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Title: A.L.I.V.E. (Multiple Pairings) Part 4. Whole Bunch Of Misunderstandings
Post by: sakura_drop_ on June 20, 2012, 05:32:14 PM
MINNA~~~~~~~!!!!!  :gmon hi:

A.L.I.V.E.
Part 1. Jane Doe (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33201.msg1172451#msg1172451) (100% completed, 100% typed)
Part 2. The Emperor's Daughter (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33201.msg1172654#msg1172654) (100% completed, 100% typed)
Part 3. The Past and The Present (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33201.msg1177011#msg1177011) (100% completed, 100% typed)
Part SPECIAL. First Time (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34376.msg1190486#msg1190486) (100% completed, 100% typed) PERV section!!!
Part 4. Whole Bunch Of Misunderstandings (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33201.msg1278392#msg1278392) (100% completed, 100% typed)
Part 5. TBA (30% completed, 0% typed)


I know I already have many fics to update (troll/fail author is troll/fail author) GOME  :bow: :bow:

But this awesome idea came to my mind, so I decided to share it with you.

We all know there are lots of people who have many random ideas coming to their heads, but they are not sure about their skills, they can't write full stories, just drabbles, or they simply are too lazy, or lack in some department, like imaginations, grammar, etc. Or some just don't have time to write.

Anyway, my idea is to make these people write. Not necessarily long stories. More like..participating in creating a story.

An example is given below.

I give a short brief theme. (ex. Hello, everyone. I'm Anonym Anonymous, and I want to tell you how I became a member of Random Group.)

Then all of you who want post the stories, drabbles, random thoughts about the topic that I wrote. (ex. Entry by unknown.. "One day I was going to buy groceries for my family, then suddenly a cat jumped out of nowhere on me. You wouldn't believe if I tell you, but the cat was a human size, and she was meowing while pointing to some direction. You'd think I was a fool, but I decided to follow her. <...the story goes on and on ..> That's how I became an idol.")

Or something like that. It's just for fun, no one's gonna hurt you, or  anything. Let's say, we have 10 entries. After 10 entries I make a poll, and people vote for the story. The winner gets to choose the next topic. What do you think?

Please write any ideas, opinions or wishes here.  :bingo:

Now I'm off to the shadows, I have an important job to do searching for my dearest missing Sieka-san continuing to write the updates.

Mata ne!  :mon bye:
Title: Re: Challenge for FUN
Post by: RJay on June 20, 2012, 05:45:35 PM
-how I became a member of a Random Group-
Was that the theme?

The challenge sounds like fun.

 :( But I have no idea what to write around that theme... Brainstorming :on study:
Title: Re: Challenge for FUN
Post by: RJay on June 20, 2012, 05:55:29 PM
 :lol:Well you know my opinion already.
"The challenge sounds like fun"

If you have a theme in mind, then I'll try to write something if I have time of course.
I'll try. XD
Title: Re: Challenge for FUN: Challenge 1
Post by: Flean on June 26, 2012, 01:04:02 PM
hurm..  :dunno: I don't quite understand actually how to participate in this challenge..  :on ksweat:

should I just continue with what you have wrote up there or I need make a new one??  :mon huh:

gomen ne.. I just don't get it..  :mon sweat:
Title: Re: Capricious Lachrymose (OS) PREVIEW
Post by: sakura_drop_ on August 25, 2012, 08:59:15 PM
Minna, hello!  :mon hi:
These Tokyo Dome events really has shaken up all of us, yet that did not stop me from writing.. BUT.  :mon geek:
I cannot update my previous works, because this random idea came to my mind and... I just had to write it down.  :mon study:
So it's nearly written (check first post for the progress), but not typed yet (handwriting is not my strength, yet this inspiration hit me while working, so yeah, I still have to type everything down).

Here is the preview:





I do not even remember how I tossed all most important and needed things to my suitcase with one hand and stopped taxi with another. I do not remember if I left the refrigerator open or the lights turned on, if I locked the doors or what was the discussion with my boss about. I found myself only at the airport, holding my head up, looking at the timetable...

I want to get away from here. The further, the better. I want some sun, warmth and freedom. I have to fly like, right now, and I do not even think about this – otherwise my mind will return to its ‘ON’ state. Maybe it is a good thing usually, but not today, and really not in this case. I know I should not let all the emotions boil inside me and I should think calmly about all the pros and cons. And I know big clever girls do not act like this. To hell! I am no way near big nor clever. I just want at least a bit of tranquility, and then I will think about what to do. The nearest flight to Copenhagen. From there someone will definitely take me South. There, where I can spend some quality time for at least a week, only me, myself and I, and breath some sea air. Thanks to my grandmother Erena, who before leaving this world took care of my financial problems, I now use huge amounts of money if anything happens. Yeah, something did happen.





BTW, I want you to guess the pairing.

HINT.
 :down
Someone asked me if I can write more of that couple that I'm good at writing about.
Title: Re: Capricious Lachrymose (OS) PREVIEW
Post by: yuukimoko on August 25, 2012, 09:27:26 PM
I want a Mayuki story but.......Its YukiRena? or YukoxRena?
Title: Re: Capricious Lachrymose (OS) PREVIEW
Post by: kahem on August 25, 2012, 10:54:20 PM
Hum Tomotomo? I hope so~
Title: Re: Capricious Lachrymose (OS) PREVIEW
Post by: Sese on August 26, 2012, 12:46:28 AM
maybe KojiYuu...?
Title: Re: Capricious Lachrymose (OS) PREVIEW
Post by: Sydney W on August 26, 2012, 04:17:43 AM
Make it Atsumina !
Title: Re: Capricious Lachrymose (OS) PREVIEW
Post by: miayaka on August 27, 2012, 09:33:43 PM
lalalala and I'm here seeing sakura drop-san fic!
Make it Atsumina and Kojiyuu!! because acchan has just graduated today  :on speedy: :on speedy: :on speedy: :on speedy:
Title: Re: Capricious Lachrymose (OS) PREVIEW
Post by: yukofan on August 28, 2012, 09:03:13 AM
you're goot at writing random pairings XD so, i hope it will be another random pairing. because, honestly, i'm bored with mainstream pairings.hahaha..peace ^^v
Title: Re: Capricious Lachrymose (OS) Part 1. Oshima Yuko {Sep 10, 2012}
Post by: wynaut on September 12, 2012, 11:50:33 AM
pant pant pant~~
I like the story!!!!!!!!!
Thank you!
So interesting..
Title: Re: Capricious Lachrymose (OS) Part 1. Oshima Yuko {Sep 10, 2012}
Post by: yukofan on September 14, 2012, 05:58:44 AM
i love it~
it's a complicated story but i love it~

if i was in yuko's situation, i probably doing the same things as she does..

adult's life is complicated, doesn't it?
sometimes i wish i don't have to become an adult..

waiting for your update..
Title: Re: Capricious Lachrymose (OS) Part 2. Matsui Rena {Oct 13, 2012}
Post by: AkemiHomura on October 13, 2012, 05:14:44 PM
Dear awesome author sakura_drop_-san, i have been lurking around here for so long. And today, I have to come out of my hiding place to tell you this.
YOU STORY WAS REALLY REALLY GREAT.  :cry: :cry: I WAS LIKE JUMPING ON MY BED WHILE READING YOUR STORY. :heart: XD
I was waiting for someone to write about the strong, fascinate and independent,...[insert awesome adjectives here XD] side of Yuko, which is rarely mention. :cry: Only her perverted side was concentrated on, which sometimes, was described very annoying.  :angry:
As an Yuko's oshimen [i saw your signature], i guess you already knew about her family's problem, and how she faced it. :cry: She is totally cool.  :twothumbs

Part 2 was also awesome [sorry, i have been using this word too much XD].

Anyway, thank you for making this story.  :heart:
I'm looking forward to Part 3 and the end of your story [very greedy, aren't I  8)].
Thank you once again *bow* *back to stealth mode* 8)2.
Title: Re: Capricious Lachrymose (OS) Part 2. Matsui Rena {Oct 13, 2012}
Post by: BbSis on October 14, 2012, 01:44:14 AM
Got to read this finally o/

My first yukorena and I liked it! Kiked your writing style. Too o/

Can't wait. Next part *.*
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (OS) Teaser {Apr 08, 2013}
Post by: sakura_drop_ on April 08, 2013, 03:41:31 PM
I'll answer to all of your comments when I update (maybe this week XD ) but I just have to leave this teaser for you and cast some light on my previous story.

Capricious Lachrymose Part 3 will be updated when I decided on a way on how to end the story, as I'm contemplating between three endings and still cannot decide. As you can see from the first post, I have started another OS and in my notebook it's first part is handwritten 100%. Now I just need to type it. I want you to guess the pairing (though it's really easy :))


A.L.I.V.E.    Teaser


"Search everywhere!!! She must be put to jail by the end of this week and we cannot waste any minute!!! Hurry!!"

She lowered her hood and passed the police without them paying any attention. Well, she was wearing simple man's clothes to hide her gender and it perfectly worked out. If only police knew in the past she won every Danso contest in her city they probably would be more cautious and wouldn't let even men pass. Yet they were looking for a not fashionable tiny woman in a ponytail, and for her it was the best escape situation.

Takahashi Minami, for the public known as Jane Doe, was like nowadays' Robin Hood and now she had to catch a bus if she wanted to get home fast. She hurried past the so well-known streets and got to the bus stop just in time to catch a so needed bus. There she cozily seated herself in the backseat and looked at the person next to her who was sleeping. The beautiful black haired girl probably felt Minami's presence as she cuddled closely to the short girl and continued sleeping. It felt kinda nice to Takahashi and she also had a good opportunity to take her mind away from police matters and observe the sleeping girl.



That's it, see you soon with update!!! :bow:
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (OS) Teaser {Apr 08, 2013}
Post by: arrow27 on April 08, 2013, 07:59:14 PM
Woah awesome! Was hoping someone would make a full out story of the "Jane Doe" concept for Minami :3
Liked the teaser very much! Nice start. Wondering if Minami knows that person on the bus or just randomly ran into her now (guessing Atsuko maybe?)

Either way great start! Looking forward to the first chapter! Thanks for the update!
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (OS) Teaser {Apr 08, 2013}
Post by: Haruko on April 09, 2013, 07:24:49 AM
Woah awesome! Was hoping someone would make a full out story of the "Jane Doe" concept for Minami :3
Liked the teaser very much! Nice start. Wondering if Minami knows that person on the bus or just randomly ran into her now (guessing Atsuko maybe?)

Either way great start! Looking forward to the first chapter! Thanks for the update!

of course is Acchan!..
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (OS) Teaser {Apr 08, 2013}
Post by: cisda83 on April 09, 2013, 09:30:15 AM
I like your story about Jane Doe...

In this case a female robin hood... hahaha

Great idea....

Can't wait to see how the story going to begin

Thank you for the teaser...

 :wub: :inlove: :love: :heart:
Title: A.L.I.V.E. (OS) Part 1. Jane Doe {Apr 12, 2013}
Post by: sakura_drop_ on April 12, 2013, 12:03:22 AM

A/N: Okay, once again hello for everyone. I'm not gonna say much just that I put my heart into this update and I also am eagerly waiting for what's going to happen. This Os - which has 3 or 4 parts, I've yet to decide - is kinda like a tribute to Acchan, Takamina and AtsuMina pairing overall. I know you see many other members and couples in this too but... You will see more of AtsuMina I promise :) Now I'm gonna answer your questions and then on to the update which has over 2000 words :)

@O r i g a m i: I'm so happy to know I got you hooked on YukoRena  XD and about the name Capricious Lachrymose... It's gonna be revealed in the last part, wait for it. I will update it someday, just not sure when. Coz I just can't decide...which ending I want the most...

@AkemiHomura: First of all, thank you for praising me, I really appreciate that.  :bow:

You know, Yuko is my oshimen since the first time I found AKB48, actually way back when first videos of Team K appeared on Youtube and it never change and I don't think it ever will. So of course I know about her and her family. Also, I always see her as strong and independent and serious woman who puts up her childishness only for cameras or to goof around with friends. I really do see her as  a hardworking woman and I love everything about her.

I can't promise I'll update the last part soon but I hope you are still waiting for it and that you will wait more.  :bow: :bow:

@BbSis: oh, thank you for the flattery. I'm happy people like YukoRena :)

@arrow27: actually I was waiting for that too - even though my mind was in turmoil already because of my imagination running wild. You know I said to myself I should let others write about it but they didn't write a full story so I decided to write it with a background and everything. I hope I don't disappoint you with this update  :bow:. Yes, you're right, it's Atsuko. And about if she knows her... Read the update to find out ;)

@Haruko: yup, Acchan but of course  XD

@cisda83: thank you I hope you like this update  :bow:




(http://imageshack.us/a/img825/6480/47278163293815005423720.jpg)
A.L.I.V.E.

Part 1. Jane Doe

-----Somewhere in Tokyo-----

“Search everywhere!!! She must be put to jail by the end of this week and we cannot waste any minute!!! Hurry!!"

She lowered her hood and passed the police without them paying any attention. Well, she was wearing simple man's clothes to hide her gender and it perfectly worked out. If only police knew in the past she won every Danso contest in her city they probably would be more cautious and wouldn't let even men pass. Yet they were looking for a not fashionable tiny woman in a ponytail, and for her it was the best escape situation.

Takahashi Minami, for the public known as Jane Doe, was like nowadays' Robin Hood and now she had to catch a bus if she wanted to get home fast. She hurried past the so well-known streets and got to the bus stop just in time to catch a so needed bus. There she cozily seated herself in the backseat and looked at the person next to her who was sleeping. The beautiful black haired girl probably felt Minami's presence as she cuddled closely to the short girl and continued sleeping. It felt kind of nice to Takahashi and she also had a good opportunity to take her mind away from police matters and observe the sleeping girl.

Long black hair fell nicely around the beautiful face past the slender neck and ended in medium curls midway to elbows. The girl’s face had an endearing smile and maybe that smile was the reason why a cute wrinkle appeared on a shapely nose. Probably the beauty was dreaming of something really nice and sweet because she suddenly pouted cutely and scrunched her nose then moved closer to the short woman. The hair fell on the girl’s face and the woman carefully tucked away disobedient strands of hair from that pretty face. Somehow this sleeping beauty made Minami smile like an idiot and she even forgot police was after her. The short woman felt like she might have seen this girl somewhere before.

“We’re from Tokyo Special Police Department. Stop the bus for a while. We’re just going to look for the culprit and then you can continue.” A man’s voice stated clearly.

Crap!” Minami thought. What’s worse, the girl was tightly locked onto her and was still peacefully sleeping. As the policemen were getting closer Minami’s brain was turning its cogs with full power, tremendously looking for an escape route. Just then the girl woke up and opened her sleepy eyes, her cute expression showing she has yet to grasp the situation.

It was then that Minami came with a plan and pulled the girl closer. She locked her gaze onto her and then kissed her passionately. After some time the short woman forgot the situation she was in as the kiss was the best kiss she ever had in her whole short life, though somewhat reminiscent, and those lips were just so soft and warm; and those slender arms hugged her without any resistance, even pulling closer. It really looked like the girl was enjoying the kiss. Then both of them pulled apart. The black haired girl blushed and turned away in embarrassment. Suddenly Minami froze; and then she laughed in relief. The bus was already moving and the police was long gone.

“Hey, I’m sorry if that felt weird, me kissing you all of the sudden… I just felt like kissing you…” It was not a lie, Takahashi did want to kiss her and police kind of helped her to make that happen.

“It’s okay… I…enjoyed it… Jane Doe…” The girl whispered and looked away shyly.

“… What?.. Wait… …” Minami tried to think really hard and then suddenly she laughed sheepishly. “Oh… Sorry…”

“It’s okay…really… Are you…running away again?..”

“Yeah but don’t worry. I’m fine.” The short girl smiled.

No wonder the kiss felt familiar and so good. It was just last month when Minami was pursued by police once again and she noticed a girl in the bus stop. It was a good opportunity to try the kissing trick and she didn’t even have any second thoughts. She pushed her against the glass panel and kissed passionately. It was the first time they kissed – or met – and it worked out. Police went past them without even giving a glance. Also, the girl appeared to be a fan of Jane Doe so they parted in good terms. What was her name..?

“You’re Atsuko, right?” Minami suddenly remembered the girl’s name.

“Un… Maybe…maybe you need a place to stay…hide…stay..?” The black haired stuttered and lowered her head with a face that of a blood red color.

“Are you suggesting something?” The short girl raised her eyebrow. She had a place to stay, her home, but this offer was more than good to her. She needed some time off and also some amusement in her life. Minami gently lifted the taller girl’s head up. “If I were to stay over at your place… You are an attractive lady and your kissing is meant for blowing things up.”

“Are you trying to tell me something?.. You’re my hero… I have no objections to anything you do…”

“You meant to anything WE do, right?” Minami asked and Atsuko blushed even more than before. The black haired girl nodded and Takahashi chuckled while caressing the taller girl’s cheek. “Deal then. I’m going to stay at your place for a while.”


-----Oshima residence, Tochigi-----

“Neechan!!”

“Hai?”

“Come here, hurry!!!”

Yuko went down the stairs to the living room where her sister Mayu was staring at the laptop’s screen, her eyes sparkling and hands groping air.

“You know what Yuuchan? Your sister has too many of your features…” Her wife Haruna spoke and Yuko just giggled.

“I don’t think it’s as bad as it sounds from that beautiful mouth of yours, NyanNyan.” The short girl leaned to kiss her wife and then sat next to Mayu. After seeing what’s on that screen she whistled and nodded in an understanding manner.

“Do you see what I see?!” Mayu shouted with a high pitched and enthusiastic voice. ”Those boobies, that oshiri… Can I kidnap her, please?!”

“I don’t think that’s…” Haruna started but was cut by Yuko.

“Okay, I’ll think of a plan.”

“Yuuchan!! You’re spoiling her too much…”

“NyanNyan, baby… I kidnapped you from your so unwanted wedding, why can’t she kidnap that girl?” Yuko asked and blew a kiss towards the tall beauty.

“…” Haruna didn’t know what to reply.

“BUT. First things first… Any news from Bakamina?” Yuko asked while looking at Mayu.

“Nope, nothing as of yet. Good thing is though, that police has no idea of her whereabouts too.”

“Nice, I hope she found a good hiding place. So, you want to kidnap emperor’s daughter?” Yuko asked with a raised eyebrow after noticing a name of that hot girl Mayu was interested in.

“That is ridiculous! I don’t think we can do this!! Yuuchan…” Haruna shook her head but seeing how her beloved pumped her fist up in the air she just crossed her arms and looked away from the two.

“YOSHI, let’s do this! I thought of a name already, now we just need a good plan.” Yuko said excitedly.

“What’s the name?” Mayu was so excited that she jumped around and started conducting an invisible orchestra.

“The kidnapping of emperor’s daughter: best kidnapping in the whole history of kidnappings.” Yuko proudly presented.

Haruna just shook her head again. She really could do nothing about this because she knew her wife too well. If Yuko has the determination, no one can stop her from even moving mountains.

“Oh, I can’t wait for those boobies to appear in this house!!” Mayu skipped away happily and made Haruna only shake her head yet again.

“Kids…”


-----Atsuko’s apartment, Chiba-----

“I bought this shirt as I thought it might suit you… I…wanted to meet you again and hoped…for it to happen someday…” Atsuko looked away and gave Minami the shirt.

“Thank you.” The short woman smiled warmly and took off her manly clothes. She was now just in white panties and the breast binder.

Atsuko cast a small glance at Minami and held her nose.

“I…a bit…” She stuttered and hurried to the bathroom.

The woman just chuckled and took off the binding, then put on a shirt and Atsuko’s track pants which were too long but it didn’t really matter. She rolled up the ends so it would be okay for her to walk around and then took of the wig, letting the hair loose, feeling comfortable and relaxed. She didn’t feel that for days so it was a relief and also…

“Crap!” She remembered she should inform Yuko and others about her condition but that was a dangerous thing to do. She thought a bit about it, then smiled and went to the bathroom. There she found Atsuko, who was fanning herself; some blood traces were still visible in the sink. “Hey, can I ask you for a small favor? If you help me, I’ll cook our meals for as long as I stay here.”

“OK.” Atsuko agreed excitedly. “What do I have to do?”

“Can you put up a message in all the newspapers for me?”

“Un. Just tell me what the message is like.” Her eyes were sparkling as she waited for Minami to say some secret code or something like that.

“A man is staying at his lover’s place. She is his No. 1 supporter. Oh, was that a squirrel chasing a cat? Please, don’t let the cyborg malfunction.” Minami said and smiled.

“Wow… Is this for your allies, a coded message?”

“Un, sort of. Now I’m going to prepare dinner. Oh, by the way, it would be better if you called me by my real name instead of Jane Doe. I’m Takahashi Minami but friends call me Takamina.” The woman decided to omit ‘Bakamina’ and ‘the midget’.

“And I’m Maeda Atsuko. You can call me Acchan though.” The girl smiled shyly.

“Now it’s better, right?” Takamina winked and went to the kitchen.

Acchan slumped back on the chair and closed her eyes. She couldn’t believe her dream came true and that her hero Jane Doe was under the same room as she, wearing her clothes and cooking her dinner. Then she giggled, remembering how that short woman looked in her underwear.

“Sexy…”


-----Café ‘Nagareboshi’, next day, afternoon, Kanagawa-----

“Did you see today’s newspapers?” A fashionable looking girl asked and tapped her neatly polished fingernails on the table surface.

“Yeah, we did. Yesterday I told Mayu that I hope Bakamina found a safe place to stay, well, apparently my hopes were listened to.”

“So, why are we meeting here?” Itano Tomomi asked and sipped her drink, her fingernails still tapping on the table surface.

“A job awaits us and I came here for your cooperation. This café is the only place except our home where we can talk freely about this without being found out.” Yuko answered and put a strawberry in her mouth.

“Okay… So?”

“We are going to kidnap emperor’s daughter for Mayu.”

“Are you CRAZY?!” Itano shouted. At the same time a sultry waitress next to their table dropped a tray – thank god it was empty – and a computer geek sitting at a nearby table started frantically typing something with her laptop.

“Yeah, Tomochin, I heard the same from NyanNyan. BUT I really believe we can do this job. We just need a perfect plan.” The short girl said calmly and took a bite of her parfait. “That’s why I’m here.”

“You want us to participate in this…” Tomochin was not impressed; she couldn’t even finish her sentence. She turned to the waitress. “What do you think, Tomo~mi?”

“I’m not sure… It does sound exciting but… What if it’s really not up for us to do this?..”

“I counted the probability and it’s a 97% success with this plan I just made.” The geek suddenly spoke and brought the laptop to their table. Yuko, Tomochin and Tomo~mi looked at it and soon their faces brightened up.

“Good job Sasshi, as always.” The fashionable girl finally smiled and turned to Yuko. “Okay, we’re in.”

“Are you…going to ask…HER…for help too?..” The waitress whispered.

“I always ask Jurina and Rena for help so I don’t see why I shouldn’t do the same now. They are the best fighters in A.L.I.V.E.” Yuko noted.

“As are you, Takamina, Mariko and me, of course.” Tomochin praised her friends and her eyes were already shining brightly, anticipating the job that awaited them. “Sasshi, you’re a genius. My crew waited so long for some jewels that it’s going to be the definitely good news to them.”

“Many birds killed with one stone.” Yuko grinned and they raised their glasses, saluting the perfect plan and the forthcoming victory.


-----Atsuko’s apartment, evening, Chiba-----

“Need some help?” Minami asked and without waiting for an answer approached the taller girl. Her fingers traced the lines on that slender back and then undone the bra for the black haired girl. She slowly let the straps slide down the shoulders and arms until the bra fell down on the floor revealing two perfect mounds in the mirror in front of them.

Acchan couldn’t move, her heart was racing with the devil and her breathing became shallow. She couldn’t think but even if she could she would never stop the short woman from anything she did.

“So beautiful… Atsuko…” Minami planted a kiss on one of the shoulders earning a shiver from the taller girl.

“…thank you…” Maeda felt flattered and embarrassed at the same time.

“Mhm…” The midget murmured and then gently kissed another shoulder. Her lips just couldn’t resist that delicious skin which was screaming for attention so she moved the hair away and kissed Acchan’s neck then licked behind her ear. “I think tonight I won’t let you sleep…”

“H…ha….i….” The black haired girl shivered and leaned closer to Takamina when her hands encircled Atsuko’s waist and pulled her closer.

“Let me have my desert then.” Minami whispered and her hands slowly started pulling down Acchan’s panties. “Itadakimasu~”


END OF PART 1.
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (OS) Part 1. Jane Doe {Apr 12, 2013}
Post by: kuro808 on April 12, 2013, 12:18:54 AM
Well I like how it is going so far...

The plan seems a little difficult but hope they can succeed and how can Takamina avoid Acchan everytime she is ready for to be seduced XD
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (OS) Part 1. Jane Doe {Apr 12, 2013}
Post by: miyumi on April 12, 2013, 12:53:14 AM
Wah sugoi sakura!!

So many cool scenes and cute ones~

Perv scene with Atsumina... >\\\\\<
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (OS) Part 1. Jane Doe {Apr 12, 2013}
Post by: Haruko on April 12, 2013, 02:54:09 AM
Wah sugoi sakura!!

So many cool scenes and cute ones~

Perv scene with Atsumina... >\\\\\<

hell yeah! :B Jane Doe you are on fire!
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (OS) Part 1. Jane Doe {Apr 12, 2013}
Post by: arrow27 on April 12, 2013, 03:26:37 AM
Minami def has the Jane Doe Persona :D So bold lol.
Thanks for the update! Great chapter :3 Interesting to learn of the connections everyone has with one another ^^
The Atsumina scenes were great and so were the other scenes with the others. Lol @ Yuko. Guess we'll see how they're mission goes :P

Thanks again! I look forward to the next chapter!
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (OS) Part 1. Jane Doe {Apr 12, 2013}
Post by: cisda83 on April 12, 2013, 08:22:38 AM
Wah... Atsuko and Minami are together.... YEAH....  :lol:

Ah... Atsuko unable to resist anything that Minami does to her...

Is there going to be some smut for this?

I hope there is some....

Huh.... Yuko is crazy and reckless... just because Mayu likes the figures of the girl... they are kidnapping the person

In this case is an emperor's daughter... They are going to make an enemy out of the whole country now... if their plan is successful

Is Minami is going to help them out...?

Can't wait to find out more....

Looking forward for some action then...

Thank you for the lovely update

 :heart: :love: :inlove: :wub:
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (OS) Part 1. Jane Doe {Apr 12, 2013}
Post by: Tanchan on April 12, 2013, 08:59:58 AM
 :mon misch:at Takamina being the initiative one in this and Atsuko being reserved, which is great :mon mischief:. Atsuko being the fangirl of Jane Doe is something I'd like to see in the actual Jane Doe PV.

And the princess that they're going to kidnap is Yukirin, isn't it?
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (OS) Part 1. Jane Doe {Apr 12, 2013}
Post by: K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS on April 12, 2013, 10:04:50 AM
Y'know I was so exited when I saw the teaser, then the first update was so ILUEWFNHLEWIFUBHLEWIBFHEWLIFUBHWELIFW!!!!!!

IT'S AWESOMEEEEEEE!!!!

Omg I can't stop fangirling xD

Wow xD Yuko kidnapped Nyannyan from an unwanted wedding xD nice~

Wait.......they are thinking of kidnapping a girl? And not only a girl it's the  emperor’s daughter for god's sake!!

Yuuchan, nice spoiling? xD Also Yuuchan thank you for kidnapping your Nyannyan~ We no wanna Nyannyan with a man~ or any other dude except for Mariko-sama, cuz.........well....yeah....

Thank you for this awesome update!!!!!

Update soon I can't wait!! :D

(I love all of your fanfics/one-shot etc) ^___^

(I was drooling at the last part but don't tell anyone, ok?)
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (OS) Part 1. Jane Doe {Apr 12, 2013}
Post by: TakaminaBG on April 12, 2013, 11:41:13 AM
OHHHHHHH................... CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!  :frustrated:
NOW you MUST make a SMUT for this one!!!!!!! My AtsuMina!!!
Minami is so bold here!!! I LOVE IT!!
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (OS) Part 1. Jane Doe {Apr 12, 2013}
Post by: kahem on April 12, 2013, 01:34:34 PM
WoW I like this fic!
Can't wait for the kidnapping hehe
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (OS) Part 1. Jane Doe {Apr 12, 2013}
Post by: den_takacchan on April 12, 2013, 04:34:04 PM
so good. ! acchan+takmina=  :twothumbs please update! :D
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (OS) Part 1. Jane Doe {Apr 12, 2013}
Post by: chichay12 on April 12, 2013, 05:16:27 PM
sakura-chan!!
The last part is killing me!
“Let me have my desert then.” Minami
whispered and her hands slowly started
pulling down Acchan’s panties. “Itadakimasu~”
kyaaaaa major  :on bleed:
Waiting for part 2!
My god i cant wait..
:on gay:
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (OS) Part 1. Jane Doe {Apr 12, 2013}
Post by: Hirasawaizumi on April 12, 2013, 05:39:48 PM
Nice~~
Me want more!!
AtsuMina is so cute in the story~ :lol:
I like it. Great chapter written.

I shall be waiting patienly! :deco: :deco: :twothumbs
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (OS) Part 2. The Emperor's Daughter {Apr 12, 2013}
Post by: sakura_drop_ on April 12, 2013, 06:02:31 PM

A/N: Everyone, really thank you for this many comments and thank yous!!! :bow:

For me this is a fast update.. I didn't expect to type this so fast but I had some free time up my sleeve and I was also worried... I don't wanna disappoint you with this part... Anyways, here is the second part and I hope you enjoy it, but before that here are the replies to your comments.

@kurosawa87: I'm glad you like it. Yeah, it seems like a mission impossible but you heard Sasshi... It's 97% probability they can succeed. And she's known for giving accurate percentages ;) And yeah, Takamina can't avoid Acchan. And she doesn't want to so it's okay, right?

@miyumi: Thank you darling  :deco: I'm glad you enjoyed it  :cathappy:

@Haruko: hehe~ I like Takamina like this, being on fire, nee?  XD

@arrow27: well, as you will later find out, this is really based on Jane Doe - but the PV is just a past happening in Minami's life - so that's why I made her this bold. And I'm happy with how she came out in this OS

Yeah I was thinking a lot about the connections and I did lots of homework because it's about Royalty, the Emperor and his family, so I had to search more info about them. Well here of course the Emperor is fictional but I based a few things on the real one - as for example the palace and the grounds they live in.

Dem AtsuMina are always hot and yeah, the mission awaits but not yet in this part. I hope you like this update  :bow:

@Rukaeru: nyaha~  XD here's the second part, and thanks for all the support you gave me, jiichan  XD

@cisda83: about the smut... Maybe...not sure about that yet  :P

She's not reckless, she's just really confident in herself and the whole team... also, she loves her sister so why not do her a favor?

You see, she agreed with the kidnapping because she didn't know its emperor's daughter. Later on she saw but she didn't want to disappoint her sister so still went on with the plan.

Minami is of course helping them out. Actually, she's leading them as she's the main one here ;) I'm waiting for some action too, LOL Thank you for reading  :bow:

@Tanchan: who doesn't love dem AtsuMina, especially when Takamina takes the initiative :D Yeah, that kind of PV would be amazing XD

It's Yukirin, you're but of course right!  ;)

@K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS: thank you for fangirling and liking it :bow:

Yes, she did kidnap and I think it was a nice move, nee? :D and yeah, she spoils Mayu but she just loves her sister a lot and wants her to be happy.

Mariko here is a girl and she's taken as you're gonna find out further in this update :D

(thanks for loving my works  :bow:)

(I won't tell a soul  :rofl:)

@TakaminaBG: I love bold Takamina too :D Yeah, I'll think bout that smut but I can't promise anything :D

@kahem: thank you :bow: you'll have to wait for the kidnapping to happen though :)

@den_takacchan: here is your update, thank you :)

@Chichay12: Chichi!! You listened to me and came here to read it!!! Thank you for liking it :deco:

I can't promise the smut part but if I see more interest in it I might write it XD

@Hirasawaizumi: thank you for commenting :bow: Here is the update you waited for :D




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A.L.I.V.E.

Part 2. The Emperor's Daughter

-----‘Reform school’, principal’s office, next week, Monday, Nagoya-----

“And that is why we need your help.” Yuko told the principal. She let Sasshi explain the details of the plan and then put her hopes up to hear a ‘yes’ from the woman.

“I cannot say anything without Jurina knowing all the details, you know that.” The pale raven haired woman answered. “When she wakes up I’m going to ask her about it.”

“Is she still sleeping?..” Mariko asked with a trolling glint in her eyes. “What did you do last night?”

“You know we can’t do anything until she’s legal… I already have a very dangerous hobby that can get me in jail; I don’t wanna drag Jurina in this and go to jail for sleeping with a 15 year old girl.”

“We all know Jurina always agrees with whatever your decision is, Rena, she trusts you a lot. So I assume we can count on you two being a part of this.” Yuko stated with a serious tone. “Now we just need to inform Takamina about it but we cannot get a hold of her.”

“I think I know of a way how to find her.” Rena smiled mysteriously and looked at Mariko. “You don’t happen to have any ideas of who I’m talking about?”

“… Miichan?” A frown appeared on the tall woman’s face but her eyes were full of sadness and longing.

“Who’s Miichan?” Tomochin asked with curiosity.

“..She works at NASA and she’s Jurina’s good friend…” Rena said while still looking at the model woman. Mariko nodded her head and the raven haired girl looked around. “And she’s Mariko’s ex-girlfriend.”

“Say what?!” Kojiharu stopped spacing out and stared at Mariko in disbelief. How come her best friend never told her about this?!

“YOU had a girlfriend?! As in a G.I.R.L.F.R.I.E.N.D.?..” Yuko couldn’t believe their poker face and trolling queen could have dated someone seriously.

“Yeah but… I screwed up…” Shinoda Mariko sighed and turned to Rena. “Leave that to me, I’m going to meet her and ask to help us out.”

“Are you sure…?” The pale woman asked with concern.

“Yeah… I think I owe her an apology and myself a good beating… Just leave it to me…”

There was a knock on the door and a secretary poked her head inside.

“I’m really sorry to interrupt this conversation but… Principal, you have a meeting with Nagao-san's parents in ten minutes… I have prepared all the documents and the parents are already here.”

“Thank you, Manatsu-chan. I’ll be there soon, wait for me a few minutes.” Rena smiled and then, when the secretary left, turned to Mariko. “Do you know her new address?”

“Yeah, don’t worry. There is nothing I don’t know about her. Just leave everything to me. “Mariko repeated the words for the third time with her poker face being seen but they all, especially Haruna, Yuko and Tomochin, knew her too well. She had a determination in her eyes and the longing was present even more than before.

“Okay, we’re going then. I’m leaving Sasshi here so when Jurina wakes up they can look through the plan once again. I trust Jurina’s skills and intuition so if she finds any flaws or anything she feels that needs to be fixed just let her do that.” Yuko said and then all of them left, leaving Sasshi and Rena alone in the office.

“Sasshi, come with me to the meeting. You might find that interesting.” Rena smiled nervously and they both headed to the conference room.


-----Shopping mall, Nagoya-----

“You should have gone there, too. She’s not that scary and she’s really nice.” Mayu said and put a mini skirt away. She picked a T-Shirt with a mouse on it but then put it away after not liking the color. “I know she’s creepy when she’s fighting but… She’s sweet and fun in real life, believe me.”

“After that last mission…I still see her in my dreams… All bloody she takes a dead man’s head and keeps ramming into the wall while giggling and laughing aloud.” Tomo~mi shivered and picked a random dress. She went to the cabin and started undressing.

“If you want that image off your head, you have to meet her when she’s not fighting.” Mayu spotted a silver hoodie. “Oh, what a nice piece of clothing!!” She grabbed it and ran to the other cabin to try it on.

“Yeah…” Tomo~mi sighed. She closed her eyes and leaned her forehead against the mirror. Tomo~mi was still in her underwear, not in the mood to try on the dress or any other piece of clothing.

Warm arms encircled her waist and pulled her into a tight hug. Tomo~mi leaned closer to the person behind her and relaxed at once. Her cheek was kissed by a pair of gentle lips and all she could do was smile.

“Hey…” Tomo~mi greeted the person she knew so well. She didn’t even need to open her eyes to know who was here. “How it went?”

“Things are fine, don’t worry. I know you are scared, Kasai Tomomi. I was freaked out then too but…” Tomochin tightened the hug. “In person she’s really warm and nice. I was pleasantly surprised…”

“Thank you…” Kasai felt thankful for her girlfriend’s efforts to try and make her feel better. “Can you…”

“…kiss you?” The fashionista ended the question and licked behind the sultry girl’s ear. “With pleasure.”

She turned Tomo~mi around and gently pushed her against the mirror so they faced each other. Then the slightly taller girl leaned closer and conquered the wet lips with her own ones, while rapidly taking off her own clothes.


-----Minegishi residence, Tuesday, Tokyo-----

“Neechan, I’m going out!”

“Okay, just make sure you come back tomorrow until 7pm.”

“Neechan… Can’t I stay for the whole week?”

The doorbell rang and Miyuki went to open the doors.

“Oh, good day Mariko-sama.”

“Hello, Milky. Is your sister home?”

“Who’s there?!” Miichan asked and came from the kitchen to the hall. “… Milky, you can go...”

“So it’s for the whole week then.” Milky grinned and kissed her sister’s cheek. “Bye bye!!”

After she left, Mariko went inside and closed the door.

“What are you doing here…?” The smaller woman asked in an uneven voice even though she tried her best to keep it calm and steady.

“…I’m sorry… I really am… I…”

“I think it’s too late to apologize after so much time passed…” Tears were about to fall down her cheeks but she tried really hard to keep them from showing up. “I know I lied to you but you were also not telling me the truth… Yet you blamed only me and it hurt… I…”

She was cut off by the rough and passionate kiss which made all of her anger disappear into thin air. She loved this troll woman too much and she cried too many times these past months. She answered the kiss while tightly holding onto the taller girl. The air around them became tense and hot and it looked like some certain actions were about to happen but then Mariko pulled away a bit.

“I really am sorry… Just…I felt betrayed when I found out you work for NASA and I thought I just couldn’t trust you anymore. Then I talked with Yuko about it and…I just had to find some courage but I couldn’t… I still don’t have it but…Yuko and…I…and we all need your help with something and… I saw that as a push for me to come and fix my wrong doings.”

“…What do you need…?”

“You. I want you back in my life. With every day passing I feel older and older and when I reflect on my actions…not all of them were proud-worthy. I know I don’t deserve you but… I cannot see myself living without you anymore and enjoying my life alone…”

“Mariko… … I… …” Miichan was not sure on how to react. Her head was still a bit in turmoil but her heart and body were screaming from all the longing. “I love you….so much….”

“I love you too, Minami.” Mariko hugged the shorter woman tightly. “I promise I won’t ever again act like a jerk towards you.”

“No more secrets between us, okay?” Miichan asked and was kissed by a pair of thirsty lips.

“No more secrets.” Shinoda hugged her renewed girlfriend and caressed her back. “So, where did Milky go?”

“She has a new girlfriend, Sayaka I think… And I believe this one is really serious…”

“Oh, okay. Hey, I don’t wanna talk about work now but… It’s really important.” Mariko started.

“Okay, I’m listening.”


----- Tokyo Imperial Palace, Wednesday, Tokyo-----

“Yukirin, you looked stunning tonight.”

“Thank you…” Yuki smiled weakly and turned to her fiancé. “Sae-kun…would you mind if I go to the garden for the walk alone?..”

“No, of course not. You have a lot to think about, I understand. I’ll see you in the morning then. Goodnight.” Sae placed a kiss on Yuki’s forehead.

“Goodnight.” Yuki put on a warm cashmere shawl and went outside.

She had so many things in her head she was about to explode. An upcoming marriage, studying for exams, dealing with loneliness and her parents’ ignorance towards who she is; it all were such a burden to her she wanted to disappear.

One year ago her parents found out she’s gay. They caught her making out with one of her maids. They acted like what they saw never even happened, though many things changed in her life after that evening. Amidst the other problems she had to face, there was one that made her relaxed unlike the others.

Yuki knew Miyazawa Sae since childhood as he is a Prime Minister’s son, so they’ve spent many days playing together with the other Royal Kids. They were good friends and he knew about her condition. He always was on her side and approved of whatever she did. Sae even said to Yuki that after their marriage she will be able to see other women if she wanted to. The raven haired girl knew Sae had a crush on one of her dad’s mistresses so she understood why her fiancé gave her freedom. However, messing with Emperor’s possessions is a danger zone one wouldn’t want to cross.

Yuki was tired of this double life, of the things she had to do as The Princess. Sometimes she wished to disappear or to be kidnapped by a bunch of female ninjas. She also had a dream about escaping the palace. She would meet a cute girl and they would live together, with Yuki taking care of her.

Kashiwagi had many more dreams and visions of how she escapes her family but things never changed. Now she not only had a male fiancé, but also male maids. Her parents didn’t show it but they probably were afraid she might hook up with yet another maid so they removed all the females but her family members from her life. They even got rid of her best friend Haachan, sending the whole Katayama family to USA.  She really had no other options but to marry Sae-kun.

The raven haired girl looked around. No one was following her, so she left the garden through the secret passage in the wall surrounding the area and went to the playground. The Kitanomaru Garden was a public place and at daytime it had many visitors. At the evenings, though, it was empty and she just wanted to be alone because it was her favorite place, other than the Sakura tree she herself planted when she was little.

She wanted to go and sit on a swing but then she noticed a girl in a silver hoodie on it. She was sleeping and looked so cute that Yuki had really strong urges to poke her cheeks and kiss that cute mouth of hers. But then the girl opened her eyes and locked her gaze with Yuki’s. It felt like the time stopped around them. Yuki imagined running away with this girl and it felt great. Until the girl stood up and ran away from Yuki, leaving the raven haired girl dumbfounded.

“Do I really emit black aura?..”


-----Oshima residence, Thursday, Tochigi-----

“Are all the preparations done? We cannot make any mistakes.” Yuko said authoritatively. Haruna’s head was on Yuko’s lap and the squirrel’s hands were busy stroking the cat’s hair, but her mind was working on full power.

“Yes, everything is fine.“ Sasshi answered and continued typing.

“She saw me yesterday in the park, just as we planned.” Mayu happily announced and a huge grin appeared on her face. “I carefully asked around. She’s not very happy with the upcoming marriage with that sassy Miyazawa. It makes me more eager to kidnap her and snatch her away from him.”

“Mhm, good. Where’s Mariko? Any news from her?” Tomochin asked while painting the last fingernail in dark red.

Just then the doors opened revealing the person they talked about.

“Tadaima~” Mariko’s happy voice echoed and everyone looked at the doorway. There was not only Mariko but also Takamina and two black haired girls, one of them holding onto Minami tightly.

“Bakamina, you’re back!” Yuko happily exclaimed making the new girl giggle and Minami blush.

“I told you to not call me like that!”

“Why? Do you prefer the midget?” Yuko teased and everyone laughed while Takamina just pouted and let out a ‘humph’.

“So, did you finish the childish bantering? I want to introduce to you my girlfriend Minegishi Minami.” Mariko said and pushed Miichan slightly forward.

“Um, hello. I am called Miichan by my friends and I work at NASA. It’s nice to meet you all.” The bubbly black haired girl bowed and smiled widely.

They all introduced themselves one by one and then Minami looked at Acchan.

“Well, now it’s your turn.”

“Um… Maeda Atsuko desu. Yoroshiku onegaishimasu.” She bowed politely and smiled.

“So you’re Takamina’s No.1 fan, huh?” Tomochin asked and smiled. “Well, nice to meet you.”

“I brought her here because I feel like this place is safer for her than her own apartment.” Minami explained and gently held Atsuko’s hand.

“Did you two…” Yuko’s perverted sensors felt the wibe and she just had to ask the question.

“Yeah, they sure did sleep together. When we came to get them we had to wait for more than an hour while they took a shower.” Mariko teased and everyone laughed. Acchan blushed and Takamina just smiled mysteriously.

“Well, she’s an attractive woman, is it bad if I sleep with her?”

“Minami…” The black haired girl blushed and hid her face in Takamina’s neck.

“Haha, you two are cute together.” Yuko teased more and then turned to Haruna. “I’ll go and bring the Matsuis down here. But before that…”

Yuko wanted to snuggle in her wife’s boobs but got smacked on the head.

“I..ttai~ NyanNyan, why?” The short girl whined but was awarded with a hot kiss soon after.

“Sorry, but I prefer these actions to be done not in public.” Haruna pushed her wife towards the stairs. “Go and invite them. And look for Tomo~mi too.”

“Mou… Fine.” Yuko wanted to hug Atsuko but noticed Minami’s glare and then giggled. “Relax, midget, I have my wife so your girl is yours.”

“Just go, I’m hungry and if they don’t come here soon I’m gonna eat what I have closest to me. That means the mission will have to wait. I don’t think you want that to happen, now do you?” Takamina joked around and got lightly elbowed by Acchan.

“Okay! Have fun!” Yuko also joked but went to invite the other three girls for dinner.


END OF PART 2.
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (OS) Part 2. The Emperor's Daughter {Apr 12, 2013}
Post by: 7sam14 on April 12, 2013, 07:59:56 PM
Yahoooo!!! :on woohoo:
an Update!!!
Awwwww!!!
Atsumina is so Sweet!!!  :mon lovelaff:
Can't wait for the Operation to Start!!
I'll be waiting for u'r next Update!!!
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (OS) Part 2. The Emperor's Daughter {Apr 12, 2013}
Post by: kuro808 on April 12, 2013, 08:44:10 PM
Anyways for this fic, yay for operation to start :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (OS) Part 2. The Emperor's Daughter {Apr 12, 2013}
Post by: arrow27 on April 12, 2013, 08:47:07 PM
great update :D Thank you very much :D I indeed enjoyed the chapter ^^ It was great when everyone got together/met up in the end. The introducitions were  sweet ^^ Everyone is so interesting lol

Looking forward to ur next update as always!

Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (OS) Part 2. The Emperor's Daughter {Apr 12, 2013}
Post by: TakaminaBG on April 12, 2013, 09:56:33 PM
Can't wait for the mission.
TomoTomo.... so BOLD!!! God I love Tomochin when she is all.... you know... sexy, bold!
MariMii.... so passionate for each other!
And of course my AtsuMina!!! Atsuko, a tsendere like always!! And my Minami..... SO BOLD!!! God I LOVE her this way!!! So if they don't bring her food, she will eat the closest thing to her, huh?? I can't say that I mind that.
And sakura - san!!! Seriously, you should write a smut!!!
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (OS) Part 2. The Emperor's Daughter {Apr 12, 2013}
Post by: K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS on April 13, 2013, 12:13:08 AM
This is......*hugs* I love you~!!
This is sooo awesome that I can't anymore xD

Update soon I can't wait!!
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part 2. The Emperor's Daughter {Apr 12, 2013}
Post by: kahem on April 13, 2013, 02:33:41 AM
Tomotomo!!!! Yeah!!!!!
Poor Yukirin but I think her situation is funny lol
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part 2. The Emperor's Daughter {Apr 12, 2013}
Post by: Kazumiyu on April 13, 2013, 02:39:10 AM
Great update can't wait to see what happen next!
ヘ(^_^ヘ)(ノ^_^)ノ
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part 2. The Emperor's Daughter {Apr 12, 2013}
Post by: FlameHazeKatsu on April 13, 2013, 03:39:46 AM
I was planning on going to sleep...but I came here to check if there's anything then...here it is!   :on gay: :on gay: :on gay:  this woke me up....  :on lol: :on lol: :on lol: ...ahh...suge~  :farofflook:
.... and...atsumina... Minami being bold is the best xD lol :nya: :nya: :nya:
thanks for this!  :on GJ: can't wait to see what happens next~  :ding: :ding: :ding:
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part 2. The Emperor's Daughter {Apr 12, 2013}
Post by: Haruko on April 13, 2013, 04:28:53 AM
I was planning on going to sleep...but I came here to check if there's anything then...here it is!   :on gay: :on gay: :on gay:  this woke me up....  :on lol: :on lol: :on lol: ...ahh...suge~  :farofflook:
.... and...atsumina... Minami being bold is the best xD lol :nya: :nya: :nya:
thanks for this!  :on GJ: can't wait to see what happens next~  :ding: :ding: :ding:

ohh jane doe is so.. sexy!
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part 2. The Emperor's Daughter {Apr 12, 2013}
Post by: Tanchan on April 13, 2013, 11:01:34 AM
“Do I really emit black aura?..”

I laughed at this :lol:

That's right, Takamina, admitting that Atsuko is yours now so no one will try to snatch her away from you, not that anyone has a chance anyway seeing how Atsuko is love-struck over her Jane Doe.
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part 2. The Emperor's Daughter {Apr 12, 2013}
Post by: cisda83 on April 13, 2013, 02:42:11 PM
Rena has a good mind... knowing she can not cross the line when dealing with Jurina...  :)

Ah... Rena is a principal... Mariko was Miichan's gf... Jurina seems to have great skill...

I can just see the image of Gekikara... Yeah... I would have a nightmare to if I saw that kind of action happening in front of me.

