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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Library => Topic started by: miyumi on August 11, 2012, 08:23:52 PM
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Konichiwa! Miyumi des! I have a new story for everyone to love and enjoy. The center is going to be Yuko because you guys voted for her. The title is temporary until I make up a new one. But for now, please enjoy! Oh and before I forget, here's a link to one of my older stories to those who just met me:
http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33391.msg1068622#msg1068622 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33391.msg1068622#msg1068622)
Here is a link to my new story 48 Days. Check it out!
http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33532.msg1083363#msg1083363 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33532.msg1083363#msg1083363)
And so here is the prolouge to my new story Space Love. Douzo!
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Space Love Prolouge
"Oh look it's that weird girl. What's her name?"
"I don't know Yoko?"
"Yoko? What a stupid name."
"I know right. You know she's a real pervert. Yesterday she got caught peeping on the girls swim team while they were changing."
"God what is she a les?"
"I bet. She reminds me of those creepy otakus."
"Let's stay away from her."
The two girls laughed as they continued to walk out of the classroom. Little did they know that Yuko had been walking behind them the entire time and heard everything they said.
"Those brats."
Oshima Yuko is your average high school student. She gets good grades and plays sports. She has friends and gets along with most people. However, those who don't know Yuko think of her as a pervert and think she's weird because she likes girls. They often pick on her for that and bully her. Yuko doesn't care of course because she doesn't want to fight. Sometimes she even laughs along with the insults.
"Next time I'll really weird them out."
People think it's strange to laugh while you're being insulted. They often avoid Yuko because they just think she's weird. Yuko didn't mind being the outcast. She didn't mind being the weird one and everyone afraid of her. But sometimes, she gets tired of being alone and wishes she had a friend. One day Yuko was walking home late from school and stopped to look at the stars.
"Bright and beautiful as always."
There was always this spot on a hill that Yuko goes to look at the stars. The sight of them always make her feel relaxed and just wash all her troubles away. The stars were Yuko's only friend.
"Woah a shooting star! I better make a wish.... I wish I had a friend. Someone who I can be with forever."
The star passed and Yuko sighed.
"Yeah right. Like that's ever going to happen."
Yuko stayed for a little longer and then was about to pack up and leave. But then suddenly there was a bright flash in the sky. Yuko looked up and saw a ball of fire heading straight for her. Yuko ducked out of the way and ball crashed only a couple of feet away from her. Smoke filled the air making it hard to see. But when it cleared, Yuko almost freaked. There deep in the ground was some kind of capsule.
"What is this?"
Yuko walked over and examined it. There was a handle and a small glass window. Yuko looked in it and saw a girl.
"I gotta get her out of there!"
Yuko tried to grab the handle but the capsule was still hot. She was afraid the girl was hurt so despite the burns, Yuko pulled the the door open. There lying in it was a girl with long brown hair and cat ears. She was wearing a sliver cloth and had a strange mark on her arm. Yuko was so busy staring in awe that she almost didn't hear the people starting to come out. She couldn't just leave the girl there so she pulled her out of the capsule.
"Man you're heavy."
Yuko carried the girl all the way back to her house and set her on the bed. Yuko lived alone because her parents left a long time ago. They send her money to pay the bills but otherwise Yuko lives alone. After having a better look at the girl, Yuko was able to give a proper examination.
"She looks so cute..."
She then stroked the girls arm.
"Her skin is so smoothe and her hair is long."
Yuko reached out and poked the girl's chest.
"And her boobs are perfect!"
Yuko kept looking at the girl when she noticed something around her neck that she never saw before. It looked like a collar and on it was a small gem. Yuko was about to touch it but then suddenly it started glowing. Soon after a hologram of a person came out from the gem.
"To whoever finds this please listen. I am personal maid Minegishi Minami of the Nekomimi Kingdom. The girl before you is princess Kojima Haruna. She is the princess of our kingdom. I put her into the escape capsule and sent her away because our planet is under attack. I feared that our people would be killed so I sent the princess to Earth in hopes someone will care for her. To the kind human who found her, please take care of her. I will send updates on what's happening here but for now please do not lose her. She is our last hope for survival. Minegishi out."
The hologram shut shut off and went back into the gem.
"Princess?"
Yuko looked at the girl and couldn't belive what she heard.
"Wait so then she's an alien! And she a princess? Of cat people! Kya!!!"
Yuko started to freak out. Hearing all this was too much for her tiny brain to handle. Eventually Yuko was able to calm down and put herself back together.
"Ok Yuko I need to stay calm. Just stay calm and you'll be alright. It's just a dream. I'm going to close my eyes and when I open them she'll be gone."
Yuko closed her eyes and then opened. When she did the girl was still there.
"Ok plan B."
Yuko ran into the kitchen and pulled out a frying pan.
"Se no!"
Yuko hit herself in the head with the frying pan and ended up knocking herself out. When she woke up, the girl was gone.
"Whew I was dreaming after all."
"Nya!"
"What?"
Yuko turned around and saw the girl now fully awake and staring at Yuko with her ears out and tail waving.
"Ahhhhh!"
Yuko jumped up and hit her head on the shelf.
"Itai!"
Yuko curled into a ball and held her head. The girl saw she was in pain and walked over. She grabbed Yuko's head and kissed it. When she did that, the pain in Yuko's head disappeared.
"Huh? It's gone."
Yuko looked over at the girl and she just smiled at Yuko.
"Ah what a cute smile!"
Yuko reached out and hugged her. The girl didn't know what was going on but she didn't like the way Yuko was burying her face in her her chest.
"Nya!"
She pushed Yuko away and back up a little.
"Ahh I'm sorry. Are you hurt anywhere?"
The girl just stared at Yuko not sure what do with her. But then suddenly she got a strange look on her face.
"What's wrong?"
Out of nowhere there was a loud growl.
"Are you hungry?"
The girl didn't know what to do. She just looked around trying to find something to eat.
"Ahh I know!"
Yuko ran to the kitchen and brought back a fish.
"Here."
The girl looked at it with disgust and slapped it of of Yuko's hand.
"Eh? I thought cats liked fish."
"Nya!"
"Nya? Well what else could you eat... I know!"
Yuko ran back into the kitchen and brought out a chicken. The sight of this made the girl's eyes widen to the size of bowls. She snatched it and then started eating it.
"Looks like I found something you like."
Yuko watched her eat and just thought how adorable she looked. When she was finished, she walked over to Yuko and kissed her right on the lips.
"Thank... you..."
"EHHHH?!"
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Well there's the prolouge. So what do you think? Should I continue or start new? It's up to you!
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CONTINUE!!!!!!
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OMG!!!!!
I'm so flabbergasted, so amazed, so... I don't have proper words for this awesomeness!!!!
Please, CONTINUE!!!!
AH, YUKO-SAMA!!! :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1:
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Interesting start! I was having flashes of WH7's Shounen yo Uso wo Tsuke PV in my mind when Haruna first appeared. Now let's see what you have in store for the rest of the cast :deco:
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I LOVE it :luvluv1: :luvluv2:
it's really interesting :glasses:
It's rare to see Haruna kiss Yuko at first :shy1:
I can't wait for the first chapter :hee:
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akjdoufhekjbfakjchwndsfnwefdnfwefwen!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is damn fantastinc!!!!! I love it! hope the same happens to Mayuki.....~
this is damn cute! sorry for my words but I cant express what I feel rigt now.I feel like a bomb about to go out~
please update soon!!!!dont forget about the others~(mayuki...wmatsu.....etc....)
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ahhh my kojiyuu so cute :cathappy: look like yuko wish come true somehow :lol:
please continue XD
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@sakura_drop_:Thank you for being the first one to comment! Also, I'm glad you love the story. I hope love it more as the story continues. :lol:
@seigus: Yes about the others.. still working on them. It might be a while before I introduce the others so bare with me please! :nervous
@mo-chan: Hooray you love it! I'm glad you do like it. This one is going to be very interesting for me as well. XD
@yuukimoko: Haha it appears both you and sakuradrop like to use random letters. I don't mind if you swear it's fine with me. Oh and don't worry, I will make sure to share the love with the others like I always do. :oops:
@anzai48: HOLY JESUS! The legendary anzai-san has appeared! Oh my gosh I am so happy! You're like a god to me and I worship you! I am so happy to read your praise! Oh and if you don't mind, I would suggest you read Mad House first. That was my very first one and also the best one I thought so far. Ahh I'm fangirling right now. Kya I feel like I just met my senpai! :wub: :inlove:
@kojiyuu109: Ahh thank you for commenting. I hope you enjoy the story. And it looks like you're new here if I'm correct welcome to the forum! I hope you enjoy your time here. :welcome
Minna! Thanks to everyone's nice comments and cheers, I have decided to continue the story. I was a little skeptical about it at first but then after seeing how much everyone liked it I am deciding to continue it. So here is the first chapter please enjoy! Oh and I think I'll just keep the title. It's nice right? I don't know it's all I could think of.
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Chapter 1
Yuko woke up and walked into the kitchen to get a glass of milk. But when she tried to get up, she felt something heavy on her legs. She looked down and saw the princess from last night curled up on her legs.
"Ahh kawaii!"
The sleeping princess looked adorable to Yuko and didn't want to disturb her. Yuko carefully got out of bed and walked to the kitchen. She looked at the time and realized how late it was. Was going to be late for school if she didn't hurry. But then again no one would miss her anyways so Yuko decided to stay home.
"I have the right to have a day off."
Yuko walked back into her room where the princess was still sleeping. She could stare at her forever while happily sipping milk but then the princess woke up.
"Good morning." Yuko said.
"Morning." she said.
"You can speak Japanaese now?"
"Little."
Yuko thought about it for a while and then figured it out. Yuko guessed that when the princess kissed her last night then she gained the ability to speak Japanese a little bit. Her level of speech was about the same as a five year old.
"What's you're name?"
"Haruna."
"Cute name. My name is Yuko."
"Yuko."
"That's right!"
Yuko patted Haruna's head and Haruna made a purring noise. But then there was a loud growl coming from her stomach.
"Haurna are you hungry?"
"Yes!"
"Ok come with me."
Yuko brought Haruna into the kitchen and sat her at the table.
"So what would you like to eat?" Yuko asked.
"Bird!" Haruna said.
"Eh? But you ate all the chicken last night. Hmmm... I got it!"
Yuko grabbed a bowl and scooped some rice out from the rice maker.
"Here."
Yuko placed it on the table and Haruna just looked at it with a curious face.
"It's rice. Try it."
"Rice.."
Haruna took her hand and grabbed some. Then she shoved it in her mouth and started chewing. A couple seconds later, a happy expression came across Haruna's face.
"You like it?"
"Un!"
Haruna started shoving mouthfuls scattering rice everywhere.
"Hey chotto mate."
Yuko grabbed a napkin and tried to wipe Haruna's face off from all the rice on it. But because Haruna was still moving it was hard to clean it all off.
"Hey hold still you."
Haruna kept eating and eventually Yuko got all the rice off.
"More!"
"More?"
Yuko saw Haruna's bowl was empty and she was still hungry.
"Well you just ate the last of the rice and I still have to go to the store."
"No more?"
Haruna looked like she was going to start crying.
"No no just wait a minute."
Yuko ran to the fridge and desperately started searching for something the princess could eat. Then she saw some leftover shrimp in the back. It still looked good so Yuko brought it over.
"This is fried shrimp."
"Fried shrimp."
Haruna was about to reach out and grab it but then Yuko stopped her.
"Let me feed you. You always make a mess."
Yuko took a shrimp and held it up to Haruna. She sniffed it first and took a tiny bite. As soon as she finished chewing, Haruna's face looked like she had just eaten one of those fancy cakes. Without warning Haruna bit down on the entire shrimp and some of Yuko's hand.
"Itai!"
Yuko tried to pull out but Haruna was strong. She could feel Haruna's tounge licking Yuko's fingers cleaning off every crumb. Then she finally let go and Yuko's hand was covered in saliva.
"Haruna do you like shrimp?"
"Haruna like shrimp!"
"Good. Well here's another now be gentle this time."
Yuko fed Haruna another shrimp amd this time she didn't bite her hand.
"Haruna full."
"Ok then what do you want to do now?"
"Haruna want to sleep."
"How can you be tired already? You just got up an hour ago."
"Haruna tired."
"Come on."
Yuko took Haurna into the main room and sat her on the couch.
"Use me as a pillow."
"Piyow?"
"Yes pillow. Like this."
Yuko leaned in and placed her head on Haurna's lap.
"Now you try."
Haurna did what Yuko did and was now resting on Yuko.
"Good night Haruna."
"Night."
Within seconds Haruna had fallen asleep.
"Man does she tire quickly. Nows my chance to go to the store and get more food."
Yuko quietly slipped Haruna onto an actually pillow and then got her shoes on. Then she left saying she would be back soon. Yuko went to the store and bought as much as she could. That included about five bags of rice and ten packs of shrimp with ten in each pack making a hundred total. She also got a cat toy just to see what would happen if she used it on Haurna. Yuko walked over to the check out area and the clerk just looked at her funny.
"What I like shrimp. Got a problem with that?"
The store clerk checked Yuko out and then Yuko left. When she got home, she opened the door and found Haruna floating mid air in the family room chasing after something.
"Haruna!"
Haruna saw Yuko and flew over to her.
"Yuko!"
"Haruna how are you flying?"
Haruna didn't say anything. Instead she touched Yuko's forehead and then she started to float.
"Ehhh!"
"Yuko play with Haruna!"
Haruna flew into another room leaving Yuko floating.
"Hey how do I move?"
Yuko was just floating there but she didn't know how to move forward. It was like she was floating in space. Yuko reached out and managed to push herself off a wall into the room Haruna went into. But right when she came in, Haruna came flying out and crashed right into Yuko. The two fell on the floor with Haruna on top of Yuko.
"Itai!"
Yuko tried to shove Haruna off her but ended grabbing Haruna's boobs.
"Nya!"
Haruna jumped up and ran into another room.
"Haruna it's not what you think!"
The door slammed shut and Yuko heard the sound of the lock.
"Mou why did that have to happen. Then again..."
Yuko remembered the soft feeling of Haruna. She got that perverted grin on her face and started to drift into hentai land but then had to smack herself back into focus.
"Haruna come out! I didn't mean to hurt you!"
There was no answer.
"If you come out I'll make you shrimp!"
Hearing the word shrimp made Haruna burst out of the door.
"Shrimp!"
"Ok ok hang on I'll make it for you."
An hour later, Yuko was done making lunch.
"Eat up."
The two ate in silence. Everyone once in a while Yuko would glance over at Haruna and watch her eat the shrimp. Pretty soon she was done and was now looking for more.
"Here."
Yuko slid her plate over and Haruna gladly ate the shrimp.
"Ne from now on I'm going to call you Nyannyan ok?"
"Nyannyan?"
"Yes. You Nyannyan me Yuu-chan."
"Yuu-chan."
"That's right!"
"Yuu-chan!"
"Hey Nyannyan look what I got!"
Yuko pulled out the cat toy that she had gotten. It was one of those toy mouses with a bell on the inside. The sound of the bell made Haruna interested in the toy.
"Look Nyannyan it's moving!"
Yuko started shaking it trying to make it look like it was alive. Haruna thought it really was alive and panicked.
"Nya!"
Haruna grabbed onto Yuko and clung tightly to her.
"Nyannyan calm down it's a toy."
Yuko picked it up and put it away in her pocket. Haurna was still holding onto Yuko afraid it might crawl out. It was during that time that Yuko realized Haruna really needed a bath.
"Ahh Nyannyan you stink! Let's get you in the bath."
"Bath?"
There was a struggle at first but then Yuko finally got Haurna to get in the water. Once she got in, Haruna realized how nice the warm water felt. Yuko grabbed the shampoo and started scrubbing Haruna's head.
"Close your eyes."
Yuko dumped some water on Haruna that made her flnich.
"It's ok it's just water. Keep your eyes closed."
Yuko herself had her eyes closed because as much as she would love to see Haruna naked, she still wanted to respect her privacy by not looking. Because her eyes were closed, Yuko didn't realize she got soap right in Haruna's eyes.
"Nya!"
Haruna got up and started to run. Yuko opened her eyes and ran saw Haruna running around the bathroom with her eyes closed.
"Nyannyan come here!"
"Where Yuu-chan?"
"Right here."
Yuko grabbed Haruna's hand and pulled her closer. Yuko took the shower hose and washed Haruna's face and eventually got all the soap out. Once they dried off and got dressed again, it was already dinner time. Of course Haruna wanted shrimp again so Yuko had no choice but to make it for her. After a good meal it was time for bed.
"Ahh I'm so tired!"
Yuko plopped onto the bed and stretched her arms out. Haruna did the same thing copying Yuko only she looked cuter.
"Ahh kawaii!" Yuko said.
"Haruna tired." Haruna said.
"Well get a good nights sleep. I'll see you in the morning."
"Yuu-chan leaving?"
"No Nyannyan. Just sleeping. Now you go to sleep."
"Pillow."
"Oh that's right you need a pillow."
Yuko got up and was about to go get a pillow for Haruna but then Haruna grabbed Yuko's hand.
"Pillow."
Apparenlty Haurna thought Yuko was a pillow.
"Ok."
Yuko got into bed and then Haruna rested her head on Yuko's stomach.
"Heehee Yuu-chan make funny sounds."
"Hey don't laugh at my tummy. If you're going to listen to my body listen to this."
Yuko made Haruna rest her head on her chest.
"Thump thump. What that?" Haruna asked.
"That's my heart Nyannyan. You have one too." Yuko said.
"Heart?"
"Yes. It beats because there's someone you love."
"Love?"
"Love is when you really really like someone."
"Oh... Nyannyan love Yuu-chan!"
"Ehh?"
Yuko blushed heavily at Haruna after hearing those words. She wasn't sure if Haruna was for real or she just didn't know what she was knowing. While thinking, Haruna yawned and then eventually passed out. Yuko reached over and light stroked Haruna's face.
"I guess I love you too then Haruna."
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Chapter one is done! So what do you think? Should I still keep going? Please tell me what you think!
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of course u have to keep going XD this side of haruna is really cute kojiyuu is sweet like always :inlove:
i'll wait for ur next update :)
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as always kojiyuu are too fast :luvluv1: :luvluv2:
Harruna is really a cat :shy2:
I wonder what id going to happen after :dunno:
update soon :hee:
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UWA~!! So sweet!! :wub: :wub: :wub: KojiYuu is just perfection in this!!!
Yuko-sama is as always a pervert, and Haruna in this one is really funny... Imagine her running all wet and naked with closed eyes around the house :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
Please, update soon!!! :bow: :bow:
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@kojiyuu109: Ah thankyou for ecoouraging me to keep going. I will do my best! :)
@mo-chan: I guess you'll have to read what happens next. Let's take a look shall we? :P
@sakura_drop_: Perfection? Haha I wouldn't say that but it's getting there. Just a little more time and I'll have something that'll blow your mind. ;)
Well here's chapter 2! I think it's time to introduce everyone else! So please enjoy the chaper!
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Chapter 2
It's been a couple days now and Yuko thinks she finally getting somewhere with Haruna. She's tought her how to make rice, clean up after eating, how to sweep, oh and how to use the bathroom. Teaching her how to use the bathroom was the hardest of them all. She peed on the rug three times before Yuko finally got her to use the toliet. But now a new problem has arrived. Yuko has been skipping school for the past four days and she got a notice saying she has to go back or she'll be expelled.
"Crap. What do I do?"
Yuko wasn't sure if Haruna would be alright on her own for such a long time. She couldn't just ask a random person to watch her. So she has no other choice.
"Nyannyan."
"Yeah?"
"Listen tomorrow I have to go to school." Yuko said.
"Skool?" Haruna said.
"School Nyannyan. It's a place where you go to learn things."
"Nyannyan want to go to!"
"No Nyannyan you have to stay here at home."
"Nooo!"
"Look Nyannyan I'll only be gone for a couple hours so I need you to be a good girl and stay here."
"Nyannyan want to go with Yuu-chan."
"I'm sorry Nyannyan but you can't. I'll only be gone for a couple of hours. Then when I get back we'll have fun ok?"
"But-"
"Nyannyan if you be good for me and stay here I'll take you to place where you can eat a lot of shrimp."
"Shrimp! Ok Nyannyan be good and stay here. Nyannyan wait for Yuu-chan to come home."
"Good girl."
The next day Yuko left for school while Haruna was still sleeping. She made Haruna breakfast and then set off for school. When she got there, no one notcied her. But when she walked over to ther desk, she saw writing on it.
"Pervert, lesbian, freak, weirdo."
The basic insults she often got. Yuko ignored it and was about to sit down when someone grabbed her butt.
"Nice butt as always oshiri sister Yuko."
Yuko reached around and grabbed the other person's butt.
"As to you oshiri sister Mayu."
Yuko turned around and saw Watanabe Mayu one of her only friends in school. The two both have a fascination over butts so they call themselves the oshiri sisters. Mayuyu is actually pretty nice to Yuko and gets along well with her. They always have fun when talking about butts and like touching each others from time to time. There's only one thing about Mayuyu that Yuko is kind of scared of.
"Hey hands off my girl."
"Oh sorry Yuki."
"Oh come one Yukirin we're only having fun."
"It looked like you were having too much fun."
"Aww I'm sorry."
Mayuyu leaned in and kissed Yukirin on the cheek.
"Ok you're forgiven."
Kashiwagi Yuki is Mayuyu's girl friend. That's right they're already a couple and Yuko envys them for that. Yukirin is very protective over Mayuyu. She's like the over protective mothers in those dramas you see. Yuki is usually a nice person but if you mess with Mayuyu you're in a world of pain.
"So why were you gone so long Yuko?" Yukirin asked.
"I was feeling a little sick."
"You should've told me!" Mayuyu said.
"Oh no I'm fine now."
"Well it looks like those girls wrote on your desk again."
"I don't care. I'm used to it."
"You shouldn't Yuko. You should fight back."
"No Mayuyu if she did that then she would get kicked out." Yukirin said.
"That's right." Yuko said.
"Oh. But if this keeps up then I don't know how much longer I can hold back. I can't stand seeing my oshiri sister being treated like this!" Mayuyu said.
"Well when that time comes I'll let you know."
"You better."
"You really are a good friend."
The bell rang and class began. it was pretty boring and Yuko already knew all the stuff so she wondered why she even came to school. The lesson ended and Yuko was getting ready to go to her next class. While putting away her things, one of the girls walked over.
"Look who showed up."
"What do you want now?"
"Nothing. Just came to welcome you back."
The girl took Yuko's notebook and tore it in half.
"Welcome back."
The girl dropped her notebook on the ground and walked away. Yuko was about to pick it up when a hand had already reached out to grab it.
"Now this won't do. Here you can borrow mine for your next class."
Yuko looked up and saw Matsui Rena holding out her notebook. Rena was a very quiet person. She rarely talks but she's super smart. Also she may not look like it but she's really good when it comes to archery. She could shoot you down a mile away. Another interesting thing about Rena is that she has a little follower who's a first year here and always comes and visits her when she has the time.
"Thanks Rena I'll make sure to give it back to you."
"Oh no you can keep it. I have extras."
"You sure?"
"Oh yes it's fine."
"Rena-chan!"
Yuko looked over and saw Matsui Jurina. Although have the same family name, they aren't related. Jurina is like Rena's little puppy and follows her everywhere. She clings to the girl like a koala and tries to steal a kiss from here every so often. Jurina runs on the track team and is basically their ace in all the races. The girl can really run when you give her something she wants. But because she's a first year and Yuko and Rena are third years, Jurina rarely has time to see Rena.
"Shouldn't you be in class right now?"
"I skipped it so I could come and see you."
"Jurina you shouldn't do that."
"But I wanted to see you!"
"Jurina if you don't go to class then you won't pass and if you don't pass you'll be held back while I move on."
"Oh no you're right! I gotta get back to class. I'll see you later!"
Jurina kissed Rena on the cheek and then ran off.
"Jeez that girl. Well I better get going as well. See you later."
"Bye."
Yuko went to her next class and walked into a fight between two girls.
"Hey you midget why don't you tell your girl friend to watch where she's going."
"Why don't you you walking sack of sausages!"
"What was that."
"Ladies, ladies lets's not fight now."
"But-"
"Go back to your seat and wait for class to start."
"Hai!"
The one girl walked away while the shorter one walked over to her friend.
"Did you see that Acchan! I was brave and stood up for you!"
"I did see that! I'm so proud of you!"
"Hey you guys!"
"Oh hey Yuko!"
The short midget on the left is Takahashi Minami. She's kinda short for a girl her age but can be tough. She's captain of the swim team and is actually a very fast swimmer. Takamina often hangs out with Acchan because those two have been best friends since the day they were born. Yuko wouldn't say their relationship is boyfriend girlfriend but more like husband and wife.
"It's been a while Yuko."
The taller one to the left is Maeda Atsuko. She doesn't do any sports but she's in the origami club here at school and is pretty good at it. She's always with Takamina and the two constantly goof off all the time. Yuko found it cute whenever they had lovey dovey moments. But one thing about Acchan that other people don't know is that Acchan comes from a very rich family. She has enough money to buy the school and make her the principal.
"Where have you been Yuko?" Takamina asked.
"Oh I've been sick." Yuko said.
"That's not good. Have you been hurling?" Acchan asked.
"No. By the way, what were getting into a fight about?"
"That girl ran into Acchan and didn't apologize so I was ready to fight her."
"One of these days you're going to get hurt you know."
"I know and I don't care as long as you're ok in the end."
"Oh you!"
Class started and once again Yuko knew everything. When class ended it was time for lunch and Yuko was starving.
"Hey did you get the notes from someone? We have a test coming up and you'll need them." Acchan said.
"Ah no I didn't."
"Well after class go look for Sayaka. I bet she'll let you borrow them."
"Ok thanks."
"Acchan come on. Let's get going before they run out of noodle bread!"
"Ok ok I'm going."
Takamina and Acchan ran off and Yuko got ready to go as well. She went down to the cafeteria and found a nice place to eat. She was about to dig in when the same group of girls came over.
"Trash like you doesn't deserve to eat."
One girl grabbed Yuko's lunch box and dumped the food on the table.
"Hey I was going to eat that!"
"Well too bad. What are you going to do about it?"
"Nothing."
"That's right because you're too afraid to do anything."
"She maybe but I'm not."
The group of girls turned around and saw a taller girl standing behind them.
"You girls better apologize before I make you."
"Oh and how?"
The girl didn't answer. She just took the girls head and slammed it on the ground into the food.
"Apologize."
"I'm sorry I'm sorry!"
"Good. Now get lost."
The girl and her friends ran away screaming,
"Look out the gorilla is mad!"
"Those girls... one of these days I'm really going to let them have it."
"Thanks Sayaka but it's ok."
"Well now you're lunch is gone. Here you can have mine."
"Is that really ok?"
"Yeah it's fine."
"Thanks."
Akimoto Sayaka is one of Yuko's good friends. She may look tough on the outside but she's actually a real softe on the inside. People make jokes about her being a guy and super tough but she actually wants to be girly and cute. Sayaka is the captian of the karate club and is actually stronger than all the guys which is why you don't want to mess with her. She's tough around others but when it comes to Yuko. she becomes the mother she never had.
"Hey Takamina said I could borrow some notes from you for the upcoming test."
"Oh yeah here."
"Thanks."
"Make sure you study them well. If you need help you can always come to me."
"I'll keep that in mind."
"HEY SAYAKA!"
Yuko looked over and saw Sae running over to them.
"Sae what are you running fro-"
Sae slammed into Sayaka knocking her down.
"Sayaka you gotta help. I'm being chased by crazy fangirls!"
"Again? Jeez Sae how many times have I told you to quit flirting with the girls!"
"I can't help it! They're all so cute."
"You're helpless."
"I would be without you."
Miyazawa Sae is another close friend of Yuko's. The three of them are like the three muskateers. Sae is known for being a ikemen because she looks like a guy and can get any girl she wants. She flirts with other girls but doesn't want a serious relationship with them. The one she wants a serious relationship with is Sayaka who is to oblivious to see it. Sae is like Yuko's father and always supports her and cares for her. Sayaka and Sae are like the parents Yuko never had and love them dearly for that.
"Thanks for fending off those girls for me Sayaka." Sae said.
"It was nothing. Now eat up lunch is over." Sayaka said.
"Hey Sae maybe next time you should tell them that you're dating Sayaka."
"Ehhh?"
Both of their faces turned red.
"I'm kidding!"
"Mou Yuko that's mean!" Sae said.
"Yeah don't joke around like that with us." Sayaka said.
"Sorry."
"Anyways I gotta get going. I'll see you laterr."
"Bye Sae!"
"Bye Sayaka!"
Sae left leaving Yuko with Sayaka.
"Thanks for the lunch."
"No problem. If those girls cause you trouble then just come and get me. I'll happily take care of them."
"You'll kill them."
"Exactly."
"Well I'll see you later then."
"Bye."
For the rest of the day Yuko wasn't bothered by the girls. Mainly because they were afraid Sayaka would go gorilla on them and throw them out the the window. School was over and Yuko rushed home to get to Haruna.
"Nyannyan I'm home!"
Yuko walked in and saw Haruna on the floor asleep.
"Looks like you didn't even know I was gone."
Yuko changed into regular clothes and then started to do her homework. It was during that time Haurna had woken up.
"Hi Nyannyan!"
"Yuu-chan!"
Haruna ran over and hugged Yuko.
"Was Nyanyan good today?" Yuko asked.
"Yes!" Haruna said.
"Ok the you know what that means?!"
"Shrimp!"
"Yep!"
"Let go!"
"Not now Nyanyann I'm doing homework."
"Nyannyan want shrimp now!"
"No Nyannyan not now."
"No!"
Haruna snatched the pencil from Yuko and started doing to homework. Within minutes it was all done. Haruna had solved quadratic equations like they were nothing and it all looked right to Yuko. She couldn't believe how Haruna had done that but she didn't care.
"Shrimp now!"
"Ok ok we'll go get shrimp."
"Yay!"
Yuko took Haruna to a small shop near her house where they sell stuff like fried shrimp and other sea foods. Haruna ordered the king sized platter of fried shrimp and Yuko couldn't believe how many shrimp there were.
"Yay shrimp! Nom!"
Haruna started eating all the shrump and Yuko just sat there and watched her. Not to mention all the people around them were amazed how one girl was able to eat that much. When she finished, Haruna let out a satisfied burp.
"Nyannyan excuse yourself."
"Escuse me."
"Good enough. Now come here."
Yuko wiped Haruna's face who was happily full.
"Nyannyan tired."
"Wait until we get home. Then you can sleep."
"Ok."
As soon as they got home, Haruna passed out on the bed. While she was sleeping, the gem on her collar started blinking. Soon after a hologram came out with the same person as last time.
"I've come to inform you that the battle is not getting any better. We are being pushed back and down to our last line of defense. I doubt this battle will end any time soon so please, watch our princess for just a little longer! Minegishi out."
The message ended and the hologram shut off. Hearing this, Yuko realized that Haruna wasn't going home anytime soon. But Yuko didn't mind because she liked Haruna being around her. SHe actually enjoyed her time with her.
"I guess this means you're staying with me for a little longer."
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Well there's chapter 2! I hope you all liked it and the introduction of everyone else. Look forward to the next chapter because let's just say a little cat wanders too far away from her home. Please tell me what you think as well!
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and so everyone entered the drama~ and Mayuyu and Yukirin are alredy a couple!? yeeeeeeyyyyyy~ they are so lovely! and Yuki is so protective(possesive)
thanks for the update~ go Kojiyuu go Mayuki~!!!! fighto~
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Yuki is protectative she easly got jealous when someone touch Mayu they are already dating :luvluv1:
Atsumina are always funny :hiakhiakhiak:
Sae and Sayaka shy as always
aaah~ it's good to see them again :on drink:
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Yuko-sama/KojiYuu are always perfect, no matter what the situation!! (the same goes for YukoRena :wub: :wub: :wub: )
Ah, MaYuki! :wub: And AtsuMina, SaeYaka! :wub: AND WMatsui!!! :inlove: :inlove: This can't get any better, now can it?!! And there was even a friendly YukoRena :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:
THANK YOU!! :bow: :bow:
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Oshiri Sisters banzai!!! :shakeit: I can get used to their butt-grabbing greetings :grin:
After the possessive Nezumi in Fight Club, we now have an over-protective Yukirin! :wub: :wub:
With all the kisses and love-love going on with MaYuki, WMatsui and AtsuMina, I wonder why Yuko is the only one being bullied and called a pervert/lesbian :rofl:
And for once, Sae isn't hitting on Yukirin! Damn, I like to see Mayuyu going all jealous and making life a living hell for Sae :twisted:
I can't wait for the next chapter. Nyannyan is going to get lost?! :shocked
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Love this!! Again and again...miyumi-saaaaaaaan~
Hahahaha LOL i love oshiri sister part shiriko-chan and shiriri-chan! Awww yuki get jealous...
In this story she become so possessive person toward mayuyu eh..love it!
And for wmatsui...what they relation? Already a couple like mayuki or...maybe on the process..
Saeyaka..love~
And kojiyuu~ i want to know more!
Thank miyumi-san
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@yuukimoko: Yes everyone has now stepped into the world. I decided to make Mayuki a couple right off the bat! And it seems you like it. :oops:
@mo-chan: Yes the gang is all here. Let's celebrate! :lol:
@sakura_drop_: I've decided to put everyone in and add a little more with the YukoRena thing. I hope you like the rest of the story! :P
@seigus: I thought the oshiri thing was cute. And yep this time Yukirin is protective of Mayuyu. I wonder how things will turn out for them. :oops:
@kurogumi: Oh so that's what their names are. Can you tell me which on is which please! Wmatsui is like is like senpai and super clingy kohai. But either way it's going to be cute. :inlove:
Well here's chapter 3! I hope you guys like it. This one has our little alien princess wander off on her own for once.
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Chapter 3
"Nyannyan I'm leaving for school. I'll see you later. Be goof now!"
"Byebye Yuu-chan!"
Yuko left leaving Haruna alone. Haruna sat there on the floor staring out the window at the nearby birds. Haruna wanted to catch them and try to eat them. But Yuko told her not to do that because it's not fair to the birds. Haruna was bored out of her mind and had nothing to do. Then she remembered the TV. Yuko had just recently taught her how to turn the TV on and change the TV.
"Red button."
Haruna clicked the red button and the TV turned on.
"Powar on!"
A woman came on and she was talking about something that Haruna didn't understand.
"And now here's Maki-san with today's good mother tips."
"Today's tip is making sure to always pack your child's lunch. A good mother always packs their child's lunch and makes sure they take it with them when they leave for school."
The woman pulled out a bento box wrapped in a cloth. Haruna looked over and saw the exact same thing sitting on the table.
"If your child doesn't eat then they won't grow to be big and strong."
Haruna thought Yuko needed her lunch since she was pretty short.
"Yuu-chan need to get big. Haruna take lunch to Yuu-chan."
Haruna grabbed the bento box and then started to walk out the door. But then Haruna remembered something Yuko had told her.
"Nyannyan you must never leave the house you understand. There are dangerous things out there adn I don't want you to get hurt."
"But Yuu-chan I want to help. For Yuu-chan!"
Haruna ran out the door to the outside for the first time. Haruna was amazed at everything. The sky, the clouds, the houses, the wind, everything was so new to her. It's as if she was born into a different world.
"Woah! Pretty!"
Haruna reached up to the sky trying to grab the clouds but she couldn't. She jumped as high as she could but still couldn't reach it.
"Nee-chan what are you doing?"
Haruna looked down and saw a little girl staring at her. Haruna pointed up at the sky.
"The clouds?"
"Clouds... clouds pretty."
"Yes they are. Where did you come from?"
Haruna pointed at Yuko's house.
"Oh you came from Yuko's house. I'm guessing that's her lunch your holding."
"Yeah!"
"Are you going to take it to her."
"Yeah."
"Well Yuko went that way. Follow the road and take a left. Go past the shrine and take a right. The school will be right there."
"Ok!"
The girl walked away and Haruna had no idea what she said.
"Where Yuu-chan."
Haruna stood there in the middle of the road looking around when suddenly there was a loud honk. Haruna looked over and saw a man in a metal box with wheels. He honked again and Haruna just stood there.
"Move out of the way."
He waved to the side and Haruna followed. Then he drove on leaving Haruna amazed at what she saw. But then she focused on her main objective. Find Yuko. Haruna looked around and then out of the corner of her eye she saw two girls with the same uniform as Yuko's. Maybe she knew where Yuko went. Haurna ran over to the girls and tapped her shoulder.
"Yuu-chan!"
"Yuu-chan? Oh you mean Yuko? Are you looking for her?"
"Yeah!"
"Oh then come with me. I'll take you to her."
"Yay!"
"Hey Jurina who is this?" Rena asked.
"I don't know but she's looking for Yuko." Jurina said.
"What's your name?"
"Nyannyan!"
"Nyannyan? Weird name. Let's take her to school."
"Yuu-chan need to grow."
"That's true. Yuko is a shortie." Jurina said.
"But not as short as Takamina!" Rena said.
"Yuu-chan hungry."
"No I think she isn't. We'll find out when we get here."
Rena, Jurina and Haruna arrived at the school.
"Well I'll see you later Rena."
"You too Jurina. Nyannyan let's go- Nyannyan?"
Haruna had wandered off on her own and was nowhere to be found. Rena just thought she had set off to find Yuko on her own so she left to her class. Meanwhile, Haruna had wandered over to a flower bed. Haruna was amused by all the pretty colors and different flowers. When she leaned in to smell them, she picked up a very sweet scent. Haruna loved it so much that she jumped into the flower bed and started rolling around in it.
"Hey what are you doing?!"
Haruna looked over and saw an angry man with a shovel running towards her. Haruna got scared and ran away taking the lunch with her.
"Must find Yuu-chan."
Haruna thought searching the whole place wasn't going to get her anywhere so she decided to climb a tree and look. She found the tallest tree and climbed up it. She could see through all the windows on the school. There on the fourth level was Yuko.
"Yuu-chan!"
Haruna shouted but Yuko couldn't hear her.
"Yuu-chan!"
Yuko still didn't hear her. Haruna thought she would get her attention by throwing something at the window. Haruna broke off a branch and threw it at the window and it hit. Yuko looked over and saw Haruna.
"Nyannyan? Eh!"
"Oshima-san is there something wrong?"
"Oh nothing."
Yuko didn't want to alert the others so she sat back down. She looked back over and saw Haruna waving her lunch box that she had fogotten.
"That idiot!" Yuko thought.
Yuko waved back and tried to tell her to stay there. But Haruna misunderstood and thought she said come to her. Haruna nodded her head and then jumped off the tree to the roof. There were students already there on the roof and when they saw Haruna land out of nowhere they were all spooked. Haruna just ignored them and ran into the building.
"Yuu-chan!"
Haurna jumped down the stairs and started running down the halls.
"Yuu-chan!"
Everyone just looked at Haruna wondering who she was and where she came from. Haruna ran all the way to a classroom and found Yuko. She slid the door open and walked in.
"Yuu-chan!"
"Nyannyan what are you doing here!"
"Nyannyan be a good mom and bring Yuu-chan lunch!"
Haruna set the lunch box down.
"Now Yuu-chan grow up big and strong."
"Oshima-san who is this?"
"Oh she's my cousin who just moved in with me. Everyone this is Oshima Haruna."
"She's so pretty!" a girl said.
"She looks cute." another said.
"Oshima-san does she go here?" the teacher asked.
"No she doesn't. Shes' just living with me for the moment."
"Well could you please tell her to leave. She's disrupting class."
"Hai."
Yuko turned to face Haruna.
"Nyannyan you need to go home now."
"But Nyannyan want to stay with Yuu-chan!"
"What is she you're girlfriend?"
"Take your girlfriend home you pervert!"
"Nyannyan please just go home."
"But Nyannyan wants to stay."
"Gosh Yuko what is she your pet or something?"
"You leave Nyannyan out of this!"
"Oh someone is getting protective over her girlfriend. I guess you really are a lesbian freak!"
Yuko started to cry and Haruna didn't like seeing that. She saw the girl who was causing all of Yuko's pain and walked over to her.
"What do you want?"
Haruna grabbed the girl by the head and picked her up from her desk.
"Yuu-chan sad because of you. Nyannyan don't like Yuu-chan sad. You go away now!"
Haruna threw her up to where her head had shot through the ceiling. Everyone was frightend by this and ran away.
"Nyannyan no!"
Haruna ran back over to Yuko with a sad face.
"Nyannyan sorry Yuu-chan."
"It's ok Nyannyan you were just protecting me."
"Oshima-san!! To the principal office! And take your cousin with!"
"Hai. Come one Nyannyan."
Yuko took Haruna to the principal's office where she was waiting.
"Yuko please sit down."
Yuko and Haruna took a seat.
"I just got done talking to the teacher. It seems your cousin caused some trouble. You know something has to be done about it."
"I'm sorry. It's just my cousin was recently in an accident and forgot everything. Her parents sent her to live with me so she could learn everything all over agian. I told her to stay home today but she went out on her own. Haruna doesn't realize how strong she is and what happened back there was because of what the girl did. She has the mind of a five year old right now."
"Oh.. Well if that's the case then how about she attends school here."
"Ehh?"
"She can come to school and relearn everything she had forgotten. You can be her personal teacher."
"I don't know if that's a good idea."
"Just give it a chance. I'm sure Haruna would like to come to school with you."
Yuko looked over at Haruna who was staring off into space.
"What do you think Nyannyan? Do you want to come to school with me?"
"Yeah!"
"Alright then it's settled. Tomorrow Haruna will attend school here. I'll be looking forward to your stay here."
"Yay!"
The next day Haruna showed up to school in her new school uniform. She walked into the classroom with Yuko and stood up in front.
"Just like we practiced Nyannyan." Yuko said.
"He-llo. My name is Oh-shi-ma Haruna. Nice chu meet chu."
Yuko facepalmed herself when she finished the last part. Haruna still couldn't speak properly. But everyone seemed to love it and thought it was cute. The teacher sat Haruna next to Yuko and the lesson began.
"Now pay attention Nyannyan this is all really important."
"Right."
When Yuko said that, something turned on in Haruna's head that made her start aborbing everything the teacher was writing. Little did Yuko know, Haruna was learing everything in a matter of seconds while she was struggling to figure out the first problem.
"I need someone to come up and solve these ten problems on the board. Haruna how about you come up."
"Ok!"
Haruna walked over and picked up the chalk. Then she wrote down the answers to all the problems. The class looked at her and thought that she had just done something amazing.
"Good job Haruna. These are all correct!"
"Yay!"
Haruna walked back over to her seat and sat down.
"Nyannyan do good?"
"Yes Nyannyan you did good."
When lunch break came, people gathered around Haruna. They started to talk and ask questions. All the voices upsetted Haruna to the point where she literally jumped out of her desk. She flipped mid air and landed on top of Yuko's desk.
"Nyannyan hungry."
"Well then let's go eat."
Yuko took Haruna down to the cafeteria and sat next to Yukirin and Mayuyu.
"I didn't know you had cousin Yuko." Mayuyu said.
"I heard about what happened to her. Does she really have the mind of a five year old?" Yukirin said.
"Yeah. So I have to teach her everything all over again."
"She didn't look like a five year old when she solved tose problems on the board."
"I don't know what that was about. Nyannyan how did you solve those problems?"
"Nyannyan paid attention like Yuu-chan said."
"Ok..."
"Yuu-chan Nyannyan hungry."
"Oh right here."
Yuko pulled out a big box. When she opened it, there were a bunch of shrimp in it.
"Jeez how much shrimp can this girl eat?" Yukirin asked.
"A lot." Yuko said.
"Isn't that bad for her?"
"Nyannyan plays a lot."
"Ohh."
"You know Yuko she has a cute butt." Mayuyu said.
"I know right."
"Maybe I might try to snatch sometime."
"Touch her and tie your hands back."
"And I'll I lock you in a room for two days." Yukirin said.
"Ok ok."
"You are only allowed to touch my butt."
"Well if you say so."
Mayuyu reached over and grabbed Yukirin's butt.
"And maybe I'll grab a little more."
Mayuyu started to make her way to Yukirin's chest but Yukirin pushed her back.
"Not here. Wait until we're alone."
"You sneaky devil you."
"Yuu-chan what they doing?" Haruna asked.
"Something you shouldn't be seeing. You guys tone it down. We got a five year old here."
"Oh sorry."
Yukirin got embarrassed and sat back down. Just then Acchan and Takamina walked over.
"Hey Yuko!"
"Oh hey Takamina."
"So this is your cousin?" Acchan asked.
"Yep. This is Haruna."
"You two don't look a like."
"We we are family."
"I think you and Takamina look like cousins." Yukirin said.
"Mainly because you're both short." Mayuyu said.
"Hey!"
Takamina pouted and Acchan just laughed. Meanwhile Haruna apperaed mesmerized by Takamina's bow. It was pink with sparkles on it.
"What?"
"Pretty!"
Haruna pointed at Takamina's bow.
"You like it?"
"Pretty!"
"Here."
Takamina took off her bow and gave it to Haruna.
"Sparkles!"
"Here."
Takamina clipped the bow into Haruna's hair and everyone gasped.
"Kawaii!"
"She looks really cute." Acchan said.
"Like a little doll." Mayuyu said.
Haruna ignored everyone and went back to eating her shrimp. When she was finished, Haruna and Yuko went back to class. The next lesson was easy for both Haruna and Yuko. When class was over they got a brief five minute break. It was during that time Rena walked over and started talking to them.
"It's nice to meet you Haruna. My name is Rena." Rena said.
"Rena."
"Yep."
"Rena pretty."
"Thank you!"
Haruna reached out and grabbed Rena's cheecks. She started pulling and squishing them making funny faces.
"Haha Rena funny!"
"Itai...."
"Nyannyan stop your hurting her."
Haruna let go and got a sad look on her face.
"Nyannyan sorry."
"It's ok. You didn't know."
Just then Jurina walked in and saw Rena.
"Hey what happened?"
"Oh nothing. Just a little incident."
"What did you do to my Rena?"
Jurina looked at Haruna with a scary face. Seeing this made Haruna start to cry.
"Jurina what did you do!"
Sae and Sayaka walked over and Sayaka lightly whacked Jurina in the head.
"Hey!!"
"You shouldn't make the new girl cry. She's mentally ill." Sayaka said.
"Ehh? Oh my gosh I am so sorry!"
Haruna was still crying.
"Ehh Sae help me out. Haruna look."
Jurina and Sae started to make funny faces but still had no effect.
"Yuko you do it. You're the master at funny faces." Sae said.
"Ok ok. Nyannyan look here."
Haruna looked over and saw Yuko making puffer fish face. Everyone including Haruna started laughing.
"Yuu-chan really funny!"
Haruna took Yuko's cheeks and smushed them together making fish lips.
"Nyannyan let me introduce you to everyone. This is Jurina."
"I'm sorry for making you cry earlier." Jurina said.
"It ok." Haruna said as she patted Jurina's head.
"The ikemen over her is Sae."
"Nice to meet you." Sae said.
"Sae.."
"And the gorilla is Sayaka."
"Hey I am not a gorilla!"
"Sayaka..."
"And now you know everyone!"
"Yay!"
"So Yuko why didn't you tell us your cousin was coming to live with you?" Rena asked.
"Because it was a surprise." Yuko said.
Technacilly she was right. Haruna coming to earth was a huge surprise.
"That means I have another kid to watch." Sayaka said.
"Don't worry I'll take care of her Sayamama and Saepapa try not to hit on her. She's my cousin after all."
"I would never do that!"
"Oh I bet you would."
Everyone laughed and Yuko looked over at Haruna who looked like she was having a good time. Yuko was glad she brought Haruna to school. Now maybe her life won't be so boring. When school ended, Haruna and Yuko walked home. They ate dinner and got ready for bed.
"So Nyannyan did you like school?"
"Yeah!"
"Good because tomorrow we're going again."
"Yay! Nyannyan happy!"
"Good. Now go to bed. We have to get up early again tomorrow."
"Ok good night Yuu-chan."
"Good night Nyannyan."
A couple minutes later Yuko could hear Haruna sleeping. Yuko herself started to fall asleep but not before Haruna wrapped her arms around Yuko and used her as a hug pillow.
"Mou what am I going to do with you?"
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Chapter 3 done! So now Haruna goes to school and so far it looks like she is going to fit in just fine. Please tell me what you think and let me know what you think!
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Awwwwww it's perfect!! Thank you so much!! I love kojiyuu!!! please continue <3
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Always fast update eh miyumi-san LOL
Shiriko-chan = yuko and shiriri-chan = mayu LOL they are soo funny
So wmatsui relationship is like junior and senior...cute...but i hope they are a couple too hmm..
Thank for the update
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@sakura_drop_: I'll be waiting for your comment. :)
@Nab: Thank you for reading my fic! I hope you enjoy the rest of it. :P
@kurogumi: Ah thank you for telling me their names! Oh and don't worry, Wmatsui will become a couple. Just give it time and we'll get there. XD
Now that Haruna has gotten used to school, I think it's time we throw in a little chaos into the mix. Let's see what happens when Haruna encounters a dog for the first time shall we? Please enjoy the chapter!
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Chapter 4
It was the weekend which means Yuko didn't have to get up early. However Haruna didn't know that so she instinctivly got up and dressed. Then she tried to get Yuko up thinking they were going to be late.
"Yuu-chan get up!"
"Nyanyan it's Saturday. We don't have school today!"
"Weekend?"
"Yes. That means that we don't have school. So go back to sleep."
"Nyannyan not tired."
"Go drink some milk or something."
"Ok!"
Yuko heard Haruna walk into the kitchen and tried falling asleep again. But then there a crash and the sound of glass breaking.
"What happened!"
Yuko came running in and saw Haruna had dropped the glass and now there was milk and broken pieces of glass everywhere.
"Nyannyan sorry Yuu-chan. Nyannyan only trying to get milk."
Haruna was about to start crying but Yuko stopped her.
"There there no need to cry over spilled milk."
For once the saying actually made sense.
"You stay here and don't move. I'll clean up the mess."
Yuko carefully picked up the broken glass without cutting herself and cleaned the milk. When she was finished cleaning, she sat Haruna down at the table and started to make breakfast.
"Here eat this."
"What this?"
"It's pancakes."
"Pancakes?"
"Try it."
Haurna took her fork like Yuko taught her and stabbed the whole pancake. Then she shoved it into her mouth and started chewing.
"Yummy!"
"Good."
"Yuu-chan..."
"Yes?"
"Yuu-chan no pants."
"What?"
Yuko looked down and realized she was still in her underwear and pj shirt.
"Ahhh!"
Yuko ran into her room and put on pants.
"Sorry about that Nyannyan. Nyannyan?"
"1,2,3,4 yoroshiku!"
Yuko walked into the other room and saw Haruna dancing to the song playing on the TV. She was copying the girls on the TV and to be honest she looked good.
"5,6,7,8 aishite!"
"Nyannyan how about you dance to this song."
Yuko changed the channal and another song came on.
"Watch me Nyannyan!"
The music started playing and Yuko started dancing.
"I want you~"
"I need you~"
"I love you~"
"Atama no naka!"
Yuko looked ove and saw Haruna copying everything Yuko was doing.
"That's it!"
"GANGAN natteru MUSIC."
"HEBBI ROOTESHON!"
The song ended and Yuko started clapping.
"Yata! You did it Nyannyan!"
"Yay!"
"Ne Nyannyan let's go outside today. I'll teach you some more things about Earth."
"Ok!"
The two got dressed and then Yuko took Haruna to a local playground she used to go to when she was a kid.
"Nyannayn come sit over here!"
Yuko had Haruna sit on a swing set.
"Hold on tight."
Yuko started to push Haruna and the more she pushed the higher she got.
"Now start swinging your legs!"
Haruna did what Yuko said and was now swinging on her own. Soon after Yuko got on the swing next to her and started swinging. Then once she caught up to Haruna the two were swinging at the same level.
"Nyannyan watch this."
Yuko jumped off the swing and landed right in the grass.
"Nyannyan try to!"
Haruna took one last big swing and then jumped off the swing. She landed right next to Yuko on her feet.
"Good job Nyannyan!"
"Again again!"
Haruna started running towards the swingset but the swings were still moving and one smacked Haruna right in the face.
"Wahh!"
"Nyannyan!"
Yuko ran out in front of Nyannyan to stop the swing. Then she turned to Haruna was crying.
"Nyannyan are you ok? Let me see it."
There was a little blood coming out but otherwise nothing serious.
"Mou what am I going to do with you. Here."
Yuko pulled out a handkerchief and placed it on Haruna's head.
"Don't move ok? Now don't cry anymore ok. Yuu-chan will make the pain go away just calm down."
"It hurt real bad Yuu-chan."
"Aww I know I know."
After a couple minutes Haruna stopped crying and the bleeding stopped.
"Ok now let's do something about that wound."
Yuko reached into her pocket and pulled out a band aid and placed it on Haruna's head.
"There all better."
"Yay!"
"Let's go down the slide now!"
"Slide?"
Yuko took Haruna to the very top of the play ground and sat on the slide.
"Watch."
Yuko slid down the slide and safely landed on the ground.
"Now you try it!"
"Nyannyan scared!"
"It's alright. I'll catch you. Trust me."
Haruna slowly slid down the slide and when she reached the bottom Yuko grabbed her hands and pulled her the rest of the way.
"You did it!"
"Slide fun! Nyannyan go again!"
Haruna ran back up to the top of the slide and this time went down it a lot faster. She was coming in too fast so when she reached the bottom, her feet slammed right into Yuko. Yuko fell back and Haruna ended up sitting on top of Yuko.
"Yuu-chan hurt?"
"No I'm ok!"
Haruna got off Yuko as she slowly stood up.
"Not so fast ok?"
"Ok!"
Haruna went on the slide ten more times before finally getting bored. It was during that time Yuko saw a very familiar person.
"Hey Yuko!"
"Hey Acchan!"
Acchan walked over to Yuko with her pet dog walking along side her.
"Taking your dog out for a walk I see."
"Yep."
"Where's Takamina?" Yuko asked.
"I'm on my way over to her place right now." Acchan said.
"Ahh I see."
"What are you doing here?"
"I'm here to show Nyannyan what a park is."
"Ohh. Are you having fun?"
"Lots of fun!"
Yuko and Acchan didn't see it but below them, Haruna was playing with the dog making it mad. Then when she accidently took off the collar, the dog started to chase after her.
"Ahh Nyannyan get back here!"
"Pico! Bad boy don't chase Haruna!"
Haruna ran as fast as she could away from the tiny dog making it look like it was a lion. Yuko was having a hard time keeping up with her and almost lost her. But then up ahead Yuko saw Yukirin and Mayuyu walking and they were right in the way.
"Shiriri-chan emergency oshiri cushion!"
"On it!"
Mayuyu turned around and stuck her butt out. When she did, Haruna ran right into Mayuyu and Mayuyu's butt chusioned the crash. Haruna fell into the ground while Mayuyu was pushed forward into Yukirin.
"Pico come here!"
Acchan hooked the collar back on and picked the dog up.
"I'm really sorry about that."
"Oh don't worry it's nothing."
"Well then I'll get going. Bye!"
"Bye."
Acchan walked walked away leaving Yuko with Haruna.
"Nice call there Shiriko-chan." Mayuyu said.
"Thanks for hearing me Shiriri-chan." Yuko saiid.
"Hey quit with the butt talk. It's annoying." Yukirin said.
"Then how about we call you oppai-chan."
Yukirin got quiet and tried to hide her red face.
"Hey only I get to talk about Yukirin's oppai." Mayuyu said.
"Sorry sorry. So what are you guys doing out here?" Yuko asked.
"On our way to get ice cream. Want to come with?"
"Sure! Nyannyan let's go get ice cream."
"Ice cweam?"
When Yuko entered the ice cream shop she was hit with a blast of cold air.
"What do you want Nyannyan?"
"That one!"
Haruna pointed to the picture of the large strawberry parfait.
"Ok uh two strawberry parfaits please."
"That'll be 500 yen please."
"Ok."
Yuko got the ice cream and then walked over to the table Mayuyu and Yukirin were sitting at it.
"What did you get?" Yuko asked.
"Hot fudge sundae." Mayuyu said.
"Banana split." Yukirin said.
"Looks good. Let me try!"
"No way. You got your own."
"Oh yeah. Nyannyan watch me."
Yuko picked up the spoon and scooped some ice cream into her mouth. Haruna copied Yuko and a happy expression came across her face.
"Yummy!"
Haruna started eating her ice cream like she ate shrimp. Fast.
"Is this her first time eating ice cream?" Yukirin asked.
"Yeah." Yuko said.
"Interesting."
"Hey Yukirin let me try some of yours." Mayuyu said.
"Ok say ahh."
"Ahh~"
Yukirin placed the spoon in Mayuyu's mouth who happily ate it.
"Delicious."
"Nya!"
"What's wrong?"
Yuko saw Haruna clutching her head and bent over.
"Nyannyan what's wrong?"
"Head hurts!"
"Brain freeze." Yukirin said.
"You ate your ice cream too fast didn't you?" Yuko said.
"Yeah."
"Nyannyan you need to slow down. Here let me show you."
Yuko scooped some ice cream and placed it into Haruna's mouth.
"Now eat it slowly."
"Nyannyan want to feed Yuu-chan."
"Well ok."
Haruna tried to feed Yuko but missed and got ice cream on her face.
"Hey watch where you're aim that thing."
"Nyannyan sorry."
Haruna leaned in and licked the ice cream off of Yuko's face.
"EHHH?"
Mayuyu and Yukirin sat there frozen at what they just saw.
"It's nothing you guys!" Yuko said.
"We better get going." Yukirin said.
"You two have fun now!" Mayuyu said.
"Wait it's not what you think! Nyannyan don't do stuff like that in front of others. Only do it when we're alone ok?"
"Un."
"Alright then let's finish up and head out."
Yuko and Haruna finished eating and then headed out again. While walking in the streets, Yuko saw a store that she thought would be cute to take Haruna in.
"Nyannyan come with me."
They walked into the store where they were greeted by a staff worker.
"Nyannyan put this on."
Yuko handed Haruna a hat who just looked at it blankly.
"Here."
Yuko took the hat and placed it over her head.
"Ahh kawaii! I'll take it!"
Yuko ended up buying the hat for Haruna because she thought she looked really cute in it. It was a hat with cat ears on it. Yuko tought it was perfect for hiding Haruna's cat ears if they ever came out.
"Hey Nyannyan let's go take a picture!"
Yuko pointed at the photo boothe on the side of the store. Haruna and Yuko walked into the boothe and Haruna freaked out a little.
"It's ok Nyannyan. Just look at the screen."
"Hai cheese!"
The machine took several different pictures. When it was done, Yuko pulled them out.
"Ahh we look so cute!" Yuko said.
"Haha Yuu-chan look funny." Haruna said.
"Well that was fun. How about we head home now ok?"
"Ok?"
They started to walk home when they passed by a store that sold TV's. There were some in a display window all set to the same program. Suddenly the song Yuko and Haruna had danced to earlier came on and Haruna couldn't resist the dance. Yuko couldn't let Haruna do it alone so she decided to join.
"I want you~"
"I need you~"
"I love you~"
A crowd of people started to gather around them and cheer them on. When the song finished, everyone clapped for them and then moved on.
"That was fun!"
"Fun!"
Yuko and Haruna walked back home and ate dinner. Then they got ready for bed but then there was something on Yuko that caught Haruna's attention. There was a huge bug on Yuko's back and only Haruna saw it. Haruna carefully snuck up behind Yuko and smacked her right in the head with a broom.
"Itai!"
"Got it!"
"Got what?"
"That."
Haruna pointed at the dead bug on the ground.
"Wah! Gross!"
Yuko took the broom and swept the bug out.
"Nice job Nyannyan."
"Yay Nyannyan did good!"
From then on Yuko found a new skill Haruna had. She was good at killing bugs.
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Well there's chapter 4. Look forward to the next chapter. It's time to introuduce someone who I've been holding back. I'll give you a hint, "Ue Kara....." Haruna's sister is coming to Earth! Who will it be? Look forward to the next chapter and find out. Please tell me what you think! Also....
HAPPY BIRTHDAY SAE! Without you there would be no Twin Tower love! Have fun celebrating and always be that ikemen genking that we all know and love. Happy birthday Sae! I love you!
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haruna is so cute in this XD she also have a talent to kill bugs too , that convenient :lol:
this chapter is good ! hope u update soon btw thanks for the update :wub:
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Ahhh, like I said earlier, I'm not the biggest fan of Kojiyuu, but you really know how to write them in a way that's super likable haha. Haruna is so cute, and Yuko is so nice for taking care of her. Also, I can't wait for Mariko!!!
Update soon :D
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PLEASE MAKE A SCENE OF ATSUMINA IN YOUR KOJIYUU FAN FICTION
THANK YOU VERY MUCH
I WILL WAIT ;D
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lovely Mayuki and Kojiyuu moments~~~~
Harunas sister is coming to earth!? how would it be.....?
forgive me but when I read the ' I'll give you a hint, "Ue Kara....." Haruna's sister is coming to Earth! Who will it be? ' line, first think that entered my head was 'I sense jealous Mayu or Yukirin........hawever it is, it will be all over Yukirin...'
please forgive me for that throught.....I have Mayuki obsession.....is contagious....
updatte soon ~ I wonder how really is..?
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Finally Mariko is going to appear! I've been wondering about her role in this story.
"Shiriri-chan emergency oshiri cushion!"
Mayuyu's oshiri doesn't just look good but it acts as a reliable airbag too :shakeit:
"Hey quit with the butt talk. It's annoying." Yukirin said.
"Then how about we call you oppai-chan."
Yukirin got quiet and tried to hide her red face.
"Hey only I get to talk about Yukirin's oppai." Mayuyu said.
Oppai-chan!!! :thumbsup :thumbsup
And possessive Mayuyu strikes back!
Great job portraying KojiYuu in this story! They are really cute :wub:
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@kojiyuu109: Thank you for reading and commenting on my fic! I hope you enjoy the story as it continues. :)
@Sasshii: Thank you! I know how hard it is for a fan of one group to read a fic centering another group so thank you for baring with me. I will make sure to include plenty of Mayuki and Wmatsui moments though so they won't be left out!
@Wmatsui22: An atsumina scene? Hmmm well maybe later on in the story. Just be patient and I'll get there. :)
@yuukimoko: Come one yuukimoko you don't the song? She won the Jan Ken Pon Tournament for this! Well I guess I'll have to tell you in the end. UE KARA MARIKO! Oh and I have no idea what you mean with jealous Mayu or Yukirin. Sorry I'm kinda dumb. XD
@seigus: Yes Mayuyu has many useful skills. That's what makes her so special to Yukirin! :inlove:
Things have gotten peaceful for Haruna and Yuko. But now it's time for someone to make her special debut! Please enjoy the chapter!
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Chapter 5
Yuko was watching TV with Haruna when there was a knock on the door. Yuko got up and walked over to answer it.
"Yes how can I-"
Standing before Yuko was a very tall girl with short hair. She had the body of a super model if she already wasn't one.
"Nyaho~"
"Mari-chan!"
Haruna ran over to the door and hugged the taller girl.
"It's good to see you're alright Haruna."
"Nyannyan miss Mari-chan."
"I missed you too."
"Um I'm sorry to interrupt but would you please come inside and explain yourself." Yuko said.
"Oh yeah. Sorry."
The three walked in and Yuko sat back on the couch.
"Care to explain who you are?"
"Yes I'm Shinoda Mariko. I'm Haruna's older sister." she said.
"Ehh? So have you come to take Nyannyan back to your planet?" Yuko asked.
"No I haven't. Actually I was sent here by mother and father for the same reason as Haruna. Things are getting really bad up there. I nearly escaped myself."
"Well are you hungry? You must be after a long trip."
"Actually I'm starving."
"Well we have shrimp if you like some."
"Sure."
Yuko made a huge batch of fried shrimp and served it.
"Yay shrimp!'
Haruna started eating them like crazy while Mariko just looked at them.
"Try them."
Mariko took a bite and she got the same face as Haruna when she first tried it. Pretty soon they were both eating a ton of the shrimp. Within minutes it was all gone.
"Hey Mariko can I ask you something?" Yuko said.
"What?" Mariko said.
"How come you are able to speak perfect Japanaese while Nyannyan still talks like a five year old?"
"You pulled her out too early."
"What?"
"Remember the capsule she was in when she first came here?"
"Yeah."
"Well when you first land, it takes about five minutes for us to adapt and learn about our new surroundings. You pulled her out too early while she was in the middle of the learning process therefore she only got a little of what she was supposed to get."
"Oh. Is there anything you can do to fix it?"
"No I'm afraid once the information takes place you can't really change it. She's going to have to learn everything a normal human does."
"Darn. I don't mind it but sometimes it get tiring."
"I know what you mean. Back when she was like this I would always be the one to take care of her. Right?"
"Mari-chan take care of Nyannyan!" Haruna said.
"Why do you call yourself Nyannyan?" Mariko asked.
"Because that's the nickname I gave her." Yuko said.
"Mari-chan that Yuu-chan. Be nice."
"Ok Haruna I will. You can call me Mariko."
"And you can call me Yuko."
"So is it ok if I live here with you guys? I tried finding another place but I ended up getting kicked out."
"Uh sure that's fine with me."
"Great! So then what is the first thing I can do as a "human"
"Well you can come with us to school. We have to get going soon."
"Ok let's go!"
Walking with Mariko was a whole new experience for Yuko. Everyone they passed either to stop and look at Mariko and make a comment or move out of their way. When they got to the school building, all the students just started staring at them. They walked into the classroom and Mariko took and empty desk.
"So this is what school looks like. Interesting." Mariko said.
"Yeah. Nyannyan has gotten used to everyone around here and has actually managed to make friends." Yuko said.
"That's good to hear. She was never good at fitting in back at our planet."
"Oh well she's gets along just fine with everyone else."
Just then the mean girls came over and started to pick on Haruna.
"Hey five year old! We're still mad about what you did to our friend."
"You're going to pay for what you did!"
One of the girls was about to slap Haurna but Yuko got in the way.
"Oh look. It's the les protecting her idiot girl friend."
"Back off!" Yuko growled.
"Ha how heroic. Stupid pervert."
The girl was about to hit Yuko but then something stopped her. Yuko looked up and saw Mariko standing over her.
"Now I don't know what's going on but I do know you were about to hit my younger sister. The one you called a five year old."
"And who the hell are you?"
"I'm her older sister Shinoda Mariko and unless you don't want me to rip your hand off I suggest you go away."
Mariko gave the girl the scariest smile she had ever seen in her life. The girl got scared and ran away from Mariko along with the others.
"Hooray Mari-chan save Nyannyan!" Haruna said.
"Why of course. I am your older sister after all."
"Hey what about me?"
"Yuu-chan hero too."
"Thank you."
The teacher walked in and saw Mariko and was a little surprised.
"Um excuse me miss can I help you with something?" the teacher asked.
"Ah I'm sorry my name is Shinoda Mariko. I am Haruna's older sister. Starting today I will be attending school here." Mariko said.
"I don't see you in a uniform."
"They haven't sent it to me yet. I'm still waiting."
"Well I can't have you in the school if you aren't properly dressed."
"You aren't properly dressed either sensei."
"Excuse me?"
"That skirt you're wearing isn't exactly school appropiate length. Not to mention that shirt looks a little too tight and is showing off a little too much."
The teacher stood there in silence just shocked at what she just heard. But then she snapped back to her senses and realized Mariko was right and if the principal saw her in that outfit then she would be scolded for sure.
"Ok I'll let you slide just for today. But tomorrow I expect you dressed properly."
"As to you."
After that, the lesson continued as if nothing happened. When the lesson ended, the teacher ran out the room giving everyone a quick break. Just then Sae and Sayaka ran over.
"You were awesome up there!" Sae said.
"You totally owned the teacher." Sayaka said.
"Hey I was just doing what I thought was right. She was clearly not dressed for school and looked more like she was going on a date." Mariko said.
"Mariko do you want to join the basketball club? You're tall so that would give our team an advantage and your reflexes are amazing. I saw how you protected Haruna like that."
"I'm sorry but I don't really like sports."
"Sayaka you're in the karate club remember?" Sae said.
"Yeah but I also play for the basketball team sometimes and in the track as well."
"Jeez no wonder you have a six pack you're always working out!"
"Shut up Sae."
"By the way I'm Miyazawa Sae and the angry gorilla is Akimoto Sayaka."
"Nice to meet both of you."
"Hey introduce us too!"
Yuko looked over and saw Takamina and Acchan.
"My name is Takahashi Minami but you can call me Takamina."
"And my name is Maeda Atsuko but you can call me Acchan."
"It's a pleasure to meet you call. Call me Mariko."
"So you're Haruna's sister?" Takamina asked.
"Yes I am."
"You look really pretty just like Haruna."
"Thank you. I like your bow."
"Thanks!"
"Hey what's going on over here?"
Yukirin and Mayuyu came over to join the fun.
"This is Haruna's sister Mariko." Acchan said.
"Watanabe Mayu is my name but you can call me Mayuyu."
"Kashiwagi Yuki. Call me Yukirin."
"Nice to meet you."
"Now then let me just see..."
Mayuyu reached over and grabbed Mariko's butt.
"Nya!"
"Hmmm a little flat but still nice. But not as nice as Yukirin's."
"I have no idea what you mean but thank you I guess."
"Just ignore her." Yukirin said.
"Well then if you excuse me I'm going to leave."
"But why?" Yuko asked.
"I'm going to explore more of the school. You two have fun!"
With that, Mariko walked out of the room.
"Like a boss..." Sae said.
"True that." Mayuyu said.
"Your sister is a very interesting person."
Yuko turned around and saw Rena staring at her.
"Rena, Jurina when did you guys get here?"
"We've been here a while just haven't said anything." Rena said.
"Your sister is really cool Haruna!" Jurina said.
"Mari-chan the best!" Haruna said.
"Aww you're so adorable!"
Mayuyu leaned in and hugged Haruna. While hugging her, Mayuyu was trying to grab her butt but then Yukirin pulled her back.
"Hey!"
"I don't think so. That's twice you've done that. Time for punishment."
"Uh oh."
Yukirin dragged Mayuyu out of the classroom leaving the others praying for Mayuyu. Everyone knows that Yukirin's punishments are far more cruel than what the school does. Whoever gets one usually ends up with a sore butt and chest.
"Hey Acchan let's go down to the pool. I forgot something from this morning." Takamina said.
"Sure."
Takamina and Acchan left along with Sayaka and Sae. Now all that was left was Jurina and Rena.
"Hey Jurina shouldn't you be in class right now?" Yuko asked.
"Technically I am." Jurina said.
"What?"
"Recently Jurina took a test and it said that she was too smart for the grade she was currently in so they moved her to the third year." Rena said.
"Seiously? Sugoi!"
"It was all thanks to Rena!"
"Oh please you did it all on your own."
"Not without Rena's help."
Jurina leaned in and kissed Rena on the cheek and Rena blushed.
"Ju-Jurina!"
"What?"
"Yuu-chan where Mari-chan?"
"I don't know. Let's go look for her."
Yuko and Haruna walked out in the hall and started looking for Mariko. So far they didn't see her anywhere. But then where they walked into the cafeteria they found her. She was sitting on a couch while being fed shrimp and two other students were fanning her. She looked like a tyrant with her slaves. But then Yuko remembered Mariko was a princess after all.
"What the heck Mariko?"
"What? I got hungry and I was too tired to do it myself." Mariko said.
"You can do this."
"Hey they offered to do it for me."
"What?"
"UE KARA MARIKO!" they all chanted.
"See? So there's nothing I can do about it."
"Are you all seriously doing this on your own free will?" Yuko asked.
"Yes. We love Mariko-sama and all that she has done for us." one girl said.
"She's like a goddess." another said.
"What did you do?"
"All I did was be nice." Mariko said.
"Well you have fun there. Haruna and I are going to eat away from all the weirdness."
"Suit yourself. You feed me another shrimp."
"Yes Mariko-sama!"
Yuko and Haruna walked over to a table and sat down.
"Is your sister always like this?"
"Mari-chan very popular back home. Lots people like her." Haruna said.
"Ohh. Maybe she just gives off that likable aura." Yuko said.
"Hey Yuko!"
Yuko saw Mayuyu and Yukirin walk over and Mayuyu looked like she was having a hard time walking.
"Man did you really have to hit me that hard?" Yuko said.
"It was punishment and unless you don't want it to get worse I suggest you quit complaining." Yukirin said.
Mayuyu slowly and painfully sat down on the bench.
"I'm guessing the punishment didn't go well?"
"No it didn't."
"Well that's what you get for being touchy with other girls."
"Hey I can't help it."
"You've been hanging around Yuko for too long."
"Yuu-chan Nyannyan hungry."
"Oh sorry. Here."
Yuko pulled out the usual box and opened it only to find all the shrimp gone. Yuko looked over and saw Mariko with a large stack of shrimp. She probably stole all the ones in the lunch box.
"Thieving cat."
"No shrimp?"
Haruna looked like she was going to cry.
"Don't cry, don't cry I'll find you something else. Hey you guys got anything Nyannyan can eat?"
"I got noodle bread." Yukirin said.
"I got jelly beans." Mayuyu said.
"Mayuyu you're going to get diabetes from all the jelly beans you eat." Yuko said.
"Hey Haruna's bound to have a heart attack in her twenties if she keeps eating fried shrimp the way she does now."
"Touche."
"Here she can have some of my noodle bread."
Yukirin handed Yuko the bread and Yuko showed it Haruna.
"Look Nyannyan try this."
Haruna took a bite but then spat it back out.
"Yuckie!"
"Sorry Yukirin guess she doesn't like it."
"It's ok."
"Nyannyan hungry!"
"I know Nyannyan just give me a minute. Ah Takamina, Acchan help!"
"What's wrong?"
"Nyannyan doesn't have anything to eat and I'm trying to find something she'll eat."
"How about she's trys my omelet."
Acchan placed the omelet in Haruna's mouth and she soon spat it out.
"How about this tofu?"
Takamina showed it to Haruna and she wouldn't even open her mouth for it.
"Hey Rena, Jurina come over here."
"What's up?"
"We're trying to find something for Haruna to eat. Got anything she might like?" Takamina asked.
"I have octopus sausage." Jurina said.
"Ah those are cute!" Mayuyu said.
"Here Haruna."
Haruna ate the sausage and swallowed it. But then she let out a sound of disgust.
"Here try some curry bread." Rena said.
As soon as Haruna took a bite, her whole face turned red and tears started coming down her face.
"HOT!"
Yuko had forgotten that Rena likes to eat super spicy foods. They don't have affect on her but it's really spicy to normal people. Now Haruna was on fire and needed something to cool her off.
"Quick does anyone have something for her to drink?"
"Here."
Jurina handed Haruna a canister of water and Haruna chugged the whole thing.
"Better?"
Haruna nodded her head.
"So what else could we feed her?"
"What's the problem?"
Sayaka and Sae came over with conerned looks on their faces.
"We're trying to feed Haruna. She just ate Rean's super spicy curry bread." Jurina said.
"Hmm here try this croquette I made."
Sayaka handed her one and she stared at it at first. Then she took a bite and her face lit up.
"Good?"
"Yummy!"
"Good job Sayaka!"
"Here you can have the rest. I'll share lunch with Sae." Sayaka said.
"Thank you so much."
"What happened to Haruna's lnch anyways?" Sae asked.
"Mariko stole it."
"Ohh. Some sister she is."
"Well she did come here without a lunch."
"What's up with all the kohai. They always chant Ue Kara Mariko whenever around her."
"She's really popular amoung the kids in my grade." Jurina said.
"I guess she's just that popular." Takamina said.
"She reminds me of a king." Mayuyu said.
"Hey look over there."
Everyone looked over and saw Mariko's little groupies carrying her around.
"Now that's just cruel." Yukirin said.
"Well they said they wanted to do it." Yuko said.
"Uso!"
"Yep."
"Well that's really weird." Takmina said.
"I don't understand kids these days." Sayaka said.
"That's because you're getting old Sayaka."
"Shut up Sae."
Everyone laughed while Haurna was happily eating her croquettes. When school was over, Haruna, Yuko and Mariko all walked home. When they got home, Mariko plopped down on the couch followed by Haruna.
"Looks like you became popular." Yuko said.
"Yep. School is fun." Mariko said.
"School fun!" Haruna said.
"Yeah but for now I need you to sweep the house as punishment for stealing Nyannyan's lunch."
"Ehhh? Mou yada!"
"Hey my house my rules and if you don't like it then you can leave."
"Fine."
Mariko got up and grabbed a broom.
"Something tells me I'm going to enojoy having Mariko here."
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Well I hope you guys liked the chapter! Mariko has made it to earth and is already a hit! I can't wait to see what happens to the three in the future. Please tell me what you think and look forward to the next chapter!
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Jurina is in the same class now :ding:
Mariko saikko :onioncheer:
Mayuki are really funny :on lol:
Haruna is so cute :shy2:
mmm what about gachapin she is coming? :dunno:
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Mariko like a boss , she stilll popular no matter where XD
Haruna so cute , everytime she hungry she cry :wub: totally like a child XD
Btw thanks for the updates :twothumbs
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@mo-chan: Jurina is so smart that she skipped a grade! Don't worry Miichan will come. Right now she's back home fighting a war! But don't worry she'll make her appearence soon. XD
@kojiyuu109: Thank you for commenting on my fic. Haruna really is a kid on the inside. And Mariko is the boss wherever she goes no doubt about that. :P
Today's chapter going to start focusing on all the other people now. Now that everyone has been properly introduced, let's start sharing the love. First up is Mayuki! Please enjoy.
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Chapter 6
It was around five in the morning when there was a loud knock on the door. Yuko staggered over and answered it only to be knocked down.
"Itai!"
"Yuko!"
"Mayuyu?"
"Yuko you gotta help me." Mayuyu said.
"What's wrong?" Yuko asked.
"You gotta hide me from Yukirin for a while"
"Why?"
"Let's just say I kinda pissed her off."
"At five in tthe morning?"
"She gets up way too early. Just please help me!"
"Alright alright come in. You can sleep on the couch."
"Thanks."
Mayuyu crashed on the couch and Yuko went back to bed. She didn't wake up for another three hours. When she did wake up, she found Haruna and Mariko gone. Yuko walked into the kitchen and found all three of them eating breakfast.
"Why didn't you tell us Mayuyu was here?" Mariko asked.
"She came at like five in the morning." Yuko said.
"Oh. So why is she here?"
"I'm hiding." Mayuyu said.
"From what?"
"A pissed off girl friend."
"What did you do this time?" Yuko asked.
"Ok so last night I came home late after partying with a friend of mine. She starts questioning me like I'm some criminal and then she gets mad at me when I told her I was out with a friend. Now she thinks I'm cheating on her and is on a rampage to find me."
"Who did you go out to party with anyways?"
"I went with Rena."
"Why?"
"It was an otaku only party so it's not like I could've taken Yukirin. Anyways now she's mad at me so I'm hiding out here."
"Mayuyu in trouble?" Haurna asked.
"Yeah BIG trouble."
Just then there was a loud knock at the door.
"Crap it's her!"
Mayuyu hid under the table while Mariko walked over to answer the door.
"Hey Mariko have you seen Mayuyu anywhere?" Yukirin asked.
"No I haven't why?"
"I need to talk to her about something important."
"What would that be?"
"It's none of your business. If you see her tell her I'm looking for her."
"Alright."
Yukirin was about to walk out when Mayuyu suddenly sneezed.
"I see you Mayuyu!"
"Oh crap."
"Come here you!"
Yukirin ran in and started to chase Mayuyu all over the house.
"Ahh Yuko help!"
"No way. Last time I got involved in one of your fights I couldn't sit for a week."
"You're no help!"
Yukirin and Mayuyu kept running around and around the house and still was getting nowhere. Then Mairko said,
"I've had enough!"
Mariko grabbed Mayuyu and sat her on the couch. Then she grabbed Yukirin and threw her into the chair.
"Move and I'll tie you to the chair." Mariko said.
Yukirin stopped moving and settled down.
"Now tell me what the problem is."
"She's cheating on me!" Yukirin said.
"I am not!' Mayuyu protested.
"Then explain why you came home late last night."
"I told you I was at a party!"
"What kind of party?"
"An otaku party."
"And why didn't you tell me about it until you got home at 4 in the morning?"
"I forgot."
"I was worried sick about you!"
"Yuu-chan what going on?" Haruna asked.
"Auntie Mayuyu and auntie Yukirin are fighting." Yuko said.
"Can Nyannyan help?"
"No I think it's best if we let Mariko handle it."
The two kept arguing for another two hours before Mariko had had enough.
"Ahh I'm getting sick of you two arguing. Let's just finish this the easy way. Mayuyu do you love Yukirin?"
"I do."
"Yukirin do you love Mayuyu?"
"I do."
"Ok then kiss and make up so I can go to sleep."
The thing Mariko did sounded like a married couple taking their vows.
"Nyannyan want to help!"
Haruna walked over and pushed Mayuyu into Yukirin making them kiss each other right on the lips. The two held for a while and then Yukirin finally backed off.
"Better?"
"Way better!"
Yukirin grabbed Mayuyu and went in for another kisss. They held so long that they had to stop because Mayuyu couldn't breathe.
"I'm sorry Mayuyu for thinking that way." Yukirin said.
"I'm sorry for making you worry." Mayuyu said.
"Let's not fight again ok?"
"Ok."
"Now that you two have made up, get out!" Mariko said.
Mayuyu and Yukirin ran out the house holding hands happy that they fixed everything.
"Ahh I'm tired." Mariko said as she plopped on the couch.
"How can you be soo tired?" Yuko asked.
"Talking takes a lot of effort."
"You're lazy you know that?"
"Yeah yeah I know."
"Yuu-chan Nyannyan hungry."
"Ok I'll go fix you some lunch."
Yuko started to walk to the kitchen when there was another knock at the door. Yuko walked over to answer it and this time Yukirin came in.
"What now?"
"I ticked Mayuyu off."
"What did you do?"'
"I told her I went out with Sae while she was gone."
"Ahhh jeez not again."
"YUKIRIN!"
An anfry Mayuyu stormed in and grabbed Yukirin by the legs when she tried to escape.
"I'm going to kill you." Mayuyu said in a robotic voice.
"Mayuyu please let me explain." Yukirin begged.
"With Sae? You went out with the shemale?"
"Mayuyu you were gone for eight hours. What else was I supposed to do?"
"Watch TV, read a book, clean up the house, anything but go out with the shemale."
"You're mean."
"Bite me."
"Fine I will!"
Yukirin pulled Mayuyu in closer and then started nibbling on her ear lobes. Whhen she was finished, Mayuyu had a happy look on her face.
"Do you forgive me now?"
"Yes."
The two kissed and then waked out again.
"And don't come back!"
"Humans are sooo strange." Mariko said.
"Oh shut it Mariko."
"Nyannyan try to!"
Just then Haruna leaned in and started nibbling on Yuko's ear.
"Nyannyan what are you doing?"
"Haruna finished and then back away.
"Yuu-chan has small ears." Haruna said.
"Hey I don't do that." Yuko said.
"But Haruna want to because Haruna love Yuko!"
"You are the weirdest person."
But then Yuko remembered that Haruna wasn't a person. She was an alien.
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Super tired when I wrote this. I'm sorry mayuki fans I'll make up for it next time. But for now goodnight.
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Yes! Another update, I love this story! Hope you update soon~
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OMG!! kojiyuu fics !! love it... but in the past chpater you said that haruna learned to talk because she kiss yuko.. but mariko says another different story about that.. what is the correct version?...
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mariko has the fastest way the solve the problem and somehow haruna is a big help too XD
and i like the way yuko turn to a protective person when it come to haruna :inlove:
this chapter is great , thanks so much for the update :twothumbs
u are great author too :P
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yeah....it was a little without soul......but I still liked it! Mayuki is always sweet!!
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Mayuki stupid couple fool of stupid problem :on lol:
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Today's chapter is about a midget we all know and love. I hope you enjoy it!
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Chapter 7
Yuko and Haruna were walking into school when Acchan came up to them crying.
"What's wrong Acchan?" Yuko asked.
"Takamina...."
"What about Takamina?"
"Takamina hates me!"
"WHAT?"
Yuko couldn't believe what she just heard. For Takamina to hate Acchan then some bad must have happened.
"What happened?"
"Earlier today we got attacked by a bunch of guys. I was trying to get Takamina to stay back so she wouldn't get hurt and in the end Sae and Sayaka came to help us. But Takamina got mad at me and said she hated me!"
"Alright let's go find her and try to talk some sense into her. Where's Sae and Sayaka?"
"On the roof I think."
"Ok Nyannyan come with me. You too Acchan."
The three of them ran to the roof and found Sae and Sayaka sleeping. Acchan was about to wake them up but then Yuko stopped her. She decided she wanted to play a prank on them. Yuko carefully took Sayaka's arm and wrapped it around Sae's body. Then she took Sae's leg and put it between Sayaka's leg. When everything was set, Yuko woke them up.
"Sayamama Saepapa!"
The two woke up and almost screamed when they saw each other. Sayaka curled into a ball and blushed while Sae was spazing.
"What happened?" Sae asked.
"I don't know. Maybe your bodies are trying to tell you something."
"Oh god!"
"Anyways have you seen Takamina anywhere?"
"Yeah she's down in the courtyard."
"Ok thanks. We'll leave you two to get back to what ever it is you two were doing."
"Sayaka we were asleep so it doesn't count!"
"Right!"
Acchan, Yuko, and Haruna ran down to the courtyard where Takamina was huddled up on a bench. Yuko didn't want Acchan to go near so she had her stay back.
"Hey Takamina."
"Hey Yuko."
"Mind if I sit here?"
"Sure." Takamina said.
"So what happened between you and Acchan?" Yuko asked.
"It's kind of hard to explain."
"You can tell me."
"Well today we were attacked by these jerks. I tried to protect Acchan but she held me back. I got so mad that I shouted I hated her."
"Why do you think she held you back?"
"Because she thought I was weak."
"Now I don't think she thinks that."
"But she treated me that way."
"Takamina I think she held you back because she was trying to protect you."
"What?"
"I think that if you got hurt protecting Acchan then Acchan would blame herself for your injury and be down on herself about it."
"You're right! Oh god I have to go find her and apologize!"
"You don't have to."
Takamina looked over and saw Acchan with open arms.
"Acchan I'm sorry!"
"I'm sorry too Takamina!"
The two embraced in a heart warming hug and cried on each other's shoulders.
"Come on Nyannyan let's give these two some private time."
Yuko and Haruna walked into the hallway where Mayuyu was standing. When she saw Yuko she ran up to her.
"Yuko big problem!!"
"What?"
"Yukirin's pregnant!"
"WHAT!"
"Yuu-chan what pregnant?" Haurna asked.
"It's when you're going to have a baby."
"Oh Nyannyan want a baby!"
"No you don't."
"Yeah she's been having mood swings and cravings for celery." Mayuyu said.
"Have you asked her if she's gotten her period yet?"
"No that's not something you ask your girl friend."
"Yuu-chan what period?"
"I'll tell you when you're older. Where is Yukirin now?"
"In the cafeteria."
"Let's go."
The three ran down to the cafeteria where Yukirin was eating a lot of celery.
"Hey Yukirin."
"Hey Yuko."
"Mayuyu ask her."
"Ask me what?"
"No way you do it!"
"What?"
"Well Mayuyu was wondering if you got your period recently."
"No I think it skipped why?"
Yuko and Mayuyu looke at each other with wide eyes.
"She hasen't had it.."
"Which means..."
"What?"
"Oh nothing!" Mayuyu said.
"Tell me before I get mad."
"Yuko help!"
"Well Mayuyu thought you were pregnant."
Yukirin didn't say anything. She just reached over and smacked Mayuyu in the head.
"Ouch what was that for!" Mayuyu said.
"For thinking I was pregnant." Yukirin said.
"You are right?"
"NO!"
"Then what about the celery and the mood swings?"
"I get mood swings when I skip a month and celery is supposed to help regulate it!"
"Ohhhhhh!"
Yukirin facepalmed herself and then sighed in relief.
"Well at least now I know you're not pregnant."
"I can't believe you thought I would go get knocked up by some guy that easily. I'm saving my virginity for a certain someone to take."
"Who!"
"You're an idiot."
Mayuyu thought about it and then facepalmed herself when she realized it. A perverted smile came up across the cyborg's face.
"Well since you're not on it..."
Mayuyu slipped her hand under Yukirin's skirt.
"How about you and I go make some babies. I'll take away that virginity of yours."
Mayuyu was about to kiss Yukirin but then Yukirin slapped Mayuyu with a celery skick.
"Hey!"
"I'm still mad at you for thinking I was pregnant."
"Oh come on!"
"Come on Nyannyan let's get out of here."
Yuko and Haruna walked away before things got violent.
"Hey Yuu-chan."
"Yeah?"
"Can Nyannyan make babies with Yuu-chan?"
Yuko almost ran into the walll when Haruna said that.
"What?"
"Can Nyannyan have baby with Yuu-chan?"
"Uhh sure maybe in the future."
"Yay!"
Just then Mariko walked over.
"What are you so excited about Haruna?" she asked.
"Yuu-chan and Nyannyan gonna have babies!"
"Haruna it's impossible for you two to have a baby."
"Why?"
"Well when a man and a woman want a baby they-"
Yuko smacked her hand across Mariko's mouth and gave her a "don't you dare tell her look"
"Don't listen to her Nyannyan she doesn't know what she's talking about." Yuko said trying to protect Haruna's innocence.
"But Mari-chan is always right." Haruna said.
"That's right."
"So how do man and woman have babies?"
"Well a man and a woman have a baby by calling the baby making company and they send over a cabbage. The man and woman have to plant the cabbage and in nine months a baby will come out."
"WOW really!"
"Yep!"
"Wow Nyannyan never eat cabbage again."
"Mariko I think you made things worse." Yuko said.
"It's better than what I was going to tell her originally."
"Lady don't eat that! There's a baby in there!"
"Nyannyan no don't attack the lunch lady!"
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Please tell me what you think and look forward to the next chapter!
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Haruna wants a baby :hiakhiakhiak:
I like it when Mariko explains thinks to Haruna :wahaha:
Mayu is like a pervert old man :pig laugh:
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It was very funny when Mayu thinks Yukirin were pregnant. :rofl:
And at the end when Haruna want to have a baby with Yuko :rofl:
Don't forget the mariko's explication :rofl:
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this time Mayuki where the best!!!!!! :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv2:
Yuki needs to lets Mayu have her way at a moment in this story.....Mayu so perv! she surely wants Yukirin to carry her babies~ :ding: :shy2:
Love Mayuki! and Nyannyan was cute too~ :shy1:
please update soon!!! :byebye:
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:OMG: I'm gone for a couple of days and then you came up with a new fic?
And the "Akiba Fight Club" was already finished?(superb :thumbsup by the way the saddest story so far) (funny too)
(I was like for real? how can the author came up with so interesting and funny story at the same time?)
Your fics are epic! I just ADORE IT! And for this fic Haruna is best suited for being an Alien (Nya!)
Oh my God "Ue kara Mariko" hahaha :rofl: I'm laughing so hard! :bow: Mariko-sama!
:ding: Looking forward to your next update!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
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I'm sorry Takamina and Acchan but MaYuki totally stole the spotlight from you in this chapter!
Mayuyu was about to kiss Yukirin but then Yukirin slapped Mayuyu with a celery skick.
Funniest image ever!! Celery slap!! :rofl: :rofl:
But gosh, Mayuyu you deserve it. How can you even think that Yukirin did it with some guy? She's obviously waiting for you so you better make your move soon (when she's not angry anymore)! And Yukirin is so not shy to actually admit it :w00t:
"Well since you're not on it..."
Mayuyu slipped her hand under Yukirin's skirt.
"How about you and I go make some babies. I'll take away that virginity of yours."
Mayuyu is such an uncle and I love it! :twisted:
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Oh please let them have babies rofl
I also wonder why Yuko is the only one to be burried because all her friends are kinda in a relationship
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Haruna wants a baby with Yuu-chan :XD:
I cant close my mouth when I read the part Mariko explains to Haruna how to man and woman have a baby lmao
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Haha oh man I don't think I'll want to eat cabbages either if that's how babies were born. Poor Haruna, but at least she got to keep her innocence lol.
I can't believe Mayuyu thought Yukirin was pregnant lol.
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@mo-chan: Mariko's explanations make perfect sense every time. Mayu is AKB's little perverted uncle next to Yuko. And yes I don't think Haruna knew what she was talking about. :lol:
@Pwety: I thought that Mayuki scene was perfect. Haruna really does love Yuko. :oops:
@yuukimoko: I'm glad you like it. You sounded disappointed on the last chapter so I did my best to make this one! I'm so glad you liked it. And don't worry, Mayuki will have their moment. :P
@Megumi: Whenever you comment you always say you've been gone it's kinda funny. And my fics are interesting and funny? Interesting... Thank you for reading my fics and commenting. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story! XD
@seigus: Yes Mayuki did kinda steal the spotlight. Maybe Yukirin will let Mayuyu have her moment when she isn't being a perverted uncle. :lol:
@kahem: Yuko is bullied because she doesn't have a girlfriend. See they don't pick on Atsumina or Mayuki because Takamina would beat them up and Yukirin would kill them so they mainly go after Yuko. Make sense? :?
@Jo1410: Mariko is the boss. She has the best way of handling things. If only females could reproduce with other females... Then the world would be complete. :wub:
@Sasshii: Yeah I don't think I'm going to be eating any cabbages either after I wrote that chapter. Haruna's innocence is more important to Yuko. Mayuyu is a little silly when it comes to things like being a woman. Oh Mayuyu... :oops:
It looks like lots of people liked this chapter. As I thought when Mayuki comes in, you ALL jump in! I love you guys! But remember this is a Kojiyuu fic. But in the end I always share the love. I hope you enjoy this chapter! This goes out to all the Wmatsui fans!
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Chapter 8
"I can't take it anymore Rena!"
"Jurina you have to keep going."
"But I can't hold it much longer."
"Come on just a little longer."
"Ahh I quit!"
Yuko came in and found Jurina hunched over a desk and Rena sighing.
"What's going on in here?" Yuko asked.
"Jurina is failing her classes and unless she gets her grades back up, she's going to be sent back to her original grade." Rena said.
"So this is like a study session?"
"Yes but right now Jurina is giving up."
"It's hopeless!!" Jurina said.
"We've been only studying for five minutes."
"It's too hard!"
"Jurina you give up too easily."
"Because it's hopeless."
"Then fail and go back to being a first year."
"But I don't want to! I want to stay with Rena-chan!"
"Then study!"
"No!"
Yuko and Haruna watched the two bicker about studying for ten more minutes.
"Hey I have an idea!" Yuko said.
"What?"
"Rena how have you been teaching Jurina."
"By rereading sections of the book and going over flash cards."
"It's too boring." Jurina said.
"Then how about we try a different approach."
"What are you thinking?"
The subjects Jurina was failing in was math and science. Yuko had the perfect way to help Jurina.
"Ok Jurina watch Nyannyan and I. Nyannyan has ten shrimp."
Yuko set out ten shrimp on Haruna's desk.
"Nyannyan eat three."
Haruna gobbled down three shrimp.
"How many does Haruna have?"
"Seven. Yuko this isn't first grade math." Jurina said.
"Ok then how about this?"
Yuko took two shrimp and then three more on another side.
"These two shrimp are 2x. The three other shrimp are 3x. What happens when I add the two together?"
"Uhh I don't know."
"Five. It's 5x."
"How am I supposed to know that?"
"Think of it like adding numbers just without the x's. So I have ten shrimp and then I have five more. What do I get?"
"Bad cholesterol?"
"Jurina..."
"I'm kidding I'm kidding. 15x."
"Correct!"
"Do Nyannyan get shrimp?"
"Sure here."
Yuko gave Haruna all 15 shrimp and she ate all of them.
"She's really going to have heart problems in the future."
"Ok let's move on to science!"
Yuko changed into a costume and came out dressed as a tree.
"I am a tree. I take in carbon dioxide and give out oxygen! Rena get out here!"
"But it's embarrassing!"
"Just get out here!"
Rena came out wearing all yellow and had a ball on her head.
"I am the sun and I help plants photosynthesize! Ahh this is embarrasing."
Jurina couldn't help but start laughing like crazy.
"Yuko this is embarrassing!"
"Just go along with it Rena. Nyannyan get out here!"
Haruna came out dressed in a pancho, rain boots and umbrella and a fish bowl on her head.
"Nyannyan water! Nyannyan help tree grow!"
"That's right Nyannyan. So Jurina how do trees make oxygen?"
"Uhh the tree takes water and sunlight and uses it as fuel to transform carbon dioxide into oxygen."
"CORRECT!"
"Hey you guys actually make sense."
"Ok now let's move onto a different subject."
Just then Acchan and Takamina walked in.
"What are you guys doing?" Acchan asked.
"Helping Jurina study." Yuko said.
"Oh let us help! This looks like fun."
After a couple minutes, Yuko had everyone change into costumes. Then Rena came out dressed as a plankton.
"I am a plankton and I feed off of the sunlight and drifting particles in the ocean."
Then Yuko came out dressed as a shrimp.
"I am a shrimp! I am at the bottom of the food chain and I eat plankton." Yuko said.
Haruna ran out and slammed into Yuko.
"Nyannyan is a crill! Crill eat shrimp and is above in food chain!"
Nyannyan bit into Yuko and then Rena came out. With tentacles on her arms.
"I am an octopus and I eat crill!"
After Rena came out Takamina came out with a shark fin on her back on head.
"And I am a shark and I eat octopus! I am at the top of the food chain!"
"No you're not!"
Acchan came in dressed as a fisherman.
"I am a fisherman and I kill sharks like you!"
"Oh no don't kill me!"
Takamina tried to run but Acchan grabbed her and pulled her in.
"Ahh no!"
"I'm gonna make sharkfin soup out of you."
"So basically starting from Rena being the weakest and Takamina being the strongest, that is the food chain of the ocean." Yuko said.
"Hey that actually makes sense! Thanks Yuko!"
"That's good. So let me know how you do on the TEST! Nyannyan stop I'm not a shrimp don't eat me!"
"Yuu-chan so yummy!"
"Nyannyan!"
A couple days later Jurina took the test and came back with the results.
"Soo how'd you do?"
"I got a 100!"
Jurina showed everyone the paper and everyone cheered.
"Good job Jurina!" Yuko said.
"This means you get to stay with me!" Rena said.
"I couldn't have done it without you."
Jurina leaned in and kissed Rena on the lips. When she pulled back Rena turned a bright shade of red.
"Yay everyone happy! Nyannyan kiss too!"
Haruna grabbed Yuko and kissed her on the cheek.
"Ahh Nyannyan!"
"What?"
"You kiss your own cousin?" Rena said.
"Now that's just wrong." Jurina said.
"No it's not what you think!"
"Nyannyan love Yuu-chan everyday!"
"EHHHH?!"
"Nyannyan you're not helping!"
"Gosh Yuko I didn't know you were that type of person."
"We're sorry we didn't know about it."
"No you guys really it's not like that."
"We'll see you around Yuko."
"Mou Nyannyan don't tell people that."
"But Nyannyan love Yuu-chan."
"I love you too Nyannyan."
"Yay!"
"Nyannyan you're hopeless."
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I hope you all enjoyed the chapter! Please tell me what you think and look forward to the next chapter!
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Haha, I'm just wondering where in the world Yuko is getting all these random costumes from. Also, I would kill to see Rena dressed as an octopus that just sounds hilarious lol.
Yay for cute Kojiyuu at the end :D
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As I thought when Mayuki comes in, you ALL jump in!
We can't help it. We thrive on MaYuki :banana:
Just then Acchan and Takamina walked in.
"What are you guys doing?" Acchan asked.
"Helping Jurina study." Yuko said.
"Oh let us help! This looks like fun."
Why is it that whenever AtsuMina appear in any of your stories, I get a baka couple feeling? They are so happy all the time, I want to squeeze them :rofl:
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OMG!! i also want a kojiyuu´s baby :D with dimples :D
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@Sasshii: I too wondered where yuko got the costumes. Maybe she just made them. Who knows. :?
@seigus: I don't know why but Atsumina always seemed like one of those funny couples that always have a good laugh and can be very funny. That's just how I imagine them. Then agian I have a very strange imagination. :lol:
Today's chapter goes to saeyaka. I've been ignoring them for a while now and that isn't right so it's time for their moment to shine! Plus I'm a huge saeyaka fan so it's my duty to ship them! Enjoy!
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Chapter 9
"Sayaka get back here right now!"
"I don't want to talk to you right now Sae."
"Why not?"
"You know why!"
"Come on Sae let's just talk this out."
"No way!"
Yuko watched Sayaka walk out while Sae was left behind.
"What happened?" Yuko asked.
"Sayaka is ignoring me." Sae said.
"Why?"
"I don't know! She won't tell me."
"That's weird. Usually you're the first one she goes to whenever she's upset."
"I know so I don't know what's going on."
"What are you talking about?"
Mayuyu and Yukirin walked over and decided to join in on the conversation.
"Sayaka's ignoring Sae and we're trying to find out why."
"How about we follow her. Like after school and stuff." Mayuyu said.
"That's a great idea! But what if we get caught?"
"We just say we were roaming around we just happened to be in the area."
"You really think she's going to believe that?"
"It's better than nothing."
"Alright then tomorrow we stalk Sayaka."
"Sounds good to me."
The next day, Yuko, Haruna, Yukirin and Mayuyu all followed Sayaka after school. Sayaka is a very fast person. Yuko almost missed her if Sae haden't tried to distract her. They followed Sayaka to a book store where Mayuyu and Yukirin went inside to check out. A half hour later they came back out.
"Did you find anything?" Yuko asked.
"I got new mangas." Mayuyu said.
"I mean about Sayaka."
"Oh uh she was working. Restocking the shelves and stuff."
"This must be her part time job or something."
"Hey look!"
Mayuyu pointed at Sayaka who was now leaving the store.
"Let's follow her."
The next stop they found Sayaka stop at was a cafe. This time her and Haruna walked in to see what she was up to. They walked in and took their seat. A couple minutes later a waitress came over to take their order. But to Yuko's surprise their waitress was Sayaka in a cute little waitress uniform.
"Yuko?"
"Hey Sayaka. I didn't know you worked here."
"I just started recently." Sayaka said.
"Why are you working here?" Yuko asked.
"I need some extra cash."
"I see."
"So what do you guys want?"
"I'll have a coffe please."
"What about you Haruna?"
"Milk!"
"Ok I'll be right back with your order."
Sayaka left and then came back soon after.
"That was fast."
"I'm a fast worker."
"Thanks."
For the next two hours Yuko and Haurna watched Sayaka run all over the place serving customers and taking her orders. It looked tiring to Yuko. Around six Yuko saw Sayaka pack up and head out. Yuko noticed she was carrying something in a bag. Yuko and Haruna walked back over to Yukirin, Sae, and Mayuyu and reported what they found.
"Sayaka works at the cafe too?" Sae said.
"Yeah. She said she needs extra cash." Yuko said.
"That's weird. Her family isn't struggling finacially."
"Uh you guys we're about to lose her."
"Crap after her!"
The four girls followed Sayaka to a grocery store. There, Mayuyu and Yukiin said they saw her working the cash register.
"Jesus how many jobs does this girl need?" Mayuyu said.
"Apparently there's more. Look!"
Yukirin pointed at Sayaka who was now rushing out the store while putting on a reflector vest and a hard helmet.
"Now where is she going?"
The four folllowed Sayaka to a construction site. There she was doing all kinds of things from digging dirt and hammering nails to lifting heavy boards and bricks. The guys there didn't seem to mind her working but they were working her like a dog. Yuko was about to fall asleep when suddenly there was a loud cry. Sayaka had struck her hand with a hammer and now it was bleeding.
"Akimoto take the rest of the night off. You've worked enough."
"But I won't get paid if I don't work full hours."
"Here take the money and go home."
"Thank you so much!"
Sayaka bandaged her hand, took the money and left. They followed Sayaka to another store and Yuko thought she had another job there. But turns out she only went in there to buy something but Yuko couldn't tell what it was. It was 10:00 and Sayaka was finally beginning to head home when Sayaka stopped.
"I know you guys were following me." she said.
"You knew!" Mayuyu said coming out."
"Yeah. I saw you following me right after school."
"Seriously!"
"So tell me why you're following me."
"Well we wanted to find out why you've been ignoring Sae." Yukirin said.
"If you have to know it's because I was trying to plan a surprise party for Sae."
"What?"
"It's your birthday today and I wanted to throw you a party."
"Then what's in the bags?" Yuko asked.
"One has a cake from the cafe and the other has the gift I specially ordered for Sae. I had to save up a lot which is why I got all those jobs."
"Sayaka you did all that for me?" Sae said.
"Yes and I'm sorry for not telling you but I wanted it to be a surprise."
"Sayaka!"
Sae ran over and hugged Sayaka.
"Well since it's Sae's birthday let's all go out and celebrate. To the karaoke bar!"
"YAY!"
Yuko treated everyone at the karaoke bar. Everyone sang their hearts out including Haruna who had no idea what was going on. She ended up singing "Heavy Rotation" five times because it was the only song she knew. When it was time for cake, Yuko turned out the lights and Sayaka brought in the cake.
"Happy Birthday Sae!"
Sayaka started to walk over but then Yukirin's foot got in the way and Sayaka tripped. The cake went flying and was going to land on Sae. But then Sayaka got in the way and got a face full of cake.
"Sayaka!"
"You can still eat it!"
"No we can't. There's a huge Sayaka imprint in it." Mayuyu said.
"I am so sorry!" Yukirin said.
"It's fine. I'm sorry I ruined your cake Sae." Sayaka said.
"It's ok because now..."
Sae took a strawberry and placed it in Sayaka's mouth.
"Now you're my cake."
Sae licked some frosting out of Sayaka's face and then kissed Sayaka pulling out the strawberry.
"Sweet just like you."
Sayaka was blushing madly despite being covered in frosting.
"Hey no fair!"
Mayuyu took a chunk of cake and rubbed it all over her face.
"Mayuyu!"
"Now you can eat cake Yukirin!"
"You're hopeless."
Yukirin leaned in and licked Mayuyu's face.
"Nyannyan want cake too!"
Haruna took a chunk of cake and smaked it in Yuko's face.
"Nyannyan!"
"What?"
"That's not how you eat cake. You eat it like this!"
Yuko took some cake and threw it at Haruna's face.
"Here you have some too Yukirin!"
"You too Sae!"
Both Yukirin and Sae got face palmed with cake. Pretty soon everyone was eating off each other's faces. Except Mayuyu who had shoved cake down Yukirin's shirt and was trying to eating off her chest. When they had finally cleaned up, Sayaka pulled out her gift.
"I hope you like it."
Sae opened the gift and everyone's eyes grew huge.
"Is that a-"
"Yep."
"A saphire heart."
"Oh Sayaka it's beautiful."
"Here let me put it on."
The gift Sayaka got Sae was half a heart that had a saphire in it.
"Where's the other half?"
"Right here."
Sayaka reached into her shirt and pulled out the ther half which had a ruby in it. Then Sayaka put them together and on the back their names were engraved on them.
"Sayaka this is the best gift you ever got me!"
"Happy Birthday Sae."
The two hugged and everyone cheered.
"Ne Yuu-chan."
"What is it Nyannyan?"
"Does Nyannyan have a birthday?" Haruna asked.
Yuko thought long about that. She didn't know when Haruna was born so she couldn't have a birthday.
"I don't know Nyannyan. We'll have to fix that though."
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Oh ho you know what that means? Haruna is going to have her first birthday on earth! Even though her real birthday is a long way away, I think it would be fun if she had it early. Please tell me what you think and look forward to the next chapter!
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haruna birthday will have many moment of kojiyuu XD i can't wait for next chapter
and u sure update fast im just coming home from school and u jump to chap 9 :roll:
thank for the update :)
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Ah cant wait Haruna birthday...LOL
Haruna in this fic its soo lovely toward yuko,its interesting...
Usually she sooooo~ tsundere toward her squirel...hahaha
Thank for the update
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Aww Sayaka.. isn't she the sweetest girlfriend? :heart:
Four part time jobs for Sae's sake... Sayaka is all action, and her sweat is sweet. :love:
Lucky accident eh, Yukirin? Because of you our Saeyaka moment becomes so much better. Nice job you did there! :thumbsup
Really love the sapphire-ruby hearts as the gifts.. such beautiful gifts for the beautiful couple.
So happy I am reading this chapter :yep:, not that I'm unhappy reading the previous ones. :lol:
:wub: Sweet sweet sweet!!! :wub:
P.S. What's with Mayuyu initatively rubbing the cake on herself? XD
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Sweet birthday!!!!
Oh~ Nyannyan's birthday~ I can't wait for her gift~ hehe
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I'm having so much fun reading all these chapters! I WANT MORE!!! :panic:
KOJIYUU :wub: :wub:
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@kojiyuu109: Yeah I update very fast. I've been starting to wonder if I should slow down. I don't know but anyways, yes major kojiyuu moments in this chapter so I hope you enjoy it! :)
@kurogumi: Yeah Yuko is usually the lovey dovey one. But I decided to switch just to see what others thought and looks like everyone likes it. I hope you do enjoy the birthday chapter! XD
@aruka: Yes Sayaka is the best girl friend in the world. I thought the gift was beautiful too. It's something I would give to my girlfriend. Also I think Mayuyu wanted some attentin from Yukirin. :wub:
@kahem: Yes Haruna's birthday will be the best birthday ever! :lol:
@haruhi16: You want more? Then very well I will give you more! :P
This chapter is going to be so much fun for Haruna. It's her first birthday on earth! I wonder what Yuko has palnned for the birthday girl. Please enjoy the chapter!
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Chapter 10 part 1
Yuko woke up before Haruna so she could go out and do a couple things. She went over to the docks early in the morning to get a fresh shipment of shrimp straight from the ocean. It was freezing cold out but she had to go if she wanted to get the best of the best. But she was going to need a lot so she called Sayaka for help. When she arrived, Sayaka was already there.
"Hey Yuko!"
"Sayaka!"
Yuko ran over and hugged Sayaka.
"It's cold!"
"Here."
Sayaka took off her jacket and put it over Yuko.
"Aren't you cold?"
"No it's ok."
"Ok."
A half hour later, the boat came in and started unloading all the produce. Yuko and Sayaka walked over to the vender and pulled out a list.
"Hello I need three hundred batches of your finest shrimp." Yuko said.
"Three hundred?" the vender said.
"Yes. We're throwing a party and the person we're throwing it for likes shrimp."
"Well I hope you have enough money to pay for it."
"How much?"
"Ten thousand yen."
"Ehhhhh?"
"Can't you go any lower?"
"That's the lowest I can go."
"I only brought five thousand though."
"Well that's too bad."
"Please this is my friends first birthday."
"Well if it's her first... alright how about I lower it to six thousand."
"Sayaka you got a thousand on you?"
"You're lucky I got paid today."
"Yay! Thank you so much shrimp guy!"
"Just make sure you come back again."
"I promise."
Together, Sayaka and Yuko carried the shrimp to a car where Sae was waiting for them.
"You got all of them?" Sae asked.
"Yep."
"Sae help Yuko it looks like she's having a hard time."
They loaded the shrimp into the car.
"Alright you take these to the place and I'll go pick out a dress."
"Alright then."
Sayaka and Sae drove off. Meanwhile Yuko pulled out her phone and dialed Acchan's number.
"Hey meet me at the dress shop we were talking about."
Acchan and Yuko met in front of a dress store and went inside.
"Ok so we need to pick out dresses for everyone to wear and for Nyannyan to wear. Which one should we get?"
"Something red."
Acchan and Yuko looked around and then way in the back, Yuko saw it. There was a plain red dress that would look perfect on Haruna.
"Acchan let's get this one for Nyannyan."
"It's beautiful! Ok now that I know what she's wearing I'll look for the other dresses. You need to go to the bakery with Mayuyu and help pick up the cake."
"On it!"
Yuko ran over to the bakery and met up with Mayuyu who was eyeing all the good looking cakes.
"Mayuyu have they finished the cake yet?"
"They said they were almost done. Yuko look at all these. They look so yummy!"
"Don't worry you'll get your cake soon."
"Here you go ladies!"
"Ahh thank you!"
Together Mayuyu and Yuko carried out this huge cake and loaded it into the car where Yukirin was waiting.
"Ok take it to the place and set everything up. Where are Rena and Jurina?"
"At the park."
"Ok I'm going to go check on them."
Yuko caught a cab and then rushed over to the park. It was already noon and Haruna was probably aready awake and owndering where Yuko was.
(Back at at Yuko's...)
"Mari-chan where's Yuu-chan?" Haruna asked.
"Uh she went out for a while." Mariko said.
You see, Mariko knew that Yuko was throwing a party for Haruna and asked her to make sure Haruna did not go anywhere.
"Haruna are you hungry?"
"No. Where Yuu-chan?"
"She said she'd be out for a while but she'll be back soon. So what do you want to do in the meantime?"
"Hmmm play!"
"Ok what game?"
"Keep away!"
"What's that?"
Haruna reached out and grabbed Mariko's necklace.
"Hey!"
"Keep away! Nyannyan keep necklace away from Mari-chan."
Haruna ran away and Mariko had no choice but to go after her.
"So this is what keep away is."
Mariko chased Haruna all over the house but still had no luck.
"Haruna you give that back right now!"
"No Nyannyan don't give back. This game keep away."
"Ok then how about I play my version."
Just then Mariko transformed into a cat.
"Ohh that look like fun!"
Haruna transformed into a cat as well and now they were chasing each other around in cat forms. Haruna was running to a dead end and Mariko knew she was. When they reached the end, Mariko had Haruna trapped.
"No where to run Haruna."
"Oh really?"
Haruna jumped up and and ran out an open window.
"Haruna!"
Mariko transformed into a human and ran outside.
"Haruna you get back here right now!"
"No Nyannyan run away from Mari-chan!"
"Haruna!"
Mariko didn't see it but there was a dog catcher driving up the street and when he saw Haruna, he picked her up and threw in the van and drove off.
"Oh crap Haruna!"
(Back to Yuko...)
"Hey is everything set up?"
"Yep." Jurina said.
"Is the tent set up?"
"Yep."
"Lights and music working."
"Yep."
"Beverages in a cool area."
"Yep."
"Fire works?"
BOOM!
"Sorry I lit one on accident!" Rena shouted.
"Rena-chan be careful!"
"Ok well looks like everything is ready. Now all that's left is to go get Nyannyan."
Yuko was about to head out when suddenly Mariko came running over.
"Mariko what are you doing here? You're supposed to be watching Nyannyan."
"Haruna *pant pant* she was *pant* kidnapped."
"WHAT!"
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Oh no what happened to Haruna? Find out in part 2! Please tell me what you think! Oh and one more thing, due to the request of a certain fan, I have decided to make a separate profile for one shot collection. So look forward for it because it's coming up soon!
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Miyumi-san :d I really like your fic, and you update so fast :XD:
KojiYuu, O.M.G so cute :XD:
I'll wait for your update xD
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Haruna was kidnapped :shock: :OMG:
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u don't need to slow down because i want to know what happen to haruna :cry: ahh poor haruna
i hope the birthday will go smoothly in next chapter XD
thank for the update :)
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@jo1410: Thank you for reading and commenting on my fic. I will continue to update as fast as possible. But when school starts then I don't know what I'll do. Guess we'll have to see what happens. :?
@mo-chan: Yes Haruna was kidnapped. But what will happen to her? Let's read and find out. :)
@kojiyuu109: Ok I won't slow down. So let's see what happens to Harua shall we? :D
Here is part 2 of Haruna's birthday adventure! I hope you all enjoy.
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Chapter 10 part 2
"What do you mean Nyannyan was kidnapped?" Yuko said.
"She ran out in her cat form and this guy in a white van came out and picked her out." Mariko said.
"Cat form?"
"Yes we can transform into cats. Anyways the guy took Haruna and ran!"
"It was probably a dog catcher. Did you see any signs on the van?"
"Yeah it had a picture of a dog and a cat."
"Was it the dog blue?"
"Uhh I think so."
"I know who took Nyannyan!"
"Great then let's go!"
Yuko and Mariko ran down to the Akihabara pet shelter. There, Yuko and Mariko saw Haruna on a table.
"Nyannyan!"
Yuko was about to grab Haruna but then someone grabbed her. She looked over and saw a girl with brown hair and wearing a pink jacket staring at her.
"What do you think you're doing?" she asked.
"Taking Nyannyan home." Yuko said.
"Nyannyan? This is Coco."
"No that's Nyannyan and she's my cat."
"Not anymore. I just adopted her."
"No way."
"Now if you excuse me I'll be leaving."
The girl took Haruna and walked out the store.
"What do we do now?"
"We follow her Mariko. We follow her."
Yuko and Haruna followed the girl back to her house. They watched her walk in and shut the door. Yuko could hear Haruna crying from inside.
"So what's the plan?" Yuko asked.
"How about this, I transform and enter the house while you walk around and try to find and unlocked window. Open it and we'll escape through." Mariko said.
"Ok sounds good."
"Now listen. I will transform back into a human form. Haruna hasn't learned how to do that yet so it might be while before she finally turns back."
"That's fine with me. I just want to get her back."
"Ok then let's do this."
Mariko transformed and walked over to the door. Yuko knocked on it and then hid in the bushes. The door opened and saw Mariko who gave her a cute little meow that made the girl let her in.
"I'll call you caramel."
The girl walked in and shut the door. When the coast was clear, Yuko walked around the house for an easy access window. She walked past the living room where she saw Haruna sitting on the couch with a bow on her head. Yuko thought she could just sneak in and grab her. But then the girl came back with Mariko.
"Look I brought you a friend! You two be nice while I go get you dinner."
The girl set Mariko down and then left. It was then Yuko opened the window and signaled them to run. They started running but then the girl came back. Luckily, Yuko hid right before she saw her.
"Uh oh I better shut that."
The girl shut the window and then went back over to Mariko and Haruna.
"I got a blue on for you."
The girl put a blue bow on Mariko who looked really ticked but the girl couldn't see that.
"Oh you two look so cute! I'm going to get my camera."
The girl ran off again and once again Yuko opened the window and tried to get them to get out. But the she came back and this time locked the window. The girl took a couple photos and then grabbed Mariko and Haruna and carried them away from the window. Yuko walked along side the house and found another window showing the girl's room.
"You two wait here."
The girl left and then Yuko opened the window.
"Hurry up!"
Both Haruna and Mariko made it out this time but right as Mariko came out, the girl came back and saw Yuko.
"Hey those are my cats!"
"Crap!"
Yuko started running while carrying Haruna. Mariko didn't tranform back yet because apparently she was faster in that form. They ran around the block and acorss the street making sure they had lost her. But then there was a loud roar from behind them. Yuko looked over and saw the girl speeding down the road on a motor cycle.
"What the heck!"
Yuko started running like crazy basically sprinting down the road. But then there was hill and Yuko was sprinting down it. Yuko knew things weren't good and she was right. Yuko couldn't control herself and tripped rolling the rest of the way down the hill. She ended up ramming into a light post.
"Nyannyan are you ok?"
"Yeah."
"Ok good."
"Give me back Coco and Caramel!"
The girl was really really close now. If Yuko didn't start running they would be caught for sure. But she was in so much pain that running was not an option. Right when the girl was about to reach them, a car pulled up and blocked her way. The window rolled down revealing a girl she had never seen before.
"Run Yuko! Head to the park!"
Yuko got back up and started running. She wondered who that girl was that helped her. But she didn't have time to wonder because she was on the run. Yuko made it to the park and started to run for the tent.
"Stop!"
"Why Mariko?"
"Haurna should be changing back now. Put her down!"
"What?"
Before Yuko could do anything, her arms became really heavy and she ended up falling back.
"Yuu-chan!"
"Nyannyan!"
Yuko sat up and looked at Haruna who was now back in human form.
"Come on Nyannyan it's almost time."
"Time for what?"
"You'll see."
Yuko led Haruna into the tent with her eyes covered. Then she opened and them and when she did everyone came out and said,
"SURPRISE!"
"NYA!"
"Happy Birthday Haruna!"
Haruna was speechless. There was so much going on in Haruna's mind right now that she couldn't think of what to say.
"Nyannyan go put this on."
Yuko handed Haruna the dress and she ran out to change. She came back in and everyone was taken back by her beauty.
"Now let's get this party started!"
Everyone ate a ton of shrimp for dinner. Haruna was in heaven when she saw all of them. The cake was beautiful with flowers and fancy writing on it. It was also really tasty. Everyone danced and had fun and Haruna looked like she was having a good time. Then when it came time to open presents everyone gathered around.
"Here Haruna open ours first."
Sae and Sayaka handed Haruna a small box. Haruna opened it revealing a small bag of shells.
"Those shells are called kitty paws." Sayaka said.
"We got them from a friend who went to the beaches in America." Sae said.
"Thank you! They so pretty!"
"Here open ours next!"
Acchan and Takamina handed her a medium sized bag. Haruna pulled out a pair of mittins and a hat with a cat face on them and the mittens had paw patterns on them.
"We thought you would look perfect in these." Acchan said.
"Thank you!"
"Open ours now!"
Jurina handed Haruna as medium sized box. Haruna opened it and pulled out a bunch of candy from pockey to pucho.
"We didn't know what exactly you liked so we just got you a ton of candy. I hope you don't mind." Rena said.
"Yay candy! Thank you!"
"Open ours. It's the best one."
Mayuyu handed Haruna a large bag. Haruna pulled out bath soaps and leopard print panties.
"The bath soaps are from me and panties are from Mayuyu."
"Now your butt will look sexy for Yuko!"
"Mayuyu!"
"Yay Nyannyan look sexy for Yuu-chan!"
"No Nyannyan. Anyways here's my gift to you."
Yuko pulled out a necklace that had a silver paw with a diamond in the center.
"Now I'll know that you're my Nyannya."
Yuko put the necklace around Haruna's neck and backed away to look at it.
"Really nice Yuko!" Mayuyu said.
"Well done." Rena said.
"Thank you so much!"
Haruna leaned in and kissed Yuko on the cheek.
"Hooray! Now let's get back to the party."
The party lasted for another two hours and then everyone decided to call it quits. While walking home Haruna asked,
"Mari-chan where present?"
"It's waiting for you at home." Mariko said.
They walked up to the house and walked in. There sitting at the table was the girl who helped Yuko out back when she was being chased. Only now she was in a maid outfit.
"Happy Birthday Haruna!"
"Miichan!"
"Princess!"
The two hugged and Haruna looked like she wasn't going to let go.
"I'm sorry but who are you?" Yuko asked.
"I am royal maid Minegishi Minami. It is the pleasure to meet you."
"Ah you're the one who me the messages in Nyannyan's collar!"
"That's right."
"I was able to get Miichan to come to Earth as well." Mariko said.
"Yay Miicha stay with Nyannyan now!"
"That's right!"
"Great now I'm taking care of three people."
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Miichan has landed! I wonder what will happen now. Please tell me what you think and look forward to the next chapter. Oh and don't forget, the one shot collection is coming out soon!
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jajaj yuuchan now you need a bigger place:D
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LMAO, Poor Yuko, now she'll have to take care three alien people in her house.
Great chapter btw! Update soon! :thumbsup
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"Great now I'm taking care of three people."
poor Yuko :hiakhiakhiak:
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you're so fast miyu!
you're updating and posting fic in one day waw!
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@Haruko: Yuko does need a bigger place. Maybe I'll give one to her. I don't know.... :?
@haruhi16: Thank you for reading! Yeah Yuko is running out of room! I wonder what she'll do. :?
@mo-chan: Yes poor Yuko. Taking car of three people is going to be hard. But remember Miichan is a maid. Maybe she can help. :)
@miayaka: Yes now I'm updating well more than twice a day. I think its more like four now. I'm probably going to end up buring my eyes out and my head exploding. All well! That's the kicks that comes with being an writer! :lol:
Now it looks like Yuko is runing out of room at her place. Some thing must be done! And it looks like Miichan has the answer. Let's see what the maid has planned for them.
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Chapter 11
"Mistress Yuko."
"Who?"
Yuko turned around and saw Miichan staring at her.
"Oh hi Miichan. What is it?" Yuko said.
"Well I wanted to ask, where will I be staying?" Miichan said.
"Oh well we don't have any more beds and so I guess you'll have to share a room with Mariko since she's using my parents bedroom."
Yuko could have sworn she saw a spark light up in Miichan's eyes.
"Oh thank you mistress Yuko thank you so much!"
Miichan ran into Mariko's room where there was a loud scream. Soon after Mariko came back out with a ticked off look on her face.
"What the heck is she doing in my room?" Mariko said.
"We don't have any more beds so she'll have to sleep in yours." Yuko said.
"Why can't she sleep on the couch?"
"Because I don't want her feeling uncomfortable."
"She's a maid Yuko. They're supposed to feel uncomfortable."
"Still I don't want her sleeping on our couch. It wouldn't feel right."
"Ok fine! But if you try to make any moves on me I will personally send you back to our planet."
"Yes mistress."
Mariko ran off and slammed the door behind her.
"Isn't mistress Mariko so great?" Miichan said.
"What?" Yuko said,
"She's great. She's wonderful. Absolutely perfect!"
"Why do you say that?"
"Back at the palace, Mariko was already there way before me. She was very young at the time but still older than me. I was hired to me her maid and take care of her but in the end she was the one that ended up taking care of me. Because of that I have an undying love towards her and nothing will ever kill it."
"You are one werid maid you know."
"I just wish there was a way for me to make her happy."
"Well we're stuck here so until then you might as well get used to things."
"Very well then I will go out and gather things for dinner tonight."
"Ok you I'll see you later."
Miichan walked out and then Haruna came in just waking up from a nap.
"Where Miichan?"
"She went out to get dinner."
"Ohh. Where Mari-chan?"
"In her room."
"Can we play with Mari-chan?"
"I don't think she wants to be bothered."
"It's fine Yuko."
Mariko had come out of her room and was now standing next to Haruna.
"You wanna go out somewhere?" she asked.
"Sure where to?"
"Anywhere. I just want to relax."
"Ok I know just the place."
Yuko took Mariko and Haruna to a small cafe she would go to relax and have some coffee. They took a seat and ordered what they wanted.
"Hey this place isn't so bad." Mariko said.
"I go here a lot with Mayuyu."
"That explains all the maids."
Yuko forgot to mention it was a maid cafe but she only went for the food. Although time to time Yuko does enjoy seeing all the cute girls dressed in cute maid outfits. Yuko was chatting with Mariko when one of the maids walked up to the front of the cafe.
"Everyone! The best maid contest is about to begin! The maids will go around and pick a master or mistress to act as their partner and compete in the contest. Whoever wins will win a brand new house!"
The maid showed a picture of it and Yuko almost choked. The place looked like a smaller version of the palace of Versailles.
"Maids on you mark, get set, go!"
Yuko watched all the staff run out and look for the right person to be their mistress.
"Hey Yuko maybe they just might pick you." Mariko said.
"I wish!"
"Mistress."
Standing next to Mariko was Miichan!
"Miichan!"
"What are you doing here?" Mariko asked.
"They pulled me in thinking I was one of them. So now here I am trying to get Mariko-sama to come with me."
"No way."
"Come on Mariko. We could really use the new house."
"Alright fine."
"Yay! I won't let you down mistress!"
Miichan and Mariko walked up to the front of the stage along with the rest of the maids and their partners.
"Ok everyone the first event is preparing tea for their master/mistress. The maid will have to prepare one cup of tea for their partner within a certain time limit. The judges will judge on a scale from one to ten. We'll start off with the first couple."
Yuko watched many maids go up and attempt to make and pour tea. Some screwed up making it and some ended up spilling the tea. The highest score Yuko saw so far was a 18. You could get 30 points max. When it was Miichan's turn, Yuko only blinked once and she already had everything set up and ready to go. She even poured it in a elegant way. In the end, Miichan got a 28.
"Spectacular! The next event is cleaning the house. The maid will be given two minutes to clean as much as they can before the mistress is home. Based on how much was cleaned, the judges will score. Start!"
Many of the maids struggled. Having two minutes to clean a mess that would normally take an hour is very hard. Some of them couldn't even get the first layer clean. The highest score so far was a 23. But now it was Miichan's turn and Yuko was waiting for something spectacular to happen. She was right. As soon as the timer started, Miichan went to work. She threw away trash, made the bed, folded clothes, and polished the windows at the same time. When she was done, she had ten seconds to spare. She used those last ten seconds to pull out a nice vase full of flowers. In the end, Miichan got a 29.
"This girl is amazing! Why can't you be like her? Anyways the third and final event is protecting their master/mistress from harm. We will have someone pretend to be a bad guys and try to kill your partner. As a maid it is your job to protect them. But if they die, then you have failed as a maid. Ready go!"
They just basically had three guys come up and try to touch the maids parnter. Many of them failed mainly because they tried to fight but failed or they were too scared. The highest score was a 25. Now it was Miichan's turn and she looked ready to go. The guys came out and before they could make even one step towards Mariko, Miichan had already taken them out sending them flying off the stage.
"Sugoi! But wait!"
There was the sound of a gun loading. Yuko had no idea where it was coming from but Miichan knew. She moved Mariko out of the way and got in front of her. The gun fired and Miichan was splattered with red paint.
"Congratulations! You've won the best maid contest! Here is your prize!"
The maid handed Mariko the keys to the house and then walked over to Miichan.
"You're a really good maid. I know a couple people that might be interested in hiring you. You want to look into it?" she asked.
"I'm sorry but I serve only one mistress and that is her."
Mariko walked over and proudly stood next to Mariko.
"Darn. We could've really used someone like you."
"Sorry but she's mine. Yuko Haruna let's go!"
When they got to their new place, Yuko almost had a heart attack.
"This place is huge!" she said.
"Big house! Really big house!" Haruna said
"Let's go check it out inside Nyannyan!"
While those two ran off to explore their new home, Mariko pulled Miichan over to the side.
"You are either the dumbest or the smartest maid I have ever had." Mariko said.
"Can't I be the cutest?" Miichan said.
"As I thought you are the dumbest."
"Hey!"
"But you're also the best one I've had."
"Ahhh mistress!"
Miichan reached out and hugged Mariko who was having a hard time breathing. Yuko could see the two outside and thought they made up.
"Aww now that's sweet."
Mariko saw Yuko and gave her a "i'm going to kill you look" that sent chills down Yuko's spine. Then Mariko broke free of Miichan's hug and started to head for the front door.
"Shoot Nyannyan run!"
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Well now Yuko has a place to fit as many people as she wants! I hope you all liked the chapter and please tell me what you think. Also if you haven't checked it out already, I've posted a new one shot collection thingy so check it out! Thanks and look forward to the next update!
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Yuko is sweet in this fic~ not so pervert as what she was~
And she has to take care three aliens in her house~ :mon roll:
Mariko was so cool in all the time, acts just like a queen as always~ ue kara Mariko!! :gmon flowers:
lol at Miichan appearance and her undying love toward Mariko-sama :gmon heartu:
They even win a house! or I should say a Palace!
Things start to get more fun now~ :mon mischief:
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Great birthday! And gift!!!
WOW Marimii!!!!
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Mariko is really a caring mistress indeed (despite the 'rude' words). Where else would you find a mistress getting hugged so casually by her own maid? :lol:
And congrats for the house! :D
But I still don't understand the "Shoot Nyannyan run!" sentence. Is it Yuko asking Nyannyan to reach the front door before Mariko does?
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@ichikawa: Ahh it's so good to hear from you! When I heard about your accident I was so worried. Thank you for reading my fic! I hope I hear more from you! :)
@kahem: Yes Marimii is here! Haruna's birthday was the best thing ever for her! Look forward to more Kojiyuu!
@aruka: Ahh I'm sorry for confusing you! The last sentence was basically Yuko saying that she was going to start running and wanted Nyannyan to start running with her. I'm sorry for confusing you. :cry:
Here is chapter 12! I forgot to change it to 11 before so I'm sorry everyone! Anyways, here's chapter 12 and I hope you all enjoy it!
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Chapter 12
Yuko was at school with Nyannyan just sitting there doing her work when Mayuyu came over and started poking her head.
"What is it Mayuyu?" Yuko aksked.
"I'm mad and I need you're help." Mayuyu said.
"What is it?"
"It's Sae."
"What about Sae?"
"She's been trying to hit on Yukirin and Yukirin's been letting her do it. She even returns the flirts sometimes!"
"No way."
"Yeah and it's ticking me off. Yukirin is mine and I don't want anyone going near her. Especially some shemale."
"So what do you want me to do?"
"I need you to help me train Sae."
"What do you mean?"
Later on that day around lunch time, Yuko told Sae to meet her at the back of the school. Yuko was waiting for Sae and a couple minutes later she finally showed up.
"Hey Yuko what is it you needed to tell me?"
"Oh I wanted to ask you something."
"What?"
"Have you been hanging around Yukirin a lot lately?"
"Yeah I have. She's really cute."
"You better watch out."
"Why?"
"Because the Terminator has been set loose."
"What?"
BAM!
Sae got hit right in the head with a fire extinguisher and knocked out.
"Help me drag her to the roof."
"Nyannyan you help too."
"Yuu-chan why we taking Sae to the roof?"
"I don't know."
They got her up to the roof where Mayuyu had tied her to a light pole. When she came too, she was confused and a litle groggy.
"What's going on?"
"It's time for your training Sae."
"Mayuyu?"
Mayuyu walked over and grabbed Sae's hair. She brought her hair right up to her face and then said,
"I'm going to teach you to stay away from my Yukirin."
"What do you mean?"
"You know exactly what I mean."
"I honestly don't."
"Then I'll have to remind you."
Mayuyu walked over to the nearby fire hose and unrolled it. She brought it over and then aimed it right at Sae.
"Yuko go turn it on."
"No way Mayuyu. You'll hurt her."
"Fine then Haruna you do it."
"Ok!"
Haruna walked over and turned the nozzle turning the water on. A couple seconds later water came gushing out of the hose straight at Sae. She got soaked with water and when Mayuyu turned it off, Sae was shivering.
"Now let's being. Will you stop hitting on my Yukirin?"
"What do you mean?"
"Wrong answer."
Mayuyu blasted Sae with the hose a second time this time being longer than the last.
"Now I'm going to ask you again. Will you stop hitting on my Yukirin?"
"Yes."
"Correct. Now to prove it, you have to tell her you hate her."
"No!"
"Wrong answer again."
Mayuyu once again sprayed Sae right in the face. Sae probably couldn't breathe from all the water being blasted in her face. At one point Yuko thought she had passed out but when Mayuyu stopped she was still awake. Yuko wanted to help Sae but she was afraid to get in Mayuyu's way. When Mayuyu is mad it is not safe to get in her way.
"You will tell Yukirin you hate her!"
"No!"
"Fine then say hi to Satan to me!"
Mayuyu sprayed Sae again and didn't look like she was going to stop any time soon. But then the water suddenly turned off. Yuko looked over and saw Yukirin standing right behind Haruna.
"Mayu!"
"Yuki."
Yuki walked over to Mayuyu and the first thing she did was slap Mayuyu in the face. But Mayu just stared at her with a blank expression on her face. She was a cyborg after all. Maybe she didn't feel the pain.
"What are you doing?" Yukirin said.
"Punishing Sae." Mayuyu said.
"This isn't right Mayuyu. Why are you doing this?"
"Because she was getting too close to you."
"What do you mean?"
"She was getting to close. Always hugging you and holding your hand. Saying cheesy pick up lines and you going along with all of it. It made me sick. So I had no choice but to teach her to lay off."
"Mayuyu you didn't have to do that. Sae is a person not an animal."
"Well how else am I supposed to teach her?"
"You ask her nicely or talk to me."
"I think my way is better."
"No way. Now listen to me Mayu, don't you ever do that again."
"I can't promise that."
Yukirin slapped Mayuyu again this time on the other side.
"Mayuyu I am yours. I was just playing with Sae. But you and I both know I would never leave you."
Tears started rolling down the Cyborg's eyes. Yukirin pulled her in for a hug and and comforted her.
"I was afraid I was going to lose you." Mayuyu said.
"There, there."
"I'm sorry Yukirin."
"It's ok Mayuyu. Let's go eat lunch together."
"Ok."
Mayuyu and Yukirin walked out and when they left, Yuko and HAruna rushed over to help Sae.
"Nyannyan help me untie her."
"Ok!"
Nyannyan walked over and tore the ropes off Sae.
"Sae are you ok?"
"So...c-c-c-cold."
"Hang in there we'll get you help. Nyannyan go find Sayaka."
"Who?"
"Gorilla girl."
"Ok!"
Haruna ran off and a couple minutes later she came back with Sayaka.
"Oh my god Sae!"
"S-s-s-sa-sayaka."
"What happened?"
"I'll explain later just help me right now!"
"Right. Sae hold on."
Sayaka took off her balzer and shirt revealing her rock hard abs trying to cover Sae and warm the poor freezing girl. Thank god Sayaka had a sports bra on. Sayaka pulled Sae in close to her to help her warm up.
"Sayaka..."
"Just stay quiet Sae."
"You got things from here?"
"Yeah. So what happened here?" Sayaka asked.
"Long story short, Mayuyu got mad at Sae and took out her anger on her" Yuko said.
"I'll kill her."
"Don't. Let me talk to them."
"Alright. I'm counting on you."
"Let's go Nyannyan."
Yuko and Haruna ran down to the cafeteria where Yukirin and Mayuyu said they would be. But when they got there, there was no sign of the two anywhere. Yuko was about to start searching but first she had to use the bathroom. Haruna and Yuko were about to go into the bathroom when Yuko heard a werid moaning noise.
"Nyannyan wait a minute."
Yuko looked around the corner and couldn't believe what she was seeing. There standing in the middle of the bathroom was Mayuyu and Yukirin making out. Yukirin was holding Mayuyu carressing Mayuyu's back while Mayuyu was moving her hands up and down Yukirin's butt.
"Mayuyu..."
"Shut up I'm punishing you."
Mayuyu pushed Yukirin against the wall and started massaging Yukirin's chest slowly trying to tare off ther shirt. But then Yukirin flipped the tables and positioned herself to where Mayuyu was pinned up against the wall.
"Hey now fair!"
"Life isn't fair."
Yukirin tore open Mayuyu's shirt revealing a small pink bra with ribbons on them.
"Cute Mayuyu. Did you know I was doing this to you today?"
"Maybe..."
"You sneaky cyborg."
Yukirin started to caress Mayuyu's chest and kissing her neck making the little Cyborg let out small moans. Yuko saw Yukirin's hand move down towards Mayuyu's skirt. She reached under and started to pull down Mayuyu's panties. Yuko thought it was time to go so she turned around and was ready to run. But then she saw Haruna right behind her staring at everything Yuko was seeing.
"Yukirin!"
There was loud moans coming from behind them and Haruna's eyes grew wide. Yuko pushed Haruna out of the bathroom and out to the hall. Haruna's eyes were frozen. Yuko had no idea how she was going to explain what Haruna had just saw. She'd have to think of something though.
"Uh Nyannyan what you saw there, it was a way of showing someone you love."
Haruna didn't say anything. She just stood there with a spaced out look.
"Nyannyan?" Yuko said.
"Oh sorry Yuu-chan. Nyannyan fell asleep waiting for you." Haruna said.
"You sleep with your eyes open?"
"Yeah Nyannyan does sometimes while standing."
"So you didn't see anything?"
"See what?"
"Nothing! Nothing at all."
"Oh ok. Yuu-chan Nyannyan hungry."
"Let's go eat."
While the two were walking, Yuko was thanking the lord right now that Haruna did not see any of what Yuko saw.
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So how is that for hot scenes? I hope you all liked it. Please let me know what you think and look forward to the next chapter!
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JAJAJ mayuki ... smexy time
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OH MY GOD I'M DYING. This is so great lol. I think Yuko should just drop out of school and become a alien housing service lady. Think about it, she can keep the whole planet in her new house LOL.
Also, I can't believe Haruna fell asleep with her eyes open, well at least it saved her innocent eyes haha.
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Yay! Another speedy update, Mayuki are such perverts hehe, great chapter keep up the good work!
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Mayuki.....so hot~ Mayu jealous is cute ~ and Yukirin~ mouuu! lovely chapter!
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HOT!
I cant coment anything...hahaha HOT! Miyumi-chan thank youuuu~
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@Haruko: Yes they love their smexy time. :wub:
@Sasshii:Yes Yuko's Alien Daycare Service. Now that would be interesting. Yes once again Haruna managed to save her innocnece. Thank god! :lol:
@sasumiofjp: Ah thank you for reading my fic! Look forward to more speedy updates! :)
@yuukimoko: Thank you thank you very much. I thought you would like it since it was Mayuki. My instincts were correct. XD
@kurogumi: I knew you would love it since it was a hot scene. I'm getting better at them but still trying to put a little more detail into it. But again, I don't want to get reported. Let's see what I can do. :twisted:
Now as you all know, Rena isn't Rena without Gekikara. So I think it's time for Gekikara to come out and have some fun. I hope you enjoy the chapter!
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Chapter 13
For the past few days, Yuko has noticed something very strange between Rena and Jurina. Jurina had mysterious injuries on her body and Rena was becoming more distant and quiet than usual. Yuko was becoming very conerned about it so she decided to investigate. She caught Jurina on the way to her next class. Her mouth was bleeding and she had a black eye.
"Jurina what happened?"
"It's nothing. Just leave me alone."
"Tell me."
"Forget it. I'm fine."
Jurina ran off before Yuko could get anything else out of her. Seeing how she wasn't going to get anywhere with Jurina, Yuko decided to go try to talk to Rena. She found her sitting at her desk staring at the floor.
"Hey Rena?" Yuko said.
"Yes?" Rena said.
"Something seems wrong with Jurina. Do you think you know what it is?"
"Yes actually I do know."
"What is it?"
"Jurina is being bullied by the same girls that bully you."
"Why?"
"They don't like her. They say she's an annoying first year in a third year's class. I once walked in and saw them beating her. I wanted to help but Jurina saw me and told me to stay out of it. I felt so angry with myself that I couldn't do anything to help. I just felt so angry. I wanted to beat them. Beat them untii they stopped breathing. But yet I couldn't..."
Yuko could see Rena's hands shaking. Her pupil were dialating and her mouth curling into a wicked smile.
"Rena!"
Rena stopped and looked back at Yuko. Yuko knew exactly what was wrong with Rena. She was turning into Gekikara.
"Rena listen to me. No matter what happens do not let her come out you hear me? We put Gekikara away for a reason. If you let her out not only will you hurt yourself but you might also hurt Jurina. Do not let Gekikara out do you understand?"
"Yes."
"Alright good. I'm going to go try talking to Jurina again. In the meantime you push her back. Keep her in and don't let her through."
"Ok."
Yuko walked away feeling worried for Rena. Back in middle school, Rena was bullied because she was weak. Eventually she had had enough and let out all her anger. That anger was Gekikara and Gekikara is a monster. She feels no pain and has no boundaries. She's the opposite of Rena who is usually weak and fragile. Gekikara is strong and very scary. She'll tare you shreds if you get her mad. Not only that but she also likes watching people suffer which is so scary about her.
"Things will get bad if Gekikara comes out." Yuko thought.
It was during middle school Yuko met Gekikara. She was almost killed if it weren't for Rena trying to fight back. Rena is still in there even when Gekikara is out and she will fight. Yuko was able to save Rena and has helped her restrain Gekikara for a good four years now and she wasn't going to let her come back out now.
"Hey Jurina!"
When Jurina saw Yuko she started running.
"Nyannyan get her!"
"Ok!"
Haruna ran after Jurina and a few seconds later there was a loud thud followed by a scream. Yuko caught up with them and found Haruna sitting on top of Jurina.
"Get off me!"
"No!"
"Get off me!"
"No!"
"Jurina we know about the bullying. Rena told us." Yuko said.
"So what? It's not your problem and it's not Rena's either." Jurina said.
"It is. You're causing a lot of trouble. If you just let us help you then maybe we can put a stop to all of this."
"I don't need you or Rena's help."
"Jurina listen, Rena is on the edge right now and I don't want her losing it."
"Let her! She needs to let out her anger. I'm tired of always seeing her so calm and happy all the time. It makes me sick."
"You have no idea what you're messing with Jurina."
"Maybe not but you're messing with me and I'm telling you to leave me alone!"
Jurina threw Haruna off her and then ran again.
"Nyannyan go after her?"
"No Nyannyan let's leave her be. For now you and I have some business to take care of."
Yuko found the girls who had been bullying Jurina on the roof. She told Haruna to stay back and she walked over to them.
"Hey look it's the perverted uncle." one of them said.
"What do you want hentai?"
"I want you to stop bullying Jurina." Yuko said.
"Oh the annoying first year? No way! She's too much fun to mess with."
"Leave her alone or else."
"Or else what? You'll steal our panties?"
Yuko lost her temper at that point and decided to attack. She attacked one of the girls and jumped onto her pounding her with her fists. But then the other three pulled her off and slammed her onto the ground. Two of them held her arms back while one started punching her in the face.
"Yuu-chan!"
"Don't Nyannyan don't come over here!"
"Hey go get her girlfriend and let's beat her too."
"NO!"
Yuko threw off her attackers and started beating them again. However one of them kicked Yuko on the side sending her flying back. Then they all started kicking her in one big attack.
"Leave her alone!"
Jurina came flying in and attacked one of the girls by latching onto her back.
"Ahhh get it off!"
Another girl pryed Jurina off and threw her onto the ground.
"You're going to pay for that!"
They all started kicking Jurina and punching her at the same time. Yuko wanted to help but she was too hurt to move.
"Jurina!"
Rena came running over and pushed the girls out of the way. Then Rena used her body as a sheild wrapping herself around Jurina protecting her.
"Hey look it's the weakling coming to protect the first year."
"Let's teach her what happens when you try to be heroic."
The girls started beating Rena kicking and punching her. Rena was getting badly beaten and Yuko could do nothing.
"Rena stop it!" Jurina was crying now.
"No I will protect you!"
"Shut up!"
One final kick to the face and Rena was down.
"Rena!"
"Now that she's out of the way, let's get back to you."
"Noooo!"
CRACK!
"What was that?"
Everyone looked over to Rena who was slowly getting up. Her hair was in her face and blood was dripping from her head. Rena raised her arm and started bitting her nail.
*click click* hahahaha!
Yuko knew what was going on. Rena wasn't with them anymore. Now it was Gekikara who was out and she was ready to play.
"What's with this chick?"
"Doesn't she learn to stay down?"
"Looks like we'll have to teach her."
One girl ran over and punched Rena in the face. Instead of falling over, Rena just stood there.
"The girl punched her again and still there was nothing from Rena. Then Rena looked up at the girl and Yuko nearly jumped. Her face was covered in blood and her eyes wide. She had that wicked smile on her face and the crazy look in her eyes. Rena just giggled more and more and the girl kept punching her over and over.
"Ne... okotteru?"
"What?"
Rena punched the girl sending her flying five feet back.
"Let's sing a song. I know one! One... Two... He's coming for you..."
Rena walked over and grabbed the girls head. Then she slammed it into the ground several times until the girl was bleeding. Then she finally stopped dropping the girl's head into her own puddle of blood.
"Three... Four... Lock the door..."
Rena walked over to another girl and grabbed her arm. She took it and bent it until it snapped. Then she took the other arm broke it like you would break a stick. When she was finished she threw the girl to the side and started moving to the others.
"Five... Six... Scream and kick..."
One girl tried to attack Rena but Rena caught her and slammed her to the ground. Then she got on top and started clawing her neck leaving a huge cut on it.
"Seven... Eight... You're too late..."
This girl tried to run but Rena caught her. She threw her to the ground and then grabbed her legs. She bent them both the wrong way until they both snapped. Then she continued to play with them like they were some toy making them worse.
"You monster!"
The last one pulled out a knife and was heading straight at Rena. But Rena grabbed her head causing her to drop the knife.
"Nine... Ten... You're already dead..."
Rena carried the girl over to the edge of the gates and kicked down the safety fence. Then she opened the girls mouth and placed the upper level of teeth on a ledge. Before the girl could move, Rena kicked down on the girl's head causing her teeth to either brake off or jam further into her mouth. She screamed in pain but Rena wasn't done yet. She took the girl and held her over the edge of the roof.
"Rena don't!" Yuko cried.
But crying to her was not working. There was not stopping Gekikara when she's on a rampage. But then something grabbed Rena from behind. Rena looked over and saw it was Jurina.
"That's enough Rena. That's enough. Just please... please stop this."
Seeing Jurina's tears slowly started to bring Rena back. The pulled the girl back in and set her gently down. Then Rena collapsed to her knees and started crying as well. Gekikara was gone and Rena was back. Thank goodness.
"Yuu-chan!"
Haruna ran over to help Yuko up and over to Rena and Jurina.
"We better get out of here."
All four of them went to the nurses office who seemed to be gone at the time. Rena and Jurina treated each other's wounds while Haruna was treating Yuko's.
"Yuu-chan hold still!"
"It burns!"
"Nyannyan trying to help Yuu-chan so hold still."
Haruna smacked a band aid on Yuko making her feel a shock way of pain.
"There all done. Better?"
"Yep!" Yuko said trying to keep herself from screaming.
"Good. Nyannyan make you all better."
Rena and Jurina had finished bandaging their injuries.
"So what's going to happen now?" Jurina asked.
"Well if the girls up there tell the teachers what happened, Rena could be sent to jail or a mental hospital." Yuko said.
"No I won't let them take Rena away."
"But if we say that they got into a fight with each other then maybe we can get away with it."
"It could work."
"Nyannyan go out and tell a teacher there was a fight on the roof but don't mention we were there ok?"
"Right!"
Haruna ran out and a couple minutes later, Yuko could hear teachers running up to the roof. She even heard on scream.
"They found them."
Haruna came back with a smile on her face.
"Good job Nyannyan. Now let's go to class. Rena, Jurina, I'll see you later."
"Good bye Yuko. Thank you so much for helping us."
"No problem."
Yuko and Haruna left and started walking down the hall. But then Yuko realized she forgot something and had to go back. She was about to walk in she heard noises coming from the inside. She looked in and once again couldn't believe what she was seeing. Jurina was sitting on top of Rena kissing her neck and using one hand to massage Rena's chest and the other was under her skirt. There were a pair of panties on the ground and Yuko could tell they weren't Jurina's.
"Jurina we should stop before someone sees us."
"Why? Are you embarrassed?"
"No it's just..."
"Ha Rena you're so cute when you're embarrassed."
Rena was cut off with a kiss but Yuko could hear the moans coming from Rena. Yuko couldn't see everything but she could see Jurina's hand moving faster under Rena's skirt and Rean's moans became quicker and louder. Right when the big moment was about to happen, Yuko felt something tap her from behind.
"Yuu-chan what are you looking at?"
Yuko pushed Haruna back before she could look into the room.
"Yuu-chan what was that?"
"Nothing Haruna. I just think Rena and Jurina are sleeping and need some time alone."
"Ohh ok. Hey can Nyannyan get ice cweam after school?"
"Sure you can have as much as you want."
"Yay!"
Once again, Yuko had another close encounter with Haruna learning about the naughty things humans do. Yuko wondered if she'd be able to keep it up.
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Now I couldn't write a Mayuki hot scene without writing a Wmastui one as well. So to all the Wmatsui and Mayuki fans consider this a well earned treat for reading my story. Look forward to the next chapter and please tell me what you think. Also I updated to OS file so check it out when you have the time!
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Gekikara?! XD
That horror song was scary!!!!!! it made me remember Fredy.......... :shocked :cry:
Wmatsui scene~ Jurina moves fast under the clothes~! :inlove:
thanks for the update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (I was bored and waiting to read something~ you saved me! :wub:)
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WOW !!!!
Miyumi-chan!
Not just Hot scene! But fighting scene!
Uuh *cough*i have nosebleed *cough* hehehe LOL
Love love love i love your fic miyumi-chan!!!!!!!
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Oh geez Gekikara :badluck: they should have known, they're lucky they're all not dead lol. Great chapter!
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WMatsui~~ :drool: :drool:
Gekikara was too cool there~ and the song too~ :thumbup :thumbup
I wonder what will Haruna do if she sees 'that' something~ hahaha... Yuko will be in trouble~ XD XD
Thanks for the update Miyu-san~
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@yuukimoko: I"m glad my fic saved you from bordum. Haha I made up the horror song mysself. I didn't mean to make it that scary! Yes Jurina can be very fast when it comes to something she wants. :wub:
@kurogumi: Yes I decided to make a fight scene and a hot scene as a double treat. YES I have achieved my goal in making someone have a nosebleed! Now the next goal is to make someone cry. Anyways, thank you so much for loving my story! :lol:
@sasumiofjp: The power of Gekikara is something everyone should fear. Sadly they didn't know until it was too late. :twisted:
@ichikawa: Yes the Wmatsui moment was awesome and Gekikara was epic! If Haruna does see "that" then Yuko is going to have a lot of explaining to do with Haruna. Oh boy oh boy. :smhid
it appears all the Wmatsui fans liked this one. I'm gald you all did! Now let's move onto Acchan and Takamina shall we? I hope you all enjoy.
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Chapter 14
Yuko was hanging out with Haruna when Takamina and Acchan came over.
"Hey you guys." Acchan said.
"Oh hey. What's up?" Yuko asked.
"Well we got these tickets to a concert and wanted to know if you and Haruna wanted to come with us."
"Who are you seeing?"
"AKB48!"
"No way! You got tickets to see them!"
"Yeah tonight at eight. So are you in or not?"
"Heck yeah I'm in. Nyannyan you're coming with."
"Yuu-chan what AKB48?" Haruna asked.
"Heavy Rotation."
"Oh Nyannyan want to go!"
"Alright then it's settled. We'll meet there at five." Takamina said.
"Why so early?" Yuko asked.
"Because there are going to be a lot of people there in line so I want to get good seats."
"Alright sounds good!"
After school, Yuko took Haruna home to get changed.
"Mariko we're going out! Will you be able to handle yourself alone?" Yuko said.
"Yeah I'll be fine. I got Miichan."
"Ok then we'll see you in a couple of hours."
Haruna and Yuko left and walked to the concert hall. There, Acchan and Takamina were standing right there in the front of the line. However behind them there was a line that was a 1830 meters long. Thank goodness Acchan and Takamina had showed up early.
"I'm so glad you guys came early." Yuko said.
"I told you to come early." Takamina said.
"Yes and you were right." Acchan said.
"Hey look the doors are opening!"
Everyone flooded in and took their seats. Yuko and Haruna got good spots right in the front row. There were thousands of people there and Yuko was lucky enough to get a spot right in the front. The lights turned off and the lights on the stage turned on. Then the girls from AKB48 came out. The first song came on and everyone went nuts.
"In your... position SET!"
The music started blaring so loudly that Yuko thought her ears were going to explode. She looked over at Haruna who was having just as hard of time. But then someone tapped Yuko one the shoulder and when she turned around she saw a girl holding up ear plugs. She was giving them to her. She nodded a thanks and took them.
"Nyannyan!"
She handed Haruna the ear plugs and showed her how to put them in. As soon as she did, Haruna's face became more relaxed. Now that the music wasn't blasting their ears out, they were finally starting to have fun. Yuko saw Acchan and Takamina jumping up and down and thought her and Haruna should do the same.
"Take my hand!"
Haruna grabbed Yuko's hand and together the two started jumping up and down to the beat of the music. Then when the song ended, everyone cheered as the girls ran off. It was during that short break, Yuko felt Haruna let go and saw her run off. Yuko saw this and had no choice but to go after her.
"Acchan, Takamina grab Nyannyan!"
The two tried to catch her but she was too fast. The three chased Haruna all the way to back stage. Yuko had no idea how they got there because usually there would be security guards but there weren't. Yuko searched everywhere for Haruna but still couldn't find her. But then Haruna came out only she wasn't in her original clothes. She was in one of the stage outfits.
"Nyannyan put that back! That's not yours!"
"NO! Nyannyan dance!"
"No Nyannyan put it back!"
"Two minutes till stage! You girls go change now."
"But we're not-"
"Now!"
The stage hand had confused Acchan, Takamina, and Yuko for some of the girls on AKB48. They had no choice but to change into outfits that weren't theirs.
"What song are we performing?" Acchan asked.
"I don't know just listen and hope you know the dance to it." Yuko said.
The music started playing and Yuko knew exactly what song it was. Haruna was jumping with glee as she ran out to the stage followed by the others. The song they were playing was Heavy Rotation and sadly for Yuko, she was right in the front leading the song.
"Ahh yabai yabai!"
"1,2,3,4!"
The music started and so far Yuko was doing ok. Thankfully Yuko knew the chorus and Haruna was dancing happily behind.
"I want you~"
"I need you~"
"I love you~"
"Atama no naka. GAN GAN natteru MUSIC. HEBBI ROOTEESHON!"
Yuko rememberd there was a huge break dance for her character so she had no choice but to do it. Surprisingly did everything perfectly down to the splits. But then the first verse came up and Yuko had to sing with Acchan. She was afraid she didn't know the lyrics but then the time came she they suddenly came to her head.
"POPPUKOON ga."
"Hajikeru you ni."
"Suki to iu moji ga odoru."
"Kao ya koe wo."
"Omou dake de."
"Ite mo tatte mo irarenai."
"Konna kimochi ni narerutte
"Boku wa tsuiteiru ne!"
The chorus came back and Yuko was able to sing it perfectly. Every once in a while Yuko would take a quick glance at Haruna and saw she was having a blast. Acchan and Takamina also looked like they were having a fun time. The crowd was loving it and no one seemed to notice that they weren't actually performers so Yuko decided to keep going.
"Hito wa dare mo."
"Isshou no uchi."
"Nan kai aiseru no darou?"
"Tatta ichido."
"Wasurerarenai."
"Koi ga dekitara manzoku sa."
"Sonna tokimeki wo kanjite."
"Hana wa hokorobu no ka na!"
The chourus repeated and this time there was a huge dance scene after it. Yuko was doing good so far but then at one point she stumbled and was about to fall. Luckily Takamina had grabbed her and threw her back up for the last part of the song. Then Yuko ended it by going up to the mike and singing,
"HEBII ROOTEESHON."
The crowd cheered and everyone ran off the stage. Yuko quickly grabbed Haruna and ran out off the dressing room. Acchan and Takamina were right behind them. They found a place to change and got out of the stage clothes and into regular clothes. Then they blended in with the swarm of people leaving the concert hall.
"That was so much fun!" Acchan said.
"We were awesome!" Takamina said.
"I was so scared!" Yuko said.
"Why?"
"I was afraid I'd mess up."
"But you did fine and the crowd was going nuts."
"Yeah which is why I'm happy. Thanks for catching me back there. Everything would've been ruined if you didn't save me."
"No problem."
"Hey Takamina let's go home I'm tired."
"Sure thing Acchan. I'll see you guys later!"
"Bye!"
Acchan and Takamina left while Haruna and Yuko started to make their way home.
"So did you have fun Nyannyan?" Yuko asked.
"YEAH!" Haruna said.
"Good because you're not doing it again."
"Why?"
"Because that was too dangerous."
"Yuu-chan so mean."
"I know you can hate me now but remember I'm the one that feeds you shrimp."
"Not the shrimp!"
"Then behave. We're almost home."
"Yay home! Nyannyan tired!"
Haruna ran up ahead of Yuko and Yuko had to catch up. She walked in and saw Haruna staring at something but what? Yuko looked into the room and almost had a heart attack. There were Miichan and Mariko on the couch doing it right in front of Haruna and sadly Haruna was wide awake.
"Oh god yes! Right there Miichan!"
"Faster mistress faster!"
"Mari-cha-"
Yuko grabbed Haruna and dragged her up to her room. She threw her on the bed and shut the door. Haruna was just sitting there with the same expression she had before. Then she finally said,
"Yuu-chan... why Mari-chan and Miichan naked?"
Yuko had no idea what to say to the horribly shocked alien. She's never seen that before and Yuko had no idea how to explain it to her. Then she remembered something she saw in a TV drama once when a child walked in one his parents doing it. Maybe it'll work on Haruna.
"Uhh they were playing at game!" Yuko said hoping it worked.
"What kind of game?"
"A game where you touch someone in certain spots and try to make them feel really good. You'll know you win when one person shouts IKU!"
"Ohhhhhh."
"And they were naked because that was one of the rules."
"Ohh Nyannyan want to play!"
"No Nyannyan not tonight. I'm tired."
"But Nyannyan want to play with Yuu-chan!"
"No Nyannyan. Maybe tomorrow ok?"
"Yay! Ok!"
Haruna climbed into bed and fell asleep shortly after. Yuko got in bed also and hoped that Haruna would forget everything by the next day.
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Oh no Haruna has seen the naught side of humans! What will Yuko do? Find out in the next chapter! Please tell me what you think!
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Oh geez, Mariko and miichan work so fast :shy2:! NyanNyan has been corrupted XD, can't wait for the next chapter
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poor yuuchan its the most perver but need to be so calm with haruna.. about that kind of things.. maybe we need to grown up haruna a little :D
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Oh God. Your chapters are getting more and more hilarious as Yuko tries desperately and shield Haruna's innocent haha. If only all their friends weren't a bunch of perverts XD I laughed at the 'iku' part though lol.
Also, I'm surprised that the real Yuko, Takamina, Haruna, and Acchan didn't come on stage and wonder why the hell these look a likes were performing instead of them. Maybe they liked their performance so much they decided to just watch? lol.
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Naughty scenes FTW!!!!
Hahahah!!! I like Yuko's excuse ^^ oh please Yuko, play with Nyannyan hehe
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@sasumiofjp:Yes Haruba has been corrupted. I wonder what will happen to Yuko? :?
@Haruko: Haruna will learn about those things in the future which basically means very very soon. You'll get what I mean in a couple of chapters :)
@Sasshii: I think the real ones at the time were off somewhere else or looking for their costumes that were stolen by them. Oh and now that Haruna has seen the diry, I wonder how she will act around Yuko. :?
@kahem: Yuko is doing ther best to keep Haruna from figuring it out. But I don't know if Yuko will play with Haruna. :oops:
Today's chapter is going to focus on Saeyaka since I haven't wrote about them in a while. I hope you enjoy!
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Chapter 15
The next morning after the whole walking in on Mariko and Miichan doing it thing, Yuko was a little worried about Haruna. When they walked into the kitchen where the two were Haruna sat down and ate in silence. Yuko thought maybe she had forgotten it. But then out of the blue Haruna asked,
"So who won the game last night?"
Mariko and Miichan looked at her confused and Yuko started leaning back into her chair.
"What do you mean Haruna?" Mariko asked.
"Last night you two were playing a game. Nyannyan want to know who won."
"What game?"
"Mari-chan and Miichan were naked on the couch trying to make one scream iku."
Miichan almost bursted into laughter and Mariko's face got all red.
"Who won?"
"Uhh Haruna, who told you this?"
"Yuu-chan."
Mariko looked over at Yuko and gave her a meanacing glare. Then she looked back over to Haruna and said,
"Uhh well I guess I won. You know how I'm good at games."
"That's not the only thing you're good at."
"Shut up maid."
"Oh so Mari-chan won? Can Mari-chan teach Nyannyan how to play so Nyannyan ready when Yuu-chan plays?"
"What?"
"Yuu-chan promised she play with Nyannyan."
Yuko knew she was dead now. Mariko got up and dragged the chair Yuko was sitting on out into the hall.
"What the heck man? Why did you tell my sister Miichan and I were playing a game?" Mariko said.
"Well I could've told her you and the maid were f***ing each other like animals but I didn't. Plus now she isn't as shocked. Why were you two doing it on the couch anyways?" Yuko said.
"Well let's just say Miichan is very persuasive. Anyways now she wants to do it with you?"
"She doesn't know what it is!"
"Well I think we should tell her before she tries to do with you."
"No way!"
"Yeah so when you get home from school bring Haruna to me got it?"
"Ok."
"Good."
Mariko dragged Yuko back to the table and continued to eat. They finished eating and then got ready to leave for school.
"Byebye Mari-chan!"
"Good bye Haruna."
"Byebye mistress!"
"You and I have some unfinished business to do."
"You don't mean..."
"To the master bedroom!"
Yuko had a pretty good idea what they were going to do but she decided not to get involved. When they arrived to school, they foind Sayaka on the ground staring at he floor.
"Hey Sayaka what's wrong?"
"It's Sae. She got a boyfriend.." Sayaka said.
"WHAT?" Yuko said.
"Yeah."
Hearing that Sae the ikemen got a boy friend is huge to Yuko.
"When did this happen?"
"Last night. She sent me a text saying she found the one. I told her I was happy for her and wished the best for her."
Yuko knew Sayaka was anything but happy. Just looking at her eyes was good enough for Yuko to tell Sayaka was very upset.
"Where's Sae now?" Yuko asked.
"With him in the classroom." Sayaka said.
"We're going to go talk to her."
"No don't bother her. I don't want to worry her."
"But Sayaka-"
"I said no Yuko. Now go to class."
Yuko had no choice but to do as what Sayaka said. Haruna and Yuko walked into the classroom and saw Sae with the guy. He looked nice and good looking but Yuko still didn't trust him. Yuko took her seat next to Haruna and waited for the lesson to start. But then Sae walked over with her boy friend.
"Hey Yuko! I want you to meet my boyfriend Ken."
"Hello."
"Ken and I have been going out since yesterday. I was so surprised and when I told Sayaka she sounded so happy for me. Speaking of which where is she?" Sae asked.
"Oh she's running a little late."
"That's weird. She's usually earlier than the others."
"She's be here don't worry."
The door opened and Sayaka walked in.
"Oh hey Sayaka!"
"Hey Sae."
Sayaka walked over and greeted everyone.
"This is Ken. We've been going out since yesterday. Isn't her cute?"
"It's a pleasure to meet you."
"Well we better get back to our seats. I'll see you after class!"
When Sae walked away, Yuko could see a single tear fall from Sayaka's eye. Yuko patted Sayaka's hand trying to comfort her. Sayaka shook it off and walked back to her seat. Yuko felt bad for Sayaka though because her seat was right in between the two love birds.
"Poor Sayaka."
After the lesson ended, Sayaka ran out of the room. Meanwhile Sae and Ken were getting ready to leave for lunch.
"Hey you guys want to come with us?" Sae asked.
"Uh sure just give me a second." Yuko said.
"Ok I'll see you there."
The two walked out and Haruna walked over to Yuko.
"Nyannyan don't like him Yuu-chan. Nyannyan get bad feeling from him."
"I know I do to but it's Sae's choice and we were asked not to get involved. Now let's go."
Yuko and Haruna walked out into the hall but stopped midway when they saw Sae and Ken arguing about something. Then out of nowhere Ken punched Sae in the face. Sae tried to fight back but he was too strong and slammed her against the wall. He said something to her and then dragged her on.
"Oh god Sae."
"We going to tell Sayaka?"
"Yes Nyannyan we are definetly telling Sayaka."
Yuko and Haruna rushed to find Sayaka was in the same place as last time eating her lunch alone.
"Sayaka big news!" Yuko said.
"What now?"
"Nyannyan and I saw Ken punch Sae right in the face!"
"What? You're lying." Sayaka said.
"No we're serious Sayaka. We saw it with out own eyes. Now go beat him up! He needs a good beating."
"Yuko I can't get involved unless I see it for myself or I get permission from Sae."
"Forget that Sayaka. Sae is being hurt and you're not doing anything about it."
"I'll have to see it with my own eyes."
"Then come with me."
Yuko tried pulling Sayaka up but was having a hard time. So Yuko grabbed Sayaka and slung her over her shoulder.
"Woah when did you get so strong?"
"No time. Sayaka save Sae now!"
They took Sayaka to the back of the school because they weren't in the cafeteria but someone told them they were at the back. They found them and Yuko almost thought she was going to scream. There was Sae pinned against the wall with her shirt torn off. Ken was forcefully kissing her and trying to take off her skirt. Everytime she tried to move, he would punch her and then go back to raping her.
"You see Sayaka? He's a bad guy."
Sayaka didn't say anything. She just stared in horrror at the scene that was taking place.
"Sayaka!"
Something snapped inside Sayaka. She rolled up her selves and walked over to the guy. She tapped his shoulder and when he turned around, she punched him right in the face.
"Sayaka!"
"Here."
Sayaka threw her blazer on Sae.
"Cover yourself."
Then she walked over to the guy who was on the ground rolling in pain from the previous blow. Sayaka grabbed his collar and held him in place as she kept wailing him with punches one stronger than the other.
"You're going to pay for what you did to Sae. You're going to pay!"
Sayaka was on a gorilla rampage and nothing could stop her. She kept beating his face over and over until his face was beaten so badly that you coulsn't recgonize it. Then Sayaka finally stopped and kicked his body a couple of times. Then she walked over to Sae who had seen the whole thing.
"Sae..."
She reached out and tried to touch Sae but she backed away from her a little.
"I better go."
Sayaka stood and and was about to walk away but then something grabbed her ankle. She looked down and saw Sae holding onto her tightly.
"Don't go. Don't leave me."
Sae was now crying and trembling from everything she just went though. Sayaka kneeled down and hugged Sae for she to was crying.
"There, there Sae it's all over now. You're safe with me and that's all that matters."
"I was so scared. I cried your name out so many times hoping you'd come to save me but-"
"It's alright because I'm here now and I'm never leaving your side again."
"Sayaka."
"Sae."
The two embraced in a deep meaningful kiss. Yuko thought it was time to go so she dragged Haruna out of there to give the two some alone time. The rest of the day went fine without any problems and when they got home, Mariko was waiting for them.
"It's about time you guys showed up."
"Sorry we ran into some trouble."
"Ok well get inside I got something for Haruna."
They walked inside and Mariko had Haruna sit in a chair. Then she pulled out a strange head band looking thing and placed it on Haruna's head.
"What is that thing?" Yuko asked.
"It's an information transmitter. When you wear it, it transmits all kinds of information into the person." Mariko said.
"So you're going to use it on Nyannyan?"
"Yep. This should restore her back to her original self."
Mariko pressed a button on the head band and soon after it started to glow. Then Haruna suddenly snapped her head back and started shaking.
"Is this supposed to happen?"
"Yep."
Little did Yuko know, flashes of everything started racing into her mind. She learned math, literature, science, history, english, everything in a matter of seconds. When it was done, the head band turned off and Haruna stopped moving. Mariko took it off and then shook Haruna a little.
"Haruna...."
Haruna opened her eyes and saw Mariko.
"Oh hey Mariko."
"Do you remember me?"
"Yeah you're my older sister Mariko."
"Do you know who I am?" Yuko asked.
"Yeah you're Yuko. The human who took me in." Haruna said.
"Do you feel ok?"
"Yeah I'm fine. Why would you ask?"
"What's two plus two?"
"Four."
"I think it worked." Yuko said.
"Let me just check on thing. Haruna what's sex?" Mariko asked.
"Eww Mariko why would you ask me that? I know what it is. It's when a man puts his-"
"Ok that's enough. So now Nyannyan is back to her normal self?" Yuko said.
"Yep basically."
"What happened before?"
"You acted like a five year old." Mariko said.
"Oh gosh really? I never thought that would happen."
"Well now you're back to normal and that's all that matters."
"Hooray mistress is back to normal!" Miichan said.
"Let's celebrate!"
"HOORAY!"
Yuko was happy Haruna finally learned everything. Now maybe things will be better for her. Yuko wondered how where things would go for them.
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Well chapter 15 done! Haruna now knows everything so now she's basically back to normal right? Well not on my watch! Haruna is far form being back to normal my friends. Far from normal. Anyways look forward to the next chapter and please tell me what you think!
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OMG YOU UPDATED! I'M LOVING ALL THESE CHAPTERS! PLEASE UPDATE MOOOOOORE!!! :wub: :wub:
Finally, Haruna's back on her normal self! :cow: Now i wonder what will happen to the both of them! OMG this is going to be so awkward! HAHAHA :lol:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! :twothumbs
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I think that yuko gonna miss the old haruna because the new one its so tsundere
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Aww no more adorable NyanNyan~ Oh well, things are gonna get a little more pervy probably since Kojima knows something lol
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haruhi16: Yes I wonder what will happen to Haruna and Yuko. I don't know if things will get akward for then or not. Let's find out shall we? :P
@Haruko: Indeed this Haruna is tsundere. But I will make sure to put moments where Haruna isn't so tough and still needs her little Yuu-chan to comfort her. :oops:
@sasumiofjp: Nyannyan no more. But maybe I'll put in some sexy Haruna. You never know. ;)
Here is the next chatpter. Haruna hasen't heard much from home yet for a while now. I think it's time she got a message to let them know what's going on.
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Chapter 16
Mariko and Miichan were out and there was no school today so Yuko was stuck in the house all day with Haruna. Haruna was on the couch watching TV and Yuko was sitting on the ground watching with her. Yuko was bored out of her mind and wanted to do something with Haruna but couldn't think of anything.
"Nyannyan you wanna play a game?" Yuko asked.
"No." Haruna said.
"You wanna go out?"
"No."
"You want some shrimp?"
"No."
"Then what do you want to do?"
"Watch TV."
"Well you're no fun."
Yuko sat there quietly for another five minutes and eventually lost patience. Yuko got up and walked into the other room. Then she came back out with something hidden behind her back.
"Nyannyan look what I got."
"What?"
Yuko pulled out a pair of panties but they weren't just any panties, they were Haruna's and one of her favorite pairs.
'Yuko give those back."
"No way!"
Yuko took the panties and put it on her head like a hat.
"You have to catch me in exactly one hour. If you don't I'll run outside and start shouting these are your panties."
"You wouldn't dare."
"Try me."
Yuko ran off and she could hear Haruna right behind her.
"Yuko you get back here right now!"
"Never!"
Yuko was good at running. It was a good thing too because Haruna was right behind her. Luckily their house was big though so there were also plenty of spots to hide out in. Yuko first tried hiding in a closet. But she was easily found and almost caught. But Yuko managed to escape thanks to her tiny body.
"Catch me if you can!"
Yuko kept running around and this time tried hiding under a bed. But Haruna found her and managed to grab her ankle this time. But because she couldn't fit under the bed she couldn't pull Yuko all the way out. Yuko managed to squirm away and out the door.
"Haha try again!"
Yuko ran into the kitchen and hid in the cabinets. This time Haruna didn't find Yuko and ended up running somewhere else. It was then Yuko carefully snuck out but she was surpirsed to see Haruna standing above the table.
"Got you now!"
Haruna jumped down but Yuko rolled out of the way just in the time. Yuko ran into the family room and jumped over the couch over to the stairs. Yuko ran as fast as she could up the stairs and into Mariko's room. In there, she quickly hid behind a plant that was dense enough to hide Yuko's small body. A couple seconds later, Haruna came in almost out of breathe.
"Mou I give up! I'm getting in the shower."
Yuko heard Haruna walk off and a couple minutes later the shower water came on. Yuko thought Haruna had seriously given up. Therefore she decided she would scare her while she was in the shower. Yuko walked into the bathroom and saw Haruna's clothes on the ground. She walked over to the curtain and was about to draw it when suddenly Haruna jumped out of nowhere and the two fell into the bath tub.
"Got you!"
"Nyannyan why are you naked?"
"I had to make it look like I was in the shower. Anyways I won so give me back my panties."
Haruna leaned in to take them off but Yuko grabbed her head.
"No way!"
She was going to head butt Haruna but instead Haruna pulled Yuko in for a kiss. Yuko could feel Haruna's tounge penetrating Yuko's mouth wrapping itself around her tounge. Yuko pulled back in surprise and Haruna just smiled.
"What you didn't like it?'
"No it's just..."
"What?"
"You missed a spot."
Yuko took the shower head and aimed it at Haruna soaking her.
"Hey!"
"Haha now you're nice and clean."
"I don't think so!"
Haruna took the shower head from Yuko and sprayed her.
"Ah wait I still have my clothes on!"
"Too bad!"
Haruna kept spraying Yuko drenching her in the water. Then when she was done, Haruna turned off the shower.
"Thanks a lot." Yuko said.
"Yuko your boobs look really cute." Haruna said.
"What?"
Yuko looked down and realized she had worn a white shirt and didn't have a bra on under it. Her whole chest was exposed and Haruna could see everything.
"Kya!"
Yuko got up and tried to run out of the bathroom but ended up slipping and falling right on top of Haruna. The two were really close with bodies pressed against each other. Yuko was about to get up but Haruna pulled her in for another deep kiss. But this time Yuko felt something else. She felt a hand traveling up her shirt towards her chest. Yuko pulled back and protected that what was special.
"Nyannyan what's gotten into you?"
"I'm sorry Yuko it's just I've been getting these weird urges to kiss you and touch you. I even have weird dreams of doing all that stuff with you and when I wake up there's weird stuff in my panites."
Yuko knew what Haruna was feeling. The dreams were wet dreams and Haruna's urges are something all young girls go through.
"It's ok Nyannyan I went through the same thing." Yuko said.
"How do I make them go away?"
"Well there are two ways you can either mas-"
Yuko was cut off by a loud beeping noise.
"What was that?"
"Oh it's my collar!"
Haruna ran over to her clothes and pulled out her collar. She pressed a button and a tiny hologram came out.
"Princess, I hate to inform you but we are losing the battle right now. Things are not looking good right now and it maybe a while before you can return home. But at the rate things are going you may never be able to come home. Princess I hope you are safe and we will do our best to win this war so you can come home safely. Royal guard out."
The message ended and Haruna sat there in silence. Then Yuko saw tears starting to fall from Haruna's eyes. Yuko reached out and hugged her doing her best to calm her.
"There there Nyannyan don't cry."
"I miss mama and papa!"
"There there..."
"Hey I hear crying what's going on?"
Mariko opened the door and saw half naked Yuko and fully naked Haruna on the floor crying. She was going to say something but then Yuko shot her a "don't bother us look". Mariko just bowed and quietly shut the door.
"Don't worry Nyannyan I'm sure everything will be alright."
"But they said they were losing!"
"Don't listen to them. Things could change."
"You're right!"
"Yeah so let's hope for the best and for now get dressed because I'm cold."
"Ok!"
Haruna was back to normal and Yuko was happy. But she wondered if things were going to be alright back on Haruna's home planet.
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Well there you go! Haruna and Yuko had some sexy time and Haruna got a message from home. We don't know if they will win or lose but that's something to worry about later on. For now please tell me what you think and check out my OS collection. I just recently updated and it's an Atsumina!
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Awww smesy time time!! hell yeah!! but aww poor haruna.. I like the kisses :D so rough haruna.. :XD take advanges over our poor yuko jajajajja just kidding
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Oh it's rare to see Kojiharu initiating things and Sae being weak ^^
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I just love how Nyan Nyan teases Yuuchan , i want MOOOOOOREEEEEE!!! :wub: :wub: :wub:
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Haruna is back to her mature self?? :?
I guess Yuko will have a bad time to play again with her nyaan nyaan~ :huhuh
Perv Yuko showed up to tease nyaan nyaan XD XD
and the bathroom scenes ... :drool: :drool:
Mariko suddenly becomes so obedient to Yuko when she gives her a glare.. :lol: :lol:
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Wooow
the last chapters were really hot :on bleed:
haha Yuki, Jurina and Haruna are a pervert haha :wahaha:
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@Haruko: Haruna's kisses are rough but the best things ever! :inlove:
@kahem: Yeah a weak Sae is a surprise and Haruna being the agressive one is something I've been wanting to try for a while now. It looks like everyone likes it. :)
@haruhi16: Yes yes there will be more Kojiyuu scenes. But maybe this time I'll put Yuko on top. :wub:
@ichikawa: Haruna is now mature but she can still be cute and goofy when she wants. Yeah I guess Mariko didn't wan to know what happened so she just listened to Yuko for once. :lol:
@Pwety: Yes they are all little pervs! Maybe they should have a pervert meeting. :twisted:
I think it's time for Yuko to learn a little more about Haruna and Mariko's culture. I have a weird idea in my head and I want to share it with you. I hope you all enjoy it!
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Chapter 17
"Haruna Haruna do you know what today is!" Mariko said.
"August 20th. Why?"
"You should know why!"
"No I don't."
"Think about it."
Haruna paused to think about what Mariko was talking about. Then she finally got it.
"Ah it's Nyanko Day today!"
"That's right!"
"What's Nyanko day?" Yuko asked.
"Nyanko day is a say people on the Nekomimi Kingdom celebrate. We have a giant party and we indulged ourselves with the special pawte grass." Haruna said.
"Pawte grass?"
"Yeah it makes us feel really good and silly. But humans don't have any here so we can't celebrate."
"Well I think we have something similar to it."
"What?'
"Catnip."
"Catnip?"
"Yeah here."
Yuko walked over to the closet and pulled out a small bag. She handed it over Haruna but then Mariko took it.
"Let me test it. I want to make sure it's safe."
"Then let me test it mistress."
Miichan took the bag and opened it. She sniffed the insides and when she did that, Miichan's ears and tail came out. Her knees became wobbly and her pupils became wide.
"How is it?"
"The best thing ever!"
"Let me see that."
Mariko took the bag and sniffed it. She got the same reaction as Miichan and this time she started dumped the bag onto the ground and started rolling in it.
"Yuko... you gotta get more of this stuff. This is... amazing!"
"Ok I'll run out to the pet store. You two don't get too relaxed."
"Ok!"
Yuko ran out to the pet store and got as many things of catnip as she could. Then when she got back, she saw Mariko and Miichan both rolling on the ground.
"Finally!"
Haruna took a bag of the catnip. She sniffed soon and soon enough her ears and tail came out.
"Oh my god you're right Mariko! This is fricken awesome!"
"I know right I feel like the room is spinning around me." Mariko said.
"I feel like a clam! Open and close."
Miichan was immatating a clam movements and Haruna was rolling on the ground in circles.
"Oh god what have I done?"
Yuko thought she just gave a ton of weed to a addict. Only this time there were three of them. Not sure what to do, Yuko decided to sit down and watch the three zone out. Mariko was trying to stand up but kept falling over, Miichan was pretending to be a worm, and Haruna was reaching for the ceiling trying to grab the fan. Watching them was pretty funny and Yuko wished she had a camera. But then there was a knock at the door so Yuko got up to go answer it.
"Mayuyuy?"
"Hey Yuko!"
"What are you doing here?"
"You said you were going to help me study with my homework. Yukirin is sick and doesn't want me bothering her so you told me you could help me."
"Oh yeah that's right. Well come on in."
Yuko led Mayuyu into the kitchen away from the three cats that were trippin their brains out right now.
"Do you want anything to drink?"
"Juice is fine."
Yuko got her a glass and handed it to her. Then they started their homework. About a half hour in, there was a shufflling coming from the other room.
"What was that?"
"It's probably just Haruna and Mariko."
"Oh ok."
They continued to do their homework but then Mariko came stumbling in.
"Honey I'm hungry. Go make me dinner."
Mariko tried walking over to Yuko but ended up falling again.
"What's wrong with Mariko and why does she have cat ears?"
"Oh uhh she's cosplaying."
"Really!"
Mayuyu walked over and grabbed Mariko's ears.
"Wow they feel so real."
She grabbed Mariko's tail and tugged it a little.
"And the tail is in there pretty good."
"Hey don't touch my tail."
"Sorry."
Mariko tried to get up again but ended up falling on top of Mayuyu.
"Mariko are you ok?"
"Uh she just got back from the dentist and they used loopy gas on her so she's a little out of it." Yuko said.
"Oh it see. I've felt that before."
"You look yummy."
Mariko leaned in and started biting Mayuyu's ear.
"Hey stop it that feels weird!"
"Mariko get off."
Yuko grabbed Mariko and threw her off.
"I'll get you something to eat in a minute." Yuko said.
"Mari-chan!"
Just then Haruna staggered in and fell onto Mariko.
"What's wrong with Haruna?" Mayuyu said.
"Same thing as Mariko."
"Mistress I brought you tea!"
Miichan walked in carrying a fake house plant.
"Who's this?"
"Oh she's a friend of Mariko's. She's really into maid cosplay."
"Her outfit looks amazing."
"Mayuyu I think you should go now."
"Alright I'll see you later!"
Mayuyu left and now Yuko has to deal with three hungry cats.
"Honey I'm hungry!"
"Ok I'll fix you something to eat. What do you want?"
"Ramen noodles with fish in it."
"I want some too!" Haruna said.
"Alright go sit at the table and I'll bring it in."
The three crawled over to the table and a couple minutes later Yuko came in with the food.
"Alright here you go you guys."
"Yay food!"
Haruna jumped out of nowhere scaring Yuko causing her to spill the noodles all over herself.
"Oh jeez look at the mess you made. Now I got noodles in my hair."
Yuko was about to get up when Haurna held her down.
"Yuu-chan you smell delicious."
Haruna leaned in and started licking Yuko's face.
"Hey stop it! That tickles!"
"Haruna don't hog all the food I'm hungry too!"
Miichan held Yuko down and started licking her hands sucking on every finger.
"Hey Mariko wants some too!"
Mariko held Yuko's legs down and started licking them. Now Yuko was being held down and attacked by several cats. Haruna was sitting on top of Yuko licking her face, Miichan had her arms and Mariko had her legs. Yuko wasn't sure if she should stop them or not but even if she wanted to she couldn't. But then Yuko felt Haruna make her way down to to her neck.
"Ahh Nyannyan stop that really tickles!"
"I want more!"
Haruna grabbed Yuko's shirt and tore it open. Now she was starting to lick her collar bone making her way to her bra.
"Nyannyan stop it!"
"No I'm still hungry."
Haruna's tounge trailed down Yuko's body getting closer and closer. But then to make things worse, Mariko was starting to pull Yuko's skirt down.
"Ah Mariko don't!"
Mariko started licking Yuko's legs moving up to her thighs and closer to her underwear.
"No no no!"
Yuko started to squirm but they all had her held down pretty good. Yuko had to think of something otherwise she'd be done for. Then she got an idea. Yuko started to make chicken noises hoping it would confuse them.
"Hey Haurna do you hear a chicken?" Mariko said..
"Yeah I do." Haruna said.
"Let's go check it out."
Haruna, Mariko and Miichan all left leaving Yuko behind. Yuko quickly cleaned herself and got into some different clothes. Then she walked inot the other room and found all three of them passed out on the ground.
"Guess they ran out."
Yuko dragged Mariko into her room and Miichan into hers. Then she carried Haruna over to the couch and set her down. Then Yuko walked over and lyed down next to her. She watched the sleeping Haruna and started gently stroke her hair. Haruna then suddenly jumped up and grabbed Yuko. She wrapped around her and then brought her back down.
"I love you giant shrimp."
"Sweet dreams Nyannyan sweet dreams. Oh and Happy Nyanko Day."
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Well I think we should declare this a national holiday! No school! We all just go out and get cats high off cat nip! No I'm kidding but now we know what happens when Haruna get catnip. Look forward to the next chapter and please tell me what you think!
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No comments today? Darn. All well I won't let that stop me! But it does get lonely when I don't know what people think about my story. But I won't let that stop me! Miyumi fighting! I hope you enjoy the chapter!
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Chapter 18
Some where on planet Nekomimi....
"Your highness, please get inside the castle we must protect you!"
"But my husband is still out there I must fight with him!"
"No it's too dangerous! Please retreat to the castle while you still can!"
"I don't think so!"
The queen pressed a button on her chest causing a metal suit to appear on her.
"Fighting Queen Battle mode on!"
(Back to Earth...)
"Hey Nyannyan!"
"Are you listening to me?"
"Oh sorry I was spacing out. What is it Yuko?"
"I was saying, we need to get going. We're going to be late."
"Oh right. Sorry."
Yuko was worried about Haruna. She seemed very distant from her recently and is starting to worry. Therefore, she decided she was going to take her out to a special place. She was going to take her to the hill she went stargazing at. To the place where she first met Haruna.
"Come on we're almost there."
"Where are we going Yuko?"
"A place I think you'll really like."
It was day time now but even in the day the hill was still beautiful. You felt like you could just touch the clouds and taste the wind. It was a bright sunny day and it wasn't too hot either. Yuko had the whole day planned out where they would play games and have a nice little picnic. And to make things even more fun she invited Yukirin and Mayuyu. When they go up to the hill Mayuyu and Yukirin were already waiting for them.
"What took you guys so long?" Mayuyu said.
"Sorry Nyannyan was spacing out so we were running a little late. Anyways let's get started. Did you bring the ribbons?" Yuko asked.
"Good then let's get started. Here Haruna tie this around your head."
"Why?"
"It's part of the game."
Yukirin and Mayuyu had blue ribbons tied on the heads while Yuko and Haruna had red ones.
"Ok the objective of the game is to try to capture the other person's ribbon. First one to get them wins."
"Uh don't we need more people to play this game?"
"No it's fine. Anyways start!"
Yuko started going after Mayuyu but Yukirin got in front. She was about to take Yuko's ribbon but she managed to escape and started running. Mayuyu tried to grab Haruna's ribbon but Haruna jumped out of the way. Then she tried to grab Mayuyu's but Mayuyu started to run as well.
"Catch me if you can!" Mayuyu said in a taunting voice.
This got Haruna into the game because she hated being teased. Even when she was little Mariko would always tease her by calling her slow. But now Haruna was going to prove that she wasn't slow. Haruna started running after Mayuyu down the hill with Yuko and Yukirin just up ahead of them.
"Too slow Haruna too slow!"
Now Haruna was mad and was really going for it. She almost had Mayuyu when she suddenly fell and started rolling down the hill. Mayuyu got out of the way but Yuko and Yukirin had no idea. Haruna crashed into Yukirin and the two started rolling down together while Yuko jumped out of the way. When the two finally made it to the bottom, Haruna thought she was going to hurl.
"Nyannyan what are you doing?" Yuko said.
"I fell."
"You're really clumsy for a cat person."
"You shut up!"
"Yukirin that was a very elegant way to fall on you a$$" Mayuyu said.
"You shut up Mayuyu."
"Hey let's get them." Haruna said.
"Let's."
"Crap Mayuyu run!"
Yuko and Mayuyu started running up the hill as fast as they could. But the hill was very steep so they were having trouble. Meanwhile Yukirin and Haruna were having no trouble because they were both fueled by anger towards their partners. Yuko and Mayuyu had made it up the hill and were now scarmbling to climb up the tree. Yuko had no problem because she was good at it but Mayuyu wasn't as lucky.
"Yukirin no!"
"You're going to pay for what you said. You know what time it is?"
"No not that!"
"That's right! Tickle time!"
Yukirin got on top of Mayuyu and started to tickle Mayuyu everywhere making the girl laugh like crazy.
"Yuko hahahahaha save haha yourself hahahahahaha!"
"I'm going to make you laugh so hard that you'll pee your pants!"
"Hahaha no hahahaha!"
"Yuko you're next!"
Haurna started to climb the tree very quicly starting to get closer and closer. Yuko tried to climb as high as she could. But eventually she ran out of room and reached the top. Haruna was right behind her and was closing in. Yuko thought about jumping but she was so high up that she was afraid she would hurt herself.
"Yuko!"
Haruna reached out and grabbed Yuko to pull herself up.
"Nyannyan don't!"
"Too bad! This is your punishment!"
Haruna grabbed Yuko by the shirt and pulled her in for a kiss. They held for a couple minutes savoring every second. But then there was a loud snap and crack. Soon after Yuko and Haruna found themselves falling. Yuko had to think fast so she grabbed Haruna and wrapped tightly around her. Then she turned her body so that Yuko's back would hit the ground. But not before hitting several branches that were in the way. Those branches slowed them down so that when Yuko hit the ground, it didn't hurt as much. But it did knock her out.
(Inside Yuko's head...)
BAM BAM BANG BOOM!
"What the? What's going on?"
BANG BOOM KABOOM!
"What's all the noise?"
Yuko opened her eyes and saw a large explosion only a couple feet away from her.
"Ahhh!"
Yuko ducted as a body flew over her head. Missles shot past her and lasers were being fired. Yuko looked out and saw tanks and metal suits that looked like gundams. Another explosion went off not too far from Yuko. She looked over and saw someone in a metal battle suit thing firing rockets. Next to the metal suit person was a man with a huge sword cutting down every enemy in sight.
"Keep firing! They're starting to pull back!" the man shouted.
"Honey I don't think our troops can last much longer." the person in the suit said. It sounded like a woman.
"My king, my queen we must retreat, our forces are being outnumbered!"
"Wait those two are the king and queen?"
Yuko saw the cat ears on the man and the woman. That's when she realized those two were the king and king which means, those two were Haruna's parents.
"Am I in a battle right now?"
So much was going through Yuko's mind right now. She had no idea how she got there or what was going on. But what she did know was she was right in the middle of a huge battle.
"Incoming lasers!"
Yuko looked over and saw a ton of weird lizard people with lasers. One fired and almost hit Yuko but shot the guy behind her.
"Soldier don't just stand there fire!" the king shouted.
Yuko saw that she had a gun in her hand. She saw noticed that she wasn't in her own body. She was in the body of one of the soldiers. Yuko had so many questions but now was not the time to ask because she was being attacked by heavy fire. Yuko took her gun and started firing randomly at the lizard people. The gun shot out a laser beam and she took out one of the people.
"Wah so cool!"
Yuko shot again and again taking out every lizard person she saw. But then the gun stopped firing. She must have been out of ammo or something.
"Here!"
Another soldier threw her a strange vile of green liquid. Yuko saw how the one in her gun was empty so she pulled it out and then snapped the new one in. She was surprised how easy it was. Yuko started firing again and kept firing. She even got one from behind that she didn't even see coming. Then she noticed how one of her comrades was about to be ambused from behind.
"Look out!"
Yuko shot the one lizard but then another one came out and shot her in the chest. She fell to the ground and soon after she died.
"Yuko!"
Yuko opened her eyes and saw Haruna staring at her with worried eyes.
"Nyannyan?"
"Thank goodness you're alright."
Haruna hugged Yuko tightly as Mayuyu and Yukirin walked over.
"Hey you're awake!" Mayuyu said.
"Yeah. What happened?"
"You guys fell from the tree and you were knocked out cold." Yukirin said.
"How long was I out?"
"For a couple of hours. We thought about taking you to the hospital but then you woke up."
"Oh well sorry you guys. How about we eat now."
"Great I'm starved!"
Mayuyu set up a blanket while Yukirin got the food out. Haruna was so worried about Yuko that she spoon fed her everything. Not that Yuko didn't mind it but it still felt kind of weird.
"Hey Yukirin why don't you do that to me!"
"Ok fine then say ahh."
"Ahhh~"
Yukirin was about to feed Mayuyu a piece of sushi but then Yukirin put it in her mouth.
"Hey!"
"Feed yourself."
"Mou you're mean."
"Not my problem."
"No but this is."
Mayuyu grabbed Yukirin's boob and squeezed really hard.
"Itai!"
"Feed me."
"Fine."
Yukirin fed Mayuyu this time and Mayuyu smiled in happiness.
"Hey it's starting to get dark. Mayuyu and I are going to leave. Thanks for inviting us." Yukirin said.
"Ahh but I want to stay a little longer." Mayuyu pouted.
"No I'm taking you home and getting revenge for you hurting my chest."
"Oh boy. I'll see you later Yuko!"
Yukirin and Mayuyu left leaving Yuko with Haruna.
"Nyannyan come with me. The stars will be coming out soon."
Yuko walked up to the top of the hill and sat down. The sky had just turned dark and now the moon was coming out.
"Nynannyan look at all the stars!"
"Wow! They're so pretty!"
The two sat in silence staring at the stars. Then Yuko finally asked,
"Hey Nyannyan do you miss home?"
"Yeah I do." Haruna said.
"Do you wish you could be up there with your parents?"
"Yeah but they're fighting a war. I don't want to get in their way."
"When you leave, you won't forget me will you?"
"Of course not. I would never forget you."
"Good. I was afraid you would."
"Yuko I love you. Why would I forget the one I love?"
"I'm just checking. I would never forget you either because I love you too."
Haruna and Yuko gazed at the stars until Haruna had fallen asleep. Yuko gently stroked Haruna's cheek and decided not to tell Haruna what she saw back on her planet.
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Well now we know what's going on up there! Will Yuko tell Haruna what she saw or keep it a secret? Look forward to the next chapter and find out! Please tell me what you think!
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So cute~
Shy Yuko is so cute~
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Mayuki in this fic are so different from other fics but I like them they are really funny :on lol:
Yuko she has to tell Haruna about what she know I feel like she will regret it when she wont tell her :badluck:
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OMG1 you update so fast!! thanx for that..
The lick`s scene wow.. make me think pervs things jejej
Aww haruna miss her planet... but why yucchan can see that.. its strange maybe because she share a kiss with haruna..?
love the kisses :D
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I like how you updated so quickly! These chapters makes me want to squeal!!! *FANGIRL*
Finally, they already confessed what they really feel with each other! OMG :wub: :wub: :wub:
PLEASE UPDATE MORE!!! :twothumbs
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That was beyond fast! Two chappies in one day! Great! Mariko, Miichan, and Kojima were like some drug addicts! Especially when miichan was pretending to be a clam lol it was great :thumbup
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Mayuyu grabbed Yukirin's boob and squeezed really hard.
I love your aggressiveness, Mayuyu :twisted: Yukirin and Mayuyu never fail to bring a smile to my face. Their interactions are so crazily funny!
"No I'm taking you home and getting revenge for you hurting my chest."
"Oh boy. I'll see you later Yuko!"
Somehow, instead of sounding worried, Mayuyu actually seems to be looking forward to her punishment. Go Yukirin! :rofl:
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@kahem: Indeed shy Yuko is adorable. She's so cute that I just want to hug her. :oops:
@mo-chan: Ah yes the Mayuki couple is so interesting in every story. And don't worry Haruna will learn about it very soon. :P
@Haruko: Yeah the licking scene was a little pervy. Yeah I do update very fast so be on the look out! :)
@haruhi16: Yeah I update fast so I'm glad you like it. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story! :lol:
I think it's time for Haruna to run into a little trouble from outer space! I hope you enjoy the chapter!
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Chapter 19
Yuko was with Haruna watching TV when there was knock on the door. Yuko walked over and opened the door and saw Rena and Jurina and Rena standing on the front.
"Hey you guys come on in." Yuko said.
The two came in and sat down on the couch. Miichan walked over with cups of tea.
"Thank you." Rena said.
"Who are you?" Jurina asked.
"Oh my name is Minegishi Minami. I am the maid here." Miichan said.
"Wow you hired your own maid!"
"Yep."
"Lucky. Usually Rena is the one doing all the cleaning."
"Cleaning the messes you make."
"Sorry."
"So anyways let's get down to business shall we?" Yuko said.
"Yes lets."
Rena pulled out a bag and Yuko also pulled out another bag.
"So is everything in there?" Rena asked.
"Yep. Is everything in there?" Yuko asked.
"Yes."
"I'd like to see it."
"Very well."
Rena opened the bag and revealed a bunch of playboy magazines, bras and panties. Yuko opened her bag and revealed a bunch of melonpan, currry bread, and mangas.
"On three we make the switch. One..two..three."
The two switched bags and got what they wanted.
"Thank you for doing business with me."
"As to you. Jurina we can leave now."
"No you don't!"
Haruna walked over and grabbed the bag from Yuko. Then Jurina took the bag from Rena and threw it to Miichan.
"Miichan throw those out!" Haurna said.
"Right away."
Miichan left and Rena and Yuko tried to go after her.
"Hey what's the meaning of this!" Rena said.
"Sit down and we'll explain."
Yuko and Rena were thrown on the couch.
"We're hosting an intervention for you two." Jurina said.
"A what?"
"An intervention. I'm getting sick and tired of you going around stealing my panties Yuko." Haruna said.
"Yeah and Rena it's not healthy for you to eat just curry bread and melonpan." Jurina said.
"So we decided to have an intervention for you to."
"No way!" Yuko said.
"This is outrageous." Rena said.
"No it's help. Now come with me."
Haruna grabbed Yuko and dragged Yuko to the other room. Then Rena was dragged to the kitchen. Haruna tied Yuko to a chair and then began the intervention. Haruna pulled out a playboy magazine and showed the front cover to Yuko. When Yuko saw it, she felt completely fine. She thought the girl didn't look sexy enough. Haruna started turning into the magazine and showed more girls. However Yuko still didn't seem affected.
"Nyannyan this is last weeks issue. I've already read it."
"You sure about that?"
Haruna flipped the page and revealed a whole new section. And it was full of Yuko's favorite girls. Not the half naked ones but the cutely dressed ones. Yuko had not seen that one before so she really wanted to look at it.
"Let me see it!"
Yuko tried to rip off her restraints but they held her good. Yuko was already wanting the magazine but then to make things worse, Haruna pulled out a bra and panties. But these weren't just anyone's panties. Those were Mariko's panties and Mariko own some extremely sexy underwear.
"Oh god!"
Yuko really wanted them. Mariko would never let her go near her dressers but Yuko's seen her undress and she's seen her sexy underwear.
"Give me them!"
Yuko was about ready to rip her arms off and go after the bras.
"No bad Yuko!"
Haruna took out a whip and striked Yuko's legs.
"Itai!"
"Yuko look."
Haruna showed Yuko the panties again making her want them again. But when Yuko tried to struggle again, Haruna whipped her.
"Yuko you must resist."
"But it's hard!"
After five more whips, Yuko finally learned to resist the underwear.
"Now it's time for the final challenge."
Haruna started to undress down to her underwear and and bra. She was wearing a purple bra with black lace and matching panties. Yuko thought she was going to lose it when she saw Haruna. She was almost free of her restraints. But then Haruna whipped her agian and again until she finally lost the urge to perv on Haruna.
"Let me help you."
Haruna helped her stand up because her knees were so wobbly from all the whipping.
"Yuko are you cured?"
"Yes. I think I'm ok."
"Good. Now how about we go check on Rena and Jurina."
Haruna put her clothes back on and then walked into the kitchen. There, Rena was tired to a chair and there was food splattered all over the kitchen.
"Rena eat your meat!"
"NO!"
"I said eat your meat!"
Jurina tried to shove some meat into Rena's mouth but Rena moved her head away.
"Rena you need to eat meat!"
"No!"
"Jurina maybe you should give up. I don't think Rena will eat meat." Yuko said.
"Not if I don't make her!"
Jurina leaned in and kissed Rena on the lips. When she pulled back, Rena was shocked which gave Jurina time to make Rena eat the meat. She shoved it in her mouth and then covered it to make sure she didn't spit it out. Then she eventually swallowed it and Jurina removed her hand. Rena sat there completely still.
"Rena..."
Jurina took off the restraints and Rena didn't do anything. Then suddenly she bent over and threw up.
"Oh god!"
"Rena!"
Jurina grabbed Rena and carried her out of the house.
"I'm sorry for causing you trouble and sorry for the mess!"
Yuko looked at the mess Rena had made and asked Miichan to clean it up. Miichan had no choice but to clean it up. Then she walked into the other room with Haruna.
"Today was so tiring!" Yuko said.
"Sorry Yuko. It was for your own good." Haruna said.
"Couldn't you have done something else?"
"Nope."
"Man you're so-"
BAM!
"What the heck?"
Yuko looked outside and saw a space shuttle had crashed into the yard. Yuko and Haruna ran outside to see what it was. Just then two lizard people came out and started running to Haruna. Haruna was about to attack them but then they shot something at Haruna causing her to pass out. They grabbed her and then got back in their space ship and took off.
"Nyannyan!"
One of the lizard people dropped a note to Yuko and took off.
"Nyannyan!"
"What happened?"
Mariko and Miichan came running out.
"Nyannyan got taken away by lizard people! They left this note."
Mariko opeend it and read it out loud.
"You have been invited to the wedding of Princess Kojima Haruna of the Nekomimi Kingdom and Prince Salazar of the Lizado Kingdom as an offering of peace."
"No way."
"Nyannyan is getting married!"
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Oh no! What's going to happen to Haruna? What will Yuko do? Find out in the next chapter! Please tell me what you think! Oh and check out my OS because I updated a BlackGeki fic!
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Married? That just made this story 7 times more difficult oh geez! Yuko's intervention was hilarious! Can't wait for next update!
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YEY!! just one chapter updated!! I won! :D..
OMG!! Kojipa its getting married.. come yuuboy rescue her right now..
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aah haruna is kidnapped :( i can't accept this wedding...hope yuko will come to save haruna soon :(
btw thanks for the update :wub:
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Wahh, Haruna got captured by the lizard people?! Yuko (and Mariko and Miichan) to the rescue!
Can't wait for the next chapter :D
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HAhaha LoL but it's true I'm working almost 24/7 and then having some fun here and there so every time I'm seeing your update
I always like "what the?" so many!
Oh no NyanNyan is getting married? To a lizard!
:dizzy:
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
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what !? :stoned:
Haruna is going to get married :shock:
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@sasumiofjp: Yep Haruna is going to get married. I wonder what will happen. Oh and yeah Yuko's intervention was funny. :)
@Haruko: What do you mean you won? Oh and yes Yuko will come to the rescue don't worry. :P
@kojiyuu109: Don't worry Yuko will stop the wedding! As if she'd give over her Nyannyan to a lizard. :smhid
@Sasshii: Yuko is going to be fighting a war so she's going be bringing the whole gang with her! :w00t:
@Megumi: Ahh I'm sorry there are so many to read. Maybe I should slow down? I don't know but don't worry, Yuko will come and save Haruna along with the rest of the gang. :D
@mo-chan: No Haruna will not get married! Not on my watch! 8)2
Hooray so many comments. I feel loved again. So I hope you enjoy the first part! Yuko is going to set off to fight the lizard people but she is going to need some help.
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Chapter 20 part 1
"Nyannyan is getting married?" Yuko said.
"Yes apparently our parents offered her as a peace offering to the lizard people." Mariko said.
"Well I am not going down like that. Come on we're going up there and getting her back!"
"I don't think so."
"Why?"
"Because there are going to be a ton of lizard people up there. You'll get killed."
"Then I'll get friends to help. Do you guys have a space ship."
"I do it's parked in the garage."
"How many can it hold?"
"Including me it can hold four."
"I have one too!" Miichan said.
"How many can it hold?"
"About eight people."
"Perfect! Then you guys go get the ships ready and I'll go gather my reinforcements."
Yuko left and started to run to Mayuyu and Yukirin's house. She rang the doorbell and Mayuyu answered it.
"Oh hey Yuko what's up?"
"You wanna fight alien lizard people with me from outer space?"
"Heck yeah let's go!"
"Mayuyu wait for me!"
Yuko, Mayuyu, and Yukirin all ran to Acchan and Takamina's place. Yuko rang the doorbell and Acchan answered.
"What's up?"
"Come with me we're going to a wedding."
"Oh I love weddings! Takamina let's go!"
"I'm coming!"
They all ran to Rena and Jurina's place and got them to. Then they went to Sae and Sayaka's and convinced them to come as well. Yuko brought everyone back to her house and out to the backyard where they had their ships out.
"Woah!" Yukirin said.
"I thought we were playing a video game." Mayuyu said.
"Nope we're going up into space and fighting lizard people." Yuko said.
"Wait explain what the meaning of all this is?" Sayaka said.
"Here look at this. Yuko look away."
Mariko took out a small device and created a bright flash in front of everyone's faces. Everyone was dazed for a couple seconds but then they came back.
"Oh I get it!" Acchan said.
"So Haruna, Mariko and Miichan are all alien cat people." Takamina said.
"There planet was fighting a war until Haruna was set up to a forced marriage." Jurina said.
"And now we're going to get her." Rena said.
"Uh Mariko what did you do to all of them?"
"I shot them with an info wave so we wouldn't have to explain everything to them. So now they know everything that's going on." Mariko said.
"Ok so now that that's over with how are we going to get them ready for battle? They have no idea how to fight a war." Yuko said.
"I got this."
Miichan pulled out small black dot things. She placed one on the back of everyone's neck. Then she grabbed some plates and threw them at everyone. Without even knowing it, Mayuyu moved out of the way dodging the plates. Yukirin also dodged them and even managed to grab one and throw it back to Miichan.
"Woah what happened to us?"
"I put a chip on you that gives you teh ability of the soldiers on our planet. But it appears to be malfunctioning."
"What do you mean?"
Just then a pair of cat ears popped up from Mayuyu's head along with a tail. Soon everyone else accept Yuko grew ears and a tail.
"Aww you look so cute Acchan!"
"You too Takamina!"
"Jurina you look very cute."
"As to you Rena."
"Yay I got cat ears!" Mayuyu said.
"So do I!" Yukirin said.
"Sae you look very cute." Sayaka said.
"So do you." Sae said.
"Hey how come I don't get cute cat ears like everyone else?" Yuko said.
"Because I have something else for you."
"What?"
"Stick out our tounge."
Yuko stuck out her tounge and Mariko placed something on top of it. Soon after emerald green scales covered Yuko's body and her nails became sharp. Her eyes changed and a large spikey tail came out. Even her teeth became super sharp and her tounge changed shape too. When everyone saw her, they all gasped.
"Woah Yuko you look so different." Mayuyu said.
"We need one person to sneak in as one of the lizard people." Mariko said.
"Why can't it be someone like Sayaka? She's perfect for this kind of thing!"
"Hey!"
"Don't worry once we get inside I'll give you the same chip as the others."
"You better."
"But hey look at this."
Mariko handed Yuko a brick.
"Take a bite out of it."
Yuko bit down on the brick and the whole thing cumbled.
"Cool!"
"Oh and check this out. Yuko spit on the ground over there."
Yuko spat and a hole started to burn.
"Acid spit?"
"Yep. Oh and one more thing."
Mariko took a knife and stabbed Yuko. Only the knife never penetrated. It just bent and didn't even leave a scratch.
"This is so cool! Maybe I'll start to like this form after all."
"Yeah so let's get in and get ready to go. Yuko you Sayaka and Sae are riding with me. Mayuyu, Yukirin, Acchan, Takamina, Rena and Jurina are all riding with Miichan."
"Alright then let's go!"
Everyone loaded into the ships and took off. The blast off felt nothing like they described it in the scifi books. Bunch of liars. Once they made out of the Earth's atmosphere, they were free to float around. And so, they started there long voyage to Haruna's planet.
"How long will it take for us to get there?" Yuko asked.
"About two hours." Mariko said.
"Man! Can't we go faster?"
"We can but we'll leave Miichan and the others behind."
"Darn."
"Don't worry it looks like we have company anyways."
Up ahead a bunch of ships could be seen heading straight at them.
"Hold on tight!"
Mariko made a hard right turn almost sending Yuko out of her chair. Miichan followed and they did their best to avoid the ships. But they saw them and started firing at them.
"I swear if they damage I'm gonna blow their fricken heads off!"
Mariko pushed a button and everyone in Miichan's ship popped up on the screen.
"Oi take care of those guys!"
"I'm on it."
Yuko watched Miichan's ship fly over right in front of the huge flock of ships. They were about to fire but then Miichan's ship pulled out this huge cannon thing. She fired it and a huge laser blast came out taking out all the ships.
"Good job!"
"There's more coming and the cannon needs time to recharge!"
"I'm on it."
Mariko flew in front of Miichan and pressed a button. A bunch of missiles fired and took out a good chunk of them but there were still more coming.
"Yuko press that yellow button next to you!"
"This one?"
Yuko pressed it and a grappling hook shot out connecting Mariko's ship with Miichan's.
"Hang on to your underwear!"
Mariko hit the lightspeed button and Yuko's head went flying back. Everything in front of her became distorted and weird looking. Then after about five minutes they made it. Up ahead of them was planet Nekomimi.
"We're here. Are you ready?"
"Totally."
Yuko was ready to kick some alien butt and save her Nyannyan no matter what happens.
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They've made it to the planet. Now it's time to get ready for the huge battle! I hope you all liked the chapter and please tell me what you think!
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I promise to myself that I dont allow that you update two o more chapter in line... It was challenge for my own.. JAjaj i always says that Im so into this fanfic that always checkup all updated everyday but you are so fast!! when i look you staory always have two or more chapter that i didn´t reading yet.. :D...
about the fic.. OMG! come yuuchan fight for you soon to be wife..
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"Come with me we're going to a wedding."
"Oh I love weddings! Takamina let's go!"
I'm sorry Acchan but that sounds super bimbotic :rofl: :rofl: Gotta love this baka couple!
Just then a pair of cat ears popped up from Mayuyu's head along with a tail.
That's moe-ness to the max! Yukirin, where's your nosebleed? :drool:
Your Chapter 20s are always full of action. I'm looking forward to the war!
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Haruna is kidnapped by lizard alien?!! :OMG:
and woaaahhhh~! They will have fights in outer space!! :onionwhip:
Another action chapter is coming soon~ can't wait for it~ :ding:
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@Haruko: Oh I see! So you won then? Ok! Good job! Oh and yes Yuko is coming to the rescue. :)
@seigus:The bakacouple is the best! I'm sure Yukirin was about to die at the sight of Mayuyu. Yeah my 20's is always full of action. I hope you like it. :lol:
@ichikawa: I hope you like this action filled chapter! Yuko is going to kick some lizard people's a$$es! Go Yuko Go! :cathappy:
Part 2 folks! I hope you all enjoy it. There's a ton of action it so get your 3D glasses out. Just kidding there is no 3D. But it would be nice if there was.
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Chapter 20 part 2
Sneaking into the wedding was very easy. All the others had to do was walk in. But since Yuko was a lizard person, she had to act as a guard. When there was no one around, Yuko snuck off to find the area where they hid all the weapons. Mariko said there was a hidden piece of the hall where weapons were hidden.
"Where are they?"
Yuko kept searching but still didn't have luck. As she was searching, she walked by a window and saw something. She looked in and saw Haruna walking down the ilse in a white dress. Yuko thought she looked so beautiful in it. The prince on the other hand looked like a bag of mashed potatoes. Yuko had to find those weapons fast.
"Found it!"
Yuko found the weapons stash and got all the weapons she could carry. Then she climed into the ventalation shaft and crawled to where she was right above the bride and groom. She had made it just in time to.
"Do you prince (forgot his name) take princess Haruna as your wife?"
"I do."
"And do you princess Haruna take prince (forgot his name) to be your husband?"
"I do."
"Then I now pronounce you husband and wife. You may kiss the bride!"
The two were about to kiss but then Yuko dropped a smoke bomb on them and it went off. Everyone panicked and ran out and guards surrounded the prince. Meanwhile, Yuko jumped down and grabbed Haruna.
"Nyannyan run!"
"Yuko?"
"After them!"
Yuko and Haruna ran out of the castle outside. There Mariko and the others were waiting for her.
"Did you get the stuff?"
"Yep here."
Yuko dropped all the weapons and Haruna started to distribute them.
"Alright everyone lock and load!"
A ton of guards came out and were all aiming at them. Mariko was the first to fire and took out three of them. Then they all started firing and everyone took cover.
"Yuko what are you guys doing here?" Haruna asked.
"Here to rescue you!" Yuko said.
"Are you nuts? This was supposed to end the war for my people."
"Screw them! You're more important. I came here to save you and god damnit that's what I'm going to do!"
Yuko started shooting madly at all guards taking out a bunch of them.
"Quick run outside to the court yard!"
Everyone ran to the courtyard and then found themselves trapped.
"How dare you take away my bride!" the prince shouted.
"Hey prince!"
Yuko stuck up her middle finger at the prince. Oh course he didn't know what it meant but he figured out it was an insult.
"Guard kill them!"
Hundreds of them came out and started shooting. But some of Haruna's people came out and started to fight as well so the numbers were pretty evenly well matched.
"Hey Yuko watch this!"
Yuko looked over and saw Acchan riding one of the lizard people like a horse and Takamina steering it with it's tail. Acchan was shooting them like crazy and Takamina was shooting as well.
"Giddyup horsey!"
While Those two were doing that, Yuko saw a huge explosion coming from behind her. She looked over and saw Sae throwing something that looked like a grenade at all the lizards. Meanwhile Sayaka had a regular lazer gun and was shooting.
"Sae I need three flyers!"
"Coming right up!"
Sae threw three grenades into the air. Then right before they hit the ground, Sayaka shot them midair taking them all out.
"Rena look out!"
Yuko saw Jurina cut down one of the lizard people. Rena on the other hand appeared to have lost it. She was chopping off heads like she was cutting down a tree.
"Rena you need to calm down!"
"Hahahahahaha ne okotteru!"
Rena clicked a button and her sword became a huge axe. She swing the thing and took out a bunch of the lizard and part of the building. A piece was about to hit Jurina put she pressed a button on her weapon and they started vibrating really fast. With incredible speen Jurina chopped the piece of rubble into tiny bits.
"Maid I need more ammo!"
"Coming mistress!"
Miichan threw a clip to Mariko who loaded it midair and started shooting againg.
"Switch!"
Mariko and Miichan jumped while still firing and switched positions. Then Miichan pulled out a huge cannon and fired it making a huge hole in the line of froces. It looked like they were going to win but then enemy ships started to arrive and started firing at everyone. However, something suddenly shot down the ship.
"Yuko look what I got!!"
Yuko looked over and saw Mayuyu and Yukirin flying one of the enemy ships.
"Mayuyu be careful!"
A rocket shot past Yukirin's side almost hitting her.
"Hey watch it a$$holes!"
Yukirin started firing missiles like crazy while Mayuyu started spinning the ship around in circles.
"Woohoo this is so much fun!"
"Yuko look out!"
Yuko turned around and saw the prince about to shoot Yuko. But Yuko dodged and shot back at the prince. However he had some sort of forcefield around him making lazers impossible to pass through. Yuko pulled out a knife and decided to go old school. The prince fired at Yuko but she blocked the blasts with the blades. Then she ran up and stabbed the blade right into the forefield. It broke like glass leaving the him open.
"You're mine!"
Yuko jumped up and was going to come down hard on him. But then he shot her hand causing her to drop the blade. Then she landed right on top of the prince. He was in a daze giving Yuko the perfect chance to finish him. She took another blade and was about to stab him in the neck when he suddenly flipped her over where he was on top of her.
"You know you're pretty cute."
"Claws off!"
Haruna ran over with a huge rock and threw it at the prince. It hit him right in the head knocking him off Yuko.
"Are you ok?"
"Yeah I'm fine."
"You'll pay for that!"
The prince reached into his pocket and pulled out a small communicator.
"Release Jarjar."
"Who's Jarjar?"
There was rumbling in the background followed by the shaking of the earth. Then out of nowhere a huge weird lizard beast came out of nowhere. It was like Godzilla huge and it looked like it was angry.
"Jarjar get them!"
The beast roared and started to attack everyone.
"OH SHIT!"
The beast brought it's huge tail down crushing everyone under it. Luckily no one Yuko knew go hurt.
"How are we supposed to fight that thing!?" Yuko said.
"I got an idea!"
Haruna pulled out a small green pill.
"Eat this!"
"What?"
Haruna popped it into her mouth and then kissed Yuko. Yuko felt ithe pill go into her mouth and swallow it. Then she suddenly started to grow huge. She grew to the same size as Jarjar.
"Now the real battle begins!"
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Omg so much is happening! Why do I feel like I'm watching a Power Rangers episode. Anyways please tell me what you think and look forward to the next chapter. Also check out my OS I updated and it's a Kojiyuu this time. Please comment!
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jajajjajaajajajjajajaaj i though the same when i read about godzilla :D
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aahahhahahhaa Like a Power Ranger
really funny!
bouya(it means nothing) godzilla!
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wow the battle is more interesting :glasses:
gambare Yukoooo!! :onioncheer:
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Goodluck Yuuchan! SAVE YOUR NYAN NYAN!!
UPDATE MORE!!
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@Haruko: Power Ranger Yuko go! :lol:
@Pwety: Let's see how Yuko does shall we? :)
@mo-chan:YUKO FIGHTING! :twothumbs
@haruhi16: Well here's the next update so I hope you enjoy it!
The final battle has begun! I wonder who will win? Well let's find out! Power Ranger Yuko GO!
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Chapter 21
"Bring it on lizard breath!"
"GAAO!"
Jarjar came running straight at Yuko. Yuko dodged and it ended up slamming right into the enemy forces.
"Ha learn how to walk right stupid lizard."
This angered Jarjar so he decided to do something different. He shot an energy blast right at Yuko and she got hit sending her flying back But that didn't stop Yuko as she got up and started charging at Jarjar. She used her fist and punched it right in the snout. BUt she wasn't done there. Yuko grabbed Jarjar and started to pick him up. However Jarjar stopped her midway by slamming his tail into her side. Yuko dropped him and fell to the ground.
"Yuko get up!"
"Huh?"
Yuko looked up and saw Jarjar was about to do a grand slam on her. Yuko rolled out of the way just in time and Jarjar ended up hiting the ground. Yuko got up and got on top of Jarjar. Then she grabbed a nearby stone pillar and was going to stab Jarjar. But then Jarjar spat something into Yuko's eyes blinding her for a breif moment. This gave Jarjar the chance to throw Yuko off him.
"Eww gross." Yuko said as she wiped a slimy substance off her eyes.
Her vision still haden't fully recovered yet but she could tell Jarjar was heading straight at her. Yuko did her best and tried to defend herself from the attacks. However when Jarjar swung his tail, Yuko went flying once more and landed right on top of a building.
"Ah that's gonna hurt in the morning."
Yuko grabbed the mostly crushed building and threw it at Jarjar. It hit and while Jarjar was distracted, Yuko tackled him and brought him down on the ground. They rolled around for a while fighting for dominance but then Yuko managed to grab his tail and pull it hard. Jarjar screamed as Yuko used his tail and an achor and threw him across the courtyard. She was about to go finish him off but then she felt something shoot her. Yuko looked over and saw enemy forces try to shoot her down.
"Don't worry Yuko I got them!"
Mariko and Miichan were in another ship shooting down the others. Then Mariko suddenly jumped out of the ship and landed on Yuko's head. Meanwhile Miichan was shooting the other ships down and then to go pick up the others so they could help.
"So what's the plan?" Yuko asked.
"We're going to distract it and then I'll shoot it with this."
Mariko helpd up a very large syringe with a strange green liquid in it.
"This will weaken it and when that happens, you go in and finish him."
"Sounds like a plan."
"Miichan you ready?!"
"Ready!"
"Then let's go!"
Miichan started to drive ahead and shoot at Jarjar. He wasn't affected by them but thought they were annoying. He was about to knock them down by swinging his tail but then Yuko caught it.
"Hold him still Yuko!"
Mariko jumped off and landed on Jarjar. She injected the stuff and Jarjar howled in pain.
"GAAAAOOO!"
Mariko jumped off and Miichan caught her.
"The rest is up to you!"
"Right!"
Yuko grabbed a another stone pillar and started charging at Jarjar. This time he couldn't stop Yuko as she plunged the pillar deep into Jarjar's heart. The beast cried one more time and then fell to the ground.
"NOOO!"
"Hey you!"
Yuko reached down and picked up the tiny prince.
"I believe it's time you and me settle things."
Yuko slammed him down to the ground and then stomped her foot on him like a bug. When she pulled up there was nothing but blood.
"Yuko there's still remaining forces left!"
"I got them."
Yuko walked over to the tanks and crushed them. The grabbed the ships flying by and threw them into the ground. Yuko looked like a little kid breaking all it's toys.
"BAN BAN GYA GYA!"
"Yuko!"
"Yeah?"
"That's enough you already destroyed all the enemys."
"Oh yeah. So how do I get back to normal size?"
"I got it."
Haruna threw something at Yuko stabbing her in the arm.
"Ow!"
Yuko grew smaller and smaller until she was back to her normal size.
"Nyannyan!"
Yuko ran over and hugged Haruna.
"You did it Yuko!"
"I couldn't have done it without you!"
"Ahem."
Yuko looked over and saw both of Haruna's parents staring at her.
"Oh sorry."
Yuko backed away a little and was blushing madly.
"You humans saved us." the king said.
"Without you we would've been destroyed by the lizard people." the queen said.
"Thank you so much for all of your help."
"It was no problem."
"Now then Haruna, take the humans home and then come right back."
"WHAT?" eneryone said.
"Papa no! I don't want to leave Yuko. I love her!" Haruna said.
"Is that true?"
"Sir, ever since the day I met your daughter I had fallen in love with her. If you separate us you'll be killing me."
"Please father don't take her away from me."
"Well I guess there is one way to determine if she is worthy enough to claim you."
"How?"
"The Nekomimi Trials!"
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Uh oh what now? Yuko now has to fight for Nyannyan's love to prove to her parents that she is worthy? What will happen to her? Let's find out what happens in the next chapter! Please tell me what you think!
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Ehh? I was gonno comment on Cap 20... :rofl:
Eh okey now I need to go back and read the final battle ... brb
3 minutes later...
OMG! The trial?!?!??!
HAhaha Yuko seems have fun destroying everything :rofl:
Thank you for your update!
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eh :grr:
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What was that? Hahaha a trial...Nice papa!
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jejeje a trial sounds good for me :D
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A trial?! Oh God, poor Yuko, I thought saving their home planet from the creepy lizard people was enough of a trail haha. Ahh well, I'm excited to see what these trials are all about.
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@Megumi: Yuko loves to destroy things. At least I think she does. :P
@mo-chan: Uh mo-chan I don't know if you liked it or not because all you said was eh. :(
@kurogumi: The whole monster battle thing was just something I kinda made up. Anyways yeah go papa! :lol:
@Haruko: The father is testing Yuko. Let's see how she does. :)
@Sasshii: Yes the trials. I too wonder what they'll be about considereing the fact I'm still trying to think of them. :lol:
Well here are the Nekomimi Trials! I hope you all enjoy the chapter and look forward to see Yukok fight for Haruna's love!
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Chapter 22
All the people had gathered into this huge staduim like area. In the middle was poor little Yuko waiting for the trials to begin. The king and queen took their places at the top of the stadium and silenced the people.
"Human! These are the Nekomimi trials. In order to prove yourself worthy you must pass them. Are you ready?"
"Bring it!"
"Very well. The first trial is Chacoo run!"
"A what?"
The gates opened and a weird looking chicken thing came out.
"You will have five minutes to capture the Chacoo and take the flag tied on it's waist. Begin!"
The timer started and Yuko started running. But as she got closer to the chacoo, it ran. The thing was really fast and ran right past Yuko. Yuko turned around and tried running after it again but it ran to the other side of the stadium. Yuko ran down to it but once again it ran to the other side. Yuko was going to lose her energy if she didn't think of something quick. That's when she got an idea.
"Catch!"
Yuko had thrown a nearby rock at the chacoo and it missed but it let out a cry that was very similar to something she knew. It sounded exactly like a chicken and Yuko was good at chicken imitations. Yuko started to imitate the chacoo's cry and got it's attention. It started to get closer and closer to Yuko and then when it was close enough, Yuko jumped on it and caught it.
"Hold still!"
The two fought and then right when there was ten seconds left, Yuko got the flag.
"First trial passed!"
The crowd cheered and Yuko slowy got up getting ready for the next task.
"The next trial astroid riding!"
"What?"
A bunch of astroids came out of nowhere and started floating.
"On my signal, these astroids will start moving and you must stay on one for twenty seconds without falling off."
Yuko climbed onto one of the astroids and readied herself. The king gave the signal and the astroids started moving. Yuko's head whiped back from she sheer force of the movement. But the astroids would also collide with each other almost sending Yuko flying forward. It's as if she's in a really dangerous ride of bumper cars. Suddenly, Yuko's grip started to loosen and she lost her grip.
"Crap!"
Yuko flew high into the air and then started to come back down. She had to do something otherwise she would lose and never see Haruna again. Yuko leaned her body a little to the left and landed just right on another astroid. She hung for dear life unitl the timer buzzed and the astroids stopped moving.
"Second trial passed!"
"Way to go Yuko!" Mayuyu shouted.
"The next trial is Slurpol eating!"
"What?"
A guard wheeled out a cart full of these strange looking slime things that looked kind of like snails.
"There are exactly one hundred slurpols on that cart. You will have five minutes to eat them all. Begin!"
The timer started and Yuko grabbed the first one. She didn't know how to eat it so first she tried to chew it. That was a big mistake because she was about two seconds away from throwing up. Then Yuko remembered that sometimes you can swallow things whole if they're slimy enough. The second time Yuko swallowed it and it wasn't as bad. But the feeling of it travling down her body was just gross. However Yuko now knew how to eat them so she started to slurp down as many as she could.
"Two minutes!"
Yuko still had a lot to go so she kicked into overdrive. Yuko started swallowing three to four of a time getting slime everywhere. Then there were ten seconds left and Yuko had five left. With all her might she slurped them all down and even accidently swallowed the shell on one. But she had finished and now she felt like throwing her guts up.
"Third trial passed!"
"Hang in there Yuko!" Takamina said.
"Moving to the next trial, the next trial is lazer tag."
"Is that all? That sounds easy."
"Oh really?"
The king had one of the guard fire one of the lasers and Yuko saw how it blasted a whole in the wall. The laser tag Yuko was thinking of was the harmless kind back on earth. However this planet used real lazers.
"You will have five minutes to take out ten of my best shooters. If you get hit you lose."
"Do I at least get a lazer?"
"Of course. Here."
The king threw her a tiny little lazer gun. The ones the guards had were huge powerful ones. Yuko thought it was a little unfair.
"Begin!"
Yuko started running for her life as the guards started shooting at her. Yuko took cover behind a rock and waiting for a chance. Then she sat up and fired three times taking out two guards. But there were still eight left. Yuko started running again for better cover but was almost shot from out of nowhere. Yuko looked over and saw they had their own little sniper.
"Are you kidding me!"
Yuko found cover and started shooting again. This time she took out three but there were still five others left one being the sniper. Yuko was about to aim for the sniper when there was a huge laser blast that took out half the rock Yuko was hiding behind. Yuko looked over and saw a big guy with a really large cannon thing.
"For the love of god!"
Yuko started running as the big guy fired another blast. Yuko ducked and thank god she is small because the blast flew right over her head. Then she turned around and shot two rounds. She took out the two guys next to the big guy but the big guy was still there and Yuko tired to fire again her gun wouldn't work.
"Work damnit!"
Yuko slammed it against a rock and the things started to light up and make loud noises. Then all of the sudden it started firing like a machine gun and Yuko almost lost control of it. But she held tight and shot a bunch of rounds at both the cannon guy and the sniper guy. She took them both out but there was still one more. Yuko looked everywhere but still couldn't find him.
"Yuko behind you!"
Yuko spun around and saw the guy aiming right at her. Yuko moved out of the way just in time. Then she fired one last round and took out the last guy.
"Fourth trial passed! Now it is time for the last trial!"
"And what would that be?"
"Seducing one of our people."
"WHAT?"
A random cat girl came out and sat one a chair.
"You will have five minutes to seduce this young one. There is a heart monitor on her chest and if it glows then you have seduced her. If you succed then you have proven yourself worthy of my daughter."
"Alright then let's go."
"Begin!"
Yuko walked over to the girl and sat next to her.
"Hi there." Yuko said.
"Hi."
"What's your name?"
"Yumi." she said.
"Ah nice to meet you Yumi. My name is Yuko."
"Hi Yuko."
"Hey I wanted to tell you this but I think you're really pretty."
"Oh please don't even try. I don't even fall for sweet talk."
"One minute!"
"Come on that's too fast!"
"You better hurry."
A heavy feeling hit Yuko. Time was almost up and if she didn't pass then she wouldn't get to see Haruna anymore. The thought of that alone made Yuko curl into a ball and start crying.
"Hey are you ok?"
"I'm sorry.. it's just.. I really love someone and I don't want to lose her."
When Yuko said that, the cat girl's heart monitor went off which means Yuko won and Haruna was hers.
"Fifth trial passed. Congradulations human, you have passed the Nekomimi trials!"
The crowd went nuts and Haruna ran down to Yuko.
"Yuko!"
"Nyannyan!"
The two embraced in a long hug never wanting to let go. But then the mother and father walked over.
"You did well human. I now give you permission to take my daughter." the father said.
"Thank you so much sir." Yuko said as she bowed.
"And to celebrate your victory, we will celebrate with a party!"
"ALRIGHT!"
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Hooray Yuko won! Now it's time for them to relax and have fun. The next chapter is going to be my last. Then after that it's a new one and it's going to be an atsumina since I haven't done one yet. So please tell me what you think.
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I really love all your fanfic here! your imagination is so good,your writing is great and you update really fast! you're like my favorite author of all time :x
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it's not that I didn't like it I didn't like what the father said to Yuko Yuko saved Haruna but the father wouldn't her take Haruna :angry1:
I'm happy that Yuko could do it and the father allowed her to take Haruna with her :hee:
is it the end ? :dunno:
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Yay~! Yuko win!! :twothumbs
lol at those trials :lol: some imagination you got there :thumbsup
I wonder how the story will end. is it Haruna follow Yuko back to earth or Yuko have to stay on the planet? :roll:
The new story is going to be atsumina??!! :w00t: :w00t:
I am longing for that one~ can't wait for it~ XD XD
Waiting for your next update :D :D
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YAY!!! bravo!!!! Now marry your Nyan Nyan!!!!
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jajaj my pervert mind though that the last one gonna be more.. mm .. you know... yuko´s style.. jeje but its ok :D
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@Yu_oshi: Hontou? I'm like your favorite author? Wah kureshii! Thank you so much! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. :wub:
@mo-chan: Nope not yet. This is the last chapter and Yuko's going to go all perv on Haruna. XD
@ichikawa: Yep the next one is going to be atsumina so I hope you'll like it. But for now enjoy the end to this one! :lol:
@kahem: I think Yuko will so more than just marry Nyannyan. :twisted:
@Haruko: Don't worry, this last one gonna have Yuko written all over it! :lol:
Well this is the last chapter! After this it is Atsumina! I'm probably going to lose more viewers but all well! Anyways I hope you enjoy this last chapter! Let's see what the little pervert has to do. Oh and I updated my OS. There's a MayuRena fic posted so check it out!
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Chapter 23
The Nekomimi people threw a huge party in Yuko's honor. There was music and dancing and all kinds of werid foods. Acchan and Takamina were on the dance floor having a blast while Yuki and Mayuyu were over at the food table. Rena and Jurina were sitting at a table talking to each other and Sae and Sayaka were getting hit on by both guys and girls. Mariko was going around being the social ante of the party and Miichan was manning the DJ.
"Yuko."
Yuko turned around and saw Haruna in a stunning red dress that hugged her body in all the right places. There was enough leg showing to make any guy drool and right now Yuko was close to doing so.
"Let's dance."
"Alright!"
Yuko took Haruna's hand and ran out to dance with Acchan and Takamina. The music was like a mixture of pop and techno. Acchan and Takamina had no idea how to dance to it so they were just basically jumping around like they were on a sugar rush. Yuko managed to get the rhythm down though and was dancing along with Haruna. When the song ended, Yuko was tired and also hungry.
"Let's get something to eat." Yuko said.
They walked over to the snack table where Mayuyu and Yukirin were.
"Yuko you got to try this."
Mayuyu took a strange looking fruit and shoved it into Yuko's mouth. It tasted like a apple and a strawberry combined.
"Wow this is good!"
"I know right!"
"Mayuyu try this."
Yukirin feed Mayuyu something that looked similar to cake.
"Yummy!"
"Ahh so cute!"
Yukirin hugged Mayuyu and Yuko kept eating. When she was done, they walked over to Jurina and Rena.
"Don't you guys wanna dance?" Yuko asked.
"No it's alright. I'm not a good dancer." Rena said.
"I'm fine staying here with Rena." Jurina said.
"Suit yourselves."
"Yuko help me out!"
Yuko looked over and saw three cat girls clinging onto Sayaka. Sae was no help because there were four of them on her.
"Girls get off. They're our guests!"
Mariko walked over and shooed the girls off.
"Thanks." Sayaka said.
"No problem. So are you guys having fun?"
"Yeah!"
"Well the fun is just beginning. Oi Miichan! Play it!"
"Roger!"
Miichan stopped the music and then played a different song. Yuko and Haruna both knew it and ran out onto the dance floor along with the others.
"1,2, 1, 2, 3, 4!"
The music started and everyone danced happily alond with each other singing alone with the lyrics. Yuko and Haurna were having a blast and almost fell during the dance. Then when the song ended, Miichan had put a slow song on to give everyone time to rest.
"May I have this dance?"
"Yes."
Yuko took Haruna's hand and led her onto the dance floor. Everyone make a circle and gathered around them.
"Nyannyan everyone is watching us."
"It's alright. Just stay calm."
Despite Haruna being taller than Yuko, Yuko led the dance guiding Haruna's body along hers in perfect harmony. Side by side they stayed next to each other never letting go. Then when the song ended, everyone clapped and the two bowed.
"Thank you all for coming out!"
The party ended and it was time for Yuko and her friends to go home. Yuko was about to board the ship but then Haruna pulled her over into a private room.
"Nyannyan what are you doing?"
"I want to have a little fun before we go home."
"What?"
Haruna grabbed Yuko's shirt and pulled it up. But Yuko stopped her and pulled her shirt back down.
"Wait until we get back home."
They said their final goodbyes and then took off. When they got home, everyone was glad to be back on earth. Although, Yuko thought Mayuyu actually missed the other planet. Everyone went to their own homes including Yuko and Haruna. As soon as they walked into the house, Yuko threw Haruna onto the bed and crawled on top of her.
"Now where were we."
Yuko grabbed Haruna's dress and tried to undo it but she couldn't figure out how to take it off.
"It unzips on the back silly."
"Oh right."
Haruna turned around so Yuko could unzip it. But as she was doing it, Haruna grabbed Yuko and flipped her onto the bed. Then Haruna got on top and started to tare open Yuko's shirt.
"I don't think so."
Yuko grabbed Haruna's breasts and squeezed them causing her to moan. Yuko then pulled Haruna's dress over her shoulders revealing a stapless bra.
"Ooo fancy."
Before Yuko could get to her prize, Haruna tore Yuko's shirt off and threw it to the side.
"As to you."
Haruna was referring to Yuko's bra with fancy lace design on it. She was going to pull Yuko's skirt down but then Yuko started carressing Haruna's thigh. Then she pulled down the dress revealing Haruna's slender legs and matching panties.
"Hey no fair!"
Haruna pulled off Yuko's skirt revealing cute polka dot panites.
"Yuko they don't match."
"I lost the other pair."
"Who cares, they'll be off in a minute anyways."
Haruna's hand traveled down Yuko's stomach to her underwear. But then Yuko stopped Haruna and flipped her over so she was on top. When Haruna tried to fight back, Yuko held Haruna's arms back.
"No tonight is about you."
"Fine do your worst."
Yuko dove in and the two had the best night of their lives.
*Sorry kids this is PG-13 stuff and I don't wanna get kicked out. But you can guess what happened*
The next morning Yuko woke up and found Haruna still asleep. She remembered everything that happened from last night and blushed a little. Then Haruna woke up saw Yuko.
"Good morning."
Haruna sat up and Yuko quickly covered her eyes.
"What?" Haruna said.
"Nyannyan please cover up." Yuko said.
"Why? You were playing with them nonstop last night."
"Nyannyan please."
"Alright there happy."
Yuko uncovered her eyes and saw Haruna was wearing her shirt that she tore off last night. It covered most of her so Yuko didn't have a problem.
"You know, my lower parts hurt because of you." Yuko said.
"It's not my fault." Haruna said.
"You could've been gentler! Last night was my first time."
"Really? Same here!"
"Hooray."
"Aww why are you so sad? You got to do most of everything."
"Yeah but you were way better than me."
"I think you were just as good."
Haruna leaned in and kissed Yuko on the lips putting as much passioin as she could in it.
"Aww. I love you so much Nyannyan!"
"I love you too Yuu-chan."
The two kissed again and this time Yuko was putting effort into it. Everything turned out good for the two. Yuko fought aliens and won and passed deadly trials. She partied hard got to have her way with her lover. Overall Yuko thought she did pretty good. And now Yuko was free to enjoy the rest of her life with her alien princess lover. Even if she isn't human, Yuko still loved Haruna. Guess that's why they call it space love.
THE END
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Well there's the end! I hope everyone liked the story and now I will be moving onto the next one which is Atsumina! I already got an idea in mind so look forward to it. Thank you so much to everyone who commented and read my story. Look forward to the next one! Again I'm probably going to lose more viewers but all well. On wards to atsumina!
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Oww my kojiyuu always together :D...
I think that with atsumina story you gonna gain more readers T_T.. they are a lot of atsumina shipper more that kojiyuu :D but doesnt matter for me its good :D
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good ending :whistle:
I like it :hee:
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Hello everyone! I am miyumi and this is my next story which is an Atsumina! The story idea is a little sketchy and not well thought out but it's the only thing I can think of at the moment so please bare with me. If you haven't checked out the previous one go ahead and do that if you want. But anyways, here's my new story 48 Days. Enjoy!
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48 Days Prolouge
"Minami dear, it's time for dinner."
"Go away mom! I don't want to eat."
"But Minami the doctor said you have to eat."
"What's the point? I'm going to die anyways!"
"Minami don't say that! They'll find a cure."
"And what if they done't? Then what? Just go away mom."
Flashback to hospital...
"Doctor are you sure you can't do anything?"
"I'm sorry but there is nothing we can do. We're looking for a cure but chances look very slim."
"Oh god no!"
"So you mean Minami only has a little time left."
"To be exact, she has 48 days left."
Back to present...
That's what the doctors told Minami. She had been diagnosed with a rare heart disease and now her body was slowly dying. She has 48 days left on the earth and she was spending those last days mourning doing nothing. Her mother has been trying to cheer her up but nothing works. Who could be happy when you found out you were dying and only had 48 days left to live? Not Minami.
"Minami I need you to run out to the store for me. You need to go pick up your medicine."
"Why should I take medicine? It's pointless."
"Minami don't say that. Now go before I get angry."
"Fine."
Minami rolled out of bed and out the front door. She walked down the street to the nearby pharmacy and picked up her medicine. Then she started her walk back home. On the way though, she could hear a fight break out. She looked over and saw a girl getting into a fight with a bunch of other girls. It looked like she was losing and pretty badly too. Usually Minami would avoid situations like this but she was dying anyways so what's the worst that could happen. Minami hid her pills and then charged into battle.
"Hey you leave her alone!"
Minami slammed into one of the girls and took her down.
"Hey what's with the midget?"
"Who cares just beat her!"
One girl tried beating Minami but Minami quickly got back up and punched the day lights out of the girl. When the other girl tried to attack, Minami ducked and punched her stomach sending her flying back. Then the last one tried to attack with a pipe but Minami grabbed it with one hand and then punched the girl in the face with the other. When all of them were down, Minami took a break. It was then she felt a sharp pain in her chest.
"Damn..."
One of the conditions of Minami's heart disease is pains in the chest whenever she does activity that increases the heart beat. Right now Minami was hurting but she looked over to check on the girl who was being beaten.
"Hey are you ok?"
"Yeah.... I'm fine."
The girl slowly got up and moved the hair out of her face.
"Thanks for helping me back there." the girl said.
"No problem. It looked like you were in trouble so I decided to step in." Minami said.
"You don't fight bad for a midget you know."
"Hey I maybe small but I can pack a punch."
"Haha you're funny. What's your name?"
"Minami. Yours?"
"Atsuko."
"Well Atsuko want to go get something to eat? I'm starving."
"That would be great."
The two walked out together side by side. Minami felt pretty good meeting this new girl. She was young, pretty, and stong. The things Minami lack. But even though she was dying, she decided she was going to live out the rest of her life the best way she could. She was going to try to do as much as she could in her last 48 days.
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Well there's the prolouge! What do you think? Should I throw it away and go back to the drawing board or keep going? It's up to you! Please tell me what you think!
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Nice story! :cow: Please keep going ! :D
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This sounds really interesting. People have not written AtsuMia fics the past days. Thank you for writing one!
PLEASE UPDATE THIS SOON!! :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup
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Wooohoo~~ AtsuMina YAAY
Very interesting fic ~
But I'll be prepared when Takaboy dies lol
Updatoo again soon ~
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WOOHOOO!!!
ASLONG ITS ATSUMINA!!!
IM HAPPY!!!
:luvluv1: :luvluv1:
thank you for the update!!!
ill be waiting to ur update!!!
:kneelbow:
ATSUMINA!!
:banghead: :banghead:
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no minami is going to die :fainted: :OMG:
Takamina nooo :gyaaah:
please cantinue I want to know the next :pleeease:
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Great ending for space love :thumbsup :thumbsup
They finally got together~ :wub:
Sayaka and Sae are sure popular in nekomimi planet, got many cat girls clinging at them XD XD
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Then, then, the prologue!!! Atsumina!!! :mon fyeah:
But... Minami is going to die?! 48 days left?!! :mon wtf: :mon tantrum: :mon ref: Minamiiiii.....
Although Minami knows her sickness, she still saved Acchan~ :mon kungfu:
Please get along well with Minami :mon whimper: and be by her side until her last day... :mon runcry:
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Loving it so far :D Was hoping to read an atsumina fic :) Please continue ^^
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Wouhou!!! Kojiyuu making out FTW!!!
YAY Atsumina!!!!!
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Wouhou!!! Kojiyuu making out FTW!!!
YAY Atsumina!!!!!
I second that!!! :inlove:
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@WildImaginary: Thank you so much! I hope you like the rest of the story! :)
@TakaminaBG: Thank you for reading! This is my first time writing a atsumina so please bare with me! XD
@ChuuuPuffs: Hey hey hey who says Takamina gonna die? We don't know that and knowing me I won't let her! Or willl I? :?
@Chichay12: Well here is the first update! I'm glad you like it. Please enjoy the rest of it! :)
@mo-chan: We don't know if Takamina will die or not. She could die or she could live. Let's see what happens. :)
@ichikawa: Atsuko wil always be my Minami's side. But will Minami be by hers? Who knows? :?
@arrow27: Ok I shall continue! :lol:
@kahem: Yep atsumina is up. I hope you like it! :P
Wow a lot of people love Atsumina. And it seems like you guys miss them a lot. Well thanks to you guys I have decided to continue the story. So Minami's clock has started ticking. Let's see what happens shall we?
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Chapter 1
(Day 1)
It was about five in the morning when Minami woke up. She didn't know why but she's started to waking up early. Maybe it was because her body wants her to start her last days of life early. She didn't know but Minami did know that she couldn't fall asleep. Minami got up and dressed and decided to head out. She took a walk along the street over to the river. There she would skip stones and try to get them as far as possible.
"Stupid heart. Why does it have to be weak. Why do I have to be weak?"
Minami skipped another rock and watched it hop across the river top. She was about to throw another when another rock flew past her. It skipped further than the one she threw. She turned around and saw Atsuko behind her.
"What are you doing here?" Minami asked.
"I always come here in the mornings." Atsuko said.
"Why?"
"To watch the sunrise."
"What?"
"Look."
Atsuko pointed to the horizon and Minami started to see a tiny orange glow. That glow slowly turned into a larger shine and soon the sun started to come out. The sky became crimson red with a hint of orange. The two stood there watching the sun rise until it became too bright to look at.
"Beautiful." Atsuko said.
"It is. Once of the things I'm going to miss." Minami said.
"What?'
"Nothing. So where will you go now?"
"I don't know."
"Well I'm going back home."
Minami started to walk away but then she felt something grab her hand.
"What?"
"How about you and me hang out. Just the two of us." Atusko said.
"Where would we go?"
"Anywhere."
"Alright."
Minami didn't know where to go but Atsuko had an idea. Atsuko took Minami to a dangerous part of town that no one would usually go to. However, Atsuko walked right into a gang meeting.
"Ready for a fight?"
"Why are we fighting in the first place?"
"I need to pay you back for what you did for me yesterday."
Atsuko walked over and started pounding on the girls.
"Don't just stand there! Help me out!"
Minami walked over and started fighting along with Atsuko. Within minutes the whole fight was over. Once again the chest pains came back and Minami was hurting.
"Hey are you ok?"
"Yeah I'm fine. Just a little tired."
"How about I take you to my place."
Atsuko took Minami to her home where she lyed down on the couch.
"How about I get you some water."
Atsuko brought over a glass of water for Minami.
"Hey can you get some snacks too?"
"Sure."
As Atsuko walked out of the room, Minami pulled out a bottle of pills. She took two and quickly took them before Atsuko got back.
"Stupid pills."
Atsuko came back with some chips.
"Thanks."
"So why were you there when I was fighting?" Atsuko asked.
"I was just passing by." Minami said.
"Really? For a minute I thought you were stalking me."
"I'm not a stalker."
"Were you trying to be my knight and shinning armor?"
"No."
"You know when I first met you, I thought you were a guy."
"Hey!"
Atsuko laughed and accidently hiccuped. It sounded like a peep.
"That was cute." Minami said.
"Don't call me cute."
"Then can I call you Acchan?"
"Sure. And I'll call you Takamina."
"Deal."
"So then Acchan, how about we have some fun?"
"How so?"
"Close your eyes."
Astuko closed her eyes and waited. It was during that time Minami snuck behind her and got really close. Then she grabbed Acchan and shook her.
"Hey!"
"Haha I can't believe you actually listened to me."
"Well fine now it's my turn."
"What?"
"Attack!"
Atsuko jumped onto Minami and pushed her down onto the ground. Minami tried to get back up but Atsuko had her pinned to the ground.
"So what are you going to do now?"
"This!"
Atsuko started tickling Minami's stomach causing her to laugh like crazy.
"Acchan stop it!"
"I never knew tickling a midget would be so fun!"
"Stop it Acchan seriously!"
Minami really needed her to stop. If Acchan kept it up she didn't know how much more her heart could take.
"STOP IT!"
Minami threw Acchan off her and causing her to hit her head against the wall.
"That hurt!"
"Sorry."
"Why did you do that?"
"I'm sorry."
Minami was having a hard time breathing. Her vision was becoming blurry and her heart was racing.
"Are you ok?"
"Yeah I'm fine!"
Minami toughed it out and smiled at Acchan even though inside she was hurting like crazy.
"Maybe I should take you home."
Atsuko took Minami home. They said their final goodbyes and then Minami shut the door. She walked into her house and pulled out her pills. She took two more and then lyed down on the couch.
"Stupid heart."
Minami thought about telling Atsuko about her disease. But she was afraid if she told her then Atsuko would treat her differently. So she decided not to tell Atsuko about her illness for the safety of her friendship. She wanted this one to last as long as possible without anything interfering.
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Well there's the first chapter! I hope you guys like it! Please tell me what you think.
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Aw! What a great chapter with their interactions :D Poor minami though :( Thanks for the quick update ^^ & lol ya many ppl do love Atsumina, think most fans will be going through withdrawal once Acchan graduates :P Thanks again for the update :D
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Oh no Takamina has heart disease :(, I like the storyline I hope you update really soon, I'll be looking forward to it.
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ah~ i love this story :inlove: . poor Takamina :cry: , she only have 48 days left :banghead: .
what will happend when Acchan find out? it will be heart breaking :cry: .
i totally in love with your fic this time :twothumbs , maybe bc i'm Atsumina shipper XD :grin: .
anyway, thank for your hard work :bow: . and i really dont know how you can update this fast, amazing :shocked: .
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@arrow27: I think a lot of atsumina fans will go into mourn when Acchan graduates. I know I will be. Anyways, thank you for commenting on my fic! :P
@sasumiofjp: Well knowing me I update super fast so don't worry. I'm glad you like the story! XD
@kazuski: Who knows when Acchan will find out about Takamina's illness. I'm glad you like the story. I update fast because I have a lot of free time but it will be gone when I start school. Darn. :(
Well here's chapter 2! I think it's time we introduce everyone else. Please enjoy!
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Chapter 2
(Day 2)
Minami woke up to the sound of the door bell ringing. She got up and answered it only to find Atsuko standing at the door way.
"Acchan? What are you doing here?"
"I wanted to hang out."
"Ok well come on in."
Minami let Atsuko in and watched her make herself comfortable on the couch.
"Your house is nice you know?"
"Thanks."
There was an akward moment of silence between the two. Then Atsuko finally said,
"I have a couple friends I'd like you to meet. Want to meet them?"
"Sure."
"Then let's go."
Atsuko took Minami to a cafe. They walked over to a table with eight other people there. When they saw Atsuko, they all smiled.
"Hey Acchan!" the one with pig tails said.
"Hey Mayuyu." Atsuko said.
"Who's your friend?"
"Someone I'd like to introduce everyone to. This is Minami but everyone can call her Takamina."
"Hello." Minami said.
"Hi. My name is Watanabe Mayu. You can call me Mayuyu. The girl next to me is Kashiwagi Yuki. We call her Yukirin. Be careful around her, she's known for having a black heart."
"Hey!" the one called Yukirin said.
"My name is Kojima Haruna." the one with long brown hair said.
"The one clinging onto me is Oshima Yuko. This one is a real pervert so watch out."
"Nyannyan you're so cruel." the shorter girl said.
"I'm Matsui Jurina! The one next to me is Matsui Rena. Don't worry we're not related." a girl with short balck hair said.
"Hi my name is Miyazawa Sae! The gorilla next to me is Akimoto Sayaka." a girl with spikey hair said.
"These are my friends and I want you to be friends with them too." Atsuko said.
"It's nice to meet everyone." Minami said.
"Hey Acchan, are you sure this girl isn't another midget like Yuko?" Sae said.
"Hey I'm not a midget!"
"Yuko go stand next to her."
The one called Yuko walked over and stood next to Takamina.
"Oh my god you're actually taller. Congrats Yuko you are no longer the midget."
"Hooray!"
Yuko walked back over and sat next to Haruna.
"Come and sit Takamina."
Minami didn't really know what to do. She never really had many friends so this was a whole new thing for Minami. She sat down next to Atsuko and just listened in on everyone's conversation.
"Hey everyone why don't we go around taking turns telling Minami a little more about ourselves." Atsuko said.
"What is this rehab?" Mayuyu said.
"Just do it."
"Ok then I'll start. I am Mayuyu and I like mangas, anime and Yukirin." Mayuyu said.
"I am Yukirin and I like playing the piano and archery." Yukirin said.
"I'm Haruna and I like cats, candy, and clouds." Haruna said.
"I'm Yuko and I like girls, panties, girls, Nyannyan, oh and did I mention girls?" Yuko said.
"I am Jurina and I like video games and Rena." Jurina said.
"I am Rena and I like melonpan and spicey things." Rena said.
"I'm Sae and I like being super excited and always happy." Sae said.
"I'm Sayaka and I like sports and anything girly." Sayaka said.
"Well it's nice to get to know you guys."
"Now tell us something about you."
"Ok well I like singing and dancing oh and shaved ice. My mother is an accountent and my father died when I was young. I am currently-"
"Hey we only asked for likes. Not your whole life story."
"Sorry."
"She's just being honest Yukirin." Sayaka said.
"Yeah but still. I don't want to hear it."
"Ignore Yukirin Takamina. She's just mad because yesterday I kicked her butt at table tennis."
"That's because Yuko got in my way during the last shot."
"I was running after Nyannyan!" Yuko argued.
"I was trying to get away from you." Haruna said as she pushed Yuko away.
"Oshiri sister help me!"
"Sorry Yuko but I'm busy with my own problems."
Minami saw Mayuyu glaring at Sae who was secretly eyeing Yukirin. Rena and Jurina were just quietly giggling in the corner and Minami laughed along with everyone. In the end, Minami ended up having a fun time and was glad Atsuko introduced her.
"Thanks for letting me meet your friends." Minami said.
"You'll see them around more often. School starts soon you know."
"Oh yeah that's right."
The thought of school was the last thing Minami wanted to think about. The stress of dying was already enough but going to school was just going to worsen it. She really didn't want to go to school so she was hoping her illness actually got her out of going to school. Then again, if she didn't go, Atsuko would get suspicious.
"Well I better get going. I'll see you around Takamina!"
"Bye Acchan!"
When Takamina got home, she found her mother and her doctor sitting in the family room talking.
"What's this about?" Minami asked.
"Minami, this is doctor Shinoda Mariko. Mariko here sepcializes in arethmic diseases." mother said.
"Nice to meet you. I saw your case file and came here to offer you a deal." Mariko said.
"What kind of deal?"
"I am currently working on a new cure for people like you who are dying from a heart disease. I have something but I haven't tested it out yet. I wanted to know if you would be willing to test it for me."
Minami stared at Mariko for the longest time. She was rethinking the offer. It's a possible cure that could or couldn't work. It's never been tested before and it could kill her. But then again she was dying anyways so what's the big deal.
"Alright I'll take it. So what will you be doing to me?"
"I have developed a new pace maker that will regulate your heat beat. When it starts to get too fast, it'll induce a drug that will slow it down. If the heart stops, it will emit a shock every ten seconds to try to jump start it again. It will lessen your chance of an attack during regualr activities."
"Will surgery be required?"
"Yes. Are you sure you still want to do this?"
Minami thought about it one more time before giving her final answer.
"Yes."
"Very well then I will prepare for the oporation. Come to the hospital at six tomorrow morning."
"Thank you so much." mother said.
"I'm only trying to help."
Mariko left and Minami went to her room and sat on the bed. She looked over at herself in the mirror and wondered if she made the right choice. Well there was no turning back now. Minami made her choice and she was going through with it. Although she had to be careful with the decisions she made because they could end her life sooner than expected.
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Chapter 2 done! Please tell me what you think!
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I told ya!! many atsumina shipper gonna be happy with this new fic :D,.
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With Mariko-sama being the doctor, things are gonna get better and crazier! Minami, I don't think it's time for you to die yet :grin:
Yukirin, why didn't you say you like Mayuyu too during your introduction?! You black meanie!
I'm looking forward to seeing the Cyborg kick shemale Sae's ass again :rofl:
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You've just made me a very happy girl~ Great update, Mariko as a doctor? Awesome, and the whole Acchan and Mayuyu thing was funny! Mayuyu "what's this rehab?" lol great chappie :thumbup
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Wow I'm in love with this fic!!! *_* I really like the idea :) the intro to characters were funny :) & lol, Yuko graduated from being the midget of the group :P & Woah, awesome idea with the pacemaker! :) Thanks for the update ^^
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Update~ XD
everyone's intro was super funny :lol: , LOLs at yuko, all about girls and hentai things :smhid
when mariko-sama appear, something crazy will happen for sure :twisted:
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I LOVE this story miyumi-chan :luvluv1: :luvluv2:
having friends is more fun :hiakhiakhiak:
please cantinue :on GJ:
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PLEASE UPDATE THE ATSUMINA FAN FICTION
PLEASE.
THANK YOU.
IT'S INTERESTING.
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@Haruko: Indeed you were right. There are many happy atsumina shippers who are happy right now. :lol:
@seigus: As expected of the Mayuki fan. But remember, I'm a saeyaka fan so I can't let anything too bad happen to my oshi. :P
@sasumiofjp: Actually, if you haven't read my other story Mad House check it out. Mariko is a doctor in that one too. :)
@arrow27: Yep the pacemaker might just save Takamina's life. I'm glad you like the story. :)
@kazsuki: Yes Mariko is bound to causing something. Ah and Yuko is a perv as always. XD
@mo-chan: Thanks! I will make sure to continue this story as well! :P
@Wmatsui22: Can do! You just keep reading! :)
Minna, after hearing the news about the reshuffle I was really shocked and hurt. So you may not hear from me for a while because I will be in mourning. My oshi Sae has been transferred so I'm hurting right now. I'm sorry if you guys don't hear from me. But for now please enjoy the teacher!
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Chapter 3
(Day 3)
Minami went to the hospital that morning to get the pace maker put in. Then afterwards she had to stay there for a while to recover. The oporation was a success and now Minami was ready to go out into the world. But she still had to take the pills. Minami got ready for school and packed her lunch. She looked at herself in the mirror one last time.
"I can't believe I'm going."
Minami thought going to school was a waste of time because she would lose it all anyways. But her mother was making her go anyways because she wants to get the most out of her life. Minami walked into the school building and took a seat at a desk. She watched all the other students go around and talk about stuff. But then she felt something cover her eyes.
"Guess who?"
"Uh Acchan?"
"How did you know?"
"Lucky guess."
Atsuko walked over to the desk next to Minami and sat down.
"So are you excited to be here?" Atsuko asked.
"No." Minami said.
"Me neither."
"Then why are you here?"
"I have to finish highschool. Then afterwards I'm off on my own."
"Where will you go?"
"Don't know. Don't care. Anywhere is fine with me."
"Then how about you come with me."
Atsuko looked over at Minami and stared at her.
"Are you serious?"
"Yeah and to prove it."
Minami rolled up her shirt sleeve revealing two bracelets.
"Here take this and keep it as a reminder of our promise."
Minam handed Atsuko the red one with a A on it. Meanwhile she kept the blue one with the M on it.
"Keep that and don't lose it."
"I won't."
Class started and Minami zoned out through most of it. When lunch break came, Minami got up and was about to head to the cafeteria but then Atsuko stopped her.
"Come with me. I know a nice place we can eat."
Atsuko took Minami up to the roof top. There she felt closer to heaven then ever before. It was moments like these where she felt like just leaving the earth and ending everything. But before she could take the leap of faith, something kept her from falling. That something was Atsuko. The one thinig keeping her on the earth. The one thing keeping her alive.
"Here Takamina try this."
Atsuko shoved a octopus sausage into Minami's mouth which surprised her almost causing her to choke.
"How is it?"
"Good."
The two ate in silence not saying a word to each other. But then the door opened and Mayuyu and Yukirin came walking over.
"There you are!" Mayuyu said.
"Where have you been?" Yukirin asked.
"We've been here." Atsuko said.
"We wanted to eat lunch with you guys and we couldn't find you anywhere."
"Sorry. Well you're here now. So sit down and eat."
Mayuyu and Yukirin walked over and saw down next to Atsuko.
"Here Mayuyu."
Yukirin pulled out a bag of candy and handed it over to Mayuyu.
"Yay candy!"
Mayuyu tore the bag open and started munching on the candy.
"Is that good for Mayuyu?" Minami asked.
"Oh yeah it's fine. Mayuyu doesn't eat candy much so I get it for her. Plus, she's very adorable when she eats it." Yukirin said.
"Hey!"
"Awww!"
Yukirin hugged Mayuyu almost causing her to drop her candy.
"Hey watch it!"
"Mayuyu you got chocolate on you face."
Yukirin leaned in a little closer and licked the chocolate off Mayuyu's face.
"Well you got chocolate on your face too."
Mayuyu took a piece of chocolate and smeared it on Yukirin's face.
"Mayuyu!"
"Revenge."
Minami and Atsuko laughed at the sight of the two lovers. But then Atsuko noticed something on Minami that she never saw before. Sticking out of her shirt was something that looked like a scar. Atsuko was curious so she pushed Minami down and got on top of her. She leaned in real close making it look like they were going to kiss. Minami was so flustered by the whole situtaion that she almost didn't see Atsuko's hand traveling to the collar of her shirt. But she saw it and grabbed it just in time.
"What are you doing?" Minami said.
"I want to look for something." Atsuko said.
"Sorry but I can't let you do that."
"Why not?"
"Because you shouldn't rape people without their permission."
"Who says I was raping you."
"I didn't. But they might think that."
Minami pointed to Mayuyu and Yukirin who wore blank expressions on their faces. Then Mayuyu was the first to speak.
"Oh sorry please continue. We'll leave."
Mayuyu grabbed Yukirin and ran. Meanwhile Atsuko got off Minami and ran after the two.
"Wait you guys it's not what you think!"
When Atsuko left, Minami sat up and took out her pills. She popped two and then put the rest away. Her heart was still beating pretty fast but the pace maker did it's job and kept it steady. Minami didn't feel any chest pains. She'd have to thank Mariko the next time she saw her. Minami still couldn't get over how close Atsuko was to her. Her scent still lingered in the air and her warm hand on her stomach left a huge impression.
"Jeez. What's wrong with me?"
Lunch was over and now it was time to go back to class. However when she walked in, something coevered her eyes and pulled her to the side.
"Hey what's going on!"
Minami tried to stuggle but whoever had her held her good.
"Relax it's me Sayaka."
"Sayaka? What's going on?"
"Yuko and Haruna are having a private moment in the classroom right now."
"What do you mean?"
"Take a look."
Sayaka uncoverd Minami's eyes and when she did, she saw Yuko on top of Haruna half naked and Haruna in nothing but a skirt and bra. Minami took Sayaka's hand and covered her yes again.
"Why are they doing it in the classroom?"
"The teacher is gone and all the other rooms are being used." Sae said.
"What do you mean?"
"Nevermind. For now though I think it's best if you go somewhere else for now."
"Ok thanks."
Minami turned around and started to walk the other direction with her eyes still closed. But then she ran into something causing her to fall back.
"Itai!"
Minami opened her eyes and saw Jurina on the ground rubbing her head.
"Oh I'm so sorry. Are you alright?" Minami said.
"Yeah I'm fine. Watch where you're going alright?" Jurina said.
"Got it."
"Jurina are you ok."
Rena walked over to Jurina and helped her up.
"Rena-chan my head hurts. Kiss it and make it better."
"Sure."
Rena kissed Jurina's forehead and Jurina giggled.
"Let's get going. I'll see you later Takamina!"
The two left and as they walked away, Atsuko came running over.
"Hey Takamina!"
"What is it Acchan?"
"Let me see you chest."
"What?" Minami said.
"Let me see your chest." Atsuko said.
"No way!"
"Fine then I'll make you!"
Atusko jumped onto Minami and the two started fighting. Atsuko was trying to tear Minami's shirt off while Minami was trying to get Atsuko off her. Other people started to gather and then Yuko shouted,
"You can do it Acchan! I want to know if she's really a girl!"
Minami was sturggling to get Atsuko off her because she's bigger than her. But Minami was stronger and finally was able to get Atsuko off her. However, Minami's heart was racing and the pace maker wasn't doing it's job. At one point Minami thought it was going to stop all at once. But then Minami felt a sudden jolt that made her jump two feet into the air.
"Woah!"
Minami's heart calmed down but she was still hurting really badly. The pain was so bad that she was having a hard time standing. Sayaka walked over and patted Minami's back trying to help the poor girl out.
"Are you ok Takamina?" she asked.
"Yeah I'm fine. Just fine."
That night, Minami got home and found Mariko siting at her table again.
"Hey. So how was school?" she asked.
"Good. Except for the zapping part." Minami said.
"Oh so it did work!"
"Yeah it did. That shock is really powerful."
"It's supposed to be. It's the only way to make sure it keeps your heart moving."
"Still, I think I like the other way better."
"What were you doing that caused it to go into shock mode?"
"A fight."
"Oh well don't do that. It can only emit shock waves every so often. But after every shock it has to recharge so try not to do anything too crazy. The recharging process could take a while."
"I will."
"Oh and one more thing."
"What?"
"Take this."
Mariko handed Minami a watch.
"Put it on."
Minami put the watch on and as soon as it did, it turned on.
"You can see your pulse on it. Watch it and make sure nothing gets too bad. It also acts as a tracker. Anywhere you go I'll know so that if you heart stops, I'll be able to find your body. Oh and it has a countdown on it."
"Thanks that's just great Mariko."
"No problem."
Minami walked back to her room and looked at her watch. Today was the end of day three and tomorrow would be day four. Minami didn't like staring at her own clock but then again, it was more calming knowing about when it was almost time for the end then not knowing. But either way, Minami hated and just wanted to get it over with quickly.
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Well there's chapter 3! Please tell me what you think! And again, it may be a while before I update again. I'm still hurting from the reshuffle.
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Thanks for the update!!! Your fic was something I could look forward to in order to cheer me up from the reshuffle. It was def a surprise since many changes were made so I get ur mourning. SAE is tough though, she'll hold on and make it work. Guess we have to support her decision :) Thanks again for the update, it was an interesting chapter ^^
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miyumi-chan, I hope you will feel better soon. The shuffle is a big shock to all of us whose oshi and OTPs have been affected. The study aboard programme is a temporary stint so Sae should not be gone for too long! And by right those "transferred" to overseas groups should only be members who applied for the programme. Did Sae express interest in going to SNH48 before?
Yukirin pulled out a bag of candy and handed it over to Mayuyu.
"Yay candy!"
Mayuyu tore the bag open and started munching on the candy.
"Is that good for Mayuyu?" Minami asked.
"Oh yeah it's fine. Mayuyu doesn't eat candy much so I get it for her. Plus, she's very adorable when she eats it." Yukirin said.
This little exchange is sooo adorable! :wub: Mayuyu is like a little kid but at least she doesn't overdose on candy like her character in Second Chance.
Mayuyu took a piece of chocolate and smeared it on Yukirin's face.
Good job, Mayuyu! :thumbsup :rofl: :rofl:
Sayaka uncoverd Minami's eyes and when she did, she saw Yuko on top of Haruna half naked and Haruna in nothing but a skirt and bra. Minami took Sayaka's hand and covered her yes again.
LOL-ed at Takamina taking Sayaka's hand to cover her eyes again! And where's the discipline in this school? Doing that kind of thing so openly in the classroom :shocked
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miyumi-chan, I hope you will feel better soon. The shuffle is a big shock to all of us whose oshi and OTPs have been affected. The study aboard programme is a temporary stint so Sae should not be gone for too long! And by right those "transferred" to overseas groups should only be members who applied for the programme. Did Sae express interest in going to SNH48 before?
Yes, if you look on her tumblr page, they translated Sae's comment and she mentions she thought long and hard about this and talked to many people once it was announced they could study abroad. In the end she decided she wants to go to SNH48
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OMG!!!! Kojiyuu in the classroom!!!
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Good chapter I like it :fainted:
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:panic: KojiYu part is finished OMG they tried to dominate each-other :smhid :inlove:
:shocked At first when you said that you're loosing reader I tough that was because it might turn into a sad ending or something!
But he** no I'm still here reading I ship AtsuMina after all (not a ship but CRUISER!)
Oh Lord that was hilarious again :rofl:
KojiYu making out...
SaeSayaka trying to protect innocent people eyes...
Takamina fighting with Acchan ( in a hot way)
Oh but her poor heart :(
Thank you for your update!
About "tokyo DOOM" I tough it was a joke first but well
I'm praying and still supporting 48 family and wishing for the best
Thank you again
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
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So happy the pacemaker works! Takamina would have died, good chapter
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OMG my kojiyuu smexy time thanx :D.... dont worry i hope you feel well I support you :D nad im waiting for your fic doesnt matter what happen
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:on cloudeye: I don't know why whenever I'm reading Atsumina fanfics... my heart hurt~~
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YEHEY !!! (HAPPY)
YOU FINALLY UPDATE THE CHAPTER THREE !!!
GOODLUCK..!
PLEASE UPDATE..!
I WANT TO KNOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT..
THANK YOU
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Finally i manage to read your atsumina fic,
I love atsumina couple...
Ne miyumi-chan...sae-chan going to shanghai are you ok?LOL hope you fine
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Wow I just moved into my new dorm and I've been slowly reading this story. My Internet connection is anything but fast haha. Well I am really loving this new atsunina fic. I actually thought it was going to be a zombie story at first because of the title but I really like this idea as well it's really interesting. I hope for Minami that the heart thing works out for her in the end. Well I'm excited for the new chapter and I'm looking forward to it :)
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Mariko is doctor? will she trolling Minami? :lol:
Love that pace maker thing, it helps Minami from dying.
Ahh~ that fight scene between Atsumina is speechless :w00t: Acchan trying to peek inside Minami's shirt...
Kojiyuu couple is always~ doingsmexything~ XD XD
Mayuki and WMatsui are cute~ lol at Saeyaka guarding the room for Kojiyuu couple.. XD XD
Your school is starting? no wonder the update has been slow down. It's okay, I'll be waiting for the next update :)
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Minna! I just wanted to tell you all thank you so much for showing your concern! I was a little depressed at first and needed some time off. But now I'm back and better than ever! So now I finally give you a long awaited update!
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Chapter 4
(Day 4)
It was another boring day. It was raining outside and her mother was gone. Minami had nothing to do. So much for living her life to the fullest. How can she when she's stuck inside.
"Maybe I should go out."
Minami opened the curtain and saw how hard it was raining.
"Then again maybe I should stay inside."
Minami walked over and turned on the TV. There was nothing on so she turned it off.
"What to do what to do..."
Minami walked around the house and tried to find something to play with.
"I know what I can do!"
Minami ran to her room and pulled out a toy sword and some stuffed animals. She placed on the table and three others on the couch. Then she took a blanket and tied it around her neck making it look like a cape. She took her sword and aimed it at the stuffed bear on the table. In a deep voice she said,
"Join me Luke. Together we can rule the galaxy as father and son."
Then in a high voice she said,
"Never! I'll never joined the dark side! You killed my father!"
Back to deep voice.
"Luke, I am your father!"
"Noooo!"
Minami swung her sword and knocked the bear off. Then she turned to the ones on the couch and took them down.
"Nooo stop please!"
"Hahaha the dark side rules!"
WOOSH!
"Look out it's rebel forces!"
Minami pretended that there were people shooting at her.
BANG BANG KABOOM WOOSH!
"Hahaha your lazers are nothing against me!"
"He's too strong! Retreat!"
"Haha dark side rules!"
Minami was having so much fun that she almost didn't hear the cry outside.
"Takamina!"
Minami looked over and saw Acchan standing outside her house soaking wet. It was raining so being outside without an umbrella wasn't going to help. Minami but away her toys and ran down stairs and opened the door. As soon as she did, a wet Acchan came running in.
"What were you doing out in the rain?" Minami asked.
"I wanted to come and see you." Atsuko said.
"Why didn't you have an umbrella?"
"I forgot it."
"Well let's get you dried off so you don't get a cold."
Minami gave Atsuko a spare change of clothes and then had her sit down in the family room.
"Here drink this."
Minami handed Atsuko some tea.
"Thanks."
"So tell me why you were outside my house in the middle of the rain?"
"Well I wanted to see you so I ran out the house. It wasn't raining when I left."
"Jeez. You should really think before you do something like that. What could have happened if I wasn't home and you were stuck waiting out there?"
"I would've kept waiting."
"Baka."
Minami lightly bopped Atsuko in the head.
"Excuse me for a moment."
Minami got up and walked into the kitchen. She grabbed a glass of water and quickly took her pills. Then she walked back into the room only to find Atsuko gone.
"Acchan!"
Minami started to look for her but didn't see her anywhere.
"Acchan?"
Minami checked everywhere. Upstairs, downstairs, under the beds, in the bathroom, outside, even behind the couch. Atsuko was nowhere to be found.
"Maybe she left already."
Minami started to walk towards her room when she heard a thud. It came from the closet in the hall. Minami walked to the closet and when she opened the door, she found Atsuko only she had fallen asleep. Seeing Atsuko's cute sleeping face made Minami want to squeal inside. Everything about her looked so tempting. But Minami held back and quietly woke up Atsuko.
"Acchan..."
"Huh? Takamina?"
"What were you doing in my closet?"
"I was going to surpirse you when you came by. But you never did so I got tired and fell asleep."
"Mou you scared me. Here let's get you to bed."
Minami carried Atsuko up to her room and set her on the bed. She tucked her in and then went down stairs.
"She might have a fever."
Minami went back upstairs and checked her temperature. It was warm so Minami decided to run out and get apple sauce. When she came back, she took the apple sauce and put it in the microwave. When it was done, she sprinkled some cinammon on it and then got some milk. (this is what my mother did for me when I was sick)
"Acchan."
Minami quietly walked in and found Acchan still asleep.
"Acchan."
"Minami?"
"Sit up. I brought you some food."
Minami helped Atsuko sit up and then fed her the apple sauce.
"Thank you Takamina."
"It's no problem. Now you get some rest. I'm gonig to call your parents and have them come pick you up."
"No!"
Atsuko grabbed Minami's arm and held it tightly.
"What?"
"Don't call them."
"Why not?"
"Because I want to stay with you."
"Atsuko you know you can't stay here."
"Please. Just for tonight."
Tears were starting to form in Atsuko's eyes.
"Well alright you can stay here. But only for tonight."
"Thank you Takamina."
"Good. Now get some rest. I'm going to go in the other room."
"No!"
Atsuko pulled Minami down onto the bed and snuggled up to her.
"Stay with me." Atsuko said.
"What if I get sick?" Minami said.
"Not my problem."
"It will be if I do."
"Well then I'll just take care of you."
"Ok sounds good to me."
Atsuko wrapped her arms around Minami and hugged her like a teddy bear.
"Don't ever leave me ok?"
"Alright Acchan I won't."
"You promise?"
Atsuko held out her pinky finger.
"I promise."
Minami held out hers and grabbed onto Atsuko's. Then the two slowly started to pass out. But one thing Minami wondered was why didn't Atsuko not want her parents to come. She guessed that it was something only Atsuko knew and doubted she would ever get an answer from.
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Minna! Again thank you so much for understanding and waiting. Now I am back and ready to write more. So please tell me what you think and look forward to the next update!
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I think they are starting to fall for each other. I'm curious why Acchan didn't want her parents to come.
AHH! I WANT THEM TO KISS ALREADY!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE SOON! :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup
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SO cute atsumina... but I wanna know why atsuko dont want that minami talk with her parents
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:w00t: Yes another chapter, I hop Maeda's parents aren't abusing her or anything? I liked the chapter! Keep it up lol
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Atsumina is so cute!!! I too wonder why Acchan didn't want her parents to come either, I can kind of guess already though.
I'm glad you're feeling better though :D
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Welcome back :) Thank you for updating the fic, and glad your feeling better :D Aw, it was a cute chapter with Minami taking care of Atsuko:D Hopefully she can keep her promise somehow to never leave her!!!
Thanks again for the update, excited to read the next chapter ^^
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So cute~ And lol the star wars antics rofl
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@TakaminaBG: Don't worry they're big kiss will be coming up very soon. Just wait a little londer and soon they will have it. :P
@Haruko: Everyone will find out soon why Atsuko doesn't want Minami to talk to her parents. Sooner or later. :lol:
@sasumiofjp: Thank you! I will not let you down. :)
@Sasshii: Thank you. And if you know already don't tell anyone! It's going to be a surprise. :roll:
@arrow27: Thank you for welcoming me back. I hope you like this next chapter! XD
@kahem: Yeah Minami can do some pretty fun stuff when she's alone. XD
Minna! Here is chapter 5! I hope you all like it. Now it is time to share some love with everyone else in the family. Now then let's get started shall we?
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Chapter 5
(Day 5)
It was another boring day at school for Minami. She was just sitting at her desk with Atsuko staring out the window when suddenly, Yukirin walked over.
"Hey Takamina Acchan I need your help." she said.
"What is it Yukirin?" Atsuko said.
"It's about Mayuyu. I feel like she's becoming too dependent on me. I need her to learn how to stand on her own two feet."
"What do you mean?"
"Well lately, Mayuyu has been really leaning on me for help with everything. She's practically the daughter I never had. I need her to learn how to do things on her own without me being there for her."
"So what do you suggest we do?"
"Well I have a couple ideas but it maybe difficult."
What Yukirin had in mind was basically trying to get her to do things on her own. Example one was lunch. Mayuyu always relied on Yukirin for her food. This time, Yukirin wasn't going to give her any food and she was going to need Minami and Atsuko's help to make sure Mayuyu doesn't force Yukirin to give in. They sat at the table waiting for Mayuyu to walk over.
"Yuki-mama~"
"What is it Mayuyu?" Yukirin said.
"I'm hungry." Mayuyu said like a little kid.
"Well go get in line and get some food."
"But the line is too long and by the time I get back I won't have enough time to eat."
"I'm sorry Mayuyu but you can't have any of my food today. You're just going to have to buy some on your own."
"But I forgot money."
"Then have Acchan or Takamina buy you something."
"But I want you're cooking! You always cook the best food."
"You mean it?"
"Yeah!"
Mayuyu gave Yukirin that killer cyborg smile that always made Yukirin give in.
"Well alright. Since you said my cooking was the best."
Yukirin pulled out another lunch and handed it to Mayuyu.
"Yay! Thank you Yukirin."
"Yukirin."
Minami and Atsuko looked at her with a disappointed look.
"I can't help it! She has that cute smile that I can't resist!"
Since plan A failed, it's time for plan B. Plan B was to get Mayuyu to do her work on her own. Most of the time she copies off Yukirin even though she is perfectly capable of doing the work herself. It was duting study hall Mayuyu came over to Yukirin with her text book and worksheet.
"Ne Yukirin help me out." Mayuyu said.
"No Mayuyu. The teacher said you can't get help from anyone else." Yukirin said.
"But I don't get any of it! I want you to help me!"
"Get Acchan or Takamina to help you."
"But they don't know any of it."
"Yes we do." Minami said.
"Stay out of it midget." Mayuyu growled.
Minami decided to stay quiet fearing what might happen if she interfered.
"Come on Yukirin just help me a little bit!"
"I said no Mayuyu."
Mayuyu started to cry.
"Wah! Yukirin...hic...doesn't love...hic...me."
"Now Mayuyu don't say that. I do love you."
"No you don't...hic...you won't help me...hic."
"If I help you will you stop crying?"
"Maybe..."
"Alright then I'll help you."
"Yay!"
The tears stopped and a huge grin appeared on Mayuyu's face. Atsuko leaned towards Minami and said,
"She played her like a fool."
"Tell me about it."
Plan B failed so now it's time for the final plan C. Plan C was going to have a couple kids gang up on Mayuyu and try to attack her. When she cries out for help no one will come and save her so she's on her own. To make the plan real, Yukirin got actual thugs to gang up on Mayuyu. She was walking in the court yard when they approached Mayuyu.
"Hey cutie." one said.
"Heard your looking for someone to play with." another said.
"Why don't you play with us?"
"Go away!" Mayuyu said.
"I don't think so."
One of the thugs tried to grab Mayuyu but she smacked him with a school bag.
"Ahh that hurt! You're gonna pay for that!"
"Yukirin help!"
Two of the guys grabbed Mayuyu and held her down while the other was going at her shirt. Meanwhile to the side, Yukirin, Minami and Atsuko were all watching. Minami saw Yukirin's hands turned to fists and was about to walk over. But then Minami held her back. She knew how much Yukirin wanted to help but if she wanted the plan to work then she would have to leave her.
"Yukirin!"
Mayuyu was crying now and her shirt was half torn. Now the thugs were going after her skirt.
"Yukirin!"
Yukirin herself started to cry a little but she held her place. She wanted Mayuyu to learn how to be brave on her own without her help. The thugs had gotten her skirt off and were now going after her panties. But then there was a loud smack and one of the thugs being shot five feet into the air. Minami looked over and saw an angry cyborg standing in nothing but a bra and panties.
"You wanna play? Fine let's play!"
Mayuyu walked over and grabbed one of the thugs by the hair. Then she started swinging him aroung and around and around. Finally, she realised him and sent him flying over the fence.
"Ah you bit-"
Before he could finish his sentence, Mayuyu punched him in the face knocking out three of his teeth. Then she kicked him in the privates and elbowed his face as he came down. As for the third one, he pissed himself as Mayuyu came over and grabbed him by the collar. She leaned back and then head butted him so hard that Minami thought she heard a loud crack.
"Mayuyu!"
Yukirin couldn't hold back any more and ran out to Mayuyu.
"Yukirin!"
The two hugged and Mayuyu started sobbing in Yukirin's arms.
"I was so scared!" Mayuyu said.
"I know Mayuyu I know." Yukirin said.
"I called your name but you never came."
"I'm sorry Mayuyu!"
As the two lovers were crying in each other's arms, they didn't even notice one of the thugs get up. He grabbed a stick and was going to whack Mayuyu with it. But then Yukirin stopped him.
"Touch her and you die!"
Yukirin took the stick and whacked the thug in the shin. Then to finish him off, she kicked him right in the gut sending him flying back.
"Yaya! Mamarin is so strong!"
"I'm sorry Mayuyu. I'll never leave you alone like that ever again."
"You promise?"
"I promise."
"Good."
Click!
"Cause now you're never leaving me again."
"Eh?"
Yukirin looked down and saw her left hand handcuffed to Mayuyu.
"Mayuyu!"
"Now you can't leave me!"
"Mou this isn't what I meant!"
Meanwhile, Minami had snuck away to secretly take her medicine. While she was taking her medicine, she didn't notice the figure sneak up behind her.
"Hey!"
"AHH!"
Minami felt her heart jump which wasn't good. She turned around and saw Mariko standing behind her.
"Mariko? What are you doing here?" Minami said.
"I came to check on you." Mariko said.
"Well I was going fine until you showed up and almost gave me a heart attack."
"Sorry I didn't mean to do that. Anyways I have some good news and bad news."
"What's the good news?"
"The good news is, I recently found a friend who maybe able to help you. I messaged her and she said she'd be here in a couple weaks."
"What's the bad news?"
"The bad news is that pace maker is running out of battery power and is going to have to be changed soon. The problem is we don't have any more batteries for it and the next shipment isn't going to be in for another couple days."
"How much longet does it have?"
"About a day in a half I think."
"You think?"
"I don't know. Anyways, when that thing goes out, you have to be very careful until we get you a new one. Got it?"
"Got it."
"Alright then I'll be going then. I just wanted to tell you that. See you later."
As Mariko walked away, Atsuko came over.
"There you are Takamina. I was looking for you." she said.
"Sorry I thought I saw something." Minami lied.
"Oh well come on class is about to start."
"Uh right."
Minami was worried. She was afraid that the pace maker would run out and something bad was going to happen. She could die. Before she was wanting to die but now she's afraid of dying. Minami doesn't know why there's a sudden change but she does know that she has to get the batteries quick before it runs out.
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Oh no what's going to happen to Minami? Will the battery power go out and something bad happen? Or will Mariko come in and save the day? Find out next time in my next update! Please tell me what you think! Oh and I updated my OS. It's a mayujuri so check it out.
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Wow, thanks for the quick update :D Great chapter as always. Lol at Mayu and Yuki, so great :) & that's trouble for Takamina that her pace maker stop for a few days! Can't wait to find out what happens :D
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This chapter was fun! Yukirin gave up to quickly!!!!
So there will be AtsuMina kiss....... AHHH!!! Can't wait!!!!!1
Update soon!!!!!!!!! :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup
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Oh geez no more batteries! She might as well just sleep all day with her crazy friend, good chapter
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Mayuki so cute~
Cyborg is Machiavellian smart lol
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here Mayu is not Mayu she Nezumi she is so clever poor Yuki :on lol: :hiakhiakhiak:
I wonder what is going to happen to Takamina :badluck:
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Mayuki......as cute and amusing as always!!!! XD
But! hey you didnt tell us what happened after Yuki got handcuffed to Mayu!!!
Great chapter~ :wub:
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:smhid Mamarin spoiled Mayu too much~ XD XD what a cute couple
The pace maker is running out of battery?! :shocked no good no good... T^T Minami...
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back~ XD
i got something to do today and when i came back there was two chap waitting for me, it feel good :inlove:
about chap 4, sweet scene between Acchan and Takamina :wub: , these two just too cute for me :P .
Takamina just play with herself like a kid, and that one make me :rofl:
something about Acchan's family? i wonder what is it :panic: .
chap 5, Yuki you just too weak, how can you teach Mayuyu anything if you keep under her control :smhid , and Mayuyu sure know how to handle Yuki :lol: , so evil (remind me of nezumi XD )
the fighting scene was awesome :twothumbs , cyborg's power on. Yuki also scary when it come to Mayuyu :bleed eyes:
next chaper Minami in trouple :banghead: , hope she will be fine :banghead: .
i want more atsumina's scene :love:
thank for update :cow: :thumbsup
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@arrow27: Yes! We will find out what happens to Takamina very soon! I hope you like it. :)
@Rukaeru: Sure I can make a yukirena. Just make sure to request it on the other file next time. And don't worry I don't plan on killing Takamina. Oh and about your thing about the smut uhh I'm not a pervert and I've never really written things like that before so don't expect much. I will my best and try to add in the parts but my hands are kind of tied. :(
@TakaminaBG: Yes the kiss. I will have to think of the right situation for one. Just give me time and I'll think of something. :lol:
@sasumiofjp: Thank you for reading the chapter! I hope you like this one as well. :)
@kahem: Mayuyu can be very tricky sometimes. No matter what Yukirin will always fall for her trap. :wub:
@mo-chan: Mayuyu is Nezumi! And Nezumi always gets what she wants. :lol:
@yuukimoko: I'll let you fill in the blanks on what happened to Mayuyu and Yukirin. :wub:
@ichikawa: Mamarin can't resist Mayuyu's charm so it's natural. Don't worry nothing bad will happen to Takamina. I promise. :cry:
@kazuski: Ok I'll make more atsumina scenes. But remember, I like to share the love with other members so I'm sorry if Atsumina isn't really there in some chapters. I love all the members of AKB and want to share the love equally you know? :?
Minna I have some bad news! School has started which means my update speed will go down by ALOT. So I'm sorry if I'm not updating as fast but hey, school is kind of more important. So in the mean time, I hope you enjoy the chapter!
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Chapter 6
(Day 6)
The pace maker stopped working. Minami knew because she heard a loud beep in the middle of the night. The pace maker was no longer working which means she was on her own from now on until Mariko gets new batteries. But who knows how long that will be? All Minami was worried about was if something happened that would cause her heart to skip.
"Hey Takamina!"
Minami turned around and saw Atsuko walking over to her.
"Oh hey Acchan."
"Come on Takamina we're going to be late for gym."
"Oh right."
Minami was silently swearing on the inside. She had completely forgotten about gym class. She knew she was screwed if she went to the class. Minami got changed and then went out to the gym where everyone else was.
"Ok everyone today we're going to take it easy today and play a nice friendly game of dodge ball!" the teacher said.
"Crap." Minami said to herself.
"Ok I need everyone to line up so I need two captains. Sae, Sayaka you two are captains. Pick your players."
Minami was about to walk over to the wall when the teacher stopped her.
"Not you Minami. Your mother called and told me about your situation. I am terribly sorry. So today I want you to go over and sit next to Matsui-san."
The teacher pointed over to Rena who was silently sitting by herself watching the others play. Minami walked over and sat next to Rena. The two were silent for a while until Minami decided to speak.
"So why are you here?"
"I have a really bad case of asthma. If I do too much I have trouble breathing." Rena said.
"Oh that's too bad."
"Why are you here?"
"I have a bad stomach ache."
"Oh. Well since you're here, how about we talk for a bit."
"Sure what do you want to talk about?"
"Well for starters let's talk about that heart condition."
Minami got silent. She couldn't believe what she just heard. How did Rena know about Minami's heart condition?
"What do you mean?" Minami said.
"I mean you're heart condition. I know you have one." Rena said.
"Oh and how?"
"I saw you clenching your chest in pain and taking pills."
"I had heart burn and the pills were supposed to help calm it down."
"Then how come you have a pace maker?"
"How did you know?"
"I saw your scar."
Minami was silent again.
"I won't tell anyone." Rena finally said.
"You won't?" Minami said.
"No. You must have a good reason for now telling anyone so I won't question it. But I do want to tell you to be careful."
"Thank you Rena."
"Rena-chan!"
Minami looked out and saw Jurina waving at Rena.
"Oi pay attention!"
Sae threw the ball aiming it right at Jurina's face. But then Sayaka caught it right before it hit.
"Nice try!"
"Jurina focus!"
"Hai!"
Jurina went back to playing and Minami and Rena watched. Then when the game ended, Jurina came running over.
"Rena-chan!"
Jurina latched onto Rena like a baby koala.
"Jurina I can't breathe!"
"Ahh sorry!"
"You did good out there." Rena said.
"Thanks. I did it for you." Jurina said.
"No you did it so you wouldn't get hit in the face."
"That too."
"Well class is over. We better get going now. See you later Takamina."
"Bye Rena, bye Jurina." Minami said.
"Bye! Come on Rena-chan. I got you some of that spicy curry bread you love so much."
"Yay!"
The two walked out holding hands. Minami was so distracted by the two that she didn't notice Atsuko sneaking up on her.
"Takamina!"
Minami nearly fell out of her seat.
"Ahhh! Acchan don't scare me like that!" Minami said.
"Jeez Takamina I never knew you were suck a scardy cat." Atsuko said.
Minami was lucky. Atsuko's little stunt wasn't enough to send her into a heart attack. But she thought she was close.
"Hey Takamina why didn't you play today?"
"I was having a bad head ache."
"Aww that's too bad. I really wanted to play with you."
"I'm sorry Acchan."
"Here let me check you."
Atsuko leaned in and touched foreheads with Minami. Atsuko was so close that Minami thought she could just kiss her. Her heart was starting to race so she pulled back before things got worse.
"You seem fine." Atsuko said.
"No I don't think so." Minami said.
"How about you and me have a race. Loser has to buy the winner's lunch for a week."
"No Acchan I really don't want to."
"Come one. It'll just be to the end of the gym and back."
"No Acchan."
"Come on please!"
Acchan gave Minami a puppy dog look that she knew she couldn't resist.
"Alright fine I'll do it."
"Yay! Then let's go!"
Minami and Atsuko got into they're racing positions and waited for the go signal. With Sayaka as the referee, she said go and they were off. Minami was trying to make it look real but at the same time not try too hard.
"Come on Takamina!"
Atsuko saw how Minami wasn't trying to she got behind her and started pushing Minami.
"Acchan no!"
Minami started running faster so Atusko wouldn't push her over. The only bad thing was her heart was racing like crazy and she could feel herself starting to lose it. Everything started to fade away as her legs became weak and she dropped onto the floor.
"Minami!"
"Guess this is goodbye now. Right?"
It was silent. Minami thought she was dead but actually she was quiet wrong. Minami woke up to the sound of whistling. She looked over and saw Mariko sitting in a chair.
"Mariko? What are you doing here?" Minami asked.
"I saw you collapse so I took you. You were ablout to lose it. But then some strange girls walks over to me and hands me the batteries used in your pace maker." Mariko said.
"Who was the girl?"
"Uh long black hair, small eyes, looks kinda weak."
"Rena..."
"Rena? As in Matsui Rena?"
"Yeah. What about her?"
"Her family owns all the hospitals in Tokyo."
"No way!"
"Yeah. That explains why she had the batteries. It's thanks to her I was able to save your life."
"I will have to thank her."
"Yes but for now there's someone who wants to see you."
Mariko opened the door and Atsuko came running in.
"Takamina!"
Atsuko ran over and hugged Minami. Minami gave Mariko a "does she know" face and Mariko shook her head no.
"I'm sorry for making you run like that." Atsuko said.
"It's alright. You were only trying to have fun." Minami said.
"But I made you pass out. I felt horrible."
"Its' alirght. I'm better now and that's all that matters."
"I'm sorry Minami!"
Atsuko burried herself in Minami's tiny body and cried. Minami was glad that Atsuko didn't know about her heart. Other wise things would've gone bac. She'll tell her eventually. But for now, Minami was enjoying her time with Atsuko.
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There's chapter 6! Again, because school has started I won't be updating as fast. So for now please tell me what you think!
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MIYU chan!!!
Thank you for this chapter!!
muah
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Thanks for the update :D Def enjoying your fic :) Oh, Rena was awesome here! Wait to save Takamina!! ^^ & Aw, I feel bad in a way that Minami hasn't told Atsuko though she has good reasons. It'l just be sad for Acchan as well when she finds out. Thanks again for the update :) Looking forward to your next chap as always :D
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aww minami T_T...
wmatsui was oso gorgeous
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ahh~ sorry for making you misunderstood :P , i love all the couple too :wub: , i just said that for fun XD
and i also love the way you write about all the couple not only this fic but the other fic too (yes, i have read them all :grin: )
about this chap,
Rena's family own a hospital, XD and help Minami in the right timing :twothumbs
Minami should start to learn how to say no to Acchan too :smhid , and the future will be more complicated when she have to tell Acchan :cry:
thank for update~ :cow:
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:shocked ahh so that's why Rena kind a knew because in this case her family owning a hospital and all she paid attention to those
kind of stuff... (wow then she's rich XD )
And Jurina LoL pay more attention to the game and not the pale beauty sitting there on the bench!
Thank you for your update!
Mmm right school is important so take your time :)
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wow Rena knows about Rena she scared me :on lol:
I'm really happy that Takamina is ok :fainted:
and enjoying her time with Acchan :nya:
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Awww yay I'm so happy that Takamina didn't die that would've probably made the story extremely short haha. It's a good thing Rena's family owns the hospitals. I can't wait for the next chapter :)
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Poor Takamina. I gor scared for a minute there.... :OMG:
I' looking forward to the kiss!!!!!!!!!!!
Update Soon!!!!!!!!!!!
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@miayaka: I'm glad you liked the chapter. Look forward to more! :)
@arrow27: Rena to the rescue! And yeah it will be sad when Atsuko finds out. Or will she? :twisted:
@Haruko: Minami was saved! And there will be more wmatsui moments in the future. :P
@Rukaeru: Good! Just don't have a heart attack! XD
@kazuski:Oh ok good. And I can't believe you've read all my stories. Thank you so much! XD
@Megumi: Rena knows all and Jurina is just her clueless pet. Ahh they really are a good pairing. Oh and thank you for understanding school and stuff. :wub:
@mo-chan: Rena saves the day and because of that Minami can spend more time with her Acchan. Oh the joy! :inlove:
@Sasshii: I would never let Minami die! She's the main character so how could I let her die? That wouln't be right. :smhid
@TakaminaBG: The kiss will be coming soon. I plan on putting it in chapter 10 because I got a huge event planned for it. :twisted:
Ahh I hate school! There's so much work to do! Then when I finally have time to write I'm too tired to! But yet I muster up the last of my strength to give you this chapter. I hope you guys enjoy it!
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Chapter 7
(Day 7)
Minami was sitting at her desk when Yuko walked over to her.
"Hey Takamina!"
"What's up Yuko?"
"I need your help." Yuko said.
"What?" Minami asked.
"Would you and Acchan be willing to go on a date with Nyannyan and me?"
"What?"
"I'm taking Nyannyan on a date and she's afraid to go alone. So I wanted to ask if you and Acchan would come with us."
"Uh Yuko Acchan and I aren't really that close."
"Are you kidding me? You two are practically around each other like lovers. Plus she talks about you nonstop when you're not around."
"Seriously?"
"Yeah! So how about it? Will you come with us?"
"Well alright fine. Just make sure Acchan knows what's going on."
"Yeah about that, you're going to have to ask her out."
"What?"
"You agreed to it!"
Yuko ran before Minami could say anything else.
"Stupid squirrel. Guess I'll have to ask her."
"Ask me what?"
Minami turned around and saw Atsuko standing behind her.
"Acchan I wanted to ask you something." Minami said.
"What is it?" Atsuko said.
"Would you like to go out with me. Yuko is taking Haruna out and doesn't want to go alone so she wants us to come along too."
"That sounds great! Where are we going?"
"I don't know."
"Ok. Well I'll be happy to go as long as I'm with you."
"Ok then I'll pick you up when it's time to go."
"Great!"
Atsuko left and then Yuko came back over.
"So what did she say?" Yuko asked.
"She said she'd go." Minami said.
"Sweet! Ok so meet me us at this cafe at seven tonight."
"Why so late?"
"Because they're having a special deal and I want to get there when they start offering it."
"Alright. This better not be some kind of tirck."
"I promise you it is not."
"Ok then I'll see you at seven."
"Great!"
Later on that say, Minami walked to Atsuko's house where she picked her up.
"You ready to go?" Minami asked.
"Let's."
Minami and Atsuko arrive at the cafe and were surprised to see Yuko and Haruna in facy outfits.
"Where are your dresses?" Haruna asked.
"What dresses?" Minami asked.
"Yuu-chan you didn't tell them about the theme?"
"Sorry guys. Takamina I forgot to tell you to dress fancy. The theme is elegance and you can't get in unless you're in a fancy outfit." Yuko said.
"Now that's ridiculous."
"It's not. So hurry up and find something to wear."
"We don't have anything."
"I think I do."
Haruna walked over to a nearby clothing rack and pulled out a suit and dress.
"One of you take the dress and the other the suit."
"Isn't that stealing?"
"We'll give them right back."
"Alright then I'll wear the suit." Minami said.
"And I'll wear the dress!" Atsuko said.
"Good then go change. It's going to open soon."
The two changed and Minami came out in a white suit with her hair slicked back and a rose in the front pocket. Meanwhile Atsuko was wearing a small strapless black dress with a white rose on the upper left part. When they saw each other they were both blushing.
"Alright now let's go!"
The doors opened and everyone went inside. Minami and the others were led to a table and handed menus. The ordered what they wanted and then the waitor left.
"What is this place Yuko?" Minami asked.
"Amant Paradis."
"What?"
"It's French for Lover's Paradise." Yuko said.
"French? That explains all the fancy stuff. But this place looks super expensive. How are we paying for this?"
"We're not."
"What?"
"That's the thing. The reason why we came here is because they're having a dance contest. Winner gets free meals for a month!"
"What happens if we lose?"
"We have to pay the bill which isn't going to be cheap."
"Yuu-chan you idiot!"
Haruna reached over and smacked Yuko on the head.
"Easy Nyannyan don't worry. We'll win the competition because I know how to dance." Yuko said.
"You know how to waltz?" Haruna said.
"Yes I do. I just learned it last night."
"We're doomed."
"Takamina do you know how to dance?" Atsuko asked.
"Well... I think I do."
Back when she was young, she watched a lot of princess movies. She watched them so many times that she actually was able to copy all the dances for both male and female parts.
"Ok then let's go out there and win!"
An announcer came out and said the competition was about to start. Minami took Atusko's hand and lead her out to the dance floor.
"Are you ready?"
"I've been ready."
The music started and everyone started to dance. Minami had to remember everything that she learned from the movies.
"1,2,3,1,2,3..."
"Takamina it's ok. You're doing great." Atsuko said.
She was right. Minami had her hands in the proper position with one hand on Atsuko's waist and the other intwined with her hand. Together, they danced to the beat in perfect harmony. They're bodies moving along keeping up with the speed of the music. It was as if they already knew they were doing. Going around were judges watching you dance. If you weren't dancing correctly then they would tell you were out.
"Ouch!"
Minami looked over and saw Haruna rubbing her foot.
"Yuu-chan you stepped on my foot!"
"I'm sorry Nyannyan!"
"You two out!"
"What?"
Yuko and Haruna walked off the dance floor and now there was only Minami and Atsuko along with another couple.
"Minami."
"Hm?"
"Let's finish this."
"Yeah."
The music started to pick up a little bit and so did Minami and Atsuko. With every step, Minami put passion in it. They're bodies were starting to get closer and closer to the big finish. When it came, Minami twirled Atusko three times pushing her out and then pulling her back in. Then to finish things off, she held Atsuko close and then did one of those low bows you see in movies.
"Wow..."
The crowd clapped as the lights came back on and Minami realized her and Atsuko were the only ones on the dance floor. The announcer came over to congradulate Minami and Atsuko. Then they went back to their table and got the free food that they deserved.
"I never knew you were that good!" Yuko said.
"You two looked so cool out there!" Haruna said.
"Yeah. Takamina I never knew you could dance like that." Atsuko said.
"Same to you."
"Well let's eat you guys! It's free!"
"Yeah!"
Minami ate like a king getting as many servings as she wanted. While she was eating, she started to notice something strange about Haruna. Haruna's face had gotten slightly red and she was leaning one end to another. Not to mention she was hiccuping every couple minutes.
"Hey Haruna are you ok?"
"Yeah I'm fine!"
"You sure?"
"Yeah I'm..hic...fine..hic."
"Yuko what had Haruna been drinking?" Minami asked.
"Uh some fancy juice I think." Yuko said.
"Let me see it."
Yuko held up the glass and Minami knew exactly what it was.
"Yuko that's a martini. How may has Haruna had?"
"About five I think."
"Yuko you need to take Haruna home I think she's drunk."
"Seriously?"
"Yeah. Let's leave now. Come on Acchan. Acchan?"
Minami looked over and saw Atsuko with her head down.
"Oi Acchan?"
"Yeah hic!"
"Oh great not you too."
"I'm fine talking little person hic."
"Come on I'm taking you home."
Minami grabbed Atsuko and dragged her out of the cafe. She was worried about Haruna and Yuko fearing what a drunk Haruna might do to Yuko. Or the other way around with a perverted squirrel and a helpless rape victim. But she had to worry about the drunk Atsuko. She knew if she took her home to her parents then they would kill her. So she decided to take her to her house. Minami walked in the front door and then set Atsuko on the couch.
"Man Acchan you're heavy!"
"I'm a brick!"
"Yes yes you are. I'm going to get in the shower."
Minami was about to get up but then she felt something grab her.
"Acchan let go. I'm going to take a shower."
"Yada!"
Atsuko pulled Minami down onto the couch and wrapped her arms around her to prevent escape.
"Acchan let go!"
"Yada!"
Atsuko tightened her grip making hard for Minami to breathe.
"Ok ok I won't leave!"
Atsuko loosened her grip a little but still help on tightly.
"Minami. Please don't every leave me." Atsuko said.
"Atsuko..."
"I don't want to be alone again. You're the only thing I have left."
"What do you mean?"
"I have no one. Everyone I loved is dead to me. You're all I have left."
Tears started to roll down Atsuko's face. Minami caught one and started to wipe away the others.
"It's ok Acchan. I'm here and I will always be with you." Minami said.
"Good. Don't you ever leave me."
"I won't."
Atsuko passed out right after that. Minami did what she promised and decided to stay there. She would always stay right next to Atsuko for as long as she could. But sadly, that time is ticking away and who knows how much longer she can be with Atsuko.
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Well I hope everyone enjoyed the chapter! School is a killer on me right now so I'm doing my best to keep up with everything. Please tell me what you think!
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Aww atsumina i feel i litlle like majisuka 1 when we jnow that yuko gonna die ...
jajaj poor yuuchan.. now she need to be so strong. I bet that haruna gonna intent to seduce her but yuko need to be so strong because she cant make smexy time with a drunk haruna.. right?
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Oh crap. I don't know if I should be upset or glad I read this now. :huhuh I'm guessing you update everyday basically, so I'll be waiting for your next update. :D :thumbsup
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Damn it! Why would she promise that! She's gonna die :on speedy:, this so sad! She should have told her
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poor acchan sad really sad :fainted:
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So Acchan parents are dead?
Takamina why are you so sweet and in a white suit... GOD I WANT TO SEE THAT!!!!!!!!
A KISS IN CHAPTER 10?!?!?! I WANT IT NOW!!!! jUST KIDDING!
UPDATE SOON!
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YEHEY! YEHEY! YEHEY!
UPDATE!
UPDATE!
UPDATE!
THANK YOU FOR THIS CHAPTER..
IT'S VERY NICE..
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Well you never know haha some authors like to kill off their characters but, Takamina is so sweet. I can't wait for the tenth chapter :D
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"Oi Acchan?"
"Yeah hic!"
"Oh great not you too."
"I'm fine talking little person hic."
"Come on I'm taking you home."
LOLLOLOLOL talking little person now I imagine that candy commercial AKB did, dancing kids but with the members head LOLOLOL :rofl:
Aww poor Acchan so she lives by herself that's maybe why she goes around and beating up yankees :cry:
Thank you for your update!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
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Oh~ I wonder what a drunk Kojiharu would do to Yuko hehe
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@Rukaeru: I'm glad you like it! I will try to make it more romantic and sweet in the future so I hope you continue reading! :)
@Haruko: Who knows? Maybe Yuko had her way with Haruna. Who knows. :?
@Crossing Crossroads: Well how you feel is up to you. I hope you continue reading the fic! :)
@sasumiofjp: Now now we don't need to tell her yet. Acchan will find out eventually.
@mo-chan:Yeah Acchan's life is sad. But don't worry! Minami will be there to comfort her. :P
@TakaminaBG: No Acchan's parents aren't dead. And Takamina in a white suit is so cool! Don't worry the kiss will come soon. :P
@Wmatsui22: There will be more updates in the future so look forward to them! :lol:
@Sasshii: But I'm not like some authors. I like to keep everyone alive and well! XD
@Megumi: We don't know much about Acchan but don't worry. Chapter 10 will explain it all. :)
@kahem: We'll never know. Just imagine what would happen in your own brain. :lol:
Ok everyone here is chapter 8! School has been tough so it's been hard updating. But I will do my best! I hope you enjoy the chapter.
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Chapter 8
Minami was walking in the street a car pulled up to her. She stopped and watched the window roll down. In it was no one other than Sayaka.
"What do you want?" Minami asked.
"I need you to come down with me for a while." she said.
"Why?"
"Just get in. I'll explain to you on the way."
Minami got into the car and Sayaka drove off.
"So what do you need?" Minami asked.
"I need you to help me with something."
"What?"
Sayaka took in a deep breath before telling Minami.
"I need help with being more girly." Sayaka said.
"What?" Minami said with a confused look.
"Well for the longest time I've been called cool and always compared to a guy. But actualy I hate it and want to be more girly. So I came asking you because you're the girliest person I know."
"Seriously? Why can't you asking someone like Yukirin or Haruna?"
"They're all busy with other stuff."
"So you're asking me?"
"Yes."
"You're crazy Sayaka."
"Well you're the only person I left. I can't ask Sae because we're going out and I wanted to surprise her by looking cute. But I can never look cute because cute just doesn't work with me. But you look really cute with that ribbon in your hair everyday. It's like your signature look."
"Really? I never thought about it that way. Guess that's what it is."
"Yeah so I need your help picking out and outfit for me?"
"Sure."
"Great cause we're here."
Sayaka parked into the parking lot and the two stepped out. The store was one of the stores lots of girls Minami's age goes to. Minami just never goes shopping anymore because she's going to die anyway so what's the point of buying stuff? The two walked in and were greeted by the store clerk.
"Alright let's get started. I was thinking some cute and pink."
"Well then let's look around."
The two started search all the racks and shelves. Then eventually Sayaka came running over with a pink skirt and white blouse and a pink head band with hearts on it.
"Go try it on."
Sayaka came back out and Minami almost bursted into laughter. Sayaka looked so stupid in the outfit. Her legs were too long for the skirt and the shirt didn't look right. Not to mention the head band looked like a head light you see on cars.
"Why don't we try something else on. Here try this."
Minami handed Sayaka a random outfit she saw and had her try it on. When she came out again, Minami almost lost it. The shirt she was wearing was a puke green color and the pants looked too tight. The whole image didn't look right.
"How about this?"
Sayaka came out in a light blue dress with frills on the ends. But to Minami, she looked like an old lady getting ready for bed at 6:30.
"Try something else."
"How about you try on something. I want to see you how do it."
"Alright fine."
Minami picked out a plad skirt and a pink shirt that had a heart on it. Then she took a pink bow and put it on her head.
"You look so cute!"
"Really?"
"Yeah!"
From the side, Minami heard someone say,
"Look it's a real life chibi!"
"I just wanna hug her!" (I would say that)
"Let me try that on."
Sayaka tried on the outfit Minami tried on but when she came out she didn't look right.
"Mou why can't I look cute!"
"Well maybe we're looking at the wrong style. Let's try asking someone for help."
Minami found a store clerk to help them. She took a long look at Sayaka and then said,
"Your body type isn't really suited for cute. But I think I can make something even better."
The store clerk left and then came back with a new outfit. Sayaka tried it on and came back out. For once Minami didn't laugh and was actually surprised. Sayaka looked cute. She was in short shorts and a baggy white shirt that had a banana on it. It was a little baggy but it look just right on Sayaka. Along with some cute sandals and some bracelets, Sayaka looked cute.
"Wah this is perfect!" Minami said.
"Thank you so much for helping us." Sayaka said.
"Let's go check you out."
Sayaka bought the outfit and them left. Now they were on their way to meet Sae.
"I can't wait to see how she reacts."
Sayaka walked over to Sae and when Sae saw Sayaka her jaw dropped.
"Sa-sa-Sayaka?"
"Hey!"
"You look so cute!"
Sae jumped up and hugged Sayaka.
"Thanks Takamina!"
"No problem."
The two walked away leaving Minami alone. But then someone snuck up behind her and tickled her sides.
"Hey!"
"Got you!"
Minami turned around saw Atsuko standing behind her.
"Acchan? What are you doing out here?" Minami asked.
"I was around." Atsuko said.
"Why?"
"Just because. Nice outfit by the way."
"Thanks I got it at the sto-"
Minami stopped as she realized something important.
"What?"
"I forgot to pay for the outfit!"
"Takamina!"
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I'm sorry this chapter is kinda short. I barely have time to update anymore. Please tell me what you think! Also to all my mayuki fans, I've started a new fic with yuukimoko-san so check it out. It's called Articficial Love. Anyways, I will do my best to update soon!
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lol poor Minami is spending her final days helping out each member with a problem of theirs :P But it's becoming a happy & interesting life for her :) TAKAMINA COMITTED THEFT! Hope she went back to the store to pay for that lol :P & though short, the Atsumina moment in the end was cute ^^ Thanks for the update even with your busy schedual. Wish you luck with that by the way :D
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OMG!! takamina is a robber... jajaja cute chapter
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Takamina.... You ae so stupid and a robber!!!!
How can you live a store with out paying????
Takamna is a good person helping others with their problems.
I HOPE she WONT Die (or I hope you wont kill her :D)
Update Soon!!! :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup
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baka ne Takamina wa :hiakhiakhiak: :wahaha:
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*imagining what Kojiharu did to Yuko*... OMG brain!
I think cute don't really suit Sayaka. Sayaka is pretty and sexy hehe
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:rofl: Sayaka trying to be cute!
Well personally I think that Sayaka is surely a pretty person XD
She had become a truly beauty trough years. :wub:
"Just because. Nice outfit by the way."
"Thanks I got it at the sto-"
Minami stopped as she realized something important.
"What?"
"I forgot to pay for the outfit!"
"Takamina!"
:rofl: LoOL !
Anyway thank you for your update!
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@arrow27: Thank you for understanding! And yes Minami went back to pay for the clothes. She is the captain of AKB and it's her job to help the other members. :)
@Haruko: Minami is a theif! But I made sure she paid it! XD
@TakaminaBG: She is stupid sometimes but that's why I love her. And don't worry, THERE WILL BE NO KILLING! :)
@mo-chan: Indeed. Indeed she is. :lol:
@kahem: I agree Sayaka is cool. But she can act pretty darn cute and that sets my moe meter through the roof! :wub: :inlove:
@Megumi: Sayaka has become a goddess who I worship and pray to everyday! Thank you for liking the chapter. :wub:
Well here is the next chapter! The big kiss scene will come after this one so I hope you all enjoy it!
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Chapter 9
(Day 9)
Minami was in the middle of class when Acchan suddenly came running in.
"Takamina guess what!" Atsuko said.
"Acchan I'm in the middle of class. Wait until after." Minami said.
"But I have to tell you now!"
"Acchan no!"
"Maeda-san you are disrupting class. Please leave the room." the teacher said.
"But this is really important!"
"Make it quick."
"Ok. Takamina look what I found!"
Atsuko pulled out an old photo book of Minami back when she was in grade school. She looked a lot different back then and hated it. She thought she threw that old book out but Atsuko must've had a copy.
"Look it's me and you back in grade school!"
Atsuko pointed to the picture of Minami and her on the swing set. That picture was really embarrassing because in the picture Minami was upside down flashing her underwear at the camera.
"Takamina you looked so cute!"
"Let me see!"
"Me too!"
Everyone started to gather around Atsuko to see Minami.
"This is worse than my own mother!" Minami thought.
"Takamina you look cute in this one!" Haruna said.
"She looks like a boy in this one." Jurina said.
"Takamina are you eating glue in this one?" Yuko said.
"That's enough!"
Minami took the photo book and threw it out into the hall. Then she grabbed Acchan and threw her out as well.
"I'll talk to you later."
When class ended, Minami found Atsuko waiting out in the hall.
"What was that all about?" Minami said with an angry tone.
"I wanted to show you what I found." Atsuko said.
"Why didn't you wait until after class?"
"I wanted to show you really badly and couldn't wait."
"You embarrassed me in front of everyone!"
"I'm sorry Takamina."
"Don't talk to me for a while. I need to think about it."
"I'm sorry."
Atsuko hugged Minami and then walked away. Minami felt bad about yelling at Atsuko so she tried to run after her. But suddenly her body became weak and she couldn't move. Her chest started thumping like crazy and she was having a hard time breathing. She fell to the ground and passed out soon after.
"Oi Minami!"
Minami opened her eyes and saw Mariko staring at her.
"Mariko? What happened?"
"You had an attack. The pace maker alerted me so I rushed over and got you. You're in my office now." Mariko said.
"How long have I been out?" Minami asked.
"A couple hours. The pace maker brought you back but you were still out."
"What exactly happened?"
"Well the only thing that could cause that is a lot of stress. Did you get into a fight with someone?"
"Yeah with Atsuko."
"Well there's your problem. Your heart rate went up to unstable levels and the pace maker couldn't keep up with it."
"So what do I do now?"
"Well I could set the pace maker to a stonger setting but that's going to take a while. So for now just take your pills and go. Try to relax a little and don't do anything that would make that heart rate go up."
"Alright thanks Mariko."
Minami took her medicine and then left. It was four o clock which meant Atsuko was just getting out of school. Minami thought she could make it in time if she caught a ride. She got on a bus and off to school. When Minami got there most of the kids were already gone. But she knew Atsuko was there because her bike was still parked. Minami walked into the school and started searching for Atsuko.
"Acchan! Where are you?"
Minami wandered the halls and still couldn't find her. Atsuko was no where in sight.
"Acchan!"
"Takamina?"
Minami turned around and sae Rena staring at her.
"I'm looking for Acchan. Have you seen her anywhere?"
"I think she's on the roof. She looked pretty upset to. I wonder what's wrong."
"Ok thanks Rena!"
Minami got up to the roof as fast as she could. There leaning up against the fence was Atsuko with a blank expression on her face.
"Acchan."
Minami started to walk towards Atsuko but then Acchan started to walk away.
"Acchan!"
"Don't talk to me!'
Atsuko started to run making it difficult for Minami. But in the end she was able to catch up to her and latch onto Acchan like a koala. She held on for dear life not moving and inch.
"Let go of me!"
"Acchan stop!'
"Let go!"
"No! Acchan I'm sorry!"
Atsuko stoppped moving. She looked over at Minami with tears filled in her eyes.
"You really mean it?" she said.
"Yes I mean it. I'm really sorry for what I did and I feel terrible. I wasn't thinking and I ended up hurting you. I'm really sorry Acchan. Can you please forgive me?"
"Hmmm...."
Atsuko looked at Minami with judgemental eyes. Then she finally said,
"Ok I forgive you but on one condition."
"What?"
"You have to let me take a picture with you."
"Eh?"
Atsuko reached into her bag and pulled out a photo book.
"I made this to put in pictures of you in it. Look."
Atsuko showed Minami all the pictures she took. Some of them were of her but most of them were of Minami. She had pictures of Minami when she was laughing, eating, sleeping, even studying. It was like Atsuko was her little stalker.
"Why did you make this?" Minami asked.
"Because I wanted to keep them as memories." Atsuko said.
"Why?" Minami thought atusko knew about her heart.
"Because I like to have them so I can look back at them in the future."
"Ok so you want to take one of me with you?"
"YES!"
"Alright then let's get over with it."
"Ok say cheese!"
Atsuko took the picture and Minami blinked from the flash.
"Wait I think my eyes were closed." Minami said.
"Too bad. It's going in the book!" Atsuko said.
"No Acchan I want you to have good photos of me."
"I like silly ones too."
"Acchan!"
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Well there's chapter 9! 10 is coming up next so I hope you guys like it! Please tell me what you think and check out my OS and my new story with yuukimoko. Oh god I sound like a salesmen. Well check it out when you have the time and leave a comment. Thanks!
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awww atsumina... I think that acchan gonna kiss takamina´s cheek :D in the photo :D so bad
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Aw, that was such a cute and awesome chapter :D Poor minami had an attack again. The end was great with Minami and Atsuko taking that pic together :) Thanks for updating, as always i look forward to the next chapter :D
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Waw..
The story was so deep.. :'(
:cry: :cry: :cry:
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AtsuMina always the swet couple. Thank you for this update....
I'M WAITING FOR CAHPTER 10!!! :ding:
Update SOOON!!!
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WOW!!! YOU UPDATE VERY FAST!!! (THAT'S GOOD)
I'M VERY THRILLED AT EVERY CHAPTER YOU MAKE :D
I HOPE IT'S HAPPY ENDING
THANK YOU
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@Haruko: I don't know maybe. But I do know they will be kissing in this chapter so look forward to it! :lol:
@Rukaeru: You want lovey? Alright then I'll give some! This two parter is going to be filled with lovey dovey so I hope you like it! :)
@arrow27: Well I'm back and it's the weekend which means I will have plenty of time to update. I hope you enjoy the chapter. :)
@Jessye: And it's not over yet! We still have a while to go! So get ready for a huge tear jerker! :P
@TakaminaBG: Here is the chapter you have been waiting for! I hope you like it! I know how much you've been wanting the huge atsumina kiss and I will give it to you now! XD
@Wmatsui22: Well of course the ending will be happy. Or will it? That's only for me to decide. :twisted:
Well everyone here is the long awaited chapter 10 kiss scene! I imagined this all week during my classes and now I am here to show it to you. There will be crying, fighting, and even a little kissing. Who am I kidding, there's gonna be a lot of kissing! I hope you like it!
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Chapter 10 part 1
(Day 10)
For the past few days, Minami had noticed that Atsuko had not shown up to school for quite some time. She was thinking that maybe Atsuko was sick and thought about visiting her. But just a couple days ago she saw Atsuko out in the Shibuya district. When she tried to talk to her Atsuko only ran. Minami got worried and started to ask around if anyone knew what was wrong. She first went to Mayu and Yuki since Mayu knew about everything about everyone.
"Hey Mayuyu!"
"What is it Takamina?"
"Have you seen Acchan around lately?" Minami asked.
"No. She's been gone for a week now hasent' she?" Mayuyu said.
"Yeah I'm sorry to get worried."
Suddenly Yuki cut in.
"You know a couple days ago I saw her in the Metropalin district a couple nights ago in front of a hostess club. She looked all dressed up and stuff like she was one of the hostesses."
"No way!"
"Yeah. I even saw her walk in with a guy."
"There's no way Acchan would do something like that."
"I don't know but that's what I saw."
"Well I don't believe you. I'm going to ask Yuko."
"Ok well let me know how things go." Mayuyu said.
"I will."
"And as for you Yukirin I think you need to be punished for making Takamina upset."
"Not again!"
Minami went to the front hall where Yuko was latched onto Haruna trying to lick her ears.
"Hey Yuko I need to ask you something."
"What is it?" Yuko asked.
"Have you seen Acchan lately?"
"No not really. Nyannyan have you?"
"No I haven't. Now stop licking my ears!" Haruna said.
"But they're so cute!"
"Ok thanks for the help. Good luck Haruna."
"Don't leave me!"
Minami went to the main hall where Rena and Jurina were hanging around.
"Hey Rena have you seen Acchan around?"
"No I'm afriad not. Why?" Rena asked.
"I haven't seen her in a while and I'm getting worried."
"Well I haven't seen her. Have you Jurina?"
"No but I think Sayaka saw her today." Jurina said.
"Really? Where is she?"
"In the gym with Sae."
"Thanks Jurina!"
"No problem. Now Rena what do you say when you want melonpan?"
"Aiin~"
"Good girl!"
Minami ran to the gym where Sae and Sayaka were playing a one on one basketball game. Minami ran out and took the ball away from them so they'd listen.
"Hey!"
"I need to ask Sayaka something. It'll only be a minute Sae." Minami said.
"So what do you need?" Sayaka asked.
"Jurina said you saw Acchan today. Where did you see her?"
"Uhh up on the roof why?"
"I need to talk to her. She's been gone for a few days and I've been worried."
"Well you better get up there soon. She might have left already."
"I will. Thanks!"
Minami threw the ball and Sayaka took it and went in for a layup.
"Hey no fair!"
"Too slow Sae!"
Minami ran up to the roof and found Acchan staring out into the city. Minami quietly walked over and sat next to her. There was silence and then Minami finally said,
"Acchan. Is everything alright?"
"Yeah why do you ask?" Atsuko said.
"Well cause you've missed school for about a week now and I'm kinda worried. I just wanna know if everything is alright."
"I'm fine Minami. You're being an over protective dad."
"Hey I'm only thinking about you."
"Don't worry. I'm fine."
"Really? Then what's this."
Minami grabbed Atsuko's arm and held it up. She pulled the sleeve down revealing several brusies. Minami knew they were there because she saw them earlier.
"What are these?"
"They're nothing. I got into another fight."
"With who?"
"A really tough opponent."
"Acchan you're lying. I know you are. Now tell me the truth." Minami said staring right into Atsuko's eyes.
"I told you it's nothing." Atsuko said staring right back.
"Then why do you have these bruises?"
"I told you it was a fight!"
"I don't think so."
Minami pulled the sleeve further down revealing burn marks.
"You don't get burn marks in a fight."
"Let go!"
"No!"
Minami squeezed Atsuko's arm making her wince in pain. She hated doing it but it was the only way to keep her from running away.
"Tell me what's wrong!"
"Just leave me alone!"
"Not until you tell me what's wrong!"
"No!"
Atsuko kicked Minami causing her to let go. Atsuko ran away leaving Minami with a sore stomach. She got away this time but Minami wasn't done with her yet.
"I'm going to find out one way or another Acchan."
That night Minami followed Acchan home. Because she was small, she was able to hide very easily. She followed Acchan all the way home to some worn down apartment. Through a window, Minami saw Acchan walk in and sit at the table. Then a man walked over who must have been her father and stood next to her. Out of nowhere her father hit her knocking her down. He started yelling at Atsuko and kicking her.
"Acchan..."
Minami felt her stomach twist as she watched her best friend being beaten by her own father. There was a heavy feeling in Minami's chest and she didn't like it one bit. She was mad at Atsuko's father and wasn't going to tolerate it one bit.
"Don't worry Acchan. I'll save you. I promise..."
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Well there's part 1! What's gonig to happen to Atsuko? Well find out in part 2! Please tell me what you think and check out my OS! I'm going to update an atsumina OS so be on the look out. But for the meantime look forward to my next chapter! Oh and yuuki updated the other one I'm working on and I'm about to update it too so check that one out as well. Oh and I posted a new poll as well. I have alot on my plate don't I?
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Aww you lied to me.. you say gonna be a lot of kisses.. but -_-- poor acchan come on takaboy save your wifey..
jajaj kojiyuu scene make me happy like always
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Aw, poor Atsuko :( Hope Minami can save her!
& Lol @ Haruna yelling @ Takamina not to leave her alone with yuko :P Thanks for the update, i def enjoyed the chapter :D Can't wait to find out what happens next ^^ & Looking forward to your Atsumina OS as well :) Good luck ^^
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That chapter kinda just made me mad a little bit LOL I HATE HER FATHER UGHHHHH :banghead: Takamina better come to the rescue, she's not the husband in the relationship for nothing!
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I want to beat up her father so badly!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Acchan hold on, Takamina is going to save you!!!
Update Soon!!!!!!!!
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hehe.
hmm..
Update Soon!!!
Thank You..
it's very interesting story!!!
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Acchan :cry:
I wonder...if it's true what Yukirin said (hope not)
:rofl: Mayu you just had a reason to punish Yuki didn't you? LOL
Can't wait for next update!
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Poor Acchan :( I hope Takamina will save her soon.
Can't wait for the next update :D
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@Haruko: I'm sorry! But I like to lead up to big kiss scenes! Don't worry I won't let you down this time. :(
@arrow27: Minami shall save her! I will make sure of it. :)
@sasumiofjp: Don't worry her father will be punished one way or another. I will make sure of that. :twisted:
@TakaminaBG: Minami is on the job! She will rescue Acchan she will! XD
@Wmatsui22: Ok! Here's the next update! :)
@Megumi: I think Mayuyu just likes punishing Yukirin. Oh Mayuyu... :wub:
@Sasshii: Minami to the rescue! She will save her! :lol:
Minna! Here's part 2! I hope you like the update. It's got the kiss scene that I promise will be there.
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Chapter 10
(Day 10 still...)
Minami was angry. She was so angry that she just wanted to bust down the wall. Minami watched Atsuko's father beat her over and over. She wasn't sure when to strike but then when the fahter pulled out a bat, Minami knew she had to step in.
"Hang on Acchan!"
Minami knocked down the door and ran in.
"What the hell?"
"Takamina!"
"Get away from Acchan!"
Minami tackled the father and knocked him to the ground. Then she ran over to Atsuko and tried to stop the bleeding.
"Atsuko..."
"Minami? What are you doing here?"
"I'm here to save you. Come on."
Minami tried to get Atsuko up and walk out. But then Atsuko's father came from behind and grabbed Minami.
"Hey let go!"
"You're going to pay for that!"
The father slammed Minami onto the table causing it to break. Then he got on top of her and tried to strangle her. His huge hands wrapped around Minami's tiny neck and squeezed the life out of her. Minami knew she was going to be in trouble if she didn't do anything. But then she grabbed a fork and stabbed it in his arm.
"Ahh you bitch!"
Minami kicked the fahter in the stomach sending him flying back. Then she got up over to Atsuko.
"We need to get out of here."
"I don't think so!"
The father grabbed Minami's leg and dragged her across the floor. Then he picked her up and slammed her head against a window causing it to break. Her head started to bleed and get dizzy. Minami grabbed the father's arms and bit into one. He let go and Minami snuck under him. She grabbed a table leg and hit the father in the head.
"Die!"
Minami hit the father hard but the father hit Minami right in the stomach. Minami stepped back and the father took the oportunity to hit Minami again right in the side. But this time Minami grabbed onto the fahter's leg.
"Let go you midget!"
The father started punching Minami over and over again. But Minami held on. With every punch Minami slowly started to become weaker and weaker. She wasn't sure how much longer she was going to last.
"Atsuko...."
Minami didn't see it but Atsuko had grabbed a knife and snuck up behind her father. She took it and stabbed her father in the back. He fell over and Atsuko grabbed Minami.
"Minami!"
"Atsuko.."
"Hang on Minami hang on."
With the rest of her strength, Minami pressed a button on her watch. It sent out a silent signal alerting Mariko. Within a couple minutes Mariko pulled in and rushed into the house.
'What happened?"
"Who are you?"
"A doctor. We need to get her to the hospital."
"Hai!"
Atsuko helped Mariko carry Minami into her car. Then they got in and drove off to the hospital.
"Wait here."
Mariko carried Minami into the hospital while Atsuko waited outside. Through a glass window, she could see the doctors working on Minami.
"We got internal bleeding and three broken ribs. We may have a concussion and damage to the brain." Mariko said.
"Minami!"
"Doctor we're losing her!"
"Get me the dephibulators!" a nurse said.
"Wait don't!" Mariko said.
"Why?"
"She have a pace maker." she whispered so Atsuko didn't hear it.
"Then we need to operate."
"We don't have time!"
"Doctor we're losing her!"
"Minami!"
Mariko started pumping Minami's heart but still wasn't getting a response.
"Minami!"
Mariko closed the curtain so Atsuko couldn't see what happened. It was at that moment Atsuko realized that Minami might not make it. She might lose her only friend because of her father. Tears were rolling down Atsuko's eyes and she fell to her knees.
"MINAMI!"
When Atsuko woke up, she found herself on a bench. Someone put a blanket on her and a pillow. She looked around and found herself in a hospital room. She looked over and there lying on the bed was Minami attached to a oxygen mask and a IV's.
"Minami!"
The door opened and Mariko came in.
"She's going to be ok." Mariko said.
"What?"
"I was able to stop the bleeding and get her heart starting again. She has three broken ribs and a cincussion. There may be some damage to the brain."
"But she'll live?"
"Yes."
"Thank you so much!"
"I just wanted to check in on you. I will get going now."
Mariko left and when she did, Minami woke up. When she saw Atsuko she cried out her name.
"Acchan..."
"Minami!"
Atsuko took off the oxygen mask and helped Minami sit up.
"Are you ok? You're not hurthing anywhere are you?" Atsuko said.
"I'm fine Acchan. Just a little sore." Minami said.
"I can't belive you did this for me."
"Did what?"
"You saved me."
"I only did what I thought was right. I wanted to protect you."
"You're stupid you know that? Bakamina."
"I did it because I love you."
Atsuko was silent when she heard Minami. But then she smiled.
"I love you too Minami."
"The prove it."
"I will."
Atsuko lenaned in and kissed Minami right on the lips. The kiss was filled with passion and love. And when Minami broke it, Atsuko dove in for another one. The second one was filled with lust and and want. Atsuko wanted more fomr Minami but she pulled back because Minami was still hurt. She didn't want to hurt her. She didn't want to break her.
"Minami."
"Yeah?"
"I love you." Atsuko said.
"I love you too." Minami said.
"I don't want to leave you."
"And you won't. Your father is going to be arressted. You have no where to go."
"I don't."
"There's one place you can go. You came come with me."
"What?"
"Move in with me Atsuko."
"That's a great idea."
The two kissed again and this time they didn't stop.
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Well there's part 2! Please tell me what you think and let me know what you think!
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:yep: :heart:
Woow this time :thumbsup :bow:
Evil father :thumbdown:
Now they can live in the same roof I don't think Taka mom will mind.
:twothumbs
Thank you for your update!
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Oh ho ho I am very satisfied with ths chapter, this story can either be really happy or really sad, a hard decision :doh: BUT Loved the AtsuMina moments, it'll be even alot more when Takamina heals (https://encrypted-tbn1.google.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcSdNoQ1aP7JhTXzhaPei7T0wWns0WrTmEsKzT2A64TzVjfE-_Ec)
Good Chapter! Update soon, I'm all excited now!
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Aww yay, I'm glad Acchan's father is going to get arrested, what an ass. Also yay for Takamina and Acchan moving in together, I can already see all the fun times that will happpen.
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Kiss scene!!!! YAY!!!!
And they will live together!!!
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Wow intense chapter! It was really good, Acchan and Takamina really put up a fight against Acchans father. Glad he got what he deserved, and now shall be in prison! Atsumina moments sweet as always! Glad they confessed :D Thanks for the update :)
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YEHEY!
You update !!!
nice chapter!!
good job!!!
please update often :D
thank You
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That stupid A*****E!!!!! Hope he gets arrested!!
My AtsuMina kissed!!!!!!!! They are so sweet. NOW it's time for MORE than a KISS!!!!! :byebye:
Update SOON!!
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Curse that Father! D:< Takamina bein' so Protective and all. I'm glad that Acchan finally manage to move out with Takamina. Btw, Your Loyal Silent Reader here! 8D
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@Megumi: Now that they are living together, there's going to be a lot more atsumina moments. :oops:
@sasumiofjp: I like happy endings so there will be a happy ending. Although I can put in some sad moments as well. :)
@Sasshii: I think you like how things will turn out. I have a lot in stored for the two. :twisted:
@kahem: Yep they're together so I hope you like the rest of the story! :P
@arrow27: The father is gone so now Minami has Atsuko all to herself. I wonder what will happen. XD
@Rukaeru: I'm glad you liked the chapter! Look forward to more! :P
@Wmatsui22: I will do my best to update! :lol:
@TakaminaBG: He did get arressted! Yes there will be more kissing for everyone to enjoy! :inlove:
Well here is the next chapter. I hope you guys like it!
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Chapter 11
(Day 21)
It had been a week since Atsuko's father was arrested. Now that he's gone, Atsuko had been living with Minami. The two had gotten along very well and had become closer than ever before. Now they were going back to school after a long break because of Minami's recovery.
"Hey Takamina!"
Minami turned around and saw Mayuyu coming over.
"Hey Mayuyu. I haven't seen you in a while." Minami said.
"Yeah I heard about your accident. Are you ok?" Mayuyu asked.
"Yeah I'm fine."
"Hey I wanted to ask you something."
"What?"
"Yukirin hasen't been feeling very well. I was wondering what if you could help me."
"What's wrong with her?"
"I don't know. That's why I need you to help me."
"Alright let's go find her."
Minami, Atsuko and Mayuyu all ran to the classroom. There Yuki was sitting at her desk with her head down.
"Yukirin. Hey are you ok?"
"Nmmm..."
"What?"
"Hmmmm..."
"Yukirin?"
"I don't feel well."
"Are you sick?"
"I don't know."
Mayuyu took her hand and placed it on Yukirin's forhead.
"She doesn't feel hot."
"Then what could be the problem?" Atsuko asked.
"Takamina come here."
"Yeah?"
Yukirin grabbed Minami and held her close.
"Hey!"
"Soo nice..."
"Yukirin what are you doing?"
Minami tried to move but Yukirin had a tight grip on her.
"Yukirin let go of Takamina!" Mayuyu said.
"Don't wanna."
"Yukirin!"
"Acchan do something!"
"I think we should get someone to help." Atsuko said.
"But who?"
"Let's go get Sae maybe she'll know what to do."
"Go get her!"
While Atsuko and Mayuyu ran to get Sae, Minami was being pulled in closer to Yukirin.
"Yukirin what's wrong with you?"
"I don't know. I just really feel like hugging you."
A couple minutes later Mayuyu and Atsuko came back.
"Hey guys. So you want me to help Yukirin.?" Sae asked.
"Yeah. So help us out."
"Ok let me give it a try."
Sae stepped back a little to fix her hair and then stepped forward.
"Hey Yukirin! Why are you holding Takamina like that?"
"Because it feels right."
"Why don't you hold Mayuyu or me!"
"Because I don't want you."
"What about Mayuyu?"
"Maybe..."
"Well I don't know what to do."
"Yukirin let go of the midget! I want you to hold me!"
"No... I like this one better."
"Yuki..."
Mayuyu was about to start crying. But then Yuko and Haruna came in.
"Oshiri sister why are you crying?" Yuko said.
"Yuki... won't pay attention to me..."
"Aww. Well maybe I can help."
Yuko observed Yukirin studying her. Then she tried to pull Minami away from Yuki but Yuki only held her tighter. But then Yuko lightly stoked Yuki's back. This caused Yukirin to let go of Minami and grab onto Yuko.
"Takamina!'
Atsuko hugged Minami tightly glad to have her chibi back.
"Acchan can't breathe."
"Yuko get away from my Yukirin!" Mayuyu said.
"Hang on Mayuyu I think I'm onto something."
Yuko took her hand and placed it on Yukirin's chest. She gave a light squeeze and Yuki let out a small moan. Then she also held Yuko closer.
"Yuko!"
"I got it!" Yuko said.
"What?" Mayuyu said.
"Yukirin is suffering from lack of release."
"What?"
"Tell do you know if Yukirin "touches herself"."
"No..."
"Well she's like this because she needs release. Nyannyan once got like this so I was the one who had to do it."
"So you're telling me I have to-"
"Yep."
Mayuyu's face turned bright red.
"Come on Mayuyu you're the only one. Now take off your shirt."
Mayuyu took off her shirt and as soon as she did, Yuki let go of Yuko and grabbed Mayu.
"Come on Yukirin."
Mayuyu took Yukirin out of the room. Everything got silent as moans could be heard from down the hall. Then a couple minutes later Mayuyu and Yukirin came back holding hands. Yukirin had a happy expression on her face and Mayuyu's face as really red.
"Did you do it?" Yuko asked.
"Yep..."
"You're the best Mayuyu."
Yukirin kissed Mayuyu on the cheek. Then Mayuyu fell to the ground.
"Mayuyu!"
"Looks like the little cyborg couldn't take the heat."
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Chapter 11 done! I hope you guys like it! Please tell me what you think and don't forget to check out my OS. Thanks!
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hahahha!!!!!!
That was sooooooo~ cute!!!! Yukirin was horny~
Cyborg doesnt resist to that high temperature! Yuki be careful or you will destroy your cyborg~
Ahhh~ my imagination had gone wild from the little flu and with such chapter~ ahhh~ Im going to rest in bed so I wont faint.....Mayuki is the best~~
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The cyborg overheated!! :w00t:
"Why don't you hold Mayuyu or me!"
"Because I don't want you."
I LOL-ed. Sae just doesn't learn, does she?
Yukirin doesn't "touch herself" cos she's just waiting for Mayuyu to do it :twisted: But she made the poor little cyborg cry in the process! D'awww... *pats Mayuyu's head*
Everything got silent as moans could be heard from down the hall.
Man, that's got to be one very awkward moment XD
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:ding: AtsuMina!
eh? :dunno: ... continues to read... :nya: Yukirin why are you so clingy to everyone
but not Mayu? ....Yuko... :shock: EHHHH?
OH MY GOD! :stoned: ....R R RRR RELEASE? .... :shy2: :hiakhiakhiak: :on bleed:
MaYuki :rofl:
Hilarious as always!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
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Ehehehe :shy1:! Good to read something happy after that chapter, needed this lol, good chappie update soon
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-JEje i loove yuko`s idea but maybe what happen with atsumina´s couple :D *perver mind is working*
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@yuukimoko: You rest up now so you can feel better soon ok? I want you back so get well! :P
@seigus: Indeed that had to be an akward moment. And Sae should stick to Sayaka and give up on Yukirin. :lol:
@Megumi: Thank you for liking the chapter! Look forward to liking more! :)
@sasumiofjp: Yes the next few chapters are all going to be happy ones so you're in for a real treat. :P
@Haruko: Keep thinking and mayeb it'll come true. :lol:
Well here is chapter 12! Let's see what Wmatsui has planned for the little midget and her ace.
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Chapter 12
(Day 22)
Minami was walking in the middle of the road when she heard noise coming from inside an old factory. She looked in through a winddow and saw Jurina on the ground. She bleeding and there were four other people hovering over her. They were beating her and Minami had to stop it. But she knew if she went in alone then she would get crushed.
"Takamina!"
Minami looked over and saw Atsuko running over to her.
"Acchan shhhh!"
"Why?"
Minami pointed to the window and Atsuko saw everything.
"Ohhh..."
"Shhh!"
"So what are we going to do?" Atsuko asked.
"Ok then how about you stay here and I'll sneak around back and look for another entrance. Wait for my signal and when you hear it, we'll jump in and beat the guys to a pulp!" Minami said.
"Alright!"
Minami carefully walked around the building and found a door that was slightly open. She looked inside and saw more guys. There were about ten of them and they all looked mean and scary. She knew she was going to have a rough time and thought about backing out.
"Banzai!"
The glass broke and Atsuko came crashing in. She grabbed one guy and kneed him in the gut and then punched another guy in the face. Minami was just sitting there watching when she realized she had to be in there too.
"Gahhhh!"
Minami came in and tackled a guy that was about to attack Atsuko. Then she took another guy and punched him in the stomach. Minami had gotten good at regulating her heart beat. She could now do more than she could before without pulling it. Now Minami could fight to a certain limit.
"Takamina look out!"
There was a guy with a pipe aiming right at Minami's head. She dodged it and then took a piece of wood and whacked his legs. You could hear a loud crack as he fell to the ground. Minami finished him off with a blow to the face.
"Acchan on your left!"
A guy was coming at Atsuko with a chain and a hook at the end. She swung it at Atsuko but Atsuko mangaed to dodge it. The hook embedded itself into a box so he couldn't pull it back. Atsuko took this chance and attacked with a round house kick to the gut. He was sent flying back and crashed into some barrels.
"Grab Jurina and go!"
Atsuko grabbed Jurina and the two high tailed it out of there before they had time to recover and go after them. They ran all the way to their house. When Mianmi thought they were safe she began to talk.
"Care to explain what was going on Jurina?" Minami asked.
"I don't think you need to know." Jurina said.
"Oh trust me we do."
"I'm not telling you."
"Either tell me or I'll have Acchan here hug you to death."
"Alright alright. What happend was those guys were planning to plan a terrorist attack on one of Rena's hospitals and I didn't want that to happen. So I tried to go in there and stop them."
"You're pretty nuts thinking you could go up against at group of terrorists."
"Hey I could've taken them."
"You looked more like your were getting our butt kicked."
"They caught me off guard ok?"
"Right~" Atsuko said.
"Hey I'm serious!" Jurina said.
"Alright both of you cut it out. If those guys come back then people are going to be in serious danger. We need to think of something." Minami said.
"Well they said they were going to attack the hospital with the most patients."
"That's probably the one in the Shinjuku distrect. Do you know what time?"
"Probably around noon."
"It's almost noon now!"
"Crap then we need to go!"
The threee grils took the train to the Shinjuku district and ran to the hospital. When they walked in, ten masked men pointed guns at Minami, Atsuko, and Juina.
"Crap we came too late!"
"You think!"
You three get in the corner!"
They were led to a corner where all the other hospital staff and people were gathered.
"Alright everyone listen up!"
He fired some rounds into the air.
"This is a take over. We're going to take over this hospital and use you guys as hostages. Any questions?"
No one answered.
"Good then let's start with you."
The man grabbed Jurina and held a gun to her head.
"Call the director and tell him we want a hundred million yen."
"I don't know the number." Jurina said.
"Really? Then I guess we'll have to-"
The doors opend and one person came in. It as Rena munching on a melonpan.
"Jurina? Acchan, Takamina what are you guys doing here?"
"Rena run!"
"Huh?"
A gun was fired hitting Rena in the shoulder. Her melonpan was sent flying and fell to the ground.
"Rena!"
"Hey boss I think that's the director's daughter."
"We could use her. Get her!"
A guy started to run over to Rena but he couldn't get to her because she had moved out of the way. Then she grabbed his head and slammed it into the wall with enough force to make a huge hole. She looked back over at the guys and then at her melonpan.
"You'll pay for what you did!"
Rena ran over to one of the guys and punched him hard in the face. As he flew back Rena ducked and hit another guy in the side. Two of them tried shooting at her but she dodged it and went high into the air. She knocked out all of the lights causing the people to panick.
"Are you afraid of the dark?"
Minami couldn't see anything but she could hear the sound of flesh tearing and bones breaking. She also heard a creepy giggle and the sound of something clicking.
"Ne.. okotteru?"
At one point Minami thought she saw a pair of red eyes flash in the darkness followed my the sound of something tearing. The lights came back on and there standing in a pile of dismantles flesh was Rena. One hand was holding a guy's head while the other was in her mouth biting her nails.
"Acchan cover your eyes."
Minami covered Atsuko's eyes so she couldn't see the rest of the holy terror.
"Gekikara..."
"Who?"
"Gekikara. She's the other half of Rena. She's strong and powerful. But she's also crazy and nuts. She doesn't feel pain and only lives to kill. Gekikara only comes out when Rena is in a lot of pain or something bad happens. In this case it was her melonpan." Jurina said.
"Ohh my god."
"Hahaha! I want more!"
Rena threw the head at the wall and watched it splatter. She looked around for anything else to destroy and saw Minami. Rena started to head towards Minami but Jurina got in her way.
"Rena that's enough. You can come out now."
Rena turned back into her old self and saw Jurina. She also felt the sharp pain in her shoulder and screamed.
"Rena, Rena calm down we're going to get help. You guys can leave now."
"Right."
Minami guided Atusko out still covering her eyes. When they were outside, they went straight home after a long day. Now they were getting ready fo bed. Minami got into the bed and Atsuko hopped in after her.
"You suck you know that." Atusko said.
"Why?" Minami asked.
"You're hands are too small. I saw everything."
"Oh god Acchan I am so sorry."
"It was so scary in there."
Atsuko hugged Minami tightly. She could feel Atsuko shaking.
"It's ok. As long as we don't anger her everything is going to be alright."
Minami patted Atsuko's head and kissed her cheek.
"You're safe as long as you're here with me."
"Thanks Minami. I knew I could count on you."
That night the two fell asleep in each others arms. But Minami was still bothered. Even though Atsuko was safe with her now. What's going to happen to her when she's gone?
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Aww Atsumina is so cute. Wooow, it feels like Gekikara gets scarier and scarier every time you write her lol.
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@Sasshii: Yeah Gekikara is scary so I like to make her scary! Makes sense doesn't it?
Well here's the next chapter! Let's see what Yuko has instored for Takamina and Acchan.
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Chapter 13
(Day 23)
Minami was sleeping when she heard a noise outside her window. She looked out and saw a familar squirrel waving at her.
"Yuko? What are you going here?"
"I need to talk to you."
"About what?"
"Something important. Just come down here!"
"Alright I'm on my way."
Minami ran down stairs and opened the door. Yuko came running in and slammed the door behind her.
"Hey easy! Everyone else is still asleep."
"Sorry. Anyways big news!"
"What?"
"Well appaerntly I pissed of the yakuza."
"WHAT?!"
Minami had been half asleep but then Yuko said yakuza and Minami became wide awake.
"What did you to piss off the yakuza?" Minami asked.
"Well one of the guys were trying to touch up my Nyannyan so I bit him. Then he got mad and got some of his buddies to start chasing us." Yuko said.
"Where's Haruna?"
"I got her somewhere safe. For now I need your help. I need you to help me get rid of them."
"Uh we can't exactly get rid of the yakuza Yuko."
"Do but we can scare them."
"What are you planning?"
A could minutes later, Minami was now standing outside a yakuza hide out that Yuko somehow knew it was there. She was really shaky about the plan and didn't want to do it in the first place. But she had no choice now and couldn't back out.
"You ready?" Yuko whispered from behind a trash can.
"Let's get this over with."
Minami tightened the tie around her neck and put on the shades. She adjusted her wig a little and made sure everything was good. Then she took a deep breath and walked right in. Yuko had disguised Minami as another yakuza guy and thought Minami would be able to blend right in. The only problem was all the guys were six feet tall and Minami was only four barely five.
"There's no way this is going to work."
However so far no one noticed Minami. They were all busy talking about their fights or drinking. Minami's objective was to find the guy who tried to touch Haruna. Yuko told Minami to look for a guy with a bite mark on his hand. She looked around and so far didn't see any one that fit the description.
"Hey Kenji!"
Minami was suddenly pulled to the bar area and sat down. One of the yakuza guys thought Minami was one of his friends. To make things worse, he was drunk.
"Hey Kenji you wanna see something cool. Check it out."
The man showed Minami his hand revealing the bite mark. What luck this was the guy Minami was sent to look for.
"What happened?" Minami asked in a low voice.
"Some crazy midget bit me. I tried to get some action from her friend and she bit me! I swear when I get back out there I'm going to kill her and then nail her friend." he said.
"Uh I don't think you should do that."
"Why not?"
"Because.... I know that girl!"
"Really? Then maybe you can hook me up with her."
"No way man."
"Why not?"
"She's got HIV."
The man's face grew pale. He took another drink from his glass and then slammed it on the table.
"You're kidding me! Man what a waste. Well maybe I can nail her midet friend."
"Not the best idea."
"Why?"
"The other one has AIDS. They're both carriers and will probably give it to you if you trail to nail them."
"Shit no way!"
"Honest to god."
"Man that really sucks. Thanks for warning me man."
"No problem. Oh and get that bite checked out. I think the girl had rabies."
"Holy crap you might be right!"
The man staggered out of the bar and Minami tried to run too. But then another guy grabbed her and pulled in with another group.
"Hey are you new here?" he asked.
"Uh yeah." Minami said.
"What's your name?"
"Kai."
"Well then Kai welcome to the gang. Here have a drink."
The guy shoved a glass into Minami's hand. She had no choice but to drink it. Then one by one they kept loading her with drink after drink until she eventually threw up.
"Woah new guy. Looks like you had one too many drinks. You better go."
"Righ! Gotta get back to mah gurl!"
"Thataboy! Go **** her till sunrise!"
"I will!"
Minami staggered out of the bar out to the front door. There Yuko was waiting there with a annoyed look on her face.
"What took you so long?"
"I uh got the guy to uh lay off Haruna and you..."
"Really? Great! Thank you so much!"
Yuko was about to hug Minami but then backed away.
"You reek of alcolhal. Have you been drinking?"
"A little..."
"How many?"
Minami held up ten fingers plus her foot.
"15? Oh jeez. We need to get you home."
With the help of Yuko, Minami managed to get home. It was two in the morning and Atsuko was still asleep. Minami staggered into the room and plopped onto the bed still in her guy outfit. She looked over at Atsuko who was still asleep. Minami thought she look so cute asleep. It was then Minami remembered something the guys told her back at the bar.
"That's right... I gotta *** my girl till sunrise."
Minami took off her jacket and shirt. Then she got on top of Atsuko and pulled the covers off. The now awake Atsuko looked at Minami in confusion now sure what was going on.
"Minami? What are you doing?"
"I'm gonna **** you!"
"What?"
Minami pulled up Atsuko's shirt and bra revealing Atuko's chest. Atsuko shivered a little from the sudden temperature change. Minami licked her lips and then dug into Atsuko.
"Ahh! Minami stop! What are you doing?"
Atsuko tried to push Minami off her but she wouldn't budge. Minami just ignored Atsuko's cries as she bit down hard on one of Atsuko's mounds causing her to moan.
"Minami please stop this."
Once again Minami didn't answer. She just continued her assult on Atsuko's body. Then with one hand she started to slid it down towards Atsuko's panties. Atsuko tried to stop her but Minami took her other hand and held her hands back. Minami pulled off Atsuko's shorts and then hovered around Atsuko's panties.
"Minami please... stop..."
Minami only ignore the cries and was getting ready to go in for her main prize. But then suddenly something stopped her. She suddenly jumped and then passed out next to Atsuko. Turns out her heart was going nuts and couldn't take it anymore so the pace maker shocked it making Minami pass out.
"What just happened?"
Atsuko looked at Minami who was now passed out and half naked. She could the smell the stench of alcohal coming from the tiny girl and now realized why she was acting that way. What she wondered was what made her pass out. Maybe she got tired half way and decided to stop. As Atsuko was staring at Minami, she saw something on Minami that she never saw before.
"What the?"
Atsuko reached out to pull Minami's shirt a little further down but then Minami suddenly turned around with her back turned to Atsuko. She quietly swore to herself for losing the chance to see what she wanted. She knew if she tired to see it then Minami would wake up. Atsuko had no choice but to forget about it and worry about it later. Right now she was tired and ready to fall asleep.
"I'll find out in the morning."
That is if she remembered.
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Well I hoped you guys liked this chapter! Check out my OS cause I updated that too! Thanks for reading and look forward to my next update! Please tell me what you think!
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OMG!!! i think that "that" gonna be happen with takaboy drunk but i feel relieve.. so much..
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Thanks for the update :D Oh Yuko, you and your plans that involve Takamina :P & wow, Atsuko was close to finding out or @ least seeing the scar. & poor minami got shocked when her heart rate when up but its for the best since she was drunk lol :P
Thanks again for the update ^^
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Chapter 12: Rena-chan is scary don't ever dare to come between her and her melon pan. :tama-piss:
Chapter 13: LOL! Yuko pissed off Yakuza and Takamina is drunk :rofl:
Thank you for your update!
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OMG!!! Mayuki!!!!!
ROFL I like how Takamina persuaded the yakuza hahaha!!!!
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@Rukaeru: Yeah I wonder how Acchan will react when she finds out? :?
@Haruko: Yep. I'm not an extreme pervert and would never let "that" happen. XD
@arrow27: Thank you for reading the fic. :)
@Megumi: Rena is a very scary person. Yep Yuko really did it this time and Takamina ended up paying for it. :)
@kahem: Minami can do anything because she's amazing! :wub:
Minna! I'm sorry it's taken me forever to update. I've been really busy with school and it's been KILLING me. Again I'm sorry about the long wait and will updae again as soon as possible!
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Chapter 14
(Day 24)
Minami was talking to Atsuko when Sae came running down the hall.
"Hey Takamina!"
"What is it Sae?"
"I need help?" Sae said.
"With what?" Minami asked.
"It's about Sayaka. She's really mad at me for some reason and I can't figure out why."
"Well have you tired asking her?"
"Yeah and all she does is ignore me!"
"That is a problem. Let's go see if we can figure out what happened."
Minami, Sae and Atsuko all went to the gym where Sayaka was practicing basketball by herself. When she saw the others she stopped and took a quick break. When she saw Sae she gave her a nasty look.
"What did I do Sayaka?" Sae said with puppy eyes.
"Figure it out yourself." Sayaka said in a nasty tone.
"Can you at least give me a hint."
"Ok it happend early today."
"How early?"
"Before school."
"Uhh well a lot of things happened Sayaka before school. Takamina help!"
"Hey I wasn't with you guys before school. I was with Acchan right?" Minami said.
"Right!"
"Well let's see what did I do to tick you off...."
Sae thought long and hard about it. Then she finally got an answer.
"I know! I ate your breakfast this morning."
"Nope."
"Uh I accidently surpised you by sneaking up on you."
"No."
"I slapped you on the back too hard?"
"No. Think Sae. It was when we were in the locker rooms changing."
Sae thought again and then she remembered.
"Ahh I remember now! We were changing and I noted how small your boobs were."
"Ding ding ding!"
"Mou Sayaka you don't need to get mad at me about that." Sae said.
"Well I am and unitl you do something to make me feel better then I'm going to be mad for the rest of the day." Sayaka said.
"Sayaka I was only joking. Sure you don't have big boobs like Yukirin but I still love yours! They're bigger than mine see?"
Sae took Sayaka's hand and placed it on her chest. Sayaka's face turned bright red as she saw where her hand was.
"See? Flat as a board."
Sayaka drew back and stared at Sae.
"I can't believe you did that!"
"What? I wanted to show you what I meant. Do you need more proof?"
Sae started to take off her shirt but then Sayaka stopped her.
"That's enough! I got it Sae I got it."
"So you're not mad anymore?"
"No I'm not."
"Yay! Then let's go eat lunch."
"Sounds good to me."
Sayaka and Sae left the gym leaving Atsuko and Minami alone.
"Maybe we should go get lunch."
Minami turned around to start walking but then she felt two hands groupe her chest.
"KYA!"
Mianmi jumped back and looked to see who touched her. She saw Atsuko smiling with a perverted grin and had her hands up.
"Minami you're boobs are small. But that's ok because I like them that way."
"What about you?"
Minami reached out and grabbed Atsuko's boobs.
"They're almost the same size as mine."
"But they're still bigger than yours."
Atsuko stepped back and started to skip away. Minami was mad at Atsuko but knew she was only joking. She couldn't help it that she had small boobs.
"Mou Acchan!"
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Sorry for the short update! I'll try to update more when I get back from calss. For now until next time!
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Jajajajaj WTF!! I laugh a lot.. I think that yuko gonna be mad if she know that this happen ... jejejje :D.. you pervet acchan.. but takaboy also touch her :O
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lol funny chapter :D Love how everyone asks for her help, cause that's just how awesome she is *_* :P Thanks for the update, as always looking forward to your next chapter ^^
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Haha comparing boob sizes, sounds like fun all around :P
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wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
finally updated!!!!
(very happy :D)
thank you.......................
i like your work very much!!!!!!!!!!
please continue
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Ahahah! Ilike this chapter it was very funny!!!
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Made me realize how I'll miss the real twin towers, ahh boobs lol, good chapter, I'm loving this happy/perviness :thumbup
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b--bs!
LOL I tough that Sayaka was mad because Sae flirted with some girls :rofl:
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
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Boob gropping!!!
It reminds me a scene in the drama gto 2012 ^^
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Minna I'm finally back! After a long week of hard school I'm finally back to relax on the weekend. Well it looks like everyone wants me to make a season 2 so I will put up the lucky cotestents! It is up to you guys to vote and you will have 2 votes. But for now I'm back and ready to write once more. Ahh it's good to be back.
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Chapter 15
(Day 25)
Minami's time was already half way over. She only had 23 more days left. She was staring to get a little worried but not too concerned yet. Instead of going to school, Minami had to go to the hospital for a check up. Mariko made her go in every couple of weeks to make sure everything is functioning properly.
"Hello Takamina."
Minami tunred around and saw Rena standing behind her.
"Rena? What are you doing here?" Takamina asked.
" Helping my mother out. I'm taking care of the kids with Jurina." Rena said.
"Where is Jurina?"
"In there."
Minami looked into a room with a glass window and saw Jurina on the ground fighting off an army of little kids. She looked like she was one of them.
"Does Jurina know about my-"
"No she doesn't. No one else except me and Mariko who know about your heart. Speaking of Mariko, where is she?"
"Oi Takamina!"
Minami and Rena looked over and saw Mariko running towards them.
"Sorry I'm late." Mariko said.
"Where were you?" Rena asked.
"I had to do emergency surgery on a kid. She was in pretty bad shape. Sorry."
"Oh no it's fine. Anyways I'll be leaving you two. Have fun."
Rena went back into the room full of kids with Jurina and continued to play. Meanwhile Minami went with Mariko into an examiniation room.
"Alright I'm gonna need you to take off your clothes. You can wear your bra though."
Minami took off her shirt. She felt dissapointed in her small boobs.
"Ok lye down and we're going to see what's going on inside."
Minami lyed down on her back and then Mariko put some gel on a camera. She placed it on Minami's chest and on the screen they could see Minami's heart beathing. They could also see the pace maker right on top of it. The glow meant it was working.
"Ok take a deep breath."
Minami inhaled deeply and saw her heart beat slow down.
"Now think of something scary."
Minami thought about a giant monkey chasing her. That really scared her and she watched her heart beat faster.
"Well everything looks good. Oh and look at this."
Mariko pointed to a certain spot on the camera. It was a dark spot that wasn't there before.
"What is that?"
"I don't know. I'll have to look at it more in the other room. For now you can put your clothes on.
Minami sat up and wiped the gel off. Mariko left the room so she could change. As she was changing she didn't even notice the door was slightly open. She also didn't see Jurina pop her head in and see her changing. When Jurina saw Minami she was shocked. She saw the scar on her chest and was curious about what it was. She took a picutre with her cell phone and then ran before Minami noticed.
"Gotta tell Rena!"
Mariko came back with a grim look on her face.
"So did you find out what it was?" Minami asked.
"I did. But I don't know if you should hear it or not." Mariko said.
"Tell me."
"You sure?"
"I might as well know."
Mariko took a deep breath before telling Minami. Then she finally said,
"The dark spot may be the starting up a tumor."
Minami was speechless. She didn't know what to say. All she knew was that now she had a heart tumor. While Minami and Mariko were in one room, Jurina was running down the hall towards Rena.
"Rena Rena look what I found!"
"What is it Jurina?"
Jurina showed Rena the photo of Minami and acted surprised. But Rena already knew what it was.
"What do you think it is?" Jurina asked.
"I don't know." Rena said.
"Should we tell the others?"
"No let's not."
"Why not?"
"Because there's probably a good reason why she hasn't told anyone. So we better not be the ones to say it."
"You make a good point. But I really think Acchan should know at least."
"No Jurina we can't tell her or anyone else. It's just a secret between you and me. Got it?"
Jurina only nodded her head because Rena was giving her a Gekikara glare.
"Good! Then let's go have lunch."
As Rena walked ahead, Jurina secretly sent the photo to Mayuyu. Meanwhile back in the other room,
"So what can I do?" Minami asked.
"Well we don't know for sure if the tumor is cancerous or not. If it is you'll have to go through kemotherapy. If it's not then we'll leave it. But we can't operate because we've operated so many times on your heart that if we do any more then you could die." Mariko said.
"So we just wait to see if this thing is my one way trip to heaven?"
"Yep. Come back in a couple of days. We'll look at it again and see what happens."
Minami left the hospital realizing that her time may be cut shorter than she thought.
==================================================================================Wah what's going to happen to Minami? Find out next chapter! Ahh it's good to be back. Oh and don't forget to check out my poll!
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Ok happiness gone. Why must you hurt me this way :fainted:! Jurina is probably gonna tell everyone anyway, oh Takaboy :pleeease: Update sooooon! Before I need a pacemaker!
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OH MY GOD EVERYONE IS GOING TO KNOW!
Takaminas lives is getting shorter?! :shocked:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO *Faint
:tantrum: Yada!
:on blackhole: :on speedy: :fainted: :err: :frustrated:
:imdead:
:kneelbow:
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Poor Takamina T_T problem again
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Don't get me wrong, but I'm really anticipating the end... :mon evil: :mon evillaff:
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@sasumiofjp: I'm sorry for hurting you! But don't worry things will turn out good I promise! :cry:
@Megumi: I know it's sad. But who knows? Maybe everyone will find out? Maybe or maybe not. :?
@kahem: Yep but the problem will be solved! It will! :cry:
@Crossing Crossroads: Well let's see if you know what's going to happen. Let's see if you get it right shall we? :twisted:
Alright it looks like Minami is in some big trouble. Let's see what the cyborg has planned for our dying chibi.
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Chapter 15
(Day 25)
Minami was in the classroom when Mayuyu walked over to her. She slammed her fist against the desk making Minami look up.
"What is it?"
"I know your secret."
"What?"
Mayuyu took out her phone and showed Minami the picture of her and the scar.
"Where did you get that!" Minami said.
"None of your business. And unless you don't explain what that is I'm going to show this to everyone." Mayuyu said.
"Mayuyu please. It's kind of personal."
"So? Tell me or I'll show this to everyone."
"Alright, alright!"
Minami explained everything to Mayuyu and when she was finished, Mayuyu had that same emotionless face but there were tears running down her face. She was silent and then said,
"Have you told anyone else?"
"Only Rena knows." Minami said.
"So it's only me and Rena?" Mayuyu asked.
"Yes."
Mayuyu sat down trying to process everything she had just been told. Then she got a huge smile on her face.
"Alright I won't tell anyone. But you have to do something for me."
"What would that be?"
After school, Minami was now outside a manga store where a bunch of otakus have gathered. The thing Mayuyu wanted Minami to do was go into the store and get a new manga that had just come out. First 100 customers get a limited edition figurine and Mayuyu wanted. Minami was in the middle of the line and didn't know how long she was going to be there.
"Mayuyu why do I have to go in?" Minami asked.
"Because I'm currently banned for getting into a fight with one of the staff members. So you're going to get it for me!"
"Great."
"Oh put this on as well."
Mayuyu pulled out a pair of bunny ears and put them on Minami.
"Why am I wearing these?"
"Because you're short. wearing these will help me spot you better."
"I'm going to get you after this."
The doors opened and everyone flooded in. Because she was small, Minami was able to slip through all the people. She grabbed a manga and then ran to the register. When she got into the line, she was only ten people away. But then some big guy shoved her way back.
"Hey!"
"Get in line shorty!"
"I was already in line!"
The guy ignored Minami and the little chibi was getting mad. She was too far away and wouldn't make it in time to get a figurine. She had to think of something before they ran out. Minami stood there thinking when she finally got the idea. Minami took some nearby shock pens. She turned it up and then zapped herself in the neck.
"Oh my gosh someone help!"
Everyone ran over to Minami to try to do something and help. But then Minami opened her eyes and jumped up. She ran over to the now open register and bought the last figurine.
"I got it!"
Minami ran out and found Mayuyu.
"Here."
"Yay!"
Mayuyu took the bag and looked at her new figurine. While Mayuyu was happy, Minami was trying to catch her breath. Shocking herself was very dangerous and she could've killed herself. But now she demanded payment.
"Ok I did what you wanted. Now delete the picture."
"Happy to."
Minami watched Mayuyu delete the picture and she already started to feel better.
"Well thanks Mayuyu. I'm going home now."
"Wait!"
"I may have deleted the photo but the original sender is still has the original."
"And who would that be?"
"Jurina."
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Uh oh. Minami has Jurina to worry about now. Will she make it in time? Find out next update! Please tell me what you think!
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Poor Taka has a tumour now! & wow, Jurina took that pic of Takamina and sent it to mayu :P @ Least the copy mayu has is now gone but I wonder if Jurina sent it to more people before Takamina reaches her. Great chap updates, I enjoyed them! Can't wait to find out what's going to happen next! Thanks for the updates, looking forward to your next chapter ^^
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aww minami.. please tell acchan T_T
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I knew Jurina would send it! Geez, atleast this chapter was semi-happy lol, waiting for the next chapter as always
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Oh no, I'm sure Takamina's going to have to do some crazy stuff to get Jurina to delete that picture lol. Ahh, poor Takamina, it seems like things are just getting worse and worse for her.
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uh oh Jurina has trouble hehe
rofl I like Takamina technique hahaha!!!
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Minami explained everything to Mayuyu and when she was finished, Mayuyu had that same emotionless face but there were tears running down her face. She was silent and then said,
Mayu I cry with you :cry:
But LOL still it doesn't stop her from using Takamina to get a limited figure edition :lol: such an otaku.
Now Takamina had another problem...
Thank you for your update!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
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@arrow27: Who knows? Maybe Jurina sent it to a ton of other people. We can only hope she didn't. :)
@Haruko: She can't find out yet! But she'll know soon. Very soon so be patient! :)
@sasumiofjp: Yeah I guess it was semi-happy. Things are starting to get serious so let's get serious! XD
@Sasshii: Don't worry! There will be good things that will happen to Takamina! Just give me time to think of them! XD
@kahem: I wonder what Jurina will do. And yes Takamina can do anything! :lol:
@Megumi: Mayu will do anything for her mangas even if it envolves putting other people in danger. Such an otaku! :P
Minna I'm back! Time for another update! Also, the poll is really close right now between 48 Days and Mad House. Well just remember everyone, since this one is new I'm going to have a hard time writing a season 2 so I'm hoping Mad House. But you guys are the readers and as the writer I will give you what you want.
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Chapter 16
(Day 26)
"So Jurina was the original sender huh?"
Minami was in deep thought trying to think of a way get the photo away from Jurina. But at the moment she wasn't at school. Minami had no idea where she was. She decided to go look for Rena who would have the right idea of where she is.
"Hey Rena."
"What is it Takamina?"
"Where's Jurina?"
"She's at home taking care of her sibilings." Rena said.
"Isn't that what her parents should do?" Minami asked.
"Well Jurina's parents are working and the oldest is still at work so Jurina has to take care of them being the second oldest."
"Ohh. So where does she live?"
"You can follow me after school. I was going to go there anyways and check on her."
"Ok sounds good."
After school Minami and Rena went to Jurina's house. It was a small apartment room and when Rena opened the door, two kids came running out.
"I don't wanna take a nap!" one said.
"Me neither!" the other said.
Soon after a tired looking Jurina came as well.
"You two get to bed now!"
"Jurina?"
"Takamina? Rena? What are you guys doing here?" she asked.
"We came to help." Rena said.
"Great!"
"Rena onee-chan!"
The two girls ran over and hugged Rena's waist.
"Hello Kumi-chan hello Kanon-chan."
"We missed you!" the one called Kumi said.
"Onee-chan has been mean to us!" the one called Kannon said.
"Jurina be nice. They're only kids." Rena said.
"Just get inside."
Minami and Rena walked in and saw two other girls. When one saw Rena, she got up and ran over.
"Rena onee-chan!"
"Hi Airin!"
"I made you something today!"
The girl walked over and handed Rena a drawing.
"What is this?"
"It's you and me! We're together and we live in a BIG house!"
"It's beautiful Airin. I'll keep it somewhere safe."
"Yay!"
"Airin? Who's here?"
Another girl walked over holding a stuffed teddy bear looking like she had just woken up from a nap.
"Go back to sleep Paru-chan. It's just Rena."
"Ok."
"So these are your siblings?" Minami asked.
"Yep! Kumi is 7 while Kanon is 6. Airin is 5 and Paru is 4. They're not old enough to be at the house alone and my older sister won't be home from work until late." Jurina said.
"How do you manage all these kids?"
"Somehow I do."
"Well we're here to help so what do you need help with?" Rena asked.
"Rena you can help me make dinner while Takamina you watch the kids."
"Sure thing."
Rena and Jurina left leaving Minami with four small children.
"So what do you want to do?" Minami asked.
They didn't say anything. They just kept staring at her. Then Kumi said,
"You're short."
Minami was slightly agitated by the comment but ignored it.
"Yeah you're really short!" Kanon said.
"You remind me of a chibi character." Airin said.
"A chibi with a bow." Paru said.
Minami was now getting really annoyed. But she decided to do something to get back at them.
"Well since I'm short then that means you're getting taller which means...."
Minami grabbed Kumi and raised her high into the air.
"Grow taller!"
"Ahh put me down!"
"I got you!"
Kanon ran over and kicked Minami in the shin causing her to put Kumi down.
"Hey that hurt!"
"That's what you get for messing with Kumi chibi!"
"Why you!"
Minami started to chase the two around while the other two watched. Eventually, Airin went into the kitchen while Paru went back to sleep. At the same time, the front door opened and another girl came in.
"Hey I'm ho- what in the world?!"
Everyone froze in their tracks. Right now things weren't going so well considering the fact she had Kumi pinned to the ground and Kanon on top of her trying to bite her.
"Jurina!"
Jurina came running in and saw the girl.
"Onee-chan you're home!" Jurina said.
"Care to explain what's going on?"
"They're helping me take care of the others."
"That's your job!"
"Hey someone had to make dinner."
Just then Rena came in with Airin wrapped around her leg.
"Ahh Sawako! Welcome home!"
"Thank you Rena. Anyways Jurina watch the kids while I make dinner."
"Alright."
The girl walked into the kitchen while Jurina and Rena walked over and sat down.
"That was my older sister Sawako. She works like three jobs helping out mom and dad and comes home super late." Jurina said.
"She sounds scary." Minami said.
"Oh she's not. She's actually a very shy person and doesn't talk much. She only gets mad when she comes home and everything is a mess."
"I see. So including her that's five siblings. How do you manage?"
"Well it's hard to explain but we get by."
"It must be tough."
"Tell me about it."
"Hey Jurina I need to call my mom but forgot my phone can I use yours?"
"Sure here."
Jurina handed Minami her phone and Minami took the chance to look for the photo. She found it and quickly deleted it. She was about to give the phone back but also noticed a picture of Rena changing. Minami thought it would be funny to make Mayuyu mad so she sent the picture to her in hopes Yukirin would find it.
"Thanks."
Minami handed back the phone and then Sawako came in.
"Alright here's dinner everyone! Eat up!"
"Yay!'
After a big meal and hours of playing, Minami was tired and ready to go to bed. She felt like she had become a kid herself and was five years old. Sadly that's not true.
"Thank you so much for helping." Sawako said.
"Thank you for the dinner. It was really good." Minami said.
"Come by again sometime."
"I will."
Minami was about to leave but then Jurina caught her.
"By the way Takamina.."
Jurina pulled in Minami real close.
"That's not the only photo. I have copies. But because you helped me, I won't send it to anyone."
Minami only stared in shock as Jurina waved goodbye and shut the door. After processing what she was just told, Minami let out a sigh in relief. Then her phone suddenly went off. It was a call from Yukirin.
"Takamina have you seen Mayuyu? She needs to be punished for being a pervert."
"Sorry haven't seen her."
"Well if you do tell her she's in big trouble when I find her."
"No problem."
Minami hung up and smiled feeling proud that she got revenge on Mayuyu.
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Well I hope you guys liked the update. School is tough so look forward to the next update! Please tell me what you think!
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jajajja minami vs kid is so funnny :D
awww chibi paru aww :D
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Ha... ... :stoned: *Happy and speechless*
This is... It's just... Chibi.... chibichibichibichibi. AHHH!!! :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv2: :luvluv2: :luvluv2: :luvluv2: :shy1: :shy2: :shy2: :shy2: :shy2: :shy2: :mon inluv: :mon inluv: :mon inluv: :mon inluv: :mon inluv:
AHGHSEKJKJSFh :imdead: :nya:
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Haha as much as I love Mayuyu, I'm glad Takamina got her revenge >:) awwww chibi Airin is so cute. I can just imagine haha. Also it's pretty hilarious that Kumi, Paru and Airin are all older than Jurina in real life, reading them as little kids with Jurina as the big sister is cute.
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What a cute family~
LOL! Takamina is a devil xD
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wow Jurina has many siblings! :dizzy:
hehe chibi Airin loves Rena :wahaha:
what will Yuki do to Mayu :kekeke:
Takamina can do anything poor Mayu :on lol:
Mayu will get her revange I'm sure :ding:
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:mon ko: Oh MY GOD! Kids everywhere! :rofl:
We have a SKE cameo Kumi,Non,Airin and Sawako! :thumbsup
Oh and Paru...I just wanna pinch their cheeks :rofl:
What a total mess! :lol:
LOL Takamina got her revenge on Mayu and it seems that she had settled the problem with Jurina
Thank you for your update!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
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THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!!!!!
GOODLUCK..
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First, Space Love!
Oh my! I laughed so much! Love your creativity. It was so good I got really sad when it ened ;p I wanted to know maid cafes which gives away masions in competitions huahuahua
Second, 48 days!
Poor Takamina! Things are getting worse... Hope that tumor is a benignous one >< Acchan might get alone again earlier ><
Please keep updating o/ I'm super curious here
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@Haruko: Minami versus the children is a battle waiting to happen. I hope sometime soon... :P
@Crossing Crossroads: Looks like you liked the chapter. Remind me to make a possible SKE fic in the future.
@Sasshii: I thought it would be cute to see Jurina as the older one since everyone in SKE sees her as an older brother character. :)
@sasumiofjp: Takamina is a boss. She can do anything with just the touch of her finger. :lol:
@kahem: Takamina isn't evil! She's the queen of all chibis! I love chibis. :wub:
@mo-chan: Let's see what Mayu does when she finds out Minami wa the one that tipped Yukirin off. :P
@Megumi: Yes everything is back to normal for Takamina! Or is it? :?
@Wmatsui22:Thanks! Now I'm back and ready for action! :)
@BbSis: Thank you for reading my stories. Check out the other ones if you haven't read them yet. I hope you liked the rest of the story! I'm going to make the ending really interesting. I hope. XD
Minna! I'm finally back! Ahh so much school work. But now I'm back and because the weekened is here that means I can write more! Hooray! Now onwards to Minami!
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Chapter 17
(Day 27)
Minami was relieved to get the photo deleted off of Jurina's phone. Now she had nothing else to worry about right? Now she could spend the rest of her days relaxing and enjoying her days. Or so she thought. It was around noon and Minami was in the cafeteria. She was looking for Atsuko who she didn't see all day today.
"Hey Yuko have you seen Acchan?" Minami asked.
"Yeah she's outside with Yukirin and Mayu." Yuko said.
"Ok thanks."
Minami walked outside and saw Mayuyu talking to Atsuko. She walked over and Mayuyu had a mad expression on her face.
"What is it?" Minami said.
"Yukirin now!"
Out of no where Yukirin grabbed Atsuko and carried her away.
"Acchan!"
Minami tried to run after her but Mayuyu stopped her.
"Mayuyu what's the meaning of this?"
"This!"
Mayuyu showed Minami the photo she had sent her using Jurina's phone.
"What about it?"
"I know it was you who sent this to my phone. Jurina told me and because of you, I got punished by Yukirin!"
"Ohh..."
"Yeah so now this is your punishment! I'm taking away your Acchan!"
"NO!"
"Too late!"
Mayuyu started to running leaving Minami behind.
"Come back here!"
Minami started running but she remembered her heart and had to stop. She really wished she could sprint as fast as she could after them. But if she pushed it too hard then she could die. She had to think of another plan. She had to get someone who could run super fast.
"Now who do I know that runs really fast...."
Minami stood there thinking when she got the idea. She walked to the classroom as fast as she could and found Yuko leaning on top of Haruna.
"Yuko I need your help!"
"What is it?"
"Mayuyu took Acchan away from me. I need your help getting her back for me. You can run fast right?" Minami said.
"Yeah. But I don't feel like running." Yuko said.
"Please Yuko!"
"No. I'm not going to hurt my Oshiri sister."
Minami had to think of something quick if she was going to get Yuko to do something for her. When she saw Haruna playing her DS she got the idea. With quick speed, Minami snatched the DS out of Haruna's hands.
"Hey!"
"Give that back! That's Nyannyans!"
"Not until you help me."
"Yuko!"
"Fine!"
"Good then start running."
"Where did they go?"
"Somewhere outside."
"Then let's move!"
Yuko and Minami went outside where they saw Yukirin and Mayuyu siting on a bench. Minami walked over to them and asked,
"Where's Acchan?"
"Don't know." Mayuyu said sarcastically.
"Where is she?"
"Sae let go!"
Minami looked over and saw Sae carrying Atsuko.
"What is Sae doing?"
"Yukirin got Sae to carry Acchan and keep her away her away from you." Mayuyu said.
"Are you serious?"
"Yeah. Good luck catching her. She's a fast runner."
"Well not as fast as Yuko. Yuko go!"
"No way..."
"Yuko!"
Minami had no choice but to go do drastic things. Minami grabbed Yukirin's skirt and pulled off. Then she threw it and it landed right on Acchan. Now Yukirin was in nothing but a sexy purple with black lace bra.
"Kya!"
"Wah!"
"Sae stop!"
Yukirin starting running after Sae.
"Boobs!"
Yuko started running after Yukirin.
"Yukirin! Yuko you better not touch her you perverted squirrel!"
Mayuyu started running after Yuko. It was like and endless game of cat and mouse. Minami thought she would just sit and watch everything happen. But then she saw Sayaka come out of nowhere and stop every one. She tripped Sae causing her to let go of Atsuko. She caught Atsuko mid air and let everyone else fall on each other.
"What the heck!" Mayuyu said.
"Sayaka!" Sae said.
"What is going on? Yukirin put a shirt on."
Sayaka took Yukirin's shirt off from Atsuko and threw it back on Yukirin.
"Sayaka why did you do that! Now I can't see Yukirin's perfect boobs!" Yuko said.
"Hey Yukirin's boobs are mine and mine only so back off you perverted squirrel!" Mayuyu said.
"All of you that's enough! Look Sae you come with me. Mayuyu go back to Yukirin and Yuko go back to Haruna. Takamina take Acchan and go."
"Thanks!"
Atsuko ran over to Minami and hugged her tightly. Minami gave Yuko Haruna's DS back and exchanged dirty looks with Mayuyu and Yukirin. Then they all went back to doing whatever they were doing.
"That was so weird." Atsuko said.
"Yeah sorry about that." Minami said.
"It's ok because you came to my rescue and that's all that matters."
"I did my best."
"Yeah. You're like my knight in shining armor."
Atsuko leaned in and kissed Minami on the cheek making her blush.
"You're my chibi knight."
"Hey!"
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Well I hope you guys liked the chapter. It's been a while since I've updated. Well tell me what you think and look forward to the next chapter!
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jajaj chibiknight so cute :D
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huahauhauah You bet I'm going to check out your others fics o/ I'm sure you're gonna be able to make an interesting end o/ Looking forward to it!
I like the chapter and I like chasing scenes o/
Can't wait next chapter *.*
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Yay another update!!! I thought you died for a miute there :sweatdrop: lol glad to have you back, it was a good chapter, nice and happy! lol Update sooner, almost fell out waiting lol jk, just update period and I'll be happy
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it was a funny chapter :lol:
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@Haruko: Chibi knights are the best. I want one of my own! :lol:
@BbSis: I hope you like my other fics as well. I think you will really enjoy Mad House. :P
@sasumiofjp: I'm not dead! I've just been busy with school! Ahh I hate it so much! :angry:
@mo-chan: Thanks! How's yours going along? Is it good? :?
Minna the poll is really close! I'm going to close the voting soon so now is your last chance to place your votes! Hurry hurry hurry!
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Chapter 18
(Day 28)
Minami was talking with Atsuko when Rena came over. She asked to speak to Minami in private so Minami left the room for a moment.
"What is it Rena?" Minami asked.
"I have some interesting news to tell you." Rena said.
"What?"
"I got in touch with a medical facility and I got some interesting news."
"What?"
"Well you see, I have a new medicine that could possibly help your condition."
"What kind of new medicine?"
"Well it's supposed to help your heart but to make sure it doesn't hurt you, we're going to have to test it on someone else."
"Who?"
"I'm going to test it on Jurina and Acchan. Is that alright?"
"Uhh I don't know. What will it do to them?"
"If it works, it'll just make them a little sleepy and maybe cranky."
"Ok then I guess we can try it. I'll go get Acchan."
Minami walked over and got Atsuko. Then when they came back, Jurina was there too.
"Hey Acchan you want some Melonpan?"
"Sure!"
Atsuko took the Melonpan from Rena and ate it happily. Jurina also ate one and the two silently muched. But then Jurina suddenly started wobbling back and forth.
"Jurina you ok?"
"I don't know I'm just really sleepy...."
Jurina suddenly passed out right there on the ground.
"Jurina!"
"Acchan how are you doing?"
Minami looked over at Atsuko who had a blank expression on her face.
"Acchan?"
"I think she's asleep Takamina."
"But her eyes are still open." Minami said.
"She could be sleeping with her eyes open." Rena said.
Minami stared at Atsuko but then Atsuko suddenly started to move. She walked away from Minami heading for the gym.
"Acchan where are you going?"
"I think she's sleep walking."
"What?"
"You better go after her. Something bad could happen."
"Dang it Rena!"
Minami ran after Atsuko into the gym. At first she didn't see Atsuko but then suddenly, Sayaka came running out screaming.
"Get her off!"
"Faster horsey faster!"
Apparently Atsuko was dreaming that she was riding a horse and Sayaka was her horse.
"Takamina get her off!"
"No not that way! Bad horse!"
Atsuko pulled Sayaka's hair to the right making her turn. But then Sayaka slammed into the wall making her fall over. Atsuko had let go before hitting the ground. Then she ran off.
"Acchan!"
Minami chased after Atsuko who was now running towards the library. There, Mayuyu and Yukirin wer talking. Minami watched Atsuko sneak up behind Mayuyu and and jump on her.
"What the heck!"
"Yummy popsicle!"
Atsuko started licking Mayuyu making her let out a moan.
"Mayuyu!"
"I can't help it!"
Atsuko kept licking Mayuyu making her moan more and more. Eventually Yukirin got mad and basically ripped Atsuko off of Mayuyu. But Atsuko was heavy and made Yukirin fall over with Atsuko on top of her.
"Marshmallows!"
"Acchan don't you dare!"
Atsuko was about to bite down on Yukirin's chest but then Minami ran over and pulled her off. Minami fell over and Atsuko stood up. This time she ran to the roof and Minami followed after. She found Atsuko leaning on the edge of the roof with one hand holding onto the fence.
"I'm a bird!"
"Acchan!"
Atsuko was about to jump but Minami got to her in time and stopped her. They fell over with Atsuko landing hard on top of Minami.
"Takamina? What are we doing on the roof? How did we get here?"
"I'll tell you later. For now, good night."
Then Minami passed out tired from all the chasing.
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Hope you guys liked it! The end is coming soon so look forward to it! Please tell me what you think!
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I uploaded yesterday a chapter on my Wmatsui fic :hee:
short chapter you're ok miyumi-chan? you're busy ? :dunno:
Acchan is scary when she sleeps she can do anything :scared:
I thought Jurina will do something too but she only sleeped :depressed:
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Thanks for the update :D & wow, close call with Acchan on the rooftop, good thing Minami was there :) Takamina's time is running out, hopefully whatever Rena figured out can help :)
Looking forward to your next chapter :)
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Hahaha! Acchan is so funny!
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I already favorited your other fics on my pc o/ Thanks for the sugestion! I'll start with Mad House then o/
I liked the chapter o/ So what kind of med it is?
Acchan has strange dreams =p Poor Sayaka =p
Thanks see ya next chap o/
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jajaj acchan was like a drunk.. but more funnyy
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LOL to funny! The whole time I was reading, I was thinking of Acchan's scandal and just laughed for like 3 minutes lol, good update!
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LOL! I couldn't stop laughing in 10 minutes XDDD
This chapter is so awesome and hilarious.
I could never imagine that Atsuko would be like that she she's sleep walking. What was she dreaming about anyway? Bird??? LOL!!
You're a good writer, miyumi-san xDDD
Nice chapter~ Thanks for the update.
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atsuko: I'm a bird!!
Hahaha!! LoL~ XD
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@mo-chan: That's good! No I'm not busy just tired and running low on creativity. Stupid school took it away from me.. :angry:
@arrow27: I don't know maybe Rena can figure it out. Who knows? :?
@kahem: I know she is right! :lol:
@BbSis: I hope you like Mad House! That one was my first one ever so it may be a little rough but it's still kinda good. :P
@Haruko: I wonder if Acchan was actually drunk. Who know? XD
@sasumiofjp: I'm glad you liked it. I didn't know it would make you laugh that much. :lol:
@Sayuki: Thank you for reading the fic. You are also a good writer and I hope you enjoy the rest of the fic.
@chiqinna: Looks like everyone liked the bird part. It was pretty funny when I look back at it. XD
Well here is the next chapter! The end is coming really soon so get ready! I put out some surprising twists in the end.
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Chapter 19
(Day 29)
Minami was at school searching for Atsuko who she hadn't seen all day. She wasn't in the house when she woke up in the morning and wasn't in class. Minami was starting to get worried. She ran into Yuko and asked if they had seen her.
"Atsuko? Oh she's skipping today." Yuko said.
"Why?" Minami asked.
"Today is the day her mom died. Every year she skips school and goes to the cemetery."
"Which one?"
"The one by the play ground."
"Ok thanks."
Minami ignored the school rules and ran out to find Atsuko. She had no idea her mother was dead. Minami walked and found Atsuko holding a small boque of flowers. She quietly walked over and placed her hand on her shoulder.
"Hey."
"Hey Takamina."
"So this is where she was."
Minami stared at the grave that had the name Maeda on it.
"When mom died, dad started to lose it. He lost his job and started drinking every day. Whenever he got drunk he blammed me for her death and would beat me." Atusko said.
"How did she die?" Minami asked.
"When I was little, her and I were playing at that play ground over there."
Atsuko pointed at the playground Minami had walked through.
"We were playing with a ball when it bounced off into the street. I wasn't thinking and ran out right when a truck was coming. My mother ran out and pushed me out of the way before getting hit and killed on impact. I was three at the time so I didn't know what had just happened. But after my fahter explained, I knew it was my fault she died."
Minami could see tears rolling down Atuko's face.
"Be-because of me m-my mother died..."
Minami wrapped her arms around Atsuko and held her for a while.
"Don't say that. It's not your fault she died. You were young and didn't know better. You can't blame youself."
"But... but because of me she-"
"That doesn't matter! Don't blame yourself. That was all in the past and all that matters now is right here and now."
"Minami..."
Minami was crying as well and shaking trying to hold onto Atsuko. She knew the pain of losing a loved one because she was going to lose her own life soon. She didn't want Atsuko to suffer so she was doing her best to comfort her.
"Minami."
"Yeah?"
"You can let go now. I'm ok."
"Sorry."
Minami let go and Atsuko fixed her shirt. She then placed the flowers on the grave and started to walk away.
"Come on Minami let's play."
The two walked over to the playground and Atsuko sat on a swing. Minami got behind her and started to push Atsuko. However she was having a hard time because Atsuko was kind of heavy.
"Higher Minami higher!"
"I'm trying!"
Minami pushed with all her might and sent Atsuko flying. But then she forgot to move out of the way and Atsuko slammed right into Minami.
"Itai!"
"Why didn't you move out of the way?"
"I wasn't thinking."
"Well you have a turn then."
Minami got on the swing and Atsuko started to push her. Minami flew high into the air and felt like she could touch the clouds. But then she saw someone that made her muscles tense. Coming out of a car was Atsuko's father. Minami stopped the swing and then got in front of Atsuko.
"What do you want?" Minami said in a dangerous time.
"I came to honor my dead wife. But it looks like you two are enjoying your lives." the father said.
"You leave Atsuko out of this."
"You shouldn't be alive. It's your fault she's dead."
"Ignore him Atusko. He's just being a jerk."
"Am I? Or am I just stating the facts. It's her fault she died and here she is still alive. She should be dead."
"You shut your mouth!"
Minami jumped on top of the father and started pounding on him. But then Minami was thrown off and slammed onto a bench.
"I'm not going to lose to you this time midget!"
He came in for a hard punch but then something slammed into him causing him to fall over and pass out. Minami looked over and saw Atsuko holding a stick.
"Let's get out of here!"
Atsuko grabbed Minami's hand and the two started running. They ran all the way to the house where Atsuko locked the door and ran up to Minami's room. The two sat on the bed tired and out of breath. Minami could feel her pace maker working like crazy trying to stablize her heart. She won't be able to move for a while.
"Hey Minami..."
"Yeah?"
"You know what I miss the most about my mom?"
"What?"
"I miss hearing the sound of her heart."
Minami was silent for a moment. Then she took Atsuko's head and placed it against her chest.
"Well you can listen to mine."
Atsuko got quiet as she began to hear the relaxing beats of Minami's heart. But then she also heard a strange beep every beat. What was this beeping that Atsuko was hearing? Atsuko so Minami was asleep so she decided to do a little exploring. She undid Minami's shirt and saw Minami's scar.
"What the-"
Atusko was surprised and also confused. Where did Minami get the scar? Why was her chest beeping. So many questions and it looked like Atsuko had to go find the answers.
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Uh oh looks like Minami is in trouble. Will Atsuko figure it out? Find out in the next update! Please tell me what you think!
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I hate Atsuko's father :angry1:
noo :stoned: Acchan know about Takamina's secret now :scared:
aah it's because of school I'm going to back to school tomorrow too :tantrum:
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Loved the chap! Sad pats of Atsuko :( Glad Minami was there for her as always. & woah, looks like Atsuko will be able to figure it out! Can't wait till the next chapter :D thanks for the update :)
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=O Atsuko discovered Minami`s secret!!
Poor Atsuko ;.; She is an orfhan ><
Liked the chapter \o/ I'm here imagining Minami's reaction =p
Can't wait next chapter o/
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Jajajn minami you are a idiot.. you are hidden this fact about your heart problem.. but in a second your discovered yourself..
OMG!! now what going to happen?!
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What a jerk that father!
At Acchan's place I would think Takamina has a bomb inside her xD
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Oh geez! Acchan knows to much! OOOOOOh it's on NOW! I can't wait now! I'm so excited! I'll be waiting for that update Oh Lawd! :mon love:
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Oh no, it looks like Acchan's going to be come close to finding out Takamina's secret. Can't wait to read the next chapter, and it looks like Mad House won the poll for the next story. WOO! :D
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@mo-chan: Don't worry Acchan doesn't know everything! Yet... And you start school tomorrow? Gambate! I'm sure you'll be fine. :P
@Rukaeru: She's getting close! Very close! :)
@arrow27: Acchan is going to have to do some exploring into the world of Minami. Want to know what she finds? :twisted:
@BbSis: I'm glad you liked it. I hope you like this one as well! XD
@Haruko: You're about to find out right now! :lol:
@kahem: Maybe there is a bomb in her? Who knows? :roll:
@sasumiofjp: Yep! Let's see what Acchan does to our little chibi. :twisted:
@Sasshii: I hope ou like this one. And yep Mad House won so you know what that means! :w00t:
The end is near! Just this and a couple more chapters! Holy crap what's going to happen?
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Chapter 20 part 1
(Day 30)
Minami got a call from the hospital saying they got her test results back in. Minami went to the hospital where Mariko was waiting for her. She sat down on the bench.
"So what is it?"
"Well the tumor is benine which means it's not a risk for cancer. However we're still going to have to remove it. It could get worse."
"Ok so when is the operation?"
"We'll be ready by noon. Come back then and we'll have everything set up."
"Ok thanks."
Minami walked out of the hospital not sure whether to feel happy or sad. She was happy that the tumor wasn't going to hurt her but she was worried about the operation. She didn't want to go under again and saw no point in doing it. But if it meant she could live a little longer then she would gladly take the chance.
"Hey Acchan I'm going to be gone for a while today so don't get too bored ok?" Minami said.
"Yeah that's fine. I'll see you later." Acchan said not even looking up from her magazine."
"Ok then I'll see you later."
Minami went back to the hospital where there was a team of doctors waiting for her.
"Are you ready?" Mariko asked.
"Let's get this over with."
"You're going to be just fine."
Mariko put the mask on and Minami was out.
(Meanwhile at school...)
Since Minami was gone, Atsuko thought now would be a good time to start looking around. She was still bothered by the beeping and the scar. She went around and asked people if they knew anything and so far came up with nothing. But then she walked over to Mayuyu and Yukirin who were eating lunch.
"Mayuyu I need to ask you something."
"What is it Acchan?"
"Did you know Takamina had a scar on her chest??"
Mayuyu froze. She had to think about what to say before saying it. She couldn't let Atsuko find out otherwise who knows what would happen.
"No way where?" Mayuyu said innocently.
"On her chest. I have no idea where it came from. Do you have any ideas?"
"No but maybe you should ask Jurina."
"Oh ok. Thanks!"
Atsuko walked away and Mayuyu felt relieved. If anyone was going to tell Atusko the bad news it wouldn't be her. Atsuko found Jurina and Rena in the classroom going over notes.
"Hey Jurina~"
"Yeah?"
"Did you know Takamina had a scar on her chest?"
"Yeah actually I-"
Jurina was about to say something but then felt a sharp pain in her foot. She looked over and saw Rena glaring at her.
"You what?"
"Nothing!"
"No you knew something. Tell me!"
"I can't!"
Jurina felt the heel in her foot dig in deeper.
"Ahh Rena that hurts!"
"Rena?"
"Acchan I think you should leave. Jurina and I have to catch up on studying. Right?"
"YES YES YES!"
"Oh ok. Thanks."
Atsuko left but she knew the two were hiding something. After school, Atsuko went to Minami's house and started searching Minami's room. So far she didn't find anything.
"If I were to hide something where would I hide it..."
Atsuko checked all the places Minami could hide it. She checked above dressers and shelves but still couldn't find anything. But then she remembered that this was Minami she was talking about. She had to think like Minami. Atsuko looked under the bed and found what she was looking far.
"Got ya!"
Atsuko found a folder and a small box. Inside the box was a bunch of heart medications. She opened the folder and began reading. The further she read, the more tears fell from her eyes.
(Back at the hospital...)
Minami woke up and found herself staring at the ceiling. She looked over and saw Mariko sitting in a chair reading a magazine.
"You're awake."
"Barely..."
"Well the operation was a success. We were able to safely remove the tumor." Mariko said.
"That's good."
"Yeah so you just rest up and you'll be out of here in a couple days."
Mariko left leaving Minami alone. She was about to fall asleep when she heard the door open. She looked over and saw Atsuko with tears running down her eyes.
"Acchan what are you doing here?"
Minami had to think of an excuse to explain why she was in the hospital.
"I found out your secret." Atsuko said in a cold voice.
"What secret?"
"This."
Atsuko threw the folder onto Minami's lap. Minami knew what Atsuko meant. Atsuko found out about her condition.
"Acchan it's not what you think."
"Why didn't you tell me?"
"Tell you what?"
"Tell me that you were dying!"
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Oh no! What's going to happen in part 2? Look forward to the next update!
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Oh.My.God. This right here, it's to much! OMG I can't take it! Teh updates! My feels! :dizzy: GREAT Chappie!
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aww now what gonna happen T_T
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Eh? :stoned: :shock: Ah? SFJHELKRH HM? :scared: Uhuhuhu... And now it gets better..~ :kekeke:
Call me sadistic, but kind of want fate to go how it goes~ :glasses: Definition: I kind of want Minami to die..~ :shifty:
Don't get me wrong, I love Takamina... :on drink: :on GJ:
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woah, intense chapter! but Lol @ the part where rena kept kicking Jurina and trying to shut her up :P
Atsuko found out! Makes sense Takamina would have meds and a folder with her med history, so detective acchan did a good job in finding those! :P
Oh man, can't wait to read the next chapter now that Atsuko knows.
Thanks for the update :)
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Oh no. Acchan knows Minami's secret now. I hope they'll talk it over and everything will be fine and they'll live their lives together forever. Ah, wishful thinking right? Haha.
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im rarely commenting but, i always read your fic miyumi-san.....
ahhh it getting more interesting!!
aww cant wait the second season too LOL
thank for the update....LOL
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Nhyaaaargh! ><
Too much to my weak heart ><
Thanks for the chapter, I can't wait to the next one ;.;
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:OMG: Oh nooooooo!
:fainted:
:kneelbow:
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@sasumiofjp: Oh no! Stay with me! Don't die! :bleed eyes:
@Haruko: You'll find out soon! Just keep reading! :)
@Crossing Crossroads:Hey! I don't let poeple die! I refuse! Sorry. :cry:
@arrow27: Well I hope you enjoy the chapter! You won't belive what's going to happen next. :twisted:
@Sasshii: I can't guarentee that will happen. But maybe something like that. :roll:
@kurogumi: Ah it's been a while! How are things? Are you doing well? :)
@Rukaeru: Well here is the update so I hope you like it! :lol:
@BbSis: Ahh don't die on me! LIVE! :bleed eyes:
@Megumi: NO! Don't cry yet! We haven't seen the ending yet. :P
Well here's part 2! I hope you guys enjoy it. Let's see what happens between Atsuko and Minami now that the serect is out.
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Chapter 20 part 2
(Day 30)
"Why didn't you tell me you were dying?"
Minami felt as if her world was crashing down on her. Atsuko knew Minami's condition now. Everything was over.
"Atsuko I didn't wasnt to tell you because I was afraid that you would treat me differently." Minami said.
"Treat you differently?"
"Yeah! Like you wouldn't treat me like regular people."
"Minami how could you say that?"
Atsuko couldn't stop crying. She just stared at Minami with sadness in her eyes.
"Minami even if I had known I wouldn't have treated you any different than I do with the others. When I met you I fell in love with you and nothing would change my view on you."
"I also didn't want you to think I was weak."
"Minami you are the strongest person I know! You took on my father and won. Now I think that's strong."
"I'm sorry Atsuko. But I just didn't want to tell anyone."
"Do you have any idea how I feel! I'm in love with you Minami. I imagined what my life would be like in the future with you by my side. I was finally going to be happy and we'd live our lives out together. But it looks like that isn't going to come true. How many days do you have left now 10?'
"18..."
"Your time is running out and there's nothing I can do about it! If you had told me this I would've spent more time with you. I would've been with you all the time and made your final days here happy ones."
"Atsuko I-"
"I don't want to hear it. I'm done with you Minami. Good bye."
Atsuko ran out the room crying leaving Minami behind. Minami got up and tried to follow her out but the nurses dragged her back in.
"Atsuko!"
It was after they're argument Minami was finally released. When she got to school, everyone started to act weird about her. Apparently everyone now knew about Minami's condition. She was sitting at her desk when her teacher walked over to her.
"Hello Takahashi-san, you won't need to worry about anymore home work assignments. You are being taken out of school for the rest of your time."
After getting kicked out of school, Minami went to the park to think. She was all alone when she felt something grab her from behind.
"Surprise!"
"Ahhh!"
Mianim fell back and landed on her butt.
"Yuko!"
WHACK
"Itai!"
"You need to be careful. She doesn't have much time left you know." Haruna said.
"Sorry..." Yuko said.
"It's fine you guys. So why are you here?"
"We heard you got kicked out of school."
"Yeah. You know why right?"
"Yep. Everyone at school was talking about it." Yuko said.
"Oh... Well I'm sorry for not telling you guys. I was just-"
Minami was cut off when Haruna hugged her. She was crying along with Yuko on the side.
"Haruna I can't breathe."
"Sorry."
Haruna backed off and wiped away her tears.
"Well listen, everyone is planning you a farewell party so come to school again later on tonight."
"Can do."
"Then I'll see you later."
Yuko and Haruna left. Minami decided to go home and sleep for the rest of the day. So much was happening that she didn't want to do anything. She was just so tired of everything.
"Minami wake up..."
Minami opened her eyes and saw her mother staring at her.
"Your friends are waiting for you. You better get going."
"Ok."
Minami put on her shoes and left. When she arrived at the school, the sun was just setting and the school was empty. As she walked into the building, she saw a sign. It was pointing to her classroom. Minami followed the sign and then into the classroom. At first the room was dark but then the lights came on and everyone jumped out.
"SURPRISE!"
"EHHH? What is all this?"
"Your graduation party/farewell party!" Yuko said.
"We wanted to throw this for you before you left." Yukirin said.
"We want you to spend your last moments with us having fun." Rena said.
"So let's celebrate and have fun!" Sae said.
Minami found herself crying with happiness. All her friends had come together to throw her one last party. She was just so happy.
"Now then let's quit the crying and have fun!" Sayaka said.
Everyone had fun and had a good time. It was a time Minami would always remember in her heart. At the end, everyone had a good bye letter so read to Minami. The first one up was Haruna.
"Takamina, I wanted to tell you that becoming your friend was the second best thing that's ever happened to me. You're a really great person and I think you are amazing. It's sad knowing that you'll be leaving us and I'm going to miss you a lot. Don't forget about me while your up there ok?"
The next to go was Sae.
"Takamina... You are the shortest person I ever met. But that's what I like about you. You're smart and funny and I think you're really cool. When I found out about your condition I was devistated. But then I remebered that I had to keep on smiling. I want you to remember my genking smile and think of it whenever you're down. Then maybe things won't seem so bad."
After Sae was Sayaka.
"Takamina I wanted to say that you are a really good person and I'm going to miss you a lot when you're gone. I'll miss the little girl with the bow in her hair who's constantly getting into trouble. I'll miss that little person who in reality has the biggest heart amoung all of us. Things are going to be very sad without you. Things might not even function right. But remember that when you're up there, I hope you look down on us and watch over us."
Next up was Jurina.
"Takamina even though I'm younger than you and not as old, I think you are the wisest person I've ever met. I respect you as my sempai and will always remember you as the person who taught me important things. You're like a big sister to me and I hate to let you go. Even though I act older, I'm still a kid. I remember that and I realize how hard it is going to be for me to let you go. I hope you don't feel any pain. I'll miss you so much."
After Jurina was Rena.
"Takamina I wanted to tell you that I think you are the bravest person I know. You are the strongest and bravest. You're like a super hero from a manga. You are the one who will go head first into a dangerous situation and come out with a big smile on your face. I'm going to miss that smile and I'm sure everyone else is going to miss it as well. But just remember that we will always love you and we will never forget you."
Yukirin was up next.
"You may be short but you are really powerful. I will never forget all the times you stood up for someone and protected them. I will never forget all the crazy things you did because of Mayuyu and all the weird situations we got into. I think that things will be very different without you. I think that when you leave, everyone is going to be lost. But I'm sure that if you watch over us up there, then I think we'll all recover eventually."
Mayuyu was up after.
"You crazy midget. When you told me about your condition I felt like screaming at the world. It wasn't fair that I was going to lose my favorite play mate. Who else am I going to get to get my mangas for me? It won't be the same without you. I'm going to miss you so much and probably cry myself to sleep every night. But for now, I'm going to be brave and smile. I'm going to send you off the best way I know how and that's with a smile."
The last one to go was Yuko.
"Takamina when I first met you I was so glad to find out I wasn't the shortest person anymore. For once I felt tall and mighty. But in all honesty right now I'm weak. I'm not strong like you. I admire your courage. Your bravery. You're going to face death and welcome it with open arms. I like that a lot about you. You accept everything even if it's bad. This is my final goodbye and to be honest I don't want it to be. But everyone has their time. Your's just came too soon. It's not fair but that's how life is and as much as I hate it I'm going to have to live with it. Wait for me Takamina. Eventually we'll all come up there and we can all be happy once again. Just hope you don't wait too long ok?"
Everyone was crying now including Minami. The only thing Minami could do was cry. But then she finally pulled herself together and said,
"Everyone... thank you so much..."
They all gathered for one final group hug. Then to end things, they scattered sakura petals all over the school. They all stood there and watched them scatter in the wind. It was truly a beautiful sight. That day was one of Minami's happiest days. One of the days Minami would never forget.
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One more chapter and then it's done! Ahh it's so sad! I hope you guys enjoyed the story and the up coming ending!
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They took her out of school, Acchan left her, if that farewell party wasn't so great I would have just broke down! Another Great chapter Miyumi-san! :thumbup
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nhyooooo :cry:
I wont die... promise.... If I die, how I'm going to read the last chapter?
Nice update o/
Can't wait for the last one :yep:
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she has like 18 days more. why the heck is everyone saying about her death now? i was like :OMG: :angry1: :fainted: :on voodoo: :on redcard: :on kimbo:
but i want to know what you have in mind, so i'll shut myself down now. can't wait for next!
btw, i wasn't able to vote, but i just want you to know that i'd like to vote for 2nd season of Mad House if I have the chance. I'd love to see more of MariMii if I could. :mon inluv:
anyway, thanks for all the awesome stories! :mon thumb:
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OMG so many emotions..but Atsuko!! where are you?..
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Thanks for the update! Man I teared up during the party scene! Loved everyone's letters to Takamina :D
Sad Atsuko wasn't there :( Looking forward to finding out what happens next :D
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I understand that Acchan is angry but that just.. Wasn't right. "I'm done with you that made me sad...
Please update soon!!!
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:gyaaah: This is just sooooo sad~~~~~~ MINAMI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :pleeease:
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Let me cry in my sleep :pen_cry:
This is :cry: their farewell letter was so :cry:
Sae-chans LOL : Takamina you are the shortest person I've ever met :rofl:
Oh Yukos letter made the biggest impression on me
Acchan! Where did you go? Don't dump Minami! :cry:
So the next update will be the last :cry:
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
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I'll be waiting for u' update!.....Atsuko~~!!!WHY!?!?
Anyway i'll be looking forward to u'r next Update
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Well everyone this is the last chapter! After this it's on to the next one which is season 2 of Mad House! I hope you all like the ending and I must warn you, there is going to be a few tear jerkers.
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Chapter 21
(Day 48)
Time had passed since Minami last spoke to any of her friends. During the last few weeks, Minami's body became very weak and had to be hospitalized. She was now on her death bed reliving all her past memories. All the moments of happiness, of sadness, of anger, and even love. But the ones she remembered the most were the ones with Atsuko.
"Atsuko..."
Minami stared out the window looking into the sky. It was a perfect day to die. There were no clouds in the sky and the sun was shinging brightly. The birds were chirping and there was a slight breeze. It was the perfect conditions for dyiing. Minami was just lying in her bed waiting. Waiting for her heart to eventually stop and she can finally rest. But then there was a knock on the door.
"Come in.."
The door opened slowly and in came Atsuko. She was wearing a plain white dress and had a bow in her hair.
"Atsuko.. What are you doing here?"
"I came to say goodbye."
"Oh I see...."
Atsuko walked over and held Minami's hand.
"I wanted to tell you that I enjoyed my time with you. I'm going to miss you so much and I will never forget you. I don't know what's going to happen to me. But I do know that no matter what I will keep on living for your sake." Atsuko said.
"That's good to hear. I don't want you mourning over my death forever. It's not that big of a deal."
"Shut up."
Atusko looked at Minami with a souless glare.
"Your death is imporatnt. To me and everyone else. We're all going to miss you and we don't want you to leave. Life is unfair. It does things to us that reminds us that the world isn't perfect. You just happened to be one of it's unfortunate victims."
"I know. I hate it too. But I can't do much about it. This is the path I was given and I have to follow it. I can't do anyhting to stop it. It's how things are."
"Well sometimes you have to walk off the path and make your own."
"What?"
"Goodbye Minami. I guess I wont' be seeing you again."
Atsuko leaned in and kissed Minami's lips. Minami could feel the tears running down Atsuko's face as they kissed. This kiss was their last kiss together. Their last moment together. This was it and after that Minami would be gone forever. Minami savored every moment. She just wanted to stop time right there and never move on. But all good things come to an end and Atsuko pulled back. She held Minami's hand one last time before leaving.
"Atsuko..."
Minami's hand remained where Atusko had touched it. She was starting to lose that warm touch and now it was starting to get cold. Minami leaned back and slowly started to fall asleep. She wasn't sure if she woke up but she did know that this was going to be her last moment. She looked out at the sky one last time before passing out.
"Wait for me God. I'm coming up to meet you."
Then Minami passed out. An hour later, Takahashi Minami died of heart attack. They say that she went out the most peaceful way anyone could die. Painless and in a dream.
THE END.....
Or is it?
Minami opened her eyes and saw she was in the hospital still. She haden't died yet. But why? Why was she still alive? So many thoughts were racing through her head. But then the door opened and Mariko came in.
"Mariko?"
"Hey you're awake!"
"Yeah... what happened? Why aren't I dead?" Minami asked.
"Because you were lucky." Mariko said.
"What?"
"Rena was able to save your life but at a cost. She had to do a heart transplant from donar."
"Who was the donar?"
"You'll find out soon. Everyone come on in."
The door opened and everyone came in. One by one they all came out. Sayaka, Sae, Yuko, Haruna, Jurina, Rena, Mayu and Yuki. But where was Atsuko. It was then a heavy feeling hit Minami. Atsuko wasn't there. Which can only mean one thing.
"Don't tell me...."
"I'm sorry but-"
The door opened and Atsuko stepped in alive and well.
"Atsuko!"
"Minami!"
Atsuko ran over and hugged Minami. Minami was now crying her eyes out as she held onto Atsuko.
"I thought you died! I thought you gave up your heart for me!" Minami cried.
"Actually the one who donated the heart wasn't any human. It was from a pig." Mariko said.
"A pig?"
"Yes. Pigs have organs that are very similar to humans. One of those organs happened to be a heart. So thanks to Rena, we were able to operate and transfer the new heart."
"Thank you so much Rena."
"It was my pleasure."
Rena bowed and then left followed by the others. Now it was just Atsuko and Minami.
"I'm so glad you're alive." Atsuko said.
"I am too."
"I thougth I was going to lose the only friend I had! The only one I trusted. The only one I loved."
"We'll I'm never leaving you ever again so you don't need to worry. We'll be together forever."
"You mean it?"
Minami leaned in and kissed Atsuko's lips.
"I swear on my almost lost life."
"Minami..."
The two embraced in another kiss locked in each other's lips. Minami was given a second chance and she wasn't going to waste it. She was going to live the rest of her life with the one she loved. She was never going to let go. Minami was never going to lose what she held close to her. She would hold it and protect it with her life. When all hope seemed lost, she was able to find a light. She was able to open up and live out her life. Then when the end was near a miracle happened and she was able to live. Minami was able to live and live on past the 48 days.
THE END
For real this time....
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Well there is the end! I hope you guys liked the story and please feel free to comment! The next story is Mad House season 2 so get ready for a ton of crazy and fun stuff! There's going to be a ton of new stories and even some new characters! I hope you guys liked the story and again, I'll be looking forward to seeing you all in Mad House.
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awww cute final :D for a second a thougth that you kill minami or acchan -_-
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OMG! What a cute end *.* Loved it!!!
Very cleaver that heart transplant thing with pig organs^^
And they lived happy ever after *.*
I'm still finishing Mad House, but can't wait for season 2 o/
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OMG HAPPY ENDING! I don't know why the pig part was so funny to me! Bless your soul, I'll be awaiting madhouse~
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what.. happy ending?... :?
just when I though I will read a sappy2 pic :(
it's rare to read a sappy2 pic
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Uwahaha. To me, I wouldn't mind either ending. LOL. XD The "first ending" was... well, no words, but the "second ending" was just sweet. :P X3
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I'M VERY HAPPY AND SAD AT THE SAME TIME
BECAUSE FIRST, YOU UPDATE BUT IT'S ENDING (HUHU)
BUT I ENJOYED READING IT..
THANKS FOR WONDERFUL FAN FICTION OF ATSUMINA..
I HOPE YOU MAKE ANOTHER STORY..
THANK YOU..
I'M ALSO YOUR READERS AT FICTION (MAD HOUSE)
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Awww yay I'm so happy Minami got to live I actually thought she was going to die at first. Happy ending :) I can't wait for the mad house sequel :D
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I'm so happy Takamina didn't die!!!
Can't wait for the mad house season 2 ^^
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Kyaa! Happy ending!
At first I also tough that Acchan gave her heart to Minami :cry:
Phew! :lol:
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i just ended reading space love ~~ :wub: :wub:
what an amazing fic there was action and then romantic and cute stuff and also some pervy stuff :on bleed:
you are so good at writting, it's impressive, you are really creative and also all the pairings were perfect, all of them were the ones that i ship :twothumbs
now i'm going to start reading 48 days, i'm really looking foward to it~~~
i'll put another comment here when i'm finished...
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oh my~~ :farofflook:
i just finished reading 48 days...
i'm not really a person who cries easily but i couldn't hold back my tears, i'm glad it had a happy ending.
as i said before you are really an amazing writer, i'm going to check out all your other fics, i bet they are all awesome ^^
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Miyumi San, you are such a good writer, I have read all your fanfics and they are all awesome! :thumbup
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Yeay!!!!! Happy ending, happly ever after :D
I really cry when they make farewell party :cry: :cry:
Thank you for the happy ending :twothumbs
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Great fanfic... for both Space Love and 48 Days...
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :theking
Hope to see your new series soon
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Whew, reread both series...
and bluntly putting it, very enjoyable~
Space Love was really lol... Maid miichan, NyanNyan alien,
UE KARA MARIKO! Yea, that was the best <3
And then, 48 Days...
For some reason, I felt like punching Jurina for causing trouble,
but in the end(no more being mad against Jurina)~ happy end... lol the pig heart.
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Omg space love is so cool 8)
48 days is so sad :cry:, but I am glad it was a happy ending :)
Time to search for your other fanfic :)
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Uwahh~~~~
Why did I cry :'(
I was happy that it has a happy ending
But sad that it ended
I really love your fics