JPHiP Forum

AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: Minamiyuki on September 07, 2013, 09:13:23 PM

Title: Shikyo Taisen [Bleach-themed Fic]: Chapter 8 (01/26/14)
Post by: Minamiyuki on September 07, 2013, 09:13:23 PM
Hello guys~!!!!! This is my third fanfic.... BTW, this is NO-PAIRING FANFIC, so don't be expect to have a romance in here... Just a pure action.... So please ENJOY READING~!!!!!

Shikyo Taisen

<><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>

Prologue

   There is a great war happens everywhere. The war between the being who loses their hearts to despair or regret, the being who governs death and the being who has a ability to detect the nonphysical objects. Unlike the other wars like World War I and II, this war is invisible to our naked eyes. Only the gifted ones are capable to see this terrible battle. According on history, this war was occurred thousand years ago. Until today, it still continues. This war will never end until each of them is annihilated.

   The story revolves to the four girls who have a very unique gifted power, so unique that they can able to battle these three beings. But their powers was underdeveloped, still they can able to protect themselves against this war. Can these girls will able to stop this war that will destroys the whole world if left undisturb?

   A girl was seen standing with her seifuku uniform, and her two swords crossed each other, pointing straight. Her aura suddenly erupts and shouts very loudly.

   “Bankai~!!!!”

<><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>

To be Continued

Do you like it??? Or I should stop this???? COMMENT IF YOU HAVE TIME~!!!!  :) :) :)
Title: Re: Shikyo Taisen (No Pairings): Prologue (09/07/13)
Post by: cisda83 on September 08, 2013, 12:25:08 AM
Bankai...

As like in 'bleach'

Anyhow.., interesting start there

Can't wait to see the next

Thank you

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Shikyo Taisen (No Pairings): Chapter 1 (09/09/13)
Post by: Minamiyuki on September 10, 2013, 05:21:00 AM
Hello guys~!!!! I hope you like this non-pairing fanfic... so ENJOY READING~!!!!

Chapter 1

   (Someone’s POV)

        “Onee-chan!! Wake up now!!! You will be late at your school!!” My sister knocks on my door.

   That disturbs my beautiful dream. I’m almost there, almost there. Looking at that clock, it says 6:00 a.m. and my class was 8:00 a.m. Wow, late? Since when did I late at my class? Every day I went there too early!!! Please give me some sleep; I’m having a hard time on my Mathematics assignment last night.

   Giving up, I immediately shoot out of the bed and clean all of my mess in my room. After my whole room was shiny, I went to bathroom and take a bath. I change my clothes to school uniform. I’m looking myself at the mirror, ensuring that it’s all set.

   “Perfect.”

   I went to the dining/kitchen and saw my adorable sister and my mother, eating there breakfast.

   “Ahh, Onee-chan. Ohayo” My sister said.

   “Ohayo, Haruppi.” I greeted to her.

   “Honey, did you have a good sleep?” My mother asked.

   “Either good or worse. I have to finish my homework. And I slept at 11:00 p.m.” I replied.

   “Then why I saw something gloomy aura on you?”

   “It’s because my beautiful dream was disturbed by my cute but annoying sister.” I pouted. Then I went to the table for eating my breakfast.

   “You always have a beautiful dream.” Haruppi said while eating.

   “But this dream is more adorable than last time.”

   “Enough of your chat of your dream, you will gonna late at your school.” My mother said while eating.

   “Mom, we are always too early. We can’t be late at this.” I replied to her.

   “But isn’t it just better, that you will be there at the right time?” I only sighed at her statement.

   “How is your kenjutsu club activity?” Wow, she suddenly changes the topic.

   “It’s fine; still my swordsmanship skills didn’t vanish.” I answer.

   “While I and your sister can hold only one sword, you are dual wielding. What’s more is that you holding two twenty- seven inch swords.” My mother said.

   “I’m comfortable at that, Mom. I feel that I can able to defend myself at that. I can able to change from pure offense to offense-defense and to pure defense.” I said to them.

   “Well I’m so proud that my daughter has that skill. I think you can able to fend off some Hollows.” My mother said.

   “What’s with those Hollows? How could they here at this world?” I and Haruppi simultaneously asked.

   “When the human dies, their souls will depart from the body. Their Chain of Fate has severed, meaning they can’t able to get back to their own body. That soul, with their chains broken, can able to freely but that also causes the chain to slowly corrode. They are known as Pluses. The pluses must send to Soul Society by Shinigami before their chains corrode entirely. If their chains are completely corroded before they are sent, they will turn into hollows. They’re here because they need to feed souls thanks to their insatiable hunger, to fill their void inside.” We nod at her explanation.

   “Well ladies, is it that you will go to school now?” My mother smiled. Then we run on the door and put our shoes.

   “Ittekimasu!!”

   “Haruppi, we will go on separate way. Ja, mata ne.” I said as I walk on the right side of our house.

   “Mata ne, onee-chan.” Haruppi went on the other side.

   My name is Maeda Atsuko, second-year senior high school student and member of Kenjutsu club. My sister there is Maeda Haruka and she’s annoying but cute sister. Just like my mother said, I’m a dual wielding swordswoman. And yes, I saw everything that the naked eyes didn’t, including the Hollows and Shinigamis. It’s because I possess an immense amount of spiritual energy, which is very unique to a human beings. Because of that spiritual energy, I’ve develop a spiritual powers that I can able to defend myself against Hollows and other bad spirits by channeling it to my sword. And you thought that I’m the only one who possesses this? I don’t think so.

   At the street not too far from our school, I saw my bestfriends waiting for me. Like me, they possess an immense amount of spiritual energy. They can also fend off some Hollows. They are members of Kenjutsu club, same as mine. And also, we are on the same class.

   I went through them and say hello.

   “Ohayo gozaimasu.”

   “Ohayo gozaimasu.” They greeted me back.

   “Ne Acchan, how’s your homework?” My friend, Matsui Rena, asked.

   “It’s worse than I thought.” I sighed.

   “I told you. It was really, really hard.” Kashiwagi Yuki said.

   “Nyaa~~, let’s go now to our class so we can buy a new sword. My sword’s nearly to reach its expiration date.” Yagami Kumi said.

   “And since when the sword reaches its expiration date?” I narrowed my eyes.

   “You know when it will rust after a period of time.” Kumi smiled at me. We’ve chit-chat for a while as we walk to the school 100 meters from us.

   “So how’s fending off the Hollows?” I asked to them.

   “Worse. They’re keeping coming to me.” Yukirin said.

   “Looks like all of us are on the same boat.” Rena smiled.

   “We are on the same club, but our styles were different.” Kumi said.

   “You’re right. Mine is Nitoujutsu (dual-sword style), Yukirin is Iaijutsu (sword-drawing style), Rena is Ittoujutsu (one-sword style) and Kumi is Hirazuki (horizontal stabbing style).” I said.

   While were chatting, we heard a school bell rings, signaling that the class will be start later.

   “Come on let’s go.” And we run very fast to the school.

   Finally, we reach to our classroom. Then we went to our respective seats. But something’s not right.

   “Yokatta, I thought that we are late now.” Rena said.

   “Hey guys, do you think that something’s not right?” I asked.

   “What is it?” Yuki asked to me.

   “How long did we get from the school gate to the front of our class?” I asked.

   “I don’t know.” Kumi said.

   “My record is 3 seconds.” Rena said.

   “3 seconds? Since when did we run fast?” I asked.

   Before they answer my question, suddenly our teacher comes in to our class, boring Science class.

   Waiting until our class ends since its 5:00 p.m., come on now, finish this class.

   Finally, the bell rings signifies it dismissal now.

   As we prepare my things, Rena and my friends went to me.

   “Come on nyaa~~, there’s a new sword store five blocks from here.” Kumi excitedly said.

   “Alright, alright let’s go now.”

   15 minutes we reach to the new sword store that Kumi said.

   Then we’re in front of an old looking Japanese-style sword store. I don’t think that’s a new shop.

   “Let’s get inside.” All of us said it.

   As we enter to the sword store, we we’re greeted by a husky voice.

   “Irasshaimase~!!”

   “Jii-san, we want swords for the four persons please~!!!” Kumi asked.

   “Good, this is the right place that you were looking for.” Then a middle-aged man went on us.

   “Come, I want to show my collections so I could give to you freely.”

   “Uhmm, sir. Why free?” Rena asked.

   “It’s because the sword that I give to all of you isn’t a normal sword.” The middle-aged man said.

   “What do you mean?” Yuki confusingly asked.

   “I sense that all of you are having a tremendous spiritual energy. Because your fathers are pureblood Shinigami, so you four are half-human and half-shinigami. You need not normal swords, but a Zanpakuto.” He said.

   “But why sir and how did you know about our fathers?” It was my turn to ask.

   “I know about your fathers since I’m the creator of all the Zanpakuto that they’re using. By my permission of giving a Zanpakutou to all of you, you’re a now a Shinigami with human body. And also you can able to fight the hollows.” He said. Then the man walks to long, large chest and opens it, revealing many swords with different color hilts and guard shapes.

   “Don’t ask me why I know all of your names. I told you that I know all of your fathers.”

   “This is for you Maeda Atsuko. And I know you are dual-wielding style user.” He gives me a two katanas, one with navy blue hilt and four-sided diamond-shaped guard, and one with scarlet red hilt and two-pointed leaf-shaped guard and white sheath.

   “This is for you Kashiwagi Yuki. I know that you are sword-drawing style user.” He gives to Yuki a katana with indigo hilt, six-pointed snowflake-shaped bronze-colored guard and gray sheath.

   “This is for you Matsui Rena. I know that you are one-sword wielding style user.” He gives to Rena a katana with jade green hilt, round-shaped silver-colored guard and azure blue sheath.

   “And also this is for you Yagami Kumi. I know that you are horizontal stabbing style user.” He gives to Kumi a katana with yellow hilt, circle-like double crescent-shaped guard and black sheath with ribbon in there.

   “Now that you have a Zanpakuto, I’m sure that you can able to eliminate the hollows too easy. And by the way, your fathers said that this is their birthday gift for you.” He smiled.

   “Thank you very much sir.” We said while in confusion state.

   “You must know that what you holding is a Zanpakuto in a sealed state. To release its true power, you must know the name of your own Zanpakuto.”

   “Well that was my tutorial for you. By the way, that’s free so you don’t need to bring money to me.” He smiled.

   Then we went out to the sword store, bringing our own armament with confusing looks. Before we walk on the street, the old man called us.

   “Hey, are you gonna walk to the public holding that? You may cause some commotion in there. Here have these sword bags so you can hide your Zanpakuto in there.” The he give us of each sword bag.

        “Then see you later girls.” He waved at as and went inside to his store, still leaving us with confusion.

To be Continued

<><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>

Dou??? Shall I still continue this???  :) :) :)
Title: Re: Shikyo Taisen (No Pairings): Chapter 1 (09/09/13)
Post by: blakwhite on September 10, 2013, 09:43:26 AM
yessss  :w00t:
continue pls  :D
Title: Re: Shikyo Taisen (No Pairings): Chapter 1 (09/09/13)
Post by: White Hawk on September 10, 2013, 01:33:33 PM
Yes Yes Yes!!! Please continue :D
I like Bleach! ^^ And I like Acchan, Rena, Yuki, and Kumi too..  XD
Hahah..
Title: Re: Shikyo Taisen (No Pairings): Chapter 1 (09/09/13)
Post by: AshuraX on September 10, 2013, 01:35:43 PM
That's one weird guy XD
Though I don't read Bleach~
Title: Re: Shikyo Taisen (No Pairings): Chapter 1 (09/09/13)
Post by: cisda83 on September 10, 2013, 04:08:59 PM
Interesting... Atsuko, kumi, Rena, Yuki

What kind of adventures are they going to come across?

