Kurosawa's Poems 12/26 Iikubo/DAWA

[kuro808]

Cute.
Does this mean you don't approve of Risa's new short haircut?

it depends, i figured she would try a different style from the shorter hair, I like it but I think it fits her now.

Overall, I like it but I am not a woman and have no experience on judging hair so anything past that question I will not answer

[kuro808]

Rika

Oh goddess

My goddess

How you are so beautiful today

It is your birthday

Please look at the breakfast I made for you

Don't you like it

Want to play maid cafe?

I'll try to cheer you up

Okay let's start

How are you?

You look fine

Maybe the light is too much

I'll close the curtains

You look cute without the light

Maybe a little light for your eyes

Okay

Moe

moe

moe

oh darn wrong way

let me write you out a message

O

tan

jou

bi

O

me

de

to

u

There you go

Otanjoubi Omedetou

Okay add a little magic to it

Moe

Moe

Moe

Poof

yay now you can eat

Want some orange juice, my dear?

Okay?  Sure I'll be right back

Wow she looks really sleepy

I hope she never had that bad dream again

That is so bad when she has bad dreams

Like the time with the chicken

She stayed away from it for a month

But she's over that now

I hope

Okay a full glass of Orange Juice

Walking

Walking

Turning

Watching

Ah she is still in bed,

And with ketchup on her cheek

Aww so cute

Let me wipe that off

Yossie is here for you

Okay, here's your juice

drink it slowly

I don't want you to choke

Because you have some appearances to go to

Well, I hope you do well

She is saying something

Thank you

No problem my dear

That is what is needed for Birthdays

Especially for a silver birth

Well I'll leave you for now

Get ready

Wait

What is it?

I want something sweet

You had jelly

Something sweeter

Hmm what is sweeter than jelly

She pushed me onto the bed

And straddled on top

This

Her lips touch upon mines

Her hands placed on my shoulder

Her eyes meeting mines

My heart beating faster

Finally she release her hold on me

Tonight, I want chocolates or maybe something much sweeter

Rika's mind is always so dirty that I need to clean it up

Like the mess she just caused now

Sigh

Just for love I let her take control of me

[Beecubed]

A poem (or just snippets of thoughts and moments, hahaaaa) about Rika, from Yossie's perspective????

 

  +  = 

This poem was awesome. Short, sweet and simple... and of course, plenty of IshiYoshi to be had 

Lots of fun, playfulness and even a little naughty... 

THANKS for sharing it!

[rndmnwierd]

Ooops, how did I miss this?

Ishiyoshi is so cute, my original OTP.

[kuro808]

@Bee^3 i had the thought of Ishiyoshi and why not make it a birthday party where, Yossie is the maid and Rika as she is, respect but take advantage of her friend being the maid.

@rmdmn I think my stories get more exposure than my poems but I have been lacking motivation to write out chapters and I don't know if I will get back to the story.  Therefore, I will try to work on poems more instead of my fics, until I get my head around doing stuff.

Field Trip

I hate field trips

Sometimes I get paired with the worst

Many just sleep and drool

Maybe today I get someone better

"Hello Ai"

Ah her

Last time she was doing gags

And now she is saying hi to me

I am doomed

The bus moves to our destination

But she is particularly quiet

Hmm she seems to be staring down

The Yankii?????

Oh no this is bad

I must shake her out of it

What shall I do?

Hand in front of face

Nope

Make funny faces

Nope

Whisper in her ear

Strike three

Darn can't get her to give up

Look behind

Ah the bean is sleeping

With Jun

What to do?

Maybe

No that won't work

Or maybe

Too childish

I got it

Put two hands on her face

Lips together

Close eyes

Slowly progressing to shock

I feel something

Open eyes

Her eyes as big as softballs

Let go of her face

"Ai-chan!"

Oh no, she figured my plan

What to do?

Oh god, what would Yuna do?

Arghhh

Eri

I

Love

You

The bus stops

Every person looking at me

Then, Eri falls to the floor

The yankii runs over to the fallen turtle

She jumps on top of her to revive her

But when her lips touch

Eri jumps up and celebrates her victory

Pheww safe

"Ai-chan, you better have a good explanation"

Risa's face red as a strawberry

No reason

Trying to avoid Eri from getting hurt

"We can take of you later but you should let them stay together"

I guess so

They look cute

But still a boring field trip

With some close friends

Maybe closer enemies

Or a shot at romance

[rndmnwierd]

Interesting, love the Risa as red as a strawberry.

[lil_hamz]

Hmmm, this poem kept me guessing thoughout. But in the end I kinda got a feel good vibe from it. I can't really explain it, I FAIL! Still, I enjoyed reading this

[kuro808]

@hamz Ai is just bored and she has not had great trips with people and sitting next to Eri made her crazy, even though Risa was sitting behind her, so she made a move on Eri which made Reina (Yankii) to come to the rescue.  In all this effort, Risa sort of confesses silently how much she likes Ai.  It ends with Ai with her expectation by just driving everybody away

[kuro808]

Young Love

Watching outside

The image of your smile

Catches the sun

The image warms me

As it progresses

I feel the knots

Its rolling over and over

Does a crush feel good?

No, it doesn't

Is it a boy?

No, its my best friend

The dolls we used to play with

Have gone into a box

Looking at them

I see your face

The smile that brings angels

The sunlit appearance I yearn for

As I sit with that box

I wondered if you will come over again

And we can play dolls

I look into your eyes

My heart slowly increases

Time goes slower

Seeing your face

Touching the skin

Once our lips touch

The fireworks goes off

Everything calms down

Brings me back to reality

Sitting by the window

Watching you converse

I finally go for it

I run down the stairs

Tears in my eyes

I stand many feet away from you

Aishiteru

Daisuki da yo

Dakishimete

Within your arms

I fall into it

Why do I have to fall for my friend?

Why her?

She never seen me this way

Just like a puzzle

Pieces everywhere

Embarrassment from doing so

Yet, you bring up my face

The stare into my heart

Ready to attack but

She lets me stand up

"Daisuki da yo"

Feeling your hair

As the embrace warms

Young love

Sucks

Is horrible

Worst than my hardest homework

Just sickening

Bad

Hurtful

But still incredible

[kuro808]

I might change the title but I'll keep this as a working title

Hare Ame Nochi Suki

Moonlight

I feel the same about you

Angry

Disappointed

Saddened

You being with her

How can I trust you?

Hearing the door knock

I open it up

Seeing the current enemy

Risa, I am sorry

No, you will not be forgiving

As she goes to my feet

I kick her away

Seeing the bruise forming

I picked her up to the table

Sorry, Ai

But you hurt me back there

Giving her the icepack

I let my guard down

Giving her a hug

Hardest thing to do

I can't forgive her

But seeing the rain fall

I let her stay over

She stays at the table

The icepack creating a pool

Risa, I want to talk

Hearing it I concentrate on her

I wasn't thinking

She was there

And I told her

I had you

But she tried to encourage me to leave

And I pushed her away

Then it happened

Once I saw your eyes

Across the bar

I came running

The slap across the face

And before I could explain

You were gone

Ai has never been unfaithful

But she likes to talk

And it has never lead to that

Smelling the alcohol

I had to make a choice

Stay with her

Or leave

Either way

Friend or enemy

She was staying

Tonight

Still I wanted to gather

Maybe the wait

Was too much

She dropped the icepack

Walked out

Sometimes

I wished she knew

How I was feeling

One day

One day

I will forgive her

But not now

I'll let it weigh out

[rndmnwierd]

Aww, sad.

[kuro808]

Left

Disappointment

Anger

Sadness

The feelings

I felt for you

But you left

If I was...

Only more careful

The bomb

Would have been kept away

Unfortunately

Time came

You went away

Left me

Heart slowly beating

Blood oozing

Looking at it

Carefully

Bringing it back to life

One day

You will come back

You may apologize

But I will get over you

If I don't

I will try

I will do so

Even if it kills me inside

I will do

What many people

Say I should do

Just go away

Enough drama

Enough making up

Its over

You may be right

But I just left

----

This is out to a personal friend, who had his heart broken after doing the right thing, He may be a guy but he is truly broken inside. A message that sometimes feeling may flow out but it will eventually come back.  This poem is open to any pairing you want to think of because it is a romanticized version of his story and I wanted to share it in a way that I could feel the same pain.  It worked but now since it is out of my system, I am truly glad he did the right thing

EDIT: I wasn't angry when I wrote this but I had a lot on my mindso I adjusted it to lessen the bashing

[badsaints]

Woah sad. Looks like your friend's been burned badly Hope he's okay

[kuro808]

Too make the long story short, it is something I wouldn't even dream of doing and he is going through the long process of recovery

[kuro808]

Peach's Thoughts

Wonderful day

No one's here

Let's see the dressing room

No one

Ah Captain

Looking at her eyes

She seemed sad

My arms comforting her

Thank you

Hmm what's wrong

Problem is no one is here

I must go searching

especially Miya

She should be easy to find

Grabbed Captain

And led her to the room

Dark

Smelly

Sticky

Ahh disgusting

I am so out

Captain laughing

Oh no

Where's Yurina

Damn her

Running to the next room

Seeing her standing there with a candle

Then the other lights come together

Ah hello

What's up

Our anniversary is today

Oh no

I don't have a present

Captain gave me a necklace

The taller bent over

I got to put it on

It sparkles like her eyes

I won't forget next year

Unfortunately does three years forgetting counts?

[lil_hamz]

The thing about your poems is, they are emotional and touching and it affects me cuz I feel kinda down after reading them. But I keep coming back for more despite that ^^; As I read, a whole story plays out in my head and it's as though I can see your poem come to life before my eyes. Argh, I realized I'm rambling again and it's confusing isn't it? How I explain my thoughts >.> I guess the most important thing of what I'm saying is, don't stop writing

Funny that your latest is about mono. I was thinking about her today

[kuro808]

The thing about your poems is, they are emotional and touching and it affects me cuz I feel kinda down after reading them. But I keep coming back for more despite that ^^; As I read, a whole story plays out in my head and it's as though I can see your poem come to life before my eyes. Argh, I realized I'm rambling again and it's confusing isn't it? How I explain my thoughts >.> I guess the most important thing of what I'm saying is, don't stop writing

Funny that your latest is about mono. I was thinking about her today

thank you for the encouragement, I have lots of thoughts but now with school I need to be more in depth with details, I usually try to get some idea from past stuff but they have a lot of sugar and dark tones, i like the hate/love relationship.  Well I better come out with my new idea.

Pink Hearts and Dark Things

Year 0

Joining a group

Is like going to school

You visit the classmates

And you find one you hate

She is too cute

She is the opposite of me

Year 1

Leader has left

We both had leads

But I still got my part

Tomboy

In love with a girl

But is it the right one?

Year 2

Another member leaves

She was attractive

But she is still there

Damn my heart is starting to race

Year 3

Additions

Additions and still we are left

Especially she plays my wife

She is such a klutz

But still I don't like her

Year 4

We get separated

But the split has only made me yearn for her

I cannot hide this too much

But Nacchi caught on

Year 5

She is leaving but

I am hooked

To her every move

Let me go,

Year 6

First year as leader

But everything is on her

I think of her

I had a dream

I have to fight the urge

Year 7

I am going to leave the nest

The tunnel has her

But being with her now

Is paradise

Year 8

Now we are a duo

Maybe is disguise

But its better than nothing

Year 9

We leave the bigger nest

We may not be together always

But we can enjoy

Rocking out to everybody

Year 10

Now its been ten years

But there is so much between us

Also being drunk

Hasn't been so wonderful

[kuro808]

Neighbor

When I was little,

A girl used to watch me

She watched me enjoy my dolls

But never once asked to join in

I thought she was shy but

It wasn't that at all

Her knowledge was narrow

Not knowing the dolls exist

She had magazines

Millions of them

Every day she would read

Some that I could never pronounce

But she would read it

Quietly

Slowly

Peacefully

Years later

I gave her a card

Something that she could read to me

But how I felt emotional

She felt offended

Before she could say a word

She extended her hand out

Words are meant to be felt

Never meant to judge

However maybe you could change one

To reflect my feelings for you

What if you change "hate

To "love"

25 times that process

And that is how I feel

I found that surprising

As she knew

What I wanted to do

All along

Was to know her.

[badsaints]

Oooh so who is this neighbour?

[kuro808]

I was thinking TakaGaki but never gave it away because it was just interesting for people to guess

Benchmark

18th birthday

The separation between child and adult

However does it change you?

Does age change perspective?

I feel older but don't look like I am

Airi seems to grow

But she is way too cute to be her age

Nakky is just her

And she seems to be the same

Chisato and Mai are just sprouting

Still has Yajima Maimi grown?

Can she handle the adult world?

I guess so

But with every day

I want to take small steps

With these small steps

I can become a better woman

But still keep my childhood memories

That would be good for me