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Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 11- 2/05/13 NEW!! <<
« Reply #120 on: May 02, 2013, 12:21:50 PM »
Yuu is making a move to acchan      :kekeke:


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Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 11- 2/05/13 NEW!! <<
« Reply #121 on: May 02, 2013, 01:24:32 PM »
Girl with big boobs? Dont tell that girl is Haruna??  :cool2:
Yuu is making move to Acchan  :bigdeal:
Kai and Acchan dating scene is so kawaii  :luvluv2:
What?! Jurina challenged Kai to get that girl?!?! :grr: Dont get that girl!! You should only get Acchan in your room and make her yours!!! :kekeke:
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Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 11- 2/05/13 NEW!! <<
« Reply #122 on: May 02, 2013, 02:39:20 PM »
Oh no !! Kai don't get into the trap. You & Acchan are destiny to be together. Yuu & Haruna are same.

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Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 11- 2/05/13 NEW!! <<
« Reply #123 on: May 02, 2013, 03:32:29 PM »
lol...


kai you should make acchan love you ..

not haruna  :banghead:

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Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 11- 2/05/13 NEW!! <<
« Reply #124 on: May 02, 2013, 04:54:58 PM »
I kinda have a feeling that the girl with big boobs is Kojiharu XD

And Yuu making his move to Acchan 8D
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Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 11- 2/05/13 NEW!! <<
« Reply #125 on: May 02, 2013, 06:48:19 PM »
dont add more Ray, chemicalstar-san
I dont like drama
and you make me so confused
I want Kai and Acchan have one more step
but Haruna and TakaHaru, what can I do? I love this pairing too :cry: :cry:
anyways, thanks for great job :cow:

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Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 11- 2/05/13 NEW!! <<
« Reply #126 on: May 02, 2013, 07:30:38 PM »
Acchan's reaction will say everything after this chapter.
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Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 11- 2/05/13 NEW!! <<
« Reply #127 on: May 02, 2013, 11:14:24 PM »
wow yuu is make move to acchan
but i prefer kojiyuu XD

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Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 11- 2/05/13 NEW!! <<
« Reply #128 on: May 03, 2013, 01:51:04 AM »
Kai and Atsuko are cute together on the date
It's good that Yuu saved Acchan
but he's taking his chance to make a move at the same time
Kai should make Acchan fall in love with him...
not that other girl Jurina pointed out
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Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 11- 2/05/13 NEW!! <<
« Reply #129 on: May 03, 2013, 02:50:30 AM »
Oh no !! Kai don't get into the trap. You & Acchan are destiny to be together. Yuu & Haruna are same.

yeah! dont be a jerk kai!..

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Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 11- 2/05/13 NEW!! <<
« Reply #130 on: May 03, 2013, 10:54:18 AM »
Wah... Kai 1st experience in public transportation

He didn't have any common sense in normal social life.

Yeah... Kai liking his 1st outing with Atsuko... and he even held her hand....

So cute...  :inlove:

Ah... Yuu became the knight in shiny armor... not Kai...

Eh... Yuu confessed to Atsuko... Would Atsuko accept?

I hope not... I want Atsuko and Kai.... together

Ah... Kai is being challeged to have a one night stand...

He should not have accept it...

I hope he would do the right thing...

I hope he would not be a jerk... playing girl heart just like that...

Who is this C-cup...? Haruna...

Please be Haruna so all the characters are present...

Jun, Rena, Haruna, Yuu, Kai and Atsuko...

I can't wait to see how the story is going to develop...

Thank you for the update

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Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 11- 2/05/13 NEW!! <<
« Reply #131 on: May 03, 2013, 06:26:04 PM »
Thanks for the update! I hope Kai won't have a one night stand with Kojiharu… :(

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Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 12 PART 1- 9/05/13 NEW!! <<
« Reply #132 on: May 09, 2013, 06:35:43 PM »
 Hey all, sorry it’s been so long not updating this fic. I’m in my busy days so, I just wrote this story half chapter. That’s why I made it Part 1 and Part 2. So this is the part 1. I’ll write the part 2 later. Thank you for reading my fic…


~ CHAPTER 12 Part 1 ~

Spending the whole day after school by just doing the task, studying for school is sometimes makes her bored. Acchan is waiting for Kai to come back home. She knows that Kai sometimes ack not so friendly, but at least, she has someone she can take care about, she can look at, and someone she can ask about the school lesson. But that night, seems like Kai isn’t home yet when the dinner time comes.

“Where’s Kai?” Acchan asks her uncle Kine while having the dinner.

Kine just lift up his shoulders. “I don’t know, he texted me no to fetch him. He said he will back home by taxi. Maybe he will back home late.”

“How come? He has to have dinner..” Acchan said, her face seems so worried.

Kine chuckles. “Don’t be too worry him like that. He can have dinner out there.”

After the dinner, Acchan just goes to her room and doing her homework while waiting for Kai back home. Almost every ten minutes, Acchan looks at the clock. There’s no sign that Kai is back. Until it’s almost 11 pm, Acchan feels tired and decides to get on her bed. Suddenly she hears a sound of a car from outside the house. She quickly gets up and goes to the front door.

Kai open the door slowly, expecting that everyone is already sleeping.
GREK! He opens the door. Unfortunately, there he sees Acchan standing right in front of him, crossing her hands with a spooky look.

“Where have you been?” Acchan asks in cold tone, wides her eyes.

“A-a-cchan.. ” Kai said trembling. “I thought you’re sleeping.”

“Who is that?” suddenly a girl appears behind Kai. Her hands are clinging on Kai’s.

“Urmm.. Oh, nothing, just come in” Kai drag the girl inside, walk over Acchan who stands there dropping her jaw, looking at Kai ignoring her.

Acchan gives a strange look at the girl while she walks over. And so is the girl, she gives a strange and disgusted looks to Acchan.

Kai takes the girl upstairs, this is making Acchan more curious about who is the girl and what will they do up there.

“You have a big house..” the girl said, still clinging her hand on Kai’s arms.

“Uhn, thank you… ” Kai open his room and get in. “This is my room. Comfort yourself, I’ll get some drink. What do you want to?”

“You have cocktail?”

“Of course, just wait here, okay..”

Kai quickly get out of the room and go downstairs. His heart is beating fast, knowing that tonight is probably his big night to lose his virginity. In the end of the stairs he steps on, Acchan is standing cold there, still crossing her arms.

“Where have you been? Have you had your dinner? And… who is that girl?” Acchan said seriously.

“Too much questions. Now make one cocktail, hurry up” Kai said, commanding her to make drinks for him and for his ‘one night girl’. Kai walk over Acchan to the kitchen.

“You never drinks cocktail” Acchan said following him.

“It’s for her. Make me a lemon tea,” Kai said.

“Is she your girlfriend?” Acchan asks him again when they reach the kitchen.

“No. Uh-oh-I mean,.. yes” Kai said, a bit nervous, trying not to look at her.

“She will spend the night here?”

Kai nods, but he doesn’t brave enough to see her face. Acchan’s expression changed, looks like she’s disappointed, fortunately Kai doesn’t see it.

“I will wait upstairs” Kai leaves her.

Seeing this kind of situation, Acchan feels uncomfortable. Kai never told her that he has a girlfriend, even she never see any sign that Kai has a girlfriend. It’s so sudden that Kai takes a girl to spend the night in his house, in his room. Even though Acchan knows that Kai is a bit stubborn and arrogant, but she knows exactly that Kai is actually a good boy. The way Kai act is so strange tonight.

After she finished making the drinks, she goes upstairs and knocks the door. Kai open the door a little. How shocked Acchan when she finds Kai without his shirt on, but only on his jeans with unbuckle belt. Acchan looks at him from top to bottom. Kai notices it, and he feels so nervous looking at Acchan frowning at him.

“Yours is that lemon tea” Acchan pointing at the lemon tea glass. “That cocktail is hers.”

Kai takes the drinks from Acchan’s hands. “Okay, good night…” He quickly closes the door. Acchan feels something choked her heart and throat by seeing what she saw just now. She walks heavily and slowly downstairs. Her sleepiness is disappear. Now she can’t sleep anymore. Thinking what probably Kai does with than unkown girl in the room. Acchan walk to the bar table and sit there, she cross her hands on the table, leaning her chin on her hands and spacing out.

“I thought he’s not that type of guy…”


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Okay, that's it. I know it's too short
 But I told you it's only the part 1. So how was it? Please leave some comments. Just wanna know what do you think about this fic.
« Last Edit: June 17, 2013, 04:32:23 PM by chemicalstar »

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Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 12 PART 1- 9/05/13 NEW!! <<
« Reply #133 on: May 09, 2013, 06:53:41 PM »
i really enjoy ur fanfic ^___^  :heart:
i love the story ~


please, keep writing :)

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Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 12 PART 1- 9/05/13 NEW!! <<
« Reply #134 on: May 09, 2013, 07:13:06 PM »
What the!??!?! Kai!! What the f*** are you doing!?!?   :on voodoo:
And you Acchan!! Do something!!! You shouldnt let him lost his virginity to that girl!!!  :angry1:
Please update fast!!!! I wanna know what happen next!!!! :tantrum:
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Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 12 PART 1- 9/05/13 NEW!! <<
« Reply #135 on: May 09, 2013, 07:34:50 PM »
Seriously lol on Kai's part

Although I wonder....

Can he follow through?
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« Reply #136 on: May 09, 2013, 08:23:49 PM »
 :stoned: really Kai really
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« Reply #137 on: May 09, 2013, 08:37:51 PM »
wait, what? Kai! dont do that!? D:< Acchan! dont let kai do that! D:

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« Reply #138 on: May 10, 2013, 03:08:42 AM »
What the!??!?! Kai!! What the f*** are you doing!?!?   :on voodoo:
And you Acchan!! Do something!!! You shouldnt let him lost his virginity to that girl!!!  :angry1:
Please update fast!!!! I wanna know what happen next!!!! :tantrum:

MMm maybe kai gonna be unconscious... or something likethat

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« Reply #139 on: May 10, 2013, 10:27:01 AM »
nnn… kanashisugiru :cry: I feel sad for Acchan already!

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