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Title: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.18
Post by: cmze on September 27, 2012, 04:04:14 AM
                               ~Don't judge by the covers~
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Hello everyone this is my first time writting a Morning Musume fanfic because recently a became a super fan!!
My fanfic is Aigaki, Riho x Ayumi,JunJun and Reina and a little Eri and Sayumi.. hope you like it!

(3 Years ago) (In the classroom)
Gaki san are day dreaming again? A girl asks and smacks soflty Gaki's head
sorry Eri is just...*sighs* i can't help it! Risa answers smiling and blushing
Risa i don't want you to get hurt,she's not for you.. she's just a spoil girl who thinks she's better than anyone around just because she's pretty! Eri says a little irritated
i can't do anything my heart chose her! Risa answers looking through the window
*Cheerleaders practice*
There she is thinking of herself the bet thing in the world..i can't stand her! Eri says while looks the cheerleader's captain smiling
i think she's cute! Risa says blushing
so the new trend is watching Takahashi Ai? someone murmured
what?!? Eri and Risa said shocked in unision and looked at the person behind them
JunJun  you scared the hell out of me!! Eri shouted while Risa was staring the object of her affections
sorry! JunJun replies smirking
You're scary! Eri says and then sighs
That's Reina! JunJun says happy while pushes Eri aside and watches Reina dancing
here we go another girl in love! Eri says pouting whilw gets up
i'm not in love..i just think she's tiny but hot! JunJun replied smiling
~The cheerleaders's practice~
Look this little girl can really move! Sayumi says smiling while watches Riho dancing
she's really good! Ai says smiling
hey don't look but there's some weirdos looking at us on that window! Tanaka says pouting
what?Ai asked and then turned to look than also Sayumi turned to look
(Risa and Ai had eye contact)
"Is not that girl from China? and the other girl i haven't see her in my life.." Sayumi says smirking
i heard the China girl is a pervert and likes girls very much! Reina says feeling ackward
<They're looking at us! Risa says and hid while JunJun stood there watching Reina>
"i think i know that girl" Ai says serious
who is she? Reina asked
she's in my classroom! Ai replied a little annoyed
seems like you don't like her! Sayumi says
she's always weird, never speaks properly..she's weirdest person i ever met! Ai replied and got back to the practice
Reina and Sayumi stared eachother "are you thinking the same thing as me?" Reina asked
Sayumi answers "time to have fun?"
yep! Reina replied and got back to the practice
~Present~  (On set)
Risa look at me... That's great! oh god it's getting hot here! The photographer says while takes many pictures
*Risa changed hee position*
that's naughty! The photographer shouted happy
i'm tired can we take a break! Risa asked
ok..i think these are enough! The photographer says happy while looks the pictures
Risa chan.. You did it great! Her manager says smiling
thanks! Risa replies
you're a really beatiful girl! The manager says
Gaki san! Someone shouts
Eri? Gaki says impressed
so long without seeing you! Eri says smiling and hugs her friend tigly
what? You're a fashion model! Eri says shocked
well..it was accident but i'm glad! Gaki replies
now you're hot! Eri says while plays with Gaki's hair
You guys know eachother? The manager asks confused
yes,she's a highschool friend! Gaki replied
yeah we were really good friends but one day Gaki san got tired of us and changed school to a boarding one and we didn't saw her again till today..JunJun is going to be really happy! Eri replies smiling
it's not like that! Risa says smiling
ohh i'm glad you two know eachother because she's in charge of the marketing group! The manager says
ehhh Kamei Eri?!?! Gaki says shocked while Eri smiles at her
Sorry to interrupt but we have to get going the nest photoshoot for x magazine! an assistant says
i have to go to a meeting now but i'll pick you up once you're done with this! Eri says while walks away
yes,we need to catch up! Risa says smiling and waving
Risa soon changed her clothes to a swimsuit and waited for the photagrapher
I'm ready! Risa says with the towel on
oh no..he's not the photographer for this session! The manager says while looks around
then who is? Risa asked smiling
there she comes! The manager says
i'm sorry..i know it's a little late but traffic! The girl says smiling
Risa chan this is Takahashi Ai she will be the photographer for this session! the manager says
Risa smile fade away while Ai is smiling at her and offering her hand
Risa shook her hand and looked other way
You're really pretty! Ai says still holding Risa's hands
(Risa blushed but she was still looking other way)
well it's time to start! Ai says and grabs her camera while Risa took off the towel
Ai looked at Risa's body and then shook her head and started taking pictures 
Risa was so nervous that she couldn't even move or smile she was just staring Ai
there's something wrong? The manager asked
i'm not feeling good! Risa replied and asked for the towel
Ai looked at the model
i need to go! Risa says avoiding Ai's gaze and goes to her dressing room
~Once in her dressing room~
She looked herself in the mirror "You're really pretty" she says touching her face then a tear came out
"I hate you Takahashi Ai.." Gaki murmured but then got up and went to the set to finish her photoshoot
<Flashback> (3 years ago)
Who said that i like you? i don't even know you! Ai says looking to the crying girl
"but.." The girl was about to say something else but Ai' interupt her
Why in the hell i would date you? you don't attract me at all..all the fangirling got me sick i just can't stand it anymore.. GO AWAY! Ai shouted in front of everyone in the classroom
The girl run away crying
That was really fun! Tanaka says while laughs with Sayumi
<End of the flashback>
I guess with this we're done! Ai says smiling while Gaki takes the towel
Ai was about to talk to Gaki but she fast went to her dressing room
"This girl.." Ai murmured
~Meanwhile at certain school~
Sayashi san you're so cool! A girl says
Riho just smiled ackwardly while sits next to the window as always
i heard she's a really good dancer just like Aichan! Another girl murnures smirking
Riho soon started looking around "where are you?" she thought while looks around
Looking for somebody? Kanon asked while sits on the empty seat that was ahead Riho who pouted and then sighed "she's going to get mad!"  she thought
what's wrong Riho chan? Kanon asks smiling
"nothing.." Riho coldly answered
Soon the mood changed everyone was chilling but then everyone sitted correctly like if there was a teacher entering to the classroom
"You're late.." Riho murmured still looking other way
The girl stood up in front of Kanon
Can i help you Ishida san? Kanon asked with a smile
that's my seat! Ayumi replied looking bored
Riho smirked
I don't see your name written on it! Kanon replied and turned her head to talk to Riho who was nervously smiling and says "i don't think is a good idea make Ayumi mad so early!"
You two hate eachother why you put yourself on her side? Kanon asked
Look at her face and tell me she's not scary! Riho replied smiling nervous
~Kanon looked at Ayumi and felt shivers~
you right..i'm gonna move! Kanon says while slowly gets up and goes to other empty seat
Ayumi sighed and sitted like doll princess that she is
Hate eachother..Ha! Riho whispered and putted her arms on her desk then decided to take a nap
Ayumi heard Riho then smirked cause her statement and knew Riho was sleeping cause the sleepy girl's head touches her back
(3 Years ago)~ a 13 year old Riho and Ayumi~
                                       *Classroom*
Why they think they are better than us? just because they sit in the front and have good grades..doesn't mean a thing! Kanon says pouting
yes you're right..who they thing they are? Erina says
We can dance! Riho says hopeless looking at the three girls sitting ahead
yeah but teachers don't care about that! Erina says with a depressed aura
They just care about Ayumi Ishida,Misaki Sato and Haruna Likubo because they are the perfect girls..smart pretty and good at everything! Kanon says
we can dance! Riho says smiling
i heard Ayumi dances hip hop really well! Erina says looking at Riho who's smile fade away
you got to be kidding me? Riho asked
i don't know how that hearless girl can dance! Kanon says smiling
the three girl were staring at the top three students of their classroom and soon Riho was cought sleeping
Sayashi san! Sayashi san! the teacher says several times till Kanon kicked Riho's desk which cause her to wake up
what's going on? Riho shouted
*Everyone in the classroom laughed*
Why can you be more like Ayumi chan! The teacher says moving her head side to side
Riho apologized and sitted
hours passed fast and soon it was time to go home while for someothers was practice time
~Cheeleaders prectice~
You have to get better Riho! Takahashi Ai says
Yes.. Takahashi san! Riho says and keeps practicing with Kanon and Erina
Stay away from me weird girl! Tanaka Reina shouts while runs like hell
i can't i like you! A tall blackhaired girl shouts while runs after her
that's not that the Chinese girl? Ai asked
"yep." Sayumi says smirking
"weird.." Riho,Kanon and Erina says while looks hypnotized to the scene
there's something wrong! Sayumi says serious
yes..that's not cool! Ai says serious too
how can she stalk her instead of me i'm cuter! Sayumi says and goes to fallow the Chinese girl
i really thought she might say something smart! Ai murmured moving her head side to side
Soon the practice ended everyone went to the showers except for one person who stood in the court practicing
She was dancing free style but then she notice that someone was staring her
The girl blushed and looked other way "sorry..i was looking for.." *Ayumi do you dance hip hop?* Riho asked interrupting the girl
"yes.." Ayumi answered
i think i dance better than you! Riho says looking at her
mmm i don't think so! Ayumi replies
Riho danced a bit
Ayumi look at Riho and also danced then soon they were competing who does better moves
Riho slipped and her ankle hurts
Ayumi soon help the girl to get up and took her to the infirmary but for their bad luck there wasn't anyone around so Ayumi putted Riho in one bed then took menthol and bandages
what are you doing? Riho asked while Ayumi took off hee shoe and started using the menthol
Riho whimperd in pain
"sorry.." Ayumi says looking at Riho's eyes
Riho could saw Ayumi's tender side and then smirked and blushed
<That memory was saved in Riho's heart>
(End of the flashback)
Since that day Riho and Ayumi relantionship changed..
Riho waited for her everyday and walked home together without anyone noticed they didn't even need to talk they already know eachother
Everyone thinks that they hate eachother because Ayumi is too correct while Riho is too relaxed and don't pay attention in class beside she's the cheerleader captain while Ayumi is president of the school council they would never become friends..
but there was a question why if they hate eachother so much Riho always sit behind Ayumi or viceversa?
<Soon was luchtime>
everyone went to buy food while Riho skipped her friends and went to the school terrace..
Ayumi why always luch somewhere else?Haruna asked
well i wanna study alone! Ayumi says while grabs her bento and walks away from her friends,Ayumi went to the school terrace then openned the door and watched Riho looking to the sky "i love the sun!" she says smiling while Ayumi smirks and sits next to her
why you take so long? Riho asked while starts eating
you didn't have to wait for me! Ayumi says
ha..you get mad if i start eating without you! Riho says smirking
that's not truth! Ayumi says pouting
if somebody pays me for everytime you get mad at me because i didn't wait for you to eat..i would be rich right now! Riho says smiling
shut up! Ayumi says while eats then smirks
~ Meanwhile~
really..maybe other time,if you're busy right now it's fine Eri don't worry! Gaki says on the phone then hangs up
"Risa.." The manager called out
what's wrong? Risa asked
There was a water leak in your apartment! The manager says looking down
ehhhh why? Risa shouted
Aichan heard Risa and entered to her dressing room
what? happened? Ai asked
There was a water leak in her apartment! The manager says still looking down
that's bad! Aichan says
i don't like hotels! Risa says while sits with her depressed aura and pouting
huh..maybe mmm you can stay at my place is not compare to a model house but it's comfy! Ai says looking at Risa
that might be good! The manager says
no way! Risa shouts and gets up
Aichan looked other way
i can't bring you home with me accept Ai's idea! The manager says
Risa scratched her head
c'mon just a couple days! The manager says
Risa looked at Ai then sighed "fine..just a couple days!" she murmured
TO BE CONTINUED
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.1
Post by: darkacex99 on September 27, 2012, 04:17:42 AM
Wow a new writer   :welcome

I luv ho w the story iz going so far XD keep it up
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.1
Post by: maikeatoot on September 27, 2012, 04:23:25 AM
hello there ! i like the pairing! but please give us KameShige !!! mou~~~
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.1
Post by: cmze on September 27, 2012, 05:19:46 AM
sorry... forgot about them!  :nervous

Thank for liking!  :grin:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.1
Post by: maikeatoot on September 27, 2012, 03:02:42 PM
im here again e my friend ! hehe what happened 3 years ago?! give me all the details hahaha !! ang yay please KameShige ?! hoho i like it yeah !
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.1
Post by: kuro808 on September 28, 2012, 06:04:44 AM
Interesting start to the fic :thumbsup
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.1
Post by: yellow on September 28, 2012, 06:50:24 AM
wow... another fic to read :grin:
please give me more detail about what the TanaShige have done 3 years ago that lead to Risa to misunderstand Ai...
and hope something fun and interesting will happened between AiGaki during Risa's stay in Ai's place  XD XD XD
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.1
Post by: cmze on September 28, 2012, 07:56:27 AM
                         ~Don't judge by the covers~
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Ai's dept was just for one person (One room,a small kitchen,a small living room and a bathroom but still comfortable and colored) 
There was only one bed which Ai totally offered to Risa but she rejected it ,she wanted to use the couch on Ai's living room 
*Both started to fight about it till Ai offered the idea of  both sleeping on the bed* 
Risa was shocked first but then agreed because it wasn't cool sleeping on the couch 
Soon both fell sleep on bed 
~The next day~
Niigaki Risa openned her eyes slowly,she could sense a rose scence coming from? her back? Risa turned head and saw Ai hugging her from behind "Ehhhh!" she shouted and fell off bed as the queen of reaction that she is!! pulling Ai with her 
Ai openned her eyes and saw Risa looking at her with a shocked face "is this the way you wake up everyday?"she asked rubbing her butt while Risa was still in shock staring at her after a few seconds she asked "Why did you hug me?" 
Ai sighed "well..you asked me to!" she replied while gets up 
Risa gets up also "are you insane? i will never do that!" she says shouting 
Ai scratches her head in confusion "Now that i think about it you said that you were cold so i hugged you and then you smirked and didn't wanna let go my arm that's why i was still hugging you!" 
Risa blushed couse Ai's statement of the facts so she blushed "Aaaarrrgggggghhh" she shouted and went to the bathroom fast while Ai stood there still more confuse than before 
~In the bathroom~  (Inner Gaki san)
(Why these things are happening to me now?i'm super model.. she doesn't mean anything!!! so why my heart is beating so fast? noooooo i got over you long while ago! GO AWAY! you're just an old crush I DON'T FEEL A THING ABOUT YOU!! those eyes,that smile,that face..is NOTHING!!)
Niigaki Risa put yourself together she's not good after what she did to you so calm down! Risa says to 
herlsef calmed 
<Flashback> (3 years ago)
The coach stand in front of the girls and say smiling "let's play dodgeball!" 
Everyone smiles except one person 
Tanaka Reina noticed and approached to her friend "C'mon Aichan don't be so down she'll come back!" she says and taps her friend shoulder while somebody else join to the duo 
"I too cute to play this kind of games!" Sayu says pouting 
Ai smirks
Reina looks at her airhead friend "if i hear her say she's cute one more time..i'm going to punch her!" 
*Sayumi pouted*
<In the other corner of the court>
Eri also looked at her sad friend "what are you watching?" she says pinching her arm 
Gaki san turned her head to look at her friend who's pinching her arm "stop..it looks like Aichan is sad,she's not smiling like always" she explained sad 
Eri pouted "now i see..if she's sad you're sad!" she says mocking at Risa 
"shut up!" Risa replied and went to play
Risa and Ai had opposites team while Sayumi and Eri were in the same team
Sayumi stays in the center "please everyone cover me because i'm really pretty to be punched!" she says smiling 
Everyone looked at Sayumi and pouted 
Eri looked at Sayumi "what?i'm cuter than you!" she says mad 
Sayumi pouted "i'm better look at me!" she says holding back her hair 
soon the game started and Sayumi got hitted but the ball 
Kamei Eri laughs "You're out!" she says mocking at
Sayumi who pouted and went to sit on the bench 
A few minutes passed and Eri was out also 
Sayumi laughed like crazy while Eri pouted and sitted next to her 
"There's nobody cuter than me!" Sayumi says looking at Eri who answered "Did you have to start with that? i already told you i'm cuter!" 
Sayumi got closer to Eri and looked at her in the eyes 
Eri got red for the sudden act "Sayumi was indeed cute but no more than her" She thought  
"You're cute also.." Sayumi says a few inches from Eri's face 
Nice catch Aichan! A bunch of fangirls shouts 
Sayumi and Eri turned to see the situation 
So..so..sorry! Gaki san says stuttering 
Aichan walked to her with the ball on her hands she looked at Gaki who was looking other way 
What's going on? A girl wondered 
Ai throwed the ball away "just like her.." she murmured and walked away 
where she's going? Everyone wondered while Risa watches Ai walking away 
Sayumi and Reina followed "hey wait up!" both shouts 
Ai stopped walking 
Sayumi and Reina looked at her  "what was that all about?" Reina asked 
Ai turned to look her friends "i just don't stand she's like.." she murmured and walked away 
 Sayumi wondered "like..who?"
Reina looked at Sayumi "well if she doesn't want to see her we can change that!"she says and then smirks 
~Outside the bathroom~ 
Ai looked to the bathroom door then shook her head "maybe i should do breakfast!" she thought and goes to the kitchen 
*Fast she prepared breakfast for both of then* 
Risa got out of the bathroom the smell of food brought her to the kitchen 
Ai looked at her and smiled "i prepared this for you please sit!" she says offering a chair next to her 
Risa gulped "i can't i have to work!" she replied coldly and walked to the room 
Ai looked other way sad 
~Meawhile at some school~
Somebody was getting over the edge looking to the door waiting for somebody else to cross it but of course just the one she wants to see 
Haruna and Misaki walked to their friend seat
 "Are you okay? Haruna asked while stands in front od her with Misaki 
Ayumi looked at her friends"yes,i'm okay" She replies coldly still trying to look the classroom door 
In a blink of an eye somebody opens the classroom door and then slips in front of everyone 
Riho chan what happened to you? Kanon asked 
Riho looked at everyone and started stuttering "tho..those girls ar..are Crazy!" she shouted 
Kanon scratched her head "what girls?" she asked 
then looked at Erina 
Ayumi was watching everything silence while everyone was whispering things like "is she crazy? i think she woke up with the wrong foot!" 
Riho took a deep breath "what's with their hormones when 13 i wasn't stalking anybody or trying to steal her clothes!" she says complaining and pouting 
oohh that means why your blazer? Erina says 
Ayumi got up 
everyone looked at her 
Riho pouted more "It wasn't my fault they were a lot and i'm not that good fighting!" 
Kanon laughed "You should be ashamed you're 16 and 13 years old girl took you down and stole your blazer!" 
Erina laughs also then everyone started laughing 
I'm an artist..i dance and sing not fighting! Riho says 
Ayumi was serious "get up let's get your blazer!" she says while walks to Riho 
No way i'm not coming back! Riho replies scared
Ayumi takes Riho by her ear and pulls her with her 
Everyone looked at them "do they really hate eachother?" Kanon wondered  
Ayumi chan it hurts..I'm an endangered species! Riho shouted while she's being dragged 
Once they walked the hall..
Riho points "Those are the girls!" she says 
Riho sama! The girls shout and jump on Riho 
Ayumi observe the whole situation then suddunly she felt anger for all those girls around ger Riho "Kids get off her!" She says while removes them and pushes them aside 
Riho sitted then took deep breaths "i thought i wasn't going to survive!" she says while tries to remove the lipstick that was on her cheeks 
Ayumi was looking at Riho she sighed and turned her look the kids "Give me back the blazer before i'll go to your classroom to talk to your teacher!" 
The three girls looked at Ayumi
 "you wouldn't do that!" The leader says 
Riho smirked nervously "you don't know her!"
Leader we should give her her blazer! One of the girls says feeling ackward 
The leader looked at her friends and finally decide to give in 
Riho and Ayumi started walking to their classroom..
"So cool you got back my blazer back!" Riho says smiling and hugs Ayumi who totally didn't move but blushed then looked another way to hide her red face
Once in the classroom 
The teacher scold them and pusnish them for getting late 
Ishida san i didn't expected from you! The teacher says moving his head side to side 
Ayumi looked down 
And you Sayashi san..huh i totally expect this from you! The teacher says 
Riho just stuck her tonge out cutely 
go back to your seats! The teacher says 
Hours passed fast..
*the bell ranged* 
You'll miss the practice couse this punishment! Erina says tapping Riho's back 
"sorry.." Riho replied 
then look our practice from the window! Kanon says smiling and pulling Erina with her 
Ok! Riho says while waves
Ayumi was already writting on the board "i won't miss classes again!" 
Riho watched the girl but then sighed and putted her head on her desk 
After a few minutes 
Ayumi turned around and saw Riho sleeping "i guess try to become an singer must be hard" she thought while her hand is touching softly Riho's cheek 
*Riho moved a little*
Ayumi panicked and relized what she was doing "why did i do that?" she wondered then turned to keep writting on the board
~Meanwhile~ (In a caffetery) 
Kamei Eri was drinking coffee while waits for her high school friends 
~Tv on~
"This is Sayumi Michishige reporting the weather for you today.." 
Eri looked at the tv hypnotized "you even fallowed me here!" she thought 
She's still cute isn't she? A voice says 
Eri turned around "Junjun.." 
JunJun sitted next to her friend "it seems like you still like her!" she says laughing 
Eri pouted " it's not truth!" she says and drinks her coffee nervous 
i always wondered what kind of relantionship you two had those days in high school? when i asked her she answered me ask Kamei..whatever you did she's still mad, i can tell! JunJun says smiling 
Eri scratched her head "Aaarghhhh i didn't do anything!" she shouted mad while gets up
JunJun looked at her friend "okay don't get too excited..maybe that was the problem that you didn't do anything!" 
Eri sitted "you think?" she asked looking around 
"I understand women trust me" JunJun says while reads a message on her phone 
Eri was in her own world "She liked me.." she murmured then smiled 
JunJun was mad texting "Arghhhhh Tanaka Reina don't you dare!! " she shouts 
what's wrong? Eri asked 
JunJun smirked " ha..she likes to play as cat but she always end up as the mouse with me!" she says proud of herself 
"Controling Reina must be hard!" Eri says 
"it's an art.."JunJun replies smiling while text 
Eri looked at her friend "i still don't get how you did it? Tanaka Reina your highschool crush now is your girlfriend" 
It took a lot of time and Love..A LOT LOVE! JunJuan says serious 
TO BE CONTINUED!! don't worry All the pairings are going to have a good scene in the next chapter..please wait!
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.2
Post by: yellow on September 28, 2012, 08:37:36 AM
good scene as in  :?
anyway, for jun, contolling the cat is no only an art but also a leisure (or maybe hobby) for life  XD XD XD
 :lol: the bean woke up in the monkey's embrace  :twothumbs (just hope this to happen again the subsequent mornings during her stay  XD)
what happen to the KameShige :?

