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baby blossom (mayuki,kojiyuu,atsumina and others) CHAPTER 6
« on: November 10, 2013, 04:20:27 PM »
new writer here~~~
its my first time using forums and writing so i dont know how to use it
and sorry for my english :cry:
this is only short but i will continue this


prologue



“ahh!!!,new day!!” yuko woke up from her sleep and goes down stairs where she saw her little sister prepairing breakfast.
“oha!”

“ohayou neechan”

“how’s your study yui do you think you can pass to our school?”

“of course neechan im not like you”

“hahaha sou da ne , how’s your trumpet do you think you can catch up with me~?” yuko said while turning on the tv

“daijoubu yo neechan”

head line news
the prodigy watanabe mayu from america will quit from music industry and show buisness
 



"why will you quit mayu" the american reporter ask

"i want to quit and have a normal life but a will not stop from loving music iwill continue this and someday i will come again here with a new mayu watanabe"



yuko turn off the tv and smirks

"daijoubu oneechan?"

"ah im f
« Last Edit: May 11, 2014, 08:26:16 PM by MayuxMatsuixMusic »
mayuyu and rena is <3


mayuki and mayurena is my fav <3

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Re: baby blossom ( mayuki, kojiyuu, atsumina and others)
« Reply #1 on: November 10, 2013, 06:46:55 PM »
kojiyuu :deco:
what relationship abt yuko and mayu
friend, rival or ex-girlfriend?
can't wait for next chapter XD

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Re: baby blossom ( mayuki, kojiyuu, atsumina and others)
« Reply #2 on: November 11, 2013, 12:54:41 AM »
Ooooo.... interesting prologue.

I wonder what will happen in this story  :panic:

Please update soon!

Anyways,  :welcome new writer!  :hip smile:

MAYUKI ~ YUKIRENA ~ ATSUMINA ~ KOJIYUU ~ TOMOTOMO♪

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Re: baby blossom ( mayuki, kojiyuu, atsumina and others)
« Reply #3 on: November 11, 2013, 10:24:01 AM »
  :welcome  :jphip: Hi My name Is Alex Garcia and normally I wouldn't be here putting up a comment but you look like you need a booster :) no worries about mistakes my friend :3 everyone makes mistakes  ;)  plus hey my native language is Spanish (Hola! como estas? me llamo alex ) and my second language is English and third is Japanese but I am a beginner in Japanese  so no worries you can do it my friend  :twothumbs  I am super exited about this story and cant wait to see what you have in store for us so good luck!  :) and hope to hear from you soon  :twothumbs
Spanish original name es mary es mi amor por leo dan:
Mari(mariko)es mi amor, solo con ella
vivo la felicidad yo se que nunca a nadie
mas podria amar, por que la quiero de
verdad por eso mary por favor dame tu
mano continuemos siempre asi
despues de todo que mas te puedo
pedir si soy feliz...muy feliz.
Si un dia me faltas tu que
Dios me ayude a morir ya que
no volvera a hacer en esta vida feliz
sin ti mari...sin ti mari...si estoy
viviendo por ti... 
--------<@
English ver dow originally name mary is my love by leo dan :
My love is Mari, just with her
I live in happiness
I know I will never again
fall in love with nobody, because I
feel a true love Because of that,
Mari, give me your hand we'll
forever continue this way After all,
what can I ask you more if I am happy...
very happy If one day I will miss you,
God help me to die ,
without you Mari...
If i live my life for you...  -----------<@

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Re: baby blossom ( mayuki, kojiyuu, atsumina and others)
« Reply #4 on: November 11, 2013, 11:01:29 AM »
Hm~ This is quite intriguing~ :) I look forward to see your next update!
Also, welcome~  :welcome :welcome :welcome
don't worry about english! Just enjoy writing~  :cathappy:

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Re: baby blossom ( mayuki, kojiyuu, atsumina and others)
« Reply #5 on: November 11, 2013, 11:23:08 AM »
Hi.... :)

Keep writing...
I'm bad in English too... :P

Wow.... this is the first time for me to read a fic without any single 'CAPS LOCK' in it. *being random*  :lol:

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Re: baby blossom ( mayuki, kojiyuu, atsumina and others)
« Reply #6 on: November 11, 2013, 11:39:33 AM »
Hello there :welcome
Interesting fic you got there
Don't worry about your English I think it's fine  :twothumbs (better than me LOL )
Waiting for your next update  :cow:

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Re: baby blossom ( mayuki, kojiyuu, atsumina and others)
« Reply #7 on: November 12, 2013, 07:58:55 AM »
HELLO!!! I LOLed on your avatar  :lol:

Looking forward!

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MAYUKI!

and WELCOME COMRADE! :welcome :jphip:
my hat is off. saluting.

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Re: baby blossom ( mayuki, kojiyuu, atsumina and others)
« Reply #8 on: November 17, 2013, 05:42:51 PM »
Mayuyu Quit!!!!!

interesting

continue ^_^

ganbatte!!!

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Re: baby blossom ( mayuki, kojiyuu, atsumina and others)
« Reply #9 on: November 17, 2013, 07:18:02 PM »
*appeared after detected kojiyuu* lol
Getting curious :3

Continue please~~ m(_ _)m

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Re: baby blossom ( mayuki, kojiyuu, atsumina and others)
« Reply #10 on: November 18, 2013, 03:35:20 AM »
Mayu is famouse??

Yuko and Yui aee sister

 Please update soon

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Re: baby blossom ( mayuki, kojiyuu, atsumina and others)
« Reply #11 on: November 18, 2013, 04:12:53 AM »
Another fic...

Erm... baby Blossom as in 'GIVE ME FIVE' band

Yeah... got Atsumina there....

I can't wait to see how the story is going to develop

Thank you for the lovely prologue

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Re: baby blossom
« Reply #12 on: November 18, 2013, 11:04:15 AM »
sorry  i cant reply bacause of my cosplays and studies T_T
and my heart is broken because of warota  :gyaaah: :fainted:

sorry if my english and my story is  not good im only new in everything
and thank you  or the comments it really touched me thank you very much!!!!! :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow:


CHAPTER 1



while yuko is going out of the house she saw kojiharu

"oha~!! nyan nyan~~~~"

"ohayou yuko"




>>at the school's gate<<



there they saw takamina

"takamina ohayou~~"

"ohayou haruna...are where's yuko?"

then suddenly "BOO!!!!"yuko surprised takamina from behind

"AHHHHHHHH!!!!!" takamina was surprised

“ohayou midget”  yuko showed her smile

“What did yo-“takamina was ready to attack yuko but yuko cut it

“did you convince her?”

“hmm not yet,she’s hard to get yuko,why don’t we  ask someone else”

“hmm wait I think about it ….”yuko showed her thinking pose

“no!!, I only want her and not someone else okay~~”

“then why me,you should be the one to convince her not me!!”

“datte sa mendoksai haha”

“it’s more troublesome for me!!”

“haha takamina calm down,I have a plan to convince her”

*DING DONG DING DUNG*

“ah yabbe!!” yuko shouted and run “hayyaku nyan nyan!!”

>>at the classroom<<

“*pant pant pant* ahh yokatta were not late”yuko said while panting hard

Right timing the homeroom walks in

While the teacher is discussing

“midget inform everyone to gather at lunch”yuko whispers

“MIDGET DATTO?!?!” takamina shouts

“takahashi-san  pls. go to the faculty room at lunch”the sensei said angry

“hai”

Yuko chuckeled

“yuko its your fault you have to treat me later for lunch”

“hahaha hai hai~~”

>>at lunch<<
“minna~~ I have an announcement tomorrow we will have a new member”yuko shouts

“ehh hontouni,nee yuko is she cute?” jurina asks

“hahaha suuuper cute!!”haruna pouts when yuko said that

Tomochin smirks”then who’s  that cute girl that can make someone jealous”

“it’s a secret I will introduce her to all of you tomorrow “

“What is her speacialty?”mariko asks

“you will know tomorrow”yuko grins

“and what will we do about convincing maeda-san”takamina said While walking towards their destination

“ah takamina your back,so how is your lecturing time?” miichan smirked

“ahh it is not good,dai tai its yuko’s fault,yuko my lunch you said you’ll treat me”

“haha here” yuko trows the bread to takamina

takamina catched it and opened it "so what *bites* are *munch* you guys discussing *munch munch*

"have manners takamina-san,well yuko-san said that we will have a new member tomorrow" sasshi said

"is that true yuko?"

'yeah!!,and i will take care of convincing maeda"

"ahh yokatta its so hard for me she always wont response about it"

"takamina-san im sorry im late"yukirin bows

"yukirin your here,for those who does not know her mariko,tomochin and i recruited her to be our drummer"

"ah kashiwagi-san"haruna said

"you know her nyan nyan?"

"well we are in the same class"

"ahh so that why, well that's what only what i want to say"

**DING DONG DING DUNG*

TBC



i know its short and you cant understand it but pls. bear with it
i think i need to dig a hole  :on speedy: :on speedy:







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Re: baby blossom
« Reply #13 on: November 18, 2013, 11:07:14 AM »
i just want to ask how cany you chaange the subject?
mayuyu and rena is <3


mayuki and mayurena is my fav <3

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Re: baby blossom
« Reply #14 on: November 19, 2013, 11:48:28 AM »
I smell some Mayuyu  :lol:
my hat is off. saluting.

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Re: baby blossom
« Reply #15 on: November 19, 2013, 12:54:03 PM »
i understand it :3

its good :3, i smell mayuki and kojiyuu o.o

pls update soon  :onionwhip:

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Re: baby blossom
« Reply #16 on: November 21, 2013, 06:57:25 AM »
>>at lunch<<
“minna~~ I have an announcement tomorrow we will have a new member”yuko shouts

“ehh hontouni,nee yuko is she cute?” jurina asks

“hahaha suuuper cute!!”haruna pouts when yuko said that

Tomochin smirks”then who’s  that cute girl that can make someone jealous”

“it’s a secret I will introduce her to all of you tomorrow “

“What is her speacialty?”mariko asks

“you will know tomorrow”yuko grins





I think it's mayu maybe....  :? , but it's really good. your english is better than mine.....
I think it's enough, see ya at your next update, sir... :thumbup
LalalalalalalalalalalalalalA

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Re: baby blossom
« Reply #17 on: December 03, 2013, 03:01:09 PM »
because my grades is low last quarter my parents banned me from using my OWN wifi


and because my exam got the highst grades they gave me my wifi

so

IM VERRY SORRY ICANT UPDATE ILL TRY MY HARD TO UPDA :kneelbow: :kneelbow:TE THIS
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Re: baby blossom
« Reply #18 on: December 03, 2013, 09:13:27 PM »
Thx for the update

So Yuki is the new member

I wonder how Mayu meet others

Cant wait for the next ch

Take your time.. I don't mind wating for this awsome fanfic

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Re: baby blossom
« Reply #19 on: December 16, 2013, 03:31:42 PM »
THE NEXT DAY



"it's nyan nyan's birthday!!,ahh should i give her a kiss? haha like she would agree with that >_<.well today is a special day, i will give her the best present

*knock knock knock*


"neechan there is a truck in the house beside us it seems there's a new neighborhood"

yuko gets out of the room "i will greet them later,please say to nyan nyan that she can go ahead,not to wait for me i have some things to do,arigatou~~" and goes down stairs and gets a slice of bread with a jam and goes out of the house


"what was onee-chan thinking... soyeba its haru-nee's birthday *smirk* i smell some something”


While yuko was running on the way to school she saw mariko
“mariko-sama!!!”

“oh yuko,youre early today whats up?”
“well today was nyan nyan’s birthday”yuko grins

“then what’s your plan?” mariko-sama smirked

“nothing just gonna skip class”

“oh~~,miichan and I has a present too for nyaro”

“souda regarding acchan what’s your plan yuko?,we tried our best but she really hard to get,I agree with takamina there are many lead guitarist everywhere why her”

“because I want this band to be the best for that I need also the best people and that’s our dream”yuko turned to a serious face
“ and we sacrified everything for this”

“well im sure that my present for nyan nyan is better than yours,bleh!!
:p” yuko turned again to her normal self”

then yuko's cellphone rings,when yuko view it,it is a skype message

"ah mariko-sama you can go ahead i have to answer a call"

"wakatta ja"

then yuko runs towards a park pick up her cell phone and calls some body

"ah moshi moshi rena come at the park"

>>at yuko and yui's home<<

*knock knock knock*

"hai~~~~" then yui opens the door "ah haru-nee"

"ohayou yui-chan"

"haru-nee oneechan got ahead she said she had something to do"

"ah sou desu ka,arigatou yui--chan ah souretou do you have a new neighbor hood"

"yeah but we don't greet them yet, ah before i forget wait here haru-nee"

"ok"yui goes upstairs

kojiharu goes to the shelf that has photo frames

"haha brings back memories"and continued to view it and saw a picture of her,yuko,yui and some girl" when will she come back?,it has been 4 years since i saw her even though we keep in  touch i really miss her"

"haru-nee!!!!!!"

"ah you're back yui-chan"

"haru-nee....... otanjubi omedetou!!!!!!" and hand her a mini box that has a ribbon

"ah you remember arigatou yui-chan!!"

"iie iie,haru-nee do you want to come to school together?,since oneechan got ahead I will take her place XD

“haha ii yo”
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“jaa haru-nee my way is over here,mate nee!!”

“un!,  mata nee yui-chan!!”

There kojiharu walks alone and saw a park and noticed yuko,when she was to go to yuko she saw a girl with a raven hair on her side, they were facing yuko’s cell phone that on haruna’s view they were taking a picture

“hmmp!! Today’s my birthday but all she do was to act lovey dovey with some girl!!”

>>at the park<<

Yuko was skyping with some girl on her cellphone beside her was rena that is also talking with the girl at the video call

“jaa bye bye”

“bye bye”

“do your best rena-chan!!!,yuko say to haru-nee otanjubi omedetou”

“ok ill tell her that” and yuko ends the video call

“jaa rena shall we go to school?”

“wakatta oshima-san”

“I told you to not to call me yuko Y-U-K-O, yuko da!!!”

“*giggle* you don’t have to be angry yuko-san~~!”

“there better!!!!”

“hahahaha” rena laughs “hahahaha” yuko laughs too

“iku yo or we’ll be late”

“yeah!!”

>>at school<<

“ohayou takamina!!”and pats takamina’s shoulder

“oh ohayou yuko”

“ah yuko what happened to haruna when she came to school her face is like pouting or mad or something”

“hmm I don’t know about that,well I think she just misses ‘her’”

“who’s that ‘her’?”

“ahhh it’s nothing”

“ah haruna also invited everyone to come to her house later to celebrate her birthday”

Then the homeroom teacher enters the classroom


TBC~~~

ill reply next time to your comments because my mom told me to sleep now













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mayuki and mayurena is my fav <3

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