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Title: A Bit Blind To Love - chap18 (AtsuMina) - 26/12/2011 [DROPPED]
Post by: Keichan ^_^ on January 18, 2011, 02:05:33 PM

Hello everyone ^_^ this is my first Takacchan fanfic....i'm usually one of the quiet ones who just read....but I decided to give it a go and come out of my shell a bit! Hope you enjoy this O_O;

CHAPTERS

Chapter 1 Below.
Chapter 2 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=27950.msg845181#msg845181)
Chapter 3 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=27950.msg845695#msg845695)
Chapter 4 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=27950.msg845972#msg845972)
Chapter 5 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=27950.msg847005#msg847005)
Chapter 6 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=27950.msg847998#msg847998)
Chapter 7 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=27950.msg848503#msg848503)
Chapter 8 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=27950.msg849578#msg849578)
Chapter 9 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=27950.msg850950#msg850950)
Chapter 10 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=27950.msg854685#msg854685)
Chapter 11 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=27950.msg857009#msg857009)
Chapter 12 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=27950.msg858577#msg858577)
Chapter 13 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=27950.msg869856#msg869856)
Chapter 14 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=27950.msg876280#msg876280)
Chapter 15 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=27950.msg886527#msg886527)
Chapter 16 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=27950.msg901015#msg901015)
Chapter 17 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=27950.msg964648#msg964648)
Chapter 18 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=27950.msg983808#msg983808)

A bit blind to love  :heart:

I love the smell of her hair. I can’t explain what it smells like, but every time she rests her head against me I just can’t help but enjoy the smell that comes from it. It makes me drowsy and tired. Or maybe I’m already tired. I just don’t know anymore. The warmth of the skin as it rests perfectly in the crescent of my neck area. Her breath gently seeps between the cracks of my clothes and against my bare chest underneath. It seems so perfect when she sleeps against me... I never want either of us to wake up as long as we can be together…

“TAKAMINA!!!!!”, Miichan screams as she jumps on top of us. Acchan violently flings her arms around as I jolt awake due to the pain of Miichan slapping my forehead.

“What? What? What?” My eyes blinking nonstop trying to absorb the brightness of the room.

“How dare you try and take my dearest wifey Acchan from me!!!” Miichan quickly pulls Acchan away from me and points her finger at me, glaring at me.

“What? Oh come on, are you serious? Acchan always sleeps on me!” I slowly get off the couch.

“Oh, I see, so once I move to team K you’ve been advancing in this affair!” Miichan begins to pout while cuddling Acchan tightly and gently rocking her in her arms.

“Egh…you can have her… I have to get back to work” I stick my tongue out at her as she turns and grins at me victoriously as I walk out of the room and back into the theatre. Acchan remains silent in MIichan’s arms and watches me as I slowly disappear.

(O_o)

As I walk back into the studio I am attacked by Mocchi. She begins to sniff me endlessly as she holds onto my little ears. I begin to squirm and attempt to jump around in order to escape from her grasp.

“LET ME GO!!!! LET ME GO!!!!” I begin to give up as she seems to have me tightly wrapped in her arms. I feel like a little mouse being strangled by a serpent. Suddenly I hear Mocchi scream and her arms evacuate from my body. I turn and find Acchan next to Mocchi pinching onto her arm. She slowly releases her fingers.

“Stop attacking Takamina”. Acchan looks at me and then quickly diverts her gaze away from me upon hearing Miichan running into the room.

“Acchannnnnnnn!!! You said you would wait for me to go to the toilet!!!”

“Sorry, Akimoto-sama saw me in the hallway and told me I better go to practice”

Miichan pouted at her and then quickly grabbed her arm.

“Fine. I won’t be angry, but you better have dinner with me!”

Acchan laughed and nodded in agreement. She turned and looked up at me and noticed that I quickly turned my head to avoid her gaze.

“How about we have a huge dinner with everyone! Let’s go out to karaoke!!!”

Miichan nodded excitedly. Yuko who was currently tightly wrapped around Haruna turned around straight away.

“Er…Karaoke sounds alright…Nyan Nyan we’ll go as well so we can sing a love duet together?”

Haruna turned and looked down at Yuko emotionlessly.

“No.”

Yuko eyes suddenly swelled up with tears, her lips pouted and she began pressing her face deeper inbetween Haruna’s breasts.

“But Nyan Nyan I love you and and I love the sound of your voice”

Haruna’s hand came down and slapped Yuko’s forehead.

“Stop being a pervert and get your head out of my cleavage!!!”

Yuko slowly turned her head up to look at her Nyan Nyan. Haruna looked down and was taken aback by Yuko’s intense puppy eyes.

“ergh! Fine I’ll go to karaoke with you but I won’t sing a duet with you!”

Yuko gently blushed and continued to hold onto her Nyan Nyan. As long as she went there with her that was all that mattered… the latter could be accomplished once she fed some alcohol into her…Yuko turned and looked at me.

“You’re coming as well aren’t you Takamina?”

Before I even had a chance to answer Mocchi grabbed onto my arm.

“OF COURSE SHE IS! My lovely takamina will serenade me with her beautiful voice!”

“Egh!! Let go Mocchi I’m not going to serenade you!!”

Everyone laughed at Mocchi and I and I bowed my head down in embarrassment. I looked up and noticed that the only person not laughing was Acchan. Instead
she was glaring at Mocchi intently. My attention suddenly shifted when I heard Yuko say my name.

“Takamina, I don’t think you have a choice. Even if you don’t want to come to karaoke I’m sure Mocchi will tie you up and bring you with her!”

I bowed my head down in defeat. There was nothing I could actually say in return. I had failed at life again….I lifted my head up and noticed Acchan pouting at me. I quickly removed Mocchi from my arm and clapped my hands together.

“Okay guys you’ve picked on me enough! We better start practice now or I won’t even let you guys out until we’ve got the routine down packed! And that means no karaoke!”

“Aww, come on little one don’t be so grumpy!” Mariko snickered.

“hmmph! I’m not being grumpy! I’m just trying to get practice started!”

The girls slowly began to move into positions for practice. I hope that they’ll become too tired to go out to karaoke….maybe a few of them might suddenly lose their voice for the night…

(O_o)

At the end of practice I quickly went into the change rooms and planned my escape. As most of the girl’s took a shower after practice I took this opportunity to grab my gear and evacuate to the safe haven of my home! I grabbed my bag and quickly tore out the door.

-Escape from the girls- Success!

“Argh!”

I felt as my body collided into another. Next thing I know I’m on top of her and my face is in between her breasts. I quickly push myself up and apologise.

“I’m so sorry I didn’t mean to bump into you!”

I opened my eyes to see who it was…

“….Ta..ka..mi..na…”

I quickly jumped off her and hugged tightly onto my bag. Fear was evidently showing on my face.

“Takamina let me feel you on top of me again!!!”

Mocchi grabbed relentlessly at the space between us, trying to get closer to me as her lips formed into a kiss and she began to slowly move towards me.

“LEAVE ME ALONE!!” I quickly jumped over her and sprinted down the hallway…

-Escape from Mocchi` SUCCESS!

As I walked out the front door I felt relieved despite my heavy breathing as I was trying to recover from my recent traumatic experience with Mocchi.

“..ergh why can’t she go after someone else…”

“Because you’re the only one she wants”

I jumped and quickly turned my head. Acchan was leaning against the door staring at me.

“Acchan what are you doing here?”

“Figured you’d try and runaway so I decided to wait out here after practice”

I bowed my head in shame. Am I really that easy to read… I looked up as I felt Acchan hold onto my hand.

“Come on!”

“Argh please stop I don’t want to go to karaoke”

“I’m not taking you there yet. We’re going later tonight, its only 5:30pm and we decided to go to karaoke at 7pm but I guess you weren’t listening”

“Oh….”

I looked down…I’m such an idiot…I could’ve just gone home normally and just have not come out for karaoke…

“Wait, Acchan where are you taking me?”

She stopped and stared at me.

“You don’t want to come with me?”

“It’s not that. I just wanted to know where we were going”

Acchan let go of my hand.

“I’m going back to my house, but if you don’t want to come its fine”

She began to walk away but I quickly grabbed her hand and walked next to her. She turned to look at me and I quickly smiled back. Words weren’t really needed at this moment. She understood that I was happy to go home with her. I watched her from the corner of my eye and noticed a red tinge appear on her cheeks. My heart suddenly skipped a beat.

(O_o)

As we arrived at her house we continued to hold hands as she opened her door with the other. She pulled me slowly into the house and pushed the door close behind us with a slight kick of her leg. We walked through her house and into her room. Although I’ve been here a lot of times previously, this time felt somewhat strange. She pushed me onto the bed and gently climbed on top of me, resting her head against my chest. She gently played with my fingers, tickling my palm until I let out a gentle laugh. She looked up and smiled before continuing. I grabbed onto her hand gently when the tickling became too much to bear. Lifting her hand up I slid my fingers in between hers. We lay there peacefully until the sound of her voice broke the silence.

“Minami…”

“Hmm?”

“Why don’t you ever stop Miichan from pulling me away from you?”

“Um…I don’t know, I guess since we’re all friends it doesn’t matter that much, and you know Miichan, when she wants something she isn’t gonna stop until she gets her way”

“Oh…”

“Why do you ask?”

An awkward silence filled the room. I wasn’t sure if Acchan didn’t hear my question or if she didn’t have an answer for me.

“Well… it just seems as though every time we’re together and someone comes into the room to take me you just seem to let them…argh I don’t know what I’m saying, never mind…”

Acchan squinted her eyes in frustration. Unable to address to me how she felt. Although I sensed that it was something serious to her I however let out a slight giggle due to the fact I felt that it was quite a childish matter. Acchan quickly pushed herself up so she was sitting on my stomach and began to play with my hands, swinging my arms all over the place in frustration of my laughter.

“Stop laughing! Egh I shouldn’t have brought it up!”

She suddenly let go of my arms and started moving off my stomach towards the end of the bed.

“Egh, I’m going outside”

I quickly lean forward and wrap my arms around her waist, pulling her back on top of me so she’s sitting on my thighs. Looking at her, I noticed a sad pout, her eyes diverting away from my stare.

“What’s wrong?”

“It’s nothing, I’m just thirsty”

As I felt her begin to wriggle out of my arms in annoyance of being with me I tightened my arms around her and rested my head against her chest.

“Please tell me what’s wrong. I can’t stand having a void between us.”

She wrapped her arms around my neck and rested her cheek against the top of my head.

“I just wish that you’d just protect me a bit more when I’m with you…I can’t explain it but when you walk away I feel depressed and when I find you, you’re always attached to Mocchi intimately.”

I quickly look up at her.

“Trust me Acchan, it’s not intimate at all…I’m being subtly molested by her and I try to get away from her but her grasp is too strong!”

I gently nudge my forehead into her chin.

“Lucky you always come to save me!”

Acchan giggled slightly and then suddenly paused and a sense of seriousness washed over her face. Out of the blue she hit the top of my head.

“Oww! What was that for?”

She looked down with an angry pout of her face.

“Why is it that I always save you from Mocchi and you never pull me away from anyone?”

“Well you seem to enjoy being with everyone who holds onto you!”

“hmmph, lame excuse! If you cared you would take me away from them!”

“Acchan, you beginning to make it sound like we’re dating and you’re the jealous girlfriend”

Acchan’s eyes widened and she began to fidget with my hair and shirt as her eyes began to stare aimlessly around the room.

“Well…well…well…argh!”

She pushed me down and quickly pulled my hands off her and darted out of the room. I lay silently on the bed staring at the ceiling…Does Acchan like me like she would a boyfriend? I slowly pushed myself up off the bed. I walk outside and find Acchan curled up of the couch hiding her face from me. I walk over and gently wrap my arms around her.

“Are you okay?”

She remained silent.

“Do you want to talk about it? Would you like me to leave?...”

She burrowed her head deeper, covering it with her arms.

“…I’ll take that as a yes?”

As my arms began to retract away from her, she slowly moved her head up to look at me, her eyes red and teary.

“You think I’m weird don’t you?...You don’t want to talk to me anymore”

She turned her head to the side and rests it against her arms. Silence filled the room as I stared her…I wasn’t sure how I felt…but seeing her like this I didn’t know what to do or how to act. Before I could respond, the sound of Acchan’s ringtone filled the silence of the room. She answered her phone whilst still turned away from me. I slowly got up to collect my bag from her room.

“Moshi Moshi, oh hi Miichan, I’m at home. Yeah I’ll be at karaoke. Just had a nap. Takamina? Argh I don’t know I’ll call her…okay. Bye.”

As I returned to the room, I saw the back of Acchan’s head bowed down.

“Miichan asked if you were going to karaoke… you don’t have to if you don’t want to.”

I frowned as I could hear the pain in Acchan’s voice as she spoke. I dropped my bag and walked up to the couch. My hand gently caressed her cheek and I
turned her face towards me. She was looking downwards…trying to hold back her tears. It was apparent in her voice that she felt as though she had lost me.

“Please don’t loo…”

Before she could continue my lips had already pressed against hers. They felt so soft, similar to marshmellow. Although at first it felt one-sided, soon enough I felt her lips press against mine. I felt as a shiver ran down my spine. However, it wasn’t like the ones I got when I felt Mocchi’s presence around me. Rather, I felt as though I had been electrified, my heart was beating out of my chest, I wondered if Acchan felt the same. My eyes were closed and I wondered if I opened them if I would be faced by shock, sadness, or anger. As I slowly opened my eyes I noticed that Acchan’s eyes were closed. As the kiss ended, her eyes opened and she looked into mine.

“Minami…”

I gently caressed her cheek with my fingers.

“I don’t know how I feel, but for some reason I felt as though I wanted to kiss you.”

I gently kissed her forehead. Her eyes closed once again before she slowly opened them to look up at me.

“We’ll work this out together, just give me time to process your feelings properly. I will respond to you once I know how I really feel.”

She nodded slowly and began to get up off the couch.

“Well, we should go to karaoke then” She smiled and began to walk towards the room. “They’ll be waiting for us and it’ll be fun.”

I picked up my bag and waited for her to return from the room. As she walked out I quickly grabbed her hand in mine. She stopped and stared at me.

“Minami, you don’t have to force yourself to try and be close to me because of what happened. I understand it’s hard for you to accept.”

I slide my fingers in between hers and quickly grinned at her.

“I know, but I always hold your hand so it feels weird when I don’t”

She blushed nervously and we continued to walk out of the house and made our way to karaoke.

(O_o)

When we arrived at karaoke most of the members had already arrived and Mariko and Miichan had begun singing a duet together. Miichan was standing on the seat screaming out her lyrics, whereas Mariko was standing in front of the screen with her hand in the air nodding her head to Miichan’s voice. The rest of the girls were either listening, gossiping in small groups, eating snacks, or playing drinking games. Miichan turned to look at us. Her arm rose and she quickly pointed her finger at us.

“Takamina, how dare you seduce my wife!” After a quick giggle she continued to sing.

Acchan held my hand tighter and smiled as we greeted everyone on our way through to the empty seating area next to Miichan. However, I was pulled backwards and Acchan turned to look at me. I began to yelp as I felt Mocchi nibbling at my ears. Acchan viciously pulled me back and pulled me hurriedly through as she glared back at Mocchi. Once we were seated Acchan began to ignore me. It was evident that she was frustrated with Mocchi’s advances on me. I quickly placed my hand on her thigh and gave it a gentle squeeze. She turned and looked at me, annoyance filled her eyes. I quickly bent forward and whispered into her ear.

“Thanks for saving me” I gently kissed her cheek before I moved back. Acchan’s face reddened as she placed a hand on top of mine. We continued to watch as Miichan and Mariko sang violently into the microphones. Before I knew it I felt someone push me off the seat. I turned quickly and noticed a slightly intoxicated Haruna behind me.

“Give us the microphones!!! Yuko and I are going to sing a duet!!!” She walked over me and grabbed at the air before falling down face planting in front of Mariko.

“NYAN NYAN!!” Yuko jumped over me and cradled a crying Haruna in her arms. Acchan quickly pulled me off the ground and checked me closely for scratches.

“Are you okay?”

“Yeah” I grinned at her.

“Let’s go outside for awhile” Acchan smiled and pulled me up with her. I followed behind her making sure that I was wary of Mocchi creeping behind me. I quickly jumped in between a few of the girls and darted out the door, closing it firmly behind me before I ran to catch up with Acchan. As I appeared next to her she quickly wrapped her arm around mine and rests her head on mine as we continue to walk. I guess normally she would rest it on my shoulder…but knowing how much shorter I am you would understand how ridiculous it would look if she bent over to rest it on my shoulder…We continued to walk out towards the exit when I heard her stomach grumble. I giggled slightly as she blushed. I grabbed onto her hand and began to walk quickly towards the exit.

“Come on! We have to get you some food!”

“Where are we going?” she laughed as she happily followed.

“I know a really good restaurant around here! It has a really good dessert selection so you’ll love it!”

(O_o)

As we sat down at a table in the restaurant Acchan looked around began to absorb her surroundings.

“How did you know about this place?”

“I came here with Haruna and Miichan when we were filming an episode of PON!”

“Oh…so you took them on a date here first…”

“hehehe not a date! Just had dinner here.”

“So is this a date? Or just dinner?”

“Hmm…whatever you want it to be…but maybe just dinner because I would take you somewhere else on a date”

Acchan blushed and bowed her head down before she looked back up at me.

“Where would you take me if we went on a date then?”

“Um…can’t tell you”

“Why not?”

“Well because if I were to take you on a date then it wouldn’t be exciting anymore.”

“What do you mean by “were to”? Aren’t you going to?” She pouted at me.

“er….well you know, I um…, er…” Acchan laughed at me as I began to stutter more.

“It’s okay I’m joking. But if you do decide that we are dating then you better take me on a date”

“Of course!” I guess on the inside I had already come to the conclusion that we were sort of a couple. However, I hadn’t formally asked her due to the fact that I just came to the realisation of how we both felt.

(O_o)

After dinner and some light chatting about everyday things we headed back to the karaoke bar. Inside however was a scene similar to what I imagined the aftermath of World War III would look like. The older girls who had been drinking were raging around throwing can at each other. Supposedly a drunken Meetan had kissed Haruna and Yuko was not letting her get away with it alive! However in the process Yuko had accidently jumped onto Mariko’s handbag and broken her iphone4 in which Mariko went berserk and began to prey on Yuko. Haruna was in the corner vomiting up her liver into the bin and Miichan had gone crazy because Haruna had accidently vomited on her when she was running to the bin. The rest of the younger girls were trying to pull the Yuko off Meetan, whereas Sayaka and Sae were attempting to pull Mariko off Yuko.

Acchan and I were standing at the front door wide-eyed. What do we do…in the end Acchan ran to pull a screaming Miichan to the toilet to get cleaned up. I
walked over and notified Yuko that her Nyan Nyan needed her help. Immediately Yuko turned around searching for her Nyan Nyan and ran to her once she had spotted her. Mariko was lifted by Sayaka and Sae and pulled to the side as Yukarin walked over to calm her down. Meetan however, I kept away from…she was currently surrounded by Mocchi and Sasshi…going over there would certainly be the end of me…Tomochin and Tomomi had left once the fight began and the rest of the younger girls had begun to laugh and gather their belongings to go home. After awhile of waiting Miichan and Acchan still hadn’t come back so I decided to go and check if they were alright.

 As I slowly pushed the door open I heard Miichan speaking to Acchan.

“So what is the go with you and Takamina? Have you told her how you feel?”

“Yeah…well I didn’t tell her specifically but you know she understands…”

“Did she react alright? Or did she freak out and run away?”

“I think at first she may have freaked out…but she came back and…um…she kissed me…”

“WHAT????? Oh my god! I knew she was an L!!! Now she’s going to try and kiss me as well!”

Acchan quickly slapped her.

“Oww!”

“Don’t you dare Miichan! It took forever for us to confess to each other…and she’s still unsure about us…”

“How could she be unsure she kissed you!”

“Well I think she only did it because I was crying…”

“She made you cry?”

“No! Just I was quite emotional…but she was nice about it…and she’s not acting different…”

“So when are you going to tell her how you really feel?”

“What do you mean?”

“Well when are you going to say “Aww Takamina, I have longed to bathe with your skin against mine” you know that sort of confession!”

Acchan hit her again but harder.

“Ouch!”

“You’re such a loser!”

“At least I’m not a pervert like you!”

“Egh…well I want her to figure out how she feels first…”

A smile suddenly appeared on my face and I quickly pushed into the bathroom.

“What’s taking you guys so long?” Acchan and Miichan both jumped and looked at each other hoping that I didn’t hear anything. Miichan quickly composed herself
and yelled at me.

“You try cleaning vomit out of your clothes and tell me how long it takes!!” I shrugged my shoulders and began to walk out the door.

“Well come out when you are done.”

Acchan quickly ran after me and clung to my arm tightly.

“Are you angry I was with her for so long?”

“Nope.” Acchan pouted sadly. “I was just worried something happened to you” Acchan quickly smiled again and kissed my cheek. I blushed and looked away.

“Anyway, we have two choices, the rest of the girls have begun to leave so we can either leave or go back and check that everyone is okay”

“OF COURSE YOU HAVE TO STAY!” Miichan was running up behind us and hit the back of my head. “I’ve been vomited on so now it’s your turn! and on top of that I’m hungry so we should go get food together!”

I turned and looked at Acchan who just smiled in agreement to the food idea. I shrugged and started walking back into the room. Most of the girl’s had left.
Seemed as though it was only Miichan, Acchan, Mariko, Yukarin, Sayaka, Sae, Mocchi and Sasshi left. We gathered the girls up and decided to go to a nearby Ramen store for noodles. Mocchi quickly grabbed onto one of my arms as I began to walk out of the karaoke club. Acchan who was close behind with Miichan quickly barged past grabbed onto my other arm. Mocchi looked across at Acchan and shrugged before snuggling closer against me. Acchan who seemed frustrated with my lack of effort to despatch Mocchi from my arm let go of me and began to walk ahead of me holding onto the Miichan. Miichan who felt quite victorious quickly turned around and stuck her tongue out at me.

(O_o)

As we arrived at the Ramen shop we were taken to a small quiet room. Mocchi pulled me towards one side of the table as Acchan ignored me and walked onto the other side with Miichan closely wrapped around her arm. I quickly flung Mocchi off my arm and walked around the table and sat next to Acchan and looked at her with a pleading look.  Acchan turned and looked at me, then quickly turned away, immediately starting a conversation with Miichan. Mocchi although devastated that I had moved away was quickly latched onto Sasshi for comfort.  I slipped my hand underneath the table and held onto her hand. Her cheeks slowly became red and she continued to pretend to ignore me. Her hand tightened around mine and slowly slipped her fingers in between mine as the waitress came to take our orders. My attention was then taken away by Sayaka.

“Takamina.”

“Ergh, yes Sayaka?”

“I heard that you are going to have a Mendol reunion show tomorrow”

“Oh…OH! Yeah I totally forgot about that! Miichan, we have that Mendol reunion show tomorrow”

Miichan turned and looked at me with her eyes wide open.

“I forgot about that!”

“Yeah so did I, Sayaka reminded me!”

“Haha lucky you remembered Sayaka because Takamina and I forgot!”

“No it was nothing! It’s just that I heard that Takamina and Hanako has to kiss tomorrow because the fans voted for it on the online polling!”

“ERGH!!!! What online poll! Who decided?” I felt as though I was going to die…suicide seemed like the best option.

“There was an online poll that was up since the fans were told of the reunion show”

I felt Acchan’s hand slip out of mine and I quickly turned to face her.

“Well I guess you have to do it then.”

“Acchan…” I slowly frowned. She turned away and continued to talk to Miichan who was looking over at me to see if I was okay. Sayaka tapped me on the shoulder.

“It’s alright! Don’t worry I’m sure you could just kiss her cheek and get away with it!”

“Good idea!” I began to smile instantly. However I still felt uneasy inside…Acchan had already begun to ignore me…this lasted for the remainder of the dinner.

(O_o)

After dinner all of us split up into our own groups and said our goodbyes before travelling home. I was walking home with Acchan and Sae…it was quite awkward as Acchan ignored me and wrapped her arm around Sae for the walk home. Lucky enough Sae lived close by and soon enough it was just myself and her. The silence was deadly and the fact she was walking quickly ahead of me wasn’t helping. I had to scurry in order for my little legs to keep up. Suddenly she stopped walking.

“Are you going to kiss her?”

I didn’t know what to say. I guess everything that had gone on today was a bit too much for me. However, I walked up to her and wrapped my arms around her as I rested my head against her back.

“I really don’t want to. But it’s hard when it’s going to be a live broadcast.”

“So-“ before she could say anything else I quickly continued.

“I love you Atsuko. Kissing her or not isn’t going to change how I feel towards you right now. I know I told you that it would take me time to figure out how I feel but I guess I’ve known the answer all along.”

There was a few moments silence before I felt her hands moved on top of mine around her waist.

“I really love you Minami. Please don’t hurt me. I was scared you would leave me when I told you how I felt. But now I’m just scared that someone else will take you from me.”

I slowly turned her around to face me. My hand slowly moved up to cup her cheek as we looked at each other.

“No one is going to take me from you. Even if they physically pull me away, my heart will always be yours.”

“Minami…” She slowly began to smile again. I took that chance to grab hold of her hand and started walking down the path.

“Come on let’s go home!”

~TBC~

Title: Re: A bit blind to love
Post by: alexiel17 on January 18, 2011, 03:19:11 PM

ei, Keichan ^_^... Thanks for the story (even if I haven't read it yet  :nervous)
Can't read this now, preoccupied with school this week... (gonna study for the test.... grrrr!!!! :mon study:)


(I'm quite jealous too bec. you'd post your story here while I've been here for a while and haven't even post a single fic... I'm soo embarrassed  :sweatdrop: hehehe.... :mon sweat:  )

Anyway, thanks again for the fic and pls. do post more stories here  :] :mon XD:  :mon dance:

Title: Re: A bit blind to love
Post by: sorakamiya on January 18, 2011, 06:30:25 PM

woooow..... more takachan fict  :twothumbs :twothumbs nice and i hope u would make the sequel to...  :thumbsup :thumbsup make another will u...  :yep: :yep: thanks

Title: Re: A bit blind to love
Post by: RenaChii on January 18, 2011, 09:55:25 PM

LOVE the KojiYuu moment~!!  XD  :twothumbs

Thank you for the fic~!!  :bow:  :thumbsup

Title: Re: A bit blind to love
Post by: dark-atrox on January 19, 2011, 04:12:11 PM

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recent traumatic experience with Mocchi

^this made me laughed..... :rofl: i remembered mocchi fangirling with Kai when she visited persona's dressing room, i think?  :?

Acchan was freaking cute here....she was very possessive and overly jealous here  XD XD XD

though my hapiness dropped a hundred levels when i saw this  :(

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~Fin~

Title: Re: A bit blind to love
Post by: riama on January 20, 2011, 08:00:22 AM

I love oneshot fics but I do want this with chapters. :grin:

Title: Re: A bit blind to love
Post by: Keichan ^_^ on January 21, 2011, 10:02:04 AM

 :mon huh2: ergh........thanks for the compliments! :mon sweat: I didn't expect people to like it enough to want it in chapters but if you really want me to continue I guess I could since I have time...but could you give me some form of direction of where you would like me to go with it? I can continue from where I ended or just do it from the next day. I guess i'll leave it to you guys to decide  :mon love:

Title: Re: A bit blind to love
Post by: sorakamiya on January 21, 2011, 12:48:14 PM

yeaaaaaay.... i'm happy u wanna continue the story...  :cow: :cow: please do continue....  :thumbsup

uhm... what about if u write about the next day. the day when takamina must do the kiss scene...  :yep: :yep:

Title: Re: A bit blind to love
Post by: alexiel17 on January 21, 2011, 04:41:34 PM

huhuhu... :mon angel: do u know how happy I am after reading your reply? I'm crying because I'm soo happy :wriggly:... (weird really but I like your story that's why I sooo want you to continue this pls... :mon pray2:  :] )  :grin:

(Just gonna imagine KaixRay together again... :luvluv1: Maybe I'm more on Kai/NamixRay shipper than Takaachan but even so, I'll still want to continue reading this fic of yours because I like Kojiyuu paring after all (I'm expecting more for this couple :3) :nervous ... :shy1: :nervous hehe... )

Sorry but I think I can't contribute much 'bout where your story might umm.. start again (It might not come out nice .. hehehe... )   :nervous

Anyway, pls. continue your fic :] (oh, can you write 'bout what sorakamiya said, write about the next day which is the "kiss" part... hehehe, I think I'm shipping the wrong pair here...  :sweatdrop: forgive me...  :nervous )

Thanks for thinking of continuing this fic... (hope more Kojiyuu interactions happen :]  :P2)

Title: Re: A bit blind to love
Post by: Keichan ^_^ on January 22, 2011, 01:28:31 PM

 :mon yell: Before I begin please don't yell at me!!! So I decided to start writing before I got a chance to read your replies....so now I will update a small chapter for the Takacchan lovers because I decided to try and fill in all the bits of the story that some people may wonder what happened in between... :mon curtain: please don't yell at me!  :pig gtfo: I will quickly go and continue the story!

Chapter Two

It’s currently 2am. I should be getting up in three hours and should’ve fallen asleep 3hours ago. Instead here I lay awake giggling and blushing nonstop. I ended walking Atsuko home, and she ended keeping me there. Her family was currently away and as I turned to leave she grabbed me back and began pouting at me. Telling me she has never been home alone and she was scared something would happen. I called my mum to notify her I was staying with Acchan for the night, it wasn’t until I hung up that I realised that the Maeda family had been overseas for the last few days. Hence, I had failed at life yet again. I am too gullible. However at this moment I really enjoy that fact that I was gullible. If I wasn’t I wouldn’t be here right now with her in my arms as we lay underneath the covers together talking about our time together since joining AKB48. Suddenly, my curiosity got ahead of me.

“Atsuko?”

“Yes Minami?”

“Um…er…well...”

Acchan began to laugh at my stuttering as I became quiet and began to blush.

“You must be about to ask something serious, perverted or embarrassing because you’re stuttering and blushing nonstop” She began to laugh louder.

“Ergh stop it!!” I quickly hid underneath the blankets as she began to laugh even louder at my behaviour.

“Geez Minami if you wanted to cuddle against my breasts you should’ve just asked!” she said as she continued to giggle. Realising what she said was true I immediately moved out of the blankets my eyes open in fear.

“No no no no no no no its not that!!” I was annoyed by her laughing at me and had my eyes squinted in frustration. She suddenly stopped realising how tense I seemed. Quickly she held me in her arms to comfort me, scared that I would leave her side.

“What is it then?”

“…”

She kissed my forehead gently. I looked up at her. Her eyes so soft, so beautiful. As we continued to look into each others’ eyes I noticed that my lack of verbal response made sadness sweep across her face. Pulling her closer into me, I felt as her head lay gently against my collar bone.

“I just wanted to know how long you’ve liked me this way. It’s just that I feel so stupid that I never realised how you felt.”

She giggled and moved her cheek against my collarbone, inhaling the scent of my body with a deep breath.

“I’ve liked you since I saw you at the auditions”

“Huh??” I looked down at her straight away as she laughed at my quick response. “What? What do you mean?”

She kissed my neck gently and I felt a shiver run down my spine.

“Well I’ve liked you since I saw you!” She smiled at me sweetly. “I was really shy at the time and most of the girls were loud and intimidating and I was sitting in the corner by myself and I felt as though I was the most nervous person in the room….and then you appeared next to me pacing around in a circle talking to yourself”

FLASHBACK

“Argh Takahashi Takahashi Takahashi why are you here? Well my mum told me to come! Do you always listen to your mum? Most of the time! And how has that worked out for you? Oh shut up brain! ARGHHHHHHHHHH!!!” Takamina scratched her head nonstop in frustration. She looked around the room at everyone else. Not only are most of the girls in the room girlier, cuter, prettier, and outgoing then her… most embarrassing of all…they were all taller than her. “I’m a failure to the female race…maybe I should go home….” As she began to walk towards the door she remembered her mums fighting words to her. ~Ganbatte Minami! When you come home we will celebrate your success with your favourite pork katsudon!!!!!!!~ Raising her little fist in the air she spoke out aloud “YES MUM I WILL BE HOME TO EAT KATSUDON!!!” Her face suddenly went pale, remembering where she was. Everyone in the room began to laugh as she curled up in a ball on the ground.

~Mission to become an idol, meet new friends and a normal human being…. ~ FAIL!

CURRENTLY

“What? You liked me because I embarrassed myself? Oh my god…I’m beginning to think you only like me because you felt sorry for me…” Takamina stared at the ceiling blankly, failure written across her face. Acchan giggled as she slowly moved up against Takamina and kissed her lips softly.

“No, I liked you because you were the most genuine and down-to-Earth person there”. Takamina began to blush whilst holding Acchan close against her. “And due to the fact that you were dressed like a hip hop dancer and looked so cute and manly!” Takamina’s face went back to one of pure lifelessness….she liked me because I looked like a boy...why does everyone think I’m a man…Her attention was suddenly diverted by the feeling of Acchan’s lips against hers.

“I know what you’re thinking! And it’s not that at all!”

“Huh?” Minami looked at Atsuko has she giggled lightly.

“I didn’t and still don’t think you are a man! You don’t have chest hair or an Adam’s apple. When I say manly I mean protective, caring, and sweet in a manly way. Like you act all modest about things, don’t giggle like a girl or expect people to call you beautiful everyday! And that’s what I like about you. I definitely know you aren’t a man, although you do lack breasts and you do look like a boy when you walk and dress up like Kai! However I think I’ve slept on your lap enough to know that you aren’t male down there…despite the fact I’ve never seen you naked because you refuse to bathe with us…but hopefully you will soon!”

Acchan smiled brightly as Takamina’s face was emotionless, or at least confused as to how to look. She was happy at the start...however as Acchan continued to speak she felt arrows shooting into her and 1T weights hitting her head. Acchan noticed this change and quickly snuggled in close to her Minami and gently whispered into her ear.

“I love you as you are no matter what other people say or how you feel about yourself”
Takamina cuddled Acchan closer.

“Mmm...”

“Bedtime?” Acchan gently moved so her head lay against Takamina’s collar bone again.

“Okay…goodnight Acchan”. She gently kissed Acchan’s forehead making her blush.

“Night Minami…” Snuggled closely in each others’ arms they slowly fell asleep, not wanting to wake up the next morning.

(O_o)

Takamina’s phone vibrated on the bedside table before it slowly began to play Zanzou by Flumpool. It was her 5am wake up alarm. She quickly moved to grab her phone and turn it off before it woke Acchan. However, rather than the alarm waking up her up, Acchan was startled awake by the feeling of Takamina moving away from underneath her.

“Minami…”

“Egh…” Takamina froze whilst beginning to move out of the bed and turned towards her Acchan with a sad expression of guilt. “Eek…sorry Acchan I didn’t mean to wake you”.

Acchan crawled across the bed and wrapped her arms around Takamina’s waist, resting her head on Takamina’s thigh.

“Where are you going?”

“I have to get up and get ready for the Mendol reunion show”

“What time is it?”

“5am…” Acchan suddenly shot up.

“Why are you getting up so early? Your conference isn’t until 11am”

“Well I have to go home and get changed and bathe”

“You can bathe here and you can borrow my clothes” Acchan smiled cheekily.

“Well I’ll have a bathe now” Takamina said straight away. She quickly got out of bed and began scurrying towards the bathroom knowing what may happen if she didn’t move out of the bed. She suddenly felt Acchan grab onto her arm… Damn it… caught… survival… unlikely….

“I’m coming too” Acchan was wide awake now holding tightly onto Takamina’s arm and now walking her towards the bathroom.

“WAIT WAIT WAIT!!!” Cried Takamina, Acchan turned and looked at her. “Ergh…you don’t have to bathe now you don’t start work until later” Takamina was trying to make any excuse to prevent Acchan from bathing with her…she wasn’t ready for this.

“Well you’ve woken me now so I’ll just get up early and maybe take the puppies out for a walk in the park after you leave”

“No no the puppies want to sleep like you do” Takamina gently waved her arm and shook her head as she spoke.

“Fine! I won’t take the puppies for a walk.” Takamina began to take a sigh of relief….however it didn’t last long at all. “I’ll just bathe with you and make you breakfast” Acchan tilted her head and smiled at Takamina enthusiastically. Takamina on the other hand had her eyes widened…looked similar to that of a lucky owl….a scary looking one….or maybe just a guy you just got kicked in the groan… Acchan pulled Takamina into the bathroom and turned around to turn on the water.

“Come on Takamina time to get undr…” Acchan turned and around and noticed the door was open and she was alone in the bathroom.

“…” Pushing the door wide open with both arms she glared out towards the bed where she found Takamina quickly packing her belongings into her bag. Takamina felt the aura in the room change quickly once she heard the door slam open…staring blankly at the wall in front of her and making no movement…hoping that despite the fact it would be impossible that she would camouflage into the room so Acchan couldn’t see her. Realising it would never come true Minami quickly lifted her bag over her shoulder and began sprinting towards the entrance of the house.

“MINAMI!!!!” Acchan quickly began to run after her. Takamina tripped over in the hallway whilst trying to stop herself from stepping on top of Acchan’s puppies which were parading around in the hallway. Acchan quickly caught onto her little captain’s leg and started dragging her back into the room.

“NOOOOOOOOOO!! NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!” Similar to a scene from a horror movie, Minami was reaching out for help screaming whilst Acchan who had an evil smirk stood over her and slowly dragged her down the hallway.

“No one can hear you…” Acchan’s words slowly killed Takamina on the inside…was this the end….

Once back in the room Acchan closed and locked the bedroom door and climbed up on top of Takamina who had ran out of energy from screaming and kicking and was now staring blankly at the ceiling like a patient on their death bed. Acchan moved into Takamina’s vision.

“You might be beautiful but right now you are definitely not an angel…” Acchan quickly hit her arm “Oww!” Takamina pouted as she rubbed her arm. However when looking back up noticed a puppy eyed Atsuko staring at her.

“Why is it so hard for you to bathe with me?”

“I…I…I don’t know it just is.” Takamina looked to the side, unwilling to look into Atsuko’s eyes anymore, she felt guilty for making her feel this way. Atsuko slowly began to move off Takamina.

“I see…” She turned away from her, sadness in her eyes. She got up and began to walk away towards the bed and Takamina slowly pushed herself up onto her elbows. “Go take your bath. I’ll go back to bed” She crawled onto the bed and faced away from Takamina. Feeling guilty Takamina quickly got up and made her way towards the girl in the bed. Crawling into the bed she lay behind the other girl and wrapped her arm around the other girl’s waist.

“Go take your bath, you’ll be late, don’t worry about me, I’m tired.”

Takamina didn’t listen and slowly whispered into the other girl’s ear.

“I’m sorry.” She gently kissed the other girls cheek. Pushing herself up to get out of bed she pulled the other girl with her.

“Minami…” She slowly followed the small figure in front of her. As they walked into the bathroom, Takamina slowly closed the door behind them.
After closing the door and turning off the water of the bathtub which was getting full Minami turned around and faced Atsuko who was staring at her blankly. Turning her head to the side she spoke softly whilst beginning to blush.

“We can give this ago…” Acchan face was covered in a stunned expression but quickly turned into a sweet smile as she continued to listen to her little captain. “HOWEVER!” Atsuko jumped back a bit after being startled by the quick change of tone. “We have to do it in a towel so we don’t see each others’….yeah you know what I mean” Takamina crossed her arms still looking to the side blushing like crazy. Acchan finally snapped back to reality and giggled gently, she moved forward and wrapped her arms around the other girls neck and kissed the other girl on the cheek.

“Okay let’s do this” Takamina turned and looked at the other girl….did I make the wrong decision, is this really okay, argh too late now…

“Okay you aren’t allowed to look as I get ready you stand over there!!!” Hiding in the corner turned away from the other girl Takamina quickly got undressed and wrapped a towel around herself.

“Are you ready yet? You get in first!” After hearing Atsuko climb into the bath Takamina quickly ran over and jumped in with her eyes closed. Her body was tense and her eyes remained closed….Damn it damn it damn it damn it damn it, what was I thinking….her heart was beating furiously until the gentle touch of Atsuko’s hand on her cheek and the gentle press of her lips made her calm back down. Upon slowly opening her eyes she slowly wrapped her arms around Atsuko’s waist….Her eyes shot open and she pushed herself away as Atsuko began to laugh.

“Argh!! You aren’t wearing a towel!!! You said-” She was cut off by Atsuko straight away.

“I never agreed to your rules!” Takamina was left wide-eyed as Atsuko continued to speak and giggle. “You looked so cute getting undressed in the corner! Your bum is so white compared to your legs! And you trotted over so cutely! And you look so beautiful right now when you had your eyes closed” Takamina’s head was exploding….she felt dizzy and looked up at the ceiling… She felt as Atsuko moved against her, the only thing separating them was her towel. Flustered and confused she was unable to move, or maybe just scared to move. Holding on to Takamina’s waist Atsuko gently kissed the other girls neck and then rested her head on the other girls collar bone.

“I love you”

Takamina looked down at the girl resting against her. It wasn’t as awkward as she thought it would be, it was still awkward for her, but somehow Atsuko had made it a little bit more comfortable. She always made her feel comfortable it’s just that she never imagined this to feel comfortable. Wrapped her arms around the other girls soft white skin she gently kissed the other girls forehead.

“I love you too”. A smile swept across the other girls face….in less than one day, her near impossible relationship with her best friend had blossomed into something she only felt was possible in her imagination. She never wanted this feeling to end….then she remembered, her girlfriend was meeting up with the beautiful Hanako for a reunion kiss…she looked up at the other girl who was lying back against the side of the bathtub with a small smile and her eyes closed. Would she leave me as quickly as she came to me…?

 :mon lurk: TBC?

Title: Re: A bit blind to love
Post by: D_Sphere on January 22, 2011, 02:35:05 PM

“NOOOOOOOOOO!! NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!” Similar to a scene from a horror movie, Minami was reaching out for help screaming whilst Acchan who had an evil smirk stood over her and slowly dragged her down the hallway.

I had a great laugh  :twothumbs
Thanks for the update.. :peace:
Will be waiting for more  :heart:

Title: Re: A bit blind to love
Post by: dark-atrox on January 22, 2011, 03:40:05 PM

LOl....I really like acchan here...she's somewhat like Ray, a perv!  :lol: :lol: :lol:

and i was thinking, when you say Hariko, do you mean Hanako?  :? :? :? Takigawa Hanako, the Ray or Hariko was her nickname or something,,,, :P

Title: Re: A bit blind to love
Post by: sorakamiya on January 22, 2011, 05:06:46 PM

 :cow: :cow: :cow: great chapter... i like it....  :thumbsup :thumbsup and this part....

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“NOOOOOOOOOO!! NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!” Similar to a scene from a horror movie, Minami was reaching out for help screaming whilst Acchan who had an evil smirk stood over her and slowly dragged her down the hallway.

it give me a loud laugh.....  :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: u really make this a kind of romantic comedy i guess.... that's great... i like it...  :yep: :yep: :yep:

please continue as fast as u can.... i'll be waiting...  :thumbsup

Title: Re: A bit blind to love
Post by: alexiel17 on January 22, 2011, 05:57:20 PM

Hmm, gonna quote 'bout dark-atrox post :]  :P

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when you say Hariko, do you mean Hanako?  :? :? :? Takigawa Hanako, the Ray or Hariko was her nickname or something,,,, :P

I was also wondering about that really :dunno: :] Is it really Takigawa Hanako san aka Ray? Just want to clear things up :]

Umm... but anyway, really glad that you've decided to continue this fic of yours :] Sorry, can't comment that much 'bout the 2nd chap cuz haven't read it yet :mon sweat: (as always  :grin: :] )

Anyways, pls continue this, Keichan ^_^ :]  :grin:

I like to quote this too because I found it cute :mon cute:

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by: Keichan ^_^
« on: January 21, 2011, 08:28:31 PM
:mon lurk: TBC?

haha :] I like using monkey emoticons on my replies too :]  :grin: :mon roll: hehe :]

Title: Re: A bit blind to love
Post by: bungal on January 22, 2011, 06:58:28 PM

This fic is absolutely hilarious. I'm glad that you decided to continue.  :twothumbs

Takamina and Acchan are both adorable. You got Taka's 'fail at life' characteristic perfectly.  Makes me want to laugh at her and hug her at the same time.

Since Taka is my oshimen, I support Takachaan, Takamina/Mocchi, Taka/Ray etc. but I have to say my OTP is:

Takamina/Katsudon!

I can just imagine Taka talking to herself and somehow loudly proclaming her love for Katsudon!  :)

Can't wait for the next chapter. If you decide to continue that is.

Title: Re: A bit blind to love
Post by: bou-j525 on January 22, 2011, 08:12:04 PM

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TBC?

Why did you put "?" at the end  :smhid

CORRECT VERSION:

"TBC soon"  XD

Title: Re: A bit blind to love
Post by: shahi on January 22, 2011, 08:53:49 PM

sweet takacchan is sooooo  :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:

Title: Re: A bit blind to love
Post by: Keichan ^_^ on January 23, 2011, 11:29:06 AM

First of all :mon sweat: thanks for dark-atrox for picking up my mistake ^_^ Arigato Gozaimasu!
As for now, I have decided to update what I currently have for you guys to read because I will be away for a few days (and due to the fact i'm brain dead as to what i should write next >_<;.
Since I updated a Takacchan Chapter last time, this time I have tried my best to please the Kojiyuu fans as well (Yes alexiel17 I'm mainly talking to you!)  :mon thumb:
Thank you to everyone who has been reading and commenting! I will try my best to keep you all entertained!  :mon yeah:

Chapter Three

So…I haven’t been home yet. I actually fell asleep in the bath tub with Atsuko and only woke up because I slid down the side of the bath tub underneath Atsuko and began drowning in the water…

Flashback

“Bo0o0ogrg0o0ogh0o”

“Mmm…”

“Bo0o0o0ogrgho0o0ogrgo0o0o0o!!!!!”

“Minami stop moving…” Atsuko said softly still half asleep, her head against the edge of the bath tub. Slowly she began to open her eyes…why am I so cold…
“Minami stop pok~…ARGHHHHHHHHHHHH MINAMI!!!” Jumping out of the bath tub quickly she pulled the tiny girl out of the water. “Minami!! Minami!! Are you okay????” The near dead girl was staring into space….practically unconscious however still bearing her fail at life expression…could this really be the last expression on her face when she dies? SLAP!...well now she gets a hand mark on her face for free….SLAP SLAP SLAP SLAP…make that a bruised up face? Shaking and slapping her nonstop Atsuko began to cry, if anyone else was in the room it would have looked like Atsuko was putting an end to her rather than saving her.

“Blurgh!” Water came pouring out of the tiny girls mouth.

“Minami” Atsuko quickly grabbed onto the small girl still crying. “I’m so so sorry”. Looking up at the girl and grabbing onto her shoulders she quickly began to check if she was actually alive. “Are you okay? Can you hear me? What’s your name? How old..”. Takamina placed her hand over Atsuko’s mouth. Slowly and half in a daze she began to speak slowly…

“I’m…. okay, I can hear… you, my name…. is Taka…hashi Minami and…”ARGHHHHHHHH!!!”

Takamina’s eyes widened at a sudden realisation.

“Why does my face hurt so much.” Gently she rubbed her cheek and looked up at Atsuko.

“Well I~”

“ARGH!!!!!!! WHY ARE YOU NAKED ONTOP OF ME!!!! OH MY GOD YOUR ARGHHHHHHHH!!!”

The tiny girl quickly moved from underneath and ran outside, quickly returning with a bathrobe to wrap around Atsuko.

“You’ll get cold! I told you a bath was a bad idea. What would happen if you got a cold!” The girl was pacing around the small area of the bathroom in circles and seemed to have forgotten that she had nearly died, too busy worrying about the other girl getting a cold. Atsuko quickly grabbed hold of the other girl tightly, hugging her and not wanting to let her go. The other girl not understanding why the girl was crying but knew if must’ve been something she did held onto her tightly and decided to comfort the girl.

“It’s okay Acchan, getting a cold isn’t that bad, I’ll look after you”. Hearing the other girls words Atsuko started to laugh as tears continued to pour out of her eyes.

“You’re so stupid…” the crying girl giggled.

“Egh…I failed again?” A confused looked appeared on the small girls face.

Currently…

I’m currently in the change rooms with Haruna and Miichan….well more like Riku and Kuu. After my near death experience and comforting my girlfriend, she had made me breakfast before I quickly made my way to the studio for the Mendol Reunion Show. Once I arrived I spent ten minutes being teased by Miichan and Haruna because they recognised the clothes I was wearing was actually Acchan’s….ergh why must I keep failing!! Well it doesn’t matter, I can smell her scent on me all day now….well that was what I thought until I had to wear my Persona outfit…and boy does it smell weird. Riku was practically ready whilst Kuu and myself were fixing up our wigs. Suddenly there was a knock on the door.

“Ergh…Who could that be?” I quickly asked.

“Maybe it’s the food man!!!” Screamed Miichan holding onto her stomach “I’m so hungry!! All I ate was this morning was two dozen gyoza and two gohan!” She slowly began pouting whilst looking at her tummy whilst Haruna and I stared at her in shock…. Snapping back into reality Haruna walked up to the door and opened it.

“Who is~” Haruna’s eyes opened in fear

“NYAN NYAAAAAAAAAAN!!!!!!!!” Turning my head all I could see was a Riku standing wide-eyed and frozen holding onto the door handle. Next thing I know I see a figure jump up on top of him and clinging desperately whilst rubbing her cheek against the other girls. “Feels so0o0o0o0o good, you face is so soft and….” With her legs tightly wrapped around the frozen girls waist she tilts backwards slightly and begins patting down the chest area of the other girl. “It’s…it’s all bound up….” Gently stroking her invisible moustache she slowly nods. Suddenly she holds onto the frozen girls and rests her head on the girls shoulder. “I knew my Nyan Nyan would never let anyone but me touch her breasts mainly those perverted co-stars she had to work with on Mendol.” Gently blushing she turns and looks into her Nyan Nyan’s wide eyes, forming her lips into a kissing pout she leans in towards the other girl. “Chuuuuuuuuuuuu” Haruna finally getting over the shock off seeing Yuko suddenly notices the squirrel’s lips slowly getting closer.

“ARGH!” Quickly she pushes the squirrel off her body and watches as the other girl lands heavily on the ground.

“ITAI!!” Slowly getting up and rubbing her bum she pouts as she attempts to grab hold of her Nyan Nyan for a comforting cuddle. “Nyan Nyan it hurts I need skinship to revitalise myself”. Holding onto Yuko’s head and keeping her at arms length distance whilst the other girls arms continue flailing  towards her Haruna glares at the squirrel.

“What are you doing here?”

“Well after our romantic night last night and you suddenly disappearing in the morning before I woke up I had to come and see if you were alright..” Yuko said while using her Puppy Eyes on her Nyan Nyan, she then quickly turns her head to the side forming an evil glare “…And to keep them perverted actors away from my Nyan Nyan”.

“ERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGH!!! You guys went home together last night!!!!” Miichan quickly squealed whilst pointing at the two at the door way.

“AND YOU SLEPT TOGETHER!!” I screamed whilst pointing at them as well.

Haruna’s eyes widened and she began to shake her head whilst waving a hand in front of her to signal that it didn’t happen at all. Yuko on the other hand had started to blush and had her hands on her cheek with her eyes closed slowly twisting her body remembering how nice it felt to be in the other girls arms the night before.

“Yes. My poor Nyan Nyan was so sick after Karaoke! It was up to me to protect her and look after her all night” Placing a hand on her forehead and looking up into the air she continued. “I even had to undress her from those vomit stained clothing and slowly wipe her MMHPH!” Haruna quickly placed her hand over Yuko’s mouth.

“NONE OF THAT HAPPENED I JUST PASSED OUT!” Removing Haruna’s hand Yuko quickly added.

“She couldn’t stop kissing me, she finally admitted her feelings for MMM!!!” Haruna covered Yuko’s mouth again.

“Shut up or I won’t walk to you again!! Get out!!! We have to get ready!!!”

“BUT NYAN NYAN I LO~” The door was slammed shut up locked. Haruna quickly turned around and lay against the door.

“Mwahahaha you hooked up with Yuko!!!” Miichan said as she giggled.

“Hahaha yeah yeah you~” I quickly stopped as I noticed Haruna’s death glare towards us.

“IF YOU GUYS SAVED ME IT WOULDN’T HAVE HAPPENED!!!”

“EEK!!!” We both began running around the room away from the angry girl.

(O_o)

 After a few minutes of playing around there was another knock on the door. Haruna turned to us straight away.

“You guys get it. I’m not gonna let her attack me again!” There was a second knock, this time a bit harder.Miichan walked over and opened the door.

“O! Long time no see!” Miichan stepped back from the door to let in our visitor. From around the corner walked in Kawano-san better known as Jiro. Nervous as always he was fidgeting with his hands in front of him as she continuously bowed at us, finally facing Haruna he slowly began to greet the co-star he actually began to have a crush on during the recording of Mendol.

“O-O-Ohayoooooooooooooooooooooooooooo” Next thing we know Kawano-san was on the ground. However he hadn’t fainted do to seeing Haruna…standing where he was 3 seconds ago was none other than the infamous Yuko who was currently glaring at the poor guy on the ground, fists clenched and ready to fit with him for her Nyan-Nyan’s love. However, to Yuko’s displeasure Haruna quickly ran over to the down fallen boy and turned at Yuko yelling at her.

“What are you doing!!! Yuko get out!!” Yuko pouted at her sadly.

“…but Nyan Nyan”

“GET OUT!” Sadness evident in her face Yuko quickly covered her face and ran out of the room. Of course without leaving a few words whilst bolting down the hallway…

“YOU WILL REGRET TAKING MY NYAN NYAN FROM ME!!!!!!”

Kawano-san open his eyes and fear upon hearing Yuko’s words.

“Ano… Is-is-is she okay?”

“Don’t worry about her, she’s just being annoying!” Haruna said whilst lifting the boy off the ground. Despite acting like she didn’t care, her eyes however let her down as they kept shifting towards the door way, she was beginning to regret yelling at Yuko. Miichan and I walked over and greeted Kawano with a quick handshake and a pat on the back. There was another knock on the door and Haruna quickly turned her head, however just as quickly she bowed her head down staring at the floor once realising it wasn’t Yuko.

“10minutes until we start recording!” said one of the crew members at our door.

“Oh okay we’re coming now!” I quickly answered.

(O_o)

As we all begin walking down the hallway towards the recording studio Miichan and I kept glancing at each other and then towards Haruna wondering if she was okay. Although she was smiling and joking around with Kawano, we knew her long enough to know that she was just acting happy. However before I could run ahead and make sure she was alright I was pulled backwards.

“ERGH!” Quickly I turned around. “Who the…” I couldn’t believe it… “Hanako…”

There she was standing in front of me, the girl who stole my first kiss….ok maybe the first person who stole my kiss. Anyway that doesn’t matter! She still looked beautiful, I hadn’t seen her for so long! She was dressed in her long white dress and just smiling at me.

“Long time no see Kai-kun!!!” She quickly grabbed hold of my cheeks. “You still look so cute dressed up as Kai!!”

“Erggggggggh!!” Quickly I took her hands off my cheek, “Argh so embarrassing!” I pouted slightly as everyone began to laugh at me. With my hands on my hips I stared at the ground…do I really fail as a woman? I suddenly felt Hanako wrap her arms around me hugging me.

“It’s okay Minami-chan! You don’t have to be embarrassed yet!” I felt a bit better until I realised the key word…’yet?’…what did she mean?... Then I remembered….that bloody viewer voted kiss!! My eyes closed and I felt the top half of my body collapse into Hanako’s arm, my head on her shoulder… someone save me!!!

After a few more seconds of self grieving we finally walked into the studio together….it was now or never….

(O_o)

Quote from: bou-j525 on January 22, 2011, 08:12:04 PM

"TBC soon"  XD

:mon lurk: TBC soon...(is that better bou-j525?)

Title: Re: A bit blind to love
Post by: alexiel17 on January 23, 2011, 01:15:48 PM

Keichan ^_^ san!!!!!!  :inlove: :mon inluv: :mon crazyinlove:(http://i35.servimg.com/u/f35/15/95/51/13/th/12-msn10.gif) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=27&u=15955113) (http://i35.servimg.com/u/f35/15/95/51/13/th/onion_13.gif) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=28&u=15955113)     (http://i35.servimg.com/u/f35/15/95/51/13/th/onion_15.gif) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=30&u=15955113)
(Just how many love emoticons do you want? hehe :grin:  :D (http://i35.servimg.com/u/f35/15/95/51/13/th/onion_16.gif) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=31&u=15955113))

I was like  :w00t: (Yes, happy that you'd made Kojiyuu :heart: (http://i35.servimg.com/u/f35/15/95/51/13/th/16847210.jpg) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=32&u=15955113)  in your fic, and you've mentioned my name too... :mon lovelaff: :wriggly: )
If I was an egg I'll so be doing this over and over again (http://i35.servimg.com/u/f35/15/95/51/13/th/egg-0110.gif) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=33&u=15955113)      hehe...  :)2
I'm soo blushing right now :shy1: :mon ignore:

Anyway, I want to say sorry because up until now, I haven't read your chapter 2 and then I saw that you'd post chapter 3 already (oh barnacles...  :P)  I'm sorry 'bout that, really :sweat: Gomen...  :nervous

Anyway, thanks soo much for updating you fic :mon XD: (you really are fast btw, w/c is good :yep:)
I'll read this today, promise... :hand:
 Thanks so much again Keichan ^_^ san!!  (http://i35.servimg.com/u/f35/15/95/51/13/th/mon_ga10.gif) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=34&u=15955113) :grin:

Title: Re: A bit blind to love
Post by: bou-j525 on January 23, 2011, 05:40:05 PM

^
LOL your reactions seriously make me laugh everytime, especially with the "egg" thing. No offense here by the way ;)

Quote

TBC soon...(is that better bou-j525?)

Way better!
Now let's wait to see how SuperAcchan will save Takamina :P

Title: Re: A bit blind to love
Post by: sorakamiya on January 23, 2011, 10:42:32 PM

woooooow..... so fast update...  :O greaaaaaaat.......  :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: to be honest i really like how the way u write the story.... maaaan....  :thumbsup :thumbsup :thumbsup i hope someone could make the dorama about this....  XD XD XD

owgh.... u'll go a few days...  :( means have to wait for another update.... please not so long....  :yep: :yep: :yep: i'll be waiting for the next scene n i guess there will be sudden appearing of acchan ....  8) 8) 8)

Title: Re: A bit blind to love
Post by: Keichan ^_^ on January 24, 2011, 01:02:40 AM

 :mon fu: Thank you everyone! And alexiel17 you crack me up!
bou-j525 and sorakamiya seems like you're both predicting whats going to happen ahaha. ( :mon cute: btw could you update your fics as well!!!) PWEASE!!!
Anyway I wrote this last night because I though I should type as much as I can to keep you all entertained before I disappear for a few days as you all seem to enjoy the quick updates and I feel bad if I don't update quickly now  :mon wind: Anyway here is another chapter for you all.... 

Chapter Four

The show was about to start. My heart was beating quickly. All I can hear is it thumping non-stop. The people in the crowd screaming seemed to be nearly non-existent to me. Suddenly I felt someone rest their hand on my thigh. I looked over at her.

“It’s gonna be okay” She said whilst smiling at me sweetly.

“Hanako I~”

“You don’t have to say anything. Just calm down. It’s just entertainment for the crowd. You’re an idol remember?”

However, it wasn’t that at all. I wasn’t scared of kissing Hanako. I was scared of Acchan getting hurt because I kiss Hanako. After seeing Acchan cry yesterday whilst confessing to me, then seeing her irritated when she found out about the viewer vote, then seeing her cry again this morning due to my near death experience, I just couldn’t stop worrying. Although I seem to lack the ability to read Acchan’s feelings correctly, I knew one thing, and that was she was head over heels in love with me. I can’t hurt her. Holding onto my shirt where my heart is, all I could imagine was the pain Acchan would feel seeing me kiss Hanako. After taking a deep breath I look up at the crowd. Recording starts in less than a minute. I’m seated on the couch next to Hanako and Miichan, Haruna was on the other side of Miichan, and the host was sitting on the other side of Haruna. The rest of the crew sat behind us. Kawano-san  was sitting right behind Haruna blushing wild. Staring back into the crowd a noticed our little squirrel in disguise in the second row of the crowd. She was glaring intently at Kawano. Dressed in a pair of air force one’s, baggy jeans, a white hoodie, a short styled black wig with ash colour highlights and a brown beanie she could really pass off as a boy, only if there was a Mendol 2, I’m sure Yuko would get hired. The only reason I recognised it was Yuko was because of her signature dimples, and she was glaring at Kawano. However the thing that gave it away the most was the fact she was holding a sign which read “Yuko for Riku, Jiro  is a Hentai!!” I glance over to see if Haruna has noticed, however she was too busy staring at her phone waiting to receive a message from Yuko. Miichan on the other hand was staring at the cake on the table at the side of the stage, drooling at the fact that she will soon be feasting on it. When the cameraman starting counting down we all began to stare up at the camera.

“ACTION!”

“Welcome everyone to the Mendol reunion show!” The crowd began to go wild as we all began bowing towards the host and waving at the camera. “Today with have the three handsome boys from Persona, the charismatic diva Ray, Jiro, Saeko, Marilyn, Sarukawa, and Katsuyuki with us today. So let’s start with Riku, better known as Haruna from AKB48 and No Sleeves. How are you today?” Although she was feeling too well at first a giant scream from someone in the crowd changed her mood dramatically.

“NYAN NYAN I LOVE YOU!!” Everyone in the studio began to laugh at the little “boy” standing in the second row who was madly waving his banner for the world to see. Upon seeing Yuko is disguise Haruna instantly let out a giggled and smile brightly at the host.

“I’m absolutely wonderful”. As the host continued to question us, I couldn’t help but notice Haruna glancing at her squirrel every now and then to make sure she was still there. After a few jokes about our time starring in the drama the host finally reached the topic I dreaded the most.

“Now as most of the fans know we did an online pole as to what people wanted to happen on today’s reunion show. In the end it seemed that you all wanted one thing!” I felt as a bead of sweat trickled down my cheek. “A REUNION KISS BETWEEN RAY AND KAI!!” The crowd in the studio went insane. “Now Hanako, we all know you’re married now, is your husband fine with this?”

“Haha yes yes he is. He knows that even if I do kiss Kai that I still love him more! And also due to the fact that Kai is a girl”

“How about you Kai? Are you ready?” My eyes widened. I forgot Hanako was married. Is it okay to kiss a married woman? Is Acchan watching?

“Ano…I ergh….well…um…yes ready! OSU!!” The crowd began to laugh at me, my face was extremely red.

“Okay then. Let’s see that kiss!!!” The crowd roared, the men screaming “DO IT!!!”, whilst the women started fangirling like crazy screaming “KAWAII!!!”. My eyes began moving nonstop, looking at the crowd then back to Hanako, then back to the host, suddenly someone in the crowd caught my eye. Standing at the doorway was Acchan…Why is she here? Is she here because she doesn’t want me to kiss her? I stared at her and watched as she lifted her little fists in front of her chest and smiled whilst mouthing words to me! I could read them clearing…

“I love you Minami, Ganbette!! Kiss her like you kiss your bowl before you eat katsudon!”

I gently blushed. She was here to support me. I smiled at her before turning to face Hanako. Forming my lips into a kiss I laid my lips onto of Hanako’s.

“…”

The crowd went silent…

I opened my eyes and noticed Hanako staring at  me wide eyed. Shit what did I do? Moving away I turned and looked at the host who had his mouth wide open. I looked and Haruna and Miichan who had moved away from me holding onto each other in fear. I turned and stared at Yuko who had dropped her sign and tilted her head with a disgusted expression, then I turned to Acchan hoping she was okay with me kissing Hanako….However…she was standing in the same position, but instead of staring at me she was staring at the ground face palming herself….I didn’t understand what I did wrong until I stared up at the monitor to see the instant replay…I had forgotten about my bad habit….FAILED AT LIFE AGAIN!

So what is my bad habit…well right before I eat I kiss the bowl containing mum’s pork katsudon. However right afterwards I instantly scoop a mouthful in and munch it down….imagine that whilst I was kissing Hanako… I had kissed her lips, slapped her face twice before biting onto her nose… I tried to explain it to everyone and naturally everyone laughed and teased me for a good 20minutes telling me to record my wedding kiss for them to broadcast on live tv! Ergh….why do I do this to myself. However, right after this awkward spectacle some important news was announced. This news however received mixed reactions from everyone at the studio. The host stood up from the couch and pointed out towards the side of the stage.

“Bring out the cake!!!!” Miichan instantly began salivating next to me, a giant grin on her face as the cake was slowly brought out. As the cake got closer all our eyes grew wider….however the only person who was wide-eyed in excitement was Miichan. Slowly turning my wide-eyed, open mouth expression towards Hanako I noticed she was smiling excitedly as well…

“Today with have the special pleasure of having a homemade cake made personally by Hanako herself!!” The crowd went wild whilst Haruna, the rest of the crew and I stared blankly at the poisonous blob of “cake” being pushed towards us. Playing her character, Hanako quickly grabbed onto my arm.

“Kai!!! I made you cake!!!” Turning towards the rest of the crew she quickly said. “It’s only for Kai!!” Most of the crew began nodding straight away, they were being saved. The only one who complained was Miichan.

“Erghhhhhhhhh!!! That’s so unfair!!! You should share the cake!!!” Miichan pouted whilst staring at the cake. Hanako instantly grinned at Miichan.

“Fine! Everyone can have cake, but not until our other crew member comes and sits with us!”

Everyone was confused and began looking at each other wondering who was missing. The crowd also started chatting amongst themselves. I turned and looked at Hanako.

“Who are we waiting for?” I tilted my head confused. Smiling brightly she looked at me and then back at the host. Looking over at the host I noticed a small nod. The host smiled and looked at all of us then out to the crowd.

“Yes, and here she is!” pointing towards the door way. We all looked over… before my eyes reached the door way, the host announced the name and my eyes widened.

“MAEDA ATSUKO!!!!!!!” The crowd was confused, as were we. Hanako on the other hand was clapping excitedly. Acchan slowly walked out from the door way and although the crowd was confused they began clapping and screaming excitedly from seeing Acchan who was smiling sweetly towards the crowd and waving whilst walking towards the stage. Hanako quickly ran up to Acchan and pulled her down onto the seat next to her. I glanced over and looked at Acchan confused as to what was going on. Acchan noticed my gaze and blushed gently.

“WAIT WAIT WAIT!!!” Haruna quickly yelled, the crowd quickly settled down. “What’s going on?”

The host quickly smiled and announced to everyone. “It has been decided that there will be a Mendol Movie!!!!!!!!!!” Right before the crowd went wild again you could hear the painful screams of a certain squirrel in the crowd.

“NOOOOOOOOOOo0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o!!!!” Looking up I instantly watched as the squirrel rose out of her seat in protest, however due to her small stature was quickly engulfed into the rest of the taller crowd who stood up cheering. All you could see of her now was her small fists in the air and a beanie bouncing up and down every now and then. As for us we were all quite excited! Although we didn’t know the plot or what roles we played. It was just exciting to know that we were working on a movie together. We all began cheering and Hanako had her arms wrapped around Acchan excitedly. Acchan just smiled seeing how excited we were. Although I was happy, I still felt a bit uneasy when seeing Acchan sitting there…most likely I had to be Ray’s love interest again and most likely due to viewer’s interest I had to kiss her again. But what was Acchan’s role in the drama? Did she have to kiss someone? I felt a bit jealous thinking she had to kiss either Jiro or Katsuyuki, maybe even Keigo if he had a role in the movie, I stared back into the crowd and began to understand how Yuko would have felt upon hearing the announcement. I turned back and looked at Miichan and Haruna. Haruna was being madly hugged by Kawano…he must have been extremely excited at the fact that he may be getting a kiss scene from his crush. Miichan on the other hand had begun feasting into the cake on the table…I was happy to see her sacrifice herself for the rest of us. Placing a hand on her shoulder I smiled at her brightly as she turned to return the smile with cake cream plastered all over her mouth.

“You want some? It’s nice!”

“Err….no I’m fine you’re the hungry one!” Smiling at me happily she quickly continued eating. The host was smiling into the camera and began to end the programme.

“Now today we have heard some exciting news and I guess that’s all you’re going to be told so far! Watch out for more news regarding the Mendol Movie which will be announced in the coming weeks once filming begins! As for now a big farewell from your favourite Mendol crew!!!”
We all looked up at the camera and smiled waving excitedly.

“SAYONARA!!!!”

“CUT!!!” The director yelled. Chatter among the crew continued as the director came over to give us pats on the back and handshakes. I looked over and noticed that Hanako still had a good hold of Acchan who was glancing over at me, smiling upon seeing me.

(O_o)

After the show ended and a few photos and autograph sessions for the crowd I sincerely apologised to Hanako who was laughing at me, just like everyone else in the crowd after the silence had broken after my awkward behaviour…

“Er…sorry…I didn’t mean to kiss you like that…” I looked down at the ground whilst blushing in embarrassment. Hanako chuckled whilst lifting my head up.

“When people tell people use the expression “to eat out someone’s face” to imply kiss I never imagined someone to actually eat out my face!” She continued to laugh loudly as I began to blush nonstop, stomping my little foot on the ground and putting my hands on the side of my head hoping she’d stop laughing.

“Ergh!!! Come on leave me alone.” Hanako stopped and hugged me.

“You’re so cute!!! Okay I’ll stop….Just don’t do that whilst we’re filming!!” She began to laugh again. Wrapping her arm around my shoulder she began to walk us back towards the rest of the crew. Miichan was excitedly introducing Acchan to the rest of the crew whilst Kawano was busily trying to flirt with Haruna who was too busy looking at the door expecting Yuko to bust in but never did.

After a few more minutes of catch up and introductions we all began walking back to the change rooms to get changed. Whilst walking down the hallway I felt a hand grab onto my arm and kiss being placed upon my cheek. I already knew who it was and pulled her closer to me.

“Are you angry?”

“Huh? No why would I be?”

“Mmm…”

“Are you angry?”

“Hehe how could I be angry at some eating another girls face!!” She began giggling. Slapping her hand gently and nudging her playfully.

“Ergh! Not you as well!!! You were the one who told me to do it!!!”

“No I didn’t I told you to kiss her like you kiss your bowl! I didn’t tell you to eat her like you eat katsudon!”

Turning my head to the side and scratching my head.

“Egh….so embarrassing!!!” She gently chuckled at me.

“It’s okay I still love you” I began to blush as we walked into change room. To our surprise however we were greeted by someone standing before us.

“Who are you?!!?!?!” Acchan quickly demanded to know as I began laughing. Turning around the other person began to announce.

“I am Riku’s gay love interest! Way better than Jiro or Katsuyuki!!!!!” I continued to laugh furiously as Acchan finally began to pick up on who it was and started giggled. “Oi!! Why are you laughing!!!” The little squirrel began pouting. “I will win my Nyan Nyan’s heart as both a male and female!” Lifted her fist in the air she began pumping it furiously. “GANBATTE GANBATTE GANBATTE WIN WIN WIN SKINSHIP SKINSHIP SKINSHIP!!!!” We continued laughing until we heard the others enter.

“Ergh what’s so funny?” Miichan asked whilst walking into the room stopping once noticing the little boy standing with his hand in the air. Haruna and Kawano entered together with Kawano holding onto trying to hold onto Haruna’s hand whilst asking her out on a date.

“DATE?!?!?!?! NEVER!!!!!!!!!!” We watched as Yuko pushed us to the side and quickly pushed Kawano-san away from Haruna. “Stay away from my girlfriend” she growled towards him.

“G-g-girlfriend????” confused he looked at the boy and then back to Haruna. “You have a boyfriend already???” Looking absolutely frustrated Haruna hit Kawano on the arm for being stupid and then grabbed the squirrel pulling the beanie off her head.

“It’s Yuko!” The squirrel quickly wrapped her arms around the girl and pointed at her threat.

“You keep your hands away from my Nyan Nyan you Hentai!” Although Haruna was annoyed with Yuko for acting the way she was towards Kawano, she was happy deep down inside that someone was so protective of her. However…she wished it was a guy not a perverted little girl. Looking down she hit Yuko on the head.

“Itai!” Yuko pouted looking up at her Nyan Nyan.

“Both of you get out! I have to get changed!” Yuko held onto Haruna.

“I can stay I’ve seen you half naked before!!” Blushing furiously she began pushing both of them out of the room and locked the door!

“Okay sorry guys we can get~” Turning around to face everyone else she noticed that the others had already gotten changed and left. Noticing a note stuck on the mirror she slowly read it. You’re busy with your two lovers so we’ve gone to the Takoyaki shop to eat! Come once you choose who you’re dating! “ERGH!!!!”

Title: Re: A bit blind to love (Updated:Chapter 4 ^_^ sorry will be away for a few days)
Post by: bou-j525 on January 24, 2011, 03:49:27 AM

EH????? ALREADY AN UPDATE?!?? You're fast!  :w00t: THANK  :w00t: I LOVE YOU  :w00t:
LOL Takamina, seriously, talking about katsudon wasn't the best idea from Acchan XD I can't wait to see what role she will get...I bet it will be Ray's rival or something like that XD Or maybe she will just date a random guy and make Taka jealous XD And lol@Yuko too   :rofl:

And my update will arrive until the end of the week. I finish the chapter, but I'm already working on the next one which is pretty long, so sorry about that!

Title: Re: A bit blind to love (Updated:Chapter 4 ^_^ sorry will be away for a few days)
Post by: dark-atrox on January 24, 2011, 06:54:21 AM

I was so depressed about Hanako being married to that nishima guy.... :catglare: :catglare: :catglare:

nice update, and lots of hilarity!  :lol: :lol: :lol: i just hope there's no clashing between acchan and Ray here (I'm RayxKai worshiper too) thought it would be hilarious seeing them fight over Kai again and again and again..... :twisted:

Title: Re: A bit blind to love (Updated:Chapter 4 ^_^ sorry will be away for a few days)
Post by: RenaChii on January 24, 2011, 09:12:04 AM

KojiYuu SO CUTE~!! KAWAII~!!

Title: Re: A bit blind to love
Post by: sorakamiya on January 25, 2011, 08:35:14 PM

woooowwwww.... you are so great keichan....  XD XD XD i really like the fast update and interesting story.... please keep updat as fast as you can...  :thumbsup :thumbsup this story getting excited....  :w00t: :w00t: :w00t:

by the way about my fanfict i got stuck to continue...  :banghead: :banghead: so i try to make a oneshot but i'll try to update my other FF as soon as i can...  :thumbsup

Title: Re: A bit blind to love
Post by: Keichan ^_^ on January 26, 2011, 04:36:49 AM

 :mon XD: RAWR!!! I am back! Bringing with me a new chapter for you guys to read! This time I think I will space it out properly ahaha since all the other times I'm too lazy... :mon pick:
 :mon sweat: Hehe... Anyway! I feel like it takes me long enough to just write the events of a day! Haha if you guys prefer me to write in a different style let me know because I don't want you guys to get bored!  :mon cry: jk! Anyway let me know what you guys want to happen and I will try to include it in the next few chapters! As for now its a public holiday so I shall scoot away and spend some time with my friends!


Chapter Five
We had just gotten changed and are currently walking down the path towards the Takoyaki store down the road. Haruna, Miichan and I always come here together when we feel like Takoyaki after filming PON! The reason we enjoy going to this shop is because it is owned by one of our fans called Kentaro. Kentaro is around 50 years old and is a jolly fat man with a beard, quite similar to Santa Claus. He and his wife enjoy having us there as they believe we bring with us a string of customers in the form of spying fans. Everytime we go there Kentaro and his wife sing to us whilst making our food! Miichan usually joins in as well pretending that she’s an employee. Haruna and I however quickly eat whilst Miichan sings as we both know once she sits down to eat we wouldn’t get much to eat. This was the first time Atsuko has ever come here. She slowly walks in behind us holding onto my arm.

“SANTA CLAUS!!!!” yells Miichan. From around the corner we could hear Kentaro’s footsteps quickly approaching, he bounces around the corner in front of us holding onto a wooden spoon.

“MIICHAN! TAKAMINA!!! HARU…..” Walking a bit closer towards us, he quickly moves past Miichan and tries to peer over my shoulder to see who was hiding behind me gripping tightly onto my arm. “Hello to the little shy lady behind Takamina with her head down. May you be Takamina’s girlfriend?” My eyes widen and my mouth drops, how could he ask such a question in public!!! I look past his shoulder at a laughing Miichan. From behind my back I can head a soft giggle from Acchan before I feel her nose move against my shoulder. She slowly peers over my shoulder at Kentaro and smiles.

“Ohayo gozaimasu, Maeda Atsuko desu” she said softly before nodding.

“ACCHAN!!!!” Kentaro screams, quickly moving me out of the way he grabs onto Atsuko’s hand and shakes it nonstop. “Kawaii!!!” tears start running down his cheeks, the jolly fat man was indeed jolly and fat right now. Pulling Atsuko behind him he quickly moves inside and seats her at the table. “Shinobu!!! Your oshimen is here!!!” Out of nowhere Kentaro’s wife appears and begins crying and shaking Atsuko’s hand, unable to even speak she starts moving her mouth as if speaking. Acchan happily smiles and nods her head.
“Sit down girls, we’ll bring food straight away!” Shinobu finally says after wiping her tears away. As Miichan and I begin to sit down Miichan quickly turns and begins to speak with me.

“Ergh Takamina you better watch out now! Your girlfriend is hot property!” Winking right afterwards. Acchan who is sitting beside me gently blushes, as for me…my face looked like a tomato.

“Wh-wh-what are you going on about!” quickly crossing my arms and looking down at the table. Upon hearing my words Acchan begins to pout at me and shifts across the seat away from me. Noticing Acchan’s movements I quickly turn to look at her and instantly moves closer to her. Gently pushing me away and sadly pouts at me.

“Don’t come near me, I’m nothing to you” Moving in closer and grabbing hold of her hand I quickly respond.

“Acchan you mean everything to me”. With her head turned away from me I noticed a red tinge appearing on her cheeks.

“HA!!! I heard that one!” Miichan says whilst pointing at me, turning way immediately with her arms crossed she continues “Fine! I understand! I’m that third wheel nobody wants!” However before I could respond I hear another voice approaching from behind.

“I want you!” We all turn and notice Haruna walking in holding onto her bag smiling. She quickly sits down next to Miichan and hugs her tightly. “Don’t be sad I’m here so you won’t be a third wheel!” Miichan smiles and hugs her back.

“Yeah!” However she suddenly stops smiling and begins looking around behind Haruna.

“What are you looking at” Haruna looks at herself for awhile thinking there was a bug on her. Acchan understanding what Miichan was doing quickly comments.

“Where’s Yuko!” Haruna looks up and nervously smiles…

“Well…”

Flashback

“Ergh!!!” Putting down the piece of paper Haruna quickly gets changed. “I can’t believe they left without me….” Unlocking the door she pauses before opening the door. Deep in thought she thinks about the consequences of opening the door. Gently opening the door she peers through the crack of the door. There she sees Yuko screaming at Kawano. “Er….” Closing the door immediately she blinks a few times and begins to slowly open the door again. Looking through again she notices Kawano pointing at Yuko and complaining about Yuko dressing up as a guy. Closing the door again and leaning against it Haruna sighs deeply. “How am I going to get out of here…” Looking up she suddenly smiles.

Currently…

“You climbed out the window?” I say.

“Mmmhmm”

“Isn’t that a bit dangerous?” Miichan asks. Putting her finger on her lower lip and tilting her head to the side in thought she then replies.

“Hmm…I guess I figured that it was safer than walking outside and past the two of them…I wouldn’t be here if I walked out the door.”
We all nodded. “Mmm…”

“Food is ready!!!” Kentaro and Shinobu approach us with three giant plates of Takoyaki whilst Miichan quickly turns her attention to the food and begins to drool excessively. Acchan hugs my arm close against her body as she stares at the food being placed on the table.

“Looks yummy” she says before smiling brightly at me.

“Mmm! It does doesn’t it!” I say whilst smiling back at her. Haruna and Miichan smile at us whispering gently.

“So they are finally together aye?” asks Haruna

“Yep, took awhile for stupid Takamina though”. They both begin giggling amongst themselves.

“Okay, what should we sing for you girls today?” asks Kentaro after he places the last plate on the table.

“AITAKATTA!” Yells Miichan excitedly as she jumps out of her seat and joins them.

As we begin eating we watch as Miichan, Kentaro and Shinobu begin to sing and dance for us. I look over at Acchan as she smiles brightly and gently giggles. I lift my hand up and gently wipe the sauce off the corner of her mouth. She turns and stares at me, a smile slowly appears on her face as her cheeks begin to redden. She gently nudges into my arm before picking up a piece of Takoyaki.
“Aaaaa!!” She waits for me to open my mouth. Opening my mouth she pops the piece of Takoyaki into my mouth. Munching it down I can’t stop my heart from beating quickly. This girl has a spell over me.

(O_o)

 After a good hour of eating, singing and gossiping we decide to go clothes shopping at the mall a few blocks away. After paying for the food we wave our goodbyes to Kentaro and Shinobu before we begin walking towards the mall. Acchan clung close against me whilst Miichan clung close to Haruna. However before we even made it 10meters down the path Yuko appeared clinging onto Haruna’s arm.

“ARGH!!! WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!?!?!” Haruna screamed trying to fling Yuko off her arm. Yuko who was holding on tightly still dressed as a boy turned towards Haruna and quickly kissed her. Haruna stood frozen staring at Yuko blushing furiously….and furious she became and she slapped Yuko’s forehead nonstop whilst still blushing. Taking this opportunity Yuko quickly wrapped her arms around her Nyan Nyan’s waist holding her close. Staring up at the other girl who was about to push her away again she said in a serious voice.

“I can’t let you leave me again because everytime you do I die a little bit more on the inside.” Looking down at her squirrel a soft complexion appeared on Haruna’s face. She had never seen Yuko so serious. She was blushing, her heart was pounding, and for the first time it was not due to embarrassment or anger.

“Yuko…” Pulling her Nyan Nyan closer, the squirrel got onto her tippy toes and placed a kiss gently on the other girls lips. Startled the other girl stepped back and turned her face. Breathing heavily she turned and looked back at the smaller girl. Miichan, Acchan and I had moved away and were now watching the two girls in awe. Hoping that for once, Haruna may respond to Yuko’s heart-felt feelings. As they both stared into each other’s eyes Yuko finally smiled and broke the silence. Looking down and moving away she said softly.
“I know that you may not feel the same way towards me…and I use to think that it wouldn’t hurt to try…but right now it does…” Looking to the side she sighed deeply before she looked back up at her Nyan Nyan smiling. “I’ve placed my heart in your hands, I know you need time to think it over and I am willing to wait for eternity for you to decide because I know I could never love anyone else but you” Smiling brightly and stretching her arms behind her head she said “You can keep it or give it back to me, please just don’t throw it away.” Placing her hands in her jean pockets she turned away and began to walk away leaving Haruna frozen and staring silently at the squirrel’s back which is slowly getting farther away from her. Acchan grabbed onto my hand tightly, she was thinking about how she could’ve been in a similar position as Yuko, or even worse if I ran away in fear. Miichan on the other hand became frustrated and pushed Haruna who quickly turned around.

“What are you doing Miichan!”

“What am I doing? What are you doing! You love her don’t you? Why are you letting her get away!” Miichan yelled as Haruna turned her head to the side in uncertainty, confused about how she felt. “Stop pretending you don’t care about Yuko as much as she cares for you! You’re just hurting the both of you!” Looking up at Miichan Haruna quickly turned and ran after Yuko.

Running down the path and around the corner she caught sight of her squirrel.

“YUKO!” Slowing down, however continuing to walk towards the other girl who had stopped upon hearing her name, she could feel her heart beating out of her chest. The other girl slowly turned around tears which had been streaming down her cheeks had stopped when she heard her Nyan Nyan’s voice. Looking at the taller girl approaching her she wiped the tears away with the sleeves of her white hoodie. Smiling and pretending she was okay she began to speak.

“Ergh Nyan Nyan what are you doing? I accidently bumped into a pole it hurt but I’m o~” She couldn’t speak anymore. Her wide red eyes were slowly closing. Her heart wasn’t aching like it was seconds ago. Instead it was beating steadily. Her body was warm and her cheeks were red. Her lips…were perfect. Opening her eyes and slowly pulling away from the taller girl she looked up.

“Nyan Nyan…” The other girl smiled back at her before grabbing her hand and pulling her back towards the rest of the group.

“Come on! We can’t waste any more time can we.” Smiling brightly the smaller girl quickened her step so she was walking next to the taller girl. Turning to look at her princess she felt as the other girls arm wrapped around hers. The other girl turned and stared at her. “If you ever hurt me I won’t talk to you ever again” Turning her head away straight away.

“I could never hurt you I love you too much!” She said whilst smiling brightly at her Nyan Nyan. A red tinge appeared on the other girls face immediately.

(O_o)

“Do you think they are alright?” I asked Miichan.

“I hope so…”

“You shouldn’t have yelled at her Miichan” Acchan said softly whilst holding my arm tightly.

“Ergh…Oh come on Acchan, without that little push she wouldn’t have went after her!”

“Yeah but still, what if Haruna doesn’t love her the same way!”

There was a moments silence. We were all staring at the ground thinking of the possibilities. Looking up I smiled remembering Haruna’s subtle actions during our Mendol reunion.

“I’m sure everything will be okay” Acchan and Miichan both turned and looked at me.

“How do you know?” Acchan asked. Turning to her I smiled at her.

“Because Haruna’s like me, we both hide our feelings because we’re scared of getting hurt. We don’t know how we really feel until something triggers us to look deeper. However if the person we love confesses and is hurt we finally realise how we feel and will respond to them immediately.” Blushing at me, Acchan quickly nudges me.

“Stop trying to act all sweet and cool!” She giggled

“Ergh! Aren’t I always sweet and cool?” I say whilst pretending to pout at her before I begin to giggle.

“URK!!!” Miichan pretends vomit. “You guys are too mushy!!” Acchan and I turn and begin to laugh at Miichan who joins in. Noticing to figures moving towards us I quickly turn and look, smiling instantly.

“They’re back!” Acchan and Miichan turn and look at the Squirrel and her Nyan Nyan walking happily towards us.

“ERGHHHHHHHHH….” Miichan beings to pout. “NOW I’M A MASSIVE THIRD WHEEL!” We all begin laughing at her before I feel Acchan let go of my arm. She quickly grabs onto Miichan’s arm and smiles back at me.

“No way! Takamina is definitely the third wheel!” My mouth drops open as they begin to run down the path laughing and leaving me behind. I close my mouth and quickly I run after them.

“Hey wait! That’s not fair!”

(O_o)

Arriving at the mall I was walking behind the two couples pouting.

“What are we shopping for?” I asked pretending I didn’t care that Acchan was wrapped around Miichan’s arm instead of mine. Miichan turned and looked at me smirking.

“Well I want to see Acchan in sexy underwear so let’s go bra shopping!” Miichan said whilst smirking at me and nudging at Acchan who began to giggle. I felt the nerve above my right eyebrow begin to twitch when Acchan suddenly nodded in agreement. My mouth dropped open. I felt the space around me darken slowly….it was like one of them scenes you see whilst reading manga where the picture is angled downwards and I’m in the spotlight staring at the ground with the word failure written above my head and darkness around me.

“O0o0o0o0o underwear shopping! Nyan Nyan I’ll watch you try bra’s on!” Yuko said whilst her eyes began gleaming with stars.

“Hentai!” Haruna said whilst slapping Yuko’s forehead. Yuko just giggled and smiled whilst rubbing her forehead.

“Come on!” Miichan said whilst walking with Acchan towards the bra shop. Haruna and Yuko followed as I slowly dragged my legs with my head down looking at the ground pouting. However right as we began entering the bra shop I felt a serpent wrap around me. My eyes open in fear…not only am I small as a mouse….I’m practically gonna die like one as well! EATEN ALIVE!!! The snake was sniffing me as I began squealing and squirming in its tight grip.

“Ta…ka…mi…na….” GLOMP!

“Argh!!!” I screamed making the girls turn around to look at me. Mocchi was wrapped around me tightly nibbling onto my ear. Sashihara ran up behind Mocchi breathless and panting nonstop. Once Mocchi had seen me from afar she had dropped all the shopping bags and begun sprinting towards me leaving Sashihara to quickly grab their shopping bags and run after her. Acchan who was glaring at the girl from Miichan’s side had quickly let go of Miichan’s arm and begun stomping over like a girl on a mission! Pinching onto Mocchi’s cheek like she was popping metal bubble wrap she glared intently at the girl who was on top of me.

“WAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!!!!!” Letting go off me and stepping backwards she rubbed her cheek furiously once Acchan let go. Looking up and prepared to yelled at Acchan for pinching her so hard she suddenly stopped in the process and started bowing apologetically immediately towards Acchan. From Mocchi’s point-of-view all she could see was a deadly looking Acchan with dark flames surrounding her, similar to Akuma from street fighter when the Dark Hadou took over him.  Turning around Acchan pouted at me before walking back into the shop annoyed with me. Upon seeing Acchan’s expression the rest of the girl’s  quickly scrambled out of the way to let her through. In no mood to shop anymore Acchan began to pick up random bras. Instantly throwing them back on the rack each time Miichan told her it looked cute. Miichan turned and looked at me, signally me to fix up the problem immediately. Quickly I walked after Acchan as she approaches the next rack of bra’s. Although I am quite shy about commenting on lingerie I quickly begin to provide my opinion.

“I think that would look nice on you.” Smiling whilst trying to move into a position to see Acchan’s facial expression. Deadpan Expression. Attempt One: FAILED.

As she grabbed another one off the next rack I moved closer.

“That colour would suit you nicely.” Ignored. Attempt Two: FAILED.

Watching her grab the next one I quickly took it out of the hers.

“This one would look perfect on you!” Walked away….Attempt Three: FAILED

Acchan grabbed another one.

“I don’t think that your boobs are that big are they?” Haruna, Yuko, and Miichan all face palmed immediately. Throwing the bra at me Acchan walked away angrily whilst saying under her breath.

“Give it to Mocchi then.” Almost knocking the rack over I tried putting the bra back onto the rack as quickly as possible. Quickly catching up to Acchan I pulled a bra off a rack and grabbed onto Acchan’s hand and pulled her into the change room locking the door behind us.

“What are you doing!” She tried to get past me, extremely annoyed with being with me. After a while of trying to prevent her from leaving she suddenly yelled. “I DON’T WANT TO BE WITH YOU!!”

My arms dropped to the side of my lifeless body, the bra in my hand seems to fall out of my hand by itself, my eyes shifted downwards as my head tilted to the side. My heart was aching. Acchan took a step back and looked at me.

“Sorry…” I said softly as I turned around and unlocked the door. As I began to open the door I felt my chest tighten in pain. Pulling the door towards me I felt as though my body was extremely heavy. Suddenly I felt her arms wrap around me, her cheek was pressed against mine. A warm liquid trickled down the side of my face as I felt her breathe hit my neck. Her arms tightened around me. She began nudging her cheek against mine roughly. Slowly she began move down and kissed the side of my neck. I turned to look at her.

“Acchan…”

She turned me around and pushed me against the door, locking it. She kissed me furiously. Her lips bruising mine. Her arms moving against my body, pushing down onto my stomach. My arms reach out and pull her towards me. Grabbing onto her waist. I feel as her tongue pushes against my lips. Gasping for air I feel as it enters and explores my mouth. As I feel it starting to retract mine automatically follows hers back into her mouth. She tastes so sweet. Breathing heavily we both begin to slowly move away from each other. Opening my eyes I feel as she rests her chin upon my shoulder. I gently kiss her cheek. Holding onto me tightly she says softly.

“Don’t ever leave me Minami”

I slowly wrap my arms around her, one holding her head against my shoulder.

“I’ll never leave you if you never leave me”

Time seemed to stop. We both stood there listening to each other breathe. After a while there was a knock on the door.
“Are you guys okay in there?” Miichan’s voice sounded. Acchan moved off my shoulder and looked at me still holding onto me. Kissing me gently on the lips she turned and replied.

“Yeah, everything’s fine.” Smiling at her I gently kissed her back. She giggled and pulled me towards her and onto the seat behind her. Standing in front of the door way she pulled her shirt off. My eyes widened and I moved back against the seat.

“Er..Um…Erg…W-What are you doing?” Moving forward and sitting on my lap, she gently whispered into my ear.

“Trying on the bra you brought in.” She unclasped her bra and I watched as straps slid down her arm. Her white breasts slowly being exposed as her bra began to fall down. Turning my head to the side and trying to get off the seat I began to stutter.

“A-a-a-a-no, um..A-A-Acchan I-I-I Um..” She giggled softly and kissed my cheek. Bending over she picked the bra off the ground and pulled it off the hanger. Putting it on slowly she moved and kissed neck.

“Can you help me?”

“Huh, W-what do you mean?” I stared at her, gulping down the saliva built up in my mouth. She smiled at me.

“Clipping me up course!”

“O-o-oh! Yes ok ok” My hands shaking as I clipped her bra together”

“Thank you!” Kissing my nose gently “You’re so cute.” Moving off my lap she stood back. “How does it look?” Looking up I couldn’t stop staring at her with my mouth slightly open.

“G-g-good.”

She pretended to pout “Only good?”

“N-no, you look absolutely beautiful”

Smiling at me she giggled. “You’re such a pervert!”

“ERGH!!” She began to laugh as I crossed my arms and pouted sadly. Pulling me off the chair she began to push me out the of the change room.

“Hurry up and get out so I can get changed you little perv!” She said as she giggled.

“I’m not a little perv!” I protested as I was being pushed out.

“Fine…you’re a MASSIVE hentai!” she said as she slapped my bum out of the change room and closed the door. I turned around to object however she had already closed the door. Turning back around Miichan’s face was in close proximity of mine.

“ARGH! WHAT THE HELL MIICHAN!!”

“Did you touch her boobs?”Blushing furiously I crossed my arms and turned my head to the side. “Ooo0o0o0o0o0o you did…”

“NO I DIDN’T!”

“Heh! Say what you want Takamina, everyone heard Acchan call you a MASSIVE hentai!”

Looking around I noticed Yuko, Haruna and Sashihara laughing as Mocchi pouted like crazy whilst staring at her own breasts, most likely wondering why I didn’t perv on hers. My eyes widened in fear at the thought that she may come running up to reveal her breasts to me. I heard the click of the lock behind me and turned around. Acchan walked out of the change room and latched back onto my arm with the bra in her other hand. Miichan grinned at me then turned to Acchan.

“Is that gonna be your sexy lingerie for Takamina?” Acchan laughed and nodded.

“Just have to get the matching underwear off the rack” she replied jokingly. Miichan quickly grabbed a pair and pushed it into my face.

“Here you go Takamina! Go pay for your woman’s lingerie!”

Grabbing the undies and slapping her hands out of my face I turn towards Acchan who was staring at me smiling. Smiling back at her I sighed deeply and pulled her towards the counter.

“Come on let’s pay for these”

 :mon duh: Don't kill me if you don't like it...
 :mon bye: TBC!

Title: Re: A bit blind to love
Post by: dark-atrox on January 26, 2011, 05:45:50 AM

jealous Acchan is scary  :panic: :panic: :panic: though she's really cute  :inlove: really, really cute  XD XD XD but poor mocchi though  :( she was like the receiving end of Acchan's wrath all the time  :smhid

You really made Atsuko a perve here, Kei  :lol: :lol: :lol: their hot and cold relationship is quite funny and fluff i may say  :twothumbs

PS: Like the KojiYuu as well  :twothumbs

Title: Re: A bit blind to love
Post by: sorakamiya on January 26, 2011, 06:21:59 AM

 :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: keichaaaaaaan..... finally u back....  XD XD XD maaan as usual.... i like your wrinting....  :thumbsup chapter 5 really excited and jealous acchan really scary...  :panic: :panic: please write more and update as fast as u can... i really like how u write this... so where should i submit my form to join your fans club???  :cow: :cow: by the way, why dont you make takamina the one who jealous for the next story...  8)2 8)2 acchan pairing in q-10 would be fit i guess... :P :P gudluck...  :thumbsup :thumbsup

Title: Re: A bit blind to love
Post by: RenaChii on January 26, 2011, 10:06:11 PM

@Keichan Keichan~!!  :mon thumb: Your fic is AWESOME~!!  :mon XD: I LIKE KojiYuu part THE BEST~!!  :mon lovelaff: PLEASE WRITE MORE ABOUT THEM~!!  :kneelbow: THANK YOU~!!  :on GJ:

Title: Re: A bit blind to love
Post by: bou-j525 on January 27, 2011, 02:43:06 AM

Wooooaaaawwww..... I think you're like the person who updates the faster all over the world XD I mean, you were supposed to be absent for a few days? If it is what you call being "absent", then I'm like... EHHHHH????? I mean, I'm writting since three days non stop and I still haven't post anything because I'm not done yet XD Hey, I'm not saying I don't want you to update of course, but you're damn FAST! XD I like it though  :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: So keep on updating this way  :grin:

Title: Re: A bit blind to love
Post by: Airidoki on January 27, 2011, 04:27:43 AM

I loved, Acchan is so pervert :mon blood:

please continue :mon fyeah:

 :mon psst: please more Acchan pervert

Title: Re: A bit blind to love
Post by: alexiel17 on January 27, 2011, 06:51:20 AM

Keichan ^_^ san...... I don't know what to say.....

Dude!!  you totally rock!!  :rockon: Thanks for the super fast updates!! I'm so loving it!!! :mon mad: (Super duper ultra fangirl mode!!!!  :mon lovelaff: :mon headbang:)

Sorry bout that... I don't know if I'll be happy and mad at the same time because of my blasted school!!!  :banghead: :mon study:
Really, this is truly awesome!!!  :grin: :grin:
I haven't read your chapter 4 and 5 yet!! W/c is good because I'll be having fan fic marathon this weekend!!! :mon crazyinlove:

Bec. you're soo fast, I have no time to comment 'bout your other chapters....  :mon zoom: :mon scare: Really, seriously, I'm sooo happy :mon angel:

Gonna quote this again :]   

Quote

Posted by: Keichan ^_^
« on: January 23, 2011, 08:02:40 AM And alexiel17 you crack me up!

Ha! I'll keep on cracking you up if that's what you want!!!  :mon roll: But soo busy right now (I should really be at school by now but... never mind :roll:)
Sorry if my post doesn't crack you up a bit,  :mon sweat: I still have my class (until 7pm!!!) No, I am not skipping class.... I am NOT really skipping classes.... :grin: (maybe a little *jokes.... hehehe  :grin:) I'm a kind student after all  :grin:  :yep:

Pls. continue this, can't wait to read this since you're making me somewhat a Takaachan shipper bec. of this :grin: (but still like KojiYuu more  :P)

Thanks sooo much!!!  :mon inluv: Gotta go now  :mon rush:... school  :mon study:....  :smhid But really thanks again :]  :mon roll:

Title: Re: A bit blind to love
Post by: Keichan ^_^ on January 28, 2011, 08:21:03 AM

 :mon ghost: I am back!!! have been working....so horrible! Anyway thank you all for reading my last chapter!

Quote from: sorakamiya on January 26, 2011, 06:21:59 AM

please write more and update as fast as u can... so where should i submit my form to join your fans club???  :cow: :cow: by the way, why dont you make takamina the one who jealous for the next story... 

Haha fan club?  :mon duh: um...i dont know how to respond to this xD However the other two I can do for you!!!

Quote from: Airidoki on January 27, 2011, 04:27:43 AM

I loved, Acchan is so pervert :mon blood:

please continue :mon fyeah:

 :mon psst: please more Acchan pervert

Haha I don't feel that comfortable writing perverted parts but if you want it you got it!!!

Quote from: bou-j525 on January 27, 2011, 02:43:06 AM

Wooooaaaawwww..... I think you're like the person who updates the faster all over the world XD I mean, you were supposed to be absent for a few days? If it is what you call being "absent", then I'm like... EHHHHH????? I mean, I'm writting since three days non stop and I still haven't post anything because I'm not done yet XD Hey, I'm not saying I don't want you to update of course, but you're damn FAST! XD I like it though  :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: So keep on updating this way  :grin:

:on cny1: Thank you thank you! I try to keep up with all your requests! but hmm...fastest in the world....  :mon beam: ....Maybe because.... IMMA NINJA!

Quote from: alexiel17 on January 27, 2011, 06:51:20 AM

I haven't read your chapter 4 and 5 yet!! W/c is good because I'll be having fan fic marathon this weekend!!! :mon crazyinlove:
 you're making me somewhat a Takaachan shipper bec. of this

Lol...fanfic marathon! But dude you always post before you read LOL what would happen if i write something you dislike one day xD...and yes my plan is working....  :mon hobo: all shall be Takacchan fans soon....  ahaha jk!

ANYWAY... Here is the next chapter!!!

Chapter Six
Walking out of the bra shop I felt a bit awkward. Mocchi and Sashiharo ended up leaving whilst we were paying for the Acchan’s lingerie leaving the five of us again.  Acchan was in a good mood again tightly wrapped around my arm. Miichan was now holding onto Yuko’s other arm. Of course Yuko was tightly holding hands with none other than Haruna. As a group we continued to browse the shopping centre. However whilst we were shopping at ‘Snidel’ my phone began to ring. Acchan unclasped her hand from my arm immediately and moved away. I looked at her and pouted, the warmth from her body had disappeared. Seeing me like that she quickly smiled and blew me a kiss.

“Stop pouting and hurry up and answer it!” she giggled. “I’m going to get a juice from outside!” She smiled and walked outside as I quickly rummaged through my bag for my phone. Pulling it out I immediately answered.

“Moshi-moshi!”

“Minami! What took you so long to answer? I was worried!”

“Oh Okasan! Sorry I couldn’t find it in my bag! What’s wrong?”

“I’m just calling to see if you are coming home for dinner”

“Oh…” I glanced down at my watch, it was already 5pm. “What time would you like me home?”

“6:30 if you could! One of your dad’s friends and his family are visiting!”

“Oh.. Okay okay I will be home by then!”

“Are Atsuko’s parents home yet?”

“No why?”

“Ask her to come to dinner as well, she can stay the night as well! It’s a bit dangerous for a girl to go home alone at night!”

“Oh okay…I’ll ask her!”

“Okay then I’ll see you soon!”

“Ok ok bye mum!”

Placing my phone back into my bag I looked around to see where everyone was. Miichan and Yuko were playing around with the hats trying every single one on and laughing at how each other looked. Haruna, who was not to be seen was most likely in the change rooms as Yuko always glanced over at them impatiently waiting for them to open. Acchan however still wasn’t back from purchasing her juice. I decided to browse around the shop, looking for a new t-shirt. After a few minutes of browsing, Miichan ran over to me.

“Oi! Where’s Acchan?”

“Huh? Oh, she said she was going to buy juice when my phone rang.”

“Oh.”

“Where’s the other two?”

“Just walked outside to…Oh no wait here they come!” Looking over I noticed Yuko and Haruna running back into the shop towards us.

“Hey Takamina you better go out there before that guy sweet talks her girlfriend!” Yuko chuckled as she approaches me.

“What?”

“Yeah Acchan is getting sweet talked by some random guy!” Haruna added. Unsure as to what they meant I stared at them confused. Yuko stared at me in disbelief.

“Are you really that stupid that you don’t understand?”

“Er…”

“Oh god she really is stupid!” Miichan said with her eyes wide. Yuko stared at me emotionless in disbelief, moving her hands whilst she explains to me slowly.

“There is a guy!” I nod “Outside” I nod again “Talking to Acchan” I nod again… “…” I continue to wait for Yuko to continue… “Oh bloody hell!” grabbing my arm Yuko drags me outside and points over to the juice shop. Acchan stood there waiting for her juice swinging around her shopping bags. I smile whilst looking at her until Yuko slaps the back of my head. Miichan and Haruna shaking their heads whilst standing behind Yuko.

“Itai! What was that for!”

“Are you even looking?”

“Yes?”

Face palming herself she points over at Acchan again.

“LOOK PROPERLY!!”

Glancing across I finally realise what Yuko was talking about. The guy standing next to Acchan was leaning against the counter speaking to Acchan as they both waited for their juice. He was talking to Acchan whilst she was nodding and laughing.

“It’s just a fan! Calm down.”

“I can’t believe she’s that stupid…” Haruna and Yuko slowly nodded to Miichan’s comment.

“It’s nothi~” I was cut off by the sight of the guy pulling out his phone in an attempt to get Acchan’s details. I immediately began to quickly walk towards them, my eye twitching furiously. Who does this guy think he is!

“Sheesh….took her long enough….” Yuko commented.

(O_o) ACCHAN POV

“So what’s your e-mail and number?” Asked the random guy.

“Ano…um…” Acchan, although she enjoyed the jokes the guy said beforehand, felt quite uncomfortable in the situation she was currently caught in.

“Don’t be shy. I’m not a bad guy! I just think you’re really cute.” He smiled at her whilst leaning in towards her, moving his phone towards her hand. “Just put it in, I promise I’ll message you”, Looking at the phone Atsuko quickly turned to check if her juice was ready. Still in the blender…What was she going to do? She was sure he was a nice guy but she was not interested at all about trading information with him. The only person she ever wanted cheesy romantic messages from was Takamina.

 “Come on babe.” He leaned in close, a few more centimetres and he might even be close enough to sneak a kiss in. Flustered and annoyed at the close proximity of the guy Acchan took a step back however she didn’t get further than a few centimetres, instantly bumping into the counter behind her. She felt cornered. Trapped, she felt like she couldn’t escape.

“ATSUKO!” She turned in the direction of the angry voice immediately. Takamina was walking towards her angrily, her fists clenched and biting onto her bottom lip. Although she felt relieved her little prince was here to save her, the angry expression on her face seemed to imply that she had misunderstood what was going on.

Once the guy leaned back from her to see who had yelled her name. Acchan took the opportunity to quickly step away from him, collect her juice which was just being put onto the counter, grab a straw, bowed apologetically to the guy and quickly dashed towards Minami.

Grabbing tightly onto Minami’s right arm she instantly felt safe again. However this warm feeling she felt quickly evaporated due to the coarse sound of Minami’s voice.

“Who was he?” Looking up she noticed her prince glaring at the guy standing by the juice bar who was smirking at her. Giving her a small pretentious wave.

“Nobody that matters” I say cheerfully whilst moving closer towards her, hoping that her anger would subside. She looked at me with an insecure pout. I hold onto her hand tightly to reassure her that I was only hers. A small smile appeared on her face as I feel her hand tighten around mine.

“Come on let’s join the others!” Pulling Minami back towards the other girls. Shaking the juice in front of Minami’s face she quickly added.

 “I got your favourite flavour so we can share”. I watch as she looks down and sighs before looking back up at me smiling. I can’t let anything like that happen again I tell myself endlessly. Looking over at her I feel my heart beating irregularly. Since admitting to her how I felt yesterday it seems like we were both becoming emotionally drained from jealousy. Looking at her now all I know is that I can’t lose her... I’ll die from heart break…

(O_o) TAKAMINA POV

Who the hell was that guy…Ergh that stupid smirk on his face…I just want to punch him in between the eyes…I wonder if Acchan gave her e-mail to him…No of course she wouldn’t! She loves me…right? Of course she does…I hope…

As they approach the other girls Takamina diverts her gaze at Acchan. Looking at her warily. “I DON’T WANT TO BE WITH YOU!” Acchan’s previous words come back. Clenching her teeth and squinting her eyes she tries to get rid of the thoughts in her head.

“Minami…” Acchan’s soft voice draws me back into reality. I look at her, she’s looking at me worriedly. “You okay?”

“Yeah just tired” I smile at her.

“Oh…okay…”

Trying to change the mood immediately I smile and nudge into her.

“Mum called before.”

“Oh what did she say?”

“She told us to go home for dinner at 6:30”

“Oh…you have to leave soon…”I giggle at her. “What’s so funny?” She looked up at me pouting.

“I said ‘us’ not ‘I’”

“Huh?” I sigh deeply, she’s such an airhead.

“Us meaning you and me” Realising what I meant she smiled at me, her cheeks begin to redden. “She said you can stay tonight as well”

“O0o0o0o0o0o you girls are gonna do some sneaky sneaky stuff tonight!” Yuko said immediately, her head right next to ours.

“ARGH!” I jump back.

“Smexy smexy stuff” Miichan said whilst standing behind us making me jump again.

“What the hell guys!” I yell at them out of fright. Acchan on the other hand stands there blushing. Haruna approaches Acchan from behind and rests her hands on Acchan’s shoulders and whispers loudly into Acchan’s ears.

“Watch out Acchan, you know how much of an Ecchi Takamina is! Pulling you into change rooms and forcing you to get changed into underwear for her and all!”

I glare at Haruna! Oh if only they knew who the real perv was! Looking back at Acchan who’s blushing like a tomato she suddenly broke the silence.

“That’s okay!”

My eyes shoot open, I can feel the steam exploding out of all the holes in my head. Cuddling me close she continues.

“As long as its Takamina” I blush furiously as I feel my legs turn into jelly.

“ERGH!!!” Miichan and Yuko both scream at the same time.

“Oh that’s so unfair! We’re married and I haven’t touched anything!” Whinged Miichan

We all laughed at her. She always seems to know what to say in awkward situations to change the mood. Thank god she’s here!

“Well you love birds better hurry up and get home!” Haruna said

“Yeah!” Yuko nudged Acchan “Don’t want to keep the future in-laws waiting now do we?” Raising her eyebrows cheekily afterwards. Acchan giggled and gently hit Yuko’s arm.

“Shut up guys!” I pout at them.

“Aww look at the wittle wittle protective boyfriend!” Miichan said in a mushy voice whilst pinching my cheeks.

“Neh!!!” I moved my arm hitting away her hands. They all laugh at me for a little while longer before we excuse ourselves for leaving early.

“See you tomorrow!” I yell

“Bye” Haruna waves

“Don’t do something Yuko would do!” Miichan yelled earning a hit from Yuko!

“Don’t listen to her Takamina! Do everything I would! Skinship is a symbol love!” Yuko yelled before being slapped over the head by Haruna.

“Protect your innocence Acchan!” Haruna yelled.

Oh shame on them for not knowing that I’m the innocent one who needs the protection. I turn and glare at Haruna who quickly sticks her tongue out at me. Turning back around to continue walking towards the train station I feel a pair of warm lips press against my cheek. Looking over I see her smiling at me.

“Hehe you are definitely the pervert” I say whilst smirking at her. Leaning into me she whispers softly.

“You haven’t even experienced anything yet…” inhaling my scent she nudges into my ear with her nose “…you have so much more for me to explore…” A shiver streams down my spine. I turn and look at her. She’s smiling at me whilst she bites onto her lower lip. Man….what have I gotten myself into this time….

(O_o)

Here we were, outside the front door of my house. I finally feel safe again. Well not that safe…I’ve brought my perverted girlfriend home with me now.

Flashback

The train ride seemed so much longer than usually. We had sat in the last carriage of the train. It’s not as busy as the other carriages thank goodness. Acchan couldn’t keep her hands off me….(v_v) stop thinking in a perverted way!...she just kept tickling me the entire train ride that’s all! The fact is, I’m not ticklish…therefore Acchan tried harder than ever. I guess you could just say she was stabbing me with her fingers rather than tickling. After a good 10minutes of jabbing her fingers into me she gave up. Holding tightly onto my arm she rested her head on my shoulder she played with my fingers.

“Your hands are so cute and small”

“Well they have to be small, if I had massive hands I’ll look out of proportion to my height” I pouted slightly, I hate being so small… people still think I’m a middle schooler.

“You’re the perfect height for me” Acchan gently moved her head in order to kiss the nape of my neck. I felt my body tingle gently. She closed her eyes and rested on my shoulder for the remainder of the train ride. Never letting go of my hand.

Currently…

I felt as she gently nibbled on my ear as I search through my bag for the house keys. A shiver slightly upon the touch of her breath against my ear. Turning towards her I gently kiss her soft lips before I turn back towards the door to unlock it. Pushing it open we slowly walk in together.

“I’m home!!”

“Welcome back honey! Hello Acchan come in!” My dad happily greets us as we take off our shoes.

Smiling brightly Acchan bows towards my father. “Hello uncle thank you for having me here!”

“It’s a pleasure! You go put your stuff down in Minami’s room and come back out for a chat!”

“Okay!”

Walking towards the hallway, my mum pokes her head out of the kitchen.

“Hello aunty!”

“Hello Acchan! I cooked a lot of food tonight so I hope you’re hungry!”

Smiling happily upon hearing there was heaps of food Acchan quickly responded by saying

“Your too nice to me!”

“Well you’re practically like family!”

Acchan blushed immediately. Before yesterday Acchan would usually giggle in response. But since we had progressed forward in our relationship and both our parents weren’t aware Acchan was quite confused as to respond to such comments.

“Come on.” I called out as I began walking down the hallway towards my room. Acchan quickly followed me.

“ACCHAN!” My brother jumped out of his room scaring the living daylights out of me. Jumping backwards to run I slammed into the wall.

“I…tai…” Seeing that it was me he quickly pushed me aside and walked up towards Acchan.

“Stupid brother” I mumbled underneath my breath as I rubbed my elbow.

“I haven’t seen you for AAAAAAAAGES Acchan” my brother said gleefully. “I’ve missed you SOOOOOO much”

“Hehe I’ve missed you too!” Acchan replied. “I’ll come out and talk to you after I put this stuff down”

“Okay I’ll wait for you in the living room!” My stupid brother smiled brightly….what a little perv he is!

Walking into my room Acchan quickly closes the door and locks it before jumping onto my bed.

“Er…Why’d you lock it?”

“Come here!” She patted on the empty spot beside her on my bed. Walking over nervously I sat down next to her.

“What’s wrong?”

She quickly moved and sat on my lap facing me. All I could think about right now was that moment a few hours ago in the change room. Her soft white bre~ damn it Takamina what are you thinking about! Looking up at her as she placed her arms around my neck. I gulp straight away. She gently leans in and kisses me. My hands automatically hold onto her waist as I press my lips back against hers. Moving away slowly she gently brushes my fringe to the side.

“I wish we could do this anywhere” She said softly as she stares into my eyes. “Everytime I see you I always have the urge to kiss you but I know we can’t do it in public…”

Smiling at her, I gently nudge my nose against hers making her giggle.

“Lucky theirs change rooms everywhere then?” I say whilst moving my eyebrows before I chuckle.

“Mmm…” She pushed me down against the mattress and gently plants kisses along my neck.

“Acchan…” I say softly as her lips send blood rushing to my head. Her slowly move down the length of my body, holding onto the hem of the shirt she lent me. Pulling it up, her hands begin to gently touch the smooth skin of my bare stomach, sending chills down my spine. Her lips begin to kiss me and before long I feel as her tongue seeps into my mouth. I gently moan as I feel her hands sliding up along the core of my body. I hands seem to have automatically made their way from her waist down to her soft white thighs. Slowly inching higher up her skirt until my fingers begin to creep underneath her underwear. My hands cupping over her soft cheeks. I listen as she moans my name gently.

“Mmm…Minami…” However before we progress any further there’s a knock on my door. Acchan automatically collapses on top of me and giggled. I sigh in frustration before responding to the knock on the door.

“Who is it?”

“Minami! Dinners ready and the guests are here”   

“Yes mum we’re coming!” Looking up at Acchan I quickly give her a peck on the lips. She begins to laugh at me. “What’s so funny?” I asked confused. Blushing softly she kisses me back.

“Can’t do it here either” She rolls her eyes cheekily. Wrapping my arms around her waist I nudge my head against hers.

“You’re such a pervert.”

Pushing herself up onto her elbows she looks down at me with a grin on her face.

“Excuse me! I’m sure it was you who was going up my undies!” I blushed immediately.

“W-well I-I J-just um…” Giggling she whispered into my ear.

“Hope it felt as good for you as it did for me” She pushed herself off me and started heading towards the door. Only turning back around to wink at me before pulling the door open. This girl is…unbelievable…. I quickly jump off the bed and follow her out to the dining room. However I noticed her standing in the door way frozen.

“Are you okay?”

Walking up beside her I quickly notice someone sitting across from the doorway at the dining table staring at Acchan. It’s the asshole from the juice shop. Could this really be a coincidence? He smirks as he notices me glaring at him. This is going to be one awkward dinner…

TBC   :mon curtain:
Hehe sorry if you guys don't like where this is going!!

I got a feeling my story is becoming more serious.. I will try and make it a comedy again!

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 >_< UPDATED!!!
Post by: dark-atrox on January 28, 2011, 09:24:05 AM

MORE BEDROOM SCENE!  :lol: :lol: :lol: right guys?  :twisted:

Boo....who's that guy?  :twisted: I hate guys associated with Acchan  :banghead: esp. that Takeru from Q-chan....LOL  :catglare:

I want Taka-boy to kick whoever that guy's ass is.. :lol:

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 >_< UPDATED!!!
Post by: sorakamiya on January 28, 2011, 09:34:04 AM

 :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: keichan.... u make my wish come true....  :cow: :cow: :cow: thanks2...  :bow: :bow: and this story getting extreamly excited...  XD XD maaaan... i cant wait for the next update....  :thumbsup :thumbsup :thumbsup please update as fast as u can...  :yep: :yep: :yep:

by the way, u are takamina fans to right? just wanna give a info suppose u havent known yet that takamina blog now can be commented  8) 8)

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 >_< UPDATED!!!
Post by: mangobanana15 on January 28, 2011, 09:35:08 AM

OMGG thanks for the update!!!

God that dude shouldn't be flirting with Aachan or he's gonna feel the powers Takamina

lol Takamina's parents totally ruined the Takaachan moment

aww man why is that stupid flirt there at dinner  :thumbdown: total killjoy!

Can't wait for your next update!

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 >_< UPDATED!!!
Post by: Keichan ^_^ on January 29, 2011, 02:54:30 PM

OHAYO!...Well more like Konbanwa! Anywho I am updating this because it supposedly cures dark-atrox's tonsillitis....Ask her how that makes sense!

Quote from: dark-atrox on January 28, 2011, 09:24:05 AM

MORE BEDROOM SCENE!  :lol: :lol: :lol: right guys?  :twisted:

...You will get it if you update Mistaken Identity and FNP!!!

Quote from: sorakamiya on January 28, 2011, 09:34:04 AM

u are takamina fans to right? just wanna give a info suppose u havent known yet that takamina blog now can be commented  8) 8)

ERGH!!! Really!!! Argh I can't read japanese though >_<!!!

Quote from: mangobanana15 on January 28, 2011, 09:35:08 AM

lol Takamina's parents totally ruined the Takaachan moment

Hehe sorry!

Anyway thanks for reading and hopefully you guys enjoy this chapter!

Chapter Seven
I hate assholes…now there’s one sitting across from me…actually correction. I hate assholes who perv on my girlfriend…I really want to gouge his eyes out.

Here we are seated at the table. I’m sitting down across from the asshole at the end of the table. Acchan is seated two seats to the left of me…why may you ask? Because I have an annoying brother who demanded that he sat next to her…why they can’t switch seats you ask? Because my mother wanted to sit next to Acchan as well…egh I’m starting to get withdrawals. Looking over at her I notice that she’s giggling to my brother’s jokes…Tsk…Stupid brother….Oh my god am I jealous of my little brother… Do I really fail at life that badly…. Looking back up I noticed the idiot across from me watching Acchan’s every move…Supposedly he’s a rising star according to his mother who is nested next to him. My father is sitting at the head of the table. Adjacent to him is his friend Ishihara-san from highschool…aka asshole’s father… next to the father is asshole’s younger sister who is the same age as us, Su-chan. She’s quite cute, seems like a nice girl. Then of course the loud mouth mother is next to her, let’s just call her Loud-chan. The assholes name is Shinji, Ishihara Shinji. 21 years old and a massive perverted asshole.

“Er…Minami-chan…” I look up from my bowl of rice at Su-chan. Quickly swallowing my rice down I answer.

“Er y-yes?”

“I was looking forward to meeting you today.” She said with a soft voice.

“Hehe why is that?”

“You’re my oshimen” she said with a smile, her cheeks gently glowing a light pink colour”

“ERGH!! Really? Thank you thank you” I nod towards her “Thank you for your support” I begin scratching my head and giggling in embarrassment before my mood becomes shitty upon hearing assholes voice.

“Su-chan maybe we should trade spots so you can talk to Minami-chan properly.” I think the vein just popped out of my head.

“Really?” She squeals. I watch as the asshole quickly trades places with Su-chan, my eye twitching like crazy….now he’s sitting directly across from Acchan and attempting to engage in a conversation with her…curse that sly bastard!

For the remainder of the dinner I try my best to continue my conversation with Su-chan. However, my eyes kept diverting towards Acchan and the asshole. What was he saying to her. I can’t hear because everyone at the table seems to be speaking really loudly. My father and his friend have started on the Sake and have begun getting loud and tipsy. My mum is screaming across the table to loud-chan and Su-chan is speaking so loud and enthusiastically with me, trying to get my attention endlessly. Acchan is speaking with my brother, however the asshole is leaned across the table and trying to engage into their conversation, if not he’s trying to look down Acchan’s top and I’m definitely going to punch him in the face.

(O_o)

After dinner everyone begins to move into the living room. They all slowly walk across to sit on the couches to continue conversing.

However, before I had a chance to secure a seat next to Acchan my mum had grabbed me into the kitchen to help her wash the dishes. As I walk through the doors I turn back and see Acchan on the couch next to my brother…however the asshole has just taken my seat next to her. I feel as anger rushes over my body…How dare that idiot make a move on my girlfriend! Acchan jumps in shock as he taps her shoulder. Not noticing until then that he had moved onto the couch next to her…and to my disbelief a smile appears on her face. I felt my chest clench in pain as I disappear around the corner.

As I stand in the kitchen helping my mum wipe up I zone out, not listening to anything she’s telling me. The image of Acchan smiling at him replays continuously in my head. Right now I don’t know what to do, how to feel or what to say. All I know is that I don’t want to leave the kitchen because I’m scared. I’m scared that once I walk outside, I would realise that I had lost her.

ACCHAN POV

Where did Minami go…I thought she was behind me…ergh…how could she leave me here with this guy… Why didn’t she sit down next to me? Right now I wish that they never called us out for dinner. I just want to be in her arms again… Maybe I just wish that we stayed in the change room forever… I wouldn’t have gotten juice and met this idiot, and Minami wouldn’t have been angry, and then we wouldn’t have been separated… Oh… I just want her here again. As much as I like her mum and her brother, I really didn’t want to sit in between them. I couldn’t see Minami half the time because she’s so small when I turned towards her, her brother took up half of my vision because he was endlessly in my face. In addition that idiot changed seats and kept leaning into me… I thought he was just a nice guy to begin with when he approached me at the juice shop but now… he just freaks me out.  Sitting here right now I can hear his heavy breathing behind me, I want to move but I don’t want to cause a scene. All I wanted to do was make a good impression for Minami’s family. I didn’t know all these people were coming for dinner. Ergh why didn’t she warn me… but I guess she would never have known these would be the guests… I don’t like them, but for the sake of being accepted by Minami’s family I guess I have to…. I even have to pretend I’m interested in what this idiot is talking about…actually I’m not really listening…I think I’m just smiling and nodding. And ergh….his sister… I don’t like her. It’s like she’s trying to annoy me subtly. First she speaks with Minami and tells her that she’s her fan, then she sits across from her and leaves me with the douche…then she spends all of dinner flirting with her…. Now she’s…. wait where is she? She couldn’t be with Minami could she? Where did they go? Are they in the room? Minami…

“ACCHAN!”

“Er… yes yes?” I stare at Minami’s brother.

“Are you even listening?”

Before I could answer, the idiot behind me cuts me off.

“Seriously, can’t you see she isn’t interested in what you’re talking about?” Leaning in behind me he begins to move his arm around me. I quickly jump up off the couch.

“Sorry I need to use the bathroom” I apologise and walk down the hallway. As I begin to walk down the hallway my heart begins to race. Is Minami with Su-chan….I stop metres before Minami’s room…the door was closed… my heart begins to break. Contemplating what I should do I begin pacing outside around in circles. I couldn’t take it anymore. I quickly turn the handle and push into the room… its empty. Suddenly I hear a door open behind me. I quickly turn and spot Su-chan coming out of the bathroom… Is she in there? Walking closer to the bathroom door my heart begins to race again. I quickly turn in and look. Empty… where was she? I need her… I miss her touch…

Atsuko leans against the wall for support before she slowly slides down against the wall onto the ground cuddling tightly onto her legs.

TAKAMINA POV

“Minami?...MINAMI!!!”

I jolt out of my current state of thought.

“Y-y-yes mum?”

“What’s wrong with you just now! Is something wrong?”

“No I was just thinking…”

“Do you want to talk about it?”

“No I’m fine, it’s nothing just thinking about our new dance routine” I chuckle lightly…is it bad to lie to my mother?

“You’ve been working too hard lately! You need a rest soon!”

“I will mum, I’m okay”

“Okay…don’t lie though! I’ll be more worried!”

“Hehe it’s fine! I’ll be better in the morning!” …will I?

“Well we’ve finished cleaning so let’s go and join everyone” My mother smiles brightly and disappears out the door… I don’t want to go outside… I stand there for a while. Finally I decide to confront my fears and slowly I walk out of the kitchen.

Turning to face the living room area I notice that Acchan isn’t there. The asshole and my brother at sitting on the couch arguing, whereas Su-chan and trying to pull them off each other. What did they do to my Acchan… I clench my fists and begin storming towards the couch. However out of my peripheral vision I notice someone cradled on the ground. I stop and automatically turn to walk down the hallway. Who is it? I can hardly see the hallway is dark apart from the light shining from the bathroom. Then I notice…it’s my girl…

Quickly I begin to rush down the hallway towards her. What happened? Why is she crying on the ground? What did them idiots do to her? I watch as she moves upon hearing my feet rushing towards her. Once she sees me she pushes herself of the ground and dives into me. My arms automatically envelope her into me. Holding her tight I feel as her tears dampen my shirt.

“Are you okay? What did they do to you? Did he touch you?” I tighten my grip on her as I feel her slowly move in my arms. “I’m going to get that asshole now!” Slowly I began to let go of her and begin to turn around towards the living room. My blood was boiling. That bastards gonna die. Suddenly I feel her hand grip tightly onto mine. She pulls me back into her. I quickly turn and the next thing I feel is her lips against mine, her arm tightly around my neck not letting me leave her side. Kissing her back as I cradle her in my arms I feel as her lips detach from mine. She slowly begin to rub her tear drenched cheek against mine.

“Where were you?”

“Huh?”

“Where did you go…I couldn’t find you… I thought you had gone off with Su-chan and…” She began to move uncomfortably in my arms not wanting to say the next few lines. Holding onto her waist I gently turn and kiss her cheek.

“Mum dragged me into the kitchen to do the washing with her”

“Oh…” Nudging my head against hers I continue.

“I thought you were enjoying your time flirting with my brother and that idiot”

Moving her head back to face me she pouted at me sadly.

“You just want to make up reasons to break up with me so you can be Su-chan don’t you” She turned her head away from me pouting angrily.

“Er…I…er, no”

“See you can’t even respond properly” She let go of me immediately and turned her back towards me with her arms crossed. I was left looking at her wide-eyed with my arms frozen where her waist was supposed to be. “Fine, I’ll leave so you can be with her.”

She then began to walk towards my bedroom to retrieve her belongings. As I watch her disappear into my room I finally snap out of my frozen state and run after her. Scrambling into my room I see her picking up her bags. I quickly close the doors and lock them. I turn and quickly run up to her pulling the bags out of her hands.

“What are you doing?”

Moving away, she sat on the bed pouting.

“Leaving so you can be with Su-chan” She said with a bland tone with her head turned away from me.

I instantly dropped down onto my knees with my head bowed down startling her.

“Minami!” She quickly ran across to me holding onto my shoulders. “Are you okay? Minami answer me! Mina~” She instantly stopped as she felt a tear fall onto her arm. Slowly she reached up and cupped her hand against my cheek, lifting my head up to face her as she brushed away my tears. Looking at me with sad eyes I swallowed my tears back heavily before saying.

“I don’t know what to do anymore.”

“Minami…”

“I thought I was fine. Thought I knew what I wanted. But ever since I saw you with him I don’t know anymore. Every time I see you with him my heart clenches in pain. Every time I see him touching you my blood races through my body. Every time I see you smile when you’re with him I die a little bit more on the inside. Then every time I see you sad my mind is filled with guilt. Every time you want to leave I feel empty. Every time you push me away… I just want to die.” Looking to the side I continue. “I don’t know what you want anymore. When we were just friends everything seemed so easy. When you were angry or sad I could just cheer you up. But since yesterday I feel like I have to think harder about what I should say and what I should do to cheer you up and by then you had already left my side” I feel as tears I’ve been trying hard to hold back begin to stream down my cheeks. Suddenly I feel the warmth of her body on mine. Her head pressed against my chest and arms tightly around my waist. Her soft trembling voice filled the room.

“I really love you Minami. I can’t lose you.” Her grip tightened around me. “I love you how you always were. You don’t have to change. I fell in love with you long ago and I can’t imagine my life without you at all.” Moving her head closer against me so she could hear my heart beat she continued. “I don’t love anyone but you. And I definitely don’t like that guy, I swear on my life. I just feel as though I have to act nice to him in front of your parents. I don’t like his sister either because I feel like she’s taking you from me.” I wrap my arms around her as I rest my chin on top of her head smelling her soft hair.

“No one could ever take me from you.” I gently kiss her forehead and burrow my nose into her hair. “I’m in love with you Maeda Astuko.”. Pushing herself up to face me she leans in and kisses me, gently biting onto my bottom lip before she rests her forehead against mine.

“I’m in love with you too Takahashi Minami”. As I tighten my arms around her she rests her head against my collar bone and moves into the crescent underneath my neck. In this moment of time, all our worries seem to have faded away. We were safe in each other’s arms. All we could hear was each other’s breathing. I wish I could listen to this melody forever…

TBC :mon rush:

Hope you like the chapter! Sorry if it was sad!!!! Hope it cures tonsillitis! ...btw anyone here speak japanese and would like to teach me?????  :mon lol:

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 ^_^; Chapter Seven!!!
Post by: dark-atrox on January 29, 2011, 03:23:12 PM

Quote from: Keichan ^_^ on January 29, 2011, 02:54:30 PM

OHAYO!...Well more like Konbanwa! Anywho I am updating this because it supposedly cures dark-atrox's tonsillitis....Ask her how that makes sense!

WAW! you really updated Kei-chan!  XD XD XD well, your fic somewhat or rather your update makes me feel better, it somewhat cures my tonsillitis!

WAH! Where's my BEDROOM SCENE?  :catglare: well, umh...about my fics update...er, well, ano...well see about that! *runs and hides somewhere*

Su-chan? Sato Sumire?  :?

Acchan is really hard to please eh?  :( Poor Takaboy!  :P

Acchan's really possessive though if i were Takamina i wouldn't mind at all... :lol: :lol: :lol:

PS: You're really fast in updating your fics  :huhuh and here i thought you're busy with your work  :P I'll try to update this week, probably the fics you already read LOL  :lol: :lol: :lol:

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 ^_^; Chapter Seven!!!
Post by: sorakamiya on January 29, 2011, 04:39:53 PM

OMG...OMG....OMG.... keichan....keichan....  :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: i think now u read my mind.... this chapter... i really like it...  :inlove: :inlove: eventhough it's a bit sad...  :( but it's ok.... still great...  :thumbsup :thumbsup for all this day i have waited for your update... i even check the tread every 1 hour...  XD XD please continue and i'll be waiting for the next chap...  :cow: :cow: :cow: please as soon as possible...  :bow: :bow: :yep: :yep:

well, i'm not speak japanese but i try to learning it now and since takamina blog can be commented now my spirit tense up...  8)  XD for a simple japanese maybe i can help you..  :) here i give you a suggestion... use google trans  :nervous i use it too.... it'll be easier...  :thumbsup

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 ^_^; Chapter Seven!!!
Post by: alexiel17 on January 29, 2011, 05:58:51 PM

Ei Keichan ^_^ san!!!

Dude! Just finished reading ch. 5-6, gotta say this is pretty awesome! :mon deter: (then, I was surprised that you'd post ch. 7 already... :scolding: tsk  :smhid I really dunno if I'll post this here but.... (http://i75.servimg.com/u/f75/15/95/51/13/th/kirino10.jpg) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=37&u=15955113) hehehe :]  :grin:)

This was suppose to be my post when you haven't post ch. 7 yet... :mon annoyed: tsk,tsk,tsk..... (But I'm not angry 'bout your fast as in fast :shock: update...) YEY!!! 2nd fan fic marathon coming up!!!  :lol:
Anyway....

My gosh, when I was reading it I was (super blood lost) I mean  WOW! You really write what your readers request/wanted you to write huh... :hehehe:
(Thinking right now.....) Umm, if that's the case, can you pls, write about my favorite pair w/c is the Kojiyuu, since Harunya accepted Yuko sempai's feeling and all... Umm... write something like what the Takacchan pair are currently doing..... (or even better than that.... Oh, sh*t, there goes my image.....again...  :smhid :] )

Ok, I think I should need to worship you right now  :bow: :bow: (I soo do like your style of writing, it's funny and pervy at the same time... I really like it especially the development of the couples... :luvluv1:)

OMiGawsh!! I was like soo imagining it :mon bleed2: hehehe... :mon mischief: (I don't care bout my image right now, :mon fire: because of your fic... :mon mad:) Well c'mon guyz! Aren't we all here the same? We like the part where Acchan would do something with Takamina sama, right? (or do you want me to name you people!! :mon geek: )

HAHAHA!!! gonna quote this :]

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dude you always post before you read LOL what would happen if i write something you dislike one day xD...and yes my plan is working.... :mon hobo: all shall be Takacchan fans soon...

Oh, :shy1: are you concerned... :wriggly: :] hehehe... I really don't mind if you'll post something w/c I wouldn't like?? Oh, c'mon I think that's impossible :lol: ... I'm not selfish so if ever you'll write something like that, I wouldn't mind  :D :] Hey! I like your story (so far... hehe) it's just my type so just write until we drop (http://i75.servimg.com/u/f75/15/95/51/13/th/egg-0111.gif) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=41&u=15955113) (there goes my egg again :](http://i75.servimg.com/u/f75/15/95/51/13/th/egg-0710.gif) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=38&u=15955113) Oh, pls don't think ill of me, I'm a girl.... (http://i75.servimg.com/u/f75/15/95/51/13/th/cute_m10.gif) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=44&u=15955113) Oh, sh... this is soo not like me..  :doh: )  :]

Umm anywho, 'bout your plan, hmm.... seriously, I'm not really a Takacchan shipper.... before... but after reading your story... (I think I'm evolving... :] But I still love my KojiYuu more!!! haha:] ) Just good luck with that plan of yours :]

And there, that was supposed to by my post, then I saw....  :shocked ch. 7.... (You really are a ninja aren't ya' (http://i75.servimg.com/u/f75/15/95/51/13/th/ninja10.gif) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=42&u=15955113)) :]
Dude, what do you do for a living? I mean what's your life like? I'm sooo curious to know.. :]
Anyway, I didn't know dark-atrox san has tonsillitis... And I think that your fic might somehow make her feel better  :]

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MORE BEDROOM SCENE!  :lol: :lol: :lol: right guys? 
 You will get it if you update Mistaken Identity and FNP!!!

You're so damn right 'bout that!! :scolding:

Thanks soo much for the fast update!! Just continue writing (especially the perv parts.... :mon blood: Hope it'll be Kojiyuu next time ) hehehehe :]
Gonna read this tom, well, maybe later (since it's already 12 here :]) :] (Sorry if my comments are soooo late, well, the reason is preeeeetty obvious isn't it :] ) hehe :] (http://i75.servimg.com/u/f75/15/95/51/13/th/2227_a10.gif) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=43&u=15955113)

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 >_< UPDATED!!!
Post by: bou-j525 on January 29, 2011, 07:42:19 PM

Quote from: Keichan ^_^ on January 29, 2011, 02:54:30 PM

ERGH!!! Really!!! Argh I can't read japanese though >_<!!!

Well on Stage48 Takamina thread (http://stage48.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=19&start=7050), Kanki's translating her blog post if ever you wanna see ^^ I linked to page 283, but there are blog post translated before too. And I know a bit Japanese, but not enough to teach you XD

On another note... YOU FREAKING UPDATE BEFORE I COULD POST ABOUT CHAPTER 6! I read chapter 6 yesterday and told me I would comment tomorrow because it was late and blablabla.... And you update chapter 7! I don't know if I should thank you forever or tell myself to not ever wait with your story XD

Anyways, chapter 6 was nice... except the part where Takamina's mum interrupted their cute and pervert moment.
And chapter 7 was sad... but it's cute to see they are together at the end  :wub: They are so cute worrying about the other ^^

And now... I'm waiting for your chapter 8... If I'm not wrong it will be updated tomorrow XD

P.S. totally agree, dark-atrox should update faster :P I'm not the best one to speak I know... But we are not talking about me now :P And anyways I'll update tonight so :P

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 ^_^; Chapter Seven!!!
Post by: mangobanana15 on January 30, 2011, 03:14:39 AM

Thanks for the fast updateeeeeeeee!!

this chapter was a bit sad but i'm glad they got out some of their frustrations during this

lol as if that annoying asshole and his equally annoying sister could every replace Takamina or Aachan  :smhid

awwwwwwwwwww that part where they hold each other in the arms  :)

I'll be waiting for your next update!

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 ^_^; Chapter Seven!!!
Post by: aoi_sora on January 30, 2011, 01:56:41 PM

Wow...... Already chapter 7....
 :bow:
Your a ninja keichan!!!

Who's that guy!!!!
 :angry:

Takacchan is super cute!
Hmmm.... About the new mendol movie....
Wild guess,,,, acchan is ray kouhai and kuu's love interest!!!!
Hahahahaha!
 :nervous
I can now see takamina's angry face!!!!

Anyways...... Thanks for updating so fast...

And.....

Can anyone please write a mayuki fanfic!!!!!! :nervous

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 ^_^; Chapter Seven!!!
Post by: Keichan ^_^ on January 31, 2011, 09:13:48 AM

Hey everyone thanks for all the replies and sorry for the late update....well late for me xD

Quote from: aoi_sora on January 30, 2011, 01:56:41 PM

Your a ninja keichan!!!
Hmmm.... About the new mendol movie....
Wild guess,,,, acchan is ray kouhai and kuu's love interest!!!!

Hehe...I enjoy the fact that you are guessing already...it has taken me 8 chapters and I still haven't finished writing about the events of a day and you are guessing about could be the far away future if it takes me this long to write each day! lol! Anyway I will try to update as quickly as possible for everyone!

Anywho! Hope you all enjoy this chapter...I didn't really like it as it was quite rushed and I'm 100% brain dead from work lately!

Chapter Eight

You know that saying “nothing ever lasts forever”? Well I’ll have to agree…

KNOCK KNOCK!

“Oi Minami! Acchan! Stop being anti-social and come out for dessert!”

My eye twitches upon hearing my brother’s stupid voice. I’m going to murder him….

“OI! CAN YOU HEAR ME?”

Turning I start screaming at the door.

“YES I CAN HEAR YOUR ANNOYING VOICE! YOU LITTLE PAIN IN T~”

Acchan covers my mouth giggling.

“Be nice to your brother. He must have been told to call us for dessert.”

Removing her hand from my mouth I sigh heavily. My fail at life expression slowly begins to take over my face.

“Why do you always help him…” I head bows down dejectedly. Wrapping her arms around my neck she moves up off my collar bone and rubs her nose against mine.

“Because I know deep down you love your brother….and as I said before I want your family to like me so of course I have to help out the younger sibling.” She smiles proudly with her eyes closed a slight blush on her cheeks. So cute…

“Fine…stick up for him all you want…but if you help him instead of me…hmmph!” I turn my head away pretending to be annoyed. She gently nibbles on my cheek bones. “Hey what are you doing?” I chuckle as I try to move away from her lips.

“I’m being affectionate!” She laughed as she continued to nibble me!

“How is this affectionate?” I giggled whilst trying to push her head away from mine. She stops and pouts at me.

“Well since you like cats so much I decided to nibble you like a cat does but it seems that you don’t even notice my efforts to please you!” I gently blush before cuddling her close.

“You so cute.”

“Hmmph!” she turns away.

“Aww you’re annoyed…Maybe I should act affectionate towards you like a puppy?” Although she’s turned away from me I can see the upturned corner of her mouth as she smiles upon hearing my words. Turning around she looks at me before moving closer to me.

“How are you gonna do that?” She says whilst pouting her lips out cheekily. I giggle gently.

“Like this!” Grabbing hold of her face I quickly lick the side of her face from her jaw up to the side of her brow earning a squeal from my victim. I quickly get up and start running towards the door. “DESSERT TIME!” I gets up off the ground giggling as I open the door and begin running out. Putting on an evil voice she yells from behind me.

“YOU ARE SO DEAD MISTER!!!”

(O_o)

Running into the living room my mum calls out to me.

“Your cake is in the kitchen”

“Thanks!” I quickly say before running into the kitchen. I hear as Acchan runs into the living room. Her footsteps slow down as she notices everyone already eating.

“Um…where did Takamina go?” My mum turns to her happily.

“She just ran into the kitchen to get your dessert”

“Thanks” Suddenly Acchan starts running towards the kitchen. I move behind the door, cake in hand. I hear as her footsteps closer get closer. She’s creeping towards the door.

“Takamina…where are you…” She begins to slowly creep into the kitchen. Looking around she can’t see me. She begins pouting until she hears me bump into the wall. Opening the door she smiles proudly as she sees me. “GOTCHA!” She begins jumps forward to grab me. However as a automatic survival reflex I smash the cake into her face.

SQUISH! ….

“Oh crap…” I freeze in horror my hands automatically retract back to me. My shoulders and hands flinch upwards as I retract my neck and my facial expression changes immediately to the “ugh” face if you get what I mean! Wiping the cream away from her eyes she glares at me. “Oh baby it wasn’t me I swear!” She stares at the cream on my finger tips and begins to move closer to me. “Ergh…” I begin looking for an escape route but to no avail. “It was a careless mistake! Careless! CARELESS!!” She grabs onto me and rubs her face against mine. Cream instantly covering my face. As she moves away she giggled whilst looking at me before saying.

“Oh honey…sorry I didn’t see you there! It was a CARELESS mistake!” She smirked at me cutely. Ergh I failed again… Moving forward I gently kiss her lips before licking some of the cream off her face.

“Woof! You taste nice” I say whilst I smile at her. Wrapping her arms around me she licked my cheek.

“Meow…you taste purrfect!” Blushing furiously I then begin to laugh at her.

“You are so lame!” Pouting at me and moves forwards and licks my nose.

“Only lame for you though…” I blush gently. “Gotta make you feel better about yourself every once in a while!” she giggled. I instantly look at her emotionlessly and sigh heavily. Holding me close and nibbling the cream off her face. “I love you so much taka-cake!”

Upon hearing footsteps coming towards us I quickly grab a paper towel and begin wiping the cream off Acchans face.

“What happened?” My mum stares at us from the doorway. Acchan gently blushes before holding onto my arm.

“Minami was being mean to me!” She instantly pouts.

“ERGH!!!” My eyes widen in shock.

“Minami! Be nice to Acchan! She’s a guest!” Sighing softly I bow my head down.

“Yes mum!”

“Now hurry up and clean yourselves up and join the group!”

Acchan smiles and cutely salutes to my mum. “HAI!”

“Aww you’re so cute Acchan!” I mum says gleefully holding her arms up against her cheeks.

Blushing gently Acchan grabs some paper towels and begins wiping my face for me.

(O_o)

After cleaning off the cream we walk out together towards the couches. Her arm tightly wrapped around mine and her head resting against mine.

“Acchan!” my brother calls out “Sit here!” he pats at the empty spot she was sitting at previously.

“No its okay Su-chan can sit there! I’ll sit on the ground with Minami” Still holding me tightly she sit down on the carpet. Our backs rested against the wall behind us, Acchan gently rests her head on my shoulder. We sat there listening to the conversation, whilst still whispering between ourselves. We didn’t care to look at Su-chan or Asshole. It didn’t matter if they were looking at us, or how they were looking at us. We were too busy looking at each other.

CURRENTLY IN ANOTHER HOUSEHOLD!

“Nehhhhhhhhh, Nyan Nyan!!! Let me hold them!”

“No!”

“Then…let my look at them!”

“No!”

“PWEASEEEEE!!!”

“NO!”

“But…”

“No buts!”

“Awww…..”

“Stop it”

“It’s so unfair!”

“Stop whinging!”

“Hmmph!” Yuko turned away pouting, resting her chin on her arms against the table.

“Don’t be like that!”

“But I want to see them”

“No! It’s embarrassing!”

“How is it?”

“It just is!”

“But you look so cute!”

“No I don’t!”

“You look cute to me!”

“You still don’t get to see them!”

“But Nyan Nyan I showed you mine!”

“I didn’t ask for you to show me!”

“That’s so unfair! I share everything with you!” Yuko pouts towards her Nyan Nyan, puppy eyes in full force. Feeling sorry and guilty Haruna finally obliges. Nodding towards her squirrel. “YES!” The squirrel squeals!

“WAIT!...Only with one condition!”

Yuko looks at her Nyan Nyan puzzled.

“You can’t tell anyone I showed you!”

“Of course not!!! I would never tell anyone!!”

“Promise?”

“Anything for my princess!”

“Okay… come over then...”

The squirrel quickly bounces across to sit next to her Nyan Nyan. Smiling from ear to ear from the excitement! As her Nyan Nyan turns towards her her eyes begin to beam with excitement!!

“Don’t laugh okay!”

“N-n-never!!”

“Okay…here you go…”

The squirrel quickly moves her arms towards her Nyan Nyan, hands trembling like crazy from the adrenaline upon seeing the gift before her.

“K-K-KAWAII!!!!!” She screams as she grabs onto her prize!

“Ergh!!! Keep quiet!!”

“O o o” The squirrel nods whilst still grinning like a massive pervert. As she looks at them tears begin to well up in her eyes! She can’t believe her Nyan Nyan finally let her hold them in her hands whilst looking at them.

“Neh!! Why are you looking at them like that!” Haruna says as she pouts at Yuko. Wiping away her tears and saliva Yuko quickly bows in apology.

“Sorry…I’m just…so happy.”

Haruna looks at her confused for a while before smiling tenderly towards her squirrel. Reaching out she pulls the other girl into her and hugs her tightly.

“Stop being a baby”

Holding her Nyan Nyan close Yuko blushes and nods as her head rests against the other girl’s chest.

“Mmm…”

After kissing the squirrels forehead the girl begins to move away.

“Okay that’s all you get to see today!”

“No0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o I didn’t even get time to look at them properly!”

“I don’t care!”

“But Nyan Nyan!!”

“You can look at them another time!”

Pouting at her Nyan Nyan she puts her hand infront of the other girls face, her pinkie finger outreached towards Haruna.

“Promise?”

Smiling at the gesture, Haruna wraps her pinkie around the other girls.

“Promise!”

Excitedly the squirrel bounces in her chair as the other girl begins to move away from the table.

“Where are you going?”

“Well I don’t want anyone else to see them!”

“Hehe I don’t get why you wouldn’t! They’re so cute!”

Pouting at the squirrel, Haruna replied.

“I don’t like people seeing my baby photos! They always talk about how big my ears are!”

TBC  :mon blblbl: IF YOU WERE THINKING SOMETHING DIRTY YOU SHOULD BE ASHAMED OF YOURSELF!!! jk jk Anyway sorry if this chapter was a bit boring lol my brain has been dead from working so much lately! Will make the next chapter better!

Quote from: dark-atrox on January 29, 2011, 03:23:12 PM

WAH! Where's my BEDROOM SCENE? 

Since you updated you may get your bedroom scene...key word: MAY!!!

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 >_< UPDATED!!!
Post by: dark-atrox on January 31, 2011, 09:41:28 AM

LOL I really thought Kojiharu was showing her precious prize to Korisu  :lol: :lol: :lol:
You really got me with that one, kei-chan  :P
Does that mean I have a perv mind?  :shocked :shocked :shocked
Nooooo :bleed eyes:

Well,  :yawn: if you won't write a BEDROOM SCENE with AtsuMina, then write one with KojiYuu  :lol: :lol: :lol:

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 >_< UPDATED!!!
Post by: RenaChii on January 31, 2011, 08:50:45 PM

KojiYuu~  :luvluv1:

Maybe . . . I'm a pervert too . . .  :shy1:

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 >_< UPDATED!!!
Post by: bou-j525 on January 31, 2011, 11:29:33 PM

^
If you two are pervert... I am too XD

Thank for the update! I lol'ed at the cake thing XD And of course, at the KojiYuu part XD

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 >_< UPDATED!!!
Post by: Airidoki on February 02, 2011, 01:42:53 AM

:hehehe: I'm a pervert too

Thank for the update!  :mon cute:

I really like   :mon thumb:

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 >_< UPDATED!!!
Post by: alexiel17 on February 02, 2011, 04:43:39 PM

This was my reaction when I haven't read ch. 8 yet......  and seeing the other readers' posts here....
 
"Tsk tsk tsk..  :smhid people nowadays saying what's on their mind....  :smhid Saying that they're pervs out loud...  tsk, tsk, tsk... no shame...  :smhid

After reading the chapter....  :lol:

"WTH!!!!???  :scolding: Why is there no BED ROOM SCENE BETWEEN THE KOJIYUU PAIR!!!!!"  :mon headbang:  hehehehe   :on lol:

*ehem*  :mon sweat: umm... I mean, umm... thanks so much for the update?  :on ksweat: (that's really it...  :mon lol:)
 I was like O.O  :mon closeup:  what are those two doing, and then it hit me...  (http://i75.servimg.com/u/f75/15/95/51/13/th/beat_s10.png) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=49&u=15955113) really hard...  :mon bleed2: hehehe...  :grin:
Is it my fault? :mon innocent: It's the way you wrote it, really...  :mon impatient: What do you think we'd imagine with those words you'd use..  :mon huh2: It's not our fault, right?  :yep: hehehe :]
But really, if you're not gonna create a BED scene between the Takacchan pair, then create one for the Kojiyuu instead... (since they're my favorite and all... hehehe... Me head is already imagini'n it...  :drool:  )  Oh, sh*t my image  :gyaaah:
Hmmm...  :mon dunno: but if everyone, as in everyone is saying that they're perv,  then I should at least do the sa..... OH WAIT, my image!!!!   :mon ghost:
No, just joking, I'm not gonna say that I'm a perv... nope, not even a bit..  well, maybe a little... hehehe... NO REALLY I"M NOT A YADONG, HENTAI, PERVERTED FREAK!!! (I'm breaking the chain, people!!! hehehe...  :lol: :lol: ) there goes my image for the 3rd time... :banghead: I give up...  :mon surr: (http://i75.servimg.com/u/f75/15/95/51/13/th/bg00510.gif) (http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=50&u=15955113)
But really, Keichan ^_^ san thanks soo much for the story :]  Pls. continue updating like a ninja :]
YEY finally I'd post in time  :mon fyeah: :]

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 >_< no nose bleeds please!
Post by: Keichan ^_^ on February 03, 2011, 02:41:41 PM

 :mon geek: HENTAI! ~points at dark-atrox~
 :mon suspect: ECCHI! ~points at RenaChii~
 :mon wtfmm: PERVERT! ~points at bou-j525~
 :mon unsure: SLEAZE! ~points at Airidoki~
 :mon slapself: YADONG! ~points at alexiel17~
Lol! sorry! anyway sorry! but you can imagine all you want ahahahaha that was my aim! lol....
Anyway here is the next chapter, its quite small sorry, didnt feel too comfortable writing it!

Chapter Nine

“I don’t want to be out here” She gently whispers in my ear. “Let’s go back to your room”. I turn and look at her.

“I want to go as well but my mum will yell at us afterwards for being rude.” She pouts at me.

“Can’t we just tell her we ha a long day and we’re exhausted?”

However before I could reply I heard Loud-chan’s voice.

“WELL IT’S GETTING LATE! We should head home!”

A giant smile appears on Acchan’s face as she begins to shake my hand in excitement. I smile at her, she’s just so cute… As we walk the guests towards the door Acchan gently nudges her hip against mine whilst gently giggling.

“Why are you so excited?” I say to her softly so nobody else could hear. Leaning into me smiling she whispers into my ear.

“Because very soon I’ll be straddling you again!” I immediately stop walking. My eyes widen as I stare at her….did she just say what I think she said? Laughing at my expression she quickly adds “Just joking!”

“Er…d-don’t say things like that!” Looking away awkwardly I begin to fidget with my shirt, well her shirt… wrapping her arms around my neck she smiles at me.

“You’re so cute…”

“Tsk…” I turn away

“I mean it” Before I could tell her I thought the same way about her the asshole yelled over to Acchan making both of us stare at him.

“MAEDA-CHAN!”

I look at him emotionlessly…dickhead! Acchan looks at him awkwardly with her head tilted whilst still wrapping her arms around my neck.

“I drove here alone, so I can take you home! It’s dangerous for such a cute girl like you to go home alone” He said proudly with a smirk. Stupid pervert trying to take my girl from me… I’ll punch that grin off his face! Cuddling my into her chest she smiles at him.

“Sorry but I’m fine thank you. I’m staying here tonight so Takamina can protect me.”

Looking at me annoyed he turned back to face her.

“How can she protect you? She’s a girl and she’s shorter than you as well…”

I was about to push myself away from Acchan and belt him down to show him that I could drop him one, however…

“She can protect me more than you ever could” She smiled proudly. Mean while our parents were watching this scene in awe. They couldn’t yell at either of us for being rude, well if I was rude I would get yelled at. But Acchan was innocent, and the asshole is like his family’s treasure so they aren’t going to belt him for being the dickhead he is! He’s grin widened.

“Pfft! Oh come on babe everyone here knows I could protect you more than she could! Don’t embarrass her more than you have!”

My blood was boiling… I’m going to murder him…

“You would never understand!” She grinned at him. “Your heads too far up your~” I quickly covered her mouth.

“What did you say?” He asked her with a raised eyebrow. Turning to look at his retarded face I slowly begin to cast a serious expression on my face, getting yelled at by mum didn’t matter, I had to protect my girlfriend.

“You can’t be serious!” I tilt my head in disgust. “Not only do you have an oversized head that looks out of proportion, but it’s thick and hollow as well.”

“What did you say you little bitch?” He moves forward from the door.

“Tsk...” I turn to look to the side.  “I’m saying that you’re brainless, most likely dumber than a baby.  Are you that stupid that you can’t see she’s not the slightest bit interested in you!”

As he moves towards me I quickly push Acchan away from me, I don’t want her to get hurt. As he moves forward to grab onto my shirt I quickly hit his hand away.

“Hmmph, so not only are you dumb, you’re a pervert who tries to grab a girls chest?”

“Bitch!” He tries to punch me in the face, I quickly move away and elbow him in the face whilst he’s in motion. I feel as the cartilage in his nose makes a popping sound. “ARGH!” I holds onto his nose as I move away standing in front of Acchan to make sure she’s okay. She quickly grabs hold of my arm to make sure I’m okay as the asshole’s mum and sister run up to him to make sure he’s okay. My mum rushes over to check up on me, whereas my dad begins to apologise to his friend. My brother on the other hand bends over and laughs at the guy on the ground. Acchan rubs my arm gently, she pouts sadly at me.

“What’s wrong?”

As she begins to reply she’s cut-off by an angry Loud-chan.

“HOW DARE YOU HIT MY SON!”

I turn and watch as she storms towards me. However before I could move forward and yell back at her my mum moves in front of me.

“HOW DARE YOU YELL AT MY DAUGHTER AFTER YOUR SON TRIES TO HIT HER! IF YOU DON’T LEAVE MY HOUSE IMMEDIATELY I WILL CALL THE POLICE AND MY LAWYER AND SAY YOUR SON TRIED TO PHYSICALLY ASSUALT MY DAUGHTER!” Before Loud-chan can respond my mum continues. “DON’T SAY SOMETHING STUPID LIKE ‘OKAY FINE CALL THEM BUT MY SON IS THE ONE WHO IS HURT’ OH NO DON’T YOU EVEN DARE! MY DAUGHTER DID IT IN SELF-DEFENSE BECAUSE YOUR SPOILT LITTLE SHIT OF A SON IS SO FUCKED UP HER PICKS FIGHTS WITH A GIRL! HE MIGHT BE A RISING STAR FOR THE LAST MONTH BUT YOU START SHIT WITH ME AND HE’LL BE A RUINED IN AN INSTANT!” Loud-chan immediately grinds her teeth in anger, turns away, picks up her son and storms out of the house with him. Su-chan bows apologetically and follows her mother, whereas Ishihara-san walks over to me and apologises to all of us for his son’s behaviour. My father then follows him and closes the door. I finally sigh in relief. I feel as my mum hugs tightly onto my small body.

“My little girl is finally growing up! Standing up for herself and her friends!” Tears begin to stream down her face.

“Muuuuuuuuuuum get off meeeeee!” I begin to whine. Acchan stands beside me giggling gently.

(O_o)

After my mother finally let go of me Acchan and I went back to my room. Flopping forward on top of my bed I feel the bed move as Acchan moves down next to me. Moving across she gently kisses my elbow a few times before resting her head against my back. Slowly she moves her fingers over my elbow. Looking over my shoulder at her I watch as her eyes move from staring at my elbow to my eyes. Smiling gently she moves up and kisses my shoulder blade. I can’t help smirk at her before leaning back to kiss her forehead.

“Sorry for scaring you…”

Smiling at me she moves forward and kisses my cheek.

“It’s okay…thanks for protecting me…”

Turning away in embarrassment I begin to blush.

“It was nothing…just a reflex…that’s all…”

“Why are you always so modest?”

“I’m not!”

“You so are!” she giggled.

“Hmmph!” I turn away. Moving up close against me she kisses me underneath my ear.

“Neh…Minami…” I move away as her lips tickle me. Sliding her arms underneath me she pulls her body against mine. I move to look at her whilst pouting. She giggles upon seeing my pout and kisses my lips gently before moving down to nibble my neck. My body begins to quiver upon her soft touch. “…you don’t even want to know how you make me feel right now…” I gulp slowly. Gently running her nose against my neck her hot breath melts my skin. “…all I want to do is…” she gently kissed my collar bone, “…please you…”
I feel as a rush of shyness streams through my body.

“A-a-acchan!” I turn away. Holding me close she rests her head near mine.

“I mean it…I would do anything for you…” I look down at her, her eyes looked so soft, they were subtly drawing me into her….and before I knew it I had already kissed her.

 I pull her close to me, my hand moving along her waist. Her body seemed so delicate in my arms. I feel as her arms move up and around my neck.  As her lips press harder onto mine I feel as her stomach grinds against me. Our legs become tangled, our movements are ambiguous, unsynchronised. Each time I go to kiss her I feel her move away, yet after I move back she comes in for a kiss. Frustration. All I can hear is her heavy breathing. All I can see is a blur. All I can feel is pure bliss. And all I know is I want her. I feel as my hands move her shirt up, she gently bites my lip as she feels the cool touch of my stomach against hers.

 I begin to feast upon her neck. Her skin so smooth Her scent so sweet. Her gentle moans piercing my ears as I push on top of her. My hands guide her shirt off. Her soft white skin which is now pressed up against me makes me shake.  Moving down I gently plant kisses along her chest as she pulls my shirt off and throws it over the edge of the bed. My body seems to move on its own. My hands subconsciously pull away her skirt as my lips gently caress her navel. I feel as her hands move through my hair, her voice gently moaning my name. As I begin to move lower I suddenly feel her hands tighten around my neck. She begins to pull me back up. As my body moves up against hers I feel as her legs wrap around my body. My body quivers gently upon realising the only thing separating us is our underwear and my shorts. I feel as she pushes my shorts down. My legs automatically kicking them off. She pulls me into a bruising kiss. Her tongue tracing against the edge of my lips.

Suddenly she becomes gentle. She holds me close against her. I open my eyes and find myself looking into hers. She smiles at me and I can feel as my lips forms one itself. She gently kisses me and wraps her arms around me. My arms reciprocate the gesture. We lay there, not speaking, not moving, just understanding… We both knew we weren’t ready for this next step yet.

TBC!!!! Sorry guys i really dont feel comfortable writing the bedroom scene at all! lol....maybe someone else can write it for me!!!!
Lol gomen!!!

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 >_< no nose bleeds please!
Post by: riama on February 03, 2011, 04:09:05 PM

wow,I love this!Please more Kojiyuu!!

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 >_< no nose bleeds please!
Post by: dark-atrox on February 03, 2011, 04:18:08 PM

Kei-chan, you chickened out writing the interesting parts!  :smhid :smhid :smhid

*so you know what i felt now, eh? ;)* that's why i can't deliberately say yes to your request  :nervous
and i ended up staying late again cause of you  :smhid jk

Minami should've pummeled down the asshole though!

PS: More bed scenes when you're up to it  ;) ;) ;)
*glad u continued writing this one  XD XD XD*

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 >_< no nose bleeds please!
Post by: mangobanana15 on February 04, 2011, 02:44:39 AM

Thanks for updating!!

hahahaha glad that stupid flirt got some punishment for even trying to make a move on Aachan  :twisted:

Woahhhh Takamina's mom totally burned his mom!!!  :twothumbs don't mess with the Takahashi family!

you totally left us hanging but that's alright if you don't feel comfortable writing it, the Takaachan moments is still amazing and adorable  :)

Update soon!

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 >_< no nose bleeds please!
Post by: bou-j525 on February 04, 2011, 04:06:54 AM

Awww that was cute  :wub:
Hehe don't worry for the rest of the bed scene or anything about it, I don't feel comfortable writing AND reading them so XD I'm not as pervert as you think I might be XD

Already waiting for the next update!!!

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 >_< no nose bleeds please!
Post by: alexiel17 on February 05, 2011, 10:06:57 AM

Keichan ^_^ san!!  :mon hi: It's really ok if you can't write "those" kind of scenes... (you know what I'm talking about :])
Anyway, the truth is, I really can't read those stuffs... (yet... hehehe)
That's why when I'm reading your fic especially with the Takacchan parts when they’re expressing their "love" I'm like :on freeze: Really, I'm still a bit embarrassed 'bout those things....   :mon sweat:

Anyway, I'm just really joking 'bout my last post and all... (since I'm not really comfortable reading those kinds of stuff... hehehe  :lol:) Umm.... I really don't mind if you can't write bed scenes since it doesn’t make you comfy  :P

Umm.. just like what bou-j525 san said, we are not as pervert (in my case I'm not a Yadong Freak!)  as you think we are... :]

Just wondering, why did you use :mon slapself: for pointing at me? Am I the worst? :gmon tears:  (doing that "puppy eye dog look" right now...  :mon hanky: :cry: )
I'm not really a Yadong!!!  :tantrum:  :mon whine: huhuhu....  Hope this comment would prove it to you....   :mon nyah:
Anyho, pls. continue this and I hope more Kojiyuu next time!!  :mon roll: :]

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 >_< no nose bleeds please!
Post by: riama on February 05, 2011, 05:25:12 PM

I lol'ed so hard when you said that you're not comfortable writing the bed scenes. (http://laymark.com/i/m/m009.gif)
Well we don't really mind,you started it so you better continue (http://laymark.com/i/m/m179.gif)
and please more KojiYuu (http://laymark.com/i/m/m107.gif)


P.S. I LOVE THESE MONKEY EMOTICONS.

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 >_< no nose bleeds please!
Post by: sorakamiya on February 06, 2011, 12:30:44 AM

yeeeeaaaaaaay.....another update...  :cow: :cow: :cow: thanks keichan.... i curious with the next chapter... what will happend...?  :panic: :panic: :panic: how taka will handle acchan and how acchan will handle taka now in the mendol shooting... ??  :grin: :grin: since they in the max tenshion of jealousy...  XD XD will wait for your update...  :thumbsup :thumbsup :thumbsup

btw there wasn't my name so i'm not pervet or etc...  :lol: :lol: XD

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 >_< no nose bleeds please!
Post by: Keichan ^_^ on February 11, 2011, 08:10:24 AM

Hey guys so so so so so so so SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Sorry I haven't kept up with the fast updateness! Been flat out with work and everything else! GOMEN!!!
@ riama: hehe give me time i will work on it!
@ dark-atrox: ....hentai! you and that perverted wink all time!
@ mangobanana15: hehe yes takahashi family may be tiny but deadly...ninja!
@ bou-j525: hehe thanks for not pushing the bed scene! unlike someone.... -glares at dark-atrox-
@ alexiel17: sorry for calling you an yadong! hehe and i didnt mean to put that monkey for you! but it was cute ^_^ ahaha
@ sorakamiya: mwahaha I shall keep you intrigued as to what will happen during the shooting!!

Anyway since i have been so flat out i just finished work and pushed out a chapter for you guys! So here it is and hope its alright although its rushed!

Chapter Ten

So…nothing happened last night… well something did but not the something that most people may be thinking. However I felt that is was close enough to the other something! Well okay maybe totally different but it still involves a certain pervert getting naked and trying to get me naked. Acchan tried to get us to bathe together again… I guess it ended with me crying whilst holding onto the door whilst Acchan who was naked was trying to pull me into my bathroom.

No we weren’t in the hallway! That’ll just give my family a reason to flood the house with blood from their bleeding nose. I actually live in the main bedroom with the ensuite. This is because mum and dad got sick of me walking around in the hallway and bumping into things early in the morning to get ready for work! The only reason Acchan let me go was because my brother knocked on the door to see if we were alright because I was screaming so loud that it most likely interrupted his “special touchy touchy self time!”….gag! or he heard why I was screaming and wanted to see Acchan naked….idiot… anyway once he knocked on the door Acchan bolted into the bathroom as she forgot the door was locked and thought my brother would walk in on her.

I took the opportunity to grab my clothes and use the other bathroom quickly. Of course when I returned to my bedroom Acchan was pouting at me whilst sitting up in bed and then decided to guilt trip me by ignoring me when I got into bed. Although I did attempt to cuddle her she simply held onto my head and kept me at an arms length away…well her arms length is longer than mine so I couldn’t touch her….fail…

I wish I was taller….i guess that’s why I want to be Luffy….all he has to do is hell a few words and POW! He’s body becomes longer….argh…life is hard…I guess I will just continue to dress as Chopper….although when I’m angry I still remain the same height…but people at least respect me a bit more! In the end I just sighed and fell back against the pillow to go to bed. Who knew the saying “Be mean, keep them keen” was true because once I did that guess which little pervert instantly clung onto me again because they thought I was angry at them….Acchan of course….wouldn’t let anyone else hold me like she does.

Today was the first time Acchan woke up before me….when I say first I mean FIRST! She even woke me up….by grabbing hold of my nose and covering my mouth so I couldn’t breathe… it’s like she wants to kill me every morning I swear, first drowning now suffocation! Tomorrow she might stab me and think I’ll come back alive again!

Anyway we are currently at the theatre practising. I’m practising the dance to Beginner in front of the mirror whereas Acchan is chatting with Haruna on the seat. I tried calling her over before but she told me she couldn’t start yet because she was too bloated from breakfast…I can’t complain because my mum did seem to increase the breakfast size to three times our normal amount for Acchan who gobbled it down quickly. How does she still have such a nice figure….ergh shit dirty thoughts…back to dance practice Takamina!!!

After three and a half hours of practice I decided it was time for a break. Everyone seemed to be thoroughly exhausted and most were complaining that they were hungry and out of energy. Maybe I do work them too hard. However I guess you need to work this hard in order to perform well enough for our supporters!

“Okay guys we will have a two hour break for lunch!”

The girls instantly squealed in excitement. Some instantly ran out of the room to grab their bags whereas the rest seemed to congregate into small groups to decide where to go for lunch whilst the rest dropped to the ground instantly to lie down for a quick recovery snooze. Wiping the sweat off my face with my towel I began to walk towards my bag to get a drink of water.

“Oi Takamina!!” I turned around after grabbing my water bottle. Haruna was walking towards me with Yuko tightly attached to her arm. We’ve decided to go to gyoza shop down the road for lunch, grab your bag.

“Oh, okay…” Grabbing my bag quickly I started following the couple in front of me. “Who’s us?”

Walking through the door I noticed a group of girls standing there waiting. Our lunch group today consists of Mariko, Sae, Sayaka, Miichan, Yuko, Haruna and Acchan. We began walking down the path together towards the gyoza shop. Mariko, Acchan and Haruna were chatting amongst themselves about the latest gossip in the magazines, Miichan, Yuko and Sae were acting like kids and running around playfully trying to jump over random objects left on the path. I on the other hand was engaging in a serious conversation with Sayaka about the dance routine. Although Sayaka resigned as Captain of Team K, I still acknowledged her as a captain. When we reached the shop we quickly sat down to order our food. At the table Sae, Sayaka, myself and Acchan sat on one side, whereas Mariko sat across from Acchan followed by Haruna, Yuko and Miichan.

“Egh…Takamina why are you sitting there?” Mariko asked in a surprised tone. I looked at where I was positioned and stared back at her blankly as I didn’t understand what the problem was. Snickering at me she continued. “Acchan, Kojiharu and I are discussing lingerie at the moment”

“Er… so?” I raised an eyebrow at her as a smirk began to appear on her face, leaning over and resting her chin on her palm she says.
“Well don’t you think that when girls talk about lingerie they don’t want a man listening in on their conversation?”

As everyone at the table began to chuckle I glared towards the old lady as she continued to grin at me. Miichan quickly added her input making the situation worse.
“Er!! You guys don’t know yet do you!! Yesterday Takamina dragged Acchan into a change room to watch her change into a SEXY bra!!!

“So desu ka?” Mariko asked quickly with a shocked face.

“Mmm!!!” Haruna began nodding. “Takamina is secretly a massive male hentai! Poor acchan was victimised!”

My mouth dropped open as Mariko began nodding whilst looking at Acchan, who was blushing furiously and me, who looked like a train had run over my face. Sae and Sayaka just smirked whilst chuckling and whispering between themselves. Suddenly Yuko intervened.

“Stop picking on Takamina!” Everyone went quiet as I began to nod towards Yuko. Finally someone on my side! “It’s not her fault she was born a pervert!” A trickle of sweat went down the side of my brow as my eye twitched. “It’s a gift from god…and Acchan willingly showed her boobies to Takamina” I think I just got shot in the forehead. Everyone at the table began to laugh again whilst Acchan began clinging to my arm shyly, her cheek against my shoulder.

“Neh…Acchan could this be true?” Mariko asked with a smirk. Acchan didn’t say a word and just remained pressed up against my arm with a cheeky grin on her face. “Aww….must be!” She winked at me. “Takamina finally showing her true male self!”

“Shut up!” I glared at her intently. Acchan quickly held onto my arm. Looking down at her she quickly shook her head at me. Pouting at her I sighed. “Sorry Mariko, but you have to stop teasing me”

Although Mariko was a bit taken aback by my brash words she casually shrugged.

“It’s okay, maybe you just didn’t get any action last night.”

My eyes popped out as Miichan added.

“Yeah sexual frustration”

“You can’t be that horny can you Takamina?” Sae asked.

“Don’t ask her such an open question!” Sayaka quickly intervened.

Yuko on the other hand held onto Haruan tightly.

“I’m extremely sexually frustrated because Nyan-Nyan won’t touch me the way I touch her… but its ok because I still get to touch her…sometimes.” Everyone looked at Yuko in disbelief of her openness, Haruna just sat there blushing and playfully hitting Yuko.
 
“Maybe Acchan just doesn’t let Takamina touch her enough!”

Everyone turned and looked at Acchan who was still clinging to my arm whilst rested her cheek on my shoulder. Noticing all the attention on her she smiled and turned to look at me in a dreamy gaze.

“Takamina loves me and is very gentleman like.” She slid her fingers in between mine. “She wouldn’t be perverted towards me unless I let her or initiate it!”

“ER!!!!!” Everyone moved back against their seats. Mariko quickly bent forward whilst looking at Acchan with a shocked expression.
“So he hasn’t tried to touch you?”

“HEY YOU CALLING HE!” I said angrily.

“Did she ask to touch your boobs?” Miichan bent in to ask.

“DID SHE GET TO TOUCH THEM? WHAT DO THEY FEEL LIKE?” Yuko quickly added before getting hit by Haruna.

Acchan placed her finger on her bottom lip and thought for a while. Moving her hand away she smiled.

“She’s touched them but she never asked!”

Sayaka quickly hit me! “TAKAMINA!”

“ITAI!”

Quickly pulling me close to her and rubbing my arm Acchan pouted at Sayaka.

“Don’t hit her! It was my fault!”

All the girls stared at Acchan in shock.

“Acchan… you really are the perv…” Mariko said slowly before bowing at me apologetically. Acchan just smiled happily whilst holding me close.

“Minami would never force me to do anything I didn’t want to.” Remembering the events of the night before Acchan quickly kissed my cheek. I blushed furiously.

“ITAI!!!” We all looked over at the screaming squirrel. Haruna was pinching her arm.

“Why can’t you be like Takamina!”

“Nehhhhhh…Nyan-Nyan” Yuko pouted at Haruna sadly as the girls shook their head at Yuko.

(O_o)

Later on that day after we had finished practice Miichan quickly ran up to me.

“Takaminaaaaaaaaa” She quickly pulled me into a tight hug. “Are you excited for tomorrow?????” She grinned at me excessively.
“Tomorrow?”

“Yeah! We get to meet the Mendol cast again and find out what the movie is about!!!! Oo0o0o0o0o0o do you think that maybe Acchan will be your new love interest? Then the entire world will know!” I blushed before pushing her off me.

“Ergh get off!”

“Hehehe or maybe… I get to have her as MY love interest because I don’t have one anymore”

I quickly glare at her.

“You better not kiss her!”

She shrugs innocently.

“Takamina the storyline is out of my control! It’s not like I can stop Ray from kissing Kai’s character” She smirked at me evilly. I had forgotten that I had to kiss someone as well… stupid writers better not make up some storyline that will end in me getting yelled at by Acchan after work everyday!

“Fine. Whatever happens in the course of fliming happens….but afterwards….don’t even think about it!”

“Hey you can’t yell at me! Remember Acchan is MARRIED to ME! NOT YOU!!!” Miichan quickly poked her tongue out. Before I could move in to strangle her I felt as Acchan’s arms wrapped around my waist.

“Why do you look so cranky?” Turning around to look at her I pout sadly.

“You’re holding onto the wrong person, your husband is over there” I pointed over to Miichan who smiled brightly and waved. Acchan giggled and waved back at her before whispering into my ear.

“I don’t want my husband. I want my lover.” She gently nibbled my earlobe. Giggling gently I held onto her hands and began moving.
“Are you sure you want to nibble me, I’m salty and sweaty.”

“Mmhmm”

“What do you want for dinner?”

“KOREAN HOT POT!!!!” Miichan yelled loudly.

“I want to come!!!” Mariko quickly ran over.

“Me too!!!” Tomochin added whilst quickly catching up to Mariko.

Miichan smiled brightly.

“YAY! Takamina’s shout!” Before I could intervene I was cut off by Mariko and Tomochin.

“Thank you Takamina” I smile at them politely before glaring at Miichan.

“You’re so nice” Acchan whispered into my ear before kissing my cheek. Moving off me she then grabs onto my hand before she begins walking. “Okay let’s go!” She smiled at me. I sigh deeply. I’ll do anything to keep a smile on her face.

Nothing happened during dinner, we all just chatted about random things however somewhere across town a small argument was erupting…

TBC!!!!!

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 >_< no nose bleeds please!
Post by: mangobanana15 on February 11, 2011, 08:58:41 AM

LOL poor Takamina was getting accused of being a pervert towards Aachan

I'm totally lovin all the Takaachan moments they are just too sweet to each other. even Haruna is jealous of Takamina being such a nice "boyfriend" :twothumbs

I am very curious what role Aachan has in the movie. also that small arguement at the end. i hope it will be revealed soon!  :?

Update as soon as you can! :)

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 >_< no nose bleeds please!
Post by: bou-j525 on February 11, 2011, 08:27:48 PM

Quote from: Keichan ^_^ on February 11, 2011, 08:10:24 AM

“Why can’t you be like Takamina!”

Because KojiYuu would not be as funny as it is now XD

Thank for the update!  :cow: That was really funny, especially with Takamina being a pervert XD
What is the "argument"? I have the feelings Acchan will play Kuu's lover in the movie XD Or maybe I'm wrong, but I like to this it is XD

Update when you have time, don't worry about it! Though I like when you're a ninja  :roll:

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 Updated wahhhhhhhh
Post by: sorakamiya on February 12, 2011, 08:13:22 AM

 :shocked :shocked :shocked yeaaaaaaaah.... finally u update keichan...  :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: i've been waiting for long...  :cry: XD

well, after reading chapter 10 i have a lot of speculation.. what will happend in the shooting ...  8) 8) one of it same as bou-j525  XD

but acchan also could be the third person in the dorama or even they would feel lot of jealousy during the shooting???   XD XD thinking about this really exciting  :lol: :lol: please update as soon as u can...  :bow: :bow: u are the ninja...  :thumbsup :thumbsup

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 Updated wahhhhhhhh
Post by: Keichan ^_^ on February 16, 2011, 02:11:14 AM

Hello! Hope everyone had a wonderful Valentine's Day!
@mangobanana15: Thanks for reading! I will hopefully reveal the Mendol plot next chapter!!!
@bou-j525: Haha I don't know if its really an argument but hopefully this will answer your questions! (Update your fic so you can answer my questions!!)
@sorakamiya: Sorry for the late update and making you wait! I will try to get back to my ninja ways!! gomen!

Anyway thanks for reading everyone! Here is a new update and hopefully it keeps you intrigued!!!!!

Chapter Eleven

“Why are you angry at me?” The girl didn’t receive an answer. “Did I do something wrong?” The other girl remained silent. “Please speak to me” Still no reply. “Fine, don’t talk to me anymore! I don’t care!” The girl began grabbing her belongings until she felt the other girls arm wrap around her from behind.

“D-d-d-don’t g-g-go, I-I-I d-d-don’t w-want t-to l-lose y-y-you.”

The taller girl immediately turned around to face the other girl. Lifting the other girls chin up she notices tears trickling out of the girl’s reddened eyes and down her cheeks. Why was she crying? Why did she think she was going to lose her? Hugging onto the smaller girl tightly she rested her cheek against the other girl’s forehead.

“Why do you think you’re going to lose me?”

The other girl tightened her hold of the taller girl, snuggling close against her soft body. Wiping her tears away whilst rubbing her face against the other girl’s chest, feeling the warmth of the body she was up against.

“They’re going to seduce you, and you wouldn’t want me anymore.”

Comforting the girl by stroking her finger through her hair and gently laying a kiss on her forehead she gently whispered into the other girl’s ear.

“Who is going to seduce me? You spend the entire day seducing me so when is there time for anyone else?”

The shorter girl looked up at the other girl.

“But we won’t be together for the next few days.” Looking back down she continued softly in a heartbroken voice. “You’ll be with them…”

Confused the taller girl wiped away the other girl’s tears.

“I don’t understand what you’re saying but I’ve got my mind set on being with you so you don’t have to worry”

The other girl immediately bounced up happily. Holding onto the other girls shoulders.

“REALLY?!?!?! Y-you mean that!”

Giggling softly the girl nodded gently.

“Mmm… As long as you don’t flirt with anyone else… or I’ll dump you immediately!” She pouted sadly thinking about how long it has taken for them to be together because the other girl was such as serial perverted flirt with everyone.

The other girl wrapped her arms around her neck and kissed her softly on the lips. Pushing her down onto the couch, the smaller girl sat on the other girls lap facing her.

“I would never flirt with anyone else now that I’ve got you” The other girl blushed and looked to the side, trying hard not to be affected by the girl’s sweet words. Noticing this, the smaller girl gently brushed aside the other girls fringe before gently caressing the girls cheek with her hand. “I mean everything I say to you. I love you too much to hurt you. Every time you reject me to be with someone else I cry” Looking down sadly she continued. “That’s why I’m so scared that the boys will flirt with you when you’re filming…”

The other girl finally understood. Yuko would be busy with rehearsals and shows and wouldn’t be around when she was filming Mendol. Yuko was scared that Kawano-san will try to flirt with her when they were alone on set. Cuddling tightly onto her squirrel she kissed her gently.

“You don’t have to worry about them, I told you I just want to be with you”

The squirrel looked up at her Nyan-Nyan, she was absolutely speechless. Her heart beating a soft rhythm… she was in love with her princess and now she knows that her princess is in love with her. Cuddling tightly against the other girl’s chest she smiled brightly.

“I love you Nyan-Nyan! You’re the best!”

Haruna lightly giggled before holding the squirrel tightly against her whilst nodding.”

“Mmm…” The squirrel turned and looked at her wide-eyed. “What’s wrong?”

Pouting at her Nyan-Nyan the squirrel replied sadly.

“You didn’t say you love me back, you just agreed that I love you and that you’re the best”

Hitting Yuko over the head as her left eye twitched furiously.

“You always ruin the moment! Why can’t you tell that I was reciprocating your feelings!”

Yuko rubbed her head and then smiled brightly.

“Because you’re a Tsunade! No one can tell how you feel unless you tell them!” Haruna pouted and crossed her arm across her chest. The squirrel smiled and cuddled her Nyan-Nyan close. “It’s okay though I love you like this.” Haruna blushed. “Reminds me of them S&M couples and I’m definitely the S!!!!” Haruna immediately began slapping the squirrel furiously.

“Get off me you Hentai!!!”

“ITAI!!!” Despite the pain the squirrel continuously tried to snuggle close to her Nyan-Nyan. It was worth it, they always say “Love Hurts” and for Yuko, it literally does right now!

(O_o)

Today was the day. Mendol cast meeting. I lie awake in bed. I couldn’t sleep most of the night. Instead I watched Acchan sleep soundly next to me. She stayed over again. After Korean Hotpot we got home in time to watch AKBingo with my family. It was nice to watch it together as we both didn’t get time to participate in it. I’ve got a feeling my mum is starting to pick up on the fact that Acchan and I are together.

She was watching us intently when Acchan was lying on top of me, playing with my fingers and telling me how cute I was when I laughed. Or maybe I’m just paranoid. I’m really not sure. How would my family feel if they found out about us. I know for a fact my brother will be so devastated to the extent he might cry himself to sleep. If not he might dress up in my clothes in the hope that Acchan will mistake him for me and kiss him… I have a really weird brother… I’m more scared about how my mum and dad would feel. They have always supported me no matter what. But mum and dad always judge my brother’s girlfriends and always tell me to find a nice guy once I graduate from AKB48. Although mum does always tell my brother to find a nice girl like Acchan… maybe they wouldn’t mind if I was the one to date Acchan instead of my brother. Acchan usually laughs off the idea about being with my brother when my mum brings it up… I just didn’t understand until the other day that the reason she must’ve done it was because she was in love with me. How would they feel…

After watching AKBingo we played the PS3 together. The entire time I was playing Acchan would remain lying on top of me across the couch. Her head rested on my chest. She would sit there supporting me the entire time. Whenever the game was loading she would look up at me intimately and play with my hands and fingers. She looked so cute… I wanted to kiss her the entire time. In addition, Acchan isn’t really good at video games so I had to teach her. She would sit up in between my legs and I would hold onto her hands whilst they were on the control to teach her what to do. Her body warmth, her scent, how she makes me feel is so hard to explain. I just want to be with her for eternity.

When we got tired of playing the PS3 with my brother and father we excused ourselves to go to bed. Mum asked if we needed the futon and when Acchan replied that we didn’t mum looked at us with a small grin. Acchan told me I was just being paranoid about it. But I’m not so sure. Would my parents accept that I’m an L? I guess I’ll think about it another time… my princess is waking up now…

I gently brush the sleep out of her eyes as she stares at me with her beautiful eyes. She reaches up and holds onto my hand, pulling it close to her chest. She gently yawns and stretches out her other arm. Moving forward afterwards to snuggle close against me and press her lips gently against mine for a morning kiss.

“Morning Minami”

“Morning Atsuko”

She smiles brightly at me and kisses me again.

“How was your sleep?”

“Not as good as yours”

She looked at me pouting.

“Did I keep you awake?”

I smile softly at her.

“Mmhmm”

“I’m sorry” She looks at me slightly distressed. “I didn’t know I snore”

Chuckling at her remark I begin to shake my head before kissing her on the cheek softly.

“I never said you snored! It’s just that you look so beautiful when you sleep that I couldn’t stop staring at you”

Despite the darkness of the room due to the closed blinds I could see a red tinge cast across her cheeks. She moved forward and slowly pulled me into an intense session of French kissing. As she moved away we both slowly recovered our breath.

“I love you so much Minami” She slowly moved my hand closer to her chest. I could feel heart beat. Gently caressing her cheek with my other hand I move in to kiss her soft lips again.

“I love you more than Katsudon…”

“NEH!!!!!!!!” She scrunched up her face annoyed that I had ruined the mood.

“What???”

“Hmmph!!” She began to move away from me. I quickly moved across the mattress and spooned her from behind.

“You know how much I love my mum’s katsudon! If I love you more than that then you must be the most important person in my life”

She stopped moving and turned around to face me, looking at me intently.

“So I’m the most important person in your life?”

“Well apart from my family yes”

She continued to stare at me seriously.

“Does this mean that you like to eat me more than katsudon?”

I blushed gently, what she implying when she says “eat me” ergh….

“I guess you could say that…”

She smiled at me and moved closer against me.

“Does that mean I can eat you too?”

I blush furiously and nod slightly.

“Mmm…”

Unexpectedly she grabs onto me tightly and bites onto my neck giving me an instant hickey.

“Acchan!”

“What?” She chuckled mischievously “You said I could eat you…. Unless you want me to eat you in another way…”

“E-e-er no no no it’s fine” I turn away blushing.

“You’re so cute, I wanna eat you up!” She moved forward and whispered in my ear. “In more ways than one.”

I swallow immediately. My eyes widening as I feel her hand creep up my shirt. Her soft hand pressed against my stomach and I immediately begin panicking and squirming. She quickly moves on top of me and licks my lips.

“You taste so good…”

“A-a-acchan…”

She moves down and silences me with a kiss. My hands unconsciously move up along her thighs whilst reciprocating her kiss. Her hands move down and begin grabbing at the elastic of my shorts. My hands however have already moved underneath her underwear, just like the other night I was grabbing onto her soft cheeks. She moves down slowly and nibbled on my neck before moving up to whisper into my ear.

“Minami…I’m ready…”

My eyes dart open and I freeze in motion. She looks at me as she notices my stillness. Looking at her I didn’t know what to say.

“Atsuko…”

She slowly pushes herself off me and sits up on my thighs looking at me. My hands are still holding onto her behind.

“It’s okay if you’re not ready” She smiled as she moved her fingers up and down along my stomach. Her hands are sending thrills through my body. “I just wanted you to know that I’m willing to give you my all whenever you’re ready to give me your all.”

Pulling myself up, I gently nibble her neck and chest area… I can’t really reach her lips properly…I’m too short… She moans softly, enjoying as my lips gently caresses her skin. Suddenly I hear Tomochin’s voice and automatically collapse backwards against my pillow. Acchan growls in frustration and reaches for her phone. Ringtone Dear J… It’s the first time I actually disliked hearing this song…

Acchan answers the phone, voicing her frustration to the caller with a bland annoyed tone of voice.

“Moshi Moshi.”

“Acchan!” says a cheery voice on the other end of the phone.

“Er, Miichan?”

“Let me in!!”

“Where are you?”

“Outside your house!” Acchan glances at me and smiles at my sad pout.

“I’m not at my house…”

“ERGH! Where are you?”

“I’m at Takamina’s”

“Ohohohohoho! Smexy time!!!!” Acchan smiles at me whilst fiddling with the hem of my shirt and drawing circles on my stomach.

"Yeah and you ruined the best bit!”

“EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!” Acchan moves her ear away from her mobile as Miichan’s scream comes piercing through the phone. “I’M COMING OVER NOW!!!!” Acchan moves down and kisses me as we hear the sound of Miichan hanging up. I stare up into her eyes.

“Today’s going to be a long day…” Acchan giggled and nodded.

“Mmhmm long and sexually frustrating”

“For you!” I chuckled. She raised her eyebrow as she smirked at me. “What???”

“Your hands are still in my panties…” I quickly retracted my hands.

“U-um…” She laughed as she climbed off me to get ready for the long day of work ahead of us. I just lay there for a few more seconds thinking about what may have happened if Miichan didn’t call. I could feel the heat on my cheeks increasing…

TBC!!!

WAHHHHHHHHHH! Yet again no bed scene! mwahahaha sorry...  :cry: lol anyway shall hopefully knock out the next chapter for you soon!!!!!

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 UPDATED Chapter Eleven!!! (Sorry I lost my ninja ways!)
Post by: mangobanana15 on February 16, 2011, 05:15:02 AM

Thanks for the update ninja! :)

lol its alright if there's no bed scenes i'm fine with Takaachan just being together

AWWWWW Yuko is so adorable afraid Haruna will leave her for guys. soo not truee

HAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHA Miichan is gonna tease soo much after that phone call :lol:

i hope the plot of the movie will be revealed next chapter!

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 UPDATED Chapter Eleven!!! (Sorry I lost my ninja ways!)
Post by: RenaChii on February 16, 2011, 06:30:46 AM

 :heart: KOJIYUU  :heart:

THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE~!  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 UPDATED Chapter Eleven!!! (Sorry I lost my ninja ways!)
Post by: bou-j525 on February 17, 2011, 12:01:38 AM

KojiYuu was so cute!!!  :wub: LOL "hentai" XD I guess KojiYuu moment isn't complete without this word XD

Thank for the update! I miss my ninja! XD Just kidding, take your time! But not too much...

This chapter was cute! And great! And funny! And...pervert  :lol: Miichan will so tease them  XD Poor Takamina... XD Or maybe not  :grin: And Acchan's ready for more.... Watch out... >.> The bed scene's coming  <.< XD

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 UPDATED Chapter Eleven!!! (Sorry I lost my ninja ways!)
Post by: Airidoki on February 17, 2011, 06:41:44 PM

 :luvluv1: KojiYuu 

 Maeda is ready to the next step :shy2:

I look forward to the next update  :kekeke:

update please!  :cow:

sorry if my english is wrong  :depressed:

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 UPDATED Chapter Eleven!!! (Sorry I lost my ninja ways!)
Post by: sorakamiya on February 18, 2011, 10:34:58 AM

keiiiichaaaaaaan.... you are so awsome...  :thumbsup it's okay if your ninja skill is vanish as long as you update this fanfict it will be great....  :thumbsup :thumbsup oh my...  :shocked :shocked another delay on the bed scene...  :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: its so interesting...  :grin: :grin: :grin: owgh, and so cant wait for the casting... what will acchan role in mendol... and how takamina reaction...  :O :O :O :? :? so curiouuuuuus....  :panic: :panic: :panic: i'll be waiting for the update...  :thumbsup :thumbsup and..... please not so long....  :bow: :bow: :bow:

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 UPDATED Chapter Eleven!!! (Sorry I lost my ninja ways!)
Post by: Keichan ^_^ on February 20, 2011, 04:45:45 AM

Ello Ello! Thanks for the comments! Your much awaited Mendol Story line is now in your grasp! Don't know if anyone guessed this but I would be amazed if you did!!!!
Anyway love you all long time!!!

Chapter Twelve

“SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSHHHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEEEEXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX!!!!!”

Takamina’s head remained bowed down towards the ground as they continue walking towards the TV station. Miichan was happily skipping down the path ahead of her and Acchan screaming “SHEX” every two minutes. Acchan was happily holding onto Takamina’s arm smiling at her vibrant friend ahead of them. She didn’t care if the world knew about her and Minami. On the other hand Takamina was overly embarrassed. Although she loved Acchan she couldn’t bear the thought of Acchan’s reputation, and that of AKB48 being damaged due to her decision to be with Acchan. Her own reputation didn’t really matter much, like Yuko, she had been accepted by fans that she may be L. Well although it wasn’t true at the time, Mendol did help ease the possibility if she was in the future. And currently, it seemed she would not only be easily accepted, but her fans loved her being dressed as a male more than a female. Acchan doesn’t care if she’s dressed as a girl or a boy….to be truthful, Takamina believes that Acchan just prefers to see her naked due her persistence to bathe with her. As they continue strolling towards the TV station, Acchan notices the unease in Takamina’s facial expression.

Is she ashamed of being with me? Why does she act so differently when we’re alone…

Acchan began to feel self-conscious about how Takamina felt about their relationship, her grip on Takamina’s arm began to slowly slip. Noticing Acchan slowly retracting her arm, Takamina grabbed onto her hand tightly. She could sense that her own insecurities are beginning to affect Acchan as well. Acchan glanced over at her, seeing her smiling face, Acchan quickly smiled back and tightened her hold on the other girls hand. Pulling the other girl closer to her side, Takamina finally looked up at Miichan who was a few steps ahead.

“Does she ever shut up?” She sighed deeply.

“You don’t like her telling people we’re together?” The other girl asked as she looked over at her little boyfriend.

“Hmm?” The other girl looked over at her girlfriend. “It’s not that, well it is in some way… does the world need to know about our private life?”

Acchan looked down at the ground… Takamina is ashamed of being with me…

Seeing the other girl look down dejectedly she quickly stopped walking. She turned towards her and held onto both of her hands making the other girl look up at her.

“I don’t know what you’re thinking but I’m not ashamed of being with you.” Looking down and gently swinging the other girl’s hand she continued. “I love being with you” She turned and looked at Miichan who was still screaming and skipping ahead of them. “It’s just that I don’t want people to gossip about our private PRIVATE life. It’s something special to me and other people don’t understand how special it really is to us.” She turned and looked at her girlfriend. “I can’t bear the thought of you getting hurt by what some people may say about you, I don’t care if they talk about me. All that matters to me if your welfare. Do you understand?”

Acchan smiled and nodded. Pulling the other girl into a deep hug she whispered into the girl’s ear.

“I’m not scared of anything as long as you stay by my side. What you think and feel about me is all that can ever affect me.”

A smile appeared on the shorter girls face and she gently rubbed her cheek against the one against hers.

“NO SEX IN PUBLIC!” Miichan squealed in front of Takamina’s face making her jump back.

“Damn it Miichan!!” She growled angrily.

Sensing the other girls anger Miichan quickly ran away. The little captain immediately chased after her angrily as Acchan laughed at them and slowly began to run after them towards the TV station.

(O_o)


Here we are, sitting in the giant office with our scripts in hand. I keep looking up at Acchan who is seated across from me.  We’re all nervous about the movie. Wonder what’s going to happen… Is Persona going to be in the movie? Are we going to debut as No Sleeves? How are we going to be reintroduced into the entertainment industry? So many questions are flying through my head. But the most important question for me is what role does Acchan play in the movie.

Finally our director gives us the okay to read the script and discuss it…

Storyline…

Asahi, Nami and Hinata decide to work at Tokyo Disney together in the Disney Princess Café. However due to Hinata’s inability to stop herself from eating the customer’s cake the three girls are fired. In hearing that there is a lack of male staff the three girls dress up as males for job interviews as Disney Princes. Once arriving at their job interview they are immediately recognised and scouted by the employer who is a major Persona fan. The boys are then asked to perform on stage. When performing on stage, Ray enters Tokyo Disney in disguise to pick Nami up from work. Upon seeing her Kai on stage dressed up as Prince Eric she immediately rushes onto the stage to kiss him. Due to the media coverage on the event, Saeko and Marilyn find out and immediately attack the boys again to manage their career. Since Ray was not recognised by the media, the boys are asked to star in a movie, and Kai is asked to act as the love interest of an up-coming star Tanako Naru (Atsuko). Naru, despite having a boyfriend, begins to fall in love with Kai. Kuu on the other hand meets Naru’s boyfriend whilst dressed as Hinata and instantly falls for him. Asahi is still with Jiro, however upon seeing Katsuyuki, is told by him that he may no longer be gay and may actually like Asahi. Ray who is still intimately attached to Nami, becomes overly jealous when media pictures of Kai and Naru having lunch together are all over newspapers with the headline “Ray dumped by Kai for co-star”… The rest of the storyline… you won’t find out until later!!!!... It has not been written 

Acchan smiles brightly at the script and then glances over at me. Forming a kiss with her lips she kisses the air and blows it towards me. Before I could subtly reach out and catch it Hanako suddenly begins to shake me nonstop.

“Kai!!!!!

“W-w-what?”

Cuddling onto me she smiles excitedly.

“You are dressing up as Prince Eric!!! He’s my favourite Disney Prince!”

“Haha, is that all? I thought there was something wrong with the script!”

“Oh, I haven’t read it all yet…” She bends down and continues reading the script.

Miichan looks over at me and smiles.

“I get to dress up as Cinderalla! You on the other hand… You have to dress up as Mulan… She’s not even a princess… however she does dress up as a male in disguise… so I guess they had to make you Mulan because you are male!”

I glare at her intently… Seems like she’s been hanging around Mariko too much lately…

Haruna looks at the script nervously. All she can think about is the look of devastation that would appear on Yuko’s face once she knew the plot of the new movie. Not only was Jiro her boyfriend in it, but Katsuyuki was going to confess that he likes Asahi…

“Are you okay?” Haruna turns to Acchan who has gently placed her hand on hers in a comforting way.

“Yeah… I’m just a bit nervous about… yeah”

Acchan although confused at first, finally catches onto the fact that Haruna is nervous about Yuko’s reaction when she notices the other girl gently stroking the Purikura of the Squirrel on the back of her phone.

“It’s going to be okay. She’ll understand you’re only doing it for the movie.”

Seeing Acchan smiling at her Haruna feels a little bit of relief, yeah, maybe Yuko will understand.

“Mmm…” She nods as the other girl before looking back down at her phone.

After comforting Haruna, Acchan begins to think about her feelings about the script a bit more. Takamina is still dating Ray in the movie… and Ray does kiss Kai on the Disney stage… Was she going to be alright with seeing her girlfriend kiss another girl? Well… during the reunion party it was fine because Takamina ended up embarrassing herself and biting onto Hanako’s nose. Looking across the table she watches as her girlfriend continues to the study the script.

“Hey Miichan you have a love interest!” Takamina said with a sly smirk on her face.

Looking across happily Miichan smirks.

“Yeah but my love interest is dating your girlfriend!”

Hanako looks over immediately.

“No he’s not he’s dating Maeda’s character”

“Oh oh oh yeah sorry I read the script wrong!” Miichan quickly backtracked remembering that no one in the room knew about me and Acchan expect me, Acchan, Haruna and her.

Smiling pleasantly at Miichan, Hanako suddenly turned and looks at me holding onto my arm.

“Kai, you better not cheat on me with Naru!”

I look over as Acchan who is seated next to Haruna, she pouts at me sadly.

“Ergh!” shaking my arm out of Hanako’s I continue “You don’t have to act like Ray already!”

“Yeah true… but when I do… Oh you are in trouble!!”

I felt a bead of sweat stream down the side of my head. She reaches up and holds onto my head. My eyes widen in fear.

“I’m going to get revenge on you!!”

“W-w-what do you mean?”

“I’m going to bite onto your nose in the middle on Disney during filming like you bit onto mine the other day!”

I look at her emotionlessly.

“You’ve got to be kidding me…”

“Nope! And afterwards I’m going to kiss you all over your face and snuggle into you!” She said excited. “I’m Kai’s and Kai is mine!”

“Huh?” I look at her in fear.

“Hehe I’m just trying to get back into character!” Pinching my cheeks gently she continues “You are so cute when you are nervous! I miss seeing you freak out!”
Slapping her hands away from my face I hear someone asking a question.

“Excuse me…” I turn and look at Haruna. “But who is playing Acchan’s boyfriend?”

Everyone looks at each other puzzled, this was true no one knew who was playing Acchan’s boyfriend. I slowly glared at all the men in the room, they better not make any perverted moves or I’ll bash them…

The director smiled at Haruna politely.

“Well he isn’t here yet but he should arrive soon…”

We all turn towards the door as we here the knob being turned.

“Looks like he’s here now!” We all watch as the door slowly opens. I’m glaring at the door, Miichan squinting, Acchan overly nervous, Haruna’s emotionless like normal. “This is Naru’s boyfriend…”

My eyes widen upon seeing the asshole in front of me. I clench my teeth before saying his name.

“Ishihara Shinji”.

TBC!!!

Thought that was bad news!! There's something worse!

I'm going to be away for the next two weeks! Gomen!!! Ninja has definitely died I'm sorry! I will see what I can do for you guys tonight if i have time! Apart from that I do apologise... My ninja abilities have been taken from me until further noticed... hopefully, I will reincarnate soon! Love you all!

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 UPDATED Chapter Twelve...Ninja is dead!
Post by: sorakamiya on February 20, 2011, 05:16:27 AM

yeaaaaaaay... finally u update keichan...  :cow: :cow: :cow:

but waiiiittttt..... "Ishihara Shinji.." ... uhmm...  :? :? :? Ishihara..... :huhuh :huhuh :huhuh ISHIHARAAAAAAA???????!!!! :shocked :shocked :shocked

dont tell me that.... he is.... he is...... (http://www.laymark.com/i/m/m194.gif) (http://www.laymark.com) HE IS THAT ANNOYED GUY!!!!!! (http://www.laymark.com/i/m/m071.gif) (http://www.laymark.com)

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRGGGGGGHHHHHTTTTTTTTTT........ AS I THOUGHT!!!!!!!!!!! (http://www.laymark.com/i/m/m063.gif) (http://www.laymark.com) u try to kill me slowly with the story... (http://www.laymark.com/i/m/m138.gif) (http://www.laymark.com)  but oh well.....  i guess i have to wait for the update what will happend to acchan n takamina (http://www.laymark.com/i/m/m197.gif) (http://www.laymark.com)

now you make me curious with the story line... i cant have a guest / speculation now... (http://www.laymark.com/i/m/m014.gif) (http://www.laymark.com)

but dont worry.... i'm still like your story... (http://www.laymark.com/i/m/m087.gif) (http://www.laymark.com)

i'm just hopping that... you will make appear of takamina in dansho yesterday in akbingo (http://www.laymark.com/i/m/m136.gif) (http://www.laymark.com) will you granted my wish.... (http://www.laymark.com/i/m/m054.gif) (http://www.laymark.com)

taka kun protect princes maeda... (http://www.laymark.com/i/m/m031.gif) (http://www.laymark.com)

waiting for your next update... (http://www.laymark.com/i/m/m015.gif) (http://www.laymark.com)

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 UPDATED Chapter Twelve...Ninja is dead!
Post by: mangobanana15 on February 20, 2011, 06:27:11 AM

UPDATEEEE!!!! :)

OMG I JUST HAD A GUT FEELING THAT IT WAS THAT STUPID GUY RIGHT AFTER TAKAMINA ASKED WHO WAS PLAYING THE BOYFRIEND AND IT WAS TRUEEE. DAMNN :smhid

at least you finally revealed the plot. hehehe i'm glad Aachan's character is gonna cheat on him what Takamina  :twisted:

lol i love how Hanako is scaring Takamina with her Ray character

HE BETTER NOT DO ANYTHING TO AACHAN OR ELSE HE'S GONNA FEEL SOME TAKAMINA WRAITH!!!!!!  :angry:

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 UPDATED Chapter Twelve...Ninja is dead!
Post by: bou-j525 on February 20, 2011, 03:34:38 PM

HA I KNEW THIS GUY WAS GOING TO APPEAR SOON AGAIN!!!  :angry:

Quote from: Keichan ^_^ on February 20, 2011, 04:45:45 AM

Thought that was bad news!! There's something worse!

Two weeks....  I want my ninja :smhid

Now... :shocked Don't tell me... love scene between him and Atsuko? I don't even want to think about it....

 :lol: I missed Ray

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 UPDATED Chapter Twelve...Ninja is dead!
Post by: alexiel17 on February 21, 2011, 02:36:54 PM

Elo!!!  :mon hi: Keichan ^_^ san!!!  :on gay: Oi!!! Dude, thanks for the update  :bow: :bow:
 (even if you're not that fast anymore, it's still ok with me!!   :mon thumb: since you're the one who made me love the Takaachan couple :]  :mon squee: )

Anyway, I read this (yeah, you read that right  :yep: :yep:) I read this (after soo many days of suffering bec. of school, and missed commenting and just finished reading those last chapters...) Gotta say, Can't really wait for the next chap!!!!  :mon angel:

I thought that I would never see that jerk again, like he's just an additional character or something, but really, Keichan san, you really do know how to fire things up (especially the smexy I said smexy parts  :drool: ... hehehehe  :mon mischief:) Wow! This is unexpected coming from me...  What have you done to me!!!?  :mon headbang: 
Now I really look like a true Yadong freak  :mon scare: (and it was all because of you!!!  :mon mad:) Nah, just joking..  :hiakhiakhiak:

 But really thanks soo much for the fic (and the smexy parts as well...  hehehe :mon mischief:)

Pls. update as fast as you can, my perverted ninja!!  :lol: :lol: (I'll use that for calling you  :twisted: bwahahaha!!  :wahaha: )

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 UPDATED Chapter Twelve...Ninja is dead!
Post by: imcutek on February 21, 2011, 10:20:03 PM

I have been silently reading your fic and I have to say that I love it.

YEAAAA AN UPDATE! haha I knew that guy would pop up again and I bet he is gonna cause alot of drama.

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 UPDATED Chapter Twelve...Ninja is dead!
Post by: hott3stson3 on March 05, 2011, 05:53:39 AM

Gaaaaa!!! U updated!!!!
i've been one of those silent reader...well that was until today cause ur fic is so awesome!!!
I like the whole mendol thing in it, and of course TAKAACHAN!!!!  :D :w00t:
The takaachan moments were seriously cute  :wub: :wub: :wub: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :love: :heart:
Ah!!! Its that b@stard...opps potty mouth came out  :angry: :angry: :angry: :angry: :angry:
he just makes me want to kill him  :angry: :angry: :angry: :angry:
please update soon!!!!!

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 UPDATED Chapter Twelve...Ninja is dead!
Post by: Japanime1 on March 12, 2011, 09:18:36 PM

So I decided to browse the rest of the fanfic section...

You have just made my day. I'm hooked. :mon thumb:

Actually, I just read the first 4 or 5 chapters and skipped to the current one out so far because I couldn't contain myself BUT I WILL go back and read and reread because it's that good. lol.

AtsuMina scenes are love. :mon lovelaff:

---
Edit: Okay so...I've read it all now.

Let me be the next in line to murder that Shinji guy after Takamina does.

Oh, and you continue to give me diabetes (with the couple scenes and all). :)

But that b*stard needs to step off...SOON. I do enjoy the drama though... I'm excited for Mendol filming. (O_O)

That is all. :P

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 UPDATED Chapter Twelve...Ninja is dead!
Post by: Keichan ^_^ on March 14, 2011, 01:06:07 PM

Before I begin I am sure that everyone on here is aware of the issues that are currently occurring in Japan at the moment so I would ask everyone on the forum who reads my fanfic to please support everyone in Japan by placing a Japanese Lucky Cat as there Avatar. Sounds corny I know but we can't do much from where we are although I am planning to go to Japan, however as for now we should just show our support. :japan: Ganbatte!!

As for now this is my next chapter, it's been hard writing it due to the fact that all these natural disasters are happening all over the world and due to my own busy schedule! I hope that everyone in this forum remains safe! I will leave my comments at the end of the chapter as i feel as though I have written enough!

So then... "Let's Enjoy!"


Chapter Thirteen

Here we sit. Same table. Same  movie script. Same director. Same positions. Oh wait my bad there’s a dickhead here now…

I bite down onto my inner cheek as I feel the asshole’s presence as he sits next to me.  My eyes twitching and I know it. Despite the fact that it’s closed I’m 100% certain that Acchan can see it! You know when you watch anime and there’s that scene where the annoying idiot begins to talk and begins laughing like a moron and there’s always a little girl with a twitching eye and clenched fist next to him? Well that’s pretty much the scene right now. However, I can’t really punch him in the face and watch his teeth fall out… damn you anime for making my imagination go wild!

“AHAHAHAHAHA! Thanks for the opportunity director!”

* TWITCH*

I open my eyes glaring ahead of me. However I immediately cease glaring as the first person I see looking back into my eyes in Acchan.

“By the way Ishihara-san…what happened to your nose?” Miichan asked with a smirk on her face.

Ceasing his sadistic laugh immediately he straightens himself up in his chair. I begin grinning evilly whilst looking down at my little hands which are gently placed in front of me. I felt like chuckling in victory however he had to open his fat mouth…

“W-w-well I accidently got hit in the face whilst helping a girl who got her bag stolen”

* TWITCHTWITCHTWITCHTWITCHTWITCHTWITCHTWITCHTWITCHTWITCHTWITCH*

Yet again I open my eyes and glare ahead of me.

*PFFHTTTTTTT*

Damn it why does Acchan have to sit in front of me and stare at me…

I rest my chin on my hands in defeat… however I’m lucky Miichan is such a great friend to me!

“REALLY? Wow I just heard a rumour you got punched in the face for being a perverted asshole!”

Most of the cast members began whispering between themselves. I opened my eyes and looked at Miichan. She winked at me slyly making me grin. Immediately I grin back at her before giving her a quick thumbs up. I can feel the asshole glaring daggers at me however it’s as though I’m an EVA in neon genesis and my AT Field is reflecting his blades from harming me. Looking across from me I notice a sad pout from Acchan. Why is she pouting at me? She can’t like him can she?

After awhile we all begin to segregate from the meeting. Walking outside I sense that Acchan is trying to deter away from me.

“Oi Takamina!” Miichan nudges into me. “Shouldn’t you thank me?”

“Haha I guess I should! Thank you all mighty Miichan!” I say whilst bowing slightly towards her.

“No problem! We are the Minami mafia! No one dares to mess with us! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!”

Miichan holds onto her hips and starts laughing victoriously. Feeling the moment I begin chuckling as well, however it is short-lived as I noticed Haruna staring blankly by herself. Walking over I give her a slight cuddle before Miichan wraps us into a tight hug.

“What’s wrong?”

Haruna looks up at us blankly.

“Just worried about how Yuko is going to take the plot of the movie…”

“She will be fine as long as you give her some loving!!!” Miichan gently pinches her cheeks. Haruna and gently giggle. “And by the looks of you should give Acchan some loving as well.

“Huh?” I turn around and glare towards the group of men surrounding Acchan. I watch as the asshole and Kawano try to talk to her… I feel as Haruna holds onto my shoulder… I guess Yuko won’t be that angry at me if Kawano starts flirting with Acchan… What’s annoys me right now isn’t the fact that they are flirting with her… it’s the fact that she’s laughing at their jokes… I move away and begin leaving the premises.

“Takamina where are you going?” Haruna tries to stop me.

“Home.” I stomp out and begin walking towards the train station.

Miichan and Haruna look at each other confused as to what to do.

“Er… I’ll get my wife and you go chase the dwarf!” Miichan quickly scrams towards Acchan as Haruna runs out to chase Takamina.

(O_o)

“WAIFU!!!!!” Miichan charges through the group and jumps onto Acchan.

“Miichan what are you doing?!?!” Steadying herself before she falls over Acchan takes a few steps to get her grounding right whilst carrying Miichan. Bending forward Miichan whispers into Acchan’s ear.

“Your midget elf has turned into the Grinch and has decided to ruin Christmas!”

Confused Acchan stares blankly at Miichan.

“Are you drunk?”

Frustrated Miichan scratches her head frantically.

“Your first rape victim has gotten away?”

Acchan immediately begins looking around the room before lifting Miichan higher up on her hips, apologising to Kawano-san, and begins sprinting out of the studio with Miichan enjoying the feeling of bouncing around whilst being carried by Acchan.

(O_o)

“Takamina! TAKAMINA!!!” Haruna chases Takamina as the little captain increases her speed ahead of her. Similar to the scene in Mendol where Riku chases Jiro, Haruna watches as an extremely quick Acchan zooms past her in high boots as Miichan cuddles onto her laughing and waves back towards Haruna as they over take her. She stops in her footsteps and stares at the awkward sight. “ERGH!!!!”

(O_o)

Catching up towards the little captain, Acchan quickly begins to yell out towards her girlfriend.

“MINAMI!!!!”

“Argh!!! Acchan stop screaming in my ear!!” Miichan squints in agony from the ringing in her ear.

“Oops sorry!”

Upon hearing Acchan’s voice Takamina slows down her pace and turns around to be faced by the weird sight in front of her.

Stopping a few paces away Acchan lets a whinging Miichan onto the ground like a baby before stepping forward and embracing Takamina into a tight cuddle.

“You look so cute when you scrunch up your nose and pout!” She then gently begins to kiss the angry wrinkles away with her soft lips, making the little captain giggle.

“Stop it Acchan! What are you doing?”

Moving away Acchan smirks at the small smile appearing on her girlfriends face.

“Are you angry at me?” She gently rubs her nose against the shorter girls.

“Hmmph!” Turning away the shorter girls’ cheeks redden.

“Aww, what did I do?” The taller girl gently snuggles into the small crescent area of the shorter girls neck.

“Why were you talking to them?”

“Well I have to meet the cast…and Kawano-san was speaking to me before the other idiot approached us and I can’t just be rude and leave Kawano…”

“Well why were you pouting at me during the meeting?”

Cuddling Takamina closer Acchan gently kissed the shorter girl’s neck.

“Well since you were lying on your arms I saw the giant bruise on your elbow…and I just can’t stop blaming myself for you getting hurt by him”

Holding the taller girl closer she gently kisses her cheek.

“It’s not your fault. I love you, so I have to protect you”

The taller girl smiles gently before looking up and kissing the smaller girl on the lips.

“I love you too.”

Suddenly Takamina feel as she gets kicked in the butt and Acchan is pulled away from her.

“NO SHEX IN PUBLIC!!!!” Miichan yells triumphantly as Haruna lightly laughs whilst pulling onto Acchan.

“ERGH!!!! Why do you always ruin the moment!!” Takamina sulks in defeat whilst rubbing her butt.

“Because you PDA rape Acchan more than Yuko touches Haruna’s boobs in public!” Miichan quickly replies.

“NEH!!! Why are you dragging me into this!” Haruna pouts at Miichan.

“Hahaha gomen! Only person I can think of who is more perverted than Takamina!”

“I’m not perverted!” The shorter girl protested before attacking Miichan in a playful wrestling match.

Looking at the two younger girls Haruna sighs before walking away with Acchan.

“Come on Acchan let’s go get some food”

Smiling brightly younger girl strode proudly with the older girl.

“Mmm I feel like pancakes and ice-cream!”

Upon hearing the mention of pancakes Miichan and Takamina cease their activities and looks up at the two figures getting away from them.

“Pancakes?”

“Ice-cream?”

Looking at each other they quickly turn and chase after the other girls.

“HEY WAIT FOR US!!!”

TBC

@sorakamiya: I have already completed granting your wish and I am happy you liked it! Thank you for being so supportive of my fanfic! I have been enjoying all your new ones!
@mangobanana15: Hehe I knew for some reason you wouldn't enjoy the Ishihara character! hehe but i will not give the plot away!
@bou-j525: hehehe...love scene... we will see! lol but sorry about my lack of ninjaness! I will try my best to get back to my ninja training when i have more time and motivation! Love where your fanfic is going but dude...why wont you be my friend!!! I am motivating you to type!..however not a fan of the cliffhangers!...update soon!
@alexiel17: ahhhh my dearest Yadong! maybe I should actually write a bedscene but pm it out so younger people can't read it...when I say young I mean you! mwahahahahaha! jk jk no bedscene...however if you are nice to me you may get some kojiyuu lovel lovel!
@imcutek: Welcome to JPHIP! lol I use to be like you and just read all the time!!! But thank you for your support! I hope to keep you entertained!
@hott3stson3: Welcome to JPHIP as well! lol I love it when silent readers come out! I hope you enjoy the new update! and swearing if okay with me! Even I get angry when I type it!
@Japanime1: Hahaha thank you!!! I have been reading your fanfic and absolutely love it! I'm a silent stalker on Stage48 and Nihongo but noticed your inputs in the takamina threads! Anyway about the Mendol filming! If time and motivation arrives than I will write out a fanfic of the movie!

To everyone else, silent readers and people who leave thanks for me all the time Domo Arigato Gozaimasu! Hope I wrote that correctly! Lol! As for now I must prepare for work tomorrow! Love you all heaps!

P.S. To a certain Hentai-chan (you know who you are!) You promised me on fb chat that you would update a Takacchan facfic!

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 UPDATED Chapter Thirteen! & small request from a Ninja!
Post by: dark-atrox on March 14, 2011, 02:34:04 PM

lol i did promise  ;) ;) ;)
just give me some moooooooore time to finish it  :nervous
i still felt its...hmm what's the word, um  :roll: incomplete? haha
i'm still trying(struggling) to get the feelings back of wanting to write again, gomen  :P

PS: stop calling me hentai-chan if u dont want me to call u sue-chan  ;) ;) ;)
oh, and good thing u didn't stop writing this ninja-kun... :lol: ja!

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 UPDATED Chapter Thirteen! & small request from a Ninja!
Post by: sorakamiya on March 14, 2011, 03:12:21 PM

 :shocked :shocked keichaaaaaaaaaan..... finally you update....  :w00t: :w00t: thanks loooooooooooooot.....  :cow: :cow:

you have granted my request. you are my favourite ninja.... (http://www.laymark.com/i/m/m012.gif) (http://www.laymark.com) and thank you for reading my fanfict. i'm glad you enjoy it.  :yep: :yep:

i'll be always support your fanfict and i'll wait for your update.... (http://www.laymark.com/i/m/m087.gif) (http://www.laymark.com)

and about the ava, is anyone in here could told me how to change my ava... I dont know how... (http://www.laymark.com/i/m/m048.gif) (http://www.laymark.com)

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 UPDATED Chapter Thirteen! & small request from a Ninja!
Post by: hott3stson3 on March 15, 2011, 04:17:36 AM

AhHhHhH!! You updated!!!  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
I now will now bow to you  :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow:
Lol, Takamina and the twitching~ And Miichan totally burning shinji  :lol: :lol: :lol:
 :lol: :lol: XD XD  The waifu made me lmao, that reminds me of how asian parents say english words differently...(I have to deal with my asian parents english every.day  :smhid ) Not really fun
Naw I love their cute accents  :lol: :lol: :lol: XD XD XD
Awwww, cute Takamina being all jealous~ don't worry Acchan would never go for that EHEM A word EHEM....bad cold XD XD :P :P
Anyway UPDATE SOON!!!!

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 UPDATED Chapter Twelve...Ninja is dead!
Post by: Japanime1 on March 17, 2011, 03:41:27 AM

Quote from: Keichan ^_^ on March 14, 2011, 01:06:07 PM

@Japanime1: Hahaha thank you!!! I have been reading your fanfic and absolutely love it! I'm a silent stalker on Stage48 and Nihongo but noticed your inputs in the takamina threads! Anyway about the Mendol filming! If time and motivation arrives than I will write out a fanfic of the movie!

AHA! Revealed reader GETS!! :twothumbs

Do you mean a separate fanfic for the Mendol movie? Or were you referring to future chapters? lol.
Now that I think about it, a separate fanfic focusing on the movie's storyline would be awesome. But then I'd be torn between "Naru"/Kai-Nami/Ray again...(O.O) Crap. Oh well, I'll be patient for that IF it happens. lol. :)

@Ch.13: B*stard still doesn't get it huh? Stay away from Atsuko!! D:

I could totally see the chase scene reenactment. Miichan. lmao.

PS: As per your request, consider me your golden counterpart. :japan: It's a good thing; first avatar set for a good cause.

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 UPDATED Chapter Thirteen! & small request from a Ninja!
Post by: bou-j525 on March 19, 2011, 04:40:17 AM

FINALLY ABLE TO ANSWER.
I read this a while ago... don't really remember in fact XD but yeah, was busy with school. It's been three days I've spent studying at school all night >_< I'm dead.
I just had to say thank for the update and LOL@"NO SHEX IN PUBLIC!!!!”
Oh btw way, of course I don't mind being your friend... but don't expect this to make me write more XD I just didn't have time this week... and tomorrow I can't either... and Sunday I have to study... and Monday welll.... back to school. So... yeah T__T

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 UPDATED Chapter Thirteen! & small request from a Ninja!
Post by: alexiel17 on March 19, 2011, 03:21:19 PM

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@alexiel17: ahhhh my dearest Yadong! maybe I should actually write a bedscene but pm it out so younger people can't read it...when I say young I mean you! mwahahahahaha! jk jk no bedscene...however if you are nice to me you may get some kojiyuu lovel lovel!

Keichan san.... Are you serious?!  :mon closeup: (Maji?!) I'm not a kid anymore so pls. do PM me with some Kojiyuu Love Love!!!! * doing tantrums*  :tantrum: :tantrum:

Since you called me a Yadong, I should call you Pervja instead!! * still mad at you*...  :mon annoy:
Hmp....  :mon annoy: Do I really need to be nice to you for you to be able to create MY LIFE LONG REQUEST? ..... tsk tsk tsk...  :smhid :smhid Bribery... don't expect you could do those things...... *Gasp*  :mon wtf: :shocked Did you bribe the others so you'll create their wishes?  :shocked  (obviously, I'm just tripping around... hehehe  :lol: :lol: :lol: hope you're not mad... hehehe  :on lol: :sweat: )

Sorry, Pervja, I mean Keichan san... (hehehe, hadn't sleep well this past few days.. Do forgive me...  :kneelbow: :))

Umm.. Anyway, please make a  Kojiyuu fluff next chap,  pls...  :mon cute:

PS. Can the "guy" just suddenly disappear or something? I'm serious :hee: 
Umm... just keep on updating Keichan san  :shy2:
(Am I kind enough?!!!  :w00t: :w00t: Will you now create my love love  Kojiyuu, since I called you Keichan san.... ) oh pls. oh pls. oh pls...  :mon pray2:  :mon inluv:  :mon innocent:

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 UPDATED Chapter Thirteen! & small request from a Ninja!
Post by: kahem on March 28, 2011, 11:49:28 PM

That guy deserves takamina hit him again  :tama-mad: lol
I like it update soon please

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 UPDATED Chapter Thirteen! & small request from a Ninja!
Post by: Keichan ^_^ on April 03, 2011, 09:40:08 AM

Long time no see my dearest comrades!!!!  :cool1:
I have finally returned to Fanficland after facing horrible and terrible things such as work :mon study: work :mon study: and...
MORE WORK!!!!  :mon slapself: I am now officially....  :imdead:
Anyway I decided to write you all a quick chapter... mostly because of this guilty feeling that i have not updated in awhile!
Therefore... I have decided to..in one way or another... give you some Keichan ^_^ lovel lovel!
@dark-atrox: Thanks for providing all your fanfics for editing...however you do know i want part 2 of the other one! lol and I wont you call that here...but facebook chat is open for anything!
@sorakamiya: First of all happy birthday the other day! Sorry I could not provide you an update on your bday so hopefully I make up for it now! You've updated so much since i've been gone!!! Ergh...I dont know if you still wanna change your avatar but click into profile at the top of the page and you'll find it..i'm bad at explaining i'm sorry!
@hott3stson3: Hehe! Thanks for enjoying the update! And yeah when I was typing it I actually made my dad pronounce Wife and thats what he said so it was quite hilarious! GO ASIAN PARENTS AND THEIR "ENGWISH"
@Japanime1: Thanks for becoming my golden comrade! NIHON FIGHTO!!! And yes I was considering typing up a separate maybe...3-shot of a Mendol Movie Script for you guys to read if I have time! And still reading your comments on other forums!
@bou-j525: Mwahahaha hello friend...you updated before me! Therefore... I guess... it means that when we become friends the speed of my updates will decrease! ahahahaha! But your fanfic...WHAAAAAAAAA! nearly killed me....you read my comment! oh oh and thanks! you gave me my 100th Thanks! ^_^ Love you long time!
@alexiel17: Yadong freak... -gently pats your head- I'm giving you a chance to seek "revenge", but I have a feelings that after reading this you may actually not seek revenge...kinda gave you some kojiyuu fluff and what's the other thing....something along the lines of kinda partially fulfilling some yadongs lifelong dream....idk... hehehe
@kahem: Sorry for the slow update!!!!! Hopefully you like the new update thought.

Anyway Sorry to all my secret readers for the lack of update lately!
Hopefully this chapter makes up for it!!!! ^_~

Chapter Fourteen

I’m nervous… Although the girls tried to calm me down I’m nervous… maybe nervous is an understatement… I’m absolutely petrified. Usually I’m calm and collected… emotionless some may say… actually they just call me an airhead… I’m standing in my kitchen making hot chocolate as a cute little squirrel kneels on my couch, wriggling her bum in the air as she looks at the photos atop of my cupboard. She looks so happy… I don’t want to hurt her or make her sad… actually maybe I just don’t want her to become a psycho girlfriend who comes to the studio and abuses all my male colleagues.

“Kekekekekeke!” I look up and watch as her little feet begin to kick around nonstop.

“Neh! What are you laughing at?” I continue stirring the mugs of hot chocolate. Turning around she grins at me delightfully. Her eyes forming happy little crescent moons.

“Nyan Nyan! You’re so cute in that photo!!!”

“Which one?” I pick up the mugs and walk over to the living room, settling them down on the coffee table.  Picking up the photo frame the small squirrel gently leans back and buries her small body against mine on the couch. Although I’m the more feminine one, Yuko seems to enjoy being engulfed by my body. She moves around so she’s sitting in between my legs and leans back against me. Pointing to the photo in her hand she turns her head up to look at me smiling.

“Look Nyan Nyan! You have the cutest smile ever!”

Smiling happily at her I wrap my arms around my cute little squirrel. Rubbing my nose into her hair and smelling her sweet citrus perfume scent.

“I look like an idiot in that photo! Do you think I’m cute when I look like a dork?” I pout at her. Holding onto one of my hands she slowly intertwines our fingers and waves our hands in the air.

“Well… I’m a dork as well so we’re perfect together…” She kisses my hand gently. “Of course we’re aren’t as dorky as Takamina though!” Gently laughing together I look as my dorky squirrel begins to chuckle like an absolutely moron whilst putting on a retarded face.

“NEH!!!” I begin to push her away as she refuses to budge. Putting down the photo frame she turns around and climbs on top of me. Securing her arms around my neck. With her face inches away from mine I blush furiously. Closing the gap slowly she gently kisses my lips and rubs her nose against mine.

“I love you Nyan Nyan” Rubbing my nose back against hers I feel my arms tightening around her waist. Truth is, although I’ve always resisted her before we started dating, it was the insecure feelings of losing her that kept me distancing myself from her. Due to my lack of response she moved away from me. Leaning back on my lap she stared at me whilst a lone tear trickles down my face. Wiping away the small droplet she furrows her eyebrows and gently kisses my forehead then rests her chin against my shoulder. “What’s wrong Nyan Nyan?” She gently kisses my ear in reassurance. Feeling the pressure engulfing my heart in pain I let out a soft whisper of insecurity.

“I’m scared of losing you…” I feel as her body jolts in surprise of my response. She never expected me to be so fragile. Tightening her grip around me she rubs her cheek against mine.

“Scared of losing me? You mean scared you can’t get rid of me right?” She gently chuckles making me let out a slight giggle myself. “You aren’t going to lose me! I’m too in love with you. Soon you’ll be trying to get rid of me. Most likely with a broomstick! Or…maybe you’ll secure your house with millions of balloons and needles and pop them all whenever I come to your house! BOOM BOOM BOOM!!!” I push her away and begin to slap her arm whilst laughing.

“Baka!!” Holding onto my hands she smiles at me cheerfully.

“As long as the smile is back on my Nyan Nyan’s face I’m willing to be a stupid idiot any day!” As my cheeks gently redden I lean forward and kiss her gently.
“I love you too Yuko my stupid idiot.” Grinning proudly like an absolute loser she puts her hands on her hips.

“OSHIMA YUKO!!! NYAN NYAN’S SHEXY SQUIRREL SAVES THE DAY AGAIN! MWAHAHAHAH!!!” Laughing uncontrollably like a dork the squirrel is pushed off the taller girl onto the ground. “ITAI!!”

“Loser!”

“Neh….Nyan Nyan” She slowly climbs back onto the other girls lap. Cuddling her prized princess tightly and kissing the girls lips nonstop stop.

“Yuko!!! Stop it!!”

“Hehe okay okay but only under one condition!”

“What?”

“Tell me what’s wrong?” Turning away from the shorter girl she pretends that she doesn’t have a clue what she’s referring to.

“I don’t know what you mean”

“So.. I guess you just want me to continue kissing you then!” Smirking before forming her lips into a giant ugly kiss she begins pulling the other girl closer to her whilst kissing the air like a goldfish making kissing noises.

“ERGH!!! Okay okay stop it you creep!!!”

Smiling proudly yet again the squirrel sets her hands back on her hips.

“OSHIMA YUKO WINS! K.O!” She then raises her arms in the air and turns around slowly whilst making a noise similar to that of a fake screaming crowd “KKRRRRRRRUUUUUUUUUGGGGGGGH!!!”

The taller girl instantly slaps the squirrels forehead.

“Dork!”

“Itai!” Wincing in pain she gently smiles before cuddling the other girl again. “Seriously what’s wrong?”

Looking at the squirrel she pouts sadly.

“We got our movie script today…”

Startled, Yuko recollects herself and straightens herself up to look serious.

“So…” Playing with the taller girls hair gently. “What’s the story line…”

“I… might…be…” Yuko gulps down the lump in her throat from the tension. “…with…Jiro… or Katsuyuki…”

“WHAT?!?!?!”  Slowly Yuko’s body slumps to the side as she plays dead on the side of the coach.

“YUKO!!!” Shaking the squirrel’s body, Haruna pouts sadly. “I knew I shouldn’t have told you” She crosses her arms and leans against the back of the couch. Whisking up off the side of the couch immediately the squirrels cuddles into her Nyan Nyan.

“I have to protect you!” Rubbing her face into the crook of the taller girls neck. “The perverts are going to try and physically assault your utters!”

“NEH! WHAT DO YOU MEAN BY UTTERS!!!”

“Hehehe… well you know utters…”

“You hentai!!!” Immediately the taller girl begins pinching the perverted squirrel.

“ITAI ITAI ITAI ITAI!!!”

“Stupid pervert!”

“NEHHHHHHHHHHHH NYAN NYAN!! I’M JUST OVERPROTECTIVE OF YOU!!!”

“YOU CALLED MY BOOBS UTTERS!!!”

“W-Well it’s true! ITAI!”

“How is it true!”

“STOP AND I’LL EXPLAIN”

“Fine!” Crossing her arms she glares at the smaller girl. “Explain.”

“Wellllllllllllllllllllllllll… um… You know…. Okay okay…no hitting until I’m done…”

“Hurry up…”

“Okay. Well… you know utters…produce milk… and so do boobs…”

“I’m no pregnant…” Her glare increases.

“Well well I’m not finished…”

“Well get to the point!”

“Okay… wellcowsneedtosuckonuttersforenergyandyourboobsarelikeuttersbecausewhenitouchthemigetenergyfromthem!”

“OH MY GOD!!!” Sensing life threatening danger the squirrel immediately grabs the latter girls boobs and squeezes them.

“OSHIMA YUKO POWER UP!” She then quickly jumps off the taller girls lap and sprints towards the bedroom.

“COME BACK HERE OSHIMA YUKO!!!!” Sprinting after the squirrel she slams the door open before the squirrel can securely lock it.

“N-n-n-nyan Nyan! S-s-s-stop…y-y-you d-don’t wait w-w-wrinkles f-from f-f-frooooooooARGHHHH!”

The squirrel was immediately attacked by her Nyan Nyan. Although she was being furiously hit and wrestled on the bed a small smile spread across the squirrel face. The truth was her Nyan Nyan was straddling her and wrestling her down. The wholly utters rubbing against her face every now and then. Before she could stop herself she gently whispers out two words…

“…Rough shex…” Movement above her suddenly stops. She looks up at the angry face above her… “Shit…”

“HENTAI!” A shadow begins to cast over the little child. The last thing the squirrel sees before darkness engulfs her vision and pain sweeps across her left cheek is the movement of the latter girls right utter…

Oshima Yuko, born a pervert, died a pervert.

O_o

On the other side of town another couple was also alone in a house in the bedroom. However in this case, the pervert wasn’t the shorter girl. Instead the shorter girl was the soon-to-be-victim of the taller girl…

“I’m sooooooo tired!!!” The smaller girl falls back against the bed. Climbing onto the bed next to the smaller girl with a innocent grin on her face the taller girl gently leans over and kisses the other girl. Feeling the soft lips, the little captain opens her eyes to see the soft face of her girlfriend only inches away. Slowly she brings up her hands and strokes the other girls cheek whilst reciprocating the soft touch of the marshmellow like lips. Pulling away slowly the taller girl rests her head against the crook of the smaller girl’s neck. Her soft breath bringing tingling sensations to the shorter girls exposed neck. Pulling each other into a soft embrace the shorter girl kisses the other girl’s forehead. “You must be tired as well.”

“Not that tired…” The taller girl pushes up and leans on the palm of her hand whilst looking at the other girl. Feeling the girl moving off her, the shorter girl moves up and rests on her palm to stare back at the taller girl. With her free hand the taller girl begins to trace along the thread lines of the blanket. Moving her hand forward the shorter girl gently pokes at the other girls moving finger.

“What do you want to do then?”

Pouting, Atsuko looks down and watches her finger as it traces the pattern on the blanket.

“Even if I told you… you wouldn’t agree to do it…”

Seeing the sad pout Takamina grabs the other girls finger reassuringly.

“Of course I would!”

Smiling ecstatically, Atsuko immediately looks up and leans towards her girlfriend.

“REALLY?”

Sensing Atsuko’s extreme change of mood, Takamina ponders through her thoughts before realising the consequences.

“If it’s within reason…”

Pouting again Acchan moves away and begins to draw patterns with her finger again.

“I knew you wouldn’t say yes…”

Leaning forward Takamina gently kisses the girl’s lip.

“You know I’m shy…”

Looking up Atsuko pushes forward on top of the other girl and kisses her back.

“But… no one’s home… and no one’s coming home…”

“How do you know?”

“Well I told you my family’s out of town…”

“Yeah…but the puppies will hear!”

“Nehhhhhh! Puppies want to see their mama and papa happy!”

Giggling gently the shorter girl kisses the taller girl.

“When did I become a parent?”

“Since we started dating…” The taller girl pouts “Or are we not dating?”

“O-of course we’re dating!” As a smile reappears on Acchan’s face she moves closer to Takamina.

“So… can we do what couples do?”

“W-w-we are…”

“Can we do what intimate couples do…”

“W-w-w-well…”

Moving forward Acchan gently nibbles on her girlfriends ear before gently whispering.

“Please… I’ll be gentle.”

Takamina feels as her face flushes red and a tingle spread across her body. Suddenly, the other girl’s soft lips begin to slowly nibble her earlobe.

“Mmm…” A gentle moan escapes the shorter girls lips before she quickly covers her mouth. Smiling widely, Acchan gently nibbles the girls neck.

“You like that don’t you…”

As the shorter girl’s eyes roll back she gently nods. Moving down slowly and placing gently kisses along Takamina’s neck and collar bone the taller suddenly begins to suck gently on a small exposed area of the shorter girls chest. Shooting up immediately, Takamina quickly recollects herself whilst covering the hickey on her chest.

“A-a-acchan!”

Moving forward the taller girl cuddles the other girl whilst kissing her gently. She knew that the other girl was scared. She knew that she had to slowly make her move, even though the other girl seemed to want her as much as she wanted Takamina. As she felt her girlfriend enter her mouth with her small probing tongue and pulled the girl closer. Such intimacy despite the small tongue battle going on in each other’s mouth. Small moans escaping each other’s mouth. Hands wandering across each other’s soft skin. Acchan gently slid her hand up Takamina’s shirt as the other girl’s hand skimmed up her soft thigh. Moving on top and gently straddling Takamina, Acchan felt another wave of déjà vu. How many times have they been in this exact position… This time she’ll make sure it’ll get further than the other times. Pulling apart to catch their breath they starred intimately into each other’s eyes before the shorter girl gently rests her forehead against the other girl’s chest. Feeling the smalls breaths seeping through her shirt the taller girl tightens her hold onto the fragile body underneath her. Looking at the girl gently resting against her she smiles and kisses her forehead.

“Wait here…”

Gently pushing herself off the captain she runs out of the room. The captain stares blankly at the door before her cute girlfriend re-enters the room hiding something behind her back.

“What are you hiding?”

“Mmm… guess!”

“Huh?”

“Guess!”

“Hmm… clue?”

“Something… white”

“That’s a bad clue!”

“Fine! Something…fun!”

“White and fun… cards?”

“Nope…”

“Manga book!”

“Is a manga book white!!”

“Hehe…the pages are!” The taller girl pouts gently. “Okay another clue!”

“Something…edible!”

Placing a finger on her bottom lip the shorter girl begins to ponder through her thoughts as the taller girl begins to walk closer to the bed.

“Edible…edible…AH! I know!” Acchan smiles hoping that the Takamina had guessed it. “Your puppy!”

“NE!!” Simultaneously she screams whilst hitting her girlfriend with her free hand! “You want to eat our babies!!!” Chuckling loudly Takamina pulls the unbalance girl towards her on the bed and cuddles her close to kiss her gently before pulling the object out from behind Acchan’s back.

“Whipped cream…” She looks at it puzzled. “What’s this for?” Looking at Acchan confused she suddenly blushes red as Acchan gently winks at her. Dropping the whipped cream on the bed she begins to jitter around, fidgeting like crazy. Her cheeks beetroot red, her heart beating furiously and her imagination gone wild. Lucky enough the other girl cuddles her close and kisses her to calm her down.

“Shh takababy…” Calming down Takamina turns and looks at Acchan as the other girl shakes up the can of whipped cream before squirting it on the shorter girls nose. Giggling gently Acchan slowly licks it off. “Let’s have some Takacchan dessert…” She slowly squirts a line of whipped on her collarbone before smiling at her girlfriend. “Your turn Minami…”

TBC

 :mon noodle: DINNERTIME!!!! I gotta go cook!  If any of your are currently like this >>> :mon bleed2: (Most likely Yadong Freak...)
Definitely not my fault! Anyway I don't know what to do with the next chapter so some feedback and input is appreciated....actually Yadong freak and dark-atrox i got a feeling i know what you want....so...no! Anyway I don't know when i'll be able to provide you with another update! Sincerely sorry!
Until next time...  :mon love:

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 UPDATED Chapter Fourteen:someone's partial lifelong dream
Post by: kahem on April 03, 2011, 05:36:28 PM

I'm not nosebleeding but blushing and biting my lip to not smile, it's embarassing in the tramway  XD
I also swallowed through the wrong pipe and coughed hard after (so lame I know  :nervous)

Whatever a great  :twothumbs I like the way you write the couples moment ^^

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 UPDATED Chapter Fourteen:someone's partial lifelong dream
Post by: RenaChii on April 03, 2011, 11:01:12 PM

As always~! Yuko is so FUNNY~!!  :on lol:

Thanks for updating~  :on GJ:

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 UPDATED Chapter Fourteen:someone's partial lifelong dream
Post by: kaoru-chan on April 04, 2011, 12:43:50 AM

I have just been catching up on this story. This is such a fun story to read!  :)

Yuko just never learns!  :lol:

And naghty Acchan! Just how is Takamina going to respond...

Can't wait for more!  :)

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 UPDATED Chapter Fourteen:someone's partial lifelong dream
Post by: bou-j525 on April 04, 2011, 02:56:03 AM

Yuko is awesome  :grin: Like... LOL YUKO YOU WIN AT LIFE XD XD XD
And about TakAcchan... seriously... Acchan just put weird ideas in my mind... not good... NOT GOOD AT ALL  :roll:  :doh: But it was still cute  :heart:

Glad to see you're back  :) Now... when will the ninja come back too  :cry:
by the way...

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it means that when we become friends the speed of my updates will decrease!

OMG IT'S MY FAULT??? NOOOOO!!!! SHAME ON ME  :banghead:
...
XD Thank for updating and congrats for your 100th "thanks" ^^

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 UPDATED Chapter Fourteen:someone's partial lifelong dream
Post by: Airidoki on April 04, 2011, 05:46:52 AM

Keichan  :onioncheer: :nya: :on gay:

I was dying of longing  :farofflook:

I love this fic, I get mad when you do not update lol

I'm happy you updated  :pen_whirl:

Thanks for update  :on GJ:

ps :  :imdead:

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 UPDATED Chapter Fourteen:someone's partial lifelong dream
Post by: riama on April 04, 2011, 07:17:52 AM

Keichan (http://www.laymark.com/i/m/m207.gif) I love your Kojiyuu (http://www.laymark.com/i/m/m042.gif)
I feel a bit embarrassed while reading this(http://www.laymark.com/i/m/m017.gif)  Yuko my only one and perverted oshi I'm so proud of you (http://www.laymark.com/i/m/m204.gif)
When Acchan was giving the clues I'm like (http://www.laymark.com/i/m/m071.gif) isn't it too early for that?
But then it was a whipped cream after all (http://www.laymark.com/i/m/m187.gif) I'm obviously thinking of the other thing (http://www.laymark.com/i/m/m122.gif)
Nice nice nice chapter (http://www.laymark.com/i/m/m129.gif) (http://www.laymark.com/i/m/m129.gif)

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 UPDATED Chapter Fourteen:someone's partial lifelong dream
Post by: hott3stson3 on April 05, 2011, 04:30:51 AM

Yeah!!! U Updated!!!!
 :wub: :wub: :inlove: :inlove:
Ah...Takaachan and Kojiyuu love
I was actually having very vivid image of what each couples where doing~
Call me a pervert, but i was born a pervert and i will now die from a nosebleed as a pervert xD  :P :P :lol: :lol:
Yeah!! Go Go Go Asian Parents English Power!!!

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 UPDATED Chapter Fourteen:someone's partial lifelong dream
Post by: dark-atrox on April 07, 2011, 04:56:47 PM

LOL, read this one too :lol: Ahem! someone's becoming an H here  ;)
Lil more and then BAM! you'll finally become one.... :twothumbs
Don't left ur readers hanging... :lol: Go for it, Banzai  :yep: LOL

PS: really want to kill jerk-face, thanks for the fics
it cheers me up ;) ;) ;)
and hey, drop me a message when ur OL in FB ;)

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3: Ninja puts fic on Hiatus... gomen! v_v;
Post by: khryz0421 on April 26, 2011, 06:58:40 PM

whohoh.... i love the pervert part!! but i'm not a pervert...^^
 plss... update soon... i can't wait anymore...

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3: Rawr...needs to stop working!
Post by: Keichan ^_^ on April 29, 2011, 02:01:58 PM

 :mon woo: CHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!! Hello everyone!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am back with a quick chapter for you all! Sorry for my MIAness! Life has been hectic! Anyway I don't think i've had this many replies at one WAH! Arigato!!!!!!
@kahem: Lol reading your post made me LOL! hehe um...before you read this please make sure you aren't on the tram way!!! ahaha
@RenaChii: Mwahaha NP!  :mon determined: Just writing what I think Yuko would be like irl! Hopefully there is enough Yuko moments for you in this update!
@kaoru-chan: Hehehehe thanks for taking your time to catch up on my pic!!!  :mon thumb: I will try my best to make this entertaining in different ways rather than just lovel lovel!
@bouchan: Argh Bouchan....SH was epic!!!!! but yes yes finally the mystery has been solved! and blaming you for my lack of ninjaness seems to be the way to go! However i'll update a quick chapter just cos i was entertained by SH! lol but yeah i'll be off on a busy schedule again!
@Airidokichan:Hehe I am sorry I took so long to update this! I'm glad you enjoyed NDS-kun though!  :mon baby: hope this short update makes you happy and you havent been dying of longing again!
@riama:ahahaha...  :mon duh: ... :mon speechless: yes...yes...early.... :mon lurk:
@hott3stson3: ahahaha YAH! ASIAN POWER! hahaha you admitted to being a pervert unlike Yadong Freak...she's in denial! ahaha glad you enjoyed my update!
@hentaichan: Haha and you are an idiot! However as your know I respect you! hence....BAM! lol however it does not mean that I am a H! I do it in a sensible way unlike you! lol and happy that you are feeling better after jerk-face! lol hope work isnt killing you!
@khryz0421: Ahahaha thanks for loving the pervert parts? Ahaha  :mon sweat: maybe I need to cut down after this.... lol but I noticed your edited your post! You wanted some Mariko so I added some into this chapter for you!! Hope you enjoy it!
@FoFchan: via pmness! thanks for your help! I just gotta do it now...too lazy....but ninja is on stand by! So....when you starting your new EXTRA long fic?!??! :mon beam:
@Everyone else!: Thanks for silently reading! Thanks for the Thanks! and dearest authors thanks for keeping me entertained with your fanfics despite the fact I didnt update mine! Anywho let's get this started!

Chapter Fifteen

The shorter stares at the white line of whipped cream on her girlfriends smooth skin. Slowly approaching her she gently nibbles and licks the streak of creamy delight off. Her girlfriend’s hot breath tingly against her ear as a small moan escapes her still cream-stained lips. Her eyelids flutter, pupils moving to the back of her head. A new sensation for the younger girl. She never knew whipped cream could feel so blissful against her skin. Goosebumps spreading across her skin, caused by the delicate touch of the other girl’s marshmellow lips. Her arms snaking around the shorter girls neck pulling her close to feel the kinetic warmth created by their shivering body. Looking down she watches as the older girl laps up the last remaining blob of cream. Fearing that the end of such a pleasurable experience was near she quickly grabbed for the loose can beside her and squirts the cream along her lips. Bending lower she gently kissed the shorter girl, earning a ruffled chuckle from the latter as the cream smeared across their faces. Simple licks and kisses turned into fierce tongue battles and elegant moans of pleasure. Synchronised movements, gentle skin caressing against contrasting assets, their groping hands and needy legs intertwine. As fabric is thrown like confetti across the room, the subtle sounds of inner fireworks engulf the passionate atmosphere inside the twilight room. Love… fascinating, tiring, intoxicating, but most of all… unexplainable. This moment was tantalising to the core. She just needed her more than she ever knew. This feeling was absolutely indescribable and she was immensely soaking up this moment. Devouring it like there’s no tomorrow. Breathless panting, sweat soaked sheets, heated air caused by insatiable body friction. Tonight they had finally become one…

O_o

Waking up in the silence of the morning sunrise, the shorter girl curled her lips into a smile as she watched the sun rays gently kissed her lovers soft skin. Moving closer to elicit body warmth against the latter’s naked body. She gently pulled the white sheets up to cover herself before wrapping her arms around the sleepy girl’s body.

Feeling the soft touch of the shorter girl’s arm, a smile spread across the taller girl’s face as her eyes gently fluttered open, mirroring the loving brown orbs staring at her. Pulling the other girl close and gently resting her nose against her lover’s she gently kissed the soft lips which blessed her skin the night before.

“I love you.”

“I love you more.”

O_o

On the other side of Tokyo…

“YOU GOTTA FIGHT!!! FOR YOUR RIGHT!!!!! TO BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOBIES!!!! TO BOOOOOOOOOOOOBIES!!!!”

*KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK*

“DAMN IT YUKO IF I HEAR YOU MENTION THE BOOBS AGAIN I SWEAR I WILL COME IN THERE AND TEAR YOURS OFF!!!!”

“REALLY NYAN NYAN?”

“YES!!!”

“BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOBIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSS!!!”

*Silence*

“Mwahaha I knew she wouldn’t do anything…although I wouldn’t mind her groping me!” She smiles proudly to herself whilst jiggling her assets…

*Click*

“Oh Shit...” Yuko eyes widen at the sound of the key successfully opening the bathroom door…

(O_o)

“What’s wrong with Yuko?” Mayu quietly questioned Sae. Glancing across Sae notices Yuko rubbing her boobs obsessively. Instantly she turns and covers Mayu’s eyes.

“DAMN IT YUKO DON’T TOUCH YOUR SELF INFRONT OF THE YOUNG ONES!”

Glancing across, Yuko looks at Sae with a strained faced.

“But they hurt! Nyan Nya~”

“STOP! We don’t want to know!”

Pouting Yuko slowly walked into the dance studio where her Nyan Nyan was sitting on the opposite side. Immediately she felt the glaring eyes of her girlfriend, making her backtrack a few steps.

Seeing Yuko’s uneasiness Miichan immediately up to the squirrel and flicked her boobs.

“ITAI!!” Yuko immediately slapped Miichan’s hand away.

“Haha what’s wrong Yuko? You usually enjoy us poking them!”

Glaring at Miichan, Yuko then trotted over to Sayaka for sympathy.

“Saaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyaaaaaaaakkkkkkkkkaaaaaaaa~” Dramatically landing into her captains arms she holds onto her for dear life. “The pain…the pain is horrible!”

Laughing sheepishly and gently rubbing the shorter girls head, ruffling her hair she smiles brightly at the squirrel.

“Yuko is about time Kojima fought back! It’ll teach you to not grope everyone all the time! I might get less complaints of sexual harassment from the girls!”

Pouting at her captain she pushes away and lands on top of the couch. Sulking whilst she continues to gently knead her battle wounds. She gently whispers whilst she continually glances at her girlfriend.

“It’s not my fault I love her so much…”

As the squirrel gently sighs and rests on the couch another couple enter the room quietly talking to each other.

“Acchan!!!!!!” Miichan pushes Takamina away from the taller girl making her stumble forward and fall to the ground.

“Minami!” Acchan immediately lunges forward to pick up the shorter girl. However to her dismay Miichan jumps in front of her again.

“I’m here at your service waifu!” Acchan looks up and stares at the smiling face, whilst the short captain stares up at the loud girl from her crime scene down
below in disbelief.

“Majide…” She immediately slumps on the ground like a dead corpse as Miichan grabs Acchan’s hands and swings them around whilst pulling her towards Haruna and Mariko who were now chatting on the stool.

“Hey Haruna and Wrinkly-Sama!” Mariko immediately glares at Miichan whilst Haruna laughs lightly. “Ergh stop glaring! I can see your wrinkles….” Mariko immediately looks at her with a dead pan expression.

“What’s up?” Haruna quickly says in order to remove the deadly atmosphere created by her fellow busu member.

“Acchan and I are going on a lunch date! Wanna join?”

Takamina immediately opens her eyes and scrambles off the ground. Racing towards the small group she wraps her arms around her girlfriend, lifting her up off the ground and moving her on the opposite of her protectively.

“Atsuko is having lunch with me today!”

“Erghhhhhhhhhhh! Chibi captain is finally taking charge of her love life…” Mariko gently smirks towards the midget.

“Well…” Holding onto Acchan’s hand tightly. “We already decided earlier to have a private lunch date together! So I’m sorry but that’s final!”

“ERGH! WAIFU!!!! HOW COULD YOU CHEAT ON ME INFRONT OF MY EYES!” Pretending to cry Miichan rested her head against Nyan Nyan’s chest.

“It’s ok Miichan. We can have lunch togeth~”

Before she could finish a squirrel immediately came to life and pushed a dramatic Miichan off her Nyan Nyan and reclaimed her rightful spot on the soft bra supported cushions. Before the taller girl could push the squirrel off, a soft voice silenced her movements.

“Nyan Nyan we’re going on a romantic lunch together today ok? Okay. That’s great. I love you”

Softening her expressions Haruna looked down at the cute squirrel in her arms.

“Romantic date?”

Looking up Yuko gently smiled.

“Mmmhmm. I’ll take you on a real date!”

“O-o-okay…”

“ERGH!!!! NOT YOU AS WELL!” Prancing around melodramatically Miichan pretends to collapse on her knees looking up at the ceiling with an outstretched arm she wails. “Oh father above…my wife and concubine are leaving me! Who will truly love me for me and not…” She quickly covers her body. “…my perfectly shaped body and intelligence” The two groups of lovebirds immediately pace away from the fallen girl leaving her with the older comrade. Looking over towards Mariko she sighs deeply and shrugs. “I know you like younger girls… but I’m sorry this body will never be yours…”

*FLOP!*

With her ass sticking in the air, arms limp to her side, and a white froth spilling from her mouth, a young girl lays quiet for the first time. Standing behind her is a tall beautiful model, a smile filled with such satisfaction and wickedness across her face, as she holds onto her latest magazine which is nicely rolled up.
“Best $10 I’ve spent in my life…” She begins to walk away proudly before a soft muffled voice enters her ears.

“…I didn’t…. know…. that magazines were… available… in the…. prehistoric era…” A smirk filled the fallen soldiers face before the Gladiator above her swings down her decapitator one last time.

(O_o)

“Where are we going?” A cheery girl asked whilst happily wrapping her arms around her girlfriends arm.

“Going to the cake shop in Shibuya!”

“Mmm cake…” She gently kisses the other girls cheek. “Wasn’t last night’s cream enough for you?”

Blushing furiously the shorter girl stops and looks around before nibbling the taller girl’s neck making the latter gently moan.

“That was dessert, we’re having lunch now”

“So…can we have dessert again later tonight?”

“Hehe yes…” That taller girl grins widely…. “Normal dessert!” …She immediately pouts. “We can’t do it again! We’re still recovering!”

“I recover immediately whenever your kiss me!”

“Hehe pervert… but we still can’t!”

“Why?... You didn’t enjoy it? I’m not good?”

“N-no!”

“I knew I wasn’t good!”

“NO! YOU WERE!”

“Really?” The taller girl smiles happily as the shorter girl blushes.

“Y-yeah…BUT we can’t! Your family is back tonight remember?”

“Oh yeah… Is your family home?”

“ACCHAN!!!”

“Hehe I’m just teasing!! But you’re so cute!” She gently kisses the shorter girls cheek. “Come on let’s go I’m sooooooooo hungry!” The taller girl pulls her girlfriend close against her before they begin walking towards the train station.

TBC

YAH! That is all! Sorry I have to get back to doing work! I didn't go into detail ahaha but I think I don't feel that comfortable and I also believe there are some younger readers and I dont wanna be blamed for a generation of yadongs....one is enough (hehehe alexiel....)  Anyway hope you enjoy the update! Sorry it was short but i dont have much time to write i'm extremely sorry! thanks for everyone support and I hope that I can write more for you guys soon!
Until Next time...Please clean up nosebleeds and please look after yourselves!
Keichan ^_~

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3: WAH WAH WAH UPDATE TIME!
Post by: aoi_sora on April 29, 2011, 02:06:21 PM

what!!!! i'm just starting to write a comment and you updated already!!! oh my!!!
 :cow: :cow: :cow:
i'm catching up!!!  :panic: :panic:
gonna comment again later!!!

EDIT:
*phew* i'm done!  :D
Yuko is really funny!  :rofl: BOOOOOOOOOOOBBBBBIIIIIIIIEES!  :rofl:

TakAcchan finaly made it!  :wub:

Quote from: Keichan ^_^ on April 29, 2011, 02:01:58 PM

v“ERGH!!!! NOT YOU AS WELL!” Prancing around melodramatically Miichan pretends to collapse on her knees looking up at the ceiling with an outstretched arm she wails. “Oh father above…my wife and concubine are leaving me! Who will truly love me for me and not…” She quickly covers her body. “…my perfectly shaped body and intelligence” The two groups of lovebirds immediately pace away from the fallen girl leaving her with the older comrade. Looking over towards Mariko she sighs deeply and shrugs. “I know you like younger girls… but I’m sorry this body will never be yours…”

LOL! Miichan and Mariko is super cute!!!!

thanks for updating!!!

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3: WAH WAH WAH UPDATE TIME!
Post by: TakahashiJ on April 29, 2011, 05:26:24 PM

I like it ! :D
MORE PLEASE

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3: WAH WAH WAH UPDATE TIME!
Post by: sorakamiya on April 30, 2011, 12:58:22 AM

 :shocked :shocked :shocked woooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwww :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: keichaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan.... finally u update... thanks2....  :thumbsup :thumbsup :thumbsup

and the sory is great as well... nice...  :thumbsup i really like how u write it....  :thumbsup :thumbsup

keep update ninja's.....  :grin: :grin:

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3: WAH WAH WAH UPDATE TIME!
Post by: kahem on April 30, 2011, 12:32:54 PM

This time I'm on the metro, I'm smilling and blushing but thank god no embarassing accident like last time XD
The creme part made wow
Kojiyuu are so funny
Poor Miichan, she must find a girlfriend too ^^

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3: WAH WAH WAH UPDATE TIME!
Post by: FoF on April 30, 2011, 03:59:51 PM

Yey! An update!  :twothumbs
Miichan and Mariko pairing always cracks me up whenever they're paired up together in fics.  :lol:
Their dysfunctional pairing is just  :lol:  :lol:
And kojiyuu too!   :lol:
Thanks for the funny update!
I needed that.  XD

And me create a new extra long fic? Hmm. Don't know about that.  :nervous
Anyway, I will wait patiently until the ninja fully returns.  XD

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3: WAH WAH WAH UPDATE TIME!
Post by: bou-j525 on April 30, 2011, 05:19:28 PM

 :lol: At the beginning I was so lost because I couldn't remember how the other chapter ended xD I like Acchan being a pervert at the end of this chapter..... I lol'ed at the "NO YOU WERE"  :rofl: Like "Wtf did she just scream?!" XD
And I loved KojiYuu  :grin: So cute at the romantic date of Yuko ^^ Hope you'll write this part ^^

And thank for the update! I thought you were like.... never going to update ever so -.-' XD <-- I hope it won't become true  :smhid I'll be waiting for the ninja.

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3: WAH WAH WAH UPDATE TIME!
Post by: khryz0421 on May 05, 2011, 10:52:55 PM

sorry for late reply... :kneelbow:

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@khryz0421: Ahahaha thanks for loving the pervert parts? Ahaha  :mon sweat: maybe I need to cut down after this.... lol but I noticed your edited your post! You wanted some Mariko so I added some into this chapter for you!! Hope you enjoy it!

heheh... :kekeke: it's nothing i just really love pervert parts anyway  :welcome.   
It's okay to cut them down... :on gay: but i hope you just cut them down a little ... :prayers:
Thanks for adding mariko-sama!! :luvluv1: :luvluv1:

edit: chapter 15 makes me  :mon bleed2: :mon bleed2: :mon bleed2: :mon bleed2: :mon bleed2: :mon bleed2: :mon bleed2: :mon bleed2:
i can go to heaven!! :mon angel: :mon angel: :mon angel: :mon angel:  :mon angel: :mon angel:

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3: WAH WAH WAH UPDATE TIME!
Post by: Keichan ^_^ on June 09, 2011, 02:42:32 PM

Konbanwa!!!!!
First of all....
@aoi_sora: Hehehe well you read the last chapter so hopefully i dont make you edit your post again xD
@TakahashiJ: Here is some more for you!
@Ecchichan: Mwahahahaha sorry for lack of update. but at least i finally did something right! and i dont know what the senbatsu results are but ganbare takamina!
@kahem: Good to know that nothing happened last time! But seriously you are definitely busy reading fanfics on the way to work? lol this chap is tame!
@FoF: Dearest FoF please please please start a new fic. I have this thing called an FoF update withdrawal!!! It's really bad.
@byunchan: oh how much i wish i could never update again! lol I was gonna complain you hadnt updated but then i remembered I hadnt updated mine for over a month now so i decided to update before complaining!
@khryz0421: Lol thanks for being an open perv unlike the rest of the group on FB! lol

Hey everyone sorry to have been away for so long and lacking the updates etc! Anyway I am back from backpacking Japan and I have included in the story a few places I went to and a few things I did as well. This update is quite short but I guess its best to update now than never as if i don't update now I wouldn't update anyway! lol anyway truthfully i forget what I had gotten up to so i had to reread the last chapter to continue, oh and due to the threats in my oneshot thread ahahahaha...gotta make people happy again i guess! anyway please enjoy! (BTW I hope that Takamina gets a really really high senbatsu selection! TAKAMINA FOR THE WIN! FIGHTO!!!)

Chapter Sixteen

Love is hard to explain. Sure as hell I know I’m in love! How do I know? When I see her, my body shakes with excitement. When I’m near her I can’t control myself. When I hear her sweet voice I feel butterflies in my stomach. When she leaves me my heart aches. When she yells at me I yearn to make her happy again. When she slaps me I giggle at the thought of how rough she can get… when I touch her boobs, my energy levels increase to the maximum level of POWER!!!!! Anyway, the point it love is different for everyone, how we show someone how much we love them is different, how we respond to it is definitely different as well. How do I know this? Because right now I’m experiencing it! I said I’ll take my girlfriend on a romantic date! I did! I said it’ll be a lunch she’ll remember! She will! I said that it will be fun and entertaining!...well at least for me it was…. We went to teppenyaki…. I had fun! I had an egg thrown at me! Oh and I had meet thrown at me and vegetables! It was amazing… but I don’t think she enjoyed it at all… why I say this…because right now I’m getting dragged out of the restaurant by my ear with my girlfriend screaming at me because she has food all over her face and clothes…

“YUKO!”

“Yes Nyan-Nyan?” I smile happily as I watch my cute beautiful girlfriend pout at me.

“You said it’ll be romantic!”

“Wasn’t it?”

“No”

“Oh, well….how about we go to an…”

“No.”

“You didn’t even let me fi~”

“No.”

“Why not?” I pout towards her.

“Because it’s not going to be romantic…”

“How do you know!”

“Because none of the places you find romantic are romantic to me!”

Maybe it is true… maybe I’m too childish to be with someone like Haruna. I turn and begin to walk away. I’ll think of something… I suddenly feel her tug on my hand. Turning around I see her pouting face again. Another thing about love. When you love someone and they are sad. You feel sad as well. I instantly pout at her.

“Yuko I’m sorry I didn’t mean it” She gently pulls me towards her and hugs me closely.

“I’m sorry I’m not romantic…But I promise I’ll try harder to be!” She gently giggled and kissed my cheek.

“Only towards me though… I see you with someone else… I’ll never talk to you again.” Hugging her tightly I nibble on her neck.

“You know that you’re the only one I ever want to be romantic with.”

“Yuko….stop thinking in a perverted way…”

“HOW DID YOU KNOW!”

O_o

“Minami!!!!! I want that one!!!” Shaking her girlfriend’s arm rapidly the younger girl points towards a giant toy in one of many toy machines.

“Haha it’s pretty big! I don’t know if I can get it!” Scratching the back of her head with her free arm she chuckles to herself.

“Minami~” Pouting towards the shorter girl she gently rubs her cheek against the latter’s shoulder before kissing it gently.

“Hehehe okay okay I’ll see how much is in my purse!” Rummaging around inside her bag she finally pulls out her frog-shaped coin purse, similar to that owned by Naruto. “I have…..500yen…”

She turns and smiles brightly at the younger girl who is returning a similar gesture.

“Yay yay yay yay yay yay yay! That gives us 6 chances!! Put it in! put it in!” Jumping excitedly on the spot the younger girl watches as the shorter girl places the coin into the machine. With the sudden sound of music bringing the machine to life she holds onto her girlfriends arm and watches as she slowly manoeuvres the probe with the joystick. With a gentle push the claw slowly opens and drops towards the toy. Latching onto the bears head it slowly moves it mere centimetres.

“A-a-argh!!” She screams excitedly. “Come on Minami!!!”

“Hehehe calm down baby!”

Holding onto the joystick she continues to move the joystick. Each attempt moving the bear closer towards the hole. On the last attempt a violent scream erupts throughout the games arcade. Signally the chibi captains success in pleasing her girlfriend. Grabbing the bear out of the machine the taller girl enthusiastically holds the bear in the air whilst jumping around happily. The shorter girl on the other hand signals the attendant to bring a bag for the toy. Upon receiving a bag for the toy she kindly bows towards the attendant before turning around to face her erratic girlfriend. To her surprise she receives a kiss on the lips from her girlfriend.

“MEET TAKACCHAN!” She waves the toy in front of her girlfriend’s face. “Our baby!” She moves forward and gently whispers into the shorter girl’s ear. “The one we conceived last night.”

“A-a-atsuko!” She begins to freak out as she feels the latter’s arms wrap around her neck. The teddy bear touching the back of her neck.

“I love you so so so so so much!” The taller girl whispers to her girlfriend before closing in for a second kiss, only to be pushed back by the short girl. Surprised at the older girls actions, she immediately questions the girl before her. “Is something wrong?”

Grabbing hold of the other girl’s hand the older girl immediately looks around before pulling the girl aside.

“Baby I want to kiss you back but you know that we can’t do it in public. We’d be in trouble if we got caught just then! We’re just lucky the attendant walked off before you did that just then”

Cuddling into her girlfriend the younger girl pouts whilst staring at the bear.

“I really don’t get it. Aki-P said we aren’t allowed to date guys…We aren’t guys!”

Chuckling lightly she gently pinches the pouting girl’s cheek.

“You know what he is trying to get at. Just no dating. But as long as we don’t get caught then it’s all good.”

Smiling again the taller girl turns towards her girlfriend.

“So…we’re like secret spies right? We can’t be caught so we live an exciting life filled with adrenaline and in order to stay alive we have to hide ourselves from the enemy!”

Giggling gently she nods towards the imaginative girl.

“Yes baby we are secret spies who are living off the adrenaline of love!”

Happy listening to her girlfriend she pulls her along.

“Well let’s go and complete some super dangerous missions!”

“Atsuko…” The smaller girl tries to slow down the pace of the taller girl.

“Yeah?” The latter answers whilst she continues to drag the smaller girl towards her destination.

“We aren’t going to complete the mission we completed last night right….Both of our families are home I told you before! And we’re recovering!”

Stopping immediately the taller girl turns around.

“I feel fine” She smiles cheerfully. “Fully recovered!” Bending forward she whispers into the shorter girls ear. “And my family don’t get back for another 5 hours”

Moving back she chuckles at the stunned look on the shorter girls face before turning back around to continue dragging her lover towards their love nest.

O_o

In a Shanghai dumpling store in Ikebukuro two girls were scoffing down plates of fried shanghai dumplings.

“I can’t believe you hit me!”

“It’s not my fault you were being a bitch to me!”

“A bitch? I was just telling you the truth!”

Feeling her eyebrow twitch the older girl immediately tells herself to calm down and continues to eat her dumplings, however not before pouring chilli sauce over them.

“Why are you following me again? I thought I wasn’t your type?”

“Oh slow down babe! Don’t get ahead of yourself! I’m only here because you said you were coming for dumplings. If not I’m sure you would be a loner again.”

Stabbing her dumpling nonstop she then turns back to the Lolita girl.

“Well I’m sure that if you weren’t with me you’d be alone as well.”

Smiling victoriously upon seeing the younger girl cease eating the taller girl continues to eat happily. The younger girl on the other hand immediately shoots up her hand gaining the attention of the owners in the little shop.

“12 more dumplings immediately!!!” The chef immediately turns up the flame on the wok as the sous-chefs immediately begin wrapping the dumplings faster. The older girl once again grins evilly at her success of hitting the nerve of the other girl. Depressive eating, the epitome of her vengeance.

O_o

“I love you!”

“Oh Takamina I love you too.”

“You mean everything to me”

“Stop you’re making me blush”

“I mean it”

“Takamina…”

“You’re the only one I love.”

“But what about the other girls who always cling to you?”

“You should know that I only do that to make you jealous!”

“Well you can’t keep doing it, it’s breaking my heart…”

“I promise you I’ll never do it again”

“Takamina…”

The door suddenly swings open, slamming against the wall.

“GOD DAMN IT MOCCHI STOP PLANNING WITH YOUR TOYS AND FANTASING ABOUT TAKAMINA IT’S FREAKING ME OUT!”

Mocchi immediately throws down her hand-made replicas of herself and the captain in fury.

“Why do you always have to barge in here and ruin my love story!”

“Because your addiction is starting to become concerning to us all!”

“Well if Takamina accepted my confession I wouldn’t have to do this Sasshi!!”

“Oh. My. God. SHE’S NEVER GONNA GO OUT WITH YOU!! SHE LOVES ACCHAN!”

The girl in front of her suddenly drops onto the ground crying.

“I’m sorry Mocchi but it’s really time for you to wake up!” She bends over and hugs the girl tightly.

“B-b-b-but she’s suppose to be mine!”

Pushing the crying girl back onto the ground, the other girl rolls her eyes before getting up and walking out the door. Slamming it behind her. The crying girl immediately gets up, wiping away her tears immediately she continues to play with the dolls.

TBC

Anyway hope everyone likes this more than the one-shot ahahaha cos i didnt kill anyone....yet.... :twisted:

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3: KEICHAN IS BACK RAWR! UPDATE CHAPTER 16!!
Post by: Flean on June 09, 2011, 03:00:22 PM

I've been waiting for your update~~  :onioncheer:

Takacchan just cute together...  :mon inluv:

Thank you for the update!!!  :on cny2:

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3: KEICHAN IS BACK RAWR! UPDATE CHAPTER 16!!
Post by: kahem on June 09, 2011, 09:58:08 PM

Yuko can be so cute with her Nyan Nyan sometime <3
I had a huge smile on my face when I read about the spies part lol

Euh since I have like 2 hours of journey per day, I read fanfict it's like a magazine or a newspaper but it's better ^^ and yeah I'm kinda busy when I'm not at home I'm at school lol

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3: KEICHAN IS BACK RAWR! UPDATE CHAPTER 16!!
Post by: khryz0421 on June 09, 2011, 10:32:05 PM

Quote

@khryz0421: Lol thanks for being an open perv unlike the rest of the group on FB! lol

no prob.. just true to my self  :kekeke:

well in FB group i can't say or read something pervy.. cuz my smart talking perv diary (alexiel or yadong) will be mad at me.. :hehehe: ..

btw  :on GJ: i like _{the pervy parts} the story.. :on gay:

please update soon :onioncheer:

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3: KEICHAN IS BACK RAWR! UPDATE CHAPTER 16!!
Post by: Tejinashi on June 10, 2011, 09:35:21 AM

In this chapter I can only feel pain for Mocchi, don't really know why, especialy the last scene when she cry then wipe her tears to continue her fantasy about takamina, this just move me so much, it's just irony, like you love someone who don't love you back, it's okay, you can just fantasy and keep your hope about that person and that would be enough, good job :thumb up:, small scene but I already can feel the depth :thumb up:

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3: WAH WAH WAH UPDATE TIME!
Post by: bou-j525 on June 11, 2011, 06:50:03 AM

Quote from: Keichan ^_^ on June 09, 2011, 02:42:32 PM

@byunchan@Bou-J525: oh how much i wish i could never update again! lol I was gonna complain you hadnt updated but then i remembered I hadnt updated mine for over a month now so i decided to update before complaining!

FIXED. I will never update if you call me Byunchan  :twisted:
Thank for updating though XD

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3: KEICHAN IS BACK RAWR! UPDATE CHAPTER 16!!
Post by: AAAice on June 17, 2011, 10:17:09 PM

Wah, one of the best fic I've ever read. I'm liking this pair now. xD Since, I never really give my attention to Atsumina. Yet, I never imagine Acchan can be this... I can't even say.

I'm guessing that the two girls in dumpling store was Miichan and Mariko! :]]

Augh, seeing/reading Kojiyuu's scene always makes me giggle. Haha. Though I only got a chance to read the pair in a certain story. (I.E. your story and other stories w/Kojiyuu scenes) Eek, why is it so hard to make a proper fic about Kojiyuu. While Takacchan pair is easy.

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3: KEICHAN IS BACK RAWR! UPDATE CHAPTER 16!!
Post by: FoF on June 19, 2011, 08:59:01 AM

Moochi playing with her toys and fantasizing about takamina.  :rofl: :rofl:
God, that cracked me up real good.  :lol:
Aww. Is that Mariko and Miichan I see?  :D
Does this update means that the ninja is back for good?  :lol:

Quote from: Keichan ^_^ on June 09, 2011, 02:42:32 PM

@FoF: Dearest FoF please please please start a new fic. I have this thing called an FoF update withdrawal!!! It's really bad.

 :nervous :nervous You want me to start a new fic?  :nervous :nervous
I honestly don't know if I can. I do have a few ideas...but...alas...time is against me.  :lol:
Hmm. I'll think about it.  :)

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 VOTE FOR WHAT YOU WANT UPDATED!
Post by: Keichan ^_^ on July 07, 2011, 05:07:18 PM

 :mon XD: HELLO!!! So....long time no update! Sorry guys I've lacked motivation to the max!
After speaking to Sorachan on Facebook I have decided to update ONE thing for you guys! Therefore I have created a poll! I will let this poll run for a week and which ever one has the most votes will get updated  :mon bat: yes...seems evil doesnt it! I'm sorry!
 :mon rush: i shall run before being murdered! But yes! time is running out! Choose your fic and I'll work on the winning choice! If you vote for the one-shot, then please post and choose a pairing as well and I will consider it. Anyway a few quick replies:
@Flean: You want this updated you vote for it xD if not its anyone's ball game!
@kahem: xD haha long trips! lol um...i guess you can choose which one you wanna grin to!
@khryz0421: I cannot guarantee pervy parts for whatever wins xD ask your mum to update!
@Tejinashi: Yeah poor Mocchi! When I was thinking about the scene I was thinking how crap it would be to love someone who would never feel the same!
@BYUNCHAN!: You're fic has ended so I am not scared anymore! But here, i give you a chance to vote for what you want!
@AAAice: Hahaha thanks for the compliments! and yeah Kojiyuu isn't hard to create a fanfic out of, i just guess i have takacchan bias! But i try to incorporate other pairings as well to balance things out!
@FoFchan: hehehehe as you can see Ninja is definitely not back, i think now i'm more like The Godfather, i'm making people choose now and super slow at updating! And yes i do want you to start a new fic!!!

ANYWHO! The voting has started! "Let's Enjoy!!!"

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 VOTE FOR WHAT YOU WANT UPDATED!
Post by: Flean on July 07, 2011, 05:12:29 PM

This is too cruel Keichan!!!!!!  :farofflook:  How can I choose only one!!!!!!  :fainted:

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 VOTE FOR WHAT YOU WANT UPDATED!
Post by: bou-j525 on July 08, 2011, 02:03:34 AM

Great, so you will update and... leave us for another two months   :?
Totally giving up about the nickname thing but... Note to myself: Never create another story... and never update any OS

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 VOTE FOR WHAT YOU WANT UPDATED!
Post by: Keichan ^_^ on July 08, 2011, 04:12:26 AM

@Flean: -silence-
@Byunchan: Were you REALLY even going to update? Don't bluff me!!! Lol and um... well it was gonna be i'll update, and wait for motivation again xD And I totally do not leave you guys! I'm quite active on FB! You're just never on at the same time as me anymore!

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 VOTE FOR WHAT YOU WANT UPDATED!
Post by: bou-j525 on July 08, 2011, 04:39:42 AM

^
TOTALLY WRONG!!!!! I AM WRITING NOW. >__< I was thinking all day yesterday about a new OS that wouldn't suck too much and started writing. But I still think it sucks anyway XD And hell you're living in Australia, don't expect me to be online all night just to see if you're there on fb --'

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 VOTE FOR WHAT YOU WANT UPDATED!
Post by: Arakawa on July 08, 2011, 01:25:52 PM

Could I get a link to the fb group? Thanks xD

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 VOTE FOR WHAT YOU WANT UPDATED!
Post by: Lurx89 on July 08, 2011, 01:32:01 PM

crazy Normal group called Jphipsterz! ^_^

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 VOTE FOR WHAT YOU WANT UPDATED!
Post by: khryz0421 on July 08, 2011, 05:27:11 PM

damn uncle keichan! :banghead: can you please update two fics?  :smhid you're cruel like daddy said :banghead:

Quote from: Arakawa on July 08, 2011, 01:25:52 PM

Could I get a link to the fb group? Thanks xD

http://www.facebook.com/groups/Jphipsterz?ap=1 (ftp://www.facebook.com/groups/Jphipsterz?ap=1) here's the url ..^^ i just want to warn you, everyone in that group is weird and crazy..^^ and beware of uncle keichan(the most pervert admin) :smhid

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 VOTE FOR WHAT YOU WANT UPDATED!
Post by: Keichan ^_^ on July 14, 2011, 01:31:01 PM

Well...I think I've given enough time for voting! xD So I figure that i'll end the poll here! and the winner is Priceless Love by one vote over A Bit Blind To Love!

Lol I thought that someone would've been smart enough to vote that extra vote and make it a draw and i'll update both but meh too late!

Anyway I will update that fanfic for you in the coming week hopefully but my soccer schedule is full on this week.

Anyway if you want to give me input please write in Priceless Love not here! There is enough spam! If not just attack me on the Jphipsterz Facebook page!

Keichan ^_^

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3
Post by: Keichan ^_^ on October 06, 2011, 12:54:42 AM

 :cathappy: hewwo~
Anyway, long time no see/update! I haven't read a fic on here since the gigantic influx of authors...(gives me an adequate reason to never update) anywho~ I decided to come back and browse and noticed I have not updated this fic for 4 months... Therefore I feel a bit bad... I'm sorry x'[ life has been hectic and I have been extremely busy and unmotivated to complete my fanfic! I'm sorry! Please forgive me! After I get most of my work done I promise you that I will try and update this one first!
Love you all!

Keichan ^_^

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3
Post by: haruhi16 on October 06, 2011, 06:13:12 AM

My first comment here! i love this fic keichan!

Atsumina is so inlove ! and my favorite couple KojiYuu is so funny as hell! <333 Please make Yuko serious this time and have their date sooooo romantic!

Update soon!

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3
Post by: Haruko on October 06, 2011, 08:02:41 AM

gooooooooooooooooood history i like too much pleeease update!!

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3
Post by: Arakawa on October 06, 2011, 10:28:46 AM

I'd actually prefer it if u updated Priceless Love :P

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3
Post by: Kiiz on October 06, 2011, 03:22:27 PM

Atsumina inlove~ :luvluv1:

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3
Post by: Keichan ^_^ on November 02, 2011, 11:37:34 AM

 :mon ouch: HELLO~ I have finally had time to type something... It's not much but this is all the motivation I had... My AKBness is slowly dying... I am sorry life is just hectic atm. Anyway just a few quick A/N.

@haruki16: I have tried my best to type something slightly romantic!
@Haruko: I have tried my best to update! There isn't much but I lack motivation.
@Arakawa: Haha really? Why? Hmm... Inspire me and I might!
@Kiiz: Yes they are in love!
@FoF: Thanks for the motivational messages! I hope you update soon as well! I will try and bring the ninja back!

Anyway, here it is, please enjoy and comment.

Chapter Seventeen

Here I am, alone with my squirrel. Although the evening didn’t start too well with her lack of romanticism, (seriously teppanyaki… was she serious?) it has finally worked out. She took me out shopping and bought us a pair of matching iphone cases. She has one of Alvin from Alvin and the chipmunks and I have one of Brittany. She’s so cute sometimes. I don’t think she knows that I love her because she is always so caring and cute. Her smile makes me smile unconsciously. At the moment we are at her house. She decided that she was going to cook me dinner. I’ve never had her cooking before so I’m quite curious. Yuko please don’t give me food poisoning. I guess I better check how’s she’s going. Looking in I spot her breaking out in sweat from stirring the contents in the saucepan. How cute….

“Yuko~, I’m hungry~” Turning around she runs towards me and pushes me back into the lounge room.

“Nyan Nyan you can’t be in here the heat my damage your beauty” chuckling gently I pull her in close against me and gently nibbled her nose.

“But I’m soooooooo hungry right now”. Grinning wildly she pecks my lips.

“I’ll go serve it out immediately my dearest princess”. She quickly salutes before she scrambles back into the kitchen. All I could do was sit on the couch and smile to myself. I’m happy we are together. She suddenly seems so much more mature yet cute at the same time. I can’t see myself with anyone but her…

O_o

On the other side of Tokyo two girls lay in bed in a quiet apartment…

Pulling the blankets up, the young girl gently covered herself and her girlfriend. The cold breeze from outside had seeped through the curtains sending shivers through the girls bodies as it touched their bare skin. Hugging herself close against her girlfriend who lay still from the exhaustion of the hours before, she gently kissed the younger girls bare shoulder. She felt as the latter’s naked body shifted against hers, it was a touch she had only discovered yesterday that she has now become addicted to. She has never felt such a sensation before. It is one that can entirely take control of her thoughts. One that made her believe that two bodies can somehow mould perfectly into each other. She listens to the soft breathing of her girlfriend, only moments ago was it shallow and rough. She heard the angelic voice of her girlfriend hit unknown tones for the second night in a row. It escaped her soft lips with such exuberance and finesse. It was surreal, and she hopes she will forever be the only one to hear such delicate vocals.

O_o

Two girls were walking down a quiet street towards the train station…

“We don’t see each other that often anymore”

“Yeah I know…”

“It seems as though you are too busy to make time for me. For us...”

“I’m sorry but I just have to take this opportunity that I have been given.”

“Are you that busy you don’t even have time to reply to my messages?”

“…”

“I think I need a break from you”

“W-what?”

“We need a break, I need a break, we’ve become distant… I don’t even feel like we are together anymore”

“B-but”

“Please.”

“…”

“You are busy and have to work on your career, and I… I need to see what else is out there in life… You’re not the only one who needs to embrace the opportunities given to them…”

“…”

“I better go… bye”

The young girl left the latter standing alone on the footpath. Despite the sound of the serene water underneath the bridge all the latter could hear was the sound of her heart breaking as tears streamed down her face. What she didn’t know was that the other girl was in a worse state than herself.

O_o

Back at Yuko’s house the girl’s were sitting at the dining room table feasting upon Yuko home cooked “Lovel-Lovel Nyan-Nyan Din-Din”. Yuko had cooked okonomiyaki. She had cooked it and shaped it perfectly into the figure of a cat head. Haruna had told herself, no matter how it tasted to her it was perfect because it was made out of love.

“Itadakimasu!” They both said in unison before digging into the well prepared meal.

“Well what do you think?” Yuko said eagerly. To Haruna’s amazement it was the most delicious okonomiyaki she had ever had. Could love really change her tastebuds?

“It’s the best in world!” She said with her most sincere smile. This instantly made the latter blush.

“Oh stop flirting” The squirrel replied softly in embarrassment.

“I’m not, it’s true.” She said before she gently kissed her squirrel on the cheek. “You can cook for me everynight.”

“R-r-really?”

“Mhmm.” She replied before putting another mouthful in her mouth. The squirrel immediately began rambling, the thoughts of what to cook for her princess began flooding her mind.

“I’m going to cook you the best meal ever! Teriyaki salmon bento… miso… no no how about hamburg steak…” The list went on as the taller girl smiled to herself quietly as she watched her squirrel’s excitement. She was, for the first time ever in her life, genuinely happy and in love.

O_o

Acchan slowly moved around in her girlfriend’s embrace. She turned around slowly and faced the latter. She could tell the latter was extremely fatigued, how she knew this? Because she knew the latter had a habit of drooling whilst asleep when she was extremely fatigued. She smiled and gently wiped the dribble from the corner of the shorter girl’s lips. Slowing she used her index finger to trace the sleeping girl’s complexion. She would make sure that even if one day she lost her sight she would be able to recognise every inch of her girlfriend with the simplicity of a touch. Unknown to her the latter had woken up and was staring at her. It wasn’t until she felt the latter’s hand grasp her own that she looked up into those beautiful brown orbs.

“I love you”

Something so simple made her heart skip a beat. A giant grin crept onto her face as she blushed furiously.

“I love you too.”

Slowly moving forward she caught the latter’s lips with her own. As the kiss began to get more intense she felt as the shorter girl chuckled against her lips. Moving back she looked at the latter confused as she was starting to laugh like a hyena.

“Babeh… you can’t seriously still be horny… your stamina is amazing!”

Acchan immediately began to hit the later in embarrassment.

“What if I am?” The shorter girl immediately stopped laughing and starred at the taller girl.

“Well then I definitely need to learn how to clone myself like Naruto!” She then began to chuckle again as the latter recommenced hitting her playfully.

“You’re such an otaku!”

O_o

It was late. Very late. Yet still two figures were sitting in the exact same spot they were in a few hours ago. With multiple empty plates spread across the messy table, two girls were leaning back against their chairs as their stomachs rose up in the air. They had eaten enough dumplings to feed a third world country. They were definitely unlady-like and their style of consuming the dumplings was definitely not one you would see of the average idol… it was more of one of a hungry beast… and definitely one that scared the other customers. Slowly falling into a food coma the shorter girl reached for a napkin to wipe the excess soy sauce from the edges of her lips. She was in heaven she looked across at the other girl who was in a similar state. She could see the bulge protruding from the latter’s shirt. She turned to the side and rubbed her belly. She heard movement and looked back across the table at the girl moving off her seat.

“Where are you going?” She said softly, her mouth was too exhausted from the exercise for her to speak.

“Toilet.” The latter replied before walking off. The young girl shifted in a more comfortable position and drifted off to sleep. However she was woken up soon after by the sound of her message tone. Moving slowly she grabbed her phone out of her bag. Opening up her phone she slowly read the message out aloud.

“Thanks for paying.” She closed her phone and resumed her previously position. However this only lasted mere seconds as she finally processed what just happened. “THAT BITCH!” She was about to jump up from her seat when the waitress presented her with the bill.

“That’ll be 25000 yen please.”

With her mouth agape she slowly but surely pulled out the notes from her Gachapin wallet. She knew deep down something would taste better than the dumplings she consumed. That, she knew was the taste of revenge once she succeeds.

TBC

Thanks for being patient! I will try my best to continue my fanfics!
Love Keichan ^_^

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 Updated Chapter 17
Post by: skytsuna on November 02, 2011, 12:01:53 PM

Yea!!!!! You updated it~~~~ :)
I've been waiting ;)

Thank you for updating~~  :cow:
Although I guess I have to read the story again XD

XD Will be waiting for ur next update for sure!!!  O0

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 Updated Chapter 17
Post by: kahem on November 02, 2011, 01:20:12 PM

Ahahah Miichan lost!!!!
I wonder who is the couple who broke up

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 Updated Chapter 17
Post by: haruhi16 on November 02, 2011, 01:33:50 PM

Awww kojiYuu is sooooo cute  :heart: :heart: :heart:

Atsumina being so horny  :smhid

LOL Miichan! Owned!  XD

and.. what couple just broke up?!  :?

please update soon!! :thumbsup

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 Updated Chapter 17
Post by: cocos_milos on November 02, 2011, 01:54:02 PM

what happen??? :? :? :? :?
I'm kinda lost.... may be I need to read from the start :nervous :sweatdrop: :nervous

but from this chapter I know it will become a grea tfanfic :wub: :inlove: :heart:

Ok lets start read again... :otomerika:
 Good luck for next chapter... UPDATE SOON!!! :thumbsup :bow:

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 Updated Chapter 17
Post by: Sydney W on November 02, 2011, 01:59:48 PM

nice update..... please continue soon

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 Updated Chapter 17
Post by: moekare on November 02, 2011, 05:59:21 PM

its so surprising!
Keichan, I have finished reading all chapters in this fic. Just finished some hours ago. I waited for your update and when I went online, you updated!! yeeeeyy  :yossi:
I love this story! my AtsuMina  :wub: :wub: day by day their love are developing  :drool: :heart:  I hope you can update the next chapt as fast as possible. I am curious about the couple who just broken up.  :panic:

btw, my first comment here. yoroshiku!  :twothumbs

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 Updated Chapter 17
Post by: arisa03 on November 03, 2011, 12:11:52 AM

This is the first time I reply cause I didn't want to bump the thread xDDD;;; Couple breaking up? MaYuki? WMatsui? ;A;?

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 Updated Chapter 17
Post by: Kid_Alpha on November 03, 2011, 03:35:06 AM

First time reviewer and I don't know why it took me so long to do it either. :P

Ah kojiyuu is so sweet and atsumina is of course controlled by Acchan's never ending hormones lol But who are those mystery couples? :s

Oh and Yuko cooking for Haruna, did you get that from the interview on MS or do you have no idea what I'm talking about? Cause I kinda want to know...

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 Updated Chapter 17
Post by: Haruko on November 03, 2011, 06:53:57 AM

aww kojiyuu is grown up!! but yuko you are alone with haruno and you wasn`t doing nothing perv... wow

jaja sexadicchan.. you are totally horny.. and you midget doesn`t matter :D .. cool scenes :D

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 Updated Chapter 17
Post by: FoF on November 03, 2011, 07:39:31 AM

Who's the couple who broke up?  :?
Horny Atsumina is just  XD
And KojiYuu couple...cute!  :twothumbs
Eat and run! Miichan is soooo going to be pissed. Revenge Revenge!  :twisted:

Gald to see you update! Hope the ninja goes back soon!  :twothumbs :twothumbs

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 Updated Chapter 17 POLL ADDED 4/11 ^_~ RAWR
Post by: Keichan ^_^ on November 05, 2011, 03:48:41 AM

 :mon cigar: Hello~ Just popping in quickly to add a poll! Basically I'm thinking of just thinking of breaking up the couple... but I want to see the likelihood of someone inflicting pain on me for doing it...

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 Updated Chapter 17 POLL ADDED 4/11 ^_~ RAWR
Post by: Flean on November 05, 2011, 03:54:22 AM

ARGH!!!!!  :OMG:  Don't break my Takacchan!!!!  :frustrated: Don't you dare!!!!  :scolding:

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 Updated Chapter 17 POLL ADDED 4/11 ^_~ RAWR
Post by: moekare on November 05, 2011, 05:14:04 AM

Break them up?  :OMG: Don't do that to them, oi!!  :scolding: :scolding:
You will know what will happen to you if you dare to do that!!  :on voodoo: :on kimbo:
But I think a little drama between them is accepted  :kekeke: you know, to make it more interesting  :glasses:

Dont you dare to break them!!  :scolding: :temper:

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 Updated Chapter 17 POLL ADDED 4/11 ^_~ RAWR
Post by: Haruko on November 05, 2011, 06:53:37 AM

maybe a jelousy drama!!... a rival for atsuko/minamo sound good..

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 Updated Chapter 17 POLL ADDED 4/11 ^_~ RAWR
Post by: Keichan ^_^ on November 10, 2011, 01:30:51 AM

 :mon bat:  RAWRRRRRRRRRRR!!!! Ohayo~ This voting this is fun, it seems as though I won't really get killed! Ahahahahahaha And thanks for the "I Love Cheesecake" voters cos you're awesome~!!

@skytsuna: Hey hey sorry I had to make you re-read the fanfic! But more than that thank you for reading it at all!
@kahem: Haha yes the couple... that will come up shortly!
@haruhi16: thanks for the comment! And yeah the couple are all a bit weird.
@cocos_milos: Thanks for reading my fic. I hope it is worth your time reading the whole thing!
@Sydney W: Hahaha thank you~ and yes update...
@moekare: Haha thank you and im glad i updated after you read it. And dont dare aye... Well imma ninja! and a daredevil... I fear of death is minimal!!!
@arisa03: Lol... you are scared to bump a thread xD wtf anyway thanks for commenting and the couple will estabished soon...
@Kid_Alpha: Hey hey thank you first timer! And yeah I made it up about Kojiyuu, just what is in my head I guess is what I type.
@Haruko: Haha jealousy drama... hmm... well more people have currently voted for a lil bit of drama...
@Fofchan: Haha as we discussed in pms.... I can be a bitch at times... and a ninja bitch isnt the best thing xD
@Flean: What you gonna do about it? >=O get your turtle to attack me? Cos your turtle is on my side! p.s dont abuse me on jpervs!


Anyway....  I present to you....

Chapter Eighteen

Things can change in mere seconds. A life can be changed. A heart can be broken. A bond could be torn apart. For love is the most fragile thing in the world. And all it took was one mistake, one wrong turn, one decision that would hurt them for what feels like eternity. Everyone thought it would last forever. It was innocent. A naïve love. But what one could accept, another couldn’t. And in this case… her family could not accept it.

All she could remember was the sound of a door opening, light creeping into a pitch black room, the sound of a loud gasp and then movement next to her. Then a realisation. Her father’s piercing eyes. Filled with fury. Filled with pain. In one swift movement, only seconds did it take. He swarmed in like a restless army and took her lover from her side. Dragging her away from her grasp. Forcing her to get dressed. Her mother blocked her from passing through. Her fingers gently grazing the one’s which usually intertwine with her own. Her heart sank as she heard the deafening screams from the latter.  The sudden slamming of the front door. She felt fatigue before the cold slap across her face. Tears streaming down her swollen cheeks as she hears the banging on her front door. That saying “So close, yet so far.” She finally understood it. She was being warned. Never to see the latter again. The last thing she remembers is hyperventilating. Then she was out cold. It was too much to bear.

She woke up the next morning. She was locked in her own room. A dungeon. A lonely dungeon. One in which she could not escape. She cried, for that was all she could do.

~Fin~

Thanks for reading A Bit Blind To Love <3


















































































JOKE!!!! :mikilaugh: Anyway that's all I could be bothered to type. Then I decided a prank would be good...so the turtle and I found it amusing to do this.... However once it is done I will post the rest of the chapter up! Anyway I feel as though I am in harms way...Therefore, I shall sneak away before getting abused. :mon hobo:

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 Updated Chapter 18... 10/11/11
Post by: Flean on November 10, 2011, 01:42:01 AM

What the freaking %^$&^&!!!!  :scolding:  You get me worked up for nothing!!!!!  :mon headbang:

You even got my wife to be on your side!!!  :grr:

Argh!!!!  :mon mad:  You better update soon!!!  :mon uggh:

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 Updated Chapter 18... 10/11/11
Post by: CrimsonGrxy on November 10, 2011, 02:41:58 AM

trolling....n i tot u really "END" ur fic there :tama-mad:
will be waiting for the next update then~  :smhid

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 Updated Chapter 18... 10/11/11
Post by: moekare on November 10, 2011, 04:44:08 AM

 :? :? :?
got fooled.  :nervous

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 Updated Chapter 18... 10/11/11
Post by: Haruko on November 10, 2011, 06:00:21 AM

aww miheart was broken.. a little T_T... you MUST update a good and large chapet next time.. for broke my heart,, ¬¬

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 Updated Chapter 18... 10/11/11
Post by: FoF on November 10, 2011, 06:51:12 AM

When I saw the 'Fin' I was like: NO WAY! She wouldn't!  :shocked
I read it, scrolled down and well...you're EBIL.  :lol:
I read it again and LOLed at the abrupt ending.  :rofl:

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 Updated Chapter 18... 10/11/11
Post by: kahem on November 10, 2011, 08:32:54 AM

Ehhhhhh!!! You scared me!!! I was like 'What?!!!!!'

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 Updated Chapter 18... 10/11/11
Post by: bou-j525 on November 10, 2011, 02:43:15 PM

LOL.  :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
I hate you.

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 Updated Chapter 18... 10/11/11
Post by: haruhi16 on November 11, 2011, 03:42:58 PM

I just got trolled.................waaaahhhh! keichan update soon!! you troll! xD

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 Updated Chapter 18... 10/11/11
Post by: chykla on November 12, 2011, 10:04:32 AM

When I read the 'end' chapter, I was so enraged that I read a very amazing and horrible 'ending' of a fanfic until 3 AM that I wanted to keel you with my robot 8l.
But then I scrolled down
And it said
JOKE 8DDD


And now, I need to keel you .__.;
YOU TROLL.
D8 PLEASE UPDATE SOON AND WE WONT HURT YOU ;-;

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 Updated Chapter 18... 10/11/11
Post by: Megumi on November 15, 2011, 12:08:15 AM

You sneaky! I was like what? Nooooo!  LoL that was a good prank  :shocked:

Waiting for your next update!  :bow:

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 CHAPTER 18! (The real one) x]
Post by: Keichan ^_^ on December 26, 2011, 01:08:15 AM

 :mon santa4: MERRY BOXING DAY! (Because it's still a cool day)

Few quick replies to the people who were trolled.
@Flean: MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA I finally get to see your angry side!
@CrimsonGrxy: Hahaha I was considering ending it there since I was like "It's a great way to end a fic."
@moekare: Hehehehehe yes you did!
@Haruko: I can update. But it's not long as I had no time xD
@FoFchan: You know a am incredibly EBIL!!! Can't shock you that much!
@kahem: Haha sorry... I will scare you more next time!
@Bouchan: I love you too!
@haruhi16: ahahahahahahaha i love the power of trolling! sorry i didn't update soon!
@chykla: Even if i never ever updated again you guys can't hurt me!!!
@Megumi: Lol you agree it was a good prank ahahahaha yes~

Anyway, I had an hour to type a quick chapter before I start work later so here it is!

Chapter Eighteen

Things can change in mere seconds. A life can be changed. A heart can be broken. A bond could be torn apart. For love is the most fragile thing in the world. And all it took was one mistake, one wrong turn, one decision that would hurt them for what feels like eternity. Everyone thought it would last forever. It was innocent. A naïve love. But what one could accept, another couldn’t. And in this case… her family could not accept it.

All she could remember was the sound of a door opening, light creeping into a pitch black room, the sound of a loud gasp and then movement next to her. Then a realisation. Her father’s piercing eyes. Filled with fury. Filled with pain. In one swift movement, only seconds did it take. He swarmed in like a restless army and took her lover from her side. Dragging her away from her grasp. Forcing her to get dressed. Her mother blocked her from passing through. Her fingers gently grazing the one’s which usually intertwine with her own. Her heart sank as she heard the deafening screams from the latter.  The sudden slamming of the front door. She felt fatigue before the cold slap across her face. Tears streaming down her swollen cheeks as she hears the banging on her front door. That saying “So close, yet so far.” She finally understood it. She was being warned. Never to see the latter again. The last thing she remembers is hyperventilating. Then she was out cold. It was too much to bear.

She woke up the next morning. She was locked in her own room. A dungeon. A lonely dungeon. One in which she could not escape. She cried, for that was all she could do.

She felt as her body trembled furiously. Until a soft arm wrapped around her freezing body. Gently opening her eyes she looks up at the worried face before her.

“Astuko are you okay?”

“Minami!” The younger girl held onto her lover tightly. “It was a horrible nightmare” She sobbed into the crook of the shorter girl’s neck who had commenced brushing the back of the taller girl’s hair.

“It’s okay babe it’s not going to come true”

“D-d-dad d-doesn’t want m-me t-to be w-with you a-and t-took y-you away f-from me”.

Holding the younger girl tightly the latter gently kissed the girl’s forehead.

“No one can ever break us apart”

Looking up through her tear drenched eyes the younger girl starred into the determined girls eyes.

“P-promise?”

“I promise you Acchan. For as long as I live I will protect our love with my all as each second passes.”

The younger girl grasped tightly onto the latter. She never wanted to let go of the embrace for she did not know what would happen once her family walks through the front doors of the house in the next hour.

O_o

“I love you Nyan-Nyan~” Yuko purred as she nuzzled her nose into the taller girl’s neck.

“I love you too Squirrel” The latter replied watching as the small squirrel in her arms looked up with a toothy grin.

“We should make love~” The shorter girl cheerfully said. “Even Takacchan have done it!” She continued only to receive a shocked face by the dumbfounded girl who instantly smacked the squirrel painfully across the head.

“HENTAI!!!”

“ITAI!!!!” The short girl screamed and instantly rubbed her throbbing head before pouting towards the latter giving her instant puppy eyes.

“Get off me!!!” The tall girl wailed as her arms began pushing the squirrel’s face away from her chest.

“Nyan-Nyan I love you~ I just want to show you how much!!!”

“We just got together I’m not ready for this!”

“But Takamina and Acchan just got together and they do it like crazily horny rabbits! We should be like that as well! It’s not like either of us will ever get pregnant!”

“NO!”

“Nyan-Nyan~”

“No!” The squirrel sat down in defeat before her eye began to twitch.

“It’s that stupid Kawano guy isn’t it! He’s seducing you at work!!”

“What?”

“I’m going to get him!!” The squirrel got off the couch and instantly grabbed her jacket. “I’ll show that bastard never to go near you again!” However, before the later even reached the door she was pulled back by her lover.

“Stop it Yuko! It’s no Kawano-kun!”

“Now he’s a kun?!?!?! Imma kick his ass!!!” Yuko said as she rolled up her sleeves and trudged towards the door.

“YUKO!” Haruna screamed, instantly making the other girl shrivel in fear and cease her movement towards the door.

“Y-y-y-yes Nyan-Nyan” The latter said with her head cowered to the ground.

“Get back over here and sit down NOW!”

Upon hearing the words the squirrel instantly stripped off her jacket and sprinted towards the couch. Sitting down instantly she sat up straight like an eager pre-schooler. The taller girl slowly approached the latter. Gently moving on top of the shorter girl’s lap. She bent forward slowly and kissed the girl’s lips before moving away and resting her forehead against the shorter girl’s.

“Never. And I mean NEVER! Accuse me of being unfaithful or a player or I swear for the love of Nintendo DS-kun that I will NEVER EVER speak to you again.”

She said in a seriously menacing tone which made the shorter girl tremble in fear.

“Y-y-y-y-yes.”

“And NEVER EVER ask me to make love with you.” The taller girl said in the same tone. However, this didn’t elicit the same response. Instead it suddenly evoked the arrival of King of Yuko. The squirrel immediately looked up at the latter with determination. She instantly flipped their positions and pinned the taller girl down.

“NEVER~!!!!!” The shorter girl screamed before attacking her dearest Nyan-Nyan with endless kisses. Amazingly enough the taller girl accepted the constant flow of affection with giggles and hugs. However as the shorter girl attempted to rip off the girl’s shirt she was severely punished. One would say she was attacked in such a way that if she was not already brain damaged that it would ensure she would become in such a way. In addition, the taller girl slept soundly for the rest of the night as the young squirrel remained comatosed on the couch until sunrise.

O_o

The Atsuko family had finally arrived home. The two girl’s had showered and dressed before the arrival of the grand family members. They had sat on the living room lounge where they shared their first kiss. Holding each other’s hand tightly until sweat had seeped through the crevices. The sound of the key in the keyhole was excruciating. Their heartbeats were erratic, their faces pale, their minds continuously imploding within their skulls. They were scared, extremely scared. If one were to jump out in front of them without notice it could be said that they would’ve instantly died of a heart attack.

The door finally opened revealing two tired worn out faces. They were bickering over something and this seemed to increase the anxiety of the two young girls. Finally the two worn figures noticed them.

“ATSUKO!!! MINAMI!!!” They happily yelled in unity.

“M-mum D-dad welcome back.” The young girl said as she approached her parents and gave them a huge hug. Embracing them as though she knew that it would be the last time her parents would hug her in a non-judgemental way. Following close behind the shorter girl bowed politely at the two elders.

“Welcome back Uncle Maeda and Auntie Maeda.” This polite gesture immediately elicited the jolly Aunt Maeda to side step her daughter and embrace the short girl.

“Oh Minami you are always going to be the most polite and respectable person I know. I wish you would just marry my daughter and teach her how to be like you.”

This immediately brought smiles to the two girl’s faces. Oh how they wish it were a reality as well. However, this happiness was short lived as Atsuko’s father finally spoke.

“Oh dear don’t be ridiculous! Two girl’s cannot get married it is against society’s norms.”

This for some reason had finally pushed Atsuko’s buttons as a wave of unknown emotions, mainly that of anger. She immediately broke her hug with her father and clenched her fists as tears began to build up in her eyes.

“Atsuko?” Her father softly spoke. “Is something wrong?”

Yes. There was something wrong. And she was going to let them know immediately. She looked up glaring into her father’s soft eyes.

“WHAT’S WRONG WITH TWO GIRLS BEING TOGETHER IF THEY LOVE EACHOTHER!”

“A-a-atsuko…” Her mother stuttered in sheer shock with her hand over her mouth. Her father on the other hand was dumbfounded. Staring into the deadly yet sad glare his daughter was giving him.

“WE LOVE EACH OTHER! I DON’T CARE WHAT YOU THINK! I DON’T CARE ABOUT SOCIAL NORMS! I’LL NEVER LET YOU TAKE AWAY MY HAPPINESS! I’LL RATHER NOT BE YOUR DAUGHTER!”

“ATSUKO STOP IT! THEY ARE YOUR PARENTS!” Minami immediately pulled the taller girl into a comforting embrace as she immediately broke down in the latter’s arms. Trembling, trembling painfully in her lover’s arms. Her father was still staring at them. Staring at the two girl’s as they held each other in a tight embrace. It was painful for the two parents to watch their cheerful daughter shrivelled up in shame, crying mercilessly into her lovers arms. How could they not have noticed how much pain and pressure their daughter had gone through? How had they not noticed that their daughter had loved her captain in such a way? Had they denied it all along?

“H-h-how long have you been together?” Her father asked. However she was crying too much to even answer. Leaving her lover to respond accordingly.

“Not long. Only for around a week. We only realised how we both felt recently. Please understand we had no idea it would turn out like this but we do love each other. She’s my everything Mr Maeda. I love her as much as you love your wife. I need her as much as I need oxygen. And I will protect her, and our love like you have protected her throughout her life. Please give us your blessing. I promise I will never hurt her.”

This left the room with an awkward silence. The short girl stared seriously into the man’s eyes. The man was left gobsmacked. The mother stared down at the two lovers embracing with tear stained eyes. The daughter held her lover tightly as she turned and looked at her parents with pleading eyes.

Finally a loud sigh was released. Breaking the tension in the room. Acchan’s father looked up at the white ceiling. A smile finally broke out across his face as he looked back down at the determined captain.

“I always wanted to have a son-in-law. Someone who would promise to look after my dear Atsuko with their life. I guess I have found someone better than my expectations.” He said as he chuckled gently. This instantly produced the biggest sighs of relief. Acchan immediately jumped up and hugged her parents as her mother cried and hugged Minami tightly. Suddenly Acchan’s father approached Minami. “Minami!”

“Y-y-yes sir.” She stammered. She suddenly watched as he jumped closer and began poking her arm in a comedic stance.

“Argh totally opposite of my expectations in terms of physicality.” He began moving around her whilst pointing out the flaws she bore in comparison to his physical expectations of his son-in-law. “You’re short as a primary schooler, you have small arms, and you’re a girl!” This immediately left Takamina with her fail-at-life expression. Her lover immediately hit her father and hugged the shorter girl in consolation. “BUT! You have a flat chest like a man, look like a man, walk like a man and hold manly gestures… So I guess you can be considered a man more than a girl.” The man said as he scratched the back of his head.

Although it was a happy ending in some way. It was better known to Takamina as a time in which her confidence was battered and bruised by a man near his mid-life crisis.

O_o

The next day was a start of something new. A relationship which had been approved by one’s parents, and another relationship between a perverted squirrel and emotionless Nyan-Nyan. However, relationships that have just begun always had cracks. Despite the strength of such a blinding love there was always one thing that could glow through the cracks. That is none other than that of pure jealously. And with it, trust begins to die and lust begins to conquer love, and slowly hearts begin to hurt rather than flutter, tears of pain begin to drench the happiest of memories and what was once true love becomes nothing than that of unkempt feelings…

TBC

DRAMA DRAMA~
I looooooooooooove drama. I don't when I will have time to write the next chapter but when I do I promise you all that you will feel the need to hunt me down and skin me alive! However, please remember most of you voted for this!!! Until I love you all and wish you all an exciting New Years!

Keichan ^_^ <333

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 CHAPTER 18! (The real one) x]
Post by: Flean on December 26, 2011, 02:32:15 AM

I didn't vote for any drama!!!!  :mon headbang:

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 CHAPTER 18! (The real one) x]
Post by: Sydney W on December 26, 2011, 04:03:17 AM

Hilarious when Uncle Maeda said Minami : you have flat chest like a man, walk like a man, etc... Again minami fail expression..
Thanks for updating

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 CHAPTER 18! (The real one) x]
Post by: Haruko on December 26, 2011, 06:47:49 AM

jajajaj acchan`s fathe, Now I know who  teach to atsuko be a teaser... jjaja

you know takamina.. you are a man :d everybody tell that... :D

awww kojiyuu..... yuuchan you are a jelousy person you know that?

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 CHAPTER 18! (The real one) x]
Post by: haruhi16 on December 26, 2011, 08:03:22 AM

LOL Haruna should agree to Yuko's resquest~ Make love now!! hehehehehhe ~ Tsundere NyanNyan will always be Tsundere~

Awww i'm glad Acchan's parents approved to their relationship even if it's against the society's norms.

I hope next time Haruna would let her lover to make love with her~ kekeke Thank you for the update Keichan!! Update soon!

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 CHAPTER 18! (The real one) x]
Post by: Yagami.Rai on December 26, 2011, 08:26:37 AM

Yea!! :w00t: Thanks for the Update :D

I'm so happy that Acchan and Takamina's relationship has got approve by Mr. and Mrs. Maeda XD
LOL Kojiyuu was funny :lol:

Drama... is coming and I better prepare enough tissue and punching bags for it :grin:
Can't wait to read what happen next :twothumbs Thanks again for the update :)

Please Update Soon :mon cute:

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 CHAPTER 18! (The real one) x]
Post by: Megumi on December 27, 2011, 07:23:04 PM

Keichan!

I tough you were like forever gone...
Thank you for your update!

Quote

“BUT! You have a flat chest like a man, look like a man, walk like a man and hold manly gestures… So I guess you can be considered a man more than a girl.” The man said as he scratched the back of his head.

Although it was a happy ending in some way. It was better known to Takamina as a time in which her confidence was battered and bruised by a man near his mid-life crisis.

Hahaah poor Takaboy trolled by her wifus father....

Arígatou!  :kneelbow:

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 CHAPTER 18! (The real one) x]
Post by: kahem on December 28, 2011, 07:37:47 PM

Good for them that Acchan's parents accept them. But poor Takamina lol
Hum drama? I'm sure I'll hunt you but I like drama ^^

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 CHAPTER 18! (The real one) x]
Post by: oist on January 05, 2012, 08:04:28 AM

I just marathoned through all of the chapters late night yesterday and today morning..




 XD  :w00t: XD XD :w00t: XD XD :w00t:
DARN WHY HAVEN'T I READ IT SOONER!!!!

and and and

Drama! I love drama. There can never be enough drama, yeahhhhhhh

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 CHAPTER 18! Updated 26th Dec 2011.
Post by: bou-j525 on February 14, 2012, 01:37:50 AM

(http://i959.photobucket.com/albums/ae80/bougie525/Y_U_NO3.jpg)

Message from Keichan who hates being a thread bumper: this fic is over. She will stop writing after one last OS.

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 TERMINATED
Post by: anoni2 on February 14, 2012, 04:11:21 PM

^ ehhhhh  :OMG:

Where's the drama , me waiting for drama  :fainted:

i had the buckets and tissues ready  :pleeease:

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 TERMINATED
Post by: Haruko on February 25, 2012, 05:25:22 PM

one of the best fic ever :D.. please read it people

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 TERMINATED
Post by: miayaka on May 23, 2012, 09:06:02 PM

Keichan Update pls.. Im so addicted into this   :cry:
more cheesy moments of atsumina too please (im so demanding sorry)
Your Fic is Awesome!! gotta share this!  :twothumbs

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 TERMINATED
Post by: Suicchin on May 26, 2012, 02:56:08 AM

Oh my ! Such a good story must have a continuation!

please please please updated soon! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 TERMINATED
Post by: flameeyes on June 23, 2012, 01:26:02 PM

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so you the author again in this fic
PLEASE CONTINUE Writing okay!!!

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whooooo!!!!!  (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/pen1_27.gif) I can read where ever I want

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FLAMEEYES!!!

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 TERMINATED
Post by: Wmatsui22 on July 18, 2012, 12:22:01 PM

please update soon...

i really love your fanfic...

im atsumina fanfs!!!!!!! :heart:

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 TERMINATED
Post by: Trickster on July 21, 2012, 12:03:23 PM

I've finished reading the latest chapter and.. WEW! :nervous
this story is really amazing! :twothumbs
Keichan-san where are you? :( I need the continuation of this fic :bow:

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 TERMINATED
Post by: Wmatsui22 on August 10, 2012, 03:55:10 PM

Please update :(

i like your fanfic

i can't wait what will happen in the next chapter

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 TERMINATED
Post by: Elo on April 26, 2013, 08:12:55 PM

where are you please update soon I want to know what wil hsppen

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 TERMINATED
Post by: Archer1992 on May 02, 2013, 03:07:10 AM

i love it
Atsumina is my favorite
Thank for the FF
im your fan ^_^

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 TERMINATED
Post by: nunku on May 11, 2013, 02:28:05 PM

Wait for you apdate  :yep:

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 TERMINATED
Post by: lezperv on July 16, 2013, 08:45:37 PM

WHY ARE YOU TERMINATING THIS!!! THIS IS SOOO GOOD!!! IT CAN'T BE STOPPED!!!   :mon waterworks: :mon waterworks: :mon waterworks:

but I won't deny that the way you ended in 18 was a good way to actually end the whole series  :mon pick:

I'm sooo sad  :mon runcry: I pulled an all nighter to read this amazing long Atsumina/Takacchan fanfic and then "BOOM" it turns out to be unfinished and discontinued   :gmon tears: Please don't stop the love  :mon inluv:

okay I'll stop whining now *sigh*

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 TERMINATED
Post by: Akira ryusen sora on January 04, 2014, 03:50:18 AM

 I like this fanfic!!! Minami so kakkoi!! XD XD

KEICHAN PLEASE UPDATE!!!!  :bow: :bow: :fap :nervous

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 TERMINATED
Post by: Keichan ^_^ on June 18, 2014, 06:33:00 AM

 :dunno: Um... are you peeps seriously still waiting for me to update my fics?  :on chew: Lol... thanks to the people who left me PMs ages ago and recently... I haven't been on here for ages but I was happy to see your pms and replies on my fanfics. As for updates...  :mon noodle: I have time to type but I'm just starting on my travel/food/photo/volunteer work website etc and truthfully idk if people still follow oldskool akb stories...

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 TERMINATED
Post by: Senelcar on June 18, 2014, 10:03:19 AM

Quote from: Keichan ^_^ on June 18, 2014, 06:33:00 AM

idk if people still follow oldskool akb stories...

Well, obviously, they do :)
Please update, oldschool is as good as ever ^^

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 TERMINATED
Post by: shazrey on February 22, 2015, 06:21:42 PM

sure there is someone whose still waiting ur story to be updated like m  :lol: :lol: :lol:
hopefully u can still update and finish this story  :)

Title: Re: A Bit Blind To Love <3 TERMINATED
Post by: rightsaver143 on June 25, 2016, 12:31:53 PM

Where are you?!!!!! :mon beam: :mon mad:

Update it please :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow: