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« Reply #140 on: February 27, 2007, 08:16:45 PM »
not love maybe, but for aya to give in so easily to Miki, i expected a little more resistance XD

but still that moment was hot

edit: ok, after reading it again, they're both lonely and needed a cuddle :heart:
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« Reply #141 on: March 01, 2007, 04:25:24 AM »
And here I am to give the first congrats to m'dear Len for being fic of March 2007 <3

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« Reply #142 on: March 01, 2007, 04:38:47 AM »
I'll happily give the second congradulations to len.chan!  Way to go!

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« Reply #143 on: March 01, 2007, 05:25:23 AM »
Number three is always the best >.>
Congrats Len! even though i nominated other stories, i ended up voting for yours in the poll. I think it was because you put out an awesome chapter when the polls open, and it was too convincing.
. . . damn your picture. . . =____=
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« Reply #144 on: March 01, 2007, 06:54:30 AM »
Woooooot! Congrats on FOTM! :D

Because you made miki so hot in the story (i melted at the miki-aya perfect make out session) here's a present:



sorry about the katana and halfassed colouring. dont know what i was thinking. xD
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« Reply #145 on: March 01, 2007, 07:47:53 AM »
first, thank you to all of you that voted my fic. I'm really happy to see that people like what I'm doing ^^

*edit* and congratulation to EK VS MM and 'oh the games we play' they deserve it too ^^

cheesesticks; wow, that's an amazing drawing! don't worry about the katana XDXD

well.. I'm not really satisfied with this chapter but I rewrited like 3 times and it ended being like this...


12



“Hey”

Yossi had went into the room that she shared with Kaoru and saw the younger sitting in one of the sides of the bed, writing frenetically in her computer. Because of that, she didn’t notice Yoshizawa at first and the older had to clear her throat to attract her attention.

“Something interesting?”

Finally, Kaoru raised her eyes from the screen and gave a fast look at Yossi before returning to what she was doing.

“The girls told me a lot of things about this world” she answered without stop writing “You know that the city wasn’t destroyed by a natural disaster?”
“Really? What was then?”
“Bombs”

This time she looked straight at Yossi, who sat at the corner of the bed and waited for a more extended explanation. The younger had really caught her attention.

“It seems that sixteen years ago there was an earthquake…”
“Didn’t you say that it wasn’t a natural disaster?” interrupted Yossi.
“I haven’t finished yet…” answered Kaoru glaring at her.
“Oh… Ok, ok, sorry”
“Well.., as I was saying…” continued the younger “There was an earthquake, not a stronger one but global around the world”

Kaoru turned the screen to show Yossi a 3D map of Earth simulating the moment. The whole planet had shake at unison as a balloon in a kid’s hands.

“Of course, even if it was a small one, the fact that it was worldwide caused millions of deaths. Imagine the chain reaction; a small earthquake in Turkey, for example, joins with a small earthquake in China and arrives at Japan with its strength multiplied. Well, that’s what happened around the world. The consequences; deaths, massive destruction, chaos…, and them”
“The monsters?”
“They say that the beasts appeared right after the earthquake, coming from the core of the planet, and began to hunt.”
“You mean to…”

Kaoru just nodded and suddenly, an image of Miki’s documental with lions passed through Yossi’s mind. She quickly shook her head and return to the conversation.

“So…, the bombs…?”
“Our last chance”

Nakazawa’s voice coming from the opened door surprised both girls.

“…or that’s what the big heads of the country thought…” continued Yuko.
“And the army?
“They fell like lambs under the wolf’s claws one by one. So, they decided to fight the fire with fire”

The girls remained in silence trying to imagine how desperate the situation was to don’t have another chance but destroy your own country to save it and after that, see that it was not use at all. Thousands of people dead to kill just the half of them.

“Anyway, stop talking about sad things” said Nakazawa taking the katana that Yossi had left next to the door and throwing it to her “I wanna see what you’re able to do”


***


Aya woke up in the same room again for the second time that day. The difference was that nobody else was there. Feeling her leg still a bit weak, she sat up at the corner of the bed and raised a hand to stroke her hair.

Then, spread all over the floor, she saw her clothes.

“You’re gonna pay for that, Fujimoto…”

Matsuura blame herself for being so weak hours ago. How could Miki dared to touch her, to… kiss her… And even worst… How could she let her do? The moment they fell on the bed she should had kicked her ass and ran away to some place where she could hide herself from that… person.

Getting up from the bed, she walked towards the window and looked outside where the sun had begun to disappear. Aya was daring, but not crazy. In the end, Miki had got what she want, to make her stay.

“Damn you…”


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“You have to be kidding me…”
“No, I don’t”    
“But I don’t even know how to hold this!” complaint Yossi, shaking the sword in the air.
“You’ll do it well” said Yuko tapping her in the shoulder and smiling “Just don’t let her intimidate you”

Nakazawa had taken Yossi to the building’s square, where the rest of the girls waited. The younger didn’t know what was going to happen ‘till she saw the people cheering and screaming the name of her opponent.

Yuko leave the circle and, at the other side, Yossi could see Fujimoto, standing with the sais in her hands already, waiting with a wide smile in her lips for the combat to begin.

“Ready?”
« Last Edit: March 01, 2007, 08:42:57 AM by len.chan »

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« Reply #146 on: March 01, 2007, 08:00:33 AM »
This seems like a bad catfight in the making.

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« Reply #147 on: March 01, 2007, 08:28:43 AM »
Hey! Congrats len.chan on Fic of the Month! I've been lurking on your story for awhile now, and must tell you you're doing an awesome job!! XD

Keep up the great work :heart:   I'll be lurking (and posting I'm sure! :D )
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« Reply #148 on: March 01, 2007, 10:16:39 AM »
Congradulations on Fic of the Month, len.chan! :yay:

A fight between Yossi and Miki? :pen_shocked:

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« Reply #149 on: March 01, 2007, 12:45:07 PM »
Congrats on the Fic of the Month, Len! :D You deserve it. ^^-

Great chapter by the way, Aya waking up with her clothes spread all around got me laughing. She just wont admit that she completely liked it and would do it again in a heartbeat, right? ;D

Miki and Yossie fighting, that's gunna be fun. >:] I think Miki is going to kicked Yossie's ass or, magically Yossie turns out to be a total badass with that sword. :D
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« Reply #150 on: March 01, 2007, 06:55:23 PM »
Fic of the Month!! congrats~~ You deserve it, this fic rawks thats why!

Yikes yikes YIKES! Miki vs Yossi... verbally, in Yossi's world, that Miki would probably win. But with a knife, in THIS Miki's world... I hope Yossi wins!

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« Reply #151 on: March 01, 2007, 08:19:42 PM »
How sweet is the next chapter going to be!!  And Yossui with a katana is just as awesome (if not moreso) as Miki with sais is!  I soooo can't wait!  Keep up the great work, len.chan!

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« Reply #152 on: March 01, 2007, 09:40:39 PM »
Congratulations Len!!!
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« Reply #153 on: March 02, 2007, 01:08:11 AM »
Poor Yossui, Miki's gonna kick her ass.

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« Reply #154 on: March 02, 2007, 06:37:23 AM »
at an interesting way to turn the world into crap.... wait, no, I'm pretty sure the world is just as messed up as it is compared to your story :)

Katana or sais? Katana or sais? *repeats a few more times*
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KATANA! Hell yeah. even if Cheese' pic was hella hot, Miki doesnt have the katana. And I like swords. Go Yossui! Kick ass! *but not too hard >.> Miki still needs to be hot and live*

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« Reply #155 on: March 02, 2007, 08:14:02 AM »
cool fic! :) (I voted for it!)
 
do katanas and sais have anything to do with the ninja turtles?
like
leonardo leads (yossi, katana)
and
Raphael is cool but rude (fujimoto, sais)


Peeaaaccchhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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« Reply #156 on: March 02, 2007, 10:44:03 AM »
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« Reply #157 on: March 02, 2007, 11:25:31 AM »
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cool fic! :) (I voted for it!)
 
do katanas and sais have anything to do with the ninja turtles?
like
leonardo leads (yossi, katana)
and
Raphael is cool but rude (fujimoto, sais)


I swear I didn't do it on purpose! :ONxD: :ONxD:
I thought that that weapons were the ones that fit them better..
God.. I haven't seen the Ninja Turtles for years... I'd almost forgotten about them XD

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« Reply #158 on: March 03, 2007, 03:23:19 AM »
Quote from: len.chan;320646
I swear I didn't do it on purpose!


Then it's gotta be your subconscious making you do stuff that you DO want to do, but tend to resist. Not that I'm complaining... XD

Congratulations, btw. I voted for your fic. :D

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« Reply #159 on: March 03, 2007, 06:27:06 AM »
Wait, shouldn't Yossi get some training with the katana first before getting thrown into a fight with badass Miki-sama? Or is it that the fight IS the training? :pimp:

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do katanas and sais have anything to do with the ninja turtles?
like
leonardo leads (yossi, katana)
and
Raphael is cool but rude (fujimoto, sais)
I swear I didn't do it on purpose! :ONxD: :ONxD:
I thought that that weapons were the ones that fit them better..
God.. I haven't seen the Ninja Turtles for years... I'd almost forgotten about them XD
Suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuure you didn't...:ONwahaha: :ONwahaha: :ONwahaha:

Gotta admit, personality-wise, they do sort of fit. :D

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