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Untitled [AtsuYuu OS] - COMPLETED
« on: January 16, 2014, 05:26:28 AM »
[This is my first fic, I'm sorry in advance if its not so good :kneelbow:]

-Fall In Love-

“Ah!! Cold!!” “This is the worst!! The forecast didn’t even mention rain!” girl said while running and she found waiting shed.

--Waiting Shed--
 “Oshima-San . . .?” the unknown girl said

[Yuko look where the voice came and she found another girl]

Yuko: “Maeda-San? Long time no see, right?”
Atsuko: “Y-yes. . . It’s been a while. . “



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While trying to get out of the rain, I happened to run into Maeda-San she was from my middle school.
She’s cute and feminine her arms and legs are slender and delicate; She was always popular with boys.


Yuko: “Of all the days to forget my umbrella! Argg . . . I’m soaked!”
Atsuko: “Me too”

I should’ve kept running. Because the truth is I know she hates me.
I guess that the conversation’s dead. . . We’ve never really talked much. She really is . . . beautiful. . .
I really don’t know exactly why she hates me, I just noticed whenever our eyes met she’d tense up and look the other way.
We were never really close, so I got never got the chance to ask her why. When I found out that we were going to different high schools. . . It was a big relief.


“Well I just have to endure it until the rain stop. “ Yuko thought look to her phone and Sigh.

Atsuko: “Is that a Smartphone?”
Yuko: “Huh? Oh, yeah. I just traded in my old one recently. What kind of phone do you have?”

So when she was the one to initiate conversation. I thought it was a little strange.

Atsuko: “Oh . . . This is . . . Mine. . .”
Yuko:  “Oh I used to have the same one! It’s a little slow, don’t you think?”
Atsuko: “Yeah . . . When I’m texting and stuff. . . “
Yuko: “Exactly! It was driving me crazy! I love this Smartphone. Wanna see it? “
Atsuko: . . . . . . *Look at Yuko’s phone*
Yuko:” I was debating getting an iPhone. But I really like the design on this one, There are a bunch of apps . . . . . ?”

When I look at her, she’s staring at me, our eyes met but again she turns her head and looks other way.

Atsuko: . . . . .
Yuko: . . . . .

You gotta be kidding. . . You brought it up. . .
And I am the one who broke the silence.

Yuko: “I give up; did I do something to you, Maeda-San?”
Atsuko: “What?”
Yuko: “It’s not like we’re classmate any more. . . So it really doesn’t matter at this point, but you really wear your emotions on your sleeves. I just have to ask, Is it something that I did?”
Atsuko: *Blush* “Y-you notices?”
Yuko: “Yeah . . . you could say that. . .”
Atsuko: “I-I’m sorry. . . I tried my best to hide it, did I make you uncomfortable?”
Yuko: “Uncomfortable. . . That’s one word for it. . .”
Atsuko: “I-I’m sorry, you may not remember but, when we were third years . . . the first semester . . .

*Flashback*

..School Toilet
Girl1:  “What is her deal? Maeda I mean. Is she just a big tease or what?”
Girl2: “Oh the girl who was in class 4 last year? She’s been popular with the boys since the start of second year.”
Girl1: “I’m getting sick of watching it honestly.”

[Atsuko inside one of the cubicle and she hear all of those conversation]

Atsuko: “Are those girls in my class?” *she thought*

Girl2: “Girls like that are always popular with the boys, but they never have any girl friends you know?”
Girl1: “You got that right. The fake innocence act! She looks the type!”

Atsuko:” A fake. . . Is that how I look?” *she thought and having a teary eyes*

But. . .

Yuko: “That’s not true. She got along great with the girls in her old class.”
Girl1: “Huh? Really? Were they the same type or what?”
Yuko: “And it’s not her fault she’s cute, that’s why I’m not surprised the boys won’t leave her alone.”
Girl2: “We mean, She is cute, but we don’t think she’s all that.”
Yuko: “You can’t be serious. She’s gorgeous! If I were a guy, I’d go after her myself!”
Girl1: “Seriously? You’ve got bad taste, Oshima!”

[The three girls leave the comfort room while Atsuko left behind sshock and blushing]

*End of Flashback*

Atsuko: *Blush* “I was happy, I even. . . I even thought it would be great if you really were a boy.”
Yuko: *Blush* D-did I say that?! * Yuko thought* . . . . . . .
Atsuko: “After that I just couldn’t get you out of my mind even though you are a girl and I thought even if you’re not a boy maybe it wouldn’t be so bad. . . to be with you. . .”
Yuko: *Shock**Blush* * “. . . . . T-then why were you always . . .”

Actually when our eyes would meet I would feel someone staring at me then that wasn’t because she hated me at all.

Yuko: *Blush*“But, T-that means. . .”
Atsuko: “I-I’m sorry, it’s my fault for thinking about you that way, I just got so self-conscious about it, all you did was defend me, so I’m sure you didn’t want me looking at you like that. . .”
Yuko: “. . . Now Listen!”
Atsuko: “What?”
Yuko: “Listen. . . Unless you say something there’s no way for me to know what you’re thinking and you don’t know what the outcome will be unless you try.”

She looked so delicate, but when the girls were cruel to her she smiled. I thought she looked so strong. She was unconditionally kind to everyone. I could see why the boys would fall for her. I was always wishing that I could get to know her better. I wished she would smile at me too.

And
I’m
Sure we’d. . .


Atsuko: “. . . .Can I ask you something?”
Yuko: “Huh?!”
Atsuko: “. . . . . . I”
Atsuko: “I’ve always wanted to say this . . . You see . . . I-if you aren’t against it. . .
Yuko: . . . . . .

And
I’m
Sure we’d. . .


Atsuko:” Please be my friend!”

Ehhhhh. . . ! ! !  * Yuko screaming in her mind*

Yuko: “What the hell!? You just want to be friends!? That’s all!?”
Atsuko: “What!? But being more than friends would be. . . “
Yuko: “More than that would be, well L-like dating, maybe?
Atsuko: *Shock* Dating?? *Atsuko thought*
Yuko: “But you know. . . I don’t really know what two girls do if they’re dating . . . hmmm

Oh . . . ! First of all let’s exchange e-mail addresses.”
Atsuko: “Okay, Good idea!”

And
I’m sure

We’d Fall in love. . .


-End-


[I Hope you like it even if it's not good  :pen_whirl:]
« Last Edit: October 22, 2017, 03:33:54 PM by sophcaro »

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Re: Fall in Love [AtsuYuu]
« Reply #1 on: January 16, 2014, 01:14:44 PM »
Encore~ Encore~ Encore~  :cow: lol
OMAGASH!!! MY ATSUYUU  :inlove:
Please do more, I love it.  :deco:
Arigatou :wigglypanda:
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Re: Fall in Love [AtsuYuu]
« Reply #2 on: January 16, 2014, 01:56:36 PM »
 :w00t: I like it and it's very good  :twothumbs
just hope you make more atsuyuu hehe :thumbsup
« Last Edit: January 16, 2014, 02:14:34 PM by Kazan »

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Re: Fall in Love [AtsuYuu]
« Reply #3 on: January 16, 2014, 02:34:16 PM »
UWA~ MAH SHIP~

SO CUTEEEEE~

Really, thank you and I hope you write more of this pairing~

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Re: Fall in Love [AtsuYuu]
« Reply #4 on: January 16, 2014, 02:36:45 PM »
ATSU ATSU ATSUYUU!
So Acchan just wanted to be friends?
Awww....
Too bad for her, they'd be MORE than that.
MUAHAHAHA
Anyways, coz of yar nice OS and your first, congrats!
Ya did well~
IT'S SO SWEET!!!! Mah OTP interacting as such ish SHOOOOOO SWEET!!!!!!!!!!!!! ><
I'm looking forward to more works from you, Kaorichan-san~ *salute* o7

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Re: Fall in Love [AtsuYuu]
« Reply #5 on: January 16, 2014, 03:43:16 PM »
Encore~ Encore~ Encore~  :cow: lol
OMAGASH!!! MY ATSUYUU  :inlove:
Please do more, I love it.  :deco:
Arigatou :wigglypanda:

agree more please :)

@yourockme: hey! haven't seen you for so long  :lol:



