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Re: Drool - TanaKamei [3/1/10]
« Reply #20 on: January 11, 2010, 01:11:46 PM »
@ cogi_yoshi: XD that's what I did too but you're doing better with your turtle step whereas I usually spend all the time being distracted  :smhid

@ Kame: OMG! I couldn't believe you commented...
No, thank you! I'm like loving your TanaKame fics!! --> guilty for not commenting yet *runs off to comment*

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TanaKame is  :heart:

Look who's talking... I should finally come up with chapter 8 for Love is blind  :nervous :err:
Don't force yourself and good luck with it!


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Re: Her Smile - TanaShige [25/1/10]
« Reply #21 on: January 25, 2010, 04:01:02 PM »
So I was thinking on how to write a TanaShige-->staring at my sig-->watching Shoganai Yume Oibito PV-->this lame 1-shot is what came out.

Anyway to show some love for TanaShige I dedicated this short fic and my 100th post for this pairing  :luvluv2:

Edit: Again, thanks for Mirei-chan for half beta-ing this for me.


- Her Smile -


This was the spot where I liked to spend most of my free time these days. Standing beside the stairway, waiting, staring at the picture on my cellphone screen. I gazed down from time to time to search for a glimpse of the real thing.

It began one day when my lecturer bored me to death so I had slipped away to get some fresh air. That’s exactly when my fateful encounter with her happened....

I was leaning on the rail looking down lazily when she waltzed in. Confidence radiated in every step she took, making her stand out from the rest of the students swarming around. I surprised myself when my jaw didn’t meet the floor, although I couldn’t stop my hand from capturing her image secretly into my phone.

Our eyes met for a brief second as she looked up. And even after she had looked away, my eyes would still follow her every move from climbing up the stairs, checking the bulletin board next to the elevator, until that elevator door forced her out of my view.

Now, I lived for those short moments.

I sighed. I felt like a fool. But what could a girl do when someone had taken captive of their heart like she did with mine?

Moreover, I think she knew it somehow. Because after that incident, whenever our eyes met she would give me that small mysterious smile. It was like saying ‘it’s our little secret’ (perhaps only in my imagination). And this had became some sort of routine for us that had been going on for weeks.

Yet today was different. She didn’t go into the elevator like she used to after doing a scan on the bulletin board, she was heading in my direction!

Quick, do self-cuteness check!

“Can I borrow your cell?” she said.

Looking to my left and right—even behind me, I found no one else around. That meant...oh my god, she’s talking to me! I nodded vigorously and thrust the thing forward. She took the phone with one hand and her other one went to close my jaw softly.

While she was busy typing something on my phone, I was busy thinking how silly I must have looked. So much for being cute...stupid jaw, dropping at the wrong time!

“Here.” She put the phone back on my palm and smiled.

Have I ever mentioned that her smile brightened my day? Because it does.

I knew I was practically ogling her, but I couldn’t help it. She was so close and she didn’t seem to mind.

Wait, her face was getting way too close!

“I want to know more about you...” she whispered huskily in my ear causing shiver to run through my body and I closed my eyes involuntary. Once I opened them again, she was already inside the elevator, and her smile had changed into a mischievous one.

I looked at my phone and noticed that she had saved her number in it. The name, Tanaka Reina—with a ‘<3’ at the end—it read.

Closing the phone with a smile, I clutched it into my chest happily.

‘Tanaka Reina....’


- End -


I found it hard to write TanaShige, dunno why T^T
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Re: Her Smile - TanaShige [25/1/10]
« Reply #22 on: January 25, 2010, 04:28:04 PM »
Yay! A TanaShige fic. A cute one at that :luvluv1: Badsaints is a happy girl tonight :luvluv2:

I was imagining the Shoganai Yume Oibito settings whilst reading this :whistle: Sigh... how I wish I was Sayu in the story :shy2:

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I found it hard to write TanaShige, dunno why T^T
Hmm they are a little hard to write about but you did a good job :on GJ:

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Re: Her Smile - TanaShige [25/1/10]
« Reply #23 on: January 25, 2010, 05:30:51 PM »
This was really cute. I liked it, just a little moment in time.

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Re: Her Smile - TanaShige [25/1/10]
« Reply #24 on: January 25, 2010, 07:41:16 PM »
Oh, a new one-shot and TanaShige? Interesting! ^_^ You've done a good job on this. I think it's really cute. I know what you mean about finding TanaShige hard to write it's the same thing with me when it comes to KameShige. Overall, you've done good and the ending was cute. I wonder if Sayu did call her? hehe It's good to see that you're still writing.

