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Offline wmxmy

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Re: WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME ? Mayuki and Wmatsui + (renayuki) Chapter 2
« Reply #20 on: February 28, 2015, 06:08:24 PM »
Ohh pleaseI want RenaYuki at the end >_<~♥  :bow:
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Re: WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME ? Mayuki and Wmatsui + (renayuki) Chapter 1
« Reply #21 on: March 01, 2015, 05:46:30 AM »
seems jurina and mayu will appear soon
oh naked rena scene...not only yuki, my nose is bleeding too hehehe
like what others comment, i really want it to be renayuki in the end hehe
i like mayuki and wmatsui, but thats too much wmatsui nd mayuki fic out there
i miss renayuki fic huhu
thanks for your update :)
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Here chap 3 , i hope it's not bad
About Renayuki , i still didn't know what should i do
But i will try the best for  best ending


Chapter 3

The next day at school

"Hi yuki"

"Eh ? Tetsu-kun ? What are you doing here ?"

"Well , I want to ask , do you have time after school ?"

"After school ? Why ?"

"I'm wondering if you can go out with me today , on a date ?"Nervous

"Ah .. .. "Seem hesitated ," I think I can , where did you want to go ?"

"Whenever you want" smiling

"Okay then" faking her smiling

Then tetsu go back to his class. Yup , he's yuki boyfriend , they're not in the same class , he's the first boy yuki ever meet that always have a negative bad thinking , never think of anything good , always feel he's a bad and useless person , and a little scaredy . That's the reason yuki can't love him whatever she try , but she also didn't know how to end their relationship and they didn't really talk to each other much.

"It's gonna be a long day , what should I do ? Please help me rena-chan ..." Thought herself and feel depressed

"All , please go to your own seat" the teacher has come

"Good. Today we have a new transfer student please treat him well , he come from america , please go in matsui-san"

"Matsui ? Wait , Matsui ?" Yuki think about the name rena told her

"Haik. Hajimemashita , Matsui Juri desu, yoroshiku onegaishimasu" bowing

All the girl looking to him without blinking , he's too handsome and charming plus he's tall , of course all the girl would fall for him.

"Okay , please go to your seat" sensei point to his(her) seat that next to yuki

"Matsui Juri ? Not Jurina ? Did rena said the wrong name ? Or this is not the person ? Which one is it ?" Thinking hard , then looking to juri

"Hello , I'm Matsui Juri , yoroshiku" smilling

"H-hello , I'm kashiwagi Yuki"

"Okay, actually we still have one new transfer student , but he's late"

"Sensei , he's not late , he's at the principal office right now"juri said

"why did he go there ?"

"The principal call for him"

"I see , open your book page 101 "

Lunch time at the cafetaria

"Rena , yesterday , did you said the wrong name ?"

"Name ? Whose name ?"

"The boy you like"

"E-eh ? W-wwhat did i-i said ?" Didn't remember the name

"You said Matsui Jurina"

"Matsui jurina ? I think it's not wrong." Smiling Nervous then thought to herself "who the hell is he ?"

"Really ? I think his name is Matsui juri--"

"May I sit here ?" Someone talk to yuki

"Eh?Yes?"

"Did I just hear you said my name ?"

"Your name ? N-no , I said Jurina , not juri"

"Rena , he's new transfer student , his name is Matsui Juri"

"Hello , I'm Matsui Rena"

"Matsui Rena ? May I call you rena-chan ?"

"Eh ? Well , do as you please matsui-kun"

"Call me jurin-- , juri ,  it's weird to call your own surname right ?"

"Well that's true , then , juri-kun ?"

"Yup. You are not in the same class right ? "

"Yup , I'm class 1-A"

"I see .."

"They are a good couple , the character that rena said is the same as him , but , did he like ice cream ? Should I ask ? , if I ask rena is he the true boy , she won't answer me right ?" Yuki Think to herself

"Ano , juri-kun , do you like ice cream ?"

Rena starled with yuki question

"Ice cream ? Of course! I love it the most"

"Really ?? Then you must be the boy !" Grinning

"What ? What boy ?" Confused

"Nothing" looking to rena and grinning

"Crap! , she must think this is the boy , I don't even know him! You're really stupid rena! , why is he suddenly transferring with that name anyway? The god is cruel!" murmur

"Rena, I have to go to the toilet , don't go anywhere , kay ?"

"I will go with you"

"No no , finish your lunch , juri-kun please stay here with her , thank you " hurry go from her seat

"So, I'm sure she just said my name earlier?"

"E-ehh ? Well--"

"are you talking about me?" Grinning

"E-eh ? W-well.... , yes."

"Really ? What did you talking about ?"

"Eto.. , Love ?"

"Love ? Who ?"

"Watashi ?"

"Ehh ?"

"Oh my god! I just said myself ? I'm really stupid"

"Noooo.. , I didn't mean like that"

"You like me ?"

"Good! Now what should I said to answer him ? If I say no , then how will yuki react ? If I say yes , aren't that mean I'm confessing ? For God Sake!! I don't even know who is he !!"Thingking to herself

"Eto-- , yes and no ?"

"What ?? Yes and No ? I don't understand at all"

"My answer is No for the reality and yes for non-reality"

Juri still didn't understand "I can't understand what you said "

"I will explain everything later , but not now"

"O-kay?"