and yay, looking forward for your next update soon :)
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.2
Post by: cmze on September 28, 2012, 08:50:49 AM
Please wait for me.. i have really good scenes for all the pairings xD

i'll tell you something.. JunJun,Gaki and Eri drinking "it's going be fun!"  :D

and also you might hear something of the real story line! :grin:

but you have to wait!  :shakeit:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.2
Post by: yellow on September 28, 2012, 09:06:41 AM
ok i am waiting...
can't wait what interesting content will spurt out from them when they are drunk... best is something about the person of their interest... and it would be more brilliant if the person of their interest to have hear it... anyway, i am very forward looking to the fun thing to happen  XD

like you have mentioned in maikeatoot's thread, i also hope that you don't overwork yourself to think about the subsequent content :)
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.2
Post by: maikeatoot on September 28, 2012, 09:40:21 AM
KameShige fan here !! go AiGaki !!! and JunRei i dont understand.?haha !
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.2
Post by: kuro808 on September 28, 2012, 10:02:44 AM
That JunRei part was extremely interesting
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.2
Post by: maikeatoot on September 28, 2012, 11:39:02 AM
hey me want JunRei ! i understands now !! yay ! reina is now Junjun's gf!! give us all the dirty details hahaha!
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.2
Post by: yellow on September 28, 2012, 11:56:25 AM
me +1 for the dirty details  XD
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.3
Post by: cmze on October 01, 2012, 12:25:44 AM
                         ~Don't judge by the covers~
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Riho woke up because she heard a door slamming,she saw her friend sleeping next to her "mmm Ayumi chan wake up!" she says softly while shakes the older girl 
Ayumi openned her eyes slowly "What's wrong?" she asks while she gets up 
Riho hugged Ayumi "I heard something!" she says hugging tighter to her friend
Ayumi got red isntanly "Stop being a coward!" she says and romoves Riho off her 
Both girls walked the hallway
Riho grabbed Ayumi's hand "School is scary and you don't let me hug you at least let me hold your hand!"
Ayumi kept walking and ignore everything Riho said a few minutes ago 
Riho was scared looking side to side "do you believe in ghost Ayumi chan?" she asked 
Ayumi looked at her friend "let's get out of here!" she says pulling Riho with her 
~Outside the school~
The two girls were walking..
Riho notice that Ayumi is still holding her hand,she smirked and kept walking behind her 
Ayumi stopped walking "i'm hungry..let's go get something to eat!" she says turning around 
Riho smirked " like a date!" she says teasing 
Ayumi who shook her head then turned around and started walking away followed by Riho who is still holding her hand 
Rihi kept smiling 
(After a few hours) <in a bar>
Risa entered to the bar then looked for her high school friends "Girls!!" she shouted once she found them in table in the corner 
 JunJuna and Eri looked at the girl "Gaki san!" both shouted and got up to hug their friend
The three girls sitted and ordered for beer 
Risa looked at the two girls "wow it's been so long!" she says smiling 
JunJun replies "Since you left us!"
Risa pouted "it was something that i had to do!" she says a little sad 
The waiter brought the beer to the girls table 
Eri started drinking "Why you always have to follow me?" she wondered and kept drinking 
JunJun looked at her glass "i feel like a man tonight..drinking and hanging with my pals!" she says smiling and then drinks 
Risa smiles "this is what i needed..it's been crazy lately!" she says smiling and then drinks it 
Eri laughs "what do you mean? you're a model!" 
JunJun looked at Risa "A model.." She asked
Risa pouted again "trust me it's been rough lately..my apartament had a water leak,Takahashi Ai is the photographer for my campain and i'm living with her now.. lucky me!" she says sarcastically and drinking more and more
JunJun was shocked "Takahashi Ai? My cat's best friend?" she murmured 
Risa looked at JunJun "who's your cat?" she asked 
Kamei Eri smiles like crazy "I forgot to tell you JunJun is dating Tanaka Reina since 3 years ago so she's the cat!" she says smiling like crazy 
Risa got up "Eeeeh!!! how that happened?" she asked shocked 
JunJun smiles ackwardly "that cat does whatever i want!" She says smiling 
<At the same time> (At's Reina's dept) 
Reina stopped cooking 
Ai lookeed at her friend and asked "what's wrong Reina chan?"
Reina turned to look Ai  "i feel like somebody is talking about me and it's lying!" 
Ai smirks "must be JunJun!" 
Reina pouts "No,she won't.. she knows who's the boss in this relantionship!" she replies then gets back to her cooking 
Sayumi was looking through the window "this is boring..cooking it's not my thing,Let's go out!" she says drawing on the window pain 
Reina stops cooking again and sighs "let's go out besides i don't think JunJun comes tonight!" 
Sayumi and Ai looked eachother then smirked and said "Yeah!"
<At the same time>  Drunk people's talk 
JunJun looked around "Why am i seeing double? she thought
Risa was pouting "how can *Hip* she be so damn charming? is she *hip* snaps her fingers she can have telling her that i loveeeeeee her!"  she says and drinks again 
Eri started crying "why i didn't do anything when i *hip* had the time?" she asked and drinks more 
JunJun cries also "All the shit that i had *hip* to go through to get Reina!" she says and drinks more 
<Flashback>  Valentine's day (3 years ago) 
Reina and Sayumi were buying chocolates "if we send this with Aichan's name to that girl,she might think that Aichan likes her so when she asks Aichan about it Aichan would deny it and she'll be so embarrased that she won't bother Aichan anymore"
Reina says smiling while picks the cake 
Sayumi looked at her friend "you're so smart Reina but why are you buying 2?" she asked smiling 
Rena got totally red "well the other is.." 
JunJun entered to the store,she saw the two girls and appreached to them 
Reina!" JunJun says smiling 
Sayumi pouted "how can be possible that you not stalk me instead of her? haven't you look at my face?" she asked to JunJun who smirked because Sayumi was hitting softly her shoulder 
Reina got serious "here you know what to do!" She says to Sayumi and gives the chocolate to her 
Sayumi left the store 
JunJun smiled "so you bought me chocolate!" 
Reina got mad "it's not for you stalker leave me alone!" she says while walks away 
JunJun sighed 
(At School) Half an hour later 
Eri and Gaki san were looking at the cake on that was Gaki san's desk 
Who send you a cake? Eri asked 
oh look a card! Gaki says while takes the paper 
"Sorry about yesterday.. Aichan" 
Gaki san got red then looked to Aichan empty seat 
Eri looked at her friend acting weird so she snatched the paper and read it 
what? she sent you this! Eri says shocked 
Gaki san was on heaven 
Soon someone else enteres to the classroom 
Gaki san got up but Eri stopped her "she doesn't seem happy..do it later!"
Aichan looked at the two strange girls and rolled her eyes then sitted till everyone started to arrive 
(At the pool) 
JunJun was following Reina who was standing watching a guy swimming 
JunJun hid behind the bleachers 
The guy get out of the pool and looked at Reina
"This is for you!" she says offering the chocolate 
The guy smirked "i knew you drool for me!" he says and grabs Reina by her wrist then kisses her roughly 
JunJun turned around and sighed till she heard Reina slap the guy 
Who you think you are? Reina shouted at him 
The guy takes Reina "huh so you like to play hard to get!" he says while tries to kiss her again 
JunJun touches the guy shoulder,he turned around and JunJun punched him on his face 
"stupid bitch!" He says while gets up 
JunJun pushes him to the pool but he dragged her with him 
Reina was shocked not knowing what to do "JunJun" she shouted 
Soon whistle can be heared 
The guy stopped fighting with JunJun and got out from the pool "You'll pay me back bitches!" he says while leaves running 
Reina jumps on the pool to help JunJun to get out 
JunJun layed on the floor 
Why? Are you carzy? Reina asks desperately then notice JunJun's swollen cheek 
JunJun smirks "it was fun!" 
Reina kneels next to JunJun and starts crying 
JunJun sits and looks at Reina "why are you crying? don't cry..you're too pretty for that!" She says while wipes Reina's Tears
Reina hugs JunJun "you're a pimp you flirt with every girl in the school! she says holding tigher on JunJun 
JunJun pouts "that not truth..i was just trying to make you jealous!"
Reina stops hugging and looks JunJun in the eyes "make me jealous?"  she murmured 
JunJun looks down "yes,i only like you..i was pretending to like them so you look at me!" 
Reina smirks "Stupid JunJun... look what has he done to your pretty face!" She says while cupped JunJun's face and with her thumb softly touches JunJun's cheek then she got closer to her, her face a few inches away from JunJun's  
JunJun can feel how her heart is going to come out of her chest 
Reina kissed her softly on the lips 
*Sparks* 
<PrESEnt> (Reina,Sayumi and Ai) 
Reina where are we going? Sayumi asks while walks behind her 
someplace! Reina replies while looks at the gps on her phone *Searching JunJun xD* 
Ai looked around "let's see that purse store!" She says smiling 
Reina looked at Ai "another time not tonight!" she says and drags Ai with her 
Soon the three girls get to the bar 
Reina looked at the door "so this is it!" she thought and then gets in followed by her 2 friends 
The three girls looked the place till something cought them eyes 
Cheers for a painful *hip* love! Risa shouts with her glass in the air then drinks 
Ai looked at the noisy girl "Risa.." she murmured 
"Cheers for being a coward *hip* and not do what i wanted!" Eri shouts Then drinks 
Sayumi looked at the girl "That voice..could it be?" 
Cheer for my *hip* i love my cat! JunJun shouts 
JunJun! Reina shouted and went to the girls 
Ai looked at Risa "what are you doing here?" she asked while sits next to her 
Eri looked at Sayumi "eehhhh the *hip* weather girl!" she says pointing at Sayumi 
JunJun slapped Eri's hand "it's rude *hip* pointing Eri!" she says while smiles 
Sayumi was shocked "Kamei Eri.." she murmured 
Reina shakes JunJun "great now you're drunk..let's go home!" She says while tries to help the girl get up 
JunJun looked at her girlfriend "i *hip* love you" she says hugging Reina who just blushed 
Risa was only smiling then putted her head on Ai's shoulder. Ai looked at her "a painful love" she murmured and removed a string of hair that was on Risa's face 
The waiter got closer "you can't go..you have to pay first!" he says and gives them the bill 
The three sober girls watched the bill "ehhhhh what the hell?" the three shouted 
The three girls sighed
 "we should pay now and tomorrow we can tell them to pay us..besides i don't want to look in Eri's purse!" Sayumi says in defeat
Ai looked at Risa "okay let's pay and take them home!" 
Reina looked at Risa " I think i saw her somewhere else!" she says pointing to Risa 
Ai laughed hard "of course she's a model,i work with her" she replied laughing while Risa is still on her shoulder 
Sayumi looked at Eri sleeping on the table "What about this girl?" 
Ai looked at Sayumi "i heard you saying her name so you take her home!" she says smiling 
Sayumi rolled her eyes "i don't want to she's arggghh" she says while helps Eri to get up 
The three girls payed the bill and soon took different ways..
(JunJun x Reina) At Reina's dept 
JunJun hugs Reina "i *hip* love yaaaaaa!" she says while kisses Reina all over her face 
Reina tries to avoid her "stop you're drunk!" she says pouting 
JunJun pouts "i just can't help it i'm in love!" she cutely to Reina
 Reina rise an eyebrown "you're not going to get me with that!"  she replies while puts JunJun on bed 
"Don't you *hip* love me anymore?" JunJun asks looking at her girlfriend in the eyes 
Reina sighed "I love you JunJun more than anything so please sleep!" she says while kisses her forhead
JunJun smiles "com here!" she says then pulls Reina next to her and hugs ger 
*Both soon fell sleep*
(Sayumi x Eri) 
Sayumi and Eri were walking trying to find a taxi "why i have to take you home... wait i second.. i don't know where you live!" Sayumi murmures then turns to look at Eri who's smiling to her 
why are you looking at me like that? Sayumi asked 
you got prettier but not more than me! Eri says smiling 
Sayumi pouts 
Eri laughs "i'm kidding now your *hip* prettier than anyone" she says while keeps walking with Sayumi
Sayumi blushes but looked other way 
Eri smirked "you know..there's something that i always wanted to do but i was a coward or afraid but not tonight!" 
Sayumi looked at Eri then Eri pushed her to an alley and kissed her passionately 
Sayumi was shocked first but then close her eyes and reponded the kiss with the same passion 
Soon Eri's hands were roaming Sayu's body and she was licking,kissing her neck 
Sayumi couldn't do anything about it..it feels so good and right!!  but reality hit Sayumi "i can't..i can't i'm 
engaged!" she murmured and pushed Eri off her 
Eri hitted slipped 
Sayumi helped Eri to get up..
Suddenly a taxi appeared and Sayumi helped Eri and took her to her dept 
<Sayu's Dept> 
Sayumi putted softly Eri on bed *Eri fell sleep in the taxi* 
Sayu looked at the sleepy girl and softly touched her face "Why you had to appear now? why not earlier? or why you didn't confess to me in our graduation?" she murmured then a tear come out,she turned her head and in front of her was a picture of her and her fiancee hugging then she looked at her ring "what am i going to do?" she murmured 
<Aigaki's situation> (in the elvator)
Risa was smiling like crazy and moving around "this is so fun!" 
Ai was only looking at her "i don't think you should move to much!" she says and grabs her hand cousing Risa to loose balance "ouch my butt!" she says complaining 
Ai helped her to get up "sorry!" she says with her around Risa's waist 
Risa putted her arm around Ai's neck then looked at her in the eyes "whatever i'm dizzy and i'm not going to fall for you anyway!" 
Ai blushed for distance between their faces then shook her head for Risa's words  "what?" 
The elavator doors open and they walked to their door 
Hang on a little more! Ai says while pulls out the key from her purse 
Both girls entered to the dept 
Ai guided Risa to bed 
Risa sitted on bed while Aichan took off her jacket and she knealed to take off her shoes but Risa moved her feet "Stop acting nice to me!" she says while gets up and gies to the kitchen leaving an open mouth Ai 
*Risa was trying to cook*
Ai looked at her "i'll cook for you!" she says and tries to make Risa sit 
i don't need *hip* your help! Risa replies
You're drunk you can't cook! Ai replied forcing with Risa and trying to get her sit 
Risa got tired "keep your kitchen *hip* i'm going to find somthing to eat out!" she says while walks  to the door loosi g her balance but somebody grabbed her hand 
Let me go!" Risa shouted forcing with Ai somehow Risa was strong and pushed Ai to the floor 
Risa relized what she did "Aichan.." she murmured 
Aichan sitted and started to  take deep breaths then she covered her eyes with her hands she was clearly crying and Risa felt bad about it,she sighed and leaned against the door then sitted and observe the girl crying 
Risa scratched her heard then crawled to her and outted her hands on Ai's hands to uncover her eyes 
Ai only looked to the floor with tears rolling her cheeks 
Risa wiped her tears "i'm sorry.." she says softly and puts her forhead on Ai's shoulder 
Ai hugged Risa who already fell sleep 
TO B CONTIUED...sorry i got busy!xD
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.3
Post by: maikeatoot on October 01, 2012, 01:28:44 AM
hohoho y sayumi y ?! leave ur bf and be wid eri !!!!  aah ! NO !! and junrei was so cute yay !!! aigaki ? maybe aichan likes gaki .. please update soON!
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.3
Post by: yellow on October 01, 2012, 03:15:07 AM
(AiGaki)
i am starting to expect something more to happen during her stay in Ai's place (if every single day in her stay, some crazy thing to have happen between them...)   :heart: why not gaki just stay with the lovely for good  XD XD
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(KameShige)
please let something to have happen to let sayu used as an excuse to jilt her bf and be with the turtle... :halo:
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(JunRei)
jun is just so lucky, thanks to restless stalking on the cat in their school days... and really, the reason she is giving for her flirts is just way too "convincing"  :lol: :lol: :lol:
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(riho x ayumi)
for the two highschoolers, both are sooo cute when riho is so touchy with ayumi is just sooo apathetic over it XD
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.3
Post by: cmze on October 01, 2012, 03:27:39 AM
Thanks for reading..  :grin:

i just hope that Risa don't be so mean to Ai.. :sweatdrop: but still i think Ai's warm will get to Risa and bring the old Gaki san!

Hope Sayumi undertand that she loves Eri even thought she's turtle when is about expressing herself :rofl:

Hope nobody try to break my Cute couple JunRei!  :angry:

The highschoolers: Riho i think you should confess alrewady..  :wub:


Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.3
Post by: yellow on October 01, 2012, 03:58:26 AM
i just hope that Risa don't be so mean to Ai.. :sweatdrop: but still i think Ai's warm will get to Risa and bring the old Gaki san!
need not bring the old risa back  :lol: because i like the current risa... she is so cute when she is so... i believe ai will love her so just like this too  XD XD
plus, i really don't want her to be loss of word in front of aichan, which makes her feel so like a clown... and uninteresting to aichan...

