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Offline Nyanoha

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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 6 (10/2/11)
« Reply #120 on: October 03, 2011, 03:29:44 AM »
What....WHAT.....WHAT?!

Why.....WHY......WHY?!

ZuZu ;_____;.......update....give me...update.....MY OSHI IS IN MORE PAIN.....

*squeaky voice* You suuuuuuuck......

Good job though....;_____; You may suck....but you are still awesome ;____;

KILL ZE EGUBITCH Red font of truth!
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 6 (10/2/11)
« Reply #121 on: October 03, 2011, 03:43:08 AM »
NISHI WAI IS EVERYONE HURTING? OTL

...mood change FTW THOUGH.

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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 6 (10/2/11)
« Reply #122 on: October 03, 2011, 03:48:24 AM »
Mmmm Erena ;~; and Takamina...

dafdsf I don't know anymore but update update update~!
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 6 (10/2/11)
« Reply #123 on: October 03, 2011, 04:12:07 AM »
noooo!! ;_;  ... please update soon!
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 6 (10/2/11)
« Reply #124 on: October 03, 2011, 08:46:42 AM »
Erepyon!!!!! Please don't die!!! T_T
You put MaiMai yay!!!
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 6 (10/2/11)
« Reply #125 on: October 03, 2011, 10:41:25 PM »
 :k-sad: No no please Erepyon don't die !!
Why ? This is too sad everyone is hurting !!
Eguchi Bitch It's all your fault !!!!

Takamina  :k-sad: My poor captain !! Acchan come back !

Maimai !! So good to see you again

update soon  :tama-excite:
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 7 (10/6/11)
« Reply #126 on: October 06, 2011, 02:24:48 AM »
R I V E R

Chapter 7
(Posted 10/6/11)

Warning: Mild language and violence ahead.

A/N: As usual, please disregard any medical/technical/military discrepancies ; v ;

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A/N: Obligatory Sathday in other people's timezones update!
Anyways, enough of torturing poor Takamina in the previous chapters LOL
Thank you for reading, as always! \ ; 3 ; / Your comments are extremely motivational ; v ; b
« Last Edit: January 22, 2016, 06:51:37 AM by Divine Vengeance »
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 7 (10/6/11)
« Reply #127 on: October 06, 2011, 03:10:09 AM »
Cause you're lame. ;___; *says who read all the chapters first*. POSTING FOR THE LULZ! *runs away like a baws*
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Like I’m the most calm... Like, it must definitely be because, Like when we enter, I’ll be hurrying. But Because Junjun is older, I can calm down? I don’t really know, Like I just absolutely want her there beside me. Whenever we go abroad, if Junjun is absolutely not beside me, I absolutely won’t go. Something like that. -- Tanaka Reina about Junjun.

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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 7 (10/6/11)
« Reply #128 on: October 06, 2011, 04:22:20 AM »
Even though it's still technically Wednesday here. Yay for Sathday updates~!

This is my favorite chapter so far, cool Takamina is cool~ ;3;

But damn Acchan lol
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 7 (10/6/11)
« Reply #129 on: October 06, 2011, 05:22:00 AM »
Fbjsfjdjkfjgkkgjkdkjkdjhfjjfhdjjfhjfkfhjdkjfhfjksjfhjdjjdhfjfkhfjfkjfjfjjfjjjfjgjjfhjdkhjjfjkfjgjjdkkfjjgkdkkvnvkkdkgnmfmfngnmfmmgngnmfmcmnfnjjfjfhjdjjjgjjfjnfkkvjgjjfjjfjfjjghjjejgjgj!!!!!! ;_____;/////////// MY OSHI IS AWESOME!! Go get your Acchan!! Omg best chapter ever!

WHY YOU LEAVE IT LIKE THAT!? <OAO>!?!? I need next chapter! AKBadass is in action, muuuuuust reeeeeaaaad mooooore ;___;

*tries to calm down*

Thank you for the awesomeness ;)
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 7 (10/6/11)
« Reply #130 on: October 06, 2011, 08:19:52 AM »
not only takamina.. we were worry..
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 7 (10/6/11)
« Reply #131 on: October 06, 2011, 09:18:00 AM »
MaYuki scene is so cute~  :twothumbs  :cathappy:
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 7 (10/6/11)
« Reply #132 on: October 06, 2011, 11:11:02 AM »
GO Takamamina Go!!!  :cow: :cow: :cow:
Takamina you're the BOSS XD XD XD

YATTA Acchan's still alive!!!! :w00t: :w00t: :w00t:
Go Takaminaa, Go rescue your girl!!!! XD XD XD

AWESOME CHAPTER AS ALWAYS.....Please keep up the awesome work and update soon XD

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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 7 (10/6/11)
« Reply #133 on: October 06, 2011, 03:36:15 PM »
takamina go to save acchan like HERO!! :cow:
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 7 (10/6/11)
« Reply #134 on: October 07, 2011, 05:50:20 AM »
OMG OMG! I miss commenting  :(

Acchan went off alone  :( and Takamina was force to retreat without her because of the safety of everyone else, I hope Erena makes it through her critical state! *PRAYS*
WOW Takamina the way you ripped off those pins and threw it in that PLASTIC face is TOTALLY AWESOME!!! One of these days someone is going to take that ugly face and rip it apart (lurks around in the base with a scalpel in hand  :twisted: )

MAJOR Takahashi!! I know Takamina won't leave Acchan out there alone, I have faith that she will be able to find her Ace, her one an only Acchan. With the rest of the team ready to make things difficult for the other side, I'm sure they will come out Victorious!!!!  :twothumbs

Awww all those little pairing moments, and Tomochin sacrificing your own safety for Chiyuu :thumbsup your bravery will be reward! I hope....
Rena finally made an appearance, even if its just her voice and all worried about the little Matsui.

I wonder how things will turn out for the team, please update soon.

Thanks for the wonderful story!  :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 7 (10/6/11)
« Reply #135 on: October 07, 2011, 09:12:38 AM »
Acchan is awesome!!!!!
I like all the couples interacrtion especially the Tomotomo!!!!
Takamina go save the soldier Ryan ruh I mean Maeda lol
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 7 (10/6/11)
« Reply #136 on: October 07, 2011, 10:11:33 AM »
save Acchan! nice chapter! update soon!
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 7 (10/6/11)
« Reply #137 on: October 07, 2011, 09:42:48 PM »
Acchan you're so great  :tama-lotsaluv: I jumped on the Sofa when I saw she was alive  :tama-heart:
Go Takamina, save your girl  :k-wink:

and please This Egubitch can't just fall into a hole ? Someone gets rid of her  :k-mad:

Tomotomo so sweet  :k-inlove:

Update soon please !!  :luvuluvu:

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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 8 (10/8/11)
« Reply #138 on: October 08, 2011, 09:41:29 AM »
R I V E R

Chapter 8
(Posted 10/8/11)

Warning: Mild language and violence ahead.

A/N: Someday update FTW.

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A/N: Thank you all for reading \ ; 3 ; / It also really helps me to read your wonderful comments ;__; b Please continue to support this story!

Chapter 8 on the 8th FTW.
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 8 (10/8/11)
« Reply #139 on: October 08, 2011, 10:10:45 AM »
WOOT~ MAYUKI~ Is WMatsui coming? CANT WAITTTT!

Mayu is gonna blow things up~!!!! ♪♫
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