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Title: A Grateful Deal - chapter 7 (AtsuMina) 29/10/2012
Post by: Chikane Himemiya on February 18, 2012, 07:07:49 AM
A Grateful Deal!


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Prologue (scroll down)
Chapter 1: Opening Ceremony (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=32042.msg1005275#msg1005275)
Chapter 2: Bulletin board (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=32042.msg1006017#msg1006017)
Chapter 3: Takamina's friends (http:///forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=32042.msg1010010#msg1010010)
Chapter 4: Mystery Solved! (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=32042.msg1017181#msg1017181)
Chapter 5: Acchan's Secret (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=32042.msg1095257#msg1095257)
Chapter 6: Under The Rain (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=32042.msg1097759#msg1097759)
Chapter 7: The Project  (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=32042.msg1103289#msg1103289)
Chapter 8: Takamina's love and
Rena's Concern (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=32042.msg1112128#msg1112128)









Prologue

I never knew my dad can ever do this to me,
Takamina talks to herself at her room
"He ordered me to live here with our
servants house and live like an ordinary
teenage girl without all the luxuries and money.
Takamina Takahashi the heiress of the Takashi
Group of companies was ordered by her father
to live like an ordinary teenage girl in order
to learn the lessons of life and grow up as a
responsible and strong person and her father
thinks that the only way to do this is to banished
her and to live in their servants house and go to an
ordinary high school.
        Now she was frustrated because her father
Ordered her to leave all her things in their mansion
And was only allowed to bring her few dress, other
Than that she only has small allowance every month,
Only enough for her studies,
   “Hayyy, this money is not even enough to buy
The series of the book I wanted!!!!, and I still need to
Buy my things for school, The classes will start next week!
Ohhhh…I also need to review…..
   Takamina always been a bright and studious student
Since she started studying, she is slightly proud, a yandere
Especially to her friends, she is irritated to girls who
Always comb their hair obsessed on their looks, or so
She never had a friend like that, she is short-tempered
But always kind and understanding friend,
This coming school days she will be in high school.
The start of the school will also start our story,
Minami doesn’t know the fate had planned for her.
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal (Atsumina)
Post by: Yagami.Rai on February 18, 2012, 09:41:31 AM
Oh~ It seems sooo interesting~~ XD
Please Update Soon~ :mon cute:
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal (Atsumina)
Post by: Sydney W on February 18, 2012, 10:02:10 AM
Minami going to meet Atsuko at high school later ~~
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal (Atsumina)
Post by: sando on February 18, 2012, 10:22:45 AM
Takamina O_o↖(^▽^)↗└(^o^)┘ヽ(^。^)ノ

Sent from my GT-S5360 using Tapatalk
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal (Atsumina)
Post by: Nakamii on February 18, 2012, 03:24:22 PM
AtsuMina! (http://i1048.photobucket.com/albums/s376/Nakamii_Eririn/GIFs%20Decorations/o0020002011710656782.gif) I'm curious about the continuation! (http://i1048.photobucket.com/albums/s376/Nakamii_Eririn/GIFs%20Decorations/t00200020_0020002011706312750.gif) Please Update Soon, Chikane Himemiya-san! (http://i1048.photobucket.com/albums/s376/Nakamii_Eririn/GIFs%20Decorations/o0020002011710500648.gif)
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal (Atsumina)
Post by: Megumi on February 19, 2012, 12:27:42 AM
 :hehehe: interesting....

Please continue!

 :kneelbow:
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal (Atsumina)
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on February 19, 2012, 11:36:02 AM
sounds cool please continue  :twothumbs
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal (Atsumina)
Post by: Chikane Himemiya on February 20, 2012, 02:21:21 PM
Chapter 1:Opening Ceremony

Dingdong,Dingdong,Dingdong,Dingdong
The bell rang the first day of the class officially opens.
Minami is excited on her first day of the class even though she is a bit disappointed because she is just in an ordinary high school (not a exclusive school as she expected because she is rich), she is worried because she may have lower class of education because it just a public school, but she just told herself that it is okay because she belongs to the special science class of the school, which has a even better class of education than private schools. Now as a freshman she needs to go to the school auditorium for the opening and welcome ceremony for the freshmen. In the auditorium she seated fourth row from the stage near the center aisle. A minute later a girl sat beside her, as she walk toward the seat beside her, Minami was mesmerized by the soft and very attractive smell of her long and very beautiful hair that touched her faced, but she composed herself quickly because the girl might caught her smelling her hair and back, and she will be embarrassed. Minami was always sensitive about the smell of everything especially a person, it can attract or disgust her very easily, she had admit that this girl had the most attractive smell she ever smelled!. She became more attracted to her when she saw her very beautiful and angelic face. She observed that the girl is shy so she decided to break the ice and start the conversation,
Minami: Hello!
Acchan: Hello!
Minami: Im TakaminaTakahashi you can call me Minami and you are?
Acchan: Atsuko Maeda you can call me Acchan.
Minami: So you are also a freshman?
Acchan: Yes I am
Minami: What section?
Acchan: I’m enrolled at the special science class.
Minami: Wow what a coincidence! I’m also at special science class!
Acchan: Oh!! I’m so glad I already met a co science science class!
Minami: I think it’s true that birds of the same feather flock together!
Acchan: Hahhahahh
(Acchan laughed and smiled at minami, minami also laughed but she observed that Acchan had a very beautiful smile and she can help but pause and observed the face of the girl, Acchan noticed it and said)
What’s wrong minami san?
Ahahah, nothing you just have a very beautiful smile and I can’t help but observe and treasure it.
(Acchan blushed as well as minami)
Thank you but You also a beautiful smile minami chan!
Arigatou! (takamina don’t know why but she loves it when acchan called her Minami chan)

(they continued talking to each other until the ceremony started, Minami find out that Acchan is also talkative like her, but you need to break the ice first before she speaks, she really enjoyed being with her even its just a short period of time and she also observed that Acchan also enjoyed her company, then the ceremony ended and they need to go to the bulletin board to find their sections)
Acchan do you me to accompany you to the bulletin board?
(minami offering her hand)
Of course! Thank you minami
(acchan smiled and gets minamis hand)




 

Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 1 Opening Ceremony (Atsumina)
Post by: Sydney W on February 20, 2012, 02:47:00 PM
yayyy... a meet up session between the two lovelies (soon-to-be) ~~
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 1 Opening Ceremony (Atsumina)
Post by: Yagami.Rai on February 20, 2012, 06:03:28 PM
Oh~ Chapter 1! XD
Takamina has already met Acchan~!! :D
I wonder what will happen next in their school life~
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 1 Opening Ceremony (Atsumina)
Post by: Chikane Himemiya on February 22, 2012, 11:24:50 AM
Chapter 2:Bulletin board


