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umichan's one shots [Sae's Keys] part 2 Update!!!!!(Saeyaka Date)
« on: September 06, 2012, 03:44:52 AM »
my first shot.
i wrote it will i was in school and my friend and teacher help me.
they help me in my grammer.
 please don't judge me........enjoy




The day has come




The day has come to see you walking.
The day has come to see you with your father.

I though this day would never come, but it did.
Love caught me in its Trap
I still remember that day when I met you; you were beautiful just like now.
Was I destined to be with you? I guess I was.
Thru those days of happiness and sorrow I always love you.

The day has come to see you like this.
The day has come to hear the bells.

I’m overloaded with joy. I can feel my hands sweating.
As I see you walking, I remember how happy you were when I propose to you, after 5 years of just been girlfriends.
A beautiful day that was when I told you, “Will you marry me”. And what a beautiful night we had. Joking about how will the called you after we get married, “Mrs. Takahashi….Haruna Takahashi” “it sounds lame”

The day has come to see you walking down the aisle.
The day has come were I can see you in your white wedding dress.

My friends told me or should I say force me to put on a suit even though I wanted to wear a dress.  But seeing you like this, it’s all worth it.
You smile now that we are in front of each other.
“I love you” I whispered
“I love you” you whispered”
I remember that day when we told your parents and my parent, we had to knee to them, just like now.

That day was magical, just like now.

That day was enjoyable, just like now

I love you, just like now.

The day has come when I can introduce you as my wife.
The day has come were I can you Haruna Kojima, my wife.

“I do”
And with that we made a bow that will never be broken.
“I love you Haruna”
“I love you Minami”



my next shot will be a saeyuki.
...until the day comes...
« Last Edit: May 20, 2013, 03:51:12 AM by umichan »

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Re: umichan's one shots [The day has come] (takaharu)
« Reply #1 on: September 06, 2012, 05:41:44 AM »
Poetic, should I say! Nice piece of work, despite the diferent coupleing here^^ (at least for me xD)

You have a nice teacher o/ Mine would never help me with fics. When I was in school, she said my stories were stranges xD

Can't wait for the next o/ bring it on \o/

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Re: umichan's one shots [The day has come] (takaharu)
« Reply #2 on: September 07, 2012, 02:42:53 AM »
hello....my teacher also help me and my friend. actually my friend came with the idea of the "rumor"

the words that are in italic are what they are saying/flashbacks and the bold one is yuki.


enjoy


With just one question



“Can I help you?”

Just with that question, I knew you were going to be the person that I will love for the rest of my live.
It’s weird, right? I was a playboy even though I’m a girl.
I still remember when we meet, you were the new student and you were lost.

“Can I help you?” I stare at you with questioning eyes

“Yes, can you tell me where is room 317?”

“That’s my classroom” I answer with a smile.

“Can you take me there?”

“What’s your name?”

“I’m Yuki”

“I’m Sae”

At that time I had a girlfriend, Sayaka. Do you remember?
You slowly got into my mind and heart. I couldn’t stop thinking about you, I couldn’t stop looking at you, but your supercilious friend and my girlfriend stop me.
Soon I realize that I didn’t wanted Sayaka anymore, that my heart belong to you. And that’s how our story began.
We got along so well, that we spend time too much.

Remember when sayaka spread a rumor about me being a man and that I got her pregnant. Ridicules, right?
Well I do understand her, if the great sae breaks up with me…I would be upset…….actually I would never break up with myself.
You were laughing at me when I told you about the rumor.

“…you…did…what….hahahaha….you..hahahahaha…..got her…hahahahahah…pregnant…hahahahahahaha”

“It’s not funny, I have a reputation. My fangirls will get mad at me”

“..hahahah….why…hahahaha”

“Because they will assume that I had sex with her”

“Is that true”

“Of course not”

After showing my birth certificate and letting one of my fangirls touch my chest, they forgot about it. There is never peace in school.
Your friend started a rumor that I “stole girl’s bras”. I still remember when everyone stared at me.
You were the only one that came to me and said, “Is it true that you steal girl’s bras?” Oh what a month I had, but thankfully you discover it was you friend.

After 2 months I couldn’t hold my feelings

“I love you”

“I love you too”

Those words that you said made me fly with happiness.
Now, after 3 years of being together, I want to ask you something.

“Will you marry me?”
"Yes”



my next shot will be a kai/nami and ray
thank you to all of you who read this.

....until the day comes...

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Re: umichan's one shots [With just one question] (saeyuki)
« Reply #3 on: September 07, 2012, 06:38:13 AM »
Nhoowunnnn *.* what a cute one!

Who is Yuki's friend? Mayu? Xp and Sayaka was that desperate aahuhau pragnant xD

Hueheu you have good friends o/

Yeeey! Next is Kai/Nami x Ray *.*

'Till next oneshot o/

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Re: umichan's one shots [With just one question] (saeyuki)
« Reply #4 on: September 08, 2012, 03:29:44 AM »
hello...i'm just dropping off my shot.

its actually a kai and ray shot, but i do promise that some time later i will do a kai/nami and ray fic.
and again my teacher help me and two of my friends help me.....thank you

well will explain somethings in the end
 if you want to you can listen to fallen leaves from JYJ or niji no yuki from alice nine

enjoy

Is it too late?


We will see the same moon, but a part from each other.

Is it true that real love exist forever?
I always love you, but is it too late?
I guess it is.
From far away I can see the autumn leaves fall.

Why didn’t I realize it earlier?
I didn’t wanted to acknowledge that you love me, I kept pushing you away.
Now that I realize that I love you, you are going to marry someone else.
The pain grows as the days come closer. I just want to escape from this reality.
I’m stupid for pushing you away.
I love you so much that it hurts.
The sky keeps on crying with my sorrow.

I was there in that tree I’m seeing right now. I was there begging you not to get married, but all I got was, “I’m going to marry in one week”.
 Tears fell like it never did before. You gave me a kiss and left me there.

Now all I can do is let you go and remember those moment we had.
Today is your wedding day, you must be happy right?
Wait you are not, I know this marriage is arrange, that your parents made you marry.
But why is it that you did fight?...right I push you away.

I’m in the park where you first said, “I love you”. I will never forget that day.
Near this park is where you are getting married. As I see the leaves fall, I began to cry.
I let you go away and I could never forgive myself for doing so.
I don’t care if people are seeing me crying, all I care about is you.
I’m late aren’t I?

This is my all fault.
Even if you aren’t going to be with me, I must keep on walking ahead.
I will never forget you
I love you

By now your wedding must have end it. Now you are married to that bastard.
I am late
All I can do is go back to my sadness and love you for the rest of my life.



“Kai” a beautiful tall woman in a white wedding dress yells while she runs.

A blonde short guy, by hearing his name turns around to see who it was.

“Ray”


yea that was my shot.
ok let me explain that this is not a mendol setting, this is AU setting.
 where ray's parents are rich and for the sake of the company they make her marry a rich guy. and kai is a middle class resident.

 :? does it make sence.
if you have questions just ak me...

well my next is a marimii......

...until the day comes.....
« Last Edit: September 13, 2012, 01:04:29 AM by umichan »

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Re: umichan's one shots [Is it too late?] (Kai x Ray)
« Reply #5 on: September 08, 2012, 04:32:21 AM »
YEY!!! I love it
its so calming (what am i saying LOL)
waiting for Marimii
just wondering if there is KaiAcchan Atsumina AtsuYuu kojiyuu
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Re: umichan's one shots [Is it too late?] (Kai x Ray)
« Reply #6 on: September 09, 2012, 03:18:45 AM »
hello....i here to drop my shot.
 have you why seen my pattern???

this shot was rushed, so  if there is any mistake i will edit it later.
my help me in this one

enjoy

captivated by your silliness




You were that stupid innocent girl that I fell for.

Your silliness captivated me, even thought I was more mature.

Its funny how we meet, you bump into me because my friend, Haruna, was chasing you.

“Watch were you are going” I yell

“You watch were you are going old lady”

“Hey I’m not an old lady” I yell

“You are taking too long, move” you push me to the side

You were so annoying back then, well you still are. My friend, Haruna, officially introduced us and made you apologize. Ever since that day I was your friend.
Without realizing, I smile and laugh at every time you did something stupid. Without realizing I was falling for you.

Remember when I save you in the library. Just because you wanted to read Alice in Wonderland, you decided to go up there and grab it.
When you were going to grab the book you stand was moving.

“Miichan be careful” I said in a worried voice.

“Don’t worry” you said

“Okay” I said still in a worried voice.  I see how you were trying to grab the book when I see you falling. I grab your arm and pull you toward me.
Unfortunately, I wasn’t strong enough to stay still. When I open my eyes you were the first thing that I saw, you were in top of me.
At seeing in what position I blush and you did the same, but something made me go back to reality.

“Miichan you are heavy” I said with problems in my breathing

“I’m sorry” you stood up and ran away.   

I thought it was because you were embarrassed, but the way you look at at me was like if you were in love with me. Back then I knew I love you, but did you love me back then too?

Sometime later I notice you were avoiding me. I decided to “stalk” you; well I only follow you to your house. I notice that one day you were crying to your way to your house. I really worried me, but what you said me happy.

“Why can I get you out of my head Mariko?”

Now I’m standing in front of you, I want to tell you that you are still that stupid, annoying, innocent girl that I fell for.

“I love you, so much. You are the first person that I have ever loved.  Can you be my girlfriend?”

“Yes”




there it is.
i hope you enjoyed it..
the next one is a atsuyuu.....

....until the day comes....

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Re: umichan's one shots [captivated by your silliness] (MariMii)
« Reply #7 on: September 09, 2012, 03:54:24 AM »
..Amazing!!!!

..I like your One-Shots Fic!!

..Please make more!!

..ATSUMINA,WMATSUI,BLACKGEKI

..hehe

..A request

..Thank You :D
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Re: umichan's one shots [captivated by your silliness] (MariMii)
« Reply #8 on: September 09, 2012, 10:25:00 AM »
 :bow: Thank you for your update!
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Re: umichan's one shots [captivated by your silliness] (MariMii)
« Reply #9 on: September 09, 2012, 05:17:12 PM »
Oh man! I stay away a couple of days and you update twice! With two of my favorite couples *.*

thaaaanks! *.* I'm loving your oneshots!

The Kai x Ray one was almost sad, but give me a bright smile with that end. Are you planning to write about it with more details?

The MariMii one was supercute and funny! I love that twisted aurea around these two huahauhauhauha

Thanks again and till next one o/

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Re: umichan's one shots [captivated by your silliness] (MariMii)
« Reply #10 on: September 10, 2012, 01:39:42 AM »
Your fic are so cute~ especially the Marimii^^

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Re: umichan's one shots [captivated by your silliness] (MariMii)
« Reply #11 on: September 10, 2012, 03:23:09 AM »
i'm here to drop-off the last shot.............just joking......this is the last shot that i will do this week.
my next update is unknow to me because right now i have schools projects....

well enjoy

thank you



Why didn't i notice early?



Why doesn’t hurt not having you with me.

Why didn’t I realize what I felt for you was is love?
I’m a coward for not saying, “Yes”

At first we were just friends, but then you began to stay in my mind. Not long after that, you began to be more open with me.

Why didn’t I notice early?

You were always by my side no matter what.

Why didn’t I notice early?

In a rainy day you told me how you felt about me. “I love you”. And like a death body I stood frozen.
 Before I could come back to life you were running, trying to hide your crystal tears. Too late I realize what I felt for you is love.

Now I am here trying to find you in this world. It has pass two days since you told me, “I love you”.
I want to tell you how much I love you and that I’m sorry for not saying anything to you on that day.

Some of your friends told me you were leaving in a train at 12 o’clock. I was there like a bullet. I found you.

“Please don’t leave me”

In the rain I hold you. Not wanting to let you go, I hug you as tight as I can. I began to cry. Is it too late to tell you I love you?

Why didn’t I realize it early?

“I love you Atsuko”

“I love you Yuko”



i hope you enjoy it
i know its soooo short but i'm sick and can't think that much. too bad i have to go to school tomorrow.......


......until the day comes......

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Re: umichan's one shots [Why didn't i notice early?] (AtsuYuu)
« Reply #12 on: September 10, 2012, 06:19:43 AM »
Hey nice one! Never read fics with this couple.

Thaanks and see ya hext os o/

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Re: umichan's one shots [Why didn't i notice early?] (AtsuYuu)
« Reply #13 on: September 10, 2012, 12:13:38 PM »
WAHH ATSUYUU  :drool:
Thank you
I want more HEHE
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Re: umichan's one shots [Why didn't i notice early?] (AtsuYuu)
« Reply #14 on: September 11, 2012, 08:49:17 PM »
Gosh one of my fave pairings atsuyuu!!!!
its been a long time since I read atsuyuu here!
This is so cute~~~
THANK YOU!

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Re: umichan's one shots [Why didn't i notice early?] (AtsuYuu)
« Reply #15 on: September 14, 2012, 07:20:18 AM »
thanks for the atsuyuu fic..
i'm shipping atsuyuu so hard right now..


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Re: umichan's one shots [Why didn't i notice early?] (AtsuYuu)
« Reply #16 on: September 14, 2012, 12:39:04 PM »
Yay!! I REALLY LOVE ATSUYUU! Please continue to make more atsuyuu fics!  :) :heart: that was a great one! Keep it up  :O   :thumbup :peace:



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Re: umichan's one shots [more co
« Reply #17 on: September 15, 2012, 04:59:02 PM »
hello.....i'm just here to tell you guys that i will countinue doing shots, but school is keeping me from doing them.

to all those atsuyuu fans.....i'm planing to do more 3 shots in this month.

to all of those who like ray and kai....i'm planing to do 5 more shots this month.

to all those who like marimii.....i will do 3 more shots in this month.

i will so a shot of jurina and rena......

the next shot is going to be a takaharu....you will be schock or  :O withthat shot........its a secret on who the villan will be......or should i say its impossible that the person who is the "villan" is...........



well...

....until the day come.....

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« Reply #18 on: September 16, 2012, 01:36:29 AM »
hello...i'm just here to drop off this shot...well part one of the shot.
i'm to lazy to write the rest of the shot that i have in my notebook.
i hope you guys enjoy it........i want to read a saeyuki fic......it fading away.......saeyuki i need you....



okaaaayyyy, any ways enjoy

Impossible


“Do you have the cloth I told you to bring?” a girl whispered.

“Yeah….are you really going to this?” another girl answer.

“Where are the cloths” a girl asked.

“In my locker….good luck”



1 hour later: 7:28

A girl was walking in the streets. She seemed calm; she was tall, beautiful, but tiered. Suddenly, she heard some noises coming from behind.
She looked back but it was only a cat. She kept on walking. While she was walking, she remembered she was supposed to call her will girlfriend.

“Hello..Minami”

“Haruna” Haruna had a smile across her face when she heard Minami’s voice.

“Can you come to my house…I have a surprised” Minami asked.

“Sure, what time?”

“At 8:30…are you walking to your house?” Minami asked.

“Yeah, I have to get ready” Haruna laugh a little.

“Why are you laughing at?” Minami asked.

“Because this is the 5th time I go to your house” Haruna remember those other were really awkward.

“Anyways…are you wearing the necklace I gave you?”

“Of course, I will never lose it” haruna held her necklace in her hand.

“Well, I got to go…bye, love you” and with that Minami ended the phone call. Haruna saw her phone and saw it was 7:30; enough time to get her ready.
 She was walking in a street where there was few people, but somehow all the people disappeared….except for one.

She heard something and looked back, she saw a man walking like 3 meters away from her. ‘Is he following me’ Haruna thought. She speeded up her pace; the man also speeded up.
 Haruna got scared and started running and started to run, also the man.
 The man got to Haruna and covered her mouth with his hand. As for Haruna everything went black.






this will have 3 part....in my notebook is too llong.
i hope you guys enjoyed it......
and thank ou guys for reading my fics

....until the day comes...

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Re: umichan's one shots [more co
« Reply #19 on: September 16, 2012, 03:43:15 AM »
hello.....i'm just here to tell you guys that i will countinue doing shots, but school is keeping me from doing them.

to all those atsuyuu fans.....i'm planing to do more 3 shots in this month.

to all of those who like ray and kai....i'm planing to do 5 more shots this month.

to all those who like marimii.....i will do 3 more shots in this month.

i will so a shot of jurina and rena......

the next shot is going to be a takaharu....you will be schock or  :O withthat shot........its a secret on who the villan will be......or should i say its impossible that the person who is the "villan" is...........



well...

....until the day come.....


Oh my!!!! 3 more atsuyuu!!  :wriggly: im really excited for that!!  :on gay: please update soon!!  :mon crazyinlove:



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