Good start ADogg!!
A little short, but hope your next update's longer...
Wonder what this 'evil' might be... sounds like a hardcore fic xD
Just one suggestion - once you put a full stop, space bar once before continuing... this is me just being a perfectionist... but hey, it'll look better! ^__^
And be careful with things like: there = over there, as opposed to their = belong to them.
That's all. But good start, and despite not being an IshiYoshi fic, I'll deal with it due to pure interest.
Update soon!