Minami took Acchan hands and run toward the bulletin board where the names of the students and their sections were listed, minami was so
excited that’s why she is running fast, but she forgot that she is still holding acchan’s hands and Acchan is not as fast and strong as her( minami is a fast runner)
Acchan: Mi-na-mi wa-it uhuhuh wait why are you running so fast?
 (She said while panting and kneeling on her knees)
Minami: I’m sorry I’m just excited to know what class im in.
Acchan: why?
Minami: because I’m hoping were in the sama class!(she blushed)
Acchan: really? (She blushed too!!) I too wanted minami to be my
 classmate. (She said shyly)
…..but I think we need to walk slowly because we may fall or
 have an accident
Mnami: ohh, sorry again ok well walk
( they both realized that they still hold each other’s hand)
(minami suddenly let go of her hands)
Minami: I…m sorry for that(she said while looking at the
 other direction blushing)
Acchan: a…h..h. it’s okay(she said while looking also  at
 the other direction and also blushing)
Minami: okay I will help you get up
(minami get again acchan hands and hold her on the
 waist to help her get up)
Acchan’s POV
   Ohh so sweet she is acting like a real gentleman, never experienced this gentleness before she even hold my hands gently, run fast, and help me get up gently, while holding my hands gently, this girl has boyish characters but is very gentle)Acchan get up
Acchan: arigatou
(minami smiled)
Minami: lets go!
Acchan: hai!
( they walked slowly this time, minami didn’t realize that she still holds Acchan hands, well Acchan noticed it, but she didn’t mind she likes this way)

(Then they arrived at the bulletin board many students were at there so they needed to get into the big crowd to know their section)
Minami: ok this is it let see!
(she let go of acchan hands and run to the crowd because of excitement)
Acchan: minami wait!
(acchan tried to do what minami didi and get in the huge crowd of students but she as not as strong as minami and stuck in the middle)
Acchan: Ouch!, Ouch!, Ouch! Plss let me pass ouch!!
Minami: That’s acchan’s voice!
Acchan, Acchan where are you?
(then she found Acchan being crunch by the crowd, minami runned to save Acchan, she goes into where acchan is and hug her to protect her from being crushed by the crowd)
Minami: Im sorry I shouldn’t let your hand go
( then hugs her tighter, Acchan is really red right NOW!)
Acchan: i….ts ok
Acchans pov
Ohhhh! She really saved me!!!
And she smells very good!
Minami: I will hold you until we get into the bulletin board ok?
Acchan: ok( still blushing hardly)
So they arrived at the board and find their names
Minami: ACCHAN! WERE AT THE SAME CLASS!
Acchan: YES! Im so happy minami me too!
They hug each other then jumped and when they break the hug there eyes met, and then they realized that everybody are staring at them and they both blushed in embarrassment)
 




 
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 2 Bulletin Board (Atsumina)
Post by: Chikane Himemiya on February 22, 2012, 11:30:26 AM
So in this chapter this what happens

1. Acchan and Minami have really felt
that they are attracted to each other
2.They found out that they are on the
same section
3.Because they are on the same class
they will have more moments together


Next chapter!
PROUD MINAMI BECAME HUMBLE?!
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 2 Bulletin Board (Atsumina)
Post by: Yagami.Rai on February 22, 2012, 11:38:21 AM
They are already attracted to each other~ :wub:
And they are also in the same class, which means they will have more time together~ XD
I wonder what will happen next~!! :D
Please Update Soon :) And thanks or the Update :thumbsup
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 2 Bulletin Board (Atsumina)
Post by: Sydney W on February 22, 2012, 04:00:01 PM
Next ........... Next....... i want the next update
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 2 Bulletin Board (Atsumina)
Post by: pamela89 on February 22, 2012, 04:20:38 PM
update soon :) cool fic!! Minami and Acchan ~ <3 they're so MoE~
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 2 Bulletin Board (Atsumina)
Post by: okiedokie on February 23, 2012, 04:53:39 AM
So exciting! I hope for more atsumina moments ...and maybe should had a little bit "trouble" cause taka's sweet, gentle, smell ? Lol ,nice fic ,tnk anw!
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 2 Bulletin Board (Atsumina)
Post by: Haruko on February 23, 2012, 06:17:41 AM
aww our takaboy is so gentleman :D we love him her, Im waiting for the next chapter
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 2 Bulletin Board (Atsumina)
Post by: kahem on February 23, 2012, 09:50:16 AM
Oh~ they are so cute being embarassing like that~
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 2 Bulletin Board (Atsumina)
Post by: Chikane Himemiya on March 01, 2012, 11:38:19 AM

Chapter 3: Takamina's Old Friends

Takamina was walking towards her school, she was thinking about her new friend Acchan, which she met yesterday, she can’t help but smile when she remembers her, and what they have done together testerday while she was walking and thinking, she heard a voice from behind calling her name, it was the girl that she was thinking, it was calling her name while running towards Takamina.

Acchan: Takamina!!!!, Takamina!!!

Takamina stopped and smiled when she saw the girl that was calling her name and running towards her

Takamina: Acchan!
Acchan: H…….I!

Acchan said while catching her breath, she is now holding her knees, Takamina helps Acchan get up by holding her arms gently  and helping her to stand.

Takamina: Easy!, Easy Acchan! Why are you running so fast?

   Acchan didn’t answer immediately because she was still blushing because Takamina is now holding her hands, Takamina didn’t notice it and thought Acchan was just catching her breath.

Acchan: I’m running because I want us to be together to walk to the school, but I really did not because when I saw you a while ago you were just a few feet away and I thought I can catch you easily but you walk so fast that our distance became so long that I needed to runto Catch you!

Takamina: why didn’t you just shout and called me???

Acchan: I was calling you all the time!!! But you can’t hear me! And you didn’t notice me because your mind is occupied with something that you even smile while walking without any reason!

Takamina: Oh, Im very sorry about that, You know I really had a poor hearing ability, and im just thinking thinking of some good memo ries a while ago that’s why im smiling

Acchan: really!! What is it plsssssss tell me!!

I was thinking thinking about our memories yesterday!!!, that really made me happy! Takamina thought

Takamina: nothing, it’s not interesting

Acchan: c’mon  Takamina I don’t believe you!!! What it is!!!

Takamina blushed then looked at the opposite direction of Acchans eyes who is now pouting.

Acchan: Dont you trust me???

Takamina:  I told you it’s nothing!! And I trust you

Their conversation continued, until Acchan gave up and finally changed the topic, they were talking and laughing when they reach their room.

Takamina couldn’t believe her eyes!!!!! It’s her friends and former classmates!!! And wearing a uniform just like her

Remember: Takamina came from a super elite school that only the richest families can afford, but they didn’t know about Takamina’s real identity because Takaminas father ordered her to disguise since she started studying, she said that she came from a middle-class family and just a full scholar that’s wahy she afforded the very high school expenses at their school, which they believed immediately because Takamina is really a bright and intelligent kid, so Takamina had her friends and enjoyed being at the school because they are good friends but when her father informed her that she will be in an ordinary public school for her high schoo, sher became very sad but she had no choice but to bid farewell to her friends, that couldn’t believe that she will leave the super prestigious school, but then she explained that she need to do so, because her relatives that was taking care of her, will going to transfer home because of their job, and told them that the school was still good because even though it’s just an ordinary high school, it has a special science section for intelligent middle-class student.

But now to her surprise her friends are her and wearing the same uniform as her.

Why do these super rich kids decided to study here? Takamina thought



Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 3 Catch up (Atsumina)
Post by: Chikane Himemiya on March 01, 2012, 11:44:01 AM
NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!

Introduction of other couples!
And revelation of the reason
why Takmina's Super Rich
Frinds decided to Study in
an ordinary public school!
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 3 Catch up (Atsumina)
Post by: kahem on March 01, 2012, 12:11:52 PM
Hum I like mystere hehe and Takamina is still so cute~
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 3 Catch up (Atsumina)
Post by: Yagami.Rai on March 01, 2012, 02:41:12 PM
Can't wait for the next chapter~ XD
Really wonder what made Takamina's rich friends coming to the same high school as Takamina!
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 3 Catch up (Atsumina)
Post by: ichikawa on March 01, 2012, 03:03:25 PM
It's getting more and more interesting~
Update soon  :bow:
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 3 Catch up (Atsumina)
Post by: Haruko on March 02, 2012, 05:42:03 AM
of course no3b together!! :D
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 3 Catch up (Atsumina)
Post by: Chikane Himemiya on March 23, 2012, 11:31:38 AM
Chapter 4: Mystery solved!

Takamina can barely believe her eyes!!. Her friends Haruna, Rena, Mayu, and Yuki in in her room!!. Wearing the same uniform as hers.
Haruna was playing video games, Mayu and Yuki were busy talking to each other and Rena eating her favorite spicy ramen. Takamina was still
stunned because of shock then Mayu noticed her little midget friend stunned in the door.

Mayu: Hey Takamina!!!

Her other friends heard Mayu then  put their attention in the direction where Mayu is looking.
Then they run to where Takamina is and hug their little midget friend.

Acchan is confused at first because they run to Takamina immediately but then, she realized that,
maybe they are Takamina's friends and they came from the same elementary and junior school, she was happy
for Takamina but she was a bit jealous because of the affection Takamina was giving to them and because she
had'nt met any former classmate before and she thinks its impossible.(because Acchan came from an elite school
just like Takamina and there is a small possibility that her elite classmates were going to enrol here)

Takamina is very happy to see her friends she missed them so much, she always hide her feelings towards others, but
when it comes to her friends she show her affection so much. Sometimes she will lift Mayu while
hugging her behind she loves the shocked expression of the Cyborg and her yell whenever she
do that. Then she loves hugging Haruna and Yuki from behind because she admires the smell and the smooth
silky hair of these girls the touches her face whenever she do that.  And lastly she loves pinching Rena's cheeks,
when the girl is laughing and pouting because she find it really cute and whenever she is sitting beside
the girl, she loves tho lean on her shoulders, somewhat she feel safe on it, of all her friends, Takamina
only lean on Rena's shoulder despite of the fact that all her friends is taller than her, and is also comfortable to
lean in,( Just imagine that Takamina's, way of showing of affection to her friends is somewhat like Yuko's way)

After giving each other a hug and other show of affection Takamina finally break their moment and ask her
friends why they were in her school.

Takamina: Ok guys, Im am very happy that all of you are here in my school but , as far as I can remember,
This is just an ordinary high school eventhough it has a special science section for intelligent students,
it is still not as prestigious as other elite schools , So why are you guys here? You didin't follow me did
you?

Haruna: Of course not! even though we really missed you we cannot do that, I also thought I will be enrolled
in the prestigious schools my father was looking forward to, but in the middle the vacation, my dad told me,
that I will be enrolled in a public high school because his friend  told him, that the TKM Electronics President
himself recommended this school.

Yuki: Yeah, that's right that is also what happened to me, The president even said that it gives a high quality
education.

Mayu: And students from here are the best and the most successful.

Rena: Because it came from the most successful businessman here in our country and maybe in the whole world,
our Dads didnt even background check the school because they believe him so much.

Takamina: Oh so that's the reason it means, my decision is right to enroll here!
(then Takamina remember that she didn't introduce Acchan to her friends yet)
Guys, this is my friend Acchan I met her at the welcoming ceremony, she is also
our classmate.

Acchan bowed then introduce herself

Acchan: Hi! my name is Maeda Atsuko you can call me Acchan
 
Yuki: Nice to meet you Maeda san I am Kashiwagi Yukirin you can me Yuki.

Mayu: Hi Acchan! I am Watanabe Mayuyu you can call me Mayu.

Rena: Hi! Im Matsui Rena you can call me Rena.

Haruna: Hello Maeda chan I am Kojima Haruna you can call me Haruna.

Takamina: It's nice that you guys already knew each other, byed the way they are my friends from my elementary and junior high
school, How about you Acchan? Don't you have any former classmate here?

Acchan: Unfortunately, I didn't find anyone yet, and I think I will never find one.

Mayu: Why Acchan?

Acchan: Because, I came from a prestigious school I am a scholar there, but after my graduation my dad told me that, our, small business
is not going good so I cannot afford to study there anymore, even as a scholar, so he sent me to this school, and I live with my Aunt because
my parents are busy fixing our business. And because my former classmtes are all elite I dont think they will enroll here.

Yuki: How coincident! You and Takamina almost had the same Destiny!!

Rena: Yeah, you almost have the same story.

Huh what a fate father only invented that story to hide my true identity how come their is a person that have the same fate with mine, hmmm,
maybe its just really coincedent Takamina thought.


Mayu: Dont lose hope!!! You see you almost have the same fate as Takamina she also thought she will not any friends here but you see
were here!

Takamina: Mayu is right you will see Acchan don't lose hope, you can still met your former friends!

As soon as Takamina finished  speaking the door opened revealing a very good looking guy, although a bit small and the guy face the class as
if he was searching someone, then he saw Maeda and fix his gaze to her his face became really happy and smiled showing his very
beautiful dimples. While Maeda was still have a shocked expression in her face.

Guy: Acchan!!!

Acchan: Yuu??

He rushed towards Acchan then hold both her hands shaking it a little bit.

Yuu: Ohh so really study here just like what your friends said.

Acchan: Yes Yuu, what are you doing here?

Yuu: Can't you see I am wearing the Boy's uniform of your school it means I study here!

Acchan: But why?

Yuu: Because Im already sick and tired in the private and elite schools so I think I gonna try new..

Acchan: ( she gave him a I dont believe you stare) Really you didnt follow me here?

Yuu: Of...f..f.. cou...r...se no..t ( he sttattered and blush slightly)

Takamina: Ahem, Ahem, so I think you are friends we told you, you will meet your friends Maeda san looks like
you knew each other will you not introduce us to your friend?

Acchan: Sorry, yes we knew each other he is an acquaintant we came from the same school from elementary to junior high
and was classmates during junior high.He is yuu

Yuu bows and introduce himself

Yuu: Hello! everyone I an Oshima Yuu nice to meet you all

Then the girls also introduce themselves and after some minutes chatting the bell rang signaling the start of the class.

The class went smoothly first the Teacher arranged the seating arrangement maybe coincident but Rena, Mayu, Yuki , Haruna , Takamina and Acchan were sitting near each other but Yuu was far from them because girls are separated from boys seat.
The first class was good Takamina was very happy to have her friends with her and even seating near them, but she noticed that Yuu kept on
looking at Acchan during the class and even he is with his new boy friends he still find time to go to Acchan and talk to her, Takamina was a bit irritated(maybe jealous). the class ended and everybody goes home safely.

Takamina just arrived to her house when..

Takamina: Im Home!!

Minako: Hi. Ojousama!! how's first day of the school?

Takamina: Good, I met my friends.

Minako: huh, wow thats great I thought it was impossible you said?

Takamina:  Maybe not..

Minako: Anyway ojousama Master your father give you a package, its on your room.

Takamina: Really!! I thought he forget about my first day of high school!!Thank you Minako!!

Takamina rushed to her room.then she saw a box with a note on it.

Quote
To my Daughter,
I was very happy that you did what I said my dear child,
even if it is not what you like, I see that you were very
lonely when you find out that you will transfer because
you will be away from your friends so I made a way to
to get them near you, I hope you are happy my child
here is my gift for you for your first day. I hope you study
well.
                                                 Love: Dad
Takamina smiled and then opened her gift. I was a laptop!!!. She is very happy now she can study easily!!.
she thought that when her father confiscated all her gadjets she is doomed but her father gave her a laptop even better
than the old one!!

I knew you will not be too hard on me!!! Takamina thought, Thank you dad.

Takamina was very happy today but when she remembers Yuu looking to Acchan talking to Acchan , she felt a bit irritated, and from the
way he looks at Acchan it is not a friendly look, its like, he likes Acchan.


Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 4 First Day (Atsumina)
Post by: kahem on March 23, 2012, 07:43:41 PM
Oh rival came, don't let your guard down Takamina hehe
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 4 First Day (Atsumina)
Post by: Yagami.Rai on March 24, 2012, 03:16:19 PM
Woah! Taka showing her affection like Yuko!!! :w00t:
Which I think will make Acchan really jealous~ >.<
And now enters a love rival, Oshima Yuu!!!!
Is he Yuko as a boy or just related to Yuko and Yuko will come out later?? 0.0
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 4 First Day (Atsumina)
Post by: Sydney W on March 24, 2012, 03:36:54 PM
Minami is jealous with Acchan + Yuu. But since Kojima appearance guess Yuu shall fall for NyanNyan. ^^
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 4 First Day (Atsumina)
Post by: Wmatsui22 on September 07, 2012, 10:14:12 AM
HI.

PLEASE UPDATE.

I CAN'T WAIT FOR YOUR NEXT CHAPTER.

THANK YOU.
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 4 First Day (Atsumina)
Post by: Chikane Himemiya on September 15, 2012, 04:16:00 PM
Chapter 4: Achaan's Secret



It is a sunny and happy morning especially for Takamina, She is very happy walking to school even whistling and smiling while walking. She is very happy because yesterday their teacher divided their class into 6 groups, for a very hard and important science project, and she is in the same group as her beloved Acchan!!!! Not only that, Oshima Yuu not on their group so she can spend times with Acchan alone,not only that when their teacher arranged their seats Acchan and Takamina is seating next to each other. The Midget’s is very happy, her smile is so big that it can pierce her face into two and it is glued in her face since yesterday. Unfortunately not one of her friends also belongs to her group, Acchan and Takamina are in Group 1, Yuki and Mayu are in group 2 and Rena is in group 3 and lastly Haruna and Yuu are in group 4.

At School: Lunch Time

It is already lunch time, Takamina brought out her bento and she has very delicious lunch, then she noticed that Acchan didn’t have her bento and is only eating only a small bread, so she approached her,

Takamina:     Acchan, where is your lunch?
Acchan:      Ah, this bread is my lunch….
Takamina:     It can’t be it is so small and we still have our afternoon classes, can you survive? You will get hungry for sure.
Acchaan:      It is ok, besides I don’t know how to cook so I don’t have my bento; I only buy bread since I was in junior high.
Takamina:     How about your parents?, your mother don’t cook for you?
They have passed away a long time ago (smiling awkwardly)
Takamina:     Sorry for that, Anyways do you want to share your lunch with me, anyways I had a lot of food in my bento, l’ll give you some.
Acchaan:      No, No need!
Takamina:     Don’t be shy it is ok!!!
Then Takamina put her lunchbox in Acchan’s table and she sat in front of Acchan facing her, she opened her lunchbox and Acchan Almost drooled on the delicious food Takamina had.
   Acchan:      Did you cook all of these?
   Takamina:     Yes!!, I like cooking a lot!!
   Acchaan:      It look’s delicious
   Takamina:     Get some!!
Acchan:      It’s okay I had my lunch (but she can’t take away her eyes in the lunchbox)
Takamina:    C’mon
Then Takamina get some food and put it in Acchan’s mouth feeding her like a baby, Acchan was surprised, but she opened her mouth and ate the food Takamina has given to her, Then Takamina smiled widely and patted her head,and said good girl, Acchan was blushing madly after Takamina patted her head and was surprised by the other girl’s action, good that Takamina was busy looking for another pair of chopsticks that she didn’t noticed. Then when Takamina found chopsticks she gave it to Acchan and they ate together, they are very happy eating, they talked about many things and Takamina couldn’t help but smile as she saw Acchan delighted at the food she cooked. Then while eating Acchan had some food in her face,
   Oh you have some food in your face ..
Acchan:      Really where??
Takamina:    In the right..
Achaan put her hands on her face but can’t remove the dirt
Acchan:      No I said in the right…
Acchan:      Where?
Then Takamina get her hankerchief and stand then she lean on Acchan to remove the dirt on her face. Acchan blushed and she can feel butterflies on her stomach Takamina can always make her feel this way since the first time they met she did’nt know why she always seeks for the smaller girl’s company her gentleness towards her never fail to amaze Acchan, she always care for Acchan which makes Achaan very happy.
Takamina’s POV
   She really looked like a child, it’s like she didn’t eat a delicious lunch for a long time, no wonder she looked like skin and bones, but her face is really beautiful I can feel my face turned red and butterflies on my stomach, why is this girl never failed to amaze me, she is the perfect example of girls with proper attitude and posture but at the same time she has her childlike attitudes like joking, which never fails to make me laugh she always brings happiness to me so I always like to be with her.
 
   They had finished their lunch and they are both happy and full the classes proceed until the bell rang signaling for the end of classes then Yuu went to Acchan and ask Acchan something that Takamina really hated.

Yuu:    Hello Acchan!!
Achaan:    Hello.
Yuu:    Your house is near my house if you don’t mind do you want to walk home with me? (He blushed)
Achaan:    (smiling awkwardly) Yeah I could but I’m with Takamina since the first day of the class so I think you should also ask her.

Takamina didn’t like this feeling. It has been known to the whole class that Yuu is courting Acchan, he already confessed to him when they are in junior high, but Acchan did accept it saying that they are too young, but Yuu said he will not give up until he get the love of the beautiful girl. Now Takamina knew this is one of Yuu’s strategy to get closer to the other girl, she wanted to say “No thanks, we don’t like another companion” but she can’t that she will sound like a protective, jealous boyfriend rather than a kind, supporting best friend, and she can’t let Acchan know her feelings because she knew that Acchan would hate her, not just because she didn’t respect their friendship also because THEY ARE BOTH GIRLS.

Takamina: Of course (fake smile)!!, but I think I can’t be with you guys because we will still have group activity in history after class, and I will have some fun with my friends.(fake wink at Acchan)
Yuu: (smiling widely) Thanks Takamina!!! I hope you have some fun!
Acchan: (smiling weakly) yeah! I hope you have some time.
 
Acchan didn’t know why but she became really sad when Takamina allowed Yuu to walk home with them, and the worse made up a story that she will have fun with her friends just to leave her with Yuu alone. She didn’t knew why but she didn’t want to be with this boy even this boy had been good to her for a very long time already , she is more comfortable with Takamina even though they just knew each other for a month.

Yuu walked Acchan home, the boy is talking the whole time they are walking but Acchan just listen, and gave short replies whenever Yuu ask her a question. When she arrived at her home, there is no one there Of course there will be no one she lives alone. then she noticed a big box beside the table and a letter above it

Quote
Dear Atsuko,

My child I’m really sorry I had to do this to you to strip you with all the riches and comfort you have been used too, but I am doing this for you, believe me my child you will learn a lot from these. Anyway I gave you a package, a whole study package with laptop, books and other school supplies. I also put you’re allowance in an envelope inside the box, it is not big just enough for a month I hope you spend it wisely cause I will not gave you money until next month.


From your Loving Dad,
Sheryu

Achaan’s POV
   I really don’t understand dad why does he wanted me to live like a commoner while the truth is I am the heiress of one of Japan’s biggest international company? But I am not as lonely as before now that I met someone that made me happy.


Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 5 Acchan's Secret (Atsumina)
Post by: miayaka on September 15, 2012, 04:31:46 PM
Quote
I am the heiress of one of Japan’s biggest international company?

Always rich as ever   :ding:

Looking forward to your update!
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 5 Acchan's Secret (Atsumina)
Post by: Chikane Himemiya on September 15, 2012, 05:41:59 PM
SOORY!!!!!!1
for late update had been very busy you know school stuff
Anyway here's another secret revealed!!!
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 5 Acchan's Secret (Atsumina)
Post by: kahem on September 15, 2012, 06:25:43 PM
OMG!!!! Acchan is the richest girl in Japan!!!!
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 5 Acchan's Secret (Atsumina)
Post by: Haruko on September 15, 2012, 06:49:04 PM
wait..what?
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 5 Acchan's Secret (Atsumina)
Post by: Megumi on September 16, 2012, 03:34:52 PM
I missed you!  :D

Oh ho ho ho another secret is revealed!
Acchan is mega rich uuuh well not now.

So Acchan doesn't have feelings for Yuu *phew relieved  XD

Thank you for your update!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 5 Acchan's Secret (Atsumina)
Post by: Chikane Himemiya on September 17, 2012, 11:00:06 AM
@miayaka
YES!!!!achaan is one of the richest girl in japan!!!
@kahem
OF COURSE!!! poor girl and rich boy is already an old style!!!
@haruko
Acchan is actually rich and like Takamina her father just force her to live alone and study in an ordinary public school without all the riches to learn in life
@megumi
THANK YOU!!!! and SORRY!!!
Im really busy at school works and I am waiting for inspiration I promise I will update every week this time
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 5 Acchan's Secret (Atsumina)
Post by: Wmatsui22 on September 17, 2012, 01:25:07 PM
PLEASE UPDATE!!!!

I LIKE YOU FICTION..

I AM FAN OF ATSUMINA!!!

THANKS
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 5 Acchan's Secret (Atsumina)
Post by: smarty0821 on September 21, 2012, 09:49:36 AM
One word:



UPDATE!!!!   



:lol:



Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! CHAPTER 5 Acchan's Secret (Atsumina)
Post by: Chikane Himemiya on September 21, 2012, 02:06:28 PM
Chapter 6: Under the rain

                    It was a supposed happy day for Takamina but it isn’t. Since the day the little girl discovered that Acchan don’t know how to cook and only eats bread for lunch she always cook delicious food for the other girl and today was not an exception. She doesn’t know why she is doing all of these she just knew that she really cared for the other girl, maybe because they are friends? She can’t tell anymore and she doesn’t care as long as she makes the other girl happy. But something is bugging her right now why does she is always irritated and mad whenever Yuu is with Acchan? Why does she always want to pull Acchan away from the boy and keep it to herself? She knew it isn’t right so whenever Acchan is with Yuu she always pretend to be happy for her friend and let the two had their happy moments together even if she doesn’t feel good about it.

DING DONG DING…….

   The bell rang signaling for the end of the classes for today Takamina is very happy because she and Acchan will have a group activity after class in one of their group mate’s house. Everything’s seem so perfect for Takamina but unfortunately Yuu also belong to their group, and they will have their group activity in his house. Takamina, Acchan and Yuu are walking towards Yuu’s house where they will have their group activity Takamina didn’t want to do their group activity in Yuu’s house but she had no choice. Her house is far from the school and so do Acchan, the nearest and most convenient house is Yuu’s, and it is like the fate is playing on them, there group has originally four members but their supposed group mate is sick and cannot join their group activity. A very awkward scene Takamina, Acchan, and Yuu are walking and because the sidewalk can only contain two people at a time and not three Acchan chose to walk beside Takamina and in front of them Yuu ,walking alone at the same time leading the way. Even though Acchan chose to walk beside Takamina her focus is still on Yuu not because Acchan wanted to, but because Yuu keep teasing, joking and making the other girl laugh in their whole trip. Takamina knew that she could also make the other girl happy even more what Yuu could do, but right know she can’t do that she will look like a rival that also wanted the attention of the other girl. She just laugh at some of Yuu’s jokes to make it look like she is also enjoying herself but she isn’t. It pains her a lot that whenever she see Acchan’s smiles and laughs cause by the bubbliness of the short boy, she is in pain not because Acchan is happy, but because her happiness is caused by the boy and she can’t show Acchan that she can also make her happy even more happiness that the boy could make in short she can’t fight properly in this unfair love rivalry. If she is just a boy she can also confess to Acchan just like what Yuu did, she can also court Acchan freely without worrying that the other girl will hate her or what will other people say about her.  IF ONLY..
 
Here we are!!!
Takamina’s thoughts was interrupted by Yuu’s words, she was spacing out that she didn’t notice that they already arrived at their destination.

Yuu’s house is big, of course the Oshima family is rich but Takamina isn’t impressed, of course no family in Japan is richer than them except of course for their family’s business partners that has been with her dad since he was just an ordinary and starting businessman.
Takamina stared at Acchan to see if the girl is impressed   in the boy’s house or in his riches but she isn’t in fact she was looking the house as if she is criticizing it. Takamina wondered why, but she shrugged of the idea thinking that the other girl might have been here before anyways Yuu and Acchan have been class mates since junior high. As soon as they entered the house they went to the study room then they started to do their project. Takamina noticed that Acchan seem to be anxious and can’t focus properly, later on the midget find out the reason and excuse herself to Yuu and Acchan and said that she will just buy something. Takamina went to the nearest convenience store and bought many food snacks. Acchan really had a big appetite, Takamina thought. As soon as she finished buying she smiled to herself and thinks of what will be the other girl’s reaction. As soon as Acchan saw Takamina opened the door in the study room and have her favorite food and snacks in the midget’s hands her eyes sparkled and she smiled so wide that it almost pierced her face in two because of delight.
Takamina: I bought food for everyone; I felt there is someone hungry here
(She looked at Acchan and smiled)

Acchan’s POV
How did she find out that I’m hungry? How did she even know my favorite snacks? I don’t remember telling her those kind of things.. But the foods she bought really look delicious I can even feel that I am drooling…aaaaahhhhhh.. Takamina how thoughtful you are. Then Acchan felt that she is blushing lightly.

Takamina’s POV
Looks like I am right, she is hungry that’s why she looks like a tired worker and always have mistakes in what she do. Really! She had a big appetite!! She ate like a man!! But her body is still slim and sexy, that makes her even more beautiful :D. But gosh I almost spend all my allowance for this month just for buying her the food she wants…Arghhh.. Dad will not give me money till next month..Looks like I’m going to get hungry..:’(. Anyways just her smile makes me think that it’s all worth it..:D

Takamina watched as Acchan devour all the snacks she bought, Takamina and Yuu also ate but only a little they let Acchan eat most of the food. When they finished eating they continued they school work then after they finished it Acchan and Takamina decided to go home already and bid Yuu a goodbye. While they are walking home unexpectedly it rain very hard, that made the two girls run to the nearest waiting shed and stand there, but it was already late they are already very wet. There are no other people in the shed except the two of them. The street also does not have any people on it except for the two girls.  Acchan is already shivering because it is too cold plus the strong winds that passed through them making Acchan colder. Takamina observed the other girl and it made her worry she doesn’t want the other girl to get sick so she get her jacket inside her bag that was not wet because her bag is waterproof and put it to Acchan. Acchan was shocked by the actions of the other and blushed like crazy even redder than a tomato.

Acchan: No Takamina you can use its ok..
Takamina: No, you are cold you’re even shivering like crazy just keep wearing that.
Acchan: but…but..
Takamina: no buts.. Besides I’m used to cold temperatures..
Acchan: ok, thanks. (She is not looking at Takamina because she is still blushing like crazy.)
Takamina: Do you have an umbrella?
Acchan: no...I’m sorry
Takamina: I had one but the rain and winds are too hard that even the strongest umbrella cannot withstand it we must wait until the rain became mild.
Acchan: ok…


It continued to rain hard and Takamina can still see Acchan shivering, the truth is Takamina is also very cold and she is just used to cold temperatures she just said it to make Acchan accept her offer, but she is a good actress and the other girl cannot even notice that she is cold, and the other girl also refrain from looking at her and she don’t know why.   She also can’t figure out why is she making all this sacrifices for the other girl she knew that she is a very selfish person and it is not in her vocabulary to help others but this girl is an ……exception….she thought.

Because the other girl is still cold Takamina went behind Acchan and hug her from beyond...
Acchan: W-w-what are you doing...
Takamina: Shhh.. You’re still cold so I’m hugging you to keep you warmer…
Acchan: thhhhhhanks…

(She is blushing madly even redder than before if it is possible and her heart is beating faster like she is having a heart attack)
Takamina on the other hand is also blushing like crazy and also having a very fast heartbeat like the other girl. Only a few minute passed and Acchan’s shivering stopped, so Takamina is relieved. They stayed on that position for half an hour until the rain get mild. Takamina released her hug on Acchan and Acchan seemed to be disappointed wishing her moment with other girl stayed forever.
Takamina: The rain is just mild now we can go home beside it late already.
Acchan: ok, but our houses are not near each other how can we share the same umbrella?
Takamina: I know that so just get my umbrella and go home..
Acchan: but it is still raining how about you?
Takamina: its okay, besides between the two of us your house is farther you’ll need the umbrella more…
Acchan: thank you Takamina!!  For everything and, sorry.
Takamina: its okay:D so shall we go home?
Acchan: yes!! Good bye Takamina and Take care :D
Takamina: goodbye Acchan and take care!!

The truth is Takamina really wanted to walk the other girl home. But she already invited the girl several times before and she was always rejected, the other girl hated to disturb and be a burden  to other people, considering the situation that it is getting late surely Acchan will refuse saying that Takamina will get home late.
After they bid goodbye to each other Takamina ran under the rain while Acchan walk fast using Takamina’s umbrella.
 When Acchan was home she took shower immediately and dried her things, then while drying she saw Takamina’s jacket and umbrella, she can’t help but smile thinking of the other girl’s thoughtfulness and caring for her, and then she hold her chest as she remembers how her heart beat very fast when Takamina put the jacket in her and when she hug her from behind.

 I wonder why my heart beat that fast?

TBC
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! Sept. 21 CHAPTER 6 Under The Rain (Atsumina)
Post by: TakaminaBG on September 21, 2012, 02:53:35 PM
This is a really interesting story!! But they still haven't realized that they are in love with each other....
I want to know what happens next!!
UPDATE SOON!!
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! Sept. 21 CHAPTER 6 Under The Rain (Atsumina)
Post by: kahem on September 22, 2012, 01:09:27 AM
Ow~ Takamina is a true gentleman ^^
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! Sept. 21 CHAPTER 6 Under The Rain (Atsumina)
Post by: Haruko on September 22, 2012, 04:07:06 AM
aww takaboy you are a gentleman :D...
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! Sept. 21 CHAPTER 6 Under The Rain (Atsumina)
Post by: sopiyah on October 03, 2012, 10:17:13 AM
aahhh so romantic moment atsumina.... :D :D :D
please update soon.... 

thank you for your fanfic...... :heart: :heart: :heart:
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! Sept. 21 CHAPTER 6 Under The Rain (Atsumina)
Post by: Chikane Himemiya on October 04, 2012, 03:17:52 PM
Guys immmmmm VERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRYYYYYYYYYYYY
SSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRYYYYYYYYYYY    :cry: :cry:
immmm very busy with my studies especially for my upcoming tests next week but I promise tommorow I will update :D
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! Sept. 21 CHAPTER 7 The Project (Atsumina)
Post by: Chikane Himemiya on October 06, 2012, 01:08:10 PM
Chapter 7: The Project

Achuuuuuuuuuuuuuu…

Acchan is now going to school but since yesterday after she went home when she and Takamina get wet under the rain she didn’t stop sneezing because she got cold, fortunately she didn’t get fever maybe because of Takamina’s jacket and umbrella, so she can still go to school.

On the other hand Takamina is already on the room seating but she really feels dizzy and her head really hurts a lot it’s like she is going to have a fever, Rena noticed the pain her friend is going through approached her Takamina.

Rena: Takamina are you okay?
Takamina: I’m okay I’m just a little dizzy
Rena put her hand to Takamina’s forehead
Rena: you’re slightly hot it’s like you have mild fever.
Takamina: I’m okay, don’t mind me.
Rena: What happened? You’re not a sickly person you don’t get sick unless you subjected to extreme situations.
Takamina: I just got wet in the rain yesterday.
Rena: how did-

Rena was stopped by the sound the door opening and it shows Acchan whose wiping her nose...

A huge smile suddenly crept on Takamina’s face and the pain she feels seemed to fade then she shouted.

Takamina: Good morning Acchan!!
Acchan stopped in front of Takamina’s seat then
Acchan: (as soon as she saw Takamina she smiled widely) Good morning Takamina!!
Then Acchan seated on her seat

Rena watched the whole scene silently then when she’s going to continue her conversation with the midget their history teacher arrived.

Teacher: Good morning class!! Before we go on our discussion I would just like to remind you of your project the history album of Japan I hoped you already finished it because its deadline is tomorrow.

Other students were not surprised because they didn’t forgot and finished it their project already just like Takamina who just smiled slightly on her seat and some were still confident because they already started it and they only need to continue or polish it, but most of the students were worried because they totally forgot it and one of them is our dear Atsuko who became very worried and anxious because she didn’t even know how to start her project.

Takamina was watching Acchan and she already knew that the other girl forgot to do her school responsibilities again.

RINNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGGG
The school bell rang signaling for lunch Takamina and her friends including Acchan will eat all together at the rooftop and as usual Takamina brought Acchan again a delicious lunch. As they eat Takamina decided to open a conversation.

Takamina: guys! Regarding our project in History how was it? I hope all of us did it right?
Mayu: Yes! Of course Yuki and I finished it the day our teacher announced it!!!
Mayu looked at Yuki beside her and Yuki blush a little and mouthed a Thank You at Mayu.
Haruna: Yes I already finished it yesterday.
Rena: shocks!! I forgot that project I didn’t even know how to start it!!
Acchan: Me too. I forgot to do it, I also didn’t know how to start..
Acchan said sadly
Takamina put her hands around Acchan’s shoulder beside her then said.
Takamina: Don’t worry Acchan! Rena! You can go my house later and I will help you with your projects!!
(Mission Success!!! She thought)
(Acchan is blushing madly and her heart is beating fast again!! But she felt that Takamina is a little hot but shrugged it off thinking it might just be her because she can feel her own body temperature rising)
Rena: Really midget!!! Thank you!!!! You really are a model student!!! And good friend!!!
Takamina: so after class Rena?  Acchan?
Rena: yes!!
Acchan is still stunned because of Takamina putting her hands on her shoulders
Takamina: Acchan???
Acchan: ahhhh ahaha…YES OF COURSE!!Thank you Takamina!
Takamina: you’re welcome!!:D
 
The lunch ended and the class resumed, but Takamina observed that Acchan is sneezing non-stop since this morning so again she started to worry for the welfare of the other girl so after class she talk to Acchan.

Takamina: Are you feeling well Acchan?
Acchan: Yes.. just a little cold
Takamina: no, you’re not you didn’t stop sneezing since this morning!!! I think you should go home and get rest.
Acchan: I can’t how about the project??? I can’t rest without doing it and I can’t do it alone at home!!!
Takamina: It’s alright; I’ll do it for you!!!
Acchan: no, you can’t that’s too much already!!! You already did many things for me!!!>_<
Takamina: It’s okay really besides don’t you think you can repay me better when you get well? Than to force yourself to do it you may get worse.
Acchan watched Takamina’s sincere eyes and she can’t help but accept the other girl’s offer, because she can’t reject those pure eyes that are really pure and caring for her.
Acchan: Okay!! But I will repay you for sure!!
Takamina:  (smiled triumphantly) that’s your choice, go home straight and take care :D



Im sorry it seem that I forgot to post this chapter so I am posting it to remove the frustrations that may happen Im sorry again for inconvenience.

Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! Oct. 6 Chapter 7: Takamina's love and Rena's Concern
Post by: Chikane Himemiya on October 06, 2012, 01:22:13 PM
IM SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRYYYYYYY!!
I know that this chapter is boring but I wrote it to emphasize how deep Takamina love Acchan that even she don't feel well she still did Acchan's project. I also wanted to emphasize Rena x Takamina's friendship I just gave a hint, on their friendship but I will assure you it is a nice one.
I hope you don't find the story very slow...I just wanted to make many TAKAMINAXXXXACHAAN moments
Our story is still in its very beginning I hope you dont get bored but I assure you it will be worth reading for :D
I need you comments plssssssssssssssssss

NEED MORE COMMENTS!!!

So I can improve my work plsssssssssssssssss...
you can also guess what happened in the past between Takamina, Rena and Acchan.
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! Oct. 6 Chapter 7: Takamina's love and Rena's Concern
Post by: TakaminaBG on October 06, 2012, 02:00:12 PM
Rena is a nice friend.
Takamina really loves Acchan.... Ahhhh, so cute!!!
Please Update SOON!!
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! Oct. 6 Chapter 7: Takamina's love and Rena's Concern
Post by: nao707 on October 06, 2012, 02:12:34 PM
No its not boring but I want more Chikane-Himemiya-san~~~!!  :farofflook:

I want to know more about Takamina and Rena. Maybe you can make Acchan jealous because of their friendship?  :hehehe:

please update soon~ :thumbsup
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! Oct. 6 Chapter 7: Takamina's love and Rena's Concern
Post by: hidden_player on October 06, 2012, 02:16:59 PM
It's not boring at all :)


Rena is really a good friend and after each chapter, I love Takamina more and more :heart:

Can't wait for the next chapter :wub:
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! Oct. 6 Chapter 7: Takamina's love and Rena's Concern
Post by: kahem on October 06, 2012, 11:55:16 PM
OMG! Takamina! Don't overdoing!
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! Oct. 6 Chapter 7: Takamina's love and Rena's Concern
Post by: Haruko on October 07, 2012, 04:27:00 AM
aww poor minami.. i love this rena X minami .. meybe a few jealousy from acchan :D...
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! Oct. 6 Chapter 7: Takamina's love and Rena's Concern
Post by: Megumi on October 07, 2012, 03:00:10 PM
iT'S GREAT!

And here we see Rena-chan is a caring person and all.

Can't wait for next update!
:kneelbow:
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! Oct. 6 Chapter 7: Takamina's love and Rena's Concern
Post by: Chikane Himemiya on October 29, 2012, 11:36:03 AM
Chapter 7: Takamina's love and Rena's Concern


Takamina and Rena are now walking together they will go to Takamina’s house to make their project in History. Takamina will help Rena do her project at the same time she will do Acchan’s project because she knew that the other girl is not feeling well. Takamina is now smiling while they are walking because the thought of she can do something to make Acchan happy really made her glad. She thought that she will not have a chance to make her happy because Yuu is always beside Acchan and really determined to make Acchan fall for him. Every morning Yuu would bring snacks for Acchan, since they went to the boy’s house and he discovered that Acchan really love eating. He also noted that Acchan love sweet foods so Yuu didn’t fail to give something sweet to the girl every day. He also don’t fail to find a way to talk to the princess like girl, whenever one of Acchan’s seatmate (of course including Takamina) leave their seat even for a second, he will quickly grab the opportunity and seat beside the girl ( without asking permission ). Of course whenever Yuu take Takamina’s seat without permission Takamina will just give Yuu a fake assuring smile then she will say: I will let you two love birds have your private time, sometimes Acchan will force Yuu to leave Takamina’s seat but sometimes Takamina is like a ghost because neither Yuu nor Acchan notices her, because they are really enjoying talking to each other. He will also do some of Acchan’s homework’s so that Acchan will not have to worry about them. Whatever Yuu do for her Acchan will always reject it at first but will still accept it in the end and she doesn’t forget to give her gratitude to the boy. Takamina could also see that the princess like girl is really enjoying the attention the boy is giving to her; she always smiles whenever she is with the boy and sometimes she will tell stories about the bubbliness of the boy, she really enjoys being with boy etc.,  with Takamina. Of course Takamina will smile then tell Acchan that she is happy for her, she hope that the other girl will always be happy but deep inside she is always hurt whenever Acchan tell stories about Yuu because she realizes that slowly Acchan is falling for Yuu and she can do nothing to prevent it. To prevent him from making the most important for Takamina, fall for him.

Rena is watching her midget in her deep thoughts and constantly changes her facial expressions while they are walking. Then Takamina suddenly stopped then hold her temples massaging it, she suddenly felt dizzy first because she is thinking too much, second she really doesn’t feel well (because of the rain incident with Acchan). Rena is worried at her midget friend. So she decided to talk to her.

Rena:       Takamina are you okay? (Then put her hand above Takamina’s forehead)
Takamina:    yes, just feeling a little dizzy (still massaging her temples)
Rena:       you still have a mild fever!!
Takamina:    don’t worry it will fade away it’s just a slight fever.
Rena:       No it isn’t I think you need to rest I can do my project alone.
Takamina:    No!! I promise to help you so I will!!
Rena:       You promised to me or to ACCHAN? You will do her project right?
Takamina:   (she stopped massaging her temples then look at Rena questionally)
Yes, then what about it, she doesn’t feel well so I like to help her. Isn’t that what a friend do? To help?
              Rena:      You also don’t feel well!!! And helping a FRIEND has its limits.
Takamina:   I’m okay!! And what do you mean by stressing the word friend?
Rena:   I knew for a long time already Takamina. Forgive me for saying this but you are self centered, selfish, studious, harsh, boastful, and most of all you are greedy, you never give anyone anything except it you will have something in return or you can that person can help you in the future. But hoe you treat Acchan it is very different you are gentle, kind, understanding, caring, and generous and most of all you really gives her whatever she needed without fail, everyday. You even give your answer to her freely during exams without hesitation, and teach her whenever she doesn’t understand the lessons.
Takamina:   People change.
Rena:   No you are only that kind to her.
Takamina:   This conversation will lead to nothing it’s getting late let’s go to our home fast

You are always escapes whenever we talk about your feeling with Acchan tskk. Rena thought.

Then Takamina walked very fast so that Rena will not have time to ask her about Acchan. Then Rena did her best to walk as fast as the other girl. This girl is a midget but she sure is fast walker even she have short legs. Rena thought.

Really what do I feel for her?

They arrived at Takamina’s house. As Rena expected it is really small and simple. Of course Takamina came from a poor family, Rena thought. They head straight at Takamina’s room to do their projects (for Takamina’s case Acchan’s project). As Rena looked at Takamina’s room it is clean and simple, but too simple for a girl. Rena could not see anything girly at Takamina’s room she can see few mangas, anime DVD’s, some anime memorabilias, like keychains, bracelets, few posters there are also some rare anime items like replicas of Edward’s alchemist’s badge in Full Metal Alchemist, Luffy’s strawhat, in One Piece, Ezra’s lightning empress armor in Fairytail, but other than that some pleasure she can only see books ballpens, documentary DVD’s. She sighed Takamina sure is studious she thought, no wonder she finished earlier our very hard project in History.


Then they started doing their projects, it is really hard so Takamina really help Rena a lot even though she is already having a hard time doing Acchan’s project. Also her head really hurts and she feels very cold that her hands are already trembling, the weather is not cold it’s just Takamina already had a high fever but she doesn’t want to show it to Rena because surely she will ask her again why she got fever, and she can’t tell her it is because of Acchan, because she will ask her again what she feels for the other girl.

After many hours of doing the very hard projects, now they are finished. Rena’s work is okay simple but beautiful, but Acchan’s project made by Takamina is really beautiful and a work of Art. Rena is shocked in Takamina’s work then sighed, what do I expect from a geek?

It is already 11pm and they are already cleaning and arranging the things and garbage they used in doing the project. They did their projects for 6 straight hours!!! It is really a tough one. While cleaning to Rena’s surprise Takamina suddenly had her knees on the floor. She fell but not totally because she managed to hold one of the tables foot so that she will not totally fall and will just have to kneel. Forcing herself to be tough as always Rena thought then she went to Takamina.

Rena:      What happened? Are you okay?

But as Rena placed her hands to the midget’s body she suddenly removed it because it is too hot.

Rena:    Whoa!!! You are burning in fever why you didn’t told me earlier that you do not feel well. I should have done my project alone!!
Takamina:   I am just dizzy (Takamina said weakly)
Rena:      No, you’re burning in fever!! You should go to the hospital.
Takamina:      NO!!!(Takamina shouted quickly and hold Rena’s wrists) please … my guardian will be worried I heal quickly I just need to rest please do not let them know..ple..a…se

Then Takamina fainted I Rena’s arms.

Rena: Takamina!!! Arghhhhhhhhh what will I do???!!!

Then Rena took her phone and dialed some of her former bodyguards. On a blink of an eye they arrived at
Takamina’s house quietly just like what Rena ordered them. Then they carried Takamina on her bed and gave Rena some food and medicine for Takamina. Then Rena ordered them to leave.

Rena took care of Takamina the whole night. And just like Takamina said she is a fast healer her fever
Went away after just a few hours but she still didn’t open her eyes. She must be really tired Rena thought.
Rena did not sleep the whole night taking care of Takamina.

Morning came. Takamina awakened only to find out that Rena, at her side using her arms as a pillow. She took care of me the whole night, Takamina thought. She get up slowly so that she will not wake up the other girl. Then she carried Rena in a bridal way and put her on the on the other room’s bed (the guest room). Then she bowed on the girl and whispered something on her ear. Thank you. Then she kissed the girl’s forehead. Rena is really a caring person she thought that’s why she became her friend. I just hope that bastard stop hurting her!

Takamina POV
Rena is really a caring friend Takamina thought. In the end she still took care of me for the whole night. Rena is a quiet, serious, intelligent girl. That how Takamina could describe her, but when she is with her friends or with the ones that are close to her she is a noisy, funny, kind and caring. And that’s what Takamina like to her friend. Rena and Jurina had saved her from a past broken friendship (the author will write a different chapter for the friend history of Takamina, Rena and Jurina), and she is very thankful in them for it. Now she must go to school and she knew sooner or later she will tell Rena what she feels for the princess like girl.


Then she gets up ready herself and get Rena ant Acchan’s projects. I think you can’t go to school now Rena chan. Then she went to school.


Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! Oct. 6 Chapter 7: Takamina's love and Rena's Concern
Post by: hazwani on March 19, 2013, 03:35:28 AM
please continue this story  :)
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! Oct. 6 Chapter 7: Takamina's love and Rena's Concern
Post by: cisda83 on March 19, 2013, 05:12:48 AM
Ah... I agreed with Rena...

Takamina is avoiding and not wanting to recognise her feeling....

Coz' she was scared she was too late to stop Atsuko's from falling for Yuu...

She preferred living in ignorance so she doesn't get hurt...

I can't wait to see the next

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! Oct. 6 Chapter 7: Takamina's love and Rena's Concern
Post by: Archer1992 on April 16, 2013, 06:58:25 PM
Update soon please

its a good story

i love atsumina!!!
Title: Re: A Grateful Deal UPDATE! Oct. 6 Chapter 7: Takamina's love and Rena's Concern
Post by: Saint0angel on November 26, 2015, 09:46:51 AM
Hi author, I like your story, I love Atsumina, so please continues writing 😄