Can't wait

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Shikyo Taisen (No Pairings): Chapter 1 (09/09/13)
Post by: Amakuchi on September 11, 2013, 03:56:28 PM
UNCLE~! UPDATE! m(_ _)m
Title: Re: Shikyo Taisen (No Pairings): Chapter 2 (09/13/13)
Post by: Minamiyuki on September 13, 2013, 12:02:08 PM
Thank you for the comments... Here's the Chapter 2.. ENJOY READING~!!!!

<><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>

Chapter 2: The Spatial Flame and Temporal Wind
   
(Normal POV)
   
The beam of the sun makes her slumber time over and opens her eyes. She looks at her surroundings then locking her eyes to the black sword bag leaning to her computer table. She remembers the all about inside that bag.
   
You must know that what you holding is a Zanpakuto in a sealed state. To release its true power, you must know the name of your own Zanpakuto.
   
“So what my father said all about it was true.” She said.
   
She shoots out on her bed and prepares her things. After that, she eats her breakfast, still along with her annoying but cute sister. Then she runs fast to her school, still aware that her speed was not normal.
   
“5 seconds.”
   
“Ohayo Acchan!!” A raven-haired girl greets her.
   
“Ohayo Yukirin.” She replied. Then they saw the other two walking through them.
   
“Ohayo Acchan, Yukirin.” The two greets to them.
   
“Ohayo Rena, Kumi.” The two replied.
   
“So we still bring our newly sword eh.” Rena smiled.
   
“I’m curious about it. My father tells me about this sword but I thought it was just a fantasy in a story book.” Yukirin said.
   
“Sou desu ne~~” Kumi replied with her last very long accent.
   
“It’s true; my father shows me his own one. I was amazed by it.” Rena said.
   
“But according to the jii-chan, they only released its true power if we know of its name.” Acchan said.
   
“It’s not fair that Acchan has two swords while ours only one.” Yukirin pouted.
   
“Don’t be jealous, you know it’s my swordplay. But someday you will have also two swords just like me.” Acchan smiled.
   
“Yukirin no kawaii desu ne~~” Kumi said still in very long accent. They heard the school bell rings.
   
“Come on, the class has started.” Yukirin said. Then they walk to their respective seats, bringing their sword bag.
   
After a long boring two subjects, accordingly to them, they have a 35 minutes lunch break. They went to the cherry blossom tree that was standing beside of the building.
   
“Itadakimasu~!!!” And they brought out their lunch bento.
   
“Oishi~!!! I like my lunch now.” Yukirin smiled.
   
“Sou desu ne~~~.” Kumi said.
   
While their talking about their meals, Acchan faintly hears the whisper coming from her ears.
   
Acchan” After she heard that faint whisper, Acchan then look from elsewhere. Her friends were still busy of chat.
   
“Hey guys, did you hear something?” Acchan said.
   
“What is it?” Yukirin asked.
   
“I heard a faint whisper, like someone was calling to me.” She replied.
   
“Maybe your boyfriend was calling to you. You didn’t say anything ehh~~.” Kumi smirked.
   
“Funny. But it’s not a man’s voice, it’s a girl. And it’s not one but two.” Acchan narrowed her eyes.
   
“Maybe it’s your fans.” Rena said.
   
“I don’t have fans. But seriously that creep me a lot.”
   
“Maybe it’s a ghost.” Yukirin shivered.
   
“If that’s a ghost, we could kick him out. Remember, we can see and touch non-physical objects right?” Rena said.
   
“Maybe you’re hungry Acchan, come on let’s eat now.” Yukirin said.
   
Before they finished their lunch, an explosion suddenly blast on the other side of their school.
   
“Come on now, let me finish my lunch. Ah, my bento was empty.” Kumi said.
   
“No time for joke, Kumi. I sense a spiritual energy coming from the explosion.” Rena said
   
“You’re right. I sensed it too. It’s not a normal spiritual energy. It looks like —” Kumi said. They look at each other and widened their eyes.
   
“HOLLOWS, IN OUR SCHOOL?!?!” They shout simultaneously.
   
“Wait a minute, why in the world the hollows are here?” Yukirin half-shouted.
   
“At this rate, they will eat our teacher and classmates and —“ Kumi confused.
   
“Can you please keep your head calm down~! Worrying much won’t solve a problem.” Acchan said.
   
“Five hollows, Adjuchas-class.” Rena said.
   
“Adjuchas??? They’re higher than Gillian~!!” Yukirin said.
   
“Wait a minute. And it looks like another spiritual energy fighting these hollows.” Rena said.
   
“It’s a Shinigami, I know their spiritual energy compares to Quincies and Hollows. And base on its energy, it’s a girl.” Acchan said.
   
“Guys I think we should go there. Five Adjuchas-class Hollows versus a single Shinigami girl? That’s a suicide.” Yukirin said.
   
“You’re right, let’s go.” Rena said.
   
“Chotto matte, Rena you said that we run from the school gate to our classroom in just three seconds?” Kumi said.
   
“Yeah?” Rena said.
   
“Well basically that’s a type of short distance teleportation or known for it as flash-step. It’s a dash of how fast will you reach from point A to point B in split-second. Only with a spiritual energy can able to perform it. The flash-step of Shinigami called Shunpo (Instantaneous Step), On Hollows called Sonido (Sound) and Quincies called Hirenkyaku (Flying Screen Step).” Kumi explained.
   
"And how will you called on ours?” Yukirin said.
   
“Because we’re not Quincy and Hollows so it may be not called as Hirenkyaku or Sonido. We can’t be called it a Shunpo cause we’re not a pureblood Shinigami, we’re a Humans with Shinigami blood and power. Aside from that, Sonido has a booming sound, Hirenkyaku has a swirling sound and Shunpo has a screeching or silent sound, ours look like a slashing sound. So I think we can call it as Shukuchi (Reduced Earth).” Kumi smiled.
   
“Wow, that’s a very good name. So how could we use that Shukuchi?” Yukirin said.
   
“It’s easy; either you push your foot to the ground for dash or think that you need to be very fast.” Kumi advised.
   
“Then what are we waiting for? Let’s go.” Acchan said. They blurred for a while and suddenly they vanished. In just a split-second, they arrived at their destination, which is on the backyard.
   
“Wow, we’re really that fast eh...” Rena said.
   
“Look.” Acchan pointed. Not from their far side, a ponytail girl with black hakama and holding a sword was fighting five large Adjuchas-class Hollows.
   
“Damn it, these Hollows are not very easy, as expected from Adjuchas-class.” The girl said.
   
“Shinigami girl, surrender now peacefully and we will give you a painless death as we eat you.” The red one said.
   
“You wish, I will not be your lunch.” The girl put her middle finger on the face of Hollows.
   
“You stupid Shinigami, you should learn of your manners. I will gonna kill you now.” The green one dashed on the girl. The girl release her Zanpakuto.
   
“Bloom, Benizakura (Crimson Cherry Blossom)~!” The girl shouts, activating her Zanpakuto’s Shikai, then the blade of her sword turning into red color.
   
“So your Shikai turns the color of your sword into red. What will do on us, painting with red?” The blue one laughs.
   
“It’s not about that. In this form, I can turn spiritual powers into blood.” She smirks.
   
“Ryuuketsunami~! (Bloody wave)” The girl hurls a bloody-red waveslash to the five surprised Hollows. They avoid it but the last one’s caught the wave. It hits on the Hollows whole body including its mask, destroying the Hollow in process.
   
“Tsk, this girl is very dangerous. We should kill her now.” The red one said.
   
“Let me do it. I, Verde, shall kill this Shinigami.” Then the green one, suddenly vanished and appears behind the Shinigami girl.
   
“What?” Before she can react, the Hollow slaps his hand on her, sending the girl to the wall.
   
“Damn, I didn’t expect that.” Her eyes widened when she saw the green one charging a huge amount of spiritual energy from its mouth.”
   
“Shit, that Hollow’s firing a Cero to me. My injured foot isn’t moving now that I can’t able to use Shunpo away from that.” She only looks at that Hollow, that’s already fired.
   
“Goodbye, Onee-chan.” She closed her eyes. Then after a while, nothing happens which the Shinigami girl’s in confusion state. When she opens her eyes, she’s surprised of what she saw
   
Before the Cero coming from her, Acchan blocks the Cero with her two unnamed Zanpakuto which surprised the watching Hollows. Then beside her, Kumi prepares her horizontal stabbing stance.
   
“Hizakiri: Yari no Dokubari (Horizontal Stabbing: Spear Stinger)“ Kumi dashes forward, stabbing on Hollow’s leg, causing the Hollow to stop his Cero from firing as it drops from the pain.
   
“Daijobu desu ka, Shinigami-chan?” Rena said.
   
“I’m fine. Wait a minute, how did you saw me?” The girl asked.
   
“Well, we can’t explain it in a clearly manner.” Yukirin said.
   
Acchan
   
“Really, all of the sudden, someone’s calling on me now.” Acchan said.
   
“Not now Acchan. What’s your name, Shinigami-chan?” Rena asked.
   
“Kizaki Yuria, 10th division lieutenant.” The girl introduced.
   
“You’re lieutenant? So that’s why your spiritual powers are that great.” Kumi said.
   
“How did you able to hurt the Hollow?” The girl said.
   
“We have this.” Yukirin shows to Yuria their swords.
   
“You have a Zanpakuto?” All of them noddded.
   
“But we don’t know the name of our Zanpakuto.” Kumi said.
   
“Souka.” Yuria said.
   
Acchan
   
“Guys, I’m serious right now. Someone’s calling to me.” Acchan half-shouted to them.
   
“Then who’s calling on you?” Yukirin said.
   
“I don’t know~!!!” Acchan shouts.
   
“Maybe, it’s your Zanpakuto was calling on you.” Yuria said.
   
“My Zanpakuto? Was calling to me?” Acchan said.
   
“They’re calling on you because they want to reach you.” Yuria said.
   
“Wait if my deduction was right? Calling on you was equivalent to knowing its name right?” Yuria nods at Kumi’s deduction.
   
“Before you know the name, you must communicate with your Zanpakuto. And before you communicate them, you must go to their inner world.” Yuria said. On the same time, Rena went to the four remaining Hollows to give some their time.
   
“Go to their inner world? How we gonna do that?” Before Yuria could explain, the blue Hollow went through them.
   
“Kumi, protect Yuria” Yukirin said.
   
“Gotcha~!” Kumi said.
   
“How did you all get a Zanpakuto?” Yuria asked.
   
“Let’s just say we’re very special.” Kumi smiled at her, Making Yuria blushed.
   
The blue Hollow fires a Cero on Acchan, only she slashes the blast into two.
   
“You’re strong despite being a human, and you have a tremendous spiritual energy coming from your body.” The blue Hollow said.
   
“My body? You’re hentai.” Acchan in bored tone.
   
“Joke’s over my dear, I, Azul, will gonna eat you alive.” The blue Hollow dashes to Acchan very fast. Acchan feels the kick from her back as she crashes to the ground.
   
“Damn it, that Hollow bastard was so fast.” She said. Acchan then dodges an incoming Cero. Acchan fastly appears behind the blue Hollow. The she swing her sword very wide, that the Hollow feel it’s fain coming from his back.
   
Acchan” She heards it again the whisper.
   
“Tsk, this hollow was unexpectedly very difficult, more difficult than the hollow I’d been faced.” From her surprised, she caught a blast of Cero coming from her right side.
   
“Acchan~!!!” Yukirin and Rena shouted.
   
“Tsk, that Cero.” Acchan only barely stands, using her Zanpakuto as support.
   
“Any last words, human?” The blue Hollow charges the Cero from his mouth. Yukirin and Rena can’t able to help Acchan because of other Hollow’s distraction. Even Kumi cannot able to help her too because another Hollow was blocking on her. Then the blue Hollow fires his Cero at Acchan.
   
