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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 15)
« Reply #140 on: August 17, 2013, 04:26:16 AM »
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE SAFE YUKIRIN

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Black Chocolate (Chapter 16) Final Chapter
« Reply #141 on: August 19, 2013, 03:39:01 AM »
The final chapter, guys! I hope you enjoyed it, and please look forward to my future works.


Final Chapter-Black Heart

After Yuki was strangled by Rena and deemed unconscious, Jurina and Mayu immediately rushed to the hospital.

She's currently in the emergency room, and the two girls are waiting for her.

Mayu had been crying nonstop since Yuki stopped breathing and prayed endlessly for her friend...

Her girlfriend, to be safe.

After an hour of waiting, Mayu had calmed down, but was still sulking.

Jurina came over and tried to talk.

"Mayu..."

"..."

"Don't worry. I promise, everything will be fine."

"...."

"Yuki's strong. The doctors will save her."

"....."

As she backed away, Sae, Aki, Rie, and Asuka came running in.

"Mayuyu!"

"...Guys? What are you...?"

"Jurina called us and told us about Rena. I made sure the student council will take care of her."

"How's Yukirin?"

"We're still waiting."

Aki looked over her Jurina's shoulder and saw Mayu crawled up on the couch.

"Mayuyu? Are you alright?"

"...."

"It's really hard for her."

Sae smiled and came closer.

"Don't worry, Mayuyu. I believe in Yukirin. She'll come out of those doors as good as new, I'm sure of it!"

"....." Mayu bit her lip, trying to contain her tears.

"Mayu..."

Finally, the doctor came through the doors with the most unreadable expression on his face.

"Are you Kashiwagi-san's friends?"

"Y-yes."

"How is she? How's Yukirin?"

"I'm... so sorry... Kashiwagi-san's heart has stopped completely, she wasn't breathing and she's already far from waking up."

Everyone's hearts shattered at his words. Mayu was still lying on the couch, but heard every word.

"W-what?"

"I'm afraid... there's nothing we can do. Kashiwagi-san is... dead."

"....No... No way...."

"Oh my gosh..."

"I'm so sorry."

He left everyone alone, still stunned by his words.

Jurina looked back and saw Mayu.

"Mayu..."

She slowly got up and walked towards her.

She lost balanced and fell into her embrace, crying her heart out.

Sae was crying too, and everyone was too shocked to say anything else.

Mayu can't help but feel her own heart break, as it every last bit of her world had been sucked into a black hole.

She felt like she wanted to die and give her entire life to Yuki, all so she could live.

She reached into her pocket and pulled out the badge.

It had shattered into pieces and was a dirty, rusted black rubble.

Nothing but useless trash.

Gone. Just like Yuki.

"I'm sorry, Yuki... I couldn't grant your wish... I failed you."


After everyone else left, Mayu was alone in Yuki's room, staring at her body covered up by the blanket.

She held her cold, limp hand and cried over the bed.

"Yuki..."

She slowly took off the blanket and saw her pale, lifeless face.

She touched her soft lips, now turned cold and no longer their lushious pink.

"I'm sorry..."

Mayu heard the door open and Jurina came in.

"Jurina." She instantly ran up and grabbed her shoulders. "Please, Jurina. You need to save Yuki! Use your clow cards!"

"Mayu, I can't."

"Please, you have to! You must have ONE card! I need her! You're already a full witch, so only YOU can do it!"

"No, I mean I can't. Even if I had a card to save her, it's forbidden. The injury will be passed onto me, and I'll die in Yuki's place."

"Jurina, I beg you! You need to help me!!! PLEASE!!!!"

Jurina gripped her fists and looked down.

"JURINA!!!!"

"...Fine. I'll try..."

She walked passed her and picked up Yuki's body.

"Let's go."


The two girls flew back to Mayu's candy shop and entered Mayu's room.

"Hurry, Jurina."

"OK, but I must warn you. I only have until midnight. If it works, I'll die. If it doesn't you can never become a witch."

Mayu looked at her clock.

"It's 11:50. Please, save her!"

"You don't care what happens to me?"

"Jurina, you don't understand. Yuki... She's my everything. I need her so much!"

"...Very well."

She pulled out a card and held it above Yuki.



"Windy, blow the wind of life into Yuki!"

Strong winds wrapped around Yuki and lifted her into the air.

A gust of wind blew into Yuki's mouth and she instantly dropped.

Jurina was in pain from the magic she used and caught some of her breath.

She knelt down to feel for Yuki's breath.

"...Nothing."

"Please, Yuki. Stay with us."

"Let's try this!"



"Light, go into Yuki and warm her heart!"

Millions of ribbons of light, wrapped around Yuki and picked her up.

They all met in the middle and went through her skin.

Jurina pursed her lips, trying to hold on.

She finally let go of Yuki, and dropped down on one knee.

"Jurina!"

Mayu ran over and held her close.

Jurina crawled over and felt Yuki's chest.

"..Damnit. Nothing."