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Re: Fall in Love [AtsuYuu]
« Reply #6 on: January 16, 2014, 05:14:14 PM »
This one is cute

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Re: Fall in Love [AtsuYuu]
« Reply #7 on: January 17, 2014, 11:34:16 AM »
@yourockme: hey! haven't seen you for so long  :lol:

Yeah! Been busy with school & stuffs, so i don't have much time to open this account.
Ugh! I miss JPHIP. Hopefully I'll be active from now on. Welcome back to me ~ :jphip:
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Re: Fall in Love [AtsuYuu]
« Reply #8 on: January 17, 2014, 12:56:43 PM »
@yourockme @Kazan @sakura_drop_ @AshuraX @Tam_atsu @irgheto
Thank you so much I'm happy you like it. . :mon innocent:
i will do my best to write another Atsuyuu fic :on study:
And again Thank you so much :mon love:. .
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Re: Untitled [AtsuYuu]
« Reply #9 on: January 26, 2014, 07:01:37 AM »
[There's no idea comes to my mind what title to give in this fic that's why this is untitled  :err:]
[I know there's so many wrong grammar and wrong spelling in this fic in advance I'm sorry about that :kneelbow:]

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Since we started high school we’ve always met at the same place.

”Yuko” Atsuko said.
“Good morning, Atsuko!” Yuko said.
 “Mo~rning” Atsuko replay while yawning.

Yuko: “Didn’t get enough sleep?”
Atsuko: “Uhm, I was up all night reading~”
Yuko: “I see.”

Our parents have been friends forever. So we’ve seen a lot of each other ever since we were pre-school.
We even ended up in the same class through most of elementary and middle school, We went to the same high school and ended up in the same class yet again.


 “Acchan~!!Acchan~!!”  Yuko said while playfully switching position left to right-right to left.
“Yuko, don’t you have a Switch off button I want to off you for awhile?” Atsuko said and sigh.


Yuko is always cheerful, she circles people a lot and she hugs me without any apparent motivation. But lately things have been a little different it seems like she’s calmed down a little bit I keep wondering if maybe I did something to her.
(Atsuko though while staring to Yuko and Yuko noticed)

Yuko: “What?”
Atsuko: “Nothing”

While we’re walking she accidentally touch my hand. She starting feels sorry about that and I don’t know why.
Yuko: “I-I’m sorry”
Atsuko: “It’s ok; it’s not a big deal”



In classroom I know she’s looking at me but when I look back she’s immediately turned her head and look to her book or anything on her table.

When I look at how she reacts to this thing these days, I wonder if maybe it’s not the opposite, after a while I couldn't help but notice it.

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(It’s already end of class but they choose to stay and sit one of the wooden bench not far in their school)
Yuko: . . . . . . . . . .
Atsuko: . . . . . . . . . .
(But no one talking until Yuko breaks the silent and speaks.)
Yuko: “So. . .”
Atsuko: “Hmmm”
Yuko: “I think you already know but I’ve been kind of strange lately”
Atsuko: “huh?”
Yuko: “Sorry . . . for some reason when I’m with you my heart just starting beatings like crazy I don’t really know when it started, I don’t really feel like this with anyone else, what I mean is. . . I think. . . I probably . . .”

(*Thump* Thump*Thump* Atsuko starting to feel her heart beating faster.)

Yuko: “I know you might think I’m weird, but . . . *thump**thump* Well . . . what I’m trying to say is. . . I like you!”

(Atsuko shock and she didn't know what to say)

Yuko: “At least I’m pretty sure I do . . . *looking down* I know it’s really out of the blue sorry. . .”
Atsuko: “. . . Sorry I-I really don’t know what to say right now.”
Yuko: “its okay, I should get going. Bye”
Atsuko: “Yuko!” *Atsuko didn't continue her word because Yuko already leave*
Atsuko: . . . . . . . . .

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-Atsuko’s Room-
(Atsuko sit in front of her computer and starting spacing out and after a minutes she remember her childhood friend confession and she starting typing)

-Search: Girls Dating- *Click*

“There’s someone just like me. . .” Atsuko though

[My close friend confessed to me]
By: Girlygirl1
-My close friend confessed to me. We’re both girls, I don’t dislike her, But I don’t know how to answer.

“What was the answer?” Atsuko though

[Answer]
Replay: SweetJam
-Imagine kissing her if it doesn’t bother you. Go for it!!

“Ehh!!! Kiss!!!” Atsuko shout in her mind.
(Atsuko shut down her computer and lay down her body on bed she can’t sleep because of thinking about confession and about the kiss)
“Kiss. . . hmmm I think I’m okay with it. . .”
(She hug her pillow until she fall sleep)

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*Sigh* “I hardly sleep. . . oh Yuko, she’s already there.”

(Yuko feel the presence of the other girl)

Yuko: “Morning” *Greeting Atsuko while looking down*
Atsuko: “Morning” *While Atsuko blushing*

(And they starting walking)

Atsuko: . . . . . . . . .
Yuko: . . . . . . . . . .
Atsuko: “So. . . Could we talk after class?”
Yuko: “S-Sure” *Still looking down*

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-After Class-

(The entire student also their classmate already left, Only Atsuko and Yuko is in their classroom)

Yuko: “Well, Um”
Atsuko: . . . . . . . .
Yuko: “I-I don’t know what was wrong with me yesterday so if you hate me now just tell me, but if not I hope we can still be friends like we were up until now. . .
Atsuko: “This is my answer. . .”
(Atsuko Grab Yuko’s shoulder and . . . Atsuko kiss Yuko on the lips and they parted)
Yuko: “That was my first kiss.” *Blushing and touch her lip*
Atsuko: “S-Sorry”
Yuko: “Wait so does that mean. . .” *playing her index finger and Acting like a kid*
Atsuko: “So cute”

(Atsuko Hug Yuko and Yuko hug her back)
Atsuko: “You know, I was happy when you said you liked me I couldn’t sleep last night because my heart kept racing the whole time I kept thinking about how cute you are. So please take good care of me. I love you Yuko”
Yuko: “I love you too Atsuko”

(They break the hug, And Yuko Starting to cry)
Yuko: *Sob*Sob*Sob*
Atsuko: “Ehh Yuko please don’t cry”
Yuko: “I can’t stop, its tear of joy, you know I’m happy”

(Atsuko patted Yuko’s head and Smile)

Atsuko: “Let’s go!”

And they left the school while holding each other hand. . .

-End-


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Atsuko came to RH last night..
is she came to watch Yuuko's perfomance or for Takamina?? :mon lovelaff:

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Re: Untitled [AtsuYuu]
« Reply #10 on: January 26, 2014, 11:14:15 PM »
Atsuyuu  :farofflook:
Thank you  :thumbsup
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Re: Untitled [AtsuYuu]
« Reply #11 on: January 27, 2014, 12:59:06 PM »
More detail on Yuko's side,

“Today Acchan came to watch us perform☆
Concerned about my physical health
She told me to drink some olive oil, and gave me one as a present (Laughs)
Drinking this, I can do my best tomorrow!! Yes!!”
-Oshima Yuko

Acchan came only for her  >////<

And nice OS~ It was so sweet~~~ :heart: :heart: :heart:

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Re: Untitled [AtsuYuu]
« Reply #12 on: January 27, 2014, 01:47:33 PM »
OH THE CAVITIES THIS GAVE ME~~~  :ptam-shy: :ptam-shy: :ptam-shy:

Acchan so sweet and chbdkcbwjdbck Yuko-sama~  :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1:

Sankyuu and give us more whenever you feel like writing AtsuYuu~  :mon innocent:
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Re: Untitled [AtsuYuu]
« Reply #13 on: June 27, 2014, 03:26:14 PM »
AtsuYuu~  :deco:  I want more sweet AtsuYuu~  :heart:

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Re: Untitled [AtsuYuu]
« Reply #14 on: June 27, 2014, 05:49:44 PM »
aww they are so cute together!  :thumbsup

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Re: Untitled [AtsuYuu]
« Reply #15 on: July 19, 2014, 12:09:10 AM »
omfg this is so cute  :wub: :wub: :wub: now i miss atsuyuu ; ~ ;

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