Acchan” Then the whole world suddenly stops, even the Cero stops. Acchan thinks why she’s the only one who moves. Then the whole place suddenly blacks out as her eyes closes.
   
Acchan opens her eyes as she looks at her surroundings.
   
“Where am I?” Acchan asks herself. She’s sitting on a hill fields full of flowers and a tree standing on the top of the hill. Below to the hill is a river.
   
“This is your inner world, Acchan.” Acchan turn around to find that voice. She saw two girls, one tall girl with red and white seifuku while the slightly short girl with blue and white seifuku.
   
“Wait a minute, that’s my third-year junior high school self and my sixth grading elementary self.”Acchan said.
   
“Acchan~!!” The short one runs on Acchan and hugs her while the tall one only walks.
   
“We’ve been calling you many times.” The short girl said.
   
“So you two are the one who calling on me.” Acchan said as she rubs the short girl’s hair.
   
“You two are my younger version, but that uniform? I don’t have one.”
   
“Oh this uniform? It only symbolizes your personality.” The tall one said.
   
“My personality?”
   
“I’m the repulsive one and this girl is the reckless one.” The taller girl smiled.
   
“I’m not reckless~!!” The short girl shouted.
   
“Well it seems that I’m in my inner world, so in short.” Acchan then looks at her two Zanpakuto spirits.
   
“Yes, you’re right. Of all the Zanpakuto’s, you Acchan, Yukirin, Rena and Kumi are very different from the others. And you’re the only one who has a Zanpakuto with different names.” The short girl explained.
   
“And knowing about you activates the constant-release Shikai form. Is that right?” Acchan said.
   
“You’re right. You’re Zanpakuto will not able to change back to its sealed state. Just like the rest of your friends when they know the name of theirs.” The taller girl said.
   
“Well, Acchan, it looks like you need to come back now.” The short girl said.
   
“You’re right. Thanks to you two.” Acchan hugs them which they replied it also with a hug.
   
“Now then, may I know of your names now?” Acchan smiled. The two smiled also to her.
   
“Our name is—“
   
Going back to the real world, Acchan open her eyes, looking at her surroundings as the world was slowly turning back to normal. Then she crossed her two swords as she releases her spiritual energy. Before the Cero’s coming on her.
   
“Masamune~!! Kusanagi~!!” She slashes her two swords, dividing the Cero into four.
   
“What?!?!?! The blue Hollow shout as his Cero was erased by Acchan’s slashes.
   
Rena, Yuki, Kumi and Yuria surprised as they saw that moment. Then they look at Acchan that makes them surprised.
   
Acchan’s Zanpakuto was finally activated their Shikai. The scarlet red one was covered by flames and the navy blue one was covered by wind. After that they disappears leaving only two standard katana.
   
“So Acchan’s zanpakuto was finally released.” Rena said.
   
“But why did I hear two names?” Yukirin asked.
   
“Now it’s time to finish this.” Acchan dashes to the blue Hollow. In just one swift swing, the Hollow divides into four. The other hollow saw that and starting to regroup.

"NOOO~!!!!!" The blue Hollow shouts as he disappeared.
   
“Tsk, it’s not over yet.” They disappeared as soon they finished that sentence.
   
“Wew that was a close one.” Kumi said. Then the three went to Kumi and Yuria.
   
“Acchan, you’re hurt.”Rena and Yukirin went to Acchan.
   
“I’m fine, don’t worry about me.” Acchan said.
   
“So what’s the name of your Zanpakuto?” Kumi asked.
   
“The red one is Masamune, the blue one is Kusanagi.”
   
“You mean your Zanpakuto has different names?” Yukirin gasped. Acchan nodded to Yukirin.
   
“Accordingly, my Zanpakuto cannot able to turn back to its sealed state. So this form was still in Shikai form.” Acchan sheaths her swords to the scabbard.
   
“Let’s go back now; I think we created a commotion in here.” Kumi said. And they’re disappeared instantly.

To be Continued

<><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>

You like it??? XD XD XD XD XD
Title: Re: Shikyo Taisen (No Pairings): Chapter 3 (09/14/13)
Post by: Minamiyuki on September 15, 2013, 07:34:26 AM
Chapter 3: The Lunar Hallucination

<><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>
   
The four humans bring the Shinigami girl to Yuki’s house because it is closer to their school.
   
After Rena tending Yuria’s injury, Yuria starts to ask them.
   
“Since when all of you are having Zanpakuto?” Yuria asked.
   
“We don’t want to tell it in order to reduce chaos.” Rena seriously said.
   
“Those remaining hollows, they will come back right?” Kumi asked.
   
“Yes, since they know you humans possess tremendous spiritual energy so they will try to eat you.” Yuria explained.
   
“Since I’m the first one, I’m gonna protect you for a while until all of our Zanpakuto are released.” Acchan said.
   
“Don’t worry about us, Acchan. We can still fight them even our Zanpakuto is not in released form.” Yukirin assured.
   
“Are you sure? You know we’re fighting on Adjuchas-class Hollows.” Acchan said.
   
“Since you’re injured, how about you stay in here for a while until you get better?” Rena said.
   
“Arigatou. You’re too kind to me.” Yuria blushed
   
“We can’t leave a cute Shinigami girl injured.” Kumi winked.
   
“Cu-cu-cute?? I’m cute?” Yuria’s face turns into tomato.
   
“Hey, Kumi stop teasing her.” Rena said.
   
“What? I’m honest to myself.” Kumi raised her two hands.
   
“Whatever, I’m gonna serve our dinner now.” Yukirin then walks to the kitchen.
   
“How about we introduced ourselves to Yuria-chan?” Kumi suggested.
   
“Then let’s introduced ourselves to her.” Rena said.
   
“I’m Maeda Atsuko, call me Acchan. Just like you saw, my Zanpakuto were Masamune and Kusanagi.”
   
“Matsui Rena desu, you can call me Rena. Although, I don’t know the name of mine.”
   
“Yagami Kumi desu yo~~, either Kumi or Kuumin. Just like Rena, I don’t know also the name of mine.”
   
“And I’m Kashiwagi Yuki, call me Yukirin. I don’t know the name of mine!” Yukirin shouts from the kitchen.
   
“Despite of that, we’ve been trained in sword for almost 10 years. So we can able to fight lower-class hollows.” Rena said.
   
“But that’s the first time we fight those Adjuchas-class.” Kumi said.
   
“How did you know those are Adjuchas?” Yuria asked.
   
“It’s because our fathers said to us.” Acchan said.
   
“And it’s because we’re half-blood Shinigami~!!!” Yukirin shouts.
   
“You’re all half-blood Shinigami? Humans with a blood and power of a Shinigami?” Yuria widened her eyes.
   
“Yes we are.” Rena, Kumi and Acchan smiled. Then they saw Yukirin coming from the kitchen, holding a bowl of soup.
   
“Ok minna, its dinner time.” Yukirin prepared the table as the Kumi, Acchan, Rena and Yuria went to the table.
   
“Itadakimasu~!!” And they starting to eat.
   
“Wow, this soup was so delicious. How did you make this Yukirin?” Rena said.
   
“Last time her cook was disturbing but now I’m tasted a heaven.” Kumi said.
   
“How is it, Yuria-chan?” Yukirin asked.
   
“So this is the food in Human World, It’s delicious.” Yuria smiled.
   
“I’m glad you like it.” Yukirin smiled.
   
Yukirin
   
“Ehh? Who’s that?” Yukirin said.
   
“What is it, Yukirin?” Rena said.
   
“Someone’s calling on me.” Yukirin said.
   
“Maybe it’s your turn to know your sword.” Rena said.
   
“Hmmm, I wonder.” Yukirin’s holding her sword tightly. As soon as they’re continued to eat, Yukirin’s started to notice their presence. She realized that she’s the only one who noticed that disturbing spiritual energy.
   
“Excuse me, I’m gonna buy some drinks. It may take me for a while.” Yukirin said as she brings her sword bag along with her wallet and cellphone.
   
While walking in the dark streets, she knows the disturbing presence that follows her.
   
“I know that you’ve been following me, Hollows.” Yukirin took her sword from the bag as she prepares herself from the fight.
   
Not too far from her, three Adjuchas-class Hollows suddenly appear on the top of the roof.
   
“Looks like you’re on Resurreccion state. No wonder that I didn’t saw your Zanpakuto.” Yukirin smirked.
   
‘And this is bad; they are on release while I’m not.’ Yukirin gritted her teeth.
   
“Despite we hide our presence; you can still find us very easily.” Verde said.
   
“As expected to the human who possesses tremendous spiritual energy.” The red Hollow said.
   
“And just only you who went to us.” The violet Hollow smirked.
   
“Saving your talks later, I’m gonna finish all of you three.” Yukirin pissed.
   
“Don’t worry my dear, you’re death will be painless method.” Then Verde suddenly vanished.
   
‘He’s fast.’ Yukirin thought.
   
Luckily, she able to dodge the attack thanks to her instinct. Her eyes went widened as she saw the other two are firing a Cero at her. Then her luck worsens when she saw Verde suddenly appears in front of her and trying to slash her. Yukirin uses Shukuchi to avoid that slash but she uses two times when she saw the fired Cero coming on her.
   
“My ability is fast strike. I can able to attack at fast rate.” Verde said.
   
‘Tsk, so that’s why I can’t able to react very fast.’ Yukirin gritted her teeth.
   
Yukirin
   
‘Wow, all of sudden?’ Yukirin thought.
   
She saw another Cero coming from her. She dodges that, but to her distress another one was coming for her and it’s already near to her. There’s no time to dodge since she distracted from the one so she blocks the Cero using her sheathed sword. But the drawback making her recoiled and skids her on the road, crashing her back to the wall.
   
Then Yukirin was coughing blood due to the impact of her back to the wall. She looks on the three Hollows, who charge their spiritual powers for another Cero blast.
   
“Tsk, they will not leave me stand for a while.” Yukirin was trying to stand. Before the triple Cero hit her, she uses Cero to avoid it and went to the roof. Then another Cero was fired but she cuts into two by swiftly unsheath her sword and resheathing back. It wasn’t enough, two another Cero was coming to her so she use Shukuchi to dodges them and she wents to playground. When her feet contacts to the ground she feel something very heavy. Then she realized a square beam with towering beam of light surrounds her.
   
“Tsk, Negacion.” Yukirin gritted her teeth.
   
Then she saw from the each of the sides, the three Hollows ready to fire their Cero.
   
“So they plan to use Negacion and firing at me so I wouldn’t able to escape easily. Good strategy.” Yukirin pissed. Then the three Hollows fire their Cero as Yuki only stands while watching the blast coming on her.
   
“I’m doom now.” Yukirin said. Then her whole surroundings turn into black before Cero reaches her.
   
“Why I’m still alive?” Yukirin said.
   
“It’s because you’re in your inner world.” A voice similar to hers said. When Yuki open her eyes, she was greeted by a smiling face. It looks like her reflection. She realizes that she’s sleeping on a bench with a girl who supports her head.
   
“This is my inner world? Then you are.” The girl chuckles.
   
“Yes my dear Yukirin, I’m your Zanpakuto.”
   
“But why my Zanpakuto was so beautiful. It’s just it looks like my reflection.” Yukirin wonder.
   
“I wonder about that. Joke. The Zanpakuto’s spirit reflects the users. Either their personality, appearance, mood or all of it.” The girl said.
   
“So that means…” Yukirin said.
   
“Yes it is. And you have a right choice for going alone for you to fight them.”
   
“Why?” Yukirin said.
   
“I don’t want yet to release my powers in front of your friends until all of them can able to release completely.”
   
“Not yet?” Yukirin blankly asked.
   
“Yes, because your Zanpakuto’s power was so special. And I don’t think you want to show my powers to your friends yet if you know the truth.”
   
“And what is your power?” Yukirin asked.
   
“Your Zanpakuto, when finally released, has a passive special ability called Kyokudo Saimin (Extreme Hypnosis). It can controls the six senses, five physical sense and one extrasensory, to the point that you can able to completely manipulate anyone who witness that activation. Although it is permanently in release form, anyone who sees your unsheathed sword will be permanently influenced by the hypnosis. You can’t able to turn off the hypnosis by force since you can’t able to seal its Shikai, but you can turn it off by resheathing your sword back to its scabbard and holding the butt of the sword, it can’t be deactivate when you only put your sword to the scabbard. The only ones who are immune by that were Acchan, Rena and Kumi, if their Zanpakuto was released. You can able to create from one to many illusions and use them to distract your enemies while you were in stealth mode.”
   
“Wow, that power was so scary.” Yukirin said.
   
“Even though that power was so scary; there is a flaw in that.” The girl said
   
“What is it?” Yukirin asked.
   
“The butt of the sword, anyone who touches that before you unsheaths your sword will be temporarily immune by hypnosis.” The girl said.
   
“Ohhh. Well that’s fine to me.” Yukirin smiled.
   
“It’s time now to know my name.” The girl smiled. Then she muttered a one word as the whole surroundings turn black.
   
Yukirin then went back to her conscious and saw that the three Ceros are coming to her. Then by guide, she unsheaths her sword.
   
“Tsukuyomi” She whispered as the explosion surrounds her. The hollows deactivate the Negacion to ensure that she’s dead.
   
“Hmmm... Such a weak bastard, If I only eat you now, you wouldn’t feel the pain like you felt it now.” Verde said.
   
“I don’t think that will happens” The Hollows surprised when they saw Yukirin’s behind on Verde.
   
“Since when you’re on my back?” Verde asked.
   
“When? Since the beginning when you activate the Negacion, I finally activate my Zanpakuto. Now look in front of you.” Then the Hollows look at the smoke where Yukirin’s lying on the floor.
   
“Now it’s time to undo it.” Yukirin places her sword to her scabbard. As soon as she put her hand on the sword’s butt, the lying Yukirin was turned into glass and shatters completely.
   
“By the way since I undo it, you will gonna experience death that I’ve been placed to you last ten seconds ago.” By that, Verde suddenly feels a pain from the back, only lately realized that he’s been cut into two.
   
“How?” Verde turns into dust and vanished to the air.
   
“Tsk, we will be back.” Then the remaining hollows vanished as they use Sonido.
   
“Wew, that was close. Thank you, Tsukuyomi.”
   
“ Well time to get back now. I’m gonna buy to the store” Then Yukirin’s vanished.

To be Continued

<><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>

You like it???  :) :) :)
Title: Re: Shikyo Taisen (No Pairings): Chapter 3 (09/14/13)
Post by: AshuraX on September 15, 2013, 08:15:54 AM
Oh? So yar gonna explain each of their zanpakuto in each chapter???
Title: Re: Shikyo Taisen (No Pairings): Information and Description of Abilities
Post by: Minamiyuki on September 19, 2013, 06:44:40 AM
AshuraX: Only a short explanation. The full details of their Zanpakuto will be explain in this post.

Time to put some detail on their biodata, their abilities and their zanpakuto also its abilities.

Humans
This will be updated after each Chapter....

If someone can able to visualize the details... You know, if you like it, kinda post in here. I don't able to visualize it... hehehehehe :lol: :lol: :lol:[/list]
Title: Re: Shikyo Taisen (No Pairings): Chapter 3 (09/14/13)
Post by: AshuraX on September 20, 2013, 03:16:14 PM
Ah. Forgot XD
To tell the truth, I don't know much bout Bleach, so I don't even know what to say...
Title: Re: Shikyo Taisen (No Pairings): Chapter 3 (09/14/13)
Post by: White Hawk on September 20, 2013, 04:41:16 PM
Wow~ Yukirin's Zanpakuto Power is scaryy xD
So other shinigami can be hypnotized by Yukirin too right? Thats cool~! :twothumbs
I cant wait to know Kumi and Rena Zanpakuto
Hehehe :)
Title: Re: Shikyo Taisen (No Pairings): Chapter 4 (09/24/13)
Post by: Minamiyuki on September 24, 2013, 04:30:07 PM
Finally... ENJOY READING~!!!!!!

<><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>

Chapter 4: The Dancing Priestess in the Storm
   
While waiting to her, they saw Yukirin’s coming from the door with many bruises. They went to her to make sure she’s fine.
   
“I’m fine, don’t worry about me. By the way, I bought our drinks.” Yukirin showed her food that she bought.
   
“Rena, I bought a dozen of your favorite food.” Yukirin hands over a dozen of melonpan.
   
“Arigato~!!!” Rena takes the melonpan and started to munch it.
   
“You’re so greedy when comes to melonpan.” Kumi pouted.
   
“It’s my favorite food, I don’t have a choice.” Rena continues to eat melonpan.
   
“Suit yourself. Guys, how about you’ll sleep in here?” Yukirin suggested.
   
“Great idea, since you have a very large bedroom that fits about six persons in there.” Acchan said.
   
“Are you sure that you will gonna take care of me?” Yuria asks worrily.
   
“Of course, we can’t leave a girl walking on the outside of the street with injuries like that.” Kumi said.
   
“But I’m Shinigami my regeneration was faster than humans.” Yuria protested.
   
“We don’t care if you’re Shinigami or Human or Quincy. You’re a being just like us. You should have a rest.” Rena said.
   
“Maybe you’re right, I’m sorry. Thank you for saving me. I’d be killed it wasn’t to you.” Yuria lower her head.
   
“You’re welcome. You don’t need to say sorry to us.” Kumi pats Yuria’s head.
   
“Yosh~~, it’s time to sleep.” Acchan dashes to the stairs up to Yukirin’s room.
   
“Uhhmm. Yuria-chan, you’re not gonna sleep with that dress right?” Rena pointed at Yuria’s Shihakusho.
   
“Nah, it’s ok.” Yuria said.
   
“Suit yourself.” Kumi pulls Yuria.
   
“Chotto, where are we going?” Yuria asked.
   
“Sleep, what else we’re going?” Kumi yawns very deeply.
   
“Ok, minasan. Oyasuminasai.” Rena said as she went asleep ahead of everyone.
   
----------------------------------------------------------------------

Rena” Rena suddenly wakes up when she heard that voice.
   
“Who’s that?” She looks at everyone who is still sleep then looks at the clock that says 5:00 a.m.
   
“At that goddamn time?” Rena takes her Zanpakuto that leans on the table. She wears a jacket and went out to her friend’s house.
   
Rena went to playground and sits on the swing. While on that she saw a crying girl standing on the monkey bars. She went on the girl to ask her.
   
“Hey, girl what are you doing here? You’re lost?” The little girl nods.
   
“I can’t see my mama.” The girl still cries. Rena looks at the girl’s chest and shocks that the girl has a broken chain.
   
“Girl, I’m sorry to say this. But you’re dead now.” Rena pats the girl’s shoulder.
   
“What do you mean onee-chan?” The girl asked confusedly.
   
“It seems that you’re dead for a long time. You became a wandering soul.” Rena said.
   
“And you are in danger if you’re still here.”
   
“What do you mean? I want to see my mama.” The girl cries.
   
“Don’t worry girl, you will see your mama. For now you need to go to Soul Society.” Rena then sensed a massive spiritual energy.
   
‘Tsk, hollows. They want this girl now.’ Then Rena holds the girl’s hand and pulls her out of the playground.
   
“Onee-chan, where are we going?” The girl asked.
   
“Just follow me, you will be safe.” The girl has no choice but to let Rena pulls her. Rena went to the park to make sure everything is cleared. Then Rena holds both of girl’s shoulder as she stare the scared girl in front of her.
   
“Listen to me, little girl. You must hide immediately, maybe behind the tree. You’re now in danger. The bad guys are here, trying to eat you. Do you understand?” The girl nods scarily.
   
“Now go.” Then the girl went to the trees and hide behind of it.
   
“Now, let’s settle this, Hollows.” Rena unsheathes her sword as she detects the nearby presence of spiritual energy. Then the two remaining Hollows suddenly appear in front of her along with numerous Menos-class hollows.
   
“Oh, so you bring Menos ehh. And by counting, it’s 20 Menos.” Rena smirks at them.
   
“Our pets are started to feel the presence of their food so we bring them here.” The violet Hollow smiled.
   
“And it looks like only two of you had left. Did I miss the fun?” Rena smiled.
   
“Shut up human. We will gonna eat you and the other soul whose hiding behind those trees.” The red Hollow said.
   
“You’re gonna through me before you will near to her.” Rena angrily said.
   
“Now, attack.” The violet commanded. The Menoses fires multiple Ceros on Rena but she dodges all of that using Shukuchi. Like the storm dances on the field, she dodges every Cero despite their firing at her in barrage. At the same time, the red Hollow suddenly appears in front of her. Rena was surprised about that and forces herself to defend the swing. But the swing was too strong that sends her to the ground.
   
Rena then looks above and saw the Hollow readies to fire a Cero to her. But she only dodges the blast. Without giving the enemy’s chance, she went behind the Hollow and tries to damage her. But her instincts tell something’s wrong and she looks to that source, only to find out that the Menos are ready to fire her. Unable to block that many blasts, she’s trying to get away from the line of fire. But too much of her massive dismay, the violet hollow kicks her on the back causing her to get out of balance.
   
“Shit.” Rena cursed. Then she hears a giggle, despite of its weak sound.
   
Rena.” Then the she heard a giggle again. After that the whole place suddenly shuts down and changes to a location in front of her eyes.
   
“Weird. Why I’m the rooftop of the skyscraper and not on the park?” Rena asked.
   
Just like Rena said, she’s on the rooftop of the skyscraper. Her surroundings filled with other skyscrapers but the thing that she stands is the highest one.
    
“What’s going on?” Rena asked herself.
   
“Don’t worry, my dear Rena. I’m the one who brings you here.” Rena heard a giggle behind her. Rena turns around only finds out that the one who calls her is a girl.
   
“You’re the one?” Rena asked.
   
“Yes, it’s me.” The girl giggled. Then she approaches Rena fast but graceful. The girl wears a simple dress with a ribbon on a chest and white hat.
   
“You look like me.” Rena gasped. All of the sudden the girl cupped Rena’s chin that makes her blush.
   
“You’re right Rena. It’s because I’m yours and that mirrors to you.” The girl smiled.
   
“So why are you late?” Rena broke the contact between them.
    
“It’s because you keep ignoring me.” The girl chuckled.
   
“Set aside of that. I bring you here because I will gonna say it now. By the way, did you notice something?” The girl smilingly said.
   
“You mean aside from these very high skyscrapers? Let see. Aside from that, the wind is very strong plus I can see a small storm from each of the skyscraper. It looks like they are wildly appears elsewhere. And I hear a thunder.” Rena said.
   
“Just like yours, it appears very wild like a storm but very strong like a wind. Plus that thunder, well that’s equivalent to your powers.” The girl smiled.
   
“Well, it’s time to bring you back, so long.” The girl said. Then the whole place slowly turns black. Before the girl disappeared, she say something to Rena which only she could understand that. After that, the place switches back to her normal location.
   
“Wow, bringing back in this uncomfortable location? What a bad Zanpakuto.” Rena hissed.
   
“I guess I have no choice.” Rena puts her sword on the sheath. By that, she swiftly unsheathes her sword as she shouts the name of her Zanpakuto.
   
“Raiko! (Thunder Priestess)” The sword releases an aura of thunderstorm, blasting all the incoming Ceros. When the aura was gone, Rena was shown holding her sword, engulfed with lightning charge. Rena swiftly put back her sword to the scabbard, sealing the released power again.
   
