and you will have to pay for your deed.”
“What? Wait! I know how he looks like! His face was badly burnt and he’s tall! Incredibly tall! But that’s all…”
The man was deep in thought, unsure of who the description matched.
“M-master Yoshio!” A man from the front passenger seat spoke up.
“What!?”
“That sounds like Marukuma.”
“Marukuma?” Risa can't help but repeat the name, feeling curious.
“That man couldn’t pay his debts, his wife committed suicide and about his face.. never knew how that happened. Was probably out for revenge when he killed the old master.” The man up front had a vague explanation, but that was enough.
“Ah, him. He had it coming for not paying his debts. So, he was the murderer?” Yoshio looked back at Risa.
”Y-yes!” She exclaimed, feeling slightly relieved for some reason.
“Then we’ll be after him.”
“Does that mean I can go?” Risa looked at him hopefully.
“No.”
“What?!”
Yoshio had a sly smile on his face, then he looked at Risa for the last time before the car drove off.
“We need you as bait.”
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Chapter 7
She was almost a second too late when she arrived at the entrance, but was lucky enough to catch the shadow of the man turning a corner. Risa started giving chase. The man shifted to carrying Ai over his shoulders and broke into a run as well.
The pursuit did not last long when the man ran straight into an abandoned warehouse by the river.
Abandoned warehouse? Not good.
“I’ve finally got you.” He spoke up in a sinister voice.
...
The man grinned wider and cocked the gun’s hammer. He then pointed it straight at Risa, whose expression changed from anger to fear at the sight of the gun.
...
the first shot went off.
Risa fell back into a pile of cement bags from shock and was surprised to find herself unharmed. Apparently the man had aimed at the roof instead.
The roof? What kind of games is this guy playing? :?
“Scared, eh? And that was only a test shot. Shame, I thought you would be braver. ” He lowered his arm and faced the gun barrel at Risa.
Yeah, let's see how brave you are when you've got a gun pointed at your face. :mon annoy:
She had to think quickly, or both she and Ai would die and Risa wasn’t about to let someone she cares for get hurt. Not even once.
Awwwwwwwwwww... Risa cares about Aichan! :wub:
Reaching for the bricks just beside where she fell, she picked one up and tossed it at the man with all her strength.
...
With the man distracted, Risa took this chance and charged at him, knocking him down to the floor and causing him to drop the gun as well as his disguised. She stood over him, realization dawning over her when she saw the man’s face. It was badly burnt and at least ¾ of his face was no longer skin. It reminded her of…
“You!”
Wait a sec, so she recognizes him? That would mean that there must have been sufficient light in that mansion's hallway for Risa to be able to see him. It would also mean that the guy went into that mansion without a disguise (dumb move, since if he was spotted they would have linked him back to his boss).
On the other side of the room hidden by shadows, Ai laid unconscious against the wall. The chemical she inhaled earlier was weak and only managed to keep her in a coma for so long before the yelling and gunshots disturbed her enough to wake her up.
I'm guessing that it was morphine.
Picking the heavy brick up, she ran towards the man and attacked him directly at his head. He screamed and dropped Risa, stumbling back against a shelf that held various tools.
“Risa! Risa!” Ai cried, letting go of the brick and rushing to her friend’s aid. Risa could only cough and gasp for air, however Ai was glad that her friend was at least still alive.
“Bitch..” The collision to his head was hardly effective at knocking him out. The man ignored the pain and picked up a wrench that had fallen on the ground when he knocked against the shelf and advanced towards the pair. It was too late when both girls were aware of the danger approaching them. The man had already dealt a heavy blow to the side of Ai’s head, sending her to the ground with a pool of blood gathering.
NO! AICHAN! :mon scare:
Risa turned around and shot at the man without hesitating. The bullet lodged itself directly in his shoulder and sent him into a fit. Risa did not hold back on her second attempt but the gun refused to go off. She had forgotten to cock the gun again! Taking his opportunity while Risa stops to ready the next shot, the man fled the warehouse leaving a trail of blood behind.
