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« Reply #80 on: February 12, 2007, 11:47:42 AM »
Wow you actually responded. LOL.

Hm, that reminds me of someone. there was a show with a girl like that and a hamster..(Not Hamtaro, LOL) And they did all sorts of cool things..You know it?

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« Reply #81 on: February 12, 2007, 08:27:34 PM »
Miki + trashbag reminds me of Eriko Sato in Cutie Honey movie (ok, she still had some underwear, so that doesn't count)

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« Reply #82 on: February 13, 2007, 03:02:39 AM »
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Man, A battle scared Aya is pretty hot too (thinks back to Sukebans open scenes Aya) Dude, was that awesome or what? Or am I the only one who thinks so.
Yeah, doesn't Aya have some scars in this story if I remember correctly?

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Miki would be hot even with a trash bag XDXD
How much more dirty can you get? :P

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« Reply #83 on: February 13, 2007, 03:32:50 AM »
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How much more dirty can you get? :P


I instantly thought diapers.....

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« Reply #84 on: February 13, 2007, 03:36:24 AM »
^ Lmao, naughty Mikan! Naughty!

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« Reply #85 on: February 13, 2007, 10:05:41 AM »
^

I know how sick is that.....

Miki, diapers, baby bib...dummy...

How did we get so off track?

Hey is Rika in this world?

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« Reply #86 on: February 13, 2007, 07:08:03 PM »
*ignores thoughts of Baby Fetish!Miki*  Miki and Rika? Boy howdy that sure is sumthin'.

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« Reply #87 on: February 13, 2007, 11:29:01 PM »
.... Just when I thought the chapter couldnt get any hotter with some Yossui+flip action.... Damn. Miki is damn hot *not speaking of the discription only*.

Rika.... hmmm. Bitchy Rika? I really need to start reading WLH >.>

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Traveler ch. 7
« Reply #88 on: February 14, 2007, 11:18:22 PM »
7




“Yoshizawa-saaaaan!”

Yossi and Rika were still in shock, staring at each other, when the singer found herself being hugged tightly.

“Hey! No hugs!” exclaimed Yossi trying to move away from Kaoru “What’s up with you?”
“I though you were dead… I was so worried…”
“Worried? It’s your fault if that thing almost killed me!”

Even if she was acting cold, Yocchan knew that she was glad to see the girl safe. Besides, the fact that Kaoru was the one with the Traveler and the only way to get out of there it was a significant point.

“Kaoru told us about your trip” said Miki walking towards Yossi and watching her thoroughly “Obviously, we didn’t believe her until she showed us that folder of hers and a photo”
“I think that Rika-chan’s in shock since then…” stated Nono.
“Maybe because she began to feel guilty after all?” said an unknown voice.

Everyone turned to the end of the stairs where two silhouettes had appeared.

“Matsuura-san…”
“Yes, Eri. You really believe that I was so naive to not notice that you’re double-dealing?”
“Kamei, can you explain it, please?”

Maki’s words, at least, didn’t seem a direct attack to the poor Eri. She remained quiet and tried to hold Aya’s fury ‘till the younger could tell why she acted that way.

“I’m not betraying anybody, Goto-san” answered Kamei without losing her temper “I just wanted to help Yoshizawa-san to find her friend”
“What a coincidence that she was with the enemy, right?” said Aya with a mocking tone in her voice.
“Why do you insist in that? We never did anything to hurt you…”

Matsuura turned to Rika who finally had reacted after the initial shock. The younger’s face wasn’t too kind after hearing those words.

“I must remember you that it's because of you that my sister was killed?”

Rika didn’t know how to answer to that statement and, with her silence, she just got to make the younger even angrier. She’d walked towards Ishikawa and everybody knew that the next step could end in a fight between the two girls. Seeing that everything was getting worst, Yossi felt the urge to do something. Somehow, all this was because of her…

“Enough!” said someone before she could open her mouth to say something.
“Don’t meddle…” threatened Aya.

Miki had placed herself between Matsuura and her friend and was looking at the younger without any fear in her eyes. The menacing expression on Aya’s face didn’t impress her at all and, taking some steps, she went closer to the other girl before speaking with a deep and serious voice.

“I’m not gonna let you hurt Rika…”
“Stop me” reply Matsuura still with her arrogant attitude.
“Wanna fight?”
“Come on”

Miki fell silent suddenly. She saw something moving in the shadows, behind the trees. Something that she didn’t like it at all…

“Now you’re scared?” mocked Aya.
“Shut up”

Ignoring the continuous verbal attacks against her from the younger, Miki bent over a bit and took off a pair of sais from her boots. Then, turned her head and gave a signal to Ishikawa.

“When I’ll tell you, run” she said to Aya but keeping her eyes in the shadows.
“Why I should do that?”
“To live?”

It was then when Matsuura noticed the eyes watching them.

“Now!”

At Miki’s shout, all the girls began to run towards the building. All of them except the one too haughty to accept an order from the enemy.

Aya had taken the crossbow from her back and began to shoot the deformed silhouettes coming from the shadows. They were falling like flies, pierced by the sharpen arrows, one by one. Until something happened… A sound from her left made Aya turn and she noticed that one of the monsters was almost over her. As quickly as she could, she aimed the crossbow towards the beast but, before she could shoot, a claw took her leg and made her fall, loosing her weapon with it. It was the end.

But, when everything seemed lost, someone stood in the monster’s way.

“Stupid girl…”

The younger, still in the ground, heard Miki grumble some other complaints while kicking the beast’s asses. One of them went too close to her and, as a reply, got a sharpen sai into its chest. She kept fighting without loosing it a bit ‘til the last of them fell dead.

Sweating and still breathing heavily, the older offered her hand to Aya.

“Can you walk?”
“Don’t touch me” rejected the younger avoiding looking at Miki.
“Ok. Stay here and get killed”

Seeing that Matsuura won’t accept her help, she turned and began to walk towards the temple leaving the other girl behind. But, when she had made just a few steps, Miki saw that it would be impossible to reach the building in time.

Shit.

Slowly, she move back and went near Aya again.

“You should get up, now"

The younger saw what was coming too and this time she didn’t reject Miki’s hand, that help her to stand up and let her lean on her shoulder to walk as fast as they could.

“If we get over this…” said Fujimoto looking at the girl in her arms and then at her back them “… remember me to kill you”


To be continued...



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« Reply #89 on: February 14, 2007, 11:31:03 PM »
Girlfight!!!

*ahem*

Why can't everyone just get along peacefully?! D:

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« Reply #90 on: February 14, 2007, 11:52:54 PM »
:bounce: :bounce: :bounce: :bounce:

“Hey! No hugs!” exclaimed Yossi trying to move away from Kaoru “What’s up with you?” <-------- :heart: :heart:

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“I’m not gonna let you hurt Rika…”
“Stop me” reply Matsuura still with her arrogant attitude.
“Wanna fight?”
“Come on”


Stupid monsters!! Why they have to bother in this moment!? A fight between them would be epic!

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« Reply #91 on: February 15, 2007, 12:41:51 AM »
^ What black velvet said.

Dayum~! XD

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« Reply #92 on: February 15, 2007, 06:55:05 AM »
whoa! miki and aya? they hate each other??

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« Reply #93 on: February 15, 2007, 06:58:15 AM »
Intriguing, continue, please.

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« Reply #94 on: February 15, 2007, 09:29:08 AM »
Miki with her sai? How much hotter can she be...  :heart: :heart: :heart:
XD

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« Reply #95 on: February 15, 2007, 10:02:30 AM »
Shizzam~ Aya and Miki kicking butt? Yeah, Id pay to see that ^^
Hell, Id sell my soul for the ticket..

Keep em coming! Im waiting to see how this pans out. Will there be romance btw ^^

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« Reply #96 on: February 15, 2007, 07:16:21 PM »
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Ignoring the continuous verbal attacks against her from the younger, Miki bent over a bit and took off a pair of sais from her boots.


Sais! I've wanted a pair of those for eons! And now you make Miki have them... :heart:



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But, when everything seemed lost, someone stood in the monster’s way.

“Stupid girl…”

The younger, still in the ground, heard Miki grumble some other complaints while kicking the beast’s asses. One of them went too close to her and, as a reply, got a sharpen sai into its chest. She kept fighting without loosing it a bit ‘til the last of them fell dead.

Sweating and still breathing heavily, the older offered her hand to Aya.

Even if this world, she can't let (stupid, stubborn) Matsuura die... XD

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« Reply #97 on: February 15, 2007, 11:15:09 PM »
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    Girlfight!!!

*ahem*

Why can't everyone just get along peacefully?! D:


because then it wouldn't be fun! XD

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Stupid monsters!! Why they have to bother in this moment!? A fight between them would be epic!


Wanna bet who'd win? :P (I'll trhink about the possibility of a real fight between them, I promise)

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    whoa! miki and aya? they hate each other??


It's more like Aya hating everyone, but yes, Miki and Rika are on the top of her list.

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    Intriguing, continue, please.


That's what I'm trying to do... I don't think you'll have to wait too much for next chapter.. :ONglasses:

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    Miki with her sai? How much hotter can she be...


All the hot that she'll want to be XD

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    Shizzam~ Aya and Miki kicking butt? Yeah, Id pay to see that ^^
Hell, Id sell my soul for the ticket..

Keep em coming! Im waiting to see how this pans out. Will there be romance btw ^^


Be patient... there's a lot coming.. :P

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Even if this world, she can't let (stupid, stubborn) Matsuura die...


yeah, that's what it is about... doesn't matter if it's another time or another world.. strong feelings are always the same.


it seems that lately I'm in a good mood to write... I hope this last XD

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« Reply #98 on: February 16, 2007, 12:07:07 AM »
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Stupid monsters!! Why they have to bother in this moment!? A fight between them would be epic!


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Wanna bet who'd win? :P (I'll trhink about the possibility of a real fight between them, I promise)


I could bet, but you are the writer... you could cheat :P

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« Reply #99 on: February 17, 2007, 12:05:09 AM »
Ho sheit.... Miki and Rika as friends *oh protective Miki <3~*. ITs so wonderful to see Rika and Miki help Yossui *the bond can never be broken!~*. Hahahaha, as evil as I can be, I laughed at the
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“To live?”
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Why is Aya so bitchy man? Can someone please give her some lovin' :roll: so she doesn't have to pull antics like that to put hot Miki in danger?

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