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Re: R I V E R - SSA Log #2 (9/17/11)
« Reply #60 on: September 18, 2011, 11:50:05 AM »
Takamina, you saw nothing but I'm sure you wanna to see everything hehehe
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Re: R I V E R - SSA Log #2 (9/17/11)
« Reply #61 on: September 18, 2011, 12:05:20 PM »
zannen de, Takamina... you didn't get to see more of her skin. :grin: wish you 'luck' in the future..  :thumbup

why do I get this funny feeling that arisa-san will be in charge of the next SSA logs? XD
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Re: R I V E R - SSA Log #2 (9/17/11)
« Reply #62 on: September 18, 2011, 01:10:26 PM »
LOL

The sexual tension between Takamina and Acchan just keeps on increasing!!!! :grin: :grin: :grin:
Damn Takamina, my imagination is running wild!!!
Just confront Acchan already and tell her you love her!!!

GREAT JOB :twothumbs

update ASAP
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Re: R I V E R - SSA Log #2 (9/17/11)
« Reply #63 on: September 19, 2011, 06:04:41 AM »
I MANAGED AN UPDATE BEFORE I LEFT  :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: *is awesome like that*

This was just....Oh Riri-chan, oh ZuZu ;____;///

Thanks for making my night  :heart:
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Re: R I V E R - SSA Log #3 (9/19/11)
« Reply #64 on: September 20, 2011, 02:01:26 AM »
Stupid Sexy Acchan and That Stupid Haircut

SSA Log #3 – Entered 9/19/11 by Divine Vengeance

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A/N: Here's to stealing my own series back. Kidding, kidding LOL

As you can probably see, the SSA logs are a collaborative work. arisa03 and I will both be writing entries every now and then, so please look forward to more from the both of us!

Anon out~
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Re: R I V E R - SSA Log #3 (9/19/11)
« Reply #65 on: September 20, 2011, 02:36:06 AM »
LOL

Duo midgets are so fliping hilarious :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

Ohh boyTakamina :lol: Stop blaming your stupid sexy Atsuko for every stupid thing that you do! :rofl: I really love Atsumina's moments :heart: :heart: :heart:

Another awesome chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD XD XD XD XD XD
update ASAP!!!!
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Re: R I V E R - SSA Log #3 (9/19/11)
« Reply #66 on: September 20, 2011, 05:02:54 AM »
NISHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII I LOVE YOU FOREVER FOR THIS LOL.

Thanks for making my sleepless night that much better ; w ; b

Can't wait for more madness :on GJ:
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Re: R I V E R - SSA Log #3 (9/19/11)
« Reply #67 on: September 20, 2011, 05:57:37 AM »
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“I’m pretty sure our lesson wasn’t on ‘Takahashi Minami heart Takahashi Atsuko.'”

LOL All these SSA logs are killing me!

I needed this to end my night.
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Re: R I V E R - SSA Log #3 (9/19/11)
« Reply #68 on: September 20, 2011, 05:59:53 AM »
lol Atsumina couple  :heart:

i hope you put some cute kojiyuu moments too in the next chapter  :thumbsup


update soon  :bow:
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Re: R I V E R - SSA Log #3 (9/19/11)
« Reply #69 on: September 20, 2011, 06:15:35 AM »
love this chapter.. yeah acchan stop seducing takamina jajajaj...
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Re: R I V E R - SSA Log #3 (9/19/11)
« Reply #70 on: September 20, 2011, 08:19:58 AM »
Ahahahah poor teacher lol and I llike Acchan's note xD
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Re: R I V E R - SSA Log #3 (9/19/11)
« Reply #71 on: September 20, 2011, 09:11:59 AM »
Another awesome SSA log chapter!!  :twothumbs :twothumbs

I'm looking forward to more from the collaborative work...  :bow: :bow:
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Re: R I V E R - SSA Log #3 (9/19/11)
« Reply #72 on: September 20, 2011, 09:13:33 AM »
Huaaah! I'm shivering here now, haHa!
I Love Acchan's note, haHa! So their Love is mutuaL huh.. Umh~!
haHa! and the Two midgets is so hiLarious, haHa!
Specially! when their wiping the whiteboard, haHa!
 I can imagined that their are jumping and shouting to eachother, haHa!
and Yuuchan! Language~! haHa..

Takahashi Minami Love Takahashi Atsuko FOREVER!!!
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Re: R I V E R - SSA Log #3 (9/19/11)
« Reply #73 on: September 22, 2011, 04:44:44 AM »
Dear Divine Vengeance

 :wriggly:

can i just say how much i like both the fic's you got going on!!!  :luvluv1: :luvluv2:

Especially the theirs SSA Log!!! HAHAHAH The beginnings of Takaachan!!!

Awww They're so cute!!!

 :mon sweat: I would've replied earlier, cause i started reading your Fic from when you first started but didn't bother to comment.

Heeey, it wasn't my fault im too tired  :mon exhaust: :mon sweat:

My teacher tend to try to kill me during school and usually when i get back home I'm like --->  :imdead:

Anyway, Please update soon!!!
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Re: R I V E R - SSA Log #3 (9/19/11)
« Reply #74 on: September 22, 2011, 05:50:10 PM »
YAY I'm on a commenting roll before I pull another disappearing act !!! bwahahhahah

Love your fic, but I think I already mentioned that before, if not then I say it again 'I LOVE IT!!!!'

these SSA Logs are just so funny, I started laughing while I was sitting quietly in the corner earning me a few looks from my coworkers haha.

Please update soon
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 4 (9/22/11)
« Reply #75 on: September 23, 2011, 01:12:48 AM »
R I V E R

Chapter 4
(Posted 9/22/11)

Warning: Mild language and violence ahead.

A/N: I have no idea how military technology and the likes work, so forgive me if anything is terribly inaccurate/fake/impossible/whatnot. Please ignore any inconsistencies or anything that seems ridiculous technology-wise ; v ;

Obligatory Sathday updates ftw.

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Thank you most dearly for your continued support \ ; 3 ; / I hope this brought a few laughs xD
Danke once again to arisa03/satsunyan for her reassurance~
Please continue to follow these girls on their mission ; v ;

Anon out~


Herp a derp.
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 4 (9/22/11)
« Reply #76 on: September 23, 2011, 01:46:36 AM »
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“It’s not like Kojiharu needs to talk when she gets some real action, you know what I mean?”

pfft. You're killing me here!

I don't know much of army or military stuff besides what I've learned from war movies and Ghost In the Shell. So judging from that knowledge, you're doing pretty good.

And you keep the action and comedy up to par! :thumbup

Plus yay for SaeYaka moment~
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 4 (9/22/11)
« Reply #77 on: September 23, 2011, 01:51:40 AM »
Awesome!!!
we even got some Saeyaka moments hehe...though Im not a big fan of the twin tower!!!
I love the names that you made up  :lol:

Takamina as always being Takamina....always thinking for the others first before her own self.
Don't worry you've got great friends to help you!!!!

VERY AWESOME CHAPTER!!!!!

UPDATE SOON XD

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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 4 (9/22/11)
« Reply #78 on: September 23, 2011, 02:03:20 AM »
Forever distracted by Yukirin's FFFFFFFFFFFFF cup beauties. ;D

Mind also forever concentrating on OTP MaYuki LOL

But Nishi... wai you so funny? o A o

Keep up da good work~ XD
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 4 (9/22/11)
« Reply #79 on: September 23, 2011, 03:01:41 AM »
MaYuki~!!!♥

LOL HEY GAY BEES xD I'm dying! good one! xD

Please update soon!
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