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The Hello! Project Fanfics => H!P Fanfics => Library => Topic started by: almond on August 20, 2007, 12:38:36 PM
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Ok! I'm finally going to start posting the memoir (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=11667.0) sequel. I'm really not sure how long this is going to be. It does have an ending and all in my brain, but, well, fluff is fun to write and there's a lot of conflict before the ending, so I want happy YoMiki for a while at least :lol:
That being said, the prologue is a scene of the near-end conflict, so... JFC might be busting out that knife-behind-the-back guy pretty early in this thread.
The title is "100% Kataomoi" (100% One-Sided Love) which, again, future conflict, but I liked the title, so I'm keeping it. Like "memoir" really fit the last one anyway :P
EDIT: If you want to read all of memoir and 100% to date without wading through pages, check out my fic blog (http://almondfics.blogspot.com/).
So, without further ramblings~~! 100% Kataomoi
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PROLOGUE
Miki walked slowly back into my room.
"Did you catch her?" I asked. She shook her head.
"No, she was already in the car by the time I reached her."
I sighed. "I'm so sorry, I didn't mean for - "
"It's not your fault," she interrupted me. "I screwed up. You just happened to be there."
"Gee, thanks," I said dryly. She gave me a look.
"You know what I mean. Don't be all dramatic about it."
"You know what I mean, though!" I protested. "You came here to talk to me about my... feelings and - "
"I thought we weren't mentioning that again?" Miki cut me off. I stuck my tongue out at her. She returned the gesture and walked over to the window.
"Um, shouldn't you go after her?" I asked.
"Yeah, but I think she's really mad. I'm not sure what to say or do, so..." she trailed off.
"Just blame it on me," I suggested, coming up behind her and giving her a big hug. "Just say I'm the one who - "
"She saw," she interrupted again. "She knows I initiated it."
"Are you going to ever let me finish a sentence?" I grumbled, releasing her.
"I just did, didn't I?" Miki sighed and flicked her reflection in the glass. "Miki, you idiot."
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HA HA HA don't kill me.
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YAY!! First poster!
All I got to say is, it's going to be another wild ride! :)
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Yay!! Second poster!!
First thing I did when I saw a new fic by 'almond-sama', I skipped around my room, then went out to the kitchen, still skipping, saw my mum, skipping around her and doing the peace sign.. then go back to my room, stopped skipping, and read the fic.... (okay, basically i just want to show how happy i am with this sequel...)
Finished reading...
Who's that girl Miki talking too.... who is 'I'? Aya? Yossie? (couldn't be...) Was Yossie in the car??
Aha... so many question which lead me to..... I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Keep it coming....
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:w00t:
I think 'I' is Aya and Miki did something reeeeeeeeeally stupid which made Yossi angry.
But that's just what I think right now XD
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My guess. 'I' is Yossi. Miki and Yossi break off somewhere in-between the story, realized they still love each other, and try to get back together, but Miki's already attached to someone else (who drove off).
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Ok! I'm finally going to start posting the memoir sequel. I'm really not sure how long this is going to be. It does have an ending and all in my brain, but, well, fluff is fun to write and there's a lot of conflict before the ending, so I want happy YoMiki for a while at least :lol:
That being said, the prologue is a scene of the near-end conflict, so... JFC might be busting out that knife-behind-the-back guy pretty early in this thread.
Alls I has to say is, your "aka title" (Revenge of The Fluff) better deliver big time.
:shifty:
*reads PROLOGUE*
Oooooooooooooooooooooooooooh...mysterious way to start. The only confirmed character is Miki, leaving two others that are so far nameless. Question is, is THIS fic related (events-wise) to the first "Memoir" or is it a completely different thing (like how "Nakazawa's Cafeteria Adventures" is)?
Trying to hold off on speculating who stormed off and who's still in the room with Miki...... for now. :roll:
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YAY!! First poster!
All I got to say is, it's going to be another wild ride! :)
hahahahaha. You have no idea. XD
Yay!! Second poster!!
First thing I did when I saw a new fic by 'almond-sama', I skipped around my room, then went out to the kitchen, still skipping, saw my mum, skipping around her and doing the peace sign.. then go back to my room, stopped skipping, and read the fic.... (okay, basically i just want to show how happy i am with this sequel...)
That... is so freaking cute, it's almost painful.
Oh and the 'sama' thing is reminding me of that Miki-wota vid JFC posted in another thread. :lol:
Who's that girl Miki talking too.... who is 'I'? Aya? Yossie? (couldn't be...) Was Yossie in the car??
:wahaha:
:w00t:
I think 'I' is Aya and Miki did something reeeeeeeeeally stupid which made Yossi angry.
But that's just what I think right now XD
:wahaha:
My guess. 'I' is Yossi. Miki and Yossi break off somewhere in-between the story, realized they still love each other, and try to get back together, but Miki's already attached to someone else (who drove off).
:hiakhiakhiak:
Man, I love this. And the kicker is that I'm not explaining that part for quite some time... So you all can just keep speculating :heart: "Ah! Is that 'I'?" "Then who's the person in the car?" "Wait, what did Miki DO exactly!?"
Alls I has to say is, your "aka title" (Revenge of The Fluff) better deliver big time.
:shifty:
I will try my damndest. :mon thumb:
Oooooooooooooooooooooooooooh...mysterious way to start. The only confirmed character is Miki, leaving two others that are so far nameless. Question is, is THIS fic related (events-wise) to the first "Memoir" or is it a completely different thing (like how "Nakazawa's Cafeteria Adventures" is)?
This is directly related to "memoir". In fact, Part 1 (which I will be posting shortly, provided I don't go all :mon lovelaff: over the Gatas PV again and forget what I was doing) starts shortly after "memoir" ends. How shortly after is up to your imagination since I don't write those types of scenes ;)
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As promised, here's part 1!
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PART 1 - YOSHIZAWA - JUNE 1ST
It's hard being cool all of the time. That sounds really conceited, but it's true. Even though I know she probably doesn't care, I still try to keep my cool around Miki and not act too ridiculous.
So, I naturally waited until the door had shut and I heard the shower turn on before I threw myself on my freshly made bed and rolled around, giggling like a lunatic and tunelessly singing "Miki loooooves me." Sure, I was still a bit peeved about the entire Friday incident, but right then, I didn't care 'cause I had a drop-dead gorgeous girl with a body to die for naked in my shower and she was in love with me. ME! HA!
Wait, what the hell am I doing? I should join her!
A loud knock at the door interrupted my perverted intentions. I jumped up and smoothed down the covers to cover the tracks of my unbridled glee. As I walked to my front door, I heard the shower stop.
"Be right there!" I called loudly, hoping Miki would hear me. I opened the door. "Yes?"
"YOCCHAN! OH, THANK GOD!" Ayaka exclaimed, pushing past me and walking into my apartment.
"uh, hi?" I replied, shutting the door. "I didn't know you were back from Hawaii."
"Why haven't you returned my calls? Mai and I have been frantic!"
"Oh, yeah, sorry, my phone died. I can't find the charger," I replied sheepishly.
"So, buy a new one."
"I haven't really felt like leaving the house the past few days," I explained, glancing over Ayaka's shoulder to see Miki walking around my bedroom in a towel. Hot damn, I have never wanted to get rid of Ayaka so much in my life. "But, uh, I'm here and fine and all!"
"You don't have to pretend, Yocchan," Ayaka replied. "I heard about Fujimoto."
"Oh, but see, that's - "
"I was afraid something like this would happen!" she continued. "That girl is such a player, I knew it was just a matter of time before she broke your heart."
"Um," I said awkwardly as Miki walked up and leaned against the doorjam, smiling in amusement at Ayaka.
"I never thought she'd dump you for a guy, though! And making you find out from a tabloid!?" Ayaka continued, oblivious to the girl behind her. "What a bitch!"
"You're just pissed that I've made out with your two best friends and not you," Miki piped up. Ayaka visibly jumped and whirled around.
"Wha-what the? Fujimoto!?"
"Of course I could always rectify that situation," Miki said with a sly grin.
"Excuse me?" I said, raising an eyebrow. Miki flushed a little. ...man, that towel was small...and clingy... "Miki, go put clothes on," I sighed, looking away from the temptress.
"Wow. I've never heard you say that before!" she replied with a grin.
"MIKI!" Miki just cackled and sauntered into the bedroom, shutting the door behind her.
"Uh, what was that all about?"
"It's a really long story," I replied.
"I'll start," she said, sitting down on my couch. "Uh, Fujimoto cheated on you with some random guy - "
"That's not quite - "
"And now, I come here and she's half-naked in your bedroom."
"Ayaka, that's not quite right," I explained.
"Exactly. I was completely naked. There was just a towel in the way," Miki declared, walking back into the room.
"What are you wearing?" I asked, looking at her ensemble. She was decked out in my purple SEXY 8 BEAT concert shirt and some really baggy jeans. Miki started laughing.
"Check it out, I'm Reina!" She dropped down into the Yankii Squat, slightly crossed her eyes, and started rolling R's like there was no tomorrow. "Tch. The hell. I ain't no damn yankee. What are you lookin at? Bastard." I completely lost it. Ayaka looked from Yankee Miki to me in hysterical laughter and raised an eyebrow.
"Hitomi," Ayaka said in a perfect imitation of my mother's low scolding tone. I stopped laughing. Crap, she was pissed. My parents rarely pulled the first name card and that was only when they were really mad about something. Even Miki was startled and fell over backwards out of the Yankii Squat. I bit back a laugh.
"Sorry," I apologized, sitting down next to my best friend. "It's kind of complicated."
"Would you like me to leave?" Miki asked, looking back and forth between us.
"Uh, no, that's ok," Ayaka replied, looking surprised at the question directed at her. "But, uh, thank you for asking." Miki nodded and sat crosslegged on the floor in front of me. Her damp hair brushed against my legs as she leaned back against me.
"Well, um, first of all, Miki's not a bitch," I started.
"Yeah, I am," Miki interjected flatly .
"She plotted with Makoto," I continued, ignoring her. "And got herself Friday'd so they'd kick her out of Morning Musume."
"Come again?" Ayaka said, staring at me in shock. I laughed a little.
"Remember how I told you I thought there was something weird going on with my schedule and stuff?" Ayaka nodded. "Well, they apparently flat out told Miki that it was true."
"Oh my God! Are you serious?"
"Yeah. She kinda, uh, snapped and got herself kicked out."
"Don't leave out that whole madly in love with you part," Miki added helpfully. I flushed.
"Oh, yeah, I heard about that," Ayaka mused.
"What?" I asked.
"Miki announced to the entire cafeteria that she was in love with you the other day. Kei told me."
"You did what?!" I exclaimed, looking down at Miki. She was leaning back against me, her head slightly at an angle. Her eyes were closed and her lips were slightly parted.
"Oh, she's asleep!" Ayaka whispered.
"Like hell she is," I replied, nudging my girlfriend in the butt with my foot. "I don't fall for that anymore, remember?" Her peaceful face broke into a wicked grin.
"I told you about that," Miki protested, tilting her head backwards to look at me.
"When?"
"Yesterday."
"Before or after the screaming match?" I asked.
"Uh... after the screaming match, but before... um..." Miki glanced over at Ayaka. "...other things."
"Screaming match?" Ayaka repeated. "Uh, wait. Maybe I don't want to know."
"Some brilliant person decided the best way to let me in on the plan was to text message me a few hours before the story broke," I replied sarcastically, poking the back of Miki's head.
"Some brilliant person lost her damn phone charger and didn't think to call her own number to check her voice mail," Miki retorted, swatting my hand away.
"...You can DO that!?" I exclaimed. Miki and Ayaka groaned in unison.
"OH CRAP!" Miki exclaimed, jumping to her feet. "I need to call my neighbor so she'll let An-kun and Hima-chan out!" She ran into my room to get her cell phone. "If you need me, I'll be in here. I don't want to disturb your conversation, ok?" Miki shut my bedroom door behind her.
"Wow, she's in a good mood today," Ayaka commented.
"Huh? Not especially," I replied, feeling a bit confused. "This is normal."
"...Really?"
"Yeah." I started laughing. "Did you think she was always sarcastic and bored like on camera?"
"Uh, kinda," Ayaka admitted. I grinned.
"Wow, no wonder you don't like her."
"What?" my friend protested. "I never said I didn't - "
"Ayaka. How well do I know you?"
"Ok, fine, I don't really like her much," she admitted begrudgingly. "But, I know you're all love-love over her, so there must be something I don't see. Apparently, quite a bit, considering the stunt she just pulled for you." Ayaka looked over at me and smiled. "I'll give her a fresh start, ok?"
"Thanks," I said with a grin. My bedroom door opened. "All taken care of?" I asked. Miki nodded.
"I think she's starting to get annoyed with how much I ask her to do that, though," she sighed, staring off into space.
"You know, I really am sorry about not calling," I said to Ayaka, since Miki was in her own world. "I seriously have no idea where my stupid charger is and I was kind of - "
"Uh, Yocchan?" Miki piped up, her head tilted to one side as she stared at my entertainment center.
"What?"
"Isn't that your phone charger sitting on top of your DVDs?" Miki pointed at the low shelf in question. Ayaka started giggling.
"Uh..."
Miki walked over and triumphantly picked up the charger.
"Yoshiko, honestly..." Ayaka shook her head. Miki was staring at my DVD collection curiously.
"Hey!" Miki said suddenly. "Is that my Alo-Hello DVD?!"
"Oh, like you wouldn't buy mine if I had one," I retorted defensively.
"If you had one, I'd buy it just for the blackmail material," Ayaka laughed.
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Yep, we're gonna be jumping back and forth between narrators. So, yep, that means you get no early clue as to who the prologue narrator. :lol:
EDIT - fixed the term to "Yankii Squat". Thanks JFC :heart:
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I like how you portray the different sides of Yossi and Miki.
And I'm not gonna guess who is who from your prologue. I'll just watch it unfold in time to come~
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"Excuse me?" I said, raising an eyebrow. Miki flushed a little. ...man, that towel was small...and clingy... "Miki, go put clothes on," I sighed, looking away from the temptress.
Yossie rocks!!
"Check it out, I'm Reina!" She dropped down into the Yankee Crouch, slightly crossed her eyes, and started rolling R's like there was no tomorrow. "Tch. The hell. I ain't no damn yankee. What are you lookin at? Bastard." I completely lost it. Ayaka looked from Yankee Miki to me in hysterical laughter and raised an eyebrow.
Almond! You're crazy!!! :rofl:
That was the most un-imaginable thing Miki would do... Hella funny!!
"If you had one, I'd buy it just for the blackmail material," Ayaka laughed.
Who wouldn't thought of that? :lol:
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So, I naturally waited until the door had shut and I heard the shower turn on before I threw myself on my freshly made bed and rolled around, giggling like a lunatic and tunelessly singing "Miki loooooves me." Sure, I was still a bit peeved about the entire Friday incident, but right then, I didn't care 'cause I had a drop-dead gorgeous girl with a body to die for naked in my shower and she was in love with me. ME! HA!
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! Yossi singing "Miki looooooooooves me" is so CUTE!!! :mon lovelaff:
Wait, what the hell am I doing? I should join her!
Miki's probably thinking "Where the hell is she? I've been nekkid and wet in here all by myself for a good 10 minutes already!" :lol:
A loud knock at the door interrupted my perverted intentions.
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I opened the door. "Yes?"
"YOCCHAN! OH, THANK GOD!" Ayaka exclaimed, pushing past me and walking into my apartment.
"uh, hi?" I replied, shutting the door. "I didn't know you were back from Hawaii."
Ayaka? Well, she is one of Yossi's best friends, so it makes sense that she'd be concerned. She just got back from Hawaii? So then that means that she's only found out about everything just now.
"You don't have to pretend, Yocchan," Ayaka replied. "I heard about Fujimoto."
"Oh, but see, that's - "
"I was afraid something like this would happen!" she continued. "That girl is such a player, I knew it was just a matter of time before she broke your heart."
Ummm...this MIGHT be a good time to butt-in, Yossi. Don't want Ayaka to end up putting her "foot in her mouth" so to speak.
"I never thought she'd dump you for a guy, though! And making you find out from a tabloid!?" Ayaka continued, oblivious to the girl behind her. "What a bitch!"
"You're just pissed that I've made out with your two best friends and not you," Miki piped up. Ayaka visibly jumped and whirled around.
"Wha-what the? Fujimoto!?"
Nevermind. Too late. :P
"Of course I could always rectify that situation," Miki said with a sly grin.
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH! Yes please!
"Excuse me?" I said, raising an eyebrow. Miki flushed a little. ...man, that towel was small...and clingy... "Miki, go put clothes on," I sighed, looking away from the temptress.
"Wow. I've never heard you say that before!" she replied with a grin.
Fuck yeah...:twisted: ;D
"Uh, what was that all about?"
"It's a really long story," I replied.
"I'll start," she said, sitting down on my couch. "Uh, Fujimoto cheated on you with some random guy - "
"That's not quite - "
"And now, I come here and she's half-naked in your bedroom."
Actually, up until Ayaka knocked on the door Miki was fully nekkid. :jerk:
"Ayaka, that's not quite right," I explained.
"Exactly. I was completely naked. There was just a towel in the way," Miki declared, walking back into the room.
See? :grin:
"What are you wearing?" I asked, looking at her ensemble. She was decked out in my purple SEXY 8 BEAT concert shirt and some really baggy jeans. Miki started laughing.
"Check it out, I'm Reina!" She dropped down into the Yankee Crouch, slightly crossed her eyes, and started rolling R's like there was no tomorrow. "Tch. The hell. I ain't no damn yankee. What are you lookin at? Bastard." I completely lost it. Ayaka looked from Yankee Miki to me in hysterical laughter and raised an eyebrow.
Miki doing a Reina monomane!!! :on lol:
And it's "Yankii Squat", btw. :)
"Well, um, first of all, Miki's not a bitch," I started.
"Yeah, I am," Miki interjected flatly .
We still wub her though. :wub: After all, how can you NOT? :yep:
She kinda, uh, snapped and got herself kicked out."
"Don't leave out that whole madly in love with you part," Miki added helpfully. I flushed.
"Oh, yeah, I heard about that," Ayaka mused.
"What?" I asked.
"Miki announced to the entire cafeteria that she was in love with you the other day. Kei told me."
"You did what?!" I exclaimed, looking down at Miki.
So much for keeping it a secret, eh? O0
"I told you about that," Miki protested, tilting her head backwards to look at me.
...
"Before or after the screaming match?" I asked.
"Uh... after the screaming match, but before... um..." Miki glanced over at Ayaka. "...other things."
"Screaming match?" Ayaka repeated. "Uh, wait. Maybe I don't want to know."
Oh c'mon Ayaka, you know you do. :roll:
"Some brilliant person decided the best way to let me in on the plan was to text message me a few hours before the story broke," I replied sarcastically, poking the back of Miki's head.
"Some brilliant person lost her damn phone charger and didn't think to call her own number to check her voice mail," Miki retorted, swatting my hand away.
"...You can DO that!?" I exclaimed. Miki and Ayaka groaned in unison.
Poor Yossi! She could've saved herself so much grief! :rofl:
"Wow, she's in a good mood today," Ayaka commented.
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"Did you think she was always sarcastic and bored like on camera?"
"Uh, kinda," Ayaka admitted. I grinned.
"Wow, no wonder you don't like her."
"What?" my friend protested. "I never said I didn't - "
Huh? Oh, that's an interesting thing for Ayaka to say.
"You know, I really am sorry about not calling," I said to Ayaka, since Miki was in her own world. "I seriously have no idea where my stupid charger is and I was kind of - "
"Uh, Yocchan?" Miki piped up, her head tilted to one side as she stared at my entertainment center.
"What?"
"Isn't that your phone charger sitting on top of your DVDs?" Miki pointed at the low shelf in question. Ayaka started giggling.
"Uh..."
Miki walked over and triumphantly picked up the charger.
"Yoshiko, honestly..." Ayaka shook her head.
Oh, that's PWNAGE right there. Yossi majorly PWNED.
Miki = :mon determined:
Yossi = :mon sweat:
Ayaka = :mon lmao: (Ayaka must be used to Yossi's absent-mindedness like that.)
"Hey!" Miki said suddenly. "Is that my Alo-Hello DVD?!"
Awwwwwwwwwwwww... Yossi probably watches it when she misses Miki because their schedules prevent them from meeting up. :nya:
"Oh, like you wouldn't buy mine if I had one," I retorted defensively.
Miki would probably just keep re-watching the scenes that show Yossi in a bikini/swimsuit. :kekeke:
"If you had one, I'd buy it just for the blackmail material," Ayaka laughed.
Miki would likely do that too. :P
OH SHIT THIS MEANS MIKI AND AYAKA HAVE SOMETHING IN COMMON!!! THEY BOTH HAVE FUN TEASING YOSSI!!! :cool1: Man, if these two get along better and get on a roll Yossi could be in for such torture!
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Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaait a sec, it's not...who...with Miki?
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...is it? :?
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HA HA, I ALMOST COULDN'T FIND MY OWN FIC ON THE BOARD. I'M SO LAME.
Anyway, I decided I like updating in the evenings better 'cause then I have fun stuff to read in the morning, so I'm posting a new part now. YAY
I like how you portray the different sides of Yossi and Miki.
Yay! Thanks so much! Although, I think I keep writing Miki a bit too much like me and then I have to go back and Fujimoto-it-up. :sweat:
Almond! You're crazy!!! :rofl:
That was the most un-imaginable thing Miki would do... Hella funny!!
Yeeeeah, I was kinda wearing that outfit when I wrote that part (See earlier comment re: writing Miki) XD
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! Yossi singing "Miki looooooooooves me" is so CUTE!!! :mon lovelaff:
I KNOW!!! :lol:
Wait, what the hell am I doing? I should join her!
Miki's probably thinking "Where the hell is she? I've been nekkid and wet in here all by myself for a good 10 minutes already!" :lol:
What's sad is that manamin had to point out that Yossi'd probably be all "omg, me too" :err:
nd it's "Yankii Squat", btw. :)
Dammit! I knew Yankee Crouch didn't sound quite right, but I couldn't remember. :banghead: Oh well.
Miki would likely do that too. :P
OH SHIT THIS MEANS MIKI AND AYAKA HAVE SOMETHING IN COMMON!!! THEY BOTH HAVE FUN TEASING YOSSI!!! :cool1: Man, if these two get along better and get on a roll Yossi could be in for such torture!
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Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaait a sec, it's not...who...with Miki?
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...is it? :?
:wahaha:
Part 2 coming up in a bit
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This has a very particular timeline because I'm tying in current events, so I'm actually saying how much later the parts are.
For instance, part 2 takes place 1 day after part 1. Hence the "ONE DAY LATER".
...yes, well. :sweat:
EDIT - I changed my mind and decided to put the actual dates in there since I, um... have an actual timeline with dates on it for this piece of joy. :lol:
Here we go!
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PART 2 - YOSHIZAWA - JUNE 2ND
"You have 97 new messages. First message."
BEEP.
"Hey, sexy, it's me. I hadn't heard from you yet, so I thought I'd call you first. I guess you probably have some sort of cast after-party or something, huh? Call me, ok?"
BEEP.
"Ok, I'm about to go to bed, but seriously don't worry about the time. Just call me as soon as you can."
BEEP.
"Ok, I thought I heard the phone, but I guess not. Call me?"
BEEP.
"Hiii.... me again.... I, um, I guess you're busy? Or maybe just really mad. I'm... Just call me, ok?"
BEEP.
"I guess you're not there."
BEEP.
"Yeah, it's me again. I know you're pissed and all, but dammit, Yoshizawa, have some freaking manners and return my phone calls!"
BEEP.
"dammit."
BEEP.
"Yossi, come on! This is ridiculous! What are you, five?! Answer the Goddamn phone! ARGH!"
BEEP.
"Hiiii! It's your favorite Makoto! Yes, I'm racking up my long distance bill leaving you a message. Hope you're not too pissed off at Miki. You know she's totally in love with you, right? Yeah... ...what? ....now? ....ok. Ok, I apparently have to go. Talk to you soon! Byeeee!"
BEEP.
"FINE! You won't call me, then listen! I know you're pissed and I'm sorry about that, but I had to do it, ok?! We're only a small part of this pile of bullshit. Someone had to tell them they can't get away with this anymore. ...DAMMIT! ANSWER YOUR PHONE!"
BEEP.
"Yossi..."
BEEP.
"shit."
BEEP.
"Yoshizawa? It's Takahashi. I, um... Please don't tell Fujimoto that I called you. I just wanted you to know that she did talk to Gaki and I beforehand and we're fine with this. I know you're probably worried about the group, but I can handle it. I... I just wanted you to know that. If you need anything, give me a call, ok? Talk to you later."
BEEP.
"Oh, you've got to be kidding me."
BEEP.
"Are we over now, Yoshizawa? Is that what this is all about!? Do you not have the balls to even tell me?! Ugh. whatever. jackass."
BEEP.
"Dammit, aren't you OFF today?! Answer the damn phone!"
BEEP.
"I'm sorry. I just... I can't stand this silent treatment. I knew you'd be mad, but... Please, please call me back."
BEEP.
"...."
BEEP.
"DAMMIT! I'm freaking in l-.... I'm in... I... ARGH! Goddammit, call me."
BEEP.
"Yocchan? It's Maki. What the hell is going on?! You two better have at least broken up before this happened or I'll kill her myself. Call me back."
BEEP.
"OH! By the way! They all think I've cheated on you now! Yeah. That just pisses me off. Thought you should know."
BEEP.
"Yocchan, even if you're just going to scream at me, call me back. I need to hear your voice again."
BEEP.
"...please don't do this."
I couldn't take it anymore. I slammed my phone shut and stared at it in my hand for a moment. I glanced at my watch. 7:15 pm. I might make it if I ran.
I grabbed my keys and took off out the front door.
I sat down and leaned against the door, closing my eyes for a moment.
"...and thank goodness I noticed before I went on stage!"
"Are you kidding!? The perfect idol onstage with her outfit on backwards? I would pay to see that!"
"Really? How much money are we talking here? 'Cause I could.... Yoshizawa?" I opened my eyes and looked over at the confused Matsuura Aya before me.
"Is - " The question died on my lips as Miki peeked around her friend.
"Yocchan? What are you doing here?" she asked, walking over to me.
"I got your messages," I replied, standing up. I cupped her confused face in my hands. "The ones from when I couldn't get my phone."
"...oh," Miki replied in an embarrassed voice, looking down.
"I am so sorry," I said quietly.
"It's not your fault! Well, it is your fault for losing your charger - I mean, honestly, it was in plain sight - but, you - " I pulled my rambling girlfriend towards me and pressed my lips against hers.
"GEEZ! YOU'RE IN THE HALLWAY!" Aya exclaimed behind me, but I really was beyond caring. And apparently so was Miki, judging from how she entangled her fingers in my hair and deepened the kiss. I wrapped my arms tightly around her waist, pressing our bodies together.
Suddenly, the door I was leaning on opened and we fell into the dark hotel room. I glanced up as the hotel room key landed next to my head.
"Damn, get a room," Aya mock-complained. She met my eye and grinned.
"Thanks!" I called as she shut the door. Miki was sprawled on top of me, blinking. "You ok?" I asked.
"I'm just in shock."
"I'm sorry, I just... when I heard your voice on those messages, I had to see you." I reached up and gently touched her cheek.
"Considering the concert venue is two and a half hours away by train, you showing up after it was quite a surprise, but that's not what I mean."
"What is it, then?"
"I'm finally not the one getting landed on when we fall over!"
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"You have 97 new messages. First message."
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeh? :dizzy:
/me reads "the messages".
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Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah...Yossi finally charged up her phone. :yep:
I couldn't take it anymore. I slammed my phone shut and stared at it in my hand for a moment. I glanced at my watch. 7:15 pm. I might make it if I ran.
I grabbed my keys and took off out the front door.
Eh? Where's Yossi going? :?
I sat down and leaned against the door, closing my eyes for a moment.
"...and thank goodness I noticed before I went on stage!"
"Are you kidding!? The perfect idol onstage with her outfit on backwards? I would pay to see that!"
"Perfect idol"? Could be Aya, I guess, if it's someone that Yossi knows. If so, LOL at her almost going on stage with her costume on backwards. I mean...how is she NOT supposed to notice that the....um....."front" part of her top is...um...."roomier" behind her than in front of her? :sweat:
On another note, I'd pay to see it too. :lol:
"Really? How much money are we talking here? 'Cause I could.... Yoshizawa?" I opened my eyes and looked over at the confused Matsuura Aya before me.
Ah, so it IS Aya that we're talking about. Sounds like she's trying to hatch some deal here. :P
"Is - " The question died on my lips as Miki peeked around her friend.
"Yocchan? What are you doing here?" she asked, walking over to me.
Yossi came to see Miki??? :mon cute: AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
"I got your messages," I replied, standing up. I cupped her confused face in my hands. "The ones from when I couldn't get my phone."
"...oh," Miki replied in an embarrassed voice, looking down.
"I am so sorry," I said quietly.
"It's not your fault! Well, it is your fault for losing your charger - I mean, honestly, it was in plain sight - but, you - " I pulled my rambling girlfriend towards me and pressed my lips against hers.
Yossi knows the best ways to shut Miki up. :wub: :nya:
"GEEZ! YOU'RE IN THE HALLWAY!" Aya exclaimed behind me, but I really was beyond caring. And apparently so was Miki, judging from how she entangled her fingers in my hair and deepened the kiss. I wrapped my arms tightly around her waist, pressing our bodies together.
Rabu-rabu desu! :luvluv1:
Suddenly, the door I was leaning on opened and we fell into the dark hotel room. I glanced up as the hotel room key landed next to my head.
"Damn, get a room," Aya mock-complained. She met my eye and grinned.
"Thanks!" I called as she shut the door.
Awwwwwww, that was awfully nice of Aya to give the wuvbirds her room. :oops:
She can probably afford to get another one for herself anyway. :hee:
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Might be kind of awkward though the next day if Aya has to go back there to get her luggage and stuff that's still in there. :roll:
Miki was sprawled on top of me, blinking. "You ok?" I asked.
"I'm just in shock."
"I'm sorry, I just... when I heard your voice on those messages, I had to see you." I reached up and gently touched her cheek.
"Considering the concert venue is two and a half hours away by train, you showing up after it was quite a surprise
It WAS damn romantic of Yossi to come all this way to see Miki. :wriggly:
but that's not what I mean."
Wait, it's not? :dunno:
"What is it, then?"
"I'm finally not the one getting landed on when we fall over!"
OMGASS SHE'S RIGHT! :on lol: MIKI'S ON TOP!!! :rockon:
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N n nnn Nandesuka?!?
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So they got a room?? Hmm... i kinda like the next chapter?? Haha...
Anyway, that is so sweet of Yossie to go and find Miki... I was too emotional as I read the message though.... Yossie did a right thing....
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"You have 97 new messages. First message."
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeh? :dizzy:
Yeah, originally I was going to write them all, then I was like "yeah, notsomuch"
]Eh? Where's Yossi going? :?
Yossi came to see Miki??? :mon cute: AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
Of course! Who else? Yossi was all :OMG: :shock: :luvluv2: (combine all three into one XD)
"GEEZ! YOU'RE IN THE HALLWAY!" Aya exclaimed behind me, but I really was beyond caring. And apparently so was Miki, judging from how she entangled her fingers in my hair and deepened the kiss. I wrapped my arms tightly around her waist, pressing our bodies together.
Rabu-rabu desu! :luvluv1:
Damn, I'm bad at makeout scenes. ...SOMEONE READ MY MIND AND MAKE SOME FANART STAT! :lol:
N n nnn Nandesuka?!?
(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v140/Polidread/musumedia/nanda.jpg)
DISCO!
So they got a room?? Hmm... i kinda like the next chapter?? Haha...
Anyway, that is so sweet of Yossie to go and find Miki... I was too emotional as I read the message though.... Yossie did a right thing....
Yeah, like I mentioned before, I was trying to write all 97 messages and then I gave up, figuring Yossi probably couldn't take it anyway.
Ah, I torture them so.
Part 3 coming up in a few.
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PART 3 - MATSUURA - JUNE 3RD
I waved the cafe waiter over for another coffee refill as I stifled back a yawn. Getting the best room in the hotel at the last minute: awesome. Having to sleep fully clothed with your underwire poking you because your best friend is getting laid in your real room: not so much.
Of course, now, in my more caffeinated state, I realize I could have just taken the damn bra off or slept naked, but my mind was on other things at the time. Mainly, it was still in the hallway watching Miki and Yossi with their hands all over each other. I'd let them into the room partially to get them away from possibly prying eyes, but mostly because I didn't want to see that anymore. Watching them together makes me wonder... maybe, if I'd done something different... maybe, then it'd be me instead...
NO! No! Bad Aya! Bad, bad thoughts! It's Miki and Yossi and they love each other and... Bad Aya. Bad, bad, bad
"Aya?" I jumped, almost spilling my coffee. I looked up in surprise.
"Yossi? What are you doing up this early?" I asked, looking at my watch. Yoshizawa sat down across from me.
"Yeah, I have to catch the first train back to Tokyo. I have a 9 am meeting."
"A 9 am meeting and you still came all the way to Osaka!?" I exclaimed. Damn, Miki must really drive her wild in bed. I flushed a bit at the mental image presenting itself. Bad Aya.
"Yeah, well..." she laughed sheepishly. "Thanks for switching rooms with Miki, by the way."
"Huh?"
"That was your room we were in, right?"
"Um, kind of. We were actually supposed to share that one." Yossi looked mortified. "No worries!" I exclaimed. "I got a really nice room last minute, so it's fine, really."
"I'm so sorry!" she said anyway. "I've really got to make it up to you.... but not now, because I have GOT to catch that train." She laughed and stood up to leave.
"Shopping!" I said suddenly.
"What?" she said, pausing next to me.
"You can pay me back by taking me shopping. I need some help picking out a birthday present for Tan."
"Uh, her birthday was in February."
"Right, I - "
"It's June."
"I know that!" I laughed, swatting her arm. "I always forget, though, so I need to buy her something." Yossi smiled and shook her head.
"You two are hilarious, you know that? Ok, we'll go shopping for 'Tan' together. I'll call you later to set up details, ok?" I nodded. She flashed me a grin and ran out of the hotel.
"More coffee, miss?" I smiled charmingly up at the waiter.
"Thank you," I said sweetly, my mind wandering back to the hallway again.
Bad Aya.
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I'd just like to say that from this part, you may think you know where I'm going with the fic, but... trust me, you have no idea :wahaha:
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I waved the cafe waiter over for another coffee refill as I stifled back a yawn. Getting the best room in the hotel at the last minute: awesome. Having to sleep fully clothed with your underwire poking you because your best friend is getting laid in your real room: not so much.
She could've just slept nekkid, you know. :jerk:
Of course, now, in my more caffeinated state, I realize I could have just taken the damn bra off or slept naked, but my mind was on other things at the time.
Damn can I CALL IT or what? XD
Watching them together makes me wonder... maybe, if I'd done something different... maybe, then it'd be me instead...
Oh, you just HAAAAAAAAAAAAD to go THERE, didn't you? O0
"Yossi? What are you doing up this early?" I asked, looking at my watch. Yoshizawa sat down across from me.
"Yeah, I have to catch the first train back to Tokyo. I have a 9 am meeting."
"A 9 am meeting and you still came all the way to Osaka!?" I exclaimed. Damn, Miki must really drive her wild in bed. I flushed a bit at the mental image presenting itself. Bad Aya.
Obviously, Miki's worth it. :yep:
And Aya, you naughty, naughty, NAUGHTY girl! :kekeke:
"Thanks for switching rooms with Miki, by the way."
"Huh?"
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"I've really got to make it up to you.... but not now, because I have GOT to catch that train." She laughed and stood up to leave.
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"You can pay me back by taking me shopping. I need some help picking out a birthday present for Tan."
"Uh, her birthday was in February."
"Right, I - "
"It's June."
"I know that!" I laughed, swatting her arm. "I always forget, though, so I need to buy her something." Yossi smiled and shook her head.
Ah, the strange and yet lovely dynamic that is AyaxMiki. :lol:
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But wait...here it's supposed to be YoMiki.
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Either way...going shopping for your best friend's birthday gift with said best friend's girlfriend...THIS is gonna be interesting... :mon determined:
you may think you know where I'm going with the fic, but... trust me, you have no idea :wahaha:
This is the story of...
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Wait a sec...
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"no idea"?
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Oh no...
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/me re-reads PROLOGUE
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW HELL NO!!!
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You're not gonna...are you?
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CRAP I MIGHT HAVE JUST FIGURED IT OUT!!! (http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c340/J-F-C/assplode.gif)
I'm probably wrong though. :rofl:
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CRAP I MIGHT HAVE JUST FIGURED IT OUT!!! (http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c340/J-F-C/assplode.gif)
PROBABLY NOT! :wahaha:
I'm going to be throwing red herrings out like nobody's business. :lol:
If you DID figure it out at this point, I'd be quite surprised and demand your access to my brain be revoked.
And honestly? The prologue isn't even quite what it seems. :hiakhiakhiak:
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PROBABLY NOT! :wahaha:
I'm going to be throwing red herrings out like nobody's business. :lol:
If you DID figure it out at this point, I'd be quite surprised and demand your access to my brain be revoked.
And honestly? The prologue isn't even quite what it seems. :hiakhiakhiak:
<_<
>_>
I knoooooooooooooooooooooooooooow. *grins*
*runs away quickly before JFC finds the kira kira fuyu no shiny shiny knife*
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Hey, I DID say afterwards that I was probably wrong about it. :P
/me starts humming
Kira, kira fuyu no, shiny shiny :shifty:
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yosh! new fic! :glasses:
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"I just did, didn't I?" Miki sighed and flicked her reflection in the glass. "Miki, you idiot."
aahhh miki what did you do this time, huh??? :shock:
It's hard being cool all of the time.
hahahaha! love that line.
So, I naturally waited until the door had shut and I heard the shower turn on before I threw myself on my freshly made bed and rolled around, giggling like a lunatic and tunelessly singing "Miki loooooves me."
oh my god. i can imagine Yossie SD rolling on the bed. :wahaha: :nya:
"You're just pissed that I've made out with your two best friends and not you," Miki piped up. Ayaka visibly jumped and whirled around.
at last ayaka interaction. hahaha
evil miki... :kekeke:
"Check it out, I'm Reina!" She dropped down into the Yankii Squat, slightly crossed her eyes, and started rolling R's like there was no tomorrow. "Tch. The hell. I ain't no damn yankee. What are you lookin at? Bastard."
mwahaahahahahahahaha :mon lmao:
"...You can DO that!?" I exclaimed. Miki and Ayaka groaned in unison.
well... duh... :sweat:
"Yoshiko, honestly..." Ayaka shook her head.
:mon lmao:
"GEEZ! YOU'RE IN THE HALLWAY!" Aya exclaimed behind me, but I really was beyond caring. And apparently so was Miki, judging from how she entangled her fingers in my hair and deepened the kiss. I wrapped my arms tightly around her waist, pressing our bodies together.
:mon inluv:
"Damn, get a room," Aya mock-complained. She met my eye and grinned.
ahhh aya. so sweet. :luvluv2:
Bad Aya.
very bad indeed.... but i wouldn't mind aya joining in... hehehehe :mon misch:
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Watching them together makes me wonder... maybe, if I'd done something different... maybe, then it'd be me instead...
Oh, you just HAAAAAAAAAAAAD to go THERE, didn't you? O0
:lol: Ah, these posts make waiting to write the end totally worth it. Dragging it out, making people think one thing's going on when it's something else... :whistle:
Ah, the strange and yet lovely dynamic that is AyaxMiki. :lol:
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But wait...here it's supposed to be YoMiki.
...
Either way...going shopping for your best friend's birthday gift with said best friend's girlfriend...THIS is gonna be interesting... :mon determined:
Yep. It'll be a while, though. There are things that must happen first. :wahaha:
"I just did, didn't I?" Miki sighed and flicked her reflection in the glass. "Miki, you idiot."
aahhh miki what did you do this time, huh??? :shock:
That would be the question of the fic at this point in time. That and "WHO THE HELL IS 'I'?!!!!???!! AND WHO'S IN THAT CAR!?!?!?!!!11!ONE!"
Bad Aya.
very bad indeed.... but i wouldn't mind aya joining in... hehehehe :mon misch:
LOL! Y'all are insane.
New part coming up in a bit~!
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PART 4 - FUJIMOTO - JUNE 5TH
There is nothing - NOTHING - better than lazily waking up on your day off with your sweetheart's arms around you, your adorable little dogs snoring at your feet, and knowing you have the whole day to enjoy.
...ok, sex is better, but that's an entirely different type of thing and quite frankly the two are incomparable. It's like comparing apples and cheesecake.
I woke up in that perfect lazy state, warm and comfy in your bed. I felt my cute little Hima-chan stretch and cuddle up against my foot. Yossi's left arm was tightly around my waist, holding me against her, her lips pressed to my hair even in sleep. I felt her shift slightly behind me.
"Hey," she murmured into my hair.
"Morning," I replied with a smile as she kissed my bare shoulder.
"You know," Yossi continued sleepily. "I really love waking up with you like this..."
"But?" I asked, turning around in her arms.
"But," she continued after giving me a quick kiss. "You really have trained your dogs too well."
"What?"
"An-kun keeps poking my butt," she replied. I giggled.
"He just wants your attention," I explained.
"That doesn't change the fact that you've obviously trained him to violate me when you're too busy to."
"Yocchan, my love, I'm NEVER to busy to violate you," I replied calmly, moving my ice cold foot up her leg.
"COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLD!" she squeaked, jumping out of bed. Perfect.
"While you're up, would you mind taking the dogs out?"
"Miki!" I groaned and pulled the covers over my head.
"Whaaaaaaat?" I called back sleepily. The door squeaked a little as it was pushed open. Yossi started laughing.
"Did you fall back asleep?"
"I'm comfy," I replied as the covers were cruelly thrown off of me.
"Well, too bad. I have plans for us today."
"Does it involve sleeping and rolling around in bed?"
"Nope," Yossi replied, effortlessly picking me up.
"Well, I think I'm liking this so far," I grinned, leaning my head against her chest. I closed my eyes and had just started to doze off again when I was suddenly plopped down on the cold, hard floor. "Yocchan, wha..." My question was cut off as a surge of water hit me in the face. I jumped to my feet, grabbing the towel bar to steady myself. "YOSHIZAWA, WHAT THE HELL!?" I demanded, trying to peel off my soaked pajamas.
"Oh, good, you're up!" Yossi laughed. "When you're done with your shower, we'll be leaving."
"When I'm done with my shower," I replied, tossing my soaked camisole over the curtain so it smacked her across the face. "You're dead." Yossi just laughed. "Bah. You're lucky I love you so much. So, where are we going?"
"I figured it was about time for a date." I paused mid-lather.
"A date?" I repeated, watching her bend over and put my shirt in the hamper. "I really like those pants."
"What?" she asked, straightening back up. "You want to borrow them or something?"
"No, I mean... I REALLY like those pants. Wear them. A lot." She started laughing. "Anyway, you were saying?"
"Right, so we're going on a date today."
"Seriously?"
"Why do you sound so surprised?" she protested.
"It just seems a bit strange," I replied, grabbing the conditioner.
"Why?"
"Our relationship seems to be going backwards," I laughed. "Isn't the normal order dating, love confession, then sleeping together?"
"Hey! That's your fault."
"What?!" I exclaimed.
"I'm sorry, WHO was half-naked in my bathroom in Hawaii?" Yossi countered.
"Yeah, WHO kissed me when I was half-naked in her bathroom in Hawaii?" I retorted.
"WHO jumped me when we got locked in that closet together?"
"...wait, which time?" I asked, turning the shower off.
"Second," she replied, openly ogling me as I stepped out of the shower.
"Oh, ok... Wait a second! That was you both times!" I laughed.
"What!? No, you grabbed me the second time," she replied, wrapping me up in a big towel.
"I grabbed you, but then after you had that retarded sneezing fit, you proceeded to get me half-naked before I had a chance to say anything!"
"...yeah, I did, huh..." Yossi mused, looking infinitely pleased with herself. She looked my towel-clad, soaking-wet haired form over. "So, you about ready?" I blinked.
"No. And if we're going on a DATE, then you need to get the hell out so I can get ready," I replied, pushing her towards the door.
"What? But - "
"But nothing. GIRLS take time to get ready," I declared, shoving her out.
"But I'm a girl!" she protested. I gave a snort of laughter and slammed the door.
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:mon lmao: :mon lmao: :mon lmao: :mon lmao:
Poor Yossie, sometimes everybody forget that she's a girl too
I really love this fic a lot
And about the previous chapter, I think Aya wants something with Yossie, I don't know, To me looks like that and not like Aya wants something with Miki
It would be interesting if this two friends had some arguing for Yossie :mon scare:
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That would be the question of the fic at this point in time. That and "WHO THE HELL IS 'I'?!!!!???!! AND WHO'S IN THAT CAR!?!?!?!!!11!ONE!"
LULZ...."ONE"....LULZ
LOL! Y'all are insane.
You know you love it though, just like we do. :wahaha:
There is nothing - NOTHING - better than lazily waking up on your day off with your sweetheart's arms around you, your adorable little dogs snoring at your feet, and knowing you have the whole day to enjoy.
Awwwwwwwwwwww... :wub:
...ok, sex is better, but that's an entirely different type of thing and quite frankly the two are incomparable.
BOOYAH! :lol:
"You really have trained your dogs too well."
"What?"
"An-kun keeps poking my butt," she replied. I giggled.
Well, they DO say that pets can start acting like thier owners. Hima-chan definitely acts like Miki in her cuddly-sleepiness, and An-kun...well, he seems to have adopted "the Miki Method" for gaining attention. :kekeke:
Anyways, I'd be giving another "Awwwwwwww" right now...if it wasn't for the fact that I'm also wondering "What is An-kun poking Yossi with?". :on lol:
"That doesn't change the fact that you've obviously trained him to violate me when you're too busy to."
"Yocchan, my love, I'm NEVER to busy to violate you," I replied calmly, moving my ice cold foot up her leg.
"COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLD!" she squeaked, jumping out of bed.
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...Miki's icey cold leg...:drool:
I have plans for us today."
"Does it involve sleeping and rolling around in bed?"
"Nope," Yossi replied, effortlessly picking me up.
Damn. :banghead:
So, where are we going?"
"I figured it was about time for a date." I paused mid-lather.
"A date?"
Hmmm...guess they've never been able to go on an actual date before because of their schedules, huh? :O
"Our relationship seems to be going backwards," I laughed. "Isn't the normal order dating, love confession, then sleeping together?"
Meh, the "normal order" thing has been done to death. :roll: The YoMiki way is more exciting, and it all worked out anyway. :heart:
"I'm sorry, WHO was half-naked in my bathroom in Hawaii?" Yossi countered.
Maybe, but Yossi was FULL-nekkid. O0
"Yeah, WHO kissed me when I was half-naked in her bathroom in Hawaii?" I retorted.
Yeah, fully-nekkid AND able to make Miki melt. :love:
"WHO jumped me when we got locked in that closet together?"
"...wait, which time?" I asked, turning the shower off.
Does it matter? :twisted:
"I grabbed you, but then after you had that retarded sneezing fit, you proceeded to get me half-naked before I had a chance to say anything!"
"...yeah, I did, huh..." Yossi mused, looking infinitely pleased with herself.
That's cuz Yossi's got da skillz! :pimp:
She looked my towel-clad, soaking-wet haired form over. "So, you about ready?" I blinked.
For some rabu-rabu action? Probably. For a date? C'mon, I'm a guy and even I need more than a couple minutes to get ready after a shower. 8)
"No. And if we're going on a DATE, then you need to get the hell out so I can get ready," I replied, pushing her towards the door.
"What? But - "
"But nothing. GIRLS take time to get ready," I declared, shoving her out.
"But I'm a girl!" she protested. I gave a snort of laughter and slammed the door.
What she means to say is that if Yossi stays in the bathroom with her she'll be too tempting a target for Miki to ravage, which will lead to rabu-rabu action, which will mean they'll be late in leaving for their date. :grin:
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that was a really really nice chap. :lol:
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Sorry about not posting anything yesterday. Hopefully I'll put something up today.
I actually was writing, but it's the near-end parts since that's the kind of mood I was in. Yeah... I'd say more, but the person in question might read this. :mon POd:
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I really love this fic a lot
YAY! :otomerika:
And about the previous chapter, I think Aya wants something with Yossie, I don't know, To me looks like that and not like Aya wants something with Miki
It would be interesting if this two friends had some arguing for Yossie :mon scare:
As to all predictions, I must reply to this with a :wahaha:
LOL! Y'all are insane.
You know you love it though, just like we do. :wahaha:
Absolutely. MORE COMMENTS PEOPLE! :lol:
Well, they DO say that pets can start acting like thier owners. Hima-chan definitely acts like Miki in her cuddly-sleepiness, and An-kun...well, he seems to have adopted "the Miki Method" for gaining attention. :kekeke:
Anyways, I'd be giving another "Awwwwwwww" right now...if it wasn't for the fact that I'm also wondering "What is An-kun poking Yossi with?". :on lol:
I had a cat that would poke you in the butt with his paw when he wanted attention, so An-kun is based off of that. :D
For some rabu-rabu action? Probably. For a date? C'mon, I'm a guy and even I need more than a couple minutes to get ready after a shower. 8)
Yes, but it's already pre-established that fic-Yossi is very very dense sometimes. We're lucky it didn't take her 3 years to realize Miki said she loved her in the middle of a rant. :on lol:
What she means to say is that if Yossi stays in the bathroom with her she'll be too tempting a target for Miki to ravage, which will lead to rabu-rabu action, which will mean they'll be late in leaving for their date. :grin:
That too. LOL
Part 5, fresh off the keyboard, coming up in a bit!
BTW, manamin's comments on the stuff I wrote earlier today....
manamin: *sniffle*
manamin: YOSSIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
yep. O0
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PART 5 - YOSHIZAWA - JUNE 5TH - NINETY MINUTES LATER
"Mikiiiiiiiiiiii," I grumbled, knocking on the bedroom door with my head again. "Aren't you ready yet?"
"Almost!" she called back sweetly.
"You said that when you moved from the bathroom to the bedroom an hour ago," I muttered, walking back to sit down on the couch. An-kun jumped up on my lap as soon as I sat down. I absentmindedly patted him on the head. "Your owner is insane," I stage whispered. "HEY!" I yelled to the closed door. "You're taking an extraordinarily long amount of time considering you don't even know where we're going!" The door opened.
"Fine, where are we going?" Miki asked with a smile, leaning against the doorjam. She was wearing the shortest skirt I have ever seen her in outside of work. It hugged the curves I had become so familiar with. She had some sort of shirt on, but quite frankly, I couldn't take my eyes off of those legs. Realizing that she was waiting for me to answer her, I cleared my throat and wordlessly pointed at the bedroom. She started laughing.
"I suggested that to begin with," she grinned and advanced, obviously enjoying her effect on me. "But you wanted a date, so we're going out."
She stopped right in front of me and bent towards me. I seriously wished I had a mirror behind her just so I could get that view. She leaned down and I smiled, closing my eyes in anticipation. She just laughed and picked An-kun up off of my lap.
"Are you having fun at Yocchan's place?" she asked the dog as she put him down on the floor, coincidentally giving me the view I had been envying earlier. "So?" she asked, sitting down next to me. "Where are we going?"
"Well," I said, having regained control of my ability to speak. "I know a certain someone is basically a homebody, so we're not going out for long. Just picking up a few things and then coming back here. But, um... where did you get that skirt from anyway?"
"This?" Miki laughed, standing up and twirling around for me. "I found it in your closet."
"I own that!?" I exclaimed, grabbing the hem and staring at it curiously. "When the hell did I buy this and why..."
"Yocchan?"
"Hmm?" I looked up at her, still holding onto the skirt.
"While we're young?" I laughed and let go of her skirt. I stood up and lazily draped my arm around her waist, escorting her to the door.
"Will they be ok while we're gone?" I asked, pausing at the doorway. Miki looked over at her poodles who were already asleep on the couch.
"Yeah, they'll be fine. Are we taking your car or a taxi?"
"My car," I replied, locking the door behind us.
"Just don't back into anything this time," Miki laughed.
"Oh, shush."
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Damn you Miki for taking so long to get ready, makes me wait even longer for the 'date' :cry: ;)
You have such a knack for making Miki even more irresistible then she already is, and i thought that was impossible :P
Of course I want to know who Miki was with at the start (btw my guess is Maki, but maybe that's just coz those two would be :drool: but i could live with Aya too :)) and all the angst that comes with that, but for now, I will focus on the good times we have of YoMiki right now :heart:
What else?
oh I love your writing! you're one of those people whose own writing inspires others to write too and you just get the characters so well and thank god for you staying consistent with the character's personality (I've seen too many fanfics before for other things, where they can't stay consistent)... alrighty then I am rambling so I'll shut up :P
Basically I love your writing and how u keep us all on edge (meany :(). Every twist and turn, as painful as they can be, are just so great to read. But thank god I got to read Memoir all at once and didn't have to wait for up dates :lol:
Oh and something that was a large part in me joining the board coz I wanted to comment on this :P
In one of your comments in Memoir u said that you write Miki like yourself or something along those lines... If that's true then I am so in love you and I'm sure there are a LOT of others who are too! :wub: :heart:
And YAY first comment :otomerika:
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YOSHIZAWA - NINETY MINUTES LATER
"Mikiiiiiiiiiiii," I grumbled, knocking on the bedroom door with my head again. "Aren't you ready yet?"
"Almost!" she called back sweetly.
90 minutes??? o_o Damn Miki had better look freekin' gorgeous (not that that doesn't usually look that way...but...well...you know :D).
An-kun jumped up on my lap as soon as I sat down. I absentmindedly patted him on the head. "Your owner is insane," I stage whispered.
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...An-kun likes Yossi! :heart:
You know that you're in good when the pets like you too. :love:
"Fine, where are we going?" Miki asked with a smile, leaning against the doorjam. She was wearing the shortest skirt I have ever seen her in outside of work. It hugged the curves I had become so familiar with. She had some sort of shirt on, but quite frankly, I couldn't take my eyes off of those legs.
Gawdayum! :drool:
There's a reason she's in GAM, after all. :drool:
Realizing that she was waiting for me to answer her, I cleared my throat and wordlessly pointed at the bedroom.
Oh hellz yah. :hump:
She stopped right in front of me and bent towards me. I seriously wished I had a mirror behind her just so I could get that view.
Fuck, now I'm picturing that very image in my depraved, Miki-sama loving mind.
GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWDAYUM!!! :jerk:
She leaned down and I smiled, closing my eyes in anticipation. She just laughed and picked An-kun up off of my lap.
"Are you having fun at Yocchan's place?" she asked the dog as she put him down on the floor, coincidentally giving me the view I had been envying earlier.
:mon blood:
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/me wakes up
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Sweet merciful crap I HAVE to know...
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were they orange? :wahaha:
I know a certain someone is basically a homebody, so we're not going out for long. Just picking up a few things and then coming back here.
Awwwwwwww...is Yossi going to make Miki's favourite meal for her? :wriggly:
...
Afterwards they can "cook" together too. :twisted:
where did you get that skirt from anyway?"
"This?" Miki laughed, standing up and twirling around for me. "I found it in your closet."
"I own that!?" I exclaimed, grabbing the hem and staring at it curiously. "When the hell did I buy this and why..."
It's Yossi's??? :o
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Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice. :yep:
"Will they be ok while we're gone?" I asked, pausing at the doorway. Miki looked over at her poodles who were already asleep on the couch.
"Yeah, they'll be fine.
Sleeping An-kun and Hima-chan! :nya:
Are we taking your car or a taxi?"
"My car," I replied, locking the door behind us.
"Just don't back into anything this time," Miki laughed.
"Oh, shush."
Miki shouldn't be wearing that miniskirt then. It's bound to distract Yossi with it while she's driving. :twisted: :shakeit:
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But?" I asked, turning around in her arms.
"But," she continued after giving me a quick kiss. "You really have trained your dogs too well."
"What?"
"An-kun keeps poking my butt," she replied. I giggled.
"He just wants your attention," I explained.
"That doesn't change the fact that you've obviously trained him to violate me when you're too busy to."
ahahahahaha even the dogs loves yossie!
:wub:
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I was sooo ready for the 'date'!!! waa... we still in the house??
Anyway, An-Kun liking Yossie is cute.... ;)
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Huzzah a continuation of Memoir!
Oh no, it seems like as soon as Miki and Yossi worked out their issues together another problem arose. Although we don't know quite it will be yet! >_< The GAM fan in me hopes that it involves some Aya/Miki, but I doubt you would make it that obvious. I can't wait to find out more with the next chapter!
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Memoir II, yayyyyyy :love:
Just started reading your fics, and I have to say they're awesome!
Lets get that date started! :mon XD:
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Of course I want to know who Miki was with at the start (btw my guess is Maki, but maybe that's just coz those two would be :drool: but i could live with Aya too :)) and all the angst that comes with that, but for now, I will focus on the good times we have of YoMiki right now :heart:
How else can I reply to this but with my standard :wahaha:
What else?
oh I love your writing! you're one of those people whose own writing inspires others to write too and you just get the characters so well and thank god for you staying consistent with the character's personality (I've seen too many fanfics before for other things, where they can't stay consistent)... alrighty then I am rambling so I'll shut up :P
Basically I love your writing and how u keep us all on edge (meany :(). Every twist and turn, as painful as they can be, are just so great to read. But thank god I got to read Memoir all at once and didn't have to wait for up dates :lol:
Wow! Thank you so much! :luvuluvu:
In one of your comments in Memoir u said that you write Miki like yourself or something along those lines... If that's true then I am so in love you and I'm sure there are a LOT of others who are too! :wub: :heart:
Ha ha ha! I do write Miki a lot like me, but then I have to go back and edit it. :shy1:
90 minutes??? o_o Damn Miki had better look freekin' gorgeous (not that that doesn't usually look that way...but...well...you know :D).
>.>
OMAKE!
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"Mikiiiiiiiiiiii!" Yossi groaned, thumping her head against the door. "Are you ready yet?"
"Almost!" Miki called back sweetly, stifling back a giggle from her sitting position on the floor. She tickled Hima-chan under the chin and threw the toy again. "Get it!" she hissed, hoping her girlfriend wouldn't overhear her. Hima-chan gleefully bounded off after the toy. After the unbelievable amount of teasing Yossi'd done last night, it was the least Miki could do to repay her. The fully dressed and ready Miki grinned and leaned back against the bed.
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Wheeeeeee I'm so weird.
/me wakes up
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Sweet merciful crap I HAVE to know...
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were they orange? :wahaha:
wtf, why orange? XD
where did you get that skirt from anyway?"
"This?" Miki laughed, standing up and twirling around for me. "I found it in your closet."
"I own that!?" I exclaimed, grabbing the hem and staring at it curiously. "When the hell did I buy this and why..."
It's Yossi's??? :o
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Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice. :yep:
Yeah, have you seen the Yaguchi-Yossi Uta Doki? Apparently, Yossi found the skirt and has started wearing it. :luvluv1:
I was sooo ready for the 'date'!!! waa... we still in the house??
Ha ha! I hope the date doesn't disappoint. It's not really that big of a deal. :mon sweat:
Huzzah a continuation of Memoir!
Oh no, it seems like as soon as Miki and Yossi worked out their issues together another problem arose. Although we don't know quite it will be yet! >_< The GAM fan in me hopes that it involves some Aya/Miki, but I doubt you would make it that obvious. I can't wait to find out more with the next chapter!
HAAAAAI! And like I said before, the prologue is only a hint of the future conflict and is therefore not really quite what it seems.
Memoir II, yayyyyyy :love:
Just started reading your fics, and I have to say they're awesome!
YAY! Thank you sooo much!! :wub:
And, yesh, this does mean part 6!
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Don't miss my 2-paragraph bonus part in the middle of my comments reply!
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PART 6 - FUJIMOTO - JUNE 5TH - ONE HOUR LATER
I grinned and picked up the DVD.
"Yocchan?" I called, walking over to her. She was deeply immersed in the drama section. "What about this one? It's a recent action movie from America."
"Who's in it?" she asked, not even looking up.
"Uh... Samuel L Jackson?" I replied, handing her the DVD case.
"What's it ab...GAH!" Yossi dropped the movie like it was alive and recoiled back against the shelving. "Not funny. Not funny. Not funny. Not funny. Not freaking funny."
"What?" I asked innocently as I picked up the movie. "You don't want to see 'SNAKE FLIGHT'?"
"NOT freaking funny, Fujimoto."
"I beg to differ, Yoshizawa," I laughed, going to return the offensive movie to the shelf. "Soooo..." I linked my arm with hers. "What are we going to watch?"
"Dunno," she replied shortly, glancing over the movies and into the next aisle.
"'Tokkaekko'?" I suggested innocently.
"'17sai -Tabadachi no Futari-'?" she retorted.
"'Sukeban Deka: Code Name = Asamiya Saki'?" I joked.
"Oh, I own that already," she replied distractedly, peering over the top shelf again. "I think we've been spotted," she hissed before I could react. She pointed over towards the next aisle.
"I can't see anything."
"Just look over the - "
"I'm nine centimeters shorter than you. I seriously cannot see over the top shelf."
"Oh." She smirked. "Want me to lift you up?"
"Kinda," I grinned lecherously.
"Excuse me," a man said behind me. I mouthed 'OH MY GAH' to Yossi before slapping an expression of supreme boredom on my face and turning around.
"What?" I said rudely. The nervous man looked back and forth between the two of us. His eyes widened and he abruptly spun around and left. "Well, that was easy," I laughed, turning around.
I recoiled a bit at the sight presenting itself. Yossi was standing with her arms folded across her chest, glaring full force with a look of utter disgust.
"Holy crap, Yocchan! Where the hell did you pick that up?" I sputtered, taken aback at the presence of a glare to rival even my best.
"Nakazawa," she replied, her stare following the man's quick escape through the store. As soon as he left, she blinked the Nakazawa Death Glare away and grinned at me. "This comedy ok?" Without waiting for a reply, she sauntered off to the checkout.
"....Damn, that was hot," I muttered before following her.
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BTW, "SNAKE FLIGHT (http://www.amazon.co.jp/%E3%82%B9%E3%83%8D%E3%83%BC%E3%82%AF%E3%83%BB%E3%83%95%E3%83%A9%E3%82%A4%E3%83%88-%E3%82%B5%E3%83%9F%E3%83%A5%E3%82%A8%E3%83%AB%E3%83%BBL-%E3%82%B8%E3%83%A3%E3%82%AF%E3%82%BD%E3%83%B3/dp/B000MKZ7DS/ref=pd_bbs_sr_1/249-4650463-9156323?ie=UTF8&s=dvd&qid=1188363318&sr=8-1)" is the Japanese release title of "Snakes on a Plane"
Oh, and, hmm, what's this? Oh, it's CRACKHEADED OMAKE TIME!
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MIKI-SAMA'S OMAKE CORNER
almond: Eh!? What's this for?
Miki: Welcome to Miki-sama's Omake Corner! Where I, the always humble Fujimoto Miki, will point out the glaring errors of almond's fics!
almond: WHAT?! What errors?!
Miki: Let's begin! Case one! Lovely Assistant, if you would?
*Eri, in a Viyuden-esque bunny outfit, drags out exhibit one*
Miki: *smacks Eri on the ass* Thank you, Lovely Assistant!
"Hitomi," Ayaka said in a perfect imitation of my mother's low scolding tone. I stopped laughing. Crap, she was pissed. My parents rarely pulled the first name card and that was only when they were really mad about something.
almond: What's wrong with that? I thought it was -
Miki: DUMBASS! What the hell would Yocchan's parents call her except Hitomi?
almond: ....
Miki: That's her damn name. They gave it to her. What are they gonna do, call her 'Yoshizawa'?!
almond: ....ah.
Miki: 'ah'. Yeah. EXHIBIT TWO!
*Eri drags out exhibit two and is rewarded with another rear groping*
"Oh, good, you're up!" Yossi laughed. "When you're done with your shower, we'll be leaving."
"When I'm done with my shower," I replied, tossing my soaked camisole over the curtain so it smacked her across the face. "You're dead." Yossi just laughed. "Bah. You're lucky I love you so much. So, where are we going?"
"I figured it was about time for a date." I paused mid-lather.
"A date?" I repeated, watching her bend over and put my shirt in the hamper. "I really like those pants."
almond: Ok....are you mad that I had her chuck you into the shower semi-clothed?
Miki: No, what I'm wondering is how we were able to see and speak to one another with a SHOWER CURTAIN IN THE WAY.
almond: ....
Miki: And I've read ahead! I know you did it again later in that part near the end!
manamin: Maybe it's a glass door shower?
Miki: WTF!? Who let the beta in?! Anyway, she said "over the curtain".
almond: ...it's a clear curtain?
Miki: Then MENTION THAT NEXT TIME, you dialogue freak. A little description never hurt anyone.
almond: Uh... this entire omake is nothing but dialogue....
Miki: And so concludes Miki-sama's Omake Corner! Please join me again next time when we play Pin The Scandal On The Mini Moni. Member! Bye! <3
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Dear Lord, sometimes I think my body naturally produces its own recreational drugs. :heart:
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Dear Lord, sometimes I think my body naturally produces its own recreational drugs. :heart:
Actually, it does! :lol:
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OMAKE!
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"Mikiiiiiiiiiiii!" Yossi groaned, thumping her head against the door. "Are you ready yet?"
"Almost!" Miki called back sweetly, stifling back a giggle from her sitting position on the floor. She tickled Hima-chan under the chin and threw the toy again. "Get it!" she hissed, hoping her girlfriend wouldn't overhear her. Hima-chan gleefully bounded off after the toy. After the unbelievable amount of teasing Yossi'd done last night, it was the least Miki could do to repay her. The fully dressed and ready Miki grinned and leaned back against the bed.
That is totally Miki-sama right there. :wahaha:
wtf, why orange? XD
I guess you never saw that episode of H!M last year where Miki, Nono, and Reina went on the date with the K1 fighter guy and she was wearing these HAWT, tight, low-cut jeans and how at one point....yeah....orange. 8)
Yeah, have you seen the Yaguchi-Yossi Uta Doki? Apparently, Yossi found the skirt and has started wearing it. :luvluv1:
I did see it. :luvluv1:
I grinned and picked up the DVD.
"Yocchan?" I called, walking over to her. She was deeply immersed in the drama section. "What about this one? It's a recent action movie from America."
"Who's in it?" she asked, not even looking up.
"Uh... Samuel L Jackson?" I replied, handing her the DVD case.
"What's it ab...GAH!" Yossi dropped the movie like it was alive and recoiled back against the shelving. "Not funny. Not funny. Not funny. Not funny. Not freaking funny."
SNAKES ON A PLANE! :on lol:
Now no offense, but to hell with the action/drama stuff. I wanna see what happens when Miki tries to get Yossi to rent a PRON flick! :wahaha:
"I think we've been spotted," she hissed before I could react. She pointed over towards the next aisle.
...
"I'm nine centimeters shorter than you. I seriously cannot see over the top shelf."
"Oh." She smirked. "Want me to lift you up?"
"Kinda," I grinned lecherously.
:hump: :twisted:
Yossi was standing with her arms folded across her chest, glaring full force with a look of utter disgust.
"Holy crap, Yocchan! Where the hell did you pick that up?" I sputtered, taken aback at the presence of a glare to rival even my best.
"Nakazawa," she replied, her stare following the man's quick escape through the store.
Who else? Miki and Yuko are the two glare-queens of H!P, after all. :lol:
"....Damn, that was hot," I muttered before following her.
Hell yeah...:jerk:
MIKI-SAMA'S OMAKE CORNER
*awesome omake stuff*
:mon lmao: :mon lmao: :mon lmao:
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Can I reward Eri next time? :lol:
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Can I reward Eri next time? :lol:
Can I get rewarded by Miki? :twisted:
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Sorry, no new part yet, just replying to JFC.
wtf, why orange? XD
I guess you never saw that episode of H!M last year where Miki, Nono, and Reina went on the date with the K1 fighter guy and she was wearing these HAWT, tight, low-cut jeans and how at one point....yeah....orange. 8)
Oh, yeah, I forgot about that. That reminds me, though, there's a UFA pic where I'm pretty damn sure you can see the top of Yossi's undies... I was gonna post it here, but couldn't figure out where to post it and finally just gave up and saved it to be admired later. :lol:
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That reminds me, though, there's a UFA pic where I'm pretty damn sure you can see the top of Yossi's undies... I was gonna post it here, but couldn't figure out where to post it and finally just gave up and saved it to be admired later. :lol:
Whaddayu mean you couldn't figure out figure out where to post it??? O_O You can't just say you've got a pic that has the top of Yossi's undies and then just leave us hanging!!! :OMG: Just post it here already~! :pleeease:
EDIT: Tell ya what...I'll trade you Miki's for Yossi's. :pimp:
(http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/5083/snapshot20070829192855jl6.jpg)
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Tell ya what...I'll trade you Miki's for Yossi's. :pimp:
(http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/5083/snapshot20070829192855jl6.jpg)
XD
(http://img453.imageshack.us/img453/4797/img2006021105d4534ag5.th.jpg) (http://img453.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img2006021105d4534ag5.jpg)
Look right above the belt at the mysterious fabric that peeks out from the top of her jeans.
If you think it's part of the pants, here's another pic for comparison. Note the distinct lack of Mysterious Fabric.
(http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/9137/img2006021105453d5rj4.th.jpg) (http://img509.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img2006021105453d5rj4.jpg)
What amuses me isn't that it peeked out, but the fact that the editors/photograhpers/whoever didn't catch it. :lol:
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Dear Lord, sometimes I think my body naturally produces its own recreational drugs. :heart:
Actually, it does! :lol:
The more you know! :bingo:
"I think we've been spotted," she hissed before I could react. She pointed over towards the next aisle.
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"I'm nine centimeters shorter than you. I seriously cannot see over the top shelf."
"Oh." She smirked. "Want me to lift you up?"
"Kinda," I grinned lecherously.
:hump: :twisted:
Exactly.
Who else? Miki and Yuko are the two glare-queens of H!P, after all. :lol:
Yeah, Yossi only busted out that half-assed one backstage on Yaguchi and Momoko during the '07 Winter Concert
(http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/2615/hm2007011408am8.th.jpg) (http://img248.imageshack.us/my.php?image=hm2007011408am8.jpg)
Can I reward Eri next time? :lol:
Can I get rewarded by Miki? :twisted:
XD
And this is a real non-exposed-panties-related post! Part 7 coming up shortly!
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PART 7 - TAKAHASHI - JUNE 5TH - TWO HOURS LATER
"And CUT!" the director yelled. I groaned and mock-choked the damn doll before shoving it back in its stroller. "Takahashi, please be a bit more gentle! We can't afford to replace that." I smiled and nodded politely.
"Man, Ai," Risa said to me quietly. "Did you ever imagine when you joined that you'd - "
"Be running around like a retarded child in animal ears and a tail? No."
"Uh, I was going to say 'be leader'..." Risa trailed off. I flushed a little, but a flurry of activity out of the corner of my eye distracted me. I turned my head just in time to see two figures disappear back into the gourmet grocer's on the corner. Strange. That looked kind of like...
"Ok!" The director interrupted my train of thought. "We're ready for the next intro segment! Please pretend like this is a new day!" I rolled my eyes. This was the third "new day" today. I pasted a big smile on my face as the director cued us.
"YAY!" I exclaimed perkily before zoning out as the doll started babbling about something or another. AH! There they were again! The pair was coming out of the grocer's. I was right! It WAS them! Linking arms. Grinning. Coming up behind the camera crew. Man, Yoshizawa's ass looks fantastic in those pants.
Miki started laughing. She caught my eye and did a mock-Usa-chan-peace, wiggling her fingers at me. Yoshizawa was smiling easily and waving to the other girls as she caught their attention.
"Right, Ai?" I jumped back to attention and grinned.
"YEP!" I replied, having no idea what I was agreeing to. Now Miki was dramatically blowing kisses at me. Yoshizawa glanced over at me and flashed me one of her brilliant grins. She shifted their grocery bag to her other hand and draped her arm around Miki's waist. She leaned down to whisper something to her former subleader. Miki looked up at Yoshizawa and smiled broadly.
"BAKA NE! BAKA NE! BAKA NE!" our former fearless leaders sang out loudly. The crew jumped at the sudden "Onna ni Sachi Are" chorus and the director started yelling cut. The Mom and Dad of Morning Musume. meanwhile had put their Gatas training to good use by hightailing it out of there, giggling like a couple of schoolgirls.
"OK! Once more from the top!" The director yelled.
"Aw, dammit," Reina grumbled, moving back into her starting position. The others followed suit, with varying degrees of cursing and mumbling. I couldn't help but smile. I'd never seen either one of them look so relaxed and happy before.
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Yay short -n- random. :lol:
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http://img453.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img2006021105d4534ag5.jpg (http://img453.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img2006021105d4534ag5.jpg)
Look right above the belt at the mysterious fabric that peeks out from the top of her jeans.
*yoink* :D
PART 7 - TAKAHASHI
Aichan's involved in this? :? Or is she just a vehicle used to further something along that will come later on in the story?
"Man, Ai," Risa said to me quietly. "Did you ever imagine when you joined that you'd - "
"Be running around like a retarded child in animal ears and a tail? No."
But she looks so cute with the ears. :oops:
"Uh, I was going to say 'be leader'..." Risa trailed off.
Oops. XD
I turned my head just in time to see two figures disappear back into the gourmet grocer's on the corner. Strange. That looked kind of like...
A-HA! My previous prediction that Yossi might be making dinner for Miki just might be true! :w00t:
The pair was coming out of the grocer's. I was right! It WAS them! Linking arms. Grinning. Coming up behind the camera crew.
I wonder just how much of a coincidence it is that Yossi and Miki happened to be in the same area as where the girls were filming? 8)
Man, Yoshizawa's ass looks fantastic in those pants.
Even though it's been a while since she graduated, Yossi's still a :pimp:.
Miki started laughing. She caught my eye and did a mock-Usa-chan-peace, wiggling her fingers at me. Yoshizawa was smiling easily and waving to the other girls as she caught their attention.
"Right, Ai?" I jumped back to attention and grinned.
"YEP!" I replied, having no idea what I was agreeing to. Now Miki was dramatically blowing kisses at me. Yoshizawa glanced over at me and flashed me one of her brilliant grins. She shifted their grocery bag to her other hand and draped her arm around Miki's waist.
Gee, do you think Yossi and Miki are trying to be inconspicuous and not disturb/disrupt filming? :lol:
"BAKA NE! BAKA NE! BAKA NE!" our former fearless leaders sang out loudly. The crew jumped at the sudden "Onna ni Sachi Are" chorus and the director started yelling cut. The Mom and Dad of Morning Musume. meanwhile had put their Gatas training to good use by hightailing it out of there, giggling like a couple of schoolgirls.
:on lol:
I couldn't help but smile. I'd never seen either one of them look so relaxed and happy before.
Aichan sounds like she's happy for them, and dare I say even a little jealous. :yep:
And yes, it DID make me wonder if Aichan was "the other person" that was in the PROLOGUE. However, I'm trying to stay calm about it, because we all know you'll just go ":wahaha:" anyway. :P
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Is Ai-chan gonna come between the two??? If it's gonna she's gonna try steal Yossi away from Miki..... I APPROVE!! :w00t:.. hehe sorry Miki :grin:
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(http://img453.imageshack.us/img453/4797/img2006021105d4534ag5.th.jpg) (http://img453.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img2006021105d4534ag5.jpg)
Look right above the belt at the mysterious fabric that peeks out from the top of her jeans.
:ding:
Man, Yoshizawa's ass looks fantastic in those pants.
I can imagine it :drool:
Is Takahashi a little bit jealous? XD
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*comes out from realm of lurkage* I've been following this since the start of Memoir and just wanted to say hi and that you are amazingly amazing and beyond awesome. :mon hi: :mon inluv:
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Wow, it's been THREE WHOLE DAYS SINCE I POSTED A NEW PART! I should get a medal or something :lol:
PART 7 - TAKAHASHI
Aichan's involved in this? :? Or is she just a vehicle used to further something along that will come later on in the story?
Everything is a vehicle to further something along... usually it's just to further along my insanity though. :k-thrilled:
Man, Yoshizawa's ass looks fantastic in those pants.
Even though it's been a while since she graduated, Yossi's still a :pimp:.
Pimp Yossi = Win.
And yes, it DID make me wonder if Aichan was "the other person" that was in the PROLOGUE. However, I'm trying to stay calm about it, because we all know you'll just go ":wahaha:" anyway. :P
....
:hiakhiakhiak:
better?
Is Ai-chan gonna come between the two??? If it's gonna she's gonna try steal Yossi away from Miki..... I APPROVE!! :w00t:.. hehe sorry Miki :grin:
See, JFC, now HERE is where I use this.
:wahaha:
Man, Yoshizawa's ass looks fantastic in those pants.
I can imagine it :drool:
Can't we all?
BTW, your avatar is to die for. :luvluv2:
*comes out from realm of lurkage* I've been following this since the start of Memoir and just wanted to say hi and that you are amazingly amazing and beyond awesome. :mon hi: :mon inluv:
YAY! Thank you so much! I love getting comments back, so thank you so much for posting!! :love:
And yes, ladies and gents, this does mean that part 8 is coming up!
Part 8... now with Yocchan POV! :bingo:
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PART 8 - YOSHIZAWA - JUNE 5TH - THREE HOURS LATER
"I'm shocked," Miki said flatly when I put the plate down in front of her. I laughed a little and sat down across from her.
"I told you I could cook," I said, feeling a bit defensive.
"Yeah, and I tell people I can draw," she muttered, taking a bite of my homemade yakiniku. "oh my gaaaaah," Miki groaned, flopping back in her chair.
"Judging from where I've seen that face before, I take it you really like the food?" I smirked. She glared at me. "So, did you like the movie, my little carnivore?" I asked innocently.
"What movie?"
"Remember on the couch when you had your hand up my shirt?"
"Yes," Miki replied with a grin.
"Remember the background noise?"
"...Vaguely."
"That was the movie."
"Ah."
"Yes, ah," I laughed. I studied my food intently. "Uh, so was today a good date?" Miki paused and looked at me curiously.
"...Are you NERVOUS!?" she exclaimed at last. I could feel a flush starting to creep onto my cheeks.
"It's just a question, ok?"
"You ARE!" she said triumphantly. "You're nervous because we went out and called it a date!"
"Well, think about it!" I retorted. "I became an idol at 14! I haven't exactly been on a real date before much less planned one!"
"I would be laughing so hard at you right now if it wasn't for the meat," Miki replied, taking another bite. I glared at her. Her face softened and she reached across the table to take my hand. "I'm sorry. It's been a great day and if this really was our first date, I'd seriously be trying to get into your pants right now."
"And that would be different how?" I laughed. Miki wiggled her eyebrows suggestively at me before returning to her all-important meal.
"So, I, um, have some news," I said with a smile.
"This can't be good," Miki said flatly, putting her chopsticks down.
"Why not?"
"Because I know you. Out with it."
"I'm kind of going out of town for a few days to tape a TV segment..." I said finally.
"...And?"
"...and by 'out of town' I mean 'out of the country'."
"...And?" Miki raised an eyebrow.
"...and by 'out of the country' I mean 'to Spain'."
"SPAIN!? Why are you being sent to Spain?" Miki exclaimed. I stared at my food.
"I think this needs more salt. I'll get the salt."
"Yoshizawa!" I sat back down in my chair. "Stop this beating-around-the-bush bullshit. Spill."
"I'm going to Spain with a 12-year-old girl to stalk Ronaldinho," I admitted. She burst out laughing.
"Are you joking!?"
"Nope!" I grinned, bouncing in my chair a little.
"You're adorable when you're hyper," Miki laughed. "Fine, have fun. Don't scar that poor kid."
"I wouldn't do that!" I protested.
"And don't do something stupid like scream 'I LOVE YOU!' at him from across the field, ok?"
"Please, like I would really do something like that," I retorted. Miki shook her head and returned to her food. I smiled.
My God, she's absolutely gorgeous, I thought to myself. I sat there, gazing at her, suddenly in complete awe of the fact that this funny, beautiful, talented, sexy woman was not only with me, but apparently in love with me as well. She glanced up and caught me staring at her.
"You ok?" Miki took a sip of her drink
"You're so beautiful," I said softly. "I love you." Miki's eyes widened and she started coughing. "Sorry," I laughed. "I didn't mean to get you all choked up."
"Don't do that!" she gasped out at last.
"Do what?"
"Suddenly get all romantic. It's disorienting."
"You make it sound like I suddenly busted out with my Mr. Moonlight monologue," I laughed.
"That wouldn't be disorienting. It would be disturbing."
"Mmm, baby..." I began.
"Don't you even."
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almond, I think I love you lol xDD
"And don't do something stupid like scream 'I LOVE YOU!' at him from across the field, ok?"
"Please, like I would really do something like that," I retorted. Miki shook her head and returned to her food. I smiled.
Oh, she wouldn't.... "Ronnieee~~~~~" That was lovely :P
"You're so beautiful," I said softly. "I love you." Miki's eyes widened and she started coughing. "Sorry," I laughed. "I didn't mean to get you all choked up."
"Don't do that!" she gasped out at last.
"Do what?"
"Suddenly get all romantic. It's disorienting."
"You make it sound like I suddenly busted out with my Mr. Moonlight monologue," I laughed.
"That wouldn't be disorienting. It would be disturbing."
"Mmm, baby..." I began.
"Don't you even."
Kawaiiiii, I really bursted out of laughing!!
Just what I need before to go to sleep :grin: Specially, after a boring study day. Nice new fic, nice chapter :wub::wub:
I'll be waiting ^^
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Thanks for the update ^_^
I think that we can go to sleep now, right? XD
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Yeah...here the same I can go bed with a big smile on face :nya:
:shock: :shock: :shock:
Almost forgot I have homework :scared: :scared: I suppose I can't go sleep yet :gyaaah:
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My God, she's absolutely gorgeous, I thought to myself. I sat there, gazing at her, suddenly in complete awe of the fact that this funny, beautiful, talented, sexy woman was not only with me, but apparently in love with me as well. She glanced up and caught me staring at her.
"You ok?" Miki took a sip of her drink
"You're so beautiful," I said softly. "I love you." Miki's eyes widened and she started coughing. "Sorry," I laughed. "I didn't mean to get you all choked up."
Okay, can someone, uh, explain to me why suddenly I feel like I envy Miki?
"Don't do that!" she gasped out at last.
"Do what?"
"Suddenly get all romantic. It's disorienting."
"You make it sound like I suddenly busted out with my Mr. Moonlight monologue," I laughed.
"That wouldn't be disorienting. It would be disturbing."
"Mmm, baby..." I began.
"Don't you even."
Point!!!! Aww, almond... now you make me laughing everytime I watch or hear the mr moonlight monologue because it will definitely reminds me of this YoMiki conversation.... :rofl:
Thanks for the excellent update....
Waiting for more...
Hehe...
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Just what I need before to go to sleep :grin:
I think that we can go to sleep now, right? XD
Yeah...here the same I can go bed with a big smile on face :nya:
Apparently, I'm the bedtime story of choice? :lol:
Okay, can someone, uh, explain to me why suddenly I feel like I envy Miki?
Yossi=hot.
Point!!!! Aww, almond... now you make me laughing everytime I watch or hear the mr moonlight monologue because it will definitely reminds me of this YoMiki conversation.... :rofl:
I already laugh at the Mr. Moonlight monologue because of the Namida making of and Miki's lame attempt at it on her live radio show with post-grad Yossi. XD
Anyway! Yesh. manamin's in love with this next part, btw. So, I shall post it shortly~!
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PART 9 - FUJIMOTO - JUNE 5TH - ONE HOUR LATER
"Stop that."
"Stop what?" Yossi blinked innocently.
"Stop feeding An-kun your leftovers under the table," I replied.
"I honestly have no idea what you're..." Yossi trailed off as the unmistakable sound of "Mini Moni. Telephone Ring Ring Ring!" filled the air. I groaned and got up to get my phone. "Yaguchi?" she asked knowingly.
"I don't even know how she keeps getting near my damn phone," I muttered. "What the hell... 'Unknown'?"
"Answer it anyway," Yossi replied. "I've got to clean up, so you might as well amuse yourself by yelling at a random stranger." I laughed.
"Hello?" I said sweetly in my best former-office-lady voice. Yossi snickered as she walked into the kitchen.
"...eh!? Do I have the wrong number?"
"...oh, right, international numbers show up as 'unknown', huh?" I muttered.
"Ah! It IS you!" Makoto exclaimed.
"Yeah, yeah, what do you want?"
"I didn't interrupt anything did I?" she asked with a suggestive laugh.
"Nah, Yocchan's in the kitchen."
"Perfect! I need you to do something for me!"
"The hell. Why?"
"Because I helped you get out of Morning and it'll be hilarious," she replied with an audible grin. I groaned.
"You're exhaustingly perky, you know that?" Makoto just laughed. "Fine. What?"
"Ok, so my classmate showed me this awesome website called your tubing or something."
"Your Tubing?! Have you been drinking?"
"No, that's not the right name... whatever, it doesn't matter. So, anyway, it has all these old tv shows and stuff and - "
"Why do I care about this crap?" I complained, leaning over in my chair to stare at Yossi's butt as she washed the dishes.
"Trust me! Ok, so there was this old Utaban episode with Yoshizawa on it."
"And you relived your early days of fangirlish wonder?" I asked distractedly. Yossi had started singing to herself and halfassedly dancing in front of the sink.
"AND you need to do me a favor."
"Yes, you mentioned that already. Are you sure you haven't been drinking?"
"Only a little, but that's beside the point. I need you to call Yoshizawa 'Tomiko'."
"...huh?"
"Trust me! It will be fantastic!"
"Why To-"
"Just do it!" Makoto cut me off excitedly. I rolled my eyes.
"HEY, TOMIKO!" I called into the kitchen. Yossi visibly jumped and dropped the plate into the sink, splashing water all over herself. She whirled around, blushing horribly. She looked at me in shock, then her eyes focused on the phone in my hand. She narrowed her eyes and started towards me.
"Who is that?" she demanded.
"That was HILARIOUS!" I exclaimed into the phone, getting up from my chair to try and escape the approaching attack.
"What'd she do? What'd she do?" Makoto exclaimed excitedly.
"She dropped a plate in the sink and got soapy water all over herself and turned bright red!" I replied gleefully.
"Is that Kei!?" Yossi tried to grab the phone from me. "Kei, that better not be you! If it is, I'm so telling everyone about - "
"It's not Yasuda!" I laughed, wiggling out of her grasp again. "What is up with the 'Tomiko' thing anyway?" I asked Makoto.
"She said on that Utaban she wanted to be called 'Tomiko' by her boyfriend!" Makoto snickered.
"You're KIDDING!" I exclaimed as I was finally captured with an arm around my waist. Yossi easily picked me up with one arm and took the phone out of my hand with the other.
"Maki!?" she yelled into the phone, holding me against her. She glanced over at me. "MAKOTO!? What the hell!? Where did you even.... DON'T CALL ME THAT, DAMN!....Hello?!" She pulled the phone away from her ear and stared at it for a minute. "She hung up on me."
"Ah, is that so, Tomiko?" I grinned. She smacked my stomach and released me.
"Yeah, seriously. No." she groaned, looking down at her soapy shirt.
"Aw, you changed your mind?" I snickered as she tossed me my phone.
"I was like 15. I've changed my mind about a lot of things since then," she replied, pulling her shirt off over her head and headed back into the kitchen.
"If you're trying to distract me by taking your shirt off..." Yossi turned and glanced at me over her shoulder with a smirk. "..It's totally working," I finished with a grin.
"Just don't snap my bra, ok?" she laughed.
"Then don't put the idea in my head!" I replied. I glanced at my watch. "Wow, I've gotta get home."
"...what?"
"I have a meeting first thing tomorrow. I have to go home," I replied, picking up An-kun. I walked over to the couch to grab Hima-chan.
"Wait, wait, wait, wait, wait..." Yossi sputtered. "You're leaving!?"
"Yes, that's generally what going home means."
"Why can't you stay over again?" she asked, pouting a little.
"Because I don't have clothes here and, well, I love you, but I'm not wearing a tracksuit to a meeting," I replied, walking over to the door.
"Wait, you're seriously leaving?"
"Yes."
"All that work and I'm not even getting laid?" She looked so affronted that I burst out laughing. I shifted the dogs in my arms and managed to open the door.
"I told you before. Fujimoto Miki is not some sort of For-A-Good-Time-Call Girl! I don't put out on the first date!" I blew her a kiss and walked out the door, kicking it shut behind me.
"YOU SUCK, FUJIMOTO!" I heard her yell through the door. I laughed to myself as I walked down the hallway.
