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Offline blakwhite

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Last 12 hours for polling, this isn't looking good.

If the pairing of your liking isn't chosen, they will still be in the story, just not the main-focus,

Pairing chosen would have their own chapter of POV, whereas connecting the story, please continue voting.

At the final, 3 hours, the poll's word would be changed to the pairing, by then, I would just modify the title, so keep a lookout.

Too much pressure for chapter 2 x.x

I might be making a happy and sad ending, would it be fine?

happy and sad ending?  :shocked

im fine with it :D

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Re: Homeless [Polling ends, Draw, Atsumina and Tomotomo, 2 versions)
« Reply #21 on: November 04, 2013, 06:40:40 AM »
hey Zorxie-chan

you wanna explain to us, or me, how the anime connects with each couple?  :?

I think you should make both of them happy ending instead of a happy and sad… Its just not fair if AtsuMina gets the sad one, we're already sad, no need to add to the pain :P
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Re: Homeless [Polling ends, Draw, Atsumina and Tomotomo, 2 versions)
« Reply #22 on: November 04, 2013, 07:31:01 AM »
HELL YEAH !!!
i knew it atsumina is pokemon  :hiakhiakhiak:

well, i hope you dont make atsumina suffer  :shifty:

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Re: Homeless [Polling ends, Draw, Atsumina and Tomotomo, 2 versions)
« Reply #23 on: November 04, 2013, 08:25:19 AM »
Just so you know, tomotomo shippers have already suffered due to lack of tomotomo fics, so don't make tomotomo suffer... :shifty: :shifty:
« Last Edit: November 04, 2013, 08:33:50 AM by stv_wong »

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Homeless Chapter 2 (Atsumina) and Replies
« Reply #24 on: November 04, 2013, 06:25:15 PM »
Lovely replies:
@TakaminaBG I'm happy you found it interesting:)   :heart:
@dark48 #BigSmile   :heart:
@blakwhite Hahahaha, Nevermind about that, my heart's too weak to choose the couple:P   :heart:
@Yuki88 Hehehehe, Maybe it's good if it's Kojiyuu, kinda decreasing in amount.   :heart:
@kuro_808 Hahahaha, I knew somebody is going to ask that question, but probably not, it just sound similar:3   :heart:
@AshuraX If it's your own personal preference it's never mainstream:0   :heart:
@Kirozoro I'm also really interested in the outcome hahhahaa.   :heart:
@Seigus Special thanks for the reply to my Polling message, got doubts about it hehehee.  :heart:
@Tam_atsu Depends on your vote, but Kojiyuu is definitely inside  :heart:
@lezperv Pervie-chan:D, Let's hope so, but I have another pairing in mind:P  :heart:
@Konoe I hope so too, Shhh secret  :heart:
@kurogumi Hahahaha 100% passed from the bottom:P, Joking dont hate me  :heart:
@gek geki Hehehehe, Another ace student, I'm proud of you *Cries*, I'm just playing  :heart:
@Terragen Hehehehe, Not going to put a bad remark, later y'all hate me :heart:
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@blakwhite Hope I didn't disappoint you Sensei *Bows*  :heart:/ Hope can you threaten me with a knife, Please spare me!.
@lezperv Pervie-chan it's in the bottom, just by ranking, that's all
@stv_wong I can't tell you my initial plan:), Another knifer, gotta escape!


Thanks for taking interest in my story, hope I haven't disappointed y'all.
I'm starting with Atsumina, Apologies to Tomotomo fans.
For some who don't know why I had placed anime names as the polling, I'm placing it from my most favorite to moderate, the pairings aren't connected to the placement.
One piece's my favorite, Pokemon second, I was obsessed with Strawberry Panic for an entire year, but gave up since people kept pairing Shizuma with Nagisa instead of the cute and cuddly Tamao.
I love avatar, that's why I have Tyzula as a profile picture, and lastly my childhood anime, Doraemon, Actually still watching it, since my little sister likes it too.
Enjoy the short chapter, most of you would be thinking, all the commotion for this crap? Screw this author, burn him in hell.





Homeless:Chapter 2 (Atsumina)

Grasping gently around her wrist, I was unexpectedly awestruck by her foundation, although it was undeniably covered in dirt, it was milky smooth, matching her soothing voice and obsidian eyes.

My heart began pounding in a weird rhythm from the contact, but brushed away the thoughts, concentrating on lookout and guidance.

As we were progressing with the journey, a gut feeling tingles my sense, signal a problem with every footsteps of silence.

It urges me to face her, in which I obliged; I tilted around pausing on my tracks, staring at the cause of my worries.

Damn! I should have noticed that earlier, I cussed at myself, angered by my stupidity and unobserving [Not a real word] mistake, that could jeopardise her safety.

“What’s wrong” She politely asked, probably unsure of my thoughts.

I looked towards her, her mouth was visibly shown from below, so kissable, I quickly shook away the thoughts and smiled, averting her worries away.

'Stop thinking of lewd thoughts' I began unlacing my shoes, peeling them off from my foot, lifted them up with two fingers and generously offered them.

“But-ut!, Please don’t worry about me, I’m used to this” She bravely smiled, never concerned about her bruised and injured foot, fairly cut from walking.

“Not to worry, I still have my socks on” I persuaded, however she again gently rejected my offer.

Since it isn’t my attitude to allow a deserving person, to further injure herself, I hastily kneeled down, forcefully lifting her calf, stuffing her feet carefully into each.

Why does this feel familiar, like I had seen or heard this before.


“There-there-there! Nice and cozy” her bag began to moisten as she shyily faced downwards avoiding eye-contact, I softly patted her head and continued home

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Finally we reached ‘Home’, Passing through the gates together, hand in hand, I unlocked the doors.

“This’s your new home, make yourself at home” I divert my eyes over, but since then, her gaze has never touched mine.

“What’s wrong? You don’t liked it here?” Finally she faced up, her coverage completely drenched in tears, the sparkle in her eyes increased in radiant. “I’m just too happy, Thank you” She motioned for a hug, but flinched, backing off mildly, but I clasped her firmy, pulling her into warm embrace.

“From now on, you’re family”
Once upon a time, There lived two beautiful girls.
One named Watanabe Mayu.
Another named Kashiwagi Yuki.
They fell in love with each other and married.
The end.

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Mayuyu :heart: Yukirin

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In that poll I wanted vote for Strawberry panic or for Avatar. Hard choise ;)
Well anyway thanks for update. :bow:
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Tnx for the update

Acchan is so caring ~~~~
but a little perverted hehe
Takamina is so shy

Pls. continue

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Ah... I didn't changed my vote...because One Piece is my fav.

But I'm happy for the winning vote...because Atsumina is my fav. pairing...

Thank you for the update

Very nice... what kind of interaction Atsumina is going to be having now that they live together?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you again...

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It Atsumina :3 YAY

But i hope to see Mayuki couple

I got so confuse at the poll quest, i try to guest which one was Mayuki but i guest wrong  :cry:

At least there Atsumina  :w00t:

Please update  :bow:

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I also didn't change my vote because I believed in pokemon. Mayuki was one piece all along. :banghead:

Patiently waiting for the next update.

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Re: Homeless Chapter 2 Updated (Atsumina) and Updated Replies, 4/11 <3
« Reply #30 on: November 05, 2013, 01:07:06 PM »
I want acchan to be homeless and minami as the savior guy or something. ........ :cow:  :deco:
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Re: Homeless Chapter 2 Updated (Atsumina) and Updated Replies, 4/11 <3
« Reply #31 on: November 05, 2013, 01:30:13 PM »
I want acchan to be homeless and minami as the savior guy or something. ........ :cow:  :deco:

Me too...
I want acchan to be the homeless and takamina the savior

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Re: Homeless Chapter 2 Updated -Acchan or Takamina as Saviour and Homeless
« Reply #32 on: November 05, 2013, 02:34:46 PM »
i will spare your life now zorxie - chan  :hee:

but i confuse, who is the homeless and who is the saviour  :dunno:

and i hope you update soon  :shifty:

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Re: Homeless Chapter 2 Updated -Acchan or Takamina as Saviour and Homeless
« Reply #33 on: November 05, 2013, 03:46:39 PM »
Heheh I did not notice that XD
I guess that is just what my mind registered while I was reading
the chapter.

Well in most fics acchan is the dominant one so it would be nice
if Minami were the saviour here

Acchan's Knight in Shining Armor heheh

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Re: Homeless Chapter 2 Updated -Acchan or Takamina as Saviour and Homeless
« Reply #34 on: November 05, 2013, 04:43:08 PM »
Heheh I did not notice that XD
I guess that is just what my mind registered while I was reading
the chapter.

Well in most fics acchan is the dominant one so it would be nice
if Minami were the saviour here

Acchan's Knight in Shining Armor heheh

i agreed, takamina will be acchan's knight in shining armor   :on asmo:

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Re: Homeless Chapter 2 Updated -Acchan or Takamina as Saviour and Homeless
« Reply #35 on: November 05, 2013, 11:33:22 PM »
I'm actually voting for Savior Atsuko and homeless Minami XD

Idk why, I just like it when Minami doesn't know anything and being all cute, while Atsuko is struggling to jump the girl XP haha
Thats a bad example. I like cat-like, child-like, animal-like Minami who doesn't really know much while I like Atsuko to be all protective, helping Minami being human  :shy2: but I guess in this case, help Minami having a home? idk…

anyway, update soon Zorxie-chan
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Re: Homeless Chapter 2 Updated -Acchan or Takamina as Saviour and Homeless
« Reply #36 on: November 06, 2013, 12:07:36 AM »
I wanted acchan to save takamina. Also taste when takamina acts as innocent.

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Re: Homeless Chapter 2 Updated -Acchan or Takamina as Saviour and Homeless
« Reply #37 on: November 06, 2013, 12:53:42 AM »
I'm not voting but to read that first part I wished to know it rather than do this :nervous
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Re: Homeless Chapter 2 Updated -Acchan or Takamina as Saviour and Homeless
« Reply #38 on: November 06, 2013, 05:40:14 AM »
yeah!! atsumina!!

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Re: Homeless Chapter 2 Updated -Acchan or Takamina as Saviour and Homeless
« Reply #39 on: November 06, 2013, 06:09:27 AM »
@Zita No problem, as long as you are satisfied:)
@dark48 I haven't really chose who's actually the homeless, but is Takamina or Acchan the more dominant?
@cisda83 Yes, let's be Monkey D people, hahahaha, next update would be awhile.:)
@Kirozoro I hope there is Mayuki too :P, probably yes, haven't really thought about it, But I love Mamarin and Mayu-ka-san.
@Konoe Yeah haven't thought about it, damn it, should have known earlier that Acchan and Takamina loves one piece, since Takamina cosplayed as Ruffy, and Acchan watched One piece Z 3 times.
@saeyukilover Probably it would be, I would have to revised the entire story in mind, to fit them into.
@olive29 Actually I'm not really sure, since my initial couple in mind was Mayuki.
@blakwhite Somebody please call the cops, blak has stopped harassing me with a blade, hahahahaa, lots of people sure like a midget knight:P
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@dark48 Acchan would actually be the dominant, since she is rather aggressive in the perverted ways.
@lezperv Pervie-chan, I would reconsider everything before publishing, but it would be a while, I want to take a time to revise my story
@Mina It's a little draw, but I would have to think about it:)
@kuro_808 Kuro, when I decide I would post it alright:), before chapter 3
@Haruko hehehehe, Atsumina gogo Power-rangers.... a blast from the past hahaha.



I won't be updating soon, as I am currently challenging myself to type all different stories ranging from comedy to romance to angst and steamy:P, currently typing a steamy story, Mayuki of course:P

I don't know whether you all have this problem, but I have literally 53 unfinished story stuck in my mobile phone, whenever I copied it over to post, I would spot mistakes and withheld the story for postpone.

Who would you guys like to be the homeless? If you don't decided I could do it, Muahahahahaa. Because in all honesty I haven't went through it......

Next updated would be a while, not going to be all fluffy, maybe their will be problems ahead.

Love you guys for reading.
Once upon a time, There lived two beautiful girls.
One named Watanabe Mayu.
Another named Kashiwagi Yuki.
They fell in love with each other and married.
The end.

Yukirin :heart: Mayuyu
Mayuyu :heart: Yukirin

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