Hope Sayumi undertand that she loves Eri even thought she's turtle when is about expressing herself :rofl:
i do admit the turtle is just so slow in her confession... but luckily she still have that chance to with the bunny just engaged and not married  XD XD and the bunny still have feeling for her  :grin:

Hope nobody try to break my Cute couple JunRei!  :angry:
you state so... are you intend to... junjun will cry if you do it.... :angry:

The highschoolers: Riho i think you should confess alrewady..  :wub:
hey hey... i agree with you too... riho should confess  :heart: but i hope in a more surprising way so that will be memorable to ayumi :wub:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.3
Post by: cmze on October 01, 2012, 04:05:25 AM
Hope all goes good!  :rofl:

Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.3
Post by: maikeatoot on October 01, 2012, 09:08:57 AM
are you going to update tomorrow ? hahaha ! oh please dont break my JunRei !! i'll kill yaah !!!! please NO !! i want JunRei !!!
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.3
Post by: cmze on October 01, 2012, 11:35:43 AM
shhhhh that's a secret.. that i won't tell!  :grin:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.3
Post by: maikeatoot on October 01, 2012, 11:41:09 AM
aw i wont update either !!!! hmp ! please JunRei please!
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.3
Post by: cmze on October 01, 2012, 08:10:03 PM
Heyu have to updateeeeee i love ur fic so please doooo!  :sweatdrop:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.3
Post by: maikeatoot on October 01, 2012, 10:14:29 PM
hoho~~ i love ur fic too <3 ! dont overwork yourself kid, we can wait :)) but but but ..  please dont break JunRei ..
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.3
Post by: kuro808 on October 02, 2012, 08:07:55 AM
so many people in this fic :3
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.4
Post by: cmze on October 04, 2012, 10:31:17 AM
                         ~Don't judge by the covers~
                                              
Yeah too much pairings...my head hurts! xD i can't imagine yours!! 
                                      4
The next morning (Saturday) 

Nigakii Risa was sleeping but there was something disturbing her "what it was?mmm could it be a heartbeat?" she thought still still with her eyes closed,she yawned and slowly opened her eyes 
what's this? She thought then looked up 
"it's Ai's chin" Risa murmured and slowly removes her arm from Ai's waist
How did we got to the sofa? why i was hugging her?what happened last night? Risa thinks while obeserves the older girl sleeping 
Ai suddenly yawns ans tries to spread her legs 
Risa was only looking at her while Ai opens her eyes and looks at the girl sitting in between her legs staring at her with a face that says *WTF?" 
"Hi!" Ai says with a smile
Ehhhhhh!  Risa got up 
Ai gets up from the couch "What's wrong?" she asked while scratches her head 
Risa gets closer to Ai and starts shaking her "Why we were sleeping there? what happened last night?" she asked all red 
Ai was confuse but then she wanted to tease the model "what didn't happen last night?" she says smirking while Risa get more red 
I don't believe you! She says and then goe to their room to choose her clothes for thr day
Ai looked at Risa and then looked other way "so you don't really remember?" she murnured while gets up to prepare breakfast 
~Flashback of last night~
"Is she sleeping on my shoulder?" Ai thought then looked at girl 
"Her breath is tickling me!" Ai thought while tries to get her up 
"Risa wake up...you're heavy!" Ai says while tries tp carry the girl to their room unluckily Ai wasn't strong enough and end up slipping on the sofa with Risa on top of her 
"Risa! Risa!" Ai called but she was completely ignored but the smiling girl sleeping on top of her 
Why are you smiling? Ai asked 
You smell *hip* good! Risa replied and hugs the girl tight *Ai blushed* 
Ai thougt it for a little and then decided to advantage of the situation 
Risa what do you think of me? Ai asked and looked at girl on her neck 
Risa looked at her closely. They were having eye contact 
"you're pretty!" Risa says smiling while her finger touched Ai's tip of nose 
Ai smiled but then Risa was a few inches away from her lips *Tips of nose touching*
"Is she going to kiss me?" Ai thought all red then stopped breathing while Risa slowly get closer 
Ai  relaxed and closed her eyes,she waited for a kiss that never happened because Risa already fell sleep on her 
"Eh." Ai opened her eyes and saw Risa already sleeping "why did i close my eyes?" she murmured while observes Risa sleeping 
~End of the flashback~ 
How she dares to smirk like that? Risa murmures while choses her clothes "the truth my head hurts and  i need water..a lot water!" she thought 
"OUUCHH!" *Noise of something breaking*
"That's Ai chan! Risa murmured and gets out fast 
"what happened?" She asked to Aichan who was with her hand on the inside the fridge
"I burnt my hand.." a crying Aichan answerd
Risa get closer and takes her hand "it's red but it seems it not that bad..i'll bring my pomade" she says while goes to her room 
After a few minutes Risa get back with the pomade and puts it softly on Ai's hands 
Aichan looked carefully at Risa "she never thought Risa could be this nice to her!" 
Done! Risa says with a smile that was melting Aichan's heart 
Both girls had eye contact and Risa can swear that Aichan was blushing 
Risa let go Aichan's hand 
Ai broke their eye contact "I HAVE A BOYFRIEND!!" she shouted out of blue 
"why you tell me that? like i care..You're totally crazy seriouly" Risa says while goes to the bathroom 
Aichan looked at her burned hand and then smirked "it was good to know that Risa it's not all mean!" 
Soon Aichan called her boyfriend to come and pick her up,she needed sometime with him the truth Risa presence was confunsing her a lot
<Meanwhile> Some similar situation 
Sayumi Michishige,the weather girl who has everything that anyother would be happy with (A handsome kind fiance,a comfy dept,a good job) was struggling with some old dear memories of her highschool love..
Sayumi could do nothing but stare the girl sleeping on her bed,she slowly walked to bed then sitted to observe the girl closely 
After a few minutes of thinking Eri opened her eyes 
"Sayu." She murmured then sitted and cupped her cheeks.Eri smiled while Sayu putted her hand on Eri's hand,their happiness didn't last long Eri saw the bright ring on Sayumi's hand 
Eri removed her hands "what's that?" she asked 
Sayumi looked other way "what do you think that you can appear and ruin everything?" then she turned to look at the girl on her bed 
the girl scratched her head "it hurts"  
How do you think i felt when you didn't confess? Sayumi asked looking at Eri 
Eri looked at Sayumi "I was talking about my head.." she says while gets up walking away
Sayumi takes Eri's arm"Eri you're so mean!" she says pouting while pokes Eri's shirt from behind 
Eri turned around,her eyes were red like she was holding herself for not to cry,she took Sayumi's hand that was poking her shirt "Am i mean? you're going to marry? *Eri looks at the ring with hate on her eyes* 
how long you been dating this guy?" she asks then pushes Sayumi and left The dept 
"Eri.."Sayumi murmured a tear rolled her cheeks 
~Meanwhile~ 
Hey have seen this not so tall but really hot girl that might look like a cute cat? JunJun asks 
ohh that must be Tanaka san! A girl with a weird accent replies
yeah that one! JunJun says excited 
"well she's lunching,i can take you where she usually eats" The girl says with a smile
"yes please!" JunJun replies and follows the girl 
Btw i'm LinLin! The girl says while stops and shakes her hand with JunJun 
Are you from China? my name is JunJun! She says smiling 
yes,i'm from China! LinLin replies still smiling 
JunJun smiles widely "i'm from China too..it nice to see someone from home!" she says still shaking her hand with a smile 
*Shivers all over JunJun's body!* 
JunJun looked around 
LinLin looked at her new friend "what's wrong?" she asked while she looks around also 
JunJun had a face like is she have seen a ghost "i have the little feeling that Reina is around!" she says smiling ackwardly and letting go LinLin's hands 
Ohhh yeah Tanaka san! are you a relative of her? LinLin asked 
"We're friends ..." JunJun just answered ackwardly
*Only Reina closest friends Sayumi and Ai know about her relantionship with JunJun,Whenever they introduce eachother they would say "friends".JunJun doesn't mind telling the whole world that she loves Reina but Reina doesn't wanna tell it yet!" 
"JUNJUN.." A figure shouts while runs to Them
"Ehh!!" JunJun and LinLin looked at the figure coming full speed 
Soon JunJun was tackled and the figure was on her with her hands on her collar shaking her 
I saw you holding her hands! The girl shouts mad while shakes JunJun 
*even though the scene was fun LinLin tried to help*
Tanaka san stop..you're going to kill her! LinLin says while tries to help JunJun 
I wasn't doing anything! JunJun replies yelling 
LinLin looked at the two girls "and you guys are friends?" she asked frowning 
"and You told her that i was your friend!" Reina shouts mad and shakes her more 
"You said in public we're friends!" JunJun replies trying to remove the little girl off her 
LinLin got tired and walked away from the scene "Those two friends..you got to be kidding me?"she thought while walks 
Hey you JunJun is mine! Reina shouts pointing LinLin 
LinLin kept walking away 
JunJun sighs "she was just guiding me to where you were then she introduce herself.." she says in a careless way 
Reina felt like an idiot in that moment but still endure it well,she just kissed her girlfriend and apologized then run to work because her lunch time was over 
JunJun got up "A roller coastar of emotions!" she murmures then smirks 
TO BE CONTINUED!! 
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.4
Post by: kuro808 on October 04, 2012, 10:36:11 AM
Jun and Reina :lol: :lol:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.4
Post by: maikeatoot on October 04, 2012, 11:53:44 AM
JunRei yay ! cute as ever !!!
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.4
Post by: yellow on October 04, 2012, 12:17:54 PM
geez... it's fun!! for JunRei moment... i think one of these days, Reina sure gonna just spurt out her true relationship out to people herself... :rofl:
and she is really one possessive girlfriend   XD
i wonder how risa and eri gonna win the 2 girls over with they already attached  :pen_read:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.4
Post by: maikeatoot on October 04, 2012, 12:25:51 PM
hoho im sick :( but hey aichan y?! i thought u lyk gaki .. u have a bf ?!! well junrei .. :) u make me laugh so hard !
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.4
Post by: yellow on October 04, 2012, 04:17:33 PM
hoho im sick :( but hey aichan y?! i thought u lyk gaki .. u have a bf ?!! well junrei .. :) u make me laugh so hard !
:lol: yesterday is we sick... today become your turn... anyway, get well soon!!
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.5
Post by: cmze on October 10, 2012, 05:26:44 AM
Don't judge by the covers~
                                      5
 (Still Saturday) 

Three girls were shopping..
Everything looks so cute! Misaki says smiling while looks at the showcases around with Haruna 
*Ayumi couldn't feel worst,she was feeling like a fish out of water,she didn't know when this started but now she knows there's only one person who makes her feel comfortable in the whole world*
Ayumi looked at her shopholic friends and sighed "Why is not monday already?.." she thought 
That's what she only thinks about on weekends..she doesn't want to disturb Riho. they spend a lot of time together everyday and it's normal if she wants to have her time with Kanon and Erina 
Soon the three friends felt hungry and started to walk trying to find a good place to eat 
*A little teddy bear cought Ayumi's eye*
Misaki grabbed Haruna's arm "look who's over there!" she says pointing to a couple in a cafe chatting and smiling 
is not that Sayashi Riho! Haruna says impress 
That's a cute boy! Misaki says smiling 
Ayumi appeared from behind "what are you two looking?" she asked then looked to what Misaki was pointing,Inmediately Ayumi got shocked her teddy bear fell on the floor 
The two girls looked at their friend 
Ayumi's heart aches with only seeing Riho smiling with that guy 
Daishi are you okay? Haruna asked 
yes,let's go! Ayumi replies faking a smile 
Ayumi's pov: It's was pretty dumb thinking of Riho and her like more than friends in any case they're totally differents persons but that's not why she's attracted to Riho? because she's not normal..
(<In the cafe>)
"Yeah that's so funny!" Riho says exagerating 
*The guy pouted he was talking about his dog death*
The truth Riho wasn't paying attetion to him,she was only thinking "why is not monday already?" and also that she's going to kill Suzuki Kanon..
"Why they always set me up on this awful dates? This is not fun at all" Riho thought 
*In the amusement park* 
I told you this was the best trade ever! Kanon says smiling while she's on the roller coastar with Erina 
I feel like Judas "selling my friends"...We're going to die! Erina shouts while they go full speed on the roller coaster 
Riho wants us to have fun.. That guy is the best free tickets for the amusement park! Kanon shouts
Thanks for the free tickets!! Both girls shouts smiling 
~~~~~Meanwhile~~~~~ 
(On Ai's door!) 
Ai's boyfriend was about to kiss her when suddenly the door opens revealing a girl tapping the floor 
Why you're so late? The girl shouts 
"it's 11 pm beside i have keys!" Ai replies 
*The guy was stunned*
Risa looked to the floor embarrased "oh..well i was.."
Wait a minute..aren't you Niigaki Risa the model? The guy asked amazed 
Risa pouted and looked at her happy fan then smile ackwardly 
*Don't get her wrong she loves her fans but not this one just because he's Ai's boyfriend* 
So you are! The guy says and hugs Risa 
"where's my body guard?" Risa thought
Aicahn reacted "Hey!" then she slapped the guy who let go Risa 
"Thanks now i can breathe!" Risa says and enters to the dept 
"wait up,we're soulmates!!" The guy shouts 
Risa slams the door to him 
what about me? Ai asked mad 
Well i never thought i could actually meet her! The guy replied 
Do you like her? Ai asked 
The guy looked at Ai "you're my girlfriend but seriuosly she's another thing!" he says smiling 
"Arrrgggg" Ai's reacts and starts slapping him 
"okay see you tomorrow" The guy says while leaves 
Ai sighed then entered to her dept
When she entered she found a already sleeping Risa
Ai smirked "maybe she was worried.." she thought while slowly lays next to her on bed 
Ai looked at Risa's face "did we meet before?" she wondered and soon fell sleep 
In the middle of night Risa was pulling the blanket to her side but Aichan was also pulling to her side 
*Both girls were with their close*
After a few minutes of forcing,Risa pulled harder pulling Ai with her which cause both falling on the floor with Ai on top 
"Oucch.." Risa says and looks at Ai who's still sleeping on her 
Are you a rock at night? Risa asked but still was no reaction from Ai 
Risa sighed "i guess it's fine.." she murmured and layed on the floor 
Risa looked at Ai sleeping on her chest "unbelieveble she's sleeping like a baby" she smirked and soon she fell sleep again 
(Sunday morning) 
Risa tried to stretch herself but something was stoping her, she looked down "now i remember!" she murmures and pushes Aichan aside 
"Ouucch.." Aichan replied then opened her eyes 
Risa gets up "you need to stop thinking about me as a bed!" she says while jumps on bed 
Aichan looked at Risa "i think you enjoyed having me on you.." 
Risa blushed "Are you crazy? i thought you were sleeping!" 
Aichan walked to the bathroom "i don't mind Risa..your chest is really comfaortable!" she says smirking while Risa fast looked at her chest "nobody ever got that close to me.." she murmures blushing even more 
>Meanwhile< (In other dept)
Already told i don't like LinLin! JunJun says while follows Reina around the kitchen 
Reina takes a knife and was about to cut something but then stopped "Look at me JunJun if you ever cheat on me..i don't know what i'll do" 
JunJun looked at the knife with wide eyes "First you need to let go this" She says nervous while takes the knife and puts in on the sink 
Reina pouted "She's chinese and i'm not so you probably like her.." she says sad 
JunJun slapped herself softly "Reina i like you,i chased you,stalked you for years.I'm not going to let you go that easy!" she says and kissed Reina's  forhead softly 
Reina looked down embarrased then smirked 
JunJun smiled also and hugged her tiny girlfriend "i should get a taller girlfriend,it's hard for me to hug you!" she says smiling 
"Stupid JunJun..." Reina shouts mad but then she was shuted by a sudden kiss from the taller girl 
*Phone ringing* 
The girls still were on their make out session 
"Don't pick up.." Reina says between kisses 
JunJun broke the kiss and smiled ackwardly "just a second.."
*Phone call* (JunJun=J) (Kamei Eri=E) 
Hello! (J) 
JunJun i feel so saaaaaad! (E) 
Eri what's wrong? (J) 
My heart hurts! (E) 
sorry about that but can you call someone else?(J) 
what? You're my friend! (E) 
and i love but i'm kinda busy right now..you know what i mean?ehhhh?  (J) 
i don't care! (E) 
call Risa she's good on this things! (J) 
Risa is busy with Aichan.I just called..Come here! (E) 
what do you want me do to rub? your belly and make you food! (J) 
Could you do that? (E) 
what? *JunJun looks at her phone* are you insane? that's only things that i do for my cat! (J) 
i feel so bad! (E) 
okay..i'll go wait for me and don't do anything stupid and you owe me big time! (JunJun shouts mad) 
*End of the phone call*
TO BE CONTINUED!!
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.5
Post by: kuro808 on October 10, 2012, 05:31:07 AM
No rubbing of the tummy XD XD XD
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.5
Post by: maikeatoot on October 10, 2012, 05:53:59 AM


 hohoho Aichan  leave  your pervert bf !!!  :wahaha: and JunRei !!!  :ptam-kill: they are  so cute like me!!!  hehe  so cuteeeeeeeeeeeee  :onioncheer:  i want more!!! maikea wants more !!!!  :on ksweat: :on gay:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.5
Post by: yellow on October 11, 2012, 07:39:56 AM
eri is a such a spoilor :angry:
eririn, if you want some rubbing... should get sayu to do it for you... i believe she will be more willing to  XD (and not call risa or junko for that  :twisted:)
and for reina, i love her being possessive and she is really cute when she is so  XD XD
for aichan's bf, i am thinking that  if one day they would to meet again, risa so happen to spill out to him that she has special feeling towards his gf... i wonder how would he react  :?
for the high school pairs, oh mine... riho really have to do something to clear daishi's misunderstanding on her... i think maybe ended up it was daishi to do confession first   :doh:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.5
Post by: maikeatoot on October 11, 2012, 07:59:48 AM
 riho x daishi .. ~DIES~ !!
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.5
Post by: cmze on October 11, 2012, 11:18:18 AM
what? what's that mean? i love Riho x Ayumi :catglare:

Hey maikeatoot please tell me where i can find a things about Sayumi and Eri!

i need to get some inspiration pleaseeee :grin:

yellow your comment is fun! i love the way u give me ideas!  :thumbsup
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.5
Post by: maikeatoot on October 11, 2012, 11:45:31 AM
KameShige Thread !!!  you can find it here at jph!p and hehe look at my DP !!!! watch videos of them !!!
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.5
Post by: maikeatoot on October 11, 2012, 01:47:38 PM
hey mou~~~  dont get it wrong ! i really LOVELOVE daishi x riho !! i mean ~DIES~ .. im dying becuz of their cuteness !!!!
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.5
Post by: yellow on October 11, 2012, 01:54:26 PM
yellow your comment is fun! i love the way u give me ideas!  :thumbsup
oh really :nervous... i am just stating what i am feeling at that time straight after reading the content... hope it will help you in your idea generation :P
you are making me so excited in commenting your future fiction now  :grin:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.6
Post by: cmze on October 13, 2012, 10:01:49 AM
                      ~Don't judge by the covers~
                                      6
 
(Monday) 
In the classroom everyone was chatting about their weekends 
Ishida Ayumi president of the school council was in fist row studying for no reason 
Haruna and Misaki looked at their friend 
"Daishi are you okay? You been acting weird since saturday!" Haruna asked 
Ayumi closed her book "why wouldn't i be okay!" she asked looking at their friends 
Misaki sighed "if you say so but it's kinda strange you're sitting in first row with us, i thought you like it next to the window!" she says scratching her head 
Soon somebody entered to the classroom fast "little crazy girls!" she murmured 
Konon started laughing "little girls harrasing you that's interesting!"
Riho turned to look at her friends then notice that Ayumi is sitting in first row 
"But it's not fun!" Riho murmured while Ayumi looked other way
"Almost late!" Erina says 
"I think she doesn't know how to use her watch,she's always late!" Ayumi says out of the blue 
*Everyone laughs* 
Riho was shocked "what's wrong with her?" she thought 
Ayumi gets up of her seat "don't worry Riho i can show you how to use a watch" she says while takes Riho's wrist hard "ohh digital" she says smirking 
"What's wrong with you?" Riho asks sad and irritated then releases her wrist and goes to her seat 
Ayumi smirks and then sits ignoring the girls in the back while Riho was staring at her 
Kanon and Erina didn't understant a thing but they didn't care..
How was your date? Kanon asked 
Riho still was staring Ayumi but when Kanon asked that *Ayumi's shoulders tense up* 
He was really hot! Erina says 
*Ayumi puts her hand on her neck*
Riho saw the whole thing "Could it be.." she thought
Ohhh he was really nice and charming not COLD AS SOME PEOPLE AROUND! She shouted the last part
*The trues it was the worst date ever,the guy told Riho that he didn't want  to see her again "nobody mess with his dog's death"* 
Ayumi got up of her seat "Shut up i'm trying to study!" she shouted irritated then turned to face the girls on the back 
Riho got up "what's wrong? the nerd didn't study much last night?" she asked smirking 
"Ooooohhhh" everyone says 
"cat fight!" A girl says 
Kanon looked at Erina "i was waiting for this!" she says smirking 
Soon the teacher entered so Ayumi got back to her seat while Riho just pouted 
The class started..
~Meanwhile~
Risa was sitting on the couch watching the tv but she wasn't really watching it,she was paying more attention to  Aichan who's preparing breakfast for the two of them while she sings 
Risa could do nothing but stare the older girl "her voice is so good,i could spend my whole day watching and listening her"  she thought 
Ai looked at Risa and smirked
The model blushed and got back to watch the tv but she kept changing channel by channel,she couldn't find anything interesting as Ai cooking..
The model sighed and stole a glance at the older girl 
again then fast looked at the tv
*On the movie the lover were stuck in a elevator* 
That reminded Risa what happened yesterday..
~Flashback~ 
"Hey wait up!" Risa shouts running and enters to the elevator 
"Risa.." The only person in the elevator says 
Risa looked at the person "Aichan..hi..." she says as she tries to catch her breath 
Ai smirked "don't tell me you were following me!" 
Risa pouted "why would i do that? you're annoying and you better press the button.i don't wanna be stuck here with you!" she says while leans 
Ai smile faded and pressed the button "this is not working.." she says looking up 
Risa pouted "i know loving together is not a good idea!" 
Ai looked at Risa and smirked "i'm not talking about us..i'm talking about the elevator!"  
Risa reacted fast "what?" she asked while presses the buttons 
Ai tried to stop her "I don't think it's a good idea pressing all of them!" 
Risa panicked "Let me go.. i can't be in a small place like this!" she shouted while kicks the doors "oouuucchh my foot!" 
Ai just looked at the girl " are you okay?" she asked while puts her hand on the model's shoulder 
Risa sits "i can't breathe!" she murmures 
Ai looks at her "you're all sweat! what's going on? there's much air here..breathe! she says while fans Risa 
Risa got pale and unbuttoned 3 buttons of her shirt  "it's really hot here!" she murmures all sweat
Ai looked at Risa "you're asthmatic!" she murmured then registered Risa's purse
Risa looks at Ai "it's at my dept!" she murmures trying to breathe 
Ai  knealed in front of Risa then cupped Risa's face "please close your eyes.." she says worried
Risa blushed and then closed her eyes 
Ai looked at Risa she has never been this close to the model's face "you're really pretty!" Ai thought 
"takes deep breaths and calm down,trust me everything is going to be fine.I'm not going to anything bad happen to you!" Ai says while sits next to Risa who opened her eyes 
"Let's wait a little..ok!" Ai says with a smile 
Risa smirked softly and putted her head on Ai's shoulder 
"Maybe singing might be good to cheer you up!" Ai says smirking then starts singing 
Risa smirks "i like your voice.." she murmures and closes her eyes again 
*After a few minutes*
Ai noticed that Risa is holding her arm tight so she took that hand and interwine their fingers 
"Don't stop...sing for me please!" Risa murmures 
"ok.." Ai replies and keeps singing 
~~~~~ End of the flashback~~~~~
Risa turned off the tv "i like your voice.." she says feeling embarrased 
Ai smirked while sets the table "i like that pink bra that you have!" she says smilinv and then stuck her tongue out
Risa got red "why you were watching my bra? pervert Aichan!"
Ai looked at Risa "i wasn't looking your bra..you showed to me when unbuttoned your shirt!" 
*Doorbell ringing*
Risa went to open the door 
Hi there my love! A guy shouts and tries to hug Risa but this one reject him and punches him on his face
"i don't being touched!" she says mad
*Ai blushed because she remembered that lately she's been sleeping close to Risa and she doesn't react that way and also yestarday they held hands very long time*
The guy got up fast "i'm not going to give up!" he says determinated 
Risa pouted "you freak me out!" she says coldly and slams the door on his face 
Ai sitted and started eating 
Risa sitted also "i can't believe that idiot was your boyfriend! what were you thinking?" she says mad 
Ai was shocked "you sound like a boyfriend..where were you? why you haven't call? who's that guy?"  she says imitating the voice of a guy 
Risa almost chokes 
Ai smirked "you're funny Risa,i like you!" she murmures 
Risa didn't heard her 
~Meanwhile~
Kamei Eri entered to a cafetery,she sitted on the first table she saw then she ordered and reread JunJun's Note: 
"I love you Eri but you're BLOCKING ME!!! Reina it's been in good mood lately (if you know what i mean!)
and it's really tired being your maid and my girlfriend sex salve!! so fix your shit now and take a coffee
so here's free cuppons for good coffee!! :) 
Btw:maybe you can get your tummy rubbed if you do things right.. behave it cost me a lot!! 
(End of the note)
Kamei Eri putted her head on the table feeling depressed "You don't have to write your sex life!" she murmured 
"Eri.."Somebody murmured
To Eri that voice was familiar so she opened her eyes and looked at the girl "what are you doing here?" 
Sayumi pulls out an envelope from her pocket and gives it to Eri 
Note 2: 
If i told you that i was setting you up with the bunny you wouldn't get out of your house so i fooled you with those fake cuppons! xD
Now fight for your love my friend!!  :D even if you steal the bride is love my friend! 
Eri smirked then putted the letter on her jacket 
Sayumi smiled "JunJun gave me these free cuppons and she also told me i'll find you here so she asked me to gave you that envelope!" 
Eri laughed "these cuppons are fake,have a sit i'll buy you coffee!" 
After a few hours of chatting the two girls got out of the cafe 
The two girl were walking 
Eri stops walking"Sayumi there's something i wanted to ask.." 
Sayumi looks at Eri "what's that?" she asked 
"Why are you not wearing your ring?" Eri asked 
Sayumi looked at her finger embarrased "uhh..well..i forgot,i washed dishes and forgot!" 
Eri smirked "oh..right!" she says while walks ahead 
Sayumi follows her "i said the truth!" she says while walks behind her 
suddenly Sayumi's high heel breaks And she slips
Eri laughs first and then helps the bunny 
Sayumi pouts "it's not funny!" 
Eri takes the broken heel 
Sayumi took off her other heel "people is goinh to think that i'm crazy for not wearing shoes!" 
Eri took off her shoes "let them think what they want!" she says smiling then takes the bunny's hand and keeps walking 
Sayumi blushes 
~Observing from a distance in other shop~
they are so cute! Reina says smiling 
Finally at least they're holding hands! JunJun says still looking at the bunny and the turtle 
Rena smiled "JunJun.." she called 
what? JunJun asked and looked at her girlfriend 
Reina evil smile "i want you know!" she says 
"here.. now?" JunJun asked shocked 
"yeah.." Reina replies while walks to the bathroom 
JunJun sighed "this is going to be the third place that we're going to be kicked out!" she thought bit then smirked and followed her girlfriend to the bathroom 
TO BE CONTINUED!! sorry Maikeatoot is just you never comment about it i thought you didn't like them xD
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.6
Post by: kuro808 on October 13, 2012, 10:24:20 AM
the ending of the chapter :lol:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.6
Post by: maikeatoot on October 13, 2012, 10:42:58 AM
mou~~~ im present as a reader today ! yay ! my gosh ! our daishi was jealous yay !! you riho please keep on doing that until our daishi confess ! bwahaha!
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.6
Post by: yellow on October 13, 2012, 10:59:36 AM
hohoho.... you are making aigaki pair interaction so interesting :thumbsup
but isn't aichan feel any sense of jealousy over her bf's crazy reaction towards the model.
reina... you are really so hyper yay :rofl:
haha... isn't reina feel any sense of guilt to create such an opportunity for kameshige... though it did save her jun from being borrowed by the turtle
haha... i am agreeable with maikeatoot on riho continue to spur jealous daishi into confession... because jealous daishi is cute  XD
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.6
Post by: maikeatoot on October 13, 2012, 11:06:27 AM
hohoho i can imagine daishi's face !!!  yay !  maikea wants more daishi x riho sweetness ! please? *puppy eyes*
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.6
Post by: cmze on October 13, 2012, 11:18:26 AM
I'll try my best on giving you a good moment of all the pairings! :D
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.6
Post by: maikeatoot on October 13, 2012, 11:20:50 AM
yay YATTA !!  hohoho im such a brat today haha!
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.6
Post by: cmze on October 13, 2012, 11:42:43 AM
coool!  8)

i like to spoil my readers!  :grin:

please updateeeeee ur fic!  :bow:

now i have to sleep..Good night! :)
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.7 Magic Brownies
Post by: cmze on October 15, 2012, 05:47:13 AM
                      ~Don't judge by the covers~   
                           7. Magic Brownies 

Three girls were laying on a bed..
Tanaka Reina couldn't help to ask to her best friend "Why aren't you jealous? i mean he's was your boyfriend and now he's drooling over that model?" 
Takahashi Ai looked at her friend "don't tell me about it..i get jealous whenever he's trying to get close to Risa but.." Ai sighed 
Sayumi and Tanaka looked at their friend "but.." both says in unision 
Ai sitted "i don't care if he dates anyother girl,i don't want him close to Risa.I mean i don't want anybody close to Risa!" she says the last part mad 
Reina and Sayumi sitted also "what?" both reacted the same way 
*Ai sighed again*
Sayumi pointed Aichan "You like her!"  
Aichan pointed at Sayumi "You don't point me,you're about to marry and you're thinking about..."
Reina looked at Ai "don't!" she murmures 
Ai smirked "Kamei Eri!" she says grinning 
Sayumi sitted on bed "now i'm depressed! why Eri is acting so kind?" she says with a black aura
Reina throws a pillow at Aichan 
Aichan gets up "okay i have to go..i have to cook for my guest!" 
Reina smiled "So now you're playing hubby and wifey huh?" 
"Shut up.." Ai says while walks out the room then she noticed some chocolates cakes on the table "what are these?" she asked shouted 
Sayumi pouted "really expesive brownies.. if you want you can take some!" she shouted 
Ai smirked "thanks" she says while takes 3 brownies and leaves 
Reina gets up and went to the kitchen but on her way there she saw the brownies "This looks delicious!" she shouted then she was eating the browning 
Sayumi got out of the room "hey!" she says and takes a brownie and eat it 
The two girls looked at eachother
 "there's one left!" Reina says 
"That Aichan.." Sayumi murmures 
<Meanwhile> <At a cafe shop> 
Niigaki Risa looked at her friends then sighed "so that crazy man is stalking me.." 
Eri laughed like crazy "ironic don't you think?her boyfriend likes you more than her..CRAZY LOVE!" 
Risa pouted "Shut up Eri,you love someone who's going to marry somebody else!" 
JunJun sighed "not again!" she says as she looks at Eri who is with a depressed aura 
Risa putted her hand on Eri's shoulder "sorry it slipped!" 
Eri sighed "so you like Aichan!" 
Risa panicked "what? who said that? shut up!" 
JunJun smirked "easy tiger don't panic!" 
Risa looked at her friends "it's not easy tell myself not fall for that jerk,she's smart,hot,annoying,sings like an angel! she says with a" in love" face
Eri and JunJun looked at eachother 
"uh! oh! you got that unique dork face..you're in love already!" Eri says 
Risa pouted "unique..what?" she asked 
JunJun smirks "unique dork face..that what you have everytime you looked at Ai" 
not truth! Risa replied 
*Phone ringing*
The three girls checks their phone 
JunJun smirks "It's mine..my cat!" She says while hugs her phone 
Risa looked at Eri "and i'm the dork!" 
*Eri facepalmed herself*
~Phone call~Reina (R) JunJun (J) Sayumi (S) 
where are you? i miss you now! (R)
where are you? what are you talking like that? (J) 
ehhhh why you are treating me like this? i'm going to cry now because of you! (R) 
What? why? i'm just used to the wild you that almost never admits that love me! why are you acting like this? (JunJun asked pacnicking) 
Risa and Eri looked at JunJun who was actually acting really weird 
i just love youuuuuuuuuu! Reina shouts 
Eri rised and eyebrown 
Jun! Eri is with ya? A voice asked 
get off Sayumi i'm talking to my JunJun! Reina shouts 
Eriiiiii!!! Sayumi shouts 
Eri heard and snatched the phone "Sayumi..Are you ok?" 
Hey it's my phone! Reina shouts and smacks Sayumi
Eri,JunJun and Risa didn't know what's going on? 
Reina look at those lights! Sayumi says pointing to the lamp 
Wow it's so amazing! Reina says and goes to the lamp then takes it and starts playing with it 
JunJun snacthed the phone "what's going on?" 
Sayumi laughed "everything is so cool..wait a minute! you're not Eri give me back my Eri you beast!" she says arguing with Reina's  phone 
The three girls looked at the phone "ehhhh" 
*Soon the call ended*
Junjun was trying to call back but it was useless 
<At Sayumi's dept> 
Look you're phone is swimming in my fishbowl! Sayumi says amazed 
wow it's amazingg! Reina shouts 
<Back to the girls> 
JunJun was still trying to call and pressing the button with passion 
Eri looked at her friend"i don't think they're going to..*Mad JunJun looking at them* forget it" she says and takes her phone and calls to Sayumi's cellphone
<At Sayumi's dept> 
Reina looked at Sayumi "so much noise turn it off!" she says mad 
Sayumi pulled her phone out her pocket "Eririn is calling me!!" she shouts happy 
~Phone call~ (S) Sayumi (E) Eri 
where are you? (E) 
my dept..are you going to pick me up? (S) 
Eri gets red "is Reina with you?" she asked 
"yep.." (S) 
Okay we're going there now! (E) 
~end of the phone call~
Eri's coming! Sayumi says happy 
<Back to the girls> 
JunJun looked at her phone "why is she acting weird?" 
Let's go! Eri says 
Risa looked at the two "i should go home..you two save your ladies!" she says while gets up 
"ok.." The two girls says
<At Sayumi's dept> 
The girls were having a party on their own they turned the volume up and started dancing and singing song of a group called Morning Musume 
Renai hunter rocks! Reina says smiling and spinning around 
Sayumi heard the doorbell so she openned the door 
"Eri.." She says and jumps on her 
*Kameshige couple was on the floor*
JunJun enters sees Reina dancing so she got close and took her by her arm 
"JunJun.." Reina says then puts her arms around her neck and pulls her down for a kiss *a long one* 
Eri helps Sayumi to get up "what's going on here?" she asked 
JunJun broke the kiss "even though i'm loving this,i also love grumpy Reina!" she says as she carries Reina bridal style "sorry guys i don't know how to be the.. third.. party.." she says confuses while walks away with Reina on her arms 
woo hoo JunJun is so strong! Reina shouts laughing
*Door closed* 
Eri turn off the stereo and looked at Sayumi who  pouted
 "What's going on with you?" Eri asked 
Sayumi smiled then grabbed Eri's hand "you know i never told you but i like everything about you..your mouth,your nose,your thighs.."
Eri was hypnotized and red looking at reckles Sayumi. then she gulped the black haired girl was getting closer and closer 
"I think it was love at first sight.." she murmures a few inches away from Eri's lips 
<Meanwhile> 
Risa got home or Ai's home.She looked around for the owner of the dept 
Risa chan! Ai says smiling and hugging her 
Risa smile but her pride echoed "stop hugging me!" she says mad and pushing Aichan to the sofa 
Ai pouted then started crying "why are you so mean to me?" she shouts mad 
Risa turned around and looked at the girl who seems to be acting like 15 years teenege girl 
"now i'm the bad one!" She murmured and putted herself in front of Aichan 
Aichan looked at Risa and pouted cutely 
"You been hanging the morning with Reina and Sayumi don't you?" Risa asked 
"Yes.." Aichan replies while gets up and looks at the girl in the eyes 
Risa freaked "wha.wha.. what are..you..lo-looking at me-me like that?wee weren't yo..you...cry-ing?" she asks stuttering
Ai smirked "do i put you nervous?" she asked then she cupped Risa's cheek 
Risa was more nervous and red the more Ai gets close to her the more she steps back but unlucky for her there was another couch,Risa fell on it while Ai took advantage and putted herself on top and pinned her arms up 
"what are you doing? Get..." Before Risa could finish her statement Ai lips were on hers 
Risa was trying to break the kiss but somehow Ai was  stronger so she finally gave in 
Once Ai broke the kiss for the lack of air,she smirked "Risa chan lips are so sweet!" 
Risa was trying catch her breath "you're tongue just raped me.." she murmures.Ai chan kiss her again 
but this time once Aichan set her arms free,she cupped Ai's cheeks and respond the kiss with the same passion 
*Phone ringing*
Aichan had her hands under Risa's shirt "Don't pick up!" she says between kisses 
Risa fast grabbed her phone but Ai didn't stopped kissing her and groping her 
<Phone call> JunJun (J) Risa (R) 
"Risa please check on Ai these girls just ate magic brownies..if you know what i mean"
(Ouuuch) Risa shouted becouse Ai bit her neck 
what's wrong with you? (J) 
"Nothing..magic brownies?" Risa repleated then looked at Ai and then looked at the table where is a brownie on it 
yes,if she's all crazy then give her a lot water or make throw up like i'm doing with Reina! (J) 
(Noise of someone throwing up) 
"Gross!" Risa says and tries to avoid Aichan kissing her on her body 
"And you're not holding her hair.." (J) 
"Risa you're body is so hot!" Aichan shouts 
"wait a minute! is a monkey clinging on you?" (J) 
"no,it's not!" Risa fast says and hangs up 
~End of the phone call~
<At JunRei's dept> 
JunJun was holding her hair while she throws up 
"I'm going to kill Sayumi" she says while keeps throwing up on the sink 
JunJun smiled "now you're starting to sound like my cold cat!" 
Reina smirks "so you like me treating you bad?" 
JunJun looks at her girlfriend "maybe" she answers winking 
Reina looked at her girlfriend "you're masochistic" 
"Only yours.." JunJun replies 
<Meanwhile> 
Risa looked at Ai "According to Eri and Sayumi you took 3 brownies and here's only one so that means you ate two.." 
The monkey girl smiled widely  
Risa took a deep breath "you're an idiot!" she says 
Ai smirks "maybe if i shower.." she says as she takes off her clothes in front of Risa
Risa opened her mouth "what?" she asked looked at the hot naked Aichan entering to the bathroom 
"I need help Risa chan everything is confusing and has so many bright colors.." Aichan shouts 
Risa sighed "i can't fall for you Aichan.." she says while she enters to the bathroom resign 
Aichan looked at Risa Then smirked 
<2 hours earlier> Before Gaki gets home
Aichan entered to her dept,she putted the three brownies on the table,She was preparing herself to cook when her doorbell ranged,She openned the door
"Where's my love?" Aichan ex asks looking around for Risa 
Aichan pouted "She's not home and nobody invited you in so go away!"
The guy so the brownies and ate one 
Ai looked at him "hey those are my brownies!" she shouted mad 
The guy ate another one so Aichan got mad and started throwing him her shoes
"Are you crazy?" He asked while Ai keeps throwing him her shoes 
Ai shouted like a man and the guy freaked out and left the dept running
*Phone ringing* *Before calling JunJun*
Ai (A) Reina (R) Sayumi (S) 
Aichan!! those brownies are the best! (R)
Look at me i'm so cute! (S) 
what's wrong with you two? (A with accent) 
Don't talk to me like that? why aren't you happy? this brownies makes you happyyyyyyh! (R)
Ai looked at only brownie on her table"Sayumi where did you get these brownies?" 
Sayumi laughs "shhhhhh from some man he said that it was special!" she says smiling 
*then the two hanged up*
"Crazy girls.." Ai thought 
Then something came to her mind "maybe if she gives it to Risa but not she asmathic so it would be really dangerous" 
~Meanwhile~ 
Eri looked at Sayumi sleeping "you grope me too much..i will never be same.." she murmured then notice the picture of Sayumi's fiance
"This dude..i have seen him before" Eri murmures then thinks "Wait a sec he's Miki's husband..."  
TO BE CONTINUED!!! SORRY I'M SLEEPY I OWE YOU RIHO X AYUMI!! 
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.7 Magic Brownies
Post by: maikeatoot on October 15, 2012, 06:02:41 AM
takagaki !!!! its the best yay !! RIHO AND DAISHI where are they ?!! yay ! please update soon ! ah lab yuh !
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.7 Magic Brownies
Post by: yellow on October 16, 2012, 03:30:10 AM
hoho... i like the magic brownie... :rofl:

eririn should quickly tell mikitty about the affair of sayu and her husband... then both mikitty and sayu ditched that trash for their girlfriends.
now, i see why aichan not jealous when her ex's crazy reaction with risa...  :lol: aichan quickly conquer the model... and live elsewhere until the crazy guy not able to find you two XD

but i wonder how is she going to trick the poor model into eating that remaining magic brownie and then, the model suddenly go hyper over her and then, the confession, and formation of the couple thing :lol:... as i suppose that she will not have to plan to eat it herself when she "supposedly" have eaten it... but to think twice on the model's asthmatic health, will she just eaten it or just fake it all the way and she does that confession  (i really wonder :?)

for the magic brownie chapter, maybe you should have a sequel one with either riho accidentally eaten it and confess to daishi, or the other way round... i feel really fun when i picture that in my mind  XD

btw, i just wonder what will happen to the crazy guy when he have eaten 2 of the magic brownie and who will be his victim when he has gone so hyper... heehheee... i am really excited to know (why i have that feeling that i kinda like the appearance of the crazy guy being so idiotic over risa  :?)

*EDIT*
forget to comment on junrei, reina is so damn abnormal after consuming the magic brownie... like jun, i also prefer that cold cat... because she is more lovable that way...
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.7 Magic Brownies
Post by: maikeatoot on October 16, 2012, 01:33:13 PM
how about an update today ! hehe just kidding cmze !!  rihoxdaishi !!  ah ~DIES~ !!
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.8 Magic Brownies sequel
Post by: cmze on October 17, 2012, 07:27:08 AM
                      ~Don't judge by the covers~   
                       8. Magic Brownies sequel

Well i guess you convince me!! :) 

Sayashi Riho spended the whole morning staring at the back the girl in the first row "why she's been ignoring me? this is not funny! why she wants to fight with me? i miss her!" She thought then sighed 
*Soon the bell ringing*
Kanon stretches "finally..this day was so boring!" 
Riho was still staring at council president
Misaki smiled "Ayumi chan is so cute!" she says and hugs her friend 
Riho pouted and clenched her fist 
Erina and Kanon looked at Riho..
"Are you okay Riho?" Erina asked 
Riho got from her seat "Yeah why wouldn't i be?" she asked as she walks away mad 
Ayumi looked at girl walking mad with a "don't talk to me!" aura
After a few blocks from school Riho stopped walking "she's mean.." she thought then stopped in a park sp she sitted in the swing,she sighed and pulled out her phone,she was looking at the pictures going one by one till she found and old picture of her and her captain 
Riho looked to the sky and remembered what her senpai told her after graduating "If you feel bad and need someone to talk or not talk,I'm good at it!" 
Riho searched for the her phone number "hope she's still using the same phone.." she murmured and used gps to find her 
Riho was surprised "Ehh! she's few blocks from here"
she got up and walked to the address
*Which lead her to Aichan's dept*
"Aichan and Risa relationship is weird.Risa thinks that Ai doesn't remember a think about their french kissing  last night while Ai just want to Risa confess or give her a sign at least but unlucky for Ai.."Risa is acting like nothing happened"
~AiGaki's kitchen~ 
Risa was cooking while Ai just entered to the kitchen to get a glass of water 
*Risa was all tense up couse her presence* 
Aichan looked at Risa who got nervous "wha..what's wrong?" she asked 
Aichan smirked 
Risa got red "stop loooking at me like that!" she says trying to avoid Aichan's gaze 
Ai touched Risa's neck with the tip of her finger 
Risa reacted and slips
Aichan laughed while Risa gets up "Are you crazy?" she asked annoyed by the monkey
Aichan looked at the model "you have a big hickey on your neck! Risa chan it's been doing reckles things?" she asked teasing the model 
Risa reacts "Ehhh where?" she says while runs to the bathroom 
Aichan smiles wide 
"ahhhhh it's hugeeeee!" Risa shouts 
*Doorbell rings*
Aichan smirks "i'll get that!" she says while walks to opens the door 
Riho looked at her senpai "hi!" she says nervous 
Aichan was kinda shocked buy let her in 
Riho sitted on the couch while Aichan brought her orange juice then sitted next to her 
"How you been?" Aichan asked with a smile 
Riho smiled weakly "well i'm feeling bad and sorry for coming like this but i really don't know who else talk about this!"
Aichan got serious "what's wrong?" she asked  
Riho looked down "i think i love someone.." 
Aichan smiled "that's good!" 
Riho putter her hand on her neck "a girl" she says looking at her senpai 
Ai smiled faded "does she likes you?" she asked 
Riho looked "i don't know and that's the problem i don't know if i should confess!" she replied still looking down 
Ai putted her hand on Riho's shoulder "go for it!" she says with a smile 
Risa got out of the bathroom "What? she asking for a advice and you tell her.. go for it! what if it is one sided? she would be hurt!" 
Riho was speechless "who's this girl? wait a sec..she's Niigaki Risa the model!" she thought 
Aichan got up "what is better tell what you feel and if you got hurt well 50\50%!"
Risa looked at Ai "You have no idea how it feels to be rejected for the one you love! like you always had everyone on the palm of yohr hand!" 
Ai pouted "i'm not the model that everyone likes and of course i know how it feels to be rejected!" 
Risa got mad "she doesn't remember what she did to me in highschool for confessing to her" she thought and then left mad 
Ai sighed "what's wrong with her?" she thought 
Riho looked at her senpai "You know if Erina finds out that i was in the same room with Niigaki san,i think she would kill me..she's obsessed with Niigaki san!" 
Aichan pouted "not another one..." She thought "don't tell her anything about Niigaki san!" she says with creepy smile 
The two girls talked for a while till..
*Phone ringing* 
(A) Aichan (R) Reina 
What's wrong? (A) 
You have to come to Sayu's place..it's important really important! (R) 
*When Reina says it's important,it must be important she's not type of person who jokes around..* 
Okay i understand! (A) 
*End of the phonecall*
Ai looked to the younger girl and sighed "Sorry Riho chan i have to go..something happened.." 
Riho smiled "Don't worry Takahashi san,you helped me a lot today!" 
*Riho's stomach makes a noise* 
Riho was embarrased while Acchan was smirking "take anything you want from the fridge!" she says while gets up and goes to her room to change her clothes 
Riho openned the fridege,there were a lot candies there but what catched her attention was a brownie
She took it and examinated it first then eat it 
When Aichan got out of the room,Riho already ate the entire brownie 
The two girls said goodbye and walked opposites directions 
Riho couldn't help to fell different,her body was so light and the lighs were sparkling more 
"what the hell?" She thought while walks seeing her hands to be exact her fingers,she was looking at her fingers like if it was the greatest thing ever then also came to her mind her school coucil president "she had gotten prettier *sighs* i like everything about her"
Riho heard poeple talking,she looked around and saw a girl that seemed her beloved Ayumi holdings hands with another guy 
Riho run to the guy and jumped to him "stay away from her!" she shouts
"Ehhh are you cheating on me?" The girl asked looking at her boyfriend who seems really happy with Riho on top of him 
Riho looked at the girl's face "Uppsss.." she says while gets up 
The girl was mad "are you cheating on me?" she asked slapping the guy several times not letting him answer
Riho looked at the scene "ouch.." she murmured feeling bad for the guy then run away without them notice 
After a few minutes of running she got the place where she wanted to go in first place..
Riho looked to the house "if i use the door,you'll make them say that you're not home but if i use the window you can't.." she murmures then chooses the window
 *Note:A tree was next to the house so that's why she could get into Ayumi's room *the window was open btw*
Riho entered to the room,Ayumi was sleeping on her bed 
Riho sitted next to her and watches while she's sleeping "i wanna kiss you now!"  she murmures and removes a string of hair from her face 
Ayumi opens her eyes slowly,when she saw Riho she fell of bed 
"You're up!!" Riho says happy and hugs the older girl
Ayumi was shocked "let me go! go back with your boyfriend!" she shouted and tries to remove Riho's arms from her waist 
Riho looked at the red Ayumi in the eyes "i don't have a boyfriend, i only want Ayumi chan!" 
Ayumi was even redder "your eyes are red and also your cheeks..Are you okay?" she asked looking at the happy Riho that was hugging her 
*Knock** Knock* 
Ayumi looked at the door 
Honey is everything alright? Her mother asks
Ye---> Ayumi covers Riho's mouth "yeah mom don't worry..is just the tv!" she answers  
Ayumi sighed 
Riho gets up "i feel so weird Ayumi chan and all that is because of you!" she says smiling looking at Ayumi
"Okay now you started to freak me out.." she murmures blinking a few times 
Riho grabs her hand "let's dance!" she says pulling her close to her body *their faces a few inches from eachother's" 
Ayumi step back "okay.. enough!" she says and turns around to avoid Riho
Riho hugged Ayumi from behind then putted her chin on Ayumi's shoulder who blushed for the sudden act
"loving you since always..i just.. i know we're really different but i don't think there's anybody else that know me better in this world but maybe is just one sided" She says while slowly removes her arms from Ayumi's body
Riho sighed while Ayumi turned around and looked at her blinking a few times 
Riho puts her hand on her forhead "i should heard Niigaki san!" 
Ayumi got closer 
(Inner Riho: Oh no she's going to slap me!)
Riho closes her eyes 
(Inner Riho: eh no slapping?)
a few seconds later soft lips were on hers 
Riho opened her eyes..
(Inner Riho: Daishi is kisiing me..YAY!!!) 
*Meanwhile*
Niigaki Risa opened her eyes "where am i?" she asked looking around 
A girl was next to her looking at her with face she has seen before "Aichan's x!" she says 
The girls jumps on Risa "Niigaki san I love you!" 
Risa pouted "What?why? what am i doing here?" 
"I'm Ikuta Erina my friends call me Eripon and i'm your biggest fan..my bother hit you in the head with his basketball ball when you were walking so we brought you here to take care of you!"
Risa pouted again "i'm feeling bad..really bad!" 
Eripon smiled "Don't worry my love is going to heal you!"
Niigaki Risa=X_x; 
~Extra something~ The dude after eating the brownies!! 
He was walking when suddenly he fell like everyone were lookig at him "why are you looking at me? do you like me?" he asked to a man that was passing next to him with his kids 
The dude kept walking "why everything is so shiny?why am i all sweat?" he shouted paranoid 
"All you want a piece of me!" He shouted while takes off his shirt 
*people were looking at him beacuse he was acting like a crazy man*
The dude even took his pants off then he notice a magazine where is Risa in the cover 
He takes it "My wife!" he says to the seller and starts kissing the magazine 
*Everyone was disgusted abd covering their kids eyes!" 
"He's raping the magazine!" Another man shouted 
soon the police came and took him 
"What? let me go! she's my wife!" He shouts while tries to run away but the police man grabbed him hard 
"yeah yeah crazy man!" The police man says smirking
"no!no! i have to take care of her!" He shouts while he gets inside the car 
TO BE CONTINUED!! 
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.8 Magic Brownies sequel
Post by: yellow on October 17, 2012, 08:49:41 AM
geez... what's a dangerous man... stripping freak  :shocked but i really like that part on raping the magazine and get caught... because that shows that the magic brownie is invincible :pimp:

i would say thanks god that the hit was not so harsh.... or else, our beloved model gonna bad concussion and forget about aichan   :doh:

to be frank, i thought aichan will go all the way through that last night... but after thinking twice about them only to ended up like that hanging on with their ambiguous relationship also not that bad... the model can continue pretending but first, aichan really have to save her out from eripon... but how? (i really wonder....)

for the serious matter, is it about eri telling sayu about her fiance being mikitty's husband...

but, no matter what... the location aichan living is really dangerous, filled with so many risa's crazy fans... i  really feel quite worry for risa... :smhid

for riho and daishi, finally the couple thing form...  XD

i wonder when will be aigaki's turn...  :wth
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.8 Magic Brownies sequel
Post by: maikeatoot on October 17, 2012, 02:01:04 PM
 lol that crazy man huh ! and daishi and riho are so .. oh my gosh cmze i love you !!! ~DIES~ !!
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.8 Magic Brownies sequel
Post by: kuro808 on October 20, 2012, 09:41:13 PM
those magic brownies :lol:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.9
Post by: cmze on October 22, 2012, 10:13:09 AM
                      ~Don't judge by the covers~
                                         9
(The next day) 
Risa didn't understand anything "why Aichan is kissing me? why am i enjoying it?" she wondered while The older girl pushed her against the wall "Aichan.." she murmured trying to stop the older girl to get closer to her but it was imposible Aichan was somehow stronger and end up sucking,licking and biting her neck 
Risa moaned while her fingers strokes Aichan's hair
"Can't you see? i want you!" The older girl says then looked at her in the eyes 
Risa cupped Aichan's cheeks and kissed her softly while the older girl hold on her waist 
Their kiss was a sweet but soon Ai's and Risa hunger for eachother showed up 
"Hurry,i want you too!" Risa says between kisses while Aichan lift her up spreading her legs both sides 
Risa encircled her legs around the older girl while she's determinate to take off Aichan's shirt without breaking their passionate kiss
Aichan in other hand was unbuttoning her shirt "shit! so many buttons!" she says mad and broke them all,she broke the kiss and looked at the yourger girl chest "pink.." she murmures with a smirk 
Risa blushed 
~~Alarm clock ringing~|~
Risa woke up fast then looked around and turned off the alarm "it was a dream.." she murmures while gets up,on her way to the bathroom she saw Ai laughing watching the tv 
Risa entered to the bathroom "i'm..." she murmures then she putted her hand on her "wet.." she says not so happy remembering that was Ai who caused this strange feeling on her
*Risa sighed and started to get undress to get in the tub*
Knock! Knock! 
Risa pouted "What?" she shouted 
"I prepared you breakfast.." Ai shouted 
"Ok.." Risa replied 
~Meanwhile~ At JunRei's
The two girls were packing ..
JunJun sighed "so you want me to invite Eri so she'll hook up with Sayumi and she'll happy instead of being depressed because her boyfriend was a married pig!" She says looking at her tiny girlfriend 
Tanaka Reina smiled "yeah!" 
JunJun facepalmed herserlf "i think we should give them time besides Sayumi has feelings for that guy and i don't want Eri to get hurt again.." 
Reina pouted "JunJun you're going to invite her and that's it..depressed Sayumi is not fun besides she's my friend i want her to be happy!" she says cutely tugging JunJun shirt to convince her 
JunJun looked other way "Don't that cute cat face,it get me nervous! she says trying to avoid her little girlfriend 
Reina grabned JunJun by her shirt "btw  if Sayumi keeps being depressed will not be JunRei smexy time in a while and i'll be moody!" she says making JunJun lean and look at her in the eyes 
JunJun felt shivers "okay..okay we'll have smexy time!" she says resign 
~Meanwhile~
Ishida Ayumi woke up,she tried to stretch but somehow she couldn't so she looked at the girl next to her who's has her arm and leg on Ayumi (in some sort of way to preventing her to go)
Ayumi smiled cause her girlfriend antics "Riho chan wake up.." she murmured while tugs her hair behind her ear 
Riho moved cause the sudden touch and slowly opened her eyes 
Ayumi smiles "Good morning.." 
Riho looked at Ayumi in the eyes "good morning.." she says not breaking eye contact and not removing her arm or leg off Daishi 
Both looked at eachother for a few minutes (Maybe cause they were happy that they were a couple..teens who gets them?xD) 
Knock! Knock! <The door> 
*The two girls fast sitted*
"Ayumin time to go to school!" Her mom shouts then walks downstairs 
Riho looked at Ayumi "my parents must be worried" she says and fast gets up from bed 
Ayumi gets up also "don't worry i called and told them you were going to spend the night here because we studied a lot and lost track of time!" 
Riho smiled "you're such a liar!" she say while she is going to get out from the window 
Ayumi looked at Riho with a sad expression 
Riho looked Ayumi back "Aren't you going to kiss me? she asked with a cute expresion 
Ayumi smiled and walked to her girlfriend then kissed her softly *Forheads connecting*
Riho smiles "I'm going home to change,i'll pick you up in a half an hour!" then steal another kiss from Ayumi but this time bolder 
<Back to Aigaki> 
Ai was changing channels she wants to Risa get out of the bathroom to invite her to a trip with her friends!
~Flashback~
Two girls were trying to cheer their best friend up 
Aichan walked around the room in circles "i can't believe the son of a bitch was married!" she says mad
Sayumi cries more "Eri was right and treated her so bad!" she says while Reina rubs her back 
Ai looked at her bunny friend "c'mon he's not the only man in this world.." she says trying to cheer Sayumi 
Reina sighed "yeah but they're like public phones if it's not already taken,it's damage!" 
Sayumi cries loud 
Ai pouted "thanks Reina!" 
Reina looked other "hey! i have an idea what about vacations,payed for my family kinda obvious!" she sahs looking at her two friends with a smile 
Ai frowned but followed the flow "Yeah it might be a good idea.. just girls!" she says with a smile looking at her depressed friend 
Sayumi wiped her tears "can we get massages?" she asked looking at Reina 
Reina laughed "my parents are the owner of the hotel and i'm rich so of course we can!" 
Sayumi smiled 
Aichan smirked "that's my girl!" she says and hugs Sayumi then kisses her on her forhead
Reina gets up from bed "i'm thirsty.." she says and goes to the kitchen 
"I'm also thirsty.." Ai says and followed Reina to the kitchen 
Reina grabbed a glass of water while Ai looks at her
"do i have something on my face?" she asked 
Ai smirked "you invited us because..." 
Reina pouted "i'm a good friend!" 
Aichan laughed hard "now tell me the truth!" 
Reina sighed "well it was like killing two birds in one shot..my parents want to see me but i don't wanna go alone with JunJun,it might be strange and i'm not ready to tell my parents about our relantionship or being without her!" 
Aichan looked at her friend "i don't wanna leave Risa!" she says with a smirk 
Reina frowned "okay bring her too,i don't mind" she says while walks to Sayumi's room 
~End of the flashback~ 
Aichan looked at Risa who's sitting eating her breakfast "Risa.." she called 
Risa looked at her "don't tell me she saw me on bed a while ago?!" she thought all red "wha..what?" she asked nervous 
Ai got up from the couch "The girls and i are going to take vacations don't you wanna come with us? Reina's parents pay everything!" 
Risa looked other "i don't know Reina..i'm not her friend!" 
Ai sitted next to Risa "it doesn't matter Eri and JunJun are also coming,c'mon Risa! Reina's parents have an hotel next to this beatiful beach..it's like paradise!" she says excited 
*Risa almost chokes,she just imagined Aichan in bikini*
Risa drank her glass of juice fast while Aichan grabbed her hand and looked at her in the eyes "Are you okay? she asked worried
Risa got red and soon the same heat that she felt this morning was there..She got up "i have to work,i'll tell you later!" she says while leaves 
"We are leaving tomorrow!" Ai shouted then sighe she really wants Risa to come 
<At Eri's place>
JunJun sitted next to her friend on the couch 
Eri facepalmed herself "i shouldn't told her about it" 
JunJun putted her hand on her shoulder "Are you crazy? he was a pig..thanks god you find out!" 
Eri sighed "now she hates me.." she says leaning her back on the couch 
JunJun smirked "don't worry she'll thank you later!" 
Eri looked up 
"Hey let have vacations..i know a good place beasides is free!"JunJun says 
what? Eri asked 
yeah no more drama! JunJun says smirking 
Eri frowned "What about Reina?"
JunJun laughed "don't worry about her..i have her under control!" 
whatever.." Eri says 
"Yeah!" JunJun says happy 
~Meanwhile~ 
The two highschoolers walked hand in hand to school but they had to separate a few blocks after..
Riho was already in the classroom sitting on her spot while Ayumi told her that she need to get some copies..
Riho sighed she wanted her girlfriend to cross that door and ahead of her like always 
Erina and Kanon got closer to Riho,Kanon sitted on Ayumi's seat 
Riho looker at Kanon then pouted "i really wanted her to seat there!" she thought 
Kanon smiled "what's wrong Riho chan?" she asked 
Riho looked other way "nothing!" she answered 
Erina also sitted next to her "you're not going to believe what happened to me last night?!" she says excited and shouting 
Everyone was paying full attention to Eripon
Riho couldn't care less but she asked anyway "what? what happened?" 
Eripon got up "Niigaki Risa was at my house last night!" she shouted excited 
*everyone laughed*
"why she would be at your home? she's a supermodel!" 
Eripon got mad "My brother hit her with a ball in the park and knock her so we took her home.." she shouted
"Don't tell me she brought you here on her car?" another guy says smiling 
Eripon pouted "No,she got away last night" she murmured
somebody entered to the classroom so everyone were quiet
Riho smirked "Finally" she murmured 
Haruna and Misaki smile "Daishi.." they say smiling 
Ayumi smiled "hi!" she says while walks straight to the seat where Kanon was 
Kanon turned to look Ayumi "don't tell me you want to sit here princess!" she says a little irritated 
Ayumi just looked at her 
Kanon was kinda mad "why we always have to do what you want? Riho chan doesn't like you,i don't like you,Eripon doesn't like you also,you should go and sit in the first row with the rest of the nerds!" 
Riho pouted "Kanon she always sit here.." 
Ayumi sighed "i'm the coucil president!" she says in a bossy tone 
Kanon looked at Riho "what? i thought you don't like her..why you always get by her side? she said you were stupid a few days ago." 
Riho looked other way "and i called her nerd so we're even so please move!" 
Kanon got up and sitted in the last in a corner,Eri followed her 
Ayumi sitted while Riho sighed "this is not going to be easy.." she thought 
TO BE CONTINUED!! 
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.9
Post by: kuro808 on October 22, 2012, 10:22:30 AM
JunRei smexy time :lol:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.9
Post by: maikeatoot on October 22, 2012, 10:34:08 AM
i want the continuation NOW !!!!!!!!!     :tantrum: why you always torturing us  :shifty: hehehehe but it's a very cute chaptaaaaaaah !! That JunRei smexy time !!!  :luvluv2: :shy2: you reina was a.. a.. a..  :on woohoo: and that takagaki !!! i thought that was true !!! mou ~~~ :fainted: :depressed: :frustrated:


 patiently waiting for KameShige goodness !!!  :onionshower: :bath:

 please update soon !!  :bow: ja nee!  :byebye:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.9
Post by: yellow on October 22, 2012, 10:34:39 AM
hee... risa have a  :lol: :lol: dream... i think she should just go with them for the vacation... since aichan cannot leave risa now... and then, the time's right, atmosphere right... we then will have another 2 more couples hey hey... :D :D :D
and the two highschoolers are soo interesting... heehee... really reminds me of my younger days... :pimp:
but how come i got a bad feeling about junrei in this vacation... :(
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.9
Post by: maikeatoot on October 22, 2012, 10:39:02 AM
 hehe i forgot about Daishi and riho !!! heyhey  :wub: AyuRi ??? hehehehe reminds me of yellow's younger days  XD :lol: kidding here !!!
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.9
Post by: yellow on October 22, 2012, 10:47:36 AM
 :lol: :lol: :lol:
(to think back now... i feel that i were quite silly then)
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.9
Post by: maikeatoot on October 22, 2012, 10:57:53 AM
 but you're still young !!  :cow: young at heart  :heart: hehehe  :rock: just like me hohohohoho  :thumbsup
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.9
Post by: yellow on October 22, 2012, 11:01:31 AM
 :lol: :lol: :lol: my younger days is referring to around the age when everything seems soo damn awkward
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.9
Post by: cmze on October 22, 2012, 02:25:45 PM
U guys r really funny..thanks for reading!!  :rofl:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.9
Post by: maikeatoot on October 22, 2012, 03:37:11 PM
hmp! continuation !! hehe joking ! take your time friend ..
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.10
Post by: kuro808 on October 23, 2012, 10:25:49 AM
Warning: you have to watch for certain words that you are using in the fic, that one little part maybe need to be moved to the perv :nervous

other than that, keep up the good work
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.10
Post by: cmze on October 23, 2012, 11:47:13 AM
Sorry! I'll edit it later no battery!  :nervous
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.10
Post by: maikeatoot on October 23, 2012, 12:01:27 PM
yay! that kameshige was,,,,,,,,,,,,, :onionshower: yeah you have to watch for certain words,, like hehe just like what happened to my fic hehe  :doh: :sweatdrop: :nervous hehe
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.10
Post by: cmze on October 23, 2012, 12:11:07 PM
                      ~Don't judge by the covers~
                                         10

<At the airport> 
Ai looked around waiting for certain model 
Reina pouted "Aichan is almost time.." 
Ai looked at her watch "She said she was coming!" she says mad tapping her foot on the floor 
The bunny looked at her friends "I still don't get why we have differents seats?" she says while looks at her ticket 
Reina and Ai tense up
 "we told you..the other seats where already taken!" Reina says trying to not laugh 
A good looking girl comes running "Aichan!"
Aichan sighed in relieve 
"Let's go to the plane to look our seats.." Reina says grabbing Sayumi's arm and walking away 
Ai smacked Risa on the head softly "why you take too long?" she asked mad 
"Ouchh traffic!" Risa shouts mad 
<At the plane> 
Kamei Eri was feeling strange "why are you smiling so much JunJun? and why we have separate seats?" she asked with her finger on her chin
JunJun tried not to laugh "those seats were already taken!" she says with a soft smile 
*Two girls were arguing*
Reina was mad "It's not F it's E and it'a over there close to my JunJun!" she shouted 
Eri got up and looked at the two girls arguing "bunny!" she shocker 
Sayumi looked at Reina "Turtle! you guys brought the turtle!" she says shocked 
Reina laughed "i told you it was a girls trip so now sit obvious next to her because that's your seat!" she says pushing Sayumi to her seat next to Eri 
Eri looked at JunJun who just looked other way 
Aichan and Risa were also looking their seats "F it's here!" Aichan says with a smile 
Risa pouted "Are our seats close?" she asked 
Aichan laughed "of course are next to eachother!" she says while makes Risa sit "this could get any better?why did i agree to come?" she thought looking at Aichan who looked really hot in those shorts and with that short hair that made her look like a really hot blond guy
"Are you okay?" Aichan asked to Risa who was looking at her like if she was drooling for her 
Risa got red and turned her head fast to avoid the older girl "i'm okay!" 
<KameShige>
Eri sighed " i can't believe they planned this!" she murmures 
Sayumi looked at the turtle then smirked "well at least you can make me laugh with your sillyness!" 
Eri pouted "i'm not silly!" she says crossing her arms
Sayumi smirked "yes,you are..that's why i like you!" she says blushing and looking other way 
Eri blinked a few times but then just closed her eyes and ignored the bunny "before start flirting,you really need to think.." 
Sayum pouted but then layed her head on Eri shoulder 
The girls soon end up sleeping
Aichan layed her head on Risa's shoulder,she opened her eyes slowly and looked at the older girl on her shoulder "Aichan.." she murmured 
Aichan got closer to Risa the enought to have her lips on Risa's neck "you smell so good.." she murmured while her hand positioned on Risa's thigh rubbing it 
Risa got red "Aichan.." she murmured and feels the same heat the she felt earlier 
Aichan started giving her wet kisses on her neck while her hand was getting closer to "her" 
Risa tried to stop Aichan's hand "I want you Risa!" she whispers on her ear then licks it
Risa was getting hard to breathe "not here.." she murmured 
Aichan stopped and looked at her "then let's go.." she says as she takes her hand ans guide her to bathroom 
*Risa saw that everyone was sleeping*
<In the bathroom>
EDITED!!  
 "Risa what's going on?" Ai asked all worried 
Risa looked around, she was shocked she was still on her seat and next to her was her sexy friend Aichan
Risa remebered evetything on her dream "why you keep stalking me in my dreams?" she wondered "i'm okay!" she answers and goes to the bathroom 
Ai looked at Risa walking to the bathroom "what's wrong with her?" she thought then got back to sleep
Risa came back after a few minutes and sitted,she could not sleep again,she didn't wanted to dream those things again "what if Aichan finds out that she's  having hot dreams with her? would she be mad or she would be.." Risa sigher and looked at the older girl sleeping 
Reina was pulling JunJun with "what if anybody wakes up?" the taller girl asks on her way to the bathrooom 
The shorter girl grinned "just a quicky,i'll promise i'll be quiet!" 
JunJun sighed "you're really noisy not that i don't like it but we're on the plane!"  
Reina smirked "that's why is better!" she says as she pushes JunJun inside of it
Risa blushed then sighed 
After JunRei's quicky  they landed to paradise!!!
A car was already waiting for them to take them to Reina's hotel 
~Once there~
They took three room obviously everything was planned by the JunRei couple who set the pairings for the room..
(AiGaki as always,JunRein of course and so not unnexpected KameShige)
Ai smirked "in ten minutes we'll go to the beach!" she says and drags Risa to their room 
The JunRei couple also went to their next to Aigaki's 
(Note: the guy who carries bags left with Reina because everyone knows she's the boss daughter!!) 
Sayumi sighed "Eri carry my bags!"she says as she walks to her room 
Eri pouted "what? i'm not carry your bags!" she says and walks after her 
Sayumi turned around "i'm depressed carry my bags!" she says with a cute 
Eri sighed "what did i got myself into?" she wondered and carried Sayumi's bag 
The KameShige couple entered to their room 
"Wow this place is amzing!" Eri says while Sayumi only throwed herself on bed 
(Everything inside the room was white it looked really cool) 
Eri looked around "just one bed.." she murmured 
Sayumi sitted on bed "you can sleep in that couch!" she says emotionless 
Eri pouted "why would i sleep in the couch?" she asked 
Sayumi got serious "Well i know all about your sticky hands and groping!" she says while crosses her arms
Eri laughed "Are you crazy?" she asked
Sayumi got up from bed and looked at Eri "You have sticky hands,you have groped my chest before so i don't think it might be good for us..going too fast!" 
Eri was open mouthed "when did i grope her? i would totally remember that!" she thought 
~Meanwhile~
Riho waited for her girlfriend a few blocks away from the school,she sighed in boringness till some arms wrapped her body from behind 
Riho smirked "Ayumi chan.." 
Ayumi smiles "did you miss me?" she asked while let go Riho 
Riho looked at her girlfriend then hugged her "of course i missed you a lot!" she says while takes her hand and starts walking 
Ayumi followed the younger girl "where are we going?" she asked 
Riho stopped walking "i don't know!" she says smiling 
Ayumi laughed for a bit "then what we should do?" she asked 
Riho sighed "maybe we can go to an arcade to play a little!" she says with a smile and excited
Ayumi pouted "So that's why you don't do your homework because you go to play to an Arcade!" 
Riho fell embarrased "not everyday! maybe we should do something else like.." she looks around if anyone was coming *luckily it looked like ghost town* 
Ayumi was confused 
Riho pushed her to an alley and kissed her passionately 
Ayumi's hands instictively were cupping Riho's cheeks while her hands were on Ayumi's waist to pull her even closer to her 
Soon the schoolers missed the air but still their forheads were connecting and their lips a few inches from eachother
Daishi licked her lips waiting for more,Riho took that as a sign and kissed her again with the same passion of their last kiss 
TO BE CONTINUED!! 
sorry of its short..the last time that i wrote a long chapter my hand hurt me A LOT..maybe because the way i was holding my ipod..(yes i use my ipod touch) it's just way more comfortable for me than the laptop
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.10
Post by: yellow on October 23, 2012, 02:31:19 PM
oh hoho... how kind of you to pm me the unedited part...  thanks alot :thumbsup
i think you can add that to the perv section  :grin: because i believe you will have more in future. so, i think you can like other authors' append those parts there... anyway, just a suggestion to you only :grin: hope you will consider :grin: :grin:


btw, it really feel quite strange without the action-packed part...

back to the topic:
reina, you are soo turned on whenever jun besides you... i wondered how jun has settled your hunger all these years....  :roll:
risa, stop dreaming that anymore... quickly find somewhere and push ai down to have that real session... i believe ai won't reject you for that. ;)
sayu is bullying eririn... i think eririn should just sneak onto the bed in the middle of the night and sleep besides her and grope the bunny with her sticky hands  XD or ended up it's the other way round  XD XD
for the two schooler, you two are advancing quite rapidly into your relationship  :lol:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.11
Post by: cmze on October 26, 2012, 04:08:12 AM
                      ~Don't judge by the covers~
                                         11

 The truth i can't write those things completely "I'm really sorry about that!" 
 
Takahashi Ai sitted on bed while waits for certain model to come out of the bathroom with swimsuit on 
Ai scratched the back of her head "why she's taking to long? i wanna see! i wanna see!" she thought 

Ai looked at her phone next to her "Maybe i.." she thought as she grabs it and gloogles "Niigaki Risa bikini!" 

soon she entered to a website where it was like "heaven Risa on bikini" 

"She looks so hot..." She thought grinning and scrolling more pictures of the young model 

Soon the door openned revealing a hot model in a white bikini 

Aichan looked at the younger girl stunned which cause Risa to blush 

Aichan shook her her head then got up also and went to the bathroom 

Risa looked around nervous "what if i can't control myself?stupid dreams! why we have to share the bed?" she thought while walks around the room 

"Maybe i should go with the girls already..yeah with people around i don't think i would be able to have those kinda hidden desires!" She thought then left the room 

~Everyone was at the reception already waiting for the AiGaki couple~

"where's Ai? i wanna see her in swimsuit!" The bunny says smiling while the turtle pouted 

JunJun and Reina smirked 

"She's on her way.." Risa replied ackwardly and stabbing the bunny on her mind 

"Risa.." somebody shouts while runs 

Risa sighed while everyone looks at the short haired girl running to them "why you didn't wait for me?" she shouts using her accent 

Everyone laughs like crazy

"she must be really mad.." Reina says betwewn laughs 

"Aichan is so cute when she talks like that while runs in bikini!" Sayumi says also laughing 

JunJun and Eri looked at their model friend who was looking down some sort of embarrased for something they don't know

"Okay this been funny but let's go!" Reina says walking ahead 

JunJun tried to put her arm around her girlfriend's neck but thos one moved fast and ignore the taller girl

"what was that?" JunJun wondered 

~At the beach~ 

Aichan,Eri and JunJun were playing with a ball while the other girls were laying on the sand catching the sun kind far from the girls with the ball

"Reina is acting weird!" JunJun says out of the blue 

Aichan tense up "why she had to bring that up? i wanted to get info about Risa!" she thought 

"Maybe you're paranoid" Eri replied 

"no smexy time in the hotel,no me groping her chest,no sex in small places!" JunJun says irritated

"we don't have long here!" Aichan replies

"you don't know Reina she's a sex maniac every second counts!" JunJun answers 

"JunJun can you put me bronzer?" Sayu shouted still laying face down on her towel 

JunJun frowned "you see if she weren't acting strange she kill Sayumi now!" she says while walks mad to the bunny 

"What are you doing?" Ai asked 

"playing.." Eri replies not so happy 

Aichan frowned "are you really going to let that girl rub your bunny?" 

Eri pouted "hey wait up!" she shouted and stopped the taller girl 

"What's wrong?" The taller girl asked 

Soon Eri took the bronzer and started massaging the bunny who was face down 

"That feels so good stiky hands.." Sayu murmures with a smile 

Eri blushes but keeps rubbing the bunny "how did she find out?" 

Next to Sayu was another girl nervous stealing glances at a short haired girl "this needs to stop!" she says as she gets up and runs to the water 

The two girls playing with the ball also entered to the water and stared playing 

JunJun got out of the water to pull her cat with her but she was sleeping with her glasses on and even snoring so JunJun layed next to her and kissed her softly on her forhead

The kameShige couple made an "aw!" then got up and went to the water 

After a good time in the beach the girls wanted to eat so they got back to the hotel changed their clothes and went to the restaurant on the hotel..

Soon as the girls were entering there was a couple smiling and holding hands 

Sayumi recognized the guy then walked to his table and threw her ring to him 

"Sayu!" The girl that was with him says 

"Mikitty!" Sayumi replies impress 

"Mikkity.." Aichan says 

Miki turns her head to look back "Aichan.." she murmured shocked 

Risa looked at Aichan "what's going on? why you look like you have seen a ghost?" She wondered 

Aichan run away 

Mikitty also gets up from her table "what's going on?" she asked mad 

"he proposed to me!" Sayumi shouts sad pointing him 

"Sayu.." Eri murmures and grabs her by her waist to drag her out 

Mikitty also took off her ring and throwed to him then left the restaurant running 

Reina looked other way "i'm not hungry anymore!" she murmured and walked away 

Eri was pulling the crying Sayumi with her "I'm worried about Ai!" the bunny whispered 

Eri stops walking "huh? why?" she asked 

"Mikitty used to date Ai on her highschools days and broke her heart" Sayumi answers 

Risa heard that so she rathered go and look for Ai to make sure she's okay 

~At the beach~

Aichan was sitting on the sand "why she had to appear now?" she wondered  

"you really love the beach!" Someone says and sits next to Aichan 

"What are you doing here Miki?" Aichan asked 

"i was celebrating my anniversary then Sayumi showed up and well here i am.. you cut your beatiful hair.It looks pretty anyway! Mikitty answers touching Aichan's hair 

Aichan gets up "don't.. you left me so leave me alone!" She says ready to leave but Miki also got up and grabbed Aichan by her wrist 

"Honey there you are!" Risa says with a smile while walks closer to them 

Miki let go her wrist frowning "Honey.." she murmures while Aichan was speechless looking at Risa 

"don't run away like that,you know i can't be without you!" Risa says smiling then putted her arms around her waist and gave a light sqeeze on her butt 

Aichan got back to earth "i'm sorry..honey!" she says grinning then gives a hard squeeze on Risa's butt 

Risa whimpered in pain and looked at the grinning Aichan 

Miki looked at the two girls "aren't you that model? i thought you were taller!" she says smirking 

Risa pouted 

it's perfect for me and for my hands!" Aichan replies smiling then gives a peck to Risa 

Risa blushed and looked other way "this girl is taking advantage of the situation!" she thought mad 

Aichan was grinning widely knowing what she was doing 

Miki's phone ringed,she saw the screen "i have to go,Aichan we'll see eachother again and if i were you i wouldn't leave her alone not even a sec!" she says looking at the two girls 

"be sure i won't!" Risa replies smiling and hugging Aichan tight 

Miki walked away and once she was out of sight 

Risa let go Aichan "why you pinch me that hard? it's gonna leave a mark!" she asked 

Aichan hugged Risa "Thank you" the older girl murmured on her ear with a smile 

Risa blushed and breaks their hug 

Aichan sighed and sitted again on the sand 

"what are you doing?" Risa asked 

"i like the beach.." The older one replied 

Risa sighed and sitted next to her "i guess i can't leave you here who knows if she'll come back?" 

"Risa chan do you remember when you said that i didn't know what it feels to be rejected?" Aichan asked with a smile 

"Yes,i do" Risa replied 

"well she was the one who rejected me,she was my first love" Aichan replied 

"is she stupid? why would she reject you?" Risa say it loud without noticing 

Aichan was shocked but then smiled "she left me for a man and she also said that i was a highschooler.it was wrong i guess!" 

Risa looked other way 

Aichan cupped Risa's cheek to make her turn "Risa i.." she murmured while slowly leans closer 

Risa didn't know what to do "am i dreaming?" she wondered while Ai's lips were on hers 

I'm such a tease.. go to the *the section* and read the other part remember that i have no expiriece on it.. 
so give me nice comments!! :D
http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34181.0 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34181.0)
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.11
Post by: yellow on October 26, 2012, 04:35:44 AM
thanks  :shy1: for the efforts  :grin:
i will try to give you one good comment later... and that one too  :D after my revision for my coming exams... :grin:
thanks again, i love you  :P
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.11
Post by: kuro808 on October 26, 2012, 05:59:23 AM
Sayu and her poison tongue :lol:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.7 Magic Brownies
Post by: yellow on October 26, 2012, 09:10:59 AM
first of all, i want to say... after reading this chapter, i want to take back my word on this part
... then both mikitty... ditched that trash for their girlfriends.
for mikitty's part... as that time, i thought if she would has a gf and it would be ayaya... but never expect to be aichan...

back to the topic...
to be frank, i like impatient ai.... she is cute when she is waiting impatiently and urging eagerly to see the model in bikini... and for the model :lol: :lol: :lol: be it what, no need to try escape or be sneaky about XD ... as people aichan really don't mind you to look at her in that way :rofl:

and another thing is that, i have never expect aichan to have history of having girlfriend in fic as i has always thought she was straight before she met the bean... but that somehow also explain why she reject the bean that time, which i have always wrong her for her decision to reject gaki that time...

for junrei, i wonder how long can the cat endure to hold back her desire in trying to be in control of herself in front of her parents  :hehehe:
for kameshige, i would say eririn should just the advantage of the situation and grope the bunny all she could...  :wahaha:

then, for the throw ring scene, i would say  :thumbsup  to throw rings at that trash but i feel that mikkitty can go one more step further...which is to give the jerk a good slap and splash drink on him before running to find ai  :nervous

and lastly, for this, i want to say one more time i love you, cmze  :heart: :heart: :heart: for letting aigaki to be together in such a situation...
and i really like the part on them acting as a couple in front of mikity and having a good squeeze of each other butt XD XD XD even though i still feel that violent ai should be gentle to the bean's buttock  XD and for risa, i would say she shouldn't have mind aichan to leave mark on her, as there is more to come, right  :lol: :lol: :lol:

moreover, please don't let mikitty stir their relationship too much...  :(

for the special part, i will give a separate one (that's my habit :P)

one last time here,   :luvluv2:  i love you cmze XD :P
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.11
Post by: maikeatoot on October 26, 2012, 09:17:31 AM
oh update!!!  :cow: :bow: yesh !! what happened to our beloved JunRei's smexy time??  :angry: :cry: :twisted:

 and that perv was..  :shy2: :sweat: :luvluv1: :nya: :stunned: :on bleed: wow having s*x on the beach was so  :imdead: well how about a round two at the hotel??????? hehehehehehe  don't pressure yourself to write perv things if you can't!! we're just waiting here  :ptam-aww: :onioncheer:


 And I love you  :ptam-kiss:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.11
Post by: yellow on October 26, 2012, 09:39:35 AM
well how about a round two at the hotel???????
maikeatoot, you are bad  XD
 :lol: :lol: :lol:
and i want to admit that beach scene is  :ptam-aww: :on bleed:

*EDIT*
btw, is there a spring in the resort ?! :glasses:
as you know, i am somehow expecting more groping from eririn on that somebody who is poison-tongued :hehehe::hehehe::hehehe:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.11
Post by: maikeatoot on October 26, 2012, 10:10:36 AM
 hohohoho  :bath: i second the motion !! hehe how about some Kameshige goodness there??  :on roll: :on speedy: :on kimbo: hehehe and rihoxdaishi too !! oh no ! they're still young  :banghead:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.11
Post by: yellow on October 26, 2012, 10:16:48 AM
hohohoho  :bath: i second the motion !! hehe how about some Kameshige goodness there??  :on roll: :on speedy: :on kimbo: hehehe and rihoxdaishi too !! oh no ! they're still young  :banghead:
:lol: maybe you should suggest  cmze to have riho sneak into daishi room again in the night or hide in one remote corner in the school after school and then make out XD (just kidding... they are really too young for that :P)
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.11
Post by: maikeatoot on October 26, 2012, 10:52:20 AM
yup yup yup !!!  :cow: still young for that  :bleed eyes: hehe just Kameshige goodness first !!! like .. Sayu initiate first !! oh what I am saying !!!  :cathappy:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.11
Post by: cmze on October 26, 2012, 11:12:37 AM
Do you want give me a heart attack?  :smhid

Writting that is kinda hard  :sweatdrop:

i'll do my best to give you KameShige anytime soon!  :thumbsup

but now i'm kinda drained!  :nervous

thanks for supporting my "that scene!".  :oops:

i was really nervous!  :doh:

so please wait for me a little "i'll write that scene in the right time!"  :peace:

hey i want a one shot Rika and Miki they're so cute can you pass me any link! please?
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.11
Post by: maikeatoot on October 26, 2012, 11:17:12 AM
 well we're the same ! writing 'that' is a bit  :shy2: :shy1: :sweat: i understand !!! you like miki and rika? eh? are you sure? hehe
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.11
Post by: cmze on October 26, 2012, 11:45:45 AM
Yeah it's funny how Mikitty is always bullying Rika..

Rika is so charming so she just answers with a smile! :)

Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.11
Post by: yellow on October 26, 2012, 11:59:45 AM
charmitty?! it is a rare one  :lol:
i think you can try your luck here @ http://renairev.livejournal.com/ (http://renairev.livejournal.com/)
it is a pretty old site, inside there got many random couplings...

**EDIT:
yup, just write that at the right time... and thanks again :)
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.11
Post by: maikeatoot on October 26, 2012, 12:03:54 PM
yup yup ! its rare u know ! hehe so bye for now i will write my fanfic.
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.11
Post by: cmze on October 26, 2012, 12:19:08 PM
Thanks.  :grin:

Yep it's werid but like i said they're just too funny whatever she says is just to bother Rika!!  :lol:

write me a good AiGaki scene! getting a little bossy here :nervous

I'll check the page tomorrow nkw i need some sleeping

bye  :nervous
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.11
Post by: yellow on October 26, 2012, 12:24:19 PM
yup... i admit the two are funny and quite interesting...
for me, if rika's coupling, i am more towards ishigoma :heart:... all thanks to the hello morning skit in the earliest days  XD
which i admit they are also quite a rare one like charmitty... :)
while for mikitty is yomiki :hee:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: cmze on October 30, 2012, 01:06:23 AM
http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?board=35.0 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?board=35.0)
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: yellow on October 30, 2012, 01:37:51 AM
http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?board=35.0 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?board=35.0)
you very bad leh  :(

here's the more direct link to your Chapter 12

http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34181.msg1112433#msg1112433 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34181.msg1112433#msg1112433)

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: cmze on October 30, 2012, 01:40:39 AM
Sorry i thought that i copy everything!  :grin:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: yellow on October 30, 2012, 01:46:54 AM
 :) never mind
i have copied the link for you. I am still reading the chapter  :thumbsup

btw, how's my oneshots that I have posted?
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: maikeatoot on October 30, 2012, 02:03:10 AM
 Kameshigeeeeeeeeeeeeee !  :luvluv2:  :on bleed: :on gay: that was  so  :imdead: now i can sleep peacefully  :sleep: :wriggly: more? more? junrei ??  :shifty: I love you !  :ptam-kiss:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: cmze on October 30, 2012, 02:13:45 AM
Yellow: they were cute!!  :cathappy:

but i comemnted on that thread..you should read it!  :grin:

Maikeatoot i still owe Yellow so you need to wait!:)
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: yellow on October 30, 2012, 02:14:14 AM
it is a good one... i want a hot scene like that too for my TakaGaki raburabu  :ptam-aww:

btw, are you better now?
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: yellow on October 30, 2012, 02:15:32 AM
Yellow: they were cute!!  :cathappy:

but i comemnted on that thread..you should read it!  :grin:

Maikeatoot i still owe Yellow so you need to wait!:)
i know i have read your comment... and sent you that access  :)
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: maikeatoot on October 30, 2012, 02:15:54 AM
 hoho sure i can wait !! i'm waiting for takagaki raburabu♥ too !!! aww cmze don't drink too much !!!
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: cmze on October 30, 2012, 02:26:13 AM
Damn those beers didn't do any good!

now i'm better don't now i'm just worried about new york and my family there! -_-

i'm watching the news with my fam.. my dad's there so worrting that won't b tonight!  :nervous
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: maikeatoot on October 30, 2012, 02:29:26 AM
 :glasses: i don't drink beers  :hiakhiakhiak: hehe i'm satisfied to drink in the middle of the streets with my friends  :cow: hoho oh what the heck !
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: cmze on October 30, 2012, 02:41:37 AM
Beers are good but not too much! :)

What kind od thing you drink?
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: maikeatoot on October 30, 2012, 02:49:32 AM
 lol the one cheap drink you only find here in Philippines !!! hehe  :cow:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: cmze on October 30, 2012, 03:16:20 AM
really here we got something called pirat and it cost $0.50 so is the cheapest thing ever!! :rofl:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: yellow on October 30, 2012, 03:22:25 AM
cmze, i have to apologise to you about the comment i have for your recent chapter...
it is really the little fussiness in me... i know you have put in your effort for it.
sorry :kneelbow: please don't get bothered about my typical unintentional sarcasm.
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: cmze on October 30, 2012, 03:34:00 AM
what? No Yellow i really love your comments!  :wub:

always so mature and fun so ever hold yourself back on commenting!! :cow:

i like that you challenge me to be write better!  :yossi:

so thanks for reading my fics!  :w00t:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: yellow on October 30, 2012, 03:48:34 AM
geez... i also want that challenge... why not for my every fiction in future... you also give that kind of comment i have given you :hehehe:
i also love challenge like you... you know :grin:


i want detailed comments on my fictions  :on blackhole: just kidding :P
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: cmze on October 30, 2012, 04:00:43 AM
I'll try but i'm not that smart  :catglare:

i'll do my best anyways!  :cow:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: yellow on October 30, 2012, 04:04:22 AM
I'll try but i'm not that smart  :catglare:

i'll do my best anyways!  :cow:
excuse me... i also not that smart too... you know  :nervous
just write me what you feel like i have done it :P
and you know, i am excited about it  XD :P
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: cmze on October 30, 2012, 04:11:11 AM
Haven't you notice?  :sweatdrop:

you're comments are like a smart college student while mine are like a dumb teenege girl!  :nervous

 :lol: :lol:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: maikeatoot on October 30, 2012, 04:15:10 AM
then how about my comments ?
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: yellow on October 30, 2012, 04:19:52 AM
Haven't you notice?  :sweatdrop:

you're comments are like a smart college student while mine are like a dumb teenege girl!  :nervous

 :lol: :lol:

nooo...
i just write what i feel... and excuse me, you must remember one fact, i am older here   :catglare::nervous
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: yellow on October 30, 2012, 04:20:51 AM
then how about my comments ?
who are you directing the question to...
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: maikeatoot on October 30, 2012, 04:23:08 AM
for the two of you .. you know im just 18 so im not sure if my comments sucks.
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: yellow on October 30, 2012, 04:25:01 AM
for the two of you .. you know im just 18 so im not sure if my comments sucks.
it's cool and cute, sometimes funny... but i will appreciate it more if it is more in-depth. :nervous
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: maikeatoot on October 30, 2012, 04:26:19 AM
in-depth?
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: yellow on October 30, 2012, 04:28:07 AM
in-depth?
like what you feel about it after reading the content... and maybe give me some suggestion like how i can better improve them for my future attempt.  :yep:

i believe as a writer, you would like those comments more than any... that's what i feel personally :)
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: maikeatoot on October 30, 2012, 04:30:14 AM
yah i understand now ! arigato :)))
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: yellow on October 30, 2012, 04:31:39 AM
yah i understand now ! arigato :)))
anyway, i still love your cute comments   :inlove::twothumbs :P2
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: maikeatoot on October 30, 2012, 04:33:31 AM
i also love your comments too !! hehe really appreciated it !
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: yellow on October 30, 2012, 04:37:51 AM
thanks :D
 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

so are you trying to give me one such comment in future?
you know i am excited about it  XD that will spur me to write  :nervous
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: maikeatoot on October 30, 2012, 04:39:11 AM
yup sure ! i'll do my best to give you a better comment =)
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: yellow on October 30, 2012, 04:41:15 AM
yup sure ! i'll do my best to give you a better comment =)

thanks  :cathappy:

mahal kita  :love:
i love you  :inlove:
wo ai ni  :heart:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: maikeatoot on October 30, 2012, 04:48:59 AM
wo ai ni ~~~ <3 !!
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: yellow on October 30, 2012, 04:55:53 AM
wo ai ni ~~~ <3 !!

:lol:
it kinda fun... i think next time, every comments i give you i will salute them these words of affection XD
------------------------------------------------------------
starting from this post:

mahal kita   :love:
i love you   :inlove:
wo ai ni   :heart:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: maikeatoot on October 30, 2012, 04:57:28 AM
oh yes please do that ! haha how do i say i love you too ? in your country?
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: yellow on October 30, 2012, 04:59:52 AM
oh yes please do that ! haha how do i say i love you too ? in your country?
in my mother tongue is

wo ye ai ni (i.e. i love you too)
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: maikeatoot on October 30, 2012, 05:01:41 AM
wo ye ai ni  <3 ~~~ yellow !! yay !
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: yellow on October 30, 2012, 05:04:25 AM
wo ye ai ni  <3 ~~~ yellow !! yay !
:lol:

maikeatoot, i think we just stop this for now...
later cmze come back and see all these mushy conversations of ours, she will faint off instantly on her bed... and then no more our rabu rabu on our favourites  :( just kidding :P

------------------------------
*EDIT*
aiya, i forget :P

mahal kita   :love:
i love you   :inlove:
wo ai ni   :heart:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: yellow on October 30, 2012, 05:06:34 AM
one question for cmze :grin:

btw, where are you from ?

yellow is curious, you know  XD
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: cmze on October 30, 2012, 05:20:05 AM
I also think your comments are cute Maikeatoot! :)

For my part i'll try to give better comments! :D
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: yellow on October 30, 2012, 05:23:25 AM
I also think your comments are cute Maikeatoot! :)

For my part i'll try to give better comments! :D
:kekeke: i am looking forward  :kekeke:

please don't give that a miss on my request
one question for cmze :grin:

btw, where are you from ?

yellow is curious, you know  XD
i want an answer :kekeke:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: cmze on October 30, 2012, 05:33:13 AM
Venezuela! :P

i didn't know you were asking!  :grin:

you guys?
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: yellow on October 30, 2012, 05:35:04 AM
i tho you know... me, sg... maikeatoot, ph  :cow:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: cmze on October 30, 2012, 05:37:05 AM
Ohh yeah philiphines my spelling is wrong?

Yellow where are you from?
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: maikeatoot on October 30, 2012, 05:45:43 AM
i came from the land of peace and loving people - Philippines !! :) XD
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: yellow on October 30, 2012, 05:46:00 AM
you go and google search that short form you will know :thumbsup

sg  XD
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: maikeatoot on October 30, 2012, 05:50:40 AM
Singapore ! don't make it hard oh her :))))) hohoho ! you know my friends told me that there are many beautiful girls in Venezuela.
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: yellow on October 30, 2012, 05:52:08 AM
hoho... now i know the reason of you (cmze) being mature at that age... :grin:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: maikeatoot on October 30, 2012, 05:55:21 AM
and in Singapore too !yay many pretty girls :) mou ~~ here in Ph ? im the cutes here :)))))
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: yellow on October 30, 2012, 05:58:28 AM
really... yups... thinking about that... yups  :thumbsup
philippines too  :grin:

wells, i think we should say everyone is beautiful and pretty globally (externally and internally)

----------------------
mahal kita   :love:
i love you   :inlove:
wo ai ni   :heart:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: maikeatoot on October 30, 2012, 06:00:31 AM
hehe you know one of the writer here ? Arisa ? shes from Ph too. and i saw her !!
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: yellow on October 30, 2012, 06:02:24 AM
really.. cool :thumbsup
i think we chat later... i'm hungry.. i go eat now XD
-------------------------------
mahal kita   :love:
i love you   :inlove:
wo ai ni   :heart:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: cmze on October 30, 2012, 08:01:31 AM
Yeah kinda like that but some of them are bitches (the way they act)  :nervous

so it's kinda annoying  :grin:

i rather MM!  :cow:

till i find someone i really like because MM is "platonic" :oops:

Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: yellow on October 30, 2012, 08:03:35 AM
Yeah kinda like that but some of them are bitches (the way they act)  :nervous

so it's kinda annoying  :grin:

i rather MM!  :cow:

till i find someone i really like because MM is "platonic" :oops:
hey i don't get your comments...

anyway, i have a poll in my ahem ahem thread... please kindly lay me your vote  XD
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: cmze on October 30, 2012, 08:09:23 AM
It's Maikeatoot because she said in Venezula there are cute girls...  :nervous
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: yellow on October 30, 2012, 08:12:50 AM
It's Maikeatoot because she said in Venezula there are cute girls...  :nervous
o ic...
anyway, some girls in singapore also not better...

btw you are not interested in my upcoming shot on TakaGaki rabu rabu?   :sweatdrop:
if you do, please give me the vote... :nervous
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: cmze on October 30, 2012, 08:41:10 AM
i already did! :)

pleade update soon!!  :otomerika:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: yellow on October 30, 2012, 08:49:02 AM
i know... i am getting a bit dizzy now... chatting with you from thread to thread...

yup, how you want me to do it so that you can forget about that crush of maikeatoot to resemble aichan  :nervous
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: cmze on October 30, 2012, 10:09:50 AM
I woke up to drink watee but i'm glad i ooened this

don't oreasure yourself do it as if flows on you..

i'll be happy just with the fact you're trying!  :cow:

really i'm not that hard to get!!  :grin:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
Post by: yellow on October 30, 2012, 10:16:49 AM
hahaha~ ok, i think i should go offline too for today  :P
(please look forward... i think i just do it what i intend to :thumbup)
good nite and sweet dreamz~ but please don't dream about the sinful scene that i have written :P anyways, just kidding
good nite and sweet dreamz~  :on roll: :mon wakey: :sleep:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.13
Post by: cmze on November 01, 2012, 04:17:25 AM
Chapter 13 xD Enjoy!

http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34181.0 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34181.0)
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.13
Post by: yellow on November 01, 2012, 04:20:08 AM
Chapter 13 xD Enjoy!

http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34181.0 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34181.0)
i take note of it  :P now i am sick so i don't think i want to read those stuffs and get myself heated up.
i will give the response some other time some other day when i am better and have read it  :P

fussy yellow's habit, the more direct link:
~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.13 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34181.msg1113535#msg1113535)
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.13
Post by: chichay12 on November 01, 2012, 04:28:07 AM
cmze i really enjoy reading ur smexy scene!!!hoho

 :on bleed: :on bleed: :on bleed:

 :imdead:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.13
Post by: maikeatoot on November 01, 2012, 04:29:42 AM
so many smexy scene ! oh i need tissue !
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.13
Post by: yellow on November 01, 2012, 04:41:23 AM
thanks cmze... yellow now is burned so have to go for cold shower now  :mon fire:
and i have to tell you are getting better than your past attempt  :thumbsup

i'm burned  :mon mad:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.14
Post by: cmze on November 04, 2012, 11:00:01 AM
                      ~Don't judge by the covers~
                                         14

sorry for being MIA just life got in the way! 

~A couple fighting in the hall~

"Because i know you been acting weird since we got here! there's something you're not telling me?" JunJun asks  

c'mon don't make a scene in the hall! Reina says looking at everyone that was staring at them 

you know what i'm going home! JunJun says as she turns around 

Reina was about to stop JunJun but someone grabbed her hand 

"Honey!" Reina's mom says happy

"mom! dad!" Reina says pretending to be excited

"Come here baby!" Her mom says as she hugs her 

"shit.. JunJun" She thought as she hugs her mom 

"Reina we have a big surprise for you!" Her dad says smiling 

"no, i hate surprises..I want JunJun!"  Reina thought

~Meanwhile~ 

Sayumi was staring at her girlfriend sleeping on bed "Kamei Eri is so hot!" she thought as she slowly removes the blanket that was covering her naked body 

Sayumi smirked till someone knocked her door and interrupt her 

Sayu covered again Eri's body with the blanket again and opened the door,she was sbout to yell the person that interupt her "sexy Eri time" but then when she saw the food she remembered that she ordered it 

Sayumi enters the food gives the guy his tip and closes the door 

Eri woke up cause the noise of the door 

Sayumi smirks "Good morning sexy Eri!" she says as she jumps on bed and hugs the shy girl 

Eri smiles and hugs the bunny back "Good morning cute bunny!" she says squeezing Sayu's butt  then gets up 

Sayu pouts "you turn me on and then off!" she says as she sits on bed

Eri smiles

~Meanwhile~

Ai and Risa were walking on the beach holding hands 

(Note: there wasn't many people in the beach)

From the distance for them...

They looked like boyfriend and girlfriend because Ai was wearing a not slips red shirt and some pants to her knee while Risa was  wearing a white dress 

"So you don't like me.." Aichan says 

Risa looked other way 

"then shouldn't be holding your hand and i should go back to Miki.." Aichan says as she let go Risa's hand and turns around 

"hey!" Risa says and grabs her by her shirt from behind 

"then say at least you like me.." Ai says pouting 

Risa sighed "Fine..*sigh again* i.. like.. you" she says in a low tone 

"i didn't hear you.." Aichan says teasing and tries to walk 

"i said it take it or leave it!" Risa says and let go Aichan's shirt causing her to slip with her face on the sand

"Aichan!" Risa says worried and grabs the girl 

"My face hurts.. why you let me go?" Aichan with her face with sand while she sits on the sand

Risa wanted to laugh but instead she was cleaning Aichan's face 

"Now kiss mee!!" Aichan says and pulls Risa for a kiss 

"stop Aichan!" Risa says laughing 

"i'm the sand kisser monster!" Aichan says playfully trying to kiss Risa 

Risa laughs even more "you're so silly Aichan!"  

Aichan kissed Risa on her lips

Risa broke the kiss "you taste like sand!" she says smiling 

~Meanwhile~ -Lunch time-

Riho waited for her girlfriend at the terrace but she didn't came during the whole lunch time 

She wondered why as she walks to her classroom but then a familiar voice called her attention 

"Don't worry i would tell my mom you're coming!"Ayumi says with a smile

"okay see you later!" The cute boy say with a smile then walked away 

*Ayumi sighed*

"who was that?why he's going to your home?" Riho asked kinda jealous.. okay jealous 

Ayumi turned around "Riho chan,he was Haruka kun and wants me to teach him maths!" she says as she takes Riho's hand who was pouting 

"You can come too, i know your maths aren't good too and that's great because i don't want to be alone with him and rather teach you than him! Ayumi says with smile 

fine i'll go to your home after school but i'm still mad because you didn't eat with me! Riho says as she walks to their classroom 

Ayumo sighed and followed her girlfriend 

~After school~

Ayumi got free first from her student council things so she waited for Riho who was on her cheerleader practice

Ayumi couldn't herlp to admire her girlfriend dancing skills "Her dancing is clean.. i guess i'm fan now" she thought

After a few minutes the practice was over,everyone went to shower 

Soon the two schoolers walked to Ayumi's home hand in hand 

(Once there)

Ayumi saw a note on the fridge..

*Went shopping!! your food is in the fridge love u mom!* 

Ayumi devided her food with Riho then both sitted on the couch while watching tv,She was feeding Riho till the knock on the door distracted them

Ayumi got up and  opened the door 

"hello there Ayumi chan!" Haruka says giving her chocolates 

Riho got up trying to not make obvious that she was pissed off 

"Oh Riho chan!" Haruka says with a smile 

Riho faked a smile while Ayumi invited him in 

"i didn't know you guys were friends.." Haruka says with a smile 

"well, we don't!" Ayumi answers fast

"she's teaching me mad because i asked her.." Riho says with a smile 

"oh so you also asked her.." Haruka says trying to not sound dissapoint he wanted to study with Ayumi only 

Ayumi took her books and by seeing the look on Riho and Haruka eyes she knew it would be a long afternoon

~Meanwhile At Tokyo~

At the coffee were Kamei Eri always drink..

JunJun sitted alone in a table and drinks her coffee sad "you haven't even call.. stupid cat!" she says as she looks a picture of her and Rena in halloween kissing 

"JunJun!" Someone says 

JunJun stopped looking at her phone "LinLin" she murmured looking at the chinesse girl 

TO BE CONTINUED!! 
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.14
Post by: maikeatoot on November 04, 2012, 11:26:34 AM
okay ! Junjun ! you know .. make your cat get jealous !! oh feels so excited to read the next chapter ! and cmze we missed you ! haha.
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.14
Post by: yellow on November 04, 2012, 01:51:20 PM
first of all, cmze... not only you MIA... I also have joined in this action :gmon ringu: :nervous

back about the fic:  :P2
how come i sense the possibility of JunLin  :huhuh ... anyway, Jun... you should know your girl after all these years together... :pimp:
for kameshige...  :lol: i really didn't know that sayu's button is secured on her buttock  XD
for aigaki,  :lol: still the continuation the bf and gf thing   :thumbsup ... and yuckz~ about the sand kiss... but i believe that kiss is flavoured with the some sweet flavouring for the bean so the taste would not be that bad after all?! :roll:

ok, i will go back down into my "submarine"now...  :byebye::mon dive: :on freeze: :hee: :pen_read:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.14
Post by: kuro808 on November 04, 2012, 06:13:09 PM
Interesting chapter with Reina and Jun
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.14
Post by: yellow on November 05, 2012, 02:42:32 AM
first of all, cmze... not only you MIA... I also have joined in this action :gmon ringu: :nervous

back about the fic:  :P2
how come i sense the possibility of JunLin  :huhuh ... anyway, Jun... you should know your girl after all these years together... :pimp:
for kameshige...  :lol: i really didn't know that sayu's button is secured on her buttock  XD
for aigaki,  :lol: still the continuation the bf and gf thing   :thumbsup ... and yuckz~ about the sand kiss... but i believe that kiss is flavoured with the some sweet flavouring for the bean so the taste would not be that bad after all?! :roll:

ok, i will go back down into my "submarine"now...  :byebye::mon dive: :on freeze: :hee: :pen_read:
i accidentally left out my comment for the the little ones previously :P
here it is:
i really like the part on ayuyu feeding riho... and the little war between riho and haruka in fighting for ayuyu... :lol: it's kinda fun XD
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.13
Post by: all6th on November 15, 2012, 02:27:00 AM
Chapter 13 xD Enjoy!

http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34181.0 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34181.0)

I read at your stories and this is great, I meant, I've never read Riho-Daishi pairing so it was interesting.. and I read all of chapter at once but I can't access pervy section so I can't read chapter 13 -___- btw, keep it work boss,  :jphip:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.15
Post by: cmze on November 15, 2012, 09:34:25 AM
                      ~Don't judge by the covers~
                                           15

Okay.. i need to get my inspiration back since i got sick it was hard for me to think about my Morning fanfics!! -_-

~On the beach~

"Aichan stop!" Risa says laughing 

"i can't my hands have life by their own!" Aichan replies as she keeps tickling the model who was rolling on the sand 

Risa got up but Aichan hugged her from behind "i give up Aichan,i.." 

"Wow this is so cute.." Someone interrupts Risa 

Aichan and Risa turned to look the owner of the voice "Miki" both says in unision 

"Hey girls!" Miki says with a smile 

"What she wants?" Risa murmured pouting 

Aichan faked a smile "Hello Miki!" she says 

"i came to invite you to my birthday party,i'll be celebrating it in this club!" Miki says as she hands a card 

Aichan takes it so Miki took advantage of the situation and grabbed Ai's hand 

"I'll be waiting for you!" Miki says with a charming smile then turns around and leaves the two love birds 

Risa walked away and Aichan followed her 

"Risa.." Aichan called but Risa kept walking 

"Risa.." Aichan called again but the model ignored her again 

"Risa!!" Aichan says serious and grabbed her by her arm 

Risa turns around "what?!?" she asked 

Aichan kissed her deeply while Risa tried to fight it but it was imposible Aichan was terrible good kisser 

Aichan breaks their kiss "Are you jealous?" she asked smirking 

Risa looked other way "No!" she replied coldly and walked away with Aichan smirking and following her 

~Meanwhile~ 

"Reina you need to understand that these are your duties!" Reina's mom says 

"what?!? i'm not,i have plenty things to do where i live and let me tell you that i'm moving here!" Reina replies full of energy 

"Honey think about it please!" Her dad says as he holds her hands 

"This is a family business so you can not back down you're our only child so this is all yours!" Her mom says as she looks at the Hotel's restaurant 

Reina sighed and got up from her seat "i need time!" she says as she walks away 

On her way on walking she pulled out her phone she was tempted to call her favorite chinese girl but she stopped cause she's still mad because she left,besides the chinese girl is the mouse so she needs to call first!" Reina thought then went to her room and layed on bed,she watched all the pictures that she has on her phone and in every single of them there's this pervert called JunJun 

Reina sighed again.. 

<At the coffee> 

LinLin is already sitting on JunJun's table..

"Yeah i also can't believe that living here in Japan!" LinLin says with a smile 

JunJun smiles "it's so weird sometimes i wanna go home running but then i remember Japan is not that bad!"

LinLin looked at JunJun "Japan or Reina?" she asked with a smile 

JunJun sighs after a few seconds her phone ringed,she looked at the screen "My cat" can be read 

"Pick up!" LinLin says 

JunJun pouted "No,i'm still mad!" she says and turns it off 

<Reina on her bed> 

Pick up! Pick up! <The number.. bla bla>

Reina looked at phone "she turned it off!" she shouted at her phone 

"Okay then i won't call again STUPID PERVERT!!! "she shouted mad

<Back to the coffee shop> 

"Seems like things with her are not good!" LinLin says a little sad 

JunJun looked other way "LinLin.." she says hesitating

"Yes.." LinLin says 

JunJun scratched her head "would you like to have a walk with me?" she asked 

LinLin smiles "Yeah why not?"

Soon the two girls payed the bill and walked,they took pictures of them then went to a restaurant,they chatted and laughed and their bound started to become stronger apart from the fact that both have many things in common 

<Reina in other hand sense that something is not right but she said she won't call JunJun>

<Meanwhile> Highschoolers :P 

The three highschooler were sitting Ayumi was in the middle..

"Riho chan did you get it?" Ayumi asked to Riho who has her chin on Ayumi's shoulder 

Riho sighed 

Haruka smirked "You didn't get it.. Again!" 

Riho got up "Maths are not my thing.. I'M A DANCER AND A SINGER I'M GOING TO BECOME AN IDOL!" she shouts with full energy 

Haruka laughed like crazy while Ayumi looked at her girlfriend with a sweet look and a smile 

Riho pouted "i'm serious!!" she says 

Haruka stopped laughing and looked at the soon to be idol "Really? you're too old for that!" he says smirking 

"What!?? i'm 16!" Riho shouts at him 

"You can't!" Haruka shouts back 

*This looked like some sort of anime scene where two people hate eachother and have lighting coming out of their eyes* 

Ayumi smiled ackwardly "guys calm down!" she says but it ignore by the two 

Soon Haruka's phone ringed *He picked up it was her mother telling him to go home to take care of his little brother because she has to go.." 

Haruka sighed then smiled "i have to go!" 

Riho looked other way "Finally!" she says coughing

Ayumi looked at Riho then walked her friend to the door with Riho 

 "bye Riho chan! *He says not so happy* Bye Ayumi chan take care!" He says with a smile then kisses Ayumi's forhead and closed the door 

 Ayumi looked at Riho who istanly was about to go out but Ayumi grabbed her in time "I'm going to kill then bury him on my backyard!!" the future idol shouts mad 

"Calm down Riho chan!" Ayumi shouted holding Riho

Riho looked at Ayumi "did you like it?" she asked mad

Ayumi pouted "of course not.." she replies fast 

"You did!" Riho retores mad

"what?!? no! i only like your kisses!" Ayumi shouted blushing 

Riho smiles but her smiled faded when Ayumi let her go so she fells on the floor 

"ouuch!" Riho says in pain 

Ayumi went to sit on the sofa then turned on the tv..

Riho jumped on the couch and rested her head on Ayumi's lap but Ayumi ignored her 

"what's wrong?" Riho asked 

"i'm mad!" Ayumi replies 

"ohh i can fix that!" Riho says as she sits and kisses the council president passionately 

Ayumi breaks the kiss "you can fix this by kissing me!" she replies 

Riho smirks "yes,i can!" she says as she plants another kiss on her girlfriend's lips 

Ayumi now was paralyzed,she broke the kiss again "okay you win!" she replies and kisses her girlfriend again 

TO BE CONTINUED!! 

Thanks for reading!! .. i would like to help u but i kinda don't remember how to get on that zone -_-
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.15
Post by: kuro808 on November 15, 2012, 09:42:32 AM
The constant Risa calling wasn't enough to get her attention quickly
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.15
Post by: yellow on November 15, 2012, 10:19:05 AM
wells... when Miki touch Ai i was like get your hands off her!!! She's belongs to our Mame-sama
and angry risa is cute  :P

junrei... jun, are you serious.... that your pet cat that you have always been pampering... you dare to ignore her... later when she's back she sure to get all even with you.

riho really have a way with daishi  XD

and cmze, for your last ending comment, i really do not know who you are replying so i think it is for your new reader, huh and it is about the access to the ahem section.
if so, this i can help as i just requested my access for my writing account not long ago.

@all6th:
please request your access here (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=1002.0)

(i bold it just hope she could see it :nervous)
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.16
Post by: cmze on January 04, 2013, 03:46:06 AM
                                                  Don't judge by the covers
                                                               CH.16

"Are you planning on going to her birthday ?" A kinda mad bean asked as she packs her things

Aichan tries to stop Risa from packing "stop packing!" the older of the two says

"i can't i have a important photoshoot tomorrow!" Risa says pouting

Aichan sighs "well then if you're not here there's no reason for me to stay!!" she says with a smile and gives a peck to her girlfriend

Risa smiled then putted her arms around Aichan "you're amazing!" she says having eye contact with the short haired girl

Aichan kisses Risa again but this time their kiss changed from playful to a passionate one

Soon both made their way to bed without breaking their kiss...

(MEANWHILE)

Reina was on her room laying on bed and looking at her phone "i'm not going to call you! i'm not going to call you! i'm not going to call you! DAMN I CAN'T RESIST IT ANYMORE I HAVE TO CALL THAT STUPID PANDA!" she shouts and dials her number on her phone

<beep…beep…beep…the number you…>

"Oh no way!stupid panda who you think you are to ignore me like that?"Reina shouts like a childish girl

Reina looked at the ceiling "the last thing i wanted to do is hurting you.." she murmured sad because she's missing JunJun

Reina sighed then got out of her room and walked around the hotel looking what could cheer her up

(then remembered that she has brought friends to this trip!)

Reina walked to Ai's room,she stood in front of the door for a moment before knocking

[Inside Ai smirked covered her red and sweat girlfriend's mouth]

"shhh don't do anything i forgot to put the sign of not disturb!" Ai says smirking while Risa was trying to catch her breath

"but it doesn't mean i going to stop so keep it quiet!" Aichan says smirking while Risa gets even more red and moved her head side to side

(Outside)

"It's looks like she's not here.." Reina murmured then walked to the next door and knocked luckily for her somebody opened the door

"Reina chan!" Sayumj says a little sleepy

"JunJun left me and she doesn't pick up, i think she just broke up with me because i didn't tell my parents what she meant to me!" Reina says sad then hugs Sayumi

Sayumi invites her in

"Look what i found Sayumin!" Eri shouts while she gets out of the bathroom in underwear and wearing boots

Sayumi covers Reina's eyes and Eri run inside the bathroom again

"Stupid turtle!" The bunny shouts uncovering Reina's eyes

Reina smiles "what a stupid couple!" she says

Sayu pouted then smiled and also Eri got out and smiled

<At Reina and JunJun's dept>

JunJun was watching tv then took her phone and saw all the missing calls that she has from Reina which was just one that made her even more mad

She searched on her contact list and accidentally calls LinLin

JunJun freaks out hangs up but after a few seconds LinLin calls back

"Hi LinLin!"

"Hi JunJun!"

" i was wondering if you were busy.."

"Actually JuJun i was about to walk around the park,do you wanna join?"

"yeah yeah totally!"

"Ok see u there!"

JunJun sighed

(MEANWHILE)

Riho and Ayumi went to a bakeshop after school..

Both girls order cheesecakes

Ayumi looked at Riho "Riho chan are you okay? you haven't been acting like yourself today!" she says worried

Riho smiled "it's just that i have something to tell you that's really important to me"

"what's going on? do you have fever?" Ayumi says worried and checks her girlfriend temperature by putting her hand on her forehead

Riho grabbed Ayumi's hand "i'm super ok don't worry and listen!"

Ayumi looked at Riho paying all her attention to her

Riho smiled "i auditioned to be a solo singer.." she says

"Riho chan!" Ayumi says blinking a few times

"They chose me over all those girls.. i'm going to become an idol!" Riho says excited waiting for Ayumi's reaction

"i... <confused> just..GREAT i'm happy for you!" Ayumin says faking a smile then hugs her girlfriend

"I'm so happy Ayumin!" Riho says smiling while hugs her girlfriend

"Me too" Ayumi says not so happy

TO BE CONTINUED
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.16
Post by: kuro808 on January 04, 2013, 07:06:33 PM
GJ Riho in getting picked :thumbup
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.16
Post by: maikeatoot on January 05, 2013, 05:35:47 AM
 ayumin !! ! why you not so happy ?! ah maybe because if she become an idol there will be so many pretty girls around her!!! hahaha !! and you junjun !!! WTF ??!!!
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.16
Post by: yellow on January 09, 2013, 01:45:32 AM
sorry friend,
for the time being i am not free so i cannot appear so often to comment but i am still reading whenever i am able to.

sorry to break such subtle new to you.

i am reading  :P
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.17
Post by: cmze on February 08, 2013, 02:09:47 AM
                                                  Don't judge by the covers
                                                               CH.17

"so did you try to call her?" Eri asked while her head is on Sayumi's lap

Reina pouted "of course i did.. she doesn't pick up" she says still pouting

"So avoiding huh?" Sayumi says looking up

Reina was still clueless and looking at her phone screen

The bunny girl looked at the yankee girl "maybe you should go back and have great make up sex like me and Eririn!" she says smirking

Reina sighed "why did i come to this room?" she wondered

Eri sitted "she's right JunJun loves sex!"

"i can't come back my parents want me to stay here and take care of the family business as the straight girl I'M NOT CAUSE JUNJUN!" Reina shouted the last part irritated

Someone opened the door and two girls entered to the room..

"Aichan!" Sayumi says happy

"what's upp!" Aichan says as she sits on the bed and makes Risa sit on her lap "Hi!" the model says awkwardly

"i told you they would end up together!" Ai says biting Risa's shoulder

"ouchh!" Risa let out

"Okay let's go to the important thing.. Where's JunJun?" Reina asks shaking Eri

"Easy girl let's call her!" Eri says a as she pulls out her phone

Calling JunJun:

Hi! (J)

JunJun how are you? (E)

Fine now i kinda busy! (J)

WHAT AREN'T YOU ALONE? (Tanaka Reina shouts)

Eri covers the phone "WTF? O_o"

was it Reina? (J)

Nooooo way it's Sayu (E)

Sayumi was covering Reina's mouth while Risa and Ai looks at them

You're not coming back? (E)

eeeeeh well i think i'm having a good time here.. (J)

Really? that cat misses you (E)

oh well i think now that we're separate,i'm seeing thing from a different side.. i'm not her friend or her sister and i don't wanna be that in front of strangers anymore so like i said now i'm different.. *JunJun let's go!*

(whoaa the helaaa is tha? <- Sayu still covering Reina's mouth)

i gotta go see you! (J)

"She hang up!" Eri says shocked

"Ouuuchh!" Sayu says

"Who the hell was that? who was calling my JunJun? why that girl had an accent like my JunJun?" Reina asked mad

"You didn't have to bite me!" Sayu says complaining

"I'm losing JunJun!" Reina says a little depressed

"where's the yankee?" Aichan asked seeing the depressed Reina

Eri and Sayu didn't know what to say, they just looked at eachother

"wait a second.. the accent.. LinLin!" Reina shouts

"who the hell is that?" Aichan asked

"I'm going to.. *Technically you can't because you're here with us and you won't leave your parents!* Eri interrupts Reina

Reina sighed "You're right!" she says and sits on bed

Risa got up "Are you really let that girl steal your girl?" she asked irritated

Reina just looked at her then answered "Then what should i do.. hey monmy daddy i can't take care of the family business cause JunJun turn me Gay!" she replied not so happy

"Do what your heart tell you too!" Risa says with a sigh

"RISA CHAN!" Aichan says with a smile and hugs her from behind

"Aichan not now!" Risa says trying to avoid the other girl from kissing her

Reina just looked at the two

~MEANWHILE~ AT SCHOOL

"Ayumi chan thanks for helping me with maths, i think i'm ready for the test today!" Haruka says with a smile in front of Ayumi

Ayumi was only looking at the clock becauss it was almost time to start

"Ayumi chan! Ayumi chan!" Haruka called several times and finally Ayumi landed on earth

"what's wrong?" She asked

"Forget nothing.." Haruka says and got back to his seat

Finally the person Ayumi was waiting entered to the room but she looked tired and sleepy

"Riho chan!" Ayumi got up fast and grabbed the other girl

Everyone watched the scene and started gossiping

"When did they became friends?" A girl murmured

"i never thought they get along" Another boy says

Haruka just looked how tender Ayumi was to Riho

"You don't look okay!" Ayumi says while makes Riho sit

"I had practice, my throat hurts!" Riho says

Ayumi sighed then sitted behind her

[Math test]

"Why nobody told me about this test!" Riho says complaining while the teacher puts the paper on her desk

"I sent you a text to remind you but i guess you were busy!" Ayumi whispered

Riho pouted

Soon everyone started writting and Riho was totally lost

[After an hour]

times up starts passing the test to the last student in the column

Ayumi's test:

Name: Sayashi Riho (Ayumi wrote on her page) then took Riho and change the names without Riho notice

The only one who noticed was Haruka who spend his all morning looking at the two girls

TO BE CONTINUED!!
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.17
Post by: yellow on February 08, 2013, 03:44:55 AM
reina should listen to risa and follow her heart and tell her parents straight that SHE IS NO LONGER STRAIGHT and CAN NO LONGER BE STRAIGHT ANYMORE

why aigaki feel so sex driven? :catglare:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.17
Post by: kuro808 on February 08, 2013, 04:06:37 AM
Reina should try to get jun back before she loses her forever

Posted by PWO fail artist

Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.17
Post by: maikeatoot on February 09, 2013, 04:44:10 AM
JunJun what are you doing !!! argh !!! okay Reina come to meeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ~~~
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.18
Post by: cmze on June 20, 2013, 02:01:12 PM
                                                  Don't judge by the covers
                                                               CH.18

Tanaka Reina walked around the lobby of her parents hotel in circles waiting for them.

"I'm going to do this, I love JunJun and I can't lose her to LinLin the most boring person I ever worked with, I mean JunJun loves our wild smexy time and LinLin doesn't seem the kind of person who's very active on it!" She thinks as she walks in circles.

"Reina.." Her dad says waking her up from her thoughts.

"Honey why are you doing that?" Her mother asks as she puts her arm on Reina's shoulder.

"Well I wanted to talk to you.." Reina says nervous.

Reina's dad and mom smile "We know that's why you invited us to eat.." they say smiling.

"Well I didn't invite you, you're paying anyways!" Reina replies carelessly

"Typical you!" Her mother says with a smile.

"Okay I can't take it anymore!" Reina says and takes a deep breath as her parents look at her.

"Mom, Dad JunJun turn me gay!" Reina she says moving her fist up and down at the same time then closed her eyes.

"Oh.. I guess as long you're happy" Reina's dad says confused.

Reina's mom was speechless "my baby, I guess as long you're happy!" She says showing her disappoint but taking it calmly.

"There's more.. family business I don't think I'm ready!" Reina says with a nervous smile.

"Well business it's not your thing I agree.." Reina's dad says calm

"Now I'm leaving since JunJun hates me and probably some Chinese girl is trying to take her away from me, take care mom and dad!" She says with a smile then kisses her dad and mom and runs away

~Meanwhile~ Kameshige~

"Now that Reina is leaving do you think we'll have to pay if we stay longer?" Sayu asked as she puts her clothes on as she gets out of bed.

Eri smiled "Well we have to enjoy what's left of time.. where are you going?" She says as she grabs Sayu by her waist and pull her in bed with her then puts the blanket on.

"Turtle you're getting more mischievous" Sayu says with a smirk.

"Don't you like that?" Kamei Eri asked with a smile on top of Sayu.

Sayu smirks "I love it!" She replies and kissed Eri on her lips.

~Takagaki~

"You're not forgetting anything Aichan?" Risa asks as she looks at her girlfriend.

Aichan smirks "Is the twentieth time you asked me that?" She says slightly smacking Risa on her head while they walk the hall of the rooms in the hotel.

Unfortunately they crossed paths with Miki.

Risa pouted  and looked other way, Aichan noticed and smiled awkwardly

"Are you guys leaving already?" Miki asked stopping the two girls.

"Yeah Risa has an important photo shoot tomorrow!" Aichan answers with a smile.

"C'mon Aichan, Risa can do well tomorrow.. You have to come to my party, don't you remember when you were in highschool and you sneaked around to... go out!"  Miki says with smile.

"It's getting late already!" Risa says bumping Miki and walking away.

Aichan sighed "Thanks Miki, that was nice!" She says and goes after Risa.

~inside the taxi~

"Nice you sneaked out to see her!" Risa says mad.

"What? That was a long time!" Aichan retored confused.

Risa looked through her window pouting.

"Risa chan stop acting like that.. *grabs her hand* *removes her hand* seriously you're going to act like that?" Aichan asked.

"I'm not acting any way!" Risa says still looking through her window.

Aichan crossed her arms "Fine!" She says kinda irritated.

~ JunReiLin~

Tanaka Reina knocked her dept door many times forgetting that she has the keys on her pocket.

"I'm coming!" JunJun shouts and opens the door.

"Hi!" Reina says all wet cause it was raining.

"Reina how you got here?" JunJun asked.

"No scale baby!" Reina replies as she grabs her suitcase and enters to the dept.

"It was the pizza?" LinLin asks coming out of the bathroom

"What?!" Reina says pointing at LinLin, JunJun fast grabbed her little girlfriend.

"Reina chan you're back!" LinLin says smiling.

Reina looked at the two "Wet hair, is not that my shirt?" She asked "YOU'RE DEAD LINLIN!" She shouting trying to break free from JunJun' s hold.

"What's wrong with her?" LinLin asked confused.

"If you think I hit my head when I was younger, she hit herself more!" JunJun replies carelessly.

"When I get you LinLin, I'll make you ramen then I'll eat you!" Reina says still trying to fight.

"Reina it was raining, so I invited her in and let her change her clothes.. there's nothing else going on!" JunJun says looking at her tiny cat.

"Really?" Reina asked stopping.

LinLin smiles "actually I have to go now!" She says as she grabs her things and leave.

"Now tell me what I want to hear!" JunJun says looking at Reina.

"I'm a sex addict!" Reina says sitting on the couch.

"Not that!" JunJun says and sits next to her.

Reina looked other way "Okay don't get used to me treating you nice , remember this moment cause won't happen again!" She says serious.

JunJun smiled "how childish you can be!" She thought.

Reina sighed "I love you so I told my parents what you meant to me and I missed so much that I decided to you know become a lesbian and do the whole package you know telling friends and family marry maybe have some kids and everything!"" She says nervous.

"Really? You want to marry me!" JunJun says shocked but happy.

"Well I love you very much and I don't wanna lose you again, it was terrible being without you, you're so fun and I'm so.. plain I NEED YOU we're the perfect mix!"Reina says showing her feelings

JunJun looked down "Reina.. can I tape this moment?" She asked looking at Reina crying.

"Don't be dramatic, I don't treat you that bad!" Reina exclaimed.

JunJun stuck her tongue out then hugged Reina "I love you too.. let's take things slow, I don't want my sex addict be tired cause she take care of our kids!" She says with a smile.

Reina smiled too.

TO BE CONTINUED!!
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.18
Post by: kuro808 on June 20, 2013, 06:14:21 PM
Reina confesses everything doesn't she XD

Had to remember what this story was about
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.18
Post by: maikeatoot on June 21, 2013, 02:00:50 PM
Omg you're back !!!
 Hihi ..

Omg Reina i knew youre gay haha !

And cmze i miss you <3 !

Where's AyuRiho ?!
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.18
Post by: cmze on June 21, 2013, 06:17:09 PM
Thinking about those two stroyline properly :grin:
Title: Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.18
Post by: yellow on June 23, 2013, 03:14:30 AM
long time no see, friend  :grin:
just pop up to comment  :grin: :grin:

wohoo...junrei has patched and is going to marry  :cow:
but aichan has some appeasing to do  :wth
and kameshige... you two really  XD but it kinda fun to see them like that  XD XD

miss you... please update more :P