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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: nguyen23 on October 13, 2015, 02:10:15 AM
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[OS] Forever and Ever (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1351810#msg1351810)
[Short Story] I Love You
I Love You (Part 1) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1356964#msg1356964)
I Love You (Part 2) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1357558#msg1357558)
I Love You (Part 3) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1358300#msg1358300)
I Love You (Part 4) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1358654#msg1358654)
I Love You (Part 5) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1358964#msg1358964)
I Love You (Part 6 - Final) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1359258#msg1359258)
[OS] Promise (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1359529#msg1359529)
[Short Story] My Lovely Ojou-sama
My Lovely Ojou-sama (Part 1) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1360403#msg1360403)
My Lovely Ojou-sama (Part 2) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1361318#msg1361318)
My Lovely Ojou-sama (Part 3) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1362306#msg1362306)
My Lovely Ojou-sama (Part 4) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1363078#msg1363078)
My Lovely Ojou-sama (Part 5) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1363853#msg1363853)
My Lovely Ojou-sama (Part 6) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1364617#msg1364617)
My Lovely Ojou-sama (Part 7) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1365385#msg1365385)
My Lovely Ojou-sama (Part 8 ) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1366175#msg1366175)
My Lovely Ojou-sama (Part 9 - Final) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1367007#msg1367007)
[OS] Perfect Valentine (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1365536#msg1365536)
[OS] Our Love Story (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1367655#msg1367655)
[Short Story] Power of Love
Power of Love (Part 1) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1368336#msg1368336)
Power of Love (Part 2) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1368991#msg1368991)
Power of Love (Part 3) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1369703#msg1369703)
Power of Love (Part 4) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1370307#msg1370307)
Power of Love (Part 5) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1370954#msg1370954)
Power of Love (Part 6) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1371478#msg1371478)
Power of Love (Part 7) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1371995#msg1371995)
Power of Love (Part 8 ) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1372517#msg1372517)
Power of Love (Part 9) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1373063#msg1373063)
Power of Love (Part 10) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1373602#msg1373602)
Power of Love (Part 11) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1374182#msg1374182)
Power of Love (Part 12) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1374769#msg1374769)
Power of Love (Part 13) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1375377#msg1375377)
Power of Love (Part 14) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1375961#msg1375961)
Power of Love (Part 15 - final) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1376482#msg1376482)
[Short Story] Escape
Escape (Part 1) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1376997#msg1376997)
Escape (Part 2) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1377566#msg1377566)
Escape (Part 3) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1378124#msg1378124)
Escape (Part 4) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1378613#msg1378613)
Escape (Part 5) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1379059#msg1379059)
Escape (Part 6) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1379470#msg1379470)
Escape (Part 7) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1379947#msg1379947)
Escape (Part 8 ) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1380389#msg1380389)
Escape (Part 9) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1380952#msg1380952)
Escape (Part 10) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1382700#msg1382700)
Escape (Part 11) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1383349#msg1383349)
Escape (Part 12) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1384107#msg1384107)
Escape (Part 13) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1384664#msg1384664)
Escape (Part 14) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1385004#msg1385004)
Escape (Part 15) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1385355#msg1385355)
Escape (Part 16) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1385829#msg1385829)
Escape (Part 17) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1386299#msg1386299)
Escape (Part 18) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1386696#msg1386696)
Escape (Part 19) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1387180#msg1387180)
Escape (Part 20 - Final) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1387508#msg1387508)
[Short Story] My Feeling for You
My Feeling for You (Part 1) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1388801#msg1388801)
My Feeling for You (Part 2) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1389246#msg1389246)
My Feeling for You (Part 3) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1389907#msg1389907)
My Feeling for You (Part 4) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1390207#msg1390207)
My Feeling for You (Part 5) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1390522#msg1390522)
My Feeling for You (Part 6) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1391570#msg1391570)
My Feeling for You (Part 7) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1392059#msg1392059)
My Feeling for You (Part 8 ) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1392531#msg1392531)
My Feeling for You (Part 9) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1392987#msg1392987)
My Feeling for You (Part 10) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1393462#msg1393462)
My Feeling for You (Part 11) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1394183#msg1394183)
My Feeling for You (Part 12) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1395325#msg1395325)
My Feeling for You (Part 13) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1395693#msg1395693)
My Feeling for You (Part 14) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1396054#msg1396054)
My Feeling for You (Part 15) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1396352#msg1396352)
My Feeling for You (Part 16) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1397245#msg1397245)
My Feeling for You (Part 17) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1398320#msg1398320)
My Feeling for You (Part 18 - Final) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1398629#msg1398629)
[OS] Miracle of Christmas (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1390959#msg1390959)
[OS] Christmas Wish (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39845.msg1409049#msg1409049)
Hello everyone! :)
This is an OS. I have some free time in fall break, so I wrote this. This is just something comes to my head. Hope you guys like this :D
Forever and Ever
Minami’s POV
Today is a special day to me. In the next one month, I will stay together with the girl who I secretly in love. She is my childhood friend. Our parents are best friends with each other since like forever. Our house is next to each other. We are together since we were born. We go to school together since kindergarten. She is a very cute and nice girl. I love her from a long time ago. However, I still haven’t confessed my feeling to her yet. I don’t know how, and I’m scared that I can’t be with her anymore.
Right now, I’m waiting for her at the door. we will go to school together.
“Minami” She opens the door and greets me
“Hi Atsuko” I greet and smile at her
She smiles back at me with a bright smile. I can see crinkle on her nose. I love her smile a lot. I wish that she only shows that smile to me not anyone else.
“Minami, what are you thinking? Why are you spacing out like that?” She tilts her head and asks me
“Ah, nothing, nothing at all. Let go to school, Atsuko” I smile and said to her
“Ok” She smiles at me
Then she takes my hand and pulls me to run with her
“Let’s go Minami” She turns around and said to me
Looking at her adorable face, I really want to pull her into my arms and hug her tightly. That smile, that beautiful eyes, and those hands, I want them to be mine only. Those thought makes me want to hold her hand tightly, and I did. Feeling my grip, she stops and turns around. She looks at me with a confused face.
“What happened, Minami?” Atsuko asks me
“No, Nothing. I just want to hold your hand tightly” I smiles at her and said
Suddenly she looks down and quickly turns away.
“Did I say something wrong?” I thought in confuse
Feeling that she is trying to evade my eyes, I ask her in worry tone
“Atsuko, did I say something wrong? What’s wrong?”
“N…No…nothing at all, Minami. We should get going now. The school bell is about to ring” She said and continues holding my hand
We run to school on the street which is filled with a lot of beautiful falling cherry blossom. I feel that she holds my hand tighter.
After a while, we reach the school yard. After putting our stuffs in the locker, we go to our classroom together.
“Look everyone, our class ‘Perfect Couple’ is here” Yuu said and the whole class laughs
“Yuu” I half shout in embarrassment
The truth is I’m very happy when hearing he said that. However, I don’t know what Atsuko is thinking. I turn my head slightly to take a look at her. She just bends down her head and goes to her deck. I can see a slightly pink on her beautiful face
“Is she blushing” I thought
“Nah, maybe that is my imagination” I thought and go back to my seat
Fortunately, our seat is next to each other. Therefore, I can be near her. I turn to look at her. Suddenly our eyes meet. I smile at her, but she suddenly turns away.
“Huh?” I look at her with confused look
After three class periods, it is time for lunch. I rush to the school cafeteria to buy for me some breads and coke. When I come back, I don’t see Atsuko anywhere. Usually she and I will eat lunch together in class. I come to Yuu’s deck and ask
“Hey Yuu, do you know where Atsuko is?”
“Missing your cute girlfriend already?” he said in teasing tone and laughs
“Yuu, stop joking around. She is not my girlfriend” I raise my voice
Suddenly the class is filled with silent. I look up and see Atsuko is standing in front of me. She looks at me with very sad eyes.
“Atsuko” I call her
“Hi Minami” She smiles and greets me
However, somehow in that smile, I can feel a lot of sadness. We silently look at each other.
“Acchan, Takamina is looking for you” Yuu speaks up breaking the heavy atmosphere around us
“Ah...I just go to buy something to drink. This morning, I forgot to bring mine” she answers
Then she goes back to her seat.
After that, we didn’t talk to each other even a word. I just sit on my seat and secretly look at her. Her expression doesn’t change. Those sad eyes are still there. I wonder what make her look like that.
In the evening, as always we go home together. However, today is a little bit different. Atsuko just stays silent. Usually, she will tell me a lot of different things, what she saw on TV, what movie that she likes, and a lot of different stuffs.
When we reach home, our parents are about to go on their vacation. They got a one month vacation together. However, because we have school, we can’t go with them.
“Atsu, Takamina, you two come back in time. We are about to go to the airport.” Atsuko’s father said
“Papa, Mama, you two are about to go?” Atsuko asks
“Yes, honey. Remember to be good. Don’t disturb Takamina, ok” her mom said to her
“Mama, I’m not a kid. You don’t have to say thing like that.” Atsuko said and pouts
“Plus, I won’t bother him, anyway” She mumbles
Her parent looks at her and smile
“Akiko, don’t worry. Our Minami doesn’t mind being disturbed by Acchan, right Minami?” My father said
“Moreover, I think he enjoys that” My mom adds, and they all laughs
I don’t know what to say. I just look at my feet to hide my embarrassment.
“Takamina, please take care of Atsuko for us, ok” Her mother said
“Yes, I will” I answer
“Honey, you don’t have to say that. Takamina will take good care of our Atsuko anyway, right our future son in law” Her father said and laughs
“Yes, that is so true, Atsushi” my father comments
I can feel my face getting hotter and hotter every second. I can feel that smoke will come out from my ears and head. I look at Atsuko, her eyes still have that sadness. I don’t know why she is sad, but looking at her like that, my heart feels very hurt.
“It is about time, I think we should go now.” my father said
“Uh, the taxi is already waiting for us” her father said
“Bye Atsu, Takamina. Takamina, please take care of Atsu for us” her mother said from inside the taxi
“Yes,” I answer her.
Then the taxis take them to the airport. I turn to the right to look at her. She still stays silent and looking at the taxi.
“Don’t worry Atsuko. You still have me here with you.” I smile and comfort her
“Uh, thank you, Minami” She finally smiles at me
However, that is not her usual smile. I miss that smile already
“Atsuko, can you go back to your house first and wait for me a little. I will go home to take some of my things. Also, my mother cooked something for us. I will bring them over, and we will eat together, ok?” I said to her
“Uh” She nods
I quickly rushes to my house to take my things. I take some necessary things to stay over at her house. I don’t need to take too much stuffs because our house is near each other anyway. After a while I finished preparing my things. I rush to the kitchen to take the food and quickly rush to her house.
I open the door and come in. I come in at the same time with Atsuko stepping down from the stair. She just finished her bath. Her hair is still wet. The smell of her shampoo is very nice. She wears a big white shirt and a short. Looking at her like this, she is so attractive. I stun there and keep looking at her.
“Minami?” she calls me with confused tone
I snap out of my dream.
“Ah...uhm… here, my mother made some of your favorite sushi” I said
Then we go to the kitchen and eat together
After finishing eating, we go to the living room and study together. Outside, rain is very heavy. Inside my head, there is still one thing that I can get over it. That is her sad eyes. I don’t know what made you look sad like that. However, I don’t know how to ask her about that. Suddenly, a lightning flashes making the street light up. After that is a big sound of thunder appear.
While I’m still looking at the window, a nice scent suddenly come to my nose. When I realize what happened, I see Atsuko is hugging me tightly.
"Atsuko" I call her in surprised
"S...so...sorry Minami" Atsuko immediately sits up, parting her arms from me and said
Suddenly another big thunder appears. She shrinks herself and closes her eyes.That is right. She is scared of thunder since she was a kid. I pull her into my arms and pat her back.
"Minami" Atsuko calls in surprise.
"It is ok, Atsuko, I'm here. There is nothing to be scared of." I gently said.
She hug me tighter. After a while, I call her
“Atsuko”
“Huh?” Atsuko is still burying her face on my chest and asks
“This morning and just now, I saw that you look so sad. What happened to you? What made you sad? Just tell me I will do everything to help you” I said to her
“...” She stays silent
“It’s ok, if you don’t want to talk about that. I won’t force you. However, remember this, I will always be by your side no matter what. Next to you will always have me. I will be there to protect and support you whenever you need.” I said while stroking her back
I can feel that she tightens her hug. Then she breaks the hug and sits up. Her eyes are red. I can still see some tear in the corner of her beautiful eyes. I raise my hand and gently wipe her tear
“What made you cry, Atsuko?” I gently ask
“I’m fine Minami don’t worry.” She said and smiles to me
Then there is a silent fill between us
“Minami” Atsuko breaks the silent
“What is it, Atsuko?” I ask her
“The truth is there is a person who I’m in love” Atsuko said with shyly eyes
I can feel my heart is bleeding when hearing those words from her. I really want to cry right now.
“Am I lost my Atsuko now?” I ask myself
“I don’t know if he loves me or just sees me as a friend. That makes me very confused. I want to know his feeling. However, at the same time, I’m scared to know his true feeling” Atsuko said to me
"I'm afraid that he will reject me? That he won't care for me anymore" she continues
Her eyes are filled with tear again. Seeing that my heart feels very tight
“Anyone dares to hurt my Atsuko’s feeling, I will take him down” I thought
“Don’t be sad Atsuko. My heart is in pain when seeing you like this” I wipe her tear and said
“Thank you Minami.” She said to me
“Minami” She calls me again
I look at her
“Should I confess my feeling to him?” She asks me
Although that is a simple question, it has power to kill my heart
“Hurt, hurt, very hurt.” I thought
Her words like a thousand blade pierce into my heart. I don’t want. I don’t want that to happen. I hold her hands tight and pull her to my embrace. I hug her tightly
“Minami” Atsuko calls my name in surprise.
“No, No, I don’t want that” I said firmly
“I don’t want you confess your feeling to anyone else. I want you to be mine and only mine.” I continues
I take a deep breath and said out loud
“I love you, Atsuko.”
“I love you for a very long time. Maybe since we just were born. I’m an idiot that I didn’t confess to you sooner. I’m regret about that, now. I’m too coward. I’m afraid of losing you. However, I’m about to lose you now” I said
“But now I know one thing that I can’t lose you, Atsuko. I love you.” I tighten my hug and said
Atsuko breaks the hug and look directly at my eyes
“I decided. I will confess” She looks at me and happily said
My tear unconsciously rolls down. I really lost my Atsuko, now. I’m really about to lose her forever. I close my eyes and feel the sadness and hopelessness are slowly invading my heart, my soul, and my whole body. I feel like I lost all my life-force. Suddenly a pair of soft hands wipes my tear, and something incredible soft touches my lips. I open my eyes and see that Atsuko is kissing me.
“Atsuko” I thought
The sweetness on her lips makes me lose all my consciousness. I just want to taste her lips more. This is what I’m longing for a long time. I round my arms around her waist and pull her closer to me while hurriedly replies her kiss. I kiss her passionately and wildly. We kiss until we out of air. Then I move my kisses to her neck. I lick it and suck it
"Minami" Atsuko calls me waking me up to my senses
I move back and look at her
“I'm sorry, Atsuko. I can't control myself whenever I'm with you” I said to her while my hand touching her red lips
She smiles at me and holds my hands. I thought she accepted my confession. However,
“The person who I secretly in love, I will confess my love to him, right here.” She said and smiles
“What does she mean? That man will come here? What about that kiss? Is that a goodbye kiss?” I thought in confuse
There is a lot of thought appears in my head. I’m really at lost now. I look at her with a confused look
“You still want to confess to him?” I ask her
“Uh” she smiles and nods
“He will come here?” I ask her
“No, he is already here” She said
Her face stills show that lovely and beautiful smile. I hate it when she talks about him and smiles that smile. I don’t want anyone to see that smile except me.
“He is here? Is he outside? But outside rain is very heavy.” I thought
I look directly at her eyes
“Listen to me Atsuko. Maeda Atsuko, I love you. I won’t give you to anyone else. I will make you fall in love with me for sure. I’m definitely do that” I strongly tell her
“You don’t have to do that” She said to me still smiling like that
“Atsuko, can’t you give me a chance?” I sadly thought
“Don’t you have any feeling for me, Atsuko? Can’t you give me a chance?” I ask her
She shakes her head
“Do you want to know the person who I’m in love? I will say that right now” She said and smiles
“I, Maeda Atsuko, the person who I really love is….”
I just sit still and look at her with a hopeless eyes
“....you, Takahashi Minami. I love you from a long time ago, Minami.” Atsuko smiles and said to me
I stun with her words
“Did she just confess to me? Does she love me? Is the person who she secretly in love is me?” I thought
I can’t believe in my ears. I happily look at her
“The person you love is me?” I ask her in happy tone
“Uh, my baka Minami. I said like that and you still don’t understand” Atsuko said and smiles softly
“I’m really a baka” I smile at her and hug her tightly
“I’m happy Atsuko, really happy. I love you. I love you more than anything” I said to her and buries my face on her neck
“Me too, Minami. I love you. I love you very much, Minami.” She said and buries her face on my chest
“This morning, when I heard you loudly denied what Yuu said, I can feel my heart was broken into thousand pieces.” She said to me
“So that jerk who made her sad is me” I’m tighten my hug
“I’m sorry, Atsuko. I made you sad and cry” I said
“It is ok” She said
“When you hugged me and said that you will always be with me and protect me, I decided to confess to you. I want you to know my real feeling.” Atsuko said
“I think you misunderstood about “the person” who I mentioned that I’m in love. Then you against that and hug me tightly. You told me that you love me and don’t want me to be with anyone else. When I heard you said that, I’m very happy. My heart is jumping in joy. At first, I still have some doubt. However, after that I’m very confident.” Atsuko said to me
I can feel her smile on my chest.
“You made me so worry. I thought I lost you for-real.” I said and pout
“That is your fault. Because you are a baka” She said and laughs
“What did you say? Who is baka?” I ask her in playful tone
“It is you. I said like that and you still didn’t know that is you.” She laughs and said
“I even kissed you. That is my first kiss. If I don’t love you, why should I kiss you” She said
“That is also my first kiss. You stole my first kiss without my permission” I said to her
She breaks the hug and look at me
“So you don’t like that huh?’ She looks at me and pouts
“Yes, I don’t like that” I said to her with serious tone
Her face looks surprise. Then she looks down. I use my hand to lift her face up.
“I don’t like it. However, I love it.” I whisper and kiss her lips
She breaks the kiss and hits my chest lightly
“Minami, you made me worry. I thought you don’t like that” She said and pouts
I catch her hands and hug her
“How can I not like that?” I said
“I love everything about you. Your characteristics, your voice, and...” I pause
“....I love your glutton character” I said and laugh
She hits my chest lightly
“I also love your hair” I said and kiss her hair
“Your forehead” I said and kiss that
“Your big beautiful eyes” I kiss them
“Your cute nose” I kiss it
“Your pink cheeks” I kiss them
“And, I love your lovely lips” I whisper and kiss her lips
I kiss her softly. Atsuko rounds her arms around my neck and replies my kiss. I hug her skinny waist and pull her closer to my chest. Our kiss becomes more passionate and intense. I slip my tongue inside her mouth and explore every part of her mouth making her moan softly. I can feel myself getting hotter. I pushes her down on the floor, and I’m on top of her still kissing. I move my hand down to her beautiful leg
“Uhmmm…” Atsuko moans softly when I stroke and gropes her thigh
Then I use my hand to slowly unbutton her shirt showing her white smooth skin. Then I change my kiss into her neck and mark it
“You are mine now Atsuko” I smile and said making her blushes
Then I kiss her again while taking off her shirt. Suddenly I break the kiss. She looks at me with confused look. I smile at her. Then I bend down and whisper in her ears
“Shall we continue this in your room?”
She blushes madly. Her face is all red now. So cute. I kiss her again while lifting her up in my arms. I carry her to her room and gently put her down. I move on top of her. I bend down and kiss her lips gently
“Atsuko, I love you” I said softly
“I love you too, Minami” Atsuko said while caressing my face
After that we drown in our own world of love and passion.
In the morning
I slowly open my eyes and see my angel is sleeping soundly in my arms. I stroke her hair and kiss her forehead. Feeling my movement. She snuggles closer to me while hugging me tightly. Her face is burying on my chest. The closeness makes me remember about last night making me blushed. I look at her and smile
“At last, Atsuko is now mine and only mine” I thought while stroking her smooth back
“Why did you smile like that, Minami?” She looks at me with those sleepy eyes and asks
“Because I finally confessed my feeling to you. Because our feeling is mutual, and especially, because you are mine now” I said and peck on her lips
She laughs softly and hugs me.
“Atsuko, from now on, I will always be by your side to protect and love you. I won’t let anything make you cry or sad. I promise” I seriously said to her
"Thank you, Minami” She said to me
Then she moves up and pecks my lips.
“Why don’t you sleep more, Atsuko. This is still early. Today is weekend anyway” I said to her
“Uh” She nods and buries her head on my chest
“A special morning for the beginning of our love.” I thought and smile
Then I hug her and fall in sleep
10 years later
We are standing on the cruise on the Seine river to sightsee.
“Honey, look at that.Those are so beautiful” She happily calls me while pointing around
“Uh, those views are very nice” I smile and said
“However, you are way more beautiful.” I whisper and kiss her lips
“Sweet talker” She said and laugh softly
“So, Mrs. Takahashi, do you like this place. I choose especially for our honeymoon” I hug her from behind and whisper to her ear
Yes, we finally got married yesterday. She finally becomes my wife. Maeda Atsuko is now my wife.
“I love it. Paris is very beautiful, Minami” She turns around and said
“I’m glad you like it, Atsuko” I said to her
“Thank you Minami” She said and pecks my lips
“Everything for my lovely and beautiful wife” I said to her
“I love you, Minami, very much.” She hugs me tightly and said
“I love you, too. Atsuko. More than what you can imagine” I smile and said
Then she rest her head on my chest while I hugging her shoulder.s We silently enjoy the night view while feeling each other presence
I love her very much. I, Takahashi Minami will love her for today, tomorrow, future, and forever and ever. Our love will be forever and ever...
The End
That is the OS. Hope you guys enjoy reading it. :)
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Thank you author-san for cute OS! :shy1:
Like you said it - AtsuMina Forever and ever! And nothing can stop that.. :oops: ...[except harsh reality]
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Atsumina definitely end up together forever.
Even in reality. (close friends would do)
Atsu did promise to stay with her in the near future.
Thank you for the OS author-san! :cathappy:
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Minami is such a baka
Lovely story there...
Atsumina forever
Thank you for the OS
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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This is the second time I read this OS :)
The story is so sweet, such a baka Minami and cute Atsuko.
I love the way they are together, and also the happy future
I hoped to see their lovely children, but in this OS, they have just got married haha
Thank you Author-san, AtsuMina forever!!!
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another atsumina story!!!!
yey!!!! :tama-apeshit: :tama-apeshit: :tama-apeshit: :tama-apeshit:
but why im so sad seeing minami treat atsuko like that? :on speedy: :on speedy:
i mean,atsuko didnt do anything why minami like that?
he can learn to love atsuko right? :fainted: :fainted:
please keep updating and make minami love atsuko soon!!! :mon pray2: :mon pray2:
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Poor Atsuko... Minami is so cold and rude to her
What's going to happen next?
Can't wait to find out
Thank you for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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What's next? So eager to read part 2.
Thank you author-san!
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Ammm.. oh.. that was harsh from Minami.. :huhuh
mmm.. yeah.. hard choice..
Waiting next part.. :)
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wow!!! another atsumina! yes. i been gone from this fanfiction forum almost a year. Now I finish my study i can read fiction moreeeeee! AM SO HAPPY TO SEE AN ATSUMINA STORY. PLS UPDATE AUTHOR SAN! :bow:
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Yes, yes i love :love:
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Update soon pleasee
Really like your fict
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Well... Minami is starting to have feeling for Atsuko
But what will Minami say to Atsuko's question?
Will Minami tell the truth, at first no but now different?
Can't wait to see the next one
Thank you for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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oH OH OH... I think Minami lie that she loves! can't wait to find out what she will do! update as soon as you can!
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Yep... Minami loves her.. :yep: .. but it will make it more complicated all things..
...and there will be day, when Atsuko will know all true aaaand... yeah... or she already have some clue about it.. hmmm.. :roll: :huhuh
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another atsumina story!!!!
yey!!!! :tama-apeshit: :tama-apeshit: :tama-apeshit: :tama-apeshit:
but why im so sad seeing minami treat atsuko like that? :on speedy: :on speedy:
i mean,atsuko didnt do anything why minami like that?
he can learn to love atsuko right? :fainted: :fainted:
please keep updating and make minami love atsuko soon!!! :mon pray2: :mon pray2:
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Thank you for the puppy. It reminds me of Takamina visiting Acchan's dogs.
Atsumina is doing perfectly nowadays.
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Is it possible for Kai to become Minami's past?
Well.. I'll just wait for the author and Atsuko's response. :rock:
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Is it possible for Kai to become Minami's past?
Well.. I'll just wait for the author and Atsuko's response. :rock:
I had the same thought.. :huhuh
At least Atsuko knows, that Minami really loves her.. :roll:
Waiting next chapter.. :)
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Eh... kai?
Is minami is kai?
What's going to happen next?
Can't wait to find out
Thank you for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Oh no... :huhuh
..again complicated situation..
Waiting next chapter.. :)
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do you have an idea on how many parts this story will have?
sorry for weird question
sometimes i'm realy curious and ask
blame me curiosity :grin:
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do you have an idea on how many parts this story will have?
sorry for weird question
sometimes i'm realy curious and ask
blame me curiosity :grin:
It has about 6 parts :D
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then were about to finish :cry:
thanks for update author-san :)
waiting for next :)
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Thanka for update author - san
Looking forward for the update :D
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They just confirmed their love for each other...
How come Atsuko is still doubting him?
Trust issues. :shocked:
Thank you author-san.
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thank you so much for the answer! :ptam-aww:
Now i will have to nervously wait to see what happen next :ptam-wub:
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nice :) :) :) :)
sequel please :) :) :)
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I'm so happy to see you completed it! :D I will look out for your next stories ;)
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It was nice story.. :roll: ..with good ending..
Thank you for it and of course, waiting new one.. 8)
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Very good ending...
It's very satisfying...
Thank you for the updates and ending
Can't wait to see other Atsumina story
Thank you again
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Damn you are killing me with your AtsuMina stories! :love: :love:
I demand you to update more more Atsumina please! /o/
Thank you for all updates! And Merry Christmas! :)
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It was soooo cute.. :)
At first I was little bit worried about Atsuko condition, but then, it was again back to good. :roll:
Never ending love! :love:
Thank you for interesting OS!!! :)
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:ptam-glow: :ptam-wub: :ptam-aww: :ptam-shy:
thank you for amazing OS
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AUTHOR-SAN!!!!!! WHERE ARE YOU??!!!
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@AI712: Thank you for liking my fic! :D
@korin48: Thank you for liking my fic. I'm very happy that you are enjoy reading them. :D
@black_maa: Thank you for reading and liking my fic :D
@ryu201: Thank you for liking my fic. I'm still writing it. Once I'm done, I will post it :D
Thank you everyone. I'm very happy that you all enjoy reading it. Thank you! :wub:
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Happy new year author-san :cow: :cow: :cow:
Another story of spoiled acchan huh? But as long as that about atsumina,i will read :lol:
So im counting on u to finish this story author-san~
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I must wait for the unexpected twist to come. :lol:
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Uh.. new AtsuMina story.. great.. 8)
Waiting next update.. :)
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Another atsumina fic *cheers*
Lookingforward for the update author-san :)
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Yeay update!
Thanks for the update author-san! :)
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Hmmm.. Looks like Minami slowly start to see and understand why Atsuko is like that.. :roll:
But stuborn till the end.. xD
Waiting next chapter! 8)
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Piggy back rides are always epic.
Atsumina's always too sweet.
Hoping for an uodate soon! :rock:
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oh oh... interesting story of butler and oujosama....
Who was the kidnapper mastermind?
Who is this ERI?
Is she the mastermind?
Can't wait to find out
Thank you for the updates
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Atsumina's sweet moments.
Seriously. It's getting there.
Can't wait for Yuko's reaction.
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nice ^_^ too sweet atsumina ^_^ :wub: :wub: :wub:
thanks for update, waiting for next :) :) :)
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Perfect update author-san :)
Wait for another update :)
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Sooo.. this is have things are.. :huhuh .. well, only right now..
That's only a begining for Atsumina :roll:
Waiting next chapter. 8)
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So cute, I love atsumina fluffy moments like this :3
:inlove: :inlove:
Another update soon?
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Please make more fluffy part in the future :inlove: :inlove:
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Great update!
Finnaly minami know the truth ~
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Of course, Yuko and in wrong time.. XD .. sweet AtsuMina moments.. :D
Oh.. looks like someone really wants to harm her.. uh.. :huhuh
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Takamina is calling for someone.
Possibly a new character. I really wish that's true.
Atsumjna's geting sweeter by the momeng.
thank you for the update! :rock:
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Thanks for your update, i really love your story :cathappy: :inlove:
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Takamina just admit it already.
I hope for Cupid Yuko to do her magic.
Thank you for the update! :cathappy:
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Thanks for your update author-san :)
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Lol.niceeee... :thumbsup :thumbsup
moarrrr~~~ and yeah..bakamina..pfftt
hope the cupid can do something at them
"and hell..how dare u trick me" *murderous intent
i think that atsu father speakin and he find out the truth..hmm..thanks for tha update
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Sooo close.. Atsuminaaa XD
But.. Atsuko past was sad.. :(
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Everything was sweet and lovely :oops: ..
....until....
...what the meaning of that in the end..?!?! :huhuh :?
...cuz it doesn't sound... good? :huhuh
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I think the last is Takamina with Acchan's father, am i right?
At least now Takamina already confessed to Acchan, i'm really happy right now.
Please update when you have time
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FINALLY! Atsumina's sweet confession.
I think, I'm geeting a hunch.
Thank you for the update!
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こんいちは~
I've read your OS and 6 shots
aand it sure lovely~ :nya: :nya:
i havent finish to read lovely ojou-sama yet, but i think it best for me to leave comment
i intend to forget after read it
thank you for good story~
おつかれさまでした~ :kneelbow:
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No! Please dont let them hurt Atsuko.
Takamina needs to be fast.
Thank you for the update.
Cant wait for the next. :rock:
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Minami is not rich right? That's why he works as butler, but who call him young master?
Minami don't come late to save Acchan
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EEEEHHH ???
Minami is young master of family rich??
does "she" the one that minami and atsuko's father is Eri-san??
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Oh my!!! :O
Minami, be fast!!! :shocked
Uh... hard case... complicated and with lot of... surprises. :roll: :huhuh
Waiting next update. 8)
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It was cute OS. :oops:
... and of course, with little bit jealousy. :D
Thank you for it. :roll:
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Oh... that was close.. more like too close.. :shocked
Atsuko is still in danger and who knows what will happen next..
Need to be careful.. every mistake can be the end for someone..
:roll: 8)
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Thank you for your previous Valentine fic.
Sooo this is really a great fic.
Good thing Atsuko's safe.
And it was revealed that Atsuko's Takamina's fiance.
Thank you for the update.
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Everything ended so good and lovely.. :oops:
Minami and Atsuko is wonderful family.
Thank you for the interesting story. :roll:
8)
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That was a good finale.
Thank you for your final update.
it was really good to see them with kids.
Atsumina's still the best. :)
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Atsumina is very cute, and i also imagine Ami and Kai with them. It looks like a perfect family.
Thanks for your story
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Mmmm... that was cute.. :oops: .. But, of course, not that part, when she got hurt.. hm.. :shocked
Thank you for OS.! 8)
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I agree with black_maa that was a very cute fic not including the hurtful part.
Gonna stay stuned for your future fics. Thank you! :peace:
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I enjoyed reading all the stories so far
Can't wait to see more
Thank you for the updates
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Oh.. Nice starter...
What's going to happen next?
How are they going to meet each other again?
Can't wait to find out?
Thank you for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Oh... new story... and AtsuMina.. :D
Interesting... Interesting.. :roll: 8)
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Thank you for the update and new os and new story.
Your story so amazing and interesting.
Rare to see someone write about atsumina fanfic lately.
Can't wait for the update author-san ~
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Uh... Think you guys, think. :D
Time is not waiting, you need to meet each other.. XD
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Yeee... they meet each other.. finally. :D
Uh, waiting what will happen next. :roll:
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So cute.. :oops:
AtsuMina couple in process.. :D
Waiting next update.. 8)
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Sweet and cute moments for them.. :oops:
Mmmm.. dinner on the rooftop.. let see. :roll:
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Looks like someone isn't very happy about Minami and Atsuko relationships. :huhuh
But... those two are together.. yee... :D
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@black_maa, @AI712: Thank you! :D
Thank you everyone for reading my fic :D
Here is part 7 :)
Power of Love
Part 7
After leaving the skiing area, Minami carries Tomomi back to her house which is near the hotel.
On their way
Minami just stays silent and walks very fast.
“Are you trying to make my leg worse with your speed, Takamina?” Tomomi said
“Of course not” Minami said and slows down
Then he keeps walking while checking his watch every 1 minute.
“Is Atsuko going to be ok by herself?” Minami thought worriedly
“Just left for no more than 5 minutes and you already miss “your Atsuko”.” Tomomi speaks up cutting Minami’s train of thought
“Because this place is new to her. I don’t want to leave her alone like that” Minami said
Tomomi chuckles
“How long have you two knowing each other?” she asks
“Not long. It is about 1 month” Minami answers
“Really?” Tomomi said in surprise
“Yes, why?” Minami asks
“Nothing. I just thought that you two have to know each other for a long time” Tomomi said
“Really. What make you think so?” Minami asks
“Uhm...it just you two seem to be very close connected. That is just feeling” Tomomi said
“I see. I met her at Japan airport. That was the first time I felt my heart skip a beat. The whole world becomes so bright with no reason. That is when I realized what love is” he continues
Tomomi can feel his happiness through his tone.
“3 years really can’t compare with that short time?” She mumbling
Hearing something, Minami asks
“What did you say Tomochin?”
“Ah nothing, nothing at all” she said
“Say Takamina” Tomomi said
“Huh?” Minami asks
“What part of her that make you fall in love with her that deep?” she asks
“Uhm...everything about her. I love her eyes, her smiles, her voice, her action, everything about her. Her kindness and childish side sometime, too” Minami said while smiling
"That kid looking girl is that good?" Tomomi thought
Suddenly she hears someone calls her
“Tomochin, Takamina”
They look at the direction and see a man rushing toward them
“Hey Tomo” she calls him
“What’s wrong, Tomochin? Why Takamina carries you like that?” he asks her
“She went to skiing and injured her ankle. Therefore I’m taking her back to her house” Minami said
“I see.” Tomo said
Then an idea flashes in his head
“Tomo, can you take her back to her house for me. I have to go back to the skiing area. My girlfriend is waiting for me there” Minami asks
“Your girlfriend? You has a girlfriend?” Tomo asks in surprise while looking at Tomochin
“Uh, I will introduce her to you later.” Minami happily said
“Congratulation, Takamina” Tomo said
“Thank you.” Minami said
“By the way, can you take her back for me?” He asks
“Sure” Tomo said
“But my ankle…” Tomomi said
“Your ankle will be fine. Atsuko already checked for you. You just need to listen to her and rest.” Minami said and puts her down
Tomo comes and carries her on his back
“Thank you Tomo. See you two later” Minami said
“Takamina” Tomomi calls him
He stops and said
“Tomochin, I’m sorry, but there is a feeling that have to come from heart. Forcing a feeling will never be good. You should look at people around you, and ask your heart to understand what you really need. ” He said and rushes back to the place.
“Huh?” Tomo looks at them in confuse
“I won't accept this lost.” She mumbles
“What are you saying, Tomochin?” he asks in confuse
“Nothing” She said
“Anyway, are you ok? Does it still hurts?” Tomo puts her down and checks on her ankle while asking in worry tone
“I’m fine. There is nothing wrong with it” Tomomi stands up and said
“But Takamina said…”
“I’m tired, I will go back to my house now” Tomomi said cutting Tomo’s words
“Let’s me take you back” He said while following her
“I won’t accept this defeat. I have to see what side of her that better than me. I won’t accept this lost” She thought
Meanwhile
At the skiing area
Atsuko is playing with snow while waiting for Minami. She draws Negi-chan on the snow and smiles happily. Suddenly some people step on her drawing and stands in front of her. She looks up and sees three men standing in front of her.
“My my, why there is a beautiful girl all alone here.” one of them said
Atsuko quickly stands up and steps back.
“W...who are you?” Atsuko asks scarily
They smirk and surround her.
“What do you want?” She asks again
“We just want to ask you to play with us” the leader comes closer to Atsuko and said
“I don’t know you” Atsuko said
“We will know each other later” He said
“My boyfriend will come back here soon” Atsuko said
“Your boyfriend” They said and laugh together
“Don’t lie, cutie. If you have a boyfriend, he will never leave you alone like this. If yes, he must be have fun with other girls. Now let’s have fun with us” The man said and takes her hand
“Let’s go off me or I will call someone here” Atsuko slaps his hand away and said in trembling tone
Tear starts forming in her eyes
“Calling someone. Don’t joke cute girl. There is not much people around here. Even if you yell your lung out, there will be no one here” a man said
“Now be a good girl and go with us” He said and takes Atsuko’s hand again
“Let’s go off me, Minami, Minami” Atsuko calls Minami’s name scarily
At the moment
Minami is rushing back to the skiing area. Suddenly he hears Atsuko’s shaky voice
“Minami, Minami”
“Atsuko” Minami thought
He speeds up his speed. When he got to the place, he sees three men surrounding Atsuko, and one of them is pulling her hand. Minami is very angry. He rushes to them and shouts
“Get your filthy hand off my girlfriend, you jerk”
Then he punches the man that holding her arm very hard making him fall on the ground.
“Minami” Atsuko hugs Minami scarily
He can feel she is shaking
“I’m here, Atsuko. Don’t be scare” He pats her head and said
“Who do you think you are shorty? Don't interfere with my business” the man angrily shouts
“I’m her boyfriend and you are bothering her. That is my business” Minami shouts
He is very angry right now
“You two get him” He orders his men to attack Minami
“Come here. I will make anyone who make my Atsuko cry pay a very heavy price” He said in anger tone
Then he rushes to the men. Minami bends down to dodge the punch from the man on his left. Then he raises his feet and kicks his stomach making him fall on the round.
The other man rushes toward him from behind. Minami uses round kick to kick his face and then takes his collar and throws him aside.
After that Minami rushes to the boss and takes his collar. He strongly slams him down on the snowy ground. Then he raises his fist and punches hard on the ground near his face. The man looks at Minami with terrified eyes
“Let’s me warn you this, don’t ever, ever, ever come close to my girlfriend again. If I see you around here, marks my word, I won’t go easy like this next time. This punch will break your stupid face and more than that” Minami said angrily while looking at the man with anger eyes
Those three men are scared by his words. They quickly stand up and rush away
“Jerk” Minami said angrily
“Minami” Atsuko rushes to hugs Minami tightly from behind
“Sshh...I’m here Atsuko. Don’t be scared” Minami turns around to hugs her and gently said
“Luckily that I saw Tomo. If not I don’t want to image what will happen. Just only 5 minutes, those jerks” Minami angrily thought
Atsuko hugs him tighter while burying her face on his chest. Minami stands there and stroking her back to comfort.
After awhile
Minami gently asks her while lifting her face up
“Are you ok, Atsuko?”
“Uh, thank you, Minami” Atsuko said
“Minami, I want to go back to the hotel” she continues
“Ok, let’s take a rest. Tomorrow we will come back here and play ok” Minami said and smiles gently at her while wiping her tear
Atsuko gaps when seeing blood on Minami’s hand
“Minami, your hand. Is this injure because you bunch on the ground” Atsuko said in worry tone
“I’m fine, Atsuko. I will treat it when I get back to the hotel. So don’t worry ok” Minami said and pats her head
“Now let’s go Atsuko” Minami said
“Uh.” Atsuko nods
Then he takes her back to the hotel. Yuko is sitting at the receptionist table. Seeing them walk in she greets them
“Yoo Takamina, Acchan, how is the skiing? Why did you guy com…”
She stops when she notices Atsuko's tired face
“What's wrong?” she asks in worry tone
“Nothing, I’m just tired” Atsuko said
“Let's me take you to your room and rest ok” Minami said
“Uh, thank you, Minami” Atsuko said
“I will bring some hot tea for you to relax” Yuko said
“Thank you, Yuko” Minami said
Then he takes Atsuko up to their room. Minami helps Atsuko sit down on the bed.
“Are you ok, Atsuko?” he asks her in worried tone
“I’m fine, Minami. Just a little scared and tired” Atsuko smiles at him and said
“Then you should sleep a little. However, firstly, let's wait for Yuko to bring some tea for you. Maybe it will help you relax” Minami said
“Uh” Atsuko nods
Then they hear the knocking sound
“It must be Yuko. Let's me open the door for her” Minami said.
Then he goes and opens the door for Yuko.
“Here, Takamina” Yuko said and gives him the tray
“Thank you, Yuko” Minami said
He takes the tray and bring it into the room. He pours the tea out into a small cup and brings it to the bed
“Let's drink this Atsuko” Minami sits down and said in gently tone
“Thank you, Minami” Atsuko takes the cup and said
After drinking it, Minami helps her lie down. He pulls the blanket to cover her
“Let's sleep a little. I will call you when it is dinner time” Minami said
“Uh” Atsuko nods
“Rest well, Atsuko.” He kisses her forehead and said
Then Atsuko slowly falls in sleep with Minami sitting next to her and stroking her hair to comfort her. After Atsuko fells in sleep, Minami leaves the room
“What's wrong, Takamina?” Yuko asks worriedly
“She was scared by some jerks when I was not there. Luckily I came back on time. If not, I don't know what will happen.” Minami said
“I see. That is a very serious matter. Fortunately that you was back on time” Yuko said
“Uh” Minami nods
“I should tell Riku to call security to patrol around this resort. It will be safer.” Yuko said
“Uh” Minami nods
Then he sighs again while looking down
“I shouldn't leave her alone after all. It was my fault” he said in sad tone
“Don't blame yourself about that. She is fine now. I believe a long sleep will help her to relax and forget everything.” Yuko said
“Uhm, I hope so.” Minami said
Then he goes back to their room to check on Atsuko.
In the evening
Atsuko wakes up after a good sleep. She sits up and looks around. She smiles when seeing Minami sitting on the sofa. He is doing something on his laptop. Atsuko smiles and stealthily walks down from the bed. She slowly walks toward him careful not to let him notice. Then she hugs him from behind and uses her hands to cover his eyes
“Who am I?” Atsuko asks in happy tone
Minami is taken by surprise. Then he smiles happily when hearing her cheerful tone.
“Who is it? I wonder” Minami said while smiling
“Is this…?” he said and pauses
“Is this my cute angel, Maeda Atsuko” Minami said
Then he takes her hands and pulls her down on his laps. Atsuko lost her balance and falls on Minami.
“Ouch…Minami” Atsuko said in surprise while frowning
Seeing that, Minami quickly said
“I’m sorry, Atsuko. Are you hurt?” he asks her while checking on her
Atsuko catches his face and pecks on his lips.
“I’m fine, Minami. Just a little surprise.” Atsuko said
Minami smiles at her. When Atsuko is about to stand up, Minami hugs her back to his laps
“Where are you going, Atsuko?” he asks
“No, I just want to sit down next to you” Atsuko said
“No need. I just want you to sit here. This place is for you” Minami said while smiling at her
“Ok” Atsuko nods shyly
“Are you feeling better now, Atsuko?” he asks while gently caressing her face
“Uh, a lot better” Atsuko said happily
“I’m now full of energy” she continues while holding her fists showing her energy to Minami
Minami laughs softly when seeing her doing that
“I’m glad” Minami pinches her nose and said
Atsuko turns and looks at the laptop’s screen. She sees a lot of pictures of different places around Europe. She turns and asks Minami
“What are you doing, Minami?”
“I’m planning for next week. I look at those places and decide where to take you next” He said
“I see. You are the best Minami” Atsuko hugs him tightly and said in happy tone
Her happy face makes him very happy. He breaks the hug and look at her
“Then where is my reward, Atsuko?” He asks her
“What do my awesome boyfriend want?” She asks him
“Hum….What do I want?” He said and smiles at her while tapping his lips.
Atsuko smiles at his action. She leans and kisses his lips lovingly. Minami hugs her and replies her kiss gently.
“Do you like that reward, Minami?” Atsuko asks
“A kiss from my princess, what more do I need. That is the best reward ever” He said and pinches her cheeks
Then he asks her
“Are you hungry, Atsuko?”
“Uh” Atsuko nods
“Then let’s go down to eat” He said
“Yes, I will add more power for tomorrow” Atsuko nods and said happily
“Uh” Minami smiles at her lovely face
Then they leave the room to the hotel restaurant
Meanwhile
In another place
Tomomi is sitting on her desk and looks out at the skiing field.
Flashback
3 years ago
While Tomomi is preparing to go skiing, her brother walks in with a young and handsome man. She widens her eyes in surprise when realized who he is
“Cold Prince?” she thought
“Riku-nii” Tomomi calls him
“Hey Tomochin, are you going to ski?” He asks
“Come here with me a little” Tomomi pulls him to the kitchen
“What is it, Tomochin?” Riku asks in surprise
“Riku-nii, is he the famous “Cold Prince” in school. The Takahashi Minami who good at every subject, sport, and more?” she asks him in small tone
“Yup, that is him. He is my old buddy in high school. After graduated here, he came back to Canada and attended medical university. He is now a young medical student” Riku said
“I see” Tomomi said while looking back at the front door
“Hey, Tomochin, what wrong with you today? Normally you don’t mind about those things” Riku asks in confuse
“Nothing. Just I heard a lot of rumors about him, so I’m curious” Tomomi said
“That is not rumor. He is a smart person.” Riku said
“I see. Just want to ask that. Now I will go skiing” Tomomi said
“Ok” Riku nods in confuse
Then they come out together. Minami is reading his book
“Sorry buddy, my sister wanted to ask me something” Riku said
“It is ok.” Minami said
“Also, here is my little sis, Tomomi.” Riku said
“Hello, my name Takahashi Minami, you can call me Takamina. Nice to meet you” Minami said and shakes her hand
“Uh...nice to meet you, too. You can call me Tomochin. My friends call me that” Tomomi said
“Ok” Minami nods
“Takamina, wait here, I will bring that book here for you.” he said
“Ok” Minami said
Then Riku goes up to his room to take it. Tomomi just stands there and look at him while Minami is still reading the book in his hand
“Uhm...Takamina” Tomomi calls him
“What is it, Tomochin?” Minami asks while looking up
“Do you live here?” she asks
“No, I just come here to take vacation. I live in Canada. I used to live here in high school” Minami answers.
Then he continues reading his book
“You seem to like reading a lot” She said
“Yep. He is a bookworm. In a day, most of his time is studying, the rest is for reading.” Riku said
“Uh, I like reading a lot. You can find a lot of interesting things here” Minami said
“Here Takamina, this is the guide book for around here.” Riku said and gives Minami the book
“Thank you. I leave now. Bye Riku” Minami said
“Also, bye Tomochin. See you two later” he said and smiles at them
“See ya” Riku said
“Uh...uh bye Takamina” she said
End flashback
Flashback
While Tomomi walking to the skiing area with her friend, she sees Minami. He is skiing very fast and skilled. He looks very cool when he is doing that. Tomomi smiles and starts skiing toward his direction. When Minami stops, she also stops in front of him.
“Good morning, Takamina” Tomomi said
“Tomochin?” Minimi calls in surprise
“You are very skilled” she said
“Thank you. This sport is my favorite winter sport.” he said
“You also are very good. Just like a pro” Minami said
“Of course, my parents own this resort after all. I grow up with this” Tomomi said proudly
“You are right” Minami said
“When will you go back to Canada, Takamina?” she asks him
“This Saturday” Minami said
“Two more days” She thought
“Uhm...Takmina, will you come here tomorrow?” she asks
“Uh, just morning. Evening I will go into the city” Minami answers
“Would you like to go skiing like today? We will ski together” she asks
“Sure.” Minami nods
“I will go back now. See you later Tomochin” he said while looking at his watch
“Ok, see you tomorrow, Takamina” Tomomi said to him while smiling happily
End flashback
“I don’t believe that 3 years can’t compare to that short 1 month” Tomomi thought
At night
While Atsuko is playing with her laptop on her bed, Minami comes and gently hugs her from behind.
“Atsuko, I have a question to ask you” he said
“What is it, Minami?” Atsuko asks still playing with her laptop
“You knew that there is no problem with Tomochin’s ankle, right?” Minami asks
Atsuko stops playing and closes the laptop. Then she turns to look at Minami.
“Uh” Atsuko nods
“Then why did you let me take her back home?” he asks
“Because I knew you notice that too” Atsuko said
“She did that is because of you. Therefore, I want you to settle everything with Tomochin. I don’t want to flow her cover right there. It will be very hurt” Atsuko said
Minami looks at her and smiles gently
“I see, I never thought that my cute girlfriend is so thoughtful like an adult” Minami said in teasing tone
“What do you mean, Takamina? Am I that childish?” Atsuko asks while pouting
Minami looks at Atsuko and laughs loudly. Then something appears on his head. He turns around and pushes her beneath him. Atsuko looks at him while blushing
“Don’t you feel anything when I’m alone with Tomochin, Atsuko?” Minami asks
“Nope” Atsuko said while shaking her head
Minami looks at her with surprised look
“Really?” He asks her
“Uh, because I trust you, Minami” Atsuko leans on his ear and whispers
“I trust you completely” she said
Minami smiles widely at her words. Then he asks her another question in whisper tone
“Then you don't feel jealous right, Atsuko?”
“Who said that I don’t?” Atsuko pulls back and said in pouting tone
“Huh, but you just said that” he asks
“That feeling and this feeling are different. When seeing you give her piggyback, I was so jealous, but I had to endure that. However, I don’t want to see you carrying any girl on your back like that ever again, Minami” she pouts
“Of course, my back is only for you, my princess” Minami said and pecks her lips
“However, because you carried other girl on your back today. You have to be punish” Atsuko said
“But you give me the permission” Minami explains
“But I still feel so jealous about that” she reasons
Minami sighs in defeats
“Then what is my punishment then, princess?” Minami asks her
“Uhm...it would be a very hard one” Atsuko said
Minami gulps while looking at Atsuko
“Uhm...your punishment is you have to carry me on your back every day, forever” Atsuko said
“Huh?” he thought in confused
Seeing Minami confused face, Atsuko laughing innocently
“Don’t worry Minami. I’m just kimhm…” When Atsuko is about to say that is just a joke, Minami already seals her lips with his
Then he breaks the kiss and smiles at her.
“I accept the punishment with no objection because after all this is the greatest punishment ever, Atsuko” Minami said while caressing her face
“Really, Minami?” Atsuko asks in surprised tone
“Of course. I will happily carries you on my back forever. That is what I really want to do” He said gently at her
Atsuko smiles lovingly at him
“I love you, Minami” Atsuko said while hugging him tightly
“I love you too, Atsuko” Minami said
After awhile Atsuko breaks the hugs and looks at Minami seriously.
“What’s wrong, Atsuko?” Minami asks in worry tone
“Actually I was so scared” Atsuko said
Minami looks at her in surprised look
“When I said to those men that you will come, they laughed at me and said that “your boyfriend properly are having fun with other girls right now”. Even though I knew that it is not true, you aren't that kind of people, my heart still hurt when hearing those words.” Atsuko said.
“Their words remind me of the incident when we just came here. I remembered Tomochin’s words about she is your girlfriend. Suddenly a thought appear in my head. I was so scared of that thought. I was so afraid of losing you, Minami. The first and only person I love with all my heart” Atsuko said honestly while tear starts rolling down on her cheeks
Minami is very happy when hearing what Atsuko said. He is happy because she trusts him. Also, he is happy because she loves him a lot. He smiles gently at her
“Thank you, Atsuko” Minami said gently
“Thank you for trusting and loving me, Atsuko” he continues
“You are also the first and only girl I love with all my heart. Only you can make my heart feels special. Let’s me tell you this, Atsuko. You will never lose me, and I will never let anything take you away from me. I will fight against everything even the whole world to have you by my side because you are mine and only mine, Atsuko” Minami said while caressing Atsuko's face
Atsuko smiles brightly at his words.
“I’m happy, Minami” Atsuko said
Then she leans up to peck his lips. When she is about to move back, Minami pushes her down while kissing her passionately. Atsuko closes her eyes feeling Minami's love full kiss. He kisses her intensely and roughly. Atsuko hugs his neck to pull him closer to her and deepen their kiss. Then Minami slips his tongue in Atsuko's mouth to explore while unbuttoning her shirt and caressing her skin. His action makes Atsuko moan softly. Then he moves his kisses to Atsuko's neck and marks her there. After that Minami pulls out to look at Atsuko. He laughs softly while looking at Atsuko's cute blushed face. He said
“You are so cute, Atsuko”
“I love you very much” he whispers
“I love you, too Minami” Atsuko caresses his face and said
Then Minami kisses her lips again, and that night they drown into their own world of love
TBC
Hope you guys enjoy reading this :D
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Uh.. in one moment situation wasn't very, nice when those jerks came.. At least her prince was back in time. :D
Hehe.. in the end day really ended quite good.. :roll: XD
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NOOo!!!! Atsukoo!!!! :shocked Where are you!? :O
Oh my... oh my.. .
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Hmm.. I think there will be some surprise from Minami... hmm... :roll: :huhuh ...maybe... XD
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:shocked
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Gasp! Σ(・□・;) :shock:
Takapapa is against the marriage! :cry: :( :panic:
I hope things will workout ok...
waahhhhh! You never fail to amaze me with your updates author-san!
Keep up the good work! :mon determined: :gmon bang:
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What!? :shocked Ah.. of course, from the beginning it sounds too good to be true and here we goes.. :(
Hardest part only comes..
Uh.. :roll:
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Oh no!!! :shocked
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Eh~ why minami's father won't approve the marriage. :shocked :w00t:
Atsumina nooo~ :panic: :panic:
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What the hell???? :shocked
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An update!!! :on gay: :mon XD: :wigglypanda:
Awesome!
Was worried when I was reading the part where atsuko fell down the stairs I thought she was going to have amnesia when she wakes up and forget about minami and only recognized her family like any typical amnesia story, but then she had but was the opposite! :shock:
Shocking! Hahaha!
Anyway, can't wait for your next update! Weeeee! 😁 :onioncheer: :gmon heartu:
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Okaa~y... :huhuh
That's makes things little bit complicated.. :roll:
Uh.. what's next? 8)
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At least one family accept it, but what about other...?
Sounds like there something still will be.. hmm...
Okeey~ 8)
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Waaahhhh...I'm sensing that atsuko's father being acceptable was an act...or am I wrong? :?
Haha! Anyway, an update!!! :wriggly: :nya:
I can't wait for the next one!
Keep up the good work author-san!
I'll be waiting! 😁 :D :on gay:
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Why they die?????????
Their family are very stubborn that caused both of them die.
This is not the ending, isn't it? What will happen next?
Thanks for your update
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Why they die?!?!! :cry: :cry:
................... Wait..... It is not ending right..? :?
"TBC" :O did I read it correctly??? :O
So if this is not ending.....
Um... What if... Lets say.... What if they are just acting planned by Mariko-sama?? :O
I think perharps Mariko-sama knew that Atsuko's father was just pretending to accept Minami to be her boyfriend....
So Mariko-sama decided to plan those.....?
In order to escape from their families and start new life together, what if this is it?! :O
Although i dont know if this is it.... I dont like sad ending.... :cry: :cry:
Please update ASAP! :panic: :banghead:
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Too much drama lately
It is not good for my heart :cry:
Keep the good work author san. :cow:
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:OMG: :hip cry: :fainted: :mon waterworks: uwaaaahhhhhhh!
Author-san! You made me cry! My heart please! :ptam-wub: :ptam-hbk: it can't take more pain anymore...
Haha! Anyway, waaaahhhh! Thank you for the update, though this chapter was heartbreaking I hope they can find happiness, uwahhhh! Can't wait for the next update! Please continue your good work author-san! :kneelbow: :on GJ: :ptam-kiss:
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No.. NO.. NOO!!! :O
Everything is too suspicious.. :huhuh
Uh...
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Oh.. after so many years... but at least, they are still alive.. :roll:
Hmm... Ken is near too, but.. yeah.
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Thanks God they are alive :O
And also Thanks God that you are not fan of sad ending \ (^o^) /
I somehow feel pity for Grandpa Ken :'( but at least he learnt the lesson....
Update soon! /o/
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They're alive! :farofflook:
Ahhhh...so they have twins now :mon inluv:
What will happen to grandpa ken?
Will atsu learn about his condition?
Will they see each other?
Will they accept their relationship for real this time if they meet? now that they have children
Aaahhhh...too much question...hahaha! Anyway, can't wait for the next update! :mon trannie: :on GJ:
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Your stories are quite cute! Atsumina are so great together. Nice work!
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Yuhuuu a new story :panic: :otomerika: :cow: :deco:
This time minami is a cop :shocked:
Wow interesting :fap :twothumbs
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Oh.. Looks like I have missed some parts... XD khmm.. so..
"Power of Love" - Mmm.. no matter what.. but in there will be - happy ever after.. :roll: :) .. Thank you for complete it. :D
New story? Already? :huhuh Nice.. Begining quite interesting.. :roll:
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Oh... so, now they both will work together.. hehe.. :D
Let see how it will go.. 8)
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I really enjoy your fanfics. Great job author San
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I knew tht koji is the culprit is when i read ur story but u surprise m tht its story was this interesting :lol:
btw, atsuko is quite careless and being sweet with kai which make ppl misunderstand her
Though sure kai and minami is same person but nobody know about its except among themselves
I wonder wht koji will be doing next :?...i hope he will not manage to hurt atsuko like wht he did to his victims
Thank you for update~
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Really really really nice story author-san. :thumbup :twothumbs
I'am fully enjoyed your story. :deco:
Thank you very much author-san. :thumbsup
Aaaaannnnddddd i'm waiting for your new storyyyyyyyy :D :P
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jealous minami so cute :heart: :heart:
really really good and enjoyable story
i hope u update new story soon outhor-san
thank you
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Really really really nice story author-san. :thumbup :twothumbs
I'am fully enjoyed your story. :deco:
Thank you very much author-san. :thumbsup
Aaaaannnnddddd i'm waiting for your new storyyyyyyyy :D :P
Thank you for liking my fic. I'm glad that you enjoyed reading it :wub:
:D
jealous minami so cute :heart: :heart:
really really good and enjoyable story
i hope u update new story soon outhor-san
thank you
Thank you. I'm happy that you enjoyed reading my fic. :wub: :D
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Thanks for your sweet story.
Minami is lucky, because not everyone get second chance.
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That was a very lovely fic.
Great for Christmas! 😁
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Atsuko would wake up soon. She's a strong girl.
Ganbatte Minami!
Thank you for the update author san. :)2
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Continue please....
Will Atsuko wake up?
What other troubles are they going to face to be together?
What's going to happen next?
Can't wait
Thank you for the updates so far
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Yeah... Atsuko is awake... but with no memories
Will Atsuko remember about Minami's lie?
Will Atsuko love Minami again?
How about Minami's parents?
What's going to happen next?
Can't wait to find out
Thank you for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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This is a really sweet story :inlove:
Please update soon!! :twothumbs
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Ah... when the thing is getting better for Minami and Atsuko... Kiara came..
What kind of trouble will this Kiara bring with her presence?
What about Minami's parents?
Will Atsuko get hurt again?
Can't wait to find out
Thank you for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Kiara is a devilous girl
And Minami's parents are the same
What kind of problems will Minami and Atsuko come across?
Can't wait to find out
Thank you for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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That girl :angry:
I have a bad feeling :(
Please update soon!!! :bow:
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It's great to see you come back after these weeks.
The fic is good, and I love it.
I wonder what will Minami's parents do to Atsuko after all the things they did to Mariko's husband.
I hope Mariko can do something in precaution.
And I guess I know what good news Atsuko wanted to tell Minami 😌
Please update soon!
Thank you!
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Oh no!
Hope nothing bad happend to Atsuko :cry:
Dont separate them again please :bow:
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Poor Atsuko :cry:
Why doesn't tell the truth to Minami
I hope Minami can find her soon
Please update soon!!! :bow:
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Oh... what's minami like now 3 years later?
Will he able to find Atsuko?
Why did he not get some PI to find Atsuko?
What's going to happen next?
Can't wait to find out
Thank you for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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3 years?
Wow!!
A cant wait for the reunion
Plese that Minami find soon to Astuko and Kai
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Yey! Minami found them! :twothumbs
Now I hope Minami parents understand that thry love each other and they get married soon! :inlove:
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What will Minami do now?
Will he disappear from the world, hiding in Atsuko's heaven or will he ask Atsuko to go back to Tokyo with him?
What about his parents?
What kind of troubles and problems will they face next?
Can't wait to find out
Thank you for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Author-san, where are you TT^TT
It has been 2 weeks, why haven't you updated :(((
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thank you for the update :D :D :twothumbs :twothumbs
waiting next part :) :) :)
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You disappear again, Author-san :( :( :(
Please come back, I've been waiting for you for so long...
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That's sweet as always Nguyen23 san :inlove: :wub:
I'm still new in here :bow:
Also silent readers :twothumbs
I have been read all your OS and your short stories,also your long stories as well :roll: :inlove: And love all of them(your stories) :deco:
I hope you still make another story :twothumbs I'll be loved to read it :inlove: