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Offline blakwhite

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Love, doesn't care who you are (atsuMina OS) - COMPLETED
« on: October 03, 2013, 08:38:51 AM »
well, it was my 1st OS and my 1st fanfic  :oops:
i hope you will like it :cathappy:

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               Love, doesn't care who you are


“Hey, look! That is the nerdie otaku boy”

“eew,gross”

“look at him, so weird”


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‘Yeah, they were always talk about me like that, some call me weird otaku, nerd otaku, and sometimes they call me cold boy, but I don't  really care. Ah btw I forgot to tell you my name, my name is Takahashi Minami, I am a high school student at Sakura High School, and they call me the weird nerdie otaku boy’



---- At classroom ----


When i sit in my place i can see the crowd on  corridor

“Kyaaa!!! Maeda-san kirei”

“Aah~ I hope I can be her boyfriend”

“So cool ~, beautiful”

Yes, she is Maeda Atsuko, the school princess,
Well.. to tell you the truth, her face, personality, really beautiful, she was the PERFECT girl.
And for your info, i have crush on her  too.

*bell ring*

“okay class, now lets start to study... ah, i almost forgot, pls collect your homework”

‘aw crap, i forgot to do my homework!’

“Takahashi! Where is your homework?!”

“Ah, ano... etoo...”

“Where?”

“Ahh, ano... sorry sensei, i forgot to do my homework”

“Grr, takahashi !, stand outside until lunch break!”

“H...ha...hai!” im quickly going outside class.


---- lunch break ----


‘ahh... so tired, my legs so hurt’ when lunch break, im quickly grab my manga and go to garden, i laying down under the tree while reading my manga.

‘ah, so noisy!! I can;t focus reading my manga!’ then i take a peak behind the tree   

“To tell you the truth.... i really like you from the first time i looking at you.... p-pp-p .... please g-g-g-go out w-w-with m-m-me” said the boy while his face is really red.

“OI ! CAN YOU LOW YOUR VOICE! YOU ARE DISTURBING ME READING MY MANGA YOU KNOW!” I said while glaring at him.

When he see me, his face really red and then he ran away from there. I feel guilty to interrupting someone who want to confess his feeling.

“Thank you, the truth is i want to reject him, but i dont know how to turn him down properly” she said while smiling at me.

When I look at her....

‘OMG, ITS HER’ I feel heat on my face, my head feel like will explode soon, she is here, she is maeda atsuko, ‘omg, what should i do?’

“Ahh, ano... sorry for interrupt-“

“No, no, no, its not your fault, i already thanked you right?” she said while smiling

“Btw, can i have your name ?” she said again while

“ah, my name is Takahashi, Takahashi Minami desu!”

“oh, I see, my name is Maeda Atsuko, then, can I call you Minami?”

“yeah, sure you can Maeda-san” I said while smiling and blushing at her

“hey,no need to be formal, you can call me Acchan”

“ah, h-h-hai A-acc-acchan – san”

“without –san pls”

“hh-ha-hai a-ac-acchan”

“Good, lets be a friend minami-kun” she said while smiling brightly




------ 1 week after that ------



Well, its already 1 week after me and acchan become a friend we always meet up at school library and chatting, but i always acting cold to her when there is a student. That because ....

----- flashback -----



“hee~, hey nerdie, i hear you and Maeda-sama is a friend huh?” said student 1

“hee~, I wonder why she wants to be your friend” said student 2

“hey nerdie! you know, her popularity will be decreased if you're near her you know!”

“hey nerdie! listen to me! if I see u near maeda-sama again, I will beat you to death! And don't tell her about this, got that?” said Keita the leader of group.

I'm just nodded my head

“good, now, pls remember what we are saying”


----- end of flashback -------


---- at library -----


“Minami~” Acchan said while smiling to him

“Ah, acchan ohayou”

“ohayou~, nee, Minami tell me why are you so cold to me when there is student around?”

‘ah, this topic again’

“That’s because i don't like to socialize with other in front of student” I said to her with flat voice.

“Eeh~ so I'm just like the other in your eyes eh?” she said while clinging to my arm.

“I-i-i-its not l-l-l-l-l-like t-t-t-that” ‘why the hell am i stutter?’

“Ah btw, Minami, you promise to walk home together right?”

“ah yeah, of course” then i see keita and his underling in front of library door

“then i waited for you in front of gate okay?” she said while smiling happily

“o-o-o-okay” i said while keep my head down and blush



----- after school ------


I pack my book and manga in my bag, when I'm ready to go home...

“OY, WEIRD NERDIE OTAKU, I ALREADY TOLD YOU TO STAY AWAY FROM ATSUKO-SAMA RIGHT?”

Keita and his friends come to me. He said while grab my collar shirt and pulled me up.

“ah, s-s-s-sor-sorry, it's my fault, pls forgive me!”

“DO YOU THINK I WILL LET YOU GO HUH? NOW YOU GO WITH US! “

---- in front of gate -----

==== Atsuko POV =====


‘Haah, what took him so long? I really cant hold this feeling anymore, today i will confess my feeling for him’ I said in my mind while waiting for him in front of gate

---- 10 minutes later -----


‘ Eeh? He still not come out yet? Im sure he not go home yet, i will looking for him’

Then I go inside school building and start searching for him, and when I'm at front of gym I could hear someone's screaming.

“I TOLD YOU TO LEAVE HER ALONE WEIRD OTAKU” I heard a broken stick.

Then I'm trying to open the door, but its locked, and I'm broke the door.
When the door open, my jaw dropped, my heart broken, I can't hold my tears anymore
I see Minami is lying on the ground, with blood cover on his body, and I see bruise on his face and blood on his lips.

I run as fast as I can to him and hugged him tightly.

“Minami.... Minami.... please wake up” i said while shaking his body, then I glare to them.

“WTF ARE YOU DOING TO HIM HUH ?!! ARE YOU GOING TO KILL HIM?!!” I shouted at them while they just keep their head down, then the gang leader said.

“s-s-sorry Maeda – sama we just don't want him to near you...” he said still looking on the ground.

“WHO ARE YOU THAT YOU THINK YOU CAN CONTROL MY SOCIAL LIFE?!!”

I shout at them, and i call an ambulance while hugging Minami

“Minami.... please wake up... I still have something to tell you”
my Tears keep falling.
 
When ambulance come, I'm staying beside him until we arrive at the Hospital.

---- at hospital’s ward ----

“Minami.. pls wake up.. pls, I need you”

I said to him while crying and grab his hand tightly.
I will waiting for him until he wakes up!

----- end of Atsuko POV -----

------ In the morning ----

It's already morning and Atsuko is sitting on chair while her head beside his arm, sleeping.
Then she feel like something moving in her hand, and she wakes up immediately,

“nnggghh...” he is groaning while trying to sit.

“MINAMI !! Don't force yourself, I will call the doctor” Atsuko said while hold him back and call the doctor.

After the doctor go out from the ward, Atsuko come in, and sit beside his bed.

“what do you feel Minami?” she asked worriedly

“hmm... a little bit pain I think” he said while smiling at her and holding her hand.

“pls don't worry Atsuko”

She just keep her head down while blushing.

“ a-a-ah...a-a-ano...”

“hmm?”

“umm, Minami, I want to tell you something,because I can't hold it anymore” she said while blushing hard on her face.

“hmm? What is it? You can't hold your pee?”

“eeh~ its not like that... mou” she said while pouting cutely.

“hahahaha, gomen gomen, so what is it?”

“hmm, you know, hmm I know we already be a friend for 1 week I think, and to tell you the truth, I'm falling in love with you, for the first time I met you at opening ceremony, so.. do you want to be my boyfriend?” I confessed to him while blushing hard on my face.

“eh? EEEEH???!!!” he screamed with disbelief on his face

“b-b-b-but w-w-why? What make you fall in love with me?” he said again while blushing hard.

“i love you because i think you are so cute, and what makes me fall in love with you more is you are so gentle.” she said while blushing hard and keep my head down.

“b-b-but, I'm an otaku, and people said I'm weird and nerd” he said and looking down sadly.

“I don't care, I don't care what people think of you, I'm love you the way you are Minami” I said and look at his eyes.

“so, do you accept my confession?”

“i-i-i-i..... I can't accept that”

I feel my heart broken, my tears want to fall from my eyes, my heart really hurt.

“because, I can't accept if girl confessed to me, I'm the man so I must confess to you” he said while lift up her face so he can see her eyes directly.

“so, Maeda Atsuko, do you want to be my girlfriend?” he said lovingly.

“YES ! YES TAKAHASHI MINAMI!” she said while hugging him tightly.