Shit, assuming that his boss doesn't have him shot on the spot for not getting the girls, the guy might come back with help next time (seeing as how they injured him).
Chapter 8
“How’s Aichan?! Is she going to be alright?!” She all but shouted, alarming the doctor a little.
“Your friend is out of danger for now, but I can’t say when she would wake up nor what would happen after. There are chances of blindness considering how she received a such a fatal blow next to her eyes…”
Aichan...:cry:
Risa had fallen asleep by the hospital bed without knowing it until she felt a tap on her shoulder.
...
Irritated, she turned around violently and stared at whoever it was that had been disturbing her. Her fierce glare weakened at the sight of two men in black suits, both looking intimidating.
Shit, they found her. :o
“Niigaki-san?”
“How did you-”
“We need you to come with us.”
They know her name? These guys must either be cops/govt agents or they work for the family of the murder victim, since the guy that actually killed him doesn't have any reason to find out her name, seeing as how he's been tailing her and Aichan for the past few days.
“Your friend will be fine if you cooperate with us. Or else…”
Risa looked at the two men suspiciously. She did not need to deal with any more problems than she already had been burdened with right now. For the sake of Ai, she gave in to the men’s request.
“Alright. But if she loses even a strand of hair, you’re going to be in for a lot of pain.”
Ok, this shows that they probably work for the family of the murder victim. They're likely not working for the killer because they wouldn't have bothered to wake Risa up. They would have just killed both Risa and Aichan right there in the hospital room and then snuck out. If they were cops, then they would have mentioned having one of their men stand guard and watch over Aichan while they spoke with Risa.
The men exchanged glares then led Risa out of the hospital and into a black Mercedes saloon parked behind the building.
She was pushed into the back seats and came face to face with a man in a suit, likely to be only 5 years older than she was. He appeared very stern and had an air of professionalism to him.
“So, you’re the one who stabbed my father?” The man was oddly calm.
Bingo, it's the son of the victim. I wonder why he had them bring her to him? Is it that he wants to personally see (and then kill) the person who killed his father?
“So it was your father he killed…” Risa was enlightened by the new discovery.
“He?”
“The real murderer!”
“Oh?”
“Yeah, he tried to kill me last night!”
“That, I do not care.”
Right now all he cares about is payback for his father. If Risa's not the one, then she's no longer of any concern to him.
“You will tell me who this ‘real murderer’ is!” He snapped suddenly, sending Risa jumping from her seat.
“I.. I don’t know who he is.”
“Then I can’t believe you and you will have to pay for your deed.”
“What? Wait! I know how he looks like! His face was badly burnt and he’s tall! Incredibly tall! But that’s all…”
If these guys ARE part of a gang, then they've no doubt had dealings with other gangs in the city/country. If one of them is good with names/faces, then Risa's description should be helpful, considering the unique look that the man had.
“That sounds like Marukuma.”
“Marukuma?” Risa can't help but repeat the name, feeling curious.
“That man couldn’t pay his debts, his wife committed suicide and about his face.. never knew how that happened. Was probably out for revenge when he killed the old master.” The man up front had a vague explanation, but that was enough.
Chances are he got in some other trouble at some point, couldn't pay up, and his face is the result of that.
“Ah, him. He had it coming for not paying his debts. So, he was the murderer?” Yoshio looked back at Risa.
”Y-yes!” She exclaimed, feeling slightly relieved for some reason.
“Then we’ll be after him.”
“Does that mean I can go?” Risa looked at him hopefully.
“No.”
“What?!”
EHHHHHH? Why not? :stunned:
Yoshio had a sly smile on his face, then he looked at Risa for the last time before the car drove off.
“We need you as bait.”
Oh shit. :shock:
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Two chapters in a day?!
thisisbad ;_;
No this is good :D Yo made me a very happy person today :P
Ai-chan might go blind??? :cry: :cry: :cry: This is so sad.... but that means Risa gets to 'help' her with everything. And you know when that happens, skin contact and maybe more is inevitable XD
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^ you just helped me come up with an idea for the last chapter :o
hehehe :glasses:
nothing pervy, mind you. I'd die if I write pervy things.. :|
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^ you just helped me come up with an idea for the last chapter :o
hehehe :glasses:
nothing pervy, mind you. I'd die if I write pervy things.. :|
Damn. :banghead:
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I almost forgot.
Chapter 9
Niigaki Risa was left stranded up in the mountains, one of the many tourist spots in Japan. It would’ve been logical being up here on a romantic date or for some sightseeing, but just standing around in the cold just as the sun was setting? Life was out to get her. Risa shuddered against the breeze, and moved to sit herself on a bench by the bus stop facing the entrance. Seconds ticked by slowly as she stared at her wristwatch, wanting to get this whole mess over with.
Only an hour ago, the men that brought her here had briefed her on what she had to do as bait. She didn’t know how, but they managed to figure out that this Marukuma guy had recently been living discreetly in a cabin within the area and would more or less appear eventually, especially if he was injured. They stationed Risa right at the clearing that would be the first place seen by anyone attempting to climb the mountain. Yoshio’s men were instructed to hide somewhere, ready to ambush their target anytime. Being only lackeys, these men soon grew lazy and ended up playing poker behind a tree instead of keeping watch.
“Stupid… freaking… damn that Yoshio.”
Risa murmured incoherently to herself, looking around the place and a little on the edge. The men under this Yoshio were like some sort of covert group compared to the brutes she faced on day one. Were people in the triad getting smarter now? Does she even want to know? Risa shook her head and stayed still on the bench, her body tensing up from the cold. Her thighs were kept closed tightly and she blew into her palms repeatedly to keep warm. What thin clothes she had on were of no help in keeping out the chill. She made a mental note to go shopping next time.
Nightfall had arrived and the skies were covered in stars. Yet, the wonderful sight couldn’t calm her nerves. Risa was afraid of Marukuma, knowing that she already had it difficult in fighting him off the first time. If she had to get physical again tonight, she had better start praying. An unknown amount of time had gone by during Risa’s reverie, but a set of footsteps shuffling about on cobblestones snapped her out of it. Her body jolted from surprise, anticipating the arrival of whoever it was. <i>For the sake of Aichan</i> kept running through Risa’s mind, psyching herself to be fearless just for tonight.
If she remembered correctly, Yoshio’s men would jump out the moment they recognize their target. A large familiar figure soon appeared from the slope, revealing himself to indeed be the man that is currently sending Risa the chills. He looked awful, ragged and pale under the light from the lampposts. The man was clutching onto his bandaged shoulders, breathing heavily until he noticed a feminine figure sitting on the bench. Curiosity led him to lift his head, only to send a rush of adrenaline and rage into his being.
“You!”
Risa stiffened and backed up against the bench. Marukuma started advancing towards her, his face distorted in anger with a penetrating stare from his bloodshot eyes. Pain forgotten, he stretched out his arms in preparation to grab the young thief. Risa started panicking, annoyed that all that chanting she did in her head earlier were for naught. She griped onto the edge of the bench, unsure of what to do under the stress. The man she hates and fears was taking wide steps of doom towards her, increasing the pressure even more.
“Heh, yeah… me. Again. You really are obsessed with revenge, aren’t you.”
Risa spoke, her nervousness making her say things she is starting to regret now. Her breathing quicken as she forced herself to calm down on the inside. Suddenly relaxing her grip, Risa jumped up and blindly bolted to her right just as the man lunged towards the bench, crashing into it in the process.
He quickly recovered from the fall and started giving chase. Finding herself closing into a dead end, Risa slapped herself on the forehead. She backed up against the railings surrounding the cliff and could only helplessly watch herself get cornered by her soon-to-be killer. There really was nothing she could say now to save herself. Marukuma finally got to Risa, smiling a sinister smile the moment he caught her by the arms and lifted her from the ground. The surprise lift sent her shrieking, the scream echoing throughout the mountain peak.
“Got you now. Your friend’s next once I throw you down.”
He tilted Risa’s body over the railing. Never quite believing that one’s life would flash by during dying moments, she changed her mind. She remembered Ai’s unconscious body still lying in the hospital, the possibility of her going blind, and the idea that she would have no one to take care of her if that happened. No, Risa’s not about to die now.
“You asshole. Stop threatening me with Aichan already!”
She pulled her knees up and kicked Marukuma in the chest, but too bad that it was a useless attempt. It felt no different from a poke to the large man. Risa cursed in her head. Where did all that strength from cycling go in the time of need?! She struggled ineffectively, trying to delay her fall into the tides below. Her body grew tired gradually. That was until he staggered back without warning, letting go of the girl in his clutches. Lucky for gravity, Risa fell towards the ground instead of backwards into the ocean. She sat on the ground with legs sprawled out and stared at the motionless body in front of her, surprised by his random act of mercy. He laid on the cold ground with eyes wide opened and his mouth agape. He was dead.
A group of men in suits came running towards them not long after. Risa recognized one of them as the guy in the passenger seat this afternoon. He grinned and patted his gun.
“Silencers. Got to love them. But thankfully you screamed, or it could've been too late.”
He explained and apologized for the delay and offered to help Risa up, but she declined and leaned back against the railing. The rest of the group was busy clearing the scene of the crime.
“Well, the young master offers his thanks. I hope your ordeal is over now.”
Risa smiled weakly, knowing that it’s only half solved. She didn’t bother questioning the man about his boss, which will forever remain a mystery to mere commoners like her. They were quick with their task and left soon. Risa released the breath she had been holding in for a long time, quite certain that there’ll be no more trouble with the triads and dangerous people from now onwards.
Looking up, she at last notices that star filled night sky. She made a second mental note to bring Ai up here sometime, knowing that she would definitely love the sight. However, Risa’s thoughts ended on a less than relieved note.
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However, Risa’s thoughts ended on a less than relieved note.
@@, what does that mean?? Cliffhanger??? AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! No I mean EHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! Gotta use Gaki-san's famous words XD
I like this chapter for all the Risa action, she's one tough cookie :)
But still, I also want more TakaGaki :heart: scenes. Yes, I'm a hard reader to please :P
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It means...
NEXT AND LAST CHAPTER UP IN 2HOURS. or less :O
>___< I wanna finish this soon.
edit: God.. horrible ending, lol. But I finally ended my very first fic, so there! >_>
I might do a better story with more interactions someday to make up for the lack of it here. I dunno...
Chapter 10
Morning came when Risa woke up, finding herself still at the peak. She stood up lazily and dusted herself off. Her next destination was returning back to the hospital. It didn’t matter to her that she’s covered in dirt, or that she haven’t changed in a few days.
Back in the white, completely sanitized building, Risa headed for her friend’s ward with a heavy heart. Seems like no one taught her to be optimistic recently. She opened the door to find the room surprisingly empty. Panicking again, she grabbed the nearest nurse outside the room and grilled the poor woman for her friend’s whereabouts. Her mood changing drastically from violent to embarrassed after the nurse told her what she wanted to hear, Risa released her hold and apologized repeatedly before running out of the building and towards the hospital park.
There, she saw Ai sitting on a steel bench with a wheelchair beside her. She seems to be looking at something, but at the same time, there’s some sort of void in her eyes. She didn’t even flinch when a kid nearby accidentally kicked his soccer ball at her direction, missing her head by an inch. Risa swallowed hard as she witnessed all or most of the symptoms of being blind. She hesitated a little, but still managed to gather the courage enough to start walking towards her friend. She quietly sat down beside Ai, her more depressed than someone who appears to have just lost her sight.
She didn’t know what to say, or what to do to comfort her friend. Before she knew it, Risa lowered her head and sniffed quietly. The stress from the past two days started to kick in, breaking her into pieces. She seems to be doing a good job in reacting to the bad news on Ai’s behalf as well because Ai seems to be perfectly fine sitting there, lost in her own thoughts while Risa cried her eyes out silently, thinking that she could get away with being weak in front of her friend.
Unbeknownst to Risa, Ai blinked and turned her head to both sides until she noticed the crouching figure beside her. Not sure why her friend was sobbing to herself, Ai just went ahead and wrapped her arms around Risa, resting her head above the younger’s own. Jerking at the sudden but comforting embrace, Risa sat up, pushing her friend out of the way softly. She then came face to face with Ai, seeing her own reflection in the older girl’s eyes.
“A-Ai… chan?”
She choked on the name, unsure of what to make of the situation.
“Yes? Why were you crying?”
Ai had a gentle smile as she looked at Risa, wiping away the wet trails under her eyes with her thumb. She was looking at her, she’s… she’s not blind? Risa stared at her friend with a dumbfounded expression, her mouth opening and closing but not a word came through. The reaction switch in her flipped upwards.
“But…but… doctor said… you… blind… the ball! Ehhhhhh?!?!?!?!?”
Risa exclaimed, her arms flailing everywhere, pointing at her friend, then at the hospital, and then at a random doctor. She almost poked Ai’s eye out too. Having not much of a clue as to what her friend was going on about, Ai pulled the thief into another hug and patted her head to calm her down. She giggled and pulled away when she felt Risa taking a deep breath, having her sanity back in her possession again.
“You thought I went blind?”
Risa nodded timidly, and looked up at Ai, puzzled.
“Aren’t you?”
“Nope. The doctor said I was lucky to have woken up from such a bad injury so quickly. Even luckier to have avoided becoming blind.”
Risa’s lips quivered from joy. As if being caught crying wasn’t bad enough, she held back on crying for joy and wanting to lunge at Ai and squeeze the life out of her with a bear hug. Maybe another day… in private and when she’s better.
“I’m... glad you’re alright, Aichan.”
“Yes well, I wanted to see you so I told myself to wake up immediately.”
She grinned and Risa turned away to blush, fiddling with the hem of her shirt.
“By the way, where have you been? You smell and look horrible.”
She turned Risa around, wiping off a patch of mud on her cheek and pulled at her dusty shirt, giving her a look of disapproval.
”Just settling some scores.”
Ai looked at her suspiciously, like a mother. The worry started to set in when Risa avoided her gaze.
“Was it dangerous? Is it that guy again? Are you hurt? What did you do?!”
“Not today Aichan, I’m beat.”
“…Fine. I’ll make sure you tell me later.”
They shared a comfortable moment of silence. Risa was still dizzy with joy and the touching things her friend said, and Ai… she’s thinking about something rather seriously. Ai interrupted the silence when she got up on her feet. A little dizzy at first from her head injury, but she steadied herself and pulled Risa up after her. She started leading the younger girl back towards the hospital, ignoring the wheelchair that she didn’t need to begin with.
“I have decided. You need a shower now.”
“Huh? What? But-”
“No buts. You stink.” Ai stuck out her tongue in disgust.
“But not here! We’re still in the hospital. I have no extra clothes!”
Stopping to consider Risa’s protest, Ai shrugged.
“Don’t worry, I’m sure the nurses would let you use the ward’s bathroom. They’re nice.”
“Aichan! You’re not getting the point. Aichan?! Oi! Are you listening?!”
<i>And they lived happily ever after, the end. XD *kicks the ending*</i>
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Oh, congratulations on finishing something! Even if the ending was sort of abrupt. XD
Well, since I can, I'll add on a mini epilogue for you. XD
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"AHHH HOT HOT HOT HOT!!!"
"Quit moving around!"
"You got soap in my eyes!"
"Be quiet and stay still already!"
"But you're scalding me! And my clothes, where are my clothes?!"
"You're not wearing something that dirty again."
"But I don't have any clothes with me now! What will I do, go naked?!"
"...why not?"
"Ai-chan, are you sure you just woke up from a concussion? You're not acting like it!"
"Too bad."
"AHHHH STOP!!!"
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Fill in the blanks yourself. XD I didn't feel like writing a full length thing so I just did the dialogue. XD Takagaki yay! <333
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XD Thanks, I loved the mini epilogue.
Actually, I had something similar in mind but wasn't up to writing it down :x
Well, leave it to the reader's imagination about what happens after :3
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Well....this is a new pairing for me, but I enjoy it all the same. :D I was worried at a moment there when Gaki thought Ai was blind, buuuut of course, she was just overreacting and panicky! Anyhow, love the mini epilogue as well. Great fic!
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Tell me why I didn't notice this story earlier. /facepalm.
Congrats on finishing it! :D
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Chapter 9
Niigaki Risa was left stranded up in the mountains, one of the many tourist spots in Japan.
...
Only an hour ago, the men that brought her here had briefed her on what she had to do as bait. She didn’t know how, but they managed to figure out that this Marukuma guy had recently been living discreetly in a cabin within the area and would more or less appear eventually, especially if he was injured.
But wouldn't Marukuma become suspicious as to why Risa's up there in the first place? After all, as far as he knows Risa should either be dead, in jail or on the run. It doesn't make sense that she'd somehow be able to find out who he was and make her way up here on her own.
Yoshio’s men were instructed to hide somewhere, ready to ambush their target anytime. Being only lackeys, these men soon grew lazy and ended up playing poker behind a tree instead of keeping watch.
*sigh*
You just can't get good help these days. :err:
A large familiar figure soon appeared from the slope, revealing himself to indeed be the man that is currently sending Risa the chills. He looked awful, ragged and pale under the light from the lampposts. The man was clutching onto his bandaged shoulders, breathing heavily until he noticed a feminine figure sitting on the bench. Curiosity led him to lift his head, only to send a rush of adrenaline and rage into his being.
“You!”
Well, there he is, and he's taken the bait.
He quickly recovered from the fall and started giving chase. Finding herself closing into a dead end, Risa slapped herself on the forehead. She backed up against the railings surrounding the cliff and could only helplessly watch herself get cornered by her soon-to-be killer.
A cliff? Well, that was smart.
[/sarcasm]
he staggered back without warning, letting go of the girl in his clutches. Lucky for gravity, Risa fell towards the ground instead of backwards into the ocean. She sat on the ground with legs sprawled out and stared at the motionless body in front of her, surprised by his random act of mercy. He laid on the cold ground with eyes wide opened and his mouth agape. He was dead.
Eh? He have a heart attack or something?
A group of men in suits came running towards them not long after. Risa recognized one of them as the guy in the passenger seat this afternoon. He grinned and patted his gun.
“Silencers. Got to love them.
In this case, I'd be inclined to agree. :sweat:
thankfully you screamed, or it could've been too late.”
Now if they had been doing their job, they would have been able to take him out much sooner. If she hadn't screamed, those guys would still probably be up in that tree playing poker right now.
“Well, the young master offers his thanks. I hope your ordeal is over now.”
So like, that's it? Risa no longer has to worry about being a yakuza target?
But...what about Aichan?
Chapter 10
Morning came when Risa woke up, finding herself still at the peak. She stood up lazily and dusted herself off. Her next destination was returning back to the hospital. It didn’t matter to her that she’s covered in dirt, or that she haven’t changed in a few days.
