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Re: New Teaser [Mayuki][Takayuu]
« Reply #20 on: November 30, 2012, 12:21:03 AM »
Woah! Amazing teaser. I def want to continue reading :) Looking forward to your next chapter!!

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Re: New Teaser [Mayuki][Takayuu]
« Reply #21 on: November 30, 2012, 10:03:10 AM »
 In behalf of all the very few Takayuu shippers, thank you so much for liking Takayuu <3

あなたに出会えて本当によっかたよ、幸せです☆彡 」

“All the luggage, Takamina has been carrying alone, I’ve decided to carry it together with her.”- Oshima Yuko

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Re: New Teaser [Mayuki][Takayuu]
« Reply #22 on: December 08, 2012, 09:10:07 PM »
Hello !

I'm not dead xD sorry for the waiting, I'm tired and very busy in school ! But I just finish the first chapter ! Yaaaaay ~ ( Even if I think it's a bad chapter, I'm not satisfied )

So... I'll send it to my translator and I'll post once it been translated. ( unless you want to read it in French xD ).

So I think I'll post in the coming days.

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Re: New Teaser [Mayuki][Takayuu]
« Reply #23 on: December 08, 2012, 10:14:50 PM »
Nice teaser o/ I hope your translator don't take too long ^^

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Re: New Teaser [Mayuki][Takayuu]
« Reply #24 on: December 08, 2012, 10:21:24 PM »
Can I read it in French?... Aaaah It sounds Interesting because of Mayuki and for Takayuu... I don't know... I love them because they seems good friends

Je comprend mieux le français XD
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Re: 48 days to write your destiny - Chapter 1[VF ver.] [Mayuki][Takayuu]
« Reply #25 on: December 08, 2012, 10:46:01 PM »
I cant read french >< but thanks anyways o/ I guess google translate will work now xD

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Re: 48 days to write your destiny - Chapter 1[VF ver.] [Mayuki][Takayuu]
« Reply #26 on: December 08, 2012, 11:29:02 PM »
Ooohhh, it's amazing!  :heart:
My French is a bit rusty, not good enough to type my reply in French, but I got your storyline so far.
And I love your writing style, it's somewhat poetic and those short sentences are very fitting for Yuki's current state of mind.

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Re: 48 days to write your destiny - Chapter 1[VF ver.] [Mayuki][Takayuu]
« Reply #27 on: December 08, 2012, 11:37:29 PM »
at first I thought Yuki is going to die  :catglare: but I'm relived she didn't  :deco:
Mayu transfred at the same class as her at the end not it's not the end it's the begaining of their story  :P
ton style d’écriture est vraiment excellent  :twothumbs
 je crois la version française est meilleure que la version anglaise  ;)

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Re: 48 days to write your destiny - Chapter 1[VF ver.] [Mayuki][Takayuu]
« Reply #28 on: December 08, 2012, 11:44:50 PM »
I didn't think so many people understand French, I think I'll post both versions now.

Les versions originales sont généralement meilleures ( sans vouloir vexer ma chère traductrice xD j'ai de la chance d'avoir quelqu'un faisant un aussi bon boulot ** ), je suis heureuse que ça plaise, XD.

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Re: 48 days to write your destiny - Chapter 1[VF ver.] [Mayuki][Takayuu]
« Reply #29 on: December 09, 2012, 12:03:46 AM »
I understand roughly what happens since my french is not that good, surtout le francais litteraire, je ne lis pas bcp de romans :nervous

Donc, j'attends la version anglaise. Ca a l'air interessant et serieux mais j'espere qu'il y aura aussi des moments romantiques dans les prochaines chapitres  :wub:

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Re: 48 days to write your destiny - Chapter 1[VF ver.] [Mayuki][Takayuu]
« Reply #30 on: December 09, 2012, 12:14:26 AM »
wow il ya beaucoup de personnes qui savent parler le français dans ce forum je savais pas et dire que je pensait que j'étais la seul  :rofl:

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Re: 48 days to write your destiny - Chapter 1[VF ver.] [Mayuki][Takayuu]
« Reply #31 on: December 09, 2012, 01:56:48 AM »
En fait, j'ai pas lu un longue texte en francais depuis longtemps. Ca m'a fait un peu de mal a la tete  XD
C'etait une bon pratique quand meme. Merci  :P

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Re: 48 days to write your destiny - Chapter 1[VF ver.] [Mayuki][Takayuu]
« Reply #32 on: December 09, 2012, 06:47:48 AM »
Wow, c'est vraiment intéresant comme histoire.  :)

En plus, c'est vraiment bien fait aussi... il y a quelques erreurs, mais c'est pas si grave que ça.  XD

Version française ou anglaise ça ne me dérange pas du tout, c'est quand même très bien.

Continue comme ça


Je parle and je comprend très bien le français, mais je ne suis un bon traducteur :lol: XD
mais honnêtement j'aime mieux l'anglais que le français.
Moi non plus je ne savais pas qu'il y a des gens qui savent parler français ici, c'est vraiment surprenant. XD
I'll say "I love you" to the person I love
Even if these feelings aren't returned, saying "I love you" to the person you love
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Re: 48 days to write your destiny - Chapter 1[VF ver.] [Mayuki][Takayuu]
« Reply #33 on: December 09, 2012, 10:12:16 AM »
wow! Quel chapitre interressant, j'aime beaucoup la façon dont tu écris l'histoire. Aaaah si je pouvais écrire comme ça en français...
Watanabe Mayu a l'air très intéressante dans ce fanfic!

Il y a trop de gens qui comprenne le français. pas que soit mal. C'est juste surprenant!
Mayukiiiiiiii !!!!!!!

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Re: 48 days to write your destiny - Chapter 1[VF ver.] [Mayuki][Takayuu]
« Reply #34 on: December 09, 2012, 03:25:10 PM »
at first I thought Yuki is going to die  :catglare: but I'm relived she didn't  :deco:
Mayu transfred at the same class as her at the end not it's not the end it's the begaining of their story  :P

mo-chan, that's a spoiler you're just giving us....  :grr:  :on yellcard:

But I'm so curious what happened to Yuki?????   :gyaaah:
I can't wait for the english version....  :frustrated:
(I don't want to use google translate though)
yes just like a teaser  :lol:
you have to wait anzai-san because the one who is going to translate is in Japan now  :P  ( so lucky I want to go too  XD )

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Re: 48 days to write your destiny - Chapter 1[VF ver.] [Mayuki][Takayuu]
« Reply #35 on: December 10, 2012, 12:00:06 PM »
Merci d'avoir répondu à ma demande! :D

Wahaaaa! J'aime comment, tu écris!!! J'aimerai bien écrire comme ça! :roll:
Des phrases simples c'est pas si mauvais... :)

Il y a trop de gens qui comprennent le français ici, j'aurais pas crue!
Mayuki = Cutest couple



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Re: 48 days to write your destiny - Chapter 1[VF ver.] [Mayuki][Takayuu]
« Reply #36 on: December 10, 2012, 01:08:51 PM »
Ok guys, watching you guys writing French making me so jealous and feel lonely TT.TT

I wish i new French like some of you ><

I'm waiting, waiting for the English version, waiting for Anzai to come back...

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Re: 48 days to write your destiny - Chapter 1[VF ver.] [Mayuki][Takayuu]
« Reply #37 on: December 15, 2012, 10:03:16 PM »
I'm back and I already finish the translation. I give it to Lyloo this evening and it will be no long before the update !! :cow: :cow:

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Re: Re: 48 days to write your destiny - Chapter 1[Eng ver.] [Mayuki][Takayuu]
« Reply #38 on: December 16, 2012, 12:10:45 AM »
Wow.. you actually killed mayuyu.. it's great!! I love death-themed fanfic XD

When i saw the title "48 days to write you destiny" i thought someone already dead, but God tease him/her. He gave him/her 48 days as a second chance to finished the unfinished bussiness in this world. XD



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Re: 48 days to write your destiny - Chapter 1[Eng ver.] [Mayuki][Takayuu]
« Reply #39 on: December 16, 2012, 05:24:35 PM »
Hehe Thank you !

I'll start to write the second chapter now ~

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