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Title: Promise Special Chapter~~~Part 3 (The Final Part)~~~Update~~
Post by: abok on April 26, 2010, 08:59:44 PM
This is my first fan fic....
i hope you guys will like it.
 :D

Promise

Prologue

Maimi –chan!!! Wait for me!!! Yell Airi.
Hurry up slowpoke!!!!hahahahaha……. Laugh Maimi while she’s running.
Airi and Maimi live in the same neighbourhood. They have always been together and they are very close to each other. Maimi or Yajima Maimi is a bit taller than Airi or Suzuki Airi. After running around their neighborhood, both  of them finally reach their destination. It is a park. Both of them stop running and sit under a tree.
Mou….Maimi-chan, you are so mean!! How could you make me run that long….you knows that I am not as athletic as you…. Airi said as she pout.
Maimi sigh as she pat Airi’s head.
I’m sorry Airin…… I didn’t mean to make you exhausted…..you know how much I love to run…..said Maimi.
It is not because you like to run, it is because you want to turn yourself into a boy~~~said Airi as she giggled.
What did you say??!!!Maimi ask as she poked Airi’s head.
Itai!!! What did you that for Maimi-chan?? Ask Airi while she rubs her head. You know that I’m just joking right?? She continued.
Maimi just smile when she saw Airi rub her head. “I know that” she replied as she kiss Airi’s head.
Suddenly Airi started crying and hugged Maimi. Maimi was very surprised.
What’s wrong Airin?? Why are you crying?? I’m sorry for poking your head….. I promise that I will never do that again….. Maimi said anxiously.
I have to move away from this place Maimi-chan……. Airi said while she continued crying.
What??!! Maimi said. She was very shocked. Please tell me that you’re just joking Airin….. she continued.
I am not joking….. daddy….have to transfer…..Airi said while breathing heavily. She could fell her trembling voice as she speak.
Maimi can’t hold her tears anymore. She never fell this sad before. Airi was her bestfriend, the only girl who have never seen her as a boy. The other girl in their neighborhood never likes Maimi because she’s a bit rough and boyish. Airi was the only one who wants to become her friend. Maimi didn’t know what she’s going to say. She is very sad and hurt right now. Her heart fell like it is being torn apart.
Maimi-chan……what are we going to do?? What if we never seen each other again?? Airi asked Maimi.
Maimi close her eye’s for a moment. “I have to be strong” she said to herself.
Maimi-chan?? Airi continued.
Maimi open her eyes and stared at Airi eyes as she wipes out Airi tears.
Don’t worry Airin, we will see each other again. I promise you. I will wait for you forever…. Maimi said to Airi.
Really?? You promise to wait for me?? Airi ask as she starting to smile.
I promise you….. Maimi said as she hold Airi tighter in her arms.

Chapter  1

7 years later…….

Kringggggggggggg!!!!!!!

Maimi woke up lazily as she turn off the alarm. She jumps back on the bed and was about to fall asleep again when she heard a knock at her door. The door opened and Maimi’s mother enter her room.

“Maimi dear~~ Wake up already or you’re going to be late to school……”yell Maimi’s mother.

“Mou~~~~ can I sleep a little a bit more?? I’m tired…..” Maimi said as she pulls the blanket.

“Yajima Maimi, don’t you dare fall asleep again”!!! Maimi’s mother yell again as she walked out of the room.

“Alright, alright……”replied Maimi as she walked lazily to her bathroom and ready herself for school.

After she finish her bath and put on her school attire, Maimi sat on the chair near her study table and looked at a picture. She feel very sad every time she look at that picture. But she can’t stop herself from looking at it.

“I miss you so much….. I wonder do you miss me the way I have always miss you….”she said to herself as she kiss the picture.

“Maimi dear!!!! Erika-chan is here!!!” Maimi’s mother shouted.

Maimi quickly put the picture down and ran downstair.

“Ohaiyo Maimi-chan~~~~”said Umeda Erika, Maimi bestfriend.

“Ohaiyo…..”replied Maimi as she walks to the door and ready to go to school.

Mom, I’ll go now!!! Shouted Maimi.

Okay, be careful both of you!!! Replied Maimi’s mother.

As they walk to school. Erika can sense that there’s something bothering Maimi. She look down and depressed than usual.

What’s wrong Maimi-chan?? Erika ask while looking at Maimi with great concern. Are you sick?? She continued.

No…. I’m ok….. Maimi replied as she gave Erika a week smile.

Maimi-chan, don’t insult my intelligence ok….. I have known you for 5 years and we have been best friend since then…… so I know when something is bothering you….. Erika said looking a little displeased.

Maimi sighed and look down to her shoes.
I’m thinking about her……. She said.

Erika smiled and put her arms around Maimi shoulders.
I know that would be the reason…. Erika said as she smile.

What do you mean you know?? Maimi ask.

Because every time you’re looking depressed, there are no other reasons… Erika replied as she smile.

Am I that obvious Erika?? Maimi ask again.

Well, maybe you are…..hehehehehehe….. Erika replied as she giggled.

I don’t know what to do Erika…… I can’t hold my feeling anymore…. I want to see her again…. I want to hear her voice and watch her smile again…… Maimi replied as her voice starting to trembled.

Maimi-chan, I can’t say that I understand how you feel because I don’t, but I sure that you will meet her again someday….. Erika said as she patted Maimi’s head. So, for now just be patience ok?? She continued.

Well easy for you to say…… you have Maasa by your side…… Maimi replied as she stared at Erika.

Erika blushed when she heard the name. After a while, a sweet, heart melting smile appeared on her face.

Well, what can I say Maimi-chan, I’m the luckiest person alive….. unlike you!!! Hahahahaha……Erika said as she run towards the school.

What did you say?? Why you little…… Maimi grinned as she chase Erika until they have reached their school.

I hope you’re right Erika…… I really hope so!!!! Maimi said to herself.

Chapter 2

When both of them reached the school, they saw a group of girls already waiting for them. Maimi and Erika walks quickly towards them. When they reached them, Erika quickly went to a girl that was leaning on the wall.

"Maasa-chan, ohaiyo….." Erika greeted the girl in front of her.

"Why are you late today???" Maasa ask as she pouts.

"Gome, gome…… Maimi have a little problem earlier….. "Erika said while she hold Maasa hand.

Maasa didn’t respond and she keep pouting. Erika knows that Maasa is sulking. So she decided to use the most effective way to cheer up Maasa. She hold Maasa hands as she stares at her with her puppy eyes. Maasa try to ignored it for a while but she already knows that she can’t win with that look. So she smile and kiss Erika cheeks as a signal that she is not sulking anymore. Erika cheeks grew red as she cover her face to cover her blushed.

"Get a room you two!!!" Maimi interrupted both of them.

"Oh~~~ what’s wrong Maimi-chan??? Are you jealous??" Said Chinami as she walks toward Maimi.

"What?? "Maimi asked her while raising her eyebrow.
 
"Chill out Maimi, she’s just joking…." Said Saki
.
"Well , if I am jealous, maybe you should share Yurina-chan with me….." Maimi said as she walks towards Yurina and put her arms around Yurina’s shoulder.

"Don’t you dare touch my girl!!!" Chinami said as she push Maimi away.

"Oh~~ what’s wrong Chinami-chan?? Are you jealous??" Maimi asked her with the same tone she was using before.

The other girls just giggled and laugh while watching both of them.

"Hey guys, do you hear?? We have a new transfer student today….." Risako said.

"Oh really?? Where is she from??" Asked Saki.

"Dunno…." Replied Risako.

"That’s great…… maybe she can join our group too…." Said Miyabi as she hugged Saki from behind.

"Great idea Miya!!! Maybe then she can hook up with Maimi since she the only one who ‘s single…." Maasa responded.

"Don’t you guys dare to hook me up with anyone….." said Maimi.

"We have to, or you will keep bothering my Erika every morning…." Maasa said with a grinned.

"Yeah, yeah….whatever…. "Maimi said with a pout. "Let’s get going already or we will be late to class…." She continued.

"Well guys, let’s go or we will be late……" Erika said as she kissed Maasa.

"See you guys at lunch!!!" Said Chinami as she hugged Yurina.

"Ok, later!!!" Saki shouted.

A few hours later at Risako, Nakky and Chisa class……..

"Class, we have a new student today….. go ahead, introduce yourself…." Said Rika sensei, their class room teacher.

"Suzuki Airi desu, yoroshiku onegaishimasu….." said the new student.

"Ok Suzuki-san, go and sit beside Risako…." Said Rika sensei.

"Hait….." replied Airi as she walks towards Risako who was waving her hand.
When Airi takes her sits beside Risako, Risako introduce herself.

"Sugaya Risako desu"….. said Risako.

"Suzuki Airi desu…." Replied Airi as she shakes Risako hand.
After their class was over, Risako invited Airi to join them at lunch. Airi smiled and accepted Risako offers.

Maimi class……

"Maimi-chan, you know that I am joking about hooking you up right……" asked Maasa.

Maimi smiled at Maasa and nodded her head. "I know that you’re just joking….." replied Maimi.

"And I’m sorry for making Erika late this morning….." she continued.

"Maimi-chan, don’t worry about that, I not jealous at all ok….. besides, she’s your best friend…." Maasa said with a smile.

"Thanks Maasa….." Maimi replied as she patted Maasa shoulders.

"Well, let’s go to the cafeteria, we don’t want them to wait any longer right……" she continued.

When Maimi and Maasa reached the cafeteria, they quickly walks toward Erika and the others.

Maimi was chatting happily with Maasa until she noticed a new face at that was sitting besides Risako. Maimi froze on the spot and can’t move her leg anymore. She just standing there with her mouth that have grew wider because of shocked.

"Maimi-chan, what’s wrong??" Ask Maasa when she noticed what had just happened to her friend.

Maimi can’t answer Maasa question because there’s only one word that she’s capable of saying at that time.

Airin…………. She said.


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i really hope that you guys enjoy this story.....
im sorry if my english is bad.... :nervous
but please leave your comment about this story ok.....
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Chapter 3

"Airin……………." She said.

"What’s wrong Maimi-chan??" Maasa ask again. But this time she also poke Maimi’s arm.
"Oh nothing……" replied Maimi.

Maimi was so happy. Her heart beat faster as both of them nearly reached the table. When Maimi and Maasa reached the table, the other girls greet them.

"What took you guys so long??" Ask Miyabi.

"Nothing….. Miami just froze for a second and can’t used her leg properly just now"…… answered Maasa as she giggled.

Maimi didn’t really pay attention to the other girls because the new student have already caught her attention. Airi was also in shocked when she saw Maimi. Maimi was about to talk to Airi when suddenly Rika sensei came and told Airi that she needs to go with her.
Maimi was so disappointed when she saw Airi leaves. But she knew that she will meet her again after school.

"Just be patience and calm as Erika said"…… Maimi thought to herself as she sat down to join the others.

During the last period, Maimi can’t wait anymore. She was just so excited.

"Damn clock!!! Why are you moving so slow!!! Damn bell!!! Why don’t you ring already…."she thought to herself. She was so lost in her thought until she felt somebody was poking her arms. She turned around and looked at Maasa who was staring at her.

"What???" She asked Maasa.

"Don’t what me"….. replied Maasa. "What’s wrong with you??? I’ve never see you daydreaming during our class before…." Maasa continued.

"Nothing"…. She answered.

Maasa still staring at her and giving her the “I don’t trust you at all look”, so she decided to change the subject.

"Are you going to walk Erika home today??" She asked Maasa.

"Of course I will. Why do ask?? You always know that, don’t you???" Said Maasa as she becoming more suspicious.

"Oh nothing… listen Maasa, I’m not going to join both of you today, so you can go home without me"….. Maimi replied.

"Why?? What’s wrong??" Ask Maasa.

"I have something to do today….."she answered shortly.

"Oh really?? Do you want to tell me what it is??" Maasa said as she raised her eyebrow.

"Well, it’s nothing big….. just something I want to do……" Maimi replied. She’s getting irritated by Maasa question.

Maasa can feel Maimi irritation so she decided to drop the subject.

When the bell rang, Maimi quickly packed her things and headed towards the school gates. She told Maasa to take care of Erika. When she arrived there, she felt very happy because she’s going to meet and talked to Airi again. She decided to wait for Airi at the shop in front of her school. A few minutes after that, she saw Airi walking alone from school. She quickly went to Airi and called her.

"Airin~~~~" she called.

Airi look around to find the person who called her. She was very surprised when she saw Maimi walking towards her. She quickly turned around and ran away as fast as she could.

"Airin!!! Wait!!!" Shouted Maimi. She was very shocked when she saw Airi ran away after she saw her. Maimi quickly chased her. "Maybe she thinks I am a stalker or something……but doesn’t she remember me???" Maimi asked herself while she was chasing after Airi.

10 minutes after that……

Airi couldn’t ran anymore. She was never good at sport, especially running. She finally stopped because she thought she have already out run Maimi. While she was gasping for air, her could feel a hand touching her shoulder. She turned around and she saw Maimi smiling at her.

"She‘s still fast after all……" Airi thought to herself.

"Airin~~~" called Maimi. It’s been a long time….. she continued.

Suddenly, Airi pushed Maimi away and yell at her.

"Don’t you dare touch me!!! Who the hell do you think you are??!!!" Airi yelled as she look at Maimi with her angry face.

"Hey calm down Airin!!! It’s me, Maimi……" Maimi replied. She was extremely shocked about how this event turned out to be but she manages to hold her tears from falling and calm herself down.

"I know who you are, Yajima!!!" Said Airi. "And don’t you dare call me Airin again!!! There’s only one person who can called me that and to me she’s already dead!!!!" She continued. Airi couldn’t hold herself anymore.

Maimi froze on the spot. "Dead?? What is she talking about?? And why is she so angry with me??" Maimi asked herself as she felt her eyes started to get wet.

Maimi try to hold herself together as she put her both her hand on Airi’s shoulder.

"What are you talking about Airin?? I’m not dead, I’m right in front of you!!!" Maimi said to Airi. She was trying really hard to hold her tears. "Aren’t you happy to see me???" She continued.

"Happy???" Airi said with a smirked. "Why should I be happy to see you?? I pray every day that I will never ever see your face again…… I hate you!!!!! "Airi continued as she push Maimi to the ground before she turned around and walked away.
 
Maimi froze. She doesn’t have the strength to get back to her feet. She couldn’t hold herself anymore as she felt her tears running through her cheeks. She watched Airi walked away and deep down inside her, she said to herself. 

"This is just a dream, a very bad dream, right???"



Chapter 4

Airi arrived at her house late that evening. After what happens between her and Maimi, she needs to be alone for a while. After dinner, she just stays in her room. After she had finished her bath, she lies down on her bed and starting to stare to the ceiling. After a few minutes, she slowly opened the drawer and she took out a picture of young girl.

"Why did you appear in front of me again???" She asked herself as she was staring at the picture. "I have already promise myself to forget you……and yet, you just won’t let me……" she continued as she starting to sob.

"I’m sorry Maimi-chan….." Airi talked to herself as her tears kept falling like the rain. "I never meant to hurt you…..but why didn’t you chased me?? Why do you pretend that nothing is wrong??? Don’t you remember the promise that you have broken a long time ago???" She continued talking to herself until she falls asleep while hugging Maimi picture.

The next morning…..

Erika walked alone to school that morning. When she arrived at school, the other girls quickly went to her and ask her why she is alone.

Erika-chan, what’s happen?? Ask Saki.

Did you just kill Maimi-chan because she tried to groped you or something?? Chinami asked as she giggled.

Maasa realized the concern look on Erika face, so walked over to Chinami and poked her head.

Itai!!! Maasa, what’s that for??? Asked Chinami angrily.

Stop teasing my girl or Yurina will have to spoon feed you….. Maasa warned Chinami.

What did you just say you bitc…… Chinami said as she walked toward Maasa while raising her hand.

Maasa was also raising her hand too as she push Erika softly behind her.

Stop it both of you!!!! screamed Miyabi.

Chinami and Maasa frozed as both of them glared at Miyabi.

Maasa, you know that Chii was just joking, and Chii, you know that Maasa do too….. so just stop acting like a fucking brat!!! Miyabi continued as she clenched her fist.

Yurina quickly walked towards Chinami and dragged her away. Risako, Nakky and Chisato that just stood during the whole scene decided to follow Yurina and helped her calmed Chinami off.

Calm down Miya….. Saki said as she put her hand on Miyabi shoulder.
Saki, I’m sorry….. Maasa apologized to Saki.

Saki smiled at her and said.

“It’s ok Maasa, we’ll see you guys at lunch ok”

Then, she took Miyabi away with her.

Maasa turned to Erika who was about to cry as she wrapped her arms around that girl.

Gomenne….. she said as she stared into Erika eyes.

Erika smiled at Maasa as she leaned forward and kiss her lips.

At Yurina and Chinami side…..

“Why are you dragging me away Yuri-chan??!!! I’m not finished with that bitch yet!!!” Chinami scolded Yurina.

Yurina just ignored her as she continued to drag Chinami followed by Risako, Nakky and Chisato.

Don’t you heard a word I said to you??!!! Chinami screamed and pull her hand away from Yurina.

Risako, Nakky and Chisato quickly went to her and tried to calm her down.

Chii-chan…..

“Shut up you brat or I will end up beat the crap out of you too!!!!” Chinami cut those three as she glared at them angrily. “And who does
 Miyabi thinks she is??? Yelling at me like I’m a fool…..” Chinami continued angrily.

If it wasn’t for Saki, I would have…..

Panggggggg!!!!!!!!!!

Risako, Nakky and Chisato were shocked as they saw Chinami rubs her cheeks and Yurina who was crying as she shouted.

Tokunaga Chinami, if you don’t get a hold of yourself and shut up, I will break up with you and I will hate you forever!!! Yurina’s cheek
was already wet with tears.

Nakky and Chisato just stood there and they just froze. But suddenly Risako took both their arms and lead them away.

Rii-chan, what are you doing??? Asked the very confused Nakky.

We need to give them some time alone…… Risako continued.

Chisato just nodded and the three of them walked away to class
.
Chinami can felt the guilt building inside her. Yurina was a gentle and caring girl who will never hurt and raised her voice to anyone. The guilt is even greater when she saw Yurina crying.

Yurina….. Chinami called her.

Yurina didn’t respond. She just starting to walked away from Chinami.

Chinami ran up to her and hugged her from behind.

I’m very sorry Yuri-chan….. I’ve lost my temper again….. Don’t leave me….. I beg you….. Her eyes was starting to water as she hugged Yurina tighter.

Go ahead, slap me again, yell at me again and hit me again for being a fool….. slap me again for hurting you….. She continued.
Yurina still stayed silent.

Chinami didn’t know what to do. Her tears were getting worst.
 If you can’t forgive me……


She froze as she felt Yurina lips were crushing against hers. She held her tighter as she returned the kiss.

Let’s go home….. Yurina said as her cheeks starting to grow redder.

Ok…. Chinami said as she holds Yurina hand and entwined their fingers together.

I’m sorry for slapping you so hard….. Yurina said when she saw the red spot on Chinami’s cheek.

It’s not your fault baby…. Chinami replied.

Don’t worry, I’ll make you feel better….. Yurina said as she blushed.

Chinami smiled grew wider as she whispered to her.

Well, I guess we better get home fast.

Yurina smiled as she held Chinami hand tighter.

During lunch……

Where Chinami and Yurina?? Asked Saki.

They skip school for today….. Maasa answered.

Oooooooo……… The girls replied as they giggled.

Miya, I’m sorry about this morning…. I shouldn’t lose my temper…. Maasa apologized.

"It’s ok……. Forget about ok…..

 Miyabi said as she smiled at Maasa.

"Erika, you still haven’t told us what’s wrong with Maimi-chan….." Saki asked Erika.

"Oh, her mother said she has a fever….." Erika replied.

"Ooooooo….. so you and Maasa gonna visit her after class???" Risako interrupt with her worried face.

"Yes…. You guys wanna come???" Erika comtinued.

"Sorry, but we have plans today….." Said Miyabi as she hold Saki in her arms.

"Yeah, we have plans too"…. Nakky and Chisato said.

"What about you Rii-chan??" Maasa asked Risako.

“Well, I’m going to Airi house today, she wants me to teach her with some homework…..” Risako replied.

“Oooooo …….. speaking of Suzuki-chan, where is she??” Saki asked Risako.

“Well, she’s doing yesterday homework…… she said she fell asleep to early last night…..” Risako answered.

The other girls just laughed when they heard Risako answer.

After class….

Maasa was already waiting for Erika at the school gates when she arrived there.

“Erika-chan, Maasa, don’t forget to Maimi-chan that we are sorry for not visiting her……” said Miyabi as the other girls nodded.

When both of them arrived at Maimi house, they went straight to her bedroom after they have say hi to Maimi’s mother.

When they stepped into Maimi’s room, they were shocked to see Maimi.

“Maimi-chan, what’s wrong??!!!!” Both of them asked.

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This is the new chapter.

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Chapter  5

After school, Risako followed Airi to her house. After Airi had introduced Risako to her parents, she took Risako to her room.

“You have a nice room Airi…..” Risako said as she smiled at Airi.

“Thank you Risako-chan……“ Airi replied to Risako.

“Airi, you don’t need to call me Risako….. Just call me Rii-chan like the other girls……” Risako said while she starting to get her homework out of her bag.

“But you just know me…… I don’t think you would like me to call you that…. And besides, your friends know you very well……” Airi said.

“Silly Airi……” Risako said as she patted Airi’s head. “I have invited you to have lunch with me and my friend at school….. And besides, all the girls seem to like you too…..” She continued. “We can be best friend right???” Risako asked as she’s smiling sweetly towards Airi.
Airi smiled back and took Risako hand.

“Of course Rii-chan…. I would like that very much……” Airi replied.

“Ok then, let’s start doing our homework!!!” Risako said as she punched towards the empty ceiling and tried to put on a very determined and serious face expression.

Airi just giggled at Risako and said.

“Yeah!!! We can do it!!!”

Two hours later……

“Yatta!!!!” Risako screamed as she rolled over towards  Airi’s bed.

“Our homework is finish at last!!!” Risako said as she continued to roll herself on Airi’s bed.

Airi giggled at Risako and went over to her bed.

“So, are you going home now Rii-chan???” Airi asked Risako.

“Are you throwing me out???” Risako asked Airi backed in a very sarcastic voice.

“What??? No!!! I’m not throwing you out…… I’m don’t mean it that way……” Airi explained herself to Risako.

Risako smiled when she saw Airi panicking face.

“I know that, I’m just messing with you…….” Risako said as she laugh.

“Mou~~~~~you are so mean Rii-chan…..” Airi said as she pouted.

“Kawaii!!!!!!!!!!!!!” Screamed Risako.

“Nee Airi……” continued Risako.

“What???” Airi replied.

“Are you dating somebody right now???” Risako asked as she moved closer towards Airi.

What kind of question is that Rii-chan??!!! Airi asked as she felt her cheeks grew red.

Come on Airi, we are best friend now right……. We can’t keep any secret between us…… Risako said to Airi.

No way….. I’m not going to answer that question…… Airi said as she put her arms across her chest.

Oh really~~~~ Risako said with a grinned and moving closer to Airi.

Yes…… I will not tell you…… or should I say I would never tell you….. Airi replied.

Well then, I guess I just have to force you…… Risako said with an evil intention all written on her face.

Airi moved backed a little bit as she could sensed something bad going to happen to her and said.
“What are you……”

Before Airi could finish her sentence, Risako jumped on her and she’s starting to tickle Airi.

“You better start talking or I’m going to tickle you to death…….” Risako said while laughing.

“Stop!!! Hahahahaha~~~~ please Rii-chan~~~~stop~~~~alright, alright~~~~ I’ll tell you~~~just stop~~~please……” Airi said to Risako as she tried to stop Risako from torturing her.

“Good choice….” Risako said. She’s very pleased with herself.

“Wait a minute ok……” Airi said as she tried to catch her breath.

“Hurry up Airi, or I will tickle you again……” Risako warned Airi.

“Ok,ok…… but, you have to tell me about yours first……” Airi said as she smiled.

“What??!!! I asked you first didn’t I…..” Risako replied.

“But to be fair, you have to tell me yours first….. Considering that you almost kill me just now…..” Airi said with a stern look.

“Ok then, fair enough…… I tell you first…. But you better tell me after this…..” Risako said to Airi.

Airi smiled and nodded.

Risako sighed as she started to tell Airi.

“I not dating anyone right now, but I do have a crush on someone……” Risako said as she started too blushed.

 “Really??!!! Who is that lucky person??” Airi said as she starting to get interested.

“Her name is Tsugunaga Momoko…… she’s in the same class with Miyabi, Maasa and Maimi……” Risako said. “She’s also from our group…..” Risako continued.

“But I didn’t see her yesterday…..”  Airi said.

“Well that’s because she has a fever and she can’t come to school for two days……” Risako replied.

“Aww~~~~you worried about her, don’t you Rii-chan……” Airi giggled as she teased Risako.

Risako cheeks become redder as she threw a pillow to Airi.

“Stop teasing me!!!” She shouted. “And of course I’m worried……” she continued.

Airi laughed as she patted Risako shoulder. “Don’t worry ok, she will be fine…..” Airi said to Risako.

Risako smiled as she take Airi’s hand.

“Thanks Airi…….” She said. “Well, it’s your turn now……” continued Risako.

Airi look up and she’s starting to stare at the empty ceiling.

“I am not dating anyone right now……” she said.

Still not satisfied, Risako asked Airi more.

“Well, have you been in love or have a crushed on somebody before???”

Airi looked at Risako and answered.

“Yes, but it was seven years ago…… I don’t think I can call it love because I was just a kid at that time. She is two years older. I don’t even know when my feeling starting to change towards her, but to me, she more than my best friend, she’s my angel……”

“Airi, when it comes to the matter’s of heart, It doesn’t matter whether you are kid or grown up….. Loves have no age limit….” Risako said to Airi. “What happen then???” She continued.

“Nothing happen….. I moved to another place after that….. I don’t even have the chance to tell her how much I love her…….and never met her after that” Airi said as her eye’s starting to tears.

Risako went to Airi and put her arms on Airi shoulders. “Don’t worry Airi, you will see her again….. Just don’t give up yet ok…..” Risako said smiling.

“Thanks Rii-chan……” Airi said while she wipes out her tears.

“Airi, I think I should go home now….. It’s getting late……” said Risako.

After Risako went home, Airi lied down on her bed and starting too stared at the empty ceiling again.

“Rii-chan, I’s sorry that I lied a bit to you just now…… but I can’t tell you that I have meet that person again…….” She said to herself.

She opened her drawers and took out the photos of Maimi.

“Why don’t you keep your promise back then Maimi-chan???” She mumbled to herself.

-Airi FLASHBACK-

Airi’s was moving out today, the mover van was already at her house that morning.

“Where is she???” Airi said as she walked back and forth. “She promise to come and see me today before I leave…….” she continued as she waited anxiously for Maimi. She wants to tell Maimi something today. Something that she has hid inside her heart this whole time.

A few minutes after that, her mother came and told her to get ready to move.

“Wait mom, my friend is not here yet!!!” She said as her tears starting to fall through her cheeks.

“Ok, we will wait five more minutes…..” Airi’s mother said.

“Thank you mom, she will come, she promised me……” Airi said to her mom.

But, after 5 minutes, Maimi never showed and Airi’s mother can’t delay anymore.

Airi was very sad. She never stopped crying even in the van.

“Why did break your promise??? Why didn’t you come Maimi-chan??? I hate you…… I don’t ever want to see your face again…..” She mumbled as she continued to cry.

-END OF FLASHBACK-













Title: Re: Promise
Post by: abok on April 29, 2010, 11:55:29 PM
Here's the new update!!!!! :P
Title: Re: Promise
Post by: Vickitty on April 30, 2010, 12:15:32 AM
Wooooah, Airi and Maimi! Love that pairing  :wub:
Hmm I really liked it. Miyabi and Saki  :inlove:
Poor Maimi  :cry: Keep it up!  :heart:
Title: Re: Promise
Post by: Mikitty_Ayaya on April 30, 2010, 03:33:53 AM
Wow...
i likes these chapter are nice!! I like the introduction, I like the chapters, they´re cutee and nice.
I don´t understand airi.  >.<

Maimi and Airi, that´s great. <3 <3
Title: Re: Promise
Post by: abok on April 30, 2010, 11:36:03 PM
thanks Vikitty and Mikitty_ayaya.... :)

ihope you guys will like this new chapter........ XD
Title: Re: Promise
Post by: abok on May 02, 2010, 01:07:44 AM
Chapter 6 is here!!!! XD

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Chapter 6

The next day, Erika went to school by herself again. She seems very sad and concern about Maimi.

-Erika FLASHBACK-
“Maimi-chan, what’s wrong??!!!!” Both of them asked.

They were very shocked when they saw Maimi’s condition. Maimi was sitting on her bed while wrapping herself with her blanket. Her eyes were red as blood because Maimi has been crying all night long. Her hair was a messed. Erika and Maasa have never seen Maimi like this. They have never even seen Maimi cried before. Erika rushed towards Maimi and hugged her. Maasa also went to Maimi and patted her head. After a few minutes, Maimi pulled away and smiled a little at Erika and Maasa. Maasa and Erika knew right away that it was a forced smile.

“Maimi-chan, what’s wrong?? Tell us…..” Erika said with a very concerned tone.

“Nothing happen Erika, I’m just not feeling well……” Maimi said as she moved a little bit from Erika.

“Don’t lie to us Maimi-chan, we know you very well to tell whether you are lying or not………” Maasa said to Maimi.

“Why should I lie to both of you??? I not lying ok, I’m just having a fever……” Maimi said to Maasa as she put on her fake smile again.

“If you are not lying, then why are your eyes so red??!!! I know well enough Maimi-chan, you never sicked!!! Don’t you dare lie to me and Maasa!!!” Erika said at Maimi angrily. She hates it when Maimi was trying to hide something from her.

Still putting the faked smile, Maimi answered Erika.

“Why don’t you believe me Erika??? It’s true ok….. I’m just having a fever…..”

Maimi answered have caused Erika to explode in anger. She stood up and she was flaring at Maimi.

“How dare you lie to me Maimi!!! I’m your best friend and you are still hiding things from me??!!!” She said in anger. Her eyes were almost filled with tears.

“Do you think that Maasa and I are stupid??!!! We’ve known you for five years Maimi!!! Your eyes are red because you have been crying all night!!! You better tell us the truth or we will never want to see you again!!!” She continued in rage.

“I am not lying ok!!!! If you don’t believe me, then it’s your problem!!!” Maimi shouted at Erika.

“Fine then, if you don’t want to tell us anything, fine….. We are your best friend Maimi, and we just want to help you……” Erika said as she went to Maasa and pulled her to the door.

“Erika dear, calm down……” Maasa said as she hold Erika hands and stopped her from leaving.

Erika looked at Maasa and said.

“What the point Maasa-chan, she don’t want our help, she don’t even need us anymore!!!”

Erika was about to leave when Maimi jumped off the bed and hugged Erika and Maasa from behind as she was starting to cry like crazy.

“She said she hates me, she said she never want to see my face again!!!” Said Maimi as she was hugging Maasa and Erika while she was crying.

Maasa and Erika turned towards Maimi and they hugged her back.

“Who is she Maimi, what are you talking about???” Erika asked Maimi as she and Maasa leads Maimi towards her bed again.

Both of them were confused now. What was Maimi talking about?? Who is she?? But before they asked again, they tried to stop Maimi from crying first. After a few minutes, Maimi began to ease up as she looked at Maasa and Erika.

“Airi-chan…..” She muttered.

“Suzuki-san??? Do you know her before Maimi-chan???” Maasa asked in confusion.

Maimi took the picture on her table and gave it to Erika.

“Maimi, don’t tell me that this girl is Suzuki-chan!!!” Said Erika.

Maimi just nodded weakly as she started to wrap herself with the blanket again.

“That’s why I got a feeling that I have met her somewhere yesterday…… didn’t I tell you Maasa-chan???” Erika said to Maasa who was still confused with the whole situation.

“Who is this girl Erika??? Tell me…..” Maasa said to Erika.

Erika sighed and she told the story about the girl in the picture to Maasa.

After Erika told her, Maasa started to understand.

“What happen yesterday Maimi-chan???” Erika asked Maimi.

Maimi told Maasa and Erika everything that happened between her and Airi. Maimi started to cry again when she told everything to Maasa and Erika.

After she told her everything, Maasa and Erika went to Maimi and hugged her. Erika was crying also that time. She never thought that her best friend would be hurt like that.

“Maimi-chan, why would she that to you???” Erika said.

“I don’t know Erika…… but she seem very angry at me……” Maimi said as she continued to sob.

“Don’t worry Maimi, Maasa and I will find her tomorrow, we will find out why she did that……” Erika said to Maimi as she looked towards Maasa and saw Maasa nodded.

“Don’t Erika!!! You have to promise me that you will never do that!!!” Shouted Maimi.

“We want to help you Maimi-chan…..” Erika said to Maimi.

“No, I have to deal this on my own…… please Erika, Maasa….. Promise me that you will never bother her…..” Maimi said as she holds Maasa and Erika hand.

Maasa and Erika sighed as they promised Maimi.

-END OF FLASHBACK-
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Erika sighed when she remembered the promise that she have made to Maimi. She really wanted to help her best friend, but there’s nothing that she can do now.

When she arrived at the school, Maasa and the others were already waiting for her.

She went to Maasa and gives her a kiss.

Maasa smiled at Erika as she hugged her girlfriend and whispered in her ears.

“I know you are worry right now sweetheart, but remember our promise to Maimi ok……”

Erika smiled at Maasa and she nodded.

“Where’s Maimi-chan???” Asked a short and bright girl.

“Ooooo~~~~ Momo-chan, you’re back…… How are you feeling???” Erika said as she went to the smaller girl and hugged her.

“Better now…… now where is Maimi-chan???” Momoko asked Erika again.

“She has a fever…… but she will be back tomorrow…..” Erika answered.

“Ooooo~~~ that’s bad……” Momoko said.

“Don’t worry Momo-chan, you know Maimi, she’s a strong girl……” Chinami said to her.

“Well, I guess you’re right………” Momoko said to Chinami.

“Maasa-chan…….” Chinami said slowly.

“What Chii-chan???” Maasa asked as she smiled at Chinami.

Chinami went to Erika and Maasa and bowed to them. Maasa and Erika were shocked as they went to Chinami and hold her hand.

“I’m sorry for yesterday……. I should not lose my temper…….” Chinami said as her eyes started to water.

Erika and Maasa hugged Chinami.

“We are friends right, of course we forgive you…… and I am sorry too…..”  Maasa said to Chinami.

Yurina went to them and pulled Chinami away.

“Ok, that’s enough…….” Yurina said as she pouted.

“Oooooo~~~~ don’t tell me you are jealous Yuri-chan…….” Asked Erika.

“Of course I am…….” She said as her cheeks turn red.

“Babe, you don’t have to be jealous anymore ok…… not after what happened last night……”  Chinami said and winked at her tall girlfriend.

Yurina face turned redder when she heard Chinami said that.

“So, what happen last night???” Saki asked Chinami.

“Well, we……”

Before Chinami could finished her sentence,  Yurina punched her arms and said.

“Don’t tell them…… it’s embarrassing!!!!”

All of them giggled as they watched the couple.

“Well, it looks like I have some catching up to do……” Momoko said. “Who’s gonna tell me everything about what happen over the last two days……” she continued.

All the girls looked at each other and they shouted in unison.

“Rii-chan!!!!”

Momoko went to Risako and hold her hands.

“Well, I guess you will be my date during lunch today……” Momoko said as she kisses Risako cheeks. “Maasa, Miya, let’s go or we will be late……” she continued as she started to walked towards her class.

Risako watched Momoko as she hold her cheeks.

“She holds my hand and she kiss me!!!!” She shouted to herself. She can feel herself flying now. But her imagination was interrupted by Nakky and Chisato.

“We have to go to class too you know…..” Nakky said as she and Chisato giggled at Risako.

“You should tell her your feeling you know…….” Chisato said and Nakky nodded in agreement.

“Ah~~~~ just mind your own business guys……” Risako said as she joined her friends to class.

“I can’t wait to tell Airi about this and I will tell Momo-chan about my feeling……” she thought to herself.

At Maimi house…..

Maimi just woke up and she better now. She took the picture on her her table and hugged it.

“Airin, I don’t know what I’ve done wrong, but I will make up to it…… I promise you…. I love you so much Airin…….” She said to herself as she kissed the picture and fell to sleep again.

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i just edit a few words in this new chapter......

men, i make a lot of mistake......
Title: Re: Promise
Post by: abok on May 03, 2010, 01:50:15 AM
New chapter!!!! :shocked:

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Chapter 7

The class went smoothly that day. Airi was walking towards the cafeteria with Nakky, Chisato and Risako. But today, she couln’t helped but notice that something was bothering Risako. During the class, Risako seems too lost in her owned world and sometimes, she just blushed for no reason.

“Rii-chan, what’s wrong with you today??” Airi asked Risako.

When Risako heard Airi’s question, her cheeks was starting to blush again.

“What?? Nothing….. Nothing interesting to tell~~~~ hahahahahaha……” Risako said while she tried to hide her blushing face.

 “Oh really~~~~~” Airi said with a sarcastic tone.

Airi turned towards Nakky and Chisato and asked them.

“So ladies, what’s wrong with our little Rii-chan today???”

Nakky and Chisato giggled and answered Airi.

“Well, it looks like our little Rii-chan will be Momo-chan date during this lunch….”

“Uso!!!!” Airi shouted. “Rii-chan, is it true???” She continued.

Risako cheeks turn even redder than before and she nodded.

Airi hugged her and said.

“Congratulations Rii-chan!!! I am so happy for you……. maybe this will be a perfect time to tell Tsugunaga senpai about your feeling….

“Thank you Airi-chan, maybe I will!!!!” Risako said as she holds Airi hand.

When they arrived at the cafeteria, all the girls were already waiting for them. Momoko saw Risako and rushed towards her.

“Rii-chan, you are late for our first date!!!” She said as she take her hand and lead Risako away.

Airi watched Risako who was blushing like mad and chuckled.

“They really deserved each other”….. She said to herself and smile.

She followed Nakky and Chisato to the table and sat beside Erika.

Erika felt very uncomfortable because of what Airi did to Maimi. Maasa realized this and whispered to her.

“Calm down honey….. Don’t show to her that you are mad….. Please think about Maimi……”

Erika took a deep breath and smiled at Maasa.

“Thanks darling, I don’t know what to do if I don’t have you by my side…….” She whispered back to Maasa.

Maasa smiled as she kissed Erika’s forehead.

“I love so much honey……” Maasa said.

“I love u too darling……” Erika replied.

“That’s enough you two….. Not in front of these kids…..” Saki interrupted them as she giggled.

 Maasa and Erika blushed as they stuck their tongue out to Saki.

 Airi smiled at both of them while she scanned around the table.

“Where is she???” She asked herself.

“Who are you looking for Suzuki-chan???” Miyabi asked Airi.

“Ummm….. where’s Mai….. eh…. I mean Yajima-san….” Airi said.

“Maimi’s not well; she didn’t come to school since yesterday….” Saki answered her.

“Oh~~~ I see……” Airi said.

“What have I done??? I know she’s not sick…..  Why does my heart hurt when I heard about this???” Airi kept talking to herself. She wanted to cry, but she holds her tears. She doesn’t want those girls too know anything that happened between her and Maimi.

“What’s wrong Airi-chan???”  Asked Nakky.

“Nothing…..” Replied Airi as she put on her fake smile.

Meanwhile, at the school garden…….

Risako was blushing like crazy when she’s telling Momoko everything that happened for the last few days. Risako was in her own world right now. She never felt this happy in her life. She always wanted to spend some time alone with this cute and bright girl.

“I really appreciate these guys!!! Thanks a million!!!” She shouted in her head.

“Rii-chan, can I ask you one question???”  Momoko said as she broke Risako from her own little world.

“Sure Momo-chan…… anything…..” Risako said as she tried to hide her blush from Momoko.

“Are you dating anyone right now???” Momoko said.

“No…..” Risako answered. Her heart was pounding like crazy right now.

“What about that new girl, Suzuki-chan???” Momoko asked again. But this time, she lowered her head and looked at her shoe. Her cheek was starting to turn red.

Risako became a little surprised. She smiled and answered Momoko.

“No, Airi and I are just best friends……. But she already knows that I have a very huge crush on someone……” Risako answered.
Momoko lifted her head and a little smiled appeared on her head. But when she heard the second phase of Risako answered, she became a little scared.

“Do I know that person???” Momoko asked again.


Risako smiled and took a deep breath.

“Yes you do…….” Risako answered her shortly.

Momoko felt like a huge wave was hitting her. She lowered her head as she tried to hold herself from crying.

“That person just asks me on a date this morning to tell her everything that happened over the last few days before she kiss my cheek……” Risako continued and felt that her head was getting hot.

Momoko was a little surprised by that answered. She quickly went to Risako, and took her hand.
   
“Rii-chan, would you be my heart and soul???” Momoko asked Risako as her cheeks starting to get very red.

Risako cried a little as she leans towards Momoko and kiss her lips. Momoko was a little surprised at that time. But after a while, she kissed Risako back as she slip her tongue inside her and taste every surface.

After a little while, they pulled away from each other for air. Risako hugged Momoko waist and said.

“What took you so long??? I have been waiting for that word for a long time…….”

Momoko smiled and said.

“I’m sorry for making you wait……”

She lean towards Risako and kiss her again.

That afternoon, Maimi decided to take a walk. She went out and heads towards the park. She sat on a bench there and she tried to clear her mind. She was thinking about Airi again. Suddenly, someone tripped in front of her and she quickly went to help.

“Are you alright???” Maimi said as she tried to lift up the stranger.

When that person was back on her feet again, she smiled at Maimi and said.

“Thank you for helping me. I am ok now……”

Maimi smiled at the stranger and she invited her to sit with her.

“By the way, my name is Hagiwara Mai; you can call me MaiMai or Mai-chan…..”  said the stranger.

“Yajima Maimi desu……. You can call me Maimi…..” Maimi replied as she smiled and shook her hands with Mai.

“Do you come here often Maimi-chan???” Mai asked.

“Yes, almost every evening….. I like to run….. hehehehe~~~” Maimi said as she smiled at Mai.

“Really??? Maybe we can see each other again right???” Mai asked again.

“Sure, why not Mai-chan…..” Maimi replied.

“Ok then, I’ll see you later Maimi-chan, I have to go home now……” Mai said as she started to leave.

“Ok Mai-chan, see you later!!!” Maimi shouted at Mai.

“Maimi, what a beautiful name for a beautiful girl……” Mai said to herself as she went home.

Title: Re: Promise
Post by: oddball on May 04, 2010, 01:08:19 PM
Wow, this story is coming thick and fast, liking it though, the chapters work well and the story is easy to follow, wonder what part maimai will play in this story :?
Title: Re: Promise
Post by: Mikitty_Ayaya on May 05, 2010, 04:45:03 AM
 
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Airi smiled at both of them while she scanned around the table.

“Where is she???” She asked herself.

Although airi said unpleasant words to Maimi, airi still looking to Maimi,  and she is attentive to her.  :wub:

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“Who are you looking for Suzuki-chan???” Miyabi asked Airi.

“Ummm….. where’s Mai….. eh…. I mean Yajima-san….” Airi said.

 :wub:

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“Maimi’s not well; she didn’t come to school since yesterday….” Saki answered her.

“Oh~~~ I see……” Airi said.
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“What have I done??? I know she’s not sick…..  Why does my heart hurt when I heard about this???” Airi kept talking to herself.
:cry: Airi...

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She wanted to cry, but she holds her tears. She doesn’t want those girls too know anything that happened between her and Maimi.

“What’s wrong Airi-chan???”  Asked Nakky.

“Nothing…..” Replied Airi as she put on her fake smile.

my part favourite,  :wub:  :wub: this part is nice,  Airi´s worried about Maimi.  :wub:

next chapter.  :)
Title: Re: Promise
Post by: abok on May 07, 2010, 05:17:56 AM
new chapter is here!!!!!! :lol:


Chapter 8

Maimi went to the school with Erika the next day. She’s feeling a bit better now. When both of them arrived at school, they were ambushed by their friends.

“Maimi-chan!!!” Shouted Momoko.

“Momo!!!” Shouted Maimi as she went to hug the smaller girl.

“How do you feel now Maimi???” Asked Saki.

“Well better……” Maimi answered Saki.

“We’re sorry that we don’t stop by to visit……. But we’re glad to see you healthy again Maimi-chan……” Chinami said as she bowed to Maimi.

“It’s ok Chii-chan……. It’s just a fever……” Maimi said to Chinami while she smiled.

“But it’s weird you know……” Said Nakky.

“What are you talking about baby???” Asked Chisato as she hugged her cute girlfriend.

“Well, Maimi-chan never sick before…….. So, it’s weird to me……” replied Nakky.

Maimi smiled at Nakky and went to her.

“I am human too you know…… so, there’s nothing weird about me falling sick…..” said Maimi.

“Well, it’s still weird to me…… hahahahahahaha……” said Nakky as she giggled.

The other girls just giggled when they heard Nakky said that. After a few minutes, all of them went towards their own class.

Kriiiiiiiiinggggggggggggggg!!!!!!!!!!!

The bell rang and all of the students were starting to leave their class to go lunch. Momoko and Miyabi just ran out of the class without saying anything to Maimi and Maasa. To Maimi, it was natural for Miyabi, but when she saw Momoko did the same. She was starting to wonder why.

"Where’s Momoko going???" She asked Maasa. "Why didn’t she wait for us???" She continued.

"Momo-chan is going to Rii-chan class….." Answered Maasa.

"Huh??? What for???" Asked the very confused Maimi.

"So, your cute little sister didn’t tell you???" said Maasa.

"Tell me what Maasa???" Asked Maimi again. She was starting to get irritated by this conversation.

"Apparently, your little sister Rii-chan, are Momoko’s girlfriend now……." Maasa said as she giggled.

"What??!!! When did they start dating???!!!" Asked Maimi. She was very surprised to hear about this shocking news.

"Well, yesterday……. Finally Momo have enough courage to tell Rii-chan about her feeling……" Maasa replied.

"I think I’ve only missing school for two days, not two years……" Maimi said to Maasa who just giggled at her reaction.

"Well, that’s what you get when you missing school!!!" Maasa said as she started to run towards the cafeteria.

Maimi chased after her and when she and Maasa arrived at the cafeteria, Maimi suddenly turned around and started to walk away from the cafeteria. Maasa realized about that and she quickly chased after Maimi.
 
"What’s wrong Maimi-chan???" Asked Maasa.

"I can’t join you guys today…… I have something to do……." Maimi said as she started to walk faster.

"Not so fast Maimi-chan……" Maasa said as she grabbed Maimi’s hand. "Don’t lie to me ok……" Maasa continued. "It’s about Airi right???" Maasa asked.

Maimi sighed heavily as she nodded her head reluctantly. Maasa took Maimi hands and hold them while she stared into Maimi’s eyes.

"Please Maasa……. I am not ready……. I can’t face her yet……." Pleaded Maimi.

Maasa sighed and said.

"But you know that you can’t avoid her for the rest of your life right…….."

"I know that Maasa, but, I need time to adjust ok……" Maimi said. She lowered her head to avoid Maasa from seeing her tears that have started to form.

"Maimi-chan, she’s already one of us……. I hope you understand this……" Maasa continued.

"I know Maasa, just don’t tell Erika ok…… I don’t want her to leave the table too……" Maimi said to Maasa and she walked away.

Maasa sighed heavily and headed towards the cafeteria again. She was wandering what kind of excuse she’s going to give and what kind of response that she’s going to get.

One week later……

Maasa instinct was correct. Maimi was still avoiding Airi. She’s only with the girls during the morning or whenever Airi was not around. Maimi don’t even hang out with them during the weekend anymore. Whenever the girls asked Maimi, she just either ignored them or walked away from them. Maasa still remembered the incident that happened to Maimi, Risako and Momoko a few days ago. Risako and Momoko felt that Maimi was avoiding the girls because she doesn’t approve their relationship.

-Maasa FLASHBACK-

Maasa and Erika were at Maimi house that evening. Erika wanted to talk to Maimi about her behavior that week. When Erika and Maimi were arguing, Risako and Momoko arrived.

"Rii-chan, Momo-chan, what are you doing here……" asked Maasa.

Risako and Momoko didn’t answered Maasa question but they kneel in front of Maimi. The three of them were shocked seeing Momoko and Risako that were kneeling in front of Maimi.

"What the hell are you two doing??!!!" Asked Maimi. She was getting pretty upset with both of them.

"Are you avoiding the girls because you didn’t approve our relationship Maimi-nee???" Asked Risako.

Maimi was very shocked to hear that. She quickly went to Momoko and Risako and hugged both of them.

"Why do you say that Rii-chan???" Said Maimi. "It has nothing to do with both of you……" she continued.

"But, you were avoiding us ever since you are back to school Maimi……" said Momoko.

"I have my own problem Momo, please don’t think I avoid you guys because of your relationship……" Maimi said while she pulled away from them and smiled. "i think of Rii-chan as my imoto, even though it just what we call each other, we really close and we are sometimes like real siblings….. And as her oneechan, of course I’m happy!!!" She continued.

-END OF FLASHBACK-

Maasa sighed as she continued towards the cafeteria alone. Again……

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i am sorry about the delay...... :sweatdrop:
i got to study because i am having my final exams 2 days in a row...... :nervous



Title: Re: Promise
Post by: abok on May 08, 2010, 07:16:29 AM
i add little bit more to chapter 9..... :w00t:
because i think it's too short..... :sweatdrop:

Chapter 9

Airi just arrived at her house that evening. She was very exhausted. After taking her bath, she lied on her bed and starting to think about the event that have happen this week.

"So, she still didn’t show up today……. i know that she's just avoiding me" She thought to herself. "Why does my heart feel hurt…… I’m starting to miss her again…… I want her to talk to me again……. Why do I have to go over this feeling again…… I hate her…… she didn’t even keep her promise long ago….. But, why do I have this feeling like I miss her a lot???" She continued mumbled to herself.

Airi took Maimi picture from her drawer and stared at them.

"She’s still beautiful and even more angelic now…… her eyes, her lips, her voice, her face…… Kami-sama, what do I have to do to forget her???" She thought to herself.

"I don’t want to be hurt again……. I don’t want to lose again…….I don’t want to be the one that cry in the end……" she continued.

While Airi was busy talking to herself. Suddenly her telephone rang. She picked up her phone and started to chat with the caller.

"Moshi-moshi…… airi desu……"

"Airi-chan, Momo here……." Replied the caller.

"Momo-senpai, what’s up……" she said.

"Well, this Saturday, we are going to have a surprise party for Rii-chan to celebrate her birthday……." Momoko replied.

"Oh really, what do I have to do Momo-senpai???" She asked.

"Well, you have to keep Rii-chan busy so that she never knows what we are up too!!!" Said Momoko.

"No problem Momo-senpai…… you can count on me……" Airi said.

"Ok then, remember the plan ok…… take her to the town this Saturday and I will text you about the place…… bye-bye…" Momoko said as she ended their conversation.

"Ok …… bye-bye….." Airi replied.

Airi stared at the empty ceiling after that. She couldn’t help but smiled. “Its Rii-chan party, I’m sure she will be there. Maybe I can talk to
her again…… and this time I won’t yell at her again” she thought to herself as she smiled.

Maimi didn’t know what she should do now. After she received that called from Momoko, she couldn’t stop thinking. She knew, if she didn’t go, Risako and Momoko will be very upset. Not to mention Erika and the others will be extremely angry with her. But if she went there this Saturday, she has to face Airi. She’s still not ready. But suddenly she remembered someone. A person that has been much closed to her lately. A person that she just met a week ago. She called that person and went to meet her at the park.

"Maimi-chan, what’s wrong???" Asked Mai. "You sound so urgent when you called me just now……" she continued.

"I’m sorry to bother you Mai-chan……. But I am wondering, are you free this Saturday???" Maimi said to Mai.

"Hmmm…… I think I am Maimi-chan….. Why???" Answered Mai after she thought to herself for a while.

"Well, my friends are going to have a surprise party for one of our friends birthday…… would you like to come with me???" She asked Mai.

"Are you asking me for a date Maimi-chan???" Mai said.

Maimi face blushed when she heard Mai said that.

"No!!!" She shouted.

After screaming like that, she realized the look on Mai face. She seems very sad and hurt. She quickly went towards Mai and hugged her.

"I’m sorry….. I just want you to help me….. the girl that I have always tell you about is going to be there and I am not ready to face her yet…… so, if you are there, at least I have someone to talk to……." She said to Mai.

Mai pulled away from the hugged and smile brightly at Maimi.

“Of course I will help you…… we’re friends right…..” Mai said as she holds Maimi’s hand.

Maimi smiled back at Mai and hugged her again.

“Arigatou Mai-chan…….” She said.

Mai went home feeling very happy that evening. “Maimi have asked me for a date!!!” She thought to herself. “Looks like everything is going according to plan” she mumbled to herself. “Well, since that girl is going to be there too, I guess I have to think of something a little bit more interesting……” Mai continued to think until she came out with a brilliant plan. A grinned formed on her face as she lied down on her bed. Mai took her phone and called someone. After a few minutes of discussion, the person that she was calling gave her the permission to continue with the plan. She smiled as she thought to herself. “Looks like I’m going to snatch Maimi away from you Suzuki……hahahahaha…..”

Chapter 10

Saturday was finally here. That morning Airi was not herself. She was so nervous because she’s going to start talking to Maimi again today. She rolled on her bed while she was hugging Maimi picture. She was starting to wonder about what would happen when she talked to Maimi today. She just hoped that Maimi would forgive her for all the mean things that she has told Maimi before. Airi went to the bath room and starting to get ready. She has to prepare herself early because she needs to take Risako to the city and distracted her. After she has finished bathing, she received a text from Momoko.

“Airi-chan, are you awake yet??? Do you still remember our plan for today??? “

Airi quickly replied Momoko text.

“I’m already awake Momo-senpai and I still remember the plan…..” :D

“Good!!! :twothumbs are going to Rii-chan house now???”

“Yes….. Where are you going to make the surprise party??”

“The girls and I will make it at Yuri-chan house….. Her parents are not home for a while because they are on a business trip….”

“Ok then, make sure that you text me when everything is done ok???”

“Ok….. Don’t worry….. Thanks a lot Airi-chan.” XD

“You’re welcome.”

After eating her breakfast, Airi quickly went to Risako house. She didn’t call Risako because she knew that Risako would never follow her to town today. When she’s on the train, she started to think about her planned for Maimi today. “I know that she will be happy….. I just hope that I didn’t screw anything up this time……. I know that I’ve said that I hate her, but that just word….. I can’t afford to lose her again this time….. I know that she avoiding all her friends   because of me…..” Airi thought to herself. “Who knows, maybe after today, Rii-chan and the others will have their old Maimi back and I will have my Maimi too…..” She smiled to herself at that thought. Even though she said that she hates Maimi, but the truth was, she still loved her. She wanted her Maimi back. She still wanted Maimi to be by her side forever.

When she finally reached Risako house, she called Risako and told her that she was standing outside her house. Risako quickly ran downstairs to get Airi.

“Airi-chan, what are you doing here???” Asked Risako.

“I want you to go shopping with me…..” Airi replied with a smiled.

Risako stared at Airi for while and answered her.

“No….. I am so not in the mood of shopping right now……”

When Airi heard Risako’s answered, she knew right away that it would be very hard to persuade that girl to follow her. But, after 20 minutes of persuasion, Risako finally gave up and agreed to go shopping with Airi. When Risako was bathing, Airi sighed heavily as she texted Momoko.

“Momo-senpai, you should be grateful because after 20 minutes of persuasion, she finally agreed to go shopping with me……” :sweatdrop:

A few minutes after that, Momoko texted her back.

“I know that I can count on you Airi-chan….. Don’t worry too much ok, by this afternoon, everything will be done and I will text you to come here….”

“Ok Momo-senpai….. Orders received…. Loud and clear….. hehehe…. Roger and out….” :thumbsup

A few minutes after that, Risako finished her bath and both of them went straight to shopping. Risako just stood in silent that time. She seems too lost in her owned little world. Airi smiled at Risako. She knew the reason why Risako became like this.

“Why didn’t Momo-chan wish me last night……?” Risako thought to herself. “Did she forget about my birthday??? She can’t forget, she’s my girlfriend right….. Maybe she’s busy….” She continued. “If she does forget, I swear that I will not be happy….. I’ll never kiss her again…..” Risako thought to herself.

After Risako and Airi arrived at the town, both of them went to the mall. But Risako was feeling a bit weird. Airi told her that she has some shopping to do. But Airi didn’t even buy anything. After they have entered a few store, Risako finally decided to ask Airi.

“Airi-chan, you said that you have many things to buy….. But we have been walking into every shop in this mall and you didn’t even buy anything…….” Risako asked as she raised one of her eyebrow.

Airi knew that Risako was starting to become suspicious. She quickly thought about something to keep Risako in the dark.

“I know, but I don’t find anything that takes my interest yet……” Airi replied Risako.

“Well, you better hurry and find something and or I will leave now!!!” Risako said to Airi. She was starting to feel irritated and impatient.

“Mou Rii-chan~~~ what’s wrong with you today???” Airi asked innocently even though she already knew what’ wrong.

“Nothing ok….. I’m just not in the mood for shopping or get out of the house…..” Risako answered.

“Alright then, I promise you that I will buy something from the next shop…..” Airi said to Risako. "And Momo-senpai better pay me back for it too……” Airi thought to herself.

Meanwhile, at Yurina house.

Maimi have just arrived at Yurina’s place with Mai. Her friends were shocked to see Mai.

“Maimi-chan, who’s this???” Asked Momoko.

“Oh, this is Mai….” Maimi answered Momoko. “And Mai, this is Momoko, and the tall girl is Yurina, the owner of this house, the one who’s hugging her is her girlfriend, Chinami and this is Nakky, Chisato, Miyabi and Saki….” Maimi continued as she introduced everyone to Mai.

“Domo…..” Mai said to everyone.

“So, where’s the birthday girl???” Asked Maimi when she realized that Risako wasn’t there.

“Airi-chan is taking care of her…… She’s taking her shopping…..” Momoko answered Maimi.

“Where are Erika and Maasa then???” Maimi asked again.

“At the kitchen, preparing the cake…..” Saki answered.

“Ooooo…. Ok, let me go and help them….. Mai-chan, you can stay with the girl ok…..” Maimi said as she walked towards the kitchen.

When Maimi arrived at the kitchen, she was very shocked with the scene that she just saw. Erika and Maasa were making out in the kitchen!!! Maimi smiled as she walked slowly and startled them.

“OOOOO…… so this is what you mean by preparing the cakes!!!” She shouted at Erika and Maasa.

Erika and Maasa were shocked and stopped their making out session right away. Maasa glared at Maimi and said.

“Well, can’t you give us some privacy???"

Maimi giggled at both of them and said.

“Maasa, you should know better than arousing Erika in the kitchen…..”

Erika blushed like mad as she hid herself behind Maasa.

“Stop it Maimi!!!” Erika said to Maimi.

“What’s wrong Erika-chan??? Hehehehe…… are you blushing???” Maimi asked with a smirked on her face. “I just hope that both of you didn’t ruin the cake…..” She continued.

 “The cake just fine!!!” Growl Maasa.

“Ok then, since I have disturbed both you, why don’t you let me finish with the cake while both of go find an empty room or something…….” Maimi said as she winked at Maasa.

Maasa cheeks turn red as she pulled Erika with her.

“Fine then…..” she said and left with Erika.

Maimi just giggled at them and thought.

“Man, that is one traumatic experience….. Not every day you can catch your best friend while she’s making out…… Erika and Maasa are so busted….” Hehehehehe….

While Maimi was busy preparing the cake, Mai was busy being bullied by Yurina and the others.

“So Mai-chan, are you dating Maimi???” Yurina asked Mai.

Mai felt her cheeks were turning red from the unexpected question.

“No I’m not!!! We’re just friends…..” Mai said in defense.

“Oh really??? Then why are you blushing???” Chinami asked Mai this time.

“Of course I will blush!!!” Mai said. “Maimi-chan!!! Help me!!! Your friends are bullying me!!!” Mai shouted for Maimi’s helped.

Maimi heard the shout and she quickly ran towards Mai and hugged her.

“Come on guys!!! Don’t bully my friend like this!!!” Maimi said to the girls.

“Oooooo……… look at that….. How sweet….. Maimi, the knight in shining armor come to save her princess…..” Saki said as she giggled.

Maimi blushed and shouted.

“You guys better stop or I will destroy the cake!!!!”

“What??? You can’t do that Maimi, I will haunt you forever!!!” Momoko warned Maimi.

“Then, you better help us Momo, called Risako already, the cake is already finish…..” Maimi said to Momoko.

“Ok, ok……” Momoko said as she stops the others and texted Airi.

Back to Airi and the starting to get very, very mad and irritated Risako…..

“Airi-chan, I want to go home now!!! I’m tired of waiting for you to buy something!!!” Growled Risako.

“Damn….. Rii-chan is so serious this time…. What should I do now……” Airi thought to herself.

“Airi-chan, do you heard me??!!!” Risako said as she punched Airi’s shoulder lightly.

Airi just stared at Risako for moment, she still thinking how to make Risako stay with her there. Suddenly, her phone rang. Momoko have texted her!!!

“Airi-chan, everything is ready….. :twothumbs Take Rii-chan here now!!!”

Airi stared at the message for a while as she thought about how to get the angry and annoyed Risako to Yurina’s place.

“Who’s that Airi-chan???” Asked Risako.

“Ooooo, it’s Yurina-chan……” answered Airi.

“What does she want???” Risako asked again as she raised her eyebrow.

“She needs help!!!” Screamed Airi. “She said something about Chii-chan fell from the stairs and collapsed or something…..” Airi lied to Risako and hope that she bought it.

“Great, exactly what I need on my birthday….. Another problem…..” Risako said to herself.

“Let’s go Rii-chan!!!” Airi said as she pulled Risako hand and headed towards Yurina’s place.

“Do we have too???” Risako asked Airi. She was getting annoyed by the fact that nobody remembered her birthday and giving her problems instead.

“Of course we have too….. Chii-chan could be badly injured….” Airi said again.

“Ok, ok……” Risako said as she reluctantly followed Airi.


Title: Re: Promise
Post by: abok on May 08, 2010, 10:06:49 AM
new chapter have arrived!!!! :)


Chapter 11

Momoko was moving back and forth now. She was extremely nervous while waiting for her lovely and adorable girlfriend. The other girls were starting to get a terrible headache when they watched Momoko.

“Momo, you really need to chill…..” Maimi said as she walked towards Momoko and patted her shoulder.

“How can I chill Maimi, I’m sure that Rii-chan is very upset with me right now because I didn’t even wish it to her yet……” Momoko said to Maimi.

“Momo-chan, don’t worry too much ok….. Maybe she’s angry right now, but I think, she will be very happy after she got here….. You have work very hard to plan this surprise party…..” Erika said to Momoko.

Momoko sighed and sat down. She knew that the girl was right. She just hoped that Risako would like this surprised.

Airi was getting nervous right now. Both of them were very close to Yurina’s place now. She was getting a little afraid right now. Half of her felt very excited while the other half felt very nervous. “What should I say to her when I get there??? Should I call her Maimi-chan or Yajima??? Oh Kami-sama, please help me today….. I’m gonna need a lot of courage and nerves…..” She said to herself as she prayed that God will be on her side today.

“What’s wrong Airi-chan???” Risako asked when she realized that Airi was lost in her thought.

“Huh??? Nothing….. I’m just thinking about something…..” She said as she smiled at Risako.

“About what???” Risako asked in confusion.

“Ah nothing….. It’s not important….. Don’t worry Rii-chan….” She answered Risako.

“Airi-chan, you know that you can tell everything right…..” Risako said as she stopped Airi by holding her hand.

Airi sighed and she looked into Risako eyes.

“What will you do when you say something bad about the one you love the most and it makes the one you love cry???” Airi asked Risako.

“Hmmm…..” Risako mumbled as she started to think about Airi question. “Well, if you don’t really mean what you said, you just apologize to that person….. If that person really loves you, they will understand…..” Risako continued. “But why do you ask Airi???” She asked Airi again.

Airi hold Risako hands and smile sweetly at her. “Thank you Rii-chan….. You really help me a lot….. U are a very good friend!!!” She said as she hugged Risako.

Risako smiled as she stroke Airi’s back gently.

“I’m glad that I could help….” Risako said.

Both of them continued their journey to Yurina house after that. When they arrive at Yurina’s house, Airi rang the bell.

“They’re here!!!” Screamed Momoko. She was starting to have panicked attack.

“Relax Momo, now, everybody hide….. Let me get the door….” Yurina said as she walked towards the door.

When Yurina opened the door, she could see the irritated face of Risako. Yurina smiled and asked Risako innocently.

“Why the long face Rii-chan???”

Risako kept pouting as she answered Yurina’s stupid question.

“Nothing…. So where’s Chii-chan??? Is she alright???”

Yurina stared at Risako in confusion. “What are you talking about Rii-chan???” She asked Risako.

“Don’t ask me, you’re the one that sent the message to Airi……” Risako replied.

“What….” Yurina said but before she could finish, Airi cuts her off.

“You said that Chii-chan fell from the stairs right Yurina-chan???” Airi said as she winked at Yurina and put on her “just go along” face.

Yurina finally gets what Airi was saying and nodded.

“That’s right Rii-chan!!! I really need your help right now!!!” Yurina said as she grabbed Airi and Risako hands and led them inside.
 
“Gesh!!! Both of you sure acting weird today…..” Risako growled.

When the three of them reached the living room, Momoko and the others jumped out from their hiding and screamed.

“Happy Birthday Rii-chan!!!!!!”

Risako was surprised. She just froze at the spot and still looked a little confused. She looked towards Airi and she saw Airi was smiling at her.

“Happy birthday Rii-chan!!!” Airi said as she patted Risako’s head.

“You know about this???” Risako asked as she stared at Airi.

“Well, Momo-senpai asked me to take care of you while she and the others get ready…..” Airi explained herself.

Momoko walked towards Risako and hold her hands.

“I never forget your birthday baby girl…….” She smiled sweetly at Risako.

Risako felt her tears coming and hugged Momoko.

“Thanks Momochi!!!! I love u so much!!!! I thought you forget!!!! But you don’t…” she cried as she said it to Momoko.

“Don’t cry my sweet baby girl…..” Momoko said as she wiped out Risako tears and leaned in to kiss her.

The girls cheered both of them loudly while Maimi took the cake out.

“Happy birthday Rii-chan….” Maimi said as she patted Risako’s head.

“Thanks Maimi-nee……” Risako smiled as she hugged Maimi.

After Risako blew the candle, she went to Airi and gave her the first slice of the cake. That’s when Airi realized the person standing next Maimi. Airi went to Nakky and Chisato and asked them.

“Who’s that standing besides Yajima-san???”

“Ooooo….. That’s Maimi-chan’s friend…. Mai…..” answered Nakky.

 “But I got a feeling that she’s more than that to Maimi…..” Chisato added.

“What do you mean Chisa???” Asked Airi. She felt like her heart just stopped beating she heard Chisato said that.

“Well, I don’t know….. Maybe I was wrong….. But I’m just guessing….. hehehehehe….” Grinned Chisato.

Airi moved away and sat on a chair. She started to think about that girl. And she’s starting to get angry. “Who does she think she is??? Trying to steal my Maimi…..” she said to herself. “Well, there’s no way I’m going to let Maimi fall into her hand!!! Maimi’s mine!!!” She said as she was getting very angry. She felt like going to Mai and beat the crap out of her. “Relax Airi, maybe she’s just a friend….. Just ignored her and focus on your mission today…..” She said to herself as she tried to calm down.

One hour after that, everyone started to vanish. Momoko took Risako to Yurina’s room because she wanted to give Risako her present and something “extra”. So did the other couples. They all just vanished and went somewhere to be alone.
Airi knew that this was the chance that she looked forward too. She quickly got up and went to find Maimi. After walking around the house for a few minutes, she heard Maimi’s voice at the kitchen. She quickly went to the kitchen and her excitement just kept rising. When she reached the kitchen, she was about to called Maimi when she saw something. Something that she never thought she would saw.

“It can’t be…..” She said to herself as her tears were running fast from her eyes.

Title: Re: Promise
Post by: Mikitty_Ayaya on May 08, 2010, 11:56:51 PM
oh, these chapters were so intense. airi is suffering on how  to express your apologies to Maimi. it´s  cute as airi has strong feelings for Maimi. Risako poor, she thinking that everyone forgot her birthday, Momoko was very tender with her surprise for Risako. Mai-chan Oohhhh, she´s too  bad  ...
poor Airi ...   :cry:
What is Hagiwara planning? What did Airi see?

next chapter.   :inlove:  :)
Title: Re: Promise
Post by: abok on May 10, 2010, 01:25:14 AM
new chapter!!!! :cow:

Chapter 12

Airi was running through the street. Her tears won’t stop from falling. She just ran and kept on running. Even though her legs were killing her right now, she didn’t care anymore. She just wanted to go home right now. She kept running until she reached her house. When she finally reached her house, she quickly ran to her room and locked the door. She was lucky because nobody was home at that time. So, nobody can saw her tears. She wrapped herself in her blanket and continued to cry. Her heart was hurt again. But this time, she felt like her heart was reaped to pieces. While she was crying, she recalled back what she saw at Yurina’s house.

-Airi FLASHBACK-

“Maimi-chan, I’m going to make you mine this time……” she thought to herself as she went to the kitchen when she heard Maimi’s voice there. “I hope you will forgive me and accept me as your best friend again…… and maybe more than friend…. I hope…..” she continued mumbling to herself as she walked to the kitchen.

She was about to called Maimi when she saw something. Something that she never thought she would saw.

“It can’t be…..” She said to herself as her tears were running fast from her eyes.

Maimi was facing Mai at that time so, she can’t see Airi. Maimi was leaning towards Mai and their distant from each other was getting smaller. Then, Airi saw Mai hugged Maimi waist as she leaned in to kiss Maimi lips.

Airi can’t watch anymore. Her hurt was aching. And she thought that she just saw Mai was smirking at her. Airi ran and she didn’t say anything to anyone as she left Yurina house.

-END OF FLASHBACK-

“Why am I so stupid??? She doesn’t love me…… She didn’t even care about me….” She said to herself as she was crying very badly. She crawled over to the drawers and she took Maimi’s picture. She stared at the picture as she continued to cry. The longer Airi stared at the picture, the more she could feel the anger inside of her. She could feel her hatred rose inside her chest and from the bottom of her heart. The more she remembered about what happened at Yurina’s house, the more hatred she felt.

“You’re the reason I’m suffering!!!! You have crushed my heart a long time ago, and you doing it now too!!!” She muttered to herself in hatred. “I am a fool for loving you, I am a fool to think that you care and love me!!! What am I thinking trying to apologize to you!!!” She continued. “I hate you Yajima Maimi, I really hate you now!!! And this time I will make sure that nothing will change that fact!!! I will never allow your fake tears to cloud my judgments again!!!” She screamed as she tore up the picture of Maimi that she was holding. “From now on, I will make sure that I have no memory of you anymore!!!” She continued to mumble.Airi continued crying until she fell asleeps.

Rii-chan was just finished her alone time with Momoko. She went to the living room with Momoko and tried to find Airi.

“Erika-chan, where’s Airi???” Risako asked Erika who was sitting on Maasa laps.

“Oh~~~, I saw her running just now without saying anything…..” Erika answered Risako while she caressed Maasa’s cheek.

Momoko put her arms around Risako.

“Maybe she has something to do baby girl…..” Momoko said to Risako as she leaned toward Risako and whispered to her.

“Don’t worry, I will walk you home….. We still not finish you know…..”

Risako blushed like crazy when she heard Momoko said that. She smiled as she whispered back to her.

“Of course we not Momochi……”

While the girls were busy chatting, Maimi and Mai came back from the kitchen.

“Well, look whose back….. Are both of you done having fun with each others???” Said Yurina.

The other girls turned to look at both of them. They giggled a little bit when they saw Maimi and Mai were blushing.

“Stop it Yurina, we are just talking!!!” Maimi said as she covered her face with her hand.

“Yeah right, then why does both of you are blushing???” Teased Nakky.

“Everyone will blush when they are tease like that…..” Mai shouted.

“Stop being mean you guys……. Hehehehehe……” Maasa said as she giggled.

“Where’s Suzuki-san???” Mai asked.

“Oh, she went home already……” Erika replied Mai.

“Is it so???” Maimi said as she lowered her head. “I guess she’s still not feeling comfortable with me around…..” She said to herself. “Airin, what should I do to make you happy with me again???” Maimi continued. She sighed heavily.

“Maimi-chan, what’s wrong???” Mai asked when she saw Maimi was lost in her own world.

“Oh nothing, are you ready to go home Mai???” Maimi lied as she distracted Mai by asking the question.

“I’m ready, let’s go home now…… I’m really tired…..” Mai answered Maimi.

Maimi smiled as she informed the others that she and Mai will take their leave now. The other girls nodded and hugged both of them before they leave.

“It’s a pleasure to know you Mai-chan….” Chinami said as she smiled.

Mai smiled back at her as she said.

“The pleasure is all mines too….. You guys are so cool!!!”

The other smiled as they watched Maimi and Mai walked away.

“So, do you think Maimi-nee is dating Mai???” Risako asked the others when Mai and Maimi was gone.

“I don’t think so Rii-chan, you know how Maimi is…….” Momoko replied.

“You’re right Momo….. But if they are together, it’s a good thing too……” exclaimed Chisato.

The others just nodded as they continued doing their owned things.

Meanwhile….. At Mai and Maimi’s side.

“Thanks for today Maimi-chan….” Mai said as she opened the door of her house.

“It should be me thanking you Mai, you really help me a lot today……” Maimi replied as she hugged Mai.

After she hugged Mai, Maimi turned around and started to walk towards her house when she heard Mai called her. She turned her head and looked at Mai.

“I’m sorry for my behavior at the kitchen today too…..” Mai said.

“It’s ok Mai, forget about it ok…..” Maimi said as she waved at Mai and continued to walk. She stopped at the park and sat on a bench.

She started to think about Airi again. Maimi didn’t know that her relation with Airi will be much worst after today.

Mai entered her room with a satisfied smile on her face. Her plan works. Airi saw what she was about to do to Maimi. And it’s even better, because she saw Airi tears before she left. Mai lied on her bed as she took her phone and called that person again.

“It is done……” she said to the person she was calling.

“Really??? That’s great…… how was she???” Asked the person.

“She cried before she left that house……” She replied.

“Good….. I just hope you know what you’re doing……” The person said to Mai with a great concerned in her voice.

“Don’t worry, just trust me ok……” Mai replied.

“Ok then, but remember, not too extreme ok…..” The person reminded Mai.

“Ok….” She replied as she hung up her phone.

Mai smiled and thought to herself. “Maimi-chan, you are so lucky to have a friend like her….. And Suzuki, what will you do now??? If you don’t make a move, you will lose Maimi forever….. hahahahahaha……”
Title: Re: Promise
Post by: oddball on May 10, 2010, 03:13:25 PM
Ah classic misunderstading setup, nice twist tho, wonder who dosn't want Maimi and Airi together? do they know Mai has plans further than what they agreed? Could the even be a freind of Airi's trying to make her move on?

I like having questions to stories, makes them more fun, Good Job!
Title: Re: Promise
Post by: abok on May 11, 2010, 11:50:30 AM
@oddball: well.... i can't answer that..... just wait ok..... hehehehehe

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new chapter!!!! :jphip:
Chapter 13

Airi woke up later that night. Her body was aching all over because of the running she did earlier. She got up slowly as she went downstairs and saw her mother was washing the dishes. She went to hug her mother and her mother was surprised. When she turned around to see her daughter, she was shocked to see her daughter eyes. Airi eyes were red, very red.

“What’s wrong dear???” Mrs. Suzuki asked her daughter.

“Nothing mom, I’m just having a headache….. That’s all….” Airi tried to lie to her mother.

Mrs. Suzuki smiled and led Airi towards the table. She sat down with Airi and patted her daughter’s head.

“Airi, I am your mother….. Don’t lie to me ok…. I know you just cry all day….” She said as she smiled to her daughter. “You can tell me…..” She said as she continued to pat her daughter’s head.

Airi smiled as she hugged her loving and caring mother. “I’m fine mom….. I cry because this headache is killing me……” She said to her mother.

Mrs. Suzuki sighed as she holds her daughter’s hand and said.

“Ok then, go and wash up first….. I will heat the food back…..”

Airi smiled and hugged her mother. After that, she went back to her room and took a bath. While she was bathing, she can felt her tears again. She tried to stop herself from crying and quickly finished her bath. After she ate, she came back to her room and took her school bag to finish her homework. Since she has already slept, she decided to finish her homework. When she went to her closet, she noticed the pictured of Maimi that she just tored up. She picked up the pieces of Maimi picture as she stared the picture again. Her tears were starting to form on her eyes again. She moved to her study desk and put the pieces on it. She opened her drawer and looked for a tape. “I didn’t hate this Maimi, I hate the new Maimi…..” She said as she pasted the picture back together. She placed the picture of Maimi beside her as she started to finish her homework. While she was doing her homework, she received a text from Risako.

“Airi-chan, are you ok???”

Airi smiled a bit as she replied the message.

“Yeah…. I’m just having a headache…. Sorry for leaving you there….”

“It’s ok……. Momochi walk me home….”

“Oh really??? Are you sure that she just walk you home???”

“Well, she staying here tonight……”

“Eww….. You guys are too much….”

“Hehehehe….. Airi, we’re going to watch movie tomorrow, would you like to come???”

Airi thought for a while. She didn’t want to go. She still hurt and she knew that her heart will hurt more if she saw Maimi and Mai again tomorrow.

“No thanks Rii-chan, I have something to do….”

“Are you sure???”

“Yup…. Have fun ok….”

“Ok…. See you at school!!!”

Airi continued doing her homework and after she’s done, she started to think about what she was going to do tomorrow. Finally she decided to go to the park that she and Maimi always went a long time ago.

The next day….

Airi slept until afternoon since she fell asleep at dawn. When she’s awake, she ran downstairs to eat lunch. Her mother already went out to buy groceries with her father. After she ate her lunch, she took a bath and she quickly went out her house. After a 15 minutes walked, she arrived at the park. She sat on a bench as she watched the view. Airi was very confident that she would never meet any of the girls today because she thought that they went to the movie with Risako and Momoko. While she was enjoying her view, suddenly she heard somebody was calling her name. Airi turned her head towards that person and she could feel that her anger was rising up again.

“Domo Suzuki-san…..” Mai said.

“Domo….” Airi answered her. “What the hell is she doing here???” She thought to herself.

“What are you doing here??? Maimi said that she and the girls are going to watch movie today…..” Mai asked Airi innocently. She already got a feeling that Airi was very furious with her, but she just ignored the fact.

“I have my own damn business today…..” Airi said as she was getting very irritated with this person.

“Ooooo~~~~ that’s not nice….. I ask you nicely didn’t I??? Why are answering me like I’m some kind of a bitch or something…..” Mai asked again. She was getting pleased with Airi respond. She wants to provoke Airi. It is part of her plan.

“Why the hell do you care??? Just leave me alone!!!!” Airi said as she stood up to face Mai. She can’t contain her feeling anymore. She hates Mai. She started to grasp her fist. She felt like she wants to punch Mai right now.

Mai moved closer towards Airi and whispered to her.

“Aww~~~ don’t tell me you hate me because Maimi-chan kisses me yesterday……”

Airi could feel Mai was smirking under her ears. She pushed Mai and shouted at her.

“Why should I care about her??!!!! She can do whatever she wants with you!!!” Airi said. Her whole body was trembling right now.

Mai kept on her smirking face as she continued mocking Airi.

“You can’t fool me Suzuki….. You like her don’t you??? hahaha~~~~ too bad because she’s already mine…… She enjoys being with me……
She like my lips and my body…..”

“Shut up!!!! Shut up!!!!” Airi screamed as her tears were pouring down her cheeks like the rain. She closed her ears as she fell down on her knees.

Mai walked towards Airi and said.

“Don’t you ever come close to Maimi again, or you will pay!!!! And next time, I won’t be so nice!!! Hahahahahaha……”

After that, Mai left. Left Airi crying alone there. Left Airi suffered there. Left her there as Airi felt her hurt was being torn apart again.......
Title: Re: Promise
Post by: oddball on May 11, 2010, 05:03:01 PM
Ok really, stop putting Airi through such emotional stress, I cant take it :cry:

Mai gets more and more evil, She must have her own agenda now rather than sticking to the plan of whoever decided for her to be a wedge between Airi and Maimi.

Airi just really needs to speak to Maimi, do it damm it! :banghead:!
Title: Re: Promise
Post by: Mikitty_Ayaya on May 12, 2010, 02:11:43 AM
I like it, really, really.    :wub:  :wub:  :wub:  :wub:
poor airi,  she´s suffering too, I never imagined it, that would be so cruel Mai-chan.  :twisted:
it´s amazing but this girl is destroying to suzuki-chan,  and apparently airi´s too  weak and vulnerable. 
and no doubt Maimi is a white dove there.  :nervous and she´s too clueless.

  :doh:  :doh:  :doh:  :doh:  :doh:
now I'm fearing for Maimi´s life. XD XD XD

maybe, airi want  to  destroy to maimi, for the suffering that she causing on her..
and Maimi don´t knows nothing.
poor maimi and airi.  :heart:
next chapter!!!!!  :heart:


Title: Re: Promise
Post by: abok on May 12, 2010, 08:08:03 AM
new chapter!!!!! XD


Chapter 14

Mrs. Suzuki was busy shopping when suddenly she encountered someone that she had not met for years. She wasn’t sure about that person at first, but after catching a good glimpsed of that person, she quickly went towards the person and greeted that person.

“Hello Yajima-san…..” She said.

Mrs. Yajima turned her heads toward the person that was calling her and she was surprised to see the person that was standing beside her.

“Suzuki-san!!! Is that you???” She said. Oh my god…… “how long has it been???” She continued as she hugged Mrs. Suzuki.

“7 years I think….. How’s your family doing now??? How’s Maimi-chan???” Mrs. Suzuki asked.

“My families are doing fine….. Maimi too…..” Mrs. Yajima said as she smiled. “Why don’t you come to our house next weekend, we have a lot of catching to do….. And so does our daughters…..” She continued.

“That’s a great idea; I think Airi will be happy to hear this…..” Mrs. Suzuki replied. “You still live at the same place right????” She asked Mrs. Yajima.

“Yes we do….. But, don’t tell our daughters yet…… Let us surprise them…..” Mrs. Yajima said.

“That’s a good plan!!! Ok then, see you next week!!!” Mrs. Suzuki said as she left.

Maimi and the others have just finished watching movie. Throughout the entire time, Maimi couldn’t focus on the movie or the girls. She just lost in her owned thought, thinking about Airi. She got a weird feeling about why Airi didn’t come to the movie with them. “Is she sick??? Why didn’t she come today???” She thought to herself the entire time. Erika realized this so she decided to help Maimi cleared her thought. Erika tugged Maasa shirt and whispered to her.

“Maasa-chan, could you please ask Rii-chan why Airi didn’t come to the movie with us today???”
Maasa nodded and asked Risako.

“Nee Rii-chan, where’s Suzuki-chan??? Why didn’t she come today??? Is she sick or something???”

Risako shook her head as she answered Maasa.

“No, she has something to do today….. Why do you ask Maasa-chan???”

“Oh nothing…… Just wondering……” Maasa said as she and Erika pondered towards Maimi and smiled at her. Maimi didn’t quite understand at first, but after she a while she got the message that Maasa and Erika tried to give to her. She smiled back at both of them as she started to shout.

“So, what are we going to do right now???!!! It’s still early you know…..”

“Why don’t we all go to the arcade???” Yurina gave them a suggestion. “It’s been a while since all of us go there and have some fun!!!”

She continued as she holds Chinami’s hand.

“Nice idea Yuri-chan!!!” Nakky said as she and Chisato nodded in unison.

Maimi, Risako and Momoko also nodded. Erika and Maasa also agreed. So together, hand in hand all of them walked towards the arcade. When they almost reached the arcade, Erika phone rang. She picked up her phone and talked to the caller. After a while, she hung up and told the girls that she and Maasa have another matters to attend too. The girls nodded and hugged both of them before they leave. After they have finished at the arcade, they decided that it’s time to go home. After saying goodbye to the girls, Maimi walked towards the park. She took out her phone and listened to C-ute song “Forever Love”. She loved that song. She loved the meaning of it. She also hoped that one day; she could sing that song to Airi. She sat under the tree that she used to sit with Airi a long time ago as she started to remember something that only she knew. Something that happened between her and Airi a long time ago. Something that even Airi didn’t knew.

-Maimi FLASHBACK-

Airi was sleeping over at Maimi house that night. After dinner, she and Airi stayed at her room and talked about many things until both of them fell asleep. Later that night, Maimi woke up because she heard someone was crying. She was scared at first but then, she realized that the one who’s crying was Airi. Maimi smiled as she patted Airi’s head. "Why are you crying in your sleep Airin???" She thought to herself.

"Don’t leave me Maimi-chan, I beg you……" Airi suddenly spoke.

Maimi was shocked because she thought that Airi has awake but then she realized that Airi was just talking in her sleep. Maimi leaned towards Airi and whispered in her ear.

"I will never leave you Airin, I promise….. You are my everything…. I love you……."

"I love you too Maimi……" she heard Airi murmured in her sleep.

When she was about to sleep again, she turned to face Airi and she was attracted by the smaller girl who was sleeping beside her. She couldn’t contain her feeling anymore. She leaned closer as she kissed Airi’s lip. "Her lips is so soft….." she thought to herself. When she was about to pull her lips away, Airi pulled her into a hugged and return the kiss. Maimi froze. She thought that Airi was awake. But, when Airi, pulled away, Maimi can saw that the girl was still sleeping. She sighed a bit and smiled as she hugged the girl and closed her eyes again.

-END OF FLASHBACK-

"Do you really mean what you said back then Airin??? Do you really love me??? Even though it was just a dream, but you were dreaming about me….. Weren’t you….." she  thought to herself as she watched the sunset.
Title: Re: Promise
Post by: abok on May 25, 2010, 10:02:19 PM
i am so sorry for the delay...... :nervous

here's the new chapter.... :roll:


Chapter 15

It was a dark and scary alley. Airi was walking alone as she looked carefully at her surroundings. She had been walking for a long time now and she doesn’t know where she might end up. She just knew that she had to keep walking. The longer she walked, the more she could feel that her heart was racing. She was very scared right now. She doesn’t know where she was and how did she ended here. Suddenly, she heard a growling sound behind her. She turned her body around and she saw a dark figure was chasing after her. Airi screamed and ran quickly. But no matter how fast she was, she couldn’t outrun the dark figure. The dark figure was getting closer and closer to her. At that very moment, Airi hand was grabbed by something. When she turned her head, she realized that the dark figure was already grabbing her hand. Airi struggled to release herself from it, but the harder she tried, the gripped became tighter and tighter. Airi screamed for help but nobody was there to help her.

“Let me go!!!” Screamed Airi.

The dark figure didn’t responded. It just kept gripping Airi and started to pull her into the darkness. Airi was feeling very frighten now. She started to cry as her struggled became more and more hard. But, everything that she was useless against the dark figure. Airi was becoming week. Her energy was gone. But she still tried and screamed for help.
Suddenly, she saw someone was walking in front of her.

“Help me!!!” She screamed. “Please help me!!!” She continued as she hoped that the person that was walking in front of her would come and help her to get away from this evil dark figure. The person turned towards Airi and rushed to help her. When the person was becoming closer to her, Airi finally realized who it was. It was Maimi.

“Maimi-chan, help me!!!” Airi screamed out her lungs.

Maimi ran towards Airi as she held out her hand for Airi to grab. As Maimi was getting closer, Airi started to feel that her surrounding was starting to light up again. The gripped that came from the dark figure was also becoming weaker and weaker. Airi used the remaining energy in her body if the was any of it to struggle herself from the dark figure. She could fell the dark figure gripped was starting to lose. She stretched her hand in ordered to take Maimi’s hand. She was much relived right now. Even though she still couldn’t reach Maimi hand, she knew that she would be saved by her angel. As their hand was getting closer, suddenly another figured shows up behind Maimi and pulled her away from Airi. Airi was shocked. When the figured came to view, Airi could clearly saw who it was, Mai.

“What the hell are you doing Mai??!!! Don’t touch my Maimi!!!” She screamed towards Mai.

But Mai just stared at her with her cold eyes and kept pulling Maimi away from Airi.

“She’s mine Suzuki, what makes you think that she’s gonna save you??? Or maybe even love you???” Mai said as she glared at Airi who was struggling to free herself from her capture. “Stop your stupid thought Suzuki because you were just wasting your time!!!!” She continued.

As Maimi and Mai figured got further and further away. The darkness that have faded was starting to get strong again. The dark figured was gaining it’s strength back and Airi couldn’t fight it anymore. As the darkness slowly swallowed Airi, her tears ran faster through her cheeks.

“Help me…..” She murmured to herself. “Please help me…..” She continued. “Maimi-chan!!! I love you!!! Please save me!!!! Don’t leave me alone!!!!” She shouted as the darkness finally swallowed her completely.

“Maimi-chan!!!!!” Cried Airi as she woke up from her sleep and she was sweating and gasping heavily. She hugged her knee tightly as she was starting to cry. The dream was back again. The dream that she has forgotten for a long time, was returning to her. But, the ending was different because, when she dreamt of it a long time ago, Maimi would save her and hugged her tightly. But now, the dream has turned into a nightmare. Because now, another person has shows up in her dream, the person who has taken Maimi away from her, Mai.

Meanwhile, at Mai’s house……
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“Are you sure you know what you’re doing Maimai???” Asked a person who was sitting on Mai’s bed.

“Of course I know what I’m doing……” Mai answered the person.

“But, I am getting worry now….. I think that you just taking the matter into your own hand now…..” The person said to Mai. “Why the hell did you say that kind of things to Suzuki??? You don’t even discuss it with me…..” The person continued.

Mai walked towards the person who was sitting on her bed and put her hands on the person’s shoulder.

“Don’t worry okay…. I know what I’m doing….. I want to make Suzuki mad by thinking that Maimi love me and I want her to be depressed…..” Mai said as an evil smirked was form on her lips.

“But, what if things go wrong???” The person asked again.

“Just trust me okay….. You know that my plans always work…..” Mai answered as she gave the person shoulder a squeeze.

“Okay…. But I really hope that you know what you’re doing……” The person said as she sighed heavily.

Title: Re: Promise
Post by: Mikitty_Ayaya on May 26, 2010, 07:55:07 AM
this was a good chapter, airi is suffering too much.
even she has nightmares, I want to read the meet of airin and maimi!  :wub: mai-chan is so cruel with airin.  :angry:

 
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“Help me…..” She murmured to herself. “Please help me…..” She continued. “Maimi-chan!!! I love you!!! Please save me!!!! Don’t leave me alone!!!!” She shouted as the darkness finally swallowed her completely.

“Maimi-chan!!!!!” Cried Airi as she woke up from her sleep and she was sweating and gasping heavily. She hugged her knee tightly as she was starting to cry. The dream was back again. The dream that she has forgotten for a long time, was returning to her. But, the ending was different because, when she dreamt of it a long time ago, Maimi would save her and hugged her tightly. But now, the dream has turned into a nightmare. Because now, another person has shows up in her dream, the person who has taken Maimi away from her, Mai.

airinnnnnnnnnnnnnnn   :cry:  poor airin  :( airin has so much to say  :( and maimi dont  knows nothing.  :cry:  :(
I want to read the meet of airin and maimi!   :cry:

for airi, maimi is her angel!  :heart:   :wub:

next chapter please.  :cry:  :cry:
Title: Re: Promise
Post by: oddball on May 26, 2010, 11:15:19 AM
Poor Airi :cry:

Now she is having nightmares alswell!!!

Man the person that 'hired' Mai to split up Maimi and Airi kinda knows how far Mai is going but still wont stop her :angry:

I hope Maimi can figure out why Airi is upset with her!?! :banghead:
Title: Re: Promise
Post by: abok on May 26, 2010, 09:57:28 PM
@mikitty_ayaya : please dont be mad at Mai. she's just doing her job....hehehehehehe

@oddball : what makes you think that the person that hired Mai want to split them???hehehehehe.....

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new chapter!!!! :fap

Chapter 16

For the whole week, Airi was avoiding everyone. She only talks to Risako and Momoko. Everyone in the group was starting to feel get upset with Airi’s behavior.

“Rii-chan, where’s Airi-chan???” Chinami asked Risako during their lunch break.

Risako sighed heavily as she answered Chinami.

“She’s eating her lunch at the school garden. She doesn’t want to join us today….”

“What is wrong with her anyway??? She’s avoiding us now….. She doesn’t want to become our friend anymore???” Saki asked as she hugged Miyabi’s waist.

Risako put her lunch down as she look towards her friends. She sighed again and answered.

“I don’t know what’s wrong with her guys….. Whenever Momochi and I ask her, she didn’t say anything….. I think she has a problem…. But she doesn’t want to share it with any of us…”

“I think you’re right Rii-chan, she seems different now…. She doesn’t smile anymore…. And she’s always spacing out when we’re at class….” Nakky cuts Risako as she lean towards Chisato.

“Rii-chan, maybe you should ask her about it….. Among all of us, you’re the closest one to her….. Maybe if you ask about it when both of you are alone, she will open up to you…..” Yurina said to Risako.

“Yuri-chan, don’t tell Rii-chan to do that!!! Momo will be jealous…..” Erika said as she and Maasa giggled.

“What??!!! I’m not a jealous type okay!!!” Momoko said as her cheek turn red.

The other girls giggled at Momoko’s reaction. Momoko hugged Risako and kissed her cheeks.

“My baby girl will not cheat on me…. I trust her…..” Momoko said as she turned towards Risako and hold her hands. “I think Yuri-chan is right baby girl….. Maybe you should spend some time alone with Airi-chan and ask her about it….” She continued.

Risako squeeze Momoko hand lightly and smiled.

“I’ll try my best Momochi…..” Risako said.

Among all the girls, Maimi was the only one who doesn’t pay any attention to the girls. When she heard about Airi’s condition, her heart ached.

“What’s wrong with Airin……” She asked herself. “I want to meet her now and ask her……” She continued to lost in her owned thought.

Erika and Maasa sense that Maimi was mentally not with them. Erika moved to sit besides Maimi and nudged her. Maimi jumped a little bit as she turned her head towards Erika and saw a huge grinned on Erika’s face.

“What???” Maimi asked Erika.

Erika leaned closer towards Maimi and whispered to her.

“I know what you’re thinking Maimi-chan…… You want to go see her right???”

Maimi blushed and turned her head towards Maasa that was sitting in front of her and Maasa also have a huge grinned on her face. Maimi could sensed that she’s in trouble right now because when both of them grinned at the same time, that means they were planning something horrible, very very horrible.

“Maimi-chan, you should go back to class right now…. Your homework is still not done right….” Maasa said as she winked towards Maimi.

“What the hell are both of you thinking!!!!” Maimi shouted to herself.

“What??? Maimi-chan still not finishes her homework???” Momoko said as she looked towards Maimi curiously.

“Yeah Momo-chan….. Maimi still have a few homework that she needs to do…. So she have to return to class now…..” Maasa said to Momoko.

Maimi knew that she couldn’t swing her way out from this one. She sighed heavily as she got up and told the girls.

“Maasa’s right Momo…. So I see you guys later….”

Maasa and Erika smiled towards each other as both of them looked towards Maimi who was walking away now.

Maimi walked towards the school garden as she cursed Maasa and Erika.

“Damn it Maasa, damn it Erika…. How could you do this to me….. You guys are so gonna regret this…..” She said to herself. “But, thanks to both of them, I could go and see Airin….” She smiled to herself.

When Maimi arrived at the school garden, she could see Airi who was sitting beside the pool. Maimi heart was pounding like crazy as she walked closer towards Airi. There was nobody around that time, so Maimi was feeling a little bit reliefed. Maimi stopped her step when she was behind Airi and patted her shoulder.

“Suzuki…. Are you alright???” Maimi asked. She didn’t want Airi to get mad at her if she called her Airin again.

When Airi turned her head towards Maimi, Maimi was very shocked to see Airi. She was crying. Her eyes were very red. Maimi quickly moved herself and kneel down in front of Airi.

“What’s wrong Airin?? Why are you crying???” Maimi asked. She was becoming very worried now. But there was no response coming from Airi. Maimi put her hands on Airi’s shoulder as she shakes her a little bit.

“Talk to me Airin!!! Why are you crying??? Are you sick??? Did someone hurt you????” Maimi asked.

Suddenly Airi leaned towards Maimi and hugged her as she started to cry like crazy on Maimi’s shoulder. Maimi froze on the spot for a few second but then, she quickly returned the hug. Maimi stoke Airi hairs as she tried to calm her down.

“Please don’t leave me Maimi-chan…..” Airi said. “I beg you… Please don’t leave me….. I love you…… I need you….. Please don’t leave me!!!!” She continued.

Maimi heart was filled with joy right now. Airi love me!!! She screamed to herself.

Maimi hugged Airi tighter as she whispered into her ears.

“I will never leave you Airin, I promise…. I love you too….”

“You lie!!!!” Airi suddenly shouted as she pushed Maimi away.

“You’re lying Maimi-chan!!! You don’t love me!!! You’re lying!!!” And with that, Airi ran leaving Maimi behind and confused.

“What just happen??? What does she mean that I am lying to her??? I love her…. I really love her!!!” Maimi said to herself.
 
Title: Re: Promise
Post by: oddball on May 27, 2010, 01:13:42 AM
Oh no poor Airi ....again :bleed eyes:

she just donsn't trust Maimi anymore, think she needs to get that back ASAP!

wonder if maimi will figure out what Maimai is up to?
Title: Re: Promise
Post by: Mikitty_Ayaya on May 27, 2010, 08:07:11 AM
good chapter,   :) i like.   :)

poor airi...  :cry:


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“Suzuki…. Are you alright???” Maimi asked. She didn’t want Airi to get mad at her if she called her Airin again.


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“What’s wrong Airin?? Why are you crying???” Maimi asked.

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Why are you crying??? Are you sick??? Did someone hurt you????” Maimi asked.
these are some curious questions ...

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Did someone hurt you????” Maimi asked
this someone are you,  maimi-chan.


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Suddenly Airi leaned towards Maimi and hugged her as she started to cry like crazy on Maimi’s shoulder. Maimi froze on the spot for a few second but then, she quickly returned the hug. Maimi stoke Airi hairs as she tried to calm her down.

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“Please don’t leave me Maimi-chan…..” Airi said. “I beg you… Please don’t leave me….. I love you…… I need you….. Please don’t leave me!!!!” She continued.

 :wub:

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“I will never leave you Airin, I promise…. I love you too….”

 :wub:

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“You lie!!!!” Airi suddenly shouted as she pushed Maimi away.

“You’re lying Maimi-chan!!! You don’t love me!!! You’re lying!!!” And with that, Airi ran leaving Maimi behind and confused.

 :cry:  :cry:

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“What just happen??? What does she mean that I am lying to her??? I love her…. I really love her!!!” Maimi said to herself.
 


 :(

it´s  surprising, airi  can cry on shoulders of her.
on the shoulders of this girl which is responsible for her pain, I need to read another chapter, this chapter was very short   :P  and I'm so intrigued, airi always flees.
next chapter.  :)
Title: Re: Promise
Post by: abok on May 27, 2010, 10:05:52 PM
here's the new chapter!!!! :D

Chapter 17

"Finally they confess their feeling to each other……" said a person who was sitting behind a tree at the school garden. "I need to tell Maimai about this….." She continued as she walked away from the park carefully to avoid Maimi from noticed.

At Airi side….

After she ran from Maimi, Airi regretted about the confession that she made. But she could felt a warm feeling in her heart after she heard what Maimi had told her. She was about to continue to her class when she suddenly thought of something.

“I can’t go back to the class yet…. If Rii-chan find out that I am crying, she will ask a lot of question….”

Airi turned back and walked towards the toilet. When she arrived there, she quickly washed her face and stared at her own image in the mirror.

“I really wish that Maimi-chan was telling me the truth back there….” She said to herself. “She said that she loves me…. But I know that she was lying…. She already have that stupid bitch called Mai with her…..” She continued as she stroked her hair. “Even that bitch said that she and Maimi are together….. Why would she lie to me anyway….. She don’t even know me…. And between Mai and Maimi, I trust Mai more…. Maimi already lie to me once…. And to think that she want to lie to me again by saying that she love me and will never leave me….. I am smarter than that…. There’s no way she can fool me twice…..” She sighed as she turned off the pipe and walked towards her class. But, even though she thought that Maimi was lying to her, deep inside her heart, she wished that what Maimi told her was true. Deep inside the broken of heart of hers, she wished that Maimi could heal her heart and took all of the pain that she was suffering away. And deep inside the lonely heart of hers, she prayed that the person that came and save her from this loneliness is no other than an angel named Yajima Maimi whom she loved and cherished.

When Airi arrived at her class, Risako, Nakky and Chisato were already there.

“Airi-chan, where have you been???” Asked Chisato who was busy playing with Nakky hair.

“Yeah Airi-chan, where have you been??? When Chisa, Nakky and I go to the school garden, you’re not there…..” Risako said.

Airi smiled as she walked towards her friends and apologized to them.

“I’m sorry guys….. I need to go the bathroom just now….. That’s why I left early….”

Risako pulled Airi closer towards them and said.

“Airi-chan, what’s wrong with you??? Why don’t you hang out with us anymore??? Do you have any problems??? You can share it with us
you know…. We will help you as much as we can….”

“Rii-chan’s right Airi….. Even though we’re not very close to you, all of us are worry you know….” Nakky said to Airi.

Airi bows her head down and her eyes started to tears.

“Gomen minna…. I just need sometime alone that’s all….. I am really sorry if I cause you guys trouble….” Airi said as she tried to hold her tears.

Upon seeing Airi’s condition, Nakky, Risako and Chisato pulled her into a group hug.

“Don’t cry Airi-chan…..” Risako said as she wiped out Airi’s tears. “We won’t force you to tell anything okay…. When you are ready, you can tell us okay….” Risako continued.

“Thank you guys…..” Airi said as she smiled to her friends. “But I will never be ready to tell you guys about anything….. Because, if you
guys know….. Things will become more complicated….” Airi thought to herself.

Meanwhile at Maimi’s side….

Maimi could not concentrate in her class anymore. She mind kept replaying the words that Airi have said to her before she leaves.

“You’re lying Maimi-chan!!! You don’t love me!!! You’re lying!!!”

“What do you mean Airi…. I don’t understand…. What do you mean that I am lying to you???” Maimi thought to herself. “What does she mean??? Why didn’t she trust me??? I love her with all my heart….. She’s my angel…. But why did she think that I am lying???” She kept thinking to herself.

Maasa noticed the change that happened to Maimi and she was starting to get very worried. Maasa patted Maimi’s shoulder and asked her.

“Maimi, is something wrong???”

Maimi turned her head towards Maasa and answered her.

“Nothing’s wrong Maasa…. Don’t worry…”

“Don’t lie to me Maimi….. It’s about Suzuki-chan right???” Maasa said as she stared at Maimi.

Maimi sighed and nodded her head.

“Yeah… it’s about her….” Maimi said.

“Do you want to talk about it???” Maasa asked.

“Maybe after school….. Can you and Erika come to my house after this??? I really need your help…. I am very confused right now….” Maimi said as she sighed heavily.

“Of course Erika and I can go to your house after this…… We will try our best to help you…” Maasa said as she smiled and squeezed
Maimi’s hand.

“Thanks Maasa…..” Maimi said with a smile.

“No need to thank me Maimi…. That’s what friends are for….” Maasa said.

After school, Maimi, Maasa and Erika walked towards Maimi’s house. When they reached Maimi’s house, Maimi lead them towards her room. But before they reached her room, Maimi heard her mother was calling for her. Maimi told Maasa and Erika to wait for her in her room. Maasa and Erika nodded as they continued to Maimi’s room.

Maimi went to her mother in the kitchen and hugged her mother.

“What’s wrong mom???” She asked her mom after they pulled away from their hug.

Her mother smiled at her and said.

“This Saturday, we will have a visitor…..”

“Huh??? Who is it mom???” She asked in confusion.

“It’s a secret dear….. You’ll know this Saturday….. And you have to be here too…. So make sure that you don’t have any plan this Saturday…….” Her mother answered her and her head.

“I hope that you are not trying to set me up with anyone mom….” She said as she stared at her mother.

“Ohhh~~~~ of course not dear…..” Said her mother.

Maimi leave her mother and walked towards her room. When she opened the door, she was surprised to see the scene in front of her.

Maasa was lying on top of Erika and she was kissing her hungrily. Maimi could hear Erika’s moan as she was returning Maasa’s intense kiss. Maimi knew she has to stop her best friends before they started to get it on in her room and more importantly, she needs to save her bed. Maimi slammed the door loudly and that startled Maasa and Erika. Erika was blushing like crazy as she tried to hide behind Maasa. Maasa just looked towards Maimi innocently and said.

“Sorry….. hehehehe…..”

“Well, if you guys want to get it on, I suggest you guys do it someplace else….” Maimi said as she tried to put on a very serious face. But, the serious face could only hold for a few minutes as Maimi started to giggled like crazy. After Maimi have calmed herself down, she sat beside Maasa and told her and Erika everything that happened at the school garden. After Maimi have told them what happened, the three of them just stood in silent and all of them were thinking about the reason. A few moments after that, Erika broke the silence.

“Why do you think she call you a liar Maimi-chan???” Erika asked Maimi since she could not come up with any idea.

“I don’t know Erika…. That’s why I’m so confused right now…..” Maimi answered as she sighed.

“Do you think it’s because of Mai-chan???” Maasa asked suddenly.

“What makes you say that Maasa???” Maimi asked in confusion.

“Well, Suzuki-chan did saw you and Mai during Rii-chan’s birthday party right….. Maybe she thought that both you are together or
something….” Maasa said.

“That’s crazy Maasa….. Mai and I are just friend…..” Maimi said in defense.

“It’s not crazy Maimi…… Maybe what’s true……” Erika said to Maimi. “Let me asked you this…. What do you feel about Mai-chan???” Erika
asked Maimi.

Maimi was shocked when she heard Erika’s question and she quickly answered it.

“Nothing…. I just love her as my sister….. I would never feel anything romantic towards her and so will she….”

“What makes you so sure Maimi???” Maasa asked Maimi.

“Mai-chan already has a girlfriend…. She told me herself…..” Maimi answered Maasa.

“Hmmm…… Then what could be the reason…..” Said Erika as the three of them stood in silence again.
Title: Re: Promise
Post by: oddball on May 27, 2010, 11:55:58 PM
ohh sneaky! so Mai has said to Maimi she has a girlfriend, thoi perhaps se does?

lovig Maa i this she seems to hae figured out what the problem is.

Maimi stil cant rememer when she failed to turn up for Airi i the past, has she fogotten?

Title: Re: Promise
Post by: Liben on May 29, 2010, 07:21:50 PM
This is the best H!P kids I have ever read!
I don't really know why but I'm actually enjoying this fic.
At first I couldn't imagine Erika and Maasa together, but know I think I got really used to it xD
Anyway, I wonder how Maimi and Airi will react at that secret meeting their mothers will do for them.

I can figure out who is the one who's helping Mai. But maybe I'm wrong, so I'd better shut up.

Continue updating, please!
Title: Re: Promise
Post by: Mikitty_Ayaya on May 29, 2010, 10:46:23 PM
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"Finally they confess their feeling to each other……" said a person who was sitting behind a tree at the school garden. "I need to tell Maimai about this….." She continued as she walked away from the park carefully to avoid Maimi from noticed.

oh,  a secret spy.  :huhuh




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After she ran from Maimi, Airi regretted about the confession that she made. But she could felt a warm feeling in her heart after she heard what Maimi had told her. She was about to continue to her class when she suddenly thought of something.

“I can’t go back to the class yet…. If Rii-chan find out that I am crying, she will ask a lot of question…

airi, you´re smart girl.


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“I really wish that Maimi-chan was telling me the truth back there….” She said to herself. “She said that she loves me…. But I know that she was lying…. She already have that stupid bitch called Mai with her…..” She continued as she stroked her hair. “Even that bitch said that she and Maimi are together….. Why would she lie to me anyway….. She don’t even know me…. And between Mai and Maimi, I trust Mai more…. Maimi already lie to me once…. And to think that she want to lie to me again by saying that she love me and will never leave me….. I am smarter than that…. There’s no way she can fool me twice…..” She sighed as she turned off the pipe and walked towards her class. But, even though she thought that Maimi was lying to her, deep inside her heart, she wished that what Maimi told her was true. Deep inside the broken of heart of hers, she wished that Maimi could heal her heart and took all of the pain that she was suffering away. And deep inside the lonely heart of hers, she prayed that the person that came and save her from this loneliness is no other than an angel named Yajima Maimi whom she loved and cherished.

Poor Airi, her thoughts have a fight with her heart.  :(
but, she loves maimi.  :heart:

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When Airi arrived at her class, Risako, Nakky and Chisato were already there.

“Airi-chan, where have you been???” Asked Chisato who was busy playing with Nakky hair.

“Yeah Airi-chan, where have you been??? When Chisa, Nakky and I go to the school garden, you’re not there…..” Risako said.

Risako was very friendly  with airi, well, i think everyone.  :)

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Airi smiled as she walked towards her friends and apologized to them.

“I’m sorry guys….. I need to go the bathroom just now….. That’s why I left early….”

Risako pulled Airi closer towards them and said.

“Airi-chan, what’s wrong with you??? Why don’t you hang out with us anymore??? Do you have any problems??? You can share it with us
you know…. We will help you as much as we can….”

“Rii-chan’s right Airi….. Even though we’re not very close to you, all of us are worry you know….” Nakky said to Airi.

Airi bows her head down and her eyes started to tears.

“Gomen minna…. I just need sometime alone that’s all….. I am really sorry if I cause you guys trouble….” Airi said as she tried to hold her tears.

Upon seeing Airi’s condition, Nakky, Risako and Chisato pulled her into a group hug.

“Don’t cry Airi-chan…..” Risako said as she wiped out Airi’s tears. “We won’t force you to tell anything okay…. When you are ready, you can tell us okay….” Risako continued.
aww... so cute and sweet ^-^
airi has good friends  and they worry about she .  :wub:


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“Thank you guys…..” Airi said as she smiled to her friends. “But I will never be ready to tell you guys about anything….. Because, if you guys know….. Things will become more complicated….” Airi thought to herself.
you´re very discreet with her feelings,  airi.  :P

Maimi poor, she´s thinking in the words of airi.
airi´s hard to understand, right maimi? and this is even more difficult because  she hasn´t time for the explanations, airi always runs and runs.  :doh:


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“Why do you think she call you a liar Maimi-chan???” Erika asked Maimi since she could not come up with any idea.

“I don’t know Erika…. That’s why I’m so confused right now…..” Maimi answered as she sighed.

“Do you think it’s because of Mai-chan???” Maasa asked suddenly.

“What makes you say that Maasa???” Maimi asked in confusion.

“Well, Suzuki-chan did saw you and Mai during Rii-chan’s birthday party right….. Maybe she thought that both you are together or
something….” Maasa said.

“That’s crazy Maasa….. Mai and I are just friend…..” Maimi said in defense.

“It’s not crazy Maimi…… Maybe what’s true……” Erika said to Maimi. “Let me asked you this…. What do you feel about Mai-chan???” Erika
asked Maimi.

Maimi was shocked when she heard Erika’s question and she quickly answered it.

“Nothing…. I just love her as my sister….. I would never feel anything romantic towards her and so will she….”

“What makes you so sure Maimi???” Maasa asked Maimi.

“Mai-chan already has a girlfriend…. She told me herself…..” Maimi answered Maasa.

“Hmmm…… Then what could be the reason…..” Said Erika as the three of them stood in silence again.


maimi isn´t observant.  :sweatdrop:  you´re very distracted.  :doh:
  the moment about erika and massa was funny XD

next chapter abok-chan.  :)




Title: Re: Promise
Post by: abok on May 29, 2010, 11:25:38 PM
i have put three chapter here..... enjoy..... :D


Chapter 18


“Airi, hurry up!!!” Mrs. Suzuki shouted. She’s waiting patiently for her daughter at the car.

“Alright, alright…. I’m coming….” Airi said as she walked towards her mom with a pout on her face. “Where are we going anyway???” She asked her mother. “You still want to keep it a secret???” She continued as she stared at her mother who was smiling sweetly at her.

“If I tell you now my dear, it will ruin the surprise and trust me, you will love it…..” Mrs. Suzuki answered Airi as she drove her car towards their destination.

“I hope we are not going to someone who wanted to marry me or something because if we do, I will be very upset mom……” Airi said as she pouted in defeat. “Where are we going??? This is so unlike her…..” Airi asked herself as she remembered what happened when she came home a few days ago.

Airi FLASHBACK

Airi walked towards her house after she accompanied Risako, Chisato and Nakky after school. Airi didn’t want to go at first. But after seeing how disappointed her friends were, she changed her mind. They went to a café and spent their time there eating and talking about random things. But she knew that her friends just wanted to make her told them her problem, especially Risako. She seems very disappointed when they separated and Airi knew that her worried friend was upset with her. Upset because Airi didn’t want to share her problems with the rest of the group. Airi sighed heavily as she stared at the big blue sky.

“I sorry guys…. But this is my problem…. I can’t afford to watch all of you fight because of my problem with Maimi-chan…… I am very sorry….” She said to herself.

When Airi arrived home, she was greeted by her suddenly too happy and too sweet mother. Airi knew right away that her mother was planning something. But she decided to act like she didn’t know anything.

“What’s wrong mom??? You seem awfully happy today…. “She said to her mother as she put her shoes on the rack.

“What are talking about dear??? You know that I’m always happy….” Mrs. Suzuki said as she went to her daughter and hugged her.

“Yeah right…. I know you are planning something mom….” She thought to herself. “But, by the look of your face, it’s like you have win a
lottery or something…..” Airi said to her mother as she pulled away from the hugged.

“Oh~~~ it’s not like that dear….. I just want to ask you a favor….” Mrs. Suzuki said as she stared her daughter.

“What favor?? Do you want me to cook today mom???” Airi said as she cocked her eyebrow a little.

“Of course not dear…” Mrs. Suzuki said as her patted her daughters head. “I just want you to be free this Saturday…..” She continued.

“Why??? What’s wrong mom???” Airi asked her mother in confusion.

“Well, I want you to accompany me this Saturday…. I want to go somewhere…..” Mrs. Suzuki said with a grinned on her face.

“Where are you going and why do I have to go with you???” Airi asked again. She was starting to feel a little bit uneasy with this event.

“It’s a secret dear….. But I promise you it will be worth it…. Just come with me okay???” Mrs. Suzuki said as she tried to convince her daughter to come with her.

Airi sighed weakly and just nodded her head. Mrs. Suzuki smiled and hugged Airi again.

END OF FLASHBACK

Airi looked at her mother and sighed before she turned her head away to enjoy the view outside.

Meanwhile, at Maimi’s house....

Maimi was busy tidying her room at the time. She’s doing it half heartedly because she was forced by her lovely, caring and sweet mother to do it.

Maimi FLASHBACK

Maimi was not in a very a good mood today. She had been forced by her mother to wake up earlier than she usually does during weekend and she had to help her mother tidying the house. The mood got worse when she was forced to clean and tidied her room up.

“Why do I have to clean my room mom???” Maimi asked her mother feeling unsatisfied.

“Just do what I told you dear….. It’s important you know…. Just go and fix your room after that come down to the kitchen to help me…..” Mrs. Yajima said calmly as she already knew that her daughter was starting to get irritated.

“But mom……” Maimi tried to protest.

“Not but dear…..” Mrs. Yajima cuts her daughter off. “If you refuse, I will cut 40% of your allowance for this month…..” Mrs. Yajima continued calmly.

Maimi sighed in defeat as she walked slowly to her room and said.

“You are so unfair mom….. And you are also acting weird….. But, I tell you now mom, if it turns out you are trying to hook me up with someone, I’ll kick his butt so hard that will make him regret coming here for the rest of her life…..”

Mrs. Yajima knew right away that her daughter was not only irritated, but she was also upset and annoyed. Mrs. Yajima just smiled at her daughter who was walking towards her room and thought to herself.

“You will not regret doing this my dear….. You will be happy instead….”

END OF FLASHBACK

Maimi sighed as she lied down on her bed. After half an hour cleaning, her task was done now. She stared at the ceiling as she thought about her mother weird behavior today.

“I think the one that coming to our house today must be very important…. Otherwise, mom would never bother herself to make this house spotless and she’s also cooks a lot too….. but, whoever it is, it’s better not coming here to check me up or something or I swear to God I will be very piss….”

After that, Maimi went to bathroom and clean herself up before the “guess” arrived.



Chapter 19

As they were nearing their destination, Airi was starting to feel very uncomfortable. She knew the road. She recognized the road. Even after 7 years, she still remembered the road. She looked towards her mom who was driving as she prayed a little in her heart. She hoped that what she thought was wrong. She wanted it to be wrong.

“Maybe we’re just passing by…..” She said to herself while she tried to remain calm. “Please Kami-sama…. Please don’t make mom stop at her place…. Please… I don’t want to see her anymore…. Please….” She continued.

But, Kami-sama was not on her side today. Her mother stopped exactly at the place she was feared. Mrs. Suzuki patted Airi shoulder as she smiled sweetly at her daughter. Airi looked at her mother as she tried to hide her real feeling at the time. It was becoming a nightmare for Airi now. But she knew that if she ran or showed her true emotions to her mother, this problem will became more complicated.

“We’re here dear…..” Mrs. Suzuki said as she patted Airi shoulder.

Airi didn’t respond to her mother. She just nodded her head as she slowly opened the door and stepped out of the car. Airi walked slowly behind her mother.

“I’ve told you that you will not regret coming here with me today….” Mrs. Suzuki said as she was smiling to her daughter. She was starting to feel weird when she saw her daughter didn’t give her any respond but the only thing that she could thing was maybe her lovely daughter was nervous considering the fact that they have not met each other in 7 years. She holds her daughters hand and squeezed them lightly.

“Don’t worry okay…. I know that you haven’t seen Maimi-chan for a long time, but I know that she must be very happy when she see’s you…..” Mrs. Suzuki said as she walked towards the door with her daughter and pressed the bell.

Meanwhile, on Maimi’s side…..

Maimi was just finished her bath as she quickly went to her closet and looked for her cloth. After she got dress, she sat on the chair besides her bed as was starting to think about what happen in school recently. What happened to her this week was too much to handle, especially Airi’s confession and the fact that Airi was calling her a liar.

But before she could be lost in her owned thought, she heard the bell rang and a few seconds after that, she heard the melodious voice of her mother calling for her to come down. Maimi quickly ran downstairs but when she caught the glimpsed of their guess, she froze on the spot. She almost fell from the stairs but thanks to her quick reflexes, she managed to balance herself.

“Airin…..” Maimi said. She was just so confused at the moment and that have made her speaking abilities failed her as she couldn’t said another word.

Mrs. Yajima and Mrs. Suzuki smiled at each other. If their daughters weren’t there, they might have high five each other.

After exchanging their bows, all of them went straight to the kitchen to have their lunch.

During lunch, only the voices of Mrs. Yajima and Mrs. Suzuki can be heard. Airi and Maimi tried hard not to exchange glances at each other’s.

After they have eaten, all four of them went to the living room. Maimi was about to sit when her mother suddenly said.

“Maimi dear, take Airi-chan to your room…. I’m sure that both of you have a lot of things to talk about…..”

Maimi couldn’t say anything right now. She turned towards Airi and she saw that Airi was looking towards her too.

“What are you waiting for Maimi??? Go now….” Mrs. Yajima insisted.

Maimi sighed heavily as she nodded and said.

“Okay mom…. Let’s go Airin……”

Airin reaction was exactly the same as Maimi. She sighed heavily and nodded.

When both of them went upstairs, Mrs. Yajima and Mrs. Suzuki smiled at each other.

“Looks like our plans work Yajima-san….” Mrs. Suzuki said.

“Yeah, when two mothers plan something, nothing can go wrong….” Mrs. Yajima said with a little chuckled as she sat on the couch. “But
i’m feeling a little bit weird….. Or maybe I should say concern….” She continued as she stared at Mrs. Suzuki.

“What do mean by concern Yajima-san???” Mrs. Suzuki asked.

“Don’t you notice both how both of them were acting Suzuki-san??? They don’t even greet or talk to each other……” Mrs. Yajima answered her.

“Well, maybe they are feeling a little bit awkward…. That’s all….. I mean, it has been 7 years since they meet each other again…..” Mrs.
Suzuki said with great confidence.

“I guess you’re right….” Mrs. Yajima replied as she continued to chat happily with Mrs. Suzuki.

Meanwhile, at Maimi’s room…….

The silence was killing both of them. Ever since they have arrived inside Maimi’s room, they just stayed in silent. Airi was sitting on the floor while Maimi was sitting on her bed. After a few more minutes of awkward silence, Maimi decided to break the ice.

“How’ve you been???” She asked. But after that, she felt like kicking herself in the head for that stupid question.

Airi answered the question without looking at Maimi.

“I’ve been better….”

Then, there was an awkward silence again.

Without Airi knows, Maimi was looking at her from a time to time. Maimi was lost in her owned thought as she stared at Airi’s cheek, face
and lips.

“Why are you staring me???” Airi asked when she realized that Maimi was staring at her with a dreamy looked on her face.

That question startled Maimi a little bit as she turned her head towards the other side and blushed.

“Nothing…. I’m sorry….” Maimi said.

Then again, the silence came back.

Maimi stared towards the window for a while until she knew what she needs to talked with Airi. She turned towards Airi and moved to sit in front of her on the floor. Airi was a little bit surprised but she didn’t move.

“Airin….” Called Maimi.

Airi looked towards Maimi who was sitting in front of her as she replied.

“What???”

“About the confession the other day…..” Maimi said as she could feel her heart beat faster than the bullet train.

“What about it???” Airi asked. She didn’t show any emotion towards Maimi as she stared at Maimi with her brown eyes.

“I’m glad that you love me…. I really do…. Because, I love you too….” Maimi said as she smiled and moved her hand towards Airi.



Chapter 20

“I’m glad that you love me…. I really do…. Because, I love you too….” Maimi said as she smiled and moved her hand towards Airi.

When Airi heard the word I love you from Maimi, she was becoming furious again, she could feel her anger and her blood boiled inside
her as she slapped Maimi hand before they touched her. After she slapped Maimi’s hand, she stood up and glared at Maimi. For the first time in Airi’s live, she felt like kicking someone so hard in the head so that they would stop being an idiot. But, Airi still managed to restrain herself from doing that to Maimi who was looking at her with a very shocked expression on her face.

“Love me??!!! She shouted. How many times do you think you want to lie to me???!!!!” She said as she glared angrily at Maimi.

Maimi was shocked when she heard Airi said that again. And this time, she want the reason.

“What do you mean by I am lying??? I never lie to you… I really love you!!!” Maimi said as she put her hands on Airi shoulder.

“Don’t touch me!!!!” Airi yelled as she pushed Maimi onto her bed. “You have lied to me seven years ago and you are still doing it now!!!”
She continued. “Why do you say you love me when you already have your stupid bitch besides you??!!!” Airi continued in anger.

“What the hell are you talking about Airin!!!!! You’re not making any sense!!!!” Maimi yelled back to Airi as she glared at her.

“Not making any sense???!!! I’m talking about your bitch Mai!!!!” Airi said. She could fell her body trembled now. But she doesn’t care
anymore. She’s going to settle everything today.

“Mai??!!! She’s just my friend!!! And don’t you dare call her that!!!! She’s a nice person!!!” Maimi shouted at Airi, she was back on her feet now. And every second she stood, her knee became weaker and weaker.

“Nice???” Airi said sarcasticly. “She’s a demon and I hate her!!!!” Airi shouted back.

“I told you don’t talk about her like that!!!” Maimi growled as she walked closer to Airi and raised her hand to slap her. Fortunately, Maimi
didn’t do it. “I’m sorry Airin, I didn’t mean to…..” She said. She was feeling very guilty right now.

“Why do you stop??!!!” Airi yelled. “Do it!!! Slap me!!!” Airi challenged Maimi. “Just do it!!! I did mock your girlfriend right!!!” She continued.

“She’s not my girlfriend!!!! She’s just a friend!!! A very good friend!!!” Maimi yelled in defence. “There’s only one person that I love, and
that’s you!!!!” She shouted.

“Stop saying you love me Maimi!!!! I don’t trust you!!! You just a liar!!! You are a cruel person who likes to play with someone heart!!!!” Airi snapped. Suddenly, Airi noticed a photo on Maimi’s table, the photo of her. She pushed Maimi onto her bed again as she reached out for the photo.

“Who give you the right to keep this photo??!!! What if your girlfriend sees it???!!!” Airi shouted as she tore up the picture.

Maimi eyes widen as she stood back up and grabbed Airi’s hand.

“What the hell are you doing??!!!” Maimi shouted and she pushed Airi hard to floor.

“Argh!!!!” Airi yelped as she rubbed her elbow.

“Airin!!!” Maimi quickly went to Airi and hold her. “I’m sorry, I didn’t mean to push you…..” She apologized.

“Get away from me!!!!” Airi pushed Maimi as she ran out of Maimi’s room.

“What have I done…..” Maimi said as her tears starting to fall.

At the same time…..

“Are you sure she has confessed???” Mai asked the person who was calling her.

“Yeah…. I heard them….” The person replied.

“Hmmm….. It’s ok…… everything’s going as plan…… Call me later, I have date with Kankan right now….” Mai said as she shut her phone.
Title: Re: Promise
Post by: oddball on May 30, 2010, 02:07:35 AM
hmm poor Airi, when willshe talk to Maimi about the incident 7 years ago?

why cant Maimi still not remember?

seems bizzare but MaiMai seems alot nicer in the last bit of the final chapter you posted!
Title: Re: Promise
Post by: Liben on May 30, 2010, 11:47:48 AM
¿KanKan? Then the other one must be...
...
¿Yoshizawa?  :lol: I really don't know.
And Airi starts to make me feel uncomfortable, why doesn't she trust Maimi? She's so cute, even me would trust her!
Title: Re: Promise
Post by: Mikitty_Ayaya on May 31, 2010, 09:19:38 PM
I really enjoy these chapters too, especially when airi asked God's help, and she wish that her assumptions were wrong. everyone of us, could feel the tension of both on some moments, airi was very cruel, poor maimi.
maimi and  airi are  hurting their  hearts  among themselves, suzuki showed too much irritation and  hatred for maimi.  :cry:
 Maimi was so kind and sweet with airi.  :cry:
airi  just pushed to maimi, suzuki  just showed hate and irritation.
I really enjoyed these chapters, feelings and emotion.  :)
next chapter.  :)


Title: Re: Promise
Post by: abok on June 01, 2010, 08:03:09 PM
Update!!! :roll:

@oddball: you think Maimai is nice??? wait till you read this chapter.... :twisted:

@Liben:Yoshizawa is not in this fics..... :smhid

@mikitty_ayaya:enjoy this new chapters..... :D

Chapter 21

“Get away from me!!!!” Airi pushed Maimi as she ran out of Maimi’s room. Airi dashed towards the stairs and she saw her mother and Mrs. Yajima were on their way up. Airi decided to ignore them as she continued her way down stairs but when she was about to pass her mom, her hand was gripped by someone. Airi stopped and looked towards the person who holds her hands and she saw that the person was staring at her with a great concerned in her eyes.

“Let go of me mom…..” Airi said as she was trying so hard not cry in front of her mother. She was already feel bad about making her mother concerned.

“Where are going you dear??? What’s all that noise we’ve been hearing??? Did you and Maimi-chan have a fight???” Mrs. Suzuki asked her daughter. Her voice had reflected how concerned she was towards her daughter.

“Please let me go mom, I beg you…. I don’t want to be here anymore…. Please just let go of me mom….” Airi begged her mother with tears in her eyes. It was becoming difficult to shield her emotion now. She could feel her whole body was trembling because of the tears that she tried to keep from falling.

“I will not let go of until you answer me Airi….” Mrs. Suzuki calmly said. She knew that something was bothering her daughter now. She turned her heads towards Mrs. Yajima and signaled her to go to Maimi’s room. Mrs. Yajima nodded as she understands the gesture that came from Mrs. Suzuki as she continued towards her daughter’s room.

Mrs. Suzuki turned to face Airi again after Mrs. Yajima left as she patted her daughter’s shoulder. “Now tell me what happen dear….. Mrs. Yajima and I heard both of you were screaming and yelling at each other….” She said to her daughter softly as she hoped that her daughter will told her what happen.

Airi didn’t say anything. She just stood there in silence as her tears started to fall from her eyes.

Mrs. Suzuki noticed the tears that were falling from her daughter’s cheek and she quickly wiped them off. “Airi dear,  if you don’t tell me what’s wrong, how can I help you…. Now come on, just tell me…..”

But, before Mrs. Suzuki could finish her sentence, suddenly Airi pushed her hand away and shouted.

“I said let go me mom!!!!”

Mrs. Suzuki was shocked. She never saw this side of her daughter before. She tried to hold Airi again but Airi just avoided her by continuing her way towards down stairs. When Airi reached down stairs, she turned towards her mother and said.

“This is all your fault mom….. you shouldn’t bring me here in the first place…..”

“But I thought you want to see Maimi-chan, you miss her a lot don’t you???” Mrs. Suzuki asked her daughter as her eyes were starting to get wet.

“I hate her!!! I don’t want to see her!!!!” Airi said as she turned and dashed towards the door. Mrs. Suzuki quickly ran towards her daughter and holds her hands again.

“I’m sorry dear…. Where are you going….” Mrs. Suzuki said as her tears fell down from her cheeks.

“Let me go mom….. I need some time to think…. I need to be alone right now…. I’ll see you at home later…..” Airi said towards her mother and with that, she left Maimi’s house and ran towards the park crying.

Meanwhile on Maimi’s side…..

“What have I done…..” Maimi said as her tears starting to fall.

Maimi looked towards the picture that has been torn up by Airi earlier. She moved herself towards the picture as she bent down to collect the pieces of it. With each of the pieces she collected back, her heart felt like it was being stabbed and ripped at the same time. It was painful. Now Maimi realized that she and Airi will never be together. Airi hated her. Airi called her a liar. Airi didn’t trust her.
Maimi sat on her bed and cried again. “Why did I yell at her???” She said to herself. “Why did I shout at her???” She continued as her tears kept falling down like the rain. Suddenly she heard Airi screamed.

“I said let go me mom!!!!”

Maimi knew right away that her mother and Mrs. Suzuki heard their argument and she knew that her mother was probably on her way to her rooms. Maimi quicly stood up and went to the door to close and locked it but before she could, her mother arrived.
Mrs. Yajima was shocked to see the condition that her daughter was in. She was crying and there were pieces of picture in her daughter’s hands. Mrs. Yajima quickly went to hug her daughter but Maimi stepped back to avoid her hugs.

“Get out….” Mrs. Yajima heard her daughter said.

“Maimi dear…. What’s wrong with both of you???” Mrs. Yajima asked as she ignored what her daughter said to her before.

“I told you to get out mom!!! This is all your fault!!! Why do invite them here???!!!” Maimi yelled as she went towards her mother and gently pushed her out of her room. Maimi closed the door and locked it. She sat behind the door of her room as she continued to cry.

Maimi could hear the voice of her mother from inside. Her mother was knocking her door and tried to persuade her to open the door. But Maimi just sat behind her door crying. She ignored her mother as she buried her face to her knee. “I’m sorry mom….. But I need to be alone right now….” Maimi mumbled to herself as she continued crying.

Mai was walking at the park that evening. She was smiling widely to herself because she’s going on a date with the person that she loved and cherished the most in this world, Arihara Kanna. Besides that, she was also planning her next step on her plan. After the called that she received earlier from the girls who hired her, she was beginning to draw a new plan.

“Who knows that Suzuki will confess to Maimi-chan this fast…. Now that will ruin my real plan…” She said to herself. “I know that “oneechan” doesn’t agree with my real plan, but I need to do it or it will take longer and harder….. I need to crush Suzuki first if want my plan to succeed…” She continued her thought.

All of a sudden, Mai detected a person that was sitting under a tree not too far from her. An evil smirked appeared on her face as she quickly went towards that person. As she was getting closer, she noticed that the person was crying like crazy. Her evil smirked widen as she continued her way to the person.

“Just the person I want to see, and she is crying too….. I’m gonna have fun this evening….” She thought to herself and screamed towards that person.

“Oi!!!!”

Chapter 22

After she left Maimi’s house, Airi went to the park and sat under a tree. She continued to cry as buried her face onto her knee. She was hurt again. Her heart shattered in pieces when she tore up her own picture that was on Maimi’s table and her heart shattered more when she yelled at her mom. Her mom, the person that understand her the most in the world. The person that always make her happy. She knew that her mother was trying to make her happy by taking her to Maimi house by surprised but her mother doesn’t know anything and it was Airi’s own fault to hide it from her. While Airi was lost in her sad and hurtfull thought, she heard that somebody was screaming at her.

“Oi!!!!”

Airi turned her head towards the rude person who was shouting at her and her widened when she saw the person that was standing in front of her. Airi closed her eye for a moment and wipe off her tears. She stood up and glared at the person who was standing in front of her right now. The person that she hated the most in this universe, the person that have stole her happiness, stole her dream, and the person that have stolen her Maimi away from her.

“What’s with that look Suzuki???” Mai asked in a mocking tone.

“Get lost!!!” Airi screamed at Mai.

“Why should I???” Mai asked again as she ignored the glared that she was receiving.

“I don’t want to fight with you today Mai!!!” Airi yelled. The anger had come back inside her and if the person that she hated doesn’t go away, she might explode.

“Fight???” Mai said in a sarcastic tone. “You don’t have the guts to fight me Suzuki….” Mai continued. She already aware of Airi condition right now, but as always, she decided to ignored it.

Airi just stood there in silence. Her blood was boiling right now. She clenched her fist as she glared at Mai.

“I heard that you have confessed to my Maimi….. I’ve already warned you, if you….”

But, before Mai was able to complete her sentence, she was slapped very hard by Airi. Mai placed her hand on her cheek as she glared at the girl that just slapped her. “How dare you slap me Suzuki!!!” Mai screamed as she moved forward to return the favor that Airi just gave her. But, before she could do anything, Airi jumped on her and tackled her down.

Airi sat on Mai stomach as she continued her assault on Mai. She slapped and punched Mai very hard as she screamed.

“It’s all because of you!!!! You stupid bitch!!! Because of you, my heart hurts!!!! You have stolen everything from me!!! You have stolen Maimi from me!!!!!”

Mai was trying her best to blocked Airi’s attack. She couldn’t even counter Airi’s attack because the only thing she could do was blocking the punch and the slap from reaching her face. “Stop it Suzuki!!!” She shouted. Her entire body was in pain now. She tried to get Airi off her body, but Airi was just too strong.

Airi was letting every bits of her frustration out on Mai. She hated her, she hated her. That is all that she could think of at this moment. When she noticed that Mai was blocking her attack, she pulled Mai’s hair as she slammed Mai’s head on the ground. Airi was crying right now. She was very angry and her heart was being ripped to pieces. And it was all Mai’s fault. And today, Mai have to pay for everything that she have done to Airi.

Suddenly, a kicked landed on Airi face. The kick was so strong that it forced Airi to shift from above Mai to beside her. Airi was bleeding now. The kick was strong enough to make her collapsed, but she didn’t. Airi turned her heads towards her attacker and saw a girl glaring at her as she helped Mai to get up.

“What do you thing you are doing to her bitch??!!!” Shouted the girl who kicked Airi.

Airi couldn’t speak right now. She just stared at Mai and the girl who saved Mai as she holds her cheeks.

“I’m asking you a question!!!” The girl shouted at Airi again.

The girl advanced towards Airi to continue her attack, but fortunately, Mai hold her wraist and pulled her into a hugged.

“It’s ok Kankan…. I’m okay now….. Let’s just go….” Mai said to Kanna and pulled her away. Mai lips were bleeding from the attack that she just received from and Kanna immediately wipe it off.

“I’m sorry for being late Maimai….” Kanna said as she hugged her girlfriend waist and kissed her cheeks. “I swear, if I see her again, I’ll make her regret touching you!!!” Kanna said in anger.

“It’s okay……” Mai said as she smiled weakly at her and leaned on her for support. “Just forget about her okay…..” Mai continued.

After both of them were out of sight, Airi feel onto her knee. She held her cheeks and wipe off the blood that was coming from her lips as she tried to get up again and slowly walked home.

Title: Re: Promise
Post by: oddball on June 03, 2010, 12:03:32 AM
Bloody Hell!  :shocked Airi gone Nuts :x

So kanna dosnt know about Mai's plan and the mystery persons plan?

Poor Maimi she still isnt sure why Airi is mad at her but it seems as tho she is giving up

Maimi looked towards the picture that has been torn up by Airi earlier. She moved herself towards the picture as she bent down to collect the pieces of it. With each of the pieces she collected back, her heart felt like it was being stabbed and ripped at the same time. It was painful. Now Maimi realized that she and Airi will never be together. Airi hated her. Airi called her a liar. Airi didn’t trust her.
Maimi sat on her bed and cried again. “Why did I yell at her???” She said to herself. “Why did I shout at her???” She continued as her tears kept falling down like the rain.

 :cry:






Title: Re: Promise
Post by: abok on June 03, 2010, 10:34:40 AM
@oddball: airi dont go crazy.... she's just become violent for while....


Chapter 23 is here...... :thumbsup

Chapter 23

Risako was walking with Momoko towards the cafeteria for lunch hand in hand. Momoko was talking with Momoko as she interwined their fingers together. After a few seconds talking, Momoko realized that Risako was not listening to her. She turned towards her baby girl and she she noticed that the girl seems to space off. Risako was showing a concerned expression and at the same time, it also reflected sadness.

Momoko leaned closer to her girlfriend as she tip toed to kiss Risako’s cheek. Risako jumped a little bit because of what Momoko did as she realized that she had been lost in her own thought. Risako turned her head towards Momoko and she saw that her peach girlfriend was smiling sweetly at her.

“What’s wrong baby girl??? You seem sad and trouble……” Momoko asked her girlfriend as she squeezed Risako hand gently.

“Nothing Momochi….. I’m fine…. Don’t worry….” Risako replied Momoko as she gave her a weak smile.

Momoko sighed as she stopped and faced Risako towards her.

“Rii-chan….” She said slowly. “I know something is bothering you…. Don’t lie to me ok….. I’m your girlfriend and when there’s something is bothering you, I know….” Momoko continued as she stared at Risako with a great concern in her eyes.

Risako stared at the floor snd sighed.

“It’s about Airi-chan…..” Risako said weakly.

“What about her??? I’ve not seen her in school at all this week….. Is she sick???” Momoko asked Risako.

Risako sighed heavily as she pulled Momoko towards the school garden. When both of them arrived at the school garden, Risako lead Momoko towards a bench as both of them sat and Momoko waiting for Risako to continue their discussion. Risako took a deep breath and sighed before she started to tell Momoko what happen in her class today.

Risako FLASHBACK
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Risako, Nakky and Chisato were very worried. Airi haven’t been to school at all this week and today was already Friday. Risako tried to call Airi for a few hundred times but no luck. Airi didn’t answered Risako called at all. Risako also tried to text Airi with hope that her best friend will replied, but it was hopeless also because Airi didn’t respond at all.

This morning Rika-sensei walked to their class with a very sad expression on her cute face. All students in her class were starting to wonder what’s wrong with their teacher including Risako, Nakky and Chisato. When their lesson was ended, everyone have the permission to go out to lunch except for Risako. Rika-sensei asked her to stay for a while because she has something to important to tell her.

Risako signaled her Nakky and Chisato to head towards the cafeteria first. Nakky and Chisato nodded as both of them leave the class hand in hand.

“What’s wrong Rika-sensei??? You seem so sad today…” Risako asked Rika-sensei when she sat in front of her.

“I have a message for you….” Rika-sensei slowly said.

“Message??? What message??? From who sensei???” Risako asked Rika-sensei in confusion.

“It’s from Suzuki-chan…..” Rika-sensei said as her face fell. “She’s going to transfer…..” Rika-sensei continued.

“What??!!!” Risako said as she stood from the chair. “What do you mean sensei??? She’s just transfer here right??? What happen???” Risako asked Rika-sensei.

Rika-sensei sighed and answered Risako.

“I don’t know why Risako-chan, her mother told me that she have problems and she want to transfer to another school…. Risako-chan, from what I’ve heard, you are very close to Suzuki-chan, maybe you could visit her and ask her the reason yourself…. And perhaps you can persuade her to stay on this school as well….”

Risako sighed and nodded weakly as she slowly walked out of her classroom to meet Momoko.
END OF FLASHBACK
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“Airi-chan is going to transfer??!!!” Momoko asked in shocked.

Risako just nodded weakly as she stared at the floor again. She was very sad to hear about this. And Airi didn’t even tell her anything. Momoko realized the sad expression of her girlfriend as she hold Risako chin and stared into her eyes as she said to her.

“Baby girl, I want you to go Airi house today…. I’ll cancel our date for today….”

“But Momochi, you have been planning this date since yesterday…. I don’t want to leave you alone……” Risako said as she stared back into Momoko eyes.

Momoko smiled sweetly at Risako and pulled her into a hug.