A few days? :O Risa should at least take a shower. I'm sure Aichan wouldn't mind it since the alternative would be waking up to see someone with horrible B.O. :bleed eyes:
Back in the white, completely sanitized building, Risa headed for her friend’s ward with a heavy heart. Seems like no one taught her to be optimistic recently. She opened the door to find the room surprisingly empty.
EHHHHHHHHHH??? :o Where's Aichan???
she saw Ai sitting on a steel bench with a wheelchair beside her. She seems to be looking at something, but at the same time, there’s some sort of void in her eyes. She didn’t even flinch when a kid nearby accidentally kicked his soccer ball at her direction, missing her head by an inch. Risa swallowed hard as she witnessed all or most of the symptoms of being blind. She hesitated a little, but still managed to gather the courage enough to start walking towards her friend. She quietly sat down beside Ai, her more depressed than someone who appears to have just lost her sight.
Nooooooooooooooooooooooooo...say it ain't so. :pleeease:
“A-Ai… chan?”
She choked on the name, unsure of what to make of the situation.
“Yes? Why were you crying?”
Ai had a gentle smile as she looked at Risa, wiping away the wet trails under her eyes with her thumb. She was looking at her, she’s… she’s not blind?
She's not blind? :cry:
SHE'S NOT BLIND!!! AICHAN CAN SEE!!! :mon lovelaff: :wriggly:
Risa’s lips quivered from joy. As if being caught crying wasn’t bad enough, she held back on crying for joy and wanting to lunge at Ai and squeeze the life out of her with a bear hug. Maybe another day… in private and when she’s better.
“I’m... glad you’re alright, Aichan.”
“Yes well, I wanted to see you so I told myself to wake up immediately.”
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!! :luvluv2:
“By the way, where have you been? You smell and look horrible.”
:wahaha:
They shared a comfortable moment of silence. Risa was still dizzy with joy and the touching things her friend said, and Ai… she’s thinking about something rather seriously. Ai interrupted the silence when she got up on her feet. A little dizzy at first from her head injury, but she steadied herself and pulled Risa up after her. She started leading the younger girl back towards the hospital, ignoring the wheelchair that she didn’t need to begin with.
Aichan wants some rabu-rabu? :twisted:
“I have decided. You need a shower now.”
“Huh? What? But-”
“No buts. You stink.” Ai stuck out her tongue in disgust.
BOOYAH! :hiakhiakhiak:
“But not here! We’re still in the hospital. I have no extra clothes!”
Stopping to consider Risa’s protest, Ai shrugged.
“Don’t worry, I’m sure the nurses would let you use the ward’s bathroom. They’re nice.”
“Aichan! You’re not getting the point. Aichan?! Oi! Are you listening?!”
Ah...gotta love TakaGaki. :heart:
And they lived happily ever after, the end. XD *kicks the ending*
Works for me. :thumbsup
Oh, congratulations on finishing something! Even if the ending was sort of abrupt. XD
Well, since I can, I'll add on a mini epilogue for you. XD
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"AHHH HOT HOT HOT HOT!!!"
"Quit moving around!"
"You got soap in my eyes!"
"Be quiet and stay still already!"
"But you're scalding me! And my clothes, where are my clothes?!"
"You're not wearing something that dirty again."
"But I don't have any clothes with me now! What will I do, go naked?!"
"...why not?"
"Ai-chan, are you sure you just woke up from a concussion? You're not acting like it!"
"Too bad."
"AHHHH STOP!!!"
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Fill in the blanks yourself. XD I didn't feel like writing a full length thing so I just did the dialogue. XD Takagaki yay! <333
EPILOGUE FTW!!! :on lol:
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Awwwwwwwww it's over :gyaaah: No more TakaGaki :cry:
But I like how you ended. I'm a sucker for happily-ever-after endings :wahaha:
TakaGaki should take that bath together. It's so rare for Ai to take the initiative, Risa should really enjoy it while it lasts XD
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Heh, it's finally over! I can start something new now :lol: