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The Hello! Project Fanfics => H!P Fanfics => Topic started by: whytphyre on August 16, 2007, 04:07:19 AM
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haha, Koharu's bold, calling all of her senpai by their nicknames. Koharu was very in character, I could image her doing those things right away. What's up with our leader? So negative. :D
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hmmmm .....why she look at her bellybutton, at least I won't look at her bellybutton first XD .........
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:)) amazingly hillarious :))
"BELLYBUTTON"... Why in the hell did she notice Yossie's bellybutton??? I could never guess ??? May be because Yossie was naked that time :twisted:
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LOL, Leader in a bad mood?
Of course the bellybutton gets noticed first, it's KOHARU we're talking about XD
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ESP? ;o
Lol. For a moment there I thought Yossie was gonna pull a Men In Black on Koharu with the 'Flashy Thingie'. You know.. those brain-washing pens :lol:
I'd like to see Sayu drunk XD
Heh, leader's pissed.. it's like she'll hit koharu over the head with something hard anytime if she keeps talking.
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Yossi really should have just flashie-thingied Koharu and saved herself the grief. :lol:
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Have I seriously been missing the awesomeness that is THIS?
...You never told me about this story. T___T
PRETTY DAMN HILARIOUS. XDDD <3
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I didn't sleep naked (on fear that Fujimoto would do bad things to me in my sleep), but it was pretty damn close to being so (because Hawaii wasn't frigid happy polar bear land), and I wasn't one to cover up with the covers either (Again with the Hawaii and the not happy polar bear land).
Yochan should have just let Miki molested her in her sleep. Blame it on Hawaii. Whatever happen in Hawaii stays in Hawaii. :lol:
She should have done MIB flash light thingie on Koha and Mitsui. I think Yossie is rather high tension now that 2 persons know about her no-belly-buttoness, and one possible molester to find out too. :hiakhiakhiak:
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Late at night. Takahashi's snoring could be heard from three rooms down. Fujimoto's snoring could be heard from the bed next to me.
I'm having a great time picturing them snoring! :on lol:
"Mitsui..." I mumbled angrily, "What time is it?"
"... I don't know... I thought you knew that..."
Like the leader has a clock in her head or something. It felt like 2 AM. I stared over at the red numbers on the clock.
2 AM. Exactly.
Damn, that's uncanny.
"Koharu-chan says you have a space ship."
"Yes, I have a space ship..."
Aika's eyes got wide at the seriousness of my voice.
"Really?"
"Yeah. I abduct the Hello! Project members who don't let me sleep. Go ask Sugaya. She knows what I mean."
:wahaha:
"Yocchan... you don't have a bellybutton..."
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Crap.
"Mitsui... it's there, you just can't see it..."
Uh-oh. :O
Now what do you wanna talk about?"
"... The fact that you're hiding something from me."
She was too much like Ishikawa. I didn't like that. I fell for Ishikawa way too easily.
"No I'm not."
"Yes you are."
"No, I'm not."
"Yes. You are."
"No."
"Yes."
"Nuh uh."
"Yes huh..."
"Fine, yes."
"N-... Yocchan, you're not Bugs Bunny."
It's like watching a tennis match. :lol:
And she turned on the cute eyes.
"No."
".... Yocchan..."
Dismay.
"Mitsui..." I warned. She pouted and gave me the biggest lot of puppy dog eyes she could muster.
"Hitomi-chan..."
"Oi! Where'd you learn that from!?"
"....... Sayumi-chan..."
No wonder she acted like Ishikawa so damn much. She learned it from Ishikawa's hopping devil spawn.
Damn...Aika's goooooooooooooood. :shocked:
The girl smiled, hugged me, and kept there for a moment.
"Now go to bed."
"...... Can't I sleep with you tonight?"
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww... :wub:
Hopefully Yossi's flashie-memory thing is fully charged. :P
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"Yocchan."
She had become twice as nice as she usually did, which was normal, considering she usually wanted something out of me when she was like this.
"Mitsui..."
"Yocchan, I got you your bagel again... and they had tomatoes this time too."
Looks like Aika's fishing for more answers.
"I wanna know about your secret... Koharu-chan says you're a manga hero, but I wanna hear the truth from you. Koharu-chan's a little... uhm... fantastical."
That's putting it mildly. :roll:
"But what if I promised to help?"
...
"If you're a manga hero... or... or like a villain, I could help you, right?"
"If I was a villain, I'd be the nasty sort that likes beaming up little girls and taking them away to a far of planet..."
