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Re: =Crybaby girlfriend=(Mayuki)
« Reply #20 on: September 06, 2012, 09:16:39 PM »
T_T Poor Mayu...
So sad... Why Yuki? Can't you be with her even if she is weak? T_T

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Re: =Crybaby girlfriend=(Mayuki)
« Reply #21 on: September 06, 2012, 09:56:29 PM »
nandeeeeeeeeeeee whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy  :fainted: :pleeease: :gyaaah:

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Re: =Crybaby girlfriend=(Mayuki)
« Reply #22 on: September 07, 2012, 09:35:44 AM »
This is sad  :mon cry:
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Re: =Crybaby girlfriend=(Mayuki)
« Reply #23 on: September 07, 2012, 12:50:44 PM »
Effuu !

Bad Yuki, baaaaaaaaaad

Lol~ OK maybe she did it for Mayu to be strong ;u;

But still, HOW COULD YOU ?! YOU MADE IT WORSE Lol okay xD
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Re: =Crybaby girlfriend=(Mayuki)
« Reply #24 on: September 20, 2012, 05:32:20 AM »
                                                              Short Bonus!




'.....'Mayu was looking on her computer at the AKB48 concerts.She was looking of boredom until something got her attention, the song Mouth-to-mouth Chocolate
her girlfriend had singed with other 2 members.And so after listening to the song an ideea come to her.She got up from the sofa in the
dressing room and started searching for a machine.

'Hmm? Have anyone seen Mayuyu?' Yuki how just entered the room asked .
'she just left the room....' Takamina said from her place beside Acchan. Just as she finished saing that, Mayu entered the room with a
chocolate in one hand and a grin on her face.
'A, Mayuyu, where did you go?' Yuki asked as she looked at Mayu how got back on the sofa.
'Hmm~ I just wanted some chocolate so I got some~' Mayu said as she sat down and took a bit from her chocolate
'Haa....I see.' Yuki said as she looked around where to sit, there where a few places left but too far from Mayu.
'Nee, Yuki~' Mayu said as she got Yuki's attention 'come here!' she indicated to her lap for Yuki to come.
Yuki blushed but did as she was told, she after all wanted to sit wwith Mayu.She sitted on Mayu's lap and put a hand around her neck.
'ne Yuki?' Yuki looked at Mayu and blushed at the close distance between their faces.
'y-yes?'
'do you.....want chocolate?'Mayu asked as she took another bite
'eh? ' Yuki looked at the chocolate 'hm! yes please!' she said as she looked at the chocolate waiting to get some
But Mayu took another bite and didn't give Yuki any.
'....aren't you going to give me some?' Yuki asked as she looked at Mayu how was eating.
Mayu just took another bite and surprising Yuki she started kissing her with the chocolate in her month.
'hmph?' Yuki was shocked but she accepted the aluring taste of Mayu and chocolate that mixed together.It was a deep kiss , as their tongues started
fighting over the chocolate with their months opened.Everyone was seeing them, but Yuki didn't care.With her hands around Mayu's neck
and Mayus hands around her wrist she eated the chocolate from Mayu's mouth.
But as she couldn't stop herself anymore she started making dirty sounds 'Hmmm~ hmph ha-'
They stayed like that for some time and when the need for air was too big they separated.
'ha-Ma-yu, what co-me over you?' Yuki asked as she took deep breaths
'well, I- wanted to see if this song was right...' Mayu said as she pointed at her computed on the table.
'ah! you where looking at Mouth-to-mouth Chocolate?!'Yuki made a shoked face
'yes, and it seems you really become more bold when everyone is watching~'Mayu said grining
At that , Yuki was all red as she felt all the eyes in the room on her. 'm-mouuu~ Idiot...'She commented as she got up and headed to the door
'e-eh~? Yukirin? I'm sorry?' Mayu said as she seen her girlfrined go
'don't say sorry....I'll punish you when we get home...' Yuki said as she looked back at Mayu with a sensual look
'E-ehhhhhhhh~!!!'
All in the room in that moment where as socked as Mayu, Yuki never being so bold in public.....
'Get a room you two!!!!!!' Mariko shoted as Mayu was red and Yuki exited the room...
'Mouth-to-mouth Chocolate....' Mayu murmured as she looked at the door '.....I think I'll try the Lick-Chocolate-From-Yukirin-body next time~!' A
grin appeared
on Mayu's face as she got back to her laptop ignoring the stares she was getting.
« Last Edit: September 20, 2012, 02:29:35 PM by yuukimoko »
“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

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Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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Re: Short bonus(Mayuki)
« Reply #25 on: September 20, 2012, 12:51:19 PM »
Hohoho~

Mouth-to-mouth choco.. I wonder what that tastes like..? xD

Mayu is a certified pervert. She should loosen up hanging with Yuko xDDDD

Yuki being bold LOLOL I'd like to see the 'Lick-Chocolate-From-Yukirins-body' next xD

Oh my gosh now you're making me look like a pervert LOL -Cracky Side-

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Re: Short bonus(Mayuki)
« Reply #26 on: September 20, 2012, 07:38:28 PM »
Waw :shocked they do that in front of the other AKB XD  :wub:

Aaa~~ :inlove: With this end I was laugh a lot!!!!!

"Lick-Chocolate-From-Yukirin-body" It is sounds too funy and more.... 8)
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Re: Short bonus(Mayuki)
« Reply #27 on: September 21, 2012, 02:16:26 AM »
Oh chocolate kiss~
Taste chocolate on Yuki's body? Oh~

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Re: Short bonus(Mayuki)
« Reply #28 on: September 22, 2012, 04:48:28 PM »
                                             No more english for me! Im very depressed. I know very well now that I dont know english at all, and Im too stubborn to lets someone help me or to learn it.So from now on, or I wont write anymore or Ill only use monkeys!!!

                                                                       Kiss!

Mayu:  :mon nap:

Yukirin:  :hehehe:

Mayu:  :mon huh:

Yukirin:  :bigdeal:

Mayu:  :mon suspect:

Yukirin:  :hee:

Mayu:  :mon speechless:

Yukirin:   :on slopkiss:

Mayu:  :mon bleed2:
“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

I'm glad I'm not popular.I'm already a bitch, no need to make my ego bigger.

You were always my favorite, no one loved me as much as you did.-Alison DiLaurentis.

Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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Re: Monkeys- Part 1(Mayuki)
« Reply #29 on: September 22, 2012, 04:52:58 PM »
LOLOL I actually got the picture xD

Unique way of writing? I'm not even sure if it's still considered as writing LOL

But I'm pretty sure I'm not the only one who wants the other version of your writing xD

Who cares if there are grammatical errors as long as you got straight to the point! YAY
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Re: Monkeys- Part 1(Mayuki)
« Reply #30 on: September 22, 2012, 05:05:01 PM »
Eh... Etou... First time I read something with only smileys.... But I still can understand the storyline though.... it's fun to find out that I got the meaning of these smileys xDDD

uh.... What to say... Your English isn't bad, yuuki-san. No one is perfect, you know. Don't let that destroy for writer spirit!!! I'm looking forward to your next update!! Grammar errors would never stop your spirit for writing fictions!!!! And especially for Mayuki~

Even it might be monkeys again but.... >.> It's fine I guess since I can understand the monkeys anyways....

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Re: Monkeys- Part 1(Mayuki)
« Reply #31 on: September 22, 2012, 05:13:42 PM »
.....


                                                                       Control jealousy?


Yukirin:   :wahaha:

Sae:   :on woohoo:

Mayu:   :mon annoy:

Sae:   :on slopkiss:

Yukirin:   :luvluv1:

Mayu:   :mon spit:   :mon headbang:

Sae:  :dizzy:

Yukirin:   :hehehe:

Mayu:  :mon oshitwc:

Yukirin:   :glasses:

Mayu:   :mon chilly:

Yukirin:  :bingo:   :luvluv2:  :hee:

Mayu:  :mon blood:

Yukirin:  :kekeke:

Sae: .... :mon huh2:
“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

I'm glad I'm not popular.I'm already a bitch, no need to make my ego bigger.

You were always my favorite, no one loved me as much as you did.-Alison DiLaurentis.

Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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Re: Monkeys- Part 1(Mayuki)
« Reply #32 on: September 22, 2012, 05:14:39 PM »
Yuuki!

The story is cute and interesting.  :ding:

Quit being depressed!  :scolding:

If you want I can help you as well.  :bingo:

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Re: Monkeys- Part 2(Mayuki) 2!
« Reply #33 on: September 22, 2012, 05:22:29 PM »
LOLOLOLOL Yukirin be trolling like a baws !

And we all be d'awwing like a baws too xD

LOL I agree with miyumi-chan! Quit being depressed ~

Is there part 3 ? I'm waiting Hihihi :>

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Re: Monkeys- Part 2(Mayuki) 2!
« Reply #34 on: September 22, 2012, 05:31:04 PM »
wow a new style I love it so funny  :rofl:

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Re: Monkeys- Part 2(Mayuki) 2!
« Reply #35 on: September 22, 2012, 05:43:24 PM »
Kawaii!  :mon fyeah:

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Re: Monkeys- Part 2(Mayuki) 2!
« Reply #36 on: September 22, 2012, 05:43:47 PM »
.... I cant!!!!

                                                                                Revenge!

Yukirin:   :dozing:

Mayu:  :mon annoy:  :mon star: :mon determined:

Yukirin:  :sleep:

Mayu:  :mon cam:   :mon blowhorn:

Yukirin:  :shock:   :scolding:

Mayu:   :mon sweat:  :mon innocent:

Yukirin:   :grr:

Mayu:  :mon innocent:   :mon love:

Yukirin:   :shy1:  :shy2: 

Mayu:  :mon hobo:

Yukirin:  :dunno: :gyaaah:

Mayu:  :mon huh:

Yukirin:  :tantrum:

Mayu:  :mon lovelaff:  :mon rockstar:

Yukirin:  :on slopkiss:

Mayu:  :mon crazyinlove:

Sae:  :mon surr:

Mayu:  :mon nyah:

“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

I'm glad I'm not popular.I'm already a bitch, no need to make my ego bigger.

You were always my favorite, no one loved me as much as you did.-Alison DiLaurentis.

Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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Re: Monkeys- Part 3(Mayuki) 3!
« Reply #37 on: September 22, 2012, 05:48:24 PM »
WTF LOL Whats wrong with the world?!

Why do they troll each other.. LOL

Sae gave up YAAAAY

No offense TEEHEE

I WANT PART 4~!!
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Re: Monkeys- Part 3(Mayuki) 3!
« Reply #38 on: September 22, 2012, 06:00:07 PM »
Eto..... eto.... toeto?

                                                        Un....too much food.


Mayu:  :mon corn:

Yukirin:  :luvluv2:

Mayu:  :mon noodle:

Yukirin:  :shy1:

Mayu:  :mon sundae:

Yukirin:  :bigdeal:

Mayu:  :mon devcandy:

Yukirin:  :grr:

Mayu:  :mon rush:  :mon firecrack:

Girl:  :gmon shy:  :gmon heartu:

Mayu:  :mon scooter:

Yukirin:  :OMG:  :angry1:

Mayu:  :mon rush:   :mon innocent:   :mon kissy:

Yukirin:  :scolding:  :nya:

Mayu:  :mon thumb:

Later:

Mayu:  :mon barf:

Yukirin:  :glasses:  :hee:
“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

I'm glad I'm not popular.I'm already a bitch, no need to make my ego bigger.

You were always my favorite, no one loved me as much as you did.-Alison DiLaurentis.

Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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Re: Monkeys- Part 4(Mayuki) 4?!
« Reply #39 on: September 22, 2012, 06:11:16 PM »
Ijustneedpart5andImonmyclimax.
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