Yuki has come back , but she look angry

"Yuki ? What happen ? You seem angry"

"You ask me what happen ? I just bump to a boy , and that boy seriously is annoying boy ! , but--" now her eyes seem sad

"But what ?"

"But .... , nothing" drinking her juice

"Ano, may I ask what is the boy like ?"Juri ask

"He is a little short , shorter than me , kinda have a cute face , and I have never saw him in this school before"

"I see .. , what he done that make you think he is annoying ?"

"What he done ?"

*Flashback

"It's really good if they become a couple" thinking to herself and walking but didn't look her way

*bump*

"Itai--... , gomennasai.." still feel pain at her butt

"Seriously , what are you doing ? Are you stupid ? You didn't look to your way when you are walking ?" Reading his comic

"Eh ?"Look to his face for awhile , "W-wh-what ? I didn't do it on purpose , why should you get angry like that ?"

"You just ruin my mood , of course I will get angry " putting his straight face but not looking away from his comic

"It's not all my fault anyway ,you know I didn't look to my way ,  why you didn't just go from my way ?" Yuki go away back to rena and jurina with annoyed face

"Eh ? It's my fault ? And good! I forgot to saw her face " The boy look a little confused

*End of flashback

Juri chuckled a little , "just forgive him , maybe he's on his period" actually he know the person

"What ?" Both yuki and rena look to juri after hearing what he said

"E-eh ? Aha-ha-aha , n-nothing , d-don't mind me" nervous , not looking to the girls

"A-anyway , there's someone I want to introduce , he's my friend , I came here transferring together with him "

he continue , "ah! , that's him , Mayu!! , here "

"Haik~" still looking to his(her) comic , go to juri place

"Can you please stop reading the manga for awhile ? Hurry apologise to her" pointing to yuki

"What ?"Put down his comic , then looking to juri " Why should I --" he saw yuki and got frozen for awhile

"Don't say that you didn't know her after you bumping to her "

"Ehh??? that's her ?,  I'm really sorry , I apologise" bowing 90 degree

"Eh ? Ah , it's not really a problem , anyway , I'm kashiwagi yuki"

"H-haik , I'm W-watanabe Mayu , Y-yoroshiku" really nervous

"Is she in your class ?" Whispering to juri

"Yes"

"Damn that principal!! , I have to talk to him now , I have to go first , really sorry for earlier kashiwagi-san" then go away

"What happen with him ?" Looking to rena and yuki

"How can we know it ? He is your friend" rena answer him

"He's surprisingly a good boy , not like what I thought at first"

"He is always like that , and he's really cold but warm hearted" juri explain

"Really ? You know what ? I saw something from his eyes"

"H-his eyes ? What did you saw ?" Starled

"Sorrow"

"Sorrow ? " Both rena and juri said unison

"He make me think that he will never gain happiness for himself"

"I see .. , so that's sorrow .." Juri looking down

"But , somehow , he also make me think he didn't need any happiness"

"He didn't need it ? Then You are wrong" juri said

"Eh ?"

"He need it but ... he just can't"

"Why is it like that ?"

"God is the reason maybe ? Gomen , I have to go to the principal office , bye" go away too

"Rena , did you know what he just mean ?"

"I'm not sure"

"Is that so ? Anyway , he's the boy right ?"

"E-eh ?" Shocked , "what should I said ?" Murmur

*ting.....* , the school bell just ringing

"Hey , it's time to go to class , let's hurry go"

"Eh ? So fast ..." Didn't willing to

"Hurry up" smile

"Okay-okay , ah! , today i think we can't go home together"

"Hm? Why ?"

"W-well , i h-have a date" rena smile somehow is fading

"Ah .. , really ? " Forcing to smile

"Un"nodding

"where did you go ?"

"I don't really know yet"

"I see .."

"But i think juri can go home with you"

"E-eh ? Juri-kun ? Impossible"

"Why ?"

"Just hurry go to your class already , the teacher is coming soon"

"Haik~" pouting


Somewhere at the school


"Hey , what did you talk about with the principal ?"

"He force me to go to special honour class"

"What ? You are just too smart , you accept ?"

"At first i just say yes after argue with him,  but i say no after i meet yuki . She is at  our class right ?"

"Yeah "

"Of course i didn't want to go to that smarty class "

"I see "

~silent~

"Hey , you know ?" Juri suddenly spoke

"Know what ?"

"She saw it from your eyes"

"Saw what ?"

"Your sorrow"

"Eh ? My sorrow ? How can she saw it ?"

"There's a deep meaning right ? At least someone can see yours , no one saw mine"

"I saw yours"lie

"Is that so ?"

"Yup"

Smiling , "Arigatou" , jurina know mayu didn't saw it

"Jurina , how long it left ?"

"Let's see .... , 1 year ?"

"That long ?"

"That's a short time you know ? Time is important to us "

"Yeah , i knew it"

"Anyway , did we just skip the class ? This is our first day you know ?"

"Not a big problem , just say that we are not feeling well"

"Really ?"

"Yeah"

"May i know the reason we came here ?"

"Just miss japan ? America is just not suited me"

"I believe there is other reason , like ,  yuki ?" Grinning

"*sigh* You really hit the point" she never can hide it from jurina

"I've know it!" Smirk

"Don't smirk like that , anyway it's a good thing right ? You can meet her again"

"Yup , it's all thanks to you "

*silent*silent*silent*silent*

"Ehhh ? W-waiit ! Did you mean rena ?"

"Yes"grinning

"How did you know it ?"

"What is the thing about you that i don't know ? And ... We have meet her before right ?"

"Hm? ... Yes"

"And she didn't remember us even a bit right ?"

"Yes"

"You love her right ?"

"Yes." , Mayu grinning

"Wait!! Why did you ask that ? I didn't mean yes as love , i j-jjust like her , that's all , not love" nervous and not looking to mayu

"Really ?"

"Yes"

"Really 'really' ?"

"Really yes"

"Surely , really 'really' ?"

"Surely , really yes"

"Seriously , surely , really 'really' ?"

"Seriously yes r-rea-ly .. , stop it!! You make me confused!" Really confused

"Ahahaha , you're really dumb , just as expected"

"Okay, stop playing with me , i'm really going to be a dumbers if you keep play with my brain"

"What dumbers ?"

"A dumbers that will become a kissing monster" smirk appear on her face

"O-okay, i won't play anymore"straight face , scared with jurina monster side

"Good girl , now , buy me something to eat"

"Haik " just when mayu want to get going , she stop

"Hey!! I'm not your servant!"

"See who's the dumber now" laughing

"Say what you like" straight face

"Please don't put that face , your straight face is the most scarier face you know ?"

"How scary ?"

"Scarier than Ninja Turtles"

"Whatt ?? I didn't know ninja turtles is scary"

"I think they're scary"

"Why ?"

"Their color is green , i don't like it"

"For god sake ! it's not even their fault , turtles is usually green"

"Really ? I think turtles is purple"

"Whatt?? Where did that come from ?"

"Turtle purple , turtle purple , the way we said it is almost the same"

"Oh my god , my friend is really dumb" speaking out loud to the sky

"That's alien jurina , that's alien for sure"she continue

"Ehhh? Purple turtle is alien ?that's mean purple must be punished" acting like a child

"Stop it jurina"

"Haik~"

"Let's go home"

"What? Go home ? You're insane , it's still school time"

"Right! I forget about it" stay at the place

=

"They skip the class right at their first day , they're crazy" yuki thought to herself

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After school

"The school has end , let's go" mayu said

"Where ?"

"Home of course"

"What for ? It's boring to spending our time at home only , it's not like we have something to do at home"

"So ? Where ?"

"Hey , Let's go home together with rena and yuki" saw rena walk alone

"What ?You just said you didn't want to go home!"

"Really ? I didn't remember it" go to rena

"What's with he-- , him ?" Remembering someone might hear her

"Hello Rena"

"Juri ? Hello"

"Want to go home together ?"

"Hm? Well , i don't mind"

"Good! , Mayu , hurry let's go"

"Haik haik . Eh ? Where's kashiwagi ?"

"Yuki ? She has a date" sad

"Date ? I see .." Looks down

Jurina saw both of them really looks sad

"Hey , why did you both look down ?"

"..."
"..."

"Want to eat something sweet ?" , didn't get any reply

"Come on both of you , let's go" showing a bright smile , bright enough to blinding them

Mayu chuckled , "Actually you're the one who want it right ?"

"Eheheh , you figure it out ? As expected from the smarty"

"I don't have to being smart to know these"

"Let's go Rena-chan" smiling

"Okay" smiling back


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"Tetsu-kun , where should we go ?"

"Let's see ... Theater ?"

"Theater ? Well .. I like a movie but I don't really like a cold place ,"

"Really ? Then .. To the sea ?"

"I don't like sea"

"Then .. Do you want to eat ?"

"Eat ? Ice cream ??"

"Y-yes ?"

"Then , okay!!" Excited (she like ice cream afterall)

On their way

"Nee , Yuki .."

"Hn?"

"Do you like to hear a song ?"

"Song ? Of course !"

"Then , what is the song you like the most ?"

"Let's see .. , i like the akb grup idol song like green flash ?"

"Green flash ? I think i should hear it"

"Yup you should! It's a great song!"

"You like idol that much ?"

"Yup!"

"It's a new thing i know"

"Actually i'm like an otaku"

"Really ?"

"Yeah , hhey , that the shop" running like a child

"A girl who like idol and she's otaku , why did he want her that much ? I don't understand his thought , i don't want to date her if it's not for revenge to him"

inside the shop

"It's good that This shop is not really crowdy" when yuki want to take her seat

"Hey! That's rena right ? And juri ? And Mayu ?"

"Yup , that's rena and two boys ?"

"Let's join them"

"E-eh ? w-wait-- , aren't this is supposed to be a date ?" Murmurs

"Minna~" yuki aproach them

"Eh ? Yuki ?"

"Hello , may i sit here ?"

"Of course " mayu and rena said unison, yuki take her sit , tetsu too

"Yuki , aren't you are supposed to have a date ?"

"We come to ate ice cream , it's count as date right ?"

"Well--"

"Ah! I forgot , Mayu-kun , Juri-kun , he's Miyazawa Tetsu , my boyfriend"

"Miyazawa tetsu desu , yoroshiku"

"Yoroshiku."both mayu and juri glaring to him

"What is this feeling ?" Tetsu think to himself , feeling something uncomfortable

"Can we order the ice cream ?" Rena said

"Right!"

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"When will you send me back to japan ? I'm getting bored waiting here"

"Why should you go back that fast ? Your brother is there , so you just stay here , is that really hard for me to ask ?"