“Don’t worry okay….. Airi is your best friend and I hate to see you sad…. It hurt me….. So, I want you to go to her house and meet her today okay….” Ask her the reason why and don’t leave until you’re satisfied…. Momoko said as she pulled away from the hug and hold Risako hands.

“Oh Momochi!!!” Risako said as she burst into tears. “I love you!!! Thank you for being so understanding….” She continued as she pulled Momoko into a hug again.

Momoko patted Risako’s back as she calmed her Risako down. After Risako have calmed herself down, Momoko said.

“What a mess up week for all of us…..”

Risako stared towards Momoko in confusion as she asked Momoko.

“What do you mean Momochi??? I don’t understand…..”

“Well, I’ve just witnessed two of my best friend fight yesterday……” Momoko said as she sighed heavily.

“Who’s fighting Momochi??? Why didn’t I hear anything???” Risako asked again.

Momoko sighed heavily as she told Risako everything that happened yesterday.
Momoko FLASHBACK
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Momoko, Miyabi and Maasa were sitting together in class today. Maimi didn’t want to join them again today. The three of them already sensed that something’s wrong with Maimi. She avoided all her friends this week, she didn’t join them at lunch, and she didn’t even go to school with Erika anymore. But out of the three of them, Maasa was the one that worried the most. It is because, Maimi is Erika best friend and apparently, Erika was getting depressed from the fact that Maimi was avoiding her and the others and from the fact that Maimi didn’t want to go to school with her anymore.

“Nee Maasa-chan….” Miyabi said when she realized that Maasa was staring at Maimi.

Maasa turned her head towards Miyabi. “Yes Miya, what’s wrong???” She asked Miyabi.

“Why do keep staring at Maimi-chan???” Miyabi asked Maasa.

Maasa sighed heavily as she answered Miyabi.

“I want to know what’s wrong with her. She seems in trouble but she doesn’t want to tell us…. She makes everyone sad especially Erika….”

“Mou Maasa, don’t tell me you are jealous because Erika is concern about Maimi….” Momoko said as she and Miyabi grinned.

“I’m not jealous Momo….. I’m just worried about her…. She never act like this before…” Maasa said as she stared at Miyabi and /Momoko.

“You’re right Maasa-chan, I’m worried too….” Miyabi said.

“Yeah…. Me too….” Momoko said as she nodded in agreement.

“Well, enough is enough, I want her to tell us what’s wrong….” Maasa said as she turned her head towards Maimi again.

After the bell for lunch rang, everyone went to lunch except for Maimi, Maasa, Miyabi and Momoko. Maasa went to Maimi with Momoko and Miyabi in tow and stood in front her. Maimi was surprised but she decided to ignore her friends.

“Let’s go to lunch Maimi, everybody waiting….” Maasa said.

“I’m not hungry….” Maimi answered without looking at her friends.

“Damn it Maimi!!!” Maasa yelled as she banged her fist on Maimi’s table.

“What the hell is wrong with you Maasa??!!!” Maimi said as she stood up and glared at Maasa.

“What the hell is wrong with me???!!! Nothing’s wrong with me!!! What the hell is wrong with you Maimi???” Maasa said with both anger and concern. “Do you even realize how concern we are??? How worry???” Maasa continued.

“I don’t remember telling all of you to concern about me!!! I don’t remember asking you to do that!!! Now leave me alone!!!” Maimi answered back.

“What did you say Maimi??!!!” Maasa snapped. “We are your friends!!! Of course we will be worry and concern!!! Now you better tell me what the hell is wrong with you!!!” Maasa continued to yell at Maimi.

“Don’t push it Maasa!!! I’ve told you to leave me alone!!!” Maimi shouted as she clenched her fist tighter. She was very angry now.

Momoko and Miyabi just stood beside Maasa. Both of them didn’t know what to do. And even if they do, they don’t have the courage to do it. Both Maimi and Maasa were very dangerous when they were angry.

Maasa ignored Maimi’s fury as she took a stepped closer to Maimi. Their face was just a few inches from each other and both Momoko and Miyabi could sense the anger that came from Maimi.

“I know why you’re acting like this Maimi; you can’t blame other person but yourself Maimi…. Because you are such a coward and that’s why you end up like this….” Maasa said in a very mocking tone.

“I say don’t push it!!!!” Maimi shouted as she punched Maasa in the face.

Maasa feel down as she glared at Maimi. Momoko and Miyabi went to help Maasa but when they were about to lift her up, Maasa said.

“Don’t touch me!!! Don’t you guys dare to interfere… This is between me and her!!!”

Momoko and Miyabi froze on the spot as they nodded weakly. There’s nothing that they could do now. Maasa stood back on her feet as she wiped her blood from her lips.

“You’re dead Yajima!!!” Maasa growled as she went straight to Maimi and punched her back.

“Give me your best shot Sudou!!!!” Maimi yelled as she blocked Maasa’s punch and tried to kick her. Maasa manage to evade the attack as she quickly gave a side kick to Maimi waist.

“Argh!!!” Maimi shouted. Maasa continued her assault as she pulled Maimi’s hair and punched her stomach. After accepting a few punch,
Maimi manage to push Maasa away as she went towards Maasa and punched her face again. After Maimi manage to punch Maasa, she quickly gave her another kick on the stomach. Maasa fell on the floor and Maimi quickly went to her and sat on her. Maimi continued her punching until Maasa managed to lock Maimi’s hand and banged her head with Maimi’s.

Momoko and Miyabi watched in terror as both of their best friends fought against each other. Miyabi didn’t know what to do. She stood there as her tears were streaming from her eyes. Momoko nudged Miyabi and said.

“Miya!!! Go find Erika-chan…. She’s the only one who can stop them now!!!” Miyabi wiped her tears as she nodded and dashed towards the door.

A few minutes after that, Miyabi arrived with Erika. Erika eyes widen as she shouted at her best friend and her girlfriend.

“Yajima Maimi!!!, Sudou Maasa!!! Stop!!!”

Maasa and Maimi froze when both of them heard Erika’s voice. Erika went to them and slapped both of them.

“What are you two doing??!!!! Fighting each other!!!! We’re friends right!!!” Erika said with tears running from her eyes.

Maimi glared at Maasa with hatred as she ran away from the class. Maasa bowed her head in front of Erika as she apologized to her girlfriend in tears.

END OF FLASHBACK
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Risako covered her mouth with her hand when she heard Momoko’s story. She never thought that Maimi and Maasa were fighting. Momoko sighed and took Risako hand.

“Momochi…. Do you think what happen to Maimi-nee has anything to do with Airi-chan???” Risako asked Momoko.

“I don’t know Rii-chan….. But maybe you will find something when you go to Airi-chan house later…” Momoko said as she hoped that
everything would turn to the way it was before.

Title: Re: Promise
Post by: oddball on June 03, 2010, 01:13:13 PM
Man things are completly spiraling out of control :panic:

Lucky Erika was there to save the day!

I hope Airi dosn't go nuts on Rii :(
Title: Re: Promise
Post by: Mikitty_Ayaya on June 08, 2010, 09:01:19 AM
these chapters were exciting and sad.
it´s sad about the farewell to airi suzuki, it´s exciting for the fight of two friends, sudou and Maimi.
I like the personality of sudou.  :)
next chapter, good writer.  :)
Title: Re: Promise
Post by: abok on June 10, 2010, 05:40:16 AM
New chapter is here!!!

@oddball : Airi going crazy on Risako.... hmm that's not a bad idea.... i'll consider it...

@mikitty_ayaya : thanks for the encouragement and support...

Chapter 24

Risako was on her way to Airi house that evening and she was not in a very good mood. Firstly, it’s because she had to cancel her date with Momoko that evening and the second, Airi was going to transfer from their school and Airi didn’t even bothered to tell her the reasons. When she was halfway from arriving at Airi’s house, suddenly the rain started to pour down heavily. And unfortunately for Risako, she didn’t carry her umbrella that time.

“Oh great!!! Just what I need…. I had to cancel my date with Momochi to visit Airi and now I’m getting soaked in the rain…. You better tell me something Airi-chan or I will be very angry!!!” Risako whined to herself as she started to run towards her destination.
Meanwhile, at Maimi’s side…..

Maimi was lying on her bed as she gently scrubbed her stomach. The bruise that she got from the fight with Maasa at school and in addition at her house in her own room were still there. Maimi sighed heavily as she remembered what happen after she went home the day she fought Maasa.

Maimi FLASHBACK

When Maimi arrived at her house, she was very realived that her mother was not home. She didn’t want to deal with any question from her mother right now anyway. Maimi went straight to her room after she took some ice in the refrigerator. She needed to treat her bruise right away. While she was busy treating her bruise, she didn’t realized that Erika was standing behind her, Erika went to look for Maimi after what happen and she had to leave Maasa alone for a while.

“You are a stupid and clumsy person you know Maimi-chan…. You can’t just leave the front door open you know….." Erika said and as she walked towards Maimi.

Maimi jumped a bit in shocked as she turned towards Erika.

“What are you doing here Erika???” Maimi asked as she sighed heavily.

“Helping you of course….” Erika said.

“You should’nt be here…. Just go and take care of Maasa….” Maimi said without looking at Erika.

“Stop being a hard head and let me help you…. Now, take off you shirt….” Erika said as she took the ice pack from Maimi’s hand.

Maimi sighed a little as she unbuttoned her shirt and Erika could see the attractive abdomen of Maimi and also the Maimi’s stomach. Erika could feel the flush that was running through her cheeks when she was touching the stomach of her best friend in order to deflate the bruise on Maimi’s stomach. Even though Maimi was just her best friend, Erika really appreciated her and she was very concerned when something happened or bothered Maimi.

“Now tell me what happen Maimi…..” Erika asked while she was treating Maimi bruises.

“Nothing….” Maimi answered without looking at her.

"Do not lie!" Erika raises her voice and Maimi could sense the concern and seriousness in Erika’s tone.

“I don’t want to talk about it Erika…..” Maimi slowly said.

“But sometimes, you can heal your heart by talking….” Erika said.

“I don’t want to think or remember about it anymore……” Maimi replied.

“Well, running away is not going to help either…..” Erika said as sighed heavily.

"... Itai, it hurts ... Itai, you should do it more carefully Erika ..." Maimi says as she was grimacing in pain.

"Maasa-chan is strong ne?" Erika asked Maimi as she was smiling widely.

 "She is and not to mention that her fist is also powerful ..." Maimi replied as she chuckled a little bit.

"Maimi, I'm your best friend, I am very worried about you ...  when I see you fighting with Maasa, it was very painful to me ...  I fell like my heart break in half and it hurts a lot..... Maasa is my girlfriend and I love her so much and you Maimi, you're my bestfriend and I appreciate you…..” Erika said with tears ready to fall.

Maimi could see the sincerity in Erika’s eyes and that had made her felt terrible because the trouble she caused for her bestfriend and she felt very bad when she had to see Erika’s sad face. Maimi slowly embraced Erika and wrapped her arms around Erika’s body.

“I’m sorry Erika…. Please forgive me for causing you too much trouble…..” Maimi whispered on Erika’s ear.

Before Erika could hug Maimi back, both of them were greeted with a voice that doesn’t sound too friendly.

“What the hell are you doing Yajima!!! Get away from her!!!”

Erika and Maimi turned towards the owner of the voice and Erika’s eyes widen when she saw who it was. It was Maasa and she doesn’t look very pleased with the scene in front of her. Maimi quickly pulled away from Erika and she could sense that a new trouble was going to fall on her.

“Maasa, this isn’t what you’re thinking…..” Erika said shakily.

"Then what is it?" Maasa replied angrily.

"Maasa, please listen to me ..."

"What were both of you doing?" Maasa asked. She glared at Maimi like she wants to eat Maimi on the spot.

"Nothing, nothing of what you're thinking ..." Erika replied as tears were streaming from her eyes.

"If it is nothing then why does this traitor has her shirt unbuttoned ..." Maasa asked again but this time, she glared at Erika.

"I was just helping to her ..." Erika said in defense. She knew that her girlfriend was furious right now.

"Erika enough, I'm not so naive ... You cry for her, you care for her ... You’re always thinking about her ..." Maasa said to Erika as her fist was tighten.

"No, Maasa, no ... that’s not true, please Maasa, I beg you..... Please don’t misunderstand" Erika said as she tried to beg Maasa.

"I'm your girlfriend Erika, instead of me, you're here with her ..... Instead of taking care of me, you left me and come to her, to help her….." Maasa said shakily. She could fell her eyes were starting to get wet but she ignored it.

"Oh…. Are you jealous then Maasa….?" Maimi said mockingly.

"Maimi, stop!" Erika pleaded as she could feel the hands of Maimi on around her waist.

“I said get away from her!!!” Maasa shouted as moved towards Erika and pulled her away. After that, she quickly turned towards Maimi and threw her
fist with all her power towards Maimi stomach.

Maimi didn’t have enough time to dodge Maasa’s attack and she could feel the impact from Maasa’s punch. It was much stronger than before and she
had to open her mouth to breath. Maimi have lost the strength to stand up as she sat on the floor in pain.

Erika screamed in terror when she watched the scene that was happening in front of her eyes but Maasa just ignored her.

“Is that all you have Yajima???” Maasa said mockingly as she glared at Maimi. “I expected more from you and this is all you’ve got??? You’re so weak
and useless…..” Maasa continued.

“Oh really??? Sorry to disappoint you then…. But I don’t care….” Maimi said as her blood were dripping from her mouth.

“You’re pathetic, you’re weak and you’re a loser….. That’s why you even lost to the ones you love, Airi….” Maasa mocked Maimi again.

Hearing that name again made Maimi’s heart ached. She stoop up immediately and she punched Maasa’s cheek.

Maasa wiped the blood from her lips using her sleeve and she turned towards Maimi who was standing right in front of her.

“So, Airi is the problem…. Now I understand…. So, that girl is the reason why you’re so depressed???” Maasa asked Maimi.

Maimi decided to ignore the question as she turned around but she was stopped by Maasa who was holding her shoulder and turned her around. When Maimi was turned to face Maasa again, she was greeted by Maasa’s fist on her stomach again. The power of this punch was stronger than before and Maimi was about to fall on her feet but Maasa held her this time.

"You do not have the strength to defend yourself anymore??? So much pain you have in your heart that you forget who you really are??? " Maasa asked Maimi.

“That girl is garbage Maimi….. Eversince you’ve met her again, she caused nothing to you but pain….. She’s a trash Maimi, forget about her…..” Maasa continued.

Now it was Maasa’s turn to be surprised. Now, it was Maasa turns to extract oxygen with her mouth. Maasa lowers her head and saw Maimi’s fist on her midsection.

“Damn…..” Maasa said as she fell on her knees.

“Maasa!!!” Erika screamed as she moved towards Maasa. Before she could reach her, Maasa held out her arm signaling that Erika should just stay there. Erika stopped and nodded weakly. Maasa got up as she stood in front of Maimi.

“You should watch your mouth Sudou….. Don’t make me kill you……” Maimi said in anger.

Maasa smirked as she moved forward and put both her arms on Maimi shoulder.

“Now that’s the Maimi I know…. And that’s the Maimi that will win Airi’s heart…..” Maasa said as she smiled at Maimi.

“What???” Maimi looked at Maasa in confussion.

“You’re an idiot Maimi, all this time; you just show Airi how pathetic you are….. And you don’t even realize that….” Maasa explained.

“What are you talking about Maasa???” Maimi asked again in confusion.

“I never jealous about you and Erika…. I trust Erika with all my heart and I knew that she would never cheat on me….. And I also trust you Maimi…. I’m just trying to make you realize how pathetic you’ve been…. If you really love Airi, prove it to her, show her, don’t just give up…. If she call you a liar, prove to her that she was wrong…. When I say bad things about her, you became yourself again and defend her even it is just her name…. That’s the real Yajima Maimi…. That’s the Maimi that will win Airi heart….” Maasa explained as she slowly moved towards Erika and lifted her up.

“Maimi, we want you to be yourself….. Because the real you is much stronger than this…. And Airi should see the real you…..” Maasa continued.
Maimi stared at Maasa and smiled.

“Can you just tell me about it rather than kicking me in the ass???” Maimi asked Maasa.

“Well, I’ve try that method and it doesn’t seem to work with a hard head like you….” Maasa said grinning.

END OF FLASHBACK

“Thank you Maasa…. And I promise that I’ll never give up again….” Maimi said as she smiled widely to herself. “If Airin think that Mai-chan is with me, then I’ll just take Mai-chan to her and explain everything...” She continued.
Title: Re: Promise
Post by: Mikitty_Ayaya on June 10, 2010, 09:36:48 AM
Wow, this chapter is  surprising...  :heart:


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Risako was on her way to Airi house that evening and she was not in a very good mood. Firstly, it’s because she had to cancel her date with Momoko that evening and the second, Airi was going to transfer from their school and Airi didn’t even bothered to tell her the reasons. When she was halfway from arriving at Airi’s house, suddenly the rain started to pour down heavily. And unfortunately for Risako, she didn’t carry her umbrella that time.

“Oh great!!! Just what I need…. I had to cancel my date with Momochi to visit Airi and now I’m getting soaked in the rain…. You better tell me something Airi-chan or I will be very angry!!!” Risako whined to herself as she started to run towards her destination.

poor risako, she had bad luck, though her sacrifice, it was for a good reason.  :wub: :)


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Maimi was lying on her bed as she gently scrubbed her stomach. The bruise that she got from the fight with Maasa at school and in addition at her house in her own room were still there. Maimi sighed heavily as she remembered what happen after she went home the day she fought Maasa.


poor maimi...

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When Maimi arrived at her house, she was very realived that her mother was not home. She didn’t want to deal with any question from her mother right now anyway. Maimi went straight to her room after she took some ice in the refrigerator. She needed to treat her bruise right away. While she was busy treating her bruise, she didn’t realized that Erika was standing behind her, Erika went to look for Maimi after what happen and she had to leave Maasa alone for a while.

“You are a stupid and clumsy person you know Maimi-chan…. You can’t just leave the front door open you know….." Erika said and as she walked towards Maimi.

Maimi jumped a bit in shocked as she turned towards Erika.

Maimi,  you have to be more careful. You should attempt to close the doors of her house.

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“What are you doing here Erika???” Maimi asked as she sighed heavily.

“Helping you of course….” Erika said.

“You should’nt be here…. Just go and take care of Maasa….” Maimi said without looking at Erika.

“Stop being a hard head and let me help you…. Now, take off you shirt….” Erika said as she took the ice pack from Maimi’s hand.

Maimi sighed a little as she unbuttoned her shirt and Erika could see the attractive abdomen of Maimi and also the Maimi’s stomach. Erika could feel the flush that was running through her cheeks when she was touching the stomach of her best friend in order to deflate the bruise on Maimi’s stomach. Even though Maimi was just her best friend, Erika really appreciated her and she was very concerned when something happened or bothered Maimi.

this moment was one my favourite.  :heart:



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“Now tell me what happen Maimi…..” Erika asked while she was treating Maimi bruises.

“Nothing….” Maimi answered without looking at her.

"Do not lie!" Erika raises her voice and Maimi could sense the concern and seriousness in Erika’s tone.

“I don’t want to talk about it Erika…..” Maimi slowly said.

“But sometimes, you can heal your heart by talking….” Erika said.

“I don’t want to think or remember about it anymore……” Maimi replied.

“Well, running away is not going to help either…..” Erika said as sighed heavily.

"... Itai, it hurts ... Itai, you should do it more carefully Erika ..." Maimi says as she was grimacing in pain.

"Maasa-chan is strong ne?" Erika asked Maimi as she was smiling widely.

 "She is and not to mention that her fist is also powerful ..." Maimi replied as she chuckled a little bit.

erika knows perfectly the attitude about Maimi,  they are good friends.  :heart:



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"Maimi, I'm your best friend, I am very worried about you ...  when I see you fighting with Maasa, it was very painful to me ...  I fell like my heart break in half and it hurts a lot..... Maasa is my girlfriend and I love her so much and you Maimi, you're my bestfriend and I appreciate you…..” Erika said with tears ready to fall.

Maimi could see the sincerity in Erika’s eyes and that had made her felt terrible because the trouble she caused for her bestfriend and she felt very bad when she had to see Erika’s sad face. Maimi slowly embraced Erika and wrapped her arms around Erika’s body.

“I’m sorry Erika…. Please forgive me for causing you too much trouble…..” Maimi whispered on Erika’s ear.

so sweets!!  :heart: :heart:

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Before Erika could hug Maimi back, both of them were greeted with a voice that doesn’t sound too friendly.

oh no, oh no  :panic:  :panic:

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“What the hell are you doing Yajima!!! Get away from her!!!”

Erika and Maimi turned towards the owner of the voice and Erika’s eyes widen when she saw who it was. It was Maasa and she doesn’t look very pleased with the scene in front of her. Maimi quickly pulled away from Erika and she could sense that a new trouble was going to fall on her.

wait, massa, wait massa, you  just wait a moment, you listen to erika, please.   :nervous



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“Maasa, this isn’t what you’re thinking…..” Erika said shakily.

"Then what is it?" Maasa replied angrily.

"Maasa, please listen to me ..."

"What were both of you doing?" Maasa asked. She glared at Maimi like she wants to eat Maimi on the spot.

"Nothing, nothing of what you're thinking ..." Erika replied as tears were streaming from her eyes.

"If it is nothing then why does this traitor has her shirt unbuttoned ..." Maasa asked again but this time, she glared at Erika.

"I was just helping to her ..." Erika said in defense. She knew that her girlfriend was furious right now.

"Erika enough, I'm not so naive ... You cry for her, you care for her ... You’re always thinking about her ..." Maasa said to Erika as her fist was tighten.

"No, Maasa, no ... that’s not true, please Maasa, I beg you..... Please don’t misunderstand" Erika said as she tried to beg Maasa.

"I'm your girlfriend Erika, instead of me, you're here with her ..... Instead of taking care of me, you left me and come to her, to help her….." Maasa said shakily. She could fell her eyes were starting to get wet but she ignored it.

 :nervous  :nervous   oh no, maassa  isn´t listening to  umeda.  :doh:


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"Oh…. Are you jealous then Maasa….?" Maimi said mockingly.

"Maimi, stop!" Erika pleaded as she could feel the hands of Maimi on around her waist.

maimi, you´re a silly,   XD you´re causing the anger to sudou  :sweatdrop:



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Maimi didn’t have enough time to dodge Maasa’s attack and she could feel the impact from Maasa’s punch. It was much stronger than before and she
had to open her mouth to breath. Maimi have lost the strength to stand up as she sat on the floor in pain.

Erika screamed in terror when she watched the scene that was happening in front of her eyes but Maasa just ignored her.

“Is that all you have Yajima???” Maasa said mockingly as she glared at Maimi. “I expected more from you and this is all you’ve got??? You’re so weak
and useless…..” Maasa continued.

“Oh really??? Sorry to disappoint you then…. But I don’t care….” Maimi said as her blood were dripping from her mouth.

“You’re pathetic, you’re weak and you’re a loser….. That’s why you even lost to the ones you love, Airi….” Maasa mocked Maimi again.

Hearing that name again made Maimi’s heart ached. She stoop up immediately and she punched Maasa’s cheek.

Maasa wiped the blood from her lips using her sleeve and she turned towards Maimi who was standing right in front of her.

“So, Airi is the problem…. Now I understand…. So, that girl is the reason why you’re so depressed???” Maasa asked Maimi.

Maimi decided to ignore the question as she turned around but she was stopped by Maasa who was holding her shoulder and turned her around. When Maimi was turned to face Maasa again, she was greeted by Maasa’s fist on her stomach again. The power of this punch was stronger than before and Maimi was about to fall on her feet but Maasa held her this time.

"You do not have the strength to defend yourself anymore??? So much pain you have in your heart that you forget who you really are??? " Maasa asked Maimi.

“That girl is garbage Maimi….. Eversince you’ve met her again, she caused nothing to you but pain….. She’s a trash Maimi, forget about her…..” Maasa continued.

Now it was Maasa’s turn to be surprised. Now, it was Maasa turns to extract oxygen with her mouth. Maasa lowers her head and saw Maimi’s fist on her midsection.

“Damn…..” Maasa said as she fell on her knees.

“Maasa!!!” Erika screamed as she moved towards Maasa. Before she could reach her, Maasa held out her arm signaling that Erika should just stay there. Erika stopped and nodded weakly. Maasa got up as she stood in front of Maimi.

“You should watch your mouth Sudou….. Don’t make me kill you……” Maimi said in anger.

Maasa smirked as she moved forward and put both her arms on Maimi shoulder.

“Now that’s the Maimi I know…. And that’s the Maimi that will win Airi’s heart…..” Maasa said as she smiled at Maimi.

 at the beginning,  seemed  that Massa  wanted  destroy to Maimi, nevertheless  that changed.   :lol:


this chapter was excellent   :heart:     next chapter, please.  XD  :wub:







Title: Re: Promise
Post by: oddball on June 10, 2010, 12:03:13 PM
@oddball : Airi going crazy on Risako.... hmm that's not a bad idea.... i'll consider it...

Nooo! don't hurt Rii baby, I didn't mean it :cry:

Good chapter tho, Maasa had to beat some sense into Maimi, at leat Maimi realizes that she has to fight for Airi more!

why do I get the nasty suspicion that going with Mai to see Airi may be a bad idea? :panic:
Title: Re: Promise
Post by: Liben on June 10, 2010, 06:45:33 PM

why do I get the nasty suspicion that going with Mai to see Airi may be a bad idea? :panic:

I kinda think it's a good idea actually, because maybe Mai doesn't expect it to happen and her bitch smile will dissapear.

Yeeeeeah! Finally, Maimi realizes that she's acting in the correct way! Now she's ready to fight! ... for Airi.

Title: Re: Promise
Post by: abok on June 16, 2010, 06:50:30 AM
new chapter is here!!! XD

@mikitty_ayaya : thank you... glad you like it... 8)

@oddball : dont worry.... Rii-chan will not be harm..... :thumbsup

@liben : sound like you very angry with Mai.... :P


Chapter 25

Airi was standing in front of her window as look outside that was raining heavily. She sighed heavily as she touched her right cheek. The bruise that she received from Kanna’s kick had already healed. She was very realived about that. She remembered when she came back home with that bruise on her face.

Airi FLASHBACK

When Airi reached her house after the event that happened between her, Mai-chan and Kanna, her mother was already waiting for her on the couch. The moment she opened the door, her mother went towards her and her mother was almost fainted to see the bruise on her cheeks and the blood stain on her shirt.

"Airi dear!!! What happen???" Mrs. Suzuki asked as she rushed towards her daughter.

Airi just kept quiet as she ignored her mother and walked towards the stair. But, before she could reach the stairs, Airi felt her mother around her and she could also hear the sobs that came from her mother.

"I’m very sorry Airi….. Please don’t hate me….." Mrs. Suzuki pleaded her daughter.

Airi quickly turned to face her mother as she returned the hug. Airi was also crying right now. She never thought that she would hear her mother pleaded her and she was feeling very guilty right now.

"Don’t you ever say that mom…… I never hate you…. I love you so much and there’s nothing in this world that can change that….." Airi said as she hugged her mother tighter.

Mrs. Suzuki pulled back as she wiped her daughter’s tears. She led Airi to her room and ushered Airi to clean herself up. After Airi had cleaned herself, her mother helped her heal the bruise. Mrs. Suzuki took an ice pack and put it carefully on Airi’s cheek.

"So, are you gonna tell me what happen???" Mrs. Suzuki asked her daughter as she caressed her daughter’s cheek carefully.

"I don’t know mom….." Airi answered as she sighed heavily. "I don’t know where to start….." Airi continued. She was debating with herself right now.

Mrs. Suzuki patted Airi’s head and smiled at her. "Why don’t you start from the beginning dear??? Tell me everything……" Mrs. Suzuki said to her daughter.

Airi took a deep breath and started to tell everything that have happen to her mother. She told her mother everything including the event that happened between her, Mai and Kanna. After she had finished told her mother everything, Airi just stay quiet and hugged her knees. Mrs. Suzuki stared her daughter as she moved towards her and pulled her into a bear hug.

"I’m so sorry dear….. I’ve never thought that you still mad at Maimi-chan because of what happen 7 years ago….." Mrs. Suzuki apologized to her daughter. "But do you really believe that Mai kid??? Judging from your story, I think Maimi-chan is innocent… I think that kid is just trying to separate you from Maimi….." Mrs. Suzuki continued as she patted Airi’s head.

"I don’t know who to believe anymore mom….. But whatever it is, I don’t want to think about it anymore….. I don’t care anymore….. Mom, I want to transfer to another school…." Airi said to her mother as she stared at her mother with a pleading expression.

Mrs. Suzuki was shocked to hear Airi’s request.

"Are you sure dear??? Sounds to me like you’re running away from your problem….." Mrs. Suzuki calmly said to her daughter.

"I don’t care anymore mom…. I just want to run away from all this, I don’t want to see her again…. I don’t want to be hurt again….." Airi continued to plead her mother as her tears were running through her cheeks.

Mrs. Suzuki sighed a little as she wiped the tears from Airi’s cheek carefully to avoid any pain from the bruise.

"Airi dear, running away is not going to help…. You’re just going to suffer more…" Mrs. Suzuki said to her crying daughter.

"No mom…. If I transfer, I will never see her again…. I will never have to face her everyday again…. And I will find a way to forget her…. To forget everything…." Airi replied as she stared at her mother with determination on her face.

Mrs. Suzuki sighed again and she knew that Airi will never change her decision. She rubbed her forehead and turned to face the ceiling.

"If that’s what you want dear…. I’ll agree…. I just hope you know what you’re doing…. I don’t want you to regret it later……" Mrs. Suzuki said in defeat.

"I know what I’m doing mom….. And I will not regret it either…." Airi replied her mother as she lied down and fall asleep.

END OF FLASBACK

Airi sighed heavily as she continued to look outside. It is still raining heavily. When Airi was about to move away from the window, she saw Risako standing in front of her house and Risako was soaking wet. Airi quickly ran downstairs and opened the door for Risako.

"Rii-chan!!! What are you doing here???" Airi asked Risako. She was shocked to see Risako condition.

"Well, there’s a friend of mine that have been missing for a week…. And the last thing that I heard about her is she’s going to transfer to another school…. So here I am, soaking wet, cold, irritated and frustrated because I have to cancel my date with my girlfriend and come visit her because of the worry she caused and yet, she still ask me why I am here….." Risako answered in a very sarcastic tone as she raised her eyebrow and put her arms on her chest.

Airi pulled Risako into her house and took Risako to her room.

"Rii-chan, why don’t you take a bath first and then change into my cloth….. I’ll go fix something for you to eat…. You can find the towel and cloth in my closet….." Airi said as she dashed towards the kitchen and left Risako in her room.

"Is she trying to avoid my question???" Risako asked herself as she went to Airi’s closet and looked for a towel. When she opened one of the drawers, Risako accidentally found something that shocked her, a picture that have been torn apart and put together again.

"This is a picture of Maimi-nee!!! Why does Airi-chan have the picture of Maimi-nee??? Is Maimi-nee the reason for Airi to transfer??? And is Airi’s the reason for Maimi-nee behavior???" Risako thought to herself as she tried to combine the puzzle pieces inside her head. Out of instinct, Risako took the picture and put it inside her pocket as she took a towel and quickly went to the bathroom to take a shower.

After Risako had finished showering, she took Airi cloth and wore them. She took the picture of Maimi from her pocket and put it inside the pocket of Airi cloth that she was wearing right now. She knew that Airi would tell her to take the cloth home.

A few minutes after that, Airi came back with a hot chocolate and ramen. Airi told Risako to finish them while it still warm. While Risako was eating, Airi stood in silent and she tried to avoid making eye contact Risako.

"Will you tell me what’s wrong now???" Risako asked Airi after she had finished eating.

"Tell you what Rii-chan???" Airi asked Risako back. She wanted to pretend that nothing was wrong.

"Don’t you dare ask me that Suzuki Airi!!!! I had to cancel my date and getting soaked in rain just to come here because I am concern!!! Don’t you dare ask me that!!!" Risako snapped. She was getting very angry by the fact that Airi still wanted to hide things from her. "You’re have been missing school for a whole week and the last thing that I heard from you is you going to transfer??!!! What is your problem Airi???!!! Why don’t you tell me??? I am your best friend right???!!!" Risako asked as she put her arms on Airi’s shoulder and shook her.

Airi looked down as her eyes were starting to tear. "I’m sorry Rii-chan…. But I can’t tell you what’s wrong….. Not now…. I’m very sorry….. If I tell you now, things will be complicated and I don’t want that to happen…" Airi said.

Risako sighed heavily. She knew the problem now. It is because of Maimi. But, Risako decided not to talk about it. If she talked about it now, Airi would asked her how did she knew and she would have to tell her about the picture she took.

"I’m sorry Airi-chan…." Risako said as she gave Airi a bear hug. "I didn’t mean to be angry with you…. It’s been a stressful week for me…. With you going transfer and Maimi-nee fight…." Risako continued as she pulled away and tried to look at Airi expression.

"Yajima-chan’s fighting??? With who Rii-chan???" Airi asked. Risako could see the concern and worry that were reflecting on Airi face.

"With Maasa-chan…. And from what Momochi told me, Maimi-nee was injured pretty bad…." Risako lied to Airi. She need to be sure about something before she left Airi’s house that day and from the looked Airi’s been giving, Risako knew she had found her answer.

After Airi heard Risako answer, she didn’t say anything. Her heart was beating fast again. The news that she received from Risako have made her worry about Maimi. But she tried to calm herself in front of Risako. After a few moment of silent, Airi decided to change the topic as she and Risako talked about other thing until Momoko came and took Risako home.

After she waved good bye to Momoko and Risako, Airi sat on her bed worrying about Maimi’s condition. Eventhough she said she hate her, call her a liar, she love her.

"There’s nothing I can do for her now….. She have Mai….. And I don’t want to be hurt by her again….." Airi said to herself as she tried to calm herself from the worrying.

Meanwhile at Momoko and Risako side….

After they left Airi’s house, Momoko took Risako to her house. Risako’s going to stay with her tonight. When they reached Momoko house, Risako took out the picture that she took from Airi’s drawer and show it to Momoko.

"Is this Maimi??!!!" Momoko asked with a surprised tone.

"Yeah… It is…. Momochi, I think I know what happen now….. But it is still not clear…." Risako said as she place her head on Momoko’s lap.
Momoko stroke Risako’s hair and said.

"There’s only one person that knows Maimi better than all of us…. Let’s go to Erika house tomorrow…." Momoko said as she leaned to kiss her Risako.

Risako nodded as she returned Momoko’s kiss and start their own making out session.
Title: Re: Promise
Post by: oddball on June 16, 2010, 01:08:04 PM
Yay Rii is alive :sweatdrop:

So Rii and Momo know that Airi and Maimi knew each other in the past, wonder how much Erika knows about it?

Mrs. Suzuki does tho, wonder if she will go to Mrs. Yajima and tell her why Airi is mad at Maimi?

Glad that Rii and Momo got time to make out, good for them!  :lol:
Title: Re: Promise
Post by: abok on June 18, 2010, 05:23:24 AM
@oddball : i glad that you're happy that Rii-chan don't get hurt.... :lol:


Chapter 26

Mai had just woken up from her sleep that morning. She wanted to go shower right away but a pair of arms were wrapped around her waist and she couldn’t help but smile at the person who was sleeping peacefully besides her. Mai leaned towards that person and started to kiss her. After a few kisses, that person woke up and Mai moved to sit above her.

“Morning baby…..” That person murmured in a sleepy tone.

“Morning my dear Kankan…..” Mai said seductively. “Did you sleep well???” Mai asked Kanna.

“You know that whenever I sleep with you, it will be the most peaceful sleep ever…..” Kanna replied with a smile on her face.

“We have half an hour more before my clock rang and we have to go to breakfast…..” Mai whispered to Kanna seductively.

“Oh really???” Kanna replied. “What do you suggest we do then???” She continued with a grin on her face.

Mai didn’t answer Kanna question. She leaned towards her girlfriend and started to kiss and bite her girlfriend’s neck.

“Mai~~~~” Kanna moaned.

After Mai finished turning on her girlfriend, she started to unbutton the shirt that Kanna was wearing and Kanna was only wearing her bra right now. But before Mai could take off the bra, Kanna moved and it was her turned to sit on Mai. Kanna locked her lips with Mai as their tounge found each other and they were battling for domination. After a few minutes, they pulled away for air and Kanna started to take off Mai cloth. After she took off Mai shirt, she was surprised that Mai didn’t wear her bra. A naughty grin formed on her face as she leaned forward to kiss Mai chest.

“Not ….. there….. Kankan…..” Mai moaned as she held Kanna’s hair. Every touched that came from Kanna’s lips were starting to make her lose her mind.
Kanna smirked and continued her job as her hand starting to go down into Mai’s pant. Mai moaned started to become more loudly and uncontrollable as she felt Kanna fingers around her spot.

As the making out session was starting to get hotter and wilder, a knocked on from outside had interrupted their moment of pleasure.

“Kanna dear, Mai dear, it’s time for breakfast!!!” Mrs. Hagiwara shouted.

“Give us…. A few…. More…… minutes…… mom…..” Mai said shakily because of the effects that were given by Kanna.

“No more minutes….” Mrs. Hagiwara replied. “I know what both of are doing in there and you better stop before I come inside and join both of you…..”
Mrs. Hagiwara continued with a joked as she started to laugh.

Mai groaned as she whispered to Kanna.

“We better stop before she really do it…….”

Kanna smirked and whispered back.

“Why, it’s not so bad you know….. A threesome could be fun….”

Mai smacked Kanna’s head as she pushed Kanna and went to the bathroom. Before she entered, she turned towards Kanna and said.

“Don’t you want to join me taking a shower???”

Kanna could felt her cheeks flushed as she quickly ran towards Mai and pulled her into the shower.

“I take it as a yes then….” Mai said slowly as she could feel Kanna hands on her body again.

Meanwhile at Momoko’s house……

After Momoko and Risako had their breakfast, they quickly went back to their room to change and to take a bath. After spending about two hours in the shower making out, they put on their cloth and started to walk to Erika’s house with their fingers twined with each others.

“I really hope that Erika can tell us something Momochi…..” Risako said. “If Airi-chan is the reason for Maimi-nee behavior and Maimi-nee is the reason for Airi-chan to transfer…. Maybe all of us could help them and things will be as usually again…..” She continued with a hope in her tone.

Momoko could feel her girlfriend’s worry about both of them because she was worrying too.

“Don’t worry baby girl…. I’m sure that Erika can tell us something….. There’s no other person that knows Maimi better than all of us except Erika….” Momoko said as she squeezed her girlfriend hand lightly. 

At Erika house….

Erika was talking to Maasa about the event that had been happening that week. Well, more like Maasa was busy apologizing to Erika again.

“Erika, I’m sorry for everything….”

“Maasa-chan, I’ve told you so many times that I’m not angry with you anymore….. I should be the one to apologize…..” Erika said Maasa. “I ran to Maimi when you’re the one that I should be taking care of…. If it wasn’t for me, you would not be fighting with Maimi again at her house…..” Erika continued.

Maasa moved closer to Erika and kissed her.

“No, I understand your situation…. Maimi is your bestfriend….. And you care for her….” Maasa said.

“But, you’re the one that I should care about….. What kind of a girlfriend am I…..” Erika said as she hugged Maasa.

“Erika, you the best girl in this whole world…. You’ve made me happy…. You love me…..” Maasa whispered to Erika as she returned Erika’s hug.

“No Maasa-chan, you’re the best girl in this world….. You’ve help Maimi, you give her courage back…. And you even let yourself get hurt just because
you don’t want to see Maimi in her pathetic condition…. The only thing that I can do is worry and cry for her….” Erika said to Maasa.

Maasa smile sweetly at Erika as she started to kiss Erika’s neck.

“Erika, Maimi is important to you, and not to mention of it wasn’t because of Maimi, we wouldn’t be together…. So, of course we have to help her found her happiness too…. It’s the only thing we can do as her friend….” Maasa said.

Erika smile at Maasa.

Knock, knock…..

The door was knocked from outside.

“Erika darling, Momo-chan’s here to see you…..” Mrs. Umeda shouted.

“Send her in mom!!!” Erika shouted back to her mother.

“Hello …. Sorry for interrupting….” Momoko said as she entered Erika’s room with Risako.

“Momo, Rii-chan!!!” Erika said as she went towards them and hugged Momoko and Risako. “What are you guys doing here so early in the morning???”
Erika asked.

“Well, Rii-chan has something to ask you….” Momoko said as she nudged Risako.

“Erika-chan, you know Maimi better than us right…..” Risako started. Erika nodded as she pulled Risako and Momoko to sit on her bed.

“I went to Airi-chan house yesterday…. Rika sensei said that Airi-chan is going to transfer to another school….” Risako continued sadly.

“What??!!!” Erika and Maasa said in unison. This news is very shocking for both of them.

“Is it true Rii-chan???” Erika asked Risako. Risako nodded and bowed her head down.

“But why??? And what this had to do with Maimi???” Maasa asked.

“I don’t know why…. But…” Risako said as she took out the picture that she took from Airi’s house and gave it to Erika. “I found this inside Airi-chan’s
drawer and I’m very confused right now…. Why does Airi-chan have the picture of Maimi-nee??? And I’m pretty sure that both of you know something…” Risako said as she and Momoko stared at Maasa and Erika for answer.

Erika and Maasa looked towards each other. They didn’t know whether they should tell Risako and Momoko about this or not. Momoko could sense the tensed in them as she patted both of them on the shoulder.

“Erika-chan, Maasa-chan…” Momoko said. “Tell us everything that both of you know….. If you keep this to yourself, we can’t help Maimi and Airi….” Momoko continued as she looked into Erika’s eyes.

Erika sighed heavily as she looked towards Maasa and saw Maasa nodded.

“The secret is out now Erika….. We can’t keep it to ourselves anymore….. Maybe Momoko’s right…..” Maasa said to Erika.

Erika nodded back and said.

“Maimi and Airi-chan have already known each other before both of them knew us….. And what happen between both of them is very complicated…..” Erika said.

Risako and Momoko started to pay attention to what Erika’s about to tell them.

“But, before I can tell you guys anything, I need to call someone and invite her here….. Because she’s another reason why this thing have become complicated….” Erika said as she took out her cellphone and dialed a number.

“Moshi moshi….” Erika greeted. “Where are you??? I want you to come here now…. This is important…..” Erika continued as she hung up her phone.

Title: Re: Promise
Post by: oddball on June 21, 2010, 02:38:08 PM
Aww nice, some Mai/Kanna loving! :w00t:

Glad to see Erika and Maa made up

Please write the next chapter soon I want to know the story behind all of Maimi and Airi's problems, also who is the mystery person, it it the one Mai has been working for?
Title: Re: Promise (New Chapter Update)
Post by: abok on June 23, 2010, 02:03:18 PM
Sorry for the delayed..... :bow:

@oddball : everything will reveal in this chapter.... :thumbsup
so dont worry.... XD

Chapter 27

“Moshi moshi….” Erika greeted. “Where are you??? I want you to come here now…. This is important…..” Erika continued as she hung up her phone.

“Who’re you calling Erika-chan???” Momoko asked Erika as soon as Erika hung up her phone.

“You’ll know soon enough Momo-chan…..” Erika replied as she moved towards the door. “I’ll fix something for you guys while waiting okay…..” Erika continued as she got out from her room and went to the kitchen.

When Erika was out of side, Risako and Momoko turned their gaze towards Maasa who was still sitting on the bed.

“So, you were here all night Maasa-chan???” Momoko asked Maasa as she smirked.

“Well, you know me Momo….” Maasa replied with a grinned.

“Maasa-chan, Momochi had told me about the fight between you and Maimi-nee…..” Risako interrupted both of them. “Why do you do that???” Risako asked with a concerned tone in her voice.

“I’m so sorry Rii-chan….. I don’t mean to fight her, it just that, I hate seeing her so pathetic and weak….” Maasa answered. “We all know that among all of us, Maimi is the toughest and strongest… And seeing her like that frustrates me….. Especially when we fought at her house….” Maasa continued.

“What???!!!!” Momoko exclaimed. “Both of you even continued the fight at her house???!!! What about her mother then??? Didn’t she say anything to both of you????!!!” Momoko continued as fast as she could and when she finished, she was gasping for air. Risako patted Momoko’s back as she tried to help her girlfriend gained her breath back.

“Calm down Momo, one question at a time okay… I’m not going anywhere….” Maasa said to Momoko as she smiled at her.

“Well….” Maasa started explaining as she put her hands into her pockets. “After that fight, Maimi went straight home…. And Erika stayed with me for a while…. But, after that, Erika left me and went to Maimi….” Maasa continued.

“So, you’re jealous!!!” Momoko exclaimed. “I thought you’ve said that you are not jealous of Maimi relation with Erika-chan…..” Momoko continued.

“What??!!! Don’t get it wrong Momo…. I’ve followed Erika because I know that Erika can’t get Maimi to talk about her problem and with Maimi’s condition after our fight, I’m worry that she will hurt Erika unintentionally….” Maasa defended herself as she tried to explain.

"Why do both of fight again then???" Risako as she put her hand together.

“Rii-chan, I told you before right….. It hurts me to see Maimi so pathetic like that…. So I have to put some sense into her…..”  Maasa explained. “And I know that both of you think that I’m jealous but trust me, I’m not…. I trust Erika with my life…. I know that it’s hard for Erika when Maimi and I fight each other…. Maimi is her best friend and I’m her girlfriend…. She loves us both…. And I understand why she went to Maimi…..” Maasa continued as she smiled towards Momoko and Risako.

Risako and Momoko went towards Maasa and hold her hands.

“We’re sorry Maasa-chan…..” Risako apologized. “Then, what about Maimi and Airi’s problem??? What kind of relation that they have???” Risako asked Maasa.

“Erika will tell you about that….” Maasa replied.

After waiting for a few more minutes, Erika came back to the room with two people. Momoko and Risako were shocked to see one of guest that came with Erika.

“Mai-chan??!!!” Both of them exclaimed at the same time.

Half an hour after that

After Momoko and Risako listened to Erika and Mai explanation, they just froze in shock. Both of them didn’t know what to say or comment.

“Do you understand everything now???” Erika asked them.

“Yes we do…. But how could things have turn out this way???” Risako said.

“Well, it’s my fault….. I’ve got carried away and because of it, things have turned out to be bad now…..” Mai said as she bowed down her head. “What should we do now Erika-neechan???” Mai asked Erika.

“Don’t worry about it Mai…..” She said to Mai as she patted Mai’s head. “Momo….” Erika turned her gazed towards Momoko. “I will need you and Rii-chan to help me on this….” She continued.

“Just tell us what to do and when…. We’ll do anything to help Airi and Maimi….” Momoko said as she smiled to Erika and Risako nodded her head. After that, Risako went towards Mai and asked her.

“Is it true that Airi-chan went crazy on you???”

Mai smiled weakly and nodded.

“Yeah… It’s true…. I found her at the park where Maimi told me that she and Airi always went a long time ago….. She was also crying when she hit me…. She said something about I’ve taken Maimi away from her…. And then, Kankan saw what happen and she came to rescue me….” Mai explained.

“I don’t know that she’s Suzuki, I thought that she’s some crazy girl that tries to do something bad to my baby….” Kanna said in defensed.

“Well, I guess people do crazy things when they’re in love right???”  Maasa joked.

“I guess you right Maasa-chan…. I never thought that Airi-chan could go crazy on someone….” Momoko said as she giggled. “Now, what do you want me and Rii-chan do Erika???” Momoko asked Erika.

Erika thought about it for a second and then answered.

“First we need to find a suibtable place…. After that, we can think about the plan….”

The others nodded as they started to think about the most suibtable place to carry out their plan.

Chapter 28

The next morning….

Maimi woke up early that morning with a mission in her head. And right now, she’s very determined and she nothing could stop her from it. After she took a bath and her breakfast, Maimi went back to her room and started to think about the mission she was planning since yesterday.

“Now, what should I do first…” She thought to herself. After a few minutes, she thought of something. “I’ve need to call Mai-chan first…. She’s the key to my success today… After Airin hear her explanation, she will understand everything….” Maimi said as she smiled to herself. “I know that she’s still angry about the promise that I broke seven years ago, but I’ll explain everything to her today and I will not give up just like the other times. I will be strong and I will have my Airin again…. I’ve waited for seven years and I will not let her go ever again…..” Maimi said as she took her phone and called Mai.

Maimi have called Mai a few times but Mai didn’t pick up her phone. Maimi was starting to get worried because without Mai, her plan will be ruin. Maimi tried again but Mai still didn’t pick up. “Maybe she’s not awake yet….” Maimi said to herself. “Maybe I should go to her house after all….” Maimi said as she started to walk out of her room. But, before she could leave her house, her phone rang. Maimi quickly picked it up because she thought it was Mai but she was a bit disappointed when it turned out to be Erika.

“What is it Erika….” Maimi said as she sighed heavily.

“What’s wrong Maimi??? You don’t seem too happy to hear from me…” Erika asked Maimi innocently.

“Nothing…. What do you want???” Maimi ignored Erika question and asked her.

“Could you come to Yurina’s house??? This is important matter….. It’s between life and death….” Erika replied with a grinned on her face.

“I can’t…. Maybe next time okay…..” Maimi said again.

“No, I want you to come here right now or all of us will not befriend with you anymore….” Erika said seriously.

“What???!!! Allright, allright….” Maimi groaned as she started to walk towards Yurina’s house.

On Erika side….

Maasa leaned towards Erika as she started to kiss Erika’s neck. “I never thought that my baby can do that…..” Maasa said as smiled widely.

“Well, I can be mean when I want to be….” Erika replied as she pushed Maasa away. “And stop kissing me… We have to be serious today…. This is an important matter…..” Erika continued.

Maasa sighed as she pouted. Erika smiled at Maasa and kissed her cheek.

“Don’t worry Maasa-chan, after this thing have settled, I will spend my time with you and I’ll do anything that you want….” Erika whispered seductively to Maasa. Maasa smiled again and said.

“I’ll be waiting then….”

“So, are you gonna tell us what happen Erika-chan???” Yurina said as she tugged Chinami along with her to sit besides Erika and Maasa.

“Yeah…. And why does it have to be Yuri-chan house??? Can’t you guys do it at somebody else house???” Chinami asked Erika too. Apparently, she didn’t feel very happy because her lovely morning with Yurina was being disturbed.

Erika smiled as she moved to sit beside Chinami.

“We’re very sorry Chii-chan….. It’s just that Yurina-chan’s house is the only house that doesn’t have parents for the time being….. And we really need the privacy right now….” Erika said as she holds Chinami’s hand and squeezed it lightly.

“Privacy???” Yurina said in confusion. “Why do you guys need privacy for??? Don’t tell me you guys are in some kind of trouble or something….” Yurina continued as she stared at Erika.

“No!!!” Maasa exclaimed. She was getting very irritated with the entire question. “We’re not in trouble or at least not us…. But Maimi is….” Maasa said to Yurina who was staring at her now.

“Huh??? Why??? What’s wrong Maimi-chan??? What kind of trouble she’s in???” Chinami asked Maasa.

Maasa looked towards Erika and saw Erika nodded as the sign for Maasa that she could tell both of them what’s happening. After that, Maasa turned her gaze towards Chinami and Yurina.

“Maimi is in love trouble…..” Maasa said.

“What??!!!!” Chinami exclaimed as she stood up. You got to be kidding right….. Chinami continued. Yurina pulled Chinami back to the chair and put her finger on Chinami’s lips.

“Relax Chii-chan…. Let Maasa-chan explained okay…..” Yurina said to Chinami and got a nodded as a response. “Continue Maasa-chan….” Yurina said to Maasa.

“Okay…. Maasa started. “Well, you guys heard about my fight with Maimi a few days ago right???” Maasa asked Yurina and Chinami and saw both of them nodded lightly. “I don’t mean to fight her actually but after seeing her so pathetic and weak, I need to put some sense into her…. The real reason for her condition is Suzuki-chan….” Maasa continued.

“What???!!!” It’s time for Yurina to be surprised and it’s Chinami turns to pull her back and put a finger on Yurina’s lips.

“Relax Yuri-chan…. Let Maasa-chan explained okay…..” Chinami said as she smiled at her talled girlfriend. Yurina nodded and calmed herself back.

“Actually, Suzuki-chan and Maimi have already known each other and they have been separated before because Suzuki-chan’s father had to transfer…. Maimi love Suzuki-chan so much and I think Suzuki-chan love Maimi too but Suzuki-chan keep telling Maimi that she doesn’t believe her and she hate her….” Maasa explained to Yurina and Chinami. “So, Erika and I have created a plan and somehow our plan got messed up and the relation between Maimi and Suzuki-chan are becoming more complicated and worse now….” Maasa continued as she looked towards the confused loved birds in front of her.

Suddenly, Erika and Maasa’s phone rang at the same time and both of them picked up.

“Momo, where are you??? Maasa talked to person that called her. Oh, you and Rii-chan are on the way to Suzuki-chan house??? Okay, make sure that she comes here allright???” Maasa said as she hung up her phone.

On Erika side….

“Moshi-moshi Mai……” Erika greeted the person who called her. “Maimi have called you for so many times??? Don’t worry about it…. Just come straight to
Yurina-chan’s house…. I’ve told her to come here…..” Erika said to Mai as she hung up her phone and turned towards the still confused Chinami and Yurina.

“I know that both of you are still confused…. But you guys will know everything when all of them got here….” Erika said as she went to Maasa and hugged her.

“I hope everything will go well Maasa-chan….” Erika said to Maasa.

“Me too….” Maasa replied as she kissed her girlfriend on the cheek.

Title: Re: Promise
Post by: oddball on June 23, 2010, 05:18:33 PM
Erika was the plotter along with Mai???

Does this mean that Mai feels sorry for what she has done, or is she still acting/wanting something more with Maimi?

Hope that the new plan B works better than plan A did!
Title: Re: Promise
Post by: abok on July 02, 2010, 09:14:58 PM
sorry for the very late update...... :bow:
here's the new chapter..... :)


@oddball: you to read it to know everything..... :D


Chapter 30

Airi was feeling very confused right now. And the reasons for this confusion were caused by Risako and Momoko. Firstly, she had been forced or more like she had been kidnapped from her own house by both of them because they wanted to go to Yurina house for some kind of farewell party or something and secondly, she was forced by Risako to go there. Risako threaten her by saying that if she doesn’t go, Risako would be very upset and she would never speak to Airi ever again.

Airi FLASHBACK

Airi was just finished taking a bath after she helped her mother to clean the house. After spending about an hour in the bathroom, she got out and quickly dressed up. Airi went downstairs and she was rather surprised to see Risako and Momoko were waiting for her in the living room.

“Rii-chan, Momo-senpai, what are you guys doing here???” Airi asked in confusion and surprised.

“We want to come and take you to your farewell party Airi-chan….” Risako answered as she smiled innocently at Airi while Momoko nodded her head and smiled at Airi too.

“Huh???” Airi responsed in disbelief. “What farewell party Rii-chan??? What are you talking about???” Airi asked Risako again.

Risako walked towards Airi and hold both of her hands.

“Your farewell party Airi-chan, I told Momochi and the others about you going to transfer and they want to make a farewell party for you….” Risako answered Airi. “Right Momochi???” Risako looked towards Momoko and smiled as she winked her eyes.

“Yes Airi-chan…. Rii-chan’s right…. Yurina and the others are waiting for you…. Please don’t say no Airi-chan or they will be very sad…” Momoko said to Airi as she moved to stand besides Risako.

Airi thought about it for a second. She was thinking deeply about this farewell party, she wanted to go but suddenly she thought about the person that she really don’t want to meet right now, Maimi and Mai.

“I’m sorry Riichan, Momo-senpai… But I don’t think that I can go…. I have something more to do today….” Airi said to Momoko and Risako.

“What??!!!” Momoko exclaimed. “But why Airi-chan???” Momoko asked. She was feeling very anxious because she thought that their plan was failing.

“You have to go Airi-chan, we’ll even drag if we have too…..” Rii-chan said in a stern voice. “Nakky, Chisa, Yurina and Chii have been working hard for this farewell party…” Risako continued as she stared Airi.

“You can’t force me if I don’t want to go Rii-chan…. Besides, I’m not that close to Yurina-chan, Chinami-chan, Umeda-chan, Sudou-chan and Yajima-chan…. So, it would be awkward if I go….” Airi said to Risako. She was getting annoyed because Risako had forced her to go.

“Airi!!!” Risako snapped. “Eventhough you are not close to them, they’re still your friend right??!!! And don’t worry… Maimi-nee could not come, she have something to do with Mai-chan….” Risako continued. Now she knew why Airi don’t want to come. Risako turned her head towards Momoko and smiled a bit. Momoko smiled back at her and patted Airi shoulder.

“Airi-chan, please come…. Everyone will be very upset if you don’t come… Please Airi, I begged you…” Momoko pleaded Airi as she put on her dog eyes to persuade Airi.

Airi stood and silent for a while. She doesn’t know what to do.

“If you refuse to come with us Airi, I will take that as a sign that you don’t want to be my friend anymore and I will never talk to you again….” Risako threaten Airi.

Airi was vey shocked to hear this and she could sense the seriousness in Risako’s voice. Airi sighed heavily and nodded her head.

“Allright, you guys win…. I’ll go….” Airi said in defeat.

END OF FLASHBACK

And thirdly, she had to walk in the middle between Risako and Momoko. Both of them clung on her arm very tightly and they don’t care about the fact that Airi hand was getting numb. Airi had told Risako about it but Risako just pretended that she doesn’t hear anything. When Airi realized that Risako ignored her request, Airi pouted and sighed heavily.

“What the hell is wrong with both of them today???” Airi asked herself.

Meanwhile, at Maimi side…..

Maimi was almost arriving at Yurina’s house. She was feeling very upset to the fact that she had to go there when she should be looking for Mai. But, Maimi knew that Erika would never threaten her if like that if there’s nothing important happening.

A few minutes after that, Maimi finally arrived at Yurina’s house. She holds the door knob and slowly turned the door knob around. After she had opened the door, Maimi walked slowly into the house. When Maimi was about to reach the living room, she saw Erika and Maasa sitting on the sofa.

“Erika, Maasa…” Maimi cried out. She walked faster towards both them and she froze when she realized another couple that was sitting in front of Erika and Maasa.

“Mai-chan??? “


Title: Re: Promise
Post by: oddball on July 05, 2010, 11:19:26 AM
Hmm the plans coming together, cant help but think that Airi is gonna see Mai and Maimi and flip out again! :panic:

Title: Re: Promise
Post by: abok on July 05, 2010, 08:07:23 PM
NEW CHAPTER!!!!! :lol:

@oddball : don't worry about it because it will happen. :D

Chapter 31

“Mai-chan???” Maimi said in confusion.

“Hi Maimi-chan, this is my girlfriend Arihara Kanna…..” Mai said as she stood up and introduced Kanna to Maimi. Maimi walked closer towards both of them and shook hand with Kanna.

“It’s a pleasure to meet you Kanna…. Mai-chan had told me so much about you….” Maimi said to Kanna as she smile.

“The pleasure is all mine Yajima-san…. Mai have told me a lot about you too…” Kanna replied as she returned Maimi smile by smiling back at her.

“Please call me Maimi…. There’s no need to be so formal Kanna…” Maimi said to Kanna.

Kanna’s smile widen as she said. “Thanks Maimi-chan….”

“By the way Mai-chan, what are you doing here??? I have been calling you all day you know…” Maimi said to Mai as she turned to face her.

Mai started to fidget as she slowly turned her gaze towards Erika and said.

“Erika-neechan had asked me to come here…. We have something very important to tell you Maimi-chan…”

“Erika-neechan??? Why are you calling her like that Mai-chan??? And what do you want to tell me???” Maimi asked in confusion.

“Actually, Erika-neechan is my cousin Maimi-chan…” Mai started to tell Maimi the truth. “And I have known you before we met…. Erika-neechan and
Maasa-neechan always tell me and Kanna about you…. What kind of a person you are, how strong you are, what you like and everything that involve you… Including your problems….” Mai continued as she turned her stares towards the floor while holding Kanna’s hand tightly. Kanna squeezed her girlfriend hand lightly as a support.

Maimi stood in silent for a while as was trying to absorb all the information that she’s just received. Seeing Maimi just stood there in silent bring worried to Mai and the others. Erika wanted to call Maimi but before she could do that, Maimi cuts her off.

“What the hell are you talking about Mai-chan???” Maimi said to Mai. She was trying very hard to control her anger. Maimi could feel heart was beating very fast due to the anger that she was trying very hard to control. “Are you telling me that you are lying to me all this time???” Maimi glared at Mai as she continued.

Erika and Maasa could sense Maimi’s anger and they knew that this will not be a very pleasant explanation session.

“Don’t be mad at Mai-chan Maimi, Erika and me were the one who asked her to do that….” Maasa interrupted.

“What the hell do you mean Maasa???” Maimi turned her glared towards Maasa.

“Calm down Maimi…”.Erika interrupted. “Before we could explain everything to you, we need to wait for one more person…” Erika continued.

Maimi sighed as she sat on the chair and crossed both of her arms on her chest.

“Whatever you said Erika…. But you better make everything clear or you can kiss our friendship good bye…” Maimi said coldly.

Erika turned her gazed towards Maasa as she went to Maasa and hold her hand. Maasa smiled weakly at her girlfriend and squeezed her girlfriend’s hand
lightly and whispered.

“Don’t worry, everthing will be fine…. Trust me….”

Chapter 32

After 20 minutes of very uncomfortable journey towards Yurina’s house, Momoko, Airi and Risako finally arrived there.

“Ano Rii-chan, Momo-senpai….” Airi called both of her friends. Risako and Momoko turned their head towards Airi with a blank expression and innocent
face, very innocent face.

“What is it Airi-chan???” Risako asked Airi.

“I think both of you can let go of my arms now… Don’t worry, I promise that I will not run away…” Airi replied.

Risako and Momoko giggled as they let go of Airi’s arm. Airi shakes her arm to let go of the numbness.

“Okay Airi-chan, let’s go in, everybodies waiting!!!” Risako said as she moved behind Airi and pushed her to the door.

“Stop pushing me Rii-chan!!!” Airi shouted as she laughed.

“We’re here!!!!” Momoko shouted after she opened the door.

Everyone in the house turned their gazed towards the new comers. And Maimi was very shocked to see Airi with them. “What is Airin doing here???”
Maimi said to herself.

Airi’s laughed died when she spotted the person that was sitting on the chair. As fast as lightning, Airi turned her body around and head towards the door. but before Airi could reached the door, her hand was tugged by someone. Air turned her head towards the one who tugged and realized that it was Risako.

“Let go of me Rii-chan!!! I want to go home!!!” Airi shouted.

Risako shook her head and said.

“No Airi, we have something important to tell you and Maimi-nee… So, you can’t leave… I won’t let you….”

“I said let me go!!!” Airi shouted again as she was trying to brush Risako hand off her.

“No Airi, you can’t leave!!! This involves you and Maimi-nee!!!” Risako shouted back.

“What the hell are you talking about Rii-chan!!! There’s nothing that involve me and Yajima!!!” Airi shouted with anger and sadness in her voice as her struggling became harder.

“What am I talking about about???” Risako said with a smirk on her face. “I’m talking about this Airi!!!” Risako shouted as she took out the picture that she found in Airi’s drawer and show it to Airi.

Airi stop struggling and she was very shocked to see the picture of Maimi. “Where did you get that???!!! Who give you the permission to go through my stuff Risako???!!!” Airi snapped.

“You did…. I accidently found this when I was looking for towel….” Risako said calmly. “Now Airi, please listen to what we have to say… and then you can leave if you want…..” Risako said as she pulled the speechless Airi and sat besides her on the chair in front of Maimi.

The living room was now turned to silent. Maimi kept staring at Airi who was bowing her heand and stared at the floor while Erika, Maasa and Mai were getting ready to explain everything to both of them. Momoko went towards Yurina and Chinami who were sitting on the the stairs and trying very hard to figured out what happened.

“Thanks for letting us use your house for this Yurina-chan….” Momoko said as she patted Yurina’s shoulder.

“You’re welcome Momo-chan… Now I know why they don’t want the parents to be at home….” Yuirna said as she smiled.

“Nee Momo-chan….” Chinami interrupted as she tugged Momoko’s sleeves.

“What is it Chii-chan???” Momoko asked.

“Will all of them be fine???” Chinami asked with a great concern in her voice.

“I hope they will be fine….. I really hope that they will be fine…..” Momoko said as she turned her gazed towards all of her friends that were sitting on the chair and sighed.


Title: Re: Promise
Post by: Mikitty_Ayaya on July 06, 2010, 09:51:32 AM
these chapters have been intense, finally meet Maimi and airi, but apparently  airi didn´t want this.  :cry:
airi so cruel.  :cry:
poor erika and massa, they have gone through bad times.
Maimi not seem to be happy with the reasons than erika will explain,  apparently erika  has a sense of fear in losing the friendship of Maimi.
Risako´s a nice friend  for airi, she thought this wonderful idea.  :heart: risako´s too sweet.  :heart:
airi was concerned about Maimi, although she doesn´t admit it ,airi  loves to  Maimi yet.  :wub:
next chapter!!  :heart:
Title: Re: Promise
Post by: oddball on July 06, 2010, 04:29:41 PM
Man this is getting intense!

Maimi seems really angry at Erika Maasa and Mai, hopefully she will accept their explanation.

Airi really seemed to calm down after she saw the picture, I hope we get to see why Maimi wasn't there when Airi had to go away soon!
Title: Re: Promise
Post by: abok on July 13, 2010, 03:06:46 PM
here the new chapter!!! sorry for the delay.... :sweatdrop:

@mikitty_ayaya : sorry for the late update... :sweatdrop: i have to rewrite this chapter for a few times...
@oddball : Airi just pretend to be calm... trust me... :D


Chapter 33

Maasa, Erina and Mai have never felt this scared their whole life. The three of them knew that if they screw their explanation, Maimi would hate them for the rest of their life and they don’t want that to happen. Maasa and Erina exchanged glances and Maasa could sense that her girlfriend was really afraid.
This is the first time Maasa seen Erika in this state. Erika was trembling a little bit but she still smiled at Maasa but Maasa knew right away that it was a fake smile. Maasa squeezed Erika hand tightly as a support because she knew that Erina would need her to stay strong her.

Mai was also trembling. But unlike Erika, she was more relaxed and calmed. Mai stared at her girlfriend face for a while. The only things that frighten her right now was what would happen to Kanna after Maimi found out that Kanna kicked Airi’s face. Eventhough Kanna did that to save her; it was not enough to calmed Maimi especially after they explained the truth to Maimi.

“How long do you intend to make me wait Erika???” Maimi voice echoed in the quiet living room. “Why the hell do you ask me to be here??? Why the hell Rii, Momo and Suzuki-chan’s here too??? And what do you mean that Mai is your cousin???” Maimi continued to give question as she glared at Erika angrily. Maimi already got a feeling that whatever Erika and Mai told her today it will not be good and she will not like it. But Maimi kept herself calmed because she wanted to hear what they have to say.

Erika gulped when she heard the tone that Maimi was using. She knew right away that her bestfriend was very furious. Erika looked at Maasa and saw her girlfriend smile brightly at her as a support as Maasa leaned towards Erika and whispered. “Don’t worry babe, I’m here…” Erika smiled at Maasa as she looked towards Mai and nodded her head as a signal that they should start their explanation. Mai nodded back at her older cousin as she let go of her girlfriend’s hand.

Momoko, Yurina and Chinami just sat on the stairs as they were waiting nervously for Erika, Maasa and Mai began their explanation. The three of them were also made sure that they will be ready if things turned out bad especially when they heard the furious tone from Maimi. Airi just sat there quietly while her hand was holding Risako’s hand. “What is the meaning of this?? I don’t understand any of this…. And what does Maimi mean that Umeda-san is Mai’s cousin??? And why does Maimi so angry??? I’ve never seen her like this before…” Airi thought to herself. Airi felt a squeezed on her hand as she turned her face and saw Risako smiled at her. “I know you’re confuse right now Airi-chan, but please be patient….” Risako said. Airi smiled back at Risako and nodded.

Erika, Maasa and Mai got up from their chair and stood up as Maasa and Erika were facing Maimi and Mai was facing Airi. After that, the three of them bowed in unison as they three of them shouted.

“Maimi-chan, Suzuki-chan, we’re very sorry!!! Please forgive us!!!”

Maimi and Airi froze on their sit when they heard that. Airi was very surprised because her worst enemy was asking for her forgiveness. Airi just sat there and said nothing. She could not find any words to say right now. And she was very confused with Mai behavior right now.

There was a moment of awkward silence for a while until Maimi put an end to it. “What do you mean you sorry Erika???” Maimi asked Erika with a confused tone. “What the hell did you guys do this time???” Maimi continued.

Erika was very afraid right now. She didn’t know how to start her explaination. She just stood there and avoids herself from making any eye contact with Maimi.

 “Are you deaf Erika???!!! Answer my question!!!” Mami shouted at Erika. She was getting irritated and her patience was running thin.

Everyone in the house were very shocked to hear Maimi shouted, especially Airi. She had never seen Maimi like this before. Erika was almost crying when Maimi shouted at her and seeing her girlfriend like this, Maasa went towards Maimi and said.

“Calm down Maimi, let me explain everything….”

“Whatever you said Maasa…” Maimi glared at Maasa as she crossed her arms across her chest.

Maasa went towards Erika and hugged her girlfriend before she told Mai to take care of Erika. After that, Maasa went towards Maimi and sat in front of her.

“Maimi, everything that happened between you and Suzuki-chan is our fault….” Maasa began her explanation. “Erika and I just want to help you…. So, after we returned home from your house the day that we found you crying in your bedroom…..”

Maasa FLASHBACK

After Maasa and Erika returned home from Maimi house that day, both of them were feeling very sad and sorry for Maimi, especially Erika. Both of themwere walking towards Erika house quietly when Erika suddenly said.

“Poor Maimi-chan…. What should we do Maasa???”

Maasa sighed heavily as she replied Erika. “I don’t know baby…”

“But we have to help her!!! She’s our bestfriend and seeing her like this make my heart hurt…” Erika said.

“I know that baby…. But what what should we do??? We can’t just go to Suzuki and begged her….” Maasa said as she looked at her girlfriend.

Erika sighed and nodded. “But we must think of something to help Maimi…. She’s been waiting for Suzuki for seven years and we can’t let their relationship end like that because Maimi really love her….” Erika said.

“I got an idea!!!” Maasa suddenly shouted as she looked towards her girlfriend and smile sweetly at her.

“Tell me Maasa-chan!!! Tell me!!!” Erika said as she shook Maasa’s arm.

“We can ask you cousin Mai to help us…. She knows Maimi but Maimi don’t know her yet…. And you know that she will be happy to help….” Maasa told Erika her idea.

Erika smiled brightly at Maasa and kissed her cheek. “You’re brilliant Maasa-chan!!! I know you will think of something!!!” Erika said happily.

END OF FLASHBACK

“That’s when Maasa and Erika-neechan come to my house and they told me everthing…” Mai-chan interrupted. “I told them that I will help them but we can’t think of a plan right away… So, I just wait for the right time to create a plan and when you come and ask me to go with you to Sugaya-san birthday because you don’t know how to face Suzuki yet, I have created a plan and Erika-neechan agreed with me…”

Mai FLASHBACK

After Maimi went home the day that she had asked Mai to go celebrate Risako birthday at Yurina’s house with her, Mai grinned to herself because the chance that she had been waiting for have finally came. After she arrived at her house, Mai quickly went to her room and called Erika.

“Moshi-moshi Erika-desu….”

“Erika-neechan, I finally got a plan!!!”

“What kind of plan Mai???”

“Maimi had just asked me to go to Sugaya-san birthday with her….”

“Oh really??? So, tell me about your plan Mai….”

“I want to mess with Suzuki’s feeling….”

“What do you mean Mai???”

“Well, you said that Suzuki told Maimi that she hate her right???”

“Yes, she did tell Maimi that…”

“I want to make her jealous…. I want her to suffer and when she had enough, she will admit that she love Maimi…”

“Are you sure about this Mai??? What if things turn out bad???”

“Don’t worry Erika-neechan, just trust me okay…”

“Okay… I’ll leave it to you then… Just make sure that you don’t go overboard with this plan okay???”

“I promise Erika-neechan…”

After their conversation ended, Mai shut her phone as she grinned and said. “Looks like I’m going to snatch Maimi away from you Suzuki……hahahahaha…..”

END OF FLASBACK

“But, I had broken my promise to Erika-neechan and went overboard with things….” Mai said as she bowed her head down in regret. “But, I guess I’ve already got what I deserved….” Mai continued as she turned her gazed towards Airi.

Maimi suddenly stood up. She had enough of this and she could not contain her rage anymore. Her patience was gone now. Maimi went towards Maasa and Mai and stood right in front of them. She glared at both them as if she wanted to beat the crap out of them right away.

“Who do you think you are??? Messing with my feeling like that???” Maimi asked both of them.

Maasa amd Mai just sat in silence. They didn’t know what or how to answered Maimi question. Mai and Maasa were trembling in fear right now.

“Answer me damn it!!!!” Maimi snapped.

“Please don’t be mad at them Maimi….. Be mad at me!!! I’m the one who agree to all this!!!” Erika finally had the courage to speak as she burst into tears.

Seeing her bestfriend crying, Maimi’s rage suddenly gone. She went towards Erika and hugged her.

“Why do you do this to me Erika???” Maimi asked.

“Maasa, Mai and I just want to help you Maimi…. It hurt us to see you suffering…” Erika said as she cried even harder.

Suddenly, all of them heard a clap. All of them turned their gazed to the girl that was clapping and laughing like crazy. That girl was Airi.

“Nice drama you set here Yajima!!! You even persuade Umeda-san to cry for this drama!!! I feel like I was watching a movie or something!!!
Hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!” Airi said as she laughed.

Risako, Momoko, Kanna, Yurina and Chinami were shocked to see Airi like this while Maimi, Maasa, Erika and Mai just stared at Airi. They never thought that Airi would react like this. Maimi went towards Airi as she put both her hand on Airi shoulder and said.

“What do you mean Airin??? I swear I’m not making this up….”

“Maimi’s telling the truth Suzuki-chan, please trust her!!!” Maasa said to Airi.

“Shut the hell up!!!!! Airi snapped. Why would I believe you Yajima???!!! You think that you can fool me again???!!!” She continued with rage as she
pushed Maimi to the floor. Erika and Maasa quickly went towards Maimi and hold her.

“Maimi didn’t lie to you Suzuki!!! She’s the victim… All of this happens because of us!!!” Mai shouted at Airi.

“Why should I listen to you Mai???!!! You the reason why I’m suffering!!! You the one that snatch her from me in the first place and now you want me to believe that you just did all that to brought us together??!! Don’t make me laugh!!! I saw both of kissing during Rii-chan’s birthday!!!!” Airi shouted back.

“Maimi didn’t kiss me Suzuki!!! I just made you saw that we were kissing!!! I just leaned towards her!!!” Mai said in defense. “I already have a girlfriend!!!” Mai continued as Kanna stood up and stand beside her. “Maimi only love you Suzuki, trust her!!!” Mai said.

“That’s right, I’m her girlfriend…” Kanna said as she glared at Airi.

“I will never trust her!!! I….. I….. just can’t!!!!” Airi said as she turned around and ran as fast as she could from Yurina’s house.

Airi-chan!!! Risako shouted as she turned towards Momoko and asked her. “What should we do now Momochi???”
“We can’t do anything now, there’s only one person that can do something now” Momoko said as she turned towards Maimi who was still froze on the floor. “Don’t just stand there Maimi-chan, go after her!!!” Momo shouted.

“You have to stop her Maimi-nee or you will lose her forever!!!” Risako said.

Maimi nodded and as fast as lightning, she ran after the girl that she loves. “Thank you guys for helping me…. Eventhough it turns out badly, I know you guys did it because I am a coward…. Now, I will be brave and I will make sure that Airin will be mine again and forever….” Maimi thought to herself as she quicken her pace to catch up with Airi.

Title: Re: Promise
Post by: oddball on July 13, 2010, 05:07:15 PM
Wow even more intense than the last chapter  :bleed eyes:

Hmm you have too feel sorry for Airi, she has got properly messed about in this fic, If only Maimi (well actually Momo) had figured out that only Maimi could solve her problem with Airi earlier! Would of made it a shorter fic however  :lol:

Hmm finally we may get a heart to heart with Maimi and Airi hopefully they will be able to sort out the problems that have been keeping them apart and just why Maimi wans't there to say goodbye to Airi all those years ago.
Title: Re: Promise
Post by: abok on July 26, 2010, 07:18:07 PM
The Final Chapter!!!

Chapter 34

Airi just kept running and running. No matter how much her leg ached or how tired she was considering the fact that she’s not so atletic, she just kept running. Tears were streaming down from her eyes. She couldn’t believe what happen today. Everything that happens just confused her more. As she running, the entire thing that Mai had told her at Yurina house came back to her mind.

“Maimi didn’t lie to you Suzuki!!! She’s the victim… All of this happens because of us!!!

“Maimi didn’t kiss me Suzuki!!! I just made you saw that we were kissing!!!

“I already have a girlfriend!!!”

“Maimi only love you Suzuki, trust her!!!”


Airi tears wouldn’t stop flowing from her eyes.  Her heart was aching more and more now. If what the others had told her was the truth, it means that all of this time, Maimi had never lied to her. Airi finally stopped running when she reached a park not too far from the park that she used to go with with Maimi a long time ago. Airi sat on a bench as she buried her face into her palm and started to cry again. the only thing that Airi prayed now was that everything that she heard today was just a lie because, if everyone was telling her the truth, that mean that Maimi was innocent and the only thing that Airi did to Maimi all those time was nothing but hurting her.

On Maimi’s side….

Maimi was running as fast as she could to catch up with Airi. There’s only one thing in her mind right now amd that is to confront Airi and told her everything including the reason for breaking her promise a long time ago.

“I very sorry for everything Airin, but this time I promise you that I will explain everything to you…. Please don’t leave me….” Maimi thought to herself as she was quicken her pace. Maimi looked everywhere for Airi, but she couldn’t find her. But she didn’t give up hope. Maimi knew that this is the last chance she got to explain everything to Airi and she would never give up until she does it.

“Where are you Airin??? Please don’t leave me before I can explain everything to you… Kami-sama, please help me… I want to explain everything to the person that I love the most in this world…. Please help me… I begged you…” Maimi thought to herself as she was pleading Kami-sama to help her. Maimi eyes were starting to get wet. The more she thought about Airi, the more she became frighten of losing her. After running for a while, Maimi finally reached the park that was not too far from the park that she and Airi always went a long time ago. Maimi decided to slow down her running a little bit as she looked to her right and left for Airi. After a few minutes of searching, Maimi finally found the person she was looking. Maimi gulped as she slowly towards Airi who was sitting on a bench and crying.

Airin felt a hand on her shoulder whike she was crying uncontrollably. Airi lifted her face and looked towards the person that was standing besides her with teary eyes. Airi eyes widen when she realized the person was Maimi and Airi also noticed that Maimi eyes were starting to get wet. “Airin….” Maimi called her. Airi stood up and she was ready to run again but failed because Maimi managed to hold her hand before she ran away again.

“Let me go Maimi…” Airi pleaded. Airi struggle as hard as she could to be free from Maimi’s grip but she failed. “Please Maimi…. Let me go….” Airi pleaded again without looking at Maimi.

“No Airin…. Please listen to me…. Give me a chance to explain everything… I beg you….” Maimi said as she was trying her best to hold Airi’s wraist.

“There’s nothing more to explain Maimi…. I’ve had enough…. Please understand Maimi… I need to be alone right now….” Airi kept pleading Maimi. Her tears wouldn’t stop flowing from her eyes.

“Please Airi… I beg you… Please give me one last chance to explain…. After that, I will never bother you again…. I promise….” Maimi begged Airi. Maimi’s tears had started to fall through her cheeks as she was trying her best to control it.

The moment Airi heard the word promise that came from Maimi mouth, she snapped. “I said no!!! Don’t you understand??!!! And don’t promise me anything, you’re a liar Maimi, there’s no way I would listen to your stupid promise!!! Now let go of me!!!”

Airi outburst shocked Maimi. She stared at Airi with the teary eyes of hers as she said. “I’m sorry about what happen 7 years ago….. I never meant to break that promise Airin….”

“So you do remember??? Do you know how hurt I was back then???!!! Do you know how much I cry Maimi??!!!” Airi asked Maimi with a stern voice. Eventhough her voice was stern, her eyes were still wet. Her facial expression was still sad and hurt.

“Airin… I’m sorry… Please let me explain…. Please Airin…” Maimi begged Airi again.

“No!!! I don’t want to hear anymore of your fake promise or you stupid lie!!! Just leave me alone!!!” Airi snapped again. But, before Airi could say another word, she was startled by Maimi outburst.

“Just listen to me damn it!!!! I know that you hate me Suzuki Airi!!! But let me explain everything!!! And if you want to leave after that, you’re free to go!!!! But now just listen to me!!! Listen to what I’ve got to say so that I will have no regrets anymore!!! So please, just shut your mouth and listen to what I got to say Suzuki Airi!!!”

Airi stood there in silent as Maimi pulled her to sit in the bench again. Maimi could see Airi tears and she felt like kicking herself because of her outburst to Airi just now. “I’m sorry Airi, but if I don’t use that kind of tone, I will lose you before I can explain everything and I will regret that forever….” Maimi said to herself.

“Firstly, I want to clear out things that just happen at Yurina’s house…. There’s nothing that happen between Mai-chan and me…. I think of her as my little sister just like Rii-chan… Beside’s, Mai-chan already have a girlfriend….” Maimi started explaining to Airi. Airi just stared at her shoes and stay in silent.
“And about what happen 7 years ago…. About the promise that I broke… Actually, I did go to your house that day Airin….” Maimi continued.
“What do you mean by you did go to my house Maimi???!!!” Airi cuts Maimi before Maimi could explain more. “I waited for you!!! And you never show!!!” Airi continued. Airi was about to ask more question but when she realized that Maimi was glaring at her, she shut her mouth.
Maimi smiled weakly at Airi as she squeezed Airi hand lightly. “I went to your house that day… But when I saw you crying, I just can’t face you, my legs felt weak and I just can’t continue to walk….” Maimi said as her tears were running through her cheeks again.

Maimi FLASHBACK

7 years ago….
After Maimi returned home that day, she was feeling weak, very weak. She felt like a part of her was dying when she recalled what Airi had told her at the park.

“I have to move away from this place Maimi-chan…….”

“I am not joking….. daddy….have to transfer…..”

Maimi stayed in her room the whole night and she was crying. She was also crying at the park with with Airi that evening but, she was holding back. She knew that she had to be strong in front of Airi. Maimi wrapped herself with her blanket as she hugged Airi’s picture. Her heart was aching right now. She felt that someone had just taken a knife and tore her heart. Maimi had always love Airi, and she loved her more than a friend or a sister, she loved her as a lover. She wanted to protect Airi from any harm. She wanted to protect the smile, the laugh and everything that Airi had. But right now, she felt hopeless, she felt herself like a loser. Maimi tears were getting stronger when suddenly she heard her mother knock the door and came in. Mrs. Yajima was shocked to see her lovely daughter like that. She hugged Maimi and strokes her head. Maimi told her mother everything that happen and her mother said that she had to be strong because Airi need her to be strong. Mrs. Yajima hugged her daughter until Maimi fell asleep.

The next morning……

Maimi woke up that morning with a shattered heart. She had to say good bye to the person that she loves the most and they will be apart for a long time. After she finished her bath and put on her cloth, she went downstairs where her mother had already prepared the breakfast. Maimi’s mother smiled sweetly at her when she reached the kitchen. Mrs. Yajima knew that her daughter was very sad right now. After Maimi finished her breakfast which she didn’t eat at all because she seems to lose her appetite that morning, Maimi walked out of her house and headed towards Airi’s house. Maimi was about to reached Airi’s house when she suddenly heard Airi’s voice.

“Wait mom, my friend is not here yet!!!”

Maimi froze on the spot as she quickly moved towards the junction besides Airi’s house and she peek from there. Maimi saw Airi was crying and without noticing anything, her tears were starting to fall too. Maimi wanted to keep walking towards Airi, but her legs became weak as she fall to the ground and cried. “I’m sorry Airin….. I can’t see you…. I don’t know whether my heart could bear to watch you go away….” Maimi said to herself as she was crying madly. “I have to break my promise to you Airin…. I’m sorry….” Maimi continued to cry until she heard the sound of the van moving away from Airi house.

END OF FLASHBACK

Maimi finished her explanation with hot tears running through her cheeks and so did Airi. Maimi wipe the tears that fall from Airi cheeks as she moved closer towards Airi.

“I’ve never meant to break my promise Airin… But after I saw you cry, my legs just stop moving and my heart as well…. I know you hate me now Airin, and I understand that…. I just want you to know that I’ve always love you…. You’re my world, my heartbeat, my breath, my everything…. And I just want you to know that my feeling for you will never change because you’re the only one that makes my life perfect…  I promise that I will never bother you again Airin….. And please forgive me someday….” Maimi confessed to Airi whole heartedly as she kissed Airi’s forehead and stood up to leave. Maimi tears never stop no matter how much she tried to stop them from flowing. “Good bye Airin… I love you….” Maimi whispered to herself as she slowly walked.

“So that’s it??? You’re just gonna leave me alone again???” Airi said as she stood up and turned her body towards Maimi who was frozing on the spot when she heard what Airi said. “After everything you’ve just said, you’re gonna leave me again???” Airi asked again.

Maimi just stood there in confusion. “Airin… I… I……” Maimi wanted to say something but she couldn’t help but stuttering.

Airi lunged forwards towards Maimi as she hugged her tightly and cry on Maimi chest. “Baka…. Baka… Baka Maimi!!!” Airi said as she could feel Maimi arms embracing her back.  “I’ve never hate you… I love you… I missed you…. I’m just angry because you broke your promise…. Please don’t ever leave me alone again Maimi… I can’t live without you by my side….” Airi continued as she was crying on Maimi’s chest.

Maimi hugged Airi tightly as her tears of joy ran through her cheeks. “I’ll never leave you again… I’ll never let you go away again… And I will never break my promise again, I would rather die than hurt you again….” Maimi said as she stroke Airi’s back.

When Airi heard Maimi mentioned that she would rather than hurting her again, Airi lifted her face up and put her finger on Maimi’s lip. “Don’t you ever say that again….. If you say something like that again, I will never forgive you… “Airi said as she stared at Maimi’s eyes.

Maimi looked at Airi brown eyes as she leaned towards her Airi and kissed her lips. Airi moved her hand from Maimi’s back to Maimi’s neck as she returned the kiss and deepen it. Both of them stopped when they were short of breath. Maimi looked at Airi and said. “It’s getting late Airin, let me walk you home…”

Airi smiled at Maimi and replied. “Can I stay over at your house tonight??? I don’t want to be alone tonight… I want to be with you….”
Maimi smiled back as she holds Airi tightly and kissed Airi forehead. “I’m glad that you said that…. I don’t want to be alone too…. I want to be with you
too….” Maimi said as she smiled and lead Airi towards her house.

When both of them reached Maimi’s house, Mrs. Yajima was surprised to see Airi.

“Airi-chan!!! What a pleasant surprised…. “Mrs. Yajima said as she winked towards her daughter.

“Hello Aunty Yajima… I’m sorry about my behavior the last time I was here…” Airi said as she bows her head.

Mrs. Yajima went towards Airi and hugged her. “Don’t worry about it anymore Airi-chan… I’m just glad that you and Maimi are together again….” Mrs.
Yajima said as she winked at Airi and causing Airi to blush.

“Mom!!! Stop teasing Airi…” Maimi said as she pulled the blushing Airi into her embraced.

“Hahahaha…. I’m just joking… Is Airi-chan going to stay here for tonight???” Mrs. Yajima asked her daughter.

“Yes, can you call Aunty Suzuki and told her about this???” Maimi said to her mother.

“Ok… I’ll call her later… The two of you must be hungry right??? Take a shower first cause dinner will be ready any moment….” Mrs. Yajima said to Airi and Maimi.

When the two girls were out of her sight, Mrs. Yajima smile grew wider as she took the phone and called Mrs. Suzuki.

“Moshi-moshi…. Suzuki resident…”

“Suzuki-san, it’s me Yajima…”

“Yajima-san, why are you calling me late in the afternoon???”

“Oh, I just want to tell you that Airi-chan will stay over at my house tonight…”

“Airi will stay over??? Does this mean that Airi and Maimi…”

“Yes Suzuki-san, they’re together again…”

“Oh my god!!! This is good news…. I’m very happy to hear this…”

“Me too Suzuki-san, I was surprised when Maimi returned home with Airi-chan just now…”

That’s great…. Finally they’re together again… Looks like they don’t need us to help after all…

“You’re right.... Well, what matters now is that our daughters are together again… So, you don’t have too worry about Airi tonight Suzuki-san, she’s safe here….”

“Ok… Thank you Yajima-san… Bye…”

Later that night

After taking shower and finished the dinner, Maimi and Airi stayed in Maimi’s room as the two of them cuddle on Maimi’s bed. Maimi couldn’t believe that she had finally got her Airin back. Maimi hugged Airi’s waist as she kissed Airi’s head that was resting on her shoulder. Using her free arm, Maimi interwined their fingers together and said.

“Airin… Thank you…”

Airi lifted her head from Maimi’s shoulder as she turned to face Maimi. “I should be one to thank you Maimi… I’ve never felt this happy ever since we separated….” Airi said as she gave Maimi her lovely toothy grin. “Maimi, Rii-chan told me that you and Sudou-chan have a fight at school last week…” Airi continued as she asked Maimi.

Maimi smiled and nodded. “It’s true… Maasa just want to put some sense in me since I’ve been such a coward…” Maimi replied.
Airi moved closer towards Maimi and hold Maimi’s hand. “Where do you hurt Maimi???” Airi asked.

“Maasa punched me really hard at my stomach…. I always know that she was strong, but I never thought that she could punch me like that…..” Maimi said as she grins.

Show me…. Airi said Maimi as she stared at Maimi with a serious expression on her face.

Maimi lifted her shirt a little bit and she noticed a slight flush forming on Airi’s cheek. “Please don’t be mad at Maasa…. She’s just trying to put some sense in me since I’ve been such coward… So please…” Before she could finish her sentence, Maimi froze when she felt a pair of soft lips landed on her stomach.

“Still hurt???” Airi asked Maimi as she was blushing like mad.

Maimi’s ability to speak had failed her at the moment. The only way Maimi could response to Airi’s question is by nodding her head. Airi smiled widely at Maimi as she lowered her head and started to kiss Maimi abdomen again. After Airi finished kissing Maimi’s abdomen, she slowly moves her lips towards Maimi’s lips. Airi sat on Maimi as she started to deepen the kiss. Maimi smirked as she starting to deepen the kiss as well. With one swift motion, Maimi flipped Airi down as she was on sitting in top of Airi right now.

Maimi kiss Airi neck and bite them gently. A small moan escaped from Airi’s mouth as she was starting to enjoy the pleasure that Maimi was giving her. They continued to pleasure each other until both of them were to tired to do anything as both of them fell asleep in each other arms.

The next morning….

Maimi woke up with a big smile on her face as she stared at her angel that was sleeping peacefully besides her. “Thank you for everything my love…” Maimi murmured as she leaned and kiss Airi’s forehead. Maimi move away away from the bed as she slowly tiptoed to the bathroom. After Maimi finished her shower, she came out and saw Airi’s crying on her bed. Maimi quickly went towards Airi and hugged her.

"What’s wrong Airi??? Why are you crying???" Maimi asked with a great concern.

“I woke up and you're not here besides me…. I… I…. thought you’ve left me again….” Airi answered as she hugged Maimi tightly and cry on her shoulder.

Maimi broke their hug as she stared into Airi’s big brown eyes.  Airin. “I’ll never leave you… No matter what happen, I will never ever leave you alone….”
Maimi said as she kissed Airi cheeks and wipe Airi tears with her thumb. Airi returned Maimi smile and hugged her Maimi again.

“Why do you take a shower so early Maimi??? Are you going somewhere???” Airi asked Maimi in confusion.

“Not me Airin, but us…. I want to take you somewhere…” Maimi answered Airi. “So you better take a bath quickly okay….” Maimi continued.

Airi smiled as she went to the bathroom and took a bath. After both of them were ready, they left the house with their finger interwined with each other.

Epilogue

“Maimi –chan!!! Wait for me!!!”

“Hurry up slowpoke!!!! Hahahahaha……. “

Both of them finally reached the place that Maimi wanted to take Airi to. It was the park where the used to go when they were kids a long time ago. Maimi and Airi sat under the tree that they used to sit a long time ago. Airi placed her head on Maimi shoulder while Maimi hugged Airi’s waist with one of her arm and interwined their finger together with the other one. Both of them cuddled together in silent until a voice interrupted them.

“I figured that both of you must be here and I was right…”

Maimi and Airi turned towards the voice and they saw Erika, Maasa, Mai, Kanna, Risako and Momoko. Erika, Maasa and Kanna stood in front of Maimi and Airi as they bowed their head and apologized.

“We’re very sorry… If it wasn’t for us, both of you will never suffer….”

Maimi and Airi stood up and hugged them. “We should be one to apologize…. You guys are very good friends… And we’re thankful for that….” Maimi said
to the trio.

Airi went to Mai and hugged her. “I’m sorry Mai-chan…. And thank you for everything you’ve done….” Airi said.

Mai returned the hug and said. “I should be the one to apologize you know… I’ve done terrible things to you…”

Airi pulled away from their hug and smiled at Mai. “You done all that because you want me to realize how important Maimi to me and how much I love….
Friend's???” Airi said as she held her hand out for Mai to shake.

“Of course….” Mai said smiling as she shoke Airi’s hand.

“Airi-chan… I’m sorry too…” Risako interrupted. “Here’s your picture…” Risako continued as she gave Airi the picture of Maimi back.

Airi hugged Risako tightly and said. “You never did anything wrong to me Rii-chan… You’re my bestfriend… And I don’t need that picture anymore… I have the real one now…”

“So, can we join you guys too???” Momoko cheekily.

“Of course you guys can….” Maimi said as she pulled Airi to sit on her lap and kissed her on the cheek. The others smiled widely as all of them sat
besides the two of them with their own lovers.

Maimi hugged Airi waist tightly as she whispered to her. "I love you Airin…”

Airi smiled and replied. "I love you too Maimi… Stay with me forever???”

“I’ll stay with you forever Airin…. “

“Can you promise me Maimi???”

“I promise…”

THE END

This is the last chapter of Promise..... :D
I want to thank everyone that support me and everyone that read my fic... :)
I really appreciate it guys... XD
Domo Arigato Gozaimasu.... :bow:
Title: Re: Promise
Post by: oddball on July 27, 2010, 01:35:48 PM
Man I acually teared up a bit during the last chapter  :cry: it was really moving!

I'm so glad there was a happy ending, at one stage I did think that you were going to have a sad ending but I am glad that it is a happy one.

Thanks for writing this fic. I really enjoyed reading it  :twothumbs

Hoping for another story soon?
Title: Re: Promise
Post by: stefy on July 30, 2010, 05:22:03 PM
Thank god they end up happily ever after! I was seriously about to hunt you down if you went and broke both their hearts and separate the perfect-for-each-other YajiAiri pair! Well thanks for allowing me to enjoy my breaks at work with this nice fic!

I VOTE FOR A SPECIAL CHAPTER~! One that's full of YajiAiri fluffness~! XD
Title: Re: Promise
Post by: Mikitty_Ayaya on August 14, 2010, 03:30:39 AM
I think you've finished a wonderful way, at the begin of this story there were many complications.  :nervous  although i love every thing of this story.  :heart:
The imaginary hatred that airi  felt  for maimi,  maimi´s frustration  of not understand airi´s feelings. too, biggest  fight´s  of sudou against maimi  8)
In some chapters I disliked  hagiwara´s character,  the wonderful friendship  of erika and Maimi, the  worries of airi for maimi, etc.
massa a strong and sincere friend.  :heart:  airi a pretty girl that suffered in silence and only limited to see. maimi  a strong spirit girl, accustomed to doing things her own way, although she could suffer for her desicions, Risako a girl tenacious, loyal, kind, friendly and eager to help her best friend.
last chapter was the best! I enjoy it so much,  :heart:  :heart:  finally everything was clear.  :wub:


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“Just listen to me damn it!!!! I know that you hate me Suzuki Airi!!! But let me explain everything!!! And if you want to leave after that, you’re free to go!!!! But now just listen to me!!! Listen to what I’ve got to say so that I will have no regrets anymore!!! So please, just shut your mouth and listen to what I got to say Suzuki Airi!!!”

 :wub: i love it. :heart:

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Maimi finished her explanation with hot tears running through her cheeks and so did Airi. Maimi wipe the tears that fall from Airi cheeks as she moved closer towards Airi.

“I’ve never meant to break my promise Airin… But after I saw you cry, my legs just stop moving and my heart as well…. I know you hate me now Airin, and I understand that…. I just want you to know that I’ve always love you…. You’re my world, my heartbeat, my breath, my everything…. And I just want you to know that my feeling for you will never change because you’re the only one that makes my life perfect…  I promise that I will never bother you again Airin….. And please forgive me someday….” Maimi confessed to Airi whole heartedly as she kissed Airi’s forehead and stood up to leave. Maimi tears never stop no matter how much she tried to stop them from flowing. “Good bye Airin… I love you….” Maimi whispered to herself as she slowly walked.

 :cry:

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“So that’s it??? You’re just gonna leave me alone again???” Airi said as she stood up and turned her body towards Maimi who was frozing on the spot when she heard what Airi said. “After everything you’ve just said, you’re gonna leave me again???” Airi asked again.

good words, i love airi here.   :bow:

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Maimi just stood there in confusion. “Airin… I… I……” Maimi wanted to say something but she couldn’t help but stuttering.

Airi lunged forwards towards Maimi as she hugged her tightly and cry on Maimi chest. “Baka…. Baka… Baka Maimi!!!” Airi said as she could feel Maimi arms embracing her back.  “I’ve never hate you… I love you… I missed you…. I’m just angry because you broke your promise…. Please don’t ever leave me alone again Maimi… I can’t live without you by my side….” Airi continued as she was crying on Maimi’s chest.

Maimi hugged Airi tightly as her tears of joy ran through her cheeks. “I’ll never leave you again… I’ll never let you go away again… And I will never break my promise again, I would rather die than hurt you again….” Maimi said as she stroke Airi’s back.

When Airi heard Maimi mentioned that she would rather than hurting her again, Airi lifted her face up and put her finger on Maimi’s lip. “Don’t you ever say that again….. If you say something like that again, I will never forgive you… “Airi said as she stared at Maimi’s eyes.

Maimi looked at Airi brown eyes as she leaned towards her Airi and kissed her lips. Airi moved her hand from Maimi’s back to Maimi’s neck as she returned the kiss and deepen it. Both of them stopped when they were short of breath. Maimi looked at Airi and said. “It’s getting late Airin, let me walk you home…”

 :wub: great scene, if somewhat sentimental, but it was good, i like the words from airi.

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“Airin… Thank you…”

Airi lifted her head from Maimi’s shoulder as she turned to face Maimi. “I should be one to thank you Maimi… I’ve never felt this happy ever since we separated….” Airi said as she gave Maimi her lovely toothy grin. “Maimi, Rii-chan told me that you and Sudou-chan have a fight at school last week…” Airi continued as she asked Maimi.

Maimi smiled and nodded. “It’s true… Maasa just want to put some sense in me since I’ve been such a coward…” Maimi replied.
Airi moved closer towards Maimi and hold Maimi’s hand. “Where do you hurt Maimi???” Airi asked.

“Maasa punched me really hard at my stomach…. I always know that she was strong, but I never thought that she could punch me like that…..” Maimi said as she grins.

Show me…. Airi said Maimi as she stared at Maimi with a serious expression on her face.

Maimi lifted her shirt a little bit and she noticed a slight flush forming on Airi’s cheek. “Please don’t be mad at Maasa…. She’s just trying to put some sense in me since I’ve been such coward… So please…” Before she could finish her sentence, Maimi froze when she felt a pair of soft lips landed on her stomach.

“Still hurt???” Airi asked Maimi as she was blushing like mad.

Maimi’s ability to speak had failed her at the moment. The only way Maimi could response to Airi’s question is by nodding her head. Airi smiled widely at Maimi as she lowered her head and started to kiss Maimi abdomen again. After Airi finished kissing Maimi’s abdomen, she slowly moves her lips towards Maimi’s lips. Airi sat on Maimi as she started to deepen the kiss. Maimi smirked as she starting to deepen the kiss as well. With one swift motion, Maimi flipped Airi down as she was on sitting in top of Airi right now.

Maimi kiss Airi neck and bite them gently. A small moan escaped from Airi’s mouth as she was starting to enjoy the pleasure that Maimi was giving her. They continued to pleasure each other until both of them were to tired to do anything as both of them fell asleep in each other arms.


epic scene.  :heart: :heart: :heart:  :wub:

sorry for the delay, but I've been so busy.  :doh:  :sweatdrop:

                 :)  ~~thank you  for your fic, I enjoyed it, thank you Abok-chan~~   :)

ah, I vote for a special chapter, One that's full of YajiAiri fluffness  too.



Title: Re: Promise
Post by: abok on August 18, 2010, 02:01:47 PM
Hey guys..... :D

i'm back.... XD

Thanks to oddball,stefy and mikitty_ayaya....sorry it took me long to write this special chapter, but i have been busy lately.... :bow:

PROMISE~~~ SPECIAL CHAPTER~~~

Part 1

Maimi woke up that morning with a big smile on her face. She moved her body to her right as she stared at the sleeping figure that was sleeping peacefully besides her. Seeing Airi sleeping so peacefully beside her, Maimi smile grew bigger as she carefully caressed Airi’s cheek. It has been a year since both of them were back together again. Maimi still remember the event that followed after both of them told their parents and friends about their relationship. Maimi chuckled to herself when she recalled about how she and Airi have to explain the details about their past to Chisato, Nakky, Yurina, Chinami, Saki and Miyabi. The six of them felt offended that they were left in the dark without knowing anything that happen and to the fact that Risako, Momoko, Erika and Maasa didn’t go to them for help. Maimi couldn’t help but to grin everytime she remembered her surprised party that Airi prepared for her birthday. Airi had given her a silver necklace with a shape of a heart and with both of their names carved on the heart shape.

Maimi thought were broken when she felt Airi’s lip landed on her cheek. She smiled at at her cute little kappa as she lean in to kiss her forehead. “Good morning sleeping beauty” Maimi said with a sweet smile on her face. “Do you sleep well???” Maimi asked Airi as she moved her hand and hugged Airi’s waist. Airi gave Maimi her lovely toothty grin as she answered Maimi’s question. “You already know the answered to that Maimi……. You know that I always sleep well when you are sleeping beside me….”  Airi cheeks flushed as she moved closer towards Maimi and cuddled closer to her. Maimi stroked Airi’s hair as she hugged her beloved kappa closed to her. “Maimi, I don’t to leave this room today…. I want to stay with you all day….” Airi said as she laid her head on Maimi’s chest. Maimi smiled as she continued to stroke Airi’s hair. “I know Airin, but we have promise the girls that we want to go shopping with them today…..” Maimi answered with a smile. “You‘re the one that make that promise, not me…..” Airi replied as she pouted. Maimi chuckled as she used her finger to lift Airi’s chin as she lean to kiss Airi soft lips.

“I’m sorry Airin, I don’t know that you want to be alone with me today…..” Maimi apologized after she pulled away from Airi’s lips. Airi blushed as she laid her head back on Maimi’s chest. “It’s not fair….. You always do that…..” Airi said. “Do what Airin???” Maimi asked in confusion. “Kiss me…. You always do that whenever I’m angry or sulking with you….” Airi replied. “You know that I’m always weak when you do that….” Airi continued with another blushed on her cheeks. Maimi smiled as she kiss Airi forehead. “Airin, don’t say that, I’m the the weak one when I’m with you…. And don’t worry okay, we’ll be alone next week, have you forgotten about our private holiday???” Maimi asked Airi. “Of course I don’t Maimi… I’ve been looking forward to it since the day you told me…..” Airi replied with a cheeky smile.

After spending a few more hours on the bed cuddling without any disturbance, Maimi and Airi got up and ready themselves to go shopping with the others. After they have finished bathing and breakfast, Maimi and Airi went to the town together and waited for the other at a shopping mall. After a few minutes of waiting, the others arrived. “What took you guys so long???” Maimi asked Erika. Erika smiled as she hugged Maasa from behind. “Don’t ask me, Mai-chan’s the one who late…..” Erika said as she smirked at the now blushing Mai. Airi smiled as she went towards Mai and asked her. “What’s you’re excuse today Mai-chan???” Mai cheeks turned redder when she heard Airi question as she moved to hide herself behind Kanna. “Airi, stop teasing Mai-chan…..” Risako said. “Rii-chan’s right Airi…. It’s not her fault when Kanna-chan’s the one who started it….” Momoko interrupted. Kanna and Mai blushed more furiously as Kanna glared at Momoko and said. “I’ll wait patiencely for your turn Momo-chan, and when the time comes, I’ll tease you and Rii-chan until both of you wish that you’ve never teased a person name Arihara Kanna .... Kanna said as she hugged Mai and kissed her forehead.

“Kanna-chan, kowaii…..” Risako said as she ran towards Momoko and hugged her. The other girls just giggled and laugh at their antics. After that, the eight of them entered the shppoing mall as they surveyed each shop and bought the thing that each and everyone of them wanted. After they have finished shopping, the eight of them decided to go to the yakiniku restaurant across the streets. After they have finished their meals, all of them stayed there for a little while to chat. “So Maimi, have you and Airi pack for your trip next week???” Maasa asked Maimi. “Yeah, I have finished packing… But it’s a pity that you guys aren’t coming…..” Maimi said. “We can’t bother you Maimi-nee…. You and Airi should spend some romantic time alone….” Risako said as she smiled at Airi. “But, it will be more fun if you guys go….” Airi said as she lean towards Maimi and hugged her. “Don’t worry Airi, all of us can go together some other time….. Beside, you guys are gonna celebrate your first anniversary together, how could we disturb you guys???” Momoko said as she smiled at Maimi and Airi. “Just make sure that the two of don’t forget our souvenirs….” Mai said as she grinned. “Of course we won’t forget about that right Maimi???” Airi asked Maimi. “Of course not…. Even if we want too, we just can’t… Because it will be a disaster if we forget about their souvenirs and they will haunt us for the rest of our lives….” Maimi answered as she laughed. “You got that right Maimi-chan….” Mai said as she and the others join Maimi in laughter.

A week after that……

Maimi and Airi have just finished checking up their luggage for their private holiday that morning. After they have finished their breakfast, they waited patiencely for their taxi that will send them to the train station. 15 minutes after that, their taxi arrived. “Have a nice trip both of you…” Mrs. Yajima said to her daughter and her girlfriend. “We will mom….” Airi replied as she hugged her mother. “Take care of Airi ok Maimi-chan….” Mrs. Suzuki said to Maimi. “Of course I will mom, don’t worry ok….” Maimi replied as she hugged Mrs. Suzuki. Airi and Maimi have called both their mothers mom. Mrs. Yajima and Mrs. Suzuki have given them that as a condition to continue dating. Maimi and Airi waved at both their mom until they are out of their sight.
Title: Re: Promise Special Chapter~~~PART 1~~~ is up!!!
Post by: oddball on August 18, 2010, 03:08:15 PM
The first couple of paragraphs of this were complete and utter  :wub:  :lol:

So Airi and Maimi are going on a holiday eh, I wonder what these soveniers are that they were given? :drool: XD

Nice to see you back by the way, btw my next chapter should be up later today!!!
Title: Re: Promise Special Chapter~~~PART 1~~~ is up!!!
Post by: Liben on August 19, 2010, 01:54:48 AM
Maaaan, why am I always late?
I'm glad there's an special chapter at least! ^^ The final chapter was just... wow! I was really looking forwart it.  I loved it! Just the final part when they promised that they would love each other made me want to cry! I'm really happy that it ended this way
And now with that Special Chapter... I'm even happier! ^^ I hope those two enjoy themselves in that special trip =)
Title: Re: Promise Special Chapter~~~PART 1~~~ is up!!!
Post by: abok on August 21, 2010, 07:45:17 AM
I plan to finish this special chapter in this second part, but i can't......  :sweatdrop:
so i have decided to create part 3 as the last part for this special chapter..... :thumbsup


PART 2


A few hours after that….

Maimi and Airi have just arrived at their hotel that afternoon. After they have checked in, Maimi and Airi stayed inside their room to rest themselves. That night, Maimi decided to take Airi to the amusement not far from the hotel that both of them were staying. Airi was very excited and happy because she really loves the amusement park. After they have tried all the games that the amusement park has offers, Maimi took Airi on a Ferris wheel ride before both of them returned to the hotel. Throughout the ride, both of them stayed in silent as their finger interwined with each other. “Airin…” Maimi broke the silence as she looks towards her Airi. “What is it dear???” Airi asked as she caressed Maimi’s cheek. Maimi smiled as she took hold of Airi’s hand as she stared at the big, brilliant brown eyes in front of her. “Tell me, what do you want for our first anniversary??? I’ll give anything that you want… You just say it…” Maimi said as she squeezed Airi’s hand. Airi smiled back at Maimi and said. “I don’t want anything Maimi…. I just want to be with you… I just want to have your heart….. Maimi leaned closer towards Airi as she moved Airi hand and placed it on her chest. “There’s no one in this world that can have my heart except for you…. It will always be yours forever…. Maimi said as she stared at Airi before claiming the girl’s lip.

The next morning…
..

Maimi and Airi went to the mall that morning; they want to search for some souvenirs for their friends and family. “What should we buy for them Maimi???” Airi asked when they reached the mall. “I don’t know Airin….” Maimi replied as she looked around for suitable souvenirs to buy. “But I think they don’t mind as long as we buy it for them…” Maimi continued. “Yeah, I think you’re right Maimi…. I can’t even imagine what will happen if forgot about them….” Airi said as she imagined the worst possibility that could happen and shivered. Maimi smiled sweetly at Airi as she lean towards Airi and whispered. “Don’t worry Airin, they will never harm you cause I will protect you from them….” Airi blushed a little bit as she smiled back and kissed Maimi’s cheek. “I know you will Maimi…” Airi said with a toothy grin.  After spending hours at the mall, both of them finally decided to go eat. Maimi and Airi entered a restoran with all the souvenirs that they have bought for everyone. While waiting for their ordered food to arrived, Maimi was lost in her thought about the present that she wanted to give Airi for their anniversary tomorrow. “What should I give her??? Since this is our first anniversary, I want to give her something special…. But what??? Oh god…. Why am I so suck at this kind of things??? ” Maimi thought to herself.

Maimi thought was interrupted when she felt someone’s poking her arm. She turned her head towards the person that was sitting besides her and saw Airi was smiling sweetly at her. “Care to share your thought Maimi???” Airi said as she moved closer towards her. Maimi hugged Airi waist as she kissed Airi’s forehead. “Nothing… I’m just thinking about the souvenirs we just bought….” Maimi tried to lie. “You know that you can’t lie to me right Maimi??? I know you’re thinking about tomorrow… About what you should give me…” Airi said as she smiled. Maimi tried to say something but before she could, Airi placed her finger on top of Maimi lips. “I told you that I don’t need anything… I just want you…” Airi continued with a blush. Maimi smiled as she took Airi’s hand and kissed it. “Sorry for lying to you…” Maimi apologized. “Don’t apologized dear… I love you…” Airi said. “I love you too” Maimi replied back. After they have finished eating, Maimi and went back to their hotel and rest. Both of them decided to stay at the hotel that night.

The next morning….

The rapid knocking at the door has forced Airi to wake up fromher beauty sleep. Airi moved to her side and she was surprised that Maimi’s not there. Rubbing her eyes, Airi walked hesitantly from bed and headed towards the door. When Airi opened the door, she was tackled into a hug by her best friend, Risako. “Rii-chan!!! Why are you here???” Airi asked as she hugged her best friend back. “Well, not just me, Momochi, Maasa, Erika, Mai and Kanna are also here….” Risako answered as she called the others. Airi was surprised when she saw all her friend came in. Airi went towards them and gave each of them a hug. “Sorry to come here uninvited Airi-chan…” Mai said with a grin. “What are you talking about Mai; we are invitied, by Maimi…..” Erika said as her lip was forming a smile. “Erika’s right, we are invited….” Momoko interupted. “Maimi call you guys??? But when???” Airi asked with confusion. “Yesterday evening, she wants us to stay with you until tonight Airi-chan…” Maasa answered Airi’s question. Stay with me??? What does she mean by that??? She’s the one that should stay with me, it’s our anniversary today!!!” Airi said as she started to feel angry. Risako went towards Airi and patted her shoulder. “Don’t be mad Airi, Maimi-nee want us to stay with you because she wants to go and find something for you….” Risako said as she tried to calm her best friend down. Airi pouted and she went to the bathroom. “Baka Maimi… I told you that I don’t want anything….” She said to herself as she continued pouting.

Meanwhile….

Maimi was wandering around the entire gift and souvenirs shop in order to find something special for Airi. She had been walking around since the morning but she still couldn’t find anything special for her to buy. “What should I do now…. I don’t even know what to buy….” Maimi thought to herself. “I hope that Airin is not so mad when I got home…. I hope Rii-chan and the others will be able to cheer her up… I understand how important this day are to us, especially for her, that’s why why I’m gonna gave something that will prove my love for her… And I won’t give up until I find it…” Maimi said to herself as she entered the last shop on that district. Maimi wandered around the shop as she looked through everything that the shop has to offer. Maimi was about to leave with disappointment again when she saw the thing that she was looking for. Maimi smiled widely as she took the thing that she was looking for. It was a ring with a shape of a heart, the shape of the heart is very beautiful with the combination of pink and red color. Maimi went to the cashier and pay for that ring. She asked the shopkeeper to put that ring into a box and wrapped it neatly. Maimi was very happy when she walked out from that shop. Maimi decided to go back to the hotel and spend the rest of the day with her lovely little kappa. Maimi was about to arrived at the hotel, somebody bumped her. “I’m sorry” That person apologized without even looking back. “It’s okay…. “ Maimi said. Maimi started to walk towards the hotel when she realized something in her pocket was missing. “The ring!!!” she exclaimed. Maimi turned back and started to run after the thief.

The thief was walking happily when she suddenly realized that Maimi was about to catch her. As fast as lightning, the thief started to run as Maimi ran faster to catch her. The thief ran towards an old warehouse, she thought that she had already loose Maimi but suddenly someone grabbed her wrist and turned her around. “Give the present back!!!” Maimi demanded. The thief just laughs as she kicked Maimi inher stomach and caused Maimi to loose her grip on the thief. “I want this thing…” The thief said as she stuck her tongue out. “Please give that back, if you want money, I’ll give you, just return that to me…..” Maimi pleaded the thief. “That gift is for my special someone, so please give it back to me…” Maimi continued to plead. The thief smirked and laughs. “You’re so pathetic… So, it’s for someone special??? Now I want this thing more than anything….” The thief said with a smirked.

Maimi had finally lost her patience. She lunged herself towards the thief as she punched the thief right on her face. Before Maimi’s punched could hit her, the thief blocked Maimi’s punch and tried to kick Maimi again. However, Maimi was ready this time. Maimi grabbed the thief leg before it could hit her and tackled her down. Maimi managed to take back her present but the thief was still not giving up. The thief stood back up and readies herself to attack. “That’s enough… I got my thing back… Just go…..” Maimi said to the thief. “Shut up!!!” The thief shouted as she ran towards Maimi. The thief tried to punch Maimi, but Maimi was to fast for her. Maimi evaded the thief attack as she punch the thief right in the face. The thief falls to the ground as she holds her right cheeks that had just been punched by Maimi. “That’s for kicking me in the stomach just now…” Maimi said as she walked away. “Now we’re even….”
Maimi continued and started to go back to the hotel. “What a day…” Maimi said to herself as she holds her present to Airi tightly.

When Maimi arrived at the hotel, she went straight to her room and she was shocked to see everyone was there except for Airi. “Erika, where’s Airi???” Maimi asked her best friend. Erika sighed heavily and answered Maimi’s question. “She’s in the bathroom… She refuses to come out because she’s sulking….” Maimi walked towards the bathroom and knocked the door softly. “Airin, I’m back… Please open the door…” Maimi said. “Go away!!! I don’t want to see you!!!” Airi shouted from inside the bathroom. Maimi sighed a little as she went towards her friends again. “Why don’t you guys go back to your room, we’ll meet again tonight at the beach okay…” Maimi said as the other nodded in agreement. After Erika and the others left, Maimi went back to the bathroom and knocked the ddor again. “Airin baby, please open this door, I’m sorry, I didn’t mean to leave you….” Maimi pleaded from outside.

“You left me alone…. Today is our anniversary and you leave me… How could you do that…. You’re supposed to be with me today… Just the two of us….” Airi replied. Tears were starting to run through Airi’s cheeks. “I’m sorry…. I leave because I want to find something and I finally found it…. Please open the door Airin…” Maimi pleaded again. She was feeling very guilty right now. After a few minutes of silence, Airi finally open the door and let Maimi in. Maimi quickly went inside the bathroom and hugged Airi. “Don’t cry Airin….” Maimi said as she wipes out Airi’s tears using her thumb. Airi stopped crying as she stared at Maimi. “What do you mean by you finally found it Maimi???” Airi asked Maimi in confusion. Maimi smiled and hugged Airi tightly. “The place to store my heart before I give to you forever….” Maimi answered as she leaned in and kissed Airi’s lips. Airi returned Maimi kisses as both of them cuddled in the bathtub for the rest of the evening.

That night, Maimi, Airi, and the rest of the girls stayed at the beach to celebrate Maimi and Airi’s anniversary. All of them were having barbeque that night. After all of them have eating, Erika, Maasa, Mai, Kanna, Risako and Momoko congratulate Maimi and Airi for their first anniversary. “Kinen-bi omedeto Airi-chan, Maimi-chan!!!” All of them shouted in unison. Maimi and Airi hugged each and every one of their friends and thanked them. “So Maimi-nee, it’s time for the present….” Risako said as she hugged Momoko from behind. “That’s right Maimi, hurry up and give Airi your present…. We can’t wait any longer….” Erika said as she holds Maasa’s hand tightly. “Alright, alright…” Maimi said as she went towards Airi and kneel in front of her. Airi cheek was flushing madly as she stared at Maimi who was smiling sweetly to her. Maimi reached out for Airi’s right hand and said. “Airin, I love you…. Thank you for everything you have given me… You make me happy….” Maimi said with a blushed.

However, before Maimi could continue her romantic speech, she was stop by the loud sound of motorcycles. Suddenly, a gang of motorcycle came from out off nowhere and circled them. Maimi stood up quickly as she hugged Airi protectively. “Maimi, I’m scared…” Airi said as she hugged Maimi as tightly as she could. “Don’t worry Airin, I’ll never let them harm you…” Maimi said as she glared at the gang. The others also hugging their lovers as they also glared at the gang. One of the motorcycle gang got down from her motorcycle and removed the helmet from her head. Maimi eyes widened when she realized that she knew that gang member. “You!!!” Maimi shouted in surprised.
Title: Re: Promise Special Chapter~~~PART 2~~~ Update!!!
Post by: stefy on August 21, 2010, 03:18:10 PM
Jeez Maimichan! She's soooo romantic yet soo stubborn! But still very sweet I suppose. So who is the biker???? All the Berryz and C-ute members are mentioned already (right?) so.... momusu? REINA?!
Title: Re: Promise Special Chapter~~~PART 2~~~ Update!!!
Post by: abok on August 22, 2010, 02:53:32 AM
This is the final part for Promise Special Chapter.... XD

i hope ypu guys will enjoy it.... 8)

Part 3

“Yeah….. It’s me again!!!” The person shouted back. “What do you want now??!!!” Maimi asked. “I want my revenge of course, what else…” The person answered Maimi question as she smirked. “So Sayu, is she’s the one that punch you???” One of the gang asked Sayumi, the thief. “Yes Reina, she’s the one…” Sayumi replied. “You got some gut girl; nobody dares to hurt one of us before…. You must be either strong or just stupid…” Reina growled. All of the gang members have got down from their motorcycle and they stood in front of Maimi and the others. “What should we do now Sayu??? Do you want me to crush them???” Another biker name Gaki asked Sayumi. “Yeah…. I’ve been thinking about that Gaki-san….” Sayu answered as she glared at Maimi. “I’ll start with the first blow then!!!” Reina shouted as she started to walk towards Maimi. “Calm down Reina….” The leader of the biker gang finally spoke.
“But Yuu-chan, I always got the first bow…. You know that….” Reina said to the leader as she pouted.

“Hahahaha….. I know that, but let me interview this brat first….” The leader said as she walked towards Maimi and the others. Airi was shaking because she was feeling very afraid right now. Maimi hugged Airi and gave Airi a quick kiss at the forehead to calm her down. “Who tell are you guys???” Maimi asked the leader. The leader smirked as she glared back at Maimi. “You don’t know who we are??? How insulting….” The group leader said as she looked at her biker gang and saw all of them smirking. “My name is Nakazawa Yuko… And this is my biker gang; we are called Jigoku Musume… Everybody knows who we are and I can assure you that nobody dares to do anything to us…. Because they know what we’ll do to them if they mess with us…..” Nakazawa said as her smirked got wider. “Why are you here then???!!! We never bother you or your fucking gang!!!” Maasa said as she holds Erika close to her. “You sure got a big mouth girl!!! How dare you talk to our leader like that!!!” shouted Yossie, one of the Nakazawa minions. Nakazawa chuckles as she moved closer to Maimi and pointed her finger to Maimi. “Well, all of you don’t, except her…. She punched my sister Sayu today….” Nakazawa said with anger. “Why don’t you ask your sister about what she did to receive my punch then???” Maimi said as she smirked. “I don’t care about what she did, nobody touch my sister without end up dead!!!” Nakazawa said as she glared at Maimi with with hatred.

“Calm down Yuko-neechan….” Sayumi said as she put her hand on Nakazawa’s shoulder. After Nakazawa had calmed down, Sayumo moved towards Maimi and before Maimi could react, she slid her hand inside Maimi’s pocket and took something inside. After that, she quickly returned to Nakazawa as she smile and showed Maimi what she had taken. Maimi was shocked to see her present for Airi was on Sayumi’s hand. “Give that back!!!” Maimi shouted as she tried to get to Sayumi but she couldn’t do that because Airi was holding her tightly and not letting her go. “Airin, let me go…. I have to get that back” Maimi pleaded as she tried to free herself. “No!!! It’s too dangerous!!!! Airi shouted as tears started to fall from her eyes.

“So, this is your special someone…..” Sayumi said with sarcastically. “I’m so jealous; you have such a cute girlfriend…” Sayumi continued. “Please give that present back to me….” Maimi pleaded since she couldn’t do anything due to the fact that Airi won’t let her go. “Give that thing to me Sayu…” Nakazawa said as she took the present from Sayumi. “So, you want this back???” Nakazawa asked Maimi. “Yes, please give that back… I begged you…” Maimi pleaded. “What’s so important about this small thing anyway??? Why don’t you just give it to Sayumi and we will leave you and your friends alone….” Yossie said as she looked towards Sayumi and saw her nodded in agreement. “No, I won’t give it to her… I want to give it to Airin, so give it back to me!!!” Maimi shouted in anger. Nakazawa as she started to plan something evil inside her head. “You really want this back so badly???” Nakazawa asked Maimi for confirmation. “I’ll do anything to take that back, even if I have to fight all of you here…” Maimi said with great confident and determination in heart. “Maimi no!!!” Airi pleaded Maimi. “It’s not worth it…. Just let it go!!!” Airi continued with tears falling fast through her cheeks. Maimi kissed Airi forehead as she wipe out Airi’s tears with her thumb. “I have to do this Airin, I won’t let them take what’s rightfully yours…” Maimi called Risako and told her to take hold of Airi as she went towards Nakazawa and face her.

“So, you’re willing to do anything??? Even if it cost your own life???” Nakazawa asked Maimi. “How many times should I repeat it??? I’ll do anything!!! Maimi answered Nakazawa. Nakazawa smirked as she went to Ai, one of her member gang and whispered something to her. Ai nodded as she took the present from Nakazawa and left. “What the hell did you do now Nakazawa???!!! Maimi shouted as she tried to chase Ai but, she was stop by Yossie and Reina. Nakazawa went towards Maimi and smirked. “Ai-chan is taking your precious gift to a place that you will have to go by yourself to retrieve it later…. But, before you do that, I will tell you about the other thing that you need to do….” Nakazawa said. “Tell me what I have to do then, I’ll do anything….” Maimi said as she glared at Nakazawa. “I’ll give you three challenges, if you manage to win all challenge, I’ll give that thing back to you and we will never bother you or your friend again. “What kind of challenge???” Maimi asked Nakazawa. “The first challenge is the test of courage, the second challenge is the test of strength and the last one wil be the test of love…. As for the first and the second challenge, I don’t care if either you or your friends want to do it but the last challenge will be done by you…” Nakazawa explained. “This is between me and you so don’t you dare to drag my friends into this….” Maimi said. Before Nakazawa could say anything, Maasa and Kanna went towards Maimi and put their hand on Maimi’s shoulder.

“Maimi, we will take part as well…” Kanna said as she stared at Maimi. “No, I won’t let you!!! All of this happens because of me!!!” Maimi said as she looked at her friends. “No Maimi, we know you are strong, but you have to save your strength for the last challenge… We don’t know what kind of challenge she will give to you… So please let me and Kanna help you….” Maasa pleaded. “I don’t want you guys to get hurt…” Maimi said as she stared at her feet. “Don’t you worry about us Maimi, we’re strong too you know…”Kanna said as she grin. “Kanna’s right Maimi, I’ll take the strength test and Kanna will take the courage test…” Maasa said as she put hand on Maimi’s shoulder. “But…” Maimi wanted to say something more but she was cut off by Maasa. “Don’t argue with us Maimi, Kanna will win the first challenge and I will win the second… I know you are strong and brave Maimi, you even better than me in a fight, but, when it comes to strength, you know that I’m a lot stronger than you right???” Maasa said as she winked and smiled at Maimi. “I know that… You are stronger than me… My stomach still hurt you know…” Maimi said as she smiled back at Maasa and Kanna. “Thanks guys…” Maimi said as she bowed her head. Maasa and Kanna hugged Maimi and said. “Don’t thank us Maimi, we’re your best friend right…”

“Ok then, whose gonna take on the first challenge???” Nakazawa asked the trio. “I’ll do it…” Kanna said as she steps in front of Nakazawa. “So, what’s the first challenge obasan???” Kanna asked Nakazawa sarcastically. Nakazawa laughed and put her hand on Kanna’s shoulder. “You’re got some guts kid, I’ll give you that, but if you ever call me obasan again, I’ll kill you…” Nakazawa said with a vey dangerous tone. “So, whose gonna take this challenge with this kid”??? Nakazawa continued as she looked towards her biker gang. “I’ll do it Yuu-chan…” Reina said as she steps forward. “I know you’ll say that Reina… Nakazawa smiled. “So, what do I have to do to win this challenge???” Kanna asked. Nakazawa led all of them towards the road as she told both Kanna and Reina to stand there. “Gaki and Eri will ride their motorcycle and they will attempt to hit both of you… Whoever that stands on their ground longer will win this challenge…” Nakazawa said as she signaled Gaki and Eri to start their motorcycle. BeforeNakazawa could start the challenge; Mai ran towards Kanna and kissed her passionately. “Good luck baby…” Mai said as tears ran through her cheeks. Kanna smiled as she wipes the tears from Mai’s cheek and said. “Don’t worry baby… I love you...”

Gaki and Eri waited for Nakazawa signal and when they saw it, both of them rode their bike as fast as they could. “Maybe you give up now kid and you’ll be alive to kiss your girlfriend again….” Reina said to Kanna when she saw the motorcycles were getting closer to her and Kanna. “Just shut up Yankii, there’s no way in hell I would give up…” Kanna replied back. Everyone that stood on the side line was getting nervous and anxious by the minutes. The motocycles were getting closer to Reina and Kanna but neither of them wanted to give up. “Kanna, it’s dangerous, evade it!!!” Kanna heard her friends shouted. But she decided to ignore all of them and just stood on her ground. The motorcycles were just a few meters from them but both of them still not moved. Reina could fell her heart beating fast as she finally decided to evade it. Kanna smiled as she finally moves away from there. Kanna was very lucky because Eri was about to hit her when she finally moves. Kanna ran towards her friend as she hugged Mai and kissed her. Mai kissed Kanna back as she wipes her tears that were running fast through her cheeks. Reina sighed as she went towards Kanna and shook hands with her. “You beat me… You win… Congratulations… Reina said as she smiled. Kanna smiled back and said. “Thanks…”

Reina went towards Nakazawa and bowed to her. “I’m sorry Yuu-chan, I’ve lost….” Reina apologized for her defeat. Nalazawa smiled and hugged reina. “It’s okay; you’ve done your best…” Nakazawa said as she kissed Reina’s forehead. “So, what does the next challenge will be???” Maasa asked Nakazawa. Nakazawa pulled back from her hug as she went towards Maasa and the others. “The challenge of strength will be an arm wrestling…” Nakazawa said as she grinned. “I’ll do it leader….” Yossie said as she patted Nakazawa’s back. All of them went back to beach and gathered around a table. Yossie and Maasa their arm on the table as both of them ready to battle. “I never lost before kid, so don’t you even dream of winning…” Yossie said mockingly to Maasa. Maasa smirked and said. “We’ll see about that!!” Nakazawa sat on a chair in front of them as she shouted. “Are you ready???” Maasa and Yossie nodded as the signal that both of them were ready. “Fight!!!” Nakazawa shouted as both of them started to battle. The battle was very intense because neither of their arms moved. Maasa and Yossie are on par with strength. But, Maasa got her extra strength when Erika kissed her cheeks as she shouted and slammed Yossie’s hand on the other side of the table. Maimi and the other shouted happily as they hugged Maasa. Erika kissed Maasa passionately as her consolation prize. “You very strong kid, tell me your name…” Yossie said as she held out her arm towards Maasa. “Sudou Maasa…” Maasa answered shorly as she took Yossie’s hand and shook it. Maimi went towards Nakazawa stood in front of her. “Tell me the last challenge…. Let’s get this over with…” Maimi said seriously. Nakazawa grinned as she took all of them to the other side of the beach.

On the other side of the beach


Ai was already there waiting for all them to arrive. When she saw Nakazawa, she quickly ran towards her and whispered something into Nakazawa’s ear. Nakazawa smirked grew bigger when she heard what Ai had told her. “Before we go on with the last challenge, there’s something that I forgot to tell you…” Nakazawa said to Maimi. “What is it this time???” Maimi asked her with her very irritated tone. “If you lose, I want your girlfriend for tonight….” Nakazawa said with an evil smirked on her face. “What did you say???” Maimi asked as her face darken and she could feel her anger rising inside her. “I said I want your cute little girlfriend tonight… I really want her on my bed tonight…. I wonder what she sounds like when when I mess her up tonight…” Nakazawa said as she licked her lips and winked at Airi. “Don’t you dare say that to my Airin!!!!” Maimi shouted as she ran towards Nakazawa and threw her punch at her. Nakazawa blocked Maimi’s first punch but before she realized it, Maimi’s other punched already landed on her face. Nakazawa took a few step back as Maimi lunged herself towards Nakazawa and started to attack her again. Nakazawa evaded all Maimi’s attack this time and that makes Maimi more furious.

“Maimi stop!!!!” Airi shouted as she tried to run towards Maimi but Risako and Momoko managed to hold her tightly. “Don’t go Airi, it’s too dangerous!!! Risako shouted. Maimi lose her focus when she heard Airi’s voice and Nakazawa took this chance to kick her stomach and punched her. Maimi fell to the ground as she puts her hand on her stomach. Airi and the others ran towards Maimi as Airi hugged Maimi protectively. Nakazawa went towards Maimi and said. “I’m just joking you idiot, save your strength, you gonna need it for the last challenge. Maimi stood back up and glared at Nakazawa. “What is the challenge???” Maimi asked. “You see that rock???” Nakazawa asked she held out her finger and pointed it towards the rocks on the sea. “Yeah, I see it, why???” Maimi asked Nakazawa again. “For this last challenge, I had told Ai-chan to put you present there, and the challenge is simple, you go and take that present back… There’s something you need to know before you go… When Ai-chan go there before, it’s easy because the water level is easy and you can walk on the rocks easily…. But now, the wave is stronger, the water level is high and it’s going to be hard to walk because most of the rocks are drowned and it’s dark….” Nakazawa finished her explanation with a smirked. “You don’t have to do it if you don’t want too….” Sayumi interrupted. “What???” Maimi asked in confusion. “This is the test of love; we want to see how far you would go for your girlfriend’s present… And if you decided to back off, we won’t say anything…. We just want to see how much love you have for her, would you really die for her or it’s just a stupid talk…” Sayumi said as she hugged Nakzawa from behind. “That’s enough Maimi, don’t do it!!!” Airi shouted as she hugged Maimi from behind. “Please stop… Don’t do this anymore…
I don’t want that present… I just want you… Please listen to me Maimi…. Airi pleaded with tears on her eyes.

Maimi turned herself towards Airi and hugged her back. “I’m sorry Airin, but I have to do it… Because my heart is in that box… You have already given me your heart Airin…” Maimi said as she pulled out the necklace that Airi gave her for her birthday. “If I don’t go and take it, my heart will lost in the sea and I can’t never give to you…” Maimi said as she gave Airi a qquick kiss on her forehead and ran towards the rock. “Maimi!!! Come back here!!!” Airi shouted as tears were running fast from her eyes. Airi tried to run after Maimi but she was stop by Sayumi. “Let go of me!!!” Airi said as she struggled. “No!!! It’s too dangerous for you!!!” Sayumi shouted. Airi struggled as hard as she could but her effort was futile because Risako and the other came ro help Sayumi hold Airi.

Maimi knew that she’s hurting Airi again, but she can’t let her present for Airi being taken by the sea or Nakazawa. Maimi tears ran through her cheeks when she heard Airi screaming for her. “I’m sorry Airin, but this will be last time I hurt you, after this I’ll listen to everything you said….” Maimi thought to herself as she walked on the rocks carefully. The trail that was made by the rocks was very slippery and dangerous. Maimi took her steps very carefully but it’s hard for her because it’s dark and most of the rock was already drown. And to make things harder, the wave was strong and it caused Maimi to lose her balance. Maimi was almost fall when a huge wave hit her but she managed to keep her ground. “Just a little bit more…” Maimi said as she kept walking towards the present. After a few more steps, Maimi finally got the present back. She was very happy as she waved the others on the shore. “I got it!!!” She shouted. Suddenly, a huge wave hit Maimi causing her to lose her balance and fall into the water. Maimi’s forehead hit the rocks as she falls into the water unconscious.

Ending

Maimi woke up that morning and realized that she’s in her hotel room again. Maimi moved a little bit and she felt somebody is holding her hand tightly. Maimi moved to her side and saw Airi’s sleeping on the side of the bed with tears running through her eyes. Maimi use her thumb to wipe out Airi’s tears and she was very careful while she was doing that because she didn’t want to wake Airi. But, the moment Maimi’s thumb touches her skin; Airi woke up and hugged Maimi tightly. “Maimi!!!” Airi cried. “You’re awake!!! I’m very worried!!! Thank god you’re ok!!! Airi cried as she hugged Maimi tighter. Maimi patted Airi’s back as she pulled away to kiss Airi’s forehead. “I’m sorry for my stupidity… I’m sorry for making you worry… I’m sorry because I have hurt you again…” Maimi apologized as tears running through her cheeks. Maimi and Airi were interrupted when Maasa and the others entered their room. Maimi was shocked to see Nakazawa and her gang was there too. “What are you doing here Nakazawa???!!!” Maimi asked. She could feel her anger was rising up again. “Calm down Maimi, Nakazawa-san save you yesterday when you fell…. She really regrets everything that happens…” Erika said as she smiled. Nakazawa and her gang stood in front of Maimi’s bed and bow down to her. “Please forgive us….” Nakazawa apologized with regret. Maimi got out from the bed with Airi as her support and went towards Nakazawa. “I forgive you… And thanks for saving my life…” Maimi said as she smiled and hugged Nakazawa lightly. Nakazawa hugged Maimi back and after she pulled back, she reached into her pocket and took out the present that she took from Maimi. “I’m really glad that I can save this too… Nakazawa said as she handed Maimi the present.

Maimi took back the present and hugged Nakazawa again. “Thank you Nakazawa-san!!!” Maimi said. After Maimi pulled back from her hugged with Nakazawa, Maimi took Airi hands and led her to the bed. Maimi helped Airi to sit down as she kneels in front of Airi. Maimi hold Airi hand as she stared into Airi’s big, brilliant brown eyes. “Airin, I know that I’m stupid and I always hurt you…” Maimi started as she handed Airi the present that she bought for her. Airi opened the present and saw the ring that Maimi had bought her. Airi eyes were filled with tears as she saw Maimi took the ring and place it onto her finger. “This ring symbolized my heart Airin, I have put my heart in there and I want it to be yours forever…. And I want you to be mine forever too… After you’ve graduated from school, will you marry me???” Maimi asked Airi as she squeezed her hand lightly. “Yes, I will marry you Maimi…” Airi said as she wipes her tears and kissed Maimi. Maasa, Erika and the others shouted happily as they ran towards Maimi and Airi and congratulate them. Nakazawa and her gang went towards Maimi and Airi as all of them congratulate them as tell them to invite them to their wedding someday.

A few hours later….

After the other have left them, Maimi and Airi stayed on the bed and cuddled closely to each other. Airi placed her head on Maimi’s chest as their finger interwined together. “Maimi…” Airi called. Maimi moved her head so that she can face Airi. “Yes princess…” Maimi replied. “I want t punish you now….” Airi said as she smiled sweetly to Maimi. “Why do you want to punish me Airi???” Maimi asked as she still not getting what Airi was trying to say to her. “For making me cry and worried…” Airi said as she moved away from Maimi. Maimi moved closer towards Airi but she was surprised when Airi pushed her to the bed and lie above her. “So this is my punishment then???” Maimi asked as she grinned. Airi just nodded as she started to kiss Maimi. Maimi returned Airi’s kiss as she hugged her girlfriend waist. Maimi moaned when she felt Airi’s bitting her neck. Maimi stroke Airi’s back as she let Airi took care of her shirt. When Airi has finished taking her shirt off, Maimi pushed Airi gently as she’s the one that lying on top now. Maimi smirked as she lean down and started to kiss and bite Airi’s neck. “Maimi…. I’m ….. not…. finish… with… my… punishment…  yet… “Airi said shakily as she was too lost in the pleasure that Maimi was giving her. Maimi took off Airi shirt as she started to kiss Airi’s chest. Airi was moaning like crazy when she felt Maimi’s tongue on her sensitive spot. After Maimi finished with the upper part of Airi’s body, she turned her attention to the other part.

Maimi was getting aggressive as Airi’s was hugging her tight because of the pleasure that she was in now. Maimi kissed Airi intimately as she continued to give her girlfriend pleasure. Both of them continued to pleasure each other until they are too tired to move. Maimi hugged Airi tightly after they have finished with their pleasure moment. Maimi kissed Airi forehead as she whispered into Airi’s ear. “Happy anniversary Airin…” Airi smiled as she cuddled closer and replied. “Happy anniversary to you to dear…. Thanks for everything…” Both of them finally fall asleep in each others arm.

The end.

The Special Chapters have finally ended.... :D

i hope you guys love it... :nervous

Title: Re: Promise Special Chapter~~~Part 3 (The Final Part)~~~Update~~
Post by: Mikitty_Ayaya on August 22, 2010, 04:04:10 AM
oh, interesting chapters, a special chapter of Maimi and Airi, that's nice.
Airi was pretty, she just wanted to be with Maimi.  :heart: I liked attitude of Maimi.
the  scene  of sayumi and maimi i like, it´s   fun and interesting, Maimi was nice with her.
the tests of massa and kanna  were interesting, have emotion, but the last test was too loose, the fight was short, I expected a big fight of nakazawa vs maimi.   :(  :(  :(  Nakazawa's personality is very strong  :yossi:
Nakazawa  was nice and friendly, cute... ^^;

good chapter,  some scenes were beautiful and romantic.  :)
 I enjoy this special chapter,     Thank you.  :)


Title: Re: Promise Special Chapter~~~Part 3 (The Final Part)~~~Update~~
Post by: oddball on August 23, 2010, 04:19:52 PM
The Special chapters were quite cool, I liked how we saw the stubborn attitude od Maimi come back into the story with trying to get the ring back, its was really cute that all Airi wanted was to spend time with Maimi :wub:
Title: Re: Promise Special Chapter~~~Part 3 (The Final Part)~~~Update~~
Post by: memory on August 27, 2010, 03:33:10 PM
i've just finished read this sotry... :D
i love it.... :heart:
maimi and airi is so sweet together.... :wub:
this sory is good.... :thumbsup
i hope you will write another story abok-san... :twothumbs
Title: Re: Promise Special Chapter~~~Part 3 (The Final Part)~~~Update~~
Post by: kuro808 on September 08, 2010, 09:33:43 AM
gomen for not replying sooner, I never got into your story until a while back but I never managed to finish it until now :nervous

After reading the story, I found it to be quite interesting over time between Maimi and Airi, I didn't realized that i finished until I did, good job :thumbsup