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~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.18
« on: September 27, 2012, 04:04:14 AM »
                               ~Don't judge by the covers~
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Hello everyone this is my first time writting a Morning Musume fanfic because recently a became a super fan!!
My fanfic is Aigaki, Riho x Ayumi,JunJun and Reina and a little Eri and Sayumi.. hope you like it!

(3 Years ago) (In the classroom)
Gaki san are day dreaming again? A girl asks and smacks soflty Gaki's head
sorry Eri is just...*sighs* i can't help it! Risa answers smiling and blushing
Risa i don't want you to get hurt,she's not for you.. she's just a spoil girl who thinks she's better than anyone around just because she's pretty! Eri says a little irritated
i can't do anything my heart chose her! Risa answers looking through the window
*Cheerleaders practice*
There she is thinking of herself the bet thing in the world..i can't stand her! Eri says while looks the cheerleader's captain smiling
i think she's cute! Risa says blushing
so the new trend is watching Takahashi Ai? someone murmured
what?!? Eri and Risa said shocked in unision and looked at the person behind them
JunJun  you scared the hell out of me!! Eri shouted while Risa was staring the object of her affections
sorry! JunJun replies smirking
You're scary! Eri says and then sighs
That's Reina! JunJun says happy while pushes Eri aside and watches Reina dancing
here we go another girl in love! Eri says pouting whilw gets up
i'm not in love..i just think she's tiny but hot! JunJun replied smiling
~The cheerleaders's practice~
Look this little girl can really move! Sayumi says smiling while watches Riho dancing
she's really good! Ai says smiling
hey don't look but there's some weirdos looking at us on that window! Tanaka says pouting
what?Ai asked and then turned to look than also Sayumi turned to look
(Risa and Ai had eye contact)
"Is not that girl from China? and the other girl i haven't see her in my life.." Sayumi says smirking
i heard the China girl is a pervert and likes girls very much! Reina says feeling ackward
<They're looking at us! Risa says and hid while JunJun stood there watching Reina>
"i think i know that girl" Ai says serious
who is she? Reina asked
she's in my classroom! Ai replied a little annoyed
seems like you don't like her! Sayumi says
she's always weird, never speaks properly..she's weirdest person i ever met! Ai replied and got back to the practice
Reina and Sayumi stared eachother "are you thinking the same thing as me?" Reina asked
Sayumi answers "time to have fun?"
yep! Reina replied and got back to the practice
~Present~  (On set)
Risa look at me... That's great! oh god it's getting hot here! The photographer says while takes many pictures
*Risa changed hee position*
that's naughty! The photographer shouted happy
i'm tired can we take a break! Risa asked
ok..i think these are enough! The photographer says happy while looks the pictures
Risa chan.. You did it great! Her manager says smiling
thanks! Risa replies
you're a really beatiful girl! The manager says
Gaki san! Someone shouts
Eri? Gaki says impressed
so long without seeing you! Eri says smiling and hugs her friend tigly
what? You're a fashion model! Eri says shocked
well..it was accident but i'm glad! Gaki replies
now you're hot! Eri says while plays with Gaki's hair
You guys know eachother? The manager asks confused
yes,she's a highschool friend! Gaki replied
yeah we were really good friends but one day Gaki san got tired of us and changed school to a boarding one and we didn't saw her again till today..JunJun is going to be really happy! Eri replies smiling
it's not like that! Risa says smiling
ohh i'm glad you two know eachother because she's in charge of the marketing group! The manager says
ehhh Kamei Eri?!?! Gaki says shocked while Eri smiles at her
Sorry to interrupt but we have to get going the nest photoshoot for x magazine! an assistant says
i have to go to a meeting now but i'll pick you up once you're done with this! Eri says while walks away
yes,we need to catch up! Risa says smiling and waving
Risa soon changed her clothes to a swimsuit and waited for the photagrapher
I'm ready! Risa says with the towel on
oh no..he's not the photographer for this session! The manager says while looks around
then who is? Risa asked smiling
there she comes! The manager says
i'm sorry..i know it's a little late but traffic! The girl says smiling
Risa chan this is Takahashi Ai she will be the photographer for this session! the manager says
Risa smile fade away while Ai is smiling at her and offering her hand
Risa shook her hand and looked other way
You're really pretty! Ai says still holding Risa's hands
(Risa blushed but she was still looking other way)
well it's time to start! Ai says and grabs her camera while Risa took off the towel
Ai looked at Risa's body and then shook her head and started taking pictures 
Risa was so nervous that she couldn't even move or smile she was just staring Ai
there's something wrong? The manager asked
i'm not feeling good! Risa replied and asked for the towel
Ai looked at the model
i need to go! Risa says avoiding Ai's gaze and goes to her dressing room
~Once in her dressing room~
She looked herself in the mirror "You're really pretty" she says touching her face then a tear came out
"I hate you Takahashi Ai.." Gaki murmured but then got up and went to the set to finish her photoshoot
<Flashback> (3 years ago)
Who said that i like you? i don't even know you! Ai says looking to the crying girl
"but.." The girl was about to say something else but Ai' interupt her
Why in the hell i would date you? you don't attract me at all..all the fangirling got me sick i just can't stand it anymore.. GO AWAY! Ai shouted in front of everyone in the classroom
The girl run away crying
That was really fun! Tanaka says while laughs with Sayumi
<End of the flashback>
I guess with this we're done! Ai says smiling while Gaki takes the towel
Ai was about to talk to Gaki but she fast went to her dressing room
"This girl.." Ai murmured
~Meanwhile at certain school~
Sayashi san you're so cool! A girl says
Riho just smiled ackwardly while sits next to the window as always
i heard she's a really good dancer just like Aichan! Another girl murnures smirking
Riho soon started looking around "where are you?" she thought while looks around
Looking for somebody? Kanon asked while sits on the empty seat that was ahead Riho who pouted and then sighed "she's going to get mad!"  she thought
what's wrong Riho chan? Kanon asks smiling
"nothing.." Riho coldly answered
Soon the mood changed everyone was chilling but then everyone sitted correctly like if there was a teacher entering to the classroom
"You're late.." Riho murmured still looking other way
The girl stood up in front of Kanon
Can i help you Ishida san? Kanon asked with a smile
that's my seat! Ayumi replied looking bored
Riho smirked
I don't see your name written on it! Kanon replied and turned her head to talk to Riho who was nervously smiling and says "i don't think is a good idea make Ayumi mad so early!"
You two hate eachother why you put yourself on her side? Kanon asked
Look at her face and tell me she's not scary! Riho replied smiling nervous
~Kanon looked at Ayumi and felt shivers~
you right..i'm gonna move! Kanon says while slowly gets up and goes to other empty seat
Ayumi sighed and sitted like doll princess that she is
Hate eachother..Ha! Riho whispered and putted her arms on her desk then decided to take a nap
Ayumi heard Riho then smirked cause her statement and knew Riho was sleeping cause the sleepy girl's head touches her back
(3 Years ago)~ a 13 year old Riho and Ayumi~
                                       *Classroom*
Why they think they are better than us? just because they sit in the front and have good grades..doesn't mean a thing! Kanon says pouting
yes you're right..who they thing they are? Erina says
We can dance! Riho says hopeless looking at the three girls sitting ahead
yeah but teachers don't care about that! Erina says with a depressed aura
They just care about Ayumi Ishida,Misaki Sato and Haruna Likubo because they are the perfect girls..smart pretty and good at everything! Kanon says
we can dance! Riho says smiling
i heard Ayumi dances hip hop really well! Erina says looking at Riho who's smile fade away
you got to be kidding me? Riho asked
i don't know how that hearless girl can dance! Kanon says smiling
the three girl were staring at the top three students of their classroom and soon Riho was cought sleeping
Sayashi san! Sayashi san! the teacher says several times till Kanon kicked Riho's desk which cause her to wake up
what's going on? Riho shouted
*Everyone in the classroom laughed*
Why can you be more like Ayumi chan! The teacher says moving her head side to side
Riho apologized and sitted
hours passed fast and soon it was time to go home while for someothers was practice time
~Cheeleaders prectice~
You have to get better Riho! Takahashi Ai says
Yes.. Takahashi san! Riho says and keeps practicing with Kanon and Erina
Stay away from me weird girl! Tanaka Reina shouts while runs like hell
i can't i like you! A tall blackhaired girl shouts while runs after her
that's not that the Chinese girl? Ai asked
"yep." Sayumi says smirking
"weird.." Riho,Kanon and Erina says while looks hypnotized to the scene
there's something wrong! Sayumi says serious
yes..that's not cool! Ai says serious too
how can she stalk her instead of me i'm cuter! Sayumi says and goes to fallow the Chinese girl
i really thought she might say something smart! Ai murmured moving her head side to side
Soon the practice ended everyone went to the showers except for one person who stood in the court practicing
She was dancing free style but then she notice that someone was staring her
The girl blushed and looked other way "sorry..i was looking for.." *Ayumi do you dance hip hop?* Riho asked interrupting the girl
"yes.." Ayumi answered
i think i dance better than you! Riho says looking at her
mmm i don't think so! Ayumi replies
Riho danced a bit
Ayumi look at Riho and also danced then soon they were competing who does better moves
Riho slipped and her ankle hurts
Ayumi soon help the girl to get up and took her to the infirmary but for their bad luck there wasn't anyone around so Ayumi putted Riho in one bed then took menthol and bandages
what are you doing? Riho asked while Ayumi took off hee shoe and started using the menthol
Riho whimperd in pain
"sorry.." Ayumi says looking at Riho's eyes
Riho could saw Ayumi's tender side and then smirked and blushed
<That memory was saved in Riho's heart>
(End of the flashback)
Since that day Riho and Ayumi relantionship changed..
Riho waited for her everyday and walked home together without anyone noticed they didn't even need to talk they already know eachother
Everyone thinks that they hate eachother because Ayumi is too correct while Riho is too relaxed and don't pay attention in class beside she's the cheerleader captain while Ayumi is president of the school council they would never become friends..
but there was a question why if they hate eachother so much Riho always sit behind Ayumi or viceversa?
<Soon was luchtime>
everyone went to buy food while Riho skipped her friends and went to the school terrace..
Ayumi why always luch somewhere else?Haruna asked
well i wanna study alone! Ayumi says while grabs her bento and walks away from her friends,Ayumi went to the school terrace then openned the door and watched Riho looking to the sky "i love the sun!" she says smiling while Ayumi smirks and sits next to her
why you take so long? Riho asked while starts eating
you didn't have to wait for me! Ayumi says
ha..you get mad if i start eating without you! Riho says smirking
that's not truth! Ayumi says pouting
if somebody pays me for everytime you get mad at me because i didn't wait for you to eat..i would be rich right now! Riho says smiling
shut up! Ayumi says while eats then smirks
~ Meanwhile~
really..maybe other time,if you're busy right now it's fine Eri don't worry! Gaki says on the phone then hangs up
"Risa.." The manager called out
what's wrong? Risa asked
There was a water leak in your apartment! The manager says looking down
ehhhh why? Risa shouted
Aichan heard Risa and entered to her dressing room
what? happened? Ai asked
There was a water leak in her apartment! The manager says still looking down
that's bad! Aichan says
i don't like hotels! Risa says while sits with her depressed aura and pouting
huh..maybe mmm you can stay at my place is not compare to a model house but it's comfy! Ai says looking at Risa
that might be good! The manager says
no way! Risa shouts and gets up
Aichan looked other way
i can't bring you home with me accept Ai's idea! The manager says
Risa scratched her head
c'mon just a couple days! The manager says
Risa looked at Ai then sighed "fine..just a couple days!" she murmured
TO BE CONTINUED
« Last Edit: June 20, 2013, 02:00:51 PM by cmze »

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.1
« Reply #1 on: September 27, 2012, 04:17:42 AM »
Wow a new writer   :welcome

I luv ho w the story iz going so far XD keep it up

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.1
« Reply #2 on: September 27, 2012, 04:23:25 AM »
hello there ! i like the pairing! but please give us KameShige !!! mou~~~

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.1
« Reply #3 on: September 27, 2012, 05:19:46 AM »
sorry... forgot about them!  :nervous

Thank for liking!  :grin:

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.1
« Reply #4 on: September 27, 2012, 03:02:42 PM »
im here again e my friend ! hehe what happened 3 years ago?! give me all the details hahaha !! ang yay please KameShige ?! hoho i like it yeah !

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.1
« Reply #5 on: September 28, 2012, 06:04:44 AM »
Interesting start to the fic :thumbsup
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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.1
« Reply #6 on: September 28, 2012, 06:50:24 AM »
wow... another fic to read :grin:
please give me more detail about what the TanaShige have done 3 years ago that lead to Risa to misunderstand Ai...
and hope something fun and interesting will happened between AiGaki during Risa's stay in Ai's place  XD XD XD

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« Reply #7 on: September 28, 2012, 07:56:27 AM »
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Ai's dept was just for one person (One room,a small kitchen,a small living room and a bathroom but still comfortable and colored) 
There was only one bed which Ai totally offered to Risa but she rejected it ,she wanted to use the couch on Ai's living room 
*Both started to fight about it till Ai offered the idea of  both sleeping on the bed* 
Risa was shocked first but then agreed because it wasn't cool sleeping on the couch 
Soon both fell sleep on bed 
~The next day~
Niigaki Risa openned her eyes slowly,she could sense a rose scence coming from? her back? Risa turned head and saw Ai hugging her from behind "Ehhhh!" she shouted and fell off bed as the queen of reaction that she is!! pulling Ai with her 
Ai openned her eyes and saw Risa looking at her with a shocked face "is this the way you wake up everyday?"she asked rubbing her butt while Risa was still in shock staring at her after a few seconds she asked "Why did you hug me?" 
Ai sighed "well..you asked me to!" she replied while gets up 
Risa gets up also "are you insane? i will never do that!" she says shouting 
Ai scratches her head in confusion "Now that i think about it you said that you were cold so i hugged you and then you smirked and didn't wanna let go my arm that's why i was still hugging you!" 
Risa blushed couse Ai's statement of the facts so she blushed "Aaaarrrgggggghhh" she shouted and went to the bathroom fast while Ai stood there still more confuse than before 
~In the bathroom~  (Inner Gaki san)
(Why these things are happening to me now?i'm super model.. she doesn't mean anything!!! so why my heart is beating so fast? noooooo i got over you long while ago! GO AWAY! you're just an old crush I DON'T FEEL A THING ABOUT YOU!! those eyes,that smile,that face..is NOTHING!!)
Niigaki Risa put yourself together she's not good after what she did to you so calm down! Risa says to 
herlsef calmed 
<Flashback> (3 years ago)
The coach stand in front of the girls and say smiling "let's play dodgeball!" 
Everyone smiles except one person 
Tanaka Reina noticed and approached to her friend "C'mon Aichan don't be so down she'll come back!" she says and taps her friend shoulder while somebody else join to the duo 
"I too cute to play this kind of games!" Sayu says pouting 
Ai smirks
Reina looks at her airhead friend "if i hear her say she's cute one more time..i'm going to punch her!" 
*Sayumi pouted*
<In the other corner of the court>
Eri also looked at her sad friend "what are you watching?" she says pinching her arm 
Gaki san turned her head to look at her friend who's pinching her arm "stop..it looks like Aichan is sad,she's not smiling like always" she explained sad 
Eri pouted "now i see..if she's sad you're sad!" she says mocking at Risa 
"shut up!" Risa replied and went to play
Risa and Ai had opposites team while Sayumi and Eri were in the same team
Sayumi stays in the center "please everyone cover me because i'm really pretty to be punched!" she says smiling 
Everyone looked at Sayumi and pouted 
Eri looked at Sayumi "what?i'm cuter than you!" she says mad 
Sayumi pouted "i'm better look at me!" she says holding back her hair 
soon the game started and Sayumi got hitted but the ball 
Kamei Eri laughs "You're out!" she says mocking at
Sayumi who pouted and went to sit on the bench 
A few minutes passed and Eri was out also 
Sayumi laughed like crazy while Eri pouted and sitted next to her 
"There's nobody cuter than me!" Sayumi says looking at Eri who answered "Did you have to start with that? i already told you i'm cuter!" 
Sayumi got closer to Eri and looked at her in the eyes 
Eri got red for the sudden act "Sayumi was indeed cute but no more than her" She thought  
"You're cute also.." Sayumi says a few inches from Eri's face 
Nice catch Aichan! A bunch of fangirls shouts 
Sayumi and Eri turned to see the situation 
So..so..sorry! Gaki san says stuttering 
Aichan walked to her with the ball on her hands she looked at Gaki who was looking other way 
What's going on? A girl wondered 
Ai throwed the ball away "just like her.." she murmured and walked away 
where she's going? Everyone wondered while Risa watches Ai walking away 
Sayumi and Reina followed "hey wait up!" both shouts 
Ai stopped walking 
Sayumi and Reina looked at her  "what was that all about?" Reina asked 
Ai turned to look her friends "i just don't stand she's like.." she murmured and walked away 
 Sayumi wondered "like..who?"
Reina looked at Sayumi "well if she doesn't want to see her we can change that!"she says and then smirks 
~Outside the bathroom~ 
Ai looked to the bathroom door then shook her head "maybe i should do breakfast!" she thought and goes to the kitchen 
*Fast she prepared breakfast for both of then* 
Risa got out of the bathroom the smell of food brought her to the kitchen 
Ai looked at her and smiled "i prepared this for you please sit!" she says offering a chair next to her 
Risa gulped "i can't i have to work!" she replied coldly and walked to the room 
Ai looked other way sad 
~Meawhile at some school~
Somebody was getting over the edge looking to the door waiting for somebody else to cross it but of course just the one she wants to see 
Haruna and Misaki walked to their friend seat
 "Are you okay? Haruna asked while stands in front od her with Misaki 
Ayumi looked at her friends"yes,i'm okay" She replies coldly still trying to look the classroom door 
In a blink of an eye somebody opens the classroom door and then slips in front of everyone 
Riho chan what happened to you? Kanon asked 
Riho looked at everyone and started stuttering "tho..those girls ar..are Crazy!" she shouted 
Kanon scratched her head "what girls?" she asked 
then looked at Erina 
Ayumi was watching everything silence while everyone was whispering things like "is she crazy? i think she woke up with the wrong foot!" 
Riho took a deep breath "what's with their hormones when 13 i wasn't stalking anybody or trying to steal her clothes!" she says complaining and pouting 
oohh that means why your blazer? Erina says 
Ayumi got up 
everyone looked at her 
Riho pouted more "It wasn't my fault they were a lot and i'm not that good fighting!" 
Kanon laughed "You should be ashamed you're 16 and 13 years old girl took you down and stole your blazer!" 
Erina laughs also then everyone started laughing 
I'm an artist..i dance and sing not fighting! Riho says 
Ayumi was serious "get up let's get your blazer!" she says while walks to Riho 
No way i'm not coming back! Riho replies scared
Ayumi takes Riho by her ear and pulls her with her 
Everyone looked at them "do they really hate eachother?" Kanon wondered  
Ayumi chan it hurts..I'm an endangered species! Riho shouted while she's being dragged 
Once they walked the hall..
Riho points "Those are the girls!" she says 
Riho sama! The girls shout and jump on Riho 
Ayumi observe the whole situation then suddunly she felt anger for all those girls around ger Riho "Kids get off her!" She says while removes them and pushes them aside 
Riho sitted then took deep breaths "i thought i wasn't going to survive!" she says while tries to remove the lipstick that was on her cheeks 
Ayumi was looking at Riho she sighed and turned her look the kids "Give me back the blazer before i'll go to your classroom to talk to your teacher!" 
The three girls looked at Ayumi
 "you wouldn't do that!" The leader says 
Riho smirked nervously "you don't know her!"
Leader we should give her her blazer! One of the girls says feeling ackward 
The leader looked at her friends and finally decide to give in 
Riho and Ayumi started walking to their classroom..
"So cool you got back my blazer back!" Riho says smiling and hugs Ayumi who totally didn't move but blushed then looked another way to hide her red face
Once in the classroom 
The teacher scold them and pusnish them for getting late 
Ishida san i didn't expected from you! The teacher says moving his head side to side 
Ayumi looked down 
And you Sayashi san..huh i totally expect this from you! The teacher says 
Riho just stuck her tonge out cutely 
go back to your seats! The teacher says 
Hours passed fast..
*the bell ranged* 
You'll miss the practice couse this punishment! Erina says tapping Riho's back 
"sorry.." Riho replied 
then look our practice from the window! Kanon says smiling and pulling Erina with her 
Ok! Riho says while waves
Ayumi was already writting on the board "i won't miss classes again!" 
Riho watched the girl but then sighed and putted her head on her desk 
After a few minutes 
Ayumi turned around and saw Riho sleeping "i guess try to become an singer must be hard" she thought while her hand is touching softly Riho's cheek 
*Riho moved a little*
Ayumi panicked and relized what she was doing "why did i do that?" she wondered then turned to keep writting on the board
~Meanwhile~ (In a caffetery) 
Kamei Eri was drinking coffee while waits for her high school friends 
~Tv on~
"This is Sayumi Michishige reporting the weather for you today.." 
Eri looked at the tv hypnotized "you even fallowed me here!" she thought 
She's still cute isn't she? A voice says 
Eri turned around "Junjun.." 
JunJun sitted next to her friend "it seems like you still like her!" she says laughing 
Eri pouted " it's not truth!" she says and drinks her coffee nervous 
i always wondered what kind of relantionship you two had those days in high school? when i asked her she answered me ask Kamei..whatever you did she's still mad, i can tell! JunJun says smiling 
Eri scratched her head "Aaarghhhh i didn't do anything!" she shouted mad while gets up
JunJun looked at her friend "okay don't get too excited..maybe that was the problem that you didn't do anything!" 
Eri sitted "you think?" she asked looking around 
"I understand women trust me" JunJun says while reads a message on her phone 
Eri was in her own world "She liked me.." she murmured then smiled 
JunJun was mad texting "Arghhhhh Tanaka Reina don't you dare!! " she shouts 
what's wrong? Eri asked 
JunJun smirked " ha..she likes to play as cat but she always end up as the mouse with me!" she says proud of herself 
"Controling Reina must be hard!" Eri says 
"it's an art.."JunJun replies smiling while text 
Eri looked at her friend "i still don't get how you did it? Tanaka Reina your highschool crush now is your girlfriend" 
It took a lot of time and Love..A LOT LOVE! JunJuan says serious 
TO BE CONTINUED!! don't worry All the pairings are going to have a good scene in the next chapter..please wait!

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.2
« Reply #8 on: September 28, 2012, 08:37:36 AM »
good scene as in  :?
anyway, for jun, contolling the cat is no only an art but also a leisure (or maybe hobby) for life  XD XD XD
 :lol: the bean woke up in the monkey's embrace  :twothumbs (just hope this to happen again the subsequent mornings during her stay  XD)
what happen to the KameShige :?

and yay, looking forward for your next update soon :)

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.2
« Reply #9 on: September 28, 2012, 08:50:49 AM »
Please wait for me.. i have really good scenes for all the pairings xD

i'll tell you something.. JunJun,Gaki and Eri drinking "it's going be fun!"  :D

and also you might hear something of the real story line! :grin:

but you have to wait!  :shakeit:

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.2
« Reply #10 on: September 28, 2012, 09:06:41 AM »
ok i am waiting...
can't wait what interesting content will spurt out from them when they are drunk... best is something about the person of their interest... and it would be more brilliant if the person of their interest to have hear it... anyway, i am very forward looking to the fun thing to happen  XD

like you have mentioned in maikeatoot's thread, i also hope that you don't overwork yourself to think about the subsequent content :)

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.2
« Reply #11 on: September 28, 2012, 09:40:21 AM »
KameShige fan here !! go AiGaki !!! and JunRei i dont understand.?haha !

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.2
« Reply #12 on: September 28, 2012, 10:02:44 AM »
That JunRei part was extremely interesting
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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.2
« Reply #13 on: September 28, 2012, 11:39:02 AM »
hey me want JunRei ! i understands now !! yay ! reina is now Junjun's gf!! give us all the dirty details hahaha!

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.2
« Reply #14 on: September 28, 2012, 11:56:25 AM »
me +1 for the dirty details  XD

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.3
« Reply #15 on: October 01, 2012, 12:25:44 AM »
                         ~Don't judge by the covers~
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Riho woke up because she heard a door slamming,she saw her friend sleeping next to her "mmm Ayumi chan wake up!" she says softly while shakes the older girl 
Ayumi openned her eyes slowly "What's wrong?" she asks while she gets up 
Riho hugged Ayumi "I heard something!" she says hugging tighter to her friend
Ayumi got red isntanly "Stop being a coward!" she says and romoves Riho off her 
Both girls walked the hallway
Riho grabbed Ayumi's hand "School is scary and you don't let me hug you at least let me hold your hand!"
Ayumi kept walking and ignore everything Riho said a few minutes ago 
Riho was scared looking side to side "do you believe in ghost Ayumi chan?" she asked 
Ayumi looked at her friend "let's get out of here!" she says pulling Riho with her 
~Outside the school~
The two girls were walking..
Riho notice that Ayumi is still holding her hand,she smirked and kept walking behind her 
Ayumi stopped walking "i'm hungry..let's go get something to eat!" she says turning around 
Riho smirked " like a date!" she says teasing 
Ayumi who shook her head then turned around and started walking away followed by Riho who is still holding her hand 
Rihi kept smiling 
(After a few hours) <in a bar>
Risa entered to the bar then looked for her high school friends "Girls!!" she shouted once she found them in table in the corner 
 JunJuna and Eri looked at the girl "Gaki san!" both shouted and got up to hug their friend
The three girls sitted and ordered for beer 
Risa looked at the two girls "wow it's been so long!" she says smiling 
JunJun replies "Since you left us!"
Risa pouted "it was something that i had to do!" she says a little sad 
The waiter brought the beer to the girls table 
Eri started drinking "Why you always have to follow me?" she wondered and kept drinking 
JunJun looked at her glass "i feel like a man tonight..drinking and hanging with my pals!" she says smiling and then drinks 
Risa smiles "this is what i needed..it's been crazy lately!" she says smiling and then drinks it 
Eri laughs "what do you mean? you're a model!" 
JunJun looked at Risa "A model.." She asked
Risa pouted again "trust me it's been rough lately..my apartament had a water leak,Takahashi Ai is the photographer for my campain and i'm living with her now.. lucky me!" she says sarcastically and drinking more and more
JunJun was shocked "Takahashi Ai? My cat's best friend?" she murmured 
Risa looked at JunJun "who's your cat?" she asked 
Kamei Eri smiles like crazy "I forgot to tell you JunJun is dating Tanaka Reina since 3 years ago so she's the cat!" she says smiling like crazy 
Risa got up "Eeeeh!!! how that happened?" she asked shocked 
JunJun smiles ackwardly "that cat does whatever i want!" She says smiling 
<At the same time> (At's Reina's dept) 
Reina stopped cooking 
Ai lookeed at her friend and asked "what's wrong Reina chan?"
Reina turned to look Ai  "i feel like somebody is talking about me and it's lying!" 
Ai smirks "must be JunJun!" 
Reina pouts "No,she won't.. she knows who's the boss in this relantionship!" she replies then gets back to her cooking 
Sayumi was looking through the window "this is boring..cooking it's not my thing,Let's go out!" she says drawing on the window pain 
Reina stops cooking again and sighs "let's go out besides i don't think JunJun comes tonight!" 
Sayumi and Ai looked eachother then smirked and said "Yeah!"
<At the same time>  Drunk people's talk 
JunJun looked around "Why am i seeing double? she thought
Risa was pouting "how can *Hip* she be so damn charming? is she *hip* snaps her fingers she can have telling her that i loveeeeeee her!"  she says and drinks again 
Eri started crying "why i didn't do anything when i *hip* had the time?" she asked and drinks more 
JunJun cries also "All the shit that i had *hip* to go through to get Reina!" she says and drinks more 
<Flashback>  Valentine's day (3 years ago) 
Reina and Sayumi were buying chocolates "if we send this with Aichan's name to that girl,she might think that Aichan likes her so when she asks Aichan about it Aichan would deny it and she'll be so embarrased that she won't bother Aichan anymore"
Reina says smiling while picks the cake 
Sayumi looked at her friend "you're so smart Reina but why are you buying 2?" she asked smiling 
Rena got totally red "well the other is.." 
JunJun entered to the store,she saw the two girls and appreached to them 
Reina!" JunJun says smiling 
Sayumi pouted "how can be possible that you not stalk me instead of her? haven't you look at my face?" she asked to JunJun who smirked because Sayumi was hitting softly her shoulder 
Reina got serious "here you know what to do!" She says to Sayumi and gives the chocolate to her 
Sayumi left the store 
JunJun smiled "so you bought me chocolate!" 
Reina got mad "it's not for you stalker leave me alone!" she says while walks away 
JunJun sighed 
(At School) Half an hour later 
Eri and Gaki san were looking at the cake on that was Gaki san's desk 
Who send you a cake? Eri asked 
oh look a card! Gaki says while takes the paper 
"Sorry about yesterday.. Aichan" 
Gaki san got red then looked to Aichan empty seat 
Eri looked at her friend acting weird so she snatched the paper and read it 
what? she sent you this! Eri says shocked 
Gaki san was on heaven 
Soon someone else enteres to the classroom 
Gaki san got up but Eri stopped her "she doesn't seem happy..do it later!"
Aichan looked at the two strange girls and rolled her eyes then sitted till everyone started to arrive 
(At the pool) 
JunJun was following Reina who was standing watching a guy swimming 
JunJun hid behind the bleachers 
The guy get out of the pool and looked at Reina
"This is for you!" she says offering the chocolate 
The guy smirked "i knew you drool for me!" he says and grabs Reina by her wrist then kisses her roughly 
JunJun turned around and sighed till she heard Reina slap the guy 
Who you think you are? Reina shouted at him 
The guy takes Reina "huh so you like to play hard to get!" he says while tries to kiss her again 
JunJun touches the guy shoulder,he turned around and JunJun punched him on his face 
"stupid bitch!" He says while gets up 
JunJun pushes him to the pool but he dragged her with him 
Reina was shocked not knowing what to do "JunJun" she shouted 
Soon whistle can be heared 
The guy stopped fighting with JunJun and got out from the pool "You'll pay me back bitches!" he says while leaves running 
Reina jumps on the pool to help JunJun to get out 
JunJun layed on the floor 
Why? Are you carzy? Reina asks desperately then notice JunJun's swollen cheek 
JunJun smirks "it was fun!" 
Reina kneels next to JunJun and starts crying 
JunJun sits and looks at Reina "why are you crying? don't cry..you're too pretty for that!" She says while wipes Reina's Tears
Reina hugs JunJun "you're a pimp you flirt with every girl in the school! she says holding tigher on JunJun 
JunJun pouts "that not truth..i was just trying to make you jealous!"
Reina stops hugging and looks JunJun in the eyes "make me jealous?"  she murmured 
JunJun looks down "yes,i only like you..i was pretending to like them so you look at me!" 
Reina smirks "Stupid JunJun... look what has he done to your pretty face!" She says while cupped JunJun's face and with her thumb softly touches JunJun's cheek then she got closer to her, her face a few inches away from JunJun's  
JunJun can feel how her heart is going to come out of her chest 
Reina kissed her softly on the lips 
*Sparks* 
<PrESEnt> (Reina,Sayumi and Ai) 
Reina where are we going? Sayumi asks while walks behind her 
someplace! Reina replies while looks at the gps on her phone *Searching JunJun xD* 
Ai looked around "let's see that purse store!" She says smiling 
Reina looked at Ai "another time not tonight!" she says and drags Ai with her 
Soon the three girls get to the bar 
Reina looked at the door "so this is it!" she thought and then gets in followed by her 2 friends 
The three girls looked the place till something cought them eyes 
Cheers for a painful *hip* love! Risa shouts with her glass in the air then drinks 
Ai looked at the noisy girl "Risa.." she murmured 
"Cheers for being a coward *hip* and not do what i wanted!" Eri shouts Then drinks 
Sayumi looked at the girl "That voice..could it be?" 
Cheer for my *hip* i love my cat! JunJun shouts 
JunJun! Reina shouted and went to the girls 
Ai looked at Risa "what are you doing here?" she asked while sits next to her 
Eri looked at Sayumi "eehhhh the *hip* weather girl!" she says pointing at Sayumi 
JunJun slapped Eri's hand "it's rude *hip* pointing Eri!" she says while smiles 
Sayumi was shocked "Kamei Eri.." she murmured 
Reina shakes JunJun "great now you're drunk..let's go home!" She says while tries to help the girl get up 
JunJun looked at her girlfriend "i *hip* love you" she says hugging Reina who just blushed 
Risa was only smiling then putted her head on Ai's shoulder. Ai looked at her "a painful love" she murmured and removed a string of hair that was on Risa's face 
The waiter got closer "you can't go..you have to pay first!" he says and gives them the bill 
The three sober girls watched the bill "ehhhhh what the hell?" the three shouted 
The three girls sighed
 "we should pay now and tomorrow we can tell them to pay us..besides i don't want to look in Eri's purse!" Sayumi says in defeat
Ai looked at Risa "okay let's pay and take them home!" 
Reina looked at Risa " I think i saw her somewhere else!" she says pointing to Risa 
Ai laughed hard "of course she's a model,i work with her" she replied laughing while Risa is still on her shoulder 
Sayumi looked at Eri sleeping on the table "What about this girl?" 
Ai looked at Sayumi "i heard you saying her name so you take her home!" she says smiling 
Sayumi rolled her eyes "i don't want to she's arggghh" she says while helps Eri to get up 
The three girls payed the bill and soon took different ways..
(JunJun x Reina) At Reina's dept 
JunJun hugs Reina "i *hip* love yaaaaaa!" she says while kisses Reina all over her face 
Reina tries to avoid her "stop you're drunk!" she says pouting 
JunJun pouts "i just can't help it i'm in love!" she cutely to Reina
 Reina rise an eyebrown "you're not going to get me with that!"  she replies while puts JunJun on bed 
"Don't you *hip* love me anymore?" JunJun asks looking at her girlfriend in the eyes 
Reina sighed "I love you JunJun more than anything so please sleep!" she says while kisses her forhead
JunJun smiles "com here!" she says then pulls Reina next to her and hugs ger 
*Both soon fell sleep*
(Sayumi x Eri) 
Sayumi and Eri were walking trying to find a taxi "why i have to take you home... wait i second.. i don't know where you live!" Sayumi murmures then turns to look at Eri who's smiling to her 
why are you looking at me like that? Sayumi asked 
you got prettier but not more than me! Eri says smiling 
Sayumi pouts 
Eri laughs "i'm kidding now your *hip* prettier than anyone" she says while keeps walking with Sayumi
Sayumi blushes but looked other way 
Eri smirked "you know..there's something that i always wanted to do but i was a coward or afraid but not tonight!" 
Sayumi looked at Eri then Eri pushed her to an alley and kissed her passionately 
Sayumi was shocked first but then close her eyes and reponded the kiss with the same passion 
Soon Eri's hands were roaming Sayu's body and she was licking,kissing her neck 
Sayumi couldn't do anything about it..it feels so good and right!!  but reality hit Sayumi "i can't..i can't i'm 
engaged!" she murmured and pushed Eri off her 
Eri hitted slipped 
Sayumi helped Eri to get up..
Suddenly a taxi appeared and Sayumi helped Eri and took her to her dept 
<Sayu's Dept> 
Sayumi putted softly Eri on bed *Eri fell sleep in the taxi* 
Sayu looked at the sleepy girl and softly touched her face "Why you had to appear now? why not earlier? or why you didn't confess to me in our graduation?" she murmured then a tear come out,she turned her head and in front of her was a picture of her and her fiancee hugging then she looked at her ring "what am i going to do?" she murmured 
<Aigaki's situation> (in the elvator)
Risa was smiling like crazy and moving around "this is so fun!" 
Ai was only looking at her "i don't think you should move to much!" she says and grabs her hand cousing Risa to loose balance "ouch my butt!" she says complaining 
Ai helped her to get up "sorry!" she says with her around Risa's waist 
Risa putted her arm around Ai's neck then looked at her in the eyes "whatever i'm dizzy and i'm not going to fall for you anyway!" 
Ai blushed for distance between their faces then shook her head for Risa's words  "what?" 
The elavator doors open and they walked to their door 
Hang on a little more! Ai says while pulls out the key from her purse 
Both girls entered to the dept 
Ai guided Risa to bed 
Risa sitted on bed while Aichan took off her jacket and she knealed to take off her shoes but Risa moved her feet "Stop acting nice to me!" she says while gets up and gies to the kitchen leaving an open mouth Ai 
*Risa was trying to cook*
Ai looked at her "i'll cook for you!" she says and tries to make Risa sit 
i don't need *hip* your help! Risa replies
You're drunk you can't cook! Ai replied forcing with Risa and trying to get her sit 
Risa got tired "keep your kitchen *hip* i'm going to find somthing to eat out!" she says while walks  to the door loosi g her balance but somebody grabbed her hand 
Let me go!" Risa shouted forcing with Ai somehow Risa was strong and pushed Ai to the floor 
Risa relized what she did "Aichan.." she murmured 
Aichan sitted and started to  take deep breaths then she covered her eyes with her hands she was clearly crying and Risa felt bad about it,she sighed and leaned against the door then sitted and observe the girl crying 
Risa scratched her heard then crawled to her and outted her hands on Ai's hands to uncover her eyes 
Ai only looked to the floor with tears rolling her cheeks 
Risa wiped her tears "i'm sorry.." she says softly and puts her forhead on Ai's shoulder 
Ai hugged Risa who already fell sleep 
TO B CONTIUED...sorry i got busy!xD

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.3
« Reply #16 on: October 01, 2012, 01:28:44 AM »
hohoho y sayumi y ?! leave ur bf and be wid eri !!!!  aah ! NO !! and junrei was so cute yay !!! aigaki ? maybe aichan likes gaki .. please update soON!

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.3
« Reply #17 on: October 01, 2012, 03:15:07 AM »
(AiGaki)
i am starting to expect something more to happen during her stay in Ai's place (if every single day in her stay, some crazy thing to have happen between them...)   :heart: why not gaki just stay with the lovely for good  XD XD
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(KameShige)
please let something to have happen to let sayu used as an excuse to jilt her bf and be with the turtle... :halo:
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(JunRei)
jun is just so lucky, thanks to restless stalking on the cat in their school days... and really, the reason she is giving for her flirts is just way too "convincing"  :lol: :lol: :lol:
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(riho x ayumi)
for the two highschoolers, both are sooo cute when riho is so touchy with ayumi is just sooo apathetic over it XD

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.3
« Reply #18 on: October 01, 2012, 03:27:39 AM »
Thanks for reading..  :grin:

i just hope that Risa don't be so mean to Ai.. :sweatdrop: but still i think Ai's warm will get to Risa and bring the old Gaki san!

Hope Sayumi undertand that she loves Eri even thought she's turtle when is about expressing herself :rofl:

Hope nobody try to break my Cute couple JunRei!  :angry:

The highschoolers: Riho i think you should confess alrewady..  :wub:



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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.3
« Reply #19 on: October 01, 2012, 03:58:26 AM »
i just hope that Risa don't be so mean to Ai.. :sweatdrop: but still i think Ai's warm will get to Risa and bring the old Gaki san!
need not bring the old risa back  :lol: because i like the current risa... she is so cute when she is so... i believe ai will love her so just like this too  XD XD
plus, i really don't want her to be loss of word in front of aichan, which makes her feel so like a clown... and uninteresting to aichan...

Hope Sayumi undertand that she loves Eri even thought she's turtle when is about expressing herself :rofl:
i do admit the turtle is just so slow in her confession... but luckily she still have that chance to with the bunny just engaged and not married  XD XD and the bunny still have feeling for her  :grin:

Hope nobody try to break my Cute couple JunRei!  :angry:
you state so... are you intend to... junjun will cry if you do it.... :angry:

The highschoolers: Riho i think you should confess alrewady..  :wub:
hey hey... i agree with you too... riho should confess  :heart: but i hope in a more surprising way so that will be memorable to ayumi :wub:

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