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Re: Her Smile - TanaShige [25/1/10]
« Reply #25 on: January 26, 2010, 04:21:43 PM »
@ badsaints
Yay! A TanaShige fic. A cute one at that :luvluv1: Badsaints is a happy girl tonight :luvluv2:

Then I’m more than glad I decided to post it. You like TanaShige much, huh?

You wish you’re Sayu? Why? Because if I had to chose then I wish I was Reina LOL

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Hmm they are a little hard to write about but you did a good job :on GJ:
Really? Thank you! I wish I could write a better one.


@ rndmnwierd
Arigato! :)


@ Issa
Yeah, they literally make me scratches my head LOL I mean writing other pairings sure aren’t easy but they're somewhat harder.

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I wonder if Sayu did call her?
She better, she was given a chance. Otherwise I think Reina would hunt her down XD

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It's good to see that you're still writing.
I will as long as inspirations are kind enough to visit me.

Speaking of KameShige, who knows maybe one day you’ll see one from me  :P


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Re: Her Smile - TanaShige [25/1/10]
« Reply #26 on: January 26, 2010, 04:46:30 PM »
^ lmao Reina hunting down Sayu that's a little scary. XD

 :w00t: If you or anyone write a KameShige I will either die or explode of happiness. XD Since there aren't a lot of fics with them I think and well I'm still in the process of making a KameShige fic. So far all my ideas stop in the production process because I get stuck and can't work around it. I'm still trying to make one though. I'm sure my friends know that when they talk to me on MSN. lol They also hear how upset I get from not writing either.  :( But you don't have to know that. lol

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Re: Her Smile - TanaShige [25/1/10]
« Reply #27 on: January 28, 2010, 03:29:02 PM »
C!

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh~ I have been missing sure sweeeeet story!  :wub:

I dun come around the one shot session often~ forgive me?  :mon cute:

Drool <- Hooooooooooooow cute~ LOL *it's subjective~*  ;)


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who keeps on kissing other people instead of the one she wanted to kiss the most
- hmmmm... Koharu?

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It’s like they’re playing hide and seek with affirmation.
- It's kinda fun when it's at this stage XD

- Her Smile - - I always thought Reina's laughter is really bubbly and cute XD

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It began one day when my lecturer bored me to death
- More like everyday XD

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She took the phone with one hand and her other one went to close my jaw softly.
- closing jaw part is sooo adorable~ and imagine the height different them when they meet up~ Reina 151.7 and Sayu 160..   XD If Reina is not wearing heels, she might have to look slightly up to meet her eyes.   :wub:

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“I want to know more about you...” she whispered huskily in my ear
Reina had to tiptoe! XD

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‘<3’
  :wub: :wub:

Oh well............ School days~~~~~~~~   ;)

I request a long fic from you! *hummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm*

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Re: Her Smile - TanaShige [25/1/10]
« Reply #28 on: January 28, 2010, 06:24:17 PM »
@ Issa
Nah, Reina wouldn’t be that extreme. She’d probably just go and kiss Sayu because she’s tired of waiting for her call/text to come. Don’t give me ideas! LOL

It’s hard to make a fic with your fav because you wanted to create the best one for them. I pretty much got lucky with the one-shots since the muse didn’t fight me. Don’t give up, ne? I’m sure you can do it and don’t be too hard on yourself too.


Bishop!

No worries, there’s nothing to forgive ;)

Drool <- Hooooooooooooow cute~ LOL *it's subjective~*  ;)
When it’s the one you love, you would think it’s cute. At least I would XD

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- hmmmm... Koharu?
Sorry, can’t tell for now unless I give up on writing the sequel.

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- It's kinda fun when it's at this stage XD
Yeah, it’s kinda exciting.

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- More like everyday XD
True, I usually sleep in my class if bored :lol:

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- closing jaw part is sooo adorable~ and imagine the height different them when they meet up~ Reina 151.7 and Sayu 160..   XD If Reina is not wearing heels, she might have to look slightly up to meet her eyes.   :wub:
It's the art of seduction LOL

I see Reina as someone who’s very confident with herself, the height difference would mean nothing to her. Hence the whispering and ‘<3’ part, she’s confident she’ll get the girl XD

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I request a long fic from you! *hummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm*
Whaddaya mean you want a long fic from me?? LOL
I dunno, writing a long/multi-chaptered fic is hard (how could you write them right away?) but I do want to, need more ideas.


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Re: Her Smile - TanaShige [25/1/10]
« Reply #29 on: January 28, 2010, 06:51:52 PM »
OMG You have another one!?  :w00t:

That was  :wriggly:  :luvluv1:

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Re: Her Smile - TanaShige [25/1/10]
« Reply #30 on: January 28, 2010, 07:28:42 PM »
Thanks K!  :D


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Re: Her Smile - TanaShige [25/1/10]
« Reply #31 on: February 02, 2010, 06:25:53 AM »
Awww that was cute!

I quite enjoyed it  :wub:  Hehe gives me something to think about when rewatching SYO  :D

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Why Don’t You Kiss Her? [KameShige] 03/02/10
« Reply #32 on: February 03, 2010, 12:15:02 PM »
@ Sukoshi: Thank you for reading, SYO has a great setting.


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Yes, you’re reading it right, it’s KameShige. And no, I’m still a TanaKame-ist at heart. I admit I’m not a fan of this pairing, they’re actually at the bottom of my list just before GakiKame (I don’t hate them though). This could fit for TakaGaki too I guess but since inspiration forced me to do this pair, here’s a try with songfic. Inspired by Jesse McCartney’s song with the same title.

Issa if you’re reading, this is for you!


Why Don’t You Kiss Her?


We're the best of friends and we share our secrets
She knows everything that is on my mind, ohh
Lately somethin's changed as I lie awake in my bed
A voice here inside my head softly says



Sayu falls asleep on my shoulder. I guess it’s not such a good idea to do a DVD marathon for a sleepover after a long dance practice we did.

Slipping my arm behind her waist to hold her steady, I tilt my head sideways to gain a better sight of her sleeping face. She looks exhausted.

I part her bangs and hold her smooth black hair in my hand, smelling it. The scent, I love it, exactly like you.

Sweet.


"Why don't you kiss her?
Why don't you tell her?
Why don't you let her see the feelings that you hide?
'Cause she'll never know if you never show the way you feel inside"



Lately I find myself drawn to you, things about you don’t fit into my ‘ordinary’ category anymore. How I would look forward for you to do your ‘usa-chan peace’, how your nasty mouth is becoming an add up to your cute points, and how I would catch myself staring at you longer than I should.

I know my mind doesn’t playing tricks on me, because I know what this is means...

‘Eririn loves Sayumin,’ I whisper without a sound.


Oh I'm so afraid to make that first move
Just a touch and we could cross the line
Everytime she's near, I wanna never let her go
Confess to her what my heart knows
Hold her close



Tracing the outline of her lips with my index finger gingerly, I wonder if it’s alright if I kiss them? We’ve kissed before, but what I want is more than just a friendly kiss.

Am I ready to cross the line with you? To risk our friendship?


Why don't you kiss her?
Why don't you tell her?
Why don't you let her see the feelings that you hide?
'Cause she'll never know if you never show the way you feel inside



‘Why don’t you?’ an erien voice in my head speaks.


What would you say?
I wonder, would she just turn away?
Or would she promise me that she's here to stay?
It hurts me to wait
I keep asking myself



What would you think of me if I confess, Sayu? Would you get disgusted? Nah, I doubt you would.

‘I’m sorry Sayumin doesn’t feel the same way Eririn does, but Eririn will still be Sayumin’s best friend forever no matter what!’ rather, something like that is probably what you would say.

Would you ignore me? Thinking that I’m being an ahou again.

Or would I ever hear ‘Hontou ni daisuki Eririn~!’ a come back of my own confession resonated?

Do you know it hurts to stand in this position? To be your best friend but nothing at the same time.

What should I do?

That persistent voice keeps coming back. ‘Kiss her.’


Why don't you kiss her? (Tell her you love her)
Why don't u tell her ? (Tell her you need her)
Why don't you let her see the feelings that you hide?
'Cause she'll never know if you never show the way you feel inside



I kiss my two fingers then gently put them on your lips, and hope my feelings will reach you.


Why don't you kiss her? (Why don't you kiss her?)


You’re smiling.

What are you dreaming of? It must be a good one.

“Eririn, daisuki...” she mumbles.

It’s my turn to smile. ‘Watashi mo.’

Switching the TV and DVD player off, I lean my head to hers. Let us meet in our dreams. If we do, I’ll tell you about my feelings.

I will tell you everything.


The End


My inner TanaKamei/TanaShige grilled me for this. I felt like a failure at being a TanaKame-ist  :fainted:
(I blame you oh inspiration!! LOL).
« Last Edit: April 29, 2011, 07:48:14 PM by pretend_2besome1 »


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Re: Why Don’t You Kiss Her? [KameShige] 03/02/10
« Reply #33 on: February 03, 2010, 12:28:40 PM »
It's cute. :lol: I will admit to being a bit of a KameShige fan myself, though I doubt I would ever write them, so it's nice to see this from you.

Now, go write a Tanashige... 8)

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Re: Why Don’t You Kiss Her? [KameShige] 03/02/10
« Reply #34 on: February 03, 2010, 01:19:20 PM »
^ Ah, if it isn't the adorable baby tree   :luvluv2:

........wait, wrong thread  XD


Well, I never thought I would be able to write them :nervous

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Oh, you like TanaShige?
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Re: Why Don’t You Kiss Her? [KameShige] 03/02/10
« Reply #35 on: February 03, 2010, 02:37:19 PM »
EHHHH?!?! I thought I posted a comment for 'Her Smile'. Gomene!

I really like TanaShige cuz these 2 have a whole different dynamics as compared to say, KameMame. For Reina, I like her most with e bunny. And since I also adore SYO, this fic is a double score ^^

Ahhh, KameShige! There definitely isn't enough of them around. I hope you write more. Sukoshi will be really please too :) usually we see Sayu being the one in love with Kame, it's nice to read from Eri's POV this time.

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Re: Why Don’t You Kiss Her? [KameShige] 03/02/10
« Reply #36 on: February 03, 2010, 05:08:01 PM »
O.O

 :w00t:

*explodes/dies of happiness*

>.>

<.<

*clears throat*

Ah, you wrote them?! ^_^ I'm so glad! And knowing that you wrote this for me  :oops: *blushes* Thank you! No one has written a fic for me so I'm even happier about this! I know you must have went through torture writing this pairing and probably had some eye twitching in disgust for this pairing so thank you for enduring that while writing this fic I'm grateful.

KameShige is so cute in this one-shot.  :wub: Little Eririn had a crush on Sayu and loves her that's even cuter. I'm glad for once that it's Eri instead of Sayu who has the crush like Hammy said. The ending was really cute though I still think Eri should have kissed her. XD It's just the fan in me is all. So don't worry about that. There aren't many fics of KameShige so this fic makes me happy even if there isn't a kiss because it's cute and I love cute over all.  I wish there were more KameShige fics though. Hmmm...I might fix that.

Again thank you! ^_^ Try not to put yourself through the torture again though. lol

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Re: Why Don’t You Kiss Her? [KameShige] 03/02/10
« Reply #37 on: February 04, 2010, 04:54:17 AM »
Ahhh....that's some good TanaKameShige crack.  :D
These are really good oneshots. Keep up the good work.  :twothumbs
Can't wait till my next fix.  :P
I wouldn't mind for some 3-way action.  :twisted:

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Re: Why Don’t You Kiss Her? [KameShige] 03/02/10
« Reply #38 on: February 04, 2010, 12:36:12 PM »
LOVE, LOVE, LOVE the ending~  :mon inluv:

*does a little kameshige dance*

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Re: Why Don’t You Kiss Her? [KameShige] 03/02/10
« Reply #39 on: February 04, 2010, 01:44:30 PM »
@ lil_hamz
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EHHHH?!?! I thought I posted a comment for 'Her Smile'. Gomene!
No worries :)

TanaShige is indeed interesting, there’s just something about them that attracts me besides how adorable they’re in Allo-Hello!

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And since I also adore SYO, this fic is a double score ^^
Thank you very much! :grin:
 
:nervous I don’t know if I’ll ever write a KameShige again. As for why Eri’s the one who fall for Sayu, I think I just wanted to show a part of her that doesn’t scream ahou, that there’s more to the ahou --> I don’t even know what I’m talking about LOL


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I know you must have went through torture writing this pairing and probably had some eye twitching in disgust for this pairing so thank you for enduring that while writing this fic I'm grateful.

Lol it didn’t go to such extent. Like I said, I don’t hate KameShige and I guess me as a reader and a writer can be somewhat different. I think I’ve told you that KameShige is quite a contradictory for me –> I see them as only best friends, but I do know best friends could fall in love with each other. I dunno what to think about them.

I’m happy you think it’s cute and I’m just glad I didn’t write it when I’m in my emo mode, otherwise it would’ve been total angst under different song. And that would simply be cruel if I wrote an angst for your fav pair (it would make me feel like I’m hating them).

The last scene where Sayu smiled and mumbled were created to make sure there are hints for KameShige to happen, so fans of them like you could imagine their own version of happy ending for them. Were those enough hints I wonder?

Actually I was about to make Eri kiss Sayu at first but then I thought she’s not Sayu who probably wouldn’t hesitate if she was in Eri’s situation. Plus since the song is in the unsure phase (blame the song! lol), I wanted to put a kiss there but at the same time not a kiss, just enough that it’s a step ahead from the song in that phase. Thus, I made Eri did that.
(Maybe you should write a continuation where they kiss for real? XD)

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Again thank you! ^_^ Try not to put yourself through the torture again though. lol
:D you’re so very welcome, though to be honest this fic is somehow my thanks for your TTCL.
I’m sorry for the shortness! That’s all I could come up with :sweatdrop:


@ Hart
Thank you for reading and especially commenting!


@ Sukoshi
I'm glad you love the ending  :)


Oh Camel, that’s a long reply! Lol
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