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Title: Black Chocolate
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on February 16, 2013, 02:06:19 AM
Preview:

Love, friends, happiness...

Someone who can protect who...

Who needs that?

I've been alone in the dark for as long as I can remember.

...But, I'm scared of the dark....

I don't know why, but...

I feel so weak...

To Be Continued
See if you can guess the pairing before we start :ptam-kill:
Title: Re: New fanfic! "Black Chocolate"
Post by: Wmatsui22 on February 16, 2013, 02:29:59 AM
Hi :D

Please do continue,..

Who will be the main character?

I hope WMatsui or AtsuMina :D

Thanks
Title: Re: New fanfic! "Black Chocolate"
Post by: matsuru on February 16, 2013, 04:48:05 AM
please continue  :cow: :cow:

i'm curious about the pairing  :dunno: :dunno:
Title: Re: New fanfic! "Black Chocolate"
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on February 16, 2013, 08:11:30 AM
I wonder what pairing?... :hehehe:
Title: Re: New fanfic! "Black Chocolate"
Post by: fuu_kun on February 16, 2013, 10:49:33 AM
Saeyuki!! XD
Title: Re: New fanfic! "Black Chocolate"
Post by: cisda83 on February 16, 2013, 10:58:53 AM
I hope it's atsumina fic...

Thank you for the new coming fic

Can't wait to see it starting

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: New fanfic! "Black Chocolate"
Post by: Yuki88 on February 17, 2013, 05:44:47 PM
I put my bet on Saeyaka!  :twothumbs
Title: Re: New fanfic! "Black Chocolate"
Post by: hitomi hagiwara on February 17, 2013, 05:54:50 PM
maybe Atsuyuu.  :lol: :lol: :lol:
Title: Re: New fanfic! "Black Chocolate"
Post by: Haruko on February 17, 2013, 09:58:01 PM
atsumina!

kojiyuu!
wmatsui?
Title: Re: New fanfic! "Black Chocolate"
Post by: Loveforever on February 20, 2013, 01:36:47 AM
I think it's Mayuki  :wub:
Title: Re: New fanfic! "Black Chocolate"
Post by: Lost Heaven on February 20, 2013, 07:31:53 PM
I think it is SaeYaka   :roll: :roll:
Onegai shimasu  :bow:
Title: Re: New fanfic! "Black Chocolate"
Post by: Archie28 on February 21, 2013, 05:34:00 PM
Mayuki! I'm betting on MaYuki  :cow: :cow: :cow:
Title: Re: New fanfic! "Black Chocolate"
Post by: kuro808 on February 21, 2013, 05:56:57 PM
WMatsui? XD

Posted by the Hawaiian

Title: Black Chocolate-Chapter 1
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on February 23, 2013, 01:24:50 AM
Chapter 1-The dark, black past


It was a dark, cloudy day. Everything seemed to be gloomy, but everyone smiled and continued their life with their friends.

On the way to school, there was one girl who was completely alone.

No one would go an inch near her and always ignored her.

She was beautiful, one of the most attractive girls in school, even, but had a heart of ice.

Her eyes were as black as night, cold and lifeless.

Little did everyone know, there was a sad past that told the story behind her dark aura and cold personality.

Her name was Yuki. Kashiwagi Yuki.


Flashback
One beautiful sunny day in July, the brightness and warmth of the sun shone down on a newborn baby girl.

She was sleeping peacefully in her crib as the light reflected off her pale white skin.

A perfectly healthy baby, brought into the world anew with dreams as big as she wanted.

Her big, black eyes opened slowly as she awoke from her slumber, stretching her arms and yawning.

Her mother came over her crib and picked her up, holding her close.

"Good morning, Yuki."

The cute little baby smiled and giggled at the sight of her kind mother.

"You're gonna grow up to be a beautiful girl."

A few years later, Yuki was 6 years old and sleeping in her beautiful white bed, covered by a lace white canopy.

The door slowly opened and her 10-year-old brother, Takeru, tip-toed in.

He smiled at the sight of her sleeping sister and slowly knelt down at her.

He picked up a stuffed teddy bear off the ground and laied it next to her. In her sleep, she hugged the bear tight and smiled.

Takeru slowly raised his hand and stroked her head.

"'Night, little princess," he whispered to her. "You're my princess."

He was always by her side to help her.


On the day she was starting primary school, she brought her stuffed bear because she was nervous.

Her long black hair was were tied in twin ponytails and she wore glasses and her favorite light pink shirt.

"Yukirin..."

"....."

"C'mon. Who's my little princess?"

He pinched her cheeks up to make her smile a bit.

"Where's that bright smile?"

She giggled a bit, feeling a bit relieved from her brother's support.

"There it is!"

"Thank you, Take-nii."

"Now, you go and have a good time, okay? Make a lot of friends."

"Un! Itekimasu!"

She ran up the hill and smiled at Takeru as he waved goodbye to her.

And after that one day, she made lots of new friends and became a rather popular girl at school.

And over the years, she became more popular.

Despite being teased for wearing glasses and having huge reactions, she was captain of both the marching band and soccer club.

She was very smart and very cute, which made her very popular with boys.

She was always positive, and there was never a day she didn't.

She was basically the piece of the sun that never stopped shining through the clouds.

Her family got bigger over the years, too.

The family adopted a cute little puppy from the shelter, and her mom had a baby boy when she was 9.

Then, one day, she drew her own original story book.


Yuki-chan's Candy Wonderland

There once was a small princess named Yuki, who lived in a castle surrounded by a large beautiful garden.

She played in the garden by herself and talked to the colorful flowers.

One day, she met a cute little witch in the garden.

"Hello, princess," she said. "My name is Mayu. I'm a witch from the candy world."

"Are? Does that mean you can make candy appear," Yuki asked.

"Un!" She waved her wand and out came colorful candies galore.

She ate the candy and decided she should share Mayu's gift with the kingdom, because everyone else was very poor.

They rode Mayu's flying broomstick into town and made candy rain everywhere.

"Everyone eat up! Itadaki~-Mayuyu," screamed Mayu as she flew through the village.

She then dropped her off at an empty field and waved her wand again.

The field turned into a candy forest, with lollipop trees and cotton candy clouds, even a chocolate river.

This was a world that Yuki could visit everyday. Yukirin World!

"Thank you, Mayuyu!"

The End



"Hahaha! Yukirin, this is so cute!"

"Your drawings are adorable!"

"Mayuyu, what a character!"

All her friends giggled at her story.

Some of them teased her by dancing with lollipops and saying "Itadaki-Mayuyu!" in front of her.

"Mou, cut that out!"

When she was 12, her younger brother, Ryota, also often teased by calling her names like "Marimokkori."

"It's not 'Marimokkori'! My name is Yuki! YUKI!!!"

"Mawimokoli!"

"Mou~! Ryota!"

But, one day, someone went too far on the teasing. In fact, it was bullying.


When she started middle school, a group of older male students were picking on her.

They were all gathered around her and trapped her against the wall.

"What do you want? I need to go."

One of the boys slammed their hand against the wall.

"Little miss student council president, think you can order us around, huh?"

"... Ano, I really don't have time for all this, so-"

"I wanna ask. Why are you so happy?"

Yuki lifted her eyebrow, confused by the boy's question.

"You rarely get mad, you never cry, you're just overly positive. It's honestly creepy."

"Excuse me?"

One of the boys suddenly snatched her bag and pulled out the book she drew when she was 10.

"What a child, still keeping things like this."

"I remember this. Your little 'Yukirin Wonderland', how a-dor-a-ble!"

Their sarcastic laughter made Yuki mad. She tried to grab the book, but he threw it down into a puddle.

"Listen, your little fantasies. Your dreams. They'll never come true."

He threw his cigarette down on the book and let it all burn.

They left her all alone and let the book disappear in the flames. Yuki fell down to her knees, her eyes widened in despair.


Her friends comforted her and told her not to listen, but she still felt a pain in her heart she never felt before.

Even her parents and older brother tried to help, but she still felt sad.

Not enough to cry though.

She spent some close time with her dog. She truly felt happy when she talked to him.

When she was 14, her dog went missing, so she went to look for him.

He found him tied by a rope to a wooden pole in the ground. The dognappers were none other than the same boys who burnt her book.

Two of the boys held her arms behind her back to make sure she wouldn't fight back.

"Tomorrow's your birthday, right?"

She tried to look away, but the boys held her head in place.

The other boy took an old wooden back and walked toward the dog.

"No... Please..."

"Happy birthday."

He swung the bat hard at the dog. The pole flew out from the ground and he hit the wall.

He began beating him with the bat. It had rusty nails in it that pierced deep into his skin.

"Hey, help me hold him down!"

One of the boys came over and held the dog's neck down.

"Watch closely, missy. Let it ALL sink in. We just wanna see you cry for once."

"No... No, stop. Stop!"

She wanted to scream, but she couldn't say a word.

She wanted to fight back, but she couldn't move.

She didn't want to look, but her eyes wouldn't close.

"Are? It's stopped breathing already."

"Eh?!"

"Hehe... Bleed, bleed, bleed. This thing is endless!"

They let her go, and she stared in awe at her dead puppy. Her lips were shaking and her pupils were dialated.

They slowly came over and turned her to see her face.

"Fear... Despair... But no tears!"

*SLAP*

One suddenly slapped her, but her expression never changed.

"What the hell is wrong with you?! Cry! CRY!!! WHY WON'T YOU CRY?!?!?!?!?!"

*SLAP* *SLAP* *SLAP*

"We want tears of sadness! Cries of despair!! SCREAMS OF AGONY!!!"

They slapped her, and even kicked her, laughing at her more and more as she let them beat her.

"Cry already! CRY!!!"

He went in to punch her hard, but her head lowered, covering her eyes.

She suddenly snatched his hand and squeezed it hard.

She stood up and squeezed it harder and harder.

"H-hey... let go. Let go!"

Her head still hung low and she didn't respond.

"Hey, we didn't mean it, okay? We're sorry! We'll make it up to you."

"Y-yeah! Just LET GO!!!"

Their voices could no longer reach her.

As if she were possessed, she grabbed his arm and flipped him over. He fell on the ground hard.

"Stop. STOP!"

"... You will never...make it up to me...."

She punched him repeatedly, pounding him to a pulp. Her eyes became lifeless, as if all light that shined in them before was sucked out of it.

Her face was emotionless and blank.

Nothing could reach her.


After she finished beating him, he passed out and got carried home by his friends.

Yuki walked home, her hand in pain from all the punching. Her knuckles had blood on them.

She wrapped her hand in gauze to heal her wound and ignored her family questioning what happened.

The day after, she was locked up in her room all day.

Her mother knocked on her door slightly.

"Yuki. Some of your friends are here."

The door slightly opened and two girls walked in.

They looked at Yuki with worried expressions. They saw her sitting on her bed, hugging her knees and had an emotionless face.

"Yuki-chan, are you okay?"

"......"

"Um, we heard about what happened yesterday. We're... really sorry."

She stayed silent, staring at the ground.

Her mother then walked in.

"Yuki, honey, if you want, I'll get a new dog. Maybe we can find those boys and-"

"No!"

Everyone was surprised at Yuki's sudden scream. It was loud, but cold.

"... I just wanna be alone..."


They all left her alone in the room.

She got up and stared at a cake and wrapped present on the floor.

She picked up the present and opened it. It was a small, brown leather book with blank white pages.

She set it down on her desk and picked up the box with the cake in it.

There was a knife on top. Not too big, just big enough to cut the cake.

She slowly picked it up, staring at it intensely.

Then, as if her mind was sucked into a black hole, she took the knife to her wrist, not even thinking twice about her actions.

She cut the knife deep into her wrist, blood dripping out.

She became overcome with grief, pain, and ultimate despair.

Tears... Tears fell from her eyes for the first time.

A loud, piercing sound echoed through the room. A sound that screeched through the walls, so that everyone in the house could hear.

But, everyone felt it was best to leave her alone.

She screamed in pain, in agony. Her wrist, her heart, everything broke down and she was in pain.

Once she released the knife from her wrist, she fell to her knees and cried more.
End of Flashback


When Yuki was about to start her third-year of middle school, she transferred schools.

At that school, people tried to make friends with her, but she was cold and lifeless to them.

Juniors students became scared of her, senior students were creeped out by her, and she was basically had no friends.

Everyone just ignored her completely. They were too scared to make her mad.

One look into her eyes and everyone would run away.

She's 18 now, and almost everyone still ignores her.

But, there still might be a ray of hope in her future, for as she walks home from school one day, she sees a new sweets shop being built in town.


---TBC---
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 1)
Post by: kuro808 on February 23, 2013, 01:34:10 AM
I wonder about Takeru in this whole thing, the younger brother opened up the can of worms, and I wonder how everything will develop in this story :thumbsup
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 1)
Post by: fuu_kun on February 23, 2013, 02:22:14 AM
Wow... Nice chapter there.. ! Ahh... lil yuki is so cute~~ <3 somekind i can feel what yuki feel :| please do continue :bow:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 1)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on February 23, 2013, 02:48:36 AM
Yuki Chan!!   :cry: lol Yuki is adorable :heart: i want to kill those boys no wonder she's so depressed thanx for the chapter
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 1)
Post by: cisda83 on February 23, 2013, 04:50:49 AM
Hehehe Yuki is so cute... making story about Mayuyu...

Ah... Poor Yuki.... being bully by her brother and some older boys.

She became emotionally crippled.... Ah... She cut herself....

What's going to happen to her....?

Who is going to cure her heart wound....?

I can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs


Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 1)
Post by: Lost Heaven on February 23, 2013, 09:49:31 AM
Wow!  :w00t: :w00t: :w00t:
Excellent chapter!
Poor Yukirin...  :cry: :cry: :cry:
Look forward to the next chapter!!!  XD XD XD
Title: Black Chocolate-Chapter 2
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on February 28, 2013, 03:09:00 PM
Chapter 2-The girl named "Black"


All alone after class, the young, cold-hearted girl, Yuki, is sitting alone reading a book.

No one noticed her. She'd stay in that position forever, and everyone was too scared to get close to her.

Except for a few girls.

One girl, Takajo Aki, was trying to make her her friend, so she can cheer her up.

Aki was a tomboy and admitted tsundere, but has trouble keeping up with her studies. But, she's kind-hearted and always wants to help.

However, like every other student in school, she didn't know of Yuki's retched past.

She gathered her courage and walked over to her.

"Ano... Kashiwagi..-san?"

Yuki looked up at Aki with dark, cold eyes.

Aki clenched her fist a bit and continued.

"Ano, I heard you played soccer when you were in primary school. That's pretty cool!"

"........."

"Um, the soccer club is actually looking for members, so-"

"Not intrested."

Yuki finally spoke, but her voice was cold and lifeless. Aki didn't pay attention and continued.

"I-I didn't mean that. I'm in the archery club after all-"

"Who cares?"

"Eh?"

"... I told you, I have no intrest."

Aki felt an awkward, painful silence between the two of them grow, so she decided to go.

"If you find a club you like, you should join," she said as she left the room.

Yuki didn't respond, so she just turned and left.


Later, Yuki was in the library returning the book she was reading.

She went through the shelves to find a new one and ran into one of the assistant librarians.

Her name was Kuramochi Asuka. She was shy and very scared of Yuki, but tried her best to be friendly.

"Ah, I'm sorry! Were you looking for a new book?"

"............"

"A-ah... You must have finished the first one you had."

She reached up and grabbed a book off the top shelf.

"Here. I recommend this one next."

She slowly handed her the book. Yuki didn't respond and only stared at the book.

"You really should read the series..."

"....Like I care..."

"Ah... right..."

Asuka helped her check out the book, and Yuki left soon after.


At lunch, Aki walked over to talk to Yuki again.

"Nee, Kashiwagi-san. Wanna get lunch?"

"......."

Out of impulse, Aki grabbed her hand and pulled her up.

"C'mon. Just this once, okay?"

"..........."

Aki didn't want to make Yuki even more depressed than she already was.

She wanted to know what was wrong with her, so she can find a way to help her and, at least try, to make her happy.

"....Fine."

Aki looked up and smiled.

"R-really?!"

".... Well... not like it matters."

*Giggles*

Aki dragged her out the classroom to the hallway wear they were selling bread and sandwhiches.

"What'ya like?"

"....Yakisoba."

"Okay. Oi, Unagi-inu!"

A girl wearing an apron and a hair net came over to the register.

"Aki, I thought I told you to stop calling me that!"

"Yuki, this is Kitahara Rie, AKA, Unagi-inu."

"Unagi..?"

The girl named Rie did resemble somewhat of an eel, but it was still a weird nickname for a girl like her.

And she should know. Her younger brother calls her "Black Marimokkori."


"Black." That was Yuki's new name throughout the school.

A black heart, black aura, black eyes.

It was the perfect description for her.

"Nothing in me but darkness... Pain... Black....."

"Oi, Black."

Yuki walked down the hall, ignoring the voices of a few male students.

"Black... Why is it your eyes, hair, sweater, and every other part of you is black, but your skin is so pale white?"

"Genetic problem, much, Black?"

They laughed on, until Yuki gave them a deadly glare and made them stop.

They instantly froze and she continued down the halls.

"Everyone only stops and stares at me... If only they could just ignore me. Everything would be so much better that way."


---TBC---
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 2)
Post by: cisda83 on February 28, 2013, 04:07:29 PM
Yuki turning into 'Black'

Poor Yuki....

Somebody please help Yuki....

unfroze her heart... heal her....

Thank you for the update

Can't wait to see the next

 :wub: :inlove: :heart: :love:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 2)
Post by: Elo on February 28, 2013, 04:41:25 PM
I like your fic  :thumbsup

when will mayu come  :cry: and help yuki ?

when will it be mayuki please make it mayuki :drool:

update soon :bow:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 2)
Post by: kuro808 on February 28, 2013, 05:20:17 PM
Yuki just seems stuck with her nickname, kinda hard to win over people that way but Akicha and Mocchi as characters were an interesting twist
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 2)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on February 28, 2013, 06:28:22 PM
yukirin!!  :cry: :cry:
haha rie-chan's nickname is unagi  :lol:
go aki-chan!  :thumbsup trying to cheer her up  :yep:
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 2)
Post by: fuu_kun on February 28, 2013, 06:30:37 PM
Thats remind me of "if" pv.. Me like akicha chara so much!! Aaa i miss akicha so much <3 she back to japan again.. Hemmm ._.
Title: Black Chocolate (Chapter 3)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on March 04, 2013, 11:37:24 PM
Chapter 3-Black's wish


"In this painful, dark world, I am the only source of true pain. No one else endures as much pain as me."

Yuki was sitting alone in her room, staring at her wrist.

Over the years, whenever she endured massive suffering, she'd slash a deep cut into her wrist.

Now, her wrist was almost completely covered in scars.

"If only people would let me be alone forever... I just wanna be like this."

She held the knife firmly in her hand and slowly raised it to her wrist. The tip slightly touched her skin and cut through it, creating a small hole and letting blood flow out.

"No one understands me... If I was gone, I'm sure everything would stay the same. I bet everyone would even be happy."

She started pushing the knife deeper into her wrist and tears fell from her eyes.

"No one... Nothing would change.... N-no one..would miss me."

As she started crying more, the knife cut her wrist more.

"I-I-I wish... someone would... t-try to....u-u-understand me..!"

"I'm trapped in darkness. I'm suffocated by this cold, lifeless feeling. I wanna escape, but I'm too scared."

As she releases the knife from her wrist, she breaks down in more tears.

She drops the knife on the ground and wails in despair.

After she calmed down, she walked over and opened a brown leather book. She's had it for almost 4 years and she hasn't written anything in it.

All the pages were blank. Completely white.

"White... The opposite of me. White is pure and clean, but I'm dark and tainted..."


The next day, she tried her best to stay away from everyone, but, as always, Aki would somehow drag her in.

"Kashiwagi."

"........"

"Oi. Kashiwagi."

"...Not 'Kashiwagi-san?'"

It seemed that Aki was starting to take a lighter, friendlier field with Yuki.

"Ano, Kashiwagi, you wanna come see something?"

"What?"

Aki smirked and suddenly covered Yuki's eyes.

While still blinding her, she dragged her across the hall to the gym, where a few boys were practicing basketball.

All the girls were screaming out one name at the same time.

This gave Yuki the impression that, whoever he was, he was really good at basketball and also very popular.

Aki uncovered her eyes and pointed directly at one of the boys on the court.

"Him!"

"Hm...?"

The boy Aki was pointing to was tall, but not as tall as the others, had messy hair, and a beaming smile.

His cheers came endlessly and lit up the room more.

"His name is Miyazawa Sae. He's known as the school 'Genking,' because he's always so hyper and cheers everyone up."

"........"

"You might have a chance with him, if you want, but... I'll warn you, he's got some competition."

"..............."

"Yeah.... I know."


After school, Yuki was leaving when Aki, Asuka, and Rie ran up to her.

Well... Aki was riding a scooter.

"Yo! Kashiwagi!"

"Hm?"

"A-ah, h-hi, Kashiwagi-san."

"Hey, we meet again."

"Nee, Kashiwagi, we're all going to a new sweets shop that just opened in town. Wanna come?"

They waited anxiously for Yuki's answer.

"....Sure. I don't really care..."

"Cool! Let's go! Race 'ya!"

The girls ran off, except for Yuki, as Aki speeded down on her scooter.


When they got to the shop, they were amazed at the arrangement of everything inside.

The building looked like a cute little gingerbread house and inside, it looked like a fancy antique store, but instead, almost every candy ever made filled the shelves.

"Lollipops, caramels, macaroons..."

"Pepperments, jelly beans, cotton candy..."

"Candy fruit and gummy bears..."

"And, best of all..."

"CHOCOLATE!!!"

Everyone, except Yuki, stared in awe at the candy surrounding them.

Yuki saw the welcome sign, and it seemed to have a weird saying on it.

"Everyone, eat as much candy as you dream! Itadaki~Mayuyu!"

"Mayuyu... Mayu.... Mayu?"

Just then, a young girl wearing a cute witch-style outfit walked in.

"AWW!!! HOW CUTE!!!"

"Hajimemashite. I'm the owner and assistant manager of the 'Magical Pop Sweets House,' Watanabe Mayu."

"Wah~! She's too adorable!"

"Mayu.... No, she couldn't be..."

Yuki started opening the door again.

"Oi! Where are you going?!"

"Home... This is boring...."

Mayu's smile suddenly disappeared, but reappeared again once she walked up to Yuki.

"Wait! At least take this!"

Yuki turned and saw a small, wrapped, heart-shaped candy in her hand.

"Mayuyu's Magic chocolate desu!"

Yuki stared coldly at Mayu as she closed her eyes, hoping she'd accept.

She took the candy from her hand and placed some money in it's place.

"W-wait, you don't need to..."

Yuki glared at her again and walked out in silence.

Mayu walked out and watched her leave. As she saw her disappear, a smile drew across her face.


Later that night, Yuki was in her room finishing her homework.

Her mom slowly opened the door just enough to poke her head in.

"Yuki, dear."

She turned and saw her at the door.

"Yuki, I've finished making dinner if you wanna-"

"No, thank you."

"....."

"I'm not hungry..."

Her mother quietly closed the door and left her alone.

Yuki was lying.

She just wanted time to herself. To be alone.

But, deep down inside, she wanted someone to help her. Her cold personality became too much for her.

Now, she wanted the darkness to leave.

She was staring at the blank pages in her book again, then saw the candy on her desk.

"Why do I still have this?"

She picked up the chocolate and stared at it intently.

She slowly stared untying the small red ribbon on it.

"There's no point letting it go to waste..."

She unwrapped the golden-colored wrapping and unveiled the candy inside. It was a beautifully shaped milk chocolate heart.

Without thinking, Yuki popped the chocolate in her mouth.

She bit down and tasted the sweetness of the melting chocolate inside the candy.

She gulped it all down and calmed down a bit.

"... Oishi....."


*BA-BUMP*

"Eh?"

She suddenly felt her heart pound. Hard.

*BA-BUMP*

Again, her heart let out a sudden pulse which echoed throughout her whole body.

"What was that?"

She didn't know what to make of what was happening.

Yuki wasn't allergic to chocolate. She used to eat it a lot when she was a child.

"This... can't be...."

Her body was suddenly growing weaker.

Her legs felt all wobbly, and her vision was blurring.

*BA-BUMP*

One more pulse.

Her eyes widened again, and slowly closed afterwords.

Then, she collapsed from her chair and fell to the ground, falling into a deep sleep.


---TBC---
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 3)
Post by: kuro808 on March 04, 2013, 11:44:27 PM
it is chapter 3 right? :lol:

Anyways Mayu's magical chocolate did some wonders, but I wonder if Sae works into the equation :nervous
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 3)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on March 05, 2013, 12:25:21 AM
yuki stop cutting yourself!  :cry:
yay mayu has appeared  :cow:
haha i love how you called the welcoming sign, "Everyone, eat as much candy as you dream! Itadaki~Mayuyu!" :lol:
at the end it's like mayu drugged yuki with the chocolatte  :shocked
thanx for the update :bow:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 3)
Post by: kahem on March 05, 2013, 02:05:25 AM
What the hell did Mayuyu give to Yuki?!!! lol
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 3)
Post by: fuu_kun on March 05, 2013, 05:16:13 AM
Sae as a boy? O w O mayu had killed yuki DX How could? :cry:

saemayuki ?? O w O somekind me wish mayu and sae together to cheer up yuki.. And they three become best friend.. So rare to find that moments.. *cough* update soon! Sankyu :bow:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 3)
Post by: cisda83 on March 06, 2013, 03:55:04 AM
Oh... Yuki... you slit your wrists....self inflict...

Ah... someone please help her...

Yeah... Mayu is here now... good....

I hope it's Mayuki coupling....

What is that chocolate doing to Yuki...?

I can't wait to find out what's going to happen next

Thank you for the interesting update

 :inlove: :heart: :love:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 4)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on March 08, 2013, 10:02:47 PM
I've seen your comments and you all seemed very confused, but NEVER FEAR!!! :cool1:
Your questions will finally be answered!!!

:prayers: DOUZO!!! :prayers:


Chapter 4-Black's drastic change


It was early morning, and Yuki's room was just barely light.

Yuki was collapsed on the floor, deep inside a realm of her own dreams.

Her mother slowly opened the door again.

"Yuki..."

She didn't see her daughter in her bed, and then looked and saw her feet on the floor.

"Yuki?"

She flung the door open and rushed to her.

When she saw her unconscious body, she called for her husband and Takeru.

"Honey, Takeru, come quick! Yuki's collapsed!"

"What?!"

They rushed upstairs and found her on the ground.

"Yuki, honey, wake up!"

"Yuki! YUKI!!!"

They shook her shoulders, trying to get her up, but her body didn't respond.

Then, her fingers twitched a bit and her hand slowly moved. Her hand slowly raised up, then her mom took it tightly into her own.

"Yuki? Yuki. Can you hear me?"

"...Mm...."

Yuki's eyes slowly opened and she saw her mother close to her.

Her mother felt something different in her eyes. There was light, a welcoming, warm feeling that wasn't there in so long.

"Mama..?"

"Yuki, are you alright?"

"We were worried sick. What happened?"

"...Papa. Takeru."

Takeru got up and opened the curtains.

Yuki suddenly covered her eyes from the brightness of the sun.

Then, something changed in her.

The light from the sun as it shined on her made her feel... different. She felt this way before, when she was young, and missed this feeling so much.


"Ah! Is that too bright? I'll close it-"

"N-no."

Yuki got up and stopped him from closing it.

"No..."

"Eh?"

Yuki slowly walked over and opened the window. A small basket with purple flowers growing were revealed and captured her eyes.

A golden butterfly flew over across a few flowers.

Yuki slowly took her hand and let the butterfly walk onto her finger.

She was completely captured by the beauty of such a strange creature. She actually felt happy.

"This is weird, but... But...."

"Y-Yuki?"

Yuki turned her head and did something the others haven't seen her do in so long.

She smiled. A bright, warm smile that lit up the room more.

"Darling, are you okay?"

"Yeah, Mama. I'm alright."

"Well... Yuki, it's just..you seem happy."

Yuki giggled a bit and kissed her dad's cheek.

"What's for breakfast?"

She ran downstairs, leaving the three in her room dumbfounded.

"Honey, is my daughter okay?"

"I don't know..."

"Takeru?"

"How should I know? She hasn't called you guys 'Papa' and 'Mama' in years."


Downstairs, Yuki was happily eating her breakfast, which, by the way, was almost completely covering her plate.

"Mm~! Oishii!"

"Ah... You seem pretty hungry, Yuki."

"Well, she did skip dinner last night."

Suddenly, Ryota started poking one of his sausages in Yuki's face.

"Marimokkori! You're gonna choke, no one can eat faster than me!"

Yuki snatched the sausage from his hand and held it in front of him.

"Hai. Ah~~~"

"Eh?"

Yuki was feeding Ryota the sausage.

He hesitated a bit, but ate it.

"Eat your meat properly. You need the strength."

"Nuh-uh! No one can beat me! Not even you, Marimokkori!"

"I'll beat both of you if you don't hurry and eat," their dad joked. They saw the clock, almost 6:59.

Ryota started eating faster, but Yuki was stuffing more down.

She held her mouth closed as she ran to the door, still holding the glass of orange juice and a piece of toast.

"Y-Yuki?"

Yuki gulped down the orange juice and threw the cup over to her dad. He panicked, but luckily Takeru caught it before it fell.

"Itekimasu~!"

She popped the toast in her mouth and ran out the door.

The rest of her family were so confused. Why was Yuki suddenly acting so cheerful and bright after she's become so dark?

They ran over to the window and saw Yuki getting on her bicycle.

"Honey... Is there something wrong with our daughter?"

"I... don't know...."


Asuka was walking up to the bus stop, checking her phone.

Out the corner of her eye, she saw someone racing down on their bike.

She panicked a bit, and ended up crashing into her.

When they fell down, she got a better look and realized it was Yuki.

"No. No no no! This is bad!!!"

She imagined Yuki in rage, beating her up and threatening her. She whimpered in fear.

When Yuki got up, her bangs covered her eyes, which scared Asuka more.

Then, she slowly raised her head and looked at her.

"Ah! Kuramochi."

"E....?"

"Kuramochi, ohayou!"

Her happy eyes and bright smile tugged Asuka's heart. But, she couldn't figure out why. What happened that made Yuki seem nice now?

They both got up, dusting off their uniforms.

"K-Ka-Kashiwagi-san, I'm SO sorry."

"Don't be. I didn't see you, so it's my fault."

"Eh? She's... apologizing?"

"Hey, let's go to school together, 'kay?"

"Uh, no thanks... I'm taking the bus today."

Yuki frowned a bit, but then smiled again and said, "Okay. Your loss," and rode off on her bike.

Asuka just stared dumbly at her.


At school, Aki was riding her scooter and rode up to Asuka.

"Yo, Kuramochi!"

"Ah, Takajo-san..."

She parked her scooter and walked up beside her.

"What's wrong? You look a little pale."

"Um... did something happen to Kashiwagi-san?"

"Hm?"

"She was acting..different this morning."

They then saw Yuki ride in and park her bike. She was still cheery with a bright smile on her face. She was even humming a song.

"C'mon. She can't be acting THAT different."

As Yuki walked up, she saw Aki and smiled.

"Ah, Aki-cha!"

"Hm? 'Aki-cha'?"

Aki stopped in her tracks and stared at her.

"Ohayou, Aki-cha."

"O-ohayo..."

Now, Aki was just as surprised as Asuka. Yuki was acting...nice? Why?

At class, Aki approached Yuki again who was happily humming a song while reading her book.

"A-ano, Kashiwagi..."

"Hm?"

"..K-Kashiwagi, I, uh..."

"'Kashiwagi'?"

Her sudden response startled Aki a bit. She couldn't have really gotten amnesia.

"Why are you still calling me that?"

"...Because, it's your name."

"I know that, but..."

Yuki got up and patted Aki's shoulder.

"Call me 'Yuki' next time, 'kay?"

As you could expect, Aki was completely dumbfounded and only sweatdropped and said, "Uh, okay..."

As the teacher came in and started class, he announced that their class was going to have a new student.

The young girl walked in and everyone fell head over heels from cuteness.

The transfer student was none other than Watanabe Mayu, the owner of the town's new candy store.

After being introduced, Yuki ran up to greet Mayu first.

"Watanabe-san, remember me? I visited your candy store yesterday."

"Ah, yes! I remember you. Yuki-chan, was it?"

The other students came up spurting random questions at Mayu.

"But, wow, owning a candy store. I NEED to visit that place!"

"Yeah, you should. I ate one of the chocolates, they're so yummy!"

As the other students laughed, some students were still a bit confused about Yuki's behavior.

"Y'know, Kashiwagi-san, you seem pretty happy today."

"Yeah, this isn't like you at all."


Suddenly, something shot through Yuki's mind.

"Wait... they're right. I don't normally act like this. So, why am I..?"

Yuki gasped and grabbed Mayu's wrist, suddenly dragging her across the hallway. She screeched to a hault in a place only Yuki knew about.

"Yuki-chan?"

"What did you do? What did you do to make me act like this?!"

"Y-Yu-Yuki-chan, calm down."

"Calm down?! Calm down-! I don't wanna calm down!"

"Yuki-chan, if you let me explain-"

"Explain? This is weird! How do you explain me acting like this?!?! How do you-?!?!?!"

*Th-WHACK*

Mayu suddenly whacked Yuki's head with a paper fan that seemed to appear out of nowhere. Yuki went absolutely silent.

"...Where did that come from?"

"Yuki-chan, listen carefully."

She gulped for a brief moment and firmly nodded.

Mayu tiptoed up to Yuki's ear and whispered to her.

"I'm a witch."

"Eh?!"


---TBC---
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 4)
Post by: kuro808 on March 08, 2013, 10:18:13 PM
I'd imagine mayuyu prancing away after saying she's a witch XD

Posted by the mento Hawaiian

Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 4)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on March 09, 2013, 01:15:11 AM
its good to see yuki's happy  :yep:
i would also be the first person to greet mayu if she was a transfer student in my school :inlove:
"Mayu suddenly whacked Yuki's head with a paper fan that seemed to appear out of nowhere." I love this bit, magical paper fan, classic :lol:
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
want more! :bow:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 4)
Post by: -gibson-mayulover on March 09, 2013, 05:01:44 AM
I don't know why but this chapter makes me smile  :D
I love it  :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub:
please keep it up
looking forward for the next chapter :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 4)
Post by: Elo on March 09, 2013, 08:31:45 AM
this chapter is so nice and makes me happy  :P :roll: :D

I am happy that mayu came she will help her for sure and of course will fall for her hehe  :twisted: :D

please update soon :bow:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 4)
Post by: Chanaline on March 09, 2013, 09:38:57 AM
i don't know why but it make me smile like other....

It was funny... Everyone is confused by Yuki's behavior. :rofl: Even her parents. :rofl:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 4)
Post by: cisda83 on March 09, 2013, 11:12:57 AM
Ah... Mayu gave magical food to Yuki....

That result in the change in personality of Yuki... more like the opposite of her previous character...

What's going to happen next to Yuki and Mayu?

I can't wait to find out

Thank you for the interesting update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 4)
Post by: leEwẬy on March 10, 2013, 05:37:57 AM
I have just read all your chap in this fic  XD
And what I can say is This fic was awesome :w00t:
I'm a Mayuki's crazy fan :lol:
So Mayu is a witch :roll:
Yuki'll be helped by Mayu :inlove:
Hope you'll update soon :)
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 4)
Post by: DC2805 on March 10, 2013, 05:38:42 PM
Yuki really needs a witch to give her fast healing (of her heart)!  XD
Title: Black Chocolate (Chapter 5)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on March 16, 2013, 01:12:16 AM
Chapter 5-Open up your black heart


"Say what? A-a witch?"

Mayu's sudden, strange confession shocked her.

"What did she mean by 'witch'? Like a witch with potions and hexes?"

"Mm-hm. I'm a witch from a different world from here."

"Huh?"

"Look, I'm not evil. But, if someone tries to hurt you, I won't forgive them."

Yuki was too confused to follow anything, and her face turned blood red.

"It was my duty to come here and make someone happy."

"Huh?! What the hell?"

*TH-WHACK*

"Again?!"

"Yuki-chan, stop being so cold!"

Again, Yuki went silent. She calmed down and waited for Mayu to speak again.

"Anyways, I had to find the coldest, loneliest, saddest person here and find a way to make them happy. Then, I finally found you."

"Eh?"

"Compared to everyone I've ever met, you had the coldest heart, because you lived in the darkest past. And, because of that, I'll make sure your heart will be healed!"

"B-but..."


Before she knew it, Mayu and Yuki were standing in front of the bulletin board filled with club sign-up forms.

"..W-what is this for?"

"You need to make some friends. I think if you join one of the clubs, you should find plenty of people who'll like you."

Yuki had these deeply intense thoughts of screaming in Mayu's face and returning to her cold life, but if she tried, she'd start feeling sick or Mayu would whack her with the fan.

"C'mon. At least sign up for ONE."

Mayu pushed her foward a bit, and Yuki gulped loudly.

She was face-to-face with the forms, staring intensly at all of them.

Then, again, that strange feeling that rose within her this morning came and took over her. She felt her heart pound and her curiosity arouse.

Unconsciously, she took the pen and signed her name on one of the forms.

"Ah! That looks fun!"

Yuki realized the sheet she signed was for show choir auditions.

"Glee club?"

"Why'd you choose that?"

She ran through her thoughts and smiled a bit.

"..I...love singing..and music.. I wanna be an idol someday..."

"Mayu thinks you'll be a great idol, Yukirin!"

Yuki's eyes widened when she heard that.

"Yukirin." Only Takeru called her that as a child.

"H-how do you know that nickname?"

"Eh? I just thought it sounded cute. Has someone called you that before?"

Yuki looked down and blushed a bit.

"..Only..Takeru-nii."

"Ah..."


Yuki and Mayu were both staring at the form. They both had their names signed on it.

"Auditions are next week, so we need to train 'til then."

"Un..."

Then, Yuki's "black" side kicked in again.

"Keh! Wait a minute!!! This is YOUR fault!"

"Oh no..."

"You. If you hadn't cursed me with your.... and the.... What did you do anyway?"

Mayu smiled brightly and winked.

"Remember the chocolate?"

"Eh?"

Flashback

"Wait! At least take this. Mayuyu's Magic chocolate desu!"

End


Yuki was dombfounded. She was tricked so easily by Mayu into having the spell put on her. And, by candy, no less.

"All the candies that I specially make have different magic powers in it. The chocolate you ate melted the darkness and cold emotions out of your heart."

"Ehh?!"

"I know it's a bit strange, but it's the only way I know how."

"Like hell!"


Next classes
Mayu was in home ec.(cooking) and Yuki was in art


"Damn... Why am I doing this..?"

"Kashiwagi-san."

"Hm?"

She turned her head and suddenly saw a ridiculous hand drawn sketch of a fat school boy in her face.

Under normal circumstances, Yuki would get mad and rip the paper to shreds, scaring them.

But, when she saw it, to their surprise...

"Hahahahahahahaha!!! What IS that?! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!"

She was cracking up laughing. Over-reacting , in fact, that everyone in the classroom and in the home ec. room could hear her cackles.

Over at the home ec. room, Mayu turned her head once she heard Yuki's excessive laughter.

"Yukirin...?"

"She seems to be having fun. ..I wonder what happened to her... Kashiwagi..."

One of Mayu's classmates, Ota Aika, was helping her cook and heard Yuki's laughs, too.

"This isn't like her, y'know. She's always so dark."

"..I can tell. I kinda met her yesterday."

"...I heard she's had a rough past. What could've happened?"

Mayu only stared down the hallway until Yuki's laughter calmed down and stopped.

"Hmm..."


In class, Mayu and Aika were making tea. Mayu selected a recipe for a drink called "Milk Tea" and found ways to make it her own.

"Uwaa~ That smells good, Mayu-chan!"

"Now, add some o' this..."

She dropped in a few of her magic potions, saying it was flavoring, and mixed it good.

"Done!"

"Uwaa! I wanna drink!"

When Aika was about to reach for the laddle, Mayu slapped the wooden spoon on her wrist.

"Hey, what was that for?"

"I made this tea specially for ONE person and ONE person alone."

"Mou... Mayu-chan..."


The two girls suddenly heard a crash from across the hall and Mayu instantly ran to the other room.

"Damnit, be careful!!"

"I-I'm sorry..."

"Kashiwagi, ever since yesterday, you've been acting like a total airhead."

"Eh?!"

The male student looked around at everyone, but they looked away, not wanting to get involved.

"Right?! She's been acting like this since last night, right?! This is too weird!!! Kashiwagi, what the hell happened to you?!?!?!"

"Nothing's wrong with me!"

"Yeah, right! You really are a total weirdo, Kashiwagi!"

Yuki looked like she was about to cry, and it broke Mayu's heart to see her let herself suffer.

"C'mon, show me what 'ya got. Show me you're tough."

"I-I..."

He started throwing punches at her, and even though Yuki dodged, she was still very frightened.

He backed her up against the wall and grabbed her wrist, the one she cut so many times. He tightened his grip and Yuki started crying.

"S-s-s-s-st-st-stop-p... S-st-st-st-stop..p-p-pl-pleas-s-s-se..."

"Is that really your weak spot, Kashiwagi?"

When he pulled her sleeve down, he saw all the scars and backed away in fear. Everyone in classroom stared at her wrist with fear and disgust.

Mayu rushed up and saw the scar covered wrist.

"Why didn't you tell me?!"

She grabbed her arm and pulled her to the home ec. room, grabbed a bottle of her milk tea, and ran into an empty classroom.

"Mayu, why are you...?"

Mayu put a finger against her lips and silenced her.

"I'm sorry if this will hurt. I hurt you because I care about you."

She drank the milk tea, not swallowing, and carefully placed her lips to Yuki's wrist.

Yuki started to feel a weird sensation in her wrist. Mayu was transferring the tea into her scars.

The heat in her eyes from this sad emotion in her took over and she couldn't keep her balance.

She was struggling to stay up and was groaning in pain.

"Yuki, please. Just a little longer."

Yuki's eyes were closed tight, trying to hold back the tears.

A stream of the milk tea ran down her wrist and her scars were slowly disappearing. After all of them were gone, Mayu slowly released her grip and parted from her wrist.

Yuki fell to her knees and held her healed wrist.

Mayu saw she wanted to cry, but was strongly resisting.

"It's okay..."

Yuki looked up at her with pain and sadness in her eyes.

"Let it out. It's fine..."

Yuki didn't resist the tears anymore, she cried and cried, hugging Mayu tightly.

Mayu rubbed her back and patted her head, softly whispering her words of comfort. Yuki's tears were overflowing, as if all the pain was released all at once.

"..Why? Why are you here?"

Mayu pulled out a dark bronze star from her pocket.

"It is my final test as a witch. In order to turn the star gold and bright, I must grant happiness to the most miserable person. I chose you, Yuki. I want you to be happy."

"..W-what?"

"You've been tortured your whole life. I want to lift this pain off you for good and bring you the happiness and joy you once had back. That's why I gave you the chocolate and healed your wrist."

Yuki broke the hug and wiped her tears away.

"Really? You care about me this much."

"Of course. I promise, I'll heal your heart no matter what."

Mayu hugged her again, and Yuki accepted it.

"Thank you, Mayu."


---TBC---
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 5)
Post by: kuro808 on March 16, 2013, 01:30:14 AM
More stuff she has hidden within her own realm :lol:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 5)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on March 16, 2013, 02:20:08 AM
awww yuki  :cry: i'll kill that boy for scaring yuki :angry:
yay mayu healed yuki's cuts on her wrist, thank goodness :deco:
haha poor aika chan she cant have the drink :lol:
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 5)
Post by: cisda83 on March 16, 2013, 09:00:11 AM
Getting more interesting....

Yuki is lucky to have Mayu looking out for her....

yeah... Yuki, you deserve to be happy

Thank you for the update

Can't wait to see the next

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 5)
Post by: Chanaline on March 16, 2013, 12:34:19 PM
I want to cry see(read) Yuki like that. heartbroken! Heartbroken! :cry:


But Mayu is here Yay!!!

Your fanfic is very interesting!!!!
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 5)
Post by: K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS on March 16, 2013, 01:34:45 PM
Who the hell is that dude who tried to hurt my babie?!???

Just come here and you'll enjoy you death!!!


Anybody who finds him call me

my phone number is **********


D'awwwwh Mayuki moment <3<3
Update soon
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 5)
Post by: qweakb on March 16, 2013, 03:49:36 PM
Who the hell is that dude who tried to hurt my babie?!???

Just come here and you'll enjoy you death!!!


Anybody who finds him call me

my phone number is **********


D'awwwwh Mayuki moment <3<3
Update soon

lol.. can i join? haha

nice story.. :)

I love mayuki <3
Title: Black Chocolate (Chapter 6)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on March 26, 2013, 03:24:28 PM
Chapter 6-Pitch black fear


AKB48 - Yuki Kashiwagi_Flying Get (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wT6xcfJPMas#ws)

"Yukirin! Yukirin! Yukirin!"

Everyone was cheering her name. The light of the glowsticks filled the audience.

They were all in perfect sync.

Yuki was singing in perfect harmony with the music.

GIRA GIRA youshanai taiyou ga
 tsuyobi de teritsukeru on the beach
 unubore ondo wa kyuujoushou
 ochitsukanai no wa manatsu no saga da ne

futrari me ga aeba
 naze ka sorasu no ni
 boku wo mata sugu miru
 kimitte moshikashite moshikashite

FURAINGU GETTO
 boku wa hitoashi saki ni
 kimi no kimochi
 ima sugu te ni ireyou ka
 FURAINGU GETTO
 nani ka iwareru mae ni
 kokoro no uchi BIBITTO
 kanjiru mama ni
 dare to ite mo
 hohoemi kata de
 kimi ga boku ni koi wo koi wo shiteru no wa teppan
 FURAINGU GETTO
 dakara dare yori hayaku
 kimi no HAATO no subete boku no mono
 suki dakara RABU.FURAGE!

FURAINGU GETTO
 boku wa hitoashi saki ni
 kimi no kimochi
 ima sugu te ni ireyou ka
 FURAINGU GETTO
 nani ka iwareru mae ni
 kokoro no uchi BIBITTO
 kanjiru mama ni
 dare to ite mo
 hohoemi kata de
 kimi ga boku ni koi wo koi wo shiteru no wa teppan
 FURAINGU GETTO
 dakara dare yori hayaku
 kimi no HAATO no subete boku no mono
 suki dakara RABU.FURAGE!


"YUKRIN!!!!!!! YUKIRIN!!!!!!!!!!!! YUKIRIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

As she waved to the audience with a bright smile on her face, the heel of her shoe broke and she fell off the stage.


Yuki suddenly landed on the ground and woke up.

"Eh?!"

She was dreaming and fell off her chair. Mayu and Aki were standing behind her.

"Yuki, are you okay?"

"You looked like you were having a nice dream, Yukirin."

Yuki sat up and blushed a bit, nodding very small so that they wouldn't see.

"What were you dreaming?"

"..Mm, w-well... I remember I ate an orange flavored candy you gave me and..."

She then realized what happened and switched to her black mode. She grabbed Mayu's shirt and held her from the collar.

"MAYUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!"

"C'mon Yukirin... It was a NICE one, right?"

Yuki's eyes went soft and she looked at Aki. She probably didn't know what she meant, so she released Mayu from her grasp.

"Right..." she said in a soft, but annoyed tone.


Later, the two girls went into the auditourium to let Yuki practice her singing.

"Is it really alright to be in here?"

"Don't worry, Yukirin. NO ONE is coming. Trust me."

"Last time I did that, I ate a chocolate that made me turn into a..."

"So, let's hear it!"

Mayu poofed up a radio and started to play a tape on it.

Yuki could recognize it and was about to sing. She closed her eyes and took a deep breath.

But, when she opened them and imagined the crowd, she became scared.

Yuki hadn't felt scared ever since the incident that made her turn black. But, now, Yuki was taken over by a bad case of stage fright that was reawakened in her. She didn't volunteer to go up front to classrooms, but this was different.

She missed her cue and stood there like a statue until Mayu stopped the music.

"Yukirin?"

Her lips were trembling and she couldn't speak.

"Yukirin~!"

"........I-I...........I c-c...can't............."

"Eh?"

She shook her head and knelt down to the ground, curled up like a little ball.

"I can't!! I can't do it!!!

She started crying from the fear, so Mayu came close to her and comforted her.


Later, Yuki was walking out of the library alone, when she bumped into someone.

"Oh my god, I'm so sorry! I didn't mean..." She looked up and saw what she thought was the most handsome boy she'd ever seen.

Of course, it was her first time seeing him up-close and she never had true emotion before.

But, his handsomeness seemed to stand out from the rest.

She got a closer look and recognized him. The boy in front of her was none other than the school's star basketball player, and most popular ikemen, Miyazawa Sae.

"M-Mi-Miyazawa-kun! I-I-I'm sorry!"

He only smiled and patted her head a bit.

"Don't worry 'bout it. I didn't see you coming, so it's kinda both our faults."

Yuki giggled, then Sae help her back onto her feet. She then realized Sae was wearing a jersey and carrying a basketball under his arm.

"You going to practice?"

"Yeah, just came from changing. Wanna come watch?"

"Ah, can't. I need practice on my singing. I'm joining the glee club."

