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Title: Time is good as gold - CH. 44(MaYuki) | 12/06/2021
Post by: cmze on November 04, 2012, 09:22:54 AM
                                  ~Time is good as gold~

Hello everyone.. another fanfic? Yeahh my sister's girlfriend is almost over so i had to make another one! :P

My cyborg:  Feeling happy cause the new story line! :) 

I'm everything you need: Feeling uninspired!x_X;

Wild love: Every chapter gives me headache..because so much ideas on my head!!  ;)

Akb boarding school: keeping it longer cause it's my only fanfic which have my many pairings! xD  (but also think it's time to end)

My sister's girlfriend : Everything good has to end! :D

Kojijuu fanfic: Yep this one has to end too! :P

Loving you: It's to replace my sister girlfriend.. i think hope is going to be good as that one ^^;

Time is good as gold: I wanted to make a sad fanfic so hope you like it.. (MaYuki btw)

                                             CH. 1

So many people around me,touching me and checking my pulse..

"I'm okay as long she's by my side.." i tried to murmure but they didn't hear me cause my voice is not strong

"Doctor her pulse is dropping!" A nurse says worried

"They're carrying me on a stretcher and now i can't hear a thing that they're talking but does it really matter listen to them?"

"No,because i don't wanna hear anyway! i'm happy couse what i got in this short period.. i been in love,i been out of love, i been mad,i been sad,i been hungry"

But those feelins are nothing compare to her smile..

"I'll never forget that smile and also the name of the one who owned it.."

"Kashiwagi Yuki.." I murmure while i look up to the lights of the hospital that are on the ceiling

Many people had the wrong description of her..

*They would say she is strong (i would say she's vulnerable)

*They would say she has everything thag anyone wants ( i would say she's lonely)

The would say she's cruel (i would say she's just a kid)

*They would say she's unpredictable (i would say she's unique)

*They would say she's cold  (i would say she's sweet)

*They would say she's heartless (i would say she has too much love to give)

*They would call her black (i would call her Yukirin)

 The beginning: Before the little pov

In one of the most expensive girls school in Japan..

~Outside the headmaster office~

 "Yuki chan why you insist to not repect our teachers, Look where it got you to the principal office and i think they called your parents!" A handsome tomboy girl says while sits next to her friend

Yuki only looked other way annoyed

"Sae chan maths is about to start,let's go!" A girl says while takes her arm to pull her up

Sae sighs and gets up"Rena chan, i wanna stay here supporting Yuki chan!" she says complaining

"i think Yuki chan want us to go..Now" Rena says while pushes Sae with her

Yuki ignore the two and waited for her parents to come

Soon the headmaster's secretary told her to enter to the office

~Insisde the office~

Yuki sitted in front of the headmaster

"So Kashiwagi san when are you going to stop coming to my office?" The headmaster asked

Yuki ignored her

"i called your parents..*noise of the door opening*

Yuki smirks then turns her head and her smirk fade away when she saw her butler coming closer

"You again!" She shouted mad as she get up

"Kashiwagi san" The butler says shocked

"They are never going to come!" Yuki murmured looking other way

"They're on a business trip!" The butler says as she sits next to Yuki

Yuki runs away from the office pushing away the secretary who was entering to the office bringing coffee

"Get off my way!" Yuki says as she pushes her

"Kashiwagi san!" The headmaster shouted

"don't worry we'll pay for everything.." The butler says moving her head side to side

~Outside in the hall~ was already lunchtime so everyone was on the halls walking or chatting

"Yuki chan.." Someone says and grabs her by her arm

Yuki looked at the girl "let go bitch!" she says as she pushes her to the lockers

"Yuki chan!" Sae says worried but then someone grabbed her hand

"don't.." Rena murmured serious

Everyone looked at the scene

"what's wrong with you?"  Another girl with short hair asked as she helps the first girl to get up

"That's not of yor bussines!" Yuki says mad as she walks away with a black aura

Everyone moving of her way..

"Thanks Jurina!" The girl says

"Don't worry Sasshi!" Jurina replies with a smile then looked at the figure who was already many steps forward and pouted

"That girl.. i wish she'll pay everything she does to anyone in this school!" Jurina murmured

"Her family gives big donations to this school so she's the Queen!" Another girl says as she picks Sasshi's books from the floor

"Yui.." Sasshi says then smiled

~After a few minutes~
Yuki entered to her room still mad and started to destroy everything around

 "who needs you?" she shouted as she throws all the things that was on her desk on the floor then used a bat to destroy the tv

Sae and Rena stood outside hearing her friend shouting and destroying everything inside the room

"what are you looking at?" Sae asked to some girls who were also listening

*The girls walked away*

Soon Yuki got tired of crying and shouting so she throwed herself on bed and fell sleep

*Once Rena and Sae notice that they went to their room*

~After a few hours~

Mayuyu Are you sure about that? A sad mother asks as she watches her doughter putting her clothes inside a bag

"Mom,i'm gonna be fine that's school is amazing and i really wanna study there!" Mayu replies with a smile

"but.. you know.." Mayu's mom says sad

"Mom *sighs* i wanna live as a normal teenege girl before dying.." Mayu says as walks closer and hugs her mom

"You're my special child and you're not going to die!" She says as she kisses Mayu's head

Mayu breaks the hug and closes her bag "Now take me to that school!"

~Inside the car~

"You know i'm really proud of you.." Mayu's dad says with a smile

Mayu smile as she looks through the window

"entering to a rich kids school,it's not an easy thing so good luck!" Mayu's dad says

"Thanks.." Mayu says

"You know Mayu you always been strong,your stupid doctor thought you wouldn't make it to 16 years old but here you are!" Her dad says while drives

*Mayu's mom hit him on his head with a newspaper*

Mayu smiles

They got to the gates

"Those are big gates..." Mayu thought as they passes

(They got to the school)

Mayu's dad got out of the car "This place looks like a castle!" he said stunned and took her bag

"I can do it myself!" Mayu says as she gets out and takes the bag

"You have your pills there honey! right?" her mom asks

"yes!" Mayu replies then she kisses her mom and dad and walks away inside

*The two worried parents entered to the car and left*

Mayu looked amazed everything inside the school "this place is totally different from my other school!" she murmured as she walks the hall and everyone looks at her

"Hello new girl.. i'm Matsui Jurina!" a girl says as she extends her hand

Mayu was shocked first but then shook her hand "i'm Watanabe Mayu!" she replied with a smile
 
"You're pretty" Jurina says smiling

"Oh.. thanks!" Mayu says feeling strange

Jurina let go Mayu's hand  "you have to go to the secretary to tell you where's your room and give you your uniforms and books!"

"okay where she is?" Mayu asked

"In the other building,this is the building of the rooms passing the basketball court and the running track you'll see a big building that one is the classrooms,headmaster and secretary building!" Jurina says as she points to the other building

Mayu sighs "Thanks Jurina!" she says as she walks away

"be carefull with the players there..at this hours Black is running" Jurina murmured

As she walks,she couldn't help admire the big campus the school have

So many girls making sports

Mayu stopped walking and looked at the girls playing basketball "i wish i could do that.." she murmure sad as her right hand reach her chest

"hey!" Someone shouts then pushed Mayu and rolled on the floor with her

"Yuki chan.." Rena says

Mayu was on top of the other girl

Both had eye contact for a moment till the taller girl pushed Mayu off her

"Are you stupid or blind?"The taller girl asked yelling mad as she gets up

"Sorry.." Mayu replied as she gets up

"Yuki chan calm down!" Rena says

Yuki takes Mayu by her arm " Look at my knees i'm bleeding!" she says as she presses tigher on her arm while she looks on Mayu's eyes

"you're hurting me!" Mayu says in pain also looking at Yuki

"hey let go!"  A girl says
 
"Jurina.." Mayu says

Yuki let go Mayu's arm and turned to look at Jurina "you stupid kid again!" she says

"Let's go Mayu.." Jurina says serious

Yuki pouted "just because she's your adopted sister!" she murmured looking at Rena then walked away

Rena looked other way sad then followed her friend

Mayu and Jurina looked at the older girls walking away

what's wrong with her? Mayu asked

what's not wrong with her? Jurina answered

Jurina helped Mayu with everything and even led her to her room which was the same as her

We're roomies! Jurina says smiling and hugging Mayu
while she opens the door

Ta-da! Jurina says showing the room

*It was a cool room a littler,two desks,a tv and many other things*

"My bed is this one!" Jurina says as climbs to her bed

Mayu smiles "okay i'll take the one down.." she says as he puts her bag on it

Jurina gets down "i'll bring some snacks to celebrate wait for me!" she says as she leaves

Mayu nods then starts putting out the things of her bag while she puts her things on her desk she notices a mirror on the wall

She looked herself at it and  fixed her hair then opened a few buttons of her shirt

"It's a new start please don't ruin it!" Mayu says as she sees the scar on her chest then sighs

TO BE CONTINUED!! COMMENT!!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.1
Post by: chiqinna on November 04, 2012, 09:50:55 AM
great intro as always cmze-san~  :thumbsup
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.1
Post by: Akblaire48 on November 04, 2012, 10:15:42 AM
I LOVE IT...MAYUKI  :wth

Please update asap  :bow:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.1
Post by: kurogumi on November 04, 2012, 10:24:40 AM
Cmze-saaaaaaaaan!!! I loved it! Love it!!

This brand new story...aaah now im really confusing which one that's may favorite
If my sister girl friend almost end...maybe this new fic its the first on after Loving U and wild love or or maybe...in the future it will be my first one favorite...,cmze-san why you are so good making a good story?

Yeah sad story its a good one more drama more tears...and more love LOL

Thank for this new fic cmze-san...and i'm still waiting for all your fic...ah this one is really get my heart.."Time is good as gold"
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.1
Post by: clubhappy on November 04, 2012, 11:26:21 AM
Yay new Mayuki fic!!! I love it! But I can guess it would be a sad fic? Hope it'll have a good ending  :)
Thanks a lot cmze-san.
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.1
Post by: Chanaline on November 04, 2012, 12:26:06 PM
WooooooooooooOOOOOOh  :w00t:

I love it!!!! You have a lot of idea, Where do you find them? :)

MAYUKI!!! Wahahahaha! :heart:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.2
Post by: cmze on November 04, 2012, 06:42:41 PM
                                  ~Time is good as gold~
                                             CH. 2

Alarm clock ringing!! 

Mayu wakes up fast and turns it off then looks at Jurina who is still sleeping calmly 

"How she can sleep after hearing such a noise?" Mayu wondered while the door slowly opens showing a tall good looking skinny girl 

"who are you?" The girl asked 

"This girl is friend of that Yuki girl.." Mayu thought "this is my room so i make the questions!" she answered 

"your room?" The girl murmured 

"Rena chan!" Jurina says happy 

"weren't you sleeping?" Mayu asked frowning 

"Whatever get ready!" Rena says coldly as she walks away 

Jurina sighed "i guess i can say goodbye to her sweet good mornings"

"How she opened our door?" Mayu wondered 

Jurina goes down "Mayu chan there are so many things you need to learn!" she says as she grabs her towel and her uniform 

Mayu also picks up her things 

~Walking the hall~ 

Rena walks mad the hall "Her room also? what a kid!" she thought 

Sae bumped on Rena who pouted and was ready to kick her butt

 as soon Rena noticed it was Sae she calmed..

 "Rena chan!"  Sae says smirking 

Rena looks at her friend "Sae chan.." she murmured then notice the dorm where she came out 

"To..mo..chin.." Rena whispers and frowns 

"well she's cold but hot!" Sae replied with a smile 

"whatever let's go!" Rena says smirking and pushing Sae with her 

*Once ready they went to the recreation area for breakfast*

"So Rena san it's not really your sister.." Mayu says while eats

"yep.." Jurina replies with a smile 

Mayu frowned "you know most of the people when they find out that they're not blood related with their relatives tend to be sad or depressed. Why are you smiling?"she asked looking at Jurina 

Jurina takes Mayu's hand "That's my secret.." she says with a smile then let go 

Mayu sighs "Okay changing the topic,do they have keys of all the rooms here?"

Jurina got serious"They have access to almost everything so try not to get in trouble or call the attention,it's better for you.. this is school is not good for the persons who entered by scholarships" 

"Why you say that?" Mayu asked 

Jurina sighed "i shouldn't tell you this but i like you.. there's a group in the school "the black queens"  in charge to kick out all the students with schoolarships.They bully them till they decide to go and even they got to the point to make them suicide so be careful!" she in a low tone of voice as she eats

Mayu looks around "what a school!?!" she thought

Everyone stopped talking and stare the three girls entering while they sit 

Mayu looked at Yuki who was with a expresionless face then turned to look at Jurina 

"They say she's the leader while Rena and Sae are her loyal weapons.." Jurina murmures looking with hate at Yuki 

*Soon the bell of the initiation to class rininged*

"c'mon Mayu!" Jurina says as she grabs Mayu's hand and takes her to her classroom 

"what about them?" Mayu asked as they walk through the campus to the other building

"i told you they have preference.." Jurina says as she walks 

Jurina left Mayu on her classroom while hers was next to Mayu's 

The teacher talked to Mayu ..

"I'm Shinoda Mariko.." She says with a smile as she extends her hand 

"Watanabe Mayu.." Mayu replies with a smile 

Now i see you're that girl that really high IQ right? The teacher asked 

Mayu looked down "yep!" she answers a little embarrased

Soon all the students entered to the classroom and Shinoda sensei introduce Mayu to everyone 

Everyone was nice to Mayu...

"This is isn't so bad after all.." She thought while she sits 

"Excuse me Sensei can we get in?" Yuki asked with a smile while Sae and Rena are behind her

"Those empty three seats in the middle.." Mayu thought as she looks at the three girls

"come in.." Shinoda sensei replies with a sigh

The three girls walked to their seats but Rena and Yuki couldn't help to recognize the cyborg girl 

*and for Mayu's bad luck Yuki sitted ahead of her*

Mayu couldn't help to feel a little unease 

"you three haven't miss much we were introduce your new partner Watanabe Mayu.." Shinoda sensei says 

Rena pouted "i can't believe this!" she thought

Yuki smirked then turned her head showing her perfect smile to Mayu 

"Hello Mayu! I'm Yuki.." she says extending her hand 

Rena looked at her friend "what's she planning?" she thought 

"Fresh meat!" Sae says with a smile also looking at Mayu 

~The hours passes fast and soon Mayu was in her room with Jurina trying to catch up everything~ 

"I'll go make some sports,would you be alright?" Jurina asked with a smile 

"yeah don't worry!" Mayu replied as she's catching up 

(Jurina closes the door)

Mayu stopped her writting and then thought of Yuki smiling at her and extending her hand 

"you have such a sweet appearence but you're nothing like that!" She murmured irritated 

~Meanwhile~(At pool side)

Note: The swimmers practice is cancelled cause the cleaning the pool 

"So how is she?" Rena asked a little jealous

"what do you mean? Mayu chan?" Jurina asked with a smile 

Rena just looked other way while Jurina surprised her with a back hug

"well she's cute but i rather you waking me up with your soft voice.." Jurina says with her chin on Rena's shoulder 

Rena looked other way trying to hide her red face

"Rena chan it's cute when she blushes.." Jurina says smiling 

Rena smirks "silly Jurina.." she says as she breaks their hug and hugs her again but this time more serious

After a few seconds Rena breaks their hug 

"i have to go.." Rena says sad 

"but Rena we just got here.." Jurina replies 

"Sorry.." Rena says as she walks away 

Jurina sighs then pouts 

~After a few hours~< Night time>

Jurina entered to her room and saw Mayu already sleeping on her bed still with her uniform on 

"What a girl.." Jurina thought while she was about to climb to her bed but something stopped her *a noise in the hall* 

Jurina opened her door and Yuki pushed her inside the room with a bunch of girls 

"Initiation night!" Yuki says smirking 

what?! Jurina replies

The bunch of girls grabs Mayu by her arms and legs and takes her out the room 

"Let go!" Mayu says as Jurina watches how they take her friend commanded by Yuki 

"oh common is going to be fun!" Yuki says as she puts tape on Mayu's mouth to shout her 

Jurina got out of the room and saw the same situation in other dorms Mayu wasn't the only one kidnapped 

"Rena what's going on?" Jurina asked 

"initiation night.. c'mon Jurina is going to be fun!" Rena says as she takes her hand 

TO BE CONTINUED COMMENT!! 

Btw I'm glad you like it!! where i get inspiration? by songs!! 
If u tell me a good song it helps me to inspire and also depends on the vibe of the song so last night i heard a sad one..
The song that inspire me to write my sister's girlfriend was.. kuchi utsushi no chocolate xD
For Akb borading school was lilwake maybe,Relax,kimishika,everyday
for my cyborg was Megumi hayashibara songs
wild love: Candle no shin
I'm everything you need: French kiss
Loving u: mostly romance privacy plus Akb

Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.2
Post by: Chanaline on November 04, 2012, 11:56:05 PM
So you find your idea in song... I wanna be like you: writing a good fanfic (With Mayuki of course) but I don't have any inspiration. Aaaah~!

Initiation night... What is it? (I know what it means) But Yuki don't do a very bad thing to Mayu she is weak!

I love Candle no shin

                               
If u tell me a good song it helps me to inspire and also depends on the vibe of the song so last night i heard a sad one..
The song that inspire me to write my sister's girlfriend was.. kuchi utsushi no chocolate xD
For Akb borading school was lilwake maybe,Relax,kimishika,everyday
for my cyborg was Megumi hayashibara songs
wild love: Candle no shin
I'm everything you need: French kiss
Loving u: mostly romance privacy plus Akb



So My sister's girlfriend comes from Kuchi utsushi no chocolate... I saw it in the metro part (I read this fanfic a lot of times... I think I know almost every scene XD)
I'm Everything you need comes from a French Kiss song ;) Aaah~! I wonder if they continue to get  new single even if Akicha go to JKT48 and Yukirin have a solo!

Thank you for all your fanfic I think Mayuki fans  are all spoiled by you!!!!!

PS:Sorry :bow: My comment is always disordered... Sorry! :bow:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.2
Post by: cmze on November 05, 2012, 12:10:37 AM
Thanks!!  :inlove:

i hope you get inspiration eventually and write your own MaYuki fanfic!  :bow:

i would totally read it!  :thumbsup

i hope french kiss still be ongoing!  :smhid

I can't wait for Yukirin  songs come out!  :grin:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.2
Post by: Akblaire48 on November 05, 2012, 03:40:43 AM
Thank you for the update!  :cow:
I really love your fix....Mayuki :heart:
Can't wait for the next chapter  :lol:
 :bow:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.2
Post by: BbSis on November 05, 2012, 03:42:19 PM
Here I was wanting to read a sad story and I find yours o/ good start *.* just curious about how this is going to develop.

I hope Mayuyu does not have a heart attack with that prank ><

Thank you o/
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.2
Post by: kurogumi on November 06, 2012, 01:36:27 AM
Waah mayuki! I'm wondering how they will develop their relationship


Initiation night..what will happen with mayu...
Is rena and jurina already date? Rena seem jealous when she's know jurina and mayu are roomate

C'mon mayu! Yuki need to be tamed by you LOL

Thank for the update cmze-san ...
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.3
Post by: cmze on November 06, 2012, 10:17:42 AM
                                  ~Time is good as gold~
                                             CH. 3

Soon all the girls kidnapped were in the court..

Yuki smirks "get her down!" she says as the leader

The other girls were quietly looking because Mayu was the last one

The girls dropped Mayu who hitted her butt and got fast mad 

"What the hell?" She asked mad but then felt a little intimidated for all Yuki's friends so kept quiet

Yuki smiles "so you might be wondering why you're here? well let me tell you this is your initiation night! it doesn't matter if your normal student or not(schoolarships),you have to get throught this like everyone on this side did!"

"what?no way!" Miyazaki says looking at all the girls on Yuki's side 

Rena smiled while Jurina who was next to her pouted "i can't believe you're actually enjoyinv this!" she murmured looking at her older sister 

"It brings good memories to me.." Rena says with a sweet smile 

Jurina sighed "me too but i'm worried about Mayu.."

Rena pouted and looked at Mayu who pouting while Yuki speaks 

Jurina took Rena's hand and gave a little squeeze "She's my friend.." she whispered 

"Before we start this game there is another thing I must say!" Yuki says as a girl appears from the crowd with a eggs cuvette

Yuki takes one egg and walks to the freshmen.She stands in front of Mayu "Nobody can touch her but me!" she says as she smashes the egg on Mayu's forhead 

Jurina pouted while everyone laughed 

Mayu removed the smashed egg from her hair 

Yuki smiled widely "So now go and hide!" she says still laughing 

All the freshmen started running cause the other girls were following them with eggs, flour,water balloons and those kind of things that are not fun in the middle of the night 

Rena smiles "It started let's go hunting freshmen!" she says as she pulls Jurina with her

(Everyone gone)

Mayu stood there in front of Yuki 

"What are you waiting for? Run!" The taller girl shouted laughing

Mayu rolled her eyes "this is the best you can do?" she asked feeling emotionless

(Note: If she could run,she would but she can't due her illness so she tried to play cool and fool Yuki) 

Yuki smile faded "what? are you saying?" 

Mayu smirks "Yeah, i forgot you're too stupid to speak" she says as she turns around and walks away 

Yuki pouted "hey.." she says mad as she walks mad behind  the younger girl. Unlucky for Yuki she didn't notice that there was leftovers of the egg she broke on Mayu's head on the floor so she end up sleeping and knocking out herself 

Mayu turned around and saw Yuki on the floor "what the.." she says as she walks closer and looks at Yuki 

Mayu smirked "now who's laughing Miss Arrogant?"

Then Mayu decided to take a closer look of Yuki's face "You're cute.." she murmured as her hand takes life on her own and strokes The taller girl's cheek 

Mayu gulped and retreat her hand "you're jerk!" she says to the sleepy Yuki as she gets up 

Mayu scratched her head then noticed he hair is sticky "gross! this is your fault!" she says and then something came to her brain.

Luckyly she was still wearing her uniform.She pulled out a marker from one of her pockets and started drawing on Yuki's face 

Once she ended her painting,she looked at it "you definitely do not look cute! she says smirking 

<Meanwhile WMatsui>

Jurina stopped walking and looked at Rena..

"what's wrong?" the older girl asks

"i just don't understand why you are so good to her,Yuki is mean!" Jurina retored 

Rena looked at the younger girl "She's not mean,you just don't know her!" she replied looking other way 

~Flashback~ Initiation night 3 years ago 

A 14 years old Rena Matsui was running through the room's building hall with her younger sister holding her hand 

"Rena chan what's wrong?" Little Jurina asks 

"don't talk Jurina!" Rena whispered as she touches Jurina's forhead "you're still sick with that cold!" she thought as she tries to open any door 

After trying many doors the Janitor's room was open

"Let's catch  fresh meat and let's have fun!" A good looking girl shouts 

Rena openned the Janitor's closet then pushes Jurina fast inside and closes the door 

"So you're planning to hide inside the janitor's closet,bad luck for you we close all the doors!" The leader of the gang says showing the keys to Rena 

"C'mon Acchan let's use the eggs already on her!" A girl says smiling 

*someone coughed* 

"ehh what was that?" Miichan asked 

"is there anyother girl around?" a tall girl asked 

Rena was nervous 

"Mari chan look around!" Acchan says

"Hey you bunch of idiots!!" A girl shouted from upstairs 

"ehhh Kashiwagi san.." Rena murmured as she looks at Yuki throwing water balloons from upstairs 

what? we're your senpais..you can't do that is your initiation!" Acchan shouted annoyed 

"BITE ME!!" Yuki shouted back and run away 

"Let's go for that one!" Acchan shouted and run after Yuki with all her gang

(Note: Yes,Mari chan is Shinoda Sensei!!)

Jurina opened to Janitor's door "Rena chan get in.." she called 

"i can't.. i have to help Yuki chan!" Rena says 

Jurina pouts while Rena closes the door "don't open this door unless i'll tell you too!" she says as she leaves 

~After a few minutes~ 

Rena founds Yuki eventually in the court all covered with 
flour laying on the floor 

"Kashiwagi san.." Rena called as she cleans Yuki's face 

Yuki shows her best smile and makes a sign of peace and love

Rena hugs Yuki "Thank you!" she whispers 

"just remind me not to mess with our senpais!" Yuki murmures still smiling like a winner 

"what an unique idiot but still.. we can be friends!" Rena thought then smiled 

~ Back to the present.. Next morning~ 

(Note: Mayu hid Yuki behind some bushes)

Yuki opens her eyes slowly and sees the blue sky "ehh!! what the hell?" she murmures as she notices the grass and gets up fast 

"did i sleep here all night?" Yuki thought as she walks to the room's building 

While Yuki walks everyone was looking at her and trying hard to not laugh 

Nobody say anything they just were looking at her while she walks to her room 

Sae gets out of her room and sees Yuki face to face "Ahhh! what the hell? what happened with your pretty face? now you look like Helga G. Pataki (refering to eyebrows!) 

"wha?what? what?" Yuki asked 

Sae politely asks for a mirror to a girl "just for a second is for my ugly friend there!" she says pointing at Yuki

"Give me that!" Yuki says irritated as she snatches the mirror and looks at herself 

"Oh My.." Yuki shouts as she fast goes to her room 

Everyone laughed like crazy 

Mayu and Jurina gave a high give 

~ After half an hour At the classroom~ 

Yuki entered to the classroom..

*nobody mentioned the what happened earlier but they have pictures of it on their phones*

Shinoda sensei ordered Mayu and Yuki to change seats now Mayu is ahear of Yuki..

<The class started>

"what if cut your hair?" Yuki whispered 

Mayu tenses up and puts her hair on her side 

Yuki smirked. She kept all day Mayu worried that she might do something to her

Soom it was time for P.E class..

Everyone changed their clothes fast and run to the basketball court while Mayu didn't change her clothes she just fallowed her partners to the court and sitted on the bench 

P.E teacher aproached to Mayu 

"I know about your condition if you want you can to your room if you want.." He says 

Mayu smiled "don't worry i like to watch!" she answered 

Yuki looked at Mayu smiling to their teacher and pouted *feeling a little jealous ^^*  

After a few minutes they started to play a basketball match 

"Sae is a really good player.." Mayu thought as she looks at them play with a sad luck 

The teacher got a call from the headmaster and left the girls playing 

Mayu was tapping her feet "i wanna play.." she thought 

Yuki grabbed the ball then stopped the game and walked to Mayu 

She putted herself in front of her "what you're too special to play with us?" she asked pouting 

Mayu looked other way 

"Or don't tell me the nerd can't play basketball?" Yuki asked with a smirk

Mayu got up mad " why you bother me so much? what did i do to you?" she asked shouting in front of everyone

"coming to this school!" Yuki replied throwing the ball on Mayu's chest luckily Mayu grabbed it then throwed aside 

Mayu got down from the bleacher and left 

~After the P.E class~ 

Mayu walked around the school with Jurina..

A girl smiles "Finally.. i was waiting all year,now i can buy Sae chan!" 

"And i can buy Tomochin!" Another one says smiling also

Mayu looked at the two girls and frowned 

Jurina smirked "you don't know what are they talking about? don't you?" she asked 

Mayu sighed "no idea" she replied hopeless 

"well this school have a charity event where you can buy popular girls like Sae chan,Tomochin,Kumin,Yuki etc (not Rena chan btw don't buy her!!) for one night..all the freshmen have to participate so prepare yourself if someone wants to buy you!" Jurina replies 

"I doubt somebody wants to buy me,nobody knows me and i'm cool with that!" Mayu says with a smirk 

Jurina smirks also..

TO BE CONTINUED!! COMMENT!! 
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.3
Post by: clubhappy on November 06, 2012, 10:51:19 AM
This is getting interesting~! I've taken a like to this fic! Thanks cmze-san.
So maybe Yukirin will buy Mayu  :D
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.3
Post by: Akblaire48 on November 06, 2012, 11:50:21 AM
It's getting more and more interesting :inlove:
YUKI starting to fall for MAYU !!!  :heart:  :cow:
Thanks for the updae I really enjoy  :mon love: :wriggly:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.3
Post by: kurogumi on November 06, 2012, 12:21:13 PM
Time is good as gold !! Is really your golden fic cmze-san!

I loved it...i can't said properly how i felt but its like a spark..firework or maybe a bomb! LOL its chessy of me but..seriously i have laugh a lot when i read this chapter...soo much funny think..

Yuki..she's LOL she's look soo stupid in front of mayu...
i think what yuki's going to do toward mayu's its going to be useless...she's lost her power when its about mayu,well maybe because mayu its too cute~


Lets see what yuki plans~ LOL
Maybe yuki will buy mayu...if that happen...yuki you need to prepare for something,mayu its so surprising person..be carefull or you will be tamed by mayu and became her pet LOL

Cmze-san i know you just update this one,but i already want the next...its too good this fic

Thank for the update
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.3
Post by: Chanaline on November 06, 2012, 01:01:59 PM
I love it... :inlove: :heart:

I like Yukirin she is too funny :lol:

Mayu I think Yuki will buy you hahaha

Edit:I forgot to say about the flash-back... Yuki is really cool, she rescue Rena!!! And when
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Yuki shows her best smile and makes a sign of peace and love

I was really happy that Yukirin is not so bad!!

Thank you! I wait for the next!!! :thumbsup
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.3
Post by: BbSis on November 06, 2012, 06:57:47 PM
Yeey! Mayuyu didn't have a heart attack \o/ instead she pissed of Yuki huahuahu that was funny^^

I wonder if is Yuki who is going to buy Mayuyu and 'torture' her *.*

Thank you for the update!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.3
Post by: yuukimoko on November 06, 2012, 07:55:34 PM
hmmm~ I hit myself so I could comment on this amazing fic.....

It's an honor to comment on one of your fantastic fics Cmze-sama! And Im sorry for being a silent reader....I really admire your work! I am just sad with myself that Im not as good as Cmze-sama.....

Eto, I like this fic very much! the begining was really interesting! Mayu and Yuki have a lot of problems on their own, but they are drawn to each other like magnets!

Oh, about the song thing, if you want I can send you an interesing play-list? you can say the way you want them,sad,happy,romantic, and Ill tell you some! Well In general I am a vocaloid fan so I know a lot of these....



Proof of Life - Rin Kagamine [English Subs + Mp3] (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2bAbNl3Rgmg#ws)
ahh~ its about wanting to leave something behind after you die.Really sad....it has another part but I thought this one worked for the emotions?

Sorry for being boring....really sorry! Please forgive me Cmze-sama! :(

It took me a while to chosse.... :oops:

eto....sorry if my review is boring...ill delete it and write a shorter one if you want..? ....anyway..I love this fic! and all your other ones! XD
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.4
Post by: cmze on November 06, 2012, 09:43:59 PM
Thank u! Thank u!!  :inlove:

i really love the second song.. I'm GONNA WRITE SO MUCH WITH IT THE VIBE IS PERFECT FOR THIS FIC!!!!  :bow:

Don't call me sama and yes i miss a lot your comments and many other comments but i think i got kinda used to the "thank you!"  :catglare:

So thanks to everyone!!  :cow:

Thanks Yuukimoko It makes so excited with your comment "i really thought no many people would like this one but great it worked even though i only write to please myself!!)  :shakeit:

Kurogumi is also really excited with this fic!! Thank u all :D




Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.3
Post by: Playgirlz on November 07, 2012, 03:36:21 AM
Oh oh oh oh you HAVE to update as soon as possible O___O I want to read it so badly ><

And what kind of game is this? lol buy the popular girls for on night? And also freshman?? I'm confuse this part

Btw, I love your works so much. I wonder where all the ideas come from?? xDDD Thank you, love it <33333333333
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.3
Post by: m00nchild on November 07, 2012, 07:07:02 AM
NICE FIC~
i wondering what illness that Mayu have,
something regrading to the hearts??
buying student for 1 night huh~!
Yukirin will buy Mayu?

Looking for the next update.
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.4
Post by: cmze on November 07, 2012, 07:37:12 AM
                                  ~Time is good as gold~
                                             CH. 4

~At the recreation area~

"That girl! That girl!" Yuki says mad as she sits

Sae looked at her mad friend and also sitted "wow she made you look stupid!" 

Yuki gave Sae a death glare "she'll pay me back!" 

<Flashback> In french class

Repeat after me "La Tour Eiffel est le frances fierté.."  the teacher says 

Yuki's accent was terrible so the teacher made her repeat again 

Someone laughed on the back for Yuki's accent and Yuki thought it was Mayu so she turned around 

"Can you do better nerd?" She asked yelling at Mayu 

Mayu got back to earth "what?" she asked as she gets up

"i asked if you can do better? you little.." 

Mayu interrupt the taller girl "it's not my fault you have a little brain!" she replied 

"what did you say?" Yuki asked mad 

"can you count to ten?" Mayu asked 

"Eh!" Yuki says looking at Mayu as counted fast" une, deux, trois, quatre, cinq, six, sept, huit, neuf dix ... Dix, neuf, huit, sept six, cinq, quatre, trois, deux, un"  

"Can you repeat that? if you can you can talk to me but you don't so" Mayu says and then sitted 

Everyone was quiet and Yuki didn't know what to do so she just sitted feeling embarrased and stupid

~End of the flashback~ 

Yuki took a deep breath then got up and walked away 

Sae frowned "where are you going?" she asked
 
Yuki walked around the campus for a few minutes till she found the freshman that gives her headache sitting on a bench reading something 

Yuki walked slowly behind her and snatched the paper 

"Hey!" Mayu says as she tries to get her paper back but Yuki was taller so she couldn't reach it 

The taller girl smirked "what's this?" she asked 

Mayu tries to catch the paper "give it back it's mine!" 

[( ) <- what Yuki says]

Yuki read the paper loudly "list of things to do.. 1.Fall in love (What a cutie!)  2.go to the beach with my love (so cheesy this thing!) 3.go to.. (eh!) 

"Yuki Baka! Baka!" A crying Mayu says as her she puts her hands on Yuki's chest not relizing that she's cupping the taller girl breast 

The two girls had eye contact then got red 

"Eh!" Mayu reacted and pushed Yuki who slipped on the floor then the shorter girl run away 

Yuki was in a sitting position then noticed that the paper was next to her,she grabbed it and save it on her blazer pocket 

~ At Mayu's room~ 

Mayu closed the door fast,she was still blushing and just by thinking about Yuki's soft chest makes her heart aches so she took a little bag where her pills were and took some to calm herself 

Once relaxed on bed,Mayu saw her hands "they are just perfect fit for my hands..what am i thinking? i'm such a pervert!" she murmured blushing 

For the next few days the two girls ignored eachother..

~The day of the event~

Kashiwagi San! I'm Kitahara Rie from the school paper is it truth you're not going to participate in today's auction?  she asked while the two walks the hall 

yeah that's truth! Yuki answered 

well such a bad news.. you have many girls who wanted to buy you! do you have other plans? Rie asks

no,i'm still going and to buy! Yuki says with a smile 

"seriously? who?" Rie asked 

"well that's a surprise!" Yuki answered as she walks faster and leaves the newspaper's girl behind 

~At the recreation Area~

"Sae chan we love you!" A bunch of girls shouts 

"i know try to buy me please!" Sae says with a cute pout

"Ahhhhhhh!!!!" All the girls screamed 

Mayu and Jurina looked at those noisy girls 

"they's re ruinning my ears!" Mayu says pouting 

Jurina kept eating 

"how can you eat with a noise like that?" Mayu asked 

"how can you just eat vegetables?" Jurina asked 

"i'm used to it.." Mayu says as she looks her watch then pulls out some pills from her pocket and took them 

"what are those?" Jurina asked with her mouth full 

"vitamins!" Mayu answered 

Jurina kept eating

Jurina chan please buy me! Mayu says 

"why?" Jurina asked 

"well i don't want to spend my time with somebody creely like those girls!" Mayu replies 

"ok,i think i can do that!" Jurina says 

"thanks!" Mayu replies

~After an hour~

Everyone were preparing for the auction,everyone was already gathering at the school's Coliseum 

Jurina was already in the buyers zone while the ones who just were watching were in other area 

Yuki made herself in the buyers zone also 

Jurina looked at Yuki and pouted 

Yuki smirked "ohh  look what we have here Rena's little sister!"

Jurina ignored her 

"I think i'm going to buy Rena she's so cute!" Yuki says teasing the younger girl 

Jurina pouted and soon the auction started 

 The headmaster gave some words about the charity event and bla bla bla..

The first one to appear in the in the runway was Sae giving a charming smile and a wink

*All the girls shouted for her showinb how popular she was with the ladies*

"$50!" The first girl says 

Sae played with her short hair 

all the girls shouted again 

$70

$90

$120

Sae smiled and winked again 

$170

$200 Another girl shouts 

"This is getting hot!" Sae thought

$220 Chiyuu offered 

"okay 220 1,2,3 selled to the girl with a black shirt" The man says smiling 

"Wow 220 just for a couple hours..i wouldn't spend my money like that!" Jurina murmures 

"Sometimes lonelyness make you do stupid things!" Yuki replied serious 

"Our next girl is Matsui Rena!" The man says 

Yuki smirked and offered "$70"

Rena was shocked cause Yuki was trying to buy her 

Soon Jurina pouted and offered $100 

Rena smirked "maybe she's just doing it to mess with Jurina!" she thought

another girl called Airin offered $130

"Airin.. that's weird" Rena thought 

Jurina offered $150 while Yuki offered $170 

Airin offered $200

Yuki offered $240

Jurina sighed "got my money.. whatever!" she offered $300 

*Everyone was shocked*

Yuki only smirked while Airin pouted 

"Okay 1..2..3 selled to the girl with green slips!" The man says smiling 

I win..I WIN!! Jurina shouts smiling "ehh wait a second! what about Mayu?" she thought then facepalmed herself

Then was the turn of some unknow girls..

"Our next girl and the last is Watanabe Mayu.." The man says while Mayu comes out 

She smiled and she was wearing a white simple dress that suited her 

Everyone shouted "Kawai!" 

Mayu blushed and soon a girl offered $60 

another girl offered $100 

Sasshi offered $130

Milky offered $160 

Lovetan offered $180 

180 at 1..

Yuki offered $200 

what!? why she's offering money? Mayu thought 

Sasshi offered $220 

Yuki pouted then smirked and offered $300 

"No way!" Mayu murmures 

Sasshi sighed and offered $320 

"c'mon You can't buy me!" Mayu murmures with sweat drops on the side of her head

Yuki offered $400 

Mayu pouted "i'm so dead.." 

"What?!?" Sasshi reacted

"i'm rich!" Yuki says with a smile 

Sasshi gives up 

"Sold to Kashiwagi San!" The man says happy 

 Mayu's inner self: NOOOOO!!! 

The auction ended with a speech 

"okay remember that it's only till 12:00 pm and don't forget to give the midnight kiss!" The president council says with a smile 

~Backstage~

"I'm sorry Mayu.. i was going to buy you but She said she wanted to buy Rena so" Jurina says beggin for forgiveness

Mayu sighed "don't worry.. it's going to be a long night!" she murmured 

"hello there,sorry for interrupting well i'm not really sorry so let's go!" Yuki says as she takes Mayu's by her wrist and takes her somewhere 

"stop! stop!" Mayu says but Yuki wasn't listening and took her to her room 

~Inside the room~

Yuki took off her shirt 

Mayu covered her eyes "what are you doing?" she asked terrified and all red 

Yuki took off her skirt then took another clothes from a drawer and put them on 

Mayu was still with her eyes covered 

Yuki looked at the younger girl then got closer to her,she could feel that Yuki was standing in front of her "is she naked?" The younger girl wondered as she puts her hand on her chest and takes deep breaths 

"Hey are you okay?open your eyes!" Yuki says while shakes Mayu 

"no, i don't wanna see you naked and die!" Mayu shouted 

Yuki laughed like crazy "what would i be naked in front of you?" she asked 

"what?!" Mayu slowly opens her eyes and sees Yuki dressed with a big tshirt and shorts 

Yuki smirked "don't tell me you thought i..wow you're such a pervert,i thought it was an accident when you gropped my chest a few days ago but i guess i was wrong!" she says while covers her chest 

"No! no! i'm not a pervert!" Mayu says all red 

"Are you sure?" Yuki asked teasing 

"what? no! you're the pervert that brought me to her room and started taking off her clothes!" Mayu replies 

"first those clothes are unconfortable and second i brought you here for this!" Yuki says as she points to her desk which have a bunch of books and papers on 

"what's that?" Mayu asked 

"my homework.. you know i'm pretty lazy so i bought you to make my homework (all month homeworks to be exact!"  Yuki says smirking 

"A whole month homework!" Mayu says looking all the papers 

"Yeah that's nothing to you.. a first class smartass so c'mon i didn't bought you to talk to me!" Yuki says as she turns on the tv and her play 3 

(Note: Yuki's butler repair the room a few days ago) 

"what i got myself into!" Mayu thought with a depressed aura as ahe sits and starts making Yuki's homework 

Yuki looked at Mayu and then smirked and kept playing tennis 

"So much homework!" Mayu shouted irritated 

"c'mon Mayuyu you can do it!" Yuki says smirking while plays 

Mayu pouted and kept writting 

~ After a few hours~ 

Yuki noticed that Mayu fell sleep on her desk,she looked at the computer "almost done..after all you're really smart so smart that scares me!" she thought then Yuki stole a glance to the watch 12:30 pm 

She looked at Mayu sleeping face again "you have to give me my midnight kiss" she thought as she leans closer and gives her a kiss on her forhead 

Mayu moved which caused Yuki to freak out for a moment but tried to wake the younger girl up but it was impossible so she decided to carry Mayu to her bed then putted the blanket on her and also get on bed to sleep

TO BE CONTINUED!! COMMENT!!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.4
Post by: matsuru on November 07, 2012, 08:25:41 AM
this chapter so funny..the auction..hahahaha XD

thank you for a faaasstt update!!  :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.4
Post by: BbSis on November 07, 2012, 09:15:31 AM
Hehuehue so mayu was the most expensive girl on that auction huahuahua

Maybe Yuki's heart is melting... ><

Too curious about what is going ti happen in the morning huahuahua

Thank you for the update o/
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.4
Post by: mo-chan on November 07, 2012, 12:34:30 PM
 first I want to say sorry to be a silent reader these days I really dont have time to comment but this fic made me have the urgent to comment and say something
a new fic and it is an excelent
cmze-san's fics are always the best
my top1 fic is my sister's girlfriend but with this new one I cant really choose
In this fic
mayu is really ill
and yuki is really arrogant person this kind of story is really my type 
I really want to know the next
I am really exited!!
thanks cmze-san for all these fics there are loving u .wild love and I am everything u need I like all the best ones
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.4
Post by: Playgirlz on November 07, 2012, 01:12:46 PM
HAHAHAHAHA SO CUTE XDDDDDDDD

You're not that bad eh Black-san? <3333

Yuki is a good girl, I wonder what made she turned like this? Maybe because of her parents.

Btw, thank you for updating xPPP it was good! *thumbs up*


Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.4
Post by: m00nchild on November 07, 2012, 01:50:23 PM
LOLS~
Because of Rena, Jurina broke her promise with Mayu,
So Chiyuu brought Sae,
And Yuki brought Mayu~~
what will yuki do to the asleep Mayu??

Looking forward for the next update.
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.4
Post by: kurogumi on November 07, 2012, 01:58:08 PM
LOL since when yuki called mayu mayuyu~ hahahaaha little by little they became closer..

This one its hilarious too cmze-san!! Loved it

I'm curious about what number 3 mayu's to do list...go to what? That's make yuki shock? (Eh!) Maybe its something pervert? LOL

So rena and jurina spend one night...

Mayu is so smart that scared yuki...(She's scared you yuki,and then she's make you madly in love LOL)

Thank for the update cmze-san...





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Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.4
Post by: Chanaline on November 07, 2012, 03:16:03 PM
Woaaaahh!! Wouaaaaah ! :mon crazyinlove:

I love it!!! It was really funny!!

ANd for the Mayu list, I agree with kurogumi-san... something pervert??? :mon psst: XD

Yuki play PS3... :mon gamer:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.4
Post by: kahem on November 08, 2012, 01:37:53 AM
No Mayuyu will die T_T
a few mistake in french sentence but your fic is awesome!
Chiyuu~ wanna know what she will do ^^
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.5
Post by: cmze on November 08, 2012, 09:32:11 AM
                                  ~Time is good as gold~
                                             CH. 5

(The next day)

Mayu slowly opened her eyes,soon she reacted and relized that she wasn't in her room,she looked at her right and notice Yuki sleeping face next to her while her arm is holding Mayu's waist

Mayu blushed and looked at the older who was a few inches away from her face,she slowly gets closer to Yuki's face or lips 

*Mayu can feel how her heart races as the more closer she gets to Yuki*

"Knock! Knock! Yuki!" Someone shouts

Mayu soon freaked out and pushed Yuki away who end up falling on the floor 

"ouch!" Yuki says

"Yuki open up!" Sae shouts 

Yuki looked at Mayu  then got up and opened the door 

"Why so noisy so early?" Yuki asked rubbing her eyes then notices Sae 

Sae entered fast to the room and closed the door 

"what the hell?" Mayu thought while sees Sae in her underwear 

Sae pouted "What the hell is she doing here?" she asked as she covers her body 

Yuki looked at Sae "what the hell are you doing in underwer?" she asked 

Sae sighs "it's longs story.. that Chiyuu is going to pay me back!" she says 

~Flashback~ Last night

Sae and Chiyuu were walking hand in hand through the campus 

"Chiyuu let me say you look really hot tonight!" Sae says with a charming smile 

"Yeah i know!" Chiyuu replies with a smile

Sae stops walking and pulls Chiyuu to her then looks at her in the eyes "I'm glad you bought me" she says as she tries to steal a kiss from the shorter girl 

Chiyuu dodged the kiss "not yet.. handsome!" she says as she walks ahead and goes to the pool 

Sae follows her "another 10 girl!" she though as she goes after Tomomi 

~Next to the pool~

Tomomi takes off her black shirt and skirt while Sae stood there watching 

Chiyuu winked at Sae "C'mon take off your clothes!" she says with smile 

*Sae starts to takes off her clothes  fast then jumped at the pool*

While Sae swims,Chiyuu picks up her clothes and Sae's

Sae gets out of the pool and noticed that Chiyuu is gone and took her clothes,she tried to open the doors to get out but it was locked 

Sae spent the night locked there till some cleaning lady opened the doors and found Sae on the floor 

Before she could recognize her,Sae got up and left running through the courts 

*Luckily there wasn't many people around because it was so early but the people that was around took pictures lf her while she runs* 

~End of the flashback~

"and your room was closer so give me clothes!" Sae says as she open Yuki's drawers 

Mayu got up "okay i think i should go!" she says while walks to the door 

Yuki looked as Mayu leaves 

"what the hell she was doing here?" Sae asked 

"My homework!" Yuki says as she sits on her desk 

Sae takes a look on the paper work "but we already did this,we asked that Mocchi girl to do our homeworks! don't you remember?" she asked 

"yeah!" Yuki replies with a smirk 

"so mean you made her re do your already done homework!" Sae says grinning 

~ At Mayu and Jurina's room~ 

Mayu entered to her room then sitted on her bed and thought about this morning when she was about to.. "kiss? no way!"  she thought 

Jurina also opened her eyes and got up but she wasn't alone 

"careful Rena chan we don't wanna wake Mayu up!" Jurina whispers

*Mayu heard everything and smirked* 

The two Matsui get off bed and noticed Mayu sitted on her bed smiling 

"you were up!" Rena all red says not so happy 

"Good morning Mayu chan!" Jurina says with a smile 

"I gotta.. i should go!" Rena ackwardly says then walks away 

Jurina smirks "she's cute when she embarrased right?" 

Mayu only nodded "i don't really understand these two!" she thought 

~After a few minutes~At the entrance of the room's building~ 

*Everyone was looking at something*

"what's going on?" Jurina wondered while takes Mayu's hand and pulls Mayu with her 

*Everyone were looking at the white limo* 

Rena and Sae also were closer to the limo 

Soon the limo's door opened revealing a mad Yuki who took a stone from the ground and broke the limo's window

Rena and Sae grabbed Yuki to stop her from ruining more the limo

"what the hell is she doing?" Everyone wondered 

The limo accelarate and left fast 

Yuki was so mad that she punched Sae's face and pushed Rena aside 

"No way!" Jurina says and run to Yuki and jumps on her 

*the two girls were rolling on the floor*

Rena took Jurina while Sae grabbed Yuki and separted the two girls 

"You know you are a poor idiot!" Jurina shouts while tries to release to keep fighting with Yuki 

"shut up stupid kid!" Yuki says as she tries also to release 

Jurina removes the hair from her face"I feel pity of you.. pretending to have everything when you have nothing just servant people who cares about you and do you know why? BECAUSE THEY GET PAID!! " she shouted 

Yuki released from Sae's hold and walks to Jurina to look at her in the eyes "You don't know me!" she says with her eyes red and also her nose ready to cry then she walked away 

Rena let go Jurina then looked at her "that was mean!" she says as she also walks away 

Sae brushed her check

"Sae chan you were so brave!" Many girls says 

"My cheek hurts! who wants to rub it?" Sae asked and many girls answered "Me!!" 

*Everyone went to class*

 ~After a few minutes~ 

Yuki hid herself on the pool area,she took off her shoes to put her feet into the water then she looked at her reflection "Jurina is right...i'm alone nobody cares unles they get paid!" she murmured as some tears rolled her cheeks

Mayu looked at the sad Yuki and for some reason hurts her look at Yuki like that "so vulnerable and fragil" she
thought 

"Nobody pays me and i care!" The cyborg girl says 

Yuki turned her head then wiped her tears fast "Mayu.." she whispered as her lips wanted to form a small smile while she sees the younger girl getting closer with a first aid kit

Mayu sitted next to Yuki and started using the first aid kit,She cleaned the blood on Yuki's lip 

"it hurts..you're terrible as a nurse" Yuki says in pain with a weak smile

Mayu pouts "well it wouldn't hurt if you wouldn't act like animal and try to punch everyone around!" she as she still cleans the wound on Yuki's lip 

Yuki looked other way "you're right.. sorry" she says sad 

Mayu smirked "not to me silly,to Sae chan and Rena chan,they care a lot about you!" she says playfully 

Yuki pouted "who said i was apologizing to you?" she asked with a smirk 

Mayu smirked then gets up and offers her hand to Yuki to help her get up 

Yuki takes her hand then gets up and puts her shoes fast "Mayu i read on your list of things that you wanted a more lively life!" she says with a smirk

"what?! give me my list back!" Mayu says 

Yuki takes her hand and pulls her with her 

~After a few minutes of walking~

"what's this?" Mayu asked seeing bars 

"freedom!" Yuki replies as she moves on of the bars making a big hole "come with me Mayuyu!" she says extanding her hand 

Mayu looked back but then grabbed Yuki's hand 

<Yuki putted the bar on it's place>

The two girls walked away from the school..

"where are we going?" Mayu asked as Yuki keeps holding her hand 

"anywhere!" Yuki replied with a smile 

The two high schoolers got first to a restaurant,they ate and chatted a little then Yuki wanted to enter to an arcade 

The two girls played many games and in all of them Mayu won 

Yuki pouted first but she was having fun anyway 

"You're cheating!" Yuki says a little annoyed

"ha! i don't cheat,i'm just way better!" Mayu replies smirking 

"Let's go to that machine,who can get the best present for eachother?" Yuki says 

The two girls played 

Mayu grabbed a cute white cat while Yuki could only grab a tennis ball 

Mayu smiled "that guy wanted to kill you.. for trying to destroy that machine!" she says looking at Yuki 

Yuki pouted "That stupid Machine didn't wanted to give me what i wanted! Just a tennis ball i wanted that cute duck for.. Me!" she blushes 

Mayu blushed also "here you can have my cat.. that tennis ball looks intersting!"  she says with a smile 

*The two girls traded their toys*

Mayu saw a photobooth in the arcade "let's go there!" she says happy and takes Yuki's hand *Yuki blushed for the sudden touch* 

(The two girls entered to the booth)

*The first picture was the two girls possing with their presents
*The second picture Yuki putted her arm aroud Mayu's neck 
*The third picture Yuki got closer to Mayu's face 
*The fourth and fift picture were Yuki and Mayu kissing on the lips

Mayu broke the kiss and got out the booth,Yuki smiled then took the pictures and save them on her blazer 

"why she kissed me?" Mayu wondered all red "my heart is beating so fast! does she wants to kill me?" she thought while someone grabbed her hand 

"Yuki.." Mayu murmured looking at the smiling girl 

"Look a street singer.. that's on your list!" Yuki says as she walks closer to the singer and payed her to let them sing without Mayu noticed 

"I don't know how to sing!" Mayu says nervous 

Yuki smirkd "c'mon is going to be fun besides life is one time so you gotta live it up!"

They singed in the street  JUJU - ashita ga kuru nara

Mayu listened to Yuki's voice "wow,she's really good on this!" she says as she looks at Yuki who's holding her hand while she sings 

Mayu got lost on Yuki eyes,she sang her part not caring of people like it or not,she just wanted keep staring at Yuki and feel this strange feeling "could it be butterflies?" she thought 

Soon the noise of people clapping brought her back to reality

"You did it good Mayuyu!" Yuki says with a smile as she looks at the people gathered clapping 

Mayu was shocked "when they bacame many?" 

Yuki only smiled 

*Soon the two girls got back to school*

~In Mayu's room~

Mayu smiled as she closes her door then she pulled out the ball and puts it on her desk 

"She's.." Mayu thoughts were interrupted

Mayu chan where you been all day? Don't you have to take your vitamines?" Jurina asked 

Mayu's happy face then turned into a sad one as remembers that "everything was to good to be truth!" 

~Meanwhile~

Yuki bumped with Rena and Sae in the hall 

"Yuki chan!" Rena says looking down

Yuki smiles and hugs both of her friends "did i tell that i love you? she asked still smiling like an idiot 

Sae and Rena looked eachother "No .." 

"well i do and very very much!" Yuki says 

"are you drunk?" Sae asked 

Yuki breaks the hug then walks to her room smiling while she sees her white kitty

Leaving a shocked Sae and Rena

TO BE CONTINUED!! COMMENT!! 
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.5
Post by: clubhappy on November 08, 2012, 10:26:46 AM
Wow they've already fall for each other  :wub:
MAYUKI~!!!!!

Wonder if Yuki would still bullying Mayu? Or will Sae or Rena get jealous and do bad things to Mayu?  :?
Can't wait for the next chapter  :P
Thanks cmze-san.
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.5
Post by: Chanaline on November 08, 2012, 12:17:19 PM
Wow it iis really a great chapter!!

I love Mayuki!!! :wub: They kissed  :shocked .... :w00t:

I love the end with Yuki, Sae and Rena, Yuki is so an idiot XD
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.5
Post by: BbSis on November 08, 2012, 12:41:47 PM
Oh my! That was fast! :heart:

I wonder why Yuki kissed Mayu... Who cares? XD that was may favorit part *.* i always wanted to kiss someone inside a photobooth \o/

What more was on Mayu's list? ><

Thank you for the update \o/
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.5
Post by: m00nchild on November 08, 2012, 12:48:26 PM
wow wow wow~
Mayuki now was so close,
so Yuki have become more truth to herself.
Mayu didnt take medicine the whole day??
OMG.. Mayu careful Yuki still need you.

Looking forward for the next update.
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.5
Post by: kurogumi on November 08, 2012, 02:33:14 PM
They out of school...LOL..

Mayuki have a lot of fun..

Yuki heart melt...she's even granted one by one mayu to do list...
She's even kissed mayu~ aww that scene is really make my day..always smiling when read that part

I wonder the next day, in the class they will shy to each other LOL
Maybe spend lunch together...always together anywhere everytime everyday LOL

If yuki kissed mayu really often~ well i'm worried mayu illness...

Oh and about jurina warn mayu when she's forget her vitamin...and when jurina worried mayu in the initation  night,
Is she know about mayu's condition? Jurina is not stupid...she may investigated about mayu record...well maybe

I wonder if yuki's know about mayu condition...she will surely sad...


Ahhh cmze-san..this day you update so many fic that i always loved soo much! Thank thank thank!

Ok i wil waiting the next update...now this one is my number 1 my favorite..well my sister girlfriend is still but now this one is the Hotter fic i read..that always i check every hours LOL
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.5
Post by: Akblaire48 on November 08, 2012, 04:19:06 PM
Yuki and Mayu kissing 4th and 5th photo...  :on bleed:
I am in Paradise.. :on gay:

Yukirin so funny  :lol: and bold  :shocked: but I  :heart: it!

Love your fic, can't wait for the next update  :cow:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.5
Post by: mo-chan on November 10, 2012, 01:30:23 PM
Yuki wanted to make Mayu happy  XD
Mayuki kissed  :inlove:
Yuki will kill Mayu heart attack Mayu is a pervert  :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.5
Post by: kahem on November 11, 2012, 03:06:26 AM
hahah Chiyuu revenge is so funny
Yuki can be so ,ute~
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.6
Post by: cmze on November 11, 2012, 04:34:00 AM
                                  ~Time is good as gold~
                                             

(Note: This is from that pov and chapter one!! )

*In the hospital*

Yuki looks at the girl sleeping,her eyes were teary but it's funny to her because she has no tears left..

She slowly gets closer and strokes the girl's cheek

Mayu opens her eyes and looked at the object of her affections "I was dreaming about us..since ths first day we met" she says with a weak smile 

Yuki's nose became red and now she can feel the tears but she hold it back by taking a deep breath "that's seems fun!" she says with a weak smile 

"Yuki.. i'm cold" Mayu whispered 

Yuki sad looked at the pail girl in front of her "don't worry i can fix that!" she says as she climbs to bed and hugs tight the younger girl 

Mayu adjusted her body then closed her eyes and smiled "Yuki.. i love you!" she whispered 

Yuki pouted to not cry but her tears finally won,she hugged the sick girl tigher "I love you more" she say before kiss her on her cheek 

Mayu smiled again still with her eyes closed "i know.. that's why i wanna keep dreaming about us.." she says and tears also came out but she wiped her tears before Yuki noticed it by turning her head

                                               CH.6

*Flashback at the metro sitting next to eachother* 

Yuki looked at Mayu 

"what? what did i do?" The shorter girl asked nervous

Yuki smiled and putted her arm on the girl's neck 

*Mayu blushed*

*Soon the two got out of the subway and walked to school that was close*

The two girls were walking.Mayu was looking down while Yuki has her arm around her neck 

Yuki stopped walking and also Mayu..

"what's wrong?" Mayu asked 

Yuki looked at Mayu "i.. i had fun today!" she says serious 

Mayu looked other way 

Yuko slowly got closer and planted another kiss on the younger girl's lips

Mayu this time wasn't shocked like the first one so she closed her eyes for a moment 

The two girls were kissing but soon Mayu broke the kiss "we can't!" she says sad as she walks ahead leaving behind a shocked Yuki 

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<<<<$>>>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~

"Mayu chan!" Jurina says as she smash a pillow on her roomie's face 

Mayu gets up "what the hell?" she asked 

Jurina pouted "It's getting late!" she shouted as she pick up her things 

Mayu also picked up her things and followed Jurina 

~After changing~ 

"What the hell you were dreaming?" Jurina asked while walks 

Mayu stopped walking and tense up "why?why?" she asked nervous 

Jurina looked at her friend "i guess you were having a nightmare because she were calling Yuki's name!" she says as she keeps walking 

Mayu blushed then putted her hand on her jumping heart "easy.." she whispered then followed her friend 

While the two girls walk the hall a girl came out from nowhere and grabbed Mayu's wrist 

"Are you Watanabe Mayu the cyborg?" The girl asked followed by a bunch of girls 

Jurina stepped "yes,she is! what's wrong?" 

The bunch of girls made an "awwwwwww!" 

"what's going on?" Mayu asked 
 
"you have to see this!" The girl says as she runs pulling Mayu with her to her classroom 

Jurina also followed 

Everyone on the classroom were looking through the window then they turned around and looked at Mayu 

"so cute!" Everyone says 

"ehhh!" Mayu and Jurina says in unision 

Everyone got back to their seats then Mayu and Jurina looked through the window 

"No way!! who the hell did that?" Jurina asked shocked 

"it's so romantic!" Chiyuu says with a smile 

Mayu looked at the heart shape on the grass with the words "Mayu W. or CG Say yes!!",she could feel how her heart races and her face is so red 

Jurina looked at Mayu "it's looks like sombody likes you very much!" she says with a smile 

Mayu turned her head to look at the 3 empty seats and  got out of the classroom 

Jurina frowned "what's wrong with her?" she thought as she goes to her classroom 

~After a few minutes~

Mayu closed the door of her room and leaned against it "Stupid Yuki don't make me fall more!" she shouts as she gets on her bed and putted the blanket on 

~At the same time~

Everyone were watching outside the window except for this time Rena,Sae and Yuki were on the classroom 

"Wow i can't believe someone did something like this for that ordinary girl!" Tomochin says 

*Yuki was sitting ignoring the whole situation till Tomochin made that comment then pouted* 

Rena smiled "i think it's romantic!" 

*Everyone sighs*

Airin sighed as she looks at Rena smiling 

"I think the headmaster is going to be really mad because of the campus grass!" Sae says as she seats next to Yuki 

Yuki smiled " Did Mayu chan watch it?" she asked 

"Mayu chan?" Sae asked 

"She saw it but then run away!" Chiyuu says 

Yuki get up fast "what??!" 

"Good morning!" Shinoda Sensei says 

*Everyone sitted* 

<The lunch time>

Yuki got up and left the classroom 

"where is she going?" Rena wondered 

Sae followed Chiyuu and grabbed her by her arm "i didn't forget what you did to me!" she says mad 

Chiyuu release her arm "STAY AWAY FROM TOMOCHIN!" she shouted mad 

Sae was speechless while Chiyuu walks away 

~Meanwhile~ 

Jurina was waiting for Rena on their secret spot *the pool area* 

As soon the older girl showed Jurina shouted "Rena chan!" and went to hug the girl 

Rena gave a charming smile and also hugged the younger girl 

The two break their hug 

"I missed you!" Jurina says with a smile 

Rena tucked Jurina's hair behind her ear "me too!" she says shyly 

Jurina only smirked and stole a peck from the older girl's lips 

Rena blushed and looked other way

~ At the same time~ 

Mayu was under the blanket listening to her ipod suddenly 
a weight was added on her,she removed the blanket from her face and saw Yuki on her 

"Hi!" The taller girl said with a smile 

"Ahhhhh!!! "Mayu shouted and ends up falling of bed but soon got up,she removed her headphones and shouted nervous "WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE?!?" 

Yuki got out of Mayu's bed "are you avoiding me?" she asked pouting cutely as she walks closer to the younger girl 

As Yuki comes closer the more Mayu steps back 

"no..no.." The shorter girl says nervous as she steps back 

Yuki smirks "You're lying and you're blushing!" 

Mayu soon slips 

Yuki gets down and looks Mayu in the eyes 

Mayu gulped "those eyes" she thought 

Yuki leaned closer as if she was about to kiss Mayu 

Mayu was stunned not knowing what to "she wants that kiss but she can't.." 

Yuki smirked at the last minuted and putted her forhead on Mayu's shoulder 

She sighed "tell me soon.. Mayuyu" she whispered then got up and walked away

As soon Mayu heard the door close she shouted fustrated "Why you have to be too cute!!!" 

The door openned again,Mayu turned her head

"oh i forgot.. i got this so there are no close doors for me!" Yuki says with a smile then closes the door again and stood behind it

"Aaaahhhhh!" Mayu shouted

Yuki smirked then walked away..

~The next day~

Mayu and Jurina walked to their lockers to look for the books of the day..

*Mayu openned her locker and she was shocked looking at it!*

"Mayu let's go!" Jurina says as she closes her locker then turns to look her friend 

"what's wrong?" She asked as she looks inside Mayu's locker

"Everything is burnt.." Mayu whispers 

*everyone in the hall looked at Mayu's locker*

"oh man..you're next!" Sasshi says worried 

"shut up!" Jurina says irritated 

Sae,Rena and Yuki were passing the hallway and noticed the vibe 

Yuki looked at the shocked Mayu then noticed her locker and saw everything burnt 

"Those son of a.." Yuki murmures mad as she takes the  crown that was hanging 

Rena looked other way 

Sae took one burned book "wow they don't like you!" she says smirking 

Yuki broke the plastic crown then looked at everyone "This is... who are those f-ing bitches? tell me!" she shouts mad as she takes a whatever girl and shakes her 

"i don't know! i don't know!" The girl replies scared 

Yuki lets her go "who they think they're to do this kind of shit?" she shouted mad 

Mayu was still processing everything 

*While Jurina being everyone hero try to stop Yuki from punching everyone around*
 
"Get off me kid!" Yuki shouts and starts forcing with Jurina 

Soon Shinoda sensei separates the two girls and taks Yuki with her to calm her down 

~At teachers room~ 

" Calm down!"  Shinoda sensei shouts and makes Yuki sit

"Those bastards burned Mayu's books!" Yuki shouted mad as she gets up

"who?" Shinoda asked and made Yuki sit again

"The stupid Black Queens!!!"  Yuki shouts mad

"What? they do not exist.. that group was disbanded when their leader graduate!" Shinoda sensei says 

"Do you know who they're?" Yuki asked 

"no,i just heard rumours when i studied here!" Shinoda sensei answered 

"I'm not going to let them hurt Mayu and i'm going to destroy once and for all!" Yuki says as she gets up and walks away 

~At Mayu's room~ 

Mayu was packing..

"Mayu you can't go!" Jurina says worried 

"They're dangerous so i think is better for her to leave now!" Rena says coldly 

"Rena chan!" Jurina says 

Mayu thought about Yuki when she grabbe the tennins ball

"i really thought you were part of them" Jurina says looking at Rena 

"well Sae,Yuki and me are not part of it!" Rena replies

Mayu smiled "that's a good news after all!"

Soon somebody entered to the room 

"What are you doing here?" Jurina asked mad 

*Rena took Jurina's hand to control her* 

Yuki pouted "i'm not visiting you so leave!" she says annoyed 

"ahhh!" Jurina says mad 

Rena pulled Jurina with her "let's walk a little!" she says with a smile 

"but.." Jurina retored but Rena ignored her and took her with her 

Yuki sighs "she's so annoying!" she says as she puts her back aside then notices Mayu packing 

"Hey what are you doing?" Yuki asked mad

"i'm going to leave the school!" Mayu replies not looking at Yuki 

"what?!  no!" Yuki says and starts taking the clothes to put it back to the drawers

"Yuki what are you doing?" Mayu asked 

"i'm letting you go!" Yuki retored mad 

"what stop!!" Mayu tries to stop Yuki 

Yuki takes Mayu's hand and pull her for a hug 

Mayu blinked a few times 

"I'm not gonna let anyone to hurt you.. ever,i'm going to protect you but please don't run away!" Yuki whispers 

Mayu blushes and somehow her arms took life on their own and hugged Yuki also 

After a few minutes..

Yuki breaks the hug and pulls out some books from her big bag 

"what are you doing?" Mayu asked 

"i bought you new books!" she says with a smile as her bag gets slim

"Yuki..  you don't *Shut up!* the taller girl says 

Mayu looked down

"This are not free since my french is bad,you can help me with that so we'll be even!" Yuki says with a smile

Mayu sighed and sitted on her bed 

Yuki looked at her then sitted next to her "i'm serious don't go!" she says as she takes her hand 

Mayu looked other way..

