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Offline Sydney W

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Re: The 2nd Chance... Chapter 2 Pt I
« Reply #20 on: August 19, 2012, 04:16:11 PM »
Minami is still alive. It's the 2nd chance. But i guess "she" in "he" mode (kai) ??
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‘But wait a minute. Why does my chest felt different? My chest…. Wait… My BREAST! What happened? Why does my body feel so different?’
~ Could it be Minami's become Takahashi Kai ?? Hehehehe

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Re: The 2nd Chance... (Astumina) Chapter 2 Pt I
« Reply #21 on: August 19, 2012, 06:53:29 PM »
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Not before I get to make Atsumina happen for real… Right?
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wait.. what? so the second chance has begun?
and why Aamin? XD
it's gonna be interesting XD

will be waiting for your next update :thumbsup

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Re: The 2nd Chance... (Astumina) Chapter 2 Pt I
« Reply #22 on: August 20, 2012, 05:18:55 AM »
of course she is he.. a maeda`s brother perhaps..

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Re: The 2nd Chance... (Astumina) Chapter 2 Pt I
« Reply #23 on: August 20, 2012, 05:28:57 AM »
Wait...NOoooooooooooo. I want Minami not Kai :(.

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Re: The 2nd Chance... (Astumina) Chapter 2 Pt I
« Reply #24 on: August 20, 2012, 02:01:05 PM »
 :shocked B--boo--ies?
Eh? Kai?

Wrong Maeda?  :lol:  :rofl:

Interresting :hehehe:

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Re: The 2nd Chance... (Astumina) Chapter 2 Pt I
« Reply #25 on: August 20, 2012, 03:27:35 PM »
Eh!!! Takamina became a guy?!!!!

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Re: The 2nd Chance... (Astumina) Chapter 2 Pt I
« Reply #26 on: August 21, 2012, 02:38:39 PM »
THANKS FOR UPDATING

PLEASE UPDATE ALWAYS
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Re: The 2nd Chance... (Astumina) Chapter 2 Pt I
« Reply #27 on: October 23, 2012, 07:04:06 PM »
pls!
Update this!↲ :banghead: :banghead:

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Re: The 2nd Chance... (Astumina) Chapter 2 Pt I
« Reply #28 on: October 23, 2012, 07:37:07 PM »
Pls update  :bow:
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Re: The 2nd Chance... (Astumina) Chapter 2 Pt I
« Reply #29 on: December 07, 2012, 12:39:47 AM »
this might me laugh a lot ..

maeda ami. really funny     :lol: :lol:

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Re: The 2nd Chance... (Astumina) Chapter 2 Pt I
« Reply #30 on: December 17, 2012, 01:28:52 PM »
Great second chance...

Erm... is it going to be Kai with Atsuko or Minami able to come back alive again so she can have her happy ending with Atsuko.

Interesting plot... can't wait to see the next one.

And thank you for the update.

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Re: The 2nd Chance... (Astumina) Chapter 2 Pt I
« Reply #31 on: December 17, 2012, 04:08:21 PM »
SORRY FOR THE LONG HIATUS!

I need to be shoot for being a lousy writer that abandons his fics...

I will continue this fic for sure! I just need to have a weekend without shows, gigs, weddings, assignments and a nagging mom so that I can sip my coffee and write =x

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Re: The 2nd Chance... (Astumina) Chapter 2 Pt I
« Reply #32 on: March 26, 2013, 06:39:11 AM »
this fic is awesome!  :lol: please update it i wanna know what's gonna happen to takamina! please! :panic:

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Re: The 2nd Chance... (Astumina) Chapter 2 Pt I
« Reply #33 on: March 26, 2013, 11:28:57 AM »
Please update soon this fic is so great ;)

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Re: The 2nd Chance... (Astumina) Chapter 2 Pt I
« Reply #34 on: March 27, 2013, 03:24:58 PM »
great fic!! so minami is going to be kai eh?
I'll be waiting for your updates!!! :P

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Re: The 2nd Chance... (Astumina) Chapter 2 Pt I
« Reply #35 on: March 27, 2013, 04:38:46 PM »
woah... I'm ashamed that I'm always a dropout for fanfics.

But I'm energized by the support and I shall update soon!


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Re: The 2nd Chance... (Astumina) Chapter 2 Pt I
« Reply #36 on: March 30, 2013, 06:08:13 PM »
Chapter 2 Part 2

I think I fainted again as the familiar sense of blacking out happened again. Was it due to the pain or the shock of seeing the wrong Maeda, I didn’t knew.

What I understand was that the world started to spin around and everything turned into darkness.

And that’s when she appeared again.

The one that takes the face of Shinoda Mariko…

 The one called Death…

I was in a pretty grumpy mode in my sub-conscious mind when she appeared, smiling as if nothing had happened.

“Ah… you are finally awake?”

“Yes… and I fainted again….” I replied with my usual pout.

“Oh… somebody is grouchy today… What happened? Somebody brought you back to life?” replied Death as she covered her mouth with her hand to hide a coy laugher.

“…”

“You did lose the jankan. You should have done a Paruru. The scissors would have won against my cloth. But then again, you were never Jankan Senbatsu. But Death-sama is in a good mode. Therefore, you shall…”

“Live…? Not in this state! I can’t! This is wrong! I’m not going to go back like this…”

“Like I said… Beggars can’t be choosers and Losers can’t be weepers… You can consider this… The Consolation prize…”

“Consolation prize? Over my bloody ass! I didn’t ask for this! I demand a rematch… A rematch! I want a…”

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“Rematch….” I gasped and immediately broke into a coughing fit due to the exhaustion from talking in my current condition.

‘Damn the bloody no-good clone of Mariko-sama…’ I though as each cough brought a sharp jab of pain on my chest.

“I won’t advise you to be so active for a start…” a soft voice hinted with a smirk.

‘… That sounds familiar... It’s like the same… same but different…’

A peep from my eye brought another attack of wheezing cough attacks…

“Seriously, Takahashi-san, if you keep on over exacting on yourself…” chides the doctor, as he gives himself a facepalm, only to receive a playful rap on the head by the nurse behind him.

“Watanabe Sensei…  shouldn’t you be glad that he didn’t die on you? It won’t be good if our God’s Hand has a blemish on his perfect record…”

“Mou… That hurts… Can’t you cut me some slack…” whines the doctor as he massaged his head, pretending that the rap was the most painful thing in the world.

“Oh… stop acting like a kid in front of your patient…” chides the nurse as she pulls the childish doctor away by the collar to introduce themselves properly.

“Takahashi-kun, I am your nurse-in-charge, Kashiwagi Yuki and this is Watanabe Yuma-sensei, your doctor-in-charge… Yoroshiku Onegaishimasu…”

“Uso…”

This is totally getting out of hand!!!

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Great…

First I have to die…

But I got a chance to be revived…

But lost it in a chance of Jankan, which I was totally never good in…

And I got revived but…

In a body that is me but not me…

And got hugged by the wrong Maeda…

And now the wrong  Maeda is gone…

But I see Mayuki in front of me…

But the Mayu is not the perfect cyborg idol but the perfect cyborg doctor

And she’s now a MALE …

And the perfect dazzling idol Yukirin is now the perfect dazzling nurse…

And what else next?

A visit by Riku and Kuu?

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Re: The 2nd Chance... (Astumina) Chapter 2 Pt 2 (Updated 31 March 2013)
« Reply #37 on: March 30, 2013, 08:13:44 PM »
Thank you for update
I looking forward for the next
Please update soon :)

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Re: The 2nd Chance... (Astumina) Chapter 2 Pt 2 (Updated 31 March 2013)
« Reply #38 on: March 31, 2013, 05:58:37 AM »
hahaha... I can understand Minami's (Kai's) dilemma...

Yeah... everything seems to be different.... like she (he) is in a different universe all together...

What's going to happen next?

Are Riku and Kuu appearing soon?

How is Atsumina going to get together?

Is this new version of dimension some kind of test for Kai?

Can't wait to find out more

Thank you for the lovely update

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