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Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
« Reply #160 on: December 28, 2012, 11:37:04 AM »
Oh S***! Dangerous relationship!!!!  :mon mad:

@chichay12 : oi oi! dont say that! =.= it's me korin.... XD

Please update soon!! I wanna know what happen to Kai x Ray and Acchan x Takeru :mon pissed:

Takeru reminded me again of 'that scandal'!  Let me forget this!! :mon slapself:
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Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
« Reply #161 on: December 28, 2012, 11:47:40 AM »
takeru + ray = trouble...
I want more!! :twisted:

WE WANT MORE!! :twisted: :lol:

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Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
« Reply #162 on: December 28, 2012, 12:51:59 PM »
DRAMA!!!  :cathappy:

this is going to become so complicated, ahh~~


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Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
« Reply #164 on: December 28, 2012, 01:18:11 PM »
i hate it when boys break there promises.....  :frustrated:

kai!!! :scolding: :scolding: :scolding: :scolding:
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Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
« Reply #165 on: December 28, 2012, 02:09:38 PM »
Thank for update  :mon star:
takeru + ray = big troubles. Kai and Atsuko wake up  :mon headbang:
PLease update soon  :mon innocent:

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Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
« Reply #166 on: December 28, 2012, 05:11:54 PM »
lol...wtf..
i think ray dont really like kAI..
she just want to get car , house from her father,, :P

hehehe...
arh... i really want sweet moment more
next chapter be will world war 3?? :twisted:
hahahha... :heart:
i hope it will not take to much time for peaceful agreement  :w00t:

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Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
« Reply #167 on: December 28, 2012, 05:29:32 PM »
Not too much drama, okay? Although I'm fine with drama, as long it's KaixAtsuko in the end!

LOL. It's okay, no worries... It's a KaixAcchan fic by the way.. I just want to test their feeling and know how far they can control their ego of being so selfish.


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Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
« Reply #168 on: December 28, 2012, 05:35:33 PM »
CHAPTER 10 Part 3 (Last Part)
Oi oi, sorry for the troubles I made, but this is the climax of the story. I till postpone the solution for the next chapter.


*Acchan’s POV*

After walk around from a shop to another shop, then I finally find a beautiful wallet for my mother’s birthday. I decided to go home since I already found the gift, so I ask Takeru to go. When we go out of the shopping center building, I find the sun is set. Time flies so fast.

“Ah, what if we have a dinner first before we go home?” Takeru said.

“That’s not a bad idea. Let’s go, I know a good resto with delicious foods!” I said. I just want to be nice with my friend, considering he’s accompanied me to look for my mother’s present, so I guess it’s okay if I take him to have a dinner.

*End of Acchan’s POV*


Kai is driving his car while Ray is sitting in beside him. When the car stopped by the traffic light, Kai take his phone. He’s about to call Acchan, just to ensure her that he’s really sorry for not coming to the show.

Meanwhile, Acchan walk across the road when the traffic is stopped. Takeru hold Acchan’s hand before they cross the road. It seems like Acchan feels familiar with the black SUV that stopped on the road. She glance at the car, and…

“KAI??” she thought.

“ATSUKO?!” Kai thought, when he coincidentally look at the people that walk cross the road and see someone who is he knows exactly, Acchan.

Kai and Atsuko’s eyes met. Acchan walk slower, her hearts feels like breaking down to see Kai in the car with A GIRL BESIDES HIM. Acchan thinks, it’s okay if Kai in a car with a girl if the girl is his friend or maybe cousin, but… “He said he had a job in the office, but why does he’s with a girl? He lied..” Acchan thought.

Kai really want to shout out Acchan’s name when he saw her walked cross the road, but… “WHO’S THE GUY HOLDING HER HAND??” Kai thought. It really made Kai’s heart break apart to see that scene.

They finally just stare each other until Acchan and Takeru reach the sidewalk and the other car behind Kai’s car keep toot the horn because the traffic light is changing and he have to drive his car again.

“Kai? What happen?” Ray asked, she feels something wrong with Kai’s expression lately.

“Nothing..” Kai answered. Now his head is full of question about the last scene when he sae Acchan.

Meanwhile, Takeru feels the same thing because Acchan’s behaviour suddenly changing since they crossed the road. “Acchan, what happened? You seems like not in the mood.”

“Ah, nothing.. I’m just.. I guess I saw someone I know, but maybe I’m wrong” Acchan said.

Then, Kai’s dinner going so boring because all Kai think during the dinner is Acchan. He just talk if Ray or the chiefman ask him something. So about Acchan, she seems to be quiet during the dinner, especially when she stares at the music stage in the café they have dinner now. The stage reminds her of Kai, when he sang a song for her. It was so romantic, but… “WHY,KAI?? WHY?? Are you cheating on me?” Acchan thought.

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At night, Kai really got a headache because of today, it’s not only because of the problem with Acchan, but the job today really made him feel so tired. He lay on his bed after took a bath. He takes his phone, type Acchan’s number, but before he dial it he think so hard.
He really want to talk to her, but there’s something bother him that makes him so angry and disappointed with Acchan. “She was with another guy!!”
“Okay, I’ll call her, just to confirm what did she do with that guy on the road. BUT… Oh my GOD, she also saw me with Ray!! Oh, I wonder what she thought about it. She must be feel the same thing. She must be thinking that I’m cheating on her. Yeah.. but she was with another guy holding her hand!! Arrrrggghhhhh GOD HEEEELP!” finally Kai just throw his phone away and drown her face on his pillow. “Why, Acchan… why??!!”

Not more than 15 meters away from his bedroom, a girl hugging her teddy bear—crying. “Kai, you lied to me. If you said that you were in the office, then why did you in the car with a girl? Are you cheating on me? You should explain it to me, Kai!! Why don’t you call me or something? Oh, yeah… maybe you’re afraid that you’ve been caught cheating on me, so you won’t call me to explain anything. BUT… I feel something different with his eyes, the way he looked at me when I saw him on the road. He looks like… sad, shocked, angry…” Acchan thought, tear drops keep rolling on her cheeks. “Takeru… yeah, he saw me with Takeru. Did he angry? Maybe he thought that I’m the one who’s cheating on him. Yeah, I’m sure, that eyes must be said that he’s jealous. BUT HE WAS WITH ANOTHER GIRL!!”

Then after that day, both of them don’t call or greet each other even if they meet in front of their house. Both of them looks like avoiding each other.


*End of CHAPTER 10*

How was that?
Ahahaha.. don't be mad okay, gonna update the next chapter soon for the solution of this world war 3. Calm down, the couple have to be togerther again..

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Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
« Reply #169 on: December 28, 2012, 05:48:10 PM »
ACCHAN!!!DONT CRY...
kai(chem-san) will explain everything..XD

 i want more trouble...XD
i think i becoming S now.. :doh:
thank you for the update..

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Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
« Reply #170 on: December 28, 2012, 05:54:19 PM »
Kai and Acchan!!!  :pleeease:
Kai and Acchan, you should explain!!!  :mon mad:
Please update soon, chemicalstar-san!!  :mon whine:
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Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
« Reply #171 on: December 28, 2012, 05:58:42 PM »
This chapter makes me so badly for both because of two troubles  :mon mad: lol  I hope that this will improve  :mon innocent:
Please update soon I can't wait for the next  :mon star:

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Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
« Reply #172 on: December 28, 2012, 06:02:50 PM »
lol..kai u should be the man and explain  :angry:
lol..
atsuko dont be sad...
lol...please be lovey2 again :heart:

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« Reply #173 on: December 28, 2012, 06:04:44 PM »
and word MISUNDERSTANDING breaks in........ jinx of love....

pls. update more.. :)
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Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
« Reply #174 on: December 29, 2012, 04:07:52 AM »
Not too much drama, okay? Although I'm fine with drama, as long it's KaixAtsuko in the end!

yeah!! OMG! so much trouble..

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Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
« Reply #175 on: December 29, 2012, 07:19:58 AM »
 :frustrated:
double trouble
Acchan!!! stay strong

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Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
« Reply #176 on: December 29, 2012, 08:51:37 AM »
Ahhhh!!
Kai and Acchan don't misunderstand   :(
Give each other time to explain...

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Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
« Reply #177 on: December 29, 2012, 07:18:29 PM »
 :kekeke: Hi, chemicalstar... Good job! The new couple needs to communicate and express themselves more to build a firmer and better foundation for their relationship! And of course, needs to quickly learn how to ward off these "noises" (ray & takeru) who will be hovering around them like... houseflies? (= irritating)  :wahaha:
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Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
« Reply #178 on: December 31, 2012, 12:17:24 AM »
OMGIRLLL!! PLEASE EXPLAIN THAT!!! T^T  :deco: :heart: :peace: :catglare:
I love Takamina!! and Mariko-sama!!! but MORE ATSUMINA!!!

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Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
« Reply #179 on: December 31, 2012, 07:07:04 PM »
please update soon

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