TO BE CONTINUED!! COMMENT!! 
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.6
Post by: clubhappy on November 11, 2012, 05:52:03 AM
This is a sad chapter  :( from the pov of chapter one, it makes me cry  :cry:
Curse those Black Queens!!!!!  :angry:
Yuki has completely fallen for Mayu  XD, Yay!!!! Yuki please protect Mayu from those people  :twothumbs

Thanks for a great chapter, cmze-san.
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.6
Post by: BbSis on November 11, 2012, 06:31:31 AM
Nhyoooo Yuki turned to be a cute and romantic person. *.*

Hueheuh so the reason Chiyuu bought Sae was because she was jelous of Tomochin huahuahua

Yeey, Jurina and Rena have a fake incestuous relationship ;p

Mayuyu, surrender to Yuki, she already got you ahuahuauahh

And, it's kinda sad the situation at the hospital ;.; felt so sorry for Yuki T.T

Good chapter,I loved it o/
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.6
Post by: kurogumi on November 11, 2012, 08:27:53 AM
It's really an angst fic...made me cry..LOL they say i love you in the hospital that really....ah sorry my tears come up again...LOL

Rena seem suspicious...

 That black queen,i though its yuki's but its seem not her..

Yuki totaly in love with mayu..she's not letting mayu go..awww sweet..she's so sweet

Lets see what's will yuki do to protect her mayu's...LOL

And looks like yuki trying to get mayu heart...to make mayu fall for her..

Sweet sweet~  it sad but sweet...

Thank for the update cmze-san...the next chapter will be doki doki?
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.6
Post by: cmze on November 11, 2012, 08:38:49 AM
I can't tell i that!! i really depends on my mood!  :grin:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.6
Post by: mo-chan on November 11, 2012, 04:00:06 PM
at the first of the chapter was soooooooooo sad  :cry:
I knew that she will say f4  :angry:
don't go mayu yuki will protect you   :deco:
I hope Mayu wont rejet the kiss oncr she wants to do it  :inlove:
don't die mayuuuuuu  :catglare: :( :cry:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.6
Post by: dirtydeeds on November 12, 2012, 02:40:55 AM
omg this fanfic is waayyyy too cute T^T it makes my kokoro go doki doki  :heart: pls keep writing!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.6
Post by: Playgirlz on November 12, 2012, 02:41:25 AM
My face was so hurt because of smiling when i'm read the part Yuki protecting Mayu hahhahahaa so cute ><

And I also laugh when imagine who those Black Queens are lol i have no idea why i'm so happy even this part suppose to be sad XP

Well it was sad at the start but near the end i only smile lol

Thank you for writing it, I'm looking for the new chapter ><
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.6
Post by: kahem on November 13, 2012, 02:07:10 AM
So cute~
Yukirin is cool like that ^^
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.6
Post by: rhin12 on November 13, 2012, 04:22:35 AM
Cmze-san,

This is amazing!  :twothumbs
This is my new favorite now! MaYuki is so cute in here!

I thought the black queens are Yuki, Rena and Sae.  XD

Yuki is so sweet in here. I love her character!  :deco:

Thanks for this new MaYuki fic cmze-san!  :bow:

 :) :peace: I just read this story last night, and i'm all smile while reading it!!  :deco:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.6
Post by: m00nchild on November 13, 2012, 11:21:08 AM
nice update,
so the black queen is Yuki's fans,
Yuki was so romantic,
what will Yuki do to those black queen??

looking forward for the nxt update..
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.6
Post by: Chanaline on November 13, 2012, 12:11:09 PM
Hello! It was a really sweet chapter.

Yuki is so sweet~! She want protect Mayu! I think Mayu wanted to use the fact that she is attacked to go away and left Yuki because of her disease...
Mayu don't leave her please!
Black queen... something bad

And I start my fanfic...
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.6
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on November 13, 2012, 05:01:00 PM
czme thank you for this fanfics i read all your other fanfics but i have to say this and my sister's girlfriend are my fave please update soon  :jphip: :yep:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.7
Post by: cmze on November 14, 2012, 01:23:21 AM
                                  ~Time is good as gold~
                                             CH.7

~In a dark room inside the school~ 

(A picture of Mayu and Yuki are on a table with some candles around them)

"So she dares to insult us.. it's time to give her a lesson and show her who's the boss" A voice in the dark says while other voices agree 

Somebody entered to the dark room and kicked the table 

"what the hell?" One of the voices says 

A laugh can be hearing echoing in the room "Are you mad?" a girl asked 

"Gekikara sama" Another voice says

The smiling girl  walks to them,she looked at all the persons inside the room that were wearing black hoodies to not show their face "so now you do things without telling me!" she say completely changing her playful face to a serious one 

"She insult us in public so now she has to pay.." One of the girls say as she gets down and takes Yuki's picture to start burning it 

Gekikara pouted "i'll take care of them by myself don't get involve in this.." she says as she turns around and starts walking away 

"Gekikara you're our leader so make us look good!" The same voice says as she is still burning Yuki's picture

Gekikara kept walking ignoring the girl statement..

~ After class~ 

"Finally friday!" Jurina says happy as she walks the halls with Mayu 

"Yeah.." Mayu says not so happy 

"what you're not going back home?" Jurina asks 

"i wish but.." Mayu looks back then sighs and see Yuki pretending talking to someone to hide the fact the she was following Mayu the whole morning 

Jurina looked at Mayu "hey,what Yuki wanted last night?" she asked 

"ohh well *Mayu blushes* she asked me to stay.." Mayu answers nervous 

"Really?" Jurina eyes open wide 

"she doesn't know french and she wants me to teach her!" Mayu says fast as she walks faster leaving Jurina behind 

Yuki fast walked behind her 

Jurina observe the situation "so weird..well who cares i'm going back home with Rena chan YAY!!" she murmures then shouted the last part 

*everone looked at Jurina* 

Jurina smiled then walked away embarrased 

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~<~~~>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Mayu looked back and saw Yuki following her "stop doing this!" she murmures as she walks faster 

"Why you keeo running away?" Yuki wondered as she fallows the shorter girl 

Suddenly somebody got on her way..

Yuki bumped her friend..

"Rena chan.." She murmures as she gets up 

Rena looked at her serious "we need to talk.." 

Yuki smiles like an idiot "sorry i'm kinda busy now!" she says as she looks at Mayu walking away 

Rena took her arm "what do you have there?" she asked as pulls out a piece of paper from Yuki's blazer pocket

"Huh?" Yuki looked at the piece of paper 

"Let's start the game.." Rena read loud 

Yuki smirked "those idiots.. this shit works with these people not me!" she says looking around 

Rena held Yuki's arm tigher "don't think this lightly" she says serious 

Yuki smirks again "They are bunch of f-ers that don't show their face,why should i be scared from people like that?" she asked then released her arm and walked away

"What's wrong with her?" Yuki thought as she walks 

Rena sighed then looked around and noticed many faces looking at her,she pouted and walked away 

~After a few minutes~ 

Mayu entered to her room then  sighed "she doesn't look strong at all but damn she can walk fast!" she thought as Jurina looks at her 

"what's wrong?" The short haired girl asked 

"Nothin.." Mayu replies as she throws herself on bed

Jurina's phone ringed  "okay,i'm on my way!" she say with smile 

Mayu only looked at her 

"Mayu chan see you on monday!" Jurina says happy as she leaves the room 

"See you on monday.." Mayu murmured "i should better call my parents" she thought 

~The conversation with her parents was about why she didn't come to spend weekend with them? Mayu lied saying that she had many things to do! and also if she taking her pills and also she has a date with the doc on thursday!"~ 

*Mayu soon fell sleep but not before changing her clothes*

~Meanwhile~ WMatsui on their limo 

Jurina looked at Rena "Rena chan spacing out so much! what's wrong?"she asked 

Rena got back to earth then looked at the younger girl and held her hand 

Jurina smiled "let's have fun this weekend!" she says showing her best smile to Rena 

Rena smiled also "Yeah.. hey Jurina btw do you know why Mayu is staying still in the school?" she asked 

Jurina smiled "you're not going to believe this but Yuki asked her to.." 

"What?" Rena asked not so happy

"yeah i was like that too,she said that Yuki asked her to teach her french!" Jurina replied 

Rena took a deep breath then looked through her window 

~Back to school~ 

Yuki entered to her room and found everything destroyed "WTF?" she thought as she sees all the things on the floor destroyed 

She saw a note on her desk "Have a nice weekend!",she squeezed the note then throwed to away and got out of her room 

"That's not going to ruin my mood.." She thought as she goes to the CG's room

(Note: not many students are staying at school,there are no more than 20 spending the weeked there)

<At the CG's room>

Mayu was still sleeping but soon she felt some weight again on her,she opened her eyes and saw Yuki on her AGAIN!! 

*This time she didn't fell of bed but Yuki did because Mayu pushed her*

"It hurts.." Yuki says as she gets up 

Mayu got out the bed "what are you doing here?" she asked looking at the smiling Yuki 

"that's a surprise!" Yuki says as she gets up then takes Mayu's hand and drags her out of the room 

"where are we going?" Mayu asked as she's being dragged out 

"I can't tell you!" Yuki says with a smile 

"at least let me put my shoes!" Mayu retored 

Yuki stopped walking and looked at the shoeless Mayu,she smiled "sorry!" she says and both got back to the CG's room

Once Mayu got ready the two girls walked to the campus 

"where that shinning is coming from?" Mayu asked as she looks at two trees with mini lights on them (gold) with a white table and two white chairs separating the trees side to side 

"Oh my.. this is so pretty" Mayu whispers then turns to look at Yuki who was still holding her hand

Yuki looked at Mayu also then smiled 

The two had eye contact for a few seconds..

Mayu smiled weakly as she looks at those pretty lights and the beatiful way that everything is set "why you do this?" she asked a little sad 

Yuki looked other way "i don't know.. is just this weird warm that i feel whenever i see you that makes me smile and makes me wanna do this things" she answers as she puts her hand on her racing heart then turns to look at Mayu again

Mayu blushed and heart was racing bit she could nothing but walk away 

"Mayuyu." Yuki called and grabbed her arm 

"stop showing me your beatiful heart!" The shorter girl shouted as she release her arm and walks away 

Yuki sighed "Mayu.." she murmures 

~The next day~ (Saturday)

Mayu spend her day studying then soon her eyes were tired for so much reading so she decided to take a walk "why i keep thinking about you? just get out of my head!" she thought as she walks 

"It's already 19:00 pm and you haven't call or get into my room,maybe you finally gave up..that's sad but good!"

Mayu sighed and then just sitted on the grass 

"Mayuyu.." A voice called 

Mayu turned her head "ehhh how?" she wondered 

Yuki smiled "what? don't tell me you were missing me?" she asked 

Mayu got up "of course not.." she says looking other way 

Yuki frowned "don'y worry i don't give up so easily!" she says with a smile and takes Mayu's hand 

"let me go!" Mayu says forcing 

"okay!" Yuki says and let her go which cause Mayu to fall

"it hurts.. idiot! why you let me go?" Mayu replies as she gets up 

"ok i won't let you go!" Yuki says with a smile and takes Mayu's arms again and pulls her with her 

"what are you doing?" Mayu asked 

"what you told me.. not letting you go!" The taller girl answers as she keep walking 

Mayu sighed "i'm never going to win!" she thought as she looks the taller girl smirking 

~At Mayu's room~ 

"what are you doing?" Mayu asked as Yuki is front of the blueray and turning on the tv 

"We're going to watch the walking death all night!" Yuki replies smirking 

"what?!? why?!" Mayu asked 

"i like watching horror movies,i would do it on my room but it's under construction now and also Sae and Rena went home so i don't wanna watch alone"  Yuki replies as she takes the remote and climbs to Mayu's bed 

"That's my bed!" Mayu says 

Yuki shows her best smile and pats the side next to her 

Mayu sighed and sitted tense up "why me?" she thought while Yuki is next to her smiling

Soon the two girls were meddle in the movie..

"what?!? get the hell out of it!!" Mayu shouts 

"OmG!! they're going to kill him!" Yuki shouts and covers her eyes 

Mayu in other hand was already face down watching more closely to the tv "Anime is cool but this is also really cool!" she says 

*Yuki looked at Mayu then smiled warmly*

~After a few hours~  1:30 am 

"The end of the first season!" Mayu says then turns to look at her partner who was already sleeping 

Mayu smiled "you really know how to my world!" she thought as she looks at the girl then noticed their linked hands 

Mayu leaned and kissed the taller girl's cheek "of only i wouldn't..i would totally accept your feelings!" she whispered 

Soon Mayu also fell sleep next to Yuki,the taller girl in her sleep hugged CG which cause her to smile 

TO BE CONTINUED!! COMMENT!! 
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.7
Post by: clubhappy on November 14, 2012, 02:04:59 AM
Those Black Queen's leader is Gekikara? Is it Rena or another person?
Mayu you should be honest with your feeling :D
Thanks for the update
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.7
Post by: kurogumi on November 14, 2012, 02:41:00 AM
I knew it!! I knew it!! It's rena right?? Gekikara...

I knew it's rena,she's so suspicious...and i know its not her doing that,its the other black queen,her underling

But why mayu and yuki?well i know if yuki get involved because she's insult them in public...but mayu's?...maybe...it's because mayu have a lot of attention from yuki?...or maybe the CG its too genius LOL
maybe the member black queen jealous or something..well maybe..

and rena as the leader,she's just take control,she's still a good girl anyway...LOL
I wonder how rena resolve this problem so she's not hurting yuki...,hope rena know, hurting mayu..hurting yuki too

Aww yuki is just too sweet...
Mayu..please accept her! If you don't cause your illness, well you said you wanna do a normal thing before dying,so do it...



Thank for the update cmze-san this chapter awesome as always!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.7
Post by: yuukimoko on November 14, 2012, 05:34:58 AM
mou~ I dont like the Black queens!!!

Even if Rena is there.....she shouldnt be bad! Rena is sweet!!

Yuki do something!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.7
Post by: Chanaline on November 14, 2012, 01:43:25 PM
Gekikara.............
Yuki is so sweet!!!
Mayuuuuuuuuuu!!!!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.7
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on November 14, 2012, 01:44:34 PM
aaaaaaawwwwwwwwwww yuki so sweet  :love:
mayu you know you wanna be with yuki :yep:
and i agree i dont want rena to be bad :( :smhid
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.7
Post by: BbSis on November 14, 2012, 07:23:37 PM
Nhyaaaaa Yuki turned to be such a sweetheart *.*

wow, Gekikara, eh? I think she IS Rena, just because of Rena's reaction.... I maybe wrong, though =p

Mayuyu should really give up and accept Yukirin's feelings ><

Can't wait next update^^
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.7
Post by: Playgirlz on November 15, 2012, 12:26:13 AM
lolol Yuki has changed 180 degree, Mayu must be not used to it >:]

And about Rena, I was like "WOW~ so it's Rena, I never thought about it" XPPP Don't know what to say now lololol

Please update as soon as possible, really want to know what'd happen next and Thank you :]
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.7
Post by: kahem on November 15, 2012, 01:32:16 AM
Rena is the bad guy oh...
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.8
Post by: cmze on November 16, 2012, 09:25:06 AM
 ~Time is good as gold~
                                             CH.8

I said i was going to rest but i couldn't so Here's the new chapter enjoy! :) 

(Sunday morning)

Kashiwagi Yuki the girl which her entire school hates because she's arrogant,mean,black can't believe that she's being hugged by certain super smart girl with a superficial cold mood 

Yuki looked at Mayu and couldn't help but smile "i'm always the one giving the first step but today.. seems different" she thought as sees the CG's arm on her waist

*Mayu also openned her eyes slowly,once she relized thag she was hugging Yuki,she couldn't help to fell of bed*

Yuki smirked "it's becoming your rutine!" she says with a charming smile 

Mayu looked other way trying to hide her red face "Go away!" she murmured 

Yuki got up from bed "don't worry i'll be going now but i'll be back!" she says with a smile as she walks to the door 

Mayu pouted "why she just can't let it go?" she though as she goes to the bathroom 

<Once changed> 

Mayu walked to the recreation area,got a table and soon a girl takes her order 

"Ohh i'm sorry i forgot, you're that girl!" The girl says and soon goes away 

"what?" Mayu thought 

Then the girl came again and brought with her a monumental breakfast, ice cream and a chocolate cake which looked delicious and has on top a berry 

The girl smiles "Enjoy" she says then leaves 

Mayu looked at the breakfast "what? if i taste one of this things i would totally die!" she thought then changed her table and called the girl again to order 

Yuki in other hand was in a corner watching the hole situation covering with a magazine "who she thinks she is? can not see my effort?" she thought then got up mad and grabbed Mayu by her arm to pull her up 

"what the hell?" The CG shouted 

Yuki pouted "i should ask that! who told you that you can reject me?"

"You bought that.." Mayu says confused 

"ahhhh.." Yuki looked around then pulled Mayu out of the recreation area because everyone was watching 

"wait up! stop with this!" Mayi says as she stops walking but Yuki was stronger and pulled her again to keep dragging her 

Mayu stops again and keeps forcing with Yuki "i'm tired of this!" The CG say and soon her hand was on Yuki's face slapping her 

"Why did you that?" Yuki shouted mad with her hand on her red cheek 

"sorry.. you made me!" Mayu says looking down 

Yuki was still mad cause her burning cheek but she manage to calm down by taking a deep breath "nobody has ever slapped me!" the taller girl murmured 

"This is all your fault just yours! what are you planning Black?" Mayu asked 

Yuki removed her hand of her cheek "ehh! do you think i'm planning something to hurt you?" she asked then smirked and looked other way 

"what else? why would you like me? *Yuki pouted*  i'm not like anyone here and i'm a girl!" Mayu says fustrated 

Yuki took Mayu's shoulders and made her look at her "yeah  i know you're mean,cold,poor,too smart for me and girl but.. i like you,i really do and i can't help it at first i was mad at me mostly beacuse you were a girl and now i believe love it's love no matter what!" the taller girl says serious not breaking her eye contact with Mayu 

Mayu thought "I'm hopelessly falling in love with you and i can't help it!" 

The CG can feel sparks and she wants to kiss Yuki so badly but "you're so good, i don't wanna hurt you!" she says breaking her eyes contac with Yuki 

"what?!? you hurt me! ars you serious?" Yuki asked 

Mayu turned around "don't look at me Yuki,i don't like you.. i love somebody else!" 

Yuki grabbed Mayu's arm "what? who's that?" she asked really mad 

"not of bussines!!" Mayu replied while releases her arm and walks away leaving a broken hearted Yuki behind 

*The rest passed fast and soon everyone got back to school*

~Night Time~

"hello Mayu chan!" Jurina says smiling  

"hello.." The CG replies not so happy 

"did that black queens attacked you again?" Jurina asked serious 

"no.. i'm going to sleep BTW is good to have you back!" Mayu says as she puts the blanket on 

Jurina just looked at the girl "what's going on?" she wondered 

~ Meanwhile~  

 Everyone was already at their room except for one person..

Yuki is been running in the recing track of the campus for at least 20 min non stopping "stupid CG.. who needs you?" she thought as her body fell on the floor 

"why so alone?" Someone asks while comes closer to Yuki and wears a black hood that don't let her see her face 

Yuki gets up "not of your bussines!" she replies annoyed as she cleans her knees 

"So pathetic!" The girl in the black hood says 

Yuki was really irritated because of Mayu so she wanted to take that pain again and what better way that kicking somebody's ass! 

Yuki punches the girl on her face " don't mess with me!" she says serious but she didn't noticed that there was somebody else behind her  

That other girl grabbed Yuki from behind and soon putted a handkerchief on her nose 

After a few seconds of moving Yuki finally gave up and fainted 

"That biatch punched my presty face!" The other girl says mad while gets up 

"c'mon stop playing around,let's go!" The one who's holding Yuki says 

~After some minutes~

Yuki openned her eyes "WTF?" she thought as she sees everything upside down 

*Yuki was hanging* she looked everything "i didn't know this dark room existed" she thought then she noticed her picture and Mayu's on a table around candles 

"Hello Kashiwagi san!" Another girl in hood says 

Yuki looked at the girl but it was imposible to look at her face beside being upside down it's getting her dizzy 

Another girl entered to the room and punched Yuki on her face "you owe me!" she says 

*Soon Yuki's lip was bleeding*

Another 4 girls in hoods entered to the room..

"Nice to see you again Yuki chan!" One of the girls says *Yuki could tell she was smiling* 

"get me out of here!" Yuki says irritated as she moves 

"don't tell me you're scare!" The girl that punched her asked laughing 

"scare of some bitches hiding on their hoodies don't make me laugh btw you couldn't find a better name?" Yuki says laughing 

"I'm going to kill her!" The same girl that punched her says mad 

Soon another girl entered to the room laughing 

"Gekikara sama!" Everyone says 

"Gekikara?" Yuki murmured  

"So you dared to insult us in front the whole school and expect us to do nothing about it!" Gekikara says 

Yuki pouted "i don't expect anything from people like you who likes to bully every student that got here thanks to a scholarship!"

Gekikara laughs and then kicks Yuki on her stomach 

"aHHH.." Yuki says 

"you should respect i'm Gekikara!" The girl says serious but then smiled "are you mad?" she asked 

Yuki looked at the girl  but that stupid hood don't let her see a thing "You son of.. get me out of this and i would totally kick your butts!" she shouted mad as her lip bleeds more 

Gekikara makes a sign to her friends 

*Everyone starts punching Yuki while laughs*

*Gekikara makes a sign to everyone to stop*

"now after this hope you back off and let us do our thing!" She says smiling 

Yuki spits blood and tried to keep her eyes open But she end up fainting again

this is it!  The girl that punched Yuki asked to Gekikara 

"yes, i think she learned her lesson!" Gekikara says as she walks away 

"but..*Shut up!* Gekikara shouts mad then gets back and punches the girl on her stomach 

"i'm the leader!" Gekikara murmures 

~ The next Morning ~ (Monday)

The day passed fast but Mayu couldn't help to wonder about Yuki "she was worried but rathered ignore it!"  

~After class At Yuki's room~ 

Sae walked around the destroyed room "i can't believe those bitches did this to you?" she says mad 

Rena looked other way while she feeds Yuki 

"I'm fine Sae chan!" She replies after swallowing fruits

" I wish i know who they are to kick their butts!" Sae replies mad 

Rena gets up "Don't mess with them,look what they did to Yuki chan!" she says serious 

Yuki tries to get up but her stomach hurts beacuse the kick that Gekikara gave her "Their leader Gekikara.." she murmured 

"Huh?!" Rena looked at Yuki 

Yuki touched her stomach "I'm going to destroy those maniacs once and for all!" she says mad 

"I have to go.. i'll come back later!" Rena says as she walks away 

Sae sitted next to Yuki "say ahhh"  she says with the spoon 

Yuki sighed but still let Sae feed her 

~The next day~ (Thursday)

Mariko sensei asked why Yuki is missing another day

*Mayu was also worried

"She catched a cold don't worry teacher!" Sae replied with a smile 

Shinoda sensei wasn't a fool but she continued with her class

*Soon the rumour of The black queens hitting Yuki spread around the campus and got to Mayu*

~After class Lunch time~ 

Mayu sneaked around and went to Yuki's room she needed to know if that rumour was true..

Mayu entered the room she saw everything destroyed then saw a card on the floor with a message and a draw of a black crawn,she panicked

"i can't believe this.." She thought 

She looked at Yuki covered with her blankets and with her hair on her face sleeping,her hand softly touched Yuki's head 

Yuki fast sit up  and grabbed Magu's hand ready to punch her with her other hand

"Yuki.." Mayu called in shock beacuse the black eye and swollen lip 

"Mayu chan" Yuki says as he let go her hand and covers with the blanket 

"what happened to you?" Mayu asked as she tries to remove the blanket but Yuki was stronger (they were forcing a few minutes) she ends uo pulling Mayu on top of her, soon the taller girl felt something wet in the blaket then she heard Mayu sobbing 

"Mayu.." The taller girl called then removed the blanket and looked at her 

"what happened to your pretty face?" Mayu asked crying 

"i had a fight,you should look at the other girl!" Yuki says with a weak smile 
 
Mayu takes a deep breath and puts her hand on her chest "you stupid.. this is all my fault! those black queens did this to you" she says crying more 

"c'mon you're not that special.. i wouldn't take punch for you seriously! They made mad and now they are my enemies!" Yuki says as she gets up *in pain but she got up* 

*The bell rang*
 
"Go away i have to sleep!" Yuki says as she takes Mayu by her arm and pulls her out of her room 

"i worrying about you!" Mayu says in tears

"i'm okay can't you see?so stop crying! i don't need you to worry for me go study something nerd!" Yuki says with a smirk then closes the door and her smirk fades 

"Stupid Yuki!!" Mayu thought then her phone ringed to remind her her appointnent with the doctor 

*Mayu excuse herself and went to the doctor*

In other hand Mariko sensei went to Yuki's room,she knocked and fast the door openned 

Mariko entered and saw Yuki sitting on the floor with a black eye and her swollen lip 

what happened to you? Mariko sensei asked as she helps Yuki to get up and lead her to bed 

"Those Black bitches.." Yuki replies in pain 

Mariko sensei frowbed "what? i told you they stopped existing long while ago!"

"Look around..they did all this!" Yuki says 

Mariko sensei looks the room then sighed "this is so much like them.. i thought this games stopped once Acchan graduated!" she said not noticing 

"Acchan?" Yuki murmured 

Mariko sensei got up "If they are like when i was in this school they're not going to stop till drive you crazy so don't let them do that!"

Yuki looked down "I'm going to discover them and stop them for her sake.." 

"good luck with that btw i'll call your butler to pick you up and take you to a doctor so be ready!" Mariko says as she closes the door 

<walking an empty hall>

Mariko sensei pulled out her phone and dial a number 

Hello Marichan! 

"Acchan please tell me that shit of black queens don't exist anymore in this school!"

Easy.. of course not! *Laughing Acchan*  i chose that Kashiwagi girl but reject to join so i stopped and Black Queens doesn't exist anymore! 

"That what you think.." Mariko says 

"what!? really i wonder who's leading.. don't tell me is that Kashiwagi girl i had high hopes on her!" Acchan says

"no,i have no idea!" Mariko sensei says 

Acchan smiles "i have to go,i'll call you later come and visit me to Paris!"

Mariko pouted "and disturb your honey moon with boring Takamina.. i don't. think so i rather spend my time with my students!"

"Okay bye!" Acchan says 

"bye!" Mariko sensei says as she hangs up and puts her phone on her pocket

"This girls.." She thought 

TO BE CONTINUED!! COMMENT!!  
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.8
Post by: kurogumi on November 16, 2012, 01:54:12 PM
Oh it could be yuki will meet mayu at hospital?
Ìnteresting~

acchan have honey moon with takamina LOL!


Thank for the update cmze-san,take enough rest
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.8
Post by: kahem on November 16, 2012, 02:06:21 PM
Poor Yuki T_T I hope the next time she will beat they ass
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.8
Post by: BbSis on November 16, 2012, 03:20:20 PM
Oooooooooh!awesome!

Mayu is going to the doctor, Yuki is going to the doctor..... Will the two meet each other? :?

Liked the updateo/
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.8
Post by: rhin12 on November 16, 2012, 04:25:29 PM
Wow! cmze-san why so awesome?!  8)

I really love this story.. Yuki is so cute~  :inlove:

Yuki, why rejected Mayu's concern! Put away the pride and be lovey dovey to her already..  :inlove:
It's getting more and more interesting.
And they will meet at the hospital?? I'm excited to know what will happen next.  :inlove:

Thanks for the fast update cmze-san~  :bow:  :bow:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.8
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on November 17, 2012, 01:21:00 AM
i hope mayu chan will be alright cuz she has an appointent with the doctor, no yuki dont push away mayu  :( :? love the fanfics though cant wait for next update  :love: :yep: :heart:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.8
Post by: m00nchild on November 17, 2012, 05:35:54 AM
nice update,
so Yuki wanted to settle things by her own huh?
Is it Geki really is Rena??
would Mariko will get into this matter?
Previous Acchan is the lead for black queen,
so many question pop out to my head.

Looking forward for the next update.
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.8
Post by: Chanaline on November 17, 2012, 05:41:14 AM
Wahhhhaaaaa! :cry: Yuki get hitting...

Mayu poor you... you are lying for don't hurt Yuki when you... NO!!!

Geki is Rena?? Her behavior is too weird! 
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.8
Post by: jell_o_jello on November 17, 2012, 04:14:53 PM
First time commenting on your story although I've been reading a few before you started this one.
I really like Time is good as gold, probably the fic I like best of you now. Though I am also reading Remember me at the moment and really liking it :D

Please keep writing, I'm looking forward to next chapter  :wub:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.9
Post by: cmze on November 19, 2012, 09:46:53 AM
                                  ~Time is good as gold~

*Well you already know the first part is the continuing of hospital scene from the first chapter*

"How can you be so calm?" Jurina asks 

Mayu smiles weakly "she has the right to do what she wants!" 

Jurina pouts and looks through the window "how she dares to leave you in the moment you need her the most? she says she loves you and do this shit!" she says mad

Mayu smiles "She loves me.. more than anything!" the CG replied 

Jurina turn to look at Mayu then looked other way "where the hell you can be? when i see you..i'm going to beat you so hard!" the pimp thought 

Mayu looks at her friend "She always gets back,she can't stay away but i really hope she keep her promise this time!" she replies faking a smile 

Jurina was shocked "you told her to stay away.." she murmured 

Mayu nodded trying to avoid tears "i want her to be happy and forget about me.." 

~At Sae's~ 

"Here's for the hangover!" Sae says between mad and sad then gives some pills to Yuki with a glass of water 

Yuki takes the pills with the water 

Sae looks at Yuki "You know i don't think,this is the way to deal with *SHUT UP!!" Yuki shouts interrupting Sae

Sae was shocked 

Yuki gets up from the couch "i don't wanna cry.. i don't wanna cry more!" she replies and many tears falls on the rug 

Sae looked other way "Let's party hard Yuki.." she says sad

Yuki looks at her friend "let's party hard!" she says as she wipes her tears but more kept coming

                                             CH.9

Mayu was buttoning her shirt up..
 The female doctor sighs in relief "Everything looks fine so don't preasure yourself,keep taking your medicine okay? she says as she sits and looks at her computer 

Mayu smiles "don't worry i'll take my tasty pills!" she says as walks to the door 

"don't forget your diet and NO SPORTS!!" The doctor say serious 

"Okay.." Mayu says with a smile and then leaves 

A nurse entered.. 

"Watanabe san looks so good!" The nurse says with a smile while the doctor keeps looking at the pictures of Mayu's heart on her computer 

The doctor sighs "no matter what we need to find her a heart soon as possible or she might..!" she says serious 

"Die.." The nurse says sad

(Note: Yuki and Mayu didn't see eachother because Yuki was wearing a hood and also because Mayu fast went to the bathroom to talk to her mother who's been calling her all morning to make sure that she'll go to her date)

Yuki entered to the room with a boring face "she heard the conversation before entering but she didn't care" 

"You must be Kashiwagi san!" The nurse says with a smile 

Yuki ignored the nurse and looked around the office,she notice a blazer of her school 

"Ohh Watanabe san forgot her blazer and just said goodbye!" The nurse says and takes the blazer from Yuki's hand 

Yuki's eyes opens wide "Did you say Watanabe san?" 

"Do you know Mayu chan?" The female doctor asks as she gets up from her desk

"You were talking about her a few minutes ago and about a heart, She's sick and she's going to die!" Yuki say all red  with tears on the corners of her eyes 

"Kashiwagi san!" The nurse and the doctor says in unision but Yuki ignore them and ran away hoping for Mayu not be so far 

(The doctor and the nurse were confused..)

After a few minutes Mayu gets back "sorry i forgot my blazer!" She says as she looks at the nurse and doctor

"Here it is Watanabe san!" The nurse says 

Mayu smiles and grabs it "Thanks..i'm late for school" she says and leaves fast

~Meanwhile~ 

Yuki was running with tears rolling her cheeks without stopping somehow she feels like her heart is being stabbed so many times and incredible pain that only can be only stopped by seeing Mayu 

Soon many memories hit Yuki's head while she runs..

~Yuki's pov~

"How could i be so blind? The list of things.. she wants to do all those things before dying,she doesn't do sports because she can't, not because she's bad at it! she eats just salads.. no chocolates,no icecream no nothing and she said no because she doesn't want to hurt me because she's going to.. *More tears* NO! NO MAYU CAN NOT DIE!!! Yuki shouts and keeps running 

~After 20 min~ 

Mayu was already in the school *She took the bus while Yuki just run* 

The CG went to Yuki's room but the taller girl wasn't there..

Mayu sighed "Where are you?" she wondered then she went to look for Jurina to catch up 

~After 10 min~ 

Yuki gets to the school,she takes off the hood as she tries to catch her breath 

Everyone looks at her 

"what happened to her?" Everyone was commenting as they look at her 

"that was truth those Black Queens beated her ass!" Someone mumures as she looks at her black eye 

Yuki looks at everyone who was staring at her and soon this hate or this bad feeling takes control over her "WHat the F are you looking at me?" do you enjoy this? seeing me this way!" She asks as she walks closer to a bunch of girls

*One of them pouted*

Yuki grabbed that girl then looked at her in the eyes "what makes you better?" she murmured "What makes you better than her!?! she shouted then pushed her out of her way 

Soon her friends helped her to get up 

"I'm happy that you're getting what you deserve for being a prig!" The girl says as she gets up 

Yuki looks at the girl  and suddenly punches her on her face after a few seconds the girl's friends reacts and tries to punch Yuki but she was angry and full of hate so she dodge their punches and punch them back 

Many students tried to stop Yuki but she was like a wild angry animal not caring that she was all hurt for her previous encounter with the Black Queens 

(There was two girls holding Yuki to stop her)

Sae appeared from nowhere and punched one of the girls that was holding Yuki while Rena also appeared and hit the other girl that was also holding Yuki 

The first girl Yuki hit,punched her on her face making her to fall on the floor *She was really tired*

Sae and Rena stopped the fight then grabbed Yuki and tried to take her to her room the she refused 

"I need to talk to Mayu!" Yuki says as she leans against a door 

"that can wait till tomorrow!" Rena says and grabs her arm tight

Yuki released her arm "i ..need.. to.. do.. that.. now" she says with watery eyes 

"what's wrong?" Rena and Sae asked worried *They have never seen Yuki this way* 

Yuki run to Mayu's room 

*Yuki openned the door*

"Where's Mayu?" Yuki asked to Jurina who was playing with her computer on her desk

Jurina got up and looked at Yuki "wow that looks bad!" she says smirking 

Yuki was serious "where is she?" she asked 

"what do you want with my friend?" Jurina asked then Yuki grabbed her by her collar

Someone openned the door 

"Jurina chan.. " Lovetan looks at the two girls 

Yuki turns to look at Lovetan "where's Mayu?" she asked 

"in the bathroom.." Lovetan naively answered 

Yuki pushed Jurina then run to the bathroom..

Jurina got uo fast and also followed Yuki leaving a confuse Lovetan behind 

While Yuki runs the hall *Why you didn't tell me before? all the things that i did to you when you got here!" she thought the she openned the door of the bathroom 

(Note: Bathrooms in this school are big there are many  showers and cubicles)

Yuki entered to the bathroom and there was many girls brushing their teeth in front of the mirror and Mayu standing looking at them 

"Mayu chan.." Yuki says between sad and worried 

"Yuki chan.." Mayu says looking at the hurt Yuki 

Yuki looked other way and remembered what the nurse saod  then grabbed Mayu's arm and gets inside one cubicle with her 

"what are you doing?" Mayu asked nervous and blushing

*Everyone inside the bathroom wondered what was happening inside the cubicle*

Yuki looked at Mayu and soon her tears were rolling down her cheeks 

"Yuki chan.. what's wrong?" Mayu asked nervous sad

Yuki gets even closer and putted her hands on Mayu's chest 

"what are.. what?" Mayu asked nervous kinda red 

Yuki opened all Mayu's buttons with at once 

"What!?!?" Mayu asked shouting and covering her chest 

Yuki looked at the scar on her chest "so it's truth.. you're going to die!" she murmured 

"how do you..*Yuki opened the door of cubicle and left*

Mayu looked covered her chest with her shirt then got out of the cubicle,she was shocked for what just happened but still walked to her room 

*Everyone was looking at her as the CG leaves the bathroom*

~At Mayu's room~

"Why your shirt is broken?" Jurina asked walking around the room like a mad dad 

*Mayu was spacing out*

"did she do something to you?" Jurina asked 

*Mayu remembered the scene were Yuki just looked at her scar*

"she was hurt,her eyes..she was crying " The CG thought 

Jurina pouted "Did she do something to you?" she asked again 

Mayu got up and took another shirt from a drawer then put it on  "i have to talk to her!" she says as she goes away 

*Mayu looked for Yuki around the school but nobody had seen her*

(After 30 min)
She looked again on her room, the pool side, the campus but she wasn't there..

Mayu sighs in defeat but then remebered the table and the trees "Maybe she might be there.." she thought and walked 

It was dark and Mayu's hope faded when she nobody there "she's not here.." she murmured sad then walked back to the rooms building

 She saw somebody sitting on the bench looking at the dark sky

"Yuki chan!" Mayu says with a smile but it soon fades when she sees Yuki swollen eyes for so much crying 

Mayu's tears automatically came out,she got closer and sitted next to her 

Yuki looked down trying to not cry again,Mayu noticed and hugged the taller girl 

Yuki feels the warm coming from Mayu's embrace and can't help to hug her back tigh 

After a few minutes Yuki breaks their hug slowly "i'm not gonna leave you..i don't care about your illness,i wanna be with you!" she says with her forhead connecting with Mayu's 

I just.. we can't..*Yuki kiss Mayu on her lips softly* 

Mayu cupped Yuki's cheek while Yuki was already cupping her cheeks to pull her even closer

*The two kissed as their tears slowly roll their cheeks*

TO BE CONTINUED!! COMMENT!! special thanks to Yukimoko to give that song that inspired me so muchhhh <3 "i was crying while writting this chapter!"xD hope i could transmit the same feeling!! :P
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.9
Post by: clubhappy on November 19, 2012, 10:36:14 AM
I too was crying while reading this chapter  :cry: It's just so sad... Now Yuki has known about Mayu's illness. Yuki please stay by Mayu's side and protect her!!!!!
Thanks for the update, cmze-san.
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.9
Post by: kurogumi on November 19, 2012, 11:27:32 AM
Ìts hurt,

This chapter really hurt me so much

See yuki like that,why mayu?why you want yuki stay away from you?even if its for her sake,please let her be with you till the end


Ah why suddenly i want a happy ending

Hurt its hurt
Damn this tears in my eyes,uhg stop this...,

Cmze-san this is thdm great awesome story!

Thank for the update,ah hurt!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.9
Post by: rhin12 on November 19, 2012, 12:32:03 PM
oh my gash! so much drama!  :panic: I can't take it, this is so sad!  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:
and btw. Those unnamed girls should stop punching Yuki's face!  :angry:

I really love Yuki's character in here! She's so sweet to Mayu!  :wub:
And they kissed!  :inlove:  :inlove:

I'm excited to know what will happen next!
Thanks for this update cmze-san!  :bow:  :bow:

Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.9
Post by: kurogumi on November 19, 2012, 02:29:28 PM
Oh and plus dont kill yuki too,


Well,i just dont want thex die,mayu nor yuki lol i love them too much

But if that not gonna be happen,how about the two die together?its more fair (the heck with me!!!)

Im sorry cmze-san ,but i cant help it, after read this chapter,its hurt me,lol its sad

Peace
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.9
Post by: kurogumi on November 19, 2012, 03:21:42 PM
@anzai: What!!? How could you! How could you anzai-san!! You're so mean to me!!
,how this thing involved your wmatsui!? Thats not fair! I loved wmatsui on your fic a lot!!,OMG you're not just trolling me but now bullying me?? Your cameraman? Fine! Fired me! And i will get  another job as wmatsui underling who like cleaning and sweeping...LOL (what im talking about anyway)

@cmze-san: ah im sorry,look like its turn to a war,but its not my fault,im just inocent reader who like to fantasy anything LOL,but of course you're the one that make the story is the king LOL love all your fic


So im not anzai-san cameraman anymore,bye bye LOL
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.9
Post by: cmze on November 19, 2012, 07:35:42 PM
What!?!?  :shocked

Sorry i didn't mean to cause war!!  :rofl:

Hey mmm i'm not going to kill my precious otp!   :lol:

so be calm!! :)
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.9
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on November 19, 2012, 09:11:22 PM
omg this fanfic is beatiful i cried so much when reading it  :cry:czme u are a genius  :love:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.9
Post by: Playgirlz on November 19, 2012, 09:48:52 PM
I dony know what to say on this chapter, but still want to comment :p
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.9
Post by: kahem on November 20, 2012, 12:38:29 AM
T_T Mayu don't die! Stay with Yuki!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.9
Post by: Chanaline on November 20, 2012, 06:44:53 AM
It is a beautiful chapter!!!!!!!
Yuki know Mayu's illness! :cry:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.9
Post by: BbSis on November 20, 2012, 12:51:51 PM
My heart is aching now ;.;

I'm happy that Mayu accpeted Yuki's feelings but but but :cry:

just curisous about what is going to happen now ;.;
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.9
Post by: yuukimoko on November 20, 2012, 01:46:56 PM
lovely like always!!

Nee Cmze-san look what I found~

Japanese dub soundless voice by Valshe English subs & romaji (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zdD9aq4u2Nk#)

This is part 2 of the song you like soooo~ much.I hope You'll enjoy this too.Tell me if you like it.
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.10
Post by: cmze on November 22, 2012, 10:58:09 AM
                                  ~Time is good as gold~
                                            CH.10
                                 
Yeah this needs a happy chapter so i'm listening a happy song or songs AKB songs!! 

Watanabe Mayu openned her eyes slowly "This is not my room.." she thought just by looking at the ceiling then turned her head and saw Yuki sleeping next to her 

"My eyes feel heavy maybe is the crying last night,i can't imagine how do you feel" The CG thought as she slowly gets up but a hand pulled her back to bed 

"Ahhh!" Mayu shouted as a reaction while Yuki's wraps her legs around Mayu's body 

Mayu looked at the not so sleepinv Yuki who opened her eyes and smiled at her "Are you planning to leave?" she asked hugging Mayu tigher 

"Yuki chan you're squeezing my body.." Mayu says 

Yuki let go Mayu "sorry.." she says with a smile

Mayu gets up as Yuki sits on bed "i'll be back after school!" she says as was about walk away but Yuki again grabbed her hand and made her spin then she hugged the cyborg 

Mayu blushed while Yuki just took a deep breath "You're so tiny.. i'm sitting in this bed and my heigh is gets to your neck!" she says with her eyes closed 

Mayu pouted then relized that Yuki was really enjoying the moment so her hand tugged Yuki's hair behind her ear

Yuki smiles still with her eyes closed "you're tiny but soft!" she says as she presses Mayu's body more 

Mayu blushed again and heatt began to race

Yuki openned her eyes because she heard Mayu's heartbeat "Easy.." she whispred and let go the cyborg

The taller girl got up and kissed Mayu's forhead "it's getting late! what are you doing watching me?" she says looking at Mayu 

Mayu looks at Yuki and both had eye contact 

"Go!" Yuki says 

Mayu pouts again and leaves the room while Yuki only smiles "Silly Cyborg!" she murmured smiling 

~At Mayu's room~

"Where did you sleep?" Jurina asked while Mayu was spacing out remembering the sweet moment a few minutes ago 

Jurina putted herself in front of Mayu "Somebody there?" she asked 

Mayu woke up from her thoughts "yeah.. what's wrong?" she asked as she takes her uniform

Jurina frowned "i asked where did you sleep last night?" 

Mayu looks at Jurina  then remembered her kiss with Yuki and smiled "i felt sleep in the library!" 

Jurina pouted "you know those black queens want you,you shouldn't around by yourself and btw how could you there ghosts in the library?" 

Mayu looked at Jurina "Really?" she asked 

"Yeah it's a fact,noises and stuff happening there at night.. it getting late let's go!" Jurina says 

~ In class~ 

Mayu looked at Yuki's empty seat "This is going to be a boring morning!" she thought with a depressed aura as she seats

Many girls were talking

 "looks like Kashiwagi san is not coming again!" 

(Mayu pouted)

"Those black queens kicked her ass!"

Mayu was tapping her right foot "stupid girls!" she thought irritated 

"Watanabe san is it truth that she got beat beacuse of you?" One of the girls asks 

Mayu was about to react as Nezumi but..

"For this ordinary girl,i don't think so!" A girl says as she seats next to Mayu

Mayu just looks at the girl who was looking at her like if she want to kill her 
 
"Akicha!" Sae says smiling as she enters and sees the girl 
while Rena also smiles 

Sae gets closer to Akichan "How was England?"

"Boring without you!" Akichan replies 

<Sae and Rena smiled>

Soon a teacher entered to the room and everyone went to their seats 

*The class started but Mayu couldn't do anything just think about Yuki*

"I can't believe they hurt her beacuse of me.. is your love for me that big already?" she thought as she puts her hand on her chest because of her racing heart 

"This only happens when i think about you.." Mayu murmured then remembered all those romantic moments and smiled 

~Meanwhile~  (At Yuki's room)

Yuki was surfing on the net but she wasn't just playing around thanks to Mariko sensei she had a clue where to start with those black queens

"I'm not going to let you hurt Mayu.." Yuki thought as she search in the school records 

"Maeda Atsuko.." She murmured as she looks a picture of her as the captain of the cheerleader squad 

"I know you.." Yuki murmured then remebered her initiation night when she other girls and Mariko sensei gave her a bath of flour 

Yuki got up from bed and went to the teacher's room,she looked for Mariko sensei but they told her she was on the recreation Area..

~ At the recreation area~

Yuki entered and saw Mariko sensei eating her breakfast,she sitted on her table

"Oh Kashiwagi san sit, oh you already did!" The teacher says not so happy 

Yuki looks at her "Look i need you to tell me where's Maeda Atsuko? Nobody knows about her" she says whispering 

Mariko sensei looked at her after swallowing "why would i do that? she has nothing to do with those black queens anymore so it's useless!" she says annoyed 

Yuki moved her neck trying to chill "Look, do you think it's fair that they bully everyone that entered to this school by scholarship? i know about that girl that suicide herself because of bullying.. do you want that for Mayu?" 

Mariko Sensei looked other way "i don't care! you know..you have really big  problems with anger so here's someone that can help you!" she says as she pulls out a pen and wrote something on a napking then got up 

"But.." Yuki says 

"i said it's enough.." Mariko sensei says as she walks away

There was a few students there who looked at the scene but then acted normal when the sensei left

Yuki pouted then saw the napking "Paris.." she whispered then save it on her pocket and got out of the recreation area 

~After school~ 

The girls dragged Mayu to the library because they have a project for the next week and all of them have things to do for the next week..

Mayu pouted she wanted to go to Yuki's room but she couldn't so she texted Yuki and told her that she would go later.. 

~At the library~ 

(Note: As it is a rich kids school is a really big library)

Everyone was really focused on their project except for Mayu she really wanted to spend more time with that sweet jerk..

"Mayu chan please could you go get a few books about Frech revolution please?" One of her partners asked 

Mayu sighed "okay.." she says as she gets up and goes to that section 

She read the tittle of many books but the one she wanted was a little bit too high,she tried jumping and even a little climbing but she fail 

She looked at the book "i'm not giving up yet!" she murmured looking at the book 

Soon a hand grabbed the book..

"ehhh! i saw it first!" Mayu says as she turns around then get her eyes open wide 

"Hi.. you're so tiny!" Yuki says laughing 

Mayu pouts and tries to snatch the book from Yuki's hand 

"Too slow!" The taller girl says smiling 

Mayu tries again but gets surprised by a sudden kiss on the lips 

Mayu was shocked first but then just closed her eyes to enjoy the moment 

One of Yuki's hand was snaked around Mayu's waist while the other was cupping The cyborg cheek 

After a few seconds the cyborg breaks their kiss slowly 

*Forheads connecting*

"They might see us.." Mayu murmures as her lios beg her to kiss Yuki again

Yuki licked her lips "Just one more.." she says and kisses the cyborg again 

They kissed passionately so the cyborg took advantage of the situation and snatched the book from Yuki's hand

"I saw it first.." She says with a smile as she walks away to her partners 

Yuki only smiled as her right hand touched some books accidentaly 

"huh?what was that?" Yuki thought as she touches again the same books 

One of them wasn't a book but a box with a form of a book with a really boring name so nobody would touch it 

Yuki took the box and a key with a note fell on the floor.. 

"WTF?" She thought as she fast grabbed the keys and the note,putted the box/book back to it's place and went back to her room 

~At Yuki's room~

Yuki opened the envelope "damn this is giving me shivers!" she thought 

Yuki gulped then preceed to read it 

~The note~ 

Hi!

I used to attend to this school but i only had one reason "destroy the black queens* 

You're reading this is because i fail, their leader Gekikara is insane but still she let me go 

I still have doubts of who she is? and why she let me go? 

I tried to fight them but 5 brains thinks better than one,the only thing i had was this key that leads nowhere and that i stole from one of their hiding places..

yeah they have many of them around the school and every wall has it's own ears so be careful! 

and change the lock of the room because they have keys of every corner of this school.. they control it!

I still think those five brains are 5 of the most brillant brains in the school but i'm  not 100% percent sure of that.. 

"I'm not helpful i'm sorry, i didn't last long!" 

Yuki took a deep breath "Gekikara.." she murmured then called her butler 

~After 30 min At Mayu's room~ 

Mayu tried to unlock the door but it wasn't possible so Jurina opened the door 

"Why the door is not openning?" Mayu asked mad 

"well a man came and changed the lock and he only brough one copy!" Jurina says pouting and showing the key to Mayu 

Mayu sighed "i'm tired,i'll deal with that tomorrow!" she says as she gets her pjs and goes to change to the bathroom 

After changing she got back to the room and throwed herself on bed while Jurina plays with the computer 

Soon Mayu felt sleep.. 

(At 12:30 pm) 

Mayu's phone was vibrating next to her..

After 3 messages Mayu woke up and grabbed it,sge read the message and sighed 

"why would you wanna see me at this hours?" Mayu thought irritated as she gets up 

Mayu went to the campus and saw Yuki sitting on the bench watching the starts

Mayu putted herself in front of Yuki "why somebody would come out at 1:00 am to watch stars?" she asked

Yuki smiles "because they're cute and tiny like you!" she says as she gets up then takes off her jacket and puts it on Mayu

Mayu was red already plus the jacket "dying of cuteness!" she thought

 "i don't want you to catch a cold!" Yuki says with a smile

(Note: Mayu wasn't worried about Yuki because she was wearing a long slips shirt)

Mayu smiles then sits next Yuki and looked at the stars

Yuki looked at Mayu and smiled then pulled out something from her jeans pocket 

"Here.." She says as she takes Mayu's hand and makes her open it then puts what it seems a necklace on the palm of Mayu's hand 

"what's this?" Mayu asked impresed by the stones on the key

"The key to your room" The taller girl answers 

wait a minute,you changed the lock!" Mayu says 

Yuki pouts "everyone have the key to everyone's room so i don't want anyone to enter to your room but me!" she replies crossing her arms 

~Mayu smiled and thought that Yuki was childlish not knowing why Yuki really changed the lock~

"Would you put it on me?" Mayu asked embarrased 

Yuki smiled and putted on her then Mayu turned and showed it to Yuki

"perfect!" Yuki says with a smile 

"Thanks.. i guesss!" Mayu says with a smile and gives a gentle kiss on Yuki's cheek 

Yuki looked at the younger girl in the eyes "we'll be alright!" she whispered 

"what!??" Mayu asked

"nothing.. we're just going to Paris on weekend!" Yuki says bore 

"what!?" Mayu asked 

"what you heard so prepare!" Yuki says as she gets up and grabs Mayu's hand to help her to get down 

"You can't take me to Paris!" Mayu says as she walks behind Yuki who's still pulling her by her hand 

"why not? besides is on your list and i wanna go with only you!" Yuki says as she keeps walking 

"but you always do things for me and i'm ordinary" Mayu says sad looking down then stopped walking 

Yuki turned around and looked at Mayu still looking down"you don't have to do anything but being ordinary Mayu chan that's the way you make me happy!" she says then kisses Mayu's forhead sweetly 

TO BE CONTINUED!! COMMENT!! 
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.10
Post by: kahem on November 22, 2012, 12:30:45 PM
Hehe can't wait for Acchan and Yuki meeting
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.10
Post by: Chanaline on November 22, 2012, 01:56:39 PM
I love it!! aaaah they are so cute!!!! :inlove:

Mayuuuuu~! Yukiiiiiiiiiii~! They going in my country!!!! :grin:

Looking forward for the next!!!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.10
Post by: kurogumi on November 22, 2012, 02:01:06 PM
Oow~
Can't wait “Romance in Paris” !!!

Aaa~ yuki is really a Sweet jerk that Sweeeeet~

More! I want more happy moment LOL

I really like when mayu sleep in yuki room,their morning behaviour and conversation is really sweet warm ever!
Oh and i love the scene when yuki hear mayu's heartbeat,hope this will be yuki new behaviour,hear mayu heartbeat LOL
For me that scen its really touching and so damn romantic

Yuki more care for mayu~


Than for the update cmze-san~
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.10
Post by: rhin12 on November 22, 2012, 02:43:07 PM
Cmze-san!!!!!  XD

I love your update.  :inlove:
Yuki is so sweet. Can i have her?  :lol:

I'm so excited on their trip to Paris.  :deco:

Thanks for this update cmze-san!  :bow:  :bow:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.10
Post by: mo-chan on November 22, 2012, 02:57:20 PM
Mayuki are together now  :deco:
there ll go to Paris  :wub: :inlove: :inlove:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.10
Post by: BbSis on November 22, 2012, 03:49:24 PM
Nhyooooown cute and not sad chapter \o/

butbutbut  :cry: It have a bitter taste since there's no way I forget she is dying  :cry:

Paris, here they go \o/

*waiting anxiously next chapter*
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.10
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on November 22, 2012, 06:46:25 PM
Love this fanfic so much!!
lol cant wait to see yuki and mayu in paris
and i love yuki always steals a kiss from mayu
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.10
Post by: Playgirlz on November 23, 2012, 11:34:05 AM
Well well well Paris would be a great idea, I love it >:]

And meeting Atsuko with Minami? lololol Can't wait anymore, sound so funny xDDD

I'm so excited right now >< Thank you, pls update soon
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.11
Post by: cmze on November 27, 2012, 04:18:20 AM
                                  ~Time is good as gold~
                                            CH.11

(At Mayu's and Jurina's room)
                                
Jurina is packing "Finally friday!"  she shouts 

Mayu also is packing "yeah.." she murmures then remembered the last sweet 2 days with Yuki 

Jurina looks at Mayu "you're blushing!" she says pointing to Mayu's cheeks 

Mayu pouts "what? no,it's just the sun hit me too hard!" she says looking other way 

Jurina smiled "whatever!" she says 

~Meanwhile~ 

Yuki and Sae entered to Yuki's room after running on the campus for at least half an hour 

"being sweat is cool many girls look at me!" Sae says as she stares at the mirror while Yuki opens her mini fridge to take a can of coca cola 

"WTF?" Yuki exclaimed 

Sae got closer "smell like.." 

Yuki closed the fridge "dead bird!" she says pouting then notices a note on her desk 

"Don't think we forgot about you!" 

Yuki squeezes the paper "Fuck u!" she says 

Sae putted her hand on Yuki's shoulder "what are you going to do with the dead bird on your fridge?" 

"Fried Chiken!" Yuki replied 

*Both girls laughed*

Soon somebody knocked the door,Yuki and Sas got serious while both gets closer slowly..

Yuki gulped then opened the door "Mayu chan!" she says with a smile 

Sae pouted "am i missing something?" she asked looking at the two girls sharing eye contact

"okay now i'm going.." The tomboy says as she passes next to both but they totally ignored her 

"now i'm gone!" Sae says pouting as she walks away 

(The two were still spacing out)

"with this kind of friends why you need enemies?"Sae murmured then looked at hot girl and went after her 

Yuki invited Mayu in.. 

"Are you prepared?" Yuki asked with a smile 

Mayu nods with a smile  

Yuki kisses the shorter girl's forhead "i'll go to shower and i'll call you when the limo is here for us!" she says with a smile 

~After a few minutes~

Yuki was already dressed,she walked around the empty hall with her bag on her back,somehow in moment like this the only thing on her head was what that letter says 

"How did they got inside me room? do they control the scholl?" She thought then heard some teachers talking 

"I think Matsui san will get the 1rt spot again,she's a really great student!" One of the teacher says

"Wait but Watanabe san is the same classroom! isn't she a genious girl?" Another teacher asks 

Yuki looked down "top students.. that's it! They hate schoolarships cause those kids are genious so they're a threat,that's why they want to bull Mayu!" 

*Yuki's phone ringed indicating that the limo is out so she called Mayu*

~Skipping all that~ On the plane~ 

Everyone was sleeping..

Except Mayu who was watching a movie then she noticed that Yuki fell sleep on her shoulder..

"why she's so damn cute?"She though as she looks at her sweet jerk 

(Perv Mayu:  i wanna kiss,i wanna kiss now!) she slowly gets closer to the other girl's lips 

Yuki opened her eyes and saw Mayu in the eyes as she comes closer to her face

Mayu got nervous and red then retreat her movement "you had something on your cheek.." she replied nervous 

Yuki smirked "Really?" 

*Mayu gulped*

"Then take a closer look,please!" Yuki says as she cupped Mayu's cheeks to prevent her to move then planted a kiss on her lips 

After a few seconds of kissing,Mayu was pulling Yuki closer to deep their kiss and the same was doing Yuki 

Suddenly Yuki broke their passionate kiss 

Mayu pouted 

"what?Somebody can see us.." Yuki says then looks back and see everyone was sleeping 

Mayu took a deep breath calmed herself and kept watching her movie ignoring Yuki 

"Are you mad pervert?" Yuki asked 

 "i'm not a pervert!" Mayu says pouting with her eyes focusing on the movie and crossing her arms like a little spoil kid *Kinda ignoring Yuki..*

Yuki looked the spoil child "Yes,you are! first you groped my chest and now i feel like if your tongue raped mine which is really cool but not on airplanes!" she says smirking 

Mayu stopped crossing her arms then looked at Yuki "So can i touch your chest?" she asked with a smirk,rising her hands and moving her fingers like an unique pervert

"Ehhh! where's my sweet Mayu?" Yuki asked nervous 

Mayu smirked "not here now!" 

"Pervert Mayu chan stop!" Yuki says laughing because Mayu was tickling her not groping her as she said she would 

~At the reception~ 

Mayu speaks french fluently and Yuki doesn't because she's a rich idiot,she talked to the receptionist and asked for the married suite 

*"Groping Yuki on her sleep..CHECK!" Pervert Mayu thought*

The receptionist reacted but then just let it go.. "Married,i thought in Japan you couldn't?" she murmured 

~In the room~ 

"Why that recepcionist acted like that?" Yuki asked while opens the door 

*Mayu smirked*

"Ehhh!! what's this?" Yuki reacted looking at the heartshaped bed,the jacuzzi and the view they had cause the balcony

"It's elegant and cute!" Mayu says as she enters and puts her bag on the bed 

"Ehh! You asked for this you pervert!" Yuki says pointing at Mayu 

Yuki frowned "what happened to you?" she murmured as she also puts her bag on the bed 

Mayu smiled "i wanna live lively with no regrets.." she says serious 

Yuki looked at Mayu with a sweet look then pulled her for a hug and as an instict she also hugged the taller girl 

They stayed like that for a moment..

"Let's have fun,we're in Paris!" Yuki says with a smile 

Mayu also smiles 

The two lovebirds went walk around the beatiful city..

"So many lights.. this is so pretty" Mayu says amazed 

"it's called the city of lights! what do you expect? to be all dark!" Yuki asked grinning

Mayu pouted while Yuki smiled and putted her arm around The shorter girl's  neck 

Mayu looked at her girlfriend and also smiled 

After a few minutes Yuki's phone was ringing,she walked ahead and answered 

Mayu frowned "what's she hiding?" she wondered then Yuki got back and ducked with her back facing Mayu 

"what are you doing?" The CG asked 

"Get on!" Yuki says 

Mayu frowned "what? why?" 

Yuki sighed *oosing patience* "Because we're going to walk a lot tomorrow, i don't want you to get tired and i don't take a taxi cause i don't want you to miss anything!" she says 

"But..." Mayu murmured 

"Just get on!!!" Yuki shouted 

Mayu pouts "why don't ask nicely?" she asks 

Yuki turns her head an looked at the younger girl "Why you don't shut up and just get on? you get to my nerves with so many questions!!" 

Mayu looked other way and walked ahead while Yuki was still ducking 

Yuki looked at the CG "Really?" she muttered to herself "Mayu chan would you please do me the honor to get on please..again?" she asked pouting 

Mayu smiled then got back and jumped on the taller girl's back "You see,you just had to ask nicely!" she says on Yuki's ear while the taller girl pouts while walks "you little..*Yuki smirks* and walks 

"This city is really amazing.." Mayu says looking at the sky 

Yuki smiles "yes,it is.. that's why i wanted to come with you,this special places are shared with special people. Don't you think?" she asked 

Mayu kisses Yuki's cheek softly "thank you.." 

Yuki looks at the head on her shoulder "Anything for you.." she replied blushing 

Mayu smirks "Black is blushing,SO CUTE!!!" she says 

Yuki pouts "i'm not blushing.. those stupid lights make look like that!" she replied 

*Mayu smiles*

After walking 20 min (yes,who ever thought that skinny girl could be so strong?" 

They get to a restaurant,Yuki puts Mayu down "wait here i have to do something!" she says as she enters to the restaurant 

~Inside the restaurant~

Yuki looked around "there's she is!" she though as she walks to the table 

"Kashiwagi Yuki..Right?" The girl sitting alone says 

"Yes.." Yuki answers as the girl invites her to seat 

"What do you want?" The girl asked 

Yuki looks around "why this place?" she asked 

"Acchan do you want more?" a waiter asked 

"No,thanks i'm fine!" Acchan replies with a smile 

Yuki looked at the waiter who was looking at her "what? go away!" she says to him in a cold manner

Acchan laughed "you haven't changed a bit so rude to anyone no mattwr who!" 

Yuki was a little embarrased "i can't help it *Shakes her head and gets serious* who are those Black queens?" 

Acchan got also serious "what do you want with them?" she asked 

"Destroy them or at least they stop bullying someone i care about!" Yuki replies 

Acchan looked at the palm of her right hand "they're bad,don't get on their way and tell your friend to change of school!" she says coldly 

Yuki pouts "why everyone acts this way?" she asked mad

Acchan looked other way "they're dangerous.. they just hurt for fun!" she says sad 

"Then why you became their leader?" Yuki asked 

"because i wanted to save someone.." Acchan murmures and looks at her ring 

Yuki looks at the older girl "Takahashi Minami.. she entered to the school thanks to a sholarship too!" 

Acchan gets sad "they were bullying her to drop the school but she was too stubborn to do that,no matter how hard they hurt her she wouldn't leave so i got tired of seeing her suffer then joined and became their leader" she says as she plays with the napkins

"Why you didn't destroy them?" The taller girl asked 

Acchan looked at Yuki in the eyes "It's easier say it than actually do it!" 

~Meanwhile outside~ 

Mayu pouted she wanted to enter but maybe Yuki would get mad..

A guy appears from nowhere and gets closer to Mayu "Hi.. are you lost?" he asks in japanese 

"No,i'm waiting for someone!" Mayu replied 

The guy smirked "then we have less time!" he says and takes Mayu by her arm and tries to drag her with him 
 
"What!?? let me alone!" Mayu says in japanese 

People walking around thought they were a couple because both were japanese so they didn't bother to look 

"come with me.." He says forcing with Mayu with his cruel intentions

Someone fast punched the guy on his face causing him to loose balance and fell on the floor 

"Yuki chan.." Mayu says as she was about to hug Yuki but she moved fast and started kicking the guy hard several times 

"I'M GOING TO KILL YOU!" Black Yukirin shouts as she kicks the guy merciless 

*Yuki has her boot on the guy's face*

Mayu grabbed Yuki from the back to stop her (the guy was already bleeding and people were gathering around) 

Yuki stopped her attack on the guy then walked away mad with Mayu following her 

*After 10 min of walking without saying a word*

Yuki was already cool off so she looked at Mayu "what's wrong?" she asked 

Mayu stopped walking and looked at the ground "Why you acts unracional all the time?" 

Yuki pouted and grabbed Mayu's arm "Are you defending him?" she asked irritated 

Mayu was still looking down and some tears came "Stupid Yuki! Stupid Yuki! Stupid Yuki!" she says and pushes the taller girl who slipped and fell sitting 

"Do you think i care about that guy? what if he hurt you? you don't think about that don't you? don't you remember what those Black queens did to you?" The CG asked shouting and crying 

Yuki felt relief then got up and putted herself in front of the crying Mayu "First they drugged me and tigh me up second i take jiu-jitso clasess and i can beat more 10 guys if they make me mad!" 

Mayu looked at Yuko "so what?" she says sobbing

Yuki sighed like if she was bore surprisingly pulled Mayu to her and looked at her in the eyes 

"what are you doing?" The CG asked nervous, kinda red and trying to stop to avoid Yuki's eyes

Yuki smirked "is the cyborg system getting damage?" she asked 

Mayu pouted "what.. *A sudden kiss* 

~At the room~ 

The two girls showered of course one first then the other..

Mayu got out of the bathroom and she saw Yuki eating what she ordered 

"Again eating..we ate before going out!" Mayu says impressesed 

"I was.. forget it!" Yuki says as she takes Mayu's hand and both walked to balcony 

Mayu looked at view "I can see the Eiffel tower from here!" she says amazed 

Yuki hugs Mayu from behind and kissed the back of Mayu's head  "don't worry,you'll see it closer tomorrow.." 

Mayu smiled "You can be really sweet at times.." she says as she rubs Yuki's arms 

Yuki smirks and makes her turn around "Yeah but if i were so sweet this wouldn't be fun.. you know you're really boring!" 

Mayu pouted then gave Yuki a peck "Sing for me!" 

Yuki reacted "ehh why?" she asked 

Mayu smiled "your voice is nice so sing!" she says as she turns around takes Yuki's arms and make her hug her 

Yuki pouted "i'm not going to sing.. forget about that's just one in a life time!" 

Mayu let go Yuki's hands and went to bed 

Yuki entered to the room and saw Mayu already under the blankets "Really? you're going to act like this just beause i don't want to sing.. you spoiled little child!" she shouted 

Yuki growled then sitted next to Mayu..

ORENJI iro no mikazuki ga
sora no hashikko de suneteiru mitai
denwa gurai dekinakatta no?
anata ga nikutarashii
zutto matteta no ni...

(Mayu smiled)

kyou wa shigoto ga isogashii koto nante
watashi ni datta wakkateiru kedo
hitori kiri no ASUFARUTO wa ashioto ga samishi sugite
aki kan no hitotsu keritaku naru

(Mayu sitted on bed and stared at her girlfriend singing) 

nakitaku naru hodo
anata ni aitai
ima sugu kono sora wo tonde ikitai
doushite konna ni suki ni nattan darou?
honki ni naru tsumori wa nakkata
yokaze no shiwaza

Yuki stopped singing *Mayu pouted* can you at least come closer?" the taller girl asked 

Mayu smiled got closer and rested her head on Yuki's shoulder while Yuki hold her hands 

Yuki got back singing for her beloved cyborg till this one fell sleep on her shoulder 

Yuki looked at the younger girl "i will protect you always.." she whispers then puts Mayu in a proper position to sleep 

"Don't stop singing yet.." The CG says softly 

Yuki smiled "don't worry..sleep.." she says as she puts a blanket on Mayu

TO BE CONTINUED!! COMMENT!!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.11
Post by: clubhappy on November 27, 2012, 04:46:04 AM
So sweet, Mayuki~ And they stay at a married suite  :wub:
Hope the Black Queens don't come all the way to Paris, I don't want them to ruin Mayuki's moments.
Thanks cmze-san.
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.11
Post by: kurogumi on November 27, 2012, 06:18:49 AM
I get it,
 i get something when read this chapter!

So basically uh maybe,
well maybe rena is not bad as i think before,maybe she's became the leader of black queen with the same reason as acchan,but who? Its jurina? But jurina is not a scholarship student,then why? (hmm i dont want to think too much since cmze-san always make it so surprising LOL)

And for mayuki moment...

Woah!!! Its the perfect sweet!!
How can they act sweet everywhere everytime~ awww im spechless

Hugging kissing singing sleeping~ they just sleeping like that? LOL what im thinking...

Mayu bought her pill right? When she drank that pills?
Did yuki watch when mayu drank her pills?

Hope tomorrow trip will safe and more romantic scene,you know its french...and its paris... so...so...(ah why im so perv minded)



All hail mayuki

Thank for the update cmze-san! Yahoooo~
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.11
Post by: Chanaline on November 27, 2012, 06:52:29 AM
Soooo Sweet!!! :heart:

Mayuki are so cute... Ahhh~! Why so cute???

Eheh!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.11
Post by: steven_0809 on November 27, 2012, 06:57:23 AM
FINALLY thank u i was waiting for a new chapter for a longgggggggggggg time  :cathappy:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.11
Post by: BbSis on November 27, 2012, 12:49:44 PM
Sweet and cute chapter *.* so Acchan became the queen to help Takamina....

Then, Yuki is going to try to become the queen? :?

Thanks for the update o/
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.11
Post by: leEwẬy on November 27, 2012, 01:58:13 PM
MAYUKI!!! Sweet  :shy2:!!!Thanks for your update!!! :mon thumb
Update soon please  :kneelbow:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.11
Post by: m00nchild on November 27, 2012, 08:38:08 PM
Nice update,
Mayuki moment,
it was too sweet & peaceful,
hope no people to bother their fake honeymoon,
I got something bad about the guy pull wanted to drag Mayu,(maybe i think too much)
suddenly in Paris a guy know how to speak Japanese, and wanted to drag a girl, (it seem very fishy)

Would Rena wanted to protect Yuki?
that y she be the leader of the Black Queen like Acchan?
or Gekikara is another person??

Looking forward for the next update.
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.11
Post by: jell_o_jello on November 27, 2012, 11:10:10 PM
MaYuki sweet time in Paris  :heart:
And now I'm curious about Geki/Rena thing.


Looking forward to the next chapter, thanks cmze-san
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.11
Post by: kahem on November 28, 2012, 12:28:05 AM
So cute~
I wonder how would be the confrontation between Rena and Yuki
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.11
Post by: itamana on November 29, 2012, 02:26:01 AM
 Interesting story !!!  :bow:

Maaaayuuuuuukiiiiii  :twothumbs

Thanks for the update!!!   :grin:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.11
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on December 02, 2012, 02:32:31 PM
please update soon thank u :heart: :deco:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.11
Post by: kyzel12 on December 02, 2012, 05:34:17 PM
Kyaaaaa~ AWESOME.. New reader here.. Hope you update soon..

Reading fics of AKB48.. It just made my day..

MaYuki~! is LOVE  :wub: :wub: :wub:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.12
Post by: cmze on December 03, 2012, 01:15:27 AM
                                  ~Time is good as gold~
                                            CH.12

Yuki openned her eyes fast,she noticed Mayu was hugging her so she hugged back with a wide smile plastered on her face 

"Mayu chan!" She says squeezing the yonger girl but she didn't open her eyes so she tried

"Yuki you're squeezing me!" Mayu replied with her eyes still closed 

Yuki knelt on bed "c'mon Mayu chan wake up is a beatiful day in PARIS!!" she shouts as she shakes Mayu 

"Ahh! ahh! i'm up!" Mayu says as she sits on bed and looks at Yuki who's smirking 

"what? what's wrong?" The CG asked worried 

Yuki smiled widely "I want some cuddling time now!" she shouts and hugs on Mayu 

Yuki landed on top of Mayu and hugged her tight then took a deep breath to inhale her scent,Yuki's head was Mayu's chest she wad with her eyes closed 

Mayu could do nothing but smile and play with her hair "you know you're just a person who has so much love to give,you're so adorable!"

Yuki hugs Mayu tigher still with her head on her chest replies smiling "it's just that i need to touch you,feel you,hold you,kiss you and  i can't control myself!" 

Mayu blushed "Yuki.." she murmured and looked at Yuki with a sweet look and wrapped her arms around Yuki to hold her tigher 

"I never wanna be separate from you!" Mayu thought soon tears were on the corner of Mayu's eyes but she hild it,she didn't wanna ruin the trip 

Yuki got up "Cuddling time is over but don't worry there will be a second part!" she says as she grabs her clothes 

Mayu smiled then turned on the tv 

~ They changed their clothes and soon left their room~ 

The two found a beatiful restaurant..

Yuki was talking but Mayu could do nothing but stare and think:

"I'm in the moon,i don't know how this happened! why you looked at me? there are many other girls,boys that would totally go out with you..."

*Yuki kept talking and smiling*

"you're rich,smart,beatiful why you chose me? don't tell me that you supposed to be mine since the beginning,as a payback for this.." Mayu thought then touches her chest 

"Yeah,it because of that.. you're mine! that's why you didn't give up on me even though you knew about my illness now i can't let you go.. we're soulmates planned to meet in the way.. i'll never forget you Kashiwagi Yuki"

Mayu looked down then smiled 

"Mayu chan taste it! it's delucious!" Yuki says as she takes a spoon 

Mayu looked around to the people.. 

"Why you mind about them?" Yuki asked frowning 

Mayu sighed "i forgot you're no the type who rathers hide!" she says 

Yuki smiled "there you go!" she says with the spoon on Mayu's mouth 

*Soon the two ate and went out*

Yuki walked the streets of Paris hand in hand with Mayu 

"Take a picture of that Mayuyu!" Yuki says amazed as a little kid 

"then over there two!" Yuki shouts pointing 

Mayu moves fast and takes another picture,After a few seconds Yuki became a picture maniac and starts bossy around Mayu 

Mayu got mad "Don't boss me around!" she says irriated 

Yuki looked at mad Mayu "then give me your phone mine doesn't have battery,i forgot ti charge!" she says smiling 

Mayu pouted and walked away 

Yuki frowned "Hey where are you going?" she asked as she walks behind 
 
"If you love Paris so much then marry it!" Mayu says mad as she walks 

Yuki was speechless "Could it be a person that might get jealous cause a city?" she wondered 

"Are you jealous?" Yuki asked 

Mayu pouted "of course not,it's just you don't give me your attention!" she says looking other way 

Yuki puts her finger on her chin "Is not that the meaning of jealousy?" she wondered then grabbed Mayu's arm 

"what are you doing?" Mayu asked 

"Let's sit here and watch this lake" Yuki says as she makes Mayu seat next to her 

"What?!?" Mayu asked 

"where are we?" Yuki asked 

Mayu sighed "Square de l'ile de france " she says then looked at the view and calmed 

Yuki got closer and putted her hand on Mayu's head "Jealous Mayu is cute!" she says smirking 

Mayu crossed her arms "i wasn't jealous!" she says as she cross her arms 

Yuki only smiles then looks at the view again and sighed "I always been in this kinda places since i was a kid."

*Mayu looked at Yuki*

"They would always say those places are specials and beatiful.."  Yuki gets up and takes a rock 

*Mayu look changed to a sad one*

" To me those words were a lie,when i was here i didn't see anything special or beatiful.I just felt even more lonely than before but.. " Yuki throws the rock away then turned to look at Mayu and smiled 

"Today.. you're here with me!" she says with her charming smile "

Mayu smiled then got up and hugged Yuki "I feel the same way.." she says still hugging Yuki 

Yuki smirked "i thought you were poor!" she says 

Mayu punched Yuki's arm softly "About my feelings for you Baka!" 

Yuki stuck her tongue out

Mayu looked at Yuki "I think we're soulmates,that's why this feelings grow so fast!" she says serious 

Yuki smiled but then pulled out something from her pocket "here.. i'm glad you feel the same way that i do!" 

"what's this?" Mayu asked then looked at the bracelet 

"a really cool bracelet!" Yuki says with a smile 

"what? stop buying me things!"  Mayu replies as she tries to walk away but Yuki grabbed her wrist 

"It's a gift!" Yuki says 

"no, i don't want it!" Mayu replies but somehow Yuki was stronger and end up putting it on her wrist 

"well well!" A guy a says while other comes behind him 

Yuki putted Mayu behind her "who are you?" 

"what?! you don't recognized my face!" The other guy says as she comes closer 

"ohh you!" Yuki says with a careless manner 

"This girl beat me brother,let's finish her!" He says mad pointing at Yuki 

"Fight with me!" The older one of the 2 brothers shouts then runs to Yuki 

Yuki pushed Mayu away then dodge the punch 

"amazing!" Another girl says in french 

Yuki was dodging every punch and kick

"Is this a martial arts show?" A bunch of kids wondered 

Yuki was bragging her abilities and make the older brother look ridiculous 

*Many kids records with their phones*

After a few seconds the younger one grabbed Yuki from behind 
 
"what!?" Yuki exclaimed 

"you thought i would stay here watching?" The younger asks 

The older punched Yuki on her stomach full energy 

"Yukii!!" Mayu shouted she wss about to run to her

"Stop there!" Yuki shouts "now i'm mad!" she says 

"ohh i'm so scare!" The older brother says 

Yuki stepped on the foot of the guy that was holding her 

"Ouchh!" He shouts in pain,Yuki use her elbow and hit him on his face 

"Ehh!" The older one says impress then reacted and tried to punch Yuki but she dodge it and punched him on his stomach 

He bent to handle the pain with his hands on his stomach  so Yuki got closer and finish him with a hard punch on his face (he loose a tooth! cause Yuki wears rings) 

Mayu grabbed Yuki 

"Let's go Mayu!"

The two girls head back to the hotel without saying a word 

~At the room~ 

Mayu was sad she thought this somehow was her fault even if Yuki doesn't show that punch hurt 

Mayu looked around and noticed Yuki wasn't around "where did she go?" she thought as she opens the door of the bathroom 

Yuki looked stopped unzipping her shorts "hi.." she says frowning 

(Yuki was only wearing her bra and was about to unzip her shorts when Mayu openned the door) 

Mayu looked at Yuki who just move to close the key of water and then looked at the CG

Mayu blushed then looked other way  "you're arms and stomach are red.." 

Yuki looked at it "it's truth maybe cause that guy grabbed me and the other punched me on my stomach!" she says surprised 

Mayu got closer and saw Yuki's knuckles 

Yuki looked other way "it's fine,once i shower i'll be fine!" she says smiling

Mayu looked down "This is all my fault,we should had gone to the police to put that guy in jail for a bit then he wouldn't disturb us and they  wouldn't hurt you!" 

Yuki laughed then hugged Mayu "silly Mayu,shower with me!" she says laughing 

"what!??" Mayu asked then got super red 

"easy tiger,i'm not saying we should do it naked.We can use our underwear like this!" Yuki says as she removes her shorts "Like a swimsuit!" she shouts and gets on the bubble tub then looked at Mayu 

Mayu was blushing hard "i think a vein already exploted on my brain!" she thought

"c'mon Mayu this tub is kinda big for me alone!" Yuki shouts with a smile 

Mayu was about to unbutton her shirt but then remembered the scar on her chest and stopped 

Yuki remembered also so she got out of the tub and putted herself in front of Mayu 

Inner Mayu 1:This is badddd she's all wet..  SO HOT!!
Inner Mayu 2 cover her eyes: DON'T LOOK IF U WANNA LIVE!! 
Innner Mayu 3 drooling : I'm gonna die happy!! 

"Mayu chan is so beatiful!" Yuki says as puts her hands on Mayu's first button 

"Everything about you perfect,perfect skin,perfect tone,perfect butt,perfect smile" She says as she starts unbutonning her shirt 

"Yuki.." Mayu murmures blushing hard looking other way 

Yuki smiled "but there's one place that makes me more happier than anyother!" she says as she end with the buttons and looks at Mayu's chest 

Mayu was redder looking other way then a cold finger traces her scar softly 

"Yuki.." She murmured as she sees Yuki tracing her finger 

"This brought you to me..we'll get through this!" The taller girl says as she unzips Mayu's skirt,it slips down 

Let's go Mayu chan! Yuki says with  a smile and pulls Mayu with her 

The played with the water,they even played as if their hands were ducks,then made riciculous hairstyles with the shampoo 

"Mayu chan bring my phone!" Yuki says as she tries to maintain her hair up 

Mayu fast got out of the bathroom and saw Yuki's iphone charing,she disconected it then she unlock it and putted the camera but she couldn't help to see in the corner a picture of her of this afternoon,Mayu scrolled the pictures as she walks to the bathroom "this are a lot pictures of me when i was distracted even videos,that's why her phone died!" 

The CG smiled then entered to the bathroom to the bathroom and found Yuki depressed 

"Gravity is my enemy,why you took so long? did you take a nap on the way?" The tall girl asked pouting 

Mayu only smiled then putted the phone aside  to enter to the tub and kiss the bossy girl

~After a few seconds~

Mayu breaks the kiss and looks at Yuki in the eyes "i feel like my chest is going to explote!" 

"what??? do i take you to the hospital?" Yuki asked nervous 

*Mayu laughed*

*Yuki pouted*

Mayu got on Yuki's lap and looked at her in the eyes "I love you.." she says with a smile 

Yuki grabbed Mayu by her waist then smiled "I love you too!" Then kissed her 

~Meanwhile in Nagoya~ 

Rena and Jurina were watching a movie in Rena's room 

Suddenly her phone rang 

*Jurina paused the movie*

Rena opened a drawer and pull out a phone 

*A new text message*

Dear Gekikara take a look at this please.. 

 "a link.." she murmured then clicked on it and soon a video openned 

"Yuki.." Rena murmured 

*The video was Yuki fighting in Paris* 

"what the hell are you doing in Paris? did you.. Acchan!" Rena whispered mad then noticed Mayu when she grabbed Yuki in the end of the video 

Rena was squeezing her phone cause her anger 

"I didn't know you had another phone!" Jurina says as she tries to take it from Rena's hand 

Rena reacted fast and grabbed Jurina by her collar

"Rena.. Rena chan!" Jurina as she's trying to breathe 

Rena mad look changed to "her" 

"Jurina i'm sorry!" Rena says 

Jurina looked at Rena as she catch her breath 

Jurina left the room.. 

Rena looked other way "Sorry.." 

TO BE CONTINUED!! COMMENT!!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.12
Post by: lovemariharu on December 03, 2012, 01:56:57 AM
Rena the bad guy..
Rena.. I can't believe you now T.T

Why did you plan to hurt your own friend just because of..
Because of.. Got no comment now..

Rena the bad guy T.T
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.12
Post by: kurogumi on December 03, 2012, 02:25:36 AM
“........”

Great...,


Lovely...,


awesome...,


incredible...,


hilarious...,


Beautiful...,


Touching...,



Can't describe how i felt when i read mayuki moment...

I cant fine a word to describe that,so i will comment about rena and jurina in nagoya,

Heck!! So that guy is the black queen underling! I cant believe that,a rich people really scary...

Hope they will fine until they comeback to japan...awww


Rena! Wow now im wondering who rena really love? Its yuki or jurina LOL


Thank for the update cmze-san!!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.12
Post by: mo-chan on December 03, 2012, 09:15:58 AM
wow mayuki were so lovely  :deco:
but I really can't understand Rena and poor Jurina :catglare:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.12
Post by: m00nchild on December 03, 2012, 11:00:38 AM
Nice Update.

NO WAY!! Rena cant be bad,
there must have some explaination on Rena side,
Mayuki moment just as sweet as ever,
but Rena cant be bad, I dun believe in it, sure got reason.

Loooking forward for the next update.
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.12
Post by: Chanaline on December 03, 2012, 11:57:35 AM
YUKIRIN IS SO SWEEEETTTT!!!!

Rena!!! Why is she get mad when she sees Yuki with Mayu???
She is bad... Noooooo!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.12
Post by: itamana on December 03, 2012, 12:27:02 PM
why Rena mad??
 :?  :?  :?
did mayu or yuki do somehing wrong???

thanks for the update... :twothumbs
and waiting the next !!!!  :thumbsup
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.13
Post by: cmze on December 04, 2012, 08:03:42 AM
                                  ~Time is good as gold~
                                            CH.13

~On the plane getting back to Japan~

Yuki was lost in her thoughts when Mayu moved her head and brought her back to earth 

Yuki looked at Mayu who was sleeping on her shoulder then smiled "Cute" she thought "i'm sure we can deal with all this" she murmured then kissed Mayu on her forhead 

~At the limo~ 

Yuki was still thinking but then Mayu grabbed her hand and smiled to her 

"Mayuyu i was thinking.." Yuki says looking at her 

"Mayuyu? *Mayu frowned* yes,i kinda noticed you been thinking a lot!" The CG says looking at the taller girl

Yuki pouted "Yeah i like to call you like that do you have a problem? or somebody else called you like that before?"

Mayu putted her finger on her chin "hmmm" 

"what?!? who is he? i'm going to kill him!" Yuki says taking Mayu by her shirt and putting her close to her face

Mayu pouts "my mom jerk!" she shouts 

"Huh?" Yuki let go Mayu's shirt "Sorry hahaha sorry!" she says smiling nervous 

Mayu crossed her arms and looked other way "you're a jerk!" she says mad

Yuko kept smiling nervous "c'mon it was your fault!" 

"ehhh!!" Mayu turned to look at Yuki with "WTF? face" 

The limo stopped..

"what's wrong?" Mayu asked 

Yuki smiled "you see that car behind us.. well you have to go with it" 

"what?!? why?" Mayu asked 

Yuki smiles and explain nervous "I don't like doing this but if they see us together they would know you're important to me and would try to do something against you so it might be good if we pretend at school that we're indiferent.." 

"Eh!?" Mayu says as Yuki gets out of the limo then openned Mayu's door then pulled her out 

The chauffeur already took Mayu's bag and put it on the other car 

Mayu only looked at Yuki who was waving and smiling
 
"I hate you..stupid Yuki" The CG thought as she walks to the other car ignoring Yuki 

Yuki was waiting for a flying kiss or something from the CG but she never did 

Yuki was standing there

"Kashiwagi san the car already left" The chauffeur says 

Yuki looked at the chauffeur "no flying kiss,no wave..psst mean CG!"  she thought then entered to the limo

~At school~ 

Mayu arrived first,she went to her room and saw Jurina laying on her bed listening music 

"Hello Mayu chan!" Jurina says not so happy 

"What's wrong? no smile?" Mayu asked as she puts her bag on the floot and sits next to Jurina 

"It's Rena chan!" Jurina says looking down *flash of the scene last night* 

Mayu pouted "you two have a really weird relantionship!" she says with a sighs

Jurina looked at Mayu "it's not weird,i'm in love with her since i met her!"  

Mayu was confused "Your parents didn't adopt you when you were a baby?"
 
"No.." Jurina replied as she gets up then leaves the room 

"What did i say?" Mayu wondered 

Jurina walked the hall "That wasn't Rena.. my Rena is kind and full of love" she thought 

"Yuki why you didn't tell me that you wouldn't stay here the weekend,i lost my weekend here!" Sae says complaining as she walks with Yuki the hall 

Yuki stopped walking and looked at Sae "Sorry,it wasn't planned!" she says with a smile 

Sae's jaw dropped "Are.. you.. apologizing?" she asked 

Yuki facepalmed herself "Stupid cyborg!" she thought "maybe" she says with digusted face 

Sae putted her arm around Yuki's shoulder "That a face of you that i didn't know!" she says laughing 

Yuki looked at Sae "Do you want me to punch you in your pretty face instead?" she asked serious 

"Ok.. ok! now you're you!" Sae says as she removes her arms 

Both walked to Yuki's room..

Jurina was shocked "what was that?" she thought 

~At Yuki's room~

The two entered to the room and remembered at the same time 

"The bird!" Both shouts and turned to look at the mini fridge 

There was a note on it..

Yuki pouted then putted her bag aside  "son of a.." she murmures as she walks to grab the note that was on the mini fridge

Sae putted her chin on Yuki's shoulder to read the note 

Yuki felt the weight then looked at Sae "What the hell are you doing?" 

Sae removed her head "i wanted to watch!" she says careless and snatches the paper 

Yuki was with her eyes on fire "This shoulder it's not for you!" she shouts 

Sae looked at Yuki serious "They want to meet you and you're worried about your shoulder!" she says

Yuko eyes got back to normal "it will be fine!" she says then opens the fridge 
 
"Noo!" Sae shouts and tries to stop Yuki 

Both looked at the fridge 

"It's clean.." the two says at the same time 

Yuki smiled "At least they clean that up.."

Sae looked at Yuki "You idiot,don't think this lightly!" she says shaking Yuki 

Yuki release herself "i have something to do,see you later!" she says as she walks away 

Yuki walked the hall "i wonder if Mayu chan is still mad!" she murmures then a hand grabbed her 

"Kashiwagi san!"

"Sensei!"

"Let's go,i'll invite yoy something to eat!" Mariko sensei says with a smile 

Yuki pouted "i really wanted to see Mayu before that meet!" she thinks then sighed and agreed with the sensei 

~Both eating at the recreation area~ 

So how was it? Mariko asked then proceed to drink her coffee 

"I thought you didn't care!" Yuki says careless 

Mariko pouts "don't tease me kid" she says serious 

Yuki smirked "She told me nothing that i didn't know already so she wasn't helpful at all!" 

"What?!?" Mariko replied shocked 

"I just need to find their hiding places.." Yuki says in low tone of voice 

"Yuki chan!" someone says 

"what?" Yuki turned her head mad then saw Akicha smiling at her 

"I missed you!" She said then proceeds sit next to Yuki and hugs her 

"What did i do?" Yuki complained looking at the ceiling 

"did you miss me?" Akicha asked 

"There is your answer!" Mariko sensei says smiling as she gets up and leaves 

"what!??!  don't leave me here with this maniac!" Yuki shouts desperate 
 
"i was looking for you since i got here but i couldn't find you,what you been doing huh?" Akicha asked 

Yuki looked at Akicha "My answer.." she thought 

Inner Yuki one: "what hell she was talking about? Mariko sensei is crazy,she should date someone!"
Inner Yuki two: "do this girl shut up? i wish she had a mute button and also Mayu sometimes!"
Inner Yuki three:" Destiny would be so cruel if Mayu cross that door and sees this girl hugging me!" 
Inner Yuki four with glasses: "Ehh! now i know Akicha is the headmaster granddaughter,she can get us the planes of this school!" 

Yuki got back to earth "You don't have to hug me that much! you know? btw can you get me the school planes humm.. please!" 

"Huh? so cuteeee! if you ask it that way sure!" Akicha says hugging Yuki more 

Yuki smiled nervous "why i have to deal with this things?" 

Soon Jurina and Mayu entered to the recreation area 

The first thing Mayu saw was that new girl hugging.. her Yuki 

Mayu blinked a few time while Yuki was nervous 

Inner Yuki one: "WTF?"
Inner Yuki two: "When i wanted to bully her,you didn't put her on my way and now i don't want her around.. what did i do to you?" she shouts looking up 
Yuki number three: THIS IS NOT WHAT IT LOOKS LIKE! THIS IS NOT WHAT IT LOOKS LIKE! she shouts several times running around 
Yuki number four with glasses: "You can't tell her that now it can be dangerous,apologize later!" she says as she fixes her glasses 

Mayu and Jurina sitted..

"why are you looking at them?" Jurina asked 

"No,i wasn't!" Mayu says and look down to avoid Yuki's gaze 

Yuki number three: Still running around shouting and crying 
Yuki number four: "You're doing this to protect her so be quiet!"

Akicha looked at Yuki "why are you looking at that girl?" she asked then got up "ohh that's the ordinary girl i was talking about my friends says that you defend her from the black queens,is it truth?" she asked poiting at Mayu

Jurina almost chokes with her juice 

Yuki gets up and looks at Mayu "No.. why would i?" she asked annoyed 

Mayu was shocked 

Akicha smiled "i knew it!" she says as  clings on Yuki's arm and both walked away 

Mayu clenched her fist 

Jurina looked at Mayu "Are you okay?" she asked 

"Yeah totally!" The CG says as she gets up and leaves the recreation area 

"damn girls are crazy!" Jurina thought

~ Walking the hall~ 

Yuki was feeling terrible and still ennoying Akicha is clinging on her 

"hope Mayu won't be so mad" She thought 

"Rena chan!" Akicha says happy 

Yuki fast reacted and looked at her friend 

"Hi Yuki chan.." Rena says with a smile 

*Yuki remembered the note about who could be part of the black queens*

"Hi Rena chan!" Yuki says then looks at Akicha "Don't you have something to do.. GO!" she says annoyed 

"Ohh okay i'll get those stupid school planes then i'll be back baby!" Akicha says with a wink the she walked away 

"Did she say school planes?" Rena thought shocked with her eyes opened wide 

"Stupid Akicha!" Yuki thought 

~The hallway was empty~ 

Rena smiled at her "do you still have plans of destroying the black queens?" she asked still with a smile 

Yuki felt strange somehow that kind and happy aura of Rena dissapeared and was replaced for a dark one 

"No,i don't really care,they hurt me pretty bad last time.. i should not cross their way!" Yuki says serious 

"LIAR!!" Rena thought then hugged Yuki 

Yuki blinked a few times then felt that Rena was squeezing her hard 

"Rena.. Rena! you're hurting me!" Yuki says forcing then realesed from her embrace

"Sorry,i just want you to be okay!" Rena says with a smile 

Yuki could believe it "i should go now!" she says then walked away 

Entered to the newspaper room that was empty and pulled a black phone from her pocket 

"Get rid of all  school's planes that you find in the headmaster's office NOW!" She shouted 

Yuki walked to the hall and her feet led her in Mayu's door "she was worried about Rena but she was more worried about what Mayu thinks!" xD

Yuki opened the door with her key and found Mayu playing with her computer 

Mayu turned to look at Yuki and ignored her 

"hello to you too!" The taller girl says as she grabs the other chair from the other desk and puts it next to Mayu then sits 

Mayu kept playing ignoring Yuki 

"I don't like this!" Yuki says irritated 

Mayu kept playing 

Yuki looked at Mayu "Please listen!" 

Mayu kept ignoring her 

Yuki poute then sighs "Stupid cyborg!" she murmured 

Mayu pouted a little but kept ignoring Yuki 

Yuko looked down "This irritates me!" she shouts then takes Mayu's laptop and smash it on the floor hard

*Mayu was mouth open*

Yuko looked at Mayu then bent and moved Mayu's chair to make her look at her 

"I DO ALL THIS TO PROTECT YOU! YOU ARE THE MOST IMPORTANT THING I HAVE,THAT AKICHA DON'T MEAN ANYTHING AND YOU MEAN EVERYTHING!" Yuki shouts 

Mayu was still in shock:

"You..didn't..have..to..ruin..my..computer!" 

Yuki smiles nervously "you ignored me! don't worry i'll buy you a new one" she says nervous

Mayu get up mad then looked at Yuki 

"remember that you love me!" Yuki says nervous 

Mayu sighed "did you hit your head when you were younger? what kind of person smashes a laptop against the floor?"  she asked 

Yuki smiles widely " many times but you still love me!" she says gets closer and kisses Mayu on the lips 

TO BE CONTINUED!! COMMENT!!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.13
Post by: BbSis on December 04, 2012, 10:38:37 AM
Omg! You updated before I had time to comment. :( :)

Ch 12 was super cute *.* I loved the bathroom scene :heart

And this one ehehe Yuki is still explosive xp

Wait... Jurina and Rena are actual sisters? So... they have a incestuous relationship?  :w00t:

Thank you o/
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.13
Post by: kurogumi on December 04, 2012, 10:45:24 AM
Scary~

This chapter somehow give me a goosebump! Its scare me,that rena~ woooo~

Somehow i know that yuki,maybe never ever get the school planes...and its akicha fault! Aaa~ what a waste!

Gods,renaaaa why why? Why she's so scary...i really want to know why she's doing that...for what?? For yuki? For jurina? Or for herself?

Oh and why the black queen kept targeting yuki?isn't mayu that they targeting first? Why they dont do any move toward mayu's?? Just because yuki protect mayu,doesn't mean they can't bully her. They still can do without yuki know right?


Jurina and rena,they a lover? But they seem do secrety their relationship,why isn't its fine?jurina not a scholarship student like mayu.and the one who want do secretly its rena...why?


Wow too much questioning from me eh but there just a maybe,that was just my though that i like to comment in this fic,because i like this fic soo much,so i just cant control what im thinking about the story,the character.LOL

Im sorry cmze-san if im too much LOL i cant help it.


Thank for the update
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.13
Post by: m00nchild on December 04, 2012, 12:12:35 PM
nice update,
So something happen to the wMatsui,
Rena is more and more mystery, why she want to do something like that?
why the black queen keep target Yuki, because of that Rena need make a move?
due Rena is the head of the black queen that why she need to do something like that?
hope the next update can explain it. :cry:

looking forward for the next update.
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.13
Post by: Chanaline on December 04, 2012, 12:39:39 PM
Rena is jealous??? NO??? :?

She reacted really strangely!

Aaah Why are she like this???

Mayu and Yuki are funny(for me...)
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.13
Post by: Playgirlz on December 04, 2012, 01:09:03 PM
Hohoho interesting, those Black Queens >:] I want moreeeeee XDDDD

You make me can't stop my imagination cmze <3333 Pls try to update as soon as you can XD Thank you
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.13
Post by: rhin12 on December 04, 2012, 02:16:17 PM
Cmze-san!  XD

Gosh. Yuki and Mayu is so..so.. sweet  :wub:
The Bath tub scene is so cute! I'm melting.  XD

Oh yeah, and what's up with Rena-chan? She's acting weird. Is she obsessed with Yukirin? gosh. I hope not. Poor Jurina.  :cry:
Waah. :panic: I can't wait anymore!  :lol: Hope Yuki finds out the truth soon.

Thanks for your fast update, cmze-san!  :bow:  :bow:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.13
Post by: kahem on December 05, 2012, 12:49:25 AM
No!!!! Yuki!!! Are you crazy?!!! How can you break a laptop?!!!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.13
Post by: mo-chan on December 05, 2012, 09:23:42 AM
many chapter was updated wow  :panic:
I liked the paris' holiday  :wub:
I still don't understand why Rena is like that  :?
Mayu ignored Yuki so much that Yuki broke Mayu's laptop so aggrissive Yuki when she is jealous even of a laptop  :rofl:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.14
Post by: cmze on December 06, 2012, 08:20:50 AM
                                  ~Time is good as gold~

(At the hospital)                                             

"Mayu you shouldn't get up.." Jurina says worried as she tries to get Mayu back on bed 

"I'm fine Jurina.." Mayu replies as she walks to the window 

"Why you're so stubborn?" Jurina asked pouting 

Mayu smiled then looked through her window 

Jurina looked other "I can't deal with this! why she's not here with you?she's a coward" she thinks as she clench her fist

"Hello.." Rena says as enters to the room 

"Rena chan!" Mayu says as she turns 

Rena smiles 

"I forgot i have to do something important.." Jurina says as she walks but Rena grabbed her arm 

"you're mad so whatever you wanna do be careful and call me if you're in trouble" Rena says

"i'm not a kid!" Jurina says as she releases her arm and walks away 

"did you guys fight?" Rena asked 

Mayu looked at Rena "mm no.." she replies confused 

~After 30 min~ ~At Sae's dept~ 

The noise the of the doorbell woke Yuki up..

"who the hell could be?" she murmures annoyed as she got up from the couch 

*The doorbell keeps ringing*

"Shut the f$% up i already heard you!" Yuki shouts mad then opens the door 

"You.." Yuki says annoyed 

Sae came downstairs and looked at the girl in her door "Jurina come in" she says inviting the younger girl in but she refused 

"what are you waiting coward?" Jurina shouts 

"what?!"Sae reacts 

"excuse me!" Yuki says 

"what you heard coward!" Jurina replies 

Yuki looked at Jurina "get to school and don't bother me!" she says coldly 

"so this is what love means to you,running away when she needs you the most!" Jurina says serious 

Yuki grabbed Jurina by her collar then looked at her in the eyes with her red eyes and clenching her teeth "You.. You..

*Yuki let her go she's not worth it!* Sae says trying to separate the two 

"How dare you? YOU STUPID KID!" Yuki shouts then punched Jurina's face sending her a few meters away 

Sae grabbed Yuki from behind 

Jurina got up slowly and looked at her teo senpais 

Yuki's tears came out "STUPID! STUPID! STUPID CYBORG!" she shouts as more tears rolls her cheeks 

"Yuki.." Sae whispered sad and let go

Yuki looked down,clenching her fist as more tears came down 

"Why you do this Jurina?you're only hurting Yuki more because she doesn't let her be next to her" Sae says mad Looking at Jurina 

"Since i know Yuki always do what she wants.."  Jurina says with a smirk then cleans the blood on the corner of her mouth 

Yuki looked at Jurina then something hit her  "i.. i always do what i want.." she repeated 

                                             CH.14

~At the library~

"Yuki chan didn't you say something about ignoring eachother at school?" Mayu asked as Yuki kisses her 

"Well.. humm yeah but i can't control myself" Yuki replies kissing Mayu's neck 

Mayu smiles "you're tickling me!" she says then stops Yuki and looks at her 

"Ehhh" Yuki says wondering.." why Mayu is looking at her like that"

Mayu hugs her *Yuki smiles and hugs her back* 

"This is crazy.." Yuki says 

"i think so too.." Mayu says with her cheek over some soft spot on Yuki's chest 

Yuki looked at Mayu's face "wow looks like she's having fun there such a pervert!" she thought "But never never i wanna separte from you!" she says out of the blue 

Mayu looked at the taller girl "what?" 

Yuki looked at Mayu then smiled "Only you.. never never wanna separate from you,no matter what!" 

Mayu was speechless soon noise of someone coming made both separate 

"look i have to do something..please have your phone next to you tonight!" Yuki says then kisses Mayu's forhead and walks away 

Mayu got sad and looked at Yuki as she walks away "i'm Sorry Yuki i can't be next to you the time you want" she murmures while puts a hand on her chest 

~After a frw minutes~ 

*Yuki walked around the hall in the clasroom's building,a hand pull her inside of one of the empty classrooms*

Yuki was about to punch the person but soon stopped when she recognized the girl "Sasshi,you scared me!" she says then takes a deep breath 

" Sorry.." Sasshi says smiling 

"Are you ready?" Yuki asked

"of course i am,i told you yesterday!" Sasshi says

*Flashback: Last night*

Note: "Do you remembered the note that was on Yuki's mini fridge? Yuki thought it was from the black queens.." 

~In the middle of the basketball court~ 

"Where the hell are you? you still owe me for what did you do to me so come out bitches!" Yuki shouts 

*Noise of someone coming closer*

Yuki looked around Ready to fight *she was more focused on her back*

"Yuki chan!" Someone called 

Yuki looked as a girl comes closer "Sasshi?" she asked 

"Yeah it's me!" Sasshi sayd serious 

"ehhh! You son of a ... i thought you were a coward and you're part of those rats!" Yuki shouts and jumps on Sasshi ready to beat her both landed on the floor 

"STOP YUKI CHAN! STOP! I'M NOT ONE OF THEM SERIOUSLY!" Sasshi shouts scared and covering her face 

"how could you get in my room?" Yuki asks shouting 

"well i saw them.." Sasshi replies nervous 

"who?" Yuki asks 

"Black queens!" Sasshi says 

Yuki removes herself and looked at Sasshi 

"they entered to your room wearing they black hoodies so i was sure that you were their new target and i wanna help you to destroy them and your door was unlocked that's why  i could get in and clean that thing on your fridge as a sign of peace!" she replies as she gets up 

"why?" Yuki asked as she gets up 

"Ota Aika.." Sasshi replied looking other way 

"who's that?" Yuki asked carelesss 

"somebody that used  know used to go to this school but she was forced to leave by them and i could do nothing about it because i was a coward.." Sasshi says clenching her fists and looking other way 

Yuki looked at Sasshi "by her look i can tell she's not lying but this is dangerous!" she though

Yuki smirked "you're weak,i'm not interest!" she as she walks way 

"anyways i'm going to join in and then i'll tell you their names so you can do your part which means beat the hell out of them!" Sasshi says 

Yuki turns around " i work alone!" she says serious 

Sasshi smirks "two brains are better than one!" 

~End of the flashback~ 

"I heard if i wanna join i have to leave an envelope with my name on the bleachers tonight" Sasshi says 

"This is dangerous.." Yuki says 

"i don't care,i'm tired of them bullying everyone who enters into this school thanks to a scholarship!" Sasshi replies 

Yuki sighs "then good luck.." she says 

Sasshi smiles then gets out the of the classroom 

"They entered to my room without forcing" Yuki thought then also got out of the classroom 

Something hit Yuki's head "no way!" 

*She remembered that Jurina also shares the room with Mayu*

Yuki kept walking the empty hall,she heard the echo of someone maybe talking 

"WTF?" She thought "is this building really hounted?" she wondered then felt shiver because she heard it again 

Yuki looked around then noticed a cold air that comes from a little air duct that was on the level of her ankle 
she get down to hear better 

"All the school planes have been destroyed as you ordered!" A voice says 

"what? those bastards" Yuki tried to get closer to her better but wasn't possible cause the air duct was small so she couldn't hear anything 

Yuki walked around looking for all the air ducts and maybe thing from which place that voice came from but she wasn't succesful 

"it could be many places one classroom,a bathroom, etc" so she decided to get back to the other building 

On the way to the other building she saw someone familiar running then that figure run ti Yuki 

"Yuki chan!"

"Rena chan!"

"Is there something that you're not telling me?" Yuki asked serious 

Rena smiled "yeah.." 

Yuki looked at her wih a really intense look 

"I'm better running than you!" Rena says still with her smile 

Yuki got irritated so she decided to walk away and igbore the girl 

Rena only looked at her friend walking away then smirked "You can't.." she murmured 

~At the recreation area~ 

"What's this?" Mayu asked and looked a big sign 

"well if you eat a lot of those icecreams and complete the word TRIP by letters you'll win a trip to Hawai everything payed" The owner of the place sayd 

"Mmm Yuki always buy me things.. maybe it's time for me to give her a surprise!" Mayu thought then bought one ice cream 

"what are you planning to complete that?" Jurina asked 

"well yeah!" Mayu says with a smile 

"Ohh i forgot you're not rich!" Jurina says 

Mayu smiles 

"hey give me the ice cream,you can not eat it!" Jurina says 

"what?!?" Mayu asked 

"well you take a lot vitamins,can do sports and also have a scar on your chest and i'm not stupid,i might look but i'm not!" Jurina says as she tries to snatch the ice cream 

Mayu was speechless but still "the ice cream is mine" 

Jurina pouted 
 
"i'll see you later.." Mayu says as she walks away 

Jurina frowned "i didn't say it to bother you, i was worried!" she whispered 

~On Yuki's room~ 

Yuko was laying on bed thinking and also looking at the key that came with the letter she found 

"Where this key belongs?" she wondered 

Somebody knocked her door,Yuki got up then openned the door and saw Mayu standing 

Yuki fast pulled her in..

"what are you doing? coming to my room is not okay somebody might see you!" Yuki says 

Mayu offers her the ice cream to Yuki 

"for me?" Yuki asked then looked at the melting icecream and grabbed it 

Mayu just looked at the taller girl as she opens the icecream "don't ruin the cover!" she says 

Yuki openned the ice cream and gave the cover to Mayu 

Yuki licks it while Mayu looks inside the cover the letter p "i just need tri.." she thought 

"Where did you bought this ice cream?it nothing like the chocolate from... " Yuki stopped talking then licked again her ice cream 

"you don't like it?" Mayu asked pouting cutely 

"No,Mayu it's the best cheap chocolate i ever taste!" Yuki says with a smirk 

Mayu looks other way and pouts cutely 

"You now how it would taste better?" The taller asks as she puts the ice cream on Mayu's lips 

"don't eat it!" Yuki says smirking 

"it's cold!" Mayu says 

Yuki removes the icre cream and suddenly kisses Mayu passionately 

<After a few seconds>

Yuki removed the ice cream from Mayu's lips with hers  then looked at her open mouth girlfriend 

"delicious,can i do it again?" Yuki asked smirking 

Mayu was still mouth open and shocked so Yuki putted again the ice cream on Mayu's lips this time making sure of putting more ice cream on her lips,she removes it and kisses her again with the same passion 

(After a few seconds)

"why you ask me if you're going to end up doing what you want?" Mayu asked all red 

Yuko smiled then kissed Mayu again not caring that her ice cream was melting on her hand 

~The next day~ 

(On Sasshi's locker)

Sasshi looked for her math book then she noticed a black envelope,she went to the bathroom and entered to one of the cubicles to read it..

"Meet us after class on here"  

Sasshi got out of the cubicle and looked around panicking "Here.. how dow they know where am? are they watching me already?"she thought 

In the bathroom were girls looking at themselves in the mirror,others were showering,others were only talking nobody seemed unnormal 

"I'll be here.." she murmured then walked away 

TO BE CONTINUED!! COMMENT!! 
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.14
Post by: clubhappy on December 06, 2012, 09:21:13 AM
Mayuki moment in this chapter is so hot  :wub: :wub:, put the ice cream on Mayu's lips then kissed it. Good job, Yuki!!!
So Sasshi is the same as Yuki. Sasshi please help Yuki fight those black queens!
And the story at the beginning is sad as usual  :cry: poor Mayu and Yuki.
Thanks for the update.
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.14
Post by: BbSis on December 06, 2012, 11:01:48 AM
Yeeey! Update *.* it was fast *.*≈

I wonder what Yuki will do, since she remembered she always do what she want...

All mayuki scenes were so lovely. And what was that with the icecream? *.* cool :inlove:

Rena, watch out! Now that Yuki has an ally, she is gonna get you! And seemed, in the present, that Jurina is mad at you! ><

I loved the chapter :heart: can't wait for the next one o/
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.14
Post by: kurogumi on December 06, 2012, 01:32:02 PM
~Future time~

Wow looks like rena and mayu are friends in the future,looks like problem solved,but jurina seems mad at her.

Yeah yuki always do what you want!! You're the only one who really know what will make you happy...ah its sweet,yuki is abusive person but she's also a softhearted person.


~Present time~


Yeah sashi!!

Lol mayu want to go to hawaii? With yuki? I could imagine,how romantic they are.

And yeah jurina not stupid,and she really care about mayu, doesn't it will make rena jealous? Lol


Ah that ice cream,i want an ice cream too~


Thank for the update cmze-san
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.14
Post by: m00nchild on December 06, 2012, 02:19:21 PM
nice update,
Jurina figure out what happen to Mayu,
and Sasshi being target by the black queen,
seem like the black queen really have a large power in the school,
how would Yuki crush them??
and what Rena planning?
I still dun believe Rena is that bad.

Looking forward for the next update.
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.14
Post by: Chanaline on December 06, 2012, 07:17:15 PM
It was beautiful with Mayuki's moment

The debut kinda make me sad!

But love this!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.14
Post by: kahem on December 07, 2012, 02:22:01 AM
oh ice cream kiss~
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.14
Post by: Playgirlz on December 07, 2012, 03:36:00 AM
Oh oh oh i wonder what made Mayu have to stay in the hospital now, is it because of the Black Queens? i don't think so, if so then Yuki won't talk to Rena anymore, or she still hasn't discovered it yet? Impossible. Seems like she would, btw that's not important.

Actually i want to ask something, Mayu and Yuki haven't done anything 18+ right? lol they're so innocent and cute, even it doesn't look like that so much XDDDD

Thank you, pls pls update ><
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.14
Post by: jell_o_jello on December 07, 2012, 04:55:36 PM
me wants some chocolate icecream too  XD
that scene is cute and hot at the same time :love: :thumbup

wonder what Rena/Geki has in mind. i really can't read her :?
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.14
Post by: mo-chan on December 09, 2012, 06:19:37 PM
I didn't know that you update I'm kinda late XD
again when you go back cmze-san to the present time and Mayu is very ill in the hospital make me very sad  :(
yes Yuki you always do what you want! go next Mayu and support her she needs you so much now  :twothumbs
Mayuki are sweet as always ice-cream kiss  :wub:
still Rena Yuki has to solve the problem now sasshi is with her  8)
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.14 I'M REALLY SORRY!
Post by: cmze on December 12, 2012, 01:36:03 AM
SORRY TO EVERYONE!!

I DON'T THINK I CANT UPDATE FOR A WHILE!! :banghead:

A GUY STOLE MY IPOD WHILE I WAS COMING HOME :cry:

YES,I HAVE A COMPUTER BUT IT'S MY SITER'S SO SHE'S KINDA =DONT TOUCH MY THINGS!!

I'M REALLY SORRY!!  :cry:

Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.14 I'M REALLY SORRY!
Post by: BbSis on December 12, 2012, 02:45:57 AM
Oh! Omg poor you>< I have an ipad and all my life is in it...

I feel your pain, so its quite understandable *hug*

So... hope everything is ok. YOU. are ok, right? ><
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.14 I'M REALLY SORRY!
Post by: kurogumi on December 12, 2012, 03:20:27 AM
Ìts ok cmze-san

Hope thing will fine,

Damn who that guy,how dare he stole your ipad!

Dont worry Cmze-san,i will always waiting until the next updat patiently LOL
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.14 I'M REALLY SORRY!
Post by: mo-chan on December 12, 2012, 08:24:12 AM
eh  :shocked It's what happened  :(
damn that guy  :angry:
I hope you will be ok cmze-san
take your time I'm waiting  :grin:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.14 I'M REALLY SORRY!
Post by: Pwety on December 12, 2012, 08:26:15 AM
it is okay my friend! We can wait! We are fan
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.14 I'M REALLY SORRY!
Post by: jell_o_jello on December 12, 2012, 02:38:06 PM
That sucks  :(
But please don't worry. We can wait!
And use this to enjoy some time off too!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.14 I'M REALLY SORRY!
Post by: kurogumi on December 16, 2012, 06:16:25 AM
I need time machine,

Back to the time when,that guy stole your ipad...

Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.15
Post by: cmze on December 23, 2012, 05:44:46 AM
Hello everyone!  :grin:
thanks for your comments supporting me  :cow:                                                                     

                                                                        Time is good as gold
                                                                                    CH.15
                                                                                 
Mayu looked around her room then sighed ''is kinda boring be on this bed..''

Rena looked at her friend then putted her hand on hers ''maybe we can walk for a while" she says with a smile

Mayu smiled weakly 'thanks Rena chan!" she says trying to hide her saddness

Suddenly the door openned revealing a good looking tall girl

"Yuki chan!" Both girls says shocked

Yuki looked at the two girls who were still holding hands, she showed her discontent and soon Rena and Mayyu smiled ackwardly and removed their hands

 "it's not what it looks like... i have to go!" Rena says fast then gets up and leaves

Mayu looked at Yuki who seemed sad also but the CG couldn't let her feelings win so decided to ignore it even if it hurts so much seeing Yuki like that

"i told you not to come!" Mayu says coldly not looking at the taller girl

Yuki looked down feeling uneasy by that response, she clenched her fist "how this girl can be so cold?" she wondered and tears thread to show

"go away already i don't need you!" Mayu says serious looking at the taller girl who seemed really shocked by those words

"HOW CAN YOU BE SO SELFISH?!" the taller girl asked shouting with red eyes and nose

Mayu looked down also tears trying to show " can't you see? my heart is also breaking into pieces but i can't show you that.. you deserve better not this!" the CG thought

"GO AWAY!" the CG shouted

Yuki's tears came out "NO,NO I WON'T LEAVE AGAIN!" she says with tears rolling down her cheeks

Mayu's tears also came out "why? why you make it harder?" she says as her tears wet her blanket

Yuki wiped her tears and slowly gets closer to Mayu's bed without breaking eye contact "because i need to feel you,touch you,hold you,kiss you..''

"stop already!" The CG says sobbing

"don't push me away.. i love you.." Yuki says still not breaking the eye contact with the younger girl

Mayu closed her eyes trying to stop her tears while Yuki climbs on bed

The younger girl opened her eyes and saw Yuki's face a few inches away from hers, the older girl cupped Mayu's cheeks with her hands and wiped the tears with her thumbs

Mayu only looked at the older girl hypnotized not wanting this moment to end, she really missed the older's girl touch, it's like electricity running her skin and bringing her back to life
 
Yuki smirked knowing that still she's still the only one that can screw the cyborg's system then leaned forward and kissed her

Both shared their passionate kiss showing eachother how much the missed their company...

PAST:

"Mayu chan stop buying those ice creams.. it's imposible to win!" Jurina says with a smile while her friend is buying ice creams

Mayu blushes then smirks "well i don't mind not to win!"she says smiling remembering her previous sessions with ice cream

Jurina frowned "okay i'll see you later, i have practice!"she says then walks away

"are you trying to get me fatter or something?" Someone asked appearing from nowhere

" Yuki chan!" Mayu says while Yuki only smirks

"i wanna kissu now!" Yuki says pouting cutely then grabbed the younger girl's hand and dragged her out of the recreation area

"what?where are we going?" Mayu asked as she's being dragged out

Yuki smirked as she keeps walking " what you didn't hear me I WANNA KISSU NOW!"

Mayu blushed ''so this is your love style!" she thought

Suddenly pushed her softly and kissed her

Mayu got so red "somebody might see" she thought but she didn't care anymore Yuki's lips tastes so good on hers.. even the ice creams were melting on her hands and it didn't matter at all

After a few seconds Yuki broke the kiss ''somebody might see us.." she says with grin on her face looking at the pouting cyborg

'you..you are.."

"THE BEST THING THAT COULD HAPPEN TO YOU!" Yuki says with a smirk then walks away

"hey!" Mayu says discontent

"don''t worry i'll call you later!" Yuki says as she walks away

Mayu pouts "that wasn't what i was going to say.."

(MEANWHILE IN OTHER ROOM IN THE SCHOOL!!!)

''AHHHHHHH!!!'' someone shouts in the dark

"who ever thought Sasshi wanted to become one of us!" One of the black queens says then kicks Sasshi who was on the floor

Sasshi spits blood

"we don't need rats like you!" Another black queen says smirking

"i can't see anything.." Sasshi though while tries to look around

" we been beating her for like half an hour.. i''m kinda tired!" Another black queen says

Suddenly somebody entered to the room

"what's this?"

'Gekikara.." Everyone says

Sasshi tried to look at the so called Gekikara but she couldn't Gekikara was wearing a black hood

"so do you really want this?" Gekikara asked

A weak Sasshi replies " yes..''

Gekikara kicked Sasshi on her stomach " are you mad?" she asked laughing

Sasshi fainted..

(middle of the night)

Yuki walked the hall looking for the lock that her key belongs to..

''where this key belong? who wrote that letter? those black queens why they haven't bothered me, are they planning something? i have so many questions and nobody can answer me" she thought as she walks hopeless

Frustrated cause the key doesn't seem to belong any door in the rooms building she decides to go take a break and calls to her favorite CG

(Mayu looked at her phone "Stupid Yuki.." she murmured then got up)

The two girls met at the campus..

"Mayu chan you look terrible.." Yuki says smiling

Mayu pouts ''you call me in the middle of the night, hurry me and still want me to look good!" she replies annoyed

"you're my girlfriend you have to look good all the time or somebody might steal me!'' Yuki replies with a smirk

Mayu pouts then looks at Yuki "if you want to leave me for somebody else there's nothing i can do...'' she simply replies

''what? you're the jealousy type, don't lie!'' Yuki says then puts her arm on Mayu's neck and both walk

''no,i'm not you can do what you want!" Mayu calmly replies while walks

Yuki got mad ''shut up, you can't let me go..I FORBID YOU SO so shut up!!" she says frowning

Mayu looked at her mad cute girlfriend then smiled and tried to kiss her but Yuki reject it

Mayu tried to kiss her again but Yuki rejected her again

Mayu stopped with her attempts and pouted

Yuki stopped walking then looked at Mayu ''you can not let me go!"she says serious then kisses her CG

after a few seconds the two break their kiss for the lack of air

Mayu hugged Yuki tightly

Yuki smiled and looked at the sky ''Mayuyu look a shooting star..." she says smiling

Yuki looked at Mayu who was totally focused on looking at the sky

''i remember when i was young so alone so sad always waiting for you.. i can't believe you're here by my side you're the one i love,i can't imagine loving someone else please always stay by my side and don't ever let me go.."

TO BE CONTINUED...

sorry if it's not long but i can't get use to write from my sister's laptop..xD




























Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.15
Post by: Chanaline on December 23, 2012, 09:47:42 AM
Yay an update!!!

They are so sweet!!!!!

Poor sasshi...
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.15
Post by: Akblaire48 on December 23, 2012, 09:57:54 AM
Thanks for the update I've been waiting for this  :D
I really love your fanfic!

Love Mayuki :heart:

I wanna know what will happpen to sashi  :(
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.15
Post by: jell_o_jello on December 23, 2012, 02:47:39 PM
Thank you for updating, cmze!!  :wub:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.15
Post by: BbSis on December 23, 2012, 03:10:36 PM
Hey Cmze, I'm glad you're back! Hope everything is settled down now^^

Nice update o/ hhueheuhe full of kisses *.*

I wonder what happened >< why Rena was in Mayu's and Jurina's room? Alone with Mayu.....

Hhuehue soon you will get used to it. O/

Thank you and welcome back^^
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.15
Post by: kurogumi on December 23, 2012, 04:03:11 PM
How im express this,im really thankful you update this,finally even if this one is kind of short than your usual update,im really happy with this chapter.

Aww they comeback mayuki,
Yuki need to feel,touch,hold,and kissed mayu aww~
And mayu cant resist it!

Still wondering what happen with wmatsui,looks like they had a awkward relationship,but rena still care and lovely toward jurina,
maybe it cause of black queen incident in the past?(well i dont know LOL)
Jurina get yuki hit on her face right,im wondering how rena reaction...


And the past:

Hope sashi fine...its not easy to join the black queen though~

The one who easily get jealous is you yuki LOL
Love when yuki being care and protective toward mayu's~

Oh if yuki already called mayu "mayuyu" then when mayu called yuki "yukirin"?


Ah thank for the update cmze-san
 Hope the next update fast LOL just kidding,you can get your time to write




Again thank you for this awesome update

p
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.15
Post by: rhin12 on December 23, 2012, 06:25:27 PM
Wow, Yuki is so sweet!!!  :inlove:
Sasshi collapsed because of geki's kick.  XD I hope she recover with that.  :nervous

Thanks a lot for this update cmze-san! And Welcome back!  :nervous
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.15
Post by: gek geki on December 29, 2012, 01:10:34 PM
Plase update soon

I love this fic so much!! Please please
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.15
Post by: m00nchild on December 29, 2012, 07:57:31 PM
nice update,
I know that this already update quite a time,
but I have no time to read because of work,  :fainted: :fainted:
so Sasshi make a move to join black queen to search more information about them,
Why Rena so scary?? For me she still not a bad person, sure have a reason,
Mayuki moment was nice too, seem that Yuki have no new idea about the black queen,
Mayu was still a CG, due have feeling but act cool there,

Looking forward for the next update.
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.15
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on December 30, 2012, 03:31:16 PM
i love this fanfic please update soon cuz i keep reading the chapters again and again (although i mean im not tired of reading it again and again) its just im really looking forward to the next chapter thanx and sorry to hear what happened to ur latop mine broke to  :) :love:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.16
Post by: cmze on January 03, 2013, 05:45:28 AM
                                                  ~Time is good as gold~
                                                                   CH.16

(At Yuki's room)

Two high school girls were kissing on bed,the shorter was on top making sure to touch what she wanted to touch since the first time she saw the taller girl

"Mayu.." The taller girl called but was ignored by the younger girl who was busy unbuttoning her shirt

"okay this is best study session that i ever had but we need to actually study you know!" Yuki says buttoning her shirt and catching. her breath

Mayu just looked at her "huh?"

Yuki moved Mayu off her and putted her next to her "now let's study" the taller one says nervous

(Suddenly Mayu's phone rang, it was Jurina asking her to come to her room and not giving more details)

(At the room)

The two girls were shocked while Jurina just stood there watching their reactions

"Those bastards!" Yuki murmured clenching her fist and looking at the mirror which had written with lipstick "WE HAVEN'T FORGOT ABOUT U!!"

Mayu took a deep breath then turned to look at Yuki who got closer and grabbed her hand "i won't let them get to you!" she says serious then kissed Mayu's forhead <forgetting about Jurina's existence>

Jurina was shocked also "Since when Yuki cares about Mayu and why she kissed her on her forhead?" she thought

Yuki left the room

Mayu starts to clean the mirror while Jurina looks at her

(MEANWHILE)

Yuki walked the halls looking at everyone then she received a text message from an unknown number

"Meet me at the bathroom,third cubicle from right to left"

Yuki run to the bathroom

[Once there she chose the third from the right to the left]

Yuki looked around but nothing seemed out of normal inside the cubicle till a paper appeared,she took from the floor and read it:

Yuki chan

It's me Sasshi i can not use my phone they took it away from me,they don't trust me so they're keeping an eye on me. I still don't know where are their hiding places because they knock me before take me there the only thing i know is that you're their enemy and that Mayu is important to you so they're going after her please don't panic that's what Gekikara wants!"

Yuki broke the paper "Gekikara!"  then got out of the bathroom

She walked the hall to Mayu's room,she opened the door and saw Mayu talking to Jurina

"How. did you opened the door?" Jurina asked

Yuki show her key then takes the Mayu's clothes and starts putting them in a bag

"Yuki chan what are you doing?" Mayu asked trying to stop Yuki

"You're coming to my room!" Yuki says as she keeps packing

"but this is my room" Mayu retores

Yuki stops packing and takes Mayu by her shoulders "i'm not going to let you here alone so please come with me.." she says serious

"okay.." Mayu replies

The two end packing so Yuki carried the bag while Mayu carries her laptop

Everyone in the hall were looking at them

"I heard she was being a target of the black queens maybe she's going home" Everyone comments

Yuki sighs "stupid girls" she thought

Everyone was mouth open when Yuki opened her door and Mayu got in

"Yuki chan!" Sae says smiling then noticed Mayu "you.. what are you doing here?"
Mayu looked down

Yuki grabbed her hand "This is her room too!" she says serious

"EHHH WHEN THAT HAPPENED?!?" Sae asked with a shocked face

Mayu and Yuki frowned

"You two.. huh? so honeymoon okay now i'm leaving!" Sae says smirking then leaves fast

Mayu scratched her head while Yuki was all red

(Meanwhile) in a dark room in the school

"where am i? is this another test?" Sasshi asked with her eyes covered and hanging upside down

"Take it off... " a voice says

Soon Sasshi could see "what the hell?" she asked while watches a big tarantula inside a box and also what it seems to be a letter

"Are you sure you still want this?" a voice asked

Sasshi gulped

"If she bites you're completely screw up" One of the girls says laughing

Sasshi pouted and she was nervous

"don't pee your pants please!" One of the girls says smirking

[Meanwhile]

Mayu fell sleep while Yuki only watches her then she got up and covered with the blanket,she leaned and kissed the CG's forehead sweetly

"i'm sorry but this was the only way to keep safe my crystal CG" Yuki whispered before heading out

Yuki walked out to the court to run a little for her surprised there was somebody else stretching

"Yuki chan!"

"Rena chan!"

The two girls looked at each other

"How you been?" Rena asked

"Fine" Yuki coldly replies

"I heard Mayu moved to your room!"" Rena says with a smirk

"Yeah" Yuki replies coldly again

Rena puts her hand on her eye "You have changed.." she says with a smirk

Yuki looked at Rena "so are you" she replies

Rena get serious "You're not better!" she says while gets closer to Yuki

"what happened to you? it feels like i'm not talking to Rena Matsui!" Yuki says

"i became stronger!" Rena replies looking at her hand

Somehow Rena reminded her Atsuko they way she looked at her hand with that loose look

"Be careful Yuki" Rena says before walking away

TO BE CONTINUED!!

Sorry if it's boring but like i said i have no music and it's hard getting my songs!!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.16
Post by: chiqinna on January 03, 2013, 10:56:51 AM
Go protect your cyborg Yuki!!!
btw.... i'm really curious about Rena..why is she being like that??
hmm...  :glasses:
nice update cmze-san!!
I don't know since I got in this fanfic i started reading A LOT!! xD

Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.16
Post by: clubhappy on January 03, 2013, 10:57:39 AM
I'm missing you here cmze-san  XD It's been a long time since I last saw you update your fic.
So now Mayu is the same room with Yuki......and Sae. Or will Sae sleep in another room?  :? (hope so  :P)
Love the Mayuki scene in the beginning.  :wub:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.16
Post by: Chanaline on January 03, 2013, 12:05:39 PM
Wooooah Rena is a bad girl!!!

Mayuki scene is so sweet!!! they are in the same room now! :inlove:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.16
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on January 03, 2013, 02:31:58 PM
thanx for updating  :deco:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.16
Post by: DC2805 on January 03, 2013, 03:10:31 PM
love the story, more updates please  :)
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.16
Post by: BbSis on January 04, 2013, 12:54:45 AM
OMG! Rena practically declared war to Yuki =O

Good mayuki moment *.* Is Yuki afraid of something? Why she turned Mayu down like that?

It was good update o/ Can't wait to read more o/
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.16
Post by: kurogumi on January 04, 2013, 05:45:58 AM
Rena~ (T^T) i still trust you...

there must be a reason why you do that~

and if im right maybe its involved her relationship status with jurina
(well maybe~,i cant think another reason) LOL


As for mayuki,sweet as always

Wow,now their relationship became expose,looks like jurina and sae know too and another student~

Mayu and yuki,they are now a roommate aww

Sashi fighting!!! You can do it!

Thing of this chapter,it seems that yuki already know that rena and gekikara is the same person...its a war!

Love is war!!

Thank for the update cmze-san
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.16
Post by: m00nchild on January 05, 2013, 07:41:51 AM
NICE UPDATE,
If Rena is like Acchan,
which means she is trying to protect Yuki??
Rena i know u r there,
as kind as ever,
except she got double personalities.
Yuki leave her room??
OMG... How bout Mayu there?

Looking forward for the next update.
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.17
Post by: cmze on January 07, 2013, 05:38:00 AM
                                                  ~Time is good as gold~
                                                                   
Well as u know i recovered many songs and i'm happy for that thanks you all for your help!!! SO HERE'S A NEW CHAPTER ENJOY.You know the fic so don't get confuse with the past and the future..

(AT THE HOSPITAL)

Mayu woke up early,she looked at her room and sighed "This place is depressive!" she thought but then something got her attention

"Yuki chan.." the cyborg murmured softly then looked at the girl who was sleeping on a chair with her head close to Mayu's hand

Mayu smiled "no matter what i say.. you always do what you want in the end!" she thought then tucked Yuki's hair behind her ear "I love you" she murmured

Yuki also opened her eyes and sitted,she looked at the cg "Good morning Mayu chan!" she says with a smile

The younger girl also smiled "Good morning Yuki chan!" she replies with a soft smile

Yuki gets up and stretches "Today is going to be a good day!" she says with a smile forming her lips

Mayu was shocked "Yuki is not acting like herself.." she thought

"i'll go get you breakfast,don't miss me too much!" The taller girl says with a smile then runs away fast

Mayu was confused "what's going on?" she murmured looking around

(A Few Minutes passed)

Mayu took a deep breath then somebody entered with a wheelchair, he seems like a doctor he was all covered with that blue uniform,the only thing that Mayu could see was his eyes which were so familiar

The doctor pointed to the wheelchair

"You want me to get on the wheelchair?" Mayu asked

The doctor nodded

Mayu looked other way "I think you got the wrong room, i can't get out of this room!" she says sad as she puts her hand on her chest

The doc grabbed Mayu's hand and made her get up to get on the wheelchair..

"what are you doin?" Mayu asked as she tries to stop him but he was stronger

Mayu kicked him

"Ouucchh Mayuyu!"

"Ehh Yukirin!" Mayu says as she watches her girlfriend rubbing her leg

"Kidnapping you!" Yuki answers and rides the wheelchair fast

Everyone in the hall were confused nurses,doctors etc

Soon some nurses noticed what was happening and run behind them

The two got out of the hospital and car was already waiting

Yuki grabs Mayu bridal style and get her on the car then thy engine the car leaving the nurses and guards behind

"Sae chan! Rena chan! Jurina chan! Sasshi!" Mayu says surprised then smiled

The girls smiled and say hi with a smile

"That was a sweet scape!" Sae chan says with a smile

Jurina hugs Mayu

Mayu turned to look at Yuki and smiled "Thank you Yukirin!" she says happy and kisses her cheek

"Love is in the Air!" Sasshi says with a smile

"The truth i was dying there.." Mayu thought a little sad

                                                            CH.17

(AT YUKI'S ROOM)

Yuki openned her eyes and looked at the beauty sleepig next to her,she touched her lips softly with her finger "so pretty I can't resist,I want kiss now!" she thought while slowly leans closer "But if i kiss her like this,she might think that i brought her here just for this.." 

Yuki pouted then retrieve herself and looked at the watch next to her "It's too early still!" she sighed

(Suddenly something hard hit her door!!!)

Mayu woke up because the noise while Yuki was already walking to the door

"What was that?" The younger girl asked

"Sshhh" Yuki replied as she walks slowly to the door

Once in front of it Yuki gulped while Mayu then gets up "Yuki don't" she says worried

Yuki looked at Mayu "i have to!" she says before openning the door

Both girls were shocked, there wasn't anybody else then Yuki noticed a box on the floor

"A shoes box!" Yuki says as she grabs it then closes the door and puts it on her desk

Mayu looked at the box "what's this?" she asked

"i don't know let's open it!" Yuki says lightly ready to open it but Mayu stopped her
"what if it has something dangerous?" Mayu asked grabbing Yuki's hand worried

"We have to find out!" Yuki says as she releases her hand and open the box

Mayu and Yuki blinked a few times then touched the things that were inside the box

"This is an old phone don't you think?" Yuki asks while examinates it

Mayu looked at the phone then looked at the papers "This files.. don't tell me these are the girls who used to be part of the black queens?"

"No way!" Yuki says and snatches the papers

"There is Maeda san's file" Mayu says

Yuki read a little "where this box comes from?" she asked

"Maybe is a trap or a bait!" Mayu replied

~MEANWHILE~

Mariko sensei walked the hall "yes, i did it Takamina you don't have to tell me twice!" the teacher replies then hangs up

<In Paris>

"Why you did that Takamina?" Acchan asked

"well what they do it's not okay so i had to help" Takamina says with a smile

Acchan pouted "you shouldn't have to do that, you're only getting her more troubles!"

"i was trying to help,besides my research is not that bad hope she finds out what she has to do with that phone!" Takamina says smiling

Acchan sighs "well i guess that's why i fell in love with you cause your sense of justice!" she says as she walks closee to the midget girl and gives her a sweet kiss on her forehead

Both looked at eachother then smiled

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

"Mayu chan wait up!" Yuki says as she walks behind her then putted her arm on her neck

Mayu blushed

"Good morning Mayu chan!" Jurina says interrupting the two girls

Yuki pouted

"Hello you too Kashiwagi san!" Jurina says not so happy

Yuki ignored her and pushed Mayu closer to her

"There's not doubt from hate to love there's only one step!" Jurina says smirking

Everyone around the hall were also looking Yuki and Mayu's interaction

Suddenly someone else appeared

"You see Rena i told you about these two!"'Sae says pointing to Yuki and Mayu

Mayu was kinda embarrassed because the attention

Everyone was gossiping around

Yuki and Rena had eye contact "Eye contact tension"

"So it's official" Someone around murmured then smirked

Yuki walked away with Mayu then stopped in an empty hall

"what was that? i thought you wanted to nobody know about us!" Mayu says

Yuki scratched her head "yeah,i wanted that!" she answers scratching her head

"But there's no way in hell i'll let that little pimp around you!" she thought

Mayu looked other way

"what you're not happy that everyone knows that you're mine?" Yuki.asked grabbing Mayu by her shoulders

Mayu looked at Yuki in the eyes "why you don't let me go home? this is dangerous!" she says worried

Yuki was shocked first but then she only hugged Mayu tight

Mayu also roamed her arms around the older girl

"i promise nothing bad is going to happen to you,i'm here for you Mayu!"'The taller girl says serious with her chin on Mayu's head

Mayu blushed somehow when Yuki do this to her or hugs her this waymakes her feel safe and protected

"i can't let you go,our time is good as gold!" Yuki thought as a tear rolls her cheek

TO BE CONTINUED!!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.17
Post by: kurogumi on January 07, 2013, 06:53:27 AM
I wondering what is jurina role in this story,
i mean everyone here have their interesting role right?
 There must be something for jurina LOL

Umm am i forgeting Sae? LOL

Ok lets start with the hospital scene~

yukirin danso!! LOL
Where are they going to?
vacation?
is that dangerous for mayu?
her còndition is not good as before right?
she's really on the edge of dying
But its gonna be a great day yay~


And the past scene,

Yeah they official now,all people in the school would know mayuki~ LOL

Oh and wow takamina present! Hope with that they can solve the problem

Rena...ah i dont know LOL

Yukirin fighting!!! Its gonna be a battle to protect someone precious in your life
Rena-chan fighting!! For something that i still dont know what LOL


Thank for this update cmze-san
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.17
Post by: Chanaline on January 07, 2013, 07:58:55 AM
*save the post*

I love the debut of this chapter with Mayu kidnapped by Yukirin. It becomes more interesting.

For the chapter (past),

Yeah! MaYuki are official for the world!!! Yuki I love You!!!! So Sweeeeet!

what takamina give to her???
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.17
Post by: BbSis on January 07, 2013, 07:34:38 PM
Nhyooo that was the first time the present time was kind of happy.

Well, as Rena is with them in the present, I guess that they will resolve their problems.

Well, nice to know that Takamina helped them heuheuehue

Nice chapter o/

Now, everyone knows about them *.*
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.17
Post by: mo-chan on January 07, 2013, 09:15:30 PM
yay!! update :D
I was waiting so much XD
mayuki.are lovely in the present and the past :)
like kuro-chan said what is Jurina's role here in this fic than being Rena's little sister and Mayu's friend
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.17
Post by: cisda83 on January 11, 2013, 03:53:56 AM
Very long...fic... Thank you... for the interesting story

I like the way Mayu and Yuki interact they are so cute together...

And also the small bit about Atsumina... also fun to see.

Can't wait to see your next one

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.Future
Post by: cmze on January 11, 2013, 06:04:57 AM
                                                  ~Time is good as gold~

"The fisrt stop!" Sae says smiling while stops the car,everyone got out and looked ti the house before walking to the door

Yuki smirked "Let's go Mayuyu!" she says as she helps Mayu to get out of the car

Soon somebody opened the door

"Hello girls!" A young girl says with a smile

"Where's Sayaka?" Sae asked desperate and pushed everyone of her way and entered to the house

"..Inside.." Lovetan says shocked

Everyone smiled and then entered to the house

Yuki carried Mayu bridal style upstairs while the others stood in the living room chatting

Lovetan was looking at Rena

Sasshi smiled awkwardly "She's not Gekikara anymore Relax!" she says whispering

Rena ignore the two girls

Sae only smirked while Jurina sighed then looked other way

~Upstairs~

Yuki putted Mayu on bed then the younger girl noticed the swimsuit and clothes spread around the bed

"what's going on Yukirin?" she asked confused

Yuki smiled and carried Mayu to the bathroom "we're going to the beach..i thought you wanted to change from this hospital clothes so i made Lovetan buy those clothes'.." she replied as she makes Mayu sit on the edge of the tub

Mayu looked at herself on the mirror then got up and looked closely sueddenly she took off her hospital gown" do I look this pale,thin and bad everyday?" she asked sad and shocked then turned to look at Yuki who immediately got closer

"what?!? does it matter? more thinner,more and more pale or baddest..SUPER BEAUTIFUL ANYWAYS MY PRINCESS!!" Yuki says with a smile then kissed the younger girl softly

All the sudden Yuki grabbed Mayu and carried her to the tub with her..

"Yukirin you're still with your clothes on!" Mayu says laughing cause Yuki was tickling her

"Who cares?" Yuki asked before biting Mayu's shoulder

"Ouchhh!" Mayu complains but then smirked while Yuki hugs her playfully

The twp opened the water key and waited for the water to fill the tub

(Meanwhile downstairs)

"So that girl is going to..<Don't say it!"> Jurina interrupts Sayaka

Everyone looked down

Rena wanted to comfort Jurina but there her relantionship with Jurina is not okay at all

"Everyone we came to have fun maybe we don't know and Yuki has a already a plan to save her!" Sasshi says

"Yeah" Sae says not so convince then direct herself to Lovetan' parents bar,she grabbed a bottle of whisky

"i'm needing one of those too!" Rena says as she gets up and goes with Sae

Lovetan got up "That's my dad whysky besides you're underage!" she yelled

"Don't worry he's not going to notice and  we already graduate Jurina hasn't she Rena's baby!" Sae says laughing then after a second Rena punched her on her shoulder

"ouucch Gekikara!" Sae says

Rena looked at her then drank her glass

Yuki and Mayu got back down

"Oohhh look at that both have wet hair did you shower together?" Sae asked annoyingly

Rena smack her

"Gekikara what did i do?" Sae asked then Sayaka pinched her cheek

"ouuch" Sae complains

"indiscretion is your last name!" Sayaka says moving her head side to side

Sasshi and Lovetan laughed

"oohh i got it,i don't wanna drive with a swollen cheek!" Sae says

Yuki looked at Mayu "Sometimes i just wonder why Sae chan is my friend?" she wonders

Mayu smiled

"Black comment!" Sae says with a depressed aura

Everyone laughed then walked to the car

~After two hours of driving..Beach time!!!~

Everyone got out of the car like crazy goats to play around

There was Sae teasing Jurina and being smacked by Gekikara while Sasshi takes funny pictures of the three funny girls then Sayaka joined to the fun to save her handsome tomboy

Mayu and Yuki were distant laying on the sand next to eachother and staring eachother eyes completely ignoring the others

"Thanks!" Mayu says with a smile

"there's no need, i'm not a doctor but a trip with your friends might be good!"Yuki says as she grabs Mayu's hand then the two were about to kiss but were interrupted by indiscrete tomboy

"Is not time to get romantic,let's play!" Sae says as she bouce the ball on Yuki's head

Yuki sitted and she was looking down

Mayu recognized that "Sae chan..Run!" she says with a smile

Sae run away then Yuki also got up and run after her around the beach "Sorry! Sorry!" the tomboy shouts

Jurina got close to Mayu and sitted next to her

"It looks like Rena chan haven't fixed anything yet!" The sick girl says

Jurina frowned "There's nothing to fix.." she replied coldly

Mayu stopped looking at Yuki then looked at her friend in the eyes "There's only one life to live...what happens if tomorrow she has an accident? you would never tell her how much you love her and you'll regret that!" she says calmly

Jurina looked down and after a few second her eyes were teary,she got up and run to Rena shouting her name

Mayu smiled while everyone was shocked,Yuki has Sae by her shirt ready to Punch her in the face but she stopped cause Jurina

Jurina jumped on Rena and both fell on the floor

"Jurina chan!" Rena says shocked while Jurina is on her crying "i'm your baby! i'm your baby!" she shouts sobbing then hugged the older girl

"Jurina chan.." Rena says then also hugs Jurina

Sasshi was sobbing "This is so pretty!" she says wiping her tears on Lovetan's chest

"Such a pervert!" Sayaka thought

Yuki let go Sae's shirt then walked to her girlfriend who seems taking the sun,she sitted next to her

"i don't care how pale you're..i already told you!" Yuki says

Mayu didn't answer

"Mayuyu?" Yuki says with not response the older girl grabbed her hand

"it's cold!" Yuki though "what? Mayu! Mayu! Mayuyu!" she shouts as she grabs her in her arms and shakes her

The girls run to Yuki and fast take her to the car

"Mayu! Mayu!" Yuki shouts in tears

Sae presses the accelerator

Everyone were worried but they didn't know what to do

"Yuki chan!" Rena says as she watches her devastated friend trying to wake Mayu up

"Rena.chan!" Jurina says and grabs her arm

Lovetan and Sasshi were speechless looking in horror "how Yuki tries to reanimate her!"

"Stay with me!" Yuki says as she presses her body to her to keep her warm

"Shit!" Sae shouts as she presses her harder the accelerator

Sayaka was looking for a closer town near in the map

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

The girls were waiting while Yuki was already with her swollen for so much crying
Sae and Rena tries to comfort her but Yuki is not easy type of person

"If i loose her,i don't know what i'll do!" Yuki says sobbing and looking down

"Don't say those things!" Rena says

Yuki scratches her head "i shouldn't brought her here it was atupid idea!" she says as she wipes her tears

"You.. you brought her here!" Mayu's mom appeared from nowhere also her dad

Yuki and Rena got up

"This is your fault!" Mayu's mom shouts crying then slaps Yuki

Sae stepped up "listen she was trying to help her,having her locked up in a hospital isn't healthy either!" she shouted

Mayu's mom also slapped Sae "Get the hell out of my sight and stay away from my daughter!" she shouted

She called security and made them to be kicked out

"what am i going to do? i can't be close to Mayu!" Yuki says

Rena grabbed Yuki's hand "you need to rest, we'll think about something tomorrow!" she says

"I can't leave Mayu! in won't leave her!" Yuki says as she runs inside the hospital again

TO BE CONTINUED!! btw this chapter was written while listening to the song Chinmoku by Kashiwagi Yuki thanks Chanaline :grin:

why this is about future? because i'm going to be busy with the past and... GEKIKARA!!! ;)
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.Future
Post by: clubhappy on January 11, 2013, 06:15:28 AM
MAYU!!!!!!!!!!!! NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sad chapter.... :cry: poor Yuki.
Anyway thanks for the update  :)
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.Future
Post by: BbSis on January 11, 2013, 12:11:40 PM
Hmm. Interesting! Mayu please don't die ;.;

I got really curious about how Sayaka entered in the story. I can't seem to remember her in the storyline ><

Nice chapter o/

Mayu's mom got really mad xp. No parent wants to believe that their kid is going to die, but she already new that. She could t least go easy on Yuki.

Can't wait to see the Gekikara case *.*
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.Future
Post by: kahem on January 11, 2013, 12:53:33 PM
Ouch! Mayu's mom was really pissed but who wouldn't xD
Can't wait to know how the couples got together and what happened to Gekikara ^^
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.Future
Post by: cisda83 on January 11, 2013, 01:01:57 PM
Oh no... what's going to happen with Mayu....?

Ah, Mayu's mom is angry and forbid Yuki to meet Mayu anymore.... I can understand...

Well can't wait to see what happen next

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.Future
Post by: DC2805 on January 11, 2013, 03:44:28 PM
"Mayu stopped looking at Yuki then looked at her friend in the eyes "There's only one life to live...what happens if tomorrow she has an accident? you would never tell her how much you love her and you'll regret that!" she says calmly "

Totally agree...this is so true...

A very sad chapter, ended with unknown and exasperation... poor yuki, cant help feeling sad and sorry for her...
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.Future
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on January 11, 2013, 05:39:05 PM
Mayuyu!!!!!!!!!!!! :shocked
Poor...poor Yuki :cry:
Love this fanfic including this chapter, sad, romantic and funny :yep:
Thanx for updating :cow:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.Future
Post by: kurogumi on January 11, 2013, 05:44:11 PM
Slap slap slap slap slap!

Yuki~
Yeah who's mother,not going to slaped you...mayu almost die!

But LOL! Im laughing out loud when sae get the slaped too~

Ah im already expect something bad will happen when yuki kidnaping mayu's...

I though when mayu collapse in the beach,her condition is getting worse and worse...

But what i concern is how yuki became so desperate after mayu's collapsing,isnt she know from the start their relationship,that mayu will die?

in that case yuki should prepare the worse...how can she said that she doesnt know what she will do if she loose mayu?maybe, that's why mayu want yuki to leave her,so she can move on...
(T^T)ah im crying~



This future chapter have so many information...but still need the past chapter,a lot of mistery LOL


Thank for the update cmze-san,cant wait Gekikara!!!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.Future
Post by: Chanaline on January 11, 2013, 09:02:56 PM
Gyaaaa! Mayu :cry:

Mayu, what was your though?? I want to know what is she think about Yuki!!!!

WMatsui what happened before??? SO Sayaka will appeared...

Sorry if you don't understand this comment...
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.Future
Post by: Playgirlz on January 13, 2013, 04:45:21 AM
I feel so bad >< once i read the future chapter i don't want to know about the past anymore.

As long as I know Rena will be turning to good , it makes me feel so relief lol.

Thank you, pls update!!!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.Future
Post by: mo-chan on January 14, 2013, 01:42:51 PM
nooooo I don't wanna Mayu die !!!!
Gekikara is coming now *-*
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.Future
Post by: m00nchild on January 21, 2013, 07:17:18 PM
wow, nice update,

It seem happened a lot of things there,
About the FUTURE
Mayu is going to die?
Rena seem to be good already,
but she still too cool for it??
Sae & Sayaka? is didnt happen in the past?
I though Sae will have Tomo for the future,
due that Sae and Tomo seem to have some conflirt in the past.

About the PAST,
Takamina help Yuki,
and about Takamina present,
how Maeda file helps Yuki??
After Yuki officer Mayuki,
What will Gekikara do with those two?
And Juri-boy and Sae seem to have no role in this fic,

Looking forward for the next update.
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.18
Post by: cmze on January 28, 2013, 09:08:18 AM
                                              ~Time is good as gold~
                                                                  CH.18

~At MaYuki's room~  In the middle of the night

Yuki couldn't sleep,she was looking at the ceiling "Can i deal with all this?" she wondered then looked next to her were Mayu was sleeping pleasantly facing her.Yuki sighed then smiled "so cute!" she thought, her fingers slowly traces Mayu's cheek "Everything is going to be okay!" she murmured before get up

Yuki took all the things that were in her desk to put it in her bag then walked out to the library..

Once there she turned up a candle (god knows where she got it xD) she putted all things that were on the bag on the table then examinated everything

[Yuki can't focus when Mayu is around and also she doesn't want to involved her more so went out to think better]

Yuki looked all the files again of the girls that it seemed to be part of the black queens

"Miyazaki Miho, Maeda Atsuko, Oshima Yuko..all these girls must have something in common but what?" she wondered as she reads again then looked at some pictures that were on the school page in her laptop

"Wait a minute all this girls.." Yuki says then looked at the letter she had found from that unknow girl

Yuki was shocked cause her new discovery,she held back her hair "No way.." she murmured helpless

~FLASHBACK~ A few days ago

"Are you trying to get me fat with so much ice cream?" Yuki asked as she walks with Mayu to the recreation area

Mayu pouted "ANOTHER T!" she says not so happy

Yuki sighed "so silly..if you wanna go to hawai you can tell me and i can take you there. you don't need this stupid contest!" she says acting as the prig she is then walked ahead ignoring the younger girl

Mayu stopped walking and looked down "i wanna you something you know.." she whispered

"Hey cyborg i hate waiting and in this position is worst!" Yuki shouted

Mayu looked up and noticed that Yuki was holding the door for her,she sighed and got back to look down

Yuki let go the door and walked to the younger girl

Once in front of her..

"what's wrong?i'm hungry and i was acting really nice!" Yuki says a little irritated and takes her hand to take her in

Mayu was still looking down "ahh let go!" she says and releases her hand making Yuki to turn aroud

"I just want to give something special.." Mayu murmured sad still looking down

Yuki smiled a little then kissed the younger girl's forhead, Mayu blushed and closed her eyes for a moment

Yuki looked at the younger girl "That's special..i don't need nothing else" she says with a charming smile

Mayu can feel how Yuki makes her heart beat fast

"Now come with me i'm hungry!" Yuki says pulling with her softly

Mayu smiled and followed the older girl

*Once inside*

The two girls sitted and Yuki ordered

"Sasshi what happened with you hand?" A girl asked

Yuki looked at Sasshi

"i had an accident with scissors!" Sasshi replied smiling

Yuki then turned to look at Mayu who was smiling at her then smiled also

~END OF THE FLASHBACK~

Yuki looked at the palm of her hand then she remembered something else

FLASHBACK (2 years ago)

~At Yuki's dorm~

"what we should do Rena chan?" Sae asked while looks at the crying Yuki who was face down on her bed

"Leave me alone GO AWAY!" Yuki shouts

Rena looked at Sae "go get a glass of water!" she says

Sae does what she's told and leaves the room while Rena sits next to Yuki "Yuki chan" she says sad

Yuki sits and looks at her friend "Why? why they don't love me? why they don't care about me?" she says sobbing

"Yuki chan!" Rena says in a whisper then hugs her friend

"i'm not invisible!" Yuki says as she cries on her friend shoulder

"you're not!" Rena says as she hold her friend

After a few minutes Yuki gets tired of crying so she puts her head on Rena's lap "Thank you.." she whispers as Rena holds back her hair many times softly

Yuki felt the band on Rena's hand so she grabbed the hand and looked at it "what happened?" she asked

"i cut ..with..a scissor!" Rena replies

"It's bleeding!" Yuki says

Rena gets up "It's gonna be fine don't worry!" she says serious

Sae enters to the room "here's the water!" she says

"Why you took so long?" Rena asked

"There was many people buying in the recreation area!" Sae says smiling nervously

Yuki smiles a bit "there's lipstick on your shirt!" she says coldly

(The three girls laugh)

(END OF THE FLASHBACK)

 "Acchan, Sasshi, this Yuko girl and...Rena *Yuki get up of her seat!* HAVE THE SAME CUT ON THEIR HAND!" she says shocked

Yuki heard some voices and steps getting closer so she turned off the candle and hid under the table

"Can you believe it? Gekikara is weak she doesn't want to do two shots at once that Watanabe and Kashiwagi need to pay back!" Someone says as they walk the hall

Yuki slowly got out of the table and tried to look at the two girls talking but it wasn't possible because it was dark and they were using those stupid hoods so Yuki just followed them

They were going down using the stairs,Yuki was following the really carefully..

They got to the washroom where it supposedly there's only dryers and washers, she looked how those girls moved a dryer that has a sign of "out of service"

"A hole.." Yuki thought "they hide there!" she murmured

The two girls entered while Yuki thinks if she enters now or not finally she decided that she won't so she got back to the library to pick up her things then left everything in her room

She took the copy of the school keys that she has (also Rena,Sae and apparently the black queens) then walked to Rena's room "You can't!" she murmured

Once in front of Rena's door, she gulped then put the key in the lock and openned the door

Yuki's tears wanted to come out "You son of a.." she murmures as she sees Rena sleeping face down on her bed, she sighed then closed the door slowly to not wake her up

Rena was with her eyes open,she blinked a few times

(RENA'S FLASHBACK) 2 years ago

~At the cemetery~

Rena was sad standing in front of a tombstone "I'M SORRY!" she says as tears rolled her cheeks

Rain started to fall and soak Rena's uniform

"i said i'm sorry.. " Rena says scratches her head and kneel down 

Rena felt like she can not breath so she removed her tie "I SAID I'M SORRY! she shouted and hit the tombstone then started to laugh like crazy

"It's not my fault..why am i apologizing for?" She got up and smirked "Are you mad?" she asked smirking

(END OF THE FLASHBACK)

~After an hour~

Yuki hid in Sae's room cause it was close to the stairs,she was sleeping sitted on the floor with her head leaned against the door..

After a few minutes like she calculated she heard doors closing,steps and whispers so because of that Yuki got up,she looked at Sae who was sleeping then looked at the clock it was "6:00 am" 

Yuki left the room and went downstairs to the hidden place of the black queens,she had a hard time with the dryer but she made it eventually inside the hole it was like tunnel then she got to another room

Yuki looked at the room which was familiar because she was there once and there it was her picture and Mayu's with x on their faces on a table "Kids.." she murmured and keeps walking around the room then she found an old damage locker, she opened and saw files of the first year girls

"Wtf? They are chosing the new ones already!" Yuki says disgusted then used her lighter and started burning up everything inside the room,her picture and Mayu.

The flames became big so she got out of the room fast and pushed the alarm so everyone got up

Yuki went to her room and got out with Mayu, The teachers were already evacuating everyone 

Everyone was out and soon the fire fighters came and entered to the rooms building looking for the fire, they found it fast cause the smoke

"wow that was close!" Sae says

Mayu was hugging Yuki's waist " i Wonder what happened?" she says

Yuki didn't pay her attention she was looking around at everyone's reactions (some were mad because they woke up earlier,others were smiling because it was fun,a few ones were talking their friends) while others like Rena were looking at her serious

Both had eye contact for a second till Jurina distracted Rena

"Hope is over.." Yuki murmured

TO BE CONTINUED!!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.18
Post by: Chanaline on January 28, 2013, 10:44:40 AM
It is so cool!!! Yuki is so cool!!!

I don't it is over just with that Yuki...
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.18
Post by: kurogumi on January 28, 2013, 11:42:40 AM
Somehow this chapter really...make me sad~

I dont know,its still a lot mistery but,i could feel the pain LOL i dont know the corect word to describe since my english not so good~

Acchan,yuko,miho,and rena,the former member of the black queen and the new leader, i still dont know why they joined

Well as for acchan i know,but the other?

What?why?

Why rena join? Its from her black past? (looks like she do something worst to someone who already die,but who?)
And i still dont know her status with jurina,a lovers? Or something else?

The one that shock me is,rena already part of black queen since 2 years ago wow...

Its frustrated....its going to be a real war i think,rena is mad LOL

And jurina...rena's baby?LOL

Yuki take a lot action in this part to protect her beloved mayu...but i want mayu take a part too...





Thank for the update cmze-san,this update make me full charge again,my power is comeback! LOL
(why im always so lame...hahaha)
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.18
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on January 28, 2013, 12:40:51 PM
yuki so sweet with the icecream thing  :heart:
mayu so cute holding's yuki's waist after the fire  :wub:
rena why?!  :cry:
thanx for the update :bow: :cow: :deco:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.18
Post by: mo-chan on January 28, 2013, 01:09:14 PM
it must be really hard for Yuki when she found out about Rena
I really want to know more about Rena at first she looked to be a kind person but it the opposite now
as I see and read in the futur chapter Jurina was angry at Rena . I didn't see anything about Wmatsui only little things I hope that they wont be appart very fast
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.18
Post by: mo-chan on January 28, 2013, 01:09:32 PM
it must be really hard for Yuki when she found out about Rena
I really want to know more about Rena at first she looked to be a kind person but it the opposite now
as I see and read in the futur chapter Jurina was angry at Rena . I didn't see anything about Wmatsui only little things I hope that they wont be appart very fast
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.18
Post by: DC2805 on January 28, 2013, 02:54:35 PM
Rena must have a tragic past... like how the story becomes complicated and keeps us in suspense!   :panic:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.18
Post by: Elo on January 28, 2013, 05:33:59 PM
thank you i love this fic

i am waiting for your reply

 :love: :love:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.18
Post by: BbSis on January 29, 2013, 12:03:34 AM
Yeeeey! Updated o/

So Yuki set fire on everything ahuahauhauhau i hope everything goes well >< Rena didn,t seem very pleased...

Hmmm I hope you tell us why Rena joined the Black Queens ><

Thank you for the update o/
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.18
Post by: cisda83 on January 29, 2013, 06:14:18 AM
Wah... Yuki is burning everything... and she starting to piece the puzzle...

What's going to happen now with everyone....

Can't wait for the next

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.18
Post by: m00nchild on February 01, 2013, 01:52:34 AM
nice update,

Myao, Acchan, Yuko & Rena is Black Queen member,
That was quite surprise, wondering why Yuko, Myao & Rena was in black queen,
For Rena is it the past memory?? that why she became Gekikara??
Yuki was so brave go and burn the file,
so this is the challenge of Yuki toward the Black Queen.

Looking forward for the next update.
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.19
Post by: cmze on February 15, 2013, 07:15:48 AM
                                              ~Time is good as gold~
                                                                  CH.19

(In the middle of the night.. At's MaYuki's room)

The two girls were sleeping together and all the books around them seems like the fell sleep studying

Somehow Yuki felt some preasure on her hands,she openned her eyes fast and saw many persons with black hoods carrying Mayu away,she tried to scream but they covered her mouth and tie her hands and feet.

Yuki moved and even fell off bed

"Easy Yuki chan you're coming with us!" One of the girls in the hood says laughing and kicked Yuki on her stomach

The others also laughed then carried Yuki

After a moment they got the pool area, the black queens putted Yuki on the foor while the other group of girls took Mayu away

Yuki was so worried about Mayu that she kept trying to untie her hands,she was rolling on the floor and biting the rope

"oh stop already!" One of the black queens says and kicks Yuki again

Now Yuki was facing the floor tears ready to show (If she was alone it didn't matter but Mayu?)

Soon an evil laugh could be heard

"Gekikara?" Yuki thought still facing the floor

"Is it nice to be weak?" A voice asked

Yuki was still facing the floor

"Gekikara what are you doing?" One of the black queens asks

"Showing my face, she calls us cowards because we hide our faces!" Gekikara replied smirking

Once Yuki heard that she looked at Gekikara her eyes were open wide,she was completely shocked

"Are you mad?" Gekikara asked laughing like crazy

Yuki was devastated she looked down, two black queens grabbed her and made her kneel then removed the tape on Yuki's mouth

Yuki looked at Gekikara her eyes filled with tears "Wh..wh..WHYYYY??" she shouted mad and biting her hands against the floor

"Look what you made me.." Gekikara whispered then moved fast and grabbed Yuki by her collar "YOU SHOULD BE THIS!!!" she shouted shaking Yuki

Gekikara punches Yuki's face who ends up laying on the floor face up and catching her breath

Yuki fast sitted "What are you talking about?" she asked between mad and sad

Gekikara laughed like crazy then got closer, she looked at her in the eyes then untie her hands and feet

"GEKIKARA!!" One of the girls shouted

Gekikara looked at the black queen with a death glare then got up and walked to her to the point she was infront of her

Gekikara grabbed her by her head (she was wearing the hood) then started punching her in her stomach merciless and laughing

Everyone were scared while Yuki was paralyzed looking horrified at the scene "That... that..that. *An image of a kind Rena smiling her crossed her mind* THAT'S NO MY FRIEND!!!" Yuki shouted then jumped on her and got on top of her "WHY? WHY?WHY?" she shouted many times crying as she shakes Gekikara who was laughing

Gekikara pushed Yuki away then got up and dusted her clothes "stop being melodramatic!" she says careless

 Yuki gets up fast clenched her fists "so then i have to make you get back in the rough way!" she says trying to be strong

Gekikara laughs "i'm Gekikara leader of the Black Queens!!" she yelled then smiled "Go for her!" she says making a sign

All the 4 black queens that were there went to Yuki to fight her (One two three and four= black queens)

One tried tk kick Yuki but Yuki grabbed her leg and pushed her to the second then punched the third on her face but Yuki didn't notice that the four was close and punched her on her stomach and made her step back then the one and the second got up.

Gekikara was laughing "At least you can suffer the half of what i did because of you!" she thought

FLASHBACK: 2 years ago (The beginning)

~After running~

"I can't feel my body!" Sae says complaining and laying on the grass

Rena and Yuki looked at eachother then smiled and layed on the grass next to Sae

"who ever thought Rena chan was good at running?" Yuki says catching her breath

Rena blushed "i'm not.." she replied shyly

"What? you left us behind many times!" Sae says smiling

The three girls smiled then looked at the clouds

Suddenly a bunch of girls were running to the rooms building

Sae sits "i wonder what happened?"

Yuki and Rena also sits and looked at the girls running

Yuki gets up and asks one of the girls "what happened?"

"The black queens chose their new victim.." The girl replied scared

Yuki smirked "why they run they only mess with girls that entered by schoolarships?" she asked

Rena and Sae only looked at her

"By your face i can say you enjoy this!" Sae says

Yuki turned to look at them "it's not my fault they can not afford this school.." she said coldly

"sometimes you can be cruel!" Sae says while gets up

Rena also gets up

"What?" Yuki asks

"Nothing!" Sae says

~After a week~

Yuki was grabbing some books from her locker..

"Good morning Yuki chan!" Rena says with a smile

Yuki ignored her and looked at the paper that was inside her locker then grabbed it and squeezed it

"Yuki chan you been acting strange.. what's wrong?" Rena asked

Yuki looked at her but then just closed her locker and tried to walk away but Rena grabbed her by her arm

"i'm fine.." Yuki replied and released her arm

(To be contuned..)

Yuki knocked the four girls then looked at Gekikara "now it's your turn!" a tires Yuki says pointing. at Rena

Gekikara laughed

TO BE CONTINUED!!! PART 2

I have to study for maths wish me luck!!!!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.19
Post by: Elo on February 15, 2013, 07:20:52 AM
oh no mayuuuuuuu rena what happened to you  :cry:

please update part 2  :) :) :D

Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.19
Post by: clubhappy on February 15, 2013, 08:31:58 AM
Hey there, long time no see. Thanks for the update :D
Good luck on your math test, just take your time and study for your test :)
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.19
Post by: mo-chan on February 15, 2013, 01:40:19 PM
wow
I wanna know more about Gekikara ><
good luck on your maths :D
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.19
Post by: Chanaline on February 15, 2013, 06:15:13 PM
What happened to you Rena???

Mayuuuuuuu!!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.19
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on February 15, 2013, 11:13:17 PM
nooooooo!!! whats gonna happen to mayuyu?? :panic:
poor yuki  :cry:
rena chan why?!!! :shocked
thanx for the update  :bow: :cow: :deco: :heart: :yep:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.19
Post by: kurogumi on February 16, 2013, 02:26:12 AM
Mayu will be fine...(maybe,actually im worried too LOL)

But its not gonna be interesting if mayu didn't get some....you know...injury...like yuki...LOL (maybe a little wound?but a little wound for mayu mean great wound cause her heart condition)


Geki is sure scary,
What yuki do 2 years ago that can make rena become like this?

Whatever is that,its gonna be a problem if rena cross the line,i mean the other black queen are with mayu,and we dont know what happen to mayu without rena,im worried...but excited too LOL

And yuki gonna be very mad if something happen to mayu...plus mayu have an illness...it make the situation became worse.(i though mayu heart in this situation become worse cause the tension and also she maybe worried yuki too,so that bad for her heart)


OMG! Jurina! Where are you!! Your rena doing bad thing! Please stop her...






Thank for the update cmze-san,hope your math exam gonna be great!! So you could update this fic,i cant wait,im to excited!! LOL
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.19
Post by: leEwẬy on February 16, 2013, 07:38:25 AM
Where did they bring Mayu go? :frustrated:
What Yuki do 2 years ago?!?! :scared:
So many questions in my mind :temper:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
I want to know what'll happen next :imdead:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.19
Post by: cisda83 on February 16, 2013, 10:30:16 PM
Well the Black Queen is so bad...

I mean punishing someone that coming to the school just because they can't affort the school is so crazy

What happen with Rena... that she became such a bad person...?

What Yuki did to Rena that she became such a angry person...?

Where Mayu went...?

More to find out... can't wait

Thank you for the update

 :wub: :inlove: :love: :heart:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.20 YUKI X RENA!! </3
Post by: cmze on February 19, 2013, 06:40:57 AM
                                              ~Time is good as gold~
                                                 CH.20 Yuki x Rena

"Funny.." Gekikara whispered with a smirk on her face

Yuki was in pain, first her best friend was her biggest enemy and second those 4 black queens really knows how to fight but still she run to Gekikara

Both landed on the floor close to the edge the pool Gekikara on top which fast took advantage of the situation and punched her on her face

~FLASHBACK~ (Continuation..)

Walking the hall..

Rena was completely worried about her friend "she was 100% sure that something was disturbing her all this time and that's why she is acting so distand!"

"Rena chan go out with me!" Sae says as she puts her arm around Rena's neck

"Ehh.." Rena replied red

Sae smiled "c'mon i know you like me.. you come to watch me when i'm practicing everyday!" she says excited

Rena was nervous "Eto.." she says nervous

"Say yes!" Sae says getting closer to her face and Rena steps back nervous

"Am i interrupting?" Someone asked not so happy and coldly

The two girls turned to look at the owner of the voice

"Yuki chan!" Rena says with a warm smile

Sae smiled "You look mad and the day just started!" she says confused

Yuki walked ahead and her two friends walked behind her to their classroom

During the day in the classroom Rena spent the morning stealing glances at Yuki while Sae sends her love messages

The classes ended fast..

"Yuki chan let's go to the practice!" Sae says as she gets up but not before winking at Rena

"Rena chan!" Someone shouts as she enters to the classroom

"Jurina chan!" Rena says with a smile

"I missed you so much!" The younger girl says and hugs her older sister

Rena just smiled

"Tomorrow i have math test and Rena chan is so smart pleass teach me!" Jurina says with pleading eyes

Rena looked a Yuki fast then turned to look at Jurina who was hugging her waist then sighed "ok" she replied

"yay!" Jurina shouts happy

Sae and Yuki walked away to their practice

*Walking the hall*

"I'm telling you Rena chan likes me.." Sae says smiling

Yuki kept walking not saying a word

"she's so pretty.. she's just what i need!" Sae says as the two walk to the changing room

Sae kept talking about Rena while they were changing,Yuki was getting madder and madder with every word

Yuki closed her locker hard *Everyone looked at the two girls* "Rena...Rena chan..is a good girl!" she finally spoke

Sae blinked a few times, Yuki walked ahead to the racing track then followed her friend

The two got ready to compete

Sae looked at Yuki and smiled "now i see.."

"huh?" Yuki looked at her friend

"you're not better.. *Yuki pouted* and i don't think you're into girls,i mean you're whole life is planned up.. marry once you graduate from here and take care of your family bussiness!" Sae says calmly

Yuki pushes Sae who landed on the floor "who said i love Rena?" she asked

"you shouldn't she's too good for you..you're a walking mess!" Sae says as she gets up and dust her clothes

Yuki looked other way then walked away mad while Sae looked down

~After a few hours~

"Okay i got a x=5.. what you got?" Rena asked to her younger sister

Jurina smiled "i have x=2!" she says smirking

"ehhh what?" Rena grabbed Jurina's notebook

Suddenly KNOCK! KNOCK!

Jurina and Rena looked at the door "who could be?" the younger one asked

Rena got up then opened the door and some weight was on her "Yuki chan! what happened to you?" she asked shocked

Note: Yuki's clothes were all dirty, broken and she was bleeding from her forhead..

"hey why are you hugging my sister?" Jurina asked as she gets up

Rena helped Yuki to get on her bed "Jurina pass me my first aid kid!"

Jurina pouted but then pass it to her older sister who seems so worried about her friend

"She should go to nursery!" Jurina says

Yuki grabbed Rena's hand and looked at her in the eyes "i can't go the nursery,don't make go there!" she says with teary eyes

Rena was shocked "she has never seen Yuki this way.."

"Rena chan you have to take her to the nursery her wounds seems dangerous besides you need to help me study!" Jurina says

Rena was cleaning Yuki's wounds

"Rena chan!" Jurina called several times till Rena got irritated

"okay Jurina you need to go now!" Rena says serious

Jurina looked at her older sister "but.."

"nothing..." Rena says and guides Jurina to the door then closes the door on her face

Rena got back fast to Yuki's side "Everything is going to be fine!" she says as she cleans Yuki's forhead blood

"we need ice.." Rena says as she's about to get up because she was kneeling beside her friend but Yuki grabbed her by her hand

"Don't leave me alone! i don't wanna be alone" Yuki says taking deep breaths

"But we need ice.." Rena replied looking into Yuki's eyes worried

"No,don't go.." Yuki replied still holding her hand

Rena sighed "okay i'm not going anywhere.." she replied then Yuki moved aside to give space to Rena

Rena layed on bed next to Yuki still holding hands

"what happened?" Rena asked then turned her head to look at the other girl

Yuki looked at Rena "Do you like Sae chan?" she asked

Rena got all red and blinked a few times didn't know what to say

Yuki sighed and looked at ceiling [Taking that as a yes]

"no,i don't like Sae chan..i like you" Rena replied but it was already late Yuki fell sleep

~ The next day~

Rena woke up and noticed that Yuki was gone, she got ready like anyother day then walked to her classroom

Everyone was gossiping around

Rena looked around then someone sitted next to her

"Why Yuki left? this is going to be so boring!" Sae says pouting

"left?" Rena asks

"What? she said she say goodbye to you first!" Sae says

Rena was shocked "Why?"

"She looked terrible, i can't believe she fell from the stairs last night!" Sae says

"Where did she go? i don't remember!" Rena says

Sae looked up "i think Paris for a season.. or a year" she says pouting

"who you guys think is going to be the school council president?" Akicha asks to Rena and Sae

"What? why?" Sae asked

"The year is almost over Takamina is going to graduate *ooh and so my lovely Acchan!"* Sae interrupts Akicha

Rena was still absent she can't believe Yuki left and didn't tell her anything

~After classes in other room~

"Leader is going to graduate and we can't let the Black Queens fade away with her,we keep order in this school" A voice in the dark says

"But Leader said that there's nobody who can replace her that nobody has potential except for that Kashiwagi girl who just run away this morning.."A second voice says

"We should listen to Leader Maeda is she says this is over then it's over!" A third voice says

"We're the Black Queens and we don't need Maeda!" The first voice says

"Shibuya don't say those things!!" The third voice shouted

"I agree with Shibuya, we just have to find someone who fills the space because we always been 10!" a fourth voice says

Soon by one by one accepted the prosposition of adding one more...

~After 2 months~

[It was a new year.. Aachan and Takamina already graduate]

Sae and Rena were walking together to the rooms building so they passed through the courts to not walk so much

"Look this game seems so intense!" Sae says as she looks everyone playing

Rena noticed Jurina was playing then scored

Jurina runs around the court celebrating then noticed Rena and smiled, out of nowhere appears a girl twice bigger than Jurina and tackles her hard

"Jurina!" Rena fast runs to the court

"upsss!" The big girl says not feeling sorry at all

" That wasn't fair you monster!" Sae says 

Rena was still worried about Jurina and everyone was looking at them

"How did you call me?" The big girl asks as she gets closer to Sae

"Oh sorry.. i called you monster, i should had called you *Punch on Sae's face!*

Sae fell on the floor in a sitting position

"Sae chan!"Rena says

Jurina sitted "My... shoulder.." she says in pain

Jurina's friends help her to get up then Rena gets up and looks at the girl "apologize!" Rena says serious

The girl smirked

Sae got up "Rena let's go!" she says taking her arm scared

"I'VE SAID APOLOGIZE!!" Rena shouts and runs to her and punched the big girl on her stomach

The girl was shocked she thought Rena wouldn't do anything about it cause she looks weak

Everyone was shocked even Jurina

Rena used her left elbow and hit her on the back while her fist is still on her stomach

Soon that girl's friend reacted and tried to puch Rena but she has a cat reflexes and knocked the two girls also

"Oh man!!" Sae was really shocked

Jurina was speechless

3 girls were on the bleachers "She knocked a girl twice her size then knocked 2 more girls in a blink of an eye.. who the hell is she? A copy of Leader?" one of them asked

"That was a lucky shot!" the scond girl says as she gets up the other two followed her

"Wait till a tell Shibuya!" One of them said smirking

~After 2 days~

In a dark room...

Rena woke up "What the hell?" she murmured as she moves around a little space "what's this?" she asks desperate as she touches some bars

"Is this a cage? WHERE AM I?HELP ME!!! HELP ME!! " Rena shouts desperate

Something hit the cage hard..

"Shut up bitch!!" A voice says

Rena gulped

"Hey be nice to our guest.. hello Matsui san!" A second voice who seems nice says

"Who are you?" Rena asks scared

"You shocked us all,when we thought nobody could replace Leader except that Kashiwagi girl who left but you appeared as a miracle!" The same nice voice says

"Yuki chan!" Rena says and holds the bars wanting to know more

"Let me see, you're first on your class, kind and really know how to fight.. your perfect to be part of the Black Queens!" The nice voice says

"Black Queens?" Rena repeats

"You're better than you friend, when we made contact with her she was paranoid and reckless so gave her what she deserved and she decided run away like a coward even thought we told her we would come after you!" The nice voice says

Rena's eyes open wide

"She didn't really care about her friends after all, don't you think? here you're because of her!" The first voice says mocking and gets closer to the cage,she grabs Rena's hand that was holding the bar

The girl with the nice voice passes her a scissor

"Ehh what are you doing? AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!" Rena shouted in pain cause that girl was cutting Rena's hand

Once done with it Rena was crying and shouting to let her go but it was like nobody was listening

"Stop shouting nobody is going to listen..besides if you don't agree we can always go for somebody else with the same genes like...YOUR SISTER!" Another voice shouts laughing

"LEAVE MY SISTER ALONE YOU SICK BASTARDS!!" Rena shouts

Somebody again hit the cage "behave..you're our pet!" she shouts

Rena was crying "you.. YOU'LL PAY ME BACK!!" she shouted still crying

"Really? i'm scared!" The same voice says laughing

The next weeks Rena became their pet and she got throught all their tasks, Yuki got back during that time but Rena already changed..

~The comeback~

"Yuki you got back!" Sae says happy and hugs her friend

Yuki looked around but then just went to her room to leave her bag then went to the library to look for her dear friend

Yuki found her reading in a corner,she got closer slowly with a smile plastered on her face, Rena couldn't see her cause Yuki was coming from the back

"Maybe this time i will tell her how much i missed her.." Yuki thought as she was about to touch her shoulder

Rena gets up

Yuki gulped facing her back

"Rena chan!!!" Someone annoying shouts

"huh?" Rena turns her head then noticed Yuki

Jurina run to Rena and hugged her while Yuki stood there without saying a word

"Hi!" Rena coldly says no warm smile or sweet look

"Hi!" Yuki says feeling the vibe "maybe she's mad because i didn't say goodbye.."

Jurina stuck her tongue out to Yuki and took Rena away from her

~At night~

Yuki felt uneasy and got up from bed, she went to walk around as she was walking in the hall she sees somebody else, she could recognized that girl anywhere so she run after her

"Rena chan wait!" Yuki says and grabs her by her arm

Rena fast turned around and pushed Yuki against the wall like as reflexes the she noticed it was Yuki so she helped her

"Why you scare in the middle of the night?" Rena asked

"i couldn't sleep.. what are you doing at this ours?" Yuki asked

"i couldn't sleep also!" Rena answers not so happy then walked ahead

Yuki grabbed her arm "hey i.. why you acting like this?" she asked

Rena smiles "people change Yuki chan!" then released her arm and walked away as she walks her smile faded while Yuki was paralyzed

(To be continued)

My hand hurts!!! this tablet is heavy :P YES I KINDA SHIP YUKI X RENA DON'T KNOW WHY? O_o and YEAH IN THIS FIC YUKI IS RENA'S FIRST LOVE AND RENA'S FIRST LOVE IS YUKI!! my heart is broken with their end but YUKI IS ONLY MAYU'S SO THEY HAD TO END FOR GOOD!!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.20 YUKI X RENA!! </3
Post by: Elo on February 19, 2013, 07:48:58 AM
i want to know what happened after mayu was taken away 

i love your fic please update more :bow:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.20 YUKI X RENA!! </3
Post by: chiqinna on February 19, 2013, 11:11:22 AM
oh...so in the past Yuki likes Rena and Rena likes Yuki too!!  :O
great update cmze-san!!  :D
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.20 YUKI X RENA!! </3
Post by: Chanaline on February 19, 2013, 12:17:54 PM
Ehh :O Yuki and Rena liked each other before!Poor  Rena huhuhu...
I don't think Yuki didn't care about you before, I think she was jealous and then she leaves.

Thank you for this update!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.20 YUKI X RENA!! </3
Post by: mo-chan on February 19, 2013, 12:27:56 PM
so Yuki loved Rena at first
Rena loved her back or still love her
 that's why she hates Mayu that much
 there nothing make Rena do this only that
 she still loves Yuki back that time
and jealousy is what make her act like that
I'm still worried about Mayu in the futur T.T
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.20 YUKI X RENA!! </3
Post by: rhin12 on February 19, 2013, 12:29:49 PM
YukiRena!  :inlove:  :inlove:  :inlove:

Seriously gosh! I like YukiRena too!  XD But of course MaYuki MUST end up together.   :lol:

Thanks for the update cmze-san!   :bow:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.20 YUKI X RENA!! </3
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on February 19, 2013, 12:58:06 PM
rena chan!! :cry:
yuki was so cute  :heart:  :yep:
poor jurina :(
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.20 YUKI X RENA!! </3
Post by: BbSis on February 19, 2013, 02:17:24 PM
Ooooooh! There is no way I can hate Rena after this chapter >< 

What happened to Mayu? ><  I'm just too curious about everything!!!

Thank you for the update o/
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.20 YUKI X RENA!! </3
Post by: leEwẬy on February 19, 2013, 02:32:29 PM
So that why Rena act like that :w00t:
I'm curious what'll happen next :tantrum:
Update soon :onioncheer:
Rest your hand first :bingo:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.20 YUKI X RENA!! </3
Post by: kurogumi on February 20, 2013, 09:00:54 AM
I would do the same if i was rena,

But,its not true if yuki leave rena cause she scared of the black queen...

rena should trust yuki at that time,yuki must have her reason...

But the black queen will goes to jurina if she's not take the lead,poor rena,but im pity jurina too,now that we know rena doesn't love her...aww~


Hope in the future jurina love not just one side anymore...since rena take the lead the black queen cause jurina too~sweet

Im still worried mayu's...hopefuly the next chapter mayuyu appearance...LOL as nezumi maybe,mayu is not that weak...she just too lazy cause her ill,but now her black in danger she must do something too,not just a burden for yuki...(why im too much imagine LOL im too love this fic)

Oh and shibuya!  tomochin?? Wow



Thank for the update cmze-san,ah rena-sama~you still have your jurina...
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.20 YUKI X RENA!! </3
Post by: cisda83 on February 20, 2013, 10:43:56 AM
What happened to Rena was so horrible...She got tortured physically and mentally.

If Rena didn't become crazy like Gekikara, it would be a miracle.

So the leader of Black Queens was Maeda... but she asked them to disband it... but the others didn't want to.

Yuki left Rena to Paris coz' she thought Rena liked Sae.... and also because she was bothered with what Sae said previously before she went to meet Rena.

Now that Yuki is back... and Rena has changed... How are they going to get together?

It's going to be interesting to see what's going to happen, I can't wait to find out....

Thank you for the update

 :wub: :inlove: :love: :heart:



Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.20 YUKI X RENA!! </3
Post by: DC2805 on February 25, 2013, 04:50:48 PM
This Yuki...is really a mess and caused a lot of mess and messed rena's life up!!! haha
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.20 YUKI X RENA!! </3
Post by: gek geki on February 28, 2013, 10:59:54 AM
YUKI!! GOD THIS STORY REALLY GOOD! I LOVE IT! AMOR! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.21
Post by: cmze on February 28, 2013, 12:35:57 PM
                                             ~Time is good as gold~
                                                             CH.21

~In a dark room~

Mayu woke up, she looked around and noticed the bars "what's this?" she wondered as she touches the bars "A cage.. where the hell am i?" she says and hits the bars "HELP ME!! HELP ME!!" she shouts many times and hits the bars many times deperate

Suddenly someone hit the bars with a wood "SHUT UP!" she shouted

Mayu was scared and looking at that girl afraid,she was wearing a black hood

"You're going stay here so you better shut up, i hate the noise and i also hate you because i wanted to see how Gekikara destroy Yuki but instead i have to watch over you!" The same girl says irritating and playing with the wood

"Yuki..." Mayu murmured sad some tears got in the corner of her eyes while she thinks about the other girl who's having a rough time because of her

Mayu wiped her tears "i have to be strong..i have to help her!" she thought

"You know our leader is amazing, she's brillant and kind but as leader she needs to make everyone respect us!!" The girl says as she walks around

Mayu only looked at her analyzing any posiblity with her "Nezumi side"

"Even when that girl died because our bullying, she was strong and never looked back" The girls keeps talking and walking

"She must be cool.." Mayu says coldly

"She's not cool,she's everything, smart,kind, beatiful and also wise!" The girl says excited and distracted with her back facing her

Mayu took that as a sign and grabbed the girl then putted her arm around her neck and started asphyxiating, the girl tried to realease but Mayu made her hit her head with the bar

The girl fainted while Mayu had the keys already,she run and noticed the back of a bookshelf "what? this is.." she pushed the bookshelf and it revealed that she was in the library "that why they say there are ghosts in the library.." she thought then she went to her best friend room to hide

"KNOCK!KNOCK!"

"what?" Jurina murmured then got up from bed and opened the door

Mayu fast got in with a fast breathing

"what's wrong? did that jerk did something to you?" Jurina asks scanning Mayu

"no! They took Yuki chan!" Mayu replies desperate

"Who??" Jurina asked confused

"The black queens!!" Mayu replied scared

Jurina was shocked

~Meanwhile~ In the pool area..

Yuki was crawling away from Gekikara

"Don't try to run away from me again Yuki chan!" Gekikara says smiling as she walks closer to other hurt girl

Yuki spit blood

"Looks like you're pretty hurt!" Gekikara says grabbbing Yuki by her hair

Yuki only smiled

"Why are you smiling?" Gekikara asked loosing her temper

Yuki coughed "Because i'm an idiot,i end up hurting the person i used to love the most!" she says and cough again

Gekikara let go Yuki's hair then looked other way "you don't know how much i suffer because of you.. you should be here not me!" she says sad and then smiled

Yuki looked at Gekikara "i'm sorry.." she whispers as she tries to crawl

"Why you always try to run.. it's not cool running from your problems!" Gekikara says as she watches Yuki crawling

"I'm not running,i'm trying to look for something to help me to get up.." Yuki replied with a smile

Gekikara grabbed Yuki by her collar and looked at her in the eyes

"I can't give up.. you have Mayu and i have to protect her from you so you can not win!" Yuki says struggling as she speaks

"Why? Why you insist on protecting her AND DIDN'T PROTECT ME?" Gekikara shouted

"If i only new they would go after you, i would never left.." Yuki says as tears comes out

~Flashback~

After Yuki and Sae argue because of Rena in the racing track..

"Damn it! Damn it! stupid Sae chan!" Yuki muttered to herself as she walks away "who she thinks she is to know who's good to Rena? i would never hurt her!" she says as she enters to the changing room to look for her uniform

Nobody was there so Yuki stood in front of her locker and then remembered Sae's words about her life "arghhhh" she left out as she hits her locker hard and ends up hurting her hand

Yuki's hand was bleeding so she sat and the locker opened by itself because the damage

"Wow that's impresive, i guess there is a lot of hate in your heart Kashiwagi san!" A voice of a girl says

Yuki looks around "who's there?" she asked still sitting

"Nobody.." The voice replied

Yuki was still looking around but her hand hurts so she was still sitting

"The Black Queens are bullying you right?" The voice asked

Yuki fast got up "How do you know that?" she asked and started to look for the vouce but somehow she was fast at moving

"I just guessed, you know they're looking for a new leader and you're the only one with a cold heart and so much hate to fill the blank.." The voice says

"what??leader?" Yuki says confused

"Of course you won't, i won't let that happen!" The voice says then hit Yuki in the head from behind

Yuki fell on the floor and looked at the person who hit her, she was wearing a white mask only to hide her eyes and nose

"You know, i know if you get there, you're going to love the power and that my friend is dangerous!" she says and kicks Yuki on her stomach

"AHHHH!" Yuki shouted in pain

"Do yoy think is cool bullying people because they got here thanks to a schoolarship?" The girl in the mask asked as she grabs Yuki by her collar

"Why you're doing this?" Yuki shouted

"Trust me i'm doing you a favor!" The girl says with a smirk then pushes Yuki to the lockers and gave her many punches on her face and her stomach

Yuki was sitting leaning against the lockers

The girl in the mask ducks "Listen to me..  You're going to leave this school at least 1 month or 2 months and if you don't i will make u regret!!" she says punching her on her stomach before leaving

Yuki stood there for a moment till she gain energy and manage to get to Rena's room

~End of the flashback~

Gekikara heart aches as she watches her first love crying

"Now i know why you change and i'm really sorry but please leave her out of this and hate only me!" Yuki says in tears

"Gekikara destroy her!" The four Black Queens that were there shouts

Gekikara looked at Yuki in the eyes "why? why you insist on protecting her?" she asks as she presses harder on her hold of Yuki's collar in the edge of the pool

[That side of the pool is the deepest]

Yuki smirks "I love... Her!" she replies

Gekikara eyes's open wide

"Finish her!" The other Black Queens shouts

"Don't you recognized the feeling?" Yuki asked with her last breath

"C'mon Gekikara!" The 4 Black Queens shouts

Gekikara looked at the Black Queens before punching Yuki on her stomach and throws her on the pool

Suddenly Mayu,Jurina and Sasshi entered 

"Yuki!!" Mayu shouts

The four Black Queens went straight to Jurina and Sasshi

"You'll pay this you traitor!" One of them says to Sasshi

"I'm not a traitor i was never in your team!" Sasshi replies and takes off her black hoody

The six girls starts fighting while Rena was still spacing and Mayu noticed that Yuki was inside the pool cause Rena was looking at it

Mayu desperate looked around but Sasshi and Jurina were fighting and she couldn't enter because if she does she could die

"Rena! Rena please save her!" Mayu says with teary eyes and pulling hed by her arm

Rena looked at her but ignores her and watches Yuki inside the pool

Mayu wanted to enter but she wasn't sure if both would come out "Rena please.." she says desperate "If you ever loved her do it!" she says

Rena looked at her and slapped Mayu

"Love?" Jurina murmured a Balck Queen took advantage and punched Jurina on her face

"Gekekira!" The same Black Queen shouted

"Gekikara?" Jurina murmured while other Black Queen kicks her many times

"Leader finish Mayu!" The same Black Queen shouts

Jurina was on the floor "Leader.."

The two Black Queens were beating her while.she was on the floor

After a few seconds Rena reacted "Yuki...Yuki chan!" she murmured before jumping inside the pool to save her

Jurina was being beaten but still watched everything

Rena pulled Yuki out of the pool

Mayu fast checked her and  gave her CPR

Yuki woke up and hugged Mayu "Mayu you're okay!" she says happy hugging her girl

Rena looked around then got up "Stop Fighting!" she says

"Gekikara!" The four girls says and stopped beating Sasshi and Jurina

Rena looked at Jurina who got up left the room mad

"What's so fun about hurting other people? and even people we care about" Rena asked looking at her hands

"We protect the school honor!" One of them replied

Rena takes off her Black Hoody "Is not worth it.." she says feeling empty then leaves

The other 4 girls also left the pool area..

Sasshi smiles "Finally they over!!" she says happy

Yuki looks at Mayu and both smile..

"I love you.." Mayu says and kisses Yuki all over her face

~After a week~

Yuki and Mayu were walking around the campus Yuki with her arm around her neck while Mayu with her hands on Yuki's waist "what are you going to do for holidays?" the taller girl asked

"Nothing..Here!" Mayu says giving her another ice cream

"Look if you wanna go to Hawai you can tell me, stop buying ice creams my brain hurts!" Yuki replies as she opens the envelope

"huh another R!" Yuki says

"Ehh R!" Mayu says and snatches the envelope

Yuki starts licking her Ice cream not caring

"It's an R i win! i WON!" Mayu says excited

"Really?" Yuki asks

"Yeah i won i won let's do our packing!" Mayu says and goes to her room happy

"what a lucky girl...what a dork.. a cute dork that can be easily fooled!" Yuki thinks then smiles and keeps walking licking her ice cream

END OF THE FIRST SEASON!! :) HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! :sweatdrop:

How this works
1 season the past
2 season the past: getting closer to Mayu in the hospital (In Hawai and after graduation)
3 season with Mayu living in the hospital the continuation of the chapter where Mayu got really ill after the trip (few chapters already done at the beginning of the chapters of the 1 season.. do you remember right?")
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.21
Post by: leEwẬy on February 28, 2013, 01:47:43 PM
Yay! Mayu and Yuki is safe :onioncheer:
Yuki very love Mayu and so does Mayu :shy1:
Poor Jurina...What does she feel? :on cloudeye:
Anyway, great chapter :on woohoo:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.21
Post by: kurogumi on February 28, 2013, 02:07:57 PM
Whoaa what happen here cmze-san?

When i open this fic thread,almost all your fic on the first page,it was like SUPERMASSIVE update!?

But im totaly get fooled LOL,the real update is this one LOL

Ok stop blabering,this my comment:

Sò this the end of season 1,totaly want the next season LOL

Jurina mad at rena,
How rena fix all her mess?
How mayu get to hospital?
Who sayaka?
How the rest member the black queen?
And how they graduated?
And not to mention SAE! Oh GOD even i dont really care about her but she yuki and rena friends for god sake LOL


Cmze-san this time is good as gold really,i cant make a good word to describe but im really satisfied as reader and as your fic fans
Really thank you for this
HAPPY BIRTHDAY! YAY
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.21
Post by: cisda83 on February 28, 2013, 04:01:22 PM
Ah.. Yuki loves Mayu... Poor Rena...

She loved Yuki... coz' of Yuki, she became the leader of Black Queens....

And Yuki... just said "SORRY"..... so unfair....

Yuki gets her happy ending with Mayu...

While Rena gets the whole mess she made while she was Black Queen's Leader... and also no love life at all.

What's going to happen next...

Thank you for the update

 :wub: :inlove: :heart: :love:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.21
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on February 28, 2013, 06:32:54 PM
rena and yuki loved eached other, now yuki loves mayu   :shocked
poor rena  :cry: :cry:
actually poor jurina aswell, don't be too mad at rena, jurina  :(
mayu won a trip to hawaii, but in fact was just yuki's doing :lol:
thanx for the update  :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.21
Post by: mo-chan on March 01, 2013, 01:51:45 AM
getting complicated what a fool Mayu
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.21
Post by: Chanaline on March 01, 2013, 04:03:53 PM
Waaaaah SORRY Cmze-san I wasn't saw this update so sorry!!!!!!! :bow: :bow: :bow:

It was beautiful Thank you!!!!! It have  3 season cooooool?? :cow:

It was your birthday????
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.21
Post by: m00nchild on March 04, 2013, 05:52:32 AM
nice nice~
cant wait for season 2, and even have season 3 too~ *ureshi*
So this is what happen in the past,

looking forward for the update.
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.21
Post by: BbSis on March 04, 2013, 10:28:39 AM
Omg! That was so good!

The black queens were disbanded after Rena quit, right?  >< I can't wait to next season o/

Sorry about the delay ><

And let season two in!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.22 (1)
Post by: cmze on March 06, 2013, 07:09:01 AM
Thanks for the comments... i would reply everyone but my hand hurts spend like 5 hours writting!! xD
                                       
                                           ~Time is good as gold~
                                                             CH.22 (1)

~In Hawai~

"C'mon Mayu chan, i wanna go to the beach!" Yuki shouts wearing a white beach dress with her black swimsuit under

Mayu was inside the bathroom watching her scar "Maybe i shouldn't wear swimsuit after all.."'she whispered a little sad

Suddenly the door opens "c'mon the sun is shinning and…" Yuki stops talking and looked at her girlfriend who was covering her scar with a towel

Yuki gave Mayu a sweet look then gets closer and looks at her in a playful manner as she pulls the towel down

Mayu looked down embarrassed and blushing

"You know is stupid to hide your beautiful body.." Yuki says with a smirk

"But.." Mayu says not feeling secure and grabbed the towel from the floor

Yuki sighs "Thank god i'm smart and rented a private island for us so let's go, it cost a lot for minutes!" she says pulling Mayu with her

Outside was a car waiting which took them to a pier then the two girls used a boat to get the island

After 20 min max then get to the island

Mayu was shocked "An..an..is..land.." she says stuttering

"Kashiwagi san i'll pick you up at 17:30.. enjoy your day!" The man says as Yuki and Mayu are getting down

The boat leaves..

"I can't believe it!" Mayu says as she watches the boat getting out of sight

Yuki smiles "let have fun!" she says like a little child as she puts the towels on the sand and puts the umbrella to avoid the sun

Yuki pulls out her dress and looks around "This is beautiful!" she says looking at the blue/green ocean

Mayu hugs Yuki from behind and smiles

Yuki also smiles "oh c'mon let's go to the water.." she says playfully as she pulls Mayu with her

"No,i can't!" Mayu replies fast scared

Yuki frowned "why?" she asked confused

"Because i can't.." Mayu says looking down serious

Yuki kisses Mayu's forhead "I promise nothing bad will happen, take my hand" she says with a smile

Mayu hesitated first but Yuki offered her hand again and she could do nothing but do what she was told

"c'mon let's go slowly.." Yuki says as she helps Mayu

They in the water till it reched Mayu's waist

Mayu smiled then splashed Yuki's face

"My eye.." Yuki says with her hands on her eyes

Mayu got worried "i'm sorry,i'm sorry!" she says

"Got you!" Yuki says with her tongue out and splashes Mayu softly

Mayu wanted pay back but Yuki herself into the water to soak her hair then came out fast and grabbed the shorter by her waist "why you don't try to get your hair wet?you'll feel better after that because it's too hot here!" she says

Mayu looked around

"Just arch your back or i have a better idea float face up and i'll have your back!" Yuki says excited

"what'" Mayu asked

"c'mon it's going to be fun!" Yuki says with a smile

"ughh why i always do what you want me too?" Mayu muttered to herself

Yuki smirks "because you love me but first!" she says as grabs Mayu by her shirt "take it of!" she says as she pokes it

Mayu looked other while Yuki removes the shirt which totally got lost in the sea then Yuki made Mayu float face up while she holds her

After a moment Mayu started to get more confident inside the water because there was waves or anything it was like a pool a beautiful pool..

So the two started to play more and get deeper but it was ok

"Yuki chan i'm having so much fun here!" Mayu says as she floats (because she now can do it alone)

Yuki is also floating next to her "i'm glad that's what i wanted from the beginning Mayu..to make you happy" she says looking other way

"We're in paradise and the sky is so beautiful so clear!" Mayu says spacing

Yuki smiled then stopped floating and she was standing up following Mayu who noticed and also got up

The two lovers looked each other in the eye and smiled, Yuki grabbed her hands "i'm happy.." she whispers still looking at her cyborg

Mayu smiled then got closer and kissed the taller girl, Yuki let go Mayu's hands to cup her cheeks while Mayu's hands got to Yuki's waist

By the passing seconds their kiss became more deep, the two girls wanted more from each other

Yuki wasn't only kissing Mayu's lips now she was on her neck while Mayu kisses her on her face

Yuki stopped their kiss suddenly "i'm sorry.." she says catching her breath

Mayu was all red and also catching her breath

Yuki was about to get back to the sand but Mayu grabbed her by her hand "Yuki chan!" she whispered

"huh?" Yuki turned to look at Mayu

"I want you.." Mayu says red

Yuki blushed then looked down not knowing what to do .After a short moment Yuki looked at her girlfriend again then got closer and kissed her like previously they were kissing

Hands roaming on each other, devouring each others lips, kissing, sucking and biting with no mercy (for all the time they couldn't)

Suddenly the thought of losing Mayu hit Yuki's brain which make her separate from the hot cyborg and stop that passionate kissing scene

"What?...why?" Mayu whispered open mouth as Yuki steps backs

Yuki looks at the cyborg "You have no idea How bad i want you... but i love you! she says sad then walks away to cool off

Mayu also gets out, she looked at Yuki who was laying on her towel face down with her eyes closed

Mayu got on her back and kissed her shoulder "I love you too.." she says making Yuki to open her eyes then turned to look at Mayu

"At least can put you the sunblocker on?" Mayu asked with a smirk which cause Yuki to smile also "Silly.." she whispered

"But you love me!" Mayu says still hugging Yuki's back

"That's true! That's true!" Yuki replies with a smile

~At Nagoya~

Rena sighed as she watches the outside the window of her room"It's holidays why am i so bore?"she thought

"Matsui san are you okay?" The butler asks

"Totally *Hip* okay!" Jurina replied as she walking hugging her friend

Rena gets up and got out of her room "Jurina!" she calls as she watches her little sister and her friend entering to her room

Jurina turns around "Shut up Gekikara.. deal with your bussiness and leave me alone!" she shouted laughing as her friend laughs also

Rena just looked at the two while they enter and the butler just stand there also

"Don't tell my parents i'll deal.with this!" Rena says serious

The butler nodded and left

Rena entered to her room and the hours passed (she can hear the music from Jurina's room) so she couldn't sleep and nobody in the house also

Jurina finally came out of the room and went to the kitchen were Rena was by casualty

"Jurina chan!" Rena says shocked

Jurina pouts "you.." she says not so happy

"Don't you think now's the time to set the party off?" Rena says calm

Jurina ignored her and grabbed many things from the fridge, one of things on her full hands slipped

[Noise of glass on the floor]

Rena fast reacted "Are you okay?" she asked getting closer and checked Jurina's hand

Jurina looked down then harshly removed her hand and with tears in her eyes she finally spoke "Don't touch me... i hate you so if you wanna live stay way from me!" she says with hate on her eyes

Rena recognized those eyes "I'm sorry.." she says before leaving

TO BE CONTINUED..okay some ideas how Mayu gets the Yukirin nickname? because nothing comes to my head -_-
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.22 (1)
Post by: cisda83 on March 06, 2013, 08:40:36 AM
Wah.. Yuki spoiled Mayu a lot... and she's very sweet too

Ah... Yuki wanted Mayu so bad that she needed to restrain herself

What's going to happen with their date there....?

Oh... poor Rena... is being coldly treated by Jurina..

She even got threaten and hated just because it was not even her fault... that she became Gekikara... the leader of the black queen

I really think it was unfair that Yuki can get her happy ending but not Rena....

All in all Yuki was at fault... and Rena was the victim... the after cause of Yuki's cowardliness when she ran off.

Please make Yuki paid for all the abuses and the pain that Gekikara endured because of Yuki's escaped.

All the sins that Gekikara commited can be given to Yuki... most of it.

However, I understand that Rena needed to take responsibility for her actions but not all.... only the small half... the large half was supposed to be given to Yuki.

Please give Rena more happiness... because she does deserve them

I can't wait to see what's going to happen with everybody in this story (esp. Rena, Jurina, Yuki and Mayu)?

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.22 (1)
Post by: kahem on March 06, 2013, 09:38:44 AM
I know she did a lot of bad thing but I feel bad for Rena now that Jurina rejects her
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.22 (1)
Post by: Chanaline on March 06, 2013, 10:40:59 AM
Waaah they are really sweet!!!! Mayuki :love:

Pooor Rena...
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.22 (1)
Post by: kurogumi on March 06, 2013, 12:36:40 PM
Is this one is already season 2?