"Oo~ I'll have to come watch," he said as he tickled her a bit and ran off. "See ya, Yukirin!"

Yuki was suddenly taken by surprise when someone she just met called her that.

When she turned and saw him, he waved goodbye one last time and ran off. She smiled.


Auditions started after school, and Yuki was still nervous.

She peeked out to see the audience(which was just the other MANY members of show choir) and got a little scared.

"Yukirin!"

"Ah, Mayu... Why are you here?"

"Did you learn the lyrics to the song?"

Not answering her and changing the subject was rude, but Yuki only nodded dumbly.

Mayu looked out and turned to Yuki with worried eyes.

"Say... how did you get stage fright?"

Yuki's eyes widened in shock at the question, but she dragged Mayu farther backstage to tell her.

"When I was young, I had to do an oral report for school... But, the students wouldn't listen and kept teasing me. They called me the worst things and, next thing I knew, I froze. I couldn't go up in front of people ever since."

Mayu smiled and handed her a pack of gummies. One of them she took out was a strawberry.

"Hmm~ What now?" she asked in a black tone.

"Do you wanna get rid of your stage fright?"

Yuki then realized she was trying to help. She took the gummy and popped it in her mouth.

Once she gulped it down, she did a few pre-performance rituals in front of a mirror and slapped her cheeks a few times and walked out.

"Good luck."

"Un."

She walked out on stage and shook her hands a bit to relieve stress.

"Number 11, Kashiwagi Yuki."

"Yes, uh, Kashiwagi-san, what will you be singing for us?"

"I'm gonna sing a song I wrote called 'Shortcake'."

"Well, this should be interesting. Let's hear it."

Mayu started to play the music, and she also looked over and saw Sae, Aki, and Asuka watching her and giving her support.

She closed her eyes and took a deep breath. Once she opened them, she smiled and let her heart take hold of the melody.

Before she knew it, she was singing flawlessly, with no fear.

Yuki Kashiwagi [short cake] AKB48 . (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-VtvhEnVq68#ws)

kodomo no koro kara
 kyoudai no you ni
 issho ni otona ni natte kita yo ne
 SHOOTOKEEKI no ue
 ICHIGO de kenkashite
 futari wo kikazuni
 toukou shita

mawari no tomodachi ga
 kekkonshi hajimete
 shiawasette
 chikaku ni aru to
 ima ni natte omotta yo

suki to ietara rakunanoni
 iji wo hatte ita zutto
 katakuna ni
 te mo furezu ni...
 koi ni taishou ni naranai
 osonajimi datta kedo
 sukoshizutsu
 nanika ga kawatta
 mune ga DOKIDOKI shinakute mo
 futo HOtto suru you na
 renai mo arutte kizuita yo

koi ni taishou ni naranai
 osonajimi datta kedo
 sukoshizutsu
 nanika ga kawatta
 mune ga DOKIDOKI shinakute mo
 futo HOtto suru you na
 renai mo arutte kizuita yo


Everyone stood from their seats and applauded loudly. You could even hear Sae and Aki's cheering from across the school.

Yuki felt so happy watching them cheer for her. She was also relieved that her stage fright had gone away.

She bowed and went backstage to Mayu and hugged her tight.

"Thank you so much!"

"Eh?"

She pushed away and smiled.

"You. The candy. It's all worth it. It was amazing. Thank you!"

She hugged her again, then Mayu suddenly acted dumb and pushed her away.

"'Candy'? You mean the gummy? I didn't put anything in it."

"Huh?"

Mayu gave her an akanbe and Yuki switched to black mode and grabbed her shirt again, growling.

"Mayu~~~~~~!!!!"

"Yukirin!"

She heard Sae's voice and returned to normal, whipping her head back to see the three girls behind her.

"Kashiwagi-san, that was beautiful!"

"Nice job out there, sport! Hehe!"

Unlike the others, Sae ran up and hugged Yuki tight.

"You were amazing, Yukirin!"

Yuki felt happy feeling Sae's warm, and hugged him back.

But, then, she suddenly felt something strange. She could define what it was, but the problem was...

The person she was hugging was Sae, right?

Sae suddenly broke the hug and saw her confused expression.

"What's the matter, Yukirin?"

"Ah..nothing!"

Mayu pulled on her arm and signaled her that she had to go.

"Right. See ya guys later!"

They all waved goodbye and, as they left the auditorium and went home, Yuki couldn't help but think of what just happened.

"...That was strange..."

She just decided to shrug and forget about it.


---TBC---
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 6)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on March 26, 2013, 03:33:28 PM
yukirin is a great singer :twothumbs
poor yukirin :cry: being teased is the worst :angry:
sae-chan... :catglare: you can hug yukirin all you want but get any closer and im sure mayu will come up with some kinda sweet to do something about it :twisted:
though its nice to see yuki getting more hugs and feeling happy :yep:
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 6)
Post by: cisda83 on March 27, 2013, 08:01:56 AM
Yuki's sound very good... nice MV....

I like the songs....

Yuki kept changing mode to Black every now and then....

Eh... Yuki is going to be with Sae... not with Mayu....

Ah... I hope it's with Mayuki....

Anyhow... great story....

Can't with to see the next chapter

Thank you for the lovely update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 6)
Post by: Chanaline on March 27, 2013, 01:01:17 PM
Thnak you for this chapter I was waiting for it  :P

No Sae comes and it is like he will disturb Mayu and Yuki relationship...
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 6)
Post by: kahem on March 28, 2013, 01:34:16 AM
Oh don't tell me Sae is... hehe
Title: Black Chocolate (Chapter 7)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on April 05, 2013, 07:11:39 PM
:omamori: 300 posts anniversary!!!! :omamori:
Big :heart: "Thank you"s :heart: to everyone who's supported me so far! :cool1:
Also, thanks for commenting on "Black Chocolate" :shy2:

@kahem: About that... we'll just have to wait and see! :hehehe: :glasses:

:catglare: ..Anyways, let's go!!! :cathappy:


Chapter 7-Black's strange family


Yuki's been looking unusually down for the past three days, and Mayu's been noticing her increasing sleeping habits during class.

Flashback

"Now, who can answer this?"

"............"

"Kashiwagi?"

"...Huh?"

*Snores*

"Kashiwagi?"

"..Oi. Yukirin. Wake up."

"...Eh..?"

"KASHIWAGI!!!!"

"Ah, y-yes!"

*Laughs*

*Blushes*

"Oh no..."

End of Flashback


Mayu had to do something to help.

She slowly tip-toed over to her desk and tapped her shoulder a bit.

"Yukirin... Wake up, Yukirin..."

"..Huh? Mayu?"

Yuki rubbed her eyes and raised her head.

"What's wrong?"

"I'm worried about you, Yukirin. You need to get some sleep."

"Ah, sorry. It's my little brother. *Yawn* He's been keeping me up all night. Dad was busy with work and Mom wasn't home, so I had to help take care of him."

"Don't you have an older brother?"

"Yeah, but he has college."

Mayu crossed her arms and thought a bit, then she got something.

"How about I help you?"

"Eh? Is that alright?"

"Of course! I love little kids."

"Ufufu, okay. I'll walk you over to my house."

Mayu nodded and patted Yuki's head. As she was about to walk out, she bumped into someone.

"Ah, sorry there, cutie!"

"Eh?"

The person she bumped into was Sae.

"Oh, no. It's my fault."

"Hehehe, you're so cute~, I could just eat you up!"

Mayu blushed a bit as Sae gently petted her head and walked off with a bright smile.

"..Yukirin... ..Wh-who was that?"

"Oh, him. That's Miyazawa Sae-kun."

"Sae...-kun...."

Mayu's face was blood red and her heart was beating so fast. She never saw someone so ikemen.

"Kakkoii..."


Yuki walked Mayu over to her house, telling her the countless, crazy stories of her younger brother.

They finally got to the house and approached the door.

"Now... be careful, 'kay?"

*Nods*

Yuki opened the door and tiptoed in.

Then, she got tackled by her little brother, Ryota, from her feet.

"Kyaa!!!"

"Yukirin, are you okay?"

"Haha~! Gotcha, Marimokkori!"

Yuki got up and rubbed the back of her head.

"Mou~ Ryota!!!"

Ryota gave her an akanbe and ran off. He picked up a toy plane and made plane-like sounds.

Mayu's eyes were widened big and focused on the small, but wild boy.

She's never seen a child act this crazy.

"Vroom vroom vroom!!! Catch me if you can, Black Marimokkori!!!!"

"'Marimokkori'?"

"Mou~ Where did he come up with that nickname, anyways?"

"'Marimokkori'?"

"Ever since he got the little marimokkori doll, he's called me that forever. How do I even resemble the thing?!?!?!?!"

"'Marimokkori'?"

"MAYU!!!"

Mayu suddenly snapped out of her trance and looked at Yuki, who was so angry, her face was tomato red.

"Are you even listening to me?!"

"Ah, sorry, Yukirin. What did you say?"

"Argh, nevermind!" she said as she slapped the ground and got up. "Ryota, where are you?!"


The two girls looked all around the house for the little runaway.

But, he was no where to be found. And, they literally checked EVERYWHERE!!!

The kitchen cabinets, the bathrooms, under the beds, even Yuki's closet!

But...nowhere.

Then, it hit her.

"There's only one more place I know he could be. The only place we haven't been near in years."

She whispered to Mayu, then they both started forming an idea.

But to do it, they needed one more person.

Yuki picked up the phone and dialed a number.

Silence....

"Hello?"

"Takeru... Come home. We need help with Takeru."

"Eh? But--"

"Don't you have break soon?!"

"....Okay. I'll be right there."

She hung up and turned to Mayu with a clever, almost devious smile on her face.

"Now, one more thing..." She whispered to Mayu again.

A cheeky, crocked smile appeared on her face and she nodded.


Ryota was hiding somewhere that would, of course, be the LAST place for anyone to look.

The dog house that belong to the dog Yuki and the others used to own.

"They'll never find me... I win again, Marimokkori..."

Then, a small bag flew out and landed in front of the dog house.

Ryota, completely confused, slowly crawls out, to make sure he's unseen, and takes the bag. He then rushes back in the dog house.

He unties the string on the bag and opens it. Inside are many colorful jelly beans.

"Uwaa! Oishii sou~!!!"

He popped three or four in him mouth, then practically devoured every last one.

Then, he heard a loud bang outside.

"What the heck?!"

When he popped his head out, the backyard had turned into a battlefield made out of candy. It was Ryota's dream come true.

*Mayu's explanation time*
"Hi kids, Mayu here. :heart: See, the jellybeans that Ryota made are my special magic fruity-patootie jelly beans. Whenever kids eat them, the dreams and wishes in their hearts are displayed in front of them. Me and Yukirin will use this to our advantage. :twisted:
Bye~ :cathappy: "

"This is...AWESOME!!!!!!"

His sister, Yuki, pulled him out of the battlegrounds and into her specially made safety area.

"Yuki-nee?"

"Ryota, you must help me."

"What's happening?"

"It's Take-nii. After he returned from college, he wanted to make us something sweet. But, there was an accident."

"What?"

*ROAR*

The two looked up a bit and saw a giant candy monster. He had cotton candy clothing, candy corn claws, and peppermint eyes and jellybean jewelry.

*Mayu's explanation time*
"Hi, it's Mayu-chan again. :wave: Again, only Ryota can see this. Takeru is actually wearing cardboard armor we made beforehand."

*ROAR*

"What do we do?"

"The only way to return him to normal is to retrieve the "King size Hershey's" chocolate bar from his neck."

She pointed at the chocolate bar, wrapped around a string necklace on him.

"Think you can do it?"

"Un! I can do it!"

Yuki held his shoulder.

"And, I'm here for you."

He nodded, then Yuki handed him a dart gun filled with gumballs. They started shooting the candy monster.

*Mayu here. He's not really getting hurt. Takeru-kun is very strong.*

The monster threw a large ball of cotton candy and broke the safe area.

The two started sprinting toward him, shooting him.

Yuki then took a candy cane branch and cut the monster, which made it only split in half.

Ryota tackled one and started munching on the head, while Yuki shot the other one down, dead.

"Yatta!"


"Yuki-nee~!!!"

The monster threw him off his back. Then, it threw a gumdrop at Yuki.

Like a grenade, it exploded into jelly and Yuki fell unconscious.

"Yuki-nee!"

Ryota ran over to the collapsed girl. Yuki's eyes opened slightly and she held her little brother's hand.

"No, nee-chan. Don't die. I promise, I won't call you Marimokkori ever again!"

"..Ryota... Please, be strong... Do it for me..."

Her eyes closed and she passed out, dead. Tears swelled up in Ryota's eyes.

"..Yuki... YUKI-NEE~~~~!!!!!"

*Mayu's explanation time*
"Yes... I'm sorry. Yuki is not dead. This is pure acting. She wanted to teach him a lesson for calling her that for so long, but..."
*Sees Ryota crying*
"But, it looks like I have to do something. :sweatdrop: "

"Please, don't cry child."

Suddenly, Ryota looked in the tree and saw Mayu, wearing a beautiful white dress and angel wings.

*Sniff* "M-Ma-Mayu-neesan?"

"Nope! I'm the guardian angel of your sister."

She flew down and landed on her feet. She patted the young boy's head and wiped away his tears.

"Please... *Sniff* Help Yuki."

"Okay. But, listen, I have to be kept a secret, so I can protect Yuki, so don't tell her, 'kay."

"Un. Okay."

Mayu knelt down and put a small candy in Yuki's mouth. Then, she flew off and disappeared.

A miracle came. Yuki's eyes opened.

"..Ryota? I'm okay?"

Ryota smiled, still crying, and hugged her.

"Nee-chan!!! I'll never tease you with that silly nickname again! I promise you, Yuki-nee-chan!!!"

*Mayu's explanation time*
"Hey, I used my magic to take the form of an angel in front of Ryota, but the candy was not magic. It was just a plain cherry flavored candy.
Again, YUKI DIDN'T DIE! :grin: "

Yuki smiled and hugged him back.

"Promise?"

"Yes!"

"Then, let's get him! I have an idea..."

She whispered something into Ryota's ear. He smiled and nodded.

They both ran around the monster to confuse him.

Then, once he was dizzy enough, Yuki shot the gumballs at the candy bar, unwrapping the paper.

Ryota jumped in font of her, allowing her to pick him up and throw him.

He tackled the monster and grabbed the bar with his mouth, eating it.

As they fell to the ground, everything turned back to normal.

"Are?"

"Hey, Ryota, what are you doing?"

"Nee-chan! We did it!"

Yuki passed him a peace sign, and he reflected back.

Takeru, in a heat of flames, became like a general and stood up straight and stiff.

"ATTENTION!!!"

Yuki and Ryota instantly reacted, and mimicked his pose.

"LISTEN UP, SOLDIERS!!! OUR CHEF HAS GOT A HOT BROILING POT OF HOT COCOA AND WE NEED TO EAT!!! DO YOU HEAR ME?!?!?!?!?!"

"YES SIR!!!"

Mayu pops her head out from the door.

"Calm down, you guys. It's almost ready, by the way."

"'YA HEAR THAT, SOLDIERS?! REPORT FOR DUTY!!!!"

"YES SIR!!!!"


And, well let's say it gets crazier from there...
To Be Continued :lol: :P
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 7)
Post by: kuro808 on April 05, 2013, 08:13:25 PM
 :lol: Mayu's asides

Yukirin is going through a lot with Mayu but she cannot have everything to help her
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 7)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on April 05, 2013, 09:21:31 PM
omg what devious plan  :shocked
haha it's so funny though, that will teach him not to tease yuki anymore :lol:
mayu as an angel  :heart: :yep: :twothumbs
i want that candy though, if it makes dreams come true and we ate it, we could meet akb48!! :cathappy:
thannx for the update :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 7)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on April 05, 2013, 09:42:49 PM
i want that candy though, if it makes dreams come true and we ate it, we could meet akb48!! :cathappy:
Actually, the candy only takes people's dreams and projects them in real life in their mind. It doesn't exactly make them come true, but it has that feel.

But, yeah, I really wanna go to an AKB concert the next time their in America! (I wanna see Sayaka!!!! :heart: :heart: :heart: )
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 7)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on April 06, 2013, 12:37:04 AM
awww shame, but yeah i want to meet mayuyu, im saving up and planning to see them next year in japan :yep:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 7)
Post by: gek geki on April 06, 2013, 08:14:25 AM
SAE???
DONT TELL IT IS SAEYUKI IN THE END??
IM FINE WITH THAT,BUT MAYU DESERVE MORE,SHE THE ONE WHO CHANGE YUKI
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 7)
Post by: cisda83 on April 06, 2013, 08:33:12 AM
Ryota is very bad naughty boy

But Mayu is such a great help here...

I like the play that they made to trick Ryota

Can't wait to see the next one

Thank you for the lovely update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Title: Black Chocolate (Chapter 8)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on April 14, 2013, 04:22:03 AM
:bow: Sorry I haven't updated in a while :bow:(or maybe it's not been that long... :sweatdrop: )
I've been in the doldrums since I learned of Sayaka's graduation from the group... :cry:

Chapter 8-Black Science
*The idea for this chapter was given to me by miyumi!!! :heart: Thank you, MiyuMiyu~!*

Mayu was just finished cleaning up the shop, when the phone suddenly rang.

She floated over on her broomstick, standing due to high difference, and answered.

"Hello?"

"Hello? Mayu?"

"Ah, Yukirin! What's wrong?"

"I wanted you to know if you've been working on our school project yet? We've got all weekend to do it, but I wanted to check up to see if you started already... The teacher said we need to turn it in for the science fair on Sunday."

"Ah, that? No, it's a bit confusing... 'Ya wanna come over and help me?"

"Sure, I don't mind!"

"Great! We can start tomorrow!"

"Okay. Bye."

"Bye." Mayu hung up the phone and stretched her arms.

She hopped off the broom and headed to bed.

Then, she saw a picture beside her bed. It was a picture of her and her mom flying together in the sky.

"Mom, I hope you're watching. I'll make you proud."


Yuki rode her bike down the road over to the candy shop.

She screeched to a halt as she finally reached the door. Mayu saw her and floated over to open the door.

"No! Not like that!"

"Oh, right."

She jumped off the broom and opened the door to let Yuki in.

"You need to be more careful. I don't want people to know about you."

"I know! I promise, I'll be more careful."

"Say, why's the shop so empty? Are you not open on weekends?"

"It's just my lazy day today. I closed so that we could work without anyone disturbing us."

"Good choice."


They ran up the stairs and went into Mayu's room.

Yuki thought the room suited Mayu. it was very frilly and pink and she had polka dot pillows, a lacey canopy, even a stuffed alpaca.

"Cute?"

"Yeah..."

"Alright, what should we do?"

Mayu sat down at her small table and opened a few books.

"Our teacher said we needed to do SOME kind of project for science, so we need to try and think of something legitimate..."

Yuki sat down beside her and looked through the books.

"What if we made a model of something?"

"Like what?"

"Hmm..."

She flipped through some of the pages and found something interesting.

"How 'bout...a volcano?"

"Eh?"

"We can do something on Mount Fuji and make a model of it!"

"Sounds good! ..Sounds good... Manatsu~ no Sounds Good!"

"Haha, that's cute, Mayu!"

She made a peace sign and the two started to write down a few notes to create a rough draft.

Yuki was really concentrating and was speeding through her papers.

She wrote so fast, you could see the smoke form on her pencil.

Mayu was floating the books around to look at the notes and writing them down.

A few hours past and they were starting to work on the model for the volcano.

Mayu got so tired from her amount of magic use, she became terribly sleepy and was losing focus. Yuki could tell, because she was bobbing her head a bit and her books were slowly falling down from midair.

"Mayu!"

"Eh?" Mayu woke up a bit, and all the books fell to the ground.

"Mayu, stay awake for me, 'kay?"

"Un..."

Yuki sat beside her and ran through the books again. Whenever Yuki saw Mayu starting to doze off and fall asleep, she shook her shoulder a bit. However, she couldn't help but admire the cuteness of her sleepy face.


*Yawn*

"Hey, Mayu... See if you can create something with your candy to help with the model," Yuki said, rubbing her now sleepy eyes.

"..Ah! Un."

She took out a cup of jello and when she smacked it down on the table, it reformed into a jello volcano. she poked it a bit, and jelly came out from the top.

"Uwaa~ Mayu, sugoi!"

"Thanks! I can make this jello into ANYTHING! Even..." She smacked it again and the jello formed a jello Mayu.

Yuki giggled with delight as she saw the jelly-like Mayu replica jiggle.

"One more?"

*Nods*

She smacked it one more time and it turned into a blob. She cut it in half and smacked the two smaller blobs.

One turned into Sae, and one turned into Yuki.

She took out some red licorice from her drawer and it magically attached to their heads, arms, and legs.

She made the two puppets bow and start dancing to some waltz music Mayu was humming.

"Hahaha! Kawaii~! Nee, do you and me!"

She smacked one of the puppets and it was the Yuki puppet that turned into Mayu.

"Oops."

"Oh, don't worry. You and Sae-kun are pretty cute together."

"Really?"

"Yeah, totally."

The two giggled a bit and start playing more with the jello puppets, creating endless stories of endless possibilities.


Yeah, right! Hello?! Forgetting something?!?!?! Mayuyu!!! YUKIRIN!!!!


Yuki slowly woke up.

The notes and books were scattered across the floor and the jello puppets were no longer moving.

...Or there...

Yuki felt like she was held by someone. She was still very shakey from waking up and was a bit dreamy.

"Sae...?"

She turned and saw, not Sae, but Mayu clinging around her waist.

"Sae~..."

"Mayu?"

She sat up a bit and saw the time. They must have stayed up all night and slept until morning.

"Oh, god! Mayu! Mayu, wake up!"

"..No, Mama... I wanna sleep with Sae~... Sae...."

"Mayu, I'm not Sae OR your mom! Mayu, we're late!"

Mayu's eyes slowly opened and she woke up.

"Eh?"

"We don't have a project and we NEED to go!"

Mayu's eyes popped and she screamed. Yuki rubbed her ears a bit and went black.

"Mou~ Mayu! Don't yell so early in the morning, you..!"

Mayu was crying and running around the room.

Yuki went soft and started comforting Mayu again.

"Okay, let's think. We have the notes and draft on volcanoes, so... what do we have for a model?"

"Uhh... *Sniff* Nothing."

Yuki groaned and hit her head on the table.

Then, Mayu thought of something. She rushed downstairs, and after a lot of weird sounds and noises, Yuki ran down to check up on her.

She then suddenly heard animal sounds as it went on. A cat, a lion, even an elephant.

"What the hell is she DOING?!?!?!"

She ran down to the shop and saw random objects flying out of the closet.

"Mayu, what are you doing?!"

She came out, waving her hand around her to get rid of the dust.

"It's a bit old, but.. *Cough* *Cough* it might just work if you give me a few minutes."

Yuki looked in the closet and saw a small fountain she saw in fancy restraunts(the kind that have chocolate fondue fountains :heart: ) and she smiled brightly.

"It's perfect! Oh~, thank you, Mayu!" she yelled as she hugged Mayu tight.


After some time past, the machine was all fixed.

They put it onto a roller, tied it to Yuki's bike, and rode down to the school.

Once they got there, they set up their booth and put a cardboard cone around the fountain to make it look like a volcano.

Mayu plugged the machine in and the chocolate came put perfectly.

"Yatta!"

They high-fived and hugged each other.

"Mayu-chan! You're the best!"

A sudden glow came from Mayu's pocket. The start badge changed into a slightly brighter orange color.

"Ah! That much closer!"

"Why did it shine right now?"

"When things got rough and push came to shove, you trusted me and we pulled through. Even though we got knocked down, we got back up and went on. That's life. Twists and turns, 'ya never know where we end up."

Yuki smiled and hugged Mayu.

"'Ya just gotta keep going..."


---TBC---
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 8)
Post by: Rena-chan Daisuki on April 14, 2013, 09:24:04 AM
So actually both mayu and yuki like sae????
am i right?
but if it's the truth, i guess there would be some kind of love triangle drama between them

anyway nice update pls continue :twothumbs
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 8)
Post by: kuro808 on April 14, 2013, 02:16:08 PM
Mayu is pulling another bit of magic out of her pocket and the sequence before they woke up was hilarious :lol:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 8)
Post by: cisda83 on April 15, 2013, 03:46:13 AM
Yuki and Mayu interaction was so cute...

Yuki seems to like Mayu...

Would Yuki develop any crush on Mayu or Yuki is going to go steady with Sae?

Eh... Mayu was saying Sae name in her sleep... does she also like Sae?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 8)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on April 15, 2013, 12:47:58 PM
So actually both mayu and yuki like sae????
am i right?
but if it's the truth, i guess there would be some kind of love triangle drama between them
Yuki seems to like Mayu...

Would Yuki develop any crush on Mayu or Yuki is going to go steady with Sae?

Eh... Mayu was saying Sae name in her sleep... does she also like Sae?
Yes! Yuki and Mayu both have a crush on Sae.

Although, I'd say Mayu's feelings for him are a bit bigger than Yuki's. :p

Yuki is still adjusting to her no longer "black" personality, so she doesn't have a full-time crush yet.
But, maybe she has feelings for Sae... :grin:
Title: Black Chocolate (Chapter 9)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on April 21, 2013, 04:47:07 PM
Chapter 9-My Black Jealousy


Yuki's dad has the weekend off from work, so their whole family is having a barbeque.

Her dad said it was alright for her to invite friends(even though he's still coping with her newfound bright personal)and now she's telling her closest friends, Aki, Mocchi, Rie, and Mayu, of course!

"So, please? Can you come?"

"Of course, Yuki! I'll bring some snacks while I'm at it, too."

"Hmm... We do need some chips and dip..."

Aki snapped her fingers. "Done!"

"And, I'll make some of my famous family sandwiches! Without 'em, I wouldn't be working here!"

Yuki nodded and smiled at the bright and open suggestions from her friends.

She saw Mocchi slightly raise her hand.

"Eto... Perhaps, I could, erm...provide the..entertainment?"

"Sure, Mocchi. Know anyone good?"

Mocchi looked out a bit toward the door. Yuki didn't realize this, but she was looking at a certain ikemen passing by the classroom and down the hall, stretching his arms.

"...Yeah."

"Good!"

"And, me too! I have a great chocolate truffle recipe that'll knock your dad's socks off!"

Yuki gave her a "black" glare that said, "No magic allowed!" Mayu gave an okie-dokie sign to her and Yuki smiled back and did the same.

"Okay, we start today at 5:00 PM."


Hours and hours of boring school later...


Yuki was rolling up her sleeves, preparing the tables and umbrellas for the barbeque, cuz today was so HOT!

She wiped off the sweat on her forehead and batted down her legs to help the umbrellas stay secure.

Aki climbed up on the table and helped it fit into the hole.

"There!"

"Thanks, Akicha."

Rie and Mocchi were already setting up the tables, and Mayu was helping Yuki's dad decorate the porch.

Just after all the decorations were up, everyone swarmed in like flies.

Everyone was already so hungry, and all the food was so good.

But, it was so HOT out people couldn't stand it.

"Yuki, we need to do something... Looks like everyone's a bit bored."

"I know, Papa..."

Then, Mocchi came over to Yuki and dragged her onto the stage on the porch. She pulled her behind the curtains and smiled.

"What's wrong, Mocchi?"

"I found our entertainment."

Mocchi put her fingers in her mouth and whistled.

Before Yuki's eyes, Sae walked out carrying a guitar.

"S-Sae-kun?"

Mocchi giggled a bit, and left them alone.

"I'll leave it to you, Pokkun," she whispered to Sae before she walked out.

Sae was stratching his head and blushing a bit; Yuki was blushing, too.

"So... Yukirin... Is it alright if I, uh..."

"Ufufu. I had NO idea you play guitar."

"There's a lot you don't know about me," he said as he handsomely strummed a Latin chord.

Yuki giggled a bit.

"So, what song?"

"What songs do you know you can sing?"

"Hmm... Ah!"

Yuki whispered something into his ear that made him grin.

"Can you do that without music?"

"Of course, I know the WHOLE thing by heart."

"Awesome! Let's go."

Yuki signaled Mayu to come up on the stage and start.

"Hi~, minna! It's time for our special entertainment!"

*Cheers*

"Hai! Ehh...." From behind the curtains, Yuki handed her a small card. "Uh.. Ah! Singing AKB48's "Sakura no Ki ni narou," Kashiwagi Yuki-san, featuring Miyazawa Sae-kun on guitar!"

*More cheers*

The curtain opened and Sae started strumming the notes to the song on his guitar.

Yuki no longer had any fear and was ready to sing perfectly. She was full and confident, ready to take one more step toward her future.

She took a deep breath, stepped up to the mic, and began.

柏木由紀 Kashiwagi Yuki - 桜の木になろう(Acoustic Ver) (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mJUPCP3sONQ#)

Haru-iro no sora no shita wo
Kimi wa hitori de aruki hajimeru'n da
Itsuka mita yume no you ni
Egaite kita nagai michi

Seifuku to sugita hibi wo
Kyou no omoide ni shimaikonde
Atarashiku umarekawaru
Sono senaka wo mimamotteru

Fuan sou ni furimuku
Kimi ga muri ni hohoenda toki
Hoho ni ochita namida wa
Otona ni naru tame no
Piriodo

Eien no sakura no ki ni narou
Sou boku wa koko kara ugokanai yo
Moshi kimi ga kokoro no michi ni mayotte mo
Ai no basho ga wakaru you ni tatte iru

Kyoushitsu no hinata no naka
Kurasumeito to katatta mirai wa
Ima kimi ga aruki dashita
Sono ippo me no saki ni aru

Mankai no kisetsu dake wo
Kimi wa natsukashinde ite wa ikenai
Kogarashi ni furuete ita
Fuyu wo koete hana ga saku

Dare mo inai koutei
Toki ni hitori kaette oide
Sotsugyou shita ano hi no
Kagayaite iru kimi ni
Aeru yo

Eien no sakura no ki ni narou
Sutaato no mejirushi ni naru you ni
Hanabira no subete ga chitte ite mo
Eda ga ryoute hiroge nagara matte iru

Dare mo mina mune ni oshibana no you na
Kesshin wo dokoka ni wasurete iru
Omoidashite
Sakura ga saku kisetsu ni
Boku no koto wo...
Ippon no ki wo...

Eien no sakura no ki ni narou
Sou boku wa koko kara ugokanai yo
Moshi kimi ga kokoro no michi ni mayotte mo
Ai no basho ga wakaru you ni tatte iru


*Loud applause*

Sae smiled big and hugged Yuki.

Yuki was a bit a surprised, but hugged him back.

As the curtain closed, they were still locked in that position, until Yuki suddenly felt her heart pounding more and more.

"Yukirin... you're so amazing!"

"..T-thank you, Sae-kun..."

"Hehe, drop the 'kun'! Just call me 'Sae'!"

His hug became tighter and Yuki was already blushing.

"Sae..."

Then, she felt it again.

The same, strange feeling she felt when she first hugged Sae.

"No... It can't be..."

They didn't notice, but Mayu was watching them from afar.

Mayu couldn't explain why, but her chest was tight and she felt like she was gonna cry.

[In Mayu's mind:
Evil Mayu:
Huh?! How dare she do this to us?!
Sweet Mayu: Why? Why is she hugging Sae?
Normal Mayu: ....I....
Evil Mayu: She'll pay! SHE'LL PAY FOR DOING THIS TO US!!!
Sweet Mayu: Why, Yukirin? Why? Just why?
Normal Mayu: ...I...!
Evil Mayu: We'll steal him. We'll take Sae from Yukirin and make him ours!
Sweet Mayu: Sae-kun... Sae-kun!
Normal Mayu: ..I..!!]

"..I like Sae!!!" She wanted to scream, but it only came out in a whisper.


The next day at school, Mayu was hiding behind a wall, watching Sae talk to some of his friends.

"Haha! Of course! It'll be WILD and WET!!!"

"Whoo~!"

"Hey, hey, hey! No one's gettin' ME wet!"

"Oh~! Yeah, right! Are you calling me out, Miyazawa!"

Mayu clenched her hand, holding a small candy.

It was a caramel she specially made for one purpose: to gain Sae's affection.

As soon as the others left, Sae was alone, staring out the window.

Mayu slowly walked up and tapped his shoulder.

He turned and smiled at her cute little face; she didn't realize she was blushing a bit.

"Mayu, what are you doing?"

"Ah.. I wanted to thank you for the performance. You really helped us out."

"Ehehe, no prob! I'd be happy to do it again!"

Mayu opened her hand a bit and saw the candy, carefully and properly wrapped.

"I, uhh, made this for you..."

Sae saw it and took it in his hand.

"Ah! Now, you didn't have to do that!"

He unwrapped it and smiled at the cutely shaped caramel square.

"Do you like caramel?"

"Yeah," he said as he popped it in his mouth. "Mm~! But, not as much as... as...."

His chest got all warm and it felt like his heart was skipping and jumping inside of him.

At the same time, it was melting in pure happiness.

He looked back up and saw Mayu.

In one second, his head rushed with excitement and it felt like the air was light and lovely.

Sae had eaten a magic candy, and has fallen for Mayu.

"Not as much as I love you, Mayuyu!"

He hugged her tight and swung her around in his arms.

Mayu felt so happy seeing her spell had worked and she made a lovey-dovey Sae.

"Sae?"

They turned and saw Yuki just walking up the hall towards them.

"..W-wh-what's going on here?"

"Yukirin? Why are you..?"

"Sae! What are you doing with Mayu?"

Sae smiled stupidly again and blushed a bit.

"She's just so~ CUTE! I love, love, LOVE Mayuyu!"

"Mayuyu..?"

Mayu broke the hug and went over to Yuki.

"Yuki... I.. I really like Sae... Are you okay with that?"

Mayu couldn't tell Yuki about the caramel. She would probably hate her.

Yuki shook her head and smiled a bit.

"Yeah... I'll be fine. Besides, you two look really cute together..."

"Thanks... Thanks for understanding..."

"Mayuyu~!"

Sae called to her and ran down the hall.

"Coming! Bye, Yukirin."

"...Bye, Mayu..." Yuki clenched her fists a bit and felt her chest hurt. She was heartbroken. "Sae...!"

She ran to the bathroom and went to the nearest sink.

She splashed her face with cold water and started crying.

"Sae...! Sae...!!!"


---TBC---
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 9)
Post by: gek geki on April 21, 2013, 05:00:40 PM
NOW IM ABIT CONFUSED,BUT NOT REALLY THAT CONFUSED
SO BASICALLY ITS SAEYUKI OR MAYUSAE? I THOUGHT IT WAS MAYUKI,BUT THEN LOOKING MORE AND MORE CHAPTER PROGRESS,EH ITS STILL MAYUKI BUT NOT IN THAT KIND OF RELATIONSHIP,MAYBE JUST BEST FRIEND  :cry:

BUUUUUT, I WANT MAYUKI IN LOVING MANNER AWW  :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :deco: :deco: :deco: :deco: :deco:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 9)
Post by: Shinoki on April 21, 2013, 05:10:51 PM
I always get the feeling that when Mayu gets jealous
she always cheats somehow.......
Personally, I prefer Mayuki and Saeyaka
instead of MayuSae or Saeyuki
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 9)
Post by: Elo on April 21, 2013, 05:11:04 PM
I am confused too

i want my MAYUKI

i WANT MY MAYUKI

ANYWAY UPDATEEEEEE
mayuki
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 9)
Post by: Temodemo on April 21, 2013, 05:16:35 PM
uhhhh! It seems I'm not the only one that feels sad reading this chapter... :(

MaYuki would have been a better choisse for this fanfic from our point of view, but we have to respect the writer's want. So its ok if its SaeYuki and SaeMayu, and hopefuly the readers will keep reading if they respect the writer and not just read it cuz its Mayuki.


(In secret Im sulking ,missing MaYuki too....)
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 9)
Post by: cisda83 on April 21, 2013, 05:18:51 PM
Eh... it's become love triangle with Sae the one that they are trying to possess...

OMG... NO NO NO.... I wanna MayuxYuki pairing  :cry:

Ah... so Sae likes Yuki... but Mayu used her magic to change Sae affection to her...

Ah poor Yuki... and poor Mayu...

What's going to happen next

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 9)
Post by: kuro808 on April 21, 2013, 06:46:13 PM
Mayu is trying to make Yukirin jealous by forcing her into a hug with her.  Even if she is pissed, Mayu would only make matters worst with the situation in having two liking her

Imagine that popping out
Title: Black Chocolate (Chapter 10-P1)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on April 27, 2013, 05:05:50 PM
Chapter 10-Black's first love (Part 1)


Mayu's POV
"Mayuyu~!"

"Hai~!"

Uwaa~ This is a dream come true!

Sae-kun... No, Sae-chan as my boyfriend!

"C'mon! Ya can't catch me!"

"Ufufu, we'll see about that!"

We play together, fool around, goof off in class, we're perfect.

But...

One day, while we were playing, I thought I saw Yukirin watching us from afar.

She looked so sad.

There were tears at the rim of her eyes, I think.

When I saw her, I think she saw me and ran off.

Today, I didn't see her. I was just chasing Sae down the empty halls.

I finally caught up to him and tackled him.

"Ha! I told you!"

"Ehe, okay, 'ya got me."

We both got up, rubbing off the dust from our clothes.

"Now, remember the bet. If I beat you and get you..."

"I have to give you our first kiss."

He closed his eyes and waited for me.

I was ready to kiss him, but, for some reason, I had this strange feeling wash over me.

I made me think of Yuki.

I like Sae, but I knew that Yukirin was sad, because she likes him, too.

I was so close to kissing.

But...

But, I just can't!

I pushed Sae away and ran off.

I ran somewhere where Sae couldn't find me and softly cried.

I then felt the star badge in my pocket. I took it out and saw stunned at what I saw.

It was starting to rust and turn black again, because I used my magic to take Sae and break Yukirin's heart.

"..This is all my fault..."
End of Mayu's POV


Yuki's POV

Mayu...

Why? Why did you do that to me?

WHAT did you do?

How did you do that to Sae?

What happened that made him like you?

No, Yuki, you're thinking to much.

Mayu probably just confessed.

Plus, Sae is always flirting with the girls anyways.

Guess I don't really matter anymore.


...Was what I thought.

Then, I saw something amazing.

Mayu was kissing Sae.

They were really kissing.

I can't take it!!!

I ran far, far, away from then, somewhere only I knew and could cry.

I felt my heart tighten. It hurt so much.

I can't do it...

I can never face Sae or Mayu again...

The only thing...for me to do...is to be alone.


---TBC---
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 10-P1)
Post by: cisda83 on April 27, 2013, 05:15:54 PM
Yeah... Mayu could not kiss Sae... and she is thinking about Yuki....

Soon Mayu is going to relies that the feeling she has for Yuki is love....

Ah... because of what Mayu did... the spell that she used to turn Yuki to be a bright person is reversed...

What's going to happen next

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :wub: :inlove: :heart: :love:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 10-P1)
Post by: Shinoki on April 27, 2013, 05:53:11 PM
See! Mayuyu! That was a bad choice!
Both people are sad now......
Somehow, I get the idea that Yuki will have to be paired with someone
And Mayu actually loves Yuki
it's just that feeling
and I just remembered...
it's supposed to be mayu's job to make Yukirin happy to begin with.....
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 10-P1)
Post by: gek geki on April 27, 2013, 06:29:33 PM
AND MAYBE YUKI TOO
SHE LOVE MAYU ACTUALLY,SHE KNOW THAT SAE LOVE TO FLIRT WITH OTHER GIRL,

WHY YUKI HURT AFTER THINK THAT SAE AND MAYU KISSING?PROBABLY SHE NOT HURT CAUSE SAE KISSED MAYU,BUT SHE HURT CAUSE SHE THINK MAYU KISSED SAE. AHA!!

sO SHE DOESNT LIKE MAYU BEING KISSED BY SOMEONE ELSE

UHG MY ENGLISH REALLY SUCK








THANK
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 10-P1)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on April 27, 2013, 06:30:44 PM
MAYUYU!!  :angry: You need some sense knocked into you :banghead: you can't make people fall in love with you!! :shocked
bad idea mayuyu  :thumbdown: 
yukirin don't be alone :cry: :cry:, mayu just acting a bit stupid she'll realise soon she's wrong, hopefully otherwise i want yuki to give her a wake up call :twisted:
actually both of them need to realise that their the ones who should be together :bow: :bow:
where's sayaka when you need her?  :?
thanx for the updates :cow: :yep:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 10-P1)
Post by: kuro808 on April 28, 2013, 12:27:14 AM
Mayu has definitely stepped over the line and she has to figure to not  force Yuki back to her old ways :nervous
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 10-P1)
Post by: leEwẬy on April 28, 2013, 07:36:24 AM
Mayu couldn't kiss Sae :farofflook:
Maybe she has feeling toward Yuki :hehehe:
Yuki also hurt when she saw Mayu was kissing Sae :on drink:
Not Sae kissing Mayu? :ding:
She was slowly fall in love with Mayu, I thought :kekeke:
Want to know what'll happen next :tantrum:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
Title: Black Chocolate (Chapter 10-P2)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on April 28, 2013, 08:05:10 PM
Chapter 10-Black's first love (Part 2)
*Yeah, I decided to early update*



Yuki was sitting outside all alone, cradling her knees.

She had been crying alone for several minutes, and had now transformed back into her "black" self.

She was heartbroken because she saw *or at least THOUGHT she saw* Mayu and Sae kissing each other in the hallway.

Now, she knows that she can't face either of them again.

She once again believes the only thing she can do is be alone the rest of her life.


Sae and the other students in the basketball and other sports clubs were all taking part in an annual summer carwash, and Mayu is helping him hand out flyers to the other students in her classes.

Mayu saw Yuki sitting alone at her desk.

The unfamiliar dark expression in her eyes made her feel guilty, and she knew she had to make it up.

"Nee, Yukirin, me and some of the other students are gonna participate in the school summer carwash, so--"

"Not interested."

"Eh?"

She had a renewed dark tone that seemed to have no emotion in her voice.

Aki then smirked a bit and leaned over to Yuki's ears.

"Sae-kun's gonna be there."

Yuki's eyes widened a bit, but she saw Mayu again and walked away.

"Don't worry. I'll talk to her."


Aki found her sitting alone outside, eating lunch.

Well, she wasn't touching it at all.

"Yuki!"

".........."

"Yuki, will you PLEASE~ stop acting like this?"

"................." More silence fills the already awkward atmosphere.

"Look, I'm sorry about you and Sae, but who knows? Maybe, he'll change his mind."

"..You don't know that."

Aki smirked again, in a very tsundere-ish way.

"You don't either. And you never will unless you try!"

Yuki slowly looked up at her and saw the flyer.

"Maybe... if I try to talk to Sae, we can..."

She felt her chest become warm again and a small smile painted her face.

"...Okay. I'll go.."

"Hehe, good! Meet everyone outside on the track tomorrow, 'kay?"

"..Un! Thanks, Aki."

Aki smiled and left so Yuki could eat.

Yuki was feeling herself become slightly happy again, and she felt it would be good to at least try and forgive Sae and Mayu.


The next day, the carwash had already started when Yuki got there.

She was wearing a tank top and a comfortable jean skirt, fit for summer.

She then saw Sae and the other basketball club members already washing a car.

He saw her and waved at her.

..Or so she thought, until Mayu came running to him and hugged him.

Then, she saw Yuki and frowned. She broke the hug and went over to her station.

She thought that Yuki was still upset and didn't want to hurt her.

She had to find a way to make Yuki feel better.

She thought for a bit, then came up with an idea.

"I just need to get Sae to love Yuki again!"

Luckily, she knew a loophole in her caramel's magic spell: "When the person who ate the caramel receives a huge shock, they return back to normal."

All Mayu had to do was give Sae a good enough scare to shock him and cancel out the spell.

And, she knew the perfect way.

"Splashing Sae with ice water should shock him back!"

She took a large bucket and filled it up with water from the hose.

She felt of the water...

"Not good enough..."

She took some of her mints from her pocket and dropped them in. They dissolved into the water and made it ice cold.

"That should make it cold enough."

She picked up the heavy bucket, then saw Yuki.

She was washing her car, but she had a sad smile on her face as she saw Sae giggling and playing with the other boys.

Mayu took all her strength, closed her eyes, and threw the water onto...

Not Sae, but another, skinnier member of the basketball club.

He started freaking out and took off his shirt. He looked like a dying chicken on roller skates.

The other boys started laughing and were taking off their shirts and swinging them around in the air.

They were spraying everyone with the hoses and getting them wet.

Even Mayu and Yuki eventually got soaked.

"Hey, hey, Sae! Take off your shirt, too!"

At that, Sae's eyes went wide.

"W-wh-whoa..! What?!"

"C'mon, strip off, Miyazawa!"

Sae was, for some reason, nervous about taking off his shirt and refused to.

He kept running away, but two of the boys finally grabbed his arms.

They were acting like pervert drunks and kept grabbing Sae's shirt.

But, he smacked them off and kept screaming.

Eventually, he gave up and the boys successfully grabbed his shirt.

"Se~no!"

They pulled it off and were shocked at what they saw.

Sae, too, was so shocked, he scared himself out of Mayu's spell. He covered his chest and screamed.

KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!!!!!!!!!!

But, then everyone looked over and saw him covering his chest...


No...


HER chest!

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEHHHHHHHHHH?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

"Miyazawa, are you wearing a BRA?!?!?!"

"Oh, dear god!"

"Sae's..."

"A GIRL!!!!!!"

Miyazawa Sae, the most handsome, energetic, and sweetest boy in school...was actually a girl!

When she first came, she was wearing a male school uniform, so everyone had the impression that she was a guy.

Now, because of this embarrassing accident, everyone found out her true gender.

Sae, tears in her eyes and face tomato red, ran off crying and covering her chest.

Yuki saw all this and went after her.

Mayu followed her from behind.


Yuki found Sae in the dressing room, crying into her knees.

She was wearing a new, light blue shirt and a towel around her neck to dry her hair.

"Sae...-chan."

She looked up with teary eyes.

"Yukirin?"

"...So, I was right..."

Yuki knew something was different about Sae. She thought she might have felt...something, but she wasn't sure.

Now, she absolutely knew. Sae was a female.

"Sae, you okay?"

"...Hii...yeah... *Sniff* It just really shocked me was all."

The two didn't notice Mayu was behind the lockers and could hear them.

"Eh? 'Shock'?"

The shock of embarrassment must have broke the spell on Sae.

But, there was only ONE way to find out.

She continued to listen to their conversation.

Yuki took the towel and started to dry Sae's tears.

"Hey, don't cry. I really don't like it when you cry... You're better when you're happy."

"...Hee... Thanks, Yukirin."

Yuki sadly smiled and looked down a bit.

"Hey, Sae-chan... do you like Mayu?"

"Eh? Well... yeah, as a friend... I don't really know who I would want as a... Oh, what am I saying?!"

"Eh? Sae-chan... Do you..like girls?"

Sae bit her lip and shyly smiled.

"...Just one."

As if out of an anime, Mayu's hear got bigger and she went in closer to hear.

Yuki's eyes widened and she blushed a bit.

"...You."

"Eh?!"

Sae slowly leaned towards Yuki and kissed her lips gently.

Yuki was overcome with surprise and was blushing like crazy.

But, she felt so happy, she couldn't resist.

She closed her eyes and returned the kiss.

Mayu peeked out and saw the two sharing a perfect, blissful kiss together.

"Yukirin..."

She checked her star badge and saw it was renewed and was glowing brightly again.

"Thank goodness..."

The two finally broke the kiss for air.

They stared into each other's eyes, glistening in the light of the sunset.

"Yukirin...do you still love me? ..Even though I'm a girl, do you..?"

"...Ufufu... Yeah... I do."

She pulled her in for another sweet kiss and ended up making out on the ground.

Mayu secretly continued to watch them, happy she could bring Yuki back her happiness.

And her first love.


---TBC---
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 10-P2)
Post by: Shinoki on April 28, 2013, 08:17:38 PM
yay!!! happy!!
Lol, so Sae was really a girl~~~
good thing!! hardly ever see situations where they think she's a guy and turns out that she's a girl
well, at least I don't usualyl read them~~
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 10-P2)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on April 28, 2013, 09:41:22 PM
i'm glad mayu made yuki happy again :heart: :yep:
but... but... SAEYUKI!! wth is happening here?! :banghead: :?
sae is actually a girl, why you hide as a boy sae?  :wth
MAYUYU!! yuki better forgive her now at least!!  :catglare: :banghead: :cry: :cry:
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 10-P2)
Post by: kahem on April 29, 2013, 12:29:07 AM
I knew it lol
Poor Mayu but she did the right thing
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 10-P2)
Post by: cisda83 on April 29, 2013, 04:37:42 AM
Wah... nice twist...

Sae as a girl... but dress up as a guy so she could get a girlfreind.

Ah... Yuki and Sae are together now...

And Mayu is happy...?

Eh.... what's going on here...

1stly Mayu wanted Sae... and now she wanted Yuki and Sae together...

What is Mayu's real feeling...?

Anyhow... it was great update... Thank you

Can't wait to see the next

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 10-P2)
Post by: leEwẬy on April 29, 2013, 10:55:35 AM
Sae is a girl but dress as a boy :hehehe:
NO~~ Saeyuki :on blackhole:
I'm want Mayuki :on shady:
But hope in the end it'll be Mayuki :on speedy:
Mayu happy when Yuki and Sae together? :on spit:
Complicate :sweat:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 10-P2)
Post by: kuro808 on April 29, 2013, 06:42:31 PM
Well Mayu reversed the spell and get Sae and Yuki together

She seems almost done with her mission
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 10-P2)
Post by: DC2805 on May 01, 2013, 08:57:42 AM
Mayuki, Saeyuki, or Saemayu???  :? :? :
Title: Black Chocolate *Update*
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on May 09, 2013, 10:25:04 PM
Hey guys, so I have SO MANY fanfics that are still in the making, I'm going to take a break for a while and update some of my older stories. :nervous For now, I plan to at least finish "Fire and Ice" and "Princess Protection Program" first, then return to my weekly updates on this story.

Gomennasai :bow: :heart:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate *Update*
Post by: cisda83 on May 10, 2013, 07:38:35 AM
TTLuver497-san,

Just update which ever you feel easier...

I'll be waiting...

I read most of your stories anyway.... or all... I dunno.

Thank you

Can't wait to see the next chapter for any stories that you have written up until now.

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Black Chocolate (Chapter 11)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on June 24, 2013, 03:25:45 AM
:cool1: Yes, I'm finally back!!!!!!!!! And it's my 500th post!!!!!!!! :ptam-shy:


Chapter 11-Black makeover

Mayu and Yuki were walking through town when they ran into Sae.

"Sae-chan!"

Yuki ran over and hugged her happily.

It's been about a month since the two became a couple, but...

Yuki is still a bit embarrassed by the fact that Sae's a girl. She often blushes when they hug or kiss.

"I like your outfit today, Yukirin."

"Hey, don't say like. This is really lame!"

Sae held up her chin and stared into her eyes.

"You look beautiful either way..."

She softly kissed her lips, and it just made Yuki melt.

Mayu just stood and watched as the two kissed passionately.

She learned her lesson after knowing stealing Sae from Yuki broke her heart, so she decided to make Yuki and Sae a couple again, even if she had to endure endless pain.

Sae suddenly broke the kiss and looked at Yuki shyly.

"Ano... Yukirin..."

Yuki looked up, confused.

"Would you wanna... go on a date with me tomorrow?"

Yuki was already blushing, but she blushed even harder at that statement.

"Eh?! D-d-date? With me?"

"Yeah... I mean, we've been going out for a while now, so I just thought... Can we?"

"...Ah, yeah, I guess."

Sae smiled and hugged her tight, making her face turn as red as a tomato.

"Thanks, Yukirin!"

"..Hahaha, n-no prob..."

She broke the hug and looked at her watch a bit.

"Ahh~, I gotta go. I'll see ya tomorrow!"

She ran off and waved goodbye before turning back around and dashing down the street. Yuki just shyly waved back.

"Bye..."

As she watched her run off, she made a decision in her mind and turned to Mayu.

"Mayu, please do something!"

"...'Something' as in....what?"

"Anything! I can't handle this date alone! Please!"

She bowed down at a far angle, she even got on her knees and begged.

"Yu-Yu-Yukirin, people are staring!"

"PLEASE!!!"

"..Okay, okay, just stop!"

Yuki got up and hugged Mayu tight around her neck, almost choking her.

"Oh, THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU!!!!!"

Mayu started coughing from lack of air and forcefully pushed her off.

"Okay, okay... *Cough* Let's go."

"Eh? Where?" Yuki asked as Mayu pulled her wrist.

"We're gonna give you a special makeover! Just for your and Sae's date."


Mayu brought her to the shop into a secret room.

It looked like a salon and there were many, many mirrors.

Yuki was looking around, amazed, when she heard a camera go off from somewhere.

She turned and saw Mayu taking pictures of her.

Yuki was so embarrassed, 'cause she felt awkward with Mayu taking pictures of her suddenly, plus she had no make-up on.

"This is your before picture."

"Mou~!"

"No buts about it, Yuki. This is so we can detect a change." she said pulling out the photo.

Yuki pouted and plopped down in a chair, only to have belts wrap around her wrists.

"HEY!!! WHAT THE HELL?!?!?!?!" she screamed as her black character came out.

"I don't want complaints."

"MAYUUUUUU!!!!!!"

Before Yuki knew it, as she was screaming, she felt Mayu flick something into her mouth. A gummy.

She chewed it a bit, tasting the juice, and swallowed it.

She suddenly felt light as a feather and her vision was blurry.

"..M-m-Mayu..."

"No complaints. Let me take car*******"

Yuki finally gave into the sweet syrup of the magic gummy candy and fell deep, deep asleep.


After an hour, Yuki woke up and rubbed her eyes, as her hands were untied.

She looked around and didn't see Mayu anywhere.

She got up and decided to look around the shop.

However, the candy shop was no longer existent and she was in someone's apartment.

The room and furniture was really clean and a bright white that blinded Yuki a bit.

She then heard another snapshot, but softer and more digital.

She turned and her eyes were wide open. She covered her mouth, gasping instead of screaming.

"M-Mayu?!"

(http://picroda.jphip.com/akb48/jphip60667.jpg)

Mayu was standing behind Yuki in a male doctor cosplay, taking pictures of her with Yuki's cellphone.

"You look beautiful as ever."

"Huh?"

She turned and saw herself in the mirror. She was beautiful, and her outfit made her look like an adult business woman.

"Wow. You did a good job, Mayu."

"What are you talking about, honey?"

"..Eh?"

There's a shock.

Since when does Mayu call her honey? They aren't married or anything.

SAE is her girlfriend.

"Yuki?"

Mayu came unknowingly closer and gave Yuki a strange look.

It was very gentle and caring, but also handsome and seductive.

(http://picroda.jphip.com/akb48/jphip60666.jpg)

"Is everything okay?"

"...Uh..."

Mayu kindly sat her down and pulled out a stethoscope.

"Will I have to give you a check up?"

Yuki was blushing like mad.

What is happening here? Why is Mayu suddenly acting like this?

She suddenly came in closer and placed her forehead against Yuki's.

"You have a fever."

"...N-n-n-n-no-o-o, I d-d-d-don-t-t...!"

Mayu pressed the stethoscope into Yuki's chest and listened to her heartbeat.

Then, she took her and Yuki's hand and put it onto hers.

"My heart's beating faster," she teasingly whispered with a grin.

"Mayu, stop. This is weird."

"Hm... It must be love sickness."

Yuki was trying to back away and run out the room, but Mayu grabbed her wrist and pulled her close, hugging her waist.

"I have the perfect cure."

She held Yuki's chin up and kissed her.

Mayu's lips were soft, delicately kissing Yuki's gentle lips.

Her lips were warm and felt good, but Yuki forcefully broke the kiss and ran away. She shut her eyes tight, touching her lips.


As she was running, she heard her footsteps echo and felt the scenery change into a long hallway.

When she stopped running and opened her eyes, she was in an unfamiliar school.

She looked out the window and saw Yankees fighting each other.

Yuki was frozen in fear. How did she get in this place?

She heard another snapshot and turned around.

Once again, Mayu was taking pictures of her.

(http://ohinasama.files.wordpress.com/2011/05/110429-majisuka-gakuen-2-ep03-avi_snapshot_13-26_2011-05-02_20-22-10.jpg)

"Mayu? What are you doing?"

Once the phone uncovered her face, she saw Mayu was chewing gum and her long hair was covered up, inside her hoodie.

Her outfit changed again and made her look more female, but her eyes...

There was darkness in her eyes.

An evil grin crept up her face as she walked closer.

(http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20120930155655/majisuka/images/thumb/8/8b/Mayu_Wantanabe.jpg/640px-Mayu_Wantanabe.jpg)

"What are you calling me that for, Black?"

"Black?"

"Are..? You seem different than usual..." She cornered her into a wall and Yuki looked down as Mayu grabbed her collar.

Yuki was wearing the same uniform as Mayu, but she had a black jacket with some design on it and some of her hair was dyed red.

"What's wrong, Black? Cat got your tongue? Or, better yet..." She stood on her tiptoes and slowly began closing in the space between them. "Mouse got your tongue?"

She kissed her, but not like the Mayu before.

It was rough and a lot more deeper.

Mayu was sucking her lips, almost eating them, and bit her tongue a bit.

Yuki was trying to contain her moans, but it only got harder as the girl went on.

"Mayu... S.s-t-top... Ahh..."

Yuki can't breathe. She feels like she's gonna die in Mayu's kiss.

Her shaking hands reached up and pushed her off with all her strength, knocking her down.

"Haa.... Mayu... This is wrong..."

"...You traitor. Do you even know how I feel?"

"Eh?"

When she looked up, however, Mayu punched her right in the face.

Everything went dark.


When Yuki woke up, she was in a narrow room.

It was very futuristic, but also cold and lonely.

She heard some kind of beeping and when she turned around, she was truly amazed.

(http://akbgirls48.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/11/Promo.jpg)

"Mayu..."

Mayu looked like someone out of a manga, and was playing with only a clear tablet.

"Mayu, you look amazing..."

She looked down and saw she was wearing an outfit similar to hers, but not exact.

It wasn't as... robotic.

"Mayu, what's happened to us? When I woke up, there was a male version of you, and then you were a Yankee, and..."

Her voice died down as she stared at Mayu more.

Her facial expression didn't change.

Emotionless. Blank.

Like a robot.

"Mayu? What's wrong? Say something."

Mayu didn't speak. Or rather, she couldn't.

Yuki could see emotion in her eyes; she was longing to talk to her.

"Mayu, speak to me!"

No answer still.

Yuki started crying as Mayu just stood there, blankly staring at her.

But, then she felt her caressing her head.

She looked up and saw Mayu smiling.

She started walking down the hallway, into a bright, white light.

(http://akbgirls48.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/11/Promo03.jpg)

Yuki followed Mayu and the two were swallowed up by the light.

When Yuki came out, she saw her structure changed into an animated version of herself.

She looked and saw Mayu was animated, too, surrounded by neon colored lights.

She took some green light and spelled out something.

"LOVE"
[Look here: http://www.zerochan.net/1365083 (http://www.zerochan.net/1365083)]

"Love? Mayu, what are trying to...?"

She came close and pressed her finger against her lips.

She softly kissed then, but she couldn't feel it.

She was only digital.

"Mayu... All this time..."

It's all coming together now.

Doctor Mayu, Yankee Mayu, Cyborg Mayu, and the original Mayu are all the same person.

Their personalities are different, but they have ONE soul thing in common.

"Mayu, you are... you're..."

She started feeling sleepy again, and saw Mayu disappear, shedding a single tear and smiling.

"..You're..."


"***** ****kirin! ***Yukirin!!!"

Yuki opened her eyes and saw Mayu, her Mayu, in front of her.

"Yukirin, you wouldn't wake up now matter what I did. Are you okay?"

"Uh, yeah... Just had a weird dream was all..."

"What dream?"

Yuki didn't want Mayu to hate her, so she decided to let it off.

"Mm-mm... It's nothing. I'll get over it."

She then saw herself in the mirror.

Her hair and makeup was amazing. She looked perfect.

"Mayu. This is amazing. But... But, why did you put me to sleep?"

"I didn't want you to freak out over anything that I'd do. I wanted to do ANYTHING to make you look perfect. Also, I just wanted to surprise you."

"It's perfect." She ran up and hugged Mayu tight, making the young witch blush. "Thank you."

"..Ufufu, you're welcome, Yukirin."


Yuki's POV

I don't understand what went on in that dream.

It didn't make sense.

But, I thought it out later that night. I came up with certain explanations.

First, the male doctor Mayu.

She, or "he", was very caring and gentle, because he knew how to care for people.

Maybe, he was Mayu's desire to protect me and make me feel better.

Next, the Yankee Mayu.

She's about as strange as my Mayu and is pretty much a tsundere.

She hides her gentle side with her roughness.

She's probably Mayu's wish to be strong, but still has a softer inner character. She doesn't want to show it.

Finally, the Cyborg Mayu.

Cyborg Mayu doesn't have emotion, but I could tell she wants to be true to herself.

That's why she wrote... that word.

She represents Mayu longing to be free and let everyone know who she is, no matter if people accept her or not.

...But...

There's still one thing I wanna know.

Does my Mayu... the original Mayu feel the same as the ones in my dream?

Is Mayu... in love with me?


---TBC---

:ptam-glow: Yo! That's it for tonight! I hope you liked this update, and will look forward to more!
:ptam-ok: Also, everyone keep an eye out. The dream scenes might be a sneak peek of my next fanfic. :ptam-kill:

 :heart: :heart: :deco: :sleep: Oyasuminasai~ :byebye: :deco: :heart: :heart:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 11) *500th post anniversary*
Post by: kuro808 on June 24, 2013, 04:09:22 AM
The dream scene opens up Yuki's true feelings towards Mayu
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 11) *500th post anniversary*
Post by: mo-chan on June 24, 2013, 05:09:58 AM
mayu did that dream or what?
did she realise her feelings?
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 11) *500th post anniversary*
Post by: cisda83 on June 24, 2013, 05:17:56 AM
Yeah... an update at last... Thank you...

Ah... Poor Mayu... she got to see Yuki and Sae love dovey in front of her...

But she needed to keep it up... because she wanted Yuki's happiness...

Oh.. Yuki got a dream of all different versions of Mayu, representing Mayu's personality, desire and self...

Yeah... now Yuki had a bit of a picture of Mayu's feeling for her...

Would Yuki be able to accept Mayu?

Or would she just be with Sae...?

How is the date between Yuki and Sae?

Can't wait to see if Mayuki would get their happy ending or sad ending...

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 11) *500th post anniversary*
Post by: kenjoy12 on June 24, 2013, 05:32:09 AM
Ohmygosh! Ohmygosh! Update! :fap You're back! :D

Uwaaa~ Yukirin why so lucky! You got kissed by different.versions of Mayu and on your lips! :banghead: Yaaa~ Feeling the love of Mayu for you! :wub:

Does Mayu realize her feelings for Yuki? Will Yuki able to uncover the truth behind her dreams? What will happen on SaeYuki's date? Will the feelings of Mayu going to confuse Yuki's heart? Ohmygosh! I can't wait! :thumbsup

Thank you for the update :bow: :thumbsup


GREAT~ EXCITED~ :twothumbs
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 11) *500th post anniversary*
Post by: Elo on June 24, 2013, 07:23:23 AM
yeyyy finally yuki understands mayus feelings

I hope mayuki will go on in the next chapters ^^^

thanks marley-chan for your update ^^
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 11) *500th post anniversary*
Post by: leEwẬy on June 24, 2013, 08:41:59 AM
Oho, Nezumi :on gay:
The male doctor Mayu, Nezumi, the robot Mayu, they're all kiss Yuki :shy2:
I like the way Yuki think about those Mayu, it feels real :on drink:
Now, Yuki realise that Mayu's in love with her :on woohoo:
But it seems that Mayu still hasn't realised about that feeling yet :on cloudeye:
I don't want to see Saeyuki's date, I want Mayuki's :shy1:
You're gonna write a new fanfic about Mayuki :ding:
I can't wait to see it what does it like :farofflook:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 11) *500th post anniversary*
Post by: Shinoki on June 24, 2013, 01:49:01 PM
I was exploding with happiness~~~
Doc Watanabe~ Nezumi~ Cyborg mayu~~ <3
hrm... nod nod nod, smiles, too hard to describe with words, but yaaaay~~~
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 11) *500th post anniversary*
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on June 24, 2013, 04:56:55 PM
 congrats on your 500th post :yep:
omg  :shocked yes yuki mayu is in love with you :inlove: :love:
poor mayu :cry: its must be hard to see yuki and sae dating
cyborg mayu, doc watanabe, nezumi are all so cute :cathappy:
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 11) *500th post anniversary*
Post by: kurogumi on June 24, 2013, 05:00:58 PM
Are you trying to said that in the next chapter mayu and yuki kissed for real?
Title: Black Chocolate (Chapter 12)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on June 28, 2013, 02:50:33 AM
mo-chan: No, Mayu didn't do that. That was all in Yuki's head. :shock: :scared: ...or was it? :shifty:
cisda83: We'll just have to wait... 8) *Puts on shades like in CSI* ...and see. "KYAAAAAAHHHH!!!!!" ..Nante ne...  XD I feel extra weird today. :lol:
kenjoy12: Glad to hear you're excited. I love meeting fans of my works.
Elo: Thanks for the comment :heart:
kurogumi: No, not in this chapter... :P not just yet.

:farofflook: I hope you guys are ready! Big things are about to happen!!! :ding:


Chapter 12-Black's first date

Today was Yuki's first date with Sae, and Mayu intended to make it perfect by all means.

As Yuki and Sae left, she snuck out and followed them to Shibuya.

She felt they needed a new choice of fashion, cause they both looked ridiculous!

...Well, Sae, anyways.

Sae looked like a dork with a plaid shirt, matching bow tie, and shorts with suspenders.

Her sneakers looked like they were from the 50s, and her hair was a wild, but still gorgeous, mess!

Yuki didn't seem to care, though, and she made up excuses to try and go back and change.

She probably wanted to bail cuz she was so embarrassed.

Mayu did in the alleys and watched them carefully, she had to make sure they'd have a perfect day.

By all means necessary...


Once they got into a new shop, they started looking for clothes.

Problem was, Sae had NO sense of fashion, and was giving Yuki a bunch of weird combos.

On top of that, Yuki was blinded by the embarrassment and handsomeness of Sae and went along with them.

"Yukirin, you idiot! You're gonna look like a total fool wearing those!"

Mayu saw some really cute clothes on a mannequin and decided to use her magic and push it towards them.

But, instead, her magic bounced to the cashier and she went wild.

"Attention, all shoppers, everything is now on sale!!!!"

She picked up random clothes and started throwing them everywhere, not a care in the world.

They were all getting tangled together and even smacked around onto people's faces, but the magic was too strong.

Mayu smacked her head.

"Damn it! Stupid wand, look what you made me do!"

The cashier finally bumped straight into a mannequin and came to her senses.

However, at the same time, the mannequin fell off and almost hit Yuki, if it wasn't for Sae coming to save the day.

"Oh god, thanks, Sae."

Sae leaned back a bit, helping the mannequin stand back up.

"Hey, how much for one of these?"

"Oh, that's part of the 'Buy one, get one 50% off' sale for this summer."

"Yukirin, want one o' these?"

"Ah! Sure!"

Luckily, Sae actually made a good choice, and chose a perfect dress that fitted Yuki's style perfectly.

Mayu got out before they could find anything else. She didn't want to blame for anything.

She leaned against a wall and sighed with relief.

"I need this wand repaired soon..."


After they finished shopping, they both came out with new clothes on.

Yuki looked like an elegant young lady from a rich family palace, and Sae looked like a cool, celebrity type of boy...

Well, boy/girl ikemen.... >/////<

Mayu couldn't help but blush seeing them.

Her heart was beating so fast when she saw Yuki like that. She was more beautiful than ever.

"Looks like the makeover paid off."

On the other side, Sae kept complimenting Yuki like a pure ikemen, and whenever she wrapped her arm around her, Yuki blushed to high heavens.

"..Oh? Hahaha, Yukirin, you're red."

"Ahh!" Yuki quickly covered up her cheeks, nuzzling her head against Sae's shoulder.

Mayu was suddenly feeling a strange heat in her chest.

Before she knew it, her wand sparked on its own and a ball of lightning leaked out.

It bounced on the walls and hit a banana in a fruit cart.

The banana unpeeled itself, and it fell to the ground, making Sae trip.

"Uwa!!!" Sae's leg fell straight up and she fell on her butt.

"Woah! You okay?"

"Ita ta ta... Y-yeah, I'll be alright..."

She got up, rubbing her butt, and started walking again.

Mayu got mad and started batting at her wand.

"Mou~ this thing is busted today, really! Do I need to get a new one already?"

As she hit it, another spark flew and went into a window.

A metal tub floated out and fell right in front of Sae, just missing her.

"Kyaa!" Yuki screamed and hugged Sae.

Mayu was blushing mad now, cuz Yuki was so close to... well, Sae's.. her chest.

Then, she unknowingly shook in excitement and the wand sparked again.

This time, a tub came out and hit Yuki, knocking her out cold.

"Yuki!"

"Oh no... This is bad."


Yuki woke up, she was laying down on a bench in the empty park. The first thing that caught her eyes was the sunset.

She felt someone's hand on her head.

She looked around a bit and got up. She was lying on Sae's lap.

"Sae?"

Sae was fast asleep, because she got impatient for Yuki to wake up.

Yuki shook her shoulder a bit, but it did no good.

She touched her lips a bit, turning a light pink, and slowly came closer. She softly kissed Sae's plump cheek and she woke up.

"Huh? Yukirin?" She yawned a bit, stretching her arms. "You're up..."

"What happened?"

"A metal tub came out of nowhere and hit you smack in the head."

Yuki turned tomato red as she remembered what had happened. After Yuki got knocked out, Sae must've carried her ALL the way here.

And she doesn't wanna even KNOW how Sae carried her.

"You look so cute when you're asleep, y'know?"

"Eh?"

Sae gave her a warm smile and patted her head.

"Do you have an older brother?"

Yuki got pink again.

"Y-yeah. W-why?"

"Because, you're SO much like a little sister."

Yuki bit her lip, giggling a bit. She's never shown such a gentle side to anyone, especially Sae.

Mayu, hiding behind the trees, decided to take one more chance with her wand.

"Before this magic runs out, please. I beg you once more."

She gathered up every last ounce of energy in the wand and shot it up into the sky.

"Make it sunny, cheerful, and bright. This should turn this date around!"

However, unlike her prediction, loud thunder crashed as the lightning spread into the sky.

The grey clouds got darker and it started raining.

The two girls started getting soaked in the hard rain and quickly ran under a tree.

Yuki stomped her foot and pouted, really upset.

"Mou~ What the hell is this rain?! And our clothes... We were gonna go to a karaoke box! They won't let us in like this!!!"

"Yukirin..."

"What?"

Sae was smiling for some reason, staring at the rain.

"I like the rain."

"But, our date, it's..."

"It was fun!"

"EH?!"

Sae jumped up and picked two apples from the tree.

She bit one and handed the other to Yuki.

"Today was fun, no matter what happened."

Yuki sighed leaning up against the tree.

"I don't get romance at all. Love is so difficult."

"..Well, y'know what?" Sae said as she slowly approached Yuki again. "I don't care, as long as it's you."

Yuki smiled and hugged Sae tight. Even after being soaked in the rain, she felt so warm and comforting.

Sae lifted her head up and kissed her passionately.

Sae's lips tasted sweet from the apple, but also a bit salty from the rain, but it couldn't get any more deliciously irresistible in Yuki's eyes.

The two made out under the harsh rain, which only became a rhythm to match their heartbeats.


Mayu's POV

I just don't get it!

My magic has failed me all day!!

I only wanted to do the best for Yuki... What is going on?!

I took out something in my pocket.

They were special sugar cubes I made. When you suck on them, a gumball comes out, and the color and flavor represents your mood.

I held one out in my fingers. You need to ask a question to get the answer.

"Why did my magic make bad things happen?"

I popped it in my mouth and started sucking it.

Once the sugar faded, a sour taste hit my mouth.

I spat it out in my hand and a lime green gumball came out.

Lime green: Jealousy

"Jealous? I'm jealous? Why?!"

I popped another in, and this time it tasted sweeter than cotton candy.

I spat it out and this time, the gumball was pink.

"Pink? Shy? Embarrassed?"

Rose pink: In love

"What?! No way! That can't be right! I'm not in love with Sae!"

I broke up with Sae. I had to.

I can't be in love with Sae, because if Sae was under the spell and me and her were still dating, it would upset...!

Record Scratch (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CPGcpIXeA-4#ws)
O_O
(http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m5nrzhqSih1rsnvp0o1_400.gif)

Wait a minute...

It would've upset... Yuki...

Yuki...


Wait... Wait!!!

A-are you saying I'm in love with Yuki?!?!?!?!

Dun Dun DUUUUUUNNN
DUN-DUN-DUUUUN!!! Sound Effect (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bW7Op86ox9g#)


*Author: I told you I was feeling weird today ;) *


---TBC---


:hee: And now, I leave with this. :whistle: A special song... :on cny1: About the confusing little thing called "Love." :hee:
[H!H] Morning Musume - Kare to Issho ni Omise ga Shitai! •EN Subtitled• (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XjwhT38d4Ds#ws)

Imagine in either Yuki and/or Mayu's POV

I’m lonely, see, and worrying a little
 I call you, yeah, and I feel a little better
 But still, ah, I want to see you soon
 My dreams swell up big

I love you, see, and I’m a little nervous
 You kiss me, yeah, and it reassures me quite a bit
 But still, ah, I get anxious
 Love is so difficult

I’m all ready for bed
 Time to text him
 We’re going out for a bit tomorrow
 Let’s check out all kinds of towns together

Dad’s a real Debbie Downer
 He complains about everything
 But I won’t let him
 Badmouth my guy

I don’t have a crazy life
 I think and act in my own way
 I love my whole family
 But my generation chases love

I’m lonely, see, and worrying a little
 I call you, yeah, and I feel a little better
 But still, ah, I want to see you soon
 My dreams swell up big

I love you, see, and I’m a little nervous
 You kiss me, yeah, and it reassures me quite a bit
 But still, ah, I get anxious
 Love is so difficult

My allowance isn’t enough
 Life is definitely expensive
 Maybe I’ll up my shifts at my part time job
 He’s working pretty hard too

Mum wants me to bring him home
 Just out of curiosity
 Dad’s sure to have
 Plenty to say afterwards

My boyfriend’s not a wild guy
 He just has kind of weird hair
 He stands out in the town, he’s popular
 My generation wants to talk about love

I want to take classes online
 So we can open a shop together in the future

I don’t have a crazy life
 I think and act in my own way
 I love my whole family
 But my generation chases love

I’m lonely, see, and worrying a little
 I call you, yeah, and I feel a little better
 But still, ah, I want to see you soon
 My dreams swell up big

I love you, see, and I’m a little nervous
 You kiss me, yeah, and it reassures me quite a bit
 But still, ah, I get anxious
 Love is so difficult


I hope everyone enjoyed my weirdness. Also, I hope all of you look forward to my next fanfic, "Yukirin World!!!!"

:byebye: Bye~ :heart: ! Adios amigos :heart: ! Sayonara :heart: ! Bye-bye, BABY~~~ :heart: *Gunter and Tinka impression*! ...OK bye :heart: :byebye:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 12)
Post by: kenjoy12 on June 28, 2013, 03:16:26 AM
UPDATE~ :fap

Aaah! Seems Mayu's emotions affecting her magic! Lol :lol: i love the the photo of Mayu.. XD Lovely song.. :)

Ohman! What a disaster date for SaeYuki.. but it paid off.. They'd kissed under the rain! Congrats Yuki..! :banghead:

Oh man! I guess after that Mayu's going to be a little weird towards Yuki.. Aww.. My MaYuki heart :(

Anyway! I can't wait for the next up! :thumbsup

Oh looking forward to your next fic.. :fap

Thank you for the update :bow: :thumbsup

AWESOME ~ :twothumbs
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 12)
Post by: Shinoki on June 28, 2013, 03:18:26 AM
the wand... hrm...
jealousy~~ love~~~ <3
Mayuki will come, fufu
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 12)
Post by: kurogumi on June 28, 2013, 03:20:22 AM
but yuki loved sae right?

she could not break with sae so quickly just because she realized that the person she loves is mayu
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 12)
Post by: gek geki on June 28, 2013, 03:35:14 AM
YAY AN UPDATE
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 12)
Post by: kuro808 on June 28, 2013, 04:26:00 AM
Mayu is becoming too close to Yuki for her own good but I wonder what she'll do to win over Yuki and knock Sae out of the way
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 12)
Post by: DiVAGal2458 on June 28, 2013, 04:53:44 AM
I'm more of a SaeYuki fan than a MaYuki fan but...I can deal... :nervous
I'll Imagine Sae & Mayu's Parts the other way around if it does turn MaYuki  :cathappy:
Thins Fic is Awesome!  :twothumbs
The Ending Randomness Really made me Laugh  :lol:
Keep up the Good Work!  :thumbup
I can't wait for the next installment!  :panic:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 12)
Post by: leEwẬy on June 28, 2013, 09:19:29 AM
So Mayu's emotion affected to her magic and aslo the wand :ding:
I love it :luvluv1:
Even the things didn't go well like Mayu's guess but after all, Saeyuki had a kiss under the rain :on cloudeye:
The sugar cubes was totally right when they shown exactly what Mayu's feel :on gay:
I wonder what Mayu think about that :dunno:
Will she win over Yuki :prayers:
I'm sure there'll be lots of drama between SaeMayuki :kekeke:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 12)
Post by: Elo on June 28, 2013, 09:27:50 AM
finally mayu knows that she loves  yuki

now should mayu seduce yuki hehe maybe with her danso  :wub: :wub:

I love this fic marley-chan   :heart: :heart: :wub: :wub:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 12)
Post by: cisda83 on June 28, 2013, 12:40:16 PM
Hahaha... Mayu ruined Yuki's date somehow....

But Sae seemed to be able to adjust to the chaos...trying to make the date worked somehow.

now that Mayu herself notice her feeling for Yuki... What would she do about that..?

Can't wait to see the next one...

Thank you for the update and the videos

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 12)
Post by: gek geki on June 30, 2013, 07:55:46 AM
No you cant mayu it will ruin yovr fìnal exam as a witch
Yuki happiness is more important.
Curious what yuki felt to mayu
Title: Black Chocolate (Chapter 13)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on July 03, 2013, 05:30:22 PM
Chapter 13-Black Kiss


Mayu's POV


No way... I'm in love with Yuki?

"Mayu."

My eyes widen as I heard a familiar voice.

I turned around and saw her, wearing a white hat and jacket with a long pure white cape.

She had purple ribbons for accessories on her jacket and hat, and there was also gold lining.

I only heard her voice to recognize her, and I confirmed my guess was right when I saw that smile.

Her cat-like smile.

"It sure has been a while... Jurina."

"Being the same as ever... Mayu?"

She generated her signature light orb and threw it at me, but I was able to catch it in my hand and crush it.

"Same as ever, huh?"

"No," she said with a smirk. "I learned some new tricks, too."

She flew in the air and tackled me straight to the ground.

And then...


*Going into troll mode!!!! :P *


Yuki's POV

We finally walked over to Sae's home.

We got changed into some comfy pajamas and decided to spend the rest of our night inside.

*Sneeze*

"Ah! You okay? Hahaha, I guess we stayed out in the rain too long!"

I blew my nose and blushed a bit, covering my mouth.

"You were kissing me!"

"YOU started it!"

"EHHH?!?!?! No way!!! That was ALL you!!!"

She started laughing as loud as possible, clapping her hands.

"Mou~ stop! It's not funny."

She pouted and crawled over to me. Ahh~ she's so cute.

"But I wuv you, Yukirin~!"

She pressed my cheeks together and cuddled in my chest like a cat.

"I rub yuu~ I rub yuu~ I RUB YUU~~~~!!!!!"

"Mou~ Sae!!!!"


Mayu's POV

"Hahahahahahahaha!!!! Sto~~~p!!!! Jurina-AAAAAHHHH!!!!!"

"Tickletickletickletickletickletickletickletickletickletickle~~~~!!!!!"

"Hahahahahahahahahaha!!!!! Aaaaaahhhh~ hahahahahaha!!!!"

"You're~ gonna get it! You're~ gonna GET IT!!!"

"No! No!! Nonononono!!!! AAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!!!"

*A few minutes later*

I drank some of the water Jurina gave me and sighed.

"Ah~ that was fun."

"Yup. You're still ticklish and cute."

I stretched my arms, feeling the sun on my back.

A gush of wind blew my hat off, but Jurina flew up and caught it.

"Here."

"Thanks. So, what have you been doing?"

"I'm an idol now. I wanted to stay on Earth and make a successful living in music. What about you?"

"Actually, I don't know yet. I still have to pass the final test."

"Good luck!"

I smiled, but I think she noticed something.

I felt a little weird thinking about it. I looked at my star badge; it's gotten brighter since Yuki and Sae have gone out.

"What's wrong?"

"I've just been confused with a lot of things. It's nothing; don't worry."

She stood up and gathered some wind into her hand. She balled it in her fist and a tornado formed around her.

Gaining up her power, she punched her hand right towards me.


*Trolling again XD *


Yuki's POV

Sae covered my eyes and lead me towards somewhere in her house.

She stopped a bit and uncovered my eyes.

"Tada~!"

Right in front of my eyes was a really cool drum set.

"Wow! This is amazing!"

"Can you play?"

"Mm... I dabble."

She handed me the drum sticks excitedly.

"Show me!"

"OK~."

http://www.dailymotion.com/video/x11aswf_kashiwagi-yuki-2nd-solo-live-give-me-five-yukirin-plays-drum_music?start=165#.UcxHQazRn9w (http://www.dailymotion.com/video/x11aswf_kashiwagi-yuki-2nd-solo-live-give-me-five-yukirin-plays-drum_music?start=165#.UcxHQazRn9w)

The sakura song plays on the streets
 The day of farewells comes in the blink of an eye
 On the corner walls of the school building
 Everyone secretly wrote their own messages

There's no need to wear uniforms anymore!
 Being swayed amidst the spring wind,
 All sorts of flowers scatter about
 to find a new dream

Hey friend, for all the memories we had
 let's believe that tomorrow will shine even brighter
 That's right, graduation is not the end but a new beginning
 Hey friend, just head on in your own path
 Don't say goodbye
 We will meet again very soon
 So let's high five for now



Mayu's POV

Right when she was about to punch me, I panicked and close my eyes.

But, nothing came...

I open my one eye and saw Jurina with a grin on her face.

"You've gotten soft."

I blushed a bit and turned away from her.

"What happened? Tell me."

"But, it's..."

She grabbed me by the collar and suddenly kissed me.

Ahh... I forgot Jurina likes to harass me like this.

She pulled away, a soft sigh escaping her lips, and looked at me with those dark, glowing black orbs.

"This is how I'll get my answer," she said with a smug look on her face. She can be an S sometimes.

"Wait, what do you--?! Mm!"

She started kissing me again, more intense than I ever felt her do before.

It sure has been a while since she's kissed me...

It's been so long... So lonely... I guess I did miss her at times...

I wanted someone there... To give me love...

To kiss me...

Kiss me....

"...Yukirin..."


Yuki's POV

"Ah~ Mm! Oishii!"

I handed Sae one more cookie and placed it in her mouth.

"Mm~!!! Mom makes the best cookies!"

"I guess that's where you get it. You eat so much chocolate, you're sweet inside and out."

"Mou~ Yukirin, YOU'RE too sweet!!!"

I giggled a bit, and prepared to feed her again, but she stopped me.

"No-no-no. I'll feed you this one."

"Eh?"

She climbed on top of me and dangled the cookie over my head.

She held it in between her teeth and placed the other end in my mouth.

Pushing herself forward, the cookie slip into my mouth.

She released me and Back away, a smirk on her face.

"Mm... maybe you're not as sweet as I thought."

"Hey, I'm sweet!" she said crawling back over to me. "I just have a little spice is all."

She kissed me again, groping my body in various places.

Ah... She's so sexy... So sweet...

Her kiss is so sweet...

I just want to kiss her...

Kiss me....

"...Mayu..."


Mayu's POV

Jurina released the kiss and stood up.

"I knew it."

She held out her hand and helped me up.

"What?"

"You're in love. You didn't kiss me like normal. Someone's got your heart racing faster than normal."

"Th-that's not true! Yukirin is just... m-my friend. And, I have to stay by her side until she's truly happy. That's my assignment! I'm not...!"

Jurina raised her eyebrow. I suddenly realized something.

"I'm... I AM in love with Yuki..."

"You should tell her."

"I can't! She's already dating someone..."

Jurina giggled a bit.

"Do you think something like that would stop me? Even when you were crushing on some other wizards, I never stopped loving you!"

"Yeah, but..."

She came closer, her hands on her hips. Her mouth curved into that cat-esque smirk again.

"Jurina, that's YOU. I... I just don't know."

She hugged me, patting my head.

"Don't worry."

"Eh?"

"When the time comes, you'll know what to do."

I felt better now, and hugged her back.

"Thank you, Jurina."


Yuki's POV

"Mayu?"

"Eh?"

Sae suddenly got up, a scared expression on her face.

"Did.. did you just say 'Mayu'?

"...What?"

"You just said her name! Why did you say her name?!"

My eyes widened and I suddenly realized what happened.

I unconsciously called out her name...

But, that means...

"Oh god..."

I ran out as fast as I could, covering my mouth.

Once I got back to my house, I ran into my room and cried into my pillow.

God... why did that happen?

That stupid dream messed up my head!

Why, Mayu?! Why did you...?

Why did you... make me fall in love with you?

"What is going on here?"


---TBC---
*Sorry it's a fast update*
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 13)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on July 03, 2013, 05:41:25 PM
oho a bit of jurimayu, I LOVED THE JURIMAYU SCENE!! :cathappy: jurina is such an sadist :lol:
yes finally yuki loves mayu!  :deco: :inlove: its not mayu's fault you like her yuki, you're the one who called out her name when kissing sae-chan :P
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 13)
Post by: kuro808 on July 03, 2013, 05:48:01 PM
That was interesting...

The magic finally turned into possession and Yuki finally got it and poor her in doing so
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 13)
Post by: kenjoy12 on July 03, 2013, 06:19:47 PM
Ohmygosh! :O

What's gonna happen next?

Can't wait for the next up! :fap

Thank you for the update :bow: :twothumbs :thumbsup
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 13)
Post by: kurogumi on July 03, 2013, 06:27:19 PM
Wow yuki saying mayu name! That would hurt sae,but its fine LOL

From the first place sae nothing to do in yuki life,its mayuyu who change yuki to better person

What kind of friend jurina is?kissing her friend like that LOL

What will yuki do? And mayu do?
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 13)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on July 03, 2013, 06:36:01 PM
What kind of friend jurina is?kissing her friend like that LOL
Jurina's just all lovey-dovey with Mayu, and a bit of a perv.

BTW: Here's kind of a description on what Jurina's witch outfit looks like.
(http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mas2yapqkm1qes8cgo1_400.png)
*Sorry 'bout the poor pic*

And here's Mayu. :heart:
(http://i.usatoday.net/tech/_photos/2010/06/10/witchswishx.jpg)
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 13)
Post by: mo-chan on July 03, 2013, 06:40:18 PM
pics are soo cute !!  XD
Jurina is really direct  :lol: but I prefert mayuki   :P
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 13)
Post by: rochilu on July 03, 2013, 11:58:57 PM
the pics are too cute!! thanks for the update, grat chapter >u<
Jurina got a weird way to get what she want but in the end she get it, now she know what mayu was thinking hahaha i love that kid xDD
and Yuki mess the thinks up with Sae! :O i'm hope that she won't get too hurt haha
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 13)
Post by: cisda83 on July 04, 2013, 07:50:51 AM
getting interesting...

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait

Thank you

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 13)
Post by: leEwẬy on July 04, 2013, 08:23:00 AM
I love Jurina :on gay:
Thank you for making Mayu not deny about her love to Yuki anymore :on cny2:
Such a great friend :on GJ:
Jurina's surely a S :wahaha:
Eh~ Jurina's in love with the other wizard :shock: Who's that? :dunno: Maybe Rena :hehehe:
Ara~~ Yuki said Mayu's name when she was kissing with Sae :on drink: Too happy :nya:
Now, both Mayu and Yuki are realize their love to each other :wriggly:
Wonder what'll they do :ding:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 13)
Post by: gek geki on July 07, 2013, 09:00:13 AM
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT????? SAE NO!!!! (NO I DON'T CARE ABOUT HER KEKEKEKEK EVIL SMILE)
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 13)
Post by: mo-chan on July 12, 2013, 12:36:12 PM
now I'm watching Mayu's pics I found a pic of Mayu as a witch  8)
jajaaa!   :cathappy:

(https://fbcdn-sphotos-g-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-prn2/q74/s720x720/1069998_596752360345068_129667681_n.jpg)
Title: Black Chocolate (Chapter 14)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on July 18, 2013, 03:38:00 AM
mayuki_daisuki: Just wait. I have another JuriMayu scene soon! :cathappy:

kurogumi: Suspense~!!! Just wait~!!!

mo-chan: I ship Mayuki and Saeyuki(Surprise surprise!!! :otomerika: ) And, thanks again for the pic.

rochilu: Glad you like the pics. And, yeah, Jurina's weird. XD But, she's the good kind of weird.

leEwẬy: You'll have to be patient... Sly~ aren't I~?

 :on gay: Now enjoy~ :on gay:



Chapter 14-Black Confession


Mayu and Yuki went to school the next day, but there's one...

TINY~~~ problem...

In case you need a recap.

1. Mayu reunited with Jurina
2. Jurina kissed Mayu
3. Mayu started saying Yuki's name in between kisses
4. Sae and Yuki are making out again
5. Yuki moaned Mayu's name
6. Yuki might have just broken up with Sae

So~.....

Yeah~... Mayu and Yuki are kinda ignoring each other.

Awkward~.

But, then...

"Class, please welcome our new student, Matsui Jurina-san."

"EEEEEEEEEEEEHHHH?!?!?!?!?!?!"

Mayu grabbed Jurina and pulled her all the way to another room.

"Jurina, what the HECK are you doing here?!"

"I'm going to help you."

"With what?!"

"I dare you! You need to confess to Yuki by the end of the day, or I'll seal your magic away for a week!"

Jurina was laughing evily as she walked back to the classroom.

Mayu was frozen, her jaw dropped to the ground.

"What? I need to what?"

She finally got it in her head.

"Confess to Yuki."

"I need to WHAT?!?!?!?!?!?!"


Mayu's POV

One class...

Two classes...

Three classes...

AND NO CONFESSION!!!!


Why?! Why Jurina?!

This doesn't help at all!

I can't do that! I can't confess to Yuki!!! She has a girlfriend!!!

And that girlfriend is Sae!!!

If I do that to them....

I walk up and went into one of the bathroom stalls...

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!"

And I screamed as loud as I could in the stall, my magic exploding and making it seem like a mad party.

I went back out, letting out the steam and went back into the room.

"Mayu~!"

*VROOOM*

Jurina raced past me and tackled me into another room.

"Jurina, what do you want now?"

"It's lunch time. It's the perfect time to confess!"

I turned red and stood up to face her.

"Jurina! I can't do that! I can't and I won't!!!"

Jurina glared at me and gave me her cat smile grin.

But, it looked different...

It looked... sly...

She pulled out something in her pocket. A card.

(http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs36/f/2008/242/3/6/360c451314e49b40b93c5c36e9bf029c.jpg)

"Oh no... NONONONONO! Not that! PLEEAAAASSSE not that!!!"

"Ooooh yes. That."

She threw the card up in the air and it spun multiple times in the air, reflecting our faces on both sides.

It landed on the ground and created a large puff of smoke that covered us.

When it disappeared, I fanned the rest of the smoke away and...

And, I saw myself.

"Jurina?"

She nodded.

I looked at my hand. My outfit.

I felt my hair and my face. And the curves in my lips.

I took out a mirror and...

Oh god... Jurina, why?!?!?!?!

She used the "Change" spell and now...

We switched bodies!!!!

"Jurina, why did you do this to us?!"

"YOU obviously can't confess to Yuki. So, I'M gonna do it for you."

"No! Jurina, please!!! NOOOOOO!!!!!"

She walked to the door and slammed it in front of me.

"Too~ late!"

End of Mayu's POV


Yuki's POV

Sae... Mayu... Sae~... Mayu~.... SAE!!! MAYU!!!

OH MY GOD!!! WHAT IS HAPPENING TO ME?!?!?!?!?!

How can this happen?

Sae... Mayu...

What am I gonna say to them?

"Yuki!"

I turned and saw Mayu behind me.

She pulled me out of my chair and stood me up.

"M-Mayu, I--"

"Yuki. I love you."

...Eh? EEEEEEEEEEEEHHHH?!?!?!?!?!?!

"Y-you what?"

"I love you. I really do."

People in the classroom were looking and whispering.

Mayu suddenly hugged me tight.

Too tight. Is she trying to choke me?!

"I've loved you for a really, REALLY, long time now..."

She pushed me away and she...

Oh god, I can't say it...

End of Yuki's POV


Mayu's POV


Oh my god, Jurina!

You're kissing Yukirin!!!!

WHY? WHY?! WHY?!?!?!

Oh, I'm so mad, I'm gonna....

Well, y'know...

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!"

Just a lot louder...

I walked back out and basically drowned my head in the sink.

Jurinathisisallyourfalutyoucan'tjustkeepyourmouthshutorkeepyourmagiconthedownloworstayoutofmyhairforonesinglefreakingminute!!!!
(Translation: Jurina, this is all your fault! You can't just keep your mouth shut or keep your magic on the down-low or stay out of my hair for one single  [freaking] minute!)

"Who are you?"

I looked up and saw Sae staring at me.

"Sae-chan!"

"Eh? You know my name?"

"Ah! Y-yes! I'm a new student. My name's Jurina."

I bowed down, and then I got an idea...

"Sae. Do you have a girlfriend?"

"EH?! Y-y-y-yes... Her name is Kashiwagi Yuki."

"I just saw Watanabe-san kissing her."

"Eh?! Mayuyu is?!"

We both ran into the room and I pointed to the two of them kissing.

She was so shocked, I couldn't read her face.

"How do you feel?"

"I..."

Yes. Stop it! Let's make sure it never happens again!!!

But, wait...

What if she..?

Oh no... I need to stop this!

I walked in and tapped Jurina's shoulder.

"Mayu..."

She turned and saw me.

"Do you even know Yuki's feelings? She has a girlfriend! You can't just do this!"

"B-but..."

"No buts! She doesn't need this! She's already fine now, so she doesn't need this! Please stop! Reconsider!!!"

Reconsider...

Oh god...


I ran out and went outside.

I'm going to a place only I can find peace.

End of Mayu's POV


Yuki's POV


"...Mayu, what are you--?"

"Yukirin..."

I looked over and saw Sae standing there.

Sae...

"Yukirin, do you...?"

"W-wait, Sae... I... I-I'm so..."

"Do you like Mayu?"

Eh?

"Yukirin, you can tell me... I just wanna know how you feel..."

But... I don't even know how I feel...

I mean, Sae's my first love, and my girlfriend...

But, Mayu...

All I can think of is Mayu, Mayu, Mayu, and... Mayu.

What do I do?

Then, Mayu tapped my shoulder.

"Um... I'm gonna say something. Jurina's my ex, and she broke up with me because, yesterday, I kissed her and I started moaning your name, Yuki."

"Eh?! Is that true? Yuki was doing the same thing, but..."

Wait, what?!

Mayu took my hand and pulled me out of the room, to one of the staircases that lead to the roof.

"But, Mayu, why did you..?"

She snapped her fingers, and she instantly changed in front of me.

Mayu was Jurina.

Then, that means Jurina was actually Mayu!

Oh god, I'm such an idiot!

"Go talk to her."

I nodded and ran up the stairs.

Mayu was standing on the roof, and she looked like she was doing the Titanic thing.

And, she was singing...

Watanabe Mayu - Yuuhi no Ijiwaru (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TU_7dewRF6U#ws)

The student quarters in the cold wintry wind
 We arranged to meet under the Platanus tree
 15 minutes already passed
 I pout because you haven't come yet

The dead leaves collecting at my feet
 Comfort my loneliness softly...

Because of the unkind sunset
 Time passes quickly
 Shadows stretch longer
 It's almost closing time

While running on the other side of the street
 You say "I'm sorry" in a loud voice
 It's embarassing but I'm happy
 The mood was quickly fixed

Because it's my first time having a boyfriend
 I don't know what to do

The unkind sun is falling
 Winter constellations in the sky
 Rotate in the darkness
 We hold hands gently

"Yes, you didn't do anything wrong.
 I came earlier than our meeting time"
 The bad one was the sunset

The sunset's unkindness

Because of the unkind sunset
 Time passes quickly
 Shadows stretch longer
 It's almost closing time


Oh god, that's so beautiful... I've never heard Mayu sing.

I went up to her and sneaked up behind.

I leaned down to whisper in her ear.

"I love you too."

When she turned around, I instantly grabbed her and kissed her.

Her face was already so hot from her blushing, but it was getting even hotter.

But, she kissed me back... Thank goodness...

We kissed in front of the beautiful sky and hugged tight.

Mayu started crying into my shoulder.

"I'm so sorry, Yuki! I... I really love you! I wouldn't do anything to hurt you! I..."

"Shut up!"  She pulled back and looked at me. "You're such a crybaby..."

She cried again and hugged me tighter.

"Yukiiiiii!!! You're being too sweeeeeet!!!! I can't stop cryiiiiinng!!!!!!"

"Mou... You're so cute..."

I kissed her forehead and hugged her back.

"I love you, Yuki."

"I love you too, Mayu."


---TBC---
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 14)
Post by: kuro808 on July 18, 2013, 03:42:40 AM
Jurina's intervention worked :lol:

Although scary for the switch before Sae could realize the situation but yeah...  :nervous
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 14)
Post by: kenjoy12 on July 18, 2013, 04:02:23 AM
A confession! Ahaha XD

KISSU ~ :w00t:

Lovey-dovey moments :wub: :wub: :wub:

What will MaYuki relationship will encounter..

Can't wait to find out more.. :fap

Thank you for the update :bow: :thumbsup
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 14)
Post by: katekyohit on July 18, 2013, 07:16:34 AM
yatta~ MaYuki! <3  :inlove: :inlove:

Jurina you did your job well :D I can't wait for anymore MaYuki moments~! GAH  :deco:
can't wait to find out what's going to happen next between these two!
Thanks for updating!
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 14)
Post by: Shinoki on July 18, 2013, 01:10:58 PM
Hooray!!! Wow...
So lol....
Jurina transfers~~
Change!!!!
Conffession and Mayuyu is in distress...
the confusion....\
Mayuki~~
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 14)
Post by: leEwẬy on July 18, 2013, 02:20:19 PM
Love this :luvluv1:
Now, they're a couple :on woohoo:
Lots of Mayuki moments :whistle:
Although Jurina changed her and Mayu's body but thanks to that, they finally confessed :nya:
EH~ Jurina's actually Mayu's ex-girlfriend :shock:
Kinda sad for Sae but hope she'll find someone by her side soon :on drink:
Wonder what'll happen next to (Juri)Mayuki :on gay:
Update ASAP, please :kneelbow:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 14)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on July 18, 2013, 07:53:00 PM
hehe cant wait for the jurimayu scene, they're always so funny :lol:
yes! finally! mayuki are together! :deco: (died and gone to heaven)
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 14)
Post by: gek geki on July 19, 2013, 04:15:16 AM
FINALLY WHAT HAPPEN NEXT?
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 14)
Post by: Zita on July 20, 2013, 12:58:44 PM
This is so sweet. :D
Finally they are together.  :cow:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 14)
Post by: cisda83 on July 20, 2013, 01:10:29 PM
Oh I miss a lot...

What's going to happen next

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the updates

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Black Chocolate (Chapter 15)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on August 10, 2013, 04:27:20 PM
*Author's Note: Next chapter will be the final chapter.


Chapter 15-Black-painted revenge


Yuki's POV


It's been a few days since Mayu confessed to me and we became an official couple.

Truth be told, I never expected anything like this to happen.

But, it's okay. Mayu's already been so nice.

...I just hope we'll be alright.

I've had this bad feeling that something will happen to us ever since we became a couple.

Please... don't let anything happen.


*Ring* *Ring*

"Huh?"

Is Mayu calling me this late at night?

*Ring* *Ring* *Ring*

*Beep*

"Hello?"

"Nee... Kashiwagi..."

"Hm? Who is this? Tell me who you are."

"Nee... Tell me~... You mad at me.. for... killing your friend~?"

I was suddenly stunned with a horrifying memory from long ago.

Everything came back.

The day that I lost myself.

My chest was suddenly struck with a strong, sharp pain and I passed out.

The last thing I remember hearing was an evil laughter coming from the phone.


The next morning I woke up and I pretended like nothing ever happened.

But, I couldn't forget.

There were images from long ago playing over and over in my head and I couldn't stop them.

The laughter was evil and I could hear it everywhere I went.

I wanted to tell my parents I didn't want to go to school, but I don't want them to worry.

...And, I want to see Mayu.

So, I walked into the school and I was still a bit dizzy from last night.

I held onto the wall for support, trying to catch my breath. I grasped my chest.

Leaning up against the wall, I pursed my eyes together and breathed heavily as the nightmare repeated in my head.

"You mad? Hahahahahaha! Hahahahaha..."

"...S-s-s-st-stop..."

"Yuki?"

I look up and saw a familiar face.

"Ma..yu..."

"Yuki, you look sick. Did something happen yesterday? You're skin's even a little pink!"

"Mayu... H-help me..."

"Come with me!"

She pulled my arm and lead me to the bathroom. Her hand reached up to my head.

"You're burning up! What's wrong?"

"..I.. don't know..."

"What do you mean?"

"I've been feeling like this ever since... since..."

"Just calm down." She pulled out a gummy candy from her pocket and placed it in my mouth.

I tried to chew it, but I got choked and fell to my knees.

I felt like I was gonna pass out again, my vision getting darker.

"Don't worry."

She placed it in her mouth and kissed me, transferring the candy into my mouth.

Her tongue was twisting and turning, dancing with mine, while the sweet fruity flavor of the gummy lingered.

"...Mm.. wait... M-M-Mayu..."

She didn't stop. In fact, she increased her pace.

I couldn't breathe and was completely lost in the heat of the kiss.

"..Mm~ Ma... yu~... Ahh...."

*Ring* *Ring*

She finally broke the kiss and stared at my pocket. My phone was ringing.

Oh god... I thought I had it on vibrate.

*Beep*


"Kashiwagi~... I'm here!"

I dropped my phone and panicked. I held my head as my breathing got harder and harder.

Mayu got angry and picked up the phone.

"Who is this?!"

"Nee, Watanabe... Are you mad because I'm threatening your girlfriend~? Hehehehehehe."

"What?! Who are you?! ..Hello? Hello?! She hung up."

She closed the phone and turned back to me. I was still catching my breath.

"Are you okay?"

"..Haa... haa... M-M-Mayu... D-don't.. go so crazy... Haa..."

"Sorry. I just got caught up in the moment. Feel better now, Yuki?"

"Who was that? She's so scary..."

"Don't worry. I'll find her."

I nodded.

She hugged me tight, and I felt a little better.

But, it still really hurts...


Mayu's POV

I'm gonna find that girl who's threatening Yuki.

I'm not gonna let anyone hurt her.

After class, I ran over to the room next door and found Jurina.

"Jurina! I need your help."

"What is it?"

"Someone's threatening Yuki. We need to find who she is."

I took out Yuki's phone and showed her the caller I.D.

"Do you know this girl?"

"Ma.. Matsui? She has my family name... But, no. She doesn't sound familiar."

"Matsui Rena. She said she was here. What if she transferred to school?"

"We should find her quick!"

We both ran off in different directions to search for Rena before she could find Yuki.

I checked the upper level of the school, while Jurina took the lower level.

After checking all the hallways and rooms, I decided to go up higher.

I found the stairs to the roof and started climbing up, when...

"Kyaaaa!!!"

"Yuki!"

I ran up and saw a young girl strangling Yuki.

Yuki was gasping for air, holding the girl's hands at her neck and trying to break free.

All the while, she was.. laughing. She was laughing maniacally.

"..Ma... yu..."

"Stop it! Yuki's going to die!"

"Hehehehe... Don't worry, it won't be painful. She'll just give out after a while~. Hehehehehe."

I ran over and released the girl from Yuki and pinned her to the ground.

Yuki fell flat on the ground, trying to catch her breath.

"Why are you doing this to Yuki?!"

"I want revenge..."

"What?"

"She killed my brother! My brother and his friends were finally gonna set her straight, and she killed him! I swore revenge on her!"

"I don't know what he did, but he hurt Yuki! She never would've have meant to if he didn't hurt her! It's HIS own fault he's gone!"

She was silent, but then her smile grew wide and she started laughing again.

"Hahahahahaha!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!"

Oh god... What's wrong with this girl? She must've really lost it after she lost her brother.

"If you're going to stop me, I'll let you die with Yuki!!!" She grabbed my neck and started strangling me hard.

I tried to make her let go, but she was so strong.

"You two can be together... in the afterlife! Hehehehehehehe..."

"...S-s-stop..!!"

"Rena!"

I heard a familiar voice that made her grip loosen.

This was Rena, but who...?

"Rena! Stop..."

I looked over and saw Jurina.

"...Who are you?"

"I'm here to help you, Rena. You can't live like this."

She let go of me and stood up, glaring at Jurina.

"You can't do this anymore. You're brother was never right, so you can't go and do things like this. You're brother killed someone important to Yuki, and that caused her to do what she did. She was doing it because she loved him and saw him die right in front of him."

"But... he..."

"You're making up lies. The image in front of you and the image in your mind are two different things. You need to let go and forget about him. She already got revenge, so there's nothing you can do."

Rena gripped her fist and gritted her teeth, running faster towards Jurina.

"Shut up, shut up, shut up!!!!"

Right before she came in contact with her, Jurina pulled out a card and held it up to her forehead.

Rena froze in her spot and fainted.

"Jurina..?"

"I used this." She held up the card.

(http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs36/f/2008/243/7/2/72b8806ee3f3259907b68ade5b1be378.jpg)

"I erased her memory to ease her pain. I don't want her to go on with such a burden."

"Thanks, Jurina."

I slowly walked over to Yuki, still passed out.

"Yuki... Yuki, everything will be alright."

When I touched her, she felt really cold and stiff. Like stone.

"Yuki?"

I picked her up and nudged her a bit.

"Yuki? Wake up. Yuki!"

I shook her more and more, but she wouldn't get up.

I pulled out the star badge in my pocket, and...

It... it turned black.

"Yuki?! Yuki!!!"

Jurina ran over and got close.

Her eyes widened and she said something that made my heart shatter.

"She's... She's not breathing!!!"


---TBC---
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 15)
Post by: Shinoki on August 10, 2013, 04:36:50 PM
next chap will be the last??
I need a miracle!!!
Yukirin!!! Noo!!!
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 15)
Post by: leEwẬy on August 10, 2013, 06:06:58 PM
Yeah! Yuki don't die :pleeease:
I think Mayu'll do something to save her, wonder what's it :dunno:
Gekikara killed Yuki :on speedy: Luckily, Jurina stopped her before she killed Mayu :farofflook:
Yuki, please alive, alive, alive :prayers:  :mon pray:
The next chapter'll be the last one :fainted: So sad :err:
Anyway, update soon, please :kneelbow:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 15)
Post by: kuro808 on August 10, 2013, 07:13:28 PM
Rena came back for revenge and knocked Yuki out.  Hope she is okay...
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 15)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on August 10, 2013, 07:40:44 PM
ehhh????!!!!!!! rena chan's lost it!!!!!!!!  :panic: :panic:
rena stop, don't kill yuki!!!!! :cry: your brothers own fault :smhid
mayu make her eat a sweet or something to bring back to life!!!!!!! :cry: :cry:
the next one, the final one, i luv this fic!!!!!! :(
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 15)
Post by: cisda83 on August 11, 2013, 12:00:53 AM
Rena lost her mind... So Jurina erased her memory...

What's going to happen to Rena next?

What about Yuki?

Would she survive?

Can't wait to see the next chapter, the finale

Thank you for the update...

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 15)
Post by: kurogumi on August 11, 2013, 02:54:16 AM
No! Yuki!

Mayu safe her please
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 15)
Post by: Zita on August 11, 2013, 10:03:28 PM
Rena :cry: :cry: :cry:
Yuki :cry:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 15)
Post by: imteedee on August 12, 2013, 07:49:38 PM
I'm reliving my Cardcaptor Sakura moments in this fic!  :farofflook:
gaaah almost at the end  :badluck:
I like it!!  :ding:


Jurina PUT OUT AN EFFIN CARD! DON'T LET YUKI DIE!!!  :frustrated:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 15)
Post by: gek geki on August 17, 2013, 04:26:16 AM
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE SAFE YUKIRIN
Title: Black Chocolate (Chapter 16) Final Chapter
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on August 19, 2013, 03:39:01 AM
The final chapter, guys! I hope you enjoyed it, and please look forward to my future works.


Final Chapter-Black Heart

After Yuki was strangled by Rena and deemed unconscious, Jurina and Mayu immediately rushed to the hospital.

She's currently in the emergency room, and the two girls are waiting for her.

Mayu had been crying nonstop since Yuki stopped breathing and prayed endlessly for her friend...

Her girlfriend, to be safe.

After an hour of waiting, Mayu had calmed down, but was still sulking.

Jurina came over and tried to talk.

"Mayu..."

"..."

"Don't worry. I promise, everything will be fine."

"...."

"Yuki's strong. The doctors will save her."

"....."

As she backed away, Sae, Aki, Rie, and Asuka came running in.

"Mayuyu!"

"...Guys? What are you...?"

"Jurina called us and told us about Rena. I made sure the student council will take care of her."

"How's Yukirin?"

"We're still waiting."

Aki looked over her Jurina's shoulder and saw Mayu crawled up on the couch.

"Mayuyu? Are you alright?"

"...."

"It's really hard for her."

Sae smiled and came closer.

"Don't worry, Mayuyu. I believe in Yukirin. She'll come out of those doors as good as new, I'm sure of it!"

"....." Mayu bit her lip, trying to contain her tears.

"Mayu..."

Finally, the doctor came through the doors with the most unreadable expression on his face.

"Are you Kashiwagi-san's friends?"

"Y-yes."

"How is she? How's Yukirin?"

"I'm... so sorry... Kashiwagi-san's heart has stopped completely, she wasn't breathing and she's already far from waking up."

Everyone's hearts shattered at his words. Mayu was still lying on the couch, but heard every word.

"W-what?"

"I'm afraid... there's nothing we can do. Kashiwagi-san is... dead."

"....No... No way...."

"Oh my gosh..."

"I'm so sorry."

He left everyone alone, still stunned by his words.

Jurina looked back and saw Mayu.

"Mayu..."

She slowly got up and walked towards her.

She lost balanced and fell into her embrace, crying her heart out.

Sae was crying too, and everyone was too shocked to say anything else.

Mayu can't help but feel her own heart break, as it every last bit of her world had been sucked into a black hole.

She felt like she wanted to die and give her entire life to Yuki, all so she could live.

She reached into her pocket and pulled out the badge.

It had shattered into pieces and was a dirty, rusted black rubble.

Nothing but useless trash.

Gone. Just like Yuki.

"I'm sorry, Yuki... I couldn't grant your wish... I failed you."


After everyone else left, Mayu was alone in Yuki's room, staring at her body covered up by the blanket.

She held her cold, limp hand and cried over the bed.

"Yuki..."

She slowly took off the blanket and saw her pale, lifeless face.

She touched her soft lips, now turned cold and no longer their lushious pink.

"I'm sorry..."

Mayu heard the door open and Jurina came in.

"Jurina." She instantly ran up and grabbed her shoulders. "Please, Jurina. You need to save Yuki! Use your clow cards!"

"Mayu, I can't."

"Please, you have to! You must have ONE card! I need her! You're already a full witch, so only YOU can do it!"

"No, I mean I can't. Even if I had a card to save her, it's forbidden. The injury will be passed onto me, and I'll die in Yuki's place."

"Jurina, I beg you! You need to help me!!! PLEASE!!!!"

Jurina gripped her fists and looked down.

"JURINA!!!!"

"...Fine. I'll try..."

She walked passed her and picked up Yuki's body.

"Let's go."


The two girls flew back to Mayu's candy shop and entered Mayu's room.

"Hurry, Jurina."

"OK, but I must warn you. I only have until midnight. If it works, I'll die. If it doesn't you can never become a witch."

Mayu looked at her clock.

"It's 11:50. Please, save her!"

"You don't care what happens to me?"

"Jurina, you don't understand. Yuki... She's my everything. I need her so much!"

"...Very well."

She pulled out a card and held it above Yuki.

(http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs36/f/2008/246/e/1/e15d77af5e635bd0034b80e9a5ec25d0.jpg)

"Windy, blow the wind of life into Yuki!"

Strong winds wrapped around Yuki and lifted her into the air.

A gust of wind blew into Yuki's mouth and she instantly dropped.

Jurina was in pain from the magic she used and caught some of her breath.

She knelt down to feel for Yuki's breath.

"...Nothing."

"Please, Yuki. Stay with us."

"Let's try this!"

(http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs36/f/2008/275/8/c/8c6005d1b584642a73b9f30bcb0dcc40.jpg)

"Light, go into Yuki and warm her heart!"

Millions of ribbons of light, wrapped around Yuki and picked her up.

They all met in the middle and went through her skin.

Jurina pursed her lips, trying to hold on.

She finally let go of Yuki, and dropped down on one knee.

"Jurina!"

Mayu ran over and held her close.

Jurina crawled over and felt Yuki's chest.

"..Damnit. Nothing."

"Please, we don't have much time! It's almost midnight."

Jurina gritted her teeth and stood up.

She held up a card and it started letting out sparks of lightning, scaring Mayu.

(http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs36/f/2008/245/d/a/da3f8f0b0325600c38c2a200e8e3352c.jpg)

"Wait! Not that!"

"Thunder, shock Yuki back to life!"

The blue lightning hit every corner of the room and shocked Yuki's body hard.

She looked like a human plasma ball, and her body was shocked to the core.

"Jurina, stop!!!"

Jurina let go of the card and everything calmed down.

Jurina was coughing and had trouble breathing.

"..Five... minutes... Five DAMN minutes... I can still save her..."

"Jurina, please."

"..Even if it's just for a little bit... I can bring her back."

Jurina slowly raised up. She looked up at Mayu's skylight on the roof.

The full moon was almost in the middle of the sky, about to light up the whole room.

"Just a little more..." she whispered pulling out her final card.

Her last hope.

(http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs37/f/2008/274/a/a/aa81c220a5fd8e311189bc7787475ed2.jpg)

"Return, bring Yuki's soul back from the dead!"

She held it above Yuki and a few blue light tentacles buried into Yuki's chest.

The color was coming back to her face and her lips were they're beautiful pink shade again.

She slowly opened her eyes and weakly turned to face Mayu.

"..M-Ma...yu..."

"Yuki!!!"

She hugged Yuki tight, happy she had one last moment with Yuki.

"I only have a few minutes. You better hurry, Mayu."

Mayu broke the hug and held Yuki's hand.

"Yuki, I'm so sorry. I failed to complete my test, and you..."

"I-it's okay... I'm n-not m-mad..."

"But, Yuki...."

Yuki took her other hand and held Mayu's.

She slowly tried to raise herself up, but she was in pain and couldn't move.

"Yuki. Don't try to do anything. You're still..."

"...I know I... won't last... M-Mayu..."

Mayu shook her head and laid against Yuki's shoulder, crying.

"..Mayu... D-don't c-cry, Mayu..."

"Of course I'm gonna cry! Yuki, you're...! You..."

"I know... I'm sad, too... But, Mayu..." She reached her hand up to touch Mayu's cheek.

"Eh?" She felt her wipe off her tears and saw her smile. "Y-Yuki... W-why are you.. smiling?"

"Mayu... I didn't need that magic... Even while I saw dark, you saw light... you helped me... With or without it all..."

"Yuki..."

The clock was slowly ticking. It's almost midnight.

"Mayu! I can't hold on much longer!" Jurina screamed.

"No! Yuki, please, you need to hang on!!"

"..M-Mayu... I don't care what happens... I just want you to know... I'm happy..."

"You are?"

"...Yes..."

Jurina finally dropped the card and fell to the ground, panting.

Tears fell from the corner of Yuki's eyes.

"...Th-thank.. y..."

She slowly closed her eyes again, and fell into what would become an eternal sleep.

Mayu couldn't hold her tears anymore and cried as loud as she could into Yuki's chest.

Without her knowing, the black crystal badge fell out of her pocket and landed on the ground.

There was no glow left in it.

Yuki was gone. Forever.

And there was nothing Mayu or Jurina could do about it.

"Yuki.... How... how can you be happy? We can't be together now! I NEED YOU!!!!!"

She punched the ground and touched Yuki's soft cheek.

She slowly closed her eyes and came closer.

"...I love you..."

A single tear fell from Yuki's cheek and fell onto one of the pieces of the shattered badge.

A golden light formed around it and every piece left.

It slowly rose from the ground and put itself back together, shining brighter than ever.

The golden light circled the entire room and was absorbed into Mayu's body.

Mayu's clothes were transformed into new ones.

They were white with gold lining, like Jurina, but was more girly and had light blue and pink bows.

The star began a shining medallion at the center of Mayu's chest.

Jurina looked up and was stunned at the flashy Mayu.

"Mayu... You did it."

"Eh?"

"You passed the final test! You're a full witch!!!"

Some of the light formed an orb and floated into Mayu's hands.

"What is this?"

"You can have one rule-free wish. Hurry! You can save Yuki!"

Mayu took the orb of light and squeezed it together.

She closed her eyes and whispered into her hands.

"I wish Yuki was alive."

The light burst inside her hands and formed a new spell.

In Mayu's hands, there was a cup of a delicious looking liquid.

Mayu came closer and smelled it. Mayu's eyes widened at the familiar scent.

"Hot chocolate..."

She drank some of the chocolate and kissed Yuki's lips, transferring the liquid into her.

Mayu hoped and prayed as she kissed her more.

She waited for something, until...

*Gulp*

Yuki's hand regained its energy and slowly rose up and grabbed Mayu's shoulder.

She rose herself closer to deepen the kiss, clutching on Mayu's clothes.

She drank the chocolate bit by bit, the sweet taste lingering in their mouths.

They finally broke the kiss and Yuki woke up from her long sleep.

She smiled and hugged Mayu tight. Mayu was crying, happy to have her Yuki come back.

"Yuki... Thank goodness..."

"Mayu, thank you."

Mayu couldn't let go. She didn't want to let go.

"Mayu, please don't cry. I'm fine now. Please, don't be crying."

"But, Yuki... I love you."

She popped back up and kissed Yuki again.

The two girls kissed passionately on the couch, twisting and tasting each other's chocolate painted tongues.

"...Mayu... I-I... l-love you, too... Ahh...."

Jurina looked away a bit.

"Oop. Better leave them alone." she thought with a sly look.


The next morning, Yuki woke up and found herself in Mayu's bed.

She saw the girl laying next to her, still asleep, and realized...

They were both naked.

Yuki popped up, remembering everything that happened last night.

It was already 11:00 AM, and everything still feels like a dream.

She felt someone tug on her arm and when she turned her head, she saw her girlfriend looking up at her, smiling.

"I knew you were awake," she whispered.

Yuki giggled and laid down again to hug her.

"Are you still happy?"

"Of course, Mayu. I have you, don't I?"

The two girls got closer and kissed again.

The sun shining in the room. The light of a new day and a new beginning.

Everything was now perfect.

"I wouldn't have it any other way," Yuki said out loud before kissing her again.


The End

 :heart: Bye Bye~ :heart:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 16) Final Chapter
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on August 19, 2013, 03:50:47 AM
i was like nooooo yuki why you die!!!!!! :cry: :cry:
and i didnt want jurina to die :shocked :(
yay mayuki live happily ever after :deco:
thanx for the final update :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 16) Final Chapter
Post by: Shinoki on August 19, 2013, 04:01:12 AM
doki doki doki....
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Complete)
Post by: Zita on August 19, 2013, 09:43:15 AM
Nice story, but what happened with Rena?
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Complete)
Post by: kuro808 on August 19, 2013, 10:44:10 AM
Mayu did her job and saved Yuki.  Love conquerors all
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Complete)
Post by: leEwẬy on August 19, 2013, 03:40:52 PM
Thanks godness, Yuki's alive :mon exhaust:
At first when I read the part that the doctor said Yuki was die, I was :OMG: :fainted: :on speedy:
Then knowing that Jurina could save her but in exchange, she'd die, I was :mon headbang: :err: :stoned:
But thanks to the power of love, Yuki's alive :wahaha:
And Mayu official became a witch :on woohoo:
Happy ending :mon squee:
Hope to see another Mayuki fic of yours :hee:

Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Complete)
Post by: cisda83 on August 19, 2013, 06:17:00 PM
Interesting ending there...

Somehow.. The twist about Jurina needed to die for Yuki is wrong somewhat...

I mean why did Jurina need to sacrifice herself for Yuki.

Not her business... Sure that Yuki is Mayu's everything more important than anything else...

But not the case for Jurina... Yuki is not jurina's whatsoever...

However, great ending... Thank you

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Complete)
Post by: imteedee on August 21, 2013, 03:17:00 PM
Nice story, but what happened with Rena?
Somehow, I asked this to myself too LOL where did Rena go?  :nervous
I so want MaYuki aftermath  :ptam-wub:

a very HOT... I mean heart-warming ending there  :ptam-psst:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate (Complete) *New poll added*
Post by: Terragen on August 31, 2013, 08:10:46 AM
i choose How is Mayu and Yuki doing?
Title: Black Chocolate Afterstory (Mayuki OS)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on September 07, 2013, 02:17:58 AM
Black Chocolate: Afterstory (Mayuki Epilogue OS)


It's been a month since Mayu and Yuki have become a couple and they lived happily ever after.

But, recently, Yuki's become worried about Mayu.

Ever since she became a full witch, she's been acting a bit different. Not her normal "different."

She's gotten more quiet than normal, and she's been all childish and clingy to her.

Calling her Mama and kissing her WAY more than usual.

"I wonder why..." she kept thinking to herself.


"Mama-rin!"

Mayu giggled as she ran towards her, clinging onto her arm.

"Mama-rin, I found a really cute maid café. Can we go eat there?"

"A maid café? I didn't know you liked those."

"Yeah! I've always wanted to go to one!" Mayu continued snuggling against her shoulder like a cute puppy. "Can we, Mama-rin?"

Yuki giggled and petted her head.

"Sure. Let's go."

Mayu grabbed her hand and dragged her by her heels.

"I'll show you the way!"


"Sorry for the wait. Here's your omelet rice."

The cute maid with cat ears laid down a plate with a beautifully cooked omelet with a ketchup bunny drawn on it.

Yuki noticed the written message on the plate.

"Dear Mayu-sama and Yuki-sama, I really like you! :heart:"

Yuki knew it was part of business for the waitresses to ask nice, but it's the first time she got this much good service.

"Itadakima~su~!"

Mayu was scarfing down her food, her cheeks rosy red from the taste of the food.

Yuki was eating, but slowly...

She was still worried.

Why is Mayu acting like this? Sure, it seems normal, but to Yuki, there's something off.

Mayu looked up at her girlfriend and tapped her shoulder.

"Hey, what's wrong? You seem down."

"Mayu..."

Mayu tilted her head, swallowing her food.

"Is there a reason you're acting like this?"

Mayu jokingly laughed and ate some of her food again.

"What are you talking about? I'm not acting weird..." she said as she sipped her hot chocolate.

"You're acting like you're hiding something!"

Mayu suddenly got silent and her smile disappeared.

"Mayu... what's going on?"

She looked down and looked at something in her pocket.

"Tell me!"

"....I'm...."

She pulled out a folded piece of paper with a seal on it. A letter. Yuki looked at it and opened it.

"Dear Watanabe Mayu-sama,
congratulations on completing your final test as a witch.
Please return to the Magic Realm for your coronation as the new princess.
We shall retrieve you from the human realm at September 10th."


"P-princess?"

"I'm sorry, Yuki. But, I just... can't be with you forever."

Yuki shook her head and smiled.

"No... I'm proud of you."

"You.. what?"

"I'm glad to hear it. Congratulations. I hope you're happy..."

"But, Yuki..." She held her chest, trying to hold back her tears. "When I leave... none of you will remember me. You'll all forget about me, as if I was never here."

Yuki gasped, clutching her own heart, too.

She couldn't accept this. She didn't want to forget Mayu.

"Yuki, I'm so sorry..."

Yuki bit her lip, leaving the table. Mayu was left alone, her heart broken.

She was about to leave the new life she made.

And the one person she loved so much.


The day finally came and it was time for Mayu to leave.

Mayu stood in front of the mirror, her one way ticket back to her realm.

She put her hand on the glass, feeling its coldness.

The full moon was about to rise, opening the portal and returning her home. She shed a tear.

"Mayu!"

Someone came up from behind and hugged her.

Of course, Mayu could recognize her, for it was none other than Yuki.

"Mayu, please don't go!" she said crying.

"B-but, Yuki... You said--"

"Forget what I said! You can't leave me! I can't live! I won't be happy without you!"

Mayu turned around and hugged Yuki back.

"You will."

"No, I won't!"

"Yes, you will... I know you will."

She broke the hug and faced her, wiping away her tears.

"Don't be so hard on yourself. Now, you have so many people who love you."

"Yeah, but... Not you."

"Yuki. Promise me this. You'll make it, if you promise to never, ever stop being you. You can do it, I just know it."

Yuki wiped off the rest if her tears and smiled sadly.

"Promise..."

The two hugged again and kissed each other deeply.

The moon finally rose and shone on the mirror.

It started shining and glowed a bright white light. The portal was open.

Mayu broke the kiss and backed away.

"Goodbye, Yuki..."

She disappeared into the mirror and went away. Forever.

The whole room became bright around Yuki and she shut her eyes, tight.

Her mind went blank and she fell asleep.

The moment she opened her eyes, she was back in her room and the sun was shining.

She was sitting at her desk, working on something for school, and she fell asleep.

Then, she looked down at her wrist. There was a single cut.

"What the-?"

She called her mom and had her look at it.

She wrapped it in gauze and went back up to her room, looking at her blank notebook.

Slowly, after thinking a few minutes, she picked up her pencil and started writing.

"I want to see you so much... that it makes me want to cry..." She spun it in her hand, thinking of lyrics that came from what seemed like a dream.

A dream she tried to remember, but couldn't.

She smiled and wrote again.

"I want to cross this sky flying right now..."

Her eyes darted and she saw a wrapped candy. She opened it up and saw it was a chocolate.

"Chocolate?"

She put it in her mouth and chewed it, tasting the sweet inside as it melted in her mouth.

"... Oishii....."

She looked back at her paper, and smiled again.

"When tomorrow comes, maybe I'll be able to meet you. I can't go back..."


2 years later...

[Eng sub] Yokaze no shiwaza (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z8MgSRbAE1I#)

The orange crescent moon
 at the end of the sky looks like its sulking
 couldn't you at least call me?
 you are irritating
 I've been waiting for a long time...

I understand
 that you are busy with your work today, but
 walking alone on the asphalt my footsteps are too lonely
 I want to kick one of the empty cans on the street

I want to see you so much
 that it makes me want to cry
 I want to cross this sky flying right now
 Why is it that I grew to love you like this?
 I didn't want us to become so serious
 it's the evening wind's deed

How much should I wait
 to meet you?
 I wonder if I'll be here until the break of dawn like this?
 Why is it that I grew excited like this?
 when tomorrow comes maybe I'll be able to meet you
 I can't go back


"YUKIRIN~!!!"

After graduating high school, Yuki became a well known actress, a gravure princess, and an idol to all.

After she left the stage, she went back to her dressing room and saw someone there.

"Sae?"

Sae turned her head and smiled when she saw her.

"Yukirin!"

She ran up and hugged her tight.

"Sae, it's been ages! What are you doing here?"

"I saw your concert. You were amazing, as always. I'm so proud of you."

She giggled. "Thanks, Sae."

Then, Sae's phone rang in her pocket. She took it out and answered it.

"Hello? Ah, Sayaka! Sorry~, I was at Yukirin's concert... Ufufu, yeah~. Don't worry. I'll be right there... Promise... Okay, bye-bye. *Chu!* See ya later."

"Who was that? Your girlfriend?"

"Hahah, yeah... Sorry, I gotta go. See you next handshake event?"

"Okay..."

They hugged again and Sae left for her to change.

Yukirin looked through her outfits and saw the one she wanted for her next TV event.

After packing up, she got into her limo and talked to her manager on the phone.

"Hey, Kashiwagi. You finished?"

"Yeah. Where am I headed next?"

"ZIP is going to interview you about your next single. There's going to be another idol like you performing."

Yuki's eyes widened.

"Really?"

"Yeah. And apparently, she's a big fan of yours. Two idols meeting could really raise up business. Be sure to get in good with her."

"Sure."

"Okay, See ya at the studio."

"Bye."

She hung up and looked out the window.

She saw a poster of an idol who looked very cutesy. A perfect idol image.

"'Magical little witch of the idol world,' huh?" She repeated it in her head.

She couldn't help but let it feel so... nostalgic.

"Witch"

That name reminded her of a candy shop she used to go to 2 years ago, until it suddenly shut down.


Once she got to the studio, she saw a girl already preparing her next performance.

She looked closer and saw it was the same girl in the poster she saw on her way here.

While she was warming up, she looked and her eyes instantly met Yuki's.

She smiled and waved at her. Yuki waved back.

"Are you ready, Watanabe-san?"

Watanabe got her attention back and turned to them.

"Ah! Yes."

"Okay. Let's go, everyone! In 5, 4, 3..."

He signaled them and started shooting.

"And now, promoting her new single, with her song 'Sayonara no Hashi,' Watanabe Mayu-san!"

Mayu Watanabe - Sayonara no Hashi (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2mahLnY8iJE#ws)

If I stretch my hand out from here
 It feels like I could reach it
 It looks bigger than usual
 The setting sun

Fun occassions
 End in the blink of an eye
 Why is it that
 The hands of time were moving so quickly?

The time we spent looking out the classroom window
 The scenery from that day recedes into my memories

I loved you
 I loved you
 My heart finally realized it
 I loved you
 I really loved you
 'Goodbye' taught me that

In a corner of the schoolyard
 Stands a cherry tree bereft even of leaves
 Could a promise made underneath it
 Really come true?

Memories are always more beautiful than reality
 Because, little by little, important things come to be forgotten

On the path to the station I walked with you
 The scenery of the future is around the next corner

I loved you
 I loved you
 My first love was my first determination
 I loved you
 It was a childish love
 'Goodbye' won't teach me that

I loved you
 I loved you
 My heart finally realized it
 I loved you
 I really loved you
 'Goodbye' taught me that

'Goodbye' is a bridge to the future


As shooting ended, they all applauded and cheered her name to fill the studio.

"Mayuyu!!! Mayuyu!!! Mayuyu!!!"

Yuki just stood there amazed. She clutched her own heart, it was beating so fast.

She felt she was on the verge of tears.

"Why...? Why is it this fast?"


After they interviewed the cute idol, she went up to Yuki, smiling.

"Y-Yu-Yu-Yukirin!"

"Ah! Mayuyu, you were really good up there."

"Honestly, I was so nervous! But, when I saw you come in, I felt a bit more relaxed. I've always wanted to meet you!"

"Really?"

"Yeah! I... I absolutely LOVE you, Yukirin!"

Yuki covered her cheeks, she was blushing.

"Well, it's very nice to meet you, Mayuyu," she said shaking her hands.

However, when she looked up, Mayu looked... strange.

She was sad... Or, really, she couldn't tell.

She almost had no emotion.

"Mayuyu?"

She looked up at her and met her dark, lifeless, cold eyes.

They were piercing into her, leaving her frozen.

She let go of her hands and stood there like a statue.

Her heart felt like it was breaking, seeing such a sad girl... A poor girl...

"Kashiwagi? Kashiwagi!"

She finally snapped out of the trance and looked up at the camera man.

"Yes?"

"You're about to go on."

"Oh, okay..."

She walked up and sat down at her chair, watching Mayu go backstage somewhere.

She sighed a bit and slapped her cheeks, trying to concentrate on her work.

"Alright, pull yourself together, Yuki..."

"In 5, 4, 3..."

"Our next guest today is a rising star, already reaching third place in the Oricon charts, Kashiwagi Yuki-san."

The audience applauded again, but she noticed it wasn't as loud as Mayuyu's cheers.

"Kashiwagi-san, you're about to release your new single. What kind of song is it?"

"Mm~, it's a kind of love song. A girl is wanting to confess to her childhood friend after they've been together forever. It's a really sweet and heartwarming song."

"And what's the name of it?"

"'Shortcake.' We just finished recording yesterday."

"Oh! Are you going to perform it soon?"

"Yes. My first live performance will be on Mujack, so everyone please watch, okay?"

"Okay~!!!"

Yuki giggled and covered her cheeks again, blushing.

She couldn't help but glance back at where Mayu just was.

"We saw you talking to Watanabe-san earlier. Are you two good friends?"

"Uh, no, this is the first time we've met face to face. But, she seems to know me really well..."

"Well, it's great to see idols supporting one another."

Yuki giggled again, but she couldn't help but feel sorry for the little idol.

She must've really been suffering for some reason.

She just didn't know what. All she wanted to do was help her.


After shooting ended, she went back to the dressing room and saw Mayu sitting alone eating jelly beans.

She walked over and tapped her shoulder.

Mayu turned around and met her cold eyes again.

She bit her lip and shook her head a bit, relishing her senses to focus and talk to her.

"Ano... Is something wrong, Mayuyu? You can talk to me. I wanna help."

"...Yuki."

Yuki felt her heart skip a beat. Mayu called her by her name instead of her nickname.

"Do you remember me, Yuki?"

"Well, of course. You're an idol."

She put her hand on her shoulder, but Mayu got up and forced it off.

"That's not what I meant. We've met before, but you don't remember me. Why?"

"W-we have?"

Mayu walked over to the table and sat down.

She took a wrapped candy and started unraveling it.

"That... That's the candy from the shop I used to visit! Where did you get that?"

"I made it..."

"What?! How did you know the recipe?!"

"I created the recipe... The shop belonged to me and my family..."

"No way..."

She took the chocolate I her mouth and chewed it slowly.

Yuki tried to call her again, but she was ignoring her.

She finally gave up on helping her and decided to leave, but then Mayu suddenly grabbed her wrist and pulled her close.

Her lips instantly met hers and Yuki could instantly taste the chocolate inside her mouth.

Mayu kissed her deeply, refusing to let go.

In her mind, Yuki was trying to process what happened, but her head was all fuzzy and she couldn't think.

Her body wasn't moving and she couldn't resist. Nothing was cooperating with her.

Yuki closed her eyes and felt her heart grow warm.

Her head was filled with visions of her, and the girl in front of her, together in high school.

And Mayu.. she was a witch. She helped her. Helped in her sorrow and darkness. Helped get her life back.

She was her savior. Her lover.

"Mayu..."

A tear shed down her cheek and she started returning the kisses.

She clinged onto Mayu's shoulders and the two fell down on the couch together.

They finally broke the kiss, the taste of chocolate still lingering.

Yuki giggled and wiped her thumb on Mayu's lips.

"You've got chocolate all over your face."

Mayu took her finger and wiped Yuki's lips.

"You do too."

"Mayu, I thought you had a coronation. Why are you back here?"

"I didn't want to stay there. When I left you, I realized I needed you more than anything." She held up the wrapper. "This was my last spell."

"What?"

"I used the last ounce of my magic to help you remember me again. I gave up everything I had to stay here, in this world, with you."

Yuki sat up and looked at the wrapper.

"You... You gave up all your magic just for me?"

"Yes."

"Why?"

"Because, no ounce of magic," she said holding her cheek, "can compare to how much I love you."

She kissed her again, softly, and Yuki didn't resist anymore.

Her heart was pounding endlessly and she felt so happy.

Her love was finally back where she belonged; in her arms.

And, this time, they could be together. Forever and ever. And magic couldn't compare to their love.


---The End---
Title: Re: Black Chocolate Afterstory (Mayuki OS)
Post by: Shinoki on September 07, 2013, 02:33:39 AM
....HAPPINESS!
Mayuki~ <3
Title: Re: Black Chocolate Afterstory (Mayuki OS)
Post by: cisda83 on September 07, 2013, 07:34:57 AM
Yeah... Mayuki together in the end...

Mayu left her life in Magic world...

Great ending there....

Thank you for the update

Can't wait to see your other story

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Black Chocolate Afterstory (Mayuki OS)
Post by: leEwẬy on September 07, 2013, 08:13:14 AM
Yay~~~~ Mayu came back :on woohoo:
They're both idols :on gay: But Yuki seems just a beginner :wahaha:
This chapter is so touching and sweet at the same time :mon lovelaff:
Mayuki :on gay: :mon firecrack:
Ano... I know this's kinda selfish request  :on ksweat:
But can you make another omake about Mayu's in the Witch Realm to coronation as the new princess :mon sweat: :mon ignore:
Anyway, I waiting for your another Mayuki fic :on gay:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate Afterstory (Mayuki OS)
Post by: kurogumi on September 07, 2013, 12:10:42 PM
aww sweet can''t wait for your another mayuki then
Title: Re: Black Chocolate Afterstory (Mayuki OS)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on September 07, 2013, 12:27:49 PM
nyaaaaaaaaaahhh mayuki is too sweet!!!!!!!!! :cathappy:
noooooooo!!!!!!! was the first thing in my mind when yuki had to forget about mayuyu :cry: :shocked
it was so cute when yuki could hear mayu's cheer the most :lol:
but mayuki will always be together :heart: :yep:
thanx for this :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate Afterstory (Mayuki OS)
Post by: imteedee on September 13, 2013, 06:26:19 PM
and they lived happily ever after.... *closes book*
nyaaaa~ I can cry now  :cry: this is the best ending it could ever have  :bow: :bow: hat's off!
I want another MaYuki series now  :mon whine: I actually hate endings  :mon surr:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate Afterstory (Mayuki OS)
Post by: Zita on September 14, 2013, 12:43:35 PM
That is good story. XD
Mayuki together :)
Sae got a girlfrend :grin:
But what happened with Rena :? Please tell me :bow:
Title: Black Chocolate Afterstory (WMatsui OS)
Post by: Ruka Kikuchi on September 15, 2013, 01:58:09 AM
Black Chocolate: Afterstory (WMatsui OS)


After everything was solved with Mayu and Yuki, Jurina left and had to find something new in her life.

She was soaring the sky, trying to find a new town. And she finally did.

Nagoya.

She loved Nagoya, and always wanted to visit, so she decided to live full time.

She settled down in a nice apartment, and transferred to a new school. She was a first-year in her new high school.

Then, on her fateful first day...

She met a senior. Not just any senior.

She met this girl before.

Long, black hair. Dark, mesmerizing eyes. Pale, white skin. Thin to the bone. Quiet as the wind.

A girl who had previously seeked revenge on Yuki, but was now to shy to talk to anyone.

The girl Jurina wiped her memory clean.

Matsui Rena.

She had definitely changed since she last saw her.

That evil laugh and creepy smile was gone.

All that darkness and scariness in her eyes disappeared. They were now empty and sad. She didn't look up once at anyone. She just stared at the ground.

She's never gone up to the front of the classroom, but her grades were above the rest.

And, she never uttered a single word. She was just silent. Completely mute.

Jurina honestly felt sad for the poor girl, but thought it was for the best.

Jurina didn't want to bring back those terrible memories and make her suffer.

She decided to try and use this chance at her new life to make friends with the new Rena. Maybe she can make her a little less shy.

Because, there was one more secret. Seeing this new version of the sad girl, seeing her empty eyes, and knowing she was scared of everything and everyone...

Jurina had fallen in love with Rena.


There was a school festival coming up, and everyone had to do something to prepare.

Lucky enough, Jurina and Rena were paired together, and Jurina had some perfect ideas for an attraction. She finally chose the greatest one she could think of.

A school maid café. The waitresses wear the cutest school girl/maid outfits, and she could imagine Rena, being the cutest one of them all.

That is... if she could even get Rena an inch near her.

"Rena-chan~!"

"..."

"Rena-chan~!!!"

"..."

"Rena-chan, listen to me~! Don't you think a maid café would be a good idea?"

Rena blushed, remaining completely silent.

"Mou~, I designed the cutest one just for YOU. How can we know what you want if you won't LOOK AT IT~?!"

"..." She bit her lip, trying to run away.

"RE~NA~!" She ran up and grabbed her arm. "C'mon~, don't be so shy~."

Rena gripped her fist. She held her head, trying to contain her emotions.

Jurina backed away from her a bit and thought of something.

She hurried into the changing room, leaving Rena alone and confused. After a few minutes, she came back wearing a black and white maid outfit.

"Hello, mistress."

Rena blushed madly. She covered her mouth, trying to hold her gasp.

Truth is, in her mind, she was screaming and dying of happiness at the cuteness in front of her.

Jurina pulled up a table and chair in front of her.

"Please take a seat."

Rena shyly walked over and sat down in the chair.

"If there's anything you need please ring the bell," she said laying a small silver bell on the table. "I'll be right back with your drink."

Jurina ran back into another room and pulled out a card.

(http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs37/f/2008/275/3/3/33d378ea368fc652569b54b9af443b3b.jpg)

"First, some of this."

She pulled out a cup and generated some special juice into it.

She pulled out her second card.

(http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs36/f/2008/248/7/2/7298a1879c206e3077f96573cd72893f.jpg)

"A little sweetness..."

She sprinkled some special sugar over the glass.

Then, she found some fruit and chopped it up. She blended them together and shook them up.

She slowly poured them in and stirred it up.

"And finally..."

(http://images2.fanpop.com/images/photos/7100000/The-Flower-cardcaptor-sakura-7115702-432-948.jpg)

"A pretty decoration. A flower for a flower."

She slowly stuck the cute pink flower onto the pink-orange-ish drink and carried it back to Rena.

"Sorry for the wait. Here's your special fruit smoothie."

"..." O////O

"Oishikuna~re. Moe, moe, kyun~! :heart: "

"...." >////////<

"Ahh~, mistress' face is getting so red. I hope you're not sick."

Jurina got closer and set her forehead against Rena's. Rena was getting so hot, and it made her smirk. Her sly cat smirk.

"Ah... You have a fever. You need a shot."

Rena was getting a little nervous, and was scared. She was about to get up, when Jurina suddenly grabbed her hand.

"Now, don't worry, mistress. This won't hurt."

Rena's lips were shaking in fear, her body tightly pressed against the wall.

Her legs and arms trembling, she shut her eyes tight, biting her lip.

Then, she felt Jurina's breath against her, and...

*CHU*

"See? It didn't hurt. Your special chuu-sha"

*Jurina Pun Note: Chusha-Shot, Chu~ "Chu"-Smooch :3

The next thing Jurina knew, the girl she just kissed for the first time collapsed I her embrace. She fainted due to embarrassment.


The moment Rena woke up, she was in the infirmary.

It was already afternoon; the festival must've been going on already!

She hurried and got up, then noticed the smoothie that Jurina made was sitting on the table beside her.

She slowly picked it up and took a sip of it.

"...Mm."

"Is it good?"

"Eh?"

She turned around, surprised to see Jurina now wearing a regular school uniform.

"...J-J-J-Ju--"

"Sorry I didn't wake you up. You looked so cute when you're asleep. Plus, I heard you sleep talking. You know you have some strange dreams, right?"

"Eh?"

"First, you were like 'Melon pan~ Melon pan~ I wanna eat Melon pan~' and then all the sudden you were switching voices and acting out this whole scene that ended with 'I'LL BECOME THE MONARCH OF THE NIGHT!!!!!!!' Hahahahaha, too cute~!"

Rena was covering up her whole face, she was so embarrassed.

She remembered her dream and she didn't even realize she was talking in her sleep. She knew it was a habit, but at THIS of all times...!!!

"And... Um... You said.. s-something else."

Rena looked up, a confused look on her face.

"What?"

"You kept calling my name. 'Jurina. Jurina.' Like a mom calling her baby." She scratched her head, waltzing towards her bit by bit. "Then you said~... 'Don't leave me alone'."

Rena's eyes widened, her heart suddenly skipped a beat. She grabbed her chest, trying to contain herself from fainting again.

"Rena... are you in love with me?"

"...Mm, so what if I am?"

"Because, I'm in love with you, too."

Rena was slowly backing away. She didn't exactly know how to respond to this.

But, she finally sighed.

"I was so scared... When I first saw you, my heart was beating so fast, I couldn't control it. I didn't want to trust anyone, and you were my only friend. I didn't want my love for you to ruin it all."

"Hey, don't worry..." she said patting her head. "Y'know, I have a friend who was like that once. She was afraid to accept her feelings, even when she finally realized them. But, I was able to show her what's right."

"And, that was...?"

"Well, it depends. How much do you love me? This much?" She laid a soft peck on her cheek. "Or THIS much?"

She slowly leaned forward and deeply kissed her lips.

Rena's body slowly relaxed and she felt herself feel so... at peace.

She closed her eyes and felt herself respond to the soft, sweet kisses. The tart taste of the smoothie still lingered on her lips, and it mixed with the sweet vanilla flavor of Jurina's lip gloss.

They finally parted for air and embraced each other. Rena laid her head against Jurina's shoulder, feeling her rub her back.

"So, Rena..."

"Hm?"

She saw her adored cat smile again, followed by her cute giggle.

"Does this make you my girlfriend?"

Rena innocently giggled again and embraced her again.

"Yes."


Glory Days - Matsui Jurina (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YshkLU66EmI#ws)


---The End---
Title: Re: Black Chocolate Afterstory (WMatsui OS)
Post by: imteedee on September 15, 2013, 06:08:54 AM
I couldn't contain Jurina's cuteness here  XD chuu~ chuu~  I could only think of nori's avatar on that  XD
Finally, my question has been answered  :nervous

thank you TTLuver497!  :roll:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate Afterstory (WMatsui OS)
Post by: Zita on September 15, 2013, 07:26:28 PM
I finally know how was that.
Thank you
Really nice end. :grin:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate *Complete*
Post by: Shinoki on September 15, 2013, 10:31:14 PM
...Didn't notice that WMatsui OS at the end til now...
THE MONARCH OF THE NIGHT!!
Yeah... Rena-san... Magical Radio reference I guess?
(she was the yoru no chouchou and also the queen of Kabukicho and stuff...)
kawaii~~
Title: Re: Black Chocolate
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on September 15, 2013, 11:11:13 PM
nyhaaa wmatsui kawaii!! :cathappy: :deco:
wmatsui are so lovable hehe :twothumbs
i also like the video of jurina-chan, jurina-chan daisuki!! :heart:
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: Black Chocolate
Post by: cisda83 on September 15, 2013, 11:20:36 PM
Ah... So Jurina survived and she was able to get her happy ending too

And Rena able to live without hate and sadness..

And obtain happiness...

That's great

Thank you for the OS

Can't wait to see more

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Black Chocolate
Post by: gilangfajri on September 22, 2013, 04:10:02 AM
this is amazingggggggg :thumbup
Thankssss :inlove: