@cisda83 : well Jurina is same age with Rena just that her birth date is few month later then Rena. about Atsuko & Takamina still need to wait a bit longer~
@kurosawa87 : I will try to make it more interesting, thanks for the comment.
@Rena-chan Daisuki : Thanks for the comment, I try to updated more.
@POPCAT : should we help her??
@cmze : I rather you ask me those question so I can have more idea to arrange the scene~
@Shinoki : well Tomochin is good the close range so that she wont be bad in speed but not specialized.
@leEwẬy : for Acchan maybe just interest with Takamina~??
@ptrd3009 : thanks for the comment. I will do it more better?
@Silent Reader : Thanks for reading the Fic, Hope you can comment as well to give me more idea to cont this fic.
Chapter 3
*Meanwhile in the War*
The battle of Sado & Mayu is tier, Sado have few wound and Mayu is tired.
This Magician is quite strong Sado think in mind.
If this battle continue my magic point will use up too Mayu think in mind.
Even both of them is wounded and lack of stamina, they still fight hard for the sake of their clan, Mayu cast a hundred ice bolt in one cast towad Sado but sudden came out a fire wall surround Sado block all the ice bolt.
Sado say, Yuko you are late.
Yuko reply, Gomen , I just came back from other mission!
Yuko ask, Sado are you kidding me? You are our top and you losing to a magician kid?
Sado reply Yuko we been battling for few hour, and now you come act up mighty?
Yuko joke Sado~ come on~ Just joking.
Sado yelled YUKO watch out! Sado cover Yuko with her body and get stab by few spear.
Yuko yelled Sado! SADO! YOU BASTARD ANGEL!!
Yuko cast a spell and sudden a meteor came from nowhere rushing to the angel palace
Mayu yelled Team A harder your shield, Team B prepare cast shield magic in case that team A shield can’t hold this stone. Stupid midget make the battle became more harder Mayu think in mind.
*Black & Tomochin battle*
After they having few hour of high speed battle, their troops was watching their battle. And both of them have back off for few meter. While the two of them have stop the battle, and taking breath those troops have start to charge to enemy troops and start the battle.
Tomochin say it while taking breath is that all you got devil?
Black answer do you want to test?
Tomochin dash to black give her a left straight and a right cross, but Black is fast and dough the punch while black evaded the right cross, Tomochin quickly turn her body give a sidekick to black, make black fly 5 m far, due that a chance Tomochin dash to Black and hold on her shoulder use her knee keep hiting Black stomach for 5-6 times then give a turn around kick make Black fly top and she use a rising sun punch but sudden went in a dark area that can’t even see anything, she just feel the pain of getting sliced, few minute later the dark area was gone and she saw black was in front of her. While she wanted to dash to Black, Black was gone once she realize Black already at the back of her and give her a deep cut on her back, while Tomochin losing her strength she quickly catch Black hand and give her a deadly blow that wounded Black badly, Black get hit by the punch and kick Tomochin away, trying to retreat but suddenly came out dark hole and suck in them in, due that Tomochin have no strength to fight back she just get suck in by the dark hole. Black use all her strength to escape from the dark hole with the wounded body but she success to escape from it.
*Other side Gekikara & Centre Battle*
Geki swing her scythe around and killed a lot of devil and angel, she keep laughing while she swing and her scythe involve to a black katana, Geki talk to her sword, hee~ hee~ you have eaten enough? Or you need more? Centre can’t hold her anger anymore rush to Geki with her first strike the inferno stab ( a fire straight stab attack), Geki block her attack and use a moon slice( A very fast turn around slice) return fire, Centre quicky back off and jump use the bowling bash( A very powerful strike from above), Geki use a Rise Demon (a force attack from below to above) to hit back, both of them was back off by the skill pressure, and they rush to each again, Centre use a nine dragon striking(An attack pattern like having nine dragon fly around) and Geki use a blade tornado(An tornado that create by slice) while both skill knock together they get wounded badly and taking breath but Centre don’t let Geki rest and dash to Geki using phantom slash ( an illusion slash which create a illusion dash to the opponent and slash from the back). When Centre slash Geki, Geki suddenly became some smoke, and far away from Centre and preparing a energy blast (something like cero in bleach manga/anime). Once Centre saw Geki was preparing the shot she quickly keep her sword and draw out her divine shield dash to Geki and prepare to take that shot head on. Geki saw Centre rushing toward her with the divine shield, she collect back her energy and blink to the back of Centre, with that move catch Centre careless, while Centre realize Geki was behind her already receive a critical stab by Geki, she kick Geki away make Geki pull her sword out from her wound. Nee~ okotteru? Geki asked, Centre didn’t give any reply. Nee~ okotteru? Geki ask again, Centre keep silent. Centre concentred on her power try to heal her bleeding wound, But sudden came out a dark hole keep suck in everything into the hole when Geki saw that dark hole suck in all the thing inside she retreat from it, but Centre don’t give a chance for Geki retreat , She dash to Geki stab her from the back due that Geki was concentrate on retreat didn’t realize Centre was there, After Centre stab Geki she quickly lock Geki with her body and don’t give Geki a chance to move and both of them is close to the dark hole, at that time Black saw the situation quickly dash to Geki try to pull her out but the dark hole power was to strong with the strength she got and her body was hurt badly. After that, the 3 of them is suck in by the dark hole.
*Back to the front door*
There is a dark hole that suck in everything when Sado saw that she react quickly command all the devil to retreat but she was get helped by Yuko while retreat because of the wound with her, Yuko quickly grab Sado and retreat. Both side have lost large amount of soldier then they expected because of the dark hole.
*Devil Kingdom*
Report my lord we have failed, we even lost 2 general and large amount of soldier, said Yuko.
WHAT?? What have happen in the battle field? Ask D.L
My lord we are in the battle try our best to defeat those Angel but suddenly it came out a dark hole keep suck things in, Geki & Black cant escape from the dark hole and get suck by it. Said Yuko
Dark hole?? How about Sado is she get suck by the dark hole as well? Ask D.L
No my lord, Sado was hurt badly because she protect me and get stabbed by few spear from the angel soldier, and that dark hole came out from nowhere keep sucking things, Said Yuko.
Where Sado now? Is she alright? Ask D.L
Yes my lord, Sado now was taken care by the medic team now, she be alright. Said Yuko
That great! Yuko you should go get some rest. Said D.L
Yes my lord, I take my leave from here. Said Yuko (leave the room)
Dark hole huh… I think I should do something to find out this dark hole.(D.L think in mind)
*Angel Palace*
Lord the battle is over and we have a lot of soldier wounded and a large amount and 2 general was MIA say Mayu to A.L
WHAT!! Tomochin & Centre was MIA? Quick! Send 5 searching team to find both of them back. Said A.L
Is useless my lord, they was suck in by a dark hole that came from nowhere it. Said Mayu.
A dark hole that came from nowhere? Ask A.L
Yes my lord, a dark hole that came from no where that suck them in and lot and lot of soldier~ Said Mayu.
Oh I see, Don’t mind Tomo & Centre first, what we need to do first is rebuild the palace and take care of those wounded soldier. Said A.L
All the wounded soldier was taken care by medic team it will be fine soon, and the builder is now repair and rebuilding the palace. Said Mayu
That a great job Mayu, So you go take some rest once you done came to me and we do some research about the dark hole, we must find Tomochin & Centre back. Said A.L
Yes lord, I take my leave from here! Said Mayu.
-TBC-
Sorry for my bad english,
Which writing style is better?? Chp1 & 2 or Chp 3??
I wondering for chapter 4, should I go with human world or devil world?
IF any reader wanted to add any character in this fiction please let me know,
Cause I'm thinking to add some character inside this fic but i have no idea who should I add in,
Please comment more, because I have no idea how to continue, maybe now my brain already JAM!!!
Topic: WORLD of ANGEL & DEVIL [chapter 3 <24/5/2013>] (Read 8416 times)