"He ? I really hate him , so let me stay at japan , and bring him back here!!"

"What's wrong with you ?"

"Nothing wrong dad , i just want to go back to japan"

"Fine! But you must live with your brother!"

"What? Whatever , at least i'm going back"

"You have to take care of him"

"What the hell ? He's big enough to take care of himself"

"He's your little brother , so take care of him"

"Even thought we're twins ?"

"So what ? He's still your little brother"

"Whatever"

"What wrong with my childs ? Both of them hating each other? What's the reason ?"Saying it out loud

"A girl!" Annoyed

"What ? Both of you fighting for a girl ?"

"No!"Go to his room

"I don't understand their thought"

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"Yuk-" rena , Mayu , and tetsu said in the same time

"Hmm??"Confused , jurina just looking at them like a good kids eating their ice cream (he's eating ice cream right now thought)

Rena , Mayu , and Tetsu glaring each other , yuki is confused with their attitude

"Yuki , there's something on your face"jurina wipe it and chuckled a little

"Really ? Arigatou" continuing her ice cream

"Uso..." Rena mayu and tetsu looks down

"Whaf a pani saik were" said while eating her icee cream (she means - what a funny sight here)

"What did you just said ?" Mayu ask

"I didn't said anything" act innocence

"Really ?"

"Y-yeah"

"Yuki ? Are you okay ? You look pale" rena worried

"Actually i feel my tummy hurt a lot"

"Hurt ? Where ? Should we go to the doctor ?"

"I think it's because i'm eating the ice cream too much"

"Should we go home now ?"

"Un" nodding

"Ah, tetsu-kun , sorry for today date , i will make it for another days"

"Don't worry for that , please get well soon , i will take care of the thing here"

"We will go call for a taxi , wait a minute" mayu and juri go to call the taxi

Everything have settled , yuki have go home , rena is there with her to take care of her while her mother is gone , mayu and juri go back home too.


"Jurina , do you think she's really get hurt because eating too much ice cream ? It have never happen to you right ?"

"Normally , other people than me will get hurt after eating that much , but for yuki , i'm not sure "

"I hope she's okay" really worried

"Don't worry , rena is there for her" patting her shoulder

"About rena .. You know right ?"

"Rena ? Know what ?"

"With yuki .."

"I knew it"

"You are not sad ?"

"How about you ?"

"Me ? I'm going to let her go anyway , i can't protect her forever"

"Then it's the same , you can't have her but you give her to rena , just like i give rena to yuki"

"You said that yuki can saw my sorrow right ?"

"Yeah"

"I think it's not my sorrow"

"What ? she saw it from your eyes , of course it's yours"

"I mean what she saw is not sorrow , it's different from sorrow"

"Then ? What is it ?"

"Despair"

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Blackcold-san thank's for the update..(^_^)
who's this person that have twins and hate each other **confused**???

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Mayu is girl??


Lol I'm little confused.


Make it yukirena I will treat you an ice cream *grin *

Waiting for update

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Re: WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME ? Mayuki and Wmatsui + (renayuki) Chapter 3
« Reply #25 on: March 10, 2015, 02:22:06 AM »
So is this going to be Mayuki and Wmatsui?!?

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Re: WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME ? Mayuki and Wmatsui + (renayuki) Chapter 3
« Reply #26 on: March 10, 2015, 07:42:10 AM »
Although how i like yuki with rena..
please make it possible for wmatsui and mayuki...
please author san...onegaiiiiiii~
What did they mean by they only have 1 year left??..
yups..love is all about sacrificing..and for ur love one to be happy tho ur's hurt
thanks for the update tho...waitin for next author san~
Live in the land of mist..nahh just kidding..
Live in the land of Wmatsui and Mayuki...
World of fantasy..World of Lalaland~

            (っ´▽`)っWmatsui~Mayuki ♡ (。’∀’。)

Tend to forget things but not mah fav author and fics

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Re: WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME ? Mayuki and Wmatsui + (renayuki) Chapter 3
« Reply #27 on: March 16, 2015, 11:34:10 AM »
What the heck jurina has a twin brother? :shock:
Why jurina and his twin brother have hatred to each other i think it's not just a simple hatred :dunno:
What did mayu mean that yuki saw is despair not a sorrow? :dizzy:

Author-san please update soon :pleeease:
i want to know why jurina and his twin brother have hatred to each other and why yuki saw is despair not sorrow? :on study:

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Re: WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME ? Mayuki and Wmatsui + (renayuki) Chapter 4
« Reply #28 on: March 17, 2015, 03:13:52 PM »
@narukami : no, he's not jurina, he's miyazawa tetsu who have a twins
@crosteks : he's Miyazawa tetsu twins, did you get the clue ?
@kuro_black29: i can't promise you about that , but please keep reading :)
@kirozoro : maybe i will make a little change here
@wmatsui fanfic : finally i can update this

sorry for bad grammar and the lame story , hope all of you can like it

chapter 4



the school is really empty, no one have come to school except rena,yuki,juri,mayu,and tetsu.it's already about time to go to class, but there's no one.

"nee,, what do you think that happen here ?"

"did you just ask me ?"

"no, i ask him" pointing to tetsu, "of course i ask you, who else ?him? no way!"

"well, how can i know what happened, i came here together with you mayu!"

"don't say that today is holiday"

"there's no way, today is thursday , not sunday and the teacher didn't mention anything about holiday" tetsu added

"but there's only both of us here, should we go home?"

"what? go home? no!, i better wandering here hearing my music, i'm really bored at home, and we are three here"

"who? i didn't see anyone here" pretend to didn't see tetsu

"hey!, i'm here alive you know "

"juri, i just hear someone talking to me" pretending to being scarred

"what? juri-san, what happen with him?"

"nee, mayu, i just hear someone talking too"play along with mayu

"whattt? hey, what's wrong with both of you ?"

"i think it's getting angry to us"

"juri, you know what should we do right?"think about run away

"wait, let me think"

"what?"both mayu and tetsu

5 minutes later

"mayu, i know what we should do now"

"good, then, 1,2,runn!!!!" they run like a jet

"o-oiy!!"juri look confused

"juri, what are you doing there?" still running

"he's standing at there confused"straight face

"i see..., wait, why are you running with me ?"tetsu is the one who's running with mayu

"is that wrong ?"

"but, juri is supppsed to .." depressed , "i shouldn't let him thinking"

"now i look like an idiot!"mayu continue

"seem like your friend is really idiot"

"shut up! at least he's better than you"

"at what?"

"he'a more reliable, friendlier, handsome, good at sport, he can play guitar , should i say all ? it will take 3 days to finish"grinning

"a-at least i'm smarter"nervous

"who said ? he's smarter than you before"

"what?"

"forget it" look sad

"juri, let's go"

"where did you want to go ?"

"let's just walk around here"

"okay then."

"hey, what about me ?"

"just go home and drink your milk"

"what ? i'm not a child"

"i dun care, just don't follow us"

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somewhere at school

"rena, is this sunday?"

"no, i'm sure it's thursday"

"then why is the school empty?"

"well, i don't know that"

"i think we should go home now”

"good idea "

"Yukii!!!!"
"Renaa!!!!!"

someone calling them from behind, then they turn back to see who is that

"mayu-kun?"
"juri-kun?"

"yoo"both mayu amd juri look really happy

"what did both of you doing here ?"rena ask

"walk around"juri said

"do you know what happen here? "

"nope, we just arrive and decided to walk around this school"

"there's only the four of us here ?"

"no, ther-" , mayu hurry pinch juri
"awww!mayi, that's hurts"

"yes, there's only four of us here"

"mayu-"

"shut up!" mayu said between his smile , juri feel the chill

"t-then, what should we do here?"juri said nervous

"we just think we want to go home"

"go home ? that fast ?" juri looks sad

"how about we go to juri house?" mayu said

"right!, ehh , my house ? mayu-"

"juri-kun house? it will be weird if we go to boy house , let's go to my house instead" yuki said

"aren't that's the same yuki ?"

"rena, it's not , my mother is home , so that's different" smiling

"ahh.... , but what should we do there ?"

"well , i don't know"

"you told us to go to your house , but don't know what to do"

"rena,you always go to my place, then just do what we usually do"

"and the boys?"

"eto~....., let's ask my mom later"

"what? why do we have to ask auntie for this ?"

"she might have something for us to do"

"let's go mayu-kun, juri-kun"she continue

"haik", mayu really ecxited

on their way, they meet with tetsu and decided to invite tetsu too , he's still yuki boyfriend afterall , mayu expression become weird when tetsu come, he don't like tetsu for many reason.

at yuki house

"mom, i'm home"

"welcome home , why did you go home that fast ?"

"for some reason, and my friend is here"

"ara.. , you bring boys to home , which one is your boyfriend ?"

"stop it mom , but that one is rena's" whispering to her mom and looking to juri

"rena-chan, you have grown" , "please take care of rena chan" talking to juri

"ehh? yuki, what did you said ?"

"i didn't said anything to mom "

"........"

"you just admit you said something"

"mom, let me introduce them , he's watanabe mayu-kun, matsui juri-kun, and miyazawa tetsu-kun"

"yoroshiku onegaishimasu" the three boys bowing

"what a good boys all of you"

"so ,mom , do you have anything for us to do ?"

"why?"

"cause we need something to do , there's no way i take them to my room"mean the boys

"but mom didn't have anything to do too"

"anything is good, just tell me"

"okay, i want some of you go to buy snack, and some left here to help me cook"

"who can cook here ?" yuki mom ask

"aren't that obvious ? the girl can cook" tetsu said

"yuki can't cook you know ?"

"i can cook" juri said

"really ? then , mayu-kun and yuki , please go help me buy an afternoon snack"

"how about me ?"

"tetsu just stay here with us" juri added

"eh? but i can't cook"

"then i will teach you" juri wink to mayu

"r-right, just 2 of us is enough to buy snack"

"then we will be going now" yuki said

"okay, be careful"

go out from the house

"fortunately he didn't go with us"

"eh?why? he's your boyfriend right ?"

"i don't love him. ooppss!!!"

"you don't love him?" mayu feels happy

"w-well, yes"

"why?"

"should i tell you?"

"tell me when you feel like it"

"i like a girl"

"hmm?"

"do you think i'm weird?"

"no"
"great mayu, after all you did to come here as a boy, and she likes a girl, ypu should just come here as a girl from the start" mayu think to herself

"is there a girl you like now ?"

"i'm not sure"

"why?"

"there's two person that i like, i'm not sure what is my true felling"

"mayu, you didn't have a chance anymore"mayu think

"you know what ?one of them someone i don't know "

"the other one ?"

"pretty close with me"

"i see..."
"i wonder who is both that girl" mayu think again

"we are here, what should we buy?

"let's just go in and buy whatever we like"

"good idea"

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"ah, i forget to buy something , juri-kun, rena-chan , can i leave the rest for you?"

"haikk"unison

"tetsu-kun, will you help me ?"

"okaay"they go out too

"juri-kun, can you bring me that sugar?"

"here"

"thank you"

"i wonder what did auntie want to buy "

"she probably didn't forget anything,just want to leave both of us alone"

"eh?"

"yuki must have said something to auntie about you"

"about me ?"

"yes, she must said that i like you"

"eh?" blushed

"don"t worry, i didn't like a boy"

"i know, you love yuki right ?" look sad but still smiling

"eh?" look to juri who is preparing the food

"i knew that"

"how?"

"don't know, i just knew it"

"please don't tell her"

"then kiss me first"

"what??"

"just kidding" forcing to laugh , "i won't tell her"

"thank you"

"not a problem"

"juri-kun, is there someone you love?"

"i have"

"oh.., who's that?"

"someone out of range"

"why is itike that?"

"she like someone else"

"but you still can take her heart ,fairly of course"

"that's impossible , she really have fall in love"

"just do your best, key?"

"hn"

"we're back!"

"where's mom and tetsu?"

"go out to somewhere"

"then that's meann..." yuki grinning

"don't think about something weird yuki"

"i-i didn't!"

"it's written all over your face you know ?"

"i don't know"

they waiting for yuki mom and tetsu to come back

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"tetsu-kun"

"haik?"

"you are yuki boyfriend right ?"

"eh? you know ? then why?"

"will you leave her if i say to ?"

"but, why?"

"she didn't love you, i know you knew it too"

tetsu didn't answer anything and they arrive

"we are back~"

"mom, where did you go to ?"

"to buy something"

"what did you buy ?"

"nothing"

"eh?"

"so, all is done right ? let's eat"

"haikk" all of them eat peacefully , till something happen to yuki again

"m-mom, it's really hurt"

"what's wrong yuki?"

"my stomach, it's really hurt" fainting and fall from her seat

"Yuki!!!" they hurry take yuki to the hospital


"doctor what's happen to my daughter ?"her mom really worried

"there's nothing particulary happen to her, just let her rest, then she will be okay" a doctor with thick glasses, and looks like didn't sleep for a week

"doctor, it's not the first time" mayu suddenly speak up

the doctor look to mayu for awhile
"watanabe-san, matsui-san, can you please come with me for minute?"

"anoo, which one ?" rena ask

"sorry, i mean matsui jurina"

"me?" wondering how can the doctor know their name

"right, and yuki's mom, don't worry, she's okay"

"thank you doctor" (tetsu is already going home, yuki mom told to)

then mayu and juri follow the doctor to her office

"so, mayu-chan, jurina-chan, why did both of you come to japan ?" the doctor take of her glasses

"ehh? who are you ?" mayu ask

"you have forget me ? even you jurina?"

"i really don't know who are you" jurina said

"it's me..."

"who?" unison

"oh my god, you have really forgotten ? ooshima?"

"ooshima ? ooshima yuko?" mayu said

"that's rightttt, finally you remember"

"what happen with you ? you haven't sleep ? you look loke a zombie"

"i'm a doctor you know ?"

"i don't know" put a straight face

"so mean, anyway, why did both of you come here ?"

"she want to meet her crush"

"reallly ? this cyborg have a crush ?, i can't believe it, you have grown mayu-chan" fake tears

"anyway, i don't know who are you"jurina said

"eh ?"

"yuko, she have got amnesia"

"what ? how ?"

"you don't have to know"

"tell me" now yuko look serious

"she's being attacked right at her head"

"who did it ?"

"we don't know, they use a mask"

"mask?, left thay behind first, yuki is in a dangerous"

"whatt?" both of them shocked

"nothing wrong with her body, but i'm sure someone do this to her, she might die, you should hurry help her"

"how ?"

"your parents, ask them for help"

"............" both mayu and juri got silent

"come on both of you, do this for your friend, you want to see her die ?"

"i didn't want to, but my parents will never help me"mayu looks really sad

"mayu, try to talk to them , they will understand, they love you , you know?"

"i don't know they love me, if they love me, they won't make us become like this"

"mayu,jurina......"

"yuko, i will talk to my father, but help me to look over yuki, okey?"

"i will"

"and rena too" jurina added

"don't worry, i will look over them for your sake , right?"

"arigatou" , mayu and jurina go out from the office then something unexpected happen , rena hearing their whole conversation

"Rena....?" jurina look to her






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Re: WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME ? Mayuki , Wmatsui , renayuki Chapter 4
« Reply #29 on: March 17, 2015, 03:44:16 PM »
It's really heartbreaking.. :banghead: :banghead:
Jurina loves Rena, But Rena Loves Yuki..
Mayu Loves Yuki, And Yuki loves both Mayu and Rena.. :smhid
So I think the center person in this story is Yuki, if only Yuki can choose...  :sweatdrop:
Who that attacked jurina? And what are the real identity of jurina and mayu? :? :?
Thanks for update... :thumbsup

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Re: WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME ? Mayuki , Wmatsui , renayuki Chapter 4
« Reply #30 on: March 17, 2015, 05:08:38 PM »
Etoo, 


Hmm,lets see. So Yuki love two girls.


Yuki you should choose rena .

Why yuki faint what happens to her who want to kill her.

Rena hear their talk .

What will going to happen waiting for update

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Re: WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME ? Mayuki , Wmatsui , renayuki Chapter 4
« Reply #31 on: March 17, 2015, 10:17:38 PM »
Oh crap

Rena heard the whole conversation

I wonder what is her reaction be

Update ASAP pls

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Re: WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME ? Mayuki , Wmatsui , renayuki Chapter 4
« Reply #32 on: March 27, 2015, 11:54:53 AM »
Wehehehehehe

Asap

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Re: WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME ? Mayuki , Wmatsui , renayuki Chapter 4
« Reply #33 on: April 08, 2015, 04:31:14 PM »
herethe next chap
i change the plot
but hope you still want to read it




chp 5


"Rena....?"

"what are you doing here ?"

"w-what did you m-mean? yuki.." start crying

"you hear all the conversation?"

"why? what have yuki done  ? why someone want to kill her ?" still crying

"Rena..." hug her

"why must it be yuki ? she didn't do anything wrong" desperately crying

"Rena.... , don't worry , she will be find , believe me"

"juri-kun , mayu-kun , please help her , don't let her die" said between her cry

"we are not going to let her die , never"mayu said

"that's right rena , why don't you go to see yuki , we will do everything to help her"

"okay"sobbing

"stop crying , don't let her see you crying" juri wipe rena tears

"arigatou" smiling then go back

"jurina...."

"i'm okay , let's go to your dad" put a sad smile

"with our boy outfit ? no!"

"ahhh.... , almost forgot about this , let's go home first"

"you are really forgetfull"

"Mayu.."

"hm?"

"how can you talk with your dad ,you haven't talk to him for years"

"i don't know"

"....." speechless

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"rena ! where did you go to ?" smiling cheerfully

forcing her smile , "i bought this for you" showing an ice cream

"ice cream!!!!"

"here,eat it before it melt"

"arigatou rena-chan"

"ah , where's mayu-kun and juri-kun?"

"they go home , they have something to do"

"i see"

"wait!! did the doctor just call juri and mayu is a girl ?did i hear it wrong ? and juri name is jurina ? seriously ? they are a girl ? god , you make thing really complicated right now "she thought,  just realise it

"rena ?"snap back

"h-haik?"

"what's wrong ?"

"ehh? nothing wrong , have you finish your ice cream ?"

"yup"

"Go rest"

"okay" , yuki fall asleep faster than she thought , then the doctor come to visit yuki and rena

"is she feeling anything wrong ?"

"Doctor?" starled , "no"

"i'm ooshima yuko"

"matsui rena"

"so , did you hear our conversation earlier?"

"E-eh? , y-yes"

"And , there's nothing you want to ask ?" checking Yuki hospitality data

"There's so many thing i don't understand"

"Which thing ?"

"Like , mayu and juri is a girls?"

"Oh, that's one , want to know the reaso n they being a boy ?"

"What is it ?"

"They come here from America just to see both of you and spent their time with both of you as human"

"And why us ? what did you mean as human ?"

"Okay , that's a girl secret , but i will tell you. simple , jurina crush is you and mayu crush is yuki"

"Eh?"

"Still not get it?"

"But , we haven't meet before "

"You have meet with jurina and mayu before , just you don't remember, you are really important to jurina , she got amnesia but still remember you. as for mayu , i don't know how she meet yuki"

"Where did i meet her ? matsui jurina ... " start to thinking , "m-matsui j-urina? the little girl who lost her candy ?"

"That's her"

*flashback*

a little girl crying loudly with her bunny
"mr.candy , where are you" crying and keep saying the same word till other girl come and told her,,

"hey , why are you crying ? don't crying , you are not a baby right ? so stop crying" another girl with pale face and straight black hair come

"b-but , i lost my candy"still crying

"you candy ? i will give you mine , so don't cry , okey ?"

"unn."nodding

"here , what's your name ?"giving her candy

"matsui jurina"

"oh, i'm matsui rena , we have the same surname"

"thank you for the candy , i will never cry anymore"smiling brightly

"promise ?"

"unn" nodding happily

"good girl , i have to go now , hope we can meet again , bye bye "

"bye bye"

"jurina , here's your candy"

"mayu-chan, a girl give me a candy"

"who ?"

"she" pointing to rena who's turn back to facing jurina once again

"she's really a good girl , you say thank you right ?"

"yes"

"let's go home"

*end of flashback*

"i don't believe i forget about her"

"you did forget about her , and the one who got amnesia is her , not you" chuckled

"but , what did you mean 'as human' ?"

"t-that....., hard to explain  , but they only have 1 year left"

"1 year ? they are going to die ?"

"what ? no ..!!"

relief, " then ?"

"one year as human and the rest as monster"

"monster ?did it even exist ?"

"better you don't know too much , don't drag yourself into this kind of world , we are in the different world"

"different ? what different ? we are all the same here"

"see this" yuko show her hand and rena got shocked

"f-fire!!! water , water , hurry up" a fire shown up from yuko hand and rena running around searching for water

"Hey , don't got that panick and don't worry, this fire will not hurt me"

"what is that ?" stop running

"just like what i said , we are different , and this is what gonna happen to jurina and mayu soon"

".........."

"some of us want this kind of power , but jurina and mayu didn't want it , that's why they hate their parents"

"their parents ? what's wrong with them ?"

"they turn mayu and jurina to become monster like us"

"and why did you keep saying you are a monster?"

"cause i'm one"

"i still can't understand all of these thing"

"ask me again when you want to , now just act like you don't know anything"

"how can i act like i don't know anything ? i know something! a big thing! i still don't believe this! just tell me this is a lie"

"it's not , the fact that we are a magician is real , mayu and jurina will be the last magician in magic world , they will be the stronger , Jurina is the queen , mayu is the second"

"Jurina is the queen ? then why they don't want it , and say they are a monster ?"

"Magic mean power , power mean war , war mean there will be a dying people , they didn't want it , and they can't live a normal life like they want"

Rena didn't know what to say anymore and suddenly remember about yuki

"Then , who is the one that want to kill yuki?" a sad voice

"About that , sorry i don't know"

"Any relation with the magic world ?"

"Maybe ,.."

"But , yuki is a normal person.."

"Not in the past"

"what ?"

"In the past , yuki is the queen , like mayu and jurina , but she died , she drink that water"

"That water ?"

"Yes , the magician killer , only that water"

"Why did she drink it ?"

"She's tired with all these magic thing , she can't handle it"

"So why did someone want to kill her now?"

"Her blood still have the strong power , there's a people who want her blood , and want have her power , but she must die first"

"What?"

"I have to go now , ah , I forgot to tell you that you're just like mayu in the past , you are the second"

"Ehhhhhh???????" Really shocked

"Jaa.." go out from the room

"Seriously ? The god must be crazy, what should I do now ? I don't understand this kind of thing at all , and I really don't want to go to the magician world!! , Where Is My Normal Life?~~" crying for her fate

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"Mayu , what is your father look like?"

"My father? He look like my dad"

"i see......."

Silent~~~~~

"Wait!! of course he look like your father"

"Ohhhh!! i think you will not realise it"chuckled

"come on , i'm not that stupid like what you think"

"Okay , he look like a nice father that will always help his daughter and will always bring happiness to his family"sad look

"Then , why?"

"One time , i don't know what the reason, he come home and act like crazy , he tried to kill everyone in house, but he didn't attack my mom and me. The next morning , i get up and saw you sitting beside me , mom and dad go away from house leaving you and me behind"

"I don't remember it"

"Can't help it , you have amnesia"

"Good thing i still remember you and Rena, but , do you know where is your parents right now?"

"I know , Yuko told me"

"I wonder why your father turn us become like this..."

"I'm really sorry Jurina" look down

"Sorry? why did you said sorry? this has nothing to do with you"

"it's because my father you become one"

"See the positive , i will be the queen you know? It's not that bad

"But i know you don't want it"

"......."

at mayu parent's house

"We have arrive" Mayu said

"Then we should hurry go in"

"Wait!"

"Why?"

"What should i say to them?"

"You make me wanna laugh, where is the genius Mayu go?"

"Don't laugh , i haven't talk with them for a long time, of course i didn't know what to said" blushing

"How cute"

"Stop it!"

"Okay okay. Anyway , you will know what to talk when you meet them"

"Really?"

"You don't believe me?"

".... , okay then"

*knock*

"Who's that?"

"Maybe just want to sell something"

"I will go see it"

"Anything can i hel--" shocked

"Mom..."

"Mayu" her tears start falling down

"Mom, I'm back"

"Otou-san ,Mayu have come back"

"Mayu???" shocked

thanks for keep reading





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Re: WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME ? Mayuki , Wmatsui , Renayuki Chapter 5
« Reply #34 on: April 08, 2015, 05:17:35 PM »
*shocked *

*slap the face * amazing your fic is amazing.

Eh seriously jurina and mayu are queen.

Waooh look like interesting future.

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Re: WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME ? Mayuki , Wmatsui , Renayuki Chapter 5
« Reply #35 on: April 08, 2015, 05:38:50 PM »
the first time i read this fic, i think this fic just love school story  :bingo:
but now this fic change to be supernatural story  :hehehe:

you're great author-san :on woohoo:
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Re: WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME ? Mayuki , Wmatsui , Renayuki Chapter 5
« Reply #36 on: April 08, 2015, 05:40:24 PM »
Wow it became 'magic'

Welcome to magical worlds~


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Re: WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME ? Mayuki , Wmatsui , Renayuki Chapter 5
« Reply #37 on: April 08, 2015, 06:19:37 PM »
The genre change..  :shocked:
Now its more interesting,..  :grin:
Can't wait for the next update :thumbsup

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Re: WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME ? Mayuki , Wmatsui , Renayuki Chapter 5
« Reply #38 on: April 08, 2015, 06:28:08 PM »
Wow it become an adventure yeay  :cow:  :cow:

Want some more magic  :inlove:  :inlove:

Update soon  :thumbsup  :thumbsup

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Re: WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME ? Mayuki , Wmatsui , renayuki Chapter 4
« Reply #39 on: April 12, 2015, 03:09:58 PM »
wow magic worl...
jurina will be the queen, mayu will be the second,
meanwhile yuki and rena were the former queen and the second...
wonder what will be after this
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