“Well, according that she said. It will always be in Shikai and cannot revert back to its original state.”
   
Rena saw that the Menos are ready to fire her, so she move in front of them and waves her sword at them very fast. In an instant, they are being engulfed by a massive lightning storm, turning them into nothing but ash. When the Menos are gone, Rena then faced the two remaining Hollows.
   
“Only the two of you remains. You could run to save yourself or you could die by fighting me.” Rena puts back her sword to scabbard.
   
“Do you think that we’re gonna escape? I don’t think so.” Then the two hollows release a massive spiritual aura.
   
“You’re not the only one who can release Zanpakuto.” The violet Hollow said. The two hollows show their Zanpakuto.
   
“Damn, they will gonna release it now.” Rena said.

To be continued

<><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>

Updated Biodata are in this link (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=36303.msg1225637#msg1225637)
Title: Re: Shikyo Taisen (No Pairings): Chapter 5 (09/28/13)
Post by: Minamiyuki on September 29, 2013, 07:18:30 AM
Chapter 5: The Assassinating Darkness
   
“Damn, they will gonna release it now.” Rena said.
   
“Burn, Demonio (Demon)” Then the red Hollow’s zanpakuto vanished as the ground suddenly erupts in a pyroclasmic flames. Then the flame disappeared, revealing a giant demon-like hollow.
   
“Swipe, Marejada (Tidal Wave)” Then a geyser of water appears on the ground, devouring the violet Hollow as his zanpakuto disappeared. The geyser was gone; a disfigured fish-like hollow was shown with three fish tails.
   
“Ew, that’s kinda abhorred.” Rena disgusted.
   
“You can have that reaction for all of our care. This will be your grave.” The red Hollow punches the ground, releasing erupting flames that went to Rena. Before it hits, Rena waves her sword, releasing a huge lightning blast, countering the erupting flames coming from the ground. Before Rena can react, the violet Hollow suddenly appears from her behind and shoots water cannon that makes her recoils and slams her to the tree. Then the demonic Hollow charges to Rena and tries to punch her but she deflects the attack using her unsheathed sword. Rena slashes the hand, causing the demonic Hollow growling in pain and tries to claw her but she dodges that perfectly. Rena then intercepts the fish-like Hollow by slashing the giant wave coming from her. She didn’t have a chance to strike back as the violet Hollow appears behind the wave and slaps her which sends her to the bench.
   
“Itai~” Rena cries in pain as she lying on the broken bench. The demonic Hollow appears in front ready for the final strike. But before it reaches to the girl’s body, a clashing sword was heard. Rena’s eye widened as she surprised from what she saw in front of her.
   
“Acchan!” Rena said. Acchan blocks the attack using her two swords encircled with fire and wind respectively. Then she pushes her sword that makes the Hollow tumbles back and crash to the ground.
   
“Rena! Are you alright?” Acchan went to injured Rena.
   
“Yeah, I’m fine.” Rena answered.
   
“No, you are not alright.” Suddenly Kumi, Yukirin and Yuria appear behind of lying Rena.
   
“Everyone, what are you all doing?” Rena tries to stands up but she’s hurt.
   
“Well you’re not on your bed. So we worried a lot. Then we sense much spiritual energy coming from this place. So we went here to check, only finds out that you’re fighting.” Kumi explained.
   
“Sorry, I should’ve said it to you.” Rena said.
   
“It’s ok, at least we save you. Now, enough for a chit-chat, let’s finish this. I need to have a breakfast now.” Kumi said.
   
“Tsk, I don’t want to unsheathe my sword right now. Looks like I’m gonna fight with my scabbard only.” Yukirin said.
   
“What are you saying, Yukirin?” Acchan asked.
   
“I’m saying that my sword was finally released but I don’t want to show it to you guys. Not now.” Yukirin sighed.
   
“Why you don’t want to show it to us?” Rena was finally able to stand up.
   
“I can’t explain it yet. But when all of your swords are released I can able to show mine.” Yukirin said.
   
“Here they come.” As Acchan said, the two Hollows charge at them. The four move apart so they can able to fight them so that they don’t collide to each other.
   
“They’re swords are in released, be careful!” Rena shouts at them.
   
“We already know it’s obvious.” Kumi chuckled.
   
“You’re not funny, Kumi.” Yukirin said.
   
“I’m serious, Yukirin. I can be joking sometimes but not always.” Kumi seriously said.
   
They saw an incoming fire blast but Acchan slashes it, cutting into two. Then Rena charges through the fish-like Hollow and blast a lightning bolt. But the Hollow summons a giant wave, blocking the blast.
   
“Yukirin, can you guard Yuria?” Kumi requested.
   
“Of course it is.” Then Yukirin went to Yuria.
   
“Their swords are released, I wonder if mine also.” Kumi said. She charges towards the demonic Hollow. But before she reaches it, the Hollow summons a massive firewall, making her retreat from her attack.
   
“Wew, that was close.” Kumi whistled.
   
Acchan then use her Kusanagi’s wind to blast away the firewall and uses Masamune to slash the Hollow. The Hollow blocks it using his arm but Acchan manages to scratch it despite being blocked. The Hollow fires Cero to Acchan but she evades it and slashes the second one that the Hollow fires. Acchan saw the fish-like Hollow charges at her. She uses her two swords to collide with the Hollow, creating massive shockwave.
   
Before the demonic Hollow backstabbing Acchan, Rena suddenly appears in front of the Hollow and counters the fire blast. Then she tries to chop off the Hollow’s arm but the demonic Hollow suddenly went on Rena’s back and slaps her out. Then the demonic Hollow fires a Cero. Rena waves her sword, creating a lightning blast, to block the Cero, explodes violently.
   
“It’s time to end this game.” The two Hollow said. They pour a massive amount of spiritual energy that creates a tremor to the whole place. Then the tremor stops as the silence went by.
   
“What are they doing?” Acchan and Rena asked at the same time. Then the ground where Rena stands started to have a crack.
   
“What is this?” Then a massive infernal flame suddenly erupts from the ground, surrounds Rena completely. Rena was trying to get out but the heat makes her weakened.
   
“Rena~!!” Acchan shouted. She’s trying to help Rena but suddenly she her body starting to get numb.
   
“What the hell?” Then a water sphere suddenly appears on Acchan’s surrounding. Acchan tries to destroy the sphere but to her avail, not even a single scratch could she create. Because of water, Acchan feels like she could drown.
   
“Acchan~!! Rena~!!” Kumi shouts and went through them. But the two Hollows went in front of her, blocking the way.
   
“Move along.” Kumi shouted.
   
“No we can do.” The demon spits a fire that makes Kumi back away for a while.
   
“Damn you.” Kumi gritted her teeth.
   
“You can’t do anything. We will gonna feast you and your two friends over there as your two remaining ones are being destroyed.” The fish-like Hollow said, then fires a Cero to Kumi. She dodge that but the second one that comes from the demonic Hollow caught her off guard, sends her 10 meters away and crashes her to the ground. Before she has chance to stand up, the two Hollows fire at her crashing ground that makes her crying in pain.
   
When the smoke subsides, Kumi was laying on the ground with her many injuries. She can’t able to stand up due to multiple attacks. Then suddenly darkness coming to her as her eyes slowly closes.
   
“Damn it? Is this of my end? I can’t able to save my friends. I’m a useless one.” Then the darkness engulfs her completely.
   
You’re not dead, Kumi. I’m just pulling your thoughts to this world.” A voice suddenly heard from Kumi’s ears. Then she opens her eyes and looks at her surroundings.
   
“Where am I? Why this place was so dark.”  Kumi looks from left to right.
   
“It’s because this represents to your nature.” The unknown person said.
   
“My nature?” Kumi asked. The place where she stands has been changed from pure darkness to nightly seashore.
   
“And this is your inner world.” Kumi saw a girl from the far end of the shore. The girl wears a beach kimono white black blouse on the inside, headband with flower on it and short pants.
   
“This is my inner world, so that means you are.” Kumi said.
   
“That’s right. And you’re the last one of your friends.” The girl smiled.
   
“Eh. That’s so unfair.” Kumi pouted.
   
“Before your senses will be come back, I will give my portion of my power to you.” The girl still smiled.
   
“Anyway, why is my inner world this dark?” Kumi asked.
   
“It’s because of your sneaky personality.” The girl chuckled.
   
“Hey, I’m not sneaky.” Kumi half-shouted.
   
“Hai~ Hai.” The girl waves her hand.
   
“And also this is represents your spiritual energy.” The girl seriously said.
   
“It’s time to bring you back.” The girl gives the sword to Kumi
   
“It’s nice to meet you.” Kumi takes the sword and smiles at the girl.
   
“Don’t mention it.” Then the world turns black.
   
Back to the real world, Yukirin watches the battle. She wants to join at them but because she can’t able to use her zanpakuto until all of her friend’s zanpakuto are released, her only doing right now is to protect Yuria.
   
“Tsk, damn it.” Yukirin gritted her teeth.
   
“Let me help.” Yuria said.
   
“No you’re not, you’re still injured.” Yukirin said.
   
“But-“ Before Yuria finishes her speech suddenly they sense a disturbing energy.
   
“Kakushitsu~!!! (Vendetta)” Then a black aura erupts around Kumi as she stands up.
   
“What?” The two Hollows surprised.
   
When the aura disappeared, Kumi stands up like she felt nothing. Then her sword, instead of katana, was turned into one meter long nodachi.
   
“Finally, time to unsheathe my sword. Yuria can you please close your eyes?” Yukirin asked. Yuria do what was her requested as Yukirin went to Kumi.
   
“Are you ready?” Yukirin unsheathe her sword, activating the hypnosis on the two Hollows.
   
“I’m always ready.” Kumi position herself by dropping into a partial crouch, both knees bent, left arm drawn back and right arm extended forward; she grasps the endcap of the hilt of her sword with her left hand and rest on the tip of the fingers of her right hand on the blade near the tip. Then her sword engulfs with aural darkness. In just an instance, Kumi pushes her left foot, suddenly vanished and appears 5 meters behind the demonic Hollow. Then she thrust her sword directly on the Hollow’s back. Suddenly, a massive blade-like aural dark appears on Kumi’s arm, stabs on the Hollow. The Hollow cannot respond that as he divides into two.
   
“What?” The Hollow disappeared into ashes. After that, the flames that surround Rena also disappeared.
   
“You!” The fish-like Hollow’s summons a giant waves. A clicking sound was heard as Yukirin suddenly appears behind the Hollow.
   
“Shut up. You have the right to be silent. You hurt my friends in front of my eyes. Now it’s time to kill you right now.” Then Yukirin shuts her sword, deactivating the hypnosis. Then the Hollow suddenly dices into million pieces and disappeared. The sphere that surrounds Acchan pops up.
   
“Yuria, you can open your eyes now.” Yuria opens her eyes and saw that the battle was ended. Then she went to Yukirin and Kumi.
   
“Finally it’s over.” Kumi feels that she’s weakened and started to fall but Yukirin catches her instantly.
   
“Are you alright, Kumi?” Yukirin worriedly asked.
   
“I’m alright. I’m just need to have a rest.” Kumi looks at her zanpakuto, still engulfs with black aura.
   
“Your sword changes from katana to nodachi.” Acchan smiled.
   
“It’s because that’s my Shikai form.” Kumi resheathed her sword back to scabbard.
   
“Wow, so all of our zanpakuto are released right?” Yukirin asked.
   
“It looks like it is.” Acchan supports the weakened Kumi.
   
“Come on guys, let’s go home.” Rena waves at them beside Yuria. The three smiled as they went to the waving Rena.

To be continued

<><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>

Updated Biodata are on this link (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=36303.msg1225637#msg1225637)

So?? You like it?? XD XD XD XD XD
Title: Re: Shikyo Taisen (No Pairings): Chapter 5 (09/28/13)
Post by: AshuraX on September 29, 2013, 10:36:30 AM
... Was Yuki's zanpakuto able to use hypnosis or paralysis? Seemed like the latter?

And now that the four's sword's true form are unleashed, wonder what's next~
Title: Re: Shikyo Taisen (No Pairings): Chapter 5 (09/28/13)
Post by: White Hawk on September 29, 2013, 01:11:02 PM
Yay~! Rena and Kumi Zanpakuto's power are released!
Now Yukirin can use her power too ^^

I cant wait for your next update XD
Title: Re: Shikyo Taisen (No Pairings): Chapter 5 (09/28/13)
Post by: Minamiyuki on September 29, 2013, 05:33:50 PM
For replying....

AshuraX: Yukirin's Zanpakuto has an ability called Kyokudou Saimin or Extreme Hypnosis in English. It controls the six senses (sight, smell, touch, hearing, taste and extrasensory). Anyone (Shinigami, Humans, Quincy etc.), with the exception of Acchan, Yukirin, Rena and their fifth friend who will introduced in soon chapter, who witness the activation of her zanpakuto by seeing the blade of the sword, will be affected by hypnosis. The hypnosis can make the target misinterpret another person's form, shape, mass, aura, feel and smell to be an enemy's. In short, anyone who saw the blade of Yukirin's sword, will be deceived completely. For example, Yukirin unsheathes her sword. The enemy saw her sword's blade. The enemy was under now the hypnosis instantly and they think that the Yukirin in front of them was real, only they didn't know that they're being deceived. When Yukirin shuts down the hypnosis by resheathing the sword, the Yukirin in front of them was only just an image, shown either melts away or shatters. Only they will lately realized that it's only just an illusion...... Because Yukirin can control all of the senses. She has an ability to delay the occurence that happens to the target. She can also shuts down the receptors in the nervous system for a while. That's the information for Yukirin's zanpakuto.....  :) :) :)

White Hawk: Thank you for your comment.. You're right, Yukirin zanpakuto was so scary. It's because it's the more powerful than Kyoka Suigetsu. And to be answer to your question in your last comment, anyone, not only shinigami, with the exception of her friends, and their fifth unknown friend, are affected by hypnosis once they witness it.  XD XD XD

Now time to work the next chapter.....  :) :) :)
Title: Re: Shikyo Taisen (No Pairings): Chapter 5 (09/28/13)
Post by: Amakuchi on September 29, 2013, 06:21:20 PM
AshuraX, no offense but... You could've saved kilobytes of my uncle's explanation about Yukirin's Zanpakutou if you just read the character information and the whole chapter itself. If you really read the chapter then you could've answered your question yourself.
Title: Re: Shikyo Taisen (No Pairings): Chapter 5 (09/28/13)
Post by: AshuraX on September 30, 2013, 11:49:13 AM
I see~

None taken, Amakuchi. I actually got it at first but was confused in the fifth chapter. No movements from dem hollows and all since she activated her hypnosis.

Anywho, why'd the 3 (and the other new one) are immune to Yukirin's hypnotism/hypnosis?
Title: Re: Shikyo Taisen (No Pairings): Chapter 5 (09/28/13)
Post by: AshuraX on September 30, 2013, 04:51:49 PM
^ It was the time of their attack. Since the moment Kashiwagi unsheathed her sword til' the time Yagami lost all of her strength due to the fight. The hollow made no move. I thought it was supposed to at least attack something or someone or make comments bout the unidentified mystery in front of them but thus nothing.

So I was guessing that it was just a misinterpretation on my part.

And no we, Amakuchi-san and I, weren't fighting XD Just fooling around (I guess)

And as for my other question. Yeah, it was just my sudden 'waiting' question. Like how I usually do.

P/S, I think Cross-san/Minamiyuki-san's grammar/Engrish is okay as it is. It's not like he/she is some English folk that's main language is that of English itself. And of course, I'm way worse XD
Title: Re: Shikyo Taisen (No Pairings): Chapter 5 (09/28/13)
Post by: AshuraX on September 30, 2013, 05:14:53 PM
Must... Resist... Insulting...
LoL JK XD
Lucky to have a cousin that loves AKB...
As for the grammar, yeah, I think I'm 'okay' in that. Not awesome but 'normal', I guess.
Title: Re: Shikyo Taisen (No Pairings) [Bleach-themed Fic]: Chapter 6 (10/09/13)
Post by: Minamiyuki on October 09, 2013, 01:18:04 PM
I'm BACK~!!!!!  :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

It seems there's a argument in here ehh???

For the replies:
@Doko Demo Door: Although hurtful, I'll take that insult as a compliment. I will reply to you: I don't care if my fic was full of incorrect grammars, as long as I can able to retain the flow of the story, it's fine. But in case, I will do my best to make my grammar better.  :) :) :)
@AshuraX: I'm sorry if there is a plot hole in there. But thank you for reading my fic....  :) :) :)

ENJOY READING~!!!!!  XD XD XD


Chapter 6: Incoming
   
Seven days had been passed since their battle with the Hollows, the released of their zanpakuto and the recovery to their injuries. They can able to live in normal life again but they already know that the danger is still there. So they decided to have a practice in Rena’s house since Rena’s family owned a very large dojo. And also they make Yuria as their teacher. Yuria would gonna reject this but seeing the cute plead of these humans, she has no choice but to teach them some of her basic knowledge of using Zanpakuto.
   
In the midst of their training, Rena calls for a break since it’s already a lunchtime. While eating their meal, Acchan went to asked Yuria about Soul Society.
   
“Ne~ Yuria, how large the Soul Society is?” Acchan asked.
   
“Well, I can’t answer that question so easily. It’s just like you ask me how large the universe is.” Yuria said.
   
“Next question, there are many portions in Soul Society right?” Kumi asked.
   
“Yes, there are two portions. The Rukongai were the souls live when they arrive in Soul Society and the Seireitei which is at the center of Soul Society.” Yuria said.
   
“The Rukongai is divided into three-hundred twenty districts, eighty of these districts on four directions, each are numbered in descending order on how far they are from the center. By that, the farther from the center, the less peaceful it is.”
   
“Less peaceful, you mean the farther from the center, the numerous the scum that are living?” Yukirin asked.
   
“You’re right. I was living on the 1st district, known as Junrinan district.” Yuria said.
   
“How about the Seireitei?” Rena asked.
   
“Seireitei is the known as the “court of the pure souls”. The majority of the residents in there are nobilities and Shinigamis. Like a castle guarded by a wall that only a gate as an entrance, there are four gates in there.  The wall is made of stones that can negate all spiritual powers so it’s impossible to breach Seireitei. The only way to pass through the wall is open the very large gate which it could take the strength of the Gatekeeper to open that heavy thing.”
   
“It’s my turn. What is Gotei 13?” Yukirin asked.
   
“Gotei 13 is one of the three primary military branches of Soul Society; the other two are Onmitsukidou and Kido Corps. It is made up of thirteen divisions, with several divisions having certain specifications. It is led by the Captain-Commander, mainly 1st Division Captain Takahashi Minami. Just like any army, the Gotei 13 has ranks. There are 20 ranks for officers and none for non-officers. I’m assigned in 2nd seat in 10th Division; in short I’m a lieutenant and the captain is 10th Division Captain Ogiso Shiori.”
   
“Captains of each division are the most respected Shinigami within the Soul Society. All captains are able to utilize the final stage of their Zanpakuto, which is short ‘Bankai’” Yuria said.
   
“Bankai? So there are other forms for Zanpakuto, aside from Shikai.” Kumi said.
   
“Captains are exceptionally stronger and more powerful than their lieutenants. Their spiritual pressure, comparable to us, is tremendously dense and their stats are very high. Most captains are skilled in the use of Shunpo and Kido, and generally have extensive knowledge of Shinigami history and battle tactics. All of these factors create the vast power gap between our captains and us, the lower-officers.”
   
“You mean that all captains are that strong?” Rena asked. Yuria replied with a nod.
   
“There are three ways to become a Gotei 13 captain. The first one is Captain Proficiency Test, a test which requires the ability to perform Bankai. The second one is Personal Recommendation, to have this from at least six captains and approval from at least three of the remaining seven. The last one, but rarest, is Trial by Combat, to defeat a captain one-on-one with at least 200 witnesses from the captain’s division.”
   
“Ouch, the last one really hurts.” Kumi said.
   
“Ok, break time’s over. Let’s continue.” Yuria said in commanding voice.
   
“Hai!”
   
While the training continues, Yuria sensed an incoming Reiatsu (spiritual pressure). And she knows whom is it. While being not seen by her becoming-friends, she lowered her head. Her cheeks were flowed by tears. She wipes the tears that flow from her cheeks so they wouldn’t able to notice it. She looked at the setting sky as she bitterly murmured.
   
“I’m sorry. It looks like my time is up.”
   
----------------------------------------------------------------

From a far away, four figures are walking down to the streets.
   
“Captain, I sense an unusual Reiatsu. It must be her.” The lieutenant girl said. She’s wearing sleeveless Shihakusho (Garment of the Dead Souls) and black punk choker. Her sword was hanged on her back.
   
“You’re right, it is her. Captain what should we do?” Another lieutenant girl said. She’s wearing long-sleeved, mini-skirt version of Shihakusho. Her sword was hanged horizontally on her back.
   
“You don’t need to treat me as higher-ups, my dear wife.” One of the captains said in melodious voice. She’s wearing a sleeveless, mini-skirt version of Shihakusho with the top slightly loosed, slightly revealing her upper chest. She’s also wearing a sleeveless white haori on the top of her Shihakusho. Instead hanged, she’s bringing her sword on her right hand.
   
“Still you’re my captain.”
   
“Let’s be serious in here, shall we?” The short-sized captain seriously said. She’s wearing a standard Shihakusho and sleeveless haori. Her sword was hanged on her right waist.
   
“Aside from that, she’s with the four humans.” The captain said.
   
“But those humans are really not ordinary humans.”
   
“What do you mean not human, Nami?”
   
“Their Reiatsu, it’s so dense.” The so-called Nami said.
   
“Hmmm. A formidable opponent, I see.” The one lieutenant put her hands on her chin as she nods in affirmation.
   
“Let’s go now.” The midget captain said.
   
----------------------------------------------------------------

Elsewhere, on the old Japanese-style house, two persons are drinking a tea.
   
“They are here.”
   
“You’re right. I think I’m gonna go there.”
   
“Yeah, you can go now. Your friends need you.” As the figure went away with the sword on left hand, another figure appears behind the sliding door.
   
“The war is nearly coming.”
   
“I know about that, we need to prepare for the worst.”
   
----------------------------------------------------------------

“Wahhh, it’s so tiring!” Kumi stretched her hands. Their training’s been finished in the setting sun hours.
   
“Guys, I should go ahead.” Yuria said while rushing towards the gate.
   
“Where did she go?” Rena asked.
   
“I don’t know. Maybe she’s getting a drink for us.” Yukirin said.
   
“Acchan did you noticed it?” Kumi worriedly said.
   
“Yes, it seems that I felt last time is the cause of that.” Acchan seriously said.
   
“What do you mean?” Yukirin asked.
   
“Her fetchers are here.”

----------------------------------------------------------------
   

Yuria was running away from her new friends. She knew they will come for her. She stops from her running.
   
“I know that you are here to capture me because I commit a crime right? 7th Division Lieutenant Furukawa Nami, 8th Division Lieutenant Kitahara Kazuhiko, 7th Division Captain Furukawa Airi and finally, my big sister, 6th Division Captain Oshima Yuko.” Yuria looks at her said persons. Then the four suddenly appears in front of her.
   
“Nice one, 10th Division Lieutenant Kizaki Yuria. Despite being stealth, you can actually able to detect us so easily.” Nami said.
   
“You’re right Yuria. You’re under arrest for illegal usage of Senkaimon (World Penetration Gate) and entering on Human World without the permission from the higher-ups.” Yuko said.
   
“As from the orders of 1st Division Captain Takahashi Minami, we gonna capture you dead or alive. So if you want not to be harmed, you should come to us peacefully.” Airin said.
   
“Peacefully you say? As if you tried hide those killing instincts coming from your face.” Yuria smirked.
   
“We don’t say that we’re gonna kill you, we say that we’re gonna.” Nami innocently said.
   
“Execute me.” Yuria seriously said.
   
“Enough chit-chat, if you don’t want to come with us. Then we will force you to drag to Soul Society.” Kazuhiko said.
   
“Kajiru (Bite), Kenshimaru” With that Release Command said, Nami rotates her sword very fast. The sound of chainsaw was heard from the rotating sword. Then Nami stops the rotation and shows her jagged-teeth edged sword. Nami rushed toward Yuria and swung her sword downward.
   
“Damn. Sakiru (Bloom), Benizakura (Crimson Cherry Blossom)” Yuria’s sword change its color into    red. Then she intercepts Nami’s attack by slashing upward. Then Nami’s sword’s tooth-edge suddenly moves like a chainsaw mechanism, creates a spark between each other sword. Then her eyes widened as she saw not too far from her, Kazuhiko prepares to attack Yuria. She holds her sword in Iaido style with her left hand on the sheath and lower guard.
   
“Oh my god, this is my end.” Yuria tries to break away from Nami’s attack. Nami pushed Yuria and moves away from the attack range while Yuria outbalanced from her position.
   
“Ureero (Mourn), Shizuhitan (Silent Sorrow)” Kazuhiko pushed up the guard. Then a crevasse was created from the ground, moving toward to Yuria. Yuria closes her eyes as she gonna to took the final blow
   
Before it makes contact to Yuria, a striking sound was heard. Then her butt was hit on the ground.
   
“Itai.” Yuria said.
   
“Are you alright, Yuria?” Yuria looks at the source of that voice and finds out its Kumi, offering her hand to get up.
   
“Kumi? What are you doing here?” Yuria takes the hand as she gets up.
   
“Are you gonna leave us without saying goodbye?” Kumi acted like she’s crying.
   
“Stop that.” Yuria pissed over Kumi’s act.
   
“Yuria~!! Kumi~!!” Acchan, Rena and Yukirin called while ran toward them.
   
“So really it’s them. Two Lieutenants and the worst of all, two Captains.” Acchan smirked.
   
“Oh look what we have now; it’s the four humans who save the helpless girl.” Kazuhiko said.
   
“Shut up, you supposed to be her friend. Not to be an executioner.” Yukirin angrily said.
   
“You shut up. You don’t know who talking about.” Nami shouted.
   
“Here’s the plan, Yukirin will battle to that girl with her sword sheathed, I will battle that girl with jagged-teeth edged sword, Rena will battle to that ponytailed-girl Captain and Acchan will battle to that midget Captain.” Kumi said.

“Kumi, that sleeveless Shihakusho you say is 8th Division Lieutenant Kitahara Kazuhiko, wife of 8th Division Captain Kitahara Rie. The mini-skirt version of Shihakusho you referred is 7th Division Lieutenant Furukawa Nami, wife of 7th Division Captain Furukawa Airi. The ponytail-girl you described is Nami’s wife and also, her captain. The last one, the midget captain is my sister, 6th Division Captain Oshima Yuko.” Yuria said.
   
“Your sister, then why the hell they want you to be killed?”
   
“It’s because I make a grievous crime.” Yuria lowered her head.
   
“I like that plan. It looks like a suicide plan.” Yukirin sarcastically said.
   
“It’s better than run. At least we could fend off them from Yuria.” Kumi said.
   
“Now let’s go.” And they went to respective opponents.

To be Continued.....
Title: Re: Shikyo Taisen (No Pairings) [Bleach-themed Fic]: Chapter 6 (10/09/13)
Post by: AshuraX on October 09, 2013, 03:36:57 PM
I was gonna scream AtsuYuu but.. Meh.
Title: Re: Shikyo Taisen (No Pairings) [Bleach-themed Fic]: Chapter 6 (10/09/13)
Post by: LittleTina on October 10, 2013, 07:59:31 PM
I haven't seen BLEACH for a while then BAAAM and this pops up T^T
I'm casually sobbing since BLEEEEAAAAACCCCHHHH...ehm!

So wait....does that mean Yuria's state is like Rukia's? It's like 4 Ichigo and 1 Rukia...wait I can't remember who came to take back Rukia... O.O Byakuya and Renji....? I guess...
NEVERMIND.
Wait, why is Airin married?! NO.AND KITARIE TOO /sobs/
Please keep killing my KumiYuri T^T I love those fanfics...where Kumi doesn't end with Yuria sobs more... please put Kanon into the mess and kill my heart more
I'm guessing Yuko's getting the Byakuya role? xD


I wonder who Kon's going to be xDD
Please keep it up~
And don't worry about your grammar, It'll get better! Mine was worse D; Now it's better I guess...? But the fact that my typos have become worse than ever.
Anyway! I can't wait for your next chapie~ /fades creepily/
Title: Re: Shikyo Taisen (No Pairings) [Bleach-themed Fic]: Chapter 6 (10/09/13)
Post by: mayuyuXlyukirinlover13 on October 11, 2013, 12:50:40 PM
OH MY GOD! WHY IS AIRIN-SENPAI MARRIED INDEED?!! and... No matter how many grammatical errors this fic has got.... I still love the frigging plot.... ACTION FTW MAH BIG BROTHER!! XD XD
Title: Re: Shikyo Taisen (No Pairings) [Bleach-themed Fic]: Chapter 7 (10/24/13)
Post by: Minamiyuki on October 24, 2013, 10:35:36 AM
Finally, updating now....

AshuraX: Why not screaming it now??  :lol: :lol: :lol:
LittleTina: Ohh... A fellow shinigami... I'm so happy....  :) :) :)
mayuyuXlyukirinlover13: I don't know?? Who do you think is that girl Airin married??  XD XD XD

ENJOY READING~!!!!

<><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>

Chapter 7: Defeat
   
Yuria helplessly watches as her four friends went to their respective opponents. Her body cannot move due to many injuries she inflicted. She want to stop them because their fighting to the very dangerous beings.
   
“Stop, they’re the ones who shouldn’t be fought! They’re the elite officers of Gotei 13!”
   
But her pleads cannot be heard as the sound of striking metals are loudly produced when each other’s sword clashes.
   
“Please stop, I don’t want all of you to be hurt.” Yuria murmured as her tears flowing on her cheeks.

-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
   
“I can sense your sword contains tremendous Reiatsu. That’s your zanpakuto, right?” Nami asked.
   
“Yeah.”
   
“Where do you get a zanpakuto? Who give that to you?” Nami said while swings her sword which being parried by Kumi.
   
“I don’t want to answer that.”
   
Kumi thrusts her sword to Nami. Nami thought she dodges it by backing away but she saw a huge black blade-like aura coming from Kumi’s sword. Nami use her sword to block but the recoil makes her sending a couple of meters away.
   
“What the hell is that?” Nami was puzzled at that moment. Then she saw Kumi’s sword generates black aura coming from the blade. Kumi’s sword generates a very large blade-like aura, then swinging in a very wide arc. Nami dodges the swing using Shunpo but she saw the result. The whole areas of trees are cut off.
   
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Yukirin dodges all of the invisible slashes while Kazuhiko swiftly sheathing and unsheathing her.
   
“Damn, those attacks are unpredictable. Where the hell are they come from?” She continues to avoid all invisible slashes despite having a hard time of sensing the attacks.
   
“Come on, don’t just dancing in front of me. Why you don’t attack me?” Kazuhiko smirked.
   
“You said it now.” In just an instance, Yukirin was already in front of Kazuhiko that makes the lieutenant surprised. Before Yukirin hits her sheathed sword on Kazuhiko, she blocks the swing using her own latter.
   
“Since when do you reach me instantly?” Kazuhiko stunned.
   
“Since when did I reach you? At the time that you attack me with those innumerable and invisible slashes.” Yukirin said.
   
“But how could I can’t able to see that?” She pushed away Yukirin while continues to give invisible slashes to the raven-hair girl.
   
‘Tsk, despite that hypnosis. I can’t able to get near through her.’ Yukirin gritted her teeth. She evaded the incoming attacks.

-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
   
“Look I don’t want to fight. I just want to bring Yuria-chan to Soul Society safe and sound.” Airin pleaded.
   
“You just want to kill her.” Rena furiously said.
   
“I don’t have a choice. It was the order of the higher-ups” Airin sighed.
   
“Well I don’t have a choice too but to not let you get her.” Rena readies to unsheathe her sword.
   
“Shouganai na (I can’t be helped).” Airin releases an intense Reiatsu.
   
“Tsk, this Reiatsu.” Rena gritted her teeth.
   
Without warning, Airin suddenly went behind the shocked Rena. Before Airin could land a critical attack, Rena unsheathes her sword that releases an intense lightning charge and blocks Airin’s attack.
   
“She’s damn fast. I can’t sense her Reiatsu from that.” Rena releases a wave of lightning to Airin but the captain dodges it effortlessly.
   
“This is harder than I thought.” Rena said. She went behind Airin and tried to slash her but only to be met by sword horizontally above Airin.

-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
   
On the other side, Acchan skids backward due to force she received. Her whole legs began to trembled and weakly fell her knees to the ground.
   
“The strength of a captain is not from what I expected.” Acchan breathing heavily from exhaustion while kneeling. Yuko was still standing in front of Acchan and shows no signs of fatigue and injury.
   
“Are you done now?” Yuko calmly asked.
   
“I’m not done yet.” Acchan rushed.
   
“Surrender 10th Division Lieutenant Kizaki Yuria to us and we will leave you all alone. She will be executed for committing a crime and that’s not of your concern.” Yuko said while pointing her sword to Acchan’s face.
   
“As if we let that happen.” Acchan slaps Yuko’s sword and tries to charge at her. But Yuko only swing her sword, creates a widespread force that sends Acchan to the wall.
   
“Your efforts are futile now. My last request, surrender Kizaki Yuria to us.” Yuko said.
   
“My last answer, is no!” Acchan stands up. She released an immense spiritual energy that surges to her body. Yuko just only sighed and massaged her nape.
   
“You leave me with no choice.”

-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
   
“Tsk, I can’t believe it. I will gonna be defeated by a mere human?” Nami holds her sword two-handedly while using it as her stand.
   
“You’re good, Lieutenant Nami. I wished I could fight you more, but I have a friend to be saved.” Kumi said as she stands in front of Nami.
   
“Sayonara, 8th Division Lieutenant Furukawa Nami.” Kumi raised her sword. But before her sword touches Nami, a blood suddenly gushed out in front of Nami.
   
“Why?” Kumi weakly said. When Nami looks in front of her, she saw Kumi was falling ahead to the ground with the blood on her back. Then she saw Airin, standing on her with her sword flowing with Kumi’s blood.
   
“Are you alright, Nami?” Airin went to Nami and checked her if she sustain any injuries.
   
“I’m alright, Captain Furukawa. These injuries are nothing.” Nami sheathes back her sword.
   
“Is that so? Then let’s help Kazuhiko now and we’re all done here.” Airin said.
   
“Captain Furukawa, what happen to your fight?” Nami asked.
   
“Oh, it was wonderful. But I don’t want to waste my time so I quickly end it now. See?” Airin points Rena who’s lying unconsciously sidewards with her sword beside her.
   
“Damn it. I’m near to my limit.” Yukirin used her sword as a stand. Her fast breathe signifies she’s near to exhaustion.
   
“You’re good. That makes me tired too.” Kazuhiko tiredly said.
   
“Tsk, my body feels very heavy. I have reached my limits now.” Yukirin weakly said as she falls to the ground lying unconscious. Kazuhiko nearly falls if she didn’t catched by Yuko.
   
“Captain Oshima, what happened to your opponent?” Kazuhiko politely but weakly asked.
   
“I don’t want to have my time wasted to such a lower-rank species.” Yuko said.
   
“Sumimasen.”
   
“No need to apologize.” At the time they saw Yuria weakly walks in front of them that makes them totally in shock.
   
“You’ll promise that you don’t lay your hands on them once I’ll come with you?” Yuria asked.
   
“We will promise, Yuria-chan.” Airin replied.
   
“Then let’s go.” Yuria said.
   
“Nami, open the Senkaimon.” Airin commanded to Nami which she obeyed. Nami place her zanpakuto in front of her and stabs it to the air. The blade of her zanpakuto vanished.
   
“Senkaimon, unlock.” Nami turns her sword like a key opening to the lock. The area where the sword stabs distort for a while, the traditional Japanese waiting room door appeared in front of them. Once the door opens, a five Jigokuchou released on the opened door and went to the five Shinigamis. Before they went to the door, Yuria suddenly heared a slightly weak voice.
   
“Yuria…… don’t…. go……” Yuria looks at the source of the voice, only she saw a conscious Kumi have her hands trying to reach Yuria.
   
“I’m sorry, Kumi. It’s for your own safety.” Yuria said.
   
“No…. please…..” Kumi weakly plead.
   
“Goodbye and thank you, everyone.” Then the Senkaimon closed as Kumi’s sight turns black.

-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
   
 A girl, with her sword holding on her right hand, was walking on the streets when she saw four familiar bodies lying on the cold road.
   
“I’m too late to save you all.” She murmured.
   
“Oh well. Time to drag you all to acquaintance of mine.”

<><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>

To be continued.....

FEEL FREE TO COMMENT~!!!!!!!!!
Title: Re: Shikyo Taisen (No Pairings) [Bleach-themed Fic]: Chapter 7 (10/24/13)
Post by: White Hawk on October 24, 2013, 04:05:56 PM
OH! I missed your update xD

Chapter 6
Even though they just met, they willing to save Yuria~ That's sweet xD

Chapter 7
Oh no~ Airin~ Why you hurt Rena? :cry:
LOL! I know there's no pairing in here, but I just want to type it LOL XD :P

Hmm, so four of them are in par with the lieutenant, but the captain is still too strong

And I wonder who's she at the end?

Can't wait for your next update~! :)
Title: Re: Shikyo Taisen (No Pairings) [Bleach-themed Fic]: Chapter 7 (10/24/13)
Post by: AshuraX on October 25, 2013, 01:29:32 PM
Same as the above, I'm curious of who that person in the end was.
Awkward moment when Rukia accidentally stumbled upon this world XD
Acchan couldn't even be on par with Yuko...
Title: Re: Shikyo Taisen [Bleach-themed Fic]: Chapter 8 (01/26/14)
Post by: Minamiyuki on January 27, 2014, 05:04:22 AM
ENJOY READING~!!!!!

<><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>

Chapter 8: The Training
   
“Where am I? Why is my body covered by a blanket? Am I already in heaven?” The girl said as the darkness still covers her view. Then she heard a cute girlish voice, replying her questions.
   
“You’re not in heaven, you silly. You’re just sleeping in futon.”
   
This makes her eyes slowly opens and look at the source of that voice. She tries to get up but she felt the sting coming from her back. Despite of that, she continues to get up and look at her surroundings. Below her is a futon with flower design, sitting on the grayish tatami. She looks at the right side and saw an opened shouji. On outside, she saw a tree standing above the pond. Its leaves are carried over the wind.
   
“It seems that you wake up.”
   
The girl looks on the foreground of the tree. She saw a girl sitting on engawa, her hands act as a stand. Then she saw a sword leaning on the side of the sliding door. Its hilt is color orange with shuriken-shaped guard and its sheath is color maroon.
   
“If you looking on your zanpakutou, don’t worry about it. It is right in beside you.” Then she looks beside of the futon and saw her yellow-hilted sword with sheath. The girl narrowed her eyes why does she know about the zanpakutou and how did she knows what she thinking about.
   
“If you’re thinking why I knew about the zanpakutou, is because I have that too. You see the sword with orange hilt? That’s my zanpakutou.” The girl, sitted on engawa, said while not turning around, enjoying the view of nature’s beauty.
   
“Who are you? Are you shinigami too, just like those guys?” The injured girl finally speaks.
   
“First of all, I’m not Shinigami, well not half. And second, you already know who am I, Kumi.”  The girl smiled. The so called Kumi looks at the girl with curious looks. Then something struck at her mind as she analyzed the voice. Her eyes went wide as her curiosity turn into astonishment.
   
“Watanabe Miyuki, is that you?” Kumi slowly ask to the girl. The girl replies with a giggle as she turns around. Her eyes meet on the injured girl’s eyes.
   
“Yes, Yagami Kumi. It’s me, Milky.”
   
Kumi tries to get up again. Instead she meets a pain on the back for the second time. Milky went on Kumi and helps her to get up. Then she reaches a cup of water beside the futon and puts on the injured girl’s mouth.
   
“Don’t force yourself to get up. You still have deep cut on your back. It will take three days for that cut to be closed. Look, your wound’s bleeding again.” Milky removes the bandage that covers Kumi’s back. When the bandage removed, shows a not so large cut diagonally below the nape. After Milky tends Kumi’s bleeding wounds, she close it and put a T-shirt.
   
“Where are the others? Are they also the same as me?” Kumi’s eyes filled with worries.
   
“Don’t worry, they are ok.” Milky said.
   
“Yokatta.”
   
“Did you know that I’m the only one who pulls you all to here?”
   
“Really, Milky? Then you’re very strong.” Kumi smiled.
   
“I’m not… I’m just.” Milky couldn’t finish the sentence as they surprised the sliding door openly slam and shows injured Acchan, Rena and Yukirin. When the three saw Kumi, they recklessly run to her, causing to be stumbled and roll over. They’re wince in pain but fastly recover and talk to Kumi.
   
“Kumi are you alright?”
   
“Did you have some sleep?”
   
“Where did you hurt?”
   
Kumi was bombarded with questions that she couldn’t able to answer back, and instead laughs at them. The three stops bombarding questions and pouts at Kumi but later joins to the laughter. Milky only smiled at them, reminding of their times when she was with them a decade ago. Then the girls stop laughing and look curiously at Milky which she replies them with a raised eyebrow.
   
“Uhm, excuse me. But may I know you?” Rena obliviously asks to Milky. Kumi and Milky look at each other, then smiles like nothing happens.
   
“Hey, why are you two smiling? Kumi, did you know this girl?” Acchan asked.
   
“Really guys, you already forgot her?” Kumi still retains the smile.
   
“Yeah?” This makes Kumi facepalm for a while while Milky still smiling at them.
   
“You don’t have to worry about that, Kumi. It’s been a decade since we’re together and left to Madrid.”
   
“Decade? Madrid?”  The three still tries to recollect their memories and suddenly realization struck on them.
   
“Wait a sec. Are you Watanabe Miyuki?” Milky still puts her smile as she watches them widened their eyes.
   
“What do you think? I’m a ghost?”
   
“MILKY~?” The three shouted while hugging Milky.
   
“Guys, I don’t think Milky will gonna live longer. You’re suffocating her.” The three then release their hold as watching Milky gasp for the air.
   
“When did you come back?” Yukirin asked.
   
“Last week.”
   
“Why you didn’t say you’re going back here?” Rena asked.
   
“It’s a surprise, and besides you’re busy with a lieutenant shinigami.” The last word makes the four silent, changing from smile to sad face. Milky already noticed the situation and went back to her seat. She picks her sword and sits on engawa as she playfully rotates her weapon.
   
“I’m sorry, I could just save Yuria.” Acchan lowered her head.
   
“It’s not your fault, Acchan. We’re already on limit so we couldn’t do anything.” Rena pats Acchan’s shoulder.
   
“Despite that we’re gonna save her, she save us from death.” Yukirin sadly said. Kumi couldn’t contain her emotions as her tears are started to falling down to the blanket.
   
“Yuria, I’m so sorry.” Kumi gripped the blanket very tightly. Milky sighs deeply and stop rotating her sword. She makes the attention causing the girls looking at her with sad face.
   
“Look guys, it’s not the end of the world. If you want to save her why you don’t invade the Soul Society, crash the party and stop the execution.” Milky blurted out.
   
“And how could we do that? You know that to enter Soul Society, we need a Senkaimon” Acchan said.
   
“Yeah and we need also a Jigokuchou to be authorized to enter Senkaimon.” Kumi said.
   
“And a lack of Jigokuchou, means we’re entering Dangai (Parsing World).” Yukirin said.
   
“Which in short it’s more suicide mission than battling many captains.” Rena finalized.
   
“In short, it’s hopeless.” All four sighed.
   
“I can help you with that.” The door slides open, revealing two girls, one with jeans and pink jacket with red polo inside and another one with white seifuku.
   
“Itano-san and Sakura-chan, what are you doing here?” Milky said.
   
“I just want to greet your friends. By the way, I’m Itano Tomomi, the owner of this house.” The girl with pink jacket said.
   
“And this girl who wears white seifuku is Miyawaki Sakura.”
   
“Yoroshiku Onegaishimasu.” Sakura bows. The four saw two 60-cm wakizashi worn on Sakura’s right waist.
   
“The position of wearing the sword is reversely, that was so un-samurai thing.” Yukirin commented.
   
“It’s because I studied swordsmanship at Berlin, Germany.” Sakura gladly said with Kagoshima-ben that only Yukirin could understand.
   
“Eh? You’re speaking Kagoshima-ben?” Yukirin reacted.
   
“Hai, I can also speak Kagoshima-ben.”
   
“Hai hai, let’s stop with that Kagoshima-thing. Like I said, I will help you for entering Soul Society using Senkaimon.”
   
“But entering Soul Society will alarm the whole Seireitei, are you still gonna invade Soul Society?” Tomochin seriously asked.
   
“We will risk everything for the sake of our friend.” The four said at the same time.
   
“Very well, the execution will start 25 days from now. You will gonna rest for five days and after that, we’re gonna start your training for 10 days. So we still have 10 days for the day of execution. That includes with Sakura-chan and Milky-chan. Are we all clear?” The rest nods their head. Then Tomochin went away to the group leaving Sakura, Kumi, Acchan, Rena, Yukirin and Milky.
   
“I guess we should thank her for saving our lives.” Kumi said.
   
“We still don’t know who she was.” Acchan said.
   
“By the way, what do you mean includes Milky and that little girl?” Yukirin and Rena asked.
   
“It means me and Sakura-chan will help you save Yuria-chan.” Milky replied.
   
“Eh? What do you mean?”
   
“Did you see the two wakizashi that Sakura-chan wearing, it’s her zanpakutou. Also if you’re asking why we can use zanpakutou, Sakura-chan is a half-quincy and half-shinigami while I’m quarter-hollow, quarter-shinigami and half-human.” This makes Acchan, Kumi, Rena and Yukirin widened their eyes.
   
“Don’t just react like that. You will gonna take some rest. Then we will have a sparring training after you’re all recover.”
   
The four look at each other and nod simultaneously. Their eyes are covered with determination. They said two words at the same time.
   
“For Yuria.”

To be continued

<><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>
Title: Re: Shikyo Taisen [Bleach-themed Fic]: Chapter 8 (01/26/14)
Post by: Geki karaiiiii on July 21, 2014, 06:34:12 AM
I'm very like your story.... :mon misch:

please update soon   :shifty: :shock:

can't wait for the next chapter   :smoke: