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Angel x Devil -Chapter 10 part 1 (13/11/2011)
« on: July 17, 2011, 05:15:28 PM »
hi guuuuuys, coz i have finished one of my fanfict now I'll try to make another one.  :grin: :grin: hope u like it.  :grin: :grin:

enjoooy  :thumbsup :thumbsup




What do u know about it?


Its divided into two parts.

Boy x girl....

Man x woman...

Peace x war....

Light x darkness...

Ying x yang...

Love x hate...

Good x bad....

Angle x devil....


Everyone have their own fate, their own destiny. Many people said we have angle around us and also evil.

angle would bring the goodness whether evil the opposite. Angle x devil are too different. They never can be friend, they never can be together.


What will happen if they together?

Could it be?

How could that be?

We'll just see~



douuu???  :huhuh :huhuh i have finished it until chapter 2 but i just gonna see how u think first about this guys.  :grin: :grin:
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Re: Angle x Devil (prologue)
« Reply #1 on: July 17, 2011, 05:21:06 PM »
Gah!!! You've posted it!!!!  :w00t:

I wanna first chap!!!  XD

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Re: Angle x Devil (prologue)
« Reply #2 on: July 17, 2011, 05:28:11 PM »
So interesting can't wait for 1st chapter  :)
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Re: Angle x Devil (prologue)
« Reply #3 on: July 17, 2011, 05:34:07 PM »
is this the special project you were talking baout sora-neechan?

anyway it's good.. looking  forward for the chap1..^^  :twothumbs


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Re: Angle x Devil (prologue)
« Reply #4 on: July 17, 2011, 05:38:36 PM »
^ now you mention it... i can't wait for the project also!!!  :cow:

go sora!!! :twothumbs

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Re: Angle x Devil (prologue)
« Reply #5 on: July 17, 2011, 06:34:25 PM »
ehh! so its not the special project??  :smhid

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Re: Angle x Devil (prologue)
« Reply #6 on: July 17, 2011, 07:42:23 PM »
It sounds interesting! I can't wait for more! Update soon............ I wonder who are this angel and Devil couple?

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Re: Angle x Devil (prologue)
« Reply #7 on: July 17, 2011, 07:46:21 PM »
Woot! New fic haha

Might want to fix the title though (angel).

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Re: Angle x Devil (prologue)
« Reply #8 on: July 17, 2011, 10:14:39 PM »
hi guuuuuys..... thanks for reading my fict.  :grin: :grin: :grin:

@dad and ceggie : nyahahahaha, this is my project with mom. dad havent finished yet. just wait :)))

Ninjatigerdemon : hehehe thanks for reading. I'll post the next now  :thumbsup

blughise : guess whooo???  :grin: :grin:

Arakawa : woakakakaka, i have just realized that.  XD XD thanks for telling me. i have fixed the tittle  :thumbsup :thumbsup

now pleas enjoy chapter 1  :cow: :cow: :cow:


Chapter 1

angel POV


One of the creature in this world. Angels live in heaven. People like angel. They even want to be angel. They said angel is pretty, they got wings , they can fly, they really generous and like to help other people, always do a good did etc. Angle is loved by many people.  That's what people think. Only that, they don't know that angel has a difficult task.


Somewhere in the heaven, there is an angels gathering. All the angels from each grade are gather. This is an usual gathering. Each angel will have their duty. Who will their protect and keep an eye. But, there is one group of angel that not come that day, they said they are the special one. They always take care of the special cases. They are the ultimate angels.

One day, one of the ultimate angels member is called. She is the youngest among the other angels and also the smallest, but she is powerful and have become the ultimate angel in a young age. Her name is minami. 

Minami is called to meet the lord coz something urgent have happen. She hurry fly to the main hall in angel kingdom.

"My Lord, I'm minami. I come as fast as I heard u call me." Minami kneel and bow to the lord

"Ah, minami finally. I really glad that u come as soon as u can." The lord said with a big hope

"Well, let's just to the point. I call u here coz I want u to do a favor to me." The lord then use his magic and show minami a child.

"U see, her name is minegishi minami." Minami look at the girl and nod.

"This girl is a good girl but unfortunately she doesn't have a long live."

"Hmm?! What do u mean my lord?"

"Well, this girl family is a priest and her ancestor is the demon slayer. One day when her ancestor do a ritual to kill the devil.the devil give a curse that if minegishi family have a female child she will die at the age of 17."

Minami shock to what the lord said.

"And how old she is now my lord?"

"She is now 16 years old and she is the only female child in minegishi family that's why the curse haunted her." The lord explain to minami.

"So, what should I do then my lord?"

"Uhm.... U must to protect her from the devil. I'm sure the devil lord will send someone to take her life."

"Ah, I see. But is there anything that could help the girl?"

Somehow the lord look at minami and grin "well, good question. There is one way, she must find her true love / someone who love her to confess to her."


"So I really hope u could help me. Will you?"

" your wish my lord."

"Okay then, start tomorrow u will keep an eye on her. U will disguise as one of the human girl and go to the same school as he. Remember, she shouldn't know that u are an angel and don't let anyone knows u are an angel. U can use your power to help her but don't let she knows. Do u understand?"

" my lord. I'll be doing my job properly."

"Good, now u can leave and prepare everything."

"Excuse me my lord."

Minami bow to the lord and leave the hall go to her home to prepare everything.

'This is gonna be a haaaaaard job~'


Devil POV


Devils is the enemy of the angle. They are bad, cunning, always lure the human to the darkness etc. Many people scared of them but some of them will even sold their soul to devil to make their wish come true, but again it will lead them to suffer.

For many century devil always disturb human. They will do anything to make people bow to them and become their follower. That's are their job.

In Devil world there also a rank for each devil. The highest will be the ultimate devil. This kind of devil should be handle with someone that as good as them like ultimate angel.

One day the Devil Lord call of one the ultimate devil member for an urgent matter. He calls His most favorite one. Her name is atsuko. Everyone call her "kuroi tenshi" means "black angle." She has an appearance like an angle but she lives with the devil. So she is one of the devil also. No one have ever could get away from her charming. That's why this urgent matter fits her. As the lord call her she immidiatealy meet him.

"Atsuko at your service my lord." She kneels and bow to the Devil Lord.

"Ah, atsuko my favorite child u finally come. Just relax, I got an interesting task for u." The lord devil said as give the young cute devil hug.

"What should I do this time my lord?"

The devil lord show atsuko a picture of the girl

"That is minegishi minami. She is the only one female member of minegishi family, the high priest that kill devil and demon. Your job is to take her life before she reach 17 years old."

"Owgh, I see. Its piece a cake my lord I can do that in the minutes." The young devil said full of confident.

"Tsk....tsk....tsk....don't be so sure atsuko u will have a rival in here."

"A rival?"

Once again the devil lord show her a picture

"She is your rival."

"Huh? An angel?"

"Not ordinary angel atsuko. She is the ultimate angel."

"Ah, I see. Well, don't worry my lord I'll make it as fast and as smooth as I can. Believe me."

"Okay then, start tomorrow u will disguise as one of the student in minegishi minami school. Do anything that can harm the kids live and don't let that angle ruin it. U got it?" The devil lord order.

"As u wish my lord." She then bow again.

"Very well, now u can go and prepare for tomorrow."

The young girl leave the devil lord chamber and show a smile in her face

That angel kind a cute~



Next i try to write for the chapter 3  :dozing: :dozing: :dozing:
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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 1) update 18 - 7
« Reply #9 on: July 17, 2011, 10:37:29 PM »
 XD it's going to be so interesting now
Minami vs atsuko  :cathappy:
I wonder what will happen now
Great chapter
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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 1) update 18 - 7
« Reply #10 on: July 17, 2011, 10:41:52 PM »
daddyyy cant wait for chap 2 now~~~  XD

update soon!!!  :bow: :bow:

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 1) update 18 - 7
« Reply #11 on: July 17, 2011, 11:24:19 PM »
Just as I thought It's ATSUMINA, my OTP. I thought Acchan will be the angel, but then I realize that won't make sense, because Takamina ain't a devil, but Acchan can  XD, especially when it comes to Takamina! and  will there be other couples too, aside from Atsumina and Mariko and Miichan?? Anways I'm looking forward to the next chapter! UPDATE SOON!

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 1) update 18 - 7
« Reply #12 on: July 18, 2011, 01:17:56 AM »
Yeah angel Minami and devil Atsuko!!!!!!!
It make me think about a cartoon named 'angel friends'

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 1) update 18 - 7
« Reply #13 on: July 18, 2011, 04:19:50 AM »
 :on woohoo: another Takamina + Atsuko fic! I can't wait for the next update!

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 1) update 18 - 7
« Reply #14 on: July 18, 2011, 04:45:39 AM »
NEW FIC  :w00t:
OMG it reminds me something  :grin: Now let's see if you can do better than the book I read  :grin:

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 1) update 18 - 7
« Reply #15 on: July 18, 2011, 08:23:27 AM »
Yeah annoter AtsuMina story  :wub: :wub:
Hahaha I wonder how angel Takamina will react when she'll meet devil Atsuko  :P
Can't wait to read chap2
Update soon please~~~~
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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 1) update 18 - 7
« Reply #16 on: July 19, 2011, 01:31:24 AM »
hi guys~  :cow: :cow:

thanks for reading.... :grin: :grin: sorry maybe i cant update fast now, my supervisor ask me to give my final porjct report every week now...  :( :( so i gotta to catch up with it too  :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop:

@Ninjatigerdemon : please keep reading so u will know what gonna happen  :grin: :grin:

@dad : here your request  :grin: :grin:

@blughise : dont worry, there will be another couple. u will know after read this chap i guess...  :thumbsup :thumbsup

@kahem : i remember acchan in kuroi tenshi  and taka in bird :rofl:

@AFLynx : please waiting for the update  :cow:

@bou-j525 : ahahaha, well, i dont know whether i can do better / not , but i'll do my best

@YumePouk : here are the chapter 2  :cow: :cow:

lets get started  :cow: :cow:


Chapter 2

minami POV

"MINAMIIIIII~" an angel squirrel dash to me.

"Urgh....yuko... Let me goooo~ "

"Not until u said what the lord said."

"Okay...okay....okay... I'll tell you."

Finally she let me go and I told her about everything.

"Ah, souka?! Its a hard task minami. But since its u I'm sure u can do it!" Yuko try to make me more confident.

"Yeah, thanks lot yuko. Anyway, is it okay for you to go around like this?" Well, yuko still on her punishment time so she is not free to wondering around.

"Naaaaaaah, its okay no prob. I have told the guard that I want to meet you so he let me go."

"Well, I just kind a worried."

"Hahaha, don't worry minami. I know u worry with me. But I gotta responsible to what I have done and u know that sister." I sigh but nod as what yuko said.

Well, yuko and me really close since we are a kid. She already looks like a sister to me. We made it to become the ultimate angel together. She is the greatest angel but one day she made a mistake. She fall for human and now she is been punished.

"Sooo, u will go tomorrow minami?" Yuko ask me

"Yeah, and I'll prepare everything today."

"Well, I heard u'll have a rival. Be careful okay. Devils could be so sweet but don't ever trust them." Yuko give me an advice as give me a hug.

"I know sist. Thanks."

"Well, I gotta go now. Don't worry little sister I'm sure u can do it and I'll be watching over u."

"Heeeey, I'm not little."

Yuko just chuckle

"Say my regards to tomochin too okay."

She nods and fly leaving me. Whether I back to my place and prepare everything.


Atsuko POV

"Tomoooooo~ I'm home~"

"Owgh, acchaaaaan~ u back. Come here....come here..." Tomo hurry grab my hand and guide me to sit beside her.

"Tell me what the lord said?" Tomo really curious to what lord have said to me.

"Well, I've got a special task from the lord." I said as wink to her

" u have to do?"

"Yeeeaaah, I gotta to get rid a person. Buuuuut, I got a rival." I smile to her and show her the picture

"Huh? Him?"

"Heeeey, the one u call "he" is "she" ."

"Owgh, sorry its just that she looks like a guy." I could hear tomo chuckle.

"Well, she kind a cute though." Tomo look at her and frowned

"Don't tell me u like her?"

I could see her change of expression. "Naaaah, don't worry tomo."

"Glad to hear that." She said as holding my hand.

Well, me and tomo are best friend. We are the greatest devil and have the highest rank. But she has gone through a hard time. One day the lord give her a task. She has to separate a human couple. In the mission she must face one of the ultimate angel. This angle always protect that human. Time passed and during that day she learn something. She learn to love someone. She has made a mistake. She fell for the angel.

Its not one side love. The angel lord found out about this and gonna punish the ultimate angle but she bow to the angel lord and said its all her fault. So, the ultimate angel got punished until now.

She try to forget about her but actually deep in her heart she still love her. I really don't know what is love. Its to complicated.

"So, acchan, u will go tomorrow?" Tomo ask me

"Yeah, and I wanna prepare right now."

"Okay then, I'll gonna prepare some magic portion for you too."

Tomo said and leave me alone there.


in the human world

"Miichan, where are u going?"

"Just go for a walk mom. Don't worry."

"No, u can't go. Now just go inside. Today you have to do some ceremony with uncle."

"But....but mooom...."

"No but. U know u almost already reach that age. We don't won't anything happen."

"Okay, fine. But tomorrow let me go to school. Alone. How about that?"

"Okay. Now let's come inside."

'Tomorrow I'll make sure no one stalk on me when I go to school.'



douuu???  :huhuh :huhuh i'm working on the 3rd chap now.  :grin: :grin: :grin: i should make interesting meeting  XD XD

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 2) update 19 - 7
« Reply #17 on: July 19, 2011, 01:48:55 AM »
Kinda hard to imagine Yuko as an ultimate angel, with her level or pervertedness and all  XD

But nice story!  :twothumbs

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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 2) update 19 - 7
« Reply #18 on: July 19, 2011, 03:08:57 AM »
Thanks for updating
I wonder how it would be when they finally meet
Can't wait for the next chapter  :)
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Re: Angel x Devil (Chapter 2) update 19 - 7
« Reply #19 on: July 19, 2011, 04:19:01 AM »
 :onioncheer: yay! update!

am I sensing a TomoTomo pairing as well?  :nya:

nice fic! will look forward for the next update!  :on GJ:

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