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Deliver Us From Evil (48Group Horror-esque fanfic? 16/11/14)
« on: November 09, 2014, 11:19:48 PM »


The name’s Watanabe Mayu… Officer of the National Police Force. Crazy things have been happening recently and it’s up to me to solve it. But with the help of a skeptical Christian by the name of Oya Masana, this journey will become even crazier.
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It was a long and tiring day at work, before finally going straight home to see my wife, Kashiwagi Yuki and my daughter, Sakura.

“How was work?”

“Eh? Same old, same old.”

Before I could hug Sakura, I got another call from my walkie talkie.

“Sorry Yukirin, got another crime to investigate.” I said to her before I walked out of the room and replied to my walkie talkie.

“This is Special Ops, what’s the situation?”

“It’s a 10-4, violent discussion.”

“What’s the name of the 10-4?”

“Matsui Ren. Abusing his wife, Takayanagi Akane and their child.”

“Me and Furukawa will be on our way. What’s the street?”

“15th Avenue on the east side of Nagoya.”

“Thanks. We’ll be there ASAP.”

I hurried outside to find my partner in crime, Furukawa Akiro at my doorstep.

“So, you got the call too?”

“You’re lucky I even consider you as my partner. You know that?”

“Of course I do. Now let’s go.”

We hopped into the SUV parked outside the driveway to make a hasty journey to Nagoya to see what’s happening to the innocent woman.

“So...”

“What?” I said, quite annoyed as I was handling the steering wheel at full speed, “Can’t you see I’m driving here?”

We were already on the motorway, I wasn’t wasting anytime.

“Take the exit and you’ll be right there. I know the place remember? I live here~”

“Thanks.”

I made a swift turn down the hill and saw the house as soon we came to the bottom. I parked right in front of the house and we both went out of the car.

*Bang* *Bang* *Bang*

“Open up!!!!! This is the police!!!!!”

Nothing… We waited for a few minutes, before taking a last resort in the breaking the door down. We were running into the living room, to see a man with blood on his hands, his wife’s face was streaming with blood…

“O-Oka-san...”

“Don’t worry, little girl. We’ll help your mother~”

“Hey! What do you think you’re doing? For one you’re invading my home, two, you’re trying to help my daughter?!” the woman on the chair tried to shout.

“Miss, please calm down. We’re only here to help.”

Before I knew it, her husband suddenly tried to punch me. With my swift reflexes, I dodged it and punched him in the gut, where all the air was taken out.

“This… This is the last resort...” He then took out a knife and then pain consumed my upper arm.

“Furukawa! Need backup! Ugh~”

The man, by the name of Matsui Ren, rushed toward the door and before he knew it, Akiro was in front of him, also holding a knife.

“Oh **** I’m outta here!” He started running.

“I’ll go get him, look after the ladies over there.” I said.

“As I’ve told you before, though, Mayu. Stitches, need ‘em every time. Now go~”

“Right.” I ran straight through the open door seeing the suspect in the distance.

Ten minutes later, I was fed up and took a policeman’s baton and threw it at his legs, forcing him to go on the ground in pain.

“If you dare do that again, think of me~” I started punching him over and over again, emotions taking over. Having a wife and child myself, I know I shouldn’t do that. It was just evil.

I released him and he just dropped to the ground. But something even worse is about to happen….
« Last Edit: November 16, 2014, 02:03:39 PM by MaYukiIsLife »

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Re: Deliver Us From Evil (48Group Horror-esque fanfic? 9/11/14)
« Reply #1 on: November 09, 2014, 11:38:45 PM »
This sounds really interesting :hee:
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I released him and he just dropped to the ground. But something even worse is about to happen….
Eh, was their something evil inside Ren? :dunno: Something horrendous will happen and Mayu will witness it?  :mon huh:
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“Hey! What do you think you’re doing? For one you’re invading my home, two, you’re trying to help my daughter?!” the woman on the chair tried to shout.
What is Churi's mother saying?! Isn't she suppose to thank the police for coming to save them? :grr:

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Re: Deliver Us From Evil (48Group Horror-esque fanfic? 9/11/14)
« Reply #2 on: November 10, 2014, 07:58:55 AM »
This sounds really interesting :hee:
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I released him and he just dropped to the ground. But something even worse is about to happen….
Eh, was their something evil inside Ren? :dunno: Something horrendous will happen and Mayu will witness it?  :mon huh:
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“Hey! What do you think you’re doing? For one you’re invading my home, two, you’re trying to help my daughter?!” the woman on the chair tried to shout.
What is Churi's mother saying?! Isn't she suppose to thank the police for coming to save them? :grr:

Wait, wait... I kinda didn't include this in the fanfic but Ego-chan is Churi and Ren's daughter and yeah~ Since she doesn't know it was the police, she reacted the way she did~ And since I'm loosely basing this on a movie, it will have some of the horror parts of the movie in it without the gore~

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Re: Deliver Us From Evil (48Group Horror-esque fanfic? 9/11/14)
« Reply #3 on: November 15, 2014, 08:22:57 PM »
I had another emergency call, same woman, same child. It was weird, like a chain of events. So, we had to rush to a nearby zoo.

“So, what’s the damage?”

“It looks like the power’s out. She’s seemed to have legged it.”

“How in Hell did she do that?”

“Dunno. We just got a call, we knew you’ve experienced this sort of thing before, Officer Watanabe.”

“Thanks, Superintendent Oshima. What’s the status on the situation?”

“She seems to have thrown her kid somewhere, we’ve sent her to a nearby hospital. Banged her head pretty hard.”

“You think she’s mental?”

“Again, I dunno~ Her profile on our databases say she’s well off and her job is a businesswoman. No history of depression or anything of the sorts~”

“Umm...” Then the figure of Takayanagi’s husband reappeared, looking deranged.

“Oy! I need a word with you!”

“Actually...”

“What?”

“He was working for us for a few months now, I don’t really get why he’s like this?” The zookeeper talked to us, looking very innocent.

“What’s your name?”

“F-Furuhata Nao desu.”

“Sorry about this, Furuhata-san but can you please come with me? I want the door opened.”

“H-Hai.”

She motioned me to follow her and she used a keycard to open the door to the cage.

“What… the ****?”

I saw her in the distance. I heard groans and shrieks.

“Please… Please…. Please let me go!”

“What the **** is happening here?!”
I thought.

“How long has she been like this?”

“About… an hour and a half.”

“Yes, technically since closing and then she blended into the crowd.”

I slowly stepped in and tried to get a closer look at her. The woman looked at me with crazed eyes, her pupils dilated. Like, she was looking passed me.

“Um, miss...”

“N-No, p-please don’t hurt me! I-I-I just want to l-live!”

“Miss, calm down. Everything’s okay.”

“N-No… N-Nothing’s alright!”

“Please, miss….”

“I hear him… He’s after me..! H-he’s coming for me..!”

“Who?”

“I can’t take this… Nothing can stop him… ”

“Miss, I just want to know, who is after you.”

“The Devil...”

“Wha-?”

She suddenly screamed and held her head.

“LEAVE ME ALOOOOOOONE!!!!!!”

“Oh, ****! ****, ****, ****!!!”

I took the walkie talkie and sent a message to all officers on scene.

“This is Special Ops, anyone here?”

“This is Superintendent Oshima Yuko on standby. What’s going on over there?!”

“Our victim is going nuts, she’s screaming and saying that ‘The Devil’ is after her...”

“Seriously?”

“Yeah...”

“Alright, I’ll send our forces there. And you should probably also call an ambulance. Maybe she got hit in the head or was mentally traumatised or something.”

“Got it,” I said before hanging up. Then I looked to my partner. “Call 911.”

“Sure thing.” Before I knew it, Akiro took out his phone and called the emergency services. My heart started to pump and blood rushed to my head. 

“Mayu ---” I couldn’t hear anything else. All I could hear is a faint whisper and I felt a stinging pain inside me.

“Bow down to me boy. Believe what the poor girl is saying… Or suffer the concequences…”

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Re: Deliver Us From Evil (48Group Horror-esque fanfic? 9/11/14)
« Reply #4 on: November 15, 2014, 09:02:34 PM »
Is the Devil talking to Mayu?!  :shock:
Will the consequences involve his family!? :tama-uhh:
I don't think Churi is going to be okay after what she's been going through :depressed:
I'm just wondering, how did Churi and her family ever got involved with the Devil? :dunno:

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Re: Deliver Us From Evil (48Group Horror-esque fanfic? 9/11/14)
« Reply #5 on: November 16, 2014, 08:37:22 AM »
Wow
Waiting for next.

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Re: Deliver Us From Evil (48Group Horror-esque fanfic? 9/11/14)
« Reply #6 on: November 16, 2014, 11:38:07 AM »
:3 I doubleposted but: MYJR PMed me this header linking in with the fanfic


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Re: Deliver Us From Evil (48Group Horror-esque fanfic? 16/11/14)
« Reply #7 on: November 16, 2014, 02:06:41 PM »
“W-Who are you?!”

“Now that will be unknown. For now. Will you solve this mystery?”

“Ugh~ I swear on my life!”

“What about your family?”

“P-Please don’t hurt~ ----” My words became slurred as I suddenly felt my head make contact with the floor.

As I was unconscious, I saw everything that I’ve experienced in my life. From me meeting Yukirin for the first time to Sakura being born.

Does this mean…. I’m dead? I… I can’t be… I still have a lot to experience in my life.

Flashback….

“Look, Mayu. It’s our daughter.”

“She’s beautiful… What should we name her?”

“Mm… Sakura.”

“Sakura-chan it is, then. She will be like you when she’s older, Yuki.”

“But.. What about your job?”

“I’ll be back when I can. I promise.”

“I-I just don’t want to see you hurt, Mayu...”

Flashback End…


Yuki was right… I was bound to get hurt…

Now, because of this… this thing inside me I can’t even see...

Sakura… Yukirin… I’m sorry…

“****yu! ***ayu!! MAYU!!! Wake up!!!”

Ugh~ W-What’s going on… I tried to open my eyes, but I still can’t see anything…

“M-Mayu..” I could hear Yuki’s sobs beside me, “T-This is what I was trying to tell you!”

Yuki… It’s okay… I’m fine…

I tried to speak, but my voice wouldn’t come out.

“Papa… Please, open your eyes, Papa!”

Sakura… Darling, I’m right here…

“Mayu….”

O-Oka-san… Ah… I see. I am dead already, aren’t I?

“Mayu, you must go back. Only you can stop this...”

“What?”

“The evil within this world of yours is growing stronger, possessing people. Including you.”

“So, that woman… She was right? The Devil...”

“Yes.”

“So...Is the Devil … Inside me?”

“I’m not so sure…..”

Wait… So… If it is in my body…. What will happen?

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« Reply #8 on: November 16, 2014, 03:59:29 PM »
Ehhhhhh devil is inside mayu. =[]= 

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Re: Deliver Us From Evil (48Group Horror-esque fanfic? 16/11/14)
« Reply #9 on: November 16, 2014, 04:09:38 PM »
Someone…

Someone help me…

I feel Him… Inside me….

I hear Him… His whispers… He’s.. controlling my mind…


It’s been two weeks since I’ve been possessed, slowly turning insane… Still blind and mute.... Even though I can hear Yuki and Sakura crying for me, I can’t reach them. I can’t hold Yuki’s hand and comfort her. I can’t kiss Sakura’s cheek and tell her “Daddy’s okay”.
I was just sitting here. Feeling him slowly pulling me farther into Hell…

I’m sorry, everyone… I failed….

As I sat there in silence for hours, I finally heard the door open and someone walked in. It’s not Yuki or Sakura. This person’s footsteps were different…

“Is this him?”

“Yes.”

“Let’s get this over with...” the woman sighed as I heard her come closer to me.

I feel something cold touch my forehead. Water..?

“Oh Heavenly Father...” It was all I understood.

“Don’t listen to this person, boy. She is only brainwashing you, trying to pull you back in and trick you. Stay with me.”

I heard both voices. The priestess’s prayers and the Devil’s mind-controlling hiss. I tried to fight, but both were pulling me. Light and dark, it’s too hard…

“Ugh~ N-No...”

“Oh Father, have mercy on this child’s soul. Take him and guide him back on the path toward your light...”

“She is lying. You must stay in the shadows, where it is safe.”

“Drive the Devil out of his body.”

“Take my advice. Stay with me and you will have freedom.”

What do I do..?

“For I exorcise thee!”

Then, I felt great pain in my body. It was excruciating, as if someone was pulling me apart.

“Stop her! Resist her power! You will fall into eternal pain if you don’t.”

“Fight Him, Watanabe! Fight the Devil! The power of Christ compels you!”

God…

Dear God… Save me!


“GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!” My voice finally shot out of my throat, screaming loudly as I felt as if something was strongly torn out of me.

Then my vision came back and I saw myself lying on the ground, strapped to a chair.

I looked up weakly and saw the young priestess.

“Welcome back to Earth."

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« Reply #10 on: November 16, 2014, 07:55:58 PM »
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I can’t hold Yuki’s hand and comfort her. I can’t kiss Sakura’s cheek and tell her “Daddy’s okay”.
Mayu, will have to protect his family and do his best to stop the evil that's in him :mon determined:
What does the devil want with Mayu in the first place?  :dunno:
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“Welcome back to Earth."
Is the devil finally out of Mayu? I have a feeling that things won't go back to normal just yet :mon sweat:
Thanks for the update  :hee:

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