JPHiP Radio (25/200 @ 128 kbs)     Now playing: Toe - Kodoku no Hatsumei

Author Topic: Beats of Love [SayaMilky,WMatsui, MaYuki, YuiParu] - chapter 16 (18/07/17)  (Read 131089 times)

Offline MaYukiIsLife

  • Starting to become addicted to Keyakizaka46.
  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 1306
  • If Neru's my sugar fix, Nen's my guilty pleasure
    • FuruyanagiOshi
    • taengoosone
 :shocked So all that just to get FuruYanagi? XD

Quote
Everyone gasped as they turn at another man clad in a waiter attire who had appeared from the nowhere. But they weren’t gasping for his action, it’s what he had said while crouching down next to the passed out Airi.

 :O So Churi's a guy? And he and Airi are in a gay relationship?!
« Last Edit: May 23, 2015, 10:53:10 AM by MaYukiIsLife »

Offline MisakiShishido

  • ♥愛しきライバル♥
  • Member+
  • Posts: 161
  • 希望は体力, まだまだ大丈夫!
FI-IIIIIIII-NAAAAAAA-LLYYYYYYYYYYY~!!!!! <-- cue in Kataomoi Finally while reading that please  :P

GOSH THIS UPDATE WAS SO HUMOUROUS I ENJOYED IT SO MUCH I'M GOING TO CAPS LOCK ALL OF MY COMMENTS!!!

Nahh, it's gonna look like I'm angry on first glance or something pfft so I'll control myself and type properly... *inhales and exhales*...

FREAKIN' AWESOME UPDATE!!!  :w00t: :heart:

YokoYamamoto is just  :heart: :heart: :heart: Seeing my BroTP/OTP's bickering made me smile like an idiot while reading! I wonder if Miyuki finally realizes Matsui Sayaka's true identity... or she's just going to shrug it off in an airheaded manner hmm~

And then Jurina and Tani gosh! I wonder if I can draw a fanart of the two in disguise hrmmmmmmm~  ;) It's really misleading though, the toilet scene. Not forgetting the way Jurina, as suave as she has always been, managed to coerce the guard to allow them entry! Heck yeah!  :thumbsup

But seriously. WTH Churi? What the heck's going on?!  :shocked I'm really excited to read the next chapter after the suspense!  :twothumbs

Thank you so much embee-san! Zhen, you too  ;)

Offline phoenix0i

  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 313
  • Aigoo! Hwaiting!
Glad to have read your update.
That was nice a nice surprise.
I hope Milky's not gonna fume here.
Paruru when it comes to free food is cute though.

Thank you for the update.
Discovering the wonders of your vague imagination.
Taeny, Atsumina and SayaMilky <3

Offline NogamiRumi

  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 67
  • My english is bad, sorry TwT
    • RumiNogami
Quote
NogamiRumi: NAH! AN UPDATE! Don't come RUNNING ON ME AGAIN. BUAHAHAHA...  8)2

I do not know what are you talking about

Offline Kirozoro

  • Member+
  • Posts: 1239
  • WMatsui, Atsumina, Mayuki couple forever!!
"I didn’t steal it! It was lying in the fridge asking for someone to eat it! I’m just returning the favor!”
 
Jurina raised her hand and cracked her knuckles with a raised brow.

HAHAAHAH Tani run for your life.

Sayaka payback xD...Yui going to pay all the food budgets

“Excuse me. Sorry for disturbing your work.” The lady turned around, only to feel her heart struck by an arrow as Jurina took off her shades like a superstar. “Is the manager here?”

No one can escape Jurina flawless!

Ohh..is Milky going to figure out who is Matsui Sayaka really is?!?!

DUSH!


“Ooh… I think she cracked his jaw.” Sayanee made a hurt expression.

"If only she'd crack his balls..." Yui said only to get excited when Jurina did send a high kick in between his crotch.


CRACK!


"Atta girl! Now give an uppercut!" Tani hooted like they're in a wrestling match.

“Wait, Jurina! Stop! I can explain…”


KA-POW!


“OOFF!”

Jurina did the uppercut, the blow had successfully took Airi's breath away as he laid unconscious.


BAM!


"Aaaand touch down!" Tani yelled with a victorious stance.

Still furious, Jurina was about to give him the last punch just for the heck of it, when someone hit her head with a baseball bat, knocking her out for good. Everyone gasped as they turn at another man clad in a waiter attire who had appeared from the nowhere. But they weren’t gasping for his action, it’s what he had said while crouching down next to the passed out Airi.

“AIRI, DARLING! DON’T DIE ON ME, BABY! DON’T LEAVE YOUR CHURI ALONE!”

“HAAAH?!”

LOL Tani are you watching a wrestling show or saving your senpai xD

At the end what did Rena doing there with Airi and Churi?!?!

I'm having to much fan with this ch...omg

Thx for the update!!


Offline Raizel

  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 256
  • Beat Faster for Fanfiction
Finally an update author-san.. :farofflook:
Wow this chapter is making me laugh hard on the ground..
Tani make the cool Jurina to disguise..  XD
Oh my god milky realize it was Sayaka all the time.,  :shocked
And the last part, Jurina give Airi a nice punch..  :twisted: Yeah you deserve it.. :thumbdown:
but Churi appear out of nowhere and make Jurina unconsious..  :angry:
Please give me light..  :banghead: :banghead:
Waiting for the next.,  :twothumbs

P.S Glad have you back Zhen-san, Embee-san..  :thumbsup

Offline peaceandlove27

  • Member
  • Posts: 23
  • silent reader ....... possible future writer
so glad an update hopefully more are to come. I cant believe jurina really became strong like that to beat up airin.

can't wait for the next update this is great fanfic. :cow: :twothumbs :deco: :heart: :heart: :heart:

Offline Minami-chan

  • Member+
  • Posts: 654
  • Still Love You
CHURI!!!!

Offline kahem

  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 2675
I was annoyed by tani at the beginning but now I think she is awesome lol
And for the end WHAT????

Offline Haruko

  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 2345
OMG! so Miruki know about sayanee know right?

about jurina OMG... I know this have an explanation,right?

Offline Raven _faith

  • Member
  • Posts: 34
  • Embrace the pain, get over it, move on.
*in a daze...* The fighting scene was just... AWESOME!!!!! OMG!!!!! Now to only find a guy whom I can do that to.... Aaaaah! What am I thinking??? *shakes head* Anyways~ Thank you very much for the update!!!!!!! Really appreciate it!! ^^

Offline purnamazaki

  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 226
  • i'm just a trash !
Jurinaa kakooiiiii

Offline Centernezumi

  • Aiiiinnnnn~~~~
  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 58
  • ARIGATOU RICCHAN!!!!
Hello~~ silent reader finally speaking~~   :glasses:
Jurina!!   :heart: :heart:
FURUYANAGAY!!!!!!   :farofflook::shy2: :shy2: :on bleed:
Pls update soon Zhen-san!!!  :on asmo:

Offline RenshuChan

  • Jurina's secret crush ~
  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 388
  • I know many people's secret, but they don't ~
Kyaaaa.... The way Jurina swayed the receptionist.... Hahah
And an epic end of the chapter XD
Curious of what's actually happen betwen Airi and Rena before the group of beast came around XD
Please update really, really soon :bow:

Offline niineechan

  • BANZAI~~~~~~~
  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 466
  • Just A Loner, Not A Loser
    • dwi.pratiwi.754
    • 108988907817535630336
hi! I'm a newbie here. A very new newbie actually.
The first time I found this thing called 'fanfic' I just thought, "What the hell are these guys doing?! They're humiliating the idols!!"
But after I read some AWESOME fanfics then I thought, "WOW!! these guys are truly creative!"
And now, I'm really into this thing called 'fanfic'. HEHE.. And this fic is one of my favorite fics and I LLLOOOOVVEE IT!!!
this fanfic also changed my opinion about fanfic and the fans' way to show their love to the idols. THANK YOU Zhen-san and embee-san>>>
And I felt really sorry for my prejudice to all the authors. now I can say that I'm a fans of your fics. >_<
Honestly, this is my first comment on a fic and I'm a bit nervous since usually I was just a silent reader.  -_-"
then... YOROSHIKU ONEGAISHMASu and THANK YOU....
NICE JOB. <3 <3
« Last Edit: May 21, 2015, 09:35:36 AM by niineechan »
everyone
means
everyone
JKTroll48

Offline yuuri14

  • Silent Reader but when I'm hooked to it I'll comment, I'm currently living and working in Japan. はじめましてアバンユリかですよろしくおねがいします
  • Member+
  • Posts: 83
  • WMitsui, YuiParu, Paruru
I did not see that coming XD
airi and churi wow
I think they ended up in a wrong conclusion
by now.

thanks for the update 😘


[AKB48]
[Shimazaki Haruka/Paruru]
[YuiParu Pair]
[WMatsui Pair]
> I love reading books and Fan Fics as my past time.

Offline xerone914

  • Rena's Mole
  • Member
  • Posts: 27
  • my girlcrush JurinaRena || WMATSUI <3
update pleaaase~~
I've been reading your fic silently and I loooooove the WMATSUI & with Rena will graduate it gives me more emotions :'(

please updateee~~

thanks author-san

Offline The Ray

  • ~Life For WMATSUI~
  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 82
  • I just silent reader
Author-san, where are you ?  :frustrated:

I hope you will come back to continue this fic  :prayers: :pleeease:
~WMATSUI forever~


Offline Redyta_Sas

  • Member
  • Posts: 46
All i can say, is just
WWOOOOWWWWWW  :twothumbs

Please update soon 🙇💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗
I'M SORRY FOR MY BAD ENGLISH! ! ! ! !

Offline embee5442

  • Member+
  • Posts: 111
  • Bow to Renahyon-sama!
HEY AUTHOR-SAN!!!

WHEN IS THE NEXT UPDATE???!!!

ARE YOU DROPPING THIS FIC, ON HIATUS OR YOU'RE JUST TOO LAZY?

COME ON WE NEED UPDATE WE CAN'T WAIT NO MORE RAAAWRR!!!


 :( :( :(  :( :( :( :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic:  XD :P







Pssst...!! Press ctrl with ++++ NOW!




expect for new chap this week fellas~!! *wink wink wiggle wiggle squiggle squiggle chortle chortle ok stahp :cathappy:*
A silent user. A silent reader. A silent writer. A silent killer. Meh, whatever.


My List of Stories:

:roll: Short Shots of Lame Plots :poof:
:new!: Wait for Me (hiatus) :skull:
:note: Beats of Love (collab fic with Zhen the Annoying Monkey) :guitar:

JPHiP Radio (25/200 @ 128 kbs)     Now playing: Toe - Kodoku no Hatsumei