"Please, we don't have much time! It's almost midnight."

Jurina gritted her teeth and stood up.

She held up a card and it started letting out sparks of lightning, scaring Mayu.



"Wait! Not that!"

"Thunder, shock Yuki back to life!"

The blue lightning hit every corner of the room and shocked Yuki's body hard.

She looked like a human plasma ball, and her body was shocked to the core.

"Jurina, stop!!!"

Jurina let go of the card and everything calmed down.

Jurina was coughing and had trouble breathing.

"..Five... minutes... Five DAMN minutes... I can still save her..."

"Jurina, please."

"..Even if it's just for a little bit... I can bring her back."

Jurina slowly raised up. She looked up at Mayu's skylight on the roof.

The full moon was almost in the middle of the sky, about to light up the whole room.

"Just a little more..." she whispered pulling out her final card.

Her last hope.



"Return, bring Yuki's soul back from the dead!"

She held it above Yuki and a few blue light tentacles buried into Yuki's chest.

The color was coming back to her face and her lips were they're beautiful pink shade again.

She slowly opened her eyes and weakly turned to face Mayu.

"..M-Ma...yu..."

"Yuki!!!"

She hugged Yuki tight, happy she had one last moment with Yuki.

"I only have a few minutes. You better hurry, Mayu."

Mayu broke the hug and held Yuki's hand.

"Yuki, I'm so sorry. I failed to complete my test, and you..."

"I-it's okay... I'm n-not m-mad..."

"But, Yuki...."

Yuki took her other hand and held Mayu's.

She slowly tried to raise herself up, but she was in pain and couldn't move.

"Yuki. Don't try to do anything. You're still..."

"...I know I... won't last... M-Mayu..."

Mayu shook her head and laid against Yuki's shoulder, crying.

"..Mayu... D-don't c-cry, Mayu..."

"Of course I'm gonna cry! Yuki, you're...! You..."

"I know... I'm sad, too... But, Mayu..." She reached her hand up to touch Mayu's cheek.

"Eh?" She felt her wipe off her tears and saw her smile. "Y-Yuki... W-why are you.. smiling?"

"Mayu... I didn't need that magic... Even while I saw dark, you saw light... you helped me... With or without it all..."

"Yuki..."

The clock was slowly ticking. It's almost midnight.

"Mayu! I can't hold on much longer!" Jurina screamed.

"No! Yuki, please, you need to hang on!!"

"..M-Mayu... I don't care what happens... I just want you to know... I'm happy..."

"You are?"

"...Yes..."

Jurina finally dropped the card and fell to the ground, panting.

Tears fell from the corner of Yuki's eyes.

"...Th-thank.. y..."

She slowly closed her eyes again, and fell into what would become an eternal sleep.

Mayu couldn't hold her tears anymore and cried as loud as she could into Yuki's chest.

Without her knowing, the black crystal badge fell out of her pocket and landed on the ground.

There was no glow left in it.

Yuki was gone. Forever.

And there was nothing Mayu or Jurina could do about it.

"Yuki.... How... how can you be happy? We can't be together now! I NEED YOU!!!!!"

She punched the ground and touched Yuki's soft cheek.

She slowly closed her eyes and came closer.

"...I love you..."

A single tear fell from Yuki's cheek and fell onto one of the pieces of the shattered badge.

A golden light formed around it and every piece left.

It slowly rose from the ground and put itself back together, shining brighter than ever.

The golden light circled the entire room and was absorbed into Mayu's body.

Mayu's clothes were transformed into new ones.

They were white with gold lining, like Jurina, but was more girly and had light blue and pink bows.

The star began a shining medallion at the center of Mayu's chest.

Jurina looked up and was stunned at the flashy Mayu.

"Mayu... You did it."

"Eh?"

"You passed the final test! You're a full witch!!!"

Some of the light formed an orb and floated into Mayu's hands.

"What is this?"

"You can have one rule-free wish. Hurry! You can save Yuki!"

Mayu took the orb of light and squeezed it together.

She closed her eyes and whispered into her hands.

"I wish Yuki was alive."

The light burst inside her hands and formed a new spell.

In Mayu's hands, there was a cup of a delicious looking liquid.

Mayu came closer and smelled it. Mayu's eyes widened at the familiar scent.

"Hot chocolate..."

She drank some of the chocolate and kissed Yuki's lips, transferring the liquid into her.

Mayu hoped and prayed as she kissed her more.

She waited for something, until...

*Gulp*

Yuki's hand regained its energy and slowly rose up and grabbed Mayu's shoulder.

She rose herself closer to deepen the kiss, clutching on Mayu's clothes.

She drank the chocolate bit by bit, the sweet taste lingering in their mouths.

They finally broke the kiss and Yuki woke up from her long sleep.

She smiled and hugged Mayu tight. Mayu was crying, happy to have her Yuki come back.

"Yuki... Thank goodness..."

"Mayu, thank you."

Mayu couldn't let go. She didn't want to let go.

"Mayu, please don't cry. I'm fine now. Please, don't be crying."

"But, Yuki... I love you."

She popped back up and kissed Yuki again.

The two girls kissed passionately on the couch, twisting and tasting each other's chocolate painted tongues.

"...Mayu... I-I... l-love you, too... Ahh...."

Jurina looked away a bit.

"Oop. Better leave them alone." she thought with a sly look.


The next morning, Yuki woke up and found herself in Mayu's bed.

She saw the girl laying next to her, still asleep, and realized...

They were both naked.

Yuki popped up, remembering everything that happened last night.

It was already 11:00 AM, and everything still feels like a dream.

She felt someone tug on her arm and when she turned her head, she saw her girlfriend looking up at her, smiling.

"I knew you were awake," she whispered.

Yuki giggled and laid down again to hug her.

"Are you still happy?"

"Of course, Mayu. I have you, don't I?"

The two girls got closer and kissed again.

The sun shining in the room. The light of a new day and a new beginning.

Everything was now perfect.

"I wouldn't have it any other way," Yuki said out loud before kissing her again.


The End

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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 16) Final Chapter
« Reply #142 on: August 19, 2013, 03:50:47 AM »
i was like nooooo yuki why you die!!!!!! :cry: :cry:
and i didnt want jurina to die :shocked :(
yay mayuki live happily ever after :deco:
thanx for the final update :cow: :bow:
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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 16) Final Chapter
« Reply #143 on: August 19, 2013, 04:01:12 AM »
doki doki doki....

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Re: Black Chocolate (Complete)
« Reply #144 on: August 19, 2013, 09:43:15 AM »
Nice story, but what happened with Rena?
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Re: Black Chocolate (Complete)
« Reply #145 on: August 19, 2013, 10:44:10 AM »
Mayu did her job and saved Yuki.  Love conquerors all
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Re: Black Chocolate (Complete)
« Reply #146 on: August 19, 2013, 03:40:52 PM »
Thanks godness, Yuki's alive :mon exhaust:
At first when I read the part that the doctor said Yuki was die, I was :OMG: :fainted: :on speedy:
Then knowing that Jurina could save her but in exchange, she'd die, I was :mon headbang: :err: :stoned:
But thanks to the power of love, Yuki's alive :wahaha:
And Mayu official became a witch :on woohoo:
Happy ending :mon squee:
Hope to see another Mayuki fic of yours :hee:

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Re: Black Chocolate (Complete)
« Reply #147 on: August 19, 2013, 06:17:00 PM »
Interesting ending there...

Somehow.. The twist about Jurina needed to die for Yuki is wrong somewhat...

I mean why did Jurina need to sacrifice herself for Yuki.

Not her business... Sure that Yuki is Mayu's everything more important than anything else...

But not the case for Jurina... Yuki is not jurina's whatsoever...

However, great ending... Thank you

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Re: Black Chocolate (Complete)
« Reply #148 on: August 21, 2013, 03:17:00 PM »
Nice story, but what happened with Rena?
Somehow, I asked this to myself too LOL where did Rena go?  :nervous
I so want MaYuki aftermath  :ptam-wub:

a very HOT... I mean heart-warming ending there  :ptam-psst:
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Re: Black Chocolate (Complete) *New poll added*
« Reply #149 on: August 31, 2013, 08:10:46 AM »
i choose How is Mayu and Yuki doing?


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Black Chocolate Afterstory (Mayuki OS)
« Reply #150 on: September 07, 2013, 02:17:58 AM »
Black Chocolate: Afterstory (Mayuki Epilogue OS)


It's been a month since Mayu and Yuki have become a couple and they lived happily ever after.

But, recently, Yuki's become worried about Mayu.

Ever since she became a full witch, she's been acting a bit different. Not her normal "different."

She's gotten more quiet than normal, and she's been all childish and clingy to her.

Calling her Mama and kissing her WAY more than usual.

"I wonder why..." she kept thinking to herself.


"Mama-rin!"

Mayu giggled as she ran towards her, clinging onto her arm.

"Mama-rin, I found a really cute maid café. Can we go eat there?"

"A maid café? I didn't know you liked those."

"Yeah! I've always wanted to go to one!" Mayu continued snuggling against her shoulder like a cute puppy. "Can we, Mama-rin?"

Yuki giggled and petted her head.

"Sure. Let's go."

Mayu grabbed her hand and dragged her by her heels.

"I'll show you the way!"


"Sorry for the wait. Here's your omelet rice."

The cute maid with cat ears laid down a plate with a beautifully cooked omelet with a ketchup bunny drawn on it.

Yuki noticed the written message on the plate.

"Dear Mayu-sama and Yuki-sama, I really like you! :heart:"

Yuki knew it was part of business for the waitresses to ask nice, but it's the first time she got this much good service.

"Itadakima~su~!"

Mayu was scarfing down her food, her cheeks rosy red from the taste of the food.

Yuki was eating, but slowly...

She was still worried.

Why is Mayu acting like this? Sure, it seems normal, but to Yuki, there's something off.

Mayu looked up at her girlfriend and tapped her shoulder.

"Hey, what's wrong? You seem down."

"Mayu..."

Mayu tilted her head, swallowing her food.

"Is there a reason you're acting like this?"

Mayu jokingly laughed and ate some of her food again.

"What are you talking about? I'm not acting weird..." she said as she sipped her hot chocolate.

"You're acting like you're hiding something!"

Mayu suddenly got silent and her smile disappeared.

"Mayu... what's going on?"

She looked down and looked at something in her pocket.

"Tell me!"

"....I'm...."

She pulled out a folded piece of paper with a seal on it. A letter. Yuki looked at it and opened it.

"Dear Watanabe Mayu-sama,
congratulations on completing your final test as a witch.
Please return to the Magic Realm for your coronation as the new princess.
We shall retrieve you from the human realm at September 10th."


"P-princess?"

"I'm sorry, Yuki. But, I just... can't be with you forever."

Yuki shook her head and smiled.

"No... I'm proud of you."

"You.. what?"

"I'm glad to hear it. Congratulations. I hope you're happy..."

"But, Yuki..." She held her chest, trying to hold back her tears. "When I leave... none of you will remember me. You'll all forget about me, as if I was never here."

Yuki gasped, clutching her own heart, too.

She couldn't accept this. She didn't want to forget Mayu.

"Yuki, I'm so sorry..."

Yuki bit her lip, leaving the table. Mayu was left alone, her heart broken.

She was about to leave the new life she made.

And the one person she loved so much.


The day finally came and it was time for Mayu to leave.

Mayu stood in front of the mirror, her one way ticket back to her realm.

She put her hand on the glass, feeling its coldness.

The full moon was about to rise, opening the portal and returning her home. She shed a tear.

"Mayu!"

Someone came up from behind and hugged her.

Of course, Mayu could recognize her, for it was none other than Yuki.

"Mayu, please don't go!" she said crying.

"B-but, Yuki... You said--"

"Forget what I said! You can't leave me! I can't live! I won't be happy without you!"

Mayu turned around and hugged Yuki back.

"You will."

"No, I won't!"

"Yes, you will... I know you will."

She broke the hug and faced her, wiping away her tears.

"Don't be so hard on yourself. Now, you have so many people who love you."

"Yeah, but... Not you."

"Yuki. Promise me this. You'll make it, if you promise to never, ever stop being you. You can do it, I just know it."

Yuki wiped off the rest if her tears and smiled sadly.

"Promise..."

The two hugged again and kissed each other deeply.

The moon finally rose and shone on the mirror.

It started shining and glowed a bright white light. The portal was open.

Mayu broke the kiss and backed away.

"Goodbye, Yuki..."

She disappeared into the mirror and went away. Forever.

The whole room became bright around Yuki and she shut her eyes, tight.

Her mind went blank and she fell asleep.

The moment she opened her eyes, she was back in her room and the sun was shining.

She was sitting at her desk, working on something for school, and she fell asleep.

Then, she looked down at her wrist. There was a single cut.

"What the-?"

She called her mom and had her look at it.

She wrapped it in gauze and went back up to her room, looking at her blank notebook.

Slowly, after thinking a few minutes, she picked up her pencil and started writing.

"I want to see you so much... that it makes me want to cry..." She spun it in her hand, thinking of lyrics that came from what seemed like a dream.

A dream she tried to remember, but couldn't.

She smiled and wrote again.

"I want to cross this sky flying right now..."

Her eyes darted and she saw a wrapped candy. She opened it up and saw it was a chocolate.

"Chocolate?"

She put it in her mouth and chewed it, tasting the sweet inside as it melted in her mouth.

"... Oishii....."

She looked back at her paper, and smiled again.

"When tomorrow comes, maybe I'll be able to meet you. I can't go back..."


2 years later...



The orange crescent moon
 at the end of the sky looks like its sulking
 couldn't you at least call me?
 you are irritating
 I've been waiting for a long time...

I understand
 that you are busy with your work today, but
 walking alone on the asphalt my footsteps are too lonely
 I want to kick one of the empty cans on the street

I want to see you so much
 that it makes me want to cry
 I want to cross this sky flying right now
 Why is it that I grew to love you like this?
 I didn't want us to become so serious
 it's the evening wind's deed

How much should I wait
 to meet you?
 I wonder if I'll be here until the break of dawn like this?
 Why is it that I grew excited like this?
 when tomorrow comes maybe I'll be able to meet you
 I can't go back


"YUKIRIN~!!!"

After graduating high school, Yuki became a well known actress, a gravure princess, and an idol to all.

After she left the stage, she went back to her dressing room and saw someone there.

"Sae?"

Sae turned her head and smiled when she saw her.

"Yukirin!"

She ran up and hugged her tight.

"Sae, it's been ages! What are you doing here?"

"I saw your concert. You were amazing, as always. I'm so proud of you."

She giggled. "Thanks, Sae."

Then, Sae's phone rang in her pocket. She took it out and answered it.

"Hello? Ah, Sayaka! Sorry~, I was at Yukirin's concert... Ufufu, yeah~. Don't worry. I'll be right there... Promise... Okay, bye-bye. *Chu!* See ya later."

"Who was that? Your girlfriend?"

"Hahah, yeah... Sorry, I gotta go. See you next handshake event?"

"Okay..."

They hugged again and Sae left for her to change.

Yukirin looked through her outfits and saw the one she wanted for her next TV event.

After packing up, she got into her limo and talked to her manager on the phone.

"Hey, Kashiwagi. You finished?"

"Yeah. Where am I headed next?"

"ZIP is going to interview you about your next single. There's going to be another idol like you performing."

Yuki's eyes widened.

"Really?"

"Yeah. And apparently, she's a big fan of yours. Two idols meeting could really raise up business. Be sure to get in good with her."

"Sure."

"Okay, See ya at the studio."

"Bye."

She hung up and looked out the window.

She saw a poster of an idol who looked very cutesy. A perfect idol image.

"'Magical little witch of the idol world,' huh?" She repeated it in her head.

She couldn't help but let it feel so... nostalgic.

"Witch"

That name reminded her of a candy shop she used to go to 2 years ago, until it suddenly shut down.


Once she got to the studio, she saw a girl already preparing her next performance.

She looked closer and saw it was the same girl in the poster she saw on her way here.

While she was warming up, she looked and her eyes instantly met Yuki's.

She smiled and waved at her. Yuki waved back.

"Are you ready, Watanabe-san?"

Watanabe got her attention back and turned to them.

"Ah! Yes."

"Okay. Let's go, everyone! In 5, 4, 3..."

He signaled them and started shooting.

"And now, promoting her new single, with her song 'Sayonara no Hashi,' Watanabe Mayu-san!"



If I stretch my hand out from here
 It feels like I could reach it
 It looks bigger than usual
 The setting sun

Fun occassions
 End in the blink of an eye
 Why is it that
 The hands of time were moving so quickly?

The time we spent looking out the classroom window
 The scenery from that day recedes into my memories

I loved you
 I loved you
 My heart finally realized it
 I loved you
 I really loved you
 'Goodbye' taught me that

In a corner of the schoolyard
 Stands a cherry tree bereft even of leaves
 Could a promise made underneath it
 Really come true?

Memories are always more beautiful than reality
 Because, little by little, important things come to be forgotten

On the path to the station I walked with you
 The scenery of the future is around the next corner

I loved you
 I loved you
 My first love was my first determination
 I loved you
 It was a childish love
 'Goodbye' won't teach me that

I loved you
 I loved you
 My heart finally realized it
 I loved you
 I really loved you
 'Goodbye' taught me that

'Goodbye' is a bridge to the future


As shooting ended, they all applauded and cheered her name to fill the studio.

"Mayuyu!!! Mayuyu!!! Mayuyu!!!"

Yuki just stood there amazed. She clutched her own heart, it was beating so fast.

She felt she was on the verge of tears.

"Why...? Why is it this fast?"


After they interviewed the cute idol, she went up to Yuki, smiling.

"Y-Yu-Yu-Yukirin!"

"Ah! Mayuyu, you were really good up there."

"Honestly, I was so nervous! But, when I saw you come in, I felt a bit more relaxed. I've always wanted to meet you!"

"Really?"

"Yeah! I... I absolutely LOVE you, Yukirin!"

Yuki covered her cheeks, she was blushing.

"Well, it's very nice to meet you, Mayuyu," she said shaking her hands.

However, when she looked up, Mayu looked... strange.

She was sad... Or, really, she couldn't tell.

She almost had no emotion.

"Mayuyu?"

She looked up at her and met her dark, lifeless, cold eyes.

They were piercing into her, leaving her frozen.

She let go of her hands and stood there like a statue.

Her heart felt like it was breaking, seeing such a sad girl... A poor girl...

"Kashiwagi? Kashiwagi!"

She finally snapped out of the trance and looked up at the camera man.

"Yes?"

"You're about to go on."

"Oh, okay..."

She walked up and sat down at her chair, watching Mayu go backstage somewhere.

She sighed a bit and slapped her cheeks, trying to concentrate on her work.

"Alright, pull yourself together, Yuki..."

"In 5, 4, 3..."

"Our next guest today is a rising star, already reaching third place in the Oricon charts, Kashiwagi Yuki-san."

The audience applauded again, but she noticed it wasn't as loud as Mayuyu's cheers.

"Kashiwagi-san, you're about to release your new single. What kind of song is it?"

"Mm~, it's a kind of love song. A girl is wanting to confess to her childhood friend after they've been together forever. It's a really sweet and heartwarming song."

"And what's the name of it?"

"'Shortcake.' We just finished recording yesterday."

"Oh! Are you going to perform it soon?"

"Yes. My first live performance will be on Mujack, so everyone please watch, okay?"

"Okay~!!!"

Yuki giggled and covered her cheeks again, blushing.

She couldn't help but glance back at where Mayu just was.

"We saw you talking to Watanabe-san earlier. Are you two good friends?"

"Uh, no, this is the first time we've met face to face. But, she seems to know me really well..."

"Well, it's great to see idols supporting one another."

Yuki giggled again, but she couldn't help but feel sorry for the little idol.

She must've really been suffering for some reason.

She just didn't know what. All she wanted to do was help her.


After shooting ended, she went back to the dressing room and saw Mayu sitting alone eating jelly beans.

She walked over and tapped her shoulder.

Mayu turned around and met her cold eyes again.

She bit her lip and shook her head a bit, relishing her senses to focus and talk to her.

"Ano... Is something wrong, Mayuyu? You can talk to me. I wanna help."

"...Yuki."

Yuki felt her heart skip a beat. Mayu called her by her name instead of her nickname.

"Do you remember me, Yuki?"

"Well, of course. You're an idol."

She put her hand on her shoulder, but Mayu got up and forced it off.

"That's not what I meant. We've met before, but you don't remember me. Why?"

"W-we have?"

Mayu walked over to the table and sat down.

She took a wrapped candy and started unraveling it.

"That... That's the candy from the shop I used to visit! Where did you get that?"

"I made it..."

"What?! How did you know the recipe?!"

"I created the recipe... The shop belonged to me and my family..."

"No way..."

She took the chocolate I her mouth and chewed it slowly.

Yuki tried to call her again, but she was ignoring her.

She finally gave up on helping her and decided to leave, but then Mayu suddenly grabbed her wrist and pulled her close.

Her lips instantly met hers and Yuki could instantly taste the chocolate inside her mouth.

Mayu kissed her deeply, refusing to let go.

In her mind, Yuki was trying to process what happened, but her head was all fuzzy and she couldn't think.

Her body wasn't moving and she couldn't resist. Nothing was cooperating with her.

Yuki closed her eyes and felt her heart grow warm.

Her head was filled with visions of her, and the girl in front of her, together in high school.

And Mayu.. she was a witch. She helped her. Helped in her sorrow and darkness. Helped get her life back.

She was her savior. Her lover.

"Mayu..."

A tear shed down her cheek and she started returning the kisses.

She clinged onto Mayu's shoulders and the two fell down on the couch together.

They finally broke the kiss, the taste of chocolate still lingering.

Yuki giggled and wiped her thumb on Mayu's lips.

"You've got chocolate all over your face."

Mayu took her finger and wiped Yuki's lips.

"You do too."

"Mayu, I thought you had a coronation. Why are you back here?"

"I didn't want to stay there. When I left you, I realized I needed you more than anything." She held up the wrapper. "This was my last spell."

"What?"

"I used the last ounce of my magic to help you remember me again. I gave up everything I had to stay here, in this world, with you."

Yuki sat up and looked at the wrapper.

"You... You gave up all your magic just for me?"

"Yes."

"Why?"

"Because, no ounce of magic," she said holding her cheek, "can compare to how much I love you."

She kissed her again, softly, and Yuki didn't resist anymore.

Her heart was pounding endlessly and she felt so happy.

Her love was finally back where she belonged; in her arms.

And, this time, they could be together. Forever and ever. And magic couldn't compare to their love.


---The End---
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:heart: l Completed: Fire and Ice l Black Chocolate l My eternal blue rose l Dishonored l The Black Rose l Fruits of a Rose l Remnants l :heart:
:heart: l Dropped: Tentomu chu l REBORN l Bite me l NMB Gakuen l YumeToki l Cafe 48 l :heart: l Hiatus/Indefinite: Samurai l Blood Bonds l Night Wind's Deed l PRISM l Time Travelers l :heart:
:heart: l Collab threads: Sky&Ruka l Ruka&Michael l :heart:
 l Compilation thread: 48G New Gen l :heart:

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Offline Shinoki

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Re: Black Chocolate Afterstory (Mayuki OS)
« Reply #151 on: September 07, 2013, 02:33:39 AM »
....HAPPINESS!
Mayuki~ <3

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Re: Black Chocolate Afterstory (Mayuki OS)
« Reply #152 on: September 07, 2013, 07:34:57 AM »
Yeah... Mayuki together in the end...

Mayu left her life in Magic world...

Great ending there....

Thank you for the update

Can't wait to see your other story

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Re: Black Chocolate Afterstory (Mayuki OS)
« Reply #153 on: September 07, 2013, 08:13:14 AM »
Yay~~~~ Mayu came back :on woohoo:
They're both idols :on gay: But Yuki seems just a beginner :wahaha:
This chapter is so touching and sweet at the same time :mon lovelaff:
Mayuki :on gay: :mon firecrack:
Ano... I know this's kinda selfish request  :on ksweat:
But can you make another omake about Mayu's in the Witch Realm to coronation as the new princess :mon sweat: :mon ignore:
Anyway, I waiting for your another Mayuki fic :on gay:
Working on translating an awesome Kojiyuu fanfic, right now ☆〜(ゝ。∂) :mon beam:

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Re: Black Chocolate Afterstory (Mayuki OS)
« Reply #154 on: September 07, 2013, 12:10:42 PM »
aww sweet can''t wait for your another mayuki then
RENA-SAMA!!!

YUKI-SAMA!!!

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Re: Black Chocolate Afterstory (Mayuki OS)
« Reply #155 on: September 07, 2013, 12:27:49 PM »
nyaaaaaaaaaahhh mayuki is too sweet!!!!!!!!! :cathappy:
noooooooo!!!!!!! was the first thing in my mind when yuki had to forget about mayuyu :cry: :shocked
it was so cute when yuki could hear mayu's cheer the most :lol:
but mayuki will always be together :heart: :yep:
thanx for this :cow: :bow:
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Re: Black Chocolate Afterstory (Mayuki OS)
« Reply #156 on: September 13, 2013, 06:26:19 PM »
and they lived happily ever after.... *closes book*
nyaaaa~ I can cry now  :cry: this is the best ending it could ever have  :bow: :bow: hat's off!
I want another MaYuki series now  :mon whine: I actually hate endings  :mon surr:
my hat is off. saluting.

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Re: Black Chocolate Afterstory (Mayuki OS)
« Reply #157 on: September 14, 2013, 12:43:35 PM »
That is good story. XD
Mayuki together :)
Sae got a girlfrend :grin:
But what happened with Rena :? Please tell me :bow:
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Black Chocolate Afterstory (WMatsui OS)
« Reply #158 on: September 15, 2013, 01:58:09 AM »
Black Chocolate: Afterstory (WMatsui OS)


After everything was solved with Mayu and Yuki, Jurina left and had to find something new in her life.

She was soaring the sky, trying to find a new town. And she finally did.

Nagoya.

She loved Nagoya, and always wanted to visit, so she decided to live full time.

She settled down in a nice apartment, and transferred to a new school. She was a first-year in her new high school.

Then, on her fateful first day...

She met a senior. Not just any senior.

She met this girl before.

Long, black hair. Dark, mesmerizing eyes. Pale, white skin. Thin to the bone. Quiet as the wind.

A girl who had previously seeked revenge on Yuki, but was now to shy to talk to anyone.

The girl Jurina wiped her memory clean.

Matsui Rena.

She had definitely changed since she last saw her.

That evil laugh and creepy smile was gone.

All that darkness and scariness in her eyes disappeared. They were now empty and sad. She didn't look up once at anyone. She just stared at the ground.

She's never gone up to the front of the classroom, but her grades were above the rest.

And, she never uttered a single word. She was just silent. Completely mute.

Jurina honestly felt sad for the poor girl, but thought it was for the best.

Jurina didn't want to bring back those terrible memories and make her suffer.

She decided to try and use this chance at her new life to make friends with the new Rena. Maybe she can make her a little less shy.

Because, there was one more secret. Seeing this new version of the sad girl, seeing her empty eyes, and knowing she was scared of everything and everyone...

Jurina had fallen in love with Rena.


There was a school festival coming up, and everyone had to do something to prepare.

Lucky enough, Jurina and Rena were paired together, and Jurina had some perfect ideas for an attraction. She finally chose the greatest one she could think of.

A school maid café. The waitresses wear the cutest school girl/maid outfits, and she could imagine Rena, being the cutest one of them all.

That is... if she could even get Rena an inch near her.

"Rena-chan~!"

"..."

"Rena-chan~!!!"

"..."

"Rena-chan, listen to me~! Don't you think a maid café would be a good idea?"

Rena blushed, remaining completely silent.

"Mou~, I designed the cutest one just for YOU. How can we know what you want if you won't LOOK AT IT~?!"

"..." She bit her lip, trying to run away.

"RE~NA~!" She ran up and grabbed her arm. "C'mon~, don't be so shy~."

Rena gripped her fist. She held her head, trying to contain her emotions.

Jurina backed away from her a bit and thought of something.

She hurried into the changing room, leaving Rena alone and confused. After a few minutes, she came back wearing a black and white maid outfit.

"Hello, mistress."

Rena blushed madly. She covered her mouth, trying to hold her gasp.

Truth is, in her mind, she was screaming and dying of happiness at the cuteness in front of her.

Jurina pulled up a table and chair in front of her.

"Please take a seat."

Rena shyly walked over and sat down in the chair.

"If there's anything you need please ring the bell," she said laying a small silver bell on the table. "I'll be right back with your drink."

Jurina ran back into another room and pulled out a card.



"First, some of this."

She pulled out a cup and generated some special juice into it.

She pulled out her second card.



"A little sweetness..."

She sprinkled some special sugar over the glass.

Then, she found some fruit and chopped it up. She blended them together and shook them up.

She slowly poured them in and stirred it up.

"And finally..."



"A pretty decoration. A flower for a flower."

She slowly stuck the cute pink flower onto the pink-orange-ish drink and carried it back to Rena.

"Sorry for the wait. Here's your special fruit smoothie."

"..." O////O

"Oishikuna~re. Moe, moe, kyun~! :heart: "

"...." >////////<

"Ahh~, mistress' face is getting so red. I hope you're not sick."

Jurina got closer and set her forehead against Rena's. Rena was getting so hot, and it made her smirk. Her sly cat smirk.

"Ah... You have a fever. You need a shot."

Rena was getting a little nervous, and was scared. She was about to get up, when Jurina suddenly grabbed her hand.

"Now, don't worry, mistress. This won't hurt."

Rena's lips were shaking in fear, her body tightly pressed against the wall.

Her legs and arms trembling, she shut her eyes tight, biting her lip.

Then, she felt Jurina's breath against her, and...

*CHU*

"See? It didn't hurt. Your special chuu-sha"

*Jurina Pun Note: Chusha-Shot, Chu~ "Chu"-Smooch :3

The next thing Jurina knew, the girl she just kissed for the first time collapsed I her embrace. She fainted due to embarrassment.


The moment Rena woke up, she was in the infirmary.

It was already afternoon; the festival must've been going on already!

She hurried and got up, then noticed the smoothie that Jurina made was sitting on the table beside her.

She slowly picked it up and took a sip of it.

"...Mm."

"Is it good?"

"Eh?"

She turned around, surprised to see Jurina now wearing a regular school uniform.

"...J-J-J-Ju--"

"Sorry I didn't wake you up. You looked so cute when you're asleep. Plus, I heard you sleep talking. You know you have some strange dreams, right?"

"Eh?"

"First, you were like 'Melon pan~ Melon pan~ I wanna eat Melon pan~' and then all the sudden you were switching voices and acting out this whole scene that ended with 'I'LL BECOME THE MONARCH OF THE NIGHT!!!!!!!' Hahahahaha, too cute~!"

Rena was covering up her whole face, she was so embarrassed.

She remembered her dream and she didn't even realize she was talking in her sleep. She knew it was a habit, but at THIS of all times...!!!

"And... Um... You said.. s-something else."

Rena looked up, a confused look on her face.

"What?"

"You kept calling my name. 'Jurina. Jurina.' Like a mom calling her baby." She scratched her head, waltzing towards her bit by bit. "Then you said~... 'Don't leave me alone'."

Rena's eyes widened, her heart suddenly skipped a beat. She grabbed her chest, trying to contain herself from fainting again.

"Rena... are you in love with me?"

"...Mm, so what if I am?"

"Because, I'm in love with you, too."

Rena was slowly backing away. She didn't exactly know how to respond to this.

But, she finally sighed.

"I was so scared... When I first saw you, my heart was beating so fast, I couldn't control it. I didn't want to trust anyone, and you were my only friend. I didn't want my love for you to ruin it all."

"Hey, don't worry..." she said patting her head. "Y'know, I have a friend who was like that once. She was afraid to accept her feelings, even when she finally realized them. But, I was able to show her what's right."

"And, that was...?"

"Well, it depends. How much do you love me? This much?" She laid a soft peck on her cheek. "Or THIS much?"

She slowly leaned forward and deeply kissed her lips.

Rena's body slowly relaxed and she felt herself feel so... at peace.

She closed her eyes and felt herself respond to the soft, sweet kisses. The tart taste of the smoothie still lingered on her lips, and it mixed with the sweet vanilla flavor of Jurina's lip gloss.

They finally parted for air and embraced each other. Rena laid her head against Jurina's shoulder, feeling her rub her back.

"So, Rena..."

"Hm?"

She saw her adored cat smile again, followed by her cute giggle.

"Does this make you my girlfriend?"

Rena innocently giggled again and embraced her again.

"Yes."





---The End---
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:heart: l Completed: Fire and Ice l Black Chocolate l My eternal blue rose l Dishonored l The Black Rose l Fruits of a Rose l Remnants l :heart:
:heart: l Dropped: Tentomu chu l REBORN l Bite me l NMB Gakuen l YumeToki l Cafe 48 l :heart: l Hiatus/Indefinite: Samurai l Blood Bonds l Night Wind's Deed l PRISM l Time Travelers l :heart:
:heart: l Collab threads: Sky&Ruka l Ruka&Michael l :heart:
 l Compilation thread: 48G New Gen l :heart:

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Re: Black Chocolate Afterstory (WMatsui OS)
« Reply #159 on: September 15, 2013, 06:08:54 AM »
I couldn't contain Jurina's cuteness here  XD chuu~ chuu~  I could only think of nori's avatar on that  XD
Finally, my question has been answered  :nervous

thank you TTLuver497!  :roll:
my hat is off. saluting.

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