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...Aika just wants an excuse to be able to keep hanging out with Yossi. :wriggly:
"Mitsui... there is something you have to know. I'm not the only one that really doesn't belong..."
Oooooooooooooooooooooo...does that mean there's another alien amongst them? :o
"Yocchan," Mitsui egged on, "What do you mean?"
Innocence. It was the only thing really saving this one from any sort of destiny she might have had. If I kept her in the dark, she wouldn't have to worry about what she might or might not have to do.
But if I didn't tell her, then I'd be in big doo doo with my other higher ups.
If I did, Tsunku would have my head.
Lose if I do, lose if I don't.
Hmmmm...almost seems like Yossi wants to tell Aika, but she's not sure if she's ready or not. So...Tsunku knows about Yossi? Who are these "higher ups" that she refers to?
"Well, we've got a whole day ahead of us! You're with Risa-chan and I'm with Ai-chan! We can talk later! And I'll do better, I promise!"
She bounced off, after her slightly oblivious fifth generation senpai. I stared after her.
"You keep thinkin' that Mitsui," I muttered, "You just keep thinkin' that."
That almost sounds like a test/challenge.
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Usually I don't mind it when someone's in there with the whole 'salon' ensemble cart thing, but today was different.
Today she came equipped with alcohol.
Uh oh.
I should have seen it after I was given my third shot of whatever the hell that was, just as I was barely starting to feel it.
Yeah, drinking something that you can't identify? Not a good idea...especially when you're still within the work day.
I rounded the corner in my new curls, my 'wonderful' outfit (I hate my legs why do they insist on giving me such a small pants line?), and my good ol' scowl
Ummm...she gets the shorts lately because everyone else thinks her legs are hawt. :drool:
she appeared out of nowhere.
She did that a lot lately.
"I'm sorry! I'm in your way, I'm looking for Yocchan!" she said happily, and walked past. She paused for a moment, and stared back at me.
"....... Yocchan!?"
I nodded, raising my brow at her.
:P
"Yocchan, what happened to your hair?!" the small girl exclaimed, horrified, "Who's idea was this!? I'll threaten them within an inch of their life with a fish and they'll never do it again!"
Chuckling, I shook my head.
"Nah, it's fine."
A FISH! :lol:
But you looked like you were about to go kill someone..."
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"Ah huh.... can I watch?"
"Sure... I don't see why not..."
I shrugged, and proceeded down to the stage area. Aika followed.
:wahaha:
Rika stopped her rambling, and stared over.
"YOU GOT MY HAIR!" she yelled angrily, "Who was in charge of these costumes!? I want to know! They gave Hitomi-chan my hair!
Might have been a screwup, but if it gets Yossi in hotpants, it can't be all bad. :D
AND MY CLOTHING!... wait, no... just my pants... you can keep that 'no showy bellybutton' thingie."
Hell yeah...bellybutton thingie FTW! :)
"Ishikawa, there's no way in hell I wanted this," I replied simply. She nodded.
"Damn straight you don't.... how'd they get you to agree to that anyways?"
"They didn't. I was drunk."
"....... How'd they get you drunk without being suspicious?"
"............ Shut up."
Busted. :on lol:
"That's okay, you look absolutely adorable in it! Hitomi-chan, this'll be an awesome PV!"
"ONLY IF I CAN SEE HALF THE SET!" I finally burst angrily, "Look at that! GREENSCREEN! WHO THE HELL USES GREENSCREEN ANYMORE!?"
".... Morning Musume..."
Yeppers. (http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c340/J-F-C/doh.gif)
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Yossy got duped bad..... :mon unsure:
I personally don't like her curly hair but it does really stand out in the PV. Rika doesn't have to worry, she looks good all the time. ;) The Eggs had better hide, showing such disrespect for their senpai. Even if dad doesn't do something, mom might, so you Eggs better watch out. :D lol @ the green screen jab. It was quite horrid but you just can't help watching it again and again.
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WHOLLY CRAP! how did i miss out on this story! this is ZOMG funnY XD I couldn't stop laughing. AWESOME JOB keeping us laughing PLEASE!
That ishiyoshi "You took my hair" was so funny!
Aika is super cute in this story.
McD's says "I'm lovin' it"
P.S. I liked the curls :(
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JFC ^^ Yay! Glad ya didn't lose faith in me after this really REALLY long month *eyes her unfinished Nano*
shindou *glares at the greenscreen* It was cool in the ninties Japan. It's not cool now. And yeah, the Eggs better watch it, or they might get it next time I get to writin' a chapter ^^;; (And I even have the PV bookmarked from DohhhUp! so I totally agree)
poest The hair was cute. Not on Yossie (I refuse to call her Yossy. I'm one of those diehards who're gonna get bitchslapped for it later in life.). If you look closely enough, she has a sort of 'WTF I hate you all' look on her face... it's very subtle.
On a totally different note, Koharu has a cold sore in Mikan. Just thought you'd all like to know.
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eh? Mystery :O So now Yossy is moving into action for what she really has to do. Right now I can't think of how this all can become clearer. Too many mysteries happening with fanfics these days. :lol:
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I grunted as I stared down at my cellphone. It was going off for the fifth time in the past hour. I thought the first time was just an alarm, but then it went off again...
And again...
And again...
Swiping it off of the nightstand, I glared at the screen.
Two missed calls, three unopened messages. All from...
Takahashi.
Oh don't tell me she's late for something. :P
"Good Morning Aries."
Her voice startled me out of my groggy daze, and I jumped back a moment, staring. She stared right back, her eyes calm(er than usual) and her hands rested on her lap.
She was sitting on my couch.
What gave her the right?!
"Aquarius!" I shouted angrily, shooting eye daggers in her direction
OSHIT! AICHAN'S AN ALIEN TOO??? :o
"How many times have I told you NOT to intrude into my home? You never know who's going to be in here!"
"... Like Ishikawa?"
I paused.
Uh-oh.
"How did you find out about that?"
"It's not like she's the most secretive ever. She's actually very easy to get things out of if she hasn't been told to keep something a secret in the first place. Like all those nights you've spent with her."
Eek.
"Aquarius..."
"What? I haven't said anything to anyone else, don't worry Aries. Not even Pisces knows."
I let out a sigh. If Pisces found out, I'd be dead.
OMGASS THERE ARE MORE OF THEM??? :shocked:
"You have to tell her soon."
I stared.
"Soon? How soon?"
"By the next full moo-"
"I swear to god, if you finish that sentence with a rhyme, I'll make sure Marippe makes the rest of your life a living hell..."
Aichan's telling Yossi she has to break up with Rika?
And MARI's one of them!!! :OMG:
"... You know what I mean though. We don't have much time, and you're the one she's closest too."
This was true. Not even Cancer was that close to Mitsui, and she was close to EVERYONE. Mitsui was just weird like that.
Oh, she's saying Yossi has to tell Aika (which makes sense she was all curious and stuff about Yossi's "oddities" earlier in the story). But jeez is there one alien for each sign of the zodiac? :O
Wait, Cancer is close to everyone?
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Risa?
"You don't want to lose her like you lost Libra."
"Stop putting words in my mouth!"
"Defensive today, aren't we?"
Yossi lost Libra?
...
Wait, who was Libra?
"I'm not going to lose Mitsui, you understand me?!"
Aquarius grinned.
"I'd hope not. It's your life that's on the line Aries. This is your last chance... and Pisces isn't going to take no for an answer... from you, or her."
Wait a sec, this makes it sound like Yossi's supposed to be protecting Aika. Specifically it sort of sounds like she has to protect her from Pisces is. [bgcolor=#000000]My guess is Pisces is Miki.[/bgcolor]
"I'll make sure Tsunku's aware of our plans... so he can adjust accordingly. Otherwise, the rest is up to you."
Okay, so is Tsunku an alien too, or is he just collaborating with them?
She was gone.
Grunting once more, I went over and opened the door.
Mitsui smiled right back at me.
This was going to be a long day.
Aika = :hee:
Yossi = :depressed:
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I liked the previous chapter with the green screen and hair xD
So Yossy's Aries... Could Libra be... Mako? could be Gocchin too o.o
I get the feeling that Cancer is Nakazawa >_>
Aquarius.. I dunno, is she in MoMusu?
Pisces= Miki o.o
Heh, I guessed using their birthdays.
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JFC: No to the Risa, no to the Miki.
Deceit: In this order...
Maybe, no, you'll see, and no.
^^ Don't worry, I won't be as bad as I was last time. They'll all get revealed... in time!
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Aaaww.. I suck at guessing. Funny if Aquarius turns out to be Junjun though :x
Anyway can't wait to see who's who ^___^ It starting to get interesting.
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aquariase might be Maki. The whole ambiguous thing.
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yay an update!!!
but
.. now i realize i don't know their sign at all. i know Yossie and Rika's birthday but never bother to take note of their sign. and for the others, yeah i have no clue at all. and all this pieces, libra, aquarius talk make me dizzy and curious and jump to find them out immediately.
have i mention i love this fic? ohh this is my first post for this story? or is it not? i lost track of things easily.
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OK gang, it's killin' me, so I'm gonna give you a hint.
Not all of them are or were part of Morning Musume.
I'm not telling you which ones... you might be on the right track, but you might not be.
Next chapter, I'll bring in either Gemini or Virgo. I haven't decided yet... maybe Scorpio.
These are all good guesses though! ^^
*wedge call?*
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Lantern Wedge!!!
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Yay! *gives cookies*
Since I couldn't decide, two will be revealed...
BTW, look out for a Nanakusa Ver. 2.5 soon, or at least an opinion topic starter on it, or something... I've been inspired, and YoMaki doesn't write itself the same way it did in my head. *grin*
Between Lion and Crab
"Yocchan, are you okay?"
"Yeah, fine. Sure..."
Aika had stood at my front door for a few moments before realizing that I was a little off. It might have been the not smiling I was doing, or the not 'I'm a leedur respect mah leedurness' (I swear Nakazawa made that up) face that I had on, but she noticed it right away. Her own smile had faded.
"Yocchan, are you ready for company? Nacchi and Sayumin wanted me to make sure you were ready..."
What did they want!? Gah! It was invasion of the annoying people today, wasn't it? First Aquarius, and now Leo and Cancer.
I don't know what was going on today, but if this day kept up, Aika'd know everything by the end of the week!
Which might have been ideal for Pisces, but it wasn't for me. The poor girl needed some time.
I shrugged.
"Ready as I'm ever gonna be..."
"Did you even go to the bathroom yet? You're not dressed!"
I stared down at the pajamas I was still wearing, and stared up at Mitsui.
"... I guess not, Mom," I said, giving her a look. She blushed and grinned.
"Sorry..."
Then she tried to cover.
"Well it's not like you want Nacchi and Sayumin to see it anyways!"
She brought up a point. Bunnies and panda bears all over my butt wasn't exactly something I wanted Leo or Cancer to talk about with anyone else. That was just humiliating.
And Gemini would never let me live it down.
"Right... going then..."
I could hear them competing with who was going to say 'hi' to me first down the hall. I grunted.
"Stall them like your life depends on it Micchi..."
She nodded, saluted, and was off. I rolled my eyes, and ran to get dressed.
Even a few minutes later, after I had finally succeeded in covering up my 'cute pjs,' I heard no evidence that either of the Zodiac had gotten past the strong 'Mitsui' Defense. Good.
I jumped when my phone rang. Snatching it up, I flipped it open, and, without even looking at the name, I started to talk.
"LEARN TO BE THE LEADER OF MOMUSU WITHOUT MY HELP, WILL Y-"
".... Yocchan?"
Her voice made me stop.
"I... I mean..."
"Sweetie, I was never leader... I left that job to more capable people if I remember correctly..."
My brain melted. I had nothing to say right off. I never did. She was always so damn cool all the time. Just that look on her face made you want to stop and give her whatever she wanted.
As opposed to Koha-brat's 'Buy my singles' look.
"... Yocchan?"
"Gah... Maki..."
I could hear her laugh on the other end, as if she realized what was going on.
"Has Ai-chan been pestering you again?"
"... I.... uhm..."
"It hasn't been that long... you shouldn't be stuttering."
I shouldn't have. Why was I?
Oh wait, because my overactive imagination saw other images than just her cool gaze.
"I... Yeah... look... Leo and Ca-"
I could hear her sigh on the other end.
"... Sorry, Abe and Michi-"
Another sigh.
"...... C'mon Mak-"
This time, she cleared her throat. I sighed.
"...... Nacchi and Michishige are about three seconds from breaking down my front door... and unless you want to pay for it, you'd better let me off the damn phone."
She knew I wouldn't hang up on her without a reason.
"Well... listen, your little Gatas child thing is here..."
"Beh?"
"... I don't know her name, but she's just sitting there, staring at me."
"Oh, you mean S-"
"Her name Yocchan. I want her name, not her title."
"Ask her then!"
"I'm trying to get you in the habit! If I can change you for the better, then I will!"
"It's not like we're trying to take over the world Ma-"
She cleared her throat again.
"GOD FORGET IT!"
And, for the first time in ages, I hung up on her, my anger getting the best of me. I could feel my cheeks flush.
I set the phone down and went to go save Mitsui.
"THERE SHE IS!"
The simultaneous shouts of Leo and Cancer set me off, as they bounded past poor Mitsui and each gave me a hug.
"Yocchan!" Leo shouted happily. Cancer's pigtails were bouncing out of happiness (and the fact that she was bouncing along with them.)
"Yocchan, happy day off!"
"Great. Yeah. Sure... who gave you two sugar?"
Mitsui grinned sheepishly at me and shrugged, like she didn't do anything wrong.
Yeah, right.
"Nevermind... STOP BOUNCING I CAN SEE THAT YOU'RE HERE ALREADY!"
Both of the women stopped, let out noises, and released me from their cute death grip. I grunted at them both.
"What do you want?" I asked. Cancer stared at me.
"Nacchi, Yocchan's a big meanie today! We just wanted to cook her breakfast and take her and Mitsui out for shopping and then lunch, right?"
Leo nodded vigorously.
"And I was going to drive us around after that!"
All three of us got horrified looks on our faces. Could you blame us? If that woman was driving, I wanted no part of the day.
"No Abe. No driving. We're walking," I concluded. The younger two brightened, but Leo pouted.
"Awww, and I pilfered Yuuchan's car for that..."
I had an itching feeling I'd be hearing it later.
"Yocchan," Cancer said, innocence and cute filling her voice, "If Ai-chan calls... Mitsui and I are sick with.... uhm..."
"Smallpox," Mitsui finished. Cancer smiled, and nodded.
"....... I hate you," I blurted out. Cancer frowned.
"YOCCHAN! YOU DON'T MEAN THAT! You're just grumpy! I know! I'll go cook some udon!"
And before I could say 'no we'll go out so you don't make a mess of my kitchen,' she was gone. Making a mess of my kitchen.
Which left me with Mitsui and Leo the Clueless.
"Yocchan..." Leo whined, "We're still going out right?"
I sighed. The day was not meant to be spent babysitting. That was alright though, if Mitsui was there. She'd help me reign the two idiots in.
"Yeah..."
"Yay! We can buy pandas and bunnies and gifts for Rika!"
I stared at her angrily.
"You didn't happen to ... let anyone else know..."
"Nope! The only people who know are you, me, Sayumi-chan, and Aika-chan!"
Aika grinned at me, and I just sighed.
"Just keep it to yourselves, alright?" I tried hopelessly. Leo nodded stupidly in response.
"Of course! It's not like I told anyone else! I don't think Gocchin would like it if I told her..."
No. She wouldn't like that at all...
"What are you getting at?"
"... Nothing."
And she just smiled at me stupidly.
I hated it when she did that.
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Well that shot down my theory on Maki being Aquarius... but now I have a few other candidates... Maybe one of her "Bestfriends" Mai... Ayaka... maybe someone completely different.
Scorpio is at Maki's! I think.
Poor Ai-chan... I feel bad for the kid. Yossy is grumpy in this fic... I LOVE IT!
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Man, I was working on my reading/commentaries for this chapter while I was as school today. About three-quarters of the way through, one of the students asks to borrow it for a bit to look something up. So I let her know to open up a new window so my stuff doesn't get lost. Lo and behold, she goes to a page or something that causes an error in the IE (the comp didn't have Firefox) which makes it.......shut down. :angry: :angry: :angry: :angry: :angry:
So yeah, this is missing a lot of the "first impression" comments that I usually put for my comments.
"Yocchan, are you ready for company? Nacchi and Sayumin wanted me to make sure you were ready..."
What did they want!? Gah! It was invasion of the annoying people today, wasn't it? First Aquarius, and now Leo and Cancer.
Okay, Nacchi and Sayu are aliens too (Leo and Cancer respectively).
I don't know what was going on today, but if this day kept up, Aika'd know everything by the end of the week!
Which might have been ideal for Pisces, but it wasn't for me. The poor girl needed some time.
This part makes it sound almost like Aika's SUPPOSED to be told whatever it is that Aichan said Yossi should tell her. But if this is the case, why is it so important that Aika be told it? What will happen to her once she knows?
"Did you even go to the bathroom yet? You're not dressed!"
I stared down at the pajamas I was still wearing, and stared up at Mitsui.
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"Well it's not like you want Nacchi and Sayumin to see it anyways!"
She brought up a point. Bunnies and panda bears all over my butt wasn't exactly something I wanted Leo or Cancer to talk about with anyone else. That was just humiliating.
And Gemini would never let me live it down.
Assuming that you're not introducing anyone new here, Gemini = Mari?
Oh, and Yossi having bunnies and panda bear PJs = :wriggly:
I could hear them competing with who was going to say 'hi' to me first down the hall. I grunted.
"Stall them like your life depends on it Micchi..."
She nodded, saluted, and was off.
MISSION...START! :P
*YOSSI-MAKI CONVO*
Mmmm...Maki sounds rather aloof and sort of cryptic here. Wonder which zodiac sign she is, and what her role is in all this?
"Well... listen, your little Gatas child thing is here..."
"Beh?"
"... I don't know her name, but she's just sitting there, staring at me."
"Oh, you mean S-"
"Her name Yocchan. I want her name, not her title."
"Ask her then!"
"Gatas child thing?" Could it be one of the Berryz or C-ute kids that joined Gatas as reserve players?
And Yossi's right, why didn't Maki just ask to be reminded of her name herself?
"THERE SHE IS!"
The simultaneous shouts of Leo and Cancer set me off, as they bounded past poor Mitsui and each gave me a hug.
"Yocchan!" Leo shouted happily. Cancer's pigtails were bouncing out of happiness (and the fact that she was bouncing along with them.)
"Yocchan, happy day off!"
"Great. Yeah. Sure... who gave you two sugar?"
Mitsui grinned sheepishly at me and shrugged, like she didn't do anything wrong.
Well, Yossi DID say to stall them as if her life depended on it. :lol:
Yossi = :dunno:
Nacchi/Sayu = :bounceblob: :banana: :muffin:
Aika = :hee:
"Nevermind... STOP BOUNCING I CAN SEE THAT YOU'RE HERE ALREADY!"
Both of the women stopped, let out noises, and released me from their cute death grip. I grunted at them both.
"What do you want?" I asked. Cancer stared at me.
"Nacchi, Yocchan's a big meanie today! We just wanted to cook her breakfast and take her and Mitsui out for shopping and then lunch, right?"
Leo nodded vigorously.
Yossi = :scolding:
Nacchi/Sayu = :k-sad:
"And I was going to drive us around after that!"
All three of us got horrified looks on our faces. Could you blame us? If that woman was driving, I wanted no part of the day.
Well, so long as you're not riding a moped or are a turtle you should be okay. XD
"Yocchan," Cancer said, innocence and cute filling her voice, "If Ai-chan calls... Mitsui and I are sick with.... uhm..."
"Smallpox," Mitsui finished. Cancer smiled, and nodded.
SMALLPOX!!! :rofl:
I sighed. The day was not meant to be spent babysitting. That was alright though, if Mitsui was there. She'd help me reign the two idiots in.
"Yeah..."
"Yay! We can buy pandas and bunnies and gifts for Rika!"
I stared at her angrily.
"You didn't happen to ... let anyone else know..."
"Nope! The only people who know are you, me, Sayumi-chan, and Aika-chan!"
Aika grinned at me, and I just sighed.
"Just keep it to yourselves, alright?" I tried hopelessly. Leo nodded stupidly in response.
They were supposed to go buying stuff for Rika? How come?
"Of course! It's not like I told anyone else! I don't think Gocchin would like it if I told her..."
No. She wouldn't like that at all...
Maki again? She wouldn't like it if they bought stuff for Rika? Something's going on here with Maki. Yossi seemed to be frustrated at her when she was trying to talk to her earlier, almost like she was proverbially walking on eggshells with her or something.
So I guess this means Maki wasn't the one that Yossi lost, eh? But if she's not the one, then who is? :?
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*calls up her notepad document so she knows who the hell she's referring to*
Yeah remind me why I have more than twelve people in the story again?
Oh yeah... because I'm overzealous.
Anyways.
Ima stop ya before ya keep going on that vein of thought JFC (so you don't get confused later): Ai-chan has nothing to do with the Zodiac. She's just playing the role of concerned leader.
Rika and Maki both make recurring romantic themes in Yossie's life because of the fact that Hitomi's a horny bunny and needs to get her kicks somehow.
She did lose Maki, I just haven't gone into explaining why and how and stuff. That whole conversation is key to it though. Hint on that? Title = Zodiac name.
And, one more thing? Gatas reference is to Ongaku Gatas. Now you gotta go through and pick out which one it is ^^
I won't tell you which 'S' it is. Too important to plot.
Next chapter will come tomorrow or Sunday... or whenever I get a chance to type it up... until then... I'm out a Taurus and a Libra. Anyone want to make suggestions? (yay for reader participation). Please PM them to me so that you know and no one else gets to know. I'll tell you if I use your idea.
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Ima stop ya before ya keep going on that vein of thought JFC (so you don't get confused later)
Too late...I think. :P
Ai-chan has nothing to do with the Zodiac. She's just playing the role of concerned leader.
Then that must mean that the person that was on Yossi's couch when she woke up and saw the missed calls from Aichan was someone else?
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Then that must mean that the person that was on Yossi's couch when she woke up and saw the missed calls from Aichan was someone else?
JFC you are brillian :yep:
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OMG...its been a year since I last read a fanfic (literally, blame it on graduating).....and what a great one to come too.
Zodiac conspiracy....hmmm..makes you wonder what their true purpose is.....maybe Tsunku struck a deal with aliens to become the most successful producer with cute girls under his watch by using alien technology (picture the MIB series scene of when MIB 1st made contact with aliens....should get the picture)
Anyway, can't comment specifically coz it was all just too good. but, i've sent my suggestion and hoping that its taken into consideration..... :cool2:....makes me drool in anticipation
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the best comedy i've been reading so far. Keep up the good work, plan out a timeline and work withthat :)
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Who says I needed a timeline? *gets the angry booing off the stage for Nanakusa*
J/K. I have it all planned out ^^;;
When We Go Shopping
"Yocchan, isn't this adorable?"
It was the fifth shop today. I was beginning to think they dragged me out here so none of them had to pin the blame on one of the others for being the grumpiest.
I sighed, and gave a disdainful look at the bib Cancer was holding up. We had stopped shopping for Rika (after I told them to drop the subject) and started shopping for Nono's baby.
Stupid Nono. Stupid Ultraman. That's what condoms were for.
Cancer pouted at me, and held it up closer.
"Yocchaaaaaan!" she whined, "Is it adorable or not?"
"YES!" I shouted angrily, "It's even more adorable than you!"
Cancer shrunk back, and pouted.
"It is not!"
And she put it back where it belonged. She didn't want to be outdone by some child that wasn't even born yet, and I knew it.
Leo was a few racks away, rambling Mitsui's ear off about something I couldn't hear.
Sometimes that was a bad thing, but I figured it'd be easier to explain things to Mitsui after Leo told her.
I didn't have a lot of time to beat around the bush or call up Gemini and get her to do it for me.
"Look who's here Aachan!"
"Eee! Yocchan! Now you won't be a grumpy grump sourpuss!"
Whirling around, I spotted Mai, pulling poor Scorpio in tow. The latter of the two was not happy, and her mood didn't seem to improve when she spotted me. Cancer grinned, and Mai did the same.
"Sayumin, is Yoshiko being as grumpy as Aachan is?" Mai asked, squeezing my cheek. She knew that if she played her cards right, I wouldn't horribly maul her in public.
Scorpio snorted.
"I'm not grumpy. I'm just contemplative," she replied. As my eyes met with her's, she looked away. Cancer frowned.
"Yes, Yocchan is being a meanie poo face about it too!"
"I'll meanie poo face you if you don't watch it," I snapped angrily. Cancer let out a meep, and joined Leo in the 'ranting off Mitsui's ear' event. Mai soon followed, feeling the awkwardness of her two best friends too much for her.
"... Did you tell her?" Scorpio asked.
"No. I haven't gotten a chance to. Leo's been fluttering around her all day..."
"Get Leo to tell her then."
"It's not that simple... Mitsui likes her questions answered, and if they aren't, then she's going to sit there until they are..."
Scorpio sighed.
"Stop making excuses Yoshiko..."
"Stop calling me that. They can't hear us."
She shook her head.
"I know, but Maki was right. She always was. You need to get your head out of work sometimes..."
I wasn't sure how to respond to that. I did not need to get my head out of work... I was firmly grounded to my priorities, that was all.
And the world ending was a big priority!
"Ayaka-chan!" Leo called out in a squeal, dashing past and hugging the poor woman, "It's been so long! How have you been?"
Scorpio smiled.
"Pretty good actually, Nacchi. I hope you aren't being too much trouble to Yoshiko."
Leo shook her head wildly.
"Nope! She's the one who's being trouble!"
She squeezed my other cheek, the one Mai had yet to terrorize. I growled, and she retracted her hand.
"Someone's got a case of the grumpies!" she shouted, pouting and giving me the largest hug possible without me ripping out her throat.
"She just needs chocolate!" Cancer added, hugging me to the same effect Leo was. Mitsui and Mai were right behind, the former of the two with a contemplative look on her face.
Our eyes met, and she frowned.
"I don't need chocolate..." I replied, "... I need... AIR!"
Wiggling free of the two cuddle bunnies, I grunted, and eyed Mitsui again. By now, her gaze had snapped away from me, and she was talking to Mai about Gatas and me working my tail off.
This was a recurring theme. Couldn't I just work in peace? No one had enough sanity to work with anymore.
Leo and Cancer both pouted.
"Yocchan~"
At the same time, in the same manner...
Why me?
"Look, you ... can go get chocolate with Mai and Aachan! I'll take Mitsui later, I haven't chosen a baby gift yet!"
Great job, think faster next time.
Leo and Cancer grinned, and took the aforementioned random goofy women of their respective (soloist) groups, and towed them off to get some chocolate. Mitsui gave me an innocent look.
"Didn't we go out and buy that present like two days ago?" she asked. I nodded, and she smiled lightly.
"... So, whatcha wanna talk about?"
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"Yocchan, isn't this adorable?"
It was the fifth shop today.
Five shops with Nacchi and Sayu? Uh-oh... :O
Cancer pouted at me, and held it up closer.
"Yocchaaaaaan!" she whined, "Is it adorable or not?"
"YES!" I shouted angrily, "It's even more adorable than you!"
Cancer shrunk back, and pouted.
Eeps. :scared:
"Look who's here Aachan!"
"Eee! Yocchan! Now you won't be a grumpy grump sourpuss!"
Whirling around, I spotted Mai, pulling poor Scorpio in tow.
Aachan is Scorpio, right?
Ayaka?
"Sayumin, is Yoshiko being as grumpy as Aachan is?" Mai asked, squeezing my cheek. She knew that if she played her cards right, I wouldn't horribly maul her in public.
Scorpio snorted.
"I'm not grumpy. I'm just contemplative," she replied. As my eyes met with her's, she looked away. Cancer frowned.
"Yes, Yocchan is being a meanie poo face about it too!"
"I'll meanie poo face you if you don't watch it," I snapped angrily. Cancer let out a meep, and joined Leo in the 'ranting off Mitsui's ear' event.
"Meanie poo" :lol:
"... Did you tell her?" Scorpio asked.
"No. I haven't gotten a chance to. Leo's been fluttering around her all day..."
"Get Leo to tell her then."
Have Nacchi tell her? Considering how..."peppy" she seems to be today, is that a good idea?
I was firmly grounded to my priorities, that was all.
And the world ending was a big priority!
EHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! :OMG:
So...what does Aika have to do with this?
"Ayaka-chan!" Leo called out in a squeal, dashing past and hugging the poor woman, "It's been so long! How have you been?"
Oh yeah...called it. :thumbsup
Leo and Cancer both pouted.
"Yocchan~"
At the same time, in the same manner...
Why me?
In stereo!
Good thing Rika wasn't there. XD
"Look, you ... can go get chocolate with Mai and Aachan! I'll take Mitsui later, I haven't chosen a baby gift yet!"
Great job, think faster next time.
Leo and Cancer grinned, and took the aforementioned random goofy women of their respective (soloist) groups, and towed them off to get some chocolate. Mitsui gave me an innocent look.
"Didn't we go out and buy that present like two days ago?" she asked. I nodded, and she smiled lightly.
"... So, whatcha wanna talk about?"
Oh...she suspected Yossi needed to talk to her about something.
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:dizzy: ok i don't think i can keep up with all these sign.
i love the story though. but i don't know who is who. so i just read. as long as i know it's Yossy.
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:depressed:my ayaya's not anywhere so I'm a little depressed..... :farofflook:but this story's gettin better by the chapter so I'll keep reading, don't worry
I was firmly grounded to my priorities, that was all.
And the world ending was a big priority!
:mon scare:who? what? where? when? and how does singing and dancing save us from armageddon???
but now we know they're objectives so....the story unravels....
Stupid Nono. Stupid Ultraman. That's what condoms were for.
:hiakhiakhiak: :hiakhiakhiak:ROFL
p/s: Where's Koharu?? I thought she was the main character???
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*flings a cookie at JFC* That's for guessing the Ayaka thing right ^^
Koharu was going to play the role I've got Aika in now, but I changed my mind. Aika's more charming and easier to write out than Koha-brat... Koharu.... her.
And who says Ayaya's not in the story? Someone has to end the world, don't they?
*cackles and runs off*
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*flings a cookie at JFC* That's for guessing the Ayaka thing right ^^
Mmmmmmmmmmm...cookie. :)
And who says Ayaya's not in the story? Someone has to end the world, don't they?
*cackles and runs off*
(http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c340/J-F-C/HPLeetSpeak/AyayaEhhh.gif)
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YES! Scorpio is Ayaka. Wanna of the best twists i've been hit with!
Ayaya destroy the world... the second best twist i've been hit with XD
Loving the story!
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:frustrated:My Ayaya??? Destroying the world???? :scared:NOOOOOOOOOOOO :stunned:
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hahaha this is good~ :yep: