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Title: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki CH.30 <THE END> REPLIES!! <3
Post by: cmze on June 13, 2012, 12:58:56 PM
Okay i know i have already 3 fics on going why would i want to add one more? i don't know it's 5 am and this idea came to my head and i just drank coca cola that's why i'm up..                               
Hope you don't mind and like my new fanfic..well is a SaeMaYuki Fanfic... Yes!
the idea is a kinda cliche but i hope you enjoy please comment let me know what you think

                       My sister's Girlfriend
                                   
I'm Watanabe Mayu i'm 15 years old and i have a sister her name is Sae chan..
Sae chan and me used to get along,we used to do everything together till she appear in our lives..
I met her first i won't lie! it's my fault that now she and Sae chan are glued together..My sister totally fell head over heals for her everything you talk with Sae chan, she might answer "i gotta tell Yukirin" "Yukirin this!" "Yukirin that!" is kinda annoying that even i got to the fact that i hate her..i can't stand her,she always acts nice to me,i think she sees me like a little sister or something because she always smile to me..
I wish that day never happen so the two of them would never met...
but i guess you can cheat destiny they seem "meant for eachother.."
there's nothing that anyone could do about it "i guess..."
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3
Post by: gekirena on June 13, 2012, 02:01:56 PM
cant wait to read the first chapter! ^_^ this'll be a MaYuki fic too right????
MaYuki~~~  :cow:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on June 13, 2012, 02:46:18 PM
So mayu hates yuki an sae is yukis girlfriend for a long time now ?? Am actually shipping mayuki now coz of you lol its intresting so far so I can't wait till u update next
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3
Post by: yuukimoko on June 13, 2012, 06:02:36 PM
I do hope it's Mayuki! this pair needs more love!!!!!!!!
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 1.The beggining
Post by: cmze on June 13, 2012, 09:21:58 PM
                              My sister's Girlfriend
                               1.The beggining

(8 years ago)
Give me back my ball! Little Mayu says sobbing in a low voice
what? i didn't hear you! a girl says playing with Mayu's ball
what the baby can't speak louder? another girl says
both girls laugh and keep mocking Mayu
Mayu cries and murmures "Sae chan where are you?" 
here's your ball! one of the girls says and throws it to Mayu's head and then it bounce back to the girl 
*Mayu cries more*
hey! A girl says and takes the ball 
who are you? you should mess with us! One of girls says
go away! The girl says mad 
we'll be back! The two girls say and then walks away
 are you okay? The older girl says 
Mayu slowly opens her eyes 
here's your ball! The girl says with a smile and giving Mayu her ball back 
my forhead hurts! Little Mayu says 
it's all red! The older girl says and then kisses it 
Mayu blushes 
better? The older girl asks 
yes! Mayu says with a smile 
"Mayu chan!" Someone says 
"Sae chan" Mayu says 
are you okay? Sae asked and examinates her little sister carfully 
i'm okay! Mayu says with a smile 
who are you? Sae says and looks closely to the other girl 
hey I'm Kashiwagi Yuki! The girl says with a smile 
~~~~~~~~~~~Present~~~~~~~~~
*Alarm clock ringing* 
Mayu wakes up and turn it off..
she got up from bed and walked to the bathroom on he way to the bathroom she passes Sae chan's room
*Conversation on the phone*
Good Moring Yuki chan!
how's your sleeping? did you dream about me? Sae asks 
Lame! Mayu thought and went to the bathroom 
*Eating Breakfast* 
Mayu take off your headphones! Mayu's mom says 
good morning everyone! Sae says 
hello honey! Sae's dad says 
*doorbell ringing* 
ohh it's for me! Sae says and goes running to open the door
let me guess "Yuki chan!" Mayu says not so happy 
Good morning! Yuki says 
good morning Yuki san! Mayu's mom and Sae's dad said in unision while Mayu ignored her 
it's getting late! Mayu says while gets up and puts her headphones on 
but Sae chan you haven't ate a thing! Mayu's mom says concerned 
well Mayu chan already wants to go to school! Sae replies 
i can go by myself!  Mayu answers 
no,you can't! Sae says and goes behind Mayu 
* i rather ignore them that they ignore me!* Mayu thought and kept walking to the bus stop 
Sae chan a made you a cake! Yuki says and gives to Sae 
Thanks Yukirin! Sae says and hugs Yuki 
Mayu pouted and kept walking 
<At school>
i heard that Sae chan was chosen as the captain of the football team is that true? Lovetan asked 
i don't know! Mayu answers 
ready for physical education? The teacher asks
i'm not feeling okay? Mayu says 
don't come at me with that Watanabe..I know what your planning,you can't skip this class again! The teacher says
i mean it! Mayu says 
she's not as good as her sister! A girl says 
Sae isn't my sister! Mayu replied 
you can't skip this class! The teacher says 
damn it! Mayu says 
*end of the match* 
i'm all sweaty! Mayu says complaining 
Watanabe you really sucks! A girl says 
yes,i'm really bad..as you know "i don't like chasing somthing or someone" Mayu replies 
owwwww! everyone in the changing room says 
what did you say? The girl asks 
what you heard,now move i gotta change! Mayu answers 
You should be careful Watanabe your sister is not gonna be for ever by your side! The girl says
Mayu takes her clothes and runs away "everything Sae chan,everyone is comparing me to her..i'm tired of it..i'm Mayu Watanabe" 
*End of the classes*
Yuki and Sae were waiting for Mayu..
why she's taking so long? Sae asked 
Yuki only smiled 
she's going to make us loose the movie! Sae says desperate
it's going to be there tomorrow also! Yuki says 
but i wanna go with you today! Sae says pouting cutely 
Yuki laughs "Sae chan you're pouting" 
hello! Lovetan says
hello Lovetan have you seen Mayu? Sae asked 
Lovetan looks other way "well..she.. uhmmm.."
what? Yuki asked 
well she left school! Lovetan says 
what!?!? Yuki and Sae asked 
well she was mad and took hee thing and left! Lovetan says 
"Mayu!" Yuki murmured 
Sae tries to call her to her phone but it was just ringing 
"she doesn't pick up!" Sae says 
what if we split and look for her! Yuki said 
that's a good idea! Sae says 
let's split! Lovetan says 
<Sae went to an arcade to look for her> 
<Lovetan went to a park where they hang out almost everyday>
Yuki was walking but then something came to her head "Mayu chan likes anime!" she murmured and run to the anime store that Yuki only knows because one day Sae and her went to buy a present for Mayu..
Yuki enters to the store and looks everwhere till she finds the person that she's looking for reading a magazine 
"Mayu!" Yuki says 
huh? Yuki chan? what are you doing here? Mayu asked 
we were worried about you! Yuki says 
sorry! my phone is not working! Mayu says not taking her eyes off the magazine 
we need to go home! Yuki says 
i don't want to! Mayu answers 
please! Yuki says looking at Mayu 
sorry,i don't want to! Mayu says while gets up and pays for the magazine and gets out of the store 
hey where you're going? Yuki asks walking behind Mayu 
somewhere far away from you and my perfect sister! Mayu says while keeps walking
what's your problem? Sae chan worries a lot about you! Yuki answers 
yes,she worries a lot..for you! Mayu says pouting
Yuki takes a deep breath 
go away! Mayu says 
hey! Yuki says and takes Mayu by her arm 
let go off me..you're nobody i can't stand you..leave me alone! Mayu shouts 
*Rain starts* 
Yuki let go Mayu's arm  then sighed and took off her blazer and putted on Mayu 
Mayu blushed "what are you doing? are you deaf? i don't stand you!" 
but i rather that you hate me healthy than with a cold! Yuki says with a smile 
you're stupid! Mayu says in defeat
let's get you home! Yuki says still with a charming smile
Mayu sighed and walked home with Yuki
<The next day> <phone call>
i have a game today i'll try to go visit you later please Yukirin take care of yourself don't eat cold stuff and drink your soups please..
Mayu was listening Sae's conversation "so she catched a cold! beacuse of me!" 
Mayu went to her room took Yuki's blazer that was on her closet and then layed on her bed " she rather that i hate her healthy" she's stupid! Mayu thought and then looks the blazer 
"maybe she's a cute stupid after all" 
Mayu got up from bed and walked their feet lead her to Yuki's home 
should i?" Mayu thought and then looked the blazer 
i just came to return this! Mayu says nervous and press the doorbell 
the door opens a woman came out fast with her phone on her ear.."wait a second i'll call you back!" 
Are you a friend of Yukirin?? The woman asks 
actually i...*please there's soup on the fridge and the medicine is on the fridge..could you tell her that occur an emergency i had to go to work please!" the woman says 
okay..! Mayu says blinking a few times 
taxi! The woman shouts and gets on the taxi
Mayu enters the house.."this is Yuki's home looks so confy!" Mayu thought while walks upstairs 
She saw a door with a sign that says "Yukirin" 
"This might be her room!" Mayu thought while enters 
she saw Yuki sleeping on bed..She was sweat and shaking 
Yuki chan!" Mayu murmures 
*cough* *cough* 
Mayu got closer and touched Yuki's forhead.."She has fever!" she murmured and started to feel guilty 
i'm cold.." Yuki murmured 
Mayu looked at Yuki sweetly then got on bed and hugged her 
Yuki unconsciously interwine their fingers 
*cough**cough*
"i rather hating you when you're healthy" Mayu murmured on Yuki's ear and kissed Yuki's cheek 
Yuki's lips formed a little smile..
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 1.The beggining
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on June 13, 2012, 11:09:50 PM
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww mayu is already falling for her so cute
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 1.The beggining
Post by: Megumi on June 14, 2012, 12:08:43 AM
 :wub: that was cute
Can't wait for more
Arígatou! :kneelbow:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 1.The beggining
Post by: kurogumi on June 14, 2012, 02:33:30 AM
Woa its too good...cmze-san!

Aww Mayuki...so warm moment...

How you can manage to have a great idea cmze-san...all of your story its amazing...
always make me read more and more LOL
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 1.The beggining
Post by: ILOVESAEYUKI-WMATSUI on June 14, 2012, 05:48:30 AM
so cute me want more  :twothumbs
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 2.Continuation
Post by: cmze on June 16, 2012, 05:14:41 AM
                              My sister's Girlfriend
                                         2.

(Continuation) 
Mayu openned her eyes and noticed that Yuki was facing her
Mayu blushed she has never been this close to anyone's face 
"Yukirin" she murmured and then removed a string of hair that was on Yuki's face 
"Very pretty... indeed!" Mayu murmured and then looked at clock "Maybe is time to make her soup!" She thought and got up and went to the kitchen 
She looked around in the kitchen and started to make soup 
(note: it's Mayu first time cooking xD)
(after 20 min)
It's looks done but...i don't know if she might like it "why did i come today?" Mayu thought but then remembered that Yuki is sick because she gave her the jacket so Mayu went upstairs with the soup
*In Yuki's room*
Mayu putted the soup on a table and proceed to wake Yuki up
"Yuki chan!" Mayu murmuered and touch her with her finger 
she repeated the same act but Yuki didn't react
Mauu sighed "Yuki chan!" she said and grabbed her shoulder 
Yuki slowly openned her eyes and looked Mayu who was looking to the floor "Am i hallucinating? she murmured 
i..i..ma..made you soup! Mayu says stuttering 
Yuki blinked a few times and got up from bed 
you need to rest! Mayu says 
Yuki touched Mayu's cheek with her finger 
what are you doing? Mayu murmured still looking down 
Yuki putted her hands on Mayu's cheek and made her smile "I like to see Mayu chan smile..i like her smile" she said
Mayu blushed and looked at Yuki in the eyes "you need to get back to bed!" She said and made Yuki sit on bed 
Mayu took the soup and watched Yuki eat it all then Yuki got back to sleep 
Mayu took the plate but when she was walking she saw something on Yuki's mirror "no way! could it be?"she thought 
and left then plate beside her and took the object and blew it 
Mayu smiled 
*Flashback* (2 years ago)
Today is Yukirin's birthday we been best friends for 5 years and i don't know what should i give her! Sae says yelling on the phone 
Mayu was watching her older sister acting crazy then got bored and went to her room 
"I'll make cake!" Sae shouts 
what a girl! Mayu says while plays with her psp
*Yuki got home* *Mayu was looking from upstairs*
Happy birthday Yukirin! Sae shouts with some friends 
wow! Yuki says and then sees the Chocolate cake 
have a sit birthday girl! Sae says and gives her a kiss on her cheek 
*Everyone took a piece of cake*
Yummy! Sae chan this taste so good!  a girl says 
i made it with love! Sae replies smiling 
so cute Sae chan! A girl says 
<Later>
Mayu was sitting in the park watching how cool looks her Windmill of six colors! she was drawing it and painting it
huh? Mayu felt like somone was staring her..she looked around and saw Yuki standing watching her 
Yuki walked to her..
Hello Mayu chan! Yuki says with a smile 
did you like the cake? Mayu asked coldly
yep,was good! Yuki answered 
Mayu kept drawing and ignoring Yuki
mmm maybe i should let you alone,Have a good day Mayu chan! Yuki says  with a smile and walk away
Mayu gets up from her seat and took the Windmill of six colors "wait!" She shouts
Yuki turned around "really? for me?" she asked surprised
yes,you can have it..Happy birthday! Mayu says looking to tbe floor blushing 
thanks Mayu chan! Yuki said with a smile and kissed Mayu's forhead 
<End of the flashback>
Mayu heard the door openning,she took the plate and went to the kitchen
Thanks for taking care of Yuki! Yuki's mom says happy
it's fine! Mayu says 
i guess you're tired,you should go home! Yuki's mom says 
yes! Mayu says and leaves 
<><><><><><><><><><><><>the next day<><><><><><><><><><>
Yuki you look way better! Sae says 
yes,Last night soup was really good! Yuki says happy 
who made it? Sae asks
Yuki's mom enters to the room and interrupts the conversation "Yuki chan you left you blazer in the living room!" she says while puts it in Yuki's closet 
what?! Yuki asked 
you're messy..Yuki chan! Sae says smiling 
that blazer..i..just..yes,i'm a messy person! Yuki says and looks to the Windmill of six colors and smirked 
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 2.Continuation
Post by: kurogumi on June 16, 2012, 07:05:19 AM
Sweet...sweet..sweet..sweet..

Just sweet...ahh its so sweeeet..!Mayuki!
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 2.Continuation
Post by: ILOVESAEYUKI-WMATSUI on June 16, 2012, 09:06:39 AM
i love this fic its so cute please update soon  :cow: thanx
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 2.Continuation
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on June 16, 2012, 12:53:24 PM
awww just aww so cute
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 2.Continuation
Post by: kahem on June 16, 2012, 01:18:51 PM
Triangle!!! Lol it smells some drama ^^
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 3.Mini Chapter
Post by: cmze on June 19, 2012, 11:42:37 PM
                              My sister's Girlfriend
                                  3.Mini chapter
(Talking on the phone) 
C'mon Yukirin come with me! 
no,Sae chan i have to study! 
okay i'll pick you up in half an hour be ready! Sae says ginning and hungs up 
Mayu heard the conversation but kept what she was doing *playing with her psp* 
Sae goes downstairs with her basket ball "Mom i'm going out!" she shouts ready to leave
"Sae chan wait up!" Mayu's mom shouts 
what is it? Sae asks looking back 
why don't you take Mayu chan with you? Mayu's mom asks
well she doesn't like sports! Sae says 
(Lying of course Sae wanted to be alone with Yukirin!)
 but i don't like her just playing with games she needs fresh air and make some friends! Mayu's mom says with a sigh 
okay..i'll take her with me! Sae says in defeat 
Mayu chan! Mayu's mom shouts 
what's going on? Mayu asks while walks downstairs 
get ready we're going to the park to play! Sae says smiriking
"this couldn't be better!" Mayu murmured and sighed 
(At Yuki's home)
Stupid Sae chan which part that i have to study she doesn't understand..if she thinks i'm going she's totally wrong! Yuki thought while keeps studying 
*doorbell ringing* *Outside*
"well she's problably mad so.." Sae thought and looked at Mayu that was next to her 
Mayu looked back at her 
Mayu chan you stay there! Sae says and goes hide behind a car that was parked behind them 
"what a kid?!" Mayu thought while sees her older sister hide
*the door opens!* 
you little piece of....*Yuki blinked a few times and stopped what she was about to say* 
"Mayu chan!" Yuki said blushing 
~Mayu pointed to the car~
there! Yuki says and runs to the car 
I'm sorry Yukirin! Sae says 
you putted Mayu on the door! Yuki says 
that was fun! Sae says with a smirk 
"you little.." Yuki says and takes her by her shirt 
Yukirin you know you're my friend! Sae says scared 
why i waste my time? Yuki mumured and let go Sae 
Mayu looked at the two girls still with he headphones on 
where are we going? Yuki asked 
so you're coming! Sae says happy 
fresh air could be good! Yuki says 
let's play! Sae says and walks to the park 
~In the park~
helll Sayaka! Sae says while says hi to her friends 
Yuki was sitting watching 
who's this? A girl asks seeing Mayu that was behind Sae
it's my littke sister Mayu chan,she came to play with us today! Sae says smiling 
nice to meet you! Everyone says 
The everyone is picking their players nobody wanted to choose Mayu..
you take her...she looks like a pricess! A girl says 
no i don't want her! The other girl says 
c'mon girl Mayu is not as weak as she looks! Sae says 
Mayu looked other way..
Mayu was chose to the opposite team to Sae 
Yuki was looking 
<the game starts>
The balls get to Mayu but she didn't even mind to grab it 
what are you doing? Another girl asks mad
"losers!" Mayu murmured and then run to the girl that had the ball and snatched it from her and was running to the score place 
what was that? Sae asked 
another girl tries take the ball but Mayu dodge it 
who ever thought Mayu was good in basketball! Yuki thought
with a smile 
Sae tries to stop her but she couldn't 
wow! Everyone says 
Sae didn't give up and run after Mayu and punched her with her body..Mayu loose balance and fell 
"Mayu!" Yuki murmured and got from her seat and went to help Mayu 
Sae chan that wasn't nice! Yuki says while helps Mayu 
Sae scractched her head and kept playing 
what an idiot! Yuki said and took Mayu home with her
(Mayu's mom and dad wasn't home)
thanks Yuki chan for helping me! Mayu says
it's fine! Yuki says with a smile and took the alcohol and started cleaning Mayu's wound on her leg 
this might hurt! Yuki says and takes Mayu's hand 
-Mayu blushed- if it hurts you can squeeze my hand and i'll stop! Yuki says 
Mayu was stunned and looked sweetly to Yuki 
To be continued 
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 3.Mini Chapter
Post by: ILOVESAEYUKI-WMATSUI on June 20, 2012, 05:04:48 AM
omg this has to be the cutest fanfic ever i love it  :wub: thank you so much  XD im so in love with this fic i hope you never stop updating it  :cow: please update soon again  :twothumbs  thanx
 
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 3.Mini Chapter
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on June 20, 2012, 05:37:57 PM
aww sae will get jealous soon
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 3.5
Post by: cmze on June 22, 2012, 04:39:58 AM
                              My sister's Girlfriend
                                      3.5

Who ever thought Mayu chan was good in basketball you even fooled Sae chan! Yuki says smiling 
Mayu blushed and looked other way 
done! Yuki says and gets up 
why you always so nice to me? Mayu coldly asked 
well i like you! Yuki says smiling 
just beacuse i'm Sae chan sister and yoy think we're the same like everybody else! Mayu says pouting 
what?!? Yuki says nervous and sits next to Mayu 
it's the truth! Mayu says crossing her arms 
Yuki smirked "what everybody else doesn't notic that your last name is Watanabe and Sae chan last name is Miyazawa? of course you're totally different!" 
really? Mayu asked smiling
of course you're smart,pretty and draw so good! Yuki says 
i'm home! Sae shouts 
we're in the living room! Yuki shouts 
Sae enters to the living room "Mayu chan..sorry!" She says while sits next to Yuki 
yeah it's fine! Mayu says while gets up and goes to her room 
what's wrong with her? i apologized! Sae says smirking and then hugs Yuki 
you're all sweaty get off me! Yuki says smiling 
what?!? i wanna be close to you know! Sae says and tries to kiss Yuki's cheek 
if i am that special why you rather spend your time with her? Mayu wondered while looked at Sae and Yuki from upstairs then sighed and got back to her room 
~The next day at school~ 
We'll have a musical! the art teacher says 
what?!? i hate this class! Sae says pouting
i love this class! Yuki says smiling 
Sae looked other way
i decided to do it between two courses so everyone has to audition! The teacher says happy 
the other course was entering to the theather 
it's Mayu chan course! Yuki thought 
the first on audition was Sae chan..
are you going to sing? the teacher asked 
mmm no i like to dance! Sae says and dances dorkable and wink to Yuki 
*everyone smiles* 
cute Sae chan! Yuki says smiling 
*Everyone auditioned*
we're running out of time could you two sing a song together or as a duet! The teacher asks
together? Mayu asked 
with her? Yuki asked 
yes! the teacher replied 
i guess we can sing together! Yuki says while talks to Mayu about which song they should sing 
i don't want to sing! Mayu says pouting 
c'mon is gonna be fun! Yuki says smiling 
why me? Mayu asked 
girls ready? The teacher asks 
okay! Mayu says 
don't worry if you feel nervous look at me! Yuki said 
This is going to be fun! Sae says smirking 
Yuki starts singing 
wow Yuki chan is a good singer! Mocchi says
that's My Yuki! Sae says smirking
Mayu's singed her part
wow Mayu chan is good! Lovetan says 
it's my imagination or i feel ignore! Sayaka says 
while Mayu and Yuki were looking at eachother ignoring everyone around 
Sae felt it..
(Mayu and Yuki never broke their eye contact and worst of all that their voices sounded perfect together) 
once the song ended everyone clapped 
"wow.." Yuki mumured 
Mayu was blushing like crazy 
you're perfect! The teacher says clapping 
~After that~
the three girls went walking home nobody said a word all the way home Yuki was the first one to get home she entered her house and went to her room she saw her bed and threw herself to it 
<Yuki's pov> 
what the hell? what was that? why am i feeling like i'm cheating? "Mayu.." Yuki murmured and got up from bed and took her Windmill of six colors..she blew it and then look at it moving
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 3.5
Post by: Pwety on June 23, 2012, 09:04:08 PM
OHHO!!!
Mayuki saiko~!! :lol:

Please continue :bow: , because it is too interesting. :thumbsup :thumbsup
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 3.5
Post by: korisunyan on June 24, 2012, 01:58:01 AM
WAAAAAAAAAA

I feel that Yukirin likes Mayuyu  :deco:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 3.5
Post by: kurogumi on June 24, 2012, 03:01:29 AM
Yeah you just Cheating yuki...
 I think Sae know something about yukirin Feeling...

Cmze-san please update, im really like this one from all your genius fic...its more warm and sweet
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 3.5
Post by: mo-chan on June 24, 2012, 03:32:55 PM
Yukirin is feeling in love with Mayu  :luvluv1:
yappari Mayukki is the best  :wahaha:
I like this fanfic so much  :shy2:
please cantinue  :farofflook:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 3.5
Post by: korisunyan on June 24, 2012, 11:42:34 PM
MORE PLEASE )):  :ptam-hbk:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 4.A forgotten and stolen kiss
Post by: cmze on June 25, 2012, 07:18:06 AM
                              My sister's Girlfriend
                            4.A forgotten stolen kiss

Yuki couldn't help to feel weird,she was rolling on her bed not knowing what to do..
"Why me? there's anybody else with this kind of feelings? maybe i should look on internet..." Yuki thought while gets up from bed and goes to her computer 
*phone ringing* 
hmmm that must be Sae chan! what should i say? what should i do? Yuki scratched her head and looked other way..she openned the firat drawer of her desk and found an old picture of her with Sae chan and Mayu..
"This is all your fault.." Yuki murmured and touched Mayu's face with her thumb 
~Flasshback.. A few months ago" 
Yuki chan you came! Mocchi says and hugs Yuki 
yes,sorry i was a little late! Yuki says smiling 
don't worry we haven't even started! Sayaka says 
where's Sae chan? Tomochin asked 
well she said she'll be here a little late and that we should start without her! Yuki says smiling 
yeah let's go..i wanna sit! Yui says smiling 
Everyone is having fun they were in a karaoke..Yuki went outside to wait for Sae but on the way in the hall someone catched her eye 
This is so funny Lovetan! Mayu shouts while dances on a table
what?! Mayu chan! Yuki says and goes close to her 
Yeah this is great! Jurina says smiling 
get down! Yuki says and pulls Mayu down 
Yu*hip* chan! Mayu says happy and cupping her cheeks 
 Yuki blushed and then asked "Are you drunk?" while holds Mayu who can't stand properly 
everything *hip* fine! Mayu says smiling and red 
let's go..I'll take you home! Yuki says and grabs Mayu's bag 
but *hip* i'm fine! Mayu says smiling 
yeah..yeah! Yuki says and takes her away 
<walking to get a taxi..>
there's no taxi around here! Yuki says while keeps walking with Mayu 
this is so fun! Mayu says and runs around 
Mayu chan wait up! Yuki says and runs after her 
Mayu turns around and looks closely to Yuki 
wha-what's wrong? Yuki asked rising an eyebrow
Mayu touched her lips with her fingers then looked at Yuki and blushed "well i was wondering..have you ever kissed someone?" 
Yuki blushed then looked other way and said "i don't know what are you talking about but we should go home!" she said and grabbed. Mayu by her arm and started to walk 
Mayu stopped walking 
"Mayu chan we need to go!" Yuki says and pull her 
"no!" Mayu says drunk 
Yuki pulled harder and Mayu was drunk so it was normal that she fell on Yuki 
Yuki openned her eyes and blushed "Mayu was on top of her and kissing her!" 
Mayu cupped Yuki's cheek with her hand and kissed her depply 
enough to make her close her eyes and enjoy her first kiss 
even though it was a stolen one
<End of the flashback>
A noise of a little rock hitting her wondow brought her back to earth 
Yuki got up from her chair and looked through her window she saw Sae standing there and behind her was Mayu listening to her headphones 
why is this happening to me? Yuki murmured and pouted 
*Yuki's phone ringing again*
Yuki sighed " i wondee if you remember that you stole my first kiss?" she murmured and ignore Sae's call 
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 4.A forgotten and stolen kiss
Post by: kurogumi on June 25, 2012, 09:08:24 AM
thank for the update...cmze-san!!!!!

aaah how i descibe my feeling after read this update? hmmmm...  its too much...too much for me...
i like a crazy people who won a big lotre maybe... a good one...

more! i want more update from you.. kyaaaaa so kawaiii Mayu Drunk.. why she drunk?
and about Jurina...wow... will you write about wmatsui too? but i love your Mayuki... or or maybe jurina is yuki rival...hahahaha LOL just write what you like cmze-san your idea is always the best... the genius one


Thank... cant wait the next update...
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 4.A forgotten and stolen kiss
Post by: Playgirlz on June 25, 2012, 03:17:49 PM
Thank you for writing this fic, this is so good xDDDDD especially the last chapter <3

Mayuki is so cute >< please more
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 4.A forgotten and stolen kiss
Post by: mo-chan on June 25, 2012, 03:31:02 PM
kyaaa a kisss  :shy2: there is no dout that Yukirin is in love with Mayu now  :luvluv2:
Mayu is really funny when got drunk  :on lol:
I hope there is Wmatsui too  :shy2: It will be more interesting  :glasses:
cmze-san you're the best  :on woohoo: it's the best fanfic I ever read  :farofflook:
I can't wait for the next chapter  :nya:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 4.A forgotten and stolen kiss
Post by: korisunyan on June 25, 2012, 09:19:45 PM
YUUUUP Finally new post  :luvluv1:
Yuki is in love with Mayuyu  :shy2: what a beautiful, Mayuki sz  :ptam-shy:
I do not like SaeYuki  :on voodoo:
Mayu does still remember the kiss? I hope so  :ptam-hbk:
Please upload soon  :ptam-cry:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 4.A forgotten and stolen kiss
Post by: incun123 on June 28, 2012, 06:02:09 PM
thank you very much, your fics are always excellent   :love:
but this fic is... ahhhhhhhhhhhh... how can i say it??? it's the cutest sweetest fic i've ever read  :wub: :wub: :wub:
Yukirin fall in love with mayuyu at their first meet, right?  XD  :inlove:
maybe jurina is a rival of yukirin??? plz make yukirin jealous  :lol:
mayuki first kiss is so cute  :twothumbs
i want more  :P
plz update soon  :wub: :wub:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 5.The game of love
Post by: cmze on June 29, 2012, 09:26:33 AM
                              My sister's Girlfriend
                              5.The game of love

Wow many people likes this fic.. thanks for supporting me *blushing* i'm not that good and my ideas are not the best always..TRUST ME! x_X
Thanks for supporting and commenting it makes me so happy..you guys makes me so happy! <3
and yes may be a little Wmatsui here and my other fic "I'm everything you need" 
Thanks everyone for reading and give your opinions yoh guys are amazing..:D
am i talking to much? maybe..well enjoy! :) 

My head hurts..what am i still thinking about it? Yuki thought while walks home 
"Yukirin!" someone shouts 
Yuki looks back then sighed "why?!" she murmured 
wait up! Sae running and pulling Mayu with her 
Yuki raised an eyebrow
hello! Sae says smiling 
Mayu kept listening to her headphones 
Yuki sighed "i thought today maybe i could be alone at home and watch a movie"  she thought 
what did you leave so fast? are you trying to run away from me? am i that bad? Sae asked 
No..i just..forgot i have something to do! Yuki says smiling 
liar! Mayu murmured 
that can wait! Sae smiling 
no.." Yuki said nervous 
c'mon come with me! Sae says pulling Yuki's blazer 
i can't! Yuki says trying to avoid it 
c'mon! Sae says smiling 
<After 30 min at Sae's home> <their parents aren't home> 
i don't even know why i agreed! Yuki thought while is sitting on the couch watching the tv 
Mayu passes and goes to the kitchen for a glass of water
Yuki gets up from the couch and also goes to the kitchen she watched Mayu standing drinking her water 
Yuki smirks 
Mayu blushes and puts the glass on the table "what's so funny?" she asks while sits 
"well it funny seeing you drinking.."Yuki says and also sits
(it was indirect phrase and Mayu was smart so she knew what Yuki was talking about)  
Mayu looked other "wait a minute! how you know?" she asked looking at Yuki 
"i took you home.." Yuki said blushing looking other way 
"what did i do?" Mayu asked 
ehhhh you don't remember! Yuki asked looking at Mayu 
well everything is blurry..i just remember that i woke up on bed with headache! Mayu answered 
"well..you.." Yuki said blushing
"me? what?" Mayu asked 
Yuki chan i thought we were about to wacth a movie..what are you doing here? Sae asked interrupting their conversation
and pulling Yuki with her 
Mayu walked up to her room
Yuki sighed
(After 1 hour the movie ended)
Yuki fell sleep on the couch 
Sae watched Yuki sleep and she thought that might be a good idea do something nice for her so she went to a store 
Mayu heard the door,she thought Sae and Yuki left..
(when nobody is at home Mayu tends to put the music really  loud and dance around the house while cooks) 
Yuki woke up beacuse of the noise and saw Mayu standing eating chocolate ice cream 
(Mayu was only in underwear..hair down looking really good) 
Yuki blinked a few times and looked at her drooling
inner Yuki: this could be an old pervert man's wish..*Nosebleed*
Mayu saw Yuki standing "Pervert!" she shouted and throwed to her the chocolate ice cream 
what the hell? Yuki shouted and hid behind the couch 
Mayu took more chocolate from the fridge and she was throwing it everywhere like a crazy cyborg 
it wasn't my intention..i was sleeping! Yuki shouted 
you were drooling! Mayu shouted 
what?!? your not that good looking! Yuki shouted and got up 
Mayu throwed ice cream on Yuki's face she removed it 
And went for Mayu and took by her wrists "okay enaugh with the chocolate game!" She murmured serious 
Mayu was looking down sad 
i said sorry! Yuki says 
Stupid Yuki! Mayu says and releases her wrists and walks away mad but she slips beacuse the place was a mess *chocolate ice cream everywhere* 
Mayu chan are you okay? Yuki asked and helps her to get up 
let me go..i'm not good looking enaugh like Sae chan! Mayu shouted and both slip 
what?! Yuki asked 
what you heard! Mayu says trying to get up but Yuki grabs her by her leg and pushes her down 
ouucchh! Mayu says mad 
Yuki putted herself on top of Mayu both blushed "Don't know why you always compare yourself with Sae chan when you should know there's nobody better than you! Yuki said looking other way 
what?!? Mayu murmured eyes wide open 
Yuki removed herself from top and sitted 
Mayu sitted and only looked at Yuki who was looking other way blushing
Mayu encourage herself and got closer to Yuki..She was still looking other way 
Mayu smirked and kissed the chocolate that was in the corner of Yuki's mouth 
Yuki was redder than ever and pulled herself back 
I'm back! Sae shouted with somebags on her hands 
Yuki got up fast 
what happened here? Sae asked looking at the mess then looked at Yuki who has chocolate on her uniform 
Mayu smirked then looked at Yuki "Food war" she answered then got up and went to her room 
Yuki only looked at Mayu going upstairs 
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 5.The game of love
Post by: ILOVESAEYUKI-WMATSUI on June 29, 2012, 09:40:45 AM
thanx for the update its so cute  :luvluv2: and i would love it if you write some wmatsui too yay!  :cow:  thanx  :peace:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 5.The game of love
Post by: Pwety on June 29, 2012, 01:44:35 PM
wAAAAAw!!!!

Thank you :hee: you update :glasses:

Mayuki's moment ... Beautiful :luvluv1: :luvluv2:

Yukirin fall in love with mayuyu :wub: :wub:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 5.The game of love
Post by: mo-chan on June 29, 2012, 03:39:21 PM
 :scolding:  why do Sae interrupt them  :err: if Sae didn't come early maybe there was a kiss happened  :cool2:
it was a little bite and Sae know about them  :stuffed:
Sae will be hurt  :kekeke:
Mayu still don't know that Yuki loves her  :on drink:
I loved the love game  :shy2:
they are so lovely  :luvluv2:
I'd like if you add pairs like Wmatsui If you want  :sweat:
I really like this fan fiction please update soon  :imdead:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 5.The game of love
Post by: kahem on June 29, 2012, 04:27:01 PM
Hahaha I like the last scene ^^
Poor Sae, if things continue like that she will have her girlfriend stolen by her little sister
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 5.The game of love
Post by: kurogumi on June 30, 2012, 04:32:26 AM
Your update always make me confused,because i cant make a good word to dercibe
How amazing, how good every update,...especially in this story,really like this Mayuki story

I want to jump! Jump! Jump! Jump!...so happy! Yaaaay...

If sae dont comeback,what can happend with mayuki? Hehe
Cant wait the next update,hope double update LOL hehe
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 5.The game of love
Post by: Playgirlz on July 01, 2012, 05:33:15 PM
Wow~ wow~ food war , what an excuse Mayuyu lol

Next time you should be more gentle to the poor Yuki :P

Thank you, please update soon
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 ~Help me don't know which fic to update 1?
Post by: cmze on July 03, 2012, 11:13:15 AM
Hello everyone!  :grin:

Please help me don't know which fic to update first!  :catglare:

i got many fanfics.. :lol:

so would you mind giving me a hand?  :D

please comment and tell me your answers... yes A W MATSUI ON THE WAY!  :cow:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 ~Help me don't know which fic to update 1?
Post by: yuukimoko on July 03, 2012, 12:00:59 PM
well....... I like all your Mayuki fics so its hard to chosse........... :(

But I wanna read more about.......hmmmmm  :oops: ......let's me think  :huhuh . I want them all but I will chosse -My cyborg- please!
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 ~Help me don't know which fic to update 1?
Post by: kazuski on July 03, 2012, 03:39:18 PM
i love all your fic  XD ...so i hope you gonna update them all  :P . LOLz

but i have to choose then "my sister's girlfriend!" please~  :wub: :cow:

i wonder if mayu and yuki will get together  :huhuh
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 ~Help me don't know which fic to update 1?
Post by: epiclulz on July 03, 2012, 04:07:09 PM
MY CYBORG

BECAUSE THE WORLD NEEDS MORE CYBORG POWARRRRRR

SPAZZCRACK CYBORG PLSSS ME WANTS CYBORG
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 ~Help me don't know which fic to update 1?
Post by: msst28 on July 03, 2012, 05:17:32 PM
the exchange please :bow:
need to know their rescue mission to save jurina sucess or not
and the angels vs alexander
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 ~Help me don't know which fic to update 1?
Post by: mo-chan on July 03, 2012, 07:30:54 PM
I really like you fics so much I really dunno what I have to choose  :dunno:
I would like that you post all of your fics  :ding:
Just kidding  :on lol:
I would like you to cantinue my sister's girlfriend please  :sweat:
update soon  :byebye:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 ~Help me don't know which fic to update 1?
Post by: kurogumi on July 04, 2012, 08:15:50 AM


1.My sister girlfriend (hot )
2.The exchange
3.Akb boarding school

Well i like all your prevous fic to,and other. But this 3 is my favorite
And i like my sister girlfriend...your writing style a little different in this fic,and i love it so much
But i want an update for the exchange too,but first must be my sister girlfriend! Hehe Love your Fic cmze-san

Thanks
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 6. Thanks for letting me know!
Post by: cmze on July 04, 2012, 09:10:20 AM
                               My sister's Girlfriend
                                          6.

What Yukirin already left to school? Sae asks on the phone
Mayu heard but kept walking to the bathroom "so she's avoiding us!" she thought 
ahhh bad luck! Sae says while hangs up 
<doorbell ringing>
Sae goes downstairs thinking might be Yuki when she opens the door notice that it's not the person she wants to see 
Jurina chan! Sae says 
hello Sae chan! Jurina says happy and steps in 
come in..oh you already did! Sae says and closes the door 
*Somehow Sae doesn't like Jurina because she's a player so she thinks that she might hurt Mayu..* 
where's Mayu? Jurina asks looking around 
here!" Mayu answered while walks downstairs 
Mayu you're already dressed! Sae said 
we're leaving already! Mayu says 
oh no..wait for me! Sae says and goes upstairs fast 
Mayu and Jurina run away to school laughing 
<At school> 
"Mayu chan!" Jurina said 
what? Mayu asked 
i think i'm in love! Jurina says happy
nice! Mayu coldly says 
nice..just nice? Jurina asks
well what do you want me to say? you're always in love with everyone! Mayu says 
what? that's a lie! Jurina says mad 
really? Mayu asks looking at Jurina's face 
okay i maybe girls attract me all the time but this is different..i can feel it! Jurina says touching her chest
okay who's the lucky..girl? Mayu asked 
ohh you know her! Jurina answered with a smile
who? Mayu asked
well she's like a princess,her skin is so soft and white her smile is perfect..----*Mayu grabbed Jurina by her collar* 
don't tell me is Yukirin! Mayu asked mad 
what?!? Jurina asked and removed Mayu's hands from her 
huh? Mayu looks at Jurina 
Yukirin? is not that your sister's girlfriend? Jurina asked 
Mayu looked other way 
you like your sister's girlfriend! Jurina says laughing 
shut up! Mayu says 
don't worry she's not my type..i like Rena chan! Jurina says happy while puts her arm around Mayu's neck and walk both to their classroom 
i don't like her! Mayu says 
ha..okay don't worry your secret is safe with me besides love is love even if it's stolen! Jurina says happy 
"Mayu chan!" Yuki says looking at Jurina
"Jurina chan!" Rena says looking at Mayu
<Jurina slowly removes her arm> 
"Yukirin doesn't look friendly.." Jurina murmured 
Sae chan is looking for you! Yuki says and turns around 
Yuki chan wait up! Rena says and goes with her 
okay that was ackward! Mayu says looking at the two girls walking away 
they totally like us! Jurina says
you sound like a pimp! Mayu says and enters to her classroom 
wait! Jurina says and enters also 
(After school) 
let's go Mayu chan! Jurina says 
<out of the classroom was Rena and Yuki waiting>
Yuki chan!" Mayu says looking at her 
Sae told me to pick you up and Take you home! Yuki replies 
but Mayu chan and i were going somewhere else! Jurina says and takes Mayu's arm 
well i have to take Mayu home! Yuki says and pulls Mayu to her side 
but you have to take Rena chan home! Jurina says smiling 
well..that's true..YOU TAKE HER! Yuki says and pushes Rena to Jurina who smirks 
but i don't wanna go with her! Rena says and tries to walk away from that crazy little girl
i don't want to be alone! Jurina says and pulls Rena to her 
i guess it's done! Yuki says then takes Mayu by her arm and drags her home 
Jurina winks at Mayu..
<Mayu smirks>
~Walking Mayuki~
That was fun! Mayu says smiling 
why you hang out with her she's not a good influence and i think that's why you and Lovetan got drunk! Yuki says still walking hand in hand with Mayu 
"Maybe Yuki is so jealous that she haven't notice that she is still holding my hand!" Mayu thought smirking 
that crazy girl! Yuki said mad 
what you said last time..was real? Mayu asks and stops walking 
Yuki stops walking then turn around looked at Mayu and tried to let go Mayu's hand but it wasn't possible Mayu was holding it tigher
Mayu was blushing looking down to their hands 
It's not..you're not my type! Yuki says
that's a lie,you said it "there's nobody better than you!" Mayu says not letting go Yuki's hand 
Yuki blushed "You're not for me!" she said looking other way 
you mean someone like Sae chan is for you! Mayu says sad and let go Yuki's hand and kept walking 
Yuki took a deep breath and followed her 
(Walking WMatsui)
wow you're so pretty! Jurina says looking at Rena while she kept walking and ignore Jurina 
<Jurina pouted cutely>
Rena smirked for Jurina's funny face 
do you like seeing me sad? Jurina asked
Why would i like seeing you sad? Rena asked 
well you smirked because i was sad 
no,i smirked because your face is funny! Rena says and pinches  Jurina's cheek softly 
<Jurina blushes>
your really popular at school you know! Rena says 
and you look like a beatiful princess you know! Jurina says imitating Rena 
<Rena smirks again>
~To Be continued~
My battery is almost dead i can't update the exchange but don't worry i will... 
Say it my writting style is weird hahahha xD
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 Thanks for letting me know! here's CH.6
Post by: kahem on July 04, 2012, 09:42:26 AM
Jurina is a genius!
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 Thanks for letting me know! here's CH.6
Post by: kurogumi on July 04, 2012, 10:30:22 AM
wow finnaly Wmatsui!

hehe mayuxjurina make yuki and rena jealous...

yuki is so tsundere...
dont let go of mayu...LOLOLOLOL
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 Thanks for letting me know! here's CH.6
Post by: ILOVESAEYUKI-WMATSUI on July 04, 2012, 11:25:29 AM
thankyou i love this fic so much your the best!!! wmatsui so cutee !!!  :luvluv1:  mayuki so cutee!!!  :luvluv2: mayu and jurina making yuki and rena jealous  XD  i like it maybe rena should surprise jurina and yuki surprise mayu by doing something cute which will make readers like ....  :inlove:   :inlove:  :inlove:  :inlove:  :inlove:  :wub:  :wub:  :wub:  :wub:  :wub:   :inlove:  i can't wait for your next update thanx  :hee:  :kneelbow:  :on gay:  im i love *hugging myself*
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 Thanks for letting me know! here's CH.6
Post by: mo-chan on July 04, 2012, 03:18:10 PM
Interesting  :glasses:
Yuki is jealous  :shy2:
Rena acting cold to Jurina  :on lol:
when Yuki will accept the fact that she fall in love with Mayu  :on voodoo:
poor Mayuu  :on speedy:
I can't wait for the next  :wriggly:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 Thanks for letting me know! here's CH.6
Post by: incun123 on July 04, 2012, 05:21:10 PM
well i was going to vote for the fic which you update first  :heart:(because the other day i was busy :()
but when i enter the 4rum, my sister's girlfriend! and my cyborg have already been updated!!!  :w00t:
as if you could read my mind  XD  :wub: (i love you, cmze-chan :inlove:)
                       
"Mayu chan!" Yuki says looking at Jurina
"Jurina chan!" Rena says looking at Mayu
<Jurina slowly removes her arm>
"Yukirin doesn't look friendly.." Jurina murmured
this part is really funny  :lol: :lol: :lol:
i can't wait for your update  :wub: :wub:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 Thanks for letting me know! here's CH.6
Post by: Megumi on July 04, 2012, 11:55:36 PM
Ice cream war haahaa!

new pairing! JurinaxRena!!!!!

more hilariously and and

Sae will always be ignored by Yuki

Sae=Forever alone "guy"
(http://profile.ak.fbcdn.net/hprofile-ak-snc4/203503_174101935978231_1419475_n.jpg)


Thank you for your update!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 Thanks for letting me know! here's CH.6
Post by: Playgirlz on July 05, 2012, 10:48:51 AM
lol at jealously Yuki, so cute <3

and Jurina is such a genius lol She really understand girls xDDD

Thank you for updating!!
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.7
Post by: cmze on July 12, 2012, 11:21:42 PM
                              My sister's Girlfriend
                                          7

Hey it's totally cool that you're in love with your sister's girlfriend! Jurina says grinning 
shut up! i'm not in love! Mayu says while throws her pillow to Jurina 
yeAh right and superman exist! Jurina says serious 
i told you...i just..i just..Don't know! Mayu says in defeat
what are you gonna do about it? she's seems into you too..cheaters! Jurina says while plays with the pillow 
what?!? really? Mayu asked 
what you didn't notice yesterday..she exchange Rena for you! is she blind? Jurina asked grinning 
shut up! Mayu says and then gets up from bed 
it's so boring not going to school! Jurina says complaining 
what?!? Mayu asked 
beacuse i can't see Rena chan! Jurina says complaining 
whatever! Mayu says while gets out of the room 
where you're going? Jurina asked 
i'm hungry! Mayu shouted 
me too! Jurina says and goes after Mayu 
[In The Kitchen] 
Sae chan you're putting to much sugar! Yuki says
it's perfect! Sae says 
remember that Sayaka doesn't like sweet things! Rena says "Rena chan!" Jurina says happy 
"Jurina!" Rena says not so happy 
"Yuki chan.." Mayu murmured 
Mom and dad are not home,there's food on the fridge! Sae says and puts her arm around Yuki's neck
Mayu got closer to the cake and reads it "Happy birthday Sayak!" 
you missed an A! Jurina says mocking 
you're the worst chefs i ever met! Mayu says laughing 
you two kids go back updatairs! Sae says 
i'm hungry besides i'm too big for you to babysit me!  Mayu says while is looking something to eat in the fridge 
Jurina and Mayu got back upsatairs 
we need to be with them! Jurina says 
why? Mayu asked 
Rena chan is with them and i have to be there somebody can steal her from me! Jurina says 
you don't even have her! how somebody can steal her from you? Mayu asked 
shut up! Jurina says 
i can tell.. Sae chan don't want me close to YukiMayu says 
And? you need to fight if you want her! Jurina says 
is my sister's girlfriend is wrong! Mayu says 
Mayu chan you have the right to have what you want..you're not less than Sae chan..So fight! Jurina says with her hands on Mayu's shoulders 
you're right..I WANT! Mayu says 
that's what i'm talking about! Jurina says 
what do you suggest? Mayu asks 
leave it to me..we're going to spend all day with them,just follow the flow! Jurina says 
what?!? Mayu asked while is being dragged dowstairs 
let's go Mayu chan,that place is amazing! Jurina shouts while pulls Mayu's hand 
what's amazing? Yuki asks and puts herself on the way to not let them go 
Jurina smirked "Just like i thought!"
nothing you care! Mayu replied 
(Yuki looked to their hands) 
she's happy again! Jurina says and let go Mayu's hand 
of course i don't care but Sae chan does! Yuki says 
what i care? Sae asks while comes with Rena 
nothing they're just going to an amazing place! Yuki says 
what's that? Sae asks 
well it's close from here and far away from there! Jurina says smirking 
what? Rena asked 
you guys are not going whatever place you go! Sae says 
Sae chan i'm older enough to know where can i go! Mayu says ready to open the door 
enough i'm your older sister and you guys are going to spend the day with so i can keep an eye on you 2! Sae says 
Jurina smirked and Mayu pouted "whatever!" she said 
come with us and help us to make the cake! Rena says 
my pleasure! Jurina says smiling and puts her arm aroubd Rena's neck while walks to the kitchen 
"such a pimp!" Mayu murmured 
Yuki looked other way and also went to kitchen 
Mayu and Sae looked eachother and also went to the kitchen 
so when you're going to tell her happy birthday? Jurina asked
well we have a plan..we'll take her to the fair! Yuki answered
that sounds cool! Jurina says smiling 
*Mayu was listening to her headphones*
(At the fair) 
Hello everyone! Sayaka says 
happy birthday! All the girls says except Mayu who was looking around 
who are you? Sayaka asked to Jurina 
i'm Matsui Jurina! she answered 
are you Rena's lil sister? Sayaka asked to Jurina 
no!! Rena says and also Jurina 
uhmm okay! Sayaka says 
I wanna play! Jurina says and pulss Rena with her 
what?? I don't d to..i don't like these kind of games! Rena shouts while she doesn't want to get in roller coaster 
"Jurina is fast..maybe i should.." Mayu thought then looks at Yuki who was talking to Sae and Sayaka 
Mayu chan come with us! Jurina shouts 
Look you can go with Mayu chan! Sayaka says to Yuki 
that's not a good idea! Sse says 
c'mon Yuki go with Mayu! Sayaka says and pushes Yuki and Mayu to the roller coaster
what? but.." Yuki was about to refuse but took her hand and both sitted 
have a nice ride! Sayaka says and waves 
This is not good! Yuki thought 
Wooo hooo start now! Jurina shouts 
Jurina calm down! Rena says shyly 
i can't sorry! Jurina says happy and hugs Rena who blushes 
"this girl.." she thought 
The game was starting 
Yuki was looking other way 
you know..you say that Sae is for you but you don't do the things you do for me.. for her! Mayu murmured 
what? i don't know what you're talking about! Yuki answered 
you think that by acting this way might change anything but it won't beacuse i want you! Mayu replied and looked at Yuki (both girls were blushing)
*They were about to go down*
They took eachother's hands
once it was slowing down for the second lap 
Yuki relized that she was holding Mayu's hand she was about to let go but Mayu hold it tigher 
i'm not going to let you go that easy! Mayu said 
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.7
Post by: kahem on July 12, 2012, 11:39:34 PM
Go Mayu! Go Jurina!
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.7
Post by: kurogumi on July 13, 2012, 04:03:41 AM
mayuyu...fighting!!!
Jurina Fighting!!!

Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.7
Post by: Megumi on July 16, 2012, 09:59:08 PM
 :panic: Seems like Sayaka likes Sae  XD
Even better for MaYuki  :lol:

Thank you for your update!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.7
Post by: Pwety on July 16, 2012, 11:16:11 PM
Mayuyu fight  :rock: keep your Yukirin :peace: :deco:

I love your fanfic continue and update soon please  :peace: :heart:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.7
Post by: mo-chan on July 17, 2012, 11:48:01 PM
It's interesting  :glasses:
I think that Sayaka will help too  :cool1:
Mayu has taken action  :ding:
I hope there will be more about Wmatsui  :luvluv1:
update soon I hope you will be fine  :on speedy:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.7
Post by: incun123 on July 20, 2012, 03:29:06 PM
where are you cmze-chan :(
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.8 A drunken Mayu (part 2)
Post by: cmze on July 20, 2012, 11:02:25 PM
                              My sister's Girlfriend.                       
                        8.A drunken Mayu (Part2)

Yuki bit Mayu's lips and got up fast 
oucch..what are you so mean to me? Mayu asked pouting 
Yuki was all red and then felt sorry for the girl and help her to get up 
Mayu chan why you're doing this? Yuki asked complaining
beacuse i want you! Mayu answered all red and serious 
Yuki looked hypnotized to the young girl but shook her head and kept walking "finally your home!" she says while looks at Mayu and then look their hands holding 
i..i wanna stay more with Yuki chan! Mayu says pouting and tugging her shirt 
Mayu chan! Mayu chan! they might hear you and might think that i did this to you! Yuki says
Mayu hugged Yuki tighly "You're afraid that Sae chan might see us!" she said crying 
"what? Mayu.." Yuki murmured and hugged Mayu
"it's not fair i met you first!" Mayu says complaining still complaining 
Somehow those kept running on Yuki's head.."i met her first and wiped her tears.." Yuki thought then she cupped Mayu's cheeks and wiped her tears 
"Yuki chan!" Mayu says 
Yuki didn't want to do what her brain and heart was asking her to do but she couldn't help it those lips were so tempting and the Mayu was really cute so gave up on her feelings and kissed the younger girl
~Yuki's heart was beating faster~
after a moment of kissing they needed air so the break the kiss
 i kissed my girlfriend's younger sister!" Yuki thought 
Mayu was smiling widely and then hugged Yuki tigh from behind 
Yuki was blushing like crazy and thought that was coming to her head was worst "i can feel her chest on my back!" 
"you like me too!" Mayu whispered on her ear 
may..maybe! Yuki answered 
SAE CHAH PLEASE TAKE OUT THE TRASH! Mayu's mom shouted 
ok! Sae shouted back and was about to open the door 
what?!? Yuki shouted and pushed Mayu behind some bushes 
Yuki was on top but she was more focused and looking at Sae
taking out the trash 
Mayu kissed her jawline then Yuki looked down and saw Mayu smirking then she putted her arms around Yuki's neck and pulled her down for a kiss 
Yuki tried to correctly but her lips were intoxicating she gave up again and responded to the kiss wildly 
Mayu's hand were roaming around Yuki's waist while Yuki was busy kissing Mayu's neck not caring that Sae chan was around 
"her skin tastes so good..i don't want to stop!" Yuki thought while kisses her 
Sae heard a little noise she was about to go there but she was hungry so entered to the house 
The noise of the door closing brought Yuki back to earth 
this is not okay..your drunk! Yuki whispered and removed Mayu's arms from her neck 
what's wrong? Mayu asked while takes deep breaths 
they are eating so i guess we can get in from the front door and then use the stairs! Yuki said 
(mission success) 
Yuki left Mayu on her bed..
Yuki was about to get out from the window
"Yuki chan!" Mayu whispered 
Yuki turned to look Mayu 
Mayu was sleeping hugging her pillow and with a smirk on her face 
Yuki smirked too and then got out 
(TO BE CONTINUED)
Hey please get me the links of the new songs of Frech Kiss..
rainy day and romance privacy pleaseeeee! 
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.8 A drunken Mayu (part 2)
Post by: yvet_951 on July 20, 2012, 11:40:59 PM
 :welcome
 :twothumbs :twothumbs
that emotion thanks for update
I thought you disappeared cmze
I love MAYUKI
I hope your next update I hope soon
I hope you continue with your other stories are the best thanks
 :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.8 A drunken Mayu (part 2)
Post by: mo-chan on July 21, 2012, 12:00:17 AM
Welcooooome  :onioncheer: cmze-san !!! I'm happy you're back !!  :on woohoo:
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah  :stoned:
they didn't only kiss one kiss  :on bleed:
Yuki why do you act like that after then  :dunno:
you like Mayu right   :pleeease:
when will Sae be shocked  :kekeke:
Mayu and Yuki's moment was  :on bleed:
I can't wait for the next chapter!!  :on gay:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.8 A drunken Mayu (part 2)
Post by: mo-chan on July 21, 2012, 04:49:28 PM
there is a link you can downlod or watch online rainly day and romance privacy

http://akb48.mirim.fr/?dir=Sous-groupes/French%20Kiss/Romance%20Privacy (http://akb48.mirim.fr/?dir=Sous-groupes/French%20Kiss/Romance%20Privacy)

 if you want mp3 then this the link of all the types

  dozo  :hee:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.8 A drunken Mayu (part 2)
Post by: Pwety on July 21, 2012, 04:50:04 PM
Waaaaah :wub:

Mayuki kiss WWaaaaaHHHH :deco: :deco: :heart:

Please update soon :peace:

For Rainy day and Romance Privacy go to central-Akbgirl48 :wub:

Edit: Mo-chan has already given you a link and it is the same XD
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.8 A drunken Mayu (part 2)
Post by: kahem on July 21, 2012, 06:47:44 PM
Ah too bad! Next time you will get her Mayu!
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.8 A drunken Mayu (part 2)
Post by: cmze on July 21, 2012, 09:40:52 PM
Thans for your support!  :rofl:

i'll try to update soon as possible but now i'm still sick..

so i'll update all my fics on thursday for me today is saturday...so please be patient!  :sweatdrop:

hey i need the mp3 i can't download rar from my ipod..

can someone get me the mp3.. please?  :nervous
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.8 A drunken Mayu (part 2)
Post by: incun123 on July 22, 2012, 11:43:39 AM
i don't know you're sick and think you're busy or something :(( (how awful am i, im reallyyyyyyyyyyyy sorry :( )
please get well soon cmze-chan

http://stream41.gonct.info/2ed32e6f13b7c5bc3194b708ba45073f/500bc069/NhacCuaTui223/RainyDay-FrenchKiss_438p6_hq.mp3 (http://stream41.gonct.info/2ed32e6f13b7c5bc3194b708ba45073f/500bc069/NhacCuaTui223/RainyDay-FrenchKiss_438p6_hq.mp3)

you may try this link, i hope this could help you :(
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.8 A drunken Mayu (part 2)
Post by: mo-chan on July 22, 2012, 04:58:45 PM
cmze-san I couldn't find only rar  :err:
I'm sorry  :on cloudeye:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.8 A drunken Mayu (part 2)
Post by: Playgirlz on July 23, 2012, 07:10:43 AM
Go! go! go! Mayuyu!

Mayu always so wide when she's drunk xD

Thank you for the new chapter and take a rest, healthy is very important :]

Btw, why is there only part 2? where is part one? Someone tell me TT.TT
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.8 A drunken Mayu (part 2)
Post by: cmze on July 23, 2012, 06:16:11 PM
hahhahaa the first part it's when Yuki remembered who stole her fist kiss..

the chapter name was " a stolen kiss" or something like that! :grin:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.8 A drunken Mayu (part 2)
Post by: Arcachan on July 24, 2012, 12:58:00 AM
ah it is just me or chapter 8 part I isn;t here , i mean there is no chapter 8 part I  :O
and cmze get well son ~  :)
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.8 A drunken Mayu (part 2)
Post by: mo-chan on July 24, 2012, 01:03:49 AM
Arcachan like cmze-san said the part 1 is the chapter 4.A forgotten stolen kiss  :hee:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.8 A drunken Mayu (part 2)
Post by: Arcachan on July 24, 2012, 01:06:58 AM
^
ah souka, thankyou fot yhe info ~
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.9
Post by: cmze on July 24, 2012, 06:45:11 AM
                              My sister's Girlfriend                       
                                 9.Continuation..

Well this is the continuation of chapter 8 (past) but still there's present times..

Sae chan is such a good player! Rena says while observes Sae playing dodging everyone 
(Yuki did not pay attention she was somewhere else)
"why now? everything is so good..you don't even remember,you didn't care at all!" She thought 
"Yuki chan!" Rena called one more time 
"huh?" Yuki looked at Rena 
what's going on? Rena asked smiling 
nothing..i was thinking about our project! Yuki says smiling 
what you got in mind? Rena asked
ehhhh well..we should..ehh maybe reunite and discuss about it..hey look at the time i have to go! Yuki got up and left 
what?!? Rena thought 
(On the way home)
Yuki sighed while walks to the bus parade "this is not ok..why i sigh for you? why you get me? you're just a spoil litlle girl that..i like to spoil!" She murmured the word "spoil" 
-(Past:The next day after "the drunken Mayu") 
why did i just did last night? Yuki wondered while brushes her teeth 
today is going to be good..i don't think a can see Sae chan in the eyes.."i must tell" She thought while dresses up
-Phone Ringing-
Damn it's Sae chan! Yuki murmured and then picked up
hello! Yuki says ackwardly
good morning Yuki chan! 
 hey Sae chan! Yuki says nervous 
i'm outside waiting for you...Are you going to take longer? it's not like i mind waiting..i'm just asking! Sae replied smiling 
no give a minute! Yuki answered 
-Outside-
i'm ready! Yuki says and opens the door 
Sae gives a kiss on her cheek 
"mmm" Yuki looked around 
what's wrong? Sae asked 
where..hmmm Mayu chan? Yuki asked looking other way blushing 
she already went to school..you know her,she doesn't like waiting! Sae replied with a smile 
"ok..let's go to school!" Yuki says with a fake smile trying to hide her sad expression 
( At school..lunch time) 
Yuki hid from Sae chan and went to Mayu's classroom she was about to get in but she heard voices so she didn't enter she stood there hearing the conversation becouse one of the voices was familiar (it was Mayu's voice) 
"-We kissed was the worst thing ever..that wasn't my first kiss..i don't even want to remember!" Mayu said mad and was about to get out of the classroom 
(Yuki hid again)
Let's get out of here! Mayu says and Lovetan and Jurina followed her
<End of the flashback> <Present> 
I'm telling you..i'm head ove heals! Jurina says happy 
I'm happy for you! Mayu says while gets out of the classroom irritated 
that guy is all over you Mayu chan! Myao says happy
she's not interest in that guy! Jurina says and puts her arm around her neck 
Mayu mad responded "what? that guy is a jerk he forced me for a kiss..it was the worst first kiss ever it was nothing like..." 
like? Jurina and Myao asked 
Mayu blushed and looked other way 
who? you already gave your first kiss! Jurina asked teasing Mayu
i haven't..it was a dream! Mayu replied still blushing 
a dream? Myao asked 
yep..in my dreams i kissed the one i loved my whole life but it was that.."just a dream"! Mayu replied sad 
Yeah kissing the one you want is great for real! Jurina says happy 
wait a minute you already kissed Rena! Mayu asked 
YEAH! Jurina says happy 
what?!?!? Myao and Mayu asked 
<Flashback> A Few Hours ago *Lunch Time!" 
Rena chan i'll go to get some copies! Yuki says and leaves 
Jurina was outside waiting for everyone to get out,she saw Yukirin going out "Finally!" she murmured 
Yuki heard that but she just looked at the girl a bit,she didn't recognize Jurina then Yuki rised an eyebrown and walked away 
Jurina got in the classroom "hey!" she said smiling 
"hey!" Rena replies while picks her things from her desk
Jurina takes the eraser 
what are you doing? Rena asked 
nothing..i'm just bored! Jurina replied with smile
am i a clown to take away your boringness? Rena asked 
noooo but you're really beatiful and i like to stare you..if i date you i would never stop looking at you! Jurina responded smiling 
you know that i used to baby sit you and that i have a boyfriend and that i don't like..girls! Rena answered a little annoyed 
yeah that dude from the basketball team..yeah he is really..psst "smart..i think..if that's the word i can use for someone like that" Jurina replied with a devil smile
don't mess with him you don't even know him! Rena replied and got up from the table ready to leave but she remembered that next our she has math test so she needs her eraser so she turned around and asked for it 
mmm i don't know! Jurina replied 
i don't wanna play Jurina! Rena says mad 
okay let's do it when i was a kid..now is your turn to guess! Jurina says and Puts her hands on her back 
Rena looked othe way 
choose..which hand? you have to choose the right one,i don't want to punish you ! Jurina replied 
Rena sighed and chose the right hand 
wrong! Jurina answered and kissed Rena
Rena broke the kiss by pushing Jurina
if you don't like it you can give it back! Jurina says smiling
(Rena slapped her)
rough love..i like it! Jurina says brushing her red cheek trying to smile 
this is not love! Rena shouted and left 
Jurina smirked..
<End of the flashback>
poor Rena! Mayu says with a sigh 
well i rather do something than nothing! Jurina says looking at Mayu 
i will do something..eventually! Mayu replied 
coward! Jurina says
TO BE CONTINUED..
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.9
Post by: mo-chan on July 24, 2012, 10:04:10 AM
eeeeeeeeeeeeeh dreaaam  :stoned:
I'm looking farward what Mayu will do  :kekeke:
update soon  :on gay:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.9
Post by: mo-chan on July 24, 2012, 06:43:19 PM
I forgot to talk about Jurina  :on kimbo:
wow I didn't know that Rena used to baby sit Jurina  :whistle:
I'm happy for Jurina that she kissed Rena  :luvluv2:
slapped by Rena  :on lol:
but  :stoned:
but Rena has a boyfriend  :gyaaah:
noooo  :OMG:
 Rena don't leave Jurina  :pleeease:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.9
Post by: Pwety on July 26, 2012, 03:35:40 PM
hoohhohohhoho  XD

It is not a dreammmmmmmm :cry:

Update soon please :peace:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.10 Beach time!
Post by: cmze on July 28, 2012, 08:33:39 AM
                               My sister's Girlfriend                       
                                 10.Beach time! 

Good morning Sae chan! Rena says while enters to the house 
goof morning Rena chan! Sae says happy 
where's Yuki chan? Rena asked 
she's in the kitchen! Sae answers 
Good morning everyone! Rena says because they were Mayu's parents eating and also Yuki 
hello Rena chan! Everyone says 
Yuki gets up from the table.."thanks for the food!" she says then leaves the dishes on the sink and goes to the bathroom 
Yuki chan could you tell Mayu chan her breakfast is getting cold? Mayu's mom says 
Yukk sighed "yes,i will!" She says while goes upstairs 
(Sae was eating her breakfast)
Yuki knocked but nobody answered so she decided to get in Mayu was drawing and with her headphones on 
Mayu took off her headphones and looked at Yuki 
Yuki gulped "your mom says that your breakfast is getting cold!" she said looking other way 
Mayu got up from bed 
Yuki turned around,she was about to open the door but Mayu appeared from nowhere and close it 
what? Yuki asked and turned around to face Mayu 
Are you okay? Mayu asked
huh? why you asks that? Yuki asks 
well..you're just..have you been sleeping properly? Mayu asked then stroke softly Yuki's cheek 
Mayu's hand was so soft that Yuki couldn't help to close her eyes and let Mayu touch her..
Mayu stare Yuki enjoy her touch and also was impress for this new power that she had to control Yuki 
Knock! Knock! Yuki opened her eyes
Yuki chan you'r taking too long! Sae chan shouted 
Yuki got out from the room with Mayu 
we were talking! Yuki says while Mayu goes downstairs 
to eat her breakfast
we're going to the beach! are you excited? Sae asked 
"yeah.".Yuki says and goes downstairs
Mayu was eating but she was also looking Yuki and Yuki was also looking at her 
"her skin is so soft.." Mayu thought 
*doorbell ringing* 
Mayu's dad and mom were preparing her bag,Sae chan was also preparing her bag and Yuki and Mayu were busy  doing eye contact 
Rena sighed and opened the door 
Jurina chan! Rena says not so happy
Rena chan! Jurina says happy and hugs her 
Rena saw the bag and asked "don't tell me you're coming!"  
i'm coming to the beach too..Mayu chan invited me! Jurina says happy 
great! Rena says 
Jurina says hi to Mayu and interrupt their eye contact
you came! Mayu says 
i wouldn't miss it! Jurina says looking at Rena 
Who's ready? Mayu's mom asks and also Sae's dad 
me! Sae shouted happy 
let's go to the car! Mayu's mom says 
<Car position>
Mom and dad in the first seat,Yuki Rena and Sae in the back seat (Rena was in the middle of SaeYuki)  Mayu behind Yuki and Jurina Behind Rena in other backseat
Mayu was happy that Sae can't make a move on Yuki because she was blocked by Rena 
They were playing but soon Sae fell sleep and also Mayu's mom 
Jurina was bothering Rena while Mayu was drawing then Mayu got up and showed her creation to Yuki "do you like it? she asks while puts her arms around Yuki's neck and looks at her 
Yuki was red as a tomato "yeah it's fine!" She answered coldly looking other way 
then Mayu was playing with Yuki's hair,Yuki putted her hand to stop Mayu but she grabbed her hand 
Yuki tried to move her hand but cyborg didn't let her go so easily 
Yuki got tired of fighting for her hand that end up sleeping holding Mayu's hand 
-After an hour-
Finally here! Sae's dad shouts 
everyone wakes up..
Mayu and Yuki had interwine their fingers 
Mayu only smirked while Yuki let go her hand beafore Sae chan notice 
Everyone left their bags in the hotel and changed to swimsuits
Mayu's mom and dad stayed at their hotel room 
Mom and dad want to come to the beach! Sae chan says a little sad  
they are celebrating their anniversary it's obvious they wanted to be alone ! Mayu says serious 
They found a spot and left their things there
Sae chan went to the water 
Mayu took off her shirt and showed her well built body 
Yuki was staring till Jurina appeared and started teasing Mayu and pinched her butt 
Yuki got red of jealousy and went to the water 
Mayu also went to the water 
Rena took off her glasses and shirt 
Omg am i in heaven? Jurina says 
Jurina stop doing that..i'm not like you! Rena says and goes to the water
You'll be mine Rena chan! Jurina says happy 
Mayu gets out from the water 
how was it? Mayu asks 
what? Jurina asks 
i mean if were her i would slap you again! Mayu says 
well it's beacuse she wants me! Jurina says smirking 
what about you? i think i saw her getting mad! Jurina says smiling 
let me says that i found her weakness! Mayu says 
<Jurina smirked> 
The girls got tired of playing and went to eat at their hotel room 
(Sae's parents were in one room while the girls were in other) 
Sae chan putted Yuki's shirt on her "i don't want you get a cold again!" She says smiling 
Yuki looked at Mayu 
Mayu turned around and pouted 
Rena chan here's my towel! Jurina says happy 
i got mine! Rena says coldly 
(someone knocking door)
food is here! Sae says and gives the man a tip 
let's eat! Jurina says 
Mayu and Yuki seemed irritated with eachother 
when anybody notice Jurina putted something on Sae's juice that she started to feel dizzy 
"i think i need some rest!" Sae says and gets up from the table and fall sleep 
Yuki got up and putted a blanket on Sae 
Mayu got up from the table then go out the room and slammed the door 
Yuki went out for her 
what should we do? Rena asked 
we need to go find them! Jurina says while walks 
where are they? Rana asked looked both sides out of the hotel
Jurina saw them "mmm Rena chan i think they went that way!" she says choosing opposite way where Yuki and Mayu went
Maybe we should separate! Rena says 
no,what if there is a sick bastard around..we need to look for them together! Jurina says 
Maybe you're right besides is getting dark! Rena says 
yes! Jurina says 
~Mayuki~ 
Mayu wait up! Yuki shouts and runs after her 
Mayu was running  
Yuki jumped on her and landed on top of her 
(they were on the beach and beacuse it was dark nobody was around) 
get off me! Mayu says mad 
what's going on with you? Yuki shouts 
Mayu slapped Yuki 
i said get off! Mayu murmured 
Yuki got up and brushed her cheek 
"Yuki i'm..." Mayu was about to apologize but Yuki turned around and took her hand and squeeze it a little 
you're hurting me!" Mayu complained 
Yuki let go Mayu's hand 
don't go! Mayu says and gives Yuki a back hug
you just slapped me! Yuki says 
sorry! Mayu says crying 
let go off me! Yuki moves and makes Mayu fall 
Yuki turned around she felt guilty and tried to help Mayu to get up but Mayu took advantage and kissed her 
Yuki broke the kiss "what?" 
Mayu pulls her again for a kiss this time Yuki's hands were cupping Mayu's cheek while Mayu's hands were on Yuki's body 
Yuki break the kiss again "Jurina pinched your butt!" she said annnoyed 
"Sae chan was skinship you all day!" Mayu says between kisses and then putted herself on top of Yuki 
Yuki putted her hands inside Mayu's big shirt and gave a light squeeze on her butt 
They kept kissing eachother..they were devouring eachother 
Mayu pushed Yuki and got up and went to play with the water while Yuki only smirked and also got and both were playing the water 
both looked eachother and took off their shirts and went to swim, play and kiss 
Yuki was holding Mayu in the water she wasn't heavy 
you kiss as good as my dreams! Mayu said and kisses Yuki's neck 
you dream about me? Yuki asked 
well..just once..a few months ago! Mayu answered 
Yuki smirked and kissed Mayu deeply while Mayu has her arms around Yuki's neck 
we're going to catch a cold together! Mayu says smiling while kisses Yuki 
<Wmatsui>
i don't think they're around here! Rena says confuse 
did you dislike our kiss? becouse if you did  i won't do it again i promise! Jurina asks
what? Rena got red and looked other way 
tell me! Jurina says 
yes! Rena says looking other way 
no,no that way! Jurina rises Rena's chin she gulped "now tell me!" Jurina says while leans closer 
Rena was nervous she blinked a few times but still Jurina kissed her 
TO BE CONTINUED
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.10 Beach time!
Post by: yuukimoko on July 28, 2012, 09:04:25 AM
ahhhhhhhhh~ :wub:

I feel so happy~ this chapter was so sweet~


please update soon! I wanna read more~
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.10 Beach time!
Post by: kurogumi on July 28, 2012, 01:51:40 PM
Mayuyu always so bold...its because Jurina help too~
Aww so after this what happen with Saeyuki,will they break up? Or maybe mayuki relationship is a secret?

Jurina...aaa.. Fighting!be more romantic like mayuyu and be gentle...
Rena just so tsundere...
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.10 Beach time!
Post by: Pwety on July 28, 2012, 06:28:39 PM
Huh!huh! :shocked

I love too much this part :wub: :heart: :inlove:

Update soon please
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.10 Beach time!
Post by: korisunyan on July 28, 2012, 07:19:16 PM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
OMG OMG OMG OMG KISS MAYUKI AND WMATSUI  :ptam-wub:
OMG OMG, MORE MAYUKI PLEASEEEEE ÇÇ

SAE, PLEASE DIE BITCH  :grr:

I WANT MORE KISS MAYUKI, OH MY LORD VOLDEMORTTTTT  :luvluv1:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.10 Beach time!
Post by: mo-chan on July 28, 2012, 09:49:58 PM

I love this chapter so much  :luvluv1:
cmze-san make always a long and a lovely chapter like this one  :luvluv2:
Mayuki are so lovely  :shy2:
I like Wmatsui  :hiakhiakhiak:
please more Mayuki and Wmatsui  :wriggly:
I can't wait for the next  :whistle:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.11
Post by: cmze on August 02, 2012, 09:21:24 AM
                              My sister's Girlfriend                       
                                                11
To everyone who's wondering..i'm not gonna lie this fic is going to be "a little..hmmm hot i think!" i'm not good of those things but i have this thing on my head with this fic hope not to dissapoint you.. -_- 
please comment because if you don't..i might not know if i doing something wrong..Thanks for support my fic Enjoy!
Note:Don't hate Yuki in the next chapters..she's doing the best to take the right choice! :) 

Damn! what am doing? i'm kissing my girlfriend's little sister behind my girlfriend's back ..that's not okay "that's sick!" Yuki thought while looks herself in the mirror 
"i need to stop this!" she says while goes downstairs 
Sae chan! Mayu chan! Yuki says impress looking at the two girls that were on her entrance door 
Hello Yuki chan! Sae says happy 
Mayu only waved 
it's getting late let's go to school! Sae says and takes Yuki by her hand
The three girls were walking 
Yuki was with her head down while Sae was still holding her hand. Mayu was coldly looking other way and chewing her gum 
"This is so bad!" Yuki thought and stole a glance at Mayu
(At school) 
Rena was sitting already on her desk she had her fingers on her lips "could it be..why i didn't slapped her?"
~Flashback~ 
Jurina got closer and kissed her 
Rena didn't do anything about it instead she closed her eyes and enjoyed the kiss 
Jurina broke the kiss and looked at Rena who was blushing like crazy 
please don't slap me..this is all your fault for being irrisitable and kind and charming..*You don't even know me Jurina!" Rena shouted fustrated 
Don't you remember?you used to baby sit me of course i know you just forget it! Jurina says shyly while walks away sad 
~End of the flashback~ 
*A kiss on the cheek*
huh? Rena felt that and looked around 
good morning Rena chan! A boy says smiling 
Hello Kyle! Rena says faking a smile 
Kyle sits next to Rena "you know why you don't watch me in the prectice later and maybe we can go ice cream after that!" 
ok! Rena answers carless 
Hello Rena chan! Yuki says and sits so far from Sae 
of course Sae followed her and sitted behind her
~In other Classroom~ 
Mayu putted her bag on her desk and sitted 
you look mad..what happened? Jurina asks
bad things! Mayu answers 
i thought you were really happy because you got what you wanted instead of losing like me! Jurina says a little sad
i'm losing! Mayu answers pouting 
Look! you know what you got into from the start! Jurina says serious 
well is not fun seeing her with Sae! Mayu replies
the teacher enters to the classroom
*After few hours*
Finalltly! Jurina says strecthing 
yes,finally! Mayu says while leaves the classroom 
hey! where are you going? Jurina asked 
not of your bussines! Mayu answered 
well i didn't want to know! Jurina says while gets up and goes to the court 
Walking the hall Mayu found what she was looking for.. she was coming so Mayu had an idea 
Yuki was walking the hall looking for some cetain girl till someone pulled her in an empty classroom 
Mayu chan! Yuki says nervous 
why you haven't broken up with her? Mayu asks while has Yuki against the door 
look i'll do it..eventually! Yuki says nervous 
so you like when she holds your hand? when she touches here and holds back your hair?*Mayu says teasing 
"Mayu.." Yuki says looking other way 
Mayu bit Yuki's neck 
"Mayu.." Yuki said a little in pain 
then Mayu kissed her little wound and went to her ear and whispered "Maybe you like that but i don't" and then devoured Yuki's lips 
Mayu started to unbutton her shirt "you're mine and when she kisses you'll taste my lips" She said between kisses 
While her hands plays with Yuki's breast 
Mayu broke the kiss and smirked 
Yuki was taking deep breaths and trying to button her shirt and put well her uniform 
look what i do to you..Can Sae chan do the same? Mayu asks while leaves the classroom 
Yuki putted her hands on her face "shit..what am i doing?" 
<Wmatsui>
The basketball team was playing ..
The ball bounce out the court and hits a picnic
hey! you destroyed my picnic! the girls say
Like a care! Kyle says 
Jurina took the ball 
hey pass it! Another guy says 
you're so bad at basketball! can you see the basket? bunch of dickheads! Jurina says and shoots from her spot and scores 
Lucky shot! Kyle says 
like if you know the meaning of those words! Jurina says smiling 
*everyone smiles*
what did you say? Kyle says crazy coming to Jurina
what you've head! Jurina says facing Kyle 
hey Kyle she's a girl! A guy says 
Jurina! Lovetan says 
Jurina..hmmm so you're the girl that Rena talked to me about so you like her too bad she's mine and tonight i'll do more than score! Kyle says and throws the ball to Jurina and hits her 
all the basketball team laugh
Ass**e! Jurina says then gets up and throws herself to Kyle and punched him 
 Rena was walking to the court when she saw all the people there trying to separate Jurina from Kyle 
Someguys took Kyle "you'll pay me this one bitch!" he shouts 
Rena goes to Jurina "are you okay?" she asks while sees  a little cut on her forhead 
let me go! Jurina says mad and leaves 
"Rena." Kyle says 
why do you hit her? Rena ask mad 
what? she throwed to punch me..you should be worried about me not for her! Kyle says 
forget it! Rena says and goes after Jurina 
*Nursery*
"Jurina.." Rena says looking for her 
Jurina was on bed with band on her head 
why did you fight him? Rena asks 
well she was messing with my friends..please break up with him..he's not good! Jurina says while takes Rena's hand tighly 
what?? Rena asks 
you know i get it you don't like but please date other one he's bad! Jurina says  worried 
Jurina calm down! Rena says and kisses Jurina's forhead 
what was that for? Jurina asks blushing 
shhhhh just sleep..i'll be here when you wake up! Rena says with a smile 
Jurina smirked and fell sleep
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.11
Post by: yuukimoko on August 02, 2012, 10:53:39 AM
ahhhh~ I so love Mayus possesiviness!!!! Yuki is youts Mayu! yours! now make more love to her!! :inlove:

I so adore Mayuki :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub:

Wmatsui too! Jurina is cool protecting her love!!!~~~~ :inlove:

please update soon! I like seeing Mayu agresive~ XD XD
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.11
Post by: mo-chan on August 02, 2012, 11:46:23 AM
Mayu and Jurina loves persons who are already in relationship  :kekeke:
bad choice and more drama  :fainted:
Yuki you have to break up  :on redcard:
Rena-chan lovely like an Onee-chan  :shy2:
I hate this kyle  :angry1:
you too you have to break up  :bored:
Mayu and Jurina are waiting  and me too :pleeease:
Mayu always marks Yuki she is hers  :shy2:
Yuki can't escape from Mayu  :on bleed:
Jurina give up on Rena  :dunno:
Rena do something   :gyaaah:
update soon  :on speedy:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.11
Post by: Pwety on August 02, 2012, 02:13:23 PM
WAAH what's that? :luvluv2: my heart goes doki doki in Mayuki moment :imdead: It is really good moment

I agree with mo-chan Mayu and Jurina loves persons who are already in relationship :hiakhiakhiak:

Kyle looks really bad :on redcard:

What are you doing Yuki ?Quickly Break Up And Rena even more quickly :prayers:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.11
Post by: Megumi on August 03, 2012, 10:13:43 PM
 :panic: Only if Rena knew what Kyle said what a douche-bag.
MaYuki scene  :shocked *cough it's getting hot in here or what? and then she leaves Yuki like that  XD

ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.11
Post by: kahem on August 04, 2012, 02:36:24 AM
Continue Jurina even if your act can be evil lol
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.11
Post by: kurogumi on August 04, 2012, 03:02:02 AM
Rena boyfriend is suck..why she chose him?

Will yuki broke up with sae? Or may not?
MayuJurina they...LOL

Cmze-san.       

Thank for the update
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.11
Post by: mo-chan on August 08, 2012, 02:04:25 AM
where are you cmze-san!!   :OMG:
I want to know what happens between Mayuki and Wmatsui  :frustrated:
update soon please I miss you  :pleeease:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.12
Post by: cmze on August 08, 2012, 06:05:02 AM
                              My sister's Girlfriend                       
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Sae on the phone talking to Rena <Sae says> (Rena answers)
-Yuki is somewhere else with Mayu while Sae talks on the phone with Rena-
<She's changing i don't know what to do!>
Mayu chan wait! Yuki shouts while runs after Mayu 
Catch me if you can! Mayu shouts smirking 
(I don't what to say to you!) Rena answers on the phone 
Got you! Yuki shouts jumps on Mayu,Yuki landed on top of Mayu they looked eachother in the eyes and kissed 
<i she seeing someone else?> Sae asked scratching her head and takes a deep breath 
Yuki puts herself next to Mayu and stares at her sweetly
what is it? Mayu asked and removed a string on hair that was on Yuki's face 
"nothing.." Yuki replied then looked other way 
(I don't know) Rena replies sad 
Mayu looked at Yuki and then putted herself on top of her and looked in her eyes
don't do that! Yuki says blushing trying to avoid her gaze
Mayu kissed her deeply 
Yuki replied the kiss with the same intense
Mayu fast kissed Yuki's ear then licked her neck 
Yuki was loosing herself in pleasure
Mayu murmured in her ear while kisses her "tell me that you're just as mine like i'm yours!"
Yuki only moaned 
Mayu unbuttoned Yuki's shirt and started playing with her breast "tell me" she says in a bossy tone teasing her 
(don't be silly Sae she wouldn't do something like that..she's not like that maybe she has a lot stress lately you should ask her and give her some love!) Rena answers while paints her nails
"i'm yours.." Yuki murmures taking deep breaths while Mayu is making another hickey but this time is in on her right breast " 
"i'm yours Watanabe Mayu!" Yuki says blushing and gets up because Mayu was going to far 
<Maybe you're right..thanks!> Sae says and hangs up 
what's going i thought you were having fun? Mayu asks while gets up and helps Yuki to button her shirt 
Yuki sighed "you're just a pervert man trapped in this cute girl body!" and then walked 
hey wait up! Mayu says and jumps on Yuki 
what's this? Yuki asked and looks at Mayu who's head in next to hers
well.. take me home like this! Mayu says happy 
you want me to walk all the way with you on my back..are you insine? Yuki asked pouting 
i like having your body close to mine! Mayu replied hugging Yuki tigly from the back 
Yuki sighed and murmured " why you always get your way with me?" 
because you love me like i love you! Mayu whispers on Yuki's neck 
Yuki blushes but then smirks and keeps walking 
~~~Meanwhile~~~~
Doorbell ringing
i'm coming! Rena says while runs to the door 
-still ringing-
who could it be? Rena thought and opnened the door 
hi! Jurina says all messed up 
what happened to you? Rena asks and takes her inside and puts her on the sofa 
your boyfriend is a di**! Jurina says while brushes her cheek 
did he do this to you? Rena asks mad 
Jurina looked other way 
tell me! Rena shouted mad 
-Doorbell ringing-
fuck! Rena says fustrated and goes to open the door
guess what happened to me? Kyle says while gets in 
Rena looks at him with hate on her stare
what's going on? Kyle asks 
Jurina get up from the sofa "Rena i need.."
"you.." Kyle says mad 
You did this to her! Rena says mad 
Kyle takes Rena by her arm "don't tell me you have something with this freak?" 
let go..you're hurting me! Rena says forcing with him
hey Let her go! Jurina says and jumps on Kyle 
get off me bitch! Kyle says 
Jurina punches him many times on his face in a sadist way "you're not strong without your friends coward !" 
Rena takes Jurina "stop!" she says crying
Jurina heard her then stoped and got up 
Kyle was scared and got away 
"sorry.." Jurina says looking at the sad Rena 
Rena hugged Jurina tighly 
"Rena..i don't want anyone to hurt you!" Jurina murmured
Rena kept hugging Jurina 
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.12
Post by: kurogumi on August 08, 2012, 12:21:49 PM
Gezz,yuki...

Ah im pity sae..
How can when she on a phone with rena..talking about how different yuki..
And think that yuki just stress and need some love..

And..at the same time...yuki just makeout with her little sister!
Man,yuki...you cheat!
but i dont hate her LOL

But if she not going to break up with sae something bad will happen...

And for jurina,wow i dont know what happen but she really badass...haha
I hate rena boyfriend...i wonder how can rena fall for him...

Thank for the update cmze-san hope the next update will be fast but dont force yourself...LOL
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.12
Post by: mo-chan on August 08, 2012, 12:33:01 PM
I really really hate Rena's boyfriend how she become his girlfriend  :angry1:
Rena hugged Jurina tighly
"Rena..i don't want anyone to hurt you!" Jurina murmured
Rena kept hugging Jurina
so lovely Wmatsui  :luvluv1:
Sae is going to find out  :shock:
What is going to happen to Mayuki  :stoned:
and Sae what is going to do to them  :OMG:
I can't wait to know what is going to happen  :frustrated:
update soon  :pleeease:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.12
Post by: Playgirlz on August 11, 2012, 11:12:18 AM
Rena should break up with that guy :temper: also Yuki.
She's hurting Sae  :on chew:
Mayu is being naughty lately  :kekeke: poor Yuki, but she loves it  :cool2:
Thank you for updating  :on GJ:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.12
Post by: Megumi on August 13, 2012, 12:37:14 AM
Noo poor Sae-chan!  :mon cry: I hope everything will be fine (she can be with Sayaka)  XD

That bastard boyfriend of Rena and his gang did that to Jurina?  :mon huh: ..... :mon wtfmm: ... :mon wtf: ...  :mon mad: ... Jurina!  :mon runcry:

Oh wait Rena will absolutely comfort you and treat your wounds  :mon fyeah:   :mon psst: you know somebody should  :knee: :kickass: that bastard soon to be ( right now) ex-boyfriend seriously and then I will be good!  :mon thumb:

Thank you for your update!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.12
Post by: kahem on August 13, 2012, 01:26:53 AM
God job Mayu!
Kyle! Son of a bitch!!!!
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.13
Post by: cmze on August 14, 2012, 01:51:43 PM
                              My sister's Girlfriend                       
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 (After school) 
You don't have to do this Rena chan! Jurina says blushing and looking other way 
i want to! Rena says happy and takes Jurinas's bag 
"but..." Jurina says 
no buts i'm going to take you home! Rena says smiling and also takes Jurina's hand 
Jurina felt up in the space 
what's up with those two? i thought she was with Kyle form the basketball team! Sae wondered 
When a thing has to end has to end! Mayu says coldly
-Yuki felt something on her spine then looked at Mayu who stuck her tongue out-
Sae was walking hand in hand with Yuki 
Mayu was jealous but she handle it well  she was listening to her ipod as usual but she wasn't she had the volume low so she could hear what her sister and her girlfriend are talking about 
So Yuki chan i was thinking maybe we can go on a date today! Sae says smiling 
"well..i have..mmm" Yuki looked back at Mayu but fast she looked Sae in the eyes
"yeah..why not?" she answered not so excited 
Mayu pouted "stupid song!" she said 
Yuki gulped and kept walking 
(At Jurina's home) 
Jurina sitted on the sofa and turned on the tv
Rena saw a note on the fridge "they never get tired of this?" She says and throw the note on the trash bin 
no,i got used to it! Jurina says with a smile 
"Jurina.." Rena says a little sad and sits next to her and takes her hand 
what? Jurina asked 
i know this bothers you..you used to cry because of that everyday! Rena says 
now i'm strong! Jurina says with a smile 
Rena sighs and kisses Jurina's forhead sweetly " i'll make you dinner and then we'll do homework!" she says while goes to the kitchen 
Jurina blushed "My Rena chan haven't changed a bit!" she murmured happy
~Meanwhile~  (On Yuki's room)
Why did i do to deserve this? Yuki murmured while dresses for her date with Sae 
-Ring- -ring-
Yuki saw her phone
new text message: 
Have fun on your date! 
from: Mayu 
Another sigh "this is not going to be fun!" 
Soon Sae arrived to Yuki's home 
~~At Jurina's Home~~~
Jurina was forzen looking to the princess that was cooking for her 
Jurina chan! Rena called 
Jurina chan! She called again 
huh? what's wrong? Jurina asked 
You're looking at me like that and that makes me nervous and i can cook! Rena says blushing
well hummm..i want to help! Jurina says excited 
"ok!" Rena says while both starts making the salad
Rena chan! Jurina says 
what is it? Rena asked 
well..i wanted to ask you hmmm Why did you had that boyfriend? Jurina asked and shouted her question 
Rena was forzen but then react "well hmmmm" 
sorry i didn't mean to made you upset! Jurina says 
you're not making me upset..it's just that he wasn't like that or at least he was good to pretend he wasn't like he is! Rena says 
"sorry!" Jurina says sad 
why? Rena asked 
"well i want you to be happy.." Jurina answers
Rena looks at Jurian with a sweet look "i'm happy Jurina chan! Are you happy?" she asked with a smile 
Jurina was shocked but then answered "this is one of the best days of my life!" 
Rena blushed
something is burning! Jurina says sniffing around
"what's that's the.." Rena says  
Jurina laughs 
(They ordered food or what we call pizza)
That was fun! Jurina says happy 
Rena was looking at Jurina and then knew that it hit her 
(Rena's pov)
why am i thinking that Jurina smile is the best? why she makes me blush with a single word? where these feeling came from? i think this is bad...she's a player and besides i never date a girl before! why i'm mentioning "date"? is not like i'm thinking about date her or am i? this is so confusing..i'm straight maybe i should ask Yuki or Sae chan or maybe not them because they have never date a guy before...What the hell am i thinking she's 16! calm down Rena..you can fight it you are 2 years older and bolder! 
*End of inner fight*
Rena chan..Are you okay? Jurina asked
yes..totally! Rena answers faking a smile 
<DATE> 
Feels so good being alone just you and me right? Sae asks smiling and holding Yuki's hand
Somehow Yuki felt relaxed there's was something that Sae can do to her and it's calm her
yeah it's nice! Yuki says 
Both look to the menu in the bakery then ordered and chatted 
i know you been stressed..you a have play and i know you like singing but please don't forget about me! Sae says a little sad 
Yuki looked at Sae and answered sad "Sorry Sae chan i won't do it again!" she gives a little squeeze on her hand
i know you won't! Sae says with a smile 
~Yuki's pov~
Why did i say that?
  it's cool being like this sometimes.. no games,no burning feeling and safe!
Sae chan gives me that but can't play with her like this "i need to figure out what i want" because if i don't i'm going to end up hurting both 
~End of the pov~
Yuki your cheese cake it's waiting for you! Sae says smiling 
ohh yes it looks delicious! Yuki says and tries itv
me want some! Sae says acting cute 
Yuki smile and gave her some 
After a great desert both walked home hand in hand 
like all times! Sae says smiling 
Yuki looked other way
You know Mayu chan is been acting weird lately! Sae says while walks 
oh.. really? Yuki asked 
yeah she cleans now and it's trying hard to cook! Sae says smiling 
why? Yuki asked 
maybe she wants to cook for someone she even asked mom to teach her how to make deserts! Sae says laughing 
that's interesting! Yuki says 
i was worried about her beacuse she gets along with Jurina so when you ignored me i didn't do anything about it but now i have you here! Sae says and steal a kiss from Yuki's lips "Sae chan we're out of my house! "
sorry i couldn't help it! Sae says smiling 
Goodbye Sse chan! Yuki says and gives a short kiss on her lips and then enters to her home 
yeah! Sae says smirking 
"what an idiot!" Someone mumures from Yuki's window 
Yuki chan you're home! Yuki's mom says
yeah..i'm tired i'm going to sleep! Yuki says and goes to her room upstairs she opens the door then turns the light on and notice someone on her bed she got closer to a have a closer look 
Yuki looked at the doll pricess girl sleeping "Maybe she was waiting for me" she thought then layed next to her and hugged her tight inhaling he scent
The doll princess girl rubbed Yuki's arm 
Does anyone know you're here? Yuki asked 
did you have fun? Mayu asked 
Does anyone know you're here? Yuki asked serious
Mayu sighed "they think i'm in a sleep over at Jurina's home! did you have fun?" she asked irritated still without looking back at Yuki 
"yep.." Yuki answered 
Mayu removed Yuki's arm off her mad 
Yuki made Mayu turn around and kissed her passionately 
then she broke the  "Sorry i needed to do that..Good night!" Yukk says and gives her back 
Mayu rolled her eyes but eventually fell sleep too
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.13
Post by: yuukimoko on August 14, 2012, 02:10:14 PM
Rena ......what did you burn?   Wmatsui was sweet~

Yuki was on a date with Sae....!?   Mayu was sooo jealous! cuteeeee~!! 

but after Yuki come back to her Mayu~


sweet!
please update soon~!
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.13
Post by: mo-chan on August 14, 2012, 03:23:04 PM
I don't know but I feel something bad is going to happen  :badluck:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.13
Post by: Playgirlz on August 14, 2012, 07:50:49 PM
Yuki why? why? whyyyyy???? u r hurting both of them TT^TT

It kind of sad that Mayu came to Yuki's place, over sleep but....nothing happens -___-

And thank you for updating!!!!

Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.13
Post by: kurogumi on August 18, 2012, 08:47:38 AM
Little by little rena will fall for jurina...
Yukiiii..agh! Please just broke up with sae and everything over...you can be free and free to love mayu...
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.14
Post by: cmze on August 22, 2012, 11:38:19 PM
                              My sister's Girlfriend                       
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(The next morning)
Yuki opened her eyes and noticed that her arms were around Mayu's body,she looked at the beatiful doll features "there's no doubt you're really pretty.." Yuki thought smiling 
KNOCK!  KNOCK! 
Yuki fell of bed and Mayu opened her eyes 
Yuki chan i have to work you're breakfast is on the table and there's also money! Yuki's mom shouts 
"Ok..." Yuki shouts nervous while Mayu observes her witout saying a word 
Yuki and Mayu heard the door and Yuki sighed in relief
Mayu got up from bed,took her bag and went to the bathroom 
Yuki sighed "i guess she's still mad.."  then got up and went to the bathroom of her mother 
Yuki went downstairs to prepare Mayu's breakfast soon she was in the kitchen she saw Mayu in her school uniform ready to leave
Mayu i made you breakfast! Yuki says 
how dare you? Mayu asked mad 
what? Yuki asks and goes closer to Mayu then puts her hand on her shoulder 
you kissed her..you don't..you just want to play with my feelings! Mayu shouted and turned around 
what? huh? Yuki reacted 
Mayu pushed her against the wall 
is this a joke? Yuki asked while Mayu has her hands on her shirt still against the wall 
Mayu looked Yuki in the eyes 
-Inner Yuki-
why she has to look at me like that? i can fall for that..oh no..not again these feelings again..this heat..this heartbeat.. this sparks.. i can't breathe properly..damn sweaty palms! maybe this is it,maybe this is how this mess should end these feelings scares me!! 
-Present-
the truth..i..love...Sae chan! Yuki murmured and tears rolled her cheeks 
Mayu's eyes open wide "That's not true!" she shouted 
and tears also came out 
Mayu kissed Yuki like it was the en of the world,Yuki also replied the kiss (hands roaming around eachother) 
The lack of air soon affect them 
Forheads connecting
i can't...this is a goodbye kiss! Yuki murmured and more tears showed 
Mayu felt like her heart just broke,she pushed Yuki and got out of the house running..
Yuki leaned against the wall and sitted "This hurts...so much!!" she shouted crying 
MEANWHILE: In the classroom 
 so you think about Jurina chan? Sae says with her fingers on her chin 
"sort of.." Rena answers murmuring and blushing 
mmm she's uhmmm in don't what to say..she's not good you should meet someone else! Sae says smiling 
you idiot..you don't know her! Rena says serious 
maybe you're right but school does! Sae says 
Doesn't mean a thing! Rena says looking other way 
my advice is you should forget her..she's not good besides there are so many fishes in the water! Sae says smiling
you're an idiot..where's Yuki? Rena asked 
Rena chan! Jurina shouts and leans to hug Rena who smirked by the sudden action 
You're right where's my Yuki? Sae asked and pulled out her phone from her pocket
-Phone call- note:Yuki was under her blanket 
Yuki chan! Sae says happy 
hi! Yuki says pouting to not cry 
where are you? you're late! Sae says 
i'm not feeling good! Yuki replies
Maybe catched another cold beacuse of our date last night! Sae says pouting cutely 
"yeah.." she answered 
Maybe i should leave you rest! Sae says 
-Yuki hanged up already then turned off her phone and covered her face with the blanket-
~End of the phone call~
she hanged up.." Sae says 
what's wrong with her? Rena asked 
she catched a cold! Sae answers with a smile but she can't help feeling worried 
Rena chan smells so good! Jurina says happy 
Rena blushes 
hey you Jurikoala tell me where's Mayu chan! Sae asked
what? the fact that i'm her friend doesn't mean that i know where's she is 24/7! Jurina answers 
You should know she slept at your house last night! Sae says rising an eye brown 
what?? ehhh! Jurina replied unfamiliar with that sentence 
Sae noticed 
ahh yeah..she slept at my house! Jurina answers nervous
you're lying! Sae says and gets out of her classroom and went to Mayu's classroom 
Mayu! Sae shouts and opens the door 
everyone in the classroom were looking at Sae except one person that was looking throught the window
Mayu chan! Sae says and puts herself in front of Mayu 
Mayu turned and looked at Sae 
where you slept last night? Sae asked mad 
Mayu looked at Jurina who hid behind Rena "coward" she murmured and then got up and ignored Sae 
Mayu! Sae shouts and grabs Mayu's wrist 
Mayu got mad and pushed Sae against the desk (Sae fell and hit her butt) "who you think you are? You're nothing to me..Leave me alone!" she shouted while gets out of the classroom 
"Mayu.." Jurina murmured and followed Mayu 
what's wrong with her? Sae asked 
let me help you! Rena says and helps Sae to get up
*Later*
Yuki is upstairs! Yuki's mom says 
thanks! Sae and Rena says smiling and goes upstairs 
then opens the door 
Yuki chan! Rena says 
Yuki removes the blanket and sits then sees Sae and looked other way 
Sae kissed her cheek 
Sae and Rena sitted on Yuki's bed 
My butt! Sae shouted 
Yuki blinked and then asked "are you okay?" 
yeah it's nothing! Sae answers 
today it's been a rought day for Sae! Rena says
why? Yuki asked 
well Mayu chan was acting weird she even pushed Sae against the desks! Rena answers 
Yuki felt dizzy and touched her chest
are you okay? Rena asked and touched Yuki's forhead 
no,i feel bad! Yuki answered 
you have no fever! Rena says 
it hurts.." Yuki says and looks at Sae 
what hurts? Sae asked 
My chest! Yuki replies 
Maybe is for coughing too much! Rena answers 
yeah maybe! Yuki murmures and looks away 
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.14
Post by: mo-chan on August 22, 2012, 11:56:48 PM
noooooooooo  :stoned:
they break up  :gyaaah: :gyaaah: :gyaaah:
no it can't be noooo  :pleeease:
poor Mayu and Sae found out that she didn't sleep in Jurina's house Mayu is in trouble  :on freeze:
Yuki is really confused  :badluck:
why Yuki why you are hurting Mayu why  :fainted:
Yuki you're only running away face it :on thumbb:
What is going to happen????????????????  :frustrated:
I can't wait to know the next   :on speedy:
I'm going to die  :on blackhole:
update soon please I can't wait to know what is going to happen  :pleeease:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.14
Post by: Pwety on August 23, 2012, 12:37:08 AM
NOOOoooo!!! Poor Mayu :fainted:

Yuki :glasses: ... your chest hurts because you need Mayu ... Why you didn't know that? :temper:

Can't wait for the next chapter! :peace:

Good job cmze-san
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.14
Post by: kahem on August 23, 2012, 12:46:39 AM
Poor Mayu T_T
Yuki you will regret your choice
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.14
Post by: kurogumi on August 23, 2012, 02:20:33 AM
After all this happen, why you still so blind yuki?

That's a bad choise!

The one you should break up its sae not mayu...you will regret that...

If someone else stole mayu heart,dont regret that...ah love is so complicated eh...LOL

Thank for the update cmze_san...hehehe
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.14
Post by: Playgirlz on August 23, 2012, 03:20:56 AM
Ahhhhhh hell no, update pls, I want to continue reading it ><

My emotions are a mess now TT.TT

Yuki and Mayu broke up???? No wayyyy

Pls update as soon as possible, thank you
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.14
Post by: Megumi on August 23, 2012, 10:59:25 PM
 :banghead: Oh no the love triangle is turning really complicated..

Poor Mayu, poor Yuki and poor Sae...

:kneelbow:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.15
Post by: cmze on September 01, 2012, 09:29:55 PM
                              My sister's Girlfriend                       
                                                15
(3 Days passed)
Alarm clock ringing 
"Not again..sunlight again.." Mayu murmured and coverred herself with a blanket 
-Still ringing-
Sae entred to her room and set off the alarm then she turned to look the sleepy Mayu
What's going on?talk to me! Sae murnured and then walked away from the room 
Sae went dowstairs and saw her mother cooking 
she's not going to school again? Sae's mom asked 
she didn't feel good! Sae answers 
i don't know what's wrong i should better take her to doctor! Sae's mom replies while fries the eggs
yep! Sae answers while bites her toast 
-Meanwhile-
Yuki looked herself on the mirror and notice that the mark on her shoulder is dissapearing 
" guess i'm not yours after all.." she murmures and take off her clothes to shower 
Yuki's mom enters to the room and leaves her uniform on her bed and then gets back to the kitchen 
after a few minutes Yuki gets out from the bathroom she looks at her uniform on bed she looked at her blazer then she remembered when she putted on Mayu..
"This is harder than it looked" Yuki murmured and started dressing 
-After half an hour-
Yuki chan..Sae chan came to pick you up! Yuki's mom shouts while washes the dishes 
Bye mom! Yuki says while opens the door 
bye honey! Yuki's mom replies 
hello Yuki chan! Sae says smiling 
hi! Rena and Jurina says 
what did i miss? Yuki wondered and looked to the  Matsuis *Jurina was clinging on Rena.." 
Then Yuki notice that Mayu is not going to school..again!
The four girls walked to bus parade *Sae and Yuki walking hand in hand* *Jurina clinging on Rena*
Rena chan smells so good! Jurina says 
Rena blushed and looked other way while the other two girls just looked at the two 
what?? Mayu chan isn't coming to school and i feel lonely! Jurina says clinging on Rena tigher 
Talking about Mayu chan..how's she doing? Rena asked 
she's till somewhere else..mom is going to take her to the doctor today! Sae replies and Yuki looked down 
maybe she's broken hearted! Jurina says 
borken hearted? but who's the guy? i'm going to kill him that son of a bitch did that to my lil sis! Sae replies mad and without notice squeezes Yuki's hand
Yuki couldn't feel worst 
Jurina looked at Yuki and then smirked "that will make you think a little.." Jurina thought
(At the hospital afer some exams)
Miss Miyazawa i don't think there's anything wrong with Mayu at all! The doctor says 
what? but she's not eating,not sleeping..i don't know what to do! Mayu's mom says 
maybe you should sit and talk with your daughter! the doctor says smiling 
okay thanks doctor! Mayu's mom says 
Mayu and her mom left the hospital and walked to an ice cream shop
so many time without being just the two of us! Mayu's mom says smiling while enters to the shop 
Mayu just rolled her eyes and followed her 
Both chose their ice creams 
how's school Mayu chan? Mayu's mom asked 
Mayu didn't bother to reply just looked other way 
Your icecreams the cashier says smiling 
Mayu took hers and started licking while her mother was still more confuse with her child actitude
The morning passed fast Mayu and her mom went shopping,eat but still her mom couldn't get a word from Mayu..both got back home Mayu went to her room while Mayu's mom sighed and started preparing food for Sae chan that has to get back from school
i'm home! Sae shouts while enters with Yuki,Jurina and Rena
*note: of course Yuki refused going to Sae's home but sge couldn't back out thanks to Jurina who started pulling her with Sae*
where's Mayu chan? Jurina asked 
upstairs! Mayu's mom says 
Yuki looked other way *she wanted to go upstairs and make up with Mayu but rathered ignore everything..* 
JURINAAAAA! Mayu shouted while Jurina was pushing her to get out of her cave 
Mayu's mom smirked "finally.." 
Sae also felt relief that Mayu shouted that means she's getting better and Jurina is really annoying
Jurina and Mayu were forcing the two end up falling downstairs but their position was kinda ackward Jurina was on top of Mayu 
Rena got red of jealous while Yuki unconsciously took Jurina hard and removed her "Get off her!" Yuki shouted mad  and pushed Jurina away
When relized what she was doing it was too late 
Mayu was impress 
Sae wondered why Yuki behaved that way and also Rena but then Rena went to help Jurina to get up 
Jurina was smirking like crazy 
Yuki gulped and let go Jurina "i should go.." She said and then left 
"Yuki.." Mayu murmured 
Sae looked at Mayu 
Mayu looked at Sae 
"This is ackward.." Rena murmured while looks to the two sisters 
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.15
Post by: Pwety on September 01, 2012, 10:18:20 PM
Wohohohoho :glasses:

it becomes interesting!!!

Yuki was mad when Jurina was on the top of Mayu :on cigar:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.15
Post by: mo-chan on September 01, 2012, 10:43:15 PM
Yuki can't help get extremily jealous even with Sae's presance  :hehehe:
Quote
Yuki looked herself on the mirror and notice that the mark on her shoulder is dissapearing
" guess i'm not yours after all.." she murmures and take off her clothes to shower
wrong wrong Yuki's action torward Jurina says the opposite  :kekeke:
It's really getting interesting with Jurina's help we have to add Sayaka too   :ding:
update soon please  :wriggly:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.15
Post by: Playgirlz on September 02, 2012, 12:02:47 AM
lmao~~ I love this chapter so much lolololol so cute and funny

I have nothing to say at Rena's comment in the last sentence lolita

Yuki finally expressed some of her feeling, made me so happy xD

Thank you for updating, i was thinking when would u update the new chapter hahaha
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.15
Post by: kahem on September 02, 2012, 02:16:20 AM
Jurina! God job!!!
I like jealous Rena~
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.15
Post by: smarty0821 on September 02, 2012, 02:29:22 PM
Nice Jurina!!  :thumbup

Now Yuki showed what she really feel towards Mayu  :onioncheer:

And I feel Mayu will do something about it... :ding:

and yeah I almost forgot...RENA WAS JEALOUS!  :panic: :panic: :panic:

haha...but if Rena is jealous...does this mean..Jurina and Rena are together already...but if I'm not mistaken...Rena has a boyfriend..right? :dunno:

Well, hope you update!! it's been a long time since you update well it feel like century for me...hope it will not take long like before :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.16 Happy Birthday!
Post by: cmze on September 05, 2012, 08:56:11 AM
                              My sister's Girlfriend                       
                               16.Happy Birthday

*It's been a few days since the last time Mayu and Yuki have seen eachother..
*Sae and Yuki's relantionship had become ackward..Sae didn't ask about the incident with Jurina she just ignore it and did not talk about it with Yuki
*Jurina and Rena's relantionship is a twisted sick friendship where Rena got jealous with everygirl that talks to Jurina..still  Rena's calls it "Friendship" 
<Today it's Mayu's 16 birthday> <Saturday> 
Come on Mayu chan you gotta buy this dress it looks so good on you! Lovetan says 
i think so too and for today's party is cool! Jurina says smiling while unzips Mayu's dress
maybe i should buy it..what about you guys what are you going to buy? Mayu asks  and enters to the cubicle to change to other dress
i already have my dress! Lovetan says 
Look over there is Rena chan and Yuki chan! Jurina says happy *Yuki and Rena were crossing the street to enter to the same store*
Soon as the two older girls entered to the store Jurina went to cling on Rena's arm 
Are you going to buy a dress for Mayu's birthday party tonight? Jurina asks 
actually i came to buy her a present! Rena says smiling 
ohhh ok tell me i'm cute! Jurina says smiling 
what? why? Rena asks nervous 
i like it when you say it! Jurina replies 
Rena looked to Yuki who just looked other way 
"This is so embarrasing!" Rena thought while Yuki was still looking other way but catched her eye. Mayu got out of the cubicle with another dress on 
(She looked really good) 
Yuki was almost drooling 
Mayu saw Yuki then blushed and got into the cubicle again "Why my heart beats fast everytime Mayu is around?"She wondered and left the store running 
"Yuki!" Rena says and runs after Yuki 
Mayu got out of the cubicle and saw her friends standing there without saying a word 
Yuki wait up! Rena shouts but Yuki kept running "This feelings are never going to dissapear!" She thought while runs away from Rena 
Where's she going? Rena wondered while runs after her 
Yuki got tired of running and just kneeled and cried out
Rena stopped behind Yuki then looked to the devastated girl and whispered "Yuki.."
"WHYYYY???? This feelings... Consume me..these sparks..this uncontrolable fire..i can't hardly breathe..everytime she's around!" Yuki shouts and more tears shows 
what? Rena asked shocked 
i'm talking about Mayu chan! Yuki says sobbing and turned around to face her best friend 
what?? You love Mayu chan? Rena asks 
i don't know! Yuki shouts 
it's ok..calm down let's go home! Rena says and takes her best friend home 
<At home> 
Rena prepares a tea for her friend "now explain!" she says while gives the tea to Yuki and sits next to her 
i don't know..it just happned "one minute she hated me and then we were kissing" Yuki answered 
Rena covered her mouth then spoke "what about Sae chan?" she asked 
i like her but it's diffrent from Mayu..Sae is..she keeps me calm and safe but Mayu she can make me loose control she always challenges me.. she makes me see things in. a different way! Yuki answered 
Rena sighs "Yuki chan.."
Yuki looked other way 
Beep! Beep! -> (phone ringing)
Yuki answered 
Yuki chan where are you? the party just started! Sae says smiling 
i'm with Rena chan buying presents! Yuki says 
Rena pouted "i couldn't buy a present!" she thought
well hurry up..this is fun! Sae says laughing 
ok! Yuki says abd hangs up 
~End of the phone call~
We should dress! Yuki says 
are you sure you're ok? Rena asks looking at Yuki 
i will stay away from her! Yuki replies 
ok..i'll make sure you'll stay away from her! Rena says serious and then sighed "I wanted to spend more time with Jurina.." She thought 
<At the party> 
Rena and Yuki entered 
Everyone were having a good time 
Rena scanned the roon looking for certain Girl once she saw her she noticed that many girls were around her and she couldn't help go to her rescue because that little pimp was really popular with girls 
Once Jurina saw Rena's Gekikara side she smirked she loved both ways of Rena 
Rena and Jurina went to talk outside
<Outside>
You don't have to get that mad you know? Jurina says smiling and looking at Rena who forgot about her mission 
to not let Yuki be around Mayu 
Why you're always around girls who want to touch you or kiss you? Rena asks jelous 
well they come to me and i'm a polite girl so what a second why am i explaining myself to you? you said we're friends and just that! Jurina says teasing 
well i car about you as a friend for sure! Rena says 
yeah right! Jurina says and Pulls Rena to her and plant a kiss on her lips 
Rena didn't rejected so it became bolder 
they looked eachother and left the party..
<Mayuki> 
Sae was dancing with her friends while Yuki was staring her dorky friends but then she got tired and went outside
she sitted outside and looked to the sky "i don't even know why i'm here.." She said and then got up ready to leave 
"please.."  Someone says 
Yuki turned around because that voice was so familiar she looked at the girl standing
what? Yuki asked ready to crumble 
"Kiss me.." Mayu says walking closer to the older girl 
"Please kiss me.."she says a few inches from Yuki's lips 
Yuki was fighting with her innerselves "i can't.." she murmured 
"don't ever let me go.." Mayu says and kisses Yuki's lips 
It was a simple kiss but once Yuki's hands cupped Mayu's cheeks it became bolder 
It looked like they were trying to eat eachother's face 
(hands roaming everywhere)
Yuki chan! Someone says 
Mayu and Yuki stoped kissing eachother They knew to who belongs that voice..
Both looked at the person owner of the voice 
"Happy Birthday!" Yuki murmured 
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.16 Happy Birthday!
Post by: yuukimoko on September 05, 2012, 09:13:53 AM
Mayu is soooo~ bold!


I just love Mayu! .....w-wait! dont kill me Yukirin!! I only love you two as my oshimens! I love someone else......

Anyway~   thats Sae isnt it? I cant wait for the next chapter~   Yuki is Mayus and hers alone!!!!!

Please update soon~
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.16 Happy Birthday!
Post by: msst28 on September 05, 2012, 09:33:33 AM
poor sae..
well yuki loves mayu
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.16 Happy Birthday!
Post by: CheesyBits on September 05, 2012, 10:40:57 AM
Im originally a SaeYuki fan and still a SaeYuki fan  :wub: but im starting to like MaYuki because of your fanfic  :inlove:. This is the first time im reading a Mayuki fanfic.
Kudos to you cmze-san!  :twothumbs

I bet Sae is the one who saw them.. Poor Sae~   :cry:

I want to see more of the story! Im excited for a new chapter  :inlove:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.16 Happy Birthday!
Post by: kurogumi on September 05, 2012, 01:56:52 PM
Its sae right? Well its good...yuki last choice...if she got wrong choice (sae) she will be lost mayu...

Jurina is so bold...rena-chan...are you sure she's just a 'friend'?
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.16 Happy Birthday!
Post by: Pwety on September 05, 2012, 02:08:32 PM
Aaaah Yuki really love Mayu! :mon noprob: Poor Sae but great Mayuki!!

I love the last scene when Mayu and Yuki are kissed. :mon crazyinlove: But who is the someone called Yuki?? Maybe Sae?? Leaves her alone
Mayu and Yuki are they back together? Yukirin choose Mayu please!!!!! :mon kungfu:

WMatsui: Rena, Jurina is just your "friend"? Are you kidding me?? :mon lmao:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.16 Happy Birthday!
Post by: Chanaline on September 05, 2012, 10:25:16 PM
Wouaaaaah!!!! Good fanfic!! I read that before i'm register XD

Love the last scene with Mayu and Yuki!!! :heart:

Wmatsui: I agree with Pwety eheh!! :heart:

Update soon !! PLEASE!!!
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.16 Happy Birthday!
Post by: Megumi on September 06, 2012, 11:34:28 PM
Kiss me and never let me go...  :wub:

Jurina is a pimp but just to make Rena jealous  XD

Sae will be so heartbroken... there will be dramas..

:kneelbow:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.16 Happy Birthday!
Post by: kahem on September 07, 2012, 09:07:42 PM
hehe WMatsui~
Jealous Rena is so funny~
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.17
Post by: cmze on September 08, 2012, 04:24:16 AM
      My sister's Girlfriend                       
                                            17

(6 years ago) 
"Sas chan it hurts!" Mayu says crying 
why are you such a crying baby?it's just a cut i don't wanna take you home,i wanna keep playing! Saw shouts and gets back to play soccer with her friends while Mayu is crying sitting 
Yuki passes on her bike "ehhh..what's wrong Mayu chan? why are you crying?" she asks while gets off the bike
my..fi..finger hurts! little Mayu says sobbing
"let me see.." Yuki says and examinates it 
(Mayu cries more)
[Note:It was a little cut]
Yuki smirks and kisses the finger 
Mayu stopped crying..she was impress by that action that she just stared the older girl who was smiling 
My lips has a special ability i can heal anything! does still hurts? Yuki asks smiling 
"No..." Mayu replies mouth open 
"I'm glad i helped" Yuki says and gets on her bike 
Mayu only looked at her finger and then looked at Yuki on her bike and smiled 
 ~~~~~~~~~~Present at the party~~~~~~~~~
what..what's this? Sae asks and tears showed 
Yuki looked other way 
answer me! Sae says and gets closer to them 
"Sas chan.." Mayu says 
you shut up! Sae says mad and looking at Yuki 
Mayu was about to get closer to her older sister but Yuki putted her arm in the way and didn't let her 
Sae i'm sorry! Yuki says in tears 
we're in love! Mayu says trying to not be so cruel
you're in love..don't make me laugh three weeks ago you couldn't stand Yuki and now you "love her"? Sae asks and Yuki turned to look Mayu 
Yes,Yuki she hated you so much! Sae says 
That's not truth! Mayu says and tears wanted to show 
really? Sae asked trying to control her pain 
i have always..been in love with Yuki since we met but then i found out about your relantionship and i couldn't help to hate you to hide my real feelings but now i know that i'm the one for you and you know it too..*Shut up! Sae interrupts Mayu* 
Sae's tears showed 
Yuki is mine and i'm not going to share it! Mayu says in tears looking at her older sister 
(Yuki was shocked not knowing what to do) 
Why did you this to me? how this happened? i don't undertant!!  Sae asked shouting 
I just don't know! Yuki replied crying 
don't know? tell me now..how is possible that you kiss my little sister? Sae asked mad 
"Mayu stole my first kiss..." Yuki says unconsciously
what? Sae asked 
Mayu was shocked 
Since that kiss i started thinking about Mayu! Yuki said looking other way 
"then that dream was real.." Mayu murmured then blushed and remembered all the things they did
Sae slapped Yuki
 Mayu helped Yuki she was ready to fight Sae but Yuki stopped her 
Sae left the two and got back to the house 
Yuki walks away 
where you're going? Mayu asks 
"home.." Yuki replies 
i'll go with you! Mayu says and hugs Yuki from behind 
"this is your birthday party.." Yuki says coldly without looking at Mayu 
"i don't care... all i wanted for my birthday.." Mayu whispers presses harder Yuki's body against hers 
"but.." Yuki murmures 
please..all i want it's you! Mayu says resting her head on Yuki's back 
"ok.." Yuki ackwardly answers 
~Meanwhile~ ~walking to Jurina's place~ 
Rena chan did i tell you who beatiful look tonight! Jurina says while puts her arm around Rena's neck 
Rena blushed and smirked "it's 100 time you tell me so!"
sorry i can't help it..i like to admire beauty! such beatiful night.Don't you think? Jurina asks looking to the sky 
Rena stops walking and also looks to the sky "you're totally right!" She says and looks at Jurina 
what's wrong? Jurina asks 
"nothing.." Rena answers 
you're looking at me like if i have something on my face..are sure everything is okay? Jurina asks looking concerned to Rena 
Rena looks at Jurina and kisses her 
They stopped kissing couse the lack of air 
i'm in paradise finally my Rena chan gave me some love i'm so happy! Jurina says like she's floating in the air
what a child! Rena says and hugs Jurina then kept walking to Jurina's place 
~At Yuki's home~ 
Once changed the Mayu was ready to sleep but there was something that was bothering Her "Yuki is not acting like herself must be cause Sae.." she thought 
Yuki got out of the bathroom and removed the towel that was on he head then started to brush her hair in front of the mirror,She saw Mayu standing looking at her "What's wrong?" she asked and left the hairbrush aside and got closer to the younger girl 
Mayu looked at her in the eyes then kissed her and pushed her to bed 
"Mayu.." Yuki says while Mayu is on top of her kissing her 
"I want you.." Mayu murmures and bites Yuki's neck while her hands were under Yuki's shirt 
"Mayu..stop!" Yuki says trying to avoid the younger girl but it was hard beacuse her body was reacting differently
"Love me.." Mayu whispered on Yuki's then bit it and lick it
Yuki was trying hard to remove the younger girl off her but the waves of pleasure were uncontrable 
Mayu hands reached to her breast and squeezed them hard while mouth was about bit them too
"Stop!" Yuki says and pushes Mayu off her and sits on bed while Mayu wasn't listening her hands rubbed Yuki's thighs till Yuki get them off 
what? Mayu asked 
what are you doing? Yuki asked taking deep breaths while her whole body is shaking 
*nobody ever touched her like that before* 
" i wanted you.." Mayu answered 
look you're going to sleep here but if your hands gets to touchy you're going to the sofa! Yuki says still trying to catch her breath 
"sorry..." Mayu says looking down 
"let's sleep today was a long day" Yuki says and lays on bed then sighed 
do you regret? Mayu asks and hugs Yuki 
what? Yuki asks and looks at Mayu who has her head on Yuki's right shoulder 
"no.." Yuki says and gives her a soft kiss on the lips 
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.17
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on September 08, 2012, 06:05:26 AM
YAY Finally, Sae is out of the picture :3

But but but I pity Sae ;u;

I hope she'll fall in love with Sayaka ze gorira xD

Fast update yay~
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.17
Post by: yuukimoko on September 08, 2012, 07:14:30 AM
Finally!!!!!!

Sae is out~ and Mayu is horny~ and Yuki is in love with Mayu~


Thanks for the update!!!!!!
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.17
Post by: kahem on September 08, 2012, 08:48:32 AM
Poor Sae T_T
But I'm glad Mayuki can be together
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.17
Post by: Chanaline on September 08, 2012, 10:07:38 PM
 :w00t: Youhooooo!!!!  Mayuki is together!! Yay!! Yuki loves Mayu!! :inlove:

Sae is out yay :) (sorry I'm too cruel)

Thank you!!!
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.17
Post by: Megumi on September 08, 2012, 10:37:09 PM
Poor Sae-chan she's heartbroken  :cry:
But Mayu saw her first so it's actually fair  :sweatdrop:

Mayu is um yeah hormones
But Yukirin didn't regret breaking up with Sae.
Finally Rena-chan is showing her dere-dere side  :wub:

Thank you for your update
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.17
Post by: mo-chan on September 10, 2012, 12:36:31 PM
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Rena looks at Jurina and kisses her
Finally Rena !!  :nya:
What is Sae going to react when she will see Mayu :scared:
I'm really scared of Yuki I hope she wont let Mayu again  :OMG:
I can't wait for the next  :pleeease:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.18
Post by: cmze on September 14, 2012, 10:16:10 AM
                              My sister's Girlfriend                       
                                            18

(SUNDAY or the next day) 
Mayu observing Yuki while she sleeps her finger circling her back 
"I know you're thinking about Sae chan that's why you're acting weird,it makes me jealous that you have her on your mind..i have to make you forget!" Mayu thought and then kisses Yuki on her cheek because Yuki wasn't waking up,Mayu decided to use anothee way to wake her up so licked her ear and then bit her..
"Mayu it's too early for this.." Yuki murmured while Mayu sitted on her stomach
"heavy.." Yuki says then opened her eyes 
"Sorry..." Mayu murmured looking at Yuki's eyes 
"Mayu.." Yuki whispered feeling a little sorry 
"i just can't help it.." Mayu says and takes Yuki's hand and puts it on her chest "Can you feel my heartbeat? it's like my heart is going come out of my chest..i never felt thois way before!" She says emotionless 
Yuki was blushing *she has never done skinship to the younger girl..it was always Mayu touching her*
Mayu got off bed "i made you breakfast" She says while walks downstairs 
Yuki got up from bed and went to the bathroom 
Mayu was checking her mails on her phone 
Yuki came downstairs and looked the table *Everything on that table looked delicious* 
"Like Sae chan said..you were learning how to cook.." Yuki thought and then smirked 
Cyborgs can cook? who ever thought that? Yuki asked laughing 
Mayu pouted then sitted 
i'm playing Mayu chan! Yuki says smirking while eats 
ohhhh this is delicious! Yuki says excited as the reaction queen that she is 
i like you like it! Mayu says smiling 
~Meanwhile~
Jurina stop! Rena says smirking while Jurina kisses her all over her face 
i can't you're just damn cute! Jurina answers still devouring Rena's face 
i like you kissing but we're in the train..i'll let you kiss me once we get home! Rena smirking says trying to avoid the younger girl 
"there's nobody around.." Jurina says looking side to side 
"Jurina behave!" Rena says serious 
Jurina pouted "Just five minutes more.." The younger girl says and cupped the older girl cheeks and kissess her 
Beep!! Beep!! 
Rena pulled out her cellphone from her pocket 
~Phone call~
Rena chan! A voic says 
Sae chan? Rena asked serious while Jurina tris to kiss her on the lips 
I need to talk to you..where are you? Sae asks
Going home! Rena says trying to avoid Jurina 
I out of your house *Jurina stop!!* Rena shouts mad interrupting Sae 
*Jurina pouted then got up and sitted behind Rena*
i'm out of your house please come! Sae said and hanged 
"Sae chan.." Rena murmured 
*Jurina still pouting*
"I'm sorry..i have an important thing to do,i promise once i'm done i'll let you kiss me,hug me.." Rena says then kisses Jurina's forhead 
*The train stopped* 
Rena got off "i call you later!" she says while walks 
"but..Rena.." Jurina says as the doors closes 
~Meanwhile~
*MaYuki hugging on the sofa*
Are you still thinking about Sae? Mayu asked 
"huh? no..." Yuki answers and kisses Mayu's head 
"don't lie to me!" Mayu murmures hearing Yuki's heartbeat
it's just..i didn't want that she find out this way! is your sister doesn't bother you to hurt her? Yuki asks 
Mayu sits then looks at Yuki 
what's wrong? Yuki asks
Tears rolled on Mayu's cheek 
"Mayu.." Yuki murmured 
"I wanna go home.." Mayu murmured and got up started to look for her shoes 
what's wrong? Yuki asks and takes her by her arm 
"Of course it hurts me but the only thing you think about is Sae,you don't seem not even happy to have me.." Mayu says and more tears shows up 
"Mayuyu.." Yuki says while Mayu runs away 
STUPID YUKI..you're not the only one losing something cause this relantionship!!  Mayu thought while runs 
~Meanwhile~
Sae chan! Rena says 
Mayu and Yuki had an affair and she chose her! Sae says crying 
how did she find out? Rena thought while sits next to Sae in the sidewalk in front of Rena's house 
i'm stupid! Sae says sobbing 
Sae chan..you're not! Rena says and rubs the girls back 
"they just said that they were in love.." Sae murmured while grabbed a little rock
I'm so sorry! Rena says 
can you believe it? Yuki dating my little sis! Sae says and gets up and throws the rock that she had on her hand 
Sae chan you have to get better! Rena says trying to comfort the taller girl 
why i didn't choose right? Why i was so blind? I'm sorry Rena chan why i didn't choose you ? Sae asked looking at Rena's eyes,Both looked eachother in the eyes and soon enough Sae leaned and kissed Rena
Rena reacted and broke the kiss 
Sae chan this not cool.. i loved you but i now i have somebody else and i know deep down you still love Yuki so please leave out of this! Rena says 
sorry Rena! Sae murmured and turned around to leave
hey.. you seem really mess up! Rena says and takes Sas by her slip 
Sae looked at Rena "Huh.." 
I'll take care of you! Rena says 
~Meanwhile~ At Mayu's home 
Mayu chan you got back! Her mom says smiling while eats last night cake 
yep..i'm tired i'm going to my room! Mayu says while goes upstairs then locked the door and throwed herself on bed
i don't wanna think about you BAKARIN! Mayu thought and closed her eyes.She fast she fell sleep 
Afew minutes later she felt something on her ear..
Mayu opened her eyes and saw Yuki sitting next to her
ehhh?!!!?! How do you get in? Mayu asked and gets up from bed 
i thought waking you up by bitting your ear would be cool..by then window!  Yuki says with a smirk and winking her eye to the younger girl 
go away i don't wanna talk to you! Mayu says looking other way 
Reall? Yuki asked then got closer to the younger girl and looked at her in the eyes 
Stay away! Mayu says while gives a step back 
there's the wall! Yuki says and gets Mayu between her and the wall 
"you hurt me.." Mayu murmured 
Who said i wasn't happy that you were with me? i'm happy sorry not show it very much ..i'll promise i'll show it to you everyday! Yuki says smiling while grabs her girlfriend by her waist 
"don't ignore me again.." Mayu murmured looking down 
Yuki smirked "My spoiled Mayu always get what she wants from me!"  she says and grabs a teddy bear that was on Mayu's desk 
let her go! Mayu says trying to snatch it 
what? why? it's mine! Yuki says 
no,it's not! Mayu replies trying to snacth it from the taller girl which took advantage of the situation and planted a kiss on the lips of the younger girl
(Flashback 5 years ago) ~At the fair~ 
That game was great! Sae says holding Yuki's hand 
yeah it was fun..Mayu chan you haven't tried any game.are you sure you don't want to try? Yuki asks smiling to the younger girl 
actually i..*i need a bathroom!* Sae says  out of the blue interrupting Mayu's answer 
i think over there says bathrooms! Mayu says and points 
I'll be back girls wait for me! Sae says and runs to the bathroom
Yuki looked at Sae running away then shook her head "Mayu chan you were saying.." she says 
i don't like this place! Mayu says 
you sure you don't want anything? Yuki asked 
Mayu looked around then she saw a teddy bear that caught her attetion "I want that!" she says excited 
*Hit the target* Yuki read " i hate that game.." she thought
You sure you want that? Yuki asked 
"Yep.." Mayu replied smiling 
Yuki tried 3 times and she couldn't hit the target
*Mayu pouted*
Yuki sighed "i have no more money except my luch money for the week!" she thought 
Mayu was still pouting 
whatever i going to get that teddy bear..Anything to make Mayu chan smile! Yuki says and puts the money on the table and starts to shoot till she made Jackpot 
the helped gave Mayu her teddy bear..Mayu smiled widely 
"Thanks Yuki chan! She says smiling 
Goodbye luch food..why i always spoil this girl? Yuki thought 
now i'm happy..what did i miss? Sae asked 
nothing! Yuki replied 
~End of the flashback~ 
You didn't ate at school for 5 days..just for that teddy bear!  Mayu asked 
ehh well i wanted to make you happy! Yuki answers smiling hugging the younger girl 
Stupid Bakarin i love you and i love that you like to spoil me! Mayu says and kisses Yuki 
TO BE CONTINUED!! COMMENT! 
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.18
Post by: CheesyBits on September 14, 2012, 10:30:40 AM
Sae x Rena?! Wasn't expecting that..  :shocked
What about Jurina? :cry:

Hohoho~ Im really starting to like MaYuki now :heart:
But im still a SaeYuki fan!!  :P  :cow:

Poor Sae~  :cry:
 
Please continue your story cmze-san  :bow:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.18
Post by: rhin12 on September 14, 2012, 10:45:15 AM

what's wrong with sae-chan? why she kissed rena-chan? what will jurina do if she finds out about that  :shocked

..and i'm smiling while reading the MAYUKI part  :D

thanks for the update cmze-san your the best!!  :twothumbs  :deco:



Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.18
Post by: Chanaline on September 14, 2012, 12:58:22 PM
I really love the Mayuki part!!! :inlove: :heart:

Why Sae kisses Rena!? Noooooo! Poor Jurina :cry:!

:heart: :heart: Mayuki  :heart: :heart:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.18
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on September 14, 2012, 01:05:35 PM
I like how Yuki came in through the window~ Edward Cullen LOL

Yuki loved Mayu from the start! She just didn't want to admit it~

Sae and Rena ?! Rena loved Sae ?! No way ! Past is past, Rena ! >:O

Eeeehhh Poor Juju :< How could you Rena?! Now, I hate you here lol

It's not okay to cheat on an under-aged kid xD You'll destroy her belief in what love means. My little Juju ;u;
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.18
Post by: mo-chan on September 14, 2012, 01:08:02 PM
so lovely Mayuki  :luvluv1: :luvluv2:
but  :stoned:
why Sae kissed Rena!?  :scolding:
Sea's relationship is ruined she want to destroy Rena's relationship with Jurina  :angry1:
I know that Sae is sad but it's not cool what she did  :on redcard:
and Rena loved Sae it's really getting complicated  :frustrated:
what about Jurina  :pleeease:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.18
Post by: kahem on September 14, 2012, 01:14:34 PM
Sae and Rena?!!! OMG!
Yuki is so sweet with Mayu~
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.18
Post by: Pwety on September 14, 2012, 06:58:07 PM
yay mayuki are so cute!! youhou!!

Rena and Sae! What Sae doing?
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.18
Post by: Playgirlz on September 14, 2012, 09:03:41 PM
Oh la la~ so this time Yuki is the attacker eh?? *smirks*

I know Sae is poor but don't do anything stupid Rena >:\

Pls pls update!!, I want to know what's going to happen xD
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.18
Post by: kurogumi on September 17, 2012, 02:34:58 AM
damn you sae!!! if jurina see what you did !! oh i dont want imagine it!

yuki...sweet as always! but they need to talk with sae ... hope its end good...

Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.19
Post by: cmze on September 19, 2012, 08:37:41 AM
                              My sister's Girlfriend                       
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"Yukirin wake up.." Mayu says softly on her ear
Yuki only moved her head to the left 
Mayu pouted but then putted herself on top of Yuki "wake up Yukirin" she whispers on her ear while kisses her cheek 
Yuki openned her eyes a little "Mayu chan what are you doing wearing the school uniform..is still late night" she says and turned her head to the right 
Yuki wake up we got to get to your home for your uniform and also we have to go to breakfast!  Mayu says while kisses Yuki all over her head but it's not working Yukirin refuses to get up and removed Mayu from her stomach and turned her back to her 
Mayu pouted but then something came to her mind she hugged Yuki from behind and whipered on her ear "if you don't get up now i'm going to take off your bra and i'll grope your big chest! 
Yuki inmediately got red then opened her eyes  and got up from bed to go to the bathroom 
Mayu smirked "that was fast" she murmured 
After a few minutes Yuki got out of the bathroom 
let's go! Mayu says with a smile while opens the window
what? why we can go from the front door? Yuki asks 
well Sae chan might hear us so just let's go! Mayu says while offers Yuki to go down first 
*Note:They didn't know that Sae slept on Rena's home*
 Yuki used the tree and fast got down 
*Someone watching behind a tree*
Mayu your turn! Yuki says with a low tone of voice 
Mayu was getting down then she smirked  "Yuki are you watching my panties?" she asked 
what?!? Yuki reacts all  red and nervous then looks other way
Mayu smiles "Don't worry i don't mind!" she says and gets down next to her girlfriend 
i wasn't looking at your panties! Yuki says pouting 
i know! Mayu says and hugs her girlfriend while they walk to Yuki's home 
*Sae sighed then looked other way and once the two lovebirds were out of sight she walked to her home*
~Once at Yuki's home~
Yuki got in the shower while Mayu takes Yuki's uniform and puts it on bed then lays on Yuki's bed and sniffes her pillow "we're together..together!" she murmures smiling 
After a few minutes Yuki got out of the bathroom with a towel on her head and other covering her body 
i didn't know you like so much my pillow? Yuki asked smirking while takes her uniform from bed 
i like everything about you! Mayu says smiling 
Yuki smirks and gets in the bathroom to change 
Mayu gets up then Yuki gets out of the bathroom ready
"come here your tie is a little.." Mayu says while fixes it 
Yuki blushes 
Now is done let's go! Mayu says while takes Yuki's hand and goes to the subway 
~Once inside of it~ (sitting next to eachother)
"it's empty.." Yuki says looking around amazed 
well it's too early! Mayu says smirking 
i'm hungry hope someplace to eat it's open! Yuki says 
I have a chocolate here! Mayu says while pulls it out of her bag and gives it to Yuki 
ehhh you don't want? Yuki asked 
no,it's all yours! Mayu says looking at Yuki 
Yuki opens it and gives a bite 
Mayu was staring at her "Yuki.." She called 
Yuki looked at her then Mayu putted on Yuki's lap and encirlcled her arms around Yuki's neck 
Yuki blushed
i want chocolate now! Mayu says blushing 
i'll buy you one later! Yuki says all red and nervous
"no.." Mayu answered and kissed the older girl's lips 
Yuki didn't know what to do Mayu was using her tongue to remove the chocolate from Yuki's mouth 
Yuki finally gave in and also kissed the younger girl her hands on Mayu's thighs rubbing them up and down 
Mayu then trailed kisses to Yuki's neck while Yuki's was trying to unbotton the younger girl's shirt 
"i want you.." Mayu murmures while devoures Yuki's neck 
Yuki stopped Mayu then made her look at her in the eyes then kissed her roughly while Yuki's hand roams around Mayu's body 
Soon both notice that they're close to the next stop and that there might be people 
Both stopped kissing eachother for that lack of air but kept their forheads connected "Best chocolate ever" Mayu murmured smirking then got back to her sit next to the breathless Yuki and fixed her shirt and skirt 
Soon the it stopped and a lot people got in not knowing what they were doing..
~Yuki was speechless how her 16 years old girlfriend can do all this and make her feel all the things she feels when she's around her~ 
We should go to eat!" Yuki says 
"well it's getting late we can buy something on a store and it eat it in our way to school" Mayu says smiling 
"okay.." Yuki says 
~Meanwhile~ 
( Doorbell ringing)
I'm coming! Rena says and opens the door 
Hey! Jurina says smiling 
Jurina chan! Rena says impress 
i came to take you to school! Jurina says smiling and kiss her girlfriend on her cheek 
ok,i still have to change! Rena says while looks around looking for certain handsome girl 
Jurina sitted and watched the tv 
I think she's gone! Rena thought and gets in the bathroom to get ready to go to school 
~Tv~
"Nothing it's better than your fresh orange juice" the commercial says
~End of tv~
i'm thirsty! Jurina says while gets up and goes to the kitchen more specif to the fridge then she notices a note: 
Thank you Rena chan! 
xoxoxo 
Sae chan
Jurina takes the paper and squezed it on her fist then looked to the dishes and glasses there were a few on the sink "Rena wasn't alone last night!" Jurina thought 
i'm ready! Rena says smiling 
Jurina hid the note on her blazer "seems like you had visitors last night" the younger girl says serious 
yeah a somefriends! Rena says smiling and takes her hand then interwine their fingers 
nobody i know? Jurina asked faking a smile 
not..nobody! Rena answered faking a smile 
i'm thirsty! Jurina says and let go Rena's hand and goes to the fridge and grabs an orange juice 
Let's go Jurina chan! Rena says and extend her hand to grab Jurina's 
i can't! Jurina replies 
you need one hand to grab the juice! Rena says smiling
it's too cold so i need both! Jurina says and walks ahead 
~AT SCHOOL~
"So this feel to be in love!" Mayu thinks while smiles till someone brought her back to earth 
Jurina chan behave! Lovetan says to the mad Jurina 
what's wrong? Mayu asked 
your sister is happening to me! Jurina says and puts the note on Mayu's desk 
Mayu reads it "wow..a note that's bad!" she says sarcastically
did you know she spend the night on Rena's! Jurina says mad with her fist on Mayu's desk 
that's bad! Mayu says not so happy 
~In other classroom~ 
Yuki and Sae haven't said a word to eachother
~everyone wonders why?~
Rena just looked at the two sitting in the opposites while she was in the middle 
"this is going to be a long day.." Yuki thought while Sae secretly steal glances at Rena and then to Yuki 
~Lunch time~
Rena couldn't find Jurina "what's going on? Does she know?.." she wondered while walks the halls 
~Meanwhile~
Yuki and Mayu were in the terrace of the school watching everyone from up there 
(smiling, kissing and hugging)
<Later>
[Note: Do you remeber the play that Mayu,Yuki auditionated for in the first chapters?]
*Again the art teacher brought both courses to the theathre*
Well now i have everything decided! The teacher says smiling then points to Yuki 
You'll be the leading girl and you'll be the leading guy! The teacher says smiling and was pointing also to Sae 
Sae can't sing! Mayu says 
who cares she's tall and charismatic and they look like a couple! The teacher says pointing to Sae and Yuki 
Yuki looked other way while Sae was smiking
Rena was a little affected by the fact that Sae might be Yuki's love interest in the play 
Jurina noticed that and pouted 
TO BE CONTINUED!! COMMENT! 
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.19
Post by: Chanaline on September 19, 2012, 02:44:04 PM
Yay Mayuki are so sweet and hot XD

No the end I hope they don't have a big problem become for Mayuki.
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.19
Post by: kahem on September 19, 2012, 05:03:55 PM
Hihihi I can't help but laugh when things become more complicate xD
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.19
Post by: okotteru on September 20, 2012, 11:00:14 PM
finally reached the last chapter   :sweat:

ehh?? i wonder what is going to happen in this play...

jurina jealous is so cute  :shy2:

Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.19
Post by: Megumi on September 21, 2012, 10:09:12 AM
OMG Love triangle  :shocked

Can't wait for next update!
:kneelbow:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.19
Post by: mo-chan on September 22, 2012, 01:24:44 PM
It's really complicated  :frustrated:
Jurina  :heart:  <---> :heart: Rena ----> :heart: Sae ----> :heart: Yuki <-----> :heart: Mayu
Rena love Jurina and Sae at the same time I don't like this poor Jurina  :fainted:
I'm blind now I only see Wmatsui now  :gyaaah:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.19
Post by: kurogumi on September 30, 2012, 05:28:55 PM
Uuuuu i want to know what happen next cmze-san!

Rena...she's don't tell me she confused between sae and jurina...Love is War haha
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.20
Post by: cmze on October 05, 2012, 05:17:20 PM
                              My sister's Girlfriend                       
                                            20

(In Mayu's room)
Jurina was laying on Mayu's bed while Mayu was on her desk with her computer 
Wow you seem really mad about that play! Jurina says smiling 
"do You know what she said when i told her to quit the play?" Mayu asked mad 
"what she said?" Jurina asked
"She said that i shouldn't be jealous..that i'm not a kid anynore and i should stop acting like one?" Mayu retored more irritated 
*Jurina laughed*
It's not funny ..anyway how are things with Rena? is my imagination or you were ignoring her? Mayu asked while reads a manga online
Yes,i know Sae spended the night with her..i want her to admit it and don't ever again see Sae! Jurina answers pouting 
I'm asking for the same! Mayu says smiling 
*Phone ringing*
Mayu stopped reading her manga "pick up it's not my phone!" she says annoyed 
"No,it's Rena!" Jurina replies 
Mayu looked other way "at least someone is calling you!" she murmured 
Helloo what? now! where? i'll be there! Jurina says while gets up 
"go but play hard to get!" Mayu says to her friend 
Don't worry i got this! Jurina replies with a smile 
Soon Mayu's phone ringed *new text message* 
"GET OUT!!"
Mayu looked through her window and saw her tall girlfriend waiting for her outside "Yuki.."  she murmured and then went downstairs 
Sae looked at Mayu who got out the house fast then she looked through the window then saw Mayu and Yuki walking away hand in hand
~Outside~ a few minutes before 
"what are you doing here? did you came to look for Sae? i call her for you!" Mayu says pouting 
"ouch.." Yuki says and then smirks
why you're smirking? this is not fun! Mayu says and pokes Yuki's shirt 
Yes,it is! Yuki says with a smile then takes Mayu's hand and started walking away 
<Meanwhile>( in a park)
"Rena chan.." Jurina says while sess her girlfriend sitting on the grass 
"Jurina chan.." Rena says smiling 
*Jurina sits next to Rena*
why you called? Jurina asked while Rena only smiled and putted her head on Jurina's shoulder 
"what? what's going on? why are you doing this? there's something you want to tell me?"Jurina asked trying not to forgive her girlfriend so easily 
"I missed you.." Rena replied with a smile 
Jurina pouted then asked "really? i don't think you missed me lately!" 
Rena sitted normally and looked at her little girlfriend 
"You think i didn't miss you?" she asked 
Jurina looked other way "you lie a lot lately!" she says pouting not looking at Rena 
Rena pouted "Okay you win,i wasn't going to tell you this but..Sae was at my house last night!" she says looking other way 
"i knew it!" Jurina says 
"i'm sorry..i wanted to tell you but it wasn't important to me so that's why i omited so please don't ignore me becouse i like you very much!"Rena replies looking to the grass sad 
Jurina looked at Rena"i don't like that you hide things from me but i missed kidnapping you and kissing you at school so don't omit things again because i like you very very much! ok?" she says smiling then holds Rena's hand 
Rena blushes 
*Even though once she loved Sae,she knows that Jurina is the one for her and yes,who cares if Jurina is younger? love doesn't know about age! 
Jurina is the only one who's ever had make her feel sparks,butterflies or fireworks so she's not going to let go that easy,Rena knows that she should tell about Sae kissing her but why add another trouble to the heartbroken Sae? she has enough already! so Rena is only going to focused on her lil charming girlfriend..* 
~Meanwhile~
C'mon just leave it already..i'm hungry! Mayu says while observes her girlfriend trying to get a teddy from a machine 
no way! Yuki shouts using more coins 
Mayu pouted "and i'm the kid!" she murmured 
"Arrggggg why i can't get this!" Yuki shouted and kicked the machine 
"hey don't mess with the machine!" The owner shouts 
While runs to them 
let's go! Yuki says then takes Mayu's hand and drags her with her 
*After 10 min of running*
Both girls stopped to catch their breath 
Yuki was smirking 
Mayu looked at Yuki "what's so funny? that dude wanted to kill us!" She asked 
"My wallet..is not in my pocket!" Yuki replies smiling 
*Memory of Yuki's wallet on the machine*
You..you're just amazing! Mayu says mad 
"i know.." Yuki says smirking 
how are we going to get back home? i'm hungry? Mayu asks mad as a spoil child that she's is 
Yuki only smiled and started singing on the street 
what? stop you only can sing to me! Mayu says and covers Yuki's mouth 
Howrrr ar weaa goin too geet baaack hokee? Yuki asked still with Mayu's hand on her mouth 
well i'm not hungry anymore and you can't sing to anybody but me! The bossy cyborg says then removes her hand 
So are we going walking home? Yuki asked 
i'm not walking! Mayu replied then jumped on Yuki's back 
hey!!! Yuki says pouting 
"i'm tired carry me home.." Mayu asked on Yuki's ear
Yuki sighed and started walking 
"but not to my house..i want to go to yours!" Mayu says smiling 
My house is farther! Yuki replies 
"i don't care.." Mayu replied with a smile 
"cruel cyborg!" Yuki mumured and kept walking 
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.20
Post by: kahem on October 06, 2012, 01:35:09 AM
Poor Yuki, the cyborg is really spoiled ^^
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.20
Post by: kurogumi on October 06, 2012, 04:12:19 AM

i dont know how to say this but sae is really annoying person in this fic..she don't have any place...i guess she's need sayaka that gorila it's the one for her...LOL

Aaah rena very very like jurina soo much eh?sweet..
I want rena being spoiled by jurina its rare...because its always jurina being spoiled LOL

Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.20
Post by: Pwety on October 06, 2012, 07:31:28 AM
I don't want a bag things...

Mayu is really a cruel cyborg but it is too cute to imagine Mayu on Yuki's back  :wub:

Rena loves so much Jurina... sho kawaii! But tell to Jurina about the kiss...
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.20
Post by: JuRikki on October 06, 2012, 08:29:12 AM
Aaaaw WMatsui >.< Yeah, Rena! Sae is the past! Don't you dare leave Jurina for her! 

And MaYuki >.< It's so cute!! As always..

Sae, you need new girl in your life. Don't ruin WMatsui or MaYuki again!!

Thanks for the update, good job!
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.20
Post by: mo-chan on October 06, 2012, 11:50:50 AM
I really hate Sae in this fic  :angry1:
 :hehehe: should we put Sae forever alone  :kekeke:
Mayu is so spoiled by Yuki like always  :shy2:
but about wmatsui  :shock:
Jurina loves Rena so much what if she knows about the kiss of Rena and Sae  :frustrated:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.20
Post by: yuukimoko on October 06, 2012, 12:11:08 PM
wahh~

I love the possesive side of Mayu!!! Yurik's voice is only for her~

Give me more possesiviness please~?!!!
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.21
Post by: cmze on October 09, 2012, 12:38:00 AM
                              My sister's Girlfriend                       
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Hello everyone! sorry for making everyone wait "i needed to recharge!! :)". 
(Evil smile while i write this chapter...) <- what's that mean? well something might happen in the future chapters and probably you might want to punch me but don't forget it's for the sake of the drama!! xD 
(ENJOY!!!) 

Sae and Mayu barely talk,their parents don't notice because they know Mayu doesn't talk too much...
Mayu's mom is preparing breakfast "Sae chan please call Mayu chan!" she asks while fries the eggs 
Sae pouted first then got up and went upstairs to find an empty room "She left early again!" she shouted 
Mayu's mom is setting the table "what's wrong with her? she never wakes up early!" she murmures 
Sas in other hand took a look on Mayu's room.. 
It looked pretty normal,everything was a mess with magazines spread on the floor, the tv on with no signal then she looked on Mayu's desk,there were many things like glasses,snacks and even melted icecream! 
Sae pouted she know now what happens here "probably Yuki spent the night here.." she sighs while gets out of the room 
~Meanwhile~
Some in love girls were walking downstreet..
The taller girl had her arm around the shorter girl's neck 
"Let's not go to school Yuki.." Mayu says smiling while stops walking and looks at the olded girl hoping for an affirmative answer 
"what?we have to go to school!" Yuki replies 
Mayu pouted then romoved Yuki's arm from her neck and walked ahead 
"Hey!" Yuki says while follows her 
" You're so boring Yuki! so riskless.." Mayu says while tries hard not to laugh
 *Mayu's back was facing Yuki*
"what?seriouly?" Yuki asked 
"Yep..i always takes the risk on this relationship while you do nothing but say no!" Mayu replies careless
"I been staying on your home four nights and you call me riskless!" Yuki says 
Mayu smirks "so what that easy!" she says still with her back facing Yuki 
Then is this riskless? Yuki asks and makes Mayu turn around then kisses her on the lips 
The person that were around them ignore the two lovers while others pouted 
Yuki breaks the kiss then takes Mayu's hand and keeps walking 
Mayu was in heaven "her Yuki just kissed her in front of everyone" 
Mayu stopped walking 
Yuki looked at her "what's wrong?" she asked 
Mayu stuck her tongue out "i was kidding but i'm happy for what i got!" she says smiling 
Yuki smiled to the little girl then gave her a sweet kiss on her forhead 
Mayu took her hand and both started walking to school
~Meanwhile~ 
Jurina was hugging Rena 
everyone at school were wondering "what's going on? why Rena is not trying to avoid the annoying girl off her?" 
Rena looked at everyone and kept walking like nothong was ackward to her 
Am i bothering you? Jurina asked 
Rena smirked "no,Jurina i like when you hug me!" she replies smiling to the younger girl 
*Jurina was feeling also in heaven*
Hello Rena chan! Sae says smiling 
Jurina pouted and  pressed her body harder on Rena's body
"Jurina chan..i can't breathe!" Rena says smiling
Jurina let go Rena but Rena acted fast and took Jurina's hand to not let her go 
hello Sae chan! Rena says still smiling while Jurina was blushing and looking other way 
i need to talk to you! Sae says not so happy looking at Jurina
i think you and Yuki need to fix your thing because i'm not going to be stuck in the middle now if you excuse i'm going to take my girlfriend to her classroom! Rena replies and then walks away hand in hand with Jurina
"Girlfriend?" Sae murmures and looks at the two walking hand in hand 
The two girls walked to Jurina's classroom 
Rena you called me girlfriend! Jurina says happy 
is that what you are right? Rena asked 
of course! Jurina replies happy and hugs Rena 
"You're the only one i want!" Rena says while hugs Jurina and then kisses her on her forhead
Jurina smiles widely then enters to her classroom smiling, singing 
what's wrong with her? Lovetan asks 
Mayu was only looking at her window "it's been 5 min and i already miss you!" she murmured 
"You know we should go out the foyr of us Rena,Yuki you and me!!" Jurina says while sits next to Mayu 
"Yeah that sounds cool!"  Mayu replies she just payed attention to Jurina when she mentioned Yuki 
let's go after class for some ice cream! Jurina says 
yeah! Mayu replies 
*Hours passed fast and in a blink of an eye it was time to go home*
Let's go to pick up our girls! Jurina says while takes Mayu's hand 
They didn't expect that Yuki and Rena were already outside waiting 
Yuki looked at Jurina who was holding Mayu's hand 
"did i told you that Yuki never looks happy when we're close?" Jurina says smiling nervous then let go Mayu's hand
"Rena also doesn't look happy!" Mayi replies nervous 
and hugs Yuki 
Let's go for ice cream! Jurina says smiling and walks ahead 
yeah ice cream! Mayu says like child while runs after Jurina 
"Ice cream!" Yuki murmured 
"let's go we shouldn't be jealous they are best friends like yoy and i!" Rena replied with a smile and took Yuki's hand who also smile 
After a few minutes the two kids ahead noticed Yuki's and Rena's hand
what?! Don't touch her! Jurina shouts and separate their hands 
Yuki only mine back off! Mayu says mad 
calm down kids! Yuki Smirking 
this was a trap! Mayu says looking at Yuki 
sorry,it was fun! Rena says smiling 
mean Rena! Jurina says while walks 
The fours girls had a fun afternoon.. the ice cream were delicious and they had a good time 
<Out of the store>
I'm full of ice cream! Yuki says smiling 
This was fun! Rena replies 
What's wrong? Yuki asked to Mayu 
i wanna go to the bathroom here's too cold! Mayu says and enters to store again 
"do want to go to the bathroom Jurina?"Rena asked 
no,i'm fine! Jurina replies with a smile 
Wow look what we have here! Someone says 
The three girls looked at the girl 
Sae chan! Yuki says feeling a little sad 
what's this? a double date? Sae asked 
not of your bussinee! Jurina replied 
*Sae was feeling bad Rena has Jurina now and Yuki cheated on her with Mayu so she won't let them be happy so soon!* 
Sae smirked"You know i'm impress..you seem really ok with eachother i thought you would be mad but here you are Yuki having a double date after Me and Rena kissed a few days ago!" 
what? Yuki asked and looked at Rena 
What did you said? Jurina asked to Sae 
"You heard me!" Sae replied 
Jurina punched Sae while Yuki was loooking at Rena 
do i mean nothing to you?Sae asked to Yuki while she gets up
No,of course not! Yuki shouted and slapped Rena 
"Yuki.." Mayu murmured
Before Yuki could answer Jurina jumped on Yuki 
Rena and Mayu tried to stop Jurina but Jurina was incredible strong 
*Sae stood there watching*
by forcing Mayu suddenly got pushed to the street 
A car was coming full speed 
Mayu move! Sae shouted 
Yuki and Jurina stopped fighting 
Mayuuuu! Rena shouted 
Yuki pushed Rena and Jurina aside then run to Mayu,Yuki pushed her to the sidewalks so the car hit Her  instead 
Yukiiii! Mayu shouts and runs to Yuki who is bleeding 
The three girls soon gets closer while the driver calls an ambulance 
Yuki!! Yukiii! Mayu shouts crying 
TO BE CONTINUED!!! HAHAHA COMMENT!! 
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.21
Post by: matsuru on October 09, 2012, 01:59:17 AM
ooh no yukiii  :bleed eyes:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.21
Post by: kahem on October 09, 2012, 02:30:15 AM
Noooo Yukirin!!!!!
But I thought the fight was fun lol
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.21
Post by: rhin12 on October 09, 2012, 03:22:28 AM
Nooooo.... Yuki-chuwaaaaaan..  :cry:

Nice turn of events cmze-san.. i really love all your fics..hope you update all..  XD
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.21
Post by: kurogumi on October 09, 2012, 06:15:17 AM
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahg!!!! YUKIIIII!!!! NO!!!

You so mean cmze-san!!

Dont make yuki die or lost her memory or anything bad!

Damn!!! I hate SAE more!! I hate her!! Its all her fault this happen!!!

Damn!! You SAE!!!!

Aaah what is this!

Cmze-san please i want the update fast..you make me crazy...crazy in love with this fic LOL


Thank for the update and again damn! You Sae!!
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.21
Post by: Chanaline on October 09, 2012, 12:35:02 PM
Yes!! Damn you Sae!!! :banghead:

Huhuhuhuhuhu :cry: Yukiiiiiiiiiiii!!!! :banghead:

Poor Mayu... Why Yuki react when she know that Sae and Rena are kissed!!!!!!!? :thumbdown: !
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.21
Post by: Megumi on October 12, 2012, 10:44:40 AM
OMG what's with these drama of 5 ppl?

I understand that Sae is hurt but damn! She made everyone fight and then she just stood there watching.
Nooooo Yuki!    :cry:

:kneelbow:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.21
Post by: chiqinna on October 12, 2012, 11:17:35 AM
Yukiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  :mon runcry: :mon runcry: :mon runcry: :mon runcry: :mon runcry: :mon runcry:
what will happen to her??!!  :mon headbang:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.22
Post by: cmze on October 14, 2012, 01:32:39 AM
                              My sister's Girlfriend                       
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 I wasn't going to do any of that..but now you put those ideas,well i couldn't kill Yuki so... SORRY! :) 

(At the hospital)
Mayu was crying non stopping while Sae was watching her,she was trying hard not to cry 
Jurina and Rena went to get coffee
(At the coffee machine) 
Rena looked at Jurina "Jurina I..." 
Jurina grabbbed the coffee "don't.." she says irritated and walks away with the coffee
Rena watched her girlfriend walking away "but..it's not  what you think.." she murmured then followed her 
The four girls were sitting not talking or looking eachother 
Mayu was still crying 
Sae gets up "Stop! All you do is crying.. i can't take it anymore! You're a crying baby!" she shouted at her little sister 
Mayu cried even more "she's  used to Yuki who always there to wipe her tears"
Jurina got up "do you want me to punch you again?" she asked looking at Sae 
Rena got up also "Stop! not here" she says trying to stop Jurina 
Soon somebody else appeared "where's Yuki?" she asked despareate 
The four girls looked at the floor 
You're her mother,i need to talk to you! A police man says and takes her apart from the girls 
After a few minutes she got back and sitted with girls 
They waited for hours and nobody come to tells them a thing 
Sae gets up and walks in circles 
Soon a doctor comes to them "Kashiwagi san relatives?" he asks 
"I'm her mother.." The older woman says 
The doctor took a deep breath "She stable now.. the car hit her very hard due to the speed but she endure it well but still she's critical situation we don't know what are the consequences of the hit" He says coldly then leaves 
The four girls breathed 
"I'm glad Yuki chan is strong!" Rena says with a smile
Jurina looked at Rena "i need to go.." she murmures as she walks away 
Mayu felt relieved but still she wanted to spend in the hospital,Sae also spend the night in hospital 
<Morning>
Yuki's mother woke the girls up 
"Don't you go to school?" she asked 
Sae and Mayu opened their eyes..
I forgot about that! Sae repplies while gets up
Mayu also gets up 
"C'mon go to school you can visit her later.." Yuki's mother says with a smile 
<At school> 
The situation was tense Rena tried to talk to Jurina during lunch time but this one was so busy flirting with everyone around 
Rena gave a step back then looked down 
Mayu looked at the older girl "she's hurt and she's trying to avoid the pain by flirting with everyone!" she says coldly 
Rena looked at the younger girl sad "i'm sorry Mayu" she murmured then walked away 
Soon the school was over..
Sae had basketball practice while Mayu didn't care about going home even though she haven't sleep many hours,the only thing she wants to do is be next to Yuki so she run to the hospital without anybody notice she entered to Yuki's room 
Mayu took a chair and putted next to Yuki's bed she sitted on it then observed the older girl 
"All these machines don't suit you please wake up.."She says while more tears shows 
"Today school was really boring so i started writting this i wont do if you wake up" Mayu says sobbing 
1.I won't ever clean my dirty hands on your clothes 
Mayu smiles "i'm really sorry about that.."  and more tears shows 
*Sae missed her practice and went to the hospital also she sneaked around the hospital to get to Yuki's room and she was about to open the door to enter but she heard Mayu so she stopeped and stood there hearing what Mayu has to say 
2. you don't have to reply the 100 text i daily send you! now i'll call you not 100 times but everynight would be fine! don't you think? Mayu asks with smile pouting to not cry
3. i won't make you carry me home on your back anymore.. even though you don't seem to get bothered by it 
4. I will share your voice..you can sing in that stupid musical as long as you look at me while singing 
"i know i'm selfish" Mayu murmures looking down 
*Sae was hurt by everything that Yuki do for Mayu*
5. I won't make you live in my room like a fugitive,you can sleep at your house and visit me in the afternoon..
"even thought i'll miss sleeping with you" Mayu says stroking Yuki's hair 
6.I promise no more groping boobs anywhere..even though they perfect sizes for my hands and i want to grop them all the time! 
*Sae pouted*
7. I will try harder to not be a crying baby..
i know you don't like when i cry so that's why you spoil me too much all the time! Mayu says smirking and crying then she grabs Yuki's hand and cries even more "please wake up.." 
Sae closed the door then leaned against the wall 
~Meanwhile~
Rena followed Jurina all day but still she doesn't have the courage to talk to her 
Mayu's words kept repeating on Rena's head so she finally gave in 
Jurina got out from the store,she didn't notice Rena so she kept walking home 
Rena followed her and grabbed her by her arm
Jurina turned around "You..what do you want?" she asked pouting 
"We need to talk!" Rena says forcing with Jurina 
"We don't need to talk.." Jurina replies mad 
Rena was mad also "You're mad for something that didn't mean anything,she kissed and so what? i'm not with her,i'm with you while you're flirting the whole school knowing that it hurts me!!" she shouted then kissed Jurina 
after moment of kissing Jurina stopped forcing but she bit Rena's lip 
Rena pouted "what did you do that?" she asks yelling
"Why you kissed me?" Jurina replied yelling 
"Because i miss you!!" Rena yelled back 
Jurina got sad "well i don't.." She says softly 
Rena looked at her "you seriously don't?" she asked sad to the younger girl 
Jurina was to hurt to give in "i don't miss you..now let me go!" she says and walks away 
TO BE CONTINUED!! 
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.22
Post by: Chanaline on October 14, 2012, 02:07:45 AM
Mayu you are so kawaii!! :wub:

Jurina what are you saying!!!! :banghead:

I want a kiss from Mayu to Yuki as in fairy tales (as Snow White)  :twothumbs

great update :thumbsup
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.22
Post by: matsuru on October 14, 2012, 04:55:58 AM
jurina why you keep acting like that?? Please understand that kiss just nothing for rena. She love youu

Thank you for update  :twothumbs
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.22
Post by: JuRikki on October 14, 2012, 07:18:01 AM
Jurina, please forgive Rena before she change her mind and leave you..

She really loves you, Jurina.. Don't act like that, you hurt. But Rena is hurt too seeing ypu flirting with random girls..

Aand Mayu, I almost cry.. Read all her promises. Hoping Yuki wake up ;__;

Nice update ^^
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.22
Post by: Megumi on October 15, 2012, 08:42:21 PM
 :cry: What a sad update..
Mayu crying
Jurina&Rena are fighting *not literary but still.
and Sae-chan is hurt...

Endless love triangle....

 :bleed eyes: <--- me right now  :lol:

Thank you for your update!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.22
Post by: kahem on October 16, 2012, 03:16:30 AM
Yuki please wake up!!!! T_T
Jurina why are you so stubborn
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.23
Post by: cmze on October 18, 2012, 09:55:44 AM
                          My sister's Girlfriend                       
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Why i always get sick? It's awful being allergic to dust! -_- 

It been a few days since and still Yuki haven't woke up.Mayu goes everyday after class to the hospital and Sae goes after her practice so they kinda take turns to see her..
~At the hospital~
Mayu was sitting next to Yuki.. she likes to talk to the sleepy Yuki,she thinks that maybe she's listening every word she says 
"I brought my ipod today,you love music so much so i thought that you might miss it!" Mayu says as she gets up to puts the headphones on Yuki's ear,Mayu couldn't help to look at Yuki's lips 
"I been missing you so much.." she thought while slowly leans in front of the sleepy girl 
Their lips touched for a few seconds
"Ahemmm" 
Mayu broke the kiss and looked behind her "Sae chan.." she murmured not so happy 
Sae looked at her little sister while she takes her bag and walks away till she closed the door the. she proceed to sit next to Yuki "Mayu forgot her ipod.." she thought looking at Yuki who frowned a little because Sae was trying to remove the headphones
Sae was shocked "did you frow?" she thought 
Yuki openned her eyes slowly "wa..water!" she murmures 
Sae got up fast and gave her a glass of water 
Rena entered to the room "Yuki chan you're up!" she says shocked 
Yuki stopped drinking the water "what happened? why am i here?" she asked confused 
Sae and Rena looked eachother 
Yuki tried to get up but her body hurts a lot "it hurts.." she says and lays back on bed 
"I'll call the doctor!" Sae says while gets out 
Yuki looked at Rena "why am i here Rena?" she asked serious then took off the other headphone in her left ear "i don't even like this music!" she says and looks at the ipod "This belongs to Mayu Watanabe!" she read then smirked "why i have her ipod?"
Rena was observing her "don't tell me you.." 
Yuki looked at Rena "what?" she asked 
Rena blinked a few times "do you forgot about Mayu?" she asked 
Yuki frowned "Are you insane? She's Sae chan little sister,she had become kinda arrogant though!" she says looking at the ipod 
Rena rubbed her cheek 
The doctor and Sae entered to the room and examinates Yuki 
(Note: Sae also texted Mayu! who was still in the parade) 
"She doesn't remember why she's here?" Sae says out of the blue 
Reba looked at Sae "is it possible that she forgot some of her memories?" she asked 
The doctor looks at Rena "it's really possible,she hit her head hard so we will still keep her under observation!" he answers and then leaves the room 
Mayu entered to the room fast with tears in her eyes,she looked at the older girl on bed "You woke up!" she says while slowly walks to her 
Yuki was confused "Mayu chan Do you feel okay? 
*Mayu stopped*
"somebody can tell me why am i here?" Yuki asked fustrated 
Sae looked down "A car hit you!" 
What?!? how can that be possible? i always look to both sides before crossing!" Yuki replies 
Mayu was speechless,Rena putted her head on her shoulder 
Mayu looked at Rena who nodded 
Mayu's tears were about to come out,she looked down and remembered her promise "if Yuki wakes up,she will try harder not to be a crying baby" 
Mayu hold back her tears 
Yuki looked at Sae "Sae chan i'm hungry get me something to eat!" she says smiling 
Sae frowned "why would i do that?" 
Yuki pouted "becouse you like me right? are you seeing someone else while i was on this bed?" she asked mad 
Mayu looked at Yuki "where's my charming and kind Yukirin?" she wondered 
Sae was schocked "ok i guess,i can get you something to eat!" she murmures 
Yuki pouted cutely "why are you treating me like this? don't you like me anymore?" she asked 
Sae got red then looked at Mayu "of course i like you but it's not time to talk about those things!" 
Yuki smiled 
Mayu looked other way "I can't stand it anymore!" she says and leaves the room mad 
Yuki frowned "what's wrong with her?" she wondered
~After a few days Yuki got release from the hospital and everthing got back to what it was before only SaeYuki~ 
(At school) (Lunch time) 
Jurina looked at her devastated friend "so sorry Mayu chan,i kinda feel your pain" 
Mayu got up from her seat "How can you? You can still fix it..you're being a fool for ignoring Rena she really loves you AND SHE HAVEN'T ERASED YOU FROM HER MIND! She shouted pushing her friend out of her way then walked away 
Jurina was shocked then got up and acted like nothing happened
*Mayu didn't get back to class after lunch time*
<End of class>
SaeYuki couple were waiting for Mayu outside her classroom 
Jurina got out of her classroom and looked at the couple "So you had what you wanted at the end not caring if you hurt her!" 
Sae looked at Jurina "did she care in first place?" 
Jurina putted her head on her forhead "i'm gonna kill you!" she says mad and jumps on Sae 
Yuki tried to separate them 
Everyone was looking and recording on ther phones
(Rena appears from nowhere xD) 
"Jurina!" Rena says and takes the younger girl "Anyway..is it cool having her this way? knowing that she doesn't love you?" 
Yuki grabbed Sae "what are you talking about?" she asked 
Rena covered Jurina's mouth and dragged her somewhere else 
*Leaving a confuse Yuki*
*At Rena's place*
Rena was cleaning Jurina's wounds "It hurts!" yhe younger girl shouted 
"Well i'm glad it hurts..you need to stop punching everyone around!" Rena says mad also 
Jurina looked at Rena and then calmed answered "i don't..it's just hard seeing my friend suffering!" 
Rena looked at the younger girl with soft eyes "my lovely Jurina trying to protect everybody" 
Jurina blushed "i'm not lovely!" she says pouting 
Rena smirks "yes,you are!" she says still healing her wounds 
Jurina takes Rena's hand who blushed then looked at her in the eyes "don't erase me from your mind!" she says sad 
Rena eyes became teary "i wouldn't.. ever!" she says and hugs the younger girl 
Jurina hugs the older girl tigher "thank you!" she murmures and then kisses the older girl 
~In a park close to Yuki's home~ 
Mayu was sitting in the swing looking down sad "i'm hopeless!" she murmured with more tears trying to come out but she was trying her best to hold them 
*Rain started* 
Soon Mayu's uniform started soaking,she didn't bother to get up and cover herself couse the rain "This is a good sign that everything ended!" she thought still looking down depressed 
Soon the rain ended or that's what it seemed
Mayu looked up,she couldn't believe who was standing in front of her holding an umbrella "Yuki chan!" she murmured and tear came out but Yuki didn't notice she thought she was a drop of rain
"Are you trying to get a cold?" she asked with a warm smile while offers her hand to the younger girl 
Mayu got up "it's not of your bussines" she says sad while walks ahead
Yuki pouted "well if something bad happens to you,Sae chan might be sad and that's my bussines!" she says while follows the younger girl 
Mayu got mad "Sae chan..is the only name yoh know?" she asked mad and punched a tree that was next to her hard 
Yuki was speechless 
Mayu whimpered in pain then looked her hand her knuckles were bleeding 
Yuki reacted and then grabbed her hand "Are you insane kid?" she shouted worried
Mayu was still sad "leave me alone!" 
Yuki was mad so she took her to her home because it was closer 
(At Yuki's home) 
Yuki looked at her closet "this clothes are not mine!" she says while throw it on bed 
Mayu looked at the clothes "are mine!" she says looking other way 
Yuki frowned "why would you have..forget it just change before you get a cold!" she says with smile 
Mayu looked at Yuki "i don't think i can change..my hand really hurts!" she says looking down 
Yuki scratched her head then sighed "i guess i'll do it for you!" she says while gets closer and takes off Mayu's blazer first then unbuttoned her shirt button by button 
Yuko was red like a tomato while Mayu looked other way not really caring 
*Something hit Yuki's head.. a little memory of "i unbuttoned this shirt before!" 
Yuki gulped the took off her skirt leaving the young Mayu in only underwear 
Yuki stole a glance at the younger girl's hot body then looked other way 
Mayu noticed that then smirked "i don't think i can.."
Yuki takes a deep breath "i got it! she says getting closer to the younger the  she puts her arms around the younger girl body to unclap her bra
Yuki was so nervous that she took that a minute to unclap it 
Once she unclaped it she closed her eyes and got down to remove the remaining piece of clothes (Yuki wasn't breathing) 
*Mayu was enjoying this putting Yuki nervous it's her favorite thing to do*
Mayu walked to Yuki's bathroom then closed the door
Once Yuki heard the door,she opened her eyes and breathed 
~Once Mayu got out of the room all dressed up~ 
~Yuki on the phone~
No,Sae chan..you don't need to come "she's okay!" besides is raining a lot and you can get hurt so see you tomorrow! 
~end of phone call~ 
Talking to Sae chan huh? Mayu says 
Yuki looked at Mayu "i though you couldn't dess or undress" 
Mayu smirked "what you wanna see my body again?" 
Yuki got red and nervous "of course not!" she says while walks closer to Mayu and takes her swollen hand
Mayu blushes *long time without her touch* 
"you shouldn't hit trees look what you did to your hand..i'll get some ice!" Yuki says while let go her hand and goes to the kitchen 
Mayu smiled "At least she's acting like Yuki!" 
TO BE CONTINUED!! COMMENT
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.23
Post by: chiqinna on October 18, 2012, 12:25:01 PM
Oh no~ Yuki please remember Mayu~~~~ poor her~  :depressed:
thanks for the update!!  :)
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.23
Post by: Playgirlz on October 18, 2012, 01:13:13 PM
OMG! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH MAYU-CHAN!!! (i don't know why lol)

Just her last sentence made me soooo happy xD

You fic is awesome!!! Pls more cmze!! And thank you I love u too xDDD
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.23
Post by: kurogumi on October 18, 2012, 01:43:30 PM
Uh so yuki really lost her memory about mayu (her relationship)
Well fine! Yuki will fall for mayu once again..again..again and again...LOL
Sae don't deserve the second chance...it's her fault at first place!
Hope mayu will be fine until yuki memories back!,hope mayu don't get something bad like hit by car again or anything else LOL


Thank for the update cmze-san,want the next chapter soon..LOL

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Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.23
Post by: Chanaline on October 18, 2012, 07:53:52 PM
Nooo Yuki don't remember her relationship with Mayu... :cry:
But It's more drama and when they get together they love become more strong  :twothumbs

Sae YOU!! :angry: I don't like you! it's your fault that Yuki is in this condition!!

Mayu Gambatte!! Get back Yuki!!!!! :twothumbs

Edit: I notice it... You someway make my request XD or not... sorry to be so imbued with myself!!!
No it was not  Mayu when Yuki woke up... As I said Gambatte Mayu!!
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.23
Post by: kahem on October 19, 2012, 03:28:54 AM
No! She is lost memory! T_T
Yuki remember your Mayuyu!!!
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.23
Post by: Megumi on October 19, 2012, 08:23:04 PM
 :shocked Mayu woke Yukirin up with her kiss...

B bbb but! She had amnesia! Nooooo.....  :cry:

Jurina stood up for Mayu and got in fight with Sae.
Rena and Jurian made up *yokatta!

Now...I can't wait for next update!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.23
Post by: mo-chan on October 20, 2012, 02:13:06 PM
Chapter 21
about Mayuki :  :shy2:
about Wmatsui :  :shy1:
Mayuki&Wmatsui :  :hiakhiakhiak:
about what Sae did :  :angry1: :temper: :mon zoom:
about Yuki's accident :  :scared: :on blackhole:
Chapter 22
Yukiii :gyaaah: :fainted: :mon waterworks:
Wmatsui :  :mon runcry:
Chapter 23
Yuki waked up  :gmon sing:
but she forgot about her relationship with Mayu  :mon scare: :mon nwei:
Mayu poor Mayu  :on cloudeye:
please Yuki remember Mayu  :pleeease:
Yuki loved Mayu from long time ago so Mayu can make Yuki hers again  :gmon tears:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.23
Post by: Pwety on October 21, 2012, 10:53:37 AM
Yuki remember  that you are with Mayu!!!!
Why you forgot the most importante thing?! :cry: :angry: :cry:
Go Mayu make Yuki yours once again! :twothumbs
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.23
Post by: Minami-chan on October 21, 2012, 07:40:51 PM
I´m so sad that Yuki forget Mayuyu from her memory...

Mayuyu must be strong!!   :farofflook:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.24
Post by: cmze on October 24, 2012, 06:16:54 AM
                       My sister's girlfriend                     
                                     24

~At SaeMayu's home~

Mayu left school with Rena and Jurina so Sae took Yuki to her house because she knew her mother won't be there and her dad would be working so she had the house by herself

Sae and Yuki were on a make out session on the couch 

"I love you Yuki.." Sae says while leans closer to her 

"Sae chan.." Yuki murmured embarrased while Sae kissed her again deeply 

Soon Sae stopped cupping Yuki's cheek so her hand went south to try to grope her chest 

Yuki pushed Sae out of the sofa which cause the tomboy to fall on the floor 

"Sorrry! Sorry!" Yuki says while sits 

"why you pushed me?" Sae asked while gets up 

Yuki looked other way "i..just..thought is not cool doing this kind of things here.." she says all red

Sae was speechless but then some words came to her head "6.I promise no more groping boobs anywhere..even though they perfect sizes for my hands and i want to grop them all the time!" she remembered Mayu's promises 

Yuki gets up to grab her bag "See you tomorrow Sae chan!" she says as she kisses Sae's forhead 

Sae looks at her girlfriend walking away "Why she could touch you and i can't? she wondered

~Meanwhile~  at a bakery

Three girls were eating their favorites cakes 

"I think you shouldn't give up Mayu chan!" Rena says with a smile while feeds Jurina with the spoon 

*Everyone was looking at them but Rena didn't seem to care neither Jurina*

Mayu sighed "It's not that easy,she's happy with Sae chan and this was how it supposed to be since the beginning.." she says emotionless while plays with cake using her spoon 

Jurina sigher "why you always be a turtle when it's about fighting for something you want?" she says mad looking at the  cyborg 

Mayu pouts then gets up and leave the two girls 

Rena looks at Jurina who asked "what? she's a coward!"

Rena sighed and kissed her girlfriend forhead "not everyone is strong as you Jurina,you need to understand that!" she says with a soft smile 

Jurina pouted "don't worry i have plan anyways!" she says with a smile

Rena just smirked and waited to hear it 

~A few days later~ 

*SaeYuki's relantionship is not been doing well since that incident Sae been distant*

Yuki and Rena were walking 

"Where are we going? Rena chan your not listening Sae chan is distant!" Yuki says complaining while walks behind Rena

Rena kept walking ignoring Yuki 

*Yuki pouted*

"Finally here!" Rena says smiling 

"The fair.. Really?" Yuki asked 

Soon Jurina came out from nowhere and say hi to her  girlfriend by giving her a peck 

"Shameless.." Yuki murmured looking other way 

"Let's have fun Yuki chan!" Rena says and pulls her to a shooting game where Mayu was trying to hit a target 

"You suck on it!" Yuki says laughing 

"Ehh.." Mayu turned her head and looked at the older girl laughing at her 

Rena and Jurina looked eachother "well we're going to the roller coastar so have fun!" they say as they walk away 

Mayu looked at Yuki "then if you do better here.. get me that one!" she says and gives the shotgun to Yuki

"Easy.." The older girl says and starts shooting but she hit other targets not the one Mayu wanted 

Mayu smirks "i thought you said it was easy!" 

Yuki pouts and pulls out more money from her pocket "i'm just warming up!" she says shooting more 

Mayu look changed to a sad one "you know the last time you tried to get me something,you end up without money and had to carry me home on your back!" 

"I carried you on my back? that's funny!" The older girl says excited and ends up hitting her target which was an orange lion 

The helper gave the lion to Yuki "here Mayu chan,you can put this one next to the one i gave you years ago!" the older girl says smiling 

"Do you remember that?" Mayu asked sad *ready to cry* and pressing the lion on her chest 

Yuki looked at the younger girl "Mayu chan are you ok? she asked putting her hand on the younger girl's head

Mayu pushed Yuki and run away 

Yuki got up fast and run behind the younger girl 

After a few blocks as it was expected Mayu stopped to catch her breath holding the lion against her chest

"There you are!" Yuki says grabbing the younger girl by her arm 
 
"Let go.. let go!" Mayu says trying to release herself 

Yuki hugged the younger girl "Mayu chan what's going on? did someone broke your heart?" she asked with her chin on the younger girl's head 

Mayu resign hugged Yuki back "her scent,her tenderness.. i missed this so much!" Mayu thought while her tears soaked Yuki's shirt 

Yuki was sad,there's no doubt that she wants to know what's wrong with Mayu lately

The two walked to the station to catch a train,still hugging eachother 

They took the train but unlucky for them it was full so people were pushing them to be even closer than they already were 

Yuki's face was so close to Mayu's so she turned to 
the side to avoid the Younger girl 

Mayu wrapped her arms around her waist and rested her head on her chest 

Yuki blushed first but then relaxed "she must be tired" she thought

The scent of Mayu's hair was so familiar to Yuki "maybe is cause Sae wears the same shampoo!" she thought 

The two girls walked out the station..

~Outside SaeMayu's house~

"You sure you don't wanna talk about it?" Yuki asked

"You sure you don't wanna see Sae?"  Mayu asked 

"okay i get it..see you!" Yuki says and gives a kiss on the younger girl's forhead 

Mayu was shocked by the kiss but then smirked and hugged her lion 

~The next day~ At the same bakery

"I don't know Rena there's something strange and i really wanna help Mayu!" Yuki says looking at her chocolate cake

"I don't think it's your bussines if she's broken hearted or not!" Rena says while drinks her coffee

"I know but if i tell Sae she would probably kill the culprit of her sister's sadness!" Yuki replies 

"you think?" Rena asked 

(A flash of something hit Yuki's head so fast *best cholate ever* someone says smiling)

something is messing with my head there's something i'm forgetting? Yuki says looking around 

Rena smirked "well if you wanna help Mayu you should remember..."

Yuki looked at Rena "remember what?" she asked 

"I don't know what you're forgetting i guess!" Rena says while gets up 

"where you're going?" Yuki asks confuse 

"i have to go pick Jurina we have a date!" Rena answers smiling then walks away 

Yuki sighed "who's that girl?" she wondered trying to remember the flash she had minutes ago while looks at the chocalate cake on the table 

TO BE CONTINUED!!!  COMMENT!!
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.24
Post by: kurogumi on October 24, 2012, 08:36:12 AM
Hope the next update yuki will remember mayu's

And about saeyuki kissing scene,i dont know instead push sae,i want yuki slaped her! LOL

Jurina right mayu! Dont ever surrender ,dont give up fight!

But i did love if yuki who fight for mayu's love,it not fair its always mayu who suffered because of yuki

Thank for the update cmze-san
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.24
Post by: JuRikki on October 24, 2012, 11:09:45 AM
Agree with Kurogumi-san!

Poor Mayu, and Sae... She's so mean!!

WMatsui, cute as always..

Thanks for the update cmze-san :twothumbs
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.24
Post by: mo-chan on October 24, 2012, 01:25:52 PM
of course Yuki you have to know who made Mayu heartbroken  :P
Quote
"I know but if i tell Sae she would probably kill the culprit of her sister's sadness!" Yuki replies
Yuki doesn't know that it's her the one who will be probably killed :lol:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.24
Post by: Chanaline on October 24, 2012, 05:29:25 PM
I agree with mo-chan!!! Yukirin remember your relationship with Mayu!!!!! :banghead: Mayuyu fight for her!

And Sae stop trying to touch her!!!! I don't like this!!! :angry:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.24
Post by: kahem on October 24, 2012, 11:26:35 PM
ahhh!!! Yuki remember already!!!!!
It's so cute how Rena don't care about what other people are thinking when she is with Jurina ^^
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.25
Post by: cmze on October 30, 2012, 10:05:31 AM
                       My sister's girlfriend                     
                                     25

(At Yuki's home)

"I'm Kashiwagi Yuki,i'm 17 and i'm love with my bestfriend Sae chan since we were kids.." Yuki murmures looking at the ceiling while lays on her bed

*Phone ringing*

Yuki grabs her phone then reads the screen "Sae chan.." she murmures and let it ring 

"Is that so? my whole life the same girlfriend.. but then who's the other person that i'm dreaming about?" Yuki murmures then looks at the new text message on her phone

Text: 
Yuki chan why don't you come over? i been missing you a lot

Yuki sighed then got up of bed and left the room 

~At SaeMayu's home~ (nobody at home just Sae)

Yuki knocked the door 

Soon Sae opened the door and invited her in not before kissing her passionately

"Sae chan.." Yuki ackwardly murmures

"I'm sorry,i won't do it again!" The tomboy says giving her best smile 

Yuki sitted on the couch in front of the tv while Sae chan was getting something to drinks for them 

Sae sits next to Yuki then smiled

 "so how you been?" the tomboy asks 

"confused.." Yuki says as she takes the glass of juice and drinks it all 

"why?" Sae asked rubbing Yuki's arm 

"ok!" Yuki says and gets up 

"what's wrong?" Sae asked

Yuki gets on Sae's lap and kisses her passionately for a few seconds then gets up fast and looked other way sad

"what? why Yuki?" Sae asked stunned

"you're not.. because i don't want you!" Yuki says then turns to look at her girlfriend 

"what?" Sae chan asked as she gets up 

i don't know..i don't know why i don't want you touching me or kissing me? that's not normal if you were my girlfriend so tell me why am i having this weird dreams with somebody else? Yuki asked mad as she grabs Sae 

with who? Sae asked

"i don't know,it's all blurry.." Yuki asked turning around 

Sae looked another way "for the second time.." she murmured and tears rolled her cheeks but she wiped before Yuki could see it 

The door opens..

"i'm home.." Mayu shouts as she takes off her shoes

Sae took a deel breath "you're food is in the fridge!" the older sister shouts 

Mayu noticed Yuki's presence but she decided to skip so she just went upstairs part of her made her stay in the middle to hear their conversation 

"i'm have to find that person Sae chan.. if i hurt you because of it. i'm really sorry!" Yuki says as she leaves 

"what this means?" Sae asked 

"that we're over!" Yuki whispers then left 

Sae sitted on the couch hopeless..

(The next day at school) 

"What's this?" A handsome boy asks 

"a kissing booth.." Yuki replies with smile 

and it only cost a $1.00! Another guy says 

so if i give you a $1.00 you would kiss me? A shy girl asked 

"but i choose where!" Yuki replied 

Akicha do you really wanna kiss Yuki chan? her friend asked 

"i was curious.." Akicha replies 

Mayu,Rena,Jurina and Sae were entering to the school and they saw the kissing booth 

what the hell is that? Mayu asked

(Everyone was making a line)

a kissing booth from Yuki! Jurina says excited then grabs Mayu's hand and takes her with her to Yuki 

"Here..kiss my friend" Jurina says smiling

"hey get back to the line!" A girl shouts

"shut up Bitch!" Jurina shouted

"what?" Yuki reacted as she saw Mayu 

*Sae looked other way while Rena only sighed*

"Jurina what are you doing?" Mayu asked trying to release from Jurina's hold 

"this girl looks really cute and kisseable!" Jurina says smiling and takes Mayu's lips with her fingers 

*Yuki pouted*

"let me go!" Mayu says mad 

"just one kiss.. Yuki chan c'mon!" Jurina says smiling still bothering Mayu lips

"leave her alone!" Yuki shouts and jumps on Jurina 

"Fight! Fight!" Everyone shouts 

Rena and Mayu separated the two girls..

"Yuki chan!" Mayu says ane she grabs her by her waist and takes her somewhere else 

Sae sighed and went to her class

~At the school terrace~

"I didn't know about this.." Yuki says smiling while looks around 

"yeah..we humm.. you found out about this!" Mayu says as she starts tapping Yuki's uniform

"that little.." Yuki murmures mad as she looks at Mayu who's fixing her tie 

"a kissing booth huh really?" Mayu asked frowning 

"why you get along with that kid? and why Rena is so inlove with her?she's crazy" Yuki says irritated 

"at least she doesn't use a kissing booth!" Mayu retored 

Yuki sighed and turned around sad "look i'm just looking for someone but it's hard to do with not so detailed information, I wish that person comes to me and say..

Mayu interruprs "i'm here.. i'm the one you're looking for.." she says looking down 

Yuki turned around "exactly.." she says with a smile as she puts her hand on Mayu's forhead

Mayu's heart was racing 

"you're so smart Mayu chan!" Yuki says still with a smile then kisses Mayu's forhead and walks away to her classroom 

Mayu kneeled because the shock and stare to the floor emotionless "my tears just don't come out, i'm dry.." she thought 

~Meanwhile~

"Jurina stop fighting!" Rena says as she cleans the wounds on Jurina's face 

Jurina smiled "i wasn't fighting,she was punching me.."

Rena sighed "why you always wanna mess with Yuki?" 

Jurina frowned " i don't like what she does to Mayu.." she says a little sad 

Rena smiled sweetly "you're a good friend!" she says then kisses her forhead

"you know what's funny?" Jurina asks as she hugs Rena

"what?" Rena asked 

"well even without her memory she's possesive and jealousy over Mayu!" Jurina says smiling 

"you think she loved her before everything?" Rena asked 

Jurina smiked "maybe.. why she would fight me? she knows i'm really good at it so i probably would kicked her butt but still she wanted to punch me for touching her girl's lips so she did knowing the risks" 

"good.." Rena says with a smile 

<Sae was hearing everything>

TO BE CONTINUED COMMENT!! 
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.25
Post by: clubhappy on October 30, 2012, 10:55:01 AM
Yay update!!! Thank you cmze-san.
Yuki is slowly falling for Mayu again  :lol:, I hope she can remember Mayu soon.
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.25
Post by: kahem on October 30, 2012, 12:04:24 PM
lol a kissing booth hahahah!!!
Jurina is so cool!!!
Sae!!!! It's time to help your sister!!!
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.25
Post by: kurogumi on October 30, 2012, 12:13:09 PM
I dont know why,but right now i am really pity sae,its too much for her,
I know sae its really annoying person,and she do many bad thing toward mayu...as a older sister,sae should let her little sister happy even if it hurt herself...

As for mayuki,yuki memory progress its too slow but it make the story more fun and dramatic..LOL
Booth kiss LOL what the heck is she thinking? She's will felt embarassed when her memories back! To thnk that she's doing something weird...

C'mon yuki,mayu's is the one you're looking for, just kiss her already!! Now!!
Maybe yuki's memory will comeback if mayu kissed her on the lips LOL

Wmatsui always sweet and warm...

Thank for the update cmze-san...really really thank..

Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.25
Post by: Chanaline on October 30, 2012, 08:47:33 PM
Wakakakakaka :P! Jurina is right, Yuki is possesive and jealousy when the other people touch her Mayu!!

The Booth Kiss is weird XD Yukirin what is it?
Mayu, why you don't do somethings like you do in the past (as when she kiss Yuki forcibly in chap.11)

WMatsui... They are really a good friend, I think :) And they are kawaiiiii! :twothumbs

Sae you have longer any chance then help your sister!!!

And Mayuyu Gambatte!!Yukirin's memories come back please!!
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.25
Post by: JuRikki on October 30, 2012, 09:04:27 PM
Kiss booth? :lol:

Yes, poor Sae. But she's really annoying. I wish she'll have sayaka or someone.. But not Yuki, yuki is Mayu's..


Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.25
Post by: Megumi on October 30, 2012, 09:18:27 PM
 :panic: Well kissing booth *rofl

Can't wait for next update!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.25
Post by: Playgirlz on November 02, 2012, 03:39:25 AM
I just want Mayuki so much right now >< just didn't be here for a couple days so many Mayuki xDDDDDDD

Love it!!!! Yuki needs time, just wait for her Mayu. You guys are meant to each other so don't worry ><

Thank you so much for the update
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.25
Post by: rhin12 on November 02, 2012, 10:01:25 AM
I literally laughed out loud at that kissing booth!!  :lol:
Looking forward for your next update. MaYuki is so cute~

Thanks for updating all your fics cmze-san!  :bow:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.26
Post by: cmze on November 05, 2012, 01:20:38 AM
                              My sister's girlfriend                     
                                             26


~At Mayu's room~

"Why you don't try to get her back by seducing her like before?" Jurina asked as she lays on Mayu's bed 

"I can't.. i promised her that i won't do anything against her will" Mayu retored while plays on her computer

"what?!? when?!? you already tried?" Jurina asked sitting on bed excited

"when she was unconscious.." Mayu replies 

"What? she doesn't remember.. she doesn't know c'mon Mayu you going to end up losing her!" Jurina replies and throws a pillow at Mayu's head 

Mayu ignored Jurina

~After a few hours later~ 

Jurina sighed as she plays with her cake 

"what's wrong?is it bad?" Rena asked 

"no!no! it's delicious it's just Mayu chan.." Jurina replies 

Rena smirked "what she said about seducing Yuki?"

Jurina sighed again "she said no.. she promised her not to,grope her,skinship her or whatever they used to do!" 

"You know Yuki told me once that when Mayu kissed her she couldn't stop thinking about her so that's how hee feelings grow.." Rena says while eats 

"Mayu stole Yuki's first kiss,if we make them kiss like that i mean making Mayu drunk and go to her rescue then her momory would be back.." Jurina says happy 

Rena frowned "how you gonna make Mayu drunk?" 

Jurina smirked " leave it to me!" she says while eats her cake smiling 

Rena smiled sweetly looking at her girlfriend

(The next day)

Mayu checks herself in the mirror "why you so randomly wanna go the karaoke?" she asked 

Jurima smirked "i love the karaoke!" she says as she pushes Mayu "let's go it's getting late!" 

<In the karaoke> 

Yuki was unconfortable "why you brought me here? you know i don't stand Jurina!" 

Rena smirked "c'mon is just karaoke time.." she says with a smile 

"well she's late.." Yuki says looking other way irritated

"Hell everyone!" Jurina says smiling 

"Mayu chan.." Yuki says as she gets up 

"i'm going to ask for juice.." Jurina says with a smile  

Mayu sits "I didn't know you were here!" she says with a smile 

Yuki smiles also "Rena brought me and i don't think Sae likes the idea of you being here!"

"Here.." Jurina says as she brings to glasses of juice for her and Rena then brings another two for Yuki and Mayu

*Rena looks at Jurina who winked at her*

Soon the four girla started to sing and dance and by chance Mayu amd Yuki changed spots so Yuki drank Mayu's juice while Mayu drank Yuki's 

Jurina and Rena was shocked first 

"Well if Yuki is a little drunk too might be more easier.." Jurina murmured with a smile 

Rena just nodded as she watches her friend drinking her juice 

Soon Rena went to get more juice and brought for the four girls 

The four girls danced and singing again once they regained energy and somehow Mayu managa to skip her drink cause she went to the bathroom 

Yuki drank her juice then kept singing so her throat got dry and she drank Mayu's 

"Not again!" Jurina says 

Rena sighed "you need to stop drinking Mayu's juice.."
she says a little irritated 

*what!?? i'll go get more!" Yuki replies as she gets up and hits her knee with the table 

Rena looked at Yuki "i thinks she's kinda drunk right now.." she says then looks at Jurina 

Jurina pouted "she always ruins my plans!" she thought 

Mayu got back from the bathroom and sitted 

Yuki got back with the 2 glasses of juice and sitted next to Mayu 

"Yuki are you okay? your cheeks are red! are you with fever?"  Mayu asked as she puts her hand on Yuki's forhead 

"Ohh Mayu chan hands are so soft!" Yuki says smiling as she takes Mayu's hand that was on her forhead and other  that was on Mayu's thigh 

Mayu started sniffing Yuki "you smell like alcohol!" she says then looks at Rena and Jurina who were looking other way 

"Did you do this?" Mayu asked while Yuki hugs her 

Rena got nervous "she made me do it!" 

Jurina looked at Rena 

"Sorry i can't lie!" She replied shyly 

Jurina pouts "what if i did?"  she asked

"i told you not get in this!" Mayu says as she takes Yuki by her arm "let's go!" 

"so soon?" Yuki asked 

"yeah!" Mayu says mad taking Yuki with her 

"bye bye!" Yuki says smirking 
 
~Walking home~ night time

Mayu looked for a taxi but there was nothing..

"i think we should walk because there's no taxi around.."

Yuki hugged Mayu from behind "i'm feeling dizzy can we sit" she asked 

Mayu was all tense up but then she helped Yuki to sit on the side walk

Yuki closed her eyes for a moment while Mayu just looked at her,her hand brain on her own and cupped Yuki's cheek and made her put her head on her shoulder 

~After a few minutes~

"Are you feeling better?" Yuki asked

"what?!? why?"  Mayu asked 

Yuki sighed and openned her eyes"well you were broken and now you seem good!"

Mayu looked at Yuki "yes,i'm feeling better.." 

Yuki smiled "i'm glad!" she say as she gets up 

"i don't know why Rena and Jurina wanted to make you drunk but i guess i let it pass.." Yuki says as she gets up 

Mayu got up also "you knew it.." 

Yuki smirked " Well is not normal when somene pulls out a bottle of something that looks like water from her purse" 
she says as she starts walking 

Mayu smiled then followed her and putted her arms around Yuki's wait while Yuki without thinking putted her arm around Mayu's neck 

*Something hit Yuki's brain again*

Yuki putted her her hand on her head

"Are you okay?" Mayu asked worried 

"It was so fast again.." Yuki murmures then looks at Mayu in the eyes 

*For a moment Mayu felt like if the old Yuki was looking at her*

"why you always look at me like that?" Yuki asked not breaking their eye contact

"what? how?" Mayu asked nervous then looked other way 

Yuki shook her head "forget it's my imagination.." she says as she let go Mayu and walks ahead 

Mayu sighed  followed the older girl 

Yuki kept walking  "Mayu.." she whispered 

TO BE CONTINUED!!! COMMENT!! 
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.26
Post by: CheesyBits on November 05, 2012, 09:53:15 AM
YESS~ Yukirin is about to remember it soon yayy~!  :luvluv2:
Mayuyu~ Just seduce her already  :luvluv1:

I hope Sae gets a happy ending in this story though  :mon pray2:

Can't wait for the next update  :shy2:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.26
Post by: Chanaline on November 05, 2012, 12:53:57 PM
Hoho! :D

Yukirin remember something... The Mayu's eyes is unique!!! because she totally in love with you(<-- I know it is a weird comment!)

So she was not drunk... hehe!!

Olalalala! :angry: Mayuyu seduce her, it is not a problem and I think she is not against when she remember! :smhid

Hayaku!!! Oboete!
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.26
Post by: kurogumi on November 06, 2012, 01:54:02 AM
Yuki is really too slow~

Too slow yuki too slow~ if you're too slow i'm afraid something bad will happen (hope not of course LOL)

If mayu's keep her promises...,now it's all up to yuki will's to remember what she suppose to remember

It's really sweet that mayu's keep her promises...

Why rena or jurina not said to yuki that mayu is the one she's looking for...

Its so frustrating looking their progress...


Thank for the update cmze-san... I really loved your new fic...LOL

s
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.26
Post by: Megumi on November 06, 2012, 07:39:41 PM
 :lol: Yuki is a smart girl for knowing that they spiked Mayus drink...but still she shouldn't have drink  it  :rofl: so now
I'm confused if she's smart or not  :doh:

Ah can't wait dor next update!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.26
Post by: kahem on November 07, 2012, 12:06:19 PM
Ah too bad, Jurina's plan failed
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.27
Post by: cmze on November 08, 2012, 05:04:52 AM
                              My sister's girlfriend                     
                                             27


~ At Rena's room~ 

Kashiwagi Yuki who was laying on Rena's bed let out a big sigh. 

Rena entered to the room with Juice and some cookies "Yuki you just have to try a little harder.." She says as she offers the juice to Yuki 

Yuki sitted on bed "i'm running out of ideas and patient!" she says before drinking her juice

Rena looks at her friend " Maybe that person is scared to be rejected by you!" she says as she eats her cookie 

"Maybe you're right and there's Ma.." Yuki stopped talking then blushed 

"eh were you going to say Mayu?" Rena asked 

"no! no!" Yuki fast replies as she gets up from bed 

Rena also gets up "don't lie to me Yukirin!" she says as she takes her friend by her shoulders and shakes her 

Yuki removes Rena's hands "it's just.. it's weird.The way she looks at me and when my arm was around her neck it felt like home" 

"Home?" Rena asked frowning 

"like if that's were my arm should be..I feel so bad about it what Mayu chan would think about me I'M SUCH A PERVERT WHO LIKES KIDS!" Yuki says irratated as she shouts the last part scratching her head with both hands 

Rena laughed hard as she rolls on bed 

"You don't understand me!" Yuki shouted and left the house mad 

"Yuki chan wait up!" Rena shouted but it was too late she was already gone

~The next day at school ~ Mayu and Jurina's classroom

"Mayu i have good news for you!" Jurina says happy while the cyborg girl ignored her 

"It's about.. *Mayu interrupted Jurina* 

"i don't care what it is.I don't wanna know!" Mayu replied 

After a few seconds the teacher entered to the classroom 

*Jurina pouted and went to her seat*

The teacher smiled "well everyone welcome our new student Sashihara Rino!" 

Hello everyone i'm Sashihara Rino but my friends call me Sashi so please treat me well!" she says with a smile 

"Please seat on the empty seat over there!" The teacher says with a smile 

The empty seat was next to Mayu who was spacing out 

(The hours passed fast and Sashi already has a reputation as a player and that she likes cute girls)

(The bell ringed) 

Jurina grabbed Mayu by her arm "you avoid me on lunch time! what's going on?" she asked 

Sashi's books fell of her desk while she got up

Mayu noticed it and release herself from Jurina and helped Sashi to pick up her books 

Sashi lookd at Mayu "thank you! Pretty and kind that's what i'm looking for!" she says with a smile 

Mayu scratched the back of her head not knowing what to say 

Jurina broke the atmosphere by taking Mayu by her arm and pulls her out of the classroom 

Sashi fallows the two girls "Mayu chan wait!" she shouted as run after them 

Mayu and Jurina stopped walking and looked at Sashi who clung on Mayu's arm 

"ehhh!" Mayu reacted 

"i want to invite you to my party.." Sasshi sahs with a smile 

At the same time Rena,Sae and Yuki got closer to the three little girls 

Yuki looked at Sasshi clinging on Mayu and gulped "Sae chan" she whispered 

"What do you say Mayu chan?" Sashi asked with a smile  ignoring the older girls around 

"NO!" Yuki answered with a big shout 

"huh?" Mayu reacted "you don't even know what are we talking about!"  she retored mad

"Of course i know this girl over here *pointing at Sasshi* just invited you to her party!" Yuki replied 

"ohh.. well you're not nobody to tell me what to do!" Mayu shouts 

Yuki looked at Sae chan "well Sae chan doesn't want you to go!" she says

"Get me out of there!" Sae says

Jurina looked at Rena "is it me or somebody is jealous around here?" the younger girl asked while Rena just smirked 

"what? jealous! me?no! you can do whatever you want.. Hearless cyborg!" Yuki shouted 

"huh! well i rather be a heartless cyborg than a jerk who talks on her sleep,an scary cat who can't get on a roller coastar,wears pink underwear and shouts like a baby whenever she sees a bug!" Mayu shouted back 

How do you know that? *Yuki asks then looks at Sae* Sae chan! She shouted 

Sae sighed "i haven't seen your underwear.." she says feeling a little irritated that how much Mayu knows about Yuki 

"Don't tell you guys date before?" Sasshi asked 

"what? no! whatever do whatever you want..I'M GOING HOME!" Yuki shouted as she walks away 

Mayu sighed "Bakarin.." she sad whispers as she looks the taller girl walking away 

Jurina smirked "wow that was a boyfriend and girlfriend scene!"

Sae sighed "Mayu chan let's go!" she says as she walks ahead

Mayu walked behind her older sister,looking at her back 

Sae stoppee walking "what are you waiting for?" she asked 

Mayu also stopped walking "what?" she asked 

"To tell he who you are!" Sae says 

Mayu frowned "she doesn't like me,she see me like your or her little sister!"

Sae turned and faced Mayu  then smirked 

Mayu sighed "i always fight for her, i'm kinda tired of it and her messy head she loves you then she loves me then she loves you and never ends" 

Sae moved her head side to side 

1.The first day you met Yuki she was with me,well she was playing and i was staring her so when i finally encourage myself to talk to her,she heard you crying and run to you to save you from those that were bothering you! 

"huh?" Mayu hummed 

~ Flashback~  8 years ago.. 

At the park SaeYuki

"C'mon Sae just talk to her,she doesn't bite actually she looks really nice!" Little Sae thought hideing behind a bush 

"So you're not feeling okay?" Little Yuki says while plays with her barbies 

"Then let the doctor help you.." She says as she smiles
 
Sae slowly got closer to her till the point she was behind her "Hi.." she says nervous 

Yuki turned her head "did yoy hear that? someone is cryong!" she says as she gets up and runs to the source leaving Sae behind 

"Ehh! where did she go?" Sae asked 

~At the source~

"Give me back my ball!" Little Mayu says sobbing in a low voice

"what? i didn't hear you!" a girl says playing with Mayu's ball

"what the baby can't speak louder?" another girl says

*Both girls laugh and keep mocking Mayu*

Mayu cries and murmures "Sae chan where are you?" 

"here's your ball!" one of the girls says and throws it to Mayu's head and then it bounces back to the girl 

*Mayu cries more*

"hey!" A girl says and takes the ball 

"who are you? you shouldn't mess with us!" One of girls says

"go away!" The girl says mad 

"we'll be back!" The two girls say and then walks away

" are you okay?" The older girl says 

Mayu slowly opens her eyes 

"here's your ball!" The girl says with a smile and giving Mayu her ball back 

"my forhead hurts!" Little Mayu says 

"it's all red!" The older girl says and then kisses it 

*Mayu blushes*

"better?" The older girl asks with a smile

"yes!" Mayu says with a smile 

"Mayu chan!" Someone says 

"Sae chan" Mayu says happy

"are you okay?" Sae asked and examinates her little sister carfully 

"i'm okay!" Mayu says with a smile 

"who are you?" Sae says and looks closely to the other girl 

"hey I'm Kashiwagi Yuki!" The girl says with a smile 

<End of the flashback>

"I saw her first but she kissed you first.." Sae murmures 

Mayu looks other way "she didn't know that,she always thought she met Yuki first!" 

2. When she chose you over me on your birthday..

3. When she pushed out of the way so you won't get hurt by that car 

4. Even if she doesn't remember you,she was able to break up with me because she feels you!"

Sae explains as she looks other way 

Mayu's tears came out "i'm sorry Sae chan!" she says as hugs her older sister 

"it's okay Mayu,i guess what you guys have is true love in the end!" Sae replies as she pats her younger sister's back 

TO BE CONTINUED!!! COMMENT!! 
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.27
Post by: rhin12 on November 08, 2012, 06:35:58 AM
This one is my favorite out of all your stories.   :twothumbs

And enter Sashiko! Yes. Does it mean this fic will not yet to end?  :grin:
I'm so happy. Thanks for this update cmze-san..  :bow:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.27
Post by: CheesyBits on November 08, 2012, 07:43:01 AM
Finally Sae is not the villain here now :3 ~
Go Sae! Help Yukirin remember Mayu! :D

Please continue the story cmze-san~
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.27
Post by: Minami-chan on November 08, 2012, 12:06:36 PM
How exciting is this in all !! :cow: :cow:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.27
Post by: Chanaline on November 08, 2012, 12:40:17 PM
I just say I LOOOOOOOVEEE IIIIT!!!!! :wub:

GO MAYUYU!!! :P

thank you Sae!!  :thumbsup

It is a really great update!!!!!!!!!!!
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.27
Post by: kurogumi on November 08, 2012, 03:02:36 PM
Eto...now i'm stoped hating sae, finally this sister's is make up aww sweet..they hug each other

Mayu really tired fighting for yuki...well i know what she feel,but sae is right mayu...
Just confess to yuki again...tell her that you love her...yuki is too shy to admit her feeling,she keep thing that it is just her imagination...

But what if yuki keep deny it? Well soo i though its time for yuki to fight for mayu...LOL

More drama more sweet thing...

Thank for the update cmze-san...its fast...look like you are in a "GODS MODE" LOL
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.27
Post by: JuRikki on November 08, 2012, 06:34:51 PM
YAY!! Sae thank you! What are you waiting for Mayu? GO FOR HER!!

nice update btw  :thumbsup
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.27
Post by: kahem on November 09, 2012, 01:13:33 AM
oh Sasshi~ She will add some spice in the story hehe
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.27
Post by: korisunyan on November 10, 2012, 03:51:14 AM
Sasshi  : :mon barf:
Sae, i will still don't liking you  :mon barf:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.27
Post by: mo-chan on November 10, 2012, 01:25:07 PM
arigatouuu cmz-san for updating!!!  :twothumbs
I think at the end I don't hate Sae that much she knows that she was wrong and now she give up on Yuki  :fap
what are you waiting for Mayu goo!!!!  :rock:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.27
Post by: luichy on November 10, 2012, 02:58:51 PM
Great fanfic!... but instead of Sasshi I would prefer Ricchan, I mean, did you see the new Team A MV? Both, Mayu and her look so good togheter :wub:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.27
Post by: Playgirlz on November 12, 2012, 04:56:42 AM
A little more, just a little more, hwaiting Yuki!!!!!!! You are about to remember Mayu ><

Also, I'm glad that Mayu finally decided to take an action, mwahahaha so happy >:]

Thank you, pls pls update pls xD
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.28
Post by: cmze on November 14, 2012, 04:15:34 AM
                              My sister's girlfriend                     
                                             28


~ At Yuki's room~

Yuki got up from bed she looked around her room,she started to look for something that help her to remember the person that steals her dreams..

But it was useless there was nothing to her that could help her 

"why i have so many mangas here? i don't even like reading?" she thought then she found a psp that has Mayu's name on it "great now i have a psp and ipod from this heartless cyborg!" she thought 

Yuki got back to bed "this is so hard.." she murmures 

*After a few minutes Yuki's phone ringed as so Yuki grabbed it,it stopped ringing* 

Yuki looked at the screen "one miss call from Mayu.." she read and then it started ringing again 

"hello!" Yuki says 

~Beep Beep~ 

"What's wrong with her? why she hanged up?" Yuki wondered as she gets up and walks to Mayu's home 

~At Mayu's home~ 

Yuki knocked the door and soon Sae openned the door 

"oh Yuki chan!" Sae says impress 

Mayu was coming downstairs then saw Yuki and pouted,feeling the same love Yuki did the same 

"what are you doing here?" Sae asked 

"well since Mayu plays a lot to call and hang,i thought it my be good returning this!" Yuki says as she shows a box with Mayu's clothes,psp and ipod

"wow it seems like you been living with Yuki!" Sae says shocked as she looks inside the box

Yuki pouted "i don't know why i have many stuff of her!" she says as she crosses her arms 

Sae invites Yuki in while Mayu takes the box upstairs 

"ohh i forgot!" Yuki says as she pulls out the ipod from her pocket and gives it to Sae who totally rejected it 

"You give it to her.. i have to go" She says as walks away and closes the door 

Yuki sighed and walked upstairs,she knocked but there was not response 

Yuki entered anyways "Mayu chan!" she says as she looks the younger girl on the floor watching everything inside the box 

"So many things right?" Yuki asked 

Mayu pouted then looked other way "so many memories.." she whispered with some tears on the corner of her eyes 

Yuki didn't notice "here's your ipod!" she says as she extend her hand 

Mayu looked at the older girl *Yuki and Mayu had eye contact* 

"Pain.." Yuki murmured looking into Mayu's eyes "why so sudden i'm feeling bad?" she thought 

Soon Mayu's hand touched Yuki's hand while she takes the ipod from Yuki's hand 

"What's this?" Yuki thought as she brings her hand to her pocket 

"Thanks for bringing these things!" Mayu softly says trying to hide her pain 

Yuki turns around ready to leave but "Tell me why?! tell me why i'm feeling so bad?" she asked 

"Ehh." Mayu got up 

Yuki turned around and looked at the younger girl "Why i get jealous whenever somebody is around you? why your eyes look at me like that like if you have something to tell me? tell me now!" she says as she takes Mayu's shoulders and starts to shakes her 

*Mayu was shocked but soon her tears showed* 

Yuki looked at the younger girl "i'm sorry Mayu!" she says as she let go Mayu's shoulders then turned to leave but a hand grabbed her arm

"How could you forget? how could you.. how could you forget.. ME!?"Mayu asks sobbing 

Yuki turned around and looked at Mayu "you? what do you mean?" she asked 

"ME!! ME!! ME!!" Mayu shouted many times as she cries in front of Yuki 

"Mayu.." Yuki murmures 

~~~~~~~~~~~~<~~~~~>>~~~~~<<<>>>>>~~~~~~~

"No way!" Yuki shouts and waked up covered in sweat in the middle of the night,she looked around and her room it was messy 

"Mayu.." She murmures then looks at her windmill of six colours 

~The next day~ 

Sae looked at Yuki entered to the classroom,she looked really messy and spacing out 

"what happened to you?" The tomboy asked 

*Rena also seemed worried*

Yuki only sitted and ignore them 

~Soon it was lunch time~

Yuki walked the halls and after a few seconds she was staring at herself walking then a hand pulled her inside in one of the classroom 

Yuki followed herself and openned the door of the classroom,she looked at the scene

"Mayu chan!" Yuki says nervous 

"why you haven't broken up with her?" Mayu asks while has Yuki against the door 

"look i'll do it..eventually!" Yuki says nervous 

"so you like when she holds your hand? when she touches here and holds back your hair?* Mayu says teasing 

"Mayu.." Yuki says looking other way 

Mayu bit Yuki's neck 

"Mayu.." Yuki said a little in pain then Mayu kissed her little wound and went to her ear and whispered "Maybe you like that but i don't" and then devoured Yuki's lips 

Mayu started to unbutton her shirt "you're mine and when she kisses you'll taste my lips" She said between kisses 
While her hands plays with Yuki's breast 

Mayu broke the kiss and smirked 

Yuki was taking deep breaths and trying to button her shirt and put well her uniform 

"Look what i do to you..Can Sae chan do the same?" Mayu asks while leaves the classroom (And passes next to the shocked Yuki who was rememberinh the scene)

Yuki putted her hands on her face "shit..what am i 
doing?" 

(Soon that past Yuki dissapeared)

Yuki was shocked  "It's her.."  she murmured 

TO BE CONTINUED!! 

Sorry guys if it's so short but You know the final chapter is around the corner so.. (I'm trying to keep it a little longer)
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.28
Post by: clubhappy on November 14, 2012, 04:30:40 AM
Yay finally yukirin remembered. But it means that this fic is gonna end. It's kinda sad because I love this fic. It's a good story :D
Thanks cmze-san.
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.28
Post by: kurogumi on November 14, 2012, 05:10:27 AM
Ah so it's almost over, the final chapter, no wonder you trying to keep this a little longer, and i'm agree with you.LOL  :cathappy:
Something good must end.  :thumbsup

Think that it almost over,actualy i'm not ready yet   :nervous
Hahahaha this is one of the best fic i ever read,but it must end.  :deco:

After my sister girl friend, time is good as gold will replace as my no.1 favorite from your fic LOL  O0

Thank for the update cmze-san,hope the next chapter will be more dramatic scene,now when yuki finally remember mayu  :cow:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.28
Post by: Playgirlz on November 14, 2012, 12:49:59 PM
woaaaaaaa Finally Yuki!!!!!!!! I'm so happy for you!!!!

I wonder what Yuki's reation is when she sees Mauy the next day >:]

Thank you, pls update!!!!!!
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.28
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on November 14, 2012, 01:32:41 PM
great fanfic czme can't wait for the next update finally yuki remembers   :love:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.28
Post by: Chanaline on November 14, 2012, 01:37:03 PM
YAY!!!!!!! SHE REMEMBER!!!!!!!!!! :heart: :heart: :heart:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.28
Post by: kahem on November 15, 2012, 09:38:23 AM
Finally Yuki!!!!!
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.28
Post by: Minami-chan on November 15, 2012, 12:09:01 PM
Finally!! Mayuki again!
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.28
Post by: kurogumi on November 15, 2012, 01:03:34 PM
Cmze-san!! Finally!! LOL
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.28
Post by: rhin12 on November 16, 2012, 04:54:16 PM
Finally! cmze-san! Finally!  :rofl:

Yuki remembered it! Go get your Mayuyu now..And live happily ever after!  :lol:

Thanks for this update cmze-san...  :bow:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.29
Post by: cmze on November 22, 2012, 07:41:40 AM
My sister's girlfriend                     
                                             29

Sad chapter (Yuukimoko those songs make cry,don't know why?) x'D 

(Sad songs,Sad chapters) xD

~After a few days~

Yuki haven't go to school,she says that she's sick and her mother wants to take her to a doctor but her daughter refuses..

Yuki was laying on her bed and phone rang again,she saw the screen "Sae chan.." she murmured then putted her phone next to her 

Tears came out "You said that you love me,why you don't call?" she says mad looking at the ceiling 

~Flashback~ (The day that Yuki's memories came back)

Yuki walked to Mayu's classroom ready to tell her how she feels about the truth,hoping that Mayu would recieve her with open arms..

Yuki was about to open the door when she heard some voices

(Sae,Rena,Jurina and Mayu were talking)

Sae pouted "What do you mean you don't want Yuki?" she asked and takes Mayu by her collar 

Rena and Jurina got in the middle and separate the two step sisters 

Mayu sitted and looked through "Aren't we better this way Sae chan? didn't you miss me?" she asked coldly

Sae looked at younger sister "huh?" 

Mayu turned to look at Sae "We were good before she came to our lives.. now you let go and i think if she doesn't remember me would be better!" she says emotionless 

-Yuki's eyes open wide-

Jurina took a deep breath "You're saying nonsenses!" the hot pimp says disspointed (Rena takes Jurina's hand)

Mayu looks at Jurina "i'm sorry Jurina.. honestly maybe i didn't love Yuki i was jealous of you and i wanted take her away from you and hurt you!" she says turning her head to look at Sae 

(Yuki is getting hard to breathe,her heart aches and tears wants to show)

Sae tries to punch Mayu but Rena and Jurina grab her again 

Sae struggles with the two girls "You emotionless cyborg!" she shouts 

Mayu gets up "Like i said i'm tired of this game,she loges you,she loves me then she loves you and me again and it's a nonstopping ride!!" she shouts 

Sae,Jurina and Rena were speechless

(Yuki heard tha then runs away from the scene and goes home)

~Outside the school~ 

Sae,Rena and Jurina were waiting for Mayu who was talking to Sasshi

Sae pouts "who ever thought that i can't imagine Mayu without Yuki?" she says before sighing

Jurina looks at Sasshi "i don't like her!" she says 

Rena looks at the two "Hope she won't regret this choice!" she says sad 

"Hey you handsome!" Sayaka says as she gets on Sae's back 

Sae smiles "you're heavy but hot!"  

Sayaka smiles "i know!" she answers 

Rena and Jurina smiled at eachother then held hands 

Mayu looks at Sayaka and Sae then remembered how many times Yuki had carried her on her back 

Sasshi touches Mayu's shoulder "Mayu chan are you ok?" she asked waking up Mayu from her thoughts 

"Yes.. i should go!" Mayu says ready to leave but Sasshi grabbed her arm 

Sasshi smiled "this time i won't accept a NO besides there's not that skinny,tall, crazy girl around!"

Mayu looked other way "Yuki.." she murmured "don't worry i'll be there!" she answers faking a smile 

The CG walks to her friends..

Sae puts Sayaka down "Mayu chan i decided to go visit Yuki chan.. don't you wanna come?" she asked 

Mayu frowned "if i tell you what's on my mind you probably punch so.. NO!" she says as she walks away 

Jurina sighed "She's making a terrible choice!" she says moving her head side to side 

As Mayu walks puts her hand on her pocket to look for her precious ipod but then remembered again that Yuki has it.. 

"Maybe i should go get my ipod later.." The CG thought 

~Visiting Yuki~ 

Yuki let all the girls in.. 

"Yuki chan you don't look good? what's wrong?" Sayaka asked while sits on the couch 

Yuki looked at her friends "I have a cold!" she answered looking other way sad 

Sae touched Yuki's forhead "You have no fever!" she says as Sayaka gets a little jealousy

Sae soon retreat her hand and smiled ackwardly 

Rena looked at Yuki with sof eyes "that's a lie" she thought but rathered stay silence 

(Jurina also was silence)

~Soon the girls left~

Mayu was waiting for them to get out and be out of sight before knocking Yuki's door 

Once the girls were out sigh Mayu  knocked the door 

"Huh?" Yuki looked at the door and for some reason she thought it was Sae or somebody else she doesn't care so she sitted on the stairs that was close to the door and watched the person in the other side of the door get tired of knocking 

Mayu knocked,kicked the door again but there was still no sign of somebody coming to open the door 

In the other side Yuki was wishing that the other person on the other side go the hell away

Mayu got tired of knocking and walked away 

Yuki sighed "finally.." she murmured sad 

Mayu went back home and Yuki to her room to throw herself on bed 

TO BE CONTINUED!! COMMENT!! 

30 last chapter!! :'(  
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.29
Post by: clubhappy on November 22, 2012, 08:49:46 AM
Why Mayu???? Why are you denying Yuki???? Why????????????  :angry:
So the next chapter will be the last one, hope they can get back together again.  :D
Thanks for this chapter cmze-san.
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.29
Post by: CheesyBits on November 22, 2012, 09:18:50 AM
Mayuyu  :panic:
Make your mind up >.<!!
Sae already gave Yuki to you and now your gonna throw yuki away?  :angry:

Love the story  :twothumbs
Hope it never ends  :cry:
Can't wait for the next update  :heart:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.29
Post by: kurogumi on November 22, 2012, 10:02:22 AM
Yukii! Do something,why you just lock yourself in your room,yòu need to clear all
If mayu dont call you,then its time to show your love for her!

Ah this chapter make me frustrated, lol

Why they keep missunderstanding like that?

Yuki,mayu said that thing because she frustrated that you dont remember her,why you dont understand?


Next chapter is the final chapter...

Thank for the update cmze-san
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.29
Post by: cisda83 on November 22, 2012, 12:54:29 PM
Mayu... what r u doing...  :angry: :?

Poor Yuki... :cry: :bleed eyes:

Hope they get back together...  :bow:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.29
Post by: Chanaline on November 22, 2012, 01:49:56 PM
Alalala.... Mayuyu what are you saying!!!

Yukirin do something!!!!
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.29
Post by: rhin12 on November 22, 2012, 02:50:04 PM
Cmze-san!!!  XD

Quote
30 last chapter!! :'( 

Oh my! It's Chapter 29, but Mayuyu is still acting tsun tsun to Yuki.  XD
Time is running out Mayuyu! Made up your mind now!   :smhid

Thanks for this update cmze-san.  :bow:  :bow:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.29
Post by: mo-chan on November 22, 2012, 02:58:06 PM
I can't wait for the end  :cry:
happy end  :cry:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.29
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on November 22, 2012, 06:44:28 PM
no mayu no baka dame
yada yo
mayu you need to be with yuki
and you do love her!!
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.29
Post by: fuu_kun on November 23, 2012, 03:40:31 PM
hohoo can't wait for the end~~~
as long sae not suffering !  go yukiiii~! don't play hide and seek~ >_<
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.29
Post by: chiqinna on November 23, 2012, 04:04:42 PM
Yuki~~ Y U NO open the door~~~
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.30
Post by: cmze on November 25, 2012, 07:56:38 AM
                              My sister's girlfriend                     
                                             30

I'm depressed but still manage to write this chapter . Enjoy!" 

~At school~ 

Sae and Rena just looked at their friend who seems to be still sick 

Sae gets closer and puts her hand on Yuki's shoulder"Yuki chan if you're feeling down,you should go home!" 

Yuki ignored the tomboy 

Rena just looked at her friend and sighed 

Sae pouted "Kashiwagi Yuki don't ignore me!" she says a little sad 

Yuki removed Sae's hand from her shoulder "leave me alone!" the sick girl says emotionless 

Sae removed her hand and sitted next to her friend 

~After a few hours it was already lunch time~ 

Yuki got up,left the classroom ignoring her friends and went to the terrace 

Yuki openned the door and saw a familiar figure standing watching the view 

The figure turned around,looked at Yuki and then smiled 

Yuki's tears came out,since she find out the truth there are many memories haunting her,remembering how much she loved the CG and how much the CG loved her back 

Yuki sitted with her knees on her chest "This is all my fault since the beginning.." she thought 

Yuki felt something on her shoulder,she turned her head expecting to see the one to see but her hopes went away when she saw her friend "Rena chan.." she murmured 

Rena smiled sweetly "A cold,i don't buy that!" she says as she wipes Yuki's tears her thumbs 

Yuki looked down

Rena wiped Yuki's tears and sitted next to her "you remember don't you? why you don't tell her?" she asked 

Yuki just looked down "she hates me.." she murmured 

Rena hugged her friend "then why she stood right by your side everyday at the hospital? if somebody hates a person then what would even get bother to stay the night in an ackward hospital everynight?" 

Yuki's eyes openned wide then remembered why she woke up with Mayu's ipod next to her 

Rena let go her friend "she's just hurt.." she says as she gets up 

Yuki looks at Rena "i'm sorry about the slap,i felt betrayed by you not by Sae.."  

Rena smiled "I know.." she says as she walks away 

Yuki looked at the sky then also got up and went to the bathroom to wash her face to make up 

Once ready the ball rang indicating that she has to return to classes 

Sae,Sayaka and Rena noticed the change..

"What happened? where's sick Yuki?" Sae asked 

Yuki sitted "no more of that!" she says with a smile 

*After a few hours it was time for theather class*

(Note: Well Yuki was in the hospital many things changed about the play)

Mayu and her class was already un the theather..

Mayu looked at Yuki "I thought you guys said she was sick!" she murmured to Jurina who was next to her 

Jurina looked at Mayu "i swear she looked terrible that day!" she says in kinda high tone 

Yuki,Sae and Rena looked at the two younger girls 

*Everyone in your positions*

"Sensei there's problem Yuki chan got back!" Rena says looking at Yuki 

The sensei looks at Yuki then sighed "well i think you can be..hummm one of the extras!" 

Yuki reacted "what? why?" she asked 

The sense walks "well you were in the hospital and we didn't know if you were going to wake up so change all so these are my prince and pricess!" he says while gets behind Mayu and Sasshi and pushes them ahead 

Yuki took a deep breath "What!? i'm going to kill this.." 

Rena takes Yuki by her arm to calm her down 

"Enough of chatting let's work!" The teacher says and everyone gets in positoon 

Mayu couldn't help to think "why Yuki acted that way?" but she forget about it because of the practice of the play

Yuki looked at the romantic scenes between Sasshi and Mayu and she couldn't help to pout,put her hand on her neck,bite her lips "this is hell!" she thought 

Sae and Jurina were next to Rena waiting for her turn but Jurina couldn't help to ask "Isn't Yuki acting strange?" 

Sae looked at the stressed Yuki who was bussy stabbing Sasshi with her look "Is she jealous?" she asked 

Rena smiled and grabbed Jurina's hand 

"Don't tell me she.." Sae says and looks at Rena who just nodded 

"What?!? Mayu should know!" Sae says excited 

Rena sighed "i think we should leave them do their thing alone!" 

Jurina smiled "No way, i owe Mayu so.. we have to get our butts in!" 

(The three girls planned that only can be done in the play's night!!)

~After a few days~ 

Yuki went to SaeMayu's home to give her back her things 

Sae openned the door and looked at her ex girlfriend with a box on her hands 

"what's that?" the tomboy asked

Yuki sighed  "stuff.." she replies 

Sae smirks "Mayu chan!" she shouted 

"Ehh what are you doing?" Yuki asked 

Then Mayu showed up and looked at the guest "Yuki chan.." she murmured as she comes closer hypnotized 

Sae smirked "oh i have a call to make!" she says as she goes upstairs 

Mayu rolled her eyes but then looked at the box on Yuki's hands "what's that?!" she asked 

Yuki frowned "somethings that i think belongs to you" she replies faking a smile 

Mayu looked inside the box "yeah this things are mine.." she says a little sad then took the box from Yuki's hands they couldn't help their hands touch eachothers and send that sparks between the two girls 

Yuki looked at Mayu in the eyes and also Mayu was staring her back *They were having eye contact* 

"Mayuyu.." The taller girl whispers 

"Mayu chan are you going to take longer!" Someone shouts interrupting the moment of the two girls 

Yuki looked the owner of the voice "Sasshi" then she looked at Mayu who was looking down 

"I'm coming!" The younger girl says as she takes the box with her upstairs 

Yuki only looked at Mayu walking away then sighed 

~ The day of the play~ 

"Rena chan looks so pretty in that costume!" Jurina says with a smile 

"You look pretty handsome!" Rena replies with a smile 

"i know!" The young pimp says 

Many girls sighed cause the cool pimp *Rena noticed and clung on her pimp* 

*Inner Rena = Gekikara "Back off bitches!!" she shouts*

Jurina only smiled 

Sae also joined to the two girls backstage "What's this vibe?" she asked 

"Sae chan looks so hot!" A partner says 

"Thanks.." Sae says ackwardly looking side to side if Sayaka was around 

Yuki appeared "i'm just an extra.. loose Mayu and now i loose my play.." she murmured in a depressed mood 

Jurina pats Yuki's back "what's with the depressed mood cheer up!" she says with a smile 

Yuki looks at Jurina then sighed "yeah.." she says not so convinced 

~The play started~ 

Everything was going as the drama even though it was a cliche musical drama 

The poor farm girl that can't fall in love with the handsome prince because there was many factors against their love (his family) 

~During Mayu's solo~

"We're close to the end and everything been good!" Sasshi says as she is about to drink water for her dry throat

"Yep.." Jurina says as she gets closer with Sae who has tape in her hands 

Sasshi could see them through the mirror "What's the tape for?" she asked 

"Fix.." Sae says with an unique psyco face while Jurina grabs her and shut her up 

Sasshi tried to force with the two girls but they're stronger 

~At the same time~ 

Yuki was watching Mayu singing "wow she's so good!" she says out of the blue 

Rena smiles "yeah,she been practicing a lot! she didn't want anybody to take that role besides you or her!" 

Yuki looked at Rena "Really?" she asked 

Rena nodded the. smiled  "She said all the time how amazing your voice is and how nobody else deserve that role but you!" 

Yuki smiled then noticed Rena has something on her hands "what do you got there?" she asked 

Rena smiled "it's time for you to steal the prince's girl in this story!" 

Yuki reacted "Ehhh what about Sasshi?" she asked 

Rena frowned "do you really want her close to Mayu ?" 

Yukk pouted "of course not!" she says and snatches the clothes from Rena's hands 

Rena smiled and looked at her friend asshe goes to change 

After a few minutes.. 

In the next scene the farm girl was waiting for her beloved prince in their secret place 

(Note: To not confuse myself Mayu's character is also called Mayu)

Mayu  was smelling some flowers while she waits for her prince charming 

Everyone was confuse 

"ehhh who's that one?" Everyone were commenting 

Mayu heard some steps getting closer to her,she smiled then turned around 
 
"What!? what are you doing here?" Mayu asked and looked a handsome farm guy who looked like Yuki 

Yuki looked at the younger girl then sighed and looked other way trying to avoid her/his tears "I know you been trying to forget me but i just can't.. i just can't let you go no matter how hard i try!" he says and turns to look at Mayu who was shocked 

*"who's that one?" The director asked freaking out*

"What!??" she reacted looking at Yuki 

"I know that i screw everything up many times before but i never wanted to hurt you..." Yuki says as tries to get closer Mayu 

Mayu looked other way "I'm sorry.. you and i was something that never had to happen it was me trying to i don't know.. experiment" 

Yuki grabbed Mayu by her shoulders "stop saying those things.. this is not you! what happened to you?" he asked shaking the girl 

Mayu looked other way "i got bore of you!" she replies emotionless 

Yuki's tears came out "that's not truth,you don't mean anything.." he says crying 

"Oh my god this is so sad!" The audience comments 

Sae,Jurina and Rena were speechless 

"when she became this cold?" Sae asked looking at them behind the curtain 

"Mayu i know you're trying making me pay but this is not the way!" Yuki says mad still with his hands on Mayu's shoulders 

Mayu was still cold as an ice 

"Where's spoiled little girl? give it back! give it back!" he shouts crying while shaking Mayu 

Everyone was sad in watching the scene 

"Kids these days are great actors!" A man comment

Mayu was still looking other way "i grew up!" she replied 

Yuki hugged the younger girl "No.. you haven't you're still my little girl making a tantrum" he says as his tears soaks Mayu's shoulder 

Mayu didn't say a word even though his embrace was warm and she wanted to stay that way forever but she's still hurt so she pusher the taller guy 

"How can you? why you mess with me? stop! there's Sae go to her!" She says pointing to her sister but the public can see her cause she's behind the curtains

"oh my 4 person this is interesting!" A woman says 

"Mayu.." Sae murmured sad

Yuki got up "Sae chan.. she's really good doesn't she?" he says with a smirk 
 
"what a jerk!" A girl in the public says pouting 

Yuki looked at the girl then looked at Mayu "but she's not for me,never was and i was so stupid to try to believe she was the one when there was you.. the only one that makes me dream when awake,makes me feel sparks and even live at her room as a fugitive.." 

 Everyone says "Awwwwwww" 

Mayu looks at Yuki "You remember..." she murmured with tears in the corner of her eyes 

Yuki smiles weakly "Mayuyu i love you *More tears* please just one kiss.." he says as he gets closer

Mayu feels her tears rolling her cheeks,she sees Yuki coming closer then he cupped her cheek softly

*Mayu only looked at him in the eyes hypnotized*

Yuki leaned slowly 

*The people watching were also excited looking at the scene* 

"I'm tired of you!" Sasshi says running and tackled Yuki 

"what!??!"Everyone watching shouted

Both boys\girls were rolling on the floor fighting 

"How did she?" Jurina asks and looks at Sae who just made i sign "i don't know dude!" 

Mayu was shocked looking at the two fighting 

Sasshi was on top ready to punch Yuki's pretty *Who's not really strong because she's too girly* 

Jurina and Sae was about to defend Yuki but Rena putted her arm "let's leave it Mayu" she says with a smile stopping the two hot pimps 

"Yuki.."Mayu says and throws herself on Sasshi's back "Get off her i don't her to loose her memories again.. I LOVE HER!" she shouts 

"What!??!" Everyone shouts 

"ehhh!" Sasshi looked at Mayu's face that was on her shoulder 

"I mean him.." Mayu says as removes herself from Sasshi's back

"what about me?" Sasshi asked a little sad

"Lovetan likes you!" Mayu says careless as she pushes Sasshi off Yuki 

Really?!? The pervert asked happy 
 
"Yeah.." Mayu replies 

"She's hot!" Sasshi says as she gets up and walks away 

 Mayu looks at Yuki "You're terrible fighting.. a dude without arms and legs fight better!" she says crossing her arms 

Yuki smiled and kissed the younger girl who also smiled while kissing 

~~~~~~After a few days~~~~~ At Mayu's room~~~~

"Mayu chan stop it!" Yuki says not so happy 

"you're face says the contrary,do you really want me to stop now?" The younger girl asked 

"I don't think it's the kind of moment to do this!" Yuki says

Mayu pouts "Look at your face, we're so close!" she says 

Yuki sighs "you're just a child,the girls are waiting for us!" she says as she looks at her girlfriend playing with her Play station 3 

"We been trying to pass level so many times and i think i got it now!" Mayu says fully focused on the screen 

Yuki pouted and looked other way "Should i feel jealous of that thing?" she wondered then something hit her,she putted herself in front of the screen 

"Yukk get off my way!" Mayu says trying to look at the screen 

Yuki unbuttons her shirt 

Mayu looks at the older girl *Face!* "now you have my attention!" she says still looking at Yuki's *Face xD* 

Yuki buttons her shirt "let's go!" she says and goes outside 

(After walking for a while) 

"I thought we were meeting the girls.." Mayu says looking around in the park 

Yuki smirks "it was a lie!" she says then stopped walking 

"what's going on?" The CG asked 

Yuki turns to look at Mayu "we're here!" she says with a smile 

Mayu was confused "i'm 16 so parks are not my thing anymore but i appreaciate this!" she says 

Yuki sighs "This is the exact place where those kids were bothering you,were we met!" she says with a smile 

Mayu looked around "yes,it is.. i was such a crying baby!" 

Yuki puts her arm around Mayu's neck "if you didn't cry that time we wouldn't met and we wouldn't be here today so i'm thankful for that!" she says and kisses Mayu's forhead 

Mayu looked at Yuki sweetly "i'm thankful to those girls now!" she says with a smile 

The two girls smiled to eachother.. 

"Yuki chan i love you since the first moment i met you thanks for always be next to me as my sister's girlfriend" 

The two girls looked the sunset then kissed 

~WMatsui~

"I swear,she wasn't flirting!" Jurina says as she walks behind Rena 

Rena ignored her and kept walking 

"Rena chan i love you,you're the only one who makes me dream when i'm awake!" Jurina replies 

Rena turns around,Jurina smiles 

"Are you copying Yuki?" Rena asked 

Jurina smiles fades "ehhh well.." 

Rena rolls her eyes and tried to walked away but a hand made her turn around 

"Look i'm not good with words!" the younger girl says and kisses Rena as the cool little pimp that she is 

The two broke their kiss and everyone was watching 

"I love you and i'm only yours!" Jurina says serious ignoring everyone with her forhead connected to Rena's 

Rena pouted "Why you have to be so sweet?" she asked then smiled and kissed again her younger girlfriend not giving a damn about people...

~THE END~ Thanks everyone who read,commented  this thread you guys are the best!! THNK U :D
hope you like the end!! :)
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.30
Post by: rhin12 on November 25, 2012, 08:44:58 AM
SEQUEL!! SEQUEL!!  :rofl: joke.  :P

Cmze-san.. This is so cute and sweet..   :deco:

Thanks for this story. I'm so happy.  :bow:  :bow:  :bow:
You're so awesome! Writing lots of MaYuki.  :twothumbs


Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.30
Post by: clubhappy on November 25, 2012, 08:53:18 AM
Thanks for lots of Mayuki fanfics cmze-san. This is indeed a great story.
Mayu and Yuki finally got back together!!!!  :wub:

But you said that you were depressed when you wrote this chapter. What's wrong?
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.30
Post by: CheesyBits on November 25, 2012, 10:26:19 AM
Love the story~~~ :luvluv1: :luvluv2:
Why did this have to end? :tantrum: :fainted: :on speedy:

ME WANT MORE~~  :pleeease: :pleeease:

Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.30
Post by: yuukimoko on November 25, 2012, 10:49:23 AM
and..... that was the great final....*sigh* Ill miss this fic...  :(


But hey! Cmze-san has a lot of fics ~ so no regret!

Thank you Cmze-san~
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.30
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on November 25, 2012, 11:31:07 AM
love this fanfic :love:
sad it had to end  :cry: but love the ending its so sweet :thumbsup
thank you cmze san :cow:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.30
Post by: kahem on November 25, 2012, 12:18:03 PM
Great end!
This fic was awesome and cute ^^
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.30
Post by: kurogumi on November 25, 2012, 12:33:09 PM
When i finish reading this last chapter i was speechless...

I cant believe this great fic end,

And it was a great ending...its so amazing

Cmze-san you said that you got depressed,but please dont.cheer up! Be happy,because your story its the original awesome super fantastic i ever read! (hahaha looks like im so into your fic cmze-san)

Now when my sister girlfriend end, i will love to read another your great fic,especialy time is good as gold LOL


Thank for making this story

Thank thank thank thank thank thank thank!!!
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.30
Post by: Chanaline on November 25, 2012, 01:58:06 PM
Woahaaaaa!!! It was so good!! It is just  a fantastic story!!
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.30
Post by: mo-chan on November 25, 2012, 03:27:54 PM
I love the end  :deco:
but it's the end I loved this fic so much  :cry:
thanks god there are still other fics  :)
like Time is good as gold  :cathappy: which is really sad  :catglare:
and Loving you which is funny  :lol:
and Wild love which there is many things to memorise Czme-san you say that Wild love is a fic for Kojiyuu but this title fits more mayuki  :?
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.30
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on November 25, 2012, 03:58:05 PM
Awwwe great ending oAo I'm kind of sad yet happy. Sad because it has come to an end. And happy because we made it through from the start~

Time to read it back again LOL
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki <3 CH.30
Post by: cmze on November 25, 2012, 09:10:13 PM
 rhin_rhin: Yeah i wish i could but i have no pilot to start! -_- what am i going to do? make Mayu forget about Yuki bacause a car accident?  :rofl: thanks for reading and commenting!! :)

 clubhappy: So many Mayuki fanfics right? i gives me headache sometimes!  :panic: hey btw i will try to update wild love mlre often because of you.. seems like you like it a lot and i like to make my readers happy  :D we already pm eachother! :)

 CheesyBits: Well i have no more ideas left  :grin: sorry!  :nervous Thanks for reading!!  :thumbsup

 yuukimoko: I'm glad you liked the end,i was kinda nervous about it since i squeezed my brain on it!  :nervous *The first idea was Yuki kidnapping Mayu before the play but nothing else came to mind besides i rather leave that to my shocking Yuki on Time is good as gold because it fits better to Yuki's character on that fic!* thnks for reading!!  :cow:

 mayuki_daisuki: I love this fic too!  :heart: and i'm kinda sad because it ended but it was time then i would ruin it as a keep it longer!  :rofl: Thanks for reading!!  :D

 kahem: You!! you should update more often i really like that Nurse and that student!!  :smhid but anyways Thanks for always commenting Since My start as a fic writer thanks i'm really touched by it THANKS Kahem!!  :heart:

 kurogumi: Thank u for reading and always giving such an interesting comments,Even if it doesn't looks like i pay attetion to it and i add those suggestions but on my pace because i'm really stupid!!   :nervous Thanks for Reading!!  :bow: hope you keep giving those interesting povs!!  :grin:

 Chanaline: You always been reading my fanfics also i really appreaciate that!!  :inlove: i really love your fic and yes your english is better than mine and your fic is better written than mines!! so proud of u!!  :bow:

 mo-chan: Thanks i love your comments even though now you're busy don't worry it's fine!! :) just like u i love this fic and like i said i have no ideas for this anymore.. i'm glad you read my other fics!:D and yeah wild love it was supposed to be Kojiyuu all the way but.. my fangirling side of MaYuki is way stronger,Don't know why? i was a Kojiyuu shipper and now i just write MaYuki :P

 ChuuuPuffss: You just described how i was feeling!! :shocked thank you very much for reading,i'm glad you like this fic hope you had a good time and my terrible english didn't bother you!!  :grin:












Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki CH.30 <THE END> REPLIES!! <3
Post by: Chanaline on November 25, 2012, 09:37:08 PM
You always been reading my fanfics also i really appreaciate that!!

No, no it is me the one who appreciate that!!!  :twothumbs

What, what? You say that my English is better than yours.. I don't think that way XD

your fic is better written than mines

What do you mean? :? I don't think so... I wanna more vocabulary!!! XD
Your fic is just awesome! The stories are all original!   :thumbsup
(But I was not like when Mayu cheat on Yuki in an another fanfic... I was too sick at heart :cry: but the end was happy for hers so I am healed XD)

PS: Why I says the things like that?? (the vocabulary) I speak with you like a friend... Are we friend?? XD I want to speak much with you because you are so gentle and I feel comfortable with you!!! <-I digress :nervous
Thnak you for love my fanfic :love:

I stop this weird comment and go to sleep...  :yawn:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki CH.30 <THE END> REPLIES!! <3
Post by: cmze on November 25, 2012, 10:13:25 PM
yeah of course we're friends!! :grin:

you're really nice and gentle!!  :D

and yes your fanfic is better i love the way you described everything,i wish i could do that but my english sucks!  :rofl:

have a good night! :)  :thumbsup
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki CH.30 <THE END> REPLIES!! <3
Post by: Playgirlz on November 26, 2012, 02:45:21 AM
Wow so it finally comes to an end, i still remember when i first read chapter 1, i started my fic after this fic came out abt after a week. Now it's already 30 and mine is just 18. What a big difference lol

But I'm glad to see Mayuki together, at least after everything they went through. Soooooo many things happen :]

Really, thank you cmze, for writing such a good fic ^^ Looking forward for the update of the other fics, you have so many other lol
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki CH.30 <THE END> REPLIES!! <3
Post by: rhin12 on November 26, 2012, 04:06:21 AM
Quote
what am i going to do? make Mayu forget about Yuki bacause a car accident?
:rofl: Nevermind the sequel..Haha.. Just leave the sappy moment in "Time is good as gold"

Thanks a lot for this fic cmze-san.. This is my favorite out of all ur fics.  :cry:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki CH.30 <THE END> REPLIES!! <3
Post by: Pwety on November 26, 2012, 06:00:05 AM
wow the end!!!!!

It was really sad when Mayu  was cold...

but finally they get together! :wub:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki CH.30 <THE END> REPLIES!! <3
Post by: Shinoki on April 30, 2013, 02:06:50 AM
DIED.... THAT WAS SO EPIC!!!
I DON'T LIKE SAEYUKI, BUT......
ok, lets stop with caps....
so....as I was saying.... so epic...
good story....
a bit sad that it was cut off.....
well........ending things is hard.....
so wonderful.....
jumping into a play suddenly is just the best way to confess!!
<3 <3 <3 <3
Lol, Sasshi and Mayu won't work.... too bad there wasn't much SasshiRabu, they were totally minor character.....
Sae was killing me, but at least the ending make me go doki doki with happiness....
I guess my terminology might be a bit hard to understand since it's partial otaku-talk.....
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki CH.30 <THE END> REPLIES!! <3
Post by: Terragen on July 02, 2013, 02:49:45 PM
Oh my!

Now i understand why cmze sama fic is so popular among reader!
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki CH.30 <THE END> REPLIES!! <3
Post by: imteedee on July 20, 2013, 08:51:56 AM
I read all of it at once and AGAIN I  :gyaaah:
WONDERFUL  :farofflook:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki CH.30 <THE END> REPLIES!! <3
Post by: kcard on March 17, 2014, 07:53:40 AM
I see your fanfic "Time is good as gold" first but before it read that one I see you mention this story so I came here ...

I read yesterday and it take me one day long to complete it.
when I finish I just thought I nearly miss this one!

This is a wonderful story.. I feel bad for Sae but
Mayuki is the best!!

Thank you! and I will continue your work at "Time is good as gold" !
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki CH.30 <THE END> REPLIES!! <3
Post by: MayuxMatsuixMusic on April 06, 2014, 11:18:08 AM
what a lovely ending :wub: :wub:
Title: Re: My sister's Girlfriend! SaeMaYuki CH.30 <THE END> REPLIES!! <3
Post by: Kirozoro on July 10, 2014, 02:04:43 PM
Your fic was amazing

I love ur fic so much

I love how you made Mayuki in drama relationship but att he end they together