“ouch..ouch.. atsuko, remember I'm still hurt you know” he pouts at her.

“ah sorry” she said quickly let go of him.

“hehe... *smooch* i love you my princess” he said while kissing her and put his arm on her waist.

*smooch* I love you too, my lovely otaku” she said while put her arm on his neck.

And they kissing passionately



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Proofread by : Ryuukaecchi / Rukaecchi
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i really hope you like it >_<
« Last Edit: October 22, 2017, 09:32:19 PM by sophcaro »

Offline Kochiki

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Re: Love, doesn't care who you are ( atsumina OS )
« Reply #1 on: October 03, 2013, 09:13:22 AM »
Woot!!~ I think you wrote it well!!~ Ehehe~
-Ah...Minami is an otaku nerd, huh??~ So what??~
-What so bad about it??~ Just leave him alone would ya Keita??~
-So yeah, oh...So Atsuko was in love with Minami!!~ Cool!!~
-But for a minute there, i was scared what'll happen with Minami after the beat up..
-And thank god Minami is in a good condition and bam!! Again i was scared when...
-She rejected it!!~ So yeah~ Man should confess first!!~ Iyeay!!~ Happy~

>Well, a nice OS you have there...Sank you!!~ I hope there will be a next-time-there's-another-one!!~

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Re: Love, doesn't care who you are ( atsumina OS )
« Reply #2 on: October 03, 2013, 09:32:06 AM »
Woot!!~ I think you wrote it well!!~ Ehehe~
-Ah...Minami is an otaku nerd, huh??~ So what??~
-What so bad about it??~ Just leave him alone would ya Keita??~
-So yeah, oh...So Atsuko was in love with Minami!!~ Cool!!~
-But for a minute there, i was scared what'll happen with Minami after the beat up..
-And thank god Minami is in a good condition and bam!! Again i was scared when...
-She rejected it!!~ So yeah~ Man should confess first!!~ Iyeay!!~ Happy~

>Well, a nice OS you have there...Sank you!!~ I hope there will be a next-time-there's-another-one!!~

hehe :3
thank you kochiki-san  :D

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Re: Love, doesn't care who you are ( atsumina OS )
« Reply #3 on: October 03, 2013, 11:05:50 AM »
Ah... Atsuko likes the nerd otaku Minami...

Nice and simple love story... with a bit of drama in between...

Great OS there...

Thank you for the Atsumina OS

Can't wait to see more Atsumina OS

Thank you again...

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Re: Love, doesn't care who you are ( atsumina OS )
« Reply #4 on: October 03, 2013, 01:02:30 PM »
thank you for comment cisda-san,
i think i will try to write again  :oops:

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Re: Love, doesn't care who you are ( atsumina OS )
« Reply #5 on: October 06, 2013, 12:07:45 AM »
so cute

thanks so much!!!

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Re: Love, doesn't care who you are ( atsumina OS )
« Reply #6 on: October 22, 2013, 06:51:38 AM »
I adored the fanfic, Congratulations.

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Re: Love, doesn't care who you are ( atsumina OS )
« Reply #7 on: October 23, 2013, 05:44:42 PM »
minami is a nerd otaku huh?
so why???
atsuko still love her in anyway...  :wub:
nice OS...
keep on writing author-san....
i'm waiting for your other fanfic...  :twothumbs

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Re: Love, doesn't care who you are ( atsumina OS )
« Reply #8 on: October 27, 2013, 02:35:42 AM »
Poor of the minami, but in the end he/she gave everything fortunately certain. 
I loved the history.

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Re: Love, doesn't care who you are ( atsumina OS )
« Reply #9 on: August 08, 2015, 02:19:12 AM »
Nice shot!!
I love Atsumina!

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Re: Love, doesn't care who you are ( atsumina OS )
« Reply #10 on: August 08, 2015, 03:05:05 AM »
Minami in real life is an otaka for One Piece.
Atsumina sure is getting stronger.
Discovering the wonders of your vague imagination.
Taeny, Atsumina and SayaMilky <3

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Re: Love, doesn't care who you are ( atsumina OS )
« Reply #11 on: August 08, 2015, 04:09:45 AM »
Really like it :hiakhiakhiak:

good job author-san   :on GJ: :byebye:

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Re: Love, doesn't care who you are ( atsumina OS )
« Reply #12 on: August 08, 2015, 03:02:26 PM »
Bless!!!

Good job Author-san

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