Yuki! Yuki! Yuki! Kashiwagi Yuki!! YUKIRIN!!! LOL
(well why you confused,if i was mayu, how i called yuki yukirin? Well maybe like this one)

Mou~ why yuki stoped? Mayu's want her~ LOL

Oh jurina,she's being bad now.
And rena could not fix her problems with jurina until the beach scene when mayu ill get worse,im pity her but what can she do? She deserved that for making jurina hurt.but i want wmatsui~ aww

Aaah~ why love is hurt...hurt like heaven LOL


Thank for the update cmze-san,what a super update!! You update 4 of your fic,its incredible! Love it!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.22 (1)
Post by: mo-chan on March 06, 2013, 01:16:28 PM
eeeeh things complicated with Wmatsui  :(
Kurogumi-chan is right you don't have to think so much about how Mayu will call Yuki Yukirin use what Kurogumi-chan said  :D
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.22 (1)
Post by: m00nchild on March 06, 2013, 02:29:07 PM
nice update,

Mayuki nice and pretty moment,
Rena was too sad~ she doesn't deserve that!!
she just force by the black queen to become like that,
how come Jurina like that? because Rena wanted to protect her and force to be Geki!!
CURSE JURI!!!

looking forward for the next updated.
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.22 (1)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on March 06, 2013, 05:03:01 PM
hehe yuki pulls mayu's towel away, and she should cuz mayuyu is very beautiful :lol: :P
awww mayuki so sweet and cute saying they love each other :heart: :yep: :inlove:
jurina please make up with rena, i what she did was wrong, but this i rena for godsake :(
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.22 (1)
Post by: BbSis on March 06, 2013, 07:02:24 PM
Update *.*

They are so cute together o/ heuheu So cute of Yukirin restrain herself afraid of what might happen to Mayu. It's a very hard thing to do >< good job Yukirin! Now I want to know what Mayu is gonna do about it heuheuhe

Poor Rena ;.; she truly is regretted. Why can't Jurina accept this? >< I just want to know how this whole situations will be unfolded^^

Thank you o/
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.22 (1)
Post by: gek geki on March 13, 2013, 06:34:59 AM
YUKIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIRIN
BWAHAHAHAHAH!! (LAUGHING LIKE EVIL)
PRIVATE ISLAND HUH, ISNT IT TOO BORING IF JUST TWO PERSON?
I MEAN WHAT THEY DO ALL THE TIME IN THAT PLACE?JUST KISSING EACH OTHER?
AH THANK BY THE WAY REALLY GREAT CHAPTER
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.22 (1)
Post by: Hatakeru on March 14, 2013, 05:48:53 AM
"I want you.." Mayu says red

Woah!!  :shy2: This so cute and sweet! I love it!   :inlove:  By the way... I love all of your story cmze-san! I'm silent reader before...hehehe.....  :shy1:

Thanks for your story!  :P
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.22 (1)
Post by: FNK23 on March 15, 2013, 06:55:40 PM
Quote
"Yuki chan!" she whispered

"huh?" Yuki turned to look at Mayu

"I want you.." Mayu says red

Yuki blushed then looked down not knowing what to do .After a short moment Yuki looked at her girlfriend again then got closer and kissed her like previously they were kissing

Hands roaming on each other, devouring each others lips, kissing, sucking and biting with no mercy (for all the time they couldn't)
Mann~ its really HOT!! my heart racing so fast just because imagine the scene  :mon blood:
i also like the moment of renaxyuki, thinking the other possibility if yuki didn't leave rena, maybe she will ended up with rena, not mayu. i like rena but it's too late for her to get yuki. just concentrate to win jurina love back renaa, ganbatte!!  :mon blowhorn:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.23(2)
Post by: cmze on April 01, 2013, 06:01:45 AM
                                              ~Time is good as gold~
                                                             CH.23 (2)

~Still in Hawai at night~

Yuki was playing tennis while Mayu was in the balcony looking at the beach "So pretty.." she murmured then turned to look at the taller girl who seems totally focused on playing and so she sighed

"Ha! Take that I am Kashiwagi Yuki!" The tall girl says winning and smiling

"Hey Yukirin let's go to the beach!" Mayu says as she walks closer to her girlfriend
Yuki was bitting her lips "No way!" she says still focusing on the tv

Mayu pouted and disconnected everything

"What the f..." Yuki turns to look at Mayu who seems pissed

"Hey Yukirin let's go to the beach!" Mayu says in a Nezumi way

"Why am i feeling nervous?" Yuki asked to herself then smiled nervously and threw the control away (on the bed)  "hahhahaa what? *Nezumi stare* ok let's catch a cold together!" she says still smiling nervously

The two girls walked to the beach which was close from the hotel,After a few minutes..

"Mayu chan I am already tired for walking!" Yuki says complaining and sits on the sand

Mayu sighed "You would not be so tired if you would not spend 24/7 playing games"Mayu says as she sits next to Yuki  (and forgetting about me= Inner Mayu says mad)

"What? i cannot let it win!" Yuki says looking at the shorter girl

Mayu sighed again "Stupid Kashiwagi" she thought helpless pouting

Suddenly Yuki grabbed her hand and looked at their hands "Mayu chan it's so pretty like a doll" she says with a smile as she plays with their fingers

Mayu was red then looked at the taller girl with a sweet look "Maybe she is not that idiot" the CG thought stunned of how pretty Yuki looked playing with her fingers

"I do not wanna be here with nobody else and i do not care if you snore!" Yuki says smirking breaking the romantic vibe

"What? you idiot!" Mayu says embarrased

Yuki was smirking "it's kinda cute though!" she says as she pulls out her phone from her pocket

"What? i do not snore!" Mayu says like a kid

"that is why i fully and truly embrace and cherish the technology,clears every doubt!" Yuki says as she shows Mayu a video

~Video~

"Here Kashiwagi Yuki reporting from this hotel room, this is another night i cannot sleep because of this!" Yuki moves the camera which shows Mayu sleeping and snoring

"Yeah my Mayuyu is sleeping and... snoring well i do not mind she looks cute right?" Yuki asks smirking

"I guess i can stay up looking at her while she sleeps or i can *Shows the playstation 3*  na.. let's play!" Yuki says smirking

~After the video~

Mayu tried to snatch the phone but Yuki was faster

"Erase that Yuki is embarrassing!" Mayu says complaining and red as she tries to take the phone by climbing on top of the taller girl

"What? it's my phone, you can tell me what to do!" Yuki says still  avoiding Mayu's hands

Once they noticed their position,both blushed and forgot about the phone

Mayu slowly leaned not breaking their eye contact and kissed the taller girl who did nothing to stop the CG

The two girls were kissing pPosteriorionately but slowly, enjoying every second of it.

Yuki's hand took life as it own and started rubbing Mayu's thigh up and down without breaking their pPosteriorionate kiss

Soon the lack of air affected them and slowly retreat the younger girl off her

"Mayuyu.." Yuki says in a whisper as she stares the younger girl who was only looking down and touching her lips with her fingers

"What's the point? tell me what's the point..." The CG says then turns to look at the taller girl with a loose look

"About what?" Yuki asked confused and feeling the tense vibe

"About loving you if i cannot touch you or kiss you!" Mayu answered before get up and walk away to the hotel

Yuki looked how the younger girl walks mad back to the hotel, once she was out of sight she got up and and looked at the stars "I guess i love you more than that!" she whispered

~At the hotel room~

Mayu slammed the door then leaned against it and wipe away her tears with her hands "Stupid Yuki.." she murmured

Suddenly a she feels pain on her chest, she puts her hand on her heart "What the hell?" she whispered after a second the pain was gone

Mayu sat on bed and opened the drawer next to her,she found the pictures they took the first time Yuki and her go out together and also the first time Yuki kissed her

Mayu remembered "That was bold" she thought then noticed how much Yuki had change for her

"she is not Black anymore or rude or mean.."Mayu whispered looking at the ceiling then smiled and putted the pictures on her chest, eventually she fell sleep

When Yuki got back she was already sleeping so she put a blanket on the younger girl then laid next to her on bed,Yuki took her time and watched carefully every feature of the CG's face "I'll always be next to you.." she whispered before kiss her gently on her cheek

Yuki got back to her spot and took a deep breath still staring at the CG

~Meanwhile in Japan~

Matsui Jurina woke up with an awful headache normally called "hangover" she walked downstairs and noticed her older sister standing there with a bag

"Matsui san the car will be ready in a few minutes, Matsui san your breakfast is ready!" The butler says as he turns to look at Jurina

Jurina gave final step "Where are you going?" she asked coly

The butler excused himself and went to the kitchen

"Going back to school!" Rena says looking down

"What? is still holidays.." Jurina says looking at her sister

"I rather go to school before looking at you being someone you are not!" Rena replies

"Oh now i see.." Jurina says then smirks and grabs Rena by her arm

Rena was forcing with Jurina

"I forgot about Gekikara.. maybe you have someone else to kill!" Jurina says still forcing with Rena

Rena got mad cause that comment that without thinking she slapped her younger adoptive sister/ fully and truly embrace and cherishr

Jurina looked at Rena with hate on her eyes

Rena looked other way (She had seen those eyes before.. in the eyes of the people she hurt before as Gekikara)

Rena stepped back "I am sorry" she said then looked other way

"do not you ever touch me again!" Jurina shouted then run upstairs not looking back

Rena looked at the palm of her hand

The butler came "Matsui san the car is waiting!" he says as he takes Rena's back and walked with her outside

"It's raining..." Rena murmured sad and for a moment a memory crossed her mind

~Flashback~

(At school a few years ago)

In the clPosteriorroom

"Kashiwagi Yuki.." The teacher says as he looks around

Rena and Sae also looked around

"she is not here.." Another student says

"Kazama Minami.." The teacher says continuing

"Why she is not here? " Rena thought

Rena spent the morning absent thinking about her friend, when it was lunch time,she fast got up and went to look for her

Rena looked in her room then the bathroom, the recreation area but it was useless she was not there

Rena sighs

"i cannot go to play outside!" A girl says pouting

"God, the weather is awful just rain and rain!" A girl says talking to her friend as they pPosteriores next to Rena in the hall

"Maybe.." Rena murmured then walked to the racing track, the more she walks the more her clothes get soaked by the rain

Rena looked around and there was not anyone there, Rena disappointed sits on the bleacher

"I am a super bad friend.." She thought looking down then covered her eyes with her hands and sighed

Suddenly she notice that there was not raindrops falling on her anymore, she removed her hands

"Yuki chan!" Rena says shocked as she watches her friend holding the umbrella on her

"What are you doing here?? is freezing out here!" Yuki says a little irritated and getting her pjs soaked

"Ehh!" Rena gets up "i was looking for you!" she replies

Yuki was shivering "Wh..why?" she asked

"Are you okay?" Rena asked

"I caught a cold and i stole this umbrella!" Yuki replies still shivering

"What?!?! a cold! let's go!" Rena says as she takes Yuki's hand and takes her to her room

~Inside the room~

"What were you thinking? you caught a cold and you were outside in this awful weather!" Rena says walking in circles like a mad mom

Yuki smirks "What? i just followed you..the question is what were you doing?" she asked as she dries herself with a towel

"Following me?" Rena repeated

"I saw you walking outside so i stole an umbrella because you could catch a cold!" Yuki says with a smile

Rena could feel her cheeks getting red"You went outside for me.." she murmured

"do not put it that way, if you get sick who's going to help me with my homework!" Yuki says blushing looking other way as she sits on bed

Rena gets closer with another towel and helps Yuki to dry her hair..

Both girls smiled at each other

~End of the flashback~

"Matsui san your clothes are getting soaked!" The butler says waking up Rena from her thoughts

Rena smiled "It's okay!" she says before going inside the car

<Jurina was looking through her window as Rena leaves>

TO BE CONTINUED!!
Okay do not hate me for the second season, this is entertainment.. so that is what I am doing, do not hate my characters for their development and Enjoy the drama! :)
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.23(2)
Post by: mo-chan on April 01, 2013, 08:44:06 AM
I'm worried about them :(
thanks for your update :D
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.23(2)
Post by: kurogumi on April 01, 2013, 09:46:43 AM
Mayu...

Yuki...

Rena...

Jurina...

The storm coming...

The drama...LOL. I could say,this season 2...mayuki and wmatsui quarel,a big one!
Really excited! Maybe i gonna be crying out loud all the season LOL


Thank for the update cmze-san
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.23(2)
Post by: cisda83 on April 01, 2013, 10:41:36 AM
I really still feel sorry for Rena.... even after all these time she still remember Yuki....

Her love for Yuki is no longer able to be appreciated... it liked a burden that Rena needs to carry

And Jurina still hates Rena... and unable to forgive her...

I really feel it was unfair that Yuki and Mayu able to have a happy life where as Rena just have a bad memories and guiltiness to live for....

What's going to happen next

I can't wait to find out

Thank you for the lovely update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.23(2)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on April 01, 2013, 12:15:39 PM
awww mayuki so sweet :cathappy: :deco:
haha mayuyu snores, and yuki just casually video's it lol :lol:
jurina please forgive rena already :cry:
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.23(2)
Post by: cmze on April 01, 2013, 09:04:23 PM
WTH? is something going on with Jhip?
I never use the word embrace or cherish in the same sentence..
Why thjs chapter is kinda modified with words i don't know, sonebody can tell me what's going on?
i tried modified the chapter but it din't work  :?
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.23(2)
Post by: FNK23 on April 01, 2013, 09:28:53 PM
yeah mine too, i thought it almost appear in the fic or reply which used word "l o v e" or something like that, and my prediction is correct, i preview my comment and then the word embrace or cherish will come. so that is why i give a space in those word.  :nervous
and to comment your fic, thanks for the update, i've been waiting for it  :heart:
please dont forget to update just a little lie, i really like that fic a lot~  :heart:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.23(2)
Post by: Chanaline on April 01, 2013, 10:03:38 PM
I think it is because it is 1st April!!

But because of that we don't understand some part XD

Mayu and Yuki are so sweet! But Mayu's heart hurt her :smhid Don't die!!!

Poor Rena!! She was so in love with Yuki!!! :cry:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.23(2)
Post by: stepk on April 01, 2013, 11:32:16 PM
mayu she just want touch yukirin.  :lol:
like it   XD
thanks for the update.   :twothumbs
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.23(2)
Post by: BbSis on April 02, 2013, 08:34:05 AM
Nhyoooo Yuki are sweet lol even recording a weird moment huahua

Poor Renaaa ;.; So ad tha Jurina won't forgive you so soon....

Thank you for the update o/
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.23(2)
Post by: DC2805 on April 03, 2013, 12:29:10 PM
hoping the Wmatsui will be alright...haiz...

Yuki & Mayu are so loving... cool!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.23(2)
Post by: gek geki on April 06, 2013, 08:31:06 AM
MAYU  :cry:

SO IT START,YUKI COULD DO NOTHING,SHE JUST WAIT THE DAY WHEN SHE LOST MAYU  :cry:
YUKI SCARED LOSE MAYU I GUESS.

ABOUT RENA,HMM SHE STILL LOVE YUKI, SHE STILL DOESN'T LOOK JURINA AS SOMEONE SHE COULD LOVE,BUT HOPE SOMEDAY
LOVE WMATSUI  :cow:

THANK  :theking


Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.24(3)
Post by: cmze on April 19, 2013, 02:07:20 PM
                                              ~Time is good as gold~
                                                             CH.24(3)

~On the plane flying back to school~

Mayu was sleeping with her head on Yuki's shoulder while Yuki was lost in her thoughts, she sighed just by the thought of why they been fighting lately..

"Even though were on paradise we manage to ruin it.." The taller girl thought then looked at the girl who was sleeping on her shoulder

~At school~

Matsui Rena was sitting on her desk checking facebook from her computer,she looked everyone's profile till she got bore  "there's nothing interesting here" she says with a sigh then looked a picture next to her (It was her,Yuki and Sae smiling)

Rena looked at the picture for a moment somehow she felt nostalgic but happy soon her hand got on the mouse scrolling up the search bar. Once there she thought it for a minute before writing "Kashi..."

Suddenly someone opened the door,Rena turned around

"Hello Rena chan!" Sae says with a smile as she enters

Rena gets up and hugs her friend "God i missed you!" she says as she hugs her friend

Sae also smiled as she hugs Rena then she noticed what was on Rena's screen "Yeah i can see that.." she says as her smile fades

~Meanwhile~

Walking the hall..

"Jurina chan i'm so glad you're back!" A girl says wiking at Jurina as she walks to her room

Jurina ignored her and kept walking

After a few minutes of walking without thinking she was in front of Rena's door

"Why did i walk here?" she wondered staring at the door then looked down and clenched her fists "I'm nobody's shadow!" she murmured hurt

Suddenly the door opens revealing a smiling Rena and Sae

"Jurina chan!" Rena says shocked 

Sae put her hand on Jurina's head "Hello Jurina chan!" she says with a smile

"Sae chan.." Rena says not knowing how Jurina might react looking at Sae

Jurina removed the hand off her harshly then just walked away

The two older girls looks as Jurina walks away "What's wrong with her?" the tomboy asked

Rena looked other way sad

~At the entrance of the school~

Yuki got down her and Mayu's suitcase from the taxi "Why did you have to visit your parents now? you bought many things in Hawai Mayuyu!" the tall girl says complaining as she grabs the suitacases and tries to walk inside the school building

Yuki walked inside the building with the two suitcases luckily for her Sae and Rena were about to walk outside so they crossed paths

"Yuki chan!" Rena says with a smile

"Girls!" Yuki says sweat and happy

Sae smirked "You look awful!" she says then helps her friend with one suitcase

"Holidays!" Yuki says pouting as she grabs the other suitcase

The three girls walked to Yuki's room

Once there, Yuki throwed herself on bed while Sae turned on the tv, Rena looked at her friend on bed

"Where's Mayu chan?" Rena asked

"She went to see her parents!" Yuki says as she sits and fans herself

"We should leave her rest!" Sae says looking at Rena who smiled

"yeah rest we'll see you later!" Rena says as she opens the door and Sae follows her with a smirk

The door closes

"Idiots, if you wanna date do it.. i don't care" Yuki says as she lays back and looks at the ceiling

~ At the hospital~

The doctor ended her examination on Mayu..

"I guess now i need to replace my heart as soon as possible right doc?" Mayu asked as she buttons her shirt with a smirk

"We still have time Watanabe san" the doctor says as she sits to watch new pictures of Mayu's heart

"Doc i have question!" Mayu says looking at the doctor who was really focused on her computer screen

"What is it?" She asked

"Can i have sex?" Mayu asked

The doctor looks at Mayu "You know it's dangerous.. you can't do that" she says a little irritated

"I can't do this! i can't do that! because everything is dangerous!" Mayu says a little mad

"What's wrong with you? look what we accomplished..you're here now!" The doctor says as she gets up shocked

"I'm tired, i wanna live!" Mayu says as her tears were about to come out

The doctor puts her hands on Mayu's shoulder's "I know it's hard but think it twice!" she says looking at Mayu in the eyes

Mayu breaks their eye contact "what do you know? you don't live in a crystal body!" she says as her tears rolls her cheeks

~ Meanwhile~

Sae and Rena were at the bleachers sitting watching some girls playing basketball

"Yuki chan seems different.." Rena says as she watches the girls play

Sae turns to look at Rena " Can i ask you something?" she asks not so sure

"What's wrong?" Rena ask also turning her attention to Sae

"Do you still love Yuki chan?" Sae asked

Rena blushed but then just shook her head and got serious "doesn't matter now She must hate me now, i hurt the one she love!" she says sad

"Why? why you're not able to get her out of your brain?" Sae asked mad as she gets down the leaves Rena alone in the bleachers

Rena was shocked

"Love is so unfair!" Sae thinks as she walks to the girls that were playing and ask them to let her play

Rena gets up and walks back to her room. As she gets closer to her room she sees Yuki standing there knocking the door

"Yuki chan!" Rena says happy

"Hey.." Yuki says calmly

Rena opens the door then invites her in, Yuki looked at the room "i almost forgot how was your room like.." Yuki says

Rena sits on bed then smiled "if you feel like forgetting you can pass by anytime!" she says blushing

Yuki smiled then run to the bed to jump on it

Rena laughed "You're crazy!" she says enjoying the moment

Yuki putted her head on Rena's lap "Like the old times" she murmured

"just like that.." Rena says with sweet look

Yuki smiled "Rena chan play with my like you used to.." she says grabbing Rena's hand

Rena blushes but then plays with Yuki's hair like she used to when they were younger

"How is been everything?" Rena asked as she keep playing with Yuki's hair

Yuki closed her eyes "complicated.." she murmured

Rena noticed Yuki was still tired so she didn't ask anything more

"I missed being spoiled..." Yuki says yawning then hugs Rena's lap

After a few minutes Yuki fell sleep on her lap, Rena noticed and slowly moved Yuki to put her comfortably on bed

"lay next to me.." Yuki says with her eyes closed

Rena did what she was told and lied next to her friend on bed

Suddenly Yuki's left arm got on Rena's waist and pulled her even closer to her

Rena looked at the door " i forgot to lock.." she thought (knowing that if she gets up to lock the door there's a possibility Yuki won't hug her again but if she don't someone can open the door and see them even Mayu herself!!) then she looked at Yuki sleeping face and smirked "It will be what it has to be.." she thought then closed her eyes

~ Meanwhile at the basketball court~

Sae was playing hard even thought it was sunny day and everyone didn't want to play anymore

"Sae chan we're already tired" The girls says complaining sitting on the floor

"You're so weak!" Sae says coldly

"If you keep playing like that you'll end up in a hospital!" One of the players says

Sae laughed "I never been i a hospital!" she says still laughing then she stopped laughing

~ 2 years ago before everything~

Everything was blurry

"Sae we're completely dissapointed, driving drunk and since when you drink and drive?" A voice asks mad

Sae looked around "What happened? where am i?" she asked

"You're in the hispital, you had accident cause driving drunk!" Sae's mom says mad

"Now i remember!" Sae says as she looks all the flowers on her room

"You father says you're grounded and forget about spending Christmas with us, look all the trouble you got me into!" Sae's mother says

Sae smiles awkwardly then gets up

"What Sae get back to bed!" Her mother says worried

Sae smiles "I'm okay!" she says searching for something between the flowers

Sae's mother phone rang so she got out to pick up

"Here's it is Rena chan's flowers!" Sae says smiling then remembers "Yuki was next to me inside the car.. i bet Rena bought me better flowers" she murmured then went to search for Yuki's room

(Sae's mother didn't noticed cause she was talking with her lover)

Sae found Yuki's room and slowly opened the door "i know that skinny body.." she thought looking at the scene

Yuki was on bed unconscious while other girl was giving her a kiss on the lips

Sae was totally shocked "Rena chan.." she whispered as a tear rolls her cheek

[ The flowers Rena bought for Sae certainly were very expensive but the one she brought for Yuki were white carnations which Rena thinks must be given to a special somebody]

TO BE CONTINUED!!! COMMENT COMMENT i became such a Yuki x Rena shipper haven't i? well don't hate me!! :)
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.24(3)
Post by: cisda83 on April 19, 2013, 02:36:33 PM
Ah... Jurina is still angry...

Poor Rena... so sad

AH... so Sae was such a bad and naughty girl... getting into trouble and accident

Can't wait to find the next

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.24(3)
Post by: ashiya on April 19, 2013, 03:08:46 PM
I just dont understand

Jurina's still mad about Rena? And Sae knew something about her???
lol Mayu's question, but she loves Yuki, Yuki loves Mayu or Rena?
And Rena loves Yuki, and Jurina?

...
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.24(3)
Post by: momondmozide on April 19, 2013, 04:37:48 PM
WOOHOOW NICE UPDATE!!! CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT WILL HAPPENING NEXT. :)

BTW, CMZE SAN DONT FORGET TO UPDATE "LOVING YOU" I LOVE THAT FIC EITHER.  :twothumbs
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.24(3)
Post by: kurogumi on April 19, 2013, 04:45:11 PM
Ah i loved it!

Finally SAE story,aww after read this chapter i realized those 3 have a sad past,sad moment,but fortunately they're best friend!
I believe,no matters what happend they will care for each other,protect each other.
Its not shocking me if they love each other,its normal.
i mean rena love yuki,yuki love rena too before she meet mayu,and sae love rena
But look at the present,they still friends! Even they hurting each other LOL what amazing story cmze-san

And about mayu,LOL why you ask the doctor about sex mayu?LOL you know the answer,even yuki know that! That why she reject you


As for jurina,jurina fighting!
Someday rena will set her eyes on you LOL


Thank for the update cmze-san
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.24(3)
Post by: Shinoki on April 19, 2013, 10:15:37 PM
note to self, try to keep track of fanfiction
I started this one on april 1st, april fools day
and now I forgot what happened.....
poor mayuyu.... worries
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.24(3)
Post by: kahem on April 20, 2013, 02:31:48 AM
OMG when Mayuyu asked the doctor her question, I was like "what?! did she just say what I think she said?!" lol
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.24(3)
Post by: Rena-chan Daisuki on April 20, 2013, 04:57:05 AM
Somehow after i'm reading this chapter i kinda know what will happen
that 'cause their future when Mayu already lying in the bed of hospital

as always nice update :twothumbs
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.24(3)
Post by: gek geki on April 21, 2013, 05:37:54 PM


SAE-- :heart:-->RENA<-- :heart:-->YUKI<-- :heart:-->MAYU

                          ^
                          ^
                           :heart:
                      JURINA


GAHHHHH!!!! YUKI IS LUCKY PERSON!!

NO MAYU!!  :cry:



WONDERING IF MAYU BEING HOSPITALISED CAUSE OF YUKI TE-HE
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.24(3)
Post by: Sherin on April 22, 2013, 07:32:27 AM
Not a new reader but my first comment here.

It's been a while since I read this fic and I have no idea what's going on. The most complicated OTP case is definitely WMatsui and that is the only reason I read this fic. (*point to self* a loyal WMatsui shipper).

I knew how Jurina forgave Rena during the beach scence with everyone which was a total letdown seeing how this is a serious fight and yet all they did was hug and everything solved. Not heart warming at all. = ='

I still don't get the Black Queen's motive and the fact that Rena just back to normal like that. Aren't she supposed to have some mental problem?

You put in a lot of complicated stuff in the story but you don't fully solve them  and answer them all out.

And to be honest, Yukirin is the character I don't get the most. It's normal for a character to be cold and then kind, but this cold and kind Yukirin is totally off. =\

Well with all that said, I'm still gonna wait for the next chapter and enjoy WMatsui's argument. I love it when Jurina is mad with Rena.

Hopefully you'll give WMatsui more credit by talking about their past (about the adoption and such) and the fact that sth has to be done about Rena's Gekikara self. Put Jurina for the job for that. (>.<)/

PS: Sorry for the sudden critic, but I'm one of those lurker who won't review unless I really like the story and i usually go direct to the author. XD Even though this is a Mayuki fic, I still enjoy WMatsui small part.
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.24(3)
Post by: cmze on April 22, 2013, 10:04:32 AM
Hi Sherin.. i don't usually reply i'm a lazy person :nervous

You really caught me..i'm such a bad writer sorry  :sweatdrop:

1)I'm not WMatsui biggest shipper as you noticed, Jurina was added to be with Rena in the end and during the fic "They would have a little space for their romance" that's what i thought when i imagined the whole fic. Now new ideas came so i thought the scond season would be like "Memories" to glue everything the little space and details i didn't fill because "i'm idiot!"  :lol:

There will be plenty of WMatsui's past but you'll have to wait because i still don't know how to put that.. like i said new ideas came and change many things!!  :nervous

2)The Black Queens= These days people are crazy, didn't you see what happened in Boston? some people have twisted minds "They don't need a motive, they just did it!!" so it's almost the same with the Black Queens except they say "They do it to protect the school honor" to hide their cruel intentions :twisted: because it's fun for them feeling powerful.

3) It's part of the mystery if u mean Rena's chapter! xD if it's not because of that "It's because i forgot and i should reread my fic!"  :P

4) Yuki's character is weird= she's a lonely child pretending to be someone cold and mean because she's scare that someone might hurt her, which is normal because her family is dysfunctional..

5) About Rena= Rena created Gekikara as a defense mechanism for the circumstances she was in as part of the Black Queen!!
but she still manage to stay in control and not loose all herself in it [It's like in that moment she stood Grey… not white or Black but Gray]

6) Don't worry like i said the second season is to fill the blanks!! SORRY FOR MY ENGLISH I REALLY SUCK ON IT!!  :nervous :grin:

Thanks for reading!! :D






Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.24(3)
Post by: Sherin on April 22, 2013, 01:09:05 PM
Lol, don't worry I'm a lazy reader myself.

1) I always like the whole past and future flashback idea, but it's just you don't describe it properly. But it's hard cuz even the best author out there have a hard time with flashbacks that's why they tend to minimize them as few as possible.

2) But this is not really bullying anymore...the school should have done sth about this. But it's probably just me taking things too seriously sometimes when it comes to fics. = =' And I thought Boston is becuz of terrorist. That's a different story though. ^^'

3/5) I totally understand Rena's history. Hence mental disorder. It's not like Gekikara just disappeared from thin air like that. Seriously she could kill someone even in grey zone.

4) I understand what character you're trying to make Yukirin into. A bad horrible person with kind-heart. But seriously, you should read your own fic since the first chapter till now. Again I'm just too serious when it comes to fics. Don't mind me. = ='

6) No worry, I'm not an English native speaker myself and it doesn't mean a native speaker always write good fics. And good luck.

PS: I'm looking forward to the WMatsui part. ^^ I don't ship anything beside WMatsui and JuriMayu but I still like Mayuki.

Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.24(3)
Post by: BbSis on April 22, 2013, 03:50:52 PM
Before I made my comment about the update....

I couldn't help but read your answer cmze, about the questions sherin did. And well, it's just a suggestion (and sorry for the intrusion ^^" ), but since you are kind of lazy to read your fic (you said so), why don't you take notes of the main happenings of the fic (and for each fic you have). For exemple:
- mayu have a heart desease and have short lifetime.
- yuki havebad temper, and only is sweet with friends and mayu.
...
- rena was geki, she regreted, but jurina is mad at her

(I picked the obvious things to make exemples) It don't need to be long. Key words works pretty well(at least with me). Write your ideas for future chapters like this help a lot too. Like that, you don't exactly need to reread your writing from time to time (unless you want). And with only a fast look you won't get lost.


NOW the comment for the update!

What a polygon love!!! There are new feelings, but the old feelings are still there.

Jurina and Rena was kind of acting a bit 'fake' incestuous in the beginning. We can see Jurina acting tough with Rena about the Geki thing, but it's obvious she still loves her. But what about Rena?

Mayuuuu how ugly, lying to your girlfriend again! Asking about sex? I see... Mayukiwill have their night and mayu will end up in the hospital...

I'm curious to see if someone will catch Rena and Yuki huahauhauha

Thank you for the update o/
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.24(3)
Post by: cmze on April 22, 2013, 05:45:00 PM
 :lol:

1) My english is terrible.. what do you expect?  XD

2) Which Dean care about something like that "Usually they make themselves blind to that kind of thing to not look bad" since is a rich people school.. and yet we don't know if they were terrorist, i mean the guy has a sick throat so i'll put another example "what about the guy who killed many persons at the cinema in Colorado or all the twisted people we heard about while we were growing on the news

3) Well she's trying hard to forget her time like that since Yuki and Sae don't pay attention to it or ask about she feels beter..

4) Don't know how to answer on that.. i like that character but i have the little feeling you'll dislike it more in this season! :nervous

6) Go easy on me!  :lol:

BbSis:

Thanks for the advice :grin:

Yeah there's gonna be a really hard geometric figure, i don't know which one because geometric is not my thing!!  :nervous

SAE-- -->RENA<-- -->YUKI<-- -->MAYU

                          ^
                          ^
                           
                      JURINA

Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.24(3)
Post by: Sherin on April 23, 2013, 12:29:03 AM
1. No it's not. I've been reading your fics for a long while and you've improve alot. Especially the spacing and the way you write characters' dialogues is much easier to read now.

2.Ok this is out of topic so let stop it there.

3/4. It's just you need to prepare the characters' personalities and background more properly.

6. I am. You would see me on your tail all the time if I'm not. XD Ask Sayuki, Cheesy, Javs and such...well mostly WMatsui author. Now I'm not saying I'm a good writer or anything as I've stopped writing fics since long ago, but I just want to see authors and fics that I'm reading improve more. I guess that's kinda selfish of me.
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.24(3)
Post by: cmze on April 23, 2013, 02:33:29 AM
Apreacite that!  :grin:

I'll work harder!! :)
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.24(3)
Post by: Chanaline on April 25, 2013, 05:01:22 PM
I want to know the next!!! :D
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.24(3)
Post by: m00nchild on May 02, 2013, 06:48:26 AM
Nice update.

So Rena have change,
and Juri wanted to forgive Rena but still can't accept the fact,
Mayu wanted to have sex but too dangerous will she don't care about the doctor advice?
Sae still love Rena and can't let down the feeling.
This love triangle is so complicated.

Looking forward for the next update.
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.24(3)
Post by: mo-chan on May 05, 2013, 07:03:33 PM
the parings are confusing here  :panic:
  and you can't guess of who loves who sometimes  :nervous
 so I made this pic I think after reading this fanfic it's about the pairing  :sweatdrop:
but after I made it Ifind out that Yuki and Rena were the double center in the love story  XD
note: sure mean they love the other one  :cathappy: and not sure mean not sure they love the other one   :catglare:
thank you cmze-san  :deco:


(http://24.media.tumblr.com/2e165eb425e625e156eab2cb949dbdbf/tumblr_mmc4isazQH1rxkrcao1_500.jpg)
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.24(3)
Post by: gek geki on May 05, 2013, 07:11:29 PM
^

OMG MO-CHAN! THAT WAS GREAT OF YOU!!

CMZE SAN YOU MUST UPDATE FAST FOR APRECIATED MOCHAN WORK
ITS BECAUSE WE LOVE THIS FIC SOOOÒ MUCH! YEAHJ

IF YOU LOOK AT THE PICTURE,

SOMEHOW RENA AND YUKI ARE THE LUCKIEST PERSON
A LOT OF PEOPLE LOVE THEM BUT SADLY THEY DONT EVEN NOTICE THIS
AS FOR YUKI,SHE ON THE RIGHT PACE COZ MAYU ACCEPT HER FEELING HERE,BUT SADLY MAYU HAS AN ILLNES
THATS YUKI AND MAYU LOVE PROBLEM

AS FOR RENA HERE,WE KNOW SHE STILL LOVE YUKI.BUT LOOKS LIKE SHE LOVE JURINA TO BUT SHE DONT REALIZED,YET
JUST HOPE ITS NOT TO LATE FOR HER.WE KNOW TOO THAT JURINA FORGIVE HER AT THE BEACH SCENE,BUT THERE NO MENTION THAT THEY TOGETHER AS A COUPLE.
I WANT RENA SUFFER MUCH TO GET BACK JURINA LOVE.ITS TO EASY FOR HER
AT LEAST SHE SHOULD LEARN FROM YUKI CASE,WHY RENA FAILED ON YUKI~
AT THAT TIME,I THINK THEY NOT TO BE HONEST FOR EACH OTHER,AND THAT LEAD THEM TO THE MESS
SO I WANT AT LEAST RENA TRYING HARD TO GET JURINA


GAAH IM TOO MUCH AGAIN
NE NE NE ARIGATOU
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.24(3)
Post by: cmze on May 05, 2013, 09:42:48 PM
I know i'm really sorry... :catglare:

1) I been busy getting in trouble.

2) troubles everywhere 4 me  :angry:

3) I can't think properly and wanna write something really GOOD!!  but the things that been happening lately i can't, it don't let me focus!  :banghead:

I'm really sorry!  :cry:

Thanks Mo-chan that's fun! :w00t:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.24(3)
Post by: Elo on May 05, 2013, 10:00:06 PM
dont woory take your time

BUT write the next chapter for sure

hehe anyway I will wait for your update
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.24(3)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on May 07, 2013, 04:54:59 PM
ahhh i forgot to comment thank you so much for the update :cow: :bow: :heart: :yep:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.25 (4) ~Let's go deeper on WMatsui~
Post by: cmze on May 09, 2013, 11:40:48 AM
  This took some time.. hope this fills some blanks!                               
                                            ~Time is good as gold~
                                    CH.25(4) Let's go deeper on WMatsui!

~After a few hours~ At Rena's room

Yuki opened her eyes, after a second she realized she was hugging Rena all this time while they were sleeping.

"What this means?" she thought before get up and looked to other girl sleeping for a moment.

Rena moved a little so Yuki freaked out then decided to leave the room as she closes the door somebody covered her eyes.

"Guess who am i?" A voice says

Yuki could tell who was but she decided to play a little "mmm no idea" she answered with a smirk

"Really?" the girl asks then bites Yuki's shoulder

"Oucch Mayuyu!" Yuki says then rubs her shoulder, Mayu uncovered her eyes

Mayu smirks "did i bite you hard?" she asked then kisses Yuki's shoulder which cause the older girl to blush

"Yukirin pervert you're blushing!" Mayu says teasing the taller girl

"Not i'm not, let's find something to eat. I'm hungry!" Yuki says dragging Mayu with her

Meanwhile Rena was in the other side of the door, she heard everything and part of her was sad "I belong to the past.." she murmured as she opens the door and goes for a walk

~After a few minutes~

Sitting on the edge of the pool thinking..

"Now i know why they call it heart break!" Matsui Jurina murmured as she plays with the water on her feet

"STUPID RENA!" Jurina shouted closing her eyes like a little mad kid

"I'm sorry!" A voice whispered

Jurina turned her head "Rena chan" she says a little shocked.

Rena looks other way "I didn't know you were here.." she answers still looking other way

"I was leaving.." Jurina says as she grabs her shoes then get up

"Jurina i.." Rena says looking down

"You what? you feel sorry.. you didn't mean to hurt me?" Jurina says then walks but stopped next to Rena "You lied to me and now i know you keep thinking about her!" she says then walks away disappointed

Rena's tears rolled down her cheeks "Forgive me.." she whispered then sat on the edge of the pool also

~Many years ago~

"Matsui san good morning" A maid says as she opens the curtains

Rena opened her eyes and sat on the bed

"Matsui san.." The maid says as she looks at the younger girl who seems to have swollen eyes

Rena looked other way coldly

The maid looked down "Is a beautiful day! don't you think?" she says trying to cheer up the younger girl

Rena got up from bed then walked to the bathroom ignoring the maid who changed her expression to a sad one.

The maid cleans the room and gets back to the kitchen.

After showering Rena walked downstairs, she sat and waited for her breakfast like every morning.

The maid was taking a little longer than usual so she went to the kitchen and she could hear through the door what they were talking.

"Is Matsui san feeling better?" The chef asked as he fries the eggs

"Would you feel better if your mother dies?" One of the maids asked as she washes some dishes

"I wanna see Matsui san smile again as the kind girl she is!" The butler says a litlle sad

Rena looked down as she feels how the tears wanted to show

"Poor girl so alone and her father the only thing he's been doing is drink not even standing next to her child, she's only 8 years old she shouldn't go through this alone!" An older maid says as she cleans

Rena run to her room and threw herself on bed "Mom...i feel so alone without you" she whispered crying  as she hugs her pillow

~After some hours~

Rena opened her eyes and she saw a kid watching her with a smile plastered on her face.

"Who are you?" Rena says as she sits then rubbed her eyes cause she was still feeling sleepy.

The little girl had her fists on her chin smiling and looking at Rena with shiny eyes
"Kawai!!" she says and hugs Rena who was totally shocked.

"Ehh" Rena let out confused.

"Jurina there you are!" Rena's dad says as he enters to the room "Don't disturb your sister!" he says

"Sister!" Rena not believing that word

Rena's dad sighs "i was waiting for you to get up to explain you, now come with me!" he says offering his hand to Rena.

Both walked outside the room leaving Jurina playing with Rena's toys.

Walking through the garden..

"How can i explain you this!" he says scratching the back of his head walking hand in hand with Rena.

" is she not too big to be brought by the stork?" Rena asked confused and stopping

"Right, your mom asked the stork to bring her like that because she knew you'll feel lonely once she goes to heaven.. " Rena's dad says with bittersweet smile looking at his daughter.

Rena was about to cry "But i don't want her, i want mommy!" she replies already crying.

"Rena you knew mommy was sick and Jurina is a gift she wanted to give you, a partner, a friend someone you can rely when you feel down!" he says wiping Rena's tears

"She's not going to leave me like mom?" Rena asked sobbing looking down

Rena's dad kissed her on her forehead "Mommy loved you very much.. i'm pretty sure Jurina and me won't leave you after a long time!" he says with smile

Rena also smiled and hugged her dad

Through the years Rena was so happy to have a sister, her partner, her friend and most importantly the person who makes her the happiest on earth by just smiling at her but she was her sister, her little sister..

~After some years~

A 14 years old Rena walks to through the cemetery with her little sister

"Why you always wanna come with me?" Rena asked as she puts some flowers on her mother's grave.

Jurina smiles " i'll be always thankful to her, choosing me instead of any other kid in the orphanage, i have nothing special!" she says looking at the grave with a smile.

Rena grabbed her hand tight then smiled "You're more special than you think!" she says as she looks at the grave with a sweet smile

"I'll be always thankful that we met!" Jurina whispers looking at Rena who just ducked to clean the grave a little but she was still holding her hand

"Do you miss her?" Jurina asked a little sad.

Rena looked at Jurina "all the time but i'm good because i have you!" she says as she gets up suddenly Jurina planted a kiss on her cheek.

Rena blushed and blinked a few times, she was so shocked that didn't noticed Jurina stopped holding her hand.

"Rena chan!" Jurina shouts smiling while runs away, Rena looked at her younger sister running away then smiled and run after her

[The same year Jurina and Rena entered to the AKB Academy, where they met Yuki and Sae who were in the same classroom as Rena]

At first Rena would always be next to her little sister and even disliked Yuki because she didn't talk much but when Yuki helped her in the initiation night everything changed, they became friends [Ch.3]

Jurina and Rena got a little distant, Rena hanged most of her time with Yuki and Sae since now she was a teenager while Jurina was still a 13 years old kid to them but Rena always would find the time to spoil her little sister even if that would mean sleeping with her because Jurina is usually a scary cat [when we talk about movies!!]

Jurina would totally go in the middle of the night to Rena's room to sleep with her
and Rena couldn't reject that lost puppy face, it wouldn't matter when?, what time? or where? she would always spoil Jurina.

~One day at school~ In the classroom

"Matsui san please report to the headmaster office" The teacher says as he reads a paper that someone brought him

"huh? me?" Rena says confused as she gets up

Yuki and Sae looked at her both were worried

- In the headmaster office-

"Matsui san please have a seat!" The headmaster says serious

Rena sat nervous.

"Matsui Jurina had an accident during her P.E class.. *What happened to her?* Rena interrupts mad as she gets up

The headmaster looked at her "She's okay now but i think is more appropriate if your parents find out but i tried to contact your dad but he's on his honeymoon so he's not able to pick up his phone!"

"Yeah he has no signal!" Rena says looking down and sits "Sorry.." she whispers.

"So i thought i should send Jurina home for a few days!" The headmaster says serious.

"yeah that's fine.. where's Jurina?" Rena asked and gets up again.

"Is in the nursery!" The headmaster reply.

~In the nursery~

Jurina was on bed looking at the ceiling "Rena chan why you're not here taking care of me?" she wondered imagining Rena's face on the ceiling

"Jurina!!" Rena says as she watches Jurina with a head band and with a band on her arm.

"Hi Rena chan!" Jurina says happy.

"What happened?" Rena asks mad

Jurina looks other way closing her eyes" i fell of a tree!" she replies scared.

"What? What were you thinking?"" Rena asked between worried and mad.

"Well that little bird needed my help it fell of it's nest so i wanted to help!" Jurina says grinning like a winner.

Rena's mad face changed to a softer one "you're always so kind.. i guess i have to go home with you and take care of you myself!" she says already resign to the idea.

"YAY!!!" Jurina says happy.

"Hey there you are!" Sae says smiling while enters to the nursery.

Rena smiles while Jurina pouts

[Jurina dislike Sae and Yuki because they are the cause that Rena don't spend her time with her.]

"Today is friday so we're planning on going to disneyland for the weekend, do you want to come?" Sae asked to Rena with a charmy smile.

"I don't think i can't do that, i have to take care of Jurina!" Rena replied then looked at Jurina on bed who was smiling.

Yuki also entered to the nursery "Send her home, the servants can do that!" she says coldly.

Jurina noticed Rena's face and pouted.

Rena only looked at Yuki hypnotized ready to agree

"What's so cool about her? i'm way better!" Jurina thought looking at Yuki.

"Besides she's not your sister!" Sae says smiling, Yuki looked other way "Idiot!" she whispered.

"Upss!" Sae says embarrassed

"What? you told them?" Jurina asked trying to get up.

"What if we're not blood related? i love her like that, she's my little sister now excuse me i have to take care of her!" Rena says serious and kinda mad

[Those words made Jurina the happiest and also the most miserable person in the world]

The next year everything started Rena was even more sure about her feelings for her friend Yuki and she was ready to confess unfortunately everything changed.

The Black Queens made their move and tried to get Yuki who was supposedly the cruelest girl in the whole school but someone anonymous made Yuki go away for at least two months..

During that time when Yuki left, Jurina became really close to Rena in fact was Jurina the one that made Rena to keep her sanity...

TO BE CONTINUED!!  Rena doesn't really know yet that she loves Jurina.. how Jurina got Rena's attention during that grey time? who's the anonymous? to who belong the letter and the key Yuki found in the season 1? and what's more important to who belong the other grave that Rena goes visit to the cemetery? I'LL DEVELOP ALL THAT DURING THE SEASON!! DON'T WORRY THIS IS A MAYUKI FANFIC!!

[Now i'll skip this day..]

~The next day~ At MaYuki's room

"Mayuyu wake up, i'm feeling lonely!" Yuki says hugging Mayu.

Mayu turned her body so her back was facing Yuki "i don't wanna wake up.. i'm in Hawai" she murmured still sleeping.

Yuki pouted "I want some love before class!" she says hugging Mayu tighter.

"Yukirin i can't breathe.." Mayu whispered coughing.

Yuki got worried "Sorry Sorry are you okay?" she asked looking at her girlfriend stilll really worried.

Mayu smiled "ha fooled.. the fact that my heart is not strong, doesn't mean that i will die if you touch me!" she says a little serious.

Yuki got up "That's not funny!" she says irritated then grabbed her school uniform with her things then walked to the door.

"You're moody today.." Mayu says as she gets up "wait for me!" she says grabbing her things also.

Yuki opened the door and saw how everyone in the hall were looking at her, Mayu was also confused.

Yuki and Mayu noticed the papers spread around the hall's floor.

Rena also got out of her room and noticed how Mayu was looking at her with those killer eyes then she looked at Yuki who was still looking the papers on the floor.

Rena took one paper from the floor "A match made in heaven" she read and saw a picture of her and Yuki sleeping..

"Fantastic!" Sae says looking at Yuki who looked at Mayu who was still busy looking at Rena.

"Who did this is killing many trees..bunch of idiots it's easy to post it on the net or send it as a message!" Jurina says mad and kicking the papers on her way as she walks to the bathroom..

TO BE CONTINUED!! Okay i know what you might say "There's not enough WMatsui or you didn't tell me anything!" ^^;  well i had to do this to answer you all that!! please comment :)
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.25 (4) ~Let's go deeper on WMatsui~
Post by: Elo on May 09, 2013, 12:11:22 PM
yey you updated

I thought at the end and beggining what the f***

why did rena and yuki sleep together

and I want more of MAYUKI

anyway good update I want more
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.25 (4) ~Let's go deeper on WMatsui~
Post by: Minamiyuki on May 09, 2013, 12:12:39 PM
Ohh Jurina still mad at Rena....

Jurina please forgive Rena, you're not the only one who hurt so much....

Mayuyu, don't tease Yukirin that much...

waiting for your updates...  XD XD XD
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.25 (4) ~Let's go deeper on WMatsui~
Post by: Sherin on May 09, 2013, 12:54:45 PM
Wait you adding more flames to the story with that scandal? XD Is it current or in the past?

And thx for the WMatsui episode~ now we even know Rena-chan doesn't have a mother. Just how miserable can she be? ^^'
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.25 (4) ~Let's go deeper on WMatsui~
Post by: chichay12 on May 09, 2013, 01:14:26 PM
poor rena  :cry:
I really love this fic :on gay:
Kyaaaaa i cant wait....
Pls update soon..
Cmze-san thank you for the update XD
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.25 (4) ~Let's go deeper on WMatsui~
Post by: mo-chan on May 09, 2013, 01:22:29 PM
the love triangle RenaYukiMayu begin XD
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.25 (4) ~Let's go deeper on WMatsui~
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on May 09, 2013, 01:50:10 PM
jurina please forgive rena  :(, rena's just a bit dense, she'll see soon she loves you really :yep:
mayuki kawaii!! :heart:
aww poor rena, rena's mama died, and her papa ignored her :cry:, at least she does have jurina  :deco:
mayu don't be mad at rena she didn't do it :banghead:, i bet you it was sae  :angry:
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.25 (4) ~Let's go deeper on WMatsui~
Post by: cisda83 on May 09, 2013, 02:02:02 PM
Ah... so Jurina was adopted to keep Rena company...

Rena loves Jurina as a sister... but now... she might liked Jurina more than that...

Yuki was rude there.... just said to leave Jurina alone...

Also Sae to even said that Rena should not waste her time with Jurina coz' Jurina was not Rena real sister.

What's going to happen to Rena and Jurina now?

Ara... Mayu saw YukixRena picture together... She was so jealous...

Same as Jurina... she is also angry about that....

What's going to happen to Mayuki relationship...?

Can't wait to find out more

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.25 (4) ~Let's go deeper on WMatsui~
Post by: ashiya on May 09, 2013, 03:16:11 PM
 :( :( :huhuh :? ;)

This is a Mayuki fic, Yuki and Rena were together for that long...

My Juju can't forgive Rena, i can understand that  XD Mayu, get close to Yuki. Prove Rena's wrong  :twothumbs

Jurina's jealous right now. Rena just do something already, you know the real Jurina
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.25 (4) ~Let's go deeper on WMatsui~
Post by: Rena-chan Daisuki on May 09, 2013, 03:59:54 PM
Finally Wmatsui scene yeyyyy!!!!
 XD XD XD XD

But really poor Rena for having so many problem
and as a loyal fan of Matsui Rena
sometimes i just can't imagine Rena having such miserable life
it just make me want to cry  :cry:

pls update soon
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.25 (4) ~Let's go deeper on WMatsui~
Post by: tfme3638 on May 09, 2013, 04:13:43 PM
can't wait for more wmatsui back story! :drool:

one question though... what happened to mayu's genius side?? or is she supposed to be just good in doing tests? cause she seems to have the damsel in distress feeling...
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.25 (4) ~Let's go deeper on WMatsui~
Post by: rochilu on May 09, 2013, 07:22:34 PM
pleaaaaaase don't let mayu die TnT please! and don't let yuki give her heart, they have to be together :c
Yuki have so much money, i bet she can buy a illegal organ (? hahaha ok no xD but i have hope, someone will give a
perfect heart to mayuyu and she will live happy with her yukirin :3
oh no no no, but D: who get that picture, i will kill you person who take the picture. At least they didn't do anything!! >n< i can feel the that the drama is coming D:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.25 (4) ~Let's go deeper on WMatsui~
Post by: Shinoki on May 09, 2013, 10:05:01 PM
Soooo~ much stuff happened.........
Wow, Rena-chan TT.TT....
Jurina..........seriously.....
Noooooooooo!!!! WMatsui is falling apart....
I just had these cute images in my mind when you mentioned them as kids though~
Mayuyu, this is worrying.....
cmze-san, epic~
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.25 (4) ~Let's go deeper on WMatsui~
Post by: POPCAT on May 09, 2013, 10:41:27 PM
 :frustrated: I have to know whats going to happen next or I can't sleep. And I need mah beauty-sleep  :sleep: mmm sleep
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.25 (4) ~Let's go deeper on WMatsui~
Post by: gek geki on May 10, 2013, 05:43:26 AM
ON THE FIRST SEASON JURINA IS KIND OF GOOD GIRL ,GOOD SISTER ALWAYS DOING THE RIGHT THING
BUT ON THE SEASON TWO SHE BECOME OR SHOULD I SAID HER TRUE NATURE ”PLAYER”.
RENA WILL KNOW THAT ACTUALLY JURINA IS REALLY POPULAR IN THE WHOLE SCHOOL (LOOK LIKE RENA DIDNT REALIZED THAT BEFORE,YET)
BUT SEEING JURINA BECOME BAD GìRL OR PLAYER,IT WILL LEAD RENA TO FINALLY GIVE JURINA HER FULL ATTENTION,RENA WOULD START TO LEARN ABOUT JURINA,OPENED HER EYES AND LOOKING HOW AWESOME JURINA IS.
And BECOME REALLY JEALOUS WHEN OTHER GIRL CLOSE TO HER.

I KNOW THAT RENA LOVE JURINA WHEN ON THE SEASON ONE.WHEN MAYU BECOME JURINA ROOMMATE,ITS OBVIOUSLY SHE DOESNT LIKE JURINA HAVE A ROOMIE~
AND THATS WHY I THOUHT THAT THE REAL REASON THE BLACK QUEEN BULLIED MAYU,NOT BECAUSE MAYU IS A POOR PERSON OR GENIUS LIKE THEY ALWAYS DO,
IM REALLY SURE IT BECAUSE RENA JEALOUSY.


ITS TRUE THAT RENA LOVE YUKI,BUT JURINA IS ALWAYS BY RENA SIDE AL THE TIME SO SHE BLINDLY LOOKING THAT.
SHE FORGET WHY SHE BECOME HAPPYEST PERSON,JURINA IS A GIFT FROM HER MOTHER.A GIFT THAT CAN MAKE HER HAPPY.
WHEN RENA START TO LEAVING JURINA IS WHEN SHE START LIKING YUKI,THAT WHY SHE BECOME TROUBLESOME,
TSK TSK ITS BECAUSE YOU LEAVING JURINA RENA CHAN~ hahaha
RENA SHOULD THINKING A WORLD WITHOUT JURINA.AND SHE WILL REALIZE


AH THANK
CANT WAIT OTHE FIC,WILD LOVE LOVE LOVE
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.25 (4) ~Let's go deeper on WMatsui~
Post by: kurogumi on May 10, 2013, 06:17:59 AM
Great comment for rochilu,i was thinking about that too bu nooò!! I dont want yuki or mayu die

But how about this,since i love rena too so how about jurina giving her heart?at least she trying to do that but ja ja jang! Rena againt that idea! What so dramatic! LOL
Jurina want mayu and yuki happy thats why

LOL i cross the boundary.dot worry that just my wild imagination LOL
I imagine that because rena need to know how jurina mean a lot for her LOL


Sorry for my weird comment cmze-san and thank for the update.i cant helped but comment again after read all reader comment LOL
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.25 (4) ~Let's go deeper on WMatsui~
Post by: cmze on May 10, 2013, 09:39:58 PM
Okay we need to talk.. not i'm kidding :shakeit: but i read the commments and realized that u guys FORGOT THIS IS A SAD FANFIC and i wanna play with your feelings!!!  :nervous  :shakeit:

Elo: Thay's normal hahahha but haven't you noticed what Yuki meant "She misses the old times when everything wasn't complicated" As an author i would say "She wants some peaceful time.. and maybe Rena?!"  :nervous

X_Last-Cross_X: In the season one as could see Jurina is the type of person who like justice, she always thought that the Black were the worst in the world and now she knows her dear,kind Rena was leader of it.. as an author i would says "she feels betrayed"

Sherin: Everything is in the past :rofl: and well like i said is a sad fanfic  :grin:

Chichay12: Thanks for the love  :wub: i hope i can update soon since like i said i have many things to resolve but the truth the comments makes me happy and makes me wanna update so soon! :)

Mo-chan: You better hold on tight.. WELCOME TO THE ROLLERCOASTER OF EMOTIONS!!  :twisted:

mayuki_daisuki: The truth they (WMatsui) won't get together any time soon sorryb :oops:  thanks to all the things i have planned  :nervous but keep reading please!!  :bow:  btw IT WASN'T SAE!! :X

cisda83: Many things will happen and probably you would "CMZE SAN WHY DID YOU THAT??????" or you could ljke it!!  :grin:

ashiya: This a Mayuki fanfic with a lot of confusion!!  :shakeit: :grin:

 Rena-chan Daisuki: Don't be sad.. it's just a fic EVENTUALLY SHE'L HAVE HER HAPPY ENDING!!  :D

tfme3638: Well i think this one is a mature Mayu besides Yuki over protects her and makes her more aware about her illness!! since my pov :\ don't worry you'll have your moments of WMatsui :thumbup

rochilu: Why you brought that up? that's part of the second season since now will see how she takes her pills and have her beeper
she's in the waiting list!! :)

Shinoki: Yeah iit's worrying don't hate me cause wmatsui  :nervous

POPCAT: sorry!  :grin: 

gek geki: Wow you been paying attention, will be nice a thing see how she finds out she loves Jurina!! :grin:

 kurogumi: Thanks for the support, that  story was fun!!  :D



Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.25 (4) ~Let's go deeper on WMatsui~
Post by: Elo on May 10, 2013, 10:27:33 PM
Now I get It thanks and update soon
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.25 (4) ~Let's go deeper on WMatsui~
Post by: kurogumi on May 11, 2013, 03:14:40 AM
Then i would like to enjoy this roller coster of emotion


And you're right this is your first sad fic,itr really weird if its dont have tearsful drama

Make the character suffers a lot,tears a lot LOL like akb documentary no flowers without rain,so yeah they need some rain LOL


Ooh i cant wait when mayu take a lot pills in front of yuki~



Every Tearsdrop is Waterfall
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.25 (4) ~Let's go deeper on WMatsui~
Post by: gek geki on May 11, 2013, 11:31:34 AM
GÀAA~AAAH!!!
YES YES NEEDED SAD DRAMA!!
EVEN IT WOULD HURTFUL WHEN I READ SAD STORY,BUT IT MUST!

MAYUKI AND WMATSUI NEED SAD DRAMA
ITS ALREADY SAD FROM CHAPTER 1

I NOTICE,MAYU HEART ATTACK ALWAYS HAPPEN WHEN SHE MAD AT YUKI

FIRST TIME ITS WHEN SHE MAD BECAUSE YUKI SNACTH HER PAPER

SECOND,WHEN SHE MAD AT HAWAII CAUSE YUKI WONT TOUCH HER

THIRD? I DONT KNOW BUT LOOKS LIKE IT GONNA BE HAPPEN SOON,MAYBE YUKI AND RENA PHOTO INCIDENT WOULD MAKE HER GET THE ATTACK AGAIN,AND MAYBE THIS TIME SHE CANT HIDDEN IT FROM YUKI
4...5...6...7...it would happen anytime any moment

WMATSUI:
I WANT RENA WHO CONFESS HER FEELING TOWARD JURINA!

LOVE YOUR FANFIC ARIGATOU,THANK YOU
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.25 (4) ~Let's go deeper on WMatsui~
Post by: cisda83 on May 11, 2013, 01:27:02 PM
Well can't wait to see how you are going to develop the story...

The story is very colorful... in term of feelings

Making me feel anger, sad, happy, etc... while reading it...

I can't wait to feel something again... for the next chapter...

Thank you for the great colorful story...

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.26 (5)
Post by: cmze on May 12, 2013, 02:22:04 AM
                                             ~Time is good as gold~
                                                        CH.26(5)

After the picture incident, the hours passed fast in the classroom except for the fact that the girls were tense, Yuki won't look or talk to Rena while Mayu completely ignores Yuki and Sae looks at Rena a "hopeless look"

"Well that's it class.. see you tomorrow!" The sensei says as the bell ring.

Everyone got up Yuki followed Mayu to their dorm..

~Once inside~

Mayu grabbed her laptop and laid on bed with her headphones, Yuki sighed as she puts her bag on the floor then sits on the edge of the bed to talk to Mayu.

Mayu ignores and keeps listening to music.

"Mayuyu.." Yuki called several times moving softly Mayu's leg but got no answer from the shorter girl.

Yuki scratched her head then got up "WHY YOU WANNA FIGHT FOR SOMETHING THAT LITTLE?!?" she shouted mad and hysterical.

"Do you like her?" Mayu asked removing her headphones.

Somehow Yuki calmed and turned to look at Mayu kinda shocked for her question "What?!" she still had that expression on her face.

"Do you still love her?" Mayu asked as Nezumi [ Cold eyes and cold expressions]

Somehow this part of Mayu really transmits coldness, Yuki looked down "How can you ask something like that after everything i've done?!?!" she asked furious then looked at her.

"I had to make sure since you seem comfortable sleeping with her" Mayu coldly replied.

"She's my friend!!" Yuki replied trying to control her anger.

"I don't sleep hugging my friends" Mayu says coldly and calmed

"It's different!!" Yuki replies irritated by that question.

"Great you can sleep with Rena but i can't sleep with anybody else because it's different!" Mayu says mocking

"Yes, she's more than a friend but i don't love her!" Yuki says serious.

"Are you listening to yourself? you're trying hard to not make excuses!" Mayu says looking other way.

Yuki pouts "I can't talk to you like this!" she says then walked away and slammed the door while Mayu gets up and follows her without Yuki notice.

~ Meanwhile ~

Jurina was at the bleachers looking the page where's Yuki's and Rena's picture sleeping together..

"Love is a bitch!" Sae says as she sits next her.

Jurina pouted "Who told you sit with me?" she asked irritated looking at Sae.

Sae smiles and puts her arm around Jurina's neck "C'mon Jurina chan, we share the same pain!" she says still with a smile.

"Ahhhh let me go, who said you can put your arm around my neck?" Jurina asked trying to break free.

Suddenly the vibe changed..

"Why we choose the bad ones all the time?" Sae asked looking down.

Jurina stopped resisting and also asked herself the same question "I guess you can stay with me a little!" she says looking other way.

Sae smiles "I knew you were a good kid!" she says still with her arm still around Jurina's neck.

"If your face gets an icher closer to my face, I'm gonna hit you so bad!" Jurina says irritated by her company

~ Meanwhile~

Rena had a good time at the library but some girls gossiping about what happned this morning ruined it so she rather take the book and go to her room to read peacefully.

On her way to her room she sees Yuki walking to her, Rena smiled "Yu..." she passed next to her and ignored her.

Rena turned around to see Yuki walking away not even looking back "Yuki chan" she murmured sad, once she was out of sight suddenly someone appeared.

"Can we talk in private?" A voice asked.

Rena turned around to face the other person "Mayu" she whispered kinda shocked.

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On her way to nowhere..

"How can she think like that? Is she an idiot? Everything i've done for her, why she would think that i love Rena?" Yuki sighed and sat on the grass.

"This is complicated!" Yuki says then lays her back on the grass and looks at the sky "i never think about those feelings.." she whispered still looking at the clouds hypnotized.
 
         {LIKE THE OLD TIMES: HOW THE PLAYING WITH HAIR STARTED}
                                                  Yuki's backstory

[When Rena and Yuki were 14]  "At the Kashiwagi Mansion"

"Good afternoon Kashiwagi san" The butler says.

Yuki looked around "My parents are not home right?" she asked.

"They left a few minutes ago, if i not mistaken they went to England for the weekend!" The butler answers

"Nice!" Yuki says as she pulls Rena and Sae with her to her room.

~In Yuki's room~

"Finally you invited us to your home!" Sae says smirking and laying on her bed

"Well like you heard my parents left for the weekend.." Yuki replies coldly as she turns on the tv.

Rena was looking closely Yuki's things then looked a picture on Yuki's desk of her with a guy "Is... he... your..boyfriend?" she asked shyly as she grabs the picture.

Yuki got closer and snatched the picture "Who told you to grab this?" she asked mad.

Rena was shocked and soon apoligized.

"C'mon Yuki don't be so cruel, it's just an old picture!" Sae says as she gets up and taps Yuki's back.

Yuki looked down "I'm sorry Rena chan!" she says serious.

Rena looked at her with a sweet look "It's okay!" she replies with a smile.

[They spend the night playing around like a pijama party and the three girls slept in the same bed because it was a really big bed]

~ In the middle of the night~

"save him!" Yuki shouted and woke up all sweat, she looked at her friends who were still sleeping then decided to get up and went to the kitchen for a glass of water.

Rena also woke up and noticed Yuki was gone so she decide to go downstairs to look for her, it didn't take long cause she found her sitting in the stairs..

"Yuki chan are you okay?" Rena says and fast go to her.

Yuki wiped her tears "I'm fine.." she replies with more tears on the corner of her eyes then got up ready to get back to bed but Rena grabbed her by her wrist.

"We're friends, you can talk to me!" Rena says looking down.

Yuki stood there for a second [not knowing what to do or say] while Rena waited for the worst like (she would get mad)

Suddenly Yuki wrapped her arms around Rena who was shocked and blushing "He took the wrong choice! I'm the wrong choice!" she says crying on Rena's shoulder.

"Yuki chan.." Rena murmured and hugged Yuki tighter.

After a few minutes Yuki calmed and both sat on the stairs.

"I'm sorry i had a nightmare..i don't wanna sleep but i'm sleepy" Yuki said looking sad 

Rena smiled "You can stay here, i won't let you have that nightmare again!" she says tapping her lap

Yuki put her head on Rena's lap "Thank you.." she says with a little smile forming her sleeps

Runs blushed but then smiled and automatically her fingers started to play with Yuki's hair..

"Rena i'm sorry about your mother.." Yuki says sad.

Rena a little smiles "It's okay...i'm sorry about your brother!"

Yuki looked at Rena "How did you know?" she asked.

"your eyes..." Rena replies as she keeps playing with Yuki's hair.

"Do i look like him that much?that's why my parents hate me because i remind them about him but i'm not like him!" Yuki says as tears comes out then gets up.

"What? no, i don't think your parents hate you!" Rena says as she gets up also.

"You don't know my parents.. " Yuki replied wiping her tears.

"Yuki chan!" Rena says sad

"They wanted me to die instead of him,they always tell me how perfect he was and how i'm not that's why they act like i don't exist!" Yuki says full of hate as she wipes her tears.

Rena hugs Yuki "I will always be by your side no matter what!" Rena whispers.

Yuki was shocked first but then also hugged Rena..

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(At Rena's room)

"Stay away from Yuki!" Mayu says serious

Rena looked at her then sighed "We're friends!" she says as she puts the books on her desk.

"She loves me!" Mayu says looking at Rena.

"Then what are you doing here?" Rena asked

"Look whatever feeling you felt before holidays, it's just a nostalgic feeling nothing else!" Mayu says before leaving.

"Is way more than that!" Rena whispered then grabbed one book and started reading on bed but realized she couldn't focus so she took some shorts and a shirt and went to run at the racing track.

~ After some hours already night time~ At MaYuki's room

Yuki entered to the room and saw Mayu reading a manga on bed already on her pjs (White t-shirt and shorts)

Mayu puts the manga aside and gets up to welcome her girlfriend with a kiss.

Yuki looked at Mayu incredulous "What happened? weren't you mad?" she asked confused.

"Well i remembered that since Hawai you haven't kissed me properly!" Mayu says playing with Yuki's shirt.

Yuki smiles "Well it's been like i don't know many hours since we haven't kiss!" she says and steals a peck from Mayu

Mayu smiles then puts her arms around Yuki's neck and kisses her.

"I missed you!" Yuki says between bold kisses and hands roaming Mayu's body.

Mayu put one of her hands on Yuki's waist to pull her to bed but Yuki noticed that and stopped their kiss.

"What are you doing?" Yuki asked confused

Mayu looked into Yuki's eyes "don't you love me?" she asked as she gets on bed.

"Mayuyu..we talked about this before!" Yuki says holding back her hair with her right hand.

"I bet if i was Rena you wouldn't think it that much!" Mayu says looking other way

Yuki turned around biting her lips mad then took off her tie and threw it.

"There's nothing happening between me and Rena!" Yuki says before leaving and slamming the door for second time this day.

Yuki walked around the school still mad cause Mayu's words, she thought it will be better walking around the campus since it calms her.

Yuki walks the campus looking for a good place to think but she couldn't help cross way with Rena who was going back to her dorm.

Yuki passes next to her and ignored her for second time.

Rena turns "Yuki chan!" she calls.

Yuki stops walking but still Rena was facing her back "What's going on? why you're ignoring me?" she asked

Yuki turns around mad and takes Rena by her arm "You still ask it, How could you do this to me? i thought you were the same kind Rena but i was wrong, you only want revenge and want to destroy Mayu and Me.. YOU'RE GEKIKARA YOU'RE NEVER GOING TO CHANGE!" she shouted then let go her arm and walks away mad

[Note: Nobody was around]

Those words hurt Rena in the deepest part of her heart and tears wanted to show but she was still froze, Yuki looked at her with hate on her eyes while saying those words..

As Yuki walks her mind and heart thinks she was too cruel and that she should get back and apologize, every steps she gives the more bad she feels, soon her bar breaks and turns around  to get back.

Rena looked at Yuki coming back to her so she walked to her also..

The two stood looking at eachother for a moment before Yuki hug Rena tight "Forgive me.. Forgive me!" Yuki says to the crying Rena.

Rena hugged Yuki tight also as if the world was about to end.

Yuki wiped Rena's tears with her fingers before connect their foreheads both had their eyes closed as Rena's tears rolls her cheeks.

[ If other person see them could say it's a couple giving love to eachother!]

Mayu had few minutes looking for Yuki and now she found her, she can't believe what she's seeing her heart aches..

"Yukirin..." she manage to whisper as she puts her right hand on her chest because she feels she can't breathe and someone is stabbing her heart.

Without the two notice she walked away to the school even thought it was hard because her body wasn't responding well.

Once in her room she took her pills and laid on bed looking at the ceilling feeling like her heart is coming out of her chest..

TO BE CONTINUED!! COMMENT COMMENT!!  :shakeit:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.26 (5)
Post by: cisda83 on May 12, 2013, 02:54:43 AM
Mayu is so jealous...Jurina and Sae are so sad... about a picture of Rena and Yuki sleeping beside each other?

Yuki might still like Rena... but love even but not in love with her.... Rena was her 1st love...

You can forget all your other lovers but you can never forget your 1st love, 1st kiss and 1st time, etc...

Whether they are good or bad... You always remember them...

Ah.. Yuki what the heck... how could Yuki blame Rena for the photo when she wasn't the one that taking it right?

Rena and Yuki have bond over the death of their loves one.... they are similar in someway... They have been each other stone then....

Ah... Mayu is trying to kill herself over what? Misunderstanding...?

Honestly... both Mayu and Yuki need to start having proper communication... They both were a bit closed off and unable to open up to each other....

Same with Jurina.. she should just stop hurting Rena.... she did not want to be Geki... she was pushed to do it... if not Jurina was going to be hurt...

When Yuki was not there... Jurina is her everything... even when Yuki was there... Rena would still think Jurina is important....

What's going to happen next to Mayuki and WMatsui?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.26 (5)
Post by: Shinoki on May 12, 2013, 02:59:53 AM
fast update......
Rena-chan!!!
Jurina barely shows up....
Mayuyu can still be Nezumi despite her problems...
Misunderstandings... smashed head into wall....
Personally, I find Yuki and Rena like sisters, not lovers......
I don't hate people for their writing, so don't worry~
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.26 (5)
Post by: gek geki on May 12, 2013, 03:03:17 AM
ITS FULL OF MISSUNDERSTOOD!!!
MAYU SHOULD KNOW THAT YUKI AND RENA ARE BEST FRIEND
THEY REALLY CLOSE!

MAYU AND YUKI THEY ARE FIGHT! FIGHT! AND FIGHT!
HOPE THEY FINE AGAIN
BUT APOLOGIZE NOW ITS NOT WORKING
ON THIS SITUATION,I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT MAYU FOR YUKI?
I MEAN WHAT THE DIFFERENT BETWEEN RENA AND MAYU FOR YUKÌ?

YUKI ONCE SAID THAT MAYU IS HER EVERYTHING,THE QUESTION IS WHY?
THEY KNOW EACH OTHER NOT SO LONG LIKE RENA DO,SO WHY MAYU MEAN A LOT FOR YUKI THAN RENA?


MAYU NEED TO KNOW THE ANSWER,SINCE FOR MAYU,YUKI LOVING HER IS LIKE A DREAM COME TRUE,SHE JUST AN ILLNESS GIRL WHO WAITING HDR DEATH COMING...



THANK,I KNOW ITS SELFISH BUT I WANT THE NEYT UPDATE ALREADY,ITS BEAUTIFUL
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.26 (5)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on May 12, 2013, 03:09:26 AM
mayu, don't be too mad at yuki, she still loves you :cry:
i feel sorry for jurina and sae,  :( their so depressed cuz they both liked rena
awww rena chan, what yuki said was quite harsh, at least she said sorry now though :yep:
i don't like yuki's parents :smhid poor yuki has such a sad past :mon runcry:
mayu it's not what it looks like :shocked ahhh mayu is not feeling well again if her body isn't responding wel :panic:
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.26 (5)
Post by: momondmozide on May 12, 2013, 05:29:51 AM
fast and long update :)
im getting curious about what what will happen next :D


cant wait for the continuation :)  :twothumbs
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Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.26 (5)
Post by: rochilu on May 12, 2013, 05:46:43 AM
haha xD i don't know, maybe was because i read all at once (?
omg ! no no, Mayuyu TnT your poor little heart, gambatte! you need to talk with Yuki and all will be clear! also her doctor said that she CAN'T do it, god Mayu think!  >n< Yuki just want to protect you u.u
but i understand her, the situation that she saw was really compromising  and she could missunderstood it easily
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.26 (5)
Post by: kurogumi on May 12, 2013, 07:11:53 AM
As a human,

its normal to missunderstood

Its normal to scared

Its normal to worried

Especially when its about someone you really love...someone you care...

In mayu case,her position its not secured

She have an illness,maybe she worried yuki would leave her someday...

She became posessive toward yuki...

Maybe in her eyes,rena is more suitable for yuki,she's smart,beauty,and more important she's healthy

Mayu easily get jealous,but maybe well just maybe,looking yuki with rena is the best thing.

Because if yuki still with mayu,it just make yuki hurt...


As for yuki case,

Yuki being over protective,she being frustrated and scared like hell to lose mayu's

She felt hopeless inside,she dont know what to do to keep mayu by herself forever,rena is her comfort here...

Of course maybe she's already think the solution,but that solution maybe wont make her and mayu together in the future,and she scared,she didn't want imagine mayu with someone else beside her,but dont want life without mayu too

Its frustrating...

Time is running out for both two,mayu heart became weak and weak...




Jurina and Sae?you two just wait and see LOL


And i see that except yuki and jurina,the other dont know about mayu condition...

Oh and if rena is yuki comfort here,then jurina is mayu's


Aah its really sad fic.just read this chapter make me hurt bx thinking LOL





Thank for the update cmze-san
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.26 (5)
Post by: mo-chan on May 12, 2013, 11:08:31 AM
drama sad drama (T.T)/ 
It really hurts me seeing Mayu broke hearted (-_-)
so Rena Yuki's confort from the first
Yuki loved Rena and Mayu for the same reason because she was alone she needed someone *-*
Rena and Mayu's personality are very different I can say that they have an opposite personality
It is clear that Rena wanted Yuki cause now she know that Yuki loved her from the first and Rena too needs someone now cause Jurina won't talk to her and she is angry at her
so there is a hole on her heart
for Mayu I'm curious what is she going to do? getting jealous and angry again or admit the truth that she is getting Yuki mesirable and very sad and letting go Yuki being happy with her first love
Yuki is so complicated she doesn't take responsability of what she is doing she just doing what comforting her she is the weakest person's here
What I.understand now that Yuki wants both Rena and Mayu by her side because she can't choose
if she won't choose then she will hurt both of them
Yuki is selfish...
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.26 (5)
Post by: POPCAT on May 12, 2013, 12:01:39 PM
Aw Mayu you and Yuki needs to have a talk :P

Jurina forgive Rena FOR FUAQ SAKE :scolding:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.26 (5)
Post by: Chanaline on May 12, 2013, 04:37:35 PM
Noooooooo! Why MAyu? Nooooooo!

I don't want to have something like this :cry:! Poor Mayu :(
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.26 (5)
Post by: chiqinna on May 15, 2013, 04:32:19 AM
NOOOOO!!!!!!  :frustrated:
WHY WHY WHY??!!!!
I WOULD GIVE MY HEART TO MAYU IF I COULD~~~  :mon waterworks: :mon waterworks:
BUT YUKI'S NOT AT FAULT ALSO...
 :cry: IS MAYU GOING TO DIE ALSO IN THE END? OR THERE WILL BE SOMEONE WHO DONOR A HEART TO HER?  :dunno:
AHH~ I WAS THINKING TOO FAR ALREADY~
THANKS FOR THE UPDATE CMZE-SAN!!  :gmon bang: LOVE YOUR STORY!  :twothumbs
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.27 (6)
Post by: cmze on May 19, 2013, 01:27:33 PM
                                             ~Time is good as gold~
                                                        CH.27 (6)

(The next day) ~At Rena's room~

Kashiwagi Yuki slowly opened her eyes as she stretches, she looked around the room and noticed Rena sleeping next to her, Yuki held back her hair then got up quietly, she walked to the door but before open it she looked at Rena sleeping for a second then got back to her room.

(In her room)

Yuki stares Mayu while she sleeps, she got closer slowly sat on the edge of the bed "Can we stop fighting?" she wondered as she plays with Mayu's fingers helpless and remembering all the fights they had lately.

Mayu moved her hand away from whatever it was disturbing her fingers, Yuki looked down for a moment then got up and grabbed her other uniform and went to the bathroom to take a shower.

Yuki walks the empty hall "Is really early.." she murmured careless and keeps walking, once she arrived to her destiny she took off her clothes and got in one of the showers. She opened the faucet and relaxed with the water on her skin.

"Nothing better than this!" She thought relaxed.

[Noise of broken mirror]

Yuki opened her eyes then took her towel and got out from the shower, she walked slowly looking for the source of that noise till she step into something "Ouch!" she looked to her foot and she had a piece of glass inside, she removed it carefully as it bleeds then notice the mirrors were broken and there wasn't anyone around..

"DAMN IT!!" Yuki says mad.

After some minutes Yuki got back to her room jumping with one foot, Mayu was already up..

"What happened to you?" Mayu asked worried as she sees Yuki wearing just a towel and jumping in one feet.

Yuki sits on bed "Broken mirror!" she answered looking other way.

Mayu grabbed her first aid kid then kneels and takes Yuki's feet "Don't use alcohol!" the taller girl says.

"I won't!" Mayu says as she looking at her wound on her feet.

"OUCHHH TOLD YOU NO ALCOHOL!!!!!" Yuki shouted in pain.

Nezumi smirked then started putting bands.

"Cruel!" Yuki says before sighing in defeat.

"It's getting late, i should go get ready!" Mayu says before get up to grab her things.

"What? no! don't go to the bathroom!" Yuki says as she gets up and grabs Mayu by her arm.

"Why not?" Mayu asked coldly.

"It's dangerous!" Yuki says worried.

"I have to shower!" Mayu says with a bore face.

Yuki took a deep breath "i'll go with you!" she says resign and let go Mayu's arm

Mayu starts gathering her things..

~After 20 min~

The headmaster made everyone in the school gather in the auditorium..

Mayu and Yuki sat next to each other, Sae sat next to Jurina while Rena sat apart.

Yuki couldn't help to look at Rena many times, Mayu noticed that but still didn't want to make a scene now..

Sae was flirting with many girls and teaching Jurina while Rena steals glances at Yuki and Jurina once in a while, she doesn't really understand "Since whenJurina and Sae are friends they quite the opposite of each other?"

The headmaster was really mad " In 30 years of teaching I've never seen anything like this! really i'm going to get to last instance in this situation because I will not let this act of vandalism happen at this school! she says firmly.

Yuki also started looking at everyone's reactions but everyone was acting pretty normal.

"Poor woman she doesn't know anything that happens in her school!" Nezumi murmured.

Yuki looked at Mayu for a second "Is this my Mayuyu?" she thought.

The reunion ended and everyone got to their classrooms, the day passed fast and Yuki was impatient "I need to talk to Rena!" is the only things repeating on her brain again and again.

The bell rang..

"Rena chan we need to talk!" Yuki fast said as she gets up.

Sae looked at Yuki then moved her head side to side while Mayu ignored it and left the classroom.

Everyone were also waiting for Rena's reply..

Rena looked at Mayu leaving "o..okay" she replied shocked.

Yuki got closer then grabbed her hand and dragged her to her dorm.

~Meanwhile~

Mayu in the hall bumped Jurina.

"Ouch!" Jurina complained while Mayu ignored her.

Jurina grabbed Mayu by her arm which cause Mayu to turn and look at her "Jurina chan!" she says.

"You bumped me hard, what's going on? trouble in heaven?" Jurina asked

Mayu looked down.

"C'mon let's have fun a little!" Jurina says with a smile

Mayu smiles, she remembered what it's like to be Jurina's romie [Playing games,reading manga or watch a movie]

Both walked to Jurina's room..

~In Yuki's room~

Yuki pulls out a box and shows it to Rena "I know i shouldn't ask about this but.. they might try to hurt us and i need to know who they are! she says serious

Rena takes the box and sits on the edge of the bed, she takes a deep breath before start talking..

"Where you get this stuff?" Rena asked serious.

Yuki scratched the back of her head "It was on my door one morning! except this which was in a box that looked like a book in the library!" she replies pulling out the letter and the key  and showing it to Rena.

Rena read the letter and soon her tears started to gather on the corner of her eyes.

"Rena chan are you okay?" Yuki asked as she sits next to her.

Rena's tears were already rolling her cheeks "I know who this person is!" she replies.

Yuki only looked at her shocked.

"Yagami Kumi!" Rena replies as more tears rolls her cheeks.

"What that means?" Yuki asked more interested.

~ 2 Years ago During the 2 months Yuki left~

"Hello everyone I'm Kizaki Yuria, i'm 15 and hope we can be friends!" An excited girl says happy.

Rena wasn't paying attention she was looking through the window hopeless "Why you left me?" she wondered

"Matsui san you're not listening, you will tutor Kizaki san so treat her well our school is honored to have a girl with that IQ!" The teacher says in front of Rena waking her up from her thoughts

Rena just nodded.

The bell rang and Rena was gathering her things.

"Matsui san can you show me the school please?" Yuria asked with a smile.

Rena was about to reject her but then remembered how feels to be the new one so she agreed.

Both walked around the campus...

"Wow this school is really for reach people, i never thought i could get in that scholarship program is amazing!" Yuria says happy as she watches girls playing on the court.

"Scholarship program? you shouldn't say that loud.." Rena says looking down

"why not?" Yuria asked.

"Just don't do it okay?" Rena says walking away.

"Hey wait up!" Yuria says running behind her.

During the first 3 weeks everything was fine Yuria and Rena became really close friends till one day..

"Look what you did you idiot!" Tomochin says mad looking at the ice cream on her blazer.

"I'm sorry, i didn't mean to!" Yuria says trying to clean it.

"Don't touch me you insect!" Tomochin says mad.

"I'm already saying sorry, you don't have to be rude!" Yuria says before turning around.

"Don't give your back on me!" Tomochin says mad and grabbed Yuria by her arm both started fighting and rolling on the floor..

Soon two teachers separate the girls and took them to the headmaster office which was totally on Yuria's side.

"Are you insane?" Tomochin asked kicking the desk.

"Kizaki san is a really important student she could had chose another school but she chose us so please behave!" The headmaster says serious

"This scholarship is the best thing could ever happen to me so please don't kick me out!" Kizaki says looking down.

Tomochin smirked "I'm sorry Yuria.." she says still with a smirk then got up and left the office

The headmaster and Yuria were shocked but the problem solved..

After that Yuria started having troubles somebody threw all her books from the classroom window, somebody cut all her uniforms, somebody wrote in the bathroom mirror "GO BACK HOME"

Rena felt really bad about it, she didn't know how to help Yuria mostly because she knew that they would kidnap her on friday and maybe hurt her hard if she doesn't agree to leave the school.

~Wednesday~ at the bleachers in the afternoon

Rena was sad looking at the sunset alone "I can't help her... if i do they might hurt <Jurina's face smiling> i can't let that happen!" She thinks having an inner fight and clenching her fist.

Soon her tears rolled "Damn it!! i'm not strong...i'm alone" she murmured looking how her tears wet her thighs.

"There you are!" Jurina says with a smile

Rena fast wiped her tears as Jurina gets next to her "Are you avoiding me?" she asked

"Uh no.." Rena replied confused

Jurina pulled out handkerchief and started drying Rena's face..

"Is fine if you cry alone but.. remember you're not alone!" Jurina says with a smile

Rena was blushing and for a second forgot all her dilemmas "Jurina has that effect on me.." she thought with a little smile but then it fade away

Jurina looked at Rena.

"Jurina chan would you please always stay by my side?" Rena asked as she leans her head on Jurina's left shoulder.

Jurina putted her right hand on Rena's hair "You don't need to ask that, i'll always be by your side.. Rena chan I love you!" Jurina says blushing

"Even if one day i take the wrong the choice?" Rena asked as more tears rolls her cheeks

"Always, you always be my kind Rena!!" Jurina replies firmly

After a moment Rena got up "We'll leave this school forever, so prepare your bag!" she says

Where are you going?" Jurina asked.

"To prepare mine!" Rena says as she walks away.

"I guess she's serious!" Jurina says with a smile.

Rena run to Yuria's room fast..

~Once there~

"What's going on? Why you knocked like that?" Yuria asked confus.

"You need to leave this school NOW!" Rena says as she looks for Yuria's suitcase.

"Rena chan.. Are you feeling okay?" Yuria asked stopping Rena and looking at her in the eyes

"They want to hurt you!" Rena says

"Who?" Yuria asked shaking

"The Black Queens!" Rena shouts.

Suddenly somebody knocked the door..

"Don't open it!" Rena says

"Easy, it will be alright!" Yuria says as she walks to the door and opens it  "no one!" she says and turns to look at Rena.

Rena was shocked she couldn't believe who was behind Yuria, she put handkerchief Yuri's noise.

"Hi Rena chan!" Kitahara Rie says with a smile as she makes Yuria sleep

Soon two other Black Queens entered with their school uniforms and grabbed Rena

"You have been reckless!" Haruka says with a smile

"Shibuya will get mad at you!" Oba Mina says then puts a handkerchief on Rena's nose too, to make her sleep

~ After many hours or the next day At Rena's room~  9:00 am

Jurina was staring a Rena sleeping "Maybe she's like this cause.." she thought looking other way sad.

After a few seconds Rena opens her eyes "Ehhh.. what?" she was shocked looking around

"You really don't wake up easily!" Jurina says with a smile.

"Yuria? Where's Yuria?" Rena asked then got up and walked out.

"Rena chan wait up!" Jurina goes after her

Rena run to her room, she sees many candles, flowers and a picture of her on the door..

"What's this?" Rena asked shaking not believing

"Last night she was bit by spider several times.. the spider poison wasn't that strong but she was allergic to spiders!" Jurina says looking down

Rena kneels, she feels how the world was on mute by itself and automatically her tears came out "i tried.." she says crying even more

Jurina looked at her older sister and she feels her own tears on the corner of her eyes [It makes her really sad l, seeing Rena like that]

Jurina grabbed Rena but this one pushed her away and run.away..

"Rena chan!" Jurina says sad

Rena went wash room, moved the dryer and waited there patiently for the others

After class as usual the same always 5 Black Queens would reunite there to hang out..

"Look is Rena chan she already woke up fro her sleep!" Haruka says smirking

"Did you heard already about that don't you?" Oba mina asked

"It was accident we didn't know she was allergic!" Rie said looking down.

"We played too hard" Sato says

"Why hurting other people?" Rena asked still sad

"It's fun!" Akicha says with a smile

Rena opened her eyes wide "Fun.." then got up and grabbed Akicha by her her neck

"Wow somebody thinks is strong?" Akicha says smiling while the others were ready to kick Rena.

"Fun!" Rena says with a smile

Akicha smiled also but she didn't expect Rena would punch her on her stomach hard..

The other four girls tried to punch Rena but she was faster, she dodge their punches and in a blink of an eye, she was the last one standing..

"Are you mad!" Rena asked

The others were on the floor "When you became strong?" Haruka asked

"That was fun... call me Gekikara!" Rena says kicking Haruka on her stomach and stepping on Akicha's leg before leaving

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

"After a year appeared a girl called Yagami Kumi she wanted revenge but once she told me why she came for... i just had to send her away from all this!" Rena says sad looking down

Yuki hugged Rena "I'm sorry.. " she whispers

Rena blushes and hugs Yuki also.

 "This time i'm here!"  Yuki says still hugging Rena.

"I missed you!" Rena whispered inhaling Yuki's scent.

The two girls connected their foreheads and somehow Rena got closer  so their lips touched

Both blushed they didn't stopped looking into each other's eyes.

(To be continued..)

~Meanwhile~

Jurina was surfing on the ned while Mayu was changing channels "Somehow i feel there's a part that Rena can reach that i can't.." she says

"What?" Jurina asked and turned to look at the CG

"There's a part of Yuki that i can't reach and Rena can... i think i might end up losing!" Mayu says  a little sad

"Maybe those two had real love in the end.." Jurina says a little depressed

"Maybe.." Mayu murmured putting her hand on her chest

TO BE CONTUNUED!!! COMMENT!! :)
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.27 (6)
Post by: clubhappy on May 19, 2013, 01:44:56 PM
Hi there cmze-san, it's been a long time commenting in your fic  :P
I'm missing Mayuki lately (no Mayuki fics update, and the real Mayuki is also....), and Mayu and Yuki in this fic are having a fight  :(
Nah, just write what you want  :P I'm still reading it, but I hope to see Mayuki moments soon  :P
Thanks for the update  XD
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.27 (6)
Post by: Rena-chan Daisuki on May 19, 2013, 02:10:20 PM
yey an update!!!
all Rena's problem is starting to collect a lot more
and somehow this fic is becoming more of RenaYuki
but i love it
 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
i just hope the problem will be solve soon
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.27 (6)
Post by: Shinoki on May 19, 2013, 02:23:57 PM
...Black Queens are evil...
True, true, mayuyu, the headmaster doesn't know anything...
sad Yuria... Kuumin...
Rena...
Yuki...
Kiss??
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.27 (6)
Post by: mo-chan on May 19, 2013, 03:02:32 PM
Rena kissed Yuki and Yuki did not reject it O_O
Yuki-chan ikunai yo you still have a girlfriend (Mayu) so no cheating >_>
Yuki she wants to broke the cyborg system ehem! I mean give her a heartattack <_<
sounds like Mayu will give up on Yuki ;_;
updaaaaaate soooooon I can not wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.27 (6)
Post by: momondmozide on May 19, 2013, 03:18:37 PM
yeay yeaay an update  :D
btw, why im feeling likes deep down in yukixrena hearts they love each other... and no one can break it even mayuyu -___-
hmmmmm mayuki gettin distant more curious abot it :)
im glad ur update  :twothumbs
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.27 (6)
Post by: kurogumi on May 19, 2013, 03:29:46 PM
No! dont give up! mayuyu~ Jurina~ love will fine you LOL  :doh:

its complicated,yuki...uh is it just me or i think yuki is sooooo wishy washy....and weak, i mean not weak in physical manner,
but another weak...i dont know what to wrote is in english LOL  :cathappy:

renaaaaa your problem really complicated too...looks like she's needed clear all her problem...seeking  forgiveness...clean her sins
and i think yuki will help you~

man...but yuki also have problem too how could she help rena at the same time she needed help too LOL

jurina role still has not seen in this drama, i wonder what kind of role she is? especially in mayuki love story LOL is it possible if she being the third person in this drama? but rena also the third person too,

rena really look like she want yuki now,plus she didn't know about mayu illness so maybe she wont hesitated to snatch yuki from mayu...(maybe)

as for jurina hmmmm, she mayu's partner right? she willl do everything they scheming....that leading the story to the season 3 which we know about mayu hospitalized scene...



thank for the update cmze-san..... :deco:
cant wait the next update and another your great fic... :deco:


Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.27 (6)
Post by: cisda83 on May 19, 2013, 04:37:26 PM
Ah.. Yuki got cut from Mayu's incident with the mirror the night before...

Eh.. Sae is teaching Jurina how to flirt with girls...

Ah... Yuria died of spider allegic... Poor Yuria... she did not do anything...

And Kumi came to seek revenge and was sent away....

What's Kumi going to do now...?

Would Kumi seek revenge to Geki since she was the last leader?

Poor Rena... so that was how Rena became Geki...

Rena was worried that Jurina would leave her if ever she took the wrong turned...

And Jurina indeed left Rena behind...  or may be avoiding Rena more appropriate in this case
 
Eh... Rena and Yuki kissing each other.... What happened there?

Ah... Poor Mayu and Jurina... They are worried that both Yuki and Rena would eventually leave Mayu and Jurina respectively.

What's going to happen next to Mayuki and WMatsui

Can't wait to see more
 
Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.27 (6)
Post by: Haruto Lee on May 19, 2013, 04:44:30 PM
I really like the story but isn't the story getting complicated than before?
Is Rena going to get Yuki back from Mayu?  :?
Anyway pls updated soon
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.27 (6)
Post by: rochilu on May 19, 2013, 07:48:56 PM
niooooo  :panic: omg Mayuyu don't give up please TnT
and Yuki what the h... are you doing!? D: why you didn't reject Rena? and then you don't want to fight with Mayu u.u
the black quees are back? maybe they want revenge?  :? i hope the girls kicks their ass xD
great chapter like always cmze-san  :D
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.27 (6)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on May 19, 2013, 10:44:25 PM
nawww yuria so cute :cathappy:
poor rena and yuria,  :cry: the black queens are so mean  :thumbdown: grrrr shibuya :angry:
no! no! rena and yuki kissed :angry: :banghead: poor mayuyu, poor jurina :cry: :cry:
yuki baka!! you promised to stay with mayuyu and by her side, your breaking your promise :angry: :panic:
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.27 (6)
Post by: Chanaline on May 19, 2013, 11:14:04 PM
YAAAAAADAAAAAAAA :angry:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.27 (6) EXTRA!!!
Post by: cmze on May 19, 2013, 11:56:09 PM
 My battery dropped...so this this a part i missed.

                                                              Extra

3 Girls around the world...

The first was listening music while dances in her room...

*Black Phone rings*

She doesn't noticed cause she was dancing like crazy, soon the light got her attention, she removed her headphones and grabbed the phone.

"So she's the stone in our shoe!" The girl whispered as she watches the picture of Yuki in a towel.

"I guess i can have fun with you!" The girl says with a smile.

2 pictures more were send [Yuki and Rena sleeping together] [One picture of Mayu]

"Gekikara... sleeping with the enemy!" The girl says smiling then saw the other picture.

"Mayu..What the.." The girl was shocked.

The second girl was driving her luxurious car in EEUU. She arrived to the place she wanted to get, she got out of the car and security man from the club let her in without asking not even her name.

The entered to the club people were dancing around her but she ignore them all and went straight to the person she wanted to see..

That seemed to be drinking alone in the bar "Relaxing after a good day of working!" she says and drinks more.

"Oshima san!" The good looking girl says over excited.

"You again!" Oshima says not so happy and pouting.

The girl only smiled

"I'm not special go away!" Oshima says waving.

"I'm never going to leave you, i'm in love with you!" The girl says till her phone rang and notice the pictures.

"That is... phone" Yuko says impressed

The third girl was eating in a restaurant with her parents "Rena chan!" she says and gets up.

Her parents looked at her .

"sorry!" She said and sat back.

She squeezed the phone "I should have never left!" She murmured mad still squeezing it.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

~ At the newspaper room~ two girls alone

"You shouldn't sent that i can take care of Gekikara myself!" Shibuya says fixing her nails

"She wanted me to tell everyone!" Rie says as reading her computer screen

"I have everything under control!" Shibuya says mad and leaves the room.

"I guess is time for them to get back!" Rie says with a smile

TO BE CONTINUED!!!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.27 (6) EXTRA!!!
Post by: mo-chan on May 20, 2013, 12:16:50 AM
the girl who is dancing
it is kumi right?
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.27 (6) EXTRA!!!
Post by: kurogumi on May 20, 2013, 02:01:37 AM
One of them know mayu's...dont tell me mayu is part of them! LOL

I notice that i still dont know about mayuyu past,except for her background family and she just a girl with heart disease

Looks like a big war gonna happen soon~

Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.27 (6) EXTRA!!!
Post by: cisda83 on May 20, 2013, 11:25:34 AM
Interesting bonus chapter there....

Can't wait to see how Rena going to deal with all of this...

Thank you for the extra

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.27 (6) EXTRA!!!
Post by: Haruto Lee on May 21, 2013, 11:41:35 AM
It is interesting XD
I am a bit curious that why Yuko know about Mayu? :huhuh
Is Yuko going to protect or harm Mayu?
The curiousity is killing me!!!!!
Hope u will updated soon!!!!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.27 (6) EXTRA!!!
Post by: tfme3638 on May 25, 2013, 02:49:33 AM
I have to say, even though I don't normally like reading sad stories... Your story plot is too great to give up on...  :banghead:
I was hooked from the first chapter even though u placed a warning the!!!  :lol:
Can't wait for more :panic:
Great job with all the twists and turns  :thumbup :thumbsup
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.27 (6) EXTRA!!!
Post by: mo-chan on May 26, 2013, 06:50:12 PM
cmze I know it is rude
but 
please update I wanna read the next XD
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 28 (7)
Post by: cmze on May 28, 2013, 05:12:57 AM
                                             ~Time is good as gold~
                                                        CH.28 (7)

Yuki all red saw Rena coming closer to her face slowly, she gulped but an image of Mayu appeared in her head so she got up fast and avoided the kiss.

"Rena chan!" Yuki says after gulping.

Rena looked other way "I'm sorry" she says sad before get ready to leave "What i was thinking.." she whispered sad then walks to the door while Yuki was standing there not knowing what to do and looking other way embarrassed.

When Rena opened the door, it close instantly. Rena was shocked but stood there not saying anything because she can feel Yuki breathing behind her.

"Rena i love you!" Yuki whispers even redder looking down.

Rena's eyes opened wide and she blushed.

"But I also love Mayu and i have to be by her side, no matter what" Yuki says looking down sad

Rena got sad and also looked down.

"But please don't leave me, i need you!" Yuki says as she breaks in tears and hugs Rena from behind.

Rena smiled "Silly Yuki chan, i could never do that!" she says still with the same smile and put her arms on Yuki's that were on her stomach.

The stood like that for a few minutes.

~Meanwhile~ At Jurina's room~

Mayu looked at ceiling still couldn't think of anything else "Just Rena and Yuki"

Jurina threw a book next to Mayu which woke her up from her thoughts "Let's have a walk!" she says with a smile.

"If only Yuki knew what she means to me!" Mayu thought sad as she gets up from bed.

Both friends walked around the campus for a few minutes till decided to sit on the bleachers..

"Are you okay Mayu chan?" Jurina asked worried

[Mayu was sweat and she was catching her breath like if she run a marathon]

Mayu smiled "Yes, don't worry i'm okay!" she says catching her breath still.

"Have you been taking your vitamins?" Jurina asked asked while Mayu just looked at her and blinked a few times.

"You notice!" Mayu says with a whisper then smiled.

Suddenly someone appeared "Hello girls!" she says with a smile and sit next to the two girls. [Mayu,Jurina,Sae <- this order]

"Sae chan!" Mayu says impressed while Jurina pouted "You again!" she says not so happy.

"Don't tell me i'm the third wheel again!" Sae says with a smirk.

"What? No! *Mayu looked at Jurina and Jurina looked at her at the same time* i don't think i can see you more than a friend!" Both says at the same time.

Sae smiles "Good" she says and pulls out three juices from her bag "For you guys!" she says offering to Mayu and Jurina.

[Jurina and Sae started fighting cause Jurina wanted apple Juice and Sae also wanted it]

"You mean the third cause Yuki and Rena right?" Mayu asked serious.

Both girls stopped fighting and looked at Mayu.

"No, She didn't mean it that way!" Jurina says smiling nervously and covering Sae's mouth.

Mayu sighed then just got up and walked away.

"Mayu chan!" Jurina whispered as she walks away.

"Now that Mayu is gone why we don't we go to find two friends? i heard you're really popular with older girls!" Sae says smirking dragging Jurina with her.

"STOP TALKING TO ME LIKE IF WE ARE FRIENDS!!" Jurina shouts as she's being dragged by Sae against her will.

Mayu walked to her room, she opened the door and saw Rena walking around the room looking at key that was on her hand while Yuki was sitting on bed looking some papers that were spread on her bed.

"Mayu chan!" Yuki says with a smile while Rena stopped walking in circles and said "Hi" with a smile also.

Mayu said "Hi" in a cold way then sat next to Yuki and looked at the papers.

"What's this!?" She asked.

Yuki took a deep breath "I think they're back!" she says looking at Mayu.

"Why would they? you destroyed them you are their leader!" Mayu says kinda mad looking at Yuki then looked at Rena.

"I was leader of 5 not 10!" Rena says looking down.

"But you know who are the others?" Mayu asked coldly.

"I know the name of 6 but don't know the other 3!" Rena says with her fist oj her chin.

Yuki got up "I don't really know how to solve this!" she says with her arms crossed.

"Why you don't know them?" Mayu asked curious.

"I don't know.. they never reunite with us and also the other girls told me that, i can be leader but i have to respect their decisions!" Rena says confused.

"What there's point?" Mayu asked and Yuki looked at her.

"Well.. Fun!" Rena answered serious.

"Is it fun disturbing someone else?" Mayu asked kinda mad.

"Talking about those things won't help anything, Thanks for your help Rena chan we'll talk later" Yuki says nervous and pushed Rena to the door lightly

Once Yuki closed the door, she sighed in relief.

"Why made her go?" Mayu asked coldly while Yuki run to the bed and jumped on it.

"What the hell?" Mayu asked while Yuki was crawling to get closer to her face.

"I missed you.." Yuki says and kissed her cheek.

Mayu blushed while Yuki slowly kisses her all over her face "Didn't you miss me?" she asked pouting cutely.

Mayu blushed even more but then smiled and put her arms around Yuki's neck to pull her for a kiss.

The kissed, hugged and played around for an hour..

"It's so good just you and i!" Yuki says smiling hugging Mayu with her arms and legs.

Mayu smiled also "I missed this moments!" she says and gets on top of Yuki.

(Suddenly someone knocked their door)

Yuki covered Mayu's mouth and the person in the other side of the door kept knocking.

Mayu and Yuki smirked while wait for that person to get tired of knocking, eventually she stopped knocking.

"Finally!" Yuki says with a smile and stretching her arms.

Mayu was still sitting on Yuki's stomach but then yawned so she laid her head on Yuki's chest.

"It's so comfy here!" Mayu says rubbing her cheek on it while Yuki was all rer and her heart was beating fast.

"Yuki chan are you nervous?!" Mayu asks smirking

Yuki gulped and she was still red "What do you have with my chest?" she asked nervous.

"It's so soft ..." Mayu whispered before closing her eyes.

Yuki sighed "I guess it's okay if you wanna be there every day!" she said with smile.

*Mayu was already sleeping*

"You don't know how much i love you Mayuyu!" Yuki says with a smirk and hugged the CG and eventually fell sleep.

~ The next morning ~

Walked to the bathroom early in the morning but she couldn't help to see Sae going out of a room..

"Sae chan is never going to change!" Rena thinks with a smile but her smile faded when she saw Jurina also coming out of there.

Sae saw Rena and waved at her "Good Morning Rena chan!" she says getting closer while Jurina was shocked but then just walked away.

"Why Jurina was with you?" Rena asked mad.

"What? easy tiger, Jurina needs to live!" Sae says with a smile.

"No, The way you do!" Rena says mad then walks away still furious.

Sae pouted "Rena chan, don't be mad!" she whispers sad.

Rena was so mad that she bumped with another girl and made all her book fall.

"I'm sorry!" Rena says and helps the girl to pick up her books.

"It's okay Rena chan!" The girl says with a smile while pick up the books also.

"Airin you took more days for holidays!" Rena says  with a warm smile.

"You noticed my absence!" Airin says shocked.

"Why wouldn't i, we're in the same class..i have to go see you in class!" Rena says with a smile and walks away

Airin smiled..

~After a few minutes~ Already in the classroom~

Yuki was playing with Mayu's hair while Mayu does her homework because she forgot yesterday.

"Why you didn't tell me?" Mayu says complaining as she writes fast.

Yuki smiles nervously "You're the smart one, not me!" she replies while Mayu pouts and keeps writing.

Soon the teacher enters and Mayu stopped writing.

"I have a pleasure to tell you that your partner Shimazaki Haruka came back, come in!" She says happy.

Tomochin smiles "Unbelievable..finally some brains, i was tired of.. *looks at Mayu*" 

Yuki pouts at Tomochin.

"Why did you come back? you were doing well as an exchange student in Germany according to your teachers!" The teacher asks.

"I wanna graduate with my friends!" Haruka says looking at Mayu.

"She looks familiar!" Mayu thought looking at her..

Rena looks at the situation "I have a bad feeling!" she thought looking at Tomochin.

TO BE CONTINUED!!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 28 (7)
Post by: kurogumi on May 28, 2013, 05:47:02 AM
kyaaaaaaaaaa airiiiin~  :heart: :heart:

dont tell me!! cmze-san! d-dont tell me jurina has a new rival! and its airin!!! im already sense it in chapter 4 LOL well about airin feeling toward rena LOL

but no! beside im mayuki fans im also wmatsui fans...but ok fine...i will patiently looking this drama progress....

                                             
"I wanna graduate with my friends!" Haruka says looking at Mayu.

"She looks familiar!" Mayu thought looking at her..



etooo~ paruru...is she mayuyu friend or what?? :cathappy:

its really interesting cmze-san... :cathappy:
you make this story progress really interesting... :cathappy:

thank for the update cmze-san......LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!! :jphip: :jphip: :deco:


ALL HAIL CMZE-SAMA~  :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 28 (7)
Post by: mo-chan on May 28, 2013, 06:29:32 AM
so it was paruru -__-
I did not think about her at all 0.0
I'm.worried :(
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 28 (7)
Post by: chiqinna on May 28, 2013, 06:32:15 AM
this is getting mooooore interesting!!   :twothumbs
3 girls...one of them is Shimazaki Haruka I guess...the one that dancing..  :dunno:
and Tomochin...Shibuya?  :?
and....they know Mayu??!!  :OMG:
how did they know Mayu ehhh...  :mon dunno:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 28 (7)
Post by: momondmozide on May 28, 2013, 09:28:44 AM
wohooow an update \m/
I thought kumin was the one who dancing... but its paruru right??
im glad ur update.. more complicated and more more curious about next  :w00t:


take ur time and update soon  :twothumbs
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 28 (7)
Post by: gek geki on May 28, 2013, 09:36:20 AM
MANATSU NO SOUND GOOD!!!!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 28 (7)
Post by: cisda83 on May 28, 2013, 10:57:37 AM
Ah... Yuki still chose Mayu...

Poor Rena... but I think she knew Yuki would not want to be with Rena like that...

Just someone that knew each other very well... the best friends kind... well more intimate that that probably...

AH... More black queens are back....

Erm... Paruru and Tomochin... are they also the black queens...?

Can't wait to find out what's going to happen next

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 28 (7)
Post by: gek geki on May 28, 2013, 11:03:34 AM
COTTO!! MASAKA...MAYU AND PARURU IS RIVAL ON SMART GENIUS SOMETHING??? THEY DO SOME KIND OF SCIENCE COMPETITION MAYBE?
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 28 (7)
Post by: Elo on May 28, 2013, 12:01:33 PM
damn it yuki if you cant choose I will ********.......^^

just kidding anyway I have a bad feling because of mayu

what want tomochin and paruru from mayu

are they the black queens ???


I want more ^^
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 28 (7)
Post by: POPCAT on May 28, 2013, 03:49:37 PM
Yuki just choose someone now, you bieng a two timer gurl.

Mayu stay strong and eat you vitamins :P But don't over douse :hand:

Thanks for the update :D
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 28 (7)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on May 28, 2013, 08:04:57 PM
mou yuki make up your mind who you want to be with  :grr:, otherwise your going to regret it later :on thumbb:
mayuyu loves yuki a lot and its the same with yuki loving mayu but if yuki loves rena still then... uwaahhhh! :tantrum: yuki you better not staying by mayu's side if you feel sorry for her :shifty: :scolding:
3 more black queens and rena don't know who they are?! :shock:
jurina so observant luckily :on GJ:, mayu take your pills :pleeease:
feel sorry for sae :nervous
paruru is back but rena has a bad feeling, oh no not good :(, what are you planning tomochin? :?
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 28 (7)
Post by: BbSis on May 29, 2013, 04:04:10 PM
Finally I caught this fic up >< sorry about my delay ><

Lots of things happened while I was doing homework :O

We now have airin to add in the love polygon xD

I really hope that Paru came back for the sake of Mayu.....

And I think Rena is totally right. With her bad feeling...

Thank you for the updates o/
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 28 (7)
Post by: kenjoy12 on May 29, 2013, 06:11:32 PM
 :shocked So Paruru was the one who was dancing before.. Correct me if i'm wrong.. :) How does Paruru knew Mayu? I didn't see that one coming.. Where are the other two? Can't wait to find out.. >_<

This is so going to be interesting..  :twothumbs

Thank you for the update.. :bow:

 :fap Yosh! I'll be waiting for your next update :bow:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 28 (7)
Post by: gek geki on May 31, 2013, 03:52:16 AM
PARURU,YUKO AND MAYBE AIRI?OR YUI?
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 29 (8)
Post by: cmze on June 06, 2013, 10:47:55 AM
                                            ~Time is good as gold~
                                                        CH.29 (08)

~The same day~ Lunch time~
(In the recreation area)

Two girls were eating "So you're saying she's your room partner.." Mayu says as she eats her salad.

"Honestly I didn't thought she would get back!" Yuki says with a sigh.

"I guess I have to move with Jurina again.." Mayu says a little sad.

Yuki smiled "Maybe you could ask Jurina to move with her!" She says having hope.

"I doubt that!" Mayu says looking at her girlfriend.

Suddenly her phone rang, indicating it was time for her pills, Mayu got a little sadder but still pulled out her pills and swallowed them.

Yuki looked at her not knowing what to do or say so she looked other way.

[During the day Mayu moved back with Jurina]

~At Yuki's room and Paruru' s~

"I'm going to swim!" Paruru says with a smile and leaves the room while Yuki does her homework and chat with Mayu.

Yuki sighed "I feel so weird in my own room.." she says and looks around her room "I miss Mayuyu!" She says looking at the ceiling suddenly someone entered to the room.

"Hi Rena chan!" Yuki says with a smile while Rena was serious looking at her.

"What's wrong with the face?" Yuki asks.

Rena leans against the wall "I can't believe you haven't notice.." she says coldly.

"What?" Yuki asked serious.

"According to Kumi, the Black Queens are the smartest girls In the school!" Rena says.

"So?" Yuki says still confused.

Rena sighs "But It wasn't that way it was in different way Now that think about it..Kitahare Rie president of the school paper, Sato Amina captain of the cheerleader squad, Tomomi Itano music club leader, Oba Mina leader of the drama club, Takajo Aki headmaster's grand daughter, Katayama Haruka captain of the Karate club!" She says convinced looking to the floor with her arms crossed.

Yuki opened her eyes wide "All of them...are respectful students!" She says shocked.

"Yeah but the most respected one.. the one who made it to Germany SHIMAZAKI HARUKA!" Rena says shocked also.

"And you the smartest girl in our classroom.. so that means we're missing 2 since there are 10 Black Queens!" Yuki says as she gets up from bed and tries to think.

"That leave us with the tennis club leader Kuramocchi Asuka and the swim team leader Kojima Haruna!" Rena says serious.

"Let's end this once and for all!" Yuki says as she walks to the door.

"What are you doing?" Rena asked as she walks behind Yuki.

"I'm going to see Paruru!" Yuki says serious as she walks the hall to the pool.

"That's stupid!" Rena says but Yuki didn't lists "I guess I have to support you!" She thought and keeps following Yuki.

After some minutes of walking they got to the pool where they saw Mayu and Jurina sitting on the edge.

"Mayu!" Yuki says shocked.

Rena only looked at Jurina who looked other way.

"15 seconds!" Mayu says with a smile then looked at Yuki "I thought you were busy studying!" She says as Paruru comes out from the water and Jurina gives her a towel.

"You two seem kinda shocked!" Paruru says with a smile as she dries herself.

"You guys are friends?" Yuki asked pointing at Mayu and Paruru.

"Yeah kinda we competed in contests for schools before!" Paruru replies with a smile while Mayu nods

Rena and Yuki looked at each other.

"Of course Paruru would win in many contests.." Mayu says with a smile "second place is not that bad!" She says still with a smile.

Paruru passed between Rena and Yuki "It's nice getting back and see old rivals!" She says as she walks away.

"This is weird!" Rena thought.

~At night~ In the bleachers~

"I guess we got back to our old routine, meeting in the middle of the night in the bleachers!" Mayu says as she rubs her eyes then sat next to Yuki.

Yuki was worried but tried to not be in front of Mayu so she smiled "Well we haven't seen the stars in a while.." she says then hugs Mayu.

"We haven't kiss in a while..." Mayu says pouting cutely.

Yuki smirked "You're totally right *Yuki watches her watch* it's been 10 hours since our last kiss!" She says pretending to be worried.

"What should we do?" Mayu asked acting worried also and looking at Yuki.

"Come here!" Yuki says as she puts her hands on Mayu's cheek and pulls her for a long passionate kiss.

Mayu breaks the kiss but keep her forehead connected with Yuki's "I love you" she whispers.

Yuki smiles "I love you too, don't forget that!" She says still with a smile then gives a peck on Mayu's nose.

Mayu blushed then smirked.

Yuki got up "C'mon Mayuyu!" She says going down then helped Mayu and the two walked to the pool area.

"What are we doing here?" Mayu asked as she watches Yuki entering.

"Just come!" Yuki says.

Soon both were in front of the pool and Yuki started taking off her clothes.

"What are you doing?" Mayu asked red covering her eyes.

"Mayu chan you're a pervert why are you covering your eyes?" Yuki asked with a smirk.

"We're at school!" Mayu replied not so happy.

"C'mon let's live a little!" Yuki says jumping in the pool. [In the less deep area]

Mayu heard the water and opened her eyes, Yuki was inside smiling with only her underwear.

"C'mon it's warm!" Yuki says still with a smile plastered on her face "take it off! Take it off! Take it off!" She says splashing water at Mayu.

Mayu pouted "why I always do what you tell me?" She thought as she take off her clothes then got inside the water slowly.

Once Mayu was totally in, Yuki got closer "you see it's not that bad!" She says trapping Mayu between her arms.

Mayu was looking down embarrassed while Yuki smiled and kissed her forehead sweetly.

Mayu smiled then Yuki was a about to kiss Mayu on her lips but at the last minute retreat herself.

"HA got fooled!" Yuki says with a smile while Mayu got a little mad and splashed water at her.

 It became a war, the two were splashing everywhere they were playing and fooling around in the water.

Soon the two got tired and floated on the water face up.

"This is fun!" Mayu says looking at the ceiling while Yuki also was looking at the ceiling

"I wish we could spend more time like this.." Mayu says with a little smile.

"We can't... You can catch a cold!" Yuki says as she stops floating then gets out of the water.

Mayu also stopped and got out of the water.

The two went to get clothes to their rooms and met again in the bathroom [Which was already fixed]

Yuki and Mayu entered to different cubicles but then Yuki got out of hers and entered to Mayu's.

Mayu was shocked first but she didn't say a word and just opened the faucet.

[The two girls showered together]

Once the two girls end showering together they went to Mayu's room, Yuki was about to go but Mayu grabbed her arm.

"Sleep with me.." she says pulling her slip in a cute way.

Yuki smiled and soon the two girls were sleeping pleasantly on Mayu's bed.

~After a few hours~

Mayu felt a pain on her chest she even fell of bed she started screaming in pain, Yuki woke immediately and saw the younger girl struggling with the pain on the floor.

Yuki was shocked and hear tears were already on the corner of her eyes "Mayu!" She says

Jurina also woke up then got off the and called an ambulance While Yuki was trying to help Mayu by holding her hand.

TO BE CONTINUED!!! Stupid sad song! :'(
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 29 (8)
Post by: cisda83 on June 06, 2013, 10:56:23 AM
Ah... so they knew the identities of the Black Queens...

All the Queens were all the respectable people... who were rich, royal and leader...

How are they going to comfort the Queens...?

How are they going to put an end to the Queens reined?

Mayu and Yuki were so cute together

Ah... what's happening to Mayu?

Would Mayu be okay....?

Was her heart condition getting worse?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 29 (8)
Post by: itamana on June 06, 2013, 12:21:30 PM
 :cry: :cry: :cry: Mayu..... :cry: :cry: :cry:
please be fine....  :panic:
thank you for the update...
 :kneelbow:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 29 (8)
Post by: Haruto Lee on June 06, 2013, 12:29:32 PM
Mayu heart condition is getting worse..... :banghead:

Are u going to end this season because Mayu is going to the hospital? :?

Are the black queens continuing their attack even Mayu is in a bad situation?

Can't wait for the next updated

And thanks for the new updated
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 29 (8)
Post by: cmze on June 06, 2013, 12:46:32 PM
Mmm not, she will be back at school eventually the end of the season is at graduation! :)
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 29 (8)
Post by: BbSis on June 06, 2013, 01:44:45 PM
Cmze you are soooo mean!
First you confuse us, second you give us a sweet moment and to finish you give us sadness and worry ><

Thank you for the update o/
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 29 (8)
Post by: kurogumi on June 06, 2013, 02:14:22 PM
Yes finally mayuyu first collapsed,im waiting this moment! LOL

now everyone will know mayu's ill,maybe with this the black queen at leats make easy for mayu.

Maybe mayu collapsed because she got tired from playing water with yuki before

Yeah mayu's heart became weak and weak,she cant do a lot activity

Yuki will be more and more worried,its like the time is comes,time to face the reality that mayuyu life already on the edge


Thank for the update cmze-san,ah its raining in my place...
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 29 (8)
Post by: rochilu on June 06, 2013, 03:57:17 PM
noooooooo!! Mayuyuuuu hurry Jurina, call the ambulance! :mon whine:
agg, the things are gettin hard, huh? Paruru came and maybe she is one of the queens? :o and now this.
I waiting for  your next update! nice chapter  :mon fyeah:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 29 (8)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on June 06, 2013, 04:29:53 PM
paruru seems suspicious :sweatdrop:
aww yuki so sweet, "haven't seen the stars in a while"  :deco: mayu is cheeky, "haven't kissed in a while" :lol:
mayuki together in the shower :drool:
MAYUYU!! PLEASE GET BETTER!  :cry: :cry:
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 29 (8)
Post by: Elo on June 06, 2013, 04:51:42 PM
shit what is happening

mayuuu noooooo dont you dare to kill mayu  :angry: :angry: ^^

I want more ^^
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 29 (8)
Post by: POPCAT on June 07, 2013, 12:18:50 AM
oh no mayu !!!! buddha please save Mayuyu.

Rena and Jurina have to settle thing please.
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 29 (8)
Post by: gek geki on June 07, 2013, 07:04:27 AM
THIS FIC REALLY SOMETHING EH
IT PLAYING WITH MY EMOTION
FIRST IM SMILED HAPPY WITH MAYUKI LOVEY DOVEY AND ENDED WITH SAD,OH GOD! MAYU!
PARURU LOOKS LIKE AN ANGEL FOR ME HEHE
WHAT HAPPEN WITH MAYU?ITS THE FIRST ATTACK,IF THE AMBULANCE COME IN TIME SHE WILL BE SAFE.
YUKI ON DILEMMA HERE,BLACK QUEEN PROBLEM AND HER LOVE LIFE PROBLEM
YUKI COULD LIFE HAPPY IF SHE CHOSE RENA OF COURSE,BUT NO,SHE PREFER MAYU OVER RENA.
WITH THIS,MAYU WOULD THINK ABOUT YUKI HAPPYNESS,SHE WOULD THINK WHAT HAPPEN IF SHE DIED?AND HOW YUKI LIFE AFTER HER DIED.
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 30 (9)/31 (10)
Post by: cmze on June 10, 2013, 08:47:04 AM
                                           ~Time is good as gold~
                            CH.30 (09) Yuki's feelings and old friends?

~Another day~

Yuki woke up and looked at ceiling "This is pointless.." she thought then got up and grabbed her things "Paruru already left.." she thought.

Suddenly someone entered to the room "Yukirin.." a voice says.

Yuki looked at the person with eyes wide open "Mayuyu.." she says open mouth as she gets closer to the shorter girl.

Mayu hugged Yuki "I missed you.." she says sad while Yuki also hugged her "I missed you more" she says hugging her tighter.

"Don't you ever leave me again!" Yuki says as tears rolls her cheeks and connects her forehead with Mayu.

Mayu kissed to the crying Yuki on her lips, the two girls shared a sweet kiss but as the Times passers it becomes bolder and bolder.

As they kiss Mayu slowly pushes Yuki to the bed where Yuki end up sitting while Mayu gets on her lap without breaking their kiss.

Mayu's hands get under Yuki's shirt touching her while Yuki kisses Mayu's neck.

Suddenly Yuki stops their kiss "Aren't we going too fast?" She says with a sad expression.

"Yukirin my life has a time limit.." Mayu says with a smile.

Yuki was shocked by those words and her tears showed again "You're not going to die.. YOU'RE NOT GOING TO DIE!!!" She shouted mad grabbing Mayu by her shoulders

(Mayu disappears)

"Mayu!!!" Yuki shouts then opens her eyes and realized it was a dream.

"Yuki chan!" Rena says kinda worried while Sae only looked at her.

Yuki sits on her bed "What are you doing here?" She asked sad [she remembered her nightmare]

"You missed two days of classes we were worried besides.." Sae says as she pulls out an invitation and gives it to Yuki.

"What's this?" Yuki says as she grabs it then reads it "A party at my house.." she says confused.

"You're parents are coming back..are you going to it?" Rena asked worried looking at Yuki.

"This.. *Yuki smiles* is exactly what I need!" She says smiling

"What?!" Rena asked confused.

"Okay let me get this straight.. You Kaswahiwagi Yuki don't like your parents but still wanna go to their welcoming party, Are you okay?" Sae asked confused.

Yuki gets up "You would never understand.. since I'm with Mayu I have changed, I'm not myself anymore. I need to go home to remember" she murmured sad.

Rena watched Yuki carefully as she grabs her things "What do you mean?" She thought.

"By the way what's wrong with Mayu? She is still in the hospital right? Is she that bad!" Sae asks.

Yuki looked other way "She is.. forget it!" She says and leaves the room.

"What did I say?" Sae asked looking at Rena.

"Since Mayu went to the hospital she's been acting like that.. What she's hiding?" Rena thought.

~Meanwhile~ in EEUU

"Why you keep stalking me? I'm not that special you know!" Yuko says as she walks.

The girl smiled "I just came to say goodbye.. I have to be back to Japan already!" She says still smiling then stops walking.

Yuko turned around "Hey before leaving tell me why you followed me all this time? And what's your name?" She asked shocked.

"Oshima san I will always follow you because I'm in love with you and my name is Kojima Haruna from the AKB Academy and I'm part of the Black Queens and I'm charge of keeping them together as the group you created." She says with a smile

"What?!" Yuko was there open mouth while the girl walks away.

~In the school~

A limo was waiting outside..

"Are you sure Yuki chan?" Rena asked still worried.

Yuki smiles "I'll comeback tomorrow and maybe this party won't be that bad!" She answers as she walks to the limo.

"Yuki can I crash at the party? Is Friday but I don't wanna go home!" Sae says with a smile.

"It wouldn't be a good party without you!" Yuki answers before closing the door.

The limo leaves.

"I guess I gotta invite someone, see you!" Sae says with a smile and goes away.

Rena was worried still so she planned to go at the party later just to check on her friend.

~After 45 min~ At the Kashiwagi Mansion~

Yuki entered and was welcomed by all the servants..

"My parents are home?" Yuki asked to the butler.

"No, they are preparing everything for the party!" He replies kinda sad.

"Kashiwagi san we made a cake for you!" One of the maid says and show it to Yuki.

"Thanks I wanted one of these!" Yuki says then grabs it and take it to her room.

Once in her room..

She put the cake on her desk then sits on her bed "This place looks the same.." she thought as she looks around.

"Maybe if I sleep here there won't be more nightmares about Mayu!" Yuki says as she lets her body lay on her bed.

As soon her head touched her pillow she fell sleep… [She was tires caused she haven't sleep in 2 days properly]

~Dream~ Inside a car~

"You came to pick me up!" Little Yuki says happy.

"I'm your brother why I wouldn't do that?" Yukito asked with a smile.

"If they find out You skipped classes for picking me up, they won't be happy!" Yuki says sad looking through the mirror.

"What? I can skip classes whenever I want!" Yukito says pouting.

"No, you can't you're really talented, you shouldn't waste your doing things like this!" Yuki replies still a little sad.

Yukito smiles "If I'm talented you're talented too since we share the same DNA!"He says then starts tickling Yuki with his hand.

Yuki laughs.

"See? That's my spot for ticking too!" He says still tickling Yuki.

Suddenly they heard a car horn, they looked at their side and car pushed them out of the way to certain river..

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Yuki started coughing hard and fell of bed then looked around and she was at her room, she catched her breath and calmed.

Suddenly someone entered to her room.

"Yuki.." her mother says with a smile.

Yuki got up fast and hugged her mom.. 

"What's wrong?" Yuki's mom asked then Yuki breaks the hug and looks at her.

"Oh darling you look like a mess, go get yourself dressed properly our guest are about to come but get extra pretty someone interesting is going to come" She says coldly then leaves the room

Yuki couldn't help to feel hopeless, she sat on her bed for a moment "You're everything I've got.." she murmured with her teary eyes then her nose became red.

~Ready for the party~

 When Yuki got downstairs she looked at everyone having a good time, her dad was talking to his friends while her mother was with her friends too.

"Yuki chan!" Sae says happy and grabs her by her arm.

"Hi.." Yuki says not so happy.

"I knew you would get depressive.. here!" Sae says and offers her a glass of whiskey

Yuki drinks at once.

"Wow you're mad!" Sae says as Yuki walks away.

Jurina gets closer "What's up with her?" She asked.

"Maybe cause Mayu is still in the hospital.. I still wonder what she got?" Sae asked to Jurina.

"Yeah I guess she's finally having what she deserves even thought it involves my friend Mayu!" Jurina says then goes to talk a girl who winked at her.

"Damn I made I monster!" Sae says with a smirk.

Someone grabbed Sae's arm and made her turn around "Rena chan you came!" She says with a smile.

"Have you seen Yuki?" Rena asked while Sae pouted

"She went that way!" Sae says pointing to the opposite direction where Yuki went.

"Thanks!" Rena says as walks away.

"Yuki! Yuki! Yuki!" Sae says a little irritated.

After a few minutes Yuki got back to the party..

"Yuki my beautiful daughter!" Her father says with a smile, Yuki got closer to him.

"This is my beautiful daughter!" He says introducing Yuki to his friends.

"Wow she's really a beauty.. I think Koji and Yuki will get along!" Another man says with a smile.

"Honey go look for our son!" The man says to his wife.

Yuki smiled awkwardly while his dad has her by her waist.

"You know if Kashiwagi Corp invest in our project I would be a great thing!" The same man says then drinks his whiskey.

"Here is my son!" The woman says with a smile.

"Yuki why you don't go and show him around!" Yuki's dad says pushing Yuki to him.

Yuki pouted then walked away and Koji followed her.

~Outside~

"This is around!" Yuki says looking at the bushes and the statues then turned and she was about to go in the mansion again but he grabbed her by her hand.

"You should treat me nice since I'm you're future husband!" Koji says pressing Yuki's hand.

"What?!" Yuki asked shocked.

"Well you're about to graduate so our wedding is around the corner, remember our parents planned that long ago" Koji says with a smirk

"You're so stupid.." Yuki says looking down.

"Why?" He asked.

Yuki kicked in him [ in you know where!]

He was on the floor complaining while Yuki just walked inside, she went upstairs to her room.

~Inside her room~

Yuki was sitting on her bed "What am I doing?" She asked with her hands on her head with her eyes closed.

"I can't take it anymore!" She says as her tears rolls her cheeks "No matter what I'll do..I'm just. Ahhh!" She gets up and throws aside everything that was on her desk.

"I can't breathe!" Yuki says as she starts destroying everything around, tv, computer, adornments everything on her way as she cries.

Rena entered to the room "Yuki.." she says shocked

Yuki punched the mirror which broke in many pieces with Yuki's blood, Yuki knelt, she was catching her breath as more tears show "I can't.. I just can't breathe!" She whispers hopeless

Rena eyes were watery, she got closer to Yuki and knelt to hug her "I'm here.."

Yuki cried even louder for all the time she didn't  cry [nobody could hear cause the music was loud!]

"I'm scared.. I'm scared..." Yuki says still crying like she has never done in her life before.

Rena could do nothing but hug Yuki.

"I don't wanna loose again.. " Yuki says hugging Rena tigher and crying at loud.

"What are you talking about? You won't lose anyone!" Rena says desperate to calm Yuki.

"This is killing me..." Yuki whispers as more tears comes out.

"Yuki chan I love you.." Rena whispered sad as she keeps hugging Yuki.

Yuki closed her eyes and stopped crying then took a deep breath "I'm sorry I didn't mean to make you worry!" She says then gets up.

Rena goes to the bathroom to get the first aid kit, she removed the piece of glass from her hand carefully then bandaged it

"Thanks Rena!" Yuki says still sad.

Rena makes Yuki sit on bed "You should sleep, you haven't sleep properly your eye bags say it all!" She says calm

~Outside~
[I mean outside the mansion in the garden]

Sae and Jurina were drinking..

"She's so lucky right? Two girls.." Sae says with a bittersweet smile then drinks

"Sometimes I feel that I'm as bad as her" Jurina says then drinks too.

"What?! Why?" Sae asked.

"Well I wished she pay everything she has done but she end up taking Rena away from me so I'm paying my wish!" Jurina says and drinks more

"Well you know what they say what goes around comes back around!" Sae says then drinks.

Jurina sighs.

"Oh c'mon Jurina you're not so bad so let's go inside and to find some hot girls to take this pain away!" Sae says with a smile as she gets up.

"I just need a minute!" Jurina says looking at the bushes.

"Okay see you inside!" Sae says with a smile and goes in.

~After some minutes~

A limo appeared, Jurina sighed and got up.

"Jurina.." Rena says looking at her younger sister's back.

Jurina turned her head then got back at her normal position and ignored Rena.

Rena walked to the limo with a sad Look as she passes next to Jurina she looked at her.

"Was it fun spending the whole time in Yuki's room while Mayu is in a hospital and can't take care of her girlfriend?" Jurina asked with a smile

Rena looked at her "what?" She asked.

"I didn't expect that from Rena but Gekikara.. *SLAP!!!* 

Rena slapped Jurina "You don't know anything!" She says between mad and sad.

Jurina grabbed Rena by her arm "You're the one who doesn't know anything.. stealing a sick girl's girlfriend that's totally inappropriate!" She says mad and pressing Rena's arm.

"Sick? What she.." Rena asks confused.

"Mayu is going to die eventually and your making things better trying to steal her girlfriend!" Jurina says then pushes Rena to the limo and walks away.

Rena was shocked "Die.. " she whispered then remembered Yuki's words and her pain and Yuki's obsession with protecting Mayu.

"Mayu is going to die.." Rena thought sad.

                                                 ~Time is good as gold~
                                         31(10) Yuki's feelings and Old friends?

~At the hospital~

"I'm so glad Mayu chan got better!" A teddy bear says being manipulated by a hand [you couldn't see the person cause the door wasn't wide open]

Mayu smiles "Yukirin come in already!" She says happy.

Yuki enters to the room with a smile "It's the only thing I could get at this hours!" She says still smiling.

"I don't care as you're here I don't mind!" Mayu replies as Yuki kisses her forehead sweetly.

"I missed you so much.." Yuki says with a sweet/sad look.

Mayu smiles "Me too!" She says then puts her hand on Yuki's cheek and bit her lips.

"What's wrong?" Yuki asked as Mayu retreat her hand.

"Nothing I missed touching you.." Mayu says looking other way.

Yuki smiles "I missed more than that!" She says and starts kissing Mayu all over her face non stopping.

"Yukirin stop!" Mayu says smiling but not doing anything to stop her .

"I wanna kiss kiss kiss!" Yuki says and climbs on bed and keeps attacking Mayu with her kisses. [Postion Yuki on top of Mayu but her weight was on her arms]

Mayu keeps laughing but then noticed that bandage on Yuki's hand and stopped laughing, Yuki looked at her in the eyes.

"What happened there?" Mayu asked serious while Yuki was still on top of her.

"Ahh it's a funny story actually.. I closed the door with my hand in the middle so I put a bandage because is still swollen"Yuki replied nervous and got off Mayu.

Mayu looks other way.

"Look I have to go already, if I miss another class I'll probably go the headmaster office and she's kinda mad lately since the bathroom incident!" Yuki says then kisses Mayu on her head.

"Yuki.." Mayu called.

Yuki nervous looked at Mayu.

"Why you didn't wear your school uniform, I like seeing you with your skirt!" Mayu says with a smile.

Yuki got red then stole a peck from Mayu and walked away.

~At school~

Once Yuki got there it was lunch time so she changed and went to eat at the recreation area.

In the recreation area Yuki was eating alone till someone appeared to disturb her.

"Hello Yuki chan!" Akicha says with a smile and clings on her arm.

Sae entered to the recreation area then noticed Yuki was there"Yuki chan, you shouldn't be so ambitious you have Mayu then Rena as a back up and now Akicha, I envy you!" She says with a smirk

Yuki got up fast "What's wrong with you? Back up! BACK UP, who do you think am I?" She asked mad.

"The same selfish person you have always been!" Sae replies carelessly.

Yuki opened her eyes wide then jumped on Sae and two started fighting in front of everyone.

"How dare you call Rena back up!" Yuki shouts on top of Sae.

"That's what she have always been to you!" Sae replies forcing with Yuki.

Soon Jurina entered and tried to separate the two.

"YOU KNOW HOW I FELT ANS STILL YOU GOT IN THE WAY!" Sae shouts mad  and don't let anyone separate her from Yuki.

The two rolled on the floor

"I didn't do anything.." Yuki replies grabbing Sae by her shirt.

"This is fun!" Akicha says smiling.

Yuki was ready to punch Sae but she couldn't "You're not worth it besides my hand already hurts!" She says then gets off and gets out of the recreation area.

Sae gets up and goes after her "Do you really think I would forget something like that?" She asked
 
Yuki stopped walking  then turned around to face Sae "Shut up already..  I SHOULD BE THE ONE HATING YOU!" She says mad

Sae pouted "Why?" She asked

"BECAUSE I WOULDN'T BE FEELING THIS PAIN, THIS ALL YOUR FAULT, I SHOULD HAVE BEEN HERE!" Yuki shouted mad

"What do you mean?" Sae asked

Yuki grabbed Sae by her shirt "Gekikara should have never existed, I shouldn't watch the person I love die!" She says in tears.

"I still don't understand.." Sae asked

"Don't you see if I didn't leave they wouldn't have gone after Rena and now I wouldn't  know Mayu.." Yuki says sad

"And you could be happy with Rena right?" Sae asked with a smirk.

Yuki let go Sae's shirt the just walked away with her bleeding hand.

~Meanwhile~ At the hospital~

"Ironic a few days ago I was thinking nobody is going to separate me from Yuki and now I'm just thinking that I should leave her!" Mayu says sad.

Rena stood there sitting quiet.

"I told myself if I get out of this one alive I would leave her because I don't wanna give her the pain of seeing me dying!" Mayu says with a bittersweet smile.

"And what I have to do with that?" Rena asked.

"I will break up with her and then you'll be by her side not caring about me at all the fastest she stops loving me is better!" Mayu says

Rena gets up "I love her but I won't, she'll come to me when she has to and if she doesn't is fine anyway" she says coldly

"I need her to do it before I die so I can be die peacefully" Mayu says with a smile as she looks at her beeper.

Rena sighs and walks away.

On her to the school she couldn't help to think about Mayu's words and how Yuki been acting since Mayu is in the hospital.

"She couldn't deal with that again and I don't want her to love with doubts, I want it to be real" Rena whispers sad.

~Meanwhile at school~

Yuki walked the hall to her room and somehow someone pulled her inside of a room and made her fall on the floor.

"Hello Yuki chan!" Tomochin says with a smile.

"What the hell?" Yuki says mad as she was about to get up Tomochin kicked her on her stomach causing Yuki to stay there.

"This was nothing to do with you but you had to get into!" Tomochin says with a smile and kicks Yuki again.

Yuki was catching her breath.

"Did something happen to you? Weren't you all mean and badass?" Tomochin asked curious.

Somebody else entered to the room also..

"Hello!" Paruru says with a smile.

"I knew it!" Yuki says trying to get up by grabbing a desk by end up falling.

Paruru smiles "and this is the person that everyone was scared of maybe Acchan was lying after all!" She says then gets closer to Yuki and step on her hand [the one that has the bandages]

"AHHHHHHH!"Yuki shouts in pain.

"This won't have a happy ending!" Tomochin says with a smile.

TO BE CONTINUED!! I'm kinda spoiling you.. writting a lot :) Mayu will get back in the next chapter! :D
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 30 (9)/31 (10)
Post by: cisda83 on June 10, 2013, 09:17:09 AM
Ah... Poor Yuki... she was having a nightmare about Mayu's death over and over again...

Eh.. Yuki were rich too... Was that the reason why they wanted to recruit Yuki as a Queen... apart from her fighting ability.

As I thought Yuko was the founder of Black Queens... And she was surprised because of Haruna's confession or Black Queens' topic was mentioned?

Rena was there... to comfort Yuki... and calming Yuki down... from the pressure that Yuki's parents gave her...

Eh... Yuki already had an arrange marriage with this Koji guy... but she did not want to...

I guess the accident when she was younger... killed her brother... so her parents could only hope for Yuki's husband to take over their business...

And Rena knew about it... But Jurina thought Rena was stealing Yuki from Mayu...

Rena was just being a best friend to Yuki... despite her feeling... she would not steal Yuki if Yuki did not want to be with her...

Rena wanted genuine love.. not some constellation price or someone's rebound or someone's second choice.

Poor Mayu... now she was scared that Yuki would be hurt when she died...

And Yuki at last blamed everything to Sae... Yeah... she was one of the reason as to why Yuki went away...

If she did not run away... Rena would not be involved with Black Queens... and she would not be Gekikara at all...

Ah... now the Black Queens took action against Yuki...

Who would rescue Yuki from Paruru and Tomochin...?

What would Rena and Mayu do regarding Yuki?

Would Jurina stop blaming and insulting Rena, and start to treat Rena with love and respect she deserved...?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 30 (9)/31 (10)
Post by: kurogumi on June 10, 2013, 09:22:21 AM
mayuki these day... :badluck:

 :err:mayuki these day soooooo sad and painful to read... :fainted:

yuki yuki....dont be sad...it make me sad too ahh~ :cry:

mayu start feeling lost,her hope for life... :cry:  :pleeease:

its being complicated...really confused and sad....im sad.... :on polter:

thank for spoiling us cmze-san  :bow:  :wigglypanda: :hee:

Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 30 (9)/31 (10)
Post by: Haruto Lee on June 10, 2013, 11:09:32 AM
Yuki is too painful to handle all her troubles.....

Mayu want to break up with Yuki.....

So now Rena know Mayu's sickness......

What will Rena do if Mayu and Yuki break up?

The Black queens continue their attack.....

Does Paruru know Mayu's sickness?

When will Sae wake up from her dreams?

What will Jurina do with Rena?

No one in the school know about Mayu's sickness.....

Will Yuko help to stop the happening?

Yuki has future husband.......

Does Mayu know about Yuki's fiance?

Anyway thanks for the new updated

Pls update soon!!!!!!

Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 30 (9)/31 (10)
Post by: POPCAT on June 10, 2013, 07:59:22 PM
so much dramaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 30 (9)/31 (10)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on June 10, 2013, 10:16:49 PM
oh my word :shocked i agree so such drama
yuki has too much on her plate :panic:
poor sae she likes rena but the whole situation is complicated :(
MAYUYU!!  :cry: you must be with yuki :banghead:
please spoil us more cmze-san :P
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 30 (9)/31 (10)
Post by: Shinoki on June 10, 2013, 10:29:49 PM
me: overwhelmed...
sad... yuki... mayuyu...
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 30 (9)/31 (10)
Post by: gek geki on June 15, 2013, 08:53:41 AM
NO YUKÌ!!!
MY YUKI!!

SAD SO SAD
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 30 (9)/31 (10)
Post by: Terragen on June 17, 2013, 11:03:52 AM
good fic

hi im new here
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 32 (11)
Post by: cmze on June 26, 2013, 04:31:10 PM
                                             ~Time is good as gold~
                            CH.32 (11) Yuki's feelings and old friends?

~Night time~

"Sae chan have you seen Yuki chan?" Rena asks to her friend.

Sae pouted "This person..." she thought irritated "Why would i know?" She replied then just walked away even more irritated.

Rena was confused but she does not have time for childish things "Maybe she went to spend the night with Mayu at the hospital.." she thought then walked to her room. .

On the way someone was on her door looking at it "Airin" she says with a smile.

"Rena chan" She says with a smile and offers her a cake.

Rena looked at it.

"I the cooking club we did cakes and.. " Airin says looking down all red.

Rena smiles "thank you it looks delicious!" She says taking the cake.

Airin was even redder "I'll let you sleep.. good night!" She says all tense and leaves.

Rena smiled then entered to her room, put the cake on her desk and laid on bed looking at the ceiling "I still can believe Mayu is dying.." she whispered before falling sleep.

After a few hours the school was off, the lights in the hall were at the lowest since it was already was bed time.

Matsui Jurina walked the hall to her sister's room "Maybe I should apologize" she stopped because she heard some whispering then noticed girls with Black hoods coming out from Rena's room.

Two of them were carrying Rena..

"What the hell? Rena seems unconscious!" Jurina thought she was about to fight them but she didn't notice somebody was already behind her that person put a handicraft on Jurina's nose and prevent her from moving.

Jurina faints on her arms.

~After a few more hours~ [ ] Rena's thoughts.

Matsui Rena opened her eyes, she was on the bleachers with her hands and legs tied and with tape on her mouth to prevent her from screaming, she looked around and notice Jurina was in the same condition a cm next to her.

"Mmbbbmm" Rena says moving and freaking out cause Jurina was there but she was sleeping.

[Jurina! Jurina! Damn it!]

"Hello Gekikara!" Someone says in front of Rena and then starts walking up to sit next to her.

Rena was surely mad looking at her [what should I do? If I don't do something they might.. NO!]

"Prepare to watch the show Gekikara.." Paruru says with a smile and clapping.

Rena looked at the basketball court and she could notice the back of 6 Black Queens seemed like they were looking at something. [What the hell are they doing?]

Suddenly someone breakthrough..

"Good luck Yuki chan!" Paruru says with a smile as Yuki lands on the floor.

Rena was in shock [Did she said Yuki chan?]

"What you're not so strong anymore?" One of the Balck Queen asked as they kicked Yuki who was on the floor.

[YUKIII!!!!!!] Rena thinks as she moves trying untie herlself.

Yuki comes out of the circle they made crawling "I can't faint now..." she murmured bleeding from the side of her head.

(In the hospital Mayu watches the ceiling she doesn't know why but she anxious and can't sleep.)

Rena noticed how damage Yuki's uniform and bandages of her hand were red from the blood since her wounds weren't healed yet. [Yuki.. damn it! Damn it! I NEED TO BREAK FREE!" She thought still moving.

"Stop trying you're well tie!" Paruru says with a smile.

[Why? Why? This is not fun] Rena thought ready break emotionally.

Yuki keeps crawling her way to Paruru but she didn't notice one of the Black Queens took her foot and drag her back again.

"You know what this game is about?" Paruru asked to Rena.

[Game?]

"Well is like preventing Gekikara to come out,You know is she gets closer and touch you.. You'll be free Gekikara never existed and you were never part of the Balck Queens but if she misses she'll be part of us and you will still being part of us apart from.the punishment you deserve for being a naughty girl." Paruru says kinda serious.

"C'mon get up, this is so boring!" Shibuya says as she moves her neck.

Akicha grabs Yuk from the back and make her stand up "if you accepted one of my invitations to go out this would have never happened!" She says then kisses Yuki's cheek.

"Shut up!" Yuki says then pushed Akicha  and tried to punch everyone who was around her.

"Oh you missed!" Haruka says smiling and punched Yuki on her dormancy.

Yuki knelt in pain.

"This way you're not going to get to Gekikara!" Shibuya says mocking.

"Her name is RENA!!" Yuki says mad then gets up and tries to punch Shibuya but she couldn't cause she was seeing double already.

Shibuya grabbed her "You're so weak!" She says then pushes her to one of her mates "poor Yuki chan!" She says before punching her and pushing her to other of her mates.

They were using Yuki like if she was a ball that they were passing while punching.

Rena couldn't do anything but watch her tears already in the corner of her eyes [Stop..stop.. please!]

Yuki was on the floor already face up, she could see the stars *flashes of Rena and her together smiling* her tears were already on the corner of her eyes.

"Ready to give up?" Shibuya asks don't letting her see the stars.

[Don't get up! Don't get up! Don't get up]

Yuki moves to the side and use her arms on the ground to get up.

Rena's tears were already rolling her cheeks [I said DON'T GET UP!!!] She thinks as she kicks the bleachers and tries to make noise.

"Shut up!" Paruru says and slaps Rena.

"Then I'll finish you!" Shibuya says fixing her red glove "don't get on my way or I'll punch you!" She says to her mates.

"She always takes the fun" they murmured.

"Take this!" Shibuya says and kicked Yuki a few steps back [Closer to the bleachers]

Note: positions                               
1)____Bleachers___                   
        (*R) (*P)(*J)
                                                   *
                                                  * *    (Y*)
                                                  *  *
                                                  *

2) ____Bleachers___                   
        (*R) (*P)(*J)
                                                *           
                                             * (*Y) *
                                                ** *

NOW) ____Bleachers___                   
        (*R) (*P)(*J)

                              (Y*)          **
                                      (S*)  *
                                              * *
Yuki was out of breath and trying to catch it, she put her hand in her chest and got up again slowly.

Shibuya kicked her again this time on her leg, Yuki fell on the floor somehow that kick was enough to make her look the floor closer again.

Yuki rolled in pain (Still diagonal way to get close to Rena)

"This is the worst fight I ever had.." Shibuya says looking at Yuki on the floor with her hand on her leg.

"My leg hurts.. " Yuki thought in pain.

"You know there was someone who beat with just one punch and I still hate her and wanna fight her but she disappeared, you know where she is right?Tell me where's Acchan?" Shibuya says grabbing Yuki by her hair.

"Don't know!" Yuki replied in pain.

Rena was clenching her fists, she was mad [Tomochin once I'll get free, you'll pay this]

Paruru looked at Rena and smirked "Looks like Gekikara wants to come out!" She thought.

Yuki was against the floor again, Shibuya heated her on her face.

"This is boring.. finish her!" Shibuya says to her mates.

All of them got happy, Yuki got up again "I can't lose.." she thought as the other Black Queens comes to beat her.

They were around her again..  (*) 

[No Yuki....stop] Rena thinks sad.

But this time Yuki was dodging some punches and punches them back, she got kicked, punched and pushed several times.

Yuki punched one of them but other grabbed her from her back an  pushed her away while other when she was about to get up she kicked her to not let her get up but Yuki rolled again and got even closer to the bleachers .Now she was a few meters meters away.

[Stop.. stop already ..]

Note: position

 ____Bleachers___                   
        (*R) (*P)(*J)

                   (*Y) **   
                           * (S*)
                    * *

"I'm impress by your determination that's for sure but crawling all the way here is like cheating." Paruru says with a smile

"You said as long as I get here.." Yuki replies In pain as she tries to get up but her body wasn't responding and it was trembling.

"Well you haven't done anything yet!" Paruru says making a sign to the Black Queens.

They got closer.

"Damn it, I can't move..MOVE" Yuki shouts and drops of tears came out.

Two Black Queens grabbed Yuki by her arms while other started punching her stomach.

Jurina opened her eyes and notice the situation while Rena seemed totally desperate to break free making noises,moving and kicking the bleachers with her tie feet.

[STOP STOP STOP!]

Paruru makes a sign to them to stop, They let go Yuki who falls but didn't hit herself cause her arms. She was looking at the ground.

Rena seemed hopeless "Yuki chan..." she thought as more tears rolls her cheeks.

Yuki was all hurt her bandage on her hand was totally destroyed and it was just hanging but still she was crawling really slowly because every time she moves her body hurts.

Parity was only smirking and watching as she crawls to get closer to Rena while Jurina was horrified how much hurt Yuki was.

Rena now was crying as she watches Yuki coming closer [Why you didn't stop? Stupid stupid Yuki chan!"]

Yuki got to the bleachers, She extended her hand to touch Rena.

"Finally.." Yuki thought with a smile while Rena bent forward suddenly someone dragged Yuki away not letting her touch Rena.

"You really thought I would let you go that easy Gekikara!" Paruru asked laughing.

Yuki was on the floor again while Rena was shocked.

"You would never protect anyone that way, If you don't use your hate you won't get anywhere so big was my hate for you that I joined to this thing and I don't give a damn about this stupid rules!" Paruru says.

"Me?" Yuki asked as she's still on the floor.

"Wow people strange once they change they forgot who they were and who they hurt!" Paruru says.

~ 2 years ago~ before everything

(There wasn't anyone in the hall)

Shimazaki Haruka was gathering the things of her locker when somebody closed it harshly.

"You think your funny huh?" Yuki pushes her against her locker and grabbed her by her tie.

"It's the truth I'm tired of you!" Haruka says looking down and trying to fix her glasses.

Yuki smirks "Then I have the solution to your problems!" She says grabbing Haruka' s arm then opened her locker to get her inside and closed the door.

"You're so small that you can live there!" Yuki says smirking as she leaves.

(Yuki kinda bullied her many times)

Now Yuki remebered everything all the bad times she put Haruka into.

"Damn it!" Yuki shouts and hits the ground.

Paruru smiles "It's fine I became stronger now look at me, I look good and can cause you pain!" She says carelessly

Yuki's tears showed "I deserve all this but.. please leave Rena and Mayu out of this, I'll do anything so please leave them alone!" She says as she cries looking at the ground.

"Yeah she's like crystal doll, If you touch her she might break..I'll try to be not to rough" Paruru says with a smile.

Yuki got mad "HOW DARE YOU?!" She asked mad ready to jump on Paruru but two Black Queen grabbed her.

"I thought you had no energy left!" Paruru says kinda shocked.

"Let me go!" Yuki says forcing with the two.

"Now I'll be pleased to punish you and Gekikara!" Paruru says irritated.

"I ALREADY TOLD YOU SHE'S RENA!" Yuki says punches the two Black Queens hard.

The other 3 Black Queens tried to fight Yuki but we're stopped by Shibuya "Looks like this serious." She says with a smirk

[This is the same thing that happened to me.. hate that's what Black Queens are about]

"I'm mad.. YOU WANNA HURT MAYU!" Yuki says serious.

"I don't really care!" Shibuya says and unexpectedly she tries to punch Yuki fortunately Yuki use her arm to cover herself.

Shibuya retreat herself "Fun" she says with a smirk then tries to kick Yuki but Yuki grabbed her leg.

"I will destroy you if you touch Mayu, I MEAN THOSE WORDS!!" Yuki says and uses her her elbow to hit Shibuya' s leg.

Shibuya shouted in pain and rolled many times on the floor, two Black Queens grabbed Shibuya.

Rena and Jurina were shocked, the other Black Queens were scared You could tell by only looking at their eyes.

Paruru clapped many times "finally you understood!" She says with a smile then gets up and stretches "This was fun!"

The lights in the room building started to get on because Shibuya' s scream many girls woke up.

"I'll go to sleep!" Paruru says not caring about the situation.

~The next day~

Everyone thought Tomochin fell from the stairs and that's why she broke her leg in the middle of the night.

Meanwhile Rena was taking care of Yuki who was sleeping on her bed but in the afternoon she visited Mayu at the hospital and told her what happened.

"I can't believe it.. " Mayu says as picks up her things she was already released from the hospital.

"She did without hesitation for very first time she scared me..." Rena says looking down.

"So she's part of them now!" Mayu says a little sad.

~At school~

"Hello!" Kojima Haruna says with a smile as she walks the hall with her bag and saying hi to everyone.

"Why did you come back? I have everything under control!" Paruru says with her books on her hands.

"Well I like doing things by myself!" Kojiharu says dropping Paruru's books then walked away still smiling like nothing happened.

~Outside coming out from a taxi~

"Oh back to work again.." Shingles Sensei says lazily "Why that vacations for the best teacher doesn't last longer?" She thought pouting.

~At the headmaster office~

"So why you want to become a teacher here Oshima san?" The headmaster asked.

"Well I love this school, I studied here so it's easy to understand Why my love for this school I think!" Yuko says with a smile.

"I don't want to you know butt in like people say these days but you're from a wealthy family why would you be a teacher having other options?" She asked

"I just love it, it's my passion!" Yuko replies.

"Mmm then in that case you're in!" The headmaster says with a smile.

~After some minutes outside Rena's room~

Mayu already arrived to school with Rena but Rena went to the recreation area to give Yuki and Mayu space.

Mayu slowly opened the door and couldn't a conversation, it looked like Yuki was on phone.

"What did you say?" Yuki asked mad "you're useless I don't care where you get it even if you have to kill someone on the street by yourself GET A HEART!!!" Yuki shouts the last part then threw the phone away which end up in pieces on the floor.

Mayu entered to the room and found Yuki sitting on Rena's bed.

"Mayu" she says shocked and gets up even if her body hurts.

"Who do you were talking to?" Mayu asked serious.

Yuki was kinda open mouth but then reacted "Nobody.. " she says with a smile.

"You don't look surprised seeing me like this.. did someone already tell you?" Yuki asked serious.

"Don't change the conversation, I heard you.. who you think you are to decide who lives and who dies?" Mayu asked sad looking down.

"Mayu you're wrong.. You misheard!" Yuki says putting her hands on her shoulders.

"I know what I heard, you want one of your servant to kill someone!" Mayu says looking at Yuki.

Yuki got irritated then rolled her eyes and let go Mayu's shoulders "Then what if I do?" She asked coldly

Mayu was shocked.

"I'm trying to save you that's the way you thank me!" Yuki says irritated and shaking Mayu several times.

Mayu slapped Yuki.

Yuki's cheek burns not only for the slap but also cause it's kinda swollen for yesterday.

"I rather die on doing things on your way!" Mayu says with tears in her eyes then leaves the room.

Mayu slammed the door and somehow she started feeling dizzy.

"Mayu are you okay?" Jurina asked and grabs Mayu.

"No.. take.. me.. to my room!" Mayu says hard to breathe.

TO BE CONTINUED!!! COMMENT!! Me playing with u! XD
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 32 (11)
Post by: kenjoy12 on June 26, 2013, 05:03:45 PM
Haruna and Yuko are back.. Then what? Oh man! :banghead:

Arrghh! Why's everything so hard! :banghead: :(

Can't wait! :fap More drama to come! Ohyeah! :peace:

Thank you for the update :bow: :thumbsup

AWESOME AS ALWAYS ~ :twothumbs

Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 32 (11)
Post by: Shinoki on June 26, 2013, 08:18:07 PM
update = wow...
hrm... grr... black queens are evil...
poor rena and yuki...
desperate ppl lead to bad things even if they don't want it
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 32 (11)
Post by: mo-chan on June 26, 2013, 08:31:32 PM
cmze you're sure you like to play with my feelings  :dizzy:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 32 (11)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on June 26, 2013, 09:29:53 PM
stupid shibuya, paruru, akicha!!!!!!!!!!! :angry: :angry: you went too far beating yuki like that   :thumbdown:
its sweet that yuki would want her servant to get mayu a heart at any cost :shocked (even killing someone) but mayu's right yuki thats not a good solution  :smhid
mayuyu i hope she will be okay :cry: :cry:
thanx for the upadte :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 32 (11)
Post by: rochilu on June 27, 2013, 01:20:19 AM
What's wrong with that girls!! they're totally crazy D:
Yuki and Mayu are alredy fightin TnT and Mayu is feeling bad  u.u
aah what will happen, i hope that Yuko and Haruna can stope this crazyness
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 32 (11)
Post by: cisda83 on June 27, 2013, 10:57:57 AM
Ah.. Poor Yuki being the Black Queens punching bag...

And Yuki became a part of Black Queens...

Eh.. Yuki would kill someone for a heart to save Mayu...

Really...?

Well of coz' Mayu would be angry if that was the case...

Ah... Yuko joined the staff of the school... what would she do about her former club?

Would she and Haruna develop into something?

Can't wait to find out what's going to happen next

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 32 (11)
Post by: Haruto Lee on June 27, 2013, 01:53:43 PM
Yuki is a part of the black queens now...

I felt Yuki is turning into Black mode again

Paruru, Shibuya, Akicha and Kojiharu are going to make Mayu out of the school, right?

Yuko came back and become a teacher..... Is she an ally or enemy? I hope Yuko is an ally.

Mayu is still weak for protect Yuki and Rena. She had heart problem. She felt dizzy when she is just arguing with Yuki.

Hope Yuki can turn back to the kind one not the black one. Because Black cant protect Mayu but Yuki can.

I think you are going to make Acchan back, right?

This update is quite sad and a lot of fighting but I really like it

Hope u can update soon.
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 32 (11)
Post by: kurogumi on June 28, 2013, 03:04:16 AM
 :badluck: :badluck: :badluck: :badluck: :err: :err: :err: :err: :fainted: :fainted: :fainted: :fainted: :fainted: :depressed: :depressed: :depressed: :depressed: :cool2: :cool2: :cool2: :fainted: :fainted: :fainted: :err: :err: :err: :gyaaah: :gyaaah: :gyaaah: :gyaaah: :pleeease: :pleeease: :pleeease: :pleeease: :scared: :scared: :scared: :scared: :imdead: :imdead: :imdead: :imdead: :on_puddle: :on_puddle: :on_puddle: :on blackhole: :on blackhole: :on blackhole: :on blackhole: :on blackhole: :on polter: :on polter: :on polter: :on polter: :on polter:



 :on ksweat:


KYAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAA


thank for the update cmze-san  :cry:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 32 (11)
Post by: gek geki on June 28, 2013, 03:32:26 AM
YUKI!!! NEW LEADER OF BLACK QUEEN OR WHAT???

HOW TO DESTROY BLACK QUEEN??? SIMPLE JUST COLLECTED ALL OF THE MEMBER AND BOOOMB!! WAR!! YEAH!!!

WAR OF LOVE!! KEKEKE


GREAT CHAPTER BY THE WAY
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 32 (11)
Post by: Terragen on June 29, 2013, 07:19:39 AM
this chapter is so touching somehow.
what a bestfriend they are...i mean for yuki and rena...about sae i dont know maybe is not the time she show it.


need mor e update
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 32 (11)
Post by: rise on June 29, 2013, 08:13:29 AM
 :fainted:

i loved this fic from the first chapter

is so emotional
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 32 (11)
Post by: gek geki on July 13, 2013, 07:55:24 AM
Already missed this
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 32 (11)
Post by: imteedee on July 14, 2013, 01:55:56 AM
OMG I read all of them at once  :dizzy:

I'm so hooked  :err:

the fact it is Yuki's birthday tom haha  :hee: ~okay out of the topic~

Incredibly amazing I didnt get bore at any chance  :on lol:

now, I'm miserably waiting for an update  :on hobo:

FIVE STARS!  :on GJ:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold special chapter~ MaYuki CH. 33 (12) What if...?
Post by: cmze on July 30, 2013, 09:19:31 AM


                                  ~Time is good as gold special chapter~
                                               CH.33 (12) What if...?

Matsui Rena entered to her room after a morning run, she looked at her partner sleeping on bed still.

She sighed and sat next to her, she was about to touch her hair but suddenly the sleeping girl opened her eyes and grabbed her hand before it touch her hair.

"Yuki chan..." Rena says scared as Yuki is till holding her wrist.

"Oh.. Rena I thought it was someone else!" She said coldly as she gets up then looks for her uniform and left to change.

Rena touched her wrist sad "Yuki Don't leave me alone.." she whispered as she watches the door.

~ After some minutes at the recreation area~

"Wow Jurina chan is so cute!!" A few fan girls shout as they watch her eat.

Sasshi looked at her friend "Damn girl, you drive them crazy!" She says looking at the crazy fan girls.

Jurina sighed bored "It's not like a care.." she said as she plays with her food.

"What you can paradise if you want?" Sasshi says grabbing Jurina's head with both hands and making her looks at crazy girls who have signs with their numbers.

Jurina moved her head and stopped looking at her "Sasshi I just want one person and she dates a monster!" She said mad looking other way.

Sasshi sighed "Well she doesn't look like she's going to leave Yuki any time soon!" She said with a smile before leaving.

"How did you... *turns her head to look at Sasshi* know?" She said looking how Sasshi was already leaving the recreation area and Rena was entering.

"Rena chan sit over here!" Jurina shouted offering her empty seat.

Rena sat next to her little sister then stare blanky at her breakfast without saying a word.

"Rena chan are you hungry?" The younger Matsui asked with a smile and offering her breakfast.

"I'm fine Jurina.. thanks!" She replied with a smile.

~Soon the bell rang~

Rena got up "See you later Jurina chan!"she said faking a smile.

"Of course!" Jurina replied with a smile.

~In classroom~

Rena entered to her classroom and found Yuki surrounded by her classmates.

"Yeah I'm telling you this is my year!" Yuki says with a smirk then noticed Rena sitting a few desk ahead.

Tomochin smirked "You mean our year.." she said looking at the taller girl.

"Totally!" Yuki said before leaving then sat behind Rena and hugged her.

Rena only looked down.

"I'm sorry about this morning, I was little moody!" Yuki says with a smile then kissed Rena's cheek sweetly.

Rena was still looking down "You're always sorry lately.." she thought.

Sae entered to the classroom.

Yuki pouted then retreat her arms and looked back to her friends with a smile while Sae Sat next to Rena.

"Hello Rena chan!" Sae says with a smile as Yuki looks at her.

"Good Morning Sae chan!" Rena replied serious.

Soon Shinoda sensei entered to the classroom and made the new student introduce herself.

"Hello everyone I'm Watanabe Mayu, I'm 16 years old and… *Looked at everyone nervous then notice Yuki's face who was looking at her and then smirked at her*

"Looks like the new one is a little slow!" Yuki says making fun of her and causing everyone to laugh.

Shinoda sensei made everyone calm down "Well let me tell Watanabe san had the highest score on her admission exam unlike yours who under regular!" She said coldly.

"Well she can have a nerd fight with our Paruru!" Yuki said grabbing Paruru' s cheek hard and moving it.

Everyone laughed again.

"This must be the cool one, why every school has one?" Mayu thought then proceed to sit.

The day passed fast and soon classes were over.

"We have reunion!" Akicha says clinging on Yuki's arm who rolled her eyes.

Tomochin also pushed the taller girl softly "C'mon school council president we have plenty things to talk about!" She says pushing Yuki with them

Sae grabbed Rena's shoulder "If it makes you suffer then it's not love.." she said before leaving the classroom, Rena was shocked.

As the three girls were walking the hall more girls joined them.

"Get out of my way!" Yuki says pushing someone to the lockers not caring.

"Sasshi!" Jurina says and helps her friend to get up "What are you blind Kashiwagi Yuki?" She asked shouting.

Yuki turned around with her friends then got closer and grabbed Jurina by her shirt to push her against the lockers  "Now that I remember there's no blood relantion, you're lucky that now I'm busy next time I WON't hesitate!" She said with a smirk then let go her shirt and fixed it.

Mayu watched everything "What's wrong with her?" She asked as she watches her walking away with her friends.

~After some hours At RenaYuki's room~

Yuki entered to the room and Rena was already sleeping, she pouted but then jumped on her not caring if she wakes her up.

"Rena chan!" She called several times.

Rena opened her eyes "What's wrong?" She asked as Yuki puts her leg and her arm on her.

"I missed you!" She said with a smile.

"Do you" Rena asked expressionless.

Yuki got on top of her girlfriend "Of course" she said before kissing her passionately.

Rena responded to kiss with the same passion but Sae's words came to her heard so she broke the kiss abruptly.

"What's wrong?" Yuki asked.

"I'm tired!" Rena said then removed Yuki off her not caring if her girlfriend fell off bed.

Yuki was shocked "Oh this is tired.." she says as she gets up.

"I'm not the only hiding things!" Rena says carelessly then closed her eyes.

"What do you mean?" Yuki asked looking at her girlfriend pretending to be sleeping.

Rena sat on her bed and looked at Yuki "Why did you wanna become the student council president? You do not care about that! Where you go in the middle of the night? Why Yuria left the school and warned me about you? What's the side I don't know about you?" She asked shouting and irritated.

"Oh.. I can't believe your asking things like that to me.. it hurts!" Yuki said looking other way.

Rena got up from bed and got closer to her girlfriend then grabbed her hand "Yukirin it's hurts knowing I'm losing you, whatever you're doing please stop before you get hurt!" She asked with the tears on the corner of her eyes.

Yuki took a deep breath the grabbed Rena by her shoulders and started shaking her "WHO'S TELLING YOU THAT S%IT??!" She shouted pushing her to the bed before leaving the room

~Outside in the bleachers~

Yuki was sitting in the bleachers looking at the stars then remembered every word Rena said and looked other way.

"Wow!" Someone let out, Yuki turned her head and looked at the person.

"Oh you're the new nerd!" Yuki says carelessly then looked at the stars again.

Mayu pouted "Idiot!" She thought "oh is the class's jerk!" She said carelessly ready to walk away.

"What did you say?" Yuki asked as she gets down of the bleachers.

"What you heard JERK!" Mayu says not turning around suddenly Yuki grabs her by her arm and the two starts forcing.

"I'm going to show you respect!" Yuki says forcing with Mayu.

Mayu pulled a spray from her pocket and used it on Yuki.

"OH DAMN IT! DAMN IT! AHHHH IT HURTS, YOU..BUSTER.." Yuki says in pain Still not letting go Mayu.

"That's what a bully deserves!" Mayu says trying to break free.

Suddenly both slipped with Yuki on top.

Yuki tried to clean her eyes with Mayu's shirt, grabbing, touching her chest (You can not blame her she's blind)

Mayu blushed instantly "Get off pervert!" She said pushing her.

Yuki puts her hands on her eyes "It hurts, it hurts.." she sais complaining.

Mayu felt bad "Maybe I over use.." she thought then got closer to the taller girl "Let me see! Let me see!" She says trying to uncover Yuki's eyes.

Yuki gulped then looked at the shorter in the eyes, both had eye contact for a few seconds.

"It hurts, I can see the stars anymore!" Yuki says closing her eyes.

"Once I used it on my cousin her felt better once I blew on his eyes, let me blow in your eyes" Mayu says.

"That's not going to work I need ice!" Yuki says still covering her eyes.

Mayu pouted "let me try!" She says but Yuki refused.

Mayu was feeling awful "let me try!" She said before pushing the other girl on the ground and getting on top against her will.

Mayu started to blow on her eyes, Yuki slowly were opening them.

The two looked at each other for a few seconds and realized about the good features of each other. Both girls were blushing.

After a few seconds Yuki was feeling better but her eyes were still burning and lights have different colors.

The two got up and walked to the room's building.

"You shouldn't use that thing!" Yuki says irritated.

"You shouldn't  be an idiot!" Mayu replies also irritated

Yuki took a deep breath then sighed "Nobody calls me idiot but I'll let it pass for this time NERD!" She says before walking to her room but smirked on her way.

"Idiot!" Mayu whispered irritated as she walks to her room.

~The next day~ after class~ swimming practice~

"Rena chan what are you doing here?" Jurina asked with a smile.

Rena smiled "I'm glad you do this on your free time" she said giving her a present.
Jurina took the present and unpack it "What!!! this is..''she says amazed.

"Now you can hear your favorite music in the water!" Rena says with a smile, She instantly received a hug from her younger sister.

"Thank you Rena chan, what can I do to pay you?" Jurina asks happy.

"Keep smiling like that, you make my day!" Rena says before kissing her forehead.
Jurina blushed hard

"Now go and win everything for me!" Rena says with a smile.

"Always!" Jurina says before leaving.

Someone grabbed Rena's shoulder "You have a good relantionship with her that's nice, I have no brother or sister so I kinda envy you!" That person says with a smile.

"I don't have a mother Saw chan!" Rena says kinda sad.

Sae putted her arm around Rena's neck "Let's sit over there!" She says with a smile.

"Yuki chan won't like this.." Someone says.

Somebody else took a picture "I know!" She said.

~Outside~

Mayu was sitting on the grass reading a book.

"I'm telling you is not a good night for the "initiation night" let's leave it for tomorrow!" Yuki says as she walks with her friends then noticed Mayu.

She looked at her for a few seconds.

"Yuki chan! Yuki chan!" Akicha called waking Yuki from her thoughts.

"Oh with that said, you can do whatever you want!" Yuki says and fast walks to the shorter girl.

Mayu was totally focused on her book.

"Oh is that the one "I love you but we can't be together cause... I'm vampire and I wanna eat you!" Yuki says over acting and laughing.

"Funny you're a terrible actor!" Mayu says expressionless then gets back to read her book.

Yuki looked at the girl "You're funny!" She says then smiled and sat next to her.

"No, I'm not!" Mayu replied.

"I thought you were totally focused on your stupid book!" Yuki says with a smirk.

Mayu blushed and covered her red face with her book.

"Cute.." Yuki thought suddenly her phone rang and she receive a picture "What the hell?" She said then got up and walked away.

Mayu put down her book and looked how Yuki goes to the rooms building "What happened?" She thought concern.

~At night~

Sae was running in the racing track, after 20 min she stopped to catch her breath and drink some water.

"Hello Sae chan!" Someone says.

Sae turns her head "Yuki chan.." she said shocked.

"Rena is acting weird and I think you the reason!" Yuki says looking at her friend.

Sae smirked a little "You come to blame on me.. if she's acting weird must be your mistake don't blame on me, I don't do the things you do!" She said irritated.

Yuki smirked "You still think that I got on the way right? Well.. yes I did, it was on purpose!" She said moving her shoulders.

Sae got mad suddenly punched Yuki on her face "WHY? To make her suffer like this? You don't love anyone I wish she could how selfish you are!" She said grabbing Yuki by her shirt and shaking her.

Suddenly three girls in black hoods appeared grabbed Sae and punched her while Yuki cleans the blood from the corner of her eyes.

As the three girls keep punching Sae while she's on the floor,Yuki fixes her uniform "Sae chan your annoying with your feelings, you think Rena would leave me, she wouldn't do that EVER!" Yuki says and kicked Sae.

"You're just an arrogant bitch!" Sae says then spits blood.

Yuki smirks "I'm more than that.. I'm the leader of the Balck Queens!" She said proud.

The three girls started to punch Sae more.

"Hey what are you doing there? STOP!" Mayu says then tries to help Sae

One of the girls punched Mayu on her stomach hard,leaving her without air

Everything became blurry for Mayu and she grabbed her arm then fainted.

"Mayu!" Yuki says shocked then fast punched the girl who punched Mayu and grabbed Mayu on her arms.

Jurina was walking around with Rena then saw the scene.

"Why she's not waking up?" Yuki asked all shocked while Sae also looked at Mayu on Yuki's arms.

The three girls in the hood were also watching.

"Sae!" Rena says and helps her friend.

"Mayu! No way!" Jurina says shocked then fast grabs Mayu on her arms and listens to the beat of her heart.

"Mayu chan! Mayu chan!" Jurina says hugging the cyborg girl with tears on her eyes.

"What's going on?" Yuki asked

"Mayu is dead!" Jurina says crying.

Everyone was shocked.

"She had a heart disease!" Jurina says crying.

"That's not truth!" Yuki says nervous and tries to get her pulse but there was none.

Yuki's tears came out..

After that Yuki disbanded the Black Queens, broke up with Rena and married with the guy her parents decided for her and with the thought that maybe Mayu could have been the one she was waiting for.

After a long period in London after her graduation, Rena realized she missed Jurina more than that was expected and finally understood her real feeling about her.

Sae learned that life comes and goes so fast and it's better to let go, she was happy seeing Rena happy with Jurina but she feels bad about Yuki because she doomed herself with a life she didn't want cause the quiltiness..

Maybe Destiny was wise and chose the stronger person to go through the worst times..

I know maybe some of you guys thinks this chapter is unless but some asked me about it so I had to do it! Hope u like it :)
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold special chapter~ MaYuki CH. 33 (12) What if...?
Post by: kurogumi on July 30, 2013, 09:52:44 AM
no this is just a dream...please...T.T


but is good...LOL

thank for the update


i will comment more later LOL
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold special chapter~ MaYuki CH. 33 (12) What if...?
Post by: kenjoy12 on July 30, 2013, 11:33:02 AM
:shocked  CAN SOMEONE WAKE ME FROM MY DEEP SLUMBER?! :banghead:

Thank you for your hard work and update of the special chapter :bow: :twothumbs

Still on shock~

So much for the What ifs.. :banghead:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold special chapter~ MaYuki CH. 33 (12) What if...?
Post by: Shinoki on July 30, 2013, 02:45:21 PM
special chapter probably means that it's seperate from the real story...
Mayuyu.... tears...
gah... baka sae...
yukirin!!! slams head into wall...
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold special chapter~ MaYuki CH. 33 (12) What if...?
Post by: Zita on July 30, 2013, 03:03:57 PM
Thank you for this.
It is kind of painful, hope this story will end in good way for everyone.
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold special chapter~ MaYuki CH. 33 (12) What if...?
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on July 31, 2013, 05:28:23 PM
Thank you for updating this, I love this chapter!! :deco:
oh my, poor yuki, mayu sprayed her lol  :lol: but aww it was so cute yuki said she couldn't see the stars anymore :cathappy:
sae-chan!!  :( awww mayu's trying to help her
no! no! no!!!!!!! my poor poor mayuyu!!!!!!! :angry: :cry: :cry
omg its so sad when jurina cuddled mayu crying :cry:
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold special chapter~ MaYuki CH. 33 (12) What if...?
Post by: imteedee on July 31, 2013, 07:32:46 PM
she died by a knock-out punch  :stoned:
I'm seeing unicorns  :fainted:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold special chapter~ MaYuki CH. 33 (12) What if...?
Post by: Chanaline on July 31, 2013, 08:30:38 PM
Is it just a "if" right? Aaaaaah! it wasn't funny at all :cry:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold special chapter~ MaYuki CH. 33 (12) What if...?
Post by: kahem on August 01, 2013, 12:46:54 AM
I'm so glad in the real version Mayu didn't die!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold special chapter~ MaYuki CH. 33 (12) What if...?
Post by: kurogumi on August 03, 2013, 10:13:26 AM
nah now...

so maybe is what gonna be happen if yuki became part of the black queen in the first place...mayu's dies...and she married with someone that she doesn't love...but in the end rena with jurina...(hope they still end up together for the real LOL)

i'm really like this "what if...." LOL


what if yuki's not leave rena...

but even with this what if...mayu and yuki still almost to be together although they not officially together but i know they fate to be together...it just a shame mayu dies so fast....

sae....why?? why?? LOL how come you be soooooooo !@#%$#^&...ah whatever LOL




thank for this update cmze-san


Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold special chapter~ MaYuki CH. 33 (12) What if...?
Post by: Terragen on August 03, 2013, 10:27:20 AM
dont know why but even its what if hurt me so much cry cry cry


it's make me remember some about some song from band i loved so much


thank
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 34 (13)
Post by: cmze on August 11, 2013, 11:16:46 AM

                                              ~Time is good as gold ~
                                                        CH.34 (13)

~After a few days~ In the classroom~

"Good Morning girls I'm Oshima Seinsei and I'll be your new *OSHIMA SENSEI SO CUTEE!!*

Yuki looked at the girl and smiled nervously "In all the classroom I had to get in the same as her.." she thought looking at Kojima Haruna then proceeded to keep talking with her new students.

"Like I said your new science teacher as you know Miss. Hara it's taking indefinite vacations so we'll see twice a week!" She said with a smile.

At the same time her new teacher talks Mayu couldn't help to think about Yuki and about the last time she saw Yuki "Something had changed about her" she thought and accidentally breaks her pencil.

Rena was sitting next to her and she heard how the pencil broke, she looked at her right and saw how Mayu's hand was bleeding and she was completely ignoring it and keeps being absent minded.

"Mayu chan!" Rena says worried as she gets up, getting everyone's attention.

Oshima sensei stops talking "What's wrong?" She asked serious.

"Mayu chan you're bleeding.." Rena says worried while Sae looks at them.

Mayu looks at Rena  "Don't worry it's just a little cut!" She said with a smile

Oshima sensei sent Mayu to the nursery and continued with her chat with the students.

"So on Thursday we're going to an excursion..Isn't that fun?" She asked with a smile.

"Totally Oshima Sensei!" Haruna said with a smile.

 Haruka looked at the girl for a second "Really? Is this person really scary as they say?" She thought.

Yuki only looked at the girl in an oddly way "Now she's scaring me.." she thought.

~ In the hall~

Mayu was walking to the nursery but somehow she stopped and decided going somewhere else (Yuki's room)

Once in Yuki's room, Mayu saw Yuki sleeping on her bed face up.

Mayu slowly got closer and her tears were already in the corner of her eyes "Look what they did to you? This is all my fault, I should have never come to this school so we wouldn't have met and you wouldn't dealing with this pain" she thought looking at the blood on her hand.

Yuki kept sleeping.

"Don't worry.. I'll set you free my dear love" Mayu whispers as many memories of her with Yuki crosses her head at that minute.

Yuki moved her head to her right while Mayu wiped her tears fast then sat on the edge of the bed and watched her girlfriend sleep.

~ Lunch time~

Matsui Rena decided to eat alone on the bleachers for a moment she stopped eating and remembered what happened there a few days ago.

~Flashback~

"AHHHHHHHH" Tomochin says in pain on the floor while the other Black Queens try to calm her.

Yuki only looked at the scene showing no emotion while Jurina was completely shocked by her behaviour

Paruru smiled cause the commotion while Yuki walks slowly closer to Rena, once in front of her she leaned their foreheads touched for a moment "Now Gekikara never existed.." she said in pain before fainting on Rena.

Jurina was confused but just looked at Rena crying.

"Rena chan!" Someone called several times and woke up Rena from her thoughts.
"Jurina chan!" She said looking down while Jurina sits next to her.

Jurina looked at the girls playing then broke the silence between them "I don't think that I could ever forgive you.. but why you never told me? DO I MEAN NOTHING TO YOU?" She shouted the last part looking at Rena.

Rena was shocked first then looked other way, somehow her heart was breaking apart "I wouldn't forgive myself if something happens to you, Jurina chan I'm sorry!" She thought as hold her tears  then got up and walked away.

Jurina was frozen first but then followed Rena and grabbed her by her arm to stop her "Tell me! Tell me!" She said desperate as tears were in the corner of her eyes.

Rena only looked at her younger sister making at tantrum and she kept trying her best to not let her tears show while Jurina was still hysterically shouting at her.

Everyone looked at them.

Jurina started pushing Rena but this one didn't respond no matter how much she pushes her.

Once Jurina got tired of pushing her she hugged Rena.

Rena couldn't believe it.

"I could have helped you, why you didn't let me help you?" Jurina asked crying on her chest.

Rena couldn't hide her sadness after a short seconds Jurina breaks their hug then walks away.

Sae watched everything from afar.

~In Jurina's and Mayu's room~ after class~

Mayu was reading a book while Jurina enters to the room and fast goes on her bed ignoring Mayu.

"Jurina are you okay?" Mayu asked as she closes her book.

Jurina wipes her tears "I won't forgive her.. " she said looking at her pillow.

Mayu pouted a little "You sure? You don't care what she does?" She asked.

"I don't care at all, I'll forget about her!" Jurina says determinate as she wipes her tears.

"Then I'll guess it's fine if she dates Yuki.." Mayu let out carelessly.

Jurina opened her eyes wide but didn't say a word.

"If I die you'll be fine Jurina chan but Yuki wouldn't so I want Rena to stay with her and take care of her, she's the only one who can do it!" Mayu says coldly.

Jurina didn't say a word, she got totally serious.

"They love each other.." Mayu said looking down sad.

Jurina remembered how Yuki fought the Black Queens not caring about her life at all just to free Rena from Gekikara.

Jurina got mad then got off bed with a jump and left the room.

"I'm mad and jealous also Jurina chan!" Mayu whisper as she looks at the door.

Jurina runs the hall to Rena's room "I can't let that happen.. " she thought crying as she runs.

Once in front of Rena's door, she knocked several times but nobody answered, she sighed then walked the campus looking for her.

~ Yuki and Rena walking together~

"You don't understand!" Yuki said clenching her fists plans looking down.

Rena could feel pain in Yuki's words "i understand clearly, if you don't think this coldly you'll lose your head." She said sure.

Yuki looked at Rena.

"In any case I'll be by your side always~" Rena said a little red.

Yuki looked at her then smiled a little "I know.." she said with a light red on her cheeks.

"Just promised me you'll take care of yourself.." Rena said worried.

Yuki looked down sad "I'll try my best.." she said not so sure.

Rena suddenly hugged her " Promise me.. " she whispered.

Yuki took her moment to feel Rena's warmth "I promise.." she replied.

Jurina watched them from afar, she couldn't help to feel hurt "Why?" She asked to herself.

"Why not me?" She thought.

~At the recreation area~

Oshima sensei was eating.

Suddenly someone sat next to her.

"Oshima Sensei!" The good looking tall girl says says showing her best smile.

Yuko looked at her "I don't understand why you always look at me like that?" She said acting coldly.

"Because you made history.." The air head girl replied acting serious and leaving all her clumsyness behind.

Yuko looked at her "So this is your true color!" She said then proceed to eat.

"My true color?" The girl asked acting dumb.

Yuko kept eating and ignored her.

"What? You haven't seen nothing yet!" Kojima Haruna replied with a smirk before kissing her teacher's cheek and leaving.

Yuko stopped eating "This school has strange characters.." she thought looking around.

~Meanwhile~ in Paris~

"'Really?" Acchan asked on the phone not so happy.

Takamina was on the couch only looking at her as she walks in circles.

"Okay call me any time.." Acchan said before hanging up.

"Who was that? What's wrong Acchan?" Takamina asked feeling the vibe.

Acchan Sat next to Takamina "I don't know either but I don't like it...Oshima San got back to school" she said kinda nervous.

"What do you mean?" Takamina asked.

"Oshima Yuko is back into school as a teacher.." Acchan said looking at her phone.

Takamina gulped "Is she as people at that time said she was?" She asked.

Acchan was serious then bit her lips "I honestly don't know, I didn't meet her" she said a little worried.

"Maybe we should call that Kashiwagi girl" Takamina said worried

Acchan got up "Maybe we shouldn't get into this matter, we already graduate, whatever happens in that school.. is not problem anymore!" She said mad looking at the mark on her hand.

~ At a hospital~

"SHUT UP ALREADY!" Tomochin said mad.

All the girls in the room made silence and looked at her.

"That Kashiwagi is going to pay me with tears and I'm going to hurt her were it hurts her the most.. I want that Watanabe!" Tomochin said mad.

The girls in the room were hesitating.

"She's our leader now!" Rie said nervous.

Tomochin hit the flower pot next to her "I COULDN'T CARE LESS ABOUT THAT!" She said mad.

Everyone just looked at her.

Suddenly someone opened the door.

"Seems like you're mad!" Paruru said with a smirk.

TO BE CONTINUED!!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 34 (13)
Post by: cisda83 on August 11, 2013, 12:10:41 PM
Erm... Atsumina were also members of the black queens...

Who were that responsible for the start of these type of bully?

Can't wait to see what Yuko would do with this bully...

What would happen to Mayu?

Would the test if the queens be able to hurt Mayu?

Would Paruru stop the other queens from hurting Mayu?

Can't wait to see

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 34 (13)
Post by: imteedee on August 11, 2013, 01:11:26 PM
eerm Mayuuu nooo! don't let Yuki go!!  :frustrated:
Tomochin  :on voodoo: :on thumbb:

Paruru, KojiHaru, Yucchan !!! you all are scary here  :on freeze:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 34 (13)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on August 11, 2013, 06:37:05 PM
tomochin no baka!!!!! :angry: :angry:
don't you dare hurt mayuyu!!! :banghead:
why rena? why didn't you let jurina help you? and yes!!! why not jurina?! :angry: :( :(
yuki, why you with rena?! mou!!!!!!! :smhid :banghead:
mayuyu's in trouble!!!!!!!! panic! panic! :panic: :shocked :cry: :cry:
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 34 (13)
Post by: Zita on August 11, 2013, 09:57:48 PM
 :banghead: :banghead: :banghead: :banghead: :banghead: :banghead: :banghead: :banghead: :banghead: :banghead: :banghead:
RENAAAAAA!!!!! WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING.
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 34 (13)
Post by: kurogumi on August 12, 2013, 03:28:56 PM
It breaking my heart slowly

Mayu dont leave yuki...but but mayu right,yuki not gonna be fine if mayu death,(well the what if chapter make me realized what could happen if mayu's died)

Still dont know why yuko and other came back...

What you felt after wrote mayuki break up cmze-san? Ah it can't describe with a word maybe~ LOL
.m
Thank for the update cmze-san
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 34 (13)
Post by: kenjoy12 on August 13, 2013, 09:46:40 AM
AAAHHHHHHHHHH~!  :banghead: :banghead: :banghead: :banghead: :banghead: :banghead: :banghead:\

WHYYYYYY?! It's breaking my heart! My goodness~!  :cry: :cry: :cry:

TOMOCHIN~! NOOOOO~! I should have just cut your tongue eh~!

UUUUPPPPPDDDDAAATTTTEEEE SSSSOOOONNNNNN~! OOONNNNEEEEGGGAAAIIIII~!  :banghead: :banghead:  :bow: :bow: :bow:

Thank you for your hard work and update :kneelbow: :twothumbs
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 34 (13)
Post by: gek geki on August 17, 2013, 04:30:53 AM
WELL JUST BREAK MAYUKI APART FOR NOW
MORE FAST MORE GOOD
WELL BUT THEY WILL BE TOGETHER AGAIN IN THE FUTURE (IS A MUST!!!)
THIS IS FOR THE SAKE OF YUKI


WE NEED SOME TEARS CMZE SAN!! TEARS.... !!! KEKEKEKEKKEKEKEKKEKE


WOULD YOU LIKE TO ADD ANNIN AS JURINA'S YOU KNOW?? TO MAKE RENA JEALOUS...I NEVER SEEN RENA GET JEALOUS BECAUSE OF SOMEONE SO CLOSE TO HER BELOVED SISTER
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 34 (13)
Post by: Terragen on August 17, 2013, 03:08:03 PM
ok i will take my time to prepare the breaking scene of mayuki....gosh it will be sad and bitter scene for me
even mayu do for yuki's good,but it can be help hurt mayu too a lot because she think that she could not have yuki~
poor

and about gek geki san mention about adding annin as a new charecter well it's a good thing but it's but the king here (cmze sama of course)
wonder if that really happen,what rena feel hahaha but i think that not gonna happen until season three or so that i think heh


thank
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 34 (13) ANNOUNCEMENT!!
Post by: cmze on August 20, 2013, 04:59:40 AM
Hello my dear readers :)

I wish this announcement would be some other reason and not the one I'm about to say but I can't do anything about health come first.

Since a while I had abdominal pain but I was scare going to the doctor, I don't like doctors so one day my pain became bigger so I had to go :/

Now I have something and well I will not update my fanfics for a while hope you understand.

I'm so thankful to everyone who's been supporting me as a writer since I began "I was a completely mess as a writer but you still like it~  I WON't forget that"  :grin:

Don't think this doesn't hurt me, it does but I don't wanna go leaving everyone kinda sad about it but instead smiling  :nervous

Thanks u thank u and thank u x 100000000000= u guys are the best!

Hope someday come back and finish all my fanfics I feel really sorry about that.. I know how it feels when something is not concluded!  :catglare: :banghead:

Please don't forget me because I WON't!! Thank you again :)

From CMZE the stupid author xP

Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 34 (13) ANNOUNCEMENT!!
Post by: olive29 on August 20, 2013, 05:04:16 AM
It's ok..

I understand..

Get well soon, cmze-san...
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 34 (13) ANNOUNCEMENT!!
Post by: cisda83 on August 20, 2013, 05:08:21 AM
I understand...

Get well soon...

Be waiting for your return.

Good luck...

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 34 (13) ANNOUNCEMENT!!
Post by: BbSis on August 20, 2013, 05:10:09 AM
cmze-san!! Get better soon and don't avoid doctors! They are there to help you ;)

I know I'm not commenting recently, but I'm reading your updates. All of them! I'll surely be sad to not have your stories updated, specially this one because it's my favorite of yours, but I totally understand. Get well first, write later =] ganbatte on your treatment~~

I surely won't forget you because you and your stories are already in may heart  :heart:

Get well soon~~ My life will get less color without your Mayuki =3
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 34 (13) ANNOUNCEMENT!!
Post by: kenjoy12 on August 20, 2013, 08:12:30 AM
GET WELL SOON!

WE'LL BE WAITING FOR YOUR RETURN~

 :cow: :cow: :cow:

:twothumbs :twothumbs

:kneelbow:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 34 (13) ANNOUNCEMENT!!
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on August 20, 2013, 05:55:29 PM
Cmze-sama!!  :cry:
Get well soon! Will be praying for you health!! :prayers: :omamori: :kneelbow:
I really really luv your fics :cow: :bow: :heart:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 34 (13) ANNOUNCEMENT!!
Post by: gek geki on September 01, 2013, 12:48:35 PM
I will wait and never forget you

Remember this is the best fanfic
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 34 (13) ANNOUNCEMENT!!
Post by: Shinoki on September 01, 2013, 03:59:33 PM
cmze-san! ganbatte.
and of course we'll never forget ya
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 34 (13) ANNOUNCEMENT!!
Post by: chiqinna on September 02, 2013, 01:15:56 PM
Hope you get well and healthy..  :)
will wait your updates anytime...   :D
and never forget you!  :twothumbs
you're great author!!  :thumbsup
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 34 (13) ANNOUNCEMENT!!
Post by: imteedee on September 02, 2013, 03:41:03 PM
Why am I getting this feeling that you're saying bai bai for good?  :cry: :cry: :cry:
You can't leave me like this!  :panic:


 :frustrated: :on cloudeye: get well soon -er?  XD
 
Much Love,
Your Fan  :(
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 34 (13) ANNOUNCEMENT!!
Post by: Terragen on September 04, 2013, 01:25:03 PM
Cmze sama fighting!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 34 (13) ANNOUNCEMENT!! 22/09
Post by: cmze on September 22, 2013, 11:15:05 PM
I was thinking and I got to the conclusion  that I need help to finish my fanficsI can't be completely involved with "writting"  due to my illness, I still have pain and that don't let  me do it properly so I wanna finish them  "I don't wanna keep you waiting" .
Is there someone able to help me  with that? Someone who's not completely busy with his/her life and can deal with it.
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 34 (13) ANNOUNCEMENT!! 22/09
Post by: imteedee on September 22, 2013, 11:24:29 PM
I'm offering my help LOL *seems desperate enough already  XD
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 34 (13) ANNOUNCEMENT!! 22/09
Post by: mo-chan on September 22, 2013, 11:34:15 PM
I really want to help you but I can use pc only saturday T_T
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 34 (13) ANNOUNCEMENT!! 22/09
Post by: itamana on September 23, 2013, 12:00:51 AM
uh... I think I can help you... but I only online at night (+7.00 GMT at my place)..... except for sunday....

well, if you don't mind.... thx
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 34 (13) ANNOUNCEMENT!! 22/09
Post by: cmze on September 23, 2013, 03:09:52 AM
Itamana: Okay I just don't know how to read that time  :banghead: :lol: no,Thank u appreciate your help  :thumbsup

Mo-chan: it's fine, I don't want to disturb you.. You been reading me since forever that's a big help :peace:

Imteedee: desperate?  :lol: I just wanna conclude, I don't like the feeling of "unfinished business"  :nervous besides I wanna finish all before leaving for good.

Well I should pm u but I wanna know everyone think about the plan.

It's  simple and might be considered selfish "I want u guys to write the chapters.." If you agree I would tell you what's suppose to happen in the next chapter but you will have to develope it to write the hole chapter "Like ordering." You'll get the thanks cause you'll post it as a reply on the thread to not make A bigger MESS. 

I KNOW IT'S SELFISH AND IF U WANNA BACK OUT IT'S OKAY!  :)

(BTW: I know I just posted a new fic and some of u could think "But you just wrote something, why can't you finish the others?" I already had it so I decided to post it after a long while of thinking "should I do it or not? I'm not fully recovered and they would think I am and I might leave them again hanging.")

Somehow as weird it sounds I feel attached to my readers even if u guys don't feel the same like if I owe u something. Sorry I'm like that with everyone I don't like to disappoint!

I know my fics are not the big deal but still..
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 34 (13) ANNOUNCEMENT!! 22/09
Post by: imteedee on September 23, 2013, 04:33:41 AM
LOL nah, I mean  "me", I'm the one desperate to know what happens next  XD
Sure thing, well I have my time so I can do ti :)
And nah, I'll send it to you and post it, I still want to see you, the one posting chapters :P

So, we're good :)
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 34 (13) ANNOUNCEMENT!! 22/09
Post by: itamana on September 23, 2013, 10:08:13 PM
Ah, sorry if you can't read it.... forget it.. LOL :lol: :lol:

can I have a try??? but i'm sorry if the result is bad...  :( :(  :bow:

like imteede-san, i'll send it to you and post it.... :thumbsup

thank you.....
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 34 (13) ANNOUNCEMENT!! 22/09
Post by: imteedee on September 24, 2013, 01:42:58 AM
A/N remember, cmze is still the 'brain' behind the original story..I'm just here to offer my typing service (LOL) Pardon my work, I tried to imitate  a bit cmze's writing style, which we all love, to maintain the 'feels' apparently failed, cause I have my own 'sorry'. Anyway, I'm so happy that this fict is updated. Please enjoy.

xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Time is Good as Gold


Chapter 35(14)


And soon the fated day, Thursday has arrived, the day of their long-awaited class’s trip. They arrived at a certain rural area, surrounded by a mini-forest-like landform.

After all that have happened between the two, Yuki decided to stay stronger as she felt Mayu’s slowly slipping from her hands. That’s when she realized Mayu started to avoid her for no apparent reason. She kept on asking herself what went wrong, or did she even do a single bad thing to make her this ‘unaffectionate’ towards the troubled older girl. Yuki tried to approach the seemingly ‘cold’ figure in front of her, but Mayu just averted her eyes towards the not-so different expressionless girl beside her, Sae. And soon the two girls vanished from Yuki’s eyes.


“What’s wrong Mayu?” Yuki thought as she stared at her clenched wounded fist, remembering all the troubles she’s having that particular moment. She needed Mayu the most, but why isn’t she comforting me when I expected the most?
Yuki is still lost on her thoughts when she happened to pass by a group of unknown girls who are having a mini chit-chat about anything under the sun across the swarm of the students who just unloaded from the buses when suddenly a familiar name slipped out of playful tongue of a certain girl

“I learned Tomochin’s still in the hospital” said the one girl.

“I wonder what really happened to her~” the other girl responded.

Her eyes shot open as early as she heard the name, Tomochin, the one who angered her a few days ago, the monster along with Paruru and all that Black Queens who tried to reborn the dormant Gekikara deep inside Rena. It’s the only thing she didn’t want to happen aside from Mayu leaving her side.



=====


Mayu tried her hardest to avoid Yuki’s glances. The smaller girl totally knew what’s been happening between the two of them and yet she endured the pain of seeing the sadness coming from the taller girl who kept on staring at her with pleading eyes. “I should make things better, before I leave you Yuki~” Mayu thought as she averted her eyes from the piercing stare of Yuki and attended the gloomy figure beside her, Sae.

Sae just let a sigh as she walked towards the resting area with Mayu by her side And After a few hours of nonsensible conversations from the girls surrounding the Genking, Sae, the students heard an alerting call from the newest professor in the school, Oshima-sensei.

“Okay, so to get things right and smoothly as possible let’s organize ourselves first, okay?” Yuko, stepping on a high chair, explained in front of pool of students.

Yuki hoped she gets paired with her ladylove but all her hopes faltered as she heard a different name after Mayu’s. Rena beside her never had a chance to console the down figure and just decided to pat her shoulder.

“Mayu would be with Sae” Yuko announced as she paid a glance on the two side by side figures.

In the end, Mayu went with Sae and Yuki was paired with Mocchi, who apparently just came from a Tennis Championship outside the city. Rena gets paired with Airin.


=====


Meanwhile, inside a dark cold lone room, a figure can be seen recoiling in an odd manner as she buried herself under the thick mattress, Jurina. “I wonder how you feel towards me~” she thought as she tightens her hug with her knees. “How are you doing, Rena….?” Jurina thought on her depressing state one would oughtta know. 


Jurina POV



I still remember the days when we’re still younger, You were my shield, my home....

xxxxxxxxx

“Jurina! Come here!” A younger Rena shouted over to Jurina who plays along with her other friends. Jurina still wearing her smile, a proof of her enjoyment with the others, walked towards the older girl.

“What’s the problem?” Jurina asked.

“Stay here….just right here~” Rena blushing uttered as she averted her eyes from the pleading eyes of the puppy girl.

“are you jealous?” Jurina asked mischievously as she shortens the proximity between the two of them.

“I’m not!” Rena turned her back and was about to go when suddenly Jurina hugged her from behind locking her up with both arms pressing her body as close as possible. The gesture made Rena ever redder.


“you’re the only one for me~”

xxxxxxxxx

You’ve changed…

You hurt me a countless times…

But why?


=====


As soon as their activities started, Yuki couldn’t seem to find Mayu anywhere else as if being over-protective once again to her girlfriend. She felt all alone as she stated to feel failure engulfed around her scanning the swarm of students without Mayu and Sae in it. Instead the pair who caught her eyes was Rena and Airin. Yuki couldn’t help but to notice the smile plastered across the overjoyed figure beside Rena.

“Did I see her blush there?” Yuki thought as Airin unintentionally held (if not) Rena’s hand while helping the pale raven-haired woman. Yuki getting more curious or more likely irritated with such unpleasant scenery before her eyes unconsciously started to follow the two figures endlessly.

Airin’s happiness couldn’t be denied as she kept her smile towards Rena who seemed not minding anything and kept on her pace, doing the activities given by Yuko.


=========


Meanwhile, the squirrel teacher is almost losing her control over the seductive figure beside her who kept on clinging on her since the beginning.

“Woi! I paired you with someone else~ why are you still here?” Yuko coyly asked the tall seductive girl but in reality enjoying her presence.

“mou~ I don’t know her at all, why not pair me with you then?” the airhead girl asked as she hugged the petite teacher from her back.

“tch! You can’t be with a professor!” Yuko weakly tries the hug which she, in reality, enjoying while Haruna just tightened the hug.

“AHHH this is dangerous!!” Yuko thought almost losing her cool from the taller girl’s aggression towards her.


=========


“Okay, carry this and this and this…..” Sae uttered as she kept on throwing stuff on Mayu’s vulnerable slim arms. Mayu isn’t bothered at all since her mind is wandering elsewhere, thinking of a particular person, Yuki. Mayu kindly obliged on every Sae’s desires setting aside her unhealthy state. From carrying stuff one couldn’t imagine and actually isn’t even needed up to bringing Sae some food and water. All of those, Mayu did.

“Yuki, what are you doing now?” Mayu thought as she mindlessly walks beside her partner who apparently seems enjoying her evilness towards the smaller girl.


=========


Meanwhile on the other end of the area, two arguing figures can be seen. Yuki and Mocchi, who seem not very pleased with their progress with the activities since all they did was to ran after Rena and the seemingly in love Airin.

“See? Look! We haven’t finished anything yet! It’s your fault!” Mocchi shouted and pointed her finger at Yuki.

“Huh? WOW!! So you care now huh? Ultimate BLACK QUEEN!” Yuki answered in the same manner but empahzing the last three words. Mocchi was taken aback from the sudden statement from Yuki and just wore a blank clueless face.
 
“You don’t have to deny it~” Yuki’s eyebrows narrowed as she kept a furious stare at the figure in front of her.

“W-What are you talking about?! You’re crazy! Tch~” Mocchi stuttered as she averted her eyes from Yuki’s.

Yuki felt a little confused with Mocchi’s response, obviously denying her allegations, as a question suddenly popped inside her head. “If you’re not….then who?”


=======


After the activites, the students started to pool around the recreation area to have a brief rest. Yuki lost in her thoughts, as she mindlessly wandered across the area, laid at last her eyes towards a very much familiar figure, Mayu, who seems tired and pale, also slightly panting, probably because of her hard-work throughout the day. Yuki turned her eyes on the figure close the resting Mayu, Sae who kept attending the other unknown girls’ nonsensible questions towards her despite of Mayu’s condition. She couldn’t help but feel fire heat up her head and rush towards the uncaring partner of Mayu.

“What happened to Mayu?!” Yuki almost shouting at the shocked Genking before her.

“Happened? What are you talking about?!” Sae averted her eyes and turned her body away from Yuki with a grin plastered on her face.


Yuki once again paid a glance on her poor girlfriend who seems has noticed the commotion she’s making with Sae. Mayu looks terribly worried as she kept her weak eyes opened to watch her girlfriend’s actions.

“Yuki~ stop…please” Mayu pleadingly asked still supporting her weight on her knees.

Yuki couldn’t resist her cool, rushed towards Sae and launched a hard punch towards Sae. Sae being shocked with the sudden move of Yuki wasn’t able to avoid the aggression and landed on the floor.

“YOU!!!” Yuki shouted as she glared to Sae with burning eyes. Thankfully Rena who just arrived at the area was fast enough to withhold Yuki’s future advances towards the down figure.

“Yuki~ stop! Stop!” Rena uttered as she struggles on holding the burning Yuki at hand. Suddenly, the professors led by Yuko arrived at the commotion happening.

“WHAT HAPPENED?!” Yuko frantically asked among the students especially the three stars of the seemingly skit happening.

Yuki, Sae and Rena.

Finally, Yuki calmed down in Rena’s arm and turned her back but still feeling anger towards Sae. “It’s my fault” Yuki confessed as she bowed lowly on Yuko. Yuko just paid the two a very much seemingly warning stare as she drove away the swarm of student around them.


“Yuki~ we need to talk” Yuko uttered.


=====


Almost all of the students are now enjoying their free time towards the end of the day. Rena sitting beside Airin keeps on staring at her almost burning marshmallow at hand. Her mind wandered across her dreamland as she worries about Yuki who apparently received her sanction because of what she did to Sae. Yuko decided to isolate Yuki from the others for the time being as her sanction. It’s not more of a sanction but more like of taking precautions not to make any other person gets hurt from Yuki’s madness, Madness coming from her ‘so-called obssession’ towards her girlfriend.

“How are you now, Yuki?” Rena thought as she noticed her marshmallow already slipped and fell down from her stick as Airin kept her worried look.

“Are you alright?” Airin asked Rena.

“I guess not….” Rena responded as she stood up and walked towards the other side of the area.

=======

Everyone seems enjoying the bonfire. Small chit-chats can be heard around the bonfire coming out from the overly-excited figures towards the end of the day.
 
“Since we’re here, why not talk about horror stories?!” one student close to Mayu suggested.

“kyaa~ I don’t like horror stories!” the girl beside reacted as she clang on her friend.

Mayu just chuckled on their mindless conversstions, as she felt a little distracted from her reality. “Yuki, where are you?” she thought as she’s not being able to find Yuki with her eyes. Feeling a huge guilt from not attending her girlfriend’s needs she opted to grab a pack of marshmallows resting in her front and paved her way towards where Yuki might be at.

Her brisk steps seemed endless as she wandered across the pool of students. Until she found Yuki…

But she’s not alone..

Rena’s with her…

Hugging her.

Mayu felt weak as if a sharp knife has stabbed on her heart seeing Yuki on other's arms. Tears began to form and pool on the corners of her eyes. She stood alone watching the two hug each other.

And soon the poor marshmallows have escaped from her weak grip.


Mayu left.


======


~few moments ago~

“I knew you’re here” Rena uttered as she found Yuki sitting alone on the far away corner from where she was. Yuki just smiled at her and tapped the space beside her. Rena accepted the offer and sat beside the down figure.

“Does it hurt?” Rena asked without looking to Yuki. Yuki kept her silence.

“I’ll be here..no matter what..” Rena murmured as she held Yuki’s clenched fist. Yuki nodded softly understanding Rena’s warm support on her.


“I-I just….” Yuki’s voice started to crumble as she was about to cry.

“Ssshh….” Rena uttered as she pulled Yuki on her arms and hugged the figure tightly. Yuki just surrendered on her misery as her silent cries echoed.


“I’ll be here, Yuki”

Yuki calming down as if she felt energized from Rena's warm support suddenly plastered a fierce expression as she remembered her recent interaction with Mocchi.

"Mocchi..." Yuki uttered with a blank face. Rena just turned her head towards Yuki. "hmmm.."


"She's clueless...."  Yuki uttered as Rena fell upon the confusing air filling them.




~Part end~
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14)
Post by: cmze on September 24, 2013, 02:15:23 AM
NICE!!  :heart:

My writing suck yours it's way better!!   :bow:

Thank you for posting  :thumbsup

Now I'm the fan waiting for more!!  :shakeit:

Please update soon! :)




Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14)
Post by: imteedee on September 24, 2013, 02:19:27 AM
Now, see cmze? now you know how are we feeling chapter after chapter!

haha it's weird even if i knew what's gonna happen couldn't help but to react as a Fan!!

OMG! Mayu AGAIN for the NTH time! what are you doing?!??! Don't let Yuki goooo!!  :cry:

I sitll like your cheesy style though  XD
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14)
Post by: qweakb on September 24, 2013, 07:13:22 AM
cmze, please get well soon..

Thanks for the updated imteede who willingly to help cmze for the story :kneelbow:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14)
Post by: chiqinna on September 24, 2013, 11:32:42 AM
thank you so much for Imteedee-san and cmze-san for the update!
You guys really did a good job!  :twothumbs
Poor Mayu..  :cry: how many already she saw YukiRena moments~
and that break her heart even more but she is trying to leave Yuki for good..
can't wait for the next update!
I wish I could help but I will ended with nonsense things so I just will support you guys to finish the fics!  :thumbsup
and I hope you get well and healthy soon cmze-san!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on September 24, 2013, 08:11:03 PM
sae baka! why you treat mayu as a slave! :angry:
mou rena go back to jurina!! :temper:
mayuyu :cry: yuki and rena made mayuyu cry! :scolding: yuki you owe mayuyu big time!! :on redcard:
thanx for the update cmze-san and Imteedee-san  :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14)
Post by: cmze on October 11, 2013, 09:08:00 PM
Hello everyone..  :grin:

I'm sorry if I'm not coming with good news but I have to tell you this is the last time I'll be online I'm sorry :nervous

This message is to tell you I'm out, I'm sorry!   :peace:

Inteedee and itanma has now what happen in this fanfic~ if they want they can finish it!

I hope they do..

If anyone wants any of my fanfics you can have it and finish it I don't mind, you would do me a favor..  :thumbsup

Thanks for everything~

GOOD BYE~ wish u the best!!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14) ANNOUNCEMENT!!
Post by: cmze on October 11, 2013, 09:08:36 PM
                                  ~Time is good as gold~

Hello everyone.. another fanfic? Yeahh my sister's girlfriend is almost over so i had to make another one! :P

My cyborg:  Feeling happy cause the new story line! :) 

I'm everything you need: Feeling uninspired!x_X;

Wild love: Every chapter gives me headache..because so much ideas on my head!!  ;)

Akb boarding school: keeping it longer cause it's my only fanfic which have my many pairings! xD  (but also think it's time to end)

My sister's girlfriend : Everything good has to end! :D

Kojijuu fanfic: Yep this one has to end too! :P

Loving you: It's to replace my sister girlfriend.. i think hope is going to be good as that one ^^;

Time is good as gold: I wanted to make a sad fanfic so hope you like it.. (MaYuki btw)

                                             CH. 1

So many people around me,touching me and checking my pulse..

"I'm okay as long she's by my side.." i tried to murmure but they didn't hear me cause my voice is not strong

"Doctor her pulse is dropping!" A nurse says worried

"They're carrying me on a stretcher and now i can't hear a thing that they're talking but does it really matter listen to them?"

"No,because i don't wanna hear anyway! i'm happy couse what i got in this short period.. i been in love,i been out of love, i been mad,i been sad,i been hungry"

But those feelins are nothing compare to her smile..

"I'll never forget that smile and also the name of the one who owned it.."

"Kashiwagi Yuki.." I murmure while i look up to the lights of the hospital that are on the ceiling

Many people had the wrong description of her..

*They would say she is strong (i would say she's vulnerable)

*They would say she has everything thag anyone wants ( i would say she's lonely)

The would say she's cruel (i would say she's just a kid)

*They would say she's unpredictable (i would say she's unique)

*They would say she's cold  (i would say she's sweet)

*They would say she's heartless (i would say she has too much love to give)

*They would call her black (i would call her Yukirin)

 The beginning: Before the little pov

In one of the most expensive girls school in Japan..

~Outside the headmaster office~

 "Yuki chan why you insist to not repect our teachers, Look where it got you to the principal office and i think they called your parents!" A handsome tomboy girl says while sits next to her friend

Yuki only looked other way annoyed

"Sae chan maths is about to start,let's go!" A girl says while takes her arm to pull her up

Sae sighs and gets up"Rena chan, i wanna stay here supporting Yuki chan!" she says complaining

"i think Yuki chan want us to go..Now" Rena says while pushes Sae with her

Yuki ignore the two and waited for her parents to come

Soon the headmaster's secretary told her to enter to the office

~Insisde the office~

Yuki sitted in front of the headmaster

"So Kashiwagi san when are you going to stop coming to my office?" The headmaster asked

Yuki ignored her

"i called your parents..*noise of the door opening*

Yuki smirks then turns her head and her smirk fade away when she saw her butler coming closer

"You again!" She shouted mad as she get up

"Kashiwagi san" The butler says shocked

"They are never going to come!" Yuki murmured looking other way

"They're on a business trip!" The butler says as she sits next to Yuki

Yuki runs away from the office pushing away the secretary who was entering to the office bringing coffee

"Get off my way!" Yuki says as she pushes her

"Kashiwagi san!" The headmaster shouted

"don't worry we'll pay for everything.." The butler says moving her head side to side

~Outside in the hall~ was already lunchtime so everyone was on the halls walking or chatting

"Yuki chan.." Someone says and grabs her by her arm

Yuki looked at the girl "let go bitch!" she says as she pushes her to the lockers

"Yuki chan!" Sae says worried but then someone grabbed her hand

"don't.." Rena murmured serious

Everyone looked at the scene

"what's wrong with you?"  Another girl with short hair asked as she helps the first girl to get up

"That's not of yor bussines!" Yuki says mad as she walks away with a black aura

Everyone moving of her way..

"Thanks Jurina!" The girl says

"Don't worry Sasshi!" Jurina replies with a smile then looked at the figure who was already many steps forward and pouted

"That girl.. i wish she'll pay everything she does to anyone in this school!" Jurina murmured

"Her family gives big donations to this school so she's the Queen!" Another girl says as she picks Sasshi's books from the floor

"Yui.." Sasshi says then smiled

~After a few minutes~
Yuki entered to her room still mad and started to destroy everything around

 "who needs you?" she shouted as she throws all the things that was on her desk on the floor then used a bat to destroy the tv

Sae and Rena stood outside hearing her friend shouting and destroying everything inside the room

"what are you looking at?" Sae asked to some girls who were also listening

*The girls walked away*

Soon Yuki got tired of crying and shouting so she throwed herself on bed and fell sleep

*Once Rena and Sae notice that they went to their room*

~After a few hours~

Mayuyu Are you sure about that? A sad mother asks as she watches her doughter putting her clothes inside a bag

"Mom,i'm gonna be fine that's school is amazing and i really wanna study there!" Mayu replies with a smile

"but.. you know.." Mayu's mom says sad

"Mom *sighs* i wanna live as a normal teenege girl before dying.." Mayu says as walks closer and hugs her mom

"You're my special child and you're not going to die!" She says as she kisses Mayu's head

Mayu breaks the hug and closes her bag "Now take me to that school!"

~Inside the car~

"You know i'm really proud of you.." Mayu's dad says with a smile

Mayu smile as she looks through the window

"entering to a rich kids school,it's not an easy thing so good luck!" Mayu's dad says

"Thanks.." Mayu says

"You know Mayu you always been strong,your stupid doctor thought you wouldn't make it to 16 years old but here you are!" Her dad says while drives

*Mayu's mom hit him on his head with a newspaper*

Mayu smiles

They got to the gates

"Those are big gates..." Mayu thought as they passes

(They got to the school)

Mayu's dad got out of the car "This place looks like a castle!" he said stunned and took her bag

"I can do it myself!" Mayu says as she gets out and takes the bag

"You have your pills there honey! right?" her mom asks

"yes!" Mayu replies then she kisses her mom and dad and walks away inside

*The two worried parents entered to the car and left*

Mayu looked amazed everything inside the school "this place is totally different from my other school!" she murmured as she walks the hall and everyone looks at her

"Hello new girl.. i'm Matsui Jurina!" a girl says as she extends her hand

Mayu was shocked first but then shook her hand "i'm Watanabe Mayu!" she replied with a smile
 
"You're pretty" Jurina says smiling

"Oh.. thanks!" Mayu says feeling strange

Jurina let go Mayu's hand  "you have to go to the secretary to tell you where's your room and give you your uniforms and books!"

"okay where she is?" Mayu asked

"In the other building,this is the building of the rooms passing the basketball court and the running track you'll see a big building that one is the classrooms,headmaster and secretary building!" Jurina says as she points to the other building

Mayu sighs "Thanks Jurina!" she says as she walks away

"be carefull with the players there..at this hours Black is running" Jurina murmured

As she walks,she couldn't help admire the big campus the school have

So many girls making sports

Mayu stopped walking and looked at the girls playing basketball "i wish i could do that.." she murmure sad as her right hand reach her chest

"hey!" Someone shouts then pushed Mayu and rolled on the floor with her

"Yuki chan.." Rena says

Mayu was on top of the other girl

Both had eye contact for a moment till the taller girl pushed Mayu off her

"Are you stupid or blind?"The taller girl asked yelling mad as she gets up

"Sorry.." Mayu replied as she gets up

"Yuki chan calm down!" Rena says

Yuki takes Mayu by her arm " Look at my knees i'm bleeding!" she says as she presses tigher on her arm while she looks on Mayu's eyes

"you're hurting me!" Mayu says in pain also looking at Yuki

"hey let go!"  A girl says
 
"Jurina.." Mayu says

Yuki let go Mayu's arm and turned to look at Jurina "you stupid kid again!" she says

"Let's go Mayu.." Jurina says serious

Yuki pouted "just because she's your adopted sister!" she murmured looking at Rena then walked away

Rena looked other way sad then followed her friend

Mayu and Jurina looked at the older girls walking away

what's wrong with her? Mayu asked

what's not wrong with her? Jurina answered

Jurina helped Mayu with everything and even led her to her room which was the same as her

We're roomies! Jurina says smiling and hugging Mayu
while she opens the door

Ta-da! Jurina says showing the room

*It was a cool room a littler,two desks,a tv and many other things*

"My bed is this one!" Jurina says as climbs to her bed

Mayu smiles "okay i'll take the one down.." she says as he puts her bag on it

Jurina gets down "i'll bring some snacks to celebrate wait for me!" she says as she leaves

Mayu nods then starts putting out the things of her bag while she puts her things on her desk she notices a mirror on the wall

She looked herself at it and  fixed her hair then opened a few buttons of her shirt

"It's a new start please don't ruin it!" Mayu says as she sees the scar on her chest then sighs

TO BE CONTINUED!! COMMENT!!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on October 11, 2013, 10:36:32 PM
cmze-san!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :ptam-wub: :ptam-hbk: :OMG: :frustrated: :gyaaah: :pleeease: :tantrum: :on speedy: :mon ref: :mon spit: :mon scare: :mon hanky: :mon waterworks: :mon nwei: :mon runcry: :mon love:
you are literally one of my favourite writers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :shocked :shocked :shocked :shocked :shocked :shocked :shocked :shocked :shocked :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic:
i will miss you and your wonderful fanfics!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i really wish you woudn't leave!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :ptam-cry: :badluck: :fainted: :mon cry:
thank you for all you done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :cow: :bow: from mayuki_daisuki
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14)
Post by: imteedee on October 12, 2013, 03:04:35 AM
I'm feeling down.... really. can't even find a suitable emoticon how sad I'm feeling right now.
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14)
Post by: BbSis on October 12, 2013, 03:25:40 AM
 :OMG: :OMG: :OMG: :OMG:  :gyaaah: :gyaaah: :gyaaah: :gyaaah: :fainted: :fainted: :fainted: :on speedy: :on speedy: :on speedy:


 :dizzy: I'll respect your decision >< I hope you decide to come back when you get well =] In that mean time, I'll truly miss you  :heart:  Actually I miss you already :love:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14)
Post by: Shinoki on October 12, 2013, 03:32:31 AM
...me... I'm crying...

let's just say that I respect you a lot... cmze-san... sayonara...
I hope you get better though I have no idea what illness you had(or still have depending on the situation...)...
(I'm going to be mad and cry if you die or something! >.<!!)

Your fics were some of the first AKB fanfics that I'd read if I think about it...
Sayonara? No, rather than that... I hope we can meet you again.
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14)
Post by: chiqinna on October 12, 2013, 01:21:40 PM
My favourite author, I can't say anything if that was your decision.  :cry:

I think you deserve a LEGEND AUTHOR in this thread for making so many of awesome fics with awesome stories.

I will always remember you!

yeah...and I'm thinking again, I don't want to involve on continue your fics,

I hope Imteedee-san or other author could do it.

I don't want to ruin it with my nonsense. there are many other great authors.

I'm not good enough. be healthy!  :heart:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14)
Post by: an_93 on October 12, 2013, 06:29:42 PM
I JUST ENTERED HERE FOR YOU!!!  :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:
What should  I do? I read your fics since always I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!!!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14)
Post by: imteedee on October 12, 2013, 06:42:56 PM
Announcement:

I would like you guys to know, as paying respect to one of my favorite writers (well in fact, the very reason why I even registered in this forum, as you can see on my very first post in Jhpip)

this is definitely one of the best fanfics I've ever read so far :O *I even made an account here just to comment* nyahaha very well done

I'm going to fulfill the ending of 'Time is Good as Gold' together with the help of other trusted writers (mayuki-daisuki, itamana)  However, the other fics are out of my hands anymore, to be honest I'd rather leave it like that than seeing somebody else updating it other than cmze. I'm very sorry. I'm with you guys, I am trully very sad hearing such news.

cmze, you'll be missed. I hope I get to see you on other forums in the future.

imteedee
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14)
Post by: an_93 on October 12, 2013, 08:34:14 PM
But I just asked her or his fanfic MY BOYFRIEND AND  MY FIANCE  and  said "Do as you please :sweatdrop:"
So I want to update that fic of course I'm not ginious like him or her but I'll try  :nervous
You make me feel bad cause  I want that fanfic!!!  :cry:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on October 12, 2013, 10:18:35 PM
i feel the same way as imteedee-san but dont worries cuz cmze-san she doesnt mind and it would actually do her favour, so go for it!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14)
Post by: an_93 on October 12, 2013, 10:54:30 PM
Wait a minute O_o
Cmze is a GIRL!!!  :shocked
Anyways thanks for the support~
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on October 12, 2013, 11:03:27 PM
i dont know the last time i checked the account it said female :lol:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14)
Post by: an_93 on October 17, 2013, 06:39:50 AM
WANT THIS TO BE UPDATE LIKE NAO!!!  :shocked :nervous :thumbup :peace:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14)
Post by: imteedee on November 09, 2013, 12:34:12 PM
pardon this ultra late update  :nervous Tii is busy with some stuff as of the moment so forgive me for this update, it turned out ot be ultra short *insert facepalm here*


Chapter 36

“I think it’s better…ending this now…” The smaller figure uttered with her head down, standing right in front of her was a taller figure who was wearing a big smile which instantly turned to void. It’s as if time has stopped as the leaves swayed along the windy atmosphere in the middle of the forest-like space around them. Words that never registered on Yuki…It’s so sudden and yet expected. But it’s the only thing she would never wanted hearing of. They were alone, she would’ve shed a tear but she simply couldn’t seem to. Her mind was blank. “Am I dreaming? I must be….”


“Why?” the taller figure muttered but her stance didn’t show any demand. She just stood there, her eyes straight to Mayu. “It’s better this way…” The smaller figure answered, still not paying a glance on Yuki as she kept her head down, was it guilt? Fear? Fear of seeing a pleading expression she might not be able to resist... “No. I won’t let it happen…” Yuki responded as she reached for Mayu’s hand. Mayu felt heavy, she wanted to hold her, to embrace her, to kiss her, the one she loves the most, the one she hold dearest….the most important person, Yuki.

But she’s afraid.

It’s for the best.

It’s as if Yuki could read Mayu’s mind as she pulled the smaller figure for a hug; she expected Mayu would go against it, but she didn’t, the smaller figure just kept her head down leaning on the taller figure’s shoulder.”Don’t do this please…Mayu” It was when Yuki felt a pair of arms slithered around her waist, Mayu hugged her back. But it was different, it was tight seemingly an embrace bidding a goodbye. That time it only sank on her, she’s losing Mayu…as she felt crystals forming at the corners of her eyes.


“Please….don’t”
……………………………………………………………….


 “Seriously…” The squirrel professor uttered infuriately as she shoo away the clingy taller figure beside her. Though the taller cat-like didn’t even flinch on her feet as she continues her past time, seducing Yuko. “Why you don’t like me?” the taller figure coyly asked full of sarcasm as she tightened her grip on Yuko’s arm, sure enough she won’t let the poor squirrel professor go anywhere without her. But heavens must have sided on Haruna as Yuko started feeling relaxed with her, in fact, Yuko couldn’t even seem to describe her daily living if she wouldn’t even have a glance on her ‘proud stalker’.
She’s a pervert after all. She’s used to it.


The smaller figure just let a sigh as she surrendered on the taller figure’s aggression and dragged her with her unbelievable strength. Haruna didn’t mind, she enjoyed it.


“Well’ I guess, can’t be helped…..” Yuko grinned from ear to ear deep inside her thoughts.
…………………………………………………………………


It was already past-dinner time. Given a decent break-hour before their curfew, two figures decided to have a free stroll across the mini gazebo just behind the dining hall, Rena and Airin. It was small, though pretty well-furnished with its contemporary design, with its proper cozy lighting. Who wouldn’ve thought that this place would have such thing?

“Today is fun, nee?” Airin smiled at Rena, who seemed lost in a daze, lost on her thoughts. Indeed, Airin felt like in cloud nine that day, why not? She was paired up with her goddess, Rena. The unresponsiveness of her companion didn’t even bother her a bit instead it even made her a little pushy on Rena, her hand slowly delved for Rena’s hand, Gesture which made Rena drift away from her wavering thoughts over her recent learning from Yuki.


“Mocchi….she’s clueless”

Feeling the sudden sensation on her hand, her eyes widened up as she grasped the idea of Airin holding her hand. It was pleasant though, having such supportive presence of the girl she never knew would be.

“Whatever it is your thinking of, It’ll be okay, don’t worry” Airin said as if emitting a very reassuring aura from her, it was so good that it reached Rena. Rena’s previously chaotic mind suddenly turned calm along with her heart. It has been years since she felt like this, being petted by someone else; it was always her who supports someone else. Maybe she just became so selfless and blind.


Unconsciously, a smile drew across her face “Thank you, Airin”
…………………………………………………………………


It was almost curfew hours and so all the students were expected to come at their respective rooms. Apparently, the assignments were also based from their pairing as well, An idea that even pissed Yuki off. Not a chance she would let Mayu sleep with Sae even more she would feel a little stressed sleeping with Mocchi whom she just accused of being the most feared leader of the Black Queens.


Though such bewilderedness wasn’t able to overthrow the feeling of fear of losing Mayu, It’s her top priority that time. She must not let Mayu leave her side, not in a million chances. And so she hastily went after that very room Mayu’s supposed to sleep at as she shooed any other student blocking her way, as them in response made their way for Yuki.


It seems Sae have had enough of the morning skit and so as early as she was found by Yuki standing just outside their room, she distanced herself a bit seemingly giving Yuki her way. Though a soft ‘tch!” was heard from her, Yuki didn’t bother to answer anymore as she was full of Mayu in her mind. She held the knob and forcefully pushed the door.


And there, found Mayu sitting peacefully on a single sofa just reading a book. It seemed Yuki’s presence wasn’t a surprise at all for Mayu as she calmly snapped her book and placed over the coffee table beside her. “What is it Yuki?” Her eyes still not meeting Yuki.

“I’m not giving up, just so you know…” Yuki said firmly standing in front of Mayu.

“It’s not enough”

“Why are you doing this?”

“Love is a give and take relationship, it won’t last long if it’s not” Mayu finally looked up on Yuki, her eyes were cold. Hearing such sudden statement from Mayu, Yuki’s anxiety even fired up and didn’t even notice Mayu’s contrastingly body language; her hands were trembling….clutching onto her shirt’s helm.


“You saying you don’t love me anymore?” She wasn’t as good as Mayu in academics but her intellectual capacity was enough to deduct what Mayu meant that time and No, she wouldn’t ever believe such lie. Mayu didn’t answer instead she stood up and went after the door, gently holding the knob she opened it for Yuki “I guess, we’re done talking, leave….”


“I’ll only believe you….if you’d still say that……” Yuki recited as she slowly paved her way towards the smaller figure and soon stepping just in front of her she pushed her against the poor wooden door gaining a loud ‘bang’ as it shut closed.


Pushing herself against the smaller figure, she crashed her lips against Mayu’s, giving her a rough kiss, it was forceful and yet so pleasurable for Mayu. She missed it, that pair of lips she was actually longing for since the beginning, such rough kiss which turned soft as Yuki held her even closer. Her hands full of caring and affection towards Mayu.


Feelings that totally reached the poor suffering figure which made her heart melt, her eyes began to form crystals at the corner of her eyes, such devastating sight Yuki witnessed as she held back for a second and watch Mayu cry.
She was crying.


“Tell me…we’ll make it through” Yuki said as she held Mayu’s both shoulders and rested her chin on top of Mayu’s head. Mayu wasn’t able to held back her true feelings and so she broke down in tears as she covered her face with her hands.


“Just grant me a wish….Yuki”

“Tell me, I’ll do whatever it is”

“Don’t make it any harder….give up, it’s my wish”


TBC~

Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14)
Post by: olive29 on November 09, 2013, 01:21:50 PM
Mayuuuuu.... :cry:

Poor Mayuyu and Yukirin.

What will happen next??

Argghhh...update soon... :bow:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on November 09, 2013, 05:15:32 PM
my mayuki heart... :cry: *sigh*
onee-sama why you good at writing its no fair!   :nervous :P
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14)
Post by: rochilu on November 09, 2013, 06:50:24 PM
nooooo, please don't give up yuki :cry:
this is so sad ._.
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14)
Post by: mikaellitsa on November 09, 2013, 07:10:36 PM
noooooooooooooo nooooooooooooooo noooooooo :banghead:
dont give up yuki!!!!
mayu u only hurt yuki argggg -.-
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14)
Post by: Shinoki on November 10, 2013, 12:03:23 AM
this world is!!!
aaaaaaaah!!!
(well, amazing update!!)
YUKI!!!

print("YUKI","!" * 10000000000)
# in python, that'd be printing um...10000000000 exclamation marks after "YUKI"

I died... (a compliment as this was so... amazing... [me: a person with a lack of vocabulary when commenting])
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14)
Post by: an_93 on November 10, 2013, 06:48:56 AM
NICE HOY PULL IR PDF WELL CMZE SHOULD BE PROUD!!  :cry:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14)
Post by: chiqinna on November 13, 2013, 02:42:40 PM
Don't give up!!! please don't!!!  :frustrated: :frustrated: :frustrated: :frustrated:
thanks for updating/ continuing cmze-san's work TD~  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 37(16)
Post by: cmze on January 26, 2014, 10:20:26 AM
                                              ~Time is good as gold~
                                                            CH.37

Sitting on bench thinking about nothing Kashiwagi Yuki stood staring everyone who passes by "So this is how it feels being dumped.." She thought sad "But somehow I feel lighter" She whispered.

"Kashiwagi..." A voice called waking her up from her thoughts, she looked at the person in front of her, she was looking down then sighed "I heard about you and Mayu. Are you okay?" She asked looking other way.

Yuki smiled "We been hating each other for a while. What about if we stop with that and have fun like before?" She asked charmingly as she gets up and offers her hand which Sae grabbed fast.

"We should call Rena Chan!" Sae said excited. Yuki fast told her not to "Just you and me." She said calmed.

Sae smiled "Fine. What should we do?" She asked. Yuki smiled "Let's get out of Here!" She said still with a smile on her face the two run away.

~Meanwhile~

Matsui Jurina entered to her room and couldn't help to notice the word vibe Mayu was still on bed "Mayu Chan.. are you okay?" She asked worried as sees her pills spread over her desk.

Mayu covered herself with the blanket "I'm totally fine.." she replied lying to her friend. Jurina tried to take her blanket but Mayu was holding it tight. "C'mon you need to get out of there it's been 3 days already! You broke up with her so suck it up" she said having a hard time.

Jurina finally removed the blanket "Not yet..." The cyborg girl calmly replied annoying Jurina "You need to get out of there!" She said mad then left the room mad.

"How can she be like this?" Jurina thought as she walks on her way in the wall she couldn't help to see Rena with Airin and it was like a punch, she turned away and walked the opposite way to not see them.

Rena smiled "Thanks Airin for everything you have done lately, I really don't have head for school at this moment." She said with a sigh.

"C'mon everything will get better.. I bet Sae Chan and Yuki Chan eventually will get along." Airin said patting softly Rena's head making her blush.

"Ha.. this is cute!" Someone said not so happy.

Rena and Airin looked at that person. "Yuki Chan, Sae Chan!" Rena said shocked of see them together and with their clothes changed,  they were using sports clothes "Seems like they're going to the racing track." She thought.

"C'mon Yuki you said no drama.." Sae let out looking other way.

"I'm not doing any drama.. I said it was cute, you know she giving you comfort and you blushing that's cute! Yuki said touching Rena's hair mocking them, Airin only looked at her while Rena sighed.

 "Let's go and I don't want drama!" Yuki said before walking away followed by Sae as soon they were out of sight Airin laughed "That's mature!" She said making Rena smile also.

~At the racing track~

Sae and Yuki were stretching..

"What was that about?" Sae asked looking at her friend, Yuki stopped stretching then looked at her "What was what?" She asked playing dumb.

Sae smirked "Looks like the old Yuki is showing.." she said. Yuki thought it "What do you mean?" She asked curious.

"You don't let them live with you or without you.." Sae said before going running by herself

Yuki stood there paralyzed for a few seconds before walking away as she thinks about everything she avoided thinking.

Her feet took her to the pool area, she stood on the edge and looked at her reflection.

So sudden appeared 3 girls, one grabbed Yuki from the back and Another one was getting closer But Yuki kicked the girl who getting closer and she fell on the pool then she beated with her elbow the one holding her, the third one tried to punch her but Yuki one on one was superior.

Yuki made her a key so now she was on the floor, Yuki had her foot on her forehead "What the hell do you want? Who sent you?" She asked irritated pressing harder on her forehead.

The other two girls were scared of Yuki, she didn't seem the kind of person you can't mess around with.

Yuki was pressing harder on her forehead with no facial expression at all like if this wasn't out of common.

The girl got really scared of seeing Yuki blank expression and so were the other two girls.

"TOMOCHIN!" She let out.

Yuki moved her feet around her face "Now I see.." she said coldly suddenly she pressed on the girl stomach hard "You like to get involved in sh#%" she said before leaving.

"That was so Black..." The two girls said scared.

~At the same time~ In a dark room~

"Kashiwagi Yuki must pay for everything, I want to destroy her!" One of the 9 said mad.

[THEY WERE 11 BUT GEKIKARA DOESN'T EXIST ANYMORE..AND SASSHI ALSO LEFT IT]

Everyone in the gathering started talking about it.

"Gekikara betrayed us.. she should pay too, with all respect great leader" Another one said.

The great leader got up from the couch then got in front of her, fixed her hoody and to everyone's surprise she punched her on her stomach hard.

"STAY AWAY FROM RENA!" She shouted mad making everyone in the room shiver.

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At the recreation area..

"I knew this would happen.." Yuki said looking at her ex girlfriend buying food.

Mayu payed for the food and looked at her "Yeah I know get out of my way!" She said faking a smile then walked to her table and sat.

Yuki Sat there too "At least we can be friends.. " she let out but was completely ignored by the cyborg who was eating her salad.

Yuki got irritated and grabbed her hand to stop her, Mayu looked at her serious but once she saw Yuki's face she couldn't help to feel bad.

"I know.. I get it.. I'm bad for you not good enough, I just wanna make sure you're okay and not use it to get close to you. I promise every time I want to call you for not important reason  I will slap myself many times, if there is a voice message telling you're my only one erase it and forget it,  if I wanna go to your room, I will run away on the racing track to not get close and not disappoint you.. I'm sorry I'll try my best to forget you but for now I need to know!" She said with teary eyes before leaving.

Mayu was there and she couldn't feel sadder her tears also came out "Why you don't get it? Don't look back at such a unfortunate person like me. You don't even have to remember me, I never even did anything for you anyway so just don't look back." She thought as her tears rolls her cheeks.

Yuki was also outside the recreation area, she walked to her room her nose was red and everyone was looking at her at she walks.

Once in her room, she opened one of her books inside of it were the first pictures she took with Mayu "their first kiss" she threw the book and the pictures away then just got on her bed and laid face down.

TO BE CONTINUED~ I forgot everything here, I'm too lazy to reread xD  did tears come out? Let  me know I'm curious!!!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 37(16)
Post by: kurogumi on January 26, 2014, 10:54:16 AM
I dont care! What i cared most is you comeback cmze-san!

How i missed comment here LOL
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 37(16)
Post by: amachan48 on January 26, 2014, 02:01:17 PM
OMG cmze-san You're back!!!!! >.< I'm so happy you're not leave us >.<

welcome back and biiiiggggg thanks to your update >.< ^_^

sorry for my bad english :bow:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 37(16)
Post by: gek geki on January 26, 2014, 02:42:18 PM
HORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRAYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 37(16)
Post by: Shinoki on January 26, 2014, 04:23:40 PM
Thinking 'bout it,
I've got no idea how to comment...
Okay, first, I gotta reread your fic~~~~
...Mayuki always has these hurdles in here~
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 37(16)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on January 26, 2014, 11:27:21 PM
okaeri cmze-san~  :cathappy:
jurina-chan.. rena you should comfort juritan!! :(
baka tomochin! :angry:
YUKI!! WHY??! :cry: :cry: MY MAYUKI HEARTO!! :cry:
Mayuyu.. pwease don't cry! T^T
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 37(16)
Post by: Zita on January 29, 2014, 01:37:36 PM
 :imdead: :mon cry:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 38(17)
Post by: cmze on March 11, 2014, 07:22:36 AM
                                               ~Time is good as gold~
                                                            CH.38

"I need to stop feeling depressed.." Kashiwagi Yuki let out depressed then got up from bed and decided that today she won't be feeling down anymore.

Somebody entered to the room.

"Finally you're up!" Haruka said with a mischievous smile. "I don't like how you're looking at me.." The taller of the two said.

Haruka took a deep breath "Should I be good or bad!" She said before throwing a coin in the air and catching it with her hand.

Yuki only looked at her having no clue of what she's talking about.

"You're in trouble, the supreme one hates you and is almost time for your initiation!" Haruka said before snapping her fingers.

Three girls entered to the room "There's no need on covering our faces anymore!" One of the two said.

"We can do this on the bad or good way.. your choice!" Haruka said with a smile.

Yuki pouted "Let's go!" She said.

~ Meanwhile~ sitting on the grass of the school.

"I'm serious that's favorite movie!" Airin said excited talking to Rena.

Rena smiled "Wow I never thought I would meet someone like you.. Where were you all these years?" she said a little shocked but happy.

"Close to you.." Airin whispered shyly first. Rena grabbed her hand.

 "Here.. You just didn't see me!" Airin replied looking down embarrased.

"Cute!" Rena said still the same smile.

The two girls looked at eachother' s eyes for a moment. Suddenly a 2 girls approached interrupting their moment.

"Airin chan you have to tutor me!" One of them said.

Airin sighed "Now?" She asked pouting. "Yep we planned this for a while." The other said.

"Go I have to go the library to return some books, talk to you later!" Rena said before get up and say goodbye.

Once Rena was out of sight Airin got up with the help of the two. "Who's dealing with her?" She asked cleaning her skirt.

"We're waiting for you!" One of the two said.

-At the same time-

"So Kashiwagi how you're feeling?" Hacchan asked before kicking her on her stomach.

Yuki was on the floor already "I thought you said good way or bad!" She said containing her pain.

"I changed my mind and wait to see what I have planned for Mayu Chan?" Haruka replied while fixing her bangs not caring that the others were hitting Yuki.

Yuki laughed "Do you think... I...care ....about her? Stupid! do what you want?" She said having trouble to speak while they hit her.

Haruka pouted.

"You caused us real trouble.. poor Tomochin!" Another one said before stepping on her stomach.

"ahhhhhHHHHHH!" Yuki let out in pain.

Someone stopped the girl hurting Yuki "Stop!" She said and everyone calmed.

Yuki was seeing double she wondered who that was.

~Flashback~ Lunching together

"I don't understand why the Black Queens still exist?" Yuko sensei said before taking a bite of her food.

Haruna smiled "To keep things in order.." she replied proud.

"Well if Red Queens still exist I think it's fine!" Yuko said carelessly.

Kojiharu looked at the Yuko "Red Queens?? What's that?" She asked curious.

"Well some bitches who though they were the best thing in the world!" Yuko said serious looking at her food.

"I still don't understand!" Haruna honestly said.

Yuko sighed then looked at Haruna "They used to bully girls who got here thanks to scholarships, they selected them and played hard jokes on them till one day one of their tricks went out of hand!" She explaining squeezing her can of juice.

Haruna looked at Yuko facial expression she wasn't the same goofy person, the one in front of her seemed bitter.

"Then I recruited girls that were affected by them, we called ourselves the Black Queens and with that I got their attention, we fought in the middle of the night and we won they dissapeared." Yuko said then started to eat again.

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"What are we doing?" Haruna thought and was about to help Yuki but the supreme got there.

Yuki tried to look at her but she was still dizzy. The supreme got her by her shirt "Looks like you have lot of enemies here!" She said still wearing a Black Hood.

"How Black Queens got poisoned?" Haruna thought looking at the scene. Everyone was waiting for the supreme to do something to Yuki but she just laughed then let go Yuki who felt on the ground.

Yuki was still trying to see "That laugh is familiar.." she thought trying to remember.

"Today I'm happy and I think you guys already did a good job!" The supreme said before throwing Yuki a black hood.

Everyone were disappointed.

"Let's wait for Tomochin to deal with this herself.. Welcome Kashiwagi!" She said before leaving.

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"Somehow there's something I don't like about her!" Jurina said talking to Sae as they were sitting on the bleachers.

Sae smirked "It's because you're jealous.. I rather her having than Yuki Chan honestly!" She said then drank from her can of cola.

Jurina sighed "No, there's something odd about her.. I'm telling I saw her sniffing her hair in a odd way as they hugged, she freaks me out!" She said serious.

"What do you wanna do spy on Airin? That would make you happy?" Sae asked.

"Maybe.." Jurina replied.

<IN the hall>

Matsui Rena walked fast the hall to Yuki's room, she's been calling her all the afternoon but she seems vanished.

She opened Yuki's door which wasn't locked and so nobody there "Damn it!" She said then thought about going to Mayu's but she saw her coming also.

Rena looked other way while Mayu gets closer. "Have you seen Yuki?" She asked.

Rena bit her lower lip "Those BASTARDS!" She said mad then run away to look for her.

Mayu also has the little feeling telling her that something is not right, she looked other way sad knowing that she can do nothing but just wait for Rena.

~~~~~After 2 weeks~~~~~At the airport~~~~~~

Maeda Atsuko was ready to grab a Taxi when someone called her name. The good looking girl turned to see the one calling her name.

"So you didn't tell me you were coming!"

"Tomochin.." Acchan said not impressed at all as Tomochin smiles at her.

TO BE CONTINUED!!

Extra~

After a few hours The Black Queens let Yuki in her room where Rena was already waiting in the dark.

As soon the three girls holding entered to the room and turned on the switch of light, they saw Gekikara, not Rena standing there.

The two girls let go Yuki who ends up leaning against the door.

Haruka smiled "Good night." Haruka said not showing any facial expression sure that Rena won't do anything.

Gekikara got closer and looked at the three, Haruka was smiling while the other two were wondering what she was looking?.

Suddenly Gekikara throwed the first punch which was directed to Haruka' s face she knelt to handle the pain.The other two also reacted but Gekikara was faster and end hitting one of the two her elbow breaking her nose. The other tried to kick her but Gekikara grabbed her leg and made her fall backwards.

The two girls got out of the room while Haruka was only laughing "You're so funny Gekikara!" She said with her hand on her cheek.

"I've felt worst pain than this" She said still laughing.

Gekikara grabbed Yuki then took her to her room.

Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 38(17)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on March 12, 2014, 01:19:33 AM
An update!! :cathappy:
I luv this fic!~ :love:
demo yuki what you mean you dont care about mayuyu?! :angry: you'll regret saying that if mayuyu gets in trouble!!  :angry:
my mayuyu.. :cry: :cry
im with juritan theres something fishy with airin :? shes cute but dont trust her.. :smhid
damn it tomochin, acchan do something about tomochin!! :banghead:
thanx for the update  :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 39(18)
Post by: cmze on April 04, 2014, 08:29:50 AM
                                 ~Time is good as gold~
                                          CH.39
(The next day in the afternoon)

Rena took care of Yuki "What are you planning?" She thought as she cleans the wound on her lip.

Yuki opened her eyes "Rena.." she said with a smile. Rena grabbed her hand

"This seems luke an horror movie, sometimes I feel like we need to talk to someone all  we been through with these Black Queen is getting really dangerous!" She said looking down feeling sad about her friend.

Yuki looked other way "What we can do? Tell the headmaster? She would totally go trying to find out and when she gets it she would try to cover to not harm this prestigious school." She told her friend.

"Then I don't know what else?" Rena asked sad.

Yuki sat "We're going to destroy them once and for all!" She let out determinate "But I need you.. I can't do it by myself Rena!" She said looking at Rena's fingers intertwining hers.

Rena nodded.

~Meanwhile~

"You sure you wanna do this Jurina? I mean this is kinda way out of line!" Sae said while Jurina is trying to open Airin's dorm.

Jurina smirked "Bingo!" She said then opened the door while Sae is looking at everyone un the hall that totally not paying attention to them.

Jurina sighed and pulled Sae inside.

Jurina and Sae watched the room "Wtf?" The younger of the two key out.

"Seriously? This is pretty normal to me!" Sae said looking at everything so clean and perfect.

"Tssk!" Jurina let out then started registering everything in the dorm while Sae is standing there watching her.

"There must be something!" Jurina said.

Suddenly the girls heard someone called "Airin!"

Sae and Jurina looked at eachother then fast Jurina hid in the closet while Sae went under the bed.

Airin opened the door " Tomochin haven't come back so I don't really know!" She said slamming the door in the two girls standing there.

Jurina looked how Airin turned on her iPod then started listening Sexy boy by Air loud while take off her clothing and dance.

Sae also was trying to look because she's a pervert. Jurina notice that on her back she has a tatoo that says "Gekikara" (In Japanese!)

"No...No.. way.." Jurina thought really shocked and scared as she dances around while dressing.

As the song was about to end she grabbed her phone and smirked "Rena Chan.. Why so cute?" She said while Jurina could clearly see how she's sliding her fingers like if she has so many pictures of Rena.

Jurina was terrified now she knows her heartache wasn't a joke.

Suddenly her phone rang and she sighed then go out of the room like if she was meeting with someone.

Sae come out first then Jurina who had a face like if she has seen a ghost.

"I need to find Rena!" Jurina said then got out of the room running like if her depends on it.

She looked for Rena in her room where she found Yuki laying on her bed.

"What are you doing here?" Moody Yuki asked she as sits. Jurina pouted but then just took a deep breath.

"Rena is in danger." Jurina let out really worried.

Yuki Sat but still she was  in pain "What's going on?" She asked as she tries to get up.

"Is this Airin girl, she's not good I can tell!" Jurina say me like if she was about to cry.

Yuki bit her lower lip somehow she has the same impression "Tell you what are you gonna do.. You're going with her she's in library and tell her what you told me then leave the rest to me"" she said acting strong.

Jurina was about to go but then stopped at the door "I haven't told you what I saw.. Why do you believe me?" She asked curious.

"Because the look on your face says it all.." Yuki let out

"Thanks.." Jurina said before leaving while Yuki gets up.

Sae entered to the room "Whoa you shouldn't get up!" She said making Yuki sit.

"What are you doing here?" Yuki asked pouting cause she wants to get up already.

"Didn't I told you your necklace was cute!" Sae let out then throw it to her.

Yuki touched her neck and it wasn't there "Where did get it?" She asked.

"From Airin' s room... now explain!" Sae said as she says next to her.

Yuki was in shock still.

~At the library~

Jurina entered and fast found her she was in the scifi section that was  in the back and Jurina knew Rena loves scifi.

"Rena chan.." She whispered looking at the familiar figure looking perfectly as the sunset can be seen through the window.

Swing Rena like that could make anyone fall in love.

Rena didn't believe it then turned to look at the girl "Jurina Chan.." she said with a charming smile She couldn't hide.

Jurina took a deep breath then got closer and when she was in front of her started talking. "Rena Chan.. please stay...."

Rena interrupted her and hugged her. Jurina didn't make any noise or even move.

"I missed this..." she whispered still hugging Jurina who wasn't hugging her back, she was still mad at her but also can't be apart.

After some seconds Rena noticed and stopped hugging her "I'm sorry.." she whispered sad and was about to go but Jurina grabbed her hand.

In those seconds her heart was beating fast, she wondered if Rena fekt the same it's been so long since she held Rena's hand that it feels like the first time. Whenever everything related to Rena was a reason to blush.

Jurina only looked at Rena's back forgetting what to say.

Rena was looking down expecting something.

"You'll be okay.. You're Gekikara!" Jurina let out bitter as she let go her hand. Rena was sad then just walked away.

Jurina leaned against the book felling like an idiot, she wanted to say something else but her resented feeling came out to the surface first.

Once Rena got back to her room Yuki told her everything.

TO BE CONTINUED... I wanted to make a good WMatsui moment was it good? I can't make them kiss cause that won't happen till third season SORRY!
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 39(18)
Post by: Shinoki on April 05, 2014, 04:13:00 PM
I just need to comment...
Even though I suck at commenting...
*clap clap clap*
Stares...ah... nod nod...
*lurks in the shadows awaiting the next time...*
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 39(18)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on April 05, 2014, 05:46:18 PM
Airin is evil!~  :panic:
Wmatsui scene is so heartbreaking!!~  :cry: :heart:
Jurina help Rena!~  :(
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 39(18)
Post by: MYJR on August 07, 2014, 08:31:33 AM
waiting for the update~
update soon... :bow: :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 39(18)
Post by: yuukimoko on August 07, 2014, 08:19:16 PM
omg, I missed this fic!!! xDD Im glad you are still writting cmze-san!! thou i stoped writting , im really glad to see some of the old writters still around,makes me want to try writting again sometimes -w- .

Awesome job on this chapter too! You always know how to keep us wanting more  :drool:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 40 (19)
Post by: cmze on August 09, 2014, 09:34:40 AM
                                  ~Time is good as gold~
                                           40 (19)

As anyother day Kashiwagi Yuki went to her classroom, once there her direction went towards her best friend who's comfortably talking to Airin.

Yuki Sat behind Rena who just smiled at her "Good Morning Yuki Chan.. " Airin turned her face but then also looked at Yuki and false social smile greeted her.

"Good Morning" Yuki said coldly then the two continued talking while Yuki only looked at Airin.

Suddenly someone else entered to the classroom. "There your are.." she said looking messy and sat next to Yuki.

Rena was shocked "What happened to you Sae Chan?" She asked forgetting about what she was talking with Airin.

Sae smiled widely "Wild night!" She replied happy.

Somebody else entered to the classroom..

"Good Morning!" She said with smirk.

Rena clenched her fist "Tomochin.." she whispered while Yuki had also a serious.

"There's my wild night!" Sae said smiling, Rena and Yuki turned to look at her.

"What?" The tomboy replied.

Paruru smiled "Finally some fun~" she let out

Everyone said hi to Tomochin,. After some minutes their teacher entered to the classroom interrupting their welcoming chat.

~ At the same time~

"So you're planning on not going to class again?" Jurina asked to Mayu who was covered with her blanket.

"I wanna sleep... You should go to class is late!"Mayu replied not even looking at her.

Jurina sighed "Welk if your bot going to class, I'm also not going" she said then got on her bed.

"Idiot!" Mayu thought then closed her eyes.

"Well if Yuki is going to take care of Rena, I should check on Mayu." Jurina thought.

After a some hours classes were over. Jurina and Mayu haven't come out of their room.

Suddenly somebody opened the door waking Mayu and Jurina.

"Rena.." Jurina goes down her bed while Mayu Sat on her bed "Yukirin." She whispered.

"You seem okay!" Yuki says looking around.

Mayu gets up "What's wrong?" She asked. "Nothing I was only checking on you!" She answered then got out of the room.

"Rena what was that all about?" Mayu asked irritated.

"Tomochin got back and she's worried!" Rena explained "Well..do us a favor and be careful!" She said then also went out.

Mayu looked at Jurina "I have to ask her something!" She said then run to get them.

Mayu Sat on her bed "What the hell..." she thought.

Jurina grabbed Yuki in the hall.

"Hey what did you find out?" Jurina asked looking at the girls around them any of them can be watching them.

Yuki leaned against the wall "She's creepier than I thought.. I'll find a way to tell Rena about it but now I have to deal with something else." She said looking at Tomochin walking with her friends.

"What?" Jurina asked. "See you later!" The older of the two said then went after her.

Jurina clenched her fist "I have to do everything myself!" She said annoyed then went to look for Rena.

~ At the same time~ In the recreation area

"Why you ask me so much about it?" Yuko asked to Haruna. "Well I wanna know.. I'm curious!" She replied.

Yuko looked her confused "During my Times at these school I remember there were some rumors saying that the the richest were part of them.. there are some many things I wanna know too!" She said sad.

"You were a hero~ " Haruna said with smile.

Yuko looked at Haruna "There's something you're not telling me?" She asked.

"What? NO! Like I said I was curious!" Haruna said before get up "I have homework to do. See you around!" She said nervous before leaving.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~

"WHAT? Where did she go?" Yuki asked looking around at the empty hall suddenly someone grabbed from behind, she was pushed to the school newspaper office where she found Tomochin with other girls.

Tomochin smiled "So you like to play~ " she said carelessly till one of her friends whispered something on her ear. "I know!!" She replied irritated.

Yuki looked at the group of girls "I don't know what are you planning but-"

"You what? We're in the same boat now, why we don't have a truce?" Tomochin said with a smile..

Yuki took a deep breath "We'll see about that!" She said before going away.

"Truce?" One of Tomochin Friends asked once Yuki was out of sight.

Tomochin laughed.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

"Rena!" Jurina said grabbing her bye her shoulder.

Rena looked at her little sister "What's wrong?" She asked but soon Jurina was about to warn her, Airin appeared with 2 books.

"Jurina Chan!" Airin said with a smile.

Jurina ignored her "Can we talk alone?" She asked pulling Rena with her once far enough she finally spoke.

"Airin.. stay away from her, she can hurt you!"

Rena looked at her fir second "I don't understand you... seriously!" She said before going back to her friend.

"What? She doesn't believe in me?" Jurina whispered looking at Rena walking away with Airin.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Mayu Sat on the bleachers alone looking at sunset, by chace Yuki passed by and looked at the younger girl.

Yuki hypnotized walked to her and even sat next to her. "It's weird right?" She asked getting Mayu's attention.

"What?" She asked.

Yuki tucked Mayu's hair behind her ear "Spending hours without me.." she whispeoed a sad.

Mayu got a little red but then reacted coldly "Give me some time, I'll get used to it!" She said then got up and walked away.

Yuki sighed and looked at the sunset alone.

"I think we should attack her now!" One girl said.

"No, before graduation!" Paruru replied with a smirk watching looking feeling down.

TO BE CONTINUED!! Well is kinda hard with no music to inspire me~

Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 40 (19)
Post by: chiqinna on August 09, 2014, 02:19:56 PM
my wmatsui~~  :cry: :cry: :cry:
my mayukiiiii~~~  :badluck: :badluck: :badluck:
what are they planning?? please don't hurt Mayu~  :cry:
well... cmze-san what kind of music genre do you like? actually.. just asking hehe
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 40 (19)
Post by: cmze on August 09, 2014, 07:26:02 PM
Anything that gives me a feeling of writting..  :nervous
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 40 (19)
Post by: sastio13 on August 09, 2014, 09:26:23 PM
well, keep listening to the music which can inspire you so you will keep writing! hehehe
thanks for your update cmze-san! :)
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 40 (19)
Post by: cmze on August 09, 2014, 10:49:31 PM
Well my songs doesn't inspire me anymore.. I need new music which is hard to get, because  I Don't have time to look for it~ I work and study so that's why I haven't updated ny fanfics.  :panic:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 41 (20)
Post by: cmze on March 13, 2016, 03:08:01 PM
                                                                            ~Time is good as gold~
                                                                                    CH. 41 (20)


(In the middle of the night)

"I can believe i'm doing this" Yuki let out then sat on the on the floor and leaned her head against the door. "Mayu.." she whispered then looked at her necklace.

Somehow Mayu gets the no selfish version of Yuki but the kind one, how can that be possible? when she became this kind of person? when she became Mayu's protector? it doesn't matter at all anymore what matter it's that "Mayu has to be okay" that's all she could think about, nothing else matter even if her body hurts for so much fighting.

"She's the exception..." Yuki whispered with smile then remebered how she met with Mayu and all the things she did to get Mayu's attention and sensation she felt when she met her "Ha.." she let out and with that she fell sleep in that sitting position.

After a few hours.

Mayu was feeling like going to the bathroom, she opened her eyes , grabbed her cellphone and turned on the lantern then walked to then walked to the door and opened it,she was surprised of seeing Yuki on the floor.

For a moment she thought the older girl was hurt but her worried expression changed when she saw her okay and sleeping.

"Idiot!" Mayu let out with a smile then tried to wake up the older girl.

"I don't wanna wake up!" Yuki said then opened her eyes.

"Mayu chan are you okay?" The older of the too said nervous looking around.

"It's okay.. what are you doing here?" Mayu asked

Yuki got up "Well i was... walking around the hall and fell sleep here." Yuki said the first lie that came to her mind.

"Yeah you were walking around the hall with your blanket and your pillow!" Mayu let out not buying it.

Yuki smiled nervously. "Why are you up?" she asked changing the subject.

"I wanted to go to the bathroom... what now you wanna come with me" Mayu let out mocking her.

"Yeah that's a good idea" Yuki let out with a smile.

" I was joking!" Mayu said irritated

"Well let's go!" Yuki let out grabbing her by her wrist and taking her there.

"I can go by myself!" Mayu let out annoyed.

(The next day)

Mayu woke up then fast went to opened thye door Yuki was still sleeping there.

"I told her to go to her room." Mayu let out then got a glass of water and poured on Yuki.

"Wha????" Yuki opened her eyes mad then looked at Mayu her expression changed " Oh.. i fell sleep here... again" she said grabbing her stuff with an awkward smile then left fast.

"Why she thinks i need ababysitter...."Mayu said annoyed but then smiled a bit.

(In Rena's room)

"We need to finish them already... we're going to graduate and i don't want Mayu in a school like this, you should think about Jurina too" Yuki let out serious.

Rena tense up " If somebody try to mess wit Jurina, i'll do whatever it takes to make her pay.." Rena said in Gekikara mode.

"I have an idea of who might be that supreme..but we need to fish" Yuki said before sighing.

Rena looked at Yuki "What do you mean?" she asked confused.

"We have to wait... " Yuki let out looking at her necklace.

Rena was still confuse.

"Wait for her to make a mistake" Yuki finished her sentence.

(In Jurina's room)

Somebody knocked the door.

"Must be Mayu, why she doesn't take her keys" Jurina said as she sees Mayu's keys on her desk.

As soon Jurina opened the door a fist was thrown on her face, she was kinda dizzy.

"I don't like when somebody mess with my things... even if that one it's Gekikara's sister!" Somebody said then two girls grabbed Jurina.

It was too early so there's nobody in the hall that's how the could take Jurina with them.

"She's not Gekikara,.." Jurina said before fainting.

- At the recreation area-

"What if i tell you that weird stuff happen in this school?" Haruna said.

Yuko looked at the younger girl "What weird stuff?" she asked playfully. 

"We still exist... we still do heavy prank on students... we are bad.." Haruna let out worried.

"What are you talking about?" Yuko asked serious.

"I don't know how i became part of that... i remember being recruited and having the worst time of my life, if i wanted to end i had to say yes and i did." Haruna let out sad.

"I don't follow.." Yuko said.

"You know what i'm talkking about... how can i stop it?" Haruna asked.

Yuko was in shock "Don't tell me you are part of that..."

"Yes.." Haruna answered.






Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 41 (20)
Post by: yumii07 on March 14, 2016, 02:25:51 PM
Aahhh... finally you update this fic...
Thanks so much cmze san

U my fav writer  :inlove:
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 41 (20)
Post by: kymkamwm48 on April 11, 2016, 11:40:54 AM
Hello  :) So, yeah. I just want you to know that I like the story... but, I kinda don't understand it, especially the MaYuki and WMatsui part. But don't get me wrong, I'm a huge fan of them :heart: looking forward to be reading more of MaYuki and WMatsui.

I hope Mayu won't die  :cry: I want their love story to continue... FOREVER  XD

As for the WMatsui, I hope Renachan realizes her LOVE for Jurina, like, real love not sisterly-love.


I'll be waiting Author-san!!!  :twothumbs
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 41 (20)
Post by: cmze on May 01, 2016, 11:47:27 PM
                                                                                             42 (21)

(In a dark room)

Jurina spit blood "Damn it.." she said feeling hurt "so this is how this is" she spoke looking around everything was dark and there was a girl using  a black hoody reading.

"You shouldn't mess with the supreme's stuff" The girl said then changed her page.

Jurina pouted " I can't believe i was kidnapped.." she let out irritated.

"Don't call it like that.. it's more like a educational outing" The girl said.

Jurina sighed "When do you plan to let me go?" Jurina asked trying to free herself she was tighten up

-Meanwhile-

In a restaurant.

"We just arrived and we wated to talk to you" Takamina says as she eats.

Acchan sighed "I don't think we should do that.." she said looking at Rena.

Yuki smiled "Don't worry she knows everything" she said tapping Rena's shoulder.

"I heard Oshima san is teaching there" Acchan let out surprised.

Yuki looked at Acchan "Who's that?" she asked looking at Rena "Our teacher.. miss hara replacement." she answered before drinking from her glass of water.

"She's the real deal! i heard she created the Black Queens by beating up several girls in one night" Acchan spoke then proceed to eat.

Rena putted her a=hand on her chin "Could she be the supreme?" she asked looking at Yuki.

Yuki punched the palm of her hand "That's it, if we destroy the leader then the team will be destroyed!" she said excited.

"We need to prove that Oshima sensei is involved in all this." Rena let out not so confident as Yuki.

Takamina stopped eating "There's something fishy here... how can she be a leader when she wasn't around besides i heard a relative of her died in the school" she said.

'i don't think somebody could do that kind of stuff to a relative" Rena let out.

"We should follow Oshima san around and see what we get!" Yuki  said then drank from her wine.

"Is it truth that you beat Tomochin with one punch Senpai?" Rena asked.

Acchan smiled "It wasn't like that she was younger so i guess it was easy.. that girl is twisted but i feel bad for her, she had crush on my baby" said then patted Takamina's head.

Rena smiled 'Wow i never knew that part of Tomochin" she said kinda shocked.

"But it was more easier beat Kashiwagi san" Acchan let out with a smile.

Yuki smile "What? When?" she asked curious.

'When i told you to go away.. sorry!" Acchan said then Yuki remembered that was before leaving for a month.

"It was you!" Yuki said shcoked.

"It was for the best!" Acchan let out.

Yuki looked at Rena

Rena grabbed Yuki's hand "It's okay' she said with a calm smiles that calmed Yuki.

Meanwhile-

Mayu was trying to call Jurina but everytime she does that it sends her to the voice mail. "Damn it" she said as soon she heard the record, she laid on bed.

"Yuki where are you" Mayu thought before falling sleep.

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"That was kinda surprising" Yuki said as she walks with Rena already in the school.

"Yeah i know!" Rena said before bumping with certain teacher.

Yuki eyes open wide.

"Matsui san are you okay?" Yuko asked and helped her to get up

Yuki only looked at her teacher.

"I'm okay sensei" Rena let out looking down.

Yuko smiled "do you mind coming with me?" she asked

"What for?" Yuki asked getting between the two.

"Oh Kashiwagi san, i really wanted to talk to you!" Yuko said with a wide smile.

Yuki looked at her teacher "We know about you and that bull%$# of the blackqueens" she said serious.

Yuko sighed "Why everyone ask me questions like that... am i that bad?" she asked confused.

Suddenly Rena's phone vibrated making her look at the screen she unlocked it and saw picture of Jurina from an unknown number.

Rena run away leaving the two behind.

Yuki stopped making eye contact with Yuko and saw Rena running away "What's wrong with her?" she asked.

"Maybe she wated to go to the bathroom?" Yuko let out.

Rena runs to the dorms and harshly opened Mayu's waking her up.

"Where's Jurina?" Rena asked really worried.

Mayu try process everything "I don't know.." she answereed confuse and sensing something it's wrong

Rena left the room then went to another.

Sae was making out with a girl and interrupted her.

"Eyyyy privacy!" The tomboy says.

Rena ignored her "Have you seen Jurina?" she asked.

"Why would i know? ask your lover Yuki!" Sae replied, Rena got serious and grabbed Sae by her collar.

"What are you doing Matsui san?" The girl asked.

Rena looked at Sae "You can be mad at me, mad at Yuki but Jurina is other thing!" she said then pushed her aside and left the room.

As she walks the hall another text arrived.

"Scary cat!"

Rena read that then recieved another message it was a picture of Jurina sitting on the bench.

Rena save it her phone then run tp the court.

Once there she saw Jurina all beat up.

"Jurina.." Rena said with watery eyes.

"I'm okay.." Jurina said then got up and went to her room.

TO BE CONTINUED.

lOOK FORWARD FOR THE GRADUATION!!

 


Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 42 (21)
Post by: yumii07 on May 02, 2016, 01:33:43 AM
More author san  :bow:
I still curious about Mayu condition
And what happen to Jurina?

Pleas don't make someone die on this fic
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 42 (21)
Post by: purnamazaki on May 03, 2016, 12:53:13 AM
Jurina :(
I cant wait for the next chapter ! ! !
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 42 (21)
Post by: Nana-chun on July 22, 2016, 04:19:23 PM
Wow i'm curious on the next chapter  :shocked :shocked
Pls update soon :)
Title: Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 42 (21)
Post by: kumabear on July 23, 2016, 02:53:10 AM
Updte soon :)
Title: Re: Time is good as gold - CH. 43 (MaYuki) 01/05/2016
Post by: cmze on April 24, 2018, 05:45:57 AM
                                                                                               CH.43
-Teacher's room- Only 3 people there.

Yuko was really impressed "What the f##$#@$%!? so you are telling me those bitches exist... and they took what was mine, what we fought for!!" she let out furious then hit the table with her fist.

Yuki and Rena looked at each other, they honestly didn't expect something like that.

"I'm going to end all this!" Yuko let out.

Yuki and Rena smiled at each other with a new ally things will get easier. 'When are we going to fight them?" Yuki asked excited and feeling vitalized and grabbing Rena's hand.

"What? not fighting.. i'm an adult!" Yuko let out pulling her phone from her pocket. "Now i'm smart!" she said looking a her iphone x

"What?!" Yuki and Rena let out in unision.
 
Yuko got up "I'm going to resolve this as the cool teacher i am.." she let out.

"Excuse me Oshima Sensei!" Kojima Haruna entered to the room making Rena and Yuki nervous.

Yuko smiles "I was thinking about you Kojima San , you are going to help me to clean this school!" she said very confident about her plan.

"She's one of them!" Yuki pointed at her

"I know!" Yuko let out smiling.

Kojima Haruna smiled " I change my perspective and if you have a plan. i want to help senpai." she said bowing.

"What's gotten into her?" Yuki asked to Rena

"Regret." Rena let out coldly.

Yuko extended her hand "Let's finish those son of..." she said. "I settle with that!" Yuki said and also extended her hand.

Rena and Haruna smiled and did the same.

-Dean's office-

"Well Maeda san, i don't understand why you want to give sexuality classes, you have your own bussiness" The dean asked.

Acchan smiled "Well these girls seem so lost, one of them asked me in the hall if she would get pregnant if she kissed someone..." she let out.

The dean covered her eyes with her hand.

"I'll do it even for free, i grew up here is the least i can do for this school that has given me so much!" Acchan said with a smile.

The Dean smiled " I think these girls need a little more information. Thank you Maeda san"

Acchan gave a handshake to the dean a proceed to leave the office.

"Stupid Minami... this is not my bussiness why you made me come back!" Acchan let out as he walks the hall remembering her time as a student then stopped when she saw the awards she won during her time there and also a picture of her squad.

"Shit.. i gotta clean this mess!" She let out

Mariko sensei who was walking the hall, saw a familiar girl " No way... Maeda Atsuko!" she let out then smiled and hugged the girl.

The two teachers smiled. "What are you doing here?" the taller of the two asked.

"I became the new sexuality teacher!" Acchan let out with a mischievous smirk.

"Look i have to go to the library, i'll see you in 15 min in the recreation area." Mariko let out.

Tomochin and Haruka were walking in the hall when they saw...

"Isn't that Maeda Atsuko?" Haruka asked.

Tomochin looked at Maeda too "Yes... seems like it" she said not happy.

Acchan saw the two girl and got closer. "I'm sensing Black Queen tension..." she said with a smile then grabbed Haruka's hand "Oh.. a newie." she said

Haruka retreat her hand harshly.

"What are you doing here?" Tomochin asked mad but controlling herself.

Acchan smirk disappeared "I came for what's mine.." she said serious "Just like when we were kids.. right Tomochin?" she said as she walks away with a smile.

TO BE CONTINUED.

GRADUATION!!!

 





Title: Re: Time is good as gold - CH. 43 (MaYuki) | 24/04/2018
Post by: Rhythm on April 27, 2018, 07:39:30 PM
Omg you updating-  :onioncheer:
Gosh I forgot how the story goes, I guess I will read all of it again  :shy2:
Title: Re: Time is good as gold - CH. 43 (MaYuki) | 24/04/2018
Post by: Pokotan on June 24, 2018, 04:05:58 PM
Woaw thank you, after all these years hoping for the next part... finally you comeback. I read this story in 2014 and it brings back so much memories. I know everything has changed, a lot of members have graduated, but mayuki will always be part of my life. I miss the old era,  :farofflook: i'm glad i still have an access to read all those legend pairings here :nya:
Title: Re: Time is good as gold - CH. 44 (MaYuki) | 12/06/2021
Post by: cmze on June 12, 2021, 11:17:48 PM
GRADUATION

PART 1

"I can't believe we are already graduating." Sae let out as she looks herself in the mirror while Yuki could only think about what Yuko said.

Rena entered the room. "Oh Yuki chan, you haven't changed clothes." she said surprised waking Yuki up from her thoughts.

"Yeah.. Invisble to her as always." Sae murmured not believing that after all these years Rena is like that.

"Yes, I am going to change in a few minutes."

"No, we need to talk with sensei Yuko, come with me." Rena explained offering her hand and taking her with her.

As the walk the hall, they can see everyone being happy it was a great day after all, it was graduation.

The two entered to the teacher's room

Yuko and Haruna looked at the two girls

"What happened?" The two girls asked in unision worried.

Yuko got up from her seat " The principal doesn't believe me, so they are not going to investigate." she said embarrased

Haruna only sighed

"No way!" Yuki let out mad

Rena clenched her teeth "There's gotta be another way." she said

Yuko moved her head side to side. "They want to avoid a scandal so they are playing blind side." she answered clenching her fist feeling sad.

Haruna looked at her teacher having a hard time "I think i have an idea..."

"What is it? Tell me!" Yuki let out desperate knowing that she needs to clean the school because of Mayu.

Haruna looked at the two younger girls " I going to tell you where is their  hiding place so you guys have to take pictures and our..... files." she said with hesitation

Yuki and Rena couldn't believe it but thanked the girl

-Meanwhile-

Acchan was eating a sandwich with coffee at the recreation area until some girls got closer

"Can I help you guys?" The teacher said with a fake smile.

"Can you give us your autograph?" THe three girls said happy as they hand their books.

Acchan smiled "Of course." she said and signed their books. The three girls said goodbye soon 2 more girls sat on her table.

"Don't understand what are you doing here but trust me it won't be pleasant." The two girls said smiling

"Girls Im having breakfast... Do not disturb me." Acchan said with a dark aura.

The two girls were intmidated and soon left the table

In Jurina and Mayu's room

"Did you really saw that? Why you didn't tell Rena? Mayu asked confused

JUrina sighed "Because she is Gekikara, she will be alright." she said feeling irritated

"You are being really stupid, that Airin girl is dangerous. What would you do if she does something bad to her?" Mayu said thinking about Yuki

Jurina felt bad about it, she didn't want to talk or see Rena but Mayu was right that girl seemed realled messed up and obsessed with Rena. "Maybe... Maybe I should go talk to her." she said leaving the room

Mayu kept reading online until somebody knocked her door. she got up and opened it only to find nobody.

"What the hell?" she thought to herself feeling pain in her chest, she closed the door and returned to bed

Once again somebody knocked her door many times scaring her.

Mayu only looked at her door not knowing if she should open up or not.



 

 

 

Title: Re: Time is good as gold - CH. 44(MaYuki) | 12/06/2021
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on June 13, 2021, 01:17:02 AM
AN UPDATE!,   :heart:

I’m more a silent reader now, but had to comment for this nostalgic mayuki fic~
I hope Mayuyu will be okay, I wouldn’t open the door again if I was her.  XD