Wah... so hot... WTomo... but it's in public place....   :inlove:

Ah... so it was about Miichan's job at NASA that they broke up.... Eh... very weird reason to get angry about....

Eh... Yuki is a 'L' and she is engaged to Sae... and Sae has a crush on Emperor's mistress... 'Sayaka'?

Ah... Yuki is going to get her wish coming true... some Ninjas are going to kidnap her for real...   :cow:

Ah... They are going to start thier plan soon...

Yeah everyone are there preparing to execute the plan...

Can't wait to see the next action...

Thank you for the lovely update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part 2. The Emperor's Daughter {Apr 12, 2013}
Post by: Archer1992 on April 14, 2013, 01:57:02 AM
great FF! ^3^ plis continue!!!!

Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part 2. The Emperor's Daughter {Apr 12, 2013}
Post by: stv_wong on April 15, 2013, 11:38:35 AM
Hooray!!! You've come back... :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Oh.... God... they're all so horny  XD
Title: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part 3. The Past and The Present {Apr 25, 2013}
Post by: sakura_drop_ on April 25, 2013, 01:05:04 PM

A/N: I fished this out from the third page... 'm so sorry for not updating this for such a long time...  :banghead: :bow:

Ah, I wrote this update a long ago but was so lazy to type it out... And had many other things to do...like other fanfics and chores and studies and life issues overall...

I'll say this now. you know that right now it is spring? Well, I'm love struck!  :nervous :roll: To be more precise, I'm love struck for quite a huge amount of time but I just didn't have the courage t say it to everyone. I won't tell the person's name though  XD (I wonder if a few of you are thinking about a few names in your head  :nervous well, I won't tell you if ou are right, just for now  :sweatdrop: )

How's that related to this update? Nohow. I just wanted to share this  XD

Anyway, back to the update. As always, before the update comes replies to your comments, which leads to...

Thank you from the bottom of my heart for such nice and so many comments!!! I really appreciate your support and it keeps me going. It makes me realize I didn't lose my abilities to write interesting stories and that my 'fame'aura has not faded  :sweatdrop:  Silent readers, I love you all too  :bow:

REPLIES.

@7sam14: Yahoo, a comment!!  :cow: :nervous Yesh, AtsuMina is sweet and about the operation.. You'll have to wait a bit more *troll author*  :twisted:

@kurosawa87: sorry to be such a troll writer... Operation still has yet to start but I hope you like this chapter nevertheless  :bow:

@arrow27: it's good that they met and instantly liked each other, nee?  XD AtsuMina FTW!!  :cow: thsnk you for finding the characters interesting  :)

@TakaminaBG: I am waiting for the mission too  :lol:

I felt that in this story there was no way I will let her be a Tsundere. You know why? The TomoTomo are graduating and I felt I have to show the best qualities of them in this fic. So in my opinion, the feelings they have for each other, the gentleness of Tomo~mi and the BOLDness and caring of Tomochin just had to be the appealing points  :roll:

MariMii is one of those rare shipping couples but I find them more fun and to my liking that MariHaru (sorry, no offence  :nervous I like MAriHaru, I write about them too.. It's just I'm more a MariMii shipper  XD )

A Tsundere Acchan is always a win, nee?  ;) Bold Minami in this story is my secret weapon and also my secret crush  :nervous I mean, I always like it when Acchan teases our dense Bakamina, but my guilty pleasure was always TakAcchan, with bold Minami and shy Tsundere Acchan  :roll: :wub: So I don't mind her eating Acchan instead of food but that would be...smut...yeah... I'll think about it  :lol:

@K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS: Ah...   :deco: I'm happy you liked it... I love you...too...I guess..?  :nervous in a friendly way as a writer-reader of course  XD

@kahem: I knew you're gonna like TomoTomo  :grin: and I agree with you, Yukirin's situation s funny  XD but soon it's going to change into more funny and more...weird...complicated...tempting...etc?  :sweatdrop: :lol:

@Kazumiyu: here is the update  ;)

@FlameHazeKatsu: Oh, this woke you up? Should I say sorry or should I be like  :twisted:  :nervous

Like I mentioned already, BOLD Minami is my guilty pleasure  XD :wub: I'm glad you like it  :bow:

nothing much happens in this chapter but... You'll see when you read  XD

@Haruko: Who doesn't love sexy Minami? We all do  :wub: thanks for reading  :bow:

@Tanchan: Well, the girl ran away from her, so she thought it's like others said, her black aura scaring the 'kid'  :nervous :lol: oh Yuki, you  :smhid :doh: XD And yesh, Minami makes sure everyone knows who is the 'owner' of Acchan  :nervous but if you say that Acchan is love sruck now... I wonder what will you say later when the story proceeds and Acchan does something... *zips mouth* I can't spoil, now can I?  :nervous :lol:

@cisda83: One should never cross the line when it comes to Juju in this story, and you'll see why later (not in this chapter though sorry XD )

I always imagined Rena like a composed person who can be a good leader if needed (apparently, Aki-P thinks so too, she's Team E captain now  :cow: ) and Juju is skilled in real life (just think about all she achieved at being only 15 *dizzy* ) so I am not drifting far from reality here  ;)

I think I am always going to mention this, but Gekikara was, is and always will be EPIC in every story, movie, TV show, book, dreams, etc  :wub: :wub:

TomoTomo sexlove has no boundaries, be it time or place XD  :nervous

About MariMii, it will be revealed later, the whole truth behind their brake up. Well, just a little heads up... She works for NASA, and Mariko is enemies with police. So of course at first one would be taken aback...  :)

Well, I thought a lot and decided to make MaYuki a comic relief here, so prepare your stomachs, though not in this chapter yet XD Yes, she will be kidnapped...maybe...?  :nervous :nervous *no spoiling*

Just wait a little bit more until the operation starts.. Read this chapter and enjoy  :bow:

@Archer1992: Thank you  :bow: OC I will continue, here is the update  :cathappy:

@stv_wong: ah...yeah, they are  :nervous you know, while they still can... The serious mission-kidnapping awaits...  :nervous so they do what they can while they can  :nervous :lol:




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A.L.I.V.E.

Part 3. The Past and The Present

-----Tokyo Imperial Palace, Friday, Tokyo-----

“Ojousama, these are your new bodyguards. The short one is Kai, the tall one is Mario and the last one is Thomas, he came from America so he has an accent. Please be nice to them and don’t treat them as you treated your other bodyguards.”

“You can go, Masana.” Yuki excused the only woman who worked in the palace and sighed. Oya Masana was a married woman and she also was the best strategist the Emperor could have. Also, because Yuki had no intentions to talk to the males working in the palace, Masana became the messenger and nearly the right hand for the princess.

Yuki looked at the three guards who were standing straight and waiting to be dismissed so they can check the area. She wanted to toy around and because she never talked with men – probably they heard the rumors – she decided to play a bit.

“So, Kai, tell me… How come such a short man can work as a bodyguard…? If you were to stand in front of 2 meter tall thief I don’t think you’d be able to protect me.” Kashiwagi mocked the guard. It’s not like she was a bitch or something and the guard had some charm but she always did what she wanted so to make her father angry. She felt the need of attention and also she wanted them to understand they were not going to change who she is.

“With all respect ojousama, I don’t think the height is the thing that matters the most. I am swift, I have a good sight and my hearing is perfect. I have good reflexes and that man who is this tall won’t be able to go through narrow places as well as I can. So I think I have more advantage than any other tall thief. Rest assured, I can really protect you.” Minami said and smiled in her mind. She of course can protect this princess but if only they knew she was going to do the opposite…

“Humph… Well then, your partner Mario is too tall for this job if we’re talking by your standards.”

“I might be too tall for the running around and chasing rabbits but I am not too tall to be able to shield you from any upcoming dangers.” Mariko spoke. She so wanted to grab the princess and toss her in the sack…

“Then what can you say about yourself, Thomas? Or should I speak with you in English? Then let me invite my translator.” Yuki felt like talking back to them was becoming a hard task to do as they felt somewhat nice and composed. She had the hunch she can make great allies of them, she just didn’t know why it felt that way.

“We have a saying in my country. {Don’t beat around the bush.} It means - if translated to Japanese – to not go around and just say straight away what’s on your mind, so sorry for doing so.” Itano spoke.

“When did you talk straight to me?” Yukirin was amused by these three guards.

“Just now. If you want to hate your father, do so with all the pleasure. But we are not at fault for his actions. We are here to protect you and save you from any threats you might get so please cooperate with us.” Tomochin looked straight at the ojousama, right into her eyes and she noticed she got straight to the point. “Score!

“Fine. Let me rest for now, I am really tired. Dismissed.” Yuki sighed and waited for them to leave the room. When she finally was alone she looked around. “Where is my shawl…?”

She noticed it under the bed, knelt down and reached for it, then stood up and put it on. She was determined to go to the park and wait even until someone came looking for her. She wanted to meet that girl really badly.


-----Café ‘Nagareboshi’, about one month later, Tuesday afternoon, Kanagawa-----

“Don’t you miss Tomochin?” the black haired asked.

“Of course I miss her, chiyuu~” Kasai sighed and brought the full tray to the table with two couples who were chatting about things.

“Acchan… You miss Minami too, don’t you?” the geek looked at Maeda.

“Un… But…” Here Atsuko’s eyes sparkled and she squealed silently. “She looks so gorgeous on TV!!! Did you see how cool she looked in that outfit yesterday on the news?!!”

“Slow down and lower your voice… Nee, any news from Yuko and Rena?” Sasshi asked and closed her laptop lid.

“No… Haruna didn't leave her room for a week now; she’s so worried something might have happened. And Jurina is skipping school too…” Maeda sipped some tea and laid her head on the table surface. “One week left and then everything will go back to normal… Ah, I can’t wait so long… But I have to…”

Miichan sat next to them and smiled at the girls.

“Hello!!! Wanna know why I’m happy? Well, apparently things are going to get better! It’s tomorrow!!!” Miichan was so happy. Drooling over Mariko’s pictures didn’t help the longing and she wanted to see her girlfriend as fast as possible.

“Eh..? Miichan, why?” Tomo~mi asked and sat down next to them.

“When you close the café, then I’ll explain. As for now, some ice cream would be so refreshing…”


-----Tokyo Imperial Palace, evening, Tuesday, Tokyo-----

Minami scanned the surroundings one again then glanced at her wristwatch. They had half an hour until ojousama goes to her usual meeting with Mayu. She sat on the ground and leaned her back against the tree. Takamina loved everything about this job, being undercover and creating plans. When she was doing her first job she had so many doubts and she had to sacrifice so much… Now she doesn't regret anything but then she didn't know anything about this job and felt burdened by the huge responsibility she had to carry on her shoulders.


->flashback<-

The last ray of sun disappeared in the horizon when she entered the building. She was full of doubt and insecurity. She had a mission - to steal a diamond necklace from the certain American actress. Actually, that necklace belonged not to the actress to begin with, so it was more like retrieving. Minami knew it all was in her hands and if she was to fail... But if she was to succeed, then she'd become a full-fledged member of A.L.I.V.E.

Takahashi was dressed in a black get-up that was nowhere near formal but it looked really cool. In this building she really was out of place because all women were wearing nice and neat dresses and men were wearing suits. Yet she herself felt comfortable in what she was wearing and she didn't care what others thought. She was by all means oozing a very cool aura and men were staring at her with respect, and some were even asking for a dance or to drink together, but she politely refused all of the invitations. Women's jealousy and mocking were everywhere in the air but Minami didn't care even one bit. All she was thinking about was the mission.

This party was held by a very important person in society and it was a private feast but Yuko took care of Minami's invitation, and so the guards let her through. She looked around, past the raging faces and past the staring men, observing the surroundings and looking for that woman. But so far she was not here and Minami proceed further. She left the main dance hall and was walking down the side-way terrace of the building. That was when she saw the actress coming closer, surrounded by lots of bodyguards. Minami smirked and stared right into the woman's sunglasses. Then she started to run, straight into the woman.

When she was few steps from the actress and her guards, she hummed a melody and the lights were out. She was wearing a small spy earpiece and on the other side of it there was Mayu, who hacked into the security system and took full control of it without the security noticing. Minami took the remaining steps and grabbed the necklace from the woman's neck, pulled it and started running. She heard the woman screaming and giving orders. The midget was satisfied and hummed the melody again. The lights were on and the guards spotted her entering the hall to the rooftop.

Before coming here Minami and Yuko studied the plans of this place so she knew where to go. She was not hurrying too much though as she need the guards to catch up to her. The short women blast the door open and ran to the very edge of the rooftop. She scanned the horizon until she noticed the white flag in the forest near the Tokyo Tower. It was her chance. She started counting. Soon the guards appeared on the rooftop and started getting closer. She smiled and with the last count she tossed the necklace with a certain power. She hoped her counting was right and when the necklace shone bright in response to the tower's light, the short woman knew she did well.

The midget turned back to the mesmerized and surprised guards who were staring at the Tower, unable to think of a way on how to get the necklace back. As they were pondering on what to do, two shadows crept out of their hiding places, the height difference between them made Takamina chuckle. Yet then she remembered she was the smallest one here and she face-palmed herself. The shadows approached unsuspecting guards and in a few minutes half of them were knocked unconscious.

"Oi, midget, good job!" shouted Yuko and ducked, in order to avoid an oncoming blow. The guards had guns but the women were unarmed and and surprisingly the guards didn't use their ammunition. It was of course their mistake as they didn't know house skilled these women were.

"Don't call me midget! I have a name..." Minami pouted and took down another guard with a kick to his groin area and such a punch to his stomach that he lost consciousness immediately.

"Bakamina, behind your back!" Mariko informed and KO'ed two men who came in from downstairs. More reinforcements were coming but the females didn't look even one bit surprised. They were not tired at all and this was more fun to them than the guards expected.

Takahashi frowned at another nickname from the troll's lips, and with a spinning kick she knocked out the guard who was creeping behind her. The three women fought to their hearts' content and briefly exchanged their victorious numbers. To no surprise they had an equal number of guards knocked and there was only one left. This one had a gun pointed at them. Yuko just laughed and gave high five to Mariko.

Minami ignored his gun, ran into him with all might and then headbutted him. The poor guy didn't even realize what happened and he was unconscious in a matter of seconds. The smallest woman grinned and pumped her fist up in the air. If she had any doubts before, now she was totally sure this was what she always wanted to do. To fight for the poor and for the justice was just the right thing for her.

"Good job! Now let's get out of here!" Yuko gave high five to Minami too, and then Takamina hummed the melody again. They all counted to five and jumped from the roof into the night. Actually, they jumped so to catch a rope and they succeeded. A rope was tied to a helicopter controlled by Sasshi. The three women climbed the rope into the helicopter; their faces shining like the diamond necklace. They felt accomplished.

Sasshi turned on autopilot and turned at the three.

"Takahashi-san, you were so impressive! How... Tell me how come you were able to toss the necklace precisely on the spot near the flag?" The hetare girl was so impressed she now had her mind only on Takamina.

"Ah..." The shortest woman sheepishly rubbed the back of her head. "I counted the seconds...?"

"That doesn't explain anything..." Yuko sighed. "Nevermind, we all have our own ways of achieving our goals. Give me that necklace, I want to see it!"

Sashihara took the wooden box and passed it to the squirrel. They all opened it and stared at the beautiful diamond necklace.

"Before we return it... You're going to wear it tonight, right?" Mariko asked. "Everyone wants to see you perform. An ex-member of the street band has to sing."

"Yeah, you should sing tonight. For example, that cool and beautiful song 'Jane Doe'." Yuko smiled and touched lightly the necklace, then closed the lid.

"Un..." Minami ignored the nickname this time, she was thinking hard. "Jane Doe, huh..."”


->end of flashback<-


Minami smiled while reminiscing on the past. Then she felt a pat on her shoulder and opened her eyes. Mariko and Tomchin were going after Yukirin already. The shortest girl stood up and went after them too. The three guards stood by the secret opening in the wall and guarded the secret meeting.


"Mayu!" Yukirin was happy to see her friend and they both hugged each other.

"Kashiwagi-san..." Mayu buried her face in those round huge oppai and remained still for a while, inhaling the sweet scent. Yuki blushed and patted Mayu's head.

"So, how was your day?" The princess asked. All she could hear was some murmur which tickled her skin and made her shiver. "M..mayu..."

"She is so mine already..." the shorter girl smirked in her mind and pulled back a bit. Then she looked up and smiled. "Just the usual day. Going to school, which was boring, then passing the day watching anime. And yours?"

"Boring too... I spent the whole day accompanying mother to all kinds of meetings. We had no breaks, I had no time to eat. Now the family is having dinner but I just have no mood to eat with them. And...I wanted to meet you badly." The taller one looked away shyly.

"Oh.." Mayu's smile was gone and replaced by the seriousness. "You should really eat. Maybe...wanna go to some café with me?"

"I'd love to but...people will recognize me all at once... I will eat later."

"Oh, right.." The cyborg pretended to be clueless but the gears in her head were already tuning with all might. This kidnapping might turn out easier than they thought and they might even have to do nothing to achieve their...her goals.


-----Hotel "Meetan's Guilty Pleasures", room No. 69, just past the midnight, Wednesday, Tokyo-----

"Yuko-san... Aren't we supposed to take care of some things?" Rena asked. Her body was feeling too hot but she still tried to think clearly.

"Rena... Such a nice scent..." Yuko kept nuzzling in the taller girl's neck. "Let me rest tonight. We did nearly all the preparations and we still have time for the last one..."

"Ngh...ah..." The raven haired girl couldn't keep her voice in when the squirrel sunk her teeth into the pale exposed skin. Soon the room was filled with sounds of moaning, sucking, licking, kissing and...love making.


END OF PART 3.
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part 3. The Past and The Present {Apr 25, 2013}
Post by: miyumi on April 25, 2013, 01:44:44 PM
Wah Sakura you perv!!!  :mon blood:

The ending was just... Wah I can't even think right!  :mon lovelaff:

Woah Minami's past is seriously cool  :mon kungfu:

Can't wait to hear more from you so update soon!  :mon pray2:
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part 3. The Past and The Present {Apr 25, 2013}
Post by: yuukimoko on April 25, 2013, 02:42:31 PM
*cough cough* hm hmmm! I finally decided to read this, and I can say that I had a very enjoyable time reading it!! MaYuki >w<   


Thank you Saku Saku
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part 3. The Past and The Present {Apr 25, 2013}
Post by: kuro808 on April 25, 2013, 03:20:10 PM
Takamina's adventure was a sticking point in the chapter and the three unusual guards Yukirin have

Then the ending : drool:
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part 3. The Past and The Present {Apr 25, 2013}
Post by: cisda83 on April 25, 2013, 04:01:05 PM
Wah... Yuki is so naughty... Kai, Mario and Thomas are so good... able to give very smart replies to the questions

Ara, They need to separate from their partners for more than a month... Poor them... missing one another...

I like the used of Jane Doe MV as Minami's past...

Ah... Both Mayu and Yuki are so cute together

Eh... Rena and Yuko together...? Are they cheating on their partner?

What's going to happen next

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the Update

 :wub: :inlove: :heart: :love:
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part 3. The Past and The Present {Apr 25, 2013}
Post by: K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS on April 25, 2013, 04:49:33 PM
Sakura_drop_-sama!!

Thank you for this awesome fic TT___TT *hugs and kisses* xD

Wait! You don't love me like I love you D: *cries in a corner*

Takamidget *jaw droops* AWESOME!!

Haha xD Acchan, Tomo and Miichan miss their lovers :P

Juju and Nyannyan D: noooo~

Yuko what the HELL ARE YOU DOING WITH Rena!!!??!?!?!?!

Awesome update as always :D

Update soon I can't wait :P
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part 3. The Past and The Present {Apr 25, 2013}
Post by: kahem on April 25, 2013, 10:44:45 PM
"Hotel "Meetan's Guilty Pleasures", room No. 69, just past the midnight, Wednesday, Tokyo"

This line made me smitk hahaha
OMFG!!!! Yuko is cheating on Kojiharu with Rena!!! Why?! Yuko do you do this to your NyanNyan?!!!
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part 3. The Past and The Present {Apr 25, 2013}
Post by: Haruko on April 26, 2013, 03:06:47 AM
wait what?! I think its a nyanyan´s nightmare right? its imposible that Yuko cheats kojiharu.. o.o
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part 3. The Past and The Present {Apr 25, 2013}
Post by: Tanchan on April 26, 2013, 05:19:33 AM
Yuko and Rena :O. At first I thought my eyes deceived me but on second read...well I hope it's just a nightmare of Haruna like Haruko said.

@sakura-san: Is Acchan going to do more bold things to her midget XD?
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part 3. The Past and The Present {Apr 25, 2013}
Post by: stv_wong on April 26, 2013, 03:09:18 PM
"Hotel "Meetan's Guilty Pleasures", room No. 69, just past the midnight, Wednesday, Tokyo"

This line made me smitk hahaha
OMFG!!!! Yuko is cheating on Kojiharu with Rena!!! Why?! Yuko do you do this to your NyanNyan?!!!

The bolded part is definitely LOL  :lol: :lol:
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part 3. The Past and The Present {Apr 25, 2013}
Post by: Hii_chan on April 26, 2013, 06:43:46 PM
Minami you're so cool
I want to see the next chap now
and Saku-chan, I want a long chap about this midnight in perv, too. :cathappy: :cathappy:
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part 3. The Past and The Present {Apr 25, 2013}
Post by: amachan48 on May 02, 2013, 12:36:28 PM
hai Sakura-san. this is my first comment even though I had read this fic since last month  :nervous

I want to say that your fic is great and I very like it  :mon lovelaff:

and I also like minami being so bold in here  :luvluv1:
now, I want to comment for the chapter 3  :glasses:

when I read YukoRena scene, i was like....... :shock: :mon wtf: YUKO-SAMA!!! WHAT R YOU DOING WITH RENA-CHAN???!!!!  :tantrum:

please, update it soon  :byebye:
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part 3. The Past and The Present {Apr 25, 2013}
Post by: bunny_rabbit on May 03, 2013, 01:02:17 AM
nice work as always... :on GJ:

Meetan's Guilty Pleasures...nice name there

the ending...YukoRena :on bleed: need the full version of them :on bleed:
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part 3. The Past and The Present {Apr 25, 2013}
Post by: sakura_drop_ on May 03, 2013, 03:30:36 PM
Mai Chan's fan art!! I am so happy to get one!!!

(http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/123/4/8/a_l_i_v_e__by_javawakkiz-d63xjag.jpg) (http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/123/4/8/a_l_i_v_e__by_javawakkiz-d63xjag.jpg)

CLICK to get full size!


I'll try to update this when all people that are still reading - you know who you are - finishes reading it!
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part 3. The Past and The Present {Apr 25, 2013}
Post by: POPCAT on May 04, 2013, 03:05:14 PM
Ahhh  :cathappy: Takamina so cool :twothumbs

Yuko and Rena doing smexy things :shocked.................NOOoooo!!!!!

Yuko think about nyan nyan :banghead:

And Rena-sama think about puppy jurinas feelings :(

There must be a explenation for this rigth  :panic:

Sakura YOU shall explane you'r self  :smhid
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part 3. The Past and The Present {Apr 25, 2013}
Post by: TK.Yuu on May 08, 2013, 09:14:00 PM
Unexpected move Yuko~!!!!  :shocked :shocked :shocked :shocked

I didn't expect her to cheat!! This should be an illusion of nyan nyan!!! :angry: :angry: peace! :lol:

I like the drawing by the way!

As expected of Mai-chan  : :w00t:  always draw and stuff :3

I'm still waiting for her manga,hopefully it will come eventually.

ANYWAYS!!! I am waiting for chapter 4 Saku!!! make sure it's just a bad nightmare of Kojiharu!!! :angry: :angry: ahahaha just kiddng~  :P2




Ganbatte ne~  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part 3. The Past and The Present {Apr 25, 2013}
Post by: immortal_K on May 10, 2013, 12:39:04 PM

A mandatory comment =p, Saku threaten to not update until I comment *pouts* soooo, I've finish reading but having some difficulty commenting on my stupid phone... So I'll fix this up when I get on a computer. Or Saku can I verbally tell you if I dot get back to this fast enough? Don't make your readers wait =(

I'll be back with a proper comment. Work restriction with computer use =.= for non work related stuff.

*sneaking on my tablet during down time ~ ninja my way around the dark*

Part 1:

So starting off from the beginning, at first I was like O.O or Takamina to randomly kiss this girl (who I was pretty sure was Acchan) then shocked that they already kissed before and end up  with an invitation that pretty much mean "come home with me and I'm all yours" ....  interesting work up for this pair, quite bold on both party. The scripted message on the newspaper is just ROFL, man, squirrel and cyborg =) YUP BOLD is correct for this pair. Already into the action LOL. They move pretty quickly.

I'm not so sure about the other girls... planning to kidnap the emperor's daughter.... crazy bunch but if that bring more girls into the group then why not. Probably end up pairing with Mayu and have to fend off her hands from wandering keke. I'm still a bit iffy about Sasshi being a genius... I just have this feeling when I see Sasshi and genius in the same line, but on the scale of bringing in the power, I'm imagining a very OP group of girls. They are all getting named one by one =)

Part 2: *I'll be back*
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part 3. The Past and The Present {Apr 25, 2013}
Post by: sakura_drop_ on June 02, 2013, 02:33:05 PM
A/n. Minna, I will reply to your comments with the actual update and for now... Some pervy stuff that you all been asking for...

DOUZO: http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34376.msg1190486#msg1190486 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34376.msg1190486#msg1190486)
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part SPECIAL. First Time {June 02, 2013}
Post by: Elo on June 02, 2013, 03:25:25 PM
sakura-chan what happned with yuko and rena why are they in a hotel room together doing smexy stuff :cry: :yep:


there must be explanations behind it  :(

anyway cant wait for the next chapter^^
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part SPECIAL. First Time {June 02, 2013}
Post by: tfme3638 on June 02, 2013, 04:27:09 PM
Hey anyone can tell me how do I access the pervy area? Kind of starting to get annoying whenever I read n it just gets stuck there... LOL :panic:
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part SPECIAL. First Time {June 02, 2013}
Post by: amachan48 on June 02, 2013, 04:34:40 PM
Where’s the update -___- i can’t check that link out
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part SPECIAL. First Time {June 02, 2013}
Post by: sakura_drop_ on June 02, 2013, 04:36:10 PM
you can always read it at akblasphemy48 (http://akblasphemy48.com/)
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part SPECIAL. First Time {June 02, 2013}
Post by: WotaOtaku~ on June 02, 2013, 04:49:20 PM
Oh my, what did I do with my innocent mind? T^T I was innocent once....until the time I started reading those things xD

That was awesome xD But I just had to like read it with my mom in front of me D:

She asked me why I was blushing like hell xD I was like biting my lower lip to not spazz to much but I couldn't stop the blush :P

I seriously gotta read it again xD awwh, what a perv I am and what awesome fics/OS you make Sakura-san :)
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part SPECIAL. First Time {June 02, 2013}
Post by: bunny_rabbit on June 02, 2013, 07:29:23 PM
nice AtsuMina's momment...still need (and waiting) YukoRena's full version though :on bleed:
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part SPECIAL. First Time {June 02, 2013}
Post by: Archer1992 on June 03, 2013, 08:54:47 PM
wooow

i really like it

thanks for all your updates

i wait for another chapter

^.^'
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part SPECIAL. First Time {June 02, 2013}
Post by: cisda83 on June 04, 2013, 10:09:40 AM
Update please....

Can't wait to see the next

Thank you

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part SPECIAL. First Time {June 02, 2013}
Post by: Archer1992 on July 13, 2013, 08:44:37 PM
waaaaa!!!

Continue!!!!

Update Soon please!!!!!

X.x!?
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part 4 teaser {Feb 12, 2014}
Post by: sakura_drop_ on February 12, 2014, 03:28:55 PM
A/n.Um, I am bumping my own thread :DDD just to post the teaser and say I didn't forget neither of the stories in this thread. The teaser is for 'A.L.I.V.E.' story, but Capricious Lachrymose last part might see the daylight sooner. Oh well, hope you enjoy the teaser~ Gonna reply your comments once I update, as always~  :mon trudge:

(http://imageshack.us/a/img825/6480/47278163293815005423720.jpg)

A.L.I.V.E.

Part 4. Whole Bunch Of Misunderstandings (TEASER)


Yuko was about to tease Rena more when suddenly the unexpectedly strong force yanked her away and then kicked her right in the stomach. Thanks to her being the awesome fighter the woman was able to avoid the kick but she didn't expect to be punched right into her face. Yuko was glad she slightly turned while avoiding the kick and thankfully the damage to her pretty face was not that big.

"Whatever happened here.." A low serious voice spat out. "This better have a good explanation."

"Jurina-chan..." Rena was mesmerized how cool her beloved was in that jealous overprotective state.

"I'm waiting." Juju deadpanned.

"Well..." Yuko was surprised but pleased to see that side of the young girl resurfacing. "I..."




And that's it. See ya some time when I update, hope you comment  XD
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part 4 teaser {Feb 12, 2014}
Post by: Feat on February 12, 2014, 03:58:39 PM
A teaserrrr. Yeyyy. I'll wait for the update.

Thank youuu~  :bow:
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part 4 teaser {Feb 12, 2014}
Post by: Zita on February 12, 2014, 05:40:39 PM
 :scared: I almost forgot about this one. This is not even possible.
Thanks for reminding me. :grin:
I look forward to it.
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part 4 teaser {Feb 12, 2014}
Post by: cisda83 on February 13, 2014, 03:01:45 AM
ah.. a teaser...

So you are updating soon...

Can't wait...

Thank you

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part 4 {May 18, 2014}
Post by: sakura_drop_ on May 18, 2014, 06:11:11 PM
A/n. This update is special because..... *drum roll* It's our dear Chiqa's 21st Birthday!!!!! So it was a good push for me to finally update this story!!! I hope everyone likes it, especially you, our dear Chiqin ;) Sorry that this update is shorter than others, but well, the next chapter will be way longer thus yeah... ><;

Before the actual update, a fricking long wall of my replies to this huge sea of comments oTL


REPLIES.


@miyumi: yes, I know I am a perv :D YukoRena is always fluttery. And yes, Minami's past is COOL. And here is the update you wanted~

@yuukimoko: no problemo, I am happy that you enjoyed it ;)

@kuro_808: yup yup, that ending~

@cisda83: yeah, separation is never nice, deshou? I like Jane Doe PV so much, it's so cool~ about RenaYuko, you will see in this update~

@K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS: yeah, sorry, I have someone special already, so I cannot return your feelings (though we both know you love me just in a friendly way) Taka is always awesome and cool (except when she fails) and YukoRena, well, you will find out in this update~ Yay~

@kahem: nyaha~ Meetan always brings a smirk on our faces...or a facepalm... and YukoRena....read the update~

@Haruko: you are very close to the truth~ you will see what I mean when you read this update~

@Tanchan: nyaha, you will see~ muahaha~ can't reveal things for now~

@stv_wong: haha, Meetan just brings the laughs in us all the time, deshou? or well, like I mentioned up there, the facepalm :D

@Hii_chan: haha, yes, Minami is so cool in this story, deshou?~ and the perv... might write it~

@amachan48: oh, hello there~ *waves* thank you for the praises~ YukoRena is of course awesome, deshou?~ What's the secret behind it~ Read this chapter and you will find out~ nyaha~

@bunny_rabbit: BUNNY~!!!! I am glad you enjoyed this chapter~ and I shall say to you~ Great minds think alike~ YukoRena smut~ that must be a nice thing to see~ or read in this case *nosebleed* ara, you also enjoyed the Meetan's mention? nyahaha~ ufufufu~

@POPCAT: YukoRena explained in this chapter~ Have fun reading~

@TK.Yuu: all is explained in this update and I hope you enjoy it~ \(^o^)/

@immortal_K: all I can say to you, Kiranyan, is.............YOU NEVER CAME BACK TO UPDATE YOUR COMMENT......... *stares* Sakugeki is gonna haunt you in your dreams, HAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHA.... Nee....okotteru?~

@Elo: as I explained to a lot of people up there, all is answered in this update~ Have fun reading~

@WotaOtaku~: nyaha~ I corrupted your innocent mind~ and in front of your mother~ nyahaha~ I am glad you enjoyed it~ and um....thank you for the praise~ m(_ _)m

@bunny_rabbit: hey there again~ thanks for enjoying AtsuMina smut~ and YukoRena smut...hahaha, might write it~ *evil giggle*

@Archer1992: nyaha, here is the next update~

@Feat: here is the update~

@Zita: my loyal reader T^T I am so happy you like this story and it's okay to forget with this many new stories coming up and my updates being...slow and well....late.... Here is the next chapter ;)



THANKS FOR THOSE WHO HELPED ME TO PROOFREAD~ YOU KNOW WHO YOU ARE~



(http://imageshack.us/a/img825/6480/47278163293815005423720.jpg)
A.L.I.V.E.

Part 4. Whole Bunch of Misunderstandings


—–‘Reform school’, principal’s office, Thursday afternoon, Nagoya—–

"And then I pinned you to the wall like this~" Yuko pinned Rena to the wall and smirked. "Yeah, you had the same expression as you do now~"

"Yu...uko-san...Let me go...." Rena stuttered. The sudden action of the squirrel woman made her blush hard because before this she never experienced being controlled.

"Was that a dream or did we really do THAT?" The chibi grinned and her eyes scanned the raven haired girl's body. "Mhm, NAISU~"

Yuko was about to tease Rena more when suddenly the unexpectedly strong force yanked her away and then kicked her right in the stomach. Thanks to her being the awesome fighter the woman was able to avoid the kick but she didn't expect to be punched right in the face. Yuko was glad she slightly turned while avoiding the kick and thankfully the damage to her pretty face was not that big.

"Whatever happened here.." A low serious voice spat out. "This better have a good explanation."

"Jurina-chan..." Rena was mesmerized how cool her beloved was in that jealous overprotective state.

"I'm waiting." Juju deadpanned.

"Well..." Yuko was surprised but pleased to see that side of the young girl resurfacing. "I had a very pervy dream of me and Rena last night thus decided to tease her by showing her a few examples. I assure you, Jurina, I have no intentions of stealing your precious Rena-chan. I have my wife that I love wholeheartedly so there is no need to fret over this tiny misunderstanding. I'll take my leave then."

Yuko flashed her smile at the two Matsui girls and left the room, but suddenly her head popped in with her toothy grin present on her face.

"Don't forget, you're a jailbait, so no smexy action~" The squirrel teased the two and then left the room completely.

Jurina rolled her eyes and then fixated her attention towards Rena. The pale girl now was even paler as she still remembered when years ago Jurina didn't talk with her for the whole week because the older girl accidentally missed the last bus and had to stay over her classmate's, leaving the puppy girl with her aunt. She couldn't even think of the possibilities what the puppy girl was going to do now.

"Rena-chan."

The tone of the youngster's voice made Rena feel like jelly, her heartbeat was faster than ever and she even forgot how to breathe. Suddenly Jurina pinned her to the wall the way Yuko was pinning her just a minute ago and Rena's stomach sent a bunch of butterflies down her spine. Her eyes went wide and she started breathing shallowly.

"If I EVER again see anyone do something similar to you...." The intent look meant this was a serious statement. "I'll make you got to jail by doing things to you you never imagined. I'll leave you there for sometime, not bothering to bail you out. Then, after I think you've learned your lesson, I would get you back and then do even more naughty things to you. I have so many fantasies, Rena-chan. You are MINE FOREVER. I hope from now on YOU and EVERYONE else takes that into account."

Rena's mouth was agape as she was trying to take in all the information. Then Jurina's lips touched her lips just for a short second before pulling back.

"You have no idea how badly I want to make you fully mine, Rena-chan... The two years that have left to wait..might be harder and harder... Don't forget that."

When everything sunk in and Rena fully was aware of what just happened, the puppy was long gone.

"Eeeh...?"


—–Hama Rikyu Garden, Thursday afternoon, Tokyo—–

Atsuko nervously glanced at her wristwatch. Her heart was pounding like crazy in her chest as she paced in front of the main entrance to the garden. She was already inside, waiting for someone eagerly. Then her eyes spotted the huge ribbon and she knew instantly the person came as they agreed. She smiled widely and jumped on the tiny person, nearly knocking the poor woman down.

"Atsuko..." Minami couldn't help but giggled and then hugged tightly the taller girl. "How are you?"

"I miss you..." Acchan mumbled and hugged the midget tighter. "So much...."

"Haha..." Minami patted the girl's head and then pulled back a bit. "Let's have a walk, shall we?"

"Un~" The black haired girl smiled. "The Sakuras are blooming so nicely~"

"Deshou?~" Takahashi took Maeda's hand and the two started walking deeper into the park, enjoying the beautiful scenery. "Sorry that I couldn't meet you for such a long time. It's just that the princess needs protection 24/7 and she rarely is with her family, so we really have a lot of work."

"It's okay, don't apologize. Now that we met and that I know you're okay, I am not going to worry that much. And isn't the plan getting easier? Miichan told us something that was unbelievable....but is it true?"

"Mhm...what did she tell you?" Takamina asked and the two sat on the bench which had less people around so they can talk freely without worrying to be overheard.


->flashback<-

-----Café ‘Nagareboshi’, Tuesday afternoon, Kanagawa-----

After Tomo~mi closed the café, the girls sat around one of the tables. They were ready to hear what Miichan had to say.

"I heard awesome news, guys~ Yuko contacted me and said to be prepared as she and Rena are coming back on Thursday. They succeeded with their plans and met with people they were supposed to meet. The whole group of people is on our side and we can finally commence with our kidnapping plan. It's gonna happen on Friday~"

"Wait, so more people means we can take action sooner than planned?" Atsuko asked.

"Our plan can work only on Fridays, because that's when her parents leave the palace to visit some of their important friends, and they return on Saturday afternoon. This happens every week and they never missed it, except if there are some political meetings or family matters that cannot be postponed." Sasshi explained.

"Oh~ So we also need to be prepared or we are not needed?" Tomo~mi asked. "Tomochin trained me quite well, so I can wield a sword and help in any way I can~"

"I think all of us should be in, in the case something unexpected happens."  Minegishi said seriously. "And also, Acchan, I got a coded message in a newspaper from Minami."

She took out a piece of newspaper where it was written a certain message, and only a keen eye would know what that means.

~~~
Gachapin!!! I miss my black haired queen~ I want a date~ Sakuras are blooming so nicely right now in Hama Rikyu Garden~ Shall I wear my huge pink bow? I hope my queen wears something nice too~ Chibi. >.>
~~~

"Uwa~ I never thought she will call herself a chibi~" Kasai chuckled.

"Am...I the queen?~" Atsuko's eyes sparkled brightly. "Ah, I am finally going to meet her~"


->end of flashback<-


"I see... Yeah, I heard the news also and I have even better ones." Minami smiled. "We got affirmed that her parents are really leaving this Friday without any complications in our way."

"Good to hear... Nee..." Atsuko fidgeted on the bench. "Can I also come on the mission? I know I don't have fighting skills but.... I am sure I can be of at least some help..."

"I agree with Miichan, I as think everyone should be in this...but I am worried something might happen to you... However..." Here Takahashi paused and kissed Acchan's cheek, making the girl blush in deep red color. "I dragged you into this and so I think you can come. Seeing you there will inspire me even more~"

"H...hai..."


-----Tokyo Imperial Palace, evening, Thursday, Tokyo-----

"Ojousama...are you sure about this?"

"Yes, Minami. I am more than sure. This is my dream come true."

"Well, our plan becomes easier then..." Tomochin blurted out and then closed her mouth. She just then realized that the cat was out of bag and she spilled the secret. "Umgh...."

"Good job, Tomochin." Mariko scoffed.

"Gomen..."

Princess Yuki and her three bodyguards were sitting in the living room of the princess chambers. She overheard these three guards talking in female voices and calling each other by their real nicknames when they thought she was still having dinner with her family. Yuki only smiled and was not even one bit angry at them hiding their identities from her for such a long time. She was thankful because she trusted them enough to lose the fright of men and now knowing they were girls...she was really impressed. The princess showed up in front of them and asked to tell her the whole story, promising to not tell on them to her parents. Now she knew why she held such a huge trust towards them and why they were the only men she was never afraid of. Kashiwagi asked them to change into the girl's outfits, they locked themselves in her chambers and had a really long girly talk. It's been quite a while since the last time the princess had such a warm and comforting time. Her guards were beautiful, clever and strong willed. That's why she told them about her secret wish of wanting to be kidnapped by a cute female and run away from this place.

Now she wanted to know what was the plan they were talking about yet she didn't bug them, knowing they will reveal it once the time is right. However, she didn't have to wait for long.

"I think we can tell her everything since this is what ojousama herself wants." Minami stated and turned to the princess. "Our plan is to kidnap you, ojousama. This is something you wish, deshou?"

"Eeh... Why me though?.." Yuki was surprised.

"Aren't you rich?" Mariko asked while smirking.

"Well...I am..." Yuki made one of her huge reaction faces and her three bodyguards laughed.

"Relax, this is not the reason." Minami reassured the princess. "The request was made by Mayu."

"M...mayu?!!!! The cute girl I met in the park?!!!! You guys know her?!!!"

"Yeah..." An invisible sweat drop appeared on Minami's forehead. "She is actually a member of our community...."

"You might not like this but we are fighting against government, only those who steal from people and abuse their power." Mariko explained. "So we are really not after your family or anything. Well, maybe a bit, but you know that your father recently got himself involved with suspicious people..."

"Un....It's okay..." Suddenly Yuki's eyes went wide again. "Chotto!!! Still, it doesn't explain why me? Why Mayu wants me...? That sly cute mouse..."

"That is something you'll have to ask her yourself, ojousama..." Tomochin also sweat dropped. "That aside, we need to explain you the whole kidnapping thing, and I think you might be of some help. We are short on one minute which we thought might be just okay if we're lucky..."

"Okay, I am listening." The ojousama nodded.

END OF PART 4
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part 4 {May 18, 2014}
Post by: kevinwkl on May 18, 2014, 08:50:07 PM
WAZZZZAAAAAAAAA~!!! It's me, your friendly neighborhood Chineseman. BA DUM TSS~!

The first thing I see in this chapter is Yuko pinning Rena on the wall....  :shock: :shock: :shock:

WHAT A WAY TO START THE CHAPTER~  :on lol: :on lol:

But good thing it's just a dream.. Or else, somebody gonna end up like this --->  :on chew:

I LOVE Jurina in this chapter.. Even though she's still a jailbait, she's cool~  :cathappy:

And.....Jurina did the same pinning thing as Yuko  :mon blood: :mon blood: :mon blood:

But it's Wmatsui, so.... ME LIKE~!! :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy:

FINALLY LE GODDESS ACCHAN HAS DESCENDED  :mon inluv: :mon angel: :mon star:

The Atsumina moment was too short...  :mon sigh:

BUT IT WAS SWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET~~!!!!!!!!  :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff:

Even a single "I miss you" made me squeal~  :cathappy: :cathappy:

I'd have to say this.. This chapter is a little short.. Not trying to complain or anything.. Just saying..  :mon sweat: :mon sweat: :mon sweat:

SO............UPDATE FAST COZ I WANNA SEE MORE WMATSUI AND ATSUMINA!!  :mon pray2: :mon pray2: :mon pray2:

That's all for my comment.. Gosh I used so much stickers.. Oh well...  :bigdeal: :bigdeal:

This is Kevin signing off.

CHIAOZ~!!
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part 4 {May 18, 2014}
Post by: cisda83 on May 19, 2014, 07:42:45 AM
Somewhat they were a bit guilt about kidnapping the princess

Though the princess seem very eager about being kidnapped as long as she is going to see Mayu

Would the plan work alright?

What will Mayu do in the presence of eager Yuki?

What's going to happen with the kingdom?

Would they be able to escape the army search?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you

  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part 4 {May 18, 2014}
Post by: Yuseichaaan48 on May 19, 2014, 08:02:13 AM
Hey........... I'm new here........ Nice to meet you... *shy* *tries to approach but runs away*  :on speedy:

*runs away for a while and comes back* HEYO!!!!!! SAKURA CHAN~~ CHU~~~!!!! XD  :on slopkiss: (I know... I'm weird!)

I read 5 parts in one day... that's so rare of me. Good job Yusei!  :on woohoo: (remind you of anyone? :v)

This is just pure awesomeness! JUST SO AWESOME!!!! why caps... oh well  :bigdeal:

Now lemme comment on EACH chapter cause some baka told me to do so. Of course, I won't name anyone. (I HOPE THAT DIDN'T CONFUSE ANYONE)  :dunno:

But first. *sips tea like a wise man*  :on drink: (ME? A WISE MAN? WOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWW!)

CH. 1

Wow... Minami is so bold!  :on GJ:

Damn Mayu, how can you come up with such plan? Oh yeah... I like that girl over there, I'm gonna kidnap her!  :wahaha:

Mama Yuko, HOW CAN YOU AGREE! I DO NOT BLAME HARUNYAN FOR HOW SHE REACTED AT ALL!

But its Yuko.... this is normal behavior from her.  :sweat:

CH. 2

Papa Rena's "Hobby" *shivers* 

Good job Tomochin! Nicely done!  :on GJ:

MILKY MAKES AN APPEARANCE! I just had to point that out xD

Dat Marimii moment!  :nya:

CH. 3

Kai, ok... I understand, Mario the same thing.

BUT THOMAS?! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA  :wahaha:

WOAH WOAH WOAH! HOLD ON! DAT YUKORENA!  :luvluv2: :luvluv1:

Le Smut

WHAT CAN I SAY? THAT WAS AWESOME!  :on bleed:

but... she had to tiptoe! LOOOOOOOOOL  :wahaha: (God... I used the same smiley like three times.... That's such a fail...  :gyaaah: )

 :imdead: :imdead: :imdead:

CH. 4

Ahhh.... that Yuko xD

GOOD JOB JURINA. THAT IS HOW YOU PROTECT YOUR WOMAN!  :hehehe: :glasses:

Nee.... why does Jurina and Rena remind me of something.... HMMMM NEVERMIND THAT  :luvluv2:

Nice..... CHIBI! way to make your girl happy :v  :whistle: :whistle: (Just felt like whistling... PROBLEM?!)

AND LOOOOOL, when the person who is getting kidnapped, is willing to be kidnapped, it ONLY makes the plan THAT much easier.  :on lol:

I mean... I'm just saying, it's the hardest discovery in the world!  :on lol:

AND I'M ALMOST DONE WITH THIS FREAKISHLY LONG COMMENT. I need a life...  :hiakhiakhiak: I'm even laughing at myself  :on lol: (SAME SMILEY AGAIN!  :on redcard: )

Hmmmm.... So I gues Bye bye now  :byebye: :byebye:

Btw... I still don't know you! Mama told me not to talk to strangers... so...  :on speedy:

Anywho, Bye bye~~~ I needa go sleep now!  :sleep: (totally like that :v)

But before I go! CHUUUUUUU!  :on slopkiss: (god... I really need a life)

Anyways, Jyanee!  :byebye: (same smiley again... I give up.. OTL!)
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part 4 {May 18, 2014}
Post by: chiqinna on May 19, 2014, 03:38:19 PM
this is my first post here!!  :shocked :shocked :shocked
oh well~ I read this when I was a silent reader before I guess..  :dunno: (or maybe too lazy to comment =_=")
whatever~ I'm gonna comment since my name were summoned in this  :lol: kidding~

I re-read this story today already~  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
wew you made a little of YukoRena there~~~ I see what you did there~~~  XD
Jurina kakkoi~~ Wmatsui~~  :heart: :heart: :heart: :wub:

in the previous chapter where Marimii- :wub: :wub: :wub: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :heart:

and Atsumina so sweet~~  :wriggly: :wriggly: :wriggly:
their little moments is just sweet as I am~~  :luvluv2: :luvluv2: :luvluv2:
hope to see more of their moments in the next chapter nee~  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

well~~ can't wait to see Mayuki to meet again~  :w00t:

jyaaneee~~~~  :sleep:

Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part 4 {May 18, 2014}
Post by: miyumi on May 20, 2014, 02:13:30 AM
Sugoi sugoi sugoi!!!! I wanna see more!!! Update soon!!!!!  :cathappy:
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part 4 {May 18, 2014}
Post by: deguchi on May 20, 2014, 02:44:01 AM
COOL~~ like the story! Specially atsumina part so sweeeeet~
update please..
Title: Re: A.L.I.V.E. (AtsuMina/others OS) Part 4 {May 18, 2014}
Post by: frosted_tuna on June 28, 2014, 03:03:53 PM
interesting storyline.  i rewatched jane doe after reading a bit of the first chapter.
Title: Re: Capricious Lachrymose (YuukoRena OS) Part 3. Trust and Fears {April 15, 2015}
Post by: wmatsui fanfic. on April 15, 2015, 01:53:58 PM
Eh. You killed her. 

︶︿︶



What happened??  Why did Rena jump. At least she have Yuko for her


It's nice fic arigatuo

Title: Re: Capricious Lachrymose (YuukoRena OS) Part 3. Trust and Fears {April 15, 2015}
Post by: Korisu29 on April 17, 2015, 10:04:48 AM
 :mon hanky:
good job author-san!!!
i like it!!  :mon lovelaff: