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Re: Black and Blue (Chapter 17 1/27)
« Reply #280 on: February 06, 2010, 08:27:05 AM »
 :D

Baby Sticky Tree!

Gaki-san just totally turn into a softy and sometime, even baby..with Ai-chan around  :wub:

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“Seems like Mama and Papa need some grown up time.”
- XD

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“Yes. At first, I couldn’t tell what you were saying, so I began to run towards where I thought you were and eventually, your words became more clear and louder. You were telling me about your day and about something amusing Lin Lin or Tanakacchi said. You were crying for me to come back, telling me how much you needed me and loved me. All I wanted to do was come back to you.”
-  Her beam of light in the darkness.. :)

Like i say before !!BATHROOM!!  :oops:
- Don't know where to say cause i like it all XD

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Leaning back comfortably against her lover, Ai placed her hands on her arms, lightly tracing her tattoo.
- But i like how A-chan (sweetly) traces Risa's tattoo ~

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“You know, if you really want me to not jump your bones, your not doing a very convincing job.”
- Even if she was dressed, she can be very unconvincing too! XD

Great that Lin/Jun is finally taking the first step out...I just so wanted to pull Lin into a tight hug...

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Re: Black and Blue (Chapter 17 1/27)
« Reply #281 on: February 07, 2010, 06:17:18 PM »
*hijacks PA system in e mall* There is a missing author. She was last seen in the fic section of JPHIP. Please escort her to the information counter if you have seen her. Thank you for paying attention to this announcement. *e hamz gets thrown off by e real people working there*

whew, it's a good thing I managed to finish before I got hurled off XD come back rnd! I need you to cure my B&B addiction :(

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Re: Black and Blue (Chapter 17 1/27)
« Reply #282 on: February 08, 2010, 07:54:53 PM »
*crawls out from the cardboard box behind WalMart* I'm alright, just a little brain dead. Don't worry about me, I'll be back soon enough and I promise, I'll overload the forum when I get back.

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Re: Black and Blue (Chapter 17 1/27)
« Reply #283 on: February 09, 2010, 01:28:18 AM »
okay,I just finished read this fanfics til the last chapter in one whole day.. And OMG, I just love it  :lol:
Takagaki is just  :love:
and so Tanashige  :love:
sorry for my bad english, that's why I didn't comment much.. hehe  :P
but I just want to say that this is one of my favorite fanfic.. So please keep it up..  :bow:
And I have a request for you, can you make anything about Tanashige's relationship clear?
Coz I find it confusing.. Like Sayu didn't like to see Reina cry and pretend to just runaway from her..
Sorry, but I love that couple, (the fact that I love both, just look at my profil picture..  XD)
especially the fact that they're hating each other at the first time, and now they're care each other, that was just too sweet  :D
Can I see more about them in the next chapter?
Thank you by the way..

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Re: Black and Blue (Chapter 17 1/27)
« Reply #284 on: March 14, 2010, 01:07:32 AM »
YEY!!!FINALLY!!! RISA's AWAKE!!!!!!!! :bow: :bow: :bow:

and finally, JunLin made up..another YEY!!!

but.... Reina's really going to fight her family....let's see what happens....

Sorry for the short comment...But my time's running out..ahahahaha..need to go back to work..I'll just comment longer on the next chapter...so post it!XD

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Re: Black and Blue (Chapter 17 1/27)
« Reply #285 on: March 23, 2010, 04:15:43 AM »
Chapter 18: With, without

It was late in the afternoon when Jun quietly entered the manor, Lin cradled gently in her arms, asleep after their emotional cleansing earlier. The other occupants barely gave her a second glance as she passed them, as if walking through the halls with someone unconscious in your grasp was quite normal and in retrospect, Jun supposed it was.

As she quietly entered the room she shared with Aika, she paused, staring hard at the lump underneath the covers, trying to determine if the younger girl was awake. After watching for a long moment, Jun deduced that she wasn’t, and headed over to put Lin down in her bed. As she stood over hr own mattress, a brilliant idea came to her.

Instead of setting the hacker into her bed, she instead slid the girl in next to Aika, ensuring that they would have the other’s company while she was gone. Jun watched with an affectionate smile as they turned to snuggle into each other in their slumber, nodding in a satisfied manner, she left to go get some food.

The unlikely pair continued to sleep, only aware of a comforting warmth around them.


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When she woke, it was morning; Risa could tell by the bright sunlight streaming through the window. Squinting against the harsh rays, the gunner slowly let her eyes get used to the light. Suddenly, she realized what she was looking at and her eyes widened painfully.

The bedroom was quite large and mostly empty, the contents originally consisting of only basic furniture, and Ai had apparently decided to turn the most unused corner into her own personal gym. A large mat was set out and a mirror was propped up securely against the wall, the demo expert stood in front of this, studying herself critically as she danced.

Feeling her breath catch at the sight, Risa watched her hips twist and sway, the woman completely engrossed in her routine to the point where nothing existed except for her and her reflection. Risa hadn’t seen her do this since that one morning where they had run into Eri, so she was unprepared for the sheer power that her lover exuded as she moved to what must have been a particularly energetic beat.

Unable to tear her eyes away, Risa watched a single bead of sweat travel down Ai’s neck and disappear into the low collar of her shirt. The gunner imagined the little drop must have rolled between her lover’s breasts and felt the overwhelming urge to lick it off of her. She whimpered unintentionally, not catching the other’s attention through her earbuds. Finally, Ai spun around and froze when her own orbs landed on the darkened eyes of the gunner.

“Risa!” she called out loudly in surprise, unable to hear herself with the music going on. Hastily, Ai pulled the buds from her ears, “Risa.” she repeated much more softly, “How long have you been up?”

Instead of answering, the gunner just gestured for her lover to come closer, Ai complying instantly. As soon as she was within arms reach, Risa pulled herself close enough to latch her lips onto the older woman’s sweaty neck, sucking and biting gently on the sensitive skin. Becoming a little weak kneed at the attack, Ai climbed onto the bed a little, giving Risa more access to her throat.

The gunner began to kiss a trail downwards, following the path of that wayward sweat drop she’d been watching earlier. With a moan, the demo expert crawled ever closer, now straddling her lover and feeling the other’s arms wrap around her tightly. Ai cupped the back of Risa’s head, unconsciously swaying her hips and brushing her pelvis up against her lover’s chest. Reaching a hand between them, the gunner slipped it underneath Ai’s shirt to lightly scratch her belly, eliciting a choking gasp of pleasure.

As her hand moved south, though, the demo expert grabbed it with a frustrated groan, “Mmmnnnoo! Don’t, I told you I wanted to wait.” They pulled back from each other, panting breathlessly, “Don’t make this harder on me than it already is.” Ai pleaded.

“It’s your fault, you know.” The gunner growled out in a deep, husky tone that sent shivers and promises through the older girl, “Waking up to that, how was I supposed to control myself now that I know what that ass feels like in my hands or what those thighs feel like around my head?” To emphasize her point, Risa reached forward and squeezed the tempting butt lightly, making Ai gasp.

“Risa, don’t.” Her protest weakened, “You’re not strong enough yet.” The gunner sighed slightly, pausing her ministrations, “Just wait two weeks, okay? Two weeks.”

Reluctantly, Risa nodded, “Alright. You’re right.” her hands settled on those tempting hips and Ai relaxed, sliding down to cuddle against her lover.

“You really surprised me.” The demo expert murmured once their hearts stopped racing, “I wasn’t expecting to be assaulted so early in the morning.”

“We haven’t been lovers that long.” The gunner noted, “We really don’t know much about the other in that aspect and all I know is that you turn me on so badly. Ai, do you really even understand how sexy you are?” The older woman quickly denied the accusation, causing Risa to laugh, “You are sexy. You have perfect curves on your small frame, your skin is healthy and radiant without make-up, you’re toned and fit and your muscles are tight and…” The gunner swallowed hard to prevent herself from drooling, “Uh, well, lot’s more, but if I keep talking then I won’t be able to stop myself. It’s already going to be a hard couple of weeks.”

“Let’s talk about something else, then.” Ai suggested as she began to rise from her comfortable position, “How about a shower?”

“A cold one, yeah.” Risa said, squeaking when she was effortlessly lifted out of bed. She couldn’t help blushing at how dashing her lover looked, carrying her to the shower.


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Aika opened her eyes slowly, an unfamiliar feeling causing her to rise to address it. There was a small, warm body wrapped around her torso tightly, shivering in the throes of a nightmare. Looking down at Lin Lin’s messy hair, the thief became confused, wondering how the girl came to share her bed.

Glancing over to the other bed in the room, she saw a Jun Jun shaped lump under the blankets. That didn’t give her any more clues, but her attention was taken again by the older girl clinging to her side. She mumbled some fast Chinese and her body shook in her terror. Unable to just ignore her, Aika pulled Lin closer.

“Shh, I’m here, I’m here.” She uttered the familiar phrase that often calmed her down and felt her soothing words take effect. Lin’s tense muscles relaxed and she snuggled against the thief comfortingly.

Looking back up, Aika met Jun’s unreadable gaze, though she was surprised, she held it unflinchingly. What must she be thinking? After a few moments, the hitter ended their little contest by closing her eyes and going back to sleep. Aika shrugged and did the same, welcoming Lin’s warmth.


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Blinking slowly, Reina opened her eyes, fighting against the urge to succumb to the heat of her quilt. The reason she did this, is that she realized that for once, she was awakening in the arms of the person she fell asleep with, instead of being dog piled on by the lawless girls or just waking up alone. It was pretty rare that this happened and the first time she had been interrupted by Eri. Now she could see all that she had missed.

Stifling her giggles, she examined the unflattering expression on the con’s face, mouth hanging open, drool threatening to drip from the side of her lips, eyes half open and rolled up in her head. It was totally uncute, though the way she slept unabashedly was quite charming in itself and Reina found herself drawn in.

She wasn’t sure how long she watched the older girl sleep, blissfully unaware of her scrutiny, but eventually Sayu stirred, her face righting itself with an audible snap when her jaws came together. The first thing her eyes landed on when they opened was the cop’s amused expression.

“What?” she grumbled, eliciting laughter, “What?!”

“Not gonna tell you~.” Reina sing-songed, rolling out of bed. Feeling her playfulness was contagious, Sayu quickly sprung up and made a grab for her. Giggling, the yankii dodged out of the way and the con gave chase. They scampered around the room for a while, Reina managing to just keep out of Sayumi’s grasp, until the cop climbed up onto the bed and Sayu made a dive at her.

They collapsed in a tangle of limbs and laughter, the con on top with her fingers attempting to tickle her captive into submission. Reina was unmoved by the attack and sent her own digits digging into Sayumi’s sides, sending the girl squirming away. Tables turned, the yankii straddled the older girl, mercilessly keeping up her assault.

“Okay, haha, okay! I give! Haha, uncle, uncle!” Sayu cried, trying ineffectually to block those searching fingers.

“Reina’s not your uncle! Say, ‘Reina’s the world’s greatest cop!’” The younger demanded, increasing her attack.

“Reina’s the world’s greatest cop!” The con replied helplessly giggling.

“Now say, ‘Reina is definitely cuter than me.’” Reina shifted her weight backwards a little to give herself more expanse of tender tummy to work with.

“No way!” Sayu protested, only to gasp when those digits flew across her sensitive flesh.

“Say it!” The cop commanded.

“Reina has smaller breasts than me!” Sayu called out instead, eliciting a growl and harder tickling.

“What?! How dare you!” The cop said, but she was grinning.

“Stop, I have to pee!” The con appealed, but her captor was having none of it.

“You know what you have to do to get Reina to let go.” She teased, smiling a superior smile. Suddenly, Sayumi grabbed both of her wrists and twisted her body hard, sending the cop tumbling to the side. Before she knew what had happened, the older girl was sitting comfortably on her hips, holding her hands trapped above her head in a firm grip.

“Now, you say, ‘Sayumi is the world’s cutest.’” The con demanded mockingly.

“No way, I’m not ticklish, you can’t do anything to me.” For a moment, Reina thought she had won, but then a sly grin spread across Sayu’s face.

“Say it, or else.” she said devilishly and the cop felt a shiver run through her at the tone.

“Or else, what?” Reina swallowed hard when those evilly smiling lips moved closer to her own.

“’Or else,’ this.” Without further ado, Sayumi sealed their mouths together in a chaste kiss that quickly grew more heated when her tongue peaked out to run across Reina’s lips. Moaning quietly, the cop opened her mouth and let the intruder enter, caressing it with her own tongue.

With the kiss, both girls felt as if a weight had been lifted off of their shoulders, all of the unresolved tension finally getting an outlet. While their tongues battled, they weren’t a cop and a con, they weren’t on opposite sides of the law, they were just two young women with an attraction to each other. Reina moaned appreciatively when a hand stroked her side, her own still held above her head.

That hand played with the hem of her shirt for a moment before it slipped inside just an inch and scratched lightly at the warm stomach. Gasping into the kiss, the yankii arched into the touch, unintentionally breaking the kiss. She opened her hazy eyes and stared lustfully into black orbs, realizing belated what they had just done. She knew the moment it registered with the older girl because she saw the tender expression disappear and turn into something unreadable.

Without a word, Sayumi got off of her and headed into the bathroom and Reina sat up to watch her. When the door shut with a quiet click, the cop allowed her head to fall into her hands.

‘What have I done?’


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“Push against my hand as hard as you can. Don’t let me move your leg.” The therapist instructed to Risa as she lay on her back on a mat on the floor. Grunting with the effort, the gunner complied, hardly able to do as she was asked. The therapist seemed pleased, though, and smiled at her, “Good, I can already see an improvement with our therapy today. I’ll come back at the same time tomorrow for more.” With that, she packed up her things and left Risa in her lover’s care.

As soon as the door closed, the gunner burst into tears. She couldn’t help it, to have worked so hard with so little to show for it was frustrating. Even if she hadn’t been so tired by her exertions, she probably would have cried. The comforting warmth of Ai’s arms around her slowed her sobs to sniffling hiccups soon enough.

“Shhh, it’s okay. You did good, I’m so proud of you.” A kiss was placed gently on her lips and Risa was picked up smoothly. In such a soothing embrace, the gunner found herself dozing, vaguely aware of being washed and barely being able to help with fresh clothes being put on her.

Finally coming back to a half aware state, Risa began to mumble deliriously, “I love you, Ai. You’re too good for someone like me. I love you so much. I’m sorry that I’m a bad person.”

“Don’t say that, you’re not a bad person. There’s no way I’d fall in love with a bad person.” Lovingly, Ai tucked the gunner into bed, crawling in next to her. Risa was asleep before she realized it.


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Eri walked into the precinct for the second time in as many days, feeling a nervous sort of tension filling her body. “Oh, Kamei-chan!” She was immediately greeted by the many officers at their desks and she smiled back sweetly. Eri was quite well known, even though it wasn’t her precinct, and liked here, mainly for her cheerful demeanor and her one hit knock-out punch. She gave a pleasant smile to the only grumbling man in the room as she passed, heading to the back office.

She was here today to give a full report of her mission to the chief of police himself, so she was understandably unsettled. No one really wanted to have a chat with their boss, much less their boss’s, boss’s, boss. Opening the door to the outer office, she was greeted energetically by the small secretary.

“Kame-chan!” Exclaimed the woman who’s nameplate read ‘Yaguchi.’ “Back again so soon?”

“Yes, Yaguchi-san, I needed to give my report directly to the Chief.” Eri explained softly. If there was one person that intimidated her more then the head of the city’s defense, it was his secretary.

“Well go in!” the petite woman commanded firmly, fairly glaring at the younger woman behind her thick framed lenses, “He’s waiting for you!”

With a timid nod, the cop scurried through the door to the inner office, nearly colliding with the large desk at it’s epicenter. She looked up into the unreadable expression of Keichi Sawajiri, chief of police. “I’m here to report my mission status, sir.” Eri saluted and held the pose.

“Relax,” he said gruffly, “Sit.” The discussion was long and detailed. The chief wracked her brain for everything that had been happening and everything that could happen. Eri almost had no choice but to be honest with him and he seemed quite displeased at the antics the lawless girls had been up to. “You were supposed to keep them in line, not encourage them to wreak havoc.”

“They work well like this, though. They get the job done. If I try to suppress them, they could turn on me. None of them really have moral qualms about killing someone who gets in their way, even if I think they have befriended me.” Eri replied shakily. If he wasn’t appeased, the girls could go right back to jail.

“Fine, but try to keep the collateral down to a minimum.” After a long moment of silence, the Chief finally conceded and Eri let out a sigh of relief. A huge smile spread across his face in the next second, “So tell me, daughter, have you been keeping up with going to church? Strengthening your body?”

“Yes, father.” Eri sighed good naturedly, “I can honestly say I’ve never had a better work out than with these girls.” Now that the meeting was over, the cop felt the tension drain from her body. Her father was strict when he was at work and expected no less from her than anyone else. In fact, because of their relation, he pushed her harder than the others.

“How is your partner working out for you? Are you getting along? Do you have any complaints.” Keichi asked seriously.

“We’re fine, Reina-chan’s a good person.” The girl replied.

“I know she’s kind of green, so if she gives you any trouble, you come tell me. I’ve heard she has quite the attitude.” He leaned forward and Eri laughed at him.

“No, really, she’s a good partner and a good cop. She compliments me well, father. She always does the right thing, so you don’t have to worry.”

“Alright, I just wanted to make sure. Now, you better get going, no telling what those criminals are doing in your absence.” With a long suffering sigh, Eri rose and gave her father a hug. She was quite glad to be getting out of there. As she passed by Yaguchi’s desk, the older woman stopped her.

“By careful out there, Turtle-chan, you never know who your enemies are until it’s too late.” She warned and Eri shivered at the tone of her voice.



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Reina glanced nervously at Sayu, by her side as they walked back from their very uncomfortable dinner. After they had calmed down, Sayumi had awkwardly suggested they go get something to eat at a diner not too far from the hotel. It was quite possibly the most uncomfortable dinner she’d ever had, at that included the one with her family after she’d come out of the closet when she was fifteen.

‘That had been like hell,’ she remembered with a roll of her eyes, ‘but at least I wasn’t in l-.’ stopping her thoughts with a veritable screech, Reina felt her orbs widen, not noticing the strange look she was receiving from her companion, ‘In what? What do I feel for her, lust? Like? L-l-love?’ it pained her to even think that last word.

Shaking her head, Reina tried to take her mind off the memory of that kiss, of how soft the con’s lips were and the taste of her fruit flavored lip gloss, and how her tongue had slid tentatively against her own lips as if toying with the idea of slipping inside her mouth. She also couldn’t help but recall the incredibly tender expression that had been on Sayu’s face.

Sneaking another glance at the con, Reina met her dark orbs and both blushed, looking away. Then the yankii mentally face palmed, what was she, a teenager? This wasn’t her first crush or whatever this was. She looked at the con again, this time holding her gaze, if she wanted to look, she would look. And if she wanted to kiss her, she would. And if she wanted to hold her hand, well. Reina looked down at the girl’s appendage, feeling her heart beating faster, she reached out and gently took it in her own. She would hold her hand.

Satisfied with herself, Reina turned her attention to her surroundings, observing the empty street. It was quite cold lately, the Tokyo skies threatening snow, and as such, most people were wise enough to stay inside or take other forms of transportation than walking. Feeling how cold her hands were, Sayumi slipped their intertwined appendages into her pocket, sharing the warmth that was seeping out from her body.

Reina gave her a grateful smile and when she turned back around, her eyes landed on a familiar sedan driving slowly around the corner. For a second, she couldn’t put her finger on where she had seen it before, but when the windows rolled down and she saw her brothers inside, she remembered. Before it even registered in her mind that they were training automatic weapons on them, Reina was tackling Sayumi to the ground behind some mailboxes and newspaper stands.

Gunfire echoed on the empty street and Reina covered her head as paper exploded around them. She heard Sayumi let out a shriek and curl into her tightly, the thunk of rounds impacting metal reverberating against her back. Suddenly, the noise stopped and all the cop heard was the roar of an engine as the sedan took off down the street.

When she could no longer hear the car, Reina finally deemed it safe to stick her head out of cover. The street was empty and calm once again.

“My ear! My face!” Sayu cried indignantly and Reina turned to see her clutching the left side of her head, blood seeping through her fingers.

“Let me see.” The cop demanded and the con reluctantly moved her hands. One lucky bullet had skipped off her cheek, leaving a long gash horizontally along her face and taking a chunk out of her ear. Both wounds bled sluggishly and Reina tore a piece of fabric off her shirt to press against them.

“My face! I can’t believe them! Look at what they did to my cute face!” Sayu cried, truly angry about the damage. She didn’t seem to even care that a few inches to right would have given her nothing to complain about, because she would have been dead.

To halt the on coming rant, Reina sealed their lips together, stopping the con mid sentence. She felt the older girl melt into her and pulled away, sure of her attention, “I still think you’re beautiful.”



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Re: Black and Blue (Chapter 17 1/27)
« Reply #286 on: March 23, 2010, 04:17:04 AM »
Chapter 19: And who'll deny it's what the fighting's all about





Sitting on the lounger in the sitting room that connected to her new bedroom, Risa was idly flipping through tv channels, bored out of her mind. She still had about four hours left until her therapist got here and Ai was off somewhere doing paperwork that was apparently, “Too stressful for you to handle right now, Risa.” And so, the gunner had been dragged back to the sitting room to rot her mind with daytime soaps.

She hated soaps….

“Please,” she begged, watching the predictable drama unfold, “let something interesting happen.” As if on cue, the door to the hallway burst open and in came Sayumi, Reina, Ai and Captain, the con clutching her bleeding face and the cop favoring her right arm. Blinking placidly as they scrambled with a couple of first aid kits, Risa turned to the ceiling and glared upwards, “Smartass.”

Watching in silence, the gunner observed as first aid was applied that there was a tension running through the wounded pair. Reina was trying to catch the con’s attention, while Sayumi was steadfastly ignoring her. This was backwards, when had they switched roles?

“So, did you guys have fun?” Risa asked nonchalantly, gaining three glares. The con immediately launched into a rant about her wounded face and Reina turned to calmly explain.

“My brothers attacked us, a drive-by. We got lucky.” she patted her arm lightly, “I only jammed my shoulder when we fell and Sayu just has a scratch.”

“’Just a scratch!’ This is not ‘just a scratch,’ Reina! My face is going to scar!” The con screeched indignantly.

“If it had been anymore to the right, you wouldn’t have a face!” the cop screamed back, making everyone else jump with the hysterical edge to her voice. She breathed in like she wanted to say something else, but held herself back at the last minute, reaching out towards Sayumi to gently brush against her undamaged cheek.

The con jerked away from her, a fearful looking passing fleetingly across her features. She stood up, still eyeing Reina unsurely, and left the room. The cop wasted no time in following after her hastily. The room fell into a contemplative silence as the remaining occupants regarded each other.

“Is it just me or is something finally going on between those two?” Risa asked her lover curiously.

“No, I see it too. It looks like Sayu’s not very receptive to Reina’s advances. I wonder why, she was the one to first go after her, now that Reina’s showing interest, she runs away? Doesn’t make any sense.” Ai sat down next to her and Saki slowly packed up, pretending to be engrossed in her task, but really listening in on their gossip.

“I think it makes perfect sense. It was all fun and games at first, the way Sayumin always plays, but then her toy turned the game around on her. Now she’s being pursued and she’s losing control of herself because she really feels for Tanakacchi, something she’s not used to. She’s a con artist, an actress, she makes herself into whatever role she needs to be in, she doesn’t know how to be herself around someone and now with all these new feelings bombarding her, she’s confused. So she’ll run, it’s her nature.” Risa shrugged and Ai looked at her with a raised eyebrow.

“Where do you get all this incite from?” The gunner rolled her eyes.

“I’ve been watching this dramatic crap all day! Please get me out of here! I’ll do paperwork, anything!” the other two laughed and the serious air was broken, but still, her own words rung in her head.

‘I can’t believe you don’t see any similarities between our relationships. You were just the same as Sayumin when we were growing up.’

”Ai-chan! Talk to me!” Risa called, running after her friend down the darkening street. The sun had been setting behind the older girl as the two sat in their usual spot by the creek. The baby bean couldn’t help but to lean in and kiss her, Ai looking as angelic as she was. At first, her affections were reciprocated, but then, she ran. “We live in the same house! I know where you’re going!”

They’d been running for at least six blocks and the younger girl couldn’t keep up this pace for much longer. Finally, just when Risa thought she’d collapse from exhaustion, did Ai slow down, only half as winded as her counterpart, which annoyed the future gunner to no end.

Sucking in much needed oxygen greedily, lungs burning painfully in her tightening chest, Risa grabbed onto the older girl’s wrist, just in case she decided to take off again. “It’s not right, Risa-chan!” Ai finally spoke, her voice lilting frantically as her accent emerged amidst her panic, “We’re both girls and even if we weren’t, you’re too young for me!”

“I’ll be fourteen next month, Ai! That’s only a two year difference. And so what if we’re girls!? I like you for who you are, not what gender you are!” Regardless, her words didn’t seem to help and Ai shook off her grip, taking off at a run down the street again. This time, Risa didn’t give chase, her legs giving way underneath her, the image of her friend running into the darkness etched in her mind.

There was only one place she could go now and so she headed to where her brother had been killed. Ai hadn’t allowed her to come back here since it had happened, for which she was grateful, because the only thing that awaited her were painful memories. The front door was locked, but the sliding glass door in the back still had no glass, so she easily slipped inside.

Everything was just as she remembered it, only covered in a thick layer of dust. All of the hidden stashes were untouched, their owners all dead and rumors about the house being haunted keeping locals away. She headed up to Ai’s former room, grabbing a few blankets and dragging them downstairs with her. She decided to just sleep outside tonight, the furniture too dusty for her to stay on comfortably. On the way outside, she raided one of the stashes and brought out with her an American military issued Colt .45 that some lucky Blue had traded for at one time.

She crouched next to a large rock out in the backyard, chuckling mirthlessly when she realized that it reminded her of a headstone. From her position, she had a perfect view of the spot on the grass where her brother had lain before the coroner had taken the bodies away. Getting an idea, she pulled out her ever present knife and began to carve a name in the rock. When she was satisfied, she curled around the headstone and fell asleep.

The next morning, a twig snapping under a person’s foot sent her flying into awareness and Risa sat up, whipping the pistol to point towards the sound. The barrel pointed squarely at a surprised Ai. They stared at each other for a long moment before the older girl spoke, “My mom wants you to come home.”

“What about you?” Risa countered, “Do you want me home?” Her response was Ai turning her nose up and the baby bean turned angry, “Then go away, I’m fine here.”

“Come on, I’m not leaving without you.” The older said, reached forward to try and haul Risa to her feet. The other girl struggled violently against her grip and they grappled for a moment, neither gaining ground until Risa lunged towards Ai, pressing their lips together again. Her heart soared when she wasn’t immediately rejected, but then, the older girl shoved her away, sending her tripping backwards to the ground.

She landed on her butt, hands instinctively reaching out behind her to catch herself and Risa felt a sharp pain in her wrist. Giving a cry, she grasped the injured appendage and heard a gasp, looking up into Ai’s shamed gaze. Before she could say another word, the girl was running away from her, again.


Shaking her head at the memory, Risa watched as, once again, Ai was moving away from her. With a sad smile, she looked down at her left hand; that time, it had been broken and it never healed quite right. “Hey, Captain, wanna see something?” she grinned childishly at the younger girl and pulled her left thumb back to touch her arm. She laughed when Saki made a disgusted face.


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“Sayu!” Reina called as she darted after the other girl, lunging forward to grip her arm, “You can’t just run away from me, we need to talk.”

Immediately, shaking off the grasp, the con spun around to glare at the cop, “There’s nothing to talk about, you’ve misunderstood. You’re just fun to play with, I’m not looking for anything serious.”

“Then let’s keep playing.” Reina declared, “You’re right, this is fun, I don’t want to stop.”

A hurt look flashed across Sayumi’s face before she could stop it and she took off down the hall again, the cop on her heels. “Go away. I said no!”

“Sayu!” Reina cried, not caring who was listening, “Please! Don’t turn away from me!” she managed to grab the older girl’s arm again, but the con turned swiftly and the sound of skin hitting skin echoed in the hallway.

Both girl’s looked surprised by the slap, Sayu clasping a hand over her mouth and Reina’s eyes widening, head staying turned to the side. Slowly, the stunned yankii looked back at the con and gave her a hurt look. Once again, Sayumi ran down the hallway, this time, leaving Reina behind.


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“All right, if you wanna hang out with us, you can’t be such a nerd.” Aika declared as she paced in front of a wide eyed Lin. The hacker was dressed in old camouflage army greens that were about two sizes too big and swallowed her adorably. Branches were weaved in her hair and olive colored face paint was smeared under her eyes.

“I’m not a nerd!” the older girl protested, gaining looks from the thief and Jun, “I’m not!”

“Look at you, you’re so pale I bet you could float through a wall if you tried hard enough and I could knock you over with one hit if I wanted.” Aika continued, “So we’ve decided to teach you to be like us, starting with a bit of stealth.”

“Uh, is that why we’re here?” Lin questioned, gesturing around the park from her place sitting on the fountain, gaining odd looks from passersby.

“Yes. It’s very simple, you have the entire park to hide in, the point of the exercise is to make it back here undetected by either Jun or I. She will stay here to patrol the perimeter of the fountain and I’ll be out looking for you. If I find you or Jun catches you, you have to start over again.” Aika explained to the now confused hacker.

“Wait, so it’s like hide and go seek?” She immediately received two less than amused looks.

“No,” Aika drawled out like she was talking to a particularly slow child, “It’s not like hide and go seek, it’s like we find you and we kill you.” Lin gulped at the way Jun cracked her knuckles, “So try to do well, alright? Now, go.”

The hacker took one more shifty look at her companions, then darted off into the bush. After they were sure she was out of ear shot, Jun and Aika began to laugh, “This is a little mean of us, don’t you think?”

“Eh, best way to learn is to think you’re in danger. Nothing motivates like self preservation.” the thief replied and the two laughed again.


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“I will not take no for an answer, Mr. Jones.” Ai said coolly, “It’s my way or the highway.” Saki sat in the darkened corner, looking as creepy as possible, short hair shading her face and cleaning her nails with a dangerous looking knife.

The normally unflappable man swallowed hard, Ai had spent the last twenty minutes slowly whittling away at his resolve with unflinching demands that bordered on stubborn. “Well, perhaps we can work out a deal, then.”

Almost instantly, her pretty face changed from nearly scowling to a beatific smile, “Well, now, that’s what I want to hear. So, you’ll accept my offer?” The man just nodded, unsure of what was the façade and what was real, “Good, isn’t that great Captain?” she addressed Saki, who also transformed from menacing bodyguard to excited teenager. “Well, then, it’s settled. Have a nice day!” And she marched out the door like she owned the place.

As soon as she settled into the car, though, Ai slumped forward, “You okay?” Saki questioned to her tired visage.

“Does this ever get any easier?” The overwhelmed young woman asked as she mentally crossed another name off her list.

“No and if it does, then you should start to worry. Once you get used to intimidating people, then you stop caring. I really don’t want to see that happen to you, Takahashi-dono.” The younger girl said solemnly.

“No, no, no, there will be no Takahashi-dono or even Takahashi-san for you. Just call me Ai-chan.” The demo expert waved her arms around and Saki looked at her askance.

“You’re my boss now.” She said flatly.

“Yes, but you’ve been too big a help for such formalities. I think we’re friends now, don’t you? Besides, Risa’s your boss. I’m just you’re boss’s, erm.” She blushed a little, thinking about her relation to Risa.

“Concubine? Mistress? Lover~?” Saki teased with a grin and Ai glared at her good naturedly.

“Sub-leader.” She finished pointedly and the younger girl laughed heartily at her. Ai smiled, feeling her mood lifting slightly.

“Well, I know my ‘sub-leader’ would never do that with me if I had one!” Saki just laughed harder at the demo expert’s pout.

“Aw, come on. I know I said we were friends, but I didn’t mean you could pick on me freely.” Whined Ai, crossing her arms.

“It’s just too easy, though.” The young thug replied with a grin. “And you are so cute when you pout, like a little girl.” The last comment sent red flaming up Ai’s face in embarrassment. “Haha, see?”

She pouted for a few more seconds before bursting into laughter. After she had calmed down, Ai smiled and patted Saki on the head, “Thanks.”

“No problem.” Now Ai felt ready for her next appointment.


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Risa sighed, wiping sweat away after another grueling therapy session. Her body ached from the strain she’d been put through, but she was already showing progress. It was as if her body was slowly remembering things it had forgotten, like reviewing notes after not learning about the subject in school for a while. Still, she felt tears stinging her eyes and flopped backwards on the bed.

Ai wasn’t here to coddle her now and Risa couldn’t help but feel depressed. How could she not, lying with nearly useless legs, unable to care for herself. The only thing she felt like doing was curling up in a ball and crying until her lover got back. A knock on the door distracted her from her misery, she hurriedly wiped her face and called the visitor to come in.

Eri poked her head inside cautiously, lighting up in a cheerful smile when her eyes landed on the gunner, “Gaki-san~!” she called out, her happy tone making Risa smile despite herself.

“Kame.” She said back in greeting as the girl sat next to her on the bed.

“I’m sorry I haven’t been to see you since you’ve been up, I’ve been a little caught up in red tape.” Eri absently reached towards her friend to fix her mussed hair and pat her cheeks and forehead with the towel wrapped around the gunner’s neck, “You look like you could use a shower, need some help?” Before Risa could say either way, Eri had scooped her up and carried her towards the bathroom.

Giving the same aged girl a suspicious look, Risa glared at her, “Did Ai put you up to this?”

Genuinely confused, Eri shook her head, eyebrows knitting together, “No, I haven’t spoken to Ai-chan since yesterday.”

The response made the gunner’s expression soften and she allowed Eri to help her undress. It was always a little awkward to bathe with someone for the first time, but the cop ignored the atmosphere and began to hum, unaware of scrutinizing eyes on her face. Soon the two were reclined on opposite sides of the tub and waiting for the warm water to fill up.

Having relaxed since having the fruits of her labors washed away Risa felt a drowsiness slip over her and tears well up in her eyes. It was like this all the time, now, having to exert so much effort to do the simplest things left her feeling so drained that she just couldn’t help but begin to cry. Her sniffles filled the room, gaining Eri’s instant, surprised attention and the girl’s eyes snapped open from their resting position to see the gunner with her face buried in her hands.

Immediately, Eri moved over next to her and wrapped her arms around shaking shoulders, “Shh, Gaki-san, it’s okay.”

“I’m sorry, I feel like a baby. I’ve been doing nothing but crying and feeling sorry for myself, I’ll never get better if this is all I can do.” Despite her words, she clung desperately to the same aged girl, burying her face in Eri’s neck and taking in her comforting warmth.

“It’s okay, Gaki-san.” The cop said helpfully, “It’s natural to feel like this, you’re so independent and to feel helpless, you’re stronger than I am for dealing with this like you are.”

“Really?” Risa whimpered and Eri nodded firmly, smiling at her pouting face, “Eri, you’re a good friend.”

For just a second, the smile faded from the cop’s face, before coming back at only half power, “No, Risa, you’re the good friend.”


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“Okay guys.” Risa said, sitting comfortably at the head of a large meeting table in an official looking room somewhere in the manor. Everyone was sitting in states of attentiveness in plush chairs, “Now, we were going to take out the Tanaka’s anyway, but this preemptive attack is as annoying as it is admirable. I say we don’t take this sitting down.” Sayu opened her lips to say something, but immediately found her mouth covered by two sets of hands, courtesy of Reina and Eri on either side of her.

“We’ll hit them where they think they’re safest at a time when they least expect it.” Ai picked up, tossing a folder on the table, “The club.”

“Wait, the club?” Reina said, retracting her hand in shock, “But what about collateral damage?”

Ai and Risa exchanged a look, before the gunner piped back in, “Try not to shoot anyone.”

“I’m not comfortable with that kind of advice.” The yankii glared, backed up by her nodding partner. “Think of another plan.”

“Look, here Tanakachii,” Risa said firmly, “Unless you can come up with a better place that they completely have their guard down and are more than likely drunk and distracted, you speak up with that helpful little bit. Until then, we do it my way. Just check your fire and shut up.”

The two had a stare down for a long moment, the atmosphere tense around them. Finally, Reina rolled her eyes and sat back in her chair, turning her head away in concession, “Whatever.”

“Okay, now that that’s settled, Ai, you’re in charge of this one.” The older girl looked surprised, “I mean, I’m not going anywhere yet, and you are technically leader, so…” Risa shrugged innocently, “You set it up, you figure it out.” She’d known Ai long enough to see the panic begin to set into her face, “I’ll be here if you need any help from the sidelines.” she finished quietly and that seemed to make her girl feel better.

“Aika,” Ai said in a no nonsense tone, “Do you still have contacts inside the Tanaka gang?” The girl nodded, wide eyed, “Good, find out when they’re going to the club next. Jun Jun, Lin Lin!” The Chinese girls straightened up at their names, “I want to know everything about the layout of the club. Blueprints, pictures, recordings, whatever you can find. I want to know where every booth, chair, table, pole and exit is, the whole layout.”

“Risa!” Ai turned to her lover, who had been watching her with a dreamy expression that quickly cleared when she realized she was being addressed, “Does your little box of goodies included enough assault weapons for all of us?”

“Not for all of us, but I know where to get more.” The gunner responded, voice a little husky. Ai gave her a long look before turning back to business.

“Eri, Reina.” Both saluted on habit, “Your job is to get Risa’s weapons from wherever they are.”

“Yes ma’m!” They chorused, dropping their salutes.

“You have your orders, get to it!” Ai commanded and they group scattered quickly out of the room. As soon as they were gone, the demo expert slumped slightly and turned to her lover again, who was still watching her with that expression, “So, what do you think?”

Risa immediately pulled Ai down into her lap, kissing her soundly on the lips, “It turns me on when you take charge.” She grinned after they’d broken apart, eliciting laughter from her girl.


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“Okay, so even though we didn’t kill sis and that pretty girl, I’d say we didn’t exactly waste the day,” Akio said from the head of the desk, folding his hands behind his head with a smirk.

“You know she’ll be angry.” Baku, the second oldest son, commented, pausing in his bored inspection of his fingers to raise an eyebrow at his brother.

“Let her be mad.” Daisuke, the fourth son, sneered, the scar that ran down his face making him look wolfish, “She can’t do anything to stop us.”

Estuo, the fifth son, adjusted his glasses, his slicked back hair giving him an aristocratic feel. “I don’t think we should underestimate these girls. I mean, they did take out Takashi, they have to be worth something.”

Chion, the third son and by far the most cruel and calculating of them, examined the occupants of the room. The six brothers were there at their regular places, farther down the line was Toshio, the hulking eighth lieutenant, more brawn than brains. Near the head of the table was Erino, observing quietly, and next to her was her daughter. “What do you think, Maimi?” Chion asked lowly, gaining the room’s attention. Chion rarely spoke and when he did, you had better listen.

“Me?” Maimi asked uncomfortably, the thought of fighting against former friends not sitting well with her at all.

“You should tell us your input if you have any, after all, you’ll be one of us someday soon. Isn’t that why you came to this meeting? To learn how we do things at the top?” Chion expressed emotionlessly, his eerie tone sending shivers down her spine.

“I think Estuo’s right in that we shouldn’t underestimate them.” The girl said slowly, trying to gauge Chion’s reaction. The man was known to snap if something didn’t please him.

Smirking slowly, the third oldest brother leaned across the table, “You must have valuable insight on them, after all, you grew up with Aika and Reina and we all know about you and Saki-tan.” he mocked the name, sending Maimi bristling.

“I don’t think I have anymore insight into Reina-nee-san than any of you and maybe my mother knows Aika better than I.” She countered, eliciting snickers from the other men at the table, but even that didn’t make Chion’s smirk drop.

“And Captain?” He pushed, watching her bristle again.

“Is my problem.” she didn’t miss a beat, leaning back in her chair and crossing her arms with a finality. Her defiance seemed to amuse Chion and he settled back into silence.

“Well, for now, let’s forget it!” Baku exclaimed, “Let’s go out and celebrate!” His statement was met with cheers.


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 As a super apology for my epic lateness and the shortness of each chapter I shall now commit cybercide *turns and cuts down tiny representation of myself* Good bye little friend, you will be missed.

Bring in the clone! *an identical representation scampers into the room*

Oh, and I'll also blow up the forum, figuratively speaking.

Enjoy!
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Re: Black and Blue (Chapter 18&19 3/22)
« Reply #287 on: March 23, 2010, 04:28:44 AM »
I love the tickling contest XD
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Re: Black and Blue (Chapter 18&19 3/22)
« Reply #288 on: March 23, 2010, 03:56:12 PM »
>.> I've been lurking for a while. Well actually...since the story started.  Sorry about that! ^^; I'll try to leave a comment again sometime. I figured I would reply now at least. I'm glad to see two new chapters! ^_^ It's been a while since this fic was updated, but that's fine because I know that sometimes writing isn't easy and well many people are busy or get suddenly busy. Even if these chapters may be short to you I still enjoyed them both.  :D I wonder what will happen later on in the story after I've read these chapters. They both interesting though.

For some reason in the first chapter I got the feeling that JunJun likes LinLin? Or maybe She likes LinLin and Aika? Well crap...a love triangle then? I just hope nothing bad happens!

Reina and Sayu's situation though, that's interesting. I look forward to their scenes all the time! Besides the scenes with Ai and Risa that is. I wonder if Sayu will just go with Reina because she knows she loves her. Will they end up together? I'm cheering for TanaShige! ^_^

I think it's cute how Ai takes care of Risa while Risa tries to get better. I feel bad for Risa though. She's bored out of her mind mostly and well she also feels helpless. I hope she can get better soon to get back into the action and well...get busy with Ai again. *coughs* If you get what I mean. >.>

My main concernt now, I just hope the mission everyone is one goes more smoothly than their last one and no one ends up bedridden for a while like Risa. Or it could be worse! I can't wait until the next chapter. ^_^

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Re: Black and Blue (Chapter 18&19 3/22)
« Reply #289 on: March 23, 2010, 07:40:37 PM »
Yay! You've updated.  :cow:
You're forgiven for the lateness. Those 2 chapters were so worth the wait. (As well as that perv.)
I'll comment later, on both chapters and *cough*TanaGaki perv*cough*

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Re: Black and Blue (Chapter 18&19 3/22)
« Reply #290 on: March 23, 2010, 10:18:49 PM »
yay~ welcome back~!!*glomps you* X3 i'm happy that you've finaly returned and thank you for 2 chappies~!!!!! X3 if anything i'll message u~ X3
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Re: Black and Blue (Chapter 18&19 3/22)
« Reply #291 on: March 24, 2010, 06:49:16 PM »
Updates! Oh sweet updates!  :bow:

But these two awesome chapters have brought up so many questions. Like is there some bigger reason for Sayu's reaction to Reina starting to reciprocate her attentions, other than soap opera drama (lol)? Saki and Maimi have some sort of history? WHAT IS THIS HISTORY? O.O I must know! Why was Eri acting sort of strange with Risa and making that you're the good friend remark? :O

Despite all the questions though, major epic win for throwing in TanaShige, lots of TakaGaki moments, CAPTAIN♥ and Risa's little moment where she looks up at the ceiling and hates on the powers that be for listening to her and making something happen. XD

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Saki needs a subleader to prove her wrong now!  *cough*

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Re: Black and Blue (Chapter 18&19 3/22)
« Reply #292 on: March 26, 2010, 03:06:03 PM »
YOU'RE BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

There.  :D


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A large mat was set out and a mirror was propped up securely against the wall, the demo expert stood in front of this, studying herself critically as she danced
:wriggly:

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Risa hadn’t seen her do this since that one morning where they had run into Eri, so she was unprepared for the sheer power that her lover exuded as she moved to what must have been a particularly energetic beat.
Hmmm

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The gunner imagined the little drop must have rolled between her lover’s breasts and felt the overwhelming urge to lick it off of her.
OMG  :drool:

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Finally, Ai spun around and froze when her own orbs landed on the darkened eyes of the gunner.
I bet it's darker than the moonless night  :D

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Risa pulled herself close enough to latch her lips onto the older woman’s sweaty neck, sucking and biting gently on the sensitive skin.
Must be salty  :grin:

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“Just wait two weeks, okay? Two weeks.”
How about one week  :grin:

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“Reina has smaller breasts than me!”
:lol:  Good one Sayu  :lol:

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“Say it, or else.”
:twisted:

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“I love you, Ai. You’re too good for someone like me. I love you so much. I’m sorry that I’m a bad person.”

“Don’t say that, you’re not a bad person. There’s no way I’d fall in love with a bad person.” Lovingly, Ai tucked the gunner into bed, crawling in next to her. Risa was asleep before she realized it.
:wub:

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Sneaking another glance at the con, Reina met her dark orbs and both blushed, looking away.
Shy already  XD

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Before it even registered in her mind that they were training automatic weapons on them
:mon freeze:  but they're siblings   :scared:

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To halt the on coming rant, Reina sealed their lips together, stopping the con mid sentence. She felt the older girl melt into her and pulled away, sure of her attention, “I still think you’re beautiful.”
Nice move  :D

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“So, did you guys have fun?” Risa asked nonchalantly, gaining three glares.
XD  XD  XD

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Saki slowly packed up, pretending to be engrossed in her task, but really listening in on their gossip.
lol


TakaGaki memory's giving me a heart ache  :(


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Both girl’s looked surprised by the slap, Sayu clasping a hand over her mouth and Reina’s eyes widening, head staying turned to the side.
Ouches

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“It’s not like hide and go seek, it’s like we find you and we kill you.” Lin gulped at the way Jun cracked her knuckles, “So try to do well, alright? Now, go.”
XD  XD  XD

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“It’s my way or the highway.”
Me likes  :rockon:

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Saki sat in the darkened corner, looking as creepy as possible, short hair shading her face and cleaning her nails with a dangerous looking knife.
Again  :rockon:


Yay! There's Maimi  :w00t:



Next chapterS please  :D






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Re: Black and Blue (Chapter 18&19 3/22)
« Reply #293 on: March 28, 2010, 07:48:49 AM »
I read this earlier but I didn't get to comment yet as it had been a crazy week. Even if I do say so myself ^^;

Chapter 18

Awwww, the cute AikaLin pair zzz-ing :)

Pervy Risa, staring at Ai dancing. It is a mesmerizing sight, although personally I find Eri is a more awesome sight to behold when it comes to dance :P *rans away*

See what I mean by pervy Risa? She's still wanting it when Ai specifically told her to wait XD

If Reina still finds Sayu cute after seeing how she sleeps, then it's certain she has fallen deeply in love with her :D

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“By careful out there, Turtle-chan, you never know who your enemies are until it’s too late.” She warned and Eri shivered at the tone of her voice.

Oh boy, I don't like the sound of this. Please don't make Eri die :cry:

Hmmm, Like, love and lust. They are only separated by a thin line.

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To halt the on coming rant, Reina sealed their lips together, stopping the con mid sentence. She felt the older girl melt into her and pulled away, sure of her attention, “I still think you’re beautiful.”

Woah Reina, smooth one. That sure beats any antiseptic solution/anesthesia. And it's definitely the best way to shut someone up. Someone you like that it *wink*

Chapter 19

I can't help thinking about Risa's memory of Ai running away from her and why you decided to include it. Is it a foreshadowing of something to come?

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For just a second, the smile faded from the cop’s face, before coming back at only half power, “No, Risa, you’re the good friend.”

I call Kame one-sided love towards the bean!!! Am I right or am I right? :D Man, I hope you expand on this bit, I REALLY wanna read about it.

Well, since you are in little bits, why a super duper tube of glue help? Or do you prefer tape?  :roll:

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Re: Black and Blue (Chapter 18&19 3/22)
« Reply #294 on: April 05, 2010, 04:36:57 PM »
TanaShige galore! :w00t: You can't give them a break, can't you? Oh why must you torture them so?!! :banghead: It's a rough patch for the TanaShige as they finally realise their feelings but I kinda understand why Sayu was behaving the way she did. Then again, they will make it through this just like they made through the past few months...right? :panic:

TakaGaki so hot! :inlove: Could be hotter though, if you know what I mean :twisted:

I'm still keeping my impression of Eri's character :huhuh She's not who they think she is. I mean, look at who her father is. One thing that baffled me though...her father is not a Kamei?

Oh and one more thing...DAMN THOSE ABCD BROTHERS FOR RUINING SAYU'S CUTE FACE!!! :angry:

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Re: Black and Blue (Chapter 18&19 3/22)
« Reply #295 on: April 06, 2010, 06:43:55 PM »
*Sticks Baby Sticky Tree to "Sticky"* <- don't go away again~ :(

:P

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“Just wait two weeks, okay? Two weeks.”
  :whistle: *waiting* 

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She couldn’t help blushing at how dashing her lover looked, carrying her to the shower.
- Ai-chan with short hair + Prince image pops out~ XD

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“Reina has smaller breasts than me!” Sayu called out instead, eliciting a growl and harder tickling
- LOL~ makes me remember the video that Reina commented that Sayu's breast ain't that big either~  :lol:

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“I love you, Ai. You’re too good for someone like me. I love you so much. I’m sorry that I’m a bad person.”
This totally broke my heart :(

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“I’ve been watching this dramatic crap all day! Please get me out of here! I’ll do paperwork, anything!”
<- Major LOL~!  :lol: I actually raised my eyebrow too when reading about Risa's conclusion.. I saw the video on the left thumb thingy too XD It was so random of her at that point of time.. lol

Hmmmmmm..... Actually... I'm quite interested in what's going on between Jun/Lin/Aika... Looks like a cute trio friendship~  :D But then again~ Eri is pretty interesting too... there is just so much we do not know about her........ yet? <- hopefully~ XD

I realized something... was it all plan that you already knew Koharu is going to graduate hence she is the only one missing (so far..only a little news) from the current line up in the story? haha.. or was it all coincident?


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Re: Black and Blue (Chapter 18&19 3/22)
« Reply #296 on: April 07, 2010, 07:51:35 AM »
Yo, sup, new commenter.

And now comes the fangirling...

OMG THIS STORY = WTF HOW CAN YOU MAKE A STORY SO FREAKIN PWNSOMELY AWESOME
My friends have had to sit through a lot of fangirling over the last ....2? 3? days. Gaki and Jun are so freakin epically awesome that I can't stop reading this, even if takagaki isnt a top pairing of mine~ (Don't hit me?)

Update...soon... or else... *insert uber evil smirk right here*

 :D

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Re: Black and Blue (Chapter 18&19 3/22)
« Reply #297 on: April 08, 2010, 10:20:27 PM »
@Kuro-kun - Thanks XD

@junkie-chan -
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>.> I've been lurking for a while.
Oh really now?  :huhuh
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well many people are busy or get suddenly busy.
I have been unbearably busy. Funny how busy sounds like lazy.  :P

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I got the feeling that JunJun likes LinLin? Or maybe She likes LinLin and Aika? Well crap...a love triangle then?
No. Just, no. This story is already convoluted enough, don't tempt me. 8)

Oh I'm sure you'll get what you are looking for in due time, Sayu can't deny a stubborn kitty, after all. Or can she? :?


@Hart - Thank you, but I'm still~ wai~ting :lol:


@Kawaii-wai - *is glomped pats head*


@ 9 -
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Like is there some bigger reason for Sayu's reaction to Reina starting to reciprocate her attentions, other than soap opera drama (lol)?
Well, when you put it like that, I'll have to think of something. XD

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WHAT IS THIS HISTORY?
:twisted:

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Why was Eri acting sort of strange with Risa and making that you're  the good friend remark?
  :twisted: :twisted:

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Risa's little moment where she looks up at the ceiling and hates on the powers that be for listening to her and making something happen.
When I though of it, I chuckled and had to put it in.



@KZ - Yup, I'm back. Can't get rid of me that easily.  8)

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Hmmm
What? What 'Hmmm'?

The rest of you comments made me lol.

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but they're siblings
Sibling rivalry to the max.



@Hammer Mama -
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Pervy Risa, staring at Ai dancing. It is a mesmerizing sight, although personally I find Eri is a more awesome sight to behold when it comes to dance :P *rans away*
XD Honestly, sometimes Risa out dances them both, although Eri and Ai are the two best dancers.

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See what I mean by pervy Risa? She's still wanting it when Ai specifically told her to wait XD
Wouldn't you be turned on by a private show from your hot girlfriend? Unintentional though it was.

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Well, since you are in little bits, why a super duper tube of glue help? Or do you prefer tape?
I like duct tape. :D



@HaPo-san - Thanks, all in due time.



@baddie -
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Oh why must you torture them so?!
It's fun  :twisted:

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Then again, they will make it through this just like they made through the past few months...right?
Well, Reina's gotta have a queen for when she takes over the underworld, right?

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Could be hotter though, if you know what I mean
What if they were in a burning building? :?

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her father is not a Kamei?
I'm not sure if I mentioned it already, but she's adopted. I'll put that in there again later.

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ABCD BROTHERS
  :lol: Omg, I'm glad someone noticed that. It helps me keep track of who's who.




@Baby Sticky - I'm not going anywhere, no more disappearances for a while yet. *pats*

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- LOL~ makes me remember the video that Reina commented that Sayu's breast ain't that big either~


 :lol: Which one, she comments a lot on Sayu's breasts. :lol:

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It was so random of her at that point of time.
I know, I was like, 'Uh, WTF mate?' but it's cute.

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was it all plan that you already knew Koharu is going to graduate hence she is the only one missing (so far..only a little news) from the current line up in the story? haha.. or was it all coincident?
All a coincidence. I actually started this before the graduation announcement. I just find it difficult to write Koharu, so I didn't want to have to deal with her.




@SteelReality-san
:welcome So nice of you to join our happy community.  :oops: :oops: Aww, that's sweet of you to say.

What is your fav pairings?
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Update...soon... or else... *insert uber evil smirk right here*
Lol, uh wait, you are kidding right? :sweatdrop:

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Re: Black and Blue (Chapter 18&19 3/22)
« Reply #298 on: April 08, 2010, 10:30:23 PM »
No updates, but I come baring crappily photoshopped pics! XD Yay!


First, Aika, just something simple
http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/dd137/Rndmnwierd/Aikashop.jpg

Then Eri, ignore the random blurring, I suck.
http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/dd137/Rndmnwierd/Erishop.gif


Next is Reina, a little better.
http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/dd137/Rndmnwierd/ReinaShop.jpg


Then Risa, I'm happy with this, but I still suck.
http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/dd137/Rndmnwierd/RisaShop.jpg

And finally, Ai. This one is hard to make believable because the light in the original is so damn bright. But the curtain on the right is there...
http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/dd137/Rndmnwierd/AiShop.jpg

The last one is the bane of my existence. Six tries and I finally figured it out on the last one, but I was too fed up to do it the right way. I invite anyone to create your own explosive, badass or otherwise cool photoshops and post them here.

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Re: Black and Blue (Not an update, but worth a look. 4/08)
« Reply #299 on: April 08, 2010, 10:46:39 PM »
yay~ i get love~ X3

and ur pretty good with adding stuff^^; i fail when it comes to edits like that but i will make u a cooler banner! dont worry! X3
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