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Gee, I wonder what newly subbed Utaban I watched this weekend :lol:
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Haha, that IS the sort of chapter one falls in love with :heart:
And you almost killed me by not posting one for the three days before :p
And Miki how mean, I'm with Yossie, so much work and nothing in return... If you have no clothes there Miki then move in, makes everyones life easier! *cough* :D
Oh and do link me to the Utaban, pleeeease ;)
:otomerika:
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Oh and do link me to the Utaban, pleeeease ;)
Baby! Koi ni Knock Out! Utaban (http://www.hello-online.org/index.php?act=tracker&CODE=details&torrent=9298)
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No way!!!! :shock:
I have finished to watch that episode just 2 hours ago!!! :wahaha: Hilarious and Yossie so cute!!!
Tomiko :wriggly: Takaki :mon innocent: Ma-kun :mon innocent:
Ahh...Makoto always in the best moments!!!
Well...now Yossie is suffering but when she go to Spain someone else is gonna suffer :mon lol:
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And Miki how mean, I'm with Yossie, so much work and nothing in return...
That was SO my idea. >_>
M: "Oh my god, you have to make Miki flounce out after the date all, 'I told you! I'm not easy! Teehee!' "
A: AHAHAHAHA! I so should!
M: DO IT!
:hiakhiakhiak:
We also discussed the other day how 'Makoto discovers YouTube' sounded like the title to a bad lemon. But anyway.....
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Ah, Tomiko :shy1: :luvluv2:
"If you're trying to distract me by taking your shirt off..." Yossi turned and glanced at me over her shoulder with a smirk. "..It's totally working," I finished with a grin.
Of course it's working XD
"Then don't put the idea in my head!" I replied. I glanced at my watch. "Wow, I've gotta get home."
"...what?"
WHAT??!! :shock:
Gaaah!! Miki, go back to Yossi! Now! Don't leave a half naked beautiful woman alone! Especially if it's Yossi :inlove:
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*sigh* Oh how I missed da cracky fluff. :D
PART 8 - YOSHIZAWA - TWO HOURS LATER
"I'm shocked," Miki said flatly when I put the plate down in front of her. I laughed a little and sat down across from her.
"I told you I could cook," I said, feeling a bit defensive.
"Yeah, and I tell people I can draw," she muttered, taking a bite of my homemade yakiniku. "oh my gaaaaah," Miki groaned, flopping back in her chair.
Oh geez, Yossi made yakiniku for Miki!? :inlove:
"Judging from where I've seen that face before, I take it you really like the food?" I smirked. She glared at me.
:twisted:
"So, did you like the movie, my little carnivore?" I asked innocently.
"What movie?"
"Remember on the couch when you had your hand up my shirt?"
"Yes," Miki replied with a grin.
"Remember the background noise?"
"...Vaguely."
"That was the movie."
"Ah."
There was a movie? :lol:
Groping >>>>> movie. :pimp:
"Uh, so was today a good date?" Miki paused and looked at me curiously.
"...Are you NERVOUS!?" she exclaimed at last. I could feel a flush starting to creep onto my cheeks.
"It's just a question, ok?"
"You ARE!" she said triumphantly. "You're nervous because we went out and called it a date!"
"Well, think about it!" I retorted. "I became an idol at 14! I haven't exactly been on a real date before much less planned one!"
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.... :nya:
"I would be laughing so hard at you right now if it wasn't for the meat," Miki replied, taking another bite. I glared at her. Her face softened and she reached across the table to take my hand. "I'm sorry. It's been a great day and if this really was our first date, I'd seriously be trying to get into your pants right now."
But Miki's usually trying to do that anyway.
Hell, she's probably thinking about it right now. :wahaha:
"And that would be different how?" I laughed. Miki wiggled her eyebrows suggestively at me before returning to her all-important meal.
(http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c340/J-F-C/eyebrow.gif)
"So, I, um, have some news," I said with a smile.
Ah, so was the date to "soften the blow" so to speak? Yossi wanted to make it easier to tell Miki this mystery news she has? :?
"I'm going to Spain with a 12-year-old girl to stalk Ronaldinho," I admitted. She burst out laughing.
"Are you joking!?"
"Nope!" I grinned, bouncing in my chair a little.
"You're adorable when you're hyper," Miki laughed.
/me pictures Yossi bouncing in her chair from excitement.
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Yeah...that IS damn adorable. :wriggly:
"And don't do something stupid like scream 'I LOVE YOU!' at him from across the field, ok?"
"Please, like I would really do something like that," I retorted.
Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuh-huh. Suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuure she wouldn't. :roll:
"You ok?" Miki took a sip of her drink
"You're so beautiful," I said softly. "I love you." Miki's eyes widened and she started coughing. "Sorry," I laughed. "I didn't mean to get you all choked up."
"Don't do that!" she gasped out at last.
"Do what?"
"Suddenly get all romantic. It's disorienting."
Oh c'mon...Miki loves it. :mon misch: :mon lovelaff:
"You make it sound like I suddenly busted out with my Mr. Moonlight monologue," I laughed.
"That wouldn't be disorienting. It would be disturbing."
"Mmm, baby..." I began.
"Don't you even."
:hiakhiakhiak:
PART 9 - FUJIMOTO - ONE HOUR LATER
"Stop feeding An-kun your leftovers under the table," I replied.
"I honestly have no idea what you're..." Yossi trailed off as the unmistakable sound of "Mini Moni. Telephone Ring Ring Ring!" filled the air. I groaned and got up to get my phone. "Yaguchi?" she asked knowingly.
"I don't even know how she keeps getting near my damn phone," I muttered.
She probably wouldn't if Miki wouldn't leave her phone lying around. :yep: Mind you, the song WOULD make a cute ringtone. :oops:
And lucky An-kun getting the leftover yakiniku.
"...eh!? Do I have the wrong number?"
"...oh, right, international numbers show up as 'unknown', huh?" I muttered.
"Ah! It IS you!" Makoto exclaimed.
Makoto exclaimed?
I detect another segment for "MIKI-SAMA'S OMAKE CORNER"! XD
"I didn't interrupt anything did I?" she asked with a suggestive laugh.
"Nah, Yocchan's in the kitchen."
So? She still might have interrupted something. Was the kitchen on Miki's "list"? (http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c340/J-F-C/eyebrow.gif)
"Perfect! I need you to do something for me!"
"The hell. Why?"
"Because I helped you get out of Morning and it'll be hilarious," she replied with an audible grin. I groaned.
Mmmmmmm...do tell. :)
"Ok, so my classmate showed me this awesome website called your tubing or something."
"Your Tubing?! Have you been drinking?"
YouTube? Must be. Mako was probably watching vids from "the good ol' days" and came across something she wants Miki and Yossi to see.
"Why do I care about this crap?" I complained, leaning over in my chair to stare at Yossi's butt as she washed the dishes.
Yep. Gotta stare at something while you're on the phone. :)
"Trust me! Ok, so there was this old Utaban episode with Yoshizawa on it."
"And you relived your early days of fangirlish wonder?" I asked distractedly. Yossi had started singing to herself and halfassedly dancing in front of the sink.
Yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyep...gotta find something to stare at while you're on the phone. :)
Are you sure you haven't been drinking?"
"Only a little, but that's beside the point. I need you to call Yoshizawa 'Tomiko'."
"...huh?"
"Trust me! It will be fantastic!"
Considering how closely Miki had been following Yossi's career, I guess she must have missed that episode. :P
"Why To-"
"Just do it!" Makoto cut me off excitedly. I rolled my eyes.
"HEY, TOMIKO!" I called into the kitchen. Yossi visibly jumped and dropped the plate into the sink, splashing water all over herself. She whirled around, blushing horribly. She looked at me in shock, then her eyes focused on the phone in my hand. She narrowed her eyes and started towards me.
/me sings to army march tune:
SUSHI! TEMPURA! FUKAGAWADON! SUSHI! TEMPURA! FUKAGAWADON! :wahaha:
"Is that Kei!?" Yossi tried to grab the phone from me. "Kei, that better not be you! If it is, I'm so telling everyone about - "
"It's not Yasuda!" I laughed, wiggling out of her grasp again.
Awwwwwwww Miki! Why'd she have to spoil it, we were gonna get some dirt on Kemeko! :kekeke:
I was finally captured with an arm around my waist. Yossi easily picked me up with one arm and took the phone out of my hand with the other.
Oooooooooooh kinky. Yossi's gotten all "caveman-ish" in her strength. :w00t:
"MAKOTO!? What the hell!? Where did you even.... DON'T CALL ME THAT, DAMN!....Hello?!" She pulled the phone away from her ear and stared at it for a minute. "She hung up on me."
"Ah, is that so, Tomiko?" I grinned. She smacked my stomach and released me.
"Yeah, seriously. No." she groaned, looking down at her soapy shirt.
Yossi + soapy shirt = HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWT! :jerk:
"I was like 15. I've changed my mind about a lot of things since then," she replied, pulling her shirt off over her head and headed back into the kitchen.
"If you're trying to distract me by taking your shirt off..." Yossi turned and glanced at me over her shoulder with a smirk. "..It's totally working," I finished with a grin.
"Just don't snap my bra, ok?" she laughed.
Yeah...dayum hawt. :yep:
I glanced at my watch. "Wow, I've gotta get home."
"...what?"
"I have a meeting first thing tomorrow. I have to go home," I replied, picking up An-kun. I walked over to the couch to grab Hima-chan.
Eh? :O There's a shirtless Yossi who's ass looks great in whatever pants she's wearing standing in front of her...and Miki's going home? :dizzy:
"Why can't you stay over again?" she asked, pouting a little.
"Because I don't have clothes here and, well, I love you, but I'm not wearing a tracksuit to a meeting," I replied, walking over to the door.
Okay, Miki does sort of have a point here. :D Tracksuits are fine for rehearsals and all, but if it's a meeting, she should look a bit more professional.
Still though...couldn't she stay over for...a while longer? She could always go home...later. :hump:
"All that work and I'm not even getting laid?" She looked so affronted that I burst out laughing.
:mon spit: :OMG:
I told you before. Fujimoto Miki is not some sort of For-A-Good-Time-Call Girl! I don't put out on the first date!" I blew her a kiss and walked out the door, kicking it shut behind me.
"YOU SUCK, FUJIMOTO!" I heard her yell through the door. I laughed to myself as I walked down the hallway.
OSNAP! :on lol:
Technically, Yossi DID make a point that this was their first actual date. And well, yeah, girls that are worth it don't put out on the first date.
Besides, considering how Miki is, in all likelihood Yossi won't have to wait long. :mon thumb:
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"Stop feeding An-kun your leftovers under the table," I replied.
"I honestly have no idea what you're..." Yossi trailed off as the unmistakable sound of "Mini Moni. Telephone Ring Ring Ring!" filled the air. I groaned and got up to get my phone. "Yaguchi?" she asked knowingly.
"I don't even know how she keeps getting near my damn phone," I muttered.
She probably wouldn't if Miki wouldn't leave her phone lying around. :yep: Mind you, the song WOULD make a cute ringtone. :oops:
That'd be my ringtone, actually. <_<;
The opening and "MINIMONI. TEREFON da! RIN RIN RIN; denwa wo kakemashou RIN RIN RIN."
I shall never mistake my phone for someone else's. :hee:
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And Miki how mean, I'm with Yossie, so much work and nothing in return...
Well...now Yossie is suffering
Gaaah!! Miki, go back to Yossi! Now! Don't leave a half naked beautiful woman alone! Especially if it's Yossi :inlove:
Still though...couldn't she stay over for...a while longer? She could always go home...later. :hump:
FOR THE RECORD! That is all manamin's fault. I was going to have Miki come back and be all "ha ha, just kidding. take your pants off." but manamin convinced me it was funnier as is.
"...eh!? Do I have the wrong number?"
"...oh, right, international numbers show up as 'unknown', huh?" I muttered.
"Ah! It IS you!" Makoto exclaimed.
Makoto exclaimed?
I detect another segment for "MIKI-SAMA'S OMAKE CORNER"! XD
....ok, I totally don't get this. :dunno:
Makoto called Miki. Miki answered all weird and Mako was all "Do I have the wrong number?". Miki recognized Mako's voice as was all "oh, right, international." and then Makoto was all "oh, normal voice! it IS Fujimoto"
"I didn't interrupt anything did I?" she asked with a suggestive laugh.
"Nah, Yocchan's in the kitchen."
So? She still might have interrupted something. Was the kitchen on Miki's "list"? (http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c340/J-F-C/eyebrow.gif)
YEP!
You in the storage closet, you on my couch, you in my bedroom, you in my shower, you on my kitchen table, you on the floor outside your bedroom, you IN your bedroom, you against that wall over there, you in that empty dressing room during Rika's last concert, you in the taxi ride back to my place, you just inside my front door, you in my bedroom again, and, hopefully, you on your couch." I grinned and let my hands illustrate my point.
"I think you forgot a few," you replied. Yeah, like you on my desk chair, you under your kitchen table, you in the locker room after that last Gatas game, you on the Maido Ari set after hours...
Considering how closely Miki had been following Yossi's career, I guess she must have missed that episode. :P
I thought about having Miki remember, but figured it was too farfetched that she watched and remembered that episode considering it was, what, 6 years ago?
SUSHI! TEMPURA! FUKAGAWADON! SUSHI! TEMPURA! FUKAGAWADON! :wahaha:
TABETAI NA!
Ok, well, this does mean new part soon! I just need to, um, eat dinner and then I'll be posting it. (I almost forgot to eat dinner last night lol)
Whoo!
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Yay, new stuff! I swear, I almost died at the image of Yossie actually bouncing in her chair. :k-inlove: Post the next part! ..SOON! :wahaha:
Ok, random question, does anyone else find this REALLY amusing? ---> :otomerika:
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BTW, now that I have the entire timeline figured out, I've changed the chapter indicator thingys to have the actual date on them instead of just "___ days later".
I'm trying my damnedest to fit the actual timeline of reality into here, but I'm not perfect, so there may be some things I've missed.
Oh, and since we're talking timelines... as of right now, the storyline ends at the end of August :wahaha:
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PART 10 - YOSHIZAWA - JUNE 15TH
"What the hell is it?" Miki answered sleepily.
"Hello to you too!" I grinned broadly into the cell phone the company had lent me to use.
"Yocchan!?" she exclaimed. I could almost see her sitting up in bed, smiling and rubbing her eyes.
"Of course! Who else would be calling you at this hour?"
"Oh, well, I DO run that phone sex line out of my apartment now," she deadpanned. "But since I like you, there's no charge." I coughed and glanced over at my young charge.
"Uh, right, so I'm in my hotel room in Spain with Megumi," I said pointedly.
"Ah, so you don't want to hear about what I'm wearing?"
"Probably not a good - "
"Or more specifically, what I'm not?" Miki continued, unfazed. I coughed again.
"Yoshizawa, did you need some water?" Megumi asked, glancing up from her scrapbook. I laughed nervously.
"No, I'm fine. Thank you," I replied.
"Fine with what?" Miki demanded in my ear. "I'm certainly not fine with you halfway across the world instead of here in my comfy bed. Preferably naked."
"Would you stop that?" I hissed into the phone. Miki started cackling.
"Is that your boyfriend?" I froze and turned to look at Megumi's question young face. I laughed nervously.
"Of course not!" I exclaimed a little too loudly. "Idols don't have boyfriends!"
"What was that, Tomiko?" Miki asked. My eyes widened and I glared at the phone in my hand.
"What did I tell you about that!?" I whispered fiercely, trying to fight back the blush that was threatening my features. Megumi was staring at me oddly.
"Yocchan, if you don't want the girl to hear you, why don't you go down to the lobby or something?" Miki asked.
"Uh, because then anyone can hear me?" I replied.
"Uh, you're in Spain?" Miki mimicked me. "I doubt many people there will A) understand Japanese and B) give a crap what you're saying if they do." I blinked. Oh.
"Um, Megumi, I'm going to finish my call downstairs, ok? Did you need anything while I'm down there?"
"No, thank you," the young girl replied. I smiled and walked out the door.
"Fine, I'm going to the lobby, ok?" I said into the phone.
"Good. So how was your day? Any luck?"
"YES!" I said excitedly. A man in the hallway stared at me strangely. "Not only did we SEE Ronaldinho, we MET him!"
"You're kidding."
"NO! He signed my shirt AND shook my hand!" I all but squealed. Miki laughed.
"You thought to bring a shirt for him to sign?"
"No, I mean he, um, signed my shirt. As in - "
"You let some guy write on your boobs?" Miki said in a strange voice.
"First of all, it was RONALDINHO. Not some guy."
"Mmhmm..." Miki didn't sound convinced.
"And second, I was good and pulled my shirt away from my chest so, no, he did not touch my boobs at all, ok?"
"Good."
"...was that a little Fujimoto jealousy I heard?" I teased.
"Of course," she said flatly. "Only I get to touch your boobs."
"Oh, I see."
"And your legs... and your stomach... and your shoulders... and your cute little butt... and your back... ooh, and your arms too, especially when I can see your muscles... and of course, it should go without saying, your - "
"I'm still in public here, Miki!" I cut her off, glancing nervously around the lobby.
"Does that mean I can't tell you what I'm wearing now?" Miki chuckled.
"Don't make me hang up on you, Fujimoto."
"I'd like to see you try, Tomiko."
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"Is that your boyfriend?" I froze and turned to look at Megumi's question young face. I laughed nervously.
"Of course not!" I exclaimed a little too loudly. "Idols don't have boyfriends!"
Duh. Girlfriends.
"You let some guy write on your boobs?" Miki said in a strange voice.
...I'm totally going to randomly scream that at lunch tomorrow. :wahaha:
Keep up the good work! :luvuluvu:
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And Miki how mean, I'm with Yossie, so much work and nothing in return...
Well...now Yossie is suffering
Gaaah!! Miki, go back to Yossi! Now! Don't leave a half naked beautiful woman alone! Especially if it's Yossi :inlove:
Still though...couldn't she stay over for...a while longer? She could always go home...later. :hump:
FOR THE RECORD! That is all manamin's fault. I was going to have Miki come back and be all "ha ha, just kidding. take your pants off." but manamin convinced me it was funnier as is.
:wahaha:
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That'd be my ringtone, actually. <_<;
The opening and "MINIMONI. TEREFON da! RIN RIN RIN; denwa wo kakemashou RIN RIN RIN."
I shall never mistake my phone for someone else's. :hee:
Ditto, UNIQUE PHONE RINGS FTW!!! (mine is LU LU LU). :D
FOR THE RECORD! That is all manamin's fault. I was going to have Miki come back and be all "ha ha, just kidding. take your pants off." but manamin convinced me it was funnier as is.
:lol: Well, it's because leaving Yossi hangin' like that is mean, which, since it's Miki doing it, makes it funny. :yep:
....ok, I totally don't get this. :dunno:
Makoto called Miki. Miki answered all weird and Mako was all "Do I have the wrong number?". Miki recognized Mako's voice as was all "oh, right, international." and then Makoto was all "oh, normal voice! it IS Fujimoto"
Ah, it might just be the way I read it. I didn't realize that you were doing the "2 people speak at the same time during the phone convo" thing since the dialogue lines weren't differentiated (for example, Mako's lines weren't in italics to differentiate them from Miki's lines). Also, since it was Miki's POV at the time, it just seemed a little awkward to me to all of a sudden see "Makoto exclaimed", since that's something that would be seen from a 3rd person style narrative. Normally one would expect a little thought balloon where Miki would actually identify the calling by saying something like "it sounded like Makoto" or something like that. But whatever, no worries. All this rambling is keeping me from the new fluff!
"What the hell is it?" Miki answered sleepily.
"Hello to you too!" I grinned broadly into the cell phone the company had lent me to use.
"Yocchan!?" she exclaimed. I could almost see her sitting up in bed, smiling and rubbing her eyes.
"Of course! Who else would be calling you at this hour?"
Ah, time differences can be such a bitch. And yet...AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW Yossi's calling Miki~! :wub:
"Oh, well, I DO run that phone sex line out of my apartment now," she deadpanned. "But since I like you, there's no charge." I coughed and glanced over at my young charge.
"Uh, right, so I'm in my hotel room in Spain with Megumi," I said pointedly.
Ah, but is Megumi actually with her RIGHT NOW? She might be in the bathroom, or out cold from the jetlag. :twisted:
"Ah, so you don't want to hear about what I'm wearing?"
"Probably not a good - "
"Or more specifically, what I'm not?" Miki continued, unfazed. I coughed again.
/me raises hand.
Can I hear? :w00t:
"Yoshizawa, did you need some water?" Megumi asked, glancing up from her scrapbook. I laughed nervously.
"No, I'm fine. Thank you," I replied.
Ah, so the kid's awake. Damn. No phone rabu-rabu for Yossi. :mon exhaust:
Of course, Miki's going to have to take full advantage of this and make Yossi squirm. After all, she DID wake her up in the middle of the night. :twisted:
"I'm certainly not fine with you halfway across the world instead of here in my comfy bed. Preferably naked."
"Would you stop that?" I hissed into the phone. Miki started cackling.
See? :wahaha:
"Is that your boyfriend?" I froze and turned to look at Megumi's question young face. I laughed nervously.
"Of course not!" I exclaimed a little too loudly. "Idols don't have boyfriends!"
No one said anything about girlfriends though. :rockon:
"What was that, Tomiko?" Miki asked. My eyes widened and I glared at the phone in my hand.
"What did I tell you about that!?" I whispered fiercely, trying to fight back the blush that was threatening my features. Megumi was staring at me oddly.
Man, Yossi's definitley gonna kill Mako for telling Miki about that. :hiakhiakhiak:
"Uh, because then anyone can hear me?" I replied.
"Uh, you're in Spain?" Miki mimicked me. "I doubt many people there will A) understand Japanese and B) give a crap what you're saying if they do." I blinked. Oh.
Point...Miki. :mon thumb:
"Um, Megumi, I'm going to finish my call downstairs, ok? Did you need anything while I'm down there?"
"No, thank you," the young girl replied. I smiled and walked out the door.
"Fine, I'm going to the lobby, ok?" I said into the phone.
Now all Yossi needs is a closet for some...*ahem*...privacy. :mon lol:
"Good. So how was your day? Any luck?"
"YES!" I said excitedly. A man in the hallway stared at me strangely. "Not only did we SEE Ronaldinho, we MET him!"
...
He signed my shirt AND shook my hand!" I all but squealed. Miki laughed.
"You thought to bring a shirt for him to sign?"
Seriously, if you're out stalking...I mean, looking for a chance to meet a celeb, are you going to BRING a separate shirt for him/her to sign? I don't think so.
"No, I mean he, um, signed my shirt. As in - "
As in the one she was wearing at the time. Miki would have done the same thing had she been there. :yep:
"First of all, it was RONALDINHO. Not some guy."
"Mmhmm..." Miki didn't sound convinced.
"And second, I was good and pulled my shirt away from my chest so, no, he did not touch my boobs at all, ok?"
"Good."
Indeed. Only Miki-sama should be touching Yossi's boobs. :pimp:
"...was that a little Fujimoto jealousy I heard?" I teased.
"Of course," she said flatly. "Only I get to touch your boobs."
"Oh, I see."
Damn I must be psychic or something. :hee:
"And your legs... and your stomach... and your shoulders... and your cute little butt... and your back... ooh, and your arms too, especially when I can see your muscles... and of course, it should go without saying, your - "
"I'm still in public here, Miki!" I cut her off, glancing nervously around the lobby.
Well in that case, find a closet. 8)
"Does that mean I can't tell you what I'm wearing now?" Miki chuckled.
Please, don't let that stop her.
Dozo. ;D
"Don't make me hang up on you, Fujimoto."
"I'd like to see you try, Tomiko."
Yeah Yossi, everyone knows that Miki's irresistable, even if it's just over the phone. That and, we all know that it's hard to resist asking her what she's wearing (or more importantly, as she said earlier, what she's NOT wearing). :jerk:
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"Is that your boyfriend?" I froze and turned to look at Megumi's question young face. I laughed nervously.
"Of course not!" I exclaimed a little too loudly. "Idols don't have boyfriends!"
That's right. They have girlfriends. :yep:
"Of course," she said flatly. "Only I get to touch your boobs."
"Oh, I see."
"And your legs... and your stomach... and your shoulders... and your cute little butt... and your back... ooh, and your arms too, especially when I can see your muscles... and of course, it should go without saying, your - "
Ah, how I wish I was Miki :drool:
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Such a looong phone call... the company is going to pay too much money. Spain-Japan calls are expensive :P
Yossi in Spain talking with Miki... :cry:
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"Idols don't have boyfriends!"
Duh. Girlfriends.
That's right. They have girlfriends. :yep:
No one said anything about girlfriends though. :rockon:
Y'all are hilarious. :on lol:
....ok, I totally don't get this. :dunno:
Makoto called Miki. Miki answered all weird and Mako was all "Do I have the wrong number?". Miki recognized Mako's voice as was all "oh, right, international." and then Makoto was all "oh, normal voice! it IS Fujimoto"
Ah, it might just be the way I read it. I didn't realize that you were doing the "2 people speak at the same time during the phone convo" thing since the dialogue lines weren't differentiated (for example, Mako's lines weren't in italics to differentiate them from Miki's lines). Also, since it was Miki's POV at the time, it just seemed a little awkward to me to all of a sudden see "Makoto exclaimed", since that's something that would be seen from a 3rd person style narrative. Normally one would expect a little thought balloon where Miki would actually identify the calling by saying something like "it sounded like Makoto" or something like that. But whatever, no worries. All this rambling is keeping me from the new fluff!
OHHH. Gotcha. I'll figure something out to make it more clear.
See? :wahaha:
Damn I must be psychic or something. :hee:
What have I said about being IN my head?!
...actually, that must be very awkward for you at times considering the randomass thoughts I get at work when I'm zoning out XD
OK, yesh, this does mean new part coming up soon. Sorry for the lame comments reply. I really do appreciate every single one and they honestly do help me when writing later chapters. I come back to the thread and sometimes read all the comments from the beginning for ideas and such. :sweat:
Anyway, part 11 coming soon - Fujimoto P O V ~!
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WEDGE! :otomerika:
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omgah, surprising wedge! :lol:
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PART 11 - FUJIMOTO - JUNE 16TH
"You're heading back to your room already?" Aya asked incredulously. "I thought we could go out..."
"She didn't finish taping until like nine pm there, so I was up until almost five in the morning on the phone," I yawned. "And then you got hyper and barged into my room at eight... and then we had rehearsals and the actual concerts..." I yawned again. Aya smiled sympathetically.
"When does Yoshizawa get back?"
"Tomorrow.... well, really late tonight technically, but I'll see her tomorrow."
"And it'll be all..." Aya held her arms out dramatically and started running slow-motion, humming dramatically. She wrapped her arms around herself and spun around. "Yocchaaan~..." Aya exclaimed in a high-pitched voice. "Mikitaaaaaan~...." she replied to herself in a really low voice.
"Your Yoshizawa impersonation sounds like a bad drag queen and besides, she doesn't call me 'Mikitan'." I stifled back another yawn.
"Ok, you go get some sleep," Aya said, patting me patronizingly on the head. "If you wake up later, call me and we'll go do something, ok?" I nodded sleepily and headed off to my room.
I waved to the security guard before wandering down the long hallway to my hotel room. I'm not even sure why they got us hotel rooms since we were in Tokyo anyway, but given my state of exhaustion, I was grateful. I fumbled for my keycard and it took me about three tries to get the door to open because I kept putting the damn card in upside down.
I groaned as I finally pushed the door open. Leaning against the door to shut it, I dropped my purse on the floor and threw my jacket on the floor. I was about to take my shirt off when my eyes fell on the bed. I froze.
...Ok, I must have fallen asleep already, I thought. I rubbed my eyes and looked again.
Nope, there was still some random girl asleep on my bed. I looked around the room, expecting cameras or Aya to jump out of the door connecting our two rooms.
Nothing. The girl mumbled something and shifted from facing the wall until she was lying on her stomach with her black hair spilling over the pillow.
Ok, that's not Sayu or Koharu... the hair's too short for either of them. And it's not Eri... the body type's all wrong...
I blinked again and walked over to the bed.
"WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU DOING IN MY ROOM!?" I bellowed. The girl jumped and started to push herself off of her stomach. Shit. Stupid Miki, don't confront the possibly violent crazy stalkers, go get security! I turned and walked swiftly over to the door, throwing it open.
"SECU-" A hand clasped itself over my mouth and a strong arm lifted me up and pulled me back inside, kicking the door shut. SHIT. I'm dead. I'm going to be killed by Random Hotel Girl.
No! What am I thinking? I'm Fujimoto Freaking Miki!
I went into offensive and swiftly brought my arm back.
"Miki-" My elbow connected with her gut just as I recognized the familiar sleepy voice. Horrified, I turned around and stared at my girlfriend doubled over, coughing.
"Oh my Gah, I'm so sorry!" I exclaimed, bending down next to Yossi. "I thought you were trying to kill me!"
"No, but I think I'm gonna puke now," she half-laughed, half-groaned. I smacked her on the arm.
"When did you get back?"
"I took an early flight. I got in about 6 hours ago. I wanted to surprise you," She winced and rubbed her stomach. "Apparently it worked." I helped her up off of the floor, grinning like an idiot as my eyes took in the long-missed sight of her eyes, her moles, her smile, her...
...wait a second.
"YOCCHAN, WHAT DID YOU DO TO YOUR HEAD?!" I exclaimed, grabbing her black locks and staring at them in shock. She laughed.
"I had to go natural for the drama. Since I got in early, they moved my hair appointment to today."
"You're almost unrecognizable!" I studied her critically, running my fingers through her hair, trying to decide my position on this new development.
"You've seen me with black hair before," she replied, looking extremely amused.
"Yeah, but..."
"Do you like it?"
"Yeah, I just... you look different, but I can't quite pinpoint what it is," I mused.
"Uh, my hair is black?"
"You look girly!" I proclaimed, clasping my hands together triumphantly. "You actually look feminine like this."
"...'actually'?" she repeated.
"Don't get all defensive. You know what I mean."
"Mmm."
"I missed you," I said quietly, looking up at her. Her face broke into a grin and she grabbed me by the waist and spun me around. Setting me back down, she leaned her forehead against mine.
"I missed you too," she replied before pushing me backwards. Shocked, I faltered a little bit before I landed on the bed. I blinked in surprise. "Didn't realize I'd gotten you over here, huh?" she smirked, climbing on top of me.
"Damn, I love you."
"I love you too."
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omgah, surprising wedge! :lol:
FEAR MY AWESOME WEDGING POWERSES!
Aya held her arms out dramatically and started running slow-motion, humming dramatically. She wrapped her arms around herself and spun around. "Yocchaaan~..." Aya exclaimed in a high-pitched voice. "Mikitaaaaaan~...." she replied to herself in a really low voice.
...Yeah, Aya would so totally do that in real life. XD
"Your Yoshizawa impersonation sounds like a bad drag queen
:on lol:
I helped her up off of the floor, grinning like an idiot as my eyes took in the long-missed sight of her eyes, her moles, her smile, her...
...wait a second.
"YOCCHAN, WHAT DID YOU DO TO YOUR HEAD?!"
Miki = :shock:
Yossie = :mon sweat:
Me = :mon lmao:
Shocked, I faltered a little bit before I landed on the bed. I blinked in surprise. "Didn't realize I'd gotten you over here, huh?" she smirked, climbing on top of me.
:rockon:
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Hahaha love this chapter... poor Miki at the end she isn't going to sleep XD
Miki is soo right... Yossie with black hair looks girly and, in my opinion, younger
I don't have any idea how this beautiful and so in love couple can have problems... It's in your hands (and your awesome mind) make this happen, just like a happy ending too :wub:
Waiting for the next and surely awesome chapter :jerk:
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ahhh doki doki :wub:
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I don't have any idea how this beautiful and so in love couple can have problems..
Oh that? Well, see! Yossi thinks ______'s ______ ______ ______ Miki, so Miki ______ to ______ ______ ______. Turns out ______'s ______ ______ ______ Yossi. ______ ______ Yossi's ______ ______ ______, so Miki gets pissed and tries to ______ ______ ______. Yossi of course ______ ______, ______ Miki ______ ______ and ______ ______. Yossi ______ ______ ______ her ass and ______ ______ ______. ______ ______ Yossi ______ ______ ______ ______ to ______ ______ leaves ______ Yossi ______ ______. Yossi ______ ______'s note and ______ ______ ______ ______. And that's where the REAL drama begins! XD
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I don't have any idea how this beautiful and so in love couple can have problems..
Oh that? Well, see! Yossi thinks ______'s ______ ______ ______ Miki, so Miki ______ to ______ ______ ______. Turns out ______'s ______ ______ ______ Yossi. ______ ______ Yossi's ______ ______ ______, so Miki gets pissed and tries to ______ ______ ______. Yossi of course ______ ______, ______ Miki ______ ______ and ______ ______. Yossi ______ ______ ______ her ass and ______ ______ ______. ______ ______ Yossi ______ ______ ______ ______ to ______ ______ leaves ______ Yossi ______ ______. Yossi ______ ______'s note and ______ ______ ______ ______. And that's where the REAL drama begins! XD
:mon heh: :mon heh: :mon heh:
Ok... Yossie think something, then everything get worse, Miki gets pissed and try to do something and Yossie get angry ans she leaves, then Yossie note something and this is how a lovely couple have problems...mmm...I think I understand
:on lol: I think I'll wait for the next chapters better :sweat:
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"Your Yoshizawa impersonation sounds like a bad drag queen
Oh, so she's seen good drag queens? :P
Maybe she did get Yossi to rent the Tokkaekko movie. :lol:
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I don't have any idea how this beautiful and so in love couple can have problems..
Oh that? Well, see! Yossi thinks ______'s ______ ______ ______ Miki, so Miki ______ to ______ ______ ______. Turns out ______'s ______ ______ ______ Yossi. ______ ______ Yossi's ______ ______ ______, so Miki gets pissed and tries to ______ ______ ______. Yossi of course ______ ______, ______ Miki ______ ______ and ______ ______. Yossi ______ ______ ______ her ass and ______ ______ ______. ______ ______ Yossi ______ ______ ______ ______ to ______ ______ leaves ______ Yossi ______ ______. Yossi ______ ______'s note and ______ ______ ______ ______. And that's where the REAL drama begins! XD
Fanfic madlibs!
1. Noun: 2. Two-word verb: 3. Preposition: 4. Verb: 5. Verb:
6. Preposition: 7. Noun: 8. Noun: 9. Preposition: 10. Verb:
11. Noun: 12. Verb: 13. Article: 14. Adjective: 15. Noun:
16. Verb: 17. Noun: 18. Adverb: 19. Verb: 20. Preposition:
21. Verb: 22. Verb: 23. Noun: 24. Verb: 25. ....Adverb? Preposition? (not sure)
26. Verb: 27. ...Noun?: 28. Preposition: 29. Noun: 30. Verb:
31. Pronoun: 32. Noun: 33. Verb: 34. Preposition(?): 35. Preposition:
36. Pronoun: 37. Noun: 38. Verb: 39. Conjunction: 40. Preposition:
41. Verb: 42. Preposition: 43. Verb: 44. Noun: 45. Verb:
46. Pronoun: 47. Verb: 48. Adverb:
Yup, I've seen the version of that paragraph without the words missing. :hee:
(But I'm also not an English major, so if I got some of those word classes wrong, no killing me.)
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"When does Yoshizawa get back?"
"Tomorrow.... well, really late tonight technically, but I'll see her tomorrow."
Oh WILL she? :pimp:
"And it'll be all..." Aya held her arms out dramatically and started running slow-motion, humming dramatically.
"Chariots of Fire" FTMFW! :lol:
She wrapped her arms around herself and spun around. "Yocchaaan~..." Aya exclaimed in a high-pitched voice. "Mikitaaaaaan~...." she replied to herself in a really low voice.
XD
I groaned as I finally pushed the door open. Leaning against the door to shut it, I dropped my purse on the floor and threw my jacket on the floor. I was about to take my shirt off when my eyes fell on the bed. I froze.
...Ok, I must have fallen asleep already, I thought. I rubbed my eyes and looked again.
Nope. You're NOT dreaming Miki. :nya:
The girl mumbled something and shifted from facing the wall until she was lying on her stomach with her black hair spilling over the pillow.
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"WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU DOING IN MY ROOM!?" I bellowed. The girl jumped and started to push herself off of her stomach. Shit. Stupid Miki, don't confront the possibly violent crazy stalkers, go get security! I turned and walked swiftly over to the door, throwing it open.
"SECU-" A hand clasped itself over my mouth and a strong arm lifted me up and pulled me back inside, kicking the door shut. SHIT. I'm dead. I'm going to be killed by Random Hotel Girl.
No! What am I thinking? I'm Fujimoto Freaking Miki!
I went into offensive and swiftly brought my arm back.
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...she didn't realize who it was. :k-crazy: Well, in all likelihood the dark hair would have really thrown her off. Once the 5th gen joined MM, Yossi's hair had never been darker than chestnut brown at the most (most of the time it was significantly lighter in colour). Combine that with the fact that Yossi's face wasn't exactly visible since she wasn't facing the door...and well, shit happens. :mon sweat:
"I missed you," I said quietly, looking up at her. Her face broke into a grin and she grabbed me by the waist and spun me around. Setting me back down, she leaned her forehead against mine.
"I missed you too," she replied before pushing me backwards.
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww... :wriggly:
Shocked, I faltered a little bit before I landed on the bed. I blinked in surprise. "Didn't realize I'd gotten you over here, huh?" she smirked, climbing on top of me.
Remember, Yossi's got skillz. :pimp:
"Damn, I love you."
"I love you too."
GYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!! :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1:
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oh dear manamin. no killing you, but suspense is killing the rest of US ! :lol:
JFC: this is gonna be fun scene to compose as a drawing :P (once i get to doing them tho nyahah!) :otomerika:
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Hahaha love this chapter... poor Miki at the end she isn't going to sleep XD
Yeah somehow I think she doesn't mind. :lol:
"Your Yoshizawa impersonation sounds like a bad drag queen
Oh, so she's seen good drag queens? :P
Maybe she did get Yossi to rent the Tokkaekko movie. :lol:
:on lol:
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...she didn't realize who it was. :k-crazy: Well, in all likelihood the dark hair would have really thrown her off. Once the 5th gen joined MM, Yossi's hair had never been darker than chestnut brown at the most (most of the time it was significantly lighter in colour). Combine that with the fact that Yossi's face wasn't exactly visible since she wasn't facing the door...and well, shit happens. :mon sweat:
Yep. Honestly, I *think* it was black in '03, but that might have just been dark brown. Hell, she could have had it black for 3 days and dyed it back before being on camera again XD
JFC: this is gonna be fun scene to compose as a drawing :P (once i get to doing them tho nyahah!) :otomerika:
:nya:
Yeah, I'm having a lazy-at-home day, so I'm gonna go ahead and post the next part in a few.
Coming soon! Part 12 with.... Matsuura POV!? :O
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PART 12 - MATSUURA - JUNE 16TH
I hummed tunelessly as I let myself into my hotel room. I flipped the lights on and glanced around the room. Ah! There it was. I walked over to my bed and bent down to pick up my fallen wallet off of the floor. I started to leave, but paused, glancing over at the door connecting my room to Mikitty's.
"I should be nice..." I said to myself, walking over to the door. I know she's probably in bed already, I thought, but I should see if she wants anything to eat. Knocking softly on the door, I pushed it open.
I recoiled back against the door as a black lace bra came whizzing past me, almost smacking me in the face. My jaw dropped.
Miki. Naked. On her bed. With some dark-haired girl on top of her. A girl wearing only panties whose bra (I'm assuming since Miki's was lying in the corner) was the one that had accosted me.
"FUJIMOTO MIKI, WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING!?" I yelled before I could stop myself. My naked best friend looked at me in shock for a moment before looking up at the girl above her.
"What am I doing!?" Miki countered, rolling out from underneath her playmate and sauntering over to me. "What are you doing barging into my hotel room?" I glared at her.
"I'm sorry! I thought maybe you were hungry!" I gestured to her flushed, naked body. "Apparently I was right."
"Ha ha. Can you go now?"
"What are you doing, Tan?" I asked quietly. "Are you seriously throwing away Yossi for some random girl?" Miki's eyes widened for a split second before settling into her normal glare.
"Regardless of my relationship status, I don't see how it's any of your business who I sleep with," Miki said loudly. The other party cleared her throat a little. I started to look over, but Miki stepped over, blocking my view. "Talk to me. She has nothing to do with this."
"You know, you're right. It isn't really any of my business who you decide to have sex with," I stated, feeling my face start to color with anger. "Except for the fact that I do like Yossi and I - "
"Are you going to tell her?"
"What!?" I exclaimed, staring at Miki in disbelief.
"Are you going to tell her?" she repeated.
"I..." I trailed off. On one hand, Mikitty's my best friend. On the other hand, Yoshizawa's being cheated on and someone really needs to tell her. And seriously, what the hell IS Miki thinking... But...
"Well?" Miki crossed her arms.
"Tan, I'm sorry, but I can't promise I won't say anything to Yossi - especially not if she asks me," I said finally.
"OH REALLY!?" Miki exclaimed, raising her eyebrows.
"No offense, but I think I already know," an amused voice piped up.
"You ruined my fun!" Miki complained, puffing out her cheeks. My jaw dropped as I looked over at the bed. I tilted my head to one side and walked towards the dark-haired girl sitting on the edge of the bed, modestly clutching one of the pillows to cover her bare chest.
"...Yossi?" I said in disbelief.
"Yes?" she replied.
"You dyed your hair!"
"Yep."
"You came back early from Spain!"
"Also true."
"You..." I trailed off and backed away from the mostly naked tomboy. I looked over at Miki and laughed nervously. "Whoops. I'll, um, just be going..."
"I can't believe you thought I'd cheat on Yocchan!" Miki exclaimed.
"Do we really need to get into this now?" Yossi groaned, shaking her head.
"Well, what was I supposed to think?!" I demanded. "I come into your room and find you naked in bed with some dark-haired girl while, to my knowledge, your girlfriend - who last I knew had some brownish-red thing going on - is out of the country!"
"Why is everyone so preoccupied with my hair?" Yossi mused to herself.
"Aya, come ON!" Miki retorted, walking over to the bed. She yanked the pillow out of Yoshizawa's grasp. "If you had THIS, would you do anything to mess it up?"
"MIKI, WHAT THE HELL!?" Yossi yelled, turning bright red. She scrambled wildly for something to cover herself with before finally grabbing the other pillow out from under the covers.
I blinked. Wow, she blushes with her entire body...
"Not cool, Fujimoto," Yossi said, glaring at her girlfriend and clutching the pillow to her bare skin protectively.
"Please, you were buttass naked to the world on that balcony in Hawaii," Miki rolled her eyes.
"Excuse me?" I said, looking between the two.
"Ok, that's a great story and all, but, um..." Yossi said, giving Miki a pointed look. Holding the pillow carefully against herself to prevent another flashing incident, she got up and walked over to me. "You know, it's great to see you, Ayaya, and we really should all hang out more, but, well, I was kind of in the middle of something, so..." She unceremoniously pushed me back into my room and slammed the door shut. I could hear Miki's laughter before it was abruptly cut off.
I blinked several times and looked around my empty hotel room.
"What just happened there?" I muttered to myself, picking Yoshizawa's bra off of the floor.
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I'm.
so.
weird.
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Yes, but we love the ideas you put in our head. :grin:
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HA HA I FORGOT TO CHANGE THE TOPIC LINE TO PART 12. :cool2:
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I love the speed of this fic, it makes everything so detailed... Instead of jumping day by day we get to see so much of what goes on and I almost have forgotten about the tragic heartbreak to come :(
This is one of my fav chapters lol, poor little Aya, trying to do the right thing just to have evil Miki throw it in her face... Surely Yossie thinks a lot of Aya's honesty now though, awww.
Oh evil Miki, how I love you so :lol:
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PART 12 - MATSUURA - JUNE 16TH
Aya POV? This'll be interesting, especially since the dates are the same, which means that Miki and Aya had just said goodnight to each other in the hallway. :kekeke:
I walked over to my bed and bent down to pick up my fallen wallet off of the floor. I started to leave, but paused, glancing over at the door connecting my room to Mikitty's.
"I should be nice..." I said to myself, walking over to the door. I know she's probably in bed already, I thought, but I should see if she wants anything to eat. Knocking softly on the door, I pushed it open.
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HERE IT COMES! :w00t:
Miki. Naked. On her bed. With some dark-haired girl on top of her. A girl wearing only panties whose bra (I'm assuming since Miki's was lying in the corner) was the one that had accosted me.
"FUJIMOTO MIKI, WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING!?" I yelled before I could stop myself. My naked best friend looked at me in shock for a moment before looking up at the girl above her.
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELLZ YEAH!!! :twisted: :rockon:
"What am I doing!?" Miki countered, rolling out from underneath her playmate and sauntering over to me. "What are you doing barging into my hotel room?" I glared at her.
"I'm sorry! I thought maybe you were hungry!" I gestured to her flushed, naked body. "Apparently I was right."
(http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c340/J-F-C/rimshot.gif)
Apparently indeed.
"What are you doing, Tan?" I asked quietly. "Are you seriously throwing away Yossi for some random girl?" Miki's eyes widened for a split second before settling into her normal glare.
"Regardless of my relationship status, I don't see how it's any of your business who I sleep with," Miki said loudly. The other party cleared her throat a little. I started to look over, but Miki stepped over, blocking my view. "Talk to me. She has nothing to do with this."
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...Aya's defending Yossi! :luvluv2: Guess she hasn't noticed that the dark-haired girl IS Yossi, who will hopefully be flattered with what Aya just said.
Oh Miki's gonna have FUN with this! :wahaha:
"No offense, but I think I already know," an amused voice piped up.
"You ruined my fun!" Miki complained, puffing out her cheeks. My jaw dropped as I looked over at the bed. I tilted my head to one side and walked towards the dark-haired girl sitting on the edge of the bed, modestly clutching one of the pillows to cover her bare chest.
"...Yossi?" I said in disbelief.
Yossi = :wave:
Miki = :lol:
Aya = :O
"...Yossi?" I said in disbelief.
"Yes?" she replied.
"You dyed your hair!"
"Yep."
"You came back early from Spain!"
"Also true."
"You..." I trailed off and backed away from the mostly naked tomboy. I looked over at Miki and laughed nervously. "Whoops. I'll, um, just be going..."
Absolutely loved this exchange. LOVED IT I SAY!!! :nya:
"Aya, come ON!" Miki retorted, walking over to the bed. She yanked the pillow out of Yoshizawa's grasp. "If you had THIS, would you do anything to mess it up?"
"MIKI, WHAT THE HELL!?" Yossi yelled, turning bright red. She scrambled wildly for something to cover herself with before finally grabbing the other pillow out from under the covers.
I blinked. Wow, she blushes with her entire body...
Her entire body? :stunned:
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HOT DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMN! :jerk:
Holding the pillow carefully against herself to prevent another flashing incident, she got up and walked over to me. "You know, it's great to see you, Ayaya, and we really should all hang out more, but, well, I was kind of in the middle of something, so..." She unceremoniously pushed me back into my room and slammed the door shut. I could hear Miki's laughter before it was abruptly cut off.
:hump:
I'm.
so.
weird.
Your point being? :mon lol:
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Whoa... I thought something 'big' would happen there... between Aya and Miki or between Miki and Yossie.... or even, between Yossie and Aya....
Gah! but I love this chapter... not really funny but the whole misunderstanding things really entertaining.... could happen in reality.... with the drastic changes Yossie had, who wouldn't thought Miki was cheating on Yossie?? Aya did a right thing, ain't her? :yep:
Keep posting almond!!!
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:lol: Go kansai power! Tell them how it is Aya!
Miki just because you don't have qualms about touching people inappropriately and nakedness doesn't mean everyone else feels the same way. Let Yossie keep her security blanket pillow :roll:
I hope Yocchan doesn't get nightmares about Tomiko.ahaha
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oh! :ding: dyou feel it? there's a storm coming! :cool1:
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I'm.
so.
weird.
And that's why I/we love your fics XD
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A girl wearing only panties whose bra (I'm assuming since Miki's was lying in the corner) was the one that had accosted me.
...Aya knows what Miki's bras look like? :wahaha:
"...Yossi?" I said in disbelief.
"Yes?" she replied.
"You dyed your hair!"
"Yep."
"You came back early from Spain!"
"Also true."
"You..." I trailed off and backed away from the mostly naked tomboy. I looked over at Miki and laughed nervously. "Whoops. I'll, um, just be going..."
:mon lmao:
"Why is everyone so preoccupied with my hair?" Yossi mused to herself.
Good question. XD
I'm.
so.
weird.
:k-great: :muffin:
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Ok, I'm seriously working on the next part right now. I changed the order of something a bit and then got kinda sidetracked. It should be up tonight! :heart:
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Man, I'm sleepy. Hope this turned out coherent. manamin found it amusing anyway. :lol:
I'll do a double-comments reply next time. ^^;
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PART 13 - YOSHIZAWA - JUNE 18TH
I paused outside my front door and smiled in anticipation. There's nothing quite like coming home after a long, tiring day to your gorgeous girlfriend, I thought to myself as I turned the key and pushed the door open.
"Mi..." The word died on my lips as I stepped inside, letting the door slam itself shut behind me.
"You're home early!" Miki exclaimed, coming out of the kitchen. She brushed her hands off on her denim shorts and walked over to me. "How was dance practice? Are the new girls any good?"
"Fujimoto, what did you do to my kitchen?" I said slowly, putting my bag down and removing my shoes.
"I made dinner," she replied, giving me a welcome-home kiss. She gave my tracksuit and disheveled hair the once-over. "What, no jinbei today?" she asked sarcastically.
"Yeah..." I said, still a bit shell-shocked at the state of chaos I saw before me.
"You got home before I could clean, that's all," she laughed. "I know what a neat freak you are."
"Yeah, blame Tsuji for the development of that little trait," I muttered as Miki guided me to the couch.
"Sit, relax, unwind," she said sweetly as I sat down and began to untense a little. "Plot things to do to me in bed later, you know, the usual." I laughed and leaned back, closing my eyes.
"What, no serenade?" I mock-complained.
"...well, I AM cleaning," she mused. I opened one eye warily.
"I wasn't serio-"
"DENWA WA MADA KONAI!" she sang loudly. She tossed the sponge in the air, did a single Natsu-sensei approved spin, and caught it without blinking. "MEERU WA MADA KONA~-I!"
"Miki, I wasn't serious," I muttered, but she was in her own little world of Boogie Train 07. I shook my head as she began incorporating the choreography into her actions. "YOU'RE WEIRD!" I yelled over her singing. Miki just flashed me a brilliant grin and continued on her merry way.
Suddenly, there was a loud pounding at the door. Miki paid it no mind, since she was midway through the second verse. I sighed and walked over to answer the door. Some man I had never seen before was on my doorstep.
"Um, can I help you?" I asked, cautiously standing half-behind the door in case he was some crazy fan.
"Yeah, listen, buddy," he snapped. I blinked. "I just moved downstairs and, you know, I like the Hello! Project girls as much as the next guy, but seriously, turn the damn music down."
I blinked. Did... was this seriously happening? I tilted my head to one side.
"Well," I began.
"I mean it sounds like you have Fujimoto Miki in your damn apartment! What, did you cut the background music out to hear her better?" he cut me off, rolling his eyes a little. I coughed to cover my laughter.
"Terribly sorry," I said, trying not to burst into hysterical laughter. "I'll try to keep - " The singing suddenly stopped mid-word.
"HEY! Where's the bleach? This sauce stain will NOT come up!" Miki demanded.
"Under the sink, left hand side," I replied without turning around. I could tell by the man's face that Miki had in fact, peeked around the corner, though.
"Th-th-th-that was Miki-sama!" the man stammered. I groaned. Great. A Miki fan. Thank God she wasn't singing Romantic Ukare Mode.
"Yeah, well, I gotta go," I said, starting to shut the door.
"How the hell did you get Fujimoto Miki in your apartment!?" the man exclaimed. I stopped and opened the door wider.
"...you have no idea who I am, do you?" I asked. The man looked over my messy hair and Adidas tracksuit.
"...Fujimoto's....brother?" THE HELL!?
"Ok, bye."
"YOCCHAN! I CAN'T FIND IT!" Miki bellowed. The man's eyes widened with recognition.
"HOLY SHIT! YOU'RE YOSHIZA-"
I slammed the door in his face and locked it.
"Who was that?" Miki asked. She was on her hands and knees, half inside the cabinet under my kitchen sink, apparently still searching for the bleach.
"Nobody," I replied, grabbing my cell phone to call UFA Security.
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There's nothing quite like coming home after a long, tiring day to your gorgeous girlfriend, I thought to myself
Tell me about it :shy2:
"Sit, relax, unwind," she said sweetly as I sat down and began to untense a little. "Plot things to do to me in bed later, you know, the usual."
BWAH! :wahaha:
"Th-th-th-that was Miki-sama!" the man stammered. I groaned. Great. A Miki fan. Thank God she wasn't singing Romantic Ukare Mode.
OSHIOKI KIBONNU!!
"...you have no idea who I am, do you?" I asked. The man looked over my messy hair and Adidas tracksuit.
"...Fujimoto's....brother?" THE HELL!?
How many times is that now? XD SHE'S A SHE, DANGIT!
:otomerika: OHEMGEE RANDOM CHARMY! :lol:
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I paused outside my front door and smiled in anticipation. There's nothing quite like coming home after a long, tiring day to your gorgeous girlfriend, I thought to myself as I turned the key and pushed the door open.
"Mi..." The word died on my lips as I stepped inside, letting the door slam itself shut behind me.
"You're home early!" Miki exclaimed, coming out of the kitchen. She brushed her hands off on her denim shorts and walked over to me. "How was dance practice? Are the new girls any good?"
"Fujimoto, what did you do to my kitchen?" I said slowly, putting my bag down and removing my shoes.
"I made dinner," she replied, giving me a welcome-home kiss.
Lemme guess...it looks like a disaster area? :D
"Sit, relax, unwind," she said sweetly as I sat down and began to untense a little. "Plot things to do to me in bed later, you know, the usual." I laughed and leaned back, closing my eyes.
Yes, do that. And by all means feel free to verbally share what develops in terms of the plotting. :twisted:
"DENWA WA MADA KONAI!" she sang loudly. She tossed the sponge in the air, did a single Natsu-sensei approved spin, and caught it without blinking. "MEERU WA MADA KONA~-I!"
"Miki, I wasn't serious," I muttered, but she was in her own little world of Boogie Train 07. I shook my head as she began incorporating the choreography into her actions. "YOU'RE WEIRD!" I yelled over her singing. Miki just flashed me a brilliant grin and continued on her merry way.
And of course Yossi, like us, completely LOVE her for it! :wriggly:
Suddenly, there was a loud pounding at the door. Miki paid it no mind, since she was midway through the second verse. I sighed and walked over to answer the door. Some man I had never seen before was on my doorstep.
"Um, can I help you?" I asked, cautiously standing half-behind the door in case he was some crazy fan.
"Yeah, listen, buddy," he snapped. I blinked. "I just moved downstairs and, you know, I like the Hello! Project girls as much as the next guy, but seriously, turn the damn music down."
Oh shit...new neighbour, and HE DOESN'T KNOW! :rofl:
"HEY! Where's the bleach? This sauce stain will NOT come up!" Miki demanded.
"Under the sink, left hand side," I replied without turning around. I could tell by the man's face that Miki had in fact, peeked around the corner, though.
"Th-th-th-that was Miki-sama!" the man stammered. I groaned.
Miki = :mon blowhorn:
Yossi = :mon sweat:
New Neighbour = :mon star: :mon blood:
Great. A Miki fan. Thank God she wasn't singing Romantic Ukare Mode.
MIKI-SAMA! MIKI-SAMA! OSHIOKI KIBONNU!!!
OO YA OI! (http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c340/J-F-C/WotaOAD.gif) OO YA OI! (http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c340/J-F-C/WotaOAD.gif) OO YA OI!
"How the hell did you get Fujimoto Miki in your apartment!?" the man exclaimed. I stopped and opened the door wider.
"...you have no idea who I am, do you?" I asked. The man looked over my messy hair and Adidas tracksuit.
"...Fujimoto's....brother?" THE HELL!?
"Ok, bye."
The dude is totally CLUELESS! Mind you, he's still in starstruck-shock mode from seeing Miki-sama. :yep: Still though, Yossi probably doesn't quite look like herself being in a tracksuit and just having come back home from practice. And the girls DO rag on her for the way she dresses, saying that the tracksuits and jinbei's really make her look boyish. :P
New Neighbour = :stunned:
Yossi = :mon suspect:
"HOLY SHIT! YOU'RE YOSHIZA-"
I slammed the door in his face and locked it.
"Who was that?" Miki asked. She was on her hands and knees, half inside the cabinet under my kitchen sink, apparently still searching for the bleach.
"Nobody," I replied, grabbing my cell phone to call UFA Security.
Come to think of it, wouldn't UFA have had a hand in setting the girls up with their apartments? If so they probably have some influence in who can be evicted (for those cases where they have to protect the girls). Poor sap came THIS close to living in the same building and Yossi (which would mean frequently seeing both her AND Miki), and he fucks himself over by...well...being a spastic wota.
Sucks to be him. :kekeke:
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One of the most hilarious chapters!!!!! :mon lmao: :mon lmao: :mon lmao:
Ahhh... for this kind of chapters is that I love this fic :luvluv1: Is good have this beautiful memories before the drama begins :mon cigar:
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"...Fujimoto's....brother?" THE HELL!?"
Oh no he didn't... well I would have gave him a knuckle sandwich before slamming the door though.
Anyways I loved this chapter, it was just so randomly funny! And Miki is so... weird. But the weirder thing is I can actually picture her doing the stuff your making her do...
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:lol: :lol: :lol: :mon lmao: :mon lmao:
That was a really great chapter!!!
I love this fic :heart: :heart: :heart:
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"...Fujimoto's....brother?" THE HELL!?
:lol: :lol: XD XD Seriously, is this guy blind or just stupid XD
"HOLY SHIT! YOU'RE YOSHIZA-"
I slammed the door in his face and locked it.
Okay, he's a little bit slow, but veeeeeeeeery lucky. He is living in the same building with Yossi :D
"Nobody," I replied, grabbing my cell phone to call UFA Security.
Or should I say he was lucky XD
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"Who was that?" Miki asked. She was on her hands and knees, half inside the cabinet under my kitchen sink, apparently still searching for the bleach.
really nobody read this???????????????/ wait I'm picturing it in my head
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DAMN :drool: :drool: :drool::nosebleed:
(hi, first time commenting and I just spend yesterday and today reading both memoir and this. I really hate you for the prologue, lol)
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Giant comments reply time!
Yes, but we love the ideas you put in our head. :grin:
And vice versa! I can't count how many ideas have come from comment replies!
I love the speed of this fic, it makes everything so detailed... Instead of jumping day by day we get to see so much of what goes on and I almost have forgotten about the tragic heartbreak to come :(
It's all part of my evil plan :cool1:
"I'm sorry! I thought maybe you were hungry!" I gestured to her flushed, naked body. "Apparently I was right."
(http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c340/J-F-C/rimshot.gif)
Apparently indeed.
*bows*
Her entire body? :stunned:
Yep. Entire. Body.
Gah! but I love this chapter... not really funny but the whole misunderstanding things really entertaining.... could happen in reality.... with the drastic changes Yossie had, who wouldn't thought Miki was cheating on Yossie?? Aya did a right thing, ain't her? :yep:
I was kinda torn as to how Aya would answer that question. I mean, she wouldn't be disloyal to Miki, but I can't see her lying to Yossi's face either.
:lol: Go kansai power! Tell them how it is Aya!
This makes me want to re-watch the Aya's Sukeban Trail H!M again. :lol:
oh! :ding: dyou feel it? there's a storm coming! :cool1:
XD polidread=win.
I'm.
so.
weird.
And that's why I/we love your fics XD
AH! That's why! I was trying to figure that out.
A girl wearing only panties whose bra (I'm assuming since Miki's was lying in the corner) was the one that had accosted me.
...Aya knows what Miki's bras look like? :wahaha:
I knew what my old roomie's bras looked like 'cause she would hang them to dry in the living room. :badluck:
"Why is everyone so preoccupied with my hair?" Yossi mused to herself.
Good question. XD
Because the author is obsessed with Yoshizawa's hair! :k-thrilled:
There's nothing quite like coming home after a long, tiring day to your gorgeous girlfriend, I thought to myself
Tell me about it :shy2:
Yeah, shaddap. :gyaaah:
:otomerika: OHEMGEE RANDOM CHARMY! :lol:
RANDOM CHARMY FTW!
The dude is totally CLUELESS! Mind you, he's still in starstruck-shock mode from seeing Miki-sama. :yep: Still though, Yossi probably doesn't quite look like herself being in a tracksuit and just having come back home from practice. And the girls DO rag on her for the way she dresses, saying that the tracksuits and jinbei's really make her look boyish. :P
Yeah, I explain that a bit in the next part.
"...Fujimoto's....brother?" THE HELL!?
:lol: :lol: XD XD Seriously, is this guy blind or just stupid XD
Probably a little column a, little column b.
Okay, he's a little bit slow, but veeeeeeeeery lucky. He is living in the same building with Yossi :D
"Nobody," I replied, grabbing my cell phone to call UFA Security.
Or should I say he was lucky XD
This cracked me up hardcore. :rofl:
"Who was that?" Miki asked. She was on her hands and knees, half inside the cabinet under my kitchen sink, apparently still searching for the bleach.
really nobody read this???????????????/ wait I'm picturing it in my head
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DAMN :drool: :drool: :drool::nosebleed:
Yeah, I was kinda surprised JFC didn't comment on that one. XD
(hi, first time commenting and I just spend yesterday and today reading both memoir and this. I really hate you for the prologue, lol)
YAY! Thank you so much! The prologue is meant to torture and encourage my overusage of :wahaha:
New part coming up as soon as manamin gets online to beta!
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PART 14 - FUJIMOTO - JUNE 18TH
"HE THOUGHT YOU WERE MY BROTHER?!" I roared with laughter. Yossi glared at me. We were standing in her kitchen cleaning up the dishes from dinner.
"So much for the dark hair making me girly, huh?" she muttered.
"Nah, he was just too stunned at the wonder that is Fujimoto Miki," I replied with a straight face. She swatted my butt with the dishtowel, but said nothing. "Is it bugging you?" I asked, turning away from the sink to look at her.
"A little bit, yeah," she admitted. "I mean, I know I can act like an old man, but..."
"It's your boobs."
"Excuse me?" she blinked. I poked her right breast with my soapy finger.
"Your boobs, darling. Your sports bra makes them nonexistent, especially in those tracksuits you're so fond of. Wear a normal bra for once and voila, insta-girl." Yossi looked down at her chest thoughtfully.
"You know, you're right..."
"Of course I'm right!" I declared. "I am the wonder that is Fujimoto Miki!"
"You know, for as much as you rag on Sayu, you really do act an awful lot like her sometimes," she mused. I turned and glared fiercely at her.
"I'm going to pretend you didn't say that," I said very slowly.
"Uh, yeah, let's go with that," she laughed nervously. Suddenly, the sound of "Aisu Cream to My Purin" filled the air. We both stared at each other in confusion. Yossi's eyes narrowed and she walked over to her cell phone lying on the table.
"Freaking Rika," she muttered as she picked it up. "Hello?.... Ok.... Yeah, I'll tell her... Ok, thanks."
"Who was that?"
"Security guy. He's stationed outside just in case. Since it's already dark, they want you to stay here all night in case someone tries to follow you home. Didn't think you'd mind." I grinned at her. "I think I'm gonna have to move, though," she sighed.
"Can't they just kick him out?" I asked, putting the last dish up to dry and turning off the water.
"Yeah, but the problem is he knows where I live now, so he could tell other people, and then one morning I leave the apartment to find a surge of fanboys demanding to know where 'Miki-sama' is," Yossi replied. I started laughing.
"You have fans, silly."
"True, but mine don't dance around demanding that I punish them," she pointed out. I looked around her neat, stylish apartment.
"This sucks. I like your apartment!" I sighed.
"No, you just dislike yours," she countered.
"That too."
"Why don't you move too, then?" she asked.
"I'm too lazy to find a new place," I replied, plopping down on the couch. She sat down next to me.
"Well, what if I'm finding one?" A slow smile spread across her face and she looked at me expectantly.
"No, it's ok. I mean, you have to find a new place for yourself anyway, so..."
"Miki, I'm asking if you want to move into an apartment together."
"Oh..." I trailed off. "OH!" She started laughing. "Wait, seriously?"
"Seriously. You practically live here anyway."
"You really think that's a good idea?" I asked slowly.
"You don't?" She said, sounding surprised. "I thought you'd be all for it. We don't have to, I mean, it was just an idea."
"No, no, no, no... don't misunderstand me. I think it's the best idea you've had in a long time - "
"Really? What was the last one?" Yossi interrupted.
"Whipped cream."
"Ah, yes," she nodded, a faraway look in her eyes.
"But! I've been told my hands have a tendency to wander a bit - "
"A bit?"
"And!" I continued, ignoring her. "I'm not sure if you'd ever be able to leave the apartment."
"Miki," she groaned, giving me a warning look. I laughed and grabbed her hand. I kissed the palm and held it against my cheek.
"I'd love to," I said softly. She moved her hand to the back of my neck and brought my lips to hers.
About fifteen minutes later, I stuck my head out of the front door and gestured the security guy over.
"Yes ma'am?" he said quietly.
"Earlier, when I thought I would be leaving, I played a bit of a practical joke on Yoshizawa," I replied.
"Ok."
"I kind of hid a bunch of fake snakes all over her apartment."
"Oh my. Does she not like snakes?"
"Hates them with an undying passion. Anyway, so, um, if you hear screaming or anything like that coming from the apartment... don't worry about it. It's probably just the snakes."
"Yes, ma'am," he replied, returning back to his post. I shut the front door and cackled silently to myself before shedding my bathrobe and returning back to the bedroom.
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Beta Omake Corner! :bingo:
In beta-ing the most recent chapter (which typically involves a lot of giggling on my part and drooling over Yossi and/or Miki on both my part and Almond's) I came up with a devious scheme. Not good enough to be shoved into the end at the last moment, it still cracked Almond up - so I'm leaving it here for you all.
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The door shut, and I listened as footsteps moved into the apartment. Snakes, huh? Not from what I'd heard. I pulled out my phone and began a new text message to my true employer.
"Ma'am -
Your sources were correct. They were both there. I will remain on watch overnight."
Almost immediately, a return text zipped back to my handset.
"Good. The ruse worked, Yoshizawa is moving?
P-Mako"
I shook my head and grinned as I texted back an affirmative. Of course even in New Zealand, this girl knew everything regarding Yoshizawa. Ah, what did I care? She made a great boss, and I was getting paid to pretend I didn't know what the sounds were coming out of that apartment all night.... good thing I 'd brought my iPod.
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Yeah, that's why I'm not the writer here. But it was funny to me.
:byebye:
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I lol'd at
P-Mako"
and this: "Really? What was the last one?" Yossi interrupted.
"Whipped cream."
I had a conflict between funny and hot. I'm going more for hot, anyway.
So, when will miki tell yossi she wants a child, I wonder :wriggly: :wahaha:
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"It's your boobs."
"Excuse me?" she blinked. I poked her right breast with my soapy finger.
"Your boobs, darling. Your sports bra makes them nonexistent, especially in those tracksuits you're so fond of. Wear a normal bra for once and voila, insta-girl." Yossi looked down at her chest thoughtfully.
"You know, you're right..."
You have no idea how many times I've made this point. :rofl:
"I am the wonder that is Fujimoto Miki!"
Yeah baby YEAH! :w00t:
Suddenly, the sound of "Aisu Cream to My Purin" filled the air. We both stared at each other in confusion. Yossi's eyes narrowed and she walked over to her cell phone lying on the table.
"Freaking Rika," she muttered as she picked it up.
Phone rape. :otomerika:
"You have fans, silly."
"True, but mine don't dance around demanding that I punish them," she pointed out.
Ohhhhh, Yossie. You have NO idea. XD
"Miki, I'm asking if you want to move into an apartment together."
:wriggly: :nya: :shy2: :luvluv2: :luvluv1:
I think it's the best idea you've had in a long time - "
"Really? What was the last one?" Yossi interrupted.
"Whipped cream."
"Ah, yes,"
Miki = :bored:
Yossie = :kekeke:
Me = :dunno: ............. !! :mon spit:
....Wow. :mon one:
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"You have fans, silly."
"True, but mine don't dance around demanding that I punish them," she pointed out.
Ohhhhh, Yossie. You have NO idea. XD
HERE HERE ME ME ME :mon beam:
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YAAAAAAY, like i said before, why don't you just move in together, makes perfect YoMiki sense to me :D
Miki and her sneaky plans lol thank god for Yossie's fear of snakes, coz if not for that, they would have no excuse for the noise XD
And at least when Mari changed the ringtine before it was to something good :P
@manamin:
Oh Mako dear, how i miss you so (at least come visit me in Aus during ur NZ days ;) )
:lol: i don't think the security guard can really complain about anything
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NASTY!!!! :shocked:
internet superhero Captain Obvious wants to ask:
are we sure Yossie's gonna be screaming later about snakes, and not FINGERS (and lips and hands and etc) ? :jerk:
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are we sure Yossie's gonna be screaming later about snakes, and not FINGERS (and lips and hands and etc) ?
Fingers, snake, what's the different? Both still make yossie scream anyway.... :lol:
"Why don't you move too, then?" she asked.
"I'm too lazy to find a new place," I replied, plopping down on the couch. She sat down next to me.
"Well, what if I'm finding one?" A slow smile spread across her face and she looked at me expectantly.
"No, it's ok. I mean, you have to find a new place for yourself anyway, so..."
"Miki, I'm asking if you want to move into an apartment together."
"Oh..." I trailed off. "OH!" She started laughing. "Wait, seriously?"
"Seriously. You practically live here anyway."
that was so sweet!!! it's like Yossie propose to Miki to marry her... lol.... :P
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"Why don't you move too, then?" she asked.
"I'm too lazy to find a new place," I replied, plopping down on the couch. She sat down next to me.
"Well, what if I'm finding one?" A slow smile spread across her face and she looked at me expectantly.
"No, it's ok. I mean, you have to find a new place for yourself anyway, so..."
Come ooooon, Miki. Think!!!
I laughed and grabbed her hand. I kissed the palm and held it against my cheek.
"I'd love to," I said softly. She moved her hand to the back of my neck and brought my lips to hers.
:mon lovelaff:
"Hates them with an undying passion. Anyway, so, um, if you hear screaming or anything like that coming from the apartment... don't worry about it. It's probably just the snakes."
Sure. Snakes. What else it could be XD
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Her entire body? :stunned:
Yep. Entire. Body.
That's just all sorts of awesome, not to mention incredibly HAWT! :jerk:
"Who was that?" Miki asked. She was on her hands and knees, half inside the cabinet under my kitchen sink, apparently still searching for the bleach.
really nobody read this???????????????/ wait I'm picturing it in my head
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DAMN :drool: :drool: :drool::nosebleed:
Yeah, I was kinda surprised JFC didn't comment on that one. XD
I was too busy mentally picturing it at the time. Besides, gotta give some of the other readers a chance to find some of the more "subtle" stuff, ne? :D
PART 14 - FUJIMOTO - JUNE 18TH
"HE THOUGHT YOU WERE MY BROTHER?!" I roared with laughter. Yossi glared at me. We were standing in her kitchen cleaning up the dishes from dinner.
Miki = :on lol:
Yossi = :angry1:
"So much for the dark hair making me girly, huh?" she muttered.
"Nah, he was just too stunned at the wonder that is Fujimoto Miki," I replied with a straight face.
That's because Miki-sama IS TEH AWESOMENESS!!! :cool1:
She swatted my butt with the dishtowel
Picturing this. Yep, that's hot. :grin:
"Is it bugging you?" I asked, turning away from the sink to look at her.
"A little bit, yeah," she admitted. "I mean, I know I can act like an old man, but..."
"It's your boobs."
Eh? Yossi's got boobs.
...
Yossi's got cute boobs. :yep:
...
/me mentally pictures Yossi pics where she wears form-fitting outfits (especially those that highlight her boobs).
...
/me Yeah...they're nice. :)
"Excuse me?" she blinked. I poked her right breast with my soapy finger.
"Your boobs, darling. Your sports bra makes them nonexistent, especially in those tracksuits you're so fond of. Wear a normal bra for once and voila, insta-girl." Yossi looked down at her chest thoughtfully.
"You know, you're right..."
Ok, being a guy, I'm gonna have to take Miki's word on this.
/me is not going to call up any girls that he knows to find out the effects of sports bras VS regular bras on boobs. :depressed:
"Of course I'm right!" I declared. "I am the wonder that is Fujimoto Miki!"
:cool1: :cool1: :cool1:
Suddenly, the sound of "Aisu Cream to My Purin" filled the air. We both stared at each other in confusion. Yossi's eyes narrowed and she walked over to her cell phone lying on the table.
"Freaking Rika," she muttered as she picked it up.
Rika changed Yossi's ringtone! :wahaha:
"Who was that?"
"Security guy. He's stationed outside just in case. Since it's already dark, they want you to stay here all night in case someone tries to follow you home. Didn't think you'd mind." I grinned at her.
Miki = :D
Yossi = :roll:
Miki's thoughts = :hump:
JFC = :w00t:
"Can't they just kick him out?" I asked, putting the last dish up to dry and turning off the water.
"Yeah, but the problem is he knows where I live now, so he could tell other people, and then one morning I leave the apartment to find a surge of fanboys demanding to know where 'Miki-sama' is," Yossi replied.
Oh c'mon, there's a shitload of Yossi-wota out there too that are just as *cough* "devoted" as the Miki-wota are.
"You have fans, silly."
"True, but mine don't dance around demanding that I punish them," she pointed out.
OO YA OI! (http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c340/J-F-C/WotaOAD.gif) OO YA OI! (http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c340/J-F-C/WotaOAD.gif) OO YA OI!
"This sucks. I like your apartment!" I sighed.
"No, you just dislike yours," she countered.
"That too."
"Why don't you move too, then?" she asked.
"I'm too lazy to find a new place," I replied, plopping down on the couch.
The solution is best summarized with 3 words...MOVE IN TOGETHER!!! :mon determined: :w00t: :banana:
"Miki, I'm asking if you want to move into an apartment together."
"Oh..." I trailed off. "OH!" She started laughing.
One of the rare Miki "boke" moments. :hiakhiakhiak:
:wub:
I think it's the best idea you've had in a long time - "
"Really? What was the last one?" Yossi interrupted.
"Whipped cream."
"Ah, yes," she nodded, a faraway look in her eyes.
Oh...my. Normally I'm not a fan of whipped cream...but...:jerk:
"But! I've been told my hands have a tendency to wander a bit - "
"A bit?"
Something tells me Yossi might be willing to tolerate it. :twisted:
"And!" I continued, ignoring her. "I'm not sure if you'd ever be able to leave the apartment."
What Miki's REALLY thinking = "I'm not sure if you'd ever be able to leave the BEDROOM." :rockon:
"Miki," she groaned, giving me a warning look. I laughed and grabbed her hand. I kissed the palm and held it against my cheek.
"I'd love to," I said softly. She moved her hand to the back of my neck and brought my lips to hers.
:wriggly:
About fifteen minutes later, I stuck my head out of the front door and gestured the security guy over.
"Yes ma'am?" he said quietly.
"Earlier, when I thought I would be leaving, I played a bit of a practical joke on Yoshizawa," I replied.
"Ok."
"I kind of hid a bunch of fake snakes all over her apartment."
"Oh my. Does she not like snakes?"
"Hates them with an undying passion. Anyway, so, um, if you hear screaming or anything like that coming from the apartment... don't worry about it. It's probably just the snakes."
"Yes, ma'am," he replied, returning back to his post. I shut the front door and cackled silently to myself before shedding my bathrobe and returning back to the bedroom.
Smart move by Miki to cover for...
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wait a sec
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Yossi's a screamer??? :o
DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYUM!!! :rockon::mon blood: :imdead:
EDIT: Beta Omake Corner!
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- Guard POV -
Didn't notice this at first. :P
The door shut, and I listened as footsteps moved into the apartment. Snakes, huh? Not from what I'd heard.
Not from what he'd heard? That would mean that the guard must either be a fanbay, or knows someone else who's a fanboy, and that the management's security detail has been "infiltrated".
I pulled out my phone and began a new text message to my true employer.
True employer? Ok, so he's not a fanboy himself, but works for one.
"Ma'am -
Your sources were correct. They were both there. I will remain on watch overnight."
Almost immediately, a return text zipped back to my handset.
"Good. The ruse worked, Yoshizawa is moving?
P-Mako"
I shook my head and grinned as I texted back an affirmative. Of course even in New Zealand, this girl knew everything regarding Yoshizawa. Ah, what did I care? She made a great boss
Awwwwwwwwwww it's Mako? She's amazing. Even now she's still looking out for the two of them. :luvluv2:
I was getting paid to pretend I didn't know what the sounds were coming out of that apartment all night.... good thing I 'd brought my iPod.
This guy not like girls or something? He's standing outside an apartment where two EXTREEEEEEEEEEEEMELY hot girls are. He's probably hearing...stuff...coming from said apartment...and he's going to listen to your iPod instead???
What is he, stupid? :mon pissed:
/me wishes he could beat up the guard and take his place. :yep:
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:mon hi: Okay...time to come out of the shadows and review.
I really like how you write the dialogue between two characters. Most of the time I'm :mon lmao: or at least :mon lovelaff: and the images created by the story's situations.... :mon thumb: It's interestin how Miki and Yosse are always gettin into situations, I wonder if they'd have any other stories to share...with other members...about their respective others....
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Ok, being a guy, I'm gonna have to take Miki's word on this.
/me is not going to call up any girls that he knows to find out the effects of sports bras VS regular bras on boobs. :depressed:
*falls, laughing*
I'd agree - this is not the kind of thing your run-of-the-mill girl would probably appreciate being asked randomly. Miki on the other hand, would probably launch into some kind of long discourse on the effects of bras on Yossi. Or off Yossi. >_>;
This guy not like girls or something? He's standing outside an apartment where two EXTREEEEEEEEEEEEMELY hot girls are. He's probably hearing...stuff...coming from said apartment...and he's going to listen to your iPod instead???
What is he, stupid? :mon pissed:
/me wishes he could beat up the guard and take his place. :yep:
:mon geek: But... well... he works for Makoto. The girl who basically plotted out the entire Miki-gets-Friday'd incident. Might I refer back to:
"Ok, I'll make a few calls when I get back. I have a few contacts at Friday too, so - "
"Wait, you have contacts at FRIDAY?!" I exclaimed, "Then what - "
"Don't mess with Ogawa Makoto."
There were actually more discussions we had about Mako and her connections - so that may be partially what I'm basing this off of. But basically, my thought was that the guard had the iPod and the ignoring going on because otherwise, Makoto would kick his ass.
EDIT: ...wow, apparently I am tired. Fixing spree on spelling/grammar issues. @_@;
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This guy not like girls or something? He's standing outside an apartment where two EXTREEEEEEEEEEEEMELY hot girls are. He's probably hearing...stuff...coming from said apartment...and he's going to listen to your iPod instead???
What is he, stupid? :mon pissed:
/me wishes he could beat up the guard and take his place. :yep:
:mon geek: But... well... he works for Makoto. The girl who basically plotted out the entire Miki-gets-Friday'd incident. Might I refer back to:
"Ok, I'll make a few calls when I get back. I have a few contacts at Friday too, so - "
"Wait, you have contacts at FRIDAY?!" I exclaimed, "Then what - "
"Don't mess with Ogawa Makoto."
There were actually more discussions we had about Mako and her connections - so that may be partially what I'm basing this off of. But basically, my thought was that the guard had the iPod and the ignoring going on because otherwise, Makoto would kick his ass.
Meh, he's still a wuss. Hell, I'd risk it. :pimp: :jerk: ;D
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Ok, so I started to do the comments reply, but realized I was far too sleepy to say anything remotely witty.
Thank you for the comments. I lurve you all. :love:
Oh and manamin's omake is just an omake - it doesn't necessarily go along with the storyline. I can't think of any reason why it wouldn't at this point, but I like to leave myself open ^^;
This next part... well, you might think I pasted the wrong thing, but just go with it. :otomerika:
Part 15 comin' up in a few!
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PART 15 - ISHIKAWA - JUNE 19TH
"Ishikawa!" Miki exclaimed angrily, bursting through the door and slamming it shut behind her. I blinked in surprise as she stalked over to me. I stood up and faced her.
"Miki? What in the world are you - "
"Don't play dumb with me!" Miki snapped, grabbing me by the shoulders and pushing me back against the wall. I stared straight into her narrowed eyes; my heart pounded in my ears.
"About what?" I protested. Miki glared at me and leaned in towards me.
"You know what I'm talking about," Miki hissed. She was so close our noses were almost touching. I could feel her breath on my lips.
"Honestly, I'm sorry, but I don't know!" I replied, unable to tear my eyes away from her mouth. I unconsciously licked my lips. She smirked.
"You know exactly what I'm talking about," she replied, letting her hand drop from my shoulder. She let it slowly travel up my leg and then back down, her face unchanging as she stared at me.
"M-miki!" I stammered as her wandering hand began its second trip - this time making its way under my skirt before slowly returning back to my knee. "What - "
"You think I haven't noticed?" Miki asked calmly as her hand moved to my inner thigh and continued its upward path. "Everyone's noticed how you keep staring at me in the locker room after practice." I bit my lip as her hand paused just shy of where it was sorely wanted. I looked into her eyes as her hand traveled back down my leg.
"And?" I challenged. She laughed at my brazen tone.
"If you wanted something, you just had to ask."
"What about Yocchan?" I blurted out. She didn't even blink.
"Who?" she asked before passionately claiming my lips.
"ISHIKAWA RIKA!"
I jumped awake and glanced around nervously. Yossi glared at me and shook her head in disapproval.
"Honestly, Rika, we're having a meeting here. Can you at least try and get ready to set a good example for the new players?" Yossi scolded me. I flushed.
"I'm so sorry," I apologized, bowing a little to my fellow seasoned Gatas members. "I didn't get much sleep last night and - "
"Neither did Yocchan, but she's doing fine," Miki interjected. Yossi turned her annoyance on her girlfriend.
"Miki, what did I JUST say?" she snapped.
"Don't freak out the noobs," Miki replied calmly. Yossi glared at her. "No mixing indoor sports and outdoor sports?" Someone started snickering behind me.
"Just try and keep it in your pants when we're on the field, ok?" Yossi sighed.
"I'd think you'd know by now that it's your pants to be concerned about around me," Miki said flatly. She grinned brightly and saluted Yossi. "Captain."
That did it. Mai, Korenaga, and Shiba all burst into laughter. I think Kore was even crying from laughing so hard. Yossi sat down, put her head in her hands, and sighed.
Miki glanced over and caught my eye. She wiggled her eyebrows and grinned lecherously at me. I flushed and turned my head, staring straight forward. Miki leaned over and poked the side of my leg.
"Have any good dreams?"
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uh, in case anyone missed it, the first part was a dream.
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I'm not saying just because I finished reading, but I KNEW it was a dream since this
She let it slowly travel up my leg and then back down, her face unchanging as she stared at me.
and FILLER i dare say.
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OH MY GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH RIKA'S FANTASIZING ABOUT MIKI?!?!!!? :OMG: :OMG: :OMG:
So then, Rika was the other girl in the prologue!!!
:mon spit:
"Honestly, Rika, we're having a meeting here. Can you at least try and get ready to set a good example for the new players?" Yossi scolded me. I flushed.
"I'm so sorry," I apologized, bowing a little to my fellow seasoned Gatas members. "I didn't get much sleep last night and - "
"Neither did Yocchan, but she's doing fine," Miki interjected. Yossi turned her annoyance on her girlfriend.
Point...Miki. :rockon:
"No mixing indoor sports and outdoor sports?" Someone started snickering behind me.
"Just try and keep it in your pants when we're on the field, ok?" Yossi sighed.
"I'd think you'd know by now that it's your pants to be concerned about around me," Miki said flatly. She grinned brightly and saluted Yossi. "Captain."
Miki's on a roll! :wahaha:
That did it. Mai, Korenaga, and Shiba all burst into laughter. I think Kore was even crying from laughing so hard. Yossi sat down, put her head in her hands, and sighed.
Mai = :on lol:
Korenaga = :on lol:
Shiba-chan = :on lol:
Yossi = :err:
Miki = :cool1:
Miki glanced over and caught my eye. She wiggled her eyebrows and grinned lecherously at me. I flushed and turned my head, staring straight forward. Miki leaned over and poked the side of my leg.
"Have any good dreams?"
Heh, Rika must've been really zoning out there, probably with a cute, goofy grin and a slightly blushing face. :hee:
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What? Rika and Miki?? That's weird... I haven't even thought of them being together...... anyway, this might gonna be interesting.... :pimp:
That did it. Mai, Korenaga, and Shiba all burst into laughter. I think Kore was even crying from laughing so hard. Yossi sat down, put her head in her hands, and sighed.
Mai = :on lol:
Korenaga = :on lol:
Shiba-chan = :on lol:
Yossi = :err:
Miki = :cool1:
I always look for JFC's emotion-icon comment... lol
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Oh no, but it couldn't be, could it? ARGHHHHHH! Not Rika :cry: I want Maki to be the reason the happy couple is torn apart, or I won't be happy :mon annoy: :P
Do you two sneaky buggers even know who that person will be yet or are u deciding later and thus the madlib and the gaps where the parts u haven't decided yet ;) Oh I am on to u :D
And oh Miki-sama and her sexy ways :heart:
I love the way she makes Yossie sweat..................................... by keeping nothing secret from the others that is :D :wub:
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:mon spit: :mon spit: :mon spit: :mon spit:
RIKA!!!!
That was unexpected hahaha
:mon lmao: :mon lmao: :mon lmao: I love Miki and a lot more the way she always know what the others are thinking, or in this case, what Rika was thinking
For a moment I think Miki was going to fight with Rika for something related with Yossie :on lol:
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Do you two sneaky buggers even know who that person will be yet or are u deciding later and thus the madlib and the gaps where the parts u haven't decided yet ;) Oh I am on to u :D
I know perfectly well who it is. :hee:
And before long, I bet JFC will be all :shifty: :shock: again. <_<;
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Oh, naughty Rika! You broke one of the H!P commandments: Thou shalt not covet thy fellow hellogirl's girlfriend...
Then again, it's Miki we're talking about. :lol:
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"If you wanted something, you just had to ask."
"What about Yocchan?" I blurted out. She didn't even blink.
"Who?" she asked before passionately claiming my lips.
Rika = :mon ko:
Miki = :hehehe:
Me = :badluck: Heh?
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"Have any good dreams?"
that's mean, miki. :wahaha:
about rika's dreams... :stoned:
still shocked!
My jaw dropped as I looked over at the bed. I tilted my head to one side and walked towards the dark-haired girl sitting on the edge of the bed, modestly clutching one of the pillows to cover her bare chest.
you know, i still love this chapter.... so.... here's a gift for you (minus the undies ^_~)... hohohohohohohohohohoho
http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/1254/yossiememoirs2de5.jpg
:mon hobo:
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PART 15 - ISHIKAWA - JUNE 19TH
"Ishikawa!" Miki exclaimed angrily, bursting through the door and slamming it shut behind her. I blinked in surprise as she stalked over to me. I stood up and faced her.
"Miki? What in the world are you - "
"Don't play dumb with me!" Miki snapped, grabbing me by the shoulders and pushing me back against the wall. I stared straight into her narrowed eyes; my heart pounded in my ears.
"About what?" I protested. Miki glared at me and leaned in towards me.
"You know what I'm talking about," Miki hissed. She was so close our noses were almost touching. I could feel her breath on my lips.
"Honestly, I'm sorry, but I don't know!" I replied, unable to tear my eyes away from her mouth. I unconsciously licked my lips. She smirked.
"You know exactly what I'm talking about," she replied, letting her hand drop from my shoulder. She let it slowly travel up my leg and then back down, her face unchanging as she stared at me.
"M-miki!" I stammered as her wandering hand began its second trip - this time making its way under my skirt before slowly returning back to my knee. "What - "
"You think I haven't noticed?" Miki asked calmly as her hand moved to my inner thigh and continued its upward path. "Everyone's noticed how you keep staring at me in the locker room after practice." I bit my lip as her hand paused just shy of where it was sorely wanted. I looked into her eyes as her hand traveled back down my leg.
"And?" I challenged. She laughed at my brazen tone.
"If you wanted something, you just had to ask."
"What about Yocchan?" I blurted out. She didn't even blink.
"Who?" she asked before passionately claiming my lips.
Initial reaction: :mon scare:
then: :mon star: resulting in ---> :mon blood:
"ISHIKAWA RIKA!"
I jumped awake and glanced around nervously. Yossi glared at me and shook her head in disapproval.
"Honestly, Rika, we're having a meeting here. Can you at least try and get ready to set a good example for the new players?" Yossi scolded me. I flushed.
Ooooohh...so it was just a dream? :mon sweat:
"I'm so sorry," I apologized, bowing a little to my fellow seasoned Gatas members. "I didn't get much sleep last night and - "
"Neither did Yocchan, but she's doing fine," Miki interjected. Yossi turned her annoyance on her girlfriend.
That's Miki, open to the world, hence the underage presence in the room.
"No mixing indoor sports and outdoor sports?"
:mon huh:---> :mon lol:
"Just try and keep it in your pants when we're on the field, ok?" Yossi sighed.
"I'd think you'd know by now that it's your pants to be concerned about around me," Miki said flatly. She grinned brightly and saluted Yossi. "Captain."
Tsukommi Miki on the roll. Yocchan has to learn to use her brain much faster. :mon heh:
"Have any good dreams?"
I would've faint if Miki-sama asked me that question. Mainly from excessive blood lose, in result of remembering MANY good dreams revolving around Yossie, Miki and Rika. Died and gone to heaven :mon angel:
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Birthday + Work is crazy + Writers block = Still working on part 16. :banghead:
Please don't kill me. :heart:
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Don't worry :D Take your time
We'll be waiting here
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My two favorite fics are being ABANDONED by their authors. my world is over.
(oh! the drama :P)
take your time, but don't give up until it's over, pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee~
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Eeeh?! I'm not abandoning! I was just trying to explain why I hadn't updated in a week. I'm working on part 16 and part of the end is actually written already... :otomerika:
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I'm working on part 16 and part of the end is actually written already... :otomerika:
/me prays for major amounts of fluff and/or rabu-rabu.
:prayers:
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I'm working on part 16 and part of the end is actually written already... :otomerika:
/me prays for major amounts of fluff and/or rabu-rabu.
:prayers:
*Quoted cuz I agree* :D
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Eeeh?! I'm not abandoning!
Relax, I was kidding :otomerika:
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COMMENTS REPLY TIME! You know what that means!
Turns out my problem with 16 was that I needed to end it and switch POV. Yep. Good times. :otomerika:
omg, the dancing Rika is in time to "GOD" from Ribbon no Kishi...
I'm not saying just because I finished reading, but I KNEW it was a dream since this She let it slowly travel up my leg and then back down, her face unchanging as she stared at me.
and FILLER i dare say.
Pretty much everything can be called filler until we hit August :lol:
OH MY GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH RIKA'S FANTASIZING ABOUT MIKI?!?!!!? :OMG: :OMG: :OMG:
So then, Rika was the other girl in the prologue!!!
:mon spit:
:wahaha:
Ah, I haven't used that in a while~
What? Rika and Miki?? That's weird... I haven't even thought of them being together...... anyway, this might gonna be interesting.... :pimp:
Rika and Miki is a strange pairing, but it amuses me. I kinda want someone to write one where they're all "Fine, you won't choose? We pick eachother then. Ha ha!" and poor Yossi's all :pleeease:
Man I have a weird brain.
I always look for JFC's emotion-icon comment... lol
Me too! XD
Oh no, but it couldn't be, could it? ARGHHHHHH! Not Rika :cry: I want Maki to be the reason the happy couple is torn apart, or I won't be happy :mon annoy: :P
:wahaha:
Do you two sneaky buggers even know who that person will be yet or are u deciding later and thus the madlib and the gaps where the parts u haven't decided yet ;) Oh I am on to u :D
No, no. It's decided and partially written! I actually thought the prologue scene before I finished memoir. :D
For a moment I think Miki was going to fight with Rika for something related with Yossie :on lol:
XD I kept IMing manamin going "why is Miki pissed at Rika? I need her pissed at Rika!" then I was all "meh, who cares. It's a dream. It doesn't have to make sense"
Oh, naughty Rika! You broke one of the H!P commandments: Thou shalt not covet thy fellow hellogirl's girlfriend...
Then again, it's Miki we're talking about. :lol:
I kinda want to see all of the H!P Commandments now :lol:
"If you wanted something, you just had to ask."
"What about Yocchan?" I blurted out. She didn't even blink.
"Who?" she asked before passionately claiming my lips.
Rika = :mon ko:
Miki = :hehehe:
Me = :badluck: Heh?
Me = :glasses:
I would've faint if Miki-sama asked me that question. Mainly from excessive blood lose, in result of remembering MANY good dreams revolving around Yossie, Miki and Rika. Died and gone to heaven :mon angel:
LOL!
BTW, I'm not sure if I made it clear enough or if it even matters at all, but that meeting was just of the senior Gatas members discussing the new ones joining. That's why it was only Korenaga, Shibata, Satoda, Ishikawa, Fujimoto, Yoshizawa. (Konno hadn't rejoined yet at that point)
/me prays for major amounts of fluff and/or rabu-rabu.
:prayers:
Uh... not the part that's written... I usually write ahead when I'm in a bad mood and feel like writing angry or angsty stuffs.
ANYWAY! Part 16 coming up! Yocchan POV! Incredibly short considering how long I kept you all waiting! :oops:
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and that meanzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz............................. :D
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and that meanzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz............................. :D
damn, you're fast XD
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PART 16 - YOSHIZAWA - JUNE 21ST
I pulled my hat down low over my face and looked around the noisy street carefully through my sunglasses before darting into the coffee shop. I quickly spotted her alone at the corner booth and slid in across from her.
"Uh, can I help you?" I lowered my sunglasses and stared at her incredulously over them.
"You have a real problem recognizing me out of context, don't you?" I said flatly, pushing the sunglasses back up the bridge of my nose. Aya started laughing.
"I don't think that's fair," Aya protested. "You're incognito." She paused to sip her coffee. "I mean, really. Since when do you wear actual clothes outside of work?"
"Ah, it's all a plot," I replied, leaning forward conspiratorially. "First, everyone expected to see me in cute clothes, so I started wearing tracksuits all the time. Now that everyone expects me to be in tracksuits, I have to go back to fashionable clothes." I looked at her over my sunglasses. "It's all part of my evil plot."
"You haven't done laundry, have you?"
"Not since before I left for Spain," I admitted cheerfully. "These are Miki's clothes." She reached next to her and grabbed her purse off of the seat.
"I just send my laundry out," she replied, taking her wallet out and laying the money down for her bill. She grabbed a face mask out of her bag and stood to leave.
"Yeah, Maki does the same. It seems like such a waste of money to me, though," I explained, getting up to follow the tiny brunette. Aya paused by the door to secure the face mask concealing her identity before heading out into the bright sun.
"So where does Tan think you are today?" Aya asked, casually linking arms with me as we strolled through Shibuya.
"Apartment shopping," I replied, warily eyeing the crowd we passed through. Miki would absolutely kill me if anything happened to her best friend and Aya's apparently oblivious to the fact that her disguise is horrid. She just looks like, well, Matsuura Aya with a face mask.
"Oh... right, you two are moving in together, huh?" she replied. Her strange tone turned my attention away from that suspicious group of boys pointing at us.
"Yeah, we are.... is that okay?" I asked, studying her face carefully.
"Why are you asking me?" she laughed brightly, staring straight ahead. A fleeting suspicion from months ago suddenly resurfaced into my thoughts. Aya didn't...
"Ayaya, you're not... I mean, you don't - "
"Ah! Here it is!" she cut me off, abruptly dropping my arm and stepping into the nearest store. I shook my head and followed her inside.
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It's funny how they put their masks and think it's the perfect disguise, lol
and AYA YOU'RE NOT... oh my... oh, well, poor you (or not, maybe august happy you or ok, i'll stop speculating :lol:)
:sejinemo: <- now that's me sitting back and enjoying the ride trying not to discover your next step.
and yeah, I'm pretty fast :pimp:
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OH MY GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH RIKA'S FANTASIZING ABOUT MIKI?!?!!!? :OMG: :OMG: :OMG:
So then, Rika was the other girl in the prologue!!!
:mon spit:
:wahaha:
Ah, I haven't used that in a while~
Glad to be of service. :D
I always look for JFC's emotion-icon comment... lol
Me too! XD
What can I say? When inspiration hits me... :hee:
/me prays for major amounts of fluff and/or rabu-rabu.
:prayers:
Uh... not the part that's written... I usually write ahead when I'm in a bad mood and feel like writing angry or angsty stuffs.
As long as I get it as some point, it's all good. :whistle:
I pulled my hat down low over my face and looked around the noisy street carefully through my sunglasses before darting into the coffee shop. I quickly spotted her alone at the corner booth and slid in across from her.
"Uh, can I help you?" I lowered my sunglasses and stared at her incredulously over them.
"You have a real problem recognizing me out of context, don't you?" I said flatly, pushing the sunglasses back up the bridge of my nose. Aya started laughing.
"I don't think that's fair," Aya protested. "You're incognito."
Yossi's meeting Aya? While it's nice and all...what for? Is this that shopping trip she promised her for letting her and Miki have the hotel room? :?
"I mean, really. Since when do you wear actual clothes outside of work?"
"Ah, it's all a plot," I replied, leaning forward conspiratorially. "First, everyone expected to see me in cute clothes, so I started wearing tracksuits all the time. Now that everyone expects me to be in tracksuits, I have to go back to fashionable clothes." I looked at her over my sunglasses. "It's all part of my evil plot."
YOSSI'S EVIL PLOT!!! :wahaha:
"So where does Tan think you are today?" Aya asked, casually linking arms with me as we strolled through Shibuya.
/me pictures Aya and Yossi walking arm-in-arm.
Yep, that's cute...which means...
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww... :nya:
Aya's apparently oblivious to the fact that her disguise is horrid. She just looks like, well, Matsuura Aya with a face mask.
Oh well, she tried. :mon lol:
"Oh... right, you two are moving in together, huh?" she replied. Her strange tone turned my attention away from that suspicious group of boys pointing at us.
When Yossi's right, she's right. :)
A fleeting suspicion from months ago suddenly resurfaced into my thoughts. Aya didn't...
"Ayaya, you're not... I mean, you don't - "
"Ah! Here it is!" she cut me off, abruptly dropping my arm and stepping into the nearest store. I shook my head and followed her inside.
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmm...Yossi suspects there's something up with Aya. Granted, considering how close the two of them (Aya and Miki) are, it's only natural for Yossi to ask Aya how she feels about the two of them (Yossi and Miki) moving in together. It's like, at first Miki was likely spending most of her free time with Aya, but since she's been seeing Yossi, that time has probably dwindled a bit. Once they move in together, it's bound to dwindle even more. Someone in Aya's shoes might be a bit jealous about this, especially if she feels more for Miki than what she's letting on (which is basically what Yossi might be thinking right now).
It could be that Aya is merely keeping her feelings to herself because she doesn't want to make things weird between the three of them. It could also be that Aya might be giving certain signals with her behaviour that people like Yossi pickup on, but she just hasn't realized nor admitted to herself how she feels.
I'm thinking I should probaby brace myself for some major angst soon, right?
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"Why are you asking me?" she laughed brightly, staring straight ahead. A fleeting suspicion from months ago suddenly resurfaced into my thoughts. Aya didn't...
"Ayaya, you're not... I mean, you don't - "
Ah, call me slow or whatever but I couldn't make it what's in Yossie's mind.
Could it be?
"Ayaya, you're not... I mean, you don't have any feeling for Miki except for being her best friend right? "
"Ayaya, you're not... I mean, you don't have any feeling for me right?"
Hmm... :P
*edited*
Or....
"Ayaya, you're not... I mean, you don't want to move in together with us, did you?" XD
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"Why are you asking me?" she laughed brightly, staring straight ahead. A fleeting suspicion from months ago suddenly resurfaced into my thoughts. Aya didn't...
"Ayaya, you're not... I mean, you don't - "
Ah, call me slow or whatever but I couldn't make it what's in Yossie's mind.
Could it be?
"Ayaya, you're not... I mean, you don't have any feeling for Miki except for being her best friend right? "
"Ayaya, you're not... I mean, you don't have any feeling for me right?"
Hmm... :P
Yeah... exactly my thoughts too
The only way to know it is keep reading this so... :wriggly: :wriggly: we need more! I'll be waiting for the next chapter
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My initial reaction to that "Ayaya, you're not..." line was, 'huh? Is she thinking what I'm thinking?' That would be so awkward if it were true. So like JFC mentioned, should I brace myself for some major angst?
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Or....
"Ayaya, you're not... I mean, you don't want to move in together with us, did you?" XD
ahhh i like that idea very much. :mon star: :mon blood:
hehehe can't wait for the next chapter.... ^^
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"Yeah, Maki does the same. It seems like such a waste of money to me, though,"
I volunteer to do Yossi's laundry for free!!
:ding:
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Sorry, no comments reply right now. I decided to post the next part right as I'm about to pass out on my bed. I'M GOOD AT PLANNING!
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PART 17 - MATSUURA - JUNE 21ST - 30 MINUTES LATER
I leaned against the brick wall and sighed. Ok, Aya, focus. You've got Mikitan's present. You've just got to wait for Yoshizawa to get out of the bathroom and then you're home free.
But once again, my mind ignored me and started to wander to illicit places.
I shook my head. FOCUS, MATSUURA!
"Excuse me..." I glanced up at the strange man in front of me. "Ah! You are! You're Ayaya, aren't you!?" I laughed sheepishly and bowed my head a little.
"I'm sorry, but we're not allowed to do autographs or photos outside of work," I apologized before he could say anything more. He was standing a bit too close for my comfort.
"Oh, I understand! I'd love it if I could just shake your hand!" I glanced around uncomfortably.
"No, that's really - "
"Come on!" he persisted, moving even closer until I could smell his breath. "It's just a - "
"Any part of you that touches her will be personally removed by me," a calm voice interjected. The man's grin vanished and he whirled around to face the speaker. Yossi stood there with a charming grin on her face.
"I was just trying to get a handshake from my favorite idol!" he protested weakly. I stifled back a laugh as I noticed he was a few centimeters shorter than her.
"That's nice. You can go now," she replied sweetly.
"I'm not going anywhere until I - " Yossi whipped her sunglasses off and narrowed her eyes.
"Listen, buddy. I'm Yoshizawa freaking Hitomi. I can and have bench pressed every single girl on the Gatas team. You don't want to mess with me. Leave. Now." I had to bite my lip to keep from laughing as the poor fanboy scampered off. She caught my eye and grinned.
"'I'm Yoshizawa freaking Hitomi'?" I repeated, linking my arm with hers as we made our way down the street. "Tan's rubbing off on you."
"I'm out of practice," she laughed. "I used to have to do that all the time for Tsuji and Kago. Miki's fans are mostly too scared of her to accost her."
"Yell at them like that and they'll probably become your fans," I replied with a giggle.
"Yeah, no, I'm good," she said with a mock-grimace. "So when are you giving Miki her present?"
"I was going to come over now if that's ok," I replied. She dug her cell phone out of her pocket and hit her speed-dial.
"Hey... you at my place?" she asked into the phone. "...ok, put clothes on... ha ha, no, really. I ran into Aya and she's coming over for a bit... MIKI, NO.... ugh, fine... be there soon... yeah, yeah, love you too, bye." She snapped the phone shut and shook her head. We headed into the train station and sat down on the bench to wait.
"Everything ok?" I asked in amusement.
"Let's just say it's a good thing I called first," she smiled sheepishly at me. "Oh, that reminds me... isn't it almost your birthday?"
"Yeah!" I said, surprised. "The 25th." She reached into her pocket and pulled out a small bag.
"Happy birthday!" I blinked and opened the bag. Inside was the small gold necklace I'd been admiring in the shop.
"When did you...?"
"I went back to buy that, not to use their restroom," Yossi shrugged nonchalantly. "It's no big deal."
"You're spoiling me," I accused teasingly. I fastened the necklace around my neck and smiled. "Thank you!"
"You're welcome," she replied as the train pulled up. We stood up and headed over. "It'll be nice for the three of us to hang out, huh?"
"You mean, you, me, and Tan?" I asked as we walked towards the opened doors.
"Yeah. We haven't really spent any time together... well unless you count the time Miki was naked and yelling..." Yossi stopped in her tracks and turned to me. "That came out wrong."
"Yeah, it did," I agreed, stepping onto the train.
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I started a Fic Blog (http://almondfics.blogspot.com/), if anyone wanted a place to read "memoir" and "100%" in their entirety. I also put up a poll about who you think the narrator is :sweat:
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Ah!!!! :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: this is really good!!!
I'm still thinking Aya wants something with Yossie :cool1:
"Any part of you that touches her will be personally removed by me," a calm voice interjected. The man's grin vanished and he whirled around to face the speaker. Yossi stood there with a charming grin on her face.
"I was just trying to get a handshake from my favorite idol!" he protested weakly. I stifled back a laugh as I noticed he was a few centimeters shorter than her.
"That's nice. You can go now," she replied sweetly.
"I'm not going anywhere until I - " Yossi whipped her sunglasses off and narrowed her eyes.
"Listen, buddy. I'm Yoshizawa freaking Hitomi. I can and have bench pressed every single girl on the Gatas team. You don't want to mess with me. Leave. Now." I had to bite my lip to keep from laughing as the poor fanboy scampered off. She caught my eye and grinned.
Ahhhh....Yossie kakkoi!!!!!!!!!! :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1:
"'I'm Yoshizawa freaking Hitomi'?" I repeated, linking my arm with hers as we made our way down the street. "Tan's rubbing off on you."
It's easy to get used to doing that with someone like Yossie :mon inluv:
"Happy birthday!" I blinked and opened the bag. Inside was the small gold necklace I'd been admiring in the shop.
Sweet Yossie :shy2:
"You're welcome," she replied as the train pulled up. We stood up and headed over. "It'll be nice for the three of us to hang out, huh?"
"You mean, you, me, and Tan?" I asked as we walked towards the opened doors.
In some way I don't think this is a good idea :smoke:
"Yeah. We haven't really spent any time together... well unless you count the time Miki was naked and yelling..." Yossi stopped in her tracks and turned to me. "That came out wrong."
"Yeah, it did," I agreed, stepping onto the train.
:on lol: Yossie you were doing a good job :mon exhaust: Anyways, for things like these everybody love you :luvluv2:
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I leaned against the brick wall and sighed. Ok, Aya, focus. You've got Mikitan's present. You've just got to wait for Yoshizawa to get out of the bathroom and then you're home free.
But once again, my mind ignored me and started to wander to illicit places.
I shook my head. FOCUS, MATSUURA!
Chances of MatsuYoshi...increasing! :wahaha:
"Excuse me..." I glanced up at the strange man in front of me. "Ah! You are! You're Ayaya, aren't you!?" I laughed sheepishly and bowed my head a little.
"I'm sorry, but we're not allowed to do autographs or photos outside of work," I apologized before he could say anything more. He was standing a bit too close for my comfort.
Hmmm...how "crazy" does he look? :O
"Oh, I understand! I'd love it if I could just shake your hand!" I glanced around uncomfortably.
"No, that's really - "
"Come on!" he persisted, moving even closer until I could smell his breath. "It's just a - "
Question is though, would he let go? For some reason, I'm thinking he'd be veeeeeeeeeeeeeery reluctant to do so, if he would do it at all.
:pig refuse:
"Any part of you that touches her will be personally removed by me," a calm voice interjected. The man's grin vanished and he whirled around to face the speaker. Yossi stood there with a charming grin on her face.
"I was just trying to get a handshake from my favorite idol!" he protested weakly.
Yossi to the rescue!!! :cool1:
Aya had better be careful that she doesn't start swooning over her new "hero". ;D
I stifled back a laugh as I noticed he was a few centimeters shorter than her.
:mon lmao:
"Listen, buddy. I'm Yoshizawa freaking Hitomi. I can and have bench pressed every single girl on the Gatas team. You don't want to mess with me. Leave. Now." I had to bite my lip to keep from laughing as the poor fanboy scampered off. She caught my eye and grinned.
Bench-pressed the Gatas team members??? :o
Fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck that's so hot! :drool:
"'I'm Yoshizawa freaking Hitomi'?" I repeated, linking my arm with hers as we made our way down the street. "Tan's rubbing off on you."
In more ways than one, no doubt. :wahaha:
She dug her cell phone out of her pocket and hit her speed-dial.
"Hey... you at my place?" she asked into the phone. "...ok, put clothes on... ha ha, no, really. I ran into Aya and she's coming over for a bit... MIKI, NO.... ugh, fine... be there soon... yeah, yeah, love you too, bye." She snapped the phone shut and shook her head.
Something tells me the other side of the convo was something like this:
Miki = "Aya's there? Tell me you love me. I love YOU! C'mon! SAY IT! Say iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit! " :nya:
"Everything ok?" I asked in amusement.
"Let's just say it's a good thing I called first," she smiled sheepishly at me.
Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice. :pimp:
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Oh, the double-entendres and awkward (yet HOT) situations that could have been if Yossi hadn't called ahead. :twisted:
"Oh, that reminds me... isn't it almost your birthday?"
"Yeah!" I said, surprised. "The 25th." She reached into her pocket and pulled out a small bag.
"Happy birthday!" I blinked and opened the bag. Inside was the small gold necklace I'd been admiring in the shop.
"When did you...?"
"I went back to buy that, not to use their restroom," Yossi shrugged nonchalantly. "It's no big deal."
"You're spoiling me," I accused teasingly. I fastened the necklace around my neck and smiled. "Thank you!"
YOSSI BOUGHT AYA A PRESENT!!! :wriggly: :wriggly: :wriggly:
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Remember Aya, no swooning over your best friends girlfriend! :P
"It'll be nice for the three of us to hang out, huh?"
"You mean, you, me, and Tan?" I asked as we walked towards the opened doors.
YES! YES! YES! OH PLEASE YES! :w00t:
"Yeah. We haven't really spent any time together... well unless you count the time Miki was naked and yelling..." Yossi stopped in her tracks and turned to me. "That came out wrong."
"Yeah, it did," I agreed, stepping onto the train.
It gives a GREAT mental image though. :jerk:
Ok then...so this would be....
- AyaYoMiki?
- YoyaMiki?
- YoGAM?
- GYAM (Great Yossi, Aya and Miki) or GHAM (Great Hitomi, Aya and Miki)? :D Geez I'm lame. Serves me right for commenting whilst wanting to fall asleep.
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Went to the blog and vote. This is all I can say, "Matsuura Aya deeesu~" :P
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Okay, nothing really happen for me to say that Yossie-Aya got something going on except that Yossie is being so sweeettttttt............
I'm melting......
But if its really do, then it will be like cross couple....
Yossie-Aya and we have Miki-Rika? Gah, almond... you really have a weird mind but that's why I love you... :wub:
And Yay for almond to have a fic blog....!!
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heeey! i disappear for a few weeks, and when i get back, these things happen? XD
what have you done to my fandom, Almond?!?! XD
:lol: :rofl: :love:
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Yoshizawa Hitomi? is that even possible? lol
and :otomerika: yay!
very nice cute chapter, and another :otomerika: yay! for yossi threatening!
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Comments reply time!! (Yes, that means new part.)
Ah!!!! :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: this is really good!!!
I'm still thinking Aya wants something with Yossie :cool1:
:wahaha:
Actually, whose pants Aya wants into will be revealed pretty soon. I'm anxious to get to the end, but I have so much filler crap planned... blah!
Bench-pressed the Gatas team members??? :o
Fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck that's so hot! :drool:
ISN'T IT? I've actually been bench-pressed before. :otomerika:
She dug her cell phone out of her pocket and hit her speed-dial.
"Hey... you at my place?" she asked into the phone. "...ok, put clothes on... ha ha, no, really. I ran into Aya and she's coming over for a bit... MIKI, NO.... ugh, fine... be there soon... yeah, yeah, love you too, bye." She snapped the phone shut and shook her head.
Something tells me the other side of the convo was something like this:
Miki = "Aya's there? Tell me you love me. I love YOU! C'mon! SAY IT! Say iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit! " :nya:
...huh, I guess it could have been. My mind was more like
Yo: Hey.
Mi: Hey yourself, sexy. :-*
Yo: You at my place?
Mi: Of course. I've been patiently waiting for you. :heart:
Yo: Ok, put clothes on.
Mi: :O I have no idea what you're -
Yo: ha ha, no really. I ran into Aya and she's coming over for a bit.
Mi: So? She's seen me naked before. XD
Yo: MIKI, NO.
Mi: *laughs* Ok, but I'm not putting underwear back on. :twisted:
Yo: ugh, fine.
Mi: Yep, the whoooole time she's here, just remember that I'm not wearing anything at all under my skirt. And I've been waiting for you to come home for a very. long. time. :pimp:
Yo: ...be there soon.
Mi: I'm sure you will. *laughs lecherously*
Yo: yeah, yeah, I love you too. bye.
Mi: *cackles*
Ok then...so this would be....
- AyaYoMiki?
- YoyaMiki?
- YoGAM?
- GYAM (Great Yossi, Aya and Miki) or GHAM (Great Hitomi, Aya and Miki)? :D Geez I'm lame. Serves me right for commenting whilst wanting to fall asleep.
I've personally been referring to it as aYoMiki, but I like Gyam. :lol:
Went to the blog and vote. This is all I can say, "Matsuura Aya deeesu~" :P
:wahaha:
That poll is the best thing I've ever done. It's amusing me to no end.
Okay, nothing really happen for me to say that Yossie-Aya got something going on except that Yossie is being so sweeettttttt............
I'm melting......
But if its really do, then it will be like cross couple....
Yossie-Aya and we have Miki-Rika? Gah, almond... you really have a weird mind but that's why I love you... :wub:
What would they be called anyway? aYo? MatsuZawa? IshiMoto? MatsuYoMikiMoto? GAMIshiYoshi? :lol:
heeey! i disappear for a few weeks, and when i get back, these things happen? XD
what have you done to my fandom, Almond?!?! XD
:lol: :rofl: :love:
:hiakhiakhiak:
All I'm saying is it ain't over 'till... what would the H!P equivalent of "It ain't over 'till the fat lady sings" be...
It ain't over 'till the 12-year-old joins MM.?
It ain't over 'till Yossi changes her hairstyle?
OH! I got it.
All I'm saying is it ain't over 'till Miki gropes someone. :grin:
Yoshizawa Hitomi? is that even possible? lol
Yeah, someone even guessed that right after I posted the prologue. Honestly, the poll is comprised of the girls that people have guessed or said they wanted to do it and I threw in Makoto for good measure.
The prologue narrator IS listed on the poll, though. :whistle:
Fun fact! :bingo: I posted the new part on my blog (http://almondfics.blogspot.com) before I left for work this morning, so you could have read it hours ago. There's also a short, weird one-shot fic there as well.
Anyway! Part 18 coming up in a few! :otomerika:
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PART 18 - FUJIMOTO - JUNE 28TH
The taxi driver was staring at me.
Well, I can't really blame him. I mean, first of all, I AM Fujimoto Miki. And second of all, I was a bit... hyper.
I don't normally do hyper. It's not really my thing, but I had turned in my apartment keys and I was on my way to Yocchan's to help move her things over to our new place.
Our place.
I started giggling to myself again, making the driver glance at me once more in the rear-view mirror. But I didn't care. I was about to get 24/7 eyecandy.
The cab pulled up in front of her apartment complex. The driver smiled at me as I, still giddy, gave him a big tip.
"Thank you, miss," he said as I handed him the money. "You know, you look an awful lot like Fujimoto Miki. If you weren't so cheerful, I'd have thought you were her!" I laughed almost hysterically as he drove away. Ah, what a great day.
I whirled around and immediately slammed into a girl behind me.
"The hell!" I exclaimed, my glee rapidly turning to annoyance.
"Ah!" the girl exclaimed. She paused for a minute before continuing. "Fujimoto, good morning!"
"Konno, what are you doing here?" I asked.
"The special training," she replied. "Isn't that why you're here?"
"'Special training'?" I repeated.
"HEY!" I turned and saw Mai and Rika walking towards us. I scratched my head in confusion.
"What's going on?" I asked Konno.
"Yoshizawa called us," a voice came from beside me. I jumped and turned to face Korenaga. "Sorry," she apologized. "I thought you saw me."
"So, Miki, do you know what this special training is?" Mai asked.
"She doesn't seem to have a clue," Konno supplied helpfully.
"Really?" Korenaga said, tilting her head to one side. "That's weird. Aren't you the subcaptain?"
"Morning!" We all turned to look at the grinning tomboy coming out of the building. "Everyone ready for a workout?"
"Yossi... what have you plotted?" Rika asked with a suspicious I've-seen-this-before expression.
"Nothing!" Yossi replied, looking a bit too innocent. "Just a nice training session for the Gatas team! Teamwork, cardio, even a bit of strength training for good measure."
"You're making them help you move, aren't you?" I laughed. Yossi glared at me, which only made me laugh harder.
"WHAT?" Mai exclaimed. "You're moving?! Why didn't you tell me?"
"Uh... Hey, Mai? I'm moving," Yossi laughed sheepishly and led our grumbling teammates inside.
"This is worse than when she let me find out about her graduation from the concert MC," Mai muttered. "Were you just going to let me come over one day and you not be here?" she yelled.
"Pretty much," Yossi called back over her shoulder.
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And you all thought I was kidding when I subtitled it "Memoir II: Revenge of the Fluff" XD
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YYYYAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!
let me read it now.
I thought they were gonna do some ongaku gatas voice training and I became sad because fujimoto is not in the group :( that's why she didn't know about it. :(
but no, it's just the moving. lol
good fluff, eh
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...huh, I guess it could have been. My mind was more like
*snip*
Mi: *cackles*
Okay, yours is waaaaaaaaaaaaaay better. :thumbsup
The taxi driver was staring at me.
Well, I can't really blame him. I mean, first of all, I AM Fujimoto Miki.
Correction...she is TEH AWESOMENESS that is Fujimoto Miki! :rockon:
I was a bit... hyper.
I don't normally do hyper. It's not really my thing, but I had turned in my apartment keys and I was on my way to Yocchan's to help move her things over to our new place.
Our place.
/me pictures Miki squeeling "EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE" like a little girl as she gets all excited over this...
:wriggly:
"You know, you look an awful lot like Fujimoto Miki. If you weren't so cheerful, I'd have thought you were her!" I laughed almost hysterically as he drove away.
Oh, if only he knew. :wahaha:
"Konno, what are you doing here?" I asked.
"The special training," she replied. "Isn't that why you're here?"
"'Special training'?" I repeated.
"HEY!" I turned and saw Mai and Rika walking towards us. I scratched my head in confusion.
"What's going on?" I asked Konno.
"Yoshizawa called us," a voice came from beside me. I jumped and turned to face Korenaga. "Sorry," she apologized. "I thought you saw me."
...
"Morning!" We all turned to look at the grinning tomboy coming out of the building. "Everyone ready for a workout?"
"Yossi... what have you plotted?" Rika asked with a suspicious I've-seen-this-before expression.
"Nothing!" Yossi replied, looking a bit too innocent. "Just a nice training session for the Gatas team! Teamwork, cardio, even a bit of strength training for good measure."
OH! OH! OH! I KNOW! I KNOW!! :w00t:
Yossi called the others because she wanted more help in moving her stuff to the new place. The manual labour that is to ensue is the "special training" (especially if they have to haul stuff up/down a bunch of stairs).
:kekeke:
And poor Kore-chan, no one noticed her. :lol:
"You're making them help you move, aren't you?" I laughed. Yossi glared at me, which only made me laugh harder.
"WHAT?" Mai exclaimed. "You're moving?! Why didn't you tell me?"
"Uh... Hey, Mai? I'm moving," Yossi laughed sheepishly and led our grumbling teammates inside.
Mai = :mon spit:
Yossi = :mon sweat:
Konkon, Rika, Kore-chan = :mon annoy:
Miki = :mon lmao:
"This is worse than when she let me find out about her graduation from the concert MC," Mai muttered. "Were you just going to let me come over one day and you not be here?" she yelled.
"Pretty much," Yossi called back over her shoulder.
:on lol: :on lol: :on lol:
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:mon lmao: :mon lmao: :mon lmao: :mon lmao:
Yossie you're such a character!!!! Where's Shibata? mmm I guess she's busy with MK...
These little and funny chapters really give it something special to the story
I'll be waiting for more :whistle:
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I started giggling to myself again, making the driver glance at me once more in the rear-view mirror. But I didn't care. I was about to get 24/7 eyecandy.
Ah, lucky Miki. I can so imagine her being hyper and giggling. And that’s cute :mon lovelaff:
"You're making them help you move, aren't you?" I laughed. Yossi glared at me, which only made me laugh harder.
Of course she is. She’s The Captain and she can make everyone to do anything for her :wahaha:
"WHAT?" Mai exclaimed. "You're moving?! Why didn't you tell me?"
"Uh... Hey, Mai? I'm moving," Yossi laughed sheepishly and led our grumbling teammates inside.
"This is worse than when she let me find out about her graduation from the concert MC," Mai muttered. "Were you just going to let me come over one day and you not be here?" she yelled.
"Pretty much," Yossi called back over her shoulder.
That’s what you get when you’re not inviting your friends to your place :on lol:
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Just a question: Do you know how many chapter will be written? O r you're just writing along until the end of august, whenever you get there?
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Honestly, I have no idea. There's at LEAST 12 more parts given what I have planned, but I'm not sure exactly. I'm definitely speeding the timeline along, though, because right now the fic is kicking my ass. :lol:
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TWEEEEEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLLLVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE that's so much!!!!11!22!!!!!ONE1ELEVEN567!1
then again, we're still in the end of JUNE, then again it's less than a month, for what I read in the fic blog.
shit.
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I thought they were gonna do some ongaku gatas voice training and I became sad because fujimoto is not in the group :( that's why she didn't know about it. :(
Like Yossi would mysteriously summon them do something as normal as voice training XD
...huh, I guess it could have been. My mind was more like
*snip*
Mi: *cackles*
Okay, yours is waaaaaaaaaaaaaay better. :thumbsup
Why thank you! :otomerika:
The taxi driver was staring at me.
Well, I can't really blame him. I mean, first of all, I AM Fujimoto Miki.
Correction...she is TEH AWESOMENESS that is Fujimoto Miki! :rockon:
I once said "Are you kidding!? I AM the wonder that is Fujimoto Miki" during a phone conversation. Seriously. Ask manamin.
"You're making them help you move, aren't you?" I laughed. Yossi glared at me, which only made me laugh harder.
"WHAT?" Mai exclaimed. "You're moving?! Why didn't you tell me?"
"Uh... Hey, Mai? I'm moving," Yossi laughed sheepishly and led our grumbling teammates inside.
Mai = :mon spit:
Yossi = :mon sweat:
Konkon, Rika, Kore-chan = :mon annoy:
Miki = :mon lmao:
Oh, JFC, you and your emoticon commentary are so full of win :love:
"This is worse than when she let me find out about her graduation from the concert MC," Mai muttered. "Were you just going to let me come over one day and you not be here?" she yelled.
"Pretty much," Yossi called back over her shoulder.
:on lol: :on lol: :on lol:
The sad thing? I didn't make up the part about Satoda finding out from the concert MC. She seriously found out Yossi was graduating when Yossi announced it at the winter concert.
Where's Shibata? mmm I guess she's busy with MK...
Shibata's in the land of People I Don't Know Well Enough To Pretend To Write So I Give Them Other Things To Do. Uh, I mean, yeah, she's busy with MK... :sweat:
"You're making them help you move, aren't you?" I laughed. Yossi glared at me, which only made me laugh harder.
Of course she is. She’s The Captain and she can make everyone to do anything for her :wahaha:
Oh, crud, I forgot to write that in... OK, EVERYONE PRETEND THIS WAS SOMEWHERE IN ONE OF THE CHAPTERS!
Someone: Where are the new Kids members then - Miyabi and Maimi and them?
Yossi: Uh... they're not coming.
Miki: Miyabi's still pissed you said she wasn't a virgin, isn't she?
Yossi: No comment.
then again, we're still in the end of JUNE, then again it's less than a month, for what I read in the fic blog.
Less than a month? :dunno: The shit hits the fan late August...
Meh, anyway! It's almost new chaptah time! Whoo!
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PART 19 - AYAKA - JUNE 28TH
"Ayaka! You made it!" Yossi exclaimed as she opened her front door. I stepped inside and stared incredulously at the chaos inside. What I could see was mostly empty except for a duffel bag near the door, but her bedroom door was open and random things kept being thrown out of the door and near a box living room. I could hear squealing and indistinct yelling. An item finally landed in the box and I heard triumphant shouting; I think I heard Mai yell 'In your face, Korenaga!'... I caught a glimpse of Miki searching meticulously through the kitchen, dancing a little and humming "Boogie Train '03" to herself.
"Yocchan," I started cautiously. Suddenly I heard a scream from the bedroom and Ishikawa came running into the living room holding a small gold statue in her hand.
"I KNEW IT!" Rika exclaimed, thrusting the item at Yossi accusingly. Yossi started laughing. Rika smacked my friend on the arm. "You said you lost it!"
"I did lose it! I lost it somewhere in that closet," Yossi replied defensively.
"What IS that?" I asked.
"Oh, it's from Hello! Morning. Rika and I co-won an award for funniest member," Yossi explained.
"See, it's not fair that you keep it," Rika replied. "It's half mine and - "
"Half yours? Please, it's like 10% yours. Without me, it was just you being painfully narcissistic."
"You're so mean to me!" Rika mock-whined.
"And that's why I keep the trophy," Yossi mock-whined back, snatching the statue from Rika and placing it casually on top of her head. Rika and I both stared, waiting for it to fall down. Yossi crossed her arms and grinned.
"Is your head flat or something?" Rika asked.
"No, I'm just that good," Yossi smirked.
"Hey, Yocchan," Miki called, walking towards us. "You still had some ice cream in the back of the freezer," she continued, smiling sweetly. She held up the found ice cream cone and slowly licked it, staring so blatantly at Yocchan that I almost started blushing for her.
The statue promptly fell off of Yossi's head. Miki turned to me and Rika and smirked.
"And I'm just THAT good," she said as Yossi silently leaned down and picked the figure up off of the floor.
Suddenly, chatter coming from the bedroom stopped, startling the four of us. Yossi's eyes narrowed suspiciously as the silence.
"Maaai?" she called.
"....yes?"
"What's going on in there?" This was followed by the muffled sounds of frantic whispering.
"Nothing!" Mai finally replied. Yossi raised an eyebrow and stalked over to her soon-to-be former bedroom.
"WHAT THE HELL!?" I could hear her yell as she walked inside. I turned to Rika and Miki.
"What's going on?" I asked.
"They're packing the last of her crap up. You know that second closet in Yocchan's bedroom?" Miki replied. I nodded. "Have you ever seen what's in there?"
"I just always assumed it was full of porn," I deadpanned. Rika laughed.
"No, that's in a box under her bed," Miki replied. "She keeps all the freebies she's gotten over the years in there. It's absolutely insane."
"Why are we here, though?"
"We're apparently helping Yossi move as part of Gatas training," Rika replied, rolling her eyes a little.
"But I'm not in Gatas," I protested.
"AND CLEAN IT UP!" Yossi bellowed, stalking back into the living room and slamming her bedroom door behind her. Miki glanced over at me and shrugged before continuing to eat her ice cream.
"Yocchan?" I ventured.
"Hmm?"
"Why am I here? I'm not part of Gatas and I don't remember offering to help you move."
"But you're my best friiiend!" Yossi whined. "Don't you want to help me move? You loooove me, remember?" I groaned at her puppy dog expression.
"Then where's Matsuura?" I asked, gesturing at Miki.
"She's still annoyed that I got mad at her for forgetting she remembered my birthday this year," Miki laughed. I blinked.
"Forgetting she remembered your birthday," I repeated slowly, hoping it would make sense the second time around. Yossi grabbed my arm and pulled me aside.
"Yeah, people think the three of us are strange? We've got NOTHING on those two. You have no idea," she muttered.
"What was that?" Miki called.
"Nothing!" Yossi replied with a charming grin. Miki raised an eyebrow and popped the last of the ice cream cone into her mouth. Suddenly, the bedroom door flew open.
"WHAT THE HELL IS THIS!?" Mai exclaimed, lugging behind her what appeared to be some sort of giant yellow flotation device. Konno followed her, laughing uncontrollably. Miki and I gaped at it in wonder, but Rika started cracking up.
"You KEPT that!?" she squealed between giggles.
"Of course!" Yossi said defensively, snatching the item from Mai and draping it around her like a beauty pageant sash.
"Why does have Kei's name on it?" I asked, raising an eyebrow. Miki grabbed my arm in a panic and pointed at the floor.
"Forget that! What the hell is that freaky looking brown thing!?" she exclaimed.
"It's my Yasuda Kei cell phone strap!" Yossi replied, as though it should be obvious.
"It's from Utaban," Konno offered.
"OH GEEZ!" We all turned to see a red-faced Korenaga rush out of the bedroom and wordlessly thrust a box at Yossi.
"See?" Miki said helpfully. "She keeps that in a box under her bed."
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I REMEMBER THE KEICHAN CELLSTRAP lol
though I thiunk it should be a keychain...
And Kore foungd TEH BOX :grin:
nice chapter there lol I laughed almost through all of it, srsly
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I demand to know what's in the box. :roll: Like, lez, straight, bi, furries, video, pics, manga, errr... electronic devices? :P
Just out of curiosity :)
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:on lol: :mon lmao: :lol: XD :rofl:
"Why am I here? I'm not part of Gatas and I don't remember offering to help you move."
Whaaaaat??! You wanted to miss all the fun, Ayaka XD
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The sad thing? I didn't make up the part about Satoda finding out from the concert MC. She seriously found out Yossi was graduating when Yossi announced it at the winter concert.
Ouch! :rofl:
"Ayaka! You made it!" Yossi exclaimed as she opened her front door. I stepped inside and stared incredulously at the chaos inside.
Ah, did Ayaka know that the two of them (Yossi and Miki) were moving in together and she's knowingly come to help, or did Yossi trick her like the Gatas girls? :P
What I could see was mostly empty except for a duffel bag near the door, but her bedroom door was open and random things kept being thrown out of the door and near a box living room. I could hear squealing and indistinct yelling. An item finally landed in the box and I heard triumphant shouting; I think I heard Mai yell 'In your face, Korenaga!'
CLOTHES FIGHT! XD
Ishikawa came running into the living room holding a small gold statue in her hand.
"I KNEW IT!" Rika exclaimed, thrusting the item at Yossi accusingly. Yossi started laughing. Rika smacked my friend on the arm. "You said you lost it!"
"I did lose it! I lost it somewhere in that closet," Yossi replied defensively.
"What IS that?" I asked.
"Oh, it's from Hello! Morning. Rika and I co-won an award for funniest member," Yossi explained.
"See, it's not fair that you keep it," Rika replied. "It's half mine and - "
"Half yours? Please, it's like 10% yours. Without me, it was just you being painfully narcissistic."
Yeah, I gotta give this one to Yossi. :yep:
Love Rika and all, but yeah, she's funny only in her own little Ishikawa world. :sweat:
Yossi mock-whined back, snatching the statue from Rika and placing it casually on top of her head. Rika and I both stared, waiting for it to fall down. Yossi crossed her arms and grinned.
"Is your head flat or something?" Rika asked.
"No, I'm just that good," Yossi smirked.
Damn right she is. :thumbsup
"Hey, Yocchan," Miki called, walking towards us. "You still had some ice cream in the back of the freezer," she continued, smiling sweetly. She held up the found ice cream cone and slowly licked it, staring so blatantly at Yocchan that I almost started blushing for her.
The statue promptly fell off of Yossi's head. Miki turned to me and Rika and smirked.
"And I'm just THAT good," she said as Yossi silently leaned down and picked the figure up off of the floor.
Oh HELLZ yeah! :rockon:
"What's going on?" I asked.
"They're packing the last of her crap up. You know that second closet in Yocchan's bedroom?" Miki replied. I nodded. "Have you ever seen what's in there?"
"I just always assumed it was full of porn," I deadpanned.
POINT...AYAKA! :lol:
"No, that's in a box under her bed," Miki replied. "She keeps all the freebies she's gotten over the years in there. It's absolutely insane."
GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!! :on lol:
Free schwag FTW!!! 8)
"Yocchan?" I ventured.
"Hmm?"
"Why am I here? I'm not part of Gatas and I don't remember offering to help you move."
"But you're my best friiiend!" Yossi whined. "Don't you want to help me move? You loooove me, remember?" I groaned at her puppy dog expression.
Yossi = :mon cute:
Ayaka = :mon huh:
"Then where's Matsuura?" I asked, gesturing at Miki.
"She's still annoyed that I got mad at her for forgetting she remembered my birthday this year," Miki laughed. I blinked.
Wait, wait, wait, wait, wait, wait, wait, wait...does Miki know that they only reason Aya actually remembered her birthday was because she went on that shopping trip with Yossi a few chapters back? ;D
"WHAT THE HELL IS THIS!?" Mai exclaimed, lugging behind her what appeared to be some sort of giant yellow flotation device. Konno followed her, laughing uncontrollably. Miki and I gaped at it in wonder, but Rika started cracking up.
Yossi has a giant yellow floatie? Probably "borrowed" from one of their trips to Hawaii? :roll:
BTW, laughing Konkon = :wriggly:
"You KEPT that!?" she squealed between giggles.
"Of course!" Yossi said defensively, snatching the item from Mai and draping it around her like a beauty pageant sash.
"Why does have Kei's name on it?" I asked, raising an eyebrow.
Okay, I don't think I've seen this ep. If I did, it was a long time ago and I've forgotten. :dunno:
"It's my Yasuda Kei cell phone strap!" Yossi replied, as though it should be obvious.
"It's from Utaban," Konno offered.
KEMEKO PHONE STRAP!!! :mon lmao:
"OH GEEZ!" We all turned to see a red-faced Korenaga rush out of the bedroom and wordlessly thrust a box at Yossi.
"See?" Miki said helpfully. "She keeps that in a box under her bed."
Ooops, Kore-chan found Yossi's porn? Must've been some freaky shit in there. :wahaha:
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this fic needs MOAR chapters :P
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I do agree with that :P
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LOL! I know, I know! Don't kill me.
I need to transfer the fic from my blog back onto my comp and then work on some more chapters. I'm probably gonna speed things up, though, because I've completely lost my timeline anyway (thanks great comp crash of 07!)
I was hoping to get some work done on this tonight, but who knows.
Seriously, love to you all for reading my insanity anyway.
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so when ur ocmputer crashed that means u had lost everything u had written for the ending too?
in other words, that means the ending can change? :D
Chances of happy ending increasing :otomerika:
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so when ur ocmputer crashed that means u had lost everything u had written for the ending too?
in other words, that means the ending can change? :D
Chances of happy ending increasing :otomerika:
wtf... no. :lol:
I had pasted almost everything to my beta and she obsessively logs IM conversations, so I just have to wade through the mountains of our IM logs she sent me. (There's a convo in here from April of 2004 )
Anyway, I'm the writer - I can change the ending whenever I feel like it. For all you know, I've changed it already! :wahaha:
ok, I haven't and can say with 99% certainty that I won't, but still...
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I take back dancing Rika then :p
I think shall just go sulk in a corner now :cry:
No, although it doesn't seem like it, i actually quite like angst so i am looking forward to the ending being like that anyway ;)
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No, although it doesn't seem like it, i actually quite like angst so i am looking forward to the ending being like that anyway ;)
I'm still not sure how you think the ending is, though XD
Anyway, I am working on it. Don't kill me. Love to all. Dancing Rika. :otomerika:
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So....if you have that IM log handy, aren't you supposed to be able to post a long due chapter now? :grin:
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So....if you have that IM log handy, aren't you supposed to be able to post a long due chapter now? :grin:
tho she's offline, this is a valid question
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So....if you have that IM log handy, aren't you supposed to be able to post a long due chapter now? :grin:
tho she's offline, this is a valid question
LOL! Only if you all want me to post a half-finished chapter from near the end. I'm working on the next one right now, but y'all are making me feel bad over here! :lol:
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I'm still not sure how you think the ending is, though XD
Anyway, I am working on it. Don't kill me. Love to all. Dancing Rika. :otomerika:
i don't know what i think the ending is now, but i am sure it will be a great read no matter what :otomerika:
I won't kill you but feel free to do a one-shot any time u like ;)
LOL! Only if you all want me to post a half-finished chapter from near the end. I'm working on the next one right now, but y'all are making me feel bad over here! :lol:
Half-finished chapter doesn't sound too bad, its kinda like a teaser or a preview u see... And seeing as though you just offered to post it :D
oh and to the y'all in that last post :wub: :heart:
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ooh i love your fic, really :wub:
i read it the another day and i'm waiting the new chapter :nya:
it's funny
so much time that imn't reading yomiki fanfics *o*, they are my fauvorites :luvluv1:
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ALL RIGHT YOU NEEDY BASTARDS, I HAVE THE NEW CHAPTER. XD
And I am SO nice, I'm not even doing a comments reply like I usually do. I'm just posting the damn thing.
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PART 20
MATSUURA - JULY 9TH
I've noticed that sometimes in life, things suddenly seem to go in slow motion. Everything will be going along like normal and then you notice something and you can't do anything to stop it, but it seems like you're watching it at half-speed.
Ah, so this is one of those times..., I remember thinking to myself as Yossy slapped me across the face. Her eyes went really wide right before her hand made contact with my cheek and she immediately clapped her hands over her mouth afterwards. I sank to the floor in more shock than anything else.
"I am so sorry," Yossy gasped, squatting down next to me. I glared at her.
"Ayaya! Are you ok!?" Abe exclaimed behind us.
"Does this mean I get to knee you in the crotch now?" I asked with a sly grin. Yossy laughed a little.
"You'd have to clear that with Miki first," she retorted as she took a hold of my chin and examined my cheek critically. I could feel my face start to flush a little. Our eyes locked briefly and she quickly dropped her hand. "Sorry," she muttered and abruptly stood back up.
"Everything ok?" Abe asked, helping me up off the floor. I flashed her a Matsuura Aya Idol-Wattage smile.
"Great!" I replied. "I was just giving her a hard time." Abe flashed back her own Idol-Wattage smile. Yossy looked at the pair of us and shook her head.
"From the top again?" she asked.
"Uh, why don't we take it from after we stop beating on each other?" I suggested, rubbing my slightly sore cheek thoughtfully.
"I'm sorry!" Yossy groaned, walking back to her spot. "I thought it was left-right!"
"It IS left-right!" I laughed, getting into place myself.
"...what did I do then?"
"Left-left."
"Crap."
"Did that bleach go to your brain?" I asked, gesturing at her freshly-dyed blonde hair.
"Ok!" Abe broke in before Yossy could respond. "From the harmony part?" We nodded. "Ok! My count. 1! 2! 3! 4!"
We started bopping back and forth, swinging our arms and doing our best imitation of the original singers.
"100% kataomoi!" Abe sang.
"Baby I love you so, suki suki baby!" Yossy and I harmonized as we bopped along, doing suggestive hand gestures. A clock on the wall chimed loudly, stopping us all mid-bop.
"Is it 6 already!?" Yossy exclaimed, hurrying over to grab her purse. "I'm sorry, I've got to go. I have an Ongaku Gatas rehearsal in 30 minutes."
"But the Music Fair taping's next week!" Abe protested. Yossy groaned and paused in the open doorway.
"I'll be back as soon as I can, ok?" She made an apologetic face. "I'm really sorry, Abe. I didn't plan this very well."
"No, you didn't, Yocchan!" Abe mock-scolded with a smile. Yossy grinned and started out the door.
"Yossy!" I called. She turned and looked at me expectantly. I smiled and threw her cell phone at her. She caught it neatly and stowed it away in her pocket, winking at me in the process.
"Thanks, Aya!" she called as she left the room.
"100% kataomoi indeed," I mused to myself, staring after Yossy's retreating figure.
"What was that?" Abe asked slowly. I could feel her staring at me.
"Nothing."
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And yes, that IS where the title came from. :wahaha:
If you haven't seen the Music Fair performance in question, you can find it on YouTube (http://youtube.com/watch?v=bh6zStPxuv0) as uploaded by yours truly.
Please do comment. It's what keeps me writing. :lol:
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Oh! the long-waited chapter...!! :w00t:
Ah, so this is one of those times..., I remember thinking to myself as Yossy slapped me across the face. Her eyes went really wide right before her hand made contact with my cheek and she immediately clapped her hands over her mouth afterwards. I sank to the floor in more shock than anything else.
"I am so sorry," Yossy gasped, squatting down next to me. I glared at her.
OMG!! What happen??
"Everything ok?" Abe asked, helping me up off the floor. I flashed her a Matsuura Aya Idol-Wattage smile.
"Great!" I replied. "I was just giving her a hard time." Abe flashed back her own Idol-Wattage smile. Yossy looked at the pair of us and shook her head.
"From the top again?" she asked.
"Uh, why don't we take it from after we stop beating on each other?" I suggested, rubbing my slightly sore cheek thoughtfully.
"I'm sorry!" Yossy groaned, walking back to her spot. "I thought it was left-right!"
"It IS left-right!" I laughed, getting into place myself.
"...what did I do then?"
"Left-left."
"Crap."
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Of course, the rehearsal!!! Gah, Almond!! I love you for include this to your fics!!!
"Yossy!" I called. She turned and looked at me expectantly. I smiled and threw her cell phone at her. She caught it neatly and stowed it away in her pocket, winking at me in the process.
"Thanks, Aya!" she called as she left the room.
"100% kataomoi indeed," I mused to myself, staring after Yossy's retreating figure.
"What was that?" Abe asked slowly. I could feel her staring at me.
"Nothing."
:angry: And I hate you Alomond when you do that!! What did Aya mean by 100% kataomoi? Did she started to fall for Yossie? Or did she meant it for Miki? Ah.. the cell phone thinggy.... I guess the secret will revealed on the next chapter?
Can't wait!!!
Thanks Almond for the update!! :wub:
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ooh nice chapter
i had seen this music fair :on lol:
Aya loves Yossy :frustrated:
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YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY new chapter FINALLY :P
It's a very nice chapter and let me guess, because Yossyie didn't rehearse enough she made that mistake, right? Oh, this fic is so awesome, just like reality lol
oh, and yes, I don't get Ayaya WHAT IS GOING ON WTF almond, almond........................................
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I've noticed that sometimes in life, things suddenly seem to go in slow motion. Everything will be going along like normal and then you notice something and you can't do anything to stop it, but it seems like you're watching it at half-speed.
Ah, so this is one of those times..., I remember thinking to myself as Yossy slapped me across the face. Her eyes went really wide right before her hand made contact with my cheek and she immediately clapped her hands over her mouth afterwards. I sank to the floor in more shock than anything else.
WTF?!?!? :shocked:
"I am so sorry," Yossy gasped, squatting down next to me. I glared at her.
"Ayaya! Are you ok!?" Abe exclaimed behind us.
"Does this mean I get to knee you in the crotch now?" I asked with a sly grin. Yossy laughed a little.
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOh...they're rehearsing for that perf of "High School Lullaby" that they did. :lol:
"You'd have to clear that with Miki first," she retorted as she took a hold of my chin and examined my cheek critically. I could feel my face start to flush a little. Our eyes locked briefly and she quickly dropped her hand.
Ooooooh...MatsuYoshi dokidoki. :D
"Everything ok?" Abe asked, helping me up off the floor. I flashed her a Matsuura Aya Idol-Wattage smile.
"Great!" I replied. "I was just giving her a hard time." Abe flashed back her own Idol-Wattage smile.
Damn...need shades with all that wattage. 8)
ATTENTION: EPIC EMOTICON POST!!! :rockon:
"I'm sorry!" Yossy groaned, walking back to her spot. "I thought it was left-right!"
:sweat:
"It IS left-right!" I laughed, getting into place myself.
:bingo:
"...what did I do then?"
:dunno:
"Left-left."
:hee:
"Crap."
:err:
/me is particularly proud of this one.
:wahaha: ;D
"Is it 6 already!?" Yossy exclaimed, hurrying over to grab her purse. "I'm sorry, I've got to go. I have an Ongaku Gatas rehearsal in 30 minutes."
Ongaku Gatas rehearsal...riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight. :pimp:
*cough*Happy-time with Miki*cough*
"Yossy!" I called. She turned and looked at me expectantly. I smiled and threw her cell phone at her. She caught it neatly and stowed it away in her pocket, winking at me in the process.
"Thanks, Aya!" she called as she left the room.
*gasp* Omgass! Yossi winked at Aya! :drool:
"100% kataomoi indeed," I mused to myself, staring after Yossy's retreating figure.
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO DOKIDOKI!!! :nya:
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I don't think its any old comment that keeps you going, just the nagging ones :)
And Ayayayayayayaaaa, your treading a thin line of liking your best friend's girlfriend and liking-liking your best friend's girlfriend :sweat:
Please let there be a catfight though :D :w00t:
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Please let there be a catfight though :D :w00t:
To hell with the catfight, give us the part where the 3 of them "make up" together...AT THE SAME TIME!!! :hiakhiakhiak:
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To hell with the catfight, give us the part where the 3 of them "make up" together...AT THE SAME TIME!!! :hiakhiakhiak:
I suppose that would work too lol
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wtf... no. :lol:
I had pasted almost everything to my beta and she obsessively logs IM conversations, so I just have to wade through the mountains of our IM logs she sent me. (There's a convo in here from April of 2004 )
Hey! My obsessive compulsive logging has saved your bootay more than once, as I recall. =P
And pfft - that's only the gaim/pidgin logs. You do recall I have back to 2001 on the external hard drive, right? >_> Way back when you were REALLY spastic. :hee:
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"Did that bleach go to your brain?" :rofl: This is officially my quote of the night. I smell angst and love triangle coming our way. New angle that's neva been xplore before, Ayaya in love with Yossy!! Heh..... well....thank you for the new chapter, don't quite know if I should be happy or not with the new direction you seem to take. 8)
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Please let there be a catfight though :D :w00t:
To hell with the catfight, give us the part where the 3 of them "make up" together...AT THE SAME TIME!!! :hiakhiakhiak:
And if Almond makes that happen, she's a freaking -SAMA!!!
But oh come on! Miki won't shared Yossie with anyone, ne?
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I was so confused in the beginning, I thought I had to read the previous chapters again. :lol: That false drama was good. :P I think Yossy's hits would be hard since she likes boxing. :mon ko: Eventhough she said her name is spelled "Yossy" it felt strange to see it so many times like that in the story. :mon sweat:
Aya-chan, all I have to say is, I will wait patiently to see how this foreshadowing will progress.
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First: Aaaaaaaaaaaaaa, new chapter :heart: :farofflook: :luvluv1: :nya: :mon angel: :mon inluv: :mon lovelaff: :rockon:
"From the top again?" she asked.
"Uh, why don't we take it from after we stop beating on each other?" I suggested, rubbing my slightly sore cheek thoughtfully.
Thanks god, it was only rehearsal. I was already thinking you really did speed things up xD
100% kataomoi indeed," I mused to myself, staring after Yossy's retreating figure.
Aya loves Yossi?? Wait... This is almond's fic, so this can mean anything XD
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AAAAAAA!!! There’s something between Aya and Miki!!! And Aya didn’t mean herself by that one-sided love, she meant Yossi....
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NO!!! Aya loves Yossi. Yes, it has to be like that...
Now I want to watch "High School Lullaby" again XD
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That Music Fair perf was gold, I watched it like 10.000 times back then.
Where is this strange looking Yossy spelling coming from thats popping up everywhere lately?
Did I miss something?
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^ You missed Ongaku Gatas no Gatten Guts10☆Gatas 004 when Mai reads almond's mail asking the right spelling for Yossyie's nickname and she then describes all the spellings with the current options and concludes that the right is with y.
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^ You missed Ongaku Gatas no Gatten Guts10☆Gatas 004 when Mai reads almond's mail asking the right spelling for Yossyie's nickname and she then describes all the spellings with the current options and concludes that the right is with y.
Yesh. In case anyone missed that, THE Yoshizawa Hitomi answered my letter, said my name aloud, and kind of offhandedly hit on me. :otomerika:
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^ And yet you still haven't commented on my latest (and may I say EPIC) emoticon post. :cry:
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^ You missed Ongaku Gatas no Gatten Guts10☆Gatas 004 when Mai reads almond's mail asking the right spelling for Yossyie's nickname and she then describes all the spellings with the current options and concludes that the right is with y.
Yesh. In case anyone missed that, THE Yoshizawa Hitomi answered my letter, said my name aloud, and kind of offhandedly hit on me. :otomerika:
lol teh pimpwolf
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Oh! the long-waited chapter...!! :w00t:
Yeah, I'm sorry about the long wait there. Life happens. XD
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Of course, the rehearsal!!! Gah, Almond!! I love you for include this to your fics!!!
Of course! I LOVE that performance.
:angry: And I hate you Alomond when you do that!! What did Aya mean by 100% kataomoi? Did she started to fall for Yossie? Or did she meant it for Miki? Ah.. the cell phone thinggy.... I guess the secret will revealed on the next chapter?
Aya loves Yossy :frustrated:
oh, and yes, I don't get Ayaya WHAT IS GOING ON WTF almond, almond........................................
Ok, as amusing as it is to leave half of you floundering around going "wtf!!!!!", this chapter was meant to clarify that Aya's got a thing for Yossy.
I don't think its any old comment that keeps you going, just the nagging ones :)
Actually, it's mostly comments like
ATTENTION: EPIC EMOTICON POST!!! :rockon:
"I'm sorry!" Yossy groaned, walking back to her spot. "I thought it was left-right!"
:sweat:
"It IS left-right!" I laughed, getting into place myself.
:bingo:
"...what did I do then?"
:dunno:
"Left-left."
:hee:
"Crap."
:err:
/me is particularly proud of this one.
:wahaha: ;D
JFC, I love your emoticon posts. Seriously, manamin and I will IM each other going "JFC reply!" and then run to the thread to see the emoticon posts XD
"Did that bleach go to your brain?" :rofl: This is officially my quote of the night. I smell angst and love triangle coming our way. New angle that's neva been xplore before, Ayaya in love with Yossy!! Heh..... well....thank you for the new chapter, don't quite know if I should be happy or not with the new direction you seem to take. 8)
Really? I'm kind of surprised people don't do MatsuYoshi more often - especially given Yossy's penchant for Aya monomane.
^ You missed Ongaku Gatas no Gatten Guts10☆Gatas 004 when Mai reads almond's mail asking the right spelling for Yossyie's nickname and she then describes all the spellings with the current options and concludes that the right is with y.
Yesh. In case anyone missed that, THE Yoshizawa Hitomi answered my letter, said my name aloud, and kind of offhandedly hit on me. :otomerika:
Quoted because I still don't quite believe it myself. :mon blood:
^ And yet you still haven't commented on my latest (and may I say EPIC) emoticon post. :cry:
I hadn't done my giant comments reply yet!!
Your EPIC emoticon posts are always teh win. :mon thumb:
And, yes, ladies and gentlemen, the giant comments reply means.....
*drumroll*
I FINISHED PART 21! XD
I'll be posting it shortly.
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*WEDGE!*
Only cos I know you're AFK. <_<; :hee:
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*WEDGE!*
Only cos I know you're AFK. <_<; :hee:
:lol:
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PART 21
YOSHIZAWA - JULY 12TH
I stared in horror at the wardrobe assistant.
"W-wait a second," I stammered finally. "I thought we were wearing the outfits from the cover. That's what we're using for the concert..."
"They decided to go for a darker look for the video," she replied, looking at me strangely. "Is there a problem?" I cleared my throat.
"Ah, well, the, uh, shorts are a bit shorter than I was expecting to wear, and..." I glanced around quickly before leaning over and whispering in the girl's ear. Her eyes widened.
"But how did you...?" She asked. I coughed uncomfortably and she clapped a hand over her mouth. "I'll see what I can do," she replied, trying not to laugh. I groaned and sat down in the nearby folding chair.
"Ah! ....Yoshizawa, good morning!" I smiled in spite of my new predicament.
"Morning, Konno," I replied. "How'd registration go?"
"Great! I got all but one class I wanted," Konno replied with a smile. She walked up to me and stared at me. "What's wrong?"
"Hmm? Oh, nothing, just thinking," I replied casually. "Have you - "
"Yoshizawa!" The assistant stuck her head back in the room. "We're gonna have you put make-up on it and give you some fishnets. Will that work?" I flushed and nodded. Konno raised an eyebrow as the assistant left again.
"Spill," she demanded. I groaned and adjusted myself on the chair before pulling up the hem of the right leg of my track shorts. Konno's eyes widened and she started laughing hysterically.
"What's so funny?" Rika asked, walking in with Mai. I quickly pulled the hem back down.
"Nothi-"
"Yoshizawa's got a hickey!" Konno cut me off.
"EH!?" Mai exclaimed, running over to us. She grabbed my chin and started examining my neck.
"Um, Mai?" I muttered as best I could with her death grip on my chin.
"I don't see anything," Rika complained from beside me. Konno held up a hand, signaling us to wait while she calmed down. They stared at her expectantly.
"It's not on her neck," Konno explained finally. The other two froze and and whipped their heads around to gape at me in unison.
"Let me see!" Mai exclaimed.
"Yeah, no. I'm not going to show it off to everyone who walks by," I retorted. Rika ran behind me and grabbed both of my arms, pinning them behind the chair.
"Konno, where is it?" Rika demanded.
"ISHIKAWA!" I yelled in protest.
"Right thigh!" Konno replied a bit too gleefully. Mai reached down and unceremoniously pulled up the hem.
"DAMN!" Mai exclaimed, sounding impressed. "You two have fun last night?" Rika leaned her head over my shoulder and peered down.
"Nice technique there, Fujimoto," she mused.
"Uh... what are you doing?" We all looked up to see Korenaga staring at us from the doorway.
"Kore!" Mai yelled, chucking her phone at the alarmed girl. "Take a picture!" Used to our antics by now, Korenaga shrugged and flipped open the cell phone.
"WHAT!?" I yelled, trying to break free from Rika's determined grasp. Mai squatted down next to me and made a Gets! gesture at the mark. Konno sat down on the floor on my other side and made a double v-sign. Rika rested her head on my shoulder and grinned.
"Ok, cheese!" Korenaga called. Rika kissed me on the cheek just as Korenaga took the photo. Mai jumped to her feet and grabbed her phone from Kore to survey the results.
"Oh, this is fantastic," Mai laughed and started pushing an alarming number of buttons on her phone.
"Mai... you're not sending that to anyone are you?" I asked in a low voice. Mai paused, looked at me, and laughed even harder. Narrowing my eyes, I reached my leg around and stepped on Rika's foot.
"OW!" she exclaimed, releasing me. Rika's exclamation alerted Mai to my escape and she took off down the hallway.
"GET BACK HERE, SATODA!" I yelled, taking off after her.
She was laughing so hard that it was slowing her down and I was quickly catching up with her. I had almost gotten close enough to grab her shirt when suddenly Mano Erina unknowingly stepped into the hall and right into my path. Thinking quickly, I managed to put my hands behind her head to protect it right before we made contact with the hard tile floor. She looked up at me in alarm.
"Are you ok?" I asked. She nodded. "Did you hit your head?"
"N-no, not really. I think I'm fine," she replied.
"Way to go there, Leader!" Mai snickered. I got up and glared at my friend while I helped the poor Egg off of the floor. Suddenly, my new mail alert sounded. I grabbed my phone and flipped it open.
y o c c h a n <3
Glad to see everyone's admiring my handiwork.
Maybe tonight, you'll get a matching one on the left side. ^_-
Waiting for you at home,
- m i k i -
I snapped my phone shut and glared at Mai. Mai glanced up from her own phone.
"Why did Miki just tell me to call you 'Tomiko'?"
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"Yoshizawa!" The assistant stuck her head back in the room. "We're gonna have you put make-up on it and give you some fishnets. Will that work?" I flushed and nodded. Konno raised an eyebrow as the assistant left again.
So, that's the secret behind this fish net thing... haha....
"Oh, this is fantastic," Mai laughed and started pushing an alarming number of buttons on her phone.
"Mai... you're not sending that to anyone are you?" I asked in a low voice. Mai paused, looked at me, and laughed even harder. Narrowing my eyes, I reached my leg around and stepped on Rika's foot.
"OW!" she exclaimed, releasing me. Rika's exclamation alerted Mai to my escape and she took off down the hallway.
"GET BACK HERE, SATODA!" I yelled, taking off after her.
Yeah, it is fantastic!! I was laughing like mad and its 2 a.m here....!!
:angry: Yah!! Where's the answer to Yossie-Aya?
Anyway, its great that your update is going fast again.... haha...
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OMGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I think this is my favorite chapter!!!!!!!!!!!! I laughed so hard at each word I read! I think I'm gonna read it everytime I'm sad! Can't wait to see JFC's emoticon comment.
And allow me to congratulate the speed in posting, I hope it keeps like this :otomerika:
Really, I love this chapter, for real. looooooololollo
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OMGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I think this is my favorite chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!
QFT :lol:
Maaaaan, that's a damn wild imagination you got! I mean, I could've figured the fishnets would have something to do with the fact that Yossi's legs are always covered with scratches and bruises from her futsal training, but this.. OMG :lol: :lol:
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:on lol:
So that was the secret behind the fishnets :kekeke:
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JFC, I love your emoticon posts. Seriously, manamin and I will IM each other going "JFC reply!" and then run to the thread to see the emoticon posts XD
:rofl:
"Ah, well, the, uh, shorts are a bit shorter than I was expecting to wear, and..." I glanced around quickly before leaning over and whispering in the girl's ear. Her eyes widened.
"But how did you...?" She asked. I coughed uncomfortably and she clapped a hand over her mouth. "I'll see what I can do," she replied, trying not to laugh. I groaned and sat down in the nearby folding chair.
As soon as she said "a bit shorter than I was expecting"...first thought in my mind was a dirty one. XD
*cough cough* namely, inconveniently located hickeys OR Miki made her get...waxed >D *cough cough*
"Yoshizawa!" The assistant stuck her head back in the room. "We're gonna have you put make-up on it and give you some fishnets. Will that work?" I flushed and nodded.
Oh shit, did I actually guess right? :w00t:
But wait, Konkon knows that she's with Miki, doesn't she? Should be no need for any cover story, unless she's just really embarrassed about it. :D
And...fishnets FTW! :jerk:
"Spill," she demanded. I groaned and adjusted myself on the chair before pulling up the hem of the right leg of my track shorts. Konno's eyes widened and she started laughing hysterically.
"What's so funny?" Rika asked, walking in with Mai. I quickly pulled the hem back down.
"Nothi-"
"Yoshizawa's got a hickey!" Konno cut me off.
FUCK YEAH!!! :lol: FISHNETS FTW!!! :jerk:
/me pictures laughing Konkon....
So...KAWAII!!! :wriggly:
"Konno, where is it?" Rika demanded.
:kekeke:
"ISHIKAWA!" I yelled in protest.
:mon ref:
"Right thigh!" Konno replied a bit too gleefully.
:mon thumb:
Mai reached down and unceremoniously pulled up the hem.
"DAMN!" Mai exclaimed, sounding impressed.
:mon misch:
Rika leaned her head over my shoulder and peered down.
"Nice technique there, Fujimoto," she mused.
A little envious, maybe? :hee:
"Uh... what are you doing?" We all looked up to see Korenaga staring at us from the doorway.
"Kore!" Mai yelled, chucking her phone at the alarmed girl. "Take a picture!" Used to our antics by now, Korenaga shrugged and flipped open the cell phone.
Kore-chan been around the girls long enough to know that it's often just better to just go with the flow. :yep:
Korenaga shrugged and flipped open the cell phone.
"WHAT!?" I yelled, trying to break free from Rika's determined grasp. Mai squatted down next to me and made a Gets! gesture at the mark. Konno sat down on the floor on my other side and made a double v-sign. Rika rested her head on my shoulder and grinned.
"Ok, cheese!" Korenaga called. Rika kissed me on the cheek just as Korenaga took the photo.
EPIC!!!
Kore-chan = :bigdeal:
Rika/Mai/Konkon = :bingo: (imagine it with a second finger up to make the "V" sign)
Yossi = :OMG: :scared:
Mai jumped to her feet and grabbed her phone from Kore to survey the results.
"Oh, this is fantastic," Mai laughed and started pushing an alarming number of buttons on her phone.
"Mai... you're not sending that to anyone are you?" I asked in a low voice.
Obvious person would be Miki, for a "HA! Caught you" type of thing. :P
Suddenly, my new mail alert sounded. I grabbed my phone and flipped it open.
y o c c h a n <3
Glad to see everyone's admiring my handiwork.
Maybe tonight, you'll get a matching one on the left side. ^_-
Waiting for you at home,
- m i k i -
MATCHING ONE!!! :drool: :imdead:
I snapped my phone shut and glared at Mai. Mai glanced up from her own phone.
"Why did Miki just tell me to call you 'Tomiko'?"
:wahaha: :hiakhiakhiak: :on lol:
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:on lol: :on lol: Ooooh my stomach hurt!! :imdead: So...THAT was the secret behind the fishnet eh! :rofl: I'm glad Miki seems to enjoy people enjoying her handiwork! I'm sure Yocchan won't mind getting the left one marked as well.
*SNAP* Ishiyoshi moment where Rika's kissing Yossie's cheek. Merely a small gesture to feed the Ishiyoshi fan or now Miki got 1 more rival? :twisted:
One thing I was thinking was that Konno seem to be slightly OOC. :grin: Not that I mind. Assertive Konno is good too.
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This two last chapters were awesome :mon thumb: :mon thumb:
I knew it!!! Aya has a thing for Yossy :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff: (It would be great read more fics about this couple :hee: )
:mon lmao: :mon lmao: :mon lmao: :mon lmao: :mon lmao: poor Yossy
Miki is so proud about her handiwork :wahaha: So now the girls are interchanging information
So happy for a quick update :mon beam: hope you keep it like that :mon geek: I want to read more, this is really addictive
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I must tell you all....
I just read up through chapter 29. (Yes, almond is working ahead again, meaning chapters SHOULD be back up to their usual psychotically fast update schedules pretty soon.)
JFC, start getting that kira kira fuyu no shiny shiny knife ready.
That is all. :glasses:
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^ You do realize that you're being an insufferable tease by saying shit like that, right? 8)
*random knife scraping/sharpening sounds can be heard coming from the vicinity of JFC
:shifty:
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no hints?
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It's epic comment reply post time.
Which means, as manamin already tipped you off, NEW CHAPTAH TIME!
:whistle:
So, that's the secret behind this fish net thing... haha....
So that was the secret behind the fishnets :kekeke:
So...THAT was the secret behind the fishnet eh!
Apparently there was a secret behind the fishnets to be revealed! :on lol:
:angry: Yah!! Where's the answer to Yossie-Aya?
Patience, patience! :bingo:
OMGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I think this is my favorite chapter!!!!!!!!!!!! I laughed so hard at each word I read! I think I'm gonna read it everytime I'm sad!
Aw! Thanks so much!! :wub:
Maaaaan, that's a damn wild imagination you got! I mean, I could've figured the fishnets would have something to do with the fact that Yossi's legs are always covered with scratches and bruises from her futsal training, but this.. OMG :lol: :lol:
XD See, that would make SENSE!
Oh shit, did I actually guess right? :w00t:
Of course! Was there ever any doubt? :bigdeal:
"Konno, where is it?" Rika demanded.
:kekeke:
"ISHIKAWA!" I yelled in protest.
:mon ref:
"Right thigh!" Konno replied a bit too gleefully.
:mon thumb:
Mai reached down and unceremoniously pulled up the hem.
"DAMN!" Mai exclaimed, sounding impressed.
:mon misch:
Emoticon posts FTW. :otomerika:
EPIC!!!
Kore-chan = :bigdeal:
Rika/Mai/Konkon = :bingo: (imagine it with a second finger up to make the "V" sign)
Yossi = :OMG: :scared:
AGAIN, EMOTICON POSTS FTW. :on lol:
*SNAP* Ishiyoshi moment where Rika's kissing Yossie's cheek. Merely a small gesture to feed the Ishiyoshi fan or now Miki got 1 more rival? :twisted:
One thing I was thinking was that Konno seem to be slightly OOC. :grin: Not that I mind. Assertive Konno is good too.
Ishiyoshi is just me being random.
And as far as Konno goes... yeah, I know. I justified it in my head by thinking it was part of the "real" Konno that Yossy mentioned once.
So happy for a quick update :mon beam: hope you keep it like that :mon geek: I want to read more, this is really addictive
Oh, yeah, we're back to quick updates for now. :glasses:
I just read up through chapter 29. (Yes, almond is working ahead again, meaning chapters SHOULD be back up to their usual psychotically fast update schedules pretty soon.)
JFC, start getting that kira kira fuyu no shiny shiny knife ready.
STOP WARNING PEOPLE!
oh, and :wahaha:
Huh!? 2 replies while I was typing!?
*random knife scraping/sharpening sounds can be heard coming from the vicinity of JFC
I'm... a little glad you don't know where I live right now. XD
no hints?
Not without my approval, because I DO know where manamin lives.
Ok, new chap coming once I grab my dinner! WHOO!
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THIS IS BETTER THAN A HINT
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*random knife scraping/sharpening sounds can be heard coming from the vicinity of JFC
I'm... a little glad you don't know where I live right now. XD
*snickers* Ah, but I know where you live. :bingo:
no hints?
Not without my approval, because I DO know where manamin lives.
Yeah.... she does. :mon sweat:
But I DO have a set of quotes from ALL the chapters I just read as hints for you guys - I just want almond to approve them first so she doesn't kill me. :sweat:
APPROVAL-FU!
"Ah, so you were too busy. Were you too busy to buy condoms too?"
"He used to have a crush on you."
"Hey, remember that time that Aibon and I spanked you on national television?"
I just realized we haven't had quality closet time in a while.
"Where's the most interesting place you've had sex?"
Should I put 'Gatas locker room'?
"We need to talk," she said in a serious voice.
"Miki, you idiot."
Everyone promised to send her home if they saw her.
I'd even do a DOKI DOKI love confession.
She'd never come home.
"FORMER MO MUSU LEADER ON DRUNKEN BENDER"
"Fuck off."
"I really should have known it was something like that," I replied sadly. Stupid. Stupid. Stupid.
"Can't Makoto pay them off or something?"
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THIS IS BETTER THAN A HINT
:rofl:
Anyway, here's the new chap. And, yes, I really have written up to part 29.
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PART 22
ISHIKAWA - AUGUST 1ST
I glanced over at Yossy and sighed.
"What?" she asked, glancing up from her menu.
"Aibon," I replied simply. She put her menu down and reached across the table to pat my hand.
"We did the best we could," she said quietly.
"We suck at parenting," I groaned. Yossy laughed and went back to her menu.
"So where's the oldest?" she asked.
"Doctor's appointment," I explained. "She said she'd be here as soon as she could." Yossy looked at me pointedly over her menu.
"Is HE coming?"
"No, HE is not coming," I mocked her. "And HE has a name, you know."
"Whatever. He knocked up my innocent little Nono."
"The same innocent little Nono who sent you a stripper for your 20th birthday?" I asked.
"Exactly," she said so firmly that I couldn't help but laugh.
"Sorry I'm late~!" Tsuji exclaimed as she breezed over to our table. Well, as much as a very tiny pregnant woman can breeze. She grabbed the waiter's arm as she sat down and picked up the menu in one smooth motion. She glanced quickly at the menu and turned to the waiter. "I'd like this, this, this, this, and two of those. And a extra bowl of rice. Thanks."
"Pregnant women usually eat for two, not four," Yossy commented after she and I had ordered. Tsuji stuck her tongue out and sipped her water.
"So, Yochiko, what's this I hear about you shacking up with Fujimoto?" Tsuji grinned.
"Oh, are we back to 'Yochiko' again?" Yossy commented. Tsuji shrugged.
"I'm just not feeling the usual nicknames today."
"Ah. Well, better shacked up than knocked up," Yossy replied, leaning over to rub Tsuji's protruding belly.
"Yossy, if you got knocked up, I'd be seriously disturbed," I laughed.
"Yeah, listen to Mom over here," Tsuji giggled. Yossy gestured at Tsuji.
"Shouldn't that be Grandma?" she asked. I snorted with laughter.
"You're just happy you finally have an excuse for acting like a Grandpa. What, no jinbei today?"
"Yeah, you're wearing real clothes. Is Miki dressing you now?" Tsuji asked. "I'm not calling her Mommy! Even if you are living together now!!" Yossy looked like she couldn't decide between being alarmed and amused.
"So, how'd your doctors appointment go?" I asked. Tsuji sighed and leaned back in her chair.
"Good. I can actually feel the baby moving around now, which is surreal."
"Really?!" Yossy sat up at attention. "Any kicking yet?"
"Not very often," Tsuji replied. "Ta-kun's annoyed because the baby stops every time he puts his hand on my stomach."
"Kid's got good taste," Yossy snickered. She leaned over and put her hand on Tsuji's stomach. They both jumped a little and stared at one another.
"What?" I asked.
"The kid kicked me," Yossy laughed, rubbing the bump affectionately.
After dinner, I excused myself to use the ladies' room. When I was washing my hands, Tsuji waddled out of the stall next to mine.
"Feeling ok?" I asked. She nodded.
"Yeah. I think the baby just punched me in the bladder or something again," she shrugged and went to the sink next to me.
"So you left Yossy out there alone?" I asked.
"Oh, no. My husband showed up, so he's keeping her company," she replied.
"You're still getting used to that, aren't you?" I smiled affectionately at her. Tsuji blushed a little.
"Kind of, yeah." Suddenly a thought struck me and I grabbed Tsuji's arm in a panic.
"Wait. You left your husband out there alone with Yossy!?!" We exchanged a look and raced out of the bathroom.
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WHAT A CUTE CHAPTERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 4th gen love :heart: Our innocent Nono, I still can't believe she's pregnant, y'know? I watch old videos of h!m and I see her that kid, jumping around, energetic as hell and now she'll be a mom at my age.
Lol, "The same innocent little Nono who sent you a stripper for your 20th birthday?" I asked.
Oh, I love 4th gen.
And Yossy alone with Takun lolololololololo I wonder what they talked about IF they talked about. I think they just stared at each other, Yossy with an angry look and him a little surprised not knowing what to say and stuff.
I want to hug this chapter.
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"Wait. You left your husband out there alone with Yossy!?!" We exchanged a look and raced out of the bathroom.
I guess this is the part where the hint, "He used to have a crush on you." fit in? Heh. :D I was thinking...little Nono, pregnant, husband and parenting???? WTH!! It's surreal, especially since I haven't seen a pic of a pregger Nono even once.
Yomiki....They really do act parentingly sumtimes. :heart: When they're not busy devouring each other of course. :grin:
Love the cute chapter almond. Now, bring the rest out or JFC is going to sharpening his knife again. :twisted:
*Heard the sharpening sound somewhere someplace on this peaceful earth* :on lol:
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"Sorry I'm late~!" Tsuji exclaimed as she breezed over to our table. Well, as much as a very tiny pregnant woman can breeze. She grabbed the waiter's arm as she sat down and picked up the menu in one smooth motion. She glanced quickly at the menu and turned to the waiter. "I'd like this, this, this, this, and two of those. And a extra bowl of rice. Thanks."
"Pregnant women usually eat for two, not four," Yossy commented after she and I had ordered. Tsuji stuck her tongue out and sipped her water.
No that's just Tsuji eating like Tsuji... Maybe the extra rice is for the baby :P
Awww, Yossy and her caring, protective ways so so so cute and I'm sure she has some plans for the baby with a kick like that ;)
:mon lovelaff:What an awesome chapter that was as a study break for me, despite there being no Miki :(
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But I DO have a set of quotes from ALL the chapters I just read as hints for you guys - I just want almond to approve them first so she doesn't kill me. :sweat:
APPROVAL-FU!
Well...THAT was random. :?
PART 22
ISHIKAWA - AUGUST 1ST
Rika POV?
"Aibon," I replied simply. She put her menu down and reached across the table to pat my hand.
"We did the best we could," she said quietly.
Damn, they sort of sound like parents.
"So where's the oldest?" she asked.
"Doctor's appointment," I explained. "She said she'd be here as soon as she could." Yossy looked at me pointedly over her menu.
Oldest? Considering they were just talking about Aibon she must mean Nono, right?
"Is HE coming?"
"No, HE is not coming," I mocked her. "And HE has a name, you know."
"Whatever. He knocked up my innocent little Nono."
Oooooooooooh, yeah. It's Nono alright. Guess the Ultraman boy isn't exactly Yossi's favorite person right now.
"The same innocent little Nono who sent you a stripper for your 20th birthday?" I asked.
"Exactly," she said so firmly that I couldn't help but laugh.
3 questions:
- Now how the hell did Nono swing that? :dunno:
- Did Miki know about it? :dizzy:
- Was the stripper a dude or a chick? :hiakhiakhiak:
"Sorry I'm late~!" Tsuji exclaimed as she breezed over to our table. Well, as much as a very tiny pregnant woman can breeze. She grabbed the waiter's arm as she sat down and picked up the menu in one smooth motion. She glanced quickly at the menu and turned to the waiter. "I'd like this, this, this, this, and two of those. And a extra bowl of rice. Thanks."
That Nono...before she'd pig out because she was a hyper little runt. Now she's pigging out because she's got a bun in da oven. :lol:
"Yossy, if you got knocked up, I'd be seriously disturbed," I laughed.
"Yeah, listen to Mom over here," Tsuji giggled. Yossy gestured at Tsuji.
"Shouldn't that be Grandma?" she asked. I snorted with laughter.
Rika tried, but in the end Yossi scores DA BURN! :rockon:
"You're just happy you finally have an excuse for acting like a Grandpa. What, no jinbei today?"
"Yeah, you're wearing real clothes.
Ah, it's been a while since we've had a jinbei joke. ;D
Is Miki dressing you now?" Tsuji asked. "I'm not calling her Mommy! Even if you are living together now!!" Yossy looked like she couldn't decide between being alarmed and amused.
This is strangely odd, yet at the same time it strangely makes sense too.
It's just as well. Miki would probably have a fit if Nono started calling her "mommy". :wahaha:
Then again, Yossi would probably try to get Nono to do it to get back at Miki for getting the others to call her "Tomiko". :hee:
"Ta-kun's annoyed because the baby stops every time he puts his hand on my stomach."
"Kid's got good taste," Yossy snickered.
Ouch. Yep, he probably shouldn't expect an Xmas card from Yossi anytime soon. :mon sweat:
She leaned over and put her hand on Tsuji's stomach. They both jumped a little and stared at one another.
"What?" I asked.
"The kid kicked me," Yossy laughed, rubbing the bump affectionately.
So the kid kicks for Yossi but not for Ultraman? BUUUUUUUUUUUUUURN!!! :on lol:
After dinner, I excused myself to use the ladies' room. When I was washing my hands, Tsuji waddled out of the stall next to mine.
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"So you left Yossy out there alone?" I asked.
"Oh, no. My husband showed up, so he's keeping her company," she replied.
Uh oh. :shocked:
"Wait. You left your husband out there alone with Yossy!?!" We exchanged a look and raced out of the bathroom.
With any luck she hasn't shoved dessert up his nose or beat him senseless. :mon scare:
Wait a sec...he had a crush on Yossi before, right? Is he "over" that? :roll:
/me starts chopping up food for tomorrow's snacks.
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/me looks up at everyone.
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What? :O
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I love this chapter!!! Seriously..... it making me go 'Ahh~' 'Auww~' and 'Sweeeettttt~' everytime Yossie show her caring and love for the baby. :wriggly:
Also, it makes me sad (in a good way) to think about the fourth gen love without Aibon. :pleeease:
"Yossy, if you got knocked up, I'd be seriously disturbed," I laughed.
Oh, seriously, we ALL gonna be SERIOUSLY disturbed. :frustrated:
"Yeah, you're wearing real clothes. Is Miki dressing you now?" Tsuji asked. "I'm not calling her Mommy! Even if you are living together now!!"
Nono : Mummy!!
Miki : What the HELL?? <insert Fujimoto's death glare here>
:lol:
She leaned over and put her hand on Tsuji's stomach. They both jumped a little and stared at one another.
"What?" I asked.
"The kid kicked me," Yossy laughed, rubbing the bump affectionately.
So the kid kicks for Yossi but not for Ultraman? BUUUUUUUUUUUUUURN!!!
Yossy will so love that baby when Nono gave birth....
"Oh, no. My husband showed up, so he's keeping her company," she replied.
"You're still getting used to that, aren't you?" I smiled affectionately at her. Tsuji blushed a little.
"Kind of, yeah." Suddenly a thought struck me and I grabbed Tsuji's arm in a panic.
"Wait. You left your husband out there alone with Yossy!?!" We exchanged a look and raced out of the bathroom.
OH MY GAH!! Keep your hubby away from Yossy!!! :mon closeup:
*look at JFC chopping something....
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*stare unconciously at JFC....
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*JFC : What? :O
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*Arina : Uh, nothing.... :hee:
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Lol, "The same innocent little Nono who sent you a stripper for your 20th birthday?" I asked.
Oh, I love 4th gen.
Me too! I'd never written 4th gen antics before and the chapter was far too entertaining as I was writing it.
Yomiki....They really do act parentingly sumtimes. :heart: When they're not busy devouring each other of course. :grin:
You mean Ishiyoshi? 'Cause that's Rika, not Miki... Miki's at home doing God knows what... for some reason I want to say "prank calling MM. with Aya's cell phone" but I'm not sure why :lol:
:mon lovelaff:What an awesome chapter that was as a study break for me, despite there being no Miki :(
Yeah, I know. Including the one I'm about to post, it'll be 4 Yossy-centric chapters in a row. Sorry about that, but I've honestly forgotten most of the antics I was going to put in, so I'm just skipping ahead now.
Well...THAT was random. :?
Pretty much. XD
3 questions:
- Now how the hell did Nono swing that? :dunno:
- Did Miki know about it? :dizzy:
- Was the stripper a dude or a chick? :hiakhiakhiak:
- Cell phone and a voice changer.
- Nope. Yossy was out getting drunk off her ass with Kei and Nakazawa.
- Chick.
And yes, I just completely made all that up while I was sitting here. O0
Ah, it's been a while since we've had a jinbei joke. ;D
Is it wrong that I kind of want a jinbei now? When I was googling them to find out what exactly they were, I was like "...damn that DOES look comfy!" XD
/me starts chopping up food for tomorrow's snacks.
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/me looks up at everyone.
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What? :O
This was the best thing ever.
I love this chapter!!! Seriously..... it making me go 'Ahh~' 'Auww~' and 'Sweeeettttt~' everytime Yossie show her caring and love for the baby. :wriggly:
Yeah, I figured, Yossy's pretty protective of Tsuji plus Yossy's pretty crazy about babies equals Yossy going nuts over Tsuji's baby.
OH MY GAH!! Keep your hubby away from Yossy!!! :mon closeup:
DUN DUN DUN!
New chap in a few <3
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I'm still not used to this speed in updating. WEDGE :otomerika:
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I'm still not used to this speed in updating. WEDGE :otomerika:
Ah, you weren't around for "memoir" when I was updating like twice a day, huh? XD
And omgah wedge :wub:
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PART 23
YOSHIZAWA - AUGUST 1ST
I leaned back in my chair and cooly looked over the man sitting uncomfortably across from me. Not only had he knocked up my cute Nono, but doing so had started a chain reaction of events that almost broke up me and my sexy Miki. Quite frankly, if I wanted to, I could easily say it was his fault that Miki Friday'd herself.
I think if I applied myself, I could probably think up a way to blame him for anything that has ever gone wrong in my life, now that I think about it.
He cleared his throat. I raised an eyebrow. "Um, so, Non tells me that you, uh, are leading a new group..."
"Mmm," I replied shortly. He looked around awkwardly. "She tells me that she just got back from her doctors appointment." He nodded. "And you weren't there why?"
"Oh, I wanted to, but, um, I had a previous business engagement. The appointment was originally for yesterday, but the doctor had to reschedule, so I - "
"Ah, so you were too busy. Were you too busy to buy condoms too?"
"Yocchan!" Rika all but flew to my side, out of breath.
"What!?" I asked, panicked. "Are you ok? Did something happen to Nono?"
"No!" she gasped. "I, uh, just worried you'd be lonely." I raised an eyebrow, knowing exactly what she was thinking. Tsuji half-waddled over and sat next to her husband. Ugh... 'husband'
"Oh, Ta-kun, you missed it," she smiled. "The baby was kicking earlier. Yocchin felt it."
"Tsuji, we were talking," I said in a low no-nonsense voice. She looked at me in surprise. Sugiura blinked and looked from me to Tsuji. "See!" I exclaimed. "Right there. Why didn't you stand up for her?"
"Yossy..." Rika groaned.
"Yossy, be nice!" Tsuji complained. "He used to have a crush on you." Sugiura groaned and started rubbing his forehead like he had a headache. I burst out laughing.
"You didn't tell me he was gay!" I snickered.
"Yocchan, do I need to call Miki?" Rika threatened. I laughed harder.
"Please, if I was Miki, the boy'd be on the ground in pain from being kneed in the crotch."
"Ok..." I looked up in surprise. The man speaketh. He looked me right in the eye. "I have tried to be polite because you're a friend of Non's and she really does respect you for some reason I really do not understand. Whether you like me or not is completely up to you and honestly, I don't really care. But the fact is that this is hurting her right now and I'm not going to just sit here and let you do that." I glanced over and saw Tsuji looking down at her hands. Crap. I got up and squatted down next to her chair.
"Nono?"
"Yeah?" She looked up from her hands.
"I'm sorry I'm such an ass." She laughed. I glanced over at her husband. "I'm still not happy about this, but I guess he'll do."
"Thanks, Yocchan," Tsuji smiled. "Hey, remember that time that Aibon and I spanked you on national television?"
"Why in the world are you bringing that up?" I asked incredulously.
"Just being random," she grinned.
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Pretty short chapter here, but oh well.
Oh and if you haven't seen TsujiKago spanking Yossy, it's up on Veoh (http://www.veoh.com/videos/e1136579GtskDgD) - about 40 seconds in.
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I'm still not used to this speed in updating. WEDGE :otomerika:
Ah, you weren't around for "memoir" when I was updating like twice a day, huh? XD
no I wasn't :(
And omgah wedge :wub:
you're welcome :lol:
Quite frankly, if I wanted to, I could easily say it was his fault that Miki Friday'd herself.
you know you'll have to elaborate, right/?
"Yossy, be nice!" Tsuji complained. "He used to have a crush on you." Sugiura groaned and started rubbing his forehead like he had a headache. I burst out laughing.
"You didn't tell me he was gay!" I snickered.
LOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL and this coming from the oe who always stands up for herself saying she's a girl (tho I agree with her)
and I'm not mentioning anything about Taiyo because I agree with Yossy and he's not worth of tsuji... Not that anyone would be, at least for now. Ok, let's stop with Nono, I almost can't bear the reality.
This chapter is all so cute with Yossy being an ass with him :love:
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Quite frankly, if I wanted to, I could easily say it was his fault that Miki Friday'd herself.
you know you'll have to elaborate, right/?
Tsuji gets knocked up -> Tsuji drops out of play -> Yossy gets cast -> Yossy cancels 3-day date -> Miki Friday's herself
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OH so true.
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OMG!!!! This chapters are freaking hilarious!!!!!!!1 :mon lmao: :mon lmao: :mon lmao:
Yossy hahaha you're really like a father that can't see her daughter's boyfriend, in this case her husband
"Ok..." I looked up in surprise. The man speaketh. He looked me right in the eye. "I have tried to be polite because you're a friend of Non's and she really does respect you for some reason I really do not understand. Whether you like me or not is completely up to you and honestly, I don't really care. But the fact is that this is hurting her right now and I'm not going to just sit here and let you do that." I glanced over and saw Tsuji looking down at her hands. Crap. I got up and squatted down next to her chair.
"Nono?"
"Yeah?" She looked up from her hands.
"I'm sorry I'm such an ass." She laughed. I glanced over at her husband. "I'm still not happy about this, but I guess he'll do."
Yeah... she has to think about Nono's feelings, that's what a father has to do at the end
And is Yossy, she has a wonderful heart after all :luvluv1: :luvluv1:
"Thanks, Yocchan," Tsuji smiled. "Hey, remember that time that Aibon and I spanked you on national television?"
"Why in the world are you bringing that up?" I asked incredulously.
"Just being random," she grinned.
:on lol: :on lol:
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wow, it's a well written episode,
the dialogue was all awkward and fit how the situation was churning.
i could clearly feel for each character.
:wub:
Yossie couldnt resist being angry and frustrated-she was winding up for a Fight!
Ultraman can only defend so much coz he knows he screwed up (pun!) quite truthful for a guy in his situation.
well done Almond!
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- Cell phone and a voice changer.
- Nope. Yossy was out getting drunk off her ass with Kei and Nakazawa.
- Chick.
- Slick.
- LULZ they probably kidnapped her.
- Sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet. :pimp:
Is it wrong that I kind of want a jinbei now? When I was googling them to find out what exactly they were, I was like "...damn that DOES look comfy!" XD
OMGASS, ME TOO!!! XD
This was the best thing ever.
:mon thumb:
I leaned back in my chair and cooly looked over the man sitting uncomfortably across from me. Not only had he knocked up my cute Nono, but doing so had started a chain reaction of events that almost broke up me and my sexy Miki. Quite frankly, if I wanted to, I could easily say it was his fault that Miki Friday'd herself.
Really now? Hmmm...I guess I can see why she'd say that. Nono's getting pregnant probably rekindled the stalkerazzi's tendencies to follow the girls around and try to get dirt on them. Combine THAT with the events that happened in memoir...yeah. I can see what she was getting at.
He cleared his throat. I raised an eyebrow. "Um, so, Non tells me that you, uh, are leading a new group..."
"Mmm," I replied shortly. He looked around awkwardly. "She tells me that she just got back from her doctors appointment." He nodded. "And you weren't there why?"
Damn, Yossi's like the intimidating dad that's silently and subtly scaring the shit out of the boy who's come over to pick up his little girl for their first date.
Luckily Yossi's a girl because picturing her like that is kinda hot. :mon sweat:
"She tells me that she just got back from her doctors appointment." He nodded. "And you weren't there why?"
"Oh, I wanted to, but, um, I had a previous business engagement. The appointment was originally for yesterday, but the doctor had to reschedule, so I - "
"Ah, so you were too busy. Were you too busy to buy condoms too?"
"Yocchan!" Rika all but flew to my side, out of breath.
EEP! :scared:
Tsuji half-waddled over and sat next to her husband. Ugh... 'husband'
"Oh, Ta-kun, you missed it," she smiled. "The baby was kicking earlier. Yocchin felt it."
"Tsuji, we were talking," I said in a low no-nonsense voice. She looked at me in surprise. Sugiura blinked and looked from me to Tsuji. "See!" I exclaimed. "Right there. Why didn't you stand up for her?"
Yossi DOES sort of have a point here. I mean, sure she's known Nono longer than he has, but he's the husband for pete's sake. He should be standing up for his wife. :mon determined:
"Yossy, be nice!" Tsuji complained. "He used to have a crush on you." Sugiura groaned and started rubbing his forehead like he had a headache. I burst out laughing.
"You didn't tell me he was gay!" I snickered.
YOSSI BURN!!! :lol:
"Ok..." I looked up in surprise. The man speaketh. He looked me right in the eye. "I have tried to be polite because you're a friend of Non's and she really does respect you for some reason I really do not understand. Whether you like me or not is completely up to you and honestly, I don't really care. But the fact is that this is hurting her right now and I'm not going to just sit here and let you do that."
Hmmm, looks like he DOES have a pair after all. :mon misch:
"Nono?"
"Yeah?" She looked up from her hands.
"I'm sorry I'm such an ass." She laughed. I glanced over at her husband. "I'm still not happy about this, but I guess he'll do."
"Thanks, Yocchan," Tsuji smiled.
Well, if he's going to be Nono's husband, he's got to be someone Yossi can respect, right? Standing up to her like that is a good first step.
Oh and if you haven't seen TsujiKago spanking Yossy, it's up on Veoh (http://www.veoh.com/videos/e1136579GtskDgD) - about 40 seconds in.
:on lol:
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roar! XD
i rushed this over lunchbreak! still piping. enjoy :P :P
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I don't know why the heck I mistook Rika for Miki. But, oh well....they (Ishiyoshi) do act parentingly sometimes, with the twins. :lol:
Another interesting chapter to fully imprinted Yossy's Oto-san character. Nice! :yep: Dunno what else to comment on this one since I don't really care about Ultraman. :grin:
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LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL RAAARHHG! YOSSY FTW!
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"Yossy, be nice!" Tsuji complained. "He used to have a crush on you." Sugiura groaned and started rubbing his forehead like he had a headache. I burst out laughing.
"You didn't tell me he was gay!" I snickered.
LOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL and this coming from the oe who always stands up for herself saying she's a girl (tho I agree with her)
I figured Yossy was self-confident enough to make a joke partially at her own expense just for the sake of getting a good burn on Sugiura. XD
OMG!!!! This chapters are freaking hilarious!!!!!!!1 :mon lmao: :mon lmao: :mon lmao:
Yossy hahaha you're really like a father that can't see her daughter's boyfriend, in this case her husband
Yeah, like I said on my blog. Enjoy these fluffy slapstick chapters while you can - the shit's about to hit the fan.
...that rhymed. :lol:
wow, it's a well written episode,
the dialogue was all awkward and fit how the situation was churning.
i could clearly feel for each character.
:wub:
Yossie couldnt resist being angry and frustrated-she was winding up for a Fight!
Ultraman can only defend so much coz he knows he screwed up (pun!) quite truthful for a guy in his situation.
well done Almond!
No, no, well done to you for this:
(http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/8278/monstahfightmr0.jpg)
HI-FREAKING-LARIOUS.
I almost spittake'd and I wasn't even drinking anything. :rofl:
Is it wrong that I kind of want a jinbei now? When I was googling them to find out what exactly they were, I was like "...damn that DOES look comfy!" XD
OMGASS, ME TOO!!! XD
THANK YOU! IT'S NOT JUST ME! :love:
Hmmm, looks like he DOES have a pair after all. :mon misch:
....
Well, if he's going to be Nono's husband, he's got to be someone Yossi can respect, right? Standing up to her like that is a good first step.
Yeah, I was trying to figure out what to do with him. When I came up with the idea of Yossy vs Ultraman, I didn't think of how to end it really, just a few lines like "you didn't tell me he was gay" and "if I was Miki, he'd be on the floor holding his crotch right now".
I decided that in order for Yossy to like him ever, he had to stand up to her, so... yesh.
Another interesting chapter to fully imprinted Yossy's Oto-san character. Nice! :yep: Dunno what else to comment on this one since I don't really care about Ultraman. :grin:
LOL! Thanks for the comments :wub:
Aaaaand, yesh, this does mean new chapter. Whoo.
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PART 24
FUJIMOTO - AUGUST 19TH
First, let me say that I don't get bored when I'm home alone. I prefer being home to being out and I don't really mind being alone that much.
However.
I've noticed I tend to get a little... mischievous when I'm home alone, especially lately since I'm not working much. And when I'm feeling mischievous, I take out my cell phone and start sending my darling Yocchan interesting messages. If I know she's going to have her phone turned off because of work, I tend to do it twice as much so she gets flooded with interesting messages as soon as she turns it back on.
When the movie I was watching ended, I decided today was a mischievous day. I knew Yossy was at a photoshoot, so she'd have her phone turned off and in her purse.
Hey, remember on that boat in Hong Kong when you reenacted the Titanic scene with me for the cameras? ^^
You do realize if there hadn't been cameras there, you would have been naked, on your back, and moaning before you'd had a chance to blink, right?
Just a thought <3
=Daydreaming Mikitty=
I just got a craving for some sushi.
Could you pick some up on the way home?
Oh and I'll be using you as a plate.
<3 <3 <3
=Hungry Mikitty=
I just realized we haven't had quality closet time in a while.
Quality bed time, yes, but closet time, no.
Hmm.
I think I'm feeling nostalgic.
Consider yourself warned. ^_-
=Plotting Mikitty=
Speaking of nostalgic~
You. Naked. Hawaii. Hot.
That's all.
=Nostalgic Mikitty=
And speaking of Hawaii!
When exactly did you buy my Alo-Hello?
I just noticed this is first press~~
=Investigative Mikitty=
Ha ha, I just got a chain mail from Korenaga.
You know the ones with all the personal questions?
Looks like she sent it to Gatas.
"Where's the most interesting place you've had sex?"
Should I put 'Gatas locker room'?
=Mischievous Mikitty=
Actually, would that even been the most interesting?
On the set of Hello! Morning was pretty damn daring...
Actually, didn't we do it behind that set piece onstage right before a concert?
Yeah, 'cause we almost got stuck out there because the audience had started coming in. XD
God, I miss you. Come home soon so I can jump you.
=Lonely Mikitty=
The door opened just as I hit send on the last message. I glanced up in surprise.
"You're home early!" I said happily as Yossy took her shoes off and walked over to give me a kiss.
"Yeah, there was a power outage in the studio. We're going to have to finish tomorrow," she replied, plopping down next to me. "Oh, Aya says hi. She was there too."
"Oh, that's nice..." I trailed off, looking at her expectantly.
"What?" she asked, picking up An-kun and scratching behind his ear.
"Didn't you get my messages?"
"Messages?" She stared at me blankly for a minute before grabbing her purse from where she'd laid it on the floor. She pulled out her phone and glanced at it. "I don't have any messages."
"What!?" I took the phone from her and flipped it open. "uh... Yossy, this isn't your phone."
"What do you mean?" she asked, leaning over and taking it back right as someone knocked on the front door. I walked over to answer it while Yossy stared at the phone in confusion. I peeked through the peephole and grinned.
"I mean," I said as I opened the door. "It's Aya's." I gestured at my best friend standing in the doorway. I paused and looked at her closely. "Why's your face red?"
"Uh... nothing. I, uh, I think this is Yossy's," Aya muttered, handing the phone to me.
"We must have gotten them mixed up when we knocked into each other during the power outage," Yossy laughed, walking over and handing Aya her phone.
"Right. Um, I've gotta go." Aya, still a bit red, turned and walked swiftly down the hall.
"What was that?" I muttered as I shut the door. Yossy glanced up from her phone with a weird look on her face.
"She probably read these thinking they were for her," she said slowly.
"Really? That's hilarious," I laughed. Yossy made a face.
"You have no idea, do you?"
"What?"
"Miki, Aya has a crush on you."
"WHAT?!" I burst into giggles. "Are you serious?"
"Yeah," she groaned. "I noticed it a long time ago. She acts weird around you and keeps blushing when your name is mentioned - especially when it's about you and me, um - "
"Being sexy ue ue?"
"Exactly," Yossy grinned.
"Really?! Aya has a thing for me!?" I grinned. "I'm so calling her right - "
"No!" Yossy protested. I raised an eyebrow. "If she wanted you to know, she'd tell you. Just leave it alone."
"Yocchaaaaaan," I complained.
"Mikiiiiiiiii," she mimicked, making me laugh. Her eyes narrowed in that way that means I'm about to get in the best kind of trouble and she pushed me back against the wall, pinning me against it between her arms. "Now," she said in a low voice. "What's this I hear about you feeling nostalgic?"
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Aaaand since the big drama is going to hit pretty soon, I do have a question for the readers.
What exactly do you think is going to happen? :lol:
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LOOOOOOOOL pure ayaya reading these naughty messages... tsc tsc... poor girl.
Nice chapter, I missed Miki :~ but i also cant wait for the "shit in the fan" >:D
ALSO, this talk about ayaya... i think i'll have to wait till tomorrow, dang
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Haha, i just read this chapter 3 times :lol:
This has to be one of my faves! Miki is so evil, if poor Aya did actually have a crush on her, Miki's relentless flirting now would just be too much XD
I smell the plot thickening now YAY! :otomerika:
And oh how i have missed Miki's mischievous antics, when i saw that this was her POV i almost fangirl squealed :oops: :wub:
Oh and where can i buy one of these "Daydreaming Mikitty"'s?
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OH OH OH!!
My long wait answer to YoAya is actually AyaMiki? Damn, is that mean we won't get Aya-Yossie-Miki on the same bed? XD
Haha... I love surprises!! Keep it coming Almond!!
Yeah, I love YoMiki interaction.. Miki is her own way of talking.... I missed them so much!!
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I have to say I like Aya having a crush on Miki rather than Yossy. Usually, it's always Miki who pined over Aya so to see the opposite is quite refreshing. Of course, that bit with the naughty text messages is a stroke of genius. I can imagine Aya's face as she read those mssgs. :rofl: Yossy should have let Miki have a talk with Aya. Maybe you're keeping this for the angst angle later since you keep hinting on 'the shit that hits the fan'? :grin: I have a feeling it's about the love triangle, or at least part of the problem. Fufufu~
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hahahaha :wahaha:
Nah... I think yossy misunderstood the situation, maybe Aya was all red because of the messages, I don't think she's too ingenuous to think that the messages are for her if she knows is yossy's mobile :bigdeal:
I'm still thinking Aya has a crush for Yossy :whistle: but Yossy is a little baka to notice :sweat: it even Abe notice it!!! :mon lol:
I'm beggining to feel that the "shit in the fan" is getting close :mon cweepy:
This is soooo good!!! :mon XD:
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Yeah, the "shit hits the fan" part is really soon. And I should have put this with the chapter, but since I didn't I'll ask now.
What do you all think is going to happen?
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how many chaps to go? :D
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Oh, and about aya miki yossy cellphone email, here is my thought: Aya knew the messages were for yossy, but she was imagining them doing all those things, and yossy benig a part of these thouhgts... so, i'm still thinking aya loves yossy.
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It's nice to know that your girlfriend knows what your phone looks like but you don't, Yossy. :roll: Perfect outcome in the end, concerning Miki's clever little messages. :lol:
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hahahaha :wahaha:
Nah... I think yossy misunderstood the situation, maybe Aya was all red because of the messages, I don't think she's too ingenuous to think that the messages are for her if she knows is yossy's mobile :bigdeal:
I'm still thinking Aya has a crush for Yossy :whistle: but Yossy is a little baka to notice :sweat: it even Abe notice it!!! :mon lol:
I'm beggining to feel that the "shit in the fan" is getting close :mon cweepy:
This is soooo good!!! :mon XD:
Oh, is it? Come to think of it, yeah, it could be that Yossy misunderstood it... I need to reread the whole Aya thing again *run to almond's blog*
Oh, I'm gonna reply in your blog....
See ya!!
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please pardon my intrusion, but before things get hotter for Miki Aya and Yossy:
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DAMN YOU almond AND YOUR FREAKISHLY FAST UPDATES!!! :pimp:
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THAT'S SO WICKED!!! XD
I still say Yossi >>>>>> Ultraman. :thumbsup
I've noticed I tend to get a little... mischievous when I'm home alone, especially lately since I'm not working much.
Miki-sama being mischievous? That can only lead to LEET AWESOMENESS! :w00t:
And when I'm feeling mischievous, I take out my cell phone and start sending my darling Yocchan interesting messages. If I know she's going to have her phone turned off because of work, I tend to do it twice as much so she gets flooded with interesting messages as soon as she turns it back on.
Man, if anyone else were to be with Yossi when that flood of messages came... :rofl:
MIKI TEXT MESSAGES
One :jerk: for each one.
:twisted:
The door opened just as I hit send on the last message. I glanced up in surprise.
"You're home early!" I said happily as Yossy took her shoes off and walked over to give me a kiss.
...
"Didn't you get my messages?"
"Messages?" She stared at me blankly for a minute before grabbing her purse from where she'd laid it on the floor. She pulled out her phone and glanced at it. "I don't have any messages."
"What!?" I took the phone from her and flipped it open. "uh... Yossy, this isn't your phone."
OSNAP!!! XD
So then who did she switch phones with? Aya? It's GOTTA be Aya, ne? O0
"What do you mean?" she asked, leaning over and taking it back right as someone knocked on the front door. I walked over to answer it while Yossy stared at the phone in confusion. I peeked through the peephole and grinned.
"I mean," I said as I opened the door. "It's Aya's." I gestured at my best friend standing in the doorway. I paused and looked at her closely. "Why's your face red?"
"Uh... nothing. I, uh, I think this is Yossy's," Aya muttered, handing the phone to me.
:on lol:
Well, it's not like Aya hasn't heard Miki act all pervvy before. With recent events though, getting all that hot, sexual Yossi imagery (via Miki's descriptions in her text messages)...makes you wonder what actually got Aya so flustered like that. :pimp:
Yossy made a face.
"You have no idea, do you?"
"What?"
"Miki, Aya has a crush on you."
Are we sure about this now? :D
"I noticed it a long time ago. She acts weird around you and keeps blushing when your name is mentioned - especially when it's about you and me, um - "
"Being sexy ue ue?"
CLICK ME (http://s2.supload.com/files/default/MikiSexyBoy.gif) :grin: Damn filesize was too large for Photobucket & ImageShack
"Really?! Aya has a thing for me!?" I grinned. "I'm so calling her right - "
That's our Miki-sama. She lurves being mischievous and torturing EVERYONE!!! :lol:
Her eyes narrowed in that way that means I'm about to get in the best kind of trouble and she pushed me back against the wall, pinning me against it between her arms. "Now," she said in a low voice. "What's this I hear about you feeling nostalgic?"
NOSTALGIA FTW!!! :rockon:
Aaaand since the big drama is going to hit pretty soon, I do have a question for the readers.
What exactly do you think is going to happen? :lol:
I still say Aya's actually dokidoki for Yossi, even though the latter thinks it's Miki. Given that...[bgcolor=#000000] Miki gets Aya to come over to the apartment one day, where she decides to have some flirty fun at Aya's expense, thinking (like Yossi) that Aya's got a crush on her. Some stuff happens and Aya ends up confessing to Miki that she actually likes Yossi, but feels super guilty about it. Miki gets all confused and a little disappointed that it wasn't actually her that Aya liked. More talk probably happens where Miki asks Aya if she EVER had those types of feelings about her...more talk happens and Miki tries kissing Aya to see if there was ever a chance for sparks between them...AND that's when Yossi walks in, and Mr. Shit meets Mr. Fan. Thus, we end up back at the first chapter.[/bgcolor]
:hehehe:
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The expressions in the wotas eyes...AWESOME! :hiakhiakhiak:
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*read JFC post*
Hmm.... I just couldn't picture Miki will do that unless something happens that makes Miki angry, so she do that stunt. But right now, Miki is in luuuurrrvvvveeee with Yossy, she won't just turn to Aya...
I've gathered all the suspicious moment that Aya-Yossy-Miki were involve, I think there wil be Rika too but right now, these three are what I could see for the potential of being in triangle love.
Chapter 3
Aya POV
Of course, now, in my more caffeinated state, I realize I could have just taken the damn bra off or slept naked, but my mind was on other things at the time. Mainly, it was still in the hallway watching Miki and Yossy with their hands all over each other. I'd let them into the room partially to get them away from possibly prying eyes, but mostly because I didn't want to see that anymore. Watching them together makes me wonder... maybe, if I'd done something different... maybe, then it'd be me instead...
No clue at all...
Chapter 3
Aya POV
"Um, kind of. We were actually supposed to share that one." Yossy looked mortified. "No worries!" I exclaimed. "I got a really nice room last minute, so it's fine, really."
"I'm so sorry!" she said anyway. "I've really got to make it up to you.... but not now, because I have GOT to catch that train." She laughed and stood up to leave.
"Shopping!" I said suddenly.
"What?" she said, pausing next to me.
"You can pay me back by taking me shopping. I need some help picking out a birthday present for Tan."
Saw this as Aya grabbed the chance to be with Yossie alone using Miki as excuses...
Part 13
Aya POV
"Regardless of my relationship status, I don't see how it's any of your business who I sleep with," Miki said loudly. The other party cleared her throat a little. I started to look over, but Miki stepped over, blocking my view. "Talk to me. She has nothing to do with this."
"You know, you're right. It isn't really any of my business who you decide to have sex with," I stated, feeling my face start to color with anger. "Except for the fact that I do like Yossy and I - "
"Are you going to tell her?"
There Aya kinda say that she like Yossy but use the word 'like' instead of 'love', and we'll never know what Aya's going to say because Miki 'freaking' Fujimoto cut her off...
Part 13
Aya POV
"Are you going to tell her?" she repeated.
"I..." I trailed off. On one hand, Mikitty's my best friend. On the other hand, Yoshizawa's being cheated on and someone really needs to tell her. And seriously, what the hell IS Miki thinking... But...
"Well?" Miki crossed her arms.
"Tan, I'm sorry, but I can't promise I won't say anything to Yossy - especially not if she asks me," I said finally.
"OH REALLY!?" Miki exclaimed, raising her eyebrows.
That show that Aya was concerned about Yossy or probbaly don't want Yossy to get hurt...
And from what I understand that Aya pick Yossy instead of Miki, just she didn't say it directly...
Part 13
Aya POV
"Aya, come ON!" Miki retorted, walking over to the bed. She yanked the pillow out of Yoshizawa's grasp. "If you had THIS, would you do anything to mess it up?"
"MIKI, WHAT THE HELL!?" Yossy yelled, turning bright red. She scrambled wildly for something to cover herself with before finally grabbing the other pillow out from under the covers.
I blinked. Wow, she blushes with her entire body...
Obviously, Aya had her eyes on Yossy to have notice that Yossy body had gone red. Also, she set her eyes on Yossy nakedness when Miki was also naked at that time...
Part 16
Yoshizawa POV
"Oh... right, you two are moving in together, huh?" she replied. Her strange tone turned my attention away from that suspicious group of boys pointing at us.
"Yeah, we are.... is that okay?" I asked, studying her face carefully.
"Why are you asking me?" she laughed brightly, staring straight ahead. A fleeting suspicion from months ago suddenly resurfaced into my thoughts. Aya didn't...
"Ayaya, you're not... I mean, you don't - "
"Ah! Here it is!" she cut me off, abruptly dropping my arm and stepping into the nearest store. I shook my head and followed her inside.
Of course Yossy here thought that Aya was jealous of her and Miki when actually it was her being with Miki that had disturbed Aya...
Part 17
Aya POV
"Everything ok?" I asked in amusement.
"Let's just say it's a good thing I called first," she smiled sheepishly at me. "Oh, that reminds me... isn't it almost your birthday?"
"Yeah!" I said, surprised. "The 25th." She reached into her pocket and pulled out a small bag.
"Happy birthday!" I blinked and opened the bag. Inside was the small gold necklace I'd been admiring in the shop.
"When did you...?"
"I went back to buy that, not to use their restroom," Yossy shrugged nonchalantly. "It's no big deal."
If Aya seriously had a crush on Miki, she will definitely fall for Yossy immediately!! I mean, Yossy being so nice and sweet and charming... *I really fall for Yossie*
Part 17
Aya POV
"You're welcome," she replied as the train pulled up. We stood up and headed over. "It'll be nice for the three of us to hang out, huh?"
"You mean, you, me, and Tan?" I asked as we walked towards the opened doors.
"Yeah. We haven't really spent any time together... well unless you count the time Miki was naked and yelling..." Yossy stopped in her tracks and turned to me. "That came out wrong."
"Yeah, it did," I agreed, stepping onto the train.
I guess that Aya didn't want to hang out with Yossy and Miki cause that mean she will have to watch all the rabu rabu of YoMiki...
Chapter 20
Aya POV
"Yossy!" I called. She turned and looked at me expectantly. I smiled and threw her cell phone at her. She caught it neatly and stowed it away in her pocket, winking at me in the process.
"Thanks, Aya!" she called as she left the room.
"100% kataomoi indeed," I mused to myself, staring after Yossy's retreating figure.
"What was that?" Abe asked slowly. I could feel her staring at me.
"Nothing."
I have no idea about this... but I think the kataomoi she was feeling are with Yossy...
Part 24
Fujimoto POV
"I mean," I said as I opened the door. "It's Aya's." I gestured at my best friend standing in the doorway. I paused and looked at her closely. "Why's your face red?"
"Uh... nothing. I, uh, I think this is Yossy's," Aya muttered, handing the phone to me.
"We must have gotten them mixed up when we knocked into each other during the power outage," Yossy laughed, walking over and handing Aya her phone.
"Right. Um, I've gotta go." Aya, still a bit red, turned and walked swiftly down the hall.
Aya didn't think that the message was for her. Her face was redden because she was mad to think what the YoMiki going to do after she left them... hmmm....
And to conclude it all, I know nothing what's going to happen... but I think Aya has a feeling for Yossy, not Miki... I'm not sure because, Almond, you've got a fantastic weird brain, so anything can happen, and I'm gonna love it all....
I'm out...
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Cut and paste from Almond blog... which I wrote after give a deep thought.... :jerk:
i think there will be a triangle love. the question now is who is the third party? Since Aya have thing for either Yossy or Miki, and Rika too have a dream about Miki, and also Maki because she appeared like 2 times in this fic including memoir showing that she still had love for Yossy, I think there will be love confession soon. But I couldn't picture Yossy and Miki betrayed each other first without any misunderstanding, because they're so in love, so there will be a third party who will make the chaos first... also, the title is kataomoi revenge of the fluffy...and it must be someone who had secret love on either one of them. I'm guessing it's either Aya, Rika or Maki.
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Oh that? Well, see! Yossi thinks ______'s ______ ______ ______ Miki, so Miki ______ to ______ ______ ______. Turns out ______'s ______ ______ ______ Yossi. ______ ______ Yossi's ______ ______ ______, so Miki gets pissed and tries to ______ ______ ______. Yossi of course ______ ______, ______ Miki ______ ______ and ______ ______. Yossi ______ ______ ______ her ass and ______ ______ ______. ______ ______ Yossi ______ ______ ______ ______ to ______ ______ leaves ______ Yossi ______ ______. Yossi ______ ______'s note and ______ ______ ______ ______. And that's where the REAL drama begins! XD
Unless things have changed :P
and although i still can't fill it all in, at least it means that yes Aya does have a thing for Yossy not Miki. And now i am hoping others fill in the rest of the gaps for me :D
ohhhhh the anticipation 8)
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I only """""""""""""""""could"""""""""""""""""""""" complete the first line, then it gets all blurry.
WAITING FOR TONITE
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LOOOOOOOOL pure ayaya reading these naughty messages... tsc tsc... poor girl.
Nice chapter, I missed Miki :~ but i also cant wait for the "shit in the fan" >:D
Pure Ayaya my ass :lol: And I have the feeling a lot of you aren't familiar with the expression "when the shit hits the fan" from these comments. :sweat:
Haha, i just read this chapter 3 times :lol:
This has to be one of my faves! Miki is so evil, if poor Aya did actually have a crush on her, Miki's relentless flirting now would just be too much XD
That's very true. Miki flirts and gropes like there's no tomorrow.
Oh and where can i buy one of these "Daydreaming Mikitty"'s?
If you find out, let me know. ;)
OH OH OH!!
My long wait answer to YoAya is actually AyaMiki? Damn, is that mean we won't get Aya-Yossie-Miki on the same bed? XD
Ok, I can confidently say there will not be any sort of aYoMiki three-way action going on. I'm sorry, everyone, but it's just not in my evil master plan.
Haha... I love surprises!! Keep it coming Almond!!
OH, I INTEND TO! :hiakhiakhiak:
Of course, that bit with the naughty text messages is a stroke of genius.
Thanks. The naughty text messages were just a bolt of inspirational lightning. :grin:
Maybe you're keeping this for the angst angle later since you keep hinting on 'the shit that hits the fan'? :grin: I have a feeling it's about the love triangle, or at least part of the problem. Fufufu~
Well, it's kind of like Yossy was saying. If you try hard enough, you can blame everything on Ultraman. :on lol:
I'm beggining to feel that the "shit in the fan" is getting close :mon cweepy:
It is very, very close. :bingo:
how many chaps to go? :D
:wahaha:
Oh, and about aya miki yossy cellphone email, here is my thought: Aya knew the messages were for yossy, but she was imagining them doing all those things, and yossy benig a part of these thouhgts... so, i'm still thinking aya loves yossy.
The who-does-Aya-love answer is in the next chapter. It comes from Aya herself.
It's nice to know that your girlfriend knows what your phone looks like but you don't, Yossy. :roll:
HAHA, I FORGOT TO CLARIFY THAT.
Basically, Aya and Yossy have the same model of cell phone. That's why they got mixed up. Miki just opened it and saw the wallpaper and recognized it as Aya's.
Ah, it's time for another Miki-sama Omake soon, I think :kneelbow:
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I love you. :stunned:
DAMN YOU almond AND YOUR FREAKISHLY FAST UPDATES!!! :pimp:
HEY IT'S NOT AS BAD AS WHEN I WAS UPDATING MEMOIR TWICE A DAY! :sweat:
JFC, I still love your epic replies, but I couldn't think of anything witty to reply with, so you just get a dancing Rika :otomerika:
*read JFC post*
Hmm.... I just couldn't picture Miki will do that unless something happens that makes Miki angry, so she do that stunt. But right now, Miki is in luuuurrrvvvveeee with Yossy, she won't just turn to Aya...
I've gathered all the suspicious moment that Aya-Yossy-Miki were involve, I think there wil be Rika too but right now, these three are what I could see for the potential of being in triangle love.
Arina, you get an A+ for your research paper. Seriously, I loved that post. It made me go back and analyze my own stuff. :love:
Oh that? Well, see! Yossi thinks ______'s ______ ______ ______ Miki, so Miki ______ to ______ ______ ______. Turns out ______'s ______ ______ ______ Yossi. ______ ______ Yossi's ______ ______ ______, so Miki gets pissed and tries to ______ ______ ______. Yossi of course ______ ______, ______ Miki ______ ______ and ______ ______. Yossi ______ ______ ______ her ass and ______ ______ ______. ______ ______ Yossi ______ ______ ______ ______ to ______ ______ leaves ______ Yossi ______ ______. Yossi ______ ______'s note and ______ ______ ______ ______. And that's where the REAL drama begins! XD
Unless things have changed :P
and although i still can't fill it all in, at least it means that yes Aya does have a thing for Yossy not Miki. And now i am hoping others fill in the rest of the gaps for me :D
ohhhhh the anticipation 8)
HA! I'd forgotten about that. That IS still completely accurate. However, I won't be filling it in until the end.
WAITING FOR TONITE
THE WAIT IS OVER! (Damn, I like caps lock today)
Anyway, new chapter coming up! And it's.......
Matsuura POV.
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PART 25
MATSUURA - AUGUST 20TH
I glanced up and smiled at Miki's reflection in the dressing room mirror. I picked up the lip gloss and started applying it.
"We need to talk," she said in a serious voice. Surprised, I turned around.
"Ok..." I replied cautiously. "Is everything all right?"
"I know."
"You know what?"
"I know about your little crush. Yocchan told me." My eyes widened.
"What?! How did she even find out?" I panicked. Dammit. I'd thought I'd been fairly good at hiding it.
"She said she figured it out a while ago and just never said anything. She only told me because of the cell phone incident yesterday," Miki replied. I groaned and stood up.
"I'm sorry. I probably should have just told you myself, but I didn't want to cause unnecessary drama, you know?" I grabbed Miki's hand. "Seriously, it's just a stupid crush. I'm not going to act on it or anything, I swear."
"When did this start, though?" Miki replied, looking a bit uncomfortable. I thought for a moment.
"Probably when we kissed."
"Which time?"
"Huh?" I looked at her in confusion. "She's only ever kissed me once."
"...wait, what?" Miki looked just as confused as I was. We stared at each other in silence for a minute.
"Hold on, what exactly did Yossy tell you?" I finally asked.
"Yossy said you had a thing for me. She said you keep acting weird and blushing when she talks about me."
"YOU!?" I squealed with laughter. "Tan, I love you, but no."
"Who were you talking about then?" Miki demanded.
"Yossy!" I laughed. "I'm blushing because when she talks about you, she's usually making innuendos about her having sex. And, well, you know how my mind works"
"Wait - you have a crush on MY Yocchan!?" Miki exclaimed.
"Hey, so do you!" I protested. This threw her for a moment. "Besides, I think just about anyone would if she kissed them like that."
"...But I've kissed you like that before."
"Are you annoyed now that it's not you?" I asked.
"Not annoyed exactly," Miki corrected. "I'm just - "
"She's a better kisser, ok?" I retorted. "Now can we please never mention this again?"
"Wait, WHAT!?" Miki exclaimed. I glanced over her shoulder and saw Yossy walk by the open door. She must have seen us because she paused and peeked in with a mischievous grin. She winked at me and put a finger to her lips.
She walked in the room just as my best friend grabbed me by the waist and kissed me hard. Helpless to stop it, I could only watch Yossy's face as it changed from happiness to shock to horror to something I can't even describe. I can now honestly say that I've actually seen someone's heart break. I don't think I'll ever be able to forget that expression on her face. I pushed Miki off of me.
"It's not what you think!!" I called out, but it was too late; she was gone. Miki turned around and looked at the empty room in confusion.
"Who are you - "
"Your girlfriend just saw that!" I yelled. The color drained from Miki's face and she sprinted out of the room. I sighed and sank back down into the chair.
A few minutes later, Miki walked slowly back into my room.
"Did you catch her?" I asked. She shook her head.
"No, she was already in the car by the time I reached her."
I sighed. "I'm so sorry, I didn't mean for - "
"It's not your fault," she interrupted me. "I screwed up. You just happened to be there."
"Gee, thanks," I said dryly. She gave me a look.
"You know what I mean. Don't be all dramatic about it."
"You know what I mean, though!" I protested. "You came here to talk to me about my... feelings and - "
"I thought we weren't mentioning that again?" Miki cut me off. I stuck my tongue out at her. She returned the gesture and walked over to the window.
"Um, shouldn't you go after her?" I asked.
"Yeah, but she's really mad. I'm not sure what to say or do, so..." she trailed off.
"Just blame it on me," I suggested, coming up behind her and giving her a big hug. "Just say I'm the one who - "
"She saw," she interrupted again. "She knows I initiated it."
"Are you going to ever let me finish a sentence?" I grumbled, releasing her.
"I just did, didn't I?" Miki sighed and flicked her reflection in the glass. "Miki, you idiot."
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:hiakhiakhiak:
JFC, you get a gold star for reading my mind yet again.
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Awww poor Yossy :( But I did have to laugh at WHY it all happened, Miki getting her ego hurt XD
Matsuura 1 - 0 Fujimoto :P
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HEY IT'S NOT AS BAD AS WHEN I WAS UPDATING MEMOIR TWICE A DAY! :sweat:
True. :P
JFC, I still love your epic replies, but I couldn't think of anything witty to reply with, so you just get a dancing Rika :otomerika:
WOOOO Dancing Rika!
I glanced up and smiled at Miki's reflection in the dressing room mirror. I picked up the lip gloss and started applying it.
"We need to talk," she said in a serious voice.
...
"I know about your little crush. Yocchan told me." My eyes widened.
And heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeere we go!
"When did this start, though?" Miki replied, looking a bit uncomfortable. I thought for a moment.
"Probably when we kissed."
"Which time?"
"Huh?" I looked at her in confusion. "She's only ever kissed me once."
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SNAP!!! YOU MEAN THAT AYA'S BEEN FEELING THIS WAY ABOUT YOSSI EVER SINCE THE MELODIES PV INCIDENT WHEN YOSSI SAW THEM REHEARSING THE KISSING SCENE AND GOT ALL JEALOUS BUT THEN GOT ANNOYED WITH MIKI FOR LAUGHING AT HER ABOUT IT SO SHE KISSED AYA TO GIVE MIKI SOME PAYBACK AND TO SHOW HOW SHE FELT WHEN SHE WALKED IN ON THEM!!!!!
*gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasp* :OMG:
"Yossy said you had a thing for me. She said you keep acting weird and blushing when she talks about me."
"YOU!?" I squealed with laughter. "Tan, I love you, but no."
Oh BURN...uhhhhhhh sorta. :mon sweat:
This threw her for a moment. "Besides, I think just about anyone would if she kissed them like that."
Not surprising, considering Yossi's got DA SKILLZ!!! :pimp:
"...But I've kissed you like that before."
...
"She's a better kisser, ok?" I retorted."Now can we please never mention this again?"
"Wait, WHAT!?" Miki exclaimed.
Ouch...:O
Something tells me Miki's not gonna be able to let this go. :mon unsure:
I glanced over her shoulder and saw Yossy walk by the open door.
/me finds a blanket to cover his ass as he is stuck being close to da fan.
She walked in the room just as my best friend grabbed me by the waist and kissed me hard. Helpless to stop it, I could only watch Yossy's face as it changed from happiness to shock to horror to something I can't even describe. I can now honestly say that I've actually seen someone's heart break. I don't think I'll ever be able to forget that expression on her face. I pushed Miki off of me.
"It's not what you think!!" I called out, but it was too late; she was gone.
GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!! :dizzy:
/me covers his nose and ducks for cover.
"Who are you - "
"Your girlfriend just saw that!" I yelled. The color drained from Miki's face and she sprinted out of the room.
/me yells out from underneath his blanket of cover-ness...
RUN MIKI!!! RUN AND FIND YOSSIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!! :pleeease:
PROLOGUE recap
Damn...word for word too. Slick. 8)
JFC, you get a gold star for reading my mind yet again.
Sometimes, it scares even ME! :wahaha:
I'd rather have YoMiki make up and get some raburabu (with maybe a little Aya thrown in for :jerk: s and :hump: s) if it's all the same. ;D
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MIKI, YOU IDIOT
Yossy > pride, thats all i gotta say.
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So.....a lot of people here thinks the same as to what exactly gonna happen and it happened. :grin: Regarding this particular POV, I voted for Aya on your blog, so I was right wasn't I? It did come from Aya's POV so she's the narator. :wahaha:
Miki BAKA!! You'd better hunt Yossy down and explain it all, even if you have to beg and bow down in front of her! Throw that pride outta the window. Pride won't get you laid! :twisted:
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NOOOOOO!!! CHASE AFTER HER, MIKI!! Beg for forgiveness if you have to!! :OMG:
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:scared: :scared: :scared: :scared: :scared: :scared: :scared:
What the hell Miki?!!!! I know you're Aya hit your pride but why you have to do something like that??!!!
Damnit!!! I my lovely and always cool Yossy was very happy and ready to give you a surprise :gyaaah: poor her
I can't wait :frustrated: I want to read the next chapter!!!!
BTW....
I KNEW IT!!!! :nya: AYA HAS A CRUSH FOR YOSSY
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She walked in the room just as my best friend grabbed me by the waist and kissed me hard. Helpless to stop it, I could only watch Yossy's face as it changed from happiness to shock to horror to something I can't even describe. I can now honestly say that I've actually seen someone's heart break. I don't think I'll ever be able to forget that expression on her face.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Miki, you idiot!!!
I admit, I was waiting for something like this to happen... But now, I want the happy times back :pleeease:
"Um, shouldn't you go after her?" I asked.
"Yeah, but she's really mad. I'm not sure what to say or do, so..." she trailed off.
Oh, sh*t. Just go, Miki! Go, before Yossi will get drung and there'll be more drama.
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:angry: Stupid Miki...
I just hope that Yossy won't do anything stupid to get revenge...
But she will, wouldn't she?
I can't wait for the enxt update!!
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Maybe she will get drunk and then she will go to see a friend to talk to... and maybe this friend will be MAKI!!!!!!!!
Nahhhh... I hope she doesn't do nothing stupid... Miki better you hurry up and apologize
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But I did have to laugh at WHY it all happened, Miki getting her ego hurt XD
Matsuura 1 - 0 Fujimoto :P
Yeah, seriously. What was Aya thinking. She had to know Miki'd do that.
Wait, I'm the author. I should be answering those things instead of asking them XD
And heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeere we go!
:lol:
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SNAP!!! YOU MEAN THAT AYA'S BEEN FEELING THIS WAY ABOUT YOSSI EVER SINCE THE MELODIES PV INCIDENT WHEN YOSSI SAW THEM REHEARSING THE KISSING SCENE AND GOT ALL JEALOUS BUT THEN GOT ANNOYED WITH MIKI FOR LAUGHING AT HER ABOUT IT SO SHE KISSED AYA TO GIVE MIKI SOME PAYBACK AND TO SHOW HOW SHE FELT WHEN SHE WALKED IN ON THEM!!!!!
*gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasp* :OMG:
I totally pictured a gossipy 16-year old girl saying this for you, btw.
And actually, yes, this idea has been in my head since the Melodies PV incident when I had Yossy kiss Aya.
/me finds a blanket to cover his ass as he is stuck being close to da fan.
:on lol:
/me covers his nose and ducks for cover.
:wahaha:
/me yells out from underneath his blanket of cover-ness...
RUN MIKI!!! RUN AND FIND YOSSIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!! :pleeease:
:hiakhiakhiak:
Um, I never said that the shit hitting the fan was when the prologue showed back up.
:glasses:
Yossy > pride, thats all i gotta say.
Yossy > most things XD
Pride won't get you laid!
BEST COMMENT OF THE DAY. We should get that printed on T-shirts. "100% Kataomoi - Pride won't get you laid"
NOOOOOO!!! CHASE AFTER HER, MIKI!! Beg for forgiveness if you have to!! :OMG:
Trust me. Miki would not just let Yossy go.
BTW....
I KNEW IT!!!! :nya: AYA HAS A CRUSH FOR YOSSY
:lol:
I admit, I was waiting for something like this to happen... But now, I want the happy times back :pleeease:
Aw! I'm sorry, the happyshinyfluffyfun is gone for quite some time now. :(
:angry: Stupid Miki...
I just hope that Yossy won't do anything stupid to get revenge...
But she will, wouldn't she?
I can't wait for the enxt update!!
I hope she doesn't do nothing stupid... Miki better you hurry up and apologize
I wonder why everyone thinks Yossy's going to go do something stupid...
Anyway, new part comin' up once I go get my mail!
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Um, I never said that the shit hitting the fan was when the prologue showed back up.
:glasses:
SHIT, so Yossy IS going to get revenge :O or is she? :lol:
Yossy > pride, thats all i gotta say.
Yossy > most things XD
Yossy > world, but given the situation, ne...?
Pride won't get you laid!
BEST COMMENT OF THE DAY. We should get that printed on T-shirts. "100% Kataomoi - Pride won't get you laid"
I SOOOOOOOOOOOOO want that shirt now XD
sry for interrupting the flow, I just HAD to say that.
now WAITING FOR NEXT PART :otomerika:
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PART 26
FUJIMOTO - AUGUST 20TH
Why. Am. I. So. Stupid.
I'm not always, actually. I go along for months and months doing fine, but I guess the stupidity is just building up, waiting to come out in one giant screw up.
Who cares if Aya thinks Yocchan's a better kisser. Couldn't my stupid pride take that one hit and let it go? For crying out loud, I'd probably agree with her.
Dammit.
Her car was parked in its normal spot when I got home, but she was nowhere to be found.
I called her cell phone repeatedly. The first few times, it rang and rang. Then she must have turned it off, because it just went straight to voice mail. Clenching my jaw, I immediately began dialing everyone I could think of - Ayaka, Mai, Rika... hell, I even called Makoto for good measure. I left voice mails for a few people, but most everyone answered. No one knew where she was. Everyone promised to send her home if they saw her.
I think the dogs knew something was wrong. An-kun was avoiding me, and I swear he gave me a dirty look from his perch on the arm of the couch. Hima-chan kept pestering me until I picked her up. I sat down at the kitchen table in the chair that faces the front door and placed Hima-chan on my lap. And I waited.
About an hour later, the sudden new mail alert on my phone scared me half to death. I frantically scrambled to open my phone.
Hope everything's ok by now.
If you need me to back you up, just tell me.
I'd even do a DOKI DOKI love confession. Just for you Tan. ^^
I really am sorry about all this.
Ayayayayayayayaya
I sighed and hit reply.
I can't find her.
She's not answering her phone.
No one's seen her.
I'll let you know if there's an update.
Mikitty
I flipped my phone shut again and went back to waiting.
I finally fell asleep shortly after dawn. She'd never come home.
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We should get that printed on T-shirts. "100% Kataomoi - Pride won't get you laid"
:hiakhiakhiak:
Her car was parked in its normal spot when I got home, but she was nowhere to be found.
I called her cell phone repeatedly. The first few times, it rang and rang. Then she must have turned it off, because it just went straight to voice mail. Clenching my jaw, I immediately began dialing everyone I could think of - Ayaka, Mai, Rika... hell, I even called Makoto for good measure. I left voice mails for a few people, but most everyone answered. No one knew where she was. Everyone promised to send her home if they saw her.
Yossi where are YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU? :k-sad:
I think the dogs knew something was wrong. An-kun was avoiding me, and I swear he gave me a dirty look from his perch on the arm of the couch.
An-kun likes Yossi, so she must have come home for a bit and he sensed that she was upset. Probably didn't take him long to figure out why. After all, they do say that after a while, pets can develop a "sixth sense" type of connection with their owners (okay, technically he's Miki's dog and not Yossi's, but the two of them have been a couple long enough that he and Hima-chan probably see Yossi the same way they see Miki).
Hope everything's ok by now.
If you need me to back you up, just tell me.
I'd even do a DOKI DOKI love confession. Just for you Tan. ^^
I really am sorry about all this.
Ayayayayayayayaya
All angst put aside, it's going to be interesting to see what Yossi thinks if...I mean, WHEN she finds out that Aya's crush is acutally HER and not Miki. :yep:
I finally fell asleep shortly after dawn. She'd never come home.
Where could she be??? :mon cry:
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She'd never come home.
SHh, don't say it like this, it seems like she's gonna die or something.
sad chapter :heart: I hope Yossy's still alive :ph43r: XD
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Ok, replying real quick to clarify one thing
I'm not killing anyone off, especially not Yossy! XD
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PHEW!
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Why. Am. I. So. Stupid.
I'm not always, actually. I go along for months and months doing fine, but I guess the stupidity is just building up, waiting to come out in one giant screw up.
Of course Miki, you're not stupid. Please think of the best words to be said to her... I'll pray for her to forgive you.... :prayers:
Her car was parked in its normal spot when I got home, but she was nowhere to be found.
Search the house Miki!! :mon geek:
I think the dogs knew something was wrong. An-kun was avoiding me, and I swear he gave me a dirty look from his perch on the arm of the couch. Hima-chan kept pestering me until I picked her up. I sat down at the kitchen table in the chair that faces the front door and placed Hima-chan on my lap. And I waited.
Miki.... :mon cry:
I finally fell asleep shortly after dawn. She'd never come home.
I really have a feeling that Yossy was up to something. And by that I mean, something stupid. And by that, I mean, stupid enough to screw up the already screwed relationship.... Like go to Maki!!
:mon blowhorn: Yossy, please forgive Mikitty. She only kissed her to.... erm, to prove that she's a good kisser??
Almond, thanks for the update. It's short but enough for me to understand how terrible Miki felt.
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I read chapter 26 on your blog. ;) This chapter is worrisome but I'm sure things will eventually get better. *cross fingers* :grin:
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An-kun likes Yossi, so she must have come home for a bit and he sensed that she was upset. Probably didn't take him long to figure out why. After all, they do say that after a while, pets can develop a "sixth sense" type of connection with their owners (okay, technically he's Miki's dog and not Yossi's, but the two of them have been a couple long enough that he and Hima-chan probably see Yossi the same way they see Miki).
I did briefly start to write Yossy's POV in between parts 25 & 26 and ended up scrapping it because I didn't like it. But, for the record (since I'm not sure if I'll have it brought up or not), Yossy never went inside the apartment. She drove home, parked the car, and walked off.
PHEW!
wtf, like I'm gonna kill off my belov'd Yoshizawa :love:
Search the house Miki!! :mon geek:
This made me laugh more than it really should have. I started imagining Yossy hiding from Miki under the bed XD
I read chapter 26 on your blog. ;) This chapter is worrisome but I'm sure things will eventually get better. *cross fingers* :grin:
Let's just say in the next chapter, the shit hits the fan and I think JFC might bust out the Kira Kira Fuyu no Shiny Shiny Knife (c) on me in a second.
New chapter in a few!
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PART 27
YOSHIZAWA - AUGUST 21ST
I woke up with the worst headache of my life. You know it's bad when you don't remember how many drinks you had because you forgot how to count that high during your binge.
I instinctively rolled over and reached for Miki. Oh. Right. I didn't go home last night. The memories flooded back of Miki grabbing Aya... Miki kissing Aya... ugh... ...wait. If I didn't go home last night, then where the hell am I?!
The panicked thought made me sit straight up in bed. I instantly regretted my kneejerk reaction when I almost fell over again from my hangover. I looked around the somewhat familiar room. Oh! Oh, that's right. I ran into Maki last night. I laughed a little in relief. Thank goodness she found me and not a reporter. "FORMER MO MUSU LEADER ON DRUNKEN BENDER" or something.
I rubbed my dry eyes and glanced over at the nightstand to see what time it was. In front of the clock proclaiming 8:17 am, there was a folded piece of paper with my name on it. Well, that would explain why the apartment was so quiet. Maki must've left already. I absentmindedly wondered if she still kept the aspirin in the same place as I picked up the note.
"Yocchan <3
Hope you slept well. After last night, you're probably having trouble walking! Ha ha!
Speaking of last night... don't worry about it, ok? It doesn't mean anything. I know you and Miki are together for the long haul. So, don't even give it another thought. <3
Next time, though, don't bother with the bar - just come straight here, all right? I won't tell Miki. ^_-
Anyway, I'm off to Korea for a few days! I left the spare keys on the kitchen counter, so just lock up when you leave.
-Maki-
PS - I put your clothes in with the laundry I sent out this morning. I'll give them to you when I get back."
I read the note about five times. Each time, I hoped to get a different meaning out of it. About midway through the last reading, I realized I was completely naked except for one of Maki's old t-shirts.
Well, at least the PS makes sense now, I thought bitterly to myself before I went into the bathroom and threw up.
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And the winners of the Psychic Reader Award are!
Go, before Yossi will get drunk and there'll be more drama.
Maybe she will get drunk and then she will go to see a friend to talk to... and maybe this friend will be MAKI!!!!!!!!
I really have a feeling that Yossy was up to something. And by that I mean, something stupid. And by that, I mean, stupid enough to screw up the already screwed relationship.... Like go to Maki!!
Although technically, Yossy didn't go to Maki, Maki found her, I still award you with the Psychic Reader Award. :lol:
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:OMG: :OMG: :OMG: :OMG: :OMG: :OMG: :OMG: :OMG: :OMG: :OMG:
What the hell!!!!!!!!! she really do it........
Wow... this is more serious :imdead:
Although technically, Yossy didn't go to Maki, Maki found her, I still award you with the Psychic Reader Award.
Well... but the result was the same :bingo: :mon inluv: :mon inluv: :mon inluv: Ahhh... I win a Psychic Reader Award :k-thrilled:
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:angry: >> I really love this little gif....
"Yocchan <3
Hope you slept well. After last night, you're probably having trouble walking! Ha ha!
Speaking of last night... don't worry about it, ok? It doesn't mean anything. I know you and Miki are together for the long haul. So, don't even give it another thought. <3
Next time, though, don't bother with the bar - just come straight here, all right? I won't tell Miki. ^_-
Anyway, I'm off to Korea for a few days! I left the spare keys on the kitchen counter, so just lock up when you leave.
-Maki-
PS - I put your clothes in with the laundry I sent out this morning. I'll give them to you when I get back."
I read the note about five times. Each time, I hoped to get a different meaning out of it. About midway through the last reading, I realized I was completely naked except for one of Maki's old t-shirts.
And I read the note like 10 times!! What happen? Obviously, something 'stupid' happens right? But, but, its not yossy's fault!
I'm panicked for Yossy here.... Yossy should talk to Maki first to explain everything and to clarify things before Maki herself go to Miki. :frustrated:
This is getting interesting almond... :mon thumb:
p/s: You know what almond, you just got me almond'd because you make me think what's going to happen next in this fic when I woke up and before I sleep. and you make me woke up in the middle of the night to check if there's an update.... like I've been yossy'd.... :mon cweepy:
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I woke up with the worst headache of my life. You know it's bad when you don't remember how many drinks you had because you forgot how to count that high during your binge.
Yowch. :k-crazy:
...wait. If I didn't go home last night, then where the hell am I?!
I curious to know, yet at the same time...:scared:
The panicked thought made me sit straight up in bed. I instantly regretted my kneejerk reaction when I almost fell over again from my hangover. I looked around the somewhat familiar room. Oh! Oh, that's right. I ran into Maki last night. I laughed a little in relief. Thank goodness she found me and not a reporter.
Uh oh...:O
In front of the clock proclaiming 8:17 am, there was a folded piece of paper with my name on it. Well, that would explain why the apartment was so quiet. Maki must've left already. I absentmindedly wondered if she still kept the aspirin in the same place as I picked up the note.
"Yocchan <3
Hope you slept well. After last night, you're probably having trouble walking! Ha ha!
Speaking of last night... don't worry about it, ok? It doesn't mean anything. I know you and Miki are together for the long haul. So, don't even give it another thought. <3
Next time, though, don't bother with the bar - just come straight here, all right? I won't tell Miki. ^_-
Anyway, I'm off to Korea for a few days! I left the spare keys on the kitchen counter, so just lock up when you leave.
-Maki-
Ooooooooooh crap. She didn't...did she? :o
PS - I put your clothes in with the laundry I sent out this morning. I'll give them to you when I get back."
I read the note about five times. Each time, I hoped to get a different meaning out of it. About midway through the last reading, I realized I was completely naked except for one of Maki's old t-shirts.
Fuckin' hell she did. :OMG: :mon scare: :frustrated: :mon spit: :shock:
Guess this makes up for never having done it when they were dating a few years back.
Miki = :fainted:
Yossi = :barf:
Maki = :bingo:
JFC = :imdead:
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SSHHHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITTT!!!!! Well F@CK! I'm no mind reader but knowing Miki, all hell will broke loose when she finds out. :angry: What the hell you're getting drunk and slept with Maki for Yossy!!! Don't tell me in the next chapter, when Yossy confronted Miki she'd mention the "having trouble walking in the morning" thing to Miki!
Or better yet, as an act of retaliation Miki went for comfort to.........Rika!! Of all people..... :banghead:
*mentally watching Kira Kira Fuyu no Shiny Shiny Knife (c) getting closer to where you live*
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Yossy's been sodomized :otomerika:
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im still hoping that the note doesnt imply them having a sack romp
and Maki said Yossie'll be having a difficult time walking coz of the hang over
(and not bcoz of the sodomy :shakeit: )
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don't ruin my fantasy poli :(
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"Yocchan <3
Hope you slept well. After last night, you're probably having trouble walking! Ha ha!
Speaking of last night... don't worry about it, ok? It doesn't mean anything. I know you and Miki are together for the long haul. So, don't even give it another thought. <3
Next time, though, don't bother with the bar - just come straight here, all right? I won't tell Miki. ^_-
Anyway, I'm off to Korea for a few days! I left the spare keys on the kitchen counter, so just lock up when you leave.
-Maki-
PS - I put your clothes in with the laundry I sent out this morning. I'll give them to you when I get back."
:OMG: :OMG: :shock: :shock: :scared: :scared:
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well here is how it should be... Yossy gets to kiss Aya coz Miki did (once again :p) and if she slept with Maki then Miki gets to do the same :heart:, then they are all even and we can move on to the fluff again and Aya can fall into the arms of Maki to get over her love for Yossy ;)
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don't ruin my fantasy poli :(
hey, if it turns out to be true, i'd draw it for you XD :shocked:
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don't ruin my fantasy poli :(
hey, if it turns out to be true, i'd draw it for you XD :shocked:
shiiiit :( ALMOND PLSSSSSSSSS :lol:
edit: on one second thought, I think (orly) that Maki is just joking implying they had sex but they really didn't. Maki just took care of drunk Yossy and put her to sleep. Maki is a joker, after all.
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Hmm? I don't think they slept together... Maki probably would've just changed her clothes and let her rest... lol Maki just doesn't seem to be the person who would take advantage of drunkie Yossie...(or would she? XD)
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Hmm? I don't think they slept together... Maki probably would've just changed her clothes and let her rest... lol Maki just doesn't seem to be the person who would take advantage of drunkie Yossie...(or would she? XD)
I hope that's true; it wouldn't be surprising considering how almond loves to torture us (she's probably going :wahaha: as we speak). But whether she actually did or not, Yossi still THINKS that she slept with Maki. The fact that the latter is going off to Korea for a few days sure won't make things easier for Yossi.
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:OMG: :OMG: :shock: :shock: :scared: :scared:
Seriously, emoticons are the best things ever made ever. :luvluv2:
well here is how it should be... Yossy gets to kiss Aya coz Miki did (once again :p) and if she slept with Maki then Miki gets to do the same :heart:, then they are all even and we can move on to the fluff again and Aya can fall into the arms of Maki to get over her love for Yossy ;)
LMFAO
Yossy: Miki, I slept with Maki. So, you have to sleep with her so we're even. :bingo:
Miki: :grr:
Yossy: :dunno:
Miki: :knee:
on one second thought, I think (orly) that Maki is just joking implying they had sex but they really didn't. Maki just took care of drunk Yossy and put her to sleep. Maki is a joker, after all.
If that's true and Maki did that to me and then left for another country where I couldn't get a hold of her, I'd beat the crap out of her when she got back. :wahaha:
(Do you love how I commented on that one as though I don't know what I've written?)
Maki just doesn't seem to be the person who would take advantage of drunkie Yossie...(or would she? XD)
I was wondering if anyone was going to comment on Maki taking advantage of drunk Yossy. Everyone else was like "Yossy nooooo" and "Yossy got sodomized!" XD
Anyway, new part in a few. POV is.... (http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/5151/mikiheadsmallyu5.gif)
EDIT - I have no idea why the post did that. I had replies to a lot more and now they're gone. :banghead:
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PART 28
FUJIMOTO - AUGUST 21ST
I woke up when I heard the door close.
"Yocchan?" I called. She looked over at me and quickly turned away and walked towards the bathroom. "Yossy, please, wait!" I pleaded, running over and grabbing her arm. "I'm sorry, I really am, but it's not what you think. I was just being stupid. Aya doesn't even have a thing for me! She has a crush on you! She tried to say you were the better kisser and, well, I got mad and I'm really sorry but, isn't that funny?" My awkward laughter echoed in the silence.
"I need a shower," she said quietly after a moment, moving out of my grasp and shutting the bathroom door behind her.
I looked at the closed door and shook my head. I heard her take a ragged breath before the shower was abruptly turned on. Something weird was going on. This wasn't angry Yoshizawa. This was... strange. And where did she get those clothes anyway? I hesitated for a minute with my hand on the doorknob before opening the bathroom door.
Barely masked by the steam on the clear curtain, Yossy was standing in the shower, hugging her chest protectively, letting the water run down her face. Her entire body shook as she took a deep breath and let it out.
"What's going on?" I said at last. She jumped at the sound of my voice. She opened her mouth to say something, then seemed to change her mind and closed it. "Are you okay?" I asked quietly.
"I..." she trailed off.
"Where were you last night?" She flinched. I felt a knot form in the pit of my stomach. "Yossy..." She shook her head and abruptly turned the shower off.
"We have a game," she said quietly, grabbing her towel and tightly wrapping it around herself. She walked past me and stood in front of the mirror.
"I don't give a crap," I replied flatly. "They can play without us. You need to tell me what's going on."
"Unlike some people, I don't just abandon my responsibilities whenever it suits me," she snapped, picking up her toothbrush. "I have a game today, so I'm going to play in the damn game. As the captain, I'd appreciate it if you'd have the decency to show up as well."
My jaw dropped. She didn't even look up and brushed her teeth as though nothing had happened. Frozen in shock, I just stared as she brushed, rinsed, and spat. She glanced up and met my eye in the mirror.
"...I'm sorry," she sighed. I gave a short, humorless laugh.
"No, you're not," I replied, stalking out of the bathroom. I grabbed my futsal bag and threw it over my shoulder.
"Miki!"
"Fuck off, Yoshizawa." I slammed the front door behind me and walked out into the sunlight to hail a taxi.
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:hiakhiakhiak: I don't feel sorry for any of them, I just fell like mocking them both with my laughter :kekeke:
Gotta love all the angstyness (is that even a word) going on coz 1) Angry Miki is sexy :heart: 2) Angry Yossy makes an even angrier Miki or begging Miki which is also sexy :heart:
So on that note, i want Yossy to tell Miki where she was last night while they are playing so then i can also laugh at the players from the other team as they feel the wrath of a delusionally pissed-off Miki-sama :hiakhiakhiak:
>:D >:D >:D
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I may be abnormal, but I love a couple fighting, really. I feel so much love. FOR REAL. Love this chapter.
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I really thought this chapter will be more of angry Yossy but it turns out to be equal. Miki is also pissed!! :mon suspect:
"Unlike some people, I don't just abandon my responsibilities whenever it suits me," she snapped, picking up her toothbrush. "I have a game today, so I'm going to play in the damn game. As the captain, I'd appreciate it if you'd have the decency to show up as well."
I love how you potrayed Yossy being angry but she didn't just snap on Miki.... Instead, trying to be professional and act like a damn leader.... I think that was just so Yossy. :hehehe:
"Fuck off, Yoshizawa." I slammed the front door behind me and walked out into the sunlight to hail a taxi.
And yes, Miki just curse whenever she feels like, didn't she? And just how sexy Miki here!! :mon blood:
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on one second thought, I think (orly) that Maki is just joking implying they had sex but they really didn't. Maki just took care of drunk Yossy and put her to sleep. Maki is a joker, after all.
If that's true and Maki did that to me and then left for another country where I couldn't get a hold of her, I'd beat the crap out of her when she got back. :wahaha:
(Do you love how I commented on that one as though I don't know what I've written?)
I do. :D
EDIT - I have no idea why the post did that. I had replies to a lot more and now they're gone. :banghead:
You never said anything about how I said you'd probably be all " :wahaha: " as we tried to figure out if Yossi and Maki did the lie-down lambada. :(
I woke up when I heard the door close.
"Yocchan?" I called. She looked over at me and quickly turned away and walked towards the bathroom. "Yossy, please, wait!" I pleaded, running over and grabbing her arm.
At this point:
a) Even though she's still probably pissed at her, Yossi's trying to avoid Miki because she's scared to look her in the eye because she believes she got drunk and bonked Maki and feels like shit about it.
b) Miki's been worried sick because she has had no idea of where Yossi's been all night and is terrified that Yossi's going to break up with her (the fact that Yossi's avoiding her doesn't exactly deter that assumption).
"I'm sorry, I really am, but it's not what you think. I was just being stupid. Aya doesn't even have a thing for me! She has a crush on you! She tried to say you were the better kisser and, well, I got mad and I'm really sorry but, isn't that funny?" My awkward laughter echoed in the silence.
"I need a shower," she said quietly after a moment, moving out of my grasp and shutting the bathroom door behind her.
Yossi's still probably too much in shock over what she thinks she did with Maki to process what Miki just told her. :cry:
"I need a shower," she said quietly after a moment, moving out of my grasp and shutting the bathroom door behind her.
I looked at the closed door and shook my head. I heard her take a ragged breath before the shower was abruptly turned on. Something weird was going on. This wasn't angry Yoshizawa. This was... strange. And where did she get those clothes anyway? I hesitated for a minute with my hand on the doorknob before opening the bathroom door.
Barely masked by the steam on the clear curtain, Yossy was standing in the shower, hugging her chest protectively, letting the water run down her face. Her entire body shook as she took a deep breath and let it out.
"What's going on?" I said at last. She jumped at the sound of my voice. She opened her mouth to say something, then seemed to change her mind and closed it. "Are you okay?" I asked quietly.
And here we see the focus of Miki's concerned shift from whether or not Yossi will forgive her to what's causing Yossi to behave the way she is right now. They've known each other long enough to know that Yossi's got a bit of a jealous streak when it comes to Miki. The fact that she's apparently no longer freaking out about what she walked in on with her and Aya might be comforting to some, but it's not like that here, simply because it's not...natural for the relationship that Yossi and Miki have.
"Where were you last night?" She flinched. I felt a knot form in the pit of my stomach. "Yossy..." She shook her head and abruptly turned the shower off.
"We have a game," she said quietly, grabbing her towel and tightly wrapping it around herself. She walked past me and stood in front of the mirror.
"I don't give a crap," I replied flatly. "They can play without us. You need to tell me what's going on."
"Unlike some people, I don't just abandon my responsibilities whenever it suits me," she snapped, picking up her toothbrush. "I have a game today, so I'm going to play in the damn game. As the captain, I'd appreciate it if you'd have the decency to show up as well."
My jaw dropped. She didn't even look up and brushed her teeth as though nothing had happened. Frozen in shock, I just stared as she brushed, rinsed, and spat.
Yossi can't bring herself to tell Miki what happened yet, primarily due to the fact that she herself still isn't sure what exactly happened. It doesn't help matters either that the only person who could actually confirm what happened (if anything did), is out of the country. So at this point, the only way that Yossi can deal with this, is to NOT deal with it. The fact that she's making an effort to fulfill her responsibilities is must part of the reason why she's not wanting to talk right now. A VERY large part of it is because she simply does not know what to tell Miki.
Yossi's anger at seeing what she saw is understandable, however...if afterwards, she went and got drunk and slept with her ex...that's not understandable. Some would say it's not forgivable either. As the old saying goes, two wrongs don't make a right.
She glanced up and met my eye in the mirror.
"...I'm sorry," she sighed. I gave a short, humorless laugh.
"No, you're not," I replied, stalking out of the bathroom. I grabbed my futsal bag and threw it over my shoulder.
"Miki!"
"Fuck off, Yoshizawa." I slammed the front door behind me and walked out into the sunlight to hail a taxi.
And now Miki's just mad. Mad at Yossi for apparently not wanting to talk about what happened, for putting a higher priority on their work commitments instead of their relationship. From Miki's POV, right now it looks like Yossi's either completely given up on them, or she wasn't really as serious about thier relationship in the first place as she had professed to be.
:grr: :gyaaah:
Where will Miki go to now? It's not like she still has her old apartment, right? Both of them have strong, proud personalities. Both can be incredibly stubborn when they want to be. How long will it be before they can actually talk about this? :pleeease:
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Hmmmm..... this chapter is so short I don't really feel the effect. I want to read a full blown war between Yomiki! That'd be really hot! :twisted: They say make up sex after such events suppose to melt your brain or body or both. :grin:
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Where will Miki go to now? It's not like she still has her old apartment, right? Both of them have strong, proud personalities. Both can be incredibly stubborn when they want to be. How long will it be before they can actually talk about this?
I have no psychic powers like some of you, but I'm thinking that maybe she'll show up at the game, generally act like a bitch to everybody, and bulldoze her way through (and over) the opponents... Or she'll just find a way to keep bumping into Yossy. :lol: (Like Bette kept fouling Tina during the basketball game, in The L Word.)
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^ That goes without saying. :lol:
I was wondering where she'd go AFTER the game.
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Hmmmm..... this chapter is so short I don't really feel the effect. I want to read a full blown war between Yomiki! That'd be really hot! :twisted: They say make up sex after such events suppose to melt your brain or body or both. :grin:
DO VVANT :ding:(Like Bette kept fouling Tina during the basketball game, in The L Word.)[/size]
loooooooooooooooooooooooool DOUBLE VVANT :ding: :ding:
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Hmm... Is Yossie guilty for sleeping/believing-she-slept with Maki....or just plain pissed at Miki... :dizzy: I guess we'll find out soon enough :P
Whoo! Angry Miki is HOt. :sweat:
The outcome will be hopefully be Angry Hot Miki vs Angry Hot Yossie facing off in some heated argument and result in... a new generation of hotness just really really hot debate sex... *Fans self
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So on that note, i want Yossy to tell Miki where she was last night while they are playing so then i can also laugh at the players from the other team as they feel the wrath of a delusionally pissed-off Miki-sama :hiakhiakhiak:
Again, Yossy's hungover, not suicidal :lol:
I may be abnormal, but I love a couple fighting, really. I feel so much love. FOR REAL. Love this chapter.
that... is a bit strange. I kind of see where you're coming from, but... yeah, a little strange XD
And yes, Miki just curse whenever she feels like, didn't she? And just how sexy Miki here!! :mon blood:
Apparently a LOT of people find angry Miki sexy. not that I blame them...
EDIT - I have no idea why the post did that. I had replies to a lot more and now they're gone. :banghead:
You never said anything about how I said you'd probably be all " :wahaha: " as we tried to figure out if Yossi and Maki did the lie-down lambada. :(
That's 'cause half my post got eaten somehow and turned into me quoting the same post 4 times :dizzy: I was too lazy to go back and remember what I'd written.
But lie-down lambada is the best phrase ever.
And yes, I was actually :wahaha: ing when you posted that. XD
As the old saying goes, two wrongs don't make a right.
Yes, but three lefts do! :bingo:
I'm a bit too sleepy to reply to all of your excellent analysis, but I loved your entire post. :wub:
They say make up sex after such events suppose to melt your brain or body or both. :grin:
Angry sex is better.
...um, not that'd I'd know or anything... :sweat:
I have no psychic powers like some of you, but I'm thinking that maybe she'll show up at the game, generally act like a bitch to everybody, and bulldoze her way through (and over) the opponents...
BTW, if anyone's wondering, there actually was a Gatas game on August 21st - actually it was a tournament. And they won the whole damn thing. :otomerika:
Hmm... Is Yossie guilty for sleeping/believing-she-slept with Maki....or just plain pissed at Miki... :dizzy: I guess we'll find out soon enough :P
YEP!
Despite my half-promises to the contrary to JFC, I'm posting twice in one day. There is a reason, though, so...
Next narrator is (http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/9521/hitomikarasu00zf8.gif)
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PART 29
YOSHIZAWA - AUGUST 21ST
I stood outside my front door for about ten minutes before I mustered up the courage enough to go inside. I still didn't know what I was going to do when I saw Miki.
Actually, I didn't even know if Miki would be here. She had run after me, but... after that, maybe she went back to the dressing room... and she and Aya had...
Oh, God, I don't want to think about that.
I stepped inside our home and glanced around. I saw her almost immediately. She was sitting in one of the chairs at the kitchen table, her head propped up by her left arm. Her long hair falling over her face sparkled in the morning sun peeking through the windows. She'd never looked so beautiful to me as she did in that moment. And I'd never hated myself more.
She opened her eyes when I shut the door behind me. She blinked a couple of times and looked around in confusion before her eyes settled on my figure in the doorway. I quickly looked away.
"Yocchan?" she called. By reflex, I looked over at her. I could feel my emotions starting to overwhelm me. I quickly turned away and walked towards the bathroom. "Yossy, please, wait!" The chair scraped against the floor and she ran over to me, grabbing my arm. "I'm sorry, I really am, but it's not what you think. I was just being stupid. Aya doesn't even have a thing for me! She has a crush on you! She tried to say you were the better kisser and, well, I got mad and I'm really sorry but, isn't that funny?" She laughed uncertainly. Of course. Of course it was something so stupid and pointless and... God, what a Miki thing to do.
I wanted to throw up. I wanted to grab her by her shoulders and shake her, demand to know what was so funny about what had happened. I wanted to wrap my arms around her and hold her close, never letting her go, never telling her anything, silencing her questions with kisses. I wanted to blurt out everything, listen to her scream at me, beg her for forgiveness. I wanted to never feel this stupid, this dirty again.
"I need a shower," I finally managed to say. I walked into the bathroom and quietly shut the door behind me.
I was about to lose it. I took a deep breath and turned the shower on just in time to cover my uncontrollable sobbing. I stripped off the clothes I'd taken from Maki's. I threw them carelessly on the floor, wishing I could burn them.
On top of all of this, we had a futsal game in less than two hours. I had to get it together at least long enough to make it through that. I stepped under the forgiving stream of water and tried to calm down. I hugged my chest as I let the water streaming down my face mix with my tears.
"What's going on?" I jumped at the sound of her voice. I opened my mouth to reply, but realized I had nothing I could say to her. We didn't have time to get into it right now.
"I..." I had nothing to say.
"Where were you last night?" she asked slowly, as though she was dreading the reply. I flinched at the question. "Yossy...." Please don't ask me. Please, can't we pretend none of this ever happened? Maybe it didn't happen. Maybe I was reading too much into Maki's words. Maybe she was just...
Then the memory slapped me in the face. Maki, laughing in a low tone, looking right into my eyes and smirking as she ran her hands up my back and unhooked my bra. Oh, God...
I shook my head to clear the memory away and turned the shower off. I would never get clean now.
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Yeah, seriously. That's the end of "100% Kataomoi".
No joke. That's it. There is no part 30 of "100%"
Of course, tomorrow, I'll be posting the first part of "memoir III: memory" :hiakhiakhiak:
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:angry1: :angry1: :angry1: :angry1: :angry1: Why you have to do that??!!!
I was all :frustrated: :frustrated: :frustrated: :frustrated: this is not truth... this can't be the end, and then you
Of course, tomorrow, I'll be posting the first part of "memoir III: memory"
:grr: :grr: :scolding: :scolding:
Ahh... poor Yossy, she's all frustated and she don't know what to do
Then the memory slapped me in the face. Maki, laughing in a low tone, looking right into my eyes and smirking as she ran her hands up my back Oh, God...
:shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: so she and Maki did actually had sex??!!! And Maki was the one who initiated it? Did she actually took advantage of a drunk Yossy?
Ahhhh.... I can't wait for the next season!!! :wriggly: :wriggly:
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Nice! :D
You have such an awesome sense of timing.
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But lie-down lambada is the best phrase ever.
I thought you might like it. :grin:
And yes, I was actually :wahaha: ing when you posted that.
I KNEW IT! XD
Despite my half-promises to the contrary to JFC, I'm posting twice in one day. There is a reason, though, so...
Dammit, I can't find that knife.
Oh well...
/me settles in for what he assumes is more angsty stuff.
Next narrator is (http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/9521/hitomikarasu00zf8.gif)
/me sees GIF.
*yoink* :D
PART 29
YOSHIZAWA - AUGUST 21ST
I stood outside my front door for about ten minutes before I mustered up the courage enough to go inside. I still didn't know what I was going to do when I saw Miki.
OSHIT! YOSSI'S POV OF WHAT JUST HAPPENED WITH MIKI!!! :shock:
She'd never looked so beautiful to me as she did in that moment. And I'd never hated myself more.
Dammit that's so angsty. She loves her so much, yet she's also in pain from what she saw as WELL as what she believes she did with Maki. :frustrated:
"Yossy, please, wait!" The chair scraped against the floor and she ran over to me, grabbing my arm. "I'm sorry, I really am, but it's not what you think. I was just being stupid. Aya doesn't even have a thing for me! She has a crush on you! She tried to say you were the better kisser and, well, I got mad and I'm really sorry but, isn't that funny?" She laughed uncertainly. Of course. Of course it was something so stupid and pointless and... God, what a Miki thing to do.
If the circumstances were different, Yossi might actually agree with Miki and think that it's funny. The fact that Miki's explanation makes sense just makes what Yossi's currently feeling even worse. Despite how it may have looked, Miki was, and IS still devoted to Yossi and had had no intention of cheating on her with Aya. Right now, Yossi doesn't believe that she can say the same about herself. :cry:
I wanted to grab her by her shoulders and shake her, demand to know what was so funny about what had happened. I wanted to wrap my arms around her and hold her close, never letting her go, never telling her anything, silencing her questions with kisses. I wanted to blurt out everything, listen to her scream at me, beg her for forgiveness. I wanted to never feel this stupid, this dirty again.
The problem here is that Yossi feels like an immense hypocrite. She now knows that she was mistaken in thinking that Miki would cheat on her, but at the time, she was totally convinced of it and it infuriated her. NOW it looks like Yossi was the one who was unfaithful. She may have been completely smashed at the time, but cheating is still cheating.
I was about to lose it. I took a deep breath and turned the shower on just in time to cover my uncontrollable sobbing. I stripped off the clothes I'd taken from Maki's. I threw them carelessly on the floor, wishing I could burn them.
Yossi = :gyaaah:
"Where were you last night?" she asked slowly, as though she was dreading the reply. I flinched at the question. "Yossy...." Please don't ask me. Please, can't we pretend none of this ever happened?
It's obviously difficult enough for Yossi to deal with what she believes she did... the possibility of what Miki would do if she found out, it's just way too much for Yossi right now. :k-sad:
Maybe it didn't happen. Maybe I was reading too much into Maki's words. Maybe she was just...
Then the memory slapped me in the face. Maki, laughing in a low tone, looking right into my eyes and smirking as she ran her hands up my back and unhooked my bra. Oh, God...
I shook my head to clear the memory away and turned the shower off. I would never get clean now.
Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh...shit. :stunned:
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Yeah, seriously. That's the end of "100% Kataomoi".
Eh? :dunno:
j/k???
No joke. That's it. There is no part 30 of "100%"
EHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH WTF!? :OMG:
Of course, tomorrow, I'll be posting the first part of "memoir III: memory"
Part III picks up where Part II left off, right? :scared:
You're doing something like what OTN1 did with the LOVE x 2 series, right? RIGHT??? It's like, each story it's like it's own arc in a greater, bigger story, right? RIGHT???
:mon scare:
YOMIKICAN'T BE OVER! DA RABURABU CANNOT BE OVER! PLEASE SAY IT'S NOT OVERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!
:frustrated: :frustrated: :frustrated:
...
...
/me goes and sits on bed in fetal position feebly humming some song that goes "Kira kira...something something"
:shifty:
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I love and hate these two chapters... :cry:
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Yeah, seriously. That's the end of "100% Kataomoi".
Eh... :? But you said you were writing chapter 30 (or was it 31...?) few days ago.
No joke. That's it. There is no part 30 of "100%"
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT!!!??? But you said... :cry:
Of course, tomorrow, I'll be posting the first part of "memoir III: memory"
As long as Yomiki will clear the things up it's good. You just can't end it like that... Right...?
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SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
did Yossy get sodomized? :ding:
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end.
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Yeah, seriously. That's the end of "100% Kataomoi".
I was laughing when I read this....
No joke. That's it. There is no part 30 of "100%"
And I stop when I read this... Eh, really? But, wouldn't it be strange to end it up like that...
Of course, tomorrow, I'll be posting the first part of "memoir III: memory"
Oh, really? But you owe me the Yossy confront Maki, the Yossy confront Miki, the Yossy's POV about Aya crush on her and the make up scene of YoMiki.... Haha...
Will there be in the 'memir III: memory?
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I'm too tired and have to be up in 6 hours for an exam i haven't finished studying for so i can't really say much about the last chapter besides i loved it :wub:
But i felt i better say something seeing this is the 1st fic i have been around to follow from start to finish as its posted even though i didn't comment all the time so :otomerika: for almond :heart:
And thank god there is a 'sequel' that was so cruel at the end there :P
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:angry1: :angry1: :angry1: :angry1: :angry1: Why you have to do that??!!!
I was all :frustrated: :frustrated: :frustrated: :frustrated: this is not truth... this can't be the end, and then you
Of course, tomorrow, I'll be posting the first part of "memoir III: memory"
:grr: :grr: :scolding: :scolding:
Yeah, I come up with the most evil ideas, don't I? :wahaha:
:shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: so she and Maki did actually had sex??!!! And Maki was the one who initiated it? Did she actually took advantage of a drunk Yossy?
Ahhhh.... I can't wait for the next season!!! :wriggly: :wriggly:
Did Yossy and Maki actually have sex? Did Maki take advantage of a drunk Yossy? Where will Miki go after the futsal game? Find out next week, same Bat time, same Bat channel!
(I was going to do a "Soap" reference, but changed it to "Batman" because I doubted anyone would get the "Soap" one.)
Nice! :D
You have such an awesome sense of timing.
Thank you!! SEE! SOMEONE APPRECIATES MY EVIL-NESS!
Dammit, I can't find that knife.
Oh well...
Why do I have the feeling you'll be tearing your place apart looking for it soon? :lol:
OSHIT! YOSSI'S POV OF WHAT JUST HAPPENED WITH MIKI!!! :shock:
Yeah, I decided to go back to the roots of memoir and do a double POV. I think I might do that a lot in the 3rd one, actually...
If the circumstances were different, Yossi might actually agree with Miki and think that it's funny.
That's very true. If she hadn't woken up hungover and mostly naked, she'd probably laugh and just give Miki a hard time about it.
NOW it looks like Yossi was the one who was unfaithful. She may have been completely smashed at the time, but cheating is still cheating.
Also true. Regardless of whether it happened or not, at this point as far as Yossy is concerned, she cheated on the love of her life. And apparently for no reason.
(Again, commenting like I don't know the ending...)
Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh...shit. :stunned:
Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh...yeah. XD
Part III picks up where Part II left off, right? :scared:
YEP! :lol:
You're doing something like what OTN1 did with the LOVE x 2 series, right? RIGHT??? It's like, each story it's like it's own arc in a greater, bigger story, right? RIGHT???
:mon scare:
Pretty much. I realized that the happy fluffy underlying Aya-love of 100% was over, so I decided to end this and start with a new title. I decided on this because I was talking with manamin last night and decided to change the original ending a little.
/me goes and sits on bed in fetal position feebly humming some song that goes "Kira kira...something something"
:shifty:
Ah, there it is. ;)
I love and hate these two chapters... :cry:
I'm sorry, but we're stuck in angst-land for quite a while now. :-\
Eh... :? But you said you were writing chapter 30 (or was it 31...?) few days ago.
No joke. That's it. There is no part 30 of "100%"
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT!!!??? But you said... :cry:
Aaah! Part 30 and 31 are still there, they're just part 1 and 2 now
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
did Yossy get sodomized? :ding:
:on lol:
One track mind much?
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Yeah, seriously. That's the end of "100% Kataomoi".
I was laughing when I read this....
No joke. That's it. There is no part 30 of "100%"
And I stop when I read this...
:hiakhiakhiak:
But you owe me the Yossy confront Maki, the Yossy confront Miki, the Yossy's POV about Aya crush on her and the make up scene of YoMiki.... Haha...
Will there be in the 'memir III: memory?
Eventually, yes, dunno, and no comment.
And thank god there is a 'sequel' that was so cruel at the end there :P
Yep. I love to torture my readers. :otomerika:
Ah, good times. Ok, I am gonna start posting the third one now. The narrator of part 1 is (http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/8469/44ji0.gif)
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LOL I was so amused when you said that it really is the end. :lol: Those were the best sentences ever, after the story ended with such an incomplete feeling. I liked the different points of view and how much does really go left unsaid when people talk to each other. The laughing head at the end, I thought it was Mako.
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(http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/8469/44ji0.gif)
Okay, where are you getting these GIFs